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Title: Paper Trails (Chapter 8: Ms. Officer)
Post by: takagakifan on October 31, 2008, 03:38:57 AM
PAPER TRAILS


Prologue


*flashback from a few drinks hours ago*

"So we're really gonna do this"

"Yup"

"We're nuts"

*end of flashback*


Risa took another sip of her drink.

I have a bad feeling about this

She drinks again

Nope.  The plan is perfect there's no reason to worry.... is there?

She looks at the bottle in her hand.  Her eyes widen, she panics

Ohmygod!  What did i just agree to! Now that I think about it... this plan is ridiculous! Its never going to work!  What the heck was I thinking!

She rubs her temples and looks around finding on both Reina and Sayu passed out on the floor.  She cursed them under her breath then began to pick up the empty beer bottles scattered across the apartment.  

Its too dark in here... I can't see a thing

She had forgotten why she had agreed to this plan of theirs in the first place.  The reason she gave into her desperation.  The reason why they were sitting a dark apartment... she remembered as soon as she flipped the switch for the lights.  Nothing.  The lights had been cut off.  Gaki's usual animated face went blank as she grabbed another bottle and sat down next to her passed out comrades.  She chugged it down then cracked open a new one, slowly drowning out her panicky thoughts with each gulp.  Tonight she was drinking herself senseless, because tomorrow they were gonna rob a bank
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something i'm working on i'll have the first chapter up soon... so this is kinda different from what i usually write (caffinated nonsense :P) and its longer too YAY! which means i get to torture y'all with my horrid writing for chapters  MWHAHAHAHAHA! *chokes* well then uh  :glasses: peace!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: JFC on October 31, 2008, 06:14:18 AM
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. :o
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: meowz on October 31, 2008, 05:08:05 PM
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because tomorrow they were gonna rob a bank

Well that totally caught me, wasn't expecting that.
Gakisan involved in a bank heist? Now that I gotta see  XD
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on November 01, 2008, 05:23:41 AM
You had me at "We're nuts." XD
I'm game!!!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: victorgr21 on November 01, 2008, 06:33:05 AM
Sounds interesting, cant wait to see what happens.
 :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: ringo-hime on November 01, 2008, 01:40:08 PM
LOL. wat bank XD hahaha.
cnt wait ~ !!!!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: takagakifan on November 04, 2008, 06:30:31 AM
I'm glad you guys enjoyed it... sorry I wanted to get this chapter done soon but stupid school kept distracting me... kinda rush through this sorry if it sucks

Chapter 1: Cash Flow
~~1 month before the robbery~~

Reina's Pov

F**k its cold

She sighs as she glances at watch again.

He's late... f**kin potheads are never on f**kin time

Just when she decided to leave to leave a car pulled up; the driver reached over and rolled his window down.

"Hey Baby"

She rolled her eyes, looked away , and continued walking.

"Ya look cold, come have a sit in Daddy's car"

Reina stopped dead in tracks and walked up to the window.

"Daddy? Baby? You got a lot of nerve rolling up on my spot and speaking to me like that.  Ya must wanna get yo ass beat ya perverted old man."

"Nah Reina I just don't like to see ya so ummm... Whats da word pathetic.  Why bother wit dis small time thang?  Hmm?  Listen join ma crew and I'll hook ya up"he winked

"I'm not selling coke Ricky"

"Haha don't act all high and mighty now Reina I know ya need money" he licked his lips as her sized her up

"I'm making it" she growled

"Listen here ya lil trick I afford ya one hell of an oppurtunity. Okay!  No one rejects Ricky! Know yo place!"

"F**k off Ricky"

She gave him the finger and walked off.  Ricky opened the door walked up next to her and forced her to face him.

Son of a...Who the hell do he think... Aww hell nah

She kneed him in the groin with all her might.  Smiling as he fell down to the ground in pure agony.  She dug through his pockets

"Tried to warn you but Noooo had to go running your mouth"

she took out his cash and the keys to his car

"You were right though.  It is too cold for me to be standing out here like this"

She got in the car and closed the door.  After putting on her seat belt and readjusting the mirrors she yelled out the window.

"By the way if you see my guy, tell him I'm charging twice as much for the inconvenience of having to wait for his stoner ass"

she sped off

"No one F**ks with Reina"
***
Risa's Pov

"Alright then I'm off"

"Bye Risa see you tomorrow"

"Bye Guys"

She left her job smiling brightly as she walked home.  She was about four blocks away from the one bedroom apartment she shared with two roommates, when a gust of cool air hit her.  She shivered slightly and hugged her jacket closer to her body. 

Almost there

Once she finally reached her apartment building she called for the elevator.  Unfortunately, it never came.

Must be out of order again

She sighed not looking forward to climbing the steps to their floor.  Just thinking about it made her want to cry.  Her body ached from work and she had so much to do once she got home.

Whyyy!

She stared at the amount of steps she had to conquer and immediately felt defeated

No it can't won't end like this

She took a deep breath

Besides its good exercise anyway

Several minutes later she unlocks the apartment door and collapses on to the couch.  She glanced at the time 5:35

She's late

Minutes turned to hours as Risa slowly fell asleep waiting for Reina to return.
***
Reina's Pov

She parked the car across the street from her apartment.  Once inside she pushed "up" button for the elevator.  It never lit up, trying to be optimistic she put her ear to the hoping to hear it coming down.  Silence.

"F**k its broken again?!"

She screamed in outrage; startling the other residents in the lobby.  She turned and gave them the "watchu looking at" face before yanking the door for the stairwell open.  She cursed the elevator, maintenance crew, apartment, the inventor of the staircase, and so on.  Soon the cursing was replaced by gasp for air as she made it to her door.  She opened it and slumped down on the couch ignoring the sleeping Risa
***
Sayu's Pov

Sayu was sleeping peacefully in her bed when her dreams were interrupted by Risa and Reina's conversation.

"You're late"

"Yeah"

"Why"

"Cuz I am Geez"

Too loud

"If you had a regular job you would be home on time... I could get you a job where I work-"

"Do I look like I wanna be bagging groceries for 5.50 an hour!!! I make ten times as much on the street in five hours"

Sayu tossed and turned in her bed tried putting a pillow over her ears to drown out the noise but the position was too uncomfortable.

Just ignore it... they have to stop talking eventually
Whatever have to wake up anyhow
Hmm what should I wear


"Why don't you then"

"Cuz man!  This goddamn recession is messing with my business like hard status...times are rough"

"What kind of nonsense-"

Just then Sayumi walked out yawning.

"Did my date call yet"

"Yeah he's been waiting outside for 15 minutes" Risa replied

"Why don't you ever get on Sayu's case... Just look at what shes wearing"

"At least she's actually making money... but god Sayu cover up"

The bunny had walked out in a black dress that left very little to the imagination.

"Don't sweat the technique..." She said sticking at her tongue "Bye guys don't wait up"

Let the games begin

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Boy was that a long chapter i hope I didn't scare anyone off

P.S Comments appreciated
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: JFC on November 04, 2008, 07:35:18 AM
Oh mang...they're turning tricks! :o
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: lil_hamz on November 04, 2008, 09:34:22 AM
I'm HOOKED!!! When is that new chapter gonna appear?? I NEED TO READ MORE~~~!!!!! :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: Sukoshi on November 05, 2008, 11:49:38 AM
loving the premise~ I think this is going to be very exciting!  Can't wait for more~
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: lollipopgirl on November 05, 2008, 01:26:08 PM
Maaaan, I'm lovin' the sound of this :w00t:
Hmmm, judging by ur fave pairing, I'ma guess TakaGaki will have to come up somewhere in this, right?
Robbing bank, so Ai could be a cop who falls for the bad guy (ala D.E.B.S :drool: )  ooooor a hostage that steals the heart of the (not so) scary bankrobber :mon inluv: OR something completely different XD hell, maybe not at all, but I hope that isn't the case :(

I really like Risa in the prologue but in chapter 1 she pissed me off, lighten up Gaki-san! :P Reina is freakin' win though... Really love her character and I think you've done a great job with her coz I could so picture her swearing and beating up the stupid guy :rofl:

MOAR MOAR~!!!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Prologue)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on November 05, 2008, 03:37:11 PM
WHOOOOOOO~~~~~ :lol: I feel kinda bad for being so happy while they are barely making ends meet. :D
So Reina and Sayu are prostitutes? :lol: And Gaki has a regular job. I kinda love how Reina beat the shit out of Ricky!!!

@Nee-chan: OMG I love D.E.B.S!!!!!! :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin
Post by: takagakifan on November 09, 2008, 01:35:08 AM
Am i that obvious?  :err: j/k of course takagaki is going to appear eventually!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
Prostitutes  :shock: why didn't i think of that :farofflook: Nope Risa does have a legit job(trying to set a good example XD) Reina is a sells marijuana and Sayu well Sayu's "profession" is explained in this chapter.  Oh and DEBS = one of the cutest most funniest movies I've ever seen
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Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin



Sayu's Pov

Sayumi exited the apartment building as her "date" stepped out of the car.

"Damn!  you look good girl"

I know "Aww really? thank you!" Sayu replied

"Yup a true dime piece"

EW she smiled "Wow that's a nice car"

"I know right!"

He proceeded to ramble on about the specifications of the car as Sayu nodded politely.

God!  All i said was 'its a nice car'...  Its not that special

"Shouldn't we get going" She stated in the sweetest voice she could

"Oh right!  Hop in sugar I'll show how fast this v6 engine can go"

"Sounds like fun" She said sarcastically

On the way to the "place" he continued his monologue about the car, his job, and how he makes "crazy money"

Liar

She smiled, mmm'd and ahh'd at the right places, meanwhile she sized him up

Fake watch... Dirty fingernails... wrinkled shirt... his blazer's color is fading...  Nope you obviously don't make alot of money.
Good effort though, if I was really as naive as I appear, I might have believed you


"Wow that's amazing" she lied "Your soo awesome I must admit its a little intimidating"

"Haha don't be, I'm still a regular guy" he said smiling

He probably thought she was impressed by him.  But Ms. Michishige always does her homework before selecting a target

Has a gambling problem, spent most of the money his grandmother left him when she died, no particular skills, lives out of his car...  an easy prey

They finally reached their destination, some random sketchy strip club.  They walked around to the side entrance and he yelled the password into the door.  A very large man opened the door and led them to a card game already in progress. 

This is going to be too easy

As usual she pretended to be a novice, losing a few hands here and there.  Then suddenly winning, blaming it on beginners luck.

"Wow! this is may be my lucky night" she exclaimed in fake fascination

She went all in and purposefully lose again.  however she appeared to be on the verge of tears as she looked at her date/target

"I don't have anymore chips" she said while giving her infamous sad bunny eyes

"Alright I betting my pink slip if that's okay with you fellas...  This here is my lucky charm and i just know she gonna win big"

HAHAHA!!! Sucka! Everything is going according to plan

The cards were dealt again

"NO WAY! I so won!" she shrieked

The other players stared at her

"Opps"

She hid her cards and bit he lower lip looking sheepish

"No one's that dumb" one man muttered

"I'm calling your bluff"

"Me too"

"Same"

Gotcha

She continued like this winning hand after hand

"F**k"

"F**k this I'm out"

"F**kin rookie"

She collected her winnings including her date's pink slip and left, her "date" followed

"Baby you're not really taking my car are you" he chuckled nervously

"Don't worry babe I wouldn't do such a thing" she lied

She smiled and handed him 20 bucks

"Here go find a dancer fore us I'm feeling super friendly tonight"

He looked at her unsure

"I'll be back" she said as she hugged him

"Alright" he walked back in excited

chump

She took the car and speed away.  Sayu was the ultimate cheater, she was taught to count cards, distract players attention while sneaking in a better hand, fake tells, spot tells, pick targets.  With these skills how could she ever lose a card game.
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kinda rushed through this sorry if it sucks... going to try to get next chapter up quickly
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: ringo-hime on November 09, 2008, 04:43:26 AM
21 FTW!!!
hahaha, Sayu's a Fcuking Genius!! XD ahahaha.
their job are fun!~ >:]]

so they're robbing the bank cause maybe they went broke and ..uhm.. XD hehe.
cnt wait~ cnt wait~ :] XD
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on November 09, 2008, 05:39:27 AM
Aww, damn. I thought they were prostitutes! :twisted: Just kidding, it's probably more fun that they aren't.
Sayu=WIN~~~~~~~~ :inlove: She's too good!!! :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: lil_hamz on November 09, 2008, 05:49:58 AM
Ooohhhh I'm liking evil Sayu. Isn't she just so hawt when she's bad? XD I really enjoy reading this fic and I think you're doing a GREAT job. This chapter wasn't sucky at all :)
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: Sukoshi on November 09, 2008, 11:46:07 AM
lol Sayu's character is a "little" evil but I love it when she plays dumb...she's so cool that way XD  Can't wait to see what happens next.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: JFC on November 10, 2008, 08:03:26 AM
Sayu da PLAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! :rockon:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: slasha on November 11, 2008, 01:25:07 AM
Ahh Sayu's such a playa. I bet that guy was still waiting for her to come back.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: takagakifan on November 13, 2008, 01:21:13 AM
This is a reeeeaaly looong chapter... I think... I'm not 100% sure but maybe I was hypnotized into this by lil slice of ham... once again not sure... but i had sudden urge to update hmmm??  :dunno:

anywho... everyone seems to love Sayu AWESOME!! me likey this me likey this alot however!!! Ebil Sayu is not appearing in this chapter... well maybe alittle :twisted:
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Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique


Reina's Pov

It should not be this f**kin cold...  F**kin Global Warming

She rubbed her hands together

Another day another late ass pothead... F**kin hippies!

Today was not a good day, Ricky had informed her to the police so they've been patrolling her area ever since.  She had to move to a new location, the parking lot across the street from the bank.  It pissed her off! 

Why when I've struggling so much do I have to pass time wasting money flow in and out of that goddamn bank!

"Yo"her buyer said as he finally arrived

"Yo?" she looked at her watch 3:20pm "Your f**king 20 minutes late!"

"Whatever man, I'm here aren't I"

"Yeah price has gone up... $1 for every minute extra I had to wait... so an additional 20 bucks"

"F**k that"

"Excuse me!"

"F**k you Reina, I ain't paying shit extra, in fact I'm only giving you $20 today"

"Price is $40 ass wipe" she said getting more and more irritated

"Yeah and I want it for $20"

she walked up closer to him "$40! Don't make me repeat myself!"

"Whatever man, ever since you crossed Ricky, I'm the only one buying from you... Your lucky I'm even offering you $20, besides it no secret that you need the money...  I got options, you don't" he said with a smug grin on his face

Asshole!  I should f**kin kick his f**kin ass-- F**K! I'm so mad!-- but I do need the money

She clenched her teeth "Fine 20"

"Hehe good girl"

She threw his bag on the floor.  He smiled as he picked it up "Pleasure doing business with you" he said before running off

F**k this

Reina had never felt so upset in her whole life.  She looked across the street, glaring at the bank

F**k them

Suddenly an idea popped into her head, one that would fix all their financial woes...  She returned to that parking lot the next day, this time not to sell drugs but to watch.  She continued this routine of observing and taking notes for a few days.  Her mind was set, they could do this.

"Now how will I convince the others?"

***
Sayumi's Pov

"YOU WANNA DO WHAT!?"

"I'm right here Sayu!  Damn!  There's no reason to yell" Reina said while unclasping her ears

"Well Excuse me if I'm a little FREAKED OUT RIGHT NOW!"

"You Done"

"NO!" Sayumi replied "Here I thought you took me out to get ice cream because you missed hanging out with me! But oh ho no! Its because you want me to help you ROB A BANK!"

"Sssh Sayu! not so loud jeez, but I do miss hanging out with you"

"Right!' she rolled her eyes

"I do!"

Reina got up from the table the were sitting on and hugged Sayu tightly

I refuse to hug her back!
Nope not gonna do it


A few minutes passed and Reina was still hugging Sayu

Goddamn it!
People are starting to stare!


she sighed Fine I give up

Sayu raised her arms to hug Reina back, but just before she could finish wrapping her arms around the other, Reina instantly let go.

"Stupid cat!' Sayu mumbled

She tried to play me! ME! SayuMI!

"Aww did I make the wittle bunny blush" Reina said with a smile on her face "hehe"

Its cuz I'm frustrated! FRUSTRATED! Not cuz of you- you conceited litt- That's it! I'm soo putting honey in your bra! MWHAHAHA!

"So now that's settled" Reina said getting back to serious mode

What's settled?

"What do you think?"

Sayu closed her eyes I think it makes no motherlovin' sense-- but it is getting harder to find targets... it seems I've grown quite the reputation-- its would be too dangerous for me to play now...

"Fine"

"Awesome!"

"No, I mean fine I'll hear out your plan, not fine I'm going along with it yet"

"Okay so here's the plan"

Reina leaned in closer to Sayumi and whispered her brilliant idea into Sayu's ear.

"That plan sucks!" Sayu yelled

"What? Why" Reina exclaimed shocked at her friends reaction

"Obviously you can't do this without me" she sighed "Bring me to the bank!"

Oh what the hell, I'm in
***
Risa's Pov

Risa walked out of their bedroom to find both Reina and Sayu on the couch waiting for her.  She put on her coat, grabbed her bags, and walked away.

Reina spoke first "Risa"

"Yes"

Sayu spoke next "Mame"

"Yes?" She pressed her lips together trying hard not to laugh at their serious expressions

Reina's turn "Gaki"

"..."

"Ni-Ni?"

"What's up guys"

"Risa I hate to be the one to tell you this but... you've changed"said Reina

Sayu continued "Your bright light is diminishing"

"Your fading away"

Was this rehearsed?  Risa watched them amused "Uh huh"

"Yeah! and we miss the old bubbly you"

"Super positive and fun!" they both stuck their thumbs out in unison

"Uh huh" something's not right here

"But don't worry we found a way to turn you frown upside down"

"Alleviate your burden"

"Set you free from the stress you suffered!" Reina exclaimed rising at her seat with excitement

"What do you wan-"

"Sssh its okay we understand"

Risa stared at them, squinted her eyes she focusing in on Reina"What did you do"

"Nothing..." Reina replied "yet"

Risa put her bags down and rubbed her temples I don't like where this is going

"Listen" said Reina

"No"

"I didn't even say anything"

"Whatever it is No!"

"Wait-"

"No"

"I-"

"No"

"Buh-"

"No"

"Argh" Reina yelled in frustration

Sayu took a deep breath and said "Wewanttorobabankandwewantyoutojoininthefun"

Risa face went blank as she registered what was said "WHAT!"

Sayu giggled "Haha i had the same reaction!" Reina hit her giving her the "not-right-now" face

"NoNoNoNoNoNo! NO! What the- I can't believe you just- Reina this is your idea isn't it"

"We need the money Risa"

I know that, but robbing a bank?? Has smoking her own stuff and Sayu? Why the hell heck HELL did she agree! "We'll find a way that not that illegal, dangerous, or stupid... Times are rough but its not that bad"

"Yes it is" said Sayu "I can't find anymore marks, I barely go outside because someone may try to hurt/kill me for cheating them, Reina's not selling shit, and you don't get paid enough and even then you barely get hours.  We're starving, this place" she looked around "sucks yet we work so hard to live here!  I was not made to live like this and neither was Reina and neither were you! I'm tired! I'm tired of not having money or pretty things!  I want stuff! I need stuff!"

"Besides those people have their money insured so no harm no foul right"

It would be nice to get away... a nice villa in Florida perhaps-- Wait! No! why am I even considering this! "We could got to jail"

"We won't get caught"

"Whatever, I'm done reasoning with you people, I can't believe we're having this conversation right now!"

"Just hear us out"

"No!No!No! I'm going to work an I'm gonna act like this never happened"
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
Post by: JFC on November 13, 2008, 06:35:07 AM
Reina's Pov
I concur with the motion that Reina should've kicked that asswipe's teeth in.  :angry:



Sayumi's Pov
No one can succeed against the power of a wonky hug! :lol:



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"Okay so here's the plan"

Reina leaned in closer to Sayumi and whispered her brilliant idea into Sayu's ear.

"That plan sucks!" Sayu yelled
Reina = :mon psst:
Sayu = :mon wtf:



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"Obviously you can't do this without me" she sighed "Bring me to the bank!"

Oh what the hell, I'm in
Well, it's not quite how Reina had planned, but Sayu's in! :rockon:



Risa's Pov

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*OPENING PART WITH TANASHIGE TALKING TO RISA*
The oddball-ness of the exchange is absolute money!  :rofl:



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"Listen" said Reina

"No"

"I didn't even say anything"

"Whatever it is No!"

"Wait-"

"No"

"I-"

"No"

"Buh-"

"No"

"Argh"
Dang, that's like how I am when students want to try and get me to give them permission to do stupid shit in class instead of doing their work. :D



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"We could got to jail"

"We won't get caught"
That's what they ALL think.  :-X



Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: lil_hamz on November 13, 2008, 07:25:06 AM
Ehhhhh?!?!? The hypnotizing worked?? Hmmm Maybe I should try it on myself :hehehe: *Goes to stand in front of mirror with chain watch in hand*

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It should not be this f**kin cold...  F**kin Global Warming

I was thinking the exact same thing when I woke up today. It was pouring like crazy.

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I refuse to hug her back!
Nope not gonna do it

A few minutes passed and Reina was still hugging Sayu

Goddamn it!
People are starting to stare!

she sighed Fine I give up

Sayu raised her arms to hug Reina back, but just before she could finish wrapping her arms around the other, Reina instantly let go.

"Stupid cat!' Sayu mumbled

Shetried to play me! ME! SayuMI!

"Aww did I make the wittle bunny blush" Reina said with a smile on her face "hehe"

Its cuz I'm frustrated! FRUSTRATED! Not cuz of you- you conceited litt- That's it! I'm soo putting honey in your bra! MWHAHAHA!

This part cracked me up! :mon lmao: I hope no one noticed me slapping the table and laughing madly :sweat:

Seeing the girls speak such profanities is interesting. It reminds me of something that happened when my cousin and I were kids. My aunt grabbed a slipper and smacked her on the mouth for sprouting them. Gosh, that was one scary experience :mon wtf:   

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"Just here us out"

I think you meant ‘hear’? It’s not a big deal but I thought you might wanna know :gmon bang:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: meowz on November 13, 2008, 03:39:16 PM
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Shetried to play me! ME! SayuMI!
:rofl:!! good one there
lol you know its like, cuz the 'Sa' in Sayu's name sounds like the word for 'kill' in chinese, some taiwanese fans write her name as 'kill'you  :lol:
(sorry its a alittle off topic, but its funny anyway XD)

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"Obviously you can't do this without me" she sighed "Bring me to the bank!"
Well said Sayu, that's exactly what I thought XD


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I was not made to live like this

My god that is just SO sayu XD

Let me just say I was practically laughing through the chapter. I loved this.  :on GJ: five stars
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: takagakifan on November 13, 2008, 04:31:24 PM
opps :mon sweat: *runs off to fix*
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: KizuRai on November 14, 2008, 08:35:20 AM
absolutely loving Niigaki and Michishige in this XD

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"Listen" said Reina

"No"

"I didn't even say anything"

"Whatever it is No!"

"Wait-"

"No"

"I-"

"No"

"Buh-"

"No"

"Argh"

I get this all the time XD
and I do it to others too, whenever I read that part I have to read aloud cuz it's funnier that way ^^;

actually that whole conversation was hilarious
have I mentioned just how much I love Niigaki in this? ><
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on November 15, 2008, 10:09:56 PM
Reina is such a badass. :lol: I love that. I also agree with the countless other ppl, she should have kicked his ass. Gah, should have known it was her idea!! :grin:
Oshit, Sayu... XD No one can resist a hug from Reina!!! Haha, Reina definitely needs her b/c she is teh masta manipulata~~~~~ :P
Gaki, sweet law-abiding Gaki~~ :wub: Her POV was obviously the best!!! Love how she's like the parent and already knows they are up to no good!!!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: Sukoshi on November 16, 2008, 12:28:00 PM
hehe I would quote my favourite lines in the new chapter but I'm afraid there are just too many funny parts to list XD  though I must say I laughed the most at the stupid cat comment.  I'm a little doubtful at just how much smarter Sayu is since she's going along with it but..then again one really shouldn't doubt sayu XD  Can't wait to see how they get Risa in the mix.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
Post by: takagakifan on November 24, 2008, 08:52:16 PM
Hey guys sorry I haven't updated... stupid school stressing me out its like all the teachers decided to give me an exam the same week in some evil plot PLUS my job is... well I guess I should be posting that on the frustration thread :P But I'm in a good mood now and that means updating time so yea! :pimp:
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Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge

Risa's Pov

Risa walked to her job as usual. Keeping a bright and friendly appearance for her co-workers, despite the growing stress Reina and Sayumi had caused her.  Her mind was consumed with thoughts and concerns:

Will they or will they not actually do it?... If so how can I stop them?... Should I stop them?- OF COURSE YOU SHOULD RISA WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!

Her manager had called her into his office awhile ago, however she wasn't really paying attention her mind still on her two foolish roommates

"I'm sorry Risa but we gonna have to let you go" her manager said, Risa was very alert now

"What!  Why!"

"The company is downsizing I'm sorry but" he shrugged

OMG this can't be happening "I'll work for less! Please I need this job"

"I'm sorry Risa, you know we all love you unfortunately your postison is not really a major asset to this company... We no longer need you here"

"Is there another position? I'll do anything I need this" she begged

"Risa-"

"Please don't do this"

"This isn't up for negotiation! Your fired, end of story! Just leave your uniform at you locker and leave... once again I'm sorry" He said obviously irritated that Risa was dragging this on

She left the supermarket feeling depressed and defeated as she headed home.  When she got there she was thankful that the other two weren't home.  She laid on her bed and stared at the peeling ceiling, a few minutes later she fell asleep. She awoke the next day to the sounds of the TV blaring in the living room.  She got up from her bed and went to the bathroom after brushing her teeth and washing her face she stared at herself in the mirror.  She began making funny faces to herself, contorting her cheeks, lips, and eyebrows into several different expressions

"Today is a new day... Yesterday sucked... Today will too... But that's okay cuz life sucks! Just gotta make the best of it!" she said cheerfully "Press on Risa!"

She went into the living room picking up a newspaper before sitting next to Reina.

"So I hear you were fired"said Reina who turned off the TV to face her friend

"I was"

"Interesting"

"Not really"

"So what now?"

"Now I look for another job" Risa replied as she skimmed through the classifieds circling some skipping over others

"I got a job for you... a bank job" Reina said smiling at her cleverness

"No!" Risa said putting down her newspaper "Bye"

"Where ya going"

"Job hunting and escaping your stupid rant on the benefits of committing a federal crime"
***
Day after day Risa searched for a job.  No matter were she applied she never got accepted, she knew it would be hard but she was starting to get frustrated.  It didn't help that both Sayu and Reina were whining and complaining in her ear, making robbing a bank more appetizing each day.  She refused to give in though and finally her perseverance paid off when she got called back for an interview.

"They're going not to hire you y'know" Sayu said as Risa got ready

"Getting an interview means you're hired, besides people love me" Risa replied buttoning up her blouse

"No people love me they only like you... but that's besides the point, no one hires a person with a record"

"I had a job before.. they hired me" Don't bother with your mind games Sayu I'm in too good of a mood besides tricks are for kids teehee

"Yeah to bag groceries! Come on Risa don't waste your time.  What are you going to say when they ask you why you were arrested" Sayu retorted

"That I was arrested but never convicted and I was a silly child then who has matured and learn from my mistakes"

"Oh thats good! I mean uh- don't go Risa the bank thing will only takes a day and we'll be rich"

"Nope"

"Damn you" Sayu pouted
***

"Hey how'd the interview go" Reina greeted Risa as she entered the door.

Risa ignored her and headed to the fridge.

"That bad huh"

Risa kept quiet

"I don't understand why you have to be so f**king righteous just-"

"You think I like this" Risa scoffed "Sorry I have freakin' morals"

"Whatever man... I'm out me and Sayu will be at the parking lot across the bank... We'll love it if you joined us" Reina said before leaving

"I hate this!" Risa continued, talking to herself "I hate struggling and being rejected! But I still do it!  I hate walking everywhere but I still do it! I hate this apartment but I still live in it.  Because I have to not cuz I want to!"  She sat down "I hate being stuck... no way of making it... no hope for a better life.  But I grin and bear it...  Those crazy kids!  I need to prove to them that we don't have to resort to theft!" she said rising out of her chair feeling renewed and motivated "That we can make an honest living and still-"

The lights went out in their apartment

Snap "You've gotta be f**king kidding me"she yelled

She walked out of the kitchen.  Tripping over various items as she headed to the living room.  Her eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness, once she found her keys she grabbed a sweater and left.  She met up with Reina and Sayu, who were staring across at the bank.

"I'm in"

Reina smiled "Cool"

"We should celebrate"Sayu suggested

"Celebrated what crime, theft, insanity?" Risa sarcastically asked

"Nope! Our last days pf poverty" Sayu answered smiling

"Here Here" said Reina
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on November 25, 2008, 12:40:14 AM
OMFG, this was so much WINNNNNNN~~~~ XD Dammit, why the fuck would ANYONE fire Gaki?!?!??!?!?!?! :angry: I know I wouldn't b/c I'd wanna stare at her all day long. :inlove: Wait a sec, Gaki was ARRESTED?!?!?!?!?! :w00t: For what?!?!??!! I'm so intrigued. :lol:

BTW, the title sounds familiar... :?
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
Post by: JFC on November 25, 2008, 02:36:44 AM
Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge

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*RISA'S JOB PROBLEMS*
:mon wtf:

Well, I guess NOW she'll have more of an incentive/reason to join the other two.



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no one hires a person with a record

...

What are you going to say when they ask you why you were arrested" Sayu retorted

"That I was arrested but never convicted and I was a silly child then who has matured and learn from my mistakes"
Uh-oh. That could be a problem. :o

And here are Sayu and Reina trying to get her to ADD to her record?  :-X



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"Hey how'd the interview go" Reina greeted Risa as she entered the door.

Risa ignored her and headed to the fridge.

"That bad huh"

Risa kept quiet
Yeah, it makes it hard to make a decent living when most employers refuse to look beyond a person's record (or even AT it to see what's actually on it) and give a chance to someone who could potentially be just as valuable an employee as someone without a record.  :angry:



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The lights went out in their apartment

Snap "You've gotta be f**king kidding me"she yelled

She walked out of the kitchen.  Tripping over various items as she headed to the living room.  Her eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness, once she found her keys she grabbed a sweater and left.  She met up with Reina and Sayu, who were staring across at the bank.

"I'm in"
Well...everyone has their breaking point.   :(
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
Post by: Yankii Heart on November 25, 2008, 06:44:11 PM
O.O!
A drug-dealer Reina

Sayu is SO cool on this fic  :inlove:

Gaki XD

What didi she do?

Highlight of this chapter:
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Reina spoke first "Risa"

"Yes"

Sayu spoke next "Mame"

"Yes?"

Reina's turn "Gaki"

"..."

"Ni-Ni?"

"What's up guys"

"Risa I hate to be the one to tell you this but... you've changed"said Reina

Sayu continued "Your bright light is diminishing"

"Your fading away"

Risa watched them amused "Uh huh"

"Yeah! and we miss the old bubbly you"

"Super positive and fun!" they both stuck their thumbs out in unison

"Uh huh" something's not right here

"But don't worry we found a way to turn you frown upside down"

"Alleviate your burden"

"Set you free from the stress you suffered!" Reina exclaimed rising at her seat with excitement

"What do you wan-"

"Sssh its okay we understand"

Risa stared at them, squinted her eyes she focusing in on Reina"What did you do"

"Nothing..." Reina replied "yet"

Risa put her bags down and rubbed her temples I don't like where this is going

Bunny+Cat=So hillarious together XD
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
Post by: Sukoshi on November 26, 2008, 11:21:06 AM
Quote from: turbos86 @ h!o
Sayu's radio show: Reina is glad she joined MM, not just herself, but a lot of people think so. People said that if Reina didn't join MM, she'll probably end up on the street up to no good. Sayu says she might still find out about Reina, but from the news.

Reading that made me instantly think of this story XD  Fiction based on possible fact is sometimes so hilarious XD

like the others I'm really curious what Risa did to have a bad brush with the law.  Risa seems so innocent...my guess is she accidentally burnt a good building down in Yokohama.

I feel bad for Risa...plus the cat and bunny aren't helping (but man are they funny XD) 

I'm so excited after this chapter!  Can't wait to see what happens to the trio.


Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
Post by: lil_hamz on November 27, 2008, 05:03:56 AM
Dammit, why the fuck would ANYONE fire Gaki?!?!??!?!?!?! :angry: I know I wouldn't b/c I'd wanna stare at her all day long. :inlove:

Ditto that :P

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*RISA'S JOB PROBLEMS*
:mon wtf:
Well, I guess NOW she'll have more of an incentive/reason to join the other two.

Risa will always has a job offer. To be my personal assistant XD

like the others I'm really curious what Risa did to have a bad brush with the law.  Risa seems so innocent...my guess is she accidentally burnt a good building down in Yokohama.

OMG just imaging Risa setting a building alight made me laugh :lol:

I hope you don't get too stressed out from school. Just think of those teachers as a basket full of baddie egg yolks!!! <--HUH?!?! :D
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: takagakifan on December 02, 2008, 09:54:16 PM
@strawb3rrykream: haha all of my titles are Rap song titles... there’s no point in them really but I listen to it when I'm trying to get gangsta' :P... oh and Gaki's past will be revealed soon

@JFC: So very true it’s messed up but that’s the type of world we live in... Oh and Sayu and Reina aren't trying to add to the record they believe they'll never get caught

@Yankii Heart: I love the bunny+cat combo too :yep: I find them interacting with each other fun

@Sukoshi: Haha dude that’s awesome Reina on the street up to no good I wonder what she meant by that I hope not drug dealing  :shocked: but yea Gaki's too innocent... with roommates like Reina and Sayu she has to have some kinda hidden dormant kick assness :twisted:... but pyro Risa sounds fun

@lil hamz: Baddie egg yolk you say *rubs chin* that just might work!
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Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling



"Do you really think we should be drinking?  Shouldn't we have a clear mind for this?" Rise asked

"It's for the nerves" Reina answered "and to make you more accepting to our plan"

"Not 'our' yours " said Sayu

Reina rolled her eyes

"Umm... So what’s this plan you guys came up with... this plan that makes you so confident we won't get caught"

"No, not 'you guys' Reina!  Reina's stupid idea"

"Hey"

"I came up with something better" Say continued "A sure thing but Reina shot it down... I don't see why... money's not an issue considering we're robbing a bank"

"Risa, she was being ridiculous... super fancy expensive technology! Hiring more people!  That means dividing the money up even more! AND! They might turn on us like in the movies.

"Whatever!  It would've worked besides we would have ditched them so that wouldn't even-"

"But they could still ID our faces! Duh!"

"NOT IF WE NEVER DIRECTLY SPOKE TO THEM OR USED A DISGUISE"

"THAT WOULD'VE TAKEN FOREVER... SMASH-GRAB-GO CLASSIC!"

"Guys" Gaki said trying to interrupt the argument

Sayu responded completely ignoring Risa's attempt "CLASSIC MY ASS!  THIS IS THE 21ST CENTURY-"

"Guys!" she tried again

"IT WORKED THEN IT'LL WORK NOW"

"WHA-"

"GUYS!" Risa yelled in frustration

They stared at her, surprised by the sudden outburst.

"The plan...” she said annoyed

"Oh! Right!" said Reina "Okay so it’s like this... me and you will do the actual heist since Sayu is freakishly uncoordinated"

"Hey I-"

"Don't bother Sayumi, we all know it’s true" said Risa

"Anywho... she's the get-away driver and Risa, since you have those hawk-like eyes, you'll be the shooter-"

"WHAT!" Gaki exclaimed

"Tranquilizer guns!" Sayu explained "My idea, Reina wanted to run in there with real guns"

"To threaten with! Not to shoot!-"

"But I suggested that we get tranquilizer guns... knocking out all potential witnesses and disabling any method of contacting the police" she grinned pleased with herself

"Oh.My.God." Risa was beginning to panic her hands shock as she gulped down the rest of her beer "Okay... So" She drank again "How are we going to get these tranquilizer guns?"

"Don't even worry about that" said Reina "I know a guy who works as a janitor at the hospital... he's willing to jack a few from the pysch ward in exchange for 2lbs of weed- more than a fair exchange I say- but he doesn't know what I need it for.  So the simple Mofo poses no threat during a police investigation the stupid pothead will either be too high or too scared to say anything even then he's totally clueless."

"I see..." Risa responded trying to remain calm

Reina continued "I'm going in with the explosives and-"

"EXPLOSIVES!"

"Calm down Gaki it’s for the vault" said Sayu

"Sorry my mind is barely wrapping itself around this" Risa apologized sarcastically

"Okay but inside voices please"

Gaki stared at her younger friend before opening another can of beer "And how will we bring bags of explosives and tranquilizer guns inside without anyone noticing... unless y'all really think I can knock out- OhgodwhatamIsaying- everyone in enough time"

Sayu clapped "I'm glad you mentioned that Risa cuz Ms.Tanaka over here really thought you could walk in with gianormous black duffel bags while wearing black ski masks... but I had to edit all of that see I-"

"Do you want to explain the plan"

"If you insist" Sayu chugged her reaming beer, straightened herself out, and proceeded to speak in a very serious tone:

   "1st: Our disguise will be flashy neon-colored hoodies and blue jeans; mine will be pink, Reina's purple, and yours will be lime green.  Also, we will have on white oversized sunglasses and both of you will carry 2 extra-large (fake) designers bags.  Our faces will be covered and we can transport the necessities without being obvious.  The flashy hoodies will be the only thing the people will recall when giving our descriptions to the police and since they will be zip-up hoodies-yes I've already bought them- we can discard them easily.

   2nd: Risa you will need to take out the employees at the counters and desks first- while Reina does crowd control 'Everyone down on the floor' and all that jazz- then target the other employees and security guards- Reina you help so this is done before they have a chance to react.  Civilians will be last to get tranquilized.

   3rd: Both of you will use black spray can to take out all the cameras. Make sure you're wearing gloves because we're leaving all that stuff there... the once filled bags will now be used to carry the money.

   4th: Reina, you will need to move fast, I know you're slow as hell, but move your ass since there might be an alarm attached to the vault.  Rise, you help.

   5th: Walk out nonchanatly we don't want outsiders to be suspicious- So Rise don't freak out- and meet me at the alley next to the bank we ditch the disguises, throw the money in the trunk and drive away... Simple"

"Simply perfect" Reina said smiling

"Simple... right...Who are you people?"

Reina and Sayu laughed

"So we're really gonna do this"

"Yup"

"We're nuts"

***

Sayu's Pov

Ugh my head hurts...
How long was I out?
Damn we drank way too much


She slowly opened her eyes and was surprised to find Risa awake and still drinking

"What time is it?"

"Ah Duesen noes" Risa mumbled

"Tomorrow we robbing a bank" Sayu said "I'm shocked you agreed"

Risa mumbled something again before passing out

"I'm shocked I agreed" She looks over at Reina "Actually I'm not"

She looks around the apartment again, not really focusing on anything in particular before falling asleep.
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This chapter is kinda sucky... sorry about that but oh well... oh and in terms of time we are right were the prologue started
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: JFC on December 03, 2008, 06:55:33 AM
Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling

Absolutely LOVED the bickering between Sayu and Reina over who's plan was better. XD



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"Oh! Right!" said Reina "Okay so it’s like this... me and you will do the actual heist since Sayu is freakishly uncoordinated"

"Hey I-"

"Don't bother Sayumi, we all know it’s true" said Risa
:rofl:



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"How are we going to get these tranquilizer guns?"

"Don't even worry about that" said Reina "I know a guy who works as a janitor at the hospital... he's willing to jack a few from the pysch ward in exchange for 2lbs of weed- more than a fair exchange I say- but he doesn't know what I need it for.  So the simple Mofo poses no threat during a police investigation the stupid pothead will either be too high or too scared to say anything even then he's totally clueless."

"I see..." Risa responded trying to remain calm.
If I was Risa I'd be worried. Pothead or not, the more outsiders that are involved in this scheme (either directly or indirectly)...the more potential leaks there can be and the more potential trouble it can lead to.



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   "1st: Our disguise will be flashy neon-colored hoodies and blue jeans; mine will be pink, Reina's purple, and yours will be lime green.  Also, we will have on white oversized sunglasses and both of you will carry 2 extra-large (fake) designers bags.  Our faces will be covered and we can transport the necessities without being obvious.  The flashy hoodies will be the only thing the people will recall when giving our descriptions to the police and since they will be zip-up hoodies-yes I've already bought them- we can discard them easily.
That idea's actually not half-bad. Sayu's right that the colour of the hoodies will likely be the main (and perhaps only) thing that any potential witnesses would remember if they're interviewed by police. And if they're big enough, they'll probably be able to cover up most of the rest of the outfits that the girls will be wearing underneath. Once they're out of harm's way, they ditch the hoodies, and they'll look different from what the people and security cameras will remember.



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*REMAINDER OF PLAN*
On paper at least, the plan looks surprisingly well-planned. :)



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*SAYU'S POV*
Risa was STILL drinking? Wow.

I've heard of "liquid courage" but Risa's taking it a bit far. :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: lil_hamz on December 04, 2008, 12:49:15 AM
OMG it's starting!! I'm assuming in the next chapter the girls are going for the heist. Did I spell that right? @@ Can't think straight right now since my tummy hurts <--- Why am I telling you that? :P

Sayu is hilarious once again. Does she really think the outfits she thought up won't attract attention :lol: And tranquilizer guns XD I hope no one gets hurt in the process *afraid*
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: kRisZ on December 04, 2008, 02:05:10 PM
yay! another cool story  :muffin:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: ringo-hime on December 04, 2008, 03:59:14 PM
OHHHH, nice plan XD
hahaha.
 now i cnt wait!!!  :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on December 06, 2008, 01:54:14 AM
OMG I'm so excited!!! :w00t: Can't believe I want them to rob a bank. :lol: I love Sayu and Reina arguing so much, just makes it funnier. Shit, Reina wanted to bring real guns?! :shocked: Never mind, I guess that's what you'd bring if you were robbing a bank anyway. I like the flashy hoodie idea, pretty smart.
Let me guess, this title/song is by Chingy? :P
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: Sukoshi on December 07, 2008, 11:53:20 AM
Ah that was once again hilarious.  Reading this does bad things to the mind!  All of the sudden you start thinking it'd be fun to rob a bank and that their plan sounds almost doable  :P

I can't believe it but Reina really does have the better plan XD   the flashy hoodies are just mad brilliant though! XD

I love how the story has come full circle.  It feels like it's really starting now.  Can't wait to see what happens.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: takagakifan on July 30, 2009, 11:52:28 PM
WOW! I guess its been a while since I've updated  :mon sweat:

Lol but I reaaaalllly want to finish this :mon thumb: so if anybody's still interested here goes Chapter 6...
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Chapter 6: Mo' Money Mo' Problems



Sayu's Pov

Stay in the car Sayu... We don't want you to screw this up Sayu.... You lack coordination Sayu... Jerks!

“This is so boring!  How long does it take to rob a bank... Geez!”

She rolled her eyes before turning the radio on.
***

Risa's Pov

Okay everything is going according to plan... I can't-

“I can't believe we pulled that off!” Risa exclaimed

“I told ya!  Fool-proof” Reina answered smiling

They quickly removed their sunglasses and hoodies then tossed them inside a nearby dumpster.  Unsure of when the drugs would wear off, they began running as fast as they could to the alleyway Sayu was parked.   Reina struggled to keep pace with Risa; the closer they got to reaching Sayu, the more she lagged behind.  Suddenly Risa stopped, allowing Reina to catch up.

“What are you-”she takes a deep breath “-doing?  Lets go”

“Do u hear that?” Risa whispered

“Huh?”

“Ssh listen..”

Reina stopped and focused in on the sounds around her.

“Yeah I hear it” she whispered back

They crept inside the alley as they got closer to the car.  They peered inside the vehicle and saw Sayu spazzing out, moving in an irrational rhythm.  They tore their eyes away from the window, looked at each other, and began laughing.

~~From inside the car~~


“~Cuz if you liked it then you should have put a ring on it...If you liked it then you shoulda put a ring on it... wo oh ooh oh oh ooh oh oh ooh oh oh oh~”

*THUD*

“Oh my Jesus!” Sayu cried out startled by the sudden bang on her window

“What the hell were you doin?” Reina laughed as she gestured for her to open the trunk.  Sayu pouted collecting herself and popping the trunk open. 

Risa began loading the money in “We totally just robbed a bank!” she said while getting into the backseat.  “Robbed. A Bank! What a rush!”

“The dance from the Beyonce video! You know...  wo oh ooh oh-”

“Yea.. I got that” Reina said between her laughter she sat down on the passenger seat

“Alright we are all set lets go!”

“Of course, of course!  Everyone.. seatbelts on!” Sayu checked her mirrors

Reina sighed “Just Drive!”

“Safety first, my car my rules”

“Fine! Whatever” Reina grumbled. Sayu began driving

“What are you guys going to do with your cut?” Risa asked excitedly to no one in particular

“F**k Sayu! Pedal to the metal, homie lets go!”

“Chill out Reina!” she continues to sing “Wo oh ooh oh- God I love that song”

“I'm gonna buy a villa in Florida and maybe Hawaii” Risa smiled

“Please don't sing Sayu you sound like a dying cat!  And while your at it... Speed th F**k up!”

“Teehee jealous much?”

“No offense Sayu but you sound horrible”

“Whatever Risa, no one asked you!”

“But my ears!--”

“F**k this!  Pull over!”

“Wha-”

“PULL OVER!” Reina growled

“OK OK damn...” Sayu grumbled

Reina got out of the car and yells  “Come on, we're switching”

Sayu looked over at Risa unsure of what to do; Risa just shrugged also confused so Sayu sighed, got out and jumped into the passenger side,  Reina went into the driver seat

“I'll show you REAL driving”

“Geez!  What's your deal?”

“Sorry if I'm a lil on edge Sayumi... did I hurt your feelings? Hmm? I was just thinking about the BANK! And THE COPS WHO WILL START LOOKING FOR US!”

Reina floored the gas and sped off  Risa yells “Reina thats a one-way!”

*KAPOOW!*
***

Reina's Pov

F**K!

“Nice Driving” Sayu said with a smirk

“Shaddup!”

F**K!!!!!!!!

“I think 'I told you so' is appropriate here”

Reina opened the door to assess  the damage done to the car.

“This is BULLSHIT!” she screamed in frustration

Sayu and Risa laugh “Whatever... Come on Reina get in the car and lets go”

Just then the driver of the Range Rover they hit gets out.

“Hi my name is-”

“F**K YOU!”

“Huh?” the girl uttered, completely startled by Reina's outburst

“WHAT THE F**K MAN!”

“S-Sorry?”

“NO! F**KING WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOIN!”

“But-”

“NO BUTS! Look at my car its f**ked up... look at your car its f**kin fine what kind of bullshit is that!”

The girl looked at both cars “Ah yea your right”

“F**k yea I'm right!” Reina folded her arms against her chest

“I.. um.. one second!” the girl ran back to the passenger side of her vehicle then ran back “Um.. my cousin says this is your fault-”

“Whose fault?” Reina put her hands on her hips and leaned closer to the frightened girl daring her to repeat herself.

“Come on Tanakacci just get in the car!”  Risa shouted from inside the car

“Nah yo! They disrespecting me! Calling me a liar and shit”

the girl was on the verge of tears “Um... uh Tanakacci was it?  We don't want any problems-”

“F**K ME!” Reina said as she facepalmed herself

“Excuse me!” shouted the scared girl

Reina stomped towards her damaged car

“Alright then! Come on lets go!” Risa said waving Rena inside the car “Gosh we're committing a whole bunch of crimes today...bank robbing, hit and run- OH MY GAWD! REINA!”

Reina had walked passed the car door and into the trunk wear she took out the tranquilizer gun.

“Aw Damn!” Sayu grumbled

“Reina! Reina! What is she-What are you- Holy shit on crackers! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!”

*SLAP*

“Ow” Risa yelped in pain

“Risa! Pull it together” Sayu yelled

Meanwhile Reina shot the girl she was talking to previously.

“Eri!” shouted her cousin before passing out as Reina shot her too.

“Help me put them in the backseat of their car”

“Oh nononono Wh- the eff man! Kidnapping! Are you serious?!”

“She knows my name! Thanks to you! I had to do this... Now come on and help me!”

Sayu stared at her “She doesn't know MY name”

“Word Sayu? Word?!”

“If you had just let me drive none of this would have happened!”

“What's done is done Damn! Shit happens! Now help me drag these bodies in the trunk!  It improvising time!”

“Improvise my-”

*sirens blare*

All the girls froze in they're tracks, Sayu and Reina eyed each other down.  When the sounds began to come closer Risa rubbled her temples together 

“I don't like this either Sayu, but we are in this together... now help Reina out with the girls and I'll grabbed the money.... I mean we had to ditch this car anyway so... Yay?... Oh and I'M driving”


Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: writerjunkie on July 31, 2009, 12:33:14 AM
I remember this fic! Sorry about not comment.  :sweatdrop: This fic is so funny! I love it. You're doing such a great job with it.  :thumbsup I'm glad there's an update! I hope there will be another one soon. Ohhhhh and Eri's in the fic now? That's interesting. Will she be paired with anyone? *whispers* kameshige.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: JFC on July 31, 2009, 03:52:13 AM
Chapter 6: Mo' Money Mo' Problems

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Sayu's Pov

Stay in the car Sayu... We don't want you to screw this up Sayu.... You lack coordination Sayu... Jerks!

“This is so boring!  How long does it take to rob a bank... Geez!”
Hey, as long as she doesn't hear alarms ringing from inside the bank, it's all good.



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She rolled her eyes before turning the radio on.
Careful Sayu, make sure that you're still watching and paying attention.



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“I can't believe we pulled that off!” Risa exclaimed

“I told ya!  Fool-proof” Reina answered smiling.
Whoa, they did it?



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Reina struggled to keep pace with Risa; the closer they got to reaching Sayu, the more she lagged behind.
Reina's probably bad enough at running on her own. Now she's running with a load of money, so yeah, that's not helping her.



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*GAKIREINA HEAR SOUNDS*
Uh-oh...cops? Bank security? :O



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They crept inside the alley as they got closer to the car.  They peered inside the vehicle and saw Sayu spazzing out, moving in an irrational rhythm.  They tore their eyes away from the window, looked at each other, and began laughing.
Oshit, don't tell me...:P



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~~From inside the car~~


“~Cuz if you liked it then you should have put a ring on it...If you liked it then you shoulda put a ring on it... wo oh ooh oh oh ooh oh oh ooh oh oh oh~”

*THUD*

“Oh my Jesus!” Sayu cried out startled by the sudden bang on her window

“What the hell were you doin?” Reina laughed as she gestured for her to open the trunk.  Sayu pouted collecting herself and popping the trunk open. 
Oh Sayu, caught parapara-ing in the car. XD



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Risa began loading the money in “We totally just robbed a bank!” she said while getting into the backseat.  “Robbed. A Bank! What a rush!”
Caught a bit off guard by the fact that it was Risa that said this. Had it been Reina it would have been expected, almost second nature to expect her to say this, but Risa?

Hopefully she doesn't start wanting to have that "rush" again anytime soon.  :huhuh



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“Alright we are all set lets go!”

“Of course, of course!  Everyone.. seatbelts on!” Sayu checked her mirrors

Reina sighed “Just Drive!”

“Safety first, my car my rules”
Indeed. Plus it would really suck if they got caught with the money because a cop pulled them over for not wearing their seatbelts.   :nervous



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“F**k Sayu! Pedal to the metal, homie lets go!”

...

Speed th F**k up!”
Likewise, it would really suck if they got caught with the money because they got pulled over for speeding. A proper getaway is made when the vehicle being used has:
a) not been identified to the police, and
b) does not stand out/draw attention to itself in normal traffic.



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Reina got out of the car and yells  “Come on, we're switching”

Sayu looked over at Risa unsure of what to do; Risa just shrugged also confused so Sayu sighed, got out and jumped into the passenger side,  Reina went into the driver seat

...

Reina floored the gas and sped off  Risa yells “Reina thats a one-way!”

*KAPOOW!*
Um...yeah. When I mentioned the whole "not standing out/drawing attention" part...this would be an example of what NOT to do.  :doh:



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“Nice Driving” Sayu said with a smirk

“Shaddup!”

F**K!!!!!!!!

“I think 'I told you so' is appropriate here”
/me nods with Sayu.



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*REINA'S ROAD RAGE FREAKOUT*
Goddamit....and now she's let herself be seen by Eri AND Eri's cousin...which means that if/when it comes time to do the insurance claim on the damage to the car, she can be identified.  :banghead:

And oh...she frakkin' shoots Eri and her cousin with tranquilizer darts, which now adds assault with a weapon AND kidnapping to the list of potential charges the trio faces.
:dizzy:



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*sirens blare*
Oh fuck.  :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: slasha on July 31, 2009, 04:28:52 AM
I thought this fic was over. Glad to see it's not.

Reina tranquilized people because of road rage? Talk about making a bad situation worse. The police are coming too so they better get the bodies are get out of there.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 31, 2009, 04:17:23 PM
OMG, this story is hilarious. I loved the whole part where Reina and Sayu tried to get Risa to agree to the job the first time, a few chapters ago.

And now they have hostages, oh Reina. This story definitely needs to be finished.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: Sukoshi on August 01, 2009, 12:05:22 PM
I so love how everyone is coming back from writers heaven!  Happy~~~  :twothumbs

lol you sure haven't lost your touch...every single line is still as funny :lol:  and I think things just got a whole lot better with the addition of Eri and probably her cousin Ai chan or Aika...one of the Ai's XD

I agree with everyone else.  This story definitely needs to be finished (just not any time soon! after many many chapters that is XD)
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: Kuji on August 01, 2009, 01:23:51 PM
Ahaha... this is great stuff! XD
OH HAI ERI U HAZ LAND ROVER? And now... the kidnappers have you. ^^;
lol@ the idea of Kameshige. I can just imagine what Reina might have to say about Sayu hitting on a hostage. More inappropriate language here we come.

I wonder who Eri's cousin is. If it's Koharu I think she might just drive the three "criminals" nuts enough to turn themselves in eventually. :nervous

But yes, awesome job on the chapters so far!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 11, 2009, 07:13:10 AM
LMFAO at Sayu being stuck in the car and dancing/singing to Beyonce. Reina's got such a temper and holy shit, she attacked Eri. :shocked Gaki, Gaki, Gaki...the sensible one. :nervous
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
Post by: takagakifan on August 14, 2009, 06:10:06 AM
Ch 7: Breakin' Old Habits... Is hard too do



Ai's Pov

“ERI!” She screamed

What the hell is going on?!

She watched in horror as Reina aimed the gun at her

Should I run?  Should I just sit here and get shot?

In a quick second she decided that staying here with her cousin would be better than running and having something worse happen.  Not only would she probably not get far she would have left Eri...  and well Eri isn't the smartest person in the world, she needed to protect her foolish cousin! However, by the time she reached this conclusion in her mind, Reina had already shot her.

OW! that kinda hurt...lots... a littles... a much she thought as the dart hit her and released the drug inside of her veins

This, what the hell is?  What shoot me with did she?  To think getting harder it is.
 

She shook her head and struggled to keep her eyes open

STAY AWAKE AI! COME ON! Observe your surroundings!

She watched as Risa tied her hair in to a ponytail and shouted out instructions to the other two

Ah! So their leader, this is.  Argh i mean so this is their leader!

She watched helpless as Reina dragged her cousin in to the back seat.  Even though she tried to will her body to move, she could do nothing as Reina grabbed her and laid her next to her cousin.  The leader went into the drivers seat, Reina went into the passenger side, and the other nameless one got in the back next to them.
***

Risa's Pov

Risa fastened her seat belt and gripped the wheel

One...

She closed her eyes

Two...

The sound from the sirens get louder

Wait for it...

“Risa lets go we're going to get caught!”

“OMG we're going to jail! I'm to pretty for jail! You know what they do to pretty girls in jail? Because I don't!”

In an instant her eyes open.  Blue and red lights cover the brick walls of the alleyway

Three!

She put the car in reverse and hit gas pedal as hard as she could.  The gears screech as she took off.  A huge cloud of smoke and the smell of burning rubber is the only thing left behind.  She makes a hard donut turn onto to the main road.

“Ow” the girls yelped as their heads hit the window during that hard turn

She took her foot off the brake and hit the gas again.  As the dial indicating the mph increased rabidly Risa's eyes flashed to her rear view mirror.  She spotted the cops turning the corner.

Show time

They sped off, she zipped in and out of traffic.  The cop cars struggled to keep up.

“We are all gonna die!”

“Bunnies, diamonds, and shopping sprees.  Bunnies, diamonds, and shopping sprees.  Bunnies, diamonds, and...” Sayu repeats to herself over  and over again while rocking her body back and forth

“Shut up Sayu!  Shut up Sayu!  Shut up! What the hell man, mantras?! You tryna freak me out?! Cuz I ain't scared! Reina ain't neva scared ya dig? Better recognize-- Aww f**k whats da use? Ahhhhhhhhh!”

Risa remained oblivious to the noise, all her focus was on the road.   Her body felt one with the car... total silence all she heard is the purrs of her ride.  She reminisced of her time as a illegal street racer flashed before, she smiled.  She eyed her rear view mirror watch as the cops crashed trying to follow her.  She smiled again

Its been too long
***

Ai's Pov

Ai slowly began to regain consciousness, but her limbs were numb and she was unable to move.  All she could do was watch as the other henchman screamed.

It would be best if I keep quiet.  I don't want them to realize I'm up...  Think Ai how are we going to get out of this situation?  Wait!  I can think properly again!  This means whatever they drugged me with is wearing off!

Suddenly a truck that Risa just cut off honks its horn, its thunderous sound startling Ai.

“OOOWAH!”

Sayu screamed after being surprised by the deep throated yell.

“DA F**K?! WHAT KIND OF BEASTLY SOUND WAS THAT SAYU?!”

“THAT WASN'T ME! DOES IT LOOK LIKE I WOULD HAVE SUCH A MANISH SCREAM?”

“...”

“Why did you go quiet, Reina?” Sayu narrowed her eyes “Does it. Look like. I would. Have a. MANISH SCREAM?

“...”

“Eff you Reina! NO! it wasn't me! It was the f**king hostage! Holy fudging CRAP! I forgot we had hostages!”

They forgot we were here? That means they don't know who we are! Phew! They're not after our money.  Maybe if we can just keep our identity secret they let us go
...or kill us!


“Oh yea!” said Reina

“Oh yea? Oh yea!  All you can says oh yea?!”

“What? I forgot they were there” Reina said with a shrug

“and?”

“And... 'oh yea'. What else do you want me to say?” Reina rolled her eyes “Thanks for reminding me”

“Hahaha this so messed up!” Risa bit down on her lip to stop the laughter from escaping.

“Why is that funny?” Sayu asked, her irritation growing

“Because- HAHA we so sure of ourselves... what was it? FOOL-PROOF HAHA! FOOL-PROOF!”

“S**t she's cracked!”

“I'm not cracked I just find this whole mess humorous--”

“Of course she would Reina! Its Gaki! Damn I was kinda counting on her to be the reliable one guess now I have to be”

“I can still hear you” Risa said knowing that they had ceased paying attention to her

“Why am I not the reliable-”

“Do you really have to ask that question? If anything you are the dumb quick tempered one! And I'm the cute sexy smart one!”

Therefore the one who I need to convince to let me and Eri go is Risa the reliable one and avoid angering this Reina

“WHY AM I THE DUMB ONE?!”

“BECAUSE YOU DO DUMB S**T... LIKE OH I DON'T KNOW ROB A BANK!”

Thieves not murders... Good to know

“YOU WENT ALONG WITH IT TOO!”

“THAT'S ONLY BECAUSE YOU WERE DOING IT”

“OHHHHHH NICE LOGIC! IF I JUMPED OFF A BRIDGE WOULD YOU FOLLOW?”

“F**K NO! I WOULD WATCH, CALL YOU A DUMB S**T, AND SELL TICKETS FOR EVERYONE TO SEE THE DUMBS**T SHOW!”

“F**K YOU”

“NO F**K YOU! MAYBE I'M DUMB TOO BECAUSE I WENT ALONG WITH YOUR DUMBS**T!”

“I SWEAR TO GAWD IF YOU KEEP DISRESPECTIN' ME”

“WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO YOU DUMBS**T! HUH?! HIT ME?”

“YES! YES I WOULD!” Reina hollered undoing her seatbelt

“HA! LIKE YOU COULD!”

“WITH THE QUICKNESS! BOOM! RIGHT THE FACE! YOU SUPERFICIAL BI-”

“Wait the face? Really? You were going to hit me in the face?” Sayumi said shocked that her face was just threatened

“Huh? No... I mean I was just saying that in the heat of the moment” Reina mumbled confused by the sudden change of atmosphere

“But you thought about it” said Sayu accusingly

“Hitting you in the the face?”

“Yeah?” Sayu questioned

Reina shrugged “Yeah”

“Yeah?!”

“Yeah”

“That is just wrong”

“But...”

“But what?”

Reina sighed “But nothing, we cool?”

Sayu took a minute to think it over “Not sure”

“Seriously?”

Reina turned her body so that she was facing Sayu

“My face is very important to me Reina, I'm hurt that you thought about striking it.”

“Seriously?” Reina asked again in disbelief

“Seriously!”

Reina turned around again now facing forward she folded her arms and grumbled “Fine! Whatever I'm sorry!”

“I'm didn't hear that say again.. Oh and louder this time” said Sayu with a devilish smile on her face

“F**k you!” Reina grumbled

“HAHA its okay! I hard you say it the first time so bleh”

Childish possibly crazy thieves...

“Whatever! Risa where are you taking us?” Reina asked, eager to change the conversation

“The hostages are waking up so I'm going to stop at home depot for some rope and duct tape.  Then we are heading... there”

How did she know I was up?
...Oh yea the scream!


“Ha!  See this is why she's the reliable one... wait. There? Where's there?”

“There is where they live” Risa answered

“Who's they”

“They is them folks I never wanna see again! Why are we heading there?!” Reina yelled

“Because they are the only ones who can help us”

“F**k that!”

“Where else are we going to go?” asked Risa who tried to remain calm

“Who are they? “Where is there?!” Sayu asked annoyed that they were being so cryptic

“GAM”

“Gam? As in an attractive female leg?” asked Sayu

“No as in Great Aya and Miki.. it just so happens to mean that.”

“Do they have nice legs?”

“Well yea they do, but it was more of a cheesy nickname they called themselves.”

“Are you sure, because thats one hell of a coincidence”

“Yup! Just go with it”

“Okay... and we are going to them because?”

To drop off our dead corpses?

“There the best at what they do”

Dispose of hostages?

“Which is?”

“You'll see” said Reina

“You can't just tell me?

“No”

“Why not?”

“Don't feel like it bleh”

“Risa!”

“Reina stop teasing Sayu”

“She started it!”

“Lies!”Sayu yelled

Hmm they don't seem to scary but still they are armed and dangerous criminals
can't let my guard down

Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 14, 2009, 06:31:02 AM
OMG, Risa as a former street racer, Ai's manish screams, Reina and Sayu's fight. I just about pissed myself laughing, or trying not to laugh as my friend is sleeping peacefully. And GAM in the next chapter. Oh please hurry with that. This story is so awesome.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: writerjunkie on August 14, 2009, 06:39:16 AM
LMAO ah man this chapter was so funny!  XD :lol: I love it. I love the fights between Reina and Sayu. I always look forward to those. They're just too amusing and hilarious. Though I can't help but wonder from that argument if they like each other. Reina should just kiss her and that way she wouldn't have to hear Sayu's whining anymore! lol AND she won't get Sayu mad at her. See it works out on both ends if they did that. Or my logic is all wrong.
 Risa was a street racer?? Some how I find that really hot. lol She used not only her wits to win but her hotness cuz who can resist her!?That explains why she was arrested though. And in comes GAM!  :cow: They're always so fun to read in fics. I wonder what it is that they're good at. I can't wait to read when they come into the scene. I forgot, Ai's in here?! So SHE was Eri's cousin I kinda guessed that. Does that mean there will be TakaGaki? ^_^ I hope so! I can't wait for another chapter.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: Sukoshi on August 14, 2009, 12:33:08 PM
LOL I love how this story makes me laugh my head off every single chapter! :mon lmao:

"Bunnies, diamonds, and shopping sprees."  LOL yeah Sayu!  You go girl!  Creep Reina out!  :mon lmao:

LOL Man scream!  the face! and Risa as a street racer! :mon lmao:

Can't wait to see how crazy GAM are  :lol:

Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: Kuji on August 14, 2009, 02:41:03 PM
ROFL, this was too awesome and I agree with Junkie, there are totes TanaShige vibes coming off this fic, whether intentional or not. Well, whether or not that's coming up in future chapters, the two of them are just hilarious together. XD ...Wait, wasn't I just cheering for KameShige just a chapter ago? XP

O: So Ai was worried that Risa, Reina and Sayu were actually targeting them? Why do I get a feeling they're the daughters of either really important or really rich people? Heh, I liked Ai's observations on her three kidnappers. X3 Too bad Eri's been knocked out this whole chapter, I can't wait to see her reactions to this situation.

We finally found out what Risa did in the past... and... SHE'S SO COOL! The moment she was putting up her hair, I was getting ready for something amazing because something amazing always happens when her hair is up (Prince Gaki, hello?<3).

HOMG, it's Great Aya and Miki♥ The next chapter's going to be so much win just because of that.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 14, 2009, 07:49:07 PM
*dies from laughter* That's what happened to me. :rofl: TanaShige argument is so awesome. But my favorite part is Gaki being all Fast and Furious. 8) *gasps* GAM?!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: JFC on August 15, 2009, 06:40:47 AM
Ch 7: Breakin' Old Habits... Is hard too do

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Ai's Pov
AICHAN IS ERI'S COUSIN!?!? :o



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Ah! So their leader, this is.
She talked like Yoda. XD



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“We are all gonna die!”

“Bunnies, diamonds, and shopping sprees.  Bunnies, diamonds, and shopping sprees.  Bunnies, diamonds, and...” Sayu repeats to herself over  and over again while rocking her body back and forth

“Shut up Sayu!  Shut up Sayu!  Shut up! What the hell man, mantras?! You tryna freak me out?! Cuz I ain't scared! Reina ain't neva scared ya dig? Better recognize-- Aww f**k whats da use? Ahhhhhhhhh!”
It's no use. Sometimes you just have to freak out. :yep:



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Risa remained oblivious to the noise, all her focus was on the road.   Her body felt one with the car... total silence all she heard is the purrs of her ride.  She reminisced of her time as a illegal street racer flashed before, she smiled.  She eyed her rear view mirror watch as the cops crashed trying to follow her.  She smiled again

Its been too long
Betcha now Reina wishes that Risa had been their driver instead of Sayu. :lol:



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*EVERYONE REACTING TO AICHAN'S MAN-ISH SCREAMING*
:on lol:



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*AICHAN OBSERVING AND MAKING MENTAL NOTES ON THE OTHERS*
Very good. Smart move there Aichan.  :thumbsup



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*SAYU'S MANTRA*
:mon lmao:



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*OMGASS NOT DA FACE*
Sayu = :scared:
Reina = :dunno:
Sayu = :gmon cry:
Reina =  :cool2:



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Risa where are you taking us?” Reina asked, eager to change the conversation

“The hostages are waking up so I'm going to stop at home depot for some rope and duct tape.
Home Depot!
:wahaha:

Smart move actually. Risa knows that the tranquilizer wouldn't last forever, so they need something to use for restraints.



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Why are we heading there?!” Reina yelled

“Because they are the only ones who can help us”

...

“Who are they? “Where is there?!” Sayu asked annoyed that they were being so cryptic

“GAM”

“Gam? As in an attractive female leg?” asked Sayu

“No as in Great Aya and Miki.. it just so happens to mean that.”
OSNAP! GAM!!! :rockon: :cow:



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“There the best at what they do”

...

“Which is?”

“You'll see” said Reina
Aw c'mon! :O We wanna know!



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Hmm they don't seem to scary but still they are armed and dangerous criminals
can't let my guard down
Nah, they're just frantically...frantic right now.  :P
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: ringo-hime on August 15, 2009, 09:31:30 AM
Quote
Risa remained oblivious to the noise, all her focus was on the road.   Her body felt one with the car... total silence all she heard is the purrs of her ride.  She reminisced of her time as a illegal street racer flashed before, she smiled.  She eyed her rear view mirror watch as the cops crashed trying to follow her.  She smiled again

Its been too long

well that's hot...  :mon crazyinlove:


SAYU AND REINA...  :mon lol: :mon zoom:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: DO Me DO Me on August 15, 2009, 11:03:31 PM
Earlier this week I've read from the beginning to chapter 6 straight through and I lol'd throughout the whole thing :wahaha: These girls are so out of character from their real personalities, it's HI-larious. Although Eri remains to have her sleeping habit as she is still knocked out throughout the last chapter.  :rofl:

Your story reminds me of a story idea I've had for a long time but never written. It's about 3 girls who are fugitives of the law as well and they form a band. XD It's probably not funny like yours but it seems like a crazy story. I'm tempted to start writing it but I have too many stories going on.  :doh:

Anyway can't wait for the next part. :D
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 8: Ms. Officer)
Post by: takagakifan on October 21, 2009, 04:20:43 AM
Soo... yea I'm back with another late update... Unforntunately this chapter is... not to good... and not too funny but.... at least i got this chapter out of the way so i can concentrate on the important stuff... GAM shennigans so um i hope enjoy and of course

comments are appreciated
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Chapter 8: Ms. Officer

~At the scene of the crime~

Aika's Pov

One, two, three, breathe just because this is your first major case as a detective doesn't mean there's pressure..

“Hi”

“HI!” she squeaked

“Wow that was pretty high pitched there” Said a tall girl wearing a well fitted suit and a big smile

“Oh sorry you startled me I was just-”

“Meditating”

“Yea-No! I was thinking about the-”

“Deep breathing exercises help me out when I'm nervous too!”

“I'm not nervous!”

“Well you should be? Isn't this your first big case?”

“Well yea but- wait who are you?”

“Koharu Kusumi.... Special Agent Koharu Kusumi but most people call me Koha sometimes Miracle-chan” Koharu giggled.  Then suddenly she looked very seriously at Aika.  “Look I'm not trying to take over.... although I can” she paused to make sure Aika understood.  “I want to work with you on this case.. so lets be friends” she finishes smiling brightly. 

“Well Special Agent Kusumi-

“Please call me Koharu”

“Umm... Special Agent Koharu-”

“Just Koharu, and your name is...?” she looked at her expectantly

“Detective Aika Mitsui” she replied

“Don't like it”

“Excuse me?” Aika said shocked.  However, Koharu had suddenly walked away from her.  Her eyebrows began to furrow as she realized that Koharu had just left her mid-conversation.

Top of my class at the academy!
Youngest detective in my squad!
And this... this UGH! This PERSON!
How dare she!


She took some deep breathes and regained her composure.  This was her first major case and it made her tense.  She knew the captian assigned her this job because of her skill and maturity despite her young age. 

“Mmhmm... Uh-huh... Aha!  Obviously we're dealing with professionals” Koharu shouted from withing the bank

Aika turned to face her. She was staring at the camera lens that had been sprayed black, rubbing her chin.

“How do you know?”

“I can feel it...” Koha paused “in my gut”

“I see...”

“I'm thinking ex military maybe...”

“Well a witness reported 2 small girls wearing a purple and a green-'

“Yes,” Koharu walked toward Aika “But does your gut tell you?”

“That we should question some mor-”

“Ah ah ah your gut” Said while gesturing at Aika's abdomen

“Stop pointing at my stomach please! It is saying to follow protocol and-”

“Tsk tsk tsk I thought more of you.. uhhhh ummm whats-your-face”

“Detective Mitsui” she spoke through clenched teeth

“Mitsui? Hmmmm nope don't like it! Mittsi fits you better"

She sighed “Sure”

“You don't like it” Koharu said while pouting

“Mittsi is cute I guess” she said while her eyebrows slowly began to tense up

“YAY!!  Now that is settled its off to the crime lab!”

“Huh?!”

“The scene already been processed, we have a crew chasing their vehicle--” she held her hand to her ear “Scratch that have lost the perps, the witness aren't going to be of any help... its time to go! I hate staying in one place for to long”

“If you say so..”

“And I do! The longer we spend here the easier it is for them to get away... You don't want them to get away do you??” she said eying Aika suspiciously

“Wha- Of course not I resent the accus-”

“This is going to be soooo much fun! Ready?!” Koharu exclaimed cheerfully

“No.” Aika responded unenthusiastically

“Too bad lets go!”
***

~Meanwhile back at Home Depot~

“Oh Em Gee (OMG) Reina!  I had no idea there were so many different colored duct tape!  We should totally get the pink one!”  Sayu said excitedly

“You can not be serious!” Reina said rolling her eyes

“Why not?”

“Pink?! What self- respecting person would use pink duct tape!  Lets get the purple one.” she grinned

***

~Back at the Crime Lab~
Aika's Pov

“Welcome to the CSI lab! Like it? We are probably gonna spend most of our time down here since we are dealing with masterminds.  The cops reported some intense driving skills.  Hey do you think we may be facing people like that guy in 'The Transporter'?”

“Excuse m--”

“No..  these guys were way to small... whoever they are cant be taken lightly”

I really wish she would stop cutting me off mid sentence

“High tech stuff,” She said point at the equpiment in the room “But don't break them or else I'm gonna need to arrest you.. which I can” Koha peeked over at Aika to judge her reaction

“I see”

Koharu led Aika to the trace evidence room.

“I want you too meet the 2 lab rats we will be working with during this case”

“I resent that” said a girl with long back hair and chubby cheeks

“Oh she's just mad cuz she hasn't had her morning banana” said another girl smiling strangely wide at her “I'm Lin Lin”

“Its not because of that!” the other girl shouted indignantly

“So you don't want a banana?”

“Do u have a banana?”

“No”

“Then why bring it up!”

Koha smiled “The grumpy one is Jun Jun”

“I'm not grumpy! And I'm not a Lab Rat! I'm a CSI Field Agent!”

Koharu laughed, “Whatever,” she placed her hand on top of Aika's head, “and this little cutie potootie here is Mittsi”

Aika swatted away Koharu's hand.  “its Aika M-”

“But we've already decided we like Mittsi better remember?” Koha whined

Just go along with it... there's is no sense in fighting with a fool "Yup"

“Well as you all know a bank was robbed! So this means we are on a time crunch to catch those goons before time runs out!”

“What tim-” Mittsi began to ask

“Luckily! I have managed to lower our pool of suspects by compiling the clues and forming a criminal profile!”

“Really thats amazing!” Aika shouted surprised

I knew she couldn't be all dumb! She's really young and already in the FBI, eccentric people are usually the most brilliant....

Jun Jun sighed and got up from her seat. “I don't have time for this I'm going on lunch”

“Oh me too! I'm starving, lunch would be perfect!” Lin Lin said and followed her out

“OK enjoy your meal be back in an hour, we got serious work to do!” Koha said to them before continuing “Yes well I am 98% sure that they are midgets with military background..”

“WHAT?!” Aika yelled

Or sometimes they just stupid and eccentric!

“They shouldn't be too hard to find ...” Koharu continued

“YOU have GOT to be KIDDING!”

“I don't kid, kid”

“Are nuts?! That makes no sense!”

“Well you know what! Blahblaabloobleebloo!”

WTF?!

“WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!”

Suddenly there was a burst of laughter “Haha You should of seen your face you totally bought that! Haha you are way too gullible Mittsi! Alright enough playing around we got to get to work” she said in between giggles

All Aika could do was stare in disbelief

I'm calling the captain there is no way I can work with this girl
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: Sukoshi on October 21, 2009, 05:24:34 AM
ah Koharu...she really is a miracle :mon evillaff:

and yes.  Purple duct tape is so much better :mon determined:

Can't wait for the crazy GAM-ing!
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 21, 2009, 07:09:59 AM
Aika! Poor Aika! OMG if Koharu was actually a higher ranking detective I could totally see this happening. And that little aside about duct tape was hilarious. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

I definitely need some more of this story.
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: badsaints on October 21, 2009, 05:09:51 PM
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“Pink?! What self- respecting person would use pink duct tape!  Lets get the purple one.” she grinned
Yeah, you can't show your gangstaism with a pinkie. Purple yankii rules! XD

Miracle-chan as the special agent? My condolences to Mittsi :smhid And it just gets the start of it :lol: Now that Jun is the CSI Field Agent, nobody, and I mean nobody, gets away with stealing her bananas :lol:

I love this fic (sorry if I haven't commented before). I want more! :P
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 7: Breakin' Old Habits... is hard too do)
Post by: writerjunkie on October 21, 2009, 05:12:32 PM
lmao  XD  :lol:  :rofl: ok I think I've used up all the laughing icons I can put. Ah, but that can't even express how FUNNY this chapter is! Man Koha, lmao XD poor Aika! She's going to have gray hairs soon working with Koharu! Ah, I think so far I love Koha in your fic, well Reina and Sayu are all sorts of funny together too, but Koha is like the best! Haha, I want to see more of Koha in this fic! Well, seeing GAM too would be just as funny to see. I need more of this fic! It's too funny! Also, how the hell did Koha become a cop?! Or a high ranking one at that! lol
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 8: Ms. Officer)
Post by: Hotaru on October 25, 2009, 06:43:56 PM
Poor Aika. XD

Eh, how is this chapter less funny? I was laughing my guts out. Koharu is just....HAHAHA! XD

The infamous TanaShige arguements in your story is funny as well. (I love those two. XD)
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 8: Ms. Officer)
Post by: lil_hamz on November 04, 2009, 01:01:18 PM
LOL!!!!!!!!! This chapter was just as crazy funny!! Wth Koharu? Blahblaabloobleebloo!?!?!? :lol:

I think I'm getting a tummy cramp from laughing so much. Reading 3 chapters in a row really is pure insanity :twothumbs

Risa = cool :wub:

TanaShige = crazy :rofl:

Koharu = nuts :grin:

Aika =  the poor lil takoyaki :smhid

I need to take out insurance for my stomach if I'm gonna survive reading more of your amazingly funny chapters :lol:
Title: Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 8: Ms. Officer)
Post by: kRisZ on November 04, 2009, 03:09:56 PM
Chapter 6: Mo' Money Mo' Problems

Ch 7: Breakin' Old Habits... Is hard too do

Chapter 8: Ms. Officer


OMG    :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:    full of crack    :rofl:  :rofl:   :rofl:  I so love it   :wahaha:


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