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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Takahashi Atsuko on August 14, 2013, 11:45:56 PM
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Hello guys! I'm back with my new fic :glasses:
I thought i lot if i should write this fic or not and i decided to risk :cool1:
Well i hope you like it o/
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Chapter 1
There is always that phase of our life when we think life sucks, we feel like we want to die and run away from everything and everyone. But then a wave of happiness, coming from who knows where, invades your life and there you completely change your mind and you say that you want to enjoy life to the fullest because life is a gift that God gave you.
And if...
That wave of happiness never comes?
These are thoughts that cross my mind when I see, through the window while I clean it, people of my age have fun with genuine smiles on your face, telling each other about your new boyfriend or crying on a shoulder of a friend because her love was rejected...
"MINAMI" Called my dad.
I jumped with the fright and my legs began to tremble with fear, I left everything what I had in hands on the site nearest and ran to his office.
Friends? Never had none, I always suffered and cried silently, always on my own ... Alone ... Always alone...
"Yes my lord?"
"BUT WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU? THIS COFFEE TASTE LIKE SHIT!”
My life has always been like that, I did everything that my father asked me and if I did something wrong he condemned me.
"I beg your pardon sir, that wasn’t my intention" I said.
"I DON’T CARE! NOW I'LL SHOW YOU WHAT IS GOOD FOR COUGH! NAGANO COME HERE IMMEDIATELY! "He shouted
And here comes my big nightmare ... A man nearly twice my height, his muscles were visible and only the look he frightens everyone.
"Here I am, my lord, what you need?"
"Do whatever you want with this girl" he said.
He gave me a winning smile while evil, that means that my night will be, again, painful.
"Come with me" he said.
On the way to his room, tears ran my face but I’m the only one who can see them. I know exactly what will happen next...
"Take all your clothes and lie down on the bed," he said before entering the bathroom.
I took all my clothes slowly, I knew he was going to take a long time in the bathroom. As my skin was being exposed, I noticed the marks she had.
I lay in bed and he left the bathroom, from there I just felt....
… Pain...
… Pain...
… Pain...
This was my life since I can remember me, I got used to the idea that it will be like this until the end of my days, the hope that was inside me died a long time ago, if I ever had hopes of being saved by someone...
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"Acchan!" I heard the voice of Yuko.
I looked everywhere but no sign of her.
"Up here" I heard your voice again.
I looked at the school building that was in front of me, and there she was at a window waving at me.
"Wait for me, let's go home together!" She said.
"Okay"
In her face appeared a big smile.
Yuko and I are childhood friends, I used to live here with my mother, after some time she got a job in New York and I had to go with her but I came back past six years, and since there I live alone in a small house very warm.
“I’m heeeeeeeeeeere" she said delighted.
"Yuko do you want to spend the night at my house?"I asked.
"YEEES! I'll send a message to my mother "she said.
She was very funny and very cute too, she had a lovely dimples.
On the way to my home, we always pass by a huge house. That house has always caught my attention, but this time what caught my attention was the girl who was at the window, her look was completely empty and full of sadness. Past few seconds that girl left the window running.
Poor girl how could such a beautiful and perfect eyes show so much sadness and loneliness? Her face was very beautiful but both her face and her arms have some hematomas and marks.
"Acchan, are you hearing what I'm saying?" Yuko asked me.
"Sorry Yuko, I was thinking in something else"
We continue our way to home telling each other the news, aren’t many because we were together every day.
But that girl did not come out of my thoughts, a lot of questions formed in my head, who was she? Why she looked so sad? And a lot more questions…
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My day started like all the others, with my dad screaming at me to hurry me because I had many things to do, for sure I’m going to miss classes again.
Minami do this, Minami do that at the end Minami do everything...
Sometimes I start to think, what I did to deserve this? I never killed anyone, never hit anyone, I lived my life alone, am I paying for a mistake I made in a previous life?
The day passed slowly as ever, but I preferred not to think about it.
"MINAMI COME HERE IMMEDIATELY!” My father screamed.
Here I go again.
"Yes my lord?"
He was in the kitchen, in front of him was a broken jar.
"You did this right?" He asked me.
"No sir" I replied.
"DON’T FUCKING LIE TO ME! YOU DID THIS RIGHT? "He asked again.
"No sir" I replied again.
He punched me in the face and I fell onto the glass table that was behind me. The pieces of glass cut various parts of my skin from the feet to the head.
He raised me, pulled my hair and gave me another punch while calling me all the names he knew. I cried in silence, I suffered in silence, didn’t say a word as he enjoyed punching me because if I said something it would be worse. After all there was only a reason to I born, to be his doll.
The process was repeated over and over, I reached a point where I could not stand, the blood dripping everywhere, and when he got tired of hitting me, he threw me into the middle of the floor, he called the Nagano and said:
“What do you want to do with her and make her disappear from here, I don’t want her to be in my house no more”
Nagano just punched me and threw me to the ground from there I do not remember anything...
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I ran as fast as possible to the exit of the school, Yuko will kill me, teacher asked me to talk and the conversation took a long time, is that she is still waiting for me to go home?
I ran even faster and then I saw a small figure, was she.
"Yuko" I called.
She looked at me and smiled.
I stopped in front of her and tried to catch my breath while I explained to her what had happened.
"Don’t worry, I understand," she said with a smile "Let's go home?"
"Yes" I replied smiling too.
We left the school together and did usual route home.
"Acchan what do you think of the idea of going to the shop this weekend?" She asked.
"Great idea!" I said "I need to buy new clothes”
"Me neither, and go with you will be so much fun" she said.
I laughed at what she said.
"Acchan look there" she said pointing to a place where he had black bags full of garbage, but it wasn’t only that, I looked again and noticed a human arm that was among the bags.
"Oh my god" I said.
We ran toward the bags and quickly took all the bags that were on that body, as we removed each bag, we saw huge marks, blood and hematomas in the body.
We took the last bag that covered her face, and what was my surprise to see that this person was the girl who was at the window yesterday.
"You think she's alive?" Yuko asked me
"I don’t know, let me see" I put my index finger in a place of her neck and felt the weak beating of her heart.
"She’s alive! Yuko help me to take her to my house" I said.
She helped me to put the girl on my back and went at a brisk pace for my home.
Poor girl, what did happen to her?
What do you think?
I'm working on chapter 2 :farofflook:
Please comment, if I get comments i can post chapter 2 more faster
See ya :tama-bye:
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Wow this is interesting, I hate Minami's dad -_- I want to punch her face...
But now shes with Acchan and Yuko ><
waiting for the next chapter!
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What kind of father did that to his own child, creepy....
Is she step daughter?
Now she finally free (eventhough in a nearly death condition), I hope they let her be
Acchan seem interested in minami
What will happen between them?
I really hope minami will be the center of this triagle love (if it is triagle love)
Hehehe.....
Thank u ^^
Please update soon :D
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oh my...my heart throb as i read this fic...
poor takamna.... :cry:
what an evl father she had.....I wnder what'll happens next...
please update soon....
btw,nce fic.... :thumbsup
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woah, thanks for the fic lol
poor takamina :(
i hope acchan will show her love to takamina
waiting for next update ;)
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That damn dad of hers and that Nagano guy. :angry:
Nice fic. Please update soon. XD
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omg!poor minami!
Can someone kill those f*cking guy :angry: :angry:
Pls update soon :on gay:
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Takamina's dad and that Nagano guy... :angry:
Well, at least Acchan and Yuko help Minami..
Update soon please.. :bow:
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Ohh...My Minami...If those character aren't fiction...
-I'll get my passport and kill them both...lol
-Anyway, Minami is treated like this...And at least...
-I'm glad because she don't have to stay in that big house and...
-Those f**cking bast*rd guys...Just how dare you do that to Minami..
-Thank god Atsuko and Yuko will bring Minami to treat her...
-This is truly interesting...You can say i like this kind of genre...
>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for chapter 2!!~ Nice chapter huh??~ Heheh!!~
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What the heck... Poor Minami...
How could he hit Minami like that...?
Yeah... Atsuko is somewhat interested in Minami...
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the interesting story
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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interesting... please update fast as ur promise... :jphip:
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atsuko-chan
pls update soon pls :cry:
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atsuko-chan
pls update soon pls :cry:
Lol, when i see the last post is by blakwhite-san i go... "Eh? Blakwhite-san has commented, does this mean TakaAtsuko-chan has updated?! Oh shoot, must watch..." But then haven't update...=.=''' Too stupid because i thought Chapter 1 is a new update, which mean i thought Chapter 1 is Prologue....I know it is not funny but my main objective is...Oh yes, plz update soon...T-Takamina... :twothumbs :bow:
PS: Well, actually...I'm not sure at the part where..
On the way to his room, tears ran my face but I’m the only one who can see them. I know exactly what will happen next...
"Take all your clothes and lie down on the bed," he said before entering the bathroom.
I took all my clothes slowly, I knew he was going to take a long time in the bathroom. As my skin was being exposed, I noticed the marks she had.
I lay in bed and he left the bathroom, from there I just felt....
… Pain...
… Pain...
… Pain...
What happened to Minami?? Is it what am i thinking right now or what?? Sorry...Just can't accept this, but it's too interesting to ignore...Lol...
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atsuko-chan
pls update soon pls :cry:
Lol, when i see the last post is by blakwhite-san i go... "Eh? Blakwhite-san has commented, does this mean TakaAtsuko-chan has updated?! Oh shoot, must watch..." But then haven't update...=.=''' Too stupid because i thought Chapter 1 is a new update, which mean i thought Chapter 1 is Prologue....I know it is not funny but my main objective is...Oh yes, plz update soon...T-Takamina... :twothumbs :bow:
lol, sorry hahahahaha :grin:
im really bored because so many atsumina fanfics not update yet :cry:
about that part, im also curious too O_O
is takamina being raped ? :shocked
sorry for my bad english :D
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Ahahaha Kochiki-san that was funny xD
And yes Takamina was raped :fainted:
I'll try to post the chapter 2 today, if i can't, i'll post tomorrow :)
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Ahahaha Kochiki-san that was funny xD
And yes Takamina was raped :fainted:
I'll try to post the chapter 2 today, if i can't, i'll post tomorrow :)
oh no, takamina was raped :shocked :cry:
pls update as soon as possible lol :grin:
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Ahahaha Kochiki-san that was funny xD
And yes Takamina was raped :fainted:
I'll try to post the chapter 2 today, if i can't, i'll post tomorrow :)
H-Hatto...Burekku...Arghhh!!!!! *depressed* Wouldn't it be good if Atsuko rape Minami?? XD Anyway, tnx for the info which just broke my heart~ :hee:
PS: No worry, i'm not mad at all~ A little but not mad at all~ Lol...
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I'm sorry ;.;
Yeah i like that idea xD
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Hi guys, I'm back with chapter 2, I was fast right? :on GJ:
I want to thank you for the comments, i'm haaaappyyy nyaaaah~~~ xD
This chapter is not so dramatic as the other, but things will change (of course) :on cigar:
I'm reaaaaaaaaaaaaaally sorry for my bad eng :depressed:
I hope u like it :)
Chapter 2
What ... happened?
I opened my eyes slowly, I remembered what had happened.
Where am I?
I was lying in bed, in a room completely unknown to me.
How long was I unconscious? The wounds don’t hurt much, the only thing that hurt every time I moved it is the right wrist that had a bandage covering it.
I looked around me, where am I? I got out of bed and noticed a photograph that was on the bedside table. There are two girls with a schoolgirl uniform dress, they’re from my school. They seemed very happy together...
I left the room and explored the house, it was small but very beautiful. Had two rooms, one had everything pink and the other was very simple, it must be for the visits. The living room, compared to mine, was much smaller but had the essentials: a sofa, in front had a big TV, in the middle was a small table and beside sofa had a big table. Under the small table had a white carpet that I liked a lot
I went into the hall to see the rest of the house when I heard the sound of the door opening. I saw two girls entering.
"I will-" said one of them but paused when she saw me.
"What-" said the other but also paused when she saw me.
They were the girls of the photo, and now that I think about it, I've seen them in front of my house.
"Hello" said the highest "My name is Maeda Atsuko and this is my friend, Oshima Yuko"
I was looking at them both, they’re going to beat me? Or going to make me their slave?
"And what’s your name?" The smallest asked me.
I didn’t answer them, I was scared, and my legs were shaking.
"Calm down, we‘re not going to hurt you" said the highest "We want to help you"
Maybe they are not bad, maybe they want to help me, but the fear still doesn’t disappear.
"I think she will not talk Acchan" Oshima said.
"You're right, but for now, can I call you" She stopped to think of a name, after a bit said "Oh, can I call you Takamina?"
"Ah good idea, what do you think?" Oshima asked.
Timidly, I shaked my head up and down.
"Great!" Said Maeda glad I have liked the name "Takamina are you hungry?"
Only when she asked that, I noticed the noises that my stomach was doing, I was embarrassed and they smiled.
"Let's have lunch" Maeda said before entering the kitchen.
"Lunch ieeeei" said Oshima happy with the idea "Let's go to the living room Takamina"
Both sat on the couch and she turned on the television.
"You know" Oshima said "We really want to help you, we found you in the street, unconscious in a sorry state"
She paused a bit and then said:
"And I know that Acchan really likes you, she spent all week worried about you because you do not wake up"
So I was unconscious for one week?
"I liked her know ..." She said "But I ended up forgetting her because I knew that she only liked me as a friend"
Poor Oshima, unrequited love ... I do not know what it is but it must be very painful to forget the person you love, wait ... Is she mad at me because Maeda was taking care of me all week?
She realized what I was thinking because of the expression that I had in my face and then said:
"Nah, I'm not mad at you," she smiled, "But I am convinced that sooner or later she will fall in love with you"
Aah, I think is unlikely, Maeda will never fall in love for someone like me and besides, I do not know what it would be of her if my father found the truth ... Hum, I don´t want to think about it.
"The lunch is ready!"
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After lunch, they wanted to go for a walk around town. It was already night and the temperature was very pleasant. As I had nothing to wear, Oshima lent me her clothes.
I do not know how my city is, I mean, I do not remember how it is, my father locked in the house for a long time doing what he says. At school, everyone thinks I'm sick because I never went there.
"Let’s go to the Nature Park?" Oshima asked.
"Good idea, have you ever been there ever Takamina?" Maeda asked.
I shaked my head to the left and right.
"It's a beautiful park and it feels so good to being there at night" she said.
"You're right, remember when we went there with Kuu and he was so interested in our conversation that he hit with his head on a pole?" Oshima asked.
"Aahahahaah I laughed so much when I saw that" commented Maeda.
They both are an example of what I would like to be, a normal teenager, who cared to study or not... Having friends to go out from time to time, to help me when I need it and vice versa, have lunch together...
That was my ideal life, but my father never let me do any of that, he didn’t let me leave the house and forced me to do whatever he wanted.
"And you Takamina? Do you have friends? "Oshima asked.
I shake my head to left and right, I wish I had friends Oshima...
"Sorry ..." she said.
I shrugged.
"Now you have us" Maeda said "I hope we’ll be good friends"
A smile appeared on my face, they were my first friends ever! I’m so excited!
"Takamina you like ice cream?" Maeda asked.
Ice cream? What is that? I do not remember anything with that name.
"You do not know what ice cream is?" Oshima asked.
I shake my head from side to side.
"Huuum ... Lets buy one?" Maeda asked.
"Yes, it's been awhile since I eat one!" Oshima said enthusiastic about the idea.
I put my hands in my pockets to see if he had money but they were empty, too bad, I really wanted to try an ice cream, is it good?
"Do not worry Takamina, I pay yours" Maeda said when she saw what I was doing.
I smiled, she is a very kind person and she had a beauty of another world.
We went buy an ice cream, Yuko choose the chocolate one and Acchan the vanilla, I did not know what flavor to choose, so I ended up choosing the strawberry because it was pink.
Now, that's an ice cream? A wafer cone with a ball on top?
We sat on a bench and I looked at them to see how they ate this, they caught the spoon, took a bit of ice cream and ate, Huuum it seems easy, I'll try. With the spoon I took a bit of ice cream and slowly approached to my mouth, the touch of ice cream on my tongue made my body shake.
It was cold, but it was very tasty! It was creamy and melted easily in the mouth.
"You like it?" Maeda asked.
I shaked my head up and down and smiled, she smiled too, I'm sure I look like a child but this is all new to me.
"You want some of mine?" She asked me.
I shaked my head again.
"Here" she said taking a bit of ice cream.
I opened my mouth.
"Here, you can eat some of mine too" said Yuko giving me a bit of her ice cream.
They had flavors completely different, chocolate one was much sweeter than the Maeda and a bit boring in my opinion.
"You like it?"Oshima asked.
I shake my head up and down.
"Ahaha everybody likes ice cream! It’s so good! "She said.
I and Maeda's laughed for what Oshima said.
If all days are like this, I want to stay with Maeda forever! I don’t have to be to obey orders all the time, I'm not violently punished every time I do something wrong and I can be happy.
Until now, this has been the best day of my entire life.
"Let's take one more lap, it's time for dinner" Maeda said "Yuko you dine with us?"
"Sure" she said.
We crossed the street, I saw a tall man. I looked again and noticed that it was Nagano, he seemed to be looking for someone, and certainly it was me. But I do not want to go home, I don’t want ... I don’t want...
I grabbed Maeda’s arm and shaked my head from left to right and pointed the finger at her house.
"Takamina what happen?" She asked me.
She doesn’t understand, I tried to speak but my voice died, I was panicking. Pointed to Nagano and then pointed to my right wrist.
She did not realize what I was trying to say, I saw the Nagano turn in our direction.
"Are you trying to say ... That’s the man who hurt you?" Oshima asked.
I shaked my head up and down and then pointed to Maeda’s house again.
"Let's go home Acchan" Oshima said "Quick!"
We ran fast as possible to Maeda's house, I thanked God for Oshima have understood what I was trying to say.
What do u think? Comment pweeese :nya:
See ya :byebye:
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Awws Minami so cute ;-; poor thing
So Yuko was in love with Acchan... well now Yuko know that Acchan loves Minami or something like that and she will help
Good one for understand Yuko!!! poor Minami D: she was freaked out for the st*** Nagao >:C
Waiting for the next chapter >w<
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Good girl, Yuko... :thumbsup
Yuko is in love with Acchan but willing to give up on her.. :cry:
Can't wait for the next chapter...
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Yuko is a very good friend, very understanding
How long has minami lock up in that house? I mean she doesn't remember ice cream
Dad n nagano are totaly "sick" people
I got the feeling happy moment is going to be short
"She did not realize what I was trying to say, I saw the Nagano turn in our direction"
Did nagano really manage see minami?
Thank u, please update soon ~~ please.....please....
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Awww...Takamina~ You have Yuko and Atsuko as your friends now!
Good job Yuko!:3
I only started to read this fanfic... And I like it! <3
^_^ can't wait for the next chapter!
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Oh...Kuu too?? Well nevermind actually...
-Anyway, she's unconscious for one week already~ Poor her...
-Yuko love Atsuko but...Aww...AtsuYuu is good but my AtsuMina!!~
-Lol, Geez...I would really kill her dad and Nagano...
-She doesn't even know ice-cream!! Poor thing....
-Nagano is still searching for Minami?! I won't let ya....
>Pftt...And how can i?? Anyway, plz update soon!!~ Minami's life is in your hand...Lol~~
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Poor Yuko... She could not be with Atsuko...
What would Minami do about Atsuko's feeling for her?
Can't wait to see what's going to happen next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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ah~
thank you for update :3
wow, takamina doesn't know hat ice cream taste like :shocked
ah btw, pls make haruna to be yuko's pair :D
im waiting for your update ;)
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i just cant wait to read na next chapter :shocked
Pls update soon :on gay:
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OMG my poor Minami, i smell a lot of drama here...
thanks
update soon!!!
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Takatsuko-chan (sorry, may i call u dat...?)!!~ I'm start missing your fic here!!~
-Just checked ur profile and it says you're still alive!!~ I mean alive in my thoughts...
-Last active is yesterday (7 September)...I'm stalking u for the best!!~ Lol...
-So hey, don't worry...You can update it anytime and sorry for bringing it up...
-I mean...I totally missed ur fic...!!~ But no worry, honestly~ I'll wait for it...
-I miss it!!~ You the author, Takatsuko-chan, Acchan, Yuko, Takamina!!~ *look at Nagano & Taka's father*
-As if i'll miss you guys..Back to the topic, whatever it is...I miss ur update!!~ T ________ T
>Hyan~ Always waiting for your presence n' fic Takatsuko-chan!!~ Sry for being annoying~ Hyahan~
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Ahhh.. please update!!vIt's interesting.
What will happen to Acchan and Takamina, can't wait to see!
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atsuko-chan
pls update this fic :cry:
im gonna cry if you dont :cry:
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Poor minami.... :cry:
Nice fic, hope you update soon... :twothumbs
:wigglypanda:
:mon santa4:
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Minami kawaii~~~I dun like dad and Nagano how can they do that to her I will kill them :twisted:
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Heeey guys :D
Look who's not dead after all xD
First, I want to apologize for taking so long to post the 3 chap, i lost my inspiration to write :err:
But after reading your comments (especially Kochiki comment, and you can call me atsuko or takaatsu if you want ^^) my inspiration back and could to finish the third chapter.
I promise u, i will finish this fic :on GJ:
Well, i hope u like this chapter ( i love it xD) And comment pweeese ^^
( I'm really, reeeally sorry for my bad eng >.<)
Chapter 3
I entered the house running, I tripped over my own feet and I fell on the floor. Again fear invaded my soul and spread rapidly throughout the body.
“Takamina " said Maeda. Then I noticed that she was shaking me, trying to call me to reason.
I looked at her; her eyes were full of concern.
“Takamina was that the man who hit you?” She asked.
I shook my head up and down and raised my fist with two fingers stretched.
“Two? Was two persons? “Oshima asked.
I shook my head up and down. I understand that they are concerned and want to find out what happened, but I 'm afraid to tell them what happened. And if my dad finds out that they know everything? He’s able to kill them, but they must know the truth, so they can help me.
“You know them?” Maeda asked.
I was about to answer but I heard a voice shouting:
‘DON’T TELL THEM ' I heard my father's voice screaming in my head.
For a moment I forgot to breathe, my body started shaking and I felt my heart stop beating.
'KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT YOU FUCKING WHORE! ‘My father screamed.
I'm afraid...
I fell to my knees and covered my ears with my hands. Inside I was screaming for help, but my voice wasn’t quit in any way. I felt pain all over my body, it looked like my head was going to burst at any moment, and I looked at my hands and saw only blood, blood, blood throughout the body. I tried to scream but my voice would not come out.
‘THAT’S IT, SUFFER! SUFFER YOU LITTLE MISERABLE! '
Please stop! I beg you! I just want to be normal, please let me live my life! What have I done to you? Well… I guess it does not matter...
“Takamina “I heard someone calling my name.
I want someone to tell me that I'm not alone ... Someone who hug me and say that all this is just a nightmare...
“Takamina “I heard the same voice calling my name.
But I think it’s impossible ... There is nobody...
I ... I’m...
Alone....
Until I heard something that I had never heard before, something pounding, I cannot explain...
Tum tum, tum tum, tum tum... A slightly accelerated pace. Furthermore, there was something else, I felt anything involving me. It made me feel warm inside. It was so warm, so good ... so good...
"I 'm here with you!” Said the same voice, "I’ll never leave you alone”
You will not leave me alone? Good...
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‘MINAMI WAKE UP NOW! ‘My father shouted.
I jumped out of bed scared and ran away to his office.
‘Who were those girls who were you yesterday? ‘He asked.
‘Are some girls I met my lord’
' Ahahahahahahaha but you do not know anyone! Do you know why? You are destined to serve me until the end of your days! AAHAHAHAHAH '
‘Takamina! ‘I heard the voice of Maeda.
I looked back, she and Oshima were there, completely naked, Nagano was torturing them in front of me.
‘You like the view Minami? It's what I do to all your friends! '
Not...
‘Stay there, seeing them suffer! You cannot do anything! '
No!
‘MUAHAHAHAHAH’
“NOOOOO!!!!!!”
“Takamina wake up!” Hear the voice of Maeda.
I opened my eyes, my face was completely wet with tears. When I realized that it was just a dream, I hugged Maeda.
“Takamina?”
Tears kept falling, that nightmare was really scary, Maeda ... No!
She hugged me too, somehow I felt myself safe with her.
"I 'm here with you, it was just a nightmare” She stroked my hair "Let’s go back to sleep, you need to rest”
She lest my embrace but I grabbed her hand not letting her go away.
She looked at me, seemed not understand my reaction, so I shook my head from side to side.
She smiled.
“You want me to stay her with you tonight?" She asked me.
I shook my head up and down.
“Okay, if it makes you feel better " She laid beside me.
I approached more and stared her for a few seconds until she moved closer to me, her lips went slowly toward mine. Why is my heart beating so fast? Why do I feel dizzy? Why does my face hot?
At the last second she stopped and kissed my forehead.
”Good night," she said smiling.
She laid her head on the pillow and closed her eyes.
As much as I try to fall asleep, could not. I kept thinking about her.
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The next morning I woke up with something warm on my face , I opened my eyes and I came across a creature on top of me , I had seen many of these creatures in the street through my window but never got close to none.
“Good morning, " said Maeda entering the room.
I threw a questioning look to the small creature.
“Ah, this is a gift I bought for you “she said “You know what this is?”
A gift? For me? I shook my head from side to side and she was amazed to see that I did not.
“This is a cat, is very cute isn’t it?” She asked.
I shook my head up and down.
“We have to give it a name, Huuum, what about Kiko? Sounds good? "
I shook my head up and down and she smiled.
I looked at the cat and stroked his fur soft and fluffy. Then I remembered something important, I had to thank her.
I looked at her face, she was looking at the picture beside her television, and I remembered a way to thank her.
I approached her to give her a kiss on the cheek as thanks, but did not go exactly as I expected. The moment my lips would touch her face, she turned around and ended up kissing her lips. I widened my eyes, did not know what to do, but somehow it felt good. She was also unresponsive.
I separated our lips and watched her reaction, but I wanted more, something inside me woke up and was asking for more, more ... more...
Her face showed that she was surprised but somehow she seemed out of her, she approached me and kissed my lips again.
Her lips were sweet ... Soft ... Warm... For a moment I forgot everything while our lips devoured each other as if we needed that kiss to survive.
Automatically I put my arms around her neck causing our bodies to stay out of space separating them. She lay down and pulled me on top of her without ever separating our lips.
And we only stopped to catch breath. I lay my head on her chest and she put her arms around my waist.
“I’m sorry, I do not know what happened" she said "I lost control of my body and it just happened"
It’s not your fault, I also lost control. I want to tell her this but my voice does not come out.
“Miaw”
“Kiko, you must be hungry, huh?”
I got up and sat on the bed beside her.
My heart was still racing and my face was hot…
So, did you like it? :nya:
I will try to post Chapter 4 fast, my classes started and i have to study :pleeease:
But wait for me okay?
See you later :byebye: :byebye: :byebye:
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I know it's not quite right to say this, but I want to KILL Takamina's father!!
The kiss... OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!
I can die happily now... Thank you for this update.
I hope you can post chapter 4 soon, but I what I want you to do more is study.
Don't rush it and take your time. :)
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yeaaay update :cathappy:
i like it ? :? hmmm :huhuh
IM REALLY REALLY LOVE IT :inlove:
I WANT MOAR TAKATSU - SAN XD
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thanks for update ...
wow atsumina first kiss?oh so sweet ~~
waiting for next chapter :twothumbs
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hahaha that was epic!!! :D
I really love it when Minami tries to kiss Atsuko's cheek but at the last moment Atsuko turns over and their lips met instead :heart:
Can you just kill off her father and that other dude? I'm sitting here screaming at my laptop like a crazy person and thats not good for my image at all :P
Hope you could update soon XD
p.s MORE ATSUMINA!!!
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TakaminaBG: Thank you for your comprehension :)
Blackwhite: I'm glad you like it :D
Lezperv: I love it too :heart: it's soooo puuurfect :shy2: Yeah i can kill them XDDDD I'm going to try update soon :)
Ps: I GIVE YOU MORE ATSUMINA XD
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Argh...After a 4-5 day hiatus, you updated it!!~ I'm happy!!~
-Sorry for the late comment Takatsuko-san...Again....
-I'm so happy that i can fire you up to update it!!~
-Oh...It was just a nightmare, man...For a sec there, i thought...
-It was real!!~ You just saved my life~ Lol...Yes, you are~
-Lips, oh...Why can't you make it more~ Takamina and i want more...
>Ahaha!!~ JK...Plz update soon, don't worry, i'll wait for the next chapter~
PS: Glad to know you're alive... xD
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Kochiki: Yeah i'm alive xD I have e a lot of ideas to put on my fic, my inspiration is back so i think i can update chapter 4 until this weekend :)
I'm going to put mooore atsumina moments and i can tell you that NyanNyan will appear next chapter
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Oh...Plz do, i'm gonna looking forward to it!!~
-Oho...So NyanNyan gonna appear in the next chapter...
-And...More AtsuMina you say??~ Ehe...Ehehehehe!!~
-Shoot, i let out a crappy laugh...Again... xD
-If you ever died, i'll revive you with my warrior skills!!~
-Lol!!~ To many Dragon Nest in my head. <--Reason of my Hiatusness...
>Okay now...To much talking...I'll wait for it!!~ Heheh!!~
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I really need to write atsumina moments xD (i need atsumina moments to survive xP)
yeah and unexpected things will be discovered next chapter :)
Oooh yeeah i have someone to revive me this is awesome xD
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Oh yeeaaah i'm back with chapter 4, i was fast right? :cool1:
I hope you like it :)
Chapter 4
I left my house towards Acchan’s house, she told me this morning she went to a pet store to buy a cat for Takamina. Huuum she never gave a present like that, but what was I expecting? We never had more than friendship and if things continue like this between them, pretty soon they will be dating. I don’t care, as long as she’s happy and nobody hurt her I don’t mind her to be dating other person than me.
I sighed. I was going down the street so busy with my thoughts that I ended up hitting someone.
“Ittai “I heard a girl complaining.
Despite being much bigger than me, she ended up falling to the ground.
“Oh, sorry, wasn’t my intention, I was so distracted" I said holding out my hand, she accepted my help.
"I was also thinking about other things and did not notice where I was walking" she said with a smile.
Who is she? She's so beautiful! Come Yuko you cannot waste an opportunity like this!
"I want to apologize properly, you want to go drink a coffee?" I asked.
"But are you sure? I don’t want to be a nuisance to you "she said.
"No way, it would be great if you come with me"
"Okay, I don’t have anything to do now so it’s fine to me”
"Oh, my bad manners, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Oshima Yuko, but you can treat me by Yuko and your name is? "
"Haruna, Kojima Haruna but can treat me by Haruna if you want"
We were both up to a place that was near there and I sent a message to Acchan warning that would be there later.
We've been talking for some time and I had the opportunity to know her better, what she likes and things like that, we were not there for long, I ended up asking Haruna to come to Acchan’s house for her to meet my best friend.
Arriving there I rang the bell and she opened the door immediately.
"Hello, come in" said Acchan.
Both entered and I drove Haruna to the living room.
"Acchan, she's Kojima Haruna, Haruna she is Maeda Atsuko"
"Hello, you can call Acchan me if you want" she said.
"Call me Haruna then" she said smiling.
"Where is Takamina?" I asked.
"It's up there with Kiko, I'll go call her" And left.
"I warn you of one thing" I said.
She looked at me watching what I would say.
"Takamina cannot talk but she doesn't have voice problems. Acchan and I found her in the middle of garbage bags full of blood and wounds. She is depressed, we're still trying to figure out what happened but we just know that two persons beat her, one of these persons we already saw, the other we doesn’t know who is “I said .
"I see ..." She said.
They entered the room and Acchan said:
"Takamina, she's Kojima Haruna"
Takamina nodded to Haruna.
"Takamina?" Haruna asked, she looked stunned and I did not realize why.
"Yes, we do not know her name so we call her Takamina" explained Acchan.
"I know her" she said.
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"I know her" Haruna said.
"What!?” I and Yuko shouted, Takamina seemed to be amazed "Haruna you know her? Tell us everything you know about her please!"
"Okay, where to start?" Takamina and I sat on the floor in front of her "Me and the Takamina... We are sisters”
"Sisters?" I asked.
Takamina looked at her and shrugged, looked like she didn’t understand.
“We have the same mother, or at least we had”
"How come you had?” Yuko asked.
" It's a long story, her father was too in love with our mother , he was completely addicted to her that when she left him, because she loved my father, he had revenge and killed my father and then our mother " She explained " He always managed to escape the police with some cheap tricks, but now I returned to take revenge "
“You know her name?” I asked.
“Perfectly, her name is Takahashi Minami"
"Is that your real name Takamina?” I asked.
She shook her head up and down.
“Her father is an animal that grudge for our mother and all that she did and left behind " She looked at Takamina " Minami , who hit you was your father and Nagano, right?"
She began to tremble with fear again and I hugged her.
“Calm down Takamina, I'm here with you"
She shook her head up and down.
"I knew it ..."
Impossible...
“It was your father who hit you and left you in the garbage?” I asked.
She shook her head up and down.
I was shocked.
“Takamina, how old are you?” Yuko asked her.
She shrugged.
"I'm 16 so she has 18 "Haruna said" He killed our mother 14 years ago”
“She was being bullied by those idiots for 14 years?” I asked.
All we looked for Takamina.
She shook her head up and down.
I hugged her tighter, poor her, she took a beating from her father, suffered, cried, was always alone for 14 years?
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“Minami did you knew your mother?" Haruna asked.
I do not remember anything from when I was small, the furthest memory I have, I was not a child at least I do not think I've had a shapely body and I was lied on my bed full of bandages . I do not remember my mother or anyone from my family.
"Do you remember me?” She asked.
Again gave a negative response.
“We played together before this happened”
Seriously?
“Takahashi Minami is that your name right?” Asked Maeda.
I gave a positive response.
Kiko jumped onto my lap and started rubbing up on my shirt. I look at Haruna, she wants to take revenge on my father because he killed our mother and her father, but what if things do not go as she wants? She will die...
I noticed the watchful look of Maeda threw me, what look was that? She looked worried but at the same time her eyes conveyed a twinkle of love. Again the urge to kiss her, but I cannot, what happened was an accident, I did not want to ... or I wanted?
"Nee Yuko, I need to go outside, get some fresh air, can you come with me?" Haruna asked.
"Sure" And they left.
When I came back to reality, Maeda approached her face to my ear and whispered:
"I 'm also thinking about it ..."
How did she know?
"I also liked"
But how?
"I want more..."
No, please don’t ... I'll be addicted to your kisses, do not understand it? It's too good for me to resist!
She approached her lips to mine, but I stopped her.
"What’s the matter, you don’t like it?” She asked.
I looked down, is not that...
“Listen, I know you had a horrible past, I am slowly discovering what happened to you. I want to know more about you, I do not want to hurt you, quite the opposite! I want to show you that life is not all that pain you feel inside you"
Maeda...
“You know you the worst side of life “as she was talking, she again approached our faces" Please, let me show you what life has to offer”
Then our lips met for the third time, it feels so good...
“Uh-huh" I heard Oshima and immediately I parted our lips, I noticed that Maeda threw Oshima a killer look “Sorry, Haruna had to leave, she gave me her number if we wanted to talk to her"
“Okay" said Maeda.
I stood up and motioned that he was going to the room.
What a shame ... Oshima saw us Aah doushiyou?
I looked through the window, as I used to do in my father's house. I saw the wind making the leaves of the trees dance which in turn hit the floor, I saw a figure stepping the leaves with angry. This figure was the front of Maeda’s house and preparing to ring the bell, that figure was...
…Nagano …
So want do you think guys? Please comment so i can get inspiration to writte :)
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Haruna is Minami's sister??
Yeah..Atsumina :inlove:
Ehhhhh???!!!!
This is bad..
Nagano is there..
What will happen next?
Update soon,please...
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Oh crap, no. :panic:
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Chapter 3 almost had heart attack when read maeda n yuko naked !
luckily just a nightmare..
chapter 4
so haruna is her sister...
and wonder how they will took revenge on minami father...
aaahhh...atsumina moment!!! only to get interrupt by yuko...
now yuko know that acchan likes minami and vice versa..
then she and haruna... ♡ hehhe
what will nagano do next?
Great fic!!
Update soon!! :D
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Minami is older than Haruna? Hmm thats new :)
OMG NAGANO!!! KILL THAT BITCH!!! KILL HIM!!! :angry1:
Holy shit, whats gonna happen next? I'm sooo nervous and anxious, GAH!!!! *pulling my hair*
I hope you would update soon :kneelbow:
p.s. YUKO!!!! Why did you ruined their kissing moment!!! My Atsumina :pleeease:
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E-Eh?! Minami and Haruna are sisters?!?!
-Uwaw...What a sad past she held there...Minami that is...
-Haruna is taking revenge on who? Minami or her father??
-Her father maybe...Well, of course?? Meh...But...
-It's a kissu!!~ And geh...Yuko saw it after Haruna left the house....
-Aa...N-N-Nagano was there, in front of Atsuko's house...
-I don't really go 'doushiyo' at the kiss part, ehehe...But...
-Now i'm going 'doushiyo!!!' te...Nagano!! Leave her alone could ya??
>Man...Hope to see the next update!!~ So plz update it soon!!~ But will still be waiting for it~
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I am LOVING this.
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oh no!!!
nagano is there :frustrated:
omg pls update soon :on gay:
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Haruna and Takamina are sisters?!? That was a surprise.
My sweet AtsuMina!!! They share another kiss... and as a pervert I'm waiting for the smexy time!!! xDDDD
Nagano is there.... that's bad... really bad...
Update soon!!
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Hiiiiiiii look who's back :on gay:
Thanks for your comments :kneelbow:
I'm down because acchan is dating, i want her to be with Takamina!!!! :on speedy:
And i want to apologize to kojiyuu fans and specialy to Yuko fans, i'm reeeeeeeeeeally sorry :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Chapter 5
Nagano?! It is not possible, and now? I gotta warn them not to open the door!
I heard the sound of the bell ringing, oh no!
I ran as fast as possible down there, Maeda was getting near the door, and now I will not arrive in time! I have to do something!
She reached out to open the door...
" No!" I said .
She looked at me, looked amazed. It was a magical moment, she could not speak, I bet she was still hearing my voice in her head.
" Takamina , you said ," she said .
The doorbell rang again.
"Do you want me to open?” She asked.
I shook my head from side to side.
We sat in silence for a few minutes until we are sure that he was no longer on the doorstep.
“What’s up?” Yuko asked suddenly appearing.
“She talked" muttered Maeda.
Oshima looked at me like not believing in the words of Maeda.
“She what? Are you okey?”She asked.
“I’m serious! I'm not kidding she talked! “Said Maeda” Takamina, speak again”
I tried again but my voice didn't come out . What the hell? Why could not I speak?
Yuko didn't believe whatever...
I clasped my hands in front of face to Maeda apologizing for failing to speak.
She stroked my face and said:
"Don't worry Takamina, you have a beautiful voice , you know? "
I felt my face slightly flushed when it is to make me feel so hot ?
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A few days have passed since I met Haruna confess that there is something in her that attract me very much to the point of wanting to be with her, think about her all the time... It took me some time to understand that I was in love with her but I'm afraid of her answer because we know each other a few days ago. But I am determined to tell her today, that's why I asked her to go to the Natural Park at 6pm.
Now, I am here waiting for her, thinking on a way to tell her that I think I'm starting to like her. I am very nervous...
"Yuko! I'm her! "Hear the voice of Haruna.
I looked back and there she was, wearing a white dress that ended just before the knees.
"H- Hello" I said.
“Ahaha what do you have? Looks like you saw a ghost” she said.
"Sorry, you're very pretty, this dress suits you well"
She lowered her face slightly flushed.
"Thanks" she said "So what’s up?"
Calm down Yuko!
"Haruna I called you here because I have something very important to tell you"
The expression on her face changed, as if she knew what I was going to say. I started to feel too nervous, oh no, I don’t know if I can do this, I'm afraid of being rejected again.
"It is so important?" She asked.
"Yes, I have to tell you today because tomorrow may be too late"
It’s now...
"Look, I 'm not very good with words, never knew very well how to express my feelings for the people but ... "I paused” But that doesn’t stop me ... To know ... I like you more than I should"
I looked down.
“I know I only know you a few days ago, but I really like you! You're a wonderful person, very dear and sweet. The first time I saw you I felt different, something changed in me "I looked at her “I’m sorry if I'm being too sudden, but I cannot hide this from you, it is a feeling too strong to hide in a small body like mine "
And now? She said nothing, just stared at me. I couldn’t tell if she was shocked, it was happy or sad ... Her gaze was empty.
“Haruna?"
"Yuko I’m sorry ...”
No...
"Sorry I have to go!" And ran away. I counted each step until she was out of sight.
I was rejected again. I looked down, drops began to fall from the sky, as tears fell on my face.
I left the park in small steps, people passed by me running hoping to find somewhere to shelter from the heavy rain. And now? Where am I going? I never felt so alone in my life...
In the twinkling of an eye, night fell and I still walked aimlessly through the streets. Suddenly a car stopped beside me.
“Are thou the Oshima Yuko?" I knew this guy from somewhere...
"Yes" I replied.
I noticed more two men behind me, I was trapped. One of them hit me with a baseball bat in the head, I don’t remember anything else...
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I was sitting on the couch with Acchan watching a movie, her cell phone rang and she answered:
“Mochi Mochi? Aah Oshima-san, no, Yuko is not here "She paused for a moment" If you knew something about her, please call me"
And hung up. I looked at her with a curious look.
"Yuko left home in the afternoon and has not returned home, the strange thing is that the phone is off" she explained.
Strange, did they call to Haruna?
I picked up her phone, marked Haruna’s number and gave the cell phone to Maeda.
"You think she's with Haruna?"
I shook my head up and down.
“Mochi Mochi, Haruna? Yuko is with you? Hum I understand, but don’t know where did she go? Ok, if you know anything call me, okay? "And hung up the call "She was with Haruna in the afternoon but she’s not now"
Something's not right, something happened between them?
Look what i have done to kojiyuu :on blackhole:
And now you can kill me :on kimbo:
Comment and vote on the pool please, see u later :on beatup
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WHY!? WHY IS ALWAYS YUKO THE ONE THAT SUFFERS MORE?!!!
Now, two rejections and a hit with a baseball bat, what more?! what more?! <--- *insert drama music*
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Ah.. Missed your updates...
Haruna is minami's sister...
She wanted revenge...
Their father is a twisted crazy person
Now Yuko got kidnapped after being rejected
I think the ones that kidnapped Yuko is minami's father and his friend
What's going to happen next?
Would Atsuko and Haruna rescue Yuko?
Why did Haruna reject Yuko?
Is it because she wanted her hate for her revenge?
Well can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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thanks for the Atsumina moments they are heal my heart a little
update soon
n.n'
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I'm afraid of what might happen. :sweat:
Thanks for the update and update soon. :bow:
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Ah!!~ Yuko just confessed her feelings to Haruna!!~
-But was rejected...KojiYuu, this fic will be lonely without KojiYuu...
-But meh...I won't kill you because if i were, i can't see AtsuMina in action!!~
-Lol...Just kidding, anyway, wut the hell...Yuko was hit by the baseball bat!!~
-And that's gonna hurt!!~ No, my heart!! Those guys is Nagano's right??~
-Dzamn!!~ It shouldn't be like this!!~ But still wanna know what'll happen~
>Ahaha...So plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice update btw~
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i love the stories.. poor minami being bullied by her own father... :angry:
what gonna happen to yuko? i wonder why haruna reject yuko? :shocked :panic:
gonna wait for updates... :cow: :thumbsup
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very good :thumbsup
I look forward to the Takamina could speak normally
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Heey i'm back with chapter 6 :D
I' hope you like it, and thanks for you comments guys :)
(I'm sorry for my bad eng)
Chapter 6
Now what? Where is Yuko? I’ve already searched all over the city and there is no sign of her.
I'm so sorry to have fled ... I love her! But when she said that she liked me I was unsure what to say so I ran away, I'm so stupid!
Please Yuko give us signs of life, do not leave me in this concern ... Wait...
And if… Takahashi knows something about Yuko? Maybe he did something to her! If that bastard did something to MY Yuko, I swear I will kill him
That's it; I’m going to his house!
I ran as quickly as possible to his house, knew exactly where it was...
I rang the bell of the big house.
“Who is?” Somebody asked.
“I’m Haruna Kojima and want to talk with Mr. Takahashi”
“Okay, just one moment please”
A huge man opened the door, it was the Nagano...
“Please come in.”
I entered in the house, had not changed anything...
“Haruna! Long time no see you! Why did you decide to visit me?" Asked Takahashi.
"Yuko, where is she?”
“Yuko? Who are you talking about? "He asked seeming not to know who I was talking about.
"You know very well who she is Takahashi! Young girl that you kidnapped! Where is she? “I asked him.
"Aah ... That girl” he said and then began to laugh, that evil laugh that filled me with rage “She’s not here Haruna "
“So you know where she is”
“I know!"
“Tell me!”
“Ahahahaha why are you so angry Haruna?" He asked approaching a small table on which were several types of drinks "Do you want some tea? Maybe a..."
"I want nothing! I want to know where Yuko is!"
"You remind me a lot your mother, always so brave and fearless, with a strong desire to help those who love, but you know? That was what made her PATHETIC!"
"SHUT UP! You have no right to talk about my mother!" I screamed.
"Oh sorry honey, let's change the subject, how's your sister? I'm sure you've been with her ..."
“My sister? Are you talking about Minami? "He smiled again," She is better than ever"
"Ahahah that interesting"
"I'm sick of these laughs, where is Yuko?"
"Haruna I'll cut to the chase, if you want your girlfriend back, bring me Minami”
What? He wants Minami back?
“For what? You want to punch her again? Want to call her names all the time? To put on the trash when you don’t need her? She currently is with a person who loves you and gives her the affection that you never gave her! I 'm not gonna deliver Minami!"
I ran out of his house, I have to warn Acchan he wants Minami!
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What has happened to her? She was not going to just disappear without saying anything.
“Takamina is calm she will appear, soon she'll be here smiling saying she was just out for a walk and her phones battery died”
Even so, there is something here that does not fit right...
The sound of Acchan’s phone sounded through the room. She picked it up and made a strange face.
"It's Haruna" said and answered the call "Hello Haruna ... Yes ... Of course there will already be with you" and hung up "Haruna says she wants to talk to me, I'll take her to a bar near here. Stay here and do not leave okay? "I shook my head up and down.
She smiled and left.
I looked around, I was alone and I was hungry so I decided to go to the kitchen to eat something. I opened some cabinets but nothing caught my attention, I opened the refrigerator door but there was nothing that caught my attention when I noticed a well hidden bottle in the corner of the fridge. I took one, opened it and drank a bit. Arg ... has a disgusting taste but it was addictive! I drank more and more and more and I ended up getting a little addicted to that new flavor...
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I entered on the bar, I saw Haruna in the most hidden table.
“Haruna hello, what's up?"
"Sorry to call you at the last minute but Acchan had to tell you this as soon as possible"
"What?” I asked.
“Includes Yuko and Minami but let me tell you, I was now with Minami’s father" She paused and continued "I’ve discovered that he kidnapped Yuko”
“What?? We have to help her!”
“The problem ... is that he only returns us Yuko, if we give him Minami"
“Never ... I will never do that, we have to find a way to have Yuko back"
“We have to plan it very calmly, this is an extremely sensitive issue and beyond the two of us alone will not be able to do much" she said.
"We will talk with the police to help us”
“We cannot do that, he would find that"
“You’re right ... So what can we do?”
Atsuko think! Think! There must be something I can do ... I cannot ask for help to anyone, every step we take has to be calculated very well because the slightest mistake we can lose Yuko or Takamina...
“Ah!" said Haruna" I have a friend who is part of a family of cops, she has participated in many police cases, I'm sure she can help us!"
"Great! Talk to her then after that, tell me something" I said “I better go home, Takamina is there alone, and you come too?"
"Do you mind?"
"Of course not, it would be great if you came too"
We left the bar and went to my house, but what would happen next... I never imagined that would happen.
The home was very quiet.
"Takamina?" I called her.
Until I heard something hit the wall of the room, I went see what it was.
Takamina was on the floor trying to get up but she can’t.
"Takamina" I ran to her and helped her "What happened?”
"I think I know Acchan" Said Haruna appearing with alcoholic beverages in hand.
"But I do not drink that kind of things, how it came here?" Asked for myself and after a moment's reflection I remembered "Yuko! She drinks it occasionally and loves to hide it in my fridge!"
She broke free of my arms and walked towards Haruna and threw herself on top of her.
"Minami??" Said Haruna admired.
"She's drunk!" I said.
Takamina began to approach Haruna's face until their lips touch.
Despite knowing that she had no control over her body, I felt, my heart break into a thousand pieces.
"Minami stop it!" She shook her head from side to side" Acchan help me! We have to put her in the tub!”
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just started reading this today and its great
i wonder what gonna happen to yuko?
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TakaMina's drunk. It would have been better if she went to Acchan instead. XD Ohwell.
I wonder how's Yuko, knowing what TakaMina's father can do. :smhid
Thank you for this. Please update soon. :bow:
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Interesting...
a showdown between Atsuko and Others vs Minami's father
What kind of plan are they going to make to retrieve Yuko?
Who is this friend that would help them?
Eh... what with the bathtub?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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My Inglés is not very good :(
Love your fic. :inlove:
it just read
is very good ..... I want to read more, I hope you update son :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
ATSUMINA FOREVER ♥ ♥ Minami drunk :inlove: :inlove:
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Minami is drunk n kiss haruna 0,0
Well atsuko kinda disappointed.
Who's is haruna friends??
Maybe mariko sama?