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Author Topic: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake]  (Read 126778 times)

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #280 on: December 08, 2013, 01:04:25 AM »
Can you make an omake on Yuki with Watanabe ?
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #281 on: December 08, 2013, 01:32:52 AM »
Putri why did you join the others in killing Mayu?!!!  :fainted: I want a compensation for this!!  :mon whine: Like jell and Sydney said a continuation of Dr. Watanabe and Yuki.

I want to comment to other couples but my heart is still broken so I will edit this later after I cheer myself up. :on speedy:

EDIT:

Atsumina finally managed to say to each other their real feelings. :farofflook: The smut is too short but I understand that you must be tired for making this very long chapter. :yep:

How sweet of Rena to change her rude attitude just for Jurina. She can SMILE now! Good for Wmatsui. Loled at the GPS. Rena why are you so smart? XD

Yuki... Poor Yuki. My Mayuki heart. :cry: Everybody got a happy end except for them. :( Mayu's death caused a very big change to Takamina, Rena and especially Yuki.

I will be eagerly waiting for the Dr. Watanabe and Yuki omake.  :w00t:
« Last Edit: December 08, 2013, 03:39:52 AM by Konoe »
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #282 on: December 08, 2013, 01:54:11 AM »
You have finally completed this fanfic! After so long, it finally came to an end!

Though, I only have one complaint...

Why did you have to kill Mayu? Like seriously... That was so heartbreaking to read. And with Yuki trying to kill herself just to meet Mayu again in the afterlife, it just adds up the depressed and sad feeling for the loss of the poor girl :(

Great plot, great action, and really well done dialogue (I love the dialogue Yuki did when Mayu died in her arms, really realistic), you did another splendid job on a fanfic, Putri. Amazing job! :)

I hope you'll make more fanfics in the future. I'll be waiting! ;)
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #283 on: December 08, 2013, 01:58:59 AM »
For a great fanfic, a great ending.  :thumbup

But do not understand why Mayu had to die .. she wanted to change her life or just get out from the police (?
Or you just wanted to troll us (? xD

Yeah, make an omake on Mayuki, plz  :bow:
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #284 on: December 08, 2013, 02:18:00 AM »
Hi, My lovely readers. Thanks for reading 'Wanted!' until it reach the end. :)

Ano... I haven't properly apologize to MaYuki fans.
I'm so sorry.  :kneelbow:

I'm MaYuki fans too... and yes, when I re-reading it... My tears fell down when Yuki show her emotion after Mayu's death. 
It's hard for me to forgive myself too.  :fainted:

Honestly.. since the beginning, I already thought that someone will be dead for sure, but... I was still hesitant about it. :mon psst:
Until...... someone suddenly gave me a name: Mayu.
So.... I agree with him/her.
Mayu's character is really fragile here... and she has many complicated things with Yuki.

Okay... I'm gladly to write an omake about dr. Watanabe and Yuki.
I will try to bring Yuki's smile back. :mon yeah:
« Last Edit: December 08, 2013, 02:24:56 AM by anakpanti »
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #285 on: December 08, 2013, 02:22:23 AM »
Mayu's DEAD!!!  :cry: 

But another 'Mayu' came so, what's there to fuss about?  :lol:

This is really great I totally enjoyed it!  :twothumbs

Terima kasih :P
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #286 on: December 08, 2013, 03:20:47 AM »
well.. Atsumina, Saeyaka, Kojiyuu are together...

But Wmatsui... seems to be a bit reluctant to even be together...

Jurina somewhat still angry for being betrayed like that...

Somehow... the death of Mayu could be avoided if Kojiharu could just kill him then

So somehow the death of Mayu could be indirectly caused by Jurina...

Eh.. Doctor Watanabe...? Interesting...

So Yuki is going to be with a male... that look like Mayu?

Eh... the end...

Please make a small sequel or extra about Mayuki after yuki was released from the mental hospital

Thank you for the update

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #287 on: December 08, 2013, 03:53:27 AM »
Quote from: cisda83 on December 08, 2013, 03:20:47 AM
well.. Atsumina, Saeyaka, Kojiyuu are together...

But Wmatsui... seems to be a bit reluctant to even be together...

Jurina somewhat still angry for being betrayed like that...

Somehow... the death of Mayu could be avoided if Kojiharu could just kill him then

So somehow the death of Mayu could be indirectly caused by Jurina...

Eh.. Doctor Watanabe...? Interesting...

So Yuki is going to be with a male... that look like Mayu?

Eh... the end...

Please make a small sequel or extra about Mayuki after yuki was released from the mental hospital

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Hi cisda. :) I wanna try to answer you question.

WMatsui only need a little more time to trust each other again but... They're fine.

No.. No...
Mariko's murderer is not Makoto, it's his personal assistant.
Kojiharu already shot the murderer's head, and Jurina got angry because Kojiharu killed him. (Jurina already gave a warning to Kojiharu before.)
The police team lost their strong evidence for their crime cases.

Jurina wanna kill Kojiharu, but Rena shot her first.

Mayu, who in charge to tie Makoto seemed too shocked and she walked towards Jurina who injured.
She forgot that Makoto's hand don't tied properly.... she's too worried about Jurina.
And then.... it happened.
But yes...  Mayu's death inderectly caused by Jurina and Kojiharu.

Yes, dr. Watanabe is a male.
I'll make it. :)

Umm... instead of mental hospital, I called it as rehabilitation place.
Yuki isn't fully crazy, she just always wanna kill herself.
She got trauma because her girlfriend killed in front of her eyes and died in her hug.
Actually... she still can act properly if she didn't feel threatened.

I'll write about it in the omake.
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #288 on: December 08, 2013, 04:08:34 AM »

Hi. I one of those silent readers, but man oh man I had to say something!

I KNEW IT.

I KNEW MAYU WOULD DIE!

Okay now that I got that out of my system...

I'm sad that this story is over, but it had a great ending, even with Dr.Watanabe appearing at the end.

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #289 on: December 08, 2013, 04:57:05 AM »
woaahh~~ finally!! :D
but yeah killing Mayu kills my heart~~~ :'(
yay for atsumina and wmatsui happy ending!!  :cow: :cow:
at least Yuki is not THAT crazy like..talking to herself~ talking to the 'wall' haha  :rofl:
I wanna know how Kojiyuu ended up being together ehh~
I will be waiting for flashback of Maeda team~  :twothumbs
you know you should make Doc. Watanabe x Yuki omake~~ :D
its a really really great 10 Shots Putri~ hope you will make more shots in the future!! you are such a great writer!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #290 on: December 08, 2013, 05:39:24 AM »
 :cry:MAyU NOOooooooOooooooooooooo why?? :cry:

 :cry: i cant stop  :cry:

 :inlove: atsumina moment :heart:  i cant read the smut part XD   :angry:

i hope yuki can be happy one more time

rena and jurina  :heart:

more atsumina please XD



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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #291 on: December 08, 2013, 06:27:16 AM »
i need omake part soooonn .. Thx anakpanti-san !!
Kojiyuu in paris , dr. Watanabe , whooaa pls update asap
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #292 on: December 08, 2013, 07:01:43 AM »
Laugh really hard when i read the others comment

Cant help it,this is one of the great fic i ever read.
And wow just BIG WOW for the ending,i knew it but never though yuki as patient haha
Somehow its became a sexy ending,especialy when yuki meet dr.watanabe. I could feel the summer has come!!
Yuki really need a dr to healing her wound

Looks like you will write omake for them, hahaha
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #293 on: December 08, 2013, 08:41:26 AM »
Mayuyu!!!!!! Why?!!!! T_T
It was really a great story!!!
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #294 on: December 08, 2013, 09:05:04 AM »
Thanks for the great story! The characters of the "main cast" are really different from other fics and it's kinda nice to have a different feel to it :)
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #295 on: December 08, 2013, 09:27:21 AM »
I want AtsuRena...
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #296 on: December 08, 2013, 11:30:02 AM »
Hi anakpanti,

Thank you for the explanation...

Looking forward to your omake then

Thank you again...

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #297 on: December 08, 2013, 12:26:28 PM »
Who gave you the name?
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #298 on: December 08, 2013, 12:47:52 PM »
I've read this story since the beginning, and i didn't comment yet. It's a great story, even though at last Mayu must died in this fic.  :cry:
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 10] - COMPLETED
« Reply #299 on: December 08, 2013, 04:29:21 PM »
aaarrrghh...

it's totally dramaaa...  :cry:

i need omake or side story...  :D

googd job...  :twothumbs
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