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Umm… hello everyone :) :] Yes, what you’re seeing right now is true… I decided to create my own stories… (Finally!!! :yep:) Sorry if this will be full of random things (which I already stated in my title) since this is my “first ever” fic (Oh, btw Happy April Fools everyone!! If this is not a happy day, just cross out the happy part…. Hehe!!! OhmiGawsh!!! SOHF!!! Sense Of Humor Failure!!! ) I assure you people that this fic is an epic failure... *Fails at life* :on cloudeye:
So there, so much SSP’s from me…. hehehe :lol: :]
Everyone sorry this is really a No Good… No Good at all…. :on blackhole:
Oh pls. don’t kill me!!! :scared:
PS. I’m listening to mellow music while writing this fic :] If you didn’t like this, it’s really ok… :on cloudeye: :[ but really, it’s fun writing this fic :]
Title: You’re My… (♥Takacchan♥)
When I’m with you, I can’t help but smile……..
This is weird…. Am I just being stupid? Well, I think you’re still being…. you….
Yes, I know I’m not clear right now. Ahh I don’t understand myself anymore… Luckily, I’m just talking to myself……. Help…
Why am I being like this to you all of a sudden? I tensed up after you said that I should stay at your house after our practice since you live nearby and I was about to protest but everyone agreed with your “sweet” request since my house is, as you said, “faraway” from here which is not really true.
I really couldn’t say no since all the members did agree when it should really be me deciding but I think I unconsciously said yes to your request when you went nearer and was directly looking at me with that adorable pleading eyes of yours which desperately wants me to say yes to you.
I don’t know what I said back then but I presume that I did said yes since you’re so happy that when we were rehearsing, you can’t seem to wipe that smile off your face even if the Director was scolding us, well technically, it was only you that was scolded at because we are doing a tragic story and surprisingly, you’re not doing well with it. I was wondering why you were happy. Is it because of my answer? No that’s just stupid…
Anyway, we are currently walking right now in the streets since the rehearsal just ended minutes ago. Well actually, my eyes are still twitching because of what happened awhile ago since you are still keeping your distance with me which is making me angry at myself even more, but what can I do since it’s really my fault…..
When the rehearsal ended, the rest of the team kept on teasing me non-stop since they’d knew Acchan insist me to stay with her house later on. It’s pretty obvious who started the teasing which was no other than Miichan. She just went my way when I was fixing my things inside my bag with that suspiciously scary smile of hers and not to mention that rapidly perverted movement of her brows. When I was about to lose my patience because of her banters, Yuko decided to join the “fun” which is not really funny at all. They keep on saying that I should be gentle with Acchan and that I should be the one taking the initiative since I have the “balls” to do it.
I was really getting pissed since they were getting on my nerves and without thinking, I said out loud that I don’t really have that kind of relationship with Acchan and I wouldn’t have the urge to look at her that way ever. While I was still controlling my emotions everyone was looking at me like I did something horrible and really, to my horror, Acchan was right behind me. She unmistakably heard me loud and clear and I just found it out when those two clowns were looking at me like I did something that I would regret afterwards. When I turn around to see her reaction, she was looking at the ground and said that she suddenly needs to be alone for awhile and walked fast outside the room. I was shocked for what happened. I was still confused with her reaction. Are we still friends? Is she still being herself like I think she is? I went back to reality when I heard Haruna scolding those two and Yuko was pleading Haruna to stop since she was really mad at them. I didn’t bother with them for now since I need to apologize to her as soon as possible. I then swiftly put the straps of my bag on my shoulder and then I said goodbye without bothering to look at them.
I ran as fast as I can so that I could catch up with her. When I saw her, she just continued to walk fast without even looking at me. I still don’t understand her at all. I really do wish that she might feel something for me too but why the hell am I thinking that now? I should be feeling guilty or something but why am so I happy instead? I decided to hold her wrist to stop her from walking too fast but to my surprise, she yelled at me saying that I should let her go. I did what she said since that’s the only thing I can do right now.
We are still walking in the streets but I’m not really happy at all. I’m behind her right now, angry at myself because of what I just said. She’s just walking and I’m just following her even if she doesn’t want me to. As I was cursing myself, a motorcycle was about to hit Acchan. I suddenly got into my senses and grabbed her waist from behind and pulled her near me. We weren’t hurt or anything but since I was tired because of our practice and all, I lost my balance and I accidentally pulled her down with me. I hit the cement really hard because of it and I almost cried in pain. She got up from me quickly, kneeled on the ground near me and checked if my head was bleeding. She sighs in relief that I wasn’t bleeding and wraps my arm on her shoulder to help me to stand. Thank God we’re near her house when that happened so she had a little trouble of carrying me. I’m not really ‘unconscious’ but I wish I was since I’m so embarrass right now.
When we are inside her house, I sat on her couch while she took a pack of ice inside her fridge and placed it on the back of my head.
“Minami, are you feeling better?” She asked with a worried look on her face which made me a little sad.
“Uhh…. yeah”
“I’m really sorry. If I wasn’t contemplating, then this would never happen. I’m really truly sorry.”
“Why were you thinking about? Is it…..?”
“…………you”
I didn’t know if I heard her right and I just keep silent with her last reply. I don’t know what I’m feeling right now since she’s near me and I can’t really think clearly since all I can hear is the loud beating of my heart which is really hurting my ears. I just noticed right now that our eyes were locked with each other. I can see that she’s getting nearer and nearer. I don’t really know what to do since I still can’t believe what is happening. When I decided to close my eyes to feel her lips on mine, her phone rang. I opened my eyes and saw that she looked so frustrated. I was blushing so hard and I think she is too. She gave me the ice pack and walked to where the phone is. I am actually wondering what would happen if her phone didn’t rang? Are we going to kiss for real? Now that I think about it, I want to confirm it first if she does have feelings for me.
While I’m still wondering, I overheard Acchan’s conversation on the phone. I think that it’s not her parents since her voice was somewhat a bit louder than usual. I think she’s still angry because of the kiss we’d almost shared awhile ago which this caller did break.
“Hello, Meada residence. This is Maeda Atsu~ WHAT!!!”
“No, of course not”
“Ok bye bye”
Those were the words she said before she hanged up. I asked her who called since I’m so curious to know about it.
“Umm… Acchan, who was it?”
“It’s just Miichan. She’s just checking if you‘re here right now.”
“Oh…. Umm… and what did she said when you replied to her the ‘no’ parts?”
“Do you really want to know?”
“On second thought, I don’t want to. Ehehe…”
“Then I could show you…”
I was again surprised because she sat next to me. Oh no. She’s getting nearer and nearer again. I was about to close my eyes but then she started giggling.
“Blushing Minami is so cute.”
“Stop it Acchan!” I said while standing up. She just moved her head on the side which is really cute. What the hell am I saying? O_o
“Are you finally accepting my feelings?” She said still looking at me.
“What feelings? Huh?” I said in reply. I think I’m looking at her with a stupid look on my face since she deeply sighs in defeat.
“Baka! I loved you since the day you helped me with those terrifying guys who were following me when we were starting to debut as idols” She pouts at me which made her look even cuter. O_o
“But that was a long time ago. Which means…?”
“Yes. So you don’t need to worry about how I feel toward you.”
“Aren’t you just angry with me awhile ago?”
“Well, since you were talking with Miichan and Yuko, I think that they’d tease you again which made you blurt those words out, or is it just my wishful thinking?”
“You really do know me that much Acchan” I smirked and was about to give up since I now know what she feels toward me.
“So, do you really want to know what did Miichan said awhile ago?” She asked now standing up and biting her lips. Oh crap… O.O
I gulped nervously and just to change the subject, I asked if her parents were around. Obviously, she knew that I was being a complete idiot for ruining the atmosphere.
“You’re not really listening to me when I invited you to stay here aren’t you? They aren’t around so it’s just you and me here.” She said while putting her hand behind my neck.
“Ahh… Acchan, umm…”
“Hush. Since you’re late for realizing your feeling for me, I’ll….” She said now an inch away from my face. I can’t control my emotions. I don’t know if I this is really happening right now. If this isn’t true, then I hope that I wouldn’t wake up.
I then closed my eyes hoping that I would really feel her lips on mine this time. I wish that nobody would break this kiss of ours. I really wish that all of this are true….. But…
“Minami! Minami, wake up please!” Acchan said while frantically shaking me to wake up.
“Uhh.. What? What happened?” I said still a bit unconscious and confused.
“A motorcycle was about to hit me but you saved me and tripped really hard on the ground.”
“Huh? So we’re still in the streets?” O-o
“Umm… Yeah. I’m really sorry. I was so scared to move since you passed out minutes ago. I really don’t now what to do. I don’t know if I’ll carry you or something.” She said worriedly and tried to help me get up.
“AHHHH!!!” I cried in pain. Well, my head really is hurting but the real reason for my grievous scream was the realization that all of it was just a dream. But to my surprise, I felt something soft pressed on my lips. Is this it? Am I not really dreaming right now?
“I’m sorry. I just don’t want to see you hurt because of me. I’m really sorry. If I wasn’t contemplating, then this would never happen. I’m really truly sorry.” She said which surprised me so. Did she say those exact words in my made-up world?
“Acchan, am I not really dreaming? Did you just…” Acchan just realized her actions when I saw her eyes were getting bigger and she was blushing. Ah, she is too adorable which made me chuckle.
“Why are you laughing? Are you really ok?” I laugh more since I assumed that she’s thinking I did lost my marbles. :D
“I’m just happy that this happened.” I responded back still laughing at her reaction.
“What? That you hit the floor?” She said back giving me that confused look on her face. Argh! I know that she’s sometimes an air head but to reach this extent!? o_O
“Umm… We are near your house aren’t we? Can we talk this over there since I think I’m freezing which I think you are too?” I said since this conversation of ours is going nowhere. She then grabs my hand and we both walk in the street now closer with each other since she’s still helping me to walk.
When we were in front of her door, I suddenly asked her about something :p
“Ei Acchan, if your phone rings when we are inside your home, could you not answer it since I think it will just be a prank call?” She was looking at me with another confused look on her face and just said yes with my small request. We both entered her house and I really do believe that I am not dreaming right now since I really did felt her lips on mine awhile ago. I do hope that whatever happens with us will be able to clear things out. I love her and I want to know if she loves me back……..
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AHHHH!!!! At long last I’d put the word ~END~…. Dreams really do come true… But really guys, I’m really sorry that this is an NG…. huhuhuhu… :err:
Anyway, I decided to post this fic as a trial fic since this is really my "first" ever Takacchan fic… :hee:
Umm… just want to mention these people because you’re somewhat the reason why I suddenly wrote/post my own fic :on gay: :]
FoF sama! :] My idol!! :mon XD: How are you? :mon innocent: I haven’t seen you since, I dunno? :mon huh2: Umm… just pls. still update/continue your fics!!! :] I really do miss you so much :] Pls. show yourself!!! :mon whine: Pwetty pwease with cherries on top :] I REALLY MISS YOU!!! AHHHHH!!! FoF sama ♪Where are you now….♪ hehehe :]
Bou-j525 san! Ei, wazzaaaaaaaap!!? :mon dance: Thanks really for the incredible fics you’re writing :hee: :] I’m really inspired because you’re really a great writer and I’m just a freaking noob…. :pleeease: Anyway, can’t wait for your other fics and soon to come fics :] Pls, create something that’s not tragic… Since I might do this (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/th/cz2510.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=73&u=15955113) to you if you’ll still continue writing those kinds of things… Even if it’s not your forte… pwease write happy fics :mon cute: :] hehehe :]
Sorakamiya san! Ei dude!! Happy b- day!!! :on BDay: Hehe.. :] Oh, btw I really am amazed with your stories since they are out of the ordinary which is really good :nya: :] Umm… Really, I am happy that you missed me even if I’m not an author before… :wriggly: hehehe :grin: (Now I’m a SELF PROCLAIMED AUTHOR!!! :lol: :lol: hehehe) :] Pls. do continue and write more of your matchless stories :] PS.. Are you a guy? Just asking… hehehe :]
Dark-atrox san! My friend! :hee: (Do you considered me as your friend too? Ahehe… :sweat:) But really, your fics are so incredible; I don’t know what to say. Umm... You are important to me since you’re the first to leave me a PM… :shy2: huhuhu I’m so plain… huhuhu… No really, thanks for giving my comment a damn… Yeah! :on woohoo: Thanks really for all your fic… Like all the other Authors here, waiting for Updates!!! :]
Rankuro san! How will I forget you? :bigdeal: You’re the first who really did make my request come true…. *blushing right now* :shy1: :mon inluv: Anyway, I really do like you fics and I do hope that you’re still writing/continuing your fics since you’re like FoF sama…. you’re also missing in action… :mon cweepy: hehe :] But really thanks for the stories :] Hope for an Update!! :mon roll:
Katura san! Ahahahaha! :mon sweat: I really remembered how stupid I am because of our little secret which I believe you still haven’t told anyone… :mon dunno: right?.... :shifty: DON’T TELL IT WITH THE OTHERS PLS!!! :mon mad: hehehe :] I beg of you!! Hehe :] Umm anyway, your fic is really great just like the other awesome authors here :] Ah, really can’t wait for an update :]
Yourstruly san! Three words…. You are Mysterious…. :cool1: Well that’s what I think you are. :mon sweat: Why? Because when I’m reading your fic, you tend to release that kind of Aura in you… I really dunno but you’re one of the others I find really cool. :cool1: And, I really need to apologize to you since recently; I haven’t read your fic… (Yes stab me all you want, I deserve it…. (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/th/cz2510.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=73&u=15955113)) I haven’t even commented with it for awhile…. I’m not worthy to be in your presence… :kneelbow: I hope you’ll forgive me…. I promise to read your fics.. Promise :hand: :]
Bloodofthescribe san! If I’m not mistaken are you also one of the authors that are currently Missing in Action? :mon huh2: No, just joking… Really, pls don’t get mad at me…. :mon scare: Anyway, thanks so much for sharing your fics.. Umm… It’s been a while that’s why I’ve been reading your fics again since I somewhat forgotten the stories (OmiGawsh, you can kill me now… :mon slapself: hehe) Anyway, pls update soon :]
Mari chan! Ah… you’re soooo cute :mon kissy: and sweet :mon cute: which I really like soo much :]
I will not forget the PM’s you’ve given me since it’s super cute :] Thanks soo much for your flattering words. I do hope that you’ll be one of my readers now… (haha :lol: :]) so that I could return the favor to you :thumbsup :] (Yey! Were both commenter and at the same time authors as well!! :mon XD:) Thanks soo much for the fics you’re writing! Don’t stop creating more, my lovable kohai (since you said that I'm 1 year older than you..) :] hehehe :]
Japanime1 san! Ahahaha! :mon ignore: Just remembered your fic. It’s pwetty cool and interesting :p Umm… I know that you’re posting your fic on you blog right? Sorry if I haven’t left a comment there yet but I’d already voted for your upcoming rooster of fic… I hope you’re not that pressured since now you’re working with 4 fics!! :mon fyeah: O.O That’s really cool. Can I be one of your avid supporters? :mon yeah: Hehe :] Pls. update as soon as you can :]
ShibuyaDokiDoki san! Ei! I am following your stories on another site that’s why I knew that your stories are terrific :mon noprob: :] Umm… Sorry that I’m not leaving a comment on your story since at that time, I was really busy… :gmon tears: Then I read your stories they were… ummm…. great :] Just want to ask, What is a lemon? :mon huh2: Wow, it only shows that I’m still a noob… hehe XP!!
Naitou san! Hehe :] I’ve been following you too on another site since your fics are cool too :mon dance: :] Umm… really thanks for deciding to post your stories here since I get confused :frustrated: for reading the fics on the other sites ‘cuz you know… hehe :lol: , Oh pls. don’t tell it with them… hehe :lol: Anyway I do have an account there but I rather read than put a comment there since It really is confusing.. :grin: :P thanks so much for the fics :on GJ: :] Update as soon as you can :]
Alexander san! Hehe :] I will not forget your Prologue :hiakhiakhiak: xp It’s cute to see new authors here and new stories/genre :] Umm… I do like reading action fics and I really do believe that it’s difficult to write such type since you need to use a lot of descriptive words. :mon determined: I’ll support your fic :mon fyeah: and thanks for sharing this, can’t wait for the next chaps :]
PS. Can I please call you Xander instead? :] if it’s ok to you that is :p
Jessie san! Wha!!! :mon mad: There’s still no update from you until now!? :mon fire: Hehe :] your fic was cute and were both the same. It’s just our first ever fic and yeah, I’m still a noob in the AKB48 world :mon ignore: xp… Hmm… about that low self esteem thingy, I wish that you’ll have the backbone to post your story/ies!! I promise to read it for sure so dude, it’s ok to be scared at first just don’t think too negative ok :mon misch: :] Thanks soo much for the story!! Update it fast too!! :] Umm just want to ask, is the SOHF (your sig) is a short for “Sense of Humor Failure”? Just wondering :]
Aoi sora san! Ei! Wassup? :mon nyah: Umm.. actually, I was getting envious when you decided to post your own story :mon whimper: since I know that were both just a commenter and they you became an author and I was still a commenter :mon hanky:T_T Anyway, I really do hope that you’ll post another story/ies here :] I’ll definitely read it.. hehe :]
Kahem san! Just like the other authors here, your fics are superb :mon fyeah: :] it’s also unique and cool btw :hehehe: :] I like it! :luvluv1: Umm… Pls. continue posting your stories all you want and I’ll try to leave a comment if I can… hehehe :] Thanks soo much :] Update!
Immo san/sama! Hehe… I know that you’re not posting your fic here… :hee: hehe :] I am actually one of your loyal followers. I saw your fic even before FoF sama posted her fic here so, yeah, I’ve been your follower since maybe chapter 6? I’m not really sure myself xp hehe :mon ignore: :] Umm… Thanks soo much for the fic. :bow: :bow: Because of that, I became a fan of AKB48 and knew them more like Acchan (I didn’t know that I had a live action which she was one of the lead char. in it, I’m referring to her “Shiori to Shimiko” series.. hehe ) Anyway, you’re one of the reasons why I need to have excuses just to go to the computer shop and see if you’d updated… (hehe :lol: I’m like a fan girl or something… :mon lol: hehe… :]) So there, thanks soo much for everything Immo san :]
Riama san! Ahehehe… :mon sweat: Ummm.. I know that you’re not an author (or Am I wrong? :mon huh2:) Anyway, I want to say sorry to you since well, remember your PM? Ahaha.. I still haven’t answered your question.. YES I am the one on my profile pic… :mon dunno: Wait, umm.. technically that is me but that’s not what I really look like… O.o Now I’m just being stupid.. :mon headbang: Umm… but really, you just surprised me with the PM of yours but I really am flattered that you’d like my pic :] hehe sorry for the laaaaaaaateeeee answer… I’m truly sorry… T_T :kneelbow:
Hmm… am I missing someone? :mon dunno: I think I’m done…. :mon fyeah: Still contemplating… :mon dunno: I really think I’m missing someone… Hmmm….. Oh, does that person want to be mentioned in the first place? :mon slapass: Ok since that person is somewhat special to me… hehe :] :mon pick:
Pervja/ My Perverted Ninja (aka. Keichan ^_^)!! I want revenge :mon fierce: since you still haven’t made my life long wish and you said that you’ll create it but would PM it since younger readers might read it and you’re saying that I’m one of those young readers!! :mon fire: :mon mad: :mon headbang: :mon worklate: PERVJA!!! Where are you, huh? :scolding: I want to seek vengeance!! :on kimbo:
Hehe :] Anyway, I really do miss teasing you… :mon whimper: Since you’re not updating, I can’t do this anymore which is really part of my daily routine.. huhuhu… (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/bg00410.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=51&u=15955113) I really do miss you now… Oii!!! Update your fics!! But really, I’m happy that you posted your fic here since you’re fic was the reason why I suddenly like the Takacchan pair that much and you started the PERV :mon wtfmm: story that many admitted that they’re pervs out loud… tsk tsk tsk, :smhid :smhid and now you said that I’m a Yadong Freak!! Tsk tsk tsk… but really thanks soo much (Not the YADONG freak part!! :mon annoy:) :] I really like the Kojiyuu but decided to create my fic a Takacchan one :] So there Thanks soo much and show your ass :shakeit: already.. It’s been a long time since you’d post here :] ehehe :]
Ahh.. That was exhausting :fainted: and fun :on lol: at the same time… My eyes are turning red and my fingers are becoming numb… hehehe :] Umm… so sorry if I missed some other cool people who inspired me to do this fic of mine… I’m really truly sorry….. :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :mon cry: T_T (I must commit harakiri afterwards… hehe :]) Anyway, I know another site which also has cool fics but since I rarely comment there, they don’t really know my existence… ehehe :] but really, they’d also inspired me to write ‘cuz of their fics :] Thanks everyone :] :mon inluv:
And would I forget the readers :) :mon XD: who supported the Authors here? Without them, then who would read the fics here, right? So Really thanks for all who are supporting and reading the fics here :] :bow: :bow:
Anyway, I want to apologize for all the wrong comments I’d made before… So truly sorry about that… But guys, thanks for everything. :shy2: Before, I’m just one of those who only read, :on study: and now I might be able to write stories. Yey! :on woohoo: :] So sorry for being such a weird person (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/egg-0110.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=39&u=15955113) … Sorry too if I’m not really funny at all (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/bg00510.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=50&u=15955113)… T_T I also want to apologize for the ‘alexiel17 complex” thingy (Yeah, I comment first before I read the fic... :err:) But guys, thanks soo much :] Hope I would be able to post my stories here ‘cuz this might be my first and my last……. Oh, do I need to remind you people that today’s April Fools? Hehehe :] Enjoy your day everyone!! :] hehehe :] :grin: (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/2227_a10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=43&u=15955113)
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I'm glad your first fic was of TakAcchan XD
And no it's not bad, it's fun to read for me.
Though I do wonder if the call and all that would really happen...
Keep writing! :)
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Good job =)
I liked it....
Side note,
How am I mysterious? What? I'm totally confused.....
What aura? A murderous aura?
I like the you think I'm cool part ;)
I don't MIND that you haven't read or commented on my chapters but it just makes me less motivated and tend to not update....
Not a threat or anything....I'm joking, take your time cause I know how life gets....BUSY....LOL
Thanks again for the fanfic :theking
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Uhhhh thank you for your comment? XD I don't know how I should take it since you both tell me I'm great... but you kinda say you're going to kill me too so... yeah.
But seriously, it's funny you sudenly decided to post here because I was wondering this morning when you would update :) And this morning I was with some friend and without thinking anything, I looked at JPHIP... and (almost) screamed "OMFG IT'S ALEXIEL!!!!!" And my friends were like "Who?!" And me, not listening to them at all: "Hehe... finally!!!"
Here's my story to make you feel better :lol:
But yeah... about your fic... I understand how nervous you are :nervous You know you're not a noob if this is your first fanfic. I remember my first fanfic... it had three sentences, lot of mistakes... and I didn't even finish one chapter XD So yeah... I was like "writing is not for me AT ALL". And THAT was when I was writing in my native language... so imagine when I decided to write in English... Not only did I feel really stupid, thinking nobody would understand a word of what I've written... but since at that time I was reading FoF's story... let's just say I was always doing a comparison with his/her fanfic... which made me nervous because to me, FoF was WAAAAAYYYYYYY better than me. So I was sure I would suck in English and that I shouldn't be posting here if I didn't want others to laugh at me. At the very first beginning, when I posted my very first fic (in another forum)I was like :panic: when I got my first comment, waiting a whole day to read it, thinking it might be something like "your story sucks". So yeah, finally it was just saying I should keep going :nervous
So yeah, hoped this "short" personal story will help you to get more confidence! Coz seriously... I was more ridiculous than you in front of my screen at my first story ;)
By the way I kinda read your question to ShibuyaDokiDoki... and I know I shouldn't answer at her place, but just to tell, and help, you... when I was still new to the "fanfic" world, which mean I was around 14, I saw "lemon" on a forum and went "wtf is that". So I clicked, and... seeing there was still no explanation, I told myself I would read it because I wanted to know what it was. So at least, I will tell you so you will not be too much surprised like I was: "lemon" is a story where there is... sex. Like, where bed scenes are actually described... with more information than needed XD I was like traumatized to death.
SO YEAH BACK TO YOUR FIC. First, it is not bad. It is actually really great :theking YES, I'M SERIOUS! Plus... it's TakAcchan when you said you like KojiYuu better! :grin: Seriously, it's a nice story and I enjoyed reading it! You're great, you should write more and not be afraid too much to post your story. I don't know anybody here who would insult you or whatever because of your fics, especially when they are great :)
Don't say you are noob. Don't worry about thinking your stories are lame. You're still starting, but I'm sure you will surpass me someday... :nervous
And maaan... I write a lot! Hope it helps to smile a bit more when you know about my embarassing story XD And be confident about your skills... Coz you're great ;)
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You still don't believe be, do you? Tssss :smhid I WANT YOU TO BELIEVE ME :angry:
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Wow nice fanfic. I like it and it's Takacchan. Thank you so much for reading my fanfic. I'm a little bit scared to post it because I don't know anyone here and I don't know if it's good enough. Sure you can call me Xander :)
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Mari chan! Ah… you’re soooo cute :mon kissy: and sweet :mon cute: which I really like soo much :]
I will not forget the PM’s you’ve given me since it’s super cute :] Thanks soo much for your flattering words. I do hope that you’ll be one of my readers now… (haha :lol: :]) so that I could return the favor to you :thumbsup :] (Yey! Were both commenter and at the same time authors as well!! :mon XD:) Thanks soo much for the fics you’re writing! Don’t stop creating more, my lovable kohai (since you said that I'm 1 year older than you..) :] hehehe :]
What?! No, no! Your the cute one~
LOL but thanks~
Your so adorable with your yoyo emotics xD and I will not forget our happy PM times, either!!!
And yes, i have become a fan of yours :heart:
i lub it! i love your story! :deco: it made me laugh, thinking "She's smart to observe other's first, then writes her own."
BUT i really hated it when i saw "~END~" I'm here thinking "NO! I NEED MORE! RAWR!", and also didnt like how you didnt put enough commas. I COULNT CATCH MY BREATH (and i was reading in my head LOL). :nervous But, i hope you were actually April fooling us when you said tht, that would be your first and last fic.
YOU BETTER CONTINUE OR I'LL KILL MYSELF!
Good luck (: and I love you~ :cow:
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yooooooooo heyyy brotheeer.... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m036.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)
finally u also write a fanfict. thats great... :thumbsup :thumbsup to be honest i like your fanfict and thanks also for reading my fict ... :cow: :cow:
plus... thanks for the greeting... :P :P :P so could I get my present now? give me another fast update... :twisted: :lol: :lol:
oh yeah and about this.... PS.. Are you a guy? Just asking… hehehe :]
I leave it to your assumption... :lol: :lol: :lol: or u could ask mari-chan :grin: :grin: :grin:
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Yeah Takacchan!!! Cute and funny at the same time ^^ :twothumbs
Thx for reading my fic ^^
By the way it seems you are a really forceful person :)
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Hmm… am I missing someone? :mon dunno: I think I’m done…. :mon fyeah: Still contemplating… :mon dunno: I really think I’m missing someone… Hmmm….. Oh, does that person want to be mentioned in the first place? :mon slapass: Ok since that person is somewhat special to me… hehe :] :mon pick:
Pervja/ My Perverted Ninja (aka. Keichan ^_^)!! I want revenge :mon fierce: since you still haven’t made my life long wish and you said that you’ll create it but would PM it since younger readers might read it and you’re saying that I’m one of those young readers!! :mon fire: :mon mad: :mon headbang: :mon worklate: PERVJA!!! Where are you, huh? :scolding: I want to seek vengeance!! :on kimbo:
Hehe :] Anyway, I really do miss teasing you… :mon whimper: Since you’re not updating, I can’t do this anymore which is really part of my daily routine.. huhuhu… (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/bg00410.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=51&u=15955113) I really do miss you now… Oii!!! Update your fics!! But really, I’m happy that you posted your fic here since you’re fic was the reason why I suddenly like the Takacchan pair that much and you started the PERV :mon wtfmm: story that many admitted that they’re pervs out loud… tsk tsk tsk, :smhid :smhid and now you said that I’m a Yadong Freak!! Tsk tsk tsk… but really thanks soo much (Not the YADONG freak part!! :mon annoy:) :] I really like the Kojiyuu but decided to create my fic a Takacchan one :] So there Thanks soo much and show your ass :shakeit: already.. It’s been a long time since you’d post here :] ehehe :]
Hehe Yadong Freak! Deny it all you want but I can feel the lovin!!! Seeing that I get the LONGEST!!! amount of "lovel lovel" acknowledgement! :mon inluv: lol.. although half of it is calling me Pervja! Ergh as the almightly saying says "Keep it mean, keep them keen" ;) mwahahaha! Anywho yes I have been MIA for awhile but look I was nice enough to make time to come and abuse you back Ecchi-kun! And since you made your first fic a Takacchan one I'll just pretend its made to make me feel awesome!!! :mon fan: And you miss me how cute!!! I have that feeling where i want to pinch your cheeks! ahahahaha lol And updating....Maybe i'm secretly pming my updates to other members without you knowing.... :mon hobo:
well i'm busy working and when i come on here i edit dark-atrox stories for her! So...updating time is limited when i also take time to read other fanfics! hehehehe and the fact I don't know what to write about....and even if i write a bed scene...you are too young! mwahahahahahahha!!!!! :mon blblbl:
Anywho glad that you finally decided to write a fanfic.... maybe I should continue my MIAness and most likely the next time i return...this place will have MILLIONS!!!! of fanfics!!!!!!!!! Anywho I must go to the gym now! Back to my MIA lifestyle! ahaha making sure you cant seek revenge on me! JA!!! :mon slapass:
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Wow...Alexiel17...after posting tons of funny emoticons and comments...you finally graced us with your story! FINALLY! :w00t: :w00t:
You know, I'd vote for you as the official 'cheerleader' of the fanfic thread if ever there was a voting thingy in this thread. :lol: I don't know if it's the same with the other writers or readers here, but whenever you comment/ write a pm, it always brings a smile to my face. No seriously. And for that, I thank you for cheering me up with your monkey icons. Please always wave that girly pom-poms that you have and cheer us up. LMAO.
I get the whole first post/story nervousness that's going around. I get that too when I first posted my story. The first step is always the scary one. So that's totally normal. Props to you for overcoming it. I actually have to thank immo back then for taking her time not updating her fic in FF.net since that was the reason why I started writing a fic. :lol: I guess I got frustrated or something. :nervous
About your fic, I was seriously shocked that you wrote a TakaAchan since I was pretty sure you like KojiYuu. Guess times change eh? :) Your fic is actually pretty good for your first fic. I remember my first fic back in the good ol days in FF.net. Which for me was so terrible! They erased it because I got the rating wrong. Apparently, I wrote a sex scene in a chapter and forgot to change the rating to M instead of PG-13. Grrr. Such a loss since that was my freaking first fic and the comments left for me...ugh!! So sad... :cry: But regardless of how terrible my first fic was, the reviews, the threats and the people supporting me kept me to write more. I know you'll feel that too since a lot of people here will definitely support you. That'll definitely get you back to writing. :yep:
Anyway, with that out of the way...Do continue with your fic or write another one! Though I'm not a TakaAcchan fan nowadays...I'll be sure to read your fic. I'm actually curious to see what's inside that head of yours. Same goes with everyone...although I don't know much about the others since I've been in Hiatus. Still, I'm curious. Hopefully reading some of the fics here will renew my liking/love for the TakaAcchan pairing. I actually skimmed a few stories and...wow...almost every story written is TakaAcchan. The power of TakaAcchan is really powerful. :yep: :yep: They all look promising so here's hoping one or all of the fics would get me hooked on TakaAcchan once again. Seeing Haruna and Takamina choose the other as each others wives and seeing them perform one of my favorite song, 'Love Forever' REALLY isn't helping right now. XD I actually have the urge to write a fic about them. lol. Them and MariHaru. Double lol. But I think I'll do what Bou-j525 suggested about finishing POF first. :)
ANYWAY...I'll update mine before the week end. I'll update GODDAMMIT! NO ONE WILL EFFING STOP ME!!! NO ONE!! NOT EVEN MY BOSS WOULD STOP ME!! *Cue evil laugh* :twisted:
@Bou-j525: uhh...I honestly don't think my fic is waaaaaayyyy better...since whenever I read it I just cringe at the sappiness that i write since I'm really the opposite in real life. But...thanks for thinking that it is. I think yours is pretty awesome. :thumbsup
Oh God. I haven't babbled like that in awhile. Awww I suddenly miss going online. But...I think I'll save my babbling for writing. :lol:
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This video inspired me to write...... So en joy!!! :grin: :grin:
Touch My Body (Tuts My Barreh) / Karaoke Fail (English subtitles) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G7oGx2dImE8&feature=related#)
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YEAH, to write this!!!!! HEHEHEHEHEHE
So sorry, I'm feeling sooo random right now :pen_whirl: but I promise that I'll reply to all of your messages!!!! :onioncheer:
THANKS REALLY SOO MUCH EVERYONE!!!!!! :mon inluv: :mon XD: :onioncheer: I know that I'm still a noob but thanks soooooo much for all of your support!!!! :farofflook: :on gay: :mon angel:
I'm not really a showy type :sweat: but guys all of you are making me sooo happy that's why....... :on gay:
I LOVE YOU ALL!!! My Gawsh!! :shocked That's the first time I said that and I'm still really blushing right now!!! :inlove: :shy1: :shy2: I'm not really good with mushy things that's why (Sh*t still embarrass..... *face palm myself right now!!!) hehehe :mon sweat:
Umm... since this is the month of April, it's technically the month of PRANKS!!! :mon determined: Hahaha, :lol: :lol: so sorry that some of you might think of me updating but really, I didn't prank you out last April 1 so I'm doing it right now... :mon XD: hehehe :on lol:
(I thin some of you might kill me now..... hehehe ) :hiakhiakhiak:
PS. YEY!!! :on woohoo: Since I Have My Own Fic here, I can now post weird things here :wahaha: (hehehehe, now you'll know how random I am :kekeke:)
Hehehehe, I shoulda put a warning before I created my own fic here!!!! :sweat: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! :wahaha: :wahaha:
Ei, as my title implies (haphazard fics) then this will be really Random, Disorganized, Chaotic, etc.. anything that synonymous with that.... hehehe :on gay:
BUT THANKS SOO MUCH I'M REALLY SOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOW, I'M GONNA DIE!!!!!! :mon mad: :mon mad:
Just to add, I'm really soooooooo happy right now :farofflook: 'cuz I have no failing marks which means I have no summer class!!!!!!!! :on woohoo: :wahaha: :on gay: The best part of is that I can write my fics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :on gay: :on GJ: :mon star: (that is, if I'm inspired enough.... :wahaha: Hehehehe :mon dance: :lol: :lol:)
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Dark-atrox san! My friend! (Do you considered me as your friend too? Ahehe… ) But really, your fics are so incredible; I don’t know what to say. Umm... You are important to me since you’re the first to leave me a PM… huhuhu I’m so plain… huhuhu… No really, thanks for giving my comment a damn… Yeah! Thanks really for all your fic… Like all the other Authors here, waiting for Updates!!! :]
No, I don't consider you as a friend! :smhid :smhid :smhid not at all :thumbdown:
LOL Kidding, of course you baka! :lol: We're all friends here :twothumbs
Saying I'm important to you made me blush, XD Joking but i was deeply move by those words XD
It's really nice of you to finally share one of your fics XD (ahem, despite of ur busy sched, totally understand, been there :catglare:)
Well, while you're excited writing fics now, I'm the total opposite :nervous
Kinda lost interest in writing, I dunno why. And kei-chan was nice forcing encouraging me to continue writing XD
PS: U update soon, u little saru-chan! ;)
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Sorry guys it took me sooo long to create another fic :fainted: ‘cuz I find it difficult to write…. :err: Well, I do have many stories inside my head right now but I really dunno how to put it into words since I’m still a beginner…. :banghead: Sorry again guys…. :cry: :cry: T.T (OhMiGaaaa!!! Am I having writers block!? :shocked That’s too early, and to think that I’m just an aspiring writer…. Tsk tsk tsk…. :smhid :smhid :smhid )
Anyway, I just decided to write something since if I’m not mistaken, yesterday 2 days ago... :smhid was the birth of Takahashi Minami sama!!! :on BDay: (I squeezed/banged my head so hard (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/th/cz3411.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=67&u=15955113) so that I could write this up…. :temper:) Argh!!! :mon mad: Why can I not write my blasted stories!!!!!! :mon ghost: I wanna kill myself!!! :mon fire:
This was what really happened to me before I’d post this here….. (It’s full of SSP’s so if you really don’t wanna read this part, its ok :])
Well, I tried to finish this story the day before Takamina sama’s b-day but I failed since, well, on her b-day was our clearance day that’s why I really need to sleep early so that I’ll come to school and blah blah blah :mon pissed: (you don’t need to know since it’s all about school…) So, there, the next day (on her b-day) I woke up early (since my house is kinda far from where I study…) and went to school. I talked with my friend like it’s been a long time since we hadn’t met (you don’t wanna know how long we’d talk….. :mon sweat: hehe :]) And really, since my way to school is very long (it takes me 2 hours to travel:] :shocked ) I got home, finally. And when I was at home, I cannot believe that “it” happened…. There was no electricity! :mon cweepy: And was like in a WTF :mon scare: mode! It was like God was against me for writing this fic. Then today, when I was typing, the bell rang and I (almost) forgot that my friend is coming over. (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/th/kermit10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=74&u=15955113) So there, I was like fast typing this that’s why I’m not really contented with this….. So sorry it’s not a good fic…. Huhuhuhuhu T_T I'm really so sorry... T.T :fainted:
Title: My Gift For You Is… (♥Takacchan♥)
I’m still wondering what’s been bothering you since today is your special day. I really don’t know what to do to you since you seem to be in deep thought of something. I don’t really know what I’m feeling right now since, well, I decided to give you something for your birthday. I really do hope that you’ll like it. Well, I’m sure you’ll like it……
We are currently having our break since we’re filming for our Akbingo episode. Well, I didn’t expect that I would catch up with the filming since I’m doing another show but I insist my manager to join you afterwards since I wanted to greet you, cross that, I really wanted to see you.
I hadn’t had the time to greet you since I’m really worked up yesterday and just this morning, I’m full of work. Even if I’m tired right now, I want to see you since you might be mad at me because I haven’t talk to you yet.
I’m currently with Miichan, talking to her about her failed surprise party for you. She’s was happy that I’m here but she’s still disappointed because her planned party was no longer a surprise because some of the staffs were acting a little weird and you found out why. I just laughed when she was doing tantrums since she said that she planned this for a long time now but it just failed like that. Just to repay for their mistake, the staff allowed us to have our free time afterwards that’s why everyone was so happy about it. Now Miichan is happier than ever, acting cool like she’s the reason for all of it.
Anyway, when I took a quick look at you, you seem to bit lonely even if you have that smile on your face. I know that something is off with you today; I just don’t know what ‘that’ is. As I excused myself from Miichan and was about to approach you, the other members, whom I don’t remember talking to that much, greeted you happily and gave you something. Maybe a present? Oh, nice thinking Acchan. What can they give her other than a present? I just slightly faced palmed myself for being such an airhead. Oh no, did Minami just glanced this way? Did she just saw me? I felt m y face turning hot because of embarrassment or maybe because our eyes met.
Well, you haven’t looked at me even once while we were taping the show; we weren’t even sitting close together. I’m sitting next to Miichan and you were sitting with those girls you are currently talking with. If I could just recall their names then maybe I could just enter your little conversation and just shove them away so that I could talk with you alone.
I really don’t know what I’m feeling right now since, well, it should be me who’s talking to you, or Am I being possessive?
As I was looking at you, Miichan interrupted me in my deep thinking.
“Ei Acchan? Still unsure about your feelings towards our Birthday girl?” She said wiggling her brows on me.
“Miichan, what are you talking about? What feelings?” I said smiling at her.
“Hmmm… deny it all you want. We all know that you just wanted to see our little captain when you should really be resting right now.” Miichan said holding her chin like she’s testing me or something.
“I’m just worried that she might be angry with me since it’s already in the evening and almost everyone greeted her already but I haven’t greeted her yet. And to think I’m her best friend.” I added.
“Best Friend huh? So what’s your gift for her anyway?” Miichan replied back grinning at me.
“Well, it’s a secret.” I told her still smiling.
“Well, whatever your plan is, I hope you’ll still be loyal to me since I’m your wife” She winks at me and went to where Haruna is.
As I was planning to get near you, the director said that the break is over. Oh bummer, just when I had the chance to talk with you. Oh well, there’s the party after all.
The taping finally ended and everyone was preparing for the party. They decided to have a little party on the set since it’s a bit spacious. Some of the fans even gave you some gifts and sang you a birthday song. You look so happy that’s why I think I was wrong judging you that you’re lonely awhile ago.
Anyway, I was still looking for a chance to talk to you alone but that’s really impossible since everyone is approaching and greeting you non stop. I don’t know, but I can’t really go to where you are. What’s wrong with me? I think I’m just really tired. Yes, I’m just tired and nothing more. Maybe right after the party, I’ll find the right opportunity to give you my gift. I really do hope so…
The part ended and Yuko along with the rest of the girls wanted to have another party for Minami since we are free all night. Obviously, the younger members aren’t allowed with the said party since Yuko was, well, the one who planned it. Minami was just smiling at them and to my surprise; she apologized and said she will not come since she wants to get some sleep. I also told them that I too, needed some sleep. Now Yuko is looking at us with that know smile of hers.
“Oh, Minami and Acchan are going to do something together. You don’t need to lie to us, you know. I think the both of you will have a nice nap together since you’ll share the same bed. I wish I could watch you two d~ Ouch!” Yuko was cut of by Haruna by hitting her head hard. As for me, I giggled, hoping that they wouldn’t notice that I really am craving for it. I looked at Minami, she was really blushing and was about to protest but she was cut of by Sae.
“Yuko, since Minami is not going, are we still going to have that party of yours?” Sae asked Yuko, still wondering if they’ll have it since Minami declined.
“Oh, I see. So Sae, you want to spend your alone time with Sayaka, don’t you? Well, if that’s the case, then I’ll also spend my time alone with Nya nya instead. Nya nya, let’s continue what we were doing last night. I want to grope you mo~ Ouch!” Yuko was now crying since Haruna kept on hitting her head. Sae just shrugged with Yuko’s response.
Both I and Minami were laughing with the other members because of Yuko. She’s now giving us that look which is telling us that the party is really cancelled. Great, now I have my chance to talk with you alone, and to give you your present. Yey!
We said our goodbyes with the rest of the girls and now, I’m walking with Minami since our houses are quite close with each other.
“Ah, Acchan, if you don’t mind, can I come over to your house? That is, if you aren’t busy.” Minami surprised me with her question since I really do think that she really wants to sleep all night but she decided to spend the night in my house, with me, alone together! Somebody pinch me.
“Umm… is it ok with uncle and aunty since they might have prepared something for your birthday.” I said, just to cover up my squealing self inside.
“I just need to talk to you about something, about what I’m really feeling right now.” She said smiling at me. I really don’t know what but I’m sensing that your smile is kinda sad. I want to know what you want to say to me. I just want to make you happy, Minami…
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We were now inside my house. It’s quiet since nobody is around since mom went to my grandparents and father is always late to go home, sometimes he doesn’t go home since he works at night but anyway. We are sitting on the sofa. It’s really weird since Minami is quiet. Just to break the silence, I asked her what’s on her mind.
“Minami, Umm... What do you want to talk about?” I said smiling at her, hoping that she would answer me back. To my surprise, she hugged me tight and was crying really hard. I think that she was holding these tears back since she doesn’t want the others to see her crying. It really pains me to see her like this but I was glad that she’s starting to show her feelings to me after “that” happened.
“Minami, why are you crying?” I asked her again since I don’t know the reason behind her pains.
“I…. well, I think… I think that you’ll find me weird when I’ll tell you why I’m crying” She said, now facing me. Argh! Minami, why are you so cute when your crying.
“Well, whatever that is, I know that I’ll still accept you because, it’s your birthday!” I try to make her happy since I do like to see her crying but I’m not that cruel.
“Acchan, I find it hard to be happy on my birthday since you know that some people right now are… you know, because of what happened in our country. I don’t know what I’m feeling right now since, I don’t know. I feel a bit guilty if I’m happy especially after that catastrophe. I….” I can’t take it anymore since she’s so caring about everything. I know that all of us, Akb girls are doing our best to help our country. It is distressing to see in the news that we are still struggling, but time will help us especially that almost everyone around the world are helping us.
“You don’t find me weird? I know that if I tell it with the others, they might… I dunno, they would have the biggest shock of there lives.” She said now calming a bit.
“What are you talking about? They aren’t like that. They wouldn’t be surprise. I know that they’ll understand you Minami so please smile a bit. Aren’t you happy that all around the world are supporting us and helping us? You shouldn’t worry that much. Everyone is trying there best and for that, we should do the same.” I smiled at her and thank God she’s smiling at me, a smile without a trace of sadness, just pure happiness like an innocent smile.
“Thanks Acchan. That helped me so much.” She’s said while wiping her tears. Then I suddenly remember about something. This is my chance to give it to her. I smiled at her even more and I know that I will be able to give her my gift. I hope you’ll like it……..
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How was it? :dunno: Hehehe, sorry guys but I really dunno what the “gift” is, so I leave it all to your imaginations :] hehe… Sorry that this is really lousy since a lot of things happened to me while I'm doing this… :scared: (And to think that right now it’s already April 10 and it’s 3 in the morning…. *sigh* I don’t want to sleep yet…. :mon wind: I’m actually a bit melancholic right now…. )
Yey! Finally, I’m gonna reply with all of your amazing messages :] hehehe :] :w00t:
pretend_2besome1 san! Thanks soo much for your comment. :mon inluv: I was really afraid that nobody would like it, but after reading your comment (for several times… hehe :grin: :]) I was really sooooo happy :wriggly: (now I’m feeling so fly :mon angel: :]). Thanks soo much! Hope that you’ll read my upcoming fics :] I really do appreciate that you find my fic a funny one :] Thanks soo much :] My first commenter, I will remember you :] Wanna kiss you right now… *kisu* :] :on slopkiss:
yourstruly san! Thanks so much for the message! :grin: :mon XD: I really was blushing since you read my fic :monk gboy: :] Thanks soo much :] :mon cute:
Umm… about the mysterious thingy, it’s not really in a murderous Aura :mon wtfmm: or in a negative way. I think you really are mysterious since when you post your story, you were like someone who’s difficult to talk to, but I was really wrong… hehehe :nervous :] But for me you are still mysterious since I really think you give that kind of Aura :] Sorry, not really good at explaning things... :mon sweat: hehehe I'm also confused... :mon huh2: hehehe
Anyway, I really need to apologize ‘cuz I’m still reading your fic from the very beginning :panic: (just like what I’m currently doing with the other fics here.. :panic:) Ok, I’ll confess, I have an Alzheimer’s disease, ok. :mon scare: I can’t even recall names and birthdays easily, that’s why my friends are always mad at me when I forget their b-days…. (So, I somewhat made Acchan a bit similar with me in this fic… hehe.. :grin: :grin: ) Pls. do kill me now!! :mon POd:
That’s mainly the reason why I haven’t comment about the fics here… So sorry about that… You really can kill me if you want… I’m sad….. T.T :cry: :cry:
Xander san! Thanks so much for reading this lousy fic of mine… :) I really do appreciate it :] Anyway, I’m happy for the incredible fics you are posting :] Thanks really for letting me call you Xander! :mon XD: Anyway, you shouldn’t be scared to post your fic. I believe thet nobody here will hate your fic since they’re amazing :twothumbs :] But really, if you saw someone saying that I’m a Yadong and such, that is not true. She just lost her marbles, :lol: that’s it… :rofl: hehehe (points at Pervja!)
Can I ask? Are you a guy? Hehe just wondering :] How many questions will I ask... ehehe :] :nervous :nervous
sorakamiya san! Hehe.. :grin: thanks for leaving me a comment :] Thanks so much for welcoming me into the circle… (Circle of Authors) even if I’m just a SELF PROCLAIMED AUTHOR!! hehehe :] :twothumbs :mon ignore:
About my question if you were a guy or a girl, I was thinking that you’re a hermaphrodite instead that’s why you’re not saying your gender :mon butt: :p but just noticed the comments that were given to you on your b-day, yeah so you’re a girl :gmon bang: :on cny1: (I was planning something, that’s why I’m asking for it… hehe it’s a secret since I dunno if I can do it… yet.... Whatever that is.... :grin: hehe :])
kahem san! Thanks so much for the comment!! :lol: I’m so happy that I’m soo loved here :monk gboy: (unlike in the real world, nobody gives a damn about me even if I’m a happy person… *sob sob* :err: :mon POd:)
Anyway, thanks really for saying that my fic is cute :mon cute: and funny :mon lmao: (nobody says that I’m cute that much… :mon sweat: huhuhuhu :gyaaah:) and really, I should be the one saying Thank you for reading my story :bow: :] hehehe :] :lol:
By the way it seems you are a really forceful person :)
About that, well, umm… ehehe, I’m not really forceful, maybe, a little :] hehehe :] :on gay:
bou-j525 san! Your story did inspire me… :D Yeah, it left a big grin on my face while I was reading :shy1: it since I was LOL :rofl: when you said that you (almost) screamed my name :sweat: and your friends where like O.o who? :rofl: I was soo imagining it :lol: :] hehehe thanks soo much… Your words are so flattering :] Thanks soo much for telling me also your embarrassing story :] Even if the others would read it too :] hehehe :lol: :lol:
By the way I kinda read your question to ShibuyaDokiDoki... and I know I shouldn't answer at her place, but just to tell, and help, you... when I was still new to the "fanfic" world, which mean I was around 14, I saw "lemon" on a forum and went "wtf is that". So I clicked, and... seeing there was still no explanation, I told myself I would read it because I wanted to know what it was. So at least, I will tell you so you will not be too much surprised like I was: "lemon" is a story where there is... sex. Like, where bed scenes are actually described... with more information than needed XD I was like traumatized to death.
Ummm… Ah. Thanks so much for answering my question (when in fact it should be ShibuyaDokiDoki san… hehehe :lol: :]) ummm… actually, you are too late since umm… :mon sweat: I’d already read a couple of lemons already (and guess who the Author was?) Obviously, it’s ShibuyaDokiDoki san….. You don’t wanna know what I looked like after I read something like that…. :mon blood: No I don’t look like a perverted stalker or something…. For real…. I don't! :rofl: Hahaha :]
Mari chan! Awww!! :nya: Aren’t you a cutie…. :mon innocent: I’m blushing right now…. :shy2: So sorry that I haven’t commented on you fics right now since I’m doing something :nervous (Yeah, rereading some fics before I comment… Yes, you can say that I’m trying to change who I am… hehehe :nervous :])
Anyway, thanks so much for pointing my mistakes… :mon ignore: So sorry if you’re still catching your breath after reading this ‘cuz, well, umm… I’m quite sleepy right now…. Hehehe :] :nervous
So sorry, had no time to check this either… I hope you’ll forgive me… T_T :mon cry:
But, i hope you were actually April fooling us when you said tht, that would be your first and last fic.
YOU BETTER CONTINUE OR I'LL KILL MYSELF!
Yes, I was just April fooling you guys since I posted this here :] hahaha :] :grin: You don’t need to kill yourself ‘cuz I wouldn’t allow it in the first place :] :hee:
Thanks so much Mari chan for making a fics for me… I wanna kiss you :mon kissy: :] Sorry, still embarrass for saying the 3 words…….................... I ♥ U too :wub: :mon ignore: :] (I said that, but still a bit embarrassed… :roll: :mon sweat:)
Keichan/ PERVJA!!! You are not special, ok… :mon wtfmm: After calling me a YADONG FREAK which is not true!!! Oh, btw, I didn’t like the latest chapter saying that it’s “someone’s”
partial lifelong dream which you obviously referring that someone to be ME!!! :mon headbang:
You are always destroying my image :smhid (now the new readers and authors will think ill of me… :( Mari chan, Pervja is speaking in tongues!! :mon mad: ) They are all lies!!! :scolding: Huhuhuhuhu… :gyaaah: I’m really a bit sad right now ‘cuz something bad happened to me… You’re making me sadder… huhuhu… :cry:
Continue your MIAness and I’m sure you’ll regret that since maybe instead of posting our fics here, we're PMing it instead and you’re not included there :] bleeeee :mon blblbl:
After seeing that my idol replied I was like…. OMIGAWSH!!!!! :banghead: :banghead: I really am loved :panic: :] I’m so sooooo happy :] :panic: :panic: :mon fire:
FoF sama! :bow: :bow: You don’t know how happy I am when you replied!!! :w00t: :w00t: I feel like I was in paradise or something! I’m sooo sooo love by all of you here :] I’m soo happy… :) :inlove:
Anyway, thanks soo much for sharing your funny story. I was like LOL :rofl: while reading it (and I do hope that you’ll let me read it too :]) Thanks so much for the encouragement :] You are the one of the many reasons why I'd written a story despite of you long MIAness.. I really do hope that you’ll update your POF as soon as you can FoF sama!!! :] :mon angel:
I do hope that you’ll like my fics since it’s Takacchan… hehehe :grin: :] Thanks soo much… :] Don't worry, I still love my Koji♥Yuu :] :twothumbs
dark-atrox san! My friend! :) :] thanks so much for even bothering to post a comment here :bow: :] It’s been a while since you updated that’s why I’m happy :] :mon fyeah:
Well, while you're excited writing fics now, I'm the total opposite :nervous
Kinda lost interest in writing, I dunno why. And kei-chan was nice forcing encouraging me to continue writing XD
I’m NOT really inspired to write a story since I don’t know how to write it… truly gomenasai for it……. T.T :fainted: :kneelbow: And I think I need to thank Pervja (even if I don’t want to…) because she pushed you to write…. Hmm… can I do the same to you? :] :onionwhip:
I find it entertaining that the both of you are chatting on fb.. haha :grin: :lol: :] it’s cute :mon heh: (but if you ask me, I don’t wanna join you since you two are pervs… :mon lmao: hehehe :]) Just joking…. Or am I? :mon dunno: :mon suspect: Hehehe :]
To all who read and left a thank you post, Thanks so much for loving AKB48!!! Keep on supporting them pls.!!! :] Thanks so much for reading this too :] hehehe :]
PS. Since I’m a noob, how do you change the title or to even modify it? :nervous :nervous Pls. I need to know…. :] Thanks soo much :] :mon inluv:
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Another TakAcchan? Awesome! :D
You're welcome and I am reading it now :)
Takamina is so kind.
To me this is a nice light reading, and you keep the funny bits in this fic too which I like
I hope you get the motivation and inspiration needed for creating more fics, because I like what you've written so far :thumbsup
PS. you can change the thread title by modifying Subject of the post you made for this thread.
Ex: go click the modify button on the first post you made in this (your) thread and change your current Subject "My haphazard fics :p – alexiel17 :]" into the thread title you want. It's the same the next time you want to change it again. If you're still confused and my explanation is unclear, feel free to ask more.
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Keichan/ PERVJA!!! You are not special, ok… :mon wtfmm: After calling me a YADONG FREAK which is not true!!! Oh, btw, I didn’t like the latest chapter saying that it’s “someone’s”
partial lifelong dream which you obviously referring that someone to be ME!!! :mon headbang:
You are always destroying my image :smhid (now the new readers and authors will think ill of me… :( Mari chan, Pervja is speaking in tongues!! :mon mad: ) They are all lies!!! :scolding: Huhuhuhuhu… :gyaaah: I’m really a bit sad right now ‘cuz something bad happened to me… You’re making me sadder… huhuhu… :cry:
Continue your MIAness and I’m sure you’ll regret that since maybe instead of posting our fics here, we're PMing it instead and you’re not included there :] bleeeee :mon blblbl:
ERGH!!! Hmmph! :mon annoy:
I don't like you anymore! :mon runcry:
I was nice enough to write out of my comfort zone for you and finally dedicate a ecchi-ish chapter for you and then you're unappreciative of it and say that i make you sad :mon cry:
You are mean! and then you accuse me and dark-atrox of being pervs!
:mon uggh: BAH! so mean!!! no more updates for you yadong! :mon wtfmm:
(P.S Although I enjoyed your update I'm not talking to you!)
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sorakamiya san! Hehe.. :grin: thanks for leaving me a comment :] Thanks so much for welcoming me into the circle… (Circle of Authors) even if I’m just a SELF PROCLAIMED AUTHOR!! hehehe :] :twothumbs :mon ignore:
About my question if you were a guy or a girl, I was thinking that you’re a hermaphrodite instead that’s why you’re not saying your gender :mon butt: :p but just noticed the comments that were given to you on your b-day, yeah so you’re a girl :gmon bang: :on cny1: (I was planning something, that’s why I’m asking for it… hehe it’s a secret since I dunno if I can do it… yet.... Whatever that is.... :grin: hehe :])
heeeeeeeeeeey..... nice fict there... :thumbsup :thumbsup like the story but it not too long. :( make it longer next time... :grin: :grin: aaaaaaaaand.... I'm not hermaphrodite :smhid :smhid :smhid i'm just to lazy to change my profile... :P :P now u already know my gender.... XD but what will u do to mee... :shocked :shocked
oh yeah, and by the way where is my present??? :smhid :smhid my b'day is a week before takamina so i also should get a present... :grin: :grin: :grin:
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What could this gif be? Acchan wanted to be alone with Takamina tin order to give her? Oh... Maybe... Hehehehe :grin:
You're welcome but you don't need to thank me and just call me kahem the "san" is euh how to say that? lol ^^
Hum I don't know, in real life I imagnie as someone who is always happy and often jump of happiness ^^'
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Bwahaha you're slowly forgetting about KojiYuu, don't you? I am a KojiYuu fan too though TakAcchan is slowly taking more place in my life... Just joking, I'm glad you create a new TakAcchan fanfic :)
There was no electricity! :mon cweepy:
:lol: :rofl: :lol: :rofl:
I'm sorry, but this is just TOO funny XD XD XD It's like "omg wtf poor alexiel" XD
But yeah, thank for the update! Hope you'll post some others someday... and that it will be easier for you to write them XD
And about the gift... unlike some others perverts out there, I'm just thinking about something cute from Acchan to Takamina ^^
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wow!!!!!
you already made two stories!!! you're great!!!!
i read the first one... the second one.. saved!!! :D
kinda busy!
thanks for the message! :cow:
write more! :D
thanks!!!!
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OHMIGAWSH!!! :mon scare: Is this another fic coming from me!!! :shock: (Ah, yes it is… :nervous sigh… :mon wind: ) Sorry about that, I suddenly decided to create another fic…. Yeah, it’s still Takacchan ‘cuz someone wants me to update a fic (just to please that person…. I created this fic…) for her belate b-day as a belaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeed gift... (Yes I’m talking about Sorakamiya san. She’s a forceful person, isn’t she? Ehehehe :]) Sorry Sorakamiya san, this might not satisfy you (even a bit) but I really squeezed and :mon headbang: my head so hard just to create this belaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeed gift for you (just to stop you for pressuring me about it… ehehe :grin:)… I hope that this is enough for you for your belaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeed b-day. I think I need to stop my hyperness…. :mon roll: Ehehehe… :nervous Sorry about that… :nervous
Why do I feel like many are starting to hate me…? :mon ref: I hope that feeling is not true ‘cuz it will pain me so much….
Anyway, I was about to create a Kojiyuu fic but anyway….. (hahaha :]) But really, since I really like to write fluffy things and obviously since the Kojiyuu are more likely “the infinity and beyond” kinda level… (Ohmigawsh! Why can I not say they’re in a lemony/ make out stage instead…. )
Warning! This is not really long, :smhid for those who likes reading loooooooong stories, (especially Sorakamiya san :smhid :smhid) be warned…. wat a crazy warning.... :smhid
This part is full of another SSP’s so….
This is another NG since I just thought about it when something gross happened. The gross thing that happened to me were my parents since they aren’t really a showy type (just like me :on GJ:) but they’d surprised me :shocked (and my sisters :wahaha:) when they started dancing when they played an oldies song. I was tempted to do that → (http://i25.servimg.com/u/f25/15/95/51/13/th/cz2910.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=91&u=15955113) (Can’t really remember the song, and I don’t want to! EVER!! :mon wtfmm:) Luckily, I was in the kitchen when that happened. That’s why I’m saved…. I’m saved! :mon angel:
So there, I hope some of you would still bother to read this….
Title: That’s Why I’m Here For You. (♥Takacchan♥) Ah, soo cheesy… :on freeze:
Umm.. What was it again? Sorry I didn’t really hear you that well. Umm.. Acchan, you want me to what? To close my eyes? I hope that when I did close my eyes you’re not going to do something stupid...… or not….
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I’m inside Acchan right now……..
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NO! THAT’S NOT IT! I’m umm… Ah! Come on, Minami, don’t think of it in another way.
Argh! I’m talking to myself again. Well technically, I’m talking to my conscience.
What I’m really trying to say is that I’m currently inside Acchan’s house. Damn. Why can I not think straight? Is it because we’re both alone together? What am I even afraid about it anyway?
We’re just friends, to begin with…...
“Minami, what are you thinking about?” She asked, poking my face which made me blush.
“Umm… really, it’s nothing…umm… why do you wanna watch a movie anyway” I replied back hoping that she’ll not mind about the “haphazard” things inside my head right now.
“Umm… Isn’t it you who decided that we’ll watch a movie in the first place” Nice going Minami, now what will I say?
“Umm, what I meant was umm, what do you wanna watch since I’m just your guest here.” I said a bit embarrassed.
“Hmm… how about this one?” She said handling me the cd which is obviously about love or something because of the cover.
“Ok…” That’s the only thing I said since I don’t want to embarrass myself again.
I put the cd in the player and then sat on the couch near her.
Well obviously, I was bored watching those kinds of flick since I like action movie more but to see her reaction while watching it, kinda makes me smile. No my dear conscience, I’m not watching her this whole time. Well what can I do? She’s really cute; I’m more entertained watching her. Anyway, she’s so rapt up in the movie that’s why she might not notice me looking at her. Great! I can watch her all I want! Come on, not in a perverted way. Like in a friendly way? Is there such thing?
1 and a half hour later……
Ahhh! The movie is so cheesy, I’m gonna die. Can you believe that? The actor said that “he’ll love the main actress forever and they’ll be together even if the whole world would end” Argh! I don’t know why Acchan looks like she’s captivated with those words.
Oh, just great. Just like in any typical love story, they would kiss like they’d never seen each other for a long time. Yuck! And now they’re kissing passionately and I, just to save myself, I covered my eyes with my hands. I can’t take it anymore. It’s so embarrassing to watch those things.
“Minami. Why are you acting like that? You just turned 20 just a few days ago but you’re acting like a kid.” She said with a confused look on her face.
“Well, I just can’t take watching those things. Is it over?” I asked her if the “kiss” is done and I’m hoping that the entire movie is over too.
“Yes.” She said, with an unentertained voice. What did I do? She suggested it.
“Well, you could have said that you don’t want to watch this in the first place.”
Whoa! Did she just read my mind or something? Ok, so now she’s mad at me.
“Well, how can I decline? This is your house and that’s your player.” I responded back. Well, I have a point right? Why am I feeling that even my conscience disagrees with me?
“And I thought that you’re starting to open up with me.” She pouts without even facing me. Now I’m feeling guilty.
“I thought you know that I hate such cheesy things. And it’s really embarrassing to watch people kissing.” I said with a blush on my face.
She surprised me when she giggled. I don’t know if she finds me funny but for me, it really is embarrassing to watch or to even read a make out thingy between two lovers. I think it should be in done privately or something.
“Minami, Can I ask? Aren’t your parents umm.. Sometimes a bit lovey-dovey?” I really don’t know what to say since that’s the main reason why I’m here.
“Please, don’t remind me about it.” I face palmed myself for remembering that today is their ‘special’ day together. “You want me to be open, Ok I’ll tell you. Today is the Wedding Anniversary of my parents. That’s why they aren’t around.” I added.
“That’s the main reason why you’re here, right?” I do want to disagree wit her but, she’s right. But isn’t she happy that I’m with her since her parents aren’t around too. And we’re all alone. Together… O.O
“Because my house is near yours, that’s another factor, I presume.” She added which made me feel guiltier.
“I dunno, but my feet automatically went to where your house is and my finger pressed your doorbell when I’m right in front of your door, that’s why…” I said in a murmured voice, hoping that she’ll not hear me.
“Hmm… Well, it’s really ok with me since, well, you’re Minami after all.” She laughed at me. I really want to give up. She’s such a bipolar sometimes.
“Hmm.. since you don’t want to watch cheesy movies and almost every movies we have here are more on romance, what do you want to do next?” She asked me with a smile on her face.
“Umm… how about a game?”
“What kind of game?” Is she somewhat disappointed? Never mind.
“I dunno?” I replied.
“How about Chees?”
“What! Do you know how to play that?”
“Umm… Oh, I know. How about a board game?”
“Umm… I’m not really good with those.”
“Mmm… How about a truth or dare game?”
“That’s the worse game ever.”
“Ohh, you’re just too scared about the questions I’m going to ask you or are you more afraid of the dares, hmm Minami.” Oh my gosh. Is she just testing me or what?
“You know, I think you’re spending too much time with Miichan. That’s not a good thing.” I said just to make her laugh but she’s looking at me like she’s gonna kill me.. Another failed attempt from me….
“Ok, ok.. Please don’t get mad. Let’s just play your truth and dare game. Sheesh, you’re scary sometimes.” Wow! It worked. Now she’s smiling. Oh wait, is it me or does her smile has that evil feeling with it? I’m so dead….
I’m wondering why she went to her kitchen after I agreed to play that blasted game. Who ever created that game is so dead.
I decided to follow her since I’m too curious to know what she’s up to.
“Acchan, what are you doing?” I her asked while walking in their kitchen.
“You wanna help?”
“What are you doing? Is it…..” I didn’t finish what I was about to say when I saw her mixing and combining things in a large glass. Oh no.
“This is for our dare. What do you think?” I’m still a bit shock since it’s so gross. Are we going to drink that? Eww…
“Acchan, that’s too gross. You know what you’re doing, right?”
“Well, if you don’t like to drink this, there’s a substitute for it.” She smiled at me like she’s been planning this for a long time. I’m shaking right now.
“Umm… and what’s the substitute?” I asked just to cover up my nervousness
“You’ll find out later.” Woah! Is she already expecting me to lose this game? I wouldn’t agree with that.
“Ok you’re on.” I said, challenging her.
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We both went to her living room and are now seated on the floor. We put her ‘masterpiece’ in the middle, ‘inspiring’ us to do our best.
“So here’s the mechanics of the game. We’ll use this two dice and who’ll ever get the lowest number will be the first to do the truth or dare game.” Umm… I don’t know where she got the dice but I think she really is prepared for this game.
Umm… what if someone constantly gets the lowest number? That would be cruel, don’t you think?”
“Well, that’s her fate. We can’t do anything about it, right?”
“You’re quite cruel. What’s gotten into you?”
“Stop talking. Just roll the dice already.” Forceful much? Ok, I hope for a twelve, or even an eleven. I hope I’ll win.
“Haha! Sweet victory for me!” I said since I got an eleven. There’s a little chance that she’ll get a twelve.
“My turn. Oh, what do you know? I got a twelve. So Minami, truth or dare?”
This is not happening. She got two six in one try. Pure damn luck.
“Are you sure that your dice is not cheating? Maybe it has a sensor or something that’s why when it’s my turn, it would…”
“Shush! Just choose already. Truth or dare?”
“Ok, truth.”
“Have you fallen in love with anyone in Akb48?” That question was a bit dangerous. Is she kidding me?
“No. Of course not.” I answered her seriously.
“You’re lying.”
“What! How did you know that I’m lying? Wait, I was about to ask more about the mechanics of the game but then you..”
“I’m gonna roll the dice now.” She said while getting the dice in front of her. Why does she keep on cutting me off? What did I do? I just told her the truth.
“You cut me off again.” I continued what I was about to say.
“I got a 7. Your turn.” She said without even minding me at all.
“Ok here I go.” I threw the dice hoping that I would surpass her. “Yes! I got an 8! Now it’s your turn. Truth or da~”
“Truth.” What the? I haven’t finished my question yet. You’ll pay for it Acchan.
“Since you said truth, are you happy that I’m here with you right now?” It’s kinda lousy but I somewhat want to hear her answer.
“Yes, but after finding out the reason why you went here….. I’m not that happy at all. You just didn’t want to take your responsibility as an older sister.” What? Am I not a responsible leader to the team already? I am a responsible sister but I just don’t want to be at home. I don’t know why but something is telling me that you need my company.
“But Acchan, my older sister is there so she can take care of my younger siblings. And besides, I don’t really want to be at home right now since… Ah, never mind. I’m gonna throw the dice now.
“Minami, you haven’t told me everything yet.”
“What? But you constantly cut me off that’s why…”
“I’m really jealous that you have a lot of siblings unlike me. I have an older sister but…” She said with a trace of sadness in her voice. That shocked me a bit hearing that Acchan is not an only child? Well, she never told us about her family.
“But?” I asked her, more curious than ever.
“Throw the dice already, Minami.” She said, trying to smile. It still bothers me but I think my hunch is right since I feel that she does need me right now.
We played the truth or dare game for quite some time now but I still haven’t asked her about her sister or anything. Well, we drank a bit of her ‘masterpiece’ when we lose with one another and surprisingly, it doesn’t taste that bad but it still looks awful. I think there’s nothing more of it left. Pity I want more of it.
“Minami, why aren’t you asking about my…sis… umm.. family when I choose truth?”
“Well, let’s say that it’s not right to ask something which is too personal, especially if you don’t wanna tell it to me to begin with.”
“Why are you so kind, Minami? That’s the reason why almost everyone teases you.”
“Ha. What can I do? I’m such a goody-goody person.” I replied just to make her laugh a bit.
“You know, my sister was the reason why I wanted to be an idol.”
“Ah, I’m glad to her that. So she’s the reason why we’ve met. Umm… What’s her name?”
“Kamiya. Kamiya nee-san”
“Ah, why don’t you introduce her to all of us?” She just smiled to my question.
“If we aren’t busy that much, then I’ll introduce her to everyone.”
“Why are you keeping her away from us, hmm?”
“You know, Minami, this day is a special day for her too, just like for your parents.”
“Oh, can I meet her now? Is she busy?”
“I haven’t told it with anyone yet, but today is her…” She’s somewhat uncomfortable about it. I think I shouldn’t let her talk about her sister after all. Maybe she noticed me that I’m a little worried with her right now.
“Today is my nee-sans death anniversary.” She said with a small smile on her face. I can tell that she’s about to cry. All I can do is comfort her. I held her hand and closed my eyes.
“Minami, what ~” I smiled at her, still closing my eyes.
“Umm… Kamiya nee-san, arigatou for taking care of my dear Acchan. I do wish that you’re ok wherever you are. Thanks again for making me met Acchan. I hope that you’ll accept me as her best friend too. And I’ll promise you that I’ll take care of her even if the whole world ends ‘cuz she’s important to me. Umm…. For everything else, thanks so much.” Well, let’s just say that I prayed for her and thanked her at the same time. I really do wish that I’d meet her but at least Acchan told me about her. Obviously, she loves her just as her sister loves her back.
“Minami, I’m really happy that you’re here with me. The truth is, I went to her grave this morning and prayed. I even cried since I missed her so much. Thanks so much Minami.” She said while wiping her tears away with her hand. I just notice that I’m still holding her other hand. I gently remove my hand from hers. Why am I missing the warmth of her hand?
“Ah. If you want, we could go there sometime, since it’s a bit dark right now. It’ll be dangerous if we went outside.” I said and she nodded. Oh my gosh, she’s too cute… Minami, control yourself.
“Umm… is it ok if I’ll clean my face first before we continue the game?” She asked me, still having that smile on her face.
“Uh, sure.. If there’s anything I could do, just call me, ok?” I responded back.
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When she returned, she looks more stunning as ever. I don’t know why but she looks… incredible since her hair was a bit umm… wet. Oh nononononno… Minami! Get a hold of yourself… Breath, breath… Then what? Umm.. Act cool. Yeah act natural.
“Minami, umm… is there something on my face? You’re somewhat looking at me umm…”
“Wha? No, there’s nothing wrong with your face. You’re actually beau~ I mean you alright now?” Shit! I almost slipped.
“Yes. Thanks so much.” Oh, why is she blushing? She’s making me a bit shy too.
“So where were we again? Is it my turn?” She said and sat next to me. Oh, no. O.O
“Yes. Your turn.” I said like I’m a robot or something. I really can’t look at her that’s why I look like a complete loser right now.
“Hmm.. I got 8. Now it’s your turn.” She poked me again on the face ‘cuz I’m obviously not aware of my surroundings. Ok. Minami. I can beat her this time. You can do it. I wasn’t really concentrating that much ‘cuz I’m somewhat bothered from our closeness. Ok here I go!
“Pfft, HAHAHA!!!” What? W-Why is she laughing? I don’t really know why but I only now saw the 2 dice in front of me… If what I’m seeing right is true, please kill me now.…. TO GET 2 NUMBER ONES!!! WHAT THE HELL!? It’s the most bad luck of all the bad luck in the history of playing this blasted 2 dice.
“Ok…. Just stop laughing already. I’ll choose dare instead since there’s nothing to drink anyway, there’s nothing to dare. Ehehehe…” She looks at me with a blank expression.
“Haven’t you forgotten that there’s a substitute for drinking my masterpiece?”
“Umm.. Oh wait, you didn’t tell me what the other dare is. I think I’d forgotten already since I did enjoy drinking you ‘masterpiece’ that much.. ehehe .”
“Ok, since you choose dare, I dare you to~” she whispered it in my ear.
“What? I didn’t hear that clear. Umm… Acchan?”
“Just close your eyes and trust me.” I just did what she told me just to make her feel somewhat better since she almost cried awhile ago…
“I’m closing my eyes now.”
I didn’t know what happened but my mind suddenly went blank. I can’t believe that this is happening right now. If this is all true, then I hope that this dare would never end…..
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Wow! :mon scare: At last this is my 3rd Takacchan fic!!! :mon dance: And my 90th post!! Yey! :mon fyeah: :] Sorry that this is tooooo short for some here. But when I was typing this, it reached 9 pages so this is the longest fic I’ve done (So far) Hope that some would like it…. :] :mon angel:
Yey! Gonna reply again :]
Sorakamiya san!
ehehe :] hope that you'd like this fic... :mon whimper: this is really for you... And about Acchan's older sis, I somewhat kinda named her after your name..... Hope that's ok with you... since I (killed) her character (http://i25.servimg.com/u/f25/15/95/51/13/th/cz2610.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=93&u=15955113)... ehehe :] 'cuz I think it suites with the story, don't you think :mon misch: :] Ehehe :]
Oh pls. don't be mad.... :mon sweat: Sorakamiya's fans, pls. don't be mad at meeeeeeee!!! :mon cry: I'd done it again... :mon duh:
aoi sora san!
Glad that you're still reading me fic :] :grin: :grin: :) :nya:
I'm really so touched, I'm crying...
Anyway, pls. do continue to read my fics if it's ok with you :] (http://i25.servimg.com/u/f25/15/95/51/13/th/cz0610.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=92&u=15955113) ehehehe :]
Thanks for the encouragement :] :mon angel:
kahem!
What could this gif be? Acchan wanted to be alone with Takamina tin order to give her? Oh... Maybe... Hehehehe :grin:
I didn't know you have it in you... such a perv.... :smhid :smhid
Anyway, thanks for letting me call you kahem (without the san) it only means that.... :mon suspect: I dunno :mon huh2: what does that mean anyway... ehehe :lol: :lol:
Thanks so much for the comment and all!! I really do appreciate it :] :) :mon ignore:
pretend 2besome1 san!
I'm wondering, why are you always the first one to comment on my fics? Oh, :mon suspect: do you like me that much... :mon inluv: :wriggly: ehehehe :] nah just joking :] :mon sweat: ehehe :]
But really, I'm still wondering if you would still be the first one who'll comment about this update of mine... hehe let's see... :twisted: I'm such a weird person aren't I? :grin:
PS. you can change the thread title by modifying Subject of the post you made for this thread.
Ex: go click the modify button on the first post you made in this (your) thread and change your current Subject "My haphazard fics :p – alexiel17 :]" into the thread title you want. It's the same the next time you want to change it again. If you're still confused and my explanation is unclear, feel free to ask more.
Thanks sooo much about this :] Now I can change my title thread all I want ehehehe :twisted: But thanks for answering my question :]. I wanna hug you right now :] :heart: :mon kissy:
bou-j525 san!
Thanks soo much for realizing my "series of unfortunate events" :lol: ehehehe :] :lol:
I know that you understand me since that's the worst thing that can happen to you while creating and posting fics... :smhid :smhid
Thanks so much for understanding me..... :kneelbow:
Anyway, Thanks too for thinking that the gift is not something that's not a pervy thing..... :bow: unlike someone there... :smhid *points at kahem... :mon geek: ehehehe :grin:
Thanks so much for reading this fic of mine... I'll try harder next time.... :hee:
Last but not the least!!!
Keichan ^_^ PERVJA!!!
I"M REALLY TRULY SORRY ABOUT THE THINGS I SAID!!! I take all of it back!! I can't hate you 'cuz, well, you are important to me!!! Please don't hate me!!! :gyaaah: :fainted: :on blackhole: :on cloudeye:
I still like you a lot so please, let's be friends again!!! huhuhuhuhuhu :( :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
I'll hate myself for this..... huhuhuhuhu (http://i65.servimg.com/u/f65/15/95/51/13/th/b0410.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=58&u=15955113) (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/bg00410.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=51&u=15955113)
For all who's reading this, Thanks so much... :bow: :bow: I'll try even harder just to create more fics....
Thanks a lot guys!! I hope that you are liking my fics (even just a bit)... :mon POd:
Thanks soo much everyone :]
PS. Do you know what happened between Takamina sama and Acchan? Well, here it is.... in YOYO style :] ehehehe :lol: :lol:
(http://i25.servimg.com/u/f25/15/95/51/13/cz4810.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=94&u=15955113)
~END~ that's the real ending... ehehehe :] :mon dance: :mon dance:
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Glad that I could help and congrats for the 90th post.
I'm wondering too, but I guess you just update at the time when I'm online? (like now) nah, you're not that weird...kidding!
Another TakAcchan! :deco:
Truth and dare is one dangerous game to be played...especially with Acchan lol
And I’ll promise you that I’ll take care of her even if the whole world ends ‘cuz she’s important to me
For someone who doesn't like cheesy things, Takamina sure knows how to say sweet words :P
Nice dare Acchan :twothumbs
Edit: Eh? It seemed I did manage to be the first again and with a new page too XD
Ps. You can actually drop the san or just call me C.
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:shocked :shocked :shocked alexiel17 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: (http://forum.akb48.org/images/smilies/153.gif) u really granted my wish uh i mean u really give me my present... XD XD XD thank youuuuu.... (http://forum.akb48.org/images/smilies/157.gif)
well, i dont mind u use my last name... :grin: :grin: but u really like to keep the story hanging uh... :smhid :smhid make the reader guess uh... :smhid :smhid uhmmmmmmm.... but i like it... :grin: :grin: and what's wrong with that "-san" :smhid we are friend right....right... :mon misch: just call me sora :mon innocent: plus i'm not hate u sistaaah... :gmon bang:
like your story and keep update :thumbsup :thumbsup
btw i have also granted your wish for the tragic fict. but i dont know whether its already tragic / not for u.... :kekeke:
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I never said what I was thinking, it could be anything :D maybe is you the one perv for imagining thing hehehe :grin:e
Anyway, thanks for letting me call you kahem (without the san) it only means that....  I dunno  what does that mean anyway... ehehe
I don't know neither lol
So the dare, it probably an interessing dare hehehe ;)
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You like to end your fic at the important part don't you :smhid First the gift, and now that :roll: But thank for the update, I enjoyed reading it ^^ I'll be waiting for your KojiYuu update and hope nothing bad will happen to you again XD
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Awesome!
I look forward to moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
Atsuko is dangerous :B .
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nice fanfic alexiel17....... =)
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WHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :panic: :panic: :scared: I’m really so sorry that this is a NG!!! :panic: This is really a NG since the writer is a NG in the first place…. :err: Huhuhuhuhu…… :fainted:
Sorry for the errors ‘cuz I do not have the courage to check this and reread this ‘cuz it’s……………… :on blackhole: EMBARRASSING!!! :mon zoom: :mon mad: :mon fire: :mon slapself: DAMN IT!! :banghead: Why did I even create this fic in the first place….. fjdbngrhvnhbtgirhnhbrvm (I’m a bit frustrated)
Just to Add: I’m really happy that this thread is becoming popular!! :] ehehehe :]
Anyway, since a lot of Authors/Readers are showing up, I really want to say Thanks to everyone :] ehehehe :]
Title: I Want to Know You (this is terrible.. so terrible…)
Two figures were walking down the streets. One was grinning while the other one was in deep thought of what had happened with them awhile ago.
“Ei Minami, still thinking about what ‘we’ just did?” the tall girl said with a cunning tone of voice while pinching the short girl’s cheeks. The girl did not reply but blushed because of her friend’s question. The ace saw this and removes her hands on the girl’s cheeks.
“Acchan, y-you know, w-what I d-did, it’s umm… it’s” the short girl was trying to correct her friend’s statement because what happened between them during their practice was her entire fault. The tall girl, knowing that her friend was still regretful for the incident, cuts her off because she doesn’t want her friend to explain further, because she did like it.
“Minami, I know it’s all just an accident, that you kissed me in front of the rest of the girls, I really don’t mind it at all.” Acchan assured the other girl with a small smile on her face. The smile she was giving was not really a happy one since she did enjoyed it, even if it’s just simple peck on the lips, adding the thought that it’s really a pure accident made her even sadden.
Minami noticed the sudden change of her friend made her worried. She doesn’t want to talk about this, but seeing her friend like this, even if this makes her uncomfortable, she decided that she needs to clear things up.
“Umm… A-Acchan, umm… is uncle and aunty in your house right now? I just want to t-talk with you about the, umm… the i-incident.” Acchan was a bit surprised with her friend’s question. She smiled thinking that when they did reach her house, instead of going inside, Minami would bow down to her, saying she’s sorry and run as fast as she could. Yup, she would do that, she thought.
Umm… Acchan? Are you listening?” The small captain asked, a bit concerned that her friend was spacing out. She is now quite scared because her friend might think weird of her ‘cuz she somewhat said that she wants them to be together, alone despite of what happened.
“Huh? Ah, Yes. About my parents, they are not around.” She said looking at her precious little friend with her soft, calm eyes that she rarely show because she only gives that look to her special someone.
“Ah, that would be great.” The captain replied back, not thinking anymore her messed up ideas. Looking directly within those eyes made her realize, does she still treat her as her friend? Does she regret kissing her? What’s been bothering her right now is the realization that maybe she did enjoy her simple kiss with her friend and that, she’s craving for, well, for more. ‘No, Minami, stop thinking those things. She will be your friend forever.’ She chats repeatedly inside her head just to stop her from thinking those weird ideas.
“Minami, just a few steps and we‘re near my house.” The ace said with a smile on her face. She’s thinking that her friend might not really go in her house and just apologize instead. Since the ace was busy thinking, a motorcycle was in her way that she didn’t notice. Minami saw this and hold the tall girl’s left wrist, pulled her near her body while her other hand hold Acchan’s back, in a protective way.
“Acchan, you scared me, you know that. You almost hit by a motorcycle, for crying out loud!” The captain said tightening her holding on the ace.
Acchan stayed silent, she’s absorbing what her friend had just said. Minami notice this, and just to make her friend relax, she caressed her friends back.
“Acchan, are you really prone to accidents? Remember the time that I tripped just to save you from a motorcycle? Really, it’s like déjà vu or something.” Minami said, recalling that event once again. (Refer to my first fic; You’re My… (♥Takacchan♥) ehehehe :])
When the short girl was about to loosen her hold, Acchan griped the captain’s shoulders, leaned to her and kissed her on the lips. Minami was shocked with her friend’s action but the girl’s lips was so inviting that she decided to close her eyes and enjoy the kiss. Her lips being pressed on her friend gives her a tingling feeling, a feeling that she doesn’t want to end. Acchan, feeling her friend’s lips on hers, made her so happy. She wants to know if her friend does feel the same way toward her that’s why she decides to deepen their kiss by licking her friend’s lower lips. Minami slightly moaned with her friend’s action. She was just thinking this awhile ago and now they are doing it, in the middle of the streets. She really can’t believe that this is really happening; feeling those warm, wet lips being pressed on hers makes her a bit arouse. (O_O)
Her hand that was on the ace’s back, moved upwards, pulling her towards her, deepening their kiss. Acchan felt the girl’s hands on her hair, messing it a bit but she didn’t care. Since the kiss their sharing was quite intense, she took a quick breathe and then pulled Minami in another passionate kiss. Minami felt something different with this kiss, she then felt Acchan’s tongue inside her mouth. The little captain moaned more with the strong sensation she’s feeling. She decides to imitate her and made Acchan moan this time by sucking the girl’s mouth. Acchan wanted to do more than kissing Minami that’s why she pulled back from their kiss which Minami wondered in frustration.
“Minami, I want to do something more than kissing. Will you let me do it?” The ace said, still breathing heavily because of the passionate kissed they’d shared. Minami, a bit flushed, smile in response with the ace’s request. She still can’t believe that all of it happened. Awhile ago, they were a bit awkward with each other, well, it’s actually her that’s been uncomfortable since Acchan was cool with their simple peck in their practice room, (Yup, it’s just an accident) but now, she can’t believe it. It’s like they are both waiting for the right moment, they were craving this from the very beginning to happen, and it did.
Minami was still in deep thought about the sudden contact with her friend. She’s now thinking; Are they still friends? Is this just a spur of the moment kind of thing? She’s hoping it isn’t.
Acchan notice that her beloved was a bit shocked that’s why she grabbed her wrist and lead her inside her house since they are just a few steps to her house.
Minami just realized that she’s now inside of her friend’s house. She was just standing there, in her living room, blushing hard because she remembered that nobody’s around exempt the two of them. Acchan, still holding her little captain’s wrist, notice that her friend was a bit shaking which is kinda cute for her. She then decides to tease her friend.
“Umm.. Minami, what do you want to eat? I think you’re spacing out too much lately.” The ace said while holding her lips with her index finger like she’s thinking of a food to serve her beloved, or that she’s hoping that she will be her food instead. (O_O)
Minami blushed more when she knew what her friend was trying to tell her. She then decides to answer her back.
“Umm… Acchan, I-If you want, I’ll cook for you instead since I know you’re a bit tired.” I don’t know what you’re thinking right now but Acchan interpret it in a different way, imagining Minami on top of her. (O_O) She then covers her mouth with both hands, blushing hard.
Minami noticed this and without a word, went to the girls’ kitchen and started to gather all the ingredients she’ll make for her ace. Acchan is still in her lala land, imagining things with the girl she’s with right now. She then went back to reality when she heard her stove being opened. Minami peek at her friend and noticed that she’s going to the kitchen; she told her that she’ll take care of their food and requested Acchan to sleep first. She followed Minami’s simple request since she’s a bit sleepy and decides to have a quick sleep in the sofa. She’s thinking that when Minami wakes her up, she’ll be able to know Minami, a lot more…..
I Can’t Do This Anymore!!!!!!!
~THE END~
Sorry I was planning to create 4 fics for my 100th post!!! :yep: And this was on the list…. Huhuhuhu…. (TT_TT)
I was a bit surprised that I only have a few posts to go till I’ll reach 100 that’s why I want my post to be fics instead…. Me also wishing that I post those 4 fics this weekend… (I hope I can do it…..)
I really can't do it..........*bows 180 degrees* :kneelbow:
Actually, the other stories are still on the making that's why I think I can't do it..... :gyaaah: I really can't.... (TT_TT) :pleeease:
Anyway, about this fic of mine…. I don’t wanna talk a bout it, ok…..
I was trying a different kind of umm… let’s say I’m trying if I can go beyond the fluffy level. I’m actually experimenting different styles of writing, that's why.... :on speedy:
To tell you honestly, when the story was inside my head, (O_O) it was supposed to start with a lemony scene (yes, the bed scenes) but when I was about to write it, my fingers were holding me back. It’s like they don’t want to type it… And when I was typing the fic; in every paragraph, I would stop and roll on the floor for about 20 minutes…. :tantrum:
I really can’t write the infinity and beyond kinda level…. I know, I’m useless……. Please forgive me!!!!!
I feel so violated while creating the scenes inside me head… (I want to kill myself for even trying!!!! :mon fire:)
So this is the most useless, despicable, and the worst fic I’ve done and posted…. I’m still thinking/planning to delete this afterwards….. :mon determined: AHHHHHH!!!! :mon mad: I’m feeling so unclean!!!! :mon runcry: I’m so sorry TAKAMINA-SAMA and ACCHAN!!!! :mon scare: AHHHHH!!!! Now, I can’t look at them!!!! I’m unworthy…. Huhuhu… :cry: :cry:
Anyway, I’m gonna reply again..... I’m so embarrassed because my stories are not good compared with everyone here.... :cry:
Hmmm.... what if I suddenly stopped writing? :mon dunno: That would be good, right? :on GJ: :thumbsup I'm serious.....
pretend_2besome1-san. Umm, I mean C! WAZZAP!!! :mon yoyo:
I’m really sorry that this update is a lousy one :err: ‘cuz I dunno, when the fic was inside of my head, it was really different from this…. I dunno what happened to me…. I’m sorry, :kneelbow: I think because of this post of mine, you’ll stop reading me fics…. I’m so sorry!!! Huhuhu…. :frustrated:
But if you really did not like this, it’s ok, I'll understand ‘cuz it’s entirely my fault…. *sniff, sniff….* :mon whimper: If you’ll stop supporting me, it’s ok…. (I’m crying right now….) :cry:
But I want to say thank you for everything, thanks for the support you’ve given me, the comments you’d said to me, for letting me reach second page…. I’ll treasure it all….. :mon whimper:
Thank you C!!!! My first commenter, my friend…. huhuhu… T_T
Sora. Dude, thanks for liking me previous fics, I do appreciate it… :twothumbs :on gay: I know that you’ll stop supporting me ‘cuz I’m not really a good writer. Am I even a writer to begin with? :dunno:
Anyway, Thanks so much for the funny comments and the cute gifs you’ve given me…. I will cherish them.…. huhuhu…. :cry: I know that this latest update did not satisfy you, it might annoy you since it’s not really good… huhu *I’m crying*
But anyway, I hope that you’ll continue to update, cuz I promise you that I’ll support you as long as I can, Sora! :mon determined: Huhuhu… :mon whine: I'm no good.... :(
I was trying if I too, can write a lemony fic ‘cuz since you’d created yours, I decided to create mine but it turns out like this… I’m not good Sora… :( But really I wanna say Thank you for everything…. Huhuhuhu…. Thanks soo much for considering me as your friend… You are my friend, really….. huhuhuhu…
Kahem. Thanks for letting me call you Kahem, you are the first one to request that and I thank you for it…… :kneelbow:
About my message with you and your reply, you are quite right… Sorry, I’d doubted you as a perv, I sometimes jump to conclusion so fast that I end up getting beaten… :on beatup ehehehe :] Anyway, thanks so much for the support, the comments, I really, really am touched… I really want to hug everyone right now!!!
HUHUHU…. :cry: Like what I promised Sora, I will also support you, Kahem… :thumbsup so please, update you fics as fast as you can (Hope I’m not forcing you… ehehehe :])
Thanks so much for everything…
Oh and btw, I was planning on something (about your new multi-chap fic…) but I’ll inform you more about my plans if I can really do it to begin with… ehehehe :] that’s is, if you’ll allow me to do it :] ehehehe it’s a secret :] I suddenly dropped the idea since I might quit writing..... :cry:
bou-j525-san. You, along with the cool authors here that I adore pushed me to post my stories here, and with that, I really am grateful that I met you all guys.... :mon waterworks: You might not know me completely, but you did made me feel a bit special, I mean everyone made me so happy that I feel that I’m not worthless….
Thanks so much for everything, bou-j525-san.... *Gosh, I wanna cry*
Anyway, I hope that you'll never stop updating your cool fics…. :thumbsup I also promise you that I’ll support you, cross my heart :] :yep: :yep:
Thanks so much bou-j525-san, I don’t know what to say but thanks really that you’re there…. I’m really happy….. :]
Thanks for everything, my dear friend… :]
TakahashiJ-san. I was really happy that I have a new reader!!! :w00t: I’m really so touch ‘cuz compared with all the awesomeness authors here, I’m just really a noob in the fanfic world… :mon surr: I don’t know what else to say but thanks soo much… I’m really happy that you’d even bothered leaving me a comment… :mon crazyinlove: I’m so touched… *I so wanna cry… * huhuhu… :cry: So sorry that I’m a bit simple…. That’s how I really am… ehehehe :] :yep:
TakahashiJ-san, thanks so much, even if you think that your comment is simple, for me, it’s something really precious since I was happy while reading it… It inspires me to write more…. But I really need help right now..... :mon ghost:
khryz0421. OHMIGAAA!!! :mon runcry: I'm so terribly sorry that I'm being an ass :shakeit:, This is really the first time I felt this way... Oh, mi gawsh, I'm so selfish..... I'm really so sorry.... :mon whine: huhuhu... :cry: *having heart attack*
I'm truly so sorry khryz0421-san.... huhuhu.... I don't know, what I'm feeling right now... :( But really, thanks for leaving a comment here.... huhuhu..... :cry: I'm so touched... :fainted:
Thanks so much, I hope I'll see you here more often (I'm hoping that I'll continue writing... :cry:) I really want to write more fics..... :gyaaah: Thanks really for the message....
TO EVRYONE WHO IS READING, THANKS SO MUCH!!!! >.<
I TRY TO IMPROVE MYSELF MORE!!!!
I might not improve myself if I'll stop writing..... :cry:
Alexiel is a bit sad….. :fainted: :on cloudeye:
So truly sorry guys!! Maybe I'm just embarrassed at myself (add the update I'd made) I don't know if what I'm feeling right now is temporary, (I hope so...) but if it goes worst, I might stop myself from writing, for real....... (What's happening to me..... :panic: )
I don't know, I'm feel so worthless (I'm so sorry, I was bullied when I was a little girl and my high school life wasn't that good either.... 'cuz a lot of people bullied me too... That's the reason for the "feeling-so-worthless" thingy...) I'm so sad.... I need help....
This might sound weird but despite the funny comments I give, my life sucks (well, my life is somewhat ok right now since at school, nobody bullies me, for now... and at least I eat 3 times a day.. ehehe :]) I just didn't know why I suddenly feel so... lonely... Maybe because I was all by myself when I was bullied, I was pretending to be strong by saying that it's alright but I was really lying to myself..... I was alone crying.... I'm all alone..... But, that belonged to the past now.... ehehehe :] :lol: I'm weird thinking of that all of a sudden...... :sweatdrop:
Alexiel is a bit sad…..
Umm.... Maybe I might post another fic so pls. wait for it :] ehehehe :] :) :) Still in a process of recovering myself.... *sigh*
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I saw this update and about to comment later since I'm supposed to be studying for my exam, but I skimmed through and saw your comment at the end and I just have to say "Calm down, I won't stop reading your fic because of this post, kay? :)"
Okay, so technically I haven't really read it, but I don't think it'll bad --> this comment is actually to let you know that.
Don't stop writing, this fanfic thread needs all the author it could get! And if you could follow your plan to post more fics then please do, I'm sure others would be happy.
That being said, I'll come back with a proper comment when I get some time! Don't feel lonely!
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Hum if you can't wite anymore I wouldn't force you but I think your fucs are great ^^
For my fic if you have idea I'll listen with pleasure, I'm at the end of the first chapter
I eat 3 times a day.
:twothumbs eating is the most important thing in the life with the AKB, my stomach is my second brain some people says that is my first lol If you're sad eat. The food can heal a lot of thing especially chocolate ^^ or you can talk with people on internet if you can't with people irl it's could help too but eat first. You can also listen korogaru ishi ni nare, it give you energy and the fight spirit :)
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woooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: nice fict there like it so much.... :thumbsup :thumbsup I like the way how u writing it. keep up dude... :thumbsup :thumbsup and I demand another.... :grin: :grin: and this fict of yours is not terrible.... its good and really good... keep up update... and about this :
Hmmm.... what if I suddenly stopped writing? :mon dunno: That would be good, right? :on GJ: :thumbsup I'm serious.....
dont dare to do that... (http://forum.akb48.org/images/smilies/acchanS.jpg) keep writing.... since i'm u'r fan and u also already read my fic... :grin:
keep writing okay?! (http://forum.akb48.org/images/smilies/157.gif)
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khryz0421. OHMIGAAA!!! :mon runcry: I'm so terribly sorry that I'm being an ass :shakeit:, This is really the first time I felt this way... Oh, mi gawsh, I'm so selfish..... I'm really so sorry.... :mon whine: huhuhu... :cry: *having heart attack*
I'm truly so sorry khryz0421-san.... huhuhu.... I don't know, what I'm feeling right now... :( But really, thanks for leaving a comment here.... huhuhu..... :cry: I'm so touched... :fainted:
Thanks so much, I hope I'll see you here more often (I'm hoping that I'll continue writing... :cry:) I really want to write more fics..... :gyaaah: Thanks really for the message....
Alexiel17-san don't say sorry... :frustrated: hehehe.... i leave a comment because i really like your post.. :luvluv1: i'm really grateful that my comment makes you happy.... :shy2:
you're always welcome.. :welcome
hope you continue soon.. cos I am your fan... :mon cute:
and don't stop writing....
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I feel like I'm gonna write a lot... why isn't there a spoiler button -.-'
Okay, first of all, after finally noticing it, I think you don't need to call me bou-j525-san XD Just call me bou like everyone... since everyone here forgets about the "j"... the "j" is important! :smhid XD
Thank for the update! I'm kind of reading it while doing an English homework and at first I wasn't even supposed to answer to you (ya know... just clicking "thank you" for this time), but after reading everything you wrote including the end note, I think I can take a few minutes to write you something :nervous
First, I have to say that each time, NO EXCEPTION, you write, it always, ALWAYS, reminds me of a friend I had before. She was speaking/writing exactly the same way you do. When sometimes I read some of your comments, I don't know if it was just me, but I felt like there was something... you know, not fake, but forced. Like, the kind of person pretending everything is fine and doing jokes all the time and talking always with a fake happy tone while in fact they are depressed and can't stop insulting themselves. My friend was this way, and I can tell you that it was easy to guess when she was pretending to be happy. That's why you know... don't just pretend to be happy. Be truly happy :) And when you are not, there will always be people ready to support you.
And you know I can't tell you what to do because I don't know at all what it is to be bullied or anything like this, but I seriously think you should trust yourself more. It is not because you can't write or do something that you are useless. I mean, the first thing I read at the beginning of your update was that it was going to be horrible. And I went like "WHAT SHE KILLED SOMEONE?!" And at the end I was like "Horrible? What was horrible?" You know? And after I think you told me "thank you" three times in four sentences so I went "Yo I should be the one thanking you for updating your fics!" :theking
Anyway, all this just to tell you that you should not think in this negative way about your fic or what you're doing. I will never tell you "your fic is horrible" because it is not. Everyone writes in a different ways, that is why I enjoy reading different stories, including yours. If you suddenly stopped writing, I would be sad because I enjoy reading your fic and it's always nice to see you won against your fear of posting here. I mean, you started posting here after so much time... you can't just suddenly stop! That would be :shocked to everyone reading your fic! XD
Pfff, let's stop talking in such a serious way (HOLY SH*T IT TOOK ME LIKE 30MIN 40MIN TO WRITE THIS COMMENT WHEN I WAS SUPPOSED TO TAKE ONLY 5?!? ARGH TIME'S MISSING :banghead: ) So yeah, you know what, I'll be waiting for your next update! Because this one was great ^^ I don't care if you can't write bed scenes you know, it's not the most important thing I want to read XD So yeah.... update soon coz you know I'll be there to read your fics... ;)
By the way, if I have time, I'll post a KojiYuu OS tomorrow, so come and read ^^ It won't be sad this time, I promise :P
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Umm…. Ok, so this is my 98th post… :)
Umm… this is kinda different from the other fics I’ve written (so far…) :yep:
Ummm…. sorry that this time, umm… I haven’t replied with all those who commented on my fic (and those who are shy but who really are concern for me…. :inlove: Ehehehe…. :grin:) since, it’s 4:40 am here and I’m still in the process of recovering myself… :nervous (I'm sleepy...)
But guys, thanks so much…
I’m really stupid ‘cuz I only realized right now that I’m somewhat, umm… important too, well, in fact you all keep on supporting me… from the very beginning… :] :thumbsup
I’m really sorry for all the drama….. hehe :] :sweatdrop:
I’ll promise that I’ll edit this later…. :yep: Since I’m really sleepy right now…. Ehehehe :] :sweatdrop:
Title: The Unexpected Guest (Guess the pairing! ♥♥♥)
It was midnight at that time. Three people are heading to a small condominium where their old friend lives alone, well she’s not really all alone since she’s now a mother which really gave the three the most surprising news yet.
Obviously, the three missed each other even though they’re denying it. They’d miss the time when they’re together, being admired by their kouhai’s, the punches and bruises they’d given when they were in a fight with some worthless Yankees, the power and the authority they had, and especially the time they had with their beloved leader. Those were the days.
Now, they are mature, well, forced to be mature because of life. Even if they didn’t want to, just to survive, they need to do it. Getting older makes people forget what they really were before, forgetting their childhood fantasies, their teenage attitudes, just to wake in a world where you need to survive just to live. (Wow, this is deep….. O_O)
The three remained silent. It was really unusual since they were a bit awkward right now. Maybe because they were waiting for someone to speak first or that they’re treasuring the moments they are currently having. It’s funny, really, but sometimes you don’t need to speak just to be understood. Words sometimes aren’t needed to convey your feelings….. (Alexiel’s a bit deep right now…. :3 )
Finally, someone broke the silence.
“Hey guys, you sure that Black lives here?” The tallest girl said, still wearing her nursing uniform. She really wants to see Black again but not in that kind of clothing; since she rushed from work when she saw Shibuya’s message, she had no time to change. It did give her a surprise that the fashionista messaged her and wanted to meet her, since she knows that when they were still under Yuko’s wings, the two were always in a brawl.
The tall girl was now looking at the shortest girl with suspicion.
“Are you testing my instincts? Of course we’re in the right direction Sado, or is it Nurse Ma-ri-ko~?” The girl with a pink strand of hair said teasing her old friend because of her career and obviously because she’s wearing her uniform.
“You both haven’t changed a bit.” The third girl smiled. “If you both end up fighting, I will not stop you.” She added in a bored way. She is holding a plastic bag containing foods as a gift for their friend. If you want to know, she is also wearing her ‘job outfit’.
“I don’t know Torigoya, but your ‘job’ is a bit different compared with the both of us.” The shortest girl said looking at Torigoya while pointing her finger towards herself and Sado. She’s quite surprised that her airhead friend chooses that kind of work. Well, it did make the airhead girl a bit annoyed with Shibuya but since she also missed her, she just let her go this time.
“That’s the only job I was accepted, ok. Deal with it.” Torigoya said while pouting.
“Shibuya, why aren’t you in your working attire? I’m just wondering.” The tallest girl asked just to change the topic. Well, she was a bit pissed that she and Torigoya are wearing their worst clothes but Shibuya was in her casual attire. I think Sado’s a bit jealous ‘cuz she too, is onto fashion.
“Yeah, Sado’s right. What are you, fired or something?” The other girl said, but unknown to her, she did hit the nail.
“What? You both are annoying! I’m still working. You just don’t know how hard it is.” The short girl stands her ground. She’s really lying but she’s telling the truth that her work is difficult especially when she doesn’t like it. How can you like your work when your boss always makes fun of you in front of your co-workers?
The former Vice president and the queen noticed that their friend was silent for awhile. They noticed that maybe she did get fired. Unknown to them, she’s currently doing something ‘Majisuka’ related, but anyway, just to end their silence, Torigoya spoke.
“Well, if you did get fired, I’ll help you out. I thinking my job is still looking for~” Torigoya wasn’t able to finish her statement when Shibuya was glaring at her. “I’m just saying.” The airhead queen added.
“Well, I think you could enter a job related to fashion or be a model instead, since you’re a fashionista to begin with. I think that suits you better.” The nurse said with a smirk on her face.
“Well, that’s a bit surprising coming for the Vice. I think you should be a model instead than being a nurse. And I really, aren’t your patients a bit scared because, well, you are Sado after all.” The short girl said just to change the topic. She really wants to have a great time with them again that’s why she decided to call those two.
Even though the three are mocking each other, they know that it is their way of showing that they’d missed each other, that they’d created a bond which they hope would not be broken as they grew older.
They were quite noisy bantering with each other when they reached Black’s place. They stopped when they were in front of the queen’s door. Torigoya was the one who pushed the doorbell since the two are a bit tensed; maybe because they don’t know what to say to their friend when they met her. The door opened and saw Black wearing an apron with a knife on her hand.
Torigoya screamed. Luckily, Shibuya covered her friend’s mouth.
“Ahahaha, umm….Nice to see you again Black-san.” Shibuya said still holding the other girl’s mouth.
Black was surprised that her friends are in front of her house right now. She’s still cooking her food ‘cuz she did not expect the three would come. Well, she really didn’t expect visitor since there’s no occasion to begin with and really, it’s been a long time since she saw them. She also has no news with her friend’s lives that’s why she’s still in a shock.
“Black, we hope we’re not disturbing you or anything.” Sado said with a blush on her face because of the look that Black is giving her. Black was really surprised that Sado was wearing a pink nursing outfit. (Who wouldn’t be?)
She went to her senses and swiftly went inside her house and fixed everything, her sofa, her kitchen, all in a split second.
She went back to her friends and welcomed them in. She’s now wearing a plain white shirt and a black jogging pants. The three girl’s notice that her house was a bit small but they made themselves at home. The three visitors, now sitting on her small sofa, were a bit quiet.
Haruna was getting a little bored. She decided to put the plastic bag she’s holding in the kitchen, where Black is currently busy cooking their food.
The two girls that were sitting in the sofa were a bit bored too, that’s why they decided to help the two girls in the kitchen.
When the four girls were done cooking, they sat on the sofa and started to chat.
“Black, is it true that you’re a mother now?” A trace of happiness can be found on the little queen’s voice.
“Yes and the baby is sleeping right now.” Black replied with a blush on her face.
“Well, you really surprised us with that. I can’t believe that one of our friend is already a mom! At last, I’m gonna be an Aunt! Can you believe that?” Torigoya squealed a bit, she was looking at the two if they’ll agree with her but they were looking at her uncaringly.
“We are really happy for you Black. If you need help, you can just approach us anytime you want, ok?” The tallest girl said, with a cool tone of voice. She really is happy, but since she is Sado, she wants to be cool in front of them.
“Really, I was thinking that Torigoya was the first to be the mother in our group. This is really a surprise to all of us, Black.” Torigoya was really getting angry with Shibuya. First, she criticized her because of her job, and now this. Who wouldn’t be mad anyway? She was planning to be married before she becomes a mother but that would be impossible since the person she wants to spend her entire life, already left this world. And the said person was also a girl, so it’s really impossible to be pregnant to begin with. Anyway, that’s her little secret.
She was about to punch the other queen but Black spoke.
“Guys, you really did surprise me. I don’t know what to say. If Yuko sempai was here, she might~” Black was a bit teary ‘cuz she does miss her friends that much especially their leader. She thought that they might hate her for keeping her secret to them but they weren’t, well, actually she did told her secret to someone but she’s not with them.
“Yeah, she might have killed you, you know? For keeping your pregnancy to all of us.” Torigoya said in a funny way while hugging Black.
“Well, I think she might have killed us because we let you fought with Maeda’s friends alone.” Sado said while holding the girl’s shoulder, hoping that it would stop Black from crying.
Shibuya was a bit pissed hearing the name of the girl who’d defeated her with a single headbutt but she wants to have fun with her friends right now instead of creating a plan for defeating the said girl.
“Hey, I think Yuko sempai would be happy that she too, would be an Aunt, well, a nee-san to be exact.” the three queen looks at her with a surprised look on their faces.
“What? What did I say?” She’s a bit confused with the look that her friends are giving her.
“I don’t know but Shibuya, you’re a bit sweet today.” Black said, smiling at the girl who is now blushing hard. She can’t believe that their reckless and a bit of a hard headed friend is now a changing, she smiled at the thought that they really are starting to be adults.
“I don’t know what you’re saying but really, you need to have fun once in a while since having a baby is a tough job.” The small girl said without looking at her friend.
“Oh, how did you know, Shibuya?” Torigoya wiggles her eye brows to the shorter queen. She’s enjoying this moment because finally, she’d teased the girl. Sado and Black just laugh with their two friends.
“Thanks you, Shibuya. And thank you Sado-sempai and Torigoya.” Black said, now calming a bit. She’s also entertained with her friend’s funny arguments. She does miss this so much.
The two girls who were comforting her nodded. Sado and Torigoya did realize that Shibuya does have a point, that they’re there to have fun in the first place.
Torigoya loosen her hold on Black and went to the kitchen to get the liquor she’d brought awhile ago, and went to the living room where her friends are.
“So, shall we begin?” The other girls smiled at her and helped her prepare the said drink.
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The four girls were having a good time with each other. They talk about a lot of things; their work, their plans in the future and of course, the time they were part of the Great Rapapa.
“Hey, you might find it funny, but I think if Gekikara was here, this small get together party we’re having might’ve been perfect.” Torigoya said a bit drunk. The two agreed with her but Black seemed to be quite that ever.
“I wasn’t really surprised that she’s not here with us.” Black said in a soft voice, hoping that her friends will not hear her because they are, a bit drunk.
“Well, I called her but I forgot that she doesn’t have a cellphone. And really, I think Gekikara’s a bit scary.” The fashionista said, embracing herself for remembering the other Queen’s actions.
“She’d changed, Shibuya.I heard that she’s really studying hard because she promised Yuko that she’ll graduate this time. The former vice president said, defending the other queen.
“Well, since we’re talking about her, I did actually told her about me getting pregnant.” Black looked at her friends and decided to continue her story since the three were looking at her in a baffled way.
“When I told her about it, she was really mad at me.” Black chuckled a bit, remembering the time that she confessed that to Gekikara.
“Are you serious!?” the three blurted out loudly. Black just made them a bit calm since her baby is really sleeping right now. The three girls apologized quickly.
“Wow. I never knew you two are that close.” Torigoya drank a bit, and still shocked from what she’d heard.
The other two were really surprised by that especially Shibuya. She can’t believe the former silent queen was a bit intimate with the crazy and barbaric queen.
Sado was just quiet, and smirked a bit. She really didn’t expect this.
“Well, if you said it to me, I might think you’re joking.” The former vice said. “But that’s not really your personality so I might as well believe you.” She added, sipping her cup.
As they were still stunned with their friend’s confession, they suddenly hear the baby crying. The four quickly went to the baby’s room and there they saw a black figure, sitting on a chair near the baby’s crib.
They really can’t believe it, that the person inside the baby’s room was the same person they were talking about. Well, the thing that surprised them was that the said person is holding a book, a story book to be exact.
“And as always, they all live happily ever after. The end” The figure said a bit bored. She obviously knows that her friends are there but she didn’t care. She just wants to stop the baby from crying, and really, she did.
“The baby is clever. When I was on the part that the leader of the wind instrument died, the baby suddenly cried, that’s why I ended the story quick.” the figure that was holding the story book said and was looking at the baby. She then closed the book and caressed the baby’s face with her gentle hand.
“Gekikara.” The three said. They really can’t believe that the insane queen was there in front of them, caressing the baby’s face.
“Nice to see all of you again.” Gekikara gently removed her hand on the baby’s face. She stands up, went near the opened window where she entered Black’s place and was about to leave the room.
“Wh-where are you going, Gekikara?” Shibuya was now a bit in her senses. She really thought that she’s dreaming because the queen was showing a motherly complex with the baby awhile ago. She thought that Sado was right, that the said girl was changing. Even if Gekikara gives her the creeps, she does miss the other queen.
“Y-yeah, you should have told us that you’re here since, well, we rarely have the time to be all together.” Torigoya stutters since she too cannot believe what she’s seeing right now, but she’s happy that they’re all there, except for their beloved leader which she really loved more than anything.
“Gekikara, you should stay.” Sado commanded Gekikara. She too, did miss the girl since she rarely sees her, especially now that they are busier than ever.
Gekikara was smiling. They really can’t she her face ‘cuz she was now facing them with her back since she was planning to go. She then decides to stay for a bit because she hasn’t heard her friend’s voice yet.
She walks to where her friends are and stopped when she was in front of Black. She handed her the book that she was reading awhile ago.
“I haven’t told the ending yet so I thought that you should be the one to finish the story.” Gekikara was looking at the story book she’d made herself. She smirked seeing the small blush on the other queen.
“I will.” Black said, now holding the book on her hands.
Gekikara nod and went to the window once again.
“You shouldn’t let the windows open ‘cuz a psychopathic freak might enter the baby’s room.” Gekikara said while leaving.
The three that were shocked was now a bit disappointed that the queen left them just like that. They went near Black to look at the book that was handed to her by Gekikara. They were now wearing a goofy smile on their face since it’s a picture book. The funny thing is that the title is cute.
“The Unforgettable Story of the Rapapa.” The three said in unison. Well, it really is cute because they really can’t believe that the queen created this book to begin with.
“Well, Gekikara’s really sweet if you know her that well.” Black said, giggling a bit.
“Well, if you asked me, I can’t wait to read this too.” Torigoya laugh a bit but she really wants to read the book.
“Me too! Let’s read it right now.” Shibuya replied. She really can’t contain her joy.
“Hey guys, keep it down since the baby’s sleeping.” Sado said in a soft voice.
(Well, she does have a point) The three quietly went outside the room when they’d sense that Black was giving a different feeling; a feeling she release when she’s with Gekikara. When if it’s just the two of them.
Black was still looking at the closed window, still recalling her friend’s departure over and over again.
She knew that her friend has forgiven her. Even if their conversation was short, mere action were enough to show what their emotions were…..
“Thank you Gekikara, my dearest friend……” She said while hugging the book closely to her heart…..
~END~
PS: I'll edit this out soon.... this is just a part of the list I said... I do hope that you liked it.... (even just a bit... :) )
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Hmmm. I love the TakaAcchan fanfic <3 . :x .
Black x Gekikara fanfic ? Sound pretty new to me.
And i like how Gekikara being so sweet over there ><.
Thanks for the updateeeeeeeeeeeeee !
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I LOVE BLACK X Gekikara~!! :luvluv1:
PLease continue~! :kneelbow:
Thanks! :on GJ:
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BLACK x GEKI ~ i ship them :bow: :bow:
Geki is so cuteeeeee, i could imagine her doing that :heart:
thankyuu for the fic, i really like it :cow:
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A sweet gekikara is interessing ^^ I like this pairing ;)
4am?!!! It's too early !!! You have to sleep more!
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Just passing by, saying thank you for the update :)
AND
I’m really stupid ‘cuz I only realized right now that I’m somewhat, umm… important too, well, in fact you all keep on supporting me… from the very beginning… :] :thumbsup
Well... hope it will stay on your mind for a long time :grin:
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so gekikara can be sweet sometimes huh... :hehehe:
black x gekikara?? :glasses: sounds good... :shifty: :nya:
please :pleeease: post more fanfics... :kneelbow:
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Okay exams are over, time to comment.
It's not terrible, I found it funny that Acchan's mind goes all perverted XD
I haven't watched Majisuka so I'm not exactly familiar with the fic. To read a story to a baby is one thing, but to create one is quite something. Not to mention it doesn't suit Gekikara's image XD but it's still sweet.
Now that's the spirit, keep posting your fic! :thumbsup
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I'm truly sorry that I'm not updating my fic... :fainted: :gyaaah: :kneelbow:
(WHOA :shocked :shocked I've been away for too long, a lot of readers and authors are showing up, and a lot of authors are updating too!! :w00t:
This is so awesome! :mon lovelaff: :mon fyeah:)
Oh, btw, I'm still not cured... :mon POd: ehehe :mon sweat: Yep, still depressed :mon scare: (but just a bit :mon sweat:)
I just soo missed commenting here... :mon angel: I WANNA COMMENT NOW especially with all the stories here!!!! :scolding: WHAAAAAA!!! :panic: :panic:
WHAAAAA!!!! :panic: your little saru's a bit depress (really) and a lot of things happened to me so I'm really sorry that I can't update this yet... :err:
huhuhu :mon runcry: Sorry that I broke me promise... :fainted: I wanna commit harakiri right now... :mon cry:
Hope you can wait for a bit... I'm useless, I know... :fainted: huhuhu :(
Anyway, this is not a fic, I just missed commenting here... ehehe, I know, I'm weird... :on cloudeye:
Actually, I have a lot of stories in me head right now but since I worry about school
(OMIGAWSH! My enrollment is on TUESDAY!! *ehem but no body cares, alexiel..... ehehe :p :mon sweat:)
Anyway I don't wanna rush my stories that's why... And I don't want a Giant fox to eat all of my char just to end it too :lol: :lol: :] :nervous (Watch the vid.... :P hehehe :lol: :lol:)
But really, I missed you all so much... :onioncheer:
Umm... For all those who are commenting, (TakahashiJ-san, :mon inluv: RenaChii-san, :mon innocent: crazywota-san :monk gboy:)
leaving thank you posts, :mon cute: reading secretly; :mon lurk: Many thanks guys!!!! :] :on slopkiss:
And also, for those who cared when I was depressed (especially to C, :on gay: kahem, :on GJ: sora, :shy2: khryz0421, :nya: bou-j, :wriggly: and
FoF-sama :mon crazyinlove: ) Thanks so much!! I dunno what to say but I really am grateful to you all :] :hee:
Just wanna put this here ('Cuz I know, a lot of you misses me already :bigdeal:) ehehehehe :] I know it guys, you love me sooo much... :hehehe: ehehehe :wahaha:
@The Moment #7: Death Note Ideas (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DU0goXAEUEk#)
PS: I'll edit this when I'll post my real 99th post :] and it would be a fic this time... :bingo:
Though, I'm not sure if it would be a Mariko♥Miichan or Koji♥Yuu...... :dunno:
Oh well :P
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June 5, 2011 :(
Ehem... I really want to apologize cuz I'll be away for long.... Umm... but I'll try to update (I think) But really, I'm so ashamed to all who's reading this fic of mine... I really am sorry.... :kneelbow:
But I'm also happy to all who's reading my fics... :on GJ: I'll make it up to you.. really...
Umm.. Like what I've said, I'll be away for long so... :on speedy:
Hope you'll understand.... :mon POd:
So, goodbye for now... :on cloudeye:
Hope to see you all soon... :] (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/onion_10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=19&u=15955113)
Oh, btw.... Thanks really everyone!!!!! :on gay: :] I will miss you!! :mon roll:
And also, for all the authors here, do your best :mon inluv: :] make the readers happy ehehehe :] :mon dance:
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ohhh pls tyt ! XD
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Ganbatte!!!! ;)
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alexiel17-san!!!!
i love your fanfics!!!!
the sweet gekikara is so .... sweet!!! :heart:
:D
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It's okay, I understand. I do, really.
The best of luck for you! :onioncheer:
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alexiel17 I like your one shots please come back soon!
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Woah!!! :shocked I LOVE :heart: your Takacchan :wub: :inlove:
I'm hoping for more later~~ XD :heart:
:bow: :bow: Please update more Takacchan pls~~ :mon cute:
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:wahaha:
Ill be back......
maybe.... :mon sweat:
hehehehe :wahaha:
Im sorry.... this post was not a fic..... m(_ _)m
:fainted:
But I hope you guys would read my fics.... :kneelbow:
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CAPTAIN!!!!!!!! :salutes: (^.^)>
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My haphazard Stories :yep:
You’re My… (♥Takacchan♥) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=28997.40")
My Gift For You Is… (♥Takacchan♥) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=28997.20)
That’s Why I’m Here For You. (♥Takacchan♥) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=28997.20)
I Want to Know You (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=28997.20)
The Unexpected Guest (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=28997.0)
Sorry Guys, there's no update...
I just want to organize this (somehow)
Btw, it's really great to see that this thread is growing :mon inluv:
ehehe :on gay:
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Update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank You!!!!!!!
You know..
Your work is very Good :)
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Update please...
I like your fics.. esp. it's about Atsumina...
Thank you for the previous fics
Can't wait for the update...later
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Alexiel I like ur fic.... :otomerika:
I wanna update eventhough it was one shot.... :cow:
Actually I prefer to read longer than usual... :sweatdrop:
I want to know what happen next :fap
onegai onegai. .. :panic: