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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: asahi on August 02, 2011, 01:25:15 AM
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Prologue
“ Coward ” the perfect adjective that could perfectly describe me aside from being small. Can you believe that a 148 cm girl like me had been able to hurt, broke into pieces a girl whom every guy dreamed to be with?
But….
Wait… she’s not the only one who got hurt. Me myself had been suffering since the beginning of this stupid love story.
If I had just the courage on telling her how I really feel, if I hadn’t pretended that it was all just a game. If I was just brave enough to fight for her. If the word “coward” wasn’t inside of me, Everything must be different now ,Maybe you and her doesn’t exist instead of you and me are happy together.
I am regretting it, Everything. specially the day I’ve decided to give up on you. To choose friendship over love.
Please God let me turn back to time, I’ll do anything to win her back. I am begging you. It hurts so much that I want to die.
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Author’s note:
Good day to everyone.. please do tell me if you want this fic to be continue, I am not confident on my writing so feedbacks are welcome. And tell me what you want to happen next. Lol. Yoroshiku.
And im gonna post my upcoming stories through this account. “asahi”. You see it right, it’s my second account. Im just gonna use this for posting my fics. My other account is not to be revealed. But I used it on commenting your works.
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The prologue was sad but it was also interesting
please continue this story
I can't wait for the first chapter
Update soon
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Shouldn't it be 148cm? :nervous
Apart from that, interesting prologue! :D
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nice prologue :yep:
pls do continue :bow:
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Please continue
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LOL my eyes went O_O when I saw the 48cm part. :]]] Cute mistake.
I'm sensing a sad fic on this. :[
Mysterious Asahi.
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I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!PLEASE ..... I'm sensing this is gonna a really sad , full of pain and suffering love story......... I'm looking forward and expecting quite a lot on this .......... update soon
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please do tell me if you want this fic to be continue,
Do you want this fic to be continued?
Possible answers:
1-Yes.
2-Yes.
3-Do you really need to ask? ;)
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please do tell me if you want this fic to be continue..
yes!!!! please!!!! :wriggly:
And im gonna post my upcoming stories through this account. “asahi”. You see it right, it’s my second account. Im just gonna use this for posting my fics. My other account is not to be revealed. But I used it on commenting your works.
LOL... :on lol: so mysterious~~~
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Yes please continue!
hmmm so mysterious, but I think I might know which one is your other account XD
once again, please continue, thank you! :mon cute:
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i lol'ed hard at my own mistake. 48 cm. lmao. XD XD sorry about that. and thanks for reading and commenting :cow:
and i think someone had figured it out who am i already. :smhid keep giving thank you huh. be quite you gurl XD keep my identity a secret XD
here's the first part.
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Chapter 1
I was inside an empty dark room with my very dear friend Oshima Yuko. Yuko and I had been friends since highschool, I am with her through good and bad times of my life, almost half of it I spent it with her. I love yuko so much, she was like a real sister to me. She’s the most important person of my life since my mother and father passed away. Naturally being with her makes me comfortable. Everything seems fine whenever she’s around.
But not today’s case.
The genki, cheerful yuko whom I know isn’t the one in front of me right now, her head was bowed down and tears from her eyes were formed. Pain in my chest have been creeping through my whole body. The question “what have I done?” was making my mind go freaking crazy.
“Y-Yuko…?” I was afraid to speak but I know I have to, I feel like I know why but I am scared to know.
“I love her takamina” still sobbing, she’s looking at me giving me a fake pain smile.”but.. she.. loves you, am I r-right?”
That’s it. This is definitely the reason why. I should have stop myself from the beginning. Falling from her wasn’t the right decision. This stupid heart of mine is at fault, I know that yuko likes her too, I promised myself before that anything happens I would never make Yuko cry. But what am I going to do Yuko? I love her too. And we are together now, just keeping it to you.
“p-please takamina. Just give her to me, I love her so much, I can’t live without her, you’re my bestfriend right? Please.. im begging you...”
Looking away is the only thing I could do, I can’t promised her for me to stay away from the girl she loves.
“takamina!!” grabbing my shoulders and start shaking me.
“WHAT YUKO?! Isn’t it too damn unfair? I love her too!! I can’t just give her away like a toy to you! She’s too important! The only person I did love like this!!”
“but…” she loosened her grip on my shoulders and started crying out loud, I can see that she’s shaking and her knees are going weak and turned out to be her kneeling down. It’s really a pain on my chest seeing her like this.
“I just wanted to be happy before the last remaining time of my life takamina”
Not this again, why are you always using this to get what you want?! Yuko has a problem with her heart. It’s not yet sure whether she’s stay alive before turning 30.
I kneeled down and hug her tight. I give up. Even though I love her so much I still can’t choose her over you right?
“a selfish request here again oshima, she’s all yours now, I give up” The last words I was able to say then she hugged me back.
I started crying as well, after declaring a white flag for my love for Kojima Haruna.
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i don't know what's gonna happen next :panic: :sweatdrop:
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Hold up, hold up. KOJIMA HARUNA?! The leading-lady in this fic? God, I'm dying to know more. Damn a Takaharu + Kojiyuu fic. Hoping Atsuko will come out in the scene soon.
Nooo, my Kojiyuu. :banghead: :cry:
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O.o wow a TakaHaru that was unexpected but I love surprises this is getting interesting.
*salutes* :) I will keep quiet about your secret identity *puts on a mask*
Thanks for the quick update, please continue :twothumbs
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HAHAHAH. gurl it's obvious from your writing. and you notice what i've done. XD
be nice to meh or i'll reveal everything :D
and ASDFGHJKL:
omg dying. where's my atsumina in here :angry: :banghead:
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omg... I think it will be gonna AtsuMina , AtsuYuu's fic :stoned:
so its about takaharu and kojiyuu .. :on lol:
I am waiting for your update. :hee:
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wooowww... this is different ~~~ XD
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I thought it'll be Atsumina....but ohh well.......
Please write more! I wanna know what will happen next
update soon
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Its getting so interesting
I need to know what Is going to happen next
Update soon
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Oh, a Takamina, Yuko, Kojiharu triangle, interesting
And by the way it's 148,5 cm. It's very important the ',5' part ^^
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WOW, LOVE TRIANGLE :shocked :shocked
and Haruna the leading lady! i wonder who she'll choose, uhmm this is like the battle of the midgets! :lol:
Well for me, i'll go with KojiYuu, since they are my favorite paring, then second Atsumina! wait, where's Acchan?! Acchan should show up in the next chapter and seduce Takamina!
update soon :bow:
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A/N: Sorry for the super late update, I hope you haven’t forgotten about this story yet. Lol, here goes the chapter two. And everyone was really not impressed that takamina is with haruna. You guys will see, but this story is definitely not a TakaHaru one :P
Chapter 2
After the day that I decided to broke up with haruna for the sake of my beloved friend yuko, I never came to talk to her again. She was crying really hard when I told her that I can’t keep going on the games we are doing, I told her that career is much important and in the first place I never wanted to be serious with her and I was just playing, experimenting things with her, that she was just like a companion when im depressed and no love at all. I didn’t know how did I manage to say that to her looking straight on her eyes, and without even crying. I never knew I am good at lying. She slapped me really hard. “I really did love you Minami. For real. Y-You..Why? I-Im so stupid for falling for someone like you, You don’t deserve love… I hate you so much.” The look she was giving me is too much, the only thing that I never wanted to see is you crying, yet here you are with those red firing eyes and the reason is me. she start to walk away after leaving the words that would crash me “Goodbye Takamina.”
That’s it.
Everything has gone to an end, “ I am sorry Haruna, I love you so so much, I never felt this happy before meeting you, b-but I don’t know anymore she is important to me too. And im sure she will take care of you… Sayonara.” Tears had finally escaped my eyes uncontrollably; I felt really weak right now.
I hate myself..
I want to die..
I want you back..
I can’t breathe. Everything is getting blurred, I can’t hear anything. “haruna.. haruna… haruna…” I keep calling her in between sobs. I can’t take this feeling, my heart is broking into pieces. I started to crying out loud not caring if someone would hear me. I don’t care. I started to think it’s for yuko’s happiness. “you love your bestfriend too, right Minami?” I keep telling to myself. “you are doing this for her.. you shoud be happy” I brought up my hands to my chest clenching my shirt. I am now sitting along the corridor of the café im working at leaning my back on the cold wall hugging my knees.
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I don’t know how long I’ve been sitting there sobbing, My head is all messed up, my shirt is really soaked from my tears.
Then I heard someone.
“ ano, excuse me..”
I ignored, she would just leave eventually. I am not in the mood obviously on talking to someone.
I can feel her kneeled down, she started tugging my shirt. “are you alright?” I heard her speak, I manage to tell her “I-m sorry, but can yo –eh? Wh-what?”
I felt safe arms around my back, this stranger had pulled me into a tight hug. I was so shocked that I wasn’t able to say anything.
“ I don’t know what happened to you, I saw you crying here.. im not really good at comforting people specially people I don’t know completely, but even so.. I d-don’t know why but I can’t just walk pass the crying you.. ”
Her voice is so soothing, it makes me calm yet I started sobbing again remembering why I ended up crying here, and hug this completely stranger back. I feel really safe in her arms. She hold me tight that I was like the most precious thing in this world.
“ ..just let it all out.. everything will be fine…..”
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A week had passed since that hurtful event happened also the warm meeting I had encountered with that stranger. Everytime I bumped into haruna, I can’t still look at her straight eyes, my feelings for her haven’t change even just a little.
“ah! Takamina! There you are! Everyone was told to gather at the dining hall. You lazy midget shouldn’t be the captain of this café.”
“ah, okay I’ll be there sasshi, and stop calling me midget!!”
“Just kidding captain, now, hurry up.. I think there was some sort of important announcement.” Sasshi then walk away.
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“Okay Everyone here gather up.” Akimoto Yasushi called, the head and the owner of this café.
“ I have an important announcement to make. We the Akihabara48 café will form an idol group and all of you will be part of it. You. You. You. You, everyone of you!”
“ EHHHHHHHHHH? YATTA!!” was all of the girl’s reaction.
You could hear the squealing and excitement of their voice, then I smiled at the picture of the big smiled of them. “ I never seen them so happy and excited before.”
While looking around I spotted the girl whom I love standing next to my bestfriend, she was so happy then I remembered it was her dream to become an idol. I murmered to myself “it’s really great that slowly… you’ll be able to reach your dream.”
“.. Im glad that everyone Is excited to this project, but there is still one more thing.” Akimoto-san continued.
“This time I will be adding a new member, this girl is my friend’s daughter whom the one that helped me start this business… you can enter now young lady.” She signaled the person at the back of the door.
She walked right beside akimoto-san and my eyes widened. “eeeh??!” This girl…
“Maeda Atsuko desu, Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu.”
TBC.
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FINALLY!! ACCHAN IS HERE!!! Takamina will not be hurt anymore!! and there will KOJIYUU and ATSUMINA couple!! lol hope so?
Sigh* Please continue~ PLEASE!! MY KojiYuu <333
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:k-sad: My takamina !!
Acchan you finally here !! Please support Takamina and help her !!
Update soon please ! :luvuluvu:
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Yay Acchan!!! But I still think Yuko is not fair
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kojiyuuu. atsumina im waiting.
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It started to get good too X3
do you happen to finish this or will it stay incomplete?
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I am hoping you continue writing this story :bow: