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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: strawb3rrykream on August 19, 2008, 02:58:54 AM
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@kinbari: I'm going to assume you read Waiting then? I hope you liked it. (Wait, were you the anonymous comment?) In my cynical, dark mind, I like it too!
@tru_harmony: Haha, human! :lol: Just found that a little funny! She's built this outer shield to protect herself. :(
@JFC: :wub:
@wings4dreams: I think they'd be able to manage 6 kids, to tell you the truth. They are so right for each other that it just happens without them even trying. I don't like flowers too much so I agree. (Allergies!) Yup, Miki is a fragile soul. I'm gonna say that no one saw. :D
@peti-chan: Miki is a great person. :yep: And Ai knows just what to say....for once. :P Me too!!! :inlove:
@lollipopgirl: First of all, I'm kinda liking us taking over ppl's threads! XD As for fluff, well, there's only a bit of that coming up! It's because Ai has that aura. I can't explain it. There could be TakaMiki, if you think it up in your mind. To me, in H!P, drunk anyone is possible! :muffin:
This story came to me last night. Out of absolutely nowhere. And I'm quite happy with it! Because Miki is :inlove: This is just another one of the ways I like to experiment with "taboo" or not so readily talked about topics and such. It actually started out a bit funny but that went out the window, along with the fluff!!! :lol:
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Hero: Part 1
The front door banging open startled me. It took me a minute to remember where I was. Oh yeah, the suite in the hotel in Osaka. Yocchan and I were sharing it because of our positions in the group. Sometimes being sub-leader has its perks. I sighed and wished Yocchan would refrain from bringing her latest conquests back. I mean, it’s not like I had to watch, the living room and bedrooms being separate, but the noise. Oh, the noise! Drives me up the damn wall!! But I was a little curious as to who it was this time. Considering it was the last night of a summer tour, it could be anyone. Sometimes sharing a room with a sex addict has its perks. I stopped thinking and started listening. But the sounds that were coming from the adjacent room were not normal at all. Well, I did hear Yocchan groaning as usual but there were undertones of sobbing. Like the girl she was doing was crying. Yeah, I didn’t know who’s in there but they shouldn’t be upset like that. And that’s when I heard it. “Yoshizawa-senpai….”, she said, “Please stop” I knew that voice…….oh, god, no!! I shot up from the bed and nearly ran into the closed bedroom door. I threw it open and I saw exactly what I never wanted nor expected to see.
There, on the couch under Yocchan, lay an absolutely terrified looking Kusumi Koharu.
The poor kid was naked, at least as far as I could see, and she had this look in her eyes. It was a look of pure fear. My heart ached at the sight. Koharu shouldn’t have to go through this. I went over and yelled, “Yocchan, get off of her!” My arms headed towards her fully-clothed form but a slap caused me to unintentionally recoil. No one does that to me. NO ONE. I grabbed her wrist and yanked her off the tiny, quivering body. When I saw the little girl fully, I saw that she still had her pink panties on but that was it. Her skin was red from all of Yocchan’s touches. “Get over by the door”, I shouted at her, turning around to the fuming leader. Koharu was so scared but immediately followed my orders, pulling her knees to her chest and watching the two of us from the corner. Yocchan snarled at me, “What the hell are you doing?!” I stared at her for a second before replying, “Keeping you from making a big mistake” Seconds after I said that, I narrowly dodged a fist flying towards my head. After that, all restraint was ignored as I managed to knock her out with a punch to the face and a kick in the stomach. She crumpled onto the floor, clutching her gut before she stopped moving altogether. Like I said, we were going back to Tokyo tomorrow so who cares what her face looks like? Making sure she was breathing but unconscious, I made my way over to the crying girl.
“Koharu”, I said softly, putting a hand on her face. She fell forward into my arms, crying harder. “Shh”, I soothed, cradling her and rubbing her back. I put my hands under her arms and managed to get us up in a standing position. I carried her into the bedroom like a baby. All the while, she clung to me, her arms securely around my neck. I laid her down on the bed and she curled up instinctively. It hurt to see her so vulnerable, more so than usual. Sifting through my luggage, I found a T-shirt and a pair of boxer shorts for her to wear. “Here, sweetie”, I weakly smiled, placing the clothes on the bed next to her. She pulled them on slowly, as if every movement brought pain to her body. “I don’t want to make you any more uncomfortable but where did she touch you?”, I asked. I really had no choice, it’s important to know. Koharu just looked at me, her eyes overflowing once again. “Seriously, you need to tell me”, I told her, speaking firmly but not wanting to frighten her anymore. “M-my c-ch-chest”, she whimpered, curling up even tighter. “Not down there?”, I inquired. It really pained me to make her relive it but if Yocchan made it all the way, we’d have even more problems. The frightened child shook her head, turning away as her heavy lids began to droop.
I scooted onto the bed next to her and held her. “Go to sleep, ok?”, I whispered, rocking her slowly, “You need to rest” Her thin fingers gripped my arm, as if she was scared to sleep. “It’s gonna be ok”, I reassured her, “She won’t hurt you anymore” Eventually, her hold on me loosened until she lay limp in my lap. I hadn’t realized I was crying until a warm teardrop landed on my shirt. I eased her onto the bed, tucking her in snuggly and pressing my lips onto her forehead. “I’m so sorry, Koharu-chan”, I mumbled, stroking her hair before walking into the living room.
Yocchan still lay on the tan carpet, not moving except for the slow up and down motion that confirmed she was alive. I just watched her, unable to comprehend how this had happened. What the hell could have possessed her to even think about doing that to someone so young? I guess her condition was worse than I thought. I figured it wouldn’t do to leave her laying there so I called the only one who knows what to do about this: Iida Kaori. She was leader when Yocchan was diagnosed, so it was her job to keep her in line. She didn’t tell anyone, I only know because Yocchan herself confessed it to me. Picking my cell phone up from the coffee table, I dialed her number and took a deep breath to prepare myself.
“Hello?”
“Hey Kaori-san, it happened again”
“Who was it this time?”
“Are you sure you want to know?”
“That bad, huh?”
“Worse than you could imagine. Had to knock Yocchan out. She’s on the floor right now.”
“I’ll be right there”
About 20 minutes later, I opened the door to find Kaori standing there, decked out in her doctor outfit with her two assistants. “Must you wear that?”, I snickered, gesturing them in. “Shut up”, she mumbled, trying to not to laugh. Oh, did I mention that after she graduated, Kaori has been going to school to become a doctor? Anyway, she checked out Yocchan and sent her assistants to take the woman into the car and drive her back to our private hospital in Tokyo. “So who was it?”, Kaori asked as we sat on the couch. I grabbed her hand and led her to the doorway to the bedroom. Koharu was still sleeping soundly. “No…..Way”, Kaori deadpanned, her eyes widening at the snoozing kid. “I got up just in time to prevent Yocchan from taking her panties off”, I sadly recalled. My companion just shook her head in disbelief and said, “I’ll interview her at the hospital tomorrow. Right now, I gotta call Tsunku”
She left and I remained in the doorway. Koharu looked so angelic and peaceful. The earlier events had left no marks on her, except for her almost swollen, tear-stained eyes. I cautiously approached the bed and sat down, the mattress creaking slightly. Wincing at the sound, I cursed the noise and quickly lay down. She was facing me, her lips slightly parted as she snored lightly. Honestly, how could Yocchan take advantage of that? I would never forgive myself if I did. Remaining on my side and closing my eyes, I tried to rest my body and mind, both of which were beginning to rebel against me. I was nearly asleep when something warm nuzzled into my chest. My eyes shot open to find Koharu cuddling into me. “Mommy…”, she mumbled, resting her head against my shoulder. My heart cracked as the single word left her mouth. I did the only thing I could do: I wrapped my arm around her.
The next day went by rapidly. We woke up and I had Ai-chan pack up Koharu’s things and bring them to our room. I told her that the youngest member had a nightmare and was afraid to go back to her own room. We both took showers (separately) and got ready to leave. It was absolutely heart-breaking when Koharu was afraid to go into the living room. I assured her that Yocchan was gone and held her hand as we peeked into the other room. I could feel Koharu’s pulse calm and I made her some toast in our kitchenette. Lifting our bags, we left the room and went to join the rest of Morning Musume (minus our leader) in the lobby. My excuse was that Yocchan wasn’t feeling well and left for Tokyo last night to go to the doctor. Well, I was telling the truth partially. No one questioned my authority but I could feel the strange looks when Koharu glued herself to my side. It seemed like they were all waiting for me to yell at her and shove her away and when I didn’t, everyone looked shocked.
The ride back was uneventful. But they all continued to stare at me as I sat next to Koharu, who leaned her head on my shoulder when she fell asleep. I ignored them as usual and tried to relax. Once we arrived home, I told the girls they all had the day off because Yocchan was sick. After they left, Koharu and I made our way to the hospital. She was getting a little scared again and we had to stop in the lobby of the Up-Front building so I could get her to calm down a bit. Her hand was basically fastened to mine, but I didn’t mind. Kaori was upstairs already so we went to greet her. “Koharu-chan”, she began as we were settled in her office, “I’m gonna have to ask you some questions about what happened yesterday” The youngest girl looked at me as if to ask permission to do it. I nodded and began to stand up. “Where are you going?”, she asked, looking alarmed. “I’m going to go see how Yocchan is”, I calmly told her, “While Kaori-san interviews you” I knew she wouldn’t want to go see her leader and I knew I couldn’t be there while they talked, as much as I wanted to be. “Be strong”, I whispered into Koharu’s ear and left the room.
I asked the receptionist where Yocchan’s room was and she pointed me in the right direction. I opened the door and there she was, sitting in the bed. I almost winced at the sight of her, what I did to her. She had a black eye and she looked a bit uncomfortable just sitting. “Hey”, I murmured, giving her a small smile. “Hey”, she replied, that silly grin covering her face as usual. As if nothing ever happened. “So how are you?”, I asked awkwardly, sitting on a chair. “I have this black eye and a few broken ribs”, was the answer, “Thanks to you” Even though the last part was said with a laugh, I felt so remorseful at that moment. Even though Yocchan was totally wrong and it will never be ok to do that, I felt like I had no right to just attack her like that. “I forgive you”, she spoke up, “It’s all my fault and I deserve it all” It was as if she read my mind. “How is she?”, Yocchan asked, forcing me to look at her. “She was afraid to go in the living room at the hotel this morning”, I answered, “She’s been glued to my side the whole day” “Shit”, she moaned, smacking her face into her hands. “But I think she’ll be fine soon”, I tried to reassure her, “But I’m not sure when she’ll warm up to you again” We continued to talk and even laugh a bit. But then Kaori came in and told me Koharu wanted me.
“Are you ok?”, I asked, shocked to find Koharu sitting in Kaori’s office crying, almost as hard as she was yesterday. I hurried over and hugged her tightly. “What’s wrong, sweetie?”, I whispered into her ear as she rested her head on my shoulder. “I want to forgive Yoshizawa-senpai but I’m scared”, she confessed, wiping away her tears. “I’ll go with you when you’re ready, ok?”, I tried to comfort her but I was a loss of words myself. I wanted everything to be all happy and back to normal but I was, honestly, afraid. I mean, Yocchan almost did that a 13-year-old fellow member. I was quite relieved that Koharu wanted to forgive but I was afraid for her. That something bad would happen and Koharu would never ever want to be near Yocchan again. I mean, she’s one of my closest friends but the way she was last night was unforgettable, but not in a good way. I love her to death but something is just freaking me out. “Um, I think I should go see her now”, Koharu whispered, surprising me slightly. I smiled slowly and held out my hand.
We took a few deep breaths outside the room and Koharu buried her head in my chest again. “Ready?”, I asked, slinging an arm over her shoulders and leading her into the room. “Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak with you”, I announced, pushing the girl forward a bit. She started to cry and turned back towards me. “Go on”, I mumbled, smiling with my eyes. She walked towards the bed and looked at Yocchan, who was tearing up as well. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, she said in a quiet voice. “Thank you, Koharu-chan”, Yocchan grinned as tears fell from her eyes, “I’m so sorry this happened.” She reached for Koharu’s hands to hold but the younger girl flinched and backed away slightly. Yocchan lowered her own hands and smiled weakly. It was clear that this relationship had a long way to go before it was as back to normal as it could be.
But this was a start and I was proud of both of them.
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Long, huh?? :cow:
Edit: I changed the word [bgcolor=#090000]rape[/bgcolor] in my story because I was reminded by a kind person that this part of the forum is public. I don't want JPH!P to get in trouble by some non-member.
Thanks for your understanding. :D
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yossui=nymphomaniac...
koharu?!?!
ftw?!?
hmm...
i wonder wuzguna happen next...
thanks for this part... waiting for the next~~~
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That was odd...
Yet very interesting to read :D
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Wow, that was unusual O_o Not in a bad way though. Actually, I'm pretty interested in where this story will go :yep:
I don't know whether to feel sorry for Yossie or not XD
I wonder if the KoharuXYossie relationship can be repaired... I wonder if Yossie's going to be made to graduate...
I shall be waiting for the update!
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I'm determiend to stick with this fic since it's the it's the first I've caught from the begininning in a hell of a long time and it's started so well. Glad to see someone who isn't afraid of tackling more "delicate" subjects and I applaud you for that, I'm not really a big fan of lovey dovey stories very much unless they're done really well. This looks like it's gonna be good!
Like I said, we were going back to Tokyo tomorrow so who cares what her face looks like?
...and that line was awesome. :lol: I always seem to get myself stuck with Miki as a major character so it'll be interesting to see how this is done differently.
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Hero: Part 1
Oh yeah, the suite in the hotel in Osaka. Yocchan and I were sharing it because of our positions in the group. Sometimes being sub-leader has its perks.
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Sometimes sharing a room with a sex addict has its perks.
I wanna hear about these perks. 8)
There, on the couch under Yocchan, lay an absolutely terrified looking Kusumi Koharu.
Koharu?? HOLY CRAP!!!
:OMG:
Yocchan snarled at me, “What the hell are you doing?!” I stared at her for a second before replying, “Keeping you from making a big mistake” Seconds after I said that, I narrowly dodged a fist flying towards my head. After that, all restraint was ignored as I managed to knock her out with a punch to the face and a kick in the stomach. She crumpled onto the floor, clutching her gut before she stopped moving altogether.
Yossi's just stupidly drunk, right? She's not fully aware of what she's doing, right? :cry:
“I don’t want to make you any more uncomfortable but where did she touch you?”, I asked. I really had no choice, it’s important to know. Koharu just looked at me, her eyes overflowing once again. “Seriously, you need to tell me”, I told her, speaking firmly but not wanting to frighten her anymore. “M-my c-ch-chest”, she whimpered, curling up even tighter. “Not down there?”, I inquired. It really pained me to make her relive it but if Yocchan made it all the way, we’d have even more problems.
Yeah, it's a good thing Miki decided to investigate this time. :O
Yocchan still lay on the tan carpet, not moving except for the slow up and down motion that confirmed she was alive. I just watched her, unable to comprehend how this had happened. What the hell could have possessed her to even think about doing that to someone so young? I guess her condition was worse than I thought. I figured it wouldn’t do to leave her laying there so I called the only one who knows what to do about this: Iida Kaori. She was leader when Yocchan was diagnosed, so it was her job to keep her in line.
Wait, so in this case, Yossi's being a "sex addict" is NOT just a colloquialism? She's actually got it as a medical/psychological condition? :o
About 20 minutes later, I opened the door to find Kaori standing there, decked out in her doctor outfit with her two assistants. “Must you wear that?”, I snickered, gesturing them in. “Shut up”, she mumbled, trying to not to laugh. Oh, did I mention that after she graduated, Kaori has been going to school to become a doctor? Anyway, she checked out Yocchan and sent her assistants to take the woman into the car and drive her back to our private hospital in Tokyo.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DOCTOR KAORI!!! :cow:
/me pictures Kaori in the Doctor's outfit from the old H!M skits.
Oh yeah...that's hot. :drool:
I was nearly asleep when something warm nuzzled into my chest. My eyes shot open to find Koharu cuddling into me. “Mommy…”, she mumbled, resting her head against my shoulder. My heart cracked as the single word left her mouth. I did the only thing I could do: I wrapped my arm around her.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
:shy1:
*YOSSI-MIKI TALK*
So in her case, it almost sounds like she gets these "horny attacks", and that when they happen, it's almost like she loses control and isn't aware of what she's doing (almost like when someone is so drunk/high they don't remember what they did the previous night). That's gotta suck for Yossi.
“I want to forgive Yoshizawa-senpai but I’m scared”, she confessed, wiping away her tears. “I’ll go with you when you’re ready, ok?”
I guess Kaori told Koharu about Yossi's condition and explained that she wasn't herself when it happened?
“Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak with you”, I announced, pushing the girl forward a bit. She started to cry and turned back towards me. “Go on”, I mumbled, smiling with my eyes. She walked towards the bed and looked at Yocchan, who was tearing up as well. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, she said in a quiet voice. “Thank you, Koharu-chan”, Yocchan grinned as tears fell from her eyes, “I’m so sorry this happened.”
Man, Yossi really IS an addict. :'(
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@tru_harmony: Not too much of your thing, huh? I was kind of afraid of that. That my readers wouldn't like it that much. But I'm glad you want updates! :mon determined:
@heyyouhiya: I'm happy you thought it was interesting. :mon sweat:
@KonaKaga: I feel like I rushed through it a little but I'm still content with it. Yossy..........about her...........yeah. I don't know either. I wanted her to be remorseful because it's kinda not her fault. But it is at the same time. That....you shall see! *makes funny spooky movement with her fingers*
@redux: I hope you do keep up with it but if not, it's ok. I understand. Thanks, I feel like hitting the sensitive topics makes them perhaps a little easier to understand? Plus I think it's fun to shock ppl! :mon lol: About lovey dovey stories, I like them. But change is nice sometimes.
@JFC: About the perks, huh? :mon dunno: Yeah, I feel bad about Koha. :mon unsure: Miki is really looking out for Koha because she's so damn young and this shit just shouldn't happen. Yup, I looked it up to make sure sex addiction was a real disease-ish thing. That is the exact Doctor Kaori I was thinking of. Yeah, it's hot! :mon bleed2: Poor Yossy, I feel pretty bad making her into this person but.....I can't help it.
Just felt like replying to comments~ So I'm having mixed reviews on this, huh? :mon unsure: Thought I would. I was a little apprehensive in the first place because it is one of my more darkish stories and it's not like too many ppl want to hear about a poor girl almost being raped, right? I'm just not sure what to do now. Kinda lost. But I do appreciate your feedback and it will help me decide how to continue. :mon dunno:
Thank you for your support and I will do my best to write good stories! :gmon sing:
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Just remember, as long as you're getting responses/comments from others, you're probably doing something right. :)
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yeah... don't worry if what you write isn't everybody's thing... just write! i may not read it for the pairing-value but with your writing skills, i read that last one for its literary-value...
just write what you feel like... i'm kinda envious of you because you actually pursued that rape thing... i got a bit chicken with that theme... :lol:
GANBARE!!!!
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Hitorijime
Thanks for the translation strawb3rrykream, the words…they were beautiful *sniff* :farofflook:
Future Fantasy
I had a grin on my face the whole time I was reading this. Gosh, IshiYoshi being together is like the ultimate fantasy come true :omamori:
Not That Girl
You know, the funny thing is, I usually only like Ai-chan with Risa. But somehow, someway, you’re getting through to me with your pairing of Ai and Miki. Now is that good or bad? :hehehe:
Waiting
Am I bad if I want more of such fics :shy2: GAKIKAME~~~~~~~~~~ :luvuluvu:
Hero: Part 1
Am I reading right, Miki is actually….nice? Haha, sorry I was kidding :mon sweat: It’s different and nice to see Miki this way, looking out for the juniors, Koharu especially since the kid almosts worships her. I’m just a little shocked, no make that very shocked to see Yossi doing what she did. But hey, it's all good, I like reading about shocking scenarios and this one definitely shocked me :mon scare: That Kaori bit was funny and rather apt. Great job! :mon thumb:
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interesting...
Ohh, cnt wait how they would turn out.
feel sorry for koha
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Dang. That was a surprising but very interesting story. Poor Koha though .. :(
I need to catch up on the other stories i missed. *goes back a 'few' pages* *sigh* this'll take a while. Oh well something good to occupy me. :D
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Wha! Yossy was damn creepy in this one :scared: But I feel sorry for her since she is seriously ill :( and poor Koharu-chan... :cry:
But the best thing about this story is that...Miki is a hero! :cool1: Being such a good, responsible person and taking care of Koharu :inlove: It's so nice to see her acting like that :wub:
Can't wait for the next part XD Great job, keep it up ;)
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Wahhhh! Yossy how could you!?!?!?!? :frustrated: Poor Koharu! Thank goodness that Miki was there to stop her...the whole time I was reading I kept hoping that things weren't exactly what they appeared to be, but... guess I'll have to wait for the next part...
Miki was awesome though!
udate soon :D
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@lollipopgirl: First of all, I'm kinda liking us taking over ppl's threads! XD
I know, that's been hella fun :twisted:
Yup, I looked it up to make sure sex addiction was a real disease-ish thing.
Disorder honey, disorder :P (revenge for correcting me before :mon blblbl: )
WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTT!!! :w00t:
Holy crap, I love it!
Not coz it's such a sweet story and coz I love what happened to Koha, but coz there is a reason I am a psych stupid and that is coz I absolutely love (for lack of a better word) things like this and find them incredibly interesting. :D
Total props to you for, once again, taking a different controversial path... But poor Yossy, she always ends up being the rapist (or almost one) :(
Miki being all caring :heart: I can so see that! Yeah sure she can be blunt and is a bitch but it's only coz she cares and wants to get her point across... fair enough... but when something threatens one of her girl's, especially a young one like that, WATCH OUT!!! :knee: :kickass:
I really can't wait for more of this, I was smiling the whole time I was reading (no, not coz I'm a psycho) coz I was enjoying it so much... congrats on such a long chapter too :gmon heartu:
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“But it’s so fun to try”
of course :twisted:
aww Miki cried :cry:
Yossie almost raped Kuharo.?. :O
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@JFC: Domo~
@tru_harmony: I kinda worry myself in the sense that the rape thing doesn't bother me too much. I feel like I should be scared because it could happen to me. But I'm not too worried. :?
@lil_hamz: Nice to see your comments. :heart:
@ringo-hime: I feel sorry for Koha too. :(
@zay05ohayou: Good luck with catching up! :lol:
@peti-chan: Yeah, I love me some hero Miki!!! :w00t:
@wings4dreams: Don't blame Yossy too much. She's sick and kinda can't help it. :(
@lollipopgirl: THAT'S the word I was looking for!!! :P Yeah, poor Yossy! But she's such a good character for it.
@kRisZ: Sex is :drool: Sorry but Kuharo? :lol:
This one is kinda crappily written. I don't like revising so :P Now we get to see Koha's POV! :)
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Hero: Part 2
That was the scariest night of my life.
I was just in my hotel room, watching a little TV before bed. We were going to home to Tokyo tomorrow so I wanted to chill out before we had to work again. Because in this business, I’ve discovered, you make the best of every free moment you get. But I was getting sleepy. Sometimes I wish I wasn’t the youngest in the group. No one wants to hang out with me because they think I’m not mature enough or whatever. God, sometimes I wish I didn’t even join Morning Musume. “Why?”, I grumbled, clicking the TV off and laying on my face on the bed. I guess I never realized how tired I was because I don’t even remember falling asleep. But I do remember waking up to a loud knocking on the door. “What the heck is that?”, I murmured, dragging my body up from the bed. I stood there for a second, kinda forgetting what I was doing. Now I know why my senpai all drink coffee. I stumbled over to the door, tripping over a pair of shoes and a discarded T-shirt. I squinted into the peep hole and it took a moment for me to confirm who was standing outside.
It was Yoshizawa-san.
“Um, Yoshizawa-senpai?”, I asked, wondering why the hell my leader was outside of my hotel room at 1:00 AM. “Hey Koha!”, she slurred, swaying slightly on her feet. Uh oh, she was kinda drunk. I had never seen a drunk person in real life before let alone have to deal with one. So I was really confused and a tad bit scared. I felt like something was wrong with this. My “guest” began to “walk” into the room, using the wall as a support. My gut was screaming at me to get her back out, like bad stuff would happen if she was there. But I couldn’t do much, as she was already lying on my bed. “Are you ok?”, I asked timidly, crouching on the floor to look her in the unusually large eyes. She stared back at me and then hiccupped loudly. My face was immersed in the sour scent of beer. Scooting back, I took a couple deep breaths of normal air and said, “I think I need to call Fujimoto-senpai” “No!”, my drunk senior bellowed, throwing her limp arms up for emphasis. “But she can help you”, I tried to convince her as I reached for the phone. But Yoshizawa-san caught my wrist, holding it a little too tight. “Owie…”, I whimpered, looking up at her with tears in my eyes. Her grip loosened but now, her soft hand was rubbing up and down my arm. I was starting to feel uncomfortable, like she wasn’t just stroking my skin to make it hurt less. “Your skin is so soft”, she breathed out, using her nails to tickle my arm almost playfully. I was feeling really scared by now, wondering why Yoshizawa-san was acting so strange.
All of a sudden, I found myself on her lap. She had her left arm around my waist, holding me firmly on her and her right on my shoulder. “Such a pretty girl”, she huskily whispered into my ear, sending shivers down my spine. The stale smell filled my nostrils again. The hand on my hip made its way under my tank top, running over my stomach. I may be the youngest but I definitely knew where this was going and I didn’t like it one bit. “I don’t think you….”, I tried to protest but her right hand covered my mouth. “Shhhh”, she shushed me as her left hand crawled up my stomach. I squeaked with horror when her fingers circled my breasts. She was pushing on them so hard, it hurt and my tears spilled out. She made a comment about me not being developed yet and I blushed hard. She did something else (I’m not sure what) to my chest and it made me cry out. She let go of my mouth and I turned around to catch a glimpse of her face. Her cheeks were flushed and her lips were slightly open. But what scared me the most was her eyes. They were different, darker somehow. Like there was a fire in them. And when she looked back at me, they flashed with hunger. All I could do was sit there and bite my lip as she fondled my chest. “Maybe you’d be more comfortable in my room”, she said, already lifting me into her arms, wedding-style. I didn’t even try to stop her. I was just too scared.
All the way up the elevator and down the hallway, I was shaking a little. What was she gonna do to me? I prayed she wouldn’t touch me anymore but I already knew it was futile. We made it back to her and Fujimoto-san’s suite without anyone seeing us. Yoshizawa-san struggled with the door and couldn’t put the key card in. So she handed it to me so I could insert the card while she pushed opened the door. It hit the wall inside with a bang and I jumped in her arms. “Shh”, she soothed, stroking my leg this time as she carried me into the room. The bedroom door was closed so I assumed Fujimoto-san was already sleeping. My mind was racing but it all shut down when she put me on the couch and sat on my hips. My arms were pinned over my head so I couldn’t struggle. I just stared into her unfamiliar eyes and sobbed. Her hands pulled my top off and felt all over my exposed body. Her lips crushed against mine as I lay absolutely paralyzed on the cushy piece of furniture. “You taste so yummy”, my senpai moaned into my mouth. Her hands slipped down until they rested on my hips, trailing along the waistband of my shorts. My eyes widened when I realized she was slowly pulling them down. The terry cloth fabric brushed down my thighs, my knees, my ankles until I couldn’t feel them anymore. Panic took over with my tears falling faster and my cries becoming louder. “Yoshizawa-senpai…”, I whimpered, “Please stop.”
Suddenly, I heard the bedroom door creak open and Fujimoto-san stood there, with a look of shock on her face. But that quickly turned to anger and she screamed, “Yocchan, get off of her!” But Yoshizawa-san just slapped at her hands. I don’t know exactly what happened but all of a sudden, I was alone on the couch and Fujimoto-san was telling me, “Get over by the door” My body did as I was told and I ended up in the corner. I pulled my legs up to my chest and watched fearfully as they fought. They were yelling and then Yoshizawa-san took a swing at her. Fujimoto-san was quick and dodged it. But then she attacked our leader until she fell on the floor. I kept crying and Fujimoto-san came over to me. Her eyes were soft and sympathetic as she placed her hand on my cheek. “Koharu”, she said and I leaned into her arms, letting go of anything I had been hiding. She shushed me and we rocked back and forth. Somehow, she was able to pick me up and take me to the bedroom. I held on to her neck and buried my face when we passed Yoshizawa-san’s body. I hoped she wasn’t dead. I was put down on the bed and my body automatically curled into a ball. Partially to attempt to cover myself up and partially to try and comfort myself. I watched as Fujimoto-san searched through her bag and brought out some clothes for me. “Here, sweetie”, she said, trying to smile. I could tell tonight’s events shook her up too. I put them on slowly because I still paralyzed with fear. The shirt and shorts were a little big but comfy and soft.
“I don’t want to make you any more uncomfortable but where did she touch you?”, Fujimoto-san asked me. I looked at her, my face dampening with tears again. I didn’t want to remember where she touched me. I just want to move on with my life, to forget this ever happened. “Seriously, you need to tell me”, she said in her professional sub-leader voice. “M-my c-ch-chest”, I stuttered. “Not down there?”, she confirmed, seeming quite relieved. I shook my head and turned onto my side. That feeling of pure exhaustion was coming back. The bed was like lying on a cloud but not as good as when Fujimoto-san crawled onto the bed next to me and wrapped her arms around me. She rocked me to sleep, whispering to me as I held on to her. She made me feel safe but I was still afraid to go to sleep. But my body took over, forcing my eyes to close. The last thing I heard was, “She won’t hurt you anymore.”
When I woke up, Fujimoto-san had her arm around me. I smiled because I had honestly never seen her so affectionate and nice. I watched her until she woke up. She called Takahashi-san on the hotel phone and told her to pack up my belongings. We showered, dressed and prepared to leave. But as we were going into the living room, I stopped short, freezing on the spot. I couldn’t go in there. I just couldn’t. “She’s gone, I promise”, Fujimoto-san assured me kindly, taking my hand. We took a brief look around the corner, confirming Yoshizawa-san was no longer in the room. I felt relieved and happily sat on a stool in their kitchen. Yeah, their suite had a kitchen!! So Fujimoto-san made me some toast for breakfast. It was delicious!
I felt happy and comfortable with Fujimoto-san, until we got to the lobby. Everyone else was staring at us, wondering why we were together and Yoshizawa-san wasn’t there. I started feeling all nervous again, even though a death glare was cast over all the other members. Once we got in the van, I felt a little more relaxed. Enough to fall asleep again. Fujimoto-san gave everyone the rest of the day off back in Tokyo. But us two headed to the Up-Front building, to the hospital. I was told Iida-senpai had to interview me about last night. I wasn’t looking forward to it at all. In fact, the closer we got, the tighter my hand gripped my senior’s. I was breathing rapidly and the lump in my throat grew larger. We were in the lobby when I was yanked towards the wall and Fujimoto-san looked me in the eyes. “It’ll be ok”, she told me, “I promise” She always knows how to make me calm down. Once we got upstairs, we met Iida-san in her office. “Koharu-chan”, she said to me kindly, “I’m gonna have to ask you some questions about what happened yesterday” Her eyes were twinkling but at the same time, a cloud of seriousness enveloped us, as well as spreading throughout the whole room. I nodded, after looking to my guardian for permission. But when she stood up, I panicked. “Where are you going?”, I whimpered. She told me she was going to see Yoshizawa-san, someone I was definitely not ready to see. I reluctantly let her leave, wishing she’d change her mind.
Iida-san gave me a warm smile before pulling out a piece of paper and handing it to me, along with a pen. It was a survey-type thing, asking me a lot about what had occurred. Was I sexually active? No. Did it feel good when she touched me? NO! Once I finished it, she confirmed the answers with me. Then the serious talking began. “I’m not sure whether you know or not, but you aren’t the first person that Yossy assaulted”, she told me, adjusting her glasses. I was horrified and it must have shown on my face. “No, no, it’s not what you think”, she was quick to correct me, “Yossy has a disorder in which she cannot control her libido” “It is quite rare and alcohol increases her chances of an attack”, Iida-san said in a rather melancholic voice, “She’s been fairly good for a while but the amount of alcohol she consumed yesterday made it impossible for her to control herself” I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. Other girls went through the same thing I had? I fiddled with the hem of my T-shirt, not sure how to respond. “You were lucky though”, she continued, “You weren’t penetrated” I was now VERY uncomfortable with this conversation. “So in conclusion, Yossy wasn’t aware of what she was doing and I am very very sorry that this happened to you” I managed to smile gratefully before my other emotions pushed it out of the way. Iida-san came over to me and hugged me. “Fujimoto-senpai”, I mumbled, wishing she was the one holding me. “Pardon?”, she asked, pulling away so she could hear me better. “I want Fujimoto-senpai”, I blubbered out, my mouth not quite cooperating.
5 minutes later, my hero entered the room, heading straight for me. “What’s wrong, sweetie?”, she asked, as I shrunk into her arms. I told her what I wanted to do and her response was nothing short of what I expected. “I’ll go with you when you’re ready, ok?”, she whispered, fighting back tears. We sat silently, until I murmured, “Um, I think I should go see her now” But once we were outside the door, I started having doubts. Panic set in and I wanted to go home. “Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak to you”, Fujimoto-san announced, telling me we were already in the room. Crying, I tried to turn around but she told me to just do it. Approaching the bed, I saw the damage that had been done. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, I cried, feeling sick. Yoshizawa-san apologized as well and was crying too, which was as rare as Fujimoto-san’s kindness towards me used to be. I was feeling a bit better, until her hands came towards me. Those same hands that touched me in bad places and ripped my clothes off. I couldn’t let that happen again. I backed away, fear in my eyes. She stopped and smiled weakly. I wanted to let her back into my life. I really did, but I was so afraid. Afraid that those hands would do worse things and being alone with her could mean more torture.
I will do my best to forgive, but it will be hard to forget.
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I like to think of my slightly scattered writing as the way a 13-year-old Koharu would be thinking after this happens to her. :D
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... woah... i wonder who yossui's other victims were...
bad yossui...
hmm... i guess miki is the hero?
rape is scary... hope it never happens to me...
thanks for that update... waiting for the next...
EDIT: DID YOSSUI DO THIS TO RIKA-CHAN TOO?!?!? (i know my curiosity sound scary... but i want to know...)
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“Um, Yoshizawa-senpai?”, I asked, wondering why the hell my leader was outside of my hotel room at 1:00 AM. “Hey Koha!”, she slurred, swaying slightly on her feet. Uh oh, she was kinda drunk.
Aaaaaah, so she WAS drunk.
“Maybe you’d be more comfortable in my room”, she said, already lifting me into her arms, wedding-style. I didn’t even try to stop her. I was just too scared.
In a way, Koharu actually did the right thing by not resisting here. By letting Yossi take her back to her and Miki's room, she put herself closer (physically) to help. It was also fortunate that Miki was still up. If they had stayed in Koharu's room, there's no way of knowing if the members in the rooms next to hers would have woken up and been able to stop it.
“Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak to you”, Fujimoto-san announced, telling me we were already in the room. Crying, I tried to turn around but she told me to just do it. Approaching the bed, I saw the damage that had been done. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, I cried, feeling sick. Yoshizawa-san apologized as well and was crying too, which was as rare as Fujimoto-san’s kindness towards me used to be.
Hopefully Koharu honestly believes that Yossi's sincere in her guilt over what she tried to do. But yeah, for Koharu, her image of Yossi has been totally shattered (like hero-worship being destroyed).
As morbid as it sounds, I'm wondering now, who else has Yossi done this to, and how did they handle/are they handling it?
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Okay, Yossy, no more fire juice you for you! :pig refuse: Look what you almost did...hopefully she learned the error of her ways.
It was interesting to read this from koharu's Pov I think the story was more powerful that way cause you see things from the victim's eyes.
and as the others were saying...has Yossy done this to anyone else?!? :O
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Geez, surely it was a traumatic experience for Koha :on cloudeye: Poor kid :cry:
But seems like everyone are the most curious about who, beside Koharu, was Yossy's victim :sweatdrop: And since Kaori said that Koharu was actually "lucky" then I also wonder what Yossy had done to others....were they also "lucky" or had less luck?...:badluck:
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It's kind of hard to say this without sounding like a sadist or morbid bastard but I'm really enjoying this story. :lol:
I always like the changes in perspective as it always keeps you guessing as to who's POV may be next. I would be saying Yossie would be a pretty firm contender for that but if you think that Koharu's thoughts were translated to scattered writing then you'll probably just have to fill it up with loads of typos. XD
Like others said I'm curious to see who else has had to go through with this, but tbh I'm actually more interested in seeing how the two of them go about getting back to "normal" again. I'm not too sure this'll be the last time Yossie will attempt something like this.
Oh, and again I want to thank you for wirting something more risqué as it's great to see. Well, err, as great to see as it can be....You get what I mean...
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Oooh. Now you know what 'Maternity' can do to Yossie. You've been warned. :D That was pretty tight. How sad, Yossie has this sex addiction. Tsk. and I thought she was a big enough pimp. She was actually holding back. :O The poor 'others'. :( They must've stayed quiet for a while.
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So Yossy was drunk as well... for some reason that actually makes me angry at her now... I wasn't before but if she knows alcohol increases the chances she should be more careful, or at least have someone with her (like Miki) when she goes drinking :angry: Although I guess if she hasn't had an 'attack' for a while she would want to live her life without worrying about it.
Koha :cry: It was kinda creepy reading that from her perspective, it must have been even creepier to write it! And you shouldn't have any problems writing as a 13 yr old, you're close enough to that age... Oh yeah, I went there lil' one :gmon hot: :mon slapass:
Koha's POV makes Miki look even more awesome then she did from the first part... KOha is so cute when she talks about her, I don't think Miki will be able to get rid of her now :P
I hope she can rebuild her relationship with Yossy but after reading part 2, it really emphasizes just how hard that will be to do! :mon cry: Oh and I almost cried in this one, mainly at the moments when Koha would just collapse into Miki's arms :cry:
Sorry I took so long to comment on this one too hun, I did read it when it was posted but I gotta get out of this bad habit of commenting later and then not having time to :sweatdrop:
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@tru: Yossy's other victims' identities will be revealed eventually. I'm pretty sure I won't make Rika a victim. They are too close and it just doesn't seem right.
@JFC: Alcohol is fun, until someone gets hurt. Ah, I never really thought of that. Smart!! :lol: They will be fixed....I think.
@wings4dreams: Yeah, it was more challenging to write from the victim's POV.
@peti-chan: Koharu is scared but she's a strong kid. Unfortunately, some of the others are less lucky... :(
@redux: No worries, I don't think you're morbid. Unless I'm a freak for writing this in the first place. I'm actually looking forward to writing the mending process. It's going to be hard, which is good practice! You're welcome and thanks to you for your support! :heart:
@zay05ohayou: Hehehe, maternity. That was funny! The others didn't really stay quiet exactly. Actually, I don't know yet. XD
@Nee-chan: Don't be too mad!! Cuz it's not totally Yossy's fault. It was creepy-ish but not really. To me, it was just getting into a character's head. Oh heeeeeell naw, you did not just go there!!! LOL but yeah, I am still that youngish. Koharu really relies on Miki now. She's her hero, the one who saves her from bad things. Personally, I don't know if I'd ever be able to forgive someone who did that to me. But perhaps Koharu will when she is able to see how sorry Yossy really is. It's ok, really. You have a life. (I think... :P)
Enjoy the next update!!
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Hero: Part 3
Why did I do this? I’ve ruined yet another life.
I shouldn’t have drank that much. I know what it does to me, but I let those stupid Melons convince me I could do it. It didn’t help that everyone else was encouraging them. “Tomorrow’s back to work so enjoy it now!!”, was Nakazawa’s tipsy statement, I believe. But it’s not their fault, you know? I’m pretty sure they don’t know about my condition and Nakazawa selectively forgets things when she’s drunk. So after who knows how many rounds of “Who can drink the most tequila shots?”, I stumbled my way back to my room. I’m lucky that Miki acted like a real adult and went to bed instead of drinking like an idiot. I kept telling myself, “Just ride the elevator all the way to the top and your room is up there.” But somehow, my feet carried my wasted body onto the 15th floor, where the rest of the girls’ rooms were.
Oh, shit. That feeling was coming back.
“Shake it off, Yoshizawa”, I snapped, trying to ward off the premonition of my disorder. But my thoughts fell deaf, as my body moved down the hallway. I stopped in front of one door, steadying myself on the frame before knocking loudly. The door slowly opened and there stood a sleepy Koharu. “Um, Yoshizawa-senpai?”, she asked in an adorable voice. “Hey Koha!”, I bellowed before slowly pushing past her. When I was successfully inside, I slumped onto her bed. “Get your ass out of here before you touch her!”, my mind screamed but the alcohol clouded my judgment, as well as increasing the power of my sickness. “Are you ok?”, she whispered, looking at me fearfully. It was as if she knew what was going to happen to her. I would give anything to have stopped it. “I think I need to call Fujimoto-senpai”, she mumbled, moving towards the phone. I couldn’t let Miki see me like this. I didn’t want her to scold me and see my bad side. I yelled and grabbed her wrist just as she was about to pick up the phone. I shouldn’t have done that. As soon as I felt her skin on my palm, it was over. I could feel the change in my body and my grip on her wrist tightened until she cried for me to stop. Soon, I was stroking her arm and holding her in my lap. Her body stiffened with every touch. When she tried to speak, I covered up her mouth and my other hand slipped up her shirt. Her budding breasts were soft and tender. She gasped and cried when I squeezed and prodded them. “You’re still developing, aren’t you?”, I sighed, “But they’re so beautiful already.” I caught a glimpse of her face and saw that she was crying and looking very scared. “Maybe you’d be more comfortable in my room”, I told her. I picked her up into my arms and we headed to the suite.
But I hit a problem when we were standing outside. I was still drunk so my hand-eye coordination was pretty non-existent. I couldn’t get the damn card into the slot. I decided to hand it to Koharu who fearfully unlocked the door and I gave it a good shove. It hit the wall and startled the already scared girl in my arms. I soothed her nerves and carefully laid her on the couch before straddling her hips and pinning her arms down. She stared at me as I peeled her thin tank top from her body and felt all of the skin normally hidden under it. I kissed her hard, groaning into her mouth. My hands moved down to rest on her hips and fiddled with the waistband of her shorts. Thumbs slipping under the elastic, I slowly lowered them until a pool of green terry cloth lay on the end of the couch. “Yoshizawa-senpai…”, her tiny voice croaked, “Please stop” Suddenly, I felt someone’s eyes on my back. “Yocchan, get off of her!!!”, Miki-chan screamed, reaching for my hands which were keeping the other girl in place. I whacked them away and turned back to Koharu. My only warning was Miki’s hands gripping my wrist before I was thrown onto the floor. I jumped up to face Miki, growling with anger. Who does she think she is?! I mean, we’re close but no one has the right to toss me onto the floor like a damn doll. Unless it’s foreplay but this was definitely not the case. “What the hell are you doing?!”, I sneered. “Keeping you from making a big mistake”, she replied after a short pause. I swung at her head with my fist because I just couldn’t take her saying that. Somewhere in my head, far from the tobacco-like invasion, I knew she was right. But I was in no position to properly comprehend anything rational. She dodged it and planted a good one right on my left eye. I stumbled backwards and was upright until Miki’s foot rammed into my rib cage. I clutched my torso as my body made a beeline for the floor. The last thing I saw was the tan carpet.
“Uhhh”, were the first sounds from parched lips. My head was pounding and it hurt to move. The bed on which I was lying felt strangely familiar as I struggled to open my eyes. I managed my right side but shut it immediately to block out the evil sunlight. My left eye, though, wouldn’t open and it was sore as hell. Then all the memories from the previous night came flooding back. All the drinking, the bad things I did, the fighting and yelling that had gone on. “Nice to see you up”, Kaori’s voice resonated in my ears. I cracked my right eye open to see her smiling at me. I tried to speak but I coughed instead, which made it known to me that my stomach was also sensitive. Pain rushed from my gut all over my body and I groaned loudly. “You have a few broken ribs and a fairly nasty black eye”, she informed me, pouring some water from a pink pitcher on the tray and handing the plastic cup to me, “Miki can certainly take care of herself.” I grabbed it and greedily poured the liquid into my dry mouth. The cold substance ran down my sore throat, soothing and moisturizing it. I set the cup back down and Kaori refilled it, knowing I was dehydrated. We repeated the process a total of 4 times, before I covered the open top with my hand. “How is…she?”, I asked quietly. I couldn’t bring myself to further stain her name by saying it. “Well, she was sleeping when I saw her yesterday”, my doctor replied, “And she and Miki should be on their way.” I started to feel a bit anxious, wanting to see them but at the same time, I wanted them to stay as far away from me as possible.
Kaori’s pager buzzed, signaling that they had arrived. She gave me a quick smile and scurried back to her office, closing the door as she exited. I was left alone once again, alone with my thoughts. Those awful thoughts of what I did to her. And to the others before her. There aren’t too many, only 4 others but I know they’ve all suffered too. I was caught off guard when the door opened and Miki appeared. I could tell that she was disturbed my injured appearance. “Hey”, she called to me. I replied, smiling as normally as I could. She asked me how I was and I told her in a joking way that thanks to her, I had broken ribs and a black eye. The tension was crazy because she looked a little uncomfortable, even though it was perfectly clear that I was kidding around. I could tell she felt bad and she really shouldn’t. Miki only did what was necessary to save Koharu. “I forgive you”, I spoke up, “It’s all my fault and I deserve it all.” She seemed a bit relieved and even more perplexed that I knew what she was thinking. It was written all over her face. I asked about Koharu and was told that she was afraid to go into the hotel living room and that she wouldn’t leave her hero’s side. “Shit”, I groaned, burying my face in my hands. I ruined two relationships in one stupid, drunken night. Miki tried to make me feel better and let me tell you, it worked. “You shoulda seen the look I gave everyone this morning when I came down with Koharu”, she giggled, “I swear I could see into their minds” I laughed as she described her latest adventure with her death glare. “I’m sorry to interrupt but Koharu wants you, Miki”, Kaori said as she pushed open the door and poked her head in. Miki smiled at me and got up.
My mind seemed to ease a bit after talking to Miki. She always knows what to say and how to say it. No bullshit and no sweet talk. Just straightforward facts. I felt that she forgave me for what had happened. But the one girl who I needed to be forgiven by was broken. Poor little, innocent Koharu was probably scarred. She’s the youngest and I was supposed to take care of her. I promised Tsunku and her parents and the rest of the members. A good leader isn’t supposed to touch their kouhai that way. I have failed everyone: my group, my boss, myself. I lay down and stared at the spotted ceiling. I tried to count the pock-marks in the panels but I kept getting lost. “Arrh”, I grumbled, slowly propping myself back up. I winced at the stabbing pang in my abdomen, my ribs shifting painfully. I heard a noise outside of the door that sounded like deep breathing and whispers. But nothing could have prepared me for who came through it.
It was Koharu. Miki was leading her in, attempting to look sure of herself.
“Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak to you”, she announced, giving the young teen a little nudge towards me. Her pale face looked at me in fear as she tried to retreat. But our sub-leader wouldn’t allow it. So Koharu cautiously walked closer to the bed, her skinny frame shaking slightly. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, she whispered, her tears dripping down steadily. I was astonished by the words that left her 13-year-old mouth. She was forgiving me?! Perhaps she was more mature than I gave her credit for. “Thank you, Koharu-chan”, I beamed as long-overdue drops slipped from my eyes, “I’m so sorry this happened” I lifted my hands up and went to grab hers, to show her that everything would be ok. But as soon as I began to move towards her, that look of apprehension flashed in her pupils. She shuffled backwards, away from me. I dropped my arms down, trying to play off this awkward and agonizing moment.
It is going to be very hard to regain her trust. But I am willing to do anything and everything in my power to get this little girl to believe in me again.
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Being an addict is hard enough when you don't think that you are...but it's even harder when you are like Yossi, where ARE aware of your problem, yet have trouble controlling it. When you're the latter, the guilt and self-loathing tortures you more than any physical discomfort could ever do.
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woo~ this was worth the wait!
i kinda feel bad for yossui now... it must be heart wrenching knowing that your compulsion kicks in and you end up hurting the people who least deserve to get hurt... and you can't help it...
... rika's not a victim? ... hmm...
i don't know if i should be happy or not...
anyway... thanks for the update! keep it up!
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Aaand now I'm back to not being mad at Yossy and feeling sorry for her again :lol:
Hey look, she did have people with her, just they don't know about it :(
It's hard enough for Yossy to think about what it is she did in the first place, but to then here the poor young victim say she wants to forgive her and yet she can still see how scared of her Koha is, it must break her heart :cry: I wouldn't be surprised if she feels she doesn't deserve it... she must hate herself, hurting people like this and not really being able to help it :cry:
@tru: You should be happy Rika isn't a victim... Just coz she wasn't a victim doesn't mean she hasn't reaped the benefits from Yossy's condition like Miki has :twisted: And at least then she can enjoy it and have a choice :P
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So I read this last night but didn't get around until today to comment XD I was so tired when I read it
Anyway,
I feel really bad for Yossy because she was completely aware of what she was doing but she couldn't stop herself
that would so suck
You know you are doing something completely wrong but you can't help it
It's horrible
Stupid melons making Yossy drink...
XD
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aww :(
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oh, Koha and Yossies POV. cool. XD
thanks.
moar stalking to be done~ :lol: :twisted:
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“You shoulda seen the look I gave everyone this morning when I came down with Koharu”, she giggled, “I swear I could see into their minds” I laughed as she described her latest adventure with her death glare.
Ah.. Miki. :lol:
I dropped my arms down, trying to play off this awkward and agonizing moment.
Poor Yossie. It must be really hard for her. The others she hurt would've surely felt terrible, but I bet she'd be the one most in pain. Doing those stuff and having consciousness while doing it but not having control. Ah. Tis sucks.
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Ok just quick rep since I'm at my friends home due to renovation at my house XD
Yeah...well...Yossy shouldn't drink that's for sure and that's basically the biggest mistake she did :mon nyah: She knew what she was risking...so huge minus for her...yet I hope her relationship with Koha will get back to normal cos surely she regrets what she has done :)
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After reading parts 2 and 3 of Hero I really don't know what I would do if I were in Koharu's situation. I bet you're thinking why in the whole I would think of myself in your fic's premise XD Well, I just felt that the writing is so good I can imagine it happening in real life. All in all, this fic is quite heavy but I'm glad you wrote it. GJ! :)
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@JFC: I feel so bad about making Yossy the bad guy now!! :lol: But I will work on making her better.
@tru_harmony: Trust me, you should be happy. :P Because no one should have to go through this.
@lollipopgirl: I must admit, Yossy is kinda going through the whole self-loathing thing. It pains me to do this but gotta keep up the story! :P
@heyyouhiya: Yeah, it's tough. But they will get through it, eventually. Yeah, damn those Melons!! :lol: But they didn't know so we can't blame them too much....but it's fun to say "DAMN MELONS~" XD
@kRisZ: Indeed. :(
@ringo-hime: XD
@zay05ohayou: Miki will always be Miki. :lol: I agree that Yossy probably feels the worst.
@peti-chan: Yeah, she is kinda at fault too. She does have the strength, however, to work towards mending the broken bond between her and Koha.
@lil_hamz: Personally, I don't know either. :lol: It's still a mystery to me how I even came up with this idea.... :P Thank you!!! :heart:
OK, I'm sorry to my readers...but I'm putting Hero on hiatus. I promise I will finish it eventually but school and my other fics are hindering both my time and ideas. I don't know when I'll get back to this. But I'm personally hoping it's soon. I'm having trouble thinking of what to do with this now. :lol: What's going to happen???? I have no idea!!
So, please wait for me and Hero!! It'll be back~ :heart:
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....but it's fun to say "DAMN MELONS~" XD
hmm, I say that all the time XD... wait, what!? :P
Ganbarimasu Hero! :heart:
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wow! just wow! this story was sad, and yet very well written!
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@Nee-chan: Excuse me? XD
@shadowolf8: Aww, thank you so much!!! :heart:
OMFG, it's a Christmas miracle! Yup, I finally got the inspiration to continue this. So for now, hiatus is over. Not sure how long it'll last though. :P
Merry Christmas to all and enjoy! :heart:
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Hero: Part 4
“Please stop…”, whimpered Koharu, her body curling like a shrimp in the bed next to me. She rolled back and forth, attempting to escape the phantom hands that tortured her. It was only the second time tonight, which meant that she was slowly but surely recovering. It was still heart-wrenching and a little scary to watch her and I wanted to calm her down but making any sort of physical contact while she’s in this state was the last thing I’d do.
So I simply slid out of the bed, crouching on the floor until she stopped thrashing around. By now, she had woken herself up. I could tell because her little hands gripped the sheets tightly and the faint sound of labored breathing and sobs flowed from her dry lips. “Koharu-chan, it’s ok now”, I mumbled, slowly approaching her shaking form. Her hold on the blankets loosened, my voice allowing her feeling of fear to dissipate, bit by bit.
Her skinny arms reached up towards me and I embraced her, allowing her head to rest on my shoulder. “I…I’m sorry for w-w-waking you up a-again”, she whimpered into my neck, her breath tickling my skin. “Don’t be sorry”, I consoled her, “it’s no one’s fault.” I rocked her tenderly for a few more minutes before carefully lowering her onto the mattress. “Go back to sleep, ok?”, I smiled, cupping her cheek in my hand. That small smile worked its way onto her tired face. “Night-night”, she murmured before letting her eyelids slip down.
“She’s getting better”, I declared to myself, in my living room where I sat. I didn’t want to bother Koharu after she had just gotten to sleep and I wasn’t very tired in the first place. My mind was racing, jumping back and forth between the possibilities of Koharu’s future.
Would she ever recover enough to go home or would she end up living with me forever?
Her and Yocchan’s relationship was severely broken….could it ever be repaired?
“This is just the beginning”, I sighed, running my fingers through my hair. Flinging myself further onto the couch, I grabbed a throw pillow and pulled it to my chest. “Do your best, Koharu”, I prayed, squeezing my eyes shut to keep the tears from slipping out.
I awoke to the sun shining onto my face and it took a second for me to remember where I was. Slowly rising from the couch, I stretched my arms over my head and yawned. I made a beeline for the bedroom, adjusting my pants on the way.
When I peered into the sunlit room, I was blown away by how gorgeous the young girl lying there looked. Sun caressed her pale skin, making it look like a shot right out of a photobook. I just stood there in awe for a few moments, taking in her youth and effortless beauty.
But in those same few seconds, I made an important decision about Koharu’s future: I was going to call Yocchan’s other “victims” and have them talk to her.
She desperately needed to see that she wasn’t alone. So as I walked into the roomy kitchen of my apartment, I grabbed my cell phone off the counter and dialed four familiar numbers.
“Fujimoto-senpai?”, I heard her small, groggy voice mumble as I got off the phone. “I’m in here”, I replied, secretly not so happy that she woke up. I was really starting to regret my decision. What if she resented me for doing this? Then who will take care of her? But as she sleepily made her way towards me, I violently shoved any doubts into a drawer and locked it deep in my mind.
“Morning, Koharu”, I grinned uneasily, “I’m having some people over after work and I’d like you to meet them”
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It's pretty short but I hope it's ok~ :lol:
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Hero: Part 4
Damn, it's got to be hard to Koharu to keep going through it over and over again each night. :( :cry:
I made an important decision about Koharu’s future: I was going to call Yocchan’s other “victims” and have them talk to her.
That's a big step, one that could have a couple of possible outcomes (possibly good, possibly VERY bad), depending on who these "other victims" are.
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4 victims, that's kinda a lot ne *wonders who are the 4*
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Man... Koharu is reaaaaly traumatized... :cry:
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hmmm...
^yeah... the kid's mortally wounded... i suddenly remembered this person i know who had gone through something similiar... it's really hard to recover... especially in this case because it's someone she trusted and looked up to...
hmmm... people coming over after work... ... ? interesting...
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When I peered into the sunlit room, I was blown away by how gorgeous the young girl lying there looked. Sun caressed her pale skin, making it look like a shot right out of a photobook. I just stood there in awe for a few moments, taking in her youth and effortless beauty.
I really liked this bit. It totally described Koharu as I know and like her :)
Hopefully the people Miki want her to meet are gonna somehow help her get over this horrible experience. It's not a good thing going through life with this shadow always being a part of it :(
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Found it! :cow:
Found it! :otomerika:
*Printing in Progress* :tama-mad:
I am so gonna lie down while reading this. :drool:
Expect a thorough review tomorrow. O0
And some cover pics, I think...
(http://www.binkyou.net/files/v7ibhyezc0k1jw0m3wjr.jpg)
(http://www.binkyou.net/files/686440i6wcbhm42nnnur.jpg)
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
:wriggly:
Adorable, aren't they?
Somehow if Morning Musume was an anime, they would be a hit...What with the senpai adoration and all.
Then I would talk about the subtext of the two that started since day one that Koharu appeared on Hello Morning.
I remember it like yesterday as i watched Mikitty restrain herself from touching Koha-chan on television.
And what was with Koharu that time really, standing right in front of the groping demon like that. It was like a rabbit snuggling in with a hungry lion.
Seriously I am praising the restraint Miki had that time.
Now for Hero....
There, on the couch under Yocchan, lay an absolutely terrified looking Kusumi Koharu.
The first thing that popped into my mind at this time was that (forgive my perverted mind) koha-chan was between Yossie's legs - if you know what I mean. :ptam-psst:
No one does that to me. NO ONE.
I could seriously see a volcano that's been dormant for years waking up.
ZOMG! A Yossie/Mikitty fight! That is one fight I wouldn't wanna be around when it happens. poor Koharu-chan. :stoned:
Yossie - the bad guy! :on blackhole:
Cannot comprehend! :bleed eyes:
But I guess someone had to take the role and who better than the leader to take responsibilities...
*Demon Eyes prays for Yossie* :mon pray2:
That was the scariest night of my life.
First of all, I give you an award for writing the Koharu perspective on this.
I can't name all the emotions I went through while reading this chapter. But I know damn well that by the end, I was sicker than Yossie is supposed to be while drunk on twenty bottles of Gin. for sure.
She did something else (I’m not sure what) to my chest and it made me cry out.
I so understand this part. I remember when I fist touched myself after I accidentally stumbled upon my parents' porn. I pulled my hand away so fast and I think I swore never to do that again.
five years later when I was 16, I tried again.
So I feel the reason for crying out not from pleasure.
The bed was like lying on a cloud but not as good as when Fujimoto-san crawled onto the bed next to me and wrapped her arms around me. She rocked me to sleep, whispering to me as I held on to her.
Demon Eyes: Freezer-sama, what does the jealousy meter say about my jealousy power?
Freezer: Over 9000! And Climbing!
DemonEyes: Jeezzasu!
I wanna experience this cloud No.17 or whatever it is too! :mon hanky:
When I woke up, Fujimoto-san had her arm around me. I smiled because I had honestly never seen her so affectionate and nice. I watched her until she woke up.
Freezer: over 20,000 and climbing!
Demon Eyes: ....
What does Miki-sama's morning face look like? What does it looks like?!!!
Damn you lucky rascal! I know you've been through hell but but....! :mon hanky: :mon hanky:
So Fujimoto-san made me some toast for breakfast. It was delicious!
Freezer-sama: O...Over 45,000 and climbimg! :mon oshitwc:
Demon Eyes: :mon uggh: Fuuuuuuck!
Mikitty's breakfast! Koha-chan you little demon! You are scheming us aren't you?!
We were in the lobby when I was yanked towards the wall and Fujimoto-san looked me in the eyes.
Correction: We were in the lobby when I was yanked towards the wall and Fujimoto-san covered me up with her body gluing to mine from hair to mouth to chest to toes, shielding me from view. And I loved it!
:mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2:
Stop it damn it. Just stop it Demon Eyes! :knee:
Was I sexually active? No.
:mon evillaff:
Did it feel good when she touched me? NO!
:hiakhiakhiak: :tantrum:
“I want Fujimoto-senpai”
Ten fans to Kusumi-san please!
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Why did I do this? I’ve ruined yet another life.
Dear Yossie, never drink and drive(Ahem)
I really feel for Yossie in this fic. She is so responsible to take on the role of a bad guy. And one of that kind too!
Oh, shit. That feeling was coming back.
Must...Not...think!
I picked her up into my arms and we headed to the suite.
How come Koharu was surprised by Miki carrying her when Yossie had already done it?!
Suddenly, I felt someone’s eyes on my back.
Mikitty glare! So fierce it can be felt by even the most drunk person!
All fear the Mikitty glare.
My mind seemed to ease a bit after talking to Miki. She always knows what to say and how to say it. No bullshit and no sweet talk.
All Hail Miki!
I love you Miki-sama.
I love you strawb3rrykream!
Long live "Hero".
“Please stop…”, whimpered Koharu, her body curling like a shrimp in the bed next to me.
I am sorry Koha-chan but may you please have more nightmares!
I wanna see more gentle Miki as well.
she whimpered into my neck, her breath tickling my skin.
And so it begins!
or would she end up living with me forever?
Doesn't sound so bad to me Miki-sama!
When I peered into the sunlit room, I was blown away by how gorgeous the young girl lying there looked. Sun caressed her pale skin, making it look like a shot right out of a photobook. I just stood there in awe for a few moments, taking in her youth and effortless beauty.
Oh! How the mighty fall!
I pictured this moment and let me tell you I feel sorry for my bed!
Doh! Demon Eyesssss! :sweatdrop:
But as she sleepily made her way towards me, I violently shoved any doubts into a drawer and locked it deep in my mind.
In my follow up dream I saw Koha-chan give Miki-sama a good morning kiss.
Kyan! :mon crazyinlove:
I have utterly and helplessly fallen in love with this fic and pairing.
I kind of already loved it, the Senpai/Kouhai thing was really cute, especially when I saw those two acting that way in a few of the H!M episodes but his story....
Strawb3rryKream....rabu!
And finally,
“Yossy has a disorder in which she cannot control her libido”
:mon wtf:
“You were lucky though”, she continued, “You weren’t penetrated”
:mon wtf: :mon worklate: :mon ghost:
You...it can't be.
Strawb3rryKream-san, this fic wouldn't have anything to do with that banner that goes something like -
JPH!P Where those girls can sometimes be boys.
- Does it?!
Yossie...Libido...Penetration...
Futa 'Shining Musume' sense, tingling! :mon money:
I found a gold mine.
Hero is gold!
Thank you so much Strawb3rryKream-kun.
thank you.
Eagerly awaiting updates and more Koharu POVs.
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Ok, I usually do reviews when I update but I cannot ignore your comments. XD First of all, thank you so much for the covers!!! They are sooo pretty, especially the second one.
I'm glad you have a rather positive look on this story. :P Koha wasn't EXACTLY between Yossy's legs, at least not in the way I think you are thinking. She was being straddled, yes, but nothing THAT bad was going on. I couldn't do that to Koha, really I couldn't. The fight was fun to write. :grin: Koha's POV was easier than I thought it would be. We are close in age so I really just thought about how I would feel in that sort of situation. When Koha cried out, I was thinking more from fear and shock, rather than pleasure but ok. :D It's fun to make Miki sweet sometimes~ :heart: "Where those girls can sometimes be boys", wasn't my intention, it was more of "finger" penetration rather than THAT kind. *blushes* But it's fun to see you read between the lines and create your own sort of story. I really wasn't going for a sexual thing between Miki and Koha, just more of a relationship in which Miki protects the younger because she knows someone has to after what she's been through.
Thank you very much for all the kind words. I'll try my best to update soon. :heart:
I'm a girl, btw.....so the "-kun" is kinda XD Unless you think of me as masculine like that.... :shocked:
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XD First of all, thank you so much for the covers!!! They are sooo pretty, especially the second one.
Eh heh. Thank you. I hadn't even gone over the first ten line and I was already in Photoshop.
I'm glad you have a rather positive look on this story. :P Koha wasn't EXACTLY between Yossy's legs, at least not in the way I think you are thinking. She was being straddled, yes, but nothing THAT bad was going on. I couldn't do that to Koha, really I couldn't.
I know strawb3rry-chan, I know. I was just making light of the situation really. :sweatdrop:
The fight was fun to write. :grin:
though it wasn't a fight really. What with Miki p'owning Yossie. But she was drunk so...
Koha's POV was easier than I thought it would be. We are close in age so I really just thought about how I would feel in that sort of situation.
OMG! :(
I just damaged you haven't I? :cry:
I better read the whole introduction thread before shooting my mouth off! :oops:
When Koha cried out, I was thinking more from fear and shock, rather than pleasure but ok. :D
I guessed that but my reviews were all crack so don't mind them much. Like I said, I cried out too the first time. it wasn't very good feeling I tell ya! :'(
"Where those girls can sometimes be boys", wasn't my intention, it was more of "finger" penetration rather than THAT kind. *blushes*
Again with me and my big mouth. I was just fooling really. I know that is what was going on. no one has ever attempted that fit and I don't think that even I would actually.
But it's fun to see you read between the lines and create your own sort of story. I really wasn't going for a sexual thing between Miki and Koha, just more of a relationship in which Miki protects the younger because she knows someone has to after what she's been through.
I guessed just as much judging from Mikitty's reaction at Yossie's actions. but it''s inevitable that if this goes on, them living together and all that, they are bound to get closer, at least on Koharu's side of things where she will grow fond of her hero.
You have to admit Miki was like as knight In Shining armor there, No? :lol:
Also that thing with Miki and the Wall and Koharu, again just cracks. I am actually not into high rated stories. I kiss or snuggle is plenty. I keep the heavy stuff for dreamland.
Thank you very much for all the kind words. I'll try my best to update soon. :heart:
I'm a girl, btw.....so the "-kun" is kinda XD Unless you think of me as masculine like that.... :shocked:
Again, so sorry. I really hope I didn't damage you...much.
hopefully you didn't get the Shining Musume part... :pen_cry:
Please take your time. I love this story so much I can wait for it forever.
Definitely My No.1 at the moment. :on GJ:
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Aw Demon Eyes, you're so cute *pets you* :lol:
Your comments were really entertaining to read XD
Don't worry about damaging her, she's already seen (read) too much *covers imouto's eyes*
LOLZ at the Shining Musume part, she better not get it! :P
"Where those girls can sometimes be boys", wasn't my intention, it was more of "finger" penetration rather than THAT kind. *blushes*
Again with me and my big mouth. I was just fooling really. I know that is what was going on. no one has ever attempted that fit and I don't think that even I would actually.
Correction: Check out the perv forum (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=1002.0)... SHE'S DA MAN!!!
And Kream of Strawb3rry, if Demon Eyes' comments don't make u wanna get back to the next chapter of Hero, I don't know what will! (a cookie maybe?) :heart:
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Aw Demon Eyes, you're so cute *pets you* :lol:
Mou you are embarrassing me lollipopgirl.... :mon innocent:
Your comments were really entertaining to read XD
I expected a bit of bashing so I wanted to make her feel like her idea is very well appreciated, which really is.
Don't worry about damaging her, she's already seen (read) too much *covers imouto's eyes*
But I bet you my fortune not as much as I. I will save the innocence left. And....Imouto/!
You couldn't be her Anee---or are you talking about the respected kind of Onee-sama? Or is it Onii-chan. it better not be Onii-chan.
Or else Freezer-sama is gonna go mad if you have such a great imouto.... :twisted:
LOLZ at the Shining Musume part, she better not get it! :P
I am far gone, aren't I. :sweatdrop:
Correction: Check out the perv forum (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=1002.0)... SHE'S DA MAN!!!
I decided to check it out. I have a feeling my pants will be doing the dropping. :inlove:
And Kream of Strawb3rry, if Demon Eyes' comments don't make u wanna get back to the next chapter of Hero, I don't know what will! (a cookie maybe?) :heart:
A Cookie it is....Here you go you nice red sweet and juicy little thing.... :mon love:
Lollipopgirl: Damn it Demon Eyes! Stop thinking of my imouto like that or else... :mon mad:
Demon Eyes: Go...Gomen lollipopgirl... :mon curtain:
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Oh no, I figured you were joking~ XD But I thought I'd better clarify just in case you weren't. Hehe, don't worry about my age...most ppl don't. :grin: I'm 15, if you'd like to know. :D
Damn, I don't get the shining thing... XD OMFG, I get it now!!!! :shocked: It's that ecchi Momusu parody manga, huh? Even I think that's a little wrong....As for my Nee-chan, we aren't blood-related but we might as well be. We met each other and found we have ALOT in common, even the same first name... :P So we basically go about our lives as sisters through the internet. XD She's right, though, I've probably seen/read/wrote more than I should at my age. *munches cookie*
@Nee-chan: KNEW YOU WERE HERE!!! :P Dai made a comment about loving his admin powers cuz he could see you on. I never said I wasn't gonna continue.... :P You of all ppl should know that I'm having trouble with it but I'm not giving up. School is just taking priority for once in my life. I'm really trying to work hard. But you know that I devote most of my free time to writing~ :heart: But a cookie would be nice too.... :drool:
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Oh no, I figured you were joking~ XD But I thought I'd better clarify just in case you weren't. Hehe, don't worry about my age...most ppl don't. :grin: I'm 15, if you'd like to know. :D
ARE YOU 15???!!!!!! OMG xD
To young for me, I will wait until your 16 xDDDDDDD *kidding* *kidding* *gomen*
Well well every one here is very young or it's just me that I feel old xD
I'm waiting for Hero 5 =D
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Hehe, yeah, I am. XD You won't have to wait long, my b-day's in April. :P I don't think you're that old. I'm working on it!! Ganbarimasu! :grin:
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Hehe, yeah, I am. XD You won't have to wait long, my b-day's in April. :P I don't think you're that old. I'm working on it!! Ganbarimasu! :grin:
Yahooo!
I am younger than you. I am younger than you!
My B-Day is in May so even if you are a decade young than me, you were borm earlier in the year so technically, I am younger!
Boohoo....Logics!!!! ^_^
Sorry, I am always attracted to this thread now whenever you post in it and I just can't leave without saying something...err...stupid *sweats*
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See... You are so young -_- ... Fresh Meat =D
*kidding xD*
Well well Hope you update soon cause I wanna know what happend with Yossie and Koha.. and I hope you put some YoMiki cause I'm fan ~ xDDDD
See you ~
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Even though this fic hasn't been updated for awhile, I wanted it to be the first one I posted a review for on the boards because it's the one I found most interesting.
(Gosh, people are going to see this post and rejoice, thinking that there's an update... and then hate me for raising their hopes, aren't they? D: )
I love the glorious angstiness of it but the best part is Miki-sama being Koharu's hero. Also the selection of the extremely hyper and childishly naive Koharu being the victim here is especially effective. I doubt any other member would have worked half as well. The surprise of the others when Miki actually allows Koharu's clingyness made me laugh. Poor Koharu though, if Miki doesn't stop being so nice, a crush is a bit inevitable isn't it (because, c'mon, it's Miki-sama)? Followed by the even more stinging rejection.
hu hu... anyway, loved it and I'm going to go try find the other things you've written now. :D
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aw no update? I happen to like this story even if it's a little dark and angst. I like those two very much. lol I've read this before, sorry I didn't comment. :sweatdrop: I'm not really good at commenting and they're usually short like "great work. keep it up." and I don't want to leave it short like that. So I normally lurk on stories, but I do like this one and hope you can update it sometime. =)