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Offline Vikitty

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« on: June 02, 2005, 06:54:14 AM »
Hahaha okay the non-porn fanfic forum has been sort of lonely lately, so I'm posting the Ishiyoshi ficlet I wrote about a week and a half ago. Originally it was going to be an alternate take of another fic I wrote, but it sort of got a mind of its own and went elsewhere. XD

There IS a cutscene that happens which will raise the rating significantly, and when I write it it'll go up in the smut fanfic forum, so don't worry. I've never written graphic femmeslash before so it could be a while before I finally stop blushing and/or laughing long enough to write it.

Anyway! I don't write fiction involving real people ever, so this is really only my second stab at it. Love it or hate it, maybe even enjoy it if you like?


Title: Untitled
Author: kremlindusk/kdlite
Pairing: Hitomi Yoshizawa/Rika Ishikawa
Rating: PG-13 (Subject to change)
Summary: Takes place the night of Rika's graduation. Rika can't sleep and takes comfort in a certain someone. >:D


A soft knock on the hotel door was the first thing sign of life that Hitomi Yoshizawa had seen - or rather heard - since she had locked herself into her private room after an exhausting evening at the Nippon Budokan. The emotionally draining concert had been fun, but also sad because it marked the graduation of her fellow fourth generation member Rika Ishikawa.

Yossi was well-known for her composed disposition even during the most emotional of concerts, so nobody had really expected her to have a breakdown onstage in front of everyone as she bid farewell to Rika. Instead she'd given a speech to the teary Rika, hugged her tightly and grinned at her before everyone else had swooped in to  perform the encore.

Her good mood had stayed intact on the long ride back to the hotel where everyone was staying - including Rika, despite her family's insistance that she go home and get some much-needed sleep. But Ishikawa could be stubborn when she wanted to, and she had refused to leave her former group until she absolutely had to. So Yossi had found herself shoved in the backseat of their van with Rika on one side and Miki Fujimoto on the other. She had spent the ride fending off Miki's constant attempts to flirt with Ai Takahashi and Asami Konno who were in the seat in front of them. She had been tempted to ask Rika to switch places with her, but the darker-skinned girl was staring out the window with a wistful expression on her face, and Yossi didn't want to bother her. Instead she elbowed Miki in the ribs and told her to stop bugging the younger girls.

They all barely had the energy to stumble down the hallways to their hotel rooms, yawning "Good night" before crashing into bed. Yossi hated going to sleep without washing off all the makeup and sweat from a night of dancing and singing, so she had taken a hot shower until the water had run cold. She'd probably regret it in the morning when there wasn't any hot water left, but for the moment all she cared about was relaxing.

The knock came again on her door, and Yossi quickly finished running a towel through her damp hair and tossed it aside before making a run for the door. She almost tripped over her half-packed suitcase on the way, but she managed to make it safely into the hallway and snuck a peek through the peephole, unlocking the door as soon as she saw who it was.

"How can you still be awake?" Hitomi asked, one eyebrow arched in perplexion as she held the door open for Rika, who was wearing her pajamas but was still in full makeup from the show. Her hair was still pulled back and styled, but the bobby pins had come undone and it was starting to come down. Even though Rika was dressed in pink plaid pajamas, Yossi couldn't help but give her girlfriend an admiring once-over as they stood there in the doorway.

"Still on an adrenaline rush, you know?" answered Rika, nudging the door shut with her bare foot. "Besides, Reina and Eri are in the room beside mine, and they're playing video games or something noisy. At two AM!" She threw her hands up in frustration. "So I couldn't sleep if I wanted to..."

Yossi nodded sympathetically, feeling her friend's pain. One of the perks of being the new leader of the group was that she didn't have to share a room. Neither did Rika, since it was her graduation and she needed all the sleep she could get, but while Yossi's room was beside the quieter Konno and Risa, Rika's room was adjoined to Kamei and Tanaka's. It was a recipe for a deadly headache.

"You can stay here for the night if you like," Yossi offered. "I don't mind sharing." She caught a glimpse of Rika's unexpected blush and laughed. "Ishikawa, I didn't mean it like that..." She took Rika's arm and pulled her over to the bed to sit down beside her. "Besides, I just had a shower..."

Rika grinned and playfully sniffed the air between them. "So that's why you smell so good, huh?" Still smiling, she leaned in closer and closed her eyes dramatically, her pefectly-shaped brows furrowing as she concentrated. "Is that vanilla shampoo, Yossi?  Seems like your feminine side's taking over you tonight." Her eyes opened to see Yossi glaring at her, her arms folded.

"It is not! I just wanted a nice hot shower. And the kind of shampoo I use isn't important!" she protested. "I just used what was in the little bottle in the bathroom..." Ishikawa was still grinning knowingly at her, not saying anything. "Why are you still staring at me? It's just shampoo, Ishikawa. You can have it if you really love it that much..."

"You were expecting company tonight, weren't you?" asked Rika innocently. "Or maybe you were planning to be someone else's company." She looked up at the taller girl seated across from her from underneath her long eyelashes.

"Well, I was worried about you! I mean, tonight was pretty intense... I saw how upset you were when we were backstage." Blushing, she continued. "So yeah, maybe I was planning on seeing if you were okay. I didn't expect to find you at my door right as I was getting ready to leave," she admitted sheepishly. "But you're here now..."

Rika's grin of triumph softened slightly at Yossi's confession, and she couldn't help but feel touched by her girlfriend's good intentions. She moved closer to Yossi on the bed and wrapped her arms around the taller girl's neck, looking her in the eyes. "I'm fine, Hitomi-chan." She supressed a giggle at Yossi's surprised expression before continuing. "I mean, I will be. It's just been a really long night." She smiled reassuringly, but Yossi could see the sadness in her eyes.

Rika held Yossi's gaze for only a brief moment before looking away, chewing nervously on her lip. Yossi could tell she was trying to fight back her emotions, and she wrapped her girlfriend in another hug, pulling her into her lap. "I know. But it's okay, really. Like I said, you can stay here for the night, if you want. I don't mind having you here." She kissed Rika's forehead and grinned.

Rika blinked the tears away and grinned back at Yossi, shaking her head slightly. "Yossi, there you go again with your sensitive side... Keep that up and everyone'll know how girly you really are."

"Because you'll tell them, won't you?!" Yossi sniffed and folded her arms, sulking. "Blackmailer." She held back her laughter for as long as she could, and was rewarded when she felt Rika's soft hands on her shoulders, gently pulling her back towards her.

"But that's why I like you, Yossi," Rika said matter-of-factly. "Because you're sweet to the people you care about, even if nobody else is around to see it. I'm lucky that I get to see that side."

Yossi felt her cheeks start to burn again, and she laughed nervously. "Stop, look at what you're doing!" She held her hands against her flaming cheeks and grinned. "You're so in for it now, Ishikawa. You know I hate it when people make me blush!"

"But you look so cute!" Rika protested before she was pushed playfully onto her back by Yossi, who was smirking mischieviously.

"Any last requests?" she asked, wiggling her eyebrows suggestively. "Because I plan on getting my revenge on you for that." Rika's eyes widened slightly but she played along, feeling the anticipation starting to creep up on her.

"Be gentle?" she said after a moment's thought as Yossi crawled overtop of her, her eyes twinkling with mischief.



Quite some time later, they lay there together in bed with the covers arranged hastily over them. Rika's eyes were closed, her arms wound around Yossi's waist as she sighed contently in her lover's arms.

"Think we need another shower?" Yossi said cheekily, looking down at her girlfriend. She felt Rika stir slightly at the idea. "I'll take that as a yes?" Rika's eyes slowly fluttered open, and she blinked a few times before focusing on her girlfriend's face. "If you can even walk," Yossi giggled, secretly pleased to see her girlfriend was still recovering. Nodding, Rika attempted to sit up but her arms were still shaking and she flopped back down clumsily beside Hitomi, groaning.

"Yossi, what exactly did you do to me?"

Yossi grinned wider, leaning over and propping herself on one elbow, admiring Rika's figure before answering. "The usual. I could go into exact details, or if you want the instant replay..." She chuckled softly and gave Rika a quick kiss before resting her forehead against the other girl's. "I didn't hear you complaining at the time." She felt Rika's elbow jab weakly into her ribs, and she pulled away. "Hey!"

"Don't tease me, then!"

"What kind of teasing d'you mean?" asked Yossi, one hand on Rika's thigh as she spoke. "Teasing like..." She raised the pitch of her voice and chirped "I'm Charmy Ishikawa! The true vision of cuteness!" She smirked and returned to using her normal voice. "Or..." She crawled slowly on top of her, her hand sliding down between them to stroke the inside of Rika's thigh with slender fingers as she covered her girlfriend's mouth with her own, kissing her passionately. She heard Rika moan beneath her, and it took all of her willpower to pull away after only a few moments to prove her point. " that?"

"The first one," Rika answered finally, glaring at her girlfriend with narrowed eyes. "And that was the worst impression of Charmy. You're fired."

Laughing, Yossi found the blanket that had been shoved aside and covered the both of them, yawning as she did so. "But I still get to sleep with you, right? Scandalous."

"You're heavy," Rika complained playfully when her girlfriend wrapped her arms around her waist once more and laid her head on her shoulder.

Yossi growled in annoyance, her laugh muffled against Rika's neck. "I am not. Besides, sex burns calories so if anything I'm lighter then I was earlier today." She felt Rika's hand moving up her bare back, and she shivered slightly at her lover's touch. "And that wasn't meant to be a hint, you crazy nympho. You should try and at least get some sleep tonight." Rika didn't answer immediately, but her hand instead settled on the back of Yossi's neck, her fingers absently toying with the hair there before she spoke.



Offline TheQuickening

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« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2005, 05:12:39 PM »
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Ok, ok, ok...that's ONE HELL of a teaser kdlite.  You ARE gonna be filling in the "~*~*~*~" parts, right?  RIGHT?  
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Offline Vikitty

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« Reply #2 on: June 02, 2005, 07:12:11 PM »
Hahaha yes yes yes! I promise I will eventually, it's just going to take a lot of courage to jump right in and attempt it.   :twisted:

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« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2005, 07:25:12 PM »
"...what exactly did you do to me?"

that's similar to a line I wrote in my first fanfic. hehe Yea I don't really write graphic slash either, my other story in the other forum is the closest I can get.  Nice story without going all the way, it kinda leaves it to your imagination. (which is similar to how my first fanfic was too, heh)

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« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2005, 04:59:43 AM »
Hahaha yeah it's harder then it sounds.

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« Reply #5 on: July 16, 2006, 08:00:41 AM »
Oh, this is cool. I read the "~*~*~*~" version too. Wow, good job. Smut is hard!!

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