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Title: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 11:34:34 AM
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Prologue

"Catch her!! Don’t let her run away again!" Takamina shout it out loud.

All the police obeyed Takamina’s order, they rushed into a building.

"Hey, 5 of you!" She pointed the police who stand behind her. "Follow me. We will get in from another side door." Takamina take her gun.

"Yes, sergeant!!"

I will capture you this time, you can’t running from me forever. She smirked.

======================== **** ========================

"Hey, Maeda!! What do we gonna do now?! The police already surrounded this place."

"Don’t worry Sayaka, we already through this for years. I know her strategy." She smirked. She’s a fool sergeant. She turned her head, “Yuko!!”

"Yes, Maeda!!"

"Put a timer bomb in that door. We gonna blow it up when the police reach this room." Maeda pointed a door in front of them.

Yuko did it as Maeda said.

"Rena, are you sure that you already sabotaged all CCTV cameras in this building?"

That girl, who called as Rena put down her glasses. “Are you doubting me? Of course I’ve done it. I’ve finished it about 10 minutes ago.” She put her lollipop into her mouth.

"Geez, Why don’t you tell us?! We can bring this money before the police came here. Urgh." A girl with tomboyish look seem annoyed.

"I said… don’t worry. Sae and Sayaka, both of you… bring this money out. I already prepared an ambulance outside this building, ride it." She grabbed a bag and threw it to Sae. "Change your clothes. Ah, the key in that bag too."

Sae and Sayaka nodded their head, they carried 4 huge bag and walk from another door.

"Done!"

"Great job, Yuko. Now, you can follow Sae and Sayaka too."

"Bu-but.. how about you?" Yuko seems worried.

"Trust me." Maeda nodded to convince Yuko.

Yuko give her a smile, “Okay.” She grabbed a huge bag. “Guys, lets go!!”

7 man nodded, the put their gun back into their pocket and carried the rest of bags on the floor.

After they went out from that room, Maeda looked at Rena, “Hey, are you ready?”

She took her lollipop out from her mouth, “Anytime.” She put it in again.

Maeda smirked, “Bring them in.”

======================= **** ========================

"Are you kidding me, Mayu?!" That girl is very angry and then she hit a table.

Mayu shook her head, but her expression looks so flat, “No, Matsui-san.”

"Why she did that?! She ruined our plan!!!"

"This’s not the first day you knew Minami, right?" Mayu grinned.

"SH*T!! She’s so greedy!!!"

Mayu laughed. “Save your anger.” She looked at her watch, “Hey, It’s already 4 PM!” Mayu looks excited. “It’s time to watch my favorite anime. See you tomorrow, Jurina.” Mayu turned back.

"MAYUUU!!!!!!"

But Mayu ignored Jurina and keep went out from that room.

Jurina didn’t believe about what happened now. She grabbed her hair with both of her hands.

H-How can I work with them?! This team is a mistake… I’m in the same team with a manga lover girl and a greedy leader??!!! ”Anyone… please kill me now..”

================= END OF PROLOGUE =================

I didn’t put Yuki in this prologue, but.. she’ll be here too.

Thanks for your support.

I give you my first fanfic that more longer than 4 shots. :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted [PROLOGUE]
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 19, 2013, 11:47:13 AM
Hulallala, nice story^^, Please update soon^^

Acchan: Yuko, count how much we got inside.

Yuko: Let's me see

Rena: So?

Yuko: Fuck this shit! 5 dollars
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 11:59:05 AM
Hulallala, nice story^^, Please update soon^^

Acchan: Yuko, count how much we got inside.

Yuko: Let's me see

Rena: So?

Yuko: Fuck this shit! 5 dollars

LOL... I like this.

5 dollars?!
If this's really happened, I'm sure that Acchan team will depressed like crazy and Takamina will think herself like a fool who wanna capture '5 dollars' robber. XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted [PROLOGUE]
Post by: chiqinna on October 19, 2013, 12:22:31 PM
TEN SHOTS!!!  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:
THREE PAIRINGS!!!  :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 12:46:04 PM
TEN SHOTS!!!  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:
THREE PAIRINGS!!!  :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:



Wh-why you hold that knife??  :on freeze:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted [PROLOGUE]
Post by: chiqinna on October 19, 2013, 01:01:55 PM
just for fun~~ *creepy smiles while eating lollipop*  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: cisda83 on October 19, 2013, 02:48:27 PM
interesting...

Here Minami is not a good leader at all...

very eager to catch Atsuko that she rush blindly...

Would Atsuko blow Minami up?

How are they going to be a lover here?

Eh... also for both Jurina and Mayu.. how are they going to meet their lovers...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the new story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: Kirozoro on October 19, 2013, 05:19:28 PM
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PROLOGUE

"Catch her!! Don’t let her run away again!" Takamina shout it out loud.

All the police obeyed Takamina’s order, they rushed into a building.

"Hey, 5 of you!" She pointed the police who stand behind her. "Follow me. We will get in from another side door." Takamina take her gun.

"Yes, sergeant!!"

I will capture you this time, you can’t running from me forever. She smirked.

======================== **** ========================

"Hey, Maeda!! What do we gonna do now?! The police already surrounded this place."

"Don’t worry Sayaka, we already through this for years. I know her strategy." She smirked. She's a fool sergeant. She turned her head, "Yuko!!"

"Yes, Maeda!!"

"Put a timer bomb in that door. We gonna blow it up when the police reach this room." Maeda pointed a door in front of them.

Yuko did it as Maeda said.

"Rena, are you sure that you already sabotaged all CCTV cameras in this building?"

That girl, who called as Rena put down her glasses. “Are you doubting me? Of course I’ve done it. I’ve finished it about 10 minutes ago.” She put her lollipop into her mouth.

"Geez, Why don’t you tell us?! We can bring this money before the police came here. Urgh." A girl with tomboyish look seem annoyed.

"I said… don’t worry. Sae and Sayaka, both of you… bring this money out. I already prepared an ambulance outside this building, ride it." She grabbed a bag and threw it to Sae. "Change your clothes. Ah, the key in that bag too."

Sae and Sayaka nodded their head, they carried 4 huge bag and walk from another door.

"Done!"

"Great job, Yuko. Now, you can follow Sae and Sayaka too."

"Bu-but.. how about you?" Yuko seems worried.

"Trust me." Maeda nodded to convince Yuko.

Yuko give her a smile, “Okay.” She grabbed a huge bag. “Guys, lets go!!”

7 man nodded, the put their gun back into their pocket and carried the rest of bags on the floor.

After they went out from that room, Maeda looked at Rena, “Hey, are you ready?”

She took her lollipop out from her mouth, “Anytime.” She put it in again.

Maeda smirked, “Bring them in.”

======================= **** ========================

"Are you kidding me, Mayu?!" That girl is very angry and then she hit a table.

Mayu shook her head, but her expression looks so flat, “No, Matsui-san.”

"Why she did that?! She ruined our plan!!!"

"This’s not the first day you knew Minami, right?" Mayu grinned.

"SH*T!! She’s so greedy!!!"

Mayu laughed. “Save your anger." She looked at her watch, "Hey, It’s already 4 PM!” Mayu looks excited. “It’s time to watch my favorite anime. See you tomorrow, Jurina.” Mayu turned back.

"MAYUUU!!!!!!"

But Mayu ignored Jurina and keep went out from that room.

Jurina didn’t believe about what happened now. She grabbed her hair with both of her hands.

H-How can I work with them?! This team is a mistake… I’m in the same team with a manga lover girl and a greedy leader??!!! "Anyone… please kill me now.."

================= END OF PROLOGUE =================

I didn’t put Yuki in this prologue, but.. she’ll be here too.

Thanks for your support.

I give you my first fanfic that more longer than 4 shots. :P



Omg it so cool, please update 'Atsumina' i hope there will be Wmatsui and Mayuki  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 05:33:23 PM
Omg it so cool, please update 'Atsumina' i hope there will be Wmatsui and Mayuki  :twothumbs

Hi. :)

Thx for reading..

But I'm sorry... you quote all text from my prologue.. your comment became very long... :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 05:39:17 PM
@chiqinna : I have a bad feeling because of your knife, your smile, and that lollipop..  :lol:

@cisda83 : Thanks for reading. Yes, there're so many questions because this is still prologue anyway..  XD
Your questions will be answered soon.  :D
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: ifzhaa on October 19, 2013, 05:54:39 PM
now 10shots ? WOW
anakpanti-san you'r my fav author ! Tx for this new story
:D
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 06:17:51 PM
now 10shots ? WOW
anakpanti-san you'r my fav author ! Tx for this new story
:D

Yup, some of my friends always told me that I should try to make a fanfic more that 4 shots.. :P

I'm your favorite? Wow, I'm glad to know it. :D
Thanks.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: chichay12 on October 19, 2013, 06:39:36 PM
CHAPTER 1 where are u?? :whistle:
update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 19, 2013, 07:00:40 PM
CHAPTER 1 where are u?? :whistle:
update soon :on gay:

I really wanna update it today. But... I can't open my tumblr since this afternoon. I save all my drafts in there.  :mon headbang:
Sorry to make you wait.. :(
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: Zita on October 19, 2013, 09:03:03 PM
This will have 10 shots???????????????????? :shock:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :grin:
Something I can look forward to. :kekeke:

Rena is so cool there.
And others too of course. XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: Konoe on October 20, 2013, 07:16:32 AM
I really wanna update it today. But... I can't open my tumblr since this afternoon. I save all my drafts in there.  :mon headbang:
Sorry to make you wait.. :(

I hope your tumblr will be fix soon because I'm excited for chapter 1 too.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: roto_131197 on October 20, 2013, 07:31:58 AM
Wa~ 10 shots Yahoooooo!!!!!!!
Waiting for your chaper 1 \^o^/ (you're one of my favorite author you know *wink*  XD )
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PROLOGUE]
Post by: anakpanti on October 20, 2013, 08:44:52 AM
Wa~ 10 shots Yahoooooo!!!!!!!
Waiting for your chaper 1 \^o^/ (you're one of my favorite author you know *wink*  XD )

Ah, Thank you very much. I'm glad to hear that.  :mon fyeah:

I will update it today.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: anakpanti on October 20, 2013, 09:31:40 AM
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PART 1

= Maeda Team =

Sae lie down on a beach chair. “Ahh…. This is so nice.” She put her sunglasses on.

Yuko take her surfboard, “Nice??! NO!!! This is AWESOME!! Wooohhoooo!!” She ran into the water and then she start to surfing.

Sae closed her ears. “Why are you so damn noisy all the time?!”

“Hahaha. Yuko is Yuko… oh come on, we love her cheerfulness.” A girl sat beside Sae. She made herself comfortable, and then she slurping her coconut ice.

 “I used to love it, but not anymore!” Sae looked at that girl, “Hey, where do you get that, Sayaka?”

“This?” She pointed her ice. “Rena gave this to me.” She grinned.

“Urgh! I hate that girl.” She turned her head, and then she closed her eyes.

*Inside The Hotel*

Acchan sat on a chair and then she drank her juice comfortably. A few second later someone caught her attention. “Hey, Rena-chan!! Why are you swimming in this hotel pool?? I guess... It’s better to swim on the beach with the others.”

Rena went out from the pool. She took a towel to wipe her wet body. “I didn’t like it… too crowded.” She sat beside Acchan.

Acchan chuckled. “You didn’t like… the crowd or Sae-chan?”

Rena rolled her eyes, “Both.”

Acchan laughed.

“Your laugh is still sounds weird.” Rena said it without looked at Acchan.

She suddenly stopped her laugh. “Tsk.” She stand up, she poke Rena’s shoulder. “Let’s go back to our room. We need to talk about something. We go back tonight.”

Rena looked confused. “About what?”

She smirked, “About our work stuff?”

Rena grinned. “Okay, but I need to take a shower first.”

“Sure.”

====================== *** =====================

Sae looked around. “Where’s she? I didn’t see her.” She pouted.

Yuko pinched Sae’s arm. “Aww….! There’s someone who missed her girlfriend. KAWAI..!!!”

Acchan touched Sae’s shoulder. “Don’t worry. She’s okay. She’s doing an important job for us. I’m sorry, but from now on… you’ll rarely see her. But she said that she will call you when she get a chance.”

Sae sighed.

“Guys.. don’t you get bored about our job?” Acchan started the meeting.

Everyone nodded.

“Yeah… I guess so. Too easy.”

Acchan smirked. “You get the main point, Sae. In these past 2 years, we always did it in the small scale… someone’s house. We need something new, something like a bigger challenge.”

“But… isn’t it too dangerous?” Sayaka frowned.

Acchan smiled. “Yes, it’s more dangerous. But.. I trust your individual ability.”
She looked at Rena, “She’s great in hacked the security system and manipulate the CCTV camera.”
She looked at Yuko, “You’re a very awesome ‘unlocker’! You can open any door or any safety box that you want.”
She looked at Sayaka, “You’re major in martial stuff, you defeated a big guy with 1 punch!! Awesome.”
She looked at Sae, “You-”

“She’s major in carried a lot of stuff at once. She’s strong, physical strength is needed here.” Rena smirked.

“You!!! F*ck!” Sae wanna grabbed Rena’s collar, but Acchan hold her.

“Relax, buddy.” And then Acchan looked at Rena. “This isn’t a right time to joking.”

Rena ate her lollipop. “Whatever.”

“When do we gonna do this?”

Acchan turned head to Yuko, “No need to hurry. We still need to prepare a lot of things.” Acchan pick up a paper from her pocket and show it to them, “Next month….. we gonna rob this place.”

==================== **** ===================

= Takamina Team =

Mayu put a stack of file on a desk.

“Thank you, Mayu.” Jurina started to open a file.

“Eeee…. Jurina.”

“Yes?” She still read the file.

“We got a new leader to replace Shinoda-sama.”

“Oh, who’s that? Is she/he is one of our friends here?” Jurina sighed. Mariko is a great leader, why did she apply her retirement in the situation like this?

“Yes… ehhmm….” Mayuyu looks hesitate. “It’s….. Takamina.”

“What??!!!” She looked at Mayu. “Say it again.”

Mayu scratched her head. “Our new leader is Takahashi Minami.”

Jurina stand up and went out from her room. She walked into Takamina’s room.

Takamina grinned. “Ohh… Jurina!!” She looks excited. “You came here to congratulate me, right?” She hugged Jurina, “You’re so kind, my best friend.”

Mayu opened the door, “Hey, what are you doing?”

Takamina turned her head. She release Jurina, and then she hugged Mayu.

Mayu smiled and she hugged Takamina back. “Congratulation.”

Takamina nodded. “Thanks. 3 of us will be a great team!! Yeah!”

Jurina rolled her eyes. No, we’ll become the worst team.

Mayu gave Takamina her ‘pleading eyes’. “Takamina… can I go home now? I wanna go to the bookstore… buy some manga comics. Pleaseee….. I already finished my work.”

Takamina frowned. But in a few seconds later she smiled. “OK!! No problem.”

Jurina smacked her forehead. See?

========================= A Week Later ========================

= The First Meeting: AtsuMina =

Acchan locked her house and then she walked to a bus station. After some minutes, the bus that she waited for is coming. She went in. I wanna buy some new clothes. The bus stopped in front of a Shopping Mall, and then she went out from that bus.

Acchan want to enter that Mall, but suddenly she feels thirsty. I think I will buy a drink first. She turned left. She saw a coffee shop there. She smiled and walked into that place.

She bought a medium cup of Ice Chocolate and a piece of brownies. She looking for an empty table.

After she found it, she sat there. “Ahh… it’s very hot today.” She took her phone. There’s a new message from Yuko. She read it. “Acchan…. Please buy a cap for me, a black one. I’ll pay it later. Thank you. *CHU*” She smiled while she read it.

When she’s about to put her phone into her pocket……
*BRAAAKKKK*

She's showered by iced coffee. She shocked. “YOU!!! Urgh!” Her clothes drenched.

“I.. I…. I’m sorry, my foot slipped.” That girl seems really sorry about that. She take some tissue and wiped Acchan’s shirt using that tissue.

That girl wipes it all. When that girl’s hand almost touches her chest, Acchan stopped it. “Enough.. enough.” If I have a gun now, I will shoot her head.

 “I’m sorry… Let’s go with me. My apartment is near from here. You need to change your clothes.”

Acchan surprised because her hand grabbed by that girl. “Wa-wait. Stop!” She release her hand.

“Okay, wait here. I will buy a new shirt for you instead.” That girl ran into that Mall.

“Weird girl.” She sat again and tried to calm down.

After some minutes that girl came again. She gave a plastic to her. “Here.” She sat in front of Acchan.

“Thanks.” She grabbed that plastic. Acchan stood up and she went into coffee shop’s toilet. She changed her clothes there. I hope that I won’t see her face again.

But it’s not like Acchan thought before. When she went out from the toilet, that girl still sat on a same spot.

“Hi, I’m Takahashi. What’s your name?” She smiled.

“Maeda.” She answered it in a cold way. Now, you can go away!

“Nice to meet you, Maeda-san.”

It’s not nice for me. Acchan sighed. “Sorry, I need to go home. Goodbye.” She stand up and leave that girl.

I lost my excitement to shopping.

----------------------------------

“Hey, Minami.” Jurina greeted her.

“Oh, hey. You guys, made me waiting for so long!”

“Ask her.” Jurina pointed her back.

Mayu show up from Jurina’s behind. “I’m sorry, we go to the bookstore first.” Mayu show her manga books.

Jurina’s phone ringing. She pick up her phone.

After the call ended, “Guys, we need to go back to the office now. We get a new teammate.”

“Great!” Takamina looks excited.

Jurina raised her eyebrows, yeahh… I hope she/he is not like both of you.

====================== **** ======================

= New Girl =

All man in that police office whispering one to other. “She’s so pretty.” “Yes, so beautiful. Like a goddess!” “Ahh… she’s my ideal type.” “Her eyes.. her eyes like the stars for me.” “Perfect!” “Love at the first sight.

Jurina seems irritated, “Shh… Can you guys please shut up?!”

Mayu hold Jurina’s arm tightly, “Ju-Jurina… she’s so gorgeous.” Mayu’s eyes looks sparkling.

“Urgh! All of you like a bunch of silly police.” Jurina rolled her eyes.

“Good afternoon for all of you!” Takamina stood in front of them. “We have a new staff today, and it’s already decided that she’s belongs to my team since today.” Takamina looked at that girl, “Please kindly introduce your self.”

That girl nodded. “My name is Kashiwagi Yuki. Nice to meet you, please take care of me.” Yuki bowed to all people.

Takamina laughed hard, “No, you take care of us. I heard that you’re very smart. You often got a perfect score in your academy test. I didn’t surprise that you entered to my elite team quickly. I mean.. you just graduate a month ago from police academy!”

Everyone clapped their hands.

Jurina smiled. Great, at least I have 1 normal teammate here. I’m sure that she has a very bright brain. For a normal people, it needed at least 3 years experience to get here.

Takamina walked to the place where Jurina and Mayu stands, Yuki followed her.

“Kashiwagi-san. Both of them are our teammates. Here, Matsui Jurina and she’s Watanabe Mayu.”

“Hi.” Jurina shakes Yuki’s hand.

Mayu still stood up like a stone. Jurina nudged Mayu’s hand. “Hey, greet her!”

“H-Hhh-Hi… I’m Watashi… Ah, I mean…  I’m Watanabe Mayu. Ni-nice ttoo-tto meet you.”

Takamina and Jurina laughed together.

Yuki smiled at Mayu, “Hi. Nice to meet you too, Watanabe-san.”

Mayuyu blushed.

“Hey, I have an announcement. From tomorrow, we will work in a same space. All of us will be moved into 1 room, so it’ll be easier for us to communicate.”

“Great idea, leader.” Jurina did a high-five with Takamina.

======================= **** ======================

Acchan’s phone is ringing.  She read a new message. “Everything is going well.

She smirked, “Good job.”

======================= TO BE CONTINUED ======================

I hope you like it.
This chapter didn't have a fight scene, still in peace.  :lol:

Spoiler for next chapter:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: Terragen on October 20, 2013, 09:59:15 AM
i don't know but yuki's is not right~

i hope she's not like what i think
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: blakwhite on October 20, 2013, 10:51:22 AM
thanks for update  :grin:

LOL, Yuko can unlock anything  :lol:

if NyanNyan is on your fic, i bet yuko will unlock nyannyan bathroom's door  or bedroom   :wahaha:

and i hope minami will capture acchan's heart quickly  :shifty:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: anakpanti on October 20, 2013, 01:52:26 PM
thanks for update  :grin:

LOL, Yuko can unlock anything  :lol:

if NyanNyan is on your fic, i bet yuko will unlock nyannyan bathroom's door  or bedroom   :wahaha:

and i hope minami will capture acchan's heart quickly  :shifty:

Ahh... thanks for your hilarious idea. I will put it in this fanfic someday.  :mon lmao:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: Zita on October 20, 2013, 02:30:14 PM
Takamina doesn't have respect. :doh:

BTW: Is Sae's girlfriend Yuki? :sweatdrop:
I hope she is not. :mon whimper: :on freeza:

I love your spoiler. :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: cisda83 on October 20, 2013, 03:17:22 PM
what a bad 1st impression there between atsumina...

How are they even going to be lovers later?

The love story between a cop and a thief... well multiple of them...

Ah... Mayu already interested on Yuki...

What's going to happen between the thieves and the cops in the next chapter?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: Archer1992 on October 20, 2013, 11:11:51 PM
cant wait for the 2nd meeting atsumina...

thanks

continue ASAP

^_^
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: gek geki on October 21, 2013, 07:11:16 AM
Yuki is spy?
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: anakpanti on October 21, 2013, 07:45:39 AM
Hi, all. :)

Many of you asked about Yuki's character...
I wanna make it clear... Yes, she's in Maeda Team..
I won't make it as a secret or a surprise because I have other suprise for you.  XD

Yup, relationship between 'bad' and 'good' always interesting to be read/watched. :P

Ehmm... Sae's individual ability is not 'carried a lot of stuff at once' like Rena said before. Rena just wanna teasing Sae.  :lol:
Her ability will be told in next chapter (maybe).

Yuki's individual ability is ..........
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: Koneki on October 21, 2013, 08:07:12 AM
Hi, all. :)

Many of you asked about Yuki's character...
I wanna make it clear... Yes, she's in Maeda Team..
I won't make it as a secret or a surprise because I have other suprise for you.  XD

Yup, relationship between 'bad' and 'good' always interesting to be read/watched. :P

Ehmm... Sae's individual ability is not 'carried a lot of stuff at once' like Rena said before. Rena just wanna teasing Sae.  :lol:
Her ability will be told in next chapter (maybe).

Yuki's individual ability is ..........

I KNEW IT! <3 Yuki will be one of the characters I'll love the most in this fanfic  :cathappy:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: Konoe on October 21, 2013, 11:10:07 AM
Many of you asked about Yuki's character...
I wanna make it clear... Yes, she's in Maeda Team..

Its going to be hard on Mayu if she finds out about Yuki.

I won't make it as a secret or a surprise because I have other suprise for you.  XD

Now I'm getting more excited!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: chroumia on October 21, 2013, 11:35:29 AM
Great as always  XD XD
I hope Yuki is not Sae's ... girlfriend ....
Well, I believe in your Title, so I'm hoping for Mayuki ...  :lol: :grin:
But I think Yuki will have a cool role ~  XD   
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: chiqinna on October 21, 2013, 12:07:35 PM
AAAAaaaahhhhhh~~~ Can't wait for the robbery action~  :hehehe:

thanks for update  :grin:

LOL, Yuko can unlock anything  :lol:

if NyanNyan is on your fic, i bet yuko will unlock nyannyan bathroom's door  or bedroom   :wahaha:

and i hope minami will capture acchan's heart quickly  :shifty:

I agree!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Ohoo..Yuki is Maeda team! interesting!! so she's Sae's girlfriend?
wonder what is Yuki's ability...  :dunno:




Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: Kirozoro on October 21, 2013, 04:59:23 PM
Mayu is shy in front Yuki

Yay it Mayuki

Hope Acchan fall in love Takamina

Can't wait to see new Ch
 :deco:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 1]
Post by: BbSis on October 22, 2013, 12:26:28 AM
Another great story you have here Tianne o/

Ten shots you say. I'm really impressed about how well you handle your stories in a way you can say howmuch chapters you need to finish them :3

Thank you for one more great fic and I'm anxiously waiting next part ;)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 22, 2013, 08:17:59 AM
(https://akblasphemy48.files.wordpress.com/2013/10/wanted.jpg)

PART 2

= The First Meeting: WMatsui =

This weekend… Takamina is busy to preparing our new space in office, Mayu is busy to read her manga comic, and I’m….. busy with myself.

Jurina went in to the cinema, she's looking for an interesting movie for her. Ahh… action movie!! I love it. She bought the ticket for that movie.

She waited for 15 minutes until the movie finally started. In the first 30 minutes, Jurina can relax and enjoyed the movie. It’s not bad to hang out by myself, if Takamina and Mayu are here… they must be very noisy debating about the movie or they fight over popcorn.

"Why this movie is so dumb? How can that men rescuing the woman first?! Arkkhh!! If that’s me, I will saving the money first and let that woman die."

Jurina shocked hearing those harsh words, she’s turned her head. Even though it’s dim and noisy inside this teater, but she knew that voice came from a girl beside her.

"Ohh.. come on! Is that how a men fighting?! That’s just like a chicken fight for me."

Jurina still silent and stared a girl beside her.

"How can his shot strayed?! I even can shot better than that!"

Jurina chuckled. This girl is like Takamina, when I go watching with Takamina, she always gave a comment about the movie in every 2 minutes.

“Are you laughing at me?” That girl staring Jurina’s eyes.

Jurina surprised, “N-no.. no. I just….. remembered my friend.”

"Okay. Good." That girl turned her head onto screen again.

Jurina glanced that girl. Jurina can feel that girl’s beauty, somehow.. that ‘alto’ voice interest her. Without realize it, her glance changed into a stare.

That girl unwrapping a lollipop and put that lollipop into her mouth. People who came to watch in cinema usually buy the popcorn, but.. a candy??? She’s unique. Jurina chuckled again.

That girl turned her head and approached Jurina’s face, “Hey!!” She yelled at Jurina. “You’re definitely laughing at me!”

Jurina gasped, her face is just about 10 cm from that girl’s face. Because Jurina so shocked, her popcorn fell from her hand. Jurina looked away, “So-sorry.”

"Am I looks so silly for you?" That girl looks irritated.

"No." Jurina still didn’t look that face.

"Then why?"

Jurina took her orange juice and drank it. “If you wanna angry with me, let’s talk after this movie over. I don’t want other people here disturbed.”

"Okay." That girl looked back to the screen.

Jurina didn’t focus on to that movie anymore, Why I asked her to talk with me?! Arrkkhh… I can just simply say sorry again. Jurina sighed.

"Here."

Jurina feel something touched her hand. Popcorn?

"Your popcorn spilled, you can eat this." That girl said it without saw Jurina’s face.

Jurina smiled. “Thanks.”

"No need to say thank you, I do not really like to eat this."

*1 Hour Later*

The lights inside the teater turned on because the movie was over.

Jurina turned her head, “Look, I’m so-” Jurina gasped “-rry.” She felt that her brain didn’t work well anymore. I didn’t really get it when Mayu said that Yuki is so gorgeous… but I think I know what gorgeous means now.

"No problem." That girls stood up and about to leave Jurina there.

"He-hey…" Jurina walk towards that girl. "Didn’t you mad at me before?"

"Yeah…. I was angry at you. But not anymore after I saw how dumb you are."

"Dumb?!" Jurina shocked. This girl is really rude, not comparable with her looks. She sighed and turned away.

They walked separately.

========================== **** ==========================

= The Second Meeting : AtsuMina =

Where are they?! This room will be occupied by 4 people, but why only me in here now?

*FLASHBACK*

“Hey, I have an announcement. From tomorrow, we will work in a same space. All of us will be moved into 1 room, so it’ll be easier for us to communicate.”

“Great idea, leader.” Jurina did a high-five with Takamina.

"We need to prepare all of the things tomorrow." Takamina gave them an order.

Jurina shook her head. “That’s your job. Your first job as our new leader.”

"What?!" Takamina shocked.

Mayuyu smirked, “Yes, This is what called as a leader responsibility.”

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Takamina sighed.

"Sergeant, everything is done. Room, tables, chairs, whiteboard, bookcase already prepared well."

"So…. It’s time to go home." Takamina grinned. "Thank you for your hardwork today."

All staff bowed to her, she bowed back.

Takamina went out from her office. “Ahh.. I’m so hungry.” She touched her stomach. “Aha! Ramen!” She pointed a small restaurant.

She went in to that restaurant, she looked around. Wait… is she a girl who bumped with me in coffee shop last time??! She grinned.

She walked to Acchan’s table, “Konbanwa.. Maeda-san.”

Acchan stopped eating and staring Takamina. “You again?!”

Takamina sat in front of Acchan, “Yeahh… It’s me. You know, I think we’re a soulmate or something because we always meet in a ‘food place’.” She chuckled.

"We just meet twice. Who gave you permission to sit here?" Acchan glared at Takamina.

 ”No one told me that I can’t sit here.” Takamina smiled.

"I almost lost my appetite. You better go away."

A waitress came to their table, and then she put Takamina’s meal on the table.

"Thank you." Takamina gave her best smile to that waitress.

That waitress looks shy, she bowed, and then she went away.

Acchan rolled her eyes, “Such a player.”

"Itadakimasu!!" Takamina grabbed the chopsticks quickly, she ate her ramen in incredible speed.

"Table manner! Please…" Acchan looks annoyed.

Takamina stopped for a while. “Sorry, I’m just too hungry. I didn’t eat anything since morning.” and then she started to ate calmly.

After that, both of them just ate their meal quietly.

Takamina put her chopsticks on the table, “Ahh… I’m so full. This’s so delicious.”

Acchan didn’t say anything.

"Hey, Maeda-san. I’ll pay your food. It’s to redeem my mistake at coffee shop last time."

"No need to do that. You already bought me a new shirt. It’s already paid off."

"So… why?"

Acchan frowned. “Why about what?”

"Why do you seems still angry at me?"

"….."

"For no reason, huh?" Takamina laughed.

"I.. I don’t know. I think that’s because of bad first impression, I guess." She shrugged.

"Geez.. I’m much better than that. I’ll prove it."

Acchan frowned. “I don’t really get it. Why do you need to prove it? I don’t need that, you’re a stranger for me, completely stranger.”

Takamina raised her eyebrows, ”Well, simple… I’m going to make us be friends.” She grinned.

Acchan looked away, “I don’t need any friend.”

"I don’t need it either."

"Huh?" Acchan confused. This girl is not only weird, but she’s crazy too!

"I feel disturbed when there’s someone hate me, especially for no reason like that."

Acchan rolled her eyes. She calling the waitress to paid her bill. I gotta get out of here before this woman saying silly random thing again. That would make me want to throw up.

Takamina grabbed Acchan’s wallet.

"Hey!!! What the fu*k are you doing?! Give it to me!!"

Takamina smiled. “As I told you before, I will pay it for us.”

Sh*t!

——————————————————————

Yuko peeping from the upstairs window, she saw acchan stopped at a crossroads, not too far from this place.

She went down and waited for Acchan. After some minutes, she heard someone opened the door. She stood up, “Who is she?”

Acchan shocked, she picked up her gun. She turned on the lamp, after she saw who is that… she feel relieved. “Yuko!! Don’t shocked me like that.”

"Who is that?" Yuko stared Acchan.

"Nobody. She’s a stranger."

"A stranger?! So why did you bring her into this house?? She could make us in danger."

Acchan closed the door. “Yuko, I didn’t bring her in. We stopped on that street, she won’t find my house. She’s a stupid girl who forced me to become her friend. I already told her to go away, but she doesn’t listen to me.”

Yuko sighed. “I don’t understand. It’s not like you. You never talked to a stranger before.”

"Just.. put it aside, okay? I know what I’ve done. I’ll never put us in danger."

Yuko shed her tears, “I-I’m sorry, I’m too afraid that someone will betrayed us again… like the old time… that was the hardest time for us. After that.. we never lived in 1 place for long time.

"Shh… don’t cry." Acchan hugged Yuko, tried to calm her. "I will never do that. "

Yuko broke the hug, “Let’s go to our secret base. Everybody already waited us. We need to check everything before we strike on the next week.” She wiped her tears.

Acchan nodded.

They went out from Acchan’s house.

"Hey!! How can you went in to my house without my permission?!" Acchan glared at Yuko. "You’re lucky that you’re crying right now, if not.. I’m sure that I will kick your ass."

Yuko chuckled. “That’s my special ability. I can’t hold myself, beside.. I didn’t wanna wait in front of your house for 1 hour.”

"Wait.. What?! You already entered my house 1 hour ago??!"

========================== **** ==========================

= First Trial =

"Are you really okay there?"

"Yes, I’m okay. How about you?"

"I’m okay as long as you’re okay."

"Hahaha. Sweet. Maeda already told me about the plan. Even though these police didn’t know about you guys…. yet, but please be careful, okay?”

"Don’t worry. We’re a great team."

"Yes. We’re the best."

She heard somebody called her, “Sae-chaaannn!!! Maeda calling you.”

"Okay… I’m coming!!" She answered it.

“That’s Yuko, right?”

"Yes… Who else that could scream so loud like that?" They laughed. "Okay, I need to go now. Bye." Sae wanna ended the call but….

“Hey… wait a minute!”

"Yes?"

“I miss you.”

Sae smiled, “I miss you too, Yuki.”

Finally, the call ended. Sae walked to their main room.

Maeda stood in the middle of the circle. “Okay, everyone is already gathered. Tonight is our ‘first day’, this is a first step for us to get to something bigger. “

Everyone cheered, except Rena… she’s always as cold as ice.

Maeda continued her speech, “We already through this for 2 years and we’re still here together, happy and success. I’m sure that tonight will be our big day too. Now go!”

Sae went in to their car. She’s gonna drive them to their target place tonight. We wanna rob a pawnshop, that’s not usual pawnshop. Maeda asked me to investigate that place.

She turned on the engine and started driving. I’ve investigated that place, it’s a biggest pawnshop that I’ve ever seen.

*FLASHBACK*

Sae put her rolex on a table. Not only 1, there’re 3 rolex on that table.

She smiled at a worker there. “Konichiwa. I wanna pawning my watch.”

That men looked to the table and then he gave Sae a suspicious look.

Sae laughed. “I’m not steal it.” She take out the Purchase Invoice. “Here.” She gave it to that men.

That men nodded. “Please come in.” He smiled.

She followed that men entered that place. Sae gasped. It’s very different from the outside.

Sae looked around. She tried to observe that place as much as she can. This place only accept luxury goods to be pawned. Wait… Gold bars?!

"I’m sorry to ask, but.. I saw that a lot of people here looks rich, so why they need to pawned their stuff??"

He turned his head and look at Sae. Sae saw a creepy smile from him, “That’s a same question for you. Why did you need to pawning this watch?”

"……"

"There’re a lot of secrets in this place." He laughed hard.

After she went home, she open her laptop and searched everything that related to that place. She read many articles.

And then she smirked, “So….. those goods are come from corruption process. They didn’t want the law found them and their bribery stuff, the mortgage it’s only their smart way to hiding those illegal things.”

*END OF FLASHBACK*

They arrived at that pawnshop, Sae stopped that car not far away from that place. Sae went out and changed the plat number of their car.

Acchan looked at her watch, and then she talked quietly. “2 AM. We arrived on time. Thanks Sae.

Sae smiled.

Rena licked her lollipop. “She didn’t do anything. She’s only our driver tonight." She smirked.

Sae glared at Rena.

Stop it! Focus." Sayaka hit Rena’s shoulder.

Acchan talked again, “As we planed since last month, we need to finish it in 15 minutes without any single mistake. Take everything as much as you can. Don’t forget to wear your mask and gloves, we can’t leave any traces.

Sayaka and Sae, If there’s guard who see us, make them fainting… don’t kill them.
Rena, track all CCTV and security system in that place. Disable it and delete the tape as soon as you can.
Yuko, open the doors and safety box as many as we can handle. And then close it well again after we take its contents. As usual, we will do a ‘clean’ robbery.

At 2.20, we get out of that place.

After that…. we will have a big party again tonight.
” Acchan grinned.

They nodded and then they went into that place one by one.

- IN ANOTHER PLACE -

I hope they will be okay…..

"Kashiwagi-san… why do you still awake?"

A girl who slept beside her started to hugging Yuki. Yuki smiled. “I had a nightmare.” She pecked that girl’s forehead.

"Ahh… I thought that you disappointed at me about….. you know *cough* first night." She blushed.

Yuki chuckled. “No worries. I like it, Mayu.” She kissed Mayu passionately. “You better take a rest.” ….. because tomorrow.. you and your friends will have a f*cking hard and difficult job. Yuki smirked when Mayu already close her eyes.

================== TO BE CONTINUED =================

Spoiler for next chapter:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: Konoe on October 22, 2013, 08:35:49 AM
WMatsui's first meeting is interesting. LOL at Rena. Completely showing her evil side while watching the movie. :lol:

Takamina is so persistent in making Acchan as a friend. Maybe she fell for Acchan already. :D

My Mayuki... I don't know what to say... Yuki is playing with Mayu's feelings! :OMG:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 22, 2013, 08:36:36 AM
Great as always  XD XD
I hope Yuki is not Sae's ... girlfriend ....
Well, I believe in your Title, so I'm hoping for Mayuki ...  :lol: :grin:
But I think Yuki will have a cool role ~  XD   

Well... even if Yuki is Sae girlfriend, everything can change when she meet Mayu.. Let's just wait.:P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 22, 2013, 08:38:50 AM
Mayu is shy in front Yuki

Yay it Mayuki

Hope Acchan fall in love Takamina

Can't wait to see new Ch
 :deco:

Acchan's heart can't easily taken if Takamina keep doing something silly in front of her..  :lol:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: olive29 on October 22, 2013, 08:40:50 AM
Jurina's meeting with Rena is cute..

Takamina is persistent to befriend Acchan, usually (in other fic) it's the other way around..

Eh...Yuki is playing with Mayuyu's feeling???

What will happen next??

Update soon.. :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 22, 2013, 08:42:42 AM
Another great story you have here Tianne o/

Ten shots you say. I'm really impressed about how well you handle your stories in a way you can say how much chapters you need to finish them :3

Thank you for one more great fic and I'm anxiously waiting next part ;)

Granny...!! :on woohoo:

Yup, I must have a target about the chapters before I wrote a fanfic.  :P

Thx for reading.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 22, 2013, 09:20:43 AM
@Konoe
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WMatsui's first meeting is interesting. LOL at Rena. Completely showing her evil side while watching the movie. :lol:

Takamina is so persistent in making Acchan as a friend. Maybe she fell for Acchan already. :D

My Mayuki... I don't know what to say... Yuki is playing with Mayu's feelings! :OMG:

Yeahh.. Rena character is different from my previous fanfics... She's a truly evil here. I hope Jurina can 'neutralizing' her.  :lol:


@olive29
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Jurina's meeting with Rena is cute..

Takamina is persistent to befriend Acchan, usually (in other fic) it's the other way around..

Eh...Yuki is playing with Mayuyu's feeling???

What will happen next??

Update soon.. :bow:

WMatsui will always cute together.  XD



Acchan is a introvert girl and Takamina always fooling around at her.
Takamina is persistent because she never rejected by someone before, only Acchan that hate her.

Hmm... about Mayuyu and Yuki.... there's still alot of chapters left.
Everything can changes.  :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: Konoe on October 22, 2013, 09:32:02 AM
Hmm... about Mayuyu and Yuki.... there's still alot of chapters left.
Everything can changes.  :P

I'll believe in you at the Mayuki.  :mon thumb:

Mayuyu! Make Yukirin fall hard for you so that she won't come back to Sae!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: cisda83 on October 22, 2013, 11:49:30 AM
Minami is so persistent... to get to know Atsuko

Who is this friend that betrayed Atsuko and others?

Eh... Yuki is a spy for Atsuko... why?

And Yuki with Mayu already? That's fast...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 22, 2013, 12:18:01 PM
Minami is so persistent... to get to know Atsuko

Who is this friend that betrayed Atsuko and others?

Eh... Yuki is a spy for Atsuko... why?

And Yuki with Mayu already? That's fast...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


Yuki is spying because Acchan already have a plan before to rob in a bigger scale, she wanna know the police can track them or not.

Yuki and Mayu just knew each other in 3 weeks, but they already slept together.. Yuki is awesome..  :lol:
But they didn't dating or something... just did 'it'. :P

Wow... you always ask some good questions.. :D
Thanks for reading my fanfic in a detail way like that..  :mon love:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: chiqinna on October 22, 2013, 01:25:28 PM
owh..they have been betrayed before...
Yuki...Mayu will be hurt if she knows who the real Yuki is...  :cry:
and Atsumina second meeting! lol Takamina I think she has interest in Atsuko since she's a cold person.
and lol Jurina!!!  :lol:
and haaahhh...waiting for the next update!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: edogawa4869 on October 22, 2013, 05:22:48 PM
wooow... that was great fanfic..  :thumbup

yeah... atsumina as always...  :ptam-ok:

(but actually my saeyuki heart is just broken... hiks...  :ptam-hbk:) 

even though its mayuki, please makes saeyuki moment for a while...    :kneelbow:

i hope u will update soon...
 thanks... ^_^
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: BbSis on October 22, 2013, 06:50:24 PM
Oh Takamina so persistent hahah Acchan you stand a chance against her hahaha

Juju and Rena started with the left feet too wmatsui second meeting, I cant wait for it :3

I feel sorry for Mayu now. Yuki is just using her ;.; I wonder if Sae knows >< poor Sae too... don't let her end alone and heartbroken please

It seems Maeda's team steal from the corrupts. And what about that betrayal Yuko talked about?

Thank you for the update o/ granny like it very much ;)

Oh you plan the whole story before starts writing. Good! I wish I was that organized ><
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: Zita on October 22, 2013, 08:49:03 PM
Jurina :smhid...........Rena is not rude, she is just honest :P (well I think so :nervous)
Yuki is such a player :shocked
I look forward to next chapter soooo miuch. :w00t:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 2]
Post by: anakpanti on October 23, 2013, 03:56:15 AM
@chiqinna: Acchan and Rena are the cold girls... I feel pity for Takamina and Jurina.  :lol:
Mayu will definitely feels hurt, but not in a next chapter. She will found it later.  :cry:

@edogawa4869: SaeYuki. Yup, I'm planning to write their sweet moment in some chapters. Thanks for reading. :D

@BbSis: Sae x Yuki x Mayu. I can't tell about the future chapters, but for now... Yuki is still belongs to Sae.. they loved each other.  XD
Granny... you always praise me, that's makes me flattered. But, if you found any bad things in my fanfics.. you can freely telling it to me too. I'll appreciate it too. XD

@Zita: About Rena-Jurina... In this fanfic, I made Rena as a really smart girl (maybe genius). She's a little bit arrogant and like to teased other people. Well... let's just say Rena is really honest towards people. :P
Actually... I didn't have a plan to make Yuki as a player, but....... if you say so, I can make her a player.  :lol:
For now, she's just using Mayu for a purpose...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: anakpanti on October 25, 2013, 10:53:57 AM
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PART 3

= Maeda Team - First Trial (2) =

Just in 10 seconds, Yuko already success opened the main door, Maeda team entered that pawnshop quietly.

Sae pointed a door, “There’s another room, they put all stuff there.” Sae gave them the instruction.

They nodded. Yuko walked in the front, they must passed 3 doors before they can went in to the room that Sae said before. But Yuko was still able to open the doors easily.

Yuko opened the safety boxes one by one while her friends put all stuff into their bag, and they closed it again after the box empty.

Rena looked around, she found an odd room. “Yuko, open this door.”

After the door completely opened, she smirked. “Gotcha.” There are so many screens and computers in there.

Suddenly a men ran to Rena direction and wanna hit her with a baseball bat, but she can dodged it easily. Sae run, she wanna punch that men but Rena’s feet hit him first, on his stomach. Afterwards, Rena did a knee kick to that men’s face. That men fell on the floor.

Rena looked at Sae, “I don’t need your help.” she smirked.

But another men came from Rena’s behind, he hold an iron stick. Sae kick his head before he can hit Rena. That men fell too. She looked at Rena and smirked, “Obviously… you still need my help, computer girl.” She gave Rena a smile of satisfaction. Rena looks annoyed.

Sayaka quickly closed the men’s mouth and nose with her hand. Those guys fainted. “Anesthetic always give us a positive feedback.” Sayaka grinned.

Rena opened her laptop quickly, she connect it with a computer there. She tried to tracking the security system. After she’s working on her laptop for about 3 minutes, she already able to hack it completely. “Piece of cake.”

Rena closed her laptop, she tidy it up. She poke Maeda’s shoulder, “My job is already done here.”

"Thank you." Maeda gave her a bag. "Bring this, you can back to the car. Wait us in there."

Rena nodded, she carried that bag and walked away.

"Guys, we gotta get out in 5 minutes!!" Sayaka said that after she saw her watch.

"Roger that." Yuko smiled while she opened the safety boxes. Suddenly she found something, "Sae-chaann… your Rolex!"

Sae ran happily, and then she grabbed it from Yuko. “I thought I’ll lost them.”

========================== **** ===========================

= Takamina Team - Blur =

Takamina threw a file on to her desk. “What is this?! No clue after all??”

A police in front of her startled. “N-no, sergeant.”

"Let me check their security camera." Another police gave the tape to Jurina. Jurina played it. She gasped, "W-what?! Are you fu*king kidding with me?!" She glared at that police.

"N-no! we took it from the crime scene itself."

Mayuyu came and then she watched it too. She blushed. “Se-sex tape?!!”

Yuki smacked her forehead, Why did Rena replace it with that?!!! She can simply delete the tape. A clever girl with a cheap brain. She pulled Mayu, “Stop enjoying that video.”

Mayu turned her head, “I’m not enjoyed it!! I’m just watching the evidence. It’s normal to do, right?” She grinned.

Takamina stood up, “How about the fingerprint?”

The police shook his head, “None.”

"Blood?"

The police shook his head again, “Only the guards was bleeding. The guards was punched by the thieves, and then they fainted.”

"How about the crime scene? Is there any broken window or door?" Yuki asked him.

"No. Actually… except their stuff and money, all other things looks normal and not moved at all. That’s not look like a crime, even the owner didn’t believe it at first. The crime scene looks….. tidy and clean."

I shouldn’t doubting Maeda’s theory.. ‘No kill and no mess.’ Her theory make us survive until today, no one can track us. We even can walking in front of our victim without they realize that we’re the thieves who robbed their house. And me?? I even can became a part of this police!! Awesome.

"Yuki… why are you smiling?? Did you enjoy it too??" Jurina looked at her.

Mayu pointed the TV. “Yeahh… you keep staring that tape.”

*sank* She’s panicked. “No… No-no-no!! I just did what you said before…. watching the evidence (?).” Yuki didn’t realize that she still looked at the TV (but not watching it?).

Mayu and Jurina chuckled.

"I can’t believe it…" Takamina looks desperate. "We already investigate this case for 3 days and we found nothing……. they’re so….. perfect!"

Mayuyu smiled, “Just wait.”

"Huh?" Takamina and Jurina looks confused.

Mayuyu smirked. “I am sure that those ‘perfect robber’ will show up again. They won’t just did this once, they will do it over and over again. They won’t stop until we catch them. We can wait… collect the evidence. I will try my best to know their pattern and their weakness.”

Yuki stared Mayuyu. She’s not as stupid as I thought before. Clever. She’s dangerous. Yuki smirked, Well… at least she already falling in love with me. At first I thought that I will dump her, but now…. I think that I can use her more longer.

========================== **** =========================

= WMatsui: Meet Again =

When Maeda told us about the ‘bigger scale’, I thought it will be more interesting for me… but, nothing changed. Still simple at all. I even didn’t have to use my brain, just see.. do.. finish. Can Maeda found a more interesting target with more complex security?!

Rena went out from her bathroom. After she dried her hair and changed her clothes, she took her key. I will buy some new books, if I keep living like this… my brain cells will die one by one.

*at Bookstore*

Rena looked around, she saw a bookcase with ‘Computer Books’ labeled on it. Actually… I already knew all about IT stuff. But I will keep looking there, maybe I can find something fun to read with more detail.

Rena scanned the titles one by one, but nothing got her interest. She walked away from that bookcase.

She read another label on a bookcase. Music? Am I need to learn it? Rena saw some musical instruments beside that bookcase, a white-gold guitar catch her eyes. Rena wanna touch it, but someone grabbed it first.

"Hey!! I’m the first who looked forward to it." She’s angry.

"Sorry, I already saw this since a week ago. Today is my ‘payroll day’, finally… I can buy this." That girl looks excited and wanna bring it to the cashier.

Rena grabbed that girl’s shoulder, “I won’t let you survive this time.”

That girl confused,”This time?” She turned back and saw Rena’s face, “You???” Jurina shocked.

"Yes, it’s me. Now, give it to me!"

"No!" Jurina hold it tightly.

"Give it to me!" "No!" "I will kill you this time!" "I don’t care. Hey, back off!!" "Don’t run away from me!" They keep struggling with that guitar. All people in that store looked at them.

*15 minutes later*

A cashier girl smiled, “Now, both of you…. you can go home with peace.”

Jurina and Rena lifted their hand. Both of them hold their own guitar. Those gitar looks exactly similar.

Rena glared Jurina. ”You’re lucky that this store have another stock. If they didn’t, You will d-“

Jurina sighed, “Oh, come on. Our problem was over, can we just stop fighting and looking for our lunch? I’m hungry.”

"yeah.. I’m hugry too." She glared Jurina again, "Well… You’re lucky that I’m hungry now. If not, I will kick y-"

Jurina grabbed Rena’s hand. “Too much talking.” She sighed. Jurina pulled Rena into a restaurant nearby the bookstore.

Jurina sat first. “You, sit here. Don’t make another mess on public place anymore.”

"Okay." Rena obediently sat in front of Jurina. It’s odd to saw herself listened others words, usually… she only listens Acchan because she’s really respect Acchan.

Both of them ordered their own meal. They waited their meal come in silence, none of them talking. After some minutes, their meal finally came.

"Itadakimasu!!" Jurina smiled brightly.

Rena put a lot of chilli sauce into her bowl and then she ate it without said anything.

Jurina frowned, “Do you like spicy stuff?”

"Hm."

"Are you sure? It’s quite a lot."

"I know, but I’m okay with this."

Jurina amazed, “Cool.” She continue to ate her meal. “Hey, what’s your name?”

Rena shocked, she choked. Jurina gave her a glass of water. She drank it. “Why did you suddenly ask about that?”

"Well…. at least I know how to call you if we bumped to each other again like before. We already met twice, maybe there’s the third too." Jurina grinned.

"We won’t bumped again. I had a headache everytime I met you. This will be the last time I saw you." Rena shook her head.

"Really?"

"Yes. Why are you so sure that we will meet again?? It’s all just coincidence."

"Because I believe at destiny."

Rena laughed, “Your childhood seems REALLY fun, are you born in a dreamland or something?”

Jurina looked at Rena, “My name is Jurina.” Jurina stood up, “You don’t have to say your name now. You can tell it to me in our next meeting.” She looked at her watch, “Sorry, I have something to do. See you later.”

Rena saw Jurina went out from the restaurant. W-wh-what??!!

========================== **** ==========================

= Next Step: AtsuMina =

*BELL RINGING*

Takamina opened the door. She smiled after she saw who’s coming. “Maeda-san!! Come in.”

Acchan rolled her eyes. “I gave you my phone number because you always pleading me, but it’s not means that I’m happy to received 50 messages in each day from you.”

Takamina grinned, “Sorry. But if this make you will come here, I will send 100 messages instead.”

"Don’t you dare!!" Acchan pointed at Takamina’s face.

"Okay-okay… I’m kidding. Duh! You’re a serious person, too serious."

Acchan walked into Takamina’s apartment, “So… are you trying to say that I’m a boring person?”

"No! That’s not what I mean." Takamina shocked. "Yo-you’re an int-interesting g-gi-girl."

"So……" Acchan approached Takamina’s face, their face became more closer. "What are you trying to say here is you have an interest towards me?"

Takamina stepped back, “No… I didn’t say something like that!!” She’s panicked.

Acchan closed the door behind her, she leaned on it. “So…… it means that you hate me?”

"No-no!! I don’t hate you. I like you, but… you’re just too cold." Takamina looked away.

"Hmmm…. you like me. Wow, this’s a new fact." Acchan laughed. "Takahashi-san…. you’re too serious about it. I’m just kidding. You even didn’t need to answer all my questions before." She sat on a couch.

"But I’m not kidding." Takamina still stood there.

"Hm?" Acchan looked at Takamina, she seems confused.

"Th-that’s not a joke… I… I li-like y-you." Takamina avoid Acchan’s eyes.

"Are you trying to tease me again? I won’t fall for it."

"Is it not clear enough for you? I said…. it’s not a joke!"

Acchan surprised. Sh-she serious?! She raised her eyebrows.

========================== **** ==========================

"Mayuyu…." Yuki hugged her from behind.

"Hm?" Mayu still busy cooking.

"I’m just curious, are your job is like a detective for our team?"

Mayuyu laughed. “Maybe you can call it like that. I’m in charge as evidence collector, analize the case, and sniff where the villian will strikes again. Based on my data and my analysis, Takamina and Jurina can catch the villian.”

"Wow… you have a cool job." Yuki pecked Mayu’s cheek.

Mayu smiled. She turned off the stove and then she turned back. Mayu let Yuki’s hand hold her waist. “I heard from Takamina, you’ll be have a same job with me. Maybe they thought you’re as smart as me.” She chuckled.

Yuki leaned her forehead onto Mayu’s forehead. “I’m not as smart as you, but I’m braver than you.”

"Is that so?" Mayu put her hands around Yuki’s neck. "What’s that use for?"

Yuki blows Mayu’s left ear. “It’ll be very useful if you’re right in front of your enemy, face to face.” Yuki kissed Mayu’s neck, she suck it slowly.

Mayu let out her soft moan. “face to face? I never really went out to a battle field. That’s Takamina and Jurina job to do it.”

Yuki’s kisses became down and more down. One of her hand caressed Mayu’s thigh. “What if…. your enemy is here? Right now, in front of your face? Can you be able to run away? fast enough to save your live?”

Mayu can’t hold this pleasure, Yuki keep kissing all over her body. “Bu-bu-but… they’re not here right now. It…. it’s just yo-you and me now… Ahhhhh….” Mayu bite her below lip. “Let’s not talk about it now.”

Yuki chuckled. She stopped kissing and look deep into Mayu’s eyes. ” you lack of concentration too.”

Mayu blushed, “Do you think that I will be able to concentrate to answering your question if you keep kissing my body like that?!”

*PHONE RINGING*

Yuki let off Mayuyu. “Sorry, we have to postpone this for a while.” She winked

Mayuyu nodded.

Yuki went into her bedroom and pick up her phone. “Hello?”

“Hi, Yukirin. Where are you?”

"Sae-chan… is that you??" She looks excited.

“Yes. I’m really missed you… let’s go out tomorrow.”

"Are you asked me out??"

Sae laughed, “Yes. I will pick you up tomorrow. Where’s your new apartment?”

"I will send my address by email."

“Okay then.. Bye, I love you.”

"So do I."

Yuki ended the call.

She went out from her room again, she saw Mayuyu still standing in the kitchen. What should I do to her?

=================== TO BE CONTINUED ===================

Spoiler for next chapter:

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: Konoe on October 25, 2013, 11:22:39 AM
I'm really loving Rena here. :hip smile:

Maeda's team is so cool. Smooth operations. Very tidy as they say. 8)2

Takamina is really amazing. I mean 50 messages a day. :shocked She likes Acchan that much.

LOL Jurina is much more responsible than Rena. Usually its the opposite in most fics.

Saeyuki will have a date next chapter.... :( Mayuyu....

 

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: Zita on October 25, 2013, 04:08:24 PM
R and J have same guitars. :grin:
And Takamina 50 messages? She have so much free time.

Isn't there possibility that Mayu will stalk Yuki?

Good job :thumbsup
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: edogawa4869 on October 25, 2013, 04:37:53 PM
yeeahhh... update..

woow... maeda team is smooth criminal really.. :on crazygran:

kyaaa.... takamina confess to acchan...  :luvluv1:

sweeeeeet...  :shy2:

owh... SaeMaYuki next chapter???

i can't wait...

keep on going author-san... 

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: anakpanti on October 25, 2013, 06:22:44 PM
Guys... maybe those 50 messages that Takamina sent to Acchan are like: "How are you?" "What are you doing?" "Hi." "Let's meet." "Thanks." "I'm bored." etc.
Just some simple message, of course she will reach 50 messages easily.  XD

@konoe : About Rena-Jurina. Yup... I made their character different from most fic. I wanna try something new.  :D
Is Mayu need to know about SaeYuki dating? Maybe it'll be better for her if she didn't know about that.  :P

@zita : I'm not decide about Mayuyu yet. But actually, I don't wanna hurt her too much. Is it better for her to didn't know about SaeYuki's date?

@edogawa4869 : Hi, Thanks a lot for reading. Yeahh... Maeda Team is awesome!!  :lol:
SaeYuki.... I will make them very sweet for you.  :P
Takamina confession, she like Acchan as a friend or as a lover.... we didn't know about it yet.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: Zita on October 25, 2013, 06:59:44 PM


@zita : I'm not decide about Mayuyu yet. But actually, I don't wanna hurt her too much. Is it better for her to didn't know about SaeYuki's date?



Well I don't know, it depends on what you intend to end. (If they will be together or not.) And how much you want to stir a plot.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: mo-chan on October 25, 2013, 11:16:48 PM
Interesting!!! *-*
I like Rena's personality wmatsui so funny XD
Mayu will get hurt sooner or later :D
I guess we need drama XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: cisda83 on October 25, 2013, 11:31:03 PM
Wmatsui getting friendlier in a weird way

Atsumina in a awkward position

Mayuki is very intimate but poor Mayu being used

And Saeyuki is having a date the next day

But what about Mayu?

Can see Yuki liked sae here more than Mayu...

But would that be the case later?

How about Atsuko?

what would she do about minami's feeling?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: gek geki on October 26, 2013, 05:06:40 AM
Wondering how it end

Since the pair was on the good side and bad side

If takamina x acchan really happend how they end their love?

Mayuki too,beside now yuki love sae but if she used mayu,playing with her heart like that,i hope yuki regret that and pay for all she did to mayu,hope she fall hard.

As for rena,still wonder how wmatsui could happen
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: White Hawk on October 26, 2013, 07:49:02 AM
Hello~
Um.. Actually, I've been reading your fic without commenting xD
Forgive me >_<

Umm,,, you know, I really like Rena's character here! It's fun to read it XD
And I always enjoy it when I read WMatsui moments since they are so cute~!  XD

Taka already confessing to Maeda? Even though they just met~ Hahahah
That was fast Taka!

Ahh,, Mayuyu~ Don't hurt Mayuyu too much, please :cry:
Yukirin is bad! :angry:
Hmm,, sooner or later she will fall for Mayu, then she can't help but betray Sae,, then she will choose between Sae and Mayu, then she choose Mayu, and then she'll betray Maeda's Team.. Oh no! Then Maeda's Team hate Yuki, and lol! Sorry! My imagination went wild :P

Thanks for the update :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: Terragen on October 26, 2013, 11:31:31 AM
how dare you yuki!!! hurting mayuyu!!!
if you played someone heart you will be played by fate!!!


takamina!! so bold isn't it too fast????


rena and jurina was so funny
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: anakpanti on October 26, 2013, 06:50:59 PM
@mo-chan : Hi. Thanks for reading. Yup, We love drama. XD

@cisda83 : I always love your comment and your questions. It makes me know what should I write in next chapter.  :D

@ gek geki : we all wondering how they will become pairing. Love will found a way..  :P
I feel pity for Mayu too.  :cry:

@White Hawk : I always see you like my post, I'm glad that finally... you write a comment for me.  XD
I love WMatsui too..  :)
About Takamina confession, that's not like a love confession... it's friend confession.  :P
Wow... I love your imagination about Sae x Yuki x Mayu.

@Terragen : Yuki just doing her job as a spy, for a villain like them... I think they will do anything to get the information.
But as you say... maybe Yukirin will get her punishment.  :lol:
Takamina is too fast for a love confession, but how if she just wanna be Acchan's friend.

Thanks for all comment. Thanks for reading.  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: Terragen on October 27, 2013, 09:53:29 AM
Why maybe? She will
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 3]
Post by: anakpanti on October 27, 2013, 12:12:41 PM
Why maybe? She will


I know what you mean  :ding:
You can read my reply in PM.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on October 28, 2013, 06:01:53 PM
Thanks for katekyohit who helped me so much with MaYuki scene in this chapter. You’re a great author, I’m your fan. XD

Thanks to BbSis for your advice. I’m still amateur, so your advice really helped me so much.

Thanks for Zaki-san who helped me with SaeYuki scene in this chapter. You said that this was your first time to write this kind of scene, but it’s very awesome.. I love it. XD

Sorry, because I need to cut out many of your rows in here. :kneelbow:

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PART 4

= MaYuki : One Sided Pleasure =

After Yuki ended the call with Sae, she went out from her room again, she saw Mayuyu still standing in the kitchen. What should I do to her?

"Yuki, our meal is ready. Let’s have a lunch!" Mayuyu smiled.

Yuki walked to the kitchen, “Okay, but…..” She touch Mayu’s chin and lift it up. “Let’s finish what we’ve started before.” She looked at Mayu’s eyes.

I must make her fall hard to me. It’ll make my job easier. I must get her trust, so I will be able to dig more information. Yuki kissed Mayu on the lips.

Mayu surprised, she broke the kiss. “Yu-Yuki…. we-” Mayu can’t finished her words because Yuki ‘ate’ her lips again.

Their tongue played together. Yuki pushed Mayu slowly, she stopped when Mayu already leaning onto the wall. It caused the shorter girl to moan as the taller one snaked her icy fingers under her shirt to unhook her bra off.

“W-Wait…Not here…”

“If you wish.” Yuki carried her little girl up in her arms and caused Mayu to blush.

Mayu wrapped her arms around the older girl’s neck until they entered Yuki’s room…

In that dark room, Yuki placed the helpless cyborg onto the bed before they continued kissing and tangling their tongues again. She’s liking this. I have to make her like it even more…until it becomes addiction.

“Y-Yuki…”

“I won’t wait anymore, neh?” Their lips were still interact with each other. Tracing Mayu’s smooth pale skin with her icy fingers, it made the girl yelped.

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Yuki pulled Mayu in to kiss passionately.

Mayu wrapped her hands around Yuki’s neck tightly to deepen the kiss… her whole body and heart had now belonged to the beautiful woman in front of her. ”Yukirin…”

"Hm?"

"I can’t believe that we’re doing this in the daylight." Mayuyu blushed.

Yukirin giggled, “You seems very enjoy it. If you want it, we can do this anytime.”

That words made Mayu blush so badly. “Umm… I’m sorry, but I must go home. Today is my parents wedding anniversary, we have a little private party tonight.”

Yuki playing with Mayu’s hair. “So… what’s your gift for them?”

"Actually…….. nothing." Mayu shrugged.

Yuki rolled her eyes. “Come on. Let’s shower together.” Yuki stand up and pulled Mayu’s hand.

"Eeehh??!!"

"Hurry up! Let’s buy a present for them." Yuki smiled and then she kissed Mayu’s forehead.

Mayu dumbfounded. Sh-she is so kind.

========================== **** ==========================

= SaeYuki : Jealousy =

*Sounds of The Bell*

Yuki opened the door, “Sae!!!” She jump happily into Sae’s hug.

"Wow wow. Easy my girl." Sae smiled, she hugged Yukirin back and she ruffled Yuki’s hair. "Ahh…. it’s been a long time for me. I’m really missed you."

Yuki bury her face into Sae’s hug, “I miss you too.” She let go of her arms. ”Come in.”

Sae nodded. She walked in and closed the door. “Nice house.”

"Sae. Is Maeda know that you came here? I mean… it’s forbidden for us to walk together. It’s too dangerous." Yukirin looks worried.

Sae gave her calm smile. “I can risked my life just to meet you. Didn’t you would do the same for me?”

"Yes, I will. But-"

"Okay, problem resolved. Let’s go out!" Sae grinned.

Yukirin giggled. She pinched Sae’s cheek. “Oh, how cute my sweet girlfriend.”

Sae took Yuki’s hand from her cheek, she kissed that hand. “Hurry up. I can’t wait to have a date with my beautiful princess.”

Yuki smiled. She stroke Sae’s cheek with another hand, “I love you.” After that, she entered her bedroom to changed her clothes.

Sae looked around Yuki’s apartment for a while. She frowned.

"Sae!"

"Ah, you surprised me." Sae feels that Yuki hugged her from behind. "Are you ready, honey?" Sae turned back and then she hugged Yuki too.

"Yes, let’s go." Yuki grinned.

*At The Cinema*

"Is this kind of your habit? You always choose the distant seat for us."

"Well… these are my favorite spot. I can look the screen comfortably from here." Sae turned her head, "Besides that…. no one will see us if we wanna do something." Sae whispered softly. She pecked Yuki’s cheek.

Yuki pinched Sae’s cheek, not in romantic way.. she pinched it really hard.

Aww!!! It’s hurt!!" Sae tried to not screaming.

Yuki giggled. “Not now. It’s still 20 minutes since the movie started, but you already tried to make me ignoring my favorite movie.”

Sae didn’t respond it, she turned her head back to the screen. After that, she remain silent for about half hour.

"Sae, what’s wrong?" Yuki realized that Sae didn’t say anything at all.

Sae didn’t answer it. Yuki used both of her hands to hold Sae’s face and make Sae turned her head. After she can saw Sae’s eyes, “Are you angry at me?”

"I missed you so much. For over 2 months…. I didn’t see your face.. didn’t hear your voice directly.. didn’t feel your warm breath.. didn’t touch your skin.. I didn’t feel your presence at all. I’m worrying about you in every second. But……" Sae shed her tears, "you refuse me just because of that darn movie."

Yuki wiped Sae’s tears with her fingers. “I’m sorry.”

"Are you too tired yesterday?"

Yuki looks confused.

Sae turned her head to the screen again. “I saw 2 cups on your dinning table with different fingerprints, 2 dirty bowls in your sink, I think you cook for more than 1 portion meal, and I can smell another fragrant…. a woman perfume.
I know exactly your scent, and that’s not yours. That smell is quite strong, so I guess…. she’s in your place since morning or…. she’s even stay overnight.”

Yuki gasped with those detail explanation. I’m forget to tell her about Mayu!!

Sae is an amazing ‘observer’. She can analize her surrounding very well, no wonder why Acchan always ask Sae to go to their target’s place before they rob it.

"Sae…"

"Sorry, I have to go back. Maeda waiting for me." Sae wanna stand up but Yuki pulled her and make her body more closer to Yuki’s warm body.

Yuki hugged Sae tightly. “Don’t go. I missed you too. I miss you so badly. I love you. The woman that you mentioned before…. didn’t mean anything to me, but she’s very useful for us. I’m sorry because I’m forget to tell you about her.”

"You sleeping with her, right?" Sae tried to hold her tears.

Yuki gasped again, she let go of her arms. She look deeply into Sae’s eyes. “I love you, I really do love you. Trust me, I can’t live without you.”

"I never doubting you. I’m just…… jealous." She looked away.

Yuki sighed, “Let’s go home.”

"I didn’t want to enter your place, my jealousy will boiled in there." Sae pouted.

"How about your place?" Yuki smiled.

"I’d love to." Sae smiled back.

*At Sae’s Apartment*

Sae opened the door . “Come in.”

Yuki entered the room. Sae’s room is a mirror of her personality. A boyish’s room with boyish things.

Sae entered the room as well, then she locked the door.

“So, what will we do now?” asked Yuki as she sat on the nearby couch. Somehow… she knew that Sae wants her so badly now.

“How’s working with Mayu, Yuki?” asked Sae.

“W-working with Mayu?” There’s a long silence after that. “W-well, we’re doing good, actually.” She finally answered.

She walked closer to Yuki, and then she unbuttoned Yuki’s shirt.

“W-wait, I can do it myself.” Yuki answered.

Sae can’t handle herself now. She kissed Yuki’s neck roughly, making Yuki blushed.

“S-sae… Stop…” the blushing woman said.

Sae, however, couldn’t control herself knowing that her woman was with another woman yesterday. “Remember this, Yuki… You’re mine…” Sae said it as she took off her shirt and used it to tie up the blushing woman’s hands. She pushed Yuki onto the couch.

Yuki struggled to free herself. “S-sae, what’s wrong with you? I told you, right? Maeda-san asked me to do it!” Yuki said it, trying to explain.

“I’m jealous, Yuki… She can taste you and I’m not?” She kissed the nape of Yuki’s neck. A trail of kisses ran from the nape to her chest.

She kissed Yuki passionately.

Yuki struggled to free herself as she moaned because Sae attacked her body. Even though Yuki is struggling to free herself, but deep inside her… she found herself enjoying it. Guilty pleasure indeed.

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Don’t worry, Sae. I’ll only do these things with you…” she whispered to Sae’s right ear.

“Liar…” Sae blushingly said.

I can see that you’re jealous of Mayu.” Yuki whispered.

Sae blushed. “I want you to know that you’re mine and I won’t let that girl take you away from me.”

Sae kissed Yuki’s forehead and said, “I love you, Yuki…”

“I love you too, Sae…” Yuki replied.

========================== **** ==========================

= Maeda Team : Next Target =

Yuko and Sayaka ruffled Sae’s hair.

"Uuuuu…. There’s someone who sparkling today!!" Yuko laughed out loud.

"Wait a minute, why do you looks so tired. Did something happened last night?" Sayaka grinned.

Yuko slapped Sayaka’s shoulder. “You didn’t need to ask about that. We already knew that ‘thing’ will be happened.”

Yuko and Sayaka chuckled together. Sae rolled her eyes, “stop teasing me. Urgh!”

"Guys!" Maeda calling her members. "We have a new job."

Don’t tell about that to Maeda." Sae whisper it to Sayaka and Yuko.

Yuko slapped Sae’s back really hard. “Relax buddy. we will keep it. Just… be careful.”

Sae wanna hit Yuko too, but Maeda already glared at them. 3 of them obediently came closer.

Maeda Team gathered around a table in the center of that room.

Acchan placed a big paper on that table. It’s looks like a map of a building. “This is our next target. Next month… we gonna bathed in money.” She smirked.

"ith-houkss-shhoo-huunnn….. mm-"

Everyone frowned, they looks confused.

"Take that damn lollipop out from your f*cking mouth before you start talking." Sae glared at Rena.

Rena take it out from her mouth, “Don’t ever pick a fight with me!!” She pointed her finger to Sae’s face. “Or you gonna get a big trouble from me.”

"Stop fighting!!" Maeda yelled at both of them. She looked at Rena, "What do you want to say?"

"I said… it looks so fun. But, based on my calculation… It’ll be hard to strike that place in a short time. We will get caught before we can get out from that place."

"Are you afraid?" Sae smirked.

Rena looked at Sae in angry way. “I’m not afraid… I’m just using my brain well to count any possibilities. I’m not like you who didn’t have a brain at all…. your black-hearted girlfriend slept with another girl but you still wanna sleep with her?! Stupid!!”

Sae looks very angry, she wanna punch Rena’s face… but Sayaka hold her tight.

Maeda walked closer to both of them, “What happened to both of you?! We are a team!! We’re friends, are you both already forgot about our past?? We cried and laughed together back then. We’re family!!”

"Okay, back to topic. What’s your plan about it, Maeda?" Yuko tried to avoid that sad memory come back to them.

Acchan take a deep breath. “Rena is right, we need additional crew. I already recruited 7 man who wanna help us, they will join us tomorrow.”

"Where did you find them? They’re maybe dangerous." Yuko looks cautious.

"Don’t worry Yuko, I get them from Makoto." Acchan smiled.

"Makoto?? Our childhood friend?" Yuko looks surprised.

"Yes. He’s a success drug dealer now. I meet him in a club last week. I asked him about where I can find some people to become my crew. But he offering his crew, I agreed. So, I bought them from Makoto."

Yuko laughed. “That brat still nice to us, like old time. I kinda miss him.”

Acchan grinned. “We can meet him later.”

Rena walked away from that room, “Urgh. I hate nostalgic story, it makes me wanna puke.”

Rena get into her car and then she drive it. After some minutes, she stopped at a quiet park. She looked around. There’re still a few people there, but they busy with their own world. A nice place to calm my mind.

She parked her car and locked it. She found an empty bench near a fish pond. She laid her body on it, she looked the sky for a while. And then she closed her eyes.

A few minutes later she opened her eyes. She heard someone sang and played a guitar too. She enjoyed that song, it can calmed her mind. Beautiful voice.

==================== TO BE CONTINUED ===================

Spoiler for next week:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: cisda83 on October 28, 2013, 10:49:11 PM
Poor Mayu is really being used by Yuki

Is Mayu really falling for Yuki?

Would Mayu be used by Yuki later to help with maeda's plan somehow?

Sae was so jealous and possessive..

Who is this old betrayal?

Rena is going to see Jurina again for the 3rd time

So the person that played and sang is Jurina

Would that develop into anything?

What kind of diversion Minami's team going to come across?

The 1st heartbeat.. For Atsumina...

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: gek geki on October 29, 2013, 01:22:39 AM
wah i hate yuki,she used mayu
how mayu will know that yuki is the culprit if she fall in loved with her?

seem yuki really do loved sae,but let's see...yuki seems doubt too--- little

so next is wmatsui 3rd meeting

is the one who singing in the park was jurina?sweet
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on October 29, 2013, 03:23:35 AM
@cisda83 : About Sae x Yuki x Mayu and the betrayer will be appeared again in Chap. 6.
Please wait for Atsumina on next chap too.  :)

@gek geki : In this chap, Yuki purely loves Sae. :)
I will give more WMatsui Moment on a next chapter.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: White Hawk on October 29, 2013, 05:27:56 AM
Wah~ Thanks for the update :D

Yuki!! I hate you! For playing with Mayu's heart! :angry:

Why Sae and Rena always fighting? LOL

I wonder what happened in the past..

And the one playing guitar and singing at the end is Jurina, isnt it?

And I cant wait for the next update, hehe XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: Konoe on October 29, 2013, 06:03:32 AM
Thank you for the Mayuki scene. :D

Thank God that you put what pairings will have a moment. I just can't stand Saeyuki.

Yuki... I hope she at least start to have feelings for Mayu and betray Maeda.

And about the betrayer that will appear in Ch 6 is it Kojiharu? It's just a wild guess. Yuko is acting like she is the one who got hurt the most at the old betrayal I guess. What am I saying, there is even no Kojiyuu beside the title.

WMatsui :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on October 29, 2013, 09:08:28 AM
@White Hawk :

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Why Sae and Rena always fighting? LOL

I wonder what happened in the past..

I will tell it later.  :P

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And the one playing guitar and singing at the end is Jurina, isnt it?

Yes, she is.  :)



@Konoe :  Ahh.. You deleted your comment before. You misunderstood about the 'betrayer' that I mentioned before.

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Thank God that you put what pairings will have a moment. I just can't stand Saeyuki.

 :lol: Do you really hate that pairing so much?
But I need to put it because someone request it to me.  :P

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Yuki... I hope she at least start to have feelings for Mayu and betray Maeda.

Let's see... Yuki have a guts to betray Maeda Team or not.  :D

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And about the betrayer that will appear in Ch 6 is it Kojiharu? It's just a wild guess. Yuko is acting like she is the one who got hurt the most at the old betrayal I guess. What am I saying, there is even no Kojiyuu beside the title.

I haven't decided it, I'm still confused.
Well... I think I will make a poll to decide the additional character. :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on October 29, 2013, 09:15:13 AM
Add Nyan Nyan  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on October 29, 2013, 10:54:27 AM
Dear all of my beloved reader,

Please kindly help me with the poll above.
I'm not sure yet about that, because... the rest of chapter and plot maybe will depend on this character.
Each candidate for this 'betrayer' can make the different story for the rest chapter too.  :D

Thank you so much.
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: Terragen on October 29, 2013, 11:30:56 AM
somehow i wonder how yuki fall for mayu,
mayu must have something different from sae that make yuki change her heart,because in this chapter we know that yuki truly  loved sae than mayu


next chapter will be more wmatsui yay!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: X8RTIER on October 29, 2013, 12:00:32 PM
"update pls"  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: gek geki on October 29, 2013, 01:08:42 PM
ooo~ so yuki purely in love with sae at that time

then how to change it?

i want to change it kekekekekekeke~

mayu mayu mayu!!!!! show yukirin your charm!!!!! nice!!!

gugugugugu~


RENA SAMA WAS MY ULTIMATE OSHI

BUT MAYUKI WAS SO ADORABLE,REALLY CUTE~

DON'T HURT YUKI SAMA AND RENA SAMA

PLEASE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: edogawa4869 on October 29, 2013, 01:36:03 PM
yaaaayyy... update...  :onioncheer:

woooahhh....

the scene makes me  :on bleed:

yuki is really black-heart...

hehehe...

can't wait for the the first heartbeat of AtsuMina...  :nya:

yeah the girl who played guitar is jurina...

and rena was like it...

thanks for the update...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: chiqinna on October 29, 2013, 02:42:51 PM
Hi Putri  :)
~Mayu, I hope she's not badly hurt by Yuki if she found out about her.
~and I hope, Mayu caught them on their date, who knows, Mayu is a smart girl after all.
~ how will yuki develop her feelings toward Mayu?
~Rena, and Sae...must be something happen in the past, maybe involving Yuki? love?  :?
~can't wait for wmatsui 3rd meeting~
~I wonder if Mayu will betray her group just for Yuki...
~and of course Atsumina's first heartbeat~  :heart:
great update Putri~ :D
can't wait for the next chapter...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: Zita on October 29, 2013, 04:59:54 PM
In your poll I coudn't vote for Kojiharu because that would mean that she betrayed Yuko and I don't like this idea.
Well anyway that Sae x Yuki x Mayu problem is starting to be really interesting.  :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on October 29, 2013, 05:35:00 PM
@-gibson-mayulover : Nyan Nyan. Okay, but I will do it if the poll say so.  :P

@Terragen : Mayu will doing something different and brave. Just wait.  ;)

@X8RTIER : Thanks for reading. I will update it, promise.  :D

@gek geki :
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RENA SAMA WAS MY ULTIMATE OSHI
I remember when I wrote "I Will Give My Heart For You". You almost angry at me because she's dying and you 'yell' at me to not kill her.  :on lol:
I won't hurt her, but... I'm sorry that I can guarantee the other characters.  :kneelbow:

@edogawa4869 : Last week.. you asked SaeYuki moment to me, and I already wrote it. I hope you like it.  :)

@chiqinna : Hi. :) I love your comment. It gave me some ideas about Mayu x Yuki x Sae and Rena. ;) Thank you.

@Zita : Well... even if that will be Kojiharu (or Tomochin or Miichan), they will have their own reason. :) But thank you.
Sae x Yuki x Mayu moment will be back on chapter 6. I hope you still read it. :D


Thanks for all your comments.
I'm really really really appreciate it. I'm happy to read it.
 :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: BbSis on October 29, 2013, 07:12:33 PM
Tianne, nice update~

Mayuki was *nosebleed but I knew feel sorry for Mayu >< I can't wait to see Yuki falling for her :)

Saeyuki was rather cute~ nothing against the couple, but I prefer saeyaka :p I just hope that Sae don't end up heartbroken that badly... considering her behavior...

I'm intrigued with this robbery. Actually I'm intrigued with all this robbery thing.
Rena always careful. I'm also curious about she and Sae argue so much.

I voted o/ since I don't know what made the person betray the group I really wanted it to be nyannyan. I too don't like the idea of her betraying Yuko, but when I think the motive could be something like for the good of the group, I think I like it.


Well, I'm glad I was able to help but I don't think I helped that much ^^"

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on October 30, 2013, 06:27:01 AM
@BbSis " Granny.....  Hi.  :D

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Saeyuki was rather cute~ nothing against the couple, but I prefer saeyaka :p I just hope that Sae don't end up heartbroken that badly... considering her behavior...

What do you mean about Sae behavior?  :P

Ano... I never wrote SaeYaka before. Because both of them so tomboyish, I kinda confuse to write them. I think that I need your advice again. :p
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: gek geki on October 30, 2013, 11:37:35 AM
parte 5
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 30, 2013, 12:09:23 PM
Wanted
Chapter 3 and 4

Hi (:
I love this fan fiction of yours..  :heart:
It's very interesting...  :deco:
I hope it's WMatsui and MaYuki pairing...

Anyway, Rena's character here is unique,
she's so bitch but smart.. :twisted:
I also laughed when Rena and Jurina is
fighting over the damn guitar...  :inlove:
I love this WMatsui moments...  :wub:

MAYuki moments is kind a sad...
Yuki is just playing with Mayu's heart...
Poor Mayuyu...

I also curious what's the past of
Acchan,Yuko,Sayaka,Sae,Rena and Yuki..
I hope takamin's team can catch Acchan's
group just once.

Please update soon...
Thank You  :deco:




Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: kurogumi on October 30, 2013, 12:53:05 PM
hello,it's my first time commenting in your Fanfic
i  already read all your Fic but this is the first time i commenting it

the plot is intesting
the police and the thief
but this type of story never end up happy
there were always a victims from both sides or one...

i sense it from yuko past (whatever her past but it seem hurt her so much)
and from the mayuki fake couple, yeah yuki is a spy,like the others said,yuki played with mayu,it never end well if mayu know it,
if i was mayu, i never forgive yuki...but love is like a magic right?even you got hurt you keep crazily in love and can lead you to do something unreasonable...
just hope mayu's gonna fine~
as for yuki i really hope she loved mayu back
is this not fair for sae?well i'm not saeyuki shipper but in this kind situation i can't help to support mayuki LOL

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wmatsui hmmm,will rena give her name to jurina? it's their 3rd meeting LOL
wonder if the 4th meeting is in chaos situation LOL
rena seem enjoying jurina presence too
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can't wait to read the next update until it end




thank for the update
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: fausto on October 30, 2013, 01:14:27 PM
I so want to know what will happen next... :banghead: :banghead: Update!! :drool:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: edogawa4869 on October 30, 2013, 05:31:20 PM
@edogawa4869 : Last week.. you asked SaeYuki moment to me, and I already wrote it. I hope you like it.  :)

like it?

c'mon... u gotta be kidding me..  :smh

I LOVE IT ....  :luvluv1:

thank you so much...  :farofflook:

keep going author-san..  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: noah minami on October 31, 2013, 05:53:29 PM
I got to say this. I feel feel terrible for mayuyu.. :panic:
So yuki with sae huh??? :doh:
Waiting for next update ^-^  :cow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: BbSis on October 31, 2013, 09:12:29 PM
@BbSis " Granny.....  Hi.  :D

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Saeyuki was rather cute~ nothing against the couple, but I prefer saeyaka :p I just hope that Sae don't end up heartbroken that badly... considering her behavior...

What do you mean about Sae behavior?  :P

Ano... I never wrote SaeYaka before. Because both of them so tomboyish, I kinda confuse to write them. I think that I need your advice again. :p

I only saw your reply now, sorry ><

What I mean is that when Sae was with Yuki she was super jealous, and when they had their intimate moment, that was an atittude of a possessive person. Even when Rena said that about Yuki, that reaction of hers was really something. I dont know, Yuki have a past 'thing' that Sae dont like and that make her act like a possessive person.

Sayaka is not that tomboyish. She does sports, sometimes she wears sports clothes but she is very feminine ;)

Feel free to ask anything you want^^
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: anakpanti on November 02, 2013, 04:22:08 AM
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PART 5

= WMatsui : 3rd Meeting =

Rena woke up from that bench. It sounds not far from here. She tried to looking for that voice.

She turned her head to her left because she heard that voice came from there. She stood up and walked slowly. Rena saw someone’s foot seen behind a tree. Ah, maybe that people is the one who singing.

Rena walked closer, she saw that person from behind. That person just sat on the ground. She didn’t know exactly about the reason why she want to see that person closer.

Maybe she’s a little bit envy to that person because that person can play it really well. Even though she already tried to learn to play her guitar in these past weeks, she still can’t do it properly.

She feels annoyed to herself because usually she can learn everything within 2 days. But now, when it comes to music… she can’t do anything. So frustrating!

The more closer she walked to that person, that voice became more and more beautiful to be heard too.

After she close enough to that person, she stopped. A girl? How can a girl playing a guitar that well? Rena closed her eyes. She’s totally hypnotized by that voice and by that song. Now, she can hear it, clearly. She smiled.

It feels like she never really smile like this since a long ago. I never know before, that music can bring this kind of happy and peaceful feeling to me.

But suddenly… that peace gone. Her phone ringing, she gasped. She wanna pick her phone before that person can realize her presence. YUKO?! WHY THAT BRAT ALWAYS BOTHERING ME IN A WRONG TIME!!

Rena quickly rejected the call. But it’s too late…. that person stopped playing her guitar, she stood up and turned her head. That person shocked, but then she smiled.

Rena dumbfounded. NO…. WAY. HELL-to-the-NO! Rena wanna run away as soon as she can, but that person grabbed her hand first.

"I’ve told you before…. there will be a third meeting for us." She grinned. "Now… Can I know your name?"

"No. Now, let me go." Rena tried to release her hand.

Jurina glared at Rena, “but you’ve promised me.” She pouted.

Rena raised her right eyebrow. “I never promised anything to a stranger.”

Jurina sighed and then she release Rena’s hand. “Okay. I’m sure there will be our 4th meeting anyway.” She grinned. “You can tell your name later.”

Rena surprised because that girl easily release her, she thought there will be another fight between them.

Rena saw that girl turned and sat again on a same spot. Rena turned her body to the opposite side, she wanna go away. But… she heard Jurina singing again. Somehow…. that beautiful voice resist her to go away.

Rena sighed. What happened with my head?! She turned back. She walked closer to Jurina and sat beside her. Jurina didn’t bother her presence, she keep busy with her guitar.

"Rena."

Jurina stopped playing. “huh?”

"My name is Rena."

Jurina smiled. “Thank you, Rena-chan.”

"No need to thank you. Keep playing it, I need to calm my mind "

"This?" Jurina lifted her guitar.

Rena nodded. She took a lollipop from her pocket, she unwrapping it. She layed her body on the ground, she closed her eyes. “Continue what you did before. I won’t bothering you, let’s just say I’m not here.” She ate her lollipop.

Jurina smiled. She gazed a girl who laying in front of her. Raven hair… white skin… beautiful face…. her nose… those lips…. She’s so gorgeous.

Rena put her hands below her head, she use her hands to become her pillow. It makes her shirt lifted. Jurina can saw Rena’s perfect waist, she saw a piercing in Rena’s belly button. I didn’t want to say this but…. she’s sexy too.

Jurina turned her head, she looked back to her guitar. Before she singing again, she said… “But you’re here, with me… let’s be friend.”

Rena opened her eyes, she surprised with those warm words. But she can't said anything again, because Jurina already singing again. She didn’t want to bothering her.

Rena closed her eyes again and enjoy the song. She’s not really sure about… she’s enjoying the song or… enjoying Jurina’s voice. Both of it are so beautiful. Those peacefully feelings came back to her again.

After some minutes, without she realized it… she fell asleep.

Jurina stopped. She put her guitar. Did she fell asleep? She chuckled. She keep staring Rena.

*2 hours later*

Rena opened her eyes. She surprised because the park already too quiet. She looked at her watch. “10 PM?! What the hell that I’m doing here?”

She woke up. She saw a jacket fell from her body to the ground. Rena frowned. “Jurina’s?” She quickly pick that jacket and clean it. Is she already went home?? Why she leave me alone?! She can wake me up instead of covered me with her jacket. Did she wanna act like a hero? Urgh!

"Yes, it’s mine."

Rena shocked. She turned her head.

"Oh, you already woke up. It’s really cold out here, I can’t believe you can slept that comfortable. It even made me didn’t want to wake a Snow White." She giggled. "Here."

Rena saw Jurina offered a cup. She took it from Jurina’s hand.

"I bought a hot chocolate for you. Just in case you feel cold." She smiled.

"I thought you already went home and leave me here. I’m just thinking about to kill you later, on our 4th meeting." Rena said it in cold way.

Jurina laughed. “Can you stop trying to kill me?? I’m not that bad.” Jurina walked closer to Rena. She whispered. “Hmm… you know….. rather than trying to kill me, maybe ‘thank you’ is more proper this time.

Rena stepped back. “Don’t get too close to me.” She glared at Jurina.

Jurina shrugged, “okay.” She smirked. “I didn’t know that you can easily embarrassed like this, I mean…. your poker face is so cold all the time. Kinda scary.”

"I’m not shy!"

"Really?" Jurina took her phone from her pocket. "I hope you don’t shy after you see this picture."

Jurina showed her a picture from Jurina’s phone. Rena shocked. “You!!! Bastard!” Rena blushed. She tried to catch Jurina’s phone but Jurina's reaction was too fast. “Delete it!”

"See? You easily embarrassed." Jurina laughed. She gave her phone to Rena. "Here, you can delete it by yourself… you won’t trust me if I’m the one who do it."

Rena grabbed it. She saw that picture again. Now.. she can saw it more clearly. She saw herself fell asleep, her mouth opened widely with a lollipop still in it. Her face looks so idiot in that picture.

Jurina giggled. “I’m sorry. Your face was so funny, I can’t hold myself to not tease you.”

"I will delete it. Don’t ever try to do something like this again or-"

"Or you will kill me? I know." She smiled.

What happened to her brain?! Rena sighed. She looked at Jurina’s phone again and she deleted her picture.

"Ano….."

Rena lifted her head. “What?!”

"After you delete it, you can add you phone number in it too…. If you don’t mind." Jurina looked away.

Huh? Rena surprised.

"Ahh… forget it." Jurina pointed a grey car."That’s my car, you can gave my phone back there. I’m going first." She walked away and leave Rena.

Jurina opened her car and get in. She smacked her head. “What I’m just saying?! Asked her phone number?! Stupid.”

Jurina hit her head to the steering wheel over and over again.

She heard someone knocked her window, she opened it. Rena.

"What are you doing?" Rena looks confused.

"Nothing. I’m just feel dizzy." She gave Rena an awkward smile.

"So… your dizzy will gone if you hit your head? Well… next time if you feel dizzy again, you can call me to hit you. I’m glad to hit it REALLY hard." Rena laughed.

She laughed?! Jurina shocked. A laugh that she saw is not a ‘tease laugh’… it’s Rena’s ‘real laugh’.

"Here, your phone."

Jurina took it from Rena. “Thank you.”

"See you around." Rena turned back and then she walked to her own car.

Jurina opened her phone contact quickly. She type ‘rena’, but no result appeared. She sighed. “I know… She won’t gave her number to a stranger easily, I would do the same.”

Jurina started her engine. She’s about to drive, but her phone ringing. She got a message.

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Guitar girl,
I know that you’re very dumb to find it. Σ(゚∀´(┗┐ヽ(・∀・ )ノ
So, this is my number.
Rena.


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Jurina saw Rena’s contact name. “Lollipop girl?!” Jurina laughed out loud.

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Thank you, Rena-chan. O(≧∇≦)O

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Jurina smiled. She continue driving.

====================== 3 Days Later ======================

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To: Lollipop Girl

Ahayou Rena-chan. ヽ(^Д^)ノ

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From: Lollipop Girl

(`へ´*)ノ
What do you want?


———————————————————————

To: Lollipop Girl

Why you're so cold towards me all the time? (#+_+)

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From: Lollipop Girl

Well… I don’t have any reason to be nice towards you.
Give me 1 good reason.


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To: Lollipop Girl

I’ll give some very nice reasons Rena-chan. ←~(o `▽´ )oΨ
If you keep trying to kill me, I will print these pictures and hanging it on every door that I saw.

Attachment:
SleepingRenaDrollingWhileAteHerLolipop1.jpg
SleepingRenaDrollingWhileAteHerLolipop2.jpg
SleepingRenaDrollingWhileAteHerLolipop3.jpg


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From: Lollipop Girl

Whaaattt??!!! But I’ve delete it before!!!!!!
ლ(ಠ益ಠ)ლ

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To: Lollipop Girl

Oops… I took more than 1 picture.
I think you forgot to delete the other.
That’s not my fault after all. ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ

Oh, I forgot to tell you that I took a video too.


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From: Lollipop Girl

o(╥﹏╥)o
Fine!! I’ll be nice to you. Geez!


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To: Lollipop Girl

Good girl. (¬‿¬)
Rena-chan, let’s go to amusement park this weekend.
(*≧▽≦)ノシ))


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From: Lollipop Girl

Huft… what can I say?
You seems won’t accept ‘NO’ though.
\(-___________-;)/


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"Jurina….. Jurina…. Jurina!!"

Jurina lift up her head. “What is it, Mayu?” She smiled.

"Jurina, It’s been 10 times I called you. You smiling by yourself like a crazy."

Jurina looked at her phone again. Yeahh… I think I’m crazy. She smirked.

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= AtsuMina : First Heartbeat =

*FLASHBACK*

Takamina sat in front of her computer, she’s making some reports. But her concentration get a little disturbance. She glanced at 2 girl who sat across her table.

"Hey… both of you." Takamina pointed at Mayu and Yuki. "Are you both already dating?" She looked at them in suspicious way.

Jurina seems didn’t care about that ‘lovey dovey’ thing, Jurina’s eyes still focus to read a file of abduction case.

Mayu surprised because of Takamina’s sudden statement. She sliding her stool quickly and go away from Yuki’s desk. Mayu back to her own desk. “N-no!”

"Really? Because I always saw your face blushed like red pepper while you talk with Yuki." Takamina smirked.

Mayu’s eyes opened widely. She shook her head furiously. “N-no!! It’s not like that.” She’s start panicked.

Jurina put that file onto her desk. “Oh, and also…. the most tangible evidence…” She pointed at a clock. “4.47PM… These past weeks, you always skipped to watch your favorite anime. You never leaving this office before Yuki leave too.”

Mayu blushed so badly. “T-that’s not like that!! I’m just got bored about that anime! besides… I still can download it anytime!” She said it in incredible speed, she’s really panicked.

Yuki laughed. “No need to panic, Mayuyu. You’re so cute when you’re like that.” She stood and walked slowly to Mayu desk. She put her hand on Mayu’s shoulder. “Yes, we are officially dating now.”

Both of Takamina and Jurina shocked. Their mouth and eyes opened widely.

Mayu startled too. “Si-since when? I… I think we never talked about this before.”

Yuki smiled. She kissed Mayu’s forehead, “since now.” And then… Yuki kissed Mayu’s lips.

Jurina closed the curtain quickly before other staff can see them.

Takamina gasped. She stood up and quickly forced them to separate that kiss. “Wow! Whow… Don’t forget, we’re still in the office right now. No Sexual Harrasment!!”

Mayu and Yuki stopped and then they laughed together.

Mayu looked at Takamina, “gomenasai.” She grinned. Afterwards, She turned her head back to Yuki. She whispered. “Thank you. I love you.

Yuki just gave Mayu her smile without saying anything again.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

That scene keep repeated in Takamina’s head. How can Mayu can get Yuki easily?! Maybe not too easy, I didn’t know. But…. at least it easier than my case.

*FLASHBACK*

"Th-that’s not a joke… I… I li-like y-you." Takamina avoid Acchan’s eyes.

"Are you trying to tease me again? I won’t fall for it."

"Is it not clear enough for you? I said…. it’s not a joke!"

Acchan stood up, she grabbed a glass of water from a table. Without any warning, she spilling it to Takamina’s head. “I think you're still sleeping. Wake up! It’s not in your dream.”

Takamina is very angry about that action. Her head and her clothes became wet. “You don’t need to do that!”

Acchan put that glass back to the table. “I need to do that because you need to wake up from your daydreaming. Did you want me to be your girlfriend in that short time?! I even didn’t know you, and worse… I even hate you.”

Takamina sighed, “I like you… but it doesn’t mean I want you to became my lover. I mean… let’s be friend! That’s not a love confession or something!”

"Tsk." Acchan opened the door again. "I think I’ll just go home, you seems angry at me."

"Yes! Definitely yes!!"

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Takamina took her phone. She dial someone.

“Moshi moshi.”

"Maeda, it’s me… Takamina."

“I know. You forced me to added your name into my contact list, remember?”

Takamina didn’t answer Acchan’s question. “I’m so sorry about what happened last week.”

“No worries. It’s my fault too. Sorry for my cruel action. Let’s have dinner together.. my treat. It’s for my apology.”

Takamina surprised. “Dd-ddi-dinner? Really?! Am I misheard something?”

Acchan laughed. “No, you’re not, baka! 7 PM… I’ll pick you up at 7 PM. You’d better don’t late or I will cancel it.”

"T-tonight?" Takamina feels extremely nervous.

“Yup. See you later." Acchan ended the call.

Am I dreaming? Takamina slapped her own face. It’s hurt! Oh my God… I’m not dreaming!!!!

======================== 8 PM ========================

"What makes you so long?!" Acchan asked Takamina when she opened the door.

Takamina get in to Acchan’s car. “I’m sorry. Lucky me because you didn’t leave me.”

"Yeah… I’m about to leave you, but after I thinking about it again….. I thought you won’t make me wait  just because a simply reason." Acchan start to drive.

"You’re right, I have some troubles with my work. Thank you for waiting me."

"No problem… so stop saying ‘thank you’ and ‘sorry’."

Takamina smiled. “Okay.”

Long silence after that.

The situation in that car became more awkward, so Takamina thought she must say something. “C-can I turn on the radio?”

"Sure."

Takamina turn it on and raise the volume. The channel played a love song.. that’s very romantic and slow song. Both of them became extremely awkward than before.

Takamina wanna change the channel quickly, she pressed a random button. But suddenly the sound became extremely loud.

Acchan shocked, she braked her car quickly before she hit an old woman who crossing the street. “Hey!! What are you doing?? You almost make me hit someone!” She turn off the radio.

"Ss-sso-sorry.. I thought it’s a button to change the channel." She panicked too.

"Can you read it before you press it? It’s a button to turn on another speaker in my car!"

"Hontou ni gomenasai. Please don’t cancel our dinner." She pleaded and then she folded her hands. "Pleaseee."

Acchan sighed. “Okay.” She continue driving again.

They stopped in a restaurant. Acchan parked her car. They went in.

Takamina dumbfounded. “Are you always eat in a place like this???” She looked around that luxurious place.

"Not really." Acchan give Takamina a simple answer.

A waitress came and asked them to choose a table. Acchan pointed a table at the corner, the waitress nodded. They followed the waitress.

After they sat, the waitress smiled and gave them a menu list. Takamina’s eyes opened widely. She’s panicked.

Takamina slowly kick Acchan’s feet. She whispered. “I don’t know what the hell all of this meal. Their name looks weird for me.

Acchan rolled her eyes, “Just tell the waitress anything you want.”

Takamina looked at the waitress, she smiled. “Takoyaki, please.”

Acchan smacked her head. She looked at the waitress, that waitress looks confused. “Sorry, can you please leave us alone? We will call you if we already decide the meal.” Acchan said it in English.

The waitress nodded and leave them.

Acchan sighed. “Even if you totally have no idea about the menu, at least you read the cover. It’s French Restaurant, baka.”

"But, I really didn’t know what is this!" She looks desperate. "I’m so sorry.. for that shame."

Acchan shrugged. “It’s okay.”

Takamina gave Acchan a smirk. “Let’s go, I have a better place.” She stood up and then she grabbed Acchan’s hand.

"B-but.. hey!" Acchan didn’t have a choice, she just followed Takamina. "My car."

"Just leave it here, it’s not too far from here. Let’s just walking." Takamina smiled.

"Okay. Now you can let go of my hand."

"Ah, yeah. okay, you’re right." She release Acchan’s hand.

Awkward moment…. again.

"We’re here." Takamina pointed a place.

"This?! This is more like a slum rather than a restaurant."

"Don’t worry, you will have a different sight from behind this place."

Acchan followed Takamina carefully. Acchan frowned. She’s right, this place isn’t like what I imagined. It’s clean and no drunk people. She relieved.

"Tadaaa… this is my favorite place!"

Acchan dumbfounded. “Th-this… this is beautiful.” Acchan saw the dark river, the lights make it became so beautiful.

Takamina chuckled. “I know. I always came here when I need a place to relaxed my mind, feel the wind and saw the river… so relaxed. It’s an outdoor dining restaurant.”

Acchan looks excited, she run onto 1 table, “Come on. I wanna sit there. I think we can get the best view from there.”

Takamina smiled. She relieved because she can make Maeda enjoy their time together. “Let’s order something.”

Acchan nodded. ”Umm… Thank you… to bring me here.”

"I’ve told you that I’m more better than your first impression." She grinned and then she called a waitress.

*2 hours later*

"Hey Maeda, stop taking the pictures. Let’s go home, you can come back to this place anytime.."

Acchan grinned. “Okay. But….” She grabbed Takamina’s hand. “Before we go home, let’s take a picture together!!” Acchan looks excited.

Takamina surprised, she blushed. “W-well… y-ye-yeahh… o-okk-okay.”

Acchan asked help to a waitress to do it. After take some pictures, they decided to go home.

"Bakamina…. I’ve told you to bring my car here, now… thanks to you, we must walk back to that French Restaurant." Acchan rolled her eyes.

"Bakamina?! Hey, you can’t change my name like that!"

Acchan giggled. She’s not a bad person as I thought before. Altough she’s baka sometimes, but… she’s nice. It’s been a long time since I have a friend outside my team.

Acchan looked at Takamina who walked beside her. “Umm… Bakamina.”

"Stop calling me Bak-"

"Let’s be friends.." Acchan smiled.

Takamina looks confused. “I don’t understand.”

Acchan frowned. “I know you’re a baka girl… but I think my words are clear enough… Let’s-be-friends.”

"I know the meaning of that and I’m not stupid." She rolled her eyes.

Takamina explained. “I mean…. I don’t understand about… Usually, you’re so cold, gloomy, and harsh to me… you even said that you hate me.
But today, you became extremely nice towards me. If you do that to show your guilty, well… I accept your apology.
You can stop act like today. I still wanna be your friends even if you act like the first time we met.” She smiled.

I thought she’ll hate me after what I did to her last week. She smiled. ”I didn’t do it to get your forgiveness. I change because you’ve changed before. Usually, you always made me angry by doing something stupid to me.
But today…. you didn’t show me that. You act like a nice girl too.”

"Hey, I’m really a nice girl… it’s not just acting!"

Acchan giggled. “Well.. I’m a good girl too.” She grinned.

"So, sometimes… first impression is not always right."

Acchan nodded.

They continue walking. They knew that they almost arrive, because they can saw the restaurant’s roof. But…

"Hey!! Both of you, give your money to us!!"

They shocked because suddenly… they surrounded by 5 man.

"Come on… We won’t hurt you if you give it to us nicely!!" A men laughed.

Acchan whispered. “Baka!! I’ve told you to bring my car!!!

Don’t worry… everything is still under control." Takamina dragged Acchan to stand behind her, she didn’t want Acchan get hurt. I must protect her.

Acchan took her money from her wallet and she took her phone too. “Let’s just give our stuff, I’m afraid that they will hurt us.

Acchan wanna threw it to them, but Takamina held her hand. She looked at those man. “Hey, I’m police!!! Don’t mess up with me or tomorrow… you’ll dragged to the prison. I’ll forgive you once if you didn’t bothering us tonight.”

Acchan gasped.

Those man startled too. But, there’s a men.. “Liar!! Don’t try to trick us, show your badge!!!”

Takamina wanna took it from her pockets, but she didn’t find it. Sh*t!! I leave my badge and my gun in my office!! F*ck! ”I’m forgot to bring it.”

Those man laughed. “See? She’s lying!! Give your money now, or we promise to kill you without any pain.” A men smirked.

Acchan relieved because she thought that Takamina just saying that to threaten those man. “Just give it!!" Acchan still hiding behind Takamina.

Takamina shook her head.”Never.I’ll lose my pride as a sergeant if I surrender to these villains. I must protect Maeda too. Takamina walked slowly, she stopped until Acchan can touch the wall. “I’ll protect you, stay close to me. Keep hiding behind me.

Wait… wait… "Don’t do it, Takamina! Just give what they want!!"

They laughed. “Hey… fake police, you better hear your friend or…..” They took some baseball bat, “we will use this.” He smirked.

Takamina saw an iron stick on the ground, she took it. “I will give you this!” Takamina hit a men with that iron stick. The fight started.

Acchan looks worried because the situation became uncontrolled. Takamina got hit several times, but Takamina still tried to protect her from some hit and ended with hurting Takamina herself. Wh-what should I do?

Actually… Acchan didn’t afraid of them, she knew that she can easily defeat them. She’s just didn’t want Takamina knew too much about her.

"Maeda, run!! Call the police!"

"I can’t leave you alone!!" Acchan panicked.

Takamina got hit on her arm, she groaned in pain. ”Go!! Now!! I can’t hold them to lo-“

A hit ended in Takamina’s head, it’s a strong hit. Takamina fainted. Those man keep hitting Takamina’s body even if she’s already fainted.

"Stop!!!" Acchan yell at them. "If you don’t go right now, I guarantee that all of you can’t see a sun tomorrow!!" Acchan is so angry.

Those man laughed. “Just die with your friend!!” A men tried to hit Acchan’s stomach, she hold that men’s hand before he can hit her. She kick his ‘main part’. That men groaned.

The other man shocked, they want to attack Acchan. But Acchan suddenly took out her gun and pointed it to a men’s forehead. “Go, or I’ll blow up you and your useless brain.” That men looks afraid.

Another men laughed. “Don’t play with us!! It’s a fake gun…. you’ll end like your ‘fake police’ friend!!” He wanna kick Acchan.

Acchan got very angry because those man didn’t hear her warning. She took another gun from her pocket with another hand and finally…. she shot his left leg with that gun. No one can hear the sound because Maeda Team always using the silencer for their guns.

He groaned in pain, his leg bleeding.

Acchan glared at a men who still standing in front of her, “Do you still want to fight me and then you’ll die or…. you can go and bring your friend get out of my way!!” She put her gun into that men mouth, she’s ready to pulled the trigger.

That men lifted his hands, he looks surrender. They carried their friend who still bleeding and then they run away.

Acchan put her guns back to her handbag. She held Takamina’s body. “Baka!! You didn’t need to do that, I can protect myself. I’ve told you to give it to them… you didn’t listen me." She shed her tears.

Acchan looked at Takamina’s face and Takamina’s hands… all swollen. Her foot was bleeding but her injury didn’t looks too serious. Acchan carried her and brought her into Acchan’s car.

*Thump…Thump..Thump.Thump-Thump-Thump-Thump* Acchan felt her heart beating so fast because of Takamina…. for the first time. She smiled, a bitter smile.

================== TO BE CONTINUED =================

Sorry guys… this chapter is about WMatsui, AtsuMina, and a little part for MaYuki.

I’ve decided that ‘Takamina Team : Diversion’ will be put on next chapter. Sorry…  :kneelbow:

Spoiler for next chapter:

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
Post by: anakpanti on November 02, 2013, 04:35:09 AM
@BbSis : I will considering about Sae. :) Thank you for your advice and suggestion too.

@Wmatsui22 :
Quote
Anyway, Rena's character here is unique,
she's so bitch but smart.. :twisted:

I agree with you about this  :lol:
Hmm... that guitar will help them to develop their relationship, so... don't hate the guitar.  :w00t:

About Maeda Team past story... don't worry. There will be a chapter who explain about it.

@kurogumi : Woww... thanks for your first comment.  :inlove: I hope there will be a 2nd, 3rd, 4th,......  XD
MaYuki fake couple is really hurt me too. I'll decided about them quickly (chapter 6.. maybe :p).

@edogawa4869 : I'm really glad that you love it. Thank you. But in the next chapter, something big will happened between them.  :cry:

@gek geki and @fausto : I already posted the 5th part, I hope you reading it too.  XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: chiqinna on November 02, 2013, 05:39:25 AM
*steal Rena's lollipop and put it in mouth*
hmmm... good progress for Wmatsui... can't wait to see their friendship grows into love~ ♥
oh... Mayuki~~ but it just one sided love since Yuki still haven't love Mayu yet...
aaaandd Atsuminaaa! :D ♥ first heartbeat~ :) what will happen when Atsuko found out that Takamina is really a police...and vice versa... :O
sweet moments of them~ ♥
cant wait for the next chapter!  :twothumbs  :twothumbs
the betrayer!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: blakwhite on November 02, 2013, 06:18:42 AM
updaaaateeee  :inlove: :inlove:

i dont really ship wmatsui, but i love wmatsui scene  :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

and atsuminaaaaa  :luvluv1:
as expected from takamina, she will protect acchan with her life, good job takamina  :on GJ:

i hope takamina will be okay
i hope acchan will fall in love with takamina soon and goes to *censored* scene  :on bleed: :on bleed:

i hope you will update ASAP anak panti - san XD

sorry my bad english  :shy2:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: olive29 on November 02, 2013, 06:22:55 AM
Nice update..  :twothumbs

Nice Juju for blackmailing Rena to go on a date with her..  :grin: :twothumbs

But, Rena finally warmed up to Jurina..

And Atsumina..

Acchan warmed up to Takamina too...

Poor Mayu.. :cry:

What will happen to WMatsui and Atsumina's relationship if Rena and Acchan found out that Juju and Takamina are police officer??

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon.. :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: kurogumi on November 02, 2013, 07:02:21 AM
wmatsui scene was so funny LOL  :lol:

next week they had a date kyaaaaa~  :cow: good job jurina! make rena melt!

but you said the next update something big will happened between them ,who?? atsumina?wmatsui? or mayuki?  :cathappy:

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i pity mayuyu here  :banghead:
yuki was so mean,they officially couple but it's sad  :cry: , because i know yuki just faking it all
please make yuki loving mayu....loving her to the point she will be crazy if she lost her or not being around her,and can't life without her..... :bow:

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takamina was so stupid LOL she forgot her badge and her gun LOL LOL LOL  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
but it's safe her too,if acchan know takamina identity now,all their friendship will be built in fake like mayuki,
i know even right now atsumina and wmatsui are start being friendly but in the future they will be enemy,but they built their friendship at least in pure innocent,mean if they know the truth there is still a possibility to forgive,it's just destiny was so cruel.  :catglare:

rena very obedient to Jurina, could this be a sign in the future she will follow Jurina?
and decided to leave her old job and choose with Jurina? hope it LOL  :bow:  :cathappy:

But for mayuki, i don't know it's hard,they built their relationship with fake from the start,well just yuki,mayu is trully in love from the start,if she knowing it, i doubt she will forgive yukirin that easy,worse maybe she will take revenge...it will be dangerous for herself but she had pride right?
but let see...what gonna happend between them and we had sae too,she will protect yuki.  :sweatdrop:
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thank for the update
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: Konoe on November 02, 2013, 07:14:54 AM
I see big developments on WMatsui and Atsumina. :luvluv1:

Rena and Acchan are warming up on Jurina and Takamina. Thank you for the sweet moments. :twothumbs

I am really looking forward to the break up of Saeyuki. :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: gek geki on November 02, 2013, 08:10:43 AM
mayu is really love yuki huh? she even skiping her favorite anime kekeke
bad bad yuki
yuki made a mayu cyborg system change huhuhuhu,she like a virus
but if the virus is bad,the system gonna be broken soon and can't fix anymore,just delete it KHU KHU KHU (EVIL LAUGH)
NO!!! I'M SAD!!!
IT'S A CONFESSION OF LOVE THAT MAKE ME SAD THIS BADLY!! BECAUSE IS FAKE!!!
TO THINK HOW MAKE YUKI FALL IN LOVE WITH MAYU MAKE ME FRUSTRATED, HOW!!!? HOW COME THAT HAPPEN IF YUKI LOVE SOMEONE ELSE AND MAYU HOBBY IS NOT HELP TO MAKE YUKI FALL GWAAAAD!!
IS THERE SOMETHING THAT COULD TOUCH YUKI HEART?

RENA AND JURINA IS ON THE RIGHT WAY GOOD, I LOVE RENA SAMA

ATSUMINA ALMOST ALMOST






Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: Terragen on November 02, 2013, 08:47:15 AM
......................

it's sad indeed  :cry:

but let's face it  :lol:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: White Hawk on November 02, 2013, 09:05:10 AM
Thanks for the udpate!! :)

Waah~ WMatsui moment is so sweet :wub:
Finally Rena can be nice to Jurina, hehe, thanks to those photos :lol:
Nice move Jurina! XD

But,, Mayuki,, :cry:
Yuki you shouldn't give hope to Mayuyu if you love Sae :angry:
Poor Mayu...
Eh, but it's okay~ Later you'll fall in love with Mayu~

Atsumina is so sweet too~  XD

Can't wait for the next update :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: FairyNyan on November 02, 2013, 12:54:24 PM
THAT WMATSUI  :inlove:

MY WMATSUI FEEL  :inlove:

AND THAT ATSUMINA  :inlove:


Update ASAP  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: mo-chan on November 02, 2013, 01:14:03 PM
Jurina playing with a guitar~~~ I want to hear J's voice too  :cathappy: :deco:
Jurina was too sweet.   :wub: She could stop all her fights with Rena so easly   :grin:
even if Rena is not easy to deal with.  :nervous
It was funny reading Wmatsui's messages  :rofl: :rofl:
Jurina should blackmail Rena more hahahah   :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Poor Mayu   :O
I was really happy when Mayu said it to Yuki  :inlove:
but then  :doh: I remmebered that Yuki won't really reply to Mayu's love for her cause she was using her...  :(  :catglare:
Next chapter Will find out about it!? They are official yet Mayu will know the truth really fast!  :shocked
wait ?  :? Shinyuu Trio and The Old Friend??? is this aboout the mysterious person who betray the Maeda team in the past?  :?
or is Mayu or Sae are friends in the past?? NO way~~~  :roll:
I'm confused  :panic:
Thanks for the update I'm waiting for your next one~~~ :cathappy: :cathappy:  XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: anakpanti on November 02, 2013, 01:24:30 PM
@chiqinna : actually... Jurina is the one who steal Rena's lollipop... I'll put it on next chapter. :D
Yup... WMatsui and Atsumina looks fine (so far), Mayuki dan SaeYuki are my problem now. LOL

@blakwhite : thanks for loving those pairing's scene. :D
Ahh... *that* scene? Just relax, I already prepared it.... Almira-san will help me in that scene. *spoiler*

@olive29 : It's already chapter 5 after all, they'll found out about it soon. :)
Let's see, they will betray their team, or..... they'll stick with their original team.

@kurogumi : ahh.... kurogumi-san.
Thanks for your comment. I'm really glad when I received your comment. XD
Something big will happened between Sae x Yuki x Mayu.
About Mayuki and SaeYuki.... I'll decide about them soon. :p

Takamina.... such a careless police.  :lol:

WMatsui.... hmm... you know, Rena is a 'bitch' person sometimes, she's really harsh and rude towards people. I'm not sure about it.. LOL

@Konoe : SaeYuki... about break-up... Sae is a 'possessive' girl, it isn't easy to make her break-up with Yuki.

@gek geki : that confession will be sweet if you didn't know about Yuki, right? :p
Mayu haven't think about it because she didn't know about Yuki, if she knows that Yuki loves Sae.... I'm sure that she'll burn all of her manga comics and threw her anime just to clinging with Yuki.  :lol:

@Terragen : sad? Who? Mayuki?

@White Hawk : WMatsui... Guitar and photo will help them clinging with each other. :P
Yuki want something from Mayu, so it makes Yuki must do it even if it will hurt someone that she love (Sae).

@FairyNyan : I love WMatsui too...  :inlove:

@mo-chan : I want to hear it too... LOL.
Rena can easier to deal with, because of Jurina's voice... thanks for that guitar. :P
I like those blackmails too... Jurina is a truly evil. :D

About Shinyuu Trio and the betrayer, this is could be called as a spoiler, but.... It's okay.
Shinyuu Trio will meet the betrayer (Maeda Team's old friend). They will confront her... and accidentally MaYuki will be there too while those things happened.

Thank for reading and your comment.  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: anakpanti on November 02, 2013, 01:31:11 PM
About the poll above... Actually, at first I choose miichan as the betrayer.
But it seems this will be a 'fight' between tomochin and NyanNyan to enter this fanfic.
I can't wait until the poll ended.  XD

Thanks for your votes. I'm glad.  :w00t:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: Terragen on November 02, 2013, 02:07:22 PM
Wahahahahaha~ laugh while cry at the same time
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: cisda83 on November 02, 2013, 02:50:51 PM
Ah... Miss ur update...

Interesting Jurina and Rena are msg friends

Mayu and Yuki are officially together in the eyes of the police team...

Poor Mayu is being used and played by Yuki

How is the relationship going to be affected later in the next chapter when they saw Sae?

Would Mayu know that she was being used by Yuki?

Who is the betrayer?

AH... Minami wanted to protect Atsuko but unable... and Atsuko the one that protected her

Where Atsuko is going to get Minami to?

Would she send Minami to hospital or her own house?

So Atsuko seems not knowing Minami being a police?

What would she do when she found out?

What would that reflect into their relationship?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: Zita on November 02, 2013, 06:01:21 PM
I thought Takamina is better in fighting. :doh:

Yuki said that they are dating? isn't it to much?

I guess that they all would act different if they knew who others are. :lol:

Thanks for update. :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 02, 2013, 07:23:45 PM
bakamina i thought she would be better in fighting  :knee:
cant wait for the next one im curious see what acchan  would do 
haha rena will kill jurina soon im sure  hahaha :nervous
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: anakpanti on November 03, 2013, 05:57:39 AM
@cisda83 : Thanks for all the questions.. I promise that all questions will be answered soon.  :)

@zita : They will act different when they know the truth.. definately. :lol:
About Yuki..... she's really a great player. Poor Mayuyu.  :smhid

@mikaellitsa : Hi... welcome! It's the first time I see you in my fanfic..   XD
What I imagine is... Acchan and Takamina aren't that good in bare-hand fighting. They're expert in using gun. If Acchan didn't bring her gun too..... I'm sure that they'll defeated. It's 5 man vs 1 girl!! :shocked
Jurina, Sae, Sayaka... they're better in fighting (without using the gun)

Rena will 'kill' Jurina, don't ever you try to 'play' with Rena. :p
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: Konoe on November 03, 2013, 08:21:43 AM
@Konoe : SaeYuki... about break-up... Sae is a 'possessive' girl, it isn't easy to make her break-up with Yuki.
But it will end with Mayuki right? I will not take back my words. I will believe in your Mayuki.

About Shinyuu Trio and the betrayer, this is could be called as a spoiler, but.... It's okay.
Shinyuu Trio will meet the betrayer (Maeda Team's old friend). They will confront her... and accidentally MaYuki will be there too while those things happened.
Is this the chapter you said Mayu will do something brave? :? If that is the case then I am really looking forward for Yuki falling in love with Mayu. :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: gek geki on November 03, 2013, 11:13:17 AM
MAYUKI!
TOGETHER!
FOREVER!
MAYUKI!
TOGETHER!
FOREVER!
MAYUKI!
TRUE LOVE!

I SHIP HARD MAYUKI!
YEAH YEAH AYE AYE AYEEE~~~E


Sponsored by Mayuki.corporation
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: gek geki on November 03, 2013, 11:24:39 AM
Oh i had a bad feeling,someday rena sama will killing jurina for sure,dont messed with her juri chan
 Anything it's fine as long as rena sama still life bwahahahahahahahahaha
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on November 03, 2013, 02:09:28 PM
I've been following this story from tumblr~ ahahaha... finally had a change to come here so I can comment~ :v
Jurina blackmailing xD but it's working! (y)
Takamina... uh... wow?
Well at least Acchan is nice to her now...lololol

so much for the comment... DX I forgot all the things that I wanted to say :v
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 03, 2013, 05:08:58 PM
yeeahh...

finally Wmatsui and AtsuMina can be friends...

but  i guess sooner or later they have to fight one to another...

this will be interesting.. :twothumbs

what? what? what? what? what will happen to my SaeYuki???  :panic:

i hope u won't do too much suffering to them....  :bow:

thanks for the update.. 

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: ykariya on November 04, 2013, 04:43:58 PM
this will be interesting  :twothumbs

finally AtsuMina can be friends...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: BbSis on November 04, 2013, 07:28:26 PM
Tianne!!! Sorry to take so long to comment ><

Nhya I loved WMatsui moment so much *.* I loved how Rena relaxed with Jurina's voice  :heart:

Takamina desperate to keep in touch with Acchan was so cute~~ And when Bakamina was beaten up by those guys to protect her was kinda cool xD But Acchan feel for her anyways hauhauah I think she feel already when she saw how the restaurant was  XD

I still feel sorry for Mayuyu ;.;

Thank you for the update ><
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
Post by: fausto on November 04, 2013, 09:11:53 PM
Bakamina always acting like a hero :panic: this story is good, I really want to read more atsumina moments, and see the betrayal! Thank you for this story!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 04, 2013, 11:09:39 PM
Mo-chan (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=50895)…. Thank you very much for your hard work. :bow:
You helped me so much to improve my English. :’)
Thanks… a lot! :D

ZorxCemoon (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=111570) Thank you for you too. It's nice to discuss with you.  :)
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PART 6.1

= AtsuMina =

Takamina opened her eyes, “Urgh… itai…” She grimaced as she felt the pain in all over her body.

"Don’t move! Just take a rest." Acchan answered her from somewhere.

She was surprised when she heard Acchan’s voice, she looked around. This is my apartment… why she’s here? She frowned and tried to remember what happened to her.

Takamina gasped. She woke up. “Hey Maeda… are you okay?! What happened?? Let’s go to the hospital!! Sorry… I feel bad because I can’t protect you!! Are you hurt?! Are y-” She touched her head, “Akkhhh… my head…”

Acchan walked into Takamina’s bedroom. “See? Who’s going to ‘die’ in pain right now? I’m perfectly okay.” She smiled.

Acchan held Takamina’s shoulders and then she pushed her slowly onto the bed . “Lay your body, I’ll take care of your wounds.” She compressed Takamina’s swollen body and faced it with a warm towel. After that… she bandaging Takamina’s wounds.

Takamina can’t blink.  Am I dreaming? Why I always dreaming lately? But this pain feels real.. I’m not dreaming. She smiled. “How can you survived last night? and……” She observed Acchan, “without a single wound?”

Acchan giggled. “Simple… I screamed and then some people came to help me.”

Takamina was confused. I thought…. there was nobody else in that street. It happened at midnight and in a small alley. How ca-

Acchan pecked Takamina’s cheek. “Thank you…. thank you for protecting me. I really hope it will never happen again to us.” She sighed.

Takamina grinned. “Well… Umm…. I hope it’ll happen again, so I can get your kiss again.” She winked.

"BAKA!!" Acchan took a pillow and slapped Takamina’s face with that pillow.

"ITAI…!!!"

Acchan laughed. “You better sleep, I will wake you when your breakfast is ready.” She walked out and closed the door. She leaned her body on the door. I hope that kiss can distract her from thinking about last night again… I can’t tell her that I used a gun! She rolled her eyes and then she walked back to the kitchen.

*Acchan’s phone ringing*

She opened a message… Yuki.

————————————————
From : Yuki

I already got her. What’s next?
————————————————

She smirked. As usual… Yuki always do her job really well and always faster than I thought.

————————————————
To : Yuki

Good job, Yuki. As always….. you’re my favorite.

I have 2 tasks for you.

You’d better get ready because….. you will worked together with Rena and Sae.

————————————————

Acchan chuckled. I can imagine how Yuki’s expression after she read my message.

========================== **** ==========================

= WMatsui =

"Dont-touch-me! I think that I’ve said it many times.." Rena glared at Jurina.

"B-but… I’m afraid. It’s impossible for me." Jurina tighten up her grip.

Rena looked annoyed. “Am I the one who asked you to entered the Haunted House an hour ago?”

"No."

"Am I the one who asked you to ride this Dark Rides too?"

"No."

"So… it’s totally your consequence!! Get off me!" Rena forced Jurina to release her.

"I… I didn’t know that this will be so scary. Let’s just go back." Jurina pleaded.

Rena rolled her eyes. “There’s no way back, we’re in the midway! This’s not scary at all, this’s boring as hell… I even can sleep in this ‘train’ if you didn’t bothering me from the start.”

"Rena-chaaan~" She shed her tears.

"Geez!" Rena laughed. 

*Few Minutes Later*

"Are you okay?" Rena glanced at Jurina. She looks pale, so…. the dark is her weakness? Gotcha! She smirked.

"Yeahh… I think that I’m fine now." She wiped her tears.

"Okay, let’s ride the Roller Coaster and the Sky Swings. Which one that you wanna ride first?"

Jurina was shocked. “No! No-no… No.. wait…. I’m dizzy. L-let’s take a break for a while.” She shook her head.

"Don’t be a whiny child like that. Let’s go!!" Rena grabbed Jurina’s collar and dragged her. Other people looked at them in weird way.

Jurina was surrendered. I can’t win against her . I’m too stupid to show my weakness to her. She walked behind Rena. Jurina lifted her head. “Wait…… Ferris Wheel? I thought yo-“

"If you faint, I’m the only one who will have trouble. I don’t want to carry you by myself in the way home." She glared at Jurina.

Jurina relieved. “Well…. I think this rides can ‘refresh’ my mind, so I can forget our scary rides before.”

They get in to the Ferris Wheel. They just sit without saying anything…. too busy with a great views in front of them.

"Beautiful. Isn’t it?" Jurina talked first.

"Yeah… I think we’re on time." Rena pointed at the sky. "Sunset." She smiled.

Jurina didn’t blink. She was stunned… It was not because of the pretty sunset. There was something more beautiful in front of her… more beautiful than sunset.. more stunning for her eyes.

Jurina saw Rena’s raven hair which was blown by the wind, Rena’s eyes showed her excitement, Rena’s pale skin that looks pure-white even when it’s nearly dark…. She was dazzled by Rena’s smile which was illuminated by the twilight.

Rena turned around again to watch the sunset, she turned away from Jurina. “It’s the first time I see sunset with somebody else.. I mean… really watching the sunset, not just passing by.”

Wind blown again, some of Rena’s hair covered Jurina’s face. Jurina could feel Rena’s scent, attractive fragrance. She held Rena’s beautiful hair that covered her face and and let it blown by the wind again.

"Me too." Jurina stared at Rena’s back. She wanna hold it, but….. she resisted her will.

After they finished riding the Ferris Wheel, Jurina stretched her hands. She yawned, “I’m so tired. Let’s go home.” She turned around.

"Wait!" Rena yelled at Jurina. "Let’s ride the Carousel before we go home."

"Huh?!" Jurina frowned. "That’s a vehicle for children! I don’t want to."

Rena sighed. “Okay… let’s go home.” She walked first and left Jurina behind.

What happened with her? I thought she will grab my collar again. Jurina ran towards Rena, she grabbed her hand. “Let’s ride it together.” Jurina smiled.

Rena was confused at first, but then… she smiled. “Great!” She released her hand from Jurina and then she ran excitedly. “Come on!!”

Jurina was dumbfounded. Okay… This’s the first time I see her new side. I have to get used to it as soon as possible. She chuckled and then she ran towards Rena.

Rena sat on one of many ‘horse’ there. She smiled… however her smile seems bitter and full of loneliness.

*FLASHBACK*

"Rena-chaaan… let’s ride it!!"

"Mou… It’s so childish." Rena turned around and tried to escape. But she grabbed her hand.

"Come on…. Pleaseeee." The girl gave Rena a cute pleading-eyes.

Rena shook her head, “No.”

"Just 10 rounds." She winked.

"No."

"7 rounds??"

"No."

"5?" The girl looked desperate.

"N-"

Rena couldn’t continue her ‘No’ because she pressed her lips onto Rena’s lips. Rena blushed so badly, she stunned.

The persistent girl grinned, “5 rounds?”

Rena nodded. The girl was jumping happily.

Rena sighed. God… I love her so much, that’s why I never won against her.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

"Rena… Rena-chan.." Jurina patted Rena’s shoulder.

"Hm?" Rena looked at Jurina.

Jurina touched her forehead. “Can we stop now? I’m dizzy… I think we’ve riding this for about 20 rounds!”

Rena nodded. “Let’s go back.”

They went out from the amusement park. After they passed the main gate, they split up and went into their own car.

Rena closed the door. Why did I suddenly remember her again? She sighed then she took her phone.

—————————————————-
To : Guitar Girl

Even though you forced me to came here, but… I enjoyed this.
Thank you… for bringing me here.
(・_・”)/\(・_・”)

—————————————————-
From : Guitar Girl

Rena-chan… open your window, please.
—————————————————-

Huh? She turned her head to the window, she saw Jurina standing beside her car. She opened it. “What are you d-“

Jurina pecked Rena’s lips. “That’s the way you should thank me.” She grinned. She turned around and waved her hand, “See you later.”

Rena surprised. I hate the sudden kisses!!!

========================= **** =========================

= Takamina Team : Diversion (1) =

"Mayu… I have to go now." She kissed Mayu’s forehead as she was about to got up from the bed.

"Why?" She held Yuki’s hand. "I still wanna be with you." She pouted and lay on the bed again.

"I’m sorry… I have something to do. I will come back tomorrow and spend our Sunday together." She ruffled Mayu’s hair.

"Okay, but promise me to come back soon after your ‘something to do’ already finished." Mayu pulled Yuki’s neck and then she kissed Yuki’s lips passionately.

But Yuki suddenly broke the kiss, “Sorry, Mayu. We’ve done enough last night. I’m tired.”

Mayu frowned. We did nothing last night.
………..
Okay… we did ‘it’.
But if it was compared with our other nights…. last night was really ‘nothing’.
”Okay, I understand. Sorry.” Mayu turned around and slept with facing the other side.

Yuki realized that she did a mistake here. I’m not done with her, I can’t let any little mistake that will makes her far away from me or suspicious of me.

Yuki laid on the bed again, she hugged Mayu from behind. She whispered. “I’m sorry, honey.

Mayu turned back, “You can go now. I’m okay with it.” She gave Yuki a forced smile.

Yuki giggled. “No, you’re not okay with it.” She pointed at the clock. “Well…. I think we still have a half hour before I go.” She kissed Mayu.

* Some Hours Later *

"Yuki, you’re late!" A girl blocked her way to entered the room.

"I’m sorry, Yuko.. I’m overslept." She grinned.

"Welcome back!!!!" Yuko hugged Yuki. "We’ve missed you. It’s been some months!"

Yuki chuckled, she hugged Yuko back.

”He-hey!! Back off! Pervert old man…. stay away from my girlfriend!” Sae forced them to release their hug.

"Okay… okay." Yuko pouted. "I just wanna touch her chest once." Yuko wanted to grab Yuki’s breast.

Sae smacked Yuko’s head. “If you do that, I’ll throw you to the river.”

Yuki laughed. “Easy my boy….” She held Sae’s arm. ” Do you prefer to fight with Yuko rather than give your girlfriend a welcome kiss?”

"I’m sorry." Sae pecked Yuki’s lips and then she hugged her. "Welcome, I missed you."

One by one….. Maeda Team’s member welcomed Yuki. Except……. Rena. Rena still busy (or pretend to be busy) with her laptop and with her lollipop (of course).

Acchan noticed that Rena still sat on her spot. “Rena, greet her.”

"Hi." Rena said it without turning her eyes from her laptop.

"Rena…. please, we’re a family. Don’t act like that." Sayaka tried to persuade her too.

Rena sighed. She closed her laptop and then she sat on a table. She looked at Yuki. “Welcome.” And then she looked at Sae. “Don’t ever come closer than this… or your bodyguard will EAT me.”

Sae glared at Rena, she tighten her hug on Yuki’s waist.

Yuki patted Sae’s arm, she gave a signal to Sae to release her. Sae looks worried. Yuki smiled, “It’s okay.”

Sae let go of Yuki’s waist. Yuki walked toward Rena… slowly. “Rena, it’s been a year……”

"Don’t come here!!" Rena yelled at Yuki.

But, Yuki still walked closer. “Let’s end this, Rena…. let’s forget our past..”

"I said… Don’t-come-here." Rena looked at Yuki in scary way.

Yuki was not bothered by Rena’s warning, she kept walking until she stop in front of Rena. Close enough.

Rena looked at Yuki’s eyes. She laughed…. a scary laugh. “I’ve told you don’t come too close with me.”

Yuki wanted to hug Rena, but…….. Rena took a gun from that table and pointed it to Yuki’s forehead. Everyone gasped.

"Rena!!!" Acchan pointed her gun to Rena too. "Put down your gun."

Yuki shed her tears. “Wh-why you became like this?”

Rena glared at Acchan.”Do you really want us end up in this way?” She laughed. “I always know that Yuki is your favorite. Our friendship didn’t mean anything to you. You always forget that I’m the first one who support you from the beginning. Since you’re still nothing!!”

"Rena… please, don’t do anything stupid." Acchan pleaded.

Rena threw her gun to the floor. “I wanna sleep. Don’t bother me or I’ll really blow up your head… all of you.” She turned around.

Acchan put down her gun. “Please come back in an hour, we will start our meeting. We need you.”

"As if I care." Rena walked away from that room.

Everyone… silent.

Yuko sat on the couch.. “Huft… such a warm welcome party.”

*On The Other Hand*

Rena locked the door. She sat on the floor, and finally… she burst into tears.

She was already crying for half hour. Her phone rang, she got a new message.

——————————————————————-
From : Guitar Girl

Umm… Rena-can.
Are you already slept? I can’t sleep. Help me. ლ(ಠ_ಠლ)

I’m too happy, we really had fun today.
Maybe… we can go out again someday. (*/ω\*)

——————————————————————-

Rena ignored that message. But a message came again from a same sender.

——————————————————————-
From : Guitar Girl

I forgot to tell you that…… when we’re in the Ferris Wheel, you looks so gorgeous.
More gorgeous than the sunset itself.
\(///Σ///)\

Good night.

——————————————————————-

Rena smiled. That brat. She’s about to put her phone, but she remembered something.

——————————————————————-
To : Guitar Girl

No need to wait until ‘someday’, let’s go the the park next weekend.
Teach me how to play with this damn guitar.

Stop flirting with me and go to sleep.

——————————————————————-

From : Guitar Girl

Next weekend??!!! Σ(゜゜)

Okay. I WILL SLEEP! I promise!!
I can’t wait until next week. >.<

——————————————————————-

Rena chuckled. Maybe her voice can calm my mind again.

*11 PM*

"Rena… are you okay?" Yuko hugged Rena. "I’m scared."

Rena hugged Yuko too. “I’m so sorry to make you worried.” She release the hug. “Let’s start this meeting.” She smiled.

Everybody was dumbfounded. They wanted to ask about ‘why Rena’s mood easily changed?? Last time, she almost burned a house because she’s angry at the owner.’ But… no one dare to asked her.

Maeda walked into the middle of the circle. “As I told you earlier… Yuki, Sae, and Rena will work together. I hope 3 of you can work together well.”

Rena and Sae shrugged.

Yuki rolled her eyes. “How can I work together with them if I remembered that one of them ever pointed a gun to my head.”

"Sorry." Rena ate her lollipop.

"Okay, back to our topic. At first… I only have 1 task for them, but suddenly I got a surprise from Yuki. There’s one of those police who tried to track us. And she has made ​​it through our ‘first door’." Maeda looked at Yuki.

Yuki nodded. “Her name is Watanabe Mayu.
I never expected before that she’s really good in analyzing our movement.”

Yuki put some papers onto the table.
“2 Days ago, she show these papers to her team, and thankfully… I’m included in her team too.
She is trying hard to search our weakness, but as we always know before and we proud of it…. we don’t have any weakness. But, she is using our power as her ‘key search’.

She started to explore all robbery cases that ever happened in Japan and then she picked cases which the robber was not captured. After that, she categorize it again based on the evidences… and this is the fatal mistake…. only few cases that didn’t have any single evidence.”

Yuki put another paper onto the table. ”Here…” She pointed the paper “She found 25 cases. I already checked the list, she found 18 cases of our 63 cases. In 3 days, she reached 28%!!
And the bad news… she keeps searching it until today. I don’t know how many cases will be listed by her again on next Monday.”

Yuki took another paper. “Here… she also gave the mark at every prefectures that we’ve ever robbed… Hokkaido (Hokkaido), Akita (Tōhoku), Fukushima (Tōhoku), Chiba (Kantō), Gunma (Kantō), Ishikawa (Chūbu), Aichi (Chūbu), Kyoto (Kansai).

Unexpected, she almost read our movement too.

Now… we’re here… Osaka (Kansai), she said that: even if we can escape again this time, she will inform about us to all head polices in Chūgoku and Shikoku.
And if we still able run away, she will tell about us to all chief in Kyushu… she know that we heading south.” Yuki sighed.

Long silence.

Yuko clapped her hands. “It’s the first time I feel worried about us. She’s smart.”

"I’m sure that she’s not as smart as me." Rena keep licking her lollipop. "Oh, so… that’s why you ALWAYS clinging to her and even SLEEP with her? You  tried to make her ‘busy’ all this time, so she won’t have much time to search about us?" She smirked. "Pretty cunning."

Sae grabbed Rena’s collar, “Dont-ever-talk-about-it-again-in-front-of-me!!!”

"She’s right." Yuki shrugged. "I’m so sorry Sae. She’s too dangerous, I must give all my effort to limit her time or stop her to touch her computer."

Sae let go of Rena’s collar. “Y-Yuki….” Sae looked at Yuki in disbelief way.

Acchan looked at Sae, “I hope you’ll understand. Yuki just did it for us, I’m sure that she didn’t do it for any other reason.”

Sae glared at Yuki.

"Sae and Rena… please find a way to stop her as soon as possible. I’m afraid that in the end… if 3 of you didn’t have any plan….. we must kill a person for the first time."

Everyone gasped, they looks terrified.

Yuki didn’t say anything… she didn’t know that Acchan will use ‘kill’ as their last choice.

Acchan sat on a couch. “And the 2nd task for us is…. Revenge.”

================= TO BE CONTINUED ==================

Sorry… I have to split Chapter 6 become 6.1 and 6.2 because it’s (unexpected) too long. :P

So 6.2 will contains of:

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: Kirozoro on November 04, 2013, 11:56:15 PM
Yay! New ch  :w00t:

I can't believe it YukiRena in the pass

Poor Rena, good job there Jurina  :thumbup

I wonder how Sae, Yuki, and Rena work together  :?

I can't for the next ch

Please update!!  :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 05, 2013, 12:04:39 AM
@Konoe : Ohh.... about that, it will be added in chapter 6.2  XD

@gek geki : Oke.. oke... I know. You ship Mayuki.  :lol:

@FlameHazeKatsu : Eh, Hi... welcome. I think it's the first time I see you commenting my fanfic here.  XD
From tumblr? What's your tumblr? Thank for reading :)

@edogawa4869 : I'll try my best to not make them too suffering.  :D

@ykariya : Thanks for reading. Yeah... I hope that they'll become more friendly in the future.  :w00t:

@BbSis : Granny... no need to foced yourself.. you can commenting my fanfic anytime.  :P
I love WMatsui moment too!! I even can't believe that I'm the one who wrote that scene.  :roll:
Bakamina is cool, but.... I hope she won't forget her gun and her badges again.  :lol:

@fausto : The betrayer will be appear on 6.2...
For AtsuMina moment... In this chapter, I didn't wrote too much about them.. Maybe I wrote them again in chapter 8. :D


Thank you.  :on woohoo:

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: olive29 on November 05, 2013, 12:34:49 AM
Atsumina...yeah..  :inlove:

WMatsui moment..
Juju seems to be able to calm Rena... :grin:
And they'll have their second date... :inlove:

Ahhh..so Yuki and Rena used to be together??  :smhid
Yuki such a player..

Can't wait for the next update.. :grin:
Update soon,please..
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: gek geki on November 05, 2013, 01:13:26 AM
Hahaha i had this kind of feel that mayu's is like L from death note

Yes i ship hard mayuki and wmatsui
But about yuki with rena and sae history ugh and she will end up wit mayu,i dont felt it's right,somehow if yuki really fall for mayu,it would be not that easy.because she hurt rena and sae on the process,you know karma.
But i do really hope ind the end maeda team became good person in the future
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: blakwhite on November 05, 2013, 03:21:43 AM
yaaay update  :inlove:

Wmatsui momment  :on GJ:

hmm, now i wonder what acchan do if she know takamina is one of her enemy  :dunno:
pls update soon :3
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: kurogumi on November 05, 2013, 04:04:50 AM
Woah they never killed person before?

I see...
If the three of them couldn't find a way to trick mayu,they had to killed her?wow i wonder how yuki felt about this,i mean if she finally love mayu,it will be hard for her,so frustrating LOL but its more interesting this way



But they should remember,mayu's not work alone,she had takamina and jurina.i'm sure even takamina are looks stupid,she not became a seargent for nothing,she had something that yuki never know even her team mate,also jurina looks smart too.and don't forget that they had a special unique control over atsuko and rena.it will be their success key,because their opponet will hesistant for a second,i'm sure about it.when they finally confront each other,and knew who they are.it's chaos LOL



But i need to remark one thing here.if maeda team really do something to mayu,which lead to the lost of mayu's life,thing would not end happy.even for others couple (atsumina and wmatsui).imagine if one of your teammate died,how come you will together with the one who cause your friend death? It just not acceptable,but who know?love can conquer everything LOL

Oh can i ask you something?well the other already said it,but i'm still wonder how yuki fall in love with mayu?LOL yuki really a player bad yuki.but im sure mayu had something that could touch yuki heart more than rena and sae could do for her,and it warm her heart.hope yuki's love for mayu could protect her.




Thank for the update
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: Konoe on November 05, 2013, 04:40:31 AM
Atsumina and Wmatsui's progress are in sync. :wub:

Jurina is so sly. She stole a kiss and got a date next weekend. :D

Yuki, you player..
Past: Rena
Present: Sae while playing with Mayu
Future: MAYUYU.

Mayu's progress with the investigation is fast, as expected. 8)2 Maeda Team is worried that they will kill if needed.(I hope it's not Mayu but if that way Yuki will be concerned with Mayu then it's fine.)

@Konoe : Ohh.... about that, it will be added in chapter 6.2  XD
:mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: Terragen on November 05, 2013, 05:50:29 AM
Jurina was amazing!! She could change rena mood easily just with mere words

What? What happen between rena and yuki? Hahaha

Aaa...aa yuki,you made your mayu in danger by your information.

Takamina and jurina,still dont know what their real skill

More wmatsui please~
Jurina will teach rena how to played guitar. Proxymity~
Touching hand puhahahaha~ and and~ kissing scene~
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: White Hawk on November 05, 2013, 06:43:36 AM
Thanks for the update~

Ehh??!! Yuki!!!! :angry:
She's with Rena in the past? Now she's with Sae and Mayuyu
Yuki I hate you!!
LOL xD

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“I always know that Yuki is your favorite. Our friendship didn’t mean anything to you. You always forget that I’m the first one who support you from the beginning. Since you’re still nothing!!”
Eh? What did she mean? Does Acchan hurt Rena too in the past?

If Rena Sae Yuki can't stop Mayu, they need to kill her? :shocked

Jurina really can calm Rena down, thats good!
And she'll have another date again and teach Rena how to play guitar :wub:
I bet it'll be so sweet~ Hehe XD
WMatsui is the best :twothumbs

Can't wait for the next update :)

Ehh, I almost forgot about Atsumina X_X
LOL Taka! If that happen again you should be able to protect Maeda you know! XD

I can't wait to see how Rena, Sae, and Yuki work together :D
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: cisda83 on November 05, 2013, 10:06:57 AM
Atsuko was quite worry about Minami.. but also scared that Minami would know about her

What would Atsuko do when she knew that Minami was the one who was trying to catch her?

AH... so Yuki was trying to distract Mayu from figuring our Atsuko's team plan...

Great... Mayu... she can really really break and fully analyse the robberies... soon

What happened between Rena and Yuki?

Why was Rena so angry at Yuki?

Yeah... Rena and Jurina are having fun together... and they are going on a date again next week

What... Revenge.... Why and How?

Killing... is a last resort.... would Atsuko cross the line?

What's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 05, 2013, 10:47:18 AM
i hope AtsuMina will meet another robber..
so Takamina can get another kiss (or maybe more) from Acchan...
hehehe...  :mon misch:

aahh...
Wmatsui sweet moment...  :luvluv1:
but i wonder who is the girl in rena's past life???
 :?

what happen Yuki and Rena back then???

and Rena is always makes Sae jealous ....  :smhid

Whaaat??? :stoned:
Acchan said that they have to kill mayu???

so the fight is on the way huh???

can't wait fot the next update...   :hee:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 05, 2013, 04:20:33 PM
So..... Kojiharu.  XD
Okay.... I'll write about her... as the betrayer.   :lol:
Thanks for your vote.

6.2 ..... here I come!!  :ding:

============================

@Kirozoro : they will work together and they (surely) will make some chaos..  :lol:

@olive29 : Hi... it's always nice to see you in my fanfics..  XD
About Yuki and Rena past story.... I will write about it later.

@gek geki : Yuki is a really good 'player'. She can easily make people around her comes to love her...
She has an amazing aura.... 
Maybe... you've read chap 4, about how Yuki 'making love'... so hot, right? Such a great player.. :drool:

@blakwhite : Oh my God... I can't stop myself to give my readers some spoiler in their comment.  :lol:
They will 'know' each other in chap 7.... Maeda Team and Takamina Team will face each other.

@kurogumi :
Woowww....  :shocked you analyze this fanfic well..  :w00t:

Never. I've wrote it in chap 3 (Takamina Team - Blur)'... Acchan's theory: 'No Kill and No Mess'

You're right... Yuki is too focus to Mayu. Takamina and Jurina could be dangerous too.

Well.... it'll not easy for Mayu to make Yuki fall for her.
New Rival for Sae.  :lol:

@Konoe : How lucky Jurina, isn't it? :P
Maybe... Yuki isn't a player.... she's just easily get bored with her parter.  :lol:

@Terragen : Yes, Yuki put Mayu in danger. But... if she don't do that, her team will get so much trouble.
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More wmatsui please~
Jurina will teach rena how to played guitar. Proxymity~
Touching hand puhahahaha~ and and~ kissing scene~
:kekeke:

@White Hawk :
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Ehh??!! Yuki!!!! :angry:
She's with Rena in the past? Now she's with Sae and Mayuyu
Yuki I hate you!!
LOL xD
I still love Yuki.... she's soooo seductive.  :mon inluv:

Like I've wrote, Acchan pick Yuki as her favorite... Rena is jealous because actually...... Rena is the 1st member in Maeda Team, (after Acchan, of course). (I will make some flashback for them)

@cisda83 : Glad to see you again :)
Mayu is a dangerous person, Acchan will do anything to destroy her if Rena, Yuki, and Sae can't handle Mayu.

They will take revenge to the betrayer.

@edogawa4869 :
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but i wonder who is the girl in rena's past life???
She's Yuki.  :cry:

===============================================

I read some comments...
And I decided to make 1 special chapter : Flashback for Maeda Team.
I hope you'll like it later.
But I will post it after this 10 shot finished.

Thank you.  :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: ykariya on November 05, 2013, 04:32:26 PM
very good

Acchan minding Takamina  :inlove:
Mayuyu is very smart. :lol:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: fausto on November 06, 2013, 03:00:29 PM
Yeah, I like this update, Jurina always so teasing, god I love her so much... :panic: :banghead: Atsuko with a gun... :inlove: :bleed eyes: Please, don't let me suffer and give me more to read!!! :bow: Thank you for this!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: mo-chan on November 06, 2013, 04:04:00 PM
Yuki is scary...  :shocked
I'm doubting if she really loves Sae  :smhid
did she know what love mean?  :smhid
She played with Rena's feeling  :angry:
revange!!  XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 06, 2013, 05:16:24 PM

@edogawa4869 :
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but i wonder who is the girl in rena's past life???
She's Yuki.  :cry:



whaaat?????

YUKIIII???  :shocked

Yuki with Rena back then???

now she is in relationship with sae?

and later she will together with mayu?

ckckck.... such a player...  :smhid

well, what can i say...

she's gorgeous anyway...

hehehe...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: Zita on November 06, 2013, 07:13:19 PM
What I did not comment yet.
Sorry I know I am horrible person. :cry:

Why did Rena wanted to shoot Yuki? Awesome :lol: :twothumbs

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: gek geki on November 08, 2013, 09:42:09 AM
i missed this  pwiiis
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 09, 2013, 08:08:25 AM
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PART 6.2

= The Old Friend : Betrayer (1) =

Acchan sat on a couch. “And the 2nd task for us is…. Revenge.”

"What do you mean?" Yuko looks confused.

Acchan turned on the projector. "Do you remember her, Yuko? All of you?"

Everyone looked at the picture on the projector screen. They saw a familiar girl stood on the street, she used a cap to hide her face.

"K-kojima...?" Sayaka shocked.

*FLASHBACK*

"Yuko!! We must get out of this place, now!!" Sayaka shook Yuko's shoulders.

"No!! We can't!! Haruna is still out there!" Yuko tried to escape from Sayaka's grip.

Acchan walked closer to Yuko. "Where?"

Yuko didn't say anything.

Acchan slapped Yuko. "I said... Where is she??!!!"

"Somewhere...." Yuko shed her tears. She cried out loud.

"Don't you see her?!" Sayaka pointed at Yuki. "Look at her blood!!"

Yuko saw Yuki's bloody hand.

"Kojima did it to her!!" Acchan raised her voice. "Yuki almost died... thankfully Sae was be there on the right time to pull Yuki." She held Yuko's face and lifted it up. "Wake up your mind, Yuko... She's not belong to us anymore...."

Yuko hugged Acchan, she sobbed in Acchan's hug. "I... I still can't believe it...."

"None of us can believe it, Yuko!!" Rena yelled at Yuko. She still hugged Yuki tightly, she tried to calm Yuki who was grimaced in pain.

Sae sat on a desk. "Last week... I saw her. She talked with a police officer in a car. A police who always haunting us lately."

"NO WAY!!!" Yuko sat on the floor, she cried so hard.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Suddenly... the situation became tense up.

"You're right, Sayaka. I saw her yesterday. See? How lucky we are! We tried to search her for years, but when we already gave up.. she show up in front of us." Acchan smirked.

Rena dropped her lollipop to the floor and then she stepped on it. "Let's crush her." The lollipop was shattered.

"I followed her this morning." Acchan changed the picture. "I found her place." The picture of a white-elegan house.

Sae hugged Yuko. "Are you okay?"

"I'm okay. Let's kill her tonight!!"

"Yuko...." Sayaka tried to calm her friend.

Acchan crossed her arms. "Geez, no need to hurry.. Let's enjoy our weekend! We can wait until the right time comes. I promise... she'll never run away from us again."

"I can't wait! I will bring her here... to all of you. I want her to feel our pain too." Yuko's eyes looks full of pain, sad, and anger at the same time.

===================== NEXT DAY =====================

= YukiRena =

"Here." Yuki put some papers onto the table.

"What's that?" Rena asked it without looked at Yuki. Her eyes still focused to her laptop.

Yuki sighed. Yuki touched Rena's chin and forced Rena to looked at her face. "Rena, please! Can you stop pretending to be busy in front of me? You're a genius girl... whatever you do now.... it had already finished an hour ago. Right?"

Rena turned her head and it caused Yuki's hand slipped from her chin. "Don't touch me so casually like that." She took those papers from the table and read it. "Did Sae gave these things to you?"

Yuki took a chair and sat beside Rena. "Yeah... she said that she didn't wanna work in front of you because she won't be able to concentrate."

"Great! Me too." Rena said it in cold way.

"She's with Yuko. She and Sayaka tried hard to calm Yuko. Yuko always hold her gun and force herself to go outside our headquarter to catch Kojima." Yuki looked down. "She was always trust Kojima back then. After the long time, Yuko heard Kojima's name again... it must be hard for Yuko." Yuki sighed.

"I have no interest with nostalgic story." Rena scanned those papers one by one. "Hmm... Sae did a nice job." She put those paper back to the table. "Are you sure about this?"

Yuki moved her chair, she sat more closer to Rena. "About what?"

"If Watanabe is really as bright as you said, then.... we must preparing another plan." Rena looked at her laptop again and then she searched something in her folder. "I made 2 applications."

Yuko moved her chair again, so she can saw Rena's laptop. "Show me." She looked at Rena's laptop.

Rena put the cursor onto an application. "You just need to click this application twice and then your computer will be forced to shut down for an hour.
No matter how hard you'll try to turn it on again during an hour, it won't turned on because my application will automatically forced your PC to shut down again.."

Yuki frowned. "What's that for?"

"I'll explain it to you later." Rena pointed the cursor to another application. "This one is the main program, install it to 1 computer there. 5 minutes.. this application need 5 minutes until the PC can fully contaminated by my program." Rena looked at Yuki, "Listen, you must-"

Rena stopped because Yuki suddenly turned her head and looked at her too. They looked at each other eyes.

"I must...... what?" Yuki approached Rena's face. She whispered, "what should I do?" She smiled.

Rena turned her head back to her laptop quickly. Damn!! Why Sae left her girlfriend with me?! Doesn't she know that her girlfriend is totally dangerous and..... seductive?

Rena turned off her laptop. She stood up. "I need to go home now. I'll send the detail explanation of my applications by email." Rena was about to put her laptop into her bag.

Yuki grabbed the laptop and put it back to the table. "You can't go. We have to finish it now!"

Rena glared at Yuki. "Do you want me pointing my gun towards your head again?"

"Relax... Rena." Yuki walked closer to Rena.

Rena pick up her gun and pointed it to Yuki's head. "Do you think I'm joking right now?"

Yuki sighed. "Then do it." She crossed her arms. "No one will stop you this time. Feel free to kill me."

"You!!" Rena clenched her fist. She really want to shot her, but..... She's a girl that I've ever loved, I can't hurt her.

"What happen, Rena? Just... shoot me."

Rena put her gun back onto the table. She looked at the ground.

Yuki walked closer. "Look at me." Rena still looked at the floor, so Yuki held Rena's face and lifted it. She looked at Rena's eyes. "Don't you miss me?" She caressed Rena's cheek with her index finger and whispered. "Don't you miss my touches?"

"......."

Yuki slowly nibbled Rena's ear. "Don't you miss my lips?" She started to kissed Rena's neck and suck it slowly. "Don't you miss my warm breath too?"

"......."

Yuki pushed Rena slowly, she pinned Rena to the wall. She grabbed Rena's wrists and lifted it up. "Rena.... I miss you moan my name. It's been a year, Rena."

"Yuki, I warn you one more time. Back off or...."

She touched Rena's nose with her nose, she can felt Rena's breath became heavier. "Or what?" Yuki was about to kiss Rena, but Rena looked away.

*Yuki's phone ringing*

"Tsk." Yuki released Rena's hands. She picked up her phone. "Moshi moshi."

"Yukirin... where are you? You said that you'll come back soon~"

Yukirin chuckled when she heard those cute voices from Mayu. "I'm on my way. Just wait for me, okay?"

"Okay~ See you later, honey."

Mayu ended the call.

"So..... she's Watanabe." Rena still leaned her body on the wall.

"Yeah.... why? Are you jealous?" She smirked.

Rena licked her lollipop. "No. I'm just feel pity for her. She may will end up like me too... broken into the pieces. Oh, I forgot about Sae..... she'll kill you for me." Rena smirked.

Yuki glared at Rena. She pinned Rena to the wall again. "Rena, you know? The way you licking your damn lollipop always make me turned on. I can't wait myself to taste your licks too, your tongue seems more trained well than the last time we did it."

Rena pushed Yuki. She slapped Yuki. Rena's tears fell. "Y-you.... had never changed.... always like this..... y-you.... you never respect other people's feelings!!"

Yuki held her red cheek. She looked at Rena, she can't believe that Rena cried in front of her. I guess.... I've hurt her too much. Yuki turned away and opened the door. "You can go home now. Don't forget to send the email about your plan to me."

Rena grabbed her laptop and carried her bag quickly, she went out from Yuki's apartment. But, she stopped for a while. "I didn't love you anymore nor hate you. If you stop being a such fucking player, we can be friends again."

Rena walked and left Yuki alone.

=========================== **** =========================

= Takamina Team : Diversion (2) =

"Mayu.. is there anything else that you got? We need to find the thieves as fast as we can. This morning...the owner of the pawnshop called me again. He was angry at me!" Takamina hit her desk. "I'm a sergeant... how can he talked to in informal way like that? Akh!! Where's my honor go?!"

Mayu show a picture to us. "This. I got this when I took a walk yesterday."

Yuki almost spouted her tea from her mouth. "Yesterday?" She glared at the picture, she saw Mayu and another girl took a selca. Yuki tried hard to hold her anger.

"Yeah.. I thought you'll come back in the morning, but you're late!" She pouted. "I didn't have anything to do. I got bored, so.. I went to the convenience store to buy some snacks." She grinned. "And then... I accidentally met Mariko-sama!! We discussed about this case for some minutes."

Jurina frowned. "Okay, it was nice for you to met her. But... I think she's not related to our case. I don't understand."

"AH!!! I remember!!" Takamina stood up. "Mariko-sama ever talked to me about some amazing robbery cases. She said that before she moved here 4 years ago, she was worked in Hokkaido and-"

"And!!!" Mayu glared at Takamina. "Don't steal my showtime, sergeant."

"Tsk. Go ahead." Takamina sat down again. Jurina chuckled.

Mayu coughed to clear her throat.
"And.... those robbery cases in Hokkaido are similar with our case now... perfect, clean, and no evidence. Based on my great intuition.... they're the same thieves.

Mariko-sama said that she'll give us some information about those cases because 4 years ago....... Mariko-sama almost arrest them."

Yeah... she almost catch us because of the stupid Kojima!!! Kojima betrayed us and make us suffered back then. My team can't wait to take a sweet revenge for both of you. Just wait! Yuki clenched her fist.

"Almost?! What happened?" Takamina can't hold her curiosity.

Mayu sighed. "She didn't tell me about why she failed. She didn't want to tell me about it." Mayu glanced at Yuki who still stared at the picture. Why she looks so angry? "Because of personal matter..... I guess."

Jurina back to her chair. "So.... if we can't catch them in proper way, let's find another way."

Takamina back to her desk too. "Let's meet Mariko as soon as possible... But, is it okay to involve her? I mean... she has resigned."

"She's okay. She's the one who offered me some help." Mayu stood up and walked closer to Yuki who still sat on her own chair. She hugged Yuki's shoulder from behind.
"After we get enough information from Mariko, we just need to wait until those thieves strikes again. We don't need to catch them right away, we can follow them until we know their nest. It's not that hard to catch them anymore if we know where they're hiding. Am I right, Yuki?"

Yuki pulled Mayu into her hug, she smiled. "Yes, you're right.. my smart girlfriend." She ruffled Mayu's hair. Maeda is right. Mayu is too dangerous for us... she's worthy to be killed.

Takamina rolled her eyes. "Hey! Stop your lovey-dovey here and get a room. How many times I need to tell you that-" She heard her phone rang. She received a message.

------------------------------------------------
Bakamina.... are you busy right now?
Let's have lunch together.
ummm..... at xxx restaurant?

------------------------------------------------

Takamina didn't need to see who was the sender, there was only one person who called her like that. Acchan.

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To : Maeda

No, I'm not too busy.
Okay, I will come.
Ano... I still wear my uniform, is it okay for you?

------------------------------------------------
From : Maeda

What unifrom? Are you a factory worker or something? ∑(;°Д°)
Hahaha. I'm joking.... It's okay, I'm fine with it. ^^

------------------------------------------------

Takamina relieved. She thought that Maeda will refuse it. "Guys. I want to have lunch, please backup my phone." She went out.

Yuki released the hug. "Mayu, can I borrow your PC for a while? I need to make a report but my computer seems broken." Yuki pointed at her PC. "I can't turn it on since half hour ago."

Mayu pressed the power button over and over again, but the computer always turned off by itself again. "Sorry... I have something to do too." She looked at Jurina. "Jurina, can she borrow your PC?"

"Okay.. can you finish it today?"

Yuki nodded. "Yes, don't worry."

"I will find someone to repair your computer." Mayu smiled.

"Thank you." Yuki took a USB Flash Drive from her bag. I hope it'll works, Rena.

*3 Hours Later*

Jurina looked at Takamina who looks desperate. "What happened to you? Is there something wrong with your lunch?"

Takamina sighed, she put her head on her desk. "Yeahh..."

======================== **** =======================

= The Old Friend : Betrayer (2) =

"Yukirin~ I'm hungry. Let's buy something." Mayu patted Yuki's arm. "Wake up, please."

Yuki opened her eyes slowly. She yawned while she looked at the clock. "Mayu... it's midnight. Just go back to sleep, we will buy it in the morning." Yuki grabbed a bolster and hugged it. She closed her eyes again.

"Mou... I'm really hungry." Mayu patted Yuki's arm harder.

Urgh! Can I just kill her now? So annoying! I'm tired.. I need some rest. Yuki kept closing her eyes.

Mayu pouted. "Okay. I'll go alone." She pecked Yuki's cheek. "Sorry for bothering you." She woke up and went out from the bedroom.

Yuki opened her eyes. She woke up and then she grabbed a jacket quickly. I can't let her walk alone in the dark like this. She walked out from their bedroom.

Yuki saw Mayu was about to open the door. She walked towards Mayu and then she covered Mayu's body with the jacket. She back-hugged Mayu.

Mayu shocked. "Y-yuki.."

Yuki put her head on Mayu's shoulder. "How can I let my beautiful girlfriend walk alone in the midnight?"

Mayu blushed.

"Wait a minute, okay? I'll take my car keys." Yuki released the hug. She took her key from her bag. Am I just worrying her?

Yuki took Mayu's hand and squeezed it. "Let's go."

*2 hours later*

They got into the car.

"Ahhhh... I'm so full." Mayu touched her stomach. "Thank you for coming with me."

Yuki used her right hand to caressed Mayu's cheek while another hand kept controling the steering wheel. "It's okay. Stop thank me."

The traffic light turned to red, so Yuki stopped her car.

Mayu held Yuki's hand. "You're a perfect girlfriend for me. I love you so much." Mayu smiled.

Somehow... Yuki paralyzed when she saw Mayu's face.

It was not the first time for Yuki to heard those magic words from Mayu, but this time was different. Yuki can saw the sincere and faith in Mayu's eyes. Mayu said it in mature way, not in childish or cute way as usual.

She is really love me..... This was the first time Yuki felt guilty after she played with someone's heart. Yuki turned her head and drove her car again. There's no way for me to feel pity for her. I had promised to myself to give my whole heart to Sae. I love Sae........ right?

"YUKI STOP!!!!"

Yuki surprised, she braked her car quickly. "Mayu, don't surprise me like that!"

Mayu pointed her finger at a car across the street. Yuki turned her head. She saw 3 men kept punching a woman, afterwards... one of those men kicked the woman's stomach. Those men covered their face with black mask.

Mayu opened ther door and she walked towards them.

Yuki surprised. "Mayu... wait!! It's dangerous!" She took a gun from her secret car-drawers... under her seat. She got out from her car too. "Mayu!!" She run towards Mayu.

"STOP!!" Mayu yelled at those men.

Those men noticed Yuki and Mayu presence, they stopped and turned their head. The woman seems tried to endure her pain. Yuki can't saw the woman face because the light was too dim.

Mayu took out her Police ID Card and show it to them. "We're police."

Mayu was about to take her gun, but one of those man already pointed her gun at Mayu. Yuki can saw a red laser from the man's gun at Mayu's stomach and then moved upwards to Mayu's neck. Mayu stunned.

Yuki shocked. "Hey! Stop and give up!!" She pointed her gun to the man who wanted to shoot Mayu. "If you dare to fired your gun, I swear I'll kill you at that time!"

Yuki realized that she was really afraid to lose Mayu. Wh-what is this? I should be happy if someone else can kill her, it means my job reduced as well.

The taller man whispered something that make the shorter man put his gun down. The taller man lifted her hand and gave Yuki a hand gesture. He want Yuki to walked closer to them.

Mayu looked at Yuki and she shook her head. "Don't!"

Yuki was doubt for a moment, she kept pointing her gun to those men. Mayu took out her gun, but the 3rd man took his gun too and then he fired it at Mayu. Mayu's gun thrown from her hand.

"NO!!!" Yuki screamed.

Mayu lifted both of her hands quickly to her head. "I'm okay... Yuki. They only shoot my gun."

Yuki surprised. H-how??!! Sh*t, they're really skillful.

The 3rd man pointed his gun to a white house behind them. Yuki looked at the house carefully. After the few seconds later, she gasped. Th-they're......

The taller man grabbed the woman's hair and lifted up her head so Yuki can saw her bloody face clearly. The woman already unconscious, but Yuki still can recognized her.

Mayu confused because Yuki put her gun down slowly. "Yuki... what happen- UKKHHH!!" The 3rd man punched Mayu's face and then he did a knee kick to Mayu. Mayu fell, she held her stomach.

"Don't hurt her!!!!" Yuki hugged Mayu.

The 3rd man looks so angry, he pointed his gun at Mayu.

Yuki glared at the 3rd man. "I said DON'T-HURT-HER." Yuki warned him.

The taller man and the shorter man pulled the 3rd man away from Mayu and Yuki. Afterwards, they carried the woman into their car.

They left Mayu and Yuki on the quiet street.

"Y-yuki.... I don't understand.... why-"

"Stop talking. You're hurt."

"Answer me, Yuki..... Do you know them?"

"I SAID STOP TALKING!!!!" Yuki shed her tears. "Don't you know how afraid I am???!!! I thought I will lose you!!!" She hugged Mayu tightly. "Please... don't do any reckless thing like that again..." She stroke Mayu's head. "I love you, Mayuyu."

Mayu surprised. T-this is.... the first time she said it... "I love you too."

===================== NEXT DAY =====================

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From : Maeda

Yuki, we're waiting you. Come here!
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Yuki sighed.

Yuki walked to the bathroom, she knocked the door. "Mayu... you can go to the office first."

Mayu went out from the bathroom, she used a towel to covered her body. "Why?" She pouted.

Yuki pecked Mayu's forehead, and then she hugged her. "I left my laptop in my apartment. I'll come to the office as soon as I can, okay?"

"Okay, don't be late."

Yuki released the hug. "Yup." She walked to the door and then she opened it. "See you later."

"Okay, I love you. Be careful."

Yuki just replied her with a smile and then she went away.

Mayu closed the door, she looks disappointed. She didn't say it again.

=================== TO BE CONTINUED ===================

Sorry for the late update... Lately... I kinda busy with my midterms.  :cry:

Spoiler for next chapter:


Ohh... sorry. This chapter focused to Yuki.  :P
WMatsui and Atsumina will show up in next chapter.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 09, 2013, 08:21:34 AM
@ykariya : Yup... Mayu is a really smart girl. Let's wait until she meet Rena.  :lol:

@fausto : Only Jurina can tease Rena comfortably like that.  :P Sorry, Atsumina only took a tiny part in 6.2. I'll make them longer in chap 7.

@mo-chan : Yuki... I put her almost in whole chapter 6.2, maybe your questions can be included in it too. :p

@edogawa4869 : In this chapter... full about Yuki. Yes, she's a gorgeous player.

@Zita : Hi Zita-san... don't worry. You aren't a horrible person, you can give your comment anytime you feels like to give it.

@gek geki : Thank you for missing my update, but... I'm sorry WMatsui didn't appear in 6.2
Chap 7. I promise.  :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: olive29 on November 09, 2013, 09:12:27 AM
Ehhhhh....Yuki start to fall in love with Mayu??

Yeahhhh....

And the three man who Mayu saw I guess are Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko ganging up on Haruna,right??

And, what happen to Takamina's lunch with Acchan??

I guess Acchan finally know that Takamina is a police, right??

Update soon, please... :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 09, 2013, 09:31:17 AM
Hahaha looks like takamina lunch end up dissaster,for acchan at least.takamina still didn't know who acchan was. Somehow it's funny

Yuki start felt different toward mayu.good
She doubt,hope she realized her feeling fast.so she could choose whether she will protect mayu or not.
I felt scared about mayuki.each chapter make me scared.i feel something bad will happen soon
Just dont hurt rena sama and yuki hime

I wonder if haruna had a deal with mariko on the past?

Yes wmatsui please
So rena dont love yuki anymore
Her future lover is jurina



How about you update this tommorow morning? (what a selfish request)



RENA SAMA IS THE BEST!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: White Hawk on November 09, 2013, 12:02:33 PM
Thanks for the update! :)

Yuko is really mad at Kojima huh? Well, who wouldn't when your lover betrayed you.. >_<
But I got a feeling that Kojima betrayed them to save them? Maybe she fell in love with Mariko then the plan slipped her mouth then Mariko make a plan to catch Maeda's Team using Kojima but Kojima can't let Mariko catch them so she betray Maeda's team to ruin Mariko's plan. LOL! Am I making sense here? And sorry! It's just my imagination XD

LOL! Yuki! She already hurt Rena yet she's still seducing Rena *facepalm*
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I guess.... I've hurt her too much.
Eh! Of course you hurt her too much you baka! How can you realize it just now?
Rena already slapped Yuki, maybe later Sae and Mayu will slap Yuki too? XD

Hmm, what if Mayu already know if Yuki is a spy but she try to make Yuki fall in love with her so she can make Yuki betray her team? Since she's smart. xD
And now Yuki already fall in love with her, but she just doesn't realize it yet XD

Last, I can't wait for your next update~ :D
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 09, 2013, 12:28:12 PM
^
Whitehawk san i though the same about kojiharu ha

Because it just no sense she betray without reason

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: cisda83 on November 09, 2013, 12:34:46 PM
Who is the woman that being beaten up?

Haruna or Mariko?

Who are the ones that beat the woman up?

Was it Atsuko's?

I guess Atsuko now knew that Minami is the police that is chasing her now...?

What happened to Atsumina at lunch?

Why did Haruna betray them?

Is it because Haruna took fancy of Mariko?

What will Yuki do about Mayu?

Would Mayu be able to protect the police system and arrest all the robbers?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 09, 2013, 12:39:34 PM
Ah cotto! Just now i imagining wmatsui is like mr and mrs smith puhahaha!
Rena is jolie and jurina is brad

AWESOME

And i imagine the battle between wmatsui LOl
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 09, 2013, 01:58:21 PM
Yuki why are you suddenly seducing Rena? You player! :thumbdown:

Atsumina's lunch date. I guess Atsuko already knows that Takamina is really a police officer. What will happen to their blooming love?

I feel so sorry for Haruna. Got beaten by Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko. :cry:

But because of that incident Yuki realized she doesn't want Mayu to die. She needs more push to really admit that her true love is Mayu.

Sae is the one who almost killed Mayu right? That girl is too possessive! :smhid
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: chichay12 on November 09, 2013, 03:11:43 PM
i dont know why, but yuki give me chills!! XD

update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Kirozoro on November 09, 2013, 03:22:27 PM
Yuki still fliring with Rena

Yuki scare to lost Mayu... It this mean she love Mayu :?

Ahh.... Mayuki  :wub: :inlove:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 09, 2013, 03:54:48 PM
@olive29 : Hi. :)
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Ehhhhh....Yuki start to fall in love with Mayu??
Wh-why? You didn't like it?

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the three man who Mayu saw I guess are Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko ganging up on Haruna,right??
You perfectly can read my mind.  XD

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And, what happen to Takamina's lunch with Acchan??
I guess Acchan finally know that Takamina is a police, right??
I'll write in in Chap 7.  :)

@gek geki : Woww... geki-san. I'm happy to read all of your comments.  :inlove:
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She doubt,hope she realized her feeling fast.so she could choose whether she will protect mayu or not.
I felt scared about mayuki.each chapter make me scared.i feel something bad will happen soon
Just dont hurt rena sama and yuki hime
Yup, I agree with you, Yuki have to make her decision faster... I mean..... before it becomes too late.

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I wonder if haruna had a deal with mariko on the past?
Hmm... chap 7 or 8? Sorry... I haven't decide about it yet.  :P

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How about you update this tommorow morning? (what a selfish request)
That is a really selfish request.  :lol:
Usually... I can write 1 chapter in 2 or 3 days.  :P

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Whitehawk san i though the same about kojiharu ha
Because it just no sense she betray without reason
There's a reason. Don't worry...  ;)

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Ah cotto! Just now i imagining wmatsui is like mr and mrs smith puhahaha!
Rena is jolie and jurina is brad
AWESOME
And i imagine the battle between wmatsui LOl
Umm... Geki-san, I already imagined it since I wrote the prologue.
It's like: they'll pointed their gun at each other head.... on the bed... early in the morning. :lol:
The police and the thieves will be hard to be live together... human nature.  XD

@White Hawk :
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But I got a feeling that Kojima betrayed them to save them?
You have a good eye.  XD
Let's see how it'll turns out.

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Rena already slapped Yuki, maybe later Sae and Mayu will slap Yuki too? XD
I will REALLY think about it. Thanks for your idea.  :lol:

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Hmm, what if Mayu already know if Yuki is a spy but she try to make Yuki fall in love with her so she can make Yuki betray her team? Since she's smart. xD
Mayu didn't know about it, not yet. As I wrote in my spoiler.. 'the truth' in chap. 7

Thanks for your comment.  :wub:

@cisda83 :
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Who is the woman that being beaten up?
Haruna or Mariko?
What a great question.  XD
At first, I was hesitant about it too.. But after the whole 6.2 finished, I decided to choose it: She's Kojima.

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Who are the ones that beat the woman up?
Was it Atsuko's?
Umm... The shorter girl Yuko ; The taller girl: Sayaka ; The 3rd man: Sae.  :)

Your other questions will be answered soon.  :D

@Konoe :
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Yuki why are you suddenly seducing Rena? You player! :thumbdown:
Later, I will make Yuki's image become: She WAS a player.  :lol:

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I feel so sorry for Haruna. Got beaten by Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko. :cry:
But because of that incident Yuki realized she doesn't want Mayu to die. She needs more push to really admit that her true love is Mayu.
Yup, everything that happened to us will be caused a good impact and a bad impact.
bad impact for Haruna, but good impact for MaYuki.

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Sae is the one who almost killed Mayu right? That girl is too possessive! :smhid
Sae is a possessive girl, I agree with you.
But... If I'm a Sae, I'll totally jealous too. I mean.... How can my girlfriend hugged another girl right in front of me?! My girlfriend even cried for her too!
 :P

@Chichay12 :
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i dont know why, but yuki give me chills!! XD
*cough* I guess... I know what's you mean. *cough*
Yuki....  :inlove:

@Kirozoro :
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Yuki still fliring with Rena
Flirting without love..
Jesus, she's a player. She'll flirting with anyone who get her interest.  :lol:

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Yuki scare to lost Mayu... It this mean she love Mayu :?
Yuki still doubt about it.

Thank you all.
 :nya:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Zita on November 09, 2013, 05:54:29 PM
I just discovered awful/good thing I became addicted on yours stories. :O

 :panic: I have so many questions. But I will wait for my answers in your story.
I want to be suprised. :grin:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 09, 2013, 10:24:54 PM
eeeeeh????? wait a second...
what happen with this man?? who they are?
and what about the lunch atsuko get angry or something did she know now that minami is cop?? i guess...
hurry up we need the next chapter ^_^  :otomerika: :cow:
awesome!!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 10, 2013, 04:32:26 AM
And i loved how you answer my question puhahahahahaha

Somehow think about wmatsui make me smile and happy,make me forgot how depressed when i think about my dear mayuki
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: ayudewi6 on November 10, 2013, 05:31:39 AM
Ouh..what happen with atsumina? :( and I hope haruna would be fine, also I want to know what her reason so she should betray the group :? but the most important I hope there a lot of scene for atsumina and wmatsui :byebye:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: kurogumi on November 10, 2013, 03:52:59 PM
okay now i'm really afraid  :cry:
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atsumina

LOL!!  :rofl: i'm pretty sure their lunch become the shocking lunch ever,especially for acchan! LOL, just imagining acchan shock face after seeing takamina with her police uniform~  :doh: , baka...takamina was really baka...bakamina...you let your enemy know your identity  :cathappy: but it's cute~  :cathappy:
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yukirena

player!! yuki was a player!!,but i relieved that rena don't loved her anymore..it's just yuki is still had her seducing aura...but no love here...rena love start to blossom with officer jurina yeah!!  :cow:
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mayuki

Let's pray...putri-san won't hurt this pairing badly...GOD PLEASE! save them from putri LOL just kidding
but seriously...are they fine or...on the way to..*cough*death*cough*

it's always sweet seeing a players start to fall in love
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saeyuki

sae definitely mad at yuki ,she will questioned yuki about why she defend mayu from her when there's a chance too killed her...that was also yuki problem too meh she will answer this but she will realized too her feeling toward mayu's...hope she's not stubborn enough too deny it,because like the author said, 'before it's too late'
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wmatsui

you tease me nee..putri-san  8)
i wait and wait wmatsui sweet moment
their moment always make me laugh LOL jurina is kinda stupid but adorable but not stupid as takamina,she just so puppy alike

aaah souka...you think about mr and mrs smith  :yep:
then it will be mr and mrs matsui LOL  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
battle in a house....pointed gun...kissed...and be wmatsui finally!!!   :yep:
maybe jurina not so georgeous as yuki,but jurina presence could make rena calm...and it was all rena needed,The feeling can not be compared to money... :theking
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am i missing some part??

bleh~  :P too much commenting...just shut this though and waiting for the next update



thank for the update

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 10, 2013, 06:08:49 PM

 Damn!! Why Sae left her girlfriend with me?! Doesn't she know that her girlfriend is totally dangerous and..... seductive?


I agree with u Rena... Yuki is god damn seductive player...  :on slopkiss:

what happen with Takamina??

Is she did something stupid again???  :smhid

so next chapter will reveal the truth???

can't wait for that...

good job...  :twothumbs

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Terragen on November 11, 2013, 04:43:57 AM
after acchan seeing takamina uniform
i think she will ask yuki the name all of takamina team member included jurina
that maybe how they know each other...
rena will be shocking if that really happen,she start liking jurina and it will end soon
but they still had a date in the weekend
yuki start liking mayu too,but isn't it a it weird?
so suddenly and what the different between mayu ,sae and rena that could make yuki fall??
if it about face and brain,rena has it.yuki already experience dating with these kind people
and about caring and lovely act,sae already give it to yuki too~
mayu....what she had?
let's see....
ummm...
cute face~
geogeous aura~
smart brain~
spoiled brat kids~ (this make yuki headache)
kind heart~ (she in good side,and she had family)
sexy~ (oww)
hot~ (ja)
what so special from her?
compared from jurina who could make rena calm,i never knew what mayu bring to yuki's life?
and takamina could make acchan smile and laugh.
did yuki ever enjoyed her time with mayu?
i hope mayu could change yuki life from bad to be good person...
oh gott! Ich bete, dass sie glücklich sind
teil sieben....sieben sieben i can't wait sieben
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Terragen on November 11, 2013, 05:49:38 AM
(http://31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9qnveQkvg1rwayvco1_500.gif)

yeah

update part 7
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: cisda83 on November 11, 2013, 06:27:28 AM
Thank you for answering my questions...

As I thought... the men that beat Haruna up would be Atsuko's team members...

I guess Sae was very angry with Yuki's reaction over Mayu's safety

What's going to happen next?

Thank you ...

Can't wait  to see the next chapter

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 11, 2013, 11:54:35 AM
Ummm.... guys... I will answer your replies later. Sorry.  :bow:

But somehow..... I wanna 'tease' you about my chapter. :P

A (very) little preview for my WMatsui..... to convince you guys.... that I'm really in the middle of it now... re-read it over and over again.  :lol:
I will post it tomorrow.  :)

(http://25.media.tumblr.com/37783bf231e20fc9b6f79e9cd880d460/tumblr_mw3hwctLiG1rz4l0zo1_r1_400.png)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 11, 2013, 12:01:09 PM
WHAT THE?! :mon blood:

YOU ARE SO MEAN!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 11, 2013, 12:05:01 PM
I ALREADY EXPLODED READING THAT!!!!!!
aHHHHHHHHH U ARE SO MEAN  :cry: :cry:
BUT DBHWHDJBEJWDWBDWBDWDEJ  :cathappy:
I THINK IT WILL BE WONDERFUL SO I FORGIVE YOU!  :heart: :heart: :heart:

*can't wait can't wait*!!!!!


PS: "tomorrow! is like in 7 hours more.. isn't it? 8DDDDDDDDDD
XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 11, 2013, 12:41:50 PM
WOW WOW WOW IT WAS GOOD BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD BE CAREFUL,YOU KNOW,THE GOLDEN RULE? JURINA IS STILL UNDERAGE,I STILL DON'T KNOW THE FULL STORY BUT IF MY THOUGH IS RIGHT THEN TRY TO MINIMIZE OR MAKE SOME OTHER NAH YOU KNOW...ASK TEEDEE SAN MY ANIKI PUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 11, 2013, 12:46:01 PM
TOMORROW, THEN AT 00:00 O'CLOCK YOU MUST UPDATE IT, BUT IT'S ALREADY MORNING IN MY COUNTRY
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 11, 2013, 12:48:48 PM
@koneki and @konoe : What? I just want you to know that I'm really working on it.  :whistle:

7 hours? 00:00 o'clock???  :mon huh:
No. I think.... 24 hours more...  :mon evillaff:

@gek geki : Don't worry... I will make it just like chap 4. I won't post their full version here.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 11, 2013, 01:00:54 PM
How can I not say that you are mean if you showed a cut version of a sexy scene?!

THE VERY DELICIOUS PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Release that ASAP! Do not make us wait a day!

I almost forgot. Only Wmatsui? No Mayuki?
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 11, 2013, 01:07:44 PM
no!! just FINISH IT! I WONT LET YOU SLEEP THAT EASILY HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 11, 2013, 01:13:44 PM
YEAAAAAAAH!!
FINISH IT!!!! NOW! (?
*desperate* 
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: White Hawk on November 11, 2013, 04:12:30 PM
Ehh? What? NO!! Don't give teaser like that!! You're evil! LOL Joking XD
Please, update soon~!  :cry: :D :lol:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 11, 2013, 05:48:03 PM
God!!!

you're evil...  :angry:

how could u tease us like that????  :scolding:

please update...............  :pleeease:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Zita on November 11, 2013, 07:24:43 PM
You should post it right now. :shifty: :on hypto:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 12, 2013, 12:08:27 PM
AND THE CONTI? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)

PLEASE (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)
(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)

I need it (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pleeease.gif)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 12, 2013, 12:19:05 PM
You dug your own grave with your tease. :lol:

People are getting impatient. Where are you~? :shifty:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 12, 2013, 12:38:59 PM
Yeah.... Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty: Where are you~? :shifty:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 12, 2013, 01:09:43 PM
isn't it already the time you fly in this place? and put that damn good scene here or there~

should be around 8 now at your place
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 12, 2013, 01:36:23 PM
Hontou ni gomenasai.  :kneelbow:

I fell asleep last night with 'that scene' in my laptop screen and end up with only added 2 sentences in this chapter.  :on cloudeye:

Now.. I just arrived at home... I really had a hard day in my office today. Too many deadline, I even can't read any fanfic today.  :mon hanky:

I promise to finish it and my 2 shots today and when you wake up tomorrow.... it's already posted.  :mon whimper:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 12, 2013, 01:53:21 PM
Now I'm feeling guilty. :(

Take your time. Have a good rest first. I can still wait. :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 12, 2013, 02:06:53 PM
aww putri-san take your time then~

have a good rest and eat properly but then when you had a time update this ok
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: Terragen on November 12, 2013, 02:21:24 PM
un take your time~
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
Post by: chiqinna on November 13, 2013, 02:57:15 PM
wew~ wew~ WEW~ what happen to Atsumina 'date' lunch?  :lol:

So...Acchan saw Takamina with her police uniform... curious what happen... what will Acchan feel?

and Yuki started to care for Mayu~  :heart: :yep:

dat YukiRena moments!

and great update Putri-san!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: Koneki on November 15, 2013, 06:36:36 AM
GOD THIS IS TOO DAMN GOOD!!!!!  :drool: :drool:
And OMG.. THAT WMATSUI SCENE .. I enjoyed every word!!!!!  :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:     :drool:

I can see a collaboration between the 2 teams in the near future
To prove jurina is innocent
To find who killed mariko
because wmatsui, atsumina, and mayuki
and jassd
I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you!  :heart: and sorry again for you know what!  :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: anakpanti on November 15, 2013, 07:24:55 AM
I wanna reply all of your comments.
I appreciate it so much.  XD

@Zita :
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I just discovered awful/good thing I became addicted on yours stories.
What did you find?

@mikaellitsa :
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eeeeeh????? wait a second...
what happen with this man?? who they are?
and what about the lunch atsuko get angry or something did she know now that minami is cop?? i guess...
Taller man is Sayaka ; shorter man is Yuko ; 3rd man is Sae.
About Atsumina... please wait for a little longer. Chap 8  ;)

@gek geki :
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Somehow think about wmatsui make me smile and happy,make me forgot how depressed when i think about my dear mayuki
Well... in chap 7, wmatsui relationship still works well. Let's see what will happen to them later.  :P

@ayudewi6 : In chap 7, I wrote about Haruna's reason but not too detail. I will make the detail later, in flashback chapter.
I'm sorry, Atsumina will appear in chap 8.

@kurogumi : Kuro-san. Wow.. you analyze my fanfic really well.
Atsumina --> Their shocking lunch will be explained in chap 8. :p
YukiRena --> Yuki is a really hot player!!  XD Don't you think so? Even the icy Rena could turned on already.  :lol:
MaYuki --> Well.... thanks to you, you asked me to read Seigus-san angsty fanfic. I got so many ideas from his/her fanfic.  :lol:
SaeYuki --> Opss, Yuki still denying it in chap 7.
WMatsui --> My fav pairing. Please wait 'Mr. and Mrs. Matsui' sweet/dangerous moment.  :lol:

@edogawa4869 : Yes, chap 7 is reveal the truth, but only in Maeda Team side. Takamina will get a huge shock in chap 8.  :P

@Terragen :
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so suddenly and what the different between mayu ,sae and rena that could make yuki fall??
I will write about it later... we still have 3 chapters left.  :P
Can I use your reasons why Yuki fell for Mayu? I wanna put it on my fanfic too.  XD

@cisda83 : Sae is really angry.. but she isn't that barbaric. in chap 7.. she gave a warn to Yuki.

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@koneki : I relieved that you enjoyed chap 7. I mean... after I got a heart attack from you. :sweat:
 :lol: kidding. I'm okay, no need to say sorry again.  :P

You're right! A collaboration. But it isn't easy to put the police and the thieves in the same 'cage'... they'll keep trying to crush each other.  :lol:
I wonder about Takamina Team first impression when they saw their girlfriend 'play' with the gun, bomb, and etc.  :lol:

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Hi readers!! About the tiny treaser for chap 7, I'm sorry. I promise that I won't do that again. I almost get stabbed by my reades.  :on speedy:
 :lol:
Enjoy.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: White Hawk on November 15, 2013, 08:07:56 AM
Thanks for the update~!

Ehh? Makoto!! -Who is Makoto? xD- How dare you to betray Maeda's team!! :angry:

Mariko is dead :O
Now Maeda's and Taka's team are searching for the killer, right?
Maybe they'll meet and then work together XD

And WMatsui moments!!! I really like it :twothumbs

Can't wait for your next update :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: chiqinna on November 15, 2013, 08:10:55 AM
really really enjoy reading this!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
LOL Rena thought Jurina was a singer all this time.. poor her... and Acchan too...
and wmatsui moments there~  :wub: :wub: :wub:
and wonder if...Jurina's bracelet was there in mariko's house...probably...Rena? or Geki?
or Jurina visited Mariko before Mariko was dead?
wow~ this is getting interesting!  :D :D :D
will they killed each other next chap?  :twisted:
oh...takamina still doesn't know that Acchan is that thief.. and so Mayu...
I think it will be messed...Maeda team vs. Takahashi team...
great update as always!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: FairyNyan on November 15, 2013, 09:04:40 AM
OMG. The Wmatsui Scene is so  :panic:  :bleed eyes: . now wait for Atsumina scene (?)  :lol:

takamina team vs maeda team . it will fun..

please update asap  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: Konoe on November 15, 2013, 09:38:04 AM
I thought Sae stole Yuki from Rena but it turns out Yuki cheated Sae with Rena!

On The Weekend.  :on bleed:

Rena... It must have hurt knowing the one you love is an enemy. Same with Acchan. :cry:

What?! Jurina is suspected?! You have to find a way to make her innocent! But how did her bracelet ended up in there?


I was wondering. Will Atsumina get a smut in the future? :D




Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: gek geki on November 15, 2013, 12:45:29 PM
Takamina team vs maeda team

But looks like without jurina on takamina side,

since she's on the jail??

But wait did she want go to jail when she know she's not the murder?

Ow sweet hot wmatsui! I admit it was so good!

Rena must be sad.how she face jurina?

But looks like jurina in danger too,you know someone tried to take the blame on her

Rena,jurina need you!


I start to think a little bit crazy now

What if...

What if...

What if mayu was the real evil here,like she was the daughter of yakuza or spy from another country 'THE HECK!!!' Lol



Next update



Ugyaaaaaa~
 




Oh i forgot! Yuki! Woaah cheater!

She dating sae but she had an affairs with rena,yet now she with mayu!

It prove that she not love sae and didn't know the meaning of love


But sae said she start loving mayu..






Part 8,9,10

I amazed how you make it! 10 part and it already planed well!

The scene on the prologue is in this part 7! Wow i though it will be on the last part!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: anakpanti on November 15, 2013, 02:18:27 PM
@White Hawk :
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Ehh? Makoto!! -Who is Makoto? xD- How dare you to betray Maeda's team!! :angry:
Umm... I already wrote a tiny part about him (in end the end of chap 4). He's Acchan and Yuki old friend.
He was the one who 'gave' those 7 men to Acchan.

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Mariko is dead :O
Now Maeda's and Taka's team are searching for the killer, right?
Maybe they'll meet and then work together XD
Maeda Team already knew the murderer (from CCTV), but it seems Taka team didn't know about it yet.

@chiqinna :
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and wonder if...Jurina's bracelet was there in mariko's house...probably...Rena? or Geki?
or Jurina visited Mariko before Mariko was dead?
The murderer put it into Mariko house.
I'll write about it in chap 8.

@FairyNyan :
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OMG. The Wmatsui Scene is so  :panic:  :bleed eyes: . now wait for Atsumina scene (?)  :lol:
Yes, of course. Just wait. XD

@konoe :
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I thought Sae stole Yuki from Rena but it turns out Yuki cheated Sae with Rena!
We can't trust Yuki anymore.. she's a bad player.  :P

You're wondering about Atsumina? Yes, it will.  XD

@gek geki : G-geki san.. this is the longest comment that you ever made for me (ignoring about the 'enter'). I got teary.  :cry:
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But looks like without jurina on takamina side,
since she's on the jail??
But wait did she want go to jail when she know she's not the murder?
Don't worry... we have Yuko.. the 'unlocker'.  :lol:

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Rena must be sad. how she face jurina?
Simple... maybe she will smack Jurina's head and then she'll pointed her gun onto Jurina's neck, afterwards she'll say: "Why don't you tell me about your job before you asked me out?!!"  :lol:

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What if mayu was the real evil here,like she was the daughter of yakuza or spy from another country 'THE HECK!!!'
:lol: Don't worry, I won't make my story become too complicated like that.  :)

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Part 8,9,10
I amazed how you make it! 10 part and it already planed well!
Thank you.  ;)
But actually... not really well. I just made the main point for each chapter after I wrote the prologue. :lol:

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The scene on the prologue is in this part 7! Wow i though it will be on the last part!
Umm... that's not my climax.  :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: mo-chan on November 15, 2013, 03:10:29 PM
I'm gonna sit wait here for the next update  (._.)
I don't wanna think too much  (-__-)
this fic is playing with my emotions first I was happy my WMatsui lovely dovey ( to not say something else :v ) scenes
things doesn't go well for my Mayuki from the first and now it is my WMatsui oooh my heart!!! T^T
about Mayuki I know that Mayu is thinking that it's something up with Yuki cause Mayu asked Yuki if she knows those Men
well *sigh* I said that I won't say anything *face palm*
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: Kirozoro on November 15, 2013, 04:18:01 PM
Finally Wmatsui has come together

Who Yuki truely love, Mayu or Sae

The story was so sad, when everyone in Maeda team fall in love with their enemy

I wonder how they foing to wirk this out

Plwase continue update :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 15, 2013, 06:16:49 PM
yeeeaaahhh... update...  XD

it's really the truth u had revealed here... :thumbsup

Sae is already know that Yuki start to falling in love to Mayu...  :cry:

so it's going to be my last SaeYuki moment???  :mon hanky:

but i'm glad that Wmatsui finally together...  :wub:

can't wait for the truth from Takamina team side...

keep going.... :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: cisda83 on November 16, 2013, 01:49:02 AM
Now Atsuko and Rena are in trouble over thier feeling for Minami and Jurina

What would they do to help Jurina?

Would they confess to thier crimes?

What would Yuki do about her feeling?

Would Yuki choose sae or Mayu?

If Yuki really love sae, she would not have cheated on her?

Poor Haruna.. She did not get her happy ending with Mariko

Who was the one that killed Mariko?

What a going to happen next?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: Terragen on November 16, 2013, 02:12:01 AM
How could you!  :angry:

kill mariko! GOD!!  :cry:

ah whatever  :grin:



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@gek geki : G-geki san.. this is the longest comment that you ever made for me (ignoring about the 'enter'). I got teary.  :cry:
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But looks like without jurina on takamina side,
since she's on the jail??
But wait did she want go to jail when she know she's not the murder?
Don't worry... we have Yuko.. the 'unlocker'.  :lol:

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Rena must be sad. how she face jurina?
Simple... maybe she will smack Jurina's head and then she'll pointed her gun onto Jurina's neck, afterwards she'll say: "Why don't you tell me about your job before you asked me out?!!"  :lol:





EHHH!!?? Really!!!??

i mean, yuko will do it?? why?? why maeda team wanna help jurina? she's nothing to do with them? if jurina keep on jail let's just keep her on jail  :hip smile:
 or maybe it's rena request??? aww  :wub: :wub: :wub:

hahhaha i laugh hard when you said rena will smack her if she face jurina  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

if maeda team really wanna released jurina from jail. is that mean jurina will be their new teammate?? oh how cool if that happen!! wmatsui combo!!  :drool: :drool:



about yuki,sae and mayu it's complicated right??
being with sae is like adventurous, your life is uncertain and always in danger (based on their job), full of tension,and sometime is stressing but fun at the same time, but sometime is boring too, that why maybe yuki cheating with rena

and being with mayu,is like adventurous too,but she also give you what is the normal life like?so peaceful,happy,innocent, and relax...no worried like a perfect couple do.
sometimes you found it's annoyed when she want unreasonable requests like wanting eat on midnight like the last time hahhaa,but you helplessly reject it  :cathappy:
it make you want protect this cute mayu aww :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:
being with her maybe give you a chance to dream having a family,the real family...and better future...ah sweet

that just my opinion


atsumina LOL i start imagine their funny moment hahaha  can't wait to see their moment  XD
atsumina is the funniest pair in this fic
acchan who too much serious person becoming like stupid when it comes about takamina hahahaha



 :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaah i love this fic sooooo much!!!  :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: gek geki on November 16, 2013, 06:03:54 AM
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@gek geki : G-geki san.. this is the longest comment that you ever made for me (ignoring about the 'enter'). I got teary.  :cry:
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But looks like without jurina on takamina side,
since she's on the jail??
But wait did she want go to jail when she know she's not the murder?
Don't worry... we have Yuko.. the 'unlocker'.  :lol:


EHHH!!?? Really!!!??





UHH YOU KNOW IT SHOULD BE ME WHO SAID EEEEEEHHH!!!!????? REALLLLY!!!!!!!?????
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: AryaMachdi on November 16, 2013, 10:24:38 AM
It seems that you updated, with the WMatsui moment written... It was really good! :D

I'm sorry if I can't help you with it. I'm a bad person, aren't I? :cry:

It was a fun chapter, I love how things are slowly building up~ Can't wait for the next update! :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: anakpanti on November 16, 2013, 10:34:30 AM
Guys.... I'm sorry... I will re-post chap 7 later.
I think I must learn more about Jurina fanfic in this forum.  :P

Thank you for your understanding.

Ohh... chap 8, I already finished half of it. Maybe I can upload it tomorrow (or today). :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: mo-chan on November 16, 2013, 10:45:13 AM
I can't wait to read it!! *-*
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: anakpanti on November 16, 2013, 10:53:16 AM
Re-Post.  :P

I give my huge thanks for one of my favorite author : kawaiiidolworld
You helped me so much with WMatsui scene. I love it. >.<
I hope you wanna help me again next time. :bow:

Hi my lovely reader! :)
I’m so glad that you still wait my update patiently. :’)

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PART 7

= Maeda Team =

"What you’ve done, Yuki?!!" Yuko grabbed Yuki’s collar. "Do you planned to betray us?!! Huh?!" She pulled Yuki’s collar. "Do you want to end up like her?" Yuki pointed at a girl who tied on the chair.

Yuki looked at her. Her face was covered by blood and her body bruised too… she looked messed up. They keep beating her since last night.

The girl smirked. “Hh-how…. are you….. Yu-Yuki?” She coughed and spitted out the blood from her mouth.

Sae punched her face twice. “You didn’t have any permission to talk. Shut up or…” Sae took an iron stick, “you’ll taste this.”

Yuko let go of Yuki’s collar and looked at Sae. “Stop it, Sae!”

Sae glared at Yuko. “Why?! Do you still love her?” She scoffed.

Yuko walked closer to the girl, she grabbed her hair harshly and looked at the girl’s eyes. “I didn’t know her.” Yuko slapped her, she fell onto the floor.

"Don’t waste your time with her." Acchan walked into the room. All of them looked at their leader. "Just put her into a room. Lock her inside." Acchan walked closer to Haruna who lied weakly on the floor. "We will ‘take care’ of you later, Kojima. Save your breath, I don’t want you die so easily."

Sayaka and Sae carried Haruna away from that room.

Acchan turned her head, she looked at Yuki. “I trust you.”

Yuki looked at the ground. “I know.”

"Don’t fail me."

"I won’t disappoint you."

Acchan hugged Yuki. “Good. I’m afraid to lose my friend again.” She let go of her arms. “I have something to talk. Come to my house this weekend and bring all of your teammate’s data.” Acchan walked away.

Yuki stunned. D-did she want to-

Yuko sat on a chair. “What happened last night?”

"Nothing." Yuki looked away.

"You protected her!!" Yuko hit the desk.

"I’m not protecting her. I…." Yuki stopped for a while. "I just want her to die in a proper time. Can you imagine if we really kill her last night? The police will suspect me… and I won’t be able to work there anymore."

"You don’t need to work there anymore. I will talk to Maeda about this so you can simply kill her."

"We still need her to work there for a little longer." Rena entered the room and she sat in front of her computer. "I have a plan. And if it works… No one from us need to become a spy anymore… We can track the police’s activities from here." Rena pointed at her laptop.

Yuko laughed. “Why are you so damn smart??”

"We’ve done with her. Yuko, here’s the key." Sayaka threw a key to Yuko. "Don’t let her run away again."

Yuki looked at her girlfriend. “Sae…..”

"……"

Rena, Yuko, and Sayaka left the room quickly. They know that both of them need a private talk.

"Sae, I’m sorry about last night.. I didn’t mean to hurt you."

"Yuki…. are you tired of me? I guess… you already bored at me."

"No, I’m not."

"Since a long time ago… I already knew who you are and what you did behind me, but I kept trying to trust you. I always forgive you… even after you………….. having an affair with Rena."

"Sae.. I-" H-how could she know about me and Rena? S-since when sh-

"3 years. Why do you still can’t give your heart only to me?
And now… you’re flirting another girl again. I think, I have to preparing my heart since now… I hope my heart strong enough to keep loving you. I want to love you forever.”

"I don’t like her! She’s our enemy… impossible." She denied it.

"I know you better than anyone here, Yuki. You started to love her."

"….."

"You made me and Rena have a bad relationship. Although I knew that you’re the first one who approached her, I keep standing beside you." Sae sighed and then she hugged Yuki.
"I can’t hold my anger any longer, Yuki. Sorry, I have to say this… stay away from that girl or I’ll lay my hand on her."

"I don’t love her!!" Yuki really felt bad about this, she realized that she hurting Sae many times.

"I can’t let you be with another person who supposed to be our enemy. I don’t want you become a betrayer like Kojima… If you do that, Acchan and Yuko will surely try to haunting and kill both of you.
And if that’s really happen… I will-“

Yuki pressed her lips on to Sae’s lips. Just a short kiss, but it was already enough to make Sae calm down. “I won’t betray my team. This team is my family and my life.”

===================== 3 Days Later =====================

= Maeda Team : Strike Again =

Acchan peeked from the window. Sh*t!! Why she’s here?! ”Everyone hurry up!!” She called her members. “2 AM, we need to go now!!!” Acchan looked slightly a bit panicked.

Rena still sat calmly in front of her laptop. “I’ve told you before, It’ll be hard for us to rob this place in a short time. My calculation is never wrong.”

Acchan hit the table, “I’ve added 7 people!!! How the fuck this is still impossible for us?!” She glared at Rena.

Rena licked her lollipop. “Acchan… we rob a bank!! We can’t simply get out in 20 minutes as usual!!
This place is more bigger than the pawn shop. The system security in this place is more complicated too.”

Rena pointed at Yuko, “Look at her, even an energic girl like her looks totally tired. We only have one ‘unlocker’!! How can you only put too much pressure to her? You’re too forcing our team.
Listen.. we planned to do this in next week. We need more time to explore this place, but you’re totally reckless.. demand your team to do it tonight. What happened with you??”

Acchan shook her head, “No!! I’ve calculated this place accurately. I even sent Sae to this place twice.” There must be something wrong. How can the police arrived at this place just in 10 minutes after we arrived?! Impossible. Someone leaked this information to the police.

Rena smirked. “I know what you’re thinking, Acchan. There’s someone behind this.”

"Hey, Maeda!! What do we gonna do now?! The police already surrounded this place."

"Don’t worry Sayaka, we already through this for years. I know her strategy." She smirked. She’s a fool sergeant. She turned her head, “Yuko!!”

"Yes, Maeda!!"

"Put a bomb on that door. We gonna blow it up when the police reach this room." Maeda pointed a door in front of them.

Yuko did it as Maeda said.

"Rena, are you sure that you already sabotaged all CCTV cameras in this building?"

That girl, who called as Rena put down her glasses. “Are you doubting me? Of course I’ve done it. I’ve finished it about 10 minutes ago.” She put her lollipop into her mouth.

"Geez, Why don’t you tell us?! We can bring this money before the police came here. Urgh." A girl with tomboyish look seem annoyed.

"I said… don’t worry. Sae and Sayaka, both of you… bring this money out. I already prepared an ambulance outside this building, ride it." She grabbed a bag and threw it to Sae. "Change your clothes. Ah, the key in that bag too."

Sae and Sayaka nodded their head, they carried 4 huge bag and walk from another door.

"Done!"

"Great job, Yuko. Now, you can follow Sae and Sayaka too."

"Bu-but.. how about you?" Yuko seems worried.

"Trust me." Maeda nodded to convince Yuko.

Yuko give her a smile, “Okay.” She grabbed a huge bag. “Guys, lets go!!”

The 7 men nodded too, they put their gun back into their pocket and carried the rest of bags on the floor.

After they went out from that room, Maeda looked at Rena, “Hey, are you ready?”

She took her lollipop out from her mouth, “Anytime.” She put it in again.

Maeda smirked, “Bring them in.”

*ON THE OTHER HAND*

"Catch her!! Don’t let her run away again!" Takamina shout it out loud.

All the police obeyed Takamina’s order, they rushed into a building.

"Hey, 5 of you!" She pointed the police who stand behind her. "Follow me. We will get in from another side door." Takamina take her gun.

"Yes, sergeant!!"

I will capture you this time, you can’t running from me forever. She smirked.

*FLASHBACK*

Takamina picked up the phone.

"Hello. Who is this?"

“Me? I’m a good citizen. Tomorrow at 1 AM, the thieves that are you looking for will rob xxx bank. Their leader is a girl, with a black hair.”

"How did yo-" The caller hang up the phone. "Hey!! Hello! Hello."

Sh*t! "Mayu. Jurina. I just received a call from someone. Those ‘perfect’ thieves will be strikes again tomorrow morning. We must do something." Takamina looked around. "Where’s Yuki?"

"She’s buying the lunch for us." Mayu shrugged. "How about the caller?"

Jurina looked hesitant. “Are you sure? Maybe they just wanna take us to their trap. They won’t give up so easily like that. And…. how the caller know a confidential information like that?”

"Jurina is right. We can’t 100% trust the caller."

Takamina clenched her fist. “We must go there and catch them!! I can’t let my honor trampled by anyone again. The owner of the shop kept saying some rough words to me.”

Mayu seemed got an idea. “Umm. We can’t fully believe the information, but at least we can try to go there. We can watch them from afar.
Like I said before, we just need follow them until we know their nest. It’s not that hard to catch them anymore if we know where they’re hiding. No need to catch them tomorrow, wait the proper time.. wait until we know their weakness. We need to make sure that we capture the right robber. We need more evidence.”

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Takamina opened the door. I can’t wait! I have to catch them!! She ran upstairs as fast as she can, 5 police kept following her through the emergency stairs.

Takamina gave a sign to the police to open the door.

*The bomb exploded*

Takamina totally shocked, she trembled. 2 police sprawled on the floor, they covered by blood. T-they using the bomb?!

Takamina carefully touched the police’s neck one by one. “They’re still alive, bring them out of this place and call the ambulance.”

"B-but sergeant, how about you?"

They have a wife and child, I can’t let them die. ”I’m okay. Just go! It’s an order!!”

2 of the police carried their injured friend get out from the building. Only 1 police who accompany her entered the room.

Takamina heard another bomb exploded downstairs. These thieves!!! Fu*k!! She saw someone peeked her from another room, Takamina fired her gun… but it seemed not well targeted.

Takamina saw one of those thieves pointed the gun to her, she hide behind the wall quickly. Lucky for her, she can dodge bullets.

One of the police connected to her handy-talkie. “What happened?! Where are the others?!”

Sergeant, our team can’t entered the building!! All doors are fitted with a sensor that is connected to the bomb, 25 police already injured!! We need more time to call The Special Police Forces to deal with the bomb first.

*BANG! BANG!*

"Arrkkkhh!!! Sergeant they shot my leg!!" The police grimaced in pain.

Takamina felt someone standing behind her she turned her head. She wanna shot the thief who wear the black mask, but the thief kick her gun away.

The 2nd thief came up from behind Takamina and hit the police’s face. The police fainted. “Are all of the police are like him? So fragile, fool, and weak.” The thief smirked.

"No!! You bastard!!" Takamina wanna pick another gun from her pocket but the 1st thief already pointed the gun onto Takamina’s head. Takamina stunned, "Wh-who… are you… people?!" She didn’t expect before that her team can defeated so easily. I should have listened Mayu’s words.

"Who told the police about us?" The 2nd thief walked closer to Takamina.

"Just kill me!! I didn’t wanna tell it to you!" Takamina yelled at them.

The 1st thief punched Takamina’s face and then she kicked her stomach. She fell on the floor. It’s fucking hurt!

The 2nd thief grabbed Takamina’s hair harshly. “Okay… if it’s what you want.” The 2nd thief was about to pull the trigger, but the 1st thief shook her head.

The 1st thief took a white cloth from her pocket and closed Takamina’s nose with it. Takamina fainted just in 10 seconds. “Let’s go! We need to get out now.”

The 2nd thief nodded. They walk away from another door. The 1st thief stopped for a while and looked back, she looked at Takamina who lay on the floor.

"Acchan, hurry up!!"

==================================================

"Where’s Takamina?"

"She’s in the hospital now, she tried to attack the thieves this morning."

"Are you kidding me, Mayu?!" That girl is very angry and then she hit a table. "We told her to keep an eye on them and followed the thieves to their quarters. Not to capture them, not yet!!"

Mayu shook her head, but her expression looks so flat, “No, Matsui-san, I’m not joking.”

"Why she did that?! She ruined our plan!!!"

"This’s not the first day you knew Minami, right?" Mayu grinned.

"SH*T!! She’s so greedy!!!"

Mayu laughed. “Save your anger.” She looked at her watch, “Hey, It’s already 4 PM!” Mayu looks excited. “It’s time to watch my favorite anime. See you tomorrow, Jurina.” Mayu turned back.

"MAYUUU!!!!!!"

But Mayu ignored Jurina and keep went out from that room.

Jurina didn’t believe about what happened now. She grabbed her hair with both of her hands.

H-How can I work with them?! This team is a mistake… I’m in the same team with a manga lover girl and a greedy leader??!!! ”Anyone… please kill me now..” She sighed. “Where’s Yuki? She looks so busy lately.”

========================== **** ==========================

= The Backstabber =

"Call Yuki, now!!!"

Everyone was silent.

Acchan flipped the table. “I said…. CALL HER NOW!!!”

Sae walk closer to Acchan. “Maeda… please calm down. Yuki won’t do that thing to us. There must someone else behind this.”

"Stop fighting. I’m here." A girl entered the room. "I’m not the one who told it to them."

Acchan glared at her members. “Do you guys think that I’m stupid?! I’m not suspecting Yuki for that.” She turned her head to Yuki. “Why don’t you tell us that the police wanna attack us??”

"I didn’t know that they wanna attack us like that. The sergeant made a stupid moves by herself!! She’s a troublemaker." She walked to Sae’s direction and pecked her lips. "Thank you for trusting me."

"Always." Sae smiled.

Rena rolled her eyes. “Duh! Stop your lovey-dovey here, me and Acchan had a bad day this morning. So, don’t forced me to slap both of you.”

Yuko frowned. “So, who told the information to the pol-“

"Maeda!!!" Sayaka ran into their room. She looked confused and afraid. "Th-those men…. left us. They brought half of our money from our theft this morning!!"

"What?!"

Everyone surprised.

Yuko’s eyes full of anger. “I think I know who the only one that can backstabbing us like this…”

"Makoto." Acchan sighed. "I was fooled by him. How can I trust a drugs dealer?! Urgh!!"

*Yuki’s phone ringing* She read the message. “Guys… I got a news from Watanabe. Mariko was found dead in her home, the police are investigating the case. Is her murderer is one of us?”

Everyone glared at Yuko.

"No!! That’s not me!! I’ll be really happy if I can kill her, but… it seems someone else take my prize." Yuko looked at the ground. "Is Kojima already knew about this?"

Sayaka shook her head. “Not yet. There’s no way for her to know it, she’s still locked in our room.”

"Bring her. I think she should know about this. Mariko is her lover." Acchan talked to Sayaka.

"Why she need to know?! You didn’t need to be nice towards her, Maeda!" Yuko raised her voice

Acchan sighed. “She was our friend… our family. Bring her… we need to talk many things with her regarding this case.
As we knew, Mariko is a dangerous police… she can’t easily defeated. So, the murderer isn’t an ordinary person.”

Sayaka went downstairs. Few minutes later, she went upstairs again and brought Kojima with her. Kojima looked really messed up. Sayaka forced her to sit on a chair and when she was about to tie Kojima’s hand again… Acchan stop her.

"Leave her. We don’t need to tie her again, she already too weak for us."

Kojima lifted her head. “What.. do… you… want… from me.. Just kill me!”

Acchan crossed her arms and then she leaned her body on the wall. “How many CCTV that you have in Mariko’s house?”

Kojima stand up. “WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER???!!!! Don’t hurt her…. I’m the one who betrayed you, it’s totally my fault!!”

Yuko glared at Kojima. “Of course it was your fault!!! But she was the one who incite you to leave us!!!!” She can’t hold her tears. “TO LEAVE ME!!!!”

"I met her before I met you guys!! She’s my childhood friend! We lived in the same orphanage. We’re friends but destiny separated us!!! When I met her in Hokkaido, how can I leave her again after years??!"

Yuki’s phone rang, but this one was a call. Sae saw who was the caller, she looked jealous. Sae let go of her hand from Yuki’s waist and looked away. Yuki grabbed Sae’s hand… she held it tightly while she answered the call. “Okay, Mayu… I’ll come and pick you up. Let’s go there together.” She ended the call.

"Guys! I’m sorry.. I must go, Watanabe asked me to come to-" Yuki glanced at Kojima, "the crime scene."

Acchan nodded. “Inform us about what you got later. Don’t forget to come to my house this Sunday and bring what I said earlier.”

Yuki nodded and then she whispered to Sae. “I’m sorry. I’ll call you later." She pecked Sae’s cheek. "I love you.

Sae didn’t say anything. She sighed. Did she really know what love is? Sae saw Yuki walked away.

Kojima shocked. “What she said?! What happen to Mariko??!! I swear I’ll kill the one who lay her hand to my girlfriend!!” She glared at Yuko.

Yuko talked bluntly. “She’s died. Trust me… I really want to kill her, but… I had a bad luck, someone took my chance to take a revenge.”

Kojima totally shocked about what Yuko said, and then she screamed out loud. She sat on the floor weakly, she cried. “It’s….. It’s your fault!!! If I wasn’t here, I can help her!!! She must be looking for me everywhere!!! She went out without thinking about the risk!! We…. we even can’t look at each other eyes before she died. D-destiny separated us again!!” She sobbed.

"We will help you take your revenge, but… it’s not free. You must do something for us."

Everyone surprised when they heard Acchan’s statement. Acchan ignored those cold eyes. “I have a plan… to crush Makoto.”

=================== On The Weeked ==================

= The Truth =

Rena knocked the door.

"Rena, you’re late!!" Jurina opened the door for Rena. "Come in."

Rena walked in. “Well… sorry. We postponed our plan for a week. I have many important things more than playing a guitar.” She licked her lollipop. “And… I took an hour to found your place. Why didn’t you pick me up?!”

"That’s your punishment for canceling our date."

Rena rolled her eyes. “It’s not a DATE!! It’s a private tutoring. Today, you must teach me properly or I’ll-“

"Kill me? I know." Jurina shrugged.

"No. I’ll smack your head really hard." Rena looked away. "And don’t ever cut my words, ever again… or I’ll-"

"Kill me?"

Rena groaned. “No! I’ll hit your head onto the wall, 10 times.”

Jurina giggled. “You’re cute, Rena-chan.” She took her guitar from her room. “Yeahh… at least I won’t die in your hand.” She grinned. “You can take a rest for a while and have your dinner, I already bought your meal…. I wanna play it by myself first.”

Jurina walked to her outdoor terrace and sat on the chair. She lived in apartment and her room is on 22th floor, so… she could really feel the cold wind and she could clearly saw the beautiful lights, the stars, and the moon. She started to play her guitar.

Rena heard the song from inside the room. She looked at Jurina, she saw Jurina’s back. She’s a nice girl. Rena smiled.

Jurina already played 3 songs and Rena couldn’t take it anymore, she walked out to the terrace. “Am I misheard something or your songs were really sounds too depressing!?” Rena looked at Jurina’s face. S-she’s crying??? "What happened?"

Jurina stopped and then she put her guitar. “2 days ago… my senpai in my work had passed away. She’s like my own sister.”

Rena really want to cheer Jurina and comfort her, but… I’m really good in teasing people, I’m not designed to comfort them. Rena still stood in front of Jurina, she put herself into an awkward situation.

Jurina chuckled. “You don’t need to comfort me. I’m fine.” She smiled and then she held Rena’s hand. “Your presence itself is enough for me. Thank you.”

*doki doki* “Don’t act like a sweety kid in front of me. That’s so disgusting to see.” Rena looked away.

Jurina laughed. “Aww… you’re blushing! Am I the one who make you shy so cutely like this?” Jurina stood up, she held Rena’s face and forced her to looking at Jurina. She caressed Rena’s cheek. “Thank you for worrying me, even though it’s just for a minute.”

“I’m not worried about you. You’re so full of yourself!” Rena scoffed, trying to hide her blushing cheeks.

Jurina smirked and pecked the girl’s lips. Rena could be cold and sometimes distant, but when she blushed it was the cutest thing in the world. “Wanna spend your night here, Ms. ‘I think I am smarter than everyone’?” Jurina teased wrapping her arms around her waist.

Rena rolled her eyes at the comment. “I do not think I am smarter than everyone!” she denied. “But I’m definitely smarter than you.”

Jurina chuckled. “Whatever you say, Rena.” Jurina replied sarcastically.

Rena pouted.

Jurina noticed this and laughed again. “Aww don’t get mad Rena,” Jurina said caressing her cheek.

“I am not mad.”

“You so are.”

“Fine I am. Happy?”

“No.” Jurina mumbled before capturing her lips.

Rena’s eyes grew wide. She wasn’t expecting that. The kiss didn’t last long, but it was sweet and breathtaking. Rena’s heart was beating rapidly inside of her chest. “J-Jurina…”

----------

Rena wrapped her arms around Jurina’s waist. She hide her face from Jurina. “I… I… Ummm…I..*cough*.. Tsk.”

Jurina giggled. “Let me try to finish your words, you can hit my head onto the wall as many as you like if I’m wrong.” She touched Rena’s chin and lifted her face. Jurina saw Rena who totally blushed in her arms. “I love you, am I right?”

Rena nodded slowly. She wanna hide her face again but Jurina still holding her chin.

"Look at my eyes, Rena. I love you too." Jurina smiled.

=================== Next Morning ====================

*Rena’s phone keep ringing since 10 minutes ago*

Jurina opened her eyes. “Rena…. pick up your phone! So noisy.” She closed her ears.

Rena groaned. She still closing her eyes and her hands traveling around the bed to looking for her phone. “Hello.” She answered it lazily.

Rena, where are you???!!!! I’ve called you over 20 times!!

Acchan! She opened her eyes and she woke up. “So-sorry. I didn’t hear my phone ringing.”

Come to my house! NOW!!" Acchan hung up it.

Rena stood, she pick up her clothes and wear it back as fast as she can. What happened? Acchan never yelled at me before (except when I pointed my gun towards Yuki’s head). “Jurina, I must go. See you later.” She walked out from the bedroom.

Jurina surprised. “Hey!! Where’s my morning kiss??”

Rena rolled her eyes. She entered the bedroom again, she saw Jurina looked at her with her puppy eyes. Rena sighed. She pecked Jurina’s lips.

Jurina grinned. “See you later, my icy girlfriend.”

*1 hour later*

"What happen?!" Rena rushed into Acchan’s house. "What are you doing here?" She glared at Yuki who sat beside Acchan. They looked at the laptop screen seriously.

Yuki stood up. “Do you remember the application that you asked me to be installed in one of the PC in the police office?”

"Yes. It works, right? We already succeeded to access the computer. I even gave it to you, Acchan." Rena looked annoyed, she hate if someone told her that she’s failed in something.

Acchan sighed. “Yes, that’s what I’m doing right now.” She turned her laptop screen, so Rena can saw it too.

Yuki smirked. “Do you know her? I installed your application into her computer. She’s one of my teammates.”

Rena walked closer, she gasped when she saw it. T-that’s my picture! Impossible!!! She was totally shocked.

"You seemed had a nice date with her. Amusement park, isn’t it? With Jurina." Yuki teased her.

"Shut your damn mouth, Yuki!!!" Rena sat on the floor. She grabbed her hair. H-how can she- I thought she’s a singer!

Acchan patted Rena’s shoulder. “Are you okay?”

"No! I’m not okay!!" Rena shed her tears.

Acchan show her sympathy for Rena. It’s so rarely to see Rena cried, she’s a strong and cold girl. She often didn’t care about everything surround her. “Rena, listen-“

"I know!! You wanna tell me to not betray you, right??!! I won’t betraying you, I never will!!" She stood and hugged Acchan. "You didn’t know how it feels.."

Acchan hugged Rena back. “I knew what it felt, Rena. I knew about it!!”

Rena frowned. “What do you mean?”

Yuki change Rena’s picture to another picture.

Rena looked at the picture, it’s Acchan. She saw a night sky and the river behind Acchan… Acchan took a picture with someone else. She surprised, she let go of her arms from Acchan. “S-she’s the sergeant!!! How-“

"I didn’t know it before, Rena. I’m really troubled because of this." Acchan sighed.

"So, that’s why you prevented me to shot her in the bank?! You hesitate about her??"

Acchan simply nodded. “Now… we know what Haruna felt when she was with Mariko.”

Yuki got a call from Mayu. “Guys, we got another shocking news about Mariko’s murderer.” She looked at Rena. “The police put the blame on Jurina, they said that they found Jurina’s bracelet on the crime scene.”

Rena wanna talk but Acchan cut her words. “I know, Rena. Jurina isn’t the murderer. Last night.. me, Yuko, and Haruna already went to Mariko’s house. Haruna took the CCTV recording tape that she put secretly in that house.”

"So, who’s the murderer?"

Acchan smirked. “I think we have to change our plan.”

================= TO BE CONTINUED =================

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Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: AshuraX on November 16, 2013, 11:48:18 AM
Finally caught up with this. AND Maeda Team knew about their respective partners~ Wonder who's the killer? Wait a sec...
YOU KILLED MARIKO-SAMA!!!! WHY?! QAQ
Oh well, at least Acchan's safe and sound...
I hope...
Now will emotion become an obstacle in their work? Hope not. *sigh*
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: kurogumi on November 16, 2013, 01:20:02 PM
I will not say much this time

I repeatedly threaten by someone via PM LOL  :hip burp:

that I talk too much and have provided information that endanger the future of this story  :ptam-shit:

the reason is not really make sense  :ptam-glow:

but funny as hell LOL  :ptam-...:

I so want to follow it once LOL  :ptam-vain:

those who threaten me have initials 'GG' (hope you know who...and it's not voldemort)  :fever: :fever: :fever:

and he was really creepy  :ptam-...:

I should shut up at least 1 chapter  :on blackhole:

See you in the next chapter for a more rewarding comments   :vv: :vv: :vv: :vv:



look GG man! LOL   :poke: :poke: :poke: :poke: :poke: :poke: :poke: :poke:




thank for the update  :sashiko:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: gek geki on November 16, 2013, 01:32:50 PM
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G-Guys... it's not me!

BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHA


Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: FoxKing on November 16, 2013, 07:10:26 PM
 :O that's all I can think to say

hope you update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: Zita on November 16, 2013, 08:14:08 PM
Wow this part is so cool. I look forward to next one.
I pity Yuko so much :(
Thanks for full chapter. :kekeke:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: kahem on November 16, 2013, 09:00:19 PM
No!!!! Mariko-sama!!!! Why?!!! T_T
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 17, 2013, 09:56:22 AM
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PART 8.1

Jurina lie down on a small bed, she looked at the ceiling. I can't believe that I'll wear the 'zebra cross' shirt. She touched her prison unifrom. She sighed. Rena..... is she okay? She definitely worried about me.

Jurina wiped her teary eyes. Will she leave me if she know that I'm a prisoner now? She will feel ashamed of me.

"Matsui-san, Takahashi-sama and Watanabe-sama visiting you." A guard called her from outside her prison cell. He handcuffed Jurina's hands before she walked out.

Jurina followed the guard who lead her into a room. She saw Takamina and Mayu already sat on the chair. Jurina sat calmly in front of them.

Takamina started the conversation. "Jurina, It's been a week since you suspended. Why don't you tell us about what happened? We're here to help you."

Jurina avoid Takamina's eyes, she looked down.

Mayu frowned. "Are you hiding something from us?" She grabbed Jurina's hand and caressed it to comfort Jurina. "We know and we trust you. You aren't the murderer, you won't kill Mariko."

"Mayu is right." Takamina nodded. "But you're suspected now, we have to find a way to make the police believe us!! We can't help you if you keep silent in front of us."

"How did your bracelet ended up in there? Are you visited her before? Why didn't you ask us to come with you? Was Mariko asked you to came alone?"

"Yes. I visited her, Mayu. We talked about something. "

"When did you come to her house?"

Jurina lifted her head and then she looked at Mayu. "On the day she died."

Takamina sighed."It make sense that the police put the blame on you. You're the last person who met with Mariko before she died."

"What she talked about? Maybe it can be a key to find the murderer." Mayu stared at Jurina.

"Honestly, it should became a secret between me and Mariko. But... I think that I can tell it to you now since I'm here and I can't do anything." Jurina sighed. "Since years ago.. when she still worked at Hokkaido, she had a girlfriend.
3 weeks before she died, she asked me a little favor to take care of her girlfriend if one day there's something happened to her."

Takamina looked confused. "I don't understand. She already knew that she was targeted by someone but why she didn't inform it to us?"

"She want to, but she can't. Actually.... her girlfriend was one of the 'perfect' thieves. She kept it secret for years."

"WHAAATTT???!!!" Mayu and Takamina looked at each other, they can't believe at what Jurina said.

"When Mayu told her about the thieves, she became really afraid because the thieves at somewhere here and she believes that someday the thieves will take their revenge to Mariko and her girlfriend, Haruna."

Mayu and Takamina remain silent, they still tried to control their heartbeat. The information shocked them so badly.

"Mayu, do you remember when you said that Mariko almost catch the thieves?"

Mayu simply nodded.

"Mariko failed because Haruna threatened her. Haruna said that she will commit to suicide if Mariko still try to catch her friends. Mariko gave up. She was suspended for 6 months before she moved and worked here. The police department put the blame on her because she let the villain ran away."

"So, where is Haruna now? Maybe she can help us to make you get out from this place. We promise that we won't hurt her." Finally, Takamina can opened her mouth.

"Please be kind to her, she already left the crime world and her friends for years because of Mariko and.... Mariko also sacrifice herself for Haruna." Jurina looked at her friends seriously. "Please for this one put aside our job as the police, please do it as our favor to our friend. Mariko was really nice towards us. She had always help us in many things." Jurina shed her tears.

Takamina was totally disagree with the idea, but after the second thought, "okay, only for this time. We will do this for you and Mariko. I will take off my position as a sergeant if later something happens to us."

Mayu nodded, she looked agree about Takamina's statement. "Me too."

"Thank you."Jurina smiled. "Did you found the files that I put on my office desk?"

"Yes. I found it this morning and then I asked Yuki to check it before me and Takamina went here."

"Good, Mayu. Those files contains of the thieves data, Mariko gave it to me." Jurina whispered. "Haruna live at xxx street." She gave the description about Haruna's house to them.

Mayu gasped. Her eyes opened wide and grew even wider after Jurina finished her description. Th-that was the house that I saw weeks ago with Yuki. So, those 3 men was kidnapping Haruna on that night?! So the woman who was beaten by them is HARUNA???!!

"J-jurina....." Mayu seemed so shocked. "D-did.... Haruna has a long-black hair and her height is around this?" Mayu stood up and lifted her hand to show Jurina about the measure. "Is her house number........ 5?"

Jurina surprised. "H-how did you know? Did you meet her before?!"

F*uck!!! Mayu cried and then she grabbed Takamina's hand. "Let's go!!! Hurry up!!! We must go to the office!!!!"

Takamina and Jurina confused.

"Yuki is-" Mayu can't continue her words, she cried more harder.

Takamina didn't understand about it, but she trusted Mayu. She stood up. "Jurina, thank you. We promise we will set you free." She looked at Mayu. "Come on."

Jurina looked at her friends, they rushed out from the room. Yuki?

She waited the guard take her into her prison cell again, but after 10 minutes.. none of the guard that come to that room. Jurina walked slowly, she opened the door. "Hello?? I already finished with my friends. You can bring me back now." Jurina increased her volume.

A guard run towards her. "Ah, we're sorry Matsui-san. We didn't see your friends walked out from this room."

Jurina frowned. A girl? I never know that a girl can become the guards in the prison, usually.. they will placed in our office. Jurina walked first. "No problem."

The guard smirked behind Jurina. She lifted her cap, Yuko.

===================================================

Mayu rushed into the office. "Hey!!!! Where's Yuki?? Is there anyone here who see her??" She yelled at the police officers.

One of the police answered her. "Kashiwagi-san already left the office an hour ago."

"Damn!" Mayu gave Takamina a sign to leave the office to search Yuki.

But the police officer spoke up again. "She left a message for you, Watanabe-san." He handed a small-orange envelope to Mayu.

Mayu opened it and then she read it with Takamina.

*Letter*
Hi, Watanabe Mayu sama. (/^▽^)/

Do you already found out..... about me?
Oh... I'm sorry to say this, but... you're too late and too slow.
You aren't as smart as you say. \(--)/

We will (definitely) meet again.
I'll call you later. See you..... honey. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

*End of Letter*

Takamina didn't know how to react about this. A cute letter but have a deathly meaning. "Mayu, are you.... okay?"

"NO!!! I'm not okay!!" Mayu put her palms onto her face, she cried.

======================= **** =======================

= Maeda Team vs. Takamina Team =

"ufmmm... ufffmmm...huuffmm...heefft foooff fmmee!!" Jurina can't talk because they covered her mouth.

Jurina dragged out from a car. Someone pushed her, Jurina can't saw who it was because her eyes covered by something. Her hands tied behind his back.

Jurina walked slowly while she felt someone grabbed her hand and lead her to walk. She walked more slower when she felt that they will went downstairs.

After few minutes, she pushed down by someone. She forced to sat on a chair. She didn't has any choice, she obeyed them. They tied her hands and her foot onto the chair. She can't move.

"Sayaka, you can let her open her eyes and her mouth now. Let's greet our lovely guest."

Sayaka nodded. She did as Acchan said.

Jurina opened her eyes slowly because the lights dazzled her. She saw 4 girls stood in front of her. "Wh-who are you?! Where am I??!!" She seemed uneasy because 3 of them held a gun.

"Welcome, Matsui Jurina." Acchan smirked.

Jurina looked around. "Who are you?!! I'm a police, you will regret about this."

"Ahh... do you mean..... you WAS a police?! You killed your own friend." Acchan scoffed Jurina.

Jurina groaned. She was so irritated by Acchan's words. "Release me and fight 1 on 1 with me!!" She glared at Acchan. "What's your problem with me? I even didn't know any of you."

Yuko laughed. "Oh really? How about... 1 on 1 with her." She pointed at the door. "You may know her. I mean.... REALLY know her." She smirked.

Jurina turned her head, she looked at the door. The door opened slowly. A thin-white girl with raven hair entered the room. Jurina shocked.

"Hi, Jurina. Nice to see you here, I guess... you missed me so much. Ne?"

"R-rena? Is that you?" Jurina blinked her eyes, she wanna make sure that she wasn't mistaken.

Rena rolled her eyes. She walked closer to Jurina. "Yes, it's me." She looked at Jurina in cold way. Rena passed Jurina and sat in front of her laptop. "Enjoy your time here. My friends will t-"

"What the f*ck is this??!! Tell me about what's going on in here, Rena!!" Jurina shed her tears. She confused, sad, angry, disappointed, afraid, and..... broken heart.

Yuko grabbed Jurina's neck. "You're too noisy. Should I cut you tounge?" Yuko took a silver knife from her pocket. She caressed Jurina's cheek with the blade.

Jurina trembled. She saw Yuko's eyes... cold and full of anger.

Rena unwrapped her lollipop. "I've told you, Jurina. Don't ever cut my words again." She said it without looked at Jurina and she put her gun onto her desk. "Or I'll use this later."

"Put it down, Yuko. You hurting my friend."

Jurina looked at a girl who came from behind her, she surprised because this time... she knew who it was. Y-yyu-yuki.... "You're one of them?" Jurina didn't have a guts to yell again because Yuko still held the knife around her face.

"Back off, Yuko." Acchan patted Yuko's shoulder. "Relax. We still have a long night."

Yuki took her phone. "Yuko, I'll call them. Just wait on the place that we've planned before. Don't forget... Mayu is a smart girl, don't be careless. And... about the sergeant, you'll easily knock her out... Don't worry she isn't as smart as her lover." She chuckled.

Acchan glared at Yuki. "I'm not her lover."

Yuko step back. "You can wait until your friends come, after that... you can taste my knife." She put her knife back into his pocket. "Let's get the others." She, Sayaka, and Sae walked out from the room.

Everyone leave Jurina in the big room, except Rena.

"Rena...... tell me what's going on." Jurina shed her tears, she can't do anything else... she even can't wipe her tears. "What does it means?! WHAT THE MEANING OF THIS?!!" Jurina clenched her teeth.

Rena hit the table. She stood up, she took her gun, and then she approached Jurina. "Don't ever yelled at me again. Why you never listen me?" Rena sat on Jurina's lap and then she put the gun into Jurina's mouth. She whispered. "I can easily pull the trigger and then your head will blow up.
What happened between us is just a little mistake. We lived in the different world. It's your fault because you didn't ask about my job.
" Rena pulled back her gun from Jurina's mouth.

Before Rena went upstairs, she looked at Jurina once again. "We brought you here because my team planned something. It's better you act like a good kid or-"

"Or you'll kill me? I know." Jurina looked totally sad. Usually, she say it in playful way because she wanna tease Rena... but now, it's different. She said it seriously.

Rena shrugged. "Fine, if you say so." Rena fired her gun to the floor. The bullet almost hit Jurina's leg. "That's a warning shot." Rena was about to went upstairs again.....

"I love you, Rena... even until now and after you did this to me."

"You didn't know anything about me,Jurina." She turned off the lamp and then she left Jurina locked in it.

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"Moshi moshi."

"Hi, Mayu. It's me, your lovely girlfriend. How are you?"

"Where are you?!"

"Relax, honey. Use your smart and cool brain to find me. Oh, I forgot that you aren't as smart as I thought. *Yuki giggled*
My friends already waited you around your apartment. Don't do anything stupid because they'll keep their eyes on you. And I won't forget to mention you that we already get Jurina."

Mayu cried again after Yuki ended the call.

*30 minutes later*

Sayaka knocked the car's door. "Get out from your car and follow me quietly. I think that we have a same thought... don't mess up in public area."

Takamina took her gun.

Sayaka laughed. "A bad move, sergeant. Did you forgot about what my friend said? Maybe you can looked at your body before you pointed your gun at me."

Takamina and Mayu saw the red laser already 'move around' at her body.

"If you do something weird, my friends won't be hesitant to pull the trigger." Sayaka glared at Mayu, "especially for you, Watanabe-san. Your fake girlfriend already warned us about you."

Mayu clenched her fist when she heard 'fake girlfriend' from Sayaka. "You'll pay it later. You can't play with the police and law."

Sayaka shrugged. "Let's see later who is smarter between us."

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"Jurina! Are you okay?" Mayu looked at Jurina who tied on her chair.

"Why are you worrying about your friend while yourself in a pinch too?"

Mayu glared at Sae. "Because she's my friend!"

"I see." Sae nodded. "So, that's why I'm worrying about her everytime she's with you." She pointed at Yuki who leaned her body on the corner wall.

Mayu surprised, she didn't noticing Yuki's presence.

Sae walked towards Yuki. She grabbed Yuki's hand and pulled Yuki into her hug. Sae pecked Yuki's lips and then she back-hugged Yuki. She leaned her body onto the wall so she can stood comfortably while she hugging Yuki.
Sae pecked Yuki's bare shoulder before she put her chin on Yuki's shoulder. "I'm worrying about Yuki because she's my friend and my girlfriend."

Mayu didn't say anything. Her heart burned by jealousy. Her tears was flowing on her cheek... her eyes seemed so sad, but not angry. "Sh-she's still my girlfriend!!"

Yuki fully leaned her body on Sae, she held Sae's hands on her waist. "So... it means I have 2 girlfriends now? Interesting." She winked at Mayu.

Sae looked annoyed to Yuki's words. "You're only mine." She started to kiss Yuki's back-ear and downwards to her nape, it caused Yuki let out her soft moan.

Mayu can't hold her tears, she let it flowing on her cheeks. Yuki did it in front of me.

"Hey!! Hey!!! Both of you!! Get a room! Yuck." Rena yelled at them from her usual spot (sat on the corner couch, with her laptop).

Yuki and Sae giggled.

"Yuko, bring Haruna here. We will start our me-." Acchan entered the room. She stopped for a while when her eyes met with Takamina's 'upset' eyes.

Takamina dumbfounded. "Y-you're part of them too??!!! You use me too??!! You use all of my friends?!" Takamina felt humiliated. She always proud of her team.. proud of herself as a police, but her elite team can easily tricked by a bunch of girls.

Yuki release herself from Sae's hug. She walked towards Takamina and then she punched her. "Don't-you-ever-yelled-at-our leader-again." She hit Takamina's face once again.

Takamina's lips bleeding. She ignored Yuki, she looked at Acchan again. "I promise to myself, I will drag you into the prison!!"

"Huh?" Acchan smirked. "Don't be so full of yourself, sergeant. 3 of you can die tonight if we want to." She put some files onto the table before she looked at Takamina again. "And you, sergeant... if I didn't feel pity for you, my friend who sit there-" She pointed at Rena, "-already shoot you when we fight in the bank last time."

"What do you mean?"

"They're the 'perfect thieves' that we're looking for. They tricked us, they're fooling us, and they played with our feeling. Our team already fooled by them since the beginning... since Yuki accepted in our team. She's a spy."

Hearing Mayu's words, Jurina looked at Rena, "You played me too?! All of our 'accidentally meetings' are fake, Rena? You planned it? You killed Mariko??!!!"

"We didn't kill your friend." Rena avoided Jurina's eyes. "This isn't the right time to talk about about nostalgic stories or to tell us about how broken heart you are. We're here because of something more important than that. And you should thank us because we've release you from the jail."

"You didn't help at all... you even make it worse!!! The police will assume that I ran away from the jail."

"Stop it, Jurina!!" A girl shout it out loud when she already entered the crowded room. "They wanna help us to catch Mariko's murderer and give you the evidence to prove that you aren't the murderer."

Jurina stunned when she heard 'Mariko'. "You are....."

"Haruna. Kojima Haruna."

Thanks to Haruna. Because of her, the tension in their meeting room has decreased.

Acchan turned on the projector that connected to Rena's laptop. "Police team, do you know him?" She pointed at a picture.

Takamina team didn't answer it.

Sayaka walked and she stopped in front of Takamina, she punched Takamina's stomach. "Answer her!"

"Ugh!" Itai. Takamina can't do anything because her hand tied, just like Mayu and Jurina.

Yuki rolled her eyes. "Sayaka, you hit a wrong person. The sergeant didn't have an excellent brain to remember the villain's biodata. You can freely hit the girl over there." She pointed at Mayu. "I'm sure that she remember it because she's the one who gave me a key to entered the police file room." She pointed at a stack of files on a table.

Sayaka shrugged. She turned her head to Mayu.

"Stop it Sayaka. I'll take care of her." Sae walked towards Mayu. She punched Mayu really hard that caused Mayu and her chair fell backwards.

"Mayu!!! Don't hurt her anymore." Jurina looked away to the screen. "I remember him. He's a confidant of a drug dealer! He sell the drugs in the huge scale... He is 1 of the 20 most wanted fugitives by the police."

"Your group has been added into that list too." Mayu smirked.

Rena stood up. "Watanabe-san, can you stop act like you're the most clever girl in this room? I already predicted about it. You'll see later how it ends."

"Tsk." Haruna hit the table. "Stop your useless fighting!! I don't want to say this but... we must work together this time."

Takamina shocked. "Work together??!! Why are you so sure that we want to help the villain?"

"Because of this." Acchan played the video.

Everyone watched the video.

It show them about how the murderer sneaked into Mariko's house after Jurina left, how the murderer shot Mariko's arm before Mariko can take her gun, how Mariko grimaced in pain when the murderer stepped on her head, how the murderer kicked Mariko over and over again, and finally.... the murderer shot Mariko's head. In the end, the murderer threw Jurina's bracelet around Mariko's house.

Rena paused the video and then she enlarge the murderer face. "He's the confidant of a drug dealer that Jurina mention before."

Acchan sighed. "The drug dealer itself was our old friend. He betrayed us, Makoto Fujimura. My intuition said that he want to make us fight and kill each other."

"Why did he need to do that?"

"It's simple, Mayu... I think, you need to read the police files more often." Yuki scoffed her. "Do you remember the pawnshop?"

Jurina simply nodded, but Mayu and Takamina remained silent.

"The owner is Makoto's business partner... the pawnshop did an illegal transaction between the corruptor. They didn’t want the law found them with their bribery stuff, the mortgage it’s only their smart way to hiding those illegal things." She pick up one of the file. "You can read it here. Sae already investigated it. Your team ever took him into the prison, but he can got free because he pay many people to help him out."

Acchan stared at the ceiling. "Makoto wanna took his revenge to us and make us fight each other." He didn't see me as his friend again, he changed.

Haruna stood. "So, basically we have a same target. Wanna work together?" She looked at Maeda team and Takamina team alternately.

(Takamina) "No!!" - (Jurina) "Yes." - (Mayu) "...........Yes."

Takamina frowned. "Oh, come on!!! We can't work together with the villain!"

Jurina pouted. "They have a strong evidence to prove that I'm innocent... we'll know how they can get my bracelet, and besides that... they can help us to catch the 'illegal' pawnshop's owner, the murderer, and the drug dealer in the same time. Cool!!"

"What do you want?" Mayu glared at Acchan. "You must be want something from us. All villains are same."

Acchan laughed. "Oh, so... do you mean that I'll begging you not capture us and asked you to not bring us into the jail??" She smirked, "I'm sorry to disappoint you, we only wanna take our revenge. We asked you to help us because your team know him better than us."

"And after that?" Mayu still seemed suspicious to Maeda Team.

"After all this problem is over....." Yuki sat on Mayu's lap. "We'll split up again and a week after that.... we will play 'catch us if you can' again. Interesting, right?" She smiled at Mayu. "The police never catch us anyway. Even the great Mariko.... failed."

"But she almost catch you." Mayu show her smirk. "Trust me... I'll looking for you, wherever you go I'll keep trying to catch you until I die, Yuki. I won't let you go so easily like today."

Yuki looked at Mayu's eyes. What does it mean? She'll try to capture me to arrest me or... she'll looking for me because sh-

"Yuki, get up!! Stay away from her." Sae yelled at Yuki.

Yuki shrugged. "Okay." She walked away from Mayu.

Takamina sighed. "Okay, we have a deal. I do this because of Jurina and Mariko."

Jurina grinned at Rena. "Now, you can untie us! We already agreed to work together." She looked at Rena with her puppy eyes.

Mayu rolled her eyes. "Like seriously, stop it Jurina. You make us feel ashamed if you keep act like that."

"She's right. Me and Mayu got a lot of punch from them, how can you ignore us for her?!"

"Sayaka, untie them. Give their gun back. Only their gun, not their phones."

"A-are you sure, Maeda?"

"Of course. If they do any single weird things that put us in danger, I allow all of you to shoot their head." Acchan went upstairs.

Sayaka untied Takamina first and then she released Mayu too. When Sayaka was about to untie Jurina, "mouu... I want my Rena-chan who untie me." She grinned.

"Insane!!" Sayaka rolled her eyes.

Rena turned off her laptop. "I don't want to release you. You can sit there forever, if you didn't want Sayaka to untie you." She went upstairs with the others.

"Rena-chan~"

Now, only Takamina team who stood awkwardly in that room.

"So.... we're here, in our enemy's headquarter." Takamina facepalmed.

"We can't fully trust them, but we can't break our promise if they didn't break it too. Just... be careful." Mayu looked at Jurina. "Here, I'll help you."

Jurina shook her head. "No. I'll wait her to untie me."

"Geez." Takamina slapped Jurina's arm.

"Hey." Yuki went downstairs, she brought a First Aid Kit. "Acchan give this to you guys. Take care of your wound." She put it on a table.
"This is our meeting room, your bedroom is on upstairs. You will stay here with us until our business is over. Do whatever you want here as long as it didn't caused any trouble. We didn't let you go out from this place."

"Yuki..."

Yuki ignored Mayu and then she went upstairs. "Don't ever force my team to use our weapon."

"Yuki...."

"Don't you even dare to send any information about this place to other parties."

"Yuki!"

Yuki stopped before she completely went out from the meeting room. "We will talk later, Mayu. Just take a rest." She smiled before she closed the door.

"3 of us have a weird relationship with 3 of them. It even happened to Mariko-sama too." Jurina looked down.

Takamina scratched her head. "Mine even weirder, I almost have a date with their leader. LEADER!!" She facepalmed again.

================= TO BE CONTINUED =================

This chapter looks too long (again), I need to split it in 2 parts (again) so you wouldn't wait too long for my update. :)
I promise it won't happen again. My bad habbit, if I get too emotional. :(

Next on Takamina team vs. Maeda Team (2):

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: mysterious022 on November 17, 2013, 10:17:23 AM
KYAAA >.< XD
I already read it and now I need the part 2 it's really interesting hahaha  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
I hope u will update it fast  :fap :fap
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: olive29 on November 17, 2013, 10:18:05 AM
Waaaa....update soon...  :bow:

Poor Mariko-sama... :cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
Post by: anakpanti on November 17, 2013, 10:42:02 AM
@mo-chan : momo... your comment looks too depressing for me.  :cry:
Don't worry... their happy/cute moment will come again.

@Kirozoro : A question about Yuki again...  :cry:

@edogawa4869 : Sorry, SaeYuki sweet moment ended.
Here chap 8.1.. Takamina know the truth.

@cisda83 : Thank you for your questions. I will answer it later in my fics. XD

@Terragen :
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How could you!  :angry:
kill mariko! GOD!!  :cry:
I'm sorry... but she's only a cameo here.  :(

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i mean, yuko will do it?? why?? why maeda team wanna help jurina? she's nothing to do with them? if jurina keep on jail let's just keep her on jail
or maybe it's rena request???
It's already explained in chap 8.1

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about yuki,sae and mayu it's complicated right??
It makes me feel complicated as well.  :bleed eyes:

I like your opinion about Sae x Yuki x Mayu, it help me so much. Thanks :)

@AryaMachdi :
Thanks God. You're appear in my fics again.  XD

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I'm sorry if I can't help you with it. I'm a bad person, aren't I?
No, you're not.. I still need it, but maybe not in this fanfic anymore.  :P

Thanks for reading.

@AshuraX : Wow, AshuraX-san... you're here!! Welcome.  XD
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Finally caught up with this. AND Maeda Team knew about their respective partners~ Wonder who's the killer? Wait a sec...
YOU KILLED MARIKO-SAMA!!!! WHY?! QAQ
The killer isn't from AkB members, relax.  :P
I'm really sorry about Mariko-san... but Mariko's death can make Maeda Team and Takamina team work together, right? *Try hard to looking for a good reason.*

@kurogumi :  :lol: Don't fight with Geki-san.

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See you in the next chapter for a more rewarding comments
No... this comment is really funny. I give you a huge thank you for that.  :lol:

@gek geki :

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G-Guys... it's not me!
Like... seriously, everyone knows that it's you.  :lol:

@FoxKing : I already update the 1st part.
Please reading it as well.  :D

@Zita :
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Thanks for full chapter. :kekeke:
I'm glad you read it. :w00t:

@kahem :
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No!!!! Mariko-sama!!!! Why?!!! T_T
Again.... sorry.  :bow:
She's my cameo, not a main character here.
I feel bad too because I kill someone.  :cry:

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@mysterious022 and olive29:
Thanks for reading it.  XD

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I hope u will update it fast
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Waaaa....update soon...
Maybe... Just maybe, I'll take more time for 8.2 because I wanna write all pairings more detail.  :)
I wanna make their happy memories in the next chap (before something happens in the future.  :P).  :D
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: gek geki on November 17, 2013, 10:44:19 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

:cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:

I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING!!!

TOOO CUTE!!!!



I LOVE THIS COLABORATION!!!!!


GOD!! HOW I HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NET PART RIGHT NOW!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: White Hawk on November 17, 2013, 10:56:42 AM
Thanks for the update anakpanti san!! :D
But, now I can't wait to read part 2 XD

This is so cool~! Maeda's and Taka's team are working together! yay! :twothumbs

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Next on Takamina team vs. Maeda Team (2):

    WMatsui, MaYuki, AtsuMina moment, and a little bit KojiYuu (you've wait it, ne? *grinned*)
    The Messy Collaboration (*facepalmed*)
Yes! yes! yes! Part 2 please XD
And finally~ KojiYuu~ :wub:
And I can't wait to see WMatsui, Mayuki, and Atsumina moments too

Oh, btw, Jurina is so sweet~
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"I love you, Rena... even until now and after you did this to me."
:wub: Don't worry Jurina, Rena loves you too~
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"mouu... I want my Rena-chan who untie me."
:rofl:  Rena-chan~ Untie her~! :lol:

Oh! Mayuyu too!
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"Trust me... I'll looking for you, wherever you go I'll keep trying to catch you until I die, Yuki. I won't let you go so easily like today."
:wub:

Thankyou for the update and I hope you update soon XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Konoe on November 17, 2013, 11:13:14 AM
OH MY GOSH!!!

This is getting too exciting!!!!

And there will be WMatsui, MaYuki, AtsuMina moment and I don't care if Kojiyuu is just little as long as they have one!!!

Update SOON!!!!


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Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Tam_atsu on November 17, 2013, 12:03:39 PM
yeah its getting interesting.. but why this fic was mariharu?? why not kojiyuu!????  :cry: :cry: :cry:
but i hope from now on this will be kojiyuu (wishful thinking, day dreaming, fantasizing) :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: AshuraX on November 17, 2013, 12:12:11 PM
Is it just me or does Acchan still love tkmn? Oh well not like I'd care. I shalt wait for your next update and the mash up of Maeda team and tkmn team~
Title: Re: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Sydney W on November 17, 2013, 12:16:30 PM
Atsumina moment next. Can't wait for the part 2
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: ayudewi6 on November 17, 2013, 01:22:39 PM
oh god! I want to see the continuation of the relationship between team maeda and team takahashi.
whether they can work together well? takamina would be able to get fully maeda heart?
honestly, I want takamina to be look stupid but actually she's pretty smart!
Title: Re: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: kurogumi on November 17, 2013, 01:42:26 PM
Oh gosh!
This chapter was cute!

Cute!
I mean cuteness overload!!
Beside the serious case,the way it happen to takamina team was funny LOL

How could jurina being relax and act like cute puppy aww,make me wanna hug her! Cute!!! How can rena resist it?? LOL
Even takamina and mayu feel ashamed by  jurina act! LOL

The trio police was cute and funny.i wonder how long acchan,yuki and rena could stay cool and ignore them...their cutenest is like a bomb!

Takamina stupidity will conquer cold acchan

Mayuyu forever cuteness and child like will melt yuki,her motherly nature will show aww and helplessly spoil mayuyu

Jurina puppy look and her gentleness!ah rena chan dont ignore her!
I like how wmatsui here
Even though they are enemy,they wont deny their feeling,they being honest.just need to settle a moment and time.they just felt awwkward and weird after knew the truth


As for atsumina.well i'm not see they denying their feeling,it just too blurr for them to realize,LOL

Mayuki?yeah they need to talk
Just What kind of talk?
If yuki wanna break up with her then after that she wont had any control over mayu anymore,what mayu wanna do and what happen to mayu is not her bussines   


Sae? Just go to sayaka side,gorilla need u



Putri-san whatever in the future just dont ever hurt rena.if it jurina is fine lol because i never see jurina in action.she need to show some skill! LOL


I read that you wanna make sweet moment for them,is that mean something bad will happen? I hope is not wmatsui nor mayuki,well maybe mayuki wont happy since yuki had sae as an obstacle between them,but its up to yuki decision.the result of her decision will lead the future.and for wmatsui please make them happy ending! LOL



Thanks for the update.
i know my comment is not good as others,my english is suck! But hope u know what i mean
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Koneki on November 17, 2013, 02:45:36 PM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

:cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:

I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING!!!

TOOO CUTE!!!!



I LOVE THIS COLABORATION!!!!!


GOD!! HOW I HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!

I FEEL THE  SAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

ADSASDASDASD
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Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 17, 2013, 02:50:23 PM
@gek geki: Your signature... I love it, kawaii!!  XD
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GOD!! HOW I HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!
I can't...  :cry:
I need 2 or 3 days.  :P

@White Hawk :
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Oh, btw, Jurina is so sweet~

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"I love you, Rena... even until now and after you did this to me."
:wub: Don't worry Jurina, Rena loves you too~

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"mouu... I want my Rena-chan who untie me."
:rofl:  Rena-chan~ Untie her~! :lol:

Oh! Mayuyu too!

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"Trust me... I'll looking for you, wherever you go I'll keep trying to catch you until I die, Yuki. I won't let you go so easily like today."
:wub:
You quote Jurina and Mayuyu's dialogue.
I didn't realize before that it's super sweet. >.<
I even wonder that I wrote it by myself.  :lol:

@Konoe :
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I don't care if Kojiyuu is just little as long as they have one!!!
I never write about them before, but I'll try to make it sweet.  :D

@Tam_atsu : Hi.  :welcome
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i hope from now on this will be kojiyuu (wishful thinking, day dreaming, fantasizing) :bow:
It's hard because... you know..... Mariko just died, I doubt that Kojima will falling in love again that fast.
But, I'll make them nice towards each other.  XD

@AshuraX :
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Is it just me or does Acchan still love tkmn?
It's hard for Acchan to show her true feeling, she's a leader...
If the leader start to fall in love to their enemy, it'll give a great impact to her team.

@Sydney W :  :welcome Thank you.  :)

@ayudewi6 : Hi. :)
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honestly, I want takamina to be look stupid but actually she's pretty smart!
Wow... you have a great idea. I'll think about it.  XD
She won't become a sergeant for no reason. 8)

@kurogumi :
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Cute!
I mean cuteness overload!!
Beside the serious case,the way it happen to takamina team was funny LOL
Really? I'm glad... because I feel that this chap is too serious.  :P

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How could jurina being relax and act like cute puppy aww,make me wanna hug her! Cute!!! How can rena resist it?? LOL
Even takamina and mayu feel ashamed by  jurina act! LOL
Rena is a tsundere. She act like that all the time.  :lol:
About Jurina, she can relax after she knew that Maeda Team aren't Mariko's murderer and they have tape to prove her innocent.
Jurina loves Rena so much, maybe love make her ignore Rena's status as a thieves.  :inlove:

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The trio police was cute and funny.i wonder how long acchan,yuki and rena could stay cool and ignore them...their cutenest is like a bomb!
It won't last long. because it's already chap 8. :lol:
Kidding. :P
They just need to realize that they love each other.

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I like how wmatsui here.
Even though they are enemy,they wont deny their feeling,they being honest.just need to settle a moment and time.they just felt awwkward and weird after knew the truth
It's exactly same like what I think.

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Putri-san whatever in the future just dont ever hurt rena.if it jurina is fine lol because i never see jurina in action.she need to show some skill! LOL
About Jurina's action. Next chap... there will be a training session.. Let's see how good Jurina is.  (Spoiler. :banghead:)

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i know my comment is not good as others,my english is suck! But hope u know what i mean
No!! I always fall in love with your comment.  :wub:
My english is even worse than you.  :lol:

@koneki : I'm glad that you like it.  XD
I made Jurina became really cute in the end of chap, but Rena still ignoring her.  :grr:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Kirozoro on November 17, 2013, 04:06:06 PM
Omg this ch is so excited

And they are working together!!!

Still.. Who will Yuki chose??

What happen will happen to Arsumina and Wmataui coule?
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Zita on November 17, 2013, 04:10:41 PM
Maeda team is so cold. :cry:
But they will be living together. XD
Update soon please. :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: cisda83 on November 17, 2013, 04:24:19 PM
I don't know whether to be upset or angry with the way they were treated.

Atsuko's team are so blood tristy

Poor Minami team... Don't know what they were suppose to do next?

Sure... Catch the drug dealer and heal jurina's name

How about the thieves?

How about thier loves for the thieves?

Would they get thier happy ending?

What's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Terragen on November 17, 2013, 04:34:06 PM
Yuki Time is running out,what are you doing?just spend more time with mayu,sent sae somewhere haha

Rena chan really tsk
She so tsundere,maybe she too shy to show her affection in front of her friends

Jurina~ facepalmed~kawaii~


Takamina,what kind of seargent are you? I laugh when she lose the voting! Always thinking different among others

And almost dating the thief leader? That so takamina style haha


Mayuyu did she had any combat skill?



I sense jealousy on the next update

Maybe some jurimayu wont hurt haha
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 17, 2013, 04:39:20 PM
wuuuaahhh..
it's loooooong....  :on lol:

i can't say anything but GREAT.....  :twothumbs

and it's became more interesting time to time....

you are really good author...  :theking

great job..

thanks for the update...

 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: Feat on November 17, 2013, 06:47:15 PM
I like where this is going.  :ding:

Waiting for part 2. Thankssss.  :hee:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 17, 2013, 10:52:11 PM
i should be angry with the way they hit them and everything. but i cant.... they are so cold but  i feel  :heart: in th air....
jurina shes def. insane  haha
poor mayu and  takamina :/ :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
Post by: anakpanti on November 19, 2013, 05:54:15 PM
Umm... this isn't an update or something...
But... when I was about to sleep, I opened i-am-nutty (http://i-am-nutty.tumblr.com/) tumblr.

And then..... I saw this post (http://i-am-nutty.tumblr.com/post/67465457781).
He/she did WMatsui fanart for this fanfic.

(http://31.media.tumblr.com/c4b557071a266d61c6e267fda9c75ab4/tumblr_mwil5ooINy1qeceb8o1_500.png)(http://25.media.tumblr.com/4334129408a80fef3e13a3dcef90c260/tumblr_mvne6wI70O1qeceb8o3_r1_500.png)

My WMatsui feeling. :wriggly:

Thank you.  :mon cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 21, 2013, 09:46:27 PM
(http://media.tumblr.com/a133a9ebfbcf209258974678cdf87120/tumblr_inline_mwex4wEYeg1rrey5h.jpg)

PART 8.2

= WMatsui =

Rena opened her eyes slowly. "Hooaaaahhhmmmm...." She yawned. She looked at a clock that hanging on the wall. 4AM? Tsk. "What is it, Sayaka? I'm still sleepy." She closed her eyes again.

"Are you still persistent to not untie your friend?"

Huh?! Rena opened her eyes and woke up quickly. "She's still in our meeting room?!"

Sayaka shrugged. "Yeaahhh. I'm not really care about her, but I think it's just a little bit stupid for me if your friend keep sitting like that."

Rena rushed out from her bedroom and went downstairs. She opened the door and then she turned on the lights. Jurina.

Rena saw Jurina fell asleep on her chair. She sighed. She must be tired. Rena walked closer to Jurina and then she looked at Jurina's face. She caressed Jurina's cheek slowly, she was afraid to wake her.

Jurina lifted her head as she felt someone touching her. "Rena-chan?"

Rena gasped, she pulled back her hand quickly. "Ah, you're alive." She looked away and then she walked towards her usual spot.

Jurina smiled. "I know that you'll come. You're worrying me, ne?"

"I'm not worried about you." She sat in front of her laptop and then she turned it on. "I'm here because I have something to do."

"Ah really?" Jurina giggled. "Okay, untie me first. I will help you with your 'something to do', Rena-chan."

"First, stop calling me 'Rena-chan', I feel sick of it.
Second, I don't need your help... I'm smart enough to handle my own business.
Third, I didn't want to untie you because you'll definitely bothering me."

Jurina sighed. "Rena-chan, come on~" She dragged her chair closer to Rena and it causes a noisy voice because of friction between the floor and the chair legs.... over and over again.

Rena groaned. "Stop it. Stop it, Jurina!! My ears, urghh! Everyone are sleeping!" She closed her ears.

Jurina didn't care to what Rena said, she kept dragging her chair around like a kid who won't stop until she get what she want.

Rena gave up. "Okay, okay! I will do it." She sighed. "Jurina, you didn't know how much I hope to use my gun now." She stood in front of Jurina and she calmly untied Jurina. "Quit staring me!" She felt that Jurina kept looking at her.

After Jurina completely released by Rena, she grabbed Rena waist and pulled Rena's body into her hug. She hugged Rena tightly, she buried her face on Rena's stomach.

"J-jurina..." Rena totally blushed by Jurina's act. Th-this kid is totally annoying! Rena tried to ran away from Jurina's hug.

"Stop struggling, Rena. I missed you, let me hug you for a little longer." Jurina closed her eyes and then she took a deep breath. Jurina can feel Rena's sweet scent. Jurina caressed Rena's bare waist, she wanna feel Rena's smooth-milky skin. "You never know how much I missed you."

Rena didn't know how to respond Jurina's words, so... she chose to not answered her. I wonder if she has the double personalities. She acted like an very-annoying-spoiled-child in a few minutes ago!! And now.... suddenly, she acts like an adult and show me her sweetness and show her...... love. "Let go of me!!"

"Rena, until yesterday.... everytime I hugged you, I always wanna protect you because you looked so fragile in my hands... in my arms. But I'm wrong, you're much stronger than I ever imagined about you... You're so strong and it makes me really afraid now.

I'm afraid that... I'm not strong enough to protect you....
I'm afraid that...I'm not strong enough to hold you and to keeping you stay by my side.
I'm afraid that... I'm not strong enough to accept the reality if someday... you will fly away from my arms."

Rena remained silent.

"Okay." Jurina let go of her arms from Rena's waist. She slowly pushed Rena away so she can stand up without bumping her. "I will go to sleep." Jurina smiled. "Thank you for untying me, I've waited you for 3 hours."

Rena saw Jurina turned away and wanna went upstairs. "Why don't you angry at me? I will feel better if you just scold me."

Jurina turned back. "Scolding you??" She smiled at Rena again. "I don't know. It seems my love for you is much bigger than my anger. I love you just a little too much, Rena. I know... it's my stupidity." Jurina continued her steps, she went upstairs.

Rena stunned. Sh-she still loves me?? After what happened between us?! Rena's eyes get teary.

Rena went upstairs quickly to chase Jurina. She stopped when she saw Jurina still on the way through the kitchen. "Look at me, Matsui Jurina!"

Jurina gasped, she turned around. Jurina saw Rena's teary eyes. "Why are you crying? I mean... I'm the one who have broken heart so I think... it should be me who crying." Jurina let out a soft chuckle.

Rena slowly approached Jurina. "How can you leave me behind....... " she took Jurina's hand and put it on her left chest, "....... after you made my heart pounding crazily like this?!"

Jurina felt Rena's heartbeat. It beating rapidly... "Then... what should I do?"

Rena came closer to Jurina. "Kiss me slowly."

Without a futher ado, Jurina hugged Rena and pressed her lips onto Rena's lips. After that, she licked every part of it, she want to taste every inch of Rena's lips. Just like Rena said before, she kissed her slowly instead of gave her the passionate one. I want her to feel my love now.... not my lust.

Rena broke the kiss. "You can sleep in my room."

Jurina's cheeks blushed crazily. "Y-you want to-"

Rena blushed too after she realized what Jurina thinking. She smacked Jurina's head. "Do-don't get it wrong!! I'm just thinking that your room is too small for 3 people. Well, I pull back my words.... you can sleep with your friends then." Rena walked away from Jurina.

Jurina giggled. "Rena, can you stop being a tsundere girl? You can simply say that you love me and you don't wanna see me sleep with another girl except you." She walked and followed Rena entered her room.

"I didn't love you!"

"Yes, you do... definitely." Jurina laughed.

========================= Next Day ======================

= AtsuMina (1) =

Takamina opened her eyes slowly. She yawned but after that she grimaced in pain. "Aww!! My face!! It's totally hurt." She woke up and sat on the bed "Awww!! My stomach is hurt too!!" She was about to stand up but.... "Aaawwww!! Even my back too?! Those thieves will get my revenge someday."

"Where's Jurina?"

Takamina surprised with the voice that came from nowhere. She looked around, she saw Mayu sat on a chair... she looked out the window. "Don't shocking me like that! I didn't see her since last night. Maybe she still waiting someone to untie her." She rolled her eyes. "Wait here, I will looking for her."

She prepare herself, in case the 'perfect thieves' will attack her like last night again. But when she went out from the bedroom, her eyes grew bigger. "Wh-what happens here??"

The scene in the living room was totally different with what she imagined before.

Takamina saw Jurina teached Rena how to play the guitar.. they sat on the couch, Jurina played some guitar chord keys and Rena tried to imitated Jurina's finger. Rena smacked Jurina's head when Jurina teased her because she was bad at it.

Yuki and Sae sat on a different couch, they laughed when they saw double Matsui smacked each other head because Jurina licked Rena's lollipop without her permission.

Sayaka stood up, she raised both of her hands.. she enjoyed her victory. Yuko seemed irritated by Sayaka's act, she threw the stick playstation from her hand. Sayaka did the highfive with everyone in that room, (strangely) with Jurina too.

Takamina looked around. Where's Maeda and Kojima?

"Come on, sergeant!! Let's play this game with me. All girls here already defeated by me." Sayaka grinned as she pointed at the TV screen.

Takamina saw a stick playstation in Sayaka's hand and then she glanced at the TV. Sh-she calling me to play 'Street Fighter' game with her?! Wow... they looks like....... normal. Where's the 'bloodthirsty' thieves that punched my face last night???

Takamina nodded. "Okay, let's play."

*1 hour later*

"I lost????!!  Again?!" Takamina groaned.

Sae laughed. "Yeah... 3 times. I've told you, Sayaka is a pure blood fighter!"

Yuko clapped her hands. "Come on - come on - come on. Let's decide her punishment!!" She looked excited.

"Eehh?! This game have a punishment??? Why don't you tell it before?"

Sayaka shrugged. "If we tell it to you, you will refuse to play with us." She grinned.

"Ah! I get an idea!" Yuki raised her hands. "How about.... we put 5 balloons on her head and then we will shoot it one by one."

"Wa-wait... what?!!! Jurina... help me!"

Jurina simply shrugged. "You playing with the villain, you must receive the consequence. I can't do anything."

Takamina surprised. "You're on their side??!! I will fired you from my team!"

"Guys! I bought some ice creams, you want it?" Acchan came from the kitchen, she brought a big plastic.

"Sure!!" Everyone ran towards Acchan and picked their ice cream.

Jurina stood in front of Acchan. "Ca-can I get one too, leader? That..." She pointed at a vanilla ice cream. "That one." Jurina looked at Acchan with her pleading-cute eyes.

Acchan chuckled. She ruffled Jurina's hair. "Of course, kiddo."

"Yeaayyy!!" Jurina happily took hers.

Rena pinch Jurina's arm. "Don't ever show your puppy eyes to the others again!"

"Aww!! Okay-okay." Jurina caressed her arms. "It's hurt."

Takamina looked at Acchan. "How about me? Did you count me too?"

Acchan surprised. She didn't see Takamina before, maybe it was because Takamina's height lower than the others. "No." She walked back to the kitchen.

Takamina stood and followed Acchan to the kitchen. "We need to talk."

"There's nothing to talk about." Acchan opened the refrigerator.

Takamina harshly pushed the refrigerator door and it caused it closed again. "We have many things to talk about." She stared at Acchan. "So, is this the reason why you left me at the restaurant last time?"

*FLASHBACK*

Before Takamina entered the restaurant, she tidy up her uniform. She opened the door.

Everyone looked at her and whispered each other. "Look - look. The sergeant!" "Yes. He looks so cool." "He's handsome." "He's my type." "It must be fun if he become my boyfriend, I will totally safe around him."

Takamina smiled at them and then she looked around. Ah, Maeda is there. She walked and approached Maeda's table. "Hi."

Acchan started crying.

Wh-what happened? Why she looks so shock? Am I did something wrong? "Hey, what's wrong?" She tried to touch Acchan's shoulder.

"Don't touch me!!" Acchan shouted out and it caused everyone in the restaurant looked at them.

"I don't understand..." Takamina looked totally confused.

Acchan stood and she pointed Takamina's face. "You!! You didn't know what you did to me?! You're a fu*king police, I hate you!! I will slap your face if we meet again, Bakamina!!" She grabbed her handbag and then she left Takamina alone.

What?! What have I done? She pointed her own face.

Everyone started to whispering again. "Hey, did he make the girl pregnant?" "Maybe." "He didn't have any responsibility at all!" "How can he broke up with her girlfriend like that?" "How can he did something like that?! I feel pity for the baby." "He is not that cool and handsome." "Yeahh.. after second thought, he's not my type, he's too short." "He's too small for me."

Takamina always boiled everytime someone mentioned about her height. "Hey! I didn't make her pregnant!" She took off his hat. "I'm a girl!" She rushed out from the restaurant. "Don't ever mention about my height again!"

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Acchan didn't answer her.

"Maeda... did you ever think about me?"

Acchan remained silent.

Takamina felt irritated because Acchan didn't say anything. "Why you lead these people became the thieves?! You lead these girls against the law! Sooner or later you will face me in the court. You are not worthy to get my love!"

Acchan slapped Takamina. "You didn't know anything about me... about us. You better watch out with your mouth! We can easily kill you and your friends here." She pointed at Takamina's face. "One thing again. This is my life and my choice, so it is not your business!!"

Takamina shocked. She touched her red cheek. "You chose the wrong path for your life, Maeda!"

"You judge us because you don't understand about us! You better go away from me if our business is over, I don't want to see your face again." Acchan looked away. "Leave me alone."

Should I leave her? Takamina reached Acchan's face, she made Acchan looked at her. "Don't cry." She wiped Acchan's tears. "And please... I beg you... don't ever let me push you away." She pulled Acchan into her hug. "Let's through this, together."

Acchan surprised. "Le-let go of me!"

"No, I won't!" Takamina hugged Acchan more tight. "I won't let you leave me again. After you left me last time, I think about you a lot." She cried. "And after I saw you last night.. your true self, I realize that.... I think about you more than I probably should."

"Do you hate me?"

Takamina smiled. "No."

"Really? What do you think about me now?" Acchan leaned her chin on Takamina's shoulder.

"Let's see... Ummm.." She let go of her arms and then she pecked Acchan's lips. "I think that I want to stay by your side until I can always be the last thing on your mind before you go to bed."

Acchan's cheek burning up. "Umm... I'm just kidding when I said that I didn't buy the ice cream for you." She walked towards the refrigerator and then she took a chocolate ice cream from the freezer. "This is for you." She looked away.

Takamina chuckled. "Well... then... Am I became too emotional because of a piece of ice cream?" She touched Acchan's cheek and she caressed it slowly. "Promise me to not push me away. Maybe I'm a baka girl, as you always say to me, but I'm not too stupid to realize that I'll suffering if you leave me."

"Sorry... I can't promising anything to you right now."

Takamina sighed. "Okay." She grabbed her ice cream and then she went back to the living room. "Okay, I'm agree with my punishment!" She grinned.

Everyone surprised.

Yuki smirked. "Well... it'll be fun."

"Hey, I won't forget to tell you that Yuko is a little bit weak in using a gun." Rena sucking her lollipop again.

Yuko closed her ears, "I hate balloon!!! Maybe me I'll end up with shooting you head." She sighed.

Takamina gulped. "Then... you better dig my grave now."

Yuki laughed at them, but she stopped until she realize something. She looked around. Where's Mayu? Is she still in her room?

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= MaYuki (1) =

Yuki opened the door, she saw Mayu sat in front of the mirror... treat her wound. "Ohayou."

Mayu turned her head. "What are you doing here?" Mayu said it in cold way.

Yuki smirked. "I wanna see my own girlfriend, what's so wrong with it?" She entered the room and then she sat on the bed. "Your friends already fooling around with my friends out there. Try to get along, we're team.... for some weeks."

Mayu looked away to the mirror. "I'm not interest." She looked at the mirror and she continued what she did before.

Yuki stood and then she approached Mayu. "Let me do it for you." She grabbed the cotton from Mayu's hand. She used alcohol to soak half of the cotton. She held Mayu's chin and pressed the cotton gently onto Mayu's wound... on the corner of Mayu's lips. Sae punched her too strong.

Mayu slapped Yuki's hand and it caused the cotton fell. "Let go of my face! I'm doing fine without you." She stood up, afterwards she walked and sat on the edge of the bed. "Just take care of your another girlfriend!"

"Don't make my situation become more complicated." She leaned her body onto the wall and she crossed her arms.

"You don't understand how much I cried!!!" She shed her tears... for a countless times since last night.

"Do you wanna break up with me?"

"......." Mayu smiled as her tears soaked her cheeks.

"Why are you smiling? Is it that happy for you to break up with me?"

"Giving you a faking smile is much easier for me, Yuki. You will never understand even if I tell you how sad I am."

"You're right, I won't understand." Yuki was about to leave the room but she stopped. "You're not the first girl who mad at me because of this. Honestly... I played with many girls, I even hurt my own friend here... Rena. I didn't see any difference between you and other girls.
Sae is the only one who keep opening her arms for me even though she knew it all." Yuki opened the door. "See you in our training room tomorrow. Maeda said that we will have some practice." She went out and closed the door.

Mayu stunned. Sh-she a player?! I gave my everything to a player?! Mayu sobbed. She doesn't love me.

========================== **** ==========================

=The Messy Collabroration =

*1st Lesson: Shots Accuracy*

They gathered on the house backyard.

Takamina gulped. "Wh-why there are 7 balloons on my head??" Takamina stunned as the balloons already hung on her head.

Everyone ignored Takamina.

"Then... we call our best shooters. Sae and Acchan, try it first and then you decide how far our distance from her." Yuki pointed at the balloons.

Acchan sighed. "Come on. Don't fooling around! We need to training our teamwork."

Yuko nodded her head agreeably.

"It's not a 'fooling' around', this can be counted as a lesson too. To know how good their shot accuracy." Sae took her gun.

*BANG!*

The bullet hit the 1st balloon.

Takamina gasped. "Hey!! Can you counting first before you shoot me?!!" She looked angry.

Sae shrugged. "Your enemy won't counting before they blow up your head." She passed her gun to Acchan's hand. "Your turn. Well... I think it's still too easy."

Acchan took 5 steps backwards. "I think it's enough."

"Oh, come on Maeda. We know that you much better than that! Are you afraid that we will kill your girlfriend?" Rena sucking her lollipop again.

"She is not my girlfriend!!" Takamina and Acchan said it in the same time.

"Okay - okay. Relax. Duh!" Rena rolled her eyes.

"I mean... not yet." Takamina blurted it as she saw Acchan's red cheeks.

"Okay!!" Acchan took 10 more steps backwards. "I think it's far enough." She pointed her gun at Takamina.

*BANG!*

"He-hey!!! Can someone please kindly counting it for me?! I may not die because of the bullet, but I will die because of a heart attack!!" Takamina glared at them.

Acchan walked slowly towards Takamina. "It's okay. As long as you don't move, you'll safe."

Takamina glared at Acchan. "Easy for you to say!"

"What? Do you want me to take your place? No problem. I know exactly about my team's ability." She smirked. "But you looks doubting your own team."

Takamina turned her head to the girls who already lined up in front of her. "Let's start!! Shot me as many as you like!!!"

Sayaka, Yuki, and Rena seemed didn't have any problem with it. Takamina was still breathing.

"I wanna try it too!!" Jurina raised her hand. "If Rena-chan can did it, I can to do it too." She grinned.

Rena ruffled Jurina's hair. "Good girl."

Takamina shocked. "A-are you sure, Jurina??!! You didn't use your gun for a quite long time. We even haven't time to practise!! Don't use me to impress your lover!" Takamina facepalmed. "I will die in my own friend's hand."

"I will shoot!" Jurina looked at Takamina for a while and then she closed her eyes.

Everyone shocked.

"He-hey!!! What are you doing??!!" Acchan suddenly got panicked.

Takamina laughed. "Are you worrying me??" She smirked. "Just like you said to me, Maeda. I know exactly about my team's ability too."

Jurina lifted her gun. She changed her expression to the serious one. "Don't underestimate my ability."

Jurina... don't fail me. I mean... don't kill me.

*BANG! BANG!*

Jurina shoots 2 balloons that left on Takamina's head.

Everyone stunned.

"D-did she just shoot with her eyes closed??" Sayaka can't blinked her eyes.

Rena's lollipop fell from her mouth. "I guess so."

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*2nd Lesson : Bare Hand Fight Ability*

= MaYuki (2) =

"Okay, face your pairing!!" Sayaka lead the next lesson because she's expert on it. "For this time, we just use our hands. No kick allowed."

Rena-Jurina, Takamina-Kojima, Acchan-Yuko, and Sae-Yuki.

Yuki turned her body. "Let's do it." She lifted her fists.

"......" Sae still stood while crossed her arms.

Yuki frowned. "What? Did you underestimate me?"

"No. I'm not." Sae pointed at the girl who sat on the bench. "I wanna fight with her."

"No, you can't!!" Takamina raised her voice. "She is not in charge to enter the 'battle fields', she's my team's analyzer. She only need to use her brain, do you hear me??!!" She glared at Sae.

"I wanna try." She stood up.

"What??!!!" Takamina and Jurina were totally shocked.

Yuki looked at Mayu. Will she be fine? She shrugged. "Well... I think I will only become a spectator for this time." She walked away and sat not far away from them. She leaned her back onto the wall.

Yuki focused her eyes to Sae and Mayu. It's really fun to see your girlfriends fight each other, interesting.

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WMatsui
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"You don't need to hold back your strenght, Jurina." Rena lifted her fists.

Jurina smirked. "Is it okay for you, Rena-chan? I will use this moment to take my revenge of all you did to me."

"I said.... don't hold back your strenght." She glared at her girlfriend.

****

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Takamina - Haruna
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"Are you okay, sergeant? You seems didn't really bright in fighting. And... I didn't want to mention about your height too." Haruna chuckled.

"You already mentioned it. You'll regret it." Takamina stared at Haruna.

Well..." Haruna wanna tease Takamina more. "Mariko always told me about you. She said that you're a prefect leader who can replace her place... but I'm sorry, she never talked about your fight ability."

"My hand will tell it to you." Takamina raised her fists.

*****

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Acchan - Yuko
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"I feel bored! I always become your pairing." Acchan sighed.

"I know.." Yuko smirked. "But... let's keep doing this seriously."

Acchan nodded. "Fine."

****

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Sae - Mayu
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"How is it feel?"

"What do you mean?" Mayu looked at Sae.

"Stole my girlfriend. Is it fun for you?"

Mayu shrugged. "Not fun actually." She smiled. "But at least... she already slept on my bed for...." She acted like she counting with her fingers. "...a countless times?" She smirked.

Sae spits. "You'll die as soon as Sayaka say 'start'."

"Wow. It didn't even close to freaking me out. You seems don't have an ability to make people pissed off ."

****

Sayaka blew her whistle. "START!"

Yuki watched them fighting carefully.

Jurina is a good fighter. She mostly can avoid Rena's fist. I'm sure that if her opponent isn't Rena, he/she will fell 5 minutes ago. Jurina seems hold back her punch many times and she choose to keep defending.

Takamina... she is not bad in 1 on 1 fight either. She only got tired easily. She just need to control her breath and stamina well if she wanna fight with 2 or 3 people in the same time.

Mayu. I'm totally impressed with her. She can dodge Sae's hit many times. As the time goes, she even can dodge it more and more often. She's smart, she use Sae's unstable temperament. She keep moving around and it causes Sae become impatient. Mayu still fight calmly.


But.... something changed when Sayaka gave them an instruction to used their foot too.

Jurina looked didn't have any problem with it, Takamina seemed tired and her punch become more slow and more weak than before, and Mayu.... she looked fine until Sae succeed kicked her head. Mayu fell onto the ground.

Yuki immediately stood up as she saw Sae kept kicking Mayu's stomach. Yuki felt the warm water flowed on her cheeks and fell onto her hands. She lifted both of her hands and looked at it. Why... Am I crying....?

Without the second thought, Yuki rushed into their training field. She pushed Sae harshly. "STOP IT!!!" And then she hugged Mayu, she wiped Mayu's bloody forehead with her hand.

Sae surprised. "You hugging her right in front of my eyes.... AGAIN??!!!"

Yuki bravely glared at Sae. "Yes, WHY??!!"

Sae shocked. She never saw those hatred eyes from Yuki before. She even felt that in a seconds ago, Yuki looked like wanna kill her.

Yuki carried Mayu's weak body, she lifted it with both of her hands. "A-are you okay, Mayuyu? Your wounds from last night haven't lost yet I still caused  some new wounds sculpted on your skin." She cried. "I'm so sorry."

Mayu gave Yuki her weak smile. "Don't worry... I'm fine." She touched Yuki's cheek. "I missed you."

"Let's go back. I will take care of you and this time... You can't refuse me again. I'm begging you." Yuki walked away and brought Mayu along with her.

Sayaka slapped Sae. "What are you doing??!!!" She slapped Sae again. "If you wanna fight so badly, do it with me!!!"

Everyone left Sae alone at the backyard after the gave Sae a cold gaze.

Sae knelt on the ground, she cried.. she sobbed. "Aaakkkkkhhhh!!!" She hit the ground over and over again until her hands bleeding.

Sae grabbed her own hair. "Y-yuki.... she leave me." her tears kept flowing. In these 3 years I keep forgive her and I don't leave her even if she stabbing my back over and over again. And now..... she dump me because of a weak girl?!!

God... take me to the time and to the place when everything between me and Yuki was fine.... It's all messed up today.

*At Yuki's Room*

Mayu lie down on the bed.

"You need to sleep." Yuki wiped Mayu's face with a warm-wet towel. She cleaned Mayu's hands and foot. "I won't let anyone can touch you so easily like that again."

Mayu tied her little finger to Yuki's little finger. "Pinky swear?"

Yuki chuckled while her tears still flowed. "Pinky swear." She pecked Mayu's forehead. "Now sleep. I will wait you here until you wake up again."

Mayu smiled. "I love you. Stop crying."

"You should be happy to see me crying, it'll show you how much I'm worried about you and how much I regretting all mistakes that I've ever done to you. I love you too."

Mayu lifted her hand and wiped Yuki's tears. "I've seen it now. I see enough, now stop crying."

Yuki nodded. She kissed Mayu's hand and then she caressed Mayu's head until Mayu fell asleep.

I see her difference from other girls now. Yuki smiled. She's the only one who can make me so sad and worried like this, her love for me is so innocent and it makes me wanna spend my entire life with her.

No matter what happened these last days, no matter how huge the mistake that I created, no matter how I deep I stabbed her heart... she take me back. I have to learn how to love her like the way she love me.

I love the way she need me, she's so fragile.. it even make myself become afraid to touch her. I'm afraid to hurt her.
Sae and Rena are totally different with her, they can take care of themself.. they didn't need me as much Mayu need me.

Mayu... you don't need to looking for me anymore because I already found my place to stay. I love you, I really do.


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= KojiYuu =

Yuko finished making her hot tea, she wanna brought it to her room. In the midway, she saw Kojima's door opened. She can't hold herself to not peeking.

She saw Kojima sat in front of the TV. She was about to walked away but she turned back. It's not a TV channel. She knocked the door.

Kojima turned her head. "Ah, Yuko?" She surprised because Yuko never approached her again after she chose Mariko to became a part of her heart.

"Yes, it's me." Yuko gave her cup to her. "I made it for me, but... I think you need it more than me."

"Thank you." Haruna took it from Yuko's hand.

"Why do you keep watching it?"

"Because it's the last moment of her life."

Yuko sighed. "I know how you feel, but you can't watch it in the middle of the night. It even freaking me out... no offense." She said it carefully because she didn't wanna make Kojima missunderstood.

Kojima smiled. "Don't worry, I'm fine." She took the remote. "Actually... I didn't play the whole tape, I just repeated this part."

Yuko saw the murderer stepped on Mariko's head before he fired his gun that made Mariko lost her life.
Yuko frowned. "What's so special about it? It's still freaking me out." She glanced at Kojima. "No offense."

Kojima rewind the video and the she zoom in Mariko's face. The video played again but it more slower now. Yuko can saw Mariko slowly looked at the camera and then Mariko move her lips weakly... I Love You. *BANG!*

Yuko gave Haruna a bitter smile. "Well... she still tried to be romantic even if that's her last seconds in this world.." Yuko turned away. "No offense." She went out from Kojima's room.

I'm so pathetic.

================== TO BE CONTINUED =================

Done!! Finally! Fiuhh...  :on drink: 2 chapters more.

I hope you like it.  :mon psst:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: mo-chan on November 21, 2013, 10:52:39 PM
no spoilar you're not gonna say what will happen next chap O.O
nya~ WMatsui were so funny and cute~~~
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: cisda83 on November 21, 2013, 11:02:29 PM
Well I understand that they loved one another but they are cops and thieves

Yuki chose Mayu... Yeah...

Atsumina and Wmatsui...too

Poor Sae... for being dump even after being a great girlfriend for Yuki

And Poor Haruna for losing her lover...

Yeah... Mariko is such a romantic person even before her death

What's going to happen next?

Would they be able to put everything in the right place?

Would they be able to kill or arrest the drug lord?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 22, 2013, 12:10:49 AM
I just have a word to describe this chapter:  PERFECT.

What I love the most was WMatsui and Mayuki's parts   :cathappy:
I love how they realized their love for each other >_______<

Then atsumina... I like how acchan blush w/ bakamina's words xDDDDDD  :cathappy:
I hope they can be a couple in the next chapter :D


About Sae.. I-DON'T-CARE  8)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: chichay12 on November 22, 2013, 12:12:37 AM
i still can believed mariko is dead *sigh
More atsumina please XD
Thank u for the update and update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: kamen_idol212 on November 22, 2013, 12:25:17 AM
yeah sir, i appreciate this part enough, Rena is such a tsundere though. and Sae looks so emotional when fought with Mayu, :thumbup  :twothumbs
looking forward for your next update, anakpanti-san....  XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 22, 2013, 12:53:53 AM
omg even is mariko was about to die she said this words :/
 o god i want more more more atsumina wmatsui and mayuki ahaha
seems everyone start becoming friends ^_^
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: olive29 on November 22, 2013, 01:10:55 AM
Like it? I LOVE IT !!!

Rena is a tsundere...

Finally...Yuki choose Mayu...

and Atsumina moment, too...  :inlove:

Can't wait for the next chapter...

Update soon, please... :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Kirozoro on November 22, 2013, 02:11:46 AM
Everyone has found their love, finally~

Poor Sae... Who will help ger from this depression? Sayaka...Twins Tower couple

Jurina and Rena couple is so cute. Rena is so tsunde

Yuki finally realize that se love Mayu

Aww Takaacchan still shy about their relationship

Kojiyuu will they come back together?

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: kazuski on November 22, 2013, 03:27:48 AM
Finally, thank you for the update and it awesome  :deco: :deco:

it a little bit weird when i want to know more about Kojiyuu couple than the other, even though i'm Atsumina shipper  XD
well, at least everycouple's case are fine now, isn't it? But Kojiyuu still so sad since Kojima can't forget Mariko and Poor Yuko  :(
the last line broke my heart, i can't feel how hurt Yuko are  :(
Hope thing will be better in the future, ganbate Yuko~  :cow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 22, 2013, 03:44:35 AM
Ahh... This is my favorite part, answering my readers comment.  :mon fan:

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@mo-chan :
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no spoiler you're not gonna say what will happen next chap O.O
Ahh.. I forgot.  :sweatdrop:
But... honestly, I didn't know how to write it.. too complicated.  :P
Next chapter they'll discuss about the strategy, they'll keep practicing to build their teamwork, and in the end of chapter they'll begin to attack.
I wanna try to resolve things between Yuki and Sae too..

@cisda83 :
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Yuki chose Mayu... Yeah...
Wh-why? You seems didn't like it.  :P

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Poor Sae... for being dump even after being a great girlfriend for Yuki
Sometimes... love can become really cruel.  :cry:

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Would they be able to put everything in the right place?
Would they be able to kill or arrest the drug lord?
That's my job.  O0
 :lol:

@koneki :
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I just have a word to describe this chapter:  PERFECT.
Thank you.  XD

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About Sae.. I-DON'T-CARE  8)
Ah, my SaeYuki feeling. :cry:

@Chichay12 :

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i still can believed mariko is dead *sigh
I still can believe it too.
It's the 2nd time I wrote a tiny part for Mariko..
1st.. she became a bad sister for Jurina.
2nd.. she passed away without seeing her girlfriend's face.  :cry:
I should write a better role for her later.  8)

@kamen_idol212 : Thank you for reading..  XD I'm happy to see your 1st comment in my fanfic.  :welcome

@mikaellitsa :
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o god i want more more more atsumina wmatsui and mayuki ahaha
*cough* Just to remind you, there are only 2 chapters left. :P

@olive29 : Thank you - Thank you - Thank you for reading mine. I'm waiting for your update as well.  ;)

@Kirozoro :
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Poor Sae... Who will help ger from this depression? Sayaka...Twins Tower couple
I want Sae be happy too.  :cry:

WMatsui --> Jurina is cute as always, tsundere Rena often make me laugh.
MaYuki --> Yeahh... Yuki need an extreme scene to make her realize about her true feelings. *facepalm*
AtsuMina --> Ahh... these leaders. It's true that they have interest towards each other.. but their job will become a huge obstacle for their relationship.
KojiYuu --> Will Kojima can easily burying her feeling towards Mariko and come back with Yuko?

@kazuski :
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it a little bit weird when i want to know more about Kojiyuu couple than the other, even though i'm Atsumina shipper  XD
I wonder about them too.
Maybe it's because... the other pairings already in their halfway and nearly to end, but KojiYuu itself still stand on the first ladder...
Sometimes... 'restart' the relationship is more difficult rather than start from the beginning (like others).

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Thank you.  It makes my battery recharged quickly and be able to write again. :mon XD:

It's a little bit hard for me to maintain many pairings in one fanfic.  :lol:
But.. I hope the story that I made for each pairing didn't disappoint you.  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: triela on November 22, 2013, 05:37:43 AM
I need more atsumina  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: noah minami on November 22, 2013, 06:17:20 AM
mariko is dead.kinda sad because i want know more about mariharu moment..
poor takamina for the punishment.
i will wait for more...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 22, 2013, 06:56:06 AM
Love Prevails! The police team has ignored the status of their 'lovers'. :heart:

Takamina is being made fun of. :lol:

I feel sad for Yuko. Kojiharu still loves Mariko-sama.

This chapter got lots of sweet moments. I love it. :luvluv2:

The love problems are solved... for now(except Kojiyuu).

What will happen to Maeda's team after the collaboration? Will they turn good or maybe Takahashi's team will become thieves too?

Only two chapters left plus an omake about Maeda's team... Although I want more I don't want it to end sooner. :cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: gek geki on November 22, 2013, 10:47:29 AM
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sweet~
their moment is funny especially atsumina,the others make fun of her
that bloons LooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooL

finally yuki~ yeah your place is mayu only

also rena and jurina finally they officially together without secret~ cute jurina
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 22, 2013, 10:57:00 AM
Ahh... This is my favorite part, answering my readers comment.  :mon fan:

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@koneki :
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I just have a word to describe this chapter:  PERFECT.
Thank you.  XD

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About Sae.. I-DON'T-CARE  8)
Ah, my SaeYuki feeling. :cry:

Sorry  XD I hate saeyuki ~~~ I'm a MaYuki shipper :P
I only read saeyuki when WMatsui is in the same story as main couple
...and you don't know how hard was start to read those kind of stories even when wmatsui was the main couple xDDDDDDDDD


yei~
I'm waiting for you next update :P and for MORE WMATSUI MOMENT ~~ YESS  :cathappy:

see ya!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: AshuraX on November 22, 2013, 01:22:41 PM
Sayaka's pissed, Yuki's in doubt, Sae's depressed, Mayu's Mayu, Yuko's having a hard time, Rena's opening up, Jurina's unfazed, Acchan's still alive and Takamina's short.

Okay, no AtsuYuu fight?!
Tch.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: White Hawk on November 22, 2013, 01:24:38 PM
Aww~ I like TsundeRena~! :lol:
WMatsui is so sweet XD

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Jurina felt Rena's heartbeat. It beating rapidly... "Then... what should I do?"

Rena came closer to Jurina. "Kiss me slowly."
:twothumbs

Eh? Taka is a boy? LOL! I thought she's a girl in this story :lol:
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"I think that I want to stay by your side until I can always be the last thing on your mind before you go to bed."
:wub: I didn't know if Taka can be this sweet~ :D

How can Jurina shoot so accurate like that with her eyes closed? :shocked
Aand.. Yuko didn't shoot the balloon on Taka's head? XD
Oh right! She hates balloons :lol: :P

Mayu really love Yuki eh? That's too easy for Yuki. She didn't even need to try to get Mayu back xD
Why I want Yuki at least feel how hurt is it to be two-timed xD She's so heartless :smhid
She already hurt 3 people OMG LOL xD And she didn't even feel guilty or something? But well, it's a good thing she have Mayu, now she will stop becoming a player :D And Mayu won't be sad anymore :D
But,, poor Sae, I hope someone will truly love her *coughSayakacough*

Yukooo-saan :cry:
Don't worry, sooner or later KojiHaru will move on from Mariko :) and love you back :wub:

Thankyou so much for the update~!
I can't really wait for your next update :D
Please update soon~^^
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: qweakb on November 22, 2013, 04:01:11 PM
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@mikaellitsa :
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o god i want more more more atsumina wmatsui and mayuki ahaha
*cough* Just to remind you, there are only 2 chapters left. :P

Make it more chapters!  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:

 :kneelbow: +  :shifty:

LOL...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Zita on November 22, 2013, 05:31:01 PM
Only thing which is bothering me is Yuko.  :(
And I am completely happy about wmatsui and mayuki. XD
They mistook Takamina with a boy. :lol:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 22, 2013, 05:49:11 PM
can't say anymore...

PERFECT....  :thumbup

or maybe almost...
coz you still have 2 chapters left... hehehe...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Chanaline on November 22, 2013, 07:03:49 PM
I want Mayu to be the more cool in this story!!!! (I don't her to be cool with her brain...) A gun!!!! Like she is a sniper!!! Ouahhh!! :bleed eyes:

But no! You already have the plot XD

Well just do what you want!!!! I like this part!! Mayuki finally together!!!!

I won't say that I don't really care about Sae (LoL I say it uhuhu :lol: )
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 23, 2013, 02:46:25 AM
@triela :
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I need more atsumina
I'll give it to you in last chap.  :P

@noah minami :
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mariko is dead.kinda sad because i want know more about mariharu moment..
Okay, I'll write it in special chap.  :)

@Konoe :
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I feel sad for Yuko. Kojiharu still loves Mariko-sama.
Should I make them as a couple? But I didn't write KojiYuu on my title. :lol:

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This chapter got lots of sweet moments. I love it.
The love problems are solved... for now(except Kojiyuu).
Solved? Not yet. :P

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Only two chapters left plus an omake about Maeda's team... Although I want more I don't want it to end sooner. :cry:
I can't write this more longer. It's only 10 shots but head already exploded.  :bleed eyes:

@gek geki : I had to scroll my screen 3 times until I can read your comment.  :lol:
Thanks for reading.  XD

@koneki :
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Sorry  XD I hate saeyuki ~~~ I'm a MaYuki shipper :P
I only read saeyuki when WMatsui is in the same story as main couple
Yeahh.. I know it since I wrote 'What should I do?'... you refused to read it.  :P

@AshuraX :
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Okay, no AtsuYuu fight?!
Do you mean... they fight each other? Okay, I'll give it to you in next chap.

@White Hawk :
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Eh? Taka is a boy? LOL! I thought she's a girl in this story :lol:
:shocked No... she's a girl. People in the restaurant mistook Takamina with a boy because she hide her hair in the cap.
This:
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Takamina always boiled everytime someone mentioned about her height. "Hey! I didn't make her pregnant!" She took off his hat. "I'm a girl!"
XD

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How can Jurina shoot so accurate like that with her eyes closed? :shocked
Actually... she's really good in fight stuff and in using a gun... but I never write about it more. Maybe next chap.  :D

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Mayu really love Yuki eh? That's too easy for Yuki. She didn't even need to try to get Mayu back xD
Why I want Yuki at least feel how hurt is it to be two-timed xD She's so heartless :smhid
She already hurt 3 people OMG LOL xD And she didn't even feel guilty or something?
I didn't want to mention it but...... Yuki will get her punishment later. :)

@qweakb :
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Make it more chapters!  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:
 :kneelbow: +  :shifty:
LOL...
:bleed eyes: It's the 2nd time for me that my readers wanna stabbing me.  :lol:

@Zita :
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Only thing which is bothering me is Yuko.  :(
Yuko already had some hard time long before MaYuki, AtsuMina, and WMatsui exist.... it'll be revealed in special chap.  :(

@edogawa4869 :
Well... It's not perfect though but... thank you for your compliment.  :twothumbs

@Chanaline :
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I want Mayu to be the more cool in this story!!!! (I don't her to be cool with her brain...) A gun!!!! Like she is a sniper!!! Ouahhh!! :bleed eyes:
But no! You already have the plot XD
Why do you tell me about this when it almost ended?? :cry:
I'll think about it if you tell me earlier. I'm sorry.  :P
But... wait a minute...... a sniper??!! In another fanfic, maybe I can write her as a terrorist or something  :lol:

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I won't say that I don't really care about Sae (LoL I say it uhuhu :lol: )
Even though some of my readers didn't really care about her, I can't let my character desperate without any explanation until the story ended..
Too tragic.  :lol:

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Thank you again.  :ptam-glow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Konoe on November 23, 2013, 10:33:08 AM
@Konoe :
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I feel sad for Yuko. Kojiharu still loves Mariko-sama.
Should I make them as a couple? But I didn't write KojiYuu on my title. :lol:

If you can make Kojiyuu please do so. :kneelbow:

It's doesn't matter if they are not part in the title besides you didn't expect Kojiharu to win the poll.

I love Chanaline's idea. "Mayu The Sniper". That is so cool. :ding: Although it is very late to say that. :nervous
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Terragen on November 23, 2013, 10:52:14 AM
2 more chapter

My eyes!

I had waterfall on my eyes

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: xxx220 on November 23, 2013, 03:05:33 PM
Please Continued ... :heart: :heart: :twothumbs

Jurina is so Cute with Rena ... :lol: :lol: :lol:

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Chanaline on November 24, 2013, 01:45:20 PM
Then I Will cry.... :cry:

Yay Konoe-chan :deco:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: karenchan on November 24, 2013, 07:25:07 PM
Seriously. I have become your fan, i mean completely. Before this its only 50%.
But after reading this 8/10 shots. You win my heart completely  :heart: :heart: :heart:
THANK YOU. I've mention this before, but as i'm working on my degree, i take a very tough course  :cry: :cry:
But I survive because i have all this fanfic as my stress reliever.
Hontou ni arigato gozaimasu  :bow: :bow: :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Shinoki on November 24, 2013, 11:52:05 PM
New Reader... I shall make my font size big as to show my enthusiasm... in 3, 2, 1






Rena-chan's character is AWESOME!! ...poor Mariko-sama... sighs... MAYUKi prevails!! Baka Sae... somehow I feel like Sayaka should get together with her? Wmatsui WMatsui! WMatsui!! BANZAI WORLD!! Takamina lol... Agh! YUKIRIN... dies...KojiYuu moment, yea, squirrel, you gotta do your best! *spazzes Ultimately, this is awesome!

Edit: Oh yeah, I keep on forgetting the most important parts of what I say, can't wait for what comes next~ ganbatte!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Koneki on November 29, 2013, 04:51:54 AM
When the part 9??  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: anakpanti on November 29, 2013, 05:23:29 AM
@Koneki :
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When the part 9??  :cry: :cry: :cry:
okay.. okay, don't cry... I'll post it on Sunday.  XD

@Terragen :
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I had waterfall on my eyes
Oh, come on... you already knew how it ends. I think it's not too sad for you anymore. :P

@xxx220 : Thank you. I'll post it as soon as possible.

@karenchan:
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Seriously. I have become your fan, i mean completely. Before this its only 50%.
But after reading this 8/10 shots. You win my heart completely  :heart: :heart: :heart:
50% to 100%??!! Wooww.. I'm really glad.  :w00t:
Are you already done with your exam? If not... don't read the next part. It won't become your stress reliever anymore.  :P

@Shinoki:
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I shall make my font size big as to show my enthusiasm
O-okay.... okay... Now, I know how big your enthusiasm.  :inlove:
You're a new reader, so.. you read part 1-8 in one go??  :shocked
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: White Hawk on November 29, 2013, 12:51:23 PM
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:shocked No... she's a girl. People in the restaurant mistook Takamina with a boy because she hide her hair in the cap.
Oh! Sorry, my bad xD

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I didn't want to mention it but...... Yuki will get her punishment later. :)
Really?? Then, I can't wait :lol:

Anyway, hope you update soon :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.2]
Post by: Konoe on December 01, 2013, 02:50:36 AM
Today is Sunday. :kekeke:

I'm anxiously waiting. :cool1:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: anakpanti on December 01, 2013, 10:27:07 AM
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PART 9

Yuko gave Haruna a bitter smile. “Well… she still tried to be romantic even if that’s her last seconds in this world..” Yuko turned away. “No offense.” She went out from Kojima’s room.

Yuko closed Kojima’s door. She leaned her body on the wall as her tears rolled on her cheeks. I’m so pathetic.

The door opened again. “Yuko.” Kojima dragged Yuko back into her room.

Yuko gasped. She didn’t expect that Kojima would open the door. She looked away to wipe her tears and then she looked at Kojima… she smiled. “Yes?”

"I’m so sorry." Kojima stared at the floor. "I’ve hurt you too much. It’s been some years but I never say it properly to you… I left you behind without any explanation." Kojima shed her tears.

Yuko surprised because of Kojima’s sudden statement. She wasn’t expect Kojima would raise this topic again… the topic that she really wanted to forget. Yuko felt the deep pain pierce her heart.

"I’ve broke your heart for years…. and it broke mine as well. At that time I- I was in love with you too, but somehow… I realized that my love for Mariko seemed mor-" Kojima stopped talking because she felt Yuko’s palm on her cheek.

"It’s enough… I understand. I’m happy to know that at that time… you love me too." Yuko moved her hands downwards, she held Kojima’s hand. "Look at me." She made her voice as soft as she could.

Kojima lifted her head slowly, she saw Yuko smiled at her.

"Let’s be friends… again."

Kojima couldn’t slap or pinch her own face because both of her hands held by Yuko, so she blinked many times instead… to make sure that it wasn’t a dream. “R-really??”

"Yeahhh……" Yuko looked away. "Even though I hate Mariko as a police and as your girlfriend, but still… I feel sorry for her. The murd-"

Kojima released her hands from Yuko and then she wrapped it around Yuko’s neck. She pulled Yuko’s body, she hugged her. “Thank you, squirrel.”

"H-hey!!" Yuko pulled back her body. "D-don’t get too excited. If it wasn’t him, I could become the one who kill her anyway. The murderer only stole my job."

Kojima smiled. “I know you so well, Yuko… you won’t do that. You often said that you wanna kill me too, but you didn’t. You even asked us to be friends again.”

"Tsk. I hate to admit it but… yeah, you’re right." Yuko felt irritated because she didn’t expect that Kojima can understand her very well. Although she really hate Mariko, but she was Kojima’s happiness. She didn’t have a heart to kill Mariko. "But… I beaten you up." Yuko caressed the bruises on Kojima’s face.

Kojima chuckled. “Yeahh… you was succeeded in made my face looked so messed up.” She shrugged. “You hit my face a lot. At least I’m not dead.” She grinned.

"But you were dying. We even didn’t feed you for 3 days. I’m sorry… I couldn’t control my anger. I’m sure that you suffered."

"It’s okay. What I did in the past is wrong, I even almost kill Yuki back then. It’s my consequence." Kojima glanced at Yuko eyes. "Do you wanna sleep here?" She said it because she saw that Yuko’s tears almost falling. "We can playing cards until we fall asleep."

"Good idea." Yuko smirked. "What’s the prize for the winner?"

Kojima rolled her eyes. “Everything is okay EXCEPT the pervert things.”

Yuko giggled. “Again.. you can read my mind.”

Kojima closed the door.

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= Last Lesson : Battle Field =

Acchan sat on the front seat with Sae who already held the steering wheel. “Come on, guys!!”

Yuko rubbed her eyes. “Alright - alright!! We’re still sleepy, Maeda.” She stepped into the jeep.

"Where are we going?" Yuki walked out from the house.

"To-" Acchan heard Sae grumbled, so… "Yuki, you better ride another car with Sayaka."

Yuki sighed. She looked at the members who ride with Acchan.. Sae, Yuko, Kojima, and Rena. “Okay, but where-“

"Don’t worry. Sayaka already knew it, you can ask her."

Yuki shrugged. She looked at another jeep, the red one. She walked towards it. “Wow… since when both of you get along together?” She smirked at Sayaka and Takamina who sat on the front seat.

"Your leader forced me to go with her." Takamina pouted.

Sayaka laughed. “What should we do with them, Yuki? We’re in the same team.” She turned on the car. “Let’s go to the hill.”

"Wait… what??!! We gonna do the real practice?! With them??" Yuki pointed at Takamina Team. "We’ll never going to win."

"Did you forget? We have a police who can shoot with eyes closed."

Jurina grinned and then she offered her hand to help Yuki get into the jeep. “We become teammates again.”

Sayaka started to drive while another jeep already went first by passed another way.

"Yuki."

Yuki felt someone grabbed her shirt. She turned her head. “Mayu.” She hugged Mayu. “You don’t have to go.”

Jurina coughed. “Honestly… we really need her. Another team have my Rena-chan!! Can you imagine how scary her brain?? Tsk.”

Yuki let Mayu curled up in her hug. “Of course I know.” Yuki rolled her eyes. “I’ve known her long before you meet her.”

"Somehow… it makes me jealous." Mayu gave a soft punch to Yuki’s chest.

Yuki giggled. Yuki put her chin on Mayu’s head and she tightened her hug. “Don’t worry, I’m with you now.”

"Wait… what is it? Is there something that I miss??" Jurina glared at Mayu and Yuki.

Yuki was about to talk but Takamina yelled first. “We arrived!! Take your bag under your seat!”

Sayaka knocked the window. “Come on, come on. We must hurry before something happen.”

Yuki, Mayu, and Jurina carried the black backpack and then they get out from the car.

"Explain about ‘something happen’ to me." Mayu looked confused.

*BANG!*

Someone fired her gun to the car and left white mark on it.

"Before that happen again." Takamina grabbed Mayu’s hand. They ran and hide behind the huge tree. "I guess.. you already understand. We’re the red team and they’re the black team."

Mayu seemed surprised but then… she nodded. “Real practice.”

Yuki opened her backpack. “Take your gun. Don’t worry we only use the fake guns for practise." She wear the vest quickly. "Our clothes have a sensor, the lamp will be turned to the red if you ‘die’." She pointed at the small green light on their black clothes.

Jurina put her earphone. “Cool. I feel like a FBI Agent.”

Sayaka pointed at an old house that looked far enough from their place, not too big… it only had 3 floors. “The first one who can kill all the opponent’s members and take the opponent’s flag inside that house, will become the winner.”

Jurina stunned. “Are you sure that the house didn’t have the ghost?? It makes me chills.”

"Jurina!! That’s not the case now." Takamina smacked Jurina’s head. "Let’s take them down." She smirked.

Yuki grabbed Mayu’s hand. “Stay close to me.”

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"Seriously, Sae. You don’t have to shoot them like that. You almost shot my girlfriend." Rena leaned her body onto the tree while she cleaned her nail with a knife. "Yuki will hunt you for sure if your shots hit Mayu that early."

Sae shrugged. “I just want they know that the game already started.”

"Yeahh… just take it easy." Yuko hold Sae’s shoulder. "We will defeat them for sure."

Acchan still stared the red team, she narrowed her eyes. ”Don’t underestimate the police team.”

"Come on, I think it’s better to enter the house from the back door. I’m sure that they’ll come from the main door." Kojima pointed at the footpaths behind them.

*15 Minutes Later*

The black team almost arrive at the old house.

Yuko lead them, she walked in front of them. “See, Maeda. I’ve told you that we will easily win th-” She shocked because she felt her left feet tied by something. “Waaaa!!!” Yuko fell and then her body pulled to the top. She hanging upside down on the tree.

*BANG!*

Everyone looked up.

Jurina blew her gun’s mouth. “I’m so sorry, Oshima-san. Don’t underestimate the power of being underestimated." She grinned as she saw the red light on Yuko’s clothes.

"Sh*t!!" Rena fired her gun but Jurina hide behind the branch.

"See you later, honey." Jurina hang her belt to a rope that connected with another tree. She held her belt with both of her hands and then she used the rope and the belt to slided away to another tree. After she completely stood on another tree’s branch, she cut the rope and then she slided away by another rope again.

A few seconds later, the black team couldn’t see Jurina anymore.

Acchan sighed. “See? Underestimate is the sign of getting fucked up.”

Yuko shrugged “I’m sorry. Put me down, please. I’m dizzy.”

"How can they know that we will take this path?? Even Jurina already waited us up there!!" Sae sighed and then she started to climb the tree to help Yuko.

Rena bite her candy until it crushed into the pieces and then she threw the lollipop’s stick. “Watanabe.”

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Jurina landed on the ground. “Game over for Yuko.”

"Yeaayyy!!" Takamina did the highfive with Jurina.

"Tsk. You should take Rena instead of her. Rena is their brain!!" Mayu smacked her forehead.

Jurina grinned. “I can’t ‘kill’ my own girlfriend.”

"Geez!" Mayu turned on her earphone. "Yuki and Sayaka, you can come back. Jurina already found them and ‘kill’ Yuko. They are not going to thru those paths."

Yuko?! Why sh-" Both of Yuki and Sayaka seemed annoyed.

"Don’t ask me." She glared at Jurina.

Okay, We’ll come back.

Mayu turned off her earphone.

"You’re smart, Mayu. You ask 3 of us to wait at every possible paths to reach the house and put the trap on it. And.. the rope slide is a brilian idea!!" Takamina seemed excited.

"Yeah… I’m smart. But there’s someone who didn’t wisely in using a chance that I made."

"Okay-okay, sorry. If there’s a second chance, I’ll try to give her the red light. Promise!" Jurina made a peace sign with her fingers.

*10 Minutes Later*

The red team finally entered the house. But as soon as Mayu opened the door…

*BANG!*

"Mayu, watch out!" Yuki tried to pulled her, but it was too late. Mayu’s light turned to the red one.

"That’s for Yuko."

Jurina fired her gun, but Kojima climbed upstairs quickly and hide behind the wall. Jurina closed the door again.

Yuki groaned. “Mayu, you can’t easily opened your enemy’s door like that!! If this is a real case, you would die! Don’t be stupid!” She angry at Mayu.

Takamina who stood behind Mayu made a cross sign with her hands and then she moved her lips without a sound. “Don’t-call-her-stupid.

Mayu released her wrist from Yuki’s grip. She crossed her arms. “Okay, smartie!! It’s okay for me to die since my job is as a police.. I’m ready to die anytime. Let’s see how long you will live!” She walked away from the house.

Yuki sighed.

Jurina poked Yuki’s shoulder. “Do you know about her IQ? It’s too scary to be mentioned.”

Yuki lifted her gun. “Her great IQ won’t useful if she didn’t know how to use it in the battle fields.”

"Let’s split up. Me and Sergeant will go to the left and both of you go to another side. Be sure to turn on your earphones."

Yuki and Jurina nodded. They rushed to the right of the house and then they quietly entered the house from a big window. They shocked because Rena already stood in front of them and pointed her gun straight to them.

Yuki and Jurina looked at each other. “O ow.” Jurina gave Yuki a weird smile.

"Hide!!" Yuki ran quickly. She tilted the table and hide behind it.

Jurina still stunned on her spot. She wanna shoot Rena but she seemed hesitant to do it. She gulped. “R-rena chan…. can we avoid each other and ‘kill’ another members instead?”

Rena smirked because she knew her girlfriend’s weakness. Jurina didn’t want to shoot me.

*BANG!* Rena fired her gun but Jurina could avoid it nicely.

"R-rena chan! Calm down!! Can’t we just avoid each other and ‘kill’ other members instead??"

Rena rolled her eyes. *BANG!* And again.. Jurina could avoid it.

"Come on Jurina!! This is only a game. Shoot me."

Yuki smacked her head. What happen with Jurina?! A few seconds later.. she smirked as she got an idea. “Jurina!! How was it?”

Jurina seemed confused. “How about what?”

"How was your first night?? Did you feel amazing when you slept with her?"

*BANG!* Rena fired her gun, but this time not to Jurina. She fired her gun to a table on the corner where Yuki was hiding.

Yuki laughed.

"What??!!!" Jurina blushed crazily. "How can you mention it at the crucial time like this??!!"

Yuki peeked Jurina from behind the table. “You don’t need to shy in front of me, Jurina. I can understand your feeling. I mean…. I REALLY know and I REALLY understand how it feels. You know… you can freely ask my advices later. I’m sure that you want Rena to feel even better, right?” Yuki giggled.

*BANG!* Rena shot her gun again but Yuki hide her head. “Shut up, Yuki!! I will cut your neck!”

Jurina clenched her fist. “What is it means? Just spit it out, Yuki!!”

Yuki lifted her head. “She often slept with me.” She grinned.

Jurina glared at Rena. “Is it true?!”

"J-jurina… Ummm…"

*BANG!* Jurina fired her gun at Rena’s foot. “Answer me!”

Yuki smirked with contentment. I did it!

Rena stepped back. “Y-yes, but-“

*BANG! BANG!* Jurina fired her gun. Rena could avoid it but still… she seemed in trouble.

"How often you did it?!!" Jurina clenched her teeth.

"N-not really. But Jurina… me and Yuki already-"

Yuki couldn’t took off her smirk. “Umm… very often actually. We did it almost everyday.” She tried to make the situation became more tense up.

Jurina kept firing Rena. Rena didn’t have other option except fight back. Both of Matsui kept changing their bullets and dodged it many times too.

Finally, after some seconds they shot each other……

"YES!!!" Yuki jumped happily as she saw Rena’s light became red. "I did it!!"

Yuki stop smiled because double Masui glared at her. She gulped when Jurina pointed her gun at her. “Jurina, look. It was happened in the past… It even happened long before you meet each other.”

Jurina frowned. “Hm?”

"She’s my ex, that’s it. We never do it again since we broke up over a year ago. I swear!!"

Jurina put her gun down. “Really?” She grinned. “Well, then… I guess you’re right, I need your advices. I’m still bad at it.”

"Hey!! Hey!!! What are you talking about??!!" Rena’s cheeks became totally red.

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* AtsuMina (2) *

Sae jumped over Sayaka, but she was too late. Sayaka succeeded shot Kojima and it perfectly ‘kill’ Kojima before her gun slipped from her hand.

Sae and Sayaka wrestled on the floor, fight over a gun that lay not far from them.

"Sergeant, Go!! Take the flag!"

Takamina nodded. She went upstairs, she saw a room opened. She went inside carefully.

"Is it only us who left?"

Takamina surprised because Acchan already sat on the chair and ready to grab the red flag.

Takamina looked at the black flag that stood on another side of the room. ”I’m sorry for disappointing you but… Sayaka and Sae still struggling downstairs.”

"Ah." Acchan nodded. She pulled back her hand from the red flag and then she walked towards her own team’s flag, the black one.

Takamina walked slowly towards the red flag. Unexpected, Acchan just let her walked comfortably. “Why don’t you attack me?”

"Let’s just wait until we hear a gunshots. Take your chair." Acchan pointed at a chair that she sat on it before.

Takamina shrugged, she took it and sat on it. She glanced at the red flag behind her. She looked at Acchan again. “Finally… tomorrow is the last day.”

"Yeahh… and next week you will hunt us again. It will become your advantage because you already saw our face."

Takamina leaned her back on her chair. She looked at the ceiling. “Maeda… should we go on date tomorrow? Since it’s our last day.”

"Call me Acchan. We’re close enough to call each other by our nickname."

Takamina smiled. “Really? Are we that close?”

Acchan laughed. “We’re even too close if we put ourselves as a thieves leader and a sergeant.”

Takamina stared at Acchan. “Just put aside this game first. Let’s bet… if I grab your flag first, you must go out with me tomorrow… only tomorrow.”

"And… how if I grab it first?"

Takamina looked away. “You can ignore me forever and I’ll let you go. No matter what happen, I won’t arrest you. I’ll close my eyes to your criminal cases and give the job to another sergeant or chief to catch you.”

Acchan surprised. “Do you think it’s fair enough for you? If your team let go of our robberies case, you can say that my team will never be captured.”

Takamina smiled. “It’s okay. It’s not fair for me since the beginning. I met you, I like you, and then I love you before I knew your job… just like Mayu towards Yuki and like Jurina towards Rena.
When we agreed to work together with you, we’ve unwittingly gave up on our job. Life will never fair, Acchan.”

"I…. I wa-"

*BANG!*

Acchan heard the gunshots before she finished speaking.

Acchan and Takamina lifted their guns. They shot each other. They dodged each other bullets.

Takamina rushed towards Acchan. Acchan was surprised with Takamina’s sudden movement. Acchan fired her gun, but Takamina bowed her head.
She slid towards Acchan, she intentionally bumped Acchan’s feet. Acchan fell onto the floor and it makes her gun was thrown. Takamina grinned as she about to grab the flag.

Acchan kicked Takamina’s knee and it caused Takamina fell too. “Not so easy, Sergeant.” She smirked.

They kept struggling on the floor. Their competition became more serious than Takamina thought before… Acchan started to punch Takamina’s face.

They rolled on the floor while hit each other. Takamina’s face began to bleed, her lips already covered by blood. She wanna get her freedom so badly?? She chose to ignore me forever rather than go out with me only in a day?? Fine. Takamina loosen her grip on Acchan’s shirt and let Acchan hit her.

Acchan felt that Takamina didn’t fight back anymore, so she stood up and picked up the gun. She pointed the gun at Takamina who still lay down on he floor.

*BANG!*

Takamina’s light on her clothes became red.

Acchan held her knee, she looked very tired. She tried to control her breath and used the rest of her strenght to walked towards the red flag. My team will get our freedom just because a silly flag and a silly love. She reached out her hand to grab the flag.

Takamina shed her tears. “Well… I guess tomorrow is really our last day without doing anything.” She chuckled as her tears and her blood rolled down from her cheeks.

I… I can’t. Acchan laughed weakly. “Why do you always become a cry baby?! Stop crying and take the flag! Hurry up, so I can take mine too.”

Takamina stop sobbed. “Huh? But my light already became red.”

"Baka. You said by yourself to put aside the game, so I guess… it doesn’t matter."

Takamina stood and grabbed the flag quickly. She ran towards Acchan and kissed her. “Thank you.”

"Promise me that you’ll really give a week for my team to ran away before you chase us again." Acchan pulled Takamina’s neck and captured her lips again. They kissed passionately.

Takamina nodded as their lips and their tongues still tangled. She grabbed Acchan’s waist at pulled it closer to her body.

Sayaka and Sae rushed into the room.

"Hey!! Who’s the wiiiiinnnnn-" Sayaka gasped. "O-okay… we can talk about this later."

As soon as Takamina broke their kiss, she saw Sayaka’s light still green. She threw the black flag to her, Sayaka catched it nicely. “We win!!”

"Wait… what??!!" Acchan gasped as she realized that she forgot to grab the red flag. "Geez!!"

Sae crossed her arms and glared at Acchan and Takamina.

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= Internal Chaos =

"Mayu.. I’m so sorry. I promise that I won’t call you as a stupid anym-" Before Yuki finished talking, Rena grabbed her collar.

"Yuki, do you wanna pick a fight with me or what?! You didn’t have to say something like that to Jurina!! She act so strangely last night. What did you say to her?! Don’t you ever dare to ruin her innocence!" Rena glared at Yuki.

"Look. I didn’t mean to bring the topic about us again, I just wanna make her pulled the trigger to shoot you."

Jurina poked Yuki’s shoulder. “Yuki-san, about the diary that you gave to me to learn about the techniques… I can’t find Rena’s name, too much girls name in this book.” She read a small notes book.

Yuki’s eyes grew bigger. “Hey!! I told you to not bring it outside your room!!” Yuki was about to grab it, but Mayu grabbed it first.

"What is it?" Mayu opened the first page.

"No-no-no-no!!" Yuki tried to grab it, but she failed. Mayu turned her body so she could dodged Yuki’s hand. Yuki facepalmed.

Mayu turned back. She seemed really pissed off. “WHAT-IS-THIS??!”

"Ma-Mayuyu, p-please calm down."

Mayu slapped Yuki’s arm with the notes book. “How can I calm down when I saw my number is 284!!! I’m the last?!” She slapped Yuki’s head with the notes book again.

Rena was surprised as well. “Ha?! How about my number? I never know about it before.”

"Yours is 175 and Sae is 82." Mayu was about to cry.

Rena pointed at her own face. “Jurina, am I that low?”

Jurina chuckled. ”No, Rena-chan. The number is not to state a rank. It’s the order of the girls who had been slept with her in past 4 years, by date sequence.”

*BRAAKKK!!*

Everyone was silent, they looked at the table that already flipped over.

Yuki sighed. What is this again?!

"S-sae…" Yuko tried to hold Sae’s shoulder but Sae slapped her hand.

"All of you so damn noisy all the time!!!!" She kicked the chair too.

The door opened. Acchan and Takamina entered the house. Both of them seemed shocked as well.

Acchan saw that everyone looked at Sae, so she didn’t need to ask who was the culprit. “What happened?”

"Nothing happened!!! Leader." Sae turned around. When she was about to go to her room, Acchan called her.

"Come back here and say it." Acchan firmly gave Sae an absolute order.

Sae turned back. “I wanna get out of this group…. tonight!!” She yelled at Acchan.

Acchan seemed shocked but she kept trying to control her expression.

Sayaka grabbed Sae’s hand. “What are you talking about??”

Sae hit Sayaka’s face. “I’m saying that I wanna leave this fucking team!!!”

"Are you sure?" Acchan crossed her arms.

"Of course I’m really sure about it!!"

"No one can leave my team…. alive." Acchan took her gun and pointed her gun at Sae.

Sae pointed her gun at Acchan too. “Okay, let’s do it if you wanna end it like this..”

Yuko and Sayaka pointed her gun at Acchan’s head while Yuki and Kojima did the same to Sae.

Sae laughed. “Do you see what you’ve done, leader? Our members even wanna kill each other now. Great!”

Rena frowned. “Let’s talk in our meeting room. Don’t make a chaos up here.” She released her hand from Jurina’s grip and then she went downstairs calmly. Maeda team members went downstairs one by one.

When Jurina, Mayu, and Takamina were about to enter the room… Yuki blocked their way. “Outsiders can not enter. Just wait in your own room.” She closed the door.

Mayu shrugged. “Yeahh… we’re outsiders.”

*Inside The Meeting Room*

"Okay guys, spit it out. It’s only us here." Rena tried to not let herself leaded by the tension and the anger like the others.

Kojima sat on the couch. “I already lost my right to speak up here since years ago. So, I’ll only receive what’s your decision.”

"What’s the reason?" Sayaka looked at Sae, she seemed sad.

"Do you guys even need me to say the reason??!!" Sae hit the table. "Just look what happened to us after those damn police involved in our live!! Everything looks so messed up!
I never agree with your plan at the first place, Maeda! Are you sick or something when you decided to ask them working together with us??!!”

Yuko crossed her arms. “I’m agree with Sae. You, you, and you-” she pointed at Acchan, Yuki, and Rena “-make our life become harder!! Use your brain before you start to do something… you guys shouldn’t falling in love with them!! We even shouldn’t be friends with them. You know the consequence!!”

Sayaka sighed. “Today… we may only pointed the gun at each other, maybe tomorrow… we will fired the gun to each other’s head because of the same reasons.”

Yuko walked towards Acchan and then she pointed her finger to Acchan’s face. “Especially you!!”

Acchan clenched her fist. “Don’t put your finger on me.”

Yuko didn’t care about Acchan’s warning. “You!! You’re the leader and I thought you’ll became the only one who will use your brain wisely.. but I’m wrong!! You started to falling in love with the damn stupid sergeant! I should be the one who lead this team since the beginning!”

Acchan tried to hit Yuko’s face but Yuko dodged it well. “No one can enter this circle.. it’s between me and Maeda.” Yuko lifted her fist.

Acchan stepped forward and then she kick Yuko’s stomach. But before Acchan pulled back her leg, Yuko grabbed it and hit Acchan’s stomach strongly.

Acchan stepped back. “I’m getting serious now.”

"Bring it on." Yuko tightened her fist.

Yuko wanna punch Acchan’s face, Acchan lifted her hand to ward it. Yuko can read Acchan’s movement well so she use her knee to kick Acchan’s stomach instead.

Acchan stepped back, she held her stomach. Yuko won’t waste the small chance, she rushed towards Acchan and pushed her, it caused Acchan lost her balance.

Yuko kicked Acchan’s face. Acchan’s lips started bleeding.

"Arrrgghhh!!!" Acchan used her arms to avoid the kick and then she grabbed Yuko’s leg. As soon as Yuko fell onto the ground, Acchan sat on Yuko’s top and she hit Yuko’s face over and over.

Yuko used her strenght to flipped Acchan. The table turned, Yuko sat on top and then punched Acchan’s face.

Acchan started to cry, her tears that mixed with her blood rolled down on her cheeks. “You’re right, I’m not the proper leader for you.”

Yuko stopped.

"Yuko… back then, could you thinking before you started to fall in love with Kojiharu?"

Kojima gasped.

"That’s not the case!! We’re on the same team and she haven’t betrayed us back then!!" Yuko wanna hit Acchan’s face again.

"Now, after she come back… can you use your brain wisely to not falling in love with her again? You already knew that she betrayed you and us. Can you give an order to your heart to not falling in love with her?"

Yuko stood up. She was about to go upstairs.

"Tomorrow… I beg you." Acchan coughed. "After that, we can go separately if you really want it. But, I still hope that you’ll stay by my side forever… no matter what happens, you’re still my friend."

Yuko went out from the meeting room.

Rena helped Acchan to sit. “Are you okay?”

"No, I’m not okay." Acchan chuckled softly. "You can replace me as a leader if you want."

Rena ruffled Acchan’s hair. “Silly. I don’t want to be beaten up like this. I never know that it’ll be this pathetic to maintain the team.”

Acchan and Rena smiled at each other.

Yuki walked towards Sae. “Can we talk?”

"No." Sae looked away.

Yuki sighed. “Just like Acchan said before, no matter what happens.. you’re still my friend. I can’t let you down. I’m so sorry about what happened between us. I hope someday you’ll understand my decision.”

After Yuki walked away, Sayaka came approached Sae. “Please… don’t go.” She shed her tears.

"Oh my God, Sayaka!! Don’t cry. You looks really funny when you like this." Sae wiped Sayaka’s tears. "Sorry for that punch. I couldn’t hold my anger." Sae hugged Sayaka. I understand.

================== TO BE CONTINUED =================

Sorry, I can’t wrote this chap more longer because my ‘t’ in my keyboard seems troubled… I have to press it harder. I’m stress.
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1 chapter more and I will make it longer.  :mon waterworks:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Konoe on December 01, 2013, 10:54:04 AM
Kojiyuu are friends again. :farofflook:

Black Marimokkori's dirtiness revealed. I can't believe she made a diary about the weaknesses of the girls she slept with. :lol:

The way she made Jurina angry and how she calmed her down. :lol: She also made Rena and Mayu angry. :mon lmao: Oh, and the big gap of pages between Sae,Rena and Mayu. Mayu should be happy that she is the last but knowing that Yuki slept with lots of girls is something to get very angry with.

I was really laughing while reading but starting around Atsumina's moment things became sad. :fainted: :mon waterworks:   
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: kamen_idol212 on December 01, 2013, 11:49:30 AM
anakpanti-san, finally you are back with a new update....
i very glad with this part, as always....
so much laughter and tears i get from this part, it's so freakin funny to know the way yuki make jurina shoot Rena, you know. and Yuki with her "so many" datemates....
also with a little Kojiyuu, i appreciate it
it's become more interesting when Atsumina make a bet, and the climax is......
"a little" mess in maeda team..
Hope an epic ending of this story, i'm sad to know this story will reach THE END SOON.
at last, well done sir!!!

P.S : sorry for long comment...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Tam_atsu on December 01, 2013, 12:34:18 PM
kojiyuu  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: White Hawk on December 01, 2013, 12:53:10 PM
Thanks for the update~

Aww~ KojiYuu~ :wub:

Ahh, there's a problem in Maeda's Team.. I hope they can solve it >_<
Just forgive each other XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Zita on December 01, 2013, 02:55:45 PM
This mean there is only one chapter to go.  :shocked
I just realized that now. :doh:
What I should do. :?

So much problems in the end.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Shinoki on December 01, 2013, 03:18:04 PM
answering your question: yups, 1-8 in on go through
And... ooooh...
facepalms... Yukirin...
hrm... this is....
(hard to say~)
There's only 1 chappy left~ looking forward
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Kirozoro on December 01, 2013, 05:51:58 PM
Noooo i want more

Sure this ch is chaotic one

Hope Sae nit leave the team

I wonder what will happen next

Please update soon
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: cisda83 on December 02, 2013, 01:01:33 AM
AH... the Maeda team is breaking apart...

Yuki is such a playgirl...

284 girls....in 4 years

Interesting....

What's going to happen in the plan to kill the drug lord?

Would they be able to take their revenge?

Would Atsuko's team break up?

What's about their thief activity?

Would Mayuki, Wmatsui and Atsumina get together despite they are on the opposite side?

Would Yuko and Haruna get together?

How about Sae and Sayaka?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: anakpanti on December 02, 2013, 02:32:30 AM
Umm.... can I split chap 10 become 2 parts (again)?  :mon psst:
I'm kidding.  :lol:

Here the subchapters for the last chapter.
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@konoe :
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Black Marimokkori's dirtiness revealed. I can't believe she made a diary about the weaknesses of the girls she slept with. :lol:
Like she said to Jurina... to improving the technique (?)  :lol:

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Mayu should be happy that she is the last but knowing that Yuki slept with lots of girls is something to get very angry with.
That's my point too.  :P
Yuki is an amazing player.  :inlove:

@kamen_idol212: Hi... I read your comment in my other OS that you're Indonesian too..
Welcome and thanks.  :D

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so much laughter and tears i get from this part, it's so freakin funny to know the way yuki make jurina shoot Rena, you know. and Yuki with her "so many" datemates....
:rofl:
I'm glad that you enjoy it.

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Hope an epic ending of this story, i'm sad to know this story will reach THE END SOON.
Don't remind me about this.. I'm sad too..  :cry:

Don't worry... Actually, I love the long comment.  XD

@Tam_atsu: Kojiyuu... I hope that I can make their relationship better in next chap.

@White Hawk:
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Ahh, there's a problem in Maeda's Team.. I hope they can solve it >_<
Just forgive each other XD
:twothumbs
Thanks.

@Zita:
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This mean there is only one chapter to go.  :shocked
I just realized that now. :doh:
What I should do. :?
You can give me some ideas.  :lol:
Yeahh... 1 chapter.  :cry:

@Shinoki: Thanks for reading. :twothumbs

@Kirozoro:
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Noooo i want more
Season 2?  :lol:

Actually... some of my readers sent me PM and told me about their ideas, I agree with them.
But... what can I do, they gave me the idea when it's almost reach the end. I'll try to put it in last chap.
But I'll try to not disappoint the reader, I'll try my best in last chap.

@cisda83:
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Yuki is such a playgirl...
284 girls....in 4 years
She's strong... she can slept with those girls in 4 years.  :lol:

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What's going to happen in the plan to kill the drug lord?
Would they be able to take their revenge?
I hope their plan will succeed.

About the pairings........ some of them will get the happy ending, but.......... yeahhh....  :(

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:kneelbow:
Thank you.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: ayudewi6 on December 02, 2013, 08:03:14 AM
Oh God! By the way the story is very evocative of feelings!  :twothumbs
how the relationship between Acchan and Takamina after this? Similarly with the other? Will Sae completely out of the team?
Honestly, I want to see Takamina be a real sergeant. I want to see her in action in arresting the killers Mariko. Also I want Atsumina moment, Mayuki, Wmatsui, and Kojiyuu extended!  :cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: wmatsui_lover on December 02, 2013, 02:54:05 PM
 where r u?!!!!!
 :scolding:

 :prayers: --> I'm trying to relax.
20:44 and my sister hasn't come home. So I use her laptop.  :kekeke:

I'm so surprised when I opened your laptop and I found this forum in your Chrome. I'm proud of you. I even can't hold myself to not make an account. :mon hanky:
You wrote many beautiful stories, I'm sorry that I always mock and tease you before.
Becuz I never know before that you're a talented writer (but please fix your grammar. LOL).

I have no idea who's Jurina, who's Rena, who's Yuki, so I only use my own imagination when I read all of your fanfics. Your stories are damn interesting to be read, I can't stop staring at your laptop and reading your sories since I came back from school today.

I took my username as it is, because you always mention about wmatsui to me (I almost get bored, honestly).

I always laughing at you when your AKB48 and SKE48 stuff arrived at home after you bought it online.
I think that I'll try to learn about this Japanese Idol Group more, so I can understand about 'why you always buy their expensive single/dvd'.  :lol:

Please, after you get home and read my comment,,, don't kill me, okay?  :P

As soon as you arrive at home, I will forcing you to write the last chapter because I become really curious about this story.  :mon evil:
I already read half of your draft.  :mon slapass:

Beloved readers, you better prepare your knife to stab her, because I see the 'black crow' in the last chapter.  :fainted:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Konoe on December 02, 2013, 03:10:56 PM
@wmatsui_lover

This is so unfair! You read some parts and made me even more excited for the last chapter!

 :mon misch: I support you 100% in forcing Putri to finish chapter 10 fast. :mon thumb:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: gek geki on December 02, 2013, 03:26:24 PM
i hope their actual mission is success and not like the training,which too many people die,especially mayuki and wmatsui i dun wanna hear anything bad about them in the NEXT CHAPTER!!!

if something really happen to them, i will force you to make alternative ending!! or....something will BURN!! YEAH BURN!!



Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: triela on December 03, 2013, 12:04:26 AM
 :bleed eyes: OMG
I need that book hahaha
Rena like jurina innocent
Atsumina moment  :wub: :inlove:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: anakpanti on December 03, 2013, 02:29:07 AM
@ayudewi6:
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Honestly, I want to see Takamina be a real sergeant. I want to see her in action in arresting the killers Mariko.
Don't worry, I'll do it.  :)

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Also I want Atsumina moment, Mayuki, Wmatsui, and Kojiyuu extended! :cry:
I'll try to overwhelm the last chap with their moment...  ;)

@wmatsui_lover: Seriously.... what are doing in here??!!  :mon cweepy:
Don't give them my spoiler....!!  :angry1:

@Konoe:
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I support you 100% in forcing Putri to finish chapter 10 fast.
hey... I'm waiting for your update too.
Where's chapter 1?????

@gek geki:
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mayuki and wmatsui i dun wanna hear anything bad about them in the NEXT CHAPTER!!!

if something really happen to them, i will force you to make alternative ending!! or....something will BURN!! YEAH BURN!!

Hi... happy to see you.  :P

Ano......... about that.... I think we already had a deal since a long ago...
(http://31.media.tumblr.com/187234c458b0cc7ec21a65398648b404/tumblr_mx63ekYVXx1rz4l0zo2_r1_500.png)
 :kekeke:

@triela:
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I need that book hahaha
Should I write it? kidding. :lol:

I'm glad that you enjoy it.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: KwonMinAh on December 03, 2013, 04:24:51 PM
ヘ(;´Д`ヘ) silent reader here.... I can't resist the urge to leave a comment anymoreeeee~ ヽ(`Д´)ノ I only have time to read stuffs at night so...you know...oh that painful moment when you have to hold in your overflowing feelings in order not to wake anyone up...(;´Д`) but but hey your fic is awesomeee~ I luv it (´▽`)♡♡♡ I'm waiting for your final piece of AWESOME work (-ω-)/ and you gave one of us here the permission to translate your fic right? Thank youuu~ they are screaming in delight (≧▽≦)please please take care and keep up your awesome work! ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: edogawa4869 on December 03, 2013, 05:19:35 PM
it's looong and greeaaat chapter...  :twothumbs

so the couples has settled ....

i think the last part will be their date... hehehe...

it's funny scene when Jurina revealed Yuki "black diary", hahaha....  :D

can't wait for the last chapter...  :D

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: karenchan on December 03, 2013, 05:37:46 PM
 :heart:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 9]
Post by: Chanaline on December 03, 2013, 10:05:41 PM
Hey!!

It was really funny the moment when Mayu have Yuki's notebook!!!

Maeda's team is going to break why :'(

Want more MAYUKI!!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: anakpanti on December 07, 2013, 08:45:01 PM
Warning:
This chapter contains of a character’s death.
If you’re not feel comfortable, I suggest you to skip the last scene of “Losing One” sub-chapter, and go re-read chap 8.2 for some lovely moments. :p

For the rest, please enjoy my last chapter. :)
This is a long chapter. I hope you won’t get sleepy in the middle of reading. XD
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PART 10

1. = Last Day =

Rena and Mayu sat facing each other with a chessboard on the table. The aura around them became so dark and full of the tension. Both of them were really competitive in doing the game.

"Rena-chan~ my love and my support are 100% for you. Ganbatte!!!" Jurina lifted her fist to support her girlfriend.

Yuki pushed Jurina strongly and it caused Jurina fell from the couch. “My cute and lovely girlfriend will totally win this round!!” She looked at Mayu… her eyes show her admiration towards Mayu.

Jurina touched her butt, “Itai!” She sat back on the couch, after that.. she used her feet to push Yuki. She grinned as she saw Yuki’s butt hit the floor.

Yuki groaned. “You! Such a little brat!” She stood up and then she pushed Jurina, she pinned her down on the couch.

When Yuki was about to strangle her, Jurina tickled Yuki’s waist. Yuki was surprised, afterwards… she started to laugh out loud as Jurina kept tickling her.

"My girlfriend’s brain is the best." Jurina looked proud of it.

"SHUT UP!!!"

Jurina and Yuki turned their head, they saw their girlfriends glared at them.

"Why both of you never stop talking since an hour ago??!! So noisy." Mayu pointed Jurina and Yuki alternately.

"Now get out!" Rena pointed at the door.

"Why?? I’m here to support you." Jurina pouted. Yuki nodded agreeably.

Mayu sighed. “Okay, just keep quiet. Me and Rena need to finish this game.”

Yuki and Jurina closed their mouths with their hands. They nodded.

"Good." Rena looked at Mayu. "It’s your turn."

Mayu smirked. “You’ll lose.” She moved her rook. “Checkmate.”

Rena laughed evilly. “Not so easy, girl.” She moved her pawn to cover her king. “Your rook won’t die in peace if it die just because it ‘eat’ a little pawn.”

Mayu didn’t stop smirking. She moved her bishop to kick out the pawn. “How about this? Your king won’t die piecefully if it die only because it eating my bishop.”

Rena seemed irritated because of Mayu’s words. She was about to think another strategy but she heard something.

Yuki, are you sure that it’s Rena’s weakness?

Of course I’m sure." Yuki pointed her diary. "Look, I’ve tried it many times and it always works.

Cool." Jurina grinned when she looked at the diary. "What about Mayu? Do you already found it?

Of course I’ve found it, immediately at our first time." Yuki looked so proud of herself. "Just look page thr-

"Yuki!!!" Mayu blushed crazily.

The red on Rena’s cheeks looked bad too. “How can both of you talking about it in front of us?!”

"What? We only whispered to each other. Both of us already quiet enough!" Jurina protested.

"Yes! But we still can hear it!" Mayu glared at Yuki.

"Okay-okay." Yuki grabbed Jurina’s hand. "Let’s just leave them."

Jurina shrugged and then she stood up. “Yeahh… your diary seems more interesting to be looked at rather than them. Let’s talk about this outside.” She followed Yuki.

"H-hey!!!" Mayu and Rena yelled but their lovers ignored them.

Mayu and Rena looked at each other awkwardly. But in a few seconds later they smirked. Their gaze said… Let’s destroy that fucking diary!

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*AtsuMina*

Takamina and Acchan sat on the bench. They sat in silence while looked at the moon and the stars from the backyards.

Takamina folded her legs and lifted it onto her chest, she hugged it. “Thank you.”

"What’s that for?"

"Everything."

"Everything? You thank me because I lied to you and kidnapping your members?!"

Takamina laughed. “From your expression when we met in the restaurant… I knew that you didn’t mean to lie to me. Anything that happened between us was just a coincidence.
And for kidnapping me and my members.. I think I should thank you for that. If you didn’t ask us to work together with your team, maybe both of us can’t sit like this… together. Love find its own way…. and maybe this is the way for us.”

Acchan sighed. “I never say that I love you or something. Don’t get so full of yourself.”

"But at least you didn’t ignore me because of a piece of flag and you were agreed to went out with me today." Takamina sighed. "Even though when we came back, something happened to your team." She looked at Acchan. "Ah, speaking of it… how’s your bruises? I guess… Yuko hit you too hard."

"I’m okay." Acchan touched the scar on her lips. "She’s right… I’m not a good leader. I’ve planned to give my leader position to Yuko. Maybe tomorrow is my last day as a leader."
She stood up. “Ahh… it’s so cold out here. I’ll go first, good night.”

Takamina gasped. I don’t want this night over. She grabbed Acchan’s wrist quickly and then she pulled it. Acchan fell back to the bench. Takamina held her body and she wrapped her arms on it. “Please stay with me.” She tightened her hug. “Just a little while longer.” Please stay with me tonight.

Acchan surprised but then….. she smiled. “Okay.”

Takamina took off her jacket quickly and then she used it to wrap Acchan’s body. “Is this warm enough?”

Acchan hold Takamina’s hand and wrapped it around her shoulder. She leaned her head on Takamina’s shoulder and let Takamina hugged her. “If you stay close to me, it’ll be warm enough.”

Takamina was totally blushed. “O-okay.”

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*KojiYuu*

Kojima knocked the door.

"I’m not in the mood to talk with anybody!" A girl answered her from inside the room.

"It’s me. Please open the door, Yuko." Kojima knocked it again. Not long after that, she heard the un-lock sound from the door.

"What are you doing here?" Yuko asked it in cold way.

"To accompany you. Now.. let me in." Kojima stepped in.

Yuko used her feet to block the door. “I didn’t ask you to cheer me up. I’m fine. Totally fine. Are you here because Acchan said about my feeling for you? Don’t worry… she’s wrong.”

Kojima sighed. “Okay.” She turned away and walked away.

When Yuko was about to close the door, Kojima stopped without looked at Yuko. “Yuko…”

Yuko hold the door, she saw Kojima’s back. “Anything else?”

"After our mission succeed, I’ll leave this place. I’m not belong in here anymore. I- I just wanna spend my last night in here with you."

"It’s not strange for me anymore, you always leave me. I’ve got used to it, So… I don’t care anymore." Yuko closed the door.

Kojima walked again. She wiped her teary eyes. She didn’t love me anymore… I’m totally alone now.

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*MaYuki*

Sae never listening my words.. she’s always stubborn and get angry easily. Yuki sighed. She opened the door and then she entered her bedroom. She saw Mayu laid on the bed.

Yuki smiled and then she laid her body beside Mayu.

Mayu leaned her head on Yuki’s chest. “Yuki…”

"Hm?" She played with Mayu’s beautiful raven hair. She stroked it gently.

"Will you leave me again?" Mayu tightened her grip onto Yuki’s shirt.

Yuki let go of Mayu’s hair. ”Do you still haven’t believe me?”

Mayu put her hand around Yuki’s waist. “Y-you… slept with many girls so… I think that you’ll get bored at me soon and looking for another girl.” She tightened her hug as if she believes that Yuki will surely leave her.

Yuki sighed. She grabbed Mayu’s hand and lead it onto her left chest. “Do you feel it? My heartbeat always like this when I’m with you. You’re the only one who can make my heartbeat hammering.”

"Really?" Mayu closed her eyes, she enjoyed Yuki’s heartbeat. It’s really fast. I never know it before.

"Yup. It’s beating for you." Yuki used her hand to lift Mayu’s chin. "I love you like crazy."

Mayu looked at Yuki’s eyes… deeply. “I love you too.” She approached Yuki’s lips and then she pressed it with hers. She move her body so she can completely on Yuki’s top.

Mayu moved her hand and left Yuki’s left chest where she felt Yuki’s heartbeat a while ago… her hand went downwards. Her hand stopped as she found Yuki’s mound and then she massaged it slowly.

Yuki broke the kiss as she felt the pleasure running up her body. “A-ahh—aahhh—— M-mayu…”

Mayu lowered her kiss onto Yuki’s neck and went downwards to her collarbone. Her fingers started to fondle Yuki’s bosom that still covered by bra and shirt, but still… Mayu could felt something hardened behind it. ”Yes?" She whispered it in seduce way. "We still wearing our clothes but you already aroused like this?

"Y-you nnghhh—-nnh— never touch me like this b-before ssso —nhh—- I’m a bit sshhh— ss-surprised." Yuki’s moan started to uncontrollable because Mayu didn’t stop playing with her chest.

Mayu licked Yuki’s ear and then she nibbled it slowly. “Yes… you often still wearing your clothes.” She chuckled. ” It’s not fair. I wanna make you feel good too.”

Yuki felt Mayu’s warm breath swept her nape and it caused she even more turned on.

But suddenly… Mayu’s eyes expressed a worries, a fear, and a sadness. “You know… Umm… we don’t know what will happen to me or to us tomorrow. We still don’t know whether our mission will be succeed or not.
At least you already felt my love before something bad happen.”

Yuki looked so irritated about Mayu’s words. She flipped Mayu, she pinned Mayu down. “Nothing will happen to us!”

Mayu looked away. “As you aware yesterday, I’m not bright inside the battle field. I’m not really good in fighting or in using the gun and the knife. I’m not as strong as Sae and Rena.
I will easily become the enemy’s target. I- I’m afraid that I will-“

"Stop!!!" Yuki glared at Mayu. "I promise that I won’t let anyone easily touch you. I’ll always hold your hand and protect you." Yuki kept looking at Mayu’s eyes. "Trust me, please."

Mayu caressed Yuki’s cheeks with both of her hands. “I’m sorry that I’ll become your burden.” She pulled Yuki’s neck so she can hugged her comfortably. “I trust you…. always.”

Yuki grinned. “I’ll put many bombs into your pocket and your bag, so you can simply blow them up if you’re in danger.”

Mayu chuckled. “The police will notice us if we use the bomb. We can’t make too much sound.”

Yuki pouted. “Can we forget about it for a while and continue what we did before?”

"Of course." Mayu pulled Yuki’s head closer, she approached Yuki’s face. She started to eat Yuki’s lips again.

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*WMatsui*

"Rena-chaaan~ Renaaa-chan~" Jurina shook Rena’s body with her hands over and over again. She added more power to it when she realized that Rena completely ignoring her. "Rena."

"Urgghh!!! Jurina, stop bothering me! I’m sleepy! I must saving my stamina and relaxing my brain for tomorrow! Just go to sleep!! Don’t forcing me to punch you!" Rena closed her face with her pillow.

Jurina seemed disappointed. “Tsk. Fine!!” She walked away and then took Rena’s guitar. She went outside from their bedroom.

Jurina opened the door and then she went to the terrace. She sat on a chair. She always angry at me! She always harsh and rude towards me!
I did everything so she can feel comfortable around me and then we can become closer…… but it’s useless.
I’ll stop it… I’m tired for being teased by Mayu and Takamina because I act like a child who completely idiot.
I’m going back to myself.


Jurina started to play a song. She tried to make her voice and the guitar’s sound as soft as she can, because she didn’t want to wake anybody.

When the song almost ended, Jurina heard someone’s steps.

"Jurina…."

It’s Rena. I think I’ll just back to the chorus until she go inside again.

"Jurina."

Jurina kept playing the guitar and ignored Rena who still stood beside her. She kept singing and didn’t look at Rena even for a second.

"Are you mad at me, Jurina?"

Jurina still persistent to not paying attention to Rena.

"Can you stop repeating it and talk to me?!" Rena seemed lost her patience. She grabbed the guitar from Jurina’s hand.

Jurina stood up. “I wanna sleep, just like you said.” She walked away and leave Rena on the terrace.

Rena went inside to follow Jurina. She surprised because Jurina didn’t walk into her room… Jurina went to her own group bedroom.

Jurina opened the door. No one. She sighed. I’m sure that Takamina sleep in Maeda’s room and Mayu in Yuki’s room. Great! I’m alone.

"Jurina… just go back to our room. Don’t act like a spoiled child. You’re too childish!"

Jurina turned her body, she glared at Rena. “Let’s see how childish I am when I blow up your head and your friend’s head starting from next week.”

Rena was completely shocked. “J-jurina?” She looked at Jurina in disbelief way. “Wh-“

Before Rena could finish her words, Jurina already turned back. “See you tomorrow.” She stepped inside the room and locked the door.

Rena stunned. She shocked because Jurina never say something that would hurt her like what Jurina did just now. Rena knocked the door. “Jurina, let’s talk. If you keep sulking in your room, I can’t properly say sorry to you.”

Rena tried to persuade Jurina to open the door, but still no answer from Jurina. Rena gave up, she walked slowly into her own room.

Rena laid on the bed. She tried to sleep.
It was a bit hard for her to fall asleep because in past weeks she never slept alone. Rena already got used to Jurina who was always beside her.

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*Sae and Sayaka*

Sae sneaked into Sayaka’s room. She poked Sayaka’s shoulder, “hey… let’s go outside.”

Sayaka surprised. She took off her blanket that covered her face. “What are you doing here?! No. Maeda will surely crush us if she know that we sneak out a day before we do our mission. We must take a rest!”

Sae rolled her eyes. “Geez, Sayaka! Stop being a good girl. Let’s have fun. Maybe only for 1 or 2 hours?”

Sayaka shook her head. “No.” She firmly refused it.

Sae shrugged. “Okay, I’ll go alone then.” She stepped outside Sayaka’s room. “But don’t looking for me if I don’t come back.” She closed the door.

Sayaka woke up and quickly grabbed her coat. She rushed out from her room. “H-hey. Wait me! Okay, I’ll go with you.” She made her voice soft so Acchan couldn’t hear them because Acchan’s room was beside her room.

Sae smirked. She turned back. “Nice.”

Sayaka wear har shoes quickly, “Where are we going?”

"Bar."

"What??!!"

"Maybe just a couple of glasses. I need you to come with me, so I have someone who will carry me home if I’m drunk." She grinned. "I know that your drink limit is much higher than me."

"Who is that??" Acchan yell from her bedroom.

Their eyes widened.

"Meeoooww." Sayaka imitated cat’s sound.

Sae smacked Sayaka’s head. “You make it become too obvious!!” She grabbed Sayaka’s hand. “Come on!” She dragged Sayaka to run away.

Acchan opened the door. “A cat?! I don’t remember that we have a cat.” She looked around. No one there.

Acchan took out her smartphone and watch something. She and Rena had the access to all CCTV in their house. “Sae and Sayaka??” She giggled. She texted them. 'Well… have fun.'

Sayaka and Sae read the mail from Acchan. They laughed together.

Sae put one of her hand onto Sayaka’s shoulder. “She won’t kill us.”

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2. = Vengeance Day =

Takamina clapped her hands slowly to get attention from those girls. “Come on, guys. Gather around! We’re almost running out of time and we still need to do some preparation for tonight.”

Rena pulled out her lollipop from her mouth. “There must be something wrong with this.” She looked at Acchan. “You let her to lead our meeting and our mission??!!! You lost your mind.”

Jurina stood on the other side of the room. She leaned her body on the wall and then she crossed her arms. “How many times I need to told you guys? Don’t underestimate us.”

Rena was about to open her mouth again but Jurina slammed the glass onto the floor. The pity glass broken into some pieces. “Stop talking or you’ll end up like this glass.”

Acchan hugged Rena to calm her down. “Rena, relax. Please focus at our mission, we can’t let Makoto live in peace much longer. Trust me, Takamina is good enough… her members know Makoto’s strategy better than us. They deals with his criminal cases for years.”

On the other hand, Takamina and Mayu smirked. Because of Jurina’s words, they realized that these past weeks… their self-esteem as the police had been humiliated by a bunch of criminals.

"Acchan is right. Let’s finish our mission with Mariko’s murderer first to prove that Jurina is innocent, take our revenge to Makoto, and then catch the illegal pawn shop owner.
Then…. after that, we will settle all things between us.”

Yuki pulled Mayu into her hug. She whispered. “Mayu, please don’t smirk like that. I’m afraid. We haven’t talk about it… I didn’t know what’s your decision about….. you will keep hunting me to put me on the jail, or you will stay with me, or I’m the one who need to stay with you secretly, or do you have any other options?

Mayu sighed. “If you asking me now…. I’m still don’t know about it too. It’s too complicated. I’m afraid that I’ll choose a wrong option. I wanna be with you but…. how?! Duh! Why my brain can’t solve it?!

I love you and I never want to lose you. I’ll leave everything for you. I’ll give you….. everything." Yuki tightened her hug.

Mayu smiled and gave Yuki a short kiss to calm her lover’s heart. ”Don’t be too worry about it, let’s talk later.

"Okay!!" Takamina raised her volume. "First of all-" She looked at Mayu. "-Mayu won’t come with us. She will stay here."

"No way!!" Mayu released herself from Yuki. "I can do it!! Why do you always look down on me, Takamina?!"

Takamina sighed. “I’m not. Yuki was the one who asked us to not bring you.”

Mayu turned her head, she glared at Yuki. “I hate you.”

"Mayu… we need you to stay here and do the important job for us. All of us will be connected by GPS, we have a small camera on our shirts, and we can communicate each other by using earphones too."
Yuki pointed at a laptop.
"You can see all that we see… you’ll hear what we hear out there. You’ll become the one who keep an eye on us and warn us if one of us in danger."

"It’s totally a silly reason. You definitely insult my brain." Mayu walked away. She entered her bedroom and slammed the door.

Takamina saw that Yuki wanna run after Mayu. “Leave her alone, Yuki. She’ll be fine.”

Yuki stopped and let out her sigh.

Takamina open up a big paper and put it on the table. “Like I show it to you last week, this is the map of his headquarters. He created his headquarters really well so that from the outside it just looks like an ordinary factory. It has 6 floors.
Yesterday, when me and Acchan went out, we met Akane. She’s a sergeant too, thankfully that she didn’t recognize Acchan’s face and comfortably tell us about Makoto.
She received an information from her agent that Makoto will have a meeting with his business partner in 1 of many rooms on 4th floor. I’m sure that the pawn shop owner will be there too. So, all of us will focusing our attack to that floor. If-“

"Wait a minute." Jurina cut it off. "Churi?!"

Takamina nodded. “Why? Do you miss her?” She grinned.

Jurina rolled her eyes. “That’s not the point. Is she know that we will attack tonight? How if she come and ruining our plan? She’s too dangerous for us.”

"Don’t worry… your ex is not an ambitious person. She said that today is not a proper time for her team to capture him because they didn’t have enough evidence to arrest him."

Rena surprised. Her ex girlfriend?! She looked at Jurina, deep in her heart she hope that Jurina will refute Takamina’s statement. But… Jurina didn’t say anything.

Acchan nodded. “Yes, she said it. So, our plan won’t threatened.” She looked at Jurina. “Umm… Jurina, the sergeant said that you-“

"What? I already became a fugitive? Yeahh.. I already knew it, thanks to all of you… I will lose my job soon." She said it sarcastically. "But don’t worry… I’m here because of Mariko-sama, so no problem."

Takamina nodded agreeably. “She’s right. So don’t ever think that my team is here because we afraid of you guys. We’re here because of our best friend… our ex-leader.”

Sae laughed. “I can’t wait until next week. In these past weeks we always fooling around like friends, but I’m sure that starting tomorrow… we will try to crush each other again. Am I right?”

Jurina and Takamina ignored Sae. Both of them looked at each other and discussed something, they looked very serious while talking.

Yuko nudged Yuki’s hand. She whispered. “Do you see something different with them today? Somehow, they startled me.

Yuki nodded. “I didn’t see their laugh or their smile since this morning. They looks so serious, their aura felt different from usual. Acchan is right, we shouldn’t underestimate them.

Suddenly, Jurina walked away and went upstairs.

Takamina knocked the table to get their attention. “Jurina is calling Mayu right now. Mayu ever went there once, a year ago. So, I think Mayu can help us to describe the situation in Makoto’s headquarter.
Listen, after this meeting.. we will spend 2 hours to preparing and checking our stuff. Please make sure that all our weapons and our devices works well.
After that, we have another 2 hours to take a rest before we go. We’ll go at 7 PM.”

Everyone seemed agree at Takamina’s statement. They nodded agreeably.

The meeting room’s door opened, Jurina and Mayu stepped inside.

Why they must holding hands?!" Yuki and Rena grumbled on the same time.

Sayaka chuckled. “Both of you seems has get along well.”

Yuki and Rena glared at each other. “No.”

Mayu started to describe and portraying the headquarters as detail as she remembered. She kept talking without looked at Yuki, not even once.

After the meeting was over, Rena and Yuki seemed really want to talk with their lovers. But Takamina Team still continued to discussing something serious. They didn’t wanna interupt Takamina Team.

*2 Hours Later*

"Mayu. I’m sorry."

"Ah, Yuki. Done already?" She smiled. "Don’t worry, I know that you did it for me. You didn’t want something happen to me there."

Yuki nodded. “I’m happy that you understand me. I don’t want you hurt.
And about the preparation… we already checked everything and we didn’t have any problem.”

"Well… then, you better take a rest." Mayu was about to walk away, but Yuki grabbed her waist.

Yuki back-hugged Mayu. “Don’t leave me.” She pleaded.

Mayu turned back. “Do you want me to accompany you?” She caressed Yuki’s cheek.

Yuki nodded firmly. “I wanna sleep for a while…. in your hug.”

Mayu smiled, she lead Yuki onto the bed. They lay beside each other. Yuki hugged Mayu’s waist and buried her face on to Mayu’s neck. Mayu gave Yuki her warm embrace. She kissed Yuki’s forehead. “I won’t leave you." Mayu uttered it as her hand stroked Yuki’s raven hair gently. "Please be careful tonight, okay?

Yuki nodded. “I’ll come back for you.”

*On The Other Hand*

"Jurina."

Jurina seemed not bothered by Rena’s presence, she kept doing something with a laptop in front of her.

"Jurina! Can you stop it? I want to talk!!"

"You better take a rest. I’m busy right now. We can talk later." She said it without looking at Rena.

Rena couldn’t believe that Jurina still mad at her. “Stop talking like that to me!”

Finally, Jurina looked at Rena. But her gaze wasn’t show a love, it showing an anger to Rena. “Why? Are you angry at me because I’m cold and harsh towards you?” She stood up. “You always like that to me! For months! And you angry at me just because I act like that for a day?! I have a heart too, Rena…. you can’t hurting it whenever you want.”

Rena frowned. “What’s wrong with you, Jurina? Why something that I did since we meet for the first time suddenly become so wrong in your eyes? If you didn’t like my attitude, you shouldn’t flirting with me at the first place!”

Jurina was taken aback, but she quickly answered to defend herself. ”You’re right. I shouldn’t. How can a thief and a police can become a couples? I’m so stupid! Thank you for reminding me.”

Rena was surprised. She was totally shocked by Jurina’s words. She felt a deep pain in her heart. “Do you regret it? Do you regret for fell in love with me? Do you regret for become my girlfriend?” She shed her tears.

"Get over it, okay?! We already stood on the edge, it’s useless to talk something like this again. my team will leaving this place immediately after our mission finished." Jurina took her laptop and went upstairs.

Rena clenched her fist. “It’ll be better if you just kill me now rather than say something like that to me, Jurina!! Didn’t you know how much my love for you?”

Jurina stopped when she already held the knob. ” You rarely show your love to me, so… I don’t know. And you even ignored me last night, it was our last night together.” Jurina stepped outside and then she closed the door.

Rena cried out loud. Why something simple that I did last night can became so complicated like this?! Is she decided to break up with me after our mission finished?

====================== 7.30 PM ======================

All of them use a black suit to camouflage them in the dark.

Mayu, can you hear us?" Takamina whispered at her earphone.

Yes.. I can hear you and your camera seems work properly too." Mayu answered Takamina through the earphone. "All of you…. please be careful. We will have a barbecue party after our mission completed, so… be safe.

Takamina chuckled. She turned her head and gave a sign to all girls to enter the factory.

The members nodded.

Just like they discussed before, they split up to reach 4th floor from the different side so they can easier in finding the target place. Takamina, Jurina, Yuki, and Sae entered the factory from the east side.
On the other hand… Acchan, Rena, Sayaka, Kojiharu, and Yuko entered from west door.

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*East Team*

Takamina count with her fingers. 5, 4, 3, 2, Go!

Sae kick the door strongly. After the door opened, she saw 4 men who held the gun looked at her. They seemed surprised. Sae squatted as the men started to fire their gun.

Yuki and Jurina stepped in and then they fired their gun at the men. In just a few seconds, the men already dead in their hands.

"Not bad." Sae stood up again.

Takamina walked first, she lead her team from the front. She kept walking carefully. When she was about to turn to the left, she surprised because a man fired his gun at her. Takamina stepped back and hide behind the wall. She squatted and fired her gun from below. The bullet hit his leg and then Jurina did a ‘finishing touch’ by shot him on his head.

Sae, who walked behind 3 of them, saw 2 men pointed their gun at Yuki. She pushed Yuki quickly and it caused they missed their shots. Sae shot them on their chests by using both of her guns in her hands.

"Thanks." Yuki uttered it softly.

Sae ignored Yuki and then she went upstairs first to follow Jurina and Takamina.

Yuki shot another man behind her before she went upstairs too.

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*West Team*

Finally, they reached the 2nd floor.

The west team seemed got a lot of obstacles more than another team. On the 1st floor, they even need to deal with over 20 men.

"It seems their meeting room is on this side. They placed a lot of guards in this area." Rena said it as she shot 2 men’s head.

Sayaka just ended her knee kick onto a man chin. “This is crazy. We need an extra member.”

Acchan nodded. “Mayu, is it possible?

Wait a minute, I will check another team.

All of them kept firing their gun. The situation became worst after they heard an alarm sound.

Rena took another gun, she held 2 guns in her hands. “Prepare yourself. They already noticed us, more guards will come to attack us.”

Kojima used her knife to stab a man. “Tell Mayu to hurry, Maeda!” She kick the man who already died on her knife.

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*At Maeda Team Meeting Room*

Mayu watched her laptop. The east team seems have no a big problem if their number reduced.

“Takamina.”

Yes?

Mayu heard a gunshot. “The west team looks troubled, send Yuki to Block 2B. They need a little hel-”

*Sound of bomb exploded*

Mayu!! Are you okay? What is it?!" Takamina sounded panic.

“I… I don’t know. It comes from upstairs. I will take a look.”

Mayu!! Don’t! Keep on your place and lock the door!! Our meeting room is builded by a hard metal, they can’t easily enter it! Just lock the door!!" It’s Yuki’s voice.

Mayu didn’t hear it because she already put the earphone onto the table. She stood up and took a gun from the drawer.

Mayu!! M-mayu!!! Do you hear me?! Shit! Sergeant, I need to go. Mayu is in danger!

Mayu went upstairs without hear anything that Yuki said.

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*West Team*

"Sergeant, I need to go. Mayu is in danger!" Yuki held Takamina’s shoulder.

Takamina nodded without a doubt. “You must save her.”

Yuki ran towards the exit door. She shot everyone who she saw in the midway. Finally… she succeeded stepped outside.

"Sae, help another team on Block 2B." Takamina gave an order.

"Is it okay for you guys?" Sae seemed hesitant.

Jurina rolled her eyes. “Don’t tell me that you worrying us. Because it’s too sweet.”

"Tsk." Sae seemed regret to uttered that question, it made her sounds stupid. "I’ll go." She ran towards another path.

Takamina reload her gun. “We almost running out of our bullets.”

"No, you’re the only one who running out of the bullets." Jurina show 5 packs on her pockets. "I never missed my targets." She smirked.

Takamina giggled. “Okay. It’s only both of us here.”

Jurina slipped the knife in her sock and then she lifted her guns. “Let’s finish this soon. I started to get bored.”

Both of them rushed out onto the next floor and kill everyone who blocking their way.

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3. = Losing One =

Mayu…. Mayu…. Please be safe. Wait me.

Yuki drove a stolen car as fast as she could. She never stop the car and ignored the traffic lights.

Why I became so stupid like this?! Leave her alone?! I forgot that Makoto already knew our headquarter from 7 men who betrayed us at our last robbery in the bank.

Yuki turned the car, the car turned sharply to the left and almost hit a truck. Thankfully the fortune still on her side.

In just 15 minutes (usually… she need 25-35 minutes to get there), Yuki already arrived at their house.

The house placed far away from the town so everything that happened in their headquarter never be heard or be seen by townspeople. Besides that, there’s no house around it.

Yuki saw a car parked in front of the house. Mayu.

She rushed into their house, she shocked because everything looked so messed up. She saw a lot of charred goods, flipped table, broken window, shattered glass, and flooded floor. She could saw the blood flowed with the water.

Her tears rolled down on her white cheeks. “M-Mayu!” She called her lover name. “Mayu!!!” She raised her voice because she didn’t hear any answer.

*BANG!*

Yuki startled. She heard a gunshot from downstairs. She ran quickly to their meeting room. The door looked broken. She rushed in. “Mayu?”

She saw a man knelt in front of Mayu, the blood flowed from his head onto the floor. He fell.

She saw Mayu’s frightened face with a gun in her hand. She just shot the man’s head. “Yuki.” She called Yuki when she saw Yuki stood on the stairs.

Yuki ran towards Mayu and hugged her tightly. “Thanks God, you’re safe.” She cried out loud. “I thought I’ll lose you forever!!” She tightened her hug.

Mayu could feel Yuki’s body quivered. Mayu leaned her chin on Yuki’s shoulder and caressed Yuki’s back to calm her. “It’s okay… It’s okay. I’m fine.”

Yuki let go of her arms. She wiped Mayu’s bloody lips and then she saw many bruises on Mayu’s arms. “I let someone hurting you again. I’m so sorry!”

Mayu gave a short kiss on Yuki’s lips. “It’s okay. Calm yourself. Just look at me, I’m totally fine.” She smiled.

After Yuki saw Mayu’s sweet smile, she could calm down. “But… how? How can y-“

Mayu kissed Yuki’s lips again. “I’ve told you many times to not insulting my brain.” She grinned.

*FLASHBACK*

Mayu peeked from the door. She surprised because the house already messed up because of the bomb. 4 men. She closed the door slowly.

Thanks to Maeda Team, the door won’t easily noticed by other people because it has been camouflaged. It looked like an ordinary painting.

How can I beat them in one go? I’ll definitely lose if I need to fight 1 on 1 with them.

Mayu smirked as she got an idea. Mayu switched off many lamps that near to the stairs and then she cut the wires, she put the cut wires on the table. She turned on the electricity again.

She sneaked out from another door to the kitchen, she loosen the gas cap. She tied a gas knob with a small rope.

Unfortunately, she nudged a plate and it fell from the table. 2 of those men noticed her, she tried to ran away but a man succeeded catch her.

The man wanna fired his gun onto Mayu’s head but then he smelled something. He looked at a gas stove behind Mayu. “Gas?! You little kid!” He saw his friend pointed her gun at Mayu. “NO!”

Mayu succeed released her hand from the man and then she ran quickly to the door as she pulled the rope in her hand, it caused the gas knob rotated slowly. The gas stove turned on when she already reached the meeting room… she closed the door. She closed her ears.

*Gas exploded*

2 men… out.

She opened the door again and then she saw another man who stood beside the burned bodies. Mayu shot her gun, the bullet only hit his leg. The man grimaced in pain. She saw another chance so she shot him again.. on his chest.

1 more left.

Mayu looked around. Where is he? “Urrggghhh!!!" She knelt as she felt a deep pain on her back. A man hit her back with a stick.

"I can’t believe that a small girl like you kill my crew." He spits.

Mayu stood up slowly and turned her body. “Of course I can, they’re too stupid for me. And I’m really sure that you’re like them too.” She smirked.

The man looked irritated, he slapped Mayu’s face strongly and it caused Mayu fell onto the floor again. She touched her lips. Blood.. Yuki will be upset if she look at me like this. She will blame herself again.

Mayu used the rest of her strenght to stand up again. “Are you a woman? That’s too weak.”

The man clenched her fist. “You really wanna die, huh?!” He hit Mayu’s face and then he kicked Mayu’s stomach.

Mayu fell for the third times.

The man kicked her head, then her head bumped to the table. Urgh!

He took his gun from his pocket. “I give you 5 seconds to say goodbye to the world. 5, 4,…”

Mayu grabbed the cut wires “Arggghhh!!” She stood up and then she bumped her body onto that man, she used the wires to electrocute his hand.

"Akkkhh!!!" The man screamed as he felt the pain, his gun fell from his hand.

Mayu catched the gun before it reached the ground. The corner of her eye saw the man wants to take another gun from his pocket. Mayu pulled the trigger.

*BANG!* The bullet perfectly hit his head.

"Stupid! You can simply kill me rather than give me more time to blow up your head. 5 seconds is too much for me"

The door opened. Yuki?

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Yuki hugged Mayu again. “I won’t leave you alone again. I didn’t want something bad happen again.” Her eyes looked at the laptop. “Mayu… my friends in danger.”

Mayu turned her head to the laptop. She saw Maeda Team cornered. “Let’s save our friends.” She took Yuki’s hand.

Yuki smiled when she heard Mayu said ‘our friends’.

———————————————————————————

*Maeda Team*

They succeed reached the 4th floor, but the guards kept coming from upstairs. They couldn’t enter the room where Makoto and his business partner did the meeting.

"Maeda, our amunition almost-"

"I know!! I’m not blind!" Acchan yelled at Kojiharu.

"What should we do?" Sae asked Acchan.

"Keep firing your gun and don’t waste any single bullet." Acchan tried to hide her desperation. Where’s the police team and Yuki?!! Are they betraying us??!

In a few minutes later, it happened. They running out the amunition.

"We’ll die." Rena shot her last bullet.

"Raise your hands or we will shoot your head!!!" A guard ordered them.

They saw over 20 guards pointed their guns at them. They didn’t have any choice except obeyed the guard.

The door slammed onto the wall because Takamina kicked it strongly. “No! I am the one who will shoot your heads!” She lifted both of her hands and then she started to fire her guns.

Jurina entered that place from another door. “Hi.” She smirked as she saw the guards shocked because she came from behind.

Both of them shot the guards from 2 different sides.

The guards looked confused about which side that they need to be attacked first. Their formation became messed up. Jurina and Takamina succeeded kill dozens guards in a few seconds.

They missed a guard who still standing there. Jurina took her knife from her sock and then she threw it to the guard. The knife perfectly stabbed his forehead.

Maeda Team couldn’t close their mouths, they even forgot to blinking. They gulped.

"H-how you-"

Mayu entered the mess place. “I told them to do so. Attack from 2 sides will confusing them.” She shrugged.

Rena hissed. She hardly accept that Mayu is the one who actually saved their life.

Yuki came with a backpack, she put it on the floor. “I think you running out of something.” She took out the contents of her bag. Guns.

All of them grabbed the guns.

"I know where is he." Mayu pointed at a door on the corner.

"Are you sure?" Rena replied it sarcastically.

Jurina pull out her knife from the man’s forehead. “If you don’t trust her-” She wiped the blood with her shirt-sleeve.. she she put it back into the wrapper and then she slipped it into her sock again, “- you can go and find your own way.” She walked first… to the door that pointed by Mayu.

Takamina and Mayu followed Jurina.

Yuko nudged Yuki’s waist. “Hey, your girlfriend is really smart. How can she knew it?”

"She was attacked by Makoto’s underling, after she killed him.. she took the man’s cellphone and hacked the password. She read some messages that Makoto held the meeting in room 405.
And…. I didn’t want to mention it now but… our house is totally wrecked.”

"What?!" Sayaka shocked.

One by one Maeda Team followed the trio police.

Jurina really piss me off many times since last night. Rena followed them from behind.

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*END*

Jurina kicked the door strongly and then she took out a bomb from her pocket. “Listen, guys. I’m really tired today so…. you better put down your gun and raise your hands. Or! I will throw this bomb to your mouth.”

Everyone in the room stunned as they saw a girl who ready to throw the bomb and other 9 girls who pointed their guns at them.

Takamina show them a police ID Card. “I’m a sergeant! Surrender yourself and be prepared to enter your home sweet home.” She smirked. “I mean… your jail.”

The rest of the member entered the room and tied them one by one.

Kojiharu locked her gaze to Mariko’s murderer. She clenched her fist and then she walked towards him. She put her gun on his head.

Jurina pointed her gun to Kojima. “Don’t kill him. He is the key that will prove that I’m innocent! If you kill him, I’ll kill you too!!”

"I don’t care!!! I want him died right now." Kojima tears burst out.

Jurina was ready to pull the trigger as she saw Kojiharu ready to shoot him too.

Yuko want to lift her gun, but Rena pointed her gun at Jurina first. ”Put your gun down, Jurina.” Rena said it firmly.

Jurina was surprised, but she ignored Rena. Jurina kept pointing her gun at Kojiharu.

*BANG!* Kojiharu finally shot him.

Jurina clenched her teeth. She kicked Kojiharu’s back and it made Kojima knelt on the floor. Kojima closed her eyes as if she was ready to die. Then….

*BANG!!*

Everyone gasped.

Jurina’s gun fell, she hold her stomach. “R-rena….” The pain in her stomach doesn’t much compared with the pain in her heart. “You…” Her tears rolled down one her cheeks.

Mayu was totally shocked. “Jurina!!” She released the rope and then she walked towards Jurina.

Makoto realized a small chance as he felt that his hand haven’t fully tied by Mayu. He grabbed a gun from the floor.

*BANG!!*

Sayaka quickly kicked the gun from Makoto’s hand and then she shot his chest.

Makoto fell onto the floor. He smirked. “We’re even. The death paid by the death too.” His blood wetting the floor and after that… he died.

"W-who does he shoot at?!!" Maeda looked around, she was looking for someone who maybe get hurt.

Sayaka gulped, she pointed her finger at Mayu.

Everyone gasped.

Mayu touched her bloody chest. The bullet pierced her from her back. Makoto shot her back when she walked towards Jurina. Mayu knelt, she didn’t have an energy to keep standing.

"No!!!!" Yuki ran towards Mayu. She hugged Mayu. "M-mayu!! D-don’t leave me!!!" Yuki’s body quivered as she saw Mayu almost lost her consciousness. Her tears burst out. She was totally panicked.

Mayu’s breath getting more slower. “Y-yuki…. I’m sorry.

"No-no-no!!! Mayu!!! You promised me to stay with me!!! You’re lying!!! L-let’s go to the hospital!!!" She was about to carry Mayu, but Mayu shook her head.

It’s too late, you better saving Jurina.

Too late. Those words made Yuki even more desperate, sad, and afraid. “Don’t say like that. Both of you will survive!!”

Mayu gave a weak smile to Yuki. “Again… you insult my brain. I really know that I won’t arrive at the hospital on time." She caressed Yuki’s cheek. "Ss-sorry…. I- I ruin…. everything…. I’m… r-ruining…. our dd-dreams…. I- I…. lov-

Yuki’s eyes widened as she felt Mayu’s hand fell from her cheek. She saw Mayu’s head fell backward. “M-Mayu…… Mayu. Mayu…. you know, it’s not the right time to joking with me…” She shake Mayu’s body. “W-wake up!! Wake up, Mayu!!!!! Fuck!!!! Fuck-fuck-fuck!!!”

Yuki put Mayu’s body on the floor. Her eyes became so red, her tears didn’t stop. “Aakkkkhhh!!!!!!” She punched the floor over and over again. She looked at Makoto’s body and then she shot it over and over again until the gun running out of the bullet..

She grabbed Sayaka’s gun and then she shot Makoto’s body again. Yuki slammed the gun onto the floor as she realized that the bullet already empty. She grabbed an iron stick and then she used it to crush Makoto’s head. “Arrggghhh!!!! Son of a bitch!!! She even didn’t have an enough time to say that she loves me!!” She kept hitting Makoto’s head.

Makoto business partners gulped as they saw Makoto’s body covered by blood, they were afraid that they will ended like Makoto. They’re afraid that Yuki would crush their head too.

Maeda grabbed Yuki’s waist from behind. “Yuki. Yuki, stop!! Stop!! He’s already dead, it’s useless… he can’t feel your pain. Yuki…. I’m so sorry…..”

Yuki stopped when she realized that Acchan was right. She let the iron stick fell from her hand. She grabbed Acchan’s gun from her pocket and then she pointed it to her own head. “You’re right. It’s better I follow her. She’s still here, I can feel her.”

Sayaka grabbed Yuki’s gun with her right hand and used her left hand to close Yuki’s mouth with a cloth that already contained by anesthetic.

Yuki struggled but then…. she fainted.

In a few seconds later, they heard the police car siren came closer to the factory.

"Who call the police??!!!" Rena yelled out loud.

Takamina glared at Rena. “Me!!! Why?!! Do you think I can handle this mess by myself???!!! One of my bestfriend is dying.” She pointed at Jurina who fainted with a clothes in her hand to stop the bleeding. “And my another bestfriend died!!!!” She pointed at Mayu. “What should I do then??? Huh?!!”

Maeda team were silent. They realized that it’s a great loss for Takamina.

Takamina carried Mayu’s body. “Go away and never come back. Jurina and I will surely kill you if we saw you guys again. Don’t you dare to come back!!”

Maeda looked sad when she heard Takamina’s words, but she didn’t wanna debate with Takamina in a hurtful time like this. “Guys, let’s go! Sayaka, please carry Yuki and bring her to our car.” Acchan went out from the room without looked at Takamina. As soon as she stepped out from the door… her tears burst out and it soaked her cheeks.

Rena walked closer to Jurina’s body that laid on the floor. She wanna gave Jurina a goodbye kiss on her forehead.

"Don’t touch her!!" Takamina gave a warning.

Rena stepped back. I’m sorry, Jurina. I did it for you…. if you kill Kojiharu, Yuko will surely kill you too. I… I can’t do anything, my brain didn’t find another way.
I hope one day….. you’ll understand me like you always did before. I’m sorry that we have to seperate even before we solve our problem.
One day…. I’ll come back to you. I don’t care if you really wanna kill me or you already found someone else in the future…… I love you.


=================== 3 Years Later ====================

4. = Come Back =

*AtsuMina*

*The bell rang*

Takamina hissed. Who’s visit me at this late night?! I’m about to sleep!

She lazily walked towards the door. She peeked from a small hole on the door, but the girl who stood in front of her door facing the other side. Takamina only saw her back and her long hair.

She opened the door. “I’m sorry, I think you enter the wrong room. I didn’t have any friend who planned to visit me ton-“

Takamina’s eyes widened when the girl turned her head. A-acchan?! She looked really different.. she’s growing her hair. She almost hypnotized by Acchan’s beauty but… her soul back to her body. “What are you doing here? I’ll call the police.”

"I miss you."

Before Takamina could even get the chance to respond, she felt Acchan’s lips crashing onto hers.

Takamina stepped back. “Don’t y-“

"I won’t go even if you pointed your gun at me."

Takamina sighed. “Come in.” She let Acchan entered her apartment.

Acchan looked around. “Nothing changed. It still like the old times.”

Takamina closed the door. “I’m not good in decorating my place, so… nothing changed even since I moved here.”

Acchan nodded.

"What do you want?? It’s 1 AM, you know?!" Takamina pointed at a clock.

"I know… I’m just coming back from Thailand and right after I put my stuff in the hotel room, I rushed here."

Takamina fluttered but again… she tried to hide it. “Why? You can come here in the afternoon so you won’t BOTHERING me like this.”

Acchan looked at Takamina, she looked at straight to her eyes. “Don’t push me away… Bakamina.”

"Huh?" Takamina’s memory back to the time when both of them fought over a piece of ice cream and ended up with hugging in front of the refrigerator. ‘Bakamina’, it’s been a long time since she heard that nickname.

"Do you already forgot it?" Acchan started to talk because Takamina didn’t say anything. "You said it to me, but you did it to me twice… in the factory and now."

"Mayu’s death made me hate everything around me." Takamina walked towards the kitchen. "I’ll make a tea for you, after that… you can leave my place."

Acchan smiled. “Forget the tea, I didn’t need it.” She took a deep breath. “Do you still love me?”

Takamina stopped. “I don’t know.”

"Do you always miss me? In every single day in your life. Is these past 3 years feels so long? Do you wait me and keep thinking on me? Do you always wish me to come back?"

"You ask me too much. It’s really rude."

Acchan’s eyes got teary. “Just please…. yes or no. After that, I’ll leave.”

"I don’t know."

"Do you still hate me? Do you still wanna kill me? Do you still wanna put me into the jail?"

Takamina looked away. “No… I don’t.”

Acchan smiled. “Thank you. At least I get the answers for some of my questions.” She stood up. “Do you wanna ask me something before I leave?”

Takamina shook her head.

"Well…. then…. goodbye." Acchan gave Takamina a short smile and then she walked towards the door.

"Did you ever love me?" Takamina asked it when Acchan opened the door.

Acchan turned her head. “You ask ‘Did I’?” She smiled. “I do… I always do. I fall in love with you since you hugged me on the kitchen.”

Takamina was surprised. “You easily talking about it now.”

"I can’t wait until many years again to say it to you." Acchan stepped outside.

"Don’t go. Don’t leave me again. Don’t leave me even if I ask you to do so." Takamina couldn’t hold her tears more longer.

Takamina walked towards Acchan and then she pulled Acchan back into her place, She closed the door behind her.
"I still love you. I missed you in every single day of my life. My 3 years was like I lived in the hell because you weren’t here. I always wait and thinking of you… every night. I always wish you’ll come back, I was almost crazy to the death just to wait ‘today’… the day when you knocked my door." She pressed her lips onto other girl’s lips.

The short girl didn’t pulled back as she only deepened the kiss, savoring the taste of the girl’s lips. Takamina knew that Acchan wanted to do this.
After for so long, they finally reunite. Now, nothing mattered in the world. Just the their bodies close to each other as their tongues fight for dominance.

Takamina vowed to not let Acchan go away again.

But when she felt the other girl stopping their moment, she felt lost again. Until she was pushed back against the bed.

Acchan quickly climbed on top of the short girl, leaning closer into her ear as she whispers the four intoxicating words. ”You are mine tonight.

Takamina smirked. “I’ll make sure that it will be happened.” And then their lips reunite again.

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“Just go to sleep, you looks tired. Tomorrow, I’ll give you some pay back.” Takamina smirked.

Acchan climbed up and then she fell herself onto Takamina’s arm. “I’ll eagerly waiting it.” She wrapped her arm onto Takamina’s waist.

"Oh, by the way… how about your friends? Are they still alive?"

Acchan smacked Takamina’s head. “Of course they are.”

Takamina grinned. “Sorry.. I didn’t hear any robberies case about you guys anymore.”

"Am I misheard something or you really upset about it? You should be happy."

Takamina sighed. “Honestly… I’m upset about it because it made me lost you. Well you guys seems more expert after work with us.”

Acchan giggled. “You’re wrong. We didn’t do it anymore. We’re become a good citizen now. Sayaka worked as a Karate teacher in a highschool, she lived with Sae who worked as a photographer. Yuko and Kojima lived together too, Kojima worked as a model.. that job forced them to live in Paris. Yuko worked as a cafe singer. About Yuki…..-“

"So… you lived alone for years?" Takamina cut it off because she had a feeling that a sad thing happened to Yuki.

"No…. I lived with Rena."

Takamina caressed Acchan’s cheek. “Do you wanna lived with me?”

Acchan shed her tears. “Do you really mean it? We just meet again 3 hours ago.”

"I’m waiting for 3 years to say it."

Acchan looked at Takamina. “Can you just….. do the pay back now?”

———————————————————————-

*WMatsui*

Jurina walked around the shopping mall. I need some new clothes for winter. I always catch a cold even though I wear 3 layers of shirts!

She stopped in front of a clothing store, she went in. She scratch her head. “Tsk. I should ask Churi to go with me. I didn’t have a good sense when it comes to clothes.”

"This." Someone poked her shoulder. "This is looks suit on you."

Jurina turned back. She stunned. “R-rena!!”

"Do you wanna talk?"

Jurina clenched her fist. “Yes! We have many things to talk about!!”

"Okay, but not here." Rena stepped outside the store.

Jurina followed her patiently. Finally… they end up in a small restaurant. Jurina frowned. “You do it on purpose.”

"Yes, I am. I kinda missed this place."

It’s a place when they ate their first lunch together after fought over a guitar.

"How are you?"

"Absolutely fine!" Jurina simply replied it.

Rena nodded. “I see….”

"How can you find me? I moved from my old apartment." Jurina hit the table and it caused other customers stared at them.

"Well… it seems the table already turned. You became the one who love to make a fuss on the public area." Rena smiled.

"Don’t change the subject!"

Rena sighed. She took her phone from her handbag. She did something with her phone and then she showed it to Jurina. “Here you are. Your new apartment.” She pointed at the blinking red dot on her screen.

Jurina was surprised. “You followed me?!”

"No, I didn’t mean to." Rena slurped her hot chocolate. "Do you remember the clothes that we wear to attack Makoto?"

"No! The only thing that I remembered on that day is you shot me."

Rena didn’t expect that the topic about it would appear that quick. “Oh, it seems that you really hate me so you bring that clothes to your new apartment instead of threw it away.”

"What’s your point?"

Rena rolled her eyes. “The GPS, Jurina. I implanted the GPS into our clothes. I almost forget about it until last year Acchan talked to me about it again.”

"You’re lying!! We did it 3 years ago!! It must be running out of power!"

Rena laughed. “Kid, you talk with a wrong person. I made the power from solar energy, not a battery. Well.. I guess that you hate me so much and then you washed the clothes regularly and drying it under the sun. Oh, it’s waterproof too.”

Jurina didn’t say anything again. She stared the table.

"Jurina?"

"You already know my new apartment.." she stood up. "You can come someday if you want and we will settle our problems. I need to go back to the office now."

Rena seemed disappointed. “Are you still a police?”

"Yes. Takamina already resigned since 2 years ago, but I won’t leave my job that easy. I love being a police so I can arrest a villain like you." Jurina left Rena alone in that restaurant.

*3 Days Later*

"Come in."

Rena entered the place. “Wow. You’re a tidy person. I never noticed it.”

"Yes, you didn’t know anything about me."

Rena sat on the couch. “Except the situation inside your house, I knew everything about you…. sergeant.”

"Stalker."

"Yes, I’m a stalker… but I only stalk a girl." Rena smiled.

Jurina sat on another couch. “You’ve changed.”

"Like what?"

"….." Jurina gazed a girl in front of her. Physically, nothing changed with her. Still gorgeous and beautiful, pale, white, thin, and she even didn’t change her haircut. But… there’s one big difference. "You smile alot."

"Don’t you like it?"

"……."

Rena looked at the window. “I learn to smile alot… I learn to not harsh towards people… I learn to not pissed off people… I learn how to show my love to the people that I loved.
From Mayu and Yuki I learn that…. everyone will leave. It’s just a matter of time. We won’t know when God will take someone that we loved, if it happened to me back then… I would regretting myself in every seconds because we’ll left each other without any lovely memories.
Back then, I always rude to you. I’m so sorry.”

Jurina could hear Rena’s voice quivering. Somehow.. she felt regret because left a sad memory to Rena in these past years.

Rena looked at Jurina again. Jurina could see the tears. “Jurina, look. I shot you because-“

"I knew about it. You didn’t want Yuko kill me." Jurina walked towards Rena. She knelt on the floor and then she hold Rena’s hands. "I didn’t mean to make you sad like this, Rena-chan."

Rena’s heartbeat hammering as she heard ‘Rena-chan’.

Jurina tightened her grip onto Rena’s hand. “I didn’t mean to forcing you to change. I was such a childish back then, I should accept whoever you’re. I’m forcing you to become someone who aren’t your true self. That’s my biggest mistake.”

Rena released one of her hand to caressed Jurina’s cheek. “I missed you so much.”

Jurina’s tears fell. “So, why don’t you just come back to me earlier? I missed you too… but I had no idea where I should search you. I keep working as a police so I can track you if someday you appear again. But I’m wrong… your team never show up again.
And it makes me feel hopeless.”

"I want come back as soon as I left, but…. I need to change myself first before it’ll become our problem again. It’ll be hard for me if I lose you again."

"You don’t need to change yourself, Rena-chan. You can become whoever you want." Jurina grabbed Rena’s hand on her cheek. "Would you be mine again?"

Rena kissed Jurina’s lips. “I’m always yours. You didn’t need to ask it.”

Jurina smiled and then she pulled Rena into her kiss. “I love you, Rena-chan.”

"I love you too, Jurina. I do really love you." Rena said it and then she kissed Jurina again.

"It seems you’re not a tsundere girl anymore." Jurina smiled while kissing.

Rena pulled Jurina’s body into her hug. “Being a tsundere girl is tiring, you know?”

They chuckled together before they did a passionate kiss. A kiss that will become a sign of their new life.

————————————————————————

*Yuki*

A nurse came to her room. “Yuki, you haven’t eat since yesterday.” She wanna feeding Yuki, but Yuki hit the plate.

"I don’t wanna eat anything!!! I want die!!" She glared at the nurse. Yuki grabbed a broken plate and wanna cut the artery in her wrist.

The nurse shocked. She tried to hold Yuki’s hand. “HEELLLLPPPP!!! She wanna kill herself again!!! Help!!!”

Other nurses rushed into Yuki’s room and hold her tightly. A nurse held a syringe.

Yuki struggled, she tried to ran away but she didn’t have an enough power. No!! I’m not crazy! Stop anesthetize me! Just let me die!

A doctor entered the room, he shocked as he saw 5 nurses tried to anesthetize a thin girl who looked so pale. “Hey, stop it!” The doctor grab the syringe and threw it onto the floor.

Yuki’s body started to feel weak. Shit! They succeed to give me an anesthetic again! I will kill all of you if I already conscious later.

Her sight started to blur and she almost couldn’t hear anything.

"Doctor, you’re new here. You have no idea about this patient. She always try to kill herself and sometimes she will try to kill us too!!" A nurse looked really angry.

The doctor seemed disagreed. “But you can’t always gave her an anesthetic!! You can kill her! It’s so barbaric!!”

Yuki saw they debated about her. She tried to narrowed her eyes. Mayu? M-Mayu!!! But… her voice sounds different! Her hair… why… so…….. short?

Yuki tried to call Mayu’s name but it seemed the anesthetic already influenced her body. Mayu……..

The doctor squatting in front of Yuki. He smiled. “Don’t worry. Just sleep. I promise that it wouldn’t happen to you anymore.”

Yuki’s eyes was about to closed because of anesthetic effect.

"Doctor Watanabe, your other patient is waiting for you."

"Okay." The doctor looked at Yuki again. "I’ll make you get out of this place soon."

Mayu……

Yuki lost consciousness.

======================== THE END ========================

Special thanks to Shechi-san (http://ohaiyoshechi.tumblr.com/) who translated this fanfic on idol48vn.

I give my big thanks to Sherin-san (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=52447) who gave the ideas about Takamina Team in the last chapter.

And also for Terragen-san (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=88327) who had succeeded in affecting me to write her/his idea about MaYuki since I post chap 3. You gave me your cool idea. Thank you. :P

Thank you for aryamachdi-san (http://aryamachdi.tumblr.com/) who helped me with AtsuMina scene.

Thank you all readers who can’t be mentioned one by one , I hope you won’t be disappointed at my last chap.

———————————————————

See you in a ‘flashback chapter’ for Maeda Team. (Only if you want it) :)

If you want me to write it, I will write how Acchan collect her members and about each member life before/while they join Maeda Team.

As you know…. the pairings that included:

Maybe I’ll add a character too.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: mo-chan on December 07, 2013, 09:27:11 PM
 :on blackhole: an other writer killed Mayu...  :frustrated:
why Mayuki had to have this horrible end  :on cloudeye:
Tii will be happy  :mon heh:
good job but Tianne you broke my heart at the end  :gyaaah:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Shinoki on December 07, 2013, 09:39:38 PM
TIS THE END!!!
 ...Mayuyu!!!
...Yuki!! that end part... gguuuuuhhhh!!
Rena~Rena~ Rena~ whew... WMatsui seems...fine? :3 huhuhu...Rena-stalker...eh?

Bakamina!! Bakamidget!!! >x<!!

this fic...was absolutely wonderful
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: jell_o_jello on December 07, 2013, 10:27:19 PM
Mayu~~~~ :fainted:
Can I request (read:demand) another MaYuki OS to make up for this? A new setting or a continuation between Doc Watanabe and Yuki, either is fine. Poor Mayu  :err: first she got played by Yuki and in the end she didn't get a happy ending :cry:


Finally this series has ended, I really enjoyed it. Thank you, anakpati!! :onioncheer:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Chanaline on December 08, 2013, 12:15:25 AM
I want to kill you :yawn:

MAYUUUUUUUUUU :bleed eyes: I don't know why but I did knew that it will be Mayuki that will have a death when I read:

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This chapter contains of a character’s death.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: mo-chan on December 08, 2013, 12:24:48 AM

MAYUUUUUUUUUU :bleed eyes: I don't know why but I did knew that it will be Mayuki that will have a death when I read:

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This chapter contains of a character’s death.
me too  :on cloudeye: I had that feeling when Tianne said Yuki will get her punishment but isn't too much  :on hobo:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Sydney W on December 08, 2013, 01:04:25 AM
Can you make an omake on Yuki with Watanabe ?
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Konoe on December 08, 2013, 01:32:52 AM
Putri why did you join the others in killing Mayu?!!!  :fainted: I want a compensation for this!!  :mon whine: Like jell and Sydney said a continuation of Dr. Watanabe and Yuki.

I want to comment to other couples but my heart is still broken so I will edit this later after I cheer myself up. :on speedy:

EDIT:

Atsumina finally managed to say to each other their real feelings. :farofflook: The smut is too short but I understand that you must be tired for making this very long chapter. :yep:

How sweet of Rena to change her rude attitude just for Jurina. She can SMILE now! Good for Wmatsui. Loled at the GPS. Rena why are you so smart? XD

Yuki... Poor Yuki. My Mayuki heart. :cry: Everybody got a happy end except for them. :( Mayu's death caused a very big change to Takamina, Rena and especially Yuki.

I will be eagerly waiting for the Dr. Watanabe and Yuki omake.  :w00t:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: AryaMachdi on December 08, 2013, 01:54:11 AM
You have finally completed this fanfic! After so long, it finally came to an end!

Though, I only have one complaint...

Why did you have to kill Mayu? Like seriously... That was so heartbreaking to read. And with Yuki trying to kill herself just to meet Mayu again in the afterlife, it just adds up the depressed and sad feeling for the loss of the poor girl :(

Great plot, great action, and really well done dialogue (I love the dialogue Yuki did when Mayu died in her arms, really realistic), you did another splendid job on a fanfic, Putri. Amazing job! :)

I hope you'll make more fanfics in the future. I'll be waiting! ;)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Beel on December 08, 2013, 01:58:59 AM
For a great fanfic, a great ending.  :thumbup

But do not understand why Mayu had to die .. she wanted to change her life or just get out from the police (?
Or you just wanted to troll us (? xD

Yeah, make an omake on Mayuki, plz  :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: anakpanti on December 08, 2013, 02:18:00 AM
Hi, My lovely readers. Thanks for reading 'Wanted!' until it reach the end. :)

Ano... I haven't properly apologize to MaYuki fans.
I'm so sorry.  :kneelbow:

I'm MaYuki fans too... and yes, when I re-reading it... My tears fell down when Yuki show her emotion after Mayu's death. 
It's hard for me to forgive myself too.  :fainted:

Honestly.. since the beginning, I already thought that someone will be dead for sure, but... I was still hesitant about it. :mon psst:
Until...... someone suddenly gave me a name: Mayu.
So.... I agree with him/her.
Mayu's character is really fragile here... and she has many complicated things with Yuki.

Okay... I'm gladly to write an omake about dr. Watanabe and Yuki.
I will try to bring Yuki's smile back. :mon yeah:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: embee5442 on December 08, 2013, 02:22:23 AM
Mayu's DEAD!!!  :cry: 

But another 'Mayu' came so, what's there to fuss about?  :lol:

This is really great I totally enjoyed it!  :twothumbs

Terima kasih :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: cisda83 on December 08, 2013, 03:20:47 AM
well.. Atsumina, Saeyaka, Kojiyuu are together...

But Wmatsui... seems to be a bit reluctant to even be together...

Jurina somewhat still angry for being betrayed like that...

Somehow... the death of Mayu could be avoided if Kojiharu could just kill him then

So somehow the death of Mayu could be indirectly caused by Jurina...

Eh.. Doctor Watanabe...? Interesting...

So Yuki is going to be with a male... that look like Mayu?

Eh... the end...

Please make a small sequel or extra about Mayuki after yuki was released from the mental hospital

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: anakpanti on December 08, 2013, 03:53:27 AM
well.. Atsumina, Saeyaka, Kojiyuu are together...

But Wmatsui... seems to be a bit reluctant to even be together...

Jurina somewhat still angry for being betrayed like that...

Somehow... the death of Mayu could be avoided if Kojiharu could just kill him then

So somehow the death of Mayu could be indirectly caused by Jurina...

Eh.. Doctor Watanabe...? Interesting...

So Yuki is going to be with a male... that look like Mayu?

Eh... the end...

Please make a small sequel or extra about Mayuki after yuki was released from the mental hospital

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Hi cisda. :) I wanna try to answer you question.

WMatsui only need a little more time to trust each other again but... They're fine.

No.. No...
Mariko's murderer is not Makoto, it's his personal assistant.
Kojiharu already shot the murderer's head, and Jurina got angry because Kojiharu killed him. (Jurina already gave a warning to Kojiharu before.)
The police team lost their strong evidence for their crime cases.

Jurina wanna kill Kojiharu, but Rena shot her first.

Mayu, who in charge to tie Makoto seemed too shocked and she walked towards Jurina who injured.
She forgot that Makoto's hand don't tied properly.... she's too worried about Jurina.
And then.... it happened.
But yes...  Mayu's death inderectly caused by Jurina and Kojiharu.

Yes, dr. Watanabe is a male.
I'll make it. :)

Umm... instead of mental hospital, I called it as rehabilitation place.
Yuki isn't fully crazy, she just always wanna kill herself.
She got trauma because her girlfriend killed in front of her eyes and died in her hug.
Actually... she still can act properly if she didn't feel threatened.

I'll write about it in the omake.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Charlotte-Sempai on December 08, 2013, 04:08:34 AM

Hi. I one of those silent readers, but man oh man I had to say something!

I KNEW IT.

I KNEW MAYU WOULD DIE!

Okay now that I got that out of my system...

I'm sad that this story is over, but it had a great ending, even with Dr.Watanabe appearing at the end.

Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: chiqinna on December 08, 2013, 04:57:05 AM
woaahh~~ finally!! :D
but yeah killing Mayu kills my heart~~~ :'(
yay for atsumina and wmatsui happy ending!!  :cow: :cow:
at least Yuki is not THAT crazy like..talking to herself~ talking to the 'wall' haha  :rofl:
I wanna know how Kojiyuu ended up being together ehh~
I will be waiting for flashback of Maeda team~  :twothumbs
you know you should make Doc. Watanabe x Yuki omake~~ :D
its a really really great 10 Shots Putri~ hope you will make more shots in the future!! you are such a great writer!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: triela on December 08, 2013, 05:39:24 AM
 :cry:MAyU NOOooooooOooooooooooooo why?? :cry:

 :cry: i cant stop  :cry:

 :inlove: atsumina moment :heart:  i cant read the smut part XD   :angry:

i hope yuki can be happy one more time

rena and jurina  :heart:

more atsumina please XD



Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: ifzhaa on December 08, 2013, 06:27:16 AM
i need omake part soooonn .. Thx anakpanti-san !!
Kojiyuu in paris , dr. Watanabe , whooaa pls update asap
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Terragen on December 08, 2013, 07:01:43 AM
Laugh really hard when i read the others comment

Cant help it,this is one of the great fic i ever read.
And wow just BIG WOW for the ending,i knew it but never though yuki as patient haha
Somehow its became a sexy ending,especialy when yuki meet dr.watanabe. I could feel the summer has come!!
Yuki really need a dr to healing her wound

Looks like you will write omake for them, hahaha
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: kahem on December 08, 2013, 08:41:26 AM
Mayuyu!!!!!! Why?!!!! T_T
It was really a great story!!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: DC2805 on December 08, 2013, 09:05:04 AM
Thanks for the great story! The characters of the "main cast" are really different from other fics and it's kinda nice to have a different feel to it :)
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: AshuraX on December 08, 2013, 09:27:21 AM
I want AtsuRena...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: cisda83 on December 08, 2013, 11:30:02 AM
Hi anakpanti,

Thank you for the explanation...

Looking forward to your omake then

Thank you again...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Chanaline on December 08, 2013, 12:26:28 PM
Who gave you the name?
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: eri98 on December 08, 2013, 12:47:52 PM
I've read this story since the beginning, and i didn't comment yet. It's a great story, even though at last Mayu must died in this fic.  :cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: edogawa4869 on December 08, 2013, 04:29:21 PM
aaarrrghh...

it's totally dramaaa...  :cry:

i need omake or side story...  :D

googd job...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Zita on December 08, 2013, 08:49:11 PM
Is she really really dead? :cry:
Why?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What will be with Yuki now?

Thank you for update :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: qr.rima on December 08, 2013, 09:13:53 PM
They had two hours to prepare...mayu just had to be so dumb at the wrong time, they are police officers. She knows she's not as capable as the others in combat.

Why did she not wear bullet proof vest?

Also, if Yuki's punishment for being a player is mayu's death. I think it's a bit over the top.

I was kinda expecting haruna to die, you know the usual "I have avenged my lover's death, so now it's time to be with her" route haha

Wmatsui drama at the last chapter, nice.

All in all This has been a great story.
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Kirozoro on December 08, 2013, 10:36:08 PM
I want to know more about Mayuki at the last part

Thx for the update
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: kurogumi on December 09, 2013, 12:33:10 AM
O gosh! I missed 3 chapter??LOL
It's because my busy schedule,and not to mention my work is on a place where no signal LOL

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Well...

WHY? WHY MAYU?? Oh my,no wonder yuki go crazy and want to suicide,yuki really do love someone this time and crazy in love too~
Maybe phisycal yuki is strong,but mentaly not strong enough,mayu is like everything for her...

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Wmatsui quarrel was cute but somehow make rena wanna change too,
Its true,when we had someone act tsundere like rena,sometimes its a little bit tiring too,we want to be spoiled too,not just spoiling people

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About atsumina,well those people like takamina character is rarely died on the story LOL

Happy atsumina

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And the ending for yuki... Its sad but,when the mysterious doctor watanabe came,i start to wonder~

R-really?

Mayu?
But the doctor appearance is looks like a guy from yuki POV
So i wonder if it just coincidence his last name was also watanabe

Make me thing If this dr.watanabe had some related with mayu,

And i think how cool are you putri san,for making this hanging ending for yuki,its like i watch some movie LOL

And this kind of ending make the other want to know who that man and what happen next in yuki life~

Also its reducing my sadness after lossing mayu,the ending give us some hope that in the future yuki will get her happy

Sweet ending!!
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: gek geki on December 09, 2013, 03:32:28 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!


NNNNN...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!



OMAKE OMAKE!! IS A MUST!!! AND HAPPY

HAPPY!!!

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA

AH IM CRYING....MAYUKI THIS DAY REALLY HURT ME
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: olive29 on December 09, 2013, 10:05:03 AM
Why???!!!

Why Mayu always the one who is dead ???!!! :cry:

Poor Yuki... :cry:

But at least, there's Dr. Watanabe..

WMatsui and Atsumina finally together..

Yeay... :cow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
Post by: Keisthename on December 09, 2013, 01:51:09 PM
I finished this last night and was totally hooked up with it that the first thing I do in the morning was re-read the last chapter coz it's really incredible. haha I had goosebumps..

This is soooo nice. I think this is the only fanfic I've tried to read that has side stories other than only focusing at AtsuMina, which made me love other pairings! I think I'm starting to create a wonderful insights on creating stories to other members aside from atsumina. I've loved MaYuki!!! OMG... I so love how everything you've written in their story.. It's like I haven't seen a single flaw that will make me unlike that part of your story. It's amazing I've fallen in love with them because of this fic... /now I'm thinking whether to create a fanfic with them as well/

Also, WMatsui.. ahh made me love them as well!

Wonderful. Thanks for this story.. But of course, atsumina scenes always makes me hyper.. but still.. I think Mayuki had gotten me in this fanfic.

Looking forward to your next stories!!!

OMG my comment is so long now.. lol time to end this.. XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: anakpanti on December 09, 2013, 08:59:45 PM
I rushed to write this omake for 'Wanted!' to cure our pain because of Mayu’s death. :’)

I don’t know that it’ll good enough or not, since I never have an experience to write a boy in my fanfic. The situation and place is totally different from ‘Wanted!’ =.=”

Here we go. Enjoy.

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#1 Omake - dr. Watanabe x Yuki

The doctor seemed disagreed. “But you can’t always gave her an anesthetic!! You can kill her! It’s so barbaric!!”

Yuki saw they debated about her. She tried to narrowed her eyes. Mayu? M-Mayu!!! But… her voice sounds different! Her hair… why… so…….. short?

Yuki tried to call Mayu’s name but it seemed the anesthetic already influenced her body. Mayu……..

The doctor squatting in front of Yuki. He smiled. “Don’t worry. Just sleep. I promise that it wouldn’t happen to you anymore.”

Yuki’s eyes was about to closed because of anesthetic effect.

"Doctor Watanabe, your other patient is waiting for you."

"Okay." The doctor looked at Yuki again. "I’ll make you get out of this place soon."

Mayu……

Yuki lost consciousness.

====================== Next Day =====================

Yuki sat on the cold floor. “I don’t want to eat anything!” She pushed the plate strongly. Why they’re so hardly to understand my words?!

The plate fell onto the floor but it wasn’t broken. They changed Yuki’s plate became the plate that made from the melamine instead of the plate that made from the glass. So if the plate thrown by Yuki, it wouldn’t be too harm anymore.

The nurse looked so irritated by Yuki’s attitude. She went out from Yuki’s room. “Doctor, I can’t hold it anymore!”

"Tsk." Yuki climbed up onto her bed. "They’ll definitely wanna make me faint again."

The door opened.

Yuki already on her ‘defense position’. Anesthetic make me feels so damn dizzy right after I regain consciousness. She held a pillow.

"Hi." A doctor entered her room as he gave Yuki a bright smile. "How are you?"

Yuki chose to didn’t answer it. She observed the doctor from his head to the toe. He is only a male who look alike Mayu. She cried. Mayu… where are you?! Why did you go to a place that I can’t see? She put the pillow onto her bed and then she closed her face with her palm. Yuki sobbed. I miss you.

The doctor seemed confuse. He walked slowly. “I’m sorry. D-did I make a mistake? Why are you crying?”

Yuki lifted her head. “Go away! You’re one of them, right?! Don’t make me faint again!!” She threw the pillow to the doctor. “Don’t come closer!”

The doctor catched it. “Yes, I’m one of them, but.. I’m not here to force you sleep like last night.” He smiled.

Yuki saw his smile. Somehow….. it made her a bit calmed down.

The doctor pulled a chair and sat in front of Yuki. “What’s your name?”

Again… his smile could make her believes that he won’t hurt her. “Yuki.” She uttered her name.

"Well… Yuki-san, you can call me Nabe. Can I check your blood pressure, Yuki?"

"I’m not crazy!!"

The doctor chuckled. “I didn’t say that you crazy. I just wanna measure it to know your condition.” He put his hand on the bed. “It won’t hurt. I promise.”

Yuki slowly laid on the bed and let the doctor grabbed her left arm.

After a few minutes, he let go of Yuki’s arm. He sighed as he saw Yuki’s pale and small face. “Your blood pressure is too low.”

Yuki remained silent.

The doctor smiled. “I know that the food in this place like a shit. I won’t be surprised if you didn’t want to eat it." He acted like he whispered at Yuki. "I always bring my own bento instead of eating for free in this place.

Yuki looked confused.

"Do you wanna try my bento? It’s totally delicious!!" The doctor’s eyes seemed sparkling. "My mom is the best chef… you won’t regret it if you try it!" He grinned. "You must try it." He stood up. "I’ll bring it to you tomorrow."

Yuki saw the doctor walked away from her room. I even didn’t say yes.

====================== Next Day =====================

Yuki curled up on her bed. She looked at her fingers. Her fingers much smaller than she ever remembered. Why am I not dead yet?

Yuki heard someone knocked the door, she wake up quickly. She moved backwards until her back touched the wall.

"Hi."

He again?

"Here." The doctor grinned as he lifted his plastic bag. "I told my mom about you… and then she decided to make 2 bento." He walked inside. "She’s nice, right?" He giggled.

Yuki saw the doctor pulled a chair and a table became closer to her bed. He put the plastic on the table. He took a bento and put it in front of Yuki.

"Come on, try it." He took his bento from the plastic bag as well. "Itadakimasu!!" He grabbed his chopsticks and started to enjoy the food in front of him.

Yuki didn’t move from her spot. “I’m not hungry.”

The doctor hissed in a funny way. He put his chopsticks and then he scratched his head. “Well… I think my mom will kill me tonight. She always upset if she saw there was a food left in my bento.” He sighed. “Okay… don’t worry. I will eat yours then.”

The doctor continued to eat his own bento. “Why my mom give me a bigger portion than usual?!” He grumbled by himself. “Geez! I’m full already.”

The doctor drank the water to help him gulped the rice. “Ahh.. my stomach.” He kept grumbling.

Yuki frowned as she saw the doctor grumbled every 10 seconds. “Okay… I’ll help you.” She moved forwards and then she grabbed the chopsticks.

"Oh, wait a minute. I will bring more water for us." The doctor stood up and then he walked out from the room. He closed the door and then he peeked Yuki from the transparent window on Yuki’s door.

He smiled as he saw Yuki ate the meal that he brought. Finally. He walked away to the hospital kitchen and grabbed 2 bottles of waters. I have to find another excuse for tomorrow, so she will eat too. He chuckled.

====================== Next Day =====================

"Ohayou, Yuki-san."

Yuki didn’t react to it.

"Let’s have lunch together again." For the third times, the doctor pulled the chair and the table again. "I think I’ll just leave it here. It kinda troubled if I keep dragging it everyday."

Everyday? Do you planned to come here.. EVERYDAY?! Yuki remained silent.

"Today, my mom cook the different dishes from yesterday. Lets ea-"

"I won’t eat that." Yuki looked at the doctor in a cold way.

The doctor pouted. “Why? Was the meals tasted bad yesterday?” He sighed. “I will call my mom to tell about it.” He took out her phone and started to dial someone.

"No, that’s not it." Yuki sounded a bit panicked because the doctor wanna call his parents. "It’s delicious."

dr. Wanatabe smiled. “Cool! So, let’s eat! Itadakimasu!!”

Why I’m trapped between a mom and a child problem?! Yuki started to eat the bento.

========================= **** ======================

It’s been 3 weeks since they had lunch together. Watanabe could see the difference. Yuki’s weight gained and her face wasn’t as pale as before.

"Yuki-san."

"Hm?"

dr. Watanabe stared at Yuki who ate in front of him. “Let’s take a walk outside.”

"The nurses won’t give me a permission to step out from this room."

The doctor surprised. “Really? How long have you been here?”

"Almost 2 years."

"And you never went out from this room for 2 years?! At least you can go to the hospital park and sit there to feel the fresh air."

Yuki shrugged. “I didn’t need it.”

She is totally an introvert girl. Watanabe saw Yuki already finished her bento. “Is it delicious?”

"Yes, delicious as always."

She almost responded all of my questions. She’s not as cold as before and her emotion become more stable as the time goes.

A nurse knocked the door. “Doctor Watanabe-san, patient in 304 need your help.”

"Okay." He stood up and then he packed his bento boxes that already empty. "See you tomorrow."

Yuki smiled as the doctor had completely left the room. Since he worked here, I never get the anesthetic anymore. He’s not scaring me like the others.

======================== **** =======================

"Wanna go outside?" Wanatabe sat on his usual chair.

Yuki choked, she grabbed the water that Watanabe gave to her. She drank it. “I want but…. I’m not sure about it.”

"Why?"

"Seriously, Nabe-san. I’m a crazy girl. I always wanna hurt myself if I saw a sharp things."

dr Watanabe surprised…. not because of the statement, but… “It’s the first time you call my nickname.” He smiled.

"Ah, really? I never realize it before." She smiled back.

dr. Watanabe got the second surprise. “This is the first time I saw your smile too.”

Yuki laughed. “In these 3 months, you always looked at me in detail like that?!”

"It’s the first time I saw you laughed too. It’s 3 combo!! We must celebrate it!" the doctor grinned.

Yuki’s eyes widened. “Stop it! It makes me looks like a creepy girl who never smile and laugh.”

Watanabe grabbed Yuki’s wrist. “Let’s chat in the garden.”

"The nurses won’t gave me a permission, Nabe-san!"

Watanabe smirked. “Did you forget?? I’m a doctor. Come on.” He pulled Yuki’s hand.

Yuki seemed hesitant. “Are you sure? I mean… If I’m hurting myself or anybody out there, I will-“

"No worries!" Watanabe cut it off. "I’ll take care of you. I promise."

"O-okay…. but please bring the anesthetic. In case I-"

Watanabe shook his head. “I won’t bring it. I saw your medical record. In past 2 years, you almost anesthetized every 3 days! It will be dangerous if we keep insert it again into your body.”

"Soooo…….?" Yuki looked hesitant.

The doctor rolled her eyes. “SO, Let’s get out of here and play in the park!” He smirked.

Yuki was surprised because the doctor pulled her hand strongly. She almost fell but her foot seemed strong enough to support her body. Eh? My power regained?! Am I already recovered?

Yes, before dr. Watanabe forced her to eat the bento that made by his mom…. Yuki was really weak. She even often fell when she tried to climb up to the bed. She even forgot the day when she was really strong and can fought with many guys when she robbed a place with her friends.

Yuki followed him helplessly.

The doctor opened the door, Yuki stepped outside slowly. It’s been a long time. She saw all the nurses… looked at her. They were confused, afraid, and shocked.

Yuki can felt the difference of the air. In her room, the air felt so stuffy… but after she walked outside and specially when she walked outside the hospital building, she could feel the fresh air filled her lungs… swept her skin.

The doctor let go of his grip from Yuki’s hand. He looked at Yuki, she closed her eyes…. the doctor could see that Yuki enjoy the moment. He smiled. “Feel better?”

Yuki opened her eyes and looked at the doctor. “Much better.” She smiled.

dr. Watanabe stunned as he looked at Yuki’s smile. Her smile looked brighter and bigger than before. S-she’s so beautiful…. The ‘old’ Yuki flashed in his memory. She looks so different from the first time I saw her. Her reddish cheeks and her red lips starts to bloom… her warm hand… her smile… her laugh…. her cold gaze disappeared. She…. she… I-

"Nabe-san!! Why do you still standing there? Where’s the park??" Yuki seemed so excited.

The thick wall between us slowly disappearing. The doctor walked towards Yuki and then he pointed at his right direction. “There. Just follow me.”

"Hey, Mr. Doctor! Thank you." Yuki patted his shoulder.

"For what?"

"For trusting me. Another nurse and another doctor wouldn’t let me go outside… especially without hold the syringe that full of anesthetic."

The doctor smiled. “Well…. you trust me too. You wouldn’t let me entered your room without throw your pillow at me and you wouldn’t walk out here with me… if you don’t trust me.” He looked at the sky. “I always trust my patients… I never think that they’re hopeless…. I always think that one day they will get out of the hospital and give me their smiles…”

"You’re a great doctor."

======================= **** ========================

"Umm… Yuki-san."

"Yes." Yuki put the last piece of the meat into her mouth.

"Tomorrow…. we can’t have lunch together. I have another schedule."

"Tsk." She sighed. "Well, okay. No problem."

*Next Day*

"I won’t eat that!!" Yuki laid her body on the bed and faced the wall. "How many times I need to tell you that I don’t want to eat anything!!"

Yuki kept facing the wall without looked at the nurse, she was afraid that she will throw the plate or hit the nurse.

The nurse walked closer and grabbed Yuki’s arm. Somehow…. she felt threatened by that action. Yuki woke up and then she turned her body, her eyes seemed full of hate, she clenched her fist. She lift her fist, when she was about to hit the nurse…….

"Yuki-san, there’s a call from dr. Watanabe." Another nurse walked to her room and stopped right in front of the door. She was afraid and hesitated to get closer to Yuki.

Yuki growled. “Liar!!!”

The nurse talked through the phone. “She-” She stopped because she heard the doctor talked to her. “Okay.” She pressed one button on the phone.

Yuki-san. This is me.

Yuki lowered her fist as she heard the voice from the phone’s speaker.

Do you wanna talk with me?

Yuki reached out her hand.

The nurse turned off the speaker and walked towards Yuki. She slowly put the phone on Yuki’s hand.

"Moshi moshi."

How are you today?

Yuki laid her body on her bed and faced the wall again. “I’m fine. And you?”

Umm…. actually. I don’t feel good.

"Why? Are you sick?" Yuki sounded a little worried.

The doctor chuckled. “No, I’m not sick. I’m extremely hungry, my stomach a bit hurt…. I haven’t lunch.

"You should eat!!" Yuki yelled at the pity phone.

The doctor laughed. “Then… you should eat too.” He said it calmly.

"But I-"

I haven’t eat since morning… just like you. My stomach felt hurt, so I’m sure your stomach just like mine too. So, let’s have a lunch together. We can eat together now and chat through the phone.

Yuki seemed doubt for a while but then… she woke up again. “Okay.” She grabbed the plate from the nurse’s hand. “I can eat by myself.” She said it as she saw the nurse was ready to feeding her.

The nurse was surprised. “O-okay.”

The nurses walked out the room and then closed the door.

"Hey… Yuki-san always become so calm around doctor Watanabe." The first nurse talked to her friend.

"Yeah. dr. Watanabe seems put a lot of effort to Yuki-san. He arrived at the hospital earlier so he could persuade Yuki-san to eat her breakfast, he brought the bento so he would have a reason to have lunch with Yuki-san, and she came home late so he could buy some meals for Yuki-san before he went home. He tried really hard to make Yuki didn’t skip her eating time."

The first nurse nodded. “Yuki-san is very lucky to be close to a handsome and sweet doctor like him…. she get 100% of Watanabe-san’s concern.”

======================== **** =======================

"Arrggggghhh!!!!" Yuki kept screaming in her room.

dr. Watanabe rushed into Yuki’s room. He shook Yuki’s shoulder. “Yuki, Yuki, wake up! It’s just a dream.”

Thankfully that Watanabe have a night shift today, if not… he was sure that the nurses will simply gave Yuki the anesthetic again to shut her up. “Yuki.. wake up. You’re dreaming.”

Yuki opened her eyes, she looked at Watanabe. Her eyes widened and then she grabbed Watanabe’s neck and pulled it hard. “M-mayu!!! You’re safe!! I’m so sorry. I’m sorry… I won’t leave you again!!” She said it as she caressed Watanabe’s head.

The doctor blushed because of Yuki sudden action. “Y-yuki… I’m not-“

"I love you… I love you, Mayu! Please don’t leave me again!!" Yuki tightened her hug. "Don’t go!"

Watanabe tried to push Yuki away. “Yuki, I can’t breath. You hold me too tight. It’s only a dream, Yuki. You better take a rest.”

"Is it true? Is it just a dream?!! That’s a fucking bad dream!! I saw you died in my hug. You didn’t die?!! Thanks God, I’m wake up now."

The doctor shocked. So… this is the reason. The reason why you’re here. You had a terrible memory and experienced a worst thing. "Yuki… you better sleep. I need to go. I have something to do."

"Don’t go! Sleep with me. Please accompany me here, I feel so cold and lonely."

Watanabe released himself from Yuki’s grip. “I can’t, but I will accompany you. I will sit here until you fall asleep.”

Yuki started scream again. The scream sounded so painful. It even can make his heart feel throbbed. “Ssshhh… shh…" He stroked Yuki’s hair. "Okay… okay… I will sleep here.

Watanabe climbed up onto the bed and start to lay down, he faced the ceiling. For a moment later, he felt Yuki’s hand wrapped his chest. Maybe she’s right. I’m dead.

He glanced a gorgeous girl who slept beside him. He groaned. Focus, Nabe.. focus!! You only need to accompany her until she sleep! Don’t do anything!!

*In the morning*

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!!" Yuki kicked Watanabe strongly.

The doctor bumped the floor. He grimaced in pain. “It’s too hurt! I’m here because you ask me to do so.” He rubbed his butt.

"What?! It’s impossible! You’re pervert!"

Watanabe rolled his eyes. “I’m not a liar. Wanna watch the CCTV together? Besides that…. we’re not doing anything. We only sleep.”

The doctor looked at the nurses who already stood in front of the door. They chuckled. “Why no one wake me up??!!”

"We didn’t have any troubled patient last night. So, we didn’t wanna bother you." A nurse simply answered.

======================== **** =======================

"Let’s try it." Watanabe put a little bag on the table.

"A-are you sure about it?" Yuki rubbed her own palm. She seemed not sure about something.

Watanabe sighed. “We have to try it. It’s been 6 months since I worked here and I know that you can do it. Your progress looks really good. You can’t be here forever. Trust me, okay?”

Yuki nodded helplessly.

"Okay." The doctor took a sharp pencil from the bag and then he put it on the table.

Yuki rolled her eyes. “Seriously doctor… I’m not that crazy. It’s just a pencil.”

Watanabe laughed. “Well… I’m sorry. I didn’t know how sharp it will be. I will make it from the easy one.”

Watanabe took a pen, a toothpick, a pin, a needle, and a wood nail… he put it all on the table. He waited for Yuki’s reaction but nothing happened. “You looks okay with small stuff.”

The doctor put her hand into the bag again. “This is getting serious now.” He took a screwdriver and a big fish hooks. He smiled as she looked Yuki still didn’t react to it.

Watanabe started to take the bigger things.
A sharp wood… it much bigger than a toothpick. Good.
A razor blade and a cutter… She seemed a bit surprised and started to rub her palms. He stopped for a while, unexpected… Yuki calmed down again.
A scissors… Yuki rubbed her forehead strongly, she looked a bit stressed. She seemed uneasy.

"Are you okay? Do you want me to stop? The next tools will be too dangerous if you grab it." The doctor looked so worried.

Yuki closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She opened her eyes again. “I’m okay.”

Watanabe nodded. Finally, a knife… a small one.

Yuki gasped, she started to panic. She grabbed the bed cover and tightened her grip onto it. “I… I feel…. I want to-“

"Think about your friends Yuki, imagine how sad they’re if you keep like this. They will blame themselves because they can’t protect you."

Yuki closed her eyes. Acchan, Sae, Yuko, Sayaka, Haruna, and Rena… their face appeared in her head. She remembered how worried they were before they put her into this hospital. Their worried face even didn’t disappear when they trusted this hospital to protect her. They looks so sad.

Yuki’s eyes teary. I’m sorry to become your burden for years. She opened her eyes again and then she loosened her grip. “I’m good.”

dr. Watanabe smiled. “I’m proud of you.” She took out a bigger knife and a piece of shards glass. He put the empty bag onto the floor.

Yuki looked uneasy for a few seconds, but after that… she smiled. “I’m okay, so…. Am I pass this test?” She grinned.

"No… not yet."

"What?! Oh.. come on!!" Yuki protested.

"Yuki…. this is serious." He put his hand into the pocket. "You can kill me too this time."

Yuki looked at the cute doctor with a suspicious look.

"This." The doctor carefully put a gun onto the table.

Yuki gasped as she looked at it. She could feel the sweat out of his pores. It gave her chills. Yuki closed her eyes when many words echoed in her head.
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H-Hhh-Hi… I’m Watashi… Ah, I mean…  I’m Watanabe Mayu. Ni-nice ttoo-tto meet you… Mayu looked so nervous.
--
Yuki…. Yuki… Yuki…. Mayu smiled.
--
I love you… I love you… I love you… Mayu blushed.
--
Y-Yuki…! Yuki…Yuki~… Mayu moaned.
--
Yukirin~ I’m hungry. Let’s buy something… Mayu pleaded.
--
Sh-she’s still my girlfriend!! Mayu looked jealous. Mayu cried.
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You don’t understand how much I cried!!! You will never understand even if I tell you how sad I am… Mayu was angry. Mayu’s tears rolled down.
--
I missed you… Mayu gave a weak smile.
--
Pinky swear? I love you. Stop crying… Mayu’s face looked messed up but still…. her bright and beautiful smile appeared.
--
My number is 284!!! I’m the last?! Mayu looked really irritated but when she turned away… A short smile grew in her lips.
--
Yuki, Will you leave me again? Mayu’s eyes showed her uneasy feeling.
--
At least you already felt my love before something bad happen… Mayu looked away as she tried to hide her worried face.
It’s okay… It’s okay. I’m fine. Mayu tried to calmed down Yuki.
Let’s save our friends.
Jurina!! *BANG!*
Y-yuki…. I’m sorry. I- I ruin…. everything…. I’m… r-ruining…. our dd-dreams…. I- I…. lov-
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"Aaaaakkkhhhhh!!!!" Yuki screamed. She started to grabbed her own hair. "Mayu! Mayu!! Mayuuu…!!!" Her breath became heavier. She clenched her teeth. Her eyes opened and her gaze locked at the gun on the table. "I want to die."

When Yuki wanna grab the gun, a pair of warm palms held her hand gently.

"Yuki… think about your friends." Watanabe made his voice soft.

"They left me here!!! Alone!!! They didn’t love me anymore!! They only think that I’m their burden!!"

The doctor smiled. “No, Yuki. It’s not right. They love you. They worried about you.”

"They are not!!"

"Think about me….. I’m worried about you. I missed your smile, the smile that you gave to me an hour ago… a laugh that you gave to me an hour ago… an optimism and enthusiasm for life that you showed to me 5 minutes ago. You wanna pass the test, right?"

Suddenly… her tears came out from her eyes. Her hands didn’t try to reach the gun anymore. Those hands tried to reach another thing. Yuki stood up and then those hands grabbed dr. Watanabe and pulled him closer into her hug. “Thank you, Nabe-san.”

Mayu…. can you hear me? I love you… I really do… and I will always do. Is it okay for you to postpone our meeting? Because…. I’m not okay with it. I want to meet you but….. I don’t know…… a moment ago it feels like something resist me to do it.

The doctor rubbed her patient’s back. “You’re welcome.” He pushed Yuki slowly, so he could see Yuki’s face. “Congratulation. You pass the test.” He smiled and then she packed all tools on the table, include the gun.

He walked away. Before he closed the door, “I will buy our dinner to celebrate it. Let’s eat together.” He smiled and then he closed the door.

dr. Watanabe leaned her back onto the wall. I knew that today will happen sooner or later. Why? I should be happy for her. Why?! He rubbed his forehead. He lowered his body and sat on the floor. He cried softly.

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Yuki heard her door knocked. “Come in.” She sighed. I already did the test 5 times and I passed it all. He want me to do it again?!

"Yuki!!!!" Someone ran towards her and hugged her tightly.

Yuki looked so confused and then she lifted her head. “Yuko?” She rubbed her eyes to make sure that it wasn’t a dream. “Yuko!!” She hugged Yuko back.

"How are you, Yuki? You looks more beautiful."

Yuki heard another voice. “Maeda?”

Acchan walked towards her. She ruffled Yuki’s hair. “You’re still my favorite.” She smiled at Yuki.

Yuki felt her bed a bit jumped. It because Jurina playfully threw her body onto the bed. “Wow… your bed is so comfortable.”

Yuki smiled. “Jurina, stop it. You will crush my bed.” She pulled Jurina into her hug. “Thank you for coming.”

Jurina rubbed Yuki’s back head. “No need to say thank you, you’re my friend.”

One by one her friends went into her room, suddenly… her room became really noisy. It’s been a long time… really long. Yuki shed her tears.

Someone knelt in front of her and wiped her tears. “Don’t cry, Yuki. We’re here… I mean…. I’m here to see your smile.” She smiled as she held Yuki’s hand.

"R-rena? You? Wh- Hold my hands?"

Jurina put her hand on Yuki’s shoulder. “Yeahh… I know. It startled me as well. She had changed.”

Yuki laughed out loud. “It’s not startled me. It frightened me.”

Rena gave Yuki a short kiss on her cheek. “I’m glad you’re back. We missed you.”

Yuki and Jurina stunned.

Jurina pulled Rena away from Yuki. “That’s too much!! Don’t kiss her!”

Rena shrugged. “Why? I’m just being honest.”

Yuki chuckled. A few seconds later she felt a hand on her shoulder. She looked at the owner. “Sae.”

Sae smiled. “How are you?”

"I’m fine…"

Sae gave Yuki a bitter smile. “I’m sorry… I couldn’t help you much.”

"It’s okay, Sae. I know that you always try to help me and never give up, although you know that it wouldn’t works."

Yuki realized something. “Anooo…. guys, why did you suddenly come here??”

Acchan smiled. “We’re here to bring you home. Well actually… we didn’t live together anymore but you can choose one of us, we’re glad to have you in our house.”

H-home? Yuki surprised.

Takamina came into Yuki’s room, she looked out of breath. “I’m sorry, I’m late.”

The visit time is over." They heard a nurse talked through the hospital’s speaker.

"What?!! I even haven’t say ‘hi’ to the patient!!" Takamina smacked her forehead.

"Hi." Yuki giggled.

"We will come back tomorrow and pick you up. Today we will finish the letters and the administration first, we will stay in the hotel. Take a rest, Yuki." One by one of her friends said ‘see you’ to her.

I… I’m going home? Finally!! Yuki grinned in front of the mirror.

"You looks happy." Watanabe closed the door and then he leaned his back on the wall. "Your friends are very noisy. But it seems fun to have a friend like them." He chuckled.

"Why you didn’t tell me about this?"

"If I tell it to you, it wouldn’t be a surprise anymore." He looked at the ceiling. "You can get out of this fucking hospital tomorrow. Congratulation!!" The doctor grinned. "I will stay overnight in this place. I will be missed our eat time together, so I think… we should have a dinner together…. for the last time…. if you don’t mind."

"I’m fine with it."

"Good." The doctor walked outside her room.

A moment ago I felt so happy, but now…. I’m sad.

 ==================== Last Dinner ====================

Watanabe put 2 boxes of bento that already heated in the microwave onto the table.

Yuki was surprised. “Ha? Your mom made 4 boxes today?”

dr. Watanabe sat on the chair. “Since it’s our last day… can I just be honest to you? I hope you won’t get too angry at me.”

Yuki opened the bento. “It depends on your lie. If it’ll hurt me, you better save it for yourself.”

Watanabe took a deep breath. “My parents didn’t live here. They lived in another town, Osaka.” He put the meat into his mouth.

Yuki almost choked. “So?!”

"So…. I made all of these bento.. since the first time you ate it. All of the nurses and the doctors already knew about it. They knew that I’m lying to you." He ate his bento faster.

Yuki slammed her chopsticks onto the table. “You-“

"I started to make it because I saw you didn’t wanna eat anything. I lied to you about I always eat my own bento instead of hospital’s meal. Then.. I feel glad when you said that these things are delicious." He said it without looked at Yuki’s face.

Yuki glared him. “You didn’t have to lie about this!”

"If I didn’t lie to you, are you sure that you wanna touch it? I’m sure that you would throw it to my face."

"Y-you’re right. I forgive you." Yuki started to ate again.

"I have another lie."

Yuki put the bento to the table, harshly. “What is this again?!”

"Do you remember the day when you mistaken me for someone else? The night when you ‘sleep’ with me."

Yuki didn’t answer it because somehow… she smelled something bad.

"I stole your kiss… on the lips." The doctor poured much chili sauce into his bento. "I just felt that…. you’re too beautiful that night." He feed her mouth with the spicy rice. "Only a short kiss. Nothing more."

"You!! Just… what?!!"

"I have another lie too." The doctor drank the water. "I said that you became more beautiful and looks healty rather than when the first time I saw you. But the truth is….. " He put random thing to his mouth. "Please reduce your weight when you start to life out there. Just… a bit. I think my own cuisine were too delicious and then you start to forget everything. But, I’m happy that your appetite increased."

Yuki couldn’t close her mouth.

His bento box already empty, so he took something from his plastic bag “I have another lie.” He opened a bottle of alcoholic beverage. “I said that I’m happy for you because you can go home tomorrow.” His eyes teary. “The truth is…. I’m totally sad about this… I even cried when you passed your first test. At that time… I was sure that sooner or later, you will get out of this place and leave me here.”

"Nabe, I-"

"I have another lie." He gulped it all and started to open another bottle. "I’m not thinking you as my friend or as my patient anymore." He looked at the ceiling. "I love you and I didn’t want you to go." His tears flowed.

"I have another lie." He said it before Yuki could respond it. "I’m M-"

"STOP IT!!! Stop it, Nabe. Stop." Yuki’s tears started to falling as well. "It’s not a lie but… I never tell it to you before. I was a thief, a player, a robber, a criminal, and I kill many people last time too." Yuki looked away. "I’m not sure that I have a same feeling for you, but.. even if I have…. I’m not worthy for you."

Watanabe stood up, he sat beside Yuki. “Don’t cry. I’m sorry. This is should become a fun farewell party for us. I ruin it. I know that your heart already belonged to someone else. But I only wanna say everything before you go. I-” He felt that Yuki pressed her lips onto his lips.

Yuki pull it back. “You talking too much.”

Watanabe quickly pull her into another kiss that she started before. “Sorry….” He pecked her lips. “but…” He kissed it again. “Please let me…” He felt that he didn’t want to break their kiss. “kiss you more…” He held Yuki’s waist. “tonight… just kiss. Nothing more.” He stopped it and waiting for Yuki’s answer.

Yuki moved, she sat on the doctor’s lap. “If it’s just the kisses, I think it’s okay… You already saved my life and do many things for me. I’ll take it as my gratitute for you.”

When the doctor heard ‘the kisses’ words, he start to eat Yuki’s lips. I love her… What should I do? Their kiss changed into the passionate one as Watanabe’s tounge started to sweep Yuki’s lips, it begging for entry. His hand moved around her back.

Yuki smiled, she gave it the permission to sweep every corner of her mouth. Mayu… I still love you. Forever. No matter what happens, but… if I started to love someone else too… What should I do?

The doctor stopped as he felt Yuki’s warm tears flowed. He whispered.”I’m sorry. I know what it feels." He carried Yuki’s body and laid it onto the bed. He covered it with a blanket. "Good night." He kissed Yuki’s forehead and then he went out from her room.

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"Yuki… yuki.. wake up. Let’s go home." Acchan patted Yuki’s shoulder.

"Hm?" She looked at the clock. 11 AM She woke up quickly. “Wait a minute, okay?”

Yuki ran outside and looking for someone. She kept walking around, but she couldn’t find what she’s looking for.

"Ano… Yuki-san. Are you looking for dr. Watanabe?"

Yuki nodded.

"His shift already over at 8 AM." She took a small paper and gave it to Yuki. "He want me to gave it to you."

Yuki read it quickly.

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I have another lie. One more left….
I can’t show up in front of your friends because Takamina and Jurina know me well.
I’m….. Mayu’s brother.
I didn’t know about your relationship with her at the first place….. until I read your medical story.
There’s my sister’s name in it.

Thank for your love to her. It’s really a great love.
But, I’m sure that she wanna see you happy.
She didn’t wanna see you try to kill yourself.
I know my sister so well.
That’s a great loss for us, so.. let’s get up together and cheer up everyday.

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"Yuki!!! Come on!" Yuko yelled.

Yuki rolled her eyes. Yuko, this is a hospital!!  Don’t scream. She looked at the nurse, “can I borrow your pen and the paper too?”

"Of course." She gave it to Yuki. I have to write quickly before Yuko scream inside this hospital again.

She folded it and gave it to the nurse. “Give it to him and… thank you.” Yuki ran towards Yuko.

Mayu…. thank you.

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"dr. Watanabe. There’s a message for you."

The doctor took it from the nurse.

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285. Doctor Watanabe
kashiwagiyuki@xxxx.xxx
Please email me as soon as you get this paper.

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Watanabe smiled. He looked a bit confused about ‘285’. Well… at least she didn’t really leave me without any contact number. He took out her phone. ‘Ohayou. This is me, Nabe.

A quick reply arrived. ‘Nabe, I think your sister won’t angry if we go out together sometimes, later. See you.

The doctor smiled. Sister, is it okay if I dated with your girlfriend? I promise that I will take care of her for you.
Your love for her and her love for you will never can be replaced by me
I know it..
Come to my dream and please answer me!
He chuckled.

=================== END OF OMAKE ==================

Should I make another omake again? XD

Thank you for all comments.  :kneelbow:
I will reply it tomorrow.  XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: Chanaline on December 09, 2013, 09:02:42 PM
Yes another!!! Because you make me cry... :cry: It was sad and happy at the same time :nervous

When Mayu is mentioned I was really sad...
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: Kirozoro on December 09, 2013, 10:03:49 PM
What a wonder ful Omake story

Yuki finally back to her normal life without Mayu

You the best writer
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: mo-chan on December 09, 2013, 10:42:23 PM
naaah leave it like that :3
it is great end for Yuki :)
even I feel a little hurt for Mayu *cry*
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: mashioou on December 09, 2013, 10:55:41 PM
More omake, onegaishimass :bow:
wmatsui will be great  :inlove:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: cisda83 on December 09, 2013, 11:26:14 PM
Well very nice omake..

Though somehow... Dating your sibling's lover is a bit...

I don't know... Isn't there a silent rule that saying you should not take your sibling's lover

You can protect them, love them but never cross the line

Well anyhow... Interesting great story

Can't wait to see more omake whatever it is...

Thank you

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: affiber on December 10, 2013, 12:22:03 AM
Whoaaa, it was greatt :twothumbs :twothumbs
Thanks for Dr. Watanabe to bring back the cherish into Yuki's life :otomerika:
You know, OS for they both would be great, hhahahh but thank you for the omake,  :twothumbs :w00t:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: Shinoki on December 10, 2013, 12:57:37 AM
Lol, Watanabe-bro is 285...
another omake~ douzo~ :3 would gladly want one...
This was wonderful *thumbs up
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: chichay12 on December 10, 2013, 01:03:03 AM
love this this update atleast yuki is not alone  :wub:
Panti-chan thank you for this awesome fic,and sorry if im not always leave a comment here *teehee* (blame my lazy a**) XD But im telling you..i really enjoy your fic!
Cant wait to read your next masterpiece :on gay:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: chiqinna on December 10, 2013, 02:45:31 AM
Mayu, gone but not forgotten... ohhh I get teary reading this omake~~ :'(
I can totally feels Mayuki loves..
nabe is right... nobody can replaced Mayu in Yuki's heart.. ♥
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: eri98 on December 10, 2013, 03:26:37 AM
Great omake story. And it's success making me cried.  :cry:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: ifzhaa on December 10, 2013, 03:31:53 AM
i don't know why but i feel sad ....  :cry:
 :twothumbs great OS and omake ~~~  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: anakpanti on December 10, 2013, 04:13:40 AM
Hontou ni... Arigatou.  :kneelbow:
I can't stop smiling everytime read "I enjoy your fanfic" "I love this" and other compliments.  XD

For next Omake, I decided to put the rest of the pairings here in 1 omake.

I made Yuki as an Omake because MaYuki's problem is too complicated. :P But everything that I can tell you.... the doctor is a good guy. I will leave it to your imagination... they will be dating or only as a friends.

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@KwonMinAh:
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I can't resist the urge to leave a comment anymoreeeee~ ヽ(`Д´)ノ I only have time to read stuffs at night so...you know...oh that painful moment when you have to hold in your overflowing feelings in order not to wake anyone up...(;´Д`)
Ahh... I'm glad that you gave your first post to me.  XD
Yes, I know how it feels... crying while writing in the midnight.. it's so torturing me as well.  :cry:
I often wanna scream sometime.  :lol:

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you gave one of us here the permission to translate your fic right? Thank youuu~ they are screaming in delight (≧▽≦)
yes, shechi-san often translate my fanfic. Thanks to him/her.  :)

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@edogawa4869:
hey.. I have SaeYuki will be appeared again in my last omake. (Flashback chap.)
I'll glad  if your read it too.

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it's totally dramaaa...  :cry:
Drama? Is it too sad?

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@Chanaline: Hi!! :) Lately, I always see your comments. I'm happy.  :P
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I want to kill you :yawn:
Well... I guess I'm not that happy. *run away*

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I don't know why but I did knew that it will be Mayuki that will have a death when I read:
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This chapter contains of a character’s death.
You have a 6th sense.  :lol:
Yeah... maybe it's because Mayu often died in many fanfics.

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Who gave you the name?
I already wrote his/her name in 'Thanks to' at Part 10.  :P

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It was sad and happy at the same time :nervous
Wow, Am I playing with your emotion?  :lol:

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When Mayu is mentioned I was really sad...
It happened to me as well.
Especially, the flashback... when dr. Watanabe put the gun on the table.

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@mo-chan:
TD didn't read my fanfic, so it will be okay.  :lol:

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:on blackhole: an other writer killed Mayu...  :frustrated:
I had influenced by many fanfics.  :lol:

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I had that feeling when Tianne said Yuki will get her punishment but isn't too much
I think... yes, it's too much... but after the second thought.. 284 girls?! It's a great number.  :P

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it is great end for Yuki :)
even I feel a little hurt for Mayu *cry*
Thanks God, I didn't need to write another omake again for Yuki. 8)

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@Shinoki:
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Rena~Rena~ Rena~ whew... WMatsui seems...fine? :3 huhuhu...Rena-stalker...eh?
No.. Rena didn't mean to stalk Jurina, GPS help her. LOL

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Bakamina!! Bakamidget!!! >x<!!
Finally.... Takamina show herself as a sergeant in the last chap.  XD

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@jell_o_jello:
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Can I request (read:demand) another MaYuki OS to make up for this? A new setting or a continuation between Doc Watanabe and Yuki, either is fine. Poor Mayu  :err: first she got played by Yuki and in the end she didn't get a happy ending :cry:
I already made it. I hope you like it, even if maybe it isn't like your expectation.  :(

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@Sydney W:
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Can you make an omake on Yuki with Watanabe ?
I already made it. Do you like it?  :)

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@Konoe: Ahh... you. Suddenly, I remember that I haven't comment your fanfic. I will go there after I write this reply. :p
Ano..... I just read your edited comments.
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The smut is too short but I understand that you must be tired for making this very long chapter. :yep:
Thanks for your understanding.  ;)
Actually... I asked AryaMachdi's help for this. I didn't have an enough time to edit it.
I will try to make my smut debut.  :twisted:

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How sweet of Rena to change her rude attitude just for Jurina. She can SMILE now! Good for Wmatsui. Loled at the GPS. Rena why are you so smart?
Finally! There's someone who mentione about my lovely WMatsui.
They're too focus with Mayuki.  :cry:

Actually... Mayu is a bit more smarter in strategy (just look at their chess game), but Rena more great in IT device... she's genius!  :lol:

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@AryaMachdi: Thanks for helping me. You take a part in this last chap too. XD
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Why did you have to kill Mayu? Like seriously... That was so heartbreaking to read. And with Yuki trying to kill herself just to meet Mayu again in the afterlife, it just adds up the depressed and sad feeling for the loss of the poor girl :(
Wait a minute.... I even didn't know that you read my fanfic.  :lol:
I'm crying too. But I can't do anything... I already thought about it since a long time ago. It's not easy to change the plot.  :cry:

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Great plot, great action, and really well done dialogue (I love the dialogue Yuki did when Mayu died in her arms, really realistic), you did another splendid job on a fanfic, Putri.
You flattered me too much.  :shocked: but.. thanks.

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@Beel:
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But do not understand why Mayu had to die .. she wanted to change her life or just get out from the police (?
Or you just wanted to troll us (? xD
Sh-she..... is really dead.  :cry:

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@embee5442:
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But another 'Mayu' came so, what's there to fuss about?  :lol:
But... Mayu still dies. We still sad even if there's another 'Mayu' came.  :P

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Terima kasih :P
Indonesian?

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@Charlotte-Sempai: Wait... I seems skipped 3 chap of you fanfic. Okay, I will read it gave a comment today.  XD

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Hi. I one of those silent readers
Wait... what?! Another silent reader... I'm happy.  :inlove:

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I KNEW IT.
I KNEW MAYU WOULD DIE!
It seems everyone have a good eye. They knew that Mayu is the one who I meant in 'Warning'.
MaYuki fans are awesome.

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@chiqinna: Seriously.... I'm glad to see your comment again.
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at least Yuki is not THAT crazy like..talking to herself~ talking to the 'wall' haha  :rofl:
Talking to the.... wall? :shocked: I won't make my Yuki become so crazy like that.  :P

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I will be waiting for flashback of Maeda team~  :twothumbs
I will write it as my last omake.

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@triela: Thanks for reading. Other pairings moments will be added in second omake.

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@ifzhaa:
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Kojiyuu in paris , dr. Watanabe , whooaa pls update asap
You will see KojiYuu later.  :)

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i don't know why but i feel sad .... 
If it's about Mayu.. all of us will feel sad, no matter how hard I try to make Yuki smile again.  :cry:

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@Terragen: Hi!!!  :lol:
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Laugh really hard when i read the others comment
H-how... can-you-laugh in the time like this?!  :P

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And wow just BIG WOW for the ending,i knew it but never though yuki as patient haha
Somehow its became a sexy ending,especialy when yuki meet dr.watanabe. I could feel the summer has come!!
Yuki really need a dr to healing her wound
The doctor already did it.  XD

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@kahem: Thanks alot for reading.  :grin:

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@DC2805:
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The characters of the "main cast" are really different from other fics and it's kinda nice to have a different feel to it :)
I hope it will be a refreshing story for us. Thank you.
Yup, most of them are totally different from their character in other fanfics.

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@AshuraX:
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I want AtsuRena...
I... have no idea about this.  :sweatdrop: Any idea?

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@eri98:
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I've read this story since the beginning, and i didn't comment yet. It's a great story, even though at last Mayu must died in this fic. 
I found another silent reader here.  :inlove:

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Great omake story. And it's success making me cried.
Thank you. Which part that made you cried?  :P

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@Zita:
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Is she really really dead? :cry:
Why?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What will be with Yuki now?
I wish you read my omake.  XD

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@qr.rima:

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Why did she not wear bullet proof vest?
Ahh... this question finally comes...
I suddenly remember about AKBingo when they played as 'detective', Inaba-san die and Sae said: "Why we are not just check the fingerprints?"
 :lol:

That's my plot. Even if she wear a  bullet proof vest, I will make Makoto shoot her head instead of her chest.
Maeda Team and Takamina team often targeting enemy's head and using a knife because all of them wear it.
I forgot to make Mayu wear it.  :lol:

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Also, if Yuki's punishment for being a player is mayu's death. I think it's a bit over the top.
I was kinda expecting haruna to die, you know the usual "I have avenged my lover's death, so now it's time to be with her" route haha
Haruna was ready to die, she even closed her eyes when Jurina pointed her gun onto her head.
But... Rena shot Jurina first.
About Yuki's punishment.. It's always unfair if someone have to die, even in our real life. So, it's like... their destiny(?).

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@Kirozoro:

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What a wonderful Omake story
Yuki finally back to her normal life without Mayu
You the best writer
I'm blushed. Totally.
Thanks for reading.

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@kurogumi: Finally!!! You came!! I thought you stop reading it.  :cry:

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WHY? WHY MAYU?? Oh my,no wonder yuki go crazy and want to suicide,yuki really do love someone this time and crazy in love too~
Maybe phisycal yuki is strong,but mentaly not strong enough,mayu is like everything for her...
It's the first time for her to deeply falling in love with someone, yet... she have to lose her love.
She's really traumatized.

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Wmatsui quarrel was cute but somehow make rena wanna change too,
Its true,when we had someone act tsundere like rena,sometimes its a little bit tiring too,we want to be spoiled too,not just spoiling people
I feel pity for Jurina, she always get a shout from Rena.
So, I decided to make Rena show her love more.  :lol:

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About atsumina,well those people like takamina character is rarely died on the story LOL
Sh-should I make one of them die in my next omake?  :rofl:
Kidding.

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Mayu?
But the doctor appearance is looks like a guy from yuki POV
So i wonder if it just coincidence his last name was also watanabe
He is Mayu's sibling.

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And i think how cool are you putri san,for making this hanging ending for yuki,its like i watch some movie LOL
And this kind of ending make the other want to know who that man and what happen next in yuki life~
Yeah.. you're right. Most of my readers asked me to make an omake.  :P

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@gek geki: Lately, you became rarely appeared.  :P
I already made an omake, so please kindly read it.

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@olive29:
Wait... please continue you fanfic!!  :angry:

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Why Mayu always the one who is dead ???!!! :cry:
My parent said: Good peopl... often die in their young age.  :P
Mayu is a really good girl. (lame excuse)

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@Keisthename:
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I finished this last night and was totally hooked up with it that the first thing I do in the morning was re-read the last chapter coz it's really incredible. haha I had goosebumps..
T-twice?? It's a long chap. You spent a lot of time. :P

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I've loved MaYuki!!! OMG... I so love how everything you've written in their story.. It's like I haven't seen a single flaw that will make me unlike that part of your story. It's amazing I've fallen in love with them because of this fic... /now I'm thinking whether to create a fanfic with them as well/

Also, WMatsui.. ahh made me love them as well!
Wow!! I'm really blushed when I read your comment.
Please love MaYuki and WMatsui as well... I'm waiting for your fanfic.

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OMG my comment is so long now.. lol time to end this.. XD
Don't worry... Honestly, I love long comments.  :w00t:

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@mashioou:
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More omake, onegaishimass :bow:
wmatsui will be great 
Please wait my second omake, okay?  :)

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@cisda83:
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Though somehow... Dating your sibling's lover is a bit...
I don't know... Isn't there a silent rule that saying you should not take your sibling's lover
You can protect them, love them but never cross the line
I didn't know how to respond about this.
Mayu is already dead, so..... I don't know, I leave it to my reader's imagination.  :P

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@affiber: Are you really read it in the morning? Wow.

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You know, OS for they both would be great, hhahahh but thank you for the omake,
Umm... I'm not good enough in picturing a male character, it's a bit hard for me.
I always think that... it's become too gross if I write a male character too close with a girl character.
No matter what happen in fanfics, they're still the characters from 48 family members.  :P
That's why I only put a tiny kiss part for them. :lol:

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@Shinoki:
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Lol, Watanabe-bro is 285...
I know... it's such a great number.  :lol:

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@Chichay12:
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love this this update atleast yuki is not alone  :wub:
Thank you..
It's okay if you become lazy sometime, at least you keep read it right? XD

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Mayu, gone but not forgotten... ohhh I get teary reading this omake~~ :'(
I can totally feels Mayuki loves..
I feel it too.
Yuki will never forget about Mayu.
Even Nabe-san realized about it too.

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Seriously, this is a long reply.  :lol:
I found some new username appeared here. I'm really glad. XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: shechi on December 10, 2013, 05:14:40 AM
Hi  :cow:
Omake's very good~ Althought having dr.watanabe char, Mayuki still show their love. I love it :deco: I again cry for your Fic :panic:
Demo, Let me think to the another way. Dr.watanebe's appearance is a pain punishment more than Mayu's death. He look like Mayu but dr.watanabe is dr.watanabe is not Mayu. By the way, If I was Yuki, I would feel hurt.  :catglare: Maybe I'm still thinking about Mayu's death. Sorry for my mess comment :sweatdrop:
Good job!  :hip smile: Putri-san, right?

@KwoMinAh: Hello baby  :cathappy:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: Sydney W on December 10, 2013, 06:01:46 AM
Thank you so much for the omake
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: anakpanti on December 10, 2013, 06:22:26 AM
Hi  :cow:
Omake's very good~ Althought having dr.watanabe char, Mayuki still show their love. I love it :deco: I again cry for your Fic :panic:
Demo, Let me think to the another way. Dr.watanebe's appearance is a pain punishment more than Mayu's death. He look like Mayu but dr.watanabe is dr.watanabe is not Mayu. By the way, If I was Yuki, I would feel hurt.  :catglare: Maybe I'm still thinking about Mayu's death. Sorry for my mess comment :sweatdrop:
Good job!  :hip smile: Putri-san, right?

@KwoMinAh: Hello baby  :cathappy:

Hi... finally... you wrote your comment here.
Maybe because I didn't post it on AKBlasphemy? :p

I feel bad for often making you cried. :(

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Dr.watanebe's appearance is a pain punishment more than Mayu's death. He look like Mayu but dr.watanabe is dr.watanabe is not Mayu. By the way, If I was Yuki, I would feel hurt.  :catglare: Maybe I'm still thinking about Mayu's death.
This. I thought about it too... I even wrote some paragraph about it..
About the deep pain that stabbing her heart everytime she saw the doctor face. She even try to kill herself more than usual. She started to scream and crying hysterically.

But then.... I deleted it.

I made this omake to reduce the pain... if I keep writing it like that... It could be worse.
I can't make myself and my readers cry again.  XD
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: karenchan on December 10, 2013, 07:59:28 AM
Yes !
Please make another omake.
oh god, i love your writing more and more and more.
I want to know dr watanabe and yuki dating :D
Arigatou gozaimasu  :bow:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: lahika on December 10, 2013, 10:03:45 AM
Such a great Fanfic here. . I just foLLowing this FF,,but I have a rare chance to give comments. . . But,,this is SANGAT BAGUS SEKALI. I know u understand this anyway. . . Hehehehe. . But,,can u pLease make WMATSUI OMAKE ????????? Onegaishimaasu. .
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: Konoe on December 10, 2013, 01:54:48 PM
Wow! :w00t: I thought you will make Team Maeda's story first. This is a fast update.

I really love the omake! :luvluv1:

Dr. Watanabe is so perfect! Caring, kind, smart, good chef, and handsome. I was really fangirling at him. Mou, Mayu's danso episodes always make my heart skip a beat. The Watanabe siblings are stuck with Yuki and Yuki will always fall in love with a Watanabe. Now that Yuki falls in love with a guy, it's her turn to be protected by those strong warm arms.

I still can't believe how much Rena changed. :nervous She has really started to become intimate(?) to other people.

I don't want to impose you but I want another Dr. WatanabexYuki omake. :lol:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: kenjoy12 on December 10, 2013, 02:42:39 PM
Uwaaaa~ Finally, i have time to leave my comment.. Hehehe :nervous

Wanted! \m/  :thumbsup SUCCESS~! Great story~! :twothumbs

Haaaa~ I love it~!. Every lovey-dovey moments of each couples.. I'm just sooooo in love..

But the part 10 when you wrote beforehand someone is going to die..
NOOOOOO~ :banghead: It's my baby MAYUYU~!  :bleed eyes: WHY?!! OH?! WHY?!
Saying goodbye to Yuki and was not able to finish the "i love you"  it seriously broke my heart.. :banghead:

While reading the part 10 where they had their own happy endings and were able to fix their problems..
When i was on Yuki's part she's at the hospital, i felt sad for her.. She was devastated when Mayu died on her arms and still misses her alot..
Then there was a doctor who came and describe like Mayu then helped Yuki.. I thought at first he was Mayu's reincarnation..
But when the first omake was posted and i read it right away..

Nabe-san fell in love with Yuki and because of his helped Yuki able to regained her energy..
The lovey-dovey moments where Yuki only follows or do what Nabe-san says.. Cute~ MORE Dr.WatanabexYuki omake.. :fap
Awww.. I don't know, i'm still sad about Mayuyu..

Anyhow, great omake.. hope to see more story from you.. :twothumbs
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: katekyohit on December 10, 2013, 04:01:08 PM
Phew, Finally I have a chance to read your whole story. First of all. I really enjoy reading this story from the prologue to the last chapter (even though i knew the spoiler that Mayu would die from your omake already) I still read it and really enjoy every moment of MaYuki that happened, it's so sad to know that Mayu will die despite their relationship is just so adorable and sweet! The fighting scenes are cool~ also the smexy scenes~ my most favorite scenes are MaYuki and wMatsui~ They're awesome~ Despite Sae got dumped in the end...too bad, Yuki belongs to Mayu!!!! I love the ending the most, it's so sweet and perfect. :) You really conclude the whole story very well~ Especially the 3-yrs after scene, with Atsumina and wmatsui. Rena being honest is just sooooo ADORABLE  :deco: glad for Jurina that she finally have an honest girlfriend~

Ahem~ Talking about Mayu's death. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. Such a classic death scene, i can feel like it's happening in real life. It's in a blink of second and from Mayu being healthy becomes dead instantly. Even though not immediately but still, she's 100% going to die for sure. I got chills down my spine a little when reading the death scene~ I was also surprised that Jurina got shot XD I thought she would be dying as well. GLAD SHE DIDN'T!

For Omake, it's really fun to read it! I was wondering what Dr. Watanabe could be related to Mayu, i don't think he can be Mayu herself as well...so he's actually Mayu's brother. Yuki sure always fall in love with the Watanabe people~ YUKIRIN IS MY KAMI-OSHI~! So...I hope she's happy with her doctor~ At least Dr. Watanabe would make sure he will make Yuki happy~ ITS SO CUTE THAT RENA KISSED YUKI'S CHEEKS!! AW! I sense YukiRena... OwO

I look forward to read more of your fanfics later~
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: anakpanti on December 10, 2013, 05:17:11 PM
@katekyohit:
 :mon spit:

Haaa???!!!! ka-kate?! :mon wtf:

:mon scare: This is a shocking moment for me.

You read my fanfic. :stoned:

Thank you.  :wriggly:

Okay... enough! Stop fangirling. *Slapped my own face*

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Thank you for coming here, Kate. I'm really glad.  XD
Did you read it all in one go? It must be tiring.  :P

In your first paragraph... you flattering me too much.  :shy2:

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Talking about Mayu's death. I LOVE IT SO MUCH.
Wow.. This is the first comment that say something like this.  :lol:
You're Yuki's fans, so... yeahh.. as long as Yuki is alive, you're fine.

Kidding.  :P
I understand what you mean... it's not like you love Mayu's death.. you like the death scene itself.
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Such a classic death scene, i can feel like it's happening in real life. It's in a blink of second and from Mayu being healthy becomes dead instantly. Even though not immediately but still, she's 100% going to die for sure. I got chills down my spine a little when reading the death scene~
I didn't expect that the scene can feels so real like in your description.
But, I'm so glad if I really could make the readers imagining it like that.  :)

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I was also surprised that Jurina got shot XD I thought she would be dying as well. GLAD SHE DIDN'T!
In MaYuki case: The 'new Mayu' is her danso version... The Doctor.
If Jurina died.... and if I have to make WMatsui omake... I will make the 'new Jurina' as her danso in Ebi Friday. :lol:

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YUKIRIN IS MY KAMI-OSHI~! So...I hope she's happy with her doctor~ At least Dr. Watanabe would make sure he will make Yuki happy~
They will... happily ever after.  :P

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ITS SO CUTE THAT RENA KISSED YUKI'S CHEEKS!! AW! I sense YukiRena... OwO
Yes, I think Rena changed too much. It's weird... actually.  :lol:

Thank you Kate.
Your comment make my night!! Yeaayy!  :ptam-glow:

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@karenchan:
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Please make another omake.
oh god, i love your writing more and more and more.
I will make it. :)
Eh? Thank you, I'm happy that you like my fanfic.  XD

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@lahika:
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But,,can u pLease make WMATSUI OMAKE ????????? Onegaishimaasu. .
I will make it, but... it won't like MaYuki omake.
WMatsui and other pairings will put into 1 omake.. not as indiviual pairing.

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@Konoe:
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Dr. Watanabe is so perfect! Caring, kind, smart, good chef, and handsome.
I wanna become his wife.  :lol:

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Yuki falls in love with a guy, it's her turn to be protected by those strong warm arms.
Back then... she always became the one who will protecting her lovers, but now.... when it comes to a guy, she can't act like that again.

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I still can't believe how much Rena changed. :nervous She has really started to become intimate(?) to other people.
:lol: She changed too much.. Jurina must 'fix' her soon.  :P

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I don't want to impose you but I want another Dr. WatanabexYuki omake. :lol:
I can't make it as an omake anymore.. but as a sub-omake(?) in my next omake with other pairings.

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@kenjoy12:
Thank you for your comment. I'm really appreciate it.

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NOOOOOO~ :banghead: It's my baby MAYUYU~!  :bleed eyes: WHY?!! OH?! WHY?!
Saying goodbye to Yuki and was not able to finish the "i love you"  it seriously broke my heart.. :banghead:
I'm sorry... hey, stop crushing your head.  :P

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When i was on Yuki's part she's at the hospital, i felt sad for her.. She was devastated when Mayu died on her arms and still misses her alot..
Then there was a doctor who came and describe like Mayu then helped Yuki.. I thought at first he was Mayu's reincarnation..
No, it can't be Mayu's reincarnation... I mean... she just died in 3 years and her reincarnation already become a doctor?! :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - (dr. Watanabe x Yuki) [Omake]
Post by: qweakb on December 10, 2013, 05:21:56 PM
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Should I make another omake again? XD

YES! PLEASE!!! :kneenbow:

make MORE omake! astumina, wmatsui etc :kneenbow:

I wonder what will the Dr Watanabe's reaction is when he knew that what is the meaning of 285..

Want to know more about Dr Watanabe and Yuki too.. Please more like 9 more Omake? LOL

Your fic :  :luvluv2: +  :on GJ: :on GJ: :on GJ:

Though the chapter 10 mayu's part is :  :gyaaah:
Title: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: anakpanti on January 01, 2014, 12:35:46 PM
Hi. :)

I'm back for my second omake for Wanted!

I made this because there are a lot of my readers asked me to write more about their favorite pairings. :P

Sorry that I can't make more omake about their future life. Only 1 more omake left, and it's about Maeda Team flashback.

This omake presented for WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, and SaeYaka fans. Douzo!

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(http://media.tumblr.com/a133a9ebfbcf209258974678cdf87120/tumblr_inline_mxl96cjWyv1rrey5h.jpg)

#2 Omake

1. = SaeYaka =

Sayaka threw her body onto the couch. "Ahhh... I'm tired!!" She closed her eyes and then she used her right arm to cover her eyes.

"I can't believe that Yuki choose to stay in their house!" Sae closed the door and then she mumbled all the way to the kitchen. "I can take care of her until she's fully recovered!"

Sayaka laughed. "Yes, it makes me suprised as well. But don't worry, they will be a good friend for Yuki."

Sae took a bottle from the refrigerator. "No, they won't." She gulped a whole water.

Sayaka sighed. She woke up from the couch and then she walked to the kitchen. "Are you..... perhaps.... still loves her? Are you jealous or something?"

Sae a bit surprised. "No, I'm not. I just... don't believe them to take care of Yuki. She's still fragile and I only feel pity for her."

Sayaka took  a pack of yogurt from the refrigerator and then she turned back. "Really? Because it's too obvious in my eyes." She left Sae and went to the living room. She watched the TV while ate her yogurt.

Sae sighed. She leaned her body onto the wall and watched Sayaka from behind. It's been over 2 years we lived together, yet we still don't have any bold line about our relationship.
Sometimes... I need her more than just a friend.
But sometimes... I will only need her as a friend.


Sae walked slowly to the bedroom. She closed the door, after that she climbed up to the bed. She looked at the ceiling. Yuki is not my reason, I already left my feelings for her a long time ago.

Isn't it become too funny if we're become a lover? I mean... she's strong, she even didn't need me to stand beside her. But me... I prefer to protect someone rather than to be protected by someone.
That reason make me half-hearted to date her.


--*****--

"Hi, what's your name?" Sae saw her model looked at her in a 'What? You didn't know me? I'm famous!' way. She quickly changed the question. "I know your name, of couse I know it. I mean... what's your nickname? Can I just call you by your nickname? It's not the first time we meet, we often work together for some magazines."

"Mariyannu. My friends often call me like that." She smiled as she saw Sae's smile. "I thought you don't remember me. You always work with many girls."

Sae chuckled. "It's impossible to not remembering a cute and beautiful girl like you... Suzuki Mariya-san." She smiled again, she could see a slight red on her model cheeks.
"Well.... thanks for your hardwork today. I hope I will work together with you again later. Good bye." She carried her bag and walked towards the door.

"Wait."

Sae felt that someone grabbed her hand. She turned her head. "Yes? What's wrong? Am I forget about something?"

The model quickly let go of her hands from Sae. "Do you free tonight? Let's have a drink together. My treat."

Sae wanna refuse her because it was already dark and she already felt sleepy, but then the model say....

"Today is my birthday."

Sae shrugged. "It will be so rude if I make my new friend disappointed in her birthday." She put her arm on her model's shoulder. "Let's go then."

*Next Morning*

Ahh... my head! Sae rubbed her forehead. She opened her eyes slowly. She immediately realized that she was in her bedroom. She wanna wake up, but she felt someone slept on her right arm.

Sae eyes widen as she realized the girl who slept beside her. Her eyes grew more bigger when she realized that the girl slept without covered by any single cloth.

She smacked her own forehead. Stupid! Why I ask her to come here? Was it because I'm drunk last night and I didn't realize it?

Sae often sleep with her models, but she always did it in her model's house instead of her own place.

She sighed. Sayaka will definitely angry at me. She pulled hand slowly, afraid to wake the girl. She covered Mariya's body with her blanket and then she stepped out from her bedroom.

She walked towards Sayaka's bedroom. "Gorilla, are you still sleeping in there?" She knocked the door. She kept knocking, but Sayaka didn't give any answer.

Sae sighed. It's quite rare to see her wake so late. She went to the kitchen to make make the toast.

After some minutes, the toast was done. When she was about to take the jam from the refrigerator, a pair of arms hugged her from behind. "Miyazawa-san, I have to go. I have another photoshoot."

Sae turned around, she was a bit relieved because the girl already wear her clothes. "Tsk. I already made the breakfast for us." She pointed the toast that already served on the plate. "Couldn't you go after we eat it together?"

Mariya nodded. "Okay." She helped Sae to bring their milk. "Ano.... Miyazawa-san, c-can we meet again after this? I mean... not because of our work."

Sae ruffled Mariya's hair. "Of course, we can." She showed her smile, a smile that always succeed to steal any girl's heart.

--*****--

"Sayaka, this is already gone too far... you ignoring me for 2 weeks. I don't understand what's going on with you! And these-" She pointed at all bruises on Sayaka's face, "-what happen?!"

"It's none of your business." Sayaka opened the door, but Sae closed it again with her body and leaned on it.

"You can't go before we finish this talk." She crossed her arms. "You always come home very late! This week, you always came home at 3 AM?! Are you crazy?"

Sayaka rolled her eyes. "Hey, we're ex-villains. 3 AM should not be a big deal for us. You often didn't come home and stay overnight in some place... and I never had a problem with it!!"

Sae frowned. "Is all of these because of a girl that I brought last time? Did you angry at me because of that? You never talked to me since then."

"I said... I didn't have a problem with anything that you do. Now get out of my way, I'm late!" Sayaka pushed Sae away from the door.

Before Sayaka completely stepped outside, Sae grabbed Sayaka's hand and pulled her back into their house. "Late? You're only a Karate teacher in the highshool.. you work in the afternoon. I'm not stupid!"

"Huh?!" Sayaka released her hand from Sae's grip. "You even didn't know anything about me.. I already resigned from that school 4 months ago."

Sae gasped. "What?!"

Sayaka's eyes started to pour out the tears. "You... you didn't care about me.... never. You're here and stay with me only to use me! You're too sad because Yuki dumped you and use me to fulfil your 'needs'! And after you get bored of me, you start to date other girls!!"

Sae was taken aback. "D-did you mean that I only need you for..... sex? Of course I'm not! It's silly."

"Then... what is it? Huh?! If you didn't like me, we could went separately back then.. you shouldn't touch me! You make me believe that you love me back!!" Sayaka's anger burst out.

Sae wanna wipe Sayaka's tears. Sayaka always like this... physically, she's a strong girl, but when she start to cry... it's really hard to stop her tears. "S-sayaka... I-"

But before Sae touch her face, she shove Sae's hand harsly. "I don't need you to comfort me."

Sayaka went out from their house, but this time... Sae didn't persuade her to stay.

I'm sorry... Sayaka.

--*****--

Sayaka was hesitant to knock her own house's door. She was still felt uneasy to meet Sae. It's been 3 days after their last quarrel, Sayaka didn't go home for 3 days because she went out of town for work.

She took a really deep breath then... she pressed the bell. Not long after that, she heard someone's steps walked towards the door. The door opened.

"Hi."

"Hi." Honestly, Sayaka didn't have anything else to say. It was too awkward moment, stared each other in front of their house.

Sae glanced at the bags on Sayaka's hand. "Let me help you." She grabbed those bags from Sayaka's grip.

Sayaka was taken aback because that was the first time Sae offered her some help. Sae never really help her in a small case like that before because Sae believes that she was strong and didn't need any help. "O-okay..." She followed Sae stepped into their house.

After Sae put the bags in Sayaka's room, she took a bottle of water from the refrigerator and then she threw it to Sayaka. "Here."

Sayaka catched it nicely. "Thanks." She started to drink. After that, she looked around. She frowned. "Wow... I never knew before that you're....... neat?"

Sae giggled. "Hey! I'm actually a tidy person. It's just... you always do it even before I wake up in the morning, so.... I almost lost my true nature."

Sayaka raised one of her eyebrow. "Really? It's just simply sounds that you're lazy."

Sae chuckled. "No, you're the one who's too diligent." She changed her expression. "Where have you been? You know... if we have a problem, you didn't need to run away like that. You can simply shoo me from this house."

Sayaka sighed. "Oh, come on Sae. We already became friends for years, you should know me that I'm not THAT childish."

Sae frowned. "So?"

Sayaka looked at the bottle in her hands. "Since 3 months ago I'm worked as a stuntman and because of the filming location was in outside of the town, so all of the crew have to stay for some days there."

Sae's eyes widened. "S-stuntman?!!! No! No way! That's too dangerous, you know?? You could kill yourself there! So.. all your bruises are because...."

"Yes." Sayaka nodded. "Last time, my job was to ride the motorcycle on the top of the moving train." She laughed. "You know... it's really awesome!!" She looked really excited when the memory came back into her mind.

Sae hit the table. "No, it's not awesome!" She looked away after she saw Sayaka looked at her in a confuse way. "I-if you start to search a job that wouldn't break your bones.... I'll become your girlfriend."

"Huh??!!" Sayaka laughed. "Stop persuading me with a lame joke like that. I love this job so much."

Sae stood up, she stopped in front of Sayaka. "I'm not kidding right now." She gave Sayaka a serious look before she pulled her into a kiss, their lips tangled each other for a while before she pulled it back again. "You should love more than your job, OR you'll regretting it."

Sayaka's cheeks blushed crazily, she was really-really-really surprised. It was not the first time Sae kissed her, but it was the first time Sae put more passion into it. "I don't know what happened to you... all of the sudden, but-" She grabbed Sae's collar, it caused Sayaka could see Sae's face closer. "-I love you more than my life." She captured Sae lips.

They could feel the smiles on the moment their lips linked to each other.

Sae broke the kiss for a while. "What happened to me? Nothing, except I realized that I want you to become my girlfriend while you gone without any single word."

Sayaka's lips hooked up onto Sae's lips again. Finally.

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2. = KojiYuu =

"Nyan-Nyan!!!"

"Kyaaaa!!!" Kojiharu screamed as soon as she saw Yuko ran towards her.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE???!!!" Kojiharu quickly grabbed the towel.

She grinned. "Sorry. You taking a bath too long, so... I just rushing in because I REALLY want to pee." She passed Kojiharu who still surprised. "Besides... it's not my fault, you forgot to lock the door."

Kojiharu started to throw everything around her to Yuko, from the toothbrush until the bottle of shampoo. "I DEFINITELY LOCK THE DOOR!"

"Aww!! Stop it! It's hurt." Yuko rubbed her arms. "Well, I don't have any other choice!! I have to p-"

"YES, you have another choice.. Oshima Yuko! We have 2 bathrooms!!" She threw another bottle again.

Yuko chuckled. "Okay-okay." She ran away while dodged a soap. "I already saw you many times, you don't need to overly shy like that!" Yuko closed the door because she saw the water dipper floated toward her, it ended up with hitting the door.

"I'll drown you inside the bathtub if you do that again!!!!"

Yuko giggled when she heard Kojiharu still yelled at her from inside the bathroom. She threw her body onto the couch, she turned on the TV. Ahh... how I love my life. Her smile was full of contentment.

*10 minutes later*

"Finish already?" Yuko turned her head as she saw Kojiharu went out from the shower.

"Hm."

Yuko frowned as she heard such a cold answer from Kojiharu. "God, are you angry at me?!" She stood quickly and walked towards Kojiharu. "Sorry...." She folded her hands while showing her cute gaze at Kojiharu.

But it seemed Kojiharu didn't influenced by those cute eyes, she looked away. "Yuko, I know your ability.. you can opened any door in this world, but please! I need some privacy too."

Yuko sighed. She staring at the floor. "I'm sorry for being a childish girl. I want to get your attention... you're being so busy lately." She pouted.

Kojiharu turned her head, she saw her squirel girlfriend turned around. I think... she just missed me. She smiled. "Yuko."

Yuko turned back quickly. "Yes?"

"I know a good restaurant nearby, do you wanna have a dinner with me? I don't have any photoshoot schedule tonight." She gave a short kiss to Yuko's cheek.

It works! All I need to do are plead and pout... then I get her. She grinned. "I'd love to!" She hugged Kojiharu. "I love you, Nyan-Nyan."

Kojiharu giggled. "I love you too, squirel." She let Yuko hugged her. "Yuko..." Her hand went through Yuko's hair.

"Hm?" Yuko closed her eyes, she wanna enjoy her girlfriend's sweet fragrance that she longed the most. Lately, Kojiharu always busy and often coming home late... they only have a time for say 'good night' to each other in each days.

"Is it okay for Yuki to live in their place? You know... they always wanna bite each other every time they meet."

"One of the must be suffered." Yuko laughed. "I know who will become the only victim there." She smirked.

======================= **** ========================

3. = AtsuMina =

"Bakamina!!"

"Hmmmmm..." Takamina grabbed her blanket and then she covered her face again.

Acchan pulled the blanket. "Wake up!!!"

She grabbed the blanket from Acchan's hand and covered herself again. "I'm an unemployed, so it doesn't matter if I wake up at noon..." Takamina answered it from inside the blanket.

"Then go and find one! You can't just sleep for the whole day."

"Yes, I can." Takamina popped her head out from the blanket. "Besides that....." She smirked. "You already had more than enough money for us."

W-What?! Acchan couldn't believe that her amazing 'sergeant' girlfriend turned out into a childish girl like that. "Baka! Yes, I have a lot of money... b-but... they're from my ROBBERIES cases!! You don't mind to use it?!!"

Takamina shrugged. "Of course I don't mind... it's still money after all, right?" She grinned.

Acchan couldn't do anything except facepalmed. Why she looks so helpless? She climbed up onto the bed and layed her own body beside her girlfriend, after that she put Takamina into her hug. "Tell me... what happen?" She stroke Takamina's hair gently to comfort her girlfriend. Acchan believes that Takamina wouldn't act like that for no reason.

Takamina closed her eyes and wrapped her arm around Acchan's waist. When she buried her face onto Acchan's neck, she felt so comfortable because of Acchan's sweet fragrance that entered her nose. "I... I couldn't find other job that can make me feel comfortable like when I was in police department."

Takamina took a deep breath before she continued her words again. "I resigned from my old job so I could freely looking for you by myself when you're gone last time.. I was afraid that my status as a police made you hesitate to go back to me."

Suddenly a deep guilt spread inside Acchan's heart. "Of course not, silly. I will keep come back even though you are still hunting me and want to put me into a jail. My love is bigger than that, baka!" She caressed Takamina's cheek. "I'm sorry."

Takamina tightened her hug. "You don't need to say sorry. It was what I thought because I felt so desperate when I couldn't find you. I put all my passion and my effort just to find you. But now, after you come back... I feel confuse about what I want to do next. And I.... " She seemed hesitant to say something. "I... I'm jealous at Jurina, she already became a sergeant and replacing my old position."

Finally, Acchan could understand about Takamina feelings... Takamina want to come back, but there is no way back if someone already given up on their position as a police. "Minami... just relax, okay? I believe that you will find your passion again. Let's just wait together until you find one. I'm sorry for pushing you too hard."

Takamina was surprised, she looked at Acchan's worried face.. "Minami?! Not bakamina?!" Yes, it was the first time her girlfriend calling out her firstname.

Acchan smacked Takamina's head. "Baka!! Why did you ruin our serious moment into a silly topic like that?!"

Takamina chuckled. Yeah.. maybe she's right. All I can do is only wait until I can find it again. "Thank you for understanding me." She gave Acchan a soft kiss on her lips. "I love you more than anything in this world." She kissed Acchan again, but this time seemed like she gave her a deeper kiss.

Acchan was totally blushed by Takamina's sudden action. "Baka, it is my job to understand you... I'm your girlfriend, remember?" She let go of her arms from Takamina's body and turned her face to hide her blushing cheek. "I love you too. I love you more than- uhhh...." she seemed confuse about what she want to say next. "umm... more than Yuki?" She grinned.

"Yuki????!!" Takamina pouted she turned her body until her back facing Acchan.

Acchan laughed. She hugged Takamina from behind. "Don't be jealous at her, baka. It's not like I love her like the way I love you."

"Yeah, I see.... she's your favorite."

Acchan still could feel Takamina's jealousy in her voice. "I told you.. I love you more than her. Geez." She kissed Takamina's head. "I trust her so much. She's like my little sister, we already through many bad things together.. she had a terrible life back then and I can't stay still if I see her suffered again, like when she lost Mayu."

Takamina nodded. "Yup, you already told me about it." She turned back and facing her girlfriend again. "Are you sure that she won't suffered again in that house?" She grinned.

Acchan chuckled. "No, she won't. I'm sure that she will be okay in their hand.. I trust her choice to stay at their house. I know that your friend and my friend can take care of her really well."

"I hope so." Takamina tried hard to hold her laugh.

======================= **** ========================

4. = WMatsui =

"Rena-chaan!!" Jurina called out her girlfriend's name.

Rena opened the door and then she walked in. "Ne, Jurina?"

"Please help me to fix my necktie."

Rena smiled at Jurina. "Come here."

Jurina walked towards Rena, she lifted her head a bit so Rena could easily to do it. She kept staring at Rena's face while Rena touching her necktie.

"Done." Rena used her hands to tidy up her girlfriend's uniform. After that, Rena walked out from their bedroom.

*5 minutes later*

"Rena-chaaan!!" Jurina called out Rena again.

"What is it?" Rena popped out her head from the door.

"I can't find my shoes."

Rena frowned. She pointed at the the shoes beside the bed. "There. I always put it there every morning after I clean it, so you can easily find it before you go for work. How can you forget it?" She rolled her eyes.

Jurina grinned. "Oppss... sorry."

Rena closed the door again.

*3 minutes later*

"Rena-chan!!!" Again.... Jurina called out her again.

"What?" This time Rena seemed a bit annoyed but she tried to keep her voice as soft as she could.

"I forget where I put my-"

"Bag?" Rena cut it off. "Your bag is on your work table, Jurina. You put it there before you went to sleep last night."

"Ah!" Jurina showed her cat smile.

Jurina followed Rena went out from the bedroom and walked towards her home office desk.

"Here. Your car's key inside it, in case you suddenly get an amnesia about it too" Rena handed the bag to Jurina. "For God's sake, Jurina... you already late!!" She crossed her arms.

"I'm sorry."

"Stop say sorry and go now, or you will get scolded by your boss like yesterday." Rena turned around. She walked to the living room and sat on the couch.

Jurina sighed. She looked at Rena's direction... she saw Rena sat beside Yuki, they smiled at each other. Jurina rubbed her forehead. How can I leave them like that?

It's been 2 weeks since Yuki stayed at her apartment... and in that 2 weeks, Jurina always came late to the office. Why? Because she felt uneasy every time she want to leave her place.

"Yuki, this is your porridge." Rena gave a warm smile to Yuki.

Yuki grinned because she felt excited. Rena always cook for her and her cooking (unexpected) is much-much-much better than the hospital meals and it even a bit better than Dr. Watanabe's bento. Cool!

Yuki opened her mouth, she was more than ready to get the porridge. But when it was about to enter her mouth, Jurina's words stopped her.

"Seriously, Rena.. stop clinging at Yuki!"

Rena put the spoon back into the bowl, and the she looked at Jurina. "What?! I'm not clinging at her... I'm feeding her."

Jurina rolled her eyes. "Rena, the nurse and the doctor only said that she just need to relax her mind... she's not dying! She can feeding herself!"

Yuki looked at Jurina and then she shrugged. "Well... I don't mind if she willing to do it." She tried to hold her grin. "Rena, I'm terribly hungry right now." She pouted while touching her stomach.

Rena turned her head back to Yuki's direction and then she feeding her with the porridge. Yuki looked happy when the tasty porridge entered her mouth.

"Hm! Oishii!!" Yuki said it after she gulped the porridge.

Rena seemed happy because someone praised her cuisine.

Jurina facepalmed. It's like I can't do anything else to separate them. She lazily opened the door and stepped out from her room.

Yuki took a little glance at Jurina when Jurina closed the door. "Rena, she's cute.. totally adorable." She said it after Jurina completely went out. She chuckled. "I can feeding myself." She took the bowl from Rena's hand.

Rena gave the bowl to Yuki. "I know, but she looks childish sometime. Just look at how she act this morning."

"She's jealous, Rena. It's reasonable because she know that you're my ex." Yuki laughed. "She's right. Stop pampering me, I'm not dying."

"I'm not pampering you, Yuki. I'm concerned about you and I just want to see you feel comfortable here, with us."

Yuki gave Rena a warm smile. She didn't realize before that her best enemy could become her good friend. "Thank you for your concern, I'm really appreciate it." She put the bowl on the table and pulled Rena into her hug. "You've changed. I wonder why. Do you planned something?"

Rena wrapped her arms on Yuki's body too. "I'm not planned anything." She giggled. She let go of her arms and looked at Yuki. "Well... you've changed too. You are not a damn-fucking-shit-flirty-player girl anymore."

"Whoa-whoa... easy, Rena. You said many harsh words at me just now."

Rena laughed."Sorry. Umm... I think love can change anything."

Yuki leaned her body onto the couch. "Yeah.. love surely can change us." She sighed. "Rena.... I miss her so much."

Rena ruffled Yuki's hair. "I know." She wiped Yuki's tears. "I believes that she is happy up there and you deserve to be happy too."

"Thank you, Rena."

"For what?"

"For not pointing your gun at my forehead anymore."

Both of them laughed together.

--*****--

"Tadaima." Jurina entered her apartment after Rena opened the door for her.

Rena cupped Jurina's cheek. "Okaeri." She pecked her lips.

Jurina smiled. She walked towards the couch and then she put her bag on the floor, beside the couch. She threw her body onto the couch, she laid down on it.

Rena grabbed Jurina's bag and put it on the table. "Jurina, can you put your stuff properly?! That's why you keep forgetting their place when you need them." She sighed.

"I'm sorry, I'm a bit tired. Since Takamina resigned and Mayu died....." She lowered her volume when she mentioned about Mayu. "I'm working alone. I can't find someone else who have a great ability like my friends."

Rena realized that Jurina and Yuki had the same expression when they remembered Mayu, they always sad... Rena knew that Jurina missed Mayu too.

Rena sat beside Jurina's head, Rena gave Jurina a sign for Jurina to put her head on Rena's lap. Jurina smiled and did as Rena want, she closed her eyes while she felt Rena stroked her head gently... she felt so comfortable to sleep on Rena's lap.

"Well... I have a same capability with Mayu. Do you want me to work there to help you?" She said a little joke to make Jurina smile.

Jurina laughed. "No way!"

"Why? My ability may be even better than Mayu."

Jurina rolled her eyes. "Because you will definitely hacking our system again. You're become a troublemaker when you're with your laptop."

Rena giggled. After she saw Jurina already became a bit relax, she kissed Jurina's forehead. "I'm bored, Jurina. I want to have something to do too. I never use my brain for years!!"

Jurina realized that the little joke was over, Rena was serious when she said it. "Rena... but-"

"No, I mean not in your place. I want to work at IT company, I think it's good enough. Well... honestly it's not enough for me but at least I can let my brain works. I can feel my brain cramps." Rena pouted.

"Your brain cramps?! Why are you so genius, Rena?" Jurina laughed. She lifted her hand to caress her girlfriend's cheek. "You didn't know how much I want to recruit you... but I can't. I didn't want you holding a gun anymore or included in the police-criminal stuff again."

"I know. You're worried about me."

Jurina smiled. "But.. I think IT company is a good idea." She saw Rena's smile slowly appeared.

"Really?!" Rena looked so excited.

"Yes, of course. I can't let my girlfriend die in boredom." Jurina chuckled. "Be a good staff, okay? I think it's not hard for you to search your job, you're smart... there's no company that going to refuse you to become their staff."

"I love you, Jurina. Thank you so much."

Jurina woke up. "I love you too." She kissed Rena's lips. "Thank you for coming back to me."

"You're my home, of course I will always come back to you." Rena kissed Jurina again, she gave her girlfriend a passionate kiss.

Jurina seemed remembered something, she broke the kiss and then she looked around. "Where's Yuki?"

"She is going outside with her friend."

Jurina frowned. "Friend? Our friend? Who? Acchan?"

Rena giggled. "Why? Are you worried at her? I didn't know him, but Yuki said he's a doctor from her old hospital."

"Of course I'm worried about her. She stole my girlfriend for a whole month."

Rena couldn't hold her laugh. "Don't be jealous at her, Jurina."

"Both of you looks good together." Jurina pouted.

Rena hugged Jurina. "Both of us, you and me, looks perfect together... not only 'good'."

Jurina smiled. "Let's go on date." She whispered it.

"Date?"

"Yes, let's go to the park on this weekend.. the park where we meet for the third time." Jurina smirked. "I want to play with my guitar there. I love the way you look at me when I'm singing." Jurina pecked Rena's blushing cheek.

"Wow... it seems Yuki's flirty ability already moved to you."

Jurina stuck out her tongue. "Yuki is not around."

"So?" Rena raised one of her eyebrows.

"So.. this." Sweetly, Jurina cupped Rena's cheek and very slowly and deliberately pushed down the bodice of her blouse just a little. Rena laughed. They kissed. Kissed harder. The warmth between them heated, then blazed as Jurina tore off Rena's clothes and.......

*Bell Ringing*

SHIT! Jurina pouted.

Rena laughed. "Open the door, Jurina. I have to change my clothes because of you." She patted Jurina's head before she walked towards the bedroom.

Jurina opened the door and when she found Yuki stood in front of the door... "Yuki!! Why are you go back in the wrong time??! Me and Rena is about to-"

"Hi, Jurina-san." Someone appeared from Yuki's behind.

Jurina stopped talking, she was totally dumbfounded. "Y-you.... You and Yuki..... h-how?!!"

Dr. Watanabe laughed because he saw Jurina's funny expression. "She's my patient. I mean.. she was my patient."

Jurina swear that Yuki looked at the doctor in a sweet way.

Jurina couldn't blink. Mayu... you are awesome! You sacrifice your own older brother for this evil-flirty girl?! She rolled her eyes and then she let both of them entered her place. Just.. rest in peace, Mayu. I will handle this girl.. I mean... your girlfriend, if she dare to hurt him.

=================== END OF OMAKE ==================

I hope you like it. :')

Sorry if you guys feel my story for each couple seems quite short.  :P
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: Ani-chan on January 01, 2014, 12:50:24 PM
arrgghhh... :w00t:
Wmatsui is so sweett  :ptam-shy:
I like it..  :heart:
 :bow: thank for update ..
I really like all the FF that you write :deco:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: shechi on January 01, 2014, 01:52:58 PM
Thank you for update. :hip smile: Althought I dont ship Saeyaka but I love their scene.   :grin:
You always make Wmatsui so cute :rofl: I love it.
A little YukiRena :cow: lol. Jurina always jealous. :rofl:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: Konoe on January 01, 2014, 03:06:36 PM
So Sae has slept with many girls too like Yuki. :smhid It took her a very long time to realize she loves Sayaka. Sae became cheesy. :wub:

Silly Yuko. Trying to make use of her skills to see Kojiharu naked. :mon lol: But Kojiharu easily gives in once she sees Yuko's sad face.

I almost believe that Takamina has gotten lazy turns out there was deeper meaning. Atsumina's understanding for each other is just too cute. :luvluv2:

Who would have thought that that harsh Rena is a perfect housewife. :w00t: Jurina must have been spoiled to the max before Yuki came to their house.

Brain cramps? I never heard about that before. :on lol: 

Ooh, a little NabeYuki. :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: Kirozoro on January 01, 2014, 05:42:18 PM
Thx for the Omake!!!

Jurina though at Mayuki part was so funny at the end

Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: AshuraX on January 02, 2014, 04:35:30 AM
Shipping AtsuRena is simple~ Besides, ya said they lived with each other for a short period of time.
here, let me show ya o/

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"So why exactly are you in my house, Acchan?" the taller, raven-haired girl looked at the slightly shorter and older girl in front of her who was lying on the bed, looking at some fashion magazine.
"Well, I don't really have many places to go to. Besides, you know I'm irresistible, Rena-chan~" the shorter girl joked as she gave the taller one a wink.

   Rena sighed as she sat down next to the shorter girl. She couldn't deny it. She had a certain fondness for Acchan ever since she took her in, much to a certain puppy-like girl's dismay.

"Fine, but we're splitting up the rent." Rena said as she lied down, next to Acchan who was still engrossed in the magazine.
"Deal. Just as long as you and your girlfriend keep your voices down."
"S- She's not my girlfriend!" Rena blushed furiously and smacked the shorter girl right in the head.
"Ouch!" Acchan grimaced in pain as she was hit by the older one. "Come on, everyone knows about you two already, you lolicon!"
"Urg..." Rena couldn't talk back to the older girl since she was right. "Fine... I'll try not to do it much..."
"Huh? Do 'what' much?" Acchan asked, her face faked-confused.
"Y- You know... What you were saying earlier.. B- Besides, I'm not really an addict for it..." Rena's blush turned a lot redder than usual.
"What 'are' you talking about, Rena-chan~? I didn't mention anything specific, did I~?"
"Ah." Rena came back to reality, which was looking at the older girl who has a teasing grin on her face. "N- No I didn't mean-"
"Ne~ What did you mean by that~?" Acchan crept closer to her, her hands grabbing Rena's arm and her legs intertwining themselves with Rena's in an attempt to limit the chances of the younger girl's escape.
"N- N- No, t- that was just-"
"Tell me, Rena-chan~"
"NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!"

... Sorry for sullying your topic OTL
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on January 02, 2014, 04:14:44 PM
pls make an another omake for mayuki :bow: :bow:

well you left me hanging on the last WMatsui part


anyway saeyaka so sweet~~ didn't know sae was a tidy person XD

kojiyuu as always  :rofl: :rofl:

atsumina is <3

Wmatsui : jurina figures,sh will be jealous to yukirin and of course


mayuki is <3  :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on January 02, 2014, 04:24:18 PM
 :thumbup Your fanfic so kakkoi :3
Title: Re: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]
Post by: Zita on January 02, 2014, 09:03:03 PM
I realized how much I love this story :grin:
Well used abilities Yuko :rofl: