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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: sorakamiya on January 25, 2011, 08:30:06 PM
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hi guy's!!! i haven't got any idea to continue my other fanfict so sorry.... gomennasai.... :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: so i try to make a takachan oneshot. i hope u all like that... i'm sorry for the english writing since english is not my native language... :nervous and i try to make a romance here please correct me if i'm wrong... :bow: now enjoy the FF... :yep: :yep: :yep:
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5 years ago
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'attention everyone! all the participants please prepare yourself for the audition.'
'the audition will start in 15 minutes. thank you!'
"owgh, what should i do?! i'm really nervous. everyone seems really great?! can i do this?!"
suddenly one girl approch her. the girl is so tall , she has a long hair n looks like a yankee. she calls the small girl then teasing her
"Hey girl?! better go home now. this is not your place?! do you think u can go through this? back off!!!" the tall girl threatend the small girl.
"but..but.." "still dont wanna go? i think i should give u a lesson there.." the big girl grabs her hand but the small girl struggle "let me go!! what do you want??"
the tall girl ignore her and take the small girl to an quite place. "well, let's finish in here. no one here!!" the small girl scare and close her eyes 'oh god please!!help me!!'
suddenly "ouch?!" hearing it , the small girl open her eyes and she looks someone is standing in front of her trying to protect her.
she wears a black t-shirt with a loose jeans. she looks another side of the room.the tall girl already fall into the floor.
"you?who are you? why are you help her?" the mysterius girl shout "SHUT UP!!!! AND GET YOUR ASS FROM HERE!!! LEAVE HER ALONE."
"you....you..... arrrght!!! you win now!!!" the tall girl run. the mysterius girl turn around and approch the small girl
"hey, are you okay?" "uhm....ah yes i'm okay! thanks for saving me." "who's that girl?" "i dont know. she just approch me and insult me?! i think she is one of the participant."
"owgh!! i see. i hope she is not come back to the audition. are you also join the audition?" "yeah! and you?" "uh, me? ahaha, i also participate."
the mysterius girl help the small girl to stand up and look at her watch "wogh!! better we hurry the auditon is almost starting! come on!!" the mysterius girl run first
"hey, wait!!! what's your name?" the small girl ask "oh, i'm takahashi minami. and you?" "i'm maeda atsuko." "okay maeda, come on let's go together."
present
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"hey, acchan hurry up!! if not will be late for the practice." "owgh , minami!! could you walk a bit slower! i couldnt catch up!!" acchan pout
"hahaha... stop making face like that." minami chuckle. acchan finaly can catch up minami and then punch minami hand "ouch!!! itaiiii!!! why you do that?" minami pout and lok at acchan
"minami you hidoi!" minami look at acchan and she knows what should she do to her bestfriend "owgh!! okay....okay....!! my bad! sorry princess!! would you forgive me?"
acchan look at minami and ... "okay?! if you trade me when we finish practice?!" "fine! so can we go now?" then acchan grab minami's hand and that make minami blush "okay!!! let's go!!"
they then go to the theater to have practice.
acchan POV
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it's already 5 years since i have known minami. she is such a nice girl so caring and also she is my hero. how can i forget that time. she saved me from that tall girl.
we also passed the audition together. since then we become friend. she also help me to make friend and support me. she is really a good friend and i'll do everything for her.
we promise will always be together. everytime with her is the happiest moment and soon i realize that i want her more than a friend. this feeling growth by itself.
my feeling growth from friendship to love. i feel jealous if the other member flirt with her, i'm feel lonely when she is not around.i wanna always beside her.
is my feeling wrong? is it forbidden? i wonder how minami feel about me and i'm to afraid to confess to her. i'm afraid my confession could over our friendship.
i know i should confess to her soon or later. but, i want to just gone through it now.
minami POV
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it's already 5 years since i have known acchan. that incident in the audition united us. we passed the audition together and by the time we getting closer and we become bestfriend.
she is such a good friend. i want always beside her. i want always to protect her. i know acchan inside and outside so does she. we promise that we will always together.
but somehow i feel there are something that she is hiding from me. something that really serius. i know that from her eyes. eyes cannot deceive.
everytime i see her eyes, her beautiful eyes, it's show happinest and also secret. i know i cant force her to say it to me. but i'll be waiting. soon or later i know she will tell me.
please acchan, tell me!! what is it? what are you hiding for me?
theater
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they both arrive in theater and everyone is already coming. they could see nyan2 is struggle from yuko. tomo2 are practice their dancing. mariko is talking to the kenkyuusei etc.
minami and acchan say hi to them and begin the practice. after the practice acchan gather with the other members and minami go get change.her cloth is so wet of sweat.
acchan have a chat with nyan2, miichan and yuko "so, what will you guy's doing after this?" "uhm...nothing to do i guess. what about you nyan2?" "well, i..." haven't finished speaking yuko interrupt
"nyan2 and will have a dinner together. we are on date." yuko hold nyan2 wrist "mooo, yuko! could you release me for a moment!" nyan2 pout "why? i need skin touch nyan2!!" yuko hold nyan2 wrist tightly
then both nyan2 n yuko dissapear from their sight. "poor nyan2" miichan chuckle then look at acchan and ask her with a serius voice "so acchan! have u confess to takamina?"
acchan redden and blushe "uhm...i...i..." "u havent dont you? what keep you so long? just confess and then u will more relieve." "well, it's not an easy as u saying miichan. i'm just...."
"u afraid dont you?" acchan silent "well, it's up to you acchan. but you know, you cannot keep it for entire of your live." "i know but, i haven't know how she is feeling towards me." acchan sigh
"here, try this thing. make her jealous." miichan grin "wha..whaaat? but how?" "just tell her u are having a date with someone." "but , with whom?" "uhm... i know someone that could make her really jealous."
miichan give hew devil smile to acchan and she whispered to her "wha...whaaaaat?? i cant do that?" "u can acchan i'm sure! believe me takamina would really pissed off n really jealous." "but...but...."
"no but acchan. do that and see how she react! the point is u should make her jealous." suddenly takamina come she have changed her cloth. she is waering a white t-shirt with a black loose traing.
that cloth make her otoko point appear. acchan eyes widen minami wear the same cloth as their first meeting. she cannot get rid her eyes from the small captain. miichan wishperd
"i guess you prince has come." hearing that acchan blush. minami comin and greet them "hey guy's what are u talking about? sorry keep you waiting acchan." "uhm... ah, it's okay minami." acchan shutter.
"so, takamina what will you do now?" "well, i promise acchan to treat her. wanna join?" minami talk to miichan "naaah?! i'll be the mosquito if i'm join u guys. i'll pass. i already have another thing to do."
takamina confuse , she just scratch her head and give a little lough "ah, okay then. so let's go now acchan." minami grabs her stuff and then acchan follow her go out "bye miichan." "bye!!!"
after practice
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acchan n minami walk together. minami looks at acchan she feel something wrong with acchan then suddenly she hold acchan hand and acchan a bit supprise. she blush and smile. they keep holding and then
minami voice broke the silent "so, where you want to eat acchan?" "uhm... it's up to you minami." "sooo, what if we have katsudon." minami give her big smile. acchan just chuckle and grab minami hand
"alright, it's all up to u prince." hearing acchan saying that takamina blush but acchan only giggle "wha...what? why are you giggling?" minami look at acchan. "nothing!!" acchan just smile and keep holding minami hands
finally they arrive at the katsudon restaurant. they order the food and have a chat.
now in acchan think about miichan planning. should she do that? but not to try so acchan decided to do miichan suggestion.
their food finally come and minami eat her katsudon. acchan just giggle looking at her.
"hey? why are you giggling like that? is somethink wrong with me?" "nope. it just u eat like a kid in hungre." acchan giggle again "hey, i'm sturfing in here princess." acchan laugh
"i'm glad to see you laughing like that." minami continue her eating and "ne , minami" "uhm?nani acchan?" "do you have someone u like?" hearing that question takamina got choke "uhuk...uhuk....wha...what???" she stare at acchan
"geeez minami, carefull when you are eating" "ah, i know...know... sorry!! why are you asking me that?" "nothing, just wonder." acchan not dare to look at minami's eyes. minami hesitate "well...uhm...i...i..."
she then try to turn to the other topic "so...so...u know... tomorrow we are free right? what about if we go out tomorrow?" 'ah, this is my chance' acchan thought "well, i love to minami but sorry i can't."
takamina supprise coz this is the first time acchan reject her "owh!! i see, may i know why?" finally acchan said that "i have a photo shoot tomorrow and i have already promise to go with satou-kun tomorrow." hearing that takamina frowned and stunned.
she cannot think another.'whaaaaaaaaat???? acchan willl spend her time tomorrow with that guy.' takamina feel's like she has been shot by a thunder. it's feel really hurt. it's so paintfull. then acchan voice bring minami back to reality
"minami...?minami....?are you okay?" "ah, ow..ow... yeah i'm fine acchan. it's okay." minami force her smile. acchan know's the changing in minami expression but she just pretend she dont know it. "ah, acchan has u finished your food?"
"yeah! going now?" "okay no prob." they both go home. all the way home they both just silent. acchan feel bad in doing this to her best friend but this is the only her chance. she need to know how her friend feels.
finally they arrive at the station and seperated in there. when takamina arrive at home she still think about what acchan has said before. she feels jealous, hurt painfull. and she really cannot sleep that night.
and acchan, she has mailed satou. satou agree to meet acchan tomorrow in fact they are also will have a photoshot for Q-10 tomorrow.
next day
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minami OPV
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minami really couldn't sleep last night. she keep think about acchan. she doesn't know what happend to her. as usually she wake up at 5 in the morning. she check her phone and there is one message.it's from acchan.
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from : acchan
tittle : "good morning"
hi minami, ohayou! i'm sure you have already wake up by now. have a nice day today.
i'm sorry we can't spend time together today.
ja ne
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look at that message make takamina smile. but again she remember that acchan will spend all her time today with that satou make her frustrate
'aaaaargghhhttt...... i really cant think anything. today acchan will have a date with that satou. oh my God!! what happend to me. why am i so jealous. could it be..ah, it cant be.well i guess i have to do that now.'
minami finally decide to stalk acchan. she is under cover now. she is hurried prepare everything. she is wearing a sunglasses,a black parka, a hat to discuise.
after al prepare she go to acchan work place.
as she arrives there she sees acchan and satou together. they are talking and laughing together. acchan looks really happy with that guy. it looks like that satou has a crush in acchan. minami more worried.
she knows that it's up to acchan she wants to go with whom but er heart just told her to keep an eye on acchan that day. so that day minami follow everywhere where acchan n satou go.
first they went to watch a movie. satou try to hold acchan and when he did minami feel wants to explode but acchan hurry take a way her hand from satou hand and it's make minami relieved.
in the cinema takamina choose 2 sit behind acchan n satou. they watch scary movie. 'damn that satou. what is he thinking? if he dare do something to acchan i'm not gonna let him go.'
the movie is started and minami really keep an eye on acchan n satou. in the middle movie again satou try to hold acchan hand and embrace her. looking at that minami pretend scare of that movie and throw a bucket of popcorn to satou.
satou then stand up "hey! who throw the popcorn??" everyone ignore him. 'fiuh, sometime i'm glad i have a small body' minami hiding behind the chair. acchan n satou then continue to watch the movie.
nothing weird happend after that. after the movie finish acchan n satou just walk around in shibuya. they do a window shopping , eating and talking. minami still in guard. she keep stalking on them.
finally it's already 5 oclock. acchan n satou just walk around the park near there. 'okay, already 5 oclock and there aren't any suspicious movement from that satou. hew, why am i doing this? i feel a bit stupid. i guess better i go home now.'
but before that minami look that satou hand already in acchan shoulder and that his face is closer to acchan 'eeeeh???? what the??? dont tell me that??? owgh!!! is she really gonna do that?? come on acchan.' minami panicking.
satou now try to kiss acchan >.< and minami couldn't let it happend. in the other side from acchan n satou there are a group of children playing the baseball and the ball luckly fall in minami place.
minami hide in the bushes. minami quickly grab the ball then... 'okay, satou! it's ebough u already kiss her in the dorama. but not in here!' "WATCHOUT FOR THE BALL!!" minami throw the ball and then run as fast as she can.
satou look to the voice source and luckly can avoided the ball.
'oh my god, i'm so exhausted. damn that satou! he try to kiss my acchan! eh?! what have i said?' minami frowned and relize that her jealousy is not a friend have to be. she relize she like acchan. she afraid of loosing her.
she open her phone and look at the photo. it's she and acchan , takamina giggle 'so, it's look like i want u more than a friend acchan. but, is it already to late??' minami sigh and decided to go home.
it's almost 9 and the street so quite. she is lucky that her parents isn't at home right now. if not she could get scold coz coming home late. from the distance she look someone standing in front of her house and that is
"a..a..a..acchan???" yups that's acchan. she is waiting for minami "hi minami!" acchan smile and wave to her 'what is she doing in here' "owgh, hi acchan! what are you doing in here? it's already late. you could catch a cold."
minami said in a worried voice "ne minami? can we talk?" "owgh, yeah okay! no problem. lets come inside." acchan than come in. there are a silent until minami break the silent with her questions.
"so, what are you wanna talking about acchan?" 'i hope she doesn't know that i stalking her today...' "ne minami." "ah, yeah?!" "today where are you going?" 'oh my God, she is interogating me. what should i do. okay make an excuse.'
"ah, i...i...i was looking for the new shonen jump.i haven't got it." minami try to hide her nervous "uhm? but u already have the latest shonen jump. u show me last week." takamina shutter "oh, ah, yeah!! i just help my friend to buy it."
acchan suspicious "uhm...???? i guess all your friend already got it." 'now i'm dead. i guess i better tell her the truth' acchan only stare at minami and silent. they keep silent for about 5 minutes and then suddenly...
"gomen acchan?! okay i'll tell you the truth. i... i... follow you today. sorry i'm do that i just... well, yeah?! you now. i'm worried about you. i know i shouldn't do that but my heart told me so."
"i'm afraid something bad would help you, i'm afraid y...." havent finished her words minami feels a warm touch her lips. 'wha....whaaaat? acchan ..?? she...she .. kiss me...what the..?' minami feel confuse then when they parted
"minami..." "a..a..acchan??? what was that??" "i...i'm....i'm sorry!!! " acchan suddenly run as fast as she could leaving the small captain alone. "acchan waiiiiit!!" minami then try to catch up for acchan.
'acchan,.... where are you?! oh my she kiss me. it's so warm and gentle. nothing weird when she kiss me. but what that for? couldn't be that she also...'
minami search acchan every where unfortunately suddenly it's raining outside. in heavy rain minami try to find acchan and finally she found her. acchan sitting on the park bench and all aver her body is wet coz of the rain.
minami approch her and called her name gently "acchan..whats wrong? why are you running like that?are you mad at me? acchan please!!" there are silent a couple of minute then acchan talk
"ne minami.u have look at me at satou kun together today right? what do you think?" 'what is she trying to do now.'
"uhm.. well yeah!! i think he likes you a lot!" 'okay i'm a bit suffer about that'
"if you also like him i think it's okay!!" 'that's totally lie and totally hurt me so much >.<'
"as long as you happy i'll be happy to for you acchan" 'even if you are not mine but if i can still beside you i'll be happy acchan.'
'after that i feel acchan hands is touch my face and bring it closer to her and then her lips and mine meet each other. now i can't hold it anymore. i kiss her back and it's taste so sweet.i dont want this end'
their lips then parted and when i look at her eyes finally i could see the secret that she has been hiding from me this all along.
"i'm sorry minami. actually i go out with satou-kun today just wanna to see how your feeling towards me."
"eeeee?? what? what are you talking about acchan?" finally acchan confess to minami "all this time actually i like you minami. i like you more than a friend. i never want to confess to you coz i'm afraid."
"i'm afraid after i confess to you , you will leave me and it could ruin our friendship." acchan sob "i like you minami... i love you!! love you more than anything". hearing that minami stunned a moment.
acchan still crying and she dont want to head up her head. "acchan look at me please!!" "no!!" "look at me acchan!!!" "noo... dont..." minami touch acchan chin and make she look at her and minami once again kiss her deeper and more gently then before.
minami just wanna show to acchan that her feeling is mutual. minami then ended the kiss "look at me acchan. reads my lips. i love you too." hearing that acchan stop crying. she is supprise "really?you dont have to say that to make me feel better."
"nope!! i said the truth acchan. i love you! i want always beside you!" acchan feel relieved and they hug each other "now come on. let's go back to my home. i dont want u sick okay."
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acchan and minami get changed. minami then make acchan a cup of hot chocolate to make her warm.
"uhm...ano...acchan." "yes? what is it minami?" "since it's already late i think you better stay at here. just inform your parents." minami blush
"owgh, ah.. i guess so. i already inform them actualy." "ah, o..okay thats good. well, now better we sleep. you just sleep in my bed i'll get the futon."
"heee??? why? just sleep together i think it's enough for both of us." "ah, but...but..." "you dont want to sleep with me?" acchan give a puppy eyes
"ah, okay! let's sleep then." minami the n turn off the lamp and began to sleep. minami then approch acchan in the bed and cover both of their body with blanket.
"ne minami?!" "yeah?" "can i move closer?" "su...sure..." acchan then move closer to minami and lay her head in minami colar bone.
'OMG she is really beautiful.' "minami? what are you looking at?" "ah, ow..ow...nothing just looking at the beautiful angle that close to me." minami giggle
"so... you are the evil if that so..." "heee?? hidoi acchan... am i evil? why?" "coz you make wait so long to confess." "ah, owgh... sorry for that!" minami look down
but suddenly acchan move closer to her face and kiss her "no need to sorry! i'll be patient waiting as long as it needed." acchan smile "and by the way minami"
"yeah?" "you havent ask me to become your girlfriend?" "ah? should i said that? coz i guess it's already clear that i love you right?" "moo... minami hidoi.." acchan pout
minami giggle looking her lover pout like that "hahaha, you are really cute when you pout like that acchan." acchan blush. minami then look at acchan
"okay, maeda atsuko would you be my girlfriend?" "yes, ofcourse minami!" "so we official yet?" "yeah!" "but you should also promise one thing acchan" "uhm?what is that?"
"never make me jealous like that again. damn that hurt." acchan giggle " you are so cute when you are jealous" "oh yeah right?!" minami pout "owh, come on minami dont pout like that."
"okay, i'll promise. i never make you jealous and plus i'll be always beside you." minami smile widen "that's great. now my princess should we sleep now? i've really tired"
"sure my prince." minami chick redden and blush again. minami give acchan a good night kiss in her forehead and acchan lay her head in minami colarbone cuddling together
"okay good nite acchan. love you!" "good nite minami love you too."
then they both finally sleep and have already confess their feeling to each other. friendship and love. not much different isn't it? ^^
The End
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what do you think guys...???? :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
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wow that was really good! :)
Takamina and Aachan are sooo cutee together! I'm happy she realized her feelings for Aachan
Miichan is so smart thinking of the the jealously plan for Takamina
Keep it up!! :D
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Nice one shot ^^ It's always cute to read about them. By the way, I think you have like 3 or 4 fanfic to continue XD So I don't know if you'll find any other idea, but good luck XD I'll be waiting for an update :thumbup
And just a advice, can you at least put "I" instead of "i", coz I don't know if it's just me but I read better this way XD But perhaps it's just me :grin:
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owgh.... thanks for the comment guys... :bow: :bow: it really mean to me... :yep: :yep:
@mangobanana15
i'm glad you like it... i'll be doing my best... :thumbsup
Nice one shot ^^ It's always cute to read about them. By the way, I think you have like 3 or 4 fanfic to continue XD So I don't know if you'll find any other idea, but good luck XD I'll be waiting for an update :thumbup
And just a advice, can you at least put "I" instead of "i", coz I don't know if it's just me but I read better this way XD But perhaps it's just me :grin:
:nervous sorry for that for the next fict i'll put "I" instead of "i" .... thanks for the suggestion :thumbsup :thumbsup i'll do my best.... :thumbsup
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Oh, nice sorakamiya san :] :)
Thanks for creating this one shot fic :] as usual, :nervous haven't read this yet but I'll read this as soon as I can!!! :mon inluv:
Anyway just want to quote this :grin:
Posted by: bou-j525 By the way, I think you have like 3 or 4 fanfic to continue XD So I don't know if you'll find any other idea, but good luck XD
Haha :] :on lol: Good luck with that, sorakamiya san (but umm... sorry can't remember your other fic bec. well, there's a lot new fics that are comin' in ... hehehe :]) Do update those fic of yours pls... :] :thumbsup
Anyway, thanks soo much again, waiting for you to come out again with your other fics :mon determined:
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I liked it! :thumbup
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awww.. this is nice :thumbup
as always great job Mii-chan on that great plan! You are a genius! wahahaha!
Thanks for this update! :luvluv2:
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I love the Atsumina :love:
So cute story :heart: