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Re: 1shotz
« Reply #20 on: December 23, 2010, 09:58:43 PM »
Awww that was so cute!  :heart:
Thank for the two latest TakAcchan fic, though I didn't have time to comment on the first one ^^' But it was great too!
Merry Christmas in advance to you :D And hope you'll post others awesome stories!
Anything else? Uh.... Don't worry about your shyness. it's been a year since I began to post stories on forums and I am still shy anytime I post something XD Ya know, being afraid that nobody will read it or something like this XD
So keep on going and update whenever you want!!! I would like you to update whenever I want though... but it'd be too much XD  :grin:

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« Reply #21 on: December 24, 2010, 09:10:30 AM »
omg I never thought I would reach a second page  :shocked . This is amazing, thank you guys so much  :wub: . Anyways here is another Christmas one shot. I have been sitting on this one for the last three days because I keep writing rather angsty one shots, which you guys probably won't want to see until Christmas is over. I will try to dilute the angsty one shots with some happy one shots when I actually get around to posting them. Thank you guys for my early Christmas present of a second page  :mon innocent: . Here is your early Christmas present, hope you guys enjoy.

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mistletoe

I am going to kill her.

Very.

Very Very.

Slowly.

It will be glorious.

Why am I even thinking this? She doesn’t mean anything to me.

I watch Yuko chatting with some girl, touching the other girl’s hair, smiling, and laughing. All the things Yuko does to me. I squeeze my cellphone, ignoring the way it creaks, protesting against its abuse.

“Haruna-chan?” I turn to the voice, now distracted from my murderous thoughts.

“Yes?” I prompt as I find myself face to face with Atsuko, she looks at me worriedly.

“Are you alright? You look like you are going to kill someone.” I let out a hollow laugh, putting my hands behind my back so I can secretly continue to squeeze the living daylights out of my cellphone.

“Nope, nothing is wrong.” Oh how I want to kill Yuko right now, that no good perverted squirrel.

“Of course nothing is wrong, she is just jealous of that lady that Yuko is flirting with.” Mii-chan suddenly appears causing me and Atsuko to jump.

“Eh, when did you get here?” Mii-chan shrugs off the question.

“That is of no importance. You both are having lady problems.” Both Atsuko and I freeze, fake smiles plastered onto our faces, unable and unwilling to answer.

“Why do you think that?” Atsuko asked evenly her head tilting to the side as she smiles.

“Easy, you are usually always with Takamina, no matter what. If you are over here talking with Haruna for once, you are probably having problems with Takamina, besides just look at what Takamina is doing right now.” Mii-chan pointed over her shoulder, and curiously I looked. Takamina was standing in the corner giggling with some other girl, and gesturing wildly with a grin plastered on her face. Atsuko’s smile becomes just a tad bigger and there is a dangerous quality to it, apparently she is being just a tad jealous of the girl, who Takamina was interacting with. I turned my attention back to a smirking Mii-chan.

“So what? Why would I be having lady problems. I am not even with anyone.”

“Mmhm, really, true you aren’t in a relationship. But you are jealous aren’t you. Don’t deny that you are trying to kill your phone right now.” Mii-Chan smiled broadly as she knew that she was hitting home on all of those points.

“That doesn’t mean anything” I protested, slightly frusterated with the fact that Mii-chan is bothering me about this.

“Well, then this shouldn’t bother you. Look up.” Slowly I tilt my head up and there dangling off the ceiling in all of its dangerous green glory with fire truck red berries, mistletoe.

“So?” Asks Atsuko, her eyes narrowed dangerously.

“So you two are under it.” Mii-chan points out this fact with a smirk. I can practically feel my heart stop. I am dead meat, Takamina is going to murder me.

“No! No way!” I protest loudly, frantically waving my hands in front of me as I back peddle. 

“Aww come on, it’s tradition.” Mii-chan says as she latches onto my arm, pulling me in Atsuko’s direction.

“Noooooooo!” I can feel little drops of sweat beading across my forehead, as I imagine how Takamina is going to kill me, not to mention how many people are staring at this spectacle right now. I shut my eyes tightly; I really don’t want to die.

Then there is a loud frustrated exhale, and suddenly I find myself yanked down by my shirt collar, a soft pressure against my lips, no fireworks, no confusing feelings, no butterflies, just a pressure against my lips. As suddenly as it started, it is suddenly over, leaving me reeling slightly staring in shock at Atsuko, who wipes her mouth daintily with a handkerchief, completely blasé about the kiss. She regards me with a raised eyebrow before she turns to stare in Takamina’s direction.

My shocked stupor is broken by someone ramming into me, blubbering, arms clammed around my waist, and head pressed to my stomach. I can only make out the words, “noooo” and “evil kiss stealer”, as she bubbers loudly into my stomach, wetting my shirt with crocodile tears. I pat the squirrel’s head, slightly uncomfortable with the whole situation and I glance up at Atsuko to see how she is faring with Takamina.

Instead of having a loud conversation or argument, they are just staring at each other, reading each other’s minds. As expected of the ace and the captain. They have such strong chemistry together. Hopefully Atsuko is mind talking Takamina out of skinning me.

I turn my attention back to the squirrel, who has quieted down to only soft grumbles of jealousy, pouts, and watery eyes. I feel like something is fluttering around in my stomach as her arms clutch me tighter, a sense of peace washes over me, and I can feel the corners of my mouth turn up into a smile as I unconsciously switch from pats to caressing her hair.

Yuko perks up a bit, sensing some sort of shift in the air around us, her childishness disappears, and a tender loving expression graces her features. Her grip around my waist loosens as she stands up, and then tightens pressing me closer to her body. Her head fits in comfortably under my chin, and my arms naturally loop around her shoulders to hug her close, head nuzzled into her hair.

So safe, so comfortable, I feel like I don’t know where I else I would rather be. I feel like I belong in her arms. Why? This is confusing. I don’t know why and I don’t know what to do.

Just then her grip on me loosens, and she moves backwards, eyes finding mine. A hand creeps up to cup my cheek, and she runs her thumb soothingly along my cheek. I can feel my face flush at her attention, and a smile spreads across her face. She stretches up, and I can’t find it in myself to try to escape or even protest.

“Love you, Merry Christmas” Then her lips are pressed to mine. Heat seems to spread throughout my body, fireworks, butterflies, the whole nine yards. My hand unconsciously moves to tangle in her hair and prolong the kiss.

Maybe, just maybe I will give whatever this is a chance. Whatever feelings I have for her confuse me so much, but it is something special that I don’t think I want to give up, ever.

‘Merry Christmas, Yuko’
SAC

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Re: 1shotz
« Reply #22 on: December 24, 2010, 04:05:38 PM »
Aww that was so cute  :heart: LOL the "DONT.WANT" kiss  :rofl: Jealousy fic is always funny to read XD
Thank for the update and hope you'll post another one for Christmas ^^

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« Reply #23 on: December 25, 2010, 08:15:54 AM »
man you just blew me away with this one shot! :)

THAT WAS SOO SWEET! Yuko acting like a child was so cute

woah i like takaachan's connectionn there so strong that no words are needed

I will be waiting for your next update!

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« Reply #24 on: December 27, 2010, 05:14:16 AM »
OMIGAWSH!!!!!!  :mon mad: You made one of my Christmas wish come true!!!  :mon fire: I'm soo happy that you've created another cool fic   :mon roll: :mon XD: You make me love you more!!!  :mon love:
Omigawh!!! Thanks soo much for the fic, Rankuro-san!!! PLS. continue!!  :mon lovelaff: :nya:
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Re: 1shotz
« Reply #25 on: December 28, 2010, 04:16:15 PM »
^LOL,you crack me up with your _"OMIGAWSH",LOL :rofl:

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« Reply #26 on: February 05, 2011, 04:42:08 PM »
I'm definitely enjoying reading your fics here  :yep:
It's good and bring a smile to my face because mostly it's just simple and short, yet sweet at the same time.
Good job author-san, keep on writing!  :twothumbs


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« Reply #27 on: February 11, 2011, 07:53:01 AM »
Hey I'm back!  :mon hi: . Dying from school work T-T, and lack of inspiration. So far I have about 8 unfinished one shots saved into my computer  :mon ghost: . At least I finished one, before valentines day. If you guys are lucky there will be another soon on its way (only if I survive studying for my french and calc exam  :mon scare: these monkeys are so cute ). Hope you enjoy this little random piece.


Kiss

Kisses are like candy,

Some are sweet,

Some are sour,

Some are gross,

Some are not noteworthy,

And some,

Some are just plain addictive.

Sugary and tantalizing,

Would be the two words to describe our first kiss.

The first time her plush lips had touched mine,


So tentative,

So gentle,

So charming,

Would be the words to describe her,

The way she had trembled in my arms, hands clutching the back of my shirt.

Our bodies molding together,

Breathing in sync,

Hearts soaring together,


Lips cherishing the taste of each other,

So sweet,

So utterly addictive,

She is like cake.

So filling to my sweet tooth.


Yet ,

no matter how much I eat,

The more I want,

And

The more I crave,

My addiction of her began,

With only,

A Kiss.


SAC

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Re: 1shotz
« Reply #28 on: February 11, 2011, 08:24:56 AM »
Thanks for updating this one shot!

I totally get it school can be a huge pain :smhid

It was really nice and sweet! (i was totally thinking about Takaachan reading this :P)

I hope you get to finishing those one shots and good luck with exams!  :)

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« Reply #29 on: February 11, 2011, 09:56:03 AM »
I am glad you guys aren't bored with my one shots yet. I was getting worried that I was beginning to write everything the same. Anyways you guys are lucky cause here is another one shot. Somehow managed to be inspired enough to finish this one. Enjoy.



Valentine’s Day Secret

Slender fingers traced the smooth curve of a shoulder, tugged playfully at the strap of a tank top and then continued along to trace the skin of an elegant neck. Fingers paused, to cherish the steady beat of blood pumping through veins. A smile touched the girl’s face as she stared down at her girlfriend.

“Stop that, Acchan. You are making me nervous.” The girl’s smile widened.

“mhmmmm.” She voiced as she continued to stare down lovingly, taking in every detail of her lover. Gleefully she watched as a blush spread across the other girl’s face. The other girl’s hand reached up to pull at her hand.

“Oi, stop staring” A giggle escaped the taller girl’s lips, before she ducked down to press a tender kiss against Takamina’s neck, trying to imprint the steady rhythm in her memory. A moan escaped the other girl’s lips along with stuttered halfhearted protests. A smile cutely curled Atsuko’s lips as she raised her head up, her hand moving to cradle the shorter girl’s face, reverently brushing aside tendrils of hair from Takamina’s face. Then she swooped in to drop a kiss on pouting lips, relishing in the softness of them, and the sweet taste.

“Love you.” She smiled at her girlfriend before sliding down a bit on the bed, so that she could comfortably fit her head under the other girl’s chin, loving the feeling of her body on top of her girlfriend’s. Takamina reached up a hand to playfully twirl around strands of hair. Atsuko let out a deep sigh, as she enjoyed the relaxed atmosphere, her eyes slid closed. Takamina’s eyes became heavier and heavier.

A few minutes passed before Atsuko’s eyes popped open, and a mischievous smile curled across her lips. She slide to her right off of Takamina, to lay on her side on the bed.

Takamina let out a sleepy grumble, at having the comfortable warmth of her “blanket” disappear.

Atsuko was very much awake and on a mission. Determinedly she tugged Takamina’s tank top higher, to reveal the other girl’s fit stomach. Takamina was in such a sleepy daze that she didn’t protest the action.

“Takamina?”

“Mmmmmmmmm”

“So what are you doing on valentine’s day for me?”

“Huhhhhh” Takamina blinked her eyes owlishly, trying to escape her desire to sleep.

“Valentine’s day! What are you doing for me.”

“Val…… valen……valentine’s day… oh!” Finally the girl managed to process what her girlfriend was asking. “oh”

“Oh? That is it? You forgot didn’t you.” Atsuko narrowed her eyes at the other girl accusingly. Frantically the other girl waved her hands about, Takamina was now very much awake.

“Nononononono, I didn’t .” The actress visibly brightened at those words.

“So you have something planned for me?” The actress chirped.

“uh maybe.”

“aww tell meeeeeeee” She whined, her hand moved to tantalizingly caress the other girl’s exposed stomach. Her efforts were met by a sharp inhale, and Takamina’s even wider eyes.

“Gaaaaah! Acchan! Don-mhmmmm” Atsuko ducked in to press a hard kiss, stopping Takamina’s shouts, and the cunning actress again draped herself over her girlfriend so that she couldn’t escape.  Gleefully the actress caressed the exposed skin, relishing in the soft skin. Before she had meant to tickle Takamina, but once she touched the smooth skin, she found her pure mischievous thoughts flying out the window for favor of more intimate ones.

Her delicate hand slid down. Lower and lower until it met the waist band of Takamina’s shorts. Without hesitation it slipped under the waist band, and was about slip under the last barrier when Takamina finally managed to get herself coordinated. Her small hand gripped the wrist of the actress stopping her from going farther. With great reluctance she pushed the other girl back, breaking the kiss. Her breathing ragged.

“I’m not ready.” Takamina frowned.

The actress stared down at the other girl, breathing heavily as she tried to get her hormones under control, she couldn’t believe that she had just acted like a horny teenage boy. She hadn’t meant for that to happen. Carefully she extracted her hand from the other girl’s shorts. Takamina let go of the actress’s wrist. Atsuko rolled off the other girl, and curled up in a ball, hiding from the other girl, her eyes watering. What had she done?

“I’m sorry.” Worriedly Takamina sat up so she could stare down at curled up girl. She scooted over to place a comforting hand on the other girl’s shoulder, but the other girl curled up tighter into a ball sobbing. Takamina could feel her heart squeeze in agony at seeing her loved one so distressed. Carefully the high ponytailed girl moved until she was spooning the other girl, and enfolding her in her embrace.

“It’s alright. You didn’t do anything wrong.” She whispered comfortingly into Atsuko’s hair, and was relieved when Atsuko stopped sobbing so hard, and relaxed a bit.

“rr really?” Atsuko asked, her voice shaking.

“Yes. It is fine. I-I just am not ready. It isn’t your fault. It is mine.” Takamina  buried her head into Atsuko’s back, slightly ashamed. Atsuko rolled over so that she could wrap her arms around Takamina.

“It isn’t your fault either.” Atsuko let Takamina snuggle into her embrace. They lay there for a few minutes enjoying the peace again, and the comfort of each other.

Then Atsuko broke the silence, “ Actually wait it is your fault. You are just too sexy.”.

“Huh!” Takamina pushed out of the embrace, her face turning red.

“Your skin is just so soft, you make these cute noises, and your b-“ Atsuko elaborated, but was stopped by Takamina’s hand covering her mouth.

Takamina looked horrified, her face beet red, “You have been around Yuko too much.”

Atsuko pulled Takamina’s hand away from her mouth, “No it is just the truth. You are just so hot I can’t wait to eat you up.” Atsuko grinned. Takamina gapped at her.

“Why do they call me the man in this relationship? Clearly you are the one cause you are so perverted” Atsuko pouted.

“Awwww not true, I am so innocent.” Atsuko blinked her eyes innocently.

“uh huh, right.” Takamina deadpanned. Takamina then moved closer to kiss Atsuko gently.

“Well I still love you even if you are a pervert.” The actress blushed cutely, and snuggled into Takamina.

“Oh Atsuko”

“Yes?”

“About , what we are doing on Valentine’s Day”

“Yes?” Atsuko asked excitedly.

“It is a secret.”

“You are horrible.”
SAC

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« Reply #30 on: February 11, 2011, 10:05:58 AM »
YAY!!! UPDATED!!!! And it's about Valentine.  :cow: :cow: I'm asking for a sequel, or part 2, for VALENTINE! YAY!! Please continue your writing, I love it. I love Atsumina  XD  XD

Thank you so much for this cutely update.  :bow:  :bow:

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« Reply #31 on: February 11, 2011, 05:01:21 PM »
wowow thanks for updating anotherrrr so soon!! :D

AWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO CUTE with a slight mix of perverted  :lol:

lol Aachan can barely control herself around Takamina but that's no surprise  :P

I wonder what's Takamina's valentine secret she has in store for Aachan?

Thanks again finishing another one so quick!! :twothumbs


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« Reply #32 on: February 11, 2011, 07:05:43 PM »
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“Why do they call me the man in this relationship? Clearly you are the one cause you are so perverted” Atsuko pouted.
:lol:
Somehow it's good to see Takamina teased Acchan with her "it's a secret"  XD  but I do hope she's planning something good.
Another good updates. Your 1-shots aren't boring, especially the Takacchan ones  :D
You know, the way you wrote your 1-shots, kinda makes me wish you would do a multi chaptered fics with Takacchan as the main along with other side couples


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« Reply #33 on: February 11, 2011, 08:21:12 PM »
“It is a secret.”

“You are horrible.”

Not horrible, CRUEL  :smhid
No seriously thank for the sweet update  :wub: I was scared you had stopped writing O_O Anyway, it was really cute  :oops: Poor Acchan, thinking she did something bad XD

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« Reply #34 on: February 13, 2011, 06:43:13 AM »
So that one shot I wrote and posted for valentine's, I guess it is going to be more of a three shot or more  :huhuh . Here is part two for you guys. Just some random thoughts from Takamina. I definately won't be able to make the next update in time for valentine's day so sorry T-T . It is going to take me a while to come up with something very cute and original for their valentine's day so wait for me k  :) hopefully I will be able to come up with something. Glad you guys liked the first part of this fic.


Valentine’s Day Secret (part 2)- Thoughts

“Takamina! Are you sure you are a woman?”

I know that everyone says it as a joke, but every time it hurts. I am definitely a woman, DEFINITELY!  I am not a man.

Yet,

Sometimes I wish I was.

When I kiss her,

When I hug her,

When we go out on dates and share cake together.

How I wish I was a man, for her.

But we would never have met.

