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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: sweeety on October 08, 2008, 06:09:37 AM

Title: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: sweeety on October 08, 2008, 06:09:37 AM

Using the Yuuyami method of writing. A Yomiki story based on the movie of the same name. If you wanna know what happens just go down to blockbuster, rent a copy of "If Only" and replace Jennifer Love Hewitt with Fujimoto Miki and the guy with Yoshizawa Hitomi. That's pretty much it. Sure a lot is different but a lot of it's the same.

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: firemore on October 08, 2008, 07:17:10 AM

yay yomiki fic,
omg miki got hit, hopefully she'll be ok

i would like the fic to be longer hehe so i can have more yomikiness

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: Rhysky on October 08, 2008, 12:06:40 PM

oh no.... how can it happen to miki....???

i dun believe it man....

sweeety... u make the story so sad in the first part... sob sob...  :k-sad:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: kRisZ on October 08, 2008, 05:57:51 PM

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No one could make up something like that (other than me, the writer

damn  :lol:

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----------flashback------------

-------------------------------End of Flashback---------------------------------------------

 XD


updateupdateupdate

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: hotohori on October 08, 2008, 08:18:30 PM

My emotion till now ...
- Miki dead  :stoned:
- Yossie cried   :OMG:
- Yossie imagined Miki  :pleeease: 
- Miki  :grr:..Miki is alive  :onioncheer:
- Yossie went 3 days back  :dunno:
- anyway..Miki is alive  :onioncheer:
- Yomiki spending a sweet day together  :luvluv1:
...end of report  :P
Yossie please save Mikitty  :pleeease:

waiting for the next chapter   :grin:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on October 09, 2008, 06:00:44 AM

 :cry: :cry: :cry: that's so sad!!!

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: firemore on October 09, 2008, 06:11:25 AM

aw miki cried for yossie

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: kRisZ on October 09, 2008, 04:40:39 PM

ouches

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: hotohori on October 09, 2008, 08:03:00 PM

 :on speedy: :on speedy:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: hotohori on October 14, 2008, 08:23:08 PM

Yomiki YAY !!! :wriggly:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: kRisZ on October 20, 2008, 07:53:56 AM

another 'ouches' chapter but sweet at the same time, I only hope the ending won't make me cry

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: hotohori on October 22, 2008, 04:36:36 PM

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     She kept it up all night long and by the early morning hours she had positively etched the very fibre of her being into her memory, her skin and her soul.

  :on bleed:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: hotohori on October 23, 2008, 09:53:53 AM

aAAAAAHHHHHH !!!!!!!!  :on blackhole:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: kRisZ on October 25, 2008, 02:43:38 PM

 :scared:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: hotohori on December 01, 2008, 10:34:16 PM

Ok now I´ll tell you how much I hate you  :angry:
 How could you beginn the story with Miki dying
and then end with Yossie dying  :cry: a..nd then they aren´t  :banghead: 
...They are ALIVE !!!!!!! :muffin:

I LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!  :wriggly:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: kRisZ on December 04, 2008, 02:31:12 PM

miki on couch... yossie on bed  :mon huh:

Title: Re: If Only - YoMiki
Post by: kRisZ on December 06, 2009, 01:39:36 PM

Thanks  :)