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Title: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: jessie :] on February 20, 2011, 09:56:27 AM
Umm.. hello everyone….  :mon hi:
Umm... Actually, this is my first ever fic.  :mon ref: (Pls. do forgive me, this is freakishly lousy  :kneelbow: ) Anyway, pls. be gentle with me. If you didn’t like it, umm… pls. break it to me gentle  :mon cry: (hehehe..  :lol:) No, seriously, I’m a bit sensitive about criticisms and comments… Really… (Gosh, i'm so scared right now  :mon lurk:)
I just decided to write this fic out of inspiration because of all the awesome authors here. I’m just a beginner (both writing and in the world of AKB48).
I decided to wrote this fic because well, I like those girls and I admire them with their talents and their perseverance. :]  :mon determined:
Anyway, the story was supposed to be a one shot but I’d decided to cut it into parts. (Since my head was exploding and my eyes where red while I was typing this.) :rofl:
And this is a fic about the KOJI♥YUU pairing since I love Oshima Yuko sempai!!

But really guys, so truly sorry for the errors….  You could do this to me if you didn't like it  :mon slapself:  :nervous



Let’s Fly Together :]

It’s been a week since I had the same dream. I dreamt that I’m falling, no not exactly falling but I’m like….. flying?
How can I say this? Maybe it’s like I was falling but I can control my way, my direction. Yeah, you might say that I’m flying.
I can feel my long hair moving through my face and I was also wearing my school uniform. I feel like I’m free falling; not really caring if I might hit the ground, or if there was even a ground in the first place.

Sorry if I wasn’t that clear. But believe me; I’m not really like this before. After I broke up with this stupid guy, I turned out to be, as what my friends told me; a complete airhead but I don’t really believe them especially when you consider Miichan as one. I think you’ll agree with me.
Anyway, that bastard broke my heart by flirting with other girls and having another relationship behind my back. Luckily, I don’t see him; exclude the reason that we’re through, but because he studies from another school. The poor, poor girl he’s with, she’s in the same school as he is. Tsk, tsk. I pity her.

Anyway, let’s go back to my dream. I can’t really put into words what my emotions were. I felt that I can escape all my problems; this world of mine, and just focus with these, these exciting feelings.
But there’s a weird thing about this dream. I wasn’t alone at all.
I don’t really know who I’m with because I can only see her back. Well, let’s say that she’s falling, or flying, or free falling after me.
I really don’t know what my dream meant but I’m always wondering who that person is but there’s something inside of me saying that I’ve known her somewhere, maybe a long time ago or perhaps she’s the one who knew me.….
If I could just make her face me, then I’ll….

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RIIIIIIIIIINGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!! The school bell rang so loud making the sleeping girl went back to reality. As all of her classmates were readily packing their things up because of the sound of their salvation, she meanwhile looked like an electrocuted cat because of it. As she continues with her shocked mode, Miichan was calling her attention.

“Haruna! Haruna? Oi! Haruna, can you hear me!!”

“Huh, yeah, what happened?” Haruna responded back, slightly aware of her surroundings.

“Well, you’ve been sleeping like a zombie or something. Oh, wait zombies doesn’t sleep, don’t they? Drats! I really want to play Plant’s VS Zombies right now. It’s your fault.” She sticks her tongue out making the other girl annoyed.

“What? You’re making no sense at all Miichan. You’re more confusing than my dream, Hmm.. Now that I think about it, I think my dream makes more sense than you do.” Haruna teased Miichan making the kawaii girl pout. 

“Why are you so mean to me Haruna san? Do you know how hard I tried to resist temptation while you were sleeping? I was about to hit you on the head with this book I found awhile ago, but sadly, the bell woke you up. Do you know how heavy it was? Tsk, this is the first time I’d curse our valued school bell and it’s all because of you.” Miichan said to Haruna convincing her that she was a considerate friend, but she obviously didn’t get Miichan’s intention at all. She was just being thoughtful though, in a sadistic way. 

Noticing that many of her classmates have left, Haruna asked Miichan about the rest of their friends. She said that they were all too busy and she also added that they were really concern for Haruna because of the break up incident. She didn’t mean to open that up to her friend but she’d slipped her tongue.

Miichan noticed that Haruna was about to cry when suddenly, Miichan surprised Haruna by used her weapon of the day and hit her friend hard on the head with it. Obviously, that wasn’t a clever move but it prevented Haruna from crying.

“Ow! Why you little! That hurts! Run as you can Miichan or else you’re sooo dead!” She chased Miichan inside their room while still holding her aching head because of the strong impact with the really big book.

“Haruna san, please don’t chase me, I just had the urge to do that to you because you’re spacing out again. I just want you to wake up that’s all, nothing personal.” Miichan said while panting. Lucky for her that their room was big enough that she can really run for her life.

“What do you mean to wake me up? Hitting my head like that would make me lost consciousness and I will never ever wake up! Just wait till I get my hands on your neck!” Haruna said while still chasing the cause of her head ache. Miichan was running for her life but a big smile can be seen on her face.



Meanwhile from a nearby food store


“Minami chan, do you think it’s ok to leave Haruna san with Miichan? I think they might be doing something that would probably hurt the both of them.” The short haired girl said while eating in a food store with another girl who was now frowning.

“Acchan, come on, relax a little bit. They can’t kill each other… yet. Umm… Maybe. I’m not really sure but I’d known them for so long and I think they can handle themselves already.” The shorter girl said with a persuasive look on her face. The other girl blushed because of how the other girl looked at her. The short girl shifted her head from her food which was her favorite. She then continues.

“Acchan, please don’t think that I do not care about Haruna even just a bit. The truth is, I really want to kill that bastard so much that he…. ” Acchan cut her off by touching her hand which was holding the chopsticks too hard on the table. She relaxed a bit with Acchan’s hand above hers. She then smiled at Acchan.

“Thank you, Acchan”

 Acchan gave her that warm smile of hers which made Minami understood that Acchan wasn’t thinking ill of her. She smile more with that thought. Acchan noticed Minami’s smile grew more. She then decides to tease the shorter girl for her own entertainment.

“Minami chan, if you want, I could go check on them and since I think Haruna san might still be day dreaming, I might instead be spending my time talking with Miichan and letting Haruna san sleep all alone. I might as well watch a movie with…” Minami cut her off this time making her pout so much which make Acchan’s plan a success.

“I think you wanted to spend your time with Miichan. Don’t worry, I don’t really mind.” Minami said grumpily while eating her favorite food which for her tasted weird because it doesn’t seem too good or that she suddenly just lost her appetite. Acchan noticed that Minami’s mood shifted which made her so happy. She then decides to end her little game. She’s kind after all.

“Minami, what are you saying? Of course I wouldn’t leave you here since you insist that we should eat together alone which you rarely do, right? And I also believe that they can handle each other’s company since I’d also know them that long. And I…. I really want to spend my time with you.” Acchan stutters from her last statement while looking directly at Minami’s eyes which were frantically looking at every corners of the store. They were both blushing, waiting for something to break the silence. Minami tries to calm herself and clears her throat. 

“I was just… Argh! Never mind what I said, just eat your food already.” Minami face palmed her self feeling guilty for saying those words and at the time shy because of Acchan’s reply.

They continued eating their food but both felt that this meal that they’re sharing was different from their usual meals, not just that they’re alone together but they’re starting to discover something which they’d never known that was there before. But one thing’s for sure; they both like each others company.



Meanwhile


Two girls were walking down the streets. They were waking home together since they’re good neighbors, well right now, you won’t consider them as such since they were still fighting because of the bruises they’d made. The other girl was holding both her cheeks like it was pinched too hard while the other girl was still holding her head but was smiling because of the look that her companion was giving her. Finally, they both decided to stop teasing each other. Miichan then asked Haruna which left her puzzled.

“Hey, Haruna san. Did you see the new transferred student awhile ago, or are you too busy day dreaming at that time, hmm…?” Haruna lift her left eye brow looking like she really has no idea that there was even a transferred student who entered their class.

“I don’t know Haruna, but she keeps on looking at you while she was introducing her self. She looks worried about something.” Haruna was curious to know who the girl was and decided to ask Miichan about her.

“Miichan, what was her name? She might be someone I know.” While Haruna was waiting for Miichan’s response, she was thinking too hard who the girl was. She then responded with a serious tone of voice.

“I think I know who she really is. Maybe she’s a stalker or a person who takes pictures of beautiful girls for a hobby since she decided to sit behind you.” Haruna was surprised with Miichan’s response, which she really shouldn’t have since she’d known her for ages. Now she’s wondering why and how she befriend with this kind of girl in the first place.

“Miichan, don’t jump to conclusion that much or you’ll end up beaten till death. I’m just concerned you know. And what are you watching anyway? Having those weird ideas makes me freak out so cut it out.” Miichan cannot believe what Haruna had said. She believes that she might be right that Haruna should take care of her self since there might be a real stalker after her.

“Haruna san, I’m just….”

“Yes, you’re changing the topic, I know. You didn’t get her name that’s why you’re thinking things which really are out of this world ideas that only you could possible think. Really Miichan, you don’t need to create such weird stuffs as an excuse.”

When they were about to start another fight, they saw in a corner, a couple being lovey dovey which made Haruna somewhat jealous at the same time angry because of her failed relationship. Miichan didn’t like what she was seeing not just because the couple where making out on the streets but mainly because Haruna was wearing that frown again which she really doesn’t want to see.

“Haruna, I know that it’s been two months already. Can you please forget that ass and spend more time with all of us? Do you know how we all feel when you’re depressed? Acchan and the rest of the gang always ask how you’re doing. And Minami chan was always pissed off when she sees you with that fake smile of yours. Everyone misses the friendly, happy go lucky we loved and still love Haruna. We really are concerned about you.” Haruna didn’t know what to say. After hearing those words from Miichan, she realized that the cute girl might also be suffering because of her, no not only Miichan but everyone who loves her. That left a smirk on her lips.

“Miichan, don’t worry, I can handle it myself. I don’t want you all to be depressed because of me. I can do this alone and….” Miichan cut her off. Since they were now near Miichan’s house, she run and went inside but she didn’t closed the door. She was shouting out to Haruna from her door while she was holding the door knob to keep the door open.

“Whatever Haruna. I won’t talk to you if that’s what you want. Hmp. If you’ll keep on doing this to yourself, then fine. I’m tired. If you’re on a daze or you’re spacing out again, I’m really not gonna hit you on the head with that book again. You’ll regret that! I tell you!” She closed the door harshly. Fortunately, she didn’t wake anybody up with the loud bang of the door since she’s always alone when she goes home.

Haruna doesn’t know what her reaction would be if she’ll thank kamisama for having a peaceful mind tomorrow since Miichan would stop bugging her or she’ll be mad at herself for hurting her friends especially Miichan.

When she reached home, her mother welcomes her. She smiled at her mother and asks if their father was home already. Her mom said no and she decides to go to bed earlier than usual. Her mother was really concerned but she doesn’t know what to do since this is the first time her daughter acted this way. Haruna, sensing that her mom was tensing up, told her mom that she’s fine and that she’s just tired from school. Her mother nod and asked if she’ll eat her food first. She politely said no and went straight to her room. When she was inside her room, she didn’t take a bath and didn’t even change her clothes. She really wanted to take a rest and to just forget everything that happened to her right now. She felt her eyes closing, and before she know it, she fell asleep, not really caring about anything, even if she’ll not dream the same dream again…..


THE END (no, just joking)  :nervous (or Am I  :mon dunno:)



To be continued (perhaps :])



Umm.... it's ok if you didn't like the story... I will not try to continue this if many readers would hate to read this.... I'm really sorry if it's a NG..
Sorry, I'm kinda pessimist since I have a low self esteem... Truly gomenasai, mina....  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Waiting for comments... (if there will be...  :mon cute:) 
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 20, 2011, 10:58:24 AM
I'm reading this fast because I have to go.
And I really don't think your fic is bad so keep writing more, yeah? KojiYuu fans will be happy to have another fic to read.
Plus is that some Takacchan hints I see?  :grin:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: bou-j525 on February 20, 2011, 03:06:39 PM
Hello! Welcome to the AKB world! XD

But hey your fic isn't bad! The way you talked... I was like "okay... what kind of story will it be? Will they all die?" XD
Haha I understand how scared you feel since the same thing happened to me when I posted my first fic (which wasn't here by the way). And I don't know anybody here who could say "I hate your fic"   :smhid
Anyway, this is great ^^ I hope it's not the end because... well Yuko isn't in this chapter so that would be really  :banghead:
And TakAcchan moment  :heart:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: alexiel17 on February 20, 2011, 04:44:47 PM
Yeah, couldn't agree more with bou-j525 san  :grin:

Continue this because I haven't saw Yuko's name yet  :lol: :lol: (besides the title though  :yep: )

Pls. continue this Jessie san!!!   :P

(Finally, I'd post in time..... :mon exhaust: Just read this bec. I soo miss my KojiYuu together...but... there's no interactions between those two.... yet... :mon closeup: )

Anyway, thanks for the story :]  :lol: :mon gay:
(I'd finally had the time to reply again... *smirk*) Here comes thy witty comments, just you wait *evil laugh* bwahahahaha!!!! :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: Airidoki on February 20, 2011, 06:01:36 PM
is your first fic ? I'm loving   :mon cute:

please continue!  :mon fyeah:

 I love the fics KojiYuu   :mon inluv:

Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: RenaChii on February 20, 2011, 09:53:21 PM
I LOVE KOJIYUU FIC~!!  :mon inluv:

So, PLEASE CONTINUE~!!  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: riama on February 23, 2011, 03:39:46 AM
Hey please continue , don't be afraid of your writing you're good just like the other good writers here.(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_deter.gif)
 And please continue this fic!
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: khryz0421 on April 26, 2011, 07:59:51 PM
jessie please continue your fanfic.... your fanfic is awesome... =))
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: crazywota on April 27, 2011, 05:09:18 PM
i demand you to continue  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: TakahashiJ on April 28, 2011, 11:16:13 AM
More Please!! I sense a little takaacchan here :B !
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: haruhi16 on September 07, 2011, 08:08:51 AM
pleaseeee update soon!!
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: aruka on September 07, 2011, 01:46:37 PM
so far I haven't seen any reason for you to stop writing :smhid since what you've just written here betrayed your pessimistic feelings. :yep:
aside from my KojiYuu bias, you wrote it good! :thumbsup i'm not lying!

just don't stop trying.. and perhaps that pessimistic side of yours will slowly diminish over time. :twothumbs good luck!!


(hope I didn't sound like an ojiisan..  :lol:)
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: jessie :] on December 03, 2011, 05:16:40 PM
Sorry mina-san for being away for long... and Im truly sorry for not updating...  :err:

Im quite busy with life right now (with school...  :on study: )
But I want to say thanks to all those who's reading/scanning/leaving thank you post to this fic of mine...  :farofflook:

To be honest, Im a bit shock to see lots of fanfics here  :mon scare: (I think my MIAness was really long...  :imdead:)

I dunno when I will update (to be honest, I've forgot how this story goes... I really am so sorry... Pls forgive me... :on speedy:)
But Ill really try to update (and remember how this story ends)  :kneelbow:

Im really sorry...  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I just want to say thanks really for reading this lousy/ no good fic of mine... (Sorry, my pessimistic side is really strong...  :shocked)

Just want to mention these people (cuz you left me comments which really inspires me to continue this fic...)  :shy2:

@ pretend_2besome1 - Thank you for being my first commenter  :)  :on slopkiss:
I hope you'll still read this fic of mine...  :grin:
Takacchan hints? Well, I dunno.... Is there one?  :mon huh2: 
Just kidding!  :mon sweat: Umm.. Ok, Ill try to create a Takacchan one shot for you  :bingo:
(That is, if Im not too busy with my studies and well, if Im inspired enough  :sweat:)

@ bou-j525 - Thanks for the warm welcome  :luvluv2:
Thanks also for liking it :]

Umm well, really this is my first ever fic and well Im not really good compared with all the authors here..
But Il try to write more fics :onioncheer:
Hmm... Is it ok if Ill just left this as it is right now? You know like a cliff hanger  :dunno:

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I hope it's not the end because... well Yuko isn't in this chapter so that would be really  :banghead:
I laugh at that part :D
I guess you have a point :] (Yeah, Ill leave this fic as it is for you... :P)
Hmm..  :mon dunno: why do I have a feeling that some of you would want to kill me afterwards :shifty: :on voodoo:

 :wahaha:

@ alexiel17 - Missed the monkey emoticons dude :P
UPDATE YOU FICS TOO!!!!!  :mon mad:
That's all  :hee:

@ Airidoki - Ill really want to continue this but I forgot the story (BLASTED SCHOOL!!!  :mon uggh:)
Ill try my best to remember the story!  :mon XD:

@ RenaChii - buhuhuhu...  :mon runcry:
Im so sorry, I hope you'll forgive me... :(
I like Kojiyuu too that's why I've made this fic...  :mon innocent:
I'll update this....  :mon yell:

@ riama - Im no good  :fainted: (especially now... since there are lots of awesome and superb authors here...  :err: )
but I'll try to continue this.... I hope...  :mon POd:

@ khryz0421 - Thank you for the compliment :]
hope you'll read my update  :mon innocent:

@ crazywota - ahaha  :lol: even if you comments short, I laugh my ass out  :lol:
You're a bit forceful arent ya?  :yep:
Ok then, Ill update (but It'll take some time cuz Im a bit busy and well, Im not inspired to write fics anymore...  :mon exhaust: )
Pls inspire me...  :mon inluv:

@ TakahashiJ - A little Takacchan?  :mon dunno: Nope, I don't see it...  :mon pick:
ehehe, there's a lot of Takacchan fans here ei :) (I like Takatomo more.. :P)  :on gay:
Hope Ill not be beaten to death bec. of this comment..  :mon slapself:
 :lol:

@ haruhi16 - ehehe, I will  :mon dance:
Hope you can wait though.... Oh pls oh pls... :mon pray2:

@ aruka -  :mon ignore:

Im still blushing...  :monk gboy:
Thanks for the comment :]
And well, I do hope that my pessimistic side will be gone too  :mon determined: (ehehe, I think it will if Ill continue writing, dont you think?  :on GJ:)
It sounded like an ojisan though....  :mon dunno:

Just kidding  :mon dance:



Well, hope Ill update this soon :)
Thanks again everyone!  :on cny2:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: khryz0421 on December 03, 2011, 05:34:02 PM
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@ khryz0421 - Thank you for the compliment :]
hope you'll read my update  :mon innocent:

no prob tol ..^^ you're always welcome ..^^  :heart:

ur such a loser dude ...
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: Tam_atsu on September 15, 2012, 09:37:54 AM
Please update it alreadyyyy!!!  :cry: :heart:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: kojiyuu109 on September 15, 2012, 09:53:14 AM
i hope u will update it soon  :) i want to know what will happend next XD
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: Elo on January 30, 2013, 07:33:04 PM
i hope you will update soon :thumbup
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: warr on February 03, 2013, 02:54:47 PM
pleaseeee update :mon cute:
Title: Re: Let’s Fly Together (Kojiyuu fic :])
Post by: DC2805 on February 03, 2013, 04:55:18 PM
Thanks for the story, it won't just end here right?  :)

Seriously, you are writing well for a new writer, so ...

Please gamabtte and continue writing this interesting story!  :heart: