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Russian Roulette: The Game of Chance - Prologue 3/14
« on: March 15, 2012, 12:15:40 AM »
Oh my god. I realize I still have "Honto no Kimochi" on the wings just waiting to be updated, but this idea just had to be written. Bee decided to poison my mind with this horrible idea of a swingers club and I seriously just went ape-shit wild with it. I swear I will update chapter 3 for my other fic soon before I start screwing around with this story, but I just wanted to get this set in stone before I forgot anything.

I flirted the idea of writing something fluffy, but I realized I'm more partial to the dark/serious stuff. No idea why. Kj-chan just doesn't roll with the sweet stuff, I guess LOL So alrighty, here's the prologue/synopsis/teaser! As well as a glimpse of the full cast of girls that will be making their wonderful presence known throughout the fic.

Oh, I guess I should also make note of this, since I guess this is kind of a big deal. Another one of Bee's ideas that I just decided to roll with: Ai and Eri will be male characters LOL I figured I'm tearing hearts apart with giving Gaki a real guy to screw around with in Honto no Kimochi, so I should have a heart for this fic and keep the masculine loving in the family. I mean, seriously, just look at these hotties!!


http://www.tumblr.com/photo/1280/erien2314/18771589933/1/tumblr_m0e67jfTPa1qdkr2q

But seriously, forgive me, but it was necessary to masculinize them. I even provided lovely visuals for you guys!!! lol If anything, it just makes things a little bit more interesting, ne? Anywho here's the teaser/prologue!!!

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She stood before the entrance of the building, her eyes darting nervously from the card in her cold hands to the sign by the door. The addresses matched, and the sign clearly read The Shining Butterfly; she was definitely at the right place. A few men in business attire breezed past her to enter the building. Even small town girls knew what these establishments were for.

Gaki took a deep breath, grasped her duffle bag in hand and braced herself for her last chance, her only hope...

The smell of alcohol laced with sweet perfumes and cigarette smoked permeated the interior. She saw women scantily clad in some extravagant dresses, generous amounts of flesh exposed for their male clientèle's viewing pleasure. They dined, they drank, and some even engaged in activities Risa swore no reasonable person would ever perform in public. Suddenly aware of her own appearance, Gaki felt painfully exposed despite being fully dressed as eyes of the female workers and male clients were drawn straight towards her, lingering long enough to feel as though their gazes could pierce through every article of clothing as she awkwardly side-stepped couples dancing on the main floor to the office destination she desperately sought.

She was caught in a whirlwind of drunken dancing, trapped in the arms of a businessman that obviously had one too many. Clutching her dufflebag, the young woman tried desperately to fend off his lecherous hands. What the bloody hell did she get herself into?

Gaki shut her eyes tightly when she thought she couldn't fend off the man any longer, but opened a cautious eye to find a tall, beautiful woman grabbing hold of the offender and pushing him onto the lap of a more willing female worker at a table nearby. Risa wanted to thank the woman more than anything for "saving"  her, but her throat went dry and she once again became hyper-aware of all the eyes that were drawn toward her.

The tall woman grabbed hold of Risa's trembling figured and dragged her to a more quiet, sheltered corner of the building. She crossed her arms and asked simply, "What do you think you're doing here?"

Gaki managed to find her voice this time. She stared at her feet and saw her knuckles turning white as her hand induced a death grip on her duffle bag handle. Afraid and nervous as hell, Gaki replied, "I'm looking for a Nakazawa Yuko..."

The tall woman cocked an eyebrow and examined her from head to toe. The poor young woman was too caught up in her own nervousness that she failed to realize another woman had joined them. "What's the matter, Yossi? Who is this girl?" Yossi looked over to her companion and whispered some words that Gaki couldn't hear. She swore her heart was pounding through her eardrums and her vision was slowly going white from all the nervous tension. These women were not helping her at all.

Without anymore words, the two women gestured Risa to follow them through a maze of hallways and staircases to an office in the back room. The woman named Yossi knocked on the door. "Nakazawa-san, we have a girl here looking for you."

"Come in." The voice behind the door was firm and powerful. Gaki wondered if it was possible to just drop dead from all the nervous tension that overwhelmed her.

The door opened and Gaki was ushered in by the two women that escorted her. The sole woman that stood before a very nervous Niigaki Risa was a poised older woman, clad simply in a traditional Japanese kimono. She sat behind her desk, arms folded and eyes examining the nervous wreck that stood between the two escorts. "What can I do for you?"

Again, Risa found herself avoiding eye contact, intently staring at the worn laces of her ragged shoes instead. "I...I-I'm looking for a j-job..." she stuttered pitifully, her nails digging into the palms of her hands as they gripped her duffle bag harder than before.

Yuko smirked. "You came to the right place."
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So there ya have it! A lot of random shoutouts and DMM references, just because I can. As you can see, I've once again made Gaki my main girl. Nakazawa and Yossi make an appearance, and I'm sure you can guess who the other woman that was with Yossi. I've already spilled the beans about Ai and Eri making an appearance, but trust me when I say there's more to come ya'll! Stick around for the ride!


I can say with total confidence that this is going to end well for everyone (unlike Honto no Kimochi since I can't quite decide with that one). One last bit of good news: I've already outlined the whole plot, and this whole fic will consist of 12 chapters, not including the prologue. Oooooookay that's enough from me. Happy trails, everyone!

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Re: Russian Roulette: The Game of Chance - Prologue 3/14
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2012, 12:30:35 AM »
Neeee I got so excited once I saw who the author was! :D  You never cease to amaze me!  Bar stories...always fab :)  I can't wait for more!~
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Re: Russian Roulette: The Game of Chance - Prologue 3/14
« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2012, 12:36:06 AM »
Neeee I got so excited once I saw who the author was! :D  You never cease to amaze me!  Bar stories...always fab :)  I can't wait for more!~

i was seriously just editing my post, then i saw you commented ahha my biggest fan??? MY ONLY FAN WOOO! lol thanks for the support ^__^ hope i wont let you down.


im gonna be messing around with coupling, sooooooooo hopefully I don't turn anyone off too badly ahha

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Re: Russian Roulette: The Game of Chance - Prologue 3/14
« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2012, 12:57:09 AM »
gaki-san in a hostess club?? guy-chan and eric?!.....u pretty much sold me you know that? lol
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Re: Russian Roulette: The Game of Chance - Prologue 3/14
« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2012, 01:40:30 AM »
I'll be waiting for your next update!!  :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Re: Russian Roulette: The Game of Chance - Prologue 3/14
« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2012, 09:26:11 AM »
Well, I like happy endings, I like Guy-chan and Eric, I like Risa. I'm pretty sure I like where all this is going, too!

Hmm, so Risa knew enough to ask for Yuko by name and she's clutching a duffel bag... Run away? Homeless? Desperate, apparently. Hmm...

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