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Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: the beginning of Darkness
Post by: hackata48 on July 27, 2015, 08:37:42 AM
Greetings to you loyal retainers of the House of Eadwulf.

As I decree as your king are the writing of the Adventures of my son, Sakura Miyawaki of Kagoshima, Wulfgar 'the Tower' Bjornsson, Osgar Daguth and Ulrich 'Young Wolf' Langobard and all of there friends.

May you enjoy and be inspired by this epic story.

-From High King Gewis Eadwulf of Gimael.


 :welcome


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/1
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (OC's X Sakura, Paruru, Takamina and Fighting)
Post by: Centernezumi on July 27, 2015, 02:06:33 PM
Hi author san!!
The fic is good and i wish you could post it here in jphip...
also, can you pm me your Asianfanfics username?
Also,Hello new member!!:jphip:,
Centernezumi (ianalvarez)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (OC's X Sakura, Paruru, Takamina and Fighting)
Post by: hackata48 on July 27, 2015, 05:19:11 PM
My Asian Fanfic name is the same as my Jphp and Instagram and Steam (Hack-ata-48)
I'm not really comfortable with the controls of JpHp when I write my stories. I'm actually writing the next chapter right now and should be done within the week. I will post link to new chapter when its ready. And call me Hack or Rain
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph)
Post by: hackata48 on July 29, 2015, 01:21:57 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/6/ NEW CHAPTER UP! HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: noel nguyen on July 29, 2015, 02:17:52 PM
Who is main couples in your fic ?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on July 29, 2015, 04:04:38 PM
Rainoric (OC) x Sakura Miyawaki (friendship to romance) I'm also pairing my other OC's also have a friendship pairing with the AKB girls in the story plus Paruru's little brother
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on July 29, 2015, 04:45:06 PM
Are you gonna add anymore AKB members into it? Oh and I was the one who commented :)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on July 29, 2015, 06:07:52 PM
not really, my Creative writing teacher says I could confuse my readers if I introduce to much characters. But I will reference other members as I write the story. And I'm gonna have to do some editing. I have noticed some errors in my story that needs to be changed
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: kuro808 on July 30, 2015, 04:34:16 AM
^ Definitely editing is good

I do have some suggestions...

First off, chapters I find so far have too many POV's overall, they should be split (I was caught by that many times and was further corrected because readers are confused easily most of the time with POV changes)

Secondly, I'm against an OC in fan fiction.  It gives off a weird vibe because the interaction between two worlds isn't the type of reading and from the first chapter, it already starts from the OC POV.  It's either create an OC in its own universe or the OC is a being in the idol's world.  (My preference)

Get a proofreader is definite in your case just for confirmation.

Overall the writing is okay.  However, chapter setup is messy to comprehend the attention of everyone. :)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on July 30, 2015, 08:44:01 AM
So when you mean "split it" you mean just have 2 POV's that switch occasionally?
I think I can get a friend in school to profread for me. TY
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: kuro808 on July 30, 2015, 04:47:08 PM
Switch every other chapter per se

Switching within a chapter is torture for readers like me trying to figure out everything.  Developing a story has to be a story within itself.  Each chapter even in little details has to reveal something to the reader.  You can't give too much or not give them anything at all :nervous

Honestly, as a reader I would have not read it passed the first paragraph because of the instant theme and the fact that it didn't start off with the fandom itself :thumbdown:

I hope you don't feel discouraged by my words but the best thing is to consider what's the best path overall
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on July 31, 2015, 02:10:22 AM
My teacher says i need to eat criticism whether you like it or not.
Im writing this story to tune up my creative writing which I have classes on.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: kuro808 on July 31, 2015, 02:32:11 AM
My teacher says i need to eat criticism whether you like it or not.
Im writing this story to tune up my creative writing which I have classes on.


That's the thing to get yourself going :hip smile:

The worst thing is really none at all because it doesn't say anything what's really the issue at hand :nervous

Right now because from my POV you are only at the surface and the best thing is to read others to see how they write and see how they display their works.

Suggested authors (if interested)

kevinwkl
katekyohit
Yuki88
lezperv
Seigus
LoyalFlutist

These authors are the better ones with updated stories (within so many months on here)

sakura_drop has her own site which you can drop by mainly through http://akblasphemy48.com/

I think many things you have heard through your teacher about writing in general but fan fiction is a different monster and the best way is to get yourself accustomed and the work from there :)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on August 03, 2015, 01:17:37 PM
I have an extremely dumb but somehow briliant idea for a character in my story but I want to ask you guys, would you like to see a 'Living' Hachiko the dog Statue?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on August 03, 2015, 01:24:19 PM
I don't mind, as long as you can develop that character through the chapter/story.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: Cometerz48 on August 03, 2015, 05:41:17 PM
Hello, this is my first time commenting this fic. I've been watching though  :hip smile:

To me personally the theme of the story is alright. I don't mind OC as long as you can collaborate it well with the 48G members that you have in mind (you know.. Since you're posting in an AKB Fanfiction thread). As Kurosawa said, the POV switches kinda confuse me as a reader. Especially with the small details on the main chara which I understand it is an OC and starts the story with his own POV.

My hopes for further developement of this story are maybe for you to give us readers the image of what the main character actually like mentally. Is he totally barbaric? Does he kill so easily like his friends? How does he feel when he kills? Does he honestly have feelings or he's just the same as everybody as to do things in the name of glory? What makes this main character differ from others of his kind?

Secondly, as I said before I hope that you would start bringing up the correlation between the main chara and the member you have in mind. Because personally the first two chapters was rather dull as to there is no interactions yet between the two, I guess I'm a kind of impatient readers. :oops:

Crazy idea is normal as long as again, it can go with the theme and the fact that you are posting in a certain idol group fanfiction thread.

Cheers, I hope you keep developing this story and posts well~ as I also need too.

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on August 03, 2015, 05:54:45 PM
Thanks for the words, i will keep that in mind as I write the story. I may start planning out some action scenes. And maybe Sakura can get some use of that action movie training put into practice.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: kuro808 on August 03, 2015, 08:30:41 PM
Character wise you can add whoever, it doesn't matter too much unless it is relevant to the story :nervous
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Glorious Triumph
Post by: hackata48 on August 07, 2015, 04:47:12 PM
No Update for this week, since im gonna be attending an Anime Convention this weekend. But my next chapter (Sakura in Gimael) is almost done. and I took heed of your advice of adding some scenes involving some acts of barbarism and a very dramatic Sakura-Rainoric interaction.

BTW follow my instagram https://instagram.com/hackata48/ and check out my Paruru MLG meme. And a photo of me at NMB48 theater.(which you have to scroll abit to see)
TY for your support so far in my little project.

 8)
*smashes francisca to the table*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: hackata48 on August 11, 2015, 09:36:40 AM
New chapter up!
It took me up awhile to think up some scenes of Rainoric being a typical Barbarian. So Dont be surprised of any trauma he may inflict in this chapter and the next.
Plus a very tense Sakura- Rainoric interaction is added to (Not familiar with writing a dramatic scene so please send feedback

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/7/the-barbarian-s-cherry-blossom-crossover-fantasy-friendship-romance-scifi-akb48-miyawakisakuraPS
Thanks for the Support Ultimate Locksmith.

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on August 11, 2015, 03:23:26 PM
New chapter up!
It took me up awhile to think up some scenes of Rainoric being a typical Barbarian. So Dont be surprised of any trauma he may inflict in this chapter and the next.
Plus a very tense Sakura- Rainoric interaction is added to (Not familiar with writing a dramatic scene so please tell me if its good)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/chapter/edit_chapter/978407/7

PS
Thanks for the Support Ultimate Locksmith.

No problem ^_^
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: hackata48 on August 14, 2015, 03:33:23 PM
Ok ladies and gents. Since I already uploaded a new chapter I want to get feedback and see if what I wrote is good. Any if there is any place I can polish in my writing skills. And how's my writing so far and the pacing of the story is going?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: Cometerz48 on August 14, 2015, 05:51:26 PM
You know what..?

I really start liking this chapter.  :twothumbs


I mean, alright.. It doesn't have any of my faves in the story and an OOC as one of the main characters, but I guess how you put Sakura and the others into the situations and the story backgrounds of another world is good, much different than the ones you put before. Maybe because this time you get Sakura to be involved more in the story than in the other chapters before, whatever it is I like it.

hwoah... I guess these barbarians will have to learn a bit of kindness and humanity from our earthlings.... :v



be waitin' for the next chapter!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: hackata48 on August 14, 2015, 06:56:02 PM
Ok, get the akb48 more interactions with the Gimaelics. Then watch clips of bar fights (for another chapter *wink*) then develop Hayato more.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: hackata48 on August 16, 2015, 05:00:11 PM
Next time in the Barbarian's Cherry Blossom, The Gedriht will hunt a wild beast. Sakura will save Rainoric's life, we get to know more about a very flamboyant head-hunter and a Barfight!!!!

(Currently now starting to work on the new Chapter boys and girls.)

And I could use some more suggestions, kind words and etc.
(TY btw Cometerz48 Stay awesome)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: hackata48 on August 21, 2015, 07:22:44 PM
As I read Cometerz48 comment, it got me thinking.... I think i will add another AKB (or Nogizaka) character in the story, just want to hear from your suggestions, give me a name and a reason why.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap:How to NOT hunt a Geldrius)
Post by: hackata48 on August 26, 2015, 03:55:47 PM
A NEW CHAPTER IS UP!!!
With:
Monster Hunting
Culture Shock
A Psychopathic Jewelsmith
An aspiring Hayato
A Good Old Fashion Bar Fight
An Eye Popping Game of Thrones Reference
An Ironic Fighting Ballad
and my first take on a cliffhanger (hope you like my first cliff hanger ending)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/8

PLS Like, comment and subscribe!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap:How to NOT hunt a Geldrius)
Post by: hackata48 on August 28, 2015, 06:40:23 PM
New Poll is up! PLS vote, this survey will help me develop my story further
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap:How to NOT hunt a Geldrius) +Poll
Post by: hackata48 on September 03, 2015, 04:05:17 PM
With a surprising score of 1 each, Rainoric and Leofric are tied as my stories most interesting OC's now next poll!!! Which AKB character should I add in my story next?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap: Sakura in Gimael)
Post by: hackata48 on September 03, 2015, 04:11:38 PM
You know what..?

I really start liking this chapter.  :twothumbs


I mean, alright.. It doesn't have any of my faves in the story and an OOC as one of the main characters, but I guess how you put Sakura and the others into the situations and the story backgrounds of another world is good, much different than the ones you put before. Maybe because this time you get Sakura to be involved more in the story than in the other chapters before, whatever it is I like it.

hwoah... I guess these barbarians will have to learn a bit of kindness and humanity from our earthlings.... :v



be waitin' for the next chapter!

So how's my chapter How to NOT hunt a Geldrius btw everyone? Currently struggling to find time to finish next half of my next chapter
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap:How to NOT hunt a Geldrius) +Poll
Post by: hackata48 on September 06, 2015, 09:38:37 AM
With half of the score in her tally.
Miyuki Watanabe wins the Survey. Now I have to figure out how to ibtegrate a 'sweetheart' girl into a planet where everyone wants to kill everyone
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap:How to NOT hunt a Geldrius) +Poll
Post by: Cometerz48 on September 06, 2015, 11:00:29 AM
Well, I haven't give fedbacks yet on the last chapter. So I guess I'll do so now  :nervous

Oh geez... I guess these barbarians have a sense of fashion with those hanging heads on waist. Poor those who lost their heads   :shocked :shocked
With Sakura and Paru explaining about the Cherry Blossom and it's correlation with Sakura's name, I was hoping for a hint of romance going there but... well I'll wait I guess.

Holy dudes, the girls got caught in the bar fight? Sakura and Hayato are still underage and yet they're in one.. and somehow Sakura's singing works like an energy boost for the gang  :shocked :shocked

PARUUU!!! Too exhausted probably but I hope she's fine...

Thanks for the update. Have you seen my PM yet? I think I sent it around a two weeks ago, might wanna check it, boy.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (New Chap:How to NOT hunt a Geldrius) +Poll
Post by: hackata48 on September 11, 2015, 07:09:22 PM
Good News guys! Im going to add 2 or 3 AKB members into the story! Still decising who thou.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: Hayato the Anstrutrione)
Post by: hackata48 on September 14, 2015, 12:34:12 PM
NEXT Chapter UP!
Hayato becomes a Winged Hussar who literally rides Shotgun!
Another Fight started by the Gimaelics
(Paruru is OK (Thank God))
We learn more of Rainoric's Motivations and Future
Sakura receives a Vision of the future
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/9
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: Hayato the Anstrutrione)
Post by: hackata48 on September 14, 2015, 05:09:22 PM
Im also working on writing a Diary that Sakura would write on of her adventures in Auriga.
I also have big plans for plot motivators for both Rainoric and Sakura.
But dont worry, the other AKB girls will also have their own stories to tell.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: Sakura's Journal #1)
Post by: hackata48 on September 25, 2015, 05:11:34 AM
Bonus Chapter that I made! The Next chapter is already in development mind you!
BTW mates, On October 12 I will go to Europe for a vacation so dont expect any updates other than the next chapter to appear.
Check out my instagram and see the pics I will take in Europe so I wont feel lonely.

The Bonus Chapter:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/10

Sakura writes a diary of her Travels (Since she is a good writer)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: Sakura's Journal #1)
Post by: hackata48 on September 26, 2015, 04:55:12 AM
To the man or woman who gave me a 5 on the poll

You just made my day  :hip smile:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)
Post by: hackata48 on October 02, 2015, 06:16:40 PM
New Chapter up fellow companions.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/11


A forest
Sakura gets Coma'd
We learn some history of the Gimaelics (I referenced the Franks)
Gizzur tries Ventriliquism
Paruru gets a beard
Rainoric being a Badass again
An AKB48 girl with a Machine Crossbow

And walking in the city and say 'What up I killed a Dragon from the inside. Look at the heart I got from it'.
And some Humor (That I need to ask if its good?)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 02, 2015, 06:49:29 PM
Well.... XD I got what I wanted XDo
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 07, 2015, 06:35:47 PM
Updates will slow down a bit while im in Europe. Will try to update while im there

Plud I dreamt tht Gekirara challenged Rainoric to a fist fight


And it was not civilized...
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 11, 2015, 06:31:49 PM
Today I will go to Europe, I will try now to write as much as I can while there since my sister brought her Laptop and she let me use it.


(Still brainstorming over my latest chapter Vanoran)

Remember to follow me on my Adventures in Europe in my instagram.


(BTW Is there a Forum for AKB Treasrue cards???)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 11, 2015, 07:16:15 PM
I cannot answer to this poll, cuz honestly, in my eyes, there is no force in the universe that can defeat the greatness that is Gekikara. X3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 11, 2015, 07:19:08 PM
I cannot answer to this poll, cuz honestly, in my eyes, there is no force in the universe that can defeat the greatness that is Gekikara. X3


Ok then.... Im allow Illegal weapons into the fight.
Rainoric sheathes the 'Exalted Blade'
Wulfgar takes some uranium (Steroids for Broken Lords)
Ulrich can go Berserk
And Gizzur shall descend into hysteria.

Your Move Spice Girl
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 11, 2015, 07:38:30 PM
Then Takayanagi-sama comes in with the final (pretty epic) crossbow shot.

sent from xbox.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 11, 2015, 10:17:13 PM
I cannot answer to this poll, cuz honestly, in my eyes, there is no force in the universe that can defeat the greatness that is Gekikara. X3


Ok then.... Im allow Illegal weapons into the fight.
Rainoric sheathes the 'Exalted Blade'
Wulfgar takes some uranium (Steroids for Broken Lords)
Ulrich can go Berserk
And Gizzur shall descend into hysteria.

Your Move Spice Girl

Do you really think illegal weapons, radioactive matter, and insanity are enough to beat Gekikara? Do you REALLY?

Gekikara is seriously powerful. She will not let death get in her way of anything! I've seen Geki beat death! XD

Plus, who knows what power lies in her. It's like an eternal flame! X3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 12, 2015, 04:22:59 AM
I cannot answer to this poll, cuz honestly, in my eyes, there is no force in the universe that can defeat the greatness that is Gekikara. X3


Ok then.... Im allow Illegal weapons into the fight.
Rainoric sheathes the 'Exalted Blade'
Wulfgar takes some uranium (Steroids for Broken Lords)
Ulrich can go Berserk
And Gizzur shall descend into hysteria.

Your Move Spice Girl

Do you really think illegal weapons, radioactive matter, and insanity are enough to beat Gekikara? Do you REALLY?

Gekikara is seriously powerful. She will not let death get in her way of anything! I've seen Geki beat death! XD

Plus, who knows what power lies in her. It's like an eternal flame! X3

Fotios! Cook Spice girl and make her skin crackle like chicken!
http://www.destructoid.com/ul/user/2/215566-291445-endlesslegendguardians1024x523png-620x.jpg
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 04:24:24 AM
I cannot answer to this poll, cuz honestly, in my eyes, there is no force in the universe that can defeat the greatness that is Gekikara. X3


Ok then.... Im allow Illegal weapons into the fight.
Rainoric sheathes the 'Exalted Blade'
Wulfgar takes some uranium (Steroids for Broken Lords)
Ulrich can go Berserk
And Gizzur shall descend into hysteria.

Your Move Spice Girl

Do you really think illegal weapons, radioactive matter, and insanity are enough to beat Gekikara? Do you REALLY?

Gekikara is seriously powerful. She will not let death get in her way of anything! I've seen Geki beat death! XD

Plus, who knows what power lies in her. It's like an eternal flame! X3

Fotios! Cook Spice girl and make her skin crackle like chicken!
http://www.destructoid.com/ul/user/2/215566-291445-endlesslegendguardians1024x523png-620x.jpg

Gekikara eats fire for breakfast. She's a fire-breathing dragon.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 12, 2015, 08:08:19 AM
I cannot answer to this poll, cuz honestly, in my eyes, there is no force in the universe that can defeat the greatness that is Gekikara. X3


Ok then.... Im allow Illegal weapons into the fight.
Rainoric sheathes the 'Exalted Blade'
Wulfgar takes some uranium (Steroids for Broken Lords)
Ulrich can go Berserk
And Gizzur shall descend into hysteria.

Your Move Spice Girl

Do you really think illegal weapons, radioactive matter, and insanity are enough to beat Gekikara? Do you REALLY?

Gekikara is seriously powerful. She will not let death get in her way of anything! I've seen Geki beat death! XD

Plus, who knows what power lies in her. It's like an eternal flame! X3

Fotios! Cook Spice girl and make her skin crackle like chicken!
http://www.destructoid.com/ul/user/2/215566-291445-endlesslegendguardians1024x523png-620x.jpg

Gekikara eats fire for breakfast. She's a fire-breathing dragon.

PSA: im planning to do some Drabbing for my characters in the near future
And for Ruka:
HOLY CRUCIFIX UNIBEAM!!!!! (An attack from the game Dante's Inferno)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 01:15:01 PM
And for Ruka:
HOLY CRUCIFIX UNIBEAM!!!!! (An attack from the game Dante's Inferno)

Crucifix? What are you implying? That Geki is the Devil?

Well, even if she is, she's got an angel side to her.

But... yeah, like I said before, she's a dragon. I mean, come on! She even has one on the back of her jacket!

IF YOU CAN'T TAKE THE HEAT, GET OUT OF THE KITCHEN, BO-YYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 12, 2015, 01:19:13 PM
I'm about to board plane now but for Ruka's Sake:
Joor Zah Fruul! (Dragonrend)
Now stay still my little Habanero girl as I force feed you Melon Pan in till you choke mwhahaha

(I'm loving this fight!)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 12, 2015, 01:24:16 PM
I'm about to board plane now but for Ruka's Sake:
Joor Zah Fruul! (Dragonrend)
Now stay still my little Habanero girl as I force feed you Melon Pan in till you choke mwhahaha

(I'm loving this fight!)

With all this effort just for Churi to end it off with a bow shot.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 01:25:53 PM
I'm about to board plane now but for Ruka's Sake:
Joor Zah Fruul! (Dragonrend)
Now stay still my little Habanero girl as I force feed you Melon Pan in till you choke mwhahaha

(I'm loving this fight!)

(Me too! I dunno where you going, but have fun on the plane~ :3)

1. Gekikara cannot choke on melonpan.

2. Gekikara should pretty much be called the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo or something. You may not see it, but she has a dragon in her heart.

Hence Gekikara is the TRUE QUEEN and cannot be defeated by AAAAAAAAAANY of those barbarians. :theking
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 12, 2015, 01:45:05 PM
*Sakura walks in*
"Hey Rainoric-san I did that.... Hey! What are you doing?"

"She called me stupid!" Rainoric finger pointed
"She called me fat!" Wulfgar added
"Ulrich called dirty! Me like dirty."
"She said my Hat looks gay." Gizzur said

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 01:48:11 PM
*LISTEN TO THIS (https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5xXWFGSkK29X0lIMmhZTmZibWs/view?usp=sharing)*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 12, 2015, 05:20:14 PM
*shoves pan de sal to Rena*
"Now eat it!"
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 07:40:29 PM
*shoves pan de sal to Rena*
"Now eat it!"

*Geki gobbles it down, no problem*

(Did you like it? That was me, btw. ;3)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 12, 2015, 07:54:02 PM
y u guys ignoring me?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 08:05:40 PM
y u guys ignoring me?

Michael I luv u. *hugs*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 12, 2015, 08:11:35 PM
y u guys ignoring me?

Michael I luv u. *hugs*

well we can end this debate with churi making gekikara unconcious with an epic bowshot
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 08:18:56 PM
y u guys ignoring me?

Michael I luv u. *hugs*

well we can end this debate with churi making gekikara unconcious with an epic bowshot

Me: I'm sorry, Churi
Geki: *keeps giggling*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 12, 2015, 08:30:57 PM
Churi: *shoots ruka through the head and at geki again*
Me: there end of debate
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 12, 2015, 08:42:48 PM
Hey! What the heck?! lol
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 13, 2015, 06:54:31 AM
*tases Gekirkara and Churi*

BTW I'm in amsterdam
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 13, 2015, 12:38:14 PM
*tases Gekirkara and Churi*

BTW I'm in amsterdam

Gekikara is unaffected by tazer.

(Cool.)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 17, 2015, 12:08:30 AM
This... story... is... EPIC!!!!

I mean, seriously, other than that, I have no words.

I can't wait to see an epic throwdown with Gekikara.

She is gonna whip ALL YOUR SOLDIERS BUTTS!!!!!!!

*Geki laughing with me*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 19, 2015, 03:59:52 PM
I'm still having trouble finding the time to write while I'm here in Europe.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 19, 2015, 05:48:11 PM
I'm still having trouble finding the time to write while I'm here in Europe.

Depends on what factor, timezones, how busy you are....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 19, 2015, 05:53:52 PM
I usually come back to my hotel at around 7 but I would eat dinner first. And my sister is the only person who was a laptop I can use but we are usually in separate rooms.
I would be back at my home by November in time for the AKB48 concert in Manila (if Jurina is gonna announce she is coming I'm going to chug beer)

Now excuse me my fellow Gimaelics, I will now stuff 4 Frankfurter's in my mouth. Gekikara, Sakura, Takamina, Paru and Churi you can happily do it with me.

*onnom omnom*

Ill try to write a bit l8r if I can.

Greetings from Deutschland
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 25, 2015, 03:43:52 PM
Buenos Dias from Espania!

I have some good news! MayukiIslife is taking over the writing while I'm still stuck here in Europe. I gave him how the story goes and he will write up the story for me and I will supervise him as he writes for me.

TY again.

(PS Jam on tastes sooo good Gekikara. You want to have some? Ruka Kikuchi?)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 25, 2015, 03:49:54 PM
No problem, have fun over here~
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 25, 2015, 04:43:09 PM
(PS Jam on tastes sooo good Gekikara. You want to have some? Ruka Kikuchi?)

Geki: Hehehe, only if it's hot and spicy pepper jam.

Ruka: Then, I'll have grape. :3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 25, 2015, 08:32:29 PM
(PS Jam on tastes sooo good Gekikara. You want to have some? Ruka Kikuchi?)

Geki: Hehehe, only if it's hot and spicy pepper jam.

Ruka: Then, I'll have grape. :3
I meant Jamon (auto correct)
Its Iberian Ham.

(Delicious)

Barca won 3-1 with a Luis Suarez Hatrick
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 25, 2015, 08:50:33 PM
(PS Jam on tastes sooo good Gekikara. You want to have some? Ruka Kikuchi?)

Geki: Hehehe, only if it's hot and spicy pepper jam.

Ruka: Then, I'll have grape. :3
I meant Jamon (auto correct)
Its Iberian Ham.

(Delicious)

Barca won 3-1 with a Luis Suarez Hatrick

Ah~ alright. Is it good?

Geki: Is it, hehehe, spicy?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 28, 2015, 12:43:11 PM
So I just saw MG5's ending and I wanna say this:

I bet my soul to the Devil that my Story is way better than that!

Now how many people would like to see the fight of the century?
Rainoric Eadwulf vs Gekikara on a no holds barred fight?

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 28, 2015, 12:51:25 PM
So I just saw MG5's ending and I wanna say this:

I bet my soul to the Devil that my Story is way better than that!

It will. Surely, it will.

Quote
Now how many people would like to see the fight of the century?
Rainoric Eadwulf vs Gekikara on a no holds barred fight?

I'm betting all my money that Gekikara will win!!!!!!!!

Geki: *giggling while biting her nails*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 28, 2015, 01:00:42 PM
For one: I still don't have an appropriate song. (I want to use Yukirin's Yokaze no Shiwaza but idk if that's what you wanted.)

For two: What would happen if someone interrupted said fight?

For three: Placing bets on an even fight.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 28, 2015, 01:38:44 PM
For one: I still don't have an appropriate song. (I want to use Yukirin's Yokaze no Shiwaza but idk if that's what you wanted.)

For two: What would happen if someone interrupted said fight?

For three: Placing bets on an even fight.

Its gonna be even more brutal. The Gimaelics will love it!

And Gekikara, remember Jamon?

(Bashes Rena in the head with a Ham Leg)

"Too much heat for ya?"
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 28, 2015, 02:50:45 PM
What if that someone was a certain falconer with more Gimaelics? What would happen then?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 28, 2015, 05:18:11 PM
And Gekikara, remember Jamon?

(Bashes Rena in the head with a Ham Leg)

"Too much heat for ya?"

Geki: *feels no pain, laughs* No... I LOVE it!!! Hahahahahaha!!!

Geki's a dragon, remember? The heat doesn't bother her.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 28, 2015, 06:51:56 PM
And Gekikara, remember Jamon?

(Bashes Rena in the head with a Ham Leg)

"Too much heat for ya?"

Geki: *feels no pain, laughs* No... I LOVE it!!! Hahahahahaha!!!

Geki's a dragon, remember? The heat doesn't bother her.
Mashes Rena with a Frozen Jamon.

Bonjour from Paris!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 28, 2015, 06:55:57 PM
And Gekikara, remember Jamon?

(Bashes Rena in the head with a Ham Leg)

"Too much heat for ya?"

Geki: *feels no pain, laughs* No... I LOVE it!!! Hahahahahaha!!!

Geki's a dragon, remember? The heat doesn't bother her.
Mashes Rena with a Frozen Jamon.

Bonjour from Paris!

If you don't stop, she's gonna snap and break one of your men's necks.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 28, 2015, 07:10:21 PM
And then Churi the falconer sedates her senpai and tranquilises her at the same time.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom (Chap: The Forest and the Dream)+Poll
Post by: hackata48 on October 31, 2015, 02:08:55 PM
A Raven haired runaway slave dashes through the jungle hoping to get away from her abusive masters. They had violated in all degrees in both physically and mental aspects.

She ran until she found an abandoned mausoleum. She got in with her slavers still hot on her heels.

"I need to get away. Never again" she thought to herself.

"Find her! Spread out! She is getting a thousand lashes for this!" A gruff man's voice was heard. The Raven girl's snow white skin was tainted with innumerable amounts of scars and bruises. She then saw that the tomb in the Mausoleum was loose enough to have a weak bodied human like her to push out. Quickly pushing the cover put as quietly as she could. She went in.

When laid down she felt the dust of the tombs occupant move up as she tried to make herself comfortable in her hiding place. She felt on her back a silky robe was separating her from the remains.
The girl then held her breath as she heard footsteps...

"I swore! I heard a sound from here!" Said a man.

As she tried to not make a sound, a strange sticky sensation was felt by her. The Black silk robe began to literally stick on her body. And first covered her back then her arms and then her head was now slowly making her wear the robes.

"No....No....pls....pls........Death......Death......I......no.....Jurina......I......must.........SEEK YOUR DEATH!!!" The girl now cloaked in Black leaped out of the tomb to the surprise of her pursuers.

"By the Gods! Its a..."  A man stuttered

"Death Seeker! I see your sins.... the death of countless slaves are in your blood....your sentence is.....DEATH!" The girl jumped and conjured a black Dust bow with arrows whose heads were as large as an axe's blade and shot through the neck decapitating those targeted. The Death Seeker girl's hands then unleashed hidden blades as long as swords and stabbed the survivors.

As their blood spilled she tasted them as if she was sipping wine. A satisfied and psychotic grin was dressed from her uncovered mouth as the last of her hunters now hunted had his stomach and guts ripped out by the Raven headed girl's new blades.

She stood up from the grisly art of assassination she had just created and began to laugh maniacally.

"He...he...he....ha...ha...more.....more.....death....must....find...more...sinners....to...SEEK.....I....want.....blood!!! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!!!!!!"


Ladies and Gentlemen, Barbarians and 'Civilised' people.

This a new character in my story....
Ruka....
Guess who got turned into a MOFO Badass.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 31, 2015, 02:22:44 PM
O_O

GEKI!!!!!

I'll get to writing now....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on October 31, 2015, 02:43:22 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

YES!!!!!!!! HECK YES!!!!!!!!!! FREAKING YAAAAAAASSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :D :D :D
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: hackata48 on November 02, 2015, 08:29:30 PM
I will be able to comeback home this weekend and Finally finish the next chapter of My story
PS: Mayukiislife keep on writing just a few more paragraphs pls if you can ty.

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 02, 2015, 08:48:47 PM
I will be able to comeback home this weekend and Finally finish the next chapter of My story
PS: Mayukiislife keep on writing just a few more paragraphs pls if you can ty.

I'll get it done by the time I sleep tonight, tomorrow morning 6:00am max, as I'm busy with life and work ^_^
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: hackata48 on November 02, 2015, 09:10:42 PM
Wilkkomen from Amsterdam.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: hackata48 on November 05, 2015, 07:04:16 PM
Good news and bad news and really good news
I'm Back home!
But I have to rest and can't work for awhile stupid Jet Lag
But this weekend Team 8 is coming to Manila and I got a surprise for a Okabe Rin
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Halloween Death Seeker Teaser.
Post by: hackata48 on November 06, 2015, 08:14:00 AM
The ANGELS have landed on my doorstep! What should I do???
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Drabble: Sakura's dream of a Tree and a Bear
Post by: hackata48 on November 09, 2015, 11:23:34 AM
Sakura saw herself lying down alone in an infinity of water. She looked up to see that she was near a Sakura tree that was in full bloom.
She saw a Cat, a falcon and a turtle playing together under the tree giving a light hearted feeling to Sakura.

Then suddenly the bright feeling of the dreamy world darkened. The air felt no longer warm but now it whispers of death.  It reminded her of Gimael's harsh tundra enviorment from the rare sunshine to the intense snowstorms. She knew that the delicate tree would not even withstand a whiff of winter air. Yet, the Tree stood firm as the winds blew with all of its might. Not even the petals themselves were shaken by its strength. The animals were taking cover by the tree

Sakura covered her head from the gelid winds as she made a run for the tree that stood firm amidst the blizzard's assault. Sitting behind barely covering her entire body. Sakura sighed in relief. The animals huddled close to her for her warmth that she would give to them. To Sakura, she felt like she was singing again back in Earth in her homeland of Japan. But that comforting relief was broken when she heard a great loud roar in the distance.

A great brown bear who looked like it was scarred from many of conflicts approached the tree. Its eyes were like a hungry predator searching for its quarry.
Sakura now thinks she is in a nightmare as the Bear was now just directly facing her and the tree. Sakura hugged close as she could to the tree and tried to remain still ass the bear slowly approached her face.

"Be brave Sakuratan, thats what Takamina said. Be brave." She whispered to herself.

The bear roared in her face and lifted its mighty claws. Sakura braced for the grizzly end to her nightmare but the bear instead of striking her was slashing the tree bark of the Sakura tree. Sakura closed her eyes praying to whatever entity could hear her for the beast to go away. The bear swiftly released its arm and struck the bark of the Sakura tree. Sakura cringed as she heard every scratch.

Then just as this nightmare could get any worse, she heard 3 more animal sounds. From her knowledge of biology she could distinguished she heard a Wolf's howl, another and larger Bear's roar and the cry of Stag. She could feel their footsteps as they approached the tree. The additional animals began to start clawing the tree with their teeth, claws and antlers (respectively). The Sakura tree's once beautiful exterior is now slowly becoming a dead like husk of its former self.  The branches began to shake off the flower petals and sometimes coming off completely. The birch brown bark of the tree began to show ugly marks of scratches and gnaws. Sakura began to cry as her new found animal acquaintances cried with her.

"Do not cower in defeat. Open your eyes!" A masculine voice was heard.

Sakura barely opened her eyes as she still sees the bear still going berserk on the tree with his fur covered in cherry blossom petals. Disturbingly the petals has dips of blood covering a  part of the petal.

HER BLOOD......

"You cant be brave if you had only wonderful things happen to you. (Quote!) See in its eyes! Feel the bears pain and understand." The voice continued

Sakura then looked into the eyes of the feral beast and an explosion of inceptional visions fille her eyes.

A dark figure grabbing a man by his throat and raising him up. The man who was raised up looked as if he was terrified judging by the tone of the scene.

"Please don't eat me! Please don't! No! NO! NO!!!!" A loud and magical sound was heard until the man being held up fell down to the floor dead.

"I have eaten my first human." The other dark figure still standing said.

"But, he only just stole a loaf of bread. You appear to lack compassion for your own subjects" another figure appeared only this time he is of Golden color.

"He stole from me Eslek! I was going to give it to Ulrich. He knew the risk when he steals from ME!" The dark figure shouted, its darkness filled the vision with itself.

The dream then went white again as this time the same Dark figure was now holding a dark stick shaped like a sword. He was sparring with 5 figures colored in red. He brutally and efficiently slashed the 1st four down then turned to the last one standing who know was cowering in fear.

"Mercy! Mercy! I yield!" The Red figure said.

"You..... DON'T..... CALL......ME......WEAK!!!!" The Dark figure

The Dark figure dropped his sword on the ground and approached the red figure. Instead of accepting his surrender the Dark figure began to mercilessly punch the red figure repeatedly. The dream went black again as Sakura saw another vision.

The Dark figure was sitting behind a pillar as 2 figures one colored green another colored purple were arguing.

"Your son is too violent to become King! Last thing Galerian wants from your bastard of a Son is going around Auriga butchering everyone he see's! Sophia is no less than a Night Walker that she chose to marry you!" The Purple figure said.

"What did you say about her!" The Green figure grabbed the Purple figure by its robes.

Then the Dark Figure emerged from behind the pillar and punched the Purple figure.

"You dont call my mother a W***** you Ghothic swine!" the Dark figure said

The dream went black again as the next scene of Sakura's vision played.

The Dark Figure was sitting down on a throne.... above corpses of people, but these corpses werent unclear and minimalistic figures they were real people.

Sakura's people.... She could see so many of dead lying in a pile below a throne. She saw the bodies of her friends, her family, Aki-P, soldiers, world leaders and even children.

"WHY WONT ANYONE OBEY ME!!!" The Dark Figure said.... blurry and unclear image soon became coherent to the untrained eye as Sakura was shocked to see who the Scarred Bear/ Dark figure was.

It was Rainoric Eadwulf.... He killed them.... He destroyed her world.....her home.....everyone she knows and love....... Yet Rainoric instead of laughing hysterically over his mess. He began to cry. A Broken Lord, a 'heartless' entity of dust binded by armor, was crying.

Sakura climbed up the corpse hill to reach Rainoric. As she climbed she was grabbed in the limbs.

"Stop his madness." A bloodied Mayu Watanabe said

"Why did you leave us? You could have stopped him! I thought you were a kind hearted person." A burnt Sakura WOTA said

"He is not even a living thing! He is a monster! A demon! And so his people! The Gimaelics are so diabolical that even Satan would deny them access into hell! They cant be killed for that reason. Its worthless to think they can change!" A headless priest said.

"They hurt him, he doesn't want to hear them. Thats why he is angry." A little boy who had strangle marks on his neck said.

Sakura continue to climb the corpse pile, passing by friend and family alike as she reached the top where Rainoric was sitting. As she looked to the young Warlord Prince she saw that among all of the dead, she was also one of them. By Rainoric's feet was her body. Her body was holding a gun that looked like it went off. As she examined her head she saw that their was a self inflicted gunshot wound at her head. Rainoric looked towards Sakura not as an Authoritative master, but a 'Broken' Broken Lord.

"Help me.....please.....I want to be sorry." He said

Sakura was then taken back to the Sakura tree that she was hiding at. The Scarred Bear was staring at her eyes, tears dropping from it. The Cherry Blossom grabbed the bear's face let it's nose caressed her shoulder. She whispered to its ear:

"I will help you. I will help you find your humanity."

Sakura woke up back to reality. She was still in the tent she shares with Rainoric, Osgar, Ulrich, Takamina and Paruru. She could see that Rainoric was kneeling down in a meditative position surrounded by White Dust clouds. He must have used some of the ultra rare color of the Dust to interact with Sakura in her dreams.

Sakura walked to him and hugged him from behind. Rainoric didn't reacted.

"You still have so much to learn master." Sakura whispered.

"Please...... Make them stop hurting me......" Rainoric said breaking away from his meditation of the White Dust. The Dust dissipated before them.

"Well then.... I can explain to you why many of us Earthlings fear death unlike you Gimaelics...... Death you see can be very unpred----" Sakura then began to teach Rainoric of finding his sense of compassion.

(WOW!!!! My first Drabble and im practicing Dark Symbolism, Reason why is that I went to a museum in Madrid while I was in Europe callled Museo del Prado and a lot of its art focus on symbolism. I like the section of the museum called 'Black Paintings' since it really shows how dark and serious symbolism can be, I took some inspiration from the painting 'Saturn eating his children' which is masterpiece of a work on Dark Symbolism.)

Please give me feedback on this drabble and Im working as hard as I can on the next chapter of the main story.


Cometerz48
MayukiISlife
Ruka Kikuchi

(This MEANS YOU!)


PS Watched AKB48 Team 8 concert, I think im in love again!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Drabble: Sakura's dream of a Tree and a Bear
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 09, 2015, 01:06:18 PM
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS IS SO EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Drabble: Sakura's dream of a Tree and a Bear
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 09, 2015, 01:43:16 PM
Sakura saw herself lying down alone in an infinity of water. She looked up to see that she was near a Sakura tree that was in full bloom.
She saw a Cat, a falcon and a turtle playing together under the tree giving a light hearted feeling to Sakura.

This whole drabble is about things that could've happened..... Sakura being near a Sakura Tree, her seeing a cat (Takamina), falcon (Churi) and a turtle (Paruru(?)) I wonder if this links in with the rest of the story
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Drabble: Sakura's dream of a Tree and a Bear
Post by: hackata48 on November 09, 2015, 01:44:49 PM
Takamina is a wise old turtle
Hayato means Falcon
Paruru is a cat cuz Oh nya oh nya nya!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom Drabble: Sakura's dream of a Tree and a Bear
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 09, 2015, 06:11:42 PM
Takamina is a wise old turtle
Hayato means Falcon
Paruru is a cat cuz Oh nya oh nya nya!

U~nya nya u~nya nya Unya unya yo~~~~~~~~~ >w<

She was so cute! Shio-nya~~~  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: hackata48 on November 12, 2015, 03:31:08 PM
After a crazy time in Europe while also absorbing some cultural inspiration I have used to add some spice in the chapter I can finally say without any further ado's.....

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/12

(Obviously the Japanese hates the Gimaelics)

And we have an Assassin coming up!

(YOU HAPPY WITH ME RUKA!!!!)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 12, 2015, 06:24:05 PM
I'm sorry I couldn't finish it, injury, illness and general busy-ness.....  But I'm happy it got out nonetheless.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 12, 2015, 06:32:34 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >w<

This is so incredible!!! Too good!!!!

There's so much going on, too! I was afraid I couldn't keep up, but it's all actually very interesting!!! X3

Keep up the good work!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran (QNA time)
Post by: hackata48 on November 15, 2015, 11:56:43 AM
Question time with Rainier:

Ask me anything about my story my friends and I shall answer... Ty
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 15, 2015, 12:01:37 PM
Dude, do you enjoy writing this?

I mean, with the little part that I wrote, I enjoyed it.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: hackata48 on November 15, 2015, 12:04:09 PM
Dude, do you enjoy writing this?

I mean, with the little part that I wrote, I enjoyed it.

Yes I do, I take my time to write it and besides I don't got much to do other than stare at AKB news, play video games and stare at what stupid things my friends in FB are doing.

I enjoy my work like I enjoy TGIF Baby Back ribs....(Fun fact I added my love of it to my story if you noticed the 'boar ribs')
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 15, 2015, 12:12:33 PM
And would you focus more chapters on other members? Like Takamina, Paruru ect...
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: hackata48 on November 15, 2015, 12:14:32 PM
My next chapter will be focusing more on Churi on the mission and Paruru on being the sister of a soldier.

Plus Churi and Osgar are frenemies
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: hackata48 on November 17, 2015, 09:55:38 AM
Now I want to ask you a question guys:

How do you like my writing of Sakura and Rainoric? Is there anything I can do to improve myself writing of their relationship?


What do you think would you like me to do with Takamina?

Did I write Gizzur well enough for you to picture him as a Psycho?

Who wants to see Gekikara vs Rainoric as a Christmas present to all of the fans of that Crazy ***** (I mean super saiyan dragon girl (That I wanna kick her booty))?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 17, 2015, 01:40:58 PM
Now I want to ask you a question guys:

Who wants to see Gekikara vs Rainoric as a Christmas present to all of the fans of that Crazy ***** (I mean super saiyan dragon girl (That I wanna kick her booty))?

*raises hand high in the air*

Geki's gonna kick his butt. :3
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
Post by: hackata48 on November 18, 2015, 07:38:57 PM
New Chapter up ahead of schedule guys!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/13

Things escalate very quickly
Osgar and Churi really are on each others nerves
We learn more about why the Gimaelics hate the Ghogthals
Osgar gets high, dances shirtless and flirts with Geki (Which I wrote to be as funny as my best writing ability can make)
Gekikara/Rena Matsui/Samhane Haligtide is a freaking Badass (and flirt psycho)
Takamina rallies the Vanoran Legions

and.......

The Beggining of an epic throwdown between

The Dragon Lady of Hyogo VS Rainoric Eadwulf , Wulfgar Bjornsson and Ulrich Langobard
in an epic 3 on 1 throwdown!!!!

Invite your friends and any Gekikara fan for next time in BCB we'll have a fight to decide who is....

THE DEADLIEST WARRIOR!!!! (Insert Epic announcer voice)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 18, 2015, 07:56:50 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIII GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!

GEKI GETS MORE AND MORE EPIC WHENEVER I READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
Post by: hackata48 on November 20, 2015, 04:44:11 PM
What do you like most about my story? :hip smile:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 20, 2015, 08:38:10 PM
What do you like most about my story? :hip smile:

GEKIKARA, DUH!!!!!!!!! XD

Geki: *giggles*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 20, 2015, 08:39:50 PM
What do you like most about my story? :hip smile:

GEKIKARA, DUH!!!!!!!!! XD

Geki: *giggles*

ChuriGeki. Plus the fact Churi and Osgar are friendly rivals.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
Post by: hackata48 on November 21, 2015, 05:42:28 PM
Hey Guys! I could use some help again,

I made a poll asking what should I name the Army of Folllowers that Rainoric is leading.

If you have a name of your own pls say so...
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alt.End
Post by: hackata48 on November 22, 2015, 09:51:03 AM
The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alternate End

"Ok, Im going to contact a ghost..." Takayanagi Akane said to her webcam. She is currently making a series of videos on her Youtube channel on how there is a 'ghost' haunting the very land that is her house. But the truth is, she was just trying to fish some views for her channel and possibly even subscribers.

The plan was to 'contact the spirit' with a chant she learned from her local library and the 'ghost' in which is her friend Airi would appear and scare her.

"Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary...." Churi chanted. As she looked to the camera she could see her friend Airi dressed up as a ghost behind her.

*Ring! Ring! Ring!*

Her cellphone suddenly began to make its ringtone as a frustrated Churi picked it up. To her surprise and horror it was her friend Airi.

"Hey Churi-sama, My I got a cold right now and I cant come to your *cough* house tonight. How about on friday? *cough*" Airi said.

Churi hung up her cellphone and slowly turned her head back. Her breath was tense and her mind was in utter confusion. Was Airi pulling off a prank on her?

When she turned back she saw noone whether dead or alive behind her.  She turned back to her laptop screen to see that the ghost girl she 'summoned' was still behind her.

"Aaaahhh!!!!" Churi screamed. She actually summoned Bloody Mary. And now the Urban Legend of a ghost woman is here to ruin her day.

The ghost caressed Churi's neck and began to tighten its grip on her throat. Churi inhaled panickingly as she struggle to fight for her life. But her weak frame, build and physical strength waned as she is slowly losing oxygen to Bloody Mary.

Just as she was about to rise up with her birdy friends to the great big nest up by the branch over the large tree (Heaven). The tightening grip on her neck was loosened. Churi gasped for air as she laid down on her bedroom floor.

"Take that! And that! And *spits* THAT!" Said a barbaric sounding voice.

"Who's there? Who are you?" Churi asked.

The lights turned on and to her surprise it was Osgar Daguth who rescued her from Bloody Mary. Osgar had bashed the ghost with his barrel mug of ale mixed with wine 'till the ghost retreated back to whatever circle of Hell did she came from.

"Someone who loathes you B*tch!" Osgar raised his voice and his mug to the air and drank some more of his drink.

"Osgar-san? What the heck are you doing in my room?" Churi asked, picking up a Chunichi Dragon's bat that she has in her room for self-defense.

"Think the proper question is why the bloody hell are you summoning the dead? And besides, the only person who is allowed to hurt you in all ways of the world  is ME!" Osgar pumped his thumb to his chest.

"You dont have the right to hurt me? Osgar you.... you..... stinky, piss poor, barbaric.....uhm" Churi was confused to think of another insult she could throw at the Spearmaster.

"Piss poor? Is it because I cant pee on a toilet properly, after I drank like 10 rounds of Ale?"

"Well you could'nt get a single drop of your Urine in!" Churi shouted

"Well maybe if it wasnt for a Bird-hugging Japanisch Fotze who keeps pushing me around the toilet trying to 'improve your aim' then your bathroom wouldn't look like a taverns Vomitorium." Osgar argued

Churi swung her bat to Osgar who only grabbed it and took it away from her hands. Osgar then threw the merchandise bat away.

"That's it! Your arse is mine!" Osgar raised his arms in feral way and grinned his teeth. He charged at Churi with and bit her clothes.....


----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

"Rrrrrr.......*munch*.....lie still you wench................rrrrrrr........*munch munch munch*........... Your skin taste better raw cooked Churi...... stop screaming................ I like your mouth.......*drools and kisses*" Osgar sleep talked with a pillow he was holding. It had bitemarks and saliva stains all over its cloth.

Churi looked at the Spearmaster with confused disgust. It almost as if Osgar was making out with the pillow like if he was doing it with the occasional tavern wench during his bar hopping trips with Ulrich, Gizzur and some of the men.

"Henjin" Churi said before going back to her bussines.



(New Drabble Series called : The ChuGar Chronicles. Where Me and MayukiIsLife write short stories of BCB's own Tsunderish couple.)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alt. Ending
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on November 22, 2015, 11:18:11 AM
Well, the oddest thing about that is, I can imagine what Churi's bathroom looks like, and can imagine what Churi's baseball bat looks like (signed by the players, ect).

(And btw, does the drabble have to follow the plot? I might rewrite it if not.)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alt. Ending
Post by: hackata48 on November 24, 2015, 07:16:03 AM
Just drew and colored some crudish sketches of some of my OC's in my story.

You wanna see them here?
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles (Poll)
Post by: hackata48 on November 26, 2015, 02:18:58 PM
Having  a hard time naming my title for the next chapter....


Rena help me out! And you better not say
'How Rena kicked Rainoric's booty so hard that even Mayu and Yuko wont touch it'

In other news which army is more badass?
Gimaelics or Vanorans?

(http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/404558683245291022/F37EC687AB8D1471274464A8E3C6A424BA342B8C/?interpolation=lanczos-none&output-format=jpeg&output-quality=95&fit=inside|1024:575&composite-to=*,*|1024:575&background-color=black)


(http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/404558683245290749/BBB22DE44B55857F453730841D1AE26812890428/)

or


(http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/404558546901433281/3508A2B129834DB45AC3B9B0BDCA803AF4B4F745/)


(http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/404558546901434120/B2187AEBA75A15B05DA06AE46C90A0B9BB98C1C6/)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alt. Ending
Post by: hackata48 on November 30, 2015, 03:12:07 PM
From the rate of

Unflinched to Pisa my pants,

How scared would you be if a Gimaelic shouts
'TE HETA HADA WODAN!'
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: hackata48 on December 03, 2015, 01:53:00 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/15

Rena vs Rainoric! (Hope its great guys)

Complete with Explosions! Blood! Destruction! And seizure inducing light shows!
We learn the terrifying powers of Dust!
Rainoric got a 2nd blade up his sleeve.
Sakura has the POWER!
And Takamina joins the Legion.....


And I forgot where I keep my stash of hot sauce. Going to date Rena with some of them.


Rainoric uses EXALTED BLADE!!!! (Not my pic)
(http://i.imgur.com/qJPe01C.jpg)


Gekikara uses Bladestorm!
(Something like this! Just imagine her doing that in Majisuka, MG5 might have ended differently if she did this)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-IZyEmrkhhY
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: hackata48 on December 03, 2015, 02:21:03 PM
Quick question guys, I want to name Hayato's Dust Horse but I cant think of a name.


Any suggestions? It should sound or mean something badass since were talking about....


(http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/civilization/images/9/98/Winged_hussar_(Civ5)_art.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130315224650)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 03, 2015, 06:35:09 PM
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! >w<

Hmm... the Dust Horse's name should be......*thinking*........


(If a girl) Scarlet or (if a boy) Crimson. :3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: hackata48 on December 04, 2015, 12:45:18 AM
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! >w<

Hmm... the Dust Horse's name should be......*thinking*........


(If a girl) Scarlet or (if a boy) Crimson. :3

Dust Horses are Asexual Ruka to let ya know
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 04, 2015, 12:44:38 PM
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! >w<

Hmm... the Dust Horse's name should be......*thinking*........


(If a girl) Scarlet or (if a boy) Crimson. :3

Dust Horses are Asexual Ruka to let ya know

Oh. XD

Then either will do.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: hackata48 on December 05, 2015, 02:50:14 AM
Funfacts!:

The inspiration for Wulfgar 'the Tower' is World's Strongest Man champion Hafthor Bjornnsson. (Who played as 'the Mountain' in GoT)

Rainoric is derived from Ragnar and Rainier which is Germanic in origin meaning 'Valiant Warrior'

Leoferic Wieskirche is inspired by Endless Legends Broken Lords hero Leoferic Whitchapel who I translated the last name into German. Plus I made him a Polish Hussar, said to be one of the most accomplished knights in history.

I use a lot of German, Russian, Slavic, Latin and Greek words in my story, so feel free to translate them via google



In other news, who wants to see Yuki again?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 05, 2015, 03:25:53 AM
In other news, who wants to see Yuki again?

I think I can speak for a lot of us when I say........

(http://38.media.tumblr.com/cdbed2415ea1631f14a0c165f845f741/tumblr_inline_nu2nu9xANN1rlbl2i_500.gif)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: hackata48 on December 07, 2015, 03:17:04 PM
I got a wild idea for a new character,

But I want her to be based off one of the AKB girls.

Got any suggestions? Cuz I'm stuck among

Acchan
Yuihan
Akimoto Sayaka
And Rina Kawaei
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 07, 2015, 06:17:12 PM
SAYAKA SAYAKA SAYAKA SAYAKA SAYAKAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OWO
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Sakura's Journal #2
Post by: hackata48 on December 08, 2015, 12:15:16 PM
Sakura's Journal #2 is up.


Additional Lore for my series!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/16


In other news......


Merry Christmas boys and girls!
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Drabble: How to say 'Sorry'
Post by: hackata48 on December 08, 2015, 02:19:53 PM
"Right! Rainoric-sama today I shall teach you how to say 'Sorry'." Sakura cheerfully said.
Sakura has begun to teach Rainoric on the proper conduct on how to deal with other people. Young Warlord's manners at the moment were par to a degenerate sociopath.

"Sorry...There! Done! Can I go now?" Rainoric grumbly said.

"Iya, Iya, You need to learn the value of saying 'No' master. Here, Takamina..." Sakura gestured Takamina to step forward next to her. For the midget's own protection she is wearing some armor in the unfortunate incident Rainoric's temper gets the better of him.

"Now, please walk towards me." Sakura said.

Rainoric obediently walked towards Sakura. At the same time, Takamina 'lazily' walked against the same path Rainoric was walking towards to. They eventually bumped into one another.

"Ouch! Gommenasai!" Takamina apologized.

"Oi! Watch it!" Rainoric pushed Takamina to the ground causing her to scrape her elbow.

"Rain-sama! Don't do that to her, she was just walking by when you bumped into her." Sakura talked back.

"The stupid b*tch should have been looking!" Rainoric rebutted.

Sakura walked up to her Soukantouku and helped her up. She cleaned off the wound and wrapped a bandage around Takamina's elbow.

"Why are you helping her out? Is'nt she a 'leader'? I thought she can take care of herself." Rainoric said.

"Look, Rain-sama, not everyone in this world is born strong. Takamina wasn't born with decent strength but she makes up for it by being able to help people who are needed for help. A leader knows how to help his friends and followers my lord." Sakura said after letting Takamina sit on a chair.

"And a follower knows not to disrespect his or her superior." Rainoric stubbornly continued his arguement. His fist began to clench as if ready to throw a fit yet again like her earlier sessions with him on manners.

Quickly thinking to prevent another tantrum, Sakura grabbed Rainoric's hands and stared to the abyss of his empty eye sockets of the Broken Lord's helmet/head.

"Rain.... she did'nt mean to bump into you, but now you hurt her and now she has a wound on her elbow. She is sad and hurt. So its an appropriate time now to tell her 'Sorry." Sakura said.

Sakura could still feel Rainoric's tension as he is still ticked off by her failed lesson. Anger was now about to corrupt his mind yet again as his fist began to slowly crush Sakura's hand. If she doesn't think of way to safely release this anger now, she's next. Then the lightbulb lit open in Sakura's brain.

"I have an idea follow me." Sakura held Rainoric's hand tightly as she dragged him outside the tent they were in. She borrowed an axe from one of Rainoric's men and took him to a near by tree.

"I want you to cut this down Rain-sama." Sakura handed over the axe to Rainoric.

He grabbed the axe and began to relentlessly cut down the tree untill it timbered down. But even after that he continued to chop the wood like a chef mincing garlic.

"Rrrraaaaggggghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He shouted as he hacked the tree to small wooden pieces.

After annihilating the tree with only bits and chips of wood remaining of the once proud specimen of nature. Rainoric felt Dust Exhaustion. He began to inhale more Dust to regain the energy lost.

"Why the hell did you made me do that?" Rainoric asked

"People can't think straight when they are angry. So you needed to find away to release it without hurting people." Sakura replied.

"But I am not a human nor a living thing to even start with. I'm just a 'Monster' to you and others."

Sakura grasped Rainoric's hands again and courageously stared him in the eyes (sockets). She sighed and spoke:

"Why did the Endless first created your people?"

"We were made because the Virtuals saw in us as warriors that can protect their crumbling legacy from those who wish to do it harm. They gave us their technology, their knowledge and their Dust. In return, we gave them our mortality. Our very lives. So we may follow the light of their civilization and insure it continues to burn." Rainoric said.

"No, not only that, but Eslek told me that your people were created not to follow the Endless, but to exceed them. Your father and his father did what the endless could took a milleniums to accomplish, unite people and have them work together towards a common goal, a kingdom with your family the Eadwulfs and their tribe the Salians at the top. Eslek told me for he knew your grandfather before Gewis took the throne." Sakura said.

"Merovech really did meant to do that? I thought he wanted to breakaway from the Ghoghths because they wouldn't accept his way of solving problems."

"Merovech......pust' on pokoitsya s mirom broke away because he knows how to make a nation strong, not by giving infinite amounts of aid to the people. But by making them feel empowered and independent from him. That is why 10 million people here in Auriga follow him and his family to this day." Sakura said respectfully.

Rainoric felt humbled by Sakura's superior knowledge of his family's history, his granfather's breakaway from the Ghogths, the revolution which led to the formation of the Gimaelic kingdom etc.

"I understand now, Merovech would have wanted me to be kind to people. I.....I.....understand now." Rainoric said.

He walked back into the tent to see Takamina still healing over her wound.

"I......I....... am.....am......sssss......sssoooo....... sorry.....Minami of Tokyo." Rainoric bowed in the traditional Japanese fashion of respect.

"Apology accepted, see it wasn't that hard Rain-kun?" Takamina happily said. She rubbed Rainoric's helmet/head as he continued to bow down to her.

"Im sorry.... Im sorry..... Im sorry!!!" Rainoric began to cheerfully say those words outloud. He ran off outside again to shout it out at the top of his voice. Takamina and Sakura followed him as he ran.

The Warlord first walked up to Paruru who was busy knitting by a tree.

"Im sorry I hurt you please forgive me!" He said in a cheerful tune.

"Eh? Uhm....thank you?" Paruru said giving an awkward smile.

Rainoric ran off again leaving a confused Paruru behind.

"What's his problem?" Paruru asked.

"We thought him how to say 'Sorry'. But I think it worked to well..." Sakura said. She helped Paruru up and continued to follow Rainoric as he ran back to the main camp.

"Im sorry to everyone that I ever hurt before! Im sorry! Im sorry! Im sorry!" Rainoric said loudly. Though his apologies were abnormally loud for one, he sincerely meant it. Then dashed for Eslek's tent who was still writing his reports and letters to Gewis.

"Eslek! Im sorry for every time I called you 'Stubborn old ghost'!" Rainoric said.

"Master! You are apologizing.....thats...unus....I mean....thats wonderful but please let me go back to my work master." Eslek replied.

Rainoric scurried off yet again with the 3 AKB girls following him. This time he arrived at the tent where injured people would be taken to be treated and rest.

Sakura, Takamina and Paruru peeked inside as Rainoric walked to Churi who was attending to Rena.

"Samhane! I mean Deathseeker! I mean Hellb*tch! I mean...." Rainoric stuttered the names of Rena's previous persona.

"Rena, its Rena, Rainoric-san" Churi corrected.

(Spoiler for the chapter of 'Usurpation of Power')

"Rena! I am sorry that I stabbed you in the heart with 'Ulfberth'. I want to....how do you Yamanin say....'make it up for you' with this." Rainoric removed his Lorica leaving only his gambeson to physically hold the Broken Lord together and unsheathed 'Ulfberth'.

" 'An eye for an eye or a stab to the heart for a stab to the heart' stab me in the same place I stabbed you. Dont worry, unlike you I wont die and choke blood. Because I can't!" Rainoric said handing over his sword to Rena.

"Uhm.....okay?" Rena tried to be polite despite the absurd and awkward situation she is now in. But since she doesn't want to anger the host of her hospital stay she had to comply. She grasped the sword weakly and tried to thrust it to Rainoric's chest. Churi seeing that Rena still needs more strength, grabbed Rena's hand and gave it a strong push to Rainoric's chest.

The sword went straight through Rainoric.  The Gimaelic steel blade laid firmly on his chest before he removed it from his body.

"There we go lad, so are we....what's the earth term? Uhm.... Ah! 'Even Steven'?" Rainoric asked.

Rena and Churi couldn't help but laugh at their master's sudden sense of humor as they shook his hands.

"Even Steven Rainoric-sama...... Wait......your sword has a name?" Rena said.

As they saw the Broken Lord shake hands with their snow-white skinned friend. Takamina patted Sakura in the head.

"You did a great Job Sakuratan, Master is now beginning to lighten up. Keep up the great work." She said.

"Yes keep it up!" Paruru added.

Sakura accepted the congratulatory words from her senpais. After taking them all in, she turned around to see that her master (and slowly becoming friend) Rainoric walk out of the sick bay tent with his head held high. For he has learned some compassion today.





(How do you like this now? I wonder how am I going to make a ship name for Rainoric and Sakura, any of you guys got any bright ideas? Other than Ruka and MayukiISlife? No offense but I want to hear what others think)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Sakura's Journal #2
Post by: hackata48 on December 14, 2015, 04:20:11 PM
In the next episode of the BCB:

Takamina puts her leadership experience as General Manager/Soukantoku in a Life or Death situation.
Hayato's first battle
A bet between Churi and Osgar (The rivalry continues!!!!)
Sakura unleashes more of her mysterious 'gift'.


And Gimaelics and Vanorans vs Religous extremist robots....(Yeah robots)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on December 21, 2015, 08:08:48 PM

LETS GET READY FOR AN EPIC BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WITH Violence that would make Majisuka Gakuen look like it came from the Disney Channel JR.

Drama, Suspense, Action, Clever ideas and an Amputation (You will be shock what has transpired when you read it.... I gurantee it (Or your money back))

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/17

Please review and share this story to your friends m8's

I always appreaciate more people who love my Crossover Fanfic of Endless Legend and AKB48 (Plus some elements I added for a little spice  ;)  )))
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 21, 2015, 08:28:41 PM
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG

Yeah, the violence in Majisuka can't even TOUCH this fic.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 24, 2015, 04:39:48 PM
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG

Yeah, the violence in Majisuka can't even TOUCH this fic.

Ah, I already commented. XD

Well, he asked me, so...

It's just too awesome, I can't even right now. >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on December 25, 2015, 03:57:38 PM
(I quote from a guy named: ABF48 from the Stage48 thread I made)

^ Oh, you're not westerners, you're from philipines. I thought you're westerners, because from your works i notice that it contains so much difficult words, and somehow it give me the same feels like when i read western novel. i guess english is your first.

Its appealing because i want to read it till over, its like you giving a continuous bum to us (readers), and it makes me cant stop reading and curious what happen in next. And i dont know how to put this but.. you have a very good way on describing the background of the story (am i put the rights words ? lol) in simple, i like how you describe the place, the character, the condition, or many else. its just sound exciting when reading all those things :)

I like the characters names, Osgar Daguth, Ulrich etc. It gives the LOTR vibes, and i love LOTR.

(End Quote)


Thanks for the review m8.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on December 25, 2015, 05:21:10 PM
Imagine 'The Sack of Tokyo' if this song was playing when it happened....


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pr4bPoFWTc0 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pr4bPoFWTc0)


Please tell me what you see when you hear....


This is a survey on how my viewers imagine my story....


 :theking
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 25, 2015, 05:35:50 PM
Imagine 'The Sack of Tokyo' if this song was playing when it happened....


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pr4bPoFWTc0 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pr4bPoFWTc0)


Please tell me what you see when you hear....

*_*

Oh my Lord, I just had an eargasm...

I could totally see this as the music for like, a movie trailer, or for an epic battle scene, or maybe even the final boss battle. It's SO EPIC!!! OwO

(Wait, can you edit videos? Because I would love to see a trailer version of this if possible! X3)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on December 25, 2015, 05:41:01 PM
Unfortunately thou I am a God of writing im a conscript of Video editing and my skills on that category is worse than a Stormtrooper's aim
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on December 25, 2015, 05:56:21 PM
Unfortunately thou I am a God of writing im a conscript of Video editing and my skills on that category is worse than a Stormtrooper's aim

Oh well... XD
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on December 30, 2015, 05:20:47 PM
For the next chapter we have a New Year's themed chapter....but due to Asia fics Saving system being 'problematic' it may be released 1 week after new years.


Will also contain singing.....

Yuki is back too....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on January 05, 2016, 09:18:18 AM
In the next Chapter of BCB:

PARTY!!!!!


And singing!

Music night to take a break for all of the killing and fighting! 

And since I like to tease a bit:

Here is the Vanoran Anthem:

https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=video&cd=4&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjp_rDonZLKAhXHipQKHaw-DbsQtwIIJTAD&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DBrW8lk-KpwE&usg=AFQjCNHbieeLa5OeK7Kk6nc5thy1xifKJg&sig2=34_Ilf7Pc9jdoGBkDcVH-w&bvm=bv.110151844,d.dGo (https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=video&cd=4&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjp_rDonZLKAhXHipQKHaw-DbsQtwIIJTAD&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DBrW8lk-KpwE&usg=AFQjCNHbieeLa5OeK7Kk6nc5thy1xifKJg&sig2=34_Ilf7Pc9jdoGBkDcVH-w&bvm=bv.110151844,d.dGo)


And in other good news: My schedule has been lessened for me for the rest of my school year so I can write more

:)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on January 06, 2016, 02:12:31 PM
Question time:

So guys what's your opinion on these matters:

Sakura and her newfound powers with Dust

Miyuki and Belisarius relationship (plus the whole drug problem)

Osgar and Churi's rivalry (especially when Churi is called 'Japanische Fotze' by Osgar)

How do you like my original version of Auriga so far? Is there any places you want the Gedriht to explore? Lush Jungles? Burning Desert? Towering Mountains? Grassy Steppes?


Pls leave your opinions below
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 06, 2016, 02:45:32 PM
Sakura being able to use Dust is awesome. :3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on January 06, 2016, 04:12:53 PM
Other effects of Dust includes:

Desire to eat salt and water alot
Super Genius mental capacity that would make even Stephen Hawking look stupid
Playing simultaneous gambling games in super fast speed
unlocking Endless Vaults

And crazy magic spell limted to ones imagination (which is an Oxymoron to say the least)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Battle of the Ydeli Plains
Post by: hackata48 on January 08, 2016, 05:21:36 PM
Survey Time!

I want my character Osgar to take off his helmet for the next chapters but I don't know which hairdo to take for our resident Spearmaster.

So be a good citizen and vote on my new survey

TY


-Hack
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly
Post by: hackata48 on January 09, 2016, 05:02:23 PM
New chapter is up! Just after New Years and Christmas.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/18

With Singing!

Sakura and Rainoric Stargazes (Romance!)

Paruru gets courters (she has beautiful face!)

Takamina has crappy night (literally)

Churi does something stupid (much to Osgar's delight)

Osgar and Yuki Duet (Karaoke night where everyone laughs at the bad singer and good singer)

A lot of slavic words (You translate them!)

A hungover Senate (Because absenteeism is for cowards!)

The next location the Gedriht is going too has a little problem (This is what happens when you shout at people too loudly)

and......

ANOTHER RAID ON EARTH?!?!

And guess which AKB48 sister group is in China and which among them is going to get an all expense paid trip to Auriga?

I will give you a hint....

She is the Kanna Hashimoto of China....


 ;) :) :twisted: :theking :jphip:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 09, 2016, 08:18:29 PM
As if ONE invasion wasn't chaotic enough... there's ANOTHER one being planned!!! xD

The stargazing scene was so tearjerking and heartwarming all at once... I ship SakuRain. x3

Can't wait for next chapter~
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on January 09, 2016, 08:41:20 PM
Idk why but I ship ChuGar (Rivalry wise)

The stargazing scene was quite romantic~
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly
Post by: hackata48 on January 11, 2016, 12:12:07 PM
Soo....
 
Which city shod the Gimaelics pay a little visit next....

Shanghai?
Busan?
Seoul?
Osaka?
Taipei?

Oh the possibilities are endless!!!

*Evil Psycho laughter!!!*
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: hackata48 on January 12, 2016, 04:22:00 PM
Supplementary Chapter: Shanghai Storm


(Intense Violence of the very graphic kind that would make Majisuka look like a Disney show)

The Gimaelic raiding ships were floating at minimum speed and altitude on their approach to Shanghai. They were approaching the Chinese city through the Hangzhou bay approach. The ships camoulflage also complemented the stealth capabilities of the ships as they silently glide through fishing boats and cargo barges.

"We're approaching the city lads, get ready!" High King Gewis said. He inspected the gear and weapons of each of his soldiers and men. Human and Broken Lord alike were decked out in new and improved gear if compared to the ones used in Tokyo a few months ago.

"So lord, why are we going to a very invade a country which I have heard rumors that has the largest army in this planet?" said a Gimaelic raider.

"If a country can support a populace of 1 billion people then they obviously have a lot of food to keep it that way. This is the largest city with a coast we can attack from and by Godan there will be mountains of food and loot just waiting for us to plunder." Gewis answered the man's question.

"I hear they have wingless dragons you think we will see one?" another raider asked.

"Don't know but if we do, leave the killing to me. You just run and grab as much loot as you can. And if you can carry, some fresh meat (a prisoner)."

"3 minutes until we arrive at the landing zone my lord." Said the pilot of the ship.

Gewis turns around to finally check himself. He had a shield with the Eadwulf symbols on it, a Dust Francisca axe, a seax knife and a larger axe made from Gimaelic Steel. He then looked at his clothes. Wearing a long sleeved green shirt with gold colored highlights and a GS Lorica wearing over it. The Broken Lord stood out from his commanded forces with his helmet. It was similarly shaped as his son's Rainoric but since he is the High King, there are a few distinctions.

The Helmet had more carved out symbols on the top of the headgear that depicted the story of the Eadwulf and Gimaelic Royal family's founder, Merovech. Also on the top of his helmet was a plume of black colored hair (like the Roman centurion helmets or my avatar in my profile to see what I mean). The helmet/head he was wearing was of course from Merovech and when Rainoric passes is rites he will wear it to become High King of the Gimaelics. But for now, Gewis will enjoy as much as he can before that time comes to pass the torch.

"Fire the burners now!" Gewis ordered.

The technology that the Gimaelics have taken from the Earthlings in Tokyo has made the Gimaelics an even more dreaded force to be in the battlefield. The 'burners' that Gewis ordered to fire were honeycomb-shaped grenade launchers that shoot incendiary missles from range. When they first tested the weapon after violently killing its previous owner (They shoved his head on the rotors of the helicopter the stole while it was turned on). The weapon showed great promise. They retrofitted them into their raiding ships and replaced the ammo with flaming ones. Gewis felt proud of this new innovation as the ground was razed like bonfire when their ships landed.

"Men, LETS KILL SOME HUMANS!" He said like a true barbarian. His men unsheathed their weapons and are now ready to kill the first man they see.

"TE HETA HADA WODAN!" They yelled as the ramp closed.

The scene was fires and corpses and people running away from them (with some being on fire themselves). Thousands and thousands yet to arrive poured into the portwalk of Shanghai. The Chinese were caught by surprise by the thunderous strike of the Gimaelics. And now, let the looting begin!

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"This food is mine old man!" A young Sebharii warrior yelled to an elderly farmer. They were having a tug-of-war over a sack of rice. Since the Gimaelic was more physically fit by a longshot, he yanked the bag of the poor grandpa's hands causing the old one to fall down on the floor. The Gimaelic, quick to finish his opponent off by slamming the heavy sack of rice on to the old man's head.

"Bu!" The old man's last words was those before the crushing weight of the sack smashed to his head shedding him off of this mortal coil instantly.

As the Gimaelic looked on to the grisly scene he made with a sadistic smiled. But his tongue tasted that his mouth took a cut during the scuffle. Getting handful of rice from his newly acquired sack, he rubbed his face with the rice. The blood he shed was absorbed by the rice turning the white grains into light red.

"Enjoying Earth aren't you Ybor?" High King Gewis suddenly walked in.

Brushing off blood from his mouth with his arm, Ybor saluted and hailed his king.

"Yes, my lord, its a good thing for me to levy the 'colonists' of Baizan to bolster your strength. I heard my little brother will be going there right now. I can't wait to see Osgar again."  Ybor replied.

"Yeah, Boyar Vlado was so kind to help me out. Even though we had some.... problems back then. But pah! That's 300 years ago. I hope he is doing ok. I heard he would wonder off alot like my son's bodyguard Ulrich. Easy to lose that bastard in a crowd."

"Uhm, where is he? I haven't seen him." Ybor said shrugging his shoulder.

"A F*** he is doing something stupid again isn't he?!" Gewis yelled.

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The PLA were rallying there forces in the center of Shanghai. Tanks, APC's and elite soldiers were scrambling to their feet in the defense of China's most important economic center.

"I can believe that I am saying this. But we need to hold out until the Japanese can send their reinforcements and there new weapon." The PLA General said to his subordinates.

"Sir! We got an Alien just near us!" Said a scout who suddenly interrupted the Chinese military meeting.

"What? They broke through the 1st lines already?" the PLA General asked.

"No, they are saying they haven't seen any of them yet. I think he... uhm it.... snuck around behind."

"Just one? And he is just right in the middle of our defenses? Why haven't you killed him yet?" said a PLA lieutenant

"The men are scared, I can't explain why. You should look for yourself." The scout said with a scared voice of a 10 year old boy on a roller coaster ride.

They generals, commanding officers and other military officials walked outside to investigate this Alien Lone Wolf.

What they saw was hundreds of their soldiers pointing there guns, cannons and bazookas at a single man. Unlike the reports of the description of the raiders being wearing simple wool shirts with 'magic amulets' that makes them immune to bullets and wielding rather unimpressive spears, axes and occasionally a sword, this Alien was wearing armor of the same metal type that was used during the Tokyo attack. The PLA commander now realised why his men are afraid to shoot the man. The Alien was covered head to toe with blood and ashes. He was colored red and with linings of gold adorning his armor. To 'Top' it off, his helmet had 'wings' on his helmet like a Teutonic Knight. He was big and strong looking since he was about 6'5 feet tall and less than a meter wide shoulder to shoulder. He wielded 2 weapons, an axe and a sword, both of which with terrifying serrated edges that had a fresh tasting of blood staining the steel in crimson. But most menacing of all was that he had around his belt, decaying severed heads of people he must have personally slew.

(http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/warhammer40k/images/a/aa/WE_Berserker.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130102081531)

(Basically he is like the Khorne Berserker from Warhammer 40k)




"RRAAAGGGHHH!!!! Too easy.....I expect more....I deserve a challenge!" The menacing man yelled.  His eyes grow very brightly with Red Dust indicating he is one of the Gimaelic's 'Demonic Masters' or so says every news outlet in Earth after the Tokyo Raid.

The PLA commander grabbed the microphone hoping to communicate with the Broken Lord.

"Who are you? What are you doing here? Why are you attacking us?" He tried to ask.

"*Inhales* I am Boyar Vlado of Tuniki and I want to please my God! You make excellent..... SACRIFICE....." He said demonically.

"Kāihuǒ!" the Commander ordered his men to fire. The PLA forces shot there guns, tank cannons, artillery and all the heavy ordinances at the Red Broken Lord but he just stood there unfazed.

"Pathetic! I will show you.....TRUE POWER!" Vlado pridefully yelled.

He charged towards the PLA taking in all of the gunfire as if it was nothing.

He sank his sword into the torso of hapless soldier and with a flick of his finger, the sword suddenly activated to reveal it was no ordinary custom sword that you would tell a blacksmith to make for you. It was a Chainsaw Sword! Its serrated edges suddenly began to move around the blade. It guttted the man spilling blood all over the concret streets of Shanghai. It scared even the most elite of the PLA soldiers as Boyar Vlado frenzied his way to the PLA leaders.

"Protect the HQ untill NATO arrives!" The PLA commander yelled.

Boyar Vlado whirling dervished the Earth Soldiers with ease spilling their blood all over the streets painting the roads red. No matter howmany Tank Shells he took, grenades pierced or bullets absorbed, Vlado stood like a fortress yet moved as smooth as silk.

"I AM INVINCIBLE!" He yelled.

Then he was suddenly surrounded by hundreds of PLA... yet if he had a body, he would have smirked, expecting a decent challenge of his skills.

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Ybor and Gewis ran through the now burning and ruined skyscrapers of Shanghai. They had just gotten word that several Sebharii's and other Gimaelics report that 'Angels of Death' are causing havoc and slowing down the looting and pillaging of the Chinese city.

"Ok we are in the big towering tree with a ball skewered on it. (Oriental Pearl Tower)" Gewis spoke to Ybor

"They should be around here som---- look out!" Ybor pushed Gewis to the ground, barely dodging a missile intended for him.

Then the 'Angel's of Death' revealed themselves. They had rocket powered (wings) on there backs, a laser katana and a rocket launcher attached to their shoulders. One of them who was wearing a golden colored helmet looked like he was the leader. He and his squad of 20 'Angels' landed on the ground surrounding Gewis, his men and Ybor.

"Alien Scum! The people of Tokyo shall be avenged!" The leader 'Angel' said.

Gewis felt enraged that he was caught in an ambush. His hand glowed white and unstably shake as he straggled back up.

"Your hand!"Ybor exclaimed.

"You want to fight me? THEN LETS GO!" Gewis yelled charging toward's the 'Angels' with his hands still unsheathed.

The 'Angels' countered charged Gewis with their weapons locked towards the warlord.

Gewis hand was just about to explode with Dust when he finally unleashed a blinding white blade from his hand! The light of Gewis 'Exalted Blade' shined as bright as the sun on a summer noon as it burned straight through the armor of the 'Angels' knocking them all back.

"What is this? What kind of witchcraft is this?" 'Angel Lead' asked, he was surprised that he gravely underestimated the Gimaelic.

"He he.... Got this from my wife. Now DIE!" Gewis slashed his 'Exalted Blade which easily cut through the armor of the 'Angels'. Each slashed cut through an 'Angel' killing him or fatally wounding him. Such power seemed godlike to the Earthlings.

"DIE! DEMON!" 'Angel' Lead said raising his laser Katana. But Gewis kicked the 'Angel' knocking him face first to the ground.

At the back of the Angel was a familiar looking flag that Gewis remembered from earlier. It was the great big red dot in the middle of a white canvas flag of Japan. It had seem that Japan has been technologically evolved quickly after the Tokyo attack. But still in the middle of a fight, Gewis stepped on the back of the Angel's leaders and began to pulling the rocket powered wings.

"Trying to avenge the deaths of your people, how noble of you. But alas! *Pulls left wing* You are proven wanting!" Gewis boasted while pulling one of the wings off. The 'Angel' leader screamed in pain as if a part of his body was ripped out violently.

"And now, your world will burn!" Gewis yelled out then ripped the other wing off. The 'Angel' yelped before passing out from all the pain.

Gewis inhaled the air after the exertion from using 'Exalted Blade'. He looked on to see that a large group of Earthlings were witnessing the whole fight happen and he saw the terror in there eyes that he defeated the best of Earth's defenders. They all ran away screaming as Gewis was left alone with the corpses of the Japanese 'Angels' and his men.

"It seem's  the Earthlings are trying to fight back. Yet they failed." Ybor walked forward with a few bruises from the fight.

"Impale there corpses and place the poles on the road. Make them fear us." Gewis ordered.

"As you--- hey look over there." Ybor pointed up to the sky. Gewis looked up and saw Helicopters with NATO and UN signs flying above them heading towards the city center.

"They seem to be in a rush." Ybor commented.

"Do you think they are going too.... Vlado! you bumbling idiot!" Gewis ran with Ybor and a split group of his men following him.

 
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Violence.....

Violence was a word most Earthlings don't like to see. Yet the Gimaelics revel in bloodshed. A prime example is Boyar Vlado of Tuniki. He is an exiled Gimaelic Nobleman who is infamous for his hot temper. A firm devotee of Red Dust and an admirer of Samhane Haligtide (Rena), Vlado dual wields a serrated axe and a Chainsaw sword native to the island chain he is exiled to of Baizan. The Chainsaw sword was used to shed as much blood as possible to power up Vlado's Red Dust Powers. He is very good with manipulating the inner fluids of a living thing especially blood. His eyes glowed redder even more as he slew another PLA soldier.

"GUT YOU! I GUT YOU ALL!" He yelled sadistically. He was running around the streets of Shanghai killing every person he looked like, soldier and civilian a like.

"What are you!?!" a PLA soldier asked before his body was sawed off from his waist by Vlado's Chainsaw sword. He grabbed the top half of the man and threw him down to the ground. Then with the Broken Lord's crushing weight, smashed his foot on the head of the soldier releasing an explosion of brain mush and blood.

"I am the Pride of Samhane!" He yelled like he was saying an oath of loyalty to his goddess.

As he walked away from the corpse, Vlado soon realised that he was now surrounded by the remnants of the PLA garrison.

"Kill him!" one of them yelled.

They all charged straight at the Broken Lord knowing that there bullets are no use to him. But charging straight towards him recklessly was just what Vlado want them to do. He raised his arm forward and he began to concentrate his Red Dust powers. His eye sockets glowed to the darkest shade of Red as he unleashed his Dust Magics at the soldiers.

Left, right behind and infront of him. The PLA soldiers bodies explode with blood. Some exploded by having there torsos explode like a soda pop while others vomited out blood before writhing down to the concrete floor dying.

"Yes.... BLOOD.....BLOOD.....DEATH.....BLOOD...... HAHAHAHAHA!!!" Vlado laughed, he must have personally slew about 100,000 thousand men today and he will surely gain the credit of everyone back in Baizan.

Then suddenly behind him a strong gust of pushing winds was felt behind him. He turned around to see several Chinook helicopters dropping US Navy Seals,  British SAS, Chinese Special forces, JSDF soldiers and they were shocked to see the grisly scene.

"I will KILL you..... Just like them.....then..... your blood shall help me ASCEND....to GODHOOD..... *points Chainsaw sword at the enemy soldiers* my mistress will be pleased with you blood, WORM!" He said.

Those words alone were enough to scare the elite soldiers so much that they all ran back to their Chinook copters with Vlado hot on their heels.

Despite running as fast as he can (and slaying a couple of them as he did) he wasn't able to catch them as the helicopters flew away.

"COME HERE AND DIE YOU COWARDS!" Vlado yelled at the sky as the helicopters became miniscule as distance was greater with every second pass.

Vlado threw a tantrum as he kicked, screamed and cut random objects as he still felt unsatisfied of the number of people he slew.

"Vlado!" A voice rang from the distance. It was Gewis and Ybor.

"GEWIS!!!" Vlado ran towards Gewis now intending to kill him and his own countrymen just to satisfy his bloodlust. But Gewis was anticipating something like this since he brought Gimaels most infamous serial killer to Earth. With the use of his Dust Magics, Gewis formed a magic trap in the form forcefield of a half bubble to imprison Vlado where no one can come in or out. 

"Rrrraagghh!!! You lied Gewis, I should just kill you right now!" Vlado angrily said.

"Well you keep killing them so much that they ran away because they don't want to fight you." Gewis tried to reason with Vlado

"They are all cowards! They don't know what it feels like to have their blood spilled out. I am still HUNGRY!" Vlado head became more irrational by the second.

"Look Boyar, maybe you can blow off some steam by destroying some buildings with me." Ybor offered a solution to Vlado

"No, they don't bleed like human scum do. I might as well poke your eyes so hard the bleed out of your sockets. Then I will squish your head like a grape and wet my hands on your blood!" Vlado yelled at Ybor

Just as Gewis could get more frustrated, one of the soldiers he brought came back with news.

"My Lord! The enemy have regrouped and they dug into a theater! Shall we finish them off?"

"Yes, take me with you. See Vlado? Theres more people to kill now. Lets go." Gewis dissipated the forcefield imprisoning Vlado.

"Move quickly! Or else I kill you!" Vlado said following Gewis with Ybor and the other Gimaelics behind the berserker Broken Lord.

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(Ju Jingyi POV)

(https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/08/ff/2c/08ff2c857d0cf713702449ae8db40a9b.jpg)

Ju Jingyi had an average morning today.

It all started just like any week day for the SNH48 ace, wake up, shower, eat breakfast and go to the Theater at the corner of Jianxing Road (I consulted Google maps and that is where the theater is) and practice her singing and dancing skills. After coming up in 2nd place in the Chinese Senbatsu last year, Kiku-chan or her nickname among the 48 girls fans was now more determined to win Center position in the next Senbatsu.

But today was not going to be an average they. First there were news reports, the blaring noises of sirens coming from the People's Fire Brigade and police force, explosions and people coming into the theater with wounds. She tried to help her fellow countrymen by keeping them calm and applying first aid but soon more people rushed in. And by people, I mean injured PLA soldiers and their still unscathe comrades.

"Wǒ chūxiě!"
"Wǒ bùxiǎng sǐ diào!"
"Wǒ de tuǐ!" So yelled the people around her.

Some of the people she tried to help died a few minutes later traumatizing the SNH girls of the horrors of war. The Alien menace looks like they can't be stopped by even an alliance of all of Earth's militaries with her country China at the forefront.

"We need more bandages. I will go out and get some." Ju Jingyi volunteered herself.

"Ok, be quick I don't want another person to die in here." Said the theater's manager Jianjun said while using some traditional Chinese medicinal herbs on the wounds of the injured.

But as Kikuchan walked out of the doors of the theater she immediately saw a horde of Gimaelic raiders closing in on the theater.

"Human Scum! I will have your head on my waist!"
"The girl's ass is mine!"
"My blade is itching to cut you open!" Said the Gimaelic raiders.

Her nation's army who were patrolling the perimeter of the theater when they saw the Gimaelic Raiders and began to open fire at them. Ju quickly ran back inside to a now even more terrified crowd.

"We are all going to die!" one of them panicked.

"Calm down! We need to keep calm. They only just want us to panic." Jianjun stood up. He was like a father to Ju since her father left her mother before she decided to become an Idol. The 2 bonded like father and daughter with Jianjun always protecting her and giving her life advice for her outside Idol life like a Confucian scholar. She and the other SNH girls can rely on him for help.

Then the doors suddenly began to make shaking vibrations and noise.

"Heave! Heave! Heave!" a Gimaelic sounding voice was heard. They must have overpowered the PLA soldiers and now the people in the theater are next. Some of the people inside the theater and the PLA who were fortified there placed themselves behind the door to counter the Gimaelic pushes.

Ju Jingyi with her weak frame hid behind the ticket counter hiding from the carnage and violence that was ensuing.

"Geh raus! Geh raus!" the Gimaelic voices shouted. Then just as it began, the pushing and heaving stopped.

For awhile, both Jianjun and Ju Jingyi were relieved for a moment.

"We need to get out of here as soon as we can." Jianjun said holding out his hand to Ju Jingyi. But as she held her adopted father's hand, great flames appeared behind him. Feeling the heat behind his back, he knelt down with Ju Jingyi and shielded her from the infernal storm.

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"There! No time wasted Im a genius ain't I?" Vlado said while carrying the honeycomb shaped grenade launchers. He resourcefully grabbed them from the wings of one of their raiding ships. The incendiary grenades burned through the doors with ease and the theater was like the iron boxes that they would put prisoners into and burn it.

"Ok lads, scavenge as much as you can carry and get back to the ship. We are out of here. My lord, you seemed rather calm." Ybor said

Gewis was looking at the burning theater seeing it slowly crumble. As he observed the exterior he saw that the banner ontop of the theater said "SNH48".
'48', where did he saw that before? It felt familiar to him, but he just can't remember. Gewis turned around, heading back to the ship when he heard the sounds of footsteps behind him. He pulled out his seax and turned around to see who was behind him.

It was the charred up young girl. Her face was burny and her eyes were swollen shut. Her white dress had ashes staining them and she looked so weak and pitiful at her state. The girl fell down into the arms of the High King of the Gimaelics and touched the face of his helmet/head.

Then he remembered something from his past that he wished to forget as if the memories of 'that day' played through his head.


(Flashback)

About 1700 years ago...

Gewis was in a cathedral-like building and it was on fire. He was carrying on his white robed cladded human woman who was lying down on the floor, she was pregnant and her abdomen where the baby should be was bleeding.

"Promise me Gewis....take care of Rain....oric.... for me....." She begged to Gewis. Her bleeding hand held his face. A sad smile and several tears were expressed on her face.

"Yes...Sophia...... I .....But how will they....." Gewis said before he was interrupted by Sophia.

"He is destined for great things my love......It doesn't matter if he is half Human and Broken Lord. What matters is WHO he WILL BE...... Not what he is....." Sophia told Gewis.

Gewis was saddened by seeing Sophia and their hybrid child both dying in there arms. But he knows that he could only save his son and Sophia know this well.
Gewis, mustering all of his Dust Arcane power, collected the soul of his unborn child from Sophia's womb and gently laid her down. With the soul of the future of his nation literally at the palm of his hands. Gewis looked down to his wife, friend, teacher, advisor and greatest woman he had ever known slowly succumbing to her wounds.

"Avenge US ALL...." Sophia said with her dying breath.

Gewis then heard knocking at the door, it was his enemies. He quickly turned around and ran not before looking one last time at Sophia.

(End Flashback)

Gewis stares down at the dying girl on his arms.

"No... I am not going to relive the same mistakes I have made again." Gewis said to the girl.

He held out his palm on top of the burnt girl's charred face and healed her 3rd degree burns and wounds. The girl suddenly inhaled and shook from the grasps of his hands.

"Fùqīn shì wǒmen sǐle?" the woman said in the Chinese tongue which Gewis doesn't understands.

"Shh, miss its ok, your ok now. Im here to help you." Gewis said to the girl.

"I ...am....blind.... I can't see...." The girl said when she felt her eyes can't open to see who her savior was.

"Its ok, I can help you....I.... remember something like this long ago....I don't want it to happen again." Gewis said before raising the girl with his hands in a lover's carry.

He then walked to the ramp of a now ready-to-take-off ship. His men noticed he was carrying a barely alive girl but wouldn't dare question him.

"Hey, lady, What's your name?" Gewis asked the girl.

"Ju Jingyi xiansheng. Thank you whoever you are. Are we going to a helicopter?" the girl asked.

"Uhm...yeah....with wings. I can take you to someone who can help you, you have my word and dying breath." Gewis vowed.


They entered the ship and then the ramp closed. The ship rose off the ground and too off leaving a ruined, burning and looted Shanghai and a Disarray UN forces defeated.

(END)


I have decided to add Ju Jingyi of SNH48 to my story! I don't see any SNH48 fanfics in this forum so I would like to pioneer them starting with the Kanna Hashimoto of China (or as said by this Rocket News article: http://en.rocketnews24.com/2014/11/15/the-familiar-looks-of-once-in-four-thousand-year-chinese-idol-have-japanese-netizens-talking/ (http://en.rocketnews24.com/2014/11/15/the-familiar-looks-of-once-in-four-thousand-year-chinese-idol-have-japanese-netizens-talking/))

Osgar has a brother but with a past I will detail to you when the Gedriht goes to Baizan Island.


And introducing another Psychopath of Gimael : Boyar (Prince) Vlado of Tuniki. He is a berserker and devoted apostle of Samhane Haligtide (who SPOILER ALERT is Rena being used as an avatar) Some 'bloody' crazy stuff is gonna happen when these 2 meet.


And I just hinted on the mysterious past of Rainoric and Gewis..... If you like to be a theorists pls say your theory in the comments below.


PLS like, subscribe and comment They help me alot with just the support alone.

 :hip smile:



Plus heres what Vlado was inspired from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpKN-U1-bWk (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpKN-U1-bWk)

Oh Geki! I want you to fight Vlado next!

(Ruka the truce is off! Commence the RP war again!)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 12, 2016, 06:34:08 PM
*click*

*click* *click*

Ruka: *eyes widen* Oh, you done it now.

Geki: Hehehehe! *walks out from the shadows* I'm back~
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on January 12, 2016, 06:48:03 PM
Me: *Facepalms* Let's go Churi... I've had enough....

Churi: Un... *Follows*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: hackata48 on January 13, 2016, 06:59:58 AM
I just finished my chapter index at the beginning of this thread.

I think there's a glitch, I see them repeat themselves. Is something wrong?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2016, 02:08:39 PM
Geki: Hehehehe... ne.. okotteru? *she says while biting her nails*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: hackata48 on January 13, 2016, 03:17:28 PM
If it is about the glitch kind of... but Vlado...

"Master! I have personally slayed a leader of a group of people that sin gravely. I think you would call them ISIS. I spilled the blood of their pathetic excuse of an army and taken the head of their leader." Boyar Vlado knelt down to Geki and presented to her a severed head.



Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2016, 03:36:20 PM
*Geki picked up the severed head and laughed* This guy must've been goddamn weak! Hahahahahahaha!

You.. you're strong.. hehehehe.. hahahahaha..! You're covered in blood, too. You look as red as a rose... or a bloody battlefield.. Hahahahahahaha!

Ruka: G-Geki, what's gotten into you suddenly?

Geki: Hehehe.. this man.. he is a ruthless killer... *she then gave a dark glare and suddenly grabbed Vlado's neck, strangling him*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: hackata48 on January 13, 2016, 03:50:26 PM
"Master... you do realise I don't need to breathe. Im like you! Well you were like me. A Red Broken Lord but now you posses body of Earth Human. Why? Aren't they weak?" Vlado asked.

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2016, 03:53:58 PM
*Geki tilted her head, confused*

*She silently started biting her nails again*

Ruka: *looks over at Vlado* You have to forgive Geki. She's been through some things in her past and it kinda... you know. *points at head*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: hackata48 on January 13, 2016, 04:02:34 PM
"Geki? But your name is Samhane Haligtide! The first of the Red Broken Lords and the shroud of blood that judges the sinful. You personally slew 10,000 heretics with one move of your Dust arcane powers! Have you forgotten what you were after the Magistrates made you sleep in that mausoleum for millennia? I am Boyar Vlado of Tuniki! I am a follower of your work mistress and I am the pride a teacher has to a student when the student exceeded his master. I exclaim up to Himmel when I slew a thousand men when I was in China 'I am the Pride of Samhane! Please as your devoted follower, I wish to be your apprentice. For there is still much I want to learn from you. How you judged the sinful and cleanse the universe by wetting the very ground the once stood alive with their crimson gold." Boyar Vlado knelt down and offered his Chainsaw sword to show respect.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2016, 06:53:27 PM
*Geki grabbed the chainsaw sword and looked at it*

*She looked at Vlado and got a sinister grin on her face*

Geki: Hehehehe! Hahahahahahaha!

Ruka: Geki, what are you planning to do?! O_O"

Geki: ....Break! Break everyone! *she laughed louder and more maniacally, raising the sword to Vlado's head and preparing to slash*

Ruka: No! *pushes her away, gets a cut on her arm* Argh.. Gekikara, stop!

*Geki's not listening, the spice has taken over*

Geki: Hahahahahahaha! *slashes the sword in the air, she cuts down a large tree with the sword* Hahahahahahahahaha!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on January 13, 2016, 07:13:08 PM
Churi: THAT'S IT! *Readies her crossbow*

Me: Churi, shut it. If it's want they to keep doing, let them be.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2016, 07:42:24 PM
Ruka: Hold on, Churi! This is your friend and senpai, remember! You can't shoot a freaking bow and arrow at her!

*Meanwhile, Gekikara runs away and goes on a rampage*

Ruka: CRAP!!! *runs off to find her* GEKI!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on January 13, 2016, 09:03:46 PM
Churi: *Ceases fire and looks at Gekikara in the distance* That's why I wanted to shoot in the first place...

Michael (me) : Churi, there are somethings that you have to stop and think about.

Churi: Not when that something is when your closest friend and senpai is 99% likely to go into her demonic mode and rampage everywhere.

Michael: I know, but... *Thinks* Oh crap...

*Both see Gekikara tearing down an old wooden hut*

Churi: I'm going to go do something... *Readies her crossbow again*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2016, 11:19:53 PM
Ruka: Uh, guys?! I wouldn't-- *Gekikara just set fire to the hut* Nvrmind. *runs off*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: hackata48 on January 18, 2016, 12:41:29 AM
So among all of the created OC's I made, who do you like the most and why?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (new side story!)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 18, 2016, 02:16:28 AM
So among all of the created OC's I made, who do you like the most and why?

Hmmm...... Rainoric. I think he's really starting to connect with human culture the most out of everyone. Through Sakura. ;)
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (Pinterest)
Post by: hackata48 on January 18, 2016, 05:10:15 AM
I made Pinteres account and I have a board of Barbarian's Cherry Blossom. I post my ideas there and I won't mind you seeing them.

(Plus if you ever want to make fanart you can use the pictures I pinned as reference)

https://www.pinterest.com/hackata48/ (https://www.pinterest.com/hackata48/)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (Pinterest)
Post by: hackata48 on January 20, 2016, 03:43:06 PM
So we have
SakurRain (a budding 'young' romance)
ChuGar (Double Tsundere Rivalry!)
Milky-Bel (Forbidden Love (which will escalate very quickly... you will be shock what I will make Miyuki get.... its going to get bumpy...hehehehehe)

and now.....

Wulfgar will protect a giraffe for it is his duty so! (If you know who I mean)

Plus Baizan is more than just an Island....

Think Macau, Australia when first colonized by the British and Amsterdam combined.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (Pinterest)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 20, 2016, 04:30:07 PM
So many good pairings! >w<

A giraffe? Who's a gi--OOOOOOOOOOOOH!!! OwO
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (Pinterest)
Post by: hackata48 on January 24, 2016, 02:33:14 PM
(This is a non-canon drabble (so Im going to F*** around with my own story)

It was a rather boring day in Guaita as High King Gewis was busy tutoring Rainoric on Administrative processes.

They were just about to finish the tutorials when a messenger arrives.

"My Lord! An urgent message. The nature of the letter requires all of the Nobles to be heard." The messenger quickly said before passing the envelope to Gewis. It had the Eadwulf royal seal formed from the base of black wax. Black wax seals indicates it is diplomatic in nature for the letters.

"Indeed, summon the Nobles!" Gewis ordered his guards.

"At once my Lord." They saluted.

-------------------------

"So who is this Akimoto Yasushi person you keep talking about with Haruka and Minami?" Rainoric asked Sakura. They were both walking down a corridor which leads to the Gathering Hall.

"He was my friend back in Japan when I was still an Idol. He would mentor me and schedule my day to day training and promotional events." Sakura replied.

"Someone like Eslek?" Rainoric asked.

"Yeah but not a golden ghost thing. More like, a 2nd father."

They both pushed the doors of the Gathering Hall open and went inside.

All of the Nobles of Gimael were in attendance today and are anxiously awaiting the hearing of the contents of the letter.

Sakura and Rainoric sat down on what available space there is. They also noticed that Osgar, Wulfgar and Ulrich (plus his father) were in attendance and were sitting not too far away from them. Sakura waved hello to them in which they waved back.

Then High King Gewis stood in the center of the room. He had a seax and the envelope on his two hands.

"Men of Gimael! Here me! I have a letter from those Earth. And it contains the Black Seal as this is the reason why I summon all of you today so urgently." Gewis said to the audience.

Immediately there was a minor uproar among the Nobles with some insults being hurled.

"If its another 'Please return our people' message, they could all choke on pig's blood and toss themselves off a cliff!"

"It better not be from that pathetic 'UN' people I heard are so 'powerful'. They can't even kill a Geldrius if their lives depend on it!"

"Burn that letter! I wish to not hear more from them."

"Silence! Allow me for this moment to open the damn letter." Gewis shouted displaying a great level of authority which silenced the Nobles.

Gewis punched his knife through the paper envelope creating a hole that he could poke his finger in to tear it open safely. As he opened the envelope, the audience (and Rainoric and Sakura) leaned closer.

"Dear Sakura Miyawaki,

It's me Akimoto Yasushi, I would like to announce that you are going to be the Center of AKB48's 43rd single.
Please if your reading this. Most of the girls are still safe and sound back here in Tokyo. I wait for your response.

From your Producer and Mentor,
Akimoto Yasushi                                                                                    " Gewis quoted the letter.

The Nobles were confused at the very nature of the letter. Rainoric was scratching his head.
What the hell is that? Center? Single? And that Akimoto person Sakura told him about, why was it in a diplomatic letter?

But unlike everyone in the room, Sakura was shocked, very shocked. She walked up to Gewis and asked him to give her the letter. Gewis complied and passed the piece of paper.

Sakura examined the letter and realised this is indeed genuine. There were signatures from all of her friends back in Earth, from Haruppi, Sashiko, Mayuyu, Yuihan and several more. She couldn't contain her tears of joy as she dashed outside to the cold Gimaelic tundra.

Rainoric thinking Sakura was hurt followed her.

-------------------------

Sakura was festive and ecstatic. She jumped around and smiled at everyone as she hopped towards her friends Paruru and Takamina.

"Hey Sakura-tan! Your happy today? Is the Noble's Assembly finished already?" Paruru asked.

"Yes and you won't believe who wrote this letter." Sakura cheerfully said and passed the letter to Takamina.

Paruru and Takamina both hold the letter and read every word of it.

"Your the Center?!? Wow! Congratulations!" Takamina hugged Sakura with Paruru joining in.

Rainoric soon followed by and saw the 3 girls hugging each other.

"Sak, you were running out of there crying. Did the letter made you sad or something?" He asked.

Sakura pushed her friends aside and turned to Rainoric.

"Iya Iya, Im going to be Center for AKB's 43rd single! Im happy, not sad." Sakura said hugging Rainoric.

"Center? 43rd single? What's that?" Rainoric said still confused over Sakura's change in emotions.

"In AKB48, we release a new single every 3 to 4 months. A single is basically a song. In every song, there is a 'Center'. She gets to be in front of everyone in the group and gets the center of attention." Sakura explained.

"Uhm, meaning?" Rainoric said still again confused.

"Im going to be like those main characters from plays. But instead of plays, its a song. Im going to be the center of everyone's attention as I sing and dance in front of them. There, do you get it now?" She rephrased her previous sentence.

The gears were moving again in the vast Dust Consciousness of what the closest thing to a brain for a Broken Lord of Rainoric as he soon realised his friend (and significant other) Sakura is now shooting for the stars.

"Thats great!" He said.

Rainoric lifted up Sakura into the air with his strong arms and they plus Paruru and Takamina laughed at Sakura's Centering.

Wulfgar, Osgar and Ulrich soon came to their master at first concerned over why he chased forth his secret human romantic partner.

"Master what's happening? What is the meaning of that letter?" Wulfgar asked.

"It is a meaning to celebrate Wulfgar! Sakura is going to be famous! 'Tower', gather my Gedriht. Osgar, get 3 of your fattest sheep and kill it. And Ulrich, your getting ribs tonight!" He yelled happily to his bodyguards. Rainoric, hugged Sakura tighter knowing full well that Sakura is blooming even more beautifully.



Congratulations Miyawaki Sakura for getting the Center position of AKB's 43rd single.


The Gimaelics are feasting and singing songs of your triumph.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (Sakura Center)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 24, 2016, 03:08:10 PM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! *happy* :D :D :D
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on January 26, 2016, 03:48:18 PM
The Next Chapter is up!

The Gedriht has Cabin Fever!

Takamina is a Drill Sergeant

I rip a scene from Pirates of the Caribbean 

and a giant sea monster!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/19


Pls review and like!


(Next Chapter will come slower than usual, next weekend I have to go to an overnight field trip.)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Party Hard and Lobby Softly (Sakura Center)
Post by: jubethehare on January 26, 2016, 04:00:38 PM
Yo, sorry for being late. I just read it to chapter 6 and overall it's been GREAT.  :lol:
There's many OCs so it took some time for me to memorize them, but the concept and story are nice.

And the massacre was very refreshing for me, thank you very much. Ha ha~
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on January 30, 2016, 12:15:50 PM
Other than Rainoric,

Which of my OC's do you like the most.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 30, 2016, 01:11:40 PM
Wulfgar. :3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on January 30, 2016, 01:12:14 PM
Wulfgar. :3

Why?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 30, 2016, 01:14:40 PM
Wulfgar. :3

Why?

He's a gentle giant. Especially towards Yuki now. X3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on January 31, 2016, 11:19:58 AM
In the next episode of BCB:

*insert epic pirate themed battle music*

Release the Kraken and

Takoyaki anyone?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on February 02, 2016, 03:40:17 PM
In the next part of my Story.....


The Gedriht will go to the Penal Colony of Baizan Island.

A place of vice where houses of every kind of pleasure and fetish is catered.

A place human garbage dump where Aurigans send their undesirables and breakers of the law

A place of mystery, where the cult of Red Dust resides where the hold various gruesome rituals (of the you know what im talking about kind)

A place of secrets, where stashes of unknown wealth can be found


and survey posted pls vote and give a reason why you vote.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on February 02, 2016, 05:05:14 PM
I voted for the Arc with Churi, Osgar and Gizzur just to see where Churi and Osgar's relationship ends up. But I was stumped as to my decision between them, Milky and Belasarius, and Rena, Paruru and Hayato.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on February 02, 2016, 05:07:49 PM
I voted for the Arc with Churi, Osgar and Gizzur just to see where Churi and Osgar's relationship ends up. But I was stumped as to my decision between them, Milky and Belasarius, and Rena, Paruru and Hayato.

So.... what do you want to see other than ChuGar?

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: Cometerz48 on February 02, 2016, 05:15:08 PM
I went for Rain and Saku .-.

Cause I start appreciating the effort you made on the two and looking forward to see more of them XD

I love all the development you have made so far with the story, balancing the OC as well as the girls to keep it on the track of the forum's purpose. Each pairings you have created might sounded or looked strange at first, but it turns out well as the storyline goes.

Looking forward for more, hoping for another touch of Osaka if you know what I'm talking about XD

Please make it Ume baba onegai~~~
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on February 02, 2016, 05:18:15 PM
Touch of Osaka? What are you talking about....



Where have you been for the past 5 months!?!?! I fought hypothermia on Europe....

Slapped Ruka in the face then John Cenad her booty.

Met AKB48 team 8.... for real.... they were cool..... I think one of them winked at me.

Fought Christmas fever!!!!


PS

Sup bro..... :hip smile:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: Cometerz48 on February 02, 2016, 05:25:18 PM
Touch of Osaka? What are you talking about....



Where have you been for the past 5 months!?!?! I fought hypothermia on Europe....

Slapped Ruka in the face then John Cenad her booty.

Met AKB48 team 8.... for real.... they were cool..... I think one of them winked at me.

Fought Christmas fever!!!!


PS

Sup bro..... :hip smile:

Heyhoo~

Pardon me for not turning my nose in front of anybody. Been busy with first semester of College (total hell I swear).

I see, the two of you have been having the fun around while I am away (only able to see, not comment though). I'm popping out now thanks to the semester break and my oshi's graduation announcement, I'm sticking out now to write a fic for her graduation.


So yeah... .-,
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on February 02, 2016, 05:26:36 PM
So what do you mean about the Osaka thing?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on February 02, 2016, 05:28:56 PM
So what do you mean about the Osaka thing?


He wants to see more NMB members, I think.

I'd like to see more Rena.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: Cometerz48 on February 02, 2016, 05:30:47 PM
So what do you mean about the Osaka thing?

Actually, now that I think about it, she's actually a Fukuoka. Man, Fukuoka sure has lots of beauties... .-.

I'll let you figure that out, fufufufu....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : High Seas Attrition
Post by: hackata48 on February 09, 2016, 02:37:59 PM
Hello friends,

I want to assure everyone before or by this weekend, the new chapter will be up followed l8r by another Sakura's Journal.


I got caught up with some stuff recently, an overnight field trip and the launching of XCOM 2.

I recently made 3 of the AKB girls into soldiers. (Rena as a Psi Operative, Sakura as a grenadier and Takamina as a Medic Fire team leader.)



Plus I made some art for my story which I hope you will appreciate when I show them.
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 13, 2016, 05:13:37 PM
New Chapter of without any further delay!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/20

MONSTER KILLING!

EXPLOSIONS!!!

And Rainbows!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 14, 2016, 02:46:49 PM
In the next chapter of BCB:

Boyar Vlado: Stand and fight. *points sword at Rena*

Samhane/Rena: Let Paruru go you monster! *unsheathes scythe*

Vlado: No! She is too weak.... flawed! Like you!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 14, 2016, 02:54:41 PM
^Oh, Geki's gonna give a beatdown on him!

[Sorry I didn't comment earlier. I really loved that chapter! Rena has an amazing power, OMG! And the SakuRain scenes were cute, just like always~ <33333]
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 15, 2016, 09:23:46 AM
Sakura's Journal 3 is up!

Sorry if its short.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/21
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 16, 2016, 06:56:11 AM
Is Rainoric relatable and believable?

Say why?

And good news! the next chapter will come sooner than expected.

--------

Vlado: Engarde Rena!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 16, 2016, 02:33:02 PM
I would say yes. I like how he is very curious in interacting with humans like Sakura. X3

------

Geki: Hahaha! Vlado... okotteru? Hahahaha! *throws a punch*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 01:37:45 AM
New poll is up! Vote and give a reason why m8.

*wink*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 02:11:39 AM
Psychological, dark, twisted can make for good story. >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 02:13:38 AM
Psychological, dark, twisted can make for good story. >w<

Well may God forgive me cuz I am going to Mind rape Sakura really hard.

And Terminator armor is going to be a thing....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 02:22:46 AM
And Terminator armor is going to be a thing....

Terminator armor? wth is that?! XD
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 02:23:53 AM
(^ Separate question, since there is mind rape, will other things like memory alteration, mind control, or dream/nightmare battles also be involved? X3)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 03:19:26 AM
Yup.....

Mwhahahahahahahahaha.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 03:22:10 AM
And Terminator armor is going to be a thing....

Terminator armor? wth is that?! XD

Armor that will make Broken Lords even more ridiculously over powered.

And guess who is going to wear it....

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 03:24:57 AM
And Terminator armor is going to be a thing....

Terminator armor? wth is that?! XD

Armor that will make Broken Lords even more ridiculously over powered.

And guess who is going to wear it....

Me: *looks over at Rena*

Rena: *shrugs*

Is it Rena?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 03:27:06 AM
Here's a video what exactly Terminator armor is....

*badassery incoming! Prepare to froth!*

https://www.google.com.ph/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=intent://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DYROOgLD-wtU%23Intent%3Bscheme%3Dhttp%3Bpackage%3Dcom.google.android.youtube%3BS.browser_fallback_url%3Dhttp%253A%252F%252Fm.youtube.com%252Fwatch%253Fv%253DYROOgLD-wtU%3BS.android.intent.extra.REFERRER_NAME%3Dhttps%253A%252F%252Fwww.google.com.ph%3BlaunchFlags%3D0x8080000%3Bend&ved=0ahUKEwii2unE3_3KAhXiJKYKHRv0CLIQjjgIGjAA&usg=AFQjCNHq8rhqCm0-IsLwWLhxohN7TMqgWQ&sig2=0O5dhki4z12M7cs3GmS1Pw
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 03:46:24 AM
*jaw drop*

Uso desho?! WOW!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 03:56:32 AM
How do you like it?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 04:00:51 AM
How do you like it?

It's.... freaking.... awesome... O___O
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 04:30:53 AM
No its not Rena btw, she is already ridiculously over powered already with the blood magic.

Keep guessing...
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 02:23:47 PM
No its not Rena btw, she is already ridiculously over powered already with the blood magic.

Keep guessing...

Yeah, that makes sense...

Hmmmm... Takamina?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 02:25:14 PM
Nope...a male
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 03:03:54 PM
Nope...a male

Oh.

Hmmm... Wulfgar?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 03:04:51 PM
Nope...a male

Oh.

Hmmm... Wulfgar?

No...

Keep guessing.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 17, 2016, 03:07:22 PM
Nope...a male

Oh.

Hmmm... Wulfgar?

No...

Keep guessing.

Rain? If not, I give up! XD
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on February 17, 2016, 03:46:32 PM
If it's not Rainoric, then the only other two I can think of is Ulrich or Osgar...
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 05:12:01 PM
To mentally prepare you for what crazy things I did to Paruru (mwahwahhahahahahahahaha)

I shall say, one of my previous statements regarding who will wear the terminator armor is false....

Im an evil bastard ain't I?

*force feeds Churi and Takamina with chicken and sushi respectively*

IM EVIL!!!

But im almost done with the next chapter Blood Wish.

in the chapters next you will see more personalized character development for each person. That's why I chopped up everybody m8.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on February 17, 2016, 05:34:32 PM
It's not a male wearing the armor is it? I can only think of one other person...

Takamina doesn't mind sushi... or does she?

Churi will most definitely cry when she's force fed chicken...

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Giant and the Storm
Post by: hackata48 on February 17, 2016, 05:35:42 PM
Just wait and see.... who becomes a bigger badass MOFO.


Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 18, 2016, 02:52:41 PM
BLOOOD THE BEAUTIFUL BLOOD!!!!


The beginning of the Baizan arc of our story.

With duels!

Surgery and BLOOODD!!!!


Can Rena fight the intimidating mass murdered Boyar Vlado of Tuniki?

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/22
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 18, 2016, 08:15:05 PM
I love Rena here. She's so epic! X3

Samhane is kinda scary. Don't wanna mess with her! >_<

That duel between Rena and Vlado was beyond epic!

And I'm so happy Paruru's lungs were fixed.

And also... blood, blood, blood. lol

So much blood. XD

Anyways, this was a good chapter! Once again...

ALL HAIL RENA-HIME-SAMA!!!! GLORY TO SAMHANE-SAMA!!!! LONG LIVE GEKIKARA-SAMA!!!!

(^Cuz I had to. ^_^)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 19, 2016, 10:14:22 AM
Who wants to see a teaser for the next chapter??
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 19, 2016, 01:19:19 PM
Who wants to see a teaser for the next chapter??

MEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEEMMEMEEMEMEMEMMEMEMEMEEME!!!!!!!!! OWO
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 19, 2016, 04:23:23 PM
Sakura opened a book called 'the Revelations of the Endless'
"Chapter 286, before the Endless wiped each other out, several Endless hid their civilization's most deadliest weapons away from the Creation that turned all of its people against each other. These weapons were in fact children that held immense power and the hope that one day when they may inherit the broken world after milleniums of slumber. When the universe and all that is left of creating will need them most, they shall be reborn in holy fire and re take what was once theirs. They are called the Paladins, the Holy Warriors of the Endless, they are wrath, they are justice and they are the Guardians of Creation." Sakura recited the book.

"I heard that they found some 'Paladins' in an excavation site some time ago. But they were stolen by someone before anyone could record it. But it was just a rumor." Rainoric said.

"How can you steal 'a weapon' that is considered 'alive'? You told me that they are 'living weapons'." Sakura said.

"But they are sleeping. And I pray that this rumor of someone stealing the 'Paladins' is just a rumor." Rainoric replied.

"Hey Eadwulf! Where nearing the place." Belisarius said.

Rain, Belisarius, Miyuki and Sakura were hiking along a hidden path that would lead them to a doctor who can heal any wound. Rainoric was excited because he just heard that his father is waiting there for him too and couldn't wait to tell him stories of his adventures in Earth.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 20, 2016, 02:59:14 PM

"Facta, Non Verba"- The Paladin's Creed


(https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/DVHDtBiEEhVsd4WnNHPZF65yz2PF02qkzM1KEi5FSb9QbVZmAyUIyDWRQKdcrbcb1VWDi1Bcziw2FsktzvwcB9KkF_EiteWOIqb8wXJIfdHrJtHPX2FnQ_Ie9WChMsVrxarsAx0wwsH27K5zwz1HKr2jjHoXNRzjhcd2_13McdXwK9yf-zRTFPTRfUDGfW5J0sxMk6O4CxHz1rp4oAGLk8eVlpGS-doX84QqJpl95p1R0iL5_E_BkyoNlJ2Sw_0mdzlLbveCs90OGLOPUh6YWmkvLJ78BY8_FMdte77eoUPMB7lQA-lJho3SCvzaQTGjfY6ssIUU-KGH9FT83gKPxPcSoYXIS_N-sReM2ag9lHmZSF2j7m-T1tSF_XFWq3QMemLzurB9AaQhYT9LeRyjMfvsgi_E8YIalnqFv_tiLTu7ePNAjZe_L3GLK66vpmOOZdbW7-_sI9UHidXnRyuwrzTKcM-e5a8OXIMCDYCgtuXAO1JjpQKQzZfJ65hbXN2ln3d3FtmhjJl71NxBagsX14i4MfvZQ4YsSXj5uDH63g8wqi7X-v1Uug0sZD8voT3xsP-C=w1168-h657-no)


Here's another teaser of my next chapter *wink*

How do you like them???
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 20, 2016, 04:32:38 PM
Um... for some reason, I can't see them. XD
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 20, 2016, 04:39:09 PM
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-h-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xfl1/v/t1.0-9/12729356_972969206127237_5780061892850371261_n.jpg?oh=98884bbceb89693cadf8ead632320e3a&oe=576281A2&__gda__=1466312096_1c55bd99a1955d442152bf56931153c1)

hOW about now?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 20, 2016, 04:49:24 PM
Better.

And woah, they look cool! >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 24, 2016, 05:03:16 PM
In the next episode of BCB:

Rebel Scum!

An Idiot girl!!!

Zerg Rush!

And....


PALADIN ARMOR!!!!




(Will be out on the weekend)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 26, 2016, 02:14:28 PM
Whats more over powered than a Broken Lord especially if he is a Gimaelic?

A Broken Lord in

Paladin Armor!!!

(https://scontent-hkg3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xtl1/v/t1.0-9/12744565_976178689139622_2796678142800538264_n.jpg?oh=6481227344b52a17f3c921bdb502ecc6&oe=575C4706)

(https://scontent-hkg3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xtf1/v/t1.0-9/12800198_976178725806285_8420343728326234297_n.jpg?oh=ecb0c8f0c5d0431c8fcf6b6c04e70a7f&oe=5765A15E)


Reactions pls! I made them myself and they will play a pivotal role in my story!  :theking
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 26, 2016, 03:36:38 PM
WOW!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: hackata48 on February 26, 2016, 03:43:00 PM
WOW!

I can gurantee the next epic Chapter is tmrw at Saturday or friday if you live across the Pacific Ocean.

What do you think Ruka? Say it in coherent sentence.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Blood Wish
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 26, 2016, 03:53:39 PM
WOW!

I can gurantee the next epic Chapter is tmrw at Saturday or friday if you live across the Pacific Ocean.

What do you think Ruka? Say it in coherent sentence.

OK~

WOW, it looks freaking epic! The guy looks intimidating, like, "Don't mess with me!" XD
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Incursion in Enkeli Forge
Post by: hackata48 on February 27, 2016, 04:32:22 PM
Latest Chapter up!



Paladin Armor kills everything!


More violence!


Takamina stops a rebellion!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/23/

And here's a sneek peak of the next chapter starring Osgar, Ulrich and Churi.....


F*** you Airin.... (Hehehehehe You will know what I mean when you see the next chapter called the Skin Trade part 1 that means you Cockney)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Incursion in Enkeli Forge
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 28, 2016, 03:03:12 AM
"Takamina marched like a little toy soldier." Literally the cutest image in my head.

The Paladins look freaking cool! X3

Aw~ that sweet YukiMina moment :heart:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Incursion in Enkeli Forge
Post by: hackata48 on March 01, 2016, 09:38:06 AM
So today I saw some reviews that puts under the magnifying glass about bad stories and one of the things that make a bad story is plot holes making stories unrealistic and ridiculous.

So is there any plot holes in my story? I can fill them up if you spot them for me?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Incursion in Enkeli Forge
Post by: hackata48 on March 02, 2016, 03:51:53 PM
The next chapter will be up this weekend guys!



I warn you however this chapter will contain some very kinky stuff.


Plus sorry to any  Furayanagi fans out their, cuz Im going to make Airin and Churi do some sexy stuff.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Incursion in Enkeli Forge
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on March 02, 2016, 04:55:57 PM
The next chapter will be up this weekend guys!



I warn you however this chapter will contain some very kinky stuff.


Plus sorry to any  Furayanagi fans out their, cuz Im going to make Airin and Churi do some sexy stuff.

If it's to each other then I would be fine with it XD but I'm guessing it's not, considering the situation.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 03, 2016, 03:19:54 PM
New Chapter up!


Warning: Sexual References in this chapter.


Ardent Mages are BDSM fans.

Good News: We found more SKE girls!

Bad News: One is Black Dusted (Death Dust) and the just lost her virginity


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/24


Please comment what you think? of it?



Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 03, 2016, 08:04:04 PM
*jaw drop*

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My emotions are everywhere at the moment!

My God, those Ardent Mages are ruthless. How dare they! >_<

But holy ****... Jurina... Airi... that was... they were... she is.... O_____O (Still in shock)

This is getting so good, I can't wait!!! UPDATE SOON!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 06, 2016, 03:30:49 PM
Next Chapter is going to be a Sakura Miyawaki birthday special! With a little dash of Milky-Bel.


And everyone is still shocked of what happened last chapter amir8 m8's?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 06, 2016, 03:45:26 PM
The suspense is killing me!!! >_<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 06, 2016, 04:06:31 PM
http://wiki.endless-space.com/core/assets/videos/heroes/asaroenni-dzumalran.mp4 (http://wiki.endless-space.com/core/assets/videos/heroes/asaroenni-dzumalran.mp4)

(http://www.icomedia.eu/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/Endless-Space-2-Sophon-Lab.jpg)



Here is a preview of the next chapter. (Credits to Endless Space 2)


Where we find out the secrets of how the Gimaelics were able to achieve Space Flight.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 06, 2016, 04:42:29 PM
Woah! So cool!

Once again, all the suspense is killing me!!! >___<"
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 08, 2016, 03:32:49 PM
Fun facts!

Guaita is a name of an actual castle in San Marino. The castle has a great view of the entire country which is the reason why I named the castle where Rainoric lives since it overviews an entire city.

(http://www.sanmarinosite.com/sms_images/big/guaita_fil02_gall_big.jpg)



I based my characters off of different countries in central and eastern europe

Rainoric and Gewis: Germany (since they are based of the Saxons)

Osgar: Latvia (because of the sheep)

Leoferic Wieskirche: Poland (Winged Hussars)

Wulfgar: Lithuania (has a lot of forests making it a prime lumberjacking place)

Belisarius: Macedonia (Used to be part of the Roman Empire)

Eslek: Austria (Has many famous universities)

Miroslaw: Slovakia

Vlado: Romania (Dracula)




From now on I will translate whatever my OC's characters words.



And get well soon Sakura


Miroslaw: Come here my beautiful angel! I have a fresh pair of lungs with your name on it!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 08, 2016, 07:41:15 PM
Wow! So cool! I can't wait to hear about the others! :3

ARGH, HURRY AND UPDATE! I'm getting impatient! >_<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 10, 2016, 01:12:23 PM
Y'know, when I first saw the title "Skin Trade", I at first thought there would be a body swap somewhere. XD

Can you do a body swap chapter sometime? ;)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 10, 2016, 01:16:27 PM
Skin Trade is just the Sugar coated term for Prostitution.

And I'm gonna write something down.

You will be surprised what I just thought of right now.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 10, 2016, 01:31:59 PM
Skin Trade is just the Sugar coated term for Prostitution.

Yeah, I pretty much figured. lol

Quote
And I'm gonna write something down.

You will be surprised what I just thought of right now.

Ooh~ interesting! I really can't wait! I love body swap plots/episodes! >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 11, 2016, 10:02:59 AM
Guten Morgen peasants, this is Rainoric Eadwulf and I need to ask from you. What should I get Sakura on her birthday? I tried to gift her a severed head of someone she hates but Takamina said no.

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 11, 2016, 12:35:39 PM
Guten Morgen peasants, this is Rainoric Eadwulf and I need to ask from you. What should I get Sakura on her birthday? I tried to gift her a severed head of someone she hates but Takamina said no.

Um, a severed head is definitely a no-go!

Hmm... why don't you get her a necklace? :3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 11, 2016, 12:37:06 PM
*rummages through piles of stuff*

I can only find one with ears.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 11, 2016, 12:53:19 PM
*rummages through piles of stuff*

I can only find one with ears.

Then why don't you make one? Handmade gifts show that they're from the heart. Not literally, of course. lol

And no ears, please. Maybe instead.. flowers or pretty gemstones.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 11, 2016, 12:57:59 PM
*thinks*

I know!



*goes to Switzerland*


All right Hummies this is not a drill we are actually robbing you!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 11, 2016, 12:59:36 PM
*thinks*

I know!



*goes to Switzerland*


All right Hummies this is not a drill we are actually robbing you!

Me: *facepalms* Why rob a place? Aren't there any gemstones or flowers around here?

Geki: *humming Sakura no Shiori*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 11, 2016, 01:10:20 PM
Shut up and help rob these hummies!

I wonder what kind of stuff I can get from these guys.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 11, 2016, 01:12:44 PM
Shut up and help rob these hummies!

I wonder what kind of stuff I can get from these guys.

Me: *writes a letter* Me and Geki will be making flower jewelry while you do that. *makes it into paper airplane and sends it flying*

Geki: *still humming while making flower tiara and puts it on her head*

Me: Kawaii >//////<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 11, 2016, 03:38:48 PM
Maybe a hat?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 11, 2016, 06:22:47 PM
Maybe a hat?

I guess? XD

I just imagine a piece of jewelry would make a girl happy. X3
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 1)
Post by: hackata48 on March 17, 2016, 09:30:08 AM
Ulrich and Osgar said I should give Sakura some food.


To the Market!!!



-----------------

I am your king peasant you will be immune to Taxes for next months collection! Farewell peasant!


*walks away with a pork leg, puff pastries and wine*
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: hackata48 on March 17, 2016, 01:59:01 PM
New Chapter up!

we learn more of Dust.


Happy Birthday Sakura!


Belisarius gets a leg


and a puppy kisser just caused the zombie apocalypse.


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/26


Now will you excuse me.....


PALADINS!!! ASSEMBLE!!!!!


(https://www.games-workshop.com/resources/catalog/product/600x620/99120101133_Sternguard01.jpg)


(https://www.games-workshop.com/resources/catalog/product/600x620/99800101003_EmperorsChampionNEW_1.jpg)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 17, 2016, 06:39:13 PM
Holy sci-fi! We just went to the future! So cool! >w< (Well, not really, but still. lol)

Aw~ Rain got Sakura pastries (and a leg and cheese. :P) So sweet~ Literally. X3

*squeals* Miyuki is falling in love! So precious! >///<

The story of Dust's origins was cool!

Wait... WHAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!?!?!

Did Jurina... JURINA! Just cause... the zombie apocalypse! O_____O

Crap... Crap..! ..CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: *runs off*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: hackata48 on March 19, 2016, 01:54:52 PM
Sakura's Journal #4 is up!

Focus on the Red Broken Lords.


Blood....life....and creation is theirs to command!


(Will be a bit of delay for the next chapter as I am going to attend Holy Week)


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/27
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 19, 2016, 06:12:47 PM
(Will be a bit of delay for the next chapter as I am going to attend Holy Week)

What's Holy Week?

Nevermind, Michael told me. :P
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: hackata48 on March 22, 2016, 07:56:39 AM
To all subjects of Gimael both free and enslaved,

Rainoric and Gedriht are off to kill the Easter Bunny.

Decapitate it and dance on his corpse.


Brb.


(Taking a break for Holy Week)

"Sakura help hunt the Easter Bunny!"
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 22, 2016, 11:53:22 AM
Sakura: O___O You're gonna what?

Me: O___O You're gonna WHAT?!

Everyone: YOU'RE GONNA WHAT?!?!?!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: hackata48 on March 22, 2016, 01:08:11 PM
Osgar: Make a rabbit stew. And I'm going to personally bite off its tail and put its teeth down its throat, then butcher its family so I can make a new coat!

*drinks wine*

Rainoric: then I am going to steal all the eggs and serve it to Churi for April....


Wait.....

Rabbits lay eggs?


Ulrich: Wabbit Season!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 22, 2016, 05:36:45 PM
Osgar: Make a rabbit stew. And I'm going to personally bite off its tail and put its teeth down its throat, then butcher its family so I can make a new coat!

*drinks wine*

Rainoric: then I am going to steal all the eggs and serve it to Churi for April....


Wait.....

Rabbits lay eggs?


Ulrich: Wabbit Season!

Churi: What?! No, no, no! *on verge of tears* *goes to Rena for comfort*

Takamina: Rabbits don't even lay eggs!

Sakura: They aren't even real eggs!

Paruru: I won't wanna eat rabbit... *upset face*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: hackata48 on March 25, 2016, 04:18:41 PM
Most of Holy Week is done... so I can now continue working on my next chapter.



Meanwhile.....



I am thinking of adding another story that takes place within the same universe  as mine.

But instead of Auriga its going to happen on Earth with new Characters and more 48 and potentially some KPOP girls and other Jpoppers too.



(PS)


The Paladins vs North Korea,

The Question, how long will NK last?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 25, 2016, 04:30:18 PM
That sounds awesome!!! I can't wait for this! >w<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: hackata48 on March 27, 2016, 09:01:18 AM
I killed the Easter Bunny.....
Now we get all the Chocolates!


In other news,

MNL48 is going to be a thing!

I'm going to drink all the beer!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: hackata48 on March 29, 2016, 08:37:14 AM
Progress on next chapter going fairly smoothly but I got to balance my hobby and school since finals is next week.


In the meantime, what would you think would make a great theme song for my story?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Down the Rabbit hole
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 29, 2016, 02:18:41 PM
Hmm... Bokutachi wa Tatakawanai is a good one, since it was sung in the song.

Or... Guren no Yumiya suddenly comes to mind. XD

idk I can just imagine the theme would be very powerful and intense!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: hackata48 on March 30, 2016, 05:25:54 PM
A zombie army approaches our heroes!


Can they withstand the the hordes with the help of the Valiant Death Sworn?


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/28



New chapter is up! like, comment and subscribe!


I am going to write down a new story that will take place at the same time as BCB and it will be a mix of a journal and a narrative story.

details will come out soon.

Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 31, 2016, 04:50:13 PM
O__________O

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!

JURINA NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

This is bad! This is REALLY bad!!! >__<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: hackata48 on March 31, 2016, 04:52:58 PM
Rainoric: Rena!
Kick her ass before she gets the idea of having Zombies open doors for her!


Vlado: Mother! What are we going to do! The enemies of life is at our doorstep!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 31, 2016, 05:23:30 PM
Rainoric: Rena!
Kick her ass before she gets the idea of having Zombies open doors for her!


Vlado: Mother! What are we going to do! The enemies of life is at our doorstep!

Ruka: Rena..?

Rena: I.. don't want to fight.. Jurina... argh! *clutches head in pain*

Ruka: Rena?!

Geki/Samhane: Hehehehe, but if I must..! Hahaha, a dance of life and death.. I'm game for it!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: hackata48 on April 04, 2016, 08:31:15 AM
I got a PM in Asian Fanfics from a Fenrirabyss:

Hackata I really enjoy your writing style. It is easy for me to read and follow along with. I also enjoy how I can imagine the world you created with your story. The plot to your story is also really enjoyable. It also nice that you give a nice review of what has been happening in the story ever once in awhile . Overall just keep on what you are doing right now.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: hackata48 on April 06, 2016, 10:35:08 AM
I just finished my final exams and I feel confident I will get a good grade.

Just started working on my Fanfic again.


Now will you excuse me.....


*hacks Jurina's Skull with Ulfberth*

Rainoric: Die Zombie scum!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : the Skin Trade (part 2)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 06, 2016, 10:17:02 PM
Rena: O________O

Ruka: Uh oh...

Rena: *faints*

Ruka: *catches Rena* Crap. Rain, don't kill Jurina! >___<
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : In the face of death
Post by: hackata48 on April 09, 2016, 03:41:01 PM
New Chapter up!


Blood!

Zombies


Fighting and

Knights with a Deathwish!


Plus Exalted Blade!



http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/29
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : In the face of death
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 09, 2016, 08:59:05 PM
OMG!!!!!

Please, Jurina and Sakura, let both of them be okay!!!! >___<
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: hackata48 on April 13, 2016, 02:43:55 PM
New Chapter up!


Best I dont explain what will happen for shock value!


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/30


I am planning to make a figurine of Rainoric soon.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 13, 2016, 02:58:45 PM
Ah~ this chapter is so good!

Everything's ended up good, things are looking up!

Wait... did Miyuki say she...? O____O

Woah.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: hackata48 on April 13, 2016, 06:56:08 PM
Miyuki just announced graduation.......










Shit....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 13, 2016, 07:31:43 PM
Miyuki just announced graduation.......

I know.......




Now what?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: hackata48 on April 13, 2016, 07:33:07 PM
I imagine Belisarius and Miyuki riding of into the sunset so they can take care of their child together.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 13, 2016, 07:38:03 PM
I imagine Belisarius and Miyuki riding of into the sunset so they can take care of their child together.

We'll have to start thinking of baby names. *pulls out some books on parenting* Be sure someone gets these to them.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: hackata48 on April 16, 2016, 04:12:26 PM
Sakura's Journal #5 is up!



http://www.asianfanfics.com/chapter/edit_chapter/978407/31
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The dying dream and the new day
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 16, 2016, 04:21:19 PM
Uwaa~ Bel-kun must be worrying about being a father. >_<
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : To the West
Post by: hackata48 on April 20, 2016, 03:10:06 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/32


New Chapter is up!


With bombers and eye patches!

Plus a shocking ending!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: To the west
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 20, 2016, 04:10:03 PM
*spit takes*

W-wait, so... did they switch bodies, or is Sakura just in Rain's body with him??? o_o"
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: To the west
Post by: hackata48 on April 20, 2016, 06:26:06 PM
Sakura is in Rains body and she can control his movements. But not his head and 'mouth' if you know what I mean.



A little survivor anyone?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: To the west
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 20, 2016, 06:35:07 PM
Sakura is in Rains body and she can control his movements. But not his head and 'mouth' if you know what I mean.

Oh~ OK. Makes sense.

Quote
A little survivor anyone?

Hm? What do you mean? o.o
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: To the west
Post by: hackata48 on April 28, 2016, 06:20:21 PM
Working hard with the next chapter....



Will be a bit shorter than usual.


May add someone new....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: To the west
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 28, 2016, 06:29:21 PM
Working hard with the next chapter....



Will be a bit shorter than usual.


May add someone new....

*pray for update to be soon*  :on cny2:

I wonder who this "someone new" will be~  :hee:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: To the west
Post by: hackata48 on April 29, 2016, 04:23:03 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/33




New Chapter up!



Guess who came into the cast!




and Desert fever has gotten everybody!



Plus a very traumatic ending
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 29, 2016, 05:20:52 PM
OMG Mayuyu!!! >w<

Wait...



O_____O



NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!! This can't happen!!!! JURINA!!!!!!! TT_______TT
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on April 29, 2016, 07:05:30 PM
Black Dust Hive Mind:


She is.....slowly......inevitably...... becoming one of us........



Sister..





What..





Is it ......







Like to.....







Break you???
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 29, 2016, 07:21:32 PM
No no no! This can't happen! Jurina can't become one of them again!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on April 29, 2016, 07:24:29 PM
She is one of us...... forever!!!



One of us

One of us

One of us
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 29, 2016, 08:35:49 PM
No... Jurina! *cries*

Rena: I can't lose her! *cries*

Airi: What's going to happen to SKE..? To us?!

Paruru: Sakura's going to be devastated...

Miyuki: Everyone is...
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on April 30, 2016, 01:25:23 PM
 
Hive Mind:

Everyone is what???



All that who opposes the Black Dust will die!!!!



Then rise again......



As my Puppets!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: fenrirabyss on May 01, 2016, 06:00:06 AM
Holy cow the ending was crazy. I wonder who took over Jurina. I can't wait for the next chapter  :banghead:

PS
I also enjoy your other story Empires of Steel  :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on May 03, 2016, 06:00:30 AM
What would Sakura give on Rain'S birthday?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 03, 2016, 01:17:21 PM
What would Sakura give on Rain'S birthday?

Hmmmm... perhaps he'd like a new animal fur coat. Of an animal that's REEEEEEEEAAAAAALLY hard to kill. Would that be an option?
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 03, 2016, 01:39:05 PM
Do you even expect Sakura to even kill a squirrel at least?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 03, 2016, 01:41:26 PM
Do you even expect Sakura to even kill a squirrel at least?

Well, no. XD

OK, OK, um....

Maybe a new sword or weapon? Or perhaps she finds some rare treasure?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on May 03, 2016, 04:18:47 PM
A Sakura Laurel leaf!


Would it look fabulous on him?





(My Bday is next month and I am planning a Bday Special!)
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 03, 2016, 06:11:16 PM
A Sakura Laurel leaf!


Would it look fabulous on him?

I bet it would~ ^_^

Quote
(My Bday is next month and I am planning a Bday Special!)

Happy early birthday! :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on May 04, 2016, 03:46:04 PM
Preview:


Grimaldus/Jurina: DESPAIR! FOR I AM THE END OF DAYS!

Vlado: You have know right to judge who lives and dies Soul Eater! I have bested you once, and I will best you again!

Rena/Samhane: And to think I called you a brother Grimaldus.

Wulfgar:Let my friend go!

Grimaldus/Jurina: MWAHAHA! Come then thieves! Come now and face your DEATHS!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 04, 2016, 05:47:08 PM
*runs and hides*

I don't wanna face death! Save Jurina!!! >___<
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on May 04, 2016, 05:49:04 PM
Grimaldus: Mwahahaha!!! Her soul belongs to me now!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 04, 2016, 06:53:46 PM
Grimaldus: Mwahahaha!!! Her soul belongs to me now!

GAAAAH!!! Someone help! Rena!!! Sakura!!! >___<"
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Crossing the desert
Post by: hackata48 on May 06, 2016, 02:21:25 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/34


New Chapter up!



Angst time!


and a proverb about Death:

Life asked her brother Death one day....

"Why do they love me and hate you?" She asked

"You are a Beautiful Lie while I am a Painful Truth." He replied.



------------------------------


Please review and like!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 06, 2016, 06:39:47 PM
O______________O










NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 06, 2016, 06:41:39 PM
Grimaldus: Yyyyyyeesssss......... cry....... DESPAIR!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 06, 2016, 06:44:20 PM
Grimaldus: Yyyyyyeesssss......... cry....... DESPAIR!!!

*tears endlessly falling*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 06, 2016, 06:45:28 PM

Now...

 Who




Should I kill next..

Only.....


Much more brutally.....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 06, 2016, 06:47:58 PM
Please, don't kill anyone else!!!! :cry:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 06, 2016, 06:49:43 PM
Teaser for 'the Dark Season':


Kill?






Kill?







Did someone say KILL?





BLOOD FOR THE WAR GOD!!!!



TE HETA HADA WODAN!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 06, 2016, 06:52:37 PM
*goes to prepare endless supply of tissues*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 06, 2016, 06:53:57 PM
Osgar: No tissue for you!



*grabs tissue box and eats tissue paper*
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 06, 2016, 06:56:35 PM
Osgar: No tissue for you!



*grabs tissue box and eats tissue paper*

Why? ;-;
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 06, 2016, 07:00:04 PM
Osgar: Must..... purge...... xeno and heretics!


*attacks Ruka and the AKB girls*


Rainoric: Must fulfil.....calling!



Sakura: Quick! We need to get out of here.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: hackata48 on May 12, 2016, 04:12:28 PM
In the next episode:


(http://www.beastsofwar.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/IMG_1415_edited.jpg)\




Mayuyu.... becomes an actual Cyborg.
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Buyer's Remorse
Post by: hackata48 on May 15, 2016, 09:32:27 AM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/35


New Chapter Up!



Cyborg Mayu, ATTAACKK!!!!!!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: a Deathly Air
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 15, 2016, 01:44:35 PM
Holy cow, that was so cool!

So Mayu now controls a giant robot! That's amazing! >w<

Let's hope they get to their destinations safely *prays*

Can't wait for next chap! Update soon!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: hackata48 on May 16, 2016, 05:16:19 AM
We are about to soon reach the last chapters of this book soon.


I will make another book about Rainoric and Sakura's adventures sometime after I finish Empires of Steel as a certain event in that book will influence the plot of the next story.





Anyway,


What is the best quote in my story so far?
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 16, 2016, 12:55:18 PM
Too many good quotes. Can't choose one. XD
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: hackata48 on May 17, 2016, 03:33:17 AM
Too many good quotes. Can't choose one. XD


Why? You can name multiple if You want.
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 17, 2016, 03:35:38 AM
Too many good quotes. Can't choose one. XD
Why? You can name multiple if You want.

Sakura: "In my planet, we all give mercy to those who need it. And you needed it more than ever." (Sakura in Gimael)

Takamina: "Back on Earth, we tend to let our imagination fly away and just explore our creativity." (How to NOT hunt a Geldrius)

Hayato: "I have nothing to lose!" (Hayato the Anstrutione)

Sakura: "You will become a King one day. I suggest you start acting like one." (Hayato the Anstrutione)

Sophia: "You're special, Earthling. My son needs a person that will guide him on the right path." (The Forest and the Dream)

Miyuki: "Every man who is destined to be great needs friends to support him." (Vanoran)

Hayato: "In Gimael, I was given the freedom of choice to be someone." (Usurpation of Power)

Rainoric: "YOU DON'T CALL ME......WEAK!" (Usurpation of Power)

Leoferic: "We shall be as swift as the Angels!" (Battle of Ydeli Plains)

Osgar: "Let's dance shall we? It cures hangovers." (Party hard and lobby soft)

Rainoric: "But can I do this? Just get my own box and think inside that?" (High Seas Attrition)

Ulrich: "Salty no more tears....Salty has friends...." (High Seas Attrition)

Sakura: "Because it was the right thing to do." (The Giant and the Storm)

Rainoric: "Use that mushy clump of muscle in your head called a brain and know what you want to be and are." (Down the Rabbit Hole)

Jurina: "DON'T LET HIM WIN. NO MORE DEATHS TODAY. NO MORE!" (A deathly air)

Rena: "This is for Jurina!" (A deathly air)





OK done!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: hackata48 on May 19, 2016, 06:46:05 AM
Rainoric: Sakura got a gig on a Horror Show.......


Bloooodddddd..........Bloooodddd!



*Demonic Voice*  I am so..... turned on..... right now.......



*Activates Cold Rage* *Grabs sword and axe*


Cherry, LETS KILL SOME HUMANS!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: hackata48 on May 19, 2016, 09:07:40 AM
Note to self:


I am going to teach Sakura how to murder someone.


(I am actually going to see how will Sakura go crazy in 'Crows Blood' might rub off on me for 'the Dark Season')
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 19, 2016, 01:04:51 PM
(I am actually going to see how will Sakura go crazy in 'Crows Blood' might rub off on me for 'the Dark Season')

OMG I saw the trailer for that! It looks so good! And Sakura looks so creepy~ >w<

Yeah, you DEFINITELY need to do something with Sakura becoming crazy scary in the Dark season! Creepy Sakura intrigued me in the trailer. I wanna see it more now. lol

Plz do it! :bow:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: hackata48 on May 25, 2016, 09:25:24 PM
Sometimes I feel like I am the only fic writer who can pull off a murder of an 48 girl smoothly.

I still had a rather pleasurable experience running over Acchan (in Be right back) and making Rena put a scythe in Jurina's face.



But hey, I don't hate them, but I am just rather sadistic. And besides. The effects after were..... unexpectedly well received.




Btw expect a delay for BCB Untill next week cuz I have some exams to worry about.




(NOW........which girl should I brutally murder next......:) )
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: The Observatory
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 25, 2016, 11:32:49 PM
Good luck on exams. :)
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Buyer's Remorse
Post by: hackata48 on May 28, 2016, 01:28:01 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/36



Epic chase!


Churi becomes an action hero!



and....... a little Wmatsui moment......or am I lying?



In the next episode.........

"Sakura.....get me out of here please! I saw they took some other girls and I never see them again."

"Don't worry I will get you out just stay where you are." Sakura said before running with Rainoric
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Buyer's Remorse
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 28, 2016, 03:08:52 PM
Churi was epic! Nice job saving Kiku!

Bel still doing drugs, not good. Need to stop for Milky and baby!



Wait....



OMG Jurina?! What are you doing?! O_____O

What's going on?!?!?! OMG OMG OMG!!!!

Please update soon!!!! >______<
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Metal Gear Sakura
Post by: hackata48 on June 02, 2016, 03:28:23 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/37



New Chapter up!



SakurAnna anyone?


Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Metal Gear Sakura
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on June 02, 2016, 09:14:23 PM
The title first caught my attention. X3

Nooooo Anna!!! T_T






AAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!! What happened to Jurina and Rena?!

They become one and now they're being mind controlled!!!! O___O

Update soon!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Metal Gear Sakura
Post by: hackata48 on June 04, 2016, 03:47:27 PM
In the next Chapter:



LETS MAKE RENA MORE OVERPOWERED WITH A BLACK AND RED DUST INFUSED SEPHIROTH SIZED KATANNA!



And I will write a Off shot Bday special since June 12 is my BDAY.


(I hope Sakura gets me a nice gift!  :D  )
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Metal Gear Sakura
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on June 04, 2016, 08:12:15 PM
In the next Chapter:



LETS MAKE RENA MORE OVERPOWERED WITH A BLACK AND RED DUST INFUSED SEPHIROTH SIZED KATANNA!

I can only imagine what she'd look like... with powers of life and death in her hands. O_O
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Sandstorm in Aksyar
Post by: hackata48 on June 10, 2016, 03:04:31 PM
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/38/

New Chapter up!


Plus I will post a Bday Special tmrw at the evening of my Bday!
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: Metal Gear Sakura
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on June 10, 2016, 03:09:23 PM
Rena just got a freaking awesome upgrade!!! OwO



Wait... Rena..? Jurina..? Samhane..? Grimaldus..?

Uhhhh, I don't know, but they were amazing! >w<

The fight was epic! Everyone was amazing!


But oh no, Sakura! I hope she will be okay! >_<

AHHHH!!! And Bel died! Poor Miyuki and poor baby... T^T
Title: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: the beginning of Darkness
Post by: hackata48 on June 11, 2016, 07:46:55 PM
New Chapter up!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/39

My story is now complete! Will now brainstorm for the Dark Season....

May need to look at some crazy $!@# to get the inspiration I need for my Psychopath adventure...


I wonder what kind of Mindf@!@# I will give Sakura and her friends into.....
Title: Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom: the beginning of Darkness
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on June 11, 2016, 10:20:34 PM
O________O *jaw drop*






Holy cow....

So... Rain and Paru and the Gimaelics are possessed by Cold Rage...

Cebrail has now become whole within Rena's body, and also Jurina is fused with her, so... Oh boy! XD





The Dark Season is coming..... this should be interesting. >_<"