A.L.I.V.E. (Multiple Pairings) Part 4. Whole Bunch Of Misunderstandings

[Yuseichaaan48]

Hey........... I'm new here........ Nice to meet you... *shy* *tries to approach but runs away* 

*runs away for a while and comes back* HEYO!!!!!! SAKURA CHAN~~ CHU~~~!!!!   (I know... I'm weird!)

I read 5 parts in one day... that's so rare of me. Good job Yusei!  (remind you of anyone? :v)

This is just pure awesomeness! JUST SO AWESOME!!!! why caps... oh well 

Now lemme comment on EACH chapter cause some baka told me to do so. Of course, I won't name anyone. (I HOPE THAT DIDN'T CONFUSE ANYONE) 

But first. *sips tea like a wise man*  (ME? A WISE MAN? WOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!)

CH. 1

Wow... Minami is so bold! 

Damn Mayu, how can you come up with such plan? Oh yeah... I like that girl over there, I'm gonna kidnap her! 

Mama Yuko, HOW CAN YOU AGREE! I DO NOT BLAME HARUNYAN FOR HOW SHE REACTED AT ALL!

But its Yuko.... this is normal behavior from her. 

CH. 2

Papa Rena's "Hobby" *shivers* 

Good job Tomochin! Nicely done! 

MILKY MAKES AN APPEARANCE! I just had to point that out xD

Dat Marimii moment! 

CH. 3

Kai, ok... I understand, Mario the same thing.

BUT THOMAS?! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA 

WOAH WOAH WOAH! HOLD ON! DAT YUKORENA! 

Le Smut

WHAT CAN I SAY? THAT WAS AWESOME! 

but... she had to tiptoe! LOOOOOOOOOL  (God... I used the same smiley like three times.... That's such a fail...  )

 

CH. 4

Ahhh.... that Yuko xD

GOOD JOB JURINA. THAT IS HOW YOU PROTECT YOUR WOMAN! 

Nee.... why does Jurina and Rena remind me of something.... HMMMM NEVERMIND THAT 

Nice..... CHIBI! way to make your girl happy :v  (Just felt like whistling... PROBLEM?!)

AND LOOOOOL, when the person who is getting kidnapped, is willing to be kidnapped, it ONLY makes the plan THAT much easier. 

I mean... I'm just saying, it's the hardest discovery in the world! 

AND I'M ALMOST DONE WITH THIS FREAKISHLY LONG COMMENT. I need a life...  I'm even laughing at myself  (SAME SMILEY AGAIN!  )

Hmmmm.... So I gues Bye bye now 

Btw... I still don't know you! Mama told me not to talk to strangers... so... 

Anywho, Bye bye~~~ I needa go sleep now!  (totally like that :v)

But before I go! CHUUUUUUU!  (god... I really need a life)

Anyways, Jyanee!  (same smiley again... I give up.. OTL!)

[chiqinna]

this is my first post here!! 
oh well~ I read this when I was a silent reader before I guess..  (or maybe too lazy to comment =_=")
whatever~ I'm gonna comment since my name were summoned in this  kidding~

I re-read this story today already~ 
wew you made a little of YukoRena there~~~ I see what you did there~~~ 
Jurina kakkoi~~ Wmatsui~~ 

in the previous chapter where Marimii-

and Atsumina so sweet~~ 
their little moments is just sweet as I am~~ 
hope to see more of their moments in the next chapter nee~ 

well~~ can't wait to see Mayuki to meet again~ 

jyaaneee~~~~ 

[miyumi]

Sugoi sugoi sugoi!!!! I wanna see more!!! Update soon!!!!! 

[deguchi]

COOL~~ like the story! Specially atsumina part so sweeeeet~
update please..

[frosted_tuna]

interesting storyline.  i rewatched jane doe after reading a bit of the first chapter.

[wmatsui fanfic.]

Eh. You killed her. 

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What happened??  Why did Rena jump. At least she have Yuko for her


It's nice fic arigatuo

[Korisu29]

 
good job author-san!!!
i like it!!