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Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) [COMPLETED]
« on: August 15, 2015, 04:02:01 AM »
Hello everyone, this is a new fic. It just pops in my head. Hope you guys like this.  :D

Part 1

In a small town outskirt Tokyo

At night

Minami’s POV

My name is Takahashi Minami. I’m a math teacher in a small middle school in the town. I live a very peaceful life here. I like to me by myself. I rarely contact with people around me, so I don’t have a lot of friends just some childhood friends. My students see me as an old, lonely, unfriendly, and cold teacher. Actually, I’m only 25 years old

Here I'm sitting in a family restaurant. Today, I have an appointment with my childhood friend.

Opposite me is him, Oshima Yuu. He is a house agent. Next to him is his wife, Kojima Haruna. She is the owner of a coffee shop in this town.

"Hey Bakamina, I don't know why did you want to come back to this town and work in a small school like that." Yuu said

"Hey stop calling me like that" I said to him

"I call you that because you are an idiot. You graduated from a famous university in Tokyo as a top and honor student. You are the youngest student in the whole university received a master's degree in business major. A lot of companies want you to work for them. A lot of offers passed to you. However, you denied all of them just to come back here. With your talent, even the biggest company in Tokyo, I think you will become a CEO in no time." Yuu said

Once again he nagging about doesn’t understand why I'm back to this town while I have a master's degree.

I sigh

"I returned here because I like countryside." I answer shortly

He just sighs and cannot say anything.


In the forest near the town

*Pant* *Pant* *Pant*

A girl runs with all her mind to escape from a group of men

“Catch her, don’t let her escape” A man shouts

She runs as fast as she could while looking back to see if they are still after her. Suddenly she accidently trips and fall.

In the town

Minami’s POV

After talking with them I walk back to my house. I don’t know why he keeps on nagging about that.

"What is not good about this place?" I thought to myself

"The air is fresh, the wind is very cool. Around here is so silent too." I said and enjoy the weather.

“Maybe, today I could change my way to go home” I thought

Then I turn and walk to the lake near the forest to take some fresh air

Suddenly, I hear some noise comes from the forest. I slowly walk to the sources of the noise. I see a young girl lying on the ground. Quickly I rush to her. I pull her into my arm and rest her head on my knee. Then I feel something wet on her head.

"Blood" I thought in surprise

"What happened to her?" I panicky thought

"Miss, miss, are you ok?" I call her but she doesn't respond.

I was so scared. I check to see if she is still breathing. I sigh in relief. She is still alive. Because it is already almost midnight and very late, I carry her back to my home. When I reached my home, I put her on my bed and go to take the medical box to take care of her wounds.

I bring some warm water to clean her wound on her head. It seems very serious

"What is really happened to you?" I thought while cleaning her wound

After cleaning up and bandaged her wound on her head, now I can see clearly her face. She looks so young. Maybe, she is about 19 or 20 years old. She is so cute. Her face looks like an angel. I don't know why but her face mesmerizes me. It makes me to look at more and more. I cannot stop looking at her.

Suddenly, her eyelids move. She opens her eyes and looks directly at me. Her eyes are big and the black orbs are so beautiful. Now, I really cannot take my eyes of her eyes.

However, I then snap out of my thought when she sudden moves.

"Ah, I....I'm not a bad guy. I saw you..." unable to finish my words she sits up and hugs me tightly.

"Miss, are you ok? Do you need me to call a police for you" I ask her in worry tone.

"Papa, Papa" She calls me

"Eehhh, Papa?" I shout in surprise

I push her out and ask her

"Who do you call papa?"

"You, you are my papa" She said and smiles innocently.

"Eehhhh!! What are you saying?" I shout in shock once again

Unfortunately, she seems to be startled because of my shout. She starts crying.

"What happened....hix...did I... did something wrong?” She chokes

“What should I do now? What shout I do now?" I thought in panic

She cries harder and harder. I have no choice. I hug her and pat her back

"Ssshhh....I'm sorry, I'm sorry. I shouldn't shout at you like this. So stop crying ok" I said to her and she nods

Then I pull her out and look directly at her eyes

"I'm not your papa. My name is Takahashi Minami. I think our age is not different so much. You can either call me Minami oor Takamina" I slowly and gently said to her

"Do you understand?" I ask her

However she still looks at me with those teary eyes. Her look is so innocent.

"Do you understand what I said?" I said again but slower

She slowly nods

"Good girl" I pats her head and she smiles

Her smile is so cute and bright. It likes the sun shine

"What is your name?" I ask her

"What is your name?" she asks me back

"I said, what is your name?" I said again

"I said, what is your name?" she repeats my words again then she tilts her head aside

"What is wrong with that girl?" I thought to myself

"Don't tell me the wound on her head make her like this" I thought and sigh

I try to ask her one more time

"Miss, tell me what is your name? Your name?" I ask her and emphasize the words

"Name?" she looks at me with innocent eyes and scratches her head.

"Ugh...what a troublesome. What should I do to her now?" I thought and scratch my head.

She seems to notice my strange action. She calls me


I look at her and sigh

"She just confirm that she understand my words moment ago"

"Look, I'm not your father. Just call me takamina or Minami" I said again

"" she hesitantly calls me
"Yes" I said and smile to her

Seeing me smile, she smiles back at me with her brightest smile

"Minami" she calls me again

"Yes" I said

She smiles again

"Minami" she calls me again

"What did she want" I thought annoyingly.

"Yes." I answer but in different tone

Then she smiles again

"Minami" she calls me again

"Ugh... I reach my limit." I thought


"What do you want?" don’t let her finish her word; I raise my voice and ask her

"Oh no" I thought to myself

Seem like because I raise my voice, she is about to cry again

"I'm sorry for raising my voice at you. However, if you call someone, you have to have something to talk to that person." I explain to her

"Do you understand" I ask her, and she nods again

"I hope she really understand" I thought

Then I notice something shiny on her neck. I take a closer look. That is a necklace with a letter “A” on it. Maybe the first letter in her name is A. I close my eyes and thought for a little. Then I got an idea.

"Why don't I call her Acchan?"

Then I open my eyes and look at her. She still sits there and stares at me with confused look

"From now on, I will call you Acchan, ok" I said

"A...Acchan?" She seems to don't get it

"Your name from now on will be Acchan. I will call you Acchan, and you will call me Minami" I slowly explain to her.

"Do you get it now?" I ask her, and she nods again

"I hope so" I exhaustedly thought.

"Minami" she calls me
"Not again" I sigh

"Yes, Acchan" I answer, and she smiles

"My name is Acchan, your name is Minami." She happily said

"Thank goodness she finally understands a little" I thought and sigh in relief

Then I hear some noise like stomach growl. I look at her, and she looks at her stomach

"Are you hungry?" I ask her

"Hungry?" She asks

"Do you want to eat something?" I ask her slowly while using my hands to show her the meaning of eating

She smiles and nods

I stand up and extend my hand to help her stand up

"Come on, let go to the kitchen. I will get you some food." I said

"Food, food, food," she mumbles

That is the only word she said on the way to the kitchen

Because I go out with Yuu, I didn't cook anything. I take out some rice, eggs, and other ingredients. I make her omelet rice. After I'm done, I put the dish in front of her.

"Eat it" I said and give her a spoon

She smiles and starts eating the food. She looks very happy when eating. Suddenly she is choking. I quickly rush to the kitchen to take some water for her. I give it to her and pat her back

"Eat slowly" I said, and she nods

After she finishes all her food, I take the dish to the kitchen and wash it. When I come out, she already falls asleep on the table. I shake my head and carry her back to my guest room. Luckily, I have a spare room. I put her on my bed and cover her with a blanket. When I'm about to leave, she opens her eyes and looks at me.

"Where are you going?" She asks me

"I go back to my room to sleep" I said to her

"No, I don't want to stay here alone." she said

"Sleep here. I'm just in the room next to you. Not far." I said

"No, I don't want too." She pouts

"Stop that pouting and sleep" I use serious tone to said to her.

I really tired now. I don't have enough energy to play with her anymore. I have to go to school early tomorrow.

She seems to notice that I'm angry. She slowly lies down and pulls the blanket to cover her body until the top of the head like she is mad at me. I sigh

"Do whatever you want" I thought and close the door

At midnight

When I am sleeping, I feel something snuggle in my blanket. I sit up and turn the light on. I see her again. She hugs me

"What are you doing here?" I said annoyingly

"Go back to your room now." I raise my voice

"No," she said and hugs me tight

"Acchan!!" I raise my voice

She lets go of me. She sits up and looks at me. Now that I notice, her eyes are all red. I can see her hands are shaking. She looks like a little puppy just was abandoned by it owner. She slowly steps down from my bed.

"I'm sorry" she shakily said and leaves

Somehow I feel my heart tighten when seeing her like that.

"Wait" I hold her hand and said.

Her hand is very cold

"Why did you come to my room? Are you crying?" I asks

She looks down

"Tell me what happened?" I lift her face up and ask her

"I cannot sleep. I'm afraid of the dark. That is so scary." She said and sobs

"How about I turn on the light for you?" I said

"No, don't leave me alone. I'm scared" she said and cries

"Ssshhh....ok, ok." I hug her and pat her back

"So, you want to sleep here?" I ask her, and she nods

"Ok, I will let you sleep here. But only for today, tomorrow you have to learn to sleep by yourself, ok?" I said to her

Finally she smiles and nods

“Now, let’s get on the bed and sleep. I have to work early tomorrow.” I said and leads her to the bed

She climbs on the bed and snuggle closer to me. I can even feel her breath on my neck

“Now, how am I supposed to sleep?” I painfully sighs

“I hope that I’m able to stay awake during my class” I thought and slowly fall in sleep because of tiredness

End Minami’s POV

In Tokyo

In a very big mansion

“Did you find her?” A man said while hugging his crying wife

“We still cannot find Oujo-sama everywhere.” An old man in butler suit said

“I ordered you to go and pick her up. I told you clearly that she is not familiar with Japan. Why did you let this happen?” The man angrily said

“Sorry master, I will call more people to look for her.” The butler bows and said

“Honey, what should we do now? She just came back here from New York. Now she is missing. Maybe we should call the police” the woman cries and said

“Calm down honey, we will call but not openly. I don’t want it to turn into a big commotion.” He said

“Koji, call Jun for me. He is the Chief of Police. He will be able to help us to find her” the man said

“Yes sir” the butler said and bows


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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 1 15/08/15
« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2015, 04:54:41 AM »
author-san I really liked all the fanfic you please continue to update okay
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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 1 15/08/15
« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2015, 06:54:07 AM »
Interesting twist...

Is atsuko the Oujosama that went missing?

If she was in US then isn't she acting too much like a child than adult?

Who were the one that run after Atsuko?

What's going on?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the new fic

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 1 15/08/15
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2015, 01:31:38 PM »
This story is very interesting.

Hope you update soon.

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 1 15/08/15
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2015, 08:37:59 PM »
I agree with others about interesting story..  :roll:
Hope to read more of it..  :)
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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 1 15/08/15
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2015, 07:16:24 PM »
you know what, minami is really cool in this story and I'm looking forward a new update :D

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Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 2 22/08/15
« Reply #6 on: August 22, 2015, 01:12:25 AM »
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Here is part 2  :)

Part 2

In the small town

In the morning 

Minami’s POV

I slowly open my eyes. I startle when I see a pair of eyes looking at me.

“Ah...ah..what is it?” I shout and push myself away from that


Because of that I lose my balance and fall on the floor. Then I remember that last night Acchan came to my room to sleep. I sit up and rub my head.

“What are you doing? Why are you looking at me like that?” I ask her with annoying tone.

“I woke up, but I don’t know what to do. Therefore I sit and wait for you to wake up.” She innocently said

I sigh

“Next time, don’t ever do that again, you can give me a heart attack because of that.” I said and stand up

Then I notice the clock near me. It is 8:00 am.

“What?? It is already 8:00. Why did my alarm not ring?” I shout in surprise

“You mean the very loud and noisy sound that woke me up?” She asks me and acts as the sound is very terrible

“It did ring?” I ask her, and she nods

“What did you do?” I ask her

“It is so annoying. I’m afraid that you will be woken up by that. Then I decided to turn it off but don't know how. Therefore I put it under the pillow to silent it” She said

“I want to scream out loud right now. My peaceful life, I want it back.” I shout in my mind and rush to change my clothes and quickly prepare for school.

I immediately rush out of the house. Before closing the door, I turn around and said to her

“Stay inside, don’t go out alone. I had some food in the fridge. Take it out and eat if you are hungry. Turn on the TV if you are bore. I will be back in the evening.”

Then I rush to school.

“I’m going to be late.” I thought while running as fast as I could.

Luckily, I reach the school at the same time with the school bell. I tiredly walk on the hall way

“Yo Takamina, What’s up” someone calls and pats my shoulder.

I turn around to see who that person is

“Mii-chan” I tiredly said

Minegishi Minami, she is my cousin. She is English teacher.

“Wow Takamina, You look like you just work overnight for a week"

The man next to her said

“You could say that, Mario” I effortlessly said

Shinoda Mario, science teacher, Mii-chan’s boyfriend. He is my childhood friend. He older than me though. He is son of the principle of this school.

“What happened?” Mario asks

“I will let you know after school. Now, I have to run. I have early class.” I said and rush to the classroom.

In my classroom

“Good morning sensei.” My students greet me

“Good morning” I said

“Did you prepare for today test?” I ask them

“Yes,” They said in union

“Ok” I said and write the questions on the board

Then I sit in my table

“Is she really ok by herself?” I thought

“I wonder if she knows how to warm the food.”

A lot of thought pass through my mind. Suddenly

“Sensei” I hear the class representative call me

“What? Did you finish your test? What are you doing here?” I said

“Sensei, the bell just rings. I collected all the test here. Are you ok, sensei?” He asks me

“Oh, I’m fine. Good, give me the test.” I said and stand up

Then I clean up my thing and walk out of the room back to the teacher room

In the evening

“Finally, the school is done. What a tiring day. Because of her, I cannot focus on my teaching. The whole day, I just spaced out in every of my classes.” I tiredly sigh

“My students look at me like I’m an alien. That is really embarrassing” I shake my head and keep walking

“Hey, so tell me what make you look like this” Mario pats my back and said

“Let go to my house, you will know” I said

Then Mii-chan and Mario come with me to my house

On our way out of the school

"Hey, Akira,” Mii-chan calls and waves a girl who is walking before us

Akira is also my childhood friend. Though, I rarely talk to her since I move back here. She is also a teacher in this school. She is art teacher.

"Hello Mii-chan, Mario, and Takamina" She greets us.

"Do you want to go to Takamina's house? He has something very interesting to show us." Mii-chan said

"When did I say that is interesting?" I ask her

"Something that can make you look like this is definitely an interesting thing." Mario said and laughs

"That is so true" Mii-chan adds

"You two really are couple" I said and sigh

"Are you ok, Takamina?" Akira asks me

"I'm fine. Don't trust my cousin’s words" I said

Then she joins us to come to my house

“I hope she will not destroy my house.” I thought

When I get near the house, I hear someone voice. I knew that voice

“Yuu?” I thought

I rush inside. While my mind is still processing what happening, I feel someone rush to me and hug me tight

"Minami, I miss you" she said

"Acchan" I call her in surpise

"Acchan???" Mario and Mii-chan shout in shock

"Bakamina, who is this cute girl?" Yuu steps out and said

“Is she your secret lover?” Yuu asks me

"Yuuchan stop joking" Nyan Nyan said

"I just curious" Yuu said

"What happened, Takamina? Is she your..." Mii asks

"Wow, I cannot believe that" Mario said

"Ugh... I want to smack on their heads" I angrily thought

"Ugh, you all shut up" I shout

“She is not my girlfriend or anything” I said

"I just found her in the forest, yesterday." I continue

"Her head is hurt very badly. When I asked her about her name, she didn’t remember anything. Based on her necklace, I named her Acchan" I explain

"I see" everyone said

“Not only doesn’t remember anything, but she also doesn’t know anything. Just like a kid.” I said

“So, that injury on her head might affect some of her brain’s function.” Mario seriously said

“I guess so” I said and nods

"Since she doesn't remember anything, I guess I will let her live here for awhile." I said

"Wah! Takamina, you are so lucky. Being able to live with a cute and beauty girl like this" Yuu said

"So, you want huh Yuu?" Nyan Nyan glares at him

"Of course not, My Nyan Nyan is the cutest" Yuu said and hugs his wife.

"Wait, how can you two get into my house?" I ask him

"She opens the door for us" he said and points to Acchan

"Acchan, why did you open the door for stranger?" I ask her.

"But they said that they knew you" she said and continues drinking something in the glass

However the color of that thing is very weird

“Hey, how can you call us stranger?” Yuu shouts, but I ignore him

"What are you drinking?" I ask her

"Juice, he gave me this." She said and point to Yuu

"Where did you get that, Yuu?" I ask him

"I saw it in the fridge, so I get for her" Yuu said

"That juice is expired. I forgot to throw it away. Why didn't you check it before give it to her" I worriedly said and take the juice away from her.

Seeing me take away the juice, she pouts

"Listen Acchan, you cannot use anything that old ok. It is not good for you." I explain to her, and she nods

"Hey, don't scold me like that. If we did not come here, she will be dead because of hungry." Yuu said

"What do you mean?" I ask

"When she opened the door for us, her face looked very pale. I asked her if she ate anything. She shook her head." Nyan Nyan said

"What! Why didn't you eat anything? Didn't I say that there is some food in the fridge for you to eat?" I ask

"I wait for you to cook for me. The thing that you cooked last night" she said

“You didn’t eat anything from the morning until now?” I ask her

“Yes” she said

"What can I do with her now?" I scratch my head and sigh in defeat

"So did you eat something?" I ask, and she nods

"I bought for her some sushi." Yuu said

"Thank you" I said

"Oh, this is the first time I see my cousin so worry about someone." Mii-chan playfully said

"W...what are you saying?" I stutter

"Why did I stutter?" I thought

"You are stutter. The heart of our lonely and cold Takamina finally awake." Mario said and wipes his fake tear

"You guys shut up. Stop saying nonsense." I shout

“That is truth. You always act cold toward everyone. However she is a different case.” Mii-chan said and giggles at me

Then they all laugh and keep teasing me. I can feel my face really hot right now. I look at her. She is still playing something on my laptop. She smiles while playing. She looks so cute. Then she looks up at me and smiles brightly. I can see crinkle on her nose

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

"What happened to me?" I thought and touch my left chest

"Am I really?" I thought

"No, it definitely isn't. I just want to help her that is all." I thought to myself

“Hey, I wonder what really happened to her.” Yuu said

“Uh” Everyone nods

“Why don’t we ask her?” Nyan Nyan said

“Takamina, you said that you found her at the forest right?” Mario asks

“Uh” I nod

Then Mario turns to Acchan

“Acchan, do you remember what happened to you in the forest last night?” he asks her

She looks at him in confused look

“Do you remember that you are in a forest before?” Mii-chan asks her

End Minami’s POV

“Forest? Forest, forest…” Acchan is mumbling

Then suddenly something flash in her head


“Catch her, don’t let her escape.”

“Where is she now?”

“In the forest, let split up and catch her”


Minami’s POV

Acchan is sitting silently and thinking. Suddenly she rushes to me and hide behind me. She holds my shirt tightly. I can feel that her hand is shaking.

“What happened, Acchan?” I turn and look at her

“They chase after me, they chase after me.” She said in terrify tone, and her voice is shaking

“Minami, Minami” she hugs me tight 

“Acchan, calm down, I’m here. No one will harm you.” I said and pat her back

“I guess that is something very terrible. Maybe we shouldn’t ask about that.” Mario said

End Minami POV

Then they sit and talk with each other happily. Unknowingly, there is someone still staying silent and looking at Acchan.

“It is already late. We will go home now, see you later Takamina” Yuu said

“Ok, bye Yuu, Nyan Nyan” Minami said

“We will also leave now” Mario said and stands up

“Ok bye guys” Minami said to them

"I will go with you two" Akira said to Mii-chan and Mario

"See you later guys" Minami said

In the street

"It is new to see Takamina so care about someone like this, right guys" Mii-chan said

"Uh, certainly" Mario answers

Akira still keeps silent

"Akira?" Mii-chan calls

"Ah, sorry, it surprises me too." Akira said and smiles reluctantly.

"I forgot that have some other thing to do. I will go this way. Bye guys, See you guys at school." Akira said

"Ok, careful it is already dark" Mii-chan said

"Ok, I will." Akira said and leaves.

Then they keep walking while holding hands

"Hey Mii-chan, do you think she still has that feeling for him?" Mario said

"Uhm...I guess so. She acted very weird today. Even weirder after she meets Acchan" Mii-chan said

"But, Minami never sees her that way" Mario said

"It cannot help. That feeling has to be mutual. Hope she can find someone for her" Mii-chan said while clinging on Mario's arm

“However, I get a feeling that Takamina like Acchan ?” Mario looks at Mii-chan and said

"Uh, I think so, too" Mii-chan said and nods

Back to Minami’s house

After they all leave, I turn and look at her

“Are you ok, Acchan?” I ask her

“Uh” she nods

“What did you...never mind.” I said

She looks at me with confused look

“I don’t want to remind her about that again” I thought

"Acchan, let's go to your room and sleep." I call her and pull her up

"I want to sleep in your room" she said

"What did you promise to me, yesterday?" I ask her

"I will sleep by myself in my room" she said and pouts

"Good, now go to your room" I said

I go with her to her room. I brought my old lamp to her room so that she will not afraid because of dark anymore. After that I go to my room.

Every day, I will wake up early than before. I make breakfast for me and her. I also make some food for her to eat at noon and evening.

In Tokyo

In a big mansion

“Hello uncle.” A man wears a very neat suit come in

“Jun, glad to see you. Did you find any information about her?” the man asks

“We just got some information through the security cameras in the airport. When she just got off the airport, three men surrounded her and led her to somewhere.” Jun sits down and said

“Did you see their face?” the man said

“No, they wear a black mask” Jun shakes his head

“Did they kidnap her for money?” the woman sobs and said

“Akio, if they need anything, just give that to them. I don’t want Atsu to meet any danger” she cries

“Calm down Minako, Atsu will be fine. If they call me, I will do everything to get our daughter back” Akio hugs his wife and said

“Don’t worry, uncle, aunty, I will definitely save little cousin.” Jun said.

In the forest

“Did you find any information about her?” a man sits on his chair and asks

“No sir”

“You guys are a bunch of idiot. How did a group of big guys cannot handle a girl? My plan is ruined because of those stupid.” He said and slams the table

“Sorry sir, we will go and find her before those police find her.” the man said


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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 2 22/08/15
« Reply #7 on: August 22, 2015, 06:04:32 AM »
YEAHHHH!!! An update.

thank you so much author san.

hope you update it fast.

can't wait for the next chapter.

long life atsumina  :cow:

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 2 22/08/15
« Reply #8 on: August 22, 2015, 03:14:19 PM »
Ah... Atsuko is some rich daughter....

Who is the kidnapper mastermind?

Would Atsuko remember her past?

Would Atsuko be able to love Minami?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 2 22/08/15
« Reply #9 on: August 23, 2015, 06:15:21 PM »
I'm so curious about what's going to happen next >.<

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 2 22/08/15
« Reply #10 on: August 24, 2015, 12:16:35 PM »
The Plot thickens.....

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Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 3 29/08/15
« Reply #11 on: August 29, 2015, 12:55:09 AM »
@AI712, @sadrilim, @cisda83, @kazuko, @hackata48: Thank you!   :D

Here is part 3  XD

Part 3

In the evening

I go back home after a tiring day. I open the door of my house

“Why is it so quiet?” I thought to myself

“Acchan,” I call her but still silent

“Acchan, Acchan” I run to her room to look for her, but she isn’t there

“Acchan, where are you?” I run around the house to look for her.

Suddenly something flashes on my head

“How do you feel if one day she disappeared from your life?”

I stun with that thought


In principal's room

“Why did you call me to your father’s room” I ask Mario

“To talk.” Mario answers

“Where is uncle?” I ask

“He attends some meeting, so he didn’t come to school today” He said

“I see” I said and sit down

“How is Acchan doing??” Mario said

“She is fine. However, I don’t know why these days she looks somehow exhausted” Minami worriedly said

“I see. You seem to worry about her a lot” Mario said and smirks

I’m a little surprise with his words.

“Uhm….Well, she is in trouble, and since I’m the one that found her, I have to take care of her. Don’t you feel sorry about her? She lost all her memories” I said

“Oh,” Mario said but his tone is weird

“What with that sound?” I glare at him

“Nothing,” Mario smirks

“Liar, you sound like you doubt my words” I said and frowning

“Yep, I did.” He said and shrugs

“What do you mean?” I ask

“Takamina, don’t say that you don’t have any feeling for her, that you just want to help her. You take care of her more than a pity feeling” Mario said

“I...I don’t know what you are talking about” I said and stand up

“If you don’t have any business, I will go home now. Acchan must be hungry.” I said

“Hee!! Worry about your Acchan” Mario said and smirks

“S..shut up” I said

Before I close the door, Mario said to me

“Takamina, how do you feel if one day she disappeared from your life?”

End Flashback

I run around the house to the backyard to look for her again.  I don’t know why my heart starts beating so fast. Suddenly, I hear the sound of the door open. I rush to the door. I see Acchan walks in. She is with Yuu and Nyan Nyan and smiles happily.

I walk toward them and angrily shout at her

“Where are you going? I told you that don’t go outside, didn’t I?”

“I’m sorry” she looks down and said

“Calm down, Takamina. I just took her to the store nearby. I wanted to treat her some food” Nyan Nyan walks in and said

“Sorry Minami, I will….”

“You don’t have to apologize, just do whatever you want. It is none of my business” cutting her words, I said and go back to my room

“Takamina, what's wrong with you?” I hear Yuu call me, but I ignore him and slam the door

In my room, I still can hear those two comforts Acchan

“It’s ok, Acchan. Maybe he is exhausted because of work.” Nyan Nyan said

“We will leave right now. Tomorrow, I will go and pick you up again” Yuu said

“What? She will be with them again. What are they doing?” I though

Then I hear the door closes. I guess they all leave now. Then I hear the footstep coming closer to my room. Then a knocking sound

“Minami, Tomorrow I will go with Nyan Nyan one more day.” Acchan said to me

“I don’t care” I coldly said

Then I didn’t hear anything outside.

After awhile

“Maybe she goes back to her room now.” I thought

I open my door and come out. The house is dark and fills with silent. I shake my head and come back to my room.

In the morning

I’m woken up because of my doorbell. I guess that they come to pick Acchan up. I don’t want to come out. After awhile the house is silent again. I guess that they already left.

Today is the weekend, also my birthday. I want to celebrate with her, but she goes out. I lazily lie on the bed while thinking what she is doing right now. It is very frustrated. I sit up and scratch my head. I look at the clock. It is already 1:00 o’clock.

I open the door. When I’m about to go out, I kick on something. I look down

“A present?” I thought

I pick it up. Then I see a small piece of paper

“Happy birthday Minami” It said

“Acchan?” I thought in surprise


Acchan is sitting and watching TV. Then she sees people in the show singing and celebrating. She turns to Minami and asks

“Minami, what are they doing?”

Minami is working on his paperwork.

“They celebrate his birthday” Minami looks up and said

“Celebrating birthday?” Acchan looks at Minami

“That is the day someone was born. Friend or relative of that person will secretly prepare the party to make that person surprise. That way the birthday person will be very happy.” Minami explains

Acchan sits back and thinks. Then she asks Minami

“What is your birthday Minami?”

Minami looks at Acchan and said

“April 8”

End flashback

I go back to my room and sit on my bed. I open the box. It is a new pair of shoe. While I still thinking my phone rings

(Yo, Bakamina)

"Yuu" I uninteresting said

(Hey, what with that attitude?)

"What do you want?" I sigh

(Why did you get mad at Acchan, yesterday?) Yuu asks me

“How do you feel when one day she disappeared from your life?” The question rings on my head again

(Do you afraid that she will disappear?) Yuu continues

My heart sudden beats faster when hearing that

“Shut up. Who care about that” I said

(I see. Hey, did you see that?) Yuu asks me

"Does he mean the shoes?" I thought

"See what?" I said

(Uhm...Hey, you know that Acchan went out with us this early morning, right?)

"So what"

(I thought that I will be a generous person to tell you where she is. However, since you said you don’t care, maybe I will hang up)

"Hey, wait. Where is she?" I blurt it out

I can feel his smirk

(Hee!! So you want to know?) Yuu said in teasing voice

“Yes” I admit

(What will I get if I spill that information out?)

“What do you want?” I ask him

(Treat me coffee and cake)

“What? Your wife is a coffee shop owner. You can eat whatever you want. Why did you ask me that?” I ask him

(Stop complaining, Yes or No)

“Ok, ok, whatever you want” I said

(Deal, I will pick you up and we will go to that coffee shop.) Yuu said

“Hey, how about Acchan?” I ask him

(Don't rush, I will tell you when we get there)

“Hey” doesn’t let me finish, he already hangs up.

I sigh and go to my room to prepare and wait for Yuu. Then he takes me to

“The coffee shop opposite Nyan Nyan shop” I shout in my mind

“Hey Yuu, are you lost your mind. Do you know where this is?” I ask him

“Yes, opposite Nyan Nyan's shop” He answers

“Why did you come here not there?” I ask him

“I got her permission” Yuu said and winks

“Why?” I ask

“Look” He said

I look at the direction that his finger point.

“Acchan?” I said in surprise

She is wearing waitress uniform

“What is she doing there?” I ask Yuu

“Last week, she called Haruna. She said that she wants to earn some money. Therefore Nyan Nyan let her work there" Yuu said

"She needs money? For what? If she wants something, she can tell me I will buy for her. Why did she have to go to work? Why don’t you tell me before? You know about her condition, right?" I worriedly said

"She said she want to buy for you a birthday present. She told us about what she asked you, and said that she want to see you happy.” Yuu said.

"She works there from yesterday?" I ask Yuu

"No, she works there for a week. However, because you have to work at school that why you did not notice. That pair of shoes is all her money." Yuu said

"Acchan!" I thought

"What about today?" I ask Yuu

"She wants to buy a cake for you. Nyan Nyan said that she will give her one. However, she said that she want to buy the cake by herself for you. That way you will be happier" Yuu said

"She works there the whole week. No wonder, this week she looked exhausted." I thought

I look at her. She is trying very hard for my sake while yesterday, I shouted at her, made her sad. I’m such an idiot.

Then I see something strange. She looks scared. That man holds her hand. I stand up and rush out of the shop.

End Minami’s POV

Haruna’s shop

When Minami get there, he sees that man is about to hit Acchan. Minami rushes there and pulls her into his arm. Then he raises his hand to catch his

“What are you doing?” Minami raises his voice at him

“This is none of your business” He said

“Her business is my business” Minami shouts back at him

“She spilled coffee on my shirt” He said

“That doesn’t mean you can do any inappropriate action to her” Minami shouts

People around the shop stand up and look at Minami and the man. He looks around and steps back

“Today, I will let it go like this. Next time thing will not easy like this” He said and leaves the shop.

“Sorry everyone, it is just some small problem. We are sorry. Please enjoy your time.” Yuu and Haruna said and smile to them

Then Minami looks back at Acchan. She is silent and looks down.

“Sorry Nyan Nyan, but her shift is over now. She will go back with me.” Minami said and pulls her with him

“Ok” Haruna said

“But the...” Acchan said

“The cake right, I will buy it for us. Yuu can you give me a chocolate cake." He said and looks at Yuu

“Ok” He goes into the kitchen and takes the cake

Then Minami takes Acchan back to the house.

At Minami’s house

Minami’s POV

When we get home, I take the cake to the kitchen and open it. I feel very happy about this special day. When I look up, I see her stands there and looks down. I come to her and lift her face up

"What's wrong Acchan?" I gently ask her

"I'm sorry Minami" she said and sobs

"For what, Acchan?' I ask her

"I leave the house without asking you. I made you mad. Minami, I promise from now on I will never do that again. Please don't hate me. Don't ignore me" She said and cries hard.

I feel so sad. I make her cry again. Immediately, I pull her into my embrace. I stroke her back and pat her head

"It's ok, Acchan. I'm not mad at you. I just worried about you. I’m worried that you will get lost. I'm sorry that I yelled at you the other day. I'm sorry for ignoring you." I said

“You wasn’t mad at me” She asks

“Uh” I said and stroke her back

"So, you don't have to apologize to me. The one have to do that is me. You tried your best for this whole week just for my sake. I'm very happy right now, Acchan" I said to her

She looks at me with those beautiful eyes

"Really? You are really happy?" She innocently asks me

"Uh, I'm very happy right now. This is my best birthday ever." I said and smile to her

Finally she smiles at me.

"What do you want to eat before the cake, Acchan?" I ask her

"I want that rice again" She happily said

"Ok" I smile at her.

After finished cooking, I sit and watch her happily eat the food.

"Acchan, thank you for the shoes" I said to her

"Do you like it?" she asks

"Yes, I like it a lot. Since you are the one bought this for me, this is my most favorite shoes from now on. I will use it everyday” I said and smile

She looks up and smiles at me her brightest smile

End Minami's POV

At night

After Minami finished his work, he goes back to his room. When he passes by Acchan’s room, he sees her blanket fell on the floor. He comes in to put the blanket on her again. He sits on the edge of her bed and looks at her sleeping face. He moves the hairs that cover her face.

“If you disappear from my life, my heart will also disappear.” Minami whispers

Unconsciously he slowly bends down closer to her. When his face is an inch away from her lips, Acchan moves her head, and their lips touch each other. After a few seconds, Minami realizes that he is kissing her. He widens his eyes in surprise and sits up.

“W….w..what am I doing?” Minami thought in panic.

His face is getting hot. He quickly stands up and goes back to his room. He lies on his bed. He raises his hand to touches his lips.

Monday morning

In school

Minami is walking on the hall way. He is humming a song while walking. He is very happy

“Hi Minami, happy be lated birthday” Mii-chan and Mario said

“Hi guys” Minami cheerfully greets them

“Wow, Minami, you look happy today.” Mario said and strokes his chin

“Am I?” Minami said

“Something definitely happened” Mario said

“Yesterday is my birthday, so I’m still happy” Minami said

“I’m pretty sure that it is obviously not because of your birthday” Mii-chan said

“What is it? You look suspicious” Mario said

“Aha, you wear a new pair of shoe” Mii-chan shouts

“Hey, don’t be too loud” Minami said

“Where is your old one?” Mii-chan asks in surprise

“I threw it away” Minami said

“You what? You throw your shoes away?” Mario said

“Are you sick, Takamina?” Mii-chan asks

“What? Why?” Minami asks in surprise

“You never throw anything in your house. Your house just like an antique store.” Mii-chan said

“The old one, I told you a thousand times to throw it away, but you ignore me. Why did you throw it now?” Mario said

Mario fake spills the coffee in his hand near the shoes

“Hey, be careful.” Minami steps back and said

“So I guess the reason is this thing. You seem treasure it a lot” Mario said

Mii-chan and Mario approach him. Minami steps back

“Is this Acchan’s birthday gift” Mario said and smirks

Minami blushes

“Bingo” Mii-chan said

“Tell us about that” Mario said

“Ok,” Minami said

“They will never let me go if I’m not telling them about that.” Minami thought

Then Minami tells them everything about that
“So, she went to work at Nyan Nyan's shop to buy you a gift huh?” Mario said, and Minami nods

“It is a nice shoe huh?” Mii-chan said

"Uh" Minami nods and smiles

“I don’t know why somehow just looking at the shoes makes me very happy.” Minami looks at the shoes and smiles

Seeing that the two stand there and giggle

“What?” Minami asks

“Do you want to look at your face moment ago? It is really funny” Mario asks

“Huh?” Minami look at him with confused look

“The happy face” Mii-chan said and laughs out loud

“Shut up” Minami shouts

“T….t..the bell already rings. I will go to my class now.” he said and leaves quickly

“It is really funny to tease him” Mii-chan said and giggles

“I know right” Mario laughs

Far away from them, there is someone watching them


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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 3 29/08/15
« Reply #12 on: September 03, 2015, 08:24:48 AM »
Ah... Minami and Atsuko kissed

Who was the one looking at Minami, Mario and Miichan from far?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 3 29/08/15
« Reply #13 on: September 03, 2015, 12:49:43 PM »
just wondering why minami didn't try to report this case to the police..

and, Atsuko acts like a kid, how can she fall in love with minami??

update soon author-san!

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Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 4 05/09/15
« Reply #14 on: September 05, 2015, 12:55:42 AM »
@cisda83, @AI712: Thank you!  :D

@Kazuko: Thank you! This chapter will answer your question  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic   XD

Here is part 4   :)

Part 4

In Tokyo

Police department

In Jun’s office

Jun’s POV

I’m sitting and watching the security cameras again. Hopefully, I can find more clues so that I can find little cousin sooner. Even Though I see who led her, I cannot see the car that took her. Maybe they knew about the cameras.

However, it is very weird.

“How did they know that she will come back that day?” I thought

Suddenly I notice something in the video. I see a long black haired girl in the scene. Seem like she was taking picture around there.

“That girl, her standing position, she properly captured the car.” I thought

I should zoom in the picture and tell them to find this girl. Maybe she can help me.

When I’m zooming in the picture, I see her face

“She is cute” I thought

“What am I thinking about? I should focus on serious business.” I shake my head and thought

After finishing, I print the picture out. Then I leave the room

“Tomorrow, I will tell them to look for this girl.” I thought

In the town

In the evening

At Minami’s house

Minami’s POV

While I’m cooking in the kitchen, I hear my doorbell rings. I step out and open the door

“Hello, Takamina” Mii-chan and Mario greet me

“Hi, what are you doing here?” I ask them

“Hey, don’t be so cold. We come here to visit you and Acchan. I bought some snacks and candies for her” Mii-chan said

“She just lost her memories. She is not a kid that you bring candies for her” I said and walk back to the kitchen

“Where is she?” Mii-chan asks

“She is in the family room and watching TV” I said

Mario comes with me to the kitchen

“What do you want?” I glare at him and ask

“As expect from my childhood friend, you know my intention. You are getting smarter everyday” He said and pats my head

“Hey, I’m not a kid. And what do you mean by saying that? You mean I’m stupid?” I said in annoying tone

“Sorry, Sorry. I was just kidding” He said and laughs

“So, any progress?” Mario asks me

“Her condition is getting better. She acts more like an adult than the first day I saved her.” I answer

“Not that, I mean any progress with her so far?” He asks and winks at me

“What?” I said

“You know what I mean” He said and giggles

“We are….”

When I’m about to say something, I hear Acchan’s voice. She is screaming. Immediately, I rush to the room. I see she is screaming and struggling in Mii-chan’s grip

“Minami, Minami, help me, Minami.” She calls and cries

“Let go of me” She struggles and tries to take her hands of her

I quickly run to her. I hold her shoulder and turn her face to look at me

“Sshhh… calm down Acchan. I’m here, look this is me. No one will hurt you here” I said to her

“Minami, I’m scared, I’m scared” She hugs me tightly and buries her face in my chest.

I stroke her back to calm her down.

“What happened, Mii-chan?” Mario asks her

“I don’t know. When I came to this room, I saw she was sitting on the floor and watching some music program. I just want to play with her” Mii-chan said

“So, I stealthily walk behind her. Then I hug her and cover her eyes with my hands. Then she starts screaming and struggling in my arms like what you saw just now.” Mii-chan continues

Acchan is still shaking in my arms.

“What make her so scare like that” I thought

After she calmed down, I ask her

“What happened, Acchan?”

“I don’t know. I just suddenly feel so scared. I don’t know what to do. I feel someone hold me from behind. They cover my eyes with something and push me into some place. Then they use something to cover my mouth” She shakily said

Her body is shaking again because of scare

“Don’t worry, Acchan, you have me here with you. I will never let anyone hurt you. I will protect you forever.” I hug her tightly.

After a while, she finally calm down

“Come on Acchan, let go to eat before our food get cold.” I said and wipes her tear

“Uh” she nods

Then Acchan, Mario, Mii-chan, and I go to the dining room and eat

At night

While I’m sitting in my room and thinking, I hear my phone rings

“Hello Mario” I said

(How is Acchan doing?)

“She is fine now. She is sleeping in her room” I answer

(I see)

(Hey, what do you think what really happened to her?) Mario asks me

“Uhm… I don’t know. However, I knew one thing for sure. That thing is very terrible.” I said

(Uh, I think so too)

(Did you bring her to the police?) Mario asks

“I did. However, they said that there is not any report about missing or kidnapping case in the past two weeks. Plus, since she doesn’t remember anything, they cannot do anything” I said

“They said that when they have any information about her, they will inform me.” I said

(I see. I hope they will find her family soon.) Mario said

“Uh, me too, I want to know what really happened to her” I said

(Uh…well, I just want to ask about that)  Mario said

(Take good care of her, ok) Mario continues

“Ok, I will. Bye” I said

Then I go to bed and sleep.

At midnight

I wake up and go to kitchen to get some water. I stop at Acchan’s room. I walk into her room. I put a blanket on her. Suddenly her facial expression changes, she is frowning and struggling on her bed.

“ me… me.” she weakly calls

I sit on her bed and wipe her sweat.

“I’m here. Don’t worry, Acchan.” I gently said and kisses her forehead

She slowly calm down

“What really happened to you Acchan?” I thought while stroking her hair

In Tokyo

In the big mansion

“Uncle, I finally find some clues that can help me find her.” Jun runs to the house and said

“Really?” Akio said

“Yes, There is a girl who was standing near little cousin’s place. She was taking picture everywhere. That time, her camera was pointing to the direction of those kidnappers. I think might be in some of her picture, I can find the car that took her.” Jun said

“Who is she? Did you find her?” Akio asks

“Don’t worry uncle, I ordered my men to go and investigate about her. We will get her information very soon.” Jun said

While they are talking, Jun’s phone rings

“Hello, this is Matsui Jun” Jun said

“Ok, I got it.” Jun nods

“No, give me the address, I will go there myself.” Jun said

“Ok, good job. You guys continue to investigate around the airport. Remember, don’t let this information leak out, ok” Jun said

“Bye” Jun hangs up

Akio turns to Jun and asks

“What is it Jun?”

“They found the girl. I will go to her place right now.” Jun said

“What a relieve” Namiko said

Then Jun leaves the house. When he steps into the car, his phone rings announce that he received a message. He opens the message and reads. After that he turns on his GPS and goes to the witness girl’s house

In the forest

At an abandoned factory

“Did you find any information about her?” a man ask

“No sir” his underlings answer

“You all are useless” he shouts and throws the ashtray at them

“We are terribly sorry about that sir.” they bow and said

“However, I got information about her.” the boss said

“You three go to this place and find her. Remember to act as normal people. Don’t let anyone suspect about you. When you specify that is really her, catch her and bring her here immediately. Are you clear?” He said and gives the direction.

“Yes sir” they said and leave the place

“You two come here” The boss calls the other two

“Yes sir” they come closer to him

“Follow that cop. I think he knows something. If he finds any clues, remove that right away. You two get that?” He said

“Yes sir” They said and leave the place

“Maeda Akio, I will catch your precious daughter. What will you do to exchange for her life?” He said and laughs out loud

Far away from him, there is a person standing there and smirks

In the town

At Minami house

In the morning

Acchan’s POV

I slowly open my eyes. I see Minami is sleeping next to me

“What happened? Why is he here?” I thought to myself

Suddenly Minami moves closer to me

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

“H..he is so close.” I thought to myself

“What is this feeling?” I thought to myself

I can feel that my face is getting hot. Then he suddenly opens his eyes. I jump in surprise and move back

“Good morning, Acchan” He said and smiles to me

“G..good morning, Minami” I stutter

“Why are you here?” I ask

“Last night I saw that you got some nightmare, so I come here to comfort you. Then unknowingly I fell in sleep.” He said and yawns

“T...Thank you” I said to him

“What wrong with me today? Why cannot I act normal in front of him” I thought

End Acchan’s POV

Minami’s POV

While I’m cooking breakfast in the kitchen, Yuu calls me

“Hello, Yuu” I said

“Why did he call me this early?” I thought

(Hey, are you still sleeping Takamina?)

“Nope, but what’s up with this early call.” I said

(I just got some interesting news that I want to share with you) Yuu excitingly said

“What is it?” I ask him

(Today, I go to Tokyo to meet my client. I heard some interesting rumor from them) Yuu said

“I see. What is it?” I ask

(Do you know the president of the biggest company in Japan?)

“The Maeda’s group?”


“His name is Maeda Akio, right?”

(Yes, that’s him)

“What about him?”

(The rumor said that his daughter was missing.)

“His daughter?” I said in curious tone

(Yes, he has a daughter. What is her name again? Ah, I forgot. Let see Maeda That’s it her name is Maeda Atsuko. She went to study at New York 10 years ago since she was 10. Rumor said that she will be a very talented heir.) Yuu said

“Ok, enough of her. So what is the point?” I ask

(Didn’t you hear me say? The rumor said that she was missing at the day she went back to Japan.)

“So...” I said

(Ah… you are too slow. The rumor just started this month. Since you found Acchan in the same time, do you think maybe she is her? Also her name start with letter A) Yuu asks me

“Acchan” I thought

“How can that be?” I said and laugh

(Why?) Yuu asks in curious tone

“I told you a lot of times, ‘don’t believe in those rumor in the street.’ They all are just a lie” I said

(Why that is not true?)

“Think about this, if the daughter of the president of Maeda’s group is really missing, do you think Tokyo will be silent like that? Do you think police will not investigate crazily, and the journalists will not write about this?” I explain

(Uh, you got the point) he said in agree tone

“Uh, she is the heir of the biggest group. Her missing will be a big commotion throughout not only Tokyo but also around Japan.” I reason more

(Uh, I guess so. Ok, just want to talk to you about this. I have an appointment with my clients. I have to take them to see some apartments. Talk to you later) He said

“Ok, bye. Good luck” I said and hangs up the phone 

“Acchan, the heir of Maeda’s group” I look at my phone and thought

At a modern house

Jun part his car and ring the doorbell. A beautiful girl opens the door

“Hello, my name is Matsui Jun, police. Are you Matsui Rena?” Jun introduces himself and asks the girl


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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 4 05/09/15
« Reply #15 on: September 06, 2015, 06:20:55 PM »

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina) Part 4 05/09/15
« Reply #16 on: September 09, 2015, 09:12:30 AM »
Rena was the witness?

Who are getting closer to get Atsuko 1st, the kidnappers or Jun?

Ah.. if only Minami believe Atsuko is Aachan....

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) Part 5 12/09/15
« Reply #17 on: September 12, 2015, 12:34:33 AM »
@AI712, @kazuko, @cisda83: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic  :)

This is part 5  :D

Part 5

“Hello, my name is Matsui Jun, police. Are you Miss Matsui Rena?” Jun said and raises his badge

“Yes, this is me. What can I do for you?” Rena answers

“Can I come in Matsui-san?” Jun asks

“Yes, please” Rena said and steps aside

“I want to ask you some questions” Jun said and takes out the picture

Rena nods

“Three weeks ago, did you come to this airport?” Jun asks

“Yes, I came there to take some pictures for my cousin. She lives abroad, so she wants me to send those pictures for her project.” Rena answers

“Did you send them?” Jun hurriedly asks

“No, not yet, I still have to take some picture from other airports.” Rena answers

“Thank goodness” Jun thought

“Can I see those pictures in this airport?” Jun said

“Ok, ok” Rena hesitantly answers

“Don’t worry; you are not in any trouble. I’m investigating a case. Your pictures might save a person’s life” Jun said and smiles

“Is that so? Wait here I will go get them right away.” Rena said and runs to her room

After a while

Rena comes out with a bag of picture

“Here are all the pictures that I took that time. I still haven’t looked through them yet.” Rena said

“Ok, thank you. Can I bring them back for one day? Tomorrow I will give you back right away” Jun asks

“Ok, I don’t mind” Rena said and smiles

“Thank you Matsui-san.” Jun said and leaves

“Another thing, when you take picture there did you see this girl” Jun asks Rena and shows her his cousin picture

“Uhm….No, I didn’t see her there” Rena said while thinking about that day

“Oh, ok. Thank you for your pictures” Jun said and stands up

“No problem” Rena said

When he is about to leaves,

“Ah, I forgot. Here is my number if you remember anything on that day. Please let me know.” Jun said

“Ok, I will. Here is my business card. If you need to ask anything, I gladly to help you” Rena said

“You are a doctor?” Jun asks

“Yes, I’m. Uhm… don’t I look like one?” Rena sadly asks

“Ah no... Of course not… I did not mean that. Of course you look like one. That job very suits you. I mean...” Jun panicky said

“What am I saying? This is so not cool” Jun thought while scratching his head

Rena laughs

“You are very cute, Matsui-san” Rena said

Jun feels that his face is getting hot

“I…I... have to go now, Bye Matsui-san” Jun said

“Ok, see you later.” Rena said

“By the way, just call me Rena” Rena smiles

“Oh ok, R..Rena. Then just call me Jun.” Jun said and smiles

In the town

At night

Minami and Acchan are walking back to their home after eating with Mario and Mii-chan. Afar from them in the forest, there are three men hide in there

“That is her. Let’s prepare then we will attack them.” a man whispers

"Remember leave out the man" another man said

While Minami and Acchan are walking happily beside each other, those three men jump out and block their way. They are wearing a mask

“Who are you?” Minami said while pulling Acchan behind him

“Get her” They ignore his question and rush to catch Acchan

Minami stands and blocks them.

"Get out. This isn't your problem." a man shouts

"If you want to harm her that is my problem" he said.

Then he rushes to them. Minami jumps up to kick the man in front of him at his face. Then Minami turns and punches the man at his left side at his jaw. The third man takes a staff and hits his back makes Minami fall

“Minami” Acchan calls

“Don’t worry Acchan, I’m fine” Minami stands up and said

The three men rush to him again. Minami dodges their attack. He uses side kick to kick the man who holds the staff at his throat making him fall and unable to stand up.

Then Minami catches the man near him by his collar and throw him in Judo technique. Then he turns to the last man and kicks him at his temple.

The man that he threw stands up. He takes out his knife and rushes to attack Minami. Minami steps back to dodge his attack. The man swings the knife and injures his right arm. Then Minami catches the man’s hand and twist it making him lose his grip on the knife. Then Minami bends his right knee and hits the man’s stomach by his knee.

After finish them, Minami runs to Acchan

“Acchan are you ok? Let get out of here” Minami said

“I’m ok. Minami, you are hurt” Atsuko worriedly looks at Minami’s arm



A sound of gunshot echoes throughout the place.

“Minami” Acchan shouts and hugs Minami

“Acchan, Let’s get out of here” Minami said and hold Acchan’s hand to run.

On the road

“You are an idiot. Why did you shoot? Didn’t boss said that we have to do this silently.” a man shouts

“I’m sorry. I was mad because he hit us, and I want to catch her quickly” another man said

“Anyway, let’s get out of here before someone see us” the last man said

Then they rush into the forest

Minami and Acchan run for awhile. They reach Minami’s house. Minami opens the door and pulls Acchan in. Then he closes the door and sits down at the door

*pant* *pant* *pant*

“A..are…you…ok, Acchan?” Minami said while panting

“I’m fine Minami, what happened, Minami? You sound very weird” Acchan worriedly said

When Acchan turn on the light, she gasps when seeing Minami leans on the door while panting. He holds his stomach tightly. There is a lot of blood all over his stomach and clothes

“Minami, Minami, are you ok?” Acchan calls Minami in tear

“Minami, Minami, Minami” Acchan calls and touches his face which now slowly turns pale

“Acchan...I’m...fine don’t...cry...ok.” Minami weakly said and then faints

“Minami” Acchan shouts in tear


At Jun’s house

Jun is looking through all the pictures.

“This one, this car looks suspicious” Jun thought

Then he continues looking at them

“Those men, why did little cousin walk toward them?” Jun thought

“They walk to that car. Now the only thing I need to find is the picture with the car’s tag on it” Jun smiles and looks through the picture.

“No, none of the pictures here has that car’s tag on it. Man!! I was so close” Jun said and slams the table

Suddenly his phone rings

“Hello, this is Matsui Jun” Jun said

(Hi Jun, this is me Rena) Rena said

“Oh, hi Rena, may I help you with something?” Jun asks

(Sorry Jun. This morning, I gave you those pictures. I thought that is all. However, after I checked once again, there are still some pictures left.) Rena said

“Really?” Jun stands up and said

(Yes, I will put them in a bag for you to take when you come here tomorrow.) Rena said

“No, it is fine. I will come to your place right now to get them. I really need them” Jun said and rushes out of his room

“Master, are you leaving.” a servant said

“Uh,” Jun said and rushes to the garage

“Hello Rena, are you still there?” Jun asks

Jun open Bluetooth in his car and continues his conversation

(Ah, yes) Rena answers

“Can you check for me those pictures? Do you see a black car with a clearly car tag number?” Jun said

(Ok, let me check) Rena said

While they are talking, there are two men sneak into Rena’s through the window.

(Ah, I see that. Yes there are.) Rena happily said

“That is great, thank you Rena. I’m near your house now.” Jun said


Suddenly he hears something broken

(Ahh, who are you?) Rena shouts

“What happened, Rena” Jun asks worriedly

(There are two men suddenly broke my house’s window and jump into my house.) Rena panicky said

(Give me those pictures) Jun hears a man shouts through the phone.

“Rena, run out of the house now. I’m near your house now.” Jun shouts

Jun turns at the street corner and quickly parks his car. He jumps out from his car and rushes to the house

“Rena, Rena, are you ok?” Jun calls in worry

“By now, Jun. However they chase after me” Rena scarily said

“Don’t worry; I’m at your house right now.” Jun said and kicks the door

Jun sees Rena run down from the stair. Behind her is two men are chasing after her

“Jun” Rena calls

“Rena” Jun rushes to her and pulls her behind him

A man raises his knife to stab Rena. Jun raise his hand to block it. Then he kicks the two men at their face make they fall and then roll down from the stair

Jun takes out his gun and point to them

“Don't move, I’m police. You are under arrest" Jun said

“Kneel down and put your hand behind your neck.” Jun continues

Then he takes out his phone and calls for police. After that Jun takes out his handcuffs and arrests them together. Then he walks to Rena

“Rena, are you ok?” Jun asks

“I’m fine”

“Your hand, it is bleeding. Let me treat your wound.” Rena said

“Ok, thank you” Jun said

After a while

The police finally come. After talking to them, Jun turns to Rena.

“Rena, maybe those two are related with those kidnappers. They knew that you are the witness of the case. Therefore this is very dangerous to leave you here alone. I will take you to my home. The security in my house is very high, so you can be safe.” Jun said

“Thank you Jun” Rena said

“Sorry Rena, I knew it is already late, but can you come with me to the police department for a little.” Jun said to Rena

“Ok, Jun. I don’t mind” Rena said and smiles

“You guys take them to the department. I will go there and examine them now.” Jun said and leaves with Rena.


In the forest

“You all are an idiot. Who said that you can shoot? I ordered you only capture the girl” The boss said and kicks the three.

“And the two idiot, how can they let the cops arrest them. Now we have to leave to another place before the cops comes here.”

At police department

Jun sits in the room and examines the two

"Who are you?" Jun asks

"Why did you attack this girl" Jun said and shows them Rena's picture

"..." They still keep silent

"Don't think that staying silent like that can escape your criminal act. I know who you are" Jun said

"You are the one that kidnap Maeda Atsuko, daughter of the president of Maeda's group right?" Jun said and shows Atsuko's picture.

"Don’t think that I will spill any information out. I will never betray my boss" one of the man said, but his voice is shaking

"You know that kidnapping isn't a small crime, right? Plus attacking witness and attempt to kill them is also not a small crime" Jun slowly said while looking directly at the two.

They are shrinking back because of scare.

“If you two cooperate with me, I will tell the court about this. Then they will consider about your punishment" Jun said

“Or you two want to stay in jail and get a heavy punishment instead of that criminal? You two just follow your boss order right? Is that worth to bear his crime on you?” Jun supports his hands on the table and looks closer to their eyes

“Ok, I will confess” a man said

"Good, if you say that sooner, we don't have to go through all that scary things" Jun said and leans back to his seat.

"Our boss ordered us to kidnap her. He said that we only have to stand in the gate of the airport that girl will come to us" he said

"After she come near us, we will threaten her and take her to the car without anyone notice." the other man adds

"How can he be so sure that little cousin will come to them" Jun thought

"So maybe my suspect is true. He is someone she knew"

"Where is she right now?" Jun asks

"We don't know. She took the chance that I was carrying away. She escaped from the old factory, and ran into the forest." the man said

"So, little cousin ran away. Why didn't she come back to the house? What happened to her?" Jun thought

“Where is that old factory? And who is your boss?” Jun asks

“That is all I can say. My boss helped me in the past I will not betray him.” A man said

“How about you?” Jun turns to another one

“Me too. He also helped me a lot. I won’t betray him.” He said

“Good, if you want to bear all his crime then be it” Jun slams the table and leaves the room

On his way

"Who is that boss?"

"Where is little cousin?" Jun thought

“Those two really don’t spill that information out. The only clues left are Rena’s picture.” Jun thought

“I should take her back to my house now. It is already very late.” Jun through

When he opens his office door

“Sorry Rena….” He stops when he sees the girl is already asleep on the sofa

Jun takes out his jacket and put on her. Then he goes to his desk and works. He takes a look through the pictures that Rena gave him

"This is the one" Jun looks at the picture of a black car.

Then he comes out of his room to order his men to look for the car.

In the hospital

In Front of the Emergencies room

“Nyan Nyan, Minami, Minami….” Acchan choked

“Don’t worry Acchan, he will be fine. I’m sure about that” Haruna hugs Acchan and pats her back to comfort her

“Nyan Nyan is correct. He will be fine.” Yuu said

Far away from them, there is someone standing and looks worriedly. Then the person turns to look at the group

"That girl is really annoying" It thought

Back to the operating room

The nurse hurriedly rushes out of the room. Seeing that Acchan rushes to her

“Minami, how is he?” Acchan holds the nurse's arms and asks

“Calm down Miss. Mr. Takahashi lost a lot of blood. However our blood bank is out of his blood type. Do any of you have the same blood type as him?” The nurse said

Yuu looks at the nurse and shakes his head.

“Take mine. I have the same blood type as him” Acchan said

“Ok, follow me.” The nurse said

After awhile the nurse comes back with a blood bag.

“Acchan, are you ok?” Haruna asks and Acchan nods

“How did you know your blood type, Acchan?” Yuu asks

“Minami took me to the hospital before to check on something. I asked him about the blood types. He said to me that I have blood-type A and he has blood-type AB. He also explained for me about blood donation. He said that my blood-type can donate for his. However his blood can only donate for his blood type ” Acchan said

“I see.” Yuu said

“Nyan Nyan, will Minami be ok?” Acchan looks at Haruna and asks

Her eyes are filled with tear again. Haruna looks at her and smiles

“Don’t worry Acchan. After receiving your blood, he will be fine.” Haruna said and pats her head

Then Mii-chan and Mario hurriedly run to Acchan, Haruna, and Yuu.

“What happened, Yuu?” Mario asks

“Minami got shot. He is in the operating room now.” Yuu said


Hope you guys enjoy this  :)

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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) Part 5 12/09/15
« Reply #18 on: September 12, 2015, 02:26:27 AM »
I hope Minami would be fine.
Atsuko donating her own blood.
Atsumina through thick and thin.  :rock:
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Re: Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) Part 5 12/09/15
« Reply #19 on: September 12, 2015, 03:32:00 AM »
I hope Minami will be fine. Those men are so cruel. What did Atsuko's father do to their boss that makes him take revenge on Atsuko?
Will Jun find out the truth? I wish he could find Atsuko to protect her.
Hope to see AtsuMina together! Thanks for the update, Author-san :)
I'm waiting for the next part!!!

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