I wouldn’t have been in AKB48,

But if I was a man,

We could be just like any other couple.

We could kiss in public.

We could have elaborate dates in public.

We could get married.

We could have kids.

We could grow old together in the same house without people whispering about our forbidden love.

It would be just us and our love.

I don’t know what she sees in me.

I love her so much.

But what can I give her?

We can’t get married.

We can’t kiss in public.

We can’t have kids together.

All I can give is my love and my endless devotion to her.

Why?

Why couldn’t I be Kai for her?

What if she falls in love with a real guy?

She would leave me wouldn’t she?

He can give her so much, and I can give only so little.

She loves me says, and I love her too.

Yet will her love for me continue?

Love and fear,

Each day is full of both.

Love for the way she is herself, her entire beautiful self.

Fear that at any moment the string connecting our hearts can be cut.

Each day is a risk.

Instead of hiding, I chase after her and continue loving her.

Atsuko,

As much as I hate the thought, I would be a man for you.

I hope you continue to keep loving me until we leave this planet together.

But if you don’t, I guess it will be alright.

It would kill me,

But as long as you are happy!

Anything for you as long as it makes you happy.

…….

So yesterday, I told her that I have something planned for Valentine’s day. It wasn’t a lie because I do. I just haven’t put it into a physical form.

Uhhhhh oh.

Help?
SAC

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Re: 1shotz
« Reply #35 on: February 13, 2011, 09:17:34 AM »
I understand Takamina's worry, it sucks really.
I hope Acchan can reassure her that she won't go anywhere, that her love is only for Takamina no matter what her gender is.
Takamina, save up your money and get married in a country where gay marriage is allowed!  XD
And take your time for the valentine day's fic, good luck!  :)


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« Reply #36 on: February 26, 2011, 08:49:50 AM »
Hey guys! Hope you guys are still alive. Sorry I haven't been able to write lately I have been really sick, school is murdering me right now, and I haven't been able to sleep lately. But anyways I will try to write the last piece of this three shot sometime, I really don't know when, but I will write it.

Anyways on the line of the next part of the Valentine three shot do you guys want it to be more realistic or have something cracktacular happen (I have an absolutely amazing cracktacular idea for this if you guys want it). So just tell me what you guys want k. Cya latter, and stay alive  :).
SAC

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« Reply #37 on: February 26, 2011, 04:21:08 PM »
I want you to write the one that's more comfortable/fun for you coz I believe the outcome would be better that way. Or I'll just follow the majority of what people choose. Either way I don't mind :yep:
You stay alive rankuro and get well soon!


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« Reply #38 on: May 05, 2011, 11:30:19 AM »
well done... your fanfic is nice... :on GJ:

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get well soon...  :on woohoo: and post more fanfic......

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« Reply #39 on: May 22, 2011, 07:53:00 AM »
Hi I am so sorry. I have been trying to write something but haven't been able to. All I can offer you are poems that I recently wrote for my gf but I am too shy to give them to her (actually this is a sad peom soo yeah). My inspiration to actually write chapters is really low right now, and I really don't want to leave you guys hanging, but I really can't find it in myself to write the last part to that one shot. Sorry, it is because I suddenly found myself in a relationship, and cause of summer vacation I won't be seeing my girlfriend for three months and it is driving me nuts. But uh yeah all my uh romantic and cheesy energy is getting sucked into that. oops yeah hopefully this will appease you guys.


Thank you and Goodbye

Every second,

Every minute,

Every hour,

Every day,

Every moment with you is a wonderful moment.

A comforting moment like no other,

All moments

I wish could last forever and ever.

But they won’t,

It all comes to an end eventually.

Then it will all disappear like fragments of a dream,

Moment by moment.

They will play in my memory.

Backwards,

Forwards,

Skipping around.

Beginning,

Middle,

End.

Even the pain of the loss of your warmth, your beautiful spirit, and your wonderful personality in my life.

For you to be just a friend again.

But it will be worth every second I spent with you as something more.

Not a moment of regret,

it was all worth it.

As long as you are happy, that is all that matters.

Time will ease it all,

Sliver by sliver.

I will disappear.

Squashing feelings for you to let you free.

You don’t need a stalking,

You don’t need a piner.

You have all those already.

You have already so many you could have.

There are so many more brilliant and someone who is by far a better match for you.

Someone will come along one day and capture you completely.

You are so amazing that anyone would fall for you.

Thank you for allowing me to be with you.

Now I will let go when you want me to let you go.

Even though the emotions will physically disappear,

I will still care.

My heart will still whisper your name until it stops.

Every memory of you treasured until the end.

Thank you
And
Goodbye
SAC

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