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Title: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: stefy on October 12, 2007, 01:04:44 PM
Procrastinating Truth


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Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: JFC on October 12, 2007, 04:01:05 PM
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She made various small movements while her fingers pushed each button with some force, her body would turn toward the left ever so slightly, she would stick out her tongue and give mischievous looks every now and then, and would also smile to herself once in a while.
Picturing that...yep, it's cute.   :P



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Rika was the captain of the school girl's tennis team, while Yossi was captain of the school's slacker’s team, if there even was a school slacker’s team well then she would probably be captain.
:lol:



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Just sick of always waiting the ones waiting for the guys, isn't it supposed to be the other way round?"
Waiting for "the guys"?  Rika's right, it's usually the other way around.  :roll:




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"Her hair is so nice.. iinaa~"
Rika suddenly blurted out looking longingly at the girl not far from them. Yossi looked ahead searching for the source of Rika's sudden change in topic. No beautiful hair girl any where in sight, well not to Yossi of course.

"tsk tsk... that’s one major hotttie right there. It’s not fair that Rika spotted her first." Shaking his head in aww Jun drooled over the beauty that Rika had spotted.

"Where? Who? You mean that oddly dressed girl there with the white shorts and long hair?" Yossi said a little too loud not realizing that the girl could have over heard their conversation.
Hmmmm...Miki?



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'What the fuck? Some idiots are talking about me. Who else here is wearing white shorts.. Oddly dressed?! These are the latest trend now jerks.'
Yep, definitely thinking that it's Miki. :D




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The girl with the flawless looking hair thought to herself as she cursed the group of people talking about her behind her back. She stood up angrily while waiting for the bus to stop. She decided to give a threatening glare at the group before alighting. But then something, more like someone, caught her eye.

'Oh my god, ka..kakkoii...'


Walking home, the long haired girl never could stop thinking about the person she saw in the bus. Even if that person was one of the people who was talking about her.
She noticed Yossi, didn't she?  8)



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The other non-H!P characters are all non-fictional
Ummm...if they're NON-FICTIONAL then that means they're real or are based on real people. :?
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: stefy on October 14, 2007, 02:24:25 AM
[Chapter 2]

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Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: g4rfield on October 14, 2007, 05:16:43 AM
I won't complain! So you better continue this fic! God, 2 chapters and I'm hooked! For some reason I keep thinking about Mako-chan whenever that girl whose name is unknown comes up. Well, she might be intended to be Fujimoto Miki. You did say they're all gonna be slightly OOC.  :lol: Her friend, I presume, would be Matsuura Aya then?  ;)
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: JFC on October 14, 2007, 08:32:57 PM
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"What? I didn't say anything. It's you guys who think that way, not my fault you people have such a polluted mind." Going back to innocent mode, He gave a confused look and continued walking pretending to look disappointed.
:kekeke:



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She continued her report about her date with her boyfriend, while Yossi only smiled weakly at Rika. She hated it when Rika began her never ending ramble about someone Yossi wasn't very fond of.
Especially when there's someone else that Yossi would rather think about. :D



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"Your late you know that!" hissed a female voice from the other end of the phone.

"Hi to you too! I just called to see if by any chance you might know where our class is?" The girl replied most cheerfully, imitating someone who called an information hotline for an enquiry.

"Again? This is like the fifth time you forgot where the damn class is."
Poor Miki has no sense of direction? :lol:

Did she call Aya? She called Aya, didn't she?  :grin:



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"You rolled your eyes at me didn't you? I know you did, I heard it."
She heard it? XD



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Whatever, just get your tiny butt here,
Correction, her tiny HOT butt. :yep:



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"AHh! Hitomi-chan~ ohayo!" Someone from the class shrieked the moment the door opened and the foursome stepped into class. Yossi frowned in discomfort at her name being called out like that by that particular classmate of hers. She flashed a smiled at the lion haired looking guy, "Hitomi-chan~ I said ohayo you know?" He pressed on.

"uh, mornin." Yossi replied reluctantly
Hmmmmmmmmmm...could be some dude Yossi's known for a long time (as in, since childhood)?



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She looked over behind him and saw that same lion haired guy gazing down Ryota's back. 'And you say you don't have a crush on him..' Yossi thought to herself.
Heh? Who?  :?



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Gorou Shoji who was in the same class as the foursome, always tried to fit in within the group, but failed miserably. The same age as Jun, he was the only gay guy Yossi had ever known as a friend.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...so he's gay. That must be why he shrieked out Yossi's name when she came in.



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He liked wearing low V-neck shirts and a small feminine looking sweater with jeans or a slightly baggy looking pants. He had the habit of calling Yossi 'Hitomi-chan', dragging the word 'chan' and making himself sound pretty much like Rika's natural voice. He screamed a lot and loves to hold one of their arms whenever they were walking.
Oh yeah, he's gay alright. :lol:



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Suddenly turning to hide behind a wall the girl with beautiful long wavy hair took a peek at what or more like who she thought she saw.
OH! Miki spotted Yossi! THEY GO TO THE SAME SCHOOL!!! :w00t:



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"What's wrong with you now?" A girl slightly taller then her asked with one eyebrow raised.

"She's in this school too." mumbling with delight, mostly to herself, she smiled and watched a boyish looking girl walk in a different direction together with another girl and some weird looking guy with bronze colored hair.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...Miki sounds all doki-doki!  :wub:
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: stefy on October 16, 2007, 03:26:11 PM
Quote from: g4rfield
Well, she might be intended to be Fujimoto Miki. You did say they're all gonna be slightly OOC.   Her friend, I presume, would be Matsuura Aya then?

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Poor Miki has no sense of direction?

Did she call Aya? She called Aya, didn't she? 
Sorry, I didn't say it was Miki.... And well, it's not Miki  :P

Like I said.. this person is TOTALLY out of character... and I mean TOTALLY.

Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: stefy on October 16, 2007, 03:28:15 PM
[Chapter 3]


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Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: JFC on October 17, 2007, 03:30:32 AM
Not Miki??? :cry:

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/me reads

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HOLY SHIT IT'S AICHAN!!! :o

This could be even more interesting. ;D

Aichan, GANBARRE!!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: g4rfield on October 17, 2007, 04:57:02 PM
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"Gaki-chan, you can say it out loud you know. It's not a that big a deal. You still haven't answered my question though. What do you think? You think I can nab this one?"

Well f@ck me!! It's Ai-chan and Gaki after all!! They're really OOC!!  :shocked: Since when is Ai-chan dubbed the fashion freak and Gaki looked like the rag from low side of the town?  :lol: Now, this get more interesting, Ai stalking Yossie?  :twisted: I wonder which pairing this gonna be? The old school one or something new?  :D
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: stefy on October 20, 2007, 02:39:12 AM
[Chapter 4]

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Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: g4rfield on October 20, 2007, 04:57:32 AM
 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: Think of saying it? Say what? What? WHAT????!!  :lol:
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: inDeceit on October 20, 2007, 05:05:55 AM
<i>I told you so</i>

 :lol:  :lol:  XD They really are OCC, but lol! Love it.
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: lil_hamz on October 20, 2007, 08:49:18 AM
Why are the Ishiyoshi related fics I've been reading recently mostly about Yossi losing interest in Rika?? XD But they are the perfect couple! The first ever pairing in H!P :P

That said though, I totally understand there would be no story if that didn't happen. So I say, leave Rika Yossi, and look for greener pastures XD

This TakaGaki as friends thing reminds me of the kind of bff who consists of one rich, one poo...uh, not so rich XD girl. Where one is boy crazy and the other doesn't even care. Usually in such situations, the "don't care" girl gets the guy....ahem, the girl in this case. But since I'm expecting more characters to start appearing, I can guess the final couple should be way unexpected. I can't wait :D
Title: Re: Procrastinating Truth
Post by: JFC on October 20, 2007, 11:14:06 PM
Damn Aichan's plan was slick.

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Too bad it royally failed! :wahaha: