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Title: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Girls Just Want to Have Fun 4/1)
Post by: kuro808 on November 27, 2009, 08:36:42 AM
Chapter Titles

Feeling This (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg642574#msg642574)
Killing Me Softly (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg642915#msg642915)
The Middle (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg643609#msg643609)
Popcorn WIGGLEWOGGLE part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg644903#msg644903)
Popcorn WIGGLEWOGGLE part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg645426#msg645426)
Don't Worry, Be Happy (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg648043#msg648043)
As Long as you WIGGLEWOGGLE Me (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg648918#msg648918)
aesthetically pleasing n Cold (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg649693#msg649693)
Nothing Gonna Stop Us Now (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg651225#msg651225)
Against All Odds (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg653203#msg653203)
WIGGLEWOGGLE Machine (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg656039#msg656039)
Cancer (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg657509#msg657509)
The Power of WIGGLEWOGGLE (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg661664#msg661664)
Renai Revolution 21 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg666551#msg666551)
Renai Revolution 21 Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg666871#msg666871)
My First, My Last, My Everything (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg681113#msg681113)
She Got Issues (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg697409#msg697409)
Girls Just Want to Have Fun (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22790.msg699750#msg699750)

Feeling This

The windy night has Risa shivering in her bed waiting for her friend to come back from the bathroom during a late night call

Risa had always felt lonely at night without her friend, which was even becoming an issue as of right now because them being together for so long has created a friction between them.

“Risa, why are you waiting for me, go to sleep.”  She yells at me from the bathroom.

“I just can't, Ai, I just can't.”  The frustration of both of us being together has developed a sensual feeling me.

The seconds became minutes.

The minutes became hours

Eventually it became days and then a week past by.

Becoming an insomniac was not her idea of not telling her friend the truth.

Risa actually fell in WIGGLEWOGGLE with her, she couldn't hold back any emotions, it was on her forehead like a scar that doesn't go away.

It hurt her to see Ai talk to anyone else except her, she wanted to physically attack someone for even being a hundred feet from her.

Ai, on other hand, had no clue to her friend's feelings and she thought her lack of sleep was because of school.  But, she also had a secret too.

She was in WIGGLEWOGGLE her friend.

Was it that I had been telling her my secrets?

Was it that she had been younger?

Or was it the dreams she had every night of her friend's half naked body?

If a question had to be answered, she would have to confront her friend.

Their mutual friends knew this for a while that if they stick together long enough, they would be romantically intimate with each other.  This fact disappointed a person that Ai had been collaborating her thoughts with, Reina, she wasn't jealous but she feared if Ai doesn't act upon her inner feelings soon, she would lose her best friend forever.

Reina and her intimate partner, Eri, had a plan to get them together for at least one night.  They had each reserve a booth in an Italian restaurant for a prospective double date that would force them to see the truth.

“Reina, shall I call Risa and you call Ai to see if they are available on the weekend.”  Eri looked at her incredibly cute mate with a pout.

“Yeah, yeah you should do that and I get to plan the after party we might have at my house when my parents are not around.”  Eri raised her eyebrows knowing what an “after party” means.

The next days flew by quickly with the WIGGLEWOGGLEbirds still looking at the invisible wall between friendship and intimacy.

Everyone knew the writing on the wall that the people who were only looking at themselves as friends has reached a point of climatic action that both never expected.

That Thursday afternoon, a day before the double date set up by Reina and Eri, they forgot their umbrella, and they were stuck on the school grounds until it slowed down or stopped all together.

They were watching the couple fighting the urge to walk out in the rain, they both laughed, and turned to each other with their battle faces on.

“Risa, have you ever been...”  The momentary awkward paused came and then the final portion,”... in WIGGLEWOGGLE?”

Risa looks over at her friend and nods out to the couple who were playfully fighting over the control over the umbrella.

“What is that person like?”  Ai asks Risa in being her curious self.

“Well she is extremely cute, she looks great with any hair style, short or long, and she is trendy.”  Risa glimpses at her friend and smiles.  “What about you?”

Her friend was now getting a hint that Risa maybe serious but maybe a little white lie would throw her off.

“She is cute and playful, she has a million expression, and she has nice eyebrows.”  She then realize she couldn't lie in front of her WIGGLEWOGGLEr.  Her throat dried up confessing the perfect description of her friend.

Ai quickly changed the subject, “They are getting wet and still fighting for the umbrella.”  Ai's hand briskly touched her hand.

“Ah, sorry, I hope that didn't offend you.”  Ai stood up and grabbed her stuff but Risa stopped her from the spot.

“I hope you find that person soon.”  Risa wanted so badly to confess but did not have the heart to say it.

“Same here, oh yeah, my friend set me up with this girl I liked, so we won't be able to hang out tomorrow.”  Ai looked at her watch and ran to beat the rain to the station.

Risa sat there trying to see through her friend's shield but it seemed of no use and she just admit that her friend was in WIGGLEWOGGLE with another person.  Eri approached her with a message and Risa was happy that Eri would cheer her up over this recent incident.

The next day would come and when school was finished both girls ran into separate bathroom to change out of their uniforms.  Both never crossed each others path but since Eri was not as savvy as Risa, she was five minutes late as usual.

At the restaurant, Reina and Ai had become anxious waiting for their dates, their faces were facing away from the entrance.  Reina had planned it so Ai wouldn't notice Risa would come in until they meet face to face.

As Risa and Eri approached the door, Risa had a bad feeling about Eri's approach on letting her hook up with someone but that imagery got erased when they entered the door.  Eri dragged her to the table where both Reina and Ai sat. 

The friends were surprised to see each other and Ai dragged them outside the restaurant.

“What are you doing here?”  Ai grabbed Risa's shoulders

“I was brought here to go a blind date.”  As Risa's reply was hitting Ai hard that she started laughing.

“Why are you laughing?  This is not funny at all.”  Risa crossed her arms and Ai linked hands with her friend.

“Risa, I must confess I WIGGLEWOGGLE you.”  The laugh had turned into a serious conversation.

“Uso?  Where is your real girlfriend?”  Risa started to look around before Ai pressed her body onto her friend's body for a pCULO GRANDEionate kiss.  Ai opened her eyes to see a frightened Risa ready to pCULO GRANDE out from the jolt she just felt.

“Did I answer your question?”  Ai grabbed her hand and walked back in to enjoy the meal.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Feeling This 11/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on November 27, 2009, 08:56:39 AM
sweet :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Eri raised her eyebrows knowing what an “after party” means.
:lol: :lol:
reina :twothumbs

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“Well she has is extremely cute, she looks great with any hair style, short or long, and she is trendy.”  Risa glimpses at her friend and smiles.  “What about you?”

“She is cute and playful, she has a million expression, and she has nice eyebrows.”  She then realize she couldn't lie in front of her lover.  Her throat dried up confessing the perfect description of her friend.
nice description..XD

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“Did I answer your question?”
gakisan : yes, you did.. :wub:

nice one.. :heart:
aigaki  :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Feeling This 11/26)
Post by: kRisZ on November 27, 2009, 02:17:47 PM
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Or was it the dreams she had every night of her friend's half naked body?

 :mon blood:


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“after party”

 :twisted:


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Ai opened her eyes to see a frightened Risa ready to pass out from the jolt she just felt.

 :lol:  :wub:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Feeling This 11/26)
Post by: badsaints on November 27, 2009, 03:35:05 PM
Aww a fluff from you 22?

This is different XD But sweeeeet :wub:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Feeling This 11/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 27, 2009, 05:42:20 PM
Nice!  :yep:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Feeling This 11/26)
Post by: kuro808 on November 28, 2009, 11:46:09 AM
A little feedback to my commenters

@alwaysYou: Yes AiGaki

@kRisZ: yeah it seems I might be catching some weird vibes from other writers :lol:

@badsaints: eventually you knew I would do this one day with all the different types of stuff I have been writing :D

@rndmnwierd: It was worth a one-word comment, but I can always try better next time for more  :lol:

Now, this will be a different component to the main story, as many who have not read the story or whoever thinks that AiGaki is not a great pairing, I don't blame you but they are not the main part to the story.  :hearing the shocks across the room:

That won't come up until part three

Now here's part 2

Killing Me Softly

It was a Sunday afternoon, walking through the park, when Jun heard a person singing some tunes, and Jun followed my ear to the middle of the park.

There was a beautiful girl with her acoustic guitar strumming some strings and she had an angelic voice.

Jun was impressed by her voice sounding sweet that made her attractive to her flowery essence that was provided by the view.

She kept singing while Jun sat right by her listening intently to her every melody and lyric coming from her mouth.

Jun was lonely and it wasn't she was available but she was shy because she just moved to Japan couple months ago.

She was aiming to become a singer one day but that dream was suddenly crushed by a record producer who wanted a Japanese singer to sing his song.

Jun was furious over his decision to take a terrible singer over her voice, that day she swore that she never take that chance again.

Then, Her song struck her like needles penetrating the beating heart that kept pumping to keep her alive.

Jun realize that maybe she should try again but all her thinking took her away from the woman's singing.  She took a glance at her face and see her determined look into her song.

Jun wanted to ask a question but she kept concentrating on the instrument, tuning her strings, and strummed along.

It was becoming dark and the woman started to pack up and leave the park.  The winds picked up and scooped up the woman's skirt but Jun was there to block it from the sight of potential perverts in the area.

“Thanks, ma'am.”  The young woman said before she walked away from me.

“Excuse me, I was wondering about your songs.”  Jun quickly turned around just in case she was not intently listening to her but she paused.

“There are my own and I write them because it soothes the emotions in me.”  She quickly turned and ran back to grab Jun's arm.

“Hi there, my name is Sayu, and yours.”  Jun felt a little parched from the cold winds that were hitting both them hard.

“My name is Jun, I am glad to meet you Sayu.”  Sayu still had my arm in her hand.

“Let's go get some coffee, I know a shop nearby that has amateurs hit the stage.”  Sayu dragged me to the inspiration Jun needed to become her own writer.

The place was filled cigarette smoke and the smell of coffee going through their bodies.  They sat away from the smoky area, which they were approached by a young waitress.

“Hello, Usa-chan, still trying to write that song?  And who is this attractive thing here?”  The waitress latched onto the new girl's looks.

“Oh Rika-chan you have your girlfriend working behind the counter, don't you want her not to say you were cheating?”

“Well if I just look at her, I never cheated yet, right?”  Both of them laughed with the joke, while Jun was alienated in the conversation.

“Look, girl don't be shy, we like to have fun here, and have a coffee on me.”  Rika let her have her first cup free.  She looked at the person behind the counter and she saw her winked at Jun.

“Even Yossie approves you.”  Rika joked.

Jun took the first sip of the black coffee and the taste burst into her mouth, it was quite flavorful and it was different from the package Jun had at home.

Sayu scooted closer to unexpected Chinese girl and Sayu opened up about going into the big city from the country side she was from.

Sayu was an open book and yet she blocked out the realities of the real world to reach deep into her mind for her soul.

Jun was amazed at Sayu's approach in life that she wrote a few lines of a poem, she was thinking her in her head.

Feeling the wind hits
Makes me feel colder
Inside the dark house
There is warmth
Wish it was you


Sayu laughed at it and put her arm around her new found friend.  Jun seemed to be serious but Sayu had knew that Jun was actually in love with her.

“Jun, lucky I am a single person because I don't think you would write something like that.”  Jun laughed with until they realized the place was going to close soon.

Both walked out with their heads filled with knowledge of each other and traded phone numbers.

“Sayu, I want to know if your songs pierced you heart and forces you to hold back breathing.”  Sayu picked up her guitar.  

“It always does, that's why it is called love for.”  Sayu walked out and went the other way.

Jun went back to her dark apartment realizing her friend had given her a glimmer of hope for surviving the harsh world.

EDIT: Changed the Font
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Killing Me Softly 11/28)
Post by: kRisZ on November 28, 2009, 11:55:07 AM
It's bold, kinda hard to read  :D

*reads* will edit later


EDIT

Okay, hmmm
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Killing Me Softly 11/28)
Post by: badsaints on November 28, 2009, 04:43:59 PM
It's bold, kinda hard to read  :D
The fonts does make it hard to read...

Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Killing Me Softly 11/28)
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 28, 2009, 07:07:24 PM
SayuJun nice.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Killing Me Softly 11/28)
Post by: lil_hamz on November 30, 2009, 09:46:22 AM
Feeling this

TakaGaki is :love: I don't think I need to say more

Killing Me Softly

SayuJun?? Ehhh?? I didn't expect this but it was good all the same. You always manage to me "see" new pairings. :)
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Killing Me Softly 11/28)
Post by: kuro808 on November 30, 2009, 11:43:54 AM
Thanks everybody for commenting, it may seem a little off but like i said before this is the main part that will bring the first two parts together.

The Middle


Qian Lin was a transfer student from China and she was quite shy at first when you meet her but she is quite a great talker when she is comfortable.

Today was her first day at her new school in Japan, in China she developed a reputation as being brash and spontaneous to her own doings.

She wanted to accomplish a goal that would require her to be a hermit or face going back to China.  She was a high graduate at age fifteen and to get into Todai, she would need a year in a high school to get classes the following year.

Linlin was her identity because she did not want everybody to destroy her name so she made it easier for all the students.

Entering the classroom, she had a chill down the spine, and the nauseous feeling came but she maintained her composure following all protocol.

She opened the sliding door and forgot that it was retractable, her bag got stuck and everybody started to laugh.

Being quite embarrassed, she needed to laugh to get rid of the nervousness, and she introduce herself to the rest of the class.  The teacher instructed her to go to middle of the classroom and she met an attractive young student,

“Hello, my name is Aika, it is nice to meet someone from outside of Japan.”  Her smile was cute but she was trying to concentrate on the teacher.

“Sorry, can we talk later?”  Lin told her but as a good student she was willing to understand a person of her nature would appreciate a rival.

Lin was quite attentive person especially in school she was a hard worker, her own ability could surpass many but her Japanese was quite rough.  Aika saw her frustrated new classmate having trouble with understanding the teacher that she raised her hand to be her own personal helper.

“I was doing quite fine without you.”  Lin was trying to hide the fact that she had no clue what the teacher was talking about.

“Lin, I know but I want to know you better.”  Aika slipped a piece of paper into her hand.

Meet me underneath the big tree outside

-Aika


Lin was not a person to like doing personal meetings but this time it was something that would probably help her along.

She waited class to be over to find another taller girl standing by the previous mentioned tree.

“You must be Aika's new classmate, I am her best girl friend, Koharu, but you can call me Koha.”  Lin noticed her appearance to be much more likely towards her favor but she brought out a book and started to read in silence until Aika came from the class.

Lin saw her jogging over to the mentioned area and hugged the aforementioned person who she just met.

“Lin, Koha is my senpai and I am her kouhai, won't you be her kouhai too?”  Aika grabbed her hand but she went into shock and pulled it back.

“Aika, you shouldn't just drag people into our circle, not everybody is comfortable, right Lin?”  She nodded and made Aika a bit disappointed for being up front.

“Don't worry, I take your offer.”  Aika was soon back to her giddy self but Lin was confronted by the two linking hands together.  She could never be affectionate to boys and even hooking up with a girl lead to severe consequences.

She felt very uncomfortable about the two being together all the time but she managed to answer the questions coming her way.  While answering every single question, she felt lonely, and she kept quiet about their lives.

“What's wrong, Lin?  Someone is bothering you?”  Koha asked her new kouhai.

“No, I was just wondering about you two.”  Koha looked at Aika who was inches away from her.

“We are just neighbors who are really close and we appreciate each others company.”  Both smiled at her and she grinned back.

“What if someone was taken like be in a relationship?”  Lin asked Koha.

“We just accept that, are you having a crush on one of us?”  Koha began grinning at her, which made Lin nervous.

“Yeah, Aika.”  Koha turned and pulled Aika towards Lin.

“You two should definitely be together.”  Lin was next to her and that made her heart beat a little faster than usual until Lin fainted.

Koha went to grabbed the nurse and carried her limp body to her office.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: amEthystx on November 30, 2009, 12:06:07 PM
LOL... interesting pairing you have here...awwww...i tot koharu is with Aika  :P

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: kRisZ on November 30, 2009, 04:07:20 PM
Damn, the last two lines were  :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 30, 2009, 11:00:14 PM
^Much agreed!  :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: badsaints on December 01, 2009, 01:16:26 PM
Heehee I thought the last 2 lines were funny too.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: Sancho on December 02, 2009, 03:48:49 AM
Wow. This stuff is good. Just manage to finish the 2 chapter.  :P. I was wondering if this is a one whole story or a compilation of mini series. And Sayu on guitar?? I really thought that it was Linlin  XD. Good stuff here mate. Keep it up.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: kuro808 on December 02, 2009, 04:28:30 AM
Wow. This stuff is good. Just manage to finish the 2 chapter.  :P. I was wondering if this is a one whole story or a compilation of mini series. And Sayu on guitar?? I really thought that it was Linlin  XD. Good stuff here mate. Keep it up.

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Now, this will be a different component to the main story, as many who have not read the story or whoever thinks that AiGaki is not a great pairing, I don't blame you but they are not the main part to the story.  :hearing the shocks across the room:

That won't come up until part three

Well now to explain this, this is actually one whole story comprise of "Music Titles"  as you can see the first three are American music titles and I was planning to put in some J-pop titles soon but IDK when I will write a new chapter and I have scripted 3-5 chapters in my mind off of chapter 3 so if you haven't figured it out yet, an AikaKohaLin love triangle or so put it interestingly the six previously mentioned people are going to be of help to the three mentioned, and to be honest, I might add a few to a lot of characters if it helps at all to complex this story even more.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: Sancho on December 02, 2009, 06:13:10 AM
^ Ah, I see. You seems have a plan for this. That's interesting. Then I'll look forward for it.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: kuro808 on December 03, 2009, 02:30:21 AM
I hoped I answered the main question but this part will have parts of what I am saying.  Also, it is a two-parter  :nervous

Popcorn Love (Part 1)

Lin’s mind went into the tailspin of being filled up with the supposed fact of her new girlfriend.

“Lin, you okay?”  Aika asked with Koha trying to look over the younger person’s shoulder.

“Yeah, I get nervous when people push me together with another person.”  Lin laughed nervously.

“Well, I was thinking that Aika makes you nervous so what would I make you?”  Koha being her jumpy self

“Um, happy?”  Again another response that made both of them looks at each other.

“I see.  Well Aika let’s go home.”  Koha sling her arm around Aika’s body, which made Lin feel agitated.

Lin was never a person who liked to talk especially to people she liked.  She sat there drinking the cup of water, which was given to her by the nurse.  

“Those two are always together, are you part of their group now?”  The nurse asked watching the Chinese sipping her water slowly.

“I don’t know.”  The response made the nurse concerned for her even more.  Before the nurse could mumble out the next word, Lin decided to sit next to her.

Lin was confused about all the thing that had happen to her on the first day.  She tried to compose herself before talking but she was determined to get it off her chest.

“I have a confession but I want to keep it a secret.”  Lin cracked a smile.

The nurse listened intently to her next words but she could see that the nurse was paying attention.

“You should tell them after this, maybe they would like to know.”  Lin suddenly stood up.  However, she sat back down when her exhausted body couldn’t handle the weight.

“Okay, I like both of them but it seems Koha doesn’t want me.”  The nurse laughed loudly.

“Koha is a free spirit, she takes a liking to anybody, and whatever confession you have for both of them, and you should tell them.  Lin nodded and decided to have a nap by the nurse’s order.
~~

Aika and Koha accompanied each other outside the school grounds but both seem to feel the chill of talking about their fallen friend.

Koha knew Aika liked her but when she carried her to the nurse’s office, she began to warm up to the Chinese girl.

“Hey Mittsi, I think we have a problem.”  Koha palms grew sweaty.

“Don’t tell me, you like her don’t you?”  Koha nodded and Aika was angered by that.

What Lin didn’t know was the last time they liked somebody, it lead to bitter fights and tearing each other’s guards down.

“Koha, shall we make a deal?  Whoever she takes, the other has to lay off until we break up.”  Aika extended her hand out but Koha had something to say before shaking off on it.

“What if she goes to the loser after the winner breaks it off?”

“We will just let that happen.”  Both shook on it and went back to their happy ways but they knew each of them had a plan to take out the other.
~~

Lin woke up from her slumber and the nurse decided to take nap too.  Lin slipped out to get all her stuff from the room to go home and she was still thinking about her two new friends that she made but it was her decision to pick the one she would spend more time with.

She decided to take the scenic route home to clear her mind from her present problem and found two people in the park.  One had a guitar and the other was swaying to her every lyric.

Lin noticed that the person had great skills on the guitar and she sat next to them for the pleasure of company.

"A new fan, I see here."  The person with the guitar stopped playing and noticed the girls sitting next to each other.

"Yeah.  I needed to think over some stuff."  Lin stood up but the other girl encouraged her to tell her problem out to them.

Sayu and Jun were listening to the Lin's problem and both came to the same conclusion: Let them decide and you should accept whoever entices you heart more.

Lin seemed content but she enjoyed Sayu's music too much that she lost track of time and ran home to her mother's cooking and her disappointment.

"Lin, I heard you fainted, why didn't you come straight home?"  Her mother asked but she has seen daughter happy for the first time in a while, so she let her go this time.

She came to the conclusion that maybe, maybe she should observe and watch the battle.

EDIT: Revised :thumbup
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Middle 11/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 03, 2009, 02:36:24 AM
That was quick in developing feelings.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 1 12/2)
Post by: amEthystx on December 03, 2009, 06:53:47 AM
woooooooo... a very very special triangle love..~

BUT~ why do i feel like betting it on Koha/Aika instead....... SORRY LIN!

 :P

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: kuro808 on December 04, 2009, 12:49:55 PM
That was quick in developing feelings.

yeah I know but why not :lol:

woooooooo... a very very special triangle love..~

BUT~ why do i feel like betting it on Koha/Aika instead....... SORRY LIN!

 :P

Well it won't happen that way but maybe on accident?

Popcorn Love Part 2

Aika and Koha decided to take Lin out to the movies as a group date.  Both were competing for Lin's attention and her heart.

Both agreed on watching the new suspense movie that came out during the weekend.  They took Lin aside and told her of the new movie coming out.  Lin was curious about the movie and she would be  with her friends so she wouldn't feel bad if she enjoys herself once in a while.

After school, the three of them walked to the local theater and bought a selection of candy and allarge tub of popcorn.

“Let me help you there, Lin.”  Aika was in front of her since Lin had the tub of popcorn and put down her seat for her.  Koha knew Aika would be the one to make the first move but Koha could do her one better.

“I'll get the drinks, since we ran out of hands back there.”  Koha smiled towards Aika with Lin not paying attention to both of them.

Lin was busy popping each popped kernel into her mouth, the salt and butter were making her feel warm inside because back in her hometown there were no theater and she would entertain herself with reading or studying.

Minutes later, Koha came back with three drinks in the tray.  She gave the first drink to Lin, then Aika, then herself.  Unfortunately, Koha gave her the one with the loose cover and it spilled over her uniform, which made Lin crack up.

An angry Aika walked up and went to the bathroom to clean herself up, Koha made her move like a lion hunting for its prey.

“Lin you enjoying yourself?”  Koha asked and a gleeful Lin nodded with the crunching of the kernel in her mouth.

“I never had movies like this in China, they were either closed or too expensive to go in.”  Lin continued on with her munching while Koha decided to check up on Aika.

Koha walked up to the back door but a customer ran into her with a hot dog full of mustard, she freaked out and ran to the bathroom.

“Koha, I didn't know you like yellow so much.”  Aika was laughing so hard that she forgot about her own stain.

“At least mines doesn't let Lin see you bra.”  Aika became quiet and started to think of her next move.

Aika wanted to make the next move so she slipped out of the bathroom and walked in with her pride still with her.

“Lin, you seem to like all the snacks.”  She saw all the open packages around her.

“Yeah, I usually never got to eat a lot of sweets in China, so I wanted to try each of them.”  Aika was glad that Lin was happy to be with her and Koha.

The lights dimmed and Aika grabbed a few kernels of popcorn to put into her mouth and she saw two girls with their heads next to each other.  She decided to put her head on Lin's shoulder but her head went towards her and knock each other.

“Ow, that hurt.”  Both of them rubbing their heads when Koha walks in with the big yellow stain still on her.

Koha grabbed a kernel and started munching, she also fling a kernel towards an unexpected Aika, and success, it hit her on the nose.  Aika retaliated with two kernels and still Lin was concentrating on the movie while the other two still throwing kernels at each other.

Both became exhausted and decided to watch the movie instead of competing, Lin was into the movie until the scary part got her by surprised and sprayed the tub to the two sitting next to each other.  Both were covered in food and sticky materials.  They waited until the end to hurry themselves to the bathroom to clean up.

“Sorry, I wish I was more considerate to both of you.”  Lin bowed deeply to the two friends.

“Ah don't worry, which one of us do you like?”  Aika spitted it out bluntly and caught Lin off guard.

“Um... um.... I like both of you guys but I need some time to decide on one person.”  Koha grabbed her kouhai aside and gave her a lecture.

“Aika, why did you do that?”

“I wanted to know.”

“Don't force it or it will lead to worst things.”  Koha was trying to make sure Lin wasn't forced into a bad decision, which was Aika.

“Okay, I'll let her decide.”  Aika brushed the last of the kernels off and waited for Koha to clean herself up.

Both Lin and Aika were together and Aika couldn't resist to touch her fingers.  When she got there Lin turned towards her and gave her a smile.

She tries again with success but Koha steps in the middle and got Aika's hand instead.  Lin was suddenly behind and she became lost in the crowd while the two went out the doors without her.  Lin felt crushed that they would forget about her.  She finally got to the door and couldn't find either of them, she walked home by herself disregarding the two.

~~
“Lin, I finally won you over.”  Aika says to herself and her hand gets pulled away from her.

“Ahh, Koha why are you here?”

“I thought I had Lin's hand.”  Both said to each other and they knew they just each blew a chance at Lin.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: kRisZ on December 04, 2009, 01:30:38 PM
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“What if she goes to the loser after the winner breaks it off?”

Good question  XD


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Koha grabbed a kernel and started munching, she also fling a kernel towards an unexpected Aika, and success, it hit her on the nose.  Aika retaliated with two kernels and still Lin was concentrating on the movie while the other two still throwing kernels at each other.

 :lol:


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She tries again with success but Koha steps in the middle and got Aika's hand instead.  Lin was suddenly behind and she became lost in the crowd while the two went out the doors without her.

 :lol:


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“Lin, I finally won you over.”  Aika says to herself and her hand gets pulled away from her.

“Ahh, Koha why are you here?”

“I thought I had Lin's hand.”  Both said to each other and they knew they just each blew a chance at Lin.

That was crack  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on December 04, 2009, 08:21:47 PM
 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

In the end they didn't get LInLIn!!!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

They should end up together instead..>XD
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 04, 2009, 09:28:38 PM
 :doh: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: badsaints on December 05, 2009, 02:41:58 PM
Hilarious! :wahaha: Linlin sure is popular here
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: amEthystx on December 06, 2009, 03:18:46 AM
Seriously~ all those scenes with the popcorn war..~ I done it before~ LOL~ but just no dirty and sticky stuffs~

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“Lin, I finally won you over.”  Aika says to herself and her hand gets pulled away from her.

“Ahh, Koha why are you here?”

“I thought I had Lin's hand.”  Both said to each other and they knew they just each blew a chance at Lin.

- My god... what took them so long to realize they got the wrong person~ LOL~

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Popcorn Love Part 2 12/4)
Post by: kuro808 on December 10, 2009, 11:18:00 AM
Yeah a funny chapter for the reader but it hurt Lin in the end :hears the aww's"

well I hope it makes sense that the story has a flow to it :lol:

Anyways the next chapter and an into to another character. :thumbup

Don't Worry, Be Happy

Lin was not answering any calls coming in that night, she felt betrayed by her two friends, and the empty feeling was killing her inside.

She looked out at the starry night and breathed out a sigh.  It was hard that one person left her behind but both of them made her feel lonely again.

Her mom popped her head in to watch her daughter holding on to her favorite toy since she was little and she tried to smile but watching Lin in this mood was something she was afraid of again.

In China, Lin was popular but not for personality but for one incident couple years ago.  She was with her class on a trip to the local food factory and she was curious about how they make the food as any high school student would be.  Until another girl had grabbed her from behind and she slapped her across the face.

Lin was scared because she slapped the class president, which she had a crush on but she thought it was the male worker behind her.  Despite all her pleas for forgiveness she received a beat down from from the president's friends.  It left her with bruised ribs and even worst a tainted reputation, the worst of it was the writing on the walls.

“SLUT”
“WHORE”
“Call me!” with her number.

Her mother contact the school and could not find the evidence of those writings, she made a decision to start over in Japan because of an uncle that had recently passed away.

Her daughter meant the world to her but she knew she could pull through after the initial pain is gone.  She knew her daughter would do that for her own sake but talking to her might make it worst so she went back to her reading.

Lin's tears were saturating the pillow and the moist region was making it harder for her to let herself cool down.  She looked at the phone vibrating and saw an unknown number but she was too frustrated to pick it up.

She left it there for a while and she saw all the Chinese characters in the text.  Lin calls up the number and to her amazement it was Jun.

“Jun, how did you get my number?”  Lin trying to talk through her emotional state.

“Your mom ran into me and she said she had a daughter that had a hard day, I didn't know she meant you.”  Jun laughed.

“Oh, she is such a nosy person but that's what I liked about her, she's like a friend that never gives up on you.  Not like the ones that abandon me.”  The long silence followed until Jun tried to console her.

“Lin, it must have been a mistake, people make mistakes.”  Lin was ready for her outburst but she realized Jun was right.  People make mistakes.

“How can I say sorry to them?”  Lin began pondering until she looked outside to see two people in jackets outside.  She hung up and ran outside in the cold.

“Lin, we are sorry, I never meant to do that.”  Koha started off first.

“Same here, I thought it was you until I dragged Koha out of the crowd.”  Aika gave a smile but went back to serious.  Both were bowing to me and I put my arms around them to give them a hug.

“I understood you guys didn't mean it but I felt angry and betrayed that you left without me, I spent half an hour looking for you guys and no luck.

“As soon as I noticed Koha we ran back but it was empty and we tried calling but you didn't answer.”  Koha seemed concerned as was Aika.

“You know what, don't worry, I feel better, thanks.”  Line gave a hug to the two girls and she saw a taller woman walk towards them.

“Hey Lin, I wondered why you hung up on me.”  Jun laughed.

“Yeah, now I need to choose.”  Lin joked but the two were becoming nervous.

The four of them walked to the nearest food stand and ordered ramen for all of them to enjoy.  The night went perfect for the three of them.  All was solved and no other complaints arose.

~
The next morning Ai had woke up with a headache after karaoke with Risa, Eri, and Reina,  Her usual smiling face was more of regret after the amount of time she was singing the night before.

She zombied her way into the bathroom where she saw Risa brushing her teeth.

“Hey Risa, you woke up early.”  Ai stared at her girlfriend.

“Yeah, I need to get some stuff before Monday.”  Risa smiled with the brush in her mouth.

Ai quietly done her business and sat on the couch in the living room.  The headache was still there but it was slowly going away until the door knocks.

“Risa go get it.”  Ai yelled and Risa greeted the two at the door.

“Hello, I got some food.”  Eri proudly yelled into the room and Ai groans at the loud noise.

“Well, hello grumpy person.  We seemed to wake you up to early, did you miss us that much?”  Reina laughed at Ai's sleepy look.

A girl walks in with a fruit basket and jello.

“Hello, everybody, my name is Tokunaga Chinami and I am your new neighbor.”  She says and Risa takes it with appreciation.

“Hello, you seem to be young to have your own apartment, where's your parents?”  Eri asked.

“They are coming here tomorrow.  I was brought here by grandparents because they were taking care of me since I was five.  My parents were working overseas and I get to see them tomorrow.”  She presented her smile and everybody but Ai couldn't help but smile too.

“Ai aren't you going introduce yourself to her?”  Risa asked but a groggy Ai moaned again.

“Well unfortunately she's not feeling well, but that's Ai, I'm Risa, and these two are Reina and Eri.”  She points to the yankii and the turtle.

“Thank you for introducing me to them but I need to unpack.”  She leaves and we start looking at Ai strangely.

“Ai, I just notice that you have no bra on.”  Reina laughed before everyone joined in.

“Oh shut up you guys, I have nice breasts.”  Ai groaned.

“But Reina's ones are cuter.”  Ai sat up and fell back down again.

Damn Eri and her stories.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Don't Worry, Be Happy 12/10)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 10, 2009, 11:58:59 AM
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we start looking at Ai strangely.

“Ai, I just notice that you have no bra on.”  Reina laughed before everyone joined in.

“Oh shut up you guys, I have nice breasts.”  Ai groaned.
:lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Don't Worry, Be Happy 12/10)
Post by: kRisZ on December 10, 2009, 12:39:23 PM
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“Ai, I just notice that you have no bra on.”
 

 :drool:


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“Oh shut up you guys, I have nice breasts.”  Ai groaned.

 :mon blood:


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“But Reina's ones are cuter.”  Ai sat up and fell back down again.

 :rofl:


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Damn Eri and her stories.

Indeed  XD

Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Don't Worry, Be Happy 12/10)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on December 10, 2009, 06:39:02 PM
YEY!!! A continuation!!!!  :on woohoo:
Ahahaha...If Linlin had a hard time choosing between Koha and Aika... it'll be harder now since Junjun was added to the list. :lol:

And new characters!!! The Gorokkies has finally showed up!!! :cow: :cow:

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“Ai, I just notice that you have no bra on.”  Reina laughed before everyone joined in.

“Oh shut up you guys, I have nice breasts.”  Ai groaned.

 :mon blood: :mon angel:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Don't Worry, Be Happy 12/10)
Post by: kuro808 on December 12, 2009, 04:45:16 AM
Everybody likes Ecchi lol, well add another character to this chapter lol

As Long As You Love Me

Ai slept in as her girlfriend and her friends went out to buy groceries for both couples.  Ai had a nice dream about her video game obsession.
“Ai-chan jump onto the logs.”  The female character said.

Ai jumps and wait for the moving log to the next moving log to get to the other side but she mistimed the jump and fell into mysterious forest.

She opened her eyes to realize she was in a futuristic dress and the cute male character had picked her up with his hand.  She remembered the site before but before she could say anything, the characters started to speak but they were referring her to another name: Yuna.

“Yuna, you got knocked out there, lucky we bought that spell before we left the town.”  The male character said.

She began to think about her name but there was an annoying voice by her trying to gather her attention.

“Excuse me, wake up.”  She began to pull on my legs and I kicked her away but she came back a second later.

“Damn it, please leave me alone.”  Ai kicked her away but the wind blew her away, which forced to wake her up from her slumber.

“Sorry, your door was open and I wanted to ask if you had anything to eat.”  Chinami stood there with a pout.

“Sorry, I don't know what we have and you can help yourself to whatever.”  Ai turned over and closed her eyes again to gain back her dream.

Ai was irritated by the rustling of the dishes she was running through.  She shot up and walked over to the bathroom to wash her face.  She was disappointed that her game dream went to waste because of the neighbor's child.

After wiping the water off her face, she notice the young girl sitting on her bed with a mouthful of sandwich she made.  She swallowed with a sip of milk and she presented her smile.  Ai walked towards the bed and sits next to her watching her chew the sandwich slowly.

She hears her phone go off and she answers with the child still eating.

“Hey, Ai.”  Risa sounded cheery.

“Hey Risa, what's up.”  Ai still was tired but she was looking at her.

“We got some stuff and we should be home soon.  You need anything else?”  Ai noticed the eyes on the girl and she became terrified.

“No, I'll be fine.”  Ai hung up and turn towards the girl.

Chinami moved towards her and gave her a hug with her head buried into her chest.  She felt the warmth from her and she couldn't help but smile.

“Your friends were right.”  She said and she pushed Chinami back.

“Um, I should change.”  Ai walked away to her room.

Chinami dialed her phone to contact her friend.  She lounged onto the bed and found herself comfortable talking to her friend.

“Hello Rii-chan.'

“Hey Chinami, did you move in already?”

“Yeah, but my parents are going to be late again.”  Chinami had felt the depression set again from her usual personality.

“I don't know why you don't run away and find a person who will let you stay with them.”  Rii-chan suggested but knowing she loves her parents too much.

“I want to be with them again but I met my neighbors, it is two girls living together.”  Chinami said happily.

“Cool I want to come over because I want to ask them about their relationship.”

“Um, I don't know if they are in a relationship.”  Ai overheard the conversation and wanted to intervene but she decided to surprise her instead.

“They got to be, if they are living together.”  Chinami took a deep breath.

“Maybe, but I don't know if they you know.”  Ai was shocked when she heard that.

“C'mon Chii they must be having it everyday, like the day I caught you kissing my picture thinking it was  Miya.”  Chinami blushed knowing that she was crushing on her best friend.

“Shut up, Rii, you do worst.”  Ai nearly fainted.

“Well at least I am with someone at the moment.”  She hands over the phone to the other person.

“Hey Chinami, it is me, Miya.”  Chinami choked.

“Haha, Chinami, you love me so much.”  Ai stepped in time.

“Hang it up.”  Ai commanded.  Chinami ended the call and dropped the phone to the floor.

Ai looked at her with her brown eyes and Chinami felt like rolling herself up into a ball with her evil eyes.

“Sorry for intruding, I better go.”  She stood up and Ai forced her back into the seat.

“Chinami, take this advice seriously, do you like her so much that you would want to kiss her?”  She nodded.

“I'll help you out until your parents come.”  Ai smiled and she instructed her to pick up the girl.

“First, put you hands on my hips lightly.”  Chinami nervously placed her hands on the right place.

“Now, lean in and peck me on the cheek.”  Her lips met with Ai's cheek and pulled her back into the position.

“The final step, start from my neck and work your way to my collarbone.”  She went in and followed until the door opened.

“Ai-chan, I am home???????”  Risa had seen her girlfriend's eyes enjoying the girl's kissing skills.

Chinami ran to Risa and she tried to explain the situation with tears in her eyes.  Her panic state drew everyone away from Ai but Ai pushed her away to explain the actions by her.

“Sorry, Risa she was desperate, so I wanted to teach her how to win someone over.”  The other two laughed at the scene.

“What's funny, this is not funny.”  Risa jawed back.

“Well, haven't you always said that Ai would always “take care” of you.”  Eri nudged Risa.

“Yeah, but I wish I would know earlier but you are always helpful so I'll let this go but I'll add to your lesson later, Chinami, first go back home I need to discipline Ai.”  Risa had a smile and everybody got chased out by Risa's voice.

Ai-chan you sneaky person lol 
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Don't Worry, Be Happy 12/10)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 12, 2009, 05:41:40 AM
 :doh: The classic girlfriend walks in at the wrong time. I love it.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (As Long As You Love Me 12/11)
Post by: badsaints on December 12, 2009, 04:50:11 PM
Hah! I wonder how Risa is going to discipline Ai :twisted:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (As Long As You Love Me 12/11)
Post by: kRisZ on December 13, 2009, 02:54:41 AM
lol

Hah! I wonder how Risa is going to discipline Ai :twisted:

Handcuffs and a whip maybe  :twisted:


Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (As Long As You Love Me 12/11)
Post by: amEthystx on December 13, 2009, 02:42:25 PM
Question: How old is Chinami? lol


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Chinami ran to Risa and she tried to explain the situation with tears in her eyes.  Her panic state drew everyone away from Ai but Ai pushed her away to explain the actions by her.
- lol..i can practically imaging Chinami being shoved aside

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (As Long As You Love Me 12/11)
Post by: kuro808 on December 14, 2009, 10:26:10 AM
:doh: The classic girlfriend walks in at the wrong time. I love it.

Yes, although the secret will have to wait

Hah! I wonder how Risa is going to discipline Ai :twisted:

No Pervy lol

lol

Hah! I wonder how Risa is going to discipline Ai :twisted:

Handcuffs and a whip maybe  :twisted:


Nope not making this pervy  :lol:

Question: How old is Chinami? lol


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Chinami ran to Risa and she tried to explain the situation with tears in her eyes.  Her panic state drew everyone away from Ai but Ai pushed her away to explain the actions by her.
- lol..i can practically imaging Chinami being shoved aside

 :mon bat:


Chinami is 17 reason for not making it pervy but Ai got caught into a pickle

Hot n’ Cold

Lin began to warm up to her fellow countrywoman, both were going out on a daily basis talking about China, and Lin’s mother who tries to hang out with Jun on a daily basis.

Sayu was not surprised that she was with Jun most of the time because she understood about being lonely.

Her father was abusive to her mother and when her mother left the relationship, she took over being the matriarch, with her two other siblings.  Everyday she protected them from her father until the day he died when a metal pole dropped on his head and was in a coma for couple of days eventually leading to him to be in vegetative state.

She made the hard decision to pull the plug in which her siblings were against but the monetary situation was getting worst for her and she worked two jobs everyday to make up for her father’s hospital bills until his pension came in.

The pension came and met a young man who she fell in love with instantly but he was married, which she did not know at first.  The man court her around until his wife caught him with Sayu at the café, Sayu felt lower than the ground when she realized the man was married.

~Flashback~
“Sayu, I am sorry for not telling you earlier.”  Sayu slapped him as hard as she could.

“How could you?”  Sayu’s anger drove her to grabbing the chef’s knife.

“Please, don’t do it.”  His fiancé pleaded with her.

Sayu pointed at him and she was ready to strike until a customer stepped in and grabbed the knife out of her grip.

“It is not worth it, he will suffer the utmost disgrace for messing around with his fiancé.”  She said to her.

Sayu had her head down on the verge of crying herself to death when the woman appeared again.

“Want a smoke?”  She asked.

“I don’t smoke.”  Sayu refused but when she saw her light one up, Sayu asked the first question in her mind.

“Excuse me, what is your name?”

“It’s Kago Ai, and you?”  She took a puff of smoke and directed to her.

“Michishige Sayumi.  Nice to meet you.”  Sayu extended her hand towards her.

“Same here.”  Ai shook her hand and the firm grip she had indicated her own personal strength.

“I have something I don’t need anymore, I am planning to move to America to pursue a dream of mine but I don’t need to sing anymore so I’ll give you my record collection and guitar.”  Ai said to her.

That day she got all the items and never saw her again, Sayu never tracked her down, and that day she was more thankful that a person could save her from the life she was living before.

~End Flashback~


Sayu tuned her guitar and sat at the bench she usually sits at watching nature’s colors in front of her eyes.  She caught Jun in the corner of her eyes and she could not help but smile widely.

“Sorry, for not being here for so long.”  Jun apologized.

“No problem, I just strum my guitar and enjoy what life presents out there.”  Sayu concentrating on the sound of her guitar.

“I met a fellow Chinese couple days ago, her mother was very sweet, and she introduced me to her daughter.”  Sayu stopped for a moment before tuning her guitar again.

“She is also sweet but she is shy around other people and I wanted her to break out of the shell.”  Jun furthered explained.

Sayu was listening but it didn’t bother her that she would meet other people because she would meet different people everyday but one in particular was coming everyday after school.

Jun saw the high school age girl play with her hair and sits next to Jun with a smile on her face.  Jun smiled back and her smile grew wider than hers and she was snacking on some sweets.

She offered to Jun, she found a heart-shaped candy in the bag, and she thought it was cute that people would create such wonderful things.

“Hello, my name is Saki Shimizu, nice to meet you.”  She bowed in front of Jun and Jun bowed back.

“My name is Jun and nice to meet you too.”  Saki went back to listening to Sayu’s guitar.

Jun began to wonder about Saki because no person especially high school student would be in the park at this time.  So, she wanted to ask her a question but she did not know the extent to how she would take the question.  Before she could ask she answered the question.

“I like music and I want to be able to create songs like her.”  She points towards Sayu and Jun understood her goal.

“I was actually wondering… if you had a person you could be with.”  She sidestepped the question and Saki put her head down.

“I have a friend who I like but she has been busy with student council stuff and we don’t hang out as much anymore.”  She closed the bag and she picked up her bag directing herself to go but Jun stopped her.

“Don’t worry, I did not mean it in any way to harm you.”  She started to cry and Jun held her close and felt the warmth of her body radiate onto her.

“I confessed my love to her and she said the same thing but she has been quite busy.”  Saki mumbling through Jun’s body.

“She will come around, when she is not busy.”  Before she could say another word this girl in the same uniform comes running and snatches her away from Jun.

“Maa, I miss you so much.”

“Me too.”  She had tears in her eyes too.

“I have free coupons for my volunteer work, want to join?”

“Sure.”  Her frown became a smile and they both went off to the place.

“Jun, you are such a motherly-like person.”  Sayu teased.

“I guess so, want some coffee, Sayu?”

“Why not, let’s celebrate your accomplishment for consoling a child.”  Sayu laughed.

Jun was definitely embarrassed that she had a child crying to her own question but I guess that is how love works at times.  You are either accepted or rejected but you have to learn from both situations to understand the true meaning.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Hot n' Cold 12/13)
Post by: lil_hamz on December 14, 2009, 12:17:03 PM
The last line of this fic is so meaningful :cry:

If the guy wasn't married I would have thought he must be mad to cheat on Sayu. But since he was already married and went after Sayu, I guess it's understandable. It's SAYU!! :P

Man, you updated a lot. I need to go back and read this thread :)
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Hot n' Cold 12/13)
Post by: kRisZ on December 14, 2009, 12:50:55 PM
Saki's a little too fast in opening up considering Jun's a stranger  :D


If the guy wasn't married I would have thought he must be mad to cheat on Sayu. But since he was already married and went after Sayu, I guess it's understandable. It's SAYU!! :P

 :lol:  nice one
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Hot n' Cold 12/13)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 14, 2009, 01:03:45 PM
I kinda like how everything happens so fast, kinda gives everyone a certain innocence. Except that married guy, but like Hammy said, it's SAYU.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Hot n' Cold 12/13)
Post by: badsaints on December 14, 2009, 03:10:42 PM
Ooooh Kago made a special smoky appearance :D


If the guy wasn't married I would have thought he must be mad to cheat on Sayu. But since he was already married and went after Sayu, I guess it's understandable. It's SAYU!! :P

 :lol:  nice one

Can't argue with that :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Hot n' Cold 12/13)
Post by: amEthystx on December 14, 2009, 06:45:41 PM
OhhhH~  So that is where Sayu got those songs and Guitar from.. I missed Aibon~  :P

*tells Sayu*
- Protect your cute hands ok? I tried learning guitar before and my fingers started to bleed after playing on it for too long :cry:

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Hot n' Cold 12/13)
Post by: kuro808 on December 17, 2009, 10:04:47 PM
@lil_hamz i don't update that fast right??? I think when I didn't have anything else better to do then yeah

@kRisZ the concept was she was holding it in until she exposed it

@rndmnwierd yeah i like that and I hope to cover it up soon

@badsaints you know it

@amEthystx maybe I should go into this  :lol:

Nothing's Gonna Stop Us Now

Reina and Eri come back to their apartment after the confrontation at Ai and Risa's apartment.

“Reina, I am going to go out for a while, I forgot to pick up something.”  Eri hurried out of their apartment.

Reina rested on the table with her head down, she looks at the flower withered on the table until one petal fell off and hit table hard.  She turns to the faucet watching the water drops into the sink and in her boredom she fell asleep.

~
“Reina, I have something for you.”  Eri presents her a box

“What is it?”

“Go open it.”  Eri had a smile on her face.

Reina opens the box and she is in shock to see a necklace with a R on it.  Eri puts it around her neck and Reina trying to prevent herself from being an emotional wreck.

“Thank you.”

“I have something else for you.”  Eri grabs her hand to their room.

“Surprise.”

Reina sees a kitten on her bed and the kitty runs up to Eri purring.  The kitty takes a glance at the Reina and hissed at her.

“Reina, don't worry, the kitten will like you.”  Eri cheeked is licked by the kitty.  Reina moves in and the kitten attacked her.

“Reina do not like the kitty.”  Reina playfully claws back and she hears the kitty roar back.

“Reina is scared of the kitty.”  Reina runs back to door with tears in her eyes.

The kitty runs after and she sits right in front of her. 

“Go away, you don't like me.”  The kitty extends her paw out.

“I am serious, please go away.”  The kitty moves towards her and rubs her body onto her extended leg.

“She likes you, Reina, don't be afraid she won't bite.”  Reina bends down and rubs her fur with her hand.

“You're right Eri, maybe I had to give it some time.”  Reina started to laugh and she heard her first meow.

~

“Wake up, Reina.”  Eri yelled to gain her attention.

“Reina wants to play with her kitty.”  Reina says still in her dream state.

“Kitty?  Where?  You found a kitty?”  Reina shot up.

“Where is she?”  Reina panics and looks at her surprised girlfriend.

“Reina you have a dream.”  Eri laughed.

“Reina was enjoying the dream with my new kitty.”  Reina pouted and felt Eri's hand run through her hair.

“You are my only kitty, would like to purr right now kitty?”  Eri pouted.

Reina walked to the room and waited for Eri to come into the room but instead Reina saw the image of the kitten in her mind.  She went back to sleep again while Eri couldn't make her purr at all, but she enjoyed Reina's cute snoring.

~~

“Ai-chan, you are in so much trouble.”  Risa had her evil smile on.

“In my defense, she was spying on me, and telling her friend about me.”  Ai walked back to the room.

“She is only 15?”  Risa exclaimed.

“Well remember when you were fifteen years old and you saw me naked.”  Ai embraced her girlfriend from behind.

“Yeah, I remember that but you were alone with me and not with anyone else, but don't change the subject.”  Risa catches to Ai's guilty measure.

Risa bends her over and playfully slaps Ai's butt with her right hand.  Ai went along and showed the emotions of really being slapped.  Ai caught the girl's attention outside by the window and Chinami rushed in.

“I am sorry, Ai doesn't deserve this, I should be punished.”  Ai and Risa saw her pouring out her emotions onto the floors.

“Ah Chinami, don't worry, Ai is a good kisser isn't she?”  Risa started to laugh at the child on the floor.

Chinami nodded and she smiled.  Risa lifted her off the floor and decided to play with her friend's feelings.

“Hello, is Miya there?”  Chinami asked Risako on the other side.

“Actually she just left, what's up?”

“I got a kiss from the girl I was talking about.”  Chinami holding back her laughter.

“The braless one?”

“Yeah her, her girlfriend was not home and we were making out like crazy.”

“Miya will be mad you know.”

“I know but we weren't together from the start.”  Chinami was waiting for it.

“Yeah, but she has some feelings for you.”

“That shouldn't hurt her for now, right?”  The joke had now become serious.

“Well, I'll give you her cell number.”  Risako gives it to her and Chinami hanged up to call Miya.

“Where are you?”  Chinami asked.

“I want to meet you at your new apartment.”

“Okay, I am at my neighbor's for lunch until my parents actually come in.”

“Oh yeah, Rii-chan called and she says you have something for me.”  Chinami couldn't help but laugh.

“I should be over there soon, so I'll be waiting.”  Chinami hanged up and hug her two mentors before leaving the apartment.

Risa and Ai peeked out of the apartment to see another girl standing right there and she places her hands on her hips, she laid one on the other girl's lips, and her eyes just bulged.  Chinami was fighting for the perfect position until the other girl pushed her off.

They both started talking and she finally linked up with the girl she was talking too.  Chinami turned towards the two peekers and gave them the thumbs up.

“See you know it would have worked out.”  Ai said to her girlfriend.

“Your punishment isn't over yet.”  Risa laughed.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 17, 2009, 10:17:59 PM
Takagaki :heart: :heart: :twisted:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: badsaints on December 19, 2009, 03:51:54 PM
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The kitty takes a glance at the Reina and hissed at her.
This really cracks me up :lol:


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Reina playfully claws back and she hears the kitty roar back.
Kitty roar? XD
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: kRisZ on December 19, 2009, 03:54:51 PM
Battle between Teh Kitten and a kitten  XD


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“Your punishment isn't over yet.”  Risa laughed.

 :twisted:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on December 19, 2009, 04:00:54 PM
Awww.......Reina's kitty was only a dream...but it sure was cute though... :D

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Reina moves in and the kitten attacked her.

“Reina do not like the kitty.”  Reina playfully claws back and she hears the kitty roar back.

“Reina is scared of the kitty.”  Reina runs back to door with tears in her eyes.

The kitty runs after and she sits right in front of her.

How can Reina be afraid with her own kind??? :rofl:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: amEthystx on December 20, 2009, 02:54:34 AM
Reina is scare of the kitten?

Nana~ you are a kitten~ at least...in my story! LOL~

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"Yeah her, her girlfriend was not home and we were making out like crazy.”
- LOL~ she is trying to make Miya jealous? were they even making out? they were only kissing rite? XD

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: Shipyon on December 20, 2009, 03:02:11 AM
I like it ^ ^
work hard
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Nothing's Gonna stop Us Now 12/17)
Post by: kuro808 on December 21, 2009, 11:52:37 PM
the kitty is fun lmao

Against All Odds

Lin was enjoying her two friends company for the past month since moving from China.  Her mother was glad that her daughter was enjoying herself with her new friends but the past couple days have been struggle for her and she didn't want her daughter to be worried about her.

“Mother, are you okay?”  Lin asks her mother looking at her frail state.

“Don't worry about me, Lin, I want to see you happy with your friends, Jun has been getting me some medicine so please go out while I rest for a while.”  She watches her leave into her room with a smile that Lin knew she would be alright.

Lin hears a knock on the door and she answers it to see Jun at the door.

“Hey, Lin I see your friends outside, what are you going to be doing today?”  The taller woman asks her.

“They were going to take me to a movie.”  Lin said with a smile.

“Oh, have fun, I am here to help your mom and I brought my friend from the park.”

“Hey Lin, I heard your mother was ill and I hoped she liked music.”  Sayu waved at Lin with her guitar.

“Hello Sayu, I never expected you to be here, but she loves music so she should be happy.”  Lin weaved around them two.

“Jun, why didn't you tell her the truth?  She trusted you to give her the news.”  Sayu held onto her friend's arm.

“Sayu, I want her to not worry for now, let her be until the time comes.”  Both walk in to see her ill mother in bed already.

Lin takes the elevator down to the ground floor wondering what is wrong with her mother, she feared the worst but it couldn't be that bad than what she was thinking.  The door opened and saw Koha and Aika standing with smiles, both girls were the distraction away from Lin's mother's condition.

“Hey Lin, you ready for the movie.”  Aika waved

“Yeah, I am, just wondering about my mother.”  Lin tried to hide her concern but Koha picked it out fast.

“Don't worry, she'll be fine, she should be fine under Jun's care.”  Koha put her arm around the shorter girl and hugged her.

“Thank you both of you, I need this for now.”  Lin still emotional but she maintained the smile for the rest of the day.
~
“Reina, wake up, we are going to miss the movie tonight.”  Eri furiously waking her girlfriend up.

“Reina wants the kitty.”  Reina still in her dream mode.

Eri decides to snuggle behind her and slip in her hand underneath her shirt.  Her fingers walking towards the the bumps and she nervously scratched her midsection.

“Kitty, please don't scratch Reina, Reina sensitive.”  Reina smiled.

She managed to get to the valley and Reina turned to see a guilty Eri with her imaginative devil horns.

“Eri, these are mines, and those are yours.”  She points at her shirt then pokes Eri's breast.

“I know, but you look cute when you sleep and we need to get to the movie before we spend way more money than we have to.”  Eri stands up and changes her clothes in front of her girlfriend's beady eyes.

“Eri, you are always cute when you are in a hurry.”

“Reina, you just have cute eyes.”

“Eri, I like your long hair.”

“Reina, please stop we are going to be late and get ready.”  Reina smiles and finds her clothes at a snail's pace.

“Reina, please hurry up.  I want to pay the lower price, I really need to save.”

“Are you going to buy dinner?”  Reina asked the evil question to Eri.

“Yeah, I always do that for you.”  Eri was now getting desperate.

“Okay, I choose and I'll follow your directions.”  Reina was now toying with Eri.

“Sure, sure, I just want to go early.”  Eri was fully dressed in her T-shirt and jeans.

“I am ready.”  Reina was in a long-sleeve shirt and skirt.

“You are always fast but you always need some motivation, right Reina.”  Eri smiled and they rushed toward the door and out they went.

Eri asked for the taxi and both were ready to go to the theater until Reina realized her favorite pin was missing and Eri had it in her pocket.

“Eri.”

“No”

“My pin.”

“No.”

“It is not here.”

“Really?”

“Eri, seriously.”

“I have it.”  Eri handed it over and Reina pouted over it until the movie started.

Then, the three talkative girl in front of them were causing a ruckus and threw a kernel at them.

“You three be quiet.”

“An old person is behind us.”  Lin started to laugh.

The five of them wanted to enjoy but they ended up jawing and Reina, Koha, and Aika were sunked into their seats.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Against All Odds 12/21)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 22, 2009, 12:54:50 AM
Jawing, I haven't heard that expression in a minute!
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Against All Odds 12/21)
Post by: Shipyon on December 22, 2009, 01:35:58 AM
Nice story keep working on it
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Against All Odds 12/21)
Post by: kRisZ on December 22, 2009, 01:59:32 PM
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“Kitty, please don't scratch Reina, Reina sensitive.”  Reina smiled.

Damn  XD


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She managed to get to the valley and Reina turned to see a guilty Eri with her imaginative devil horns.

“Eri, these are mines, and those are yours.”  She points at her shirt then pokes Eri's breast.

 :lol:


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“An old person is behind us.”  Lin started to laugh.

lol

Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Against All Odds 12/21)
Post by: badsaints on December 23, 2009, 08:13:30 AM
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“Eri, these are mines, and those are yours.”  She points at her shirt then pokes Eri's breast.
This is funny :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Against All Odds 12/21)
Post by: kuro808 on December 27, 2009, 01:41:17 PM
Jawing, I haven't heard that expression in a minute!

I really couldn't think of another word  XD

@Shipyon thank you

@ kRisZ yes a little pervy doesn't hurt lmao

@badsaints yeah again I really need to add some comedic value to this also I miss you calling me 22  :D.  Although I know how I feel about the other forum :(

LOVE Machine

Ai was not off the hook with Risa and it made her quite bratty that her girlfriend couldn't let her walk by without tying to make her feel guilty.

“Ai-chan, are you still thinking of Chinami?”  Risa teased.

“No, I have been thinking of you always and we made them two come together, so I thank you for being a good girlfriend.”  Ai would keep repeating to her lover.

“Thank you.”  Risa would go back to her normal ways and then her phone rings.

Ai sat on the couch while her friend starts to panic about something but Ai just ignores her by closing her eyes.

“Ai-chan, you need to help me.”  Ai rolls over.

“Please, you are so much better talking to angry people than I am.”  Ai opens her eyes.

“What is it?  Is it your friend?”  Ai asks her.

“No, my cousin Airi, just broke up with her girlfriend and she seems to be in distress.”  Risa had watched Ai's expression not change.

“Please, I am begging you, all she'll do is whine and just break us apart for the weekend, I am not lying, I want to have fun this weekend.”  Risa hugged her friend to gain her attention.

“Under one condition, you have to stop your teasing.”  Risa on her knees stood up.

“I am not willing to give that up.”

“Well, your cousin is coming soon, right?  You have to deal with her.”  Ai rolled back over.

“Please, no, there has to be another thing, I will do anything else.”  Risa pleaded.

“Anything?”

“Yes, anything but to stop teasing.”  Risa saw the imaginary horns pop out of Ai's head.

“I'll go find the costume.”

“Good girl, Risa.”  The older girl now had the advantage.

Risa found an old costume that Ai use to wear but since she outgrew it, it would fit onto her body.  She slipped on the red dress and walked to the room where Ai was.

“I feel nude.”  Risa said.  The red dress contoured to the younger girl's body and Ai couldn't help but to rub hands all over the lover's body.

“No, this is so evil of you, you wore this when your body was not matured enough, and then you leave for me whenever you screw up.  That is so unfair.”  Risa pouted.

“There, there, at least you look sexy for your cousin.”  Risa heard a knock to see her overemotional cousin at the door.

“Risa, I miss you.”  She hugged her cousin in the revealing costume.

“Yeah, me too.”  Risa nonchalantly hugged back.

Risa motioned to Ai-chan to get her off before she goes into a more unstable state.  Ai grabbed her cousin by the hand and sat her down with her.

“Airi, you are so young, love will come and go, and you just have to recover a while before loving someone again.”  Ai explained to the emotional child.

“I know but she was the best one I ever had.”  She threw herself toward Ai and the tears were now soaking through her clothing.

“You should relax and let's have some tea so you can gather your thoughts.”  She pointed to the kettle so Risa could make some tea.

The two on the couch watches Risa make tea for both of them and Airi had something else on her mind.

“Why is she wearing that?”  Airi whispered.

“She lost a bet and she needs to wear it until the day is over.”  Ai explained,

Airi lounged on the couch with Ai's arms around her.  Risa had become jealous and she wanted to get her back good, she had the tea ready but she forgot the rug on the floor and tripped over it.  The ingredients fell onto the floor with the hot water.

“Risa, you okay?”  The older girl came to dust her friend off.

“Yeah, I should be fine.”  Risa cleaning herself up and Airi walking towards them.

“Risa, can Ai be with me for today?  I want her to tell me about you personally when you are with her.”  Risa looked to Ai and her pride was just too superior to say yes.

“Airi, no she cannot be with you, I want you to figure your problems by yourself.  Ai is my girlfriend and I want her to be with me tonight.”  Risa knew what was coming but Ai stepped in front of her.

“Airi, my dear, Risa is right, maybe you need to seek the solution yourself, I have been in your situation before and I met your cousin.  She was rather sweet and kind to me for all the times I have been a bitch to her.”  Ai covered her mouth and Airi started to giggle.

“Sorry, I was being too honest about it.”  Airi stopped her.

“Risa, you have been close to me since I was little and now when I am a young adult, I found a mentor in you when I needed to talk about relationships or my parents or pretty much anything I want to get off of my chest.  However, I knew that you lover her but I didn't know the romance between you two.”  Ai comforted her before she continued on.

“I just wanted that but maybe I should wait and let things work out for itself.”  Airi had her smile back and walked out to see a girl walking out of the neighbor's door.

“Excuse me, I think you dropped this.”  She picked up the pin and their eyes met each other.

“My name is Airi, what is yours?”

“Risako, ah thank you for picking it up it is my favorite pin.”  Both walked out of the apartment complex.

“Ai, you are an asshole when you have to tell her off.”

“I know but I am not the one who everyone looks at when you want me to tell with you cousin.”  Ai laughed before closing the door.

“Can I take it off?  I think I feel enough embarrassment for now.”  Risa walked into the bedroom.

“Is my punishment done, Gaki-san?”  Ai groping her lover's butt.

“Sure, I will give you one more chance.”  Both walked into the room and laid there with their lips locked and their hands all over each other.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (LOVE Machine 12/27)
Post by: badsaints on December 27, 2009, 03:51:18 PM
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...also I miss you calling me 22
Guess I'm gonna have to start calling you 23 next year? XD

LOL Ai is totally pimping the younger girls :lol: Poor Risa has to hold on to her jealousness this time since she did ask Ai for help on Airi XD So I'm guessing Airi and Risako will get to know each other after this? :lol:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (LOVE Machine 12/27)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 28, 2009, 12:18:14 AM
The beginning of AiriRisako? and Takagaki love!
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (LOVE Machine 12/27)
Post by: kRisZ on December 28, 2009, 02:52:18 AM
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“Risa, I miss you.”  She hugged her cousin in the revealing costume

 XD
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (LOVE Machine 12/27)
Post by: SukiPanda on December 29, 2009, 10:59:07 AM
Awwwwww Kuro-san!!!! I didn't know you made cute fics like this!! :inlove: :wub:

All the pairings are so cute. But who the hell was with Captain? I DEMAND MOAR CAPTAIN!!!! Please :nervous
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (LOVE Machine 12/27)
Post by: kuro808 on December 29, 2009, 09:59:41 PM
@ rndmnwierd maybe a beginning for that  :lol:

@ kRisZ you could imagine it  :twisted: but it was just a short dress  :lol:

@Suki lol one day I'll get back to that

Cancer

Sayu and Jun visited Lin's mother every day since Jun learned of her sickness, Jun was not a believer of Western Medicine but was willing to take a second opinion, every chance she got.

Jun would watch Lin go out every day with a smile on her face and in her stomach the fear of finding out her mother had emphysema would kill her spirit.  Sayu was not in the circle of knowledge of cancer but since Lin's mother was a fan of soothing music, she played it every time.

“You okay today?”  Jun asked her.

“Yes, I am, it has been a good day.”  In her weak voice, the barely audible sounds had become louder.

“Lin doesn't know, does she?”  The mother shook her head.

“You should tell her, I would like to know my parents' condition if they were sick.”  Sayu pleaded.

“I can't, I just can't, I never seen her this happy before and I don't want that to go away.”  She was close to straining herself and both had to calm her down.

They watch her wither away as their conversation continues about the future for her only child and Jun contemplated taking her in but she had no other choice.

“In case you pass away, I will take her in, and I guess I need to find a job.”  Lin's mother puts her pale hand on her shoulder.

“I had a feeling that you would do it, so I had a friend set up an account for you, and you can find a regular job without working too hard.”  Jun bowed toward her and Sayu stood motionless.

“Don't give up, please don't, I am begging you.”  Sayu's tears were causing the group of women to become emotional.

“Sayu, I am going to go soon, just take care of her.”  She closed her eyes and her breathing stopped.

Both stood over the deceased body and Jun picked up her cell phone to dial for the ambulance.  After the brief conversation, she put the phone away and sat by her.

“Thank you for everything, I will take care of your daughter, and I will keep her happy as much as possible.”  Jun put her hands into position and waited for the medics.

“Jun, are you going to call her?”  Sayu cling onto her arm.

“Wait until they pick up the body then I will call her.”  Jun closed her eyes trying to hold the tears from coming out.

“What if she comes back early?”

“I'LL DEAL WITH IT!”  Jun yelled back in frustration.  Sayu ran out of the apartment with her guitar but Jun didn't stop her.

Jun sat near the deceased body talking to her spirit on what she should do next, after some yelling and just trying to set herself straight the paramedics came to pick up the body.  Her mouth had become dry watching them cover her small body in a sheet.

“My condolences to your family.”  One of the medic says.

“Her daughter is still out and I'll get in contact with her.”  Jun saw the bed she was lying on and she decided to not let  her come back home.

After a quick cleanup, Jun contacted the apartment manager that she had died and the manager would paid for the cleanup of the area.  Jun left her a message without leaving a hint of depression but it seemed visible within her.

I am going to hate myself for this, please help me right now.

The cleaning crew came and they went to the scene, it wasn't big but it was to protect the apartment from smelling but the stench was lingering in Jun's head.

Hours later, Lin and her friends came back but it was obvious something was wrong and Lin ran up to her Chinese friend.

“I got the message, is... my... mother going... to be alright?”  Lin asked and Jun shook her head.

“Don't tell me she is in the hospital.”  Jun shook her head again.  Lin went down to her knees and her face in her hands.
 
“Why she didn't tell me that she was sick?  I would have stayed home to take care of her.”  Her friends surrounded her and gave her a hug.

“Lin, listen to me when I say this, she wanted you to be happy, that was her dying wish.”  Jun tried to smile but she couldn't help but to comfort her new roommate.

“Jun, I want to take her to a small restaurant so she can absorb it all in.”  Koha recommended.  However, Jun wanted to take Lin back to her place.

Koha nod and took Aika back home while Jun carried a deflated Lin to her apartment.  Jun's emotional state had been frustration and Lin's head buried into her back was not helping her anymore.

“Lin, I cannot think of any words to pick you up but for your mother please remember the good times you guys had.”  Jun carried Lin onto her back and Lin started to laugh.

“She would always make me duck when she ran out of pork and one time she gave me pork and said it was duck.”  Jun started to laugh too but Lin was still shock and Jun encouraged her to speak more about her mother.

“The best thing I could remember was always to be myself and one day I would find a person for me.  She would help me for my wedding...”  Lin stopped and got off Jun.

“What happened?”  Jun looked over to the younger girl.

“I think I like you a lot.”  Lin was blushing.

“Wait, before doing anything brash and let's have dinner first.”  Jun smiled and walked to her apartment where a small table was set with food for two people.

“Welcome home!”  Jun said to Lin and she was happy to find a person like her mother but she was a younger figure that she could look up to.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Cancer 12/29)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 30, 2009, 02:31:30 PM
Poor Lin. At least Junx2 will be there for her. Methinks Koha Aika have some competition.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Cancer 12/29)
Post by: kRisZ on December 30, 2009, 02:49:12 PM
Hmmm... Can't understand why her mother chose not to tell her about her situation  :(
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Cancer 12/29)
Post by: kuro808 on January 05, 2010, 10:52:24 AM
I would like to explain it but that will ruin some dreams  :P

The Power of Love

The wonky one found the one thing she didn't like about Eri: her love of small spaces.

“Eri, get out of the closet, I need to find my clothes for tonight's outing.”  Reina panics and starts to pound on the door.

“I just need some time alone.”  Eri whispers.

“You are not doing that though, right?”  Reina asked.

“What do you mean, Reina?  You know I like small spaces, it is in my name.”  Eri laughed.

“I mean... enjoying yourself.”  Reina didn't hear other sounds so she let Eri have her fun.

Reina walked backed to the living room to hear sounds of the neighbor's child talking with her friend.  She sits on the couch and sees a girl run out crying.  If it was normal Reina, she would avoid anything with her but since she was frustrated by her girlfriend's antics, she decides to track down the girl.

As she walks down the stairs, the kid runs down the stairs, and Reina was not in a good mood.  She grabbed the little kid by her collar and gave her a talk.

“That was not nice what you did to Reina.  Say sorry to Reina.”  The girl kicked her in the shin and Reina let go of her.

She watched the girl run down to the taller girl and tries to reason with her but it fails and Reina hobbles down to the ground floor.

“Okay, you two, you guys annoy me very much but I am willing to help because my girlfriend is in the closet and I have no idea what she is doing.  You are making Reina testy and I don't want to be testy right now because I want to enjoy my night with my friend.”  Reina caught her breath and the two girls turned towards her.

“You look... unusual.”  The taller one mentioned to Reina.

“I agree but you still owe me an explanation.”  Reina stepped in between them.

“Reina is not unusual!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”  Reina yelled at both of them.

“She is.”

“Agree.”  Both of them laughed and it made Reina angry.

“Momo, I was with her because I wanted to plan a party with you and she usually has the best ideas.”  The taller girl explained why she was snooping around.

“Oh, my birthday is not until months away, so you can take your time.”  Momo smiled and walked away.

“I know that but you are forgetting something.”  The taller girl reached out.

“Yurina, don't worry, you always plan so far in front that we always have time to change anything.”  The smaller girl walked back to the apartment and left her with the tall girl.

“Did she forget a special event?”  Reina asked Yurina and she nodded.

“Does your girlfriend forget anniversaries?”  Reina nodded.

“She always does but she always come with a gift at the right time, but I am not great with dates either.”  Reina nervously giggled.

The girl squatted and started to shed tears, Reina just watched her cry and she rubbed her back.

“Momo is usually clueless so maybe this will be a blessing for you.”  Reina tries her best to comfort her but she breaks down more.

“She knows it sometimes after I hint to her.”  Her eyes were red and Reina couldn't help but to help Yurina on her goal.  Reina marched up the stairs with Yurina and busted down Momo's door.

“Momo, sit down, I need to talk to you.”  She sat up listening to her neighbor's lecture.

“Reina is sometimes forgetful and maybe clueless but I never leave my girlfriend crying.  Momo, she is trying her best to make you feel special and sometimes you need to do that too.”  Momo nodded to every word.

“Yurina, I know what is two days from now but I need some time to get my gift, Saki helped me order it but it hasn't come in yet and you were talking to Chinami this past week so I thought I did something wrong.”  Momo pouted and Reina looked at the other girl.

“Well, you didn't have to overreact about me because of your frustration.”  Yurina scolded Momo but Yurina hugged her friend to end the discussion.

“Reina likes this.”  As she walks out of the apartment, an emotional Eri tackled her.

“You are so good when you take control, I will never disobey you again.”  Reina's eyes grew and she laughed.

“Eri, you always liked me for my control and you are sweating, ewwww.”  Eri kissed her with her glistening image.

“Take a bath, Eri, I don't like filthy people.”  As she tries to dust herself off.

“Reina-san, thank you.”  Reina shook her head as Momo started to climb to kiss the taller girl.

I wonder how they will co-exist XD

I walked back to the apartment and I caught a glimpse of Eri entering the bathroom, Reina's mind was on her girlfriend's nude body.

Maybe I'll surprise her.

As I slowly open the door, the door snapped back, and knock me back to the floor.

“INTRUDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”  Eri pointed the toothbrush at me.

“You cannot fight an intruder with a toothbrush.”  Reina trying to gain her vision back from the door slamming into her face.

“Maybe my body can.”  Eri laughed.

“Reina knows that your body can't match mine.”  Eri jumped on top of her and they had a long embrace of lips before each could realize they were not breathing any more.

“Reina, you look like a deer in headlights.”

“Your body is still sticky, ewwwwwww.”  Reina pushes her off and wipes her hands off before Eri went to take a bath.

Reina walked over to the closet to find her clothing was ready and Eri had hers to the other side.  Reina was relieved that Eri actually cleaned up and set up her clothes.

Sometimes, Reina needs to trust Eri more often ;)
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Power of Love 1/4)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 06, 2010, 03:25:36 AM
Whoops, missed this update.
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Momo started to climb to kiss the taller girl
:lol: :lol:
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Reina walked over to the closet to find her clothing was ready and Eri had hers to the other side.  Reina was relieved that Eri actually cleaned up and set up her clothes.

Sometimes, Reina needs to trust Eri more often
Aww, what a good girlfriend. :heart:
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Power of Love 1/4)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 09, 2010, 04:55:11 PM
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“Maybe my body can.”  Eri laughed.
:mon bleed2: double meaning.... :mon bleed1:

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Reina walked over to the closet to find her clothing was ready and Eri had hers to the other side.  Reina was relieved that Eri actually cleaned up and set up her clothes.

Ehh? Eri?!?! Eri... cleaned up?... :mon ehh: ok...I'll not comment on that one...jks :P
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Power of Love 1/4)
Post by: kuro808 on January 14, 2010, 10:34:07 PM
Thank you for the comments and another two-parter coming up soon :nervous

Renai Revolution 21 Part 1
 “Reina, I can’t do that now.”  Eri yelled.

“Eri, all you have to do is stick it out and just wink like crazy.”  Reina imitating the action making Eri uncomfortable.

“I am going to call Gaki-san if she had reservation ready for the restaurant.”  Eri dialed her number and waited for a reply.

Although Eri tried to resist winking back at Reina, Reina’s whispering was annoying her even more.

“Ah, Risa you have the reservation ready for us too right.”  Eri trying to listen in over Reina’s whispering and Eri got confirmation.

“Okay, we have to be there by 7 P.M.”  Reina jumped on top of the turtle.

“Shall we play our game now?”  Reina anxiously waiting for the turtle to give a response.

“Maybe, but we only have an hour before we need to go to the restaurant.”  Eri walked up and got the marker to draw on Reina’s face.

“I want thick whiskers and you have to be on your back every time.”  Reina laughed while Eri was not excited about her name at the moment.
---
“Yes, Eri 7:00 P.M. and don’t be late.”  Risa replied.

“Was that Eri?”

“Yeah, she wanted to know the timing of the reservation.”  Risa jumped on top of the bed kneading her eyebrows.

“Well, at least we’re set right?”  Risa nodded.

They both heard a knock at the door and it was their neighbor with her love interest, peeking through the hole, both were hesitant to open the door.

“Ai, I need to ask you something.”  Chinami furiously banging the door.

Ai opened it up and sees both of them with smiles on their faces.

“What is it?”  Ai with her face stern and not wanting to partake in conversation.

Chinami leaned in and whispered something which made Ai faint in front of them.  Risa being the observant notice her lifeless girlfriend by the door.

“Ai, wake up, it is not sleep time yet.”  Risa shakes her and she wakes up instantly.

“Where am I?”  She notices the couple at the door and Risa in front of her.

“You fainted and we told you what happened today?”  Miya pushing Ai playfully.

“Risa, they are worst than us.”  Ai pointing at the two.

“How can they be worst than us?” Ai leans in and mentions what they said.

“What’s wrong with that?  Remember you were curious once and this happened.”  Risa laughed.

“True, but I think they shouldn’t be doing that now.”  The two were noticing the younger one had fire in her eyes.

“I don’t want to say when we first started but it was young enough to make them jealous.”  The younger couple walked by to their apartment and Risa started to laugh again.

“Don’t scare me like that, I thought you were going to mention…”  Risa had her finger on Ai’s lips and the embrace started again.
---
Since Lin’s mother’s death, Lin had felt sorry for herself every time she went out instead of taking care of her ill mother and Jun was there enough to create a bond but the problem lied with her relationship to Sayu.

“Sayu, I need to talk to you.”  She left the message on the phone and walked up to Lin every minute to comfort her.

She heard her phone ring and she put the phone by her ear, Sayu wasn’t angry per say, but she felt excluded, and she didn’t want to have a fight over the phone.  Jun decided to leave Lin at home to settle the matter at where they met.

Jun put on her coat and walked down to the park where Sayu was sitting with her guitar.  Sayu was frustrated at how Lin was being greedy for Jun because Jun helped her mother out.

“Sayu, I am sorry but we need to settle the matter out.”  Jun extended her hand but Sayu slapped it away.

“Sorry doesn’t cut it, you never call me or do anything with me for almost a month, and every time I come over she is still there mourning.  I am getting sick of it right now, please either leave me alone or her.”  Sayu’s message was the dagger but Jun had a decision to make.

“Sayu, I feel bad enough that I need to care for her because she is still in school, and I need to be her guardian for now.  For us, I want to be with you but if you are going to make this kid’s game, I am going to have to leave.”  Jun felt angry but let it out as calm as she could but Sayu picked up the guitar and left.

“It’s over!”  Sayu ran off and Jun was left with her pick.  She realized that maybe time will heal the wounds or create a new cut that will bleed again.
---
“Mittsi, you have a brush I could use?” Koha calling across the fence.

Aika runs out and offers her brush to watch her neighbor brush her hair.  Both had become closer since the death of Lin’s mother but the funeral made them grow apart from their new friend.

“Lin, sorry to hear about your mother’s death.”  Koha and Aika offered their condolences but never expected this.
“GO AWAY!  You guys ruined it for me; I just want to be alone.”  Lin stormed out and everybody looked at the girl run away.
“Aika, don’t feel bad, we did the right thing, just maybe she needs to mourning for now.”  Koha embraced the younger girl and their friend ship bloomed to a new romantic relationship.


“You two don’t be late, you still have school tomorrow.”  Koha’s mother yelled to the kids that were going to the restaurant.

“Ready, let’s go.”  Both walking with their hands linked to each other.
---


Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (The Power of Love 1/4)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 15, 2010, 12:52:12 AM
Tanakame and Takagaki were cute. :heart: :heart:

SayuJun, Sayu needs to be more understanding of Lin, I mean, her mother just died, let the kid mourn.

KohaAika, I love it, they're a cute couple. I was hoping they would get together.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Renai Revolution 21 Part 1 1/14)
Post by: kuro808 on January 15, 2010, 08:47:08 PM
Sorry for just writing one part as I was in the middle of classes  :lol:

Here's a awkward and maybe a start to the title very soon

Renai Revolution 21 Part 2


“I see you and the neighbor's kid have been lovey dovey for a while now.  What happened to the Chinese one?  Is she still in mourning yet?”  Koha's mother looks at Koha with a serious face.

“I think she still has some issues to work out since her mother didn't tell her she was dying.”  Her mother bit her lip and put two hands on her daughter's shoulders.

“I don't want to break your heart but your father found a job outside of the city and we have to move by the end of the month.”  The last part was the usual for her as he was the supervisor for many areas in the business.

“I understand but I feel accustomed here and a university is near by here, so can I at least come back here for college?”  Her mother had another piece of news.

“For college, your father has decided to send you to the college near our new place because it has some prestige and he went there for his degree.”  Koha ran into the bathroom and let everything come out of her body.

It was a week ago that it happened and now I had only a week to tell her I had to move.  Now, is it too late?
[/b]

Koha brings her girlfriend to the park before the restaurant and sits her down  on the bench.  Koha nervously tries to grab her hand but her head was filled with everything and she spit it out slowly.

“Mittsi... I need to say something”

“Yes.”

“I have to move soon.”

“Soon as in a month or really soon?”

“Really soon.”

“Oh, I see.”  Mittsi nods as she tries to understand the situation that just unfolded.

“Are you angry?”  Koha shakes her gently.

“No, I am saddened but not angry, why would I be angry?  There is no reason to be angry except I knew this since you blew up after our date that day.”  Koha's mouth dropped.

“You...knew...of...that?”  Mittsi nodded.

Aika knew of that all along and she kept it away from me.

“Koha, let's just enjoy our last date, it was fun being your friend, and that is what I am going to miss more.” Aika's head was on Koha's shoulder as she traces her face.

The moment spent was enough to heal the small wound but both made a pact that Aika would try to reconcile with Lin, when she is ready to talk.  They walk over to the restaurant and see the ocean of people and their private booth open up.

“Let's enjoy, before you leave.”  Aika's smile gave confirmation that everything was going to be all right.

---
“We are going to be late, Eri.  Hurry your turtle butt up.”  Reina was checking her makeup and doing her classic winks.

Eri was ready but something didn't feel right and she couldn't put a finger on it.  The cooler weather gave Eri the chills and maybe the kitty had something to do with it but it just seemed weird to her.

“Hurry up, I need to go to the bathroom.”  Eri opened the door and the kitty rushed in to do her business.

“Risa, I need to confess something.”  Eri nudges her.

“What is it, Eri?”  Risa face grew red as her lips near hers but she pushes her away.

“Eri, you have Reina now and I have Ai, we can't do this.”  Risa pushed her back and walked away.

Damn it, I never like to do this to either of them but I love Risa.
[/b]

“Kamei, come back to Earth, we need to protect it from aliens.”  Reina laughed.

“Sorry, I have been having some problems lately.”  Eri puts her hands on her shoulders and tries to explain her problem.

“Reina, I have been crushing on someone else.”  Reina pushes her away.

“Eri, why?  What did I do wrong?”  Reina yelled.

“Nothing but I just don't love you anymore, we just grew apart, and I want this to work out but I think it has been too long we have seen each other.”  Eri's reasoning was not the medicine she needed for now.

“Eri, Reina is angry now and she doesn't like this at all, and if you are being truthful, this is some bad timing.”  Reina crossed her arms.

“I know, but I need to know that you still love me, and that has not been apparent for a while now.”  Reina lowered her arms and gave out a sigh.

“I love you my turtle, but I don't know about now, shall we talk this out instead of meeting Ai and Risa?”  Reina sat on the couch with Eri by her side.

“We should.”  Eri picked up the phone and called Risa to say they were not coming.

---
“I understand, I hope I see you guys soon.”  Risa said before she hung up.

“Was that Eri saying she wasn't coming?”  Ai asked and Risa nodded.

“Risa, I need to confess something.”  Eri nudges her.

“What is it, Eri?”  Risa's face grew red as her lips near hers but she pushes her away.

“Eri, you have Reina now and I have Ai, we can't do this.”  Risa pushed her back and walked away.

I need to say to Ai that this has happened and I want some comfort from this awkward situation.

“Ai, Eri confessed to me days ago and it has been bothering me for a while.”  Risa looks at the menu.

“Do you love her?”  Ai's simple question hit the heart of Risa.

“Not really, she is a great friend but not girlfriend material.”  Risa attracts the waiter's attention for their order.

“You should tell her that, even if that will break her heart.”  Ai orders her food then Risa.  

“I know but that is the problem, how can I break it to her?”  Risa put her hand on top Ai's

“Be up front and just tell her that her relationship with Reina is special and she shouldn't break that up for a confession.”  Ai sips her water and watches the couple in the corner of her eye.

“Ai, I see, thank you.”  Risa turns to see a younger couple chatting it up and she smiled.

“That is how it should be, fun, no emotions, just pure fun.”  Both laughed and Risa sees a girl walk into the bar with her head down and ordering a drink.

As Risa observes the woman, Ai looked the same way, and just noticed how she was downing the drinks like it was water.

Risa stood up, walked over to the bar to see the woman, and invite her to their table.

She sat down and never noticed her height of the elegant woman.  She towered over the couple but she slouched over to make herself look small.

“Why so down?  Did you broke up with somebody?”  Ai asked the woman.

“Yeah and I have a girl at home who just lost her mother.”  As she down another drink and orders one more up.

“That sounds horrible.”  As soon as those words come out another girl walks in with a guitar and seeks out the woman by us.

We see her walk towards us, the woman tries to hide but was caught by the girl.

“Jun, I am sorry for being angry but we never done anything in a while and I was...”

“Frustrated?”  Risa completed the sentence.

“Yeah and maybe we can do something later on.”  The girl saw the woman's eyes glow.

“Thank you for taking care of me and here's for the drinks.  She'll take me home.”  She walked away with the girl holding her body on top of her and struggling.

“Oh well, let's eat.”  Ai looks at the food that was served to them.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Renai Revolution 21 Part 2 1/15)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 15, 2010, 11:32:38 PM
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“Risa, you have Ai now and I have Reina, we can't do this.”
Wait, shouldn't it be Risa who says this line except "You have Reina, I have Ai."?

Other than that, lot's happening.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Renai Revolution 21 Part 2 1/15)
Post by: kuro808 on January 16, 2010, 01:04:07 AM
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“Risa, you have Ai now and I have Reina, we can't do this.”
Wait, shouldn't it be Risa who says this line except "You have Reina, I have Ai."?

Other than that, lot's happening.

I fixed to how it suppose to sound, thank you for pointing that out
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Renai Revolution 21 Part 2 1/15)
Post by: aussie on January 16, 2010, 01:44:46 AM
Did I miss something? Eri's 'confession' came out of nowhere  :huhuh


Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Renai Revolution 21 Part 2 1/15)
Post by: kuro808 on January 16, 2010, 03:26:01 AM
Did I miss something? Eri's 'confession' came out of nowhere  :huhuh




yeah it was meant to be that way, a slight backstory to the future, don't worry so much about the flashbacks as they go along, they will reveal themselves soon
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (Renai Revolution 21 Part 2 1/15)
Post by: kuro808 on February 17, 2010, 12:06:01 PM
Sorry for the long wait... I needed to find motivation to make this story move along and I hoped it answered all if not I will write more to fill in the blanks.

My First, My Last, My Everything

“Risa, I have a crush on someone.”  Eri turned to hide the embarrassment showing on her cheek.

“Who is it?  Is it Reina? Sayu? Ai?”  Risa was curious but her answer shocked her.

 “You...”  Risa turned away and ran back to her house.  Eri could only watch as her friend ran with tears in her eyes.


“Eri, I know you and Risa have been friends for a while and she was the first person you met in high school, but we are together and I won't let this go.”  Eri looked at the ceiling.

“Reina-chan, I hate trying to fake this, I still think of you as a friend but I feel that Risa will treat me better, and you cannot do anything about it.  I am just sorry.”  Eri put her face into her hands and Reina wanted to know one thing.

“Eri, at least be honest, why were you going with me?  We had all those fun times together but why try to bring everything down now.”  Eri maintained her composure and took out a book of her hidden thoughts.

“Risa knows about this and she told me to show this to you.  She wanted to prepare my own farewell speech before I leave but she refused to and Risa had always told me that if you don't feel happy you should leave it.”  Eri closed the book and left Reina pale.

Reina sat by Eri's side watching her stay motionless and the thick air was enough to make Reina scream in her head.  The anger was building in her and she sat there watching before she could snap, Eri stood up.

“Reina, I am sorry, I fell in love with Risa not you, I am afraid that this was just hard for me to say since we have been together.  I want Risa and Ai to break up to get what we both want.”  Reina clutched her chest knowing Eri exposed the secret which was inside her.

“Eri, leave them out of it, they didn't do anything wrong, they just went each other for dates and it became that way.  Ai never did anything wrong.”  Eri put her finger on top of her lips.

“All those days you were watching them talking, eating, and just being together didn't kill you?”  Eri knew she hit that nerve hard, she knew Reina would now kill her if she said one more thing, but she loosened her fist.

“I was jealous but I had you, you and I were in the same boat, I talked to you when they first met each other.  Ai wanted Risa but I couldn't say no, she didn't know I had crushing on her.  It broke me down but all I knew was, that the girl I met years ago was going to be my friend and my best friend.  Now, she has been feeding me the toxic that I had been avoiding, I feel hurt not by you but by being with me.  You could have just stayed friends but we had that one night together and for that whole night we just explored every inch of our own spirits, do you think that it was all lust?”  Reina's tirade came to a screeching halt when Eri's emotionless face nodded to every fact.

“Reina, I wanted to end it right away but Risa was serious about Ai and I just couldn't break your heart.”  Reina's open hand slapped her across the face.

“You witch, I never want to see you ever again, I poured everything into this relationship, and this is what I get a weak explanation and guilt, just get out, you really disgust me.”  Reina pointed toward the door and Eri bowed deeply before leaving the premises.

Eri, why?  I loved you so much to get this, if I was going to be used for one night, tell me that so I wouldn't feel this way again.

–--
A week past by since they had their final meal together and it was her final day before leaving and Koha sat by her friend and shared their last thoughts.

“Koha, I still can't believe you are leaving tomorrow.  You have only been here for a while.”  Both started laughing but hiding the emotions between them was difficult.

“We need to cry, this is just too much.”  Both gave each other a hug and let everything come out.  The strange girl across the street walked into the yard and she seemed confident to break up the embrace.

“Hello.”  Her soft voice merely made a dent but it was loud enough for both to look at the Chinese girl bowing down to them.

“Lin!  Welcome back.  You heard about Koha?”  Aika asked as Lin knew it from Jun telling her the week before that both had been enjoyed a joyful dinner.

“I wanted apologize about the funeral, I was angry that you guys took me away from my mother but she wanted me to not see her suffer and she said to Jun.  Jun told me the whole story and I threw a vase at her when I told about the story but it only made me think of all the times of I spent with you guys.  It was not anybody's fault and I felt the guilt building in me and Jun had took all the abuse.  I am truly sorry for what I did.”  Lin bowed from her knees before the other two stopped her.

“Lin, we would have done the same, it was not a great sight watching your mother wither away while you have no idea what is going on but Jun instructed that your mother liked when you had a smile and we were there to make sure you had a smile before you leave.  Your mother died in peace and that was the only instructions we were given.”  Aika looked at Koha while explaining the reason why both were around Lin.

All three paused to soak in the information and they were all glad that everything was normal and nothing was permanently broken between them three.

“Koha, finish packing we are leaving in the morning.”  Her mother called and Koha hurried back into the house.

“Lin, I guess it is just you and me for now.”  Aika put her arm around Lin and both gleamed with excitement.

They spent the whole night talking to each other and anxiously waited till morning.  The sun came out and the trucks pulled in to pick up all their stuff.  Lin and Aika watched as the men loaded their stuff into the back of the moving truck.  It was quite amusing that every box loaded was seconds away from Koha leaving the town forever, they waited until their friend appeared.  After two hours, the sun was fully out and she gave them a final wave before entering the car.  It was the final day they would see her, they were saddened but knew that one day she might come back and visit and with that hope Koha left and Aika and Lin were glad to at least see her off.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (HIATUS 3/11)
Post by: kuro808 on March 12, 2010, 10:59:27 AM
To the readers:

I have found this quite difficult to continue this story as I haven't really looked into this fic for a while so I am going to really put this on indefinite hiatus or not going to be updated anytime soon.  I have been planning to do other stuff but never had a firm grip to consider more ideas so I am going to put this in the shed for now and do something more toward my own preferences rather than spread myself out thin. 

Sorry to everyone but I have been trying to push this story forward with no success
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (HIATUS 3/11)
Post by: kuro808 on March 27, 2010, 10:58:06 AM
Okay, I had to recover my thoughts to hope something more concrete to come with it so I came with a make up part so here it is.

She Got Issues

After the fight, Eri decided to go to nearest watering hole and sat at the bar, listening to Japanese rock that was killing her concentration on the bartender.  She wanted to at least have a conversation with her as she gradually getting to the point of falling off the chair.

“Ma'am, can you please go home?”  She asked and Eri placed her hands on her face.

“I have no place to go, can you take me home?”  Eri smiled and a girl picked her up to take her outside of the bar and they sat down in the alley.

“Why did you take me out?  She was cute.”  Eri looked to the side and vomited into a pot.

“Well she is my girlfriend and you hitting on her was my problem.”  She was looking around as Eri was nearing her with her face.

“Your girlfriend?  She has a nice chest at least something I could sleep on, not like my ex-girlfriend.”  Eri closed her eyes and put her head down.

“What's wrong?”  She asked and she raised her head up to see the tears flowing from her.

“I just broke up with her today and it was because I had a one-night stand with a friend but the problem was that I wanted to not know about the affair.”  The other girl just laughed.

“Is that all?  I guess I could see why but what made you cheat on her.”  Eri with a confused look remembered that Reina was only mad that she told her about that but Reina seemed to know of it and Eri guessed that as long as it wasn't said it would be fine.

“Hello?  Girl to earth, are you okay to go back home?”  She waved her hand in front of Eri but she never responded.

Eri suddenly broke out of her trance and grabbed the woman's hand.  Eri could only remember that Reina knew about it but it was her fault.  It was not normal but Reina found out that Eri kept dreaming of the day that she confessed to Risa. 

“Can you help me to the place?”  Eri asked the woman and she carried her from the alley to the apartment three blocks away.

“You are a heavy woman, what is your name?”  She asked Eri and Eri was still buzzed from the alcohol.

“My name is Eri.  What is yours?”  Eri asked and she put her down by the building.

“My name is Erika, I have been here for about a year where I met Yui, the bartender.  You seem that you have lived here for a while.”  Eri nodded and Erika walked back to the bar.

“Thank you Erika, I will pay you when I remember.”  Eri waved good bye and started to walk to toward the building but she fell onto her side after a couple of steps.

“Damn the alcohol, damn people, and damn my mistakes.”  Eri yelled out to the people on the streets.  Then, a woman in a purple jumpsuit dragged me to the bench.

“Shit, Eri get yourself together.”  Eri opened her eyes.

“REINA!  Why are you doing this?”  Eri hugged her ex-girlfriend and Reina pushed her off.

“Eri, I understood why you said what you said but why say it?”  Reina put her hands on her hips and glared at Eri.

“Well, I was being honest that if I ever did manage to love someone else, I should say so right.”  Eri still drunk was looking for something to drink and Reina offered her bottle of water.

“Thank you, Reina.”  The pause between them was reflecting on the situation and Reina spoke to break the air.

“I will give you a second chance, however, I have to confess something too.”  Reina sat by Eri and her hands went onto her lap.

“I had one-night stands before so I understand how I must feel about you when you mentioned it to me, but right after you left, I realized that I had done this once before to an ex, so I shouldn't have exploded but it felt hurtful that it happened to me but the only question was why.  That is all I want to know and I guess did you think of me?”  Reina looked at Eri and seeing Eri just shattered in front of her was not the image she wanted.

“Risa and I were talking about her meeting a new girl at school and she wanted to talk to her.  I looked at her and stroked her chin before I realized what I had done, Risa had me pinned down.  I told her to stop and she got off me, but I grabbed her hand and told her that she should be honest on her intentions then we started to kiss.  We started to take off our clothes and rolled around the sheets for a bit until I went to the bathroom and cried when I saw your face.”  Reina nodded and hugged her.

“Well I can forget but never forgive, as long as you are still honest with me, I will bury this incident, and we can go back together.”  Reina patted her friend on the back and carried her to the apartment.  Reina let Eri take a shower and left the leftover curry she made tonight on the table in case Eri was hungry.  Reina put the blanket over herself and closed her eyes.

Eri came out of the shower and saw the curry on the table, she walked over to the curry, and saw Reina fast asleep.

“Thank you Reina.”  Eri whispered and she went on to eat the rest before resting for the next day.
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (She Got Issues 3/27)
Post by: lil_hamz on March 28, 2010, 07:19:46 AM
Poor Lin~~! :cry: :cry: :cry:

I'm glad you decided to continue with this fic after all. I really like how you come up with different titles for each chapter. That is really hard imo. Plus the names are really appropriate and have this feel to them too.

As much as I like my TakaGaki, I hope to see a little KameMame action too :P Awww, Reina... :( She is hurt by the turtle. Don't be sad...

The kids being an addition to this story so awesome. They are funny :D
Title: Re: Kuro's Properly Named Song Influenced Fics (She Got Issues 3/27)
Post by: kuro808 on April 01, 2010, 12:35:56 PM
@hamz thank you, it is a type of story that I don't want to end but more for to continue and add certain ideas from past and present and play into the story.  For the action in general, I have them kept rigid as possible, and maybe you can find scenes or areas with them but no more dramatic stuff for now (I may change my mind but I feel to be more uplifting than sadness)

Girls Just Want to Have Fun

“Oh Chinami, you look so sexy.”  Miya playing with Chinami new do as Miya began to sniff and it tickled Chinami's neck and she pushed Miya away.

“You two, stop playing around and get serious already.”  Risako yelled as Airi had her arms around Risako and she grinned as Risako started to scold the two older girls.

“She is my girlfriend.”  Chinami says in English and Miya covered her mouth and shook her head.

“No, not girlfriend, but girl friend.”  Risako and Airi laughed as Miya was embarrassed by Chinami's English like 5 years ago on camera.

“Chii, Miya is such a good girlfriend that she doesn't want to admit that you guys are going out.”  Saki waved as Maasa was trailing behind and picking up her friend like a newborn baby.

“What about them, Captain?”  Maasa pointed at Risako and Airi.

“Well, they look okay.”  Saki laughed as Risako and Airi gave her the evil eyes.

“They look cute together, well Airi is cute, Risako is just mature.”  Maasa poked her chest and Risako poked back.

“Maasa you and Saki are always opposites, you are so strong and Saki couldn't hit the watermelon.”  Saki crossed her arms and gave them a pout, then Maasa embraced Saki from behind and gave her a kiss on the cheek.

“Now speaking of opposites, isn't that Yurina and Momo walking toward us.”  Chinami pointed at the tall girl and the short girl walking toward them.

“I think so, they look quite cool as a couple except when Yurina plays get the item and Momo just jumping like crazy and then Momo pretend to pout.”  Risako waved and both waved back as Momo started to blitz them.

“Yurina got the tickets to the water park today, you guys ready?”  Momo saw everybody with their jaws on the ground as they did not bring their swim suits.

“Just kidding you guys, I mean April Fools'.”  They all went back to normal and was ready to punch Momo for making a funny joke on them.

The eight of them walked to the shopping mall from their location in the middle of the park, everybody seemed interested on the event that was happening only for today.  A closing sale of their favorite shop, the shop wanted to renovate and get rid of their stock before doing construction on the store.  They stood in line and saw hundreds waiting outside of the doors ready to rush for the best deals of the day or maybe even for the year.

“I wonder if we could get closer.”  Chinami asked and some moved before a guard stopped us before we made a step toward Chinami.  Chinami was left alone in the front and we were trying to gain Chinami's attention but she was ready to go in as we were waiting far outside of the door.

“Chinami is so attractive now and I am still the same, how come I can never be like Chinami and now flaunt my looks.”  Miya pondered out loud.

“Well, every boy has said that and Chinami was never bothered until recently, maybe you should have taken the opportunity with a boy.”  Risako answered and Miya playfully plunked her on the head.

“You two stop playing around and go for the deals, eh.”  Captain looking at the line moving toward the store and they were seeing the clothes being destroyed.

The seven weaved themselves to their areas and look for the deals that were appealing for them.  Risako found a blouse that matched her and another person grabbed it before she could get her hand on it.  She tackled her to the ground and snatched the blouse from her and started to go toward the cashier but the opposing girl had her by the ankle while the others were tripping over her.

Yurina had easily found her dress and just went over the customers and swoop it from the people but she realized it was too short and saw a girl who had the longer dress and asked for a switch.  She gladly switched and it was the perfect size and length for her type and was the first person out.

Maasa bowled everyone over with her body and couldn't get to the accessories quick enough but she found a nice pair earrings that were a light blue.  She saw the people fighting over everything in the store, and managed to run into Saki when she was trying to get out of massive amount of people in the store.  Saki held onto Maasa shirt like a little kid to find a way out for both of them and were second to come out.

Airi knew of a way to get through the crowd and she waited before the initial surge to stop and threw most of the groups' attention to the accessory area and she grabbed her sleeveless T-shirt before the crowd manage to catch the trick before Airi could get out.

Chinami and Momo met up with each other right in the middle while Miya was being carried away from her area by the changing of the crowds.  Momo and Chinami both got their skirts that were next to each other on the display and Miya had her item in her hand before the inventory was cleared out. 

“Did everyone get what they need?”  Saki asked and each had a bag to prove their purchase but all had bruises over their bodies.

“Yeah, we need to get some food to gain back some energy for at least getting home.”  Momo walked toward the food court and everyone else followed the smell of hamburgers and fries.  All were hungry but their money had run down low and they could only order 4 meals among the couples.  They pushed three tables together so they could to have the meal as one group.

“I have an idea.”  Momo said.

“Okay, whoever can make the sexiest feed to their partner doesn't have to pay for our next meal together.”  All agreed on the terms and they started off with Maasa and Saki.

Maasa had her half of the hamburger and waited for her partner's mouth to open up.  Saki didn't feel confident that Maasa would be serious so she slowly opened it until Maasa could fit the sandwich into her mouth and bit into it with a corner of the sandwich gone.  Saki had put the sandwich into her hand and Maasa took majority of the sandwich into her mouth and smiled with the particles falling out of her mouth.

Momo and Yurina was next as Momo was trying to reach Yurina's mouth by standing on the chair and in her successful attempt Momo flashed her peace sign to show her success.  Yurina saw Momo's mouth wide open and put her finger on her nose before giving her the food.  Momo concentrating on the finger made a weird face and Momo finally bite down onto the juicy burger.

Risako and Airi put the sandwich them and munched on it until they got to the center, where their lips met each other.  The four knew that the only possible way Miya and Chinami would win if they did something more exotic than the meeting up with each other in the middle.  Chinami ran her finger through Miya's hair as she put a little piece of sandwich into her mouth.  Miya did the same to Chinami but Miya finished it up with a long, deep, passionate kiss that made every person jealous around them.  Chinami opened her eyes and every pair of eyes were on them, the six had their jaws dropped from the site of mixing food and passion together to get the winners.

“Well, who won?”  Chinami and Miya asked together.

“You two are so sultry when you kiss.”  Risako emitting the jealous rage after losing to the brown hair twins.

“Well some have it and some don't”  Chinami stuck out her tongue and all started to laugh at Chinami's pose.

The eight enjoyed their day after the big sale and they discovered their friendship with each other was much stronger than before and what they see is not what they know as of now but what they might see in the end.