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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #200 on: November 17, 2013, 10:17:23 AM »
KYAAA >.< XD
I already read it and now I need the part 2 it's really interesting hahaha  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
I hope u will update it fast  :fap :fap

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #201 on: November 17, 2013, 10:18:05 AM »
Waaaa....update soon...  :bow:

Poor Mariko-sama... :cry:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 7]
« Reply #202 on: November 17, 2013, 10:42:02 AM »
@mo-chan : momo... your comment looks too depressing for me.  :cry:
Don't worry... their happy/cute moment will come again.

@Kirozoro : A question about Yuki again...  :cry:

@edogawa4869 : Sorry, SaeYuki sweet moment ended.
Here chap 8.1.. Takamina know the truth.

@cisda83 : Thank you for your questions. I will answer it later in my fics. XD

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How could you!  :angry:
kill mariko! GOD!!  :cry:
I'm sorry... but she's only a cameo here.  :(

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i mean, yuko will do it?? why?? why maeda team wanna help jurina? she's nothing to do with them? if jurina keep on jail let's just keep her on jail
or maybe it's rena request???
It's already explained in chap 8.1

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about yuki,sae and mayu it's complicated right??
It makes me feel complicated as well.  :bleed eyes:

I like your opinion about Sae x Yuki x Mayu, it help me so much. Thanks :)

@AryaMachdi :
Thanks God. You're appear in my fics again.  XD

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I'm sorry if I can't help you with it. I'm a bad person, aren't I?
No, you're not.. I still need it, but maybe not in this fanfic anymore.  :P

Thanks for reading.

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Finally caught up with this. AND Maeda Team knew about their respective partners~ Wonder who's the killer? Wait a sec...
YOU KILLED MARIKO-SAMA!!!! WHY?! QAQ
The killer isn't from AkB members, relax.  :P
I'm really sorry about Mariko-san... but Mariko's death can make Maeda Team and Takamina team work together, right? *Try hard to looking for a good reason.*

@kurogumi:lol: Don't fight with Geki-san.

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See you in the next chapter for a more rewarding comments
No... this comment is really funny. I give you a huge thank you for that.  :lol:

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G-Guys... it's not me!
Like... seriously, everyone knows that it's you.  :lol:

@FoxKing : I already update the 1st part.
Please reading it as well.  :D

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Thanks for full chapter. :kekeke:
I'm glad you read it. :w00t:

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No!!!! Mariko-sama!!!! Why?!!! T_T
Again.... sorry.  :bow:
She's my cameo, not a main character here.
I feel bad too because I kill someone.  :cry:

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Thanks for reading it.  XD

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I hope u will update it fast
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Waaaa....update soon...
Maybe... Just maybe, I'll take more time for 8.2 because I wanna write all pairings more detail.  :)
I wanna make their happy memories in the next chap (before something happens in the future.  :P).  :D

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #203 on: November 17, 2013, 10:44:19 AM »
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING!!!

TOOO CUTE!!!!



I LOVE THIS COLABORATION!!!!!


GOD!! HOW I HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NET PART RIGHT NOW!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #204 on: November 17, 2013, 10:56:42 AM »
Thanks for the update anakpanti san!! :D
But, now I can't wait to read part 2 XD

This is so cool~! Maeda's and Taka's team are working together! yay! :twothumbs

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Next on Takamina team vs. Maeda Team (2):

    WMatsui, MaYuki, AtsuMina moment, and a little bit KojiYuu (you've wait it, ne? *grinned*)
    The Messy Collaboration (*facepalmed*)
Yes! yes! yes! Part 2 please XD
And finally~ KojiYuu~ :wub:
And I can't wait to see WMatsui, Mayuki, and Atsumina moments too

Oh, btw, Jurina is so sweet~
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"I love you, Rena... even until now and after you did this to me."
:wub: Don't worry Jurina, Rena loves you too~
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"mouu... I want my Rena-chan who untie me."
:rofl:  Rena-chan~ Untie her~! :lol:

Oh! Mayuyu too!
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"Trust me... I'll looking for you, wherever you go I'll keep trying to catch you until I die, Yuki. I won't let you go so easily like today."
:wub:

Thankyou for the update and I hope you update soon XD

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #205 on: November 17, 2013, 11:13:14 AM »
OH MY GOSH!!!

This is getting too exciting!!!!

And there will be WMatsui, MaYuki, AtsuMina moment and I don't care if Kojiyuu is just little as long as they have one!!!

Update SOON!!!!


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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #206 on: November 17, 2013, 12:03:39 PM »
yeah its getting interesting.. but why this fic was mariharu?? why not kojiyuu!????  :cry: :cry: :cry:
but i hope from now on this will be kojiyuu (wishful thinking, day dreaming, fantasizing) :bow:



Silent reader for now

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #207 on: November 17, 2013, 12:12:11 PM »
Is it just me or does Acchan still love tkmn? Oh well not like I'd care. I shalt wait for your next update and the mash up of Maeda team and tkmn team~

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Re: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #208 on: November 17, 2013, 12:16:30 PM »
Atsumina moment next. Can't wait for the part 2

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #209 on: November 17, 2013, 01:22:39 PM »
oh god! I want to see the continuation of the relationship between team maeda and team takahashi.
whether they can work together well? takamina would be able to get fully maeda heart?
honestly, I want takamina to be look stupid but actually she's pretty smart!

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Re: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #210 on: November 17, 2013, 01:42:26 PM »
Oh gosh!
This chapter was cute!

Cute!
I mean cuteness overload!!
Beside the serious case,the way it happen to takamina team was funny LOL

How could jurina being relax and act like cute puppy aww,make me wanna hug her! Cute!!! How can rena resist it?? LOL
Even takamina and mayu feel ashamed by  jurina act! LOL

The trio police was cute and funny.i wonder how long acchan,yuki and rena could stay cool and ignore them...their cutenest is like a bomb!

Takamina stupidity will conquer cold acchan

Mayuyu forever cuteness and child like will melt yuki,her motherly nature will show aww and helplessly spoil mayuyu

Jurina puppy look and her gentleness!ah rena chan dont ignore her!
I like how wmatsui here
Even though they are enemy,they wont deny their feeling,they being honest.just need to settle a moment and time.they just felt awwkward and weird after knew the truth


As for atsumina.well i'm not see they denying their feeling,it just too blurr for them to realize,LOL

Mayuki?yeah they need to talk
Just What kind of talk?
If yuki wanna break up with her then after that she wont had any control over mayu anymore,what mayu wanna do and what happen to mayu is not her bussines   


Sae? Just go to sayaka side,gorilla need u



Putri-san whatever in the future just dont ever hurt rena.if it jurina is fine lol because i never see jurina in action.she need to show some skill! LOL


I read that you wanna make sweet moment for them,is that mean something bad will happen? I hope is not wmatsui nor mayuki,well maybe mayuki wont happy since yuki had sae as an obstacle between them,but its up to yuki decision.the result of her decision will lead the future.and for wmatsui please make them happy ending! LOL



Thanks for the update.
i know my comment is not good as others,my english is suck! But hope u know what i mean
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #211 on: November 17, 2013, 02:45:36 PM »
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

:cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:

I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING!!!

TOOO CUTE!!!!



I LOVE THIS COLABORATION!!!!!


GOD!! HOW I HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!

I FEEL THE  SAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #212 on: November 17, 2013, 02:50:23 PM »
@gek geki: Your signature... I love it, kawaii!!  XD
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GOD!! HOW I HOPE YOU UPDATE THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!
I can't...  :cry:
I need 2 or 3 days.  :P

@White Hawk :
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Oh, btw, Jurina is so sweet~

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"I love you, Rena... even until now and after you did this to me."
:wub: Don't worry Jurina, Rena loves you too~

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"mouu... I want my Rena-chan who untie me."
:rofl:  Rena-chan~ Untie her~! :lol:

Oh! Mayuyu too!

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"Trust me... I'll looking for you, wherever you go I'll keep trying to catch you until I die, Yuki. I won't let you go so easily like today."
:wub:
You quote Jurina and Mayuyu's dialogue.
I didn't realize before that it's super sweet. >.<
I even wonder that I wrote it by myself.  :lol:

@Konoe :
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I don't care if Kojiyuu is just little as long as they have one!!!
I never write about them before, but I'll try to make it sweet.  :D

@Tam_atsu : Hi.  :welcome
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i hope from now on this will be kojiyuu (wishful thinking, day dreaming, fantasizing) :bow:
It's hard because... you know..... Mariko just died, I doubt that Kojima will falling in love again that fast.
But, I'll make them nice towards each other.  XD

@AshuraX :
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Is it just me or does Acchan still love tkmn?
It's hard for Acchan to show her true feeling, she's a leader...
If the leader start to fall in love to their enemy, it'll give a great impact to her team.

@Sydney W:welcome Thank you.  :)

@ayudewi6 : Hi. :)
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honestly, I want takamina to be look stupid but actually she's pretty smart!
Wow... you have a great idea. I'll think about it.  XD
She won't become a sergeant for no reason. 8)

@kurogumi :
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Cute!
I mean cuteness overload!!
Beside the serious case,the way it happen to takamina team was funny LOL
Really? I'm glad... because I feel that this chap is too serious.  :P

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How could jurina being relax and act like cute puppy aww,make me wanna hug her! Cute!!! How can rena resist it?? LOL
Even takamina and mayu feel ashamed by  jurina act! LOL
Rena is a tsundere. She act like that all the time.  :lol:
About Jurina, she can relax after she knew that Maeda Team aren't Mariko's murderer and they have tape to prove her innocent.
Jurina loves Rena so much, maybe love make her ignore Rena's status as a thieves.  :inlove:

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The trio police was cute and funny.i wonder how long acchan,yuki and rena could stay cool and ignore them...their cutenest is like a bomb!
It won't last long. because it's already chap 8. :lol:
Kidding. :P
They just need to realize that they love each other.

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I like how wmatsui here.
Even though they are enemy,they wont deny their feeling,they being honest.just need to settle a moment and time.they just felt awwkward and weird after knew the truth
It's exactly same like what I think.

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Putri-san whatever in the future just dont ever hurt rena.if it jurina is fine lol because i never see jurina in action.she need to show some skill! LOL
About Jurina's action. Next chap... there will be a training session.. Let's see how good Jurina is.  (Spoiler. :banghead:)

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i know my comment is not good as others,my english is suck! But hope u know what i mean
No!! I always fall in love with your comment.  :wub:
My english is even worse than you.  :lol:

@koneki : I'm glad that you like it.  XD
I made Jurina became really cute in the end of chap, but Rena still ignoring her.  :grr:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #213 on: November 17, 2013, 04:06:06 PM »
Omg this ch is so excited

And they are working together!!!

Still.. Who will Yuki chose??

What happen will happen to Arsumina and Wmataui coule?

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #214 on: November 17, 2013, 04:10:41 PM »
Maeda team is so cold. :cry:
But they will be living together. XD
Update soon please. :bow:
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #215 on: November 17, 2013, 04:24:19 PM »
I don't know whether to be upset or angry with the way they were treated.

Atsuko's team are so blood tristy

Poor Minami team... Don't know what they were suppose to do next?

Sure... Catch the drug dealer and heal jurina's name

How about the thieves?

How about thier loves for the thieves?

Would they get thier happy ending?

What's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

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Re: Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #216 on: November 17, 2013, 04:34:06 PM »
Yuki Time is running out,what are you doing?just spend more time with mayu,sent sae somewhere haha

Rena chan really tsk
She so tsundere,maybe she too shy to show her affection in front of her friends

Jurina~ facepalmed~kawaii~


Takamina,what kind of seargent are you? I laugh when she lose the voting! Always thinking different among others

And almost dating the thief leader? That so takamina style haha


Mayuyu did she had any combat skill?



I sense jealousy on the next update

Maybe some jurimayu wont hurt haha


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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #217 on: November 17, 2013, 04:39:20 PM »
wuuuaahhh..
it's loooooong....  :on lol:

i can't say anything but GREAT.....  :twothumbs

and it's became more interesting time to time....

you are really good author...  :theking

great job..

thanks for the update...

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #218 on: November 17, 2013, 06:47:15 PM »
I like where this is going.  :ding:

Waiting for part 2. Thankssss.  :hee:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 8.1]
« Reply #219 on: November 17, 2013, 10:52:11 PM »
i should be angry with the way they hit them and everything. but i cant.... they are so cold but  i feel  :heart: in th air....
jurina shes def. insane  haha
poor mayu and  takamina :/ :sweatdrop:

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