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Time Capsule Chapter 11 10/28/12
« on: October 05, 2012, 07:18:48 AM »
Chapter 1

The buzzing came through quickly like a bullet, paralyzing her on the bed.

The memory of the event spread as the sun entered into her room, feeling that pain between her legs, that moment of ecstasy was the final dagger in her life.  Ten years had passed since the incident and no one was left remembering what she had done.

Ai wanted to forget it.  She couldn't do so without that buzzing noise in her head every morning.  She wanted to force it out with therapy but the unfurling of the events seemed to blanket the opportunity.  Ai forced thought to suppress those feelings but in the end it lingered.

Her life then was normal.  Family was together, friends that nurtured her every emotional need, and school, in any other case, presented their issues.  Being female in a female-only school always presented issues in ethics.  Pure was the school's ethic but the students never follow ethics and went on their merry way with their actions.

It started with an innocent conversation with an older student, who she admired.  Kodama Tara presented herself with moderate amount of makeup, a tighter than usual blouse, and a red plaid skirt cut before her knees.  Ai knew her own intelligence but she was attracted to her as a boy would be to a girl and seemed to not pull away quick enough to stare at her hopelessly.

TaKo, as she was usually called, was boasting about her prowess in bed as a premium lover, but the men were only there to screw her nubile body.  Showing off her recent silver-beaded crusted Rolex from a customer, Ai was intrigued that men twice even triple her age were showering her with gifts that were in her father's dream.  She came closer to her like a fly to a spider web.  Ai felt a hand clamped down hard on her right shoulder.

"Takahashi-san, you want to have this."  She asked with a smirk on her face.  Ai showed the palms of her hands and waved them furiously but she threw it at her anyway as the group suddenly surrounded her.  Ai gave it to the girl next to her.  She managed to follow her to the end of hallway before she turned around again.

"Was the watch not enough for you?"  Her tone changed to bitchy as Ai took two steps towards her before freezing up.  "Do you have something to say?"

Ai couldn't get those words out of her mouth but it seemed loud enough to ask how she managed to get such stuff working at convenience store.  TaKo had the widest grin as she walked up to Ai and stared straight at her.

"Men love nubile bodies."  She poked her left breast and traced it over to the right.  "Their wives can't give them the pleasure they once provided before the children popped of their readymade ovens.

Ai felt a chill down her spine.  She could feel it travel down her legs at the point where she just wanted to melt into the ground but kept her posture as she moved to her face.  TaKo ran her finger along her cheek and smiled at Ai.

"You would be perfect, if you wanted to try.  But I know you don't have a boyfriend so they might get surprised."  She turned away before explaining the statement.

A girl with brown shoulder-length hair came running past the TaKo, stopping right before Ai with panic on her face.  She grabbed Ai by the arm and dragged her to the stairwell before Ai brushed her off.

"What's wrong, Ai-chan?"  She asked.

The jealousy was filling up quickly in her body as she had a last glimpse of TaKo before she headed up the stairs.  Now, facing her, Ai turned toward the stairs and marched up with her heart pumping with every step but stopped at the top of the first set.

"Niigaki-san, I'm okay.  You should get to class."  She tilted her head to the side but didn't let up in pursuing the elder girl.  She tracked her to the second step of the next set of steps and halted her progress.

Niigaki Risa was a caring person especially towards Ai as they were neighbors before Ai suddenly left without reason ten years ago.  She was awkward in her upbringing always promoting her eyebrows as her strong point.  Being a year younger, Risa managed to step into harm's way for Ai's sake and thanked her a few times but acknowledging that "she should stop interfering."

"Let's go to the nurse's office."  Ai shook off the help and jogged to her next class leaving Risa to ponder over her friend's feelings.

Ai spent the rest of the day wondering how it will feel like to get all those stuff by TaKo's means but shook it off when it came to the actual result.  A few hours later, TaKo appeared again in the restroom with tears running down her cheeks.  She took a few steps before hearing the shrill of her voice to avoid confrontation.

"What's... the problem?"  Ai squeaked as a pregnancy test was next to her with the box inches right of it.

Ai picked it up with the box and matched the results with the box: Not pregnant.  She approached her from an arms-length away before Tako barked out the same order but refused to listen as she calmly rubbed her back.

"Do you want to get pregnant?"  TaKo nodded quickly as Ai placed it front of her.  "Why?"

She didn't know why she asked that.  It was the curiosity in her in wanting to know why she would jeopardize herself into a horrible future.  But, TaKo wiped away whatever tears that were present and aimed towards her midsection.

"My father punched me this morning for staying out late and that bruise cost me another job.  My mother awoke to my crying in the bathroom and handed me over this test."  She explained while little whimpers choked her.  "Every guy loves to wear no condom and shoot regardless to my pleas.  It was a chance to make my father pay for his actions."

Ai rubbed the bruised area with her two fingers to little winces.  She took a deep breath and looked straight at Tako.

"Do you think you can handle yourself out there on your own?"

"Those men will help right?"  Ai shook her head.  "Why?"

"Because they don't care about you, I may not know that for sure, but why risk it."  Ai explained but TaKo just pushed her to the side and paraded out of the room.  As she managed to regain her stance, she saw a card on the ground and decided to write her phone number on it as an opportunity to optimize her chances.

That night she would never forget what had happened.
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 1
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2012, 02:06:08 PM »
Tako really is... :sigh:

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 1
« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2012, 09:55:57 PM »
Oh lord kurosawa anotha fanfic? AWWW YEEEEEAAAAA!!!! :w00t:

That tako gurl is really sumthin...

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 1
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2012, 11:05:49 AM »
Tako really is... :sigh:

psychodramatic? :lol: TaKo is just a tip of the iceberg

Oh lord kurosawa anotha fanfic? AWWW YEEEEEAAAAA!!!! :w00t:

That tako gurl is really sumthin...

Yeah another one that may be finished in periods of time XD

Overall, this fic will not be pairings based sorry for the expectation of a pairing but the swirl of interactions shall be brought out
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 2
« Reply #4 on: October 07, 2012, 10:24:24 AM »
Chapter 2

It was late in the summer right before the leaves turned brown that Ai wrote the number to her cell on back of a card.  She excused herself from the table about a little after seven putting a blue jacket over her solid white t-shirt and jeans shorts.

A soft breeze blew behind her feeling a hand guiding her towards the park where she had seen the ads before.  She found a space an inch below eye level and placed it between the two, hoping that someone would take an opportunity or at least ask but a man approached her from the east and flashed a smile.

He appeared as a salaryman with a thick black coat and white shirt and dark blue pants.  He held his brown workbag in his right hand as he reached in with a wad of cash in his hand.  Ai wasn’t sure what the protocol was, so she just took it and followed him to the nearest love hotel a block away.

The smell of alcohol stung her nose as they approached the front desk.  The woman about middle-aged winked at the man as he went towards the elevators to their right.  There was one with a sign in front and the other the signal seemed weak from the stress of the work.  They both entered when the steel doors opened and pressed the seventh floor.

He began loosen his tie with the occasional glances back at Ai, making her ponder if she should run or accept her faith.  They arrived at the floor with worn out carpeting.  The smell was not as strong as the lobby but the hint only wanted to make Ai hurl into the potted plants but managed to keep it in as he guided his way to the room.

“Is this your first time?”  He asked as she dug into his left pocket for the key like an expert he didn’t look towards that direction but he was anxious.

He let Ai come in first as his eyes leered toward her backside.  Ai felt that she had walked into the room with a wolf but it was already past the stage of no return.  He grabbed her by surprise, feeling his hand traveling along her torso.  She wanted to scream but didn’t want to lose customer and instantly the violation expanded to her legs.

The man was relentless in touching.  Every rub caused a rash that would sting and once she relaxed, she was ready for her first adult experience.  Landing on the bed with her underwear on, he forced himself to the meal in front of her.  Ai expecting more time pushed him away with all her strength.

“Feisty one aren’t we?”  He commented as he clamped down her arms to the bed but the lack of control to her legs led to a reply no man would want.  He screamed out in pain with his few choice words towards Ai giving her chance to right the ship.

Instead, he went forward and got close into a painful interaction but managed to escape from his sight for the time being.  Ai instinctively looked for a weapon for her own protection or to at least tell him to progress slower than usual.

“Why are you resisting me?”  His cry gave Ai a chill down her back.  She took her eyes off him for a second and was tackled to the ground.  She was finally no trapped from going nowhere and his hand grabbed onto the shorts, trying to pull it down.  Ai reached to her side and grabbed an item.  By then, the pain ran up to her brain but his hand began to suffocate her.  She swung her right arm wildly and heard a dull cry.

Ai wasn’t sure what it was but she caught him below the neck.  Blood came out slowly but he insisted to continue but the slice on the other side of the neck, gave him a reason to scream.

She saw the blood dripping down onto his clothes and he reached out grabbing his filthy hands onto her as he gasped for help.  Ai watched him deteriorate to the ground as he slathered her with crimson streaks.  Ai looked down at him while she threw the card to the side.  Taking a few steps back, his last murmur, his last breath, and his last sight was of an angelic girl.  She ran through the fire exit with her heat racing, skipping few steps until the final door led her to the alleyway.

She hid her bare body with a pieces of cloths from the trash cans and ran back home to a dark house.  She slipped through the unfastened back door, making sure no one else was up, and headed to her room.  Ai slipped on underwear, a t-shirt, and shorts.  She wasn’t concerned if she bothering people but knew the quicker she left, the quicker she could be free from the torture.

Ten years past with her eyes always looking back but it seemed farther from the truth.  Another day of the nightmare, she didn’t want to relive again.

Ai gradually rolled out of bed, feeling her bare feet hitting the scuffed wooden floor.  She wanted to polish it one day but never had the chance to do so.  Dragging her body to the bathroom, she was disgusted with the morning and staring at the mirror was the lowest point of the day.  Her pale complexion made her queasy but a quick splash changed her mindset.

After a quick shower, Ai threw on her work clothes with her apron stuffed in her small backpack before heading outside to the chilly autumn morning.  The street filled with strangers awoke her from her lull.  The noise was her alarm clock with the people glancing at her made her feel unsure until the coffee lingered into her nose.

“Takahashi-san, did you go out last night?” The chestnut-haired woman asked as she slipped into the backroom.

Ai knew that she just asked to make conversation but it irritated her to even hear the question in the morning but a smile gave away her response.  She took out her green apron from the bag and wrapped it around her waist.  She grabbed the notepad from the door sleeve and headed out to the floor.  A few people would sit in the café but they were minding their own business, which Ai liked especially if they just ordered and stay with their newspaper blocking their faces.

“Mako-chan, did you?”  Ai asked knowing there was a story behind her lack of a social life.

Ogawa Makoto affectionately known as Mako-chan was a year younger than Ai but very obnoxious about other people’s social life.  She trained Ai to do the job but was less knowledgeable in coffee which usually made Ai laugh because it gave her reason to intervene at any time.  However, Ai didn’t want to talk and glanced at the door.

“I think we have new patrons, you want to get her?”  She asked which usually meant that she wanted to relax in the back.  Ai disliked the practice but went with it anyway but this one gave her chill down her back and politely refused.

“Why not?”

“I need to pee, Mako-chan.”  Ai excused herself and ran into the bathroom.

Ai could recognize the face from anywhere and now she wanted to be miles away from the coffee shop now.
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 3
« Reply #5 on: October 08, 2012, 10:45:56 PM »
Chapter 3

Sirens were part of Risa’s routine of waking up, it wasn’t because of where she lived, which was probably the least violent part of town but the route to and from the hospital was on her street.  She didn’t mind the sound or to her it didn’t bother her as it did once before.

Six fifteen, she awoke to the sound of sirens outside of Ai’s house.  She ran down to the front porch where two policemen were talking to Ai’s parents.  They seemed alright but a few seconds later, the woman collapsed to the ground with her face into her small hands.  Risa’s parents standing behind her were in shock.

The morning news announced a murder that happened in the love hotel, a man in his forties was cut on his neck with a card.  They predicted that it was a suicide but didn’t declare homicide as a possible cause and her father turned off the television.

“Risa, go to school.”  He commanded with a thunderous voice that would cause the ground to shake most of the time but Risa didn’t give in.  She stood in front of him with her eyes welling.  She wanted to know what happened but he couldn’t get the words out of her mouth and just walked away.

“What happened?”  Risa demanded.

He took a half-step to his right but kept his attention forward.  “Ai is missing.”

Risa’s heart dropped to her stomach.  She sat there in shock trying to process the information of her neighbor’s disappearance and suddenly balled up her fist.  She headed upstairs to change into her uniform.  Risa’s mind had been set to her action of that day, and never regretted doing so.

At school, word was flying around like bees in a beehive.  She wanted to find the steam to stop it from spreading but knew it wouldn’t work with just words.  TaKo was standing there as usual with her arms crossed and was instantly approached by Risa.

“Where is she?”  Risa grunted barely getting her attention.  “WHERE IS SHE?”

“Where is who?”  She said nonchalantly.  Risa speared the girl into the lockers hearing a few of ribs cracked in her ear.  A teacher pulled the girl away from TaKo and set her aside while she held her midsection.

“I don’t know.”  She said weakly as the teacher took her to the health room.  The other classmates stared at her as the thought in their minds started wonder the same thing.  She spent the next few days alone in an empty classroom to avoid the rest of the people and on the third day towards the end of the day, she was approached by another uniformed girl.

Risa looked at her strangely but she insisted to walk into the classroom with her bag and took a seat in front of her.  She placed her head onto her arms and stared into her eyes.

“What are you doing here?”  Risa sounding irritated but it didn’t change her expression.

“Ai is an important person to you.”  She whispered.  “Do you think we can find her?”

Risa shot her head up like an excited puppy and she just smiled as Risa said, “Honto” thousand times over.  She introduced herself as Kamei Eri and her cousin was a detective for the police.  Risa started to create a smile as she heard the words of her connection but something didn’t feel right in her heart.  Why would Ai disappear?  Was there something about her that Risa didn’t know about?  She took her bag and followed Eri to the police station where it was active and out came a woman with a blue top and matching skirt.  The woman held a clipboard in her right hand with a pencil loosely held in the other.  She glanced up to notice two girls in front of her and walked towards them.

“Eri, what are you doing here?”  She asked.

“This girl is trying to find her friend.”  She said.  “Takahashi Ai.”

She bit down on her lower lip as she stared down at the clipboard again.  She grabbed Risa and brought her into the police station while Eri walked to the convenience store down the street.  Risa was brought into the empty room with the lone light on.  It was partly lighted from outside but the extra light brought out the table in the middle of the room.

“Miss…”

“Niigaki Risa, age sixteen, 1st year high school.”  Risa replied as she scribbled down the information.

“Ms. Niigaki, please take a seat.”  The policewoman pointed her towards the seat and occupied the seat across of her.  “I’m Officer Fujimoto, please tell me what you know about Ms. Takahashi.”

Risa brought out many things about Ai, painting the picture of a nice girl who wanted to fit into the crowd.  Risa admired Ai as she was an idol but understood that she wanted to break away sometimes, pointing out certain events that shown she wanted to be free.  However, the reason wouldn’t be the fact that she stated in the interview.

“Thank you, we will keep in touch.”  She grabbed her bag and exited the room.  “If you get in contact with her, don’t hesitate to call us.”  Risa nodded as she left the building.

Eri sat down on the steps with an empty bento box by her.  She twisted her head around, greeting her as she passed by her.  Risa avoided Eri as she took a left turn to go home while Eri followed ten feet behind her and only to be bumped from behind when the light turned red.

“Did my cousin help?”  Risa shook her head.

“It was helpful to vent but they didn’t know why she would leave and brought up just flat out running away.”  Risa explained as she kept her attention toward the walking signal.

“You don’t think she did run away because of issues do you?”  Risa shook her head.  “I guess we can wait for now.”

“What about…”  Risa stopped midway before the walking signal turned and marched ahead to her house without considering Eri’s speed.

That night she looked outside her window praying that she would return, acknowledging her mistake, but it never came true.  The following night was the same way.  Only at high school graduation that she had given up on Ai and stuck with Eri for the ten years after.

Risa developed herself into an office worker with everything behind her.  The morning was like the past with the overcast skies and the sun peeking over the clouds.  Eri let out a yawn as they wanted a quick drink before work and walked into the café.

“Two people.”  Risa yelled out as the waitress sat both of them.

“Do you have…?”  Risa stared at one person near the coffee machine and just was fixed to her.

It can’t be
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #6 on: October 10, 2012, 10:16:52 PM »
Chapter 4

Ai avoided looking toward the table but her eyes kept looking in that direction.  Then, she forced herself to the table without maintaining the eye contact.  She held out her notepad with her pen tip gently on the paper.

“Niigaki-san, I’m sorry.”  She mumbled as she looked down at the younger woman.

“Ai-chan, how have you been doing?”  Risa asked as she stood up to Ai.

She just smiled.  The answer was the dagger in her heart for the past ten years but she didn’t want to show the blood on it yet and smiled again.  No words came out except for their order and just brought the order to them.  She expected Risa to be angered but a smile in return seemed to ease the problem in her heart.  Ai nodded her head towards her mate and turned around to the bar.

“They seem rather young to be around here.”  Mako-chan commented.  “OL people rarely enjoy a cup before work.”

“True, but I think they are different from the stereotype.”  Ai felt it was a miracle that she would meet Risa again.  Risa looked different than before, a mature person, a mother-like person.  She felt the pit growing inside again and ran into the bathroom to get a glass of water.  Mako-chan helped the next customer while Ai was busy guzzling down the liquid to soothe her issues.

She appeared from the bathroom with enough liquid to force another visit but kept it all in as she visited the table again.  Ai’s legs were filled with cement with every step as she approached the table and grinned towards them as she was holding a secret.  Risa presented the cups back to Ai.

“Thanks for the coffee, we should…”  Risa froze midsentence as Eri stood up to Ai.

“I want to say something.”  Eri said in a low voice.  “Where did you go?”

Ai pursed her lips as she tried to come with an answer that would satisfy her but she knew nothing would except for the truth.  She opened her mouth like a fish out of water and closed it quickly with Risa pushing her aside.

“I don’t need to hear it.”  Risa excused herself from Ai as Eri followed her out of the café.  Ai extended her hand out to Risa and extended a piece of paper.  Risa scanned over it and nodded again with a smile.  “I’ll contact you.”

Ai returned back to work serving the customers while her mind was filled with thoughts from the past.  Every minute was memory from the bank she had kept in the depth of mind.  Ten years ago was far enough to resent everything that had happened from back then.  It was enough to reason to tell her the truth.

During her lunch break, she headed to the convenient store for a bento and a drink.  It usually wasn’t crowded because it was between the kids returning from school and the normal crowd.  But, it was filled with a group of people following a guide around the store.  Ai removed the apron from her waist and balled it up in her hand as she pushed through the crowd.

“Can I pay for this?”  Ai called out as the cashier turned with a cheery grin.

“Sure, Takahashi-san.”  Ai was surprised that she knew her name and extended her arm over the counter.  “Do you not know me?”

“I don’t, please tell me who you are.”  Ai demanded as the group left.

She had presented an ID card and let go of her.  Kodama Tara.  A name she hadn’t heard in a long time, a woman who was skinny once before now filled out to the point that she was hardly recognizable.  Ai extended out her cash and told her to keep the change but she refused to take it from her.

TaKo was a homely person with less makeup than before but still had that smile that haunted her from ten years ago.  She lost everything to a man who treated her as dirt.  Her arms were scarred with bruises and improperly healed cuts, Ai avoided looking at it for long but she was willing to show it as punishment from then.

Ai turned away for a second and turned back as she saw her standing there with the scars still present.  She couldn’t let her past halt her from helping and walked back to the counter.

“I work down the street, please come so we can talk.”  Ai mumbled as she left the store.  She felt a weight come off her but still had guilt within her body.

Towards the end of her shift, she saw her walk in with a purse and took a seat in the corner with the shade.  The sun was on the other side of the café but it seemed cooler at where she sat.  Ai walked over with confidence and offered her a cup of coffee but politely refused.

“Sorry I scared you at the convenient store, you look… different.”  She nodded with a smile, a sudden change from her past expression, as she handed over an envelope.

“You need me for now; I want you to tell me the truth.”  She leaned in closer with her purse creating a buffer between them.  “Sakamoto-san knew who I was, but when you did the act, I didn’t expect that you would do it for no cost.”

“He was forcing himself onto me.”  Ai said under her breath.  “I didn’t kill him though.”

Her eyes widened in shock as the rumors were going on about Ai being connected but it could have been a façade created by Ai to hide her innocence.  TaKo smiled back at her as she shook her head.

“If it was the case, DNA should prove something right?”  Ai wasn’t sure how to react to it.  She left the café without saying anything else but she grabbed onto her arm.  “You should turn yourself into the authority.”

Ai knew TaKo still had that influence over people and now with her being nearby, she needed to find a way to rid of her, or run away.  She wanted to not have her past coming to haunt her again.  Ai ran to the library to find temporary shelter from the outside world and did research about the incident through the newspaper.

The murder seemed to be declared a suicide with the possibility of help.  Ai knew it wasn’t suicide but of self-defense.  The problem was it didn’t explain of his past or what happened on that night.  It angered her that she was violated but an image of the woman did not show Ai on that night.  The best part was she knew who it was they did show and she seemed to have pleasure in the picture.

However, she had to steer clear of the police or at least avoid any contact with TaKo.
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #7 on: October 11, 2012, 07:28:42 AM »
chapter 2
oh my goddess... ai you have commit a suicide  :shocked
chapter 3
haha... for the ten year search, risa you have finally found ai... but after you have given it up... sometime like really is like that :sigh:
chapter 4
now, i am really puzzled over the violation on ai that time  :?

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #8 on: October 11, 2012, 07:45:10 AM »
the violation is sort of weird, it'll add up later on
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #9 on: October 11, 2012, 08:04:03 AM »
the violation is sort of weird, it'll add up later on
ok thanks  :P
btw, to be frank, i am in a dilemma of her violation to have really happened after reading chapter 2 and 4... as the former makes me feel she is not, but chapter 4 stated she did got violated and moreover, chapter 1 state also that she was violated... which now i am in total dilemma...
and thanks goodness... you are enhancing it  :thumbsup

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #10 on: October 11, 2012, 08:28:13 AM »
chapter 2 laid out a scene where she had fought back but this past one was the truth behind how she felt :nervous

I figured chapter 2 would not feel the same way as it did for chapter 4
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #11 on: October 11, 2012, 08:35:16 AM »
i see 8)... ok hope to see the next update soon...   :)

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #12 on: October 11, 2012, 12:05:19 PM »
i see 8)... ok hope to see the next update soon...   :)

I reread it and adjusted it to keep it constant :lol:
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 4
« Reply #13 on: October 11, 2012, 01:56:53 PM »
i see 8)... ok hope to see the next update soon...   :)

I reread it and adjusted it to keep it constant :lol:
so i think if i have the time, i should re-read the story from the start and adapt myself to the story and avoid being so puzzled about some details  XD

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 5
« Reply #14 on: October 13, 2012, 02:48:12 AM »
Here we go

Chapter 5

The next morning, Ai was awoken by the sounds of sirens blaring by her building.  She tumbled to the floor trying to find her footing as she managed to see the back of the police car.  She threw on a t-shirt and shorts before heading outside during a humid morning,

It stopped two blocks down from where she lived and the police officers seemed to ease their way into the building.  A few screams rang into her ears as she got closer and then a view from a block way.  An unhealthy woman was being dragged out in her pajamas by two fit policemen.  She hid in the alleyway as they escorted her into the car with heavy resistance.

She couldn’t believe her eyes that someone had finger TaKo.  The newspaper clipping seemed to perfect for the crime but something did bother her as a major detail was missing: her clothing.  She hadn’t thought about it until now when TaKo was forced into the back of the squad car.  She had thought that she had overlooked the detail but remembered it never mentioned about the clothing on the floor.

TaKo wasn’t too far from the description at the time except for the height which was a dead giveaway.  However, the front desk woman must have noticed Ai from the time before they entered the room.  Her curiosity grew to the woman and planned another trip after work.  However, the news broke about the arrest and the talk soon grew to the arrested woman.

Mako-chan as always seemed to throw gossip to the customers to get them to talk and buy more when they are chatting up the news.  Ai began her shift with little ease in her mind and then an update about the suspect.

Kodama Tara, arrested for assault.  It was reported about an incident ten years ago when she was a high school prostitute and her customer, a Sakamoto Wataru, was killed by a laceration to the neck. 

Ai was surprised that they managed to get to her but something didn’t seem to add up.  Being bothered by the update, she left without notice giving Mako-chan the café to herself.

She ran to the library to find the newspaper article and reread it again.  The report was initially written to say that something did catch him on the neck but evidence was missing from the crime scene.  It was pointed out that items of clothing were not present at the scene, claiming that there was a rape before taking her to the room.  The front desk woman confirmed the story.

Ai shook her head furiously as she couldn’t believe that everything was happening in front of her.  The questions seemed to grow in her mind about that night and why TaKo may be saved her and why she was threatening her in the first place.  She knew about the incident but when she wanted to apologize for that time, another update came across.

Police station.  Posioning.  Suspect dead.

Her stomach rolled onto itself as she exited the library.  The cloud grew over her head, TaKo had reason to get arrested as she remembered from the newspaper article but why at the station.  Ai sprinted by to see the news crews gathering outside the stations.  The flashing lights caught her as she came closer to the scene.  To the right side of the building, an ambulance escaped with the dead body but no one came close to it.

The reporters were standing in front of the station while they waited the details of the apparent suicide but Ai seemed to not care about what the reporters were saying but the truth from the dead woman.  She squatted behind a bush for a minute before going back home.

The pain started to throb between her legs every time she began to feel the guilt built up in her.  She wanted to avoid the issue from ten years ago but she hid it from everyone when she came back to discover her parents’ death a year ago.

The nine years before returning to the city, she escaped to Fukui, her hometown before moving into the city.  Luckily, no one remembered her and she could travel around without any problems.  Her first year, she had lied about her age to get a job at a noodle shop where business was thriving.  She began to save a little money for her trip back to visit her parents but her job wouldn’t stay as permanent as expected.

The noodle shop went up in flames three months after she started working that displaced the workers and she moved into a convenient store run by the same person where she had met a weird girl.  She was a few years younger than her but her recent trip into cosplay gave Ai an unusual vibe.

She was paired up with her because of the experience she carried but majority of the time, Ai found herself working alone as the girl took long periods of time in the bathroom.  Ai asked about her name but never received an answer until her name tag fell from her pants pocket.

Michishige Sayumi.

Ai placed it on top of the counter as Sayu took her break.  Sayu returned noticing the item on Ai’s side and shrugged her shoulders while Ai began to stock up the chips.  A moment later, she grabbed a few bags and placed them nicely in a row with Ai’s approval.

“Ai… do you have friends here?”  Ai shook her head.  “I thought so.”

Ai let out a grunt as she began to work on the next set of chips.  Sayu reached out her hand to grab her co-workers’ wrist, surprising Ai for a second, and pecked on the forehead.

“What was that for?”  Ai groaned as Sayu moved in closer to Ai’s body.

“Ai-chan, daisuki.”  Sayu replied in a cutesy, irritable tone.  “Don’t you like me?”

Ai shook her head quickly but Sayu resisted in letting her go and both fell to the ground.  Sayu slid her way up to her eyes level and launched a kiss onto her lips.  Sayu hit her mark while Ai struggled to get her off but gave up midway as it shocked her of how gentle.  It was different from before, it was a sensual, relaxing type of kiss.  Ai pushed her shoulders and Sayu quickly got to her knees.

“I’m sorry for that, it would seem great to have you.”  Sayu took a few steps before Ai grabbed her by the wrist.  She swung her around and slapped her across her face.

“If you want to have friends, you have to be able to not force yourself into people.  Open up.”  Ai looked back at the box as she held onto her.  “Help me.”  Sayu nodded as she placed the bags onto the display quickly before heading toward the cash register.

Ai spent a year at the convenient store before taking a job at the docks as a secretary for the fishermen.  Sayu became roommates with Ai two months before the move and it was sensual yet frustrating at times living with her.  She was irresponsible most of the time but in bed she changed into a cat that wanted to be caressed.  Livelihood was a challenge but Sayu gave Ai comfort when the hard days came from work.

Two years later, Sayu decided to move back to her hometown when she heard about Ai’s story of moving back to Fukui leaving Ai alone for a year before moving into a boarding house meeting another interesting character, which entertained her to the fullest but the reason to return back to the city a year ago.
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 5
« Reply #15 on: October 13, 2012, 11:02:51 AM »
so actually that man is killed by Tako, not Ai?

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 5
« Reply #16 on: October 13, 2012, 11:14:40 AM »
so actually that man is killed by Tako, not Ai?

well for now supposedly but Ai has the guilt still riding with her
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 6 10/14/12
« Reply #17 on: October 15, 2012, 09:32:21 AM »
Chapter 6

The time she spent at the boarding house was exciting yet heartbreaking.  It was the first time she had confessed to a woman/girl in her life.  She had a warm feeling about that person but her initial cold attitude was a wall that had to be climbed.  Ai knew that her first few days would be tough to adapt but the other women were warm, inviting her to a nabe party but quickly was advised about the lone wolf.

Ai only knew of her name.  Tanaka Reina.  She couldn’t get a clear description of the woman until she appeared a few days later while she was going to work, brown shoulder length hair, childish face, petite, and a mouth that had to be scrubbed with a bar of soap twice.  Ai assumed she was self-centered and brat like with her appearance but something caught onto her quickly: her attitude towards people.

She was lone wolf by the other women’s standards but Reina was a can of peanuts waiting to be opened.  She figured to take it easy and see the reaction with no success for the first week.  The next week, she was trying to get her open up but not even the Jaws of Life could pry her heart open until passing by one day, she took a peek into her room.

It was plain with the white wallpaper and the desk to the right of the window.  A book with a purple ribbon inside was on the near corner with the cover frayed a little.  The chair was partly away from the table and turned towards the left.  Her bed was all white with the pillow nicely set in the back.  For those few seconds, she was reminded of her own room when she ran away.

The memories flooded back into her mind and let out a tear as she walked to her room at the corner of the house on the second floor.  Reina didn’t return until that night where the open door was now shut closed.  Ai heard the slamming through her muffled hearing and walked out to the hallway slowly approaching the only light that was on.  She gently took a few steps before coming to a complete halt.

“What are you doing?”  She yelled from ten feet away.

“I just heard your door shut that’s all.”  Ai replied before doing a 180 back to her room.

Ai was a step from her door before hearing her voice again.  The soft, gentle voice of a woman lost in the big world.  She pressed up to Ai and quickly turned her around.  “Can we talk?”

Ai wasn’t sure what they would talk about but hit it on swiftly with talk about their lives and the angst building within their minds.  Reina wasn’t the lone wolf but a bewildered human wanting to be loved.  She fled her home after getting into petty trouble with the law and got to learn about city life at a young age.  Her faults were many and visible to many eyes.  Coerced into sex in middle school and risking her life with partying until a crash caused her to rethink her priorities.  The long scar starting at her right forearm ran up to the shoulder was only shown to Ai for the fact that she wanted to trust someone.

Ai did that but keeping that as a secret wasn’t easy but it led to their first encounter in bed.

Six weeks later, Reina and Ai were washing clothes at the community wash center and Reina had forgotten her change up in her room.  As she ran up, her neighbor came from the lounge to gossip about Reina but Ai wouldn’t let her into anything but her twisting words caused Ai to slip out about an injury.  She left with that little tidbit as Reina returned to the wash room.

“Reina… I told them you got hurt once in your life.”  Ai confessed quickly as Reina slammed her fist into the washing machine.

“Why?  I told you to not mention anything about me.”  She mumbled to Ai as she grabbed her basket.

“Wait.”  She grabbed Reina’s wrist but fought off her grip.  “I need to explain.” 

Reina, who wore a jacket on a cool day, didn’t see the nail on the side of the door and the sleeve tore right through.  Ai came running up to Reina patching the jacket sleeve but the women’s eyes were aimed right at the torn sleeve.  She grabbed the younger woman and took her to Reina’s room.  Her face had turned into a strawberry as Ai released her hand from the torn material.

“Reina, are you okay?”  Ai asked as the scar appeared in front of her with the dull light exposing the reality.

“I… am.  Thank you.”  She removed the jacket from her body and grabbed Ai’s hand to feel the pain on her body.  She never felt a scar that seemed hot to the touch but at the end, she had seen the canvas filled many pains carved into her body.  Ai ran over each of them once before pressing her lips on top of hers.

“Let me lock the door.”  She turned the lock.  “Reina, I need to say this.”

“What is it?”

“I love you.”

Ai didn’t care about the clothes scattered on the ground.  She didn’t care about the other women.  She didn’t care about what she had done three years ago.  She cared about Reina.  It was her job to protect her from the people tearing her bit by bit.

Six years of pain, love, lust, and disappointment filled her life with Reina.  The scars were the reminder that she couldn’t escape reality but cover it up when it came to the truth.  Then, the call about her parents weaved through the vines of the deep forest to get to her.  Reina was over her fear by then but she her dark faith came to an end as Ai left for home.

Ai said goodbye earlier as Reina went off to work.  It was her last words to a person who gave six years of life to protect only to see the last of her nine lives perish on her way out.  Ai knew only when she arrived at the airport by her roommates.  A dagger was in her heart but no tears were shed then and it wasn’t shed at the funeral.  It finally came when she was alone in the house, the house she had ran away nine years ago, the room was the same as she left it.

She was alone to face her life.  The feeling Reina had felt that time ago.  It came back like tidal wave.  No wall could stop it, she didn’t want to stop it, it was finally a day where she could let out everything into the world and start new.  The cloud still lingered but at least it was different from then or as she hoped it would never hit her hard.
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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 6 10/14/12
« Reply #18 on: October 16, 2012, 03:36:28 AM »
it feels so blue to see such an insecure cat... :cry:

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Re: Time Capsule Chapter 6 10/14/12
« Reply #19 on: October 16, 2012, 06:00:34 AM »
it feels so blue to see such an insecure cat... :cry:

I spent a while thinking of how I should approach her and pretty much came to the realization that she will be important to the story
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