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Offline whatever109

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Back to Majisuka Prison - Prologue
« on: October 03, 2013, 12:03:17 PM »
i like to try make story about Majisuka Prison. Since english isn't my language, i'm sorry for many error. Thank you  XD

Prologue

It’s not the end…
I’ll get… everyone out… without fail



“We must go to the police station right now!” Nanashi said.
Paru tilted her head and asked, “Do you know where the police station?”
“We could ask people. Let's go!” Peace said.

At the Police Station.

“You guys are wasting my time! There isn't anything in this external! Get out!” The police drove them away.
Outside, someone's watching them through the window, “That clothes...”

Outside Majisuka Prison

“STOP!! Who are you guys? Come here without permission!” A man in uniform holding a rifle shouting at them. There are 6 men in uniform, but only 2 people were guns.
“Ara… Ara… Dogs without knowing their owner.” Someone said as she folded her arms.
“I think they should be taught to recognize who is their owner.” Another woman said.
Another woman jumps in front of them, “With pleasure I will teach… them.” She said while moving toward the men in uniform.

That man shouting again, “Stopp! Don't you he-Urghh!” Without a chance to finish his word, he felt someone pull his rifle and kicked his stomach. It didn't take long for her to beat up 6 people. She still enjoys stepping on their bodies one by one repeatedly until hearing helicopter’s sound. They look upward to make sure…

“She has arrived. Let's go to the rooftop!” Sayanee shouted.
“Hi... Hi...” The woman who standing next to her follow Sayanee.
“Eh! Wait for me!” Macchun pursue them.

At rooftop

A helicopter landed, Sayanee smiled at the two women who was out of the helicopter, “Welcome, Mariko-sama! Welcome to Majisuka Prison.”


So... should i continue? Feel free to command, thank you
  :grin:
« Last Edit: October 10, 2013, 04:50:45 PM by whatever109 »

Offline mitsuhara_itsuko

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Re: Back to Majisuka Prison - Prologue
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2013, 07:49:15 AM »
Interesting ... and I think you should :))
hallo ... ds is ket

Offline Lover of Yabushita Shu

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Re: Back to Majisuka Prison - Prologue
« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2013, 09:28:56 AM »
Now give me your update! m(_ _ )m

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