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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
« Reply #100 on: November 15, 2015, 12:04:09 PM »
Dude, do you enjoy writing this?

I mean, with the little part that I wrote, I enjoyed it.

Yes I do, I take my time to write it and besides I don't got much to do other than stare at AKB news, play video games and stare at what stupid things my friends in FB are doing.

I enjoy my work like I enjoy TGIF Baby Back ribs....(Fun fact I added my love of it to my story if you noticed the 'boar ribs')

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
« Reply #101 on: November 15, 2015, 12:12:33 PM »
And would you focus more chapters on other members? Like Takamina, Paruru ect...

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
« Reply #102 on: November 15, 2015, 12:14:32 PM »
My next chapter will be focusing more on Churi on the mission and Paruru on being the sister of a soldier.

Plus Churi and Osgar are frenemies

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
« Reply #103 on: November 17, 2015, 09:55:38 AM »
Now I want to ask you a question guys:

How do you like my writing of Sakura and Rainoric? Is there anything I can do to improve myself writing of their relationship?


What do you think would you like me to do with Takamina?

Did I write Gizzur well enough for you to picture him as a Psycho?

Who wants to see Gekikara vs Rainoric as a Christmas present to all of the fans of that Crazy ***** (I mean super saiyan dragon girl (That I wanna kick her booty))?

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Vanoran
« Reply #104 on: November 17, 2015, 01:40:58 PM »
Now I want to ask you a question guys:

Who wants to see Gekikara vs Rainoric as a Christmas present to all of the fans of that Crazy ***** (I mean super saiyan dragon girl (That I wanna kick her booty))?

*raises hand high in the air*

Geki's gonna kick his butt. :3
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The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
« Reply #105 on: November 18, 2015, 07:38:57 PM »
New Chapter up ahead of schedule guys!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/13

Things escalate very quickly
Osgar and Churi really are on each others nerves
We learn more about why the Gimaelics hate the Ghogthals
Osgar gets high, dances shirtless and flirts with Geki (Which I wrote to be as funny as my best writing ability can make)
Gekikara/Rena Matsui/Samhane Haligtide is a freaking Badass (and flirt psycho)
Takamina rallies the Vanoran Legions

and.......

The Beggining of an epic throwdown between

The Dragon Lady of Hyogo VS Rainoric Eadwulf , Wulfgar Bjornsson and Ulrich Langobard
in an epic 3 on 1 throwdown!!!!

Invite your friends and any Gekikara fan for next time in BCB we'll have a fight to decide who is....

THE DEADLIEST WARRIOR!!!! (Insert Epic announcer voice)

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
« Reply #106 on: November 18, 2015, 07:56:50 PM »
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIII GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!

GEKI GETS MORE AND MORE EPIC WHENEVER I READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! >w<
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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
« Reply #107 on: November 20, 2015, 04:44:11 PM »
What do you like most about my story? :hip smile:

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
« Reply #108 on: November 20, 2015, 08:38:10 PM »
What do you like most about my story? :hip smile:

GEKIKARA, DUH!!!!!!!!! XD

Geki: *giggles*
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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
« Reply #109 on: November 20, 2015, 08:39:50 PM »
What do you like most about my story? :hip smile:

GEKIKARA, DUH!!!!!!!!! XD

Geki: *giggles*

ChuriGeki. Plus the fact Churi and Osgar are friendly rivals.

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The Red Banquet
« Reply #110 on: November 21, 2015, 05:42:28 PM »
Hey Guys! I could use some help again,

I made a poll asking what should I name the Army of Folllowers that Rainoric is leading.

If you have a name of your own pls say so...

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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alt.End
« Reply #111 on: November 22, 2015, 09:51:03 AM »
The ChuGar Chronicles: Horror Night Alternate End

"Ok, Im going to contact a ghost..." Takayanagi Akane said to her webcam. She is currently making a series of videos on her Youtube channel on how there is a 'ghost' haunting the very land that is her house. But the truth is, she was just trying to fish some views for her channel and possibly even subscribers.

The plan was to 'contact the spirit' with a chant she learned from her local library and the 'ghost' in which is her friend Airi would appear and scare her.

"Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary...." Churi chanted. As she looked to the camera she could see her friend Airi dressed up as a ghost behind her.

*Ring! Ring! Ring!*

Her cellphone suddenly began to make its ringtone as a frustrated Churi picked it up. To her surprise and horror it was her friend Airi.

"Hey Churi-sama, My I got a cold right now and I cant come to your *cough* house tonight. How about on friday? *cough*" Airi said.

Churi hung up her cellphone and slowly turned her head back. Her breath was tense and her mind was in utter confusion. Was Airi pulling off a prank on her?

When she turned back she saw noone whether dead or alive behind her.  She turned back to her laptop screen to see that the ghost girl she 'summoned' was still behind her.

"Aaaahhh!!!!" Churi screamed. She actually summoned Bloody Mary. And now the Urban Legend of a ghost woman is here to ruin her day.

The ghost caressed Churi's neck and began to tighten its grip on her throat. Churi inhaled panickingly as she struggle to fight for her life. But her weak frame, build and physical strength waned as she is slowly losing oxygen to Bloody Mary.

Just as she was about to rise up with her birdy friends to the great big nest up by the branch over the large tree (Heaven). The tightening grip on her neck was loosened. Churi gasped for air as she laid down on her bedroom floor.

"Take that! And that! And *spits* THAT!" Said a barbaric sounding voice.

"Who's there? Who are you?" Churi asked.

The lights turned on and to her surprise it was Osgar Daguth who rescued her from Bloody Mary. Osgar had bashed the ghost with his barrel mug of ale mixed with wine 'till the ghost retreated back to whatever circle of Hell did she came from.

"Someone who loathes you B*tch!" Osgar raised his voice and his mug to the air and drank some more of his drink.

"Osgar-san? What the heck are you doing in my room?" Churi asked, picking up a Chunichi Dragon's bat that she has in her room for self-defense.

"Think the proper question is why the bloody hell are you summoning the dead? And besides, the only person who is allowed to hurt you in all ways of the world  is ME!" Osgar pumped his thumb to his chest.

"You dont have the right to hurt me? Osgar you.... you..... stinky, piss poor, barbaric.....uhm" Churi was confused to think of another insult she could throw at the Spearmaster.

"Piss poor? Is it because I cant pee on a toilet properly, after I drank like 10 rounds of Ale?"

"Well you could'nt get a single drop of your Urine in!" Churi shouted

"Well maybe if it wasnt for a Bird-hugging Japanisch Fotze who keeps pushing me around the toilet trying to 'improve your aim' then your bathroom wouldn't look like a taverns Vomitorium." Osgar argued

Churi swung her bat to Osgar who only grabbed it and took it away from her hands. Osgar then threw the merchandise bat away.

"That's it! Your arse is mine!" Osgar raised his arms in feral way and grinned his teeth. He charged at Churi with and bit her clothes.....


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"Rrrrrr.......*munch*.....lie still you wench................rrrrrrr........*munch munch munch*........... Your skin taste better raw cooked Churi...... stop screaming................ I like your mouth.......*drools and kisses*" Osgar sleep talked with a pillow he was holding. It had bitemarks and saliva stains all over its cloth.

Churi looked at the Spearmaster with confused disgust. It almost as if Osgar was making out with the pillow like if he was doing it with the occasional tavern wench during his bar hopping trips with Ulrich, Gizzur and some of the men.

"Henjin" Churi said before going back to her bussines.



(New Drabble Series called : The ChuGar Chronicles. Where Me and MayukiIsLife write short stories of BCB's own Tsunderish couple.)

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Well, the oddest thing about that is, I can imagine what Churi's bathroom looks like, and can imagine what Churi's baseball bat looks like (signed by the players, ect).

(And btw, does the drabble have to follow the plot? I might rewrite it if not.)

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Just drew and colored some crudish sketches of some of my OC's in my story.

You wanna see them here?

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The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : The ChuGar Chronicles (Poll)
« Reply #114 on: November 26, 2015, 02:18:58 PM »
Having  a hard time naming my title for the next chapter....


Rena help me out! And you better not say
'How Rena kicked Rainoric's booty so hard that even Mayu and Yuko wont touch it'

In other news which army is more badass?
Gimaelics or Vanorans?






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From the rate of

Unflinched to Pisa my pants,

How scared would you be if a Gimaelic shouts
'TE HETA HADA WODAN!'

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The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
« Reply #116 on: December 03, 2015, 01:53:00 PM »
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407/15

Rena vs Rainoric! (Hope its great guys)

Complete with Explosions! Blood! Destruction! And seizure inducing light shows!
We learn the terrifying powers of Dust!
Rainoric got a 2nd blade up his sleeve.
Sakura has the POWER!
And Takamina joins the Legion.....


And I forgot where I keep my stash of hot sauce. Going to date Rena with some of them.


Rainoric uses EXALTED BLADE!!!! (Not my pic)



Gekikara uses Bladestorm!
(Something like this! Just imagine her doing that in Majisuka, MG5 might have ended differently if she did this)


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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
« Reply #117 on: December 03, 2015, 02:21:03 PM »
Quick question guys, I want to name Hayato's Dust Horse but I cant think of a name.


Any suggestions? It should sound or mean something badass since were talking about....



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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
« Reply #118 on: December 03, 2015, 06:35:09 PM »
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! >w<

Hmm... the Dust Horse's name should be......*thinking*........


(If a girl) Scarlet or (if a boy) Crimson. :3
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Re: The Barbarian's Cherry Blossom : Usurpation of Power
« Reply #119 on: December 04, 2015, 12:45:18 AM »
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD!!! >w<

Hmm... the Dust Horse's name should be......*thinking*........


(If a girl) Scarlet or (if a boy) Crimson. :3

Dust Horses are Asexual Ruka to let ya know

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