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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Crack-to-Go => Topic started by: sweeety on February 08, 2008, 05:53:24 PM
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Sweeety's stories :)
This is where I will post my stories. Know that I am working on a lot at the same time and the updates probably wont be regular. Some of these stories I may finish some I may not but I will try though. I will try to keep this updated and tell people where what is but this is the first time I do something like this so bear with me people.
Warning some of this stuff may mess your mind up. And I don't know if some of these things that I write about are G rated. Im not good at judging them so if you have a problem with something here tell me and I'll oblige.
SOME VIEWERS MAY EXPERIENCE :love: :w00t: :lol: :cry: :angry: :bleed eyes: :doh: :sweatdrop: :jerk: :banghead: :? :inlove: :roll: 8) :( XD :muffin: :rofl: AND MAYBE EVEN :shocked: (or not)
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Sweeet(<--- pun xD)
can't wait!
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Can't wait either! :D
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can't wait for ur stories! muahahahahha!!! :twisted:
off topic:
anyway.. school started 3 weeks ago.. why havent u gone yet??
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OMG! i was at your house an hour ago and i forgot to give u back ur draft for ur fanfic!! :banghead: I'll have to wait for a few more weeks or even a month before i can give it back to you... :sweatdrop: Hurry up and decide on what u want to do!! U don't have enough time... :cry: (not that ur dying or n-e-thing) talking to u on the phone and on the internet isnt as fun as talking to u in person... :oops:
oh! and get back to the fanfics!! please make an ishiyoshi one!! :inlove: i beg you!
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Ok I kept you waiting long enough and here is the prologue for the one I named "strike". It's supposed to be a parody but some people may not find it funny because Im a crap writer but here it is anyway. Btw this is just the prologue, zay05ohayou has the other chapters I wrote (I think) if not then I lost them so no way to surelly know where they are. Anyway here it is, the second story I post on this site, ""Strike""
Strike prologue
The girls off Hello Project were fed up! They wanted more and they wanted it now! They had a meeting one night and decided on a strike until they each got what they wanted. They all decided to stay in the H!P building and not perform until Tsunku budged. They had asked for these things before but they all got shot down (not literally) by Tsunku. Sure some of the things they asked for were a little silly – Miichishige wanted a statue of her with the engraving “the cutest of them all” – and some things clashed – Yuko’s request to remove anything containing bananas from the H!P building and Maki’s attempt to get the cafeteria to serve every flavour of yoghurt-and some were just plain weird – groping day, day where all eat yoghurt etc.- and many more requests that could be added to the above categories and other categories –such as creepy, gross, mean, Miki, evil (which is kinda like the Miki category except nicer), cute and many more- but they still wanted them and by god they deserved most of those things.
Tsunku was able to do all the things they wanted but he had many reasons not to, mainly because he was stingy and although he knew some particular requests would make them more popular – like lifting the ban on dating other members- he was too afraid (or jealous) to do them. Plus it would ruin their image. This was ‘Hello Project’ not ‘Let-the-girls-run-wild-Project’. He didn’t want the chaos and anarchy (and in some cases bloodshed) this would cause so he turned everyone down because – as he told them- if one of them gets what they want then they would all have to get what they want because it wouldn’t be fair on the others. So he carried on while the pent up teen angst in the girls took over and the girls plotted their revenge, which came in the form of the strike.
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lol.. cool! that was interesting.. looking 4ward to more from u.. :w00t: specially looking 4ward to your ishiyoshi and charmikitty fics.. :rofl:
and uhm.. no. :? i dont have your other chapters sweeety and could you do me a favour and send me a message on messenger if you're on right now.. :sweatdrop:
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waiiiiiiiit a minute! paht4? whe-a ah the otha chaptas?? :tama-mad: i'm confussd.. :sweatdrop:
anyways.. u weren't talking about me where you?? :-\ i'm suppose to be doing my homework but i'm stuck here waiting for your fics... XD
edit: oh its not here anymore... :doh:
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I fudged up! I wrote the ending of the pervy fic and posted it here by accident. Thats why I thought you had ecchi access. So sorry for what u will see next time u go on msn... Anyway no that is not part 4. I dont think I wrote that much. But now I have the HW issue and I cant post much so maybe I'll have something up next weekend. But I cant make any promises. Btw I'll need to borrow ur english book, but u can borrow mine first. But u'll have too do that at school coz Im using the one book for most if not all my subjects. Anyway sory about that, it was not intended for your bright young eyes.
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hmm.. you make want to :bleed eyes:
o please talk to me on msn
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Ok good news guys! I got a new idea! Man the toilet really is the place to get inspired! anyway here it is! Dedicated to St Valentine, Miki and Aya. Yes it's dedicated to Miki cause it's her birthday prezie from me! I know I already wrote her one but it's so easy to write her because she is stereotyped but I'm gonna try my best to change that. But not in this story. She's been bad in this one. Here it is= GAM oneshot, about falling in luv. Let the mushyness begin. :wub:
Once there was a girl Miki. She was a bad, bad girl. She'd charm people into giving her their hearts and she would throw them on the ground and stomp in them. The gods saw and were displeased. They punished her by taking her heart up in heaven with them and leaving her an empty shell. Unable to feel anything being so far from her heart. She could not taste....... Nor experience pleasure.......... Or feel pain............... She was NOT complete!
Cold and alone she was forced to walk this earth, never feeling loved again. Not being able to experience pleasure, even when she got what she wanted. No matter how many hearts she stole and how many people she hurt, she still felt nothing.
Then one day as she was walking through the woods she saw a girl. At first she thought she was ordinary but as she got a closer look she realised how magnificent her beauty was. She approached the girl and one of the gods felt something twitch in her hand as she held Miki's heart. Miki's heart was reacting to the girl. It was beating at a rate that was normal for a human and she was only moving towards the girl. Miki started to feel something in her gut... A feeling she had not felt before. She greeted the girl and spoke to her for a while, making a casual conversation that started with some ice breakers and ended with a promise to meet eachother again. Meanwhile her heart was racing. They parted and Miki set off on her way home.
There she realised she didn't catch the girls name. She searched all over the woods and couldn't find her. Finally, defeated she started on her way home. She took a longer way, hoping to maybe catch her there and as she was close to a waterfall she could hear this majestic, melodic voice, voice singing.
Miki aproached the waterfall (from the bottom) and saw the same girl as before, about to get in the water. She watched stunned as the girl removed her clothing and entered the water. Her eyes captivated by the sight of the beauty, she lost track of time as she watched the girl, swim. After a while though, she decided to make her move and stood out from the bushes. The girl, first taken aback a little, asked her to join her for a swim after she realised that it was the charming girl from earlier.
Miki stripped and joined her in the water and they swam together, dancing playfully underwater and talking and just jenuinely having fun. The gods interested in the weird behaviour of her heart had gathered around and begun watching as it beat faster everytime the stranger got close to it's owner. They noticed it was yearning for the girl. It wanted, needed to be with her. So the gods, intrigued, decided to test that theory. They made a huge storm with thunder and lightning and watched as the girls ran out of the water and took cover a willow tree, which was large enough to cover both of them, but not for long as a hunder bolt from nearby, broke one of its branches causing it to only cover a smaller plot of land.
Water falling all over the stranger Miki pulled her really close to her, trying to get her under the branch protecting her from the rain. Miki hugged the girl close as thunder and lightning fell around them, almost encircling them, as if someone wanted them to be together like that. Miki looked down at the girl whose head was resting on her chest and was shaking slightly from the cold. She took off her jacket and draped it over the other, who gave a surprised look and asked her if she's sure to which Miki answered with a "of course". Miki held her tight as teh storm carried on around them. All of a sudden the girl looked up into those empty brown eyes and saw a flicker of something. They started talking again and they came around to talking about why Miki was still in the forest. Miki explained that she returned because she wanted to find the girls name and the girl told her that her name was Aya.
Miki looked into Aya's eyes and saw them filled with emotion. Miki's heart skipped a beat. Aya looked back and wondered why her eyes showed nothing. They held eachother for the rest of the night and made plans for the next day and parted as soon as the storm disipated.
A few days later and the two were inseperable. A month more of this and heaven was filled with the sound of Miki's tiny ticker. Some of the gods were considering returning it to her but they were still not sure if she had changed. With Aya she had been a diferent person. She had stoped taking peoples hearts and destroying them but they weren't sure if that was because she didn't have time to or because she changed.
One day Aya finally decided tell Miki how she felt. She told her to meet her in the woods next to the waterfalls and being there early she started feeling to get rid of her nervousness. Miki arrived to the sound of Aya's singing and once again listened before letting her presence be known. Then she aproached Aya.
Aya confesed her love for Miki and gave her her heart to do as she pleased with. Miki overwhelmed did not know how to react so she just took off with Aya's heart. She held it firmly but not too hard as she ran through the woods to her sanctuary not knowing what to do. She got home and stared blankly at it as she thought about it's owner. She thought and she thought but in the end she couldn't decide what to do with it.She held it in her hand.....it felt warm.....She knew what she would usually do...... SHe would throw this on the ground and stomp on it but Aya's heart felt diferent than all the rest......... It felt right and nice and she liked that feeling she didn't like hurting or breaking it... looking at this fragile innocent piece of Aya, the biggest part of Aya, Miki didn't feel like hurting it. Knowing that Aya loved her and trusted her with her biggest piece, Miki felt like.............. keeping it. She wanted to keep it safe and warm forever. She wanted to keep with her for all of time and never let it go.
She ran back to the woods, heart beating the fastest it had ever beat, and located Aya, sitting on a rock by the waterfall. She ran over to her holding her heart, and told her of her intentions to keep it safe and sound forever. Then Miki's heart floated down from heaven as she was apologising for not being able ot give her her heart. It fell right onto Aya's waiting hands as Aya made Miki her own promises for her heart. The two girls smiled hapilly at eachother and held hands for a while before fusing their hearts into their new chests. Miki's heart in Aya's chest and Aya's heart in Miki's. They lingered for a moment before making their ways back.
They were burried in those woods, by the waterfall, and till this day, when the gods look they still see Aya's heart inside Miki and Miki's heart inside Aya.
The end, This was a story I came up with in a sleep deprived state, please no one kill me. And now I'm going nanny boo in beddy bye land . *back into hiding* "Hey Miki, did you like your present?..................................................."
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Man the toilet really is the place to get inspired!
Belive it or not but I totally know what you mean :on lol:
Once there was a girl Miki. She was a bad, bad girl. She'd charm people into giving her their hearts and she would throw them on the ground and stomp in them.
Awesome beginning :on lol:
Anyway, it was different but still sweet and I love GAM :luvluv2: I'm looking forward to your next stories :hee:
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Man the toilet really is the place to get inspired!
It's amazing just how true that actually is. XD
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Man the toilet really is the place to get inspired! anyway here it is!
Lol.. How come I am not surprised..?
Great gift for Mikitty! You'd be hoping she got to read it aye? Well, anyways.. It was awesome! GAM is perfect!!!
Uhm.. you know I'm still waiting for the Ishiyoshi.. :mon impatient:
I'll be waiting.. :mon suspect:
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Zay wanted a fluffy/angsty IshiYoshi fic so here goes nothing (with extra mushiness :wub: )
FLUFF
“ Oh it’s so cute! Can I touch it?” Rika asked her girlfriend
“It’s all yours baby! You can do whatever you want with it!” Yoshi exclaimed
“Ohh thank you Yochan this is the cutest thing ever!”
“Ahemm”
“ But not as cute as you my baby”
“ Thank you!”
“ No thank you Yossie.” Rika said as her eyes started watering
“Oh don’t cry baby! You know your Yochan doesn’t like it when you cry!”
“But I can’t help it I’m just so happy! I don’t know what to do to repay you”
“ It was nothing, really. Just the look on your face is reward enough for me!”
“Oh Yochan!” Rika leaped into the arms of her most prized possession.. Yoshi held her tight as she cuddled into her, burying her face in the crook of her neck.
“I love you” She whispered into her ear
“I love you too” Yoshi answered, looking into her girls soul.
They rolled around in bed a little while continuing to cuddle, wearing the same clothes they slept in (which wasn’t much) The new object, forgotten at the side of the bed.
At some point they started making out and the giggling and fun they were having was put on hold as the room temperature rose a little more. As Rika moaned her name when Hitomi placed small kisses on her neck she noticed something was wrong.
“Wheres our new baby?” She asked frantically
“Huh? What?” Rika shocked and disappointed asked, while trying to catch her breath. Yoshi knowing the effects of leaving her girlfriend hanging quickly passed Rika her inhaler so she could breath again. Then the girls looked all over the bed for it. They looked under, over and between the sheets, covers, pillows and plushies but to no avail! Where did it go?
Then Yoshi had the genious idea of looking somewhere other than the bed. Which seemed too perplexing for a still groggy Rika so Yoshi looked around the other rooms. She was having no luck there either until all of a sudden she heard a giggle coming from the bedroom. She dashed back to see Rika cuddling her new ‘baby’. She sighed in relief and lay down next her. And started patting it.
“so where was it?” she asked
“it slipped off the side of the bed and was hidden by some covers.”
“Of course” Yoshi sighed.
“What do you think people will say if they find out we have one of those?”
“I don’t know.. But your fans might be a little disappointed or shocked at the great Yoshizawa needing a-“
“Hey I don’t ‘need’ anything! You wanted it! You said it would make our lives a little more exciting. And I gave in because I know how much you like cute things. I didn’t think that you would pick this monster though. I mean look at it! It’s huge it wont fit in the-“
“Hey don’t make fun of it! Just cause it’s a little chubby-“
“A little chubby? It’s thicker than my thigh”
“Ok first of all don’t exaggerate, second everything is thicker than your thigh, you look like you’re starved, and third of all you were chubby too once!”
“Of course Im thin! You always want to play with it and force me to join in! I spend more time playing with you two than I don eating!”
“Well its no fun to play alone!”
“Yes it is! Other people have no trouble doing it but you just seem unable to get enough of me! Sometimes I find myself wishing you would leave me alone for a while”
“If I didn’t love you so damn much I would!” Rika cried as she ran into the bathroom to cry.
“Rika that’s not what I mean! Please come out and we’ll talk about this!”
After about an hour in the bathroom, Rika was finally eased out by a begging Yoshi who was close to tears herself. She fell right into her arms and cried some more while Yoshi reassured her that she loved her and would never leave her or want her to leave. As Yoshi cuddled Rika their little spectator got jealous. Rika caught it looking at them from the bed and picked it up.
“Did you miss me baby?” She asked in a baby voice. Yoshi rolled her eyes but played along.
“Yes, it missed you a lot, why don’t you play with it some more?”
“Would you like to join us? If you’re not too tired that is…..” she asked cautiously as she lay down on the bed. On her side, facing the window and resting her head on her bottom hand.
“Of course! I would love to join you and no I am not too tired.” She said as she climbed over Rika to the other side of the bed. After lots of cuddles and kisses they all fell asleep. Rika in Yoshi’s arms and the brand new baby bunny inside Rika’s. The room is silent except for the sound of slow, deep breathing and the beating of three hearts.
THE END
Writers notes: the eyes are the window to your soul. Yoshi was looking deep into Rikas eyes. So deep it was like she could see into her soul
It was an unusually warm night there and they slept in their underwear.
Don’t blame me zay asked for mushiness. *Crawls back under table “Hey Miki still here? Oh you have a date here in a bit? Should I go?......” –Hiding is so much fun!*
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That is the most revoltingly sweet mushi story i ever read. I <3 it! You can't get anymore mushy than having Rika run and cry into the bathroom and then an hour later come out into the arms of an almost crying yossy and still be able to cry some more. :lol:
Oh Rika XD
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I'm working on another one. Secret pairing that I reveal in the end, hope you guys like it, I will post doon, I'm like, 60% done (at least). It's that oneshot that people wanted, keep your eyes peeled. I will post when I get two more comments cause I wanna know if people read or if Im just wasting my time, none of that, ''She'll cave and post soon", i mean it, I want two more posts or this will be the last story I ever write (unless I have to do one for school or something, which I wont add MM to -probably-) so post and I will. Ok? Me posty u posty, got it?
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ok so here's the new fic, I must say, I never considered doing this pairing, Im a hardcore Yomiki, AM, YoMako, konkon...... shipper and never really paid much attention to these two, but I've seen others work with them and felt very inspired to write something for this couple, so for their birthdays this is my prezzie to them (whenever their birthdays are). Because I dont say who is who untill the end, I will use diferent colours to represent each girl, and they will both be revealed in the end so..... Keep reading I guess. Here it is ^_^
Its Friday night and she sits in the cafeteria by herself again. Its not that she has no friends, quite contrary, she has a lot of friends. But they are all busy. They are all too busy to hang with her. You see that’s what one of the downsides of being in morning musume is; No time. Ever since she joined she knew there would have been sacrifices to make, she knew she wouldn’t be able to live like a normal girl her age. But she decided to do this anyway. She thought it wouldn’t be too bad. She knew this was the opportunity of a lifetime and she wouldn’t have let it slip away. Especially not if she wanted to get close to her.
Ever since before she joined she had always had these really deep feelings towards someone in Morning Musume. This girl she thought she could never have. But jus to be in her presence was enough for her. So she joined Morning Musume and got to work with her. She was really happy, but sadly she had to graduate, leaving her behind. At least they didn’t cease all contact and they still saw each other at work in segments and other stuff. The girl in question had just happened to walk in the cafeteria. At the worst possible moment might I add, for the girl on the table, was reminiscing about the past and how she never admitted her feelings to her. As she spotted her friend and workmate, she snuck up behind her with every intention of sneaking up on her. However as she was about to scare her, she found herself staring at her instead.
She thought about how the other girl had grown up so much during the time they knew each other and how along with her height and ….other bodily aspects grew her affection for the girl. She remembered the times they hung out and how she could always turn to her for support and all the things she had given her.. She couldn’t stop thinking about the time her ex dumped her and she spent all night crying on her shoulder in her home, the door to which had been opened to her even though she came over in the middle of the night. The sitting girl was thinking of the exact same thing. She remembered her coming to her, broken, in the middle of the night and breaking down. She wanted to hold her forever and never ever let anything bad happen to her again. So she held her. But she didn’t have the courage to say those things to her. Not when she was like this… Not when she was broken. She knew her friend needed comfort and she sacrificed her own happiness for the sake of her. You see, she loved her so much, she kept herself from telling her she loved her because it would probably scare her and confuse her and right then it was the last thing she wanted. So she kept quiet and held her crying friend, her heart breaking along with her friends’.
She sighed. “Why?” She asked herself. As far as she knew no one else was in the cafeteria, and the last time she checked, the lunch lady had gone to the restroom.
“Why do I feel this way?” she asked rhetorically “Why do I love her?”
With this the other began to turn away, angry and -she was surprised to realise this but- jealous. She couldn’t believe it. Here she was, realising she had emotions for someone who quite obviously felt something for another. ‘Well not really’ she thought. ‘ I think I knew I felt this way earlier’ she admitted to herself. ‘If not, then why would I let her get so close to me?’ she realised. ‘ She was the first person I went to when I got dumped, if not because I felt something then why? It wasn’t because she was my friend, I have lots of friends. Then why? That’s right……. I do love her. I was trying to stop myself from getting hurt again. I tried to get over her. I cant deny it anymore! You broke my heart!’ As tears started to form in her eyes and she started turning away her friend spoke again. “And why can’t I tell her?” she added. Although she couldn’t bear to, she had to listen. Just to find out who it was that stole her heart and why. She wanted to see if she could figure out what her friend wanted and change herself to try and get her. “I’ve had time…….. And many times I’ve tried but failed……. Why cant I just act right when I am around her? Why am I a bumbling fool around her?” She remembered sometimes when her friend had been particularly weird and bumbling and tried to remember who else was with her at the time….. It might have been~ “And why didn’t I tell you that night?” ‘huh? They had a night?’ heart breaking and slightly weeping she listened carefully, quiet as a mouse. “When you came….. Why did I have to keep my mouth shut? Why didn’t I say that you deserve better or something? Why didn’t we talk? Why didn’t I tell you? Why did I just hold you? I should have protected you! I should have just told you that I wanted to protect you! That I wanted to be with you! That I loved you! But……. I didn’t want to freak you out-not when you’re that hurt……. If only that night never happened! If only you hadn’t reawakened those feelings within me! Then I wouldn’t have to pretend around you! I wouldn’t have to lie! I wouldn’t have to spend all my time thinking about you and trying to forget you all over again. And I wouldn’t be here telling myself these things like a crazy person. But of course you can’t answer me. You never will. Cause I don’t have the heart to tell you and ruin what we have, I cant lose our friendship. Even though its not enough it will have to do. If it’s all I can get I’ll take it and be happy” At this point her pursuer was crying hard, feeling the pain of her loved one and feeling her heart break with the pain her friend is going through and the way she is treated. “So don’t worry about me, I’ll be fine as long as you are near, safe and happy. Because you are the only thing that matters to me! You are the only one, Maki.” Maki’s jaw dropped. She couldn’t be hearing right. She was deaf! Right? But at the moment her heart was beating so hard it could tear her chest and fall out. Although she bet the first thing it would do was to run to her friend, the one she had been inadvertently causing the one she loved. “But I do worry!” She finally spoke, forgetting all about her hiding place. The one she spoke to, becoming stiff at the realisation that her heart had been poured out to the one person that could break it, because it is the person she had given it to. “I worry because….. I love you too.” Her heart stoped. She did not believe it. This was the best moment of her life. “And if you still want me, I would love to – because I want you – umm, I guess what I’m trying too say is~” “YES!” She shouted. Getting up off the chair, facing Maki and looking her in the eyes. “of course I want to! Weren’t you listening? I love you Maki! I’ve always loved you” She blushed. “Then….. How about we go to my place and talk?” She asked “ Ok………. But could you say it again? Please?”
“How about we-“
“No not that, the part where you said you love me, can you say it for me? Please? Coming from you it’s heaven” With that Maki smiled and gave her a sweeet short kiss on the lips to prove her point. And then while holding her tightly their foreheads touching, she said
“I love you, Tanaka Reina”
The end
Writers notes : Reina's colour is a little lighter in the start but gets daarker towards the end of the story, sory, I lost what colour I was using and couldn't find it again and was too lazy to ...... I dunno anywayz Sory for the crap that's over here ^ hope you dont go blind reading this angsty fluff again, I apologise, I can't keep away from the stuff. BUT keep voting and posting regardless, I want real feedback now! I dont want ppl to forget coz then I will have no incentive to keep writing and you dont want that do you? :(
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Btw (and I'm writing this here coz I really dont wanna forget and I always check here) I have GOT to watch that movie "Twilight" when it comes out. I also wanna read the book, if I can find it anywhere.........
OMG, I totally love you now! I can not wait for this movie to come out coz I've been wanting it for years... Twilight is an absolutely awesome book and the 4th book in the series comes out in August I think :D :muffin: It shouldn't be too hard to find, its a bestseller so I see it in every bookshop I go to.
Now for the last fic... I squealed and bounced around a bit when I saw Maki's name (coz I already saw it was Reina) and that's gotta be the cutest and sweetest fic of those two that I've read but I always find this pairing so touching, one of my fave pairs and that's for sure one of the best fics I've read of them and probably the best one shot! :wub: :heart:
Oh and the two different colours, I didn't think I would like it much at first but it worked out really good, keep that up ;)
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MakixReina !!! :luvluv1: It was so sweet and it's such a cute pair :wub: At first I thought that it will be MakixNacchi but its even better with Reina :ding: I really like those two :hee:
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Oooh!!! I love it!! Great fic!!
She asked “ Ok………. But could you say it again? Please?”
“How about we-“
“No not that, the part where you said you love me, can you say it for me? Please? Coming from you it’s heaven” With that Maki smiled and gave her a sweeet short kiss on the lips to prove her point. And then while holding her tightly their foreheads touching, she said
“I love you, Tanaka Reina”
SO Sweeeeet!!! The MakixReina pairing is awesome! :heart: :heart: :heart:
Keep it up sweeety-san~ :otomerika:
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Question: what kind of fic should I do next?
oneshot 9 (64.3%)
songfic 2 (14.3%)
story (like a fairytale eg the one I just posted) 1 (7.1%)
chocolate! err I mean other and if you pick this please elaborate with a comment. 0 (0%)
Nothing 2 (14.3%)
hmm, I wonder who voted nothing..... :'(
Is it my competition or someonw who truly hates me *cough* zay05ohayou *cough*?
Anyway, that comes to let's see, 9 oneshots, 2 songfics, 1 story, and three months vaccation! XD
Goodnight my grandma is yelling at me..... I was gonna start on a story but noooooo she just has to be lil (big) miss (miz) annoying (loud) and ruin everything! Anyway I will quickly start this story I've been mulling over in my head but I can't post anything yet..... Sory my two loyal fans.... or are there three? I guess we'll never know. unless you comment.
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ah.. im very offended.. :angry:
FYI i voted for oneshot.. :roll:
do you really think i'd ask u to write nothing.. and how long has it been since u checked on ur thread?? :banghead:
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...I don't know why I voted for story. xD Can I change my vote for oneshot? XD
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zay05ohayou:sorry for the false accusations, :sweatdrop: I thought you voted that, cause at the time, we were fighting :doh: Really sorry.
niigaki~risa: I don't know how you can change the answer, but I think if you asked one of the moderators nicely he/she might be able to help you (wonders what you'll vote next)
all: I'm gonna do something I haven't tried before :yep: , no not a songfic :oops: , but a story about a lil girl called 'K'. 'K' is a spy at a prestigious school, sent undercover as asudent a~la sukeban deka. I'm coming up wiht this as I write it. Lessse, she is gonna be going to a school for models and other talent in a secluded part of japan, between a mountain and a lake. She is going to be going to this exclusive boarding school to learn manners as her parents who are sick of her being a spy send her there to get educated in how to be a lady. There she will try to accomplish her mission which is to find where the evil principal is hiding a stolen artefact, an original Monet. She is going to enlist the help of the MM girls all of which are almost strangers to each other as they are mostly in different cliques, and they are all going to take on the teachers, while leading their own sordid affairs (don't know what sordid means, but I think it wounded good in there :P ) All the while a fight is going on between her parents and her boss over who gets control of this powerfull weapon, 'K'.
Im gonna start on chapter one at school tomorow, I hope I can have it up soon. I'm gonna post it in a different thread as it is going to be a BIG story, but maybe not too big. Oh and btw, my stories are always adited and re edited so what one person may read in my skool books may not be what goes up here :D . Wish me luck :shakeit: :otomerika: :muffin: :otomerika: :shakeit:
P.S. Thank you all for your support and compliments etc. (I would have written a longer PS but my mum is being a ***** :angry: ) Hope you guys keep up the niceness :oops: And thanks again, hope I keep getting your support, vote sweeety (lol) and glad you liked my stuff so far, and hope you like the next things I do . :)
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back from my school exam/HHW hiatus!!!!! With theTanaKamei that someone requested....Forgot who.... well whoever you are say it in a post and I will verify it... anyway, you wanted sweet and romantic right? Well I'll try and add a bit of angst.....
"Meet me in the park at noon...."
I don't know why I bothered...What was I expecting? Did I think you'd just run into my arms and kiss me in public for everyone to see? No, I didn't have such high expectations...but I did expect you to come. I thought maybe there was traffic or you just spaced like you always do. I thought maybe you got sidetracked.. I even humoured myself into thinking those aliens you communicate with came and took you for a ride on their spaceship for a while, and any moment now, you'll beam down from the sky or something.
"But you didn't"
I waited and I waited. I waited till day turned into night and night almost turned into day again. I stood there through sun, shade and rain but you never came. I don't know what hurts the most; getting rejected by your best friend on Valentines day, standing in a park with a cheesy grin on your face like an idiot for 16 hours, regardless of the weather, or walking home in the rain after the last train has gone after all the above.
"What does it matter?"
What's the point in crying like a little girl and causing a scene in a deserted street in the middle of the morning?
Why should I shed even a tear for someone that doesn't love me?
Because I love you. Im in love with you you geeky, nerdy, weird, freaky, tree trunk thighed, chicken, turtle! I'm so in love with you I can't stop thinking about you. I''m in love with you and I was going to tell you. I was gonna but you never showed up. You didn't want to hear it.
I got ready and went to the park. I waited there in my best clothes, makeup, wearing your favourite perfume and ready to tell you my feelings. And as if I didn't stand out enough with my material appearance, I held a single lilly in my hand and a big goofy grin on my face. I waited at the park closest to your house. I waited there for sixteen fuckin hours but you never showed. You never called. And you never messaged me otherwise. Nothing. I got nothing from you.
I stop for a second and realised it stoped raining. It's chilly but at least it's not damp anymore. I cough a little and continue my slow journey home. A few minutes pass and I find myself in front of a park three blocks away from my house. I am so tired I don't think twice before plopping down on a swing. I squeak as I instantly rise up, the cold from the seat, mixed with the rain on it making me freeze my tushie. I sit back down gentler and more prepared for it than before and this time I am not shocked as the cold surface comes into contact with my butt. I swing passivelly as I rest my exhausted legs which really cannot walk much further when out of the corner of my eye I see a bum on a seat.
I can't tell much about this bum because he or she is facing the other way, but I can tell that they have also been through the rain tonight. So they must've been here long as well. I think it's a she by the length of the long hair sticking to her back. She looks serene and pretty... actually she doesn't look like a bum at all...I mean, a bum traditionally wears rags, but this girl...she's wearing expensive clothes...the kind that cost tens of thousands of yen. If I didn't know any better, I'd say she was out on the town or on a date or something. But instead she is sleeping on a park bench. I bet she had a rough day too.
As her jet black hair swayed majestically in the wind, Reina gathered her courage and walked towards the stranger. She was shocked to find that this stranger wasn't a stranger at all, but instead it was Eri. As if on cue Eri sleepily moaned Reina's name as a few tears slid down her cheeks, joining the tears she had previously cried.
Reina didn't know what to think anymore as tears flowed freely down her face. Here was the girl she loved, sleeping on a park, with a purple teddy bear shaped like a turtle. She cried and cried, her warm tears warming up her beloved as they fell on her. With newfound strength she piked her up bridal style and started back to her apartment again. She was able to control her crying more and stop it as she finally reached her doorstep. She opened the downstairs door and walked silently into the elevator. She stared at Eri's face as she warmed her up, rubbing her body with her hands, hoping the friction could keep her baby from getting cold. She walked, nearly ran to her door and unlocked it with one hand, kicking it open and walking in quickly.
She immediately turned on her air conditioner in as hot as it possibly could get and helped Eri out of her clothes. When she didn't wake up she became very worried and immediately proceeded to rub her down with a wet towel making sure she didn't hurt her, and making sure she warmed her up doing so. She covered her hair with a towel and she put her in her bed, tucking her in safe and warm, away from the bedside tables that could hurt her if she rolled onto them and directly underneath the warm blowing air conditioner. She kissed her forehead before noting that her lips had changed to a purple-ish colour from the cold.
Yet they were still beautifull and tempting to her. After lots of careful thought she decided to kiss those gorgeous lips and try to keep them warm. She slowly crept over to her and gingerly climbed on top of her, straddling her hips. She bent down and then she planted a soft soft lingering kiss on those sore lips. She pulled away to find a stunned turtle staring back at her.
She sat up and gaped at the turtle about to apologise, when she felt a tug on her back. She was pushing her (or rather pulling her) forward and back down onto her. She of course had to oblige and their lips ended up meeting for the second time tonight. She pulled back to see a smiling girl in front of her. Eri's face was graced by a heavenly content smile, looking like she is in paradise.
R: I-I-I Weell you see I-I umm...
E: It's ok. I understand now. I understand everything.
R: Well then could you maybe tell me?
E: (with a wider smile she said) You wanted to tell me you like me so you told me to meet you at some park. But I think I misunderstood you. You didn't specify which park so I thought it would be the one closest to your house and came there. But you must've meant another one, because you never came...unless
And at this a shadow crossed her face
R: N-No! I definitelly came! I came to the park closest to your place. That's why I didn't see you anywhere! I thought you didn't want to see me. I thought you might have realised what I wanted to tell you so you never showed up because you didn't like me the way that I like you. But I waited for you! I waited all day and all night..
And at this she started crying a little.
E: Reina I love you! That is why I waited all day and all night as well. It's why I came! I came with a gift to ask you to be my girlfriend. I wanted you to have this turtle bear. err turtle teddy...I have no idea what to call it... XD
R: Thank you. I brought you a lilly. But the weather kind of wilted it...sorry...it's ruined. DAMMIT! Today was gonna be the day! The day I told you! The day that we admitted our feelings and got together! It was supposed to be special a-and perfect and I fucked it up!
And she started crying harder against Eris chest. Eri picked her face up by her chin, looked her in the eyes and said
E: It IS special! It IS perfect! Because I get to be with you! And you were great! You took great care of me. You FOUND me in a park in the middle of the night. There was a hundreed other places you could've gone to but somehow by some unidentified force of nature you walked to the same park I did and you found me. So don't tell me today wasn't special. Not when fate worked so favourably for us.
And with that she bent down and gave her girlfiend a kiss on the lips, more passionate than the ones before yet not at all less gentle. She kissed her and hugged her tight untill Reina pulled away from her and got up off the bed.
E: What's wrong?
R: I'm wet!
E: Me too!
R: From the rain
E: Oh :oops:
R: I'll be right back
Reina quickly kissed Eri, loving their new habit and then retreated to the bathroom to run a quick brush through her hair, a blowdryer and towelling herself dry before getting into dry clothes. That is when she realised that Eri had been naked this whole time. As the blood rushed to her head and she got a nosebleed, nearly passing out as well Eri who had been getting antsy walked into the toilet, not realising she was nude to find Reina turn white and drop to the floor.
:O
E: AAAAAAAAA WHAT THE HECK?
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E: Why am I nekid?
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Reina woked up in her bed two hours later, wrapped around Eri. She could feel her flesh against her own, even in parts covered by her clothes. It felt so nice, soft and warm and she loved the feeling. It was only when she snuggled closer that she realised she was also naked.....
Reina snuggled even closer and went back to sleep, after kissing Eri again of course.
Tell me what you thought. I liked the bit of comedy in the end that sort of lightened the mood. I think it was a nice touch. You guys tell me what you thought. Mwah! I love you all! Except that one person.......and that other person.... XD
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:lol: The nosebleed part was indeed funny but what I like most is the part whereby they waited at different parks and thought, 'she stood me up' or something. It's kinda a fantasy romance but I really enjoy it (ok, I'm a romance freak :D )
Good job, sweeety, I see the last part.................is......................getting..............................dirty :wub:
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WOW 16 hrs is a looong time to wait for somebody especially in the rain... poor things
but I'm glad Reina found her and proceeded to remove all her clothes and mount her took SPECIAL :twisted: care of her before you know warming her with her ... lips :shocked:
it was cute :wub:... it was hawt :shakeit:... and it was funny :rofl:... GOOD JOB sweety :onioncheer:
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The nosebleed part was indeed funny
YEY! I succeeded!
but what I like most is the part whereby they waited at different parks and thought, 'she stood me up' or something.
Yey! You liked that too! Wooho, I'm on a roll! I wont decompose it much but that was pretty much the whole story. The rest I considered filler. Except for the kiss of course. I was just gonna write a story about being at the wrong place at the wrong time but I expanded it to have a happy ending. Reina was originally not supposed to see Eri in the park and Eri was going to spend the entire night there. Not only that but it was also going to snow.
Poor Eri... I was gonna have her wake up with pneumonia. But I thought it was too cruel and heartless so Reina found her... thought now that I think about it I think I should have made it snow regardless.. but had it snowed Reina would have rushed to her building. And Eri would've nearly died. Then they would've spent about a month avoiding eachother both hurt and angry untill they snapped and had a huge fight and it got out that each was waiting at diferent parks. Then I was gonna have them reconcile or something.. BUT two reasons I didn't wanna do that are that I wanted to finish yesterday and I wanted to make it all those other things that a really sad angsty fic isn't.
It's kinda a fantasy romance but I really enjoy it (ok, I'm a romance freak )
aren't we all? lol, I don't think it's really fantasy but ok.
Good job, sweeety
Thank you! It's about time I got back to my writing anyway. Now that the exams finally finished and I have no outstanding work that I know off.....ah, who am I kidding? I still have a shitload of work.
WOW 16 hrs is a looong time to wait for somebody especially in the rain... poor things
I know! How pathetic! I mean, how sweet and romantic that neither wavered for sixteen hours in the hope of having their love requited. But we all know had it been Miki she'd have stayed there all month. Seriously. lol, ok maybe not, but she would have done something. Notice how Reina didn't call her either? Well, she thought she wouldn't reply and she was too scared of what she might say had she replied so she was too scared to call Eri, in case she might snap or in case she says something like "I know why you wanna talk and I dont like you so Im not coming" or something.
but I'm glad Reina found her and proceeded to remove all her clothes and mount her
:oops: :twisted: :pimp: yeah, Reina did it for her sake :pimp: she just realised like 5 minutes later she forgot to dress her afterewards :shocked:
Lol, I couldn't remember if I said anything about Reina dressing Eri in some of her own dry clothes. I thought I didn't. So I just went along with it, mainly cause I was too lasy to go back and change it. So I made a joke about it with the nosebleed. Besides she didn't do it in a pervy drooling way, she was so scared and worried about Eri that she didn't really realise what she was doing. She just did it instinctively because she knew if Eri stayed in the wet clothes she could get really sick, she knew the best thing to do was dry her off so she toook her clothes off and dryed her off and then immediately put her in bed to warm up. Then she noticed her lips were purple from the cold.
And what better way to warm them then with hers?
but I'm glad Reina found her and took SPECIAL care of her before you know warming her with her ... lips
yeah, me too! Aren't we all?
it was cute ... it was hawt ... and it was funny ... GOOD JOB sweety
thank you! I do it for you guys! I personally love the ending. It's supposed to be funny lol, I didn't think you guys would think of it in a perverted way (tito XD) It was just supposed to be a cuddle ok? They haven't done IT yet, ok? What Eri did was return the favour by stripping Reina and putting her in the bed, she then joined her under the covers, snuggled up to her and dozed off. That's it, nothing pervy... ok she may have groped a lil bit but tha's all dudes and dudettes! Now write me more comments!!!! please :oops:
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Weeeee!!!
my request.. :twisted:
YAY~
i love this!!! :otomerika:
just the way i want it..LOLx.
thanks sweety~
i love yoU~!!! :cow:
i love the turtle teddy XD
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:lol: i like it!! it now one of my faves!
poor things waiting for so long! but Reina finding her and careing for her was just *sigh* :wub:
last part was funny.
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That was a cute story! I'm such a perv, but I love their nakedness! 8)
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Loved it!
Tanakame are always so sweet and romantic, and Reina usually is the way her takes care of her Eririn, which is how I like it :)
I don't know if i could wait 16 hours... I'd probably give up a lot earlier and just assume they didn't like me that way... or more likely, if I hadn't told them why I wanted to speak to them and they never showed, after maybe the 10 hours in the rain, I'd go tracking them down and tell them off for not even calling, instead leaving me there like that in the rain :lol:
My fave part was the turtle teddy tough... Such an Eri thing to do :P
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yay i arrive XD
emm about makixReina :bingo:
good story, i like a lot that couple :shy1:
but...
OMG TANAKAMEI!!!!!!!!! you kill me :luvluv1:
it was so sweet (no sweeety) that made me feel rabu rabu :wriggly: and it's pervert too :pimp:
keep writing!
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E: What's wrong?
R: I'm wet!
E: Me too!
R: From the rain
E: Oh :oops:
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
:wahaha:
:mon fyeah:
....tooo funny!!!!
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thanks you guys! I'm glad you liked! SOme even said you loved. Here's a bit of angst a bday pressie for someone that is absurdly early. I hope you guys like it. I was up doing it till 2 cause the idea struck me and as far as I know, no one really did this. I don't know if it's good, I think I stuffed up somethings... I actually wrote it on word first so I dunno if it'll come out right here... but anyway, here it is!
working title
Out of the blue (or) close yet far
“I know it was my decision but it still hurts. Not to have you near me or be able to make you smile is eating away at my soul. The pain is ubearable. I told you not to be so touchy feely with me in front of the cameras but I didn’t think you’d stop being with me altogether. “ she reasoned with her
“What do you want me to do? It was your idea to stop being so close in front of them”
She almost yelled. She hated this too. She wanted to touch her all the time and that restriction was just killing her.
“STOP PUSHING ME AWAY! Just stop pushing me away! Please, I’m begging you , stop pushing me away” What started out as a yell, finished as a tiny whisper. She couldn’t be mad, she knew it was her fault. Her eyes watering with tears she tried to stop them afrom falling. She knew she had to be strong if she was going to tell her.
“…….you’re right and I’m sory, I have been pushing you away. But you made me do it! You told me to! But that’s only cause you’re scared of what they’ll think about us. It’s not me Makoto, it’s you! You pushed me away! You pushed me away cause you’re ashamed of me…..your dirty little secret!” It was a low blow and she knew it, but something told her this wasn’t gonna matter much tonight. What started out as damage control ended up an attack.
“Well if I had known you wouldn’t touch-no, look at me the same way again, I would have let you do whatever you wanted in front of them…hug me, kiss me, fuck me, whatever you want Yossie! You know you were never my dirty little secret! I wanted to tell the world but you were the one who suggested we get some advice from the elders!”
“Oh don’t start with me, you wanted to ask them just as much as I did! Neither of us knew anything on the subject and Im glad we asked! And you know perfectly well they had nothing solid on us! You know they could never prove it! Instead you ran away from me like a coward!” She was starting to get annoyed. There was no way she was gonna lose this time. She just had to win, she was dying to get her touching permit back.
“I did it for both of us! Or do you really hate your fame, family and money so much? You know what they’d do to us if they found out! You know what happened to Maki and Sayaka! You know about all those stories! Kaori, Nachi, Mari all of them! No other band in the world has so many lineup changes. There is a reason they all leave! If they hadn’t fallen in love, do you really think they would have left? Tsunku loves his sales too much to have let them go without a fight!”
“Oh come on Mako, do you really think it happened that way? Grow up! Life isn’t like that! It’s not one big conspiracy theory! They left cause it was their time to go!”
“They left because they were found out! Just like Maki…just like me.”
She admitted, looking down on the ground as the tears in her eyes that threatened to fall, slowly emerged one by one
“What are you saying?” Stunned she replied
“It’s too late Yoshi, they found out” She whispered as the first tear landed on the carpet
“Wha….what do you mean?” She asked shocked
“It’s over… we can no longer be together…no matter how well we hide it now… that’s why I tried…that’s why I tried to stop the rumours, that’s why I asked you to stop acting that way…but they found out….somehow they found out and…..and….and”
“They’re sending you away…aren’t they?”
“I’m sory baby, there was nothing I could do. I told them I started it, I took the fall, don’t worry about me, I’ll be fine….. I know being here means a lot and I could never want it as much as you so I bargained with them and I got them to let you stay in Morning Musume-“
“But at what cost?” She asked in a soft voice, filled with sadness
“Yossie-“ She pleaded
“AT WHAT COST MAKOTO?” She yelled angrily. She wasn’t going to be kept in the dark anymore! She wanted answers to everything!
Makoto turned away, hiding the tears that streamed down her cheeks and said
“I have to go away.. I leave in a few months. They’re sending me away to study..”
Yoshi walked up to Makoto and hugged her from behind. She wrapped her arms around the girls waist protectively and possessively.
“Where are they sending you?”
“Far…” she cried
“Where?”
“Overseas…”
“WHERE?” she yelled exasperatedly, giving Makoto a tiny squeeze while trying to control her own tears.
“New Zealand…it’s this small island East of Oceania….It’s pretty crappy and not very famous or popular but at least I wont be hassled by stalkers, wotas or fans”
“….Oceania………….For how long?” she said as she felt a lonely tear slip away and slide down her cheek
“I don’t know…….I think about four years…that is about as long as a college course lasts there I presume….” She said, barely breathing as her crying had made her pant and she could barely breath as she cried the last of her words out.
“Can’t you stay with me?”
She said, with tears in her eyes. Whoever said Hitomi never cried was wrong. She may not cry in front of other people but lord knows she cries. There is however one person, and when she does cry in front of this person she doesn’t feel stupid, guilty or weak, but relieved and lighter. She feels like a weight has been lifted off her shoulders, and she is not afraid to show how she feels.
But not this time. This time she didn’t feel like things could get better. She didn’t feel like the world would be an ok place. She felt like the walls were closing in on her. Like the sky was falling. Like her soul was leaving her body.
This person however was about to leave her life. So what was she supposed to do? She did the only thing she could do at that moment. She collapsed.
Makoto held her up and dragged her to the couch. There she lay her sobbing, sleeping girlfriend to rest while she covered her with a blanket. Yoshi woke up to the sound of birds pecking a window.. She looked around and saw Makoto, asleep on her, sitting on the floor but sprawled out over her chest. She could’ve lay on her. Yoshi wouldn’t have minded but she didn’t want to constrict her passageways as she was crying.
She just didn’t want to cause her any more pain. Like Yoshi Makoto was going through a lot, if not more. Not only was she losing her one true love, but she was also losing her friends and family and moving to a new country, all by herself. There was no way to be with her and she couldn’t be happy with anyone else. And to top it all off she was giving up her career, which contrary to what she had said to make her girlfriend feel better, she absolutely adored.
She loved being on that stage with the wind rushing through her hair and thousands of people cheering for her and singing along with her. She loved singing dancing travelling meeting famous people and having such close friends. But she loved Yoshi the most. That is why she let her have it all. She let her have the job, the friends, the fans and her family and she knew that none of it could amount to what she owed for taking her heart but she had to leave her with something.
She truly believed it was all her fault things turned out that way and she wouldn’t forgive herself. At least not until Yoshi did first.
Yoshi woke up and sat up, trying not to wake Makoto up. But she failed miserably and Makoto sirred awake.
“Yoshi, I’m sory for all the lies… I’m sory for having to go and I wish I didn’t have to but I do…..but while we still have time, can we please get back to the way we were before?”
“No.” She said sternly. Makoto started crying again. She didn’t intend to have this effect on the poor girl. She didn’t want to make her cry. What she did was to make her realise that things could never be the same again. She picked up Makoto’s face from her chin. She lifted it to meet hers and spoke in a soft voice.
“Because before, I didn’t recognise how precious you were to me. I want to make every moment with you last… and….”she blushed “I want to make sweet love to you.”
TO BE CONTINUED IN A PERV! MWAHAHAHA!
Happy Birthday
Very very very very very early birthday present!~ Dedicated to the one and only Ogawa Makoto!~ Who rocks the socks off of our favourite tomboy Yoshizawa Hitomi…she’s in here somewhere too I think XD H.B. mwah!
R & R Read and review please you guys. I wanna know what you think. I don't think anyone has ever written a fic about Makoto's graduation, at least not one in this angle and with YoMako. I hope you guys like it.
In this fic I made them really open and they didn't procrastinate, and spoke openly about their feelings. I don't think I've ever really done that before, Yoshi is usually the type to bottle things but in this one I made her human I guess and she wasn't afraid to say her feelings.
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Damn, I just missed my chance to wedge! But no matter, I get to be the first to comment! :muffin:
Okay, I'm not much of a YoMako fan, but this is a great read nonetheless *thumbs up* You can really feel the strong emotions in this, like when Yossi and Mako exchange verbal blows and hurting comments but you know that its because they're afraid to lose each other that they do that. I got all teary eyed reading it :cry: shows how great this is! :D
Anyways, I'LL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO THE PERV NOW :drool: hahahaha!
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Oh, and on another note, THE WORLD NEEDS MORE TAKAGAKI!!! (comeon, i know you like them too :lol:)
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Hot story but DAMN YOU!!!! I have no perv access! Being jailbait sucks.... :angry:
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WOW YOU TOTALLY GOT IT!~
I thought I might've been too subtle with the masking of the emotions but you nailed it. Yeah, they were acting tough but inside they were just scared. Yoshi thought makoto was doing it because she didn't want her and was slowly trying to dump her. Makoto thought Yoshi was sick of her shit and was going to leave her and resume her life in Japan without her and get over her.
Makoto also thought that by keeping that thing a secret from her, although protecting her she was gonna lose her because of it. She didn't want to but she thought there was no other choice. She fought for them, she threatened them but she had no power. She couldn't fight it. In the end she cut a deal with them. She sacrificed her career (they were gonna graduate them both and have them working all the time to keep them busy and away from each other thus working them to death) she told them she would graduate but in exchange she wanted them to keep Yoshi as long as sh wanted to stay in there and then give her all the choices possible when she graduated.
She told them to keep her busy but not so much that she doesn't have a minute to herself. She wanted her to be busy enought to not think about it all the time. She didn't want her to have a lot of time doing nothing but wallowing in her sorow so she told them to keep her schedule pretty tight. She made them give her long vacations though so if she wished she could visit. Then she she made sure they didn't overwork her either.
And finally she promised to do whatever they wanted. She agreed to stay away and tehy told her she'd be moving to New Zealand to 'pursue her studies' but in about four years, if Yoshi was performing well she could return to Japan...in this fic they are gonna make her stay untill Yoshi graduates in 2008. (getting off on good behaviour lol) they are gonna allow her to return early because of her brothers' death.
Maybe I'll make this into a biiig fic!
lol you beat me strawberry! lol, talk to me on msn!add me!
Im glad you liked it btw!
Meanwhile dw, Yoshi's gonna wait those years for her. But she will be very lonely. It's kinda like one of those things 'absence makes the heart want, abstinence makes the heart horny' i think.. That's what I read.....somewhere.
hope more people read and review. Ok, if 5 people want me to make this into a sort of epic (really big story) then I will. I'll start a new thread for it and everything. Deal? ok, 5 people and you get.....5 more chapters... 10 people=10 more chapters... a chapter per request ....
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You dirty fellow sweeety...but I look forward to the next chap :wahaha: I will be one of the 5 to request for this to be a long, mushy H!P fic. There is so much more to develop! :wub: It's just so sad when they quarreled. I mean if you can imagine, Yossie and Mako were shouting at each other. That image just tears my heart apart. I hope someone will enter into the story later and set up a love triangle especially when Mako is gone. It's Yossie and there are just so many girls in H!P..it's visually impossible for her to stay loyal and the story will turn angsty..
Good job! Keep it up :D
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I read this in a break at uni today but couldn't comment then... I don't like YoMako but I do like this fic and I was going to request a longer fic of it but looks like you already took the initiative :P
However, I do recall having a conversation about you having too many fics you were working on and now you just gave yourself another :lol:
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Noooo!!! I can't read the next part... :OMG:
Accually I like this idea of doing a Mako grad with yomako being the cause! Yomako was my first fav. pairing so I hope you do write more of it!!!
'absence makes the heart want, abstinence makes the heart horny'
it does indeed my friend, it does indeed... :mon misch:
in this fic they are gonna make her stay untill Yoshi graduates in 2008. (getting off on good behaviour lol) they are gonna allow her to return early because of her brothers' death.
sounds good...please write it!!! I'm not afraid to beg! puhleeeese~ :pleeease:
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ZOMG! I MUST'VE SEEN THE FUTURE! SHE WAS GONNA STAY TILL 2008 AND SHE JUST GOT BACK, IN 2008!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, I have an idea but I'm not sure what I'll do with it, but this story is continued under the name "stay" so if you see one called "Stay" that's where this'll be!
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aww YoMako :inlove:
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New story! Check it out ya'll! It's so original it's got "New" stamped all overe its ass!
The city of Tokyo is UNDER ATTACK!!!!!!!!! The culprit? An evil monkey named Tsunku. He has this evil plan to make all the citizens into his own army of supermonkey warriors and use them to take over the world~!
Only one thing can stop him now! The Gomapuff girls! Blossom-Maki, Bubbles-Aya and Buuttercup-Miki are the city’s last hope for survival! If they don’t succeed the whole world will be turned into Tsunku worshipping monkeys! And the banana stocks will go up by millions!
[ In the Gomapuff house ]
“Hey butter-Miki, could you please snuggle a little closer? I’m a scared of thtorms!”
“aww ok bubble-Aya, I’ll hold you real tight because I wub you so much”
“Will you two get a room? I have to thtudy for our firtht kindergarden exzam! And you know how hard they are! I mean, come on, how am I supposed to be able to remember so many stuff? Pink, blue, orange… so many colours!”
*beep beep beep*
“Oh no! It’s the emergency phone! The mayor must have a mission for us!”
The girls fly to the phone swiftly and Blossom-Maki picks it up.
“Mayor, what’s wrong?”
“Tsunku, the evil super monkey is using his super-monkey-lazer to turn all the citizens of Tokyo into super monkeys like him! Oh girls, please help me!”
“We’re on our way mayor-Yaguchi!” said blossom as she hung up the phone, on her way out, leading the girls to the evil monkeys lair.
“It’s quiet… too quiet…” Blossom-Maki said as she walked through the fron door of the evil lair. Usually at a time like this, Tsunku pops in and tries to hurt them but this time… nothing.
“Girls, get ready for trouble.. girls?”
She turned around to find a really scared Bubbles-Aya clinging onto Buttercup-Miki like a baby koala.
“Bubbles! You’re a big girl! Get off her, you both need complete mobility!”
“But I’m thcared!” She cried, with tears in her eyes.
“Then maybe you shouldn’t have come here at all!”
“What? Noooooo! I’ll be good! I’ll be good! You’ll see!” She rushed, getting off of Miki who formed a tiny frown at the loss of contact.
“Aw come on! What does it matter if she holds onto me while we walk through this deserted place?”
“It matters to – wait what did you just say?”
“What does it-“
“no, the other part”
‘‘While we walk through this deserted place?”
“…………oh my god!!!!!!!!! It’s a trap! He isn’t here at all! He set us up! He’s in the cave by the sea, not here!!!!!!! This was a set up so he could win time to-“
Before blossom-Maki could finish her sentence a Green beam shot out onto the sky, hitting the rain clouds and causing a reaction making a green gas concentrating above the city of Tokyo and slowly making it’s way down. Across the city, Tsunku’s evil laugh could be heard, emanating and echoing out of the caves at the foot of the cliff that lead out onto the sea.
The three girls rushed through the air of the city, trying not to breath in the toxic lazer beam that would turn them into monkeys as they hurried across the city.
“It’s no use Blossom-Maki, we’ll never get there in time before the lazer’s effects ……. Affect us…..”
“hmm……. They couldn’t affect us if we weren’t breathing.” She said looking at the hospital they were about to pass.
The three girls walked into the cave unscathed and marched right up to Tsunku.
“THE GOMAPUFF GIRLS! BUT HOW?”
“We managed to escape the effects of the gas by wearing the masks that doctors wear at the hothpital! That’s right! We wore that mathk and then it filtered the air and we breathed in normal air and didn’t become monkeys! And now we’re here to kick your butt mr!”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” He screamed as the girls punched and kicked him till he was out cold. Then they turned to the lazer and reversed its effects, before smashing it into a million little pieces. Then the girls lifted up Tsunku kunku and threw him into an unoccupied jail cell, then flew off into the dawn.
And once again the day was saved, thanks to the Gomapuff girls!
A/N: the 'th' is usually a 's' because the girls being young have a lisp. I know I've been gone a lot but yeah..... back now for now.
Also Aya and Miki really love each other, in a gay way but are too young to recognise it. DW people they are not related. Not even by blood. In fact they weren't even born so yeah take that incest! Anyway, love you guys and missed you and I hope you guys read and love this story :)
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Sweeety...That was...EPIC.AND.AWESOME XD
The city of Tokyo is UNDER ATTACK!!!!!!!!! The culprit? An evil monkey named Tsunku. He has this evil plan to make all the citizens into his own army of supermonkey warriors and use them to take over the world~!
:rofl: EBIL MONKEY TSUNKU!
Hey butter-Miki, could you please snuggle a little closer? I’m a scared of thtorms!”
“aww ok bubble-Aya, I’ll hold you real tight because I wub you so much”
“Will you two get a room...”
lol I love that part. xD
“We’re on our way mayor-Yaguchi!”
Yay Mayor Yaguchi! <3
Most hilarious oneshot I've ever heard. :cow:
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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
:lol: as I was reading I thought you're drunk or the keypad's broken or something XD
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yey! I'm glad you guys liked it. I was hoping it would have that effect. And no, I haven't drunk a drop of alcoholic beverage in... two days... but the only thing I drunk so far today was juice... lots of juice.....
Anyway, so glad people liked it and don't think I'm an idiot :D
Feels like a weight has been lifted off my shoulders!
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Anyway, so glad people liked it and don't think I'm an idiot
Feels like a weight has been lifted off my shoulders!
yeah.?. when someone says you're an idiot without you doing any harm against anyone, just simply think 'that someone is the idiot not me' and move on. as long as you're not doing anything bad against anyone just :) :pimp: :muffin: :otomerika: :heart: yeah? :) or take a break and have a kitkat :grin:
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kit kat huh?
Kit Kat
Yoshi dashes past the opposition, lining up for her target. She slows down to make a turn to avoid an obstacle. She speeds up in the clear way that her teammates have provided for her. She quickly snakes around Miki, her opponent and makes a final mad dash for the prize. However Miki isn’t finished yet. She sticks her leg out and trips a stunned Yoshizawa over, taking the lead and finishing first, stealing the prize.
“One kitkat please” She says to the lady in the counter, reaching into her pants and pulling out her wallet.
“Damn it. You sneaky-“
“Language Yoshi, don’t be a sore loser.”
“ I wouldn’t be a sore anything if you hadn’t cheated”
“There, there, I’ll make the pain go away in a minute, but for now…” She trailed off, looking at the candy bar in her hand.
“You want some too? Is that it? Awww that’s soo sweet, but you know the drill.”
“Yeah yeah. Stupid management and your stupid rules. Anyway, how’d you know I was reserving the last kitkat?”
“I read your messages on your phone”
“What? You have no right to-“
“Hey, you know I do, management told me to make sure your fat ass slims down to fit in a stinkin dress in time for the next concert!”
“……… meanie”
“Don’t be a grouch! Come on let’s go back to your room and practice”
“yeah yeah”
The two girls made their way back to Yoshi’s room under the pretense of practicing. Yoshi lead the way and Miki followed her in, turning swiftly and locking the door shut behind her, hiding the key in her bra.
“What? Huh? What?”
“I also saw the message you sent Rika”
“Oh shit! I swear I didn’t think you would! I didn’t want things between us to get weird so I never told you I liked you but please don’t tell anyone, this could ruin both our careers if people caught wind that I liked you, cause they might think we secretly date and I don’t want you to be in trouble and –“
“shhhh” she sighed, moving closer and placing a finger on her lips.
“but-“
“hush now m’ dear… I know a better way for you to lose weight…” She trailed off as she had come so close she was speaking directly to her ear. She let her breath tickle her ear as she kissed her earlobe lightly, letting her warm sensual breath linger on her ear and make her hot.
“and you could eat the kit kat too…” She said, wrapping her arms around her at the neck, pulling her body closer to hers and nearly grinding against her, leaving a hairs’ width of space between the two. She moved her face directly in front of Yoshi’s and looked into the heavy lidded eyes of the one she loved. She moved her face really close to hers and scraped her lips against her cheeks as she passed by them on the way to her other ear. Just like the other, she landed a soft kiss on her earlobe before whispering.
“you could have your cake……… and eat it too……….”
She then glided her face directly in front of Yoshis and looked her straight in the eye. She put on a fake innocent face before uttering.
“so………. You want the kit kat?”
THE END
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:grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: damn :grin:
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Gomapuff house was AWESOME!! I used to watch powerpuff girls alot so it was insane seeing the girls dressed in the uniforms and flying around and I TOTALLY saw tsunku all green and monkey looking :lol:
“so………. You want the kit kat?”
I don't think she wants it anymore XD
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wojoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *dies* :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove:
*revive* i love you sweeety!!! :mon loveflower: :mon lovelaff:
kit kat... now i love it XD
so... that's why yossy lost weight :mon dunno:... i knew it! :mon dance:
nice one!! (i'll update today... just 'cause you did a yomiki) ;)
i want more yomiki~~ :wub:
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“so………. You want the kit kat?”
I don't think she wants it anymore XD
She could just "work it off" later.
:wahaha:
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“so………. You want the kit kat?”
I don't think she wants it anymore XD
She could just "work it off" later.
:wahaha:
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeegsactly! That speech was gonna just amount to one thing... Chocolate sharing <3 chocolate sharing rabu rabu! <3 In other words, she was gonna give her the chocolate in exchange for Shmex! XD She was gonna make her work it off.. after all, she was in charge of her figure... and she likes the more 'hands on' approach. :3
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OMG XD The Powerpuff girl one was great! It brings back sooo many memories of watching that show when I was young :heart:
Great job on writing the girl's with a lisp, that must have been really hard to concentrate on doing that the whole way through... Miki and Aya were even meant for each other back then, awww!
As for the other, I've never been a fan of Kit-Kats, they actually have a tendency to make me want to throw up, but if I got an offer like Yossy just did from Miki then give me a damn Kit-Kat! :P
I always knew Miki was the smart type, thinking up something like that to help Yossy get in shape :twisted:
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awwwwwwwwww yeyyyyyy you read it! and liked it!!!!!!!! I ;like you too! Anyway, I think I might write something short and probably sweet soon........ ok Im kidding, I'm gonna work on incredibly sad pieces that will have you banging your head against a wall screaming why? while the tears streaming down your face resemble rivers... or maybe something in between as I cannot write something that sad without breaking my own heart in the process.....
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Hahaha, Your fics are priceless!! Gomapuff is cute and I can so imagine Tsunku as a monkey.. XD and kit kat is :drool: i don't think anyone could ever thought up this stuff.. well not me anyway.. ;)
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hihi thanks you guys! I love you all! Thank you, thank you *bows* .....ok I'll stop being a cidkhead now XD