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Title: THE EXCHANGE - S2 CH.9 (4/05/2015)
Post by: cmze on September 24, 2011, 07:55:47 PM
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!!

hello everyone..well let me say that i was reading kuroi tenshi (i fell in love with that fic) and well this came to my head "is not the same but it's with angels and it's mayuki"
NOTE: all the comments of yuki about humans are part of the show don't feel offended okay! the first chapter is heavy but the next will get better :)

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why we have to take care of them? i'm tired of being like this! are they special or something? no,they're just patetic,rude,stupid things that were created to..i don't know but they're useless an they're always cousing us troubles!
"stop saying those things,someone can hear you!"
i don't care!!! (shouting)
"you know what you're doing it's not okay..why you hate them so bad?"
hate...they're not worth of my hate! (shouting)
"hello!you shouldn't think like that,you can hate a book by its cover!" the light says
who are you?
i think it's time for you to learn things! the light says
what are you talking about?
~~~~~~~~~~~~>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hmmm..why everything is so blurry!
what the hell..?
where am i?
what are this things conected to me?
the girl gets up of bed and disconect all the things that were conecting to her body
machines i saw them before but..this can't be real! where am i?
the girl looks at the window and see the traffic the cars,the people!
no way? this can't be..THIS IS EARTH! i'm here..
the girl sees a mirror and looks at her reflex
what..i'm a..i'm a...HUMAN!
the girl touches her lips,her nose,her eyes,her cheeks!
i'm a human!
she sits on the edge of the bed and accidentally presses a buttom..
inmediately a nurse appears..
kashiwagi san! kashiwagi san..you're up!
kashiwagi san?
the nurse calls the doctor..
the doctor arrives to the room and starts examinating her!
why you're touching me? let go! keep your dirty human hands off me! the girl says mad
the nurse wraps her arms around the girl to keep her calm
let go! where are my wings? the girl shouts
did you say wings? the doctor asks
"no" the girl says remembering she's a human too
well it seems like everything is okay,we already called your parents! the doctor says
you need to rest! the nurse says
i don't think she needs to rest.. i mean she's been in coma for 3 years! why you don't take look around the hospital?while wait for your parents!
okay! the girl says calmed
the girl gets out of the room and walks around the hospital..
so this is an hospital..smells awful..and i can feel death around what a boring place! the girl says while sits next to another girl who was covering her face to stop crying
hmmm..why are you crying? the girl asks
my..my..father..the girl says between sobs
what's with your father? the girl asks
why..god.. wants to.. taking.. him.. away..from.. me? the crying girl asks between sobs still covering her face
god? what god has to do with this? the girl asks pouting
well..he controls our lives! the girl answers
hahahha what stupid thought people have ! the girl says laughing
huh? why are you laughing?this is not time for that!
god doesn't have anything to do with this,maybe your dad deserves everything that's happening to him! the girl says laughing
what? the crying girl reacts while gets up and looks at the girl laughing
"you..you're nobady to say who desrves what!" the girl shouts and all the sudden she slaps the laughing girl
the girl was stunned "what's this feeling? why i'm feeling this? this hurts! i feel like my face is burning! who she think she is to touch me? "the girl thouhgt while gets up and looks at the crying girl in the eyes with a hate look
"now i can say that you deserve that!" tge crying girl says
the other girl puts her hand where the other slapped her and says "don't you ever touch me again!"
who's watanabe mayu? the doctor asks
me! the crying girl says rising her hand and more tears wanted to show
the other girl turns around and walks away (from the distance she could hear)
i'm sorry,we did everything we could! the doctor says
mayu knelts and covers her face to cry..
"maybe you deserve it too" the girl murmures while keeps walking without looking back
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
parents? seems like your parents doesn't really take care of you before that's why you tried to kill yourself and now that they have a second chance they're trying to make it up to you,trying to buy you with silly stuff..GREAT JOB PARENTS!
why i have to go the school,i'm not from here anyways!
i hate walking,give me back my wings! yuki says while looks up
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~At school~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
mayu chan we're really sorry! a girl says
we heard about your dad! a guy says
you can count on us if you need something! a girl says
thanks mayu says while sits..
good morning class! the teacher says
good morning teacher! the class answers
well let me tell today is a special day i have a surprise! the teacher says
mmmm..! some students says
what's going on? the teacher asks
another student tell the teacher what happen..
mayu chan i'm sorry! the teacher says
don't worry miss,why you don't tell us the surprise? mayj says faking a smile ( she doesn't really care,she just want to cry,shout,destroy everything around her)
well we have a new student..please come in!
the girl walks into the classroom.
"you" mayu murmures
my name is kashiwagi yuki,i hope we can be really good friends! she says smiling and looking fixedly to mayu
she's hot! a guy says
why she's looking to mayu chan like that! a girl murmures
it seems like a killer look but with a smile! another guy murmures
kashiwagi san there's an empty chair next to me! a guy says smiling
yuki ignore him and sitted next to mayu...
hello mayu chan! yuki says smiling extending her hand
(what are you planning you told me to not touch you ever again..) mayu thought
mayu extended her hand and yuki aqueeze it hard
the class started and really fast get to the lunch time
yuki san! a guy says and takes her by her shoulder
mayu took that as a sign and left the classroom
why you didn't sit next to me? that made me sad!
sorry about that! yuki says faking a smile
i'm ikki by the way
great!
i'm koji!
fantastic  but i have to go see you! yuki says
now where did she go? god men are so annoying.. yuki murmures while walks
stairs hmmm..yuki thought
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<
in all the schools that there's in japan,she has to go to this one! mayu shouts while scratches her head and looks to everyone from the terrace!
so here you are..what are you planning to suicide? yuki asks
what? mayu reacts
i was joking! yuki says
do i look like i want i joke? mayu asks irritated
yuki got closer to mayu and takes her by her uniform "you hit me...you owe me big time"
i don't owe you anything! now let me go,i have things to do! mayu says while tries to remove yuki's hands off her uniform
yeah like feel sorry for yourself! yuki says
why are you so cold?you can say that he deserve it but what about me? what about my mom?do i deserved lose both? am i that bad? do i deserve to be alone?mayu says crying
yuki let go her uniform and relized that she doesn't have those answers and also she doesn't know why mayu's pain maker her sad now
yuki turned around and walked away...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
Post by: RenaChii on September 25, 2011, 12:09:49 AM
I hope they can get along soon~  :nervous

Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
Post by: cmze on September 25, 2011, 10:54:00 PM
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                2.GOOD ANGELS /FALLEN ANGELS 

(Saturday) 
why i couldn't answer her questions? lose,win,love,hate what are those things? why am i supposed to learn about this? yuki wonders while looks to her hands (she was sitting in a park wacthing the people pass)
it was true..an angel turned into a human! a guy says 
yuki looks back and sees a skinny,tall guy (nerd type)
who are you? yuki asks surprised by his word 
i dreamt about you! the guy says 
about me? are you crazy? 
i know who you are! the guy says 
i'm kashiwagi yuki! she says while gets up and extend her hand to greet him 
nice try but you're an angel! the guy says 
i'm an angel too and my mortal name is eiji ! the guy says 
you're an angel too! what are you doing here? 
i wanted to be a human! eiji says smiling 
why? yuki asks pouting 
because i wanted to feel! eiji says 
what? yuki asks 
hate,good,bad,happy,sad and all the sensations that comes with it even love! eiji answers while starts walking through the park 
yuki follows him and murmure "love"  what's so special about it? 
you'll see! eiji says and keeps walking 
hey,if you are a human..how did you know i was an angel?
well..i still have some of my abilities! eiji says smiling
abilities? yuki says
yes,we're not as strong as we were as angels but we're stronger than humans,we still have the perception of things.. an example is when you got up in that hospital ypu could smelled death right? eiji asks 
you're totally right! yuki says 
look! eiji says while points a mother with her son :
what are you crying? the mother asks while the kid is hugging her
because.. i.. fell..my knee hurts! the kid answers between sobs  
aww my baby..it's okay! the mother says while makes him sits next to her,wipes his tears and kisses his knee 
now do you feel better? the mother asks smiling with a sweet look
yes! the kid answers smiling and goes back to play
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 is not always like that! yuki says looking at her wrists 
yes,i know that! do you feel bad about it?eiji asks sad 
sort of! yuki answers 
you know i hated humans because they had all this! eiji says looking around 
i guess,it's not that bad seeing the sunset from here! yuki says serious
(phone ringing) 
oh sorry it's my mother,she worries! eiji says smiling 
it's okay go home,it's late anyways! yuki says 
see you,yuki chan! eiji says 
"love" yuki murmures while walks and remember everything that happened yesterday 
Help! a girl shouts
 shut up whore! a man shouts 
yuki stops walking,she was about to turn around but somehow the voice was familiar; she walked closer and what saw she couldn't believe that man has his hands on mayu! 
yuki clenched her fist (she couldn't believe it how many bad things has to happen to mayu for very firt time she was feeling anger ) 
yuki runs to the man dirction and tackled him (yuki is stronger than humans..in case you forgot it) the man was knock out..
mayu was shocked and crying.."yuki chan" 
all the sudden appeared 2 more men...
so the girls likes to play rude! one man says
let's play rude then! the other man says 
yuki smirked " why i always has to cross way with the garbage" 
what did you just say? one the man says while throws a punch 
yuki stops the punch with her left hand 
huh? the man say 
how? the other man says
yuki smirked again and use her right fistto punch him on his stomach 
ugggh! the man says before faint
what? the one man standing says afraid
you..should..go! yuki says smiling while kick the one on the floor and walks her way to the man standing 
i'm..really..mad..you should go! yuki says serious 
the man was about to run! "too late" yuki says while grabs him by his shirt from the back and throws him to the floor and kicks him till he faint 
mayu was there watching she couldn't believe "how a person like yuki could beat 3 to men like nothing" 
are you okay mayu chan? yuki asks while walks to her 
another man appeared behind mayu! 
mayu chan! yuki shouts and runs to them 
the man does on mayu and puts her to sleep 
huh? yuki says 
so a girl who can beat three guys.. that's exciting..for humans! the man says 
who are you? and what you did to mayu chan? yuki says 
i'm surprised! is she your friend? the guy asks pouting 
"no" yuki says 
i'm alexander an angel! the man says smiling while puts his arm around yuki's neck 
c'mon you're sister don't be shy! he says smilling 
sister! yuki repeats 
i must admit,i never thought that i'll find you this fast! he says smiling
why you wanted to find me? yuki asks
well..i want you by my side,i need angels like you..who hates human race to join me and help me lead A WORLD OF FALLEN ANGELS!! alexander says excited 
what is in the newspaper that i'm an angel? wait a minute
that means you want to destroy human race? yuki asks 
yup! alexander says smiling
i'm not interest! yuki says and removes alexander's arm off her 
if you're not with me,you're against me! alexander says serious 
i guess i am! yuki says while walks to mayu
alexander snaps his fingers and appear six fallen angels 
you can beat human but angels..i don't think so! alexander says smiling 
all yours guys! alexander says while leaves 
the six angels beat yuki at the same time..
don't be cowards come one by one and i'm sure i can take you down! yuki says while cleans blood on the corner of her mouth while gets up
leave to me,i'll finish her! the girl says 
the girl attacks fast,yuki can't barely see the punches but she feels the pain 
yuki was on the floor... breathing fast,she was trying to get up but she was a human so her body doesn't respond 
the girl puts her foot on yuki's stomach and starts pressing down hard 
ahhhhhh..! ahhhhhh..! yuki shouts 
don't be loud! the girl says 
yuki closes her eyes 
LET HER GO! mayu shouts while beats her with a stick 
 "mayu chan now i get it!" yuki's eyes opened 
you little bitch! the girl says while takes mayu by her neck and lift her up and throws her against the wall leaveing her unconsciousness 
WE'RE GUARDIAN ANGELS!!  yuki shouts while gives the girl a combo of punches till she knock her out
the other 5 angels were about to fight yuki but two of them were confused " that girl was about to sacrifice her own life just to save you!" the fallen angel says while looks at yuki
"we're guardian angels!" the other angel repeats 
what's wrong with you? leonard? atsuko? one of the fallen angels asks while looks at both fallen angels
we don't want to fight you? the other 3 fallen angels said serious 
i guess we have to fight for what we believe! atsuko says smiling
yuki take that girl and go away! leonard says smiling
..but i want to help you! yuki says sad
no,go away! atsuko says smiling 
you guys are not going to win! yuki says sad
thank you yuki..you show us the way "never forget  we're guardian angels" leonard and atsuko says smiling 
yuki touches her cheek with her fingers and feels a liquid she looks to her fingers and see that it looked like water 
"i guess these are the famous tears" yuki murmures and then goes to take mayu she putted mayu on her back and carried her to her home..
still feeling sad about the other angels that sacrifice for them
sorry i'll finish this later i gotta go to work! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
Post by: RenaChii on September 26, 2011, 07:29:38 AM
Is that Acchan?!

So curious about MaYuki~  XD

Please update soon~  :bow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
Post by: immortal_K on September 27, 2011, 05:21:33 AM
I missed so much =(

Well at least I'm here now, thanks for your updates!

I just have to love MaYuki!  :heart:

please update soon!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI,ATSUMINA,KOJIYUU)
Post by: cmze on September 29, 2011, 08:36:57 PM
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                               3.GUARDIAN ANGELS?

well.. like you know me i just can't write about just one pair so i decided to put more...Hope you like it!!! xD

please let me help her! 
why? 
its my friend,maybe is alone and not knowing what to do
it's not that easy send an angel to earth it takes human life sacrifice!
i didn't know that! 
yes,everytime an angel goes down a sacrifice is made! 
please..
i can't i'm sorry we can't sacrifice more lives 
(sighs)
---------///-----------/////---------/////-------
minami please moves those boxes to the garage! minami's mom says 
why me? minami says 
because i'm busy! minami's mom replies 
ok,ok,stupid boxes! minami says growling while carries them to the garage 
i guess it's here where i have to put them! minami says while leaves them on an old desk...
for some reason the paint jars fell  from the shelf scaring the hell out of minami who hide behind an old chair..
what the hell? my garage is possesed! now that i think about this..this  is the scenary of every horror movie "a girl alone in her garage" minami thought 
c'mon minami let's see what it is..maybe is just the wind so don't freak out! minami says to herself
minami gets up and slowly walked to the shelf and she couldn't believe what she saw..
why is a girl in my garage? 
minami kneels and reaches to remove the girl hair from her face..
wow she's really pretty..wait a minute what with these wounds? did somebody hurt her? 
minami took the girl who was unconsciousness and carried her to her room..
her mother didn't notice because she was reading some papers! 
minami puts the good looking girl on her bed and then went to get some things to clean her wounds..
after cleaning a little her wounds minami decided to sleep on the floor (she didn't want to hurt the girl if they sleep together) 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yuki carried mayu to her house as usual her parents weren't at home..
sorry yuki san! yuki says to herself while walks upstairs 
she puts mayu on her bed and then notices that mayu has a cut on her forhead..
yuki slowly traces her fingers on mayu face (she couldn't deny mayu was pretty) 
why am i touching her? yuki thought then she turned red and walked to the bathroom,she washed her face and stare herself in the mirror.. 
"for very first time in my life i felt...i felt different.. i felt weak.. is this part of being human?" yuki thought while sees her fist..it's totally red and hurts 
yuki takes a washcloth  damps it and gets out of the bathroom she sits next to mayu on bed and starts cleaning her 
why did i save you? it's not like i care what happen with you? but of i didn't save you those men.. yuki though while squeezes the washcloth which make drops fall on mayu's face waking her up..
"yuki chan" mayu says while sits 
are you okay? yuki asks 
thank you! mayu says while hugs her and cries 
yuki blushes and clears her throat but then relaxed and was able to smell mayu's scent..(yuki didn't know what to say or do so just let her hug her even though she hates being touch by humans "i guess mayu is that special!)
you can stay here the night if you want! yuki says 
thank you yuki chan! mayu says still hugging yuki tighly
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
stop playing ikki we're going to hit a bush or something! 
don't worry nyan nyan he's a good driver! 
yeah right miichan! 
stop playing while you're driving! nyan nyan says 
what's that? stop stop! nyan nyan and miichan shouts 
we hit something! miichan says 
go and see what was! ikki says 
nyan nyan and miichan got off car and went what was
ikki turns on the car and drives away leaving the two alone and ...
you son of...! miichan shouts
what a jerk he hit her! nyan nyan says 
OMG! we hit a person a girl,we're killers! miichan says 
is she okay? nyan nyan asks 
no,nyan nyan we just hit her with a car! remember?miichan answers
what we should do? miichan says 
we have to take her to a hospital! nyan nyan says 
let's call an ambulance! miichan says while dials the number nervous 
the ambulance came..
miichan and nyan nyan explained everything
<In the hospital>
i'm going to stay here the night! nyan nyan says sitting next to the unconsciousness girl
okay you stay here and i'll come tomorrow! miichan says
okay see you tomorrow! nyan nyan says
see you tomorrow! miichan says 
nyan nyan stares at the girl and says "i'm sorry" while puts the palm of her hand on her cheek
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
did you heard what happened? 
what happened? 
i heard that leonard and atsuko are dead they revealed to those fallen angels but..they didn't make it 
you mean they're physically dead but spiritually they are alive right? 
i don't know they turned they back to humans but then regret..i just don't know 
those fallen angels!!! 
they're trying to dissappear humans race to avoid us to go down! 
yes,now i know we need humans if want to go down! 
hey you! do remmebered that you wanted go down? a light asks 
yes,totally! 
well you will go down! 
seriuosly?? both asks 
yes,so prepare but your mission is to watch the fallen angels and be our spy can you do that? the light asks 
of course,we need to take them down! 
okay go! 
<on earth> 
where am i? the girl murmures while opens her eyes then gets up of bed but she didn't notice she step on a hand 
OUCH!!  a girl says 
She removes her foot and look at the other suspiciously
who are you? the girl says 
i'm glad your up! the tiny girl says smiling 
i said who are you? the taller girl asks 
my name is takahashi minami my friends call me takamina! the tiny girl says while gets up 
takamina? the girl repeats 
what's your name? takamina asks 
i don't have a name! she says sad and starts walking 
where your going you're really hurt! takamina says 
i'm okay! she says while walks with her hand on her stomach 
stop! takamina says while wraps her arms from the back of the taller girl 
don't go! takamina murmures 
sorry! the sad girl says 
she tries to keep walking but takamina don't let her..
the girl feels dizzy and loses her balance making her fall on the tiny girl who was hugging her from behind (both were sitting on the floor) 
are you okay? takamina asks 
takamina you are tiny but strong! the girl says with a little smirk on her face 
i'm not that strong! takamina says blushing and scratching the back of her head
the girl let her body leans on takamina and fell sleep 
takamina didn't move,she will stay that way till the other wakes up! 
MEANWHILE 
yuki wakes up and notices that mayu has her arms round her body..
when this happen? i won't kill just because you had enough already! yuki thought 
good morning yuki chan! a sleepy mayu says while removes her arms off yuki's body and gets up 
yuki  sits on bed..
mayu crawls on bed to  yuki and then stare her 
what's wrong? yuki asks 
mayu puts the palm of her hand on yuki's cheek 
yuki blushes again but this time she turned her head 
mayu kisses her on her cheek
yuki is surprised by mayu's action she didn't react or said anything..
thank you yuki chan! mayu says while gets up and goes to pick up her clothes and puts it on..
yuki tured around and looks mayu walk away 
"she kissed me!" yuki murmures while rubs sofly where mayu kissed her 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~•••••~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
nyan nyan was sleeping holding the hand of the unconsciousness girl when she fell a lighy squeeze she wakes up and sees the girl with her eyes open..
she couldn't believe "she was in a really bad hurt she shouldn't wake up yet" 
the girl looked at nyan nyan and smiled "you're a pretty human the girl says smiling" and hugs her not caring all the machines that were conecting to her body 
nyan nyan was in shock but didn't break the hug "somehow that girl was adorable with those dimples" 
nyan nyan hugs her back and cries,she was feeling terrible for the accident! 
miichan opens the door and see nyan nyan hugging the girl and the girl was awake..
nyan nyan told her to call the doctor 
the doctor arrived to the room fast and checked the girl
"unbelieveble this girl is completely healthy..is like the car never hit her" 
do you remember your name? the doctor says 
name! do i have a name?  the girl asks  smiling 
your name is oshima yuko! the nurse says 
oshima yuko..i like it! the girl says still smiling 
i think you need to rest! the doctor says
i want her! yuko says smiling and pointing to nyan nyan 
me?huh? nyan nyan reacts
according to the information,yuko is an orphan..she works in a clothing store! the nurse says 
you shoukd take care of her,is the last thing you could do! the doctor says to nyan nyan and miichan 
sorry times up,i gotta go yo work! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
Post by: kahem on September 29, 2011, 09:27:34 PM
Your stories are really awesome a tear appeared in my eye lol
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI) (ATSUMINA) (KOJIYUU)
Post by: cmze on October 01, 2011, 08:07:35 AM
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                               3.5 GUARDIAN ANGELS?
                             (ATSUMINA'S FRAGMENT) 

"i..fell..i..fell sleep" the sleepy girl says while opens slowly her eyes and strecthes herself
hmm..what? the girl says when notices that she had been sleeping on the tiny girl
"takamina..takamina" the girl says while turns her head and shakes the tiny girl
"hmmm i'm up.." the tiny girl says with her eyes close
you're not up! the girl says while puts the palm of her hand on takamina's face rubbing it softly 
"humans surprise me..sometimes,you slept like this just to have me a little longer!" the girl says murmuring
(still rubbing takamina's face)
KNOCK! KNOCK! (takamina's door) 
(the girl stops rubbing takamina's face)
takamina opened her eyes when she heard the first one
minami i'll go to the office ok? minami's mom says 
yes,it's fine! takamina replies rubbing her eyes with her hands while the other girl stares her
there's food on the fridge i'll try to come early if i don't you know what to do lock the doors! 
ok..! takamina replies 
the girl gets up and looks throught the window while takamina hears her mother walking the stairs and then closing the front door..
hey..you..girl with no name,let's go to eat! takamina says 
eat? the girl replies 
takamina takes her hand and guides her to the kitchen 
the girl feels takamina's warm hand "even your hand is warm" the girl thought
what do you like? takamina asks
"mmm.. i'm not hungry" the girl answers 
so you want ramen! takamina says 
i said i'm not hungry! the girl replies rising her voice 
takamina puts on her shoes..
where are you going? the girl asks 
i'm going to get you your ramen! takamina answers smiling to the girl
i don't want it! the girl replies
 ok i'll hurry! takamina says while opens the door and closes it fast to not hear the objection of the girl
i..never..said that! is she crazy? she don't even know me! i can a thief maybe she's too naive to think bad things about humans! the girl thought while watches a picture of takamina with her mom..
where is her dad? the girl murmures
<15 mins later>
i'm back! takamina shouts while enters and goes right straight to the kitchen to set everything up
the girl sees takamina set the table,(she wanted to help but she didn't know how)
let's sit! takamina says happy 
the girl sits and sighs 
eat! takamina says smirking 
the girl tastes it and her face changed "this taste so good" 
"i know right!" takamina says 
the girl keeps eating 
what about if i give you a name? takamina says 
(Humans giving names to angels what am i your pet!) the girl thought 
i don't need a name! the girl says while gets up 
i didn't mean to make you upset! takamina says 
i have to go! the girl says 
no,don't go! takamina says while gets up
sorry but i have to..THANK YOU TAKAMINA! the girl says giving her a smile
takamin sitted and washed the girl while leaves
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<A week later>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
takamina was walking to her home after school but she felt someone is following her so she turns around
are you takahashi minami? a girl asks
yes,i'm! who are you? 
i'm akicha my friends call me aki! the girl says smiling
and? takamina says 
i'm friend of atsuko! aki says 
atsuko? who's atsuko? takamina says 
according to your neighbor he saw a girl with the same caracteristics of my friend getting out of your house! aki says smiling 
i don't have a friend called atsuko! takamina replies
aki sighs and says "you really want it in the bad way!"
huh? takamina reacts
aki pushes takamina to an alley and beats her till let her nock out then she carries her to somewhere else
what she we do now? yoshiro asks 
wait till atsuko wants to contac her or wait till she wants to wake up and beat her again till she'll tell where atsuko is! akicha says 
what's your obsession with atsuko? yoshiro asks
not obsession i hate her,i can't believe she's alive!a aki says while clenches her fist 
yes,you're right i feel kinda offended too but if the others find out! yoshiro says
you're not going to tell them besides there's another girl i want to beat! aki says while remembers yuki..
look,look! she's waking up! yoshiro says 
rise and shine takamina! aki says 
takamina was pretty bad damage..
now tell how can i get to atsuko? aki asks 
even if i knew i would never tell you! takamina shouts and spits her in her face making aki  mad and slaps her
bitch! aki says 
Ring! Ring! 
it's yoshiro's phone..
yes! really..it's perfect..okay thank you bye! you're not going to believe this! yoshiro says smiling 
what? aki asks ready to punch again to takamina
atsuko  is a couple streets from here "this girl was a waste of timw!" yoshiro says 
ha..this is my present to atsuko! aki says smiling 
let's go get her! yoshiro says 
<after 10 min Atsuko's location>
 atsuko was walking home from the supermarket but a man gets in her way
yoshiroo! atsuko says in shock 
 look the present we brought! yoshiro says pointing 
atsuko turns around and her supermarket's bags fell on the floor..
ta...ta..ka..mi..na! a sttutering atsuko says 
do you like it? akicha says with her hands on takamina's uniform and winking to atsuko 
hey it's a little damage but the intention is what counts!yoshiro says 
yes,she made us work..she didn't wanted to tell us where ypu where so..mmm well you're seeing what haplen next!aki says smiling
i'm not..i'm not.. atsuko says murmuring 
what did you say? yoshiro says
I'M NOT GOING TO FORGIVE YOU! atsuko shouts 
and beats yoshiro on his face 
HOW COULD YOU? atsuko shouts with tears in her eyes while kicks him 
aki throwed takamina aside and run after atsuko 
aki grabbed her from behind trying to stop her to move but atsuko was so mad that she didn't care she bent down and throwed akicha to the floor then she pick her up and starts punching her like there's no tomorrow 
HOW COULD YOU? I DON'T FORGIVE YOU! I DON'T FORGIVE YOU!  atsuko shouts while punches her 
but somehow there were another arms around her back..
don't do it! a girl murmures  
atsuko knows the voice,she would never forget that voice..
atsuko stopped and helped takamina to walk home leaving yoshiro and aki really mess up on the floor
<At home atsuko's home>
atsuko sitted takamina on her bed..
what persons huh? takamina says grinning 
minami i was so worried about you! atsuko says while hugs her tighly 
i'm ok! takamina says 
not you're not! look what they've done to you! atsuko says with the palm of her hand on takamina's cheek
i miised you! takamina says 
i missed you too! atsuko says 
don't leave again! takamina says
i won't! atsuko says pushing softly to takamina on bed
takamina closed her eyes and atsuko stares while she's sleeping..
"i won't leave you again..i'll stay here to protect you!"
WHY I DID IT ATSUMINA? i don't know it came to my mind like that! but don't worry working on kojiyuu and mayuki...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI) (ATSUMINA) (KOJIYUU)
Post by: kahem on October 05, 2011, 08:42:51 AM
Wow mad Acchan is scaring lol I like the Takacchan interaction
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI) (ATSUMINA) (KOJIYUU)
Post by: cmze on October 05, 2011, 12:31:06 PM
                                   THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                               3.5 GUARDIAN ANGELS?
                             (KOJIYUU'S FRAGMENT) 

This could get any better? nyan nyan says then sighs
i don't think so! miichan says between laughs 
what's wrong nyan nyan? yuko asks smiling,eyes shinning and with her arms wrapped around nyan nyan's waist 
nyan nyan looks at yuko smiling with her shinny eyes  and sighs again..
the three girls waited for the elevator's doors to open..
let's go! nyan nyan says while tries to walk with a squirrel clinging on her through the hall
they stopped  in one door 
miichan pulled out some keys of her puse and opened the door of the dept..
home sweet home! nyan nyan says while breaks the hug and goes to sit on the couch.. once there she closed her eyes to relax
yuko smiled and went to sit on the couch next to nyan nyan..
what are those? yuko thought while her hands acts by itself and grabs nyan nyan breast
miichan covered her mouth to not laugh so hard
WTF? nyan nyan opened her eyes and sees yuko smiling grabbing her boobs "they're so soft" 
nyan nyan didn't thought it twice and slapped the little squirrel 
hey don't be mean with the freaky midget stalker! miichan says laughing
yuko putted the palm of her hand on the swollen cheek and started to pout 
you're not going to cry? nyan nyan asked 
yuko started crying like a baby..
shut her up! miichan shouts 
what should i do! nyan nyan shouts back 
i don't know! miichan shouts covering her ears 
yuko stop! stop! nyan nyan says while shakes her 
AHHH! NYAN NYAN SLAAPPEDDDD MEE! yuko shouts crying while gets up and runs around the dept
nyan nyan do something! miichan says
i just tried,you do something! nyan nyan says 
why me? you were the one who slapped her! miichan says
i didn't know she would act like this! nyan nyan answers
AHHHH NYAN NYAN SLAPPED ME! yuko shouts still running around the dept 
nyan nyan takes a deep breath and puts her arm in the way to stop yuko..when yuko stopped nyan nyan says "i'm sorry,i'm sorry!" then leaned and gave her a kiss on the swollen cheek 
yuko was blushing and so was nyan nyan 
omg this seems a cute scene of an anime! miichan says 
nyan nyan looked at the shocked squirrel who wasn't even moving for the surprise
is she okay? nyan nyan asks to miichan 
i don't know,i think she's traumatized first your car hit her then you slap her and then you kiss her! what kind of love is that? miichan asks then moves her head side to side
nyan nyan grabs miichan by her shirt "no more jokes"
you should look back! miichan says poiting 
yuko blinked her eyes 
i'm sorry! i'm sorry yuko! nyan nyan says while let go miichan's shirt (she was feeling very sorry,somehow the squirrel's smile makes her feel good and now knowing that she hurt yuko kills her) 
yuko showed her a big smile then run to her direction and jumped on her 
ouch!! nyan nyan says while yuko was completely hugging her chest and rubbing her head against it "they're really soft nyan nyan" 
nyan nyan just sighed and smirked (she was feeling better now..yuko is not crying anymore)
(noise of yuko's stomach)
huh? there's is monster here! yuko says freaking out and pointing to her stomach
yuuchan you're hungry! nyan nyan says laughing (somehow yuko is adorable) nyan nyan thought 
hungry? yuko reapeats while gets up 
let's eat out! miichan says clapping her hands 
(At the restaurant) 
wow what a cute place! yuko says stunned 
well is a really expensive place and i don't know why we're here! miichan says 
tonight is a special night! nyan nyan 
why? yuko and miichan says at the same time 
well..yuko..is..with..us! nyan nyan says shyly 
yes,who knows what would happened if... (miichan for you sake just shut up) nyan nyan completes 
enjoy your food the waiter says 
yuko saw nyan nyan and miichan eating and imitated them..
"food" this tastes great! yuko says smiling while devoures everything on her plate 
wow she was hungry! nyan nyan says 
yuko ended with her plate and tooks miichan's 
hey that's my food! miichan says 
yuko kept eating...
oh! don't worry i don't mind not eating! miichan says 
yuko ended with miichan's food and tooks kojiharu's 
is it me or she's really hungry! nyan nyan says 
i think she's a goku' relative! miichan says 
goku doesn't exist! nyan nyan says 
explain me then why she's eating like that! miichan says
yuko ended with kojiharu's food and said smiling " this tastes great,i want more" 
MORE? everyone on the restaurant repeated 
wow everyone was watching us! miichan says 
yuko ordered more food...
you sure you can finish all that? nyan nyan asks 
you're going to get fat! miichan says 
yes,i can finish all this! yuko says smiling and looking to the food with shinny eyes..  (a table full of food) 
my wallet hurts! nyan nyan murmured pouting 
i don't think your wallet would recover fast! miichan says
all the sudden yuko got up...
yuko what's wrong? nyan nyan asks worried ( she noticed that yuko's eyes had changed and she wasn't smiling) 
what's wrong with her? miichan asks 
yuko run away from the restaurant...
yuko wait up! nyan nyan run away after her 
miichan was about to run after the girls but the waiter stopped her and showed her the bill..
what?!?!? now surely my wallet won't recover after this!  miichan says with a sigh while pays the bill 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yuko stops running after a couple blocks 
yuko! nyan nyan says while tries to catch her breath 
nyan nyan puts her hand on yuko's shoulder and notices that yuko was looking to a building 
(they were on the back of the building)
what's wrong yuko? nyan nyan murmures sad
yuko clenches her fist and with her other hand points to the sky...
i have to do something! yuko murmures mad 
what are you talking about? nyan nyan asks worry while hugs her from behind 
yuko breaks the hug and uses the other building to reach the top of the building that she pointed before (she was jumping) 
what? nyan nyan stared stunned 
that's imposible! nyan nyan says while sees yuko making her way up to the building..
nyan nyan sees yuko's shadow and what she saw she couldn't believe it...
are-are tho- those wi-wings? nyan nyan stutters but then she shook her head and run to the building front door and used the elevator to get to the terrace..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~In the terrace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
they were three men standing,one was covering a girl's mouth,another was laughing and the other was punching a guy..
give up already! a man says while punches the guy's stomach..
now tell us where is she? the man asks 
i don't know,please let her go.. she doesn't have anything to do with this! the guy answers 
you gave up being an angel just beacuse you fell in love with a pathetic and weak human..i feel disguted and that's why i'm going to kill you! the man says mad
mmmmmbbbb! 
shut up bitch! the man who was covering her mouth says 
say good bye! the man shouts with his fist about to punch the guy
ouch!!! what was that? the man says and looks at the stone that fell on the floor 
three against one! what a jerks! yuko says mad
who are you? the three man asks 
go away! the damage guy shouts 
shut up! the man says to the guy and beats him
yuko holds back her hair.."let's start the party" yuko eays while runs to the man that was laughing 
the man sees her coming but somehow yuko dessapeared and appeared on next to him
huh? the man says 
hello! yuko says while beats his stomach with her elbow
the man throwed himself on the floor.. the pain that he was feeling was terrible (he couldn't breath properly and he was spiting blood) 
who's next? yuko asks still mad 
so another angel! don't feel proud he was an useless human! the man that has the girl says 
koji sama! the man on the floor says 
the man throws the girl aside and walked to yuko "let's fight little angel" 
the man runs to yuko's direction..
yuko also runs to him..
yuko tried to kick him but the other man stopped her and made lose balance while the other beats her
the man punched yuko on her face and all over her body
what a weak angel! the man says while lift up yuko and beats her on he stomach several times and throws her away..
nyan nyan opened the door,she saw yuko on the floor and  inmediately went to her rescue
no way another human! the man says smiling 
the other man takes nyan nyan by her arm..
what a pretty girl,we have here! the man says touching her all over her body
let go off me! nyan nyan shouts and punches him on his ...
the guy slaps nyan nyan causing her to slip..
nyan nyan crawls to yuko says  "yuko" with tears on her eyes one tear fell on yuko's forhead..waking her up
"nyan nyan" yuko says 
nyan nyan putted her hand on yuko's cheek "My little squirrel" 
yuko smiled then got up and gave a step forward to cover nyan nyan 
why are you smiling? the man asks and runs to yuko's direction again 
yuko waits for him and sees the perfect timing to hit him 
this time she hitted him "just weak" 
yuko takes him by his hair and smashes his face on the floor several times to leave him knock out tthen took the one who wanted to touch nyan nyan "Don't you ever touch her again" yuko shouted and punched him on his face till she fell that she broke his nose  then kicked him several times till he couldn't get up..then she stopped
what is this? nyan nyan thought while looks the view
thank you! the guy and the girl says 
it's okay! yuko says while looks at the shocked nyan nyan..
yuko..we'll talk later! the guy says while leaves with her girlfriend 
yuko takes a deep breath and walks to nyan nyan 
let's get out of here nyan nyan! yuko says 
both girls walks home..
it was really ackward..
so this is an akcward silence! yuko thought 
Chocolate! yuko says while runs to the machine 
nyan nyan follows her and stared at yuko who was fighting with chocolate machine 
you bitch give me my chocolate! yuko says while shakes her hard 
yuko scratches her head and says  "please" 
c'mom i'm being nice! yuko says pouting 
"yuko" nyan nyan murmures 
then give me back my dollar! yuko says
do you want a piece of me? yuko shouts to the machine
"yuko" nyan nyan says 
you thief! yuko shouts 
"YUKO" nyan nyan says rising her voice 
ok,ok,what's wrong nyan nyan? yuko asks 
am i the only one who's wooried! those man almost kill you! nyan nyan shouts 
mmmm..!yuko looks down 
nyan nyan hugs yuko tighly "sorry yuko,i'm just worried!"
yuko hugs her back "thank you..nyan nyan" 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE (KOJIYUU)
Post by: kahem on October 05, 2011, 07:15:20 PM
Yay Yuko!!! The power of love made you save everyone lol
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 4.TEARS (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina)
Post by: cmze on October 18, 2011, 01:33:31 AM
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                        4.TEARS
                             
(At school)
Poor Mayu chan..i heard some men tried to rape her but someone save her! a girl in the back says 
really? first her dad now this poor her! a guy says 
Yuki sighs and stares the guys commenting with a look "shut the hell up"
Mayu wasn't even listening she was looking through her window 
(The ring bells)
finally lunch time! ikki says stretching his arms 
yes finally! i'm hungry and my head hurts for many maths! another guy says also streching 
hey Yuki san..i was thinking maybe we could go on a date! ikki while gets up and goes to Yuki's seat
(Mayu gets up and leaves the room) 
"no" Yuki answers not even looking at him and also gets up and leaves the room 
Yuki walks the hall looking for some place far from everyone but it seems there are humans everywhere then she remembered the terrace of the school 
Yuki went up and luckyly for her there was nobody..she decided to jump and eat in the rooftop of the entrance door of the terrace if anyone comes they will never see her up there..
she started eating even though she doesn't need it then she looked the view.. she was enjoying it..everything was so peaceful "earth is not as awful i thought" that came to her mind
the entrance door opens..Yuki can't see who is and she doesn't really care till she saw a familiar figure
"Mayu chan" Yuki murmured as she saw her staring the view 
Yuki didn't move she didn't wanted to disturb her so she decided stay there staring her...
Yuki fell something inside of her..but what is it? is not happiness for sure this feeling was familiar she felt it before..yes,she did when she saw Leaonard and Atsuko for last time..
Yuki saw them again..tears again they were Mayu's tears but why they are in her eyes too? why her chest hurts? and she keeps staring at her? 
Yuki couldn't take it anymore she hates the feeling! 
she needs to get hell out of there...but somehow she couldn't! she needs to know if Mayu...if Mayu is..going..to..be..fine. (that was the way she thought it she couldn't believe she was actually worry about that weak,useless and pathetic human) 
(The ring bells) (End of the lunch time)
Mayu turns and leaves the terrace..
Yuki is about to go the classroom but then her phone ringed 
hello"
Yuki san,i'm Eiji do you remember me? 
yes,i do! 
we need to talk..can you meet me now? 
okay! where? 
Akiba coffee!
okay i'm on my way! 
bye...
Yuki hanged the phone call and jumped on the floor
then went downstairs without anybody notices..
(sure she can jump from the building and get faster but she has a human body and it's hard to know if it going to get damage! so she rather do it in tge human way..) 
                            <Akiba coffee>
what the hell happened to you? Yuki asks while sits
mmm some fallen angels! Eiji answers smiling 
those son of..! Yuki says looking other way 
don't worry we're fine other angel saved us! Eiji says
we? who's we? and what angel? what they wanted with you?  Yuki asks 
easy girl! me and my girlfriend..the angel was a little girl who looked like a squirrel to be honest but still good looking and strong! what they wanted? me! 
what's that mean? Yuki asks while puts her fist on her chin (thinking about the other angel) 
they wanted to know when another angel is coming to earth! Eijji says and then drinks his coffee
another angel..Yuki murmures then sighs 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kojima san! Kojima san! the assistant says 
huh? what is it? Nyan Nyan answers 
i'm going home it's late! the assistant says 
okay good night! Nyan Nyan says 
good night Kojima san! the assistant says while closes the door of the office 
Nyan nyan gets up and gather her things and also goes home...
but on her way she passes the building where everything happen..
where for very first time she saw Yuko acting mad and where she saw... Wings? 
Wings? i can swear i saw them besides no human being can jump that high..it looked like she was flying 
Nyan Nyan couldn't believe all the things that were running her mind..
Apart from the though of losing Yuko..somehow she has very big feeling for that girl who acts like a little kid the feeling was indiscriptible she always felt alone but when Yuko is around it makes her happy but still it doesn't change the face that she saw her take down those men..
Nyan Nyan keeps walking and sees a chocolate store 
"Yuko is still Yuko" she thought then smiled and entered to store and bought many different chocolates for her squirrel..
<At Home> 
I wanna see cartoons! Give me the remote! Yuko shouts while tries to snatch the rekote from Micchan
"no" watch the top 10 is better! Micchan says 
give me the remote,I was watching first! Yuko shouts 
"no" i don't care at hours i always watch the top 10 stop bothering me! Miichan says 
Yuko tries to snatch it again!
ha! too midget! hahahhahah! Miichan says laughing
Yuko sitted then pouted and crossed her arms and said "i'm not midget..i'm just a little short"
totally a kid! Miichan said and gave her the remote 
someone opens the door! 
i'm home! Nyan nyan shouts while puts the keys on her purse and closes the door with her foot while the other hand had the bag with chocolates and candies for Yuko! 
Yuko heard Nyan Nyan and run to her then threw the remote which accidentally hit Micchan in her head 
ouch! Miichan shouts while rubs her head
Nyan Nyan! Yuko shouts happy while jumps on her
(both fell on the floor)
i missed you Nyan Nyan! Yuko says with her head buried in Nyan Nyan's chest sniffing her 
"Yukooooooo!" Nyan nyan shouted 
sorry! sorry! i just can't help it..you smell so good Nyan Nyan i love you! Yuko answers smiling 
you..you're just a perverted old man trapped in a young girl's body! Nyan Nyan says and then sighs even though the "i love you part it's ringing on her head!" 
"here" Nyan Nyan says while gets up and gives her the bag  
this is mine? Yuko asks 
yes,all yours! Nyan Nyan answers 
Chocolates! Yuko shouts and jumps of joy and then runs around the house 
look! look Miichan! My Nyan Nyan bought me chocolates! Yuko says happy while eats them 
give me one! Miichan says 
"no" Yuko says while eats 
give me one! Miichan says 
"no" these are all mine! Yuko says and puts the bag behind her 
whatever i'm on diet anyways! Miichan says then gets up and goes to the bathroom 
Nyan Nyan stares Yuko..
what is it Nyan Nyan? do you want some! Yuko says while offers her the bag 
you have a scar! Nyan Nyan says while puts her finger on Yuko's eyebrow
scar?! Yuko murmures 
please don't fight again! Nyan Nyan says then bites he lower lip and looks down
Nyan Nyan...Yuko says 
i don't want..i don't want you to get hurt! Nyan Nyan says then looks Yuko in the eyes..
what is this? Yuko asks then touches to what it seems water on Nyan Nyan's cheek and tastes it
they're are tears Yuko! Nyan Nyan answers 
it's salty! Yuko answers  then wipes Nyan Nyan's tears and hugs Her..."sorry if i made you worry!" 
Nyan Nyan closes her eyes and hugs Yuko tighly 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ouch! Atsuko it hurts! Takamina says complainig
i have to clean you up! Atsuko says 
no! Takamina moves and fall of bed 
Takamina! are you okay? Atsuko asks worry 
yeah yeah! that hurt too! Takamina says while climbs up to bed
sorry Takamina! Atsuko says sad 
hahhaha it was my fault i was the one who moved! Takamina says smiling
i'm not talking about that! Atsuko says while turns around abd tries to avoid tears
what? no,it's not your fault! Takamina says 
look what they did to you..i had to be there! Atsuko says and bites her lip to avoid to cry 
Atsuko... Takamina says with he arms wrapped around Atsuko's body "i wanted to see you again and if this the price that i have to pay..I WOULD DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN!"Takamina answers  
why? Atsuko asks 
honestly? i don't know! Takamina answers smiling
i should had kill....no,shouldn't you're not a killer! Takamina completes
you don't know me! Atsuko says 
i don't have to and you promise that you would never leave me again! Takamina says and hold her tigher 
run doesn't seem an option right now and yes,i know what i promised! Atsuko says 
i'm glad you know that so Atsuko is your name! Takamina says smiling while let go Atsuko
yes but i don't like it anymore! Atsuko answers
why? Takamina answers 
i don't want to remember my past! Atsuko says sad
Takamina looks at Atsuko with a sweet look...
Atsuko looks down sad..
got it! Takamina shouts smiling 
you got what? Atsuko asks 
why you don't change your name? Takamina answers smiling feom ear to ear 
change ny name? Atsuko repeats 
yesssss! Takamina says looking at Atsuko 
okay! Atsuko says looking another way and blushing 
(Takamina was looking at her and that outs her nervous)
what about Emi? Takamina asks 
no,if you change one word it would be Emo! Atsuko says moving her head side to side 
what about Chika? Takamina asks 
mmmm not feeling it! Atsuko says 
what about Cho? Takamina asks 
do you like the Ch don't you? Atsuko answers 
mmm i don't like it's just that those are the first names to come to my head! Takamina answers smiling and scratching her head! 
mmmm i don't know what name to use! Atsuko says and sighs 
hmmm hmmm! Takamina thinking with her finger on her chin
Takamiba it doesn't matter! Atsuko says 
shhhh! i'm thinking! Takamina says 
Atsuko stretches her arms and sighs 
what about Acchan? Takamina asks smiling 
Acchan? mmm maybe! Atsuko answer
okay Acchan is then right Acchan? Takamina asks 
"Acchan is Acchan then!" Acchan says smiling 
both laughs 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki san what are you thinking? i mean you haven't said anything in the hole afternoon! Eijii says 
nothing! Yuki answers 
you're not the sociable angel aren't you? Eiji asks
i don't like to talk! Yuki answers 
okay ackward! Eiji says 
look! a girl in that tall building is going to jump! Eiji says worry 
and? Yuki asks while keeps walking 
she's going to jump and kill herself! Eiji shouts 
and? Yuki answers still walking 
we gotta help her! Eijii says 
i'm tired..i'll go home! Yuki says and keeps walking with her eyes closed to not see 
look it's Mayu chan! Ikki shouts 
Yuki's eyes open she turns around and see if its true.. and yes it was Mayu from the school building
OMG! she jumped! a girl shouts 
no way! yuki shouts while runs and tosses her bag..
meanwhile Eiji do something to ikki and the girl who were there to make them forget...
Mayuuuu! Yuki shouts while runs up the building like if it was the floor..
Mayu heard someone calling her name while she falls but she didn't wanted to open her eyes 
"if you think i'm going to let you die that easy you're wrong!" Yuki shouted then hugged her and used her body as a buffer while they fell on a car which was parked there (obviusly the car was destroyed for the impact the school building was really high) 
Mayu opened her eyes! 
Eiji made Ikki and that girl fall sleep "are you guys okay?"
Mayu was in shock.. Eiji helped he to get up while Yuki also got up 
Mayu was staring at Yuki..
Yuki was trying to stay up but it was hard..her human body was really damage it haven't recover from the last time 
Eiji could you leave as alone? Yuki asked 
are you going to be okay? Eiji asks 
yes! Yuki answers 
ok i'll call you later! Eiji said 
Mayu looked down...ashamed for what she just did
"are you okay Yuki chan?" 
Yuki got closer to Mayu and looked at her in the eyes  and then hugged her "Don't do it again! Just..don't do it again!" Yuki said with her last breath before faint
i won't Yuki chan! Mayu cried out then took her to her home...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 4.TEARS (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kahem on October 18, 2011, 09:15:26 AM
Yeeee Mayu scared me Yuki is GTO lol
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 4.TEARS (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina)
Post by: RenaChii on October 18, 2011, 10:12:33 AM
Poor Mayuyu~  :cry:

I'm glad Yuki saved her~  XD
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: cmze on October 23, 2011, 12:32:32 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 5.A new angel
                             
Mayu took Yuki to her house and put her on her bed..
she went to bring things to clean her up..but she couldn't help to think..
"how a normal person can move that fast or survive to that fall?" 
Mayu looked at Yuki who was unconsciousness
"wow you're really beatiful and strong...you look so different like this..  so kind and friendly" Mayu thought while unbuttons Yuki's shirt to clean her wounds.. she puts the wet towel softly on Yuki's wounds!              "in real life you're really cold and distant you look at me like if you hate me! but i know you don't when i'm in trouble your look changes to a caring one! yes,you care..you care about me! who are you Kashiwagi Yuki?" Mayu thought
Yuki slowly opened her eyes and stared at Mayu 
that look again that means that you were worried about me! Mayu thought while both girls stared eachother for a while without saying a word 
Mayu leaned and gave her a kiss on her forhead..Yuki closed her eyes anf fell sleep.Mayu noticed so she layed next to Yuki and also fell sleep
       ~~~~~<<<<<The next day>>>>>>~~~~~~~
Tomomi san 10 min for your performance! an assitant says knocking the door 
okay! Tomochin says smiling 
Chiyuu stay here please! Tomochin talks to her friend
but i wanna hear Tomochin's cute voice! Chiyuu says pouting and crossing her arms
i'm sorry *sigh* ok you can watch it from the distance okay? Tomochin says with her hands on Chiyuu's cheeks 
Thank you Tomochin! Chiyuu says smiling
remember stay out of trouble! Tomochin says while leaves the room 
welcome everyone! Tomochin says to her fans 
Tomochin! Tomochin! Tomochin! the crowd shouts 
wow Tomochin fanclub has grown like crazy the latest months! Chiyuu thought while sees the crowd from behind the curtains..
i still can remember the day we met...
FLASHBACK ( 4 years ago)
I opened my eyes and saw you...i couldn't believe everything was so new to me and i only heard bad things about you..i mean humans..
are you okay? you asked me with your face a few inches away from mine..i swear i thought you were going to move but you didn't and i ended up hitting you with my forhead! (clumsy me!)
ouch! you said while rubs your forhead
for me it didn't hurt! who are you? where am i? 
(i didn't know this was earth! Chyuu says looking the crowd singing Tomochin's song )
i'm Itano nice to meet you! you said smiling to me
what's your name? you asked me.I didn't know what to answer and i just looked at you 
you don't know your name! you said and looked at me with those bright eyes 
do you remember your family or something? or don't tell me you're a mermaid! you said looking to my legs 
if they change for a tail
what? i said confuse..i didn'tknow what you were talking about! 
well i saw you came from the water! what you want me to think? you said
don't tell me that you don't have a family like me! you said to me in a sad tone 
now i understant it must been sad being alone and being an orphan lucky for me you run away from that 
orphanage and found me..
we walked through the beach and you told everything about you..
"you told me you wanted to be a singer that that was all that matters to you! you sang for me and from that moment i became Tomomi Itano number one fan!" 
you told me that i can come with you and that's what i did.. i followed you and i don't regret! 
"An angel serving to a human...i don't care..i'll be next to her as long she wants me to..she's my family!"
<END OF THE FLASHBACK>
wow tomochin is so cool! Chiyuu says while looks at her siging and dancing on the stage 
Eiji what's wrong? his girlfriend asks 
nothing is just too much noise! Eiji answers while tries to go to the first row
where you're going? his girlfriend asks 
it can be true the more closer i get to Tomochin the more i feel it! Eiji thought
Eiji wait! his girlfriend says 
hey watch out! a mad guy says to Eiji's girlfriend
hey don't touch her! Eiji says and push the guy 
Tomochin i love your voice! Chiyuu shouts but she got tangled with some cables and end up making a mess..Tomochin mc doesn't work and the lighs where moving like if they're going to explote! 
everyone in the crowd starts fighting (because of Eiji)
"take Tomochin and let's get out of here!"  a bodyguard shouts while shows them the exit 
(Outside!!!)
Tomochin i'm sorry! Chiyuu says 
Tomochin looks at her and makes a sign "don't talk to me!"  
let's go Tomochin you have an interview! her manage says while puts her arm around Tomochin's neck and guides her to the car..
Tomochin..Chiyuu murmures while walks to their dept
MEANWHILE....
beeep! beeep! beeep! 
Yuki wakes up and sees Mayu sleeping next to her..
she looks at her for bit till she heard the next beep..
hello! 
Yuki chan! it's Eijji
hey! what is it? 
i found out sonething please meet me at the Akiba coffee! 
ok i'm on my way there! 
thank you! 
you're leaving? Mayu asks with her eyes closed
Yuki sighs "yes!" 
but you gotta go eating first! Mayu says while gets up and stretches her arms 
why did you wanted to...Yuki couln't finish her sentence! 
because i was tired of feeling lonely and sad! Mayu answers murmuring 
Yuki looked other way! 
let's make breakfast! Mayu says smiling 
it's 15:00 pm this is not tine for breakfast! Yuki says 
for  me it is! Mayu says while takes a bowl and cereal
Yuki smirked and sitted next to Mayu to eat their breakfast!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuko stop eating you're going to get sick! Miichan says laughing looking at her
these are a sign of love from my Nyan Nyan this woukd never hurt me! Yuko says smiling 
whatever! Miichan says while turns her attention to the tv! 
i'm home! Nyan Nyan says 
Nyan Nyan! Yuko says while leaves the chocolates and goes running to jump on her.. 
(both fell on the floor) 
wow you been eating chocolates huh? Nyan Nyan says smiling because Yuko has a chocolate mustache
(Takamina was laughing like crazy)
who she is? Yuko asks mad pointing at Takamina
easy Yuuchan..she's Takahashi Minami or how we call her Takamina! Nyan Nyan says laughing
stay away from my Nyan Nyan! Yuko says 
ohh Takamina you don't want to mess with her! Miichan says laughing 
Yuko gets up and looks at Takamina..
you're so short! Takamina says laughing at Yuko
whaaaaaaat? i'm 4 inches taller than you! how you can call me short! Yuko shouts 
look war of the midgets! Micchan says laughing
Nyan Nyan is mine! Yuko says and throws herself on Takamina and starts fighting 
girls! girls! stop! Nyan Nyan and Micchan says at the same time
Miichan took Takamina and Nyan Nyan took Yuko..
Takamina and Yuko looked eachother and started laughing 
what? did i miss something? Kojiharu asks with her airhead expression
we were playing! Takamina says smiling
great now midgets have codes! Miichan says moving her head side to side 
don't call us midgets! Yuko and Takamina says while points to Micchan and throw themselves to Miichan 
now apologize or you'll pay for this! Yuko says 
yeah,whatever she said! Takamina replies 
"never!" Miichan shouts 
Yuko's secret weapon! Yuko shouts 
what's that? Takamina and Miichan asks
Tickling! Yuko shouts while tickles Miichan with Takamina's help
stop! stop! Miichan shouts
Yuko stops tickling Miichan and gets up her face totally changed 
"that face!" Nyan Nyan thought 
Yuko what's wrong? Takamina asks..
Yuko looks side to side and then turned around to the door..she run and got out of the dept..
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouts and runs after her 
Miichan and Takamina also run after Yuko
"Yuko wait up!" Nyan Nyan shouts hey Yuko wait up! Miichan and Takamina shouts while run after her 
what.. is that? Acchan! Takamina shouts waving while runs 
who's that? Miichan asks also running 
A friend i told her to come! Takamina says running 
Acchan also runs..
Atsuko! Takamina shouts 
"Atsuko!" Yuko murmures while runs after her 
watch out! there's a bridge! Takamina,Miichan and Nyan Nyan shouts while run after Yuko who is running after Acchan! 
Acchan jumped the bridge and also Yuko..
what the F! Takamina says worry for the girls (mostly Acchan)
they just Killed themselves! Miichan says 
they just jumped of a bridge! "Yuko!" Nyan Nyan murmures her eyes getting wet
look there they are! Takamina says while points to the two girls standing in the roof of a moving trailer
oh my god i thought those you can do it only in action movies! who the hell are they? Miichan says 
i have no idea! Nyan Nyan says sad
<<<<<<<<<<<<<At akiba coffee>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
what happened? Yuki asks 
i knkw who's the angel that they're looking for! Eiji says while pulls out a cd of Tomomi Itano from his bag and puts it on the table
are you kidding me right? a singer! Yuki says smiling
yes,she is! Eiji says 
yeah right! Yuki says laughing 
it's the truth i felt it..today at her concert..it was her because the closer i got the feeling got stronger when she left..the feeling also left! Eiki says serious
okay then what you want me to do? Yuki asks with a bore expression
don't act cool like you don't care..because you do! i saw you saving the life of a girl! Eiji says smiling
shut up! Yuki says red looking other way
well i heard on the radio that she'll give a concert tomorrow..we can tell her that he life is in danger! Eiji says happy
okay we'll tell her tomorrow! Yuki says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~The trailer moving~~~~~~~~~~~~
you betrayed us! Yuko says 
i know! Acchan says looking down 
(they jumped to the ground...)
so you understant that my duty is to make you get back! Yuko says while runs and beats Acchan on her face... Acchan gets up,cleans the blood on the corner of her mouth and says "sorry i can't let you take me..at least not yet!" 
why? Yuko asks and beats her again
beacuse i have to make sure that Takamina it's going to be okay! Acchan shouts while is on the floor
Not good enough answer! Yuko says and kicks Acchan on her stomach 
ugh...i know..i made a mistake..i thought humans were useless and stupid garbage but know *tears* everything had changed! Acchan says crying 
you killed a lot of our brothers and sisters! Yuko says mad with tears on her yes while punches Acchan's face several times.. Yuko stops beating her and says "i'm not a killer like you!" while walks away but Acchn grabs her foot...
c'mon beat me up! i deserve it.. i'm your older sister i can take it! Acchan shouts crying in knees
Yuko gave her a final punch then helped her to get up and walk
what are going to tell them? Acchan asks
we had an drenaline rush! Yuko answers 
what's that? Acchan asks 
someting that make you do strange things! Yuko answers 
how do you know? Acchan asks while stops walking and looks at Yuko
well there is this owesome thing called google! Yuko answers smiling 
google? sounds fun! Acchan says smiling 
(At home)
Nyan Nyan,Takamina and Miichan were looking to the door waiting for the girls 
*knock**knock* 
Acchan! Takamina says while gets up to open the door 
Yuko! Nyan Nyan says and also runs to see who is!
girls! Miichan says 
what happened to you? Takamina says while pushes Yuko and takes Acchan to the couch
ouch! Yuko says while rubs her butt,Nyan Nyan helps her to get up
what happened? Takamina asks while cleans Acchan's blood
more to ask important how you survived to jump of a bridge! Miichan asks 
a rush of adrenaline! Acchan says smirking 
okay! Takamina and Nyan Nyan says 
yes they bought it! Yuko thought
is that's it? no more questions? Miichan asks 
can't you see they're hurt whatever we'll ask later! Nyan Nyan says also analyzing if Yuko is hurt
great! Miichan says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chiyuu got to their dept and found Tomochin's manager and a bag..
hello Chiyuu! the manager says 
what do you want? Chiyuu asks 
to thank you finally Tomochin relized that you're hindrance in her career so she finally asked me to tell you good bye..here's your money! the manager says 
that's not true she would never do that! Chiyuu says
you don't believe me! whatever here! the manager says while gives her the papers of the dept 
she said that "you should have the dept..she doesn't need it anyway and take the money beacuse you don't have money by yourself and don't look for her ever again!" 
Chiyuu throwed the money and run away...
the manager smirked 
(At night)
Chiyuu i'm home! Tomochin shouts 
hello Tomochin! the manager says 
what are you doing here? where's Chiyuu? Tomochin asks looking for Chiyuu in the dept
she's not here! the manager said
what? where she went? Tomochin asks
she asked me for money and left! the manager says 
what? she would never leave me! Tomochin says mad  and looking for Chiyuu's things
there's nothing! Tomochin says 
she took all her things and left! the manager says
leave me alone! Tomochin says 
sorry Tomochin! the manager says 
just leave me alone! Tomochin shouts 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
great we're here waiting for this concert! Yuki says mad looking to the posters of Tomochin 
you can pass now! the bodyguard said 
let's go..let's find that popstar and finish it! Yuki says 
okay! Eiji says 
they entered and found their way to Tomochin's dressing room..
they opened the door and got in..
who are you? Tomochin asks mad (she's mad because she haven't heard from Chiyuu since yesterday and that kills her) 
we're here to help you! Eiji says trying to calm her 
i don't feel anything! Yuki says 
go away! Tomochin says 
listen you ego bitch we're trying to help you ok? so cooperate! Yuki says 
Eiji putted his hand on Tomochin's head..
what's that? Yuki asks 
to feel better! Eiji says 
nothing! i can't believe i paid for get in!  Yuki says mad looking at Eiji
stop go away! Tomochin shouts 
Tomochin 5 min! an assistant says knocking the door
let's go! Yuki says 
MEANWHILE...
Chiyuu was watching the view from a tall building..
"i can't believe it..Tomochin left me..naybe humans are how they're described after all"
hey sweetie are you okay! Alexander asks
how you got up here without me to notice! Chiyuu asks while looks at him 
well you're not the only special on earth! Alexander says smiling 
what's with tbe face? Alexander asks 
 let me guess a human betrayed you! Alexander says 
yes! Chiyuu says sad 
humans are disgusting that's why i want to destroy them and i want to make a world full of angels..
you can trust angels we have a honor code! join us and see for yourself! Alexander says looking at Chiyuu 
i just..just can't,i could never hurt Tomochin! Chiyuu answers pouting to not cry 
i wnated to make things easy! Alexander says snapping his fingers 
2 fallen angels appeared.. 
kill her! Alexander says while he jumps of the building
wow! look what we have here! a fallen angel said while the other moved fast and took Immobilized Chiyuu from behind...
we're going to have fun! the fallen angel behind Chiyuu says
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<~<<<<<<>>>>>>~>>>~~~~~~~
hey we paid we can watch a littke bit of the show! Eiji says smiling 
unbelieveble! Yuki thought 
the crowd starts shouting "Tomochin! Tomochin! Tomochin!" 
Tomochin present herself and looks to everyone looking for the only person she wante to see...
"Chiyuu!" Tomochin murmures while puts her hand on her heart 
the music starts it was dear j...
i'm sorry! Tomochin says while leaves the stage 
what are you doing? get back there and sing to them! the manager says 
sing to them..i only want to sing to one person! Tomochin says while gets out from the back door
we should go after her! Eiji says 
i think your doing all this because you're a crazy fan of her! Yuki says 
shut up let's follow her! Eiji says 
where are you Chiyuu? something tells me that you're not okay! Tomochin thought 
Tomochin covered her eyes with her hands and calmed...then she remembered that there's a place that Chiyuu likes beacause is high..
Tomochin went running to that place...Eiji and Yuki also followed her 
she runs fast for someone that it's small! Eiji says 
(At the building) 
take this! a punch on her stomach "if you're not with us you're agains us!" 
the other guy took Chiyuu by her hair to pull her up
let's finish her already! the other fallen angel said
god this is not fun..i want to find that girl and kill her with my hands! the fallen angel said while throws Chiyuu to the floor
what the tall hot one with big boobs? the other angel replied 
yes, that one! 
(door opening)
Chiyuu! Tomochin shouts while runs to her to help her.. 
who are you? one of the fallen angel asks 
what the hell? why did you do this to her? Tomochin asks crying and beating the fallen angel 
ha! look at this! a poor human trying to beat me! the fallen angels laughs 
he slapped Tomochin..."you don't have to be here go away rat let me finish her!" 
"no!" Tomochin says while gets up and puts hetself in the way
if you want to finish her..YOU HAVE TO FINISH ME! Tomochin shouts 
Chiyuu opened her eyes when she heard Tomochin's voice
done! the angel says and throws a punch to Tomochin who covered herself
huh? the angel said
Tomochin opened her eyes...
 Chiyuu was stopping the punch with her fist too..
"don't you dare to touch Tomochin" Chiyuu says mad
wow two against one! those fallen angels are really coward suckers! 
everyone turns their heads 
Yuki i think you were too specific with your words! Eiji says facepalming himself
"you!" the two fallen angels says 
run away before i'll kill you! Yuki says with smirk
what's with the clothes all black? the other angel ask
it's called having a sense of style! Yuki says 
i'll kill you bitch! one of the fallen angel shouts while runs to beat her  
Yuki dodge it but she's still weak and the fallen angel use his other fist and beat her 
ha! i though you were going to kill me! the f.a says 
she's on her limits! Eiji thought 
what a weak angel! the other f.a said 
shut up! Chiyuu says while beats the hell out of him
"angel!" Tomochin mutmured 
let's go! Yuki says looking at Chiyuu both against the f.a! 
c'mon show me what you got! the f.a says 
Yuki throws a combo but he's fast and grabs her leg and throws her against the wall 
Yuki chan! Eiji said and went to her rescue 
first i'll kill you then i'll make suffer that bitch! the f.a says while points at Yuki 
did you heard me? the f.a shouts while beats Chiyuu 
wtf? someone don't let him move! 
ohh this bitch is going to make you work hard! Yuki says smiling 
Chiyuu got up and gave him a combo of punches "this is for Tomochin,This is for me,this is for her, this is for him..
the last one! Yuki says 
and this is because you're our bitch! Chiyuu shouts
the guy is k.o.
Yuki let her body fall on the floor and also Chiyuu 
"Chiyuu!" 
"Tomochin!" 
are you okay Tomochin? that hurts? Chiyuu says while examinates Tomochin's lip 
i'm fine but why you left me? Tomochin says crying 
what? you said that you didn't want to see me again!
what? i never! Tomochin says hugging Chiyuu
your manager said so! Chiyuu says 
that bitch..!Tomochin says 
that mean that i'm not a hindrance to you! Chiyuu asks looking at Tomochin
of course not...you're my family! Tomochin says hugging tigher to Chiyuu
let's go home! Tomochin says 
thank you guys! Tomochin says while carries Chiyuu to the door
thank you! Chiyuu says 
wow those two love each other! Yuki says 
what? you don't love anyone like that Yuki chan! 
"no!" Yuki says blushing.. remebering that she spended yesterday the whole day with Mayu! 
(At Chiyuu and Tomochin's dept) 
Tomochin i came as soon as you called! the manager says smiling 
great you're fire! Tomochin says 
what? why? the manager asks
bting back my clothes! Chiyuu says 
"you!" the maneger says 
now go away i don't want to see you again! Tomochin says smiling 
Chiyuu let's go shopping! are you sure you're not a memaid? Tomochin says while puts her head on Chiyuu's lap 
as you wish Tomochin and no i'm not a memaid i'm sure!  Chiyuu says smiling  
that woukd be so cool! Tomochin says 
okay this was long i don't knkw why but WHATEVER! hahahaha! why i did it TomoTomo beacuse i fell in love with them recently! xD sorry i won't be able to update for 2 weeks! :(
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: RenaChii on October 23, 2011, 01:50:43 PM
I love the fighting scene~  :twothumbs

Yuki look so cool~  XD
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: kahem on October 23, 2011, 02:23:49 PM
YAY Tomotomo!!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: Megumi on November 13, 2011, 01:45:42 AM
Mermaid?! :lol: hahhah lol.... this fic was pure awesome... waiting for your next update  :bow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: cmze on November 13, 2011, 07:07:35 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                     6.Promises

(2 Days later)                             
so you're an angel who came down 4 years ago and this girl found you! Yuki repeats everything that Chiyuu told her 
how did they know that you were an angel? Eiji says while drinks his coffee
i don't know..Tomochin didn't know and she has no family or close friends! Chiyuu says looking at Tomochin who was sleeping couse Eijii put her to sleep with some weird power 
you can't stay here with her! Yuki says serious 
why not? Chiyuu asks a little mad
because you put her in danger! Yuki says smiling 
i'm going to protect her! Chiyuu says rising her tone of voice 
yeah yeah wonder woman! Yuki says while gets up
girls this is not time for this! Eiji says 
whatever it's not my business..i don't care! Yuki says and starts walking to the door
i promised her! Chiyuu shouts 
Yuki stops walking 
i want to protect her..don't you ever made a promise to the one you love? Chiyuu asks 
me....?Yuki murmured 
FLASHBACK
I'm so tired of this! Yuki thought while hides inside othe classroom because Ikki and Koji were looking for her..she opens the classroom door a little and sees  Mayu entering to other classroom with a bunch of papers in her hands 
"Do you look for her in the terrace? Koji said 
(Yuki slowly closes the door) 
no! Ikki answers 
let's go there! Koji says and runs away with Ikki 
Yuki sighs in relief then opens the door and goes to the other classroom 
she slowly opens the door and entered (Mayu didn't notice because she was focused on reading those papers!) 
Hello Mayu chan! Yuki says 
Mayu jumped "What?!?" and fast tried to hide the papers 
what's this? Yuki says with a airhead expression and fast snacthes a paper from Mayu 
"Nothing! Nothing!" Mayu shouts and tries to snatch it from Yuki but Yuki is taller so she can't 
Yuki.. Kashiwagi! Yuki read loud 
is this my file? Yuki's face turned into a mad one 
you stole my papers! Yuki says while intimadates Mayu by getting closer to her 
evrytime Yuki got closer,Mayu gave a step back till she found the wall and she has nowhere to go
what do you want to know? Yuki shouts irritated 
Mayu looked other way 
hey look at me! what do you want to know? huh! tell me! Yuki shouts 
Mayu just looked other way
unbelieveble can't you be happy that i saved your life? huh? Yuki says while puts her hands on Mayu's shoulders 
you're not normal! Mayu says looking at Yuki in the eyes 
Normal? Yuki repeated 
you beated three guys and then you were a buffer and fell on a car..and you're here like nothing you're not normal! Mayu says scared but she didn't wanted to show it 
yes,i'm not normal so you know that i can hurt you really bad do you? Yuki says with a smirk 
you..hurt me..you would never!! Mayu says 
Yuki rised and eyebrow "are you sure?" 
yes! Mayu answers but before she cleared her throat
why? Yuki said in Mayu's ear 
Mayu took one Yuki's hand that was on her shoulder and looked at it..her thumb traced that line on Yuki's wrist (Yuki's face change totally) 
did it hurt? Mayu asked 
i don't remember! Yuki answered looking other way (from the moment that an angel takes a human body they have their memories and feel the emotions they felt and still can sense the other person soul!) 
you feel alone just like me! Mayu says sad 
Yuki just looked other way 
Mayu hugged Yuki "i don't care if you're not a human..i just want you to be with me please don't you ever leave me!" 
Yuki fell on her shirt Mayu's tears and somehow Mayu's tears always get her..Yuki sighed and hugged Mayu tigher..
I guess i promise! Yuki thought
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki chan! Yuki chan! Eiji says snapping his fingers
what?Yuki asks 
i'm going to stay with Tomochin! Chiyuu says looking at Tomochin 
i guess i promise..it's a promise! Yuki says while exit herself
Yuki chan wait for me! Eijji says while goes after her 
Chiyuu closes the door and sits next to Tomochin 
"i'll always protect you! Chiyuu says while removes hair from Tomochin's face
~~~~~~~<<$>>>><<<<<$>>>>><<<<$>>>>~~~~~~
Ha! weren't you right hand hurt Acchan? Miichan says while sees Acchan use her right hand to catch the cereal
uhhh..Ouch! Acchan says while leaves the cereal 
*POP* 
Ouchhhhh! Miichan shouts "why you hit me Takamina?! i hate you!" 
stol bothering Acchan! Takamina says while sits
Acchan smiles 
Takamina blushes..
so..so manly from you Takamina! Miichan says laughing 
*POP* OUchhh! Miichan shouts "what was that for?!" 
for interrupting "girl love!" Yuko says smiling while sits next to her 
you pervert squirrel!! Miichan says 
(Yuko smiles)
Miichan fast covers her head preventing that someone hit her
Good morning! Nyan Nyan says smiling while sits
Good morning! everyone says 
Nyan Nyan sit next to me! next to me! next to me! please,please,please! Yuko shouts while takes the chair were Micchan is sitting and moves it making Miichan fall on the floor 
okay Yuuchan! Nyan Nyan says while sits 
okay now everyone is ignoring me! Miichan says 
here! Acchan says pointing to the chair next to her
Miichan gets up and sits next to Acchan 
so Nyan Nyan i really apreciate that you let Acchan stay here! Thank u! Takamina says 
don't worry what are friends for? Nyan Nyan says smiling 
Yuko sighs "My Nyan Nyan always so cool and kind!"
By the way now that everyone is free today we can go shopping..we need to buy Yuko and Acchan some clothing! Nyan Nyan says 
you don't have to! Acchan says 
don't worry..it's fine so eat up and let's get you some clothes! Nyan Nyan says 
unbelieveble am i the only one who thinks this girl are not normal? Miichan thought while sees them eat
*POP* what?!? why?! Ouch! Miichan shouts
because you're thinking it! Takamina says 
how you know? Miichan replies brushing her head
because you never shut up! Takamina answers 
(everyone laugh)
*SHOPPING* 
They walked everywhere and buyed clothes for Yuko..Acchan didn't like what she saw in the others stores...(she didn't like people in the other store,she could feel their bad intentions) 
Except for Yuko who has the same taste of clothing as Takamina!
Yuko your clothes are...mmm so Takamina! Miichan says laughing 
What's wrong with my clothing? Takamina shouts 
nothing! Nyan Nyan says looking other way 
Acchan you're not going to choose anything? Takamina asked
mmm yes! Acchan says 
they entered to tye last shop...
it felt totally diffrent..it was calmed and peaceful 
hello can i help you? an older girl said smiling 
yes,we came to buy a lot clothing and that you help them to find their sense of style! Miichan says pointing to Yuko and Takamina 
hey!!! Both shouts 
i guess Yuko is too young to feel! Acchan thought while sees the dresses 
that dress is so cute! Nyan Nyan said 
yes,it is! It would totally suit you! the older girl and owner of the store said 
wow all tge clothing here is so cool! Miichan said
where you got it? Takamina asked 
feom heaven! The older girl answered
(Acchan chose a lot clothes and went to try it!)
and you're so cute too! Yuko said looking closely to the girl
ouch ouch! Kojima san it hurts! Yuko shouted while is being dragged away from the older girl 
what's your name? Miichan asked 
Shinoda Mariko! she answered smiling 
Takamina..Takamina! Acchan called 
what?!? Takamina said all red because she imagined that Acchan was behind that door probably in underwear..
help me please! Acchan said opening the door and taking her hand to drag her in.
please button the shirt! Acchan said shyly
Takamina was all red..she was seeing Acchan's back and those f-ing buttons didn't help..
so you know i'm not normal! Acchan said 
what are you talking about? you're normal to me! Takamina said nervous (for the buttons) 
i just..i just..(it's okay- Takamina interupted Acchan)
look i don't care if you are a vampire a wolf or whatever as long you're by my side..it doesn't matter! Takamina hugged Acchan from the back (Takamina finished with the buttons) 
when you feel ready to tell me..you will! Takamina said with a smