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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Alexander on March 29, 2011, 01:26:34 PM
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Title: Garde du corps
meaning: Bodyguard it is a French word
Author: Alexander
Pairing: Takahashi Minami and Maeda Atsuko another pairing is going to pop out
Prologue
“You’re fired!”
“Are you okay Sir?”
“You know Takamina you should smile more often”
“Takamina?”
"Itano?'
“I need back up!”
“What the heck is happening?!”
“MIMAMI!”
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My first AKB48 fanfic. Why don't you guys guess the pairing? :D
I'm new to this fandom please take care of me :yossi:
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^ woooow.... what a short begining... :shocked :shocked but its seems cool... XD XD update soon.. :thumbsup
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Hein? It makes me confused and want to learn more about this please update soon ;)
My guess : takacchan? XD
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LOL im also a little confused too, usually prologues are as long as the first chapter xDD
But it sounds interesting :thumbup Bodygaurd Takamina sounds goood
Is it TakAchan :deco: ?
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Alexander san, (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/stick-10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=61&u=15955113) I'm also confused about this... :mon ko: What's happening? O_o (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/cute-w10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=62&u=15955113) :mon huh: :grin:
Hahaha :lol: but really, can't wait for the story :] :mon fyeah:
Hmm.. :mon dunno: still wondering what this would be... hehehe :mon sweat:
Anyway, it's good to see new authors here so pls. don't be scared to share your stories :] Write more!!! :)
Hmmm.... since I'm quite in a weird state right now (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/m20210.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=60&u=15955113), could this be a TakaTomo fic?
hahaha :lol: :lol: But I really wish that this is a TakAcchan fic instead :] XD
Ummm... just a follow up, could I pls. call you Xander instead? It's ok if you don't want to... Your name reminds me of somebody..... (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/onion_10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=19&u=15955113)
Pls do continue this :] hehe :mon dance:
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O_O No idea.........
Well... I guess I will just have to wait to find out XD
And why did you put the title in French? (just because I want to know, nothing personal xD)
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The only possible pairings i can think of is
Takamina + Tomomi
Takamina + Miichan
Takamina + a Bodyguard
or Takamina + Acchan (only in my dreams and Acchan calls Takamina by her first name more than often).
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Alexander :mon ko: this is very short
I'm also confused lol
but hopefully the next chapter will be long :mon sweat:
I really understand how hard it is to do a fanfic ^ __ ^
then I will support you :mon thumb:
I'm waiting for next update :mon inluv:
good luck and relax :mon determined:
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Author’s note: I’m sorry for confusing you ‘bows head in shame’ usually that’s how I wrote a prologue. I’ll explain it to you guys the sentences that you saw at the prologue are the sentences that the characters will say for the upcoming chapters so it’s like a spoiler?
And for the title I wrote it in French uhh. I think it’s because I want something different? I always see titles in English or Japanese so I thought that maybe another language is okay and I come up with French.
I’m sorry I’m an awkward person. I want to reply to all of you but I just don’t know what to say. Thank you so much for the comments.
I hope you guys will enjoy CHAPTER 1
Chapter 1
“You’re fired!” Takahashi Minami was fired. Apparently she was working at a convenience store and the customer complained because she’s not smiling. She’s a serious person what can she do?
She’s a hard worker but the problem is she’s not smiling at the customer.
She irritably scratched her head. For the nth time she’s fired she can’t even count how many fired she has heard.
Takahashi Minami A.K.A Takaboy EL OW EL just kidding. Takahashi Minami she’s an orphan well not really she had a mother but when she heard that her mother will be marrying a guy she ran away from home and now she’s working so she can eat 3 times a day. She had a wonderful life but she sacrificed it. She doesn’t want another father. She doesn’t want a stepfather. She loves her deceased father.
It’s been three years since she left home. She misses her sister but she can’t do anything.
Minami put her cold hands at her jacket and hummed a tune even though she was fired she’s in a good mood. She can always find another job. Matter of fact she hates her job her boss always nag her. She hates his nagging. He’s like a girl! She just wants to punch him square in the face every time he nags her.
She was about to turn left when she heard a gunshot. She crouched down and looked around
“What was that? “ There’s no one in sight. She looked around again and found no one. She heard another gunshot and some shouting. She walks in a crouching position and aware of what’s happening to her surroundings. She saw a nearby parking lot. She heard another gunshot. She saw a guy and he’s holding a gun. The gunshots are coming from the parking lot. She needs to escape and save her life and just forget about what she saw but she didn’t she’s worried if some innocent people are there. She’s a brave kid indeed.
Minami walk in a crouching style. She’s already 4 feet away at the parking lot when she saw a guy in a suit crawling towards her. She got scared and about to scream. He looked like someone who is in horror movies!
‘Oh God what a sight’ she thought
“Help!” She heard. The man is asking for help
When no one is around she sprint towards the man and when she was about to put his arm to her shoulders she heard the guy in a black suit.
‘Shit!’ she thought. She inhale and exhale thinking of what she will do next
“Hey kid hand him over or I’ll kill you” said the guy. He is pointing the gun towards Minami. What is she going to do? She inhale and exhale again and thinking of not panicking
She saw the man that he’s holding a gun and out of instinct she threw the man to side and grab the gun and gunshots are heard.
The guy lied there lifelessly she just killed a guy! She just killed a human being! She feels ugly. She threw the gun to the side and screamed her lungs out and after that she look at the man that she just threw to the side too.
“Are you okay Sir?”She asked concerned about the man that she threw few minutes ago.
“Thank you so much for helping me kid” said the man. Who is smiling at Minami. After what happened he can still smile? Wow
“No problem Sir here let me help you stand up we’ll go to a nearby hospital right away”
After hailing a cab and going to the hospital Minami never felt tired like this is before. She’s now in front of the Emergency room. She’s still wandering about what happened earlier she just killed a guy but she thinks the guy is much more skilled with the gun than her. She can’t believe that she just killed a guy! Who looks like a yakuza! Who’s much more skilled than her!
After waiting for 1 hour yes she’s counting it. Men in black suit started coming her way. They look scary.
‘Who is he anyway?’ she thought. The man that she helped earlier who is he? Why there is a guy wants to kill him? Is he some sort of a yakuza too? What if the
yakuza will go after her too?
Her thoughts are interrupted when the Doctor finally come out. The men in black suit stood up. There are 6 of them. They surrounded the Doctor but I can still hear the doctor.
“Mr. Maeda is okay. There’s nothing to worry about. Thank that kid over there she helped Mr. Maeda” said the Doctor
The men in black look at her with tearful eyes. Wait what? Tearful eyes? She rub her eyes is she dreaming?
“Thank you so much Miss we owe our life to you” They said while bowing
“Uhh.” That’s all Minami said she sheepishly smiled and scratched her head her shy part is coming out.
And because of that little accident Minami’s life dramatically changed
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END. SO HOW WAS IT? O_O It’s my first time writing an action story so I’m sorry if it’s not good. I feel so nervous right now.
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Don't worry I think your fic is great and interessing :twothumbs update soon please ^^
By the way, are you french?
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I'm enjoying it! :mon thumb:
is interesting
please update :mon fyeah:
:mon ko: oh sorry I thought was strange Prologue
because I see only very long
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woooow.... i like it.... soo.... could it be taka will become maeda bodyguard... :grin: :grin: :grin:
please update soon... :thumbsup :thumbsup
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woahh this is a cool story!!
Takamina is so brave to try and help the man when there was guns involved
hehe she just saved Aachan's father i wonder she's gonna get for saving him
Update soon!
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woah! takamina is so cool!!!
:cool1:
who's father is Mr. Maeda? Atsuko? Ami?
hehehehehehehe!
anyways thanks for update!
love it! :heart:
hope you upadate soon! :D :D
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Not many authors use that kind of prologue, but I do like your prologue. Because then every sentences would be revealed the way the chapter goes like in chapter 1 and likely won't be the same as what I'm guessing it would be. In other words, interesting.
Even better since I've always liked the bodyguard type of stories :D
Hopefully saving Mr. Maeda means Takamina gets to be Acchan's personal bodyguard? --> is praying for TakAcchan pairing
So far so good, keep it going :thumbsup
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I think it is interesting... nothing really similar to what I've read before ^^ So keep updating! Is Mr.Maeda Atsuko's father? Or related to her? Haha I'm wondering what will happen to Takamina :P
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Chapter 2
When I say Takahashi Minami’s life dramatically changes. I meant it.
FLASH BACK
After that awkward scene with the bodyguards of Mr. Maeda she has learned that Mr. Maeda is a president of a company and someone is after him. The guys that after Mr. Maeda are ‘Phoenix’ that’s what they want to call themselves. Anyway, Mr. Maeda has a daughter.
They didn’t let Minami go home because the phoenix group might go after her said Shiro one of Mr. Maeda’s bodyguard. They said that maybe someone from phoenix group saw her when she helped Mr. Maeda and go after her too. Minami obeyed she still want to live.
It was pretty awkward. They waited for almost 4 hours before Mr. Maeda woken up. Minami just kept a straight face while waiting.
“Boss” said one of the bodyguards. Mr. Maeda has woken up.
“I want you to go outside first I want to talk to her” and one by one they left
“What is your name kid?” said Mr. Maeda who is smiling at Minami
“Takahashi Minami Sir”
“Takahashi I think I’ve heard of that before. Anyway, thank you so much for helping me without you maybe I’m already dead right now” Mr. Maeda laughs his
eyes forming a crescent moon
“I was intrigued because I heard several gunshots so I looked for it and I saw you Sir”
“Oh. What a brave kid you are Takahashi” Mr. Maeda laughed again
“Do you have a job Takahashi?” Mr. Maeda said. You can hear the seriousness on his voice.
“No Sir before I found you I was fired from my job”
“You can work for me Takahashi you’re a brave kid after all I think my boys already said what is my work to you and that there’s someone after me”
Minami just stare at Mr. Maeda like he is an alien her mouth slightly agape. Mr. Maeda took the silence as a yes as he continue from what he is saying
“You’re life is now in danger Takahashi”
Silence filled the hospital room
“You will be trained to be a bodyguard. Don’t worry I’ll pay you high. I’ll take that as a yes?” said Mr. Maeda as he smiled at Minami who is dumbfounded. Minami
just nod her head as a sign of approval.
“Good but there’s something you need to do so you can roam around the town”
“What is it Sir?”
“You need a disguise”
“Disguise?” What does he mean by that?
“I assumed that right now the phoenix group are already looking for you. You need a disguise so they won’t find you easily”
“Okay Sir” said Minami as she nods her head. Professionalism can be seen from Minami’s face.
“You act like a guy Takahashi”
*laughs* “Everybody says that to me” said Minami
“Sir Why don’t I just disguise as a guy?” she suggested
“And you’re intelligent too. I’m impressed Takahashi”
FLASH BACK ENDED
Minami’s P.O.V
I’m here in my apartment getting ready for my new job. I found my ‘Boy clothes and blonde wig’ after searching for at least 20 minutes. You’re wondering why I have a costume like that, it is because I’ve disguise as a guy back then. I need a job and my friend said that there’s an opening but they needed a guy waiter. I
disguised as a guy and after 2 months I got fired because the owner found out that I’m a girl.
Okay enough with that I need to go downstairs to meet Shiro. I gave the
‘Looking good Minami’ said my conscience. Why am I so irresistibly handsome?
I’m wearing skinny jeans, black v-neck shirt and a white polo with a silver necklace and a white converse. This is the only clothes that I have that looks formal.
I collect all my things and put it in a bag. Starting tomorrow I’m going to live with Mr. Maeda.
I look at my apartment one last time and said my goodbye. I’m going to miss my girl clothes and my peaceful life. I locked my apartment and started walking.
Now that my life is in danger I need to be alert. I was wondering if I didn’t meet Mr. Maeda maybe I can still roam around as a girl and not in this ridiculous costume. If I didn’t met him maybe no one is going to kill me for helping a man. There’s so many ‘What if’s’ inside my mind that I didn’t saw that someone is in front of me.
“Sorry” I bowed. When I look up I saw a guy in a suit. He looked like the guy that I killed yesterday. When I look closely at him he has a phoenix imprint in his
suit. It’s located at his left chest.
I need to act calm and don’t panic! Don’t panic Minami everything is going to be fine.
“Do you know this girl?” He handed me a picture. It’s the picture of me from yesterday and I’m holding a gun. How can they take a picture of me while I’m
shooting a person? Why didn’t they just shoot me? I looked cool at the picture by the way.
“No I don’t know her” I said. There’s already a sweat forming in my forehead
“Thanks if you saw her tell me okay? Her name is Takahashi Minami. Here’s my calling card” He handed me calling card. I studied it. It says there Phoenix Corporation.
“Why are you looking for her?” I asked. There’s nothing wrong in asking right?
“She’s missing and her parents are looking for her” I’m missing and my parents are looking for me? Wow what a great liar you are
“Oh okay. I’ll call you if I saw her” I bowed at him and left. I think I’m going to die. Thank God he didn’t recognize me. I saw Shiro outside the van waiting. Shiro
opened the door
“I’m sorry I’m late”
“It’s okay Takahashi. Who are you talking a while ago?” I forgot to tell you my name is still the same even though I’m disguise as a boy
“He’s from Phoenix he’s looking for me and he gave me this” I handed Shiro the calling card and he studied it. He tore it into pieces and threw it outside the van.
“You don’t need those”
The ride is rather long. I didn’t get a proper sleep yesterday at the hospital and my eyes are betraying me now.
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It’s Friday night and I’m reading a book. I feel that someone is looking at me. I look at the door and I saw my Mom.
“Mom”
“Minami I have important to say to you”
“What is it Mom?” I smiled at her
“I’m going to get married Minami!” She lively said to me. My smiled turned into frown and the book that I’m holding fell
“What did you say?!” I glared at her. I can see that tears are already forming in her eyes
“Getting married?!” She kept quiet and looks at the floor
“Sis” I heard Erena called me
“Getting married?!” I ask Mom again
“What about Dad? What about him?” I can feel that I’m going to cry any second now
“Sis” Erena called me again. Anger building up in my body
My mind is not working anymore. I just want to get out of here and forget about everything
“GO BACK TO YOUR ROOM ERENA!” I didn’t mean to shout at Erena but I don’t want her see me like this in this state
I can hear her sobbing. I don’t want to see her crying. I promised to Dad that I won’t make Erena cry. I want to hug Erena but I just can’t its like someone is pulling me.
“I’m going to bed please excuse me” I excused myself and hurriedly run to my bed room
And everything went black
“Takahashi! Takahashi!” I can hear someone is calling me and when I open my eyes I saw Shiro
“You’re a deep sleeper huh I shouted your name and I even shook you for several times” He smiled at me
“We’re almost there Takahashi” I just smiled at him.
I can’t think straight right now. Why did I dream about it? Why?
I held my head. I need to forget about it I need to stay focus. I have a new life now.
The van stopped and we were greeted by a guard
“You’re here Mr. Maeda is upstairs he said that he wants you guys to go upstairs” The guard said
I looked around and I saw that the bodyguards at the front gate are armed
The guard at the front gate is holding an Emer-K1 and the guard in front of the house is holding a Colt M16A2 and there’s a revolver attached to their waist too
Mr. Maeda’s house looked like a military base
I have a little knowledge about guns because while we were at the hospital Shiro teach me about the types of guns
They finished talking and we walk inside the house. The interior of the house is nice, outside it looked like a military base because of the guards but inside it looks
like a normal mansion. Maids everywhere and butlers I think. I’m not really good at describing things but the mansion looks extravagant. I once live in a mansion and I can see that they really take a good care of it. I’m impressed everything is just beautiful.
The maids are looking at me and they were giggling. What’s up with them?
“Are you okay with the house?” asked Shiro. Shiro is not smiling anymore there’s an aura around him that I can’t explain
“Yeah” I just kept a straight face. I’ve learned that body guards need to look dangerous.
From now own everything will change. I’m okay with not smiling because that’s my specialty and I need to look serious and dangerous. While we were walking I
looked around again paintings everywhere. There are so many rooms and if I ever roam around here I think I’ll get lost.
“Here we are” Shiro knocked at the wooden door
“Come in”
Mr. Maeda is lying at the bed and there’s girl beside him holding his hand I think she’s his wife
“Hi I guess you’re the new body guard that my husband hired” she said
“Yes Ma’am and my name is Takahashi Minami”
“Your polite too” she smiled at me
“Thank you so much for helping my husband Takahashi”
“Takahashi come here” I politely obeyed and walked to his side
“Starting tomorrow you’ll be trained by Shiro and after 2 weeks you can start working for me. I want you to meet my daughter later because after your training you’ll be the bodyguard of my daughter. I trust you Takahashi” I nodded my head
“Okay Sir I’ll do my best at my training”
“Very good Takahashi”
We heard a knock on the door and when I look at the door there’s girl wearing a white dress above her knees and her hair is loose. Am I already in heaven? Why am I looking at an angel?
She looks so beautiful. She – I don’t know how I can explain this feeling. She’s the most beautiful girl that I’ve ever seen.
I was star struck. She looks at me and we locked eyes for a few good seconds. I was mesmerized by her beauty.
Mr. Maeda introduced me to her and vice versa.
TBC
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Thank you so much for reading Chapter 2.
Guessing time
So who is the girl?
I don't know either just kidding. You will find it next chapter so stay tuned.
I'll do my best to update fast.
REPLIES:
Kahem: Nope I'm a Filipino :)
Airidoki: I wish you enjoyed reading chapter 2 :D
Sorakamiya: Maybe or Maybe not :P
mangobanana15: Your question is answered she gets to be the body guard of Mr. Maeda's daughter :D
aoi_sora: Maybe he's Ami or Atsuko's father I will not reveal it hehehe. :twisted:
pretend_2besome1: I wish it's not the same as what you're guessing. I'll do my best to write the chapters fast and long :)
bou-j525: Thank you so much for reading it. I like your fanfic by the way. I guess your question is kind of answered in chapter 2 :)
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Though Takamina really was offered to be a bodyguard (yay for that), the daughter she will protect is still a mystery. I mean the description of Mr. Maeda's daughter wasn't helpful at all, any girl could easily match the description.
Want to tease your readers, don't you? XD
:grin: Takamina has to disguise as a guy. I'm guessing some future problems because of that.
But really, Takamina's thoughts of the daughter made her sound like an L :lol:
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Yeah Takaboy as a bodygard !!! I really hope the girl is Acchan^^ continue it's great :twothumbs
So, you're not french ^^
PS : I don't know why I think takamina's father-in-law to be is the phoenix boss lol
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I hope the girl is Acchan too :grin: Though I don't know really who else it could be... but reading experiences helped me to understand that unexpected changes could pop out anywhere.
So... who's the girl? If it's not Acchan... :smhid
Thank for the update!
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Ah~ Finally, a fic where takamina is a bodyguard.....and kai at the same time :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :drool: :drool:
I love you officially!! Lol, hopefully the girl is Maeda (fingers crossed) please update soon!!
ps. I am filipina, well actually half filipina and half chinese but who cares~ Yeah~ Go Philippine pride!!
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takamina become Kai and Acchan's personal bodyguard!!!!
:cow: :cow: :cow:
i hope it's Acchan, coz if that's Ami..... that will be weird! right :nervous
or maybe it's.... Matsubara Natsumi!!!! :doh:
thanks for the update!
update soon! :cow:
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Chapter 3
Minami’s P.O.V
‘No this can’t be happening I already stop being an L after I got rejected by HER’ I stared at my reflection after a few good minutes I got bored so I started making weird faces
I’m in my room right now it’s located at the left side of the Mansion of Maeda’s there’s another house for bodyguards cool right? And my room is nice. It’s a simple blue room with a single bed and a table beside it. There’s a closet also and a bathroom.
Anyway, Mr. Maeda’s daughter she’s going to be my boss from now on. Earlier I was introduced to her \ I was dumbfounded when I saw her. I think I look like a loser earlier because I just kept nodding my head and looking at her.
“STOP IT MINAMI!” I really need to stop thinking about her. I need to focus on my training tomorrow
I slapped my cheeks. I need to focus
“I’m going to die tomorrow” I never imagine myself being a bodyguard and I think tomorrow’s training is going to be a fail.
“Takahashi” I heard a loud knock at my door
“Who could be knocking at this hour?” I looked at my digital clock and it states there that it’s already 11:05 pm and lucky I was still in my disguise.
I opened my door and I was greeted by a big man who is in his plain blue pajamas. Oh it was just Shiro
“Hey Takahashi good luck tomorrow, just keep this in your mind I won’t go easy on you even if you’re a girl because for others eyes you’re a boy” He said and
patted my shoulder and walked to his designated room
“Weird” I locked my door and started undressing. I’m kind of itchy because of this chest binder. I think it’s almost 2 years? Since the last time I wore it.
“Hello dream la la la land” I rested my head at my arms and closed my eyes tomorrow is going to be a long day
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“GO BACK TO YOUR ROOM ERENA!”
‘I dreamt about it again’ I clenched my fist and started looking for clothes to wear. It’s only 4 am and I need to get ready because training starts at 6 am and ends
at 11 am
I wore a black sweat pants with a Mickey Mouse t-shirt and running shoes
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It didn’t go well I need to jog around for 50 times while the others are already going to eat lunch because I didn’t do a good job doing a 200 push ups and 700
crunches in 5 minutes we just finished doing a 200 sit ups and some ‘light’ morning exercises.
How am I going to do that? I’m a girl! Even in my taekwondo days yes I learned taekwondo when I was still a kid anyway we don’t do 200 push ups and 700 crunches in 5 minutes. I know that Shiro said that he will not go easy on me but that’s how do you explain this it’s unfair you know.
Right now I’m still running and running
’18 more to go!’ My abdominal muscles are aching, my feet are aching, and my head is aching, matter of fact MY WHOLE BODY IS ACHING and I’m hungry too
‘I feel sweaty, my chest binder is sweaty, and my wig is sweaty’
Maybe I can rest for a while? The coast is clear no sign of Shiro
I sighed in relief. I really want to rest
“Aren’t you a naughty trainee?” I heard someone asked I looked at my back and we were just inches apart. I was startled when I saw her but I didn’t manage to
move at my spot
‘Why is she so close?!’
“Uhh. M-Ms. Mae-eda I- I was” Why am I stuttering?! And what am I going to say again? She’s still closed and it’s creeping me out.
I cleared my throat because there’s lump forming on it.
She giggled and held up a bottle of water finally she moved
‘Phew personal space hello again’
“Here and please just call me Atsuko drop the Ms. Maeda I feel so old when someone calling me that”
“T-thank you Ms. I mean Atsuko” I don’t know what to say anymore. I managed to keep a straight face in front of her.
‘Ooh. Hello cold water~ I’m in heaven’ drinking cold water after those ‘light’ exercises is really good
“Good! And I will call you Minami you know you really have a girly name for a boy” She giggled again
I almost spit the water at her face when I saw Shiro approaching us.
“Good morning Ms. Maeda” and he is already here OMG what am I going to do?
“Good morning Shiro” I thought Atsuko doesn’t like being called Ms. Maeda?
“You can change now Takahashi. Good Job” He will not lecture me for not doing all of it?
“I’m going now Ms. Maeda” he bowed and left us
I think Shiro likes Atsuko well he is still a guy no matter what and Atsuko is really pretty
“You smell bad Minami” her voice woke me up from my trance
And I realized that she just said that I smell bad. I tried to smell myself and I really do smell bad
I looked at her flustered
“I’m going now thanks for the water Atsuko” I bowed at her and started walking. Good Minami you just embarrassed yourself
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After showering and changing. I go downstairs to eat with the guys. They’re not bad at all they’re really friendly. Shiro said that I can rest for 1 hour and after that he will teach me how to properly handle a gun.
It’s only 12:30. I’ll just take a nap
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Handling a gun is easy. I feel like I’m James Bond for some reason. Shiro excused himself he said that he will just do something.
I really want to do this. My hands are itching to do this.
“My name is Bond, James Bond” I imagined that I have so many enemies in front of me. I did the BANG BANG sound no one is around so it’s okay. I did some
fighting stance and point the gun at the objects around the room.
‘This is fun’
“You can run but you can’t hide” I did the BANG BANG sound again.
I was startled when someone tapped my shoulder that I accidentally pulled the trigger and pointed to its face. Thank goodness that there’s no magazine in it. It
was Shiro his eyes are wide I think he was shocked. I put the gun at my back.
He cleared his throat and sternly looked at me. I was embarrassed as hell. Wow earlier I embarrassed myself in front of Atsuko and now. I can be the queen of
embarrassment.
He teaches me how to handle a gun, how to put bullets at the magazine, some fighting stances, and lastly how to clean it. It was fun even though I embarrassed myself awhile ago.
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ANOTHER P.O.V
“Is she doing well?” He asked
“Yes Sir she is” the guy at the another line said
“Good just go with the plan” a smirked is forming on his lips.
“Okay Sir”
And he hung up
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Atsuko’s P.O.V
I was introduced to a guy named Takahashi Minami. Daddy never assigned someone to guard me. Yes there are guards following me when I go outside but
they’re not beside me and they’re like 5 of them. He never assigned someone to guard me alone. 3 years ago I was harassed by the guy who is guarding me and
I was traumatized because of that. The guy that Daddy introduced has a girly name. He is kind of short for a body guard and he has a feminine features. He
looked like a girl for some reason. When I saw him I feel nothing’s going to happen to me. Someone is telling me that he won’t do anything to me. I want to be friends with him.
I just finished my piano lessons and when I looked outside my window I saw Takahashi Minami he was jogging. An idea pop inside my head
I saw him stopped running and looked at his surroundings. I approached him.
“Aren’t you a naughty trainee?” I can see that he was startled
“Uhh. M-Ms. Mae-eda I- I was” He said stuttering
I giggled and held up a bottle of water to him and moved farther away from him.
“Here and please just call me Atsuko drop the Ms. Maeda I feel so old when someone calling me that” I don’t know why I said that but its okay I guess
“T-thank you Ms. I mean Atsuko” He drank his water. He looked like a kid who was drenched by the rain. He looks so sweaty.
“Good! And I will call you Minami you know you really have a girly name for a boy” I giggled again
I saw the changed of his facial expression
“Good morning Ms. Maeda” Shiro greeted me. I know that it was him. He walked beside me
“Good morning Shiro” I greeted him
“You can change now Takahashi. Good Job”
“I’m going now Ms. Maeda” he bowed and left us
‘He smells bad’
“You smell bad Minami” did I just that aloud?
His facial expression changed again. I regret saying it. I can see that he’s embarrassed.
I was about to say sorry and I’m just kidding but he spoke first.
“I’m going now thanks for the water Atsuko” He bowed at me and started walking away
I pouted at him and walked to the house.
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Sorry for the late update I can't write because I have basketball training and swimming. I'm really sorry.
Thank you very much to your comments. It inspires me more to write. :mon cry:
So the girl is revealed and it's Aacchan. There's another pairing that's going to pop out so just stay tuned.
Guessing time! :on woohoo:
Who is this her?
What's her relation to Takamina?
Who is this man?
do your best to guess it :) :onioncheer:
bye bye! :wigglypanda: :on asmo:
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‘No this can’t be happening I already stop being an L after I got rejected by HER’ I stared at my reflection after a few good minutes I got bored so I started making weird faces
... :huhuhthe who?...... :?, who reject takamina?! :grr:
....yehey!!!! new chapter!!!!! :shy2:..., thank you for the new chapter!!! :kneelbow:
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‘No this can’t be happening I already stop being an L after I got rejected by HER’
That's what I call a nice opening line :grin:
Though who could've rejected Takamina? :(
It's Acchan! :cow: I was really hoping it was her because TakAcchan in this kind of setting would be awesome. Acchan even told Takamina to call her Atsuko :deco:
“My name is Bond, James Bond”
:lol:
But I don't think it would automatically make them the pair, there's still another possibility since 'Itano' was in the prologue. TakaTomo?
Could this man be Mr. Maeda himself?
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Thanks for update ! ^_^
Weeeeeeeeeee. This fanfic look so cool.
I'm looking forward to it :) !
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Yeah it's Acchan!!!
You like playing guessing game don't you ? ^^
Euh my guess : Tomochin? xD
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wow.!! nice fanfic Alexander..... i love your fanfic.... filipino really have a great imaganation..
"No this can’t be happening I already stop being an L after I got rejected by HER’ I stared at my reflection after a few good minutes I got bored so I started making weird faces"
who reject takaboy?
“My name is Bond, James Bond” I imagined that I have so many enemies in front of me. I did the BANG BANG sound no one is around so it’s okay. I did some
fighting stance and point the gun at the objects around the room.
‘This is fun’
“You can run but you can’t hide” I did the BANG BANG sound again.
I was startled when someone tapped my shoulder that I accidentally pulled the trigger and pointed to its face. Thank goodness that there’s no magazine in it. It
was Shiro his eyes are wide I think he was shocked. I put the gun at my back.
hahahah... BAng Bang... .i LOVE u Takaboy (James bond)....
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James Bond Takaboy is so funny and cool!!! :cow:
who rejected Takamina???
Tomochin??? since the author is Alexander-san....
maybe it's... Akimoto Sayaka!!! :nervous
thanks for the update! update soon! :D
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i just found this fic and i really like it..
i hope alexander-san will comeback and finish this,
i never get tired reading atsumina fic!!!!
pls alexander-san!!!come back!!!!
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hi.. :)
please continue your fanfic :)...
thanks...
when will be your next update?...
i need reply...
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Her must be tomochin :smhid maybe, pls update :)
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please tell me that theres more coming? It is tooo good to be discontinued!!!