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Title: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 02, 2010, 11:38:26 PM
Index:

1. Drool (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=23346.msg660201#msg660201) scroll down ~ TanaKamei
2. Her Smile (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=23346.msg670997#msg670997) ~ TanaShige
3. Why Don't you Kiss Her? (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=23346.msg675089#msg675089) ~ KameShige
4. Forgiven (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=23346.msg710134#msg710134) (Her Smile sequel) ~ TanaShige
5. Duty Love (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=23346.msg856185#msg856185) ~ TanaKamei

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First of all I owe my thanks to writerjunkie for making me a TanaKame-ist and because of that I’m finally able to write something and finished it after years of almost writing nothing. Thank you!  :kneelbow:

I had this in my laptop for weeks (if not more than a month), so before I chickened out again here I go with my first attempt at this kind of fic.
Dedicated to the Camel Le’mac club (seriously go check them now if you haven't!! There's nothing like a healthy dose of crack for your bad day!) and all the TanaKame-ist out there! Hope you’ll be able to enjoy it somehow.

Edit: Special thanks for Mirei-chan for half beta-ing this for me.


Drool


They had been sitting in the farthest back of the bus, thanks to Eri. She had begged (more like ‘attacked’) Reina with her puppy dog eyes to sit there because she had a sudden urge to sleep and it was the best seat for doing that. Not immune to it, Reina could only nod and follow when Eri dragged her.

Soon, Reina learned that when it came to Eri there were things that she usually disliked—or found disgusting in this case—could be easily converted into something...endearing.

And what was that ‘thing’?

Drool. Yes, drool.

Eri was drooling on her lap. The sight of it was so cute that she couldn’t help but caress the head of the girl softly instead of wiping the drool from her mouth which was slowly making its way onto her jeans.

“Stop smiling like an idiot while watching her sleep, it’s creepy...and ewww, that is gross!” came a sharp comment from none other than the poison tongued girl, Sayumi. She had turned around from her seat in front of Reina and had both her arms atop the seat, and of course was still trying to act cute.

Reina rolled her eyes. Mind your own business, Sayu.

Pointing at the sleeping girl, Sayu continued her assault. “What is it that you see from this ‘ahou’ anyway?”

“Duh, and you call yourself her best friend?” Reina questioned the best friend’s lack of faith in the turtle girl’s good points.

The evil bunny just shrugged nonchalantly. It really made you wonder if that psychological test on Hello! Morning episode was actually accurate about Eri seeing Sayu as a person she could use. Because sometimes it looked more like the other way around.

Both of them were so engrossed with their banter and missed the once closed eyes were peeking out the moment Sayu asked Reina what she liked about her only to have them closed again hastily, leaving her ears to do their thing. Who could have possibly resist the temptation of hearing the answer coming out of your loved one?

Reina sighed. Sayu wasn’t going to stop staring at her until she gave her the explanation.

“Exactly her ahou-ness,” answered Reina with a look of adoration at the girl on her lap. “The way she shakes her head around while laughing like a fool without a care to the world, her sudden spacing out times, her randomness, her—“

“Okay, okay, I get it! Well...I don’t. But please stop before you make me puke.” Sayu interjected before she could explain any further.

“Hey, you’re the one who asked!” the yankii whispered harshly.

“Honestly, both of you are starting to get on my nerves...” she paused to glare momentarily at them and added, “both of you clearly can’t keep yourself away from each other and yet neither of you would do anything about it seriously!”

Reina put a finger in front of her mouth and hissed, “Sshhh! You’re going to wake her up!”

The bunny immediately clamped her mouth shut and mouthed ‘sorry’ for her outburst.

Eri smiled inwardly; for her friends silly fight, Reina’s answers, and Sayu’s impatience towards their relationship. Maybe she should do something about it...later. Right now, the sleepiness whispered for her to continue the disrupted sleep. Snuggling closer to Reina, she let herself back into the dreamland.

Feeling the girl shifted closer to her, Reina wrapped her arms around the body protectively without thinking.

Then, Reina countered the half question and half statement while dodging it at the same time. “I don’t want to hear that coming from someone who keeps on kissing other people instead of the one she wanted to kiss the most. You know you’re lucky Gaki-san didn’t kill you for kissing Ai-chan.”

“That’s...” Sayu didn’t finish and huffed in defeat. She knew Reina was right about that. Therefore, she could only sit back down on her seat and sulk.

Reina smirked from her victory.


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Not having the heart to wake the turtle girl, Reina waited behind when the others were already out of the bus excitedly to observe the location for their newest PV shoot. They had time. The staff were still preparing their equipments, so she’s going to wake Eri gently.

Slowly, she reached out for Eri’s face and stroked her thumb back and forth over the girl’s cheek lovingly. The action seemed to have an effect as the girl stirred lightly.

Though she couldn’t contain her amusement at the sight, Reina carried away with her task on waking Eri. “Wakey, wakey, sleepy turtle head.”

One lazy eye opened, and the next a bright smile was spread across her sleepy face upon seeing the face of the person who woke her up from her slumber.

Responding with her own smile Reina asked, “Have a nice nap?”

“Unn...” Eri nodded and rubbed her eyes.

“Well then, let’s get up. The crew is almost finished with the preparations.”

Eri sat up immediately. “Ehh??!” she looked around frantically before exclaiming, “We’re already here! Why didn’t you wake me up?!”

“That is what I’m doing,” Reina chuckled.

“I mean, you should have woke me earlier!”

“Yeah, but the sleeping beauty was sleeping so peacefully that I thought I should let her have her beauty sleep for a little bit longer.” Eri blushed when Reina tapped her nose playfully and winked.

Though then Reina showed Eri the drool on her jeans and teased, “I never knew that a sleeping beauty could drool.”

Eri slapped Reina’s arm and pouted.

Reina chuckled again before standing up. “C’mon. They’ll be looking for us soon.” She offered her hand for Eri to take, however, she was unprepared when Eri pulled her back onto the seat.

Sayu’s right. We really should do something. Smiling mischievously Eri said, “Well, it seemed you’ve forgotten one thing Tanaka-san...”

Arching her eyebrow up, Reina asked, “I did?”

“Don’t you know that you have to wake a sleeping beauty with a kiss?”

The blush moved to Reina’s face.

Had someone asked how to describe their relationship, it would be rather hard to do. At times, they’re normal friends having fun together. Other times, they can be closer than what friends should be but not like KameShige or GakiKame close like, there’s more. And this was one of those moments where they were dangerously treading the lovers territory.

It’s like they’re playing hide and seek with affirmation.

“What say you?” Eri dared tauntingly.

I guess it’s about damn time something happened. “Then allow me to wake the sleeping beauty properly...” Reina trailed off whilst leaning into the other girl face carefully, giving her an opening to escape.

Seeing Eri didn’t move an inch, Reina closed the gap and claimed those lips tenderly. After a few seconds she pulled back and stared at those eyes which now shined with happiness reflecting her own.

“So does the sleeping beauty fully awaken now?”

“Yes.”

They shared one last smile before hopping down the bus hand in hand to where the others had been waiting.

That’s one definite turtle step had been taken, with Eri as the initiator and Reina as the executor, this time.

There were no love confessions or whatsoever to announce the validity of their relationship. Nevertheless, neither girl minded if their relationship was going at turtle speed. For now, they’re just gonna concentrate on finishing the PV.

And as long as they continue taking the turtle steps together, they’re going to be just fine.


-Fin-



I really did get the idea from seeing drool (oh, what inspiration can do to you XD)
Tell me if there's any error, oddness, or whatever it is you want to say.
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 03, 2010, 01:12:31 AM
 :wriggly: OMG, so cute!
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“Wakey, wakey, sleepy turtle head.”
Definitely my favorite line.
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: writerjunkie on January 03, 2010, 01:16:52 AM
Ahhh, you don't have to thank me! Hehe, *blushes* Though I'm honored to get you to write something. This is very cute I must admit. You've done a pretty good job. I like this one-shot. Does this mean You'll write some more and post new fics? I hope so since the sites have been going through a fanfic drought. I'll look forward to your other fics. ^_^
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 03, 2010, 01:47:40 AM
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fanfic drought.
More like a rokun and Essy-sama drought.
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: writerjunkie on January 03, 2010, 03:12:03 AM
lol there are other decent fics out there that I read. Though even if Rokun and Estrea were writing I can never promise reading any of their work because my attention span is bad. Also, well I'm a bit lazy when it comes to reading a long almost endless chapter. lol
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: badsaints on January 03, 2010, 03:20:32 AM
Just the fact that it is a Tanakame fic makes it droolworthy :drool: (pun fully intended XD)

Eri's right. You do wake the sleeping beauty with a kiss, even if the beauty drools in her sleep :lol:

I wonder who is the girl Sayu wants to kiss the most :P And do we see a hint of Takagaki here? :w00t:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 03, 2010, 11:41:28 AM
@ rndmnwierd: Thank you! I was really hoping for that kind of reaction.
Yeah, I like that line too (and I'm the author  XD).

@ writerjunkie: I definitely had to. As a writer you must know how it feels when you aren't able to write something and I've been frustrated with that. So of course when I'm able to write and finished it, I'm beyond glad. That's why I have to thank you.

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Ahhh, you don't have to thank me! Hehe, *blushes* Though I'm honored to get you to write something. This is very cute I must admit. You've done a pretty good job. I like this one-shot. Does this mean You'll write some more and post new fics? I hope so since the sites have been going through a fanfic drought. I'll look forward to your other fics. ^_^
I'm the one honored that you think it's cute and like it  :)
Ah, truthfully I do have some vague ideas but more suited for long chaptered fic so until I can do something about it then I hope I'll get inspiration for one-shots. I desperately wanted to write a TanaShige (I'm still searching for ideas and waiting for inspiration but haven't came up with anything yet).
And I won't dare to promise anything about more fics from me.

@ badsaints:
LOL nice pun there.

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I wonder who is the girl Sayu wants to kiss the most  :P And do we see a hint of Takagaki here? :w00t:
I already had in mind who that girl is gonna be but need more ideas to make the pairing happen.
Congrats! You caught on the TakaGaki hints  :mon fyeah:


:prayers: :mon prayer: *praying hard for inspiration to come*
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: kRisZ on January 03, 2010, 03:09:18 PM
OMG  C'S FIC   :w00t:  :mon fyeah:



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Sayu asked Reina what she liked about her only to have them close again hastily

Eavesdropping  :lol:


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“Okay, okay, I get it! Well…I don’t. But please stop before you make me puke.”

Bet she's just jealous  :roll:


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“Don’t you know that you have to wake a sleeping beauty with a kiss?”

OMG  :w00t:


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Eri as the initiator and Reina as the executor

 :rockon:


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if their relationship was going at turtle speed

Damn  XD




Cute  :wriggly:



EDIT
 
Dedicated to the Camel Le’mac club and all the the TanaKame-ist out there! (Hope you’ll be able to enjoy it somehow).

:mon fyeah:   :gmon twirl:



2nd EDIT

By the Power of Grayskull Camel-sama, I hereby promote you from Awesome Commenting Audience to Awesome Commenting Writer. Please visit the headquarters for the Grand Ritual. Bow.


 :D
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: writerjunkie on January 03, 2010, 04:21:13 PM
@ pretend_2besomeone1- Oh, a TanaShige fic? I would like to see that. I've actually been trying to see how I can write a fic for that pairing also. I've came up with something, but I'm a bit sketchy on it. I still need to work some things out also. But I'll be rooting for you to write and post again. ^_^ It takes time for inspirations so don't rush it. I should know that. I'm still trying to see how I can update many of my own fics and complete some one-shots.
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 03, 2010, 05:28:33 PM
@ kRisZ: You're here!  :D

Can't blame Eri though, it's hard not to eavesdrop in her situation.

Yeah, Sayu probably was.

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Cute  :wriggly:
:) Thankies! That's what I wanted TanaKamei love to be or at least close to it.

Oh boy, I forgot to bold the club *edit post*

@ writerjunkie:

You can call me Chloe or C  ;)

Yep, a TanaShige. For me (so far) TanaKamei own the number 1 spot, TanaShige own the 1.5 spot  XD so I would like to write one about them.

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But I'll be rooting for you to write and post again. ^_^ It takes time for inspirations so don't rush it.
I'll try my best! Yeah, inspirations are hard to find especially when you're waiting for it, and funny when you're not waiting it can strikes you out of nowhere (exactly what happened with 'Drool').

Best of luck for your stories!
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: FaqU on January 04, 2010, 04:11:21 PM
Hey hey Chloe, you've decided to write  :w00t: Congrats yo!!! Sorry I'm late on reading and commenting though, my heads is all over the place  :panic:

That was soo cute!!!! It also brings back personal memories and emotions that I had long forgotten. 

You're a Tanakameist eh?? Couldn't have guessed  XD but does give me more motivation to use this pairing more in the future  ;)

I did wonder about who it was Reina was referring to in terms of Sayu and I want to go out on a whim here but I am debating between Koharu and JunJun, don't really know why JunJun but gut feeling??? So who was in your mind at the time???

I hope you have the inspiration to write more in the near future  :thumbup
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 04, 2010, 04:56:24 PM
^ Nah, don't worry about it. You're talking to me ---> the slow reader, remember?

So is my head, there are few ideas in my head that I need to write into a fic but it's too raw/random  :dizzy:

It also reminds me of my personal memories, the feeling you got when you fall in love with someone... :depressed:

I thought I was being obvious that I'm a TanaKame-ist? And my sig kinda shows that, but I do try not to be picky with the pairing much (if I can help it  XD)
Whooho! Can't wait to see you write a TanaKamei story.

As for who Reina was referring... :kekeke: now I can say, "where's the fun if I tell you?"
JK! I can't tell you now because I'm working on it, but one of your guesses is correct (I know, not helping with the curiosity, right? :lol:)

IF I get the inspiration, I'll be back with the sequel and the mysterious girl!

Thank you for reading and commenting!
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: writerjunkie on January 04, 2010, 05:12:16 PM
^Ah, since you've given me permission to call you Chole you can call me Issa if you would like. Though I do have many other nicknames. lol If you don't like to use that name I can give you another one.

As I was going to say before this, sometimes random can be very good. I mean look at the Christmas one-shot I've made. It's all sorts of random and yet people were able to find it funny and got a good kick out of it. So random can work, It just depends how you write it. I think you can do it though! ^_^ But if you need help just let me know. I'll try my best.

I'm not good at grammar and sentence structure though, sadly. >_<
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 04, 2010, 06:33:26 PM
^ Issa is fine if it's fine with you.

Hmmm... I must admit it can be good for a funny/crack kind of fic but the ones I got can't be used for that, but I'll see what I can do with the random ideas I got. Thanks for the offer!

You're not alone, my grammar sucks. I have lost count on how many times I revised my fic  :roll:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 04, 2010, 07:45:30 PM
OOHHH!!!! A TanaKamei one shot at last!!!! :cow: :cow: :cow:
ahahaha... something funny like a drool can turn into a mushy event for those two...keep up the good work!...and btw, can you make a sequel or even series of one shots here about those two taking their 'turtle steps' towards the goal? Those two were really cute together..  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 04, 2010, 08:07:28 PM
^I assume you're a TanaKamei-ist too?
If you are :on woohoo:

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and btw, can you make a sequel or even series of one shots here about those two taking their 'turtle steps' towards the goal?
You like them very much, don't you?  :)

And to answer your question, that's exactly what I wanted to do. To be honest, yes I have some parts of the sequel already written. But it means nothing if I can't finish it.
Thus, I'll say it once again, I promise nothing.

Thanks for the comment, I'm happy that you like TanaKamei! :grin:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 09, 2010, 05:15:10 PM
^...hmm..for the current line up... YES... I'm a TANAKAMEI-ist... and yes..I like them very much..ahahaha :cow:

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To be honest, yes I have some parts of the sequel already written. But it means nothing if I can't finish it.
That sounds..interesting...ahahaha.. I hope 'writer's block' will not get to you so  you can finish it... I know the feeling of writing something but you just can't finish it... but rest assured that there will come a day that an inspiration will just hit you out of nowhere and be able to finish it... until that time, I'll still wait.XD
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 09, 2010, 05:46:41 PM
^ :D

Yeah, it sucks when you wanna write something but you just can't. Sometimes I can only stare at my laptop screen and end up with nothing, it drives me crazy LOL

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until that time, I'll still wait.
Thank you very much! I hope it'll be sooner than later, sorry for making you have to wait  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 09, 2010, 05:53:54 PM
^ :D

Yeah, it sucks when you wanna write something but you just can't. Sometimes I can only stare at my laptop screen and end up with nothing, it drives me crazy LOL


You and I share the same dilemma.. If you will give me three hours of computer time... 2 and a half will be spent on just staring at the computer watching a video..or checking facebook or reading fics...and the remaining time will be spent on squeezing my mind for writing my fic.. and I'll just end up with a paragraph or two...well at least... I'm taking a 'turtle step' at a time... :grin:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: Kame on January 10, 2010, 08:43:09 AM
 :w00t:

YAY! TanaKame~~ :wub: My favorite pairing  :heart:


This was awesome! I kept on smiling while reading your fic X3

I totally could imagine Eri lying there, drooling while she's sleeping XD That's really something that sounds like... Eri XD

Anyway~ Thanks for sharing and I hope you'll keep up writing~

Look who's talking... I should finally come up with chapter 8 for Love is blind  :nervous :err:
Title: Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 11, 2010, 01:11:46 PM
@ cogi_yoshi: XD that's what I did too but you're doing better with your turtle step whereas I usually spend all the time being distracted  :smhid

@ Kame: OMG! I couldn't believe you commented...
No, thank you! I'm like loving your TanaKame fics!! --> guilty for not commenting yet *runs off to comment*

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YAY! TanaKame~~ :wub: My favorite pairing  :heart:
TanaKame is  :heart:

Look who's talking... I should finally come up with chapter 8 for Love is blind  :nervous :err:
Don't force yourself and good luck with it!


Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 25, 2010, 04:01:02 PM
So I was thinking on how to write a TanaShige-->staring at my sig-->watching Shoganai Yume Oibito PV-->this lame 1-shot is what came out.

Anyway to show some love for TanaShige I dedicated this short fic and my 100th post for this pairing  :luvluv2:

Edit: Again, thanks for Mirei-chan for half beta-ing this for me.


- Her Smile -


This was the spot where I liked to spend most of my free time these days. Standing beside the stairway, waiting, staring at the picture on my cellphone screen. I gazed down from time to time to search for a glimpse of the real thing.

It began one day when my lecturer bored me to death so I had slipped away to get some fresh air. That’s exactly when my fateful encounter with her happened....

I was leaning on the rail looking down lazily when she waltzed in. Confidence radiated in every step she took, making her stand out from the rest of the students swarming around. I surprised myself when my jaw didn’t meet the floor, although I couldn’t stop my hand from capturing her image secretly into my phone.

Our eyes met for a brief second as she looked up. And even after she had looked away, my eyes would still follow her every move from climbing up the stairs, checking the bulletin board next to the elevator, until that elevator door forced her out of my view.

Now, I lived for those short moments.

I sighed. I felt like a fool. But what could a girl do when someone had taken captive of their heart like she did with mine?

Moreover, I think she knew it somehow. Because after that incident, whenever our eyes met she would give me that small mysterious smile. It was like saying ‘it’s our little secret’ (perhaps only in my imagination). And this had became some sort of routine for us that had been going on for weeks.

Yet today was different. She didn’t go into the elevator like she used to after doing a scan on the bulletin board, she was heading in my direction!

Quick, do self-cuteness check!

“Can I borrow your cell?” she said.

Looking to my left and right—even behind me, I found no one else around. That meant...oh my god, she’s talking to me! I nodded vigorously and thrust the thing forward. She took the phone with one hand and her other one went to close my jaw softly.

While she was busy typing something on my phone, I was busy thinking how silly I must have looked. So much for being cute...stupid jaw, dropping at the wrong time!

“Here.” She put the phone back on my palm and smiled.

Have I ever mentioned that her smile brightened my day? Because it does.

I knew I was practically ogling her, but I couldn’t help it. She was so close and she didn’t seem to mind.

Wait, her face was getting way too close!

“I want to know more about you...” she whispered huskily in my ear causing shiver to run through my body and I closed my eyes involuntary. Once I opened them again, she was already inside the elevator, and her smile had changed into a mischievous one.

I looked at my phone and noticed that she had saved her number in it. The name, Tanaka Reina—with a ‘<3’ at the end—it read.

Closing the phone with a smile, I clutched it into my chest happily.

‘Tanaka Reina....’


- End -


I found it hard to write TanaShige, dunno why T^T
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: badsaints on January 25, 2010, 04:28:04 PM
Yay! A TanaShige fic. A cute one at that :luvluv1: Badsaints is a happy girl tonight :luvluv2:

I was imagining the Shoganai Yume Oibito settings whilst reading this :whistle: Sigh... how I wish I was Sayu in the story :shy2:

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I found it hard to write TanaShige, dunno why T^T
Hmm they are a little hard to write about but you did a good job :on GJ:
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 25, 2010, 05:30:51 PM
This was really cute. I liked it, just a little moment in time.
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: writerjunkie on January 25, 2010, 07:41:16 PM
Oh, a new one-shot and TanaShige? Interesting! ^_^ You've done a good job on this. I think it's really cute. I know what you mean about finding TanaShige hard to write it's the same thing with me when it comes to KameShige. Overall, you've done good and the ending was cute. I wonder if Sayu did call her? hehe It's good to see that you're still writing.
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 26, 2010, 04:21:43 PM
@ badsaints
Yay! A TanaShige fic. A cute one at that :luvluv1: Badsaints is a happy girl tonight :luvluv2:

Then I’m more than glad I decided to post it. You like TanaShige much, huh?

You wish you’re Sayu? Why? Because if I had to chose then I wish I was Reina LOL

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Hmm they are a little hard to write about but you did a good job :on GJ:
Really? Thank you! I wish I could write a better one.


@ rndmnwierd
Arigato! :)


@ Issa
Yeah, they literally make me scratches my head LOL I mean writing other pairings sure aren’t easy but they're somewhat harder.

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I wonder if Sayu did call her?
She better, she was given a chance. Otherwise I think Reina would hunt her down XD

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It's good to see that you're still writing.
I will as long as inspirations are kind enough to visit me.

Speaking of KameShige, who knows maybe one day you’ll see one from me  :P
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: writerjunkie on January 26, 2010, 04:46:30 PM
^ lmao Reina hunting down Sayu that's a little scary. XD

 :w00t: If you or anyone write a KameShige I will either die or explode of happiness. XD Since there aren't a lot of fics with them I think and well I'm still in the process of making a KameShige fic. So far all my ideas stop in the production process because I get stuck and can't work around it. I'm still trying to make one though. I'm sure my friends know that when they talk to me on MSN. lol They also hear how upset I get from not writing either.  :( But you don't have to know that. lol
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 03:29:02 PM
C!

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ I have been missing sure sweeeeet story!  :wub:

I dun come around the one shot session often~ forgive me?  :mon cute:

Drool <- Hooooooooooooow cute~ LOL *it's subjective~*  ;)


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who keeps on kissing other people instead of the one she wanted to kiss the most
- hmmmm... Koharu?

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It’s like they’re playing hide and seek with affirmation.
- It's kinda fun when it's at this stage XD

- Her Smile - - I always thought Reina's laughter is really bubbly and cute XD

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It began one day when my lecturer bored me to death
- More like everyday XD

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She took the phone with one hand and her other one went to close my jaw softly.
- closing jaw part is sooo adorable~ and imagine the height different them when they meet up~ Reina 151.7 and Sayu 160..   XD If Reina is not wearing heels, she might have to look slightly up to meet her eyes.   :wub:

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“I want to know more about you...” she whispered huskily in my ear
Reina had to tiptoe! XD

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‘<3’
  :wub: :wub:

Oh well............ School days~~~~~~~~   ;)

I request a long fic from you! *hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm*

 :mon bat:


Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 06:24:17 PM
@ Issa
Nah, Reina wouldn’t be that extreme. She’d probably just go and kiss Sayu because she’s tired of waiting for her call/text to come. Don’t give me ideas! LOL

It’s hard to make a fic with your fav because you wanted to create the best one for them. I pretty much got lucky with the one-shots since the muse didn’t fight me. Don’t give up, ne? I’m sure you can do it and don’t be too hard on yourself too.


Bishop!

No worries, there’s nothing to forgive ;)

Drool <- Hooooooooooooow cute~ LOL *it's subjective~*  ;)
When it’s the one you love, you would think it’s cute. At least I would XD

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- hmmmm... Koharu?
Sorry, can’t tell for now unless I give up on writing the sequel.

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- It's kinda fun when it's at this stage XD
Yeah, it’s kinda exciting.

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- More like everyday XD
True, I usually sleep in my class if bored :lol:

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- closing jaw part is sooo adorable~ and imagine the height different them when they meet up~ Reina 151.7 and Sayu 160..   XD If Reina is not wearing heels, she might have to look slightly up to meet her eyes.   :wub:
It's the art of seduction LOL

I see Reina as someone who’s very confident with herself, the height difference would mean nothing to her. Hence the whispering and ‘<3’ part, she’s confident she’ll get the girl XD

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I request a long fic from you! *hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm*
Whaddaya mean you want a long fic from me?? LOL
I dunno, writing a long/multi-chaptered fic is hard (how could you write them right away?) but I do want to, need more ideas.
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 06:51:52 PM
OMG You have another one!?  :w00t:

That was  :wriggly:  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 07:28:42 PM
Thanks K!  :D
Title: Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
Post by: Sukoshi on February 02, 2010, 06:25:53 AM
Awww that was cute!

I quite enjoyed it  :wub:  Hehe gives me something to think about when rewatching SYO  :D
Title: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 03, 2010, 12:15:02 PM
@ Sukoshi: Thank you for reading, SYO has a great setting.


~~~


Yes, you’re reading it right, it’s KameShige. And no, I’m still a TanaKame-ist at heart. I admit I’m not a fan of this pairing, they’re actually at the bottom of my list just before GakiKame (I don’t hate them though). This could fit for TakaGaki too I guess but since inspiration forced me to do this pair, here’s a try with songfic. Inspired by Jesse McCartney’s song with the same title.

Issa if you’re reading, this is for you!


Why Don’t You Kiss Her?


We're the best of friends and we share our secrets
She knows everything that is on my mind, ohh
Lately somethin's changed as I lie awake in my bed
A voice here inside my head softly says



Sayu falls asleep on my shoulder. I guess it’s not such a good idea to do a DVD marathon for a sleepover after a long dance practice we did.

Slipping my arm behind her waist to hold her steady, I tilt my head sideways to gain a better sight of her sleeping face. She looks exhausted.

I part her bangs and hold her smooth black hair in my hand, smelling it. The scent, I love it, exactly like you.

Sweet.


"Why don't you kiss her?
Why don't you tell her?
Why don't you let her see the feelings that you hide?
'Cause she'll never know if you never show the way you feel inside"



Lately I find myself drawn to you, things about you don’t fit into my ‘ordinary’ category anymore. How I would look forward for you to do your ‘usa-chan peace’, how your nasty mouth is becoming an add up to your cute points, and how I would catch myself staring at you longer than I should.

I know my mind doesn’t playing tricks on me, because I know what this is means...

‘Eririn loves Sayumin,’ I whisper without a sound.


Oh I'm so afraid to make that first move
Just a touch and we could cross the line
Everytime she's near, I wanna never let her go
Confess to her what my heart knows
Hold her close



Tracing the outline of her lips with my index finger gingerly, I wonder if it’s alright if I kiss them? We’ve kissed before, but what I want is more than just a friendly kiss.

Am I ready to cross the line with you? To risk our friendship?


Why don't you kiss her?
Why don't you tell her?
Why don't you let her see the feelings that you hide?
'Cause she'll never know if you never show the way you feel inside



‘Why don’t you?’ an erien voice in my head speaks.


What would you say?
I wonder, would she just turn away?
Or would she promise me that she's here to stay?
It hurts me to wait
I keep asking myself



What would you think of me if I confess, Sayu? Would you get disgusted? Nah, I doubt you would.

‘I’m sorry Sayumin doesn’t feel the same way Eririn does, but Eririn will still be Sayumin’s best friend forever no matter what!’ rather, something like that is probably what you would say.

Would you ignore me? Thinking that I’m being an ahou again.

Or would I ever hear ‘Hontou ni daisuki Eririn~!’ a come back of my own confession resonated?

Do you know it hurts to stand in this position? To be your best friend but nothing at the same time.

What should I do?

That persistent voice keeps coming back. ‘Kiss her.’


Why don't you kiss her? (Tell her you love her)
Why don't u tell her ? (Tell her you need her)
Why don't you let her see the feelings that you hide?
'Cause she'll never know if you never show the way you feel inside



I kiss my two fingers then gently put them on your lips, and hope my feelings will reach you.


Why don't you kiss her? (Why don't you kiss her?)


You’re smiling.

What are you dreaming of? It must be a good one.

“Eririn, daisuki...” she mumbles.

It’s my turn to smile. ‘Watashi mo.’

Switching the TV and DVD player off, I lean my head to hers. Let us meet in our dreams. If we do, I’ll tell you about my feelings.

I will tell you everything.


The End


My inner TanaKamei/TanaShige grilled me for this. I felt like a failure at being a TanaKame-ist  :fainted:
(I blame you oh inspiration!! LOL).
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 03, 2010, 12:28:40 PM
It's cute. :lol: I will admit to being a bit of a KameShige fan myself, though I doubt I would ever write them, so it's nice to see this from you.

Now, go write a Tanashige... 8)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 03, 2010, 01:19:20 PM
^ Ah, if it isn't the adorable baby tree   :luvluv2:

........wait, wrong thread  XD


Well, I never thought I would be able to write them :nervous

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Now, go write a Tanashige... 8)
Oh, you like TanaShige?
I promise nothing but I'll see if I can get any inspiration.
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: lil_hamz on February 03, 2010, 02:37:19 PM
EHHHH?!?! I thought I posted a comment for 'Her Smile'. Gomene!

I really like TanaShige cuz these 2 have a whole different dynamics as compared to say, KameMame. For Reina, I like her most with e bunny. And since I also adore SYO, this fic is a double score ^^

Ahhh, KameShige! There definitely isn't enough of them around. I hope you write more. Sukoshi will be really please too :) usually we see Sayu being the one in love with Kame, it's nice to read from Eri's POV this time.
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: writerjunkie on February 03, 2010, 05:08:01 PM
O.O

 :w00t:

*explodes/dies of happiness*

>.>

<.<

*clears throat*

Ah, you wrote them?! ^_^ I'm so glad! And knowing that you wrote this for me  :oops: *blushes* Thank you! No one has written a fic for me so I'm even happier about this! I know you must have went through torture writing this pairing and probably had some eye twitching in disgust for this pairing so thank you for enduring that while writing this fic I'm grateful.

KameShige is so cute in this one-shot.  :wub: Little Eririn had a crush on Sayu and loves her that's even cuter. I'm glad for once that it's Eri instead of Sayu who has the crush like Hammy said. The ending was really cute though I still think Eri should have kissed her. XD It's just the fan in me is all. So don't worry about that. There aren't many fics of KameShige so this fic makes me happy even if there isn't a kiss because it's cute and I love cute over all.  I wish there were more KameShige fics though. Hmmm...I might fix that.

Again thank you! ^_^ Try not to put yourself through the torture again though. lol
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: Hart on February 04, 2010, 04:54:17 AM
Ahhh....that's some good TanaKameShige crack.  :D
These are really good oneshots. Keep up the good work.  :twothumbs
Can't wait till my next fix.  :P
I wouldn't mind for some 3-way action.  :twisted:
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: Sukoshi on February 04, 2010, 12:36:12 PM
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the ending~  :mon inluv:

*does a little kameshige dance*

:pen_whirl:
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 04, 2010, 01:44:30 PM
@ lil_hamz
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EHHHH?!?! I thought I posted a comment for 'Her Smile'. Gomene!
No worries :)

TanaShige is indeed interesting, there’s just something about them that attracts me besides how adorable they’re in Allo-Hello!

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And since I also adore SYO, this fic is a double score ^^
Thank you very much! :grin:
 
:nervous I don’t know if I’ll ever write a KameShige again. As for why Eri’s the one who fall for Sayu, I think I just wanted to show a part of her that doesn’t scream ahou, that there’s more to the ahou --> I don’t even know what I’m talking about LOL


@ Issa
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I know you must have went through torture writing this pairing and probably had some eye twitching in disgust for this pairing so thank you for enduring that while writing this fic I'm grateful.

Lol it didn’t go to such extent. Like I said, I don’t hate KameShige and I guess me as a reader and a writer can be somewhat different. I think I’ve told you that KameShige is quite a contradictory for me –> I see them as only best friends, but I do know best friends could fall in love with each other. I dunno what to think about them.

I’m happy you think it’s cute and I’m just glad I didn’t write it when I’m in my emo mode, otherwise it would’ve been total angst under different song. And that would simply be cruel if I wrote an angst for your fav pair (it would make me feel like I’m hating them).

The last scene where Sayu smiled and mumbled were created to make sure there are hints for KameShige to happen, so fans of them like you could imagine their own version of happy ending for them. Were those enough hints I wonder?

Actually I was about to make Eri kiss Sayu at first but then I thought she’s not Sayu who probably wouldn’t hesitate if she was in Eri’s situation. Plus since the song is in the unsure phase (blame the song! lol), I wanted to put a kiss there but at the same time not a kiss, just enough that it’s a step ahead from the song in that phase. Thus, I made Eri did that.
(Maybe you should write a continuation where they kiss for real? XD)

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Again thank you! ^_^ Try not to put yourself through the torture again though. lol
:D you’re so very welcome, though to be honest this fic is somehow my thanks for your TTCL.
I’m sorry for the shortness! That’s all I could come up with :sweatdrop:


@ Hart
Thank you for reading and especially commenting!


@ Sukoshi
I'm glad you love the ending  :)


Oh Camel, that’s a long reply! Lol
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: amEthystx on February 04, 2010, 02:23:27 PM
I read this at work with my tiny screen on my Iphone.. and i hate to compose with it.. LOL~

So here comes my late comment! :(

This whole story seriously make me remember my younger days...  Sad story it is...  :mon POd:

......Sighs......

But anyway.. how sweet...  :wub:

A few of my fav phrases~

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I part her bangs and hold her smooth black hair in my hand, smelling it. The scent, I love it, exactly like you.

Sweet.
  :wub: :wub:

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Do you know it hurts to stand in this position? To be your best friend but nothing at the same time.
- Have you? :(

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I kiss my two fingers then gently put them on your lips, and hope my feelings will reach you.
- How romantic!


Kite-y C! I demand a story from you! LOL! <- being a brat XD


Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 04, 2010, 03:03:11 PM
^ oh trust me, composing a comment with phone is pain. Yours at least better than mine, mine couldn't even show the page properly (too old).

No, it's not late at all  :)

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This whole story seriously make me remember my younger days...  Sad story it is...  :mon POd:
Fall in love with a best friend? (sorry, you didn't have to answer that)

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Do you know it hurts to stand in this position? To be your best friend but nothing at the same time.
- Have you? :(
Actually, yes I have   :on cloudeye:

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- How romantic!
Thankies! That comment made me happy  :D

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Kite-y C! I demand a story from you! LOL! <- being a brat
:lol: we'll see, we'll se...
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: amEthystx on February 04, 2010, 03:27:09 PM
^

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^ oh trust me, composing a comment with phone is pain. Yours at least better than mine, mine couldn't even show the page properly (too old).
LOL~ sorry.. i have to laugh at this.. you just always create this cute babbling image in my mind...  especially when you're complaining about K mistreating you~! LOL

Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 04, 2010, 03:50:51 PM
^  :lol:

I'm not like that IRL, I'm rather quiet with people that I'm not really close with and my friends just see me as this 'crazy' person.
That's because K ignored my protests in her thread.
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: writerjunkie on February 04, 2010, 04:50:54 PM
^ lol you like KameShige yet you don't? I get that with certain pairings too. lol

Oh, and your fic yesterday was like perfect timing because today is now my birthday. So that fic is like a little gift for me. ^_^ I'm even happier about it.

It's fine if KameShige never kiss in this one-shot I'm not complaining and I like this fic anyway. Oh, but me continuing this huh? I'll have to see if I can think of something to do that.

By the way, writing a sad fic is fine with me because I love angst. lol I'll read just about any sad fic because those are one of my favorites. lol
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: kRisZ on February 05, 2010, 08:04:45 AM
I love KameShige after TakaGaki  :luvluv2:

Cute  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 05, 2010, 02:35:07 PM
@ Issa

I'll just leave it at 'I don't like them but I don't hate them'  XD

If I knew I'd post it right at your b'day instead!
Anyway happy b'day Issa!!  :)

You don't have to actually do the continuation, just imagine it in your mind or do it in free writing --> what I'm saying is "enjoy KameShige"  ;)

Oh you like angst, but I'd rather not write it for now  as long as I could.


@ K
Thanks K, glad you like KameShige  :)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: amEthystx on February 05, 2010, 06:36:54 PM
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I'm not like that IRL, I'm rather quiet with people that I'm not really close with and my friends just see me as this 'crazy' person.
That's because K ignored my protests in her thread.
  Crazy person?! why so?? :(  Haha.. I told you K's horns is unstoppable once it starts to grow... how horrible terrible and vegetable.. XD
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 06, 2010, 11:37:55 AM
^ It's a good kind of crazy (I think LOL). It's because I can talk/do random things sometimes and mostly joking around so people just see me as this crazy/weird person  XD

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how horrible terrible and vegetable..
:lol:
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: kRisZ on April 05, 2010, 02:55:07 PM
So... ummm... Hi!  :)  I'm trying to make an update for this special day and for Hart as well atm but my head is full of numbers (anyone wants a lotto number  :P  XD lol ) and it's aching badly  :(   so just in case I won't be able to make it before the clock ticks at 12:00... you know what I mean  :)

K  :heart: C


EDIT: The first post was removed because I was seeing things  XD I thought there was an update lol... headache and not my computer, I'm at my folks atm... so yeah there  :D
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 05, 2010, 08:28:23 PM
^ I almost miss your comment here.

 :(  I hope the headache has gone by now and yes I know what you mean but you managed to make an update  ;)

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K  :heart: C
:)  :D  :grin:

C :heart: K too!
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: amEthystx on April 06, 2010, 06:48:29 PM
^ "Why don't you kiss her?"

XD *RUNS AWAY*
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: kRisZ on April 06, 2010, 08:52:40 PM
^ "Why don't you kiss her?"

XD *RUNS AWAY*

 :shocked   :fainted:  :imdead:


On second thought... come here C, let's show them how to kiss (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/car4.gif) 
 :twisted:


When's your birthday Bishop NI.?. October right.?. Here, my first installment for you (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/zzzzx.gif)
 :twisted:  :twisted:


And yes, for the first person who teased me, here (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/yoyocici.gif)
 :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:



 :P  :P  :P   Oh dear  XD  XD  XD Result of working till wee hours  :D yes I'm still working atm.  Arg   :fainted:
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 06, 2010, 11:30:56 PM
@ Bishop

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^ "Why don't you kiss her?"

XD *RUNS AWAY*
Coz I think...K's taken?  XD

@ K

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On second thought... come here C, let's show them how to kiss (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/car4.gif)
:on speedy:  Nooo! Not the kiss thingy again!

(Bishop look what you've done! LOL)

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And yes, for the first person who teased me, here (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/yoyocici.gif)
 :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:
Eh, who's that first person?
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: amEthystx on April 07, 2010, 06:30:45 AM
Is it me or i'm seeing some horns poking out from my computer screen?

@ K: "K, Please trim your horns.. thanks you!"

haha~

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When's your birthday Bishop NI.?. October right.?. Here, my first installment for you
<- now, i'm positive that u had been stalking me.. haha.. Did i mention it anywhere that i have forgotten about?!

@ C:
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Coz I think...K's taken?
by?? XD
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 07, 2010, 03:20:00 PM
^ The horn is not the source of her ebilness, it's within her!  XD

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by??  XD
by the aliens? LOL
I dunno...by someone irl?


@ K
Are you taken? (don't answer if you don't wanna)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: kRisZ on April 07, 2010, 04:06:12 PM
C
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Coz I think...K's taken?  XD
Hmmm

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:on speedy:  Nooo! Not the kiss thingy again!
:twisted:  XD

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Eh, who's that first person?
Not telling  :P  She might kill me  XD  Just take a guess :P



Bishop NI
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"K, Please trim your horns.. thanks you!"

haha~
Can I borrow a saw.?.  XD

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now, i'm positive that u had been stalking me.. haha.. Did i mention it anywhere that i have forgotten about?!
Yes, I think you were talking with rnd-sama.?. at her thread.?.  not quite sure though

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Coz I think...K's taken?
by?? XD
Hmmm


C
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^ The horn is not the source of her ebilness, it's within her!  XD
To the bones lol

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by the aliens? LOL
I dunno...by someone irl?
Hmmm

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Are you taken? (don't answer if you don't wanna)
Hmmm  :P



EDIT:

I need to go ZzzzzZzz  :) Goodnight  :)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 07, 2010, 04:19:59 PM
^
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:on speedy:  Nooo! Not the kiss thingy again!
:twisted:  XD
Ebil woman  :P

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Not telling  :P  She might kill me  XD  Just take a guess :P
:mon dunno: AA?

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^ The horn is not the source of her ebilness, it's within her!  XD
To the bones lol
See, Bishop?

How should I take all that "Hmmm" responses? --> Funny, I get the feeling that you will reply with "Hmmm" again LOL

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I need to go ZzzzzZzz  :) Goodnight  :)
Sleep well K  :)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: kRisZ on April 19, 2010, 04:23:05 PM
(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m183.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)


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Ebil woman  :P
(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m155.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

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:mon dunno: AA?
:mon dunno:


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How should I take all that "Hmmm" responses? --> Funny, I get the feeling that you will reply with "Hmmm" again LOL
Okay... "Hmmm"  :P :D



Ummm... can’t stay up too late, my work load’s been doubled since last Friday and my body and soul are still adjusting... so, talk to you when fate lets us lol

Take care C  :)  :heart:  :)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: Swtme03 on April 19, 2010, 09:51:46 PM
Awww~  :mon inluv:
These stories got me all giddy  :mon dance:
Makes me want to run around a hug everyone  :tama-apeshit:
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: badsaints on April 21, 2010, 06:11:38 AM
Hmm....I'm like 2 months late? :lol:

I never liked KameShige since it goes against my TanaKame/TanaShige love but heck, this is so darn cute! :wub: It's nice to see Eri having a crush on Sayu for once since we keep hearing Sayu gushing about Eri XD

Hoping to see more stories from you :D

Edit: Oh new page gets!
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 21, 2010, 04:52:53 PM
@ K

Oh you and your answers!  :lol:

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Ummm... can’t stay up too late, my work load’s been doubled since last Friday and my body and soul are still adjusting... so, talk to you when fate lets us lol
That sucks  :(
But yes, talk to you when fate allows us to  ;)

You should be the one taking care, K!

 :heart:


@ Swtme03

Yay!  :D  Thank you for taking the time to comment.


@ badsaints (what should I call you?)

Nah, you're not late  ;)

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I never liked KameShige since it goes against my TanaKame/TanaShige love but heck, this is so darn cute! :wub: It's nice to see Eri having a crush on Sayu for once since we keep hearing Sayu gushing about Eri XD
Since I also prefer TanaKame/TanaShige, I really appreciate your comment!  :kneelbow:

Will do more stories if my brain could come up with more ideas  :)
Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: amEthystx on April 21, 2010, 06:53:59 PM
XD

JUST thought of flying by~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: kRisZ on April 22, 2010, 03:17:11 PM
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C
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Oh you and your answers!  :lol:
I promise to try to be sensible next time  :D

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That sucks  :(
:(  :yep:  :(

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But yes, talk to you when fate allows us to  ;)
:)

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You should be the one taking care, K!

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Work is tiresome but I'm healthy, I wonder who's not  :mon dunno:  :P


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Title: Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 24, 2010, 11:57:40 AM
Bishop!
Uh...feel free to fly by?  :lol:


K
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I promise to try to be sensible next time  :D
I wonder what's with the word in bold?  XD

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Work is tiresome but I'm healthy, I wonder who's not  :mon dunno:  :P
Good!  :)
I wonder too  :mon dunno: 
 XD
Title: Forgiven [TanaShige] 24/04/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 24, 2010, 12:12:56 PM
This sequel is unplanned, but the image of Reina kissing Sayu under a tree won’t stop bugging me  XD
Originally, I wrote the “hunt down” part as the main focus but couldn’t finish it, so I discarded that one. Plus, I like this one better.

TanaShige shippers, I hope you enjoy this short one!  ;)


- Forgiven -


- Reina POV -

“Get back here!” she said, chasing me after I flicked what’s little left of my cheesecake on the spoon at her direction playfully.

It landed on her nose by the way.

I ran around the house for a while with her tailing hotly behind me and ended up jumping onto my bed to avoid the hands that were about to catch me.

“Gotcha now!” she followed jumping on my flattened back.

“You’re heavy!” I said out of breath.

She slapped my back, rolling off of me to turn her body the other way, and puffed her cheek. “Am not!”

“Yes you are.” I turned over to her.

“Not!” She crossed her arms, annoyed.

I chuckled inside. This girlfriend of mine was just too cute. “No, of course you’re not. I’m just teasing you.” I cupped her face and turned her head to face me. “Forgive me?” then I leaned forward and kissed her.

“Wh-why do you always have to tease me?” she stammered, no longer annoyed but embarrassed.

I pinched her cheeks. “Because you’re so adorable?”

She blushed bright red. “Stop teasing me, Rei-chan.”

“I’m not. You really are.” I said again in a firm tone.

“Rei-chan...” She drawled.

“Alright, alright.” I complied and circled my arms around her shoulders to pull her closer to me, and she in turn draped an arm on my waist.

A comfortable silence lasted for a while until I broke it again with my voice.

“Hey...do you remember our first kiss?”

“How could I forget? You stole my first kiss!”

- Shige POV -

So here I was cornered by the girl that I had been avoiding for days, which was ironic since I used to find myself waiting to catch a sight of her at the railing.

“Care to tell me why you didn’t even call?”

“Sorry...I...” what am I supposed to say? That my finger froze whenever I’m about to push the call button? That I composed texts only to have them erased in the end? That I suddenly became too shy?

She waggled her finger in disagreement. “Reina don’t accept apology that easy.”

I stood there not knowing what to do after she said that.

“Say, you like Reina, don’t you?” she smiled a toothy smile.

‘You’re being overconfident’ was what I wanted to say. But well…she’s right about it, ugh. Curse her smile that made her ten times cuter than she already was!

“I...” she interrupted me once more, this time her finger went to my lips, making it tingled.

With eyes sparkling a predatory gleam, she spoke, “Reina will take nothing but a kiss as an apology.”

You would think that her being shorter than me would bring a problem. But no, she quickly pinned me against the tree behind my back then pulled my head down to meet her lips. Mind you, without waiting for my answer!

‘....mmmm what am I complaining again?’

“How’s that?” she asked after a long breathtaking kiss that only left me yearned for more.

I dropped my head on her shoulder to hide my crimson face. My fingers reached out to hook them with hers, letting her know that my answer was positive even when no words came out of my mouth.

“That good, huh?” she chuckled jokingly into my ear. “Anyway, you’re forgiven.”


- Reina POV -

“Hey, it’s not my fault you were actually too shy to do anything with my phone number!” I laughed. “But I really was looking forward to your call or at least a text...” I wouldn’t realize that I was squeezing her lightly while recalling the memories if she didn’t squeezed me back.

“Sorry,” she said guiltily.

I leaned back a bit to look at her. “Like I said, ’Reina will take nothing but a kiss as an apology.’” I kissed her lips for the second time today. “And you’re forgiven.”

She didn’t say a word but I got a smile.

“You know,” I brought my index finger to my chin, doing a thinking pose. “I should have just asked your number instead. Would’ve been faster that way.”

“Yeah.” She agreed softly.

“But I’m just glad that I decided to track you down through your friends.” I patted her back.

“Speaking of my friends, what did you do to them anyway? It seemed that you scared them for life.”

“Nothing. I just used my detective Reina interrogation skill.”
 
She giggled. “You mean your yankii in-terror-gation skill.”

“Awww, so you can be funny too.” I started to tease her again.

She slapped my arm before gasping loudly as if realizing something. “Wait, if you only take a kiss as an apology...” she paused and looked at me intently, “then how many people have you kissed?”

I didn’t say anything and only grinned before running away once again.

“Rei-chan, come back here!” she shouted.

My silly girl...I’ve kissed no one besides you. After all, that was a made up rule meant for you and only you.


- End -


This one is rushed so I’ll edit it again later if I spotted something I should change and I fail at choosing story titles LOL
I forgot to mention, this is Her Smile sequel.
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: amEthystx on April 24, 2010, 03:28:56 PM
Sweeeeeet.....! XD but I'll be back to write more on e comment..! On duty now.. :(

ps. Still demands a long story from you.. XD
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: rndmnwierd on April 24, 2010, 05:39:50 PM
*melts* That is so cute. I really like Tanashige. :wub: :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: kRisZ on April 24, 2010, 06:18:53 PM
I was half way reading this story when something came up   :mon cute:  I left without a word  :nervous  gomen  :kneelbow: and now you're offline  :depressed:

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This sequel is unplanned, but the image of Reina kissing Sayu under a tree won’t stop bugging me  XD
:shocked  :w00t:  :drool:  XD

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It landed on her nose by the way.
Aint that cute  :inlove:

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“Reina will take nothing but a kiss as an apology.”
Jezzzzzzzzzz  XD

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“Say, you like Reina, don’t you?” she smiled a toothy smile.
Whoa

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You would think that her being shorter than me would bring a problem. But no, she quickly pinned me against the tree behind my back then pulled my head down to meet her lips. Mind you, without waiting for my answer!
:cow:

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“That good, huh?” she chuckled jokingly into my ear. “Anyway, you’re forgiven.”
lol

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She giggled. “You mean your yankii in-terror-gation skill.”
:twothumbs

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“then how many people have you kissed?”
Now Reina's in trouble  XD

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My silly girl…I’ve kissed no one besides you. After all, that was a made up rule meant for you and only you.
I bet she won't disclose this one  :D

Very nice C  :twothumbs

Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 24, 2010, 07:48:18 PM
@Bishop
Fighto!

ps. :lol: it's hard to enough write one-shot, I don't think I could handle a long one.


@ rndm
Arigato!
Me too likes Tanashige much  :D


@ K
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I was half way reading this story when something came up   :mon cute:  I left without a word  :nervous  gomen  :kneelbow: and now you're offline  :depressed:
I'm on now?

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:shocked  :w00t:  :drool:  XD
:lol: it's not like that.

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Aint that cute  :inlove:
:yep: TanaShige are cute  :D

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Jezzzzzzzzzz  XD
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Whoa
Reina needs to be aggressive towards shy Sayu?  XD

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You would think that her being shorter than me would bring a problem. But no, she quickly pinned me against the tree behind my back then pulled my head down to meet her lips. Mind you, without waiting for my answer!
:cow:
That part is the image that's bugging me.

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I bet she won't disclose this one  :D
Haha of course she wouldn't.

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Very nice C  :twothumbs
Thanks K  :heart:
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: lil_hamz on April 24, 2010, 08:06:06 PM
More TanaShige! YATTA!!

See, that's why I love these two together. They are just too hawt and cute together. Wanna know what's the definition of a combination of those terms? Just watch the cat and bunny :D

I especially like the bit where Reina pinned Sayu and claimed her lips. True blue yankii style, with or without permission XD
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: writerjunkie on April 24, 2010, 09:39:09 PM
Ah this sequel is so cute! ^____^ It makes me like TanaShige even more. I think if you keep writing TanaShige this cute I might be able to write a TanaShige fic too! I really do like this pairing so I'm always trying to find ways to write them. Oh, another thing! I like your avatar Chole! XD It's so funny and cute. Sayu's face! It's like she's saying: Yep, that's right. 
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 24, 2010, 10:32:46 PM
@ lil_hamz
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More TanaShige! YATTA!!
:cow:

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See, that's why I love these two together. They are just too hawt and cute together.
:yep:

That bit was why I wrote this fic.


@ Issa
That's the hidden purpose of these fics, to make people to ship like TanaShige  XD
(And TanaKamei is supposed to be the top in my list  :lol:)

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I think if you keep writing TanaShige this cute I might be able to write a TanaShige fic too!
Meaning I have to write another TanaShige so you'll be able to write one? LOL


Yeah, that pic (credit goes to daigong at the H!P Girlbonding Thread btw) is so cute that I couldn't help myself  :P
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: badsaints on April 25, 2010, 04:33:39 PM
TanaShige! *grins*

So they are official now huh? No thanks to the bunny's shyness, that is :lol: But I can relate to Sayu in that sense. How many times have we find it soooo hard to press that one button :P

I like Reina's "kiss-and-forgive" rule XD Will keep that in mind :lol:

I guess what makes me like TanaShige is that they are two very different individuals with nothing much in common (in terms of personality). But put them together and you get a very interesting pairing. As Hammy has aptly said "They are just too hawt and cute together" :wub:
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: amEthystx on April 27, 2010, 02:42:57 PM
BOO!

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but the image of Reina kissing Sayu under a tree won’t stop bugging me
- now the image of Eri kissing Risa under a tree won't stop bugging me.. :(

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what am I supposed to say? That my finger froze whenever I’m about to push the call button? That I composed texts only to have them erased in the end? That I suddenly became too shy?
Yup~ it happens often... i use to send the text message and put my phone on silent mode... so that i will forget until much later before i check it XD

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“You mean your yankii in-terror-gation skill.”
 
 :lol: now i know how this word came by...

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My silly girl…I’ve kissed no one besides you. After all, that was a made up rule meant for you and only you.
I'm melting...................  :wub:

LOL~

 :heart: C

Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaShige sequel~Forgiven] 24/04/10
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 14, 2011, 10:24:24 AM
My reply is like a year late!  :roll: :lol: :kneelbow:

@ badsaints
So they are official now huh? No thanks to the bunny's shyness, that is :lol: But I can relate to Sayu in that sense. How many times have we find it soooo hard to press that one button :P
I get that too  :yep:

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I like Reina's "kiss-and-forgive" rule XD Will keep that in mind :lol:
:grin:


@ Bishop
- now the image of Eri kissing Risa under a tree won't stop bugging me.. :(
Really? XD

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what am I supposed to say? That my finger froze whenever I’m about to push the call button? That I composed texts only to have them erased in the end? That I suddenly became too shy?
Yup~ it happens often... i use to send the text message and put my phone on silent mode... so that i will forget until much later before i check it XD
I know right?

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:heart: C
Oh boy, how should I respond to this? Thank you, but you sure this is okay with your girl?  :P
Title: Duty Love [TanaKame] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 14, 2011, 10:39:49 AM
Because: I felt TanaKamei deprived, I had written two TanaShige and only one TanaKamei which made me question “Just what kind of a TanaKame-ist am I?”  XD, I love softie yankii Reina and Eri with glasses is  :heart:, but above all I just wanted a not-so-serious-but-happy TanaKamei fic.

Edit: Thanks to Mirei-chan for checking this fic and pointed some grammar errors.


Duty Love


Two girls collided as they made a turn around the corner at the same time. One girl landed on her bottom, her glasses thrown across the floor during the process. Out of luck, the other girl stepped on it whilst trying to regain her balance—producing a loud cracking sound.

Kamei Eri could only watch helplessly at her glasses which were currently below someone else's shoe.

“Oh crap! Are you okay?” The other girl hurriedly came to her side, favoring her concern for Eri instead of checking what she had broken.

Eri body tensed. She knew who owned that voice. The girl she’s been secretly keeping her eye on as of late: Tanaka Reina.

Her crush.

At the same time, Reina recognized the girl she had just knocked over. It’s the former vice president who did the welcome speech last year, the one taking over the sick president’s duty. In fact, her own vote among others had won the girl the position as the current president.

She extended her hand to the president and Eri yelped in pain when Reina pulled her up. Acting out of reflex, Reina caught her by the waist in time before she could fall again from the unsuccessful pull.

“I think I twisted my ankle...” Eri winced and grasped Reina's arms tighter because of the pain without realizing it.

“I’m sorry. I was in a hurry.” Reina used her strength to help the girl back on her feet properly, but didn’t let go of her hands that wrapped around Eri, just in case.

Noticing her current situation, Eri blushed from the contact. “It’s okay. I didn’t really see where I am going either.”

When Reina was sure Eri could stand on her own, she let go and went to pick up the crushed glasses. She shook her head disapprovingly at Eri's direction. “Will you be okay without it?”

“It’s going to be a bit blurry, but I’ll manage for today. I have a spare at home.” Eri gave a small smile.

Reina felt bad for causing the girl the state she was in. “Let’s get you to the school clinic.”

“I can go by myself,” declined Eri, not wanting to burden Reina.

“With so much pain?” Reina slung the girl’s arm over her shoulder before the girl could object. One hand went to the girl’s waist for support.

“You really don’t have to do this, Tanaka-san.” Eri said walking slowly with the other girl’s help.

Reina stopped in her track. “You know me?”

“Of course, how could I forget the only person who clapped over my welcome speech last year?”

“And how could I not? That’s the most awesome speech I’ve ever heard in my life!” Reina exclaimed.

~~~

With one clear of a throat and a “Welcome and enjoy the school life.” Eri finished her speech in mere seconds, gaining mostly shocked reactions from people who were assembled at the school front yard. Some have their mouth agape, some shaking their heads, and some sighed as if they’re expecting it beforehand.

All but one girl who chuckled and clapped loudly in delight.


~~~

The sensei finished applying bandage on Eri's ankle. She told her it was a mild sprain and it might take a few days before it completely healed, so long as she didn’t strain it.

“Don’t go anywhere after school, I’ll come pick you up and take you back to your house,” Reina said when they reached the front of Eri's class.

“But—”

Reina held her gaze on Eri. “It would make me feel better if I do.” It really would.

Her yankii appearance might not help on convincing people that she’s actually a caring person deep down inside. But she was, and that’s why her bunny friend called her a softie yankii. Therefore, she wanted to at least take some responsibility for what she had done.

Feeling defeated under Reina's determined gaze with each seconds passed, Eri nodded.

~~~

“Don’t laugh!” Reina said embarrassed while holding a bright pink bicycle beside her.

Eri couldn’t suppress her giggle at the somewhat amusing sight in front of her. “I’m sorry, but is it yours?” Though it doesn’t suit her image, she looks kind of cute.

“No, I’m borrowing it from a friend.” And I have to bribe that evil bunny too, darn.

“Why did you borrow it?”

“I left mine at home today. And so you won’t have to walk back home, this way you won’t hurt your ankle more,” Reina reasoned, already in position to take off.

Eri’s giggle died on her throat once she absorbed the information. She’s doing it for me? She’s not sure what she should feel at that moment. Happy? Touched? Happy and touched?

Not wanting to be seen with the bright pink bicycle any longer, Reina pointed to the back seat with her thumb and urged, “Can we just go now?”

Nodding obediently, Eri took her position on the back. She then realized that she just got a free pass to wrap her arms around Reina’s waist when the girl commanded her to do so. Maybe the misfortunes that had happened today were worth it after all.

She asked for Reina’s permission to rest her head on her back with the excuse of wanting to rest her tired eyes. Best part of it? It wasn’t even a lie; her eyes needed the rest from all the squinting she had to do.

“Tell me the address of your house first then go ahead and rest.”

The yankii girl didn’t know but she had just successfully made Eri like her even more. Finished with giving directions, she leaned her head on Reina's back and let out a blissful sigh.

She wished she would never have to let go of the warmth.

~~~

Eri reached out for Reina’s arm before the latter could leave. The younger girl initially had a shock upon entering her room, but recovered after a minute and had helped her searched through the pile of mess (much to her embarrassment) in her room for the spare glasses.

Turning around in confusion, Reina asked, “Yes?”

“Thank you.” Eri said earnestly and smiled.

Reina was taken aback. That’s a lovely smile. The corner of her lips slightly tugged upward and she spoke in a soft voice: “Ah, almost forgot. Starting tomorrow I’m gonna pick you up for school and send you back here until your ankle is healed.”

Eri waved quickly, disagreeing. “No need. You’ve done enough, Tanaka-san.” She scolded herself for trying to reject such opportunity. But it felt wrong if she didn’t, it wasn’t the girl’s entire fault after all.

Reina shook her head. “I’ll take a full responsibility.”

“I’m at fault too you know,” Eri tried to counter.

“I insist,” Reina said in a final tone.

The president sighed in defeat for the girl’s stubbornness. “...if you say so,” she muttered.

“I said so.” Reina gave one last look at Eri as she twisted the doorknob. “See you tomorrow, president.”

~~~

Just when Reina was about to close her eyes, her phone lit up the dark room and beeped.

Thanks for today, Tanaka-san!
:)
-Kamei Eri-


On the second day, she had left her number for the president in case the girl needed something.

You, ahou president, if you had
the time to text me then go to
sleep already. It’s late.
-Tanaka Reina-


Eri was infamous as the ‘ahou president’ throughout the school. Sometimes it made people who didn’t really know her questioned her ability as the president—while in truth she did take her job seriously. Thus a part of her kind of disliked the name, and yet, she couldn’t help but to like it coming from the younger girl.

Eri giggled. “I got it bad.”

Okay. Call me Eri, Tanaka-san.
Good night.
-Eri the ahou president-


Not long after the text was delivered. Her phone vibrated, alerting her of a new text; one that brought a huge smile to her face.

Then call me Reina. Night.
-Reina-


That and a wonderful dream which followed in her sleep.

~~~

Reina watched attentively as the busy president scanned through documents over documents and once in a while signing it.

And people said you’re an ahou president when you’ve been working so hard here. They must’ve been blind.

“Do I have something on my face?” Eri said without looking up from the document she’s holding. She didn’t dare to. She felt Reina's eyes on her for some time already. Her heart was picking up its pace, she was sure if she looked up at Reina then she would blush.

“No. It’s just...you looked different when you’re serious.”

Eri shifted the document on her left hand to her right and adjusted her glasses. “Is that a bad thing?”

“Nope,” Reina said fondly, “definitely not.” A smile formed on her face. You looked cute.

A comfortable silence lasted the whole time they waited for Eri to finish her task.

~~~

“Eririiin! Your girlfriend is here to get you!” Risa, Eri’s classmate and best friend, shouted in a sing-song voice.

Eri scrambled her things into her bag in one swift motion, face flushed. Risa, you are so dead!

She glared at her best friend—who returned it with a wink of her own—while trying to walk as fast as she could to the class door albeit limping slightly. Her action caused Reina to hurriedly came to her side and stilled her movement halfway through by putting a hand on her shoulder.

“You shouldn’t do that. Your ankle is not fully healed yet,” the girl reminded.

“Right. Sorry about that.” Eri apologized and changed her steps into a careful one. She looked back to glare once more at her now grinning best friend.

“Just don’t do it again, kay?”

“Okay. Also, I—I apologize for what my friend said...” Eri said timidly.

“No biggie. Let’s stop by the clinic first to check your ankle.” Reina was more concerned about the ankle than the comment.

Eri couldn’t believe her ears and glanced at Reina who walked alongside her, matching her slow pace. No big deal, Reina?

~~~

The older woman put away the ice pack from Eri’s ankle. “I thought I told you not to strain it?” She sighed while reapplying a fresh elastic bandage on. “Good thing there’s no real harm done. But to be safe, please take a few more days to rest it.”

“I’m sorry, sensei...” Eri looked down not because the sensei scolded her, but because she was avoiding eye contact with Reina. She knew she would burden the girl longer than supposed. She wasn’t quite the good patient, but that’s only because she sometimes forgot that she wasn’t supposed to use her injured leg like usual. Especially at home where there’s no Reina to watch over her.

~~~

Good night and sorry for
bothering you again today.
Thank you.


That was the text Reina received from the president. She didn’t have to text back, she knew it. Yet why did she find herself twisting around her bed relentlessly? Like sleep wouldn’t come before she sent a word to the girl?

“Aaargh! Okay, I get it! I’ll text her back!” Reina cried out, clearly frustrated.

It’s okay. You don’t have
to thank me every day,
it’s my duty. Night.


“There! Now let me sleep!” She pulled her blanket over her head and sleep did come easily after that.

~~~

“How’s your girlfriend?” Sayumi asked.

Reina looked lost. “Huh? Which one?”

Sayumi gasped in a dramatic manner. "Reina, I didn’t know you had many!” She then nudged and smirked at her friend playfully. “You playgirl, you.”

When her friend threw her an annoyed look and growled in response, she straightened herself. “Ahem. You know, the one you borrowed my bike for? The one you’re spending your time with lately? The one you told me her serious face was cute? The ahou president?”

“She’s not an ahou president, she’s a good president. And she’s recovering slowly.”

Sayumi arched her eyebrow. “Oh~ defending her now? Interesting. Do you even realize that you’re not denying what I said?”

“Deny what?”

“That she’s your girlfriend?”

“...she’s not.” Reina frowned, unaware it was because the words that had left her mouth.

“You’re not bothered if people misunderstand that, are you?” Sayumi stated not really questioning.

Eririiin! Your girlfriend is here to get you.

The words from Eri’s friend rang inside Reina’s head and she knew the thought of it didn’t bother her at all. “No. Why would I? She’s a great person.”

At her friend’s reply, Sayumi pressed on to confirm her suspicion. “Do you know what that means?”

Reina shrugged. “No?”

Sayumi stared at her friend for a few seconds then laughed. “Oh Reina...sometimes you can be so slow.”

“Hey! What do you mean by that?!”

“You like her you idiot!”

“I’m no—wait, really?”

“Duh!” Sayumi shook Reina by the shoulder. “Wake up, Reina! Wake up!”

“Stop shaking me!”

“No, not until it gets into your head!”

~~~

Reina held her head with her two hands, feeling a bit dizzy from all the shaking Sayumi did. She made a mental note to kill the bunny later.

“Are you all right?” Eri asked worriedly when the girl didn’t seem to notice her presence as opposite of the usual.

The voice made Reina jump. “What? Oh! Yeah, yeah, I’m fine. Let’s go.”

They made their way to where Reina had parked her bike this morning and immediately took their designated positions on the purple bike.

Once the now familiar hands encircled her waist, Reina looked down on it. It didn’t seem to register in her mind before how she didn’t mind it being there.

How she liked it there.

“Are you sure you are fine, Reina?” Eri asked again when Reina didn’t immediately take off after the both of them were settled.

“Yes, no worries,” she reassured after shaking her head to clear her thoughts and cycled away.

Then another realization came to her; the warm weight that’s leaning on her back. How could she be so ignorant of the routines that were slowly forming on the past few days?

Am I that dense?

Oh how she hated it when Sayumi was right....

~~~

Caressing her ankle lightly, Eri knew her ankle was ready to return to its previous condition soon. She almost wished that it wouldn’t just so she could spend more time with Reina.

She had noticed small changes in Reina's attitude towards her ever since she asked if she was fine yesterday. It’s weird—in a good way, though. Like how she smiled warmly at her; surprising her this morning by putting her hands on top of hers that were around Reina's waist, saying she needed to check if the hold was secure enough before she let go after a short while; she even walked her to her class. All of the things she never had done before. It’s like Reina suddenly became sweet.

What important was that it didn’t feel like Reina was doing it just for the sake of her so-called duty. Which led her mind to speculate whether the younger girl shared the same feelings or not.

Yet all of it couldn’t stop her from sighing at that moment. There were other thoughts that took bigger space in her mind.

She has been haunted with thoughts like how they would have to part their way in no time. No more picking her up in the morning, no more little chats here and there, no more waiting for her at the student council room or in her class and going home together. They would continue on their own ways. Everything would go back to normal.

And Eri thought normal didn’t sound as good anymore.

~~~

“Reina, you stupid!” Sayumi said, irritated.

“What the?! Not nice, Sayu!”

“But you are! You had like the perfect opportunity to ask her out when you sent her home yesterday, yet you wasted it perfectly!”

Reina dropped her forehead on the table, grumbling. Because once again, Sayumi was right.

~~~

Risa looked at her friend and sighed. “Kame, if you look at the door once more I swear I will drag you to her class if I have to!”

Eri whipped her head to face Risa. “You wouldn’t dare.”

“Oh yes, I would. I don’t understand why can’t you just ask her out and end your misery, huh?”

“It’s not that easy, you know.”

“It IS. Want me to go there and demonstrates it?” Risa challenged. “Hey, Reina. I happen to like you so would you go out with me? Better yet, be my girlfriend?”

It’s Eri turn to sigh. “You’re crazy.”

Risa rolled her eyes. “Why, of course. Seeing you mope around these days only drives me crazy. Do something, will you?”

“I’ll try.”

~~~

Eri was surprised to see Reina in front of her house on Sunday afternoon, dressed in casual clothes.

“Reina?” Eri whispered, hoping the girl was really there.

Her ankle had been healed for a week, so the girl held no responsibility over her anymore. She was happy but also curious as to why the girl was here.

“Hey, Eri. You know, I never did replace your broken glasses, and since I don’t know anything about glasses...” Reina said nervously, “how about umm...searching it together? I mean, I did say I’d take full responsibility.”

Whatever reason Reina had, Eri knew the girl would make it hard if not impossible for her to reject. The days she spent with the girl taught her exactly that. So she smiled widely and decided to play along. It’s not like she minded anyway. “Okay, I’ll just change my clothes. Come inside.”

Reina waved her hand. “I think I’ll just wait here.”

“I’ll be right back then,” Eri said before dashing to her room.

Once Eri was out of sight, Reina face palmed herself. “Why can’t you just ask her straight for a date, Reina? Argh!”

~~~

Ask her out yet?

Not yet.

And you call
yourself a yankii??
Seriously, go ask her!

I never said that!
And I’m NOT a yankii!

Loser yankii! =p

Shut up!

Gah! That bunny, I’ve told her many times that I’m not a yankii and she never listens.
Reina looked up from her text conversations with Sayumi when she heard someone giggling. “Oh, you’re back.” The phone was quickly slid back to her pocket.

Eri was enjoying the faces Reina made while the girl was pushing the buttons on her phone furiously as she approached their table.

“Yeah, back with the food.” Eri put the tray down on the table and gave Reina her share of food and drink. She had offered to pay for their lunch which at first was rejected. Though once she pouted, Reina's stubbornness had crumbled. So the girl agreed but Eri had to pick the food while Reina secured their seat at the food court.

“Thanks.”

“No, thank you.” Eri pointed at her shiny new glasses.

Reina nodded. “You look pretty with it.” She immediately coughed and sipped her cup of ice lemon tea to hide her burning cheeks after realizing she had just revealed out the words inside her head, missing Eri's flushed face and sweet smile as she thanked her once more.

~~~

ASK HER NOW
YOU CHICKEN!


For a second there, Reina regretted telling Sayumi about her plan today. The girl could get on her nerves sometimes.

“Reina, we’re here.”

Eri’s voice brought her back to the present. Reina looked around and sure enough they’ve reached Eri's house.

Do something, will you?

Without a waring Eri turned toward Reina and planted a kiss on her cheek. “Thank you. I had so much fun today.”

Reina who had brought her hand to her left cheek the moment Eri's lips left it, just nodded dumbly.

Couldn’t stand Reina's cuteness, Eri leaned once more and this time her destination was the other cheek and she lingered for a moment there. “And that’s for taking care of me when I sprained my ankle.”

Now with both her hands cupping her cheek, Reina stared at Eri's smiling face, dazed. Before she could stop herself from blurting another embarrassing thing, her mouth had moved on its own and said, “Would you go out with me on a date?”

Is this even real? Eri thought.

It took Reina a few seconds to acknowledge her own question when she saw Eri's surprised look and tried to backpedal. “I mean...I mean I—”

“I would love to.”

“No, no, it’s okay I—wait, you would?? Like seriously?!”

Eri giggled at Reina's nervous state. “Yes, I would.” She took the yankii's hand and squeezed it. “Like seriously.”

“Great!” Reina beamed and punched the air excitedly like a kid with her free hand.

Eri shook Reina’s hand gently to get her attention back. “Hey, Reina...” If this doesn’t work, I’m gonna have a long talk with Risa-chan about her ‘easy’ ideas.

Turning to face Eri, Reina answered, “Yeah?”

“Be my girlfriend?”

“Huh?” Reina blinked once. “HUH?!” And she blinked some more.

Eri giggled. “Can I get a nod?”

Without thinking twice, Reina nodded her head repeatedly. And Eri punched the air in a similar manner Reina did earlier.

They shared a look and laughed together over their silliness, hands still tightly clasped together.

Ah, Risa-chan was right. It’s actually not that hard to just ask her.


The End


Wow, I didn’t know it would become more than my usual 3 pages when I first wrote it. And Bishop, if you’re reading this, is this long enough?  :grin:
Correct me if you spot mistakes, thanks.

Happy V-day for those who celebrate it! While I don’t celebrate it, please consider this as a gift for the TanaKame fans, hope you guys will enjoy this somehow  :)  (sorry if it fails!)
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 14, 2011, 04:28:40 PM
Aww, Reina's surprisingly responsible. And totally dense. XD Such a cute Tanakame.
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: kRisZ on February 14, 2011, 06:52:57 PM
Hmmm... maybe I should get a spare too in case someone's going to crush mine  :D

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With one clear of a throat and a “Welcome and enjoy the school life.” Eri finished her speech in mere seconds,
Damn   :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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“Don’t laugh!” Reina said embarrassed while holding a bright pink bicycle beside her.
Aww, the yankii owns a pink bike, ain't taht cute  :inlove:

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Happy? Touched? Happy and touched?
How about be happy and touch?  :twisted:

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Best part of it? It wasn’t even a lie; her eyes needed the rest from all the squinting she had to do.
inda hard without wearing one, espcially when you're used to it.

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The younger girl initially had a shock upon entering her room, but recovered after a minute and had helped her searched through the pile of mess
XD

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“Ah, almost forgot. Starting tomorrow I’m gonna pick you up for school and send you back here until your ankle is healed.”
Aww, the Turtl's in heaven I'm sure  :wub:

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“Eririiin! Your girlfriend is here to get you!” Risa, Eri’s classmate and best friend, shouted in a sing-song voice.
Friends  :roll:

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“There! Now let me sleep!” she pulled her blanket over her head and sleep did come easily after that.
XD

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Reina looked lost. “Huh? Which one?”
She has a bunch?

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She almost wished that it wouldn’t just so she could spend more time with Reina.
That's peanuts, sprain it again  :grin:

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“Kame, if you look at the door once more I swear I will drag you to her class if I have to!”
lol

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“Hey, Reina. I happen to like you so would you go out with me? Better yet, be my girlfriend?”
I have never done that, I wonder why. lol

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Loser yankii! =p

Shut up!
I love their convos  XD



I know it's already the 15th in yours and my time but HAPPY V DAY C! Sorry, kinda late  :nervous

Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: amEthystx on February 15, 2011, 04:17:42 AM
 :mon innocent: C! Yes it is! XD Thank you!

I'm kinda sleepy now~ sooo...it's gonna be a little short! BUT! I just wanna tell you i did read it! It's a great TanaKame! haha.

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With one clear of a throat and a “Welcome and enjoy the school life.” Eri finished her speech in mere seconds, gaining mostly shocked reactions from people who were assembled at the school front yard. Some have their mouth agape, some shaking their heads, and some sighed as if they’re expecting it beforehand.

All but one girl who chuckled and clapped loudly in delight.

This was the best part to me though. Haha! I think it's a great welcome speech! seriously..~ Haha..we all know how we hate those naggy long speeches~ XD  I can imagine the looks Reina was getting from the rest around her especially Sayumi.

Happy V day C!
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 15, 2011, 10:36:13 AM
@ rndmnwierd
I wanted to write a different kind of yankii Reina. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. You're always so fast to comment too  :)


@ K
Hmmm... maybe I should get a spare too in case someone's going to crush mine  :D
You wear glasses too? Awesome!
And funny thing is, mine was accidentally crushed to pieces in the middle of finishing this fic last year. Been wearing my spare since. Some coincidence, huh?

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With one clear of a throat and a “Welcome and enjoy the school life.” Eri finished her speech in mere seconds,
Damn   :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:
The ahou president is just that amazing.

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Happy? Touched? Happy and touched?
How about be happy and touch?  :twisted:
:roll: Somehow I know that someone’s gonna say something like that. But why am I not surprised that it’s you? :lol:

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Best part of it? It wasn’t even a lie; her eyes needed the rest from all the squinting she had to do.
inda hard without wearing one, espcially when you're used to it.
It makes you eyes tired for real.

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“Eririiin! Your girlfriend is here to get you!” Risa, Eri’s classmate and best friend, shouted in a sing-song voice.
Friends  :roll:
Yeah that’s what friends are for :P

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Reina looked lost. “Huh? Which one?”
She has a bunch?
Nah, Reina’s just being her dense self.

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She almost wished that it wouldn’t just so she could spend more time with Reina.
That's peanuts, sprain it again  :grin:
XD XD XD

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“Hey, Reina. I happen to like you so would you go out with me? Better yet, be my girlfriend?”
I have never done that, I wonder why. Lol
Neither have I  :P  better not to try that in rl.

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I love their convos  XD
Me too. Writing their banter was fun.

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I know it's already the 15th in yours and my time but HAPPY V DAY C! Sorry, kinda late  :nervous
Don’t worry about it, you’re not exactly late coz I should be having a Singles' Awareness Day instead  XD


@ Bishop
:mon innocent: C! Yes it is! XD Thank you!
You’re welcome. I’m just glad it’s long enough for you  :)

Thank you for reading even though you’re sleepy (get some sleep, yeah?).

Yeah those speeches usually makes me want to sleep. I guess that’s why others chose Eri as the next president. Nobody gives welcome speech as great as her  :grin:

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Happy V day C!
Thanks, though it’s the SAD day for me   :lol:

Edit: To those who clicked the Thank You button but didn't comment, thank you very much!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: reikoshi on February 22, 2011, 03:45:04 PM
omg i guess i'm really late here XD
i never notice this thread...  :banghead:
you really have many awesome fics here,  :twothumbs
they were really nice story  :heart:

hope you write more!  :D
i'll be waiting for your next writing XD
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 22, 2011, 04:46:50 PM
^ Nah, you're not late. And it's easy to miss this thread I guess...
Don't wait for my next writing because I don't even know when will I get the much needed inspiration to write  :lol:  but I'll try to see if I can make some ideas work for my unfinished one.
Thank you for taking the time to comment!  :)
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: stefy on June 21, 2011, 07:03:59 PM
Uaaahhhh~ I'm soo outdated!! *10000000000000x infinity thumbs up* is all I will 'say' xD
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on June 22, 2011, 05:43:05 PM
Thumbs up to you for the comment  :twothumbs
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: badsaints on June 24, 2011, 10:52:56 AM
Erm I didn't comment on this story? *scratches head* How could I not? Its TanaKame! :banghead:

Shooooooo cute :heart: Damn you're reminding me of how much I love this pairing lol
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on July 01, 2011, 12:35:53 PM
Well, I was hoping that my fic would remind the TanaKameist of the pair and maybe convert some people who aren't  :grin:
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: Sora-chan on August 13, 2011, 02:53:24 AM
Duty Love - I swear your gonna give me diabetes lol that story is just tooooooo SWEET!! ah~ i so love Tanakamei.. You have just made my day.. Honestly <3
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on August 13, 2011, 07:07:52 PM
^ Thank you! Your comment made my day too, so nice to see another TanaKame shipper :D
Title: Re: C's Scrambled Mix [TanaKame~Duty Love] 14/02/11
Post by: reikoshi on August 14, 2011, 05:45:58 PM
Aww sorry just wanna say
i see the last post is by you, i thought you're updating something lol XD
stiill happy somehow seeing you're still there and replying lol XD
*looks like im still hope for your writing someday (tanakame esp of course XD) and ill definitely read it, hehe >.<*
Ganbare for you XD