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Title: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 22, 2007, 10:28:28 PM
o_o What is THIS, you ask?

…I’m actually not really sure. It started with trying to figure out a way to rekindle the spark of rivalry between Loser and myself (because if you haven’t noticed, we’ve been getting lazy lately) and then this idea popped out of my head (it had to undergo a bit of tweaking and refinement of course, with my master’s help) and so… um… Senjou was born!

Basically, this is going to be the thread that serves as our battleground (hence the name; senjou means 'battleground/battlefield' according to the lovely animelab.com. Thanks, animelab.com!). And how it works is quite simple.

The two of us will be writing one-shot short stories/drabbles, but not at the same time. We will alternate, and the author that isn’t writing will get to decide what the other one has to write about (be it which H!P girls show up in the story, the pairing [if any], the situation they are in, if the fic is to be centered around a keyword, etc.). The stories will be a minimum of 1000 words long (with no maximum limit, of course) and once a challenge is issued by the other author, the one writing will have two days (48 hours, for those of you who want to get technical) to write and post their fic.

Failure to post in time will be punishable… by whatever the lovely Yuu-chan (although, she doesn’t know it yet. XD) decides.

This will be an interactive sort of battle, as you (the reviewers) get to decide the outcomes of every challenge. Along with your typical text-based comment (“OMG, THAT WAS SO AMAZING, I LOVED IT11!!!!11!!3”) you will get to rate the short fics on a scale of 1-5 (one being the worst, five being awesome). The only catch is, we require at least a minimum of eight reviewers for each one. (It’s not that hard. Especially since these aren’t going to be gigantic, y’know.) The points will be added to that author’s total score, and will be displayed here on this first post. (For bragging rights, and to see who is winning at any point in time.)

Also, once a month (we haven’t decided on a particular date yet, but we’ll get back to you on that), we’ll give you reviewers a chance to give us BOTH a challenge. Basically, you can come to us with whatever you want us to write, and we’ll do it. We get to pick whose challenge we’ll take, but the person whose idea we choose to attempt will get to decide which fic out of the two wins. (These will also be recorded on this post.)

So, expect some craziness to ensue. Of course, we WILL be working on our other fics (I’m going to win that update war, master, just you wait! –shakefist-), but this is something to keep us occupied and our rivalry strong… and to bring us out of this slump that we’re in. So be sure to help us out by reviewing (and reviewing fairly, please. This’ll be no fun if you give us all five’s or all one’s all the time. We’re bound to dish out some crap, so make sure to let us know. XDD)

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Updates/News/WhateverothercrapIFIMchanwishtoputhere

5.22.07: Wrote out this crazy thread and posted it, I did.
5.22.07 (-after FIM-chan was well off into dreamland-): Loser-chan writes up some guidelines (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11124.msg362018#msg362018) for challenge requests.
5.26.07: Loser wins the first reviewer challenge fic.
5.30.07: Loser writes out the Second Amendment to the Senjou Constitution (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11124.msg365770#msg365770)... (ROFL, well, that sounds better than "IMPORTANT NOTICE!")

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Challenge List

Key: [Challenge #/Name of Challenge (Or basically, whatever crazy things we come up with to call them..)/Authored By (Loser 87, FeverInducedMadness, or Both)]: -description of challenge-

This also kind of serves as a Table of Contents, since once fics are posted I'll link them back to here for easy navigation.


[#0/FIRST CHALLENGE SPECIALLLL, WOO!/Both]: For the first challenge, you the reviewers will get to decide what it is that Loser and I will be writing. The loser of this will be the one to write the first 'official' fic. We just need something to get started with. Modesta's Risako x Miyabi challenge was picked. :3

Loser's Response: "C-ute or Berryz" (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11124.msg362952#msg362952)
FIM's Response: "Come to the C-ute Side... We Have Cookies..." (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11124.msg363347#msg363347)

[#1/FIM's Failure.../FeverInducedMadness]: Main Characters: Ishimura Maiha (she needs more lovin'), Genre: Humor, Rating: PG-13 >;P, Situation (Optional): lets see that creative brain work!, Pairing (Optional): I don't care really, match her up with someone if you want, Keyword (Optional): Supercalifagelistic Expealidocious >;P (I think I spelt it wrong >;X)

"The Sound of It Really WAS Atrocious..." (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11124.msg364557#msg364557)

[#2/Crack!Pairing-ness/Loser87]: Main Characters: Mitsui Aika & Sugaya Risako, Genre: Fluff, Romance, Rating: G-PG-13, Situation (Optional): The only time I've actually even seen them together was backstage during the 10th Anniversary Winter Concert. So you can put them there or somewhere else, it doesn't really matter to me., Pairing (Optional): Aika/Risako, but I assume that was pretty obvious., Keyword (Optional): Disapproval (I can imagine that Aika's Momusu senpai and the rest of the Berryz would be kind of "wtf?" about such a relationship...)

"Little ol' Devilish Me" (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11124.msg364725#msg364725)

[#3/Goodness, We're Lazy/Both] Reviewer Challenge Special #2! ...In which Loser amends our rules to provide for the reviewers being able to challenge us once a week. YAY~

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The Standings

Loser87
Total Points: 66
Reviewer Challenge Fics Won: 1

FeverInducedMadness
Total Points: 65
Reviewer Challenge Fics Won: 0
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 22, 2007, 10:44:34 PM
I get to dish out the punishments? Oh hohohohohoho <3

My request is ... Reina x Maki <3 You increase my chance of voting for you if you include a lovely lip-kiss in the fic! <3

And the punishment for whoever loses will have to bend down and be whipped by me, and will have to scream my name three times <3 ~!

<3

<3

<3

:]
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: jafeijai on May 22, 2007, 10:47:09 PM
NOOO >_< I was gonna try and get dibs...

I wanted to have some Konno x Risa (odd pair, yes...but =P) with something along the lines of a fantasy..and fluff =P

Ah well, I guess my idea will have to wait =)
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 22, 2007, 10:47:58 PM
NOOO >_< I was gonna try and get dibs...

I wanted to have some Konno x Risa (odd pair, yes...but =P) with something along the lines of a fantasy..and fluff =P

XD There are no dibs in this. You simply request and Loser and I will decide whose challenge we want to attempt. :3
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: jafeijai on May 22, 2007, 10:50:26 PM
^ In that case, I push for a vote from the general reading public to "pressure" these two into creating a story with unusual couples (such as only requesting ideas with unusual couples) =) It would make this war more interesting, I think =P
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on May 22, 2007, 11:02:06 PM
I like the idea of this. Makes the fanfic section here fun.

Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 22, 2007, 11:03:16 PM
Goodie goodie gum drops!

Odd pairings, I'm sure we can all come up with. *thinks*

Hmm... *thinks some more*

 :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:

^^;;

I say... *suspense*

Thinking's too hard. Fine, it's time for the random pairing-o-matic machine!

*spins*

I've got Kamei... aaaaaaaand

*.... glares at the first three names* No! *throws them away*

Aaaaaaaand







Yuko.

*runs away*
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 22, 2007, 11:08:30 PM
Eri and Yuko?! I NOMINATE THEM TOO :]
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Sakura Momusu on May 22, 2007, 11:53:12 PM
I second that Konno-Gaki fic with lots of fluff (lots of penguins and dolphins too)!!!

Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Tanachan on May 23, 2007, 01:50:04 AM
Put the turtle in the middle!

(Go KameYuko!)

Ohohohohohohoho~! Yuu's going to have oh so much fun in this thread...
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: JFC on May 23, 2007, 03:31:06 AM
LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!

I want a Nacchi X Maki fluffy fic. ;D
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Loser87 on May 23, 2007, 04:16:48 AM
~IMPORTANT NOTICE~

Aha~
It's nice to know that everyone is liking our idea
But we sort of expected more ideas individually instead of some of you guys latching onto other ideas and promoting those instead
So We decided to create this, a survey sort of fill-out thingy!
So you all have your own ideas pitched out there with your prefered situation, pairings (if any) and so-forth
And to keep things organized of course!

Main Characters:

Genre:

Rating:

Situation (Optional):

Pairing (Optional):

Keyword (Optional):


Main Character(s) Who do you want the story to be about, a given =] You May choose ANY Girl or Girls in Hello!Project, You want
the story to Be about Koharu Kusumi, You write Koharu Kusumi! If you want the story to be about Yajima Maimi AND Suzuki Airi, Then
you write their names down, simple ne~?

Genre is obvious, You want the story to be Angst write Angst, You want it to be Romance write Romance, Tragedy write Tragedy, etc. etc.

Rating means like Movie Rating, Do you want it innocent and cute, then put G
If you want it to be heavily gored out with blood or have lots of swearing and...ya' know..have..mild naughty-naughty business rate it R
You get the idea? Yes? Good >=]

Situation is OPTIONAL you don't have to write anything if you don't want to but if you do write a situation then it can be what you want
to happen to the girls or base it around a certain event or time, for example, if you want the story to be based around the events of Maki's
trip to Korea you write the event down, if you want the story to have a certain plot you write down that plot as vague or as detailed as you want it. The situation HAS to have something to do with the Main Character(s).

Pairing is OPTIONAL, You don't have to write a pairing if you don't want any, the story can purely be centered on one character
But if you want a pairing, obviously you write what pairing you want, It can be a popular pairing like Reina/Eri or it can be as cracked
as Yoshizawa/Suzuki XDXD

Keyword is also OPTIONAL, You don't need to write one down but if you want to challenge us then write down a word and we will use it
in the story and/or base the story around that word XDXD

Of course this survey fill-out thingy ma-bob will be edited if we decide we wanna add or take away things
Considering this is sort of a draft thought up by me while talking to FIM and written out at around midnight
just because I wanted things a bit more organized and us wanting more individualled ideas and such XDXD
But for now this will do, Please use it!! >w<
Have fun and good luck! =D

 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 23, 2007, 12:29:41 PM
Okay. I'm still liking the Yuko/Kamei idea.


Main Characters: Yuko and Kamei

Genre: Romance

Rating: PG...13! Because .... I dunno... just because.

Situation (Optional): No way you have to follow this, just a suggestion, however... I see Yuko in my head as an evil queen of something'erother, and Kamei as a princess posing as a knight to save Queen Yuko's daughter and win her heart over... and it goes awry when either Queen Yuko or Knight Kamei fall for each other.

Or something like that.

Pairing (Optional): Uhm, Kamei/Yuko!

Keyword (Optional): Uhm, fluff? *shot*
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 23, 2007, 08:49:15 PM
I guess I'll stick to my original xD

Main Reina and Maki
Genre Romance.
Rating PG-13 or R. Somewhere between.
Situation: Any situation you two could think of, somewhere, they should be caught by another H!P member doing something xD Love the deer staring at headlights scenarios xD
keyword: Caught

You have a better chance of getting my vote if there's lots of kissing involved xD
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Hitsu on May 23, 2007, 10:48:09 PM
Main Character(s): Miyabi and Risako

Genre: Romance fluffyness

Rating: G

Situation: I dunno...maybe something with sakuras? Just to get the vibe of the upcoming concert...

Pairing: MiyaRii love only...but no problem if other Berryz members appear....or Fujimoto (L)

Keyword: Confusion (???)

ps: Mine should be picked (advertising!!! ahuahuah) since both of you are writing fics about Berryz (I love both of them), and i'm sad because Loser said that his fic will have angst now and no fluff...I NEED FLUFF TO LIVE! *desperate*. But if there's no way, i would like to read that wonky and maki fic...xDDDDDD!
*Sorry about the terrible english*
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Tanachan on May 24, 2007, 01:23:32 AM
Main Characters: China-chan!
Genre:FLUFFEHHHH
Rating:PG
Situation:Yozakura! (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hanami (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hanami))
Pairing:KumaChina
Keyword: None!
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on May 24, 2007, 01:51:44 AM
Main Characters: Risako
Genre:fluff/romance

Rating:PG

Pairing:Miyabi X Risako

Keyword: C-ute
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 24, 2007, 03:06:31 AM
After careful consideration (and some help from a Javascript dice-rolling program we found), Loser and I have decided to take on modesta107's Miyabi x Risako challenge. :3 Believe you me, it was a struggle to choose (we ended up making things much more complicated than we needed to...) but we have endured the rigorous strain and will have our responses to the challenge in by... (well, it's 10:00PM, CST here for me, so I guess +1 hour for Loser) this time Friday night, and afterwards, Modesta (I'm going to call you that, since typing out numbers isn't fun. Unless you have a different name you'd like to go by. XD) will get to decide who has won.

Otherwise, if we're late, Yuu-chan will get to punish us as she sees fit.

((P.S.: Um... Hitsu, dear... for future reference... Loser would like to make it known that she is not a boy. XD It's okay, though... I thought the same before I actually started to talk to her, too.))

Senjou~! [I'll never get tired of screaming that. XD]
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on May 24, 2007, 11:57:28 PM
Yipee! alright, can't wait for this to go down! I honestly didnt think mine was gonna be chosen cuz of the other good ideas out there. and Its ok, you can just call me Mod for short
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: jafeijai on May 25, 2007, 01:34:26 AM
[patiently waits in lurker shadows for posted stories....waiting for the chance to post his idea..] =)
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Aioros on May 25, 2007, 02:39:30 AM
I know I should be sulking under my desk because the Miki-sama's leader reign is being threatened but..

(http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7729/aa2hb4.jpg)

5 Pts.
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rndmnwierd on May 25, 2007, 04:05:17 AM
Four points!
'Kiss her again!'
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 25, 2007, 04:13:39 AM
Given Miyabi's my new favorite Berryz (Oh, I had one to begin with... sure, yeah... uhm... blueberry. That was my favorite), and that this was the most comical way to put any sort of fluff at all into a fic, I'm fond of it ^^;;

I give it 4 points ^^
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rokun on May 25, 2007, 02:27:40 PM
Hmm, I suppose I should actually post here. Need to make sure you guys have enough reviews for your 'senjou!' XD

4 points!

I enjoy that style lol... Does Miss Asuzu want to learn something? ^_^
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 25, 2007, 04:43:58 PM
That was really lovely xD Now we just have to wait for Fimmy-chan to post then I'll cast my vote xD

EDIT: Oh, I forgot this was point based xD. So uh. I guess 4 xD
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on May 25, 2007, 08:34:37 PM
Woah, that was really good! Didn't know what to expect in this chapter. Made me happy that  u included some C-ute in there.  lmao, Airi having a nosebleed.

4 points!

now just waiting to read FIM's story.
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 25, 2007, 11:04:26 PM
-jabs Loser with a stick- It's not MY fault I had to play in the band at graduation. Otherwise I totally would have smoked you on being the first one to post. >_<

However, I will refrain from being TOO angry at you considering you wrote a very lovely fic and I enjoyed it a lot. <3 You get 5 points from me, master. (...I'm still gonna win, though. XDDD)

...I hadn't expected this challenge to be so hard. .___. Took me all day to think of something. I suppose I shouldn't underestimate them.. XDDD

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[Come to the C-ute Side... We Have Cookies...]

I had been walking innocently down the hallway when they decided to strike. I’m not really sure why they picked me to be their target… Probably because I was really the only one around, and because most people considered me to be an easy target for things… I couldn’t help that I was sensitive and they were cruel!

“Oh, Risako-chaaan~”

Most people would have suspected something was going on, hearing a voice sound as deceptively sweet as that, but… I’ll admit that at times I can be naïve, and so I turned around to greet whomever was calling for me with a rather bright smile.

It was then when I saw them that I realized that they were up to no good. The shorter of the two was wearing a rather mischievous grin, and while her companion’s face was much more neutral, I could see this uncharacteristic, impish glint in her eyes. It was making me nervous, and I’m sure that my voice squeaked a little when I opened my mouth to speak.

“Ah, Maimi-chan… Erika-chan… How are you guys this morning?”

The Human Lighthouse of H!P Jr. (Yurina held the original title, of course. But we never called her that to her face. She had slugged Chinami pretty hard the one time she let it slip, and so the rest of us learned from that mistake.) patted me on the head, letting a slow smile spread across her lips. I suppose it was meant to be reassuring, but it only furthered my anxiety.

“Good, good… we just came to steal you away, that’s all.”

“Steal me away…”

“From the Berryz, of course.” Maimi chimed in, as if it was the most natural thing for her to say. I, however, was staring at them with the most confused expression I could manage, because at that point I was really starting to fear for their sanity. I mean, here were two of the eldest of our group of H!P kids who were supposed to be an example for the rest of us, and they were talking about crazy things!

Understandably, it took me a little while to respond to that.

“…What’s that supposed to mean?”

“Oh, it’s really simple. Basically, Erika-chan and I were just sittin’ around talking about random stuff…”

“And somehow we ended up talking about Berryz and C-ute, and we started to compare everyone in both groups…”

“Kind of like… which members were most similar. Like Erika and Yurina-chan… Airin and Miya-chan…”

“And then we came to a conclusion…”

At that they leaned in towards me, like they were going to share some big secret. I really wasn’t sure if I wanted to know it or not, but I couldn’t stop myself from asking.

“What’s that…?”

“C-ute doesn’t have anybody like you.”

“Kanna-chan was left over when we got to you, but we didn’t really think that the two of you were very much alike. This is a problem, since in order for our groups to rival each other, they need to be pretty much equal, right?”

“…Um, I suppose so…”

“So we decided that we were going to come and steal you away in order to fix that.”

“Aren’t we just brilliant?”

I hesitated to answer at first, intimidated because they had moved even closer to me at that point, and since I was smaller and younger than both of them I was at a disadvantage. It wasn’t really fair… to gang up on me like that. Plus, I think they enjoyed watching me squirm. Maybe being older they had a sense of humor that I didn’t quite understand…

“U-um… eight doesn’t exactly equal six… and if you take me away, then the Berryz won’t have me…”

“Oh, that’s alright.”

So much for equality amongst the groups.

“Actually, we’re really just bored, so if we had to fight them for you, we probably would.”

“You’d get your asses kicked.”

I turned around and breathed a sigh of relief as I spotted my savior walking towards us. Miyabi must have overheard part of the conversation and was coming to rescue me from these strange girls. If anyone would protect me, surely she would. Maimi and Erika seemed to be more amused than anything (Obviously they had no reason to be afraid, when they were taller than most of the performers in H!P…) and merely straightened up when Miya approached, grinning brightly at her.

“My, my, someone’s been spending time with Ishimura-chan lately, I see…”

“What makes you so sure C-ute wouldn’t win, Miya~ Little Maimai may look adorable, but I’m willing to bet she could take you out.”

“Doubt it. But I bet if you paid me, I’d let you take Rii-chan away right now and just look the other way.”

…What? I stared at my Ebiru elder incredulously, unable to believe the words that had just come out of her mouth. The C-ute girls were giving her a wide-eyed look as well, before they burst out into hysterical laughter. I, however, was not amused.

“You can’t be serious, Miya! You would sell me to them?”

“Depends, I guess… How much ya got, Maimi-chan?”

Now, honestly, this was the most ridiculous thing- I attempted to put on my most indignant face, trying to glare Miyabi down, but she was much more interested in the coins that the C-ute leader was pulling out of her pocket.

“Mm… I got about 200 here…”

“Sweet, I’ll take it. I can probably get a snack or something later with this…”

“I’m worth much more than 200 yen, thank you very much!”

But they were ignoring me now, and the trade was sealed as Maimi handed over the money. Some savior Miyabi turned out to be… She was definitely not going to hear the end of this from me… She waved her hand at the C-ute girls in a shooing sort of motion, as if she had become bored with their presence there.

“Alright now get out of here, you two. I’ll bring along your prize later as long as these don’t get stuck in the vending machine.”

“Nice doing business with you…”

Maimi and Erika turned and walked away arm in arm, not making it very far from us before they broke out into a fit of laughter again, and I felt some of my dignity leave with them, the sting lingering until the sounds of their conversation faded and they were out of sight.

I then promptly turned to the girl beside me and smacked her as hard as I could in the shoulder.

“OW! JEEZ, WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!?”

“For teasing me like that, you idiot! You were supposed to save me, not make it worse! They’ll come back and push me around even more later now, thanks to you!” I huffed, and she rubbed her shoulder remorsefully, having inched a ways away from me as if she feared another rebuke.

Then I sighed, crossing my arms and feeling my lips inadvertently drift into a pout.

“I don’t want to be a part of C-ute… I like Berryz…”

Now, see… I told you at the beginning that I was naïve. I seriously believed that Erika and Maimi could take me away if they wished and that Tsunku would go along with it. So I guess I can understand (Not that I wasn’t angry at her for doing it and bruising what dignity I had left even more…) why Miyabi started to laugh at me with that Ebiru cackle of hers.

“Oh, Rii-chan… First off, I’m pretty sure they were just messing with you. They can’t and wouldn’t do something like that. And second…”

I felt my heart leap violently into my throat as she approached me, feeling arms sliding effortlessly around my waist in order to pull our bodies closer, and my cheeks grew hot as I realized how close her face was to mine, the tips of our noses just barely touching. I couldn’t breathe, and yet my brain was too scrambled at that moment to figure out whether or not that was a bad thing.

“Nobody’s taking you away from the Berryz… Nobody’s taking you away from me.”

And then she pressed her lips against mine, and I found myself no longer able to form coherent thoughts. It was sweet and gentle, and yet coupled with the words she had voiced only a moment before, I felt a sort of possessiveness behind it all that excited me and scared me at the same time. And then again, I don’t think I would have picked anyone else to steal my first kiss like that.

She was starting to pull away, and so I slowly brought my arms up to hang loosely around her neck, kissing her back once more before it ended. She was smirking at me like she always did, but this time it was playful, and for once I wasn’t upset by it. But she also looked like she was enjoying a private joke, and being curious like I was, I wanted to know what was on her mind.

“What’s so funny?”

“Nothin’, I was just thinking about how I managed to get Maimi-chan to give me 200 yen…”
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 25, 2007, 11:09:08 PM
Lol!

More Miya fun!

I loved it. So funny. Poor Rii-chan. So naieve.

I give this one a 4 too!
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 25, 2007, 11:17:53 PM
Aww! Absolutely lovely! I loved how you made Miyabi's character possessive <3

Five points to you! <3
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rokun on May 26, 2007, 04:36:47 AM
Wow... FIM, that was awesome! ;D It flowed together so well, Miyabi is so cunning and awesome (major points there), and Risako's character was right on and consistent. I'd love to see more with characters like that... I should read more of your other stories. >.>

5 points!!!
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Aioros on May 26, 2007, 05:36:35 AM
(http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/299/200rr9.jpg)

She IS a lot more than that. But I forgive you FIM. ;)

5 Pts.
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Loser87 on May 26, 2007, 06:00:45 AM
+__+......That was good...
=+=;;...But damn...It seems I'm losing by points..
No matter, IT IS MODESTA DECISION ON WHO WINS AND WHO GETS TO BE WHIPPED BY YUU-CHAN! >w<
AND I WILL WIN!! >w< I GOTTA!!

But anyway...I give this story..*ahem*...a...*drum roll*....5...
>;3
It was that fun to read
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Amarghetta on May 26, 2007, 06:36:37 AM
Rating them is hard, but I did like one more than the other...

Loser: 5 points
FIM: 4 points
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: ChrNo on May 26, 2007, 08:08:01 AM
Loser : 5 points
reasons :
1) Miya
2) Airi
3) "I'll buy her the triple fudge sundae with the cookie crumbs sprinkles, topped with whip cream and caramel with the cherry on top!"
4) ".....KISS HER AGAIN! KISS HER AGAIN!!"
5) because you are cute !

FIM : 2 points
reasons :
1) too long
2) “Nobody’s taking you away from the Berryz… Nobody’s taking you away from me.”
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rndmnwierd on May 26, 2007, 10:30:14 AM
Five points! Cuz Miya conned Maimi outta two bucks (or the rough equivalent of).
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 26, 2007, 03:01:47 PM
Loser : 5 points
reasons :
1) Miya
2) Airi
3) "I'll buy her the triple fudge sundae with the cookie crumbs sprinkles, topped with whip cream and caramel with the cherry on top!"
4) ".....KISS HER AGAIN! KISS HER AGAIN!!"
5) because you are cute !

FIM : 2 points
reasons :
1) too long
2) “Nobody’s taking you away from the Berryz… Nobody’s taking you away from me.”


Lies!  Loser's fic is longer than FIM's by word count, actually xD
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on May 26, 2007, 03:54:45 PM
Both stories to me were neck at neck, both were really good IMO. I have to give FIM's story a 4. I liked that Miyabi was being sneaky at the end. and now for my decision.




Loser87 wins
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 26, 2007, 04:39:59 PM
Ohhh Fimmy-chan~! -stretches whip- Ready to scream my name three times? >:]

<3
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 26, 2007, 06:23:43 PM
Lol, you can only punish us for failure to reply in a prompt and timely manner, Yuu-chan. Not for losing. XD
[So I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I'll not be doing anything of the sort. haha]

Anyways, for the first fic, it would seem that Loser has beaten me in both points and by winning Mod's vote. Here are the totals thus far. (I'm pretty sure I counted everything right... I think... Anyone feel free to correct me if you see an error. XD)

Loser87
Total Points: 40
Reviewer Challenge Fics Won: 1

FeverInducedMadness
Total Points: 39
Reviewer Challenge Fics Won: 0

Mm... I don't do well with losing. Keep on your toes, master, I'll be trying much harder next time to beat you. >D

I suppose whenever Loser decides what she wants me to do for the next challenge one of us will announce it then~

Also, I want to thank everybody for commenting and dishing out the points and whatnot. :3
Makes this a bit more fun and competitive. <3
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 26, 2007, 07:07:45 PM
Aww. You ruin my fun :<

-puts away whip-

:<
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Loser87 on May 26, 2007, 07:15:14 PM
I just happened to wake up...And I find this...
And all I have to say is..I WON? HOLY FOOKING SHIZZLES I WON?! HOORAYYY!!!! I WINNNN!!!
~+~
Honestly I didn't think I'd win...

I would like to thank all the little people *coughFimcough* that I had to step on to win ~+~
XDXDXD

Ooohhh haha...>_> I get to make Fimmy-chan write whatever I want eh?

Okay then..Let me find my idea book and find a good story for you to write nyahaha >w<

--this post will be edited later--

EDITED:

Main Characters: Ishimura Maiha (she needs more lovin')

Genre: Humor

Rating: PG-13 >;P

Situation (Optional): lets see that creative brain work!

Pairing (Optional): I don't care really, match her up with someone if you want

Keyword (Optional): Supercalifagelistic Expealidocious >;P (I think I spelt it wrong >;X)

Now type!!! You have until Monday 5:19 p.m.!!
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 26, 2007, 11:03:53 PM
Keyword (Optional): Supercalifagelistic Expealidocious >;P (I think I spelt it wrong >;X)

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious I believe. I think so. Maybe. I know it's one word...

Just to help ya out. ^^;; *dashes off*
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 28, 2007, 02:49:16 PM
Read this at your own risk.
Seriously, this entire thing is full of crack.
I couldn't really decipher the meaning of that word... so I assume it doesn't have one, and therefore, this story doesn't really have a point, either.
In fact, the dream described within is the same one I had last night.
...And I can probably thank the raw potatoes contest for that. ><;;

It also doesn't help that I managed to go and get myself sick again...
So my brain... not really working so well. ><
I apologize for this crap. XD

So um... don't expect this to really make sense...
But if it makes you laugh, that's good.
Also... if you get some of the inside junk that was slipped in here... good for you. You get a cookie. XD

[The Sound of It Really WAS Atrocious...]

She was standing in front of a sign that stretched out on either side of her as far as she could see, as if it had no end to it. There was a word written on it that seemed to be as long as the sign itself, but even if she cared enough to run along the length of the sign to see all of it, she wouldn’t have been able to read it, because she was pretty sure it was English.

It wasn’t that her skills were… lacking, per se… After all, ever since she had dropped being an idol to go back to school, she was doing particularly well… it was just… she had never seen such a beast of a word before.

And if all of this wasn’t bad enough, there was this huge yellow bird wandering around behind her, screaming ‘WARK!?’ over and over at the top of it’s lungs. However, even with all of this going on, young Ishimura Maiha was unable to realize that she was dreaming.

It probably didn’t help that she didn’t really dream enough to make the connection… That, or when she did dream, she didn’t ever remember what had happened after she woke up.

As far as she was concerned, she had been deposited rather roughly into an alternate reality and was trapped there. …And was being considerably calm about the whole thing, too. Maiha was a sensible person, of course… there was no need to start freaking out about things that hadn’t happened yet. She wasn’t in pain or on fire, so screaming her head off would have been unnecessary.

…She’d save that for later.

Since interpreting the sign appeared to be hopeless, Maiha turned around to face the frantic yellow bird, deciding to deal with it first. See, in most alternate realities she had heard about, you could talk to things that you wouldn’t normally communicate with in the real world. Heck, you could talk to trees in some of them. Not that there were any trees around, but if there had been, she wouldn’t have been opposed to striking up a conversation with one of them.

Maiha didn’t discriminate against beings of the plant-life variety, after all.

But anyway, that wasn’t the point. The point was that the big yellow bird was going to have a heart attack if she didn’t do something about it, and since she was bored and had nothing else to do, she decided to give shouting at it a try.

“Hey you! What the hell’s your problem, huh?”

The bird stopped it’s little tantrum immediately, turning it’s head in a slow and eerie way to gaze at her with one of its dark, piercing eyes. Maiha was beginning to consider that trying to talk to the thing was a bad idea. And before she could do anything about it, the thing darted towards her in a yellow blur, knocking her to the ground and bending over her like an excited dog whose master just arrived home.

“Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Charliiiiiiiiiiiiiiie. We found a map to candy mountain…”

Now… Maiha wasn’t exactly sure what was going on… especially since she was a bit disoriented from being knocked down and because the bird was talking in a high-pitched voice that she could barely understand. But she knew that her name sure as hell wasn’t ‘Charlie’, and she was going to make sure that that big, stupid bird was aware of that by using her not-so-nice words.

Since this was an alternate reality, she began to shout out a couple of expletives that she made up right there on the spot, and while to people in the real world it would have just been gibberish… in that world right there, they were so offensive that they must never be repeated again…

The bird seemed to be sufficiently stunned by her sudden outburst, but after a moment, the shock wore off and it began to babble at her again.

“Come to candy mountain with meeeeeeee… The magical lioplurodon will show us the way, and we will be filled with sweet sugary goodness…”

“Like hell I’ll come with you. I saw what happened to that unicorn in the end, and I would like to keep BOTH of my kidneys, thank you very much. So screw you and your damn candy mountain.”

“Shuuuuuuuuuuun the non-believer… shuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun…” The bird started to hiss that at her over and over… backing away slowly until it was several meters away. At this point, it burst into flame and shot up into the air, where it exploded in a flash of brilliant colors… just like fireworks.

And that’s when Maiha woke up with a jolt, sitting up in bed and panting heavily, her eyes adjusting to the darkness. The bright numbers of her alarm clock told her that it was just barely three in the morning, and she groaned to herself, feeling a headache coming on and realizing that her stomach hurt like it was trying to devour itself.

What on earth did I eat last to bring about that kind of dream…

She noticed a trail of wrappers strewn about her bedroom floor, opened and deprived of their original contents, and she couldn’t quite remember how they had gotten there. Curious, she slid out of her bed and knelt down on the floor, picking one up to examine it much more closely. It was pink and had a darker ribbon still encircled loosely around it, as if that had been keeping whatever was in the wrapper secured.

Cautiously, Maiha brought it to her face and smelled it, the faint scent of chocolate still lingering there. She remembered eating them… but she didn’t remember where she got them or how they had gotten there.

She stood up, and as she did so, her eyes darted over towards a white slip of paper that laid amidst a few of the wrappers and she bent back down to pick it up, noting that it had to be from a Berryz member because of the cutesy little designs scrawled all over it.

“I was making some of these for the other members and while I was doing that I thought of you! ^__^ I hope you like them.”

Maiha didn’t even need to read on to the signature to realize that it was Risako’s handwriting she was trying to decipher so early in the morning, and with a smile, she set the note down on her desk, where it wouldn’t be forgotten a second time.

Though, as she slid back into bed, she let out a sigh.

At least I know I won’t be the only one suffering from a stomach ache and weird dreams tonight…
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 28, 2007, 04:05:44 PM
May this be on crack or not, it's still funny.

And I <3 the Chocobo (I think that's a Chocobo, that's a Chocobo, right?)

And I don't think there's a meaning to that word either... but now I'm gonna hafta go look.

And for points.... 5. Because this was a rather wonderful delight to wake up to ^^
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Loser87 on May 28, 2007, 08:39:13 PM
Ne~ Fimmy-chan, you certainly must be sick  ;)
Because honestly speaking, that was weak I am disappointed in you!  :pig refuse:
I gave you an easy one and this is what you came up with?  :pig huh:

But it did make me laugh so that's a plus!
Anyway, time to give out points!
It wasn't that great and it wasn't full fledge wth o_o junk
It's in the middle so I give you a 3
DO BETTER NEXT TIME!!  :mon zoom:
Now, throw me your idea's at me Come on BRING IT!! RAWR!!
I'LL TAKE IT ON!!  :mon beam:
C'mon Fimmy-chan give me a good one, I'll lbe the best in this thread Nyahahahahaha!!  :mon lol: :mon lol: :mon lol: :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:
<_< Yeah..I'm having fun with the smileys.... :mon sweat:
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: ChrNo on May 28, 2007, 09:07:48 PM
errr...
what was that ? (http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/ChruNo/c26.gif)

1 point

reasons :
1) i didn't laugh... maybe i'm in a bad mood or something...i should come back to read it tomorow maybe i will laugh...
2) even loser didn't like it
3) you haven't watched Mary Poppins ? (http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/ChruNo/c26.gif)

i have faith on you, i trust you, i'm sure you are going to do better next time !
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 28, 2007, 09:21:40 PM
And I <3 the Chocobo (I think that's a Chocobo, that's a Chocobo, right?)

Would you like a cookie? :3 Were you tipped off by the 'wark' reference? If so, I love you. If not, well, you can have a cookie anyway. XD

Ne~ Fimmy-chan, you certainly must be sick  ;)
Because honestly speaking, that was weak I am disappointed in you!  :pig refuse:
I gave you an easy one and this is what you came up with?  :pig huh:

But it did make me laugh so that's a plus!
Anyway, time to give out points!
It wasn't that great and it wasn't full fledge wth o_o junk
It's in the middle so I give you a 3
DO BETTER NEXT TIME!!  :mon zoom:
Now, throw me your idea's at me Come on BRING IT!! RAWR!!
I'LL TAKE IT ON!!  :mon beam:
C'mon Fimmy-chan give me a good one, I'll lbe the best in this thread Nyahahahahaha!!  :mon lol: :mon lol: :mon lol: :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:
<_< Yeah..I'm having fun with the smileys.... :mon sweat:

I really am pretty sick, Loser dear... ><;; I'd lay down and sleep but that's what I've been doing all day.
Oh, and you did not give me an easy one. You gave me a ridiculously open one. =P (Maiha + Supercaliblah + PG-13? Of course this is what I came up with!)
I'm not a think tank, woman. Spell things out for me a little more next time. XDDD

I'm glad it made you laugh, though. Made me throw up. XD
And I'll give you a challenge... just you wait... I'm going to have really high expectations for you for it, too. >D

errr...
what was that ? (http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/ChruNo/c26.gif)

1 point

reasons :
1) i didn't laugh... maybe i'm in a bad mood or something...i should come back to read it tomorow maybe i will laugh...
2) even loser didn't like it
3) you haven't watched Mary Poppins ? (http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/ChruNo/c26.gif)

i have faith on you, i trust you, i'm sure you are going to do better next time !

Lol That was a bunch of crap. I did warn everyone, though. lol I can't pull out winners all the time, though, I suppose. Doesn't help to be on medication, either. XDDD
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 28, 2007, 09:41:03 PM
Alright, let's see how YOU stand up to pressure, master..
This is my favorite crack pairing, and so I'm going to be pretty tough when I get to rate you for it... >_o So don't screw up, okay? (XDD Just kidding. I can't really talk after that last challenge. ...But I am still gonna be tough. XD)
Basically... I'm just making you write something I'm much too lazy to write myself.
Have fuuuuuuun. <3
(Yeah, and I'm aware that the comment quota wasn't reached for my story, but I don't really care... since I want to see Loser's response for this. XD)
Oh yeah, and Wednesday, 4:40PM (Or 5:40 for you? I can't ever remember. ><). That's the deadline.

Main Characters: Mitsui Aika & Sugaya Risako

Genre: Fluff, Romance

Rating: G-PG-13

Situation (Optional): The only time I've actually even seen them together was backstage during the 10th Anniversary Winter Concert. So you can put them there or somewhere else, it doesn't really matter to me.

Pairing (Optional): Aika/Risako, but I assume that was pretty obvious. XD

Keyword (Optional): Disapproval (I can imagine that Aika's Momusu senpai and the rest of the Berryz would be kind of "wtf?" about such a relationship...)
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Loser87 on May 28, 2007, 09:56:25 PM
You're evil Fimmy-chan..That's all I have to say, you're pure evil...(Not as evil as me tho) >_>...I hope your brother comes to bother you while your sick >_>

Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rokun on May 29, 2007, 12:48:19 AM
Hmm... odd stories. o_O Hopefully you two can get on track again here and feel better. ^^

I'll give fimmy-chan 3 points for the chocobo reference (the wark did tip me off XD and I've been playing FF all day...).

Loser gets 3 too mainly because it was of some higher quality, but no chocobo reference. :P Doing a crackpairing like that could be fun, but you didn't really seem like you tried. :P Still, it was nice style. ^^ Evil flirty Risako.. different. ^^
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: whytphyre on May 29, 2007, 01:35:50 AM
Wark wark wark!

Now someone's gonna mention yellow birds in one of my fics, it's all your fault you got me started.

Hmmmm... 4 points to Loser. t'was a good read, and I love Ninja!Aika.
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on May 29, 2007, 02:48:29 AM
Liked the crackpair, especially that it included Aika in it, and Risako being more of the playa type.

5 points

As for FIM's story, that was a.. confusing crazed Maiha there, but I enjoyed it a little

3 Points
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Amarghetta on May 29, 2007, 03:37:42 AM
3 points for FIM
4 points for Loser, 'cos... CRACKPAIRING!!
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rndmnwierd on May 29, 2007, 04:48:24 AM
Fim get four for pure randomness.
Loser gets a three for Socko flirting and Mitsui flirting right back.
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 30, 2007, 07:40:50 PM
Taking your time eh? xD When's the next challenge coming? xD

Alright, noting the writing thus far with challenges, I'm going to use 3 as my average, so don't get offended xD

Fimmy-chan: 3
Lo-chan: 3
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Loser87 on May 30, 2007, 11:42:11 PM
~IMPORTANT NOTICE!!!~

Me and Fimmy-chan both got lazy so we decided that instead of every month
We're allowing you guys to pitch out your idea's every week!
Hooray for you guys!

Please use the organized thingy I made in page one to keep things organized
And since Yuu-chan isn't getting the chance to punish us and I Thought she's a little bored with not punishing anybody
I decided without Fimmy-chan knowing of course to change the rules a little bit
The loser of the challenge WILL be punished by Yuu-chan~
To bring out the best in us of course..>;P

So, Pitch out your idea's now!!
 :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 30, 2007, 11:45:39 PM
D: You don't know what you've done, dearest... The terrors that will be unleashed...
(By Yuu-chan, of course. -shudder-)

Oh yeah, anyways, I was tallying up the points again and I realized that I hadn't given you my vote yet. A 5, because you pulled off my crackpairing with awesomeness... and I wanted more. XD <3

Loser87
Total Points: 66
Reviewer Challenge Fics Won: 1

FeverInducedMadness
Total Points: 65
Reviewer Challenge Fics Won: 0

...Damnit. >>
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: jafeijai on May 31, 2007, 01:05:41 AM
Time for my request to surface....

Main Characters: Gokkies
Genre: Romance/Fantasy (you can choose either of them...or even both! =D)
Rating: PG-13
Situation: This'll occur AFTER Konno and Ogawa graduate from Morning Musume (if you choose to go down the realistic romance path)
Pairing: Niigaki Risa & Konno Asami (if you want, you can add in a Takahashi Ai & Ogawa Makoto pairing)
Keyword: Pain of a lost love..

...Wait...am I allowed to start requesting yet? o.O If not, then I'll just re-post this whenever I can
[returns to shadows]
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Aioros on May 31, 2007, 03:11:31 AM
3 requests from a sleepless man...

Main Character(s): Eri, Miki

Genre: Fantasy/Comedy

Rating: GP

Situation:Eri's friend Squirtle has been Pokemonapped by Mr. Sweat and the Pink Rabbit. Eri must capture at least one Pokemon so she can fight them and rescue her friend. But Miki, the Pokeball vendor, doesn't want to sell her stuff unless Eri agrees to...

Pairing (Optional REQUIRED): Mr. Sweat X Pink Rabbit <3

Keyword: Mr. Sweat and the Pink Rabbit knows that Eri is weak against refurijiitas. Only Master Balls can capture Aika or Koharu. Risa's new PB is hot.
A dance number with Pikachu and other Pokemons is a must.

=========
Main Character(s): Berryz Koubou/C-ute/W

Genre: Sci-fi/Mecha/Space Adventure/Comedy

Rating: G

Situation: Space Bounty Hunters Berryz Koubou takes the task of retrieving an ancient relic (a.k.a. Yuko's Golden Booze mug). The only problem is rival team C-ute has accepted the mission too. Oh, and the kids' mentors, W has also been offered 120,000,000 Yen to do the mission, wearing clothes of course.

Pairing: Inter H!P-kids group love FTW!

Keyword: Yurina vs. Gundams, Maimi's kick sends a planet out of orbit, Captain Saki unable to fit inside a Saiya-jin spacecraft, Maimai's glasses have x-ray vision, etc.

========
Main Character(s): H!P Girls

Genre: Sports

Rating: PG

Situation: Hellomania, the annual H!P wrestling event is coming up. Rika doesn't know what gimmick to do this year so she decides to become a heel. Yossi promotes her PB. Ayaya and Miki has formed a tag team and will battle current title holders W. Rokkies in an Elimination Chamber Match to determine the lead vocals for the next single. Berryz vs. Cute in a survivor series type match. MKB in a bra's & panties match. Aika and Koharu team-up against new comers Linlin and Junjun. H!P eggs in a royal rumble match to determine who get s to get hatched (re: promoted or joins a group)

Pairing: It's up to you

Keyword: The champ is here, but you can't see her
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: ChrNo on May 31, 2007, 03:01:04 PM
3 points to loser

"look at me I'm 13-years-old and I'm uber shy! check out my pout!' "
"The ceiling was sparkly clean, really clean..
How do they clean ceilings like that?"
"My devilish side must be sick today.."
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rndmnwierd on May 31, 2007, 06:37:14 PM
Main Character(s): Tsuji Nozomi, Tanaka Reina

Genre: General, maybe with hints of future romance

Rating: G

Situation: Sometime around Shabondama, maybe during the PV shoot, Nono advises Reina on something or other and they end up learning a little about each other. Maybe that appearances aren't what they may seem.

Pairing: Nono/Reina sorta

Keyword: Senpai

Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 31, 2007, 07:06:41 PM
Inputting my crap xD

Anywho, choose the characters of your choice, but you may have the same idea about the story plot xD

Main characters: Reina and Maki OR Eri and Yuko OR Rika and Yossie OR Gam OR Risako and Miyabi
Genre: Romance / Comedy (Or a romantic sitcom? xD)
Rating: PG to R
Situation: Your call, but as the keyword suggests, someone happened to misplace something and is looking for it xD
Pairing: Whatever couple you chose from Main Characters.
Keyword: Misplaced

<3
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on May 31, 2007, 11:41:50 PM
Woo~! Got a real exciting announcement for you guys!
Loser and I have decided to do not one, but ALL THREE of wordsworth's challenges.
(We found them all equally interesting, and couldn't pass them up. XDD)

That being said, our deadline will be extended to a week instead of just two days, because we're writing three fics each... and because both of us still attend school and will be busy with finals and such. <3

So, next Thursday, 6:30/7:30PM is when these responses will be due.

Wordy'll get to decide the winner, of course. (However you want to... o_o Best two out of three or whatever. Have at it. XD) And Yuu-chan gets to punish who loses. -cowers-

Yay~
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on June 08, 2007, 01:27:26 AM
Ah~ Sorry for my tardiness, everyone. ><;; -bows-
Like Loser said, I got kicked off before the deadline and wasn't exactly finished editing the last bits of my fics yet. ><;; I really need to get my own computer. XD Anyways, here are my responses.

[Hakkan CM~ Special Edition!]

Miki was bored. And not the ‘ho hum, I have no idea what I’m gonna do today’ kind of bored. It was the ‘I think I might gouge my eyeballs out just so I can have something to throw at the wall’ kind of bored. And so… scandal or not, she was wandering around in the studio where Hello Morning had been recorded before Haromoni@ took over.

The lights were on, and yet no one else was around… which didn’t please her much, because it didn’t do anything to alleviate her boredom.

With a sigh, the ex-Musume stepped up onto the set that had been used for HPC, sitting behind the table like she had when she played commentator. She began to rummage curiously through the drawers in the back of it, which before had held those big fun, advertising cards and sometimes her scripts in case she hadn’t felt like preparing beforehand.

What she found inside made her laugh a little bit. Someone had shoved her dark, Hecate-ish costume in the container and she pulled it out, brushing off the dust it was starting to gather. Miki narrowed her eyes and scoured the room meticulously to make sure she was indeed alone before she slipped the dress on over her own clothing, spinning around in her chair with an evil cackle as an added effect.

That’s when a man wearing a rather large, fake blond head over his own ran past, carrying a blue-something-or-other in his arms. Miki wondered if she should have cared, but before she could travel down that line of thought very far, Eri, wearing what the groping fiend recognized as her rather bright Hakkan outfit, also burst into the room, sliding to a halt in front of the set.

Her hair was messy and her eyes were ablaze with something like mild fury (well… Miki had never known Eri to get really, really angry, so that was the best she could think of to describe it) and as she gasped for breath she began to speak to the older female.

“Which- way- did- he- go?”

“Who… The weird blonde guy?”

Eri nodded so hard Miki was worried that her head was going to fly off.

“Oh… I don’t know. I mean, I saw him run by but I didn’t really care enough to pay attention. Why?”

“Because he stole my Poke’mon.”

Miki blinked at the other girl incredulously. Maybe her ears weren’t working. Eri was weird, but not that weird, and so she decided to try again…

“Your… what now?”

“My Poke’mon.”

The turtle girl replied just as simply as she had the first time, as if she was saying the most normal thing in the world. Miki continued to blink at her like she had spontaneously grown four heads. She really wasn’t sure how to respond to that, but it was okay, because the other girl had figured out a way to turn the situation down an even stranger direction.

“Look, if you’re not going to help me out, at least give me some of those Poke’balls you’ve got there.”

The ex-Musume blinked several more times in rapid succession before turning to follow Eri’s line of sight to spot a pile of red-and-white balls resting beside her elbow. Now… how and when did THOSE get there? They definitely hadn’t been there when she walked in…

“These things?”

“Come on, Fujimoto-san… This is kind of urgent!”

It was at that point when the wheels in Miki’s head began to slowly turn. A thought had occurred to her… one that would work to her advantage and if nothing else help to rid her of some of her boredom. The trademark smirk spread across her lips and she stared deviously at Eri for a moment, causing the other girl to take a step back and eye her warily. The turtle girl had been exposed to some of Miki’s… quirks enough to know that that wasn’t a good sign.

“What?”

“You really want these?”

“…Yeah…”

“How badly?”

“P-pretty bad.”

“Well, you gotta do somethin’ for me first…”

Miki began to dig through the container again and pulled out a cute dog mask and a plastic frisbee and held them up for Eri to see, still grinning in that way that made most people’s blood run cold.

“No… Fujimoto-san… anything but that. It was much too humiliating…”

“Well, I guess I’ll be keeping all these Poke-things to myself, then-”

“No, no, no! Okay, okay, I’ll do it, I’ll do it…”

Miki only grinned wider and watched as the defeated Eri slipped the mask around her face and got down on all fours, sitting back and putting her ‘paws’ up like a dog would. The groping demon snickered and got up out of her chair, waving the frisbee around out of the other girl’s reach.

“You’re not a very convincing dog… they make a lot more noise than this.”

Eri muttered something under her breath, but complied with her ‘master’s wishes and began to whimper and make little barking sounds. The frisbee flew out of Miki’s hands and the younger female was forced to chase after it, but she failed to catch the disc before it hit the ground. Miki wasn’t satisfied with this, and made the poor turtle girl play the game until she managed to catch the frisbee in the air. Unfortunately for Eri, that meant that she had to perform a rather dramatic dive, and was rewarded with a few bruises on her knees for the effort.

“Okay, I played the game. Now, I really need those balls!”

Miki snickered again, obviously taking what the other girl said out of context, but she sat back down behind the table and waved nonchalantly at the pile with one of her hands.

“Whatever. I don’t even know where these came from… What do you plan on doing with them, anyway?”

“I’m gonna catch another Poke’mon so I can get the first one back.”

Another Miki-blink.

“…Um… let’s say I really believe you for a moment. Where would you find another one?”

“Ah, there are two over there right now!!”

Eri pointed off towards another set to where Aika and Koharu were sitting quietly, looking as bored as Miki had been when she walked in the room. However, something was… off. For one thing, the younger of the two had bright, yellow, rabbit like ears protruding from either side of her head, and her skin appeared to be the same color, save for two circles on her cheeks that were a deep shade of crimson. She had a lightning bolt shaped… tail as well, and if Miki’s eyes weren’t playing tricks on her (even though, at this point she was pretty sure that they were), she thought she could see sparks jumping from the girl’s body every few seconds or so.

At first, Miki thought Koharu was just wearing part of her Haromoni@ costume, but she soon realized that those fluffy, pointed ears were real, and it was kind of hard to miss the fact that the girl had nine tails flicking around behind her.

Miki wasn’t even aware that her jaw was hanging open. Eri on the other hand seemed unaffected and skipped right on up to her kouhai, a very determined look on her face. They stared at her for a moment, and then without warning, the turtle girl chucked one of the red-and-white orbs right at Koharu’s face. It bounced off with a rather loud smack, and the miracle girl let out a pained shriek, glaring at the other girl, who seemed to be confused.

“You have to make it BIGGER first, stupid!!! Geez… why are we even here, Aika-chan?”

“Because… the big pink rabbit told us to sit here. And I don’t really want to question him.”

The two of them watched their senpai fumble with a new Poke’ball for a moment, before the older female turned to her companion again.

“…You know… those won’t even work…”

“…Yeah.”

“…I’m kind of hungry.”

“Me too. Want to go see if anyone’s got any food?”

“Yup.”

And so, they got up and walked away unnoticed, just as Eri gave up with getting the Poke’ball to grow any larger than it already was. When she realized their absence, she let out a frustrated groan, one that was soon masked by a deep, loud chuckle coming from a figure standing on top of the set.

“I’m disappointed in you, Victoria Kamei… Usagi-san even helped you by putting everything you needed right in front of you, and still you failed to catch a Poke’mon within the time limit.”

Eri looked up to see the blonde-haired (well, it wasn’t actually his head, but…) man from before, and his rather frightening companion: someone… in a pink bunny suit. The man turned to pat the Pink Rabbit on the head, and in response the bunny held up a paper sign that read: “^____________^ <33”

Eri wailed miserably as she spotted the blue creature plush toy dangling from the man’s arms, and she put on her best puppy dog pout.

“Su-san… give me back my Squirtle… Don’t hurt Mr. Walkie Bits…”

“Now, now, Kamei-chan, you know the rules. You lost, and you know what that means~”

From out of nowhere, a large box fell on top of Eri and trapped her inside of it (which was actually perfectly fine with her, as it was dark and quiet) and following that was Risa, who landed on top of the box gracefully, photobook in hand. She held it up for all to see (considering her audience consisted of Miki, who seemed about ready to fall asleep, there weren’t many people to witness the event) and took a deep breath before she began to speak.

“So, as you all know, Isshun is out in stores now…”

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“What was the point of all of this, Micchi-chan~”

“Um… we got free cake from the Pink Rabbit?”

“…Can’t you think of something much more epic to say? Like… ‘It’s Hello! Project… anything can happen here.’”

“…I’m eating cake right now, Koharu-chan.”

“Still…”

“…Koharu-chan?”

“What?”

“This yellow paint is starting to itch a lot…”

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[Like Taking Candy From A...]

“Captain, do you copy?”

“Hai~ Loud and clear, Maa-chan. Have you guys had any luck yet?”

“Negative… There’s nothin’ but dirt out here… and I think Risako just ran her space cycle into a rock… Ouch. I think she’s okay, though.”

“It was a really BIG rock!!!”

“Ah~ Not so loud Rii-chan…”

“HEY~ This has to be it!”

“Chii-chan… that’s a piece of scrap metal…”

“But it’s really shiny, Kumai-chan…”

“Captain, you might want to consider in investing in a few more channels for our radio system…”

“AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH!!!”

“Momochi?!”

“…Really… big… bug…”

“Hey guys, can you all shut up for a second? There’s a signal coming in… Another ship’s headed this way…”

“Eh?! Who would be landing on this dump?”

We landed on this dump, Maihacchi…”

“What’s the identification key, Captain?”

“Registration number: 0-3-21-20-5… It’s them…”

All members of the bounty-hunters-for-hire team Berryz Koubou stopped what they were doing in their various positions on the face of the bleak, dusty planet to stare up into the sky as a pinprick of light came into view. That light only grew brighter and brighter as the incoming ship roared through the tiny planet’s atmosphere, darting through the sky and circling around to land on the surface.

The small figure who had initiated the radio conversation immediately began to run towards the rendezvous point she had set up with the others, knowing that the rest of her group would join her there.

She was halfway towards her destination when a huge, mechanized suit of armor dropped down into her path, massive clouds of dust billowing out from under it in either direction. Someone sure knew how to make an entrance…

The girl heard a sharp, high-pitched squeal in the speakers of her radio helmet, and her eyes began to water with pain before the squeal subsided and a voice that didn’t belong to any of her teammates started to speak. Obviously the newcomers had hijacked their way into her communication system…

“Aww~ Look everyone, it’s little Shimizu-san… How cute. Out here in the middle of nowhere and all alone… Where are your precious Berryz, Captain?”

“Right here.”

Saki could hear a garbled shriek of surprise as a much taller mech shot up behind the one that was blocking her way and lifted it up into the air, tossing it over to the side as though it were merely a pillow. While the ‘enemy’ was struggling to recover, the small female ran towards the other mech, entering the suit through an electronic door in the side of it’s boot. She quickly made her way up through the armored fortress until she reached the cockpit, where Chinami greeted her, and Yurina was lounging boredly at the controls.

“You’d think they could be a little more… challenging if they wanted to push us around…”

“Thanks for that anyway, Kumai-chan. I’m definitely no match for a giant mech suit…”

The other mech was pushing itself back upright, and as it moved into a fighting stance, Saki could hear the pilot’s voice growling in her helmet and out of the speakers in the cockpit. A screen popped up onto the control panel’s thin, translucent computer monitor, and the trio recognized the face of their rival team’s leader instantly.

“Aww, look everyone, it’s Yajima-san… how cute. Out here in the middle of nowhere and all a-”

“Shut up, shorty.”

Saki ignored the remark and turned to Yurina, who was busy typing away at the keyboard attached to the controls, obviously planning out a battle sequence for her mech.

“Are the others on their way?”

“Rii-chan and Miya went back to get the ship in case those guys decide to take it to the air with this, and Momochi, Maasa, and Maiha are coming with the other mech.”

“Good… It’s time to show these guys that you don’t mess with Berryz Koubou and get away with it.”

Chinami pumped a fist into the air at that, letting out a triumphant cry of approval. Yurina merely smiled a little bit, motioning for her partner to get into position and for her Captain to take a seat so as to not get tossed around like a rag doll during the heat of the battle. The other two complied with her silent commands, and the tall female leaned forward, gripping the handle-like controls that maneuvered the mech’s super-powered arms.

The sensitive hi-tech machine responded immediately, and the three could hear the grinding of metal against metal and the squeal of high powered gears and wheels churning as the limbs moved as one with Yurina, putting the mech in the stance proper to begin the duel.

Without warning, the enemy’s suit charged forward at an alarming pace, metal hands clenched into fists in order to deliver effective, crushing blows. The tall girl tensed and braced for impact, waiting for the right moment so that she could send her opponent flying out of orbit and back to whatever planet she had come from.

It was merely a matter of seconds before the thunderous sound of the huge forms colliding ripped through the planet’s atmosphere, alerting anyone who happened to be on the surface to the epic clash taking place. Soon, more giant mechanized suits would join the others on the makeshift battlefield, and the fighting would not stop until one side went down, and went down hard.

Fortunately, the battle made for a wonderful distraction, and two small, nearly identical figures wandered along the planet’s dusty shell, making their way back to their hidden, private ship. They both had pleased grins on their faces, and one was carrying a golden, slightly rusted mug in her hands. They seemed to be in absolutely no hurry at all, considering what was taking place not too far away.

“This was much too easy, Non-chan…”

“Can’t argue with that, dear Aibon.”

“It was like takin’ candy from a baby.”

“More like, takin’ candy from a whole bunch of babies… While they’re busy beating the crap out of each other…”

“…We’ll be halfway across the galaxy, collecting that sweet, sweet, 120,000,000 Yen reward…”

“Ah~ Paradise, here we come…”
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on June 08, 2007, 02:50:12 AM
Oh gahh. I'm conflicted xD

Loser:
Story 1: 3
Story 2: Instant 5. (I love how it sounds serious, yet so hilarious at the same time xD Mocking the real shows <3)

Fimmy-chan:
Story 1: 2 (Sorry about it, it was kinda funky and didn't really mesh up together that well o_O)
Story 2: 3.

Mm. Challenges are fun xD
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: modesta107 on June 08, 2007, 03:09:17 AM
hmmm.interesting.

Loser87
story 1:  (2)
story 2:  (3)

FIM
story 1:  (2)
story 2:  (4)
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 08, 2007, 06:52:02 PM
OMG I love you guys!

Loser:
Story 1: 5!!!! I love W!
Story 2: 3! While I like the H!Pokemon it was weird to me. Really weird for some reason.

FIM:
Story 1: 4! For randomness! But also had some of the weirdness that Loser's story 2 had.
Story 2: 5! I love W!
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Aioros on June 09, 2007, 07:03:12 PM
Loser87
MAJI DE?! - 4
Eri's Pokemon Journey > Ash's. If every city had an Officer Tsuji and a Nurse Kago, the world would be a better place to live in. You also get points for the Pokedex entries. :lol:

THE GOLDEN CUP OF BOOOOOZZZEE!! - 5
Berryz scrounging for food while C-ute gets funded by Airi's family? W getting lost and running out of fuel in the middle of outer space? (Nono's bakajo mode at it's best) Epic. I didn't know how long I was able to keep a straight face while reading it. XD


FIM
Hakkan CM~ Special Edition! - 4
I loved how you incorporated HPC into the story. I didn't imagine that the adventure can be done within the studio walls but you were able to pull it off. You even named Eri's Squirtle! :D

Like Taking Candy From A... - 4
Details, details, details. I really like reading your work because it's packed with incredible details. It helps me visualize what's happening in a certain scene. I like the twist in the end where W sneaks in to get the cup but knowing W, they'd either A) get caught B) get lost or C) get caught again :P

Loser87 wins with by a solitary point. But don't give up FIM. :)

You two did well :mon thumb:
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Yuuyami on June 09, 2007, 07:05:18 PM
-gets whip ready- Ohhhhh Fimmy-chaaaan~! <3333333
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: FeverInducedMadness on June 09, 2007, 07:14:45 PM
-trembling from inside a hole in the ground after recieving her punishment- T____T;;

-will edit this later with current point totals and whatnot-

[Even though I lost, I want to thank you a lot for that comment, wordy. :3 Stuff like that makes me want to try harder even though I didn't come out on top. Makes me feel like I don't suck. XD]
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: ChrNo on June 12, 2007, 12:50:47 PM
loser : story 1 : 4 'cause you didn't let Miya drive !
          story 2 : 5 Miya+ Eri = WIN

FIM : story 1 : 2 O_o
        story 2 : 3 ...
Title: Re: Senjou! [A war of epic proportions... or, yeah, something like that.]
Post by: Tanachan on June 25, 2007, 02:06:03 AM
Okies, my points

Loser's Pokemon: 4 (Nurse Aibon got me slapped >.>)
Loser's Space: 5 (I don't know...)

FIM's Pokemon: 5 (And Isshun is on sale...)
FIM's Space: 5 (MECCHA BATTORU! *starts playing Gyaruru*)

Ah well, all four were still very fun. And FIM wins by a point!