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Re: Broken Destiny Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapters 21-25 11/19/09)
« Reply #60 on: November 22, 2009, 03:36:25 AM »
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Thanks for the IshiGoma explosion

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapters 21-25 11/19/09)
« Reply #61 on: November 23, 2009, 03:11:36 PM »
Wow when you update, you update big, but heck who's complaining XD

Woohoo they won the match! :cow: Seems like Rika has a different idea of celebrating their win hehe :twisted:

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapters 21-25 11/19/09)
« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2009, 07:57:47 PM »
^ :lol: :lol: :lol: The imagery! The imagery!

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapters 21-25 11/19/09)
« Reply #63 on: December 04, 2009, 08:47:46 PM »
FINALLY!!! Finished season 1!!!ahahahaha...YEY! Oh yeah..the song that Maki 'composed'.. was really a song by Ayumi Hamasaki...ahahaha... I just thought it fits the story... :grin:


The last chapter was  ;) sweet but a little towards the perving lol


Ahahaha... yeah... I just continued it on the next chapter...LOL

Another explosion, but I like it, lot's to read at once.
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Thanks for the IshiGoma explosion
Wow when you update, you update big, but heck who's complaining XD

Well, I just wanted to finish season 1 right away... coz as I've said...my favorite's season two...so now...I'll update really slow...well, not that slow..  I mean... one by one... specially on the first chapters..where I'll let you guess who the new characters were.XD

Ganbarre Cogi chan! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope nothing bad happens to destroy this peaceful harmony. Boy that would suck.....


What? Don't look at me that way!
I'm reading this now for the first time :halo:

EHHH??! FIrst time???? REALLY????  :O


Chapter 26

Fireworks lit the cold night sky. Rika and Maki were watching the New Year fireworks show in their subdivision park together with their parents. Rika brought with her a gas mask so as not to trigger her asthma with all the smokes coming from the fireworks. They had fun that night. Maki’s mother brought some Roman Candles and sparklers. They shared them with Rika’s family.

“I’m really happy that your daughter was able to bring back my daughter’s smile.”

“It’s nothing. I’ve never seen my daughter this happy after she met your daughter.” Mrs. Ishikawa said after lighting her sparkler.

“Well, I guess we benefited from each other. I really hope that Maki’s a guy. I’ll gladly give the hand of my daughter to him if that happens.” Rika’s father joked and they all laughed while watching the two from afar.

“Look at our parents… They’re laughing… Hey don’t do that! That’s dangerous!” Maki yelled at Rika. Rika aimed her Roman candle beside Maki.

“And you really think that I’ll fire this to you?” Rika laughed.

“Geez, you’re so much like your father. I guess they were laughing because of his funny jokes again.

Maki and Rika wrote their names in the air using the sparklers. They were so happy that time that they were able to spend the start of a new year together. When they got tired, they watched the fireworks display under a tree. It’s almost two o’clock in the morning when their parents called them to go home. They will have to wake up early to go to the shrine.

………..
If there were many people in the shrine last Christmas, that number doubled this time.
“Aren’t you coming with us to have your fortune checked?” Rika’s mother asked her when she told them that she will go to the entrance of the shrine.

“I’ll wait for Maki. We want to get our fortunes together.”

“Ohhh, just like some lovers ne~e? You know what, if Maki’s a guy, I’ll get you two engaged already.” Rika’s father laughed so hard that Mrs. Ishikawa had to hit him in the shoulder and reminded him that they were still in the shrine.

“Stop that, you’re making our daughter blush. Look, she’s turning into a tomato. Well then, we’ll go ahead of you. Maki’s staying with us tonight right? I’ll prepare a good dinner. The two of you can go anywhere you want but be home before dinner, ok?” Mrs. Ishikawa said before pulling her still laughing husband towards the fortune teller booth.


I’ll get you two engaged already

“If they only knew” Rika stayed near the entrance for about 15 minutes more until she saw Mrs. Goto with Maki. Mrs. Goto and Maki went inside the shrine to pray. When they were finished, Rika went to them.

“Ohayou! Happy New Year!”

“Happy New Year too!! Where’s your parents?” Mrs. Goto inquired.

“They already went home after they checked their fortunes.”

“Is that so… Are you going somewhere after this?”

“Yes mom, we’ll go to the amusement park. They have a promo, a ride-all-you-can for a low price.” Maki answered.

“If that’s the case, let’s get our fortunes checked already so you have lots of time to enjoy your New Year.” Mrs. Goto led the way towards the booth. She immediately picked a paper containing numbers from inside the bowl and gave it to the man managing the booth. He found the number that Mrs. Goto picked and gave her a piece of paper where her fortune was written.

“You’ll have to retain the look of your house so as not to have bad luck.”

“Hey mom, what’s your fortune?”

“My fortune is… that I have to get some pictures right now of our house so that we can apply its design to our new house in Tokyo so as not to have some bad luck. I’ll get going now. Just get your bag in our house when you go home after having fun in the amusement park. You’re staying with Rika tonight right?”

“Hai.”

“Alright, have fun but be careful, ok? Jaa!”

“Jaa!” They both answered. Both their parents were somewhat cool. Rika’s parents were jokers specially his dad and Maki’s mom were fun to hang with because she was acting like just like a teenager. They were not strict and were very close to them. That’s why, Rika and Maki were enjoying their life to the fullest. They both drew out a number and gave it to the man and after a couple of seconds, he gave them their respective fortunes.

“My fortune is… A new, happy life will unfold before you this year.” Maki declared. She looked at Rika and smiled. “And it’s already unfolded in front of me.”

“That’s a good one… You’re somewhat like a poet” Rika laughed. She knew that she was the one Maki was talking about. “Mine’s….” Rika was stopped when she read her fortune.

“What is it? Is it bad?” Maki asked.

“Your loved one will hurt you deeply. You must accept it so as to be happy again… It’s pretty weird, right?” Rika commented after reading the paper.

“Hmm, but I’m sure I’m not the loved one that paper is talking about. I’ll never hurt you.” Maki pulled Rika away from the booth. These matters were hard to discuss in public. They went to the bus stop and waited for a bus going to the amusement park to arrive. Rika was silent. Maki knew that she was still thinking about her fortune.

“Hey, stop thinking about it. Don’t let that little piece of paper ruin your life.”

“But it’s what written in my fortune. I don’t know what I’ll do if it gets true.”

“We are not bound by fate. We, ourselves, make our own destiny. That fortune will just serve as guides or just an advice. My mom went home to take a picture of our house so that she can apply it too to our new home. But that’s not enough for us to live a happy life. Even though we don’t follow that, I’m sure we’ll both be happy because we love each other. Now you if believe seriously in your fortune, unconsciously, you’ll decide on things that will make that fortune to come true. Don’t let this happen, ok? Think positive.” Maki explained. That’s what her father said to her when she was young. She somewhat became sad but she tried her best not to show it to Rika.

Rika thought for a while and then threw the paper on the trash bin. “Hai, I’ll follow what you said.”

“Let’s have fun in the park!” They boarded the bus when it arrived. When they arrived in the park, they immediately tried different rides and attractions. Rika was clinging to Maki tightly when they went inside a haunted house. Rika was teary eyed from all the screaming when they emerged from the exit.

“Wow, you’re really brave! You didn’t even scream when a creature jumped right in front of us.”

“I guess that you become brave when you are protecting someone you love.” Maki replied and Rika blushed hard.

“Stop that! You’re embarrassing me with you’re poetic language.” Rika hit Maki on her shoulder and Maki laughed instead. They enjoyed their stay in the amusement park. They rode the Ferris wheel just after sunset, before going home. Maki insisted that they must go home already but Rika pulled her towards the ride. She had no choice but to follow Rika because she didn’t want her to feel sad. She hesitantly rode the Ferris wheel. The lights from the city and the cars make a wonderful view from the top. Maki sang something softly.

Do you believe in fate --
A momentary encounter
That changes everything in your life
Before that?

We notice it the moment our eyes meet someone's
We come to feel it sure in contacting with him or her
But then once
We feel weak in the knees

The wind strokes my cheeks and makes me feel real
Whispering softly that this is not an illusion at all

I've been thinking that I couldn't reach your voice
I've been thinking that this dream wouldn't come true
But the person before my eyes is
You see? No one else but you

Where does this road lead to
And how does it continue?
Even if I imagine them
It's of course that I have no clue

I feel the more I wish to be strong
The weaker my heart becomes in inverse proportion

I shouted your name in tears
I wished I wouldn't wake up, if it were a dream
Ah, the person before my eyes was
You see? No one else but you


Rika stared hard at her and smiled. “That’s the first time that I’ve heard you sing! I never thought that you have such a wonderful voice… What’s the title of that song and who sang it?… I’ve never heard it before.”

“I’ve… composed it… And I guess that it’s not yet finished.” Maki said while blushing.

“Sugoi! I didn’t know that you’re a poet and a composer rolled in one… Hahaha!”

“I guess you become like that when you have such a wonderful person in front of you that gives you inspiration, gives you strength.”

Rika suddenly turned serious. She knew Maki was up to something… Or something was bothering her thoughts when she saw Maki tear up for the first time.

“You might perceive me as a strong person, but inside… I’m still a kid, afraid of loosing something important in my life. I’ve lost one, many years ago, and I wouldn’t let it happen now that I’ve found you.” Rika went to Maki and hugged her. The ride’s going to end up pretty soon and they might have to continue this conversation in their house. But Maki continued.

“My father… died when we went to a hiking trip. If I only gathered my courage back then. If I only helped him that time… If only… If only I’m able to face my fear of heights that time… he may have been still alive this time.”

Rika was shocked to hear that Maki has an alto phobia. That’s why she was hesitant to board this ride. She was somewhat sad to hear her story that she started to tear up too.

“It hurts a lot… That’s why, I’ve told myself not to make anyone come close to me except my mother. Because I don’t want to experience that same pain again if something happens to that person… But all of it changed since you’ve started coming into my life. I was like this before my father died, not like the loner and gloomy person that you first saw. I just made that personality. I was first a happy person. I’ve always joined in our school’s singing competitions. When my father died, I didn’t talk for a year. My mother had to get me out of the school. She enrolled me in a culinary school instead. At least, I can do something that will avert my mind from that fateful day. We transferred here 2 years ago and she tried to enroll me in a formal school again. I just talk when our teacher will ask us about something. I guess you’ve noticed that, that’s why you befriended me. I’m really thankful to you that you managed to make me smile again and let me experience how good it is to feel how to love somebody again.” Maki finished their conversation just before the ride stopped. Rika wiped away her tears but Maki cried so hard that it is hard to conceal from the curious staff.

“What happened to your friend?”

“Ano… She was afraid of heights, its nothing really.” Rika explained and she got a hard smack from behind from Maki. “Why did you do that? It’s the truth.”

They went first to Maki’s house to get her bag. When they got to Rika’s house, their dinner had just been served.

“What did you do to Maki? Why do her eyes look swollen?” Mrs. Ishikawa inquired.

“Ano, I forced her to ride the Ferris wheel but once we were inside, I realized that she had some trauma… phobia on heights… That’s why she cried all throughout the ride.” Rika explained. Half of it was true. Maki really had a phobia but that’s not the main reason why she cried.

“Maki, don’t let our daughter bully you. If you need to hit her, just do so.” Mr. Ishikawa replied.

“Otousan, hidoi!” Rika exclaimed and both her parents laughed.

“So, Maki, what do you think of our daughter?” Mr. Ishikawa asked. Maki was caught off guard by that question that she almost spit out the water that she was drinking.

“Ano, What do you mean by that?” Maki asked.

“Well, it’s just that the two of you act like lovers… and if you were really a boy, I will think of this dinner as, you formally announcing that you loved our daughter… or something like that.”

Both of them blushed at the same time. They were also afraid that they showed too much affection earlier that their parents noticed what they tried to hide from them.

“Aww, you made them blush at the same time…. Just ignore him.” Mrs. Ishikawa said.

“No, really. Try to visualize with me… If you cut Maki’s hair short and add her ‘gentleman’ character… She will really look like a guy.”

“And what’s your point here?” Mrs. Ishikawa asked her husband.

“Well, my point is…. If Maki’s a guy… How did he fell in love with our not-so-beautiful and troublesome daughter…”

“OTOUSAN!!!! You’re embarrassing me!!!” All of them laughed at Rika. Maki was relieved that it was just another one of Mr. Ishikawa’s joke. After dinner they went upstairs and took a bath. Rika had a large bathtub inside her room. Her mother prepared it. She put some oil and flowers so as the two of them can relax after a weary day.

“Dry your hair thoroughly before you sleep, ok? Oyasumi!” Mrs. Ishikawa left the two of them in the bathroom.

“Now, what shall we do?” Maki asked, her faced turned red when she saw Rika removing her clothes. She immediately turned around.

“Take a bath of course…”

“At… the… same time?” Maki heard Rika entering the tub. She didn’t reply first but Rika splashed some water on Maki.

“At the same time of course! Come on… Don’t try to act innocent. You’ve already seen my body last week.” Rika grinned at herself. Maki removed her clothes and entered the tub.
“Wow, this is relaxing. The temperature’s just right.” Maki commented.

“That’s why I always let my mom fix my bath for me… I just don’t get the right temperature right. It always ends up either too hot or too cold.” Rika couldn’t let her eyes off Maki’s body which made the other uncomfortable. “I didn’t know that you have abs…” Rika trailed off.

“My father was such a sports addict that he trained me in different sports when I was young. My favorite is futsal and basketball. That’s why I have this athletic body.” Maki tensed her right arm and showed her muscles.

“Wow, sugoi!” Rika went to touch Maki’s arms. “It’s so firm at such a young age… I envy you. Even though I was in the futsal team for a long time now, I didn’t develop that body…” Rika trailed off. Her eyes focused on Maki’s lips. Couldn’t resist the temptation and she kissed Maki’s lips. Maki on the other hand, put her arms around Rika’s neck and returned the kiss. Maki shifted her position and was on top of Rika. The scent of the oil and the warm water made them lose their minds on what they’re doing. After a while they both got up and Maki dried their bodies with the towel. She lifted Rika and carried her towards the bed. Luckily, Mrs. Ishikawa locked Rika’s room before she got out, that they had no worries that they will be disturbed.

“I love you… Very much.” Maki whispered to Rika’s ears after their fiery activity on the bed. She got the sheet and covered their naked bodies with it.

“I love you too.” Rika replied and hugged Maki before sleeping soundly that night.


……………..
The days passed by quickly. Maki and Rika were looking great wearing their toga as they march down the aisle. It’s both a sad and happy day for all of them. They were all happy because they passed their elementary education and were now getting ready for the next level. However, it’s also sad because some of their friends were going to other schools for their junior high level… Just like Maki. Tomorrow will be the day of their departure in this city. Maki promised to keep in touch as soon as they will arrive in Tokyo. Rika was thinking about this thing when the principal called her name for a speech. She was the valedictorian and Maki was the salutatorian. After her speech, the students went up to the stage and sung their graduation song. Some cried as they sing along. Rika tried her best to hold back her tears. She saw that Sayu was making a ‘scene’ on the corner. She couldn’t sing anymore because she was wailing while hugging her two best friends. Rika understand her situation. Sayu was moving to Tokyo to continue her study there. She visualized Maki doing the same thing as Sayu… That made her smile a bit. Maki wouldn’t do something like that. She looked at Maki and giggled a little bit. They were nearing the end of the song. Maki gave her a quizzical look and Rika just shook her head.

……..
Lots of picture taking were done after the ceremony. Abe-sensei called her varsity members to have a shot taken. Rika and Ayumi were in front as the captain and the sub-captain of the team. Sayu’s eyes were really swollen from all the crying that she positioned herself near the back together with Reina and Eri. Maki was beside Rika. After the shot, Abe-san called her friend, Kei. Yasuda-sensei on the other hand, called the remaining students of class 6-A. It turned out as a large pictorial session. Many were happy but some were still crying.

……….
Rika and Maki’s family went to a restaurant to have a celebration: for the graduation of their daughters and also, for the safe journey of the Goto’s. After the celebration they went home at the same time. Rika hugged Maki tight when they arrived in Maki’s home.

“Oi, you’ll break her bones…. Do you want to injure her the day before her trip to Tokyo?” Rika’s father joked. He somewhat did it because he knew that Maki was her daughter’s closest friend… and it’s really hard to let go of the person whom you are close with.

Rika released Maki and gave her father a glare… “Hidoi…” She said weakly. She didn’t stop her tears now. She just let it flow freely down her cheeks. Mrs. Ishikawa walked towards her daughter.

“We have a gift to you, which might be able to help you feel better.” She gave Rika the present. Rika was delighted when she opened it. It was a cell phone.

“I already got the number. Your parents gave it to me while you were on the stage… so I can store it on this…” Mrs. Goto gave Maki a cell phone too. It was the same as Rika’s, but only the color differs. Maki and Rika were both happy. At least they can communicate with each other now.

“Since you’re a valedictorian, your mother and I decided to give you that phone… Be sure to take care of it.”

“Arigatou!” Rika exclaimed.

“That’s the first time that I heard that from you again. All I can hear was ‘Otousan, hidoi!’” Mr. Ishikawa imitated the small voice of Rika. The rest laughed after that. Maki and Mrs. Goto went inside their house and Rika’s family walked towards their home. Rika immediately tested the phone and she called Maki.

“Konban wa!”

“Knoban wa… Are you on your house now?”

“Hai, I’m on my room now… I just checked whether this stuff works, have a safe trip tomorrow!”

“Hai… Oyasumi!”

“Oyasumi… Aishiteru.”

“Aishiteru..”

………….
Rika went to Maki’s place to help them pack their remaining things and clean the house a little bit. They already sent some of their stuffs to Tokyo yesterday. Mrs. Goto will be the one driving their car. They finished at around 2 in the afternoon. It’s a long trip to Tokyo about 7 to 8 hours by car. She hugged Maki tight, one last time before she entered their car.

“I’ll keep in touch often!” Maki promised.

“I hope we can see each other as often as we could.” Rika answered back.

“Don’t worry, we’ll visit you and you parents if we had some free time.” Mrs. Goto assured her.

“Thank you! We’ll be glad to entertain you in our house. Take care!”

Rika waved at them until she could no longer see the car. She went back to their house. She called Maki after dinner using her new keitai.

“Konban wa! Have you eaten already?”

“Hai, we just had our stop over at a certain restaurant. How about you?”

“Hai, I’m already here in my room… Hey you know what… I’m bugging my parents to let me study there in Tokyo too!”

“Really? That’s great… That means we can be together again!”

“I really hope that they will say yes… Well anyways, I’ll not bug you further. I’m sure that you’re tired already. Have lots of rest when you get there… Take care!

“Hai! Oyasumi!”

………………
Rika woke up early. She was sweating profusely because of a strange dream. In her dream, she was calling Maki but Maki would not notice her. She approached Maki.
“Why are you following me… Who are you anyway?”

“I’m… I’m Rika…. I really missed you a lot!”

“Rika? I’m sorry, I don’t know you…..”

Maki walked away and she tried to run after her but she couldn’t reach her. A piece of paper flew right in front of her.
Your loved one will hurt you deeply. You must accept it so as to be happy again

Rika woke up right there. Her dream must be telling her something. Maybe Maki will see some good looking girls in her new school that she will eventually forget her. It was 4 in the morning. By now, Maki and her mother might still be sleeping in their new home. It was a tiresome journey after all. She decided that she will call her up in the morning. She forced herself to sleep again.

……………..
Rika immediately ran down to eat breakfast. It’s 9 in the morning and she decided that she will call Maki after eating.

“Ohayou! What our breakfast for today?”

Her parents just looked at her sadly. She noticed it and she taught that they were playing a joke on her right now.

“Hahaha… Funny… Stop teaching jokes on mom... It’s not funny you know.”

“We’re not joking right now… Just sit on the chair first before we reveal the news to you…” Mr. Ishikawa said gloomily.

“What news?” Rika’s heart beat very fast. It’s now clear that her parents were serious this time.

“We… watched the news on the tv earlier… and ……” Mrs. Ishikawa stopped. She was crying too hard that she didn’t have the courage to continue.

“Maki met an accident. The car bumped into a tree just before they reach Tokyo. The gas tank leaked and it exploded.”

“No… that’s not possible… You’re joking right?” Rika can’t believe what she heard. She then changed her mind when she saw her father cry too. “Did… th... they survived?”

“No…. They were burned to crisps… If it wasn’t for the car’s plate number, they couldn’t have told who they were.” Mr. Ishikawa tried to say in between sobs.

“No… no… NO!!!” Rika ran to her room. She immediately called Maki’s phone… It’s out of reach… She tried and tried but to no avail. She threw the phone and wailed.

“It’s not fair!!! IT’S NOT FAIR!!!!”

…………….
Their school had a ceremony for Maki when they leaned what happened to their former student. Even though it’s still vacation time, their school grounds were filled with students and faculty members. Rika couldn’t have the strength to give a necrological speech as the captain of the team. Ayumi took her place instead. Reina and Kusumi gave some speech about Maki. Hearing all of that makes Rika want to cry even more. Sayu’s family cancelled their moving to Tokyo for the mean time to attend the service.

Mrs. Goto and Maki’s ashes were placed inside an urn and were sent back to their place from Tokyo. Mrs. Ishikawa took the urn so that she can give it to one of Maki’s relatives when they searched for it. Ever since that day, Rika stayed near the urn and didn’t talk to her parents for almost month. She just looked at the urn and cry all day long. A cousin of Mrs. Goto arrived from America to get the urn. Rika didn’t want to give it at first. She didn’t want to get far from Maki again. Mrs. Goto’s cousin got a small bottle and filled some of it with Maki’s ash.

“I know my niece wouldn’t want to be far away from you, either… Please take care of this instead.” She gave the bottle to Rika. Mrs. Ishikawa gave her the urn. She accepted it and went on her way back to the hotel. Rika put a small ring on the lid of the bottle and put it on her necklace that Maki gave her.

“Now, we’ll never be apart again….”


End of Season 1

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Re: Broken Destiny End of Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapter 26 12/04/09)
« Reply #64 on: December 04, 2009, 09:08:59 PM »
 :on GJ: :on GJ:

great job on the whole fic :applause:

too bad on Maki's sudden death but that last chapter seemed blunt especially mentioning her death (just a note)

Now season 1 is over and how is season 2 going to shape up
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Re: Broken Destiny End of Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapter 26 12/04/09)
« Reply #65 on: December 04, 2009, 10:36:18 PM »
Woah, I was not expecting that to happen. :shocked That was so asdgfhfgh.

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Re: Broken Destiny End of Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapter 26 12/04/09)
« Reply #66 on: December 05, 2009, 02:22:46 PM »
What the f@%&! :stoned:


Please tell Maki is still alive! Please tell me that Maki has apparated from the car shortly before the accident and will magically appear in front of Rika in the next season :on polter:




Until the next season... :on hobo:

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Re: Broken Destiny End of Season 1 -IshiGoma (Chapter 26 12/04/09)
« Reply #67 on: December 08, 2009, 08:13:31 PM »

:on GJ: :on GJ:

great job on the whole fic :applause:

too bad on Maki's sudden death but that last chapter seemed blunt especially mentioning her death (just a note)

Now season 1 is over and how is season 2 going to shape up
~Ahahaha... I'm still a newbie when I wrote that... so yeah...XD
Woah, I was not expecting that to happen. :shocked That was so asdgfhfgh.
~Hang in there~!XD
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Please tell Maki is still alive! Please tell me that Maki has apparated from the car shortly before the accident and will magically appear in front of Rika in the next season :on polter:
Until the next season... :on hobo:
My lips are sealed...just read it..  :P
So here it is!!!! THe second season.. Second season means more characters... and lots of conflicts and mysteries...that's why it's my favorite season..ahahahaha...Enjoy reading.XD

Chapter 27

Rika stayed in their school for her junior high. She’s not that active and happy anymore. Ayumi tried her best to cheer her best friend. Somehow she knocked some sense into Rika’s mind.

“What are you trying to do? Be like Maki for the rest of your life? You even told me before that Maki was really glad that you let her out of her former life… Do you think Maki’s happy right now wherever she is when you’re looking like that?”

By that, Rika started to make friends again. But she didn’t want to play futsal anymore. She just focused on her studies more… She had a vision that she wanted to come true.


“I’m Rika Ishikawa. My family just moved to Tokyo last week. I hope we can all be friends. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!”

“Thank you, Ishikawa-san. You may sit in that empty chair in the corner near the window.”

“That’s where her seat was when we were in elementary…”

“Is there a problem with that, Ishikawa-san?”

“Ahhm, no ma’am. It’s fine with me.”

“Please sit down now so we can proceed with our lessons.”

“Hai!”
“I wonder why you always look outside… What do you want to see out there?”

“Yoshizawa, please be good to her, Ok?” The teacher looked at the girl on the right side of Rika’s seat.

“Hai, Nakazawa-sensei.” She looked at the new comer with glaring eyes.

“Is your sister coming to school tomorrow?”

“Hai, she’s just recovering from a slight cold. She’ll come tomorrow.”

“It’s good to hear that, let’s proceed with our lesson for today.”


…………….
Break time

“Ishikawa-san!!! It’s so nice to see you again!”

“Ehh? Kamei-san!! I didn’t notice that we’re in this class! How are you?” Rika hugged her friend tightly.

“I’m at the furthest corner of the room, maybe that’s why you didn’t notice me earlier. I’m fine…” Eri said after breaking free from Rika’s tight hug.

“I didn’t know that you’re here in Tokyo too…” Rika said.

“Well, we didn’t want the three of us to be separated… After the funeral service, we asked our parents to move here in Tokyo. Sayu and Reina are in section B.”

“Really?… Well, it’s nice to see old friends again. Could I hang up with you guys?”

“Of course! I’m sure those two will be happy to see you again… “

“Thanks!”

“Hey, I saw what Yoshizawa did earlier. Don’t be scared with her. She’s really well known around here. She’s somewhat a bully.”

“I’m not scared. I don’t mind at all.”

…………
Lunch time

“Ishikawa-san!!!” Sayu and Reina rushed up to Rika as soon as they saw her and hugged her tightly.

“Guys, you’ll break my bones!”

“Gomen!” Reina said while releasing her arms around Rika. “It’s just that we haven’t seen you for a while.”

“I didn’t recognize you at first… You’ve cut your hair short.” Sayu commented while touching Rika’s hair.

“I’m not the only one who has cut her hair short...” Rika said and looked at Eri. “And besides, I’m still planning whether I will dye it blonde or not. I’ve seen Masae-san’s new hairdo last week… She’s sporting a multi-colored hair right now.”

The three were having a hard time to visualize their former team mate’s new hairdo.
“Well, it’s hard to imagine Rika, our valedictorian, sporting that kind of hairstyle. I wonder what’s the reaction of Ma-k…”

Reina immediately covered Eri’s mouth. “I’m sorry… She didn’t mean to say that.”

“Don’t worry its ok. You can let go of her mouth now. You’re killing her, she’s already turning blue… Hey, I’ll just go to the restroom. Excuse me for a while.”

“Ahh, sure. The restroom’s just around the corner.” Sayu pointed the direction of the restroom.

“Thanks! I’ll be back in a minute!” Rika smiled at the three before she left for the restroom. She just made that up for fear of breaking down in front of her friends. She ran to the nearest cubicle and tear up a little. Even though she pretended that she already moved on, whenever Maki was mentioned, she couldn’t’ help but tear up a little. She got her necklace with the small bottle.

TBC

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 27 12/08/09)
« Reply #68 on: December 08, 2009, 09:15:36 PM »
Rika moves and maybe a IshiYoshi coming up soon :D
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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 27 12/08/09)
« Reply #69 on: December 08, 2009, 09:58:56 PM »
Ah Rika, how hard it will be to move on from such a tragedy.

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 27 12/08/09)
« Reply #70 on: December 09, 2009, 09:13:45 AM »
Hello there!

Look what i have been missing out again... XD but i read all in a shot.~


MAKI IS DEAD~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :on speedy: -> It's a little late though.. but then... T.T
just as i was starting really to love Maki~


So it is going to end up to become a IshiYoshi?  ;)

Anyway~ are we going have any possible relationship with the 3 cuties? The Bunny, Kitten and Turtle~ Sorry~ i just love them too much..  :P

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 27 12/08/09)
« Reply #71 on: December 09, 2009, 12:49:56 PM »
*still moping the tear-stained floor*

Huh? New chapter? Yatta!!! :cow:


Poor Rika. At least she met up with some old friends and the rokkies are signed up for the 2nd season. So more TanaKameShige to read (though not romantically :P).

But I spy Yossie here. IshiYoshi? Nooooooo I want Maki back :cry:

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 27 12/08/09)
« Reply #72 on: December 10, 2009, 06:46:38 PM »
Rika moves and maybe a IshiYoshi coming up soon :D
Ahahaha...well, it's 'somewhat' IShiYoshi... but the 'Yoshizawa' on the first chapter of the 2nd season... is different... Just read the next chapter to find out!XD

Ah Rika, how hard it will be to move on from such a tragedy.
Yeah... a HARD TIME...*evil grin*

@amEthystx - Hi there!!! Ahahahaha...don't be sad... Maki will still make some appearances... in the form of flashbacks and dreams! :lol:
About the rokkies... well, they're really good friends.  XD

@badsaints- you want Maki back? *grabs the book of the dead*
AMUN RAH.. AMUN RE....
Sorry... can't read hieroglyphics.  :hee:

Anyways, on to the next chapter.XD


Chapter 28


“Good morning class! Yoshizawa, do you feel better now?” Nakazawa asked while putting down her things on the teacher’s table.

“Hai, I’m fine now ma’am. Thank you for your concern.”

“We have a new comer, her name is Ishikawa Rika.”

“Hai, I knew about it. Miki told me yesterday” Yoshizawa looked at the girl in front of her.

“Speaking of your sister, where is she?”

“She just went to the library to get something for her report.”

“Oh, so she’s the first reporter then. Ok, let’s wait for her.”

“Hey, I’m Yoshizawa Hitomi. I hope my sister didn’t give you a glare yesterday.” Hitomi whispered to Rika. Her chair is behind Rika so she just leaned forward for the other to hear clearly.

“Well, she did but I don’t mind it.”

“Miki’s like that. But she’s really a sweet person. If you don’t mind, you can hang around with us. Hope you like your stay here in our school.”

“Thanks.” Rika whispered back

………
Lunch Time

“Do you want to come with me and my sister to eat lunch?” Hitomi asked Rika while getting her bento box. Miki was just listening intently nearby, fixing her things.

“I’m sorry, but I promised my friends that I will eat with them today. Maybe next time we can eat together. Thanks for inviting me.”

“Ahh, it’s alright, you can come with us if you have sometime… Ja!” Hitomi handed out to Miki her bento box “You’re such a lazy person, making me carry your food.”

“Hahaha, well I’m the older sister so you must serve me very well.” Miki snatched the bento box from Hitomi and ran towards the door.

“Hey, that’s not fair!!!!” Hitomi shouted. Before going out of the room, she smiled at Rika and waved goodbye to her. Rika also waved her hand and sighed.


………
At the cafeteria….

“Sayu was really freaking out that time! It was just a small pimple on her face…” Reina was relating a funny incident that happened to Sayumi when they were in the Junior High.

“It’s so nice of you that you all went in the same junior high school... Is that part of your best friend pact?”

“Ehhh? What best friend pact?” Eri was surprised at what Rika said.

“Did we do some pact when we were in elementary? I can’t seem to recall…” Sayu said

“I remember Yasuda sensei told me that she found the three of you inside a room after school hours. She said that she saw the three of you signed something on a paper. It looked somewhat like a list, and then…. If I remember it right, Eri got a soft drink, then you all drank from the same bottle… And at the end, she said you all shouted… ‘For our friendship! Best friends forever!!!”

“WHAT?!?! Did we really do that?” The three of them were somewhat shocked from what they have heard.

“Yasuda sensei would never lie to me...” Rika laughed while reminiscing the thought.

“I really can’t remember it.” Reina said. “I guess I have a memory gap now.”

“Is it memory gap or anesthesia?” Sayu suddenly asked out of nowhere. They all burst out laughing.

"Sayu, it's AMNESTY not Anesthesia!" Eri replied which made Rika and Reina laugh louder.

"GAHHH~! What's wrong with the two of you... AMNESIA!!!" Reina smacked Eri and Sayu's head. After the laughing died down, Rika turned serious.

“Well, some things are meant to be forgotten. But even if you don’t remember it fully, the three of you did what you promised before. You’re always together until this time.”

The three looked at Rika sadly. They knew that she still didn’t move on with her life. Maki was everything to her and losing a loved one was really devastating. Rika changed a lot ever since that accident. As much as possible, she wanted to be alone. She didn’t smile as much as before. They didn’t had any news about her when they entered Junior High but, from what Rika was showing to them right now, they could tell that she was still unhappy during the past three years.

“I still can’t get over you..”

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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 28 12/10/09)
« Reply #73 on: December 10, 2009, 06:59:39 PM »
Thank you for pointing that out, well i will just say IshiYoshi will be possible lmao

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« Reply #74 on: December 10, 2009, 11:55:03 PM »
Wow, Yossi and Miki are sisters. That makes me laugh for some reason. Poor Rika.

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« Reply #75 on: December 11, 2009, 12:37:55 AM »
Rokkies friendship is cute here :wub:

But Yossie and Miki being sisters here are kinda amusing :lol:

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Chapter 29

Rika went to school earlier that day. When she got to her room, she was the only person in there. She sat at her desk and looked outside. She could see the Sakura trees and the clear blue sky. It reminds her of their favorite place when they had their breaks. Before they graduated, she was pleading her parents to move to Tokyo… so that she and Maki could go together in one school. Her reason is that schools in Tokyo were better than in their town… Her parents had second thoughts but then, that accident happened. She was really shocked by that news. She didn’t speak for a whole month. Her parents decided to cancel their moving to Tokyo. She took her junior high in their school, just like Ayumi and Nozomi. She made an important decision after her graduation.

“Dad, let’s go to Tokyo now…”

Her parents looked at each other. They knew that their daughter was really affected by the death of her beloved friend.

“Are you sure you’re ok now?” Her mom asked.

“Hai… I’m alright… I want to study in Tokyo High…”

……..
Nee, Gocchin… Where will you study in junior high and high school?” Rika was resting on her lover’s shoulder. They were watching the New Year’s fireworks display under a tree. Both their parents were nearby.

“Since we were moving to Tokyo… I guess, I’ll take my junior high and high school in the Tokyo high…” Maki responded after a minute of thinking.

“I wish I could go with you… I heard that the standard of that school is really good… It will be a challenge for both of us if that happens…” Rika sighed… Only three months left, and Maki will move out of this place.

“Well, my mother and I are the only one’s who will live in that house… and it’s kinda big for two persons… If you want to stay with us, ask your parents about it..”

“Really?! Yey! I’ll ask my parent’s about it….” Rika happily cried out.

……
I guess this is the only thing that I could do for you… To realize your dream of going in this school…

Rika sighed loudly, still looking outside. She didn’t notice that someone was already behind her.

“Got any problems that I could help you with?”

Rika was stunned. She looked back and saw a smiling Hitomi behind her. “Geez…. You scared me there…”

“Sorry, I didn’t mean to surprise you… Well, are you ok now?” Hitomi asked. Rika knew she was pertaining to the “sigh” she let out.

“Hai… I’m fine… just reminiscing things, that’s all.” Rika answered. “How long have you’ve been there?”

“About five minutes ago… You were so engrossed in your reminiscing thing that you didn’t notice us while we were entering… Even though Miki was REALLY loud at that time.”

“Ehh? How loud? I didn’t hear anything”

“Really loud…She was annoyed because she forgot her cell phone in our house that she slammed the door open... and then it bounced back and hit her on the face” Hitomi almost fell into her seat because of intense laughing.

“Is that the way you treat your IRRITATED sister this morning?” Miki sarcastically asked while making her way towards her seat. She went to see whether the clinic was already open at that time. She got some ice which she put on her reddish forehead.

“Hehehehe… I hate to tell you this but that was really funny…. It seems that the door got its payback by bouncing back and hitting you straight in the face.” Hitomi didn’t stop laughing.

“Oh, is that right?….” Miki pulled back Hitomi’s uniform and put the ice inside. Hitomi yelled when she felt the ice touch her warm skin on the back. Miki got Hitomi’s head and locked it in with her right arms and then messed Hitomi’s short hair with her left hand. Hitomi tried her best to pull away from her attacker. With her left hand, Hitomi tickled Miki on the waist and immediately, Miki loosened her grip. Hitomi ran away from her sister.

“Hehehe… You can’t catch me now…” Hitomi playfully said to her sister and then she stuck her tongue out.

“You’ll gonna pay within this day… remember that…” Miki glared at her sister… she closed her fist, ready to punch Hitomi but then…

“Are you always like this every morning?” Rika asked. She was somewhat amazed at the two… This is the first time that she saw two sisters’ fight each other.

“Well, that’s what sisters always do…. OUCH!!” Hitomi cried in pain as Miki punched her in her right arm while she was still explaining to Rika. Hitomi grabbed her sister by the collar and kicked her shin. It was Miki’s turn to yelp in pain.
Before their ‘war’ grows larger, Rika immediately squished herself in between the two to stop them.

“Stop that will you?!... It’s so early in the morning and both of you were very noisy…. If Nakazawa-sensei will see you like this, I don’t know what she will do to the two of you.” Rika suddenly blushed. In her intention to stop the two, she accidentally placed her hand on Hitomi’s breast.

“I think you should be very scared right now after groping my sister!” Miki was glaring intently on Rika. She slapped away Rika’s hand on her shoulders.

“Th… that was an accident… sorry.” Rika immediately removed her right hand from Hitomi and massaged her now stinging left hand.

“That was SO not nice of you onee-chan… Stop being so brutal with our new comer… You’re scaring her.” Rika was surprised when Hitomi hugged her. “She didn’t mean to slap you… She’s really nice…. When she’s sleeping” Hitomi whispered her last sentence to Rika’s ears. Her hot breath touching her skin makes Rika blush more.

“And I supposed you’re enjoying your position now, little sis… You thought that I didn’t hear your last sentence…did you?” Hitomi released Rika at once after Miki said that in her coldest voice ever. Hitomi knew that Miki was already at her limit.

“Ahmm, Gomen… Am I disturbing the three of you?”

The three of them looked towards the door. They saw Eri standing behind it.

“Eri!... I have something to show you…” Rika immediately went towards Eri and pushed her away from their room. “The two of you, please stop fighting… You’re old enough for that.” Rika managed to say before leaving the room.

…….
What are you going to show me?”

“Nothing… I just needed an excuse to get out of that room.”
“I didn’t know that there are weird people here in Tokyo high…”

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Chapter 30

Rika was exploring her new school the next day. She didn’t enter their room when she saw that the two sisters were fighting again. She overheard that their fight was because of futsal. As she was walking, she was reminiscing her futsal days with Maki.

……….
“So, let’s warm up first.”

“Ehh? Why do we have to? We were just going to kick balls. And besides, it’s a waste of time. You must teach me now the basics of kicking a ball.”

“And have some cramps in the end? Warm ups are important so as not to hurt ourselves in the end. So, even if you don’t like it, you must do it!”

“Fine, fine… Let’s do it quickly.”


……..
“Ehh?! WAIT A MINUTE….” Rika said loudly. She immediately put her hands to cover her mouth. She was glad that she was alone and only few students are around that morning.

…..
My father was such a sports addict that he trained me in different sports when I was young. My favorite is futsal and basketball. That’s why I have this athletic body.
…..

“Why did she tell me in the first place that she didn’t know how to play futsal? And if her father taught her sports, he must have taught her the essence of a warm up? What was she thinking that time?”
Rika stopped her strolling and leaned against a tree to think. That didn’t make sense at all. If Maki already knew how to play futsal, why did she have to pretend that she was just a novice at it? Rika massaged her temple. Her migraine was attacking again because of the strain.

“Nee, are you alright?”

Rika turned to see the person. “Hai, daijoubu. My migraine’s just attacking right now. I’ll be fine in a minute or two.” Rika dug her bag and got her medicine. She swallowed a pill smiled at the person in front of her. “I’ll be fine now... You’re my classmate right?”

“Hai, my name’s Aya Matsuura… Are you sure you’re fine now?”

“Hai, the pain’s disappearing right now.” Rika assured.

“Good… Well then, I’ll leave you now… or do you want to walk along with me to our classroom?”

I guess it’s a good idea… At least, I had a companion while watching those two fighting again. “Hai, I’ll go with you..”

…….
“I’ll not pass the ball to you if you continue playing like you had no teammates!”

“Well then captain, try to pass the ball to other members and we’ll miss the chance to score!”

“I know that you want to win but we can’t win just by the two of us! You’re supposed to act more matured than I am because you’re older than me, but what you’re suggesting is so immature!”

“Well, I have my own will… I’ll do what I think is best for the team!”

“Can’t the two of you hold your tongue in such a peaceful place? Geez, you’re making my head hurt again…” Rika couldn’t just keep quiet anymore. She left their room about 10 minutes ago and up till now, the two sisters’ were still fighting with each other.

“Ohayou Ishikawa-san!” Hitomi greeted her warmly. She then looked at the girl standing next to Rika. “Ohayou, Matsuura-san!”

“Ohayou…” Aya blushed a little and went immediately to her seat in the front row.

“Will you stop flirting with those girls? You’re annoying me with your ‘gentleman’ image… I don’t want any of your supporters following us.” Miki glared at her sister.

“I’m not flirting with them! I’m just being a polite person who knew how to communicate with OTHER people!”

“WHAT”S THE MEANING OF THIS?! Are you sisters fighting again early this morning?”

“SHE STARTED IT!!” Both of them answered at the same time and pointed at each other. Rika just sighed and went to sit in her seat. At least Nakazawa-sensei will take care of those noisy sisters. Hitomi and Miki were summoned by Nakazawa to the guidance office. Aya spoke when they already left the room.

“You’ll get used to it as time goes by…. That’s their medium of expressing their love. The bigger the fight, the more they respect and love each other.”

“How can that be? I can’t see the logic behind it?” Rika was suddenly became curios about the Yoshizawa sisters.

“Well you see, usually… You can’t have a big fight with your friend… without hurting and breaking your friendship bonds right? And it’s also hard to find a friend that will accept you and all your negative characteristics… This principle can be also applied in your siblings.” Aya explained.

“Eh?... Gomen… But I still can’t get your point.” Rika said. Aya stood up and went to Rika. She sat on Miki’s chair.

“Well, it’s like this…. Miki will always say what she wants even though it’s harsh. Hitomi will also say what she wants to say without holding back. To us spectators, we see them like they were fighting. But when those two already expressed what they wanted to say, after the fight, they act like nothing happened… Their bond was not broken…”

Rika thought for a while… “Ahhh, now I get it… Well, I guess I’ll just bring some earmuffs when I go to school the next time.”

“Hahaha… Or don’t go to school too early…” Both of them laughed hard.

“Did I miss something?” Eri was standing near the door.

“Hai, you just missed Nakazawa’s rage this morning.” Aya replied. She stood up and went back to her seat.

“I suppose I’ll be glad on that one.” Eri replied

Rika was silent for the rest of the morning. Hitomi and Miki returned together with Nakazawa just before the bell went off. She was thinking of her conversation with Aya. She let out a sigh.
………
You have to trust Maki. She will not do anything that may hurt you.
……..
“Those two were really strange… Maki and I had some misunderstandings before but we never fought each other… Are siblings really like that? ”


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Re: Broken Destiny Season 2 (Chapter 29 & 30 12/18/09)
« Reply #78 on: December 19, 2009, 08:04:06 PM »
Yossie and Miki fighting :lol:

Rika is like fish out of water until she can get herself into the groove again
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« Reply #79 on: December 19, 2009, 08:22:56 PM »
Miki and Yossui are so funny. Rika can't understand that sometimes siblings fight? Or all the time, as is the case. It must be hard to get used to a new city and school.

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