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Title: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (One Thing or Another...8/3/11)
Post by: adventwriter on August 19, 2009, 07:06:09 AM
Hello all. I decided to write a fanfic - my first fiction writing in over a year. I don't know how fast I can get stuff out, but I'll try.

My first fanfic to be posted here is based on the story I heard that Linlin was quite quiet when she first came and it was because of Ai-chan that she opened up to everyone. I would appreciate any feedback you would be willing to give. Comments on the formatting would also be appreciated. I want to get better at this. This story is just a little something to try and warm your heart. Please enjoy.


Arigatou Ai-chan....

   Kami-sama....so tired....

A young woman gathered her bag from the corner of a deserted dance studio. She let her long brown hair fall from the clip she kept it in during practice before placing the clip in a side pocket of her bag and grabbing the Rakuten baseball cap she was given for promoting their team…

   How long has it been?...four years already....

The girl sighed at the thought, her eyes glistening for a moment as she thought of how much everything had changed since then. She had gone from being the girl no one could understand to the leader of Morning Musume in that span of time. She checked her bag one last time and looked across the darkened dance studio to make sure no one forgot anything.

   It’d be just like Eri to forget something....

She laughed to herself despite the room’s emptiness. Lifting the bag up to her shoulder and pulling the hat down over her eyes she shuffled along to the door, quietly, gracefully, as if her muscles remembered the years of ballet training she had. She pushed through the door and edged along the hallway making her way to the elevator.

   SLAP!

Her bag fell to the cool ground and the sound rebounded in the empty hallway. She had zoned out and missed the elevators.

   What the hell?....maybe being a leader does something....wait?

The leader noticed that she now stood next to one of the stairwells. Echoes whispered from behind the cold door.

   Is someone crying?....No....just leave it alone Ai....it’s not any of your business.

Her body betrayed her brain as she pushed the heavy metal door open and came face-to-face with a pair of puffy, red, surprised eyes belonging to the younger of the two newest additions to Morning Musume. The girl was sitting at the top of the stairs with her back to the door. The noise of the door opening had scared her out of whatever private misery she was in.

   “Taka...Takahashi-...san?” she stumbled over her words as she rushed to wipe her eyes dry.

Ai sat down beside the leaking girl.

   “Takaha....” Linlin began.

   “Call me Ai-chan,” Ai smiled at the younger girl.

Ai decided not to pry into the reason for her Kouhai’s puffy eyes, instead deciding to sit with her on the cold stairs. She silently thanked kami-sama that she had decided to keep her long pants on after practice. The two girls sat in silence for a while, time creeping by as both girls thought about what to say to the other.

   “Taka....Ai-chan.....you don’t have to sit here with me. I’ll be fine....” Linlin finally broke the silence, sounding a bit more like her normal self.

   “Lin, I want you to know that you can come to me at any time – if you’re worried, sad, happy – it doesn’t matter. When you joined Morning Musume, you became part of a family....”

Ai didn’t know what came over her as she said the words, but she knew she meant them. At the mention of the word family Linlin sniffled a bit. Ai-chan, normally the dense one, noticed the effect her words had on the younger girl and decided to pull her into a sideways embrace. Her shoulder soon became wet, so Ai hugged Linlin tighter.

The two sat in the stairwell, the older embracing the younger, the waning sun’s rays passing into the lone window of the stairwell, until Linlin’s cries subsided to mild sniffles.

   “....Ai-chan?” the girl mumbled into Ai’s shoulder.

   “Yes Lin-chan?” Ai replied, easily adopting the familiar nickname.

   “Thank you....”

   “There is no need to thank me Lin-chan, we are family.” Ai smiled as the younger girl pulled slowly out of her embrace.

Linlin returned the smile.

   She’s smiling again....

   “Come on Lin-chan.” Ai stood up abruptly and extended her had towards Linlin.

   “Ai-chan?” Linlin looked confused.

   “Have you eaten yet?”

   “....no....”

   “My treat….then I’ll make sure you get home ok.”

Ai’s smile grew as the younger girl took her hand and allowed Ai to help her up....
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles
Post by: JFC on August 19, 2009, 08:04:30 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! She called her Lin-chan! 
:wriggly:



Rii-dah yasashi! :heart:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: badsaints on August 19, 2009, 03:34:18 PM
Awwwwwwwww :wub: You wrote about Aichan! She IS a good leader, more than what people give her credit for  :yep: And you wrote about this point very well :thumbsup This story totally deserves full marks :heart:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 19, 2009, 03:35:49 PM
Omg so cute! I just died a little at the adorableness of Leader!Ai-chan. She really does try hard. And Lin too. I can't imagine being a continent away from my family.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 19, 2009, 04:34:40 PM
*resists the urge to squeal like a fangirl* Oh what the hell.....kyaaaa~~~ Ai-chan kawaii~~ :wub: Ai-chan is a great leader, a little shaky at first but she soon took her position with honor and is clearly leading Momusu back in the direction of the "glory days". :grin:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: DO Me DO Me on August 19, 2009, 08:09:42 PM
I read this last night and went Awwwww~ so sweet. What a nice story right before going to bed :D

Welcome back to writing!
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: Hotaru on August 21, 2009, 02:13:26 AM
HECK YES!

Aw..that was so cute! <3

Ai-chan really is a good leader. :D
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: adventwriter on August 21, 2009, 05:46:38 AM
Thank you for all your kind comments. Thanks to JFC, badsaints, rndmnwierd, Kream!, DO Me DO Me, and Hotaru for commenting on my first story.


I'm back with my second one already. I originally intended this story to be another stand alone - but as I was writing it - it connected itself with the previous story. So consider this not a part 2 yet, but another story in the same universe...lol. I would appreciate your comments on this one as well.



A birthday in a faraway land…

A young woman sat curled up against the pine headboard of her bed staring at the alarm clock that served as her small apartment’s only time-telling device.

   It’s been 4 months since Chun and I moved into separate apartments…..I still can’t get used to living on my own…

She pulled the blankets around her, shivering a bit, despite the apartment’s heating system working perfectly. A low drone filled the room as a forgotten TV sat playing a random anime show to an empty sofa. She didn’t know which anime it was, nor did she care. 

She looked at her cell phone sitting darkly next to the timepiece glowing red. 11:58pm. A sigh escaped from her lungs. She glanced at the calendar pinned to the wall. Two minutes until March 11th, the date circled on the calendar.

   My second birthday away from home…

The room smelled of the night’s dinner – soy sauce, daikon… - food she had purchased from the konbini near the station.  She made no secret of the fact that she couldn’t cook very well, a fact her fellow members knew well because she had yet to cook for them.

She looked at the clock again. 11:59. One more minute. Another sigh escaped her lips.

   My first birthday as a member of Morning Musume...I wonder if anyone will remember…

She tried to force a smile onto her face, of course they would remember – that’s the reason she looked at the clock so intently.  The group was practicing for their upcoming concert tour set to begin in 12…11 days. No celebrations tomorrow, not that she was hoping for one…

   Who am I kidding?......Of course I want to celebrate…at least it’ll get my mind off…

The red numbers flashed in her periphery. 12:00. Her birthday. On this day 17 years ago she was born. She looked at her phone again…expectantly. She wasn’t sure what to expect, but it surely wasn’t a dark, quiet phone. She snatched it up and flipped it open. Yes. It was on. No, she wasn’t imagining it…no one had emailed her yet.

   Perhaps I’m being impatient……just slow down Lin…give them time…

Lin fell onto her side causing the bedsprings to compress beneath her weight. She turned her attention to the new random anime that was just starting on her TV screen. Her phone was still clutched in her hands. She tried to stare past her hands at the glowing box, trying to keep her mind off of phone watch. Her eyes clouded over and she clenched them shut.

   I’m not going to …

Soon, soft breathing was the only other sound in the room other than the TV. The lonely girl had fallen asleep.

***********

   “Ohayou gozaimasu,” Lin mumbled as she shuffled into the dance studio.

   “Ohayou Lin-chan,” smiled Ai Takahashi, the leader.

The others waved to her saying their own version of hello. Practice moved along as usual and Lin was only scolded a couple of times for losing her place in the dance routine. After several hours the girls were released from practice. Lin wandered over to her bag and grabbed her towel to dry her face and neck. She lifted the bag to her shoulder and began to walk through the door.

   “Lin-chan, can you stay for a moment?” she heard Ai from across the room.

   “Yes, Takahashi –san.”

She returned the bag to its previous resting place and walks over to where the leader was standing. She watched as the other girls filed out – a few pausing to give her a raised fist in a “ganbatte” pose. She nodded at each ganbatte.

   “Lin-chan. How are you?”

Lin looked at her leader with surprise clearly written on her face. Whatever she was expecting of this encounter…this wasn’t it.

   “Takaha…Ai-chan? I don’t understand?” She said switching to Ai’s nickname because occasion seemed to call for it.

   “You were a bit distracted today.”

   “Gomen nasai.”

   “No apologies Lin-chan…” she began before stopping and running over to her bag.

   “…come here Lin.”

   “Ha…Hai.”

Lin walked over to her leader and pulled back with a start when said leader spun around.

   “I just wanted to say Happy Birthday…but I didn’t know what to get you. So…I’m inviting you to come with me…don’t ask where. It’s a surprise.” She said, extending her hand.

   “Hai Ai-chan.” Lin replied, a smile finally cracking the solemn look she had plastered on her face all day.

As the two walked out of the dance studio Onna ni Sachi Are began to play. Lin dug through her bag until she found her phone. She flipped it open to find her email inbox full of messages from the other members…

   “I asked them to wait to send their birthday wishes to you, because I wanted to be able to tell you in person. We will be busy in a few days… and probably won’t have much time off…so I wanted to make your birthday a bit special – since it is your first as a member.”

Lin looked at the older girl and saw a bright smile upon her face. Lin stopped walking as her eyes began to cloud up for the second time in as many days …this time for different reasons. She noticed the leader’s eyes also mist up before she buried herself in Ai’s shirt, trying to hide her own tears.

   “Thank you…again…Ai-chan.” She mumbled into the embrace.

   “Family Lin-chan. Family. No need to thank me… how about you read those messages before we go?”

   “Ok…” Lin replied, wiping her eyes, and flipping her phone open.

      From: Reina-kitty
       Happy Birthday Linlin!  :3

      From: Sayu
       Have a good birthday. Usa-peace! Work on your cuteness.

Lin laughed at Sayu’s message…so typical.

      From: Chun
      Happy birthday Lin. I would have sent this earlier….but I was distracted by a…nevermi…

      From: Mittsi :3
      Happy Birthday Princess Linlin!

      From: Turtle
      I almost messaged you last night…but I would have been scolded… Omedetto Linlin! :-D

      From: Miracle!
      HI LINLIN! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!

      From: Risa
       I hope you have a happy birthday Linko!!! Wish we could all celebrate together! We love you!

Lin smiled at all the messages.

   Linko?....oh no….another nickname…

She laughed at the thought as Ai looked at her with a bemused expression on her face.

   “Let’s go Lin-chan!”

Lin couldn’t be sad anymore. It was her birthday and she was with family…

   Ai-chan…

She smiled as she took her leader’s hand an continued to walk out of the dance studio.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Arigatou Ai-Chan... 8/19)
Post by: Comrade on August 21, 2009, 01:18:23 PM
      From: Sayu
       Have a good birthday. Usa-peace! Work on your cuteness.
This.  :thumbsup

Very cute stories, advent.  I came here to read the first one last night when you mentioned in irc you were writing fanfic.  Then I came back this morning to comment and found another chapter.  Hah, I know what it's like to finish a story and then find that the next thing you write connects back to what you wrote before. XP

It can be lonely moving away and joining a new "family", but also, like you've written, full of surprises and good feelings.

Linlin. <3
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: badsaints on August 21, 2009, 02:28:43 PM
Thumbs up :thumbsup And since I like how you portray Ai as a good leader, double thumbs up :twothumbs

You have won me over into your fanlist :D
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: kRisZ on August 21, 2009, 04:30:02 PM
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“My treat….then I’ll make sure you get home ok.”

 :wub:


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Happy birthday Lin. I would have sent this earlier….but I was distracted by a…nevermi…

makes me wonder what the distraction was


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I almost messaged you last night…but I would have been scolded… Omedetto Linlin! :-D

lol
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 21, 2009, 05:21:50 PM
It's nice to read fics with LinLin as the main character~ Awww, all the girls are so sweet! :wub: Especially Ai-chan. Their messages are so cute~~
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 21, 2009, 08:09:21 PM
 :imdead: <--- From utter cuteness, again.

I love some of the messages from the members  :lol:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: Hotaru on August 22, 2009, 01:42:07 AM
Yes, yes, and yes! :D

Another cute one. <3
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: DO Me DO Me on August 22, 2009, 04:10:52 AM
Sweet.... :grin: It's nice reading a Linlin focused story.  :twothumbs
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: JFC on August 22, 2009, 08:04:36 AM
A birthday in a faraway land…

First I was: Aw. :(

Then I was: Awwwww. :cry:

Then I was: Awwwwwwwwwwwww. :oops:

And finally I was: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :k-inlove:



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      From: Chun
      Happy birthday Lin. I would have sent this earlier….but I was distracted by a…nevermi…
Damn, now I'm curious. ;D
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (A birthday in a faraway land... 8/20)
Post by: adventwriter on August 26, 2009, 10:19:03 AM
Finally. I have another fanfic for you all. Same universe...so consider this a further continuation of the last two. Thank you all for your comments. A bit shorter than the previous one...may write a part 2 if requested by enough people to do so.

Comfort and Pain

A car crash. The news came suddenly. She hadn’t heard from her parents in a week, now she knew why. That was two weeks ago. No one knew. She was good at plastering a smile on her face and passing by unnoticed. She had learned long ago how to cover up her tears – a little more makeup here and there. For now, though, she didn’t have to hide them. She lay curled up on top of the covers of her single bed, not bothering to change out of the day’s clothes. Tears traced their way down the side of her face before soaking into the blanket – her now damp brown hair sticking to her cheek.

Thoughts refused to coalesce, yet her brain wouldn’t…no, couldn’t stop working. Sleep wouldn’t come. Her dinner sat half eaten on the small table near the kitchen of her tiny apartment. The TV, perpetually tuned to an all anime network, droned on in the background, playing to the empty couch nestled against the wall. An acoustic guitar sat cradled in its stand, the brand lettering all but worn away by time. The instrument had been a gift from her mother.

Sleep refused to come for several hours. Tears continued to wind their way down the paths their predecessors etched in her wet, hair-matted cheek.

Sleep finally did take the distressed girl, even if a fitful one.

******

TAP TAP TAP


Huh?...what’s that noise?


The girl’s mind struggled to function after the fitful rest she had obtained the night before. Her eyes, encrusted by her tears, finally wrenched themselves open as she fell off the bed, landing with a *thud* on the floor and startling the breath out of her.

BOOM BOOM BOOM

Someone’s at the door.


Her mind registered the thought as she pushed herself up off the floor. She stumbled over to the door, tripping over a kitchen chair along the way. Upon reaching the door she looked through the peep hole, turned the lock, and pulled open the door coming face to face with the worried face of her leader, Ai Takahashi.

“Lin-cha….what the?

Ai had seen the look of surprise, and the evidence of the tears the girl had fought to hide. Lin turned away.

“Go away!...Please leave me alone Ai-chan.” Lin choked out, trying to run to the only place she could hide from her leader – her bathroom. Ai was too fast however, and she caught up to Lin as the younger girl once again tripped over the same chair she had fallen over on the way to the door. The two girls landed sprawled out on the floor, Ai landing on the back of the other. Ai quickly pushed herself up and pulled Lin into her arms before the girl could run away again.

“Lin-chan!? What’s wrong?!”

Tears fell freely from the younger girls eyes and her face drew tight in her refusal to answer her leader’s plea.

“Dammit Qian Lin! Stop hiding! Am I not important enough to you for you to be honest with me?!” Ai shouted, her eyes flaring with anger as she grabbed Lin’s face in her hands forcing the girl to look at her.

Lin’s eyes snapped open and she finally brought herself to look Ai in the eyes.

“Lin……Lin-chan…” Ai’s tone softened. “I’m here…please tell me…”

“…car accident…parents…” were the only words Lin could manage before sobs wracked her small frame once again. Ai pulled the sobbing girl closer and wrapping her arms as tightly as she could around Lin. As the sobs continued to come, Ai felt her own eyes welling up but attempted to show strength by holding her own tears in. She ran her hands through the girl’s hair and held her until Lin’s cries subsided and soft, steady breathing remained. The comfort of sleep had taken her. Ai lifted her up and carried Lin over to the slightly mussed bed, laying her down and pulling the blanket over the sleeping girl. Ai’s cell phone vibrated – she walked to the kitchen before answering.

“Moshi moshi?”

*pause*

“Yes, I found her.”

*pause*  

“No, you stay with Reina, Junjun.”

*pause*

“I’ll stay with her. Call Gaki-san and tell her to run practice for the rest of you this evening.”

*pause*

“Hai. Arigatou Jun. Ja matta ne.”

Ai closed the phone and returned it to her bag. She laid her bag on the table and cleaned up the leftover dinner. Ai lifted up the fallen chair and carried it over to Lin’s bedside. She sat down in the chair and wrapped her hands around Lin’s hand.

“Don’t worry Lin-chan. I’m here with you. You don’t have to go through anything alone anymore.” She whispered to the sleeping girl.

I’ll do everything in my power to stay with you…
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: lil_hamz on August 26, 2009, 01:53:36 PM
I've been wondering when someone would write a AiLin fic. I mean, there are signs. I'm pretty sure Lin Lin adores Ai a lot :)
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 26, 2009, 03:48:25 PM
Ah~, this was sad.  :cry: Poor Lin, I'm glad Ai was there for her though. Though, even if this was a serious fic, I still have the need to point this out:

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Lin choked out, trying to run to the only place she could hide from her leader – her bathroom. Ai was too fast however, and she caught up to Lin as the younger girl once again tripped over the same chair she had fallen over on the way to the door.

Those lines made me grin, which is the normal equivalent to me laughing. I don't know why...
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: Hart on August 26, 2009, 05:12:07 PM
Awww...Poor Lin-chan. :( Don't be sad. Ai-chan will always be there to cheer you up.

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“Don’t worry Lin-chan. I’m here with you. You don’t have to go through anything alone anymore.” She whispered to the sleeping girl.

I’ll do everything in my power to stay with you…

Do I detect something more than a simple sempai/kouhai relationship going on here? In part 2 maybe?
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: badsaints on August 26, 2009, 05:44:19 PM
*Runs to Lin2 to give her a tight hug*

Hmmmmm...AiLin? Does Ai feel anything for Lin2 more than a simple platonic feeling?  :? A part 2 will be nice :D

Edit: Yay I got page 2! :shakeit:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 27, 2009, 02:24:24 AM
 :cry: :cry: :cry: Poor baby~~~ I'm glad Ai-chan is there to care for her though.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: Comrade on August 27, 2009, 03:47:42 AM
;_; I can't even begin to imagine what it would be like to get that kind of news, let alone get that kind of news while thousands of kilometres away.  Definitely an Ai-chan hero story you've got going here.  It's really adorable.  She's a unique leader.  <3  Awww, and LinLin.  I mean, I totally understand how Ai-chan would want to stay and comfort her.  Who wouldn't want to comfort the adorableness that is LinLin?  :heart:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: Hotaru on August 27, 2009, 03:59:10 AM
Oh dang, poor LinLin.

Really starting to like the AiLin fics. :)
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: adventwriter on August 27, 2009, 09:48:17 AM
Here it is .... Part two of Comfort and Pain. It's a bit longer than the others I've posted. Comments are welcome!

Racing…

“Kame-hame-ha!!!!”

   What the hell?


A pair of groggy eyelids slowly pull themselves apart. Eyes returned to focus and settle on the still playing television which was currently showing a familiar anime.

   Where...am I?...oh yeah…Lin-chan’s apartment…

Her mind returned to the events of the previous evening, the tears that the younger girl had shed; the warmth of Lin’s hand as she held it. Her eyes finally travelled to the bed that she had just lifted her head from. Her hand was empty. So was the bed.

Ai jumped up with a start, knocking over the chair she had been sitting in.

   I shouldn’t have done that…

She placed her hand on her back as she fell forward onto the bed. Her face squeezed together in pain.

  Dammit… I should not have fallen asleep in that chair…

Ai forced herself to stand once again and ran to the bathroom.

   She’s not in here… Oh no…

Her eyes instinctively scanned the apartment, even though there weren’t any places to hide. She leaped to the table and snatched her phone out of the bag she had placed there the night before, not caring that the contents of her bag now lay sprawled across the table. The phone rang. Finally someone answered.

       *“Moshi Moshi.”

“Risa…she’s gone!” Tears threatened to spill from her eyes.

      *“Ai-chan?...wait…who’s gone?”

“Lin-chan!...Dammit…I shouldn’t have fallen asleep!”

       *“Ai-chan…” Ai wasn’t listening.

“What if something happens to her?!”

       *“Ai-chan!” Still nothing.

“I’ll never forgive myself if she gets hurt!” Tears fell freely now.

      *“Takahashi Ai! Baka! Shut up!” Ai gasped at the sub-leader’s tone. “Ai…calm down. I’ll call the others. We’ll meet at my place ok?”

“Ok Gaki-san… Risa…thank you.” Ai’s mind was finally working rationally again.

*”Ai-chan… I’m your best friend. Don’t thank me. Let’s find your Linko.”

Ai blushed, even though she knew the other girl couldn’t see her.

“Ok. See you in a bit.” Ai closed the phone, shoved the fallen stuff into her bag, and ran out the door.

*******

Ai wandered the streets on her way to the sub-leader’s apartment. Her eyes flitted from place to place, person to person, looking for the short brown hair of the younger girl she had grown close to during the more than two years they had known each other. With every face that went by that wasn’t Lin’s, Ai’s panic began to reassert itself.

*CRACK*


Rain began to pour from the darkened sky. She hadn’t noticed the clouds before. She knew it was cliché, but she felt that the weather was mirroring her own feelings. The thunder continued to echo off the tall buildings on either side of her. Despite the rain, Ai continued to search the faces of the crowd. She set off across a small park. She didn’t know what led her to take the shortcut to Risa’s, rather than her normal route following the streets. The park, because of the rain, was empty. No one noticed the young woman’s brisk pace across the grass or that the drenched woman was the current leader of Morning Musume.

“AHHHHHHHHH!!!” A scream reached the Musume-Leader’s ears. Normally she would have avoided the source of such commotion, but on this day the normally dense leader noticed that the scream was one of utter despair. Not to mention that the voice was somewhat familiar, and in her panicked state she wanted to latch on to any hope of finding Lin. She heard the scream a few more times, drawing closer each time, until she finally laid eyes on the source.

Oh my….Lin-chan…

The younger girl was hardly recognizable. Completely drenched from the rain, her short brown hair was plastered to her face and neck and her normally loose clothing now clung to her small frame. Her one-piece was ringed in mud and the hem now fell in ribbons around her bruised legs. She appeared to have taken several hard falls since her escape from her own apartment. She still hadn’t realized someone had found her, that is, until Ai walked up to her. Ai noticed the girl’s visible flinch and that her tear filled eyes looked at everything other than her, as if looking for a way to escape. Fortunately Ai reached the Lin before the younger girl’s mind could work out an escape strategy. Her arms wrapped around Lin, pulling her into a tight hug.

“Lin-chan, please…let me take you home…”

The girl struggled in Ai’s arms.

“LET ME GO!!!” She tried to force her way out of Ai’s surprisingly strong arms. Punching and slapping at the older girl’s torso.

“Lin-chan… I don’t care how much you fight. I’m not letting you go.” Ai’s voice remained calm despite the tears that ran down her face, mingling with the heavenly tears that fell from the sky. Lin continued to try to escape Ai’s grasp.

“LET ME GO…LET ME BE ALONE…SEEMS TO BE MY DESTINY IN THIS LIFE!” she screamed as she resumed her assault on the older girl.

Ai’s feelings finally reached her vocal chords.

“DAMMIT LIN!... *sigh*… don’t you realize that you are not alone! … You have the eight of us in Morning Musume, I meant it when I said that we are family. *sigh* But above that…you have me…”  The final words were barely audible, but Lin’s assault faltered before stopping altogether.

“…Take me home…” Lin still refused to look at the older girl.

Ai wrapped her arm around the shivering girl’s shoulder as she began to lead her out of the inundated park.

******

After reaching Lin’s apartment, in an effort to combat the shivers both girls we suffering from, Ai led the younger girl to the bathroom - cranking up the hand shower’s temperature and using the warm water to clean the mud from Lin’s bruised legs. After cleaning the girl as best as she could, Ai pulled the one piece that was still stuck to Lin’s small frame over the younger girl’s head.

   Try not to blush…now is not the time Ai.

Fortunately her body listened to her… however the other girl still refused to look her in the eye.

   She’s standing here in her underwear…yet she doesn’t care…is she that far gone?

Ai, again, pulled the younger girl into her embrace.

“Lin-chan…please look at me… “

The girl no longer cried. She didn’t do anything, just looked through her… as if she didn’t exist.


“Lin-chan…please look at me… you aren’t alone. I’m here…as long as I am here you’ll never be alone anymore.” Finally, Lin’s eyes settled on her face.

“You say that now… All of you will leave me too… you can’t promise that…”

Her voice dripped with venom. Her face contorted in grief. Ai was…grateful… that she finally elicited a response out of the younger girl.

“Lin-chan…I’m not going anywhere…”

I care for you too much…

“Why do you keep saying that?! Why do you act like you care…”

*SLAP*

“Stop saying that!! I told you we were family two years ago…but feelings changed…”

Lin looked at the older girl, her hand resting on the reddened cheek Ai has slapped. A look of bewilderment replaced the pain that had previously contorted her face.

“I’m sorry Lin-chan…you don’t seem to realize how much it hurts me to see you like this… I know I could never understand the pain you are going through … I’m just asking you to let me be your support…”

“…I’m cold…”

Ai turned the water off. She ran to the closet and grabbed a change of clothes for the younger girl. She helped her change.

“Ai…you can borrow some of my clothes…” Ai returned to the closet and chose a second pair of clothes and returned to the bathroom to change.

“Ai-chan…” Lin mumbled. Ai spun around, her shirt not yet on. Lin walked over to her and wrapped Ai in a tight embrace, nestling her damp head into Ai’s chest. Ai blushed slightly at the contact.

    Stupid blushing fool… you just helped her change… stop blushing!

“You promise Ai-chan?” Lin questioned as she lifted her head to look the other girl in the eyes.

“Hmm….of course. I promise to be by your side for as long as this world allows…it’s all I can do. I don’t want to make exaggerated promises that I have no power to keep – you deserve truth.”

    I can’t say it… why can’t I tell…

Her thoughts were interrupted by a quick, light pressure on her lips.

    Did she....kiss me?

As inner Ai danced for joy, outer Ai remained stunned.

“Ai…thank you.”

“For what Lin-chan?”

“For being my support – for always being there – for loving me despite all my problems…” As Lin said this, she placed her lips on Ai’s cheek.

“How’d you know?”

Lin pulled back a bit and smiled wearily as Ai mumbled this. Her smile would have been larger…but this day took all of her energy.

“I didn’t… but I hoped.” She again placed her lips on Ai’s. This time Ai reciprocated.

“Please stay with me…” Lin said as she pulled back from Ai.

“Of course …” Ai’s heart raced for the second time that day. This time, however, worry did not drive that rate hike, but love.

Lin led Ai to the bed and welcomed her under the covers. Ai fell asleep in Lin’s arms.

Meanwhile…Ai’s cell phone continued to buzz from all the unread messages from the members she had forgotten. Lin picked up the phone, which sat in Ai’s bag that had fallen next to the bed. She opened the phone, typed in a few words and closed the phone with a smile before nestling into Ai’s shoulder.


Gaki-san. We’re Ok. Ai-chan is sleeping. Today wore her out. Thank you for being such a great family.



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What'd you think? Critiques are welcome.

Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 27, 2009, 03:03:30 PM
AHHHH!  :pleeease: Lin-chan!! :imdead: Stop killing me yo! No wait, don't stop killing me yo!
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: badsaints on August 27, 2009, 05:28:10 PM
I'm getting sugar rush from all the sweetness  :wub: Great story  :yep:

So I guess AiLin will be the new couple on the block :lol:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Comfort and Pain - 8/26)
Post by: Hart on August 27, 2009, 11:31:38 PM
Oh Ai-chan, how can you restrain yourself when deep down you want to be with your Linko? Totally lmao at Ai's inner monologue.

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As inner Ai danced for joy, outer Ai remained stunned.

:hiakhiakhiak: I think this one got me the most.

And of course Ai-chan would completely forget about Gaki's help.

TOO much sweetness to handle. Ow, my teeth.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Racing - 8/27)
Post by: Comrade on August 28, 2009, 03:53:35 AM
lol, yeah, cavities and also  :banghead:.  <-- When things get touchy feely, I start to do this. :lol: It is not a reflection of your writing style or anything.  Heaven knows I've put out my fair share of cheese and mush.  So props for making me bash my head against a brick wall.  LOL. :thumbsup 

I'm wondering if you're going to continue with this story.  Will you present some kind of obstacle or bad/dangerous/uncomfortable situation?  The general rule that seems to guide this kind of love story is that HORRIBLE THINGS MUST HAPPEN before true happiness can be gained.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Racing - 8/27)
Post by: JFC on August 28, 2009, 07:56:52 AM
Comfort and Pain
ONOES LIN-CHAN!
:OMG:



Racing…
Omgass, omgass, OMGASS! AILIN!!! :o


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As inner Ai danced for joy, outer Ai remained stunned.
Inner Aichan = :gmon twirl:
Outer Aichan = :stunned:
Damn we sure love our crackpairings here. ^_^
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Racing - 8/27)
Post by: lil_hamz on August 28, 2009, 08:34:18 AM
At first, I thought Ai was the one who replied Risa's email phone mail, what do they call those anyway? :nervous
But when I realized it was Lin Lin, the effect is so much greater? Cuz its like she has finally started to let the other members into her heart. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :heart: This fic is so sweet :oops:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Racing - 8/27)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 29, 2009, 06:09:12 AM
I got so scared at the beginning, I thought that LinLin...well, you know. :cry: I'm so glad Ai-chan found her in time and was able to slap (literally) some sense into her. So cute at the end~! :wub:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Racing - 8/27)
Post by: adventwriter on September 08, 2009, 07:05:32 AM
Finally - a new oneshot - I was hit by inspiration. Guess what inspired me. Guess who's POV this is. First one to get them all right gets a cookie! (I also tried a different style of writing)

Memories of Los Angeles…

L.A.. Los Angeles. Our big live debut to our Western fans…It was supposed to be a happy time…I should have felt happy being there. I hated every minute of it. No…not because of the fans – they were incredible. I hated that wonderful time in Los Angeles because of you…

You’d been my best friend since we joined Morning Musume…I don’t know when I fell in love with you. I was afraid to tell you my feelings – I didn’t want to lose you and we were in the same group…it would have been awkward. I tried to hide my feelings…but they ripped me to shreds inside – and our friendship began to fade…I tried to hide in another friendship – she’s nice… and an amazing friend… but she wasn’t you.

I worked on building up my courage… I eventually decided that the best time to tell you would be our first trip to America – because we would surely room together…

We didn’t… we were given a choice… and before I could ask you…you picked her…

On the plane …you sat next to her…

On the bus…fortunately she sat with Junjun…

Everywhere we went… you were with her… you didn’t even notice me… are you that blind to my feelings?... or do you not care?
I plastered a smile on my face anyway… at least the fans helped my spirits a bit…there was even this one guy…he had Kame’s name on his arm… I don’t think that she got that it was a tattoo…I digress…

I’m fortunate that our positions in the group forced you to sit next to me during all of the events … I was even a bit happy that she was at the far end of the table – thank you Kami for the group hierarchy!...

Even that brief respite from watching you two together … was shattered the next time I saw you holding hands. You two seemed to be doing that a lot lately.

You always went to her after the events – especially after the second fan signing…you two giggling over at the window, looking out at the Expo…

My heart broke every time I saw you two together. I should be happy for you…that you’ve found someone… even if she isn’t me… but I can’t… I found only sadness and anger in my heart.

I’m angry that you chose her over me… someone you’ve known for much longer… your best friend…

Why not me? … why not me?
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: kuro808 on September 08, 2009, 08:10:05 AM
I won't take a guess because I am bad at it

I read this and it was quite somber for an enjoyable trip, I like it keep up the good work
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: Hart on September 08, 2009, 09:00:32 AM
lol You watched that special too?
*sigh Good memories of LA.
Lemme guess, it's Ai's POV.
She's in love with Gaki but she's with Kame.
And currently LinLin is Ai's new closest friend.

[Edit:]
I guess it could either be Gaki's POV.
She's in love with Ai but she's with LinLin.
And Gaki's hanging out with Kame.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 08, 2009, 09:13:57 AM
The special documentary, right? And it's Gaki-san's POV about AiLin, because I know you like AiLin.

Great story by the way, and poor Gaki-san. But who was the fan with a tattoo of Kamei's name on his arm?
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 09, 2009, 02:22:51 AM
I think it's AiLin with a broken hearted Gaki. D: (Aka, Gaki-san's POV.)

Poor Risa. D: Oh um...just a note. It was said that the girls each got their own bedroom...no one shared a room with anybody. .___.
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: JFC on September 09, 2009, 08:00:57 AM
Memories of Los Angeles…

Definitely gotta be Risa's POV, talking about AiLin.

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On the bus…fortunately she sat with Junjun…
In the recent TV special we see Linlin sitting next to Junjun on the bus.


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Even that brief respite from watching you two together … was shattered the next time I saw you holding hands. You two seemed to be doing that a lot lately.
I remember seeing a pic of a page of a magazine article (or maybe it was an entry from Tsunku's blog, I can't remember) that showed the girls doing touristy stuff, and I noticed one pic that showed them walking down a random L.A. sidewalk, and AiLin were holding hands.


On somewhat of a side note, you managed to insert Sev into it. :lol:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: lil_hamz on September 11, 2009, 08:47:43 AM
I'm positive this is a AiLin fic with Gaki-san being all heartbroken. Poor Risa  :cry:
I really like the last line. Why not me... It's too heartwrenching :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: kRisZ on September 11, 2009, 02:46:25 PM
It's Risa's POV

Yeah, why not her Ai?  :cry:

So heartbreaking   :(



The Tattoo's big.  Yay! Kudos for him! How do we read it? Because I looked for the three kanjis, it says 'big+woman+kid'  :D or I might be wrong  XD


I saw TakaGaki moment in the TV Tokyo Special   :P
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: badsaints on September 12, 2009, 08:26:46 PM
My bet that this is Risa's POV too. There have been a lot of behind-the-scenes segments and TV specials where Ai was holding hands with LinLin :huhuh But poor Risa :cry:

Edit: 3rd page...Mine!
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on September 17, 2009, 03:11:58 AM
I just scanned the youtube videos about the AX @ LA before... But me reading this... me wanna see the whole of it!  :w00t:
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (Memories of Los Angeles...9/8)
Post by: adventwriter on August 04, 2011, 12:53:39 AM
My fanfics live again...for the moment...  :sweatdrop:
Just a bit of randomness.


One Thing or Another

Talking on the phone and emailing are one thing, actually hearing the laughter of a friend in person is a wholly different experience. Takahashi Ai found that out first-hand when a staff member brought Linlin into the Morning Musume dressing room. Linlin, as she did when she had been a member, was attempting to make various members of the staff smile or laugh. It had been a little over half a year since the younger girl reached her graduation date along with Junjun and Kame-chan. Even though the newest members of the group, the 9th Generation of Morning Musume, where great young people, seeing the face and hearing the laughter of a dear friend made Ai wish, momentarily for the days when the group had been the most stable.

Ai-chan considered the fact that the group had remained stable for so long a miracle, because the start of her tenure as leader had been a rough one. She knew some people had been unsure of her leadership qualifications after Fujimoto-san resigned as leader; sometimes she was still unsure of herself, but Gaki-san had helped her keep herself in order, at least until she was allowed to break down at her own forthcoming graduation.

As she watched the now 20 year-old former member interact with the youngest members, Ai couldn’t help but grin. She remembered the days when said girl had been transitioning to life in a new country as a member of a nationally-known idol group. Linlin seemed to want everyone’s picture and spent a while making funny faces with Reina and trying to be cute with Sayu. As much as Ai wanted to get up a steal all of the time Linlin had with them, she knew the other members of the pre-9th gen group had missed her and the newer members where trying to find out if several stories they had heard from their seniors were true. The smile never left Linlin’s face until the other members were called away by Gaki-san. Ai knew that Risa wanted to give the two friends a few minutes of quite before the group had to do another TV show performance for their latest single.

“How have you been Ai-chan?”

The question broke Ai out of her reminiscences.

“Oh, I’ve been fine. Just trying to leave the group on a good footing and planning out what the future might bring for me and my career.”

“Any plans on visiting China?”

The younger girl had been trying to get her to visit her home country outside of official Hello! Project trips and concerts for some time. Time had simply not allowed it yet, but she held out hope that some time would be freed up when leadership of Morning Musume passed from her.

“Maybe.”

She noticed the grin flash across the other girl’s face.

“I hope to be able to see you later, maybe get something to eat like back then.”

“If you can wait here I’ll make sure to leave with you, that is if you are worried that I won’t keep my promises?”

“Oh no, I’m not worried; but I’ll take you up on your offer. I definitely miss performing with you guys, so I want to stay and watch anyway.”

…..
Title: Re: adventwriter's One-shots and Rambles (One Thing or Another...8/3/11)
Post by: adventwriter on August 20, 2011, 06:27:07 AM
Side note: Probably won't get around to writing another one-shot .... hmmm... unless inspiration hits.