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Torn in Two (Saki/Miyabi)
Prologue
Chapters 1-3 ~ Page 1
Chapters 4-5 ~ Page 2
Chapter 6 ~ Page 3
Chapter 7 ~ Page 4
Hoping for Chance (Saki/Miya *main* *but has* Saki/Momo & Miyabi/Risako) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=18939.new#new)
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As I was saying yesterday, I got a lot of time in my hands and said to post my one-shot also yesterday but it turns out I didn't so I just posted it now. The reason is that while I'm thinking about my one-shot for C-ute, I got distracted by other ideas aside from my mothers constant nagging with other stuff. This idea is to make a fic series (that is what my sister calls it), with Saki in it. Distracted by the sudden ideas for this series, I didn't get the chance to think for my C-ute one-shot. But to my persistent attitude to finish the one-shot first before writing this series. To my surprise, I did finish the one-shot but was not really confident about it.
And now as to what I said to myself, I'll write this series. Comments/Corrections/Suggestions are encouraged. :heart:
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Prologue
Outside a well-built house painted with shades of blue and green, Saki stands with her left hand inside her pants pocket while she raises her other hand to look at the time. How long does it need to take for a girl to get ready for a date? Saki thought until she remembers she is also a girl. But I don't take this long...
"Sorry!" A voice came from the just opened door, revealing Miyabi in her cute shirt with a bear in the middle holding a big heart with the word I Love You written over it. So, she did wear it. Saki thought as she checks her out from top to bottom.
Feeling her face turning red after seeing the older girl staring at her in amusement, Miyabi stuttered as she asks. "W-why are you staring at me like that?" Looking down as her senpai turns to look at her face. A grin came from Saki as she saw Miyabi's sudden change of view.
"You look beautiful in that shirt I gave you." Saki finally said before holding her hand out, waiting for Miyabi to take it.
Blushing a little bit more because of the words she heard, she finally takes Saki's hand and let her lead the way.
"So where are we going?" Miyabi asks breaking the silence between them.
"hmmm..." Miyabi heard as Saki tilted her head to think.
"So you haven't planned this date Saki-chan?" Miyabi asks in a disappointed tone since she thought Saki has plans on what they are going to do or at least where they are going.
Saki quickly turned to Miyabi as she heard a sigh. "I planned this out." Saki replied in defense. Her face changing from defensive to a soft, cheerful, warm expression and gave out a genuine smile. "Why wouldn't I plan this out? When I'm going out with the most beautiful girl I laid my eyes on."
Most beautiful girl I laid my eyes on... Miyabi repeated in her mind as she smiles at Saki, turning a little red again but knowing that this girl she was with really likes her...no, this girl loves her, she corrected herself.
They went in a clothing store, finding Miyabi a new black and white striped jacket while Saki got a new light blue shirt with the initials MN on it.
"Why pick that simple shirt? Don't you want another one in the same color but different printing?" Miyabi curiously asked while searching for a replacement.
"Miya..." Saki called, trying to stop Miyabi from searching, which she did and looks at Saki.
"What?" Miyabi clenched her arms together waiting for Saki's explanation.
"The reason why I like this shirt is because it has the letters MN on it." Saki explained as she points out the two letters that are not hard to see.
"So? Its still plain." Miyabi concluded as she holds the shirt and stares at the letters.
"Think harder." Was the only thing Miyabi heard her senpai told her.
MN? Miyabi asked herself. MN... Saying the two letters the second time helped her to figure out what Saki was trying to say. "Oh..." Looking at the other girl who was smiling pleasantly at her that she finally solved the puzzle. With that thing solved, she instantly changed her mind and let Saki buy the shirt she wanted.
It was about lunchtime that they finished window-shopping after the clothes store and decided to settle in for yakiniku. As they were nearly finished in their meal, Saki held out her hand, signaling Miyabi to give her hand. Not having a reason to disagree, Miyabi held out her hand to the girl in front of her as the other was searching through her pockets for something. Curious on what it is, Miyabi stayed silent and her eyes looking at the Saki, until Saki speaks and brings her other and out of her pocket.
"We've been going out for sometime now Miya-chan..." Saki started while fixing the thing she just took out from her pocket. "And I can't help but think that now is the time to take it to the next level..." Miyabi's eyes widened as she listens to the one who was holding her. Captain...Saki-chan... Are the only words going around Miyabi's brain for a while.
Revealing the gift Saki was preserving in her pocket until the right time, it turned out to be a wonderful bracelet with a heart shaped diamonds. Miyabi stared at it quite surprised while Saki places it on her wrist. Miyabi pulled her hand slowly and raised it up to get a better look.
"Miya-chan... Will you be my girlfriend?" Saki finally asks with butterflies in her stomach not wanting to get a rejection, but to how Miyabi didn't refuse the gift, maybe she will not get a rejection after all.
Staring at Saki after hearing her last word, girlfriend, Miyabi smiles at the girl who was staring at her worriedly, and Saki finds it as a YES, but waited for the girl to answer.
"Yes Saki-chan. I do love to be your girlfriend." Miyabi finally answered seeing the other girls face turn red in content and joy. Without anything further, Miyabi leaned forward to kiss her new girlfriend.
Leaving the empty Yakiniku plates behind, Saki and Miyabi found themselves walking side by side with their hands together and their fingers twined together. Yes they were holding hands before but this time its different, different, because they are not only friends anymore but lovers.
As they were walking, chatting with what happened to them during school, Miyabi suddenly was tugged back and as she looks back at Saki, she stopped walking and was like frozen on the spot while staring blankly at something ahead. Curious on what was the reason that Saki stopped, she looks at the direction Saki was looking at, revealing a well known face that she haven't seen for a very long time.
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I think I lost my writing skills on Chapter fics... That's why I tried doing one-shots and I think I am getting the hang of it. Now about this... I'm not too sure...
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ARE YOU CRAZY?!?
You're doing great.
Must...find...out...familiar...face. :pleeease:
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really? lol, maybe its this negative part of me, keeps saying I don't know how to make fics... :sweatdrop:
you'll find out as soon as I get my motivation later... :twothumbs
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What happened before I write the next chapter
When I was out to buy coke, I finally got the motivation I needed to do the next chapter and maybe finish it tonight and post it tomorrow. When I came home, I checked out some forum threads until I saw this one news that made me lose the motivation. I was really shocked and the news made me uneasy and wondered how Chinami was doing now. Chinami collapsed in their concert just before they were going to sing Sono Subete no Ai ni. (GOSH! My Chinami! :cry:) I felt like crying but I need to believe that she is fine and will recover. I don't want to jump into cconclusions so I'll leave my thoughts until there. So maybe, if I get over Chinami's incident, well, at least until I finish writing the first chapter. So please wait for it. I'll do my best while Chinami is also doing her best. Ganbare, Chii-chan! :twothumbs
P/S: I'll post the fic a little later, I'm just going to start writing.
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As you all know the reason what made my motivation go away, this is the result of trying to get that motivation back.
Hope this is an okay start for my fic. Comments please... :heart:
btw, does anyone know how long a short fic is? I mean in chapters? Cause I think this fic would just be short...
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Chapter 1 - Unexpected News
Not taking her eyes of the girl in front, Saki tugged Miyabi's hand, telling her that they will take their leave. "Miya-chan, let's go." Saki whispered as Miyabi got closer to her. Miyabi looked at the person that made Saki feel uncomfortable at just a simple encounter. Miyabi wanted to greet the other girl when Saki pulled her and led her away from the scene.
Arriving finally in Miyabi's house, Saki tiptoed as she leans in to press her lips unto the taller girl. "I hope you had a great time today." Saki asks with a smile that made Miyabi smile back. "I know I did." Miyabi replied before placing the keys on the lock, opening the door. A click was heard as Miyabi opens the door then looks at Saki.
"Well, see you again next week." Saki carefully said as her smile faded when the other girl showed a pout.
"So we can't see each other this week?" Miyabi asked in a pleading tone.
"I'm sorry Miya but school is busy and you also have things to settle." Saki explained, but seeing Miyabi looking down, Saki tried to cheer her up. "Hey, don't think of it as a bad thing." She started, "Think of it as a week that I'll miss you so much."
Miyabi looks at the smaller girl, letting her know she's already okay with the idea but made her promise that she will come by next week. Saki didn't turn her down but pressed her lips on Miyabi as her response. So this means yes... Miyabi told herself as she joins the pleasure by kissing her girlfriend back.
...a week has passed
"Aren't you going to come in?" Miyabi asks and waits for the other girl to respond.
Why can't I forget about that incident? Saki kept thinking, until Miyabi poked her hard on her side.
"Ow..." Saki cried as she holds the place in pain and looks at Miyabi.
"Is there someone else in your mind than me?" Miyabi asks with a jealous stare.
"No! I just recalled a homework I need to do over later." Saki said in defense and tried not to stumble on any word that might led Miyabi to what she was really thinking.
"Oh. Well, then, do you want to come in or do your homework?" Miyabi asks with a smirk on her face, taunting Saki to try and make a mistake on choosing.
Yokatta... That was close... Saki thought as she followed Miyabi inside and closes the door behind.
Miyabi introduced Saki to her mother once again since it has been a long time since Saki came to her house for a visit. "Just tell me if you girls need anything." Was the last thing Saki heard from Miyabi's mother as Miyabi closes the door of her room.
"I'm glad that was over. Mom could get so hyped up when we have visitors." Miyabi explains while Saki giggles on how she was acting.
Miyabi kept silent as her cheeks grew red. She was trying to put her attention on her shoes as she bumps the soles of each shoe together but it didn't take long when two shoes came to view and when she looked up, Saki was just a few centimeters away from her. Miyabi couldn't take her eyes of Saki's as her heart beat fast and before she knew it, her lips were locked with her girlfriend. She slowly closed her eyes, as she enjoys the thrill happening to her at the moment. Saki slid her arms around Miyabi's waist as she pulls her closer. No one could explain how they were feeling at that moment, even Saki who was more mature than Miyabi couldn't find the words to explain it all but all she could think of is that it was indescribable.
Breaking their passionate encounter, Miyabi grinned at the Saki before walking to the bed, sliding herself under the covers. Saki smirked as she knew what the other was trying to say. She followed the younger girl and slid under the covers, cuddling the one beside her. There they continued their unbreakable desire for each other, until Miyabi's phone vibrated in her pocket. She didn't want to break the moment so she ignored it. Seconds has passed but the vibration on Miyabi's pocket didn't cease. Miyabi nudge Saki gently away as she sits up to answer the call that disturbed them.
"Wh-at is - it Ri-sa-ko?" Miyabi asked still breathing heavily, trying to catch her breathe.
"Miya-chan! Is something wrong? You sound like your gasping for air..." The voice of the younger girl echoed from the other line.
Miyabi holds her hair up as she closes her eyes and breathes in for more oxygen before looking at Saki, but the older girl was laying down still, looking at the ceiling. "Nothing's wrong Risako... I-I was just doing my afternoon exercise." Miyabi lied as she lays down, snuggling beside the other girl that hugged her as soon as she is in a comfortable position.
"So Miya-chan, are you free tomorrow?" Risako suddenly asks while sitting down on the edge of her bed moving her feet up and down, waiting for the other girls response.
"uhmmm..." Miyabi stopped to think and looks at Saki pressing her phone on her chest so that Risako won't hear. "Risako's asking me if I'm free tomorrow." Saki looked at her, confused but agreed to let her go with the younger girl tomorrow.
Miyabi agreed to go with Risako to the clothing store tomorrow to help her pick new clothes for the upcoming party Risako was attending. With that settled, Miyabi put her phone back in her pocket and snuggled more closer to Saki and the other wrapped her arms around the snuggling tiger.
"I'm letting you go with her tomorrow, but don't let anything happen between the two of you. I'm a jealous person." Saki warned as she held Miyabi tighter. Miyabi could sense the seriousness on the older girls tone that she just nodded before feeling a slight warm peck on her forehead.
Silence entered the room as they stayed closer together not wanting to let go of the other. Miyabi took a peek at her girlfriends face and still couldn't believe that she is now having Saki-chan, their captain as her girlfriend, HER girlfriend.
As she finally sees Saki's face, she could tell that the older girl was not with her, yes she is with her now, physically but mentally and emotionally, she wasn't. Saki's gaze made Miyabi pout but she was curious on what the other was thinking. She was about to say something when Saki first spoken.
"Miya-chan..." She started, "When you are looking for something important but couldn't find it..." Miyabi looks curiously at Saki as she waits for her to continue. "You start to ignore everything that wants to take its place."
Not moving, Miyabi tries to understand what the other was saying.
"Are you still with me Miya?" Saki asks looking down at the still form of Miyabi. "Yes, I'm still here." She heard her say before continuing.
"You reject everything, until this one time, this one coincidence, you let something in and it appears you grow fond of this new thing before realizing you have moved on from the one you lost." Saki paused as she tries to come up with the next appropriate words while playing with the younger girls hair.
"Years have passed and you were having the greatest time with the new one when suddenly, the one you lost came back and you realize you really haven't moved on." Feeling dizzy from what the other girl was trying to say, Miyabi sits up straight looking at Saki as she also sits up.
Miyabi studied the girl’s face, which held the feelings of worry and sadness. "I don't understand what you were saying. Did something happen?"
Saki looks at he edge of the bed where her hand was tugging the end of the blanket. "Remember last week, we were walking until I froze on the spot?"
Miyabi looks at the girl, trying to recall what happened next. Ah! Yes, I remember. That time, Saki-chan froze when she saw- Her eyes widened when the idea popped in her head.
"So..." Miyabi started, looking at Saki with her eyes of defeat. "You still didn't get over Megu..." Miyabi's voice faded as the older girl looks at her with the eyes that couldn't hide the truth.
Slowly getting out of the bed and walking a few steps farther, Saki finally explains her side. "You're right. I haven't gotten over Megu...but not until you came in and replaced that lost feeling." Miyabi couldn't control herself as her cheeks turn red.
Why am I blushing in this serious conversation... Miyabi asks herself covering her face for Saki not to notice.
"But seeing Megu-chan a week ago made me feel I want her again..." Miyabi's blush fades as she heard what Saki said. Stepping out of her bed, Miyabi walked towards Saki whose back was still turned to her.
"I have been thinking about it the past week and came to a conclusion..." Miyabi could feel her heart beat fast as she was frightened to learn what this conclusion is. Could it be bad for her? For them? or For both Saki and her?
Before Saki could continue, she felt a warm feeling behind her and the arms that held her tighter. It feels warm when the one you love holds you. She thought while enjoying it for the time being. "I..." Miyabi could only close her eyes tighter not wanting to think that Kami-sama was punishing her. She couldn't think of anything she had done to get that kind of punishment until Saki continued.
"I, I was just obsessed. Obsessed to talk to her again. Obsessed to get to spend time with her again but..." Miyabi felt sudden warmth on her hands when she realized Saki took them both and held onto them, releasing herself from Miyabi's hug.
Saki turns to look at Miyabi's face that held an expression she wouldn't want to give her again. "I'm not in love with her anymore." Saki whispered as she walks closer to the other girl and gives her the only thing that would let her know she was the one Saki loves.
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Suggestions/Corrections is highly encouraged! ^_^
Comments are highly required! :lol:
Well, I won't post anything until I get at least 4 comments... XD
Cause it makes me nervous when no one/some just comments... makes me think that it wasn't good... And comments help me get more motivation... :sweatdrop:
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Calm down, Panick-chan!
MiyaRii, hmm...something mysterious is going on..
Keep updating :tantrum:
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hahha as i've said! i like saki-miya............ :whistle: but i love the miya-risako pairing! :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
yosh! like this one!
next chappie, author-san! :kneelbow:
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@Hotaru: Something mysterious... :pimp: I don't know yet.. :lol:
@ayase909: no worries... You'll get Miya/Rii as soon as I get 2 more comments from other people... XD
There, gave everyone a clue on what might happen next.. well, at least who is in the next chapter... :P
I already thought of the plot for the next two chapters.. XD all I need to do is write it... but for now... its lunch time.. :lol:
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Nice chapter ^^
I like SakixMiya pairing :wub: :wub:
aww >_< I know how Saki feel :yep:
But Miyabi is there to take care of her :ptam-shy:
:luvluv2: :luvluv2:
Keep up ur good work :ptam-ok:
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^ Thank you YumePouk! :heart: I will try my best to continue this fic. XD
There... only one more and I'll post the next chapter.. I just finished it and I was surprised on what I have written.. I didn't expect it to have such a fluff... :O
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It was definitely quite some fluff. ^^ Of course there's nothing wrong with fluffiness... :wub: Those girls don't get enough of it around here. ;) Take your time in writing and posting your chapters though, there's no rush. ^^ Although I know you have to write when inspiration strikes. And now you're talking about MiRii in the next chapter too... well, for Captain's sake, I'm not sure if I hope it's too fluffy. ;) Then again, I'm sure ayase wouldn't mind. :lol:
I was gonna say earlier too that after your prologue, I did get the one-shot feel like you were talking about. XD It seemed like it was going to be a one-shot until the end there... Megumi was a bit of a surprise, but I suppose anything could have happened in those ZYX days...
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Well, yeah, I felt it was really a one-shot... since I quit doing series of chapter fics last year but now, I tried to do it again. I guess I have to dig up my other brain from its resting place. :huhuh
But yeah, you're right about the inspiration. I get all crazy to write the ideas and turn it into sentences just so that I won't forget. Cause when it pops in my head and I just let it stay there until maybe a few days.. The idea would still be there but the feeling of writing it has left... Now I'm sounding as if I'm eager to post my fics... well.. I think it does sound like that... :sweatdrop:
Well, in those ZYX days, Saki and Megumi are the closest and that's where the idea came up... (Now I miss Megumi...)
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Because I was sooo eager to post this... here it is... Chapter 2...
I don't know why they keep coming in.. they won't let me rest.. these ideas...
anyway... about this chapter... all I can say is... ENJOY! XD
oh yeah... I'm sorry if Miyabi's attitude here is a little different... well I can't really say a little, can I?
So once again.. I don't know what to expect from you guys...
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Chapter 2 - Desire
Arriving in Shibuya, the very well known shopping district in Japan, Miyabi stops over every store they pass by, browsing on every cute things she sees. "Ah!" She gasps as she pulls Saki towards a very famous shoe shop, Nike.
Saki's eyes widened as she surveys the shop, didn't want to look at the price tags until Miyabi shoves a pair of pink colored rubber shoes laced with white colored stripes on the sides, has a check logo at the rear and white shoelace. "Don't they look cute?" Miyabi asks excitedly as she keeps skipping around Saki holding both shoes tightly.
Saki laughs as she watches Miyabi skipping around like how a kid would do when she finds something she really likes. "Miya-chan, would you please stop skipping around? The store manager is already looking at us." Saki warned as she looks at the store manager and bows a little in apology.
Stopping as she saw the older girl bowing down, she felt a little ashamed on how she acted as she also bows down. "I'm sorry." Miyabi apologizes as she puts her hands down walking back to the place where she saw the shoes she wanted to buy.
Saki walks behind her as Miyabi places the shoes back to its proper place. "How much is that?" Saki asks before reaching out for the price tag. Saki's eyes widened as she reads the tag. 100,000 yen... In shock on how much that cute pink colored shoes cost, as she stares at the tag, she could see three, slowly circling around. She releases the tag as she closes her eyes to take out the dizziness she feels.
"Well..." Miyabi asks, her hands clasped together, placed a little under her chin in a form of praying. As she pleads Kami-sama to let her buy the shoes even if its so expensive for walking shoes.
The older girl looks at Miyabi, staring at her eyes, those eyes that seem to tell she really wanted those shoes. Saki looks at the shoes again before giving a sigh. "Do you really want this?"
Miyabi nodded her head continually as Saki takes the shoe, examining it from all sides. "Miya-chan..." Saki calls as she puts back the shoe. Seeing Saki putting back the shoe, she finally accepted the fact that it was impossible for her to buy that. Well, yeah, they get lots of money from work but they keep it for savings and help their parents for household bills. So it’s really impossible... She tells herself as she looks at Saki who was still staring at the shoes. Maybe next time. For sure, the price will drop down in a few months.
Holding Saki's hand, she led her out the store. "You don't want to buy those shoes?" The older girl asks as she stops and pulls Miyabi to a stop.
"I will." Miyabi answered as she slid both her hands to each back pocket of her pants, trying not to get caught on Saki's stare.
"Then why are we leaving?" Saki asks, confused on why the taller girl walk out the store, not buying the thing she wanted, the shoes that she held tightly before not wanting to let go.
"I don't have the money now to buy it." Miyabi explains as her cheeks turn slightly red.
Saki looks down as she finally realized the situation. I should have brought more extra money. If only I knew she wants a shoe that expensive... And as her girlfriend... I should have bought it for her... Looking at Miyabi who was still looking down as she sways her body sideways.
"I'm sorry..." Saki finally said finally catching Miyabi's eyes. "I should have known this was coming and I should have brought extra money and-" Saki stops as Miyabi placed her finger on her lips to cease her from saying nonsense.
She shakes her head, "You don't need to say anything about not buying it for me." Smiling to her worried looking girlfriend. Seeing her still not cheering up, Miyabi gently pressed her lips unto the smaller girls lips. Surprised on what the other had done in a public place, Saki's face turned red.
"It's okay. I can buy that when the price goes down. It will take several months but I still have many outdoor shoes to use." Miyabi explains as she holds the other girls hand, trying to let Saki forgive herself.
Still looking down, Saki still couldn't forgive herself but as she looks at the taller girls eyes, she let her know that she finally forgives herself by giving out a heart-melting smile.
That finally over, a voice came calling over from behind. Saki leans over to the right to see who was calling and finds out that it was Risako. "It's Risako..." Saki warned staying calm and cool as usual while Miyabi lets go of her hand before looking back, seeing Risako pulling to a stop beside her.
Catching some air, Risako looks at Miyabi looking a little white as she overdo herself on running. "Sorry I'm late Miya."
"Its okay. Your not late at all." She smiles at the younger girl that made Risako's cheek go red. Noticing the sudden change in color, Saki looks at Miyabi then to Risako. I'm not jealous....
Finally gaining back her composure, Risako finally noticed their Captain standing in front of them. "Captain. I didn't notice you were there. Sorry."
"That's okay Risako." Saki replied and gave out a smile.
"Well then, let's go." Miyabi says to Risako before smiling to Saki. "We're going." She wanted to kiss Saki but she can't as the youngest was here and they haven't talked about spreading the news about them.
"Okay then. Take care you two, and I hope you get the clothes you like Risako." Captain reminded the both of them and waited for them first to take their leave.
"You're not coming with us Captain?" Risako asks, also a form of invitation.
Saki shook her head. "Sorry, I love too but I have a practicum I need to finish."
"What practicum?" Miyabi asks not believing that her girlfriend didn't tell her before.
"A practicum for Community Service. I'll tell you about it later, for now, the two of you enjoy the rest of the day." Saki didn't wait for them to leave as she intended to but she was the first to leave. Leaving Miyabi still confused and disappointed.
Miyabi's gaze followed Saki as she enters a store a few meters away. I don't understand...What is this practicum all about?
Feeling a tug on her shirt, she snapped out of her thoughts as she looks at Risako. "Hmm?"
"Let's go!" Risako replied while tugging Miyabi's arm to the nearest clothing store.
...an hour has passed
"How about here?" Miyabi asks while pointing at the store in front of them.
Risako looks at the clothes that were being shown at the other side of the glass. Please let this be the store... Miyabi pleaded as she waits for the younger to respond. Since they've been gone to every clothing store they passed by but nothing was bought. Finally moving her head away from the glass, she held Miyabi's hand and leads her inside. Yes! Thank you!
Inside, they browsed on every rack they saw until they took out some shirts, dresses, skirts and blouses for Risako to try on. Walking to the changing room, Miyabi waits for Risako in the waiting room, just outside the changing rooms. Scanning the room, she found a beanbag to sit on while she waits. I wonder if what we pick will suit her. Miyabi wondered as she stares at the door where Risako went in.
Minutes has passed and Risako went in and out of the changing room to change into each clothes they picked. Going back in as she started to try the last clothing that hangs beside the mirror.
After a few minutes, the door opens, revealing Risako in a blue-green dress with traces of little white and pink colors around bottom. Miyabi froze as she looks at the girl as she twirls, showing off the dress that seems she likes very much. Her cheeks grew red, liking...no, loving what she was seeing. Can't control herself, she sat there, still frozen with her cheeks red, her mouth, dropping as she looks at the other girl who was still showing off the great looking dress.
Finally contented in showing it off, she now turns to Miyabi. She find it kind of odd that Miyabi was sitting in front of her, not moving and her mouth a little open, but it made her blush when the thought that Miyabi was checking her out came popping in her mind.
"So... How is it?" Risako finally asks, snapping back the frozen girl into reality.
"You look great - I mean beautiful." Miyabi corrected as she was getting sucked into the other girls appeal.
Risako turned red after hearing the other girl’s response, feeling a little bit of change in the room temperature.
Still haven't said a word after her last comment, Risako walks closer to her since she will show off the cute little white and pink colors at the bottom when she lost her balance and fell. As the impact occurred, Risako thought she was going to hurt herself much more but the impact that occurred seemed not right. Opening her eyes, a familiar face was just a few centimeters away from hers. Staring at the older girl in surprise, she thought of standing up but her legs won't move.
Looking down at the face of the fallen angel, Miyabi can't lift her arms and legs as if held in place by an invisible rope. As they stare at each other, each feeling the warmth the other gives. Risako started to slowly leaning forward staring at Miyabi's eyes then to her lips then to her eyes again, trying to tell the other girl what she wants. Miyabi could feel her heart beat faster than before as Risako started to lean forward. Is this a good idea? I have a girlfriend... i shouldn't... but... Risako's face kept getting closer. but...her lips... looks so soft... I... I want to.. Miyabi leaned forward as she pressed her lips unto Risako's. Miyabi wrapped her arms around the younger girl as she pulls her closer.
Is this how it feels when you cheat on your girlfriend? Miyabi asks herself as she enjoys the time her lips were locked unto Risako's. Its wrong... but it feels great... When Risako breaks their kiss, Miyabi wanted more and leaned in again. Not getting a push back, it seems the younger girl still wants to continue. They kept their lips locked in a passionate encounter when the door swings open. The two was startled to a stop and looks at the doorway.
"I... I-I'm sorry for disturbing you..." The voice from the figure on the doorway said. Panic and embarrassment echoing from her voice. The person quickly grabbed the doorknob and closed it behind her.
They couldn't see the face of the person who just ruined the great time they were having because of the lights behind, that made them a little blind. The only thing they know is that it was only an employee because of the color of the clothes the person was wearing.
"That's what we get when we don't lock the door." Risako giggles as she looks at Miyabi.
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Can't believe I wrote something like that...
Comments please! :heart:
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"100,000 yen" wow that's EXPENSIVE :o :o :o .... (around 100yen = USD $1)
Aoki from Music Fighter is correct, Risako can get anyone she wants :o :o :o :o ...... and somehow I can understand coz I can't resist her too .....
captain ........
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yeah. expensive... actually that is also P50,000 in the Phillippines. I don't know what kind of shoe in my story but so far, I know that there are shoes here in the Philippines prices ranges at P22,000-P50,000.. I don't know what the difference of those shoes to the cheap ones. Coz when I looked at the shoes of a batch mate of mine whose shoes costs P22,000, I can't see the difference.
I guess I pretty much overdone it... :sweatdrop:
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Keep going Panick-chan! :D
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To ANYONE who is currently reading/browsing this topic:
I am currently letting this fic be criticized by my friend and as a hint, she caught many mistakes. To correct these mistakes, I'll be changing some parts, but not entirely the whole fic. I'm just going to rephrase somee parts, add "comma's", and change some parts tense. Its because the tense in my fic isn't constant. (Decided to just put everything I learned in the next chapter. XD)
Being a science girl, in a science course, makes it hard to make fics, one-shots or even stories, because science people writes in a different manner than those who are CA people (Communication Arts). I'm trying my best to make fics that wouldn't be near the descriptions science people use.
So I apologize on how my fics are right now. I still need to pay attention to my writing skills, which needs improvement. As I was saying earlier, I will just redo the mistakes, I won't totally rewrite all the chapters.
My friend told me, my fic is okay, "pero for a science girl, ok ka magsulat," was her distinct words. [translation: but, for a science girl, you're good in writing]
So these days, I'll be busy finishing what my friend told me over at YM last night, and that means, no updates until I fiinish redoing the mistakes. :lol: sorry... XD updates will be soon!
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okay, there is not enough mirii in the world ;P
So, major props to you for having a miyaxrii scene and stuff
ahaha, i thoroughly did enjoy that cute scene at the end of that chapter.
so good job and do more risakoxmiyabi scenes or have a whole chapter for them lol.
;P
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Your fic is great!
SakixMiyabi, MiyabixRisako :)
I agree with kosu. That's too expensive in euros too: 825€ :O
Anyway, great chapter! I want to read the next soon :grin:
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I finished reading both chapters earlier, but dunno what to write :P There are too much fluffiness oh god... I can't handle all of it :lol:
Keep up the chapters flowing! :heart:
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@loser87: yey! XD but I won't be having MiiRii for a while..
@Liben: you're new here! Welcome! XD *hug*
@ziggurat: lol thank you for your wonderful comment! :heart:
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I tried something new on this chapter. I actually haven’t written anything since I last updated this fic. Why? I didn’t have any motivation and focus to do it. I don’t know, maybe I was just distracted by so many things.
Btw, if you know faraithi, thank him for having this chapter out. He helped me believe in myself to continue this fic, since I was soon to break down last night.
Nothing to worry about, I will continue this fic until I can’t think of anything more to add. XD
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(I haven't read this yet to see mistakes.. will do after posting...)
Chapter 3 – Past
Running out of the dimly lit corridor, Saki stopped on her tracks as Nakai-san, the store manager called her, “Shimizu-san, did you found the shirt the woman was looking for?“ She kept silent for a while, trying to get her voice back, as she looked down, not wanting to meet her manager’s gaze.
“I’m sorry, sir. I-I couldn’t,” she fidgeted as she squeezed her left arm tightly, making the store manager look at her worriedly.
“Are you okay, Shimizu-san?” he asked, trying his best not to hit a nerve, as she looked near to cry. He put her hand on the girls shoulder, trying to make her know he was concerned.
Saki can hear heart crying, as she remembers what happened earlier. She wanted to cry, but the time and place made it difficult, “I-I’m okay, sir. I just can’t find it.” She lied and it seems he didn’t buy it.
A girl came out of the same corridor, holding the shirt Saki was assigned to get. She walked to the woman who was done waiting, and was about to complain, until she handed it to her. The woman smiled at the girl, thanking her before paying at the cashier. The girl was about to attend the needs of another customer when, she was called by their manager.
“Murakami-san!” he called and the girl came forward.
“Hai?” she asked, her gaze falling on Saki, who was beside her. Did something happen?
“Murakami-san, please escort Shimizu-san to the back and let her rest for a while,” she nodded and held Saki’s hand, leading her to the back room, where they were allowed to rest.
Closing the door behind her, Megumi walked towards the girl she escorted. She was about to speak when, she heard soft weeping sounds from the girl in front of her. “Saki-chan,” she called, but it looked like the other girl didn’t hear her.
“Saki-chan,” she called once again, but the other didn’t move. She only knew one thing that can at least help Saki for now. She started to reach out for her but pulls away after hesitating.
She didn’t want to hear Saki cry, she made this promise to herself that when she and Saki meet again, she didn’t want to hear her cry, or rather, she didn’t want her to cry. Maybe its because of what she did to her before, I made her wait… I made her trust me… I let her take care of me… I agreed to love her as she loved me… she started balling up her fists, trying to shake off the past memory, she took long to forget. But in the end… I wasted all her efforts… I… I let her fall… I chose this guy over her… She cried… for so long, she cried because of me…
She looked at the crying girl, still trying not to go deeper on her past memory, she tried to reach for Saki again, as she finally touched her, holding her close. The other girl didn’t resist, but buried her face on the others arms and continued to cry.
Megumi’s heart kept beating fast, as she held the vulnerable girl in her arms, holding her tighter. What could have made her cry like this again? she wanted to ask, but was scared to, knowing that she once made her cry like this. How nostalgic…
The weeping didn’t stop, but she felt the other girl move and gave her space, still wrapping her arms around her. “Megu…” the girl looked up to her, her eyes looking like it was beaten up by Maimi, but the feelings of sadness and pain revealing in those hollow eyes.
The girl finally opened up, revealing what she was keeping inside, as she let Megumi hold her, like old times.
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Their work for the day is finished. They walked out the door, as they finished saying their thanks.
”It’s great we finally finished the practicum this early,” Megumi said, breaking the silence between the two of them.
The other girl slowly nodded, “I didn’t expect we would finish the assigned time in just a day. I’m gonna miss working in that store.”
Megumi couldn’t help but smile when she Saki finally let out a smile, “I wonder if I can still help out tomorrow,” Saki turned to Megumi, seeing her smiling genuinely at her, she pulled back her gaze in front, as her face turned slightly red.
“Nakai-san told me, in the next three days, he needed someone to help him with the store. He was going to give a sale and there won’t be a doubt that many people would come and fill up the store.” Megumi looked up, wondering what Nakai-san’s store would look like when people come barging in and fight for the clothes. She smiled at the thought but Saki stopped a few meters back, staring at a paper, glued to the wall.
“You go ahead Megu, I need to go talk to Nakai-san again.” Saki explained, before running off to the clothing store again.
She thought of running after her but instead, she looked at the piece of paper she was looking at before.
“In need of help for my 3 day sale. Only ages 17-25 can apply. 35,000 Yen a day.” Megumi read, letting her lower jaw fall a little, “35,000 Yen a day? That’s way too much, wait…” She looked at the bottom of the paper and found out why the pay is that huge, “So that’s why, he’ll only be hiring two people.”
So, Saki’s still wants to buy the shoes Miyabi wanted… Even if she saw what happened earlier… She’ll even work for three days just to get the money to buy it. What a great girlfriend… Megumi thought as she gave out a smirk.
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Letting herself fall on her bed, Saki stared at the ceiling, thinking that after three days, she’ll be able to buy Miyabi the shoes she want. Why does she need shoes that expensive? She let out a sigh, As long as she’s happy with it, and that’s fine with me.[/b]
She kept silent until she felt her side ache. She sat up, and jumped off of bed as she saw who poked her.
“What are you doing here?” She asked, while still trying to overcome the shock she just got.
“Why? Is it forbidden for me to visit my girlfriend?” Miyabi asked back, giving out a pout.
Seeing her girlfriend pouting, she composed herself and took hold of her hand, pulling Miyabi into a deep, passionate kiss. She held her lips locked with hers for a while until Miyabi pulled herself away.
“Have you eaten dinner?” Saki asked, while fixing the bed and slid herself under the covers.
“Yes, you’re mom really knows how to cook.” She answered, as she followed Saki under the covers.
As she was already comfortable, snuggling beside the small figure of her girlfriend, Saki leaned in to kiss her, but pulled away after a while. As they both stared at each other, Miyabi wraps her arms around Saki’s neck and pulled her down, resulting on another making out session.
Saki tried to pull away again, but Miyabi held her still, making her kiss deeper, as she slid her tongue inside the others mouth.
Saki froze for a second, wondering what made Miyabi kiss her like this. She didn’t mind having this but it was just new, they haven’t done this before.
Not holding back any longer, she started to return Miyabi’s intense kiss, as she started to kiss her deeper, more passionately but torrid. She started to go down, kissing Miyabi’s neck, as Miyabi whispered her name. She took hold of Miyabi’s thigh and strokes it as she returned to Miyabi’s lips, burning themselves from their own heat for the rest of the night.
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:o :o :o :o Captain !? ..... that's her practicum .....
Captain is TERRIBLY crushed ........ she warned Miya "I'm letting you go with her tomorrow, but don't let anything happen between the two of you. I'm a jealous person" ...... and now she saw this with her own eyes ........
Megu, do your thing ~ steal her from Miya XD (just kidding lol)
her eyes looking like it was beaten up by Maimi
LOL ..... sorry.... (to me, beat up by Maimi is heaven XD)
XD captain is the best girlfriend ever XD (please don't tell the other girls I said that lol)
Saki froze for a second, wondering what made Miyabi kiss her like this
evil Miya ... she felt guilty, that's why lol
hmmm.... hope they didn't do something illegal since they're both underage LOL
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Cool chapter!
Saki froze for a second, wondering what made Miyabi kiss her like this
evil Miya ... she felt guilty, that's why lol
I agree lol
So... Megu and Captain were together long time ago, but Megumi broke with Saki because the boy of the polemic? Wow, that's wonderful!
Captain is a good girlfriend :heart: Too good, too innocent... :lol:
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hmmm.... hope they didn't do something illegal since they're both underage LOL
@kosu: lol, I assure you, they didn't.. XD
Megu and Captain were together long time ago
@Liben: yeah.. :) I just thought of ZYX days... :lol:
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I will soon be going to my thinking place, and when I do, I assure you that the next chapter will be out, either later or tomorrow. :grin:
Thank you for your comments. :heart:
It helps me get the will to do the next chapter soon. XD
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Why Miyabi? WHY???
Even while Saki is busy saving money to buy you some ridiculously expensive shoes too. Saki = BEST BOYGIRLFRAN (http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5658/sakimiya.gif) evar. I'm going to have to trust in the pairing in parenthesis at the top of this thread and BELIEVE that Risako doesn't come between them.
LULZ@Megu, your Captain-love is so obvious. She's taken though. Raaawr.
I don't know about this Panick... I want Miya x Saki ♥ but present Miya doesn't deserve her what with her making out with Risako. DDD: (...but at the same time... Rii-chan<3) Make this better somehow prs!
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I can't really imagine captain cries, but this is indeed a sad chapter :pleeease: But seeing a wild Megumi appearance, I feel really excited :D This will keep getting better and better. Thanks for the new chapter, panick :cow:
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I'm going to have to trust in the pairing in parenthesis at the top of this thread and BELIEVE that Risako doesn't come between them.
I don't know about this Panick... I want Miya x Saki ♥ but present Miya doesn't deserve her what with her making out with Risako. DDD: (...but at the same time... Rii-chan<3) Make this better somehow prs!
@Kuji: lol, I kind of thought you were going to say that.. XD no worries. It will be fine... :twothumbs Just believe in the pairing in the parenthesis. 8)
I can't really imagine captain cries
@ziggurat: me too, but, when you break down, you break down. And thanks for still reading this fic.. XD
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er.....as ive noticed this past few days that this forum has been filled up with new fics with miya and saki....haha :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy:
where's my miya and risako meds fic? lol :angry1:
hmm......well, i like this fic, hahaha miya the cheater! i really like it....er, erased that, love it! :ding:
but...poor saki-chan! :OMG: if i saw my bf kissing someone else, i will kick his butt right away! :onionwhip: :onionwhip: :onionwhip:
saki such a martyr, not to mention she's working hard for that 100t yen for her cheater gf, hahaha :sweat:
well, next chappie author-san! :kneelbow:
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@ayase: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: sorry... to tell the truth... I was bothered by a Miya/Rii fic when I was writing this chapter... I'm still building the plot but it will be a MiyaRii for sure. XD
okay, as I was saying to ayase, yes, I am planning to do another fic, but I'm still thinking if I'll do it after this fic or while I write this fic, and yes, its MiyaRii. :yep:
hold that thought.... I think it'll be just a long one-shot... idk yet..
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Chapter 4 – I Don't Deserve Her
Five minutes had passed since Saki turned off her phone’s alarm, telling her it was already 5:30 in the morning. She tried to sit up, but a hand pulled her down and wraps itself around her waist. I guess I won’t be going out for a jog today. She told herself, stroking the younger girls hair, as the girl snuggled close to her.
“Must… tell… Saki…” whispered the girl beside her.
“What do you need to tell me? Miya? Are you awake?” Saki asked while trying to take a peek on the girls face.
She waited for a few minutes but the girl didn’t answer, I guess she’s still asleep, she concluded as she carefully moves Miyabi’s hands off of her, and slowly moves out of the bed. She looked out of the window, couldn’t find the sun anywhere. She stretched her hands upward, giving out a yawn before putting them down, and then looks at Miyabi who was still sleeping peacefully on her bed.
She leaned over to kiss her but a voice made her stop, “Must… tell… about… kiss…” It was just Miyabi, talking in her sleep, realizing it was about the kiss yesterday, Tell me about the kiss… She looks at the sleep-talking girl as she smiled, carefully brushing off some hair that were covering the other girls face.
“About that kiss, Miya-chan…” She continued stroking the girls’ hair, “I told you before that I don’t want anything going on between you and Risako,” She stopped playing with the girls’ hair and turns to her face.
“I haven’t told you, I saw the whole thing…” She gently placed her hand on the girls face, caressing the quiet girl’s face, “I… can understand when Risako leaned in…” she pauses for a moment, trying to clear her throat for the next words she’ll be saying, “But…when you were the one who kissed her, I… felt my heart beat faster…” Saki tried to hold back her tears as she held the other girls hand, squeezing it tightly, but the girl didn’t move.
“Feeling anger rushing through my veins… I keep telling myself, please stop… please stop it Miyabi… please…” She can’t hold it anymore, she looked down, letting her tears fell, “That’s when I opened the door… cause I wanted you to stop…”
She lets go of the other girl’s hand, as she tries to wipe her tears. She then leaned to the girl she loved, and whispered to her ears, “Please Miya… don’t do it again… I… I don’t know what I’ll do when I see you do that again…” Crying made it hard for her to continue, but she still wanted to say one thing, “Please remember, Miya… I love you.”
With that, she fled out of the room, ran towards the front door, quickly slid her feet in her running shoes and runs out of the house, running as fast as she can, as she let her tears come, she can’t stop crying, Miya… why do you have to do that… am I not enough?
Miyabi’s POV
She’s gone… I wanted to stand up and follow her but my legs won’t move. I wanted to cry, as she told me she saw me kissing Risako yesterday, but I can’t, I can’t let her know I was awake the whole time she was talking. Why am I so selfish? She was crying and I didn’t even hold her. Is it because I cheated on her? Am I feeling guilty for yesterday?
Miyabi’s eyes started to get wet, as she realized how much she hurt Saki in just that one time she let herself be controlled by temptation. She buried her face on the covers and there she cried.
Why am I so stupid? I let myself get carried away, and now I hurt Saki. I… I need to apologize…
Why didn’t I tell her last night? I was scared, scared that she’ll get hurt, since she warned me not to have anything with Risako…
She stopped thinking and just cried. Saki might come back soon, I should stop crying, she tried to hold back her tears but she failed, she curled herself as she keeps on crying. I don’t deserve to be her girlfriend…
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Finally back in the house, Saki takes off her shoes before walking to her room. She froze in front of the door with her right hand holding the doorknob, when she heard crying inside. She quickly opens the door, seeing Miyabi curled up on her bed, crying.
“Miya, what happened?” She quickened her pace and as she reached the bed, Miyabi threw herself on her chest. Saki wrapped her arms around her as the girl buried her face on her chest.
“I’m sorry Saki… I let myself get carried away… I… I let my desire control me… I…” She couldn’t find the words to continue as Saki held her tightly.
Saki gave her a tender kiss on her head, as she realized Miyabi heard everything she said earlier, “Don’t worry about it anymore Miya. Its finished. We can forget about it.”
Saki let her cry until her tears were near to dry. Miyabi moved back a little, and looked at her near to be ex-girlfriend, as the other smiled softly, I don’t deserve to be her girlfriend, not after what I had done… Miyabi opens her mouth, but the other girl stopped her from saying anything.
“You were thinking way too much again, Miya,” the girl started as she leaned closer, closing the gap between them, as she kissed Miyabi.
She held it there for a while, waiting for the other to return the kiss. She waited another few seconds and was about to let go, when the other returned it. They locked themselves into a passionate kiss, not letting each other go.
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Lying down on the bed, holding each other close, when a voice from downstairs startled them, “Saki! Miya, dear! Breakfast is ready!”
“Why are you the only one she calls dear?” Saki turned to Miyabi, laughing.
“Because she likes me.” Miyabi answered, accompanying the other girl in laughter.
“Because she likes you as my girlfriend.” Saki corrected, as she gently pushes Miyabi’s nose.
Still not getting out of bed, a knock came from the door, “Saki! Miyabi, dear, breakfast is ready. You don’t want to miss breakfast, Saki, or else you’re going to tire yourself quickly.” Her mother called on them once again, but this time, they got off the bed.
“We’re coming mom.” Saki replied as she looked at the mirror, not wanting her mother to know that she cried. Another face came up on the mirror, as she felt sudden warmth behind her.
“Do I look awful?” Miyabi asked while checking her face on the mirror.
“Yes, you do.” Saki let out another laugh, teasing Miyabi is fun for her.
Miyabi pouts a little but it faded when she recalled what Saki’s mother said earlier.
“Saki, you’re going to work today? I didn’t get any message from H!P.” Miyabi asked while searching her phone for maybe an unread message.
“Not that work.” Saki replied as she was combing her hair, “I told you yesterday I have a practicum to finish.”
“About that, what is this practicum?” Miyabi countered as she glared at Saki for not making it clear yesterday.
“It’s a project for a class of mine, we need to finish 40 hours of community service, you know, helping out a community.” Saki smiled as she turned to her girlfriend who was glaring at her.
“Oh… Then, until when are you going to do this project?” Sounding a bit curious and disappointed as she knows she won’t be able to be with Saki for the next few days.
“I still need to work for three days.” Saki answered as she pulled Miyabi closer to her, “Don’t worry, I’ll be visiting you when I get out of work early.”
“But… three days is long…” Seeing the older girl smiling gently at her, the only thing she could say is, “Okay, fine… But you better visit me or else I’ll cheat on you again.”
Hearing what the other girl said, Saki didn’t mind as she knows, no, believes that Miyabi won’t cheat on her again.
“Saki! -” “We’re coming!”
Saki held Miyabi’s hand and led her to the kitchen for breakfast.
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You're fast :D They're still going about this, huh? It's like reading a shoujo manga :lol: Man, it's hard to understand girls. :P
Thanks for the new chapter :kneelbow:
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captain is the best girlfriend ever (did I just say that again?? oops ....) LOL
well, captain maybe understands that 99% of human can't control themselves when Risako leaned in ... LOL
Miya don't do it again ... no one knows what Saki will do ...
as for Risako ... let me handle the punishment :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :twisted: :twisted:
hmmm.... hope they didn't do something illegal since they're both underage LOL
@kosu: lol, I assure you, they didn't.. XD
really ?? hmmm :? :? .......... :grin: :grin: :grin:
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Waouh u are fast!!!
Chapter 3:
OMG.... Miya..... >___<
aww Saki, u are the Best Girlfriend.... but don't be to kind.
Chapter 4:
aww Saki, so kawaii and kind
Miya don't cheat her again >.<
Even if u will not see her during some days.
You will break her heart again.... otherwhise I can't fogive you >_<
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Great chapter!
Miya... don't cheat her again :sweatdrop:
Waiting for the next chapter~!
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@ziggurat: well, its easy to understand guys... :lol:
@kosu: so you really prefer Saki x Miya.. lol great to know that! :twothumbs and what punishment will you give to Risako???
@YumePouk: lol, am I fast? want me to slow down? well, its summer vacation right now, so I really don't have anything to do... XD
@Liben: idk when the next chapter will be out.. but yeah, just wait for it and enjoy this new fic I just posted! :grin:
I've said earlier right? I got a new idea for a new fic and here it is! ^_^
I made a video for it, since I got inspired doing one when I saw indigo's vid for YajiUme... XD
So btw, here is the link for the video [noembed]Hoping for Chance [SakiMiya Fic] (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i1lgN_i73y4#lq-lq2-hq-vhq)[/noembed] *I just uploaded it so maybe its not in a better quality*
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Lol what. Captain is having a hot for Momo too? lol. Maybe Berryz members kiss each other everytime they meet.
J/k lol. Thanks for the new chapter :lol:
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^ its a new fic... its not in Torn in Two.. ^_^
well, you must watch the video first to trully understand the fic...
you can access the vid by clicking on the title of the Fic on top of my post.. ^_^
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comment time!..... :cool2:
so, torn in two is a mi-rii fic??? hontou??? :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: kya! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: suki desu author-san!
well, all i can say is that, miya's some kind of a cheater huh? haha :on hobo: :on lol:
new fic with saki-chan again? haha :hehehe:
keep it coming author-san...i mean the miya-risako fic.... :kneelbow:
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^^ Oh my bad. You put it in the same thread? Ok, I will pay more attention lol. Sorry for that.
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@ayase: lol Torn in Two is really a Saki/Miya fic... but my new one, Hoping for Chance (chapter 1 above), is a mix of Saki/Momo, Miya/Risako and Miya/Saki... ^_^
@ziggurat: no prob... and maybe I should make a new one just for the new fic... lol
I should make a new thread for Hoping for Chance since I think most of you are getting confused.. sorry about that.... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
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Lol
NOOOOOOOO
Don't slow down~~~~ :D
I want to know what happen next >_<
:w00t: you're in ur summer vacation already~~~ Lucky ^^
that Rocks :cow:
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Chapter 5 – Special Day Part 1
After they ate breakfast, Saki and Miyabi took turns on using the bathroom, as they get ready to go. Saki’s mother bid them farewell, as they went out of the door and walked towards the train station. The older girl sat on one of the benches in the waiting area, while they wait for the train to come. Miyabi sat beside her, “Do you really need to work until later in the afternoon?”
Saki nodded as she flips to the next page of a textbook she brought with her, “Are there any exemptions?” Saki looked at her, closing the book.
“I’m sorry Miya, if I don’t need to do this, I’ll spend the whole three days with you.” Saki leaned in and kissed her cheek. She looked at the tracks to see if the train is already visible.
She couldn’t take her eyes away from the older girl, as she wanted to tell her what is going to happen at the day of her last practicum, “Saki…”
The older girl turned to her, smiling happily, “hmm?”
“Do you remember any special event that will be happening this week?” She asked, examining the other girls face.
Saki tilted her head sideways, thinking of a special event that Miyabi was asking, “Well?” Miyabi asked, getting a little bit worried, as she guessed the other girl forgot all about it.
Saki kept quiet until a loud honk came from the tracks, “Ah! The train is here,” Saki exclaimed, as she stands up, held Miyabi’s hand and drags her inside the train.
The train trip was quiet, no one even said a word, but the older girl held Miyabi's hand and their fingers intertwined. She didn’t forget, right? Miyabi asked herself, placing her head on Saki’s shoulder. She won’t forget right? She’s my girlfriend. She won’t forget. She continued telling herself, until Saki finally talks.
“Miya,” she started, as she stared at their hands, “hmm?” she answered, looking at the other girls face, “What do you want for your birthday?”
Miyabi’s eyes widened, I knew she wouldn’t forget, she hums a tune for a while, as she thinks of a thing she wants, “Can I have anything?” she asked slyly, as her hands held Saki’s hand in between.
Saki looked at her, smiling her usual, warm, loving, caring smile, as she caressed Miyabi’s face, “Of course, anything my princess would want.”
“Then, I want-” she stopped, remembering the shoe, but she knew it was impossible to buy that for now, “I want you come and stay in the party I’ll be having two days from now.”
Saki looked at her, confused, why didn’t she ask for those expensive shoes?
“That’s all?” Saki asked, tying to see if she will ask for it.
The younger girl nodded, “Yes, nothing else. I just want you to be in the party and maybe, we could announce about us…” her voice faded as she said the last word. Many doubts came popping in their heads as to what the others would think if they get to know about them.
The train pulled to a stop, Saki took the younger girls hand and led her out to the streets. When they arrived on Miyabi’s house, she wanted to let her girlfriend in but she remembered, the other had work to do, “So…see you later then.”
“Yeah, see you later. Oh yeah, I’ll be bringing snacks when I come by.” Saki smiled genuinely at the younger girl, she held her hand again, but this time, pulled her closer and planted a kiss on her lips. Miyabi didn’t want this to end, but the older pulled back, and bid her goodbye.
That afternoon, true to her word, Saki came by with snacks they just ended up finishing before they could give to Miyabi’s parents. The next day went by the same, nothing really special happened between the two of them, only a few hugs and kisses.
Finally, the third day came, and it was also Miyabi’s special day. Not wanting to get out of bed, she reached her phone and found 16 unread messages, What? 16 messages?
She opened the first one, which she received exactly midnight, she read it aloud, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY MIYA! As you want for your birthday, I’ll be going to your party later. I just need to finish my work and I promise, I’ll be there as soon as I can.”
She was so happy that the very first one who greeted her was Saki. She really stayed up until midnight as she promised me on the phone last night. She scrolls down, as continued reading, ”You must be asleep by now, so when you read this, just imagine that I’m beside you, holding your hand tightly, while I caress your cheek, and give you a kiss,” she did as she told her and after imagining it, she actually felt a warm peck on her cheek. She felt her ears burning, as her face turned red. Her face can’t contain her shade of red when she read the last sentence, “I love you. <3 <3”
Her heart, racing as she got thrilled on finally seeing Saki again later in her special day, she opened her other messages and found out all of H!P Kids has greeted her, and one unexpected greeting from Tanaka-san.
She replied all of them with a “Thank you,” and an invitation to her party later. She wanted the whole karaoke place to herself, but it was too big and she just invited 16 people, so that means its only going to be two rooms if they won’t fit in one.
She threw herself on the bed as thoughts of Saki came popping in her mind then she remembered Risako and the desire she felt, when she kissed her. It was…great. She can’t describe it anymore, and she fell into deep thought, When I kissed Risako that day, it felt wonderful, enjoyable, passionate, and I actually wanted more, that’s why I leaned in after. Now that she thinks of it again, why can’t I describe it as before? Is it really just for that time? She kept quiet, thinking she wanted to kiss Risako again, just to confirm if she really liked the kiss lustfully or it was just for that one time, that she thought Saki wouldn’t see. She shook her head, trying to get those thoughts out, she stared at the ceiling, trying to find something on it to grab her attention, but her thoughts lingered again, I’ll kiss her…
She jumped out of bed, hitting both her cheeks, “Miyabi! What are you thinking! You can’t do that! You have a girlfriend, a GREAT girlfriend!” She kept walking back and forth, organizing her thoughts, You can’t find any other girl like her Miyabi, and you LOVE her!
Her pace got faster, as a trail became visible, I’ll place some rules. First, cheating is a NO-NO! Upon saying this, she instantly remembered Tsuji-san. A smile formed on her face but she shook her head, making herself focus, Second! Making Saki cry is a sin! Now, I’m accused guilty for that rule. She continued walking, not feeling any pain on her feet, “Lastly, love her.” She finally stopped, smiling contentedly on her rules, but then, her smile faded as she lay down on the floor, wanting to do a tantrum, “What number is that rule? I can’t believe I forgot what number I was on.” She pouts, as she did do a tantrum, I feel stupid and need to go back to kindergarten…
***In Nakai-san’s clothing store that afternoon***
Saki cleaned up the mess as Nakai-san turned the sign around, showing CLOSED behind the glass. Nakai helped Saki finish cleaning, before letting her go.
“Thank you for helping me Shimizu-san. I’m disappointed on Cho for not coming today. If he comes tomorrow to collect his pay, I’ll just give him the amount for two days.” Saki giggled as Nakai-san looked furious as he thought of Cho, a boy about 5 years older than her. Nakai-san is really upset that Cho didn’t come.
“The one that really made me pissed of is that, he let you take care of it all. The sad thing there is that, you’re a girl. He’s a guy! You’re younger. He’s older!” Saki really felt bad for Nakai-san, even if Cho let her do everything today, Nakai-san helped her along the times, people keep on asking her for the shirts they were holding.
“That’s okay Nakai-san, we managed to sell everything today. Let Cho be, maybe he met an emergency and need to excuse himself for the day.” Saki tried to cheer him up, and he did, reaching a brown envelope on the counter and handed it to Saki.
“Here. I have put more than you’re expected pay. Thank you again Shimizu-san.” Saki wanted to give back the extra money, but Nakai insisted that she keep it.
“Thank you Nakai-san for letting me help you.” Saki bowed down, showing her thanks.
Nakai shook his head, “It’s okay Shimizu-san, and you’re a big help.” He smiled at her but got curious, “Well Shimizu-san, I’m sorry for asking but, why did you want to help work for me these three days?”
Saki smiled, playing with the envelope on her hands, “I was saving for a gift for a special someone.” She felt a slight blush came up but she tried hard to hide it.
Nakai-san smiled happily at her, “You worked hard just to buy a gift for a special someone?” he kept on smiling as Saki felt him staring at her, “That’s very thoughtful of you. He must really be lucky to have a girlfriend like you.”
Her face turning redder, she thanked Nakai-san again before leaving the store. She went straight to the Nike shop and looked for the shoes Miyabi wanted. She circled the whole shop but she couldn’t find it. She made her way to an employee of the store and asked about those shoes, “I’m sorry miss, but someone already bought it, and that is the only stock we got.” Seeing that Saki’s expression changed, failure and disheartened feeling came creeping to the employee’s back, “If you really want that shoes, the girl who bought it, just went out of the shop.”
With that, she thanked the man as she dashed out of the shop, trying to catch up with the girl, the employee pointed out.
“Sumimasen!” She called out as the girl stopped and looked her way.
“The cute pink colored shoes in the Nike shop, did you buy it?” Saki asked, gasping for air.
The girl nodded, “Yes, it’s cute isn’t it.”
Saki stood straight and made eye contact with the girl, “Please! Please let me buy it from you,” she bowed down, as a sign of sincerity, “Please, my friend really wanted that and I promised I’ll buy it for her birthday.”
Surprised as to what the younger girl just asked, she held the paper bag closer to her chest, “I’m sorry, but I can’t. I want these shoes.”
Saki looked at her again before bowing down as before, “Please! I’ll pay you more than the amount you bought it. Just let me buy it from you, please!” Saki pleaded, but the girl didn’t agree and walked away. I need to get those shoes.
She ran to the girl again and bowed down as before, still pleading for the girl to release it to her, she did this all over again as the girl tried to walk away three times.
“I said NO!” Saki was taken a back, “I don’t want to sell this to you. As I said, I like this shoe and I won’t sell it!” The girl walked away, leaving Saki feeling disappointed and frustrated, I guess I have to bring her to the shop tomorrow and as what she wanted besides that.
She walked to a well-known bakery near the place of Miyabi’s party. She was in charge of the cake as the others told her last night. She picked this simple white colored cake and let the baker design it the same as in the paper she just handed. I hope it turns out great, Momo and Chinami’s joint drawing of the cakes design made it look great, but I hope the baker understands what they put there.
She sat down at the table, just in front of the counter as she waits for the cake. She felt her phone vibrated, taking it out and reading the message, “How is the cake doing? Miyabi’s getting crazy waiting for it,” she let out a short giggle as she read Maasa’s mail.
“They are getting the decorations done. So what exactly is Miyabi doing?”
“She’s walking back and forth, while saying, Hurry up will yah! I’m getting anxious. Momo kept pulling her down to her seat but she gets up and starts to walk back and forth again. You should tell the pastry man to hurry up, Miyabi wants the cake right now.”
Saki almost laughed when she read about Miyabi and the last sentence in Maasa’s mail, Maasa doesn’t know that the cake is not what Miyabi wanted now, she told herself, giggling, she wanted me to go there now.
The man in the counter called her, handing out the cake in a lovely box. She payed for it and she went straight to the party.
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Miya !!! what the hell are you thinking !! (yet I can understand why)
captain ....
b]what punishment will you give to Risako???
not telling ... LOL .... but don't worry, the punishment will not be that severe, and some part of the punishment will be suspended until she is 18 LOL
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Miya >.< ..... You shouldn't have that though T_T.
but I can't blame you :p -_-"
Aww I feel sad that Saki can't have the shoes.
Lmao Miyabi impatient to see Saki is just Kawaii :wub: :wub:
Ganbatte :cow:
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New chapter :o I read half of it yesterday then I went to work :D After I'm home today, I finished it. It's hard to read because of your style, but hell, it has captain. I am done for :heart:
Thanks for the new chapter :kneelbow:
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:sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
sooo.... it's hard to read because of my style? :shocked :?
:banghead:
sorry... will try to do better... :sweatdrop:
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eh!? hard to read?? I don't feel that way .... hmm ....
maybe it's bcoz I read too much fanfics lol
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^^ Lol, I don't mean your fic is hard to read. I mean it's hard for me to read shojo style writing ( eg: too much kisses between girls, rabu-rabu etc-etc ) :lol: Your fic is good. The problem is me :lol: I'm more of the light fluffy style follower. Hmm, I really don't know how to explain that.
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^ohh.... to tell the truth, I mean seriously, I don't write things like that before... if you want a proof of that, I'll give a link at the bottom... :sweatdrop: I only write light stuff, and more into comedy...
It's been a long time since I wrote a fic, but I read. So maybe, what I'm reading made me change my writing...lol
btw, here is one of my fics before, that I couldn't finish... I only had it until chapter 3 :lol: let's say, I got into H!P and didn't put attention to HSJ at that time... :sweatdrop:
btw, this is Daiki x OC...
The fic I never finished (this is just chapter 1, just to let you see how I changed in writing...) >> http://pain-15.livejournal.com/3625.html (http://pain-15.livejournal.com/3625.html)
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Ah I see. Thanks, I'll try to read it if I can stay awake for some more time :lol: Btw, don't mind my comments lol. There are other fans lurking in the shadow that crave for your fics.
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^ no! Don't read it... XD
:huhuh maybe reading but not craving... :lol:
and what a coincidence, I just found out one who reads my fic but doesn't comment.. XD
but that someone commented in the other forum...lol
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I saw Arioka Daiki x something. Should I google it? :lol: Well, when the front banner finished loading, I already suspect something about it. I don't read it yet :lol:
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^ "hi hi!" *evil laugh*
well, read the first chapter.. :P
nothing fluffy there.. :) just to prove what I said before...
sure, google it.. -^^-
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Sorry ziggurat, I think that "style" might be partly my fault. :oops: I could name another couple writers around here too, but I'm the kids one guilty. :P But I'm curious about your mention of "light fluffy". It doesn't involve kisses? ^^; Of course there are different kinds of them... Anyway. Yeah this section is pretty heavy on the yuri. I hope it doesn't turn you away from reading fics though. ^^; There are some good ones around... Though I suppose you've been around long enough to know what the score is. ^^;
Looks like Miya's finally decided what she wants and is going to stay with it. :P Curious what will happen at this "party". :oops:
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Well, light fluffy from my opinions is like, simple kiss, at the forehead like that and kinda showing a puppy love or something. It is not something that turn into hot steamy utilizing tongue and all that :lol: So yeah. It do involve kisses but just a simple one touch and done like that, that will just you feel *awww* or *sweeet~* XD So yeah, Yuri is not my thing :lol: Well, unless it is in anime or something <_<
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most H!P fics are yuri ... including the ones in other languages lol ... only a couple I read are "light fluffy" LOL
also stop chatting already !! me are waiting for part 2 .... (sorry, chatting and no part 2 makes me a bit cranky lol)
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@rokun: don't blame yourself. ^_^ but your fic really hit me. ^_^ I meant inspired me to try it out. XD
@ziggurat: why do I get the feeling you are going to read the fic I posted as a link?? :wth but, okay... It will make me continue it... anyway, try to imagine thhe other character is a guy. Maybe that will work.
@kosu: ahehe... still working on that part 2. I'm going to write it now though. :sweatdrop:
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Sorry for bumping again :P I try to wait for new chapter to appear first but I'm not really a sober person :lol:
No, I don't read it XD Because you're writing about a girlie dude lol. Well, if you can reversed their gender, I'll read it XD
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^ no prob in bumping! XD
yey! but seriously, its not a girly dude! :cry: just kidding :P
anyway... sorry to keep you guys waiting, I'm currently finishing chapter 6, which is the second part.
and I'm almost done. :twothumbs
will be posting this a little bit later... XD
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Sorry for taking so long.... :sweatdrop:
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Chapter 6 - Special Day Part 2
Finally arriving at the party, Saki placed the cake at the center of the table, after Maimi and Nakky moved the food to make way for the cake. She was about to move away from the table when someone hugged her from behind, “You’re late!” the girl exclaimed while digging her chin on Saki’s shoulder.
“It hurts, Miyabi! Stop it!” she replied, trying to break free from Miyabi’s hold, “I’m sorry. I should have come earlier. I just had trouble-” she stopped, not wanting to tell on how she didn’t get to buy the shoes Miyabi wanted. Noticing the grip finally loosened, she sighed as she thought Miyabi forgave her for being late, She didn’t hear the last word I said…Did she?
As she stood straight, Miyabi pulled her hand, making Saki face her, “Captain! What trouble?” Chinami asked from across the room, “Are you hurt?” Megumi asked, holding Chisato’s hand. A lot of question came from each person in the room, except Miyabi. She looked at Saki with worried eyes. Saki couldn’t take it, “I’m okay. It’s nothing serious.” Miyabi shook her, “Nothing serious? What if you’re badly injured?”
Saki could understand Miyabi’s feelings; she’s her girlfriend, she’s much more worried than the others, “What if something happened to you?”
“Miya, nothing happened to me. See? I’m right in front of you. I just lost my way towards here.” Saki whispered as Miyabi hugged her, “You’re lying…” Miyabi tightened her hold, as Saki wrapped her arms around her waist.
The other members in the room were surprised on what they were seeing, “Am I missing something?” Chisato asked, looking lost, “What? What is it?” Chinami asked, bugging her, “but they are just hugging…” MaiMai answered, while jumping off Erika’s back. Maasa and Yurina, with their outdoor shades, held Miyabi and Saki by the arm, turning them sideways for everyone to see, “Please don’t move. We’ll just point out something to everyone.” Maasa told them, as she was fixing her shades.
Yurina and Maasa each took a stick from the balloons near them, using them as pointing sticks. Maasa cleared her throat, “As you can see how Captain and Miyabi are hugging, we can say this is not just a friendly hug.” Yurina nodded in agreement, “For you guys to know the difference of this hug from a friendly one, we need two volunteers.”
Silence responded to the two of them, “No one wants to volunteer?” Maasa asked as she glared at everyone, but they couldn’t see, since she was wearing shades, “Well, I think we’ll need to pick the volunteers by ourselves.” Yurina concluded as she looked at Maasa who nods at her.
“If both of you pick the volunteers, they can’t be called volunteers anymore.” Miyabi countered, “You guys, let themselves choose.” Saki said, supporting Miyabi’s statement, while burying her face on Miyabi’s chest, “You guys are actually enjoying this… right?” Yurina asked, trying not to stutter, as she saw what Captain did.
“Well then…are there any volunteers?” Maasa asked again, scanning each of the H!P kids, “Why not the two of you?” Kanna asked, with one of her eyebrows up, “How can we point out the difference if we were hugging?” Maasa said firmly, trying to point out that it was impossible.
Finally, Airi and Nakky stood and went to the front, beside Maasa., “Yosh! Now, can you two please hug.” Nakky tilted her head, “How?” Maasa looked at her, grinning, “Just hug. A friendly hug.” Yurina explained, while tapping Maasa’s shoulder with the stick.
Airi and Nakky followed, hugging each other, “Now, pay attention everyone.” Maasa called, pointing at Nakky and Airi’s hands, “First, a friendly hug has both hands at the upper part of the body.” The others nodded, as they listened. Yurina pointed at the hand of Captain, “While in Captain and Miya’s hug, Captain has her hands on Miya’s hips.” A soft ah could be heard from the audience, then Maasa points at the space between the body of Airi and Nakky, “Second, in a friendly hug, there is a space between the bodies…”
“While at Captain and Miya’s hug, there is none.” Kumai pointed at their bodies, circling the pointer at the place where there should be space, “Third!” Maasa said with great power, “In a friendly hug, either their cheeks are touching, or their heads are resting at each others shoulders.” Maasa once again pointed the stick at Airi and Nakky’s cheeks, which were touching, “While in Captain and Miya’s hug, you can see Captain’s face, buried deep on Miyabi’s chest, while Miyabi’s head rests beside Captain’s head.”
“That’s all we need to point out, which gave us a conclusion…” Maasa started, “the way Captain and Miya are hugging…” Yurina continued, “means another thing…” Maasa looked at Yurina, as Yurina nodded and both of them looked at the others, “Captain and Miya are not friends!” both of them said in sync.
“What do you guys mean not friends?” Momo asked with one of her fingers under her chin. Maasa slapped herself on the face while Yurina looked down, disappointed. Can’t stand it anymore, Megumi and Risako stood and both said the same thing, “They are lovers.” Silence once again took over the room, until Miya and Saki let go of each other.
How come Risako knows? Saki asked herself as she looked at Miyabi, Why does Megumi know? Looking at Saki the same time.
The after shock finally came, drowning both Miyabi and Saki with questions, teasing and congratulations. “It looks like they accept the fact that we’re lovers…” Saki whispered as they were being cornered.
After answering all of their questions, they decided to start the party. They celebrated Miyabi’s 17th birthday. They ate while watching the others singing in front, enjoying their time, nothing to think about, just the party, enjoying the time with each other, and the birthday girl.
They then turned to the cake, as they opened the box, MaiMai and Chinami took the cake out, while Momo took the box off the table., “Ah! They really did copy the design!” Momo squealed, “Even the little details we drew!” Chinami added as both of them stared at the cake.
“Now, you two make way. Let the birthday girl see.” Maimi said while pushing Miyabi to the table. Miyabi finally got to see the cake; Momo and Chinami had designed for her. In the middle of the circular cake, Miyabi’s chibi version could be seen. Drawn very well, and she realized it was Chinami’s drawing style. There were also hearts all over the cake, Momo… she knew Momo would put hearts since she loved it. Miya can’t help but to squeal, as she thanked Momo and Chinami for the wonderful design of the cake. She both gave them a hug, before turning to the others, saying her thanks, as she hugged each of them.
They sang Miyabi her Happy Birthday song, then right after, she blew the 17 candles scattered on the cake. Doing the honor of cutting the cake, Miyabi gave each one a piece and they ate together, happily, talking with each other like old times. When they were still one group, no Berryz Koubou, no C-ute.
After the cake, most of them decided to go, leaving only Miyabi, Saki, Maimi, and Erika. The room went quiet as the others left, leaving Miya and Saki finally got the time to cuddle each other without anyone bugging and teasing them. When they finally got comfortable, Saki looked at Maimi and Erika, which were also cuddling, “You guys haven’t told anyone yet? Other than us?” Erika nodded, “Yeah, we still can’t tell the others…Airi’s still recovering.” Maimi explained, after kissing Erika’s hand, “So, she decided to move on?” Miyabi asked while playing with the end of Saki’s shirt.
“Yeah. At first she can’t be in a room when I’m there, she can’t even sing right when I was there. Maybe that’s the reason why it took long before Bye Bye Bye was released.” Maimi answered, while Erika rest her head on Maimi’s shoulder, “How about now?” Saki asked, looking at Maimi and Erika, who were starting to get closer.
“Now…” Maimi started, getting distracted by Erika’s lips, “We’re fine… She’s talking with me again…” She can’t hold it anymore. Maimi leaned in.
As they were enjoying themselves, Miyabi and Saki were just quiet. Taking their time hugging each other, since Miyabi reserved this place until midnight, and it was just nine, “You still haven’t told me about that trouble earlier…” Miyabi whispered, as she played with Saki’s fingers, “It was nothing. I just got so many people to handle in the shop, since Cho didn’t come. Nakai-san was so angry.” Saki explained, trying hard not to bring up the shoe, “What? Cho is five years older than you, and he bailed out at the last day?” Saki nodded, now playing with the younger girls fingers.
“Maybe he had an emergency, that he needs to be excused for the day.” Saki reasoned out, trying to tell Miyabi to let it go. Another silence crept the room, well, not really silence, as Maimi and Erika were still kissing.
Looking at them, Miyabi wanted that too for her birthday, so she wished it, as she then looked at Saki. The older girl was still staring at their hands. She slowly squeezed the younger girls hand. Saki finally met Miyabi’s gaze, as she lets go of her hand, placing her hand under the other girls chin, holding it in place, as she leaned in, giving the other girl her final wish for her birthday.
A knock came from the door and it made both pairs stop their session. Being closer to the door, Maimi opened it, revealing the owner of the place, “Ah! Sumimasen, but can I speak to Natsuyaki-san?”
Miyabi bid goodbye to the three as she followed the owner to his office. Closing the door behind, Maimi looked at Erika, “Erika, I’ll just go to the bathroom, wanna come?” Erika shook her head, “I don’t feel like leaving the room. Sorry Maimi.” It was Maimi’s turn to shake her head as she turned to Saki, “What about you, Saki?”
“Yeah, I’ll go.” Saki stood up and walked out the door as Maimi closed it behind. They started to walk at the corridor, talking about their practices and new song release, Berryz Dakishimete Dakishimete and C-ute’s Bye Bye Bye, “So… how is it with Miyabi? I heard from Megumi that…”
“I don’t want to talk about that anymore Maimi. It’s the past, it already happened, and we sorted it.” Saki butted, as she knew what Maimi was going to say, “I’m sorry…” Maimi apologized for bringing that topic, as they both became quiet.
***In the Office***
“Well, I wanted to greet you happy 17th birthday!” Yamashiko, the owner of the karaoke shop congratulated, as he pulled something from the drawer of his desk and placed it in his pants pocket.
“Thank you, Yama-san.” Miyabi replied, with a big smile, “So, how did your party go?” Yama-san asked, walking to the front of his desk, sitting down on it, “It went great! My friends really help me plan this party.” Miyabi explained, sitting down on the chair beside the table, as Yama-san signaled her to.
“So, how is your dad? Is he going to play bowling with us?” Yama-san asked, leaving his place to stand in front of Miyabi. She was about to answer; when the man took out the thing he took from his table drawer, which made her stop. She stared at the sharp thing, wanting to scream, but the intention of the man, made her lose her voice.
***At the Karaoke Room***
“What’s taking her so long?” Saki asked, walking back and forth, “You keep doing that and you’ll be like Miyabi earlier, as she was waiting for you.” Saki glared at Maimi but the other just gave her a smile, turning her attention to Erika.
Saki walked to the door, “Where are you going?” Maimi asked curiously, “I’m going to get her. Who knows what the guy is doing to her now.” Saki answered as she left the room. She walked towards the office, placing both her hands in her jackets pocket. She walked another five steps when a scream came echoing through the halls. Realizing the voice and where it came from, Saki dashed to the slightly opened door, seeing what she didn’t want to see.
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finally ! it's been TOO long I kinda forgot the story .... *click page 2* .... ahh ... oh ok .....
lol it's time to tell the others ~
LOL @ Yurina + Maasa's lecture lol
I love the way Miya & Captain hug :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
(hey Yurina let me try. you'll be Miya and I'll be captain.
*hug Yuri and did what captain did*
"Kyaa!! WTH!?"
*SLAP*
ow ...)
Risako & Megu ......
the cake XD
MaimiErika ~ but can't tell coz Maimi REJECTED Airi !? :o :o and she's still recovering .......
Airi ..............
MaimiErika LOL
WTF is that guy trying to do to Miya :angry: !!
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Yay :cow:
LOL @Maasa&Yurina are so funny and their explaination too XD XD
But @Megumi&Risako knew about them?
great now everyone know about them 8)
Impatient Saki likes Miya.... so cute :wub: :wub:
Yay GEM rabu rabu~~ but I'm sad for Airi :cry:
Danm what will happen to Miyabi, hope it's not a bad >.<
Ganbatte kudasai :D
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“How can we point out the difference if we were hugging?” Maasa said firmly, trying to point out that it was impossible.
So it's Yurina x Maasa, ne? Cool!
YajiUme is also cool! :heart:
And at the end... What-what-what-what happened? :shocked
Keep writing, kudasai! :thumbsup
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:thumbsup << haven't seen this before... or am I just blind? XD
btw... here is chappie 7! :w00t:
I don't know when I'll be able to update again, since I'm going to record 5 songs for 5 dubbing groups... XD
so please wait for my update. :thumbsup
(ohhh... its short?)
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Torn in Two
Chapter 7 - Poison
***Miyabi’s POV***
I sat down near the table of Yama-san, making myself comfortable, as he asked about my dad. He and my dad were childhood friends, they would always go bowling every Friday, just to check up on each other, and Yama-san had been a family friend ever since my dad married mom, “So, how is your dad? Is he going to play bowling with us?”
I looked at him for a bit, as he stood in front of me. All I know is that, Dad won’t go bowling with them this Friday, since he is needed at the company. I opened my mouth to answer, as Yama-san took something out of his pocket. I instantly froze as I saw it, reflecting some light; its sharp edge scared me as I tried to get up and run, but he held my hand, threw me back at the chair, and placed his hands on the chairs arms, blocking the way I could use to get out.
I was surprised. This man, who is known as my dad’s best friend, this man who my dad trusted, would be cornering his daughter, “Yama-san…what are you doing?” I tried to push his hands, but his strength was no match for me, “You can’t leave…” I heard him say, slowly waving the knife in front of me, as I backed away. Using the knife’s end, he gently placed it under my chin, using it to tilt my head upward, “Today is your birthday, and I feel bad for not being able to give you a present,” he whispered, “So, this will be my birthday present to you.”
He let out a smirk, as he could see my frightened expression, “Yama-san…please don’t…” He leaned closer, his lips near mine. I closed my eyes and looked away, not wanting him to touch me. As his breathing faded, I slowly opened my eyes, seeing him playing with the knife. I glanced at the door, seeing it slightly open, I know the others are still at the room, but I need to try, I need to try anything, just to get out of here. I was getting myself ready to scream, but a hand covered my mouth, “don’t think of screaming… no one would hear you.” I tried to take his hands off, hitting him when I can.
Saki… Please save me… I kept on calling on her in my head, trying my best to call unto her, wishing she would hear me and come to my rescue. I tried hard to get Yama-san’s hands off of me, when he again took his blade, waving it in front of me, taunting me to do anything stupid, and I’ll get it, “You don’t want your girlfriend seeing you covered in blood, right?” He continued taunting me, until he slid the knife between the first and the second button of my shirt. My heart raced, I don’t know what he is going to do. I’m scared…
Saki…please come...save me… I kept on calling, but as I glance at the door, there wasn’t any sign of any living creature, that could stop him. He pulled his knife up, cutting the button out of my shirt, as the top of my shirt opened, revealing a part of my body that I only let my girlfriend see. He stared at it for a while, licking his lips as he liked what he saw. I started to shake, “please stop…” I pleaded, but his hand made it difficult to voice it out.
He licked his lips again, as he stared at my eyes, lust and desire taking over his body. I tried to move, but his stare made me stop, draining my strength, as he kissed me. Saki! Save me! I screamed in my head, as I tried to shake him off, but he held my face in place, placing his knife on top of the table. He held my hips, caressing the curve of my body as he continued to kiss me. Please stop… He slid his hand under my skirt, resting his hand on my left thigh. A burst of power came as I pushed him away. I stood and tried to run to the door, but he grabbed my hand, as I screamed, “No one can hear you! The rooms are sound proof.” He mocked as he pushed me back on the chair, holding me down, as he kissed me again. Saki… his lips left mine, as he slides down to my neck, enjoying himself, as I whimper. Tears started to fall. Saki will come… Saki will save me… I kept on believing, as he slid his hand under my skirt again, caressing my thigh seductively. I tried to scream again, but my crying made it difficult.
Saki… I called again and the door opened, surprising the man who was molesting me, “Get the hell away from her!” I heard her say, hitting Yama-san on the face, making him fall on his desk. She turned to me, as my tears keep falling down. I’m so happy to see her, I know she would come and save me. She held my hand and pulled me up, but before we could get out, Yama-san took her hand, making her face him, “You little!” He swing his arm, and the girl fell.
Saki lay on the floor, wincing in pain as she held her cheek. She started to stand, as I glanced back at the man who just hit her. His eyes, glowering at Saki, letting out a smirk as he clutched his knife, blood dropping from it. The man waited for the girl to stand, as he put his hand back, waiting for the right time to stab her. I just stood there, rooted on where I stand. I can’t move. The fear of Saki being killed crept inside of me, making me tremble as Yama-san grip on his knife tighten, “Saki!” I cried, as Yama-san started to move his hand forward.
I didn’t know what happened next, it happened so fast. I just remember seeing Yama-san hitting the metal drawers on the back of his desk, and someone dragging Saki and me out of the room, through the hallway and into the karaoke room, where Erika immediately took Saki and let her sit down on the chair.
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“How deep is it?” Maimi asked, getting Miyabi to sit down beside Saki, “It’s kind of deep, but it doesn’t need to be stitched.” Erika replied, taking a cotton from her little first aid kit. Maimi then turned to Miyabi, who was staring at the girl beside her, “Are you okay?” she asked, placing a jacket on her shoulders. The girl nodded, “I-I’m okay…”
After putting a bandage on Saki’s cut, Erika turned to Miyabi, searching for any wounds on her, “It seems you don’t have any cuts, bruises or any injury.” She said, as she closed her first aid kit and places it inside her bag. Maimi sat across Saki, as Erika sat across Miyabi, “I didn’t want to follow you earlier, but a feeling made me.” Maimi explained, “Thank you, Maimi. If you didn’t, I don’t know what could have happened to Miyabi and me.” She thanked her, as she held Miyabi’s hand, squeezing it slightly.
Maimi let out a grin, “You were supposed to be Miyabi’s knight in shining armor, but you were the one ended being saved.” Maimi teased, as Saki’s face grew red, “Stop it Maimi. This is not the time to be teasing.” Erika warned as she hits Maimi’s arm, “I’m sorry.” She replied, trying to take off her smile.
Saki looked at Miyabi, as she pulled her into a hug, “I’m sorry for coming late, Miyabi.” Miyabi shook her head, as she buried her face on the older girls chest, “I won’t forgive that guy for touching you.” Saki looked at her, tilting her chin upward, as their gaze met, “He kissed you, right?” the younger girl nodded, as tears came falling down once more. Saki caressed her cheek, wiping away the tears that fell, “Then… let me take the poison out…” She gently pressed her lips unto the younger girl.
Maimi closed her phone, as she turned to the couple, “The police are on their way. Judging my kick on that guy, he won’t be waking up until the police arrives.”
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:angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: *cursing in 6 different languages*
damn, captain's punch is not hard enough ....
Maimi came to the rescue ~~~~~
luckily captain's wound is not that bad ....
yay for Maimi follow captain
“The police are on their way. Judging my kick on that guy, he won’t be waking up until the police arrives.” :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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XD
Maimi's kick is sooo strong! :thumbsup
I guess I should be working on chap 6 of Hoping for Chance, since I finished the 5 recordings I need to do. :yep:
btw, can any of you suggest a group name? I need it for hoping for chance...
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My goodness :bigdeal:
if its by panick-chan then i'm sure to get addicted :nya:
please keep going :on hypto:
i'll be your best friend :hee:
aha me wants more :pleeease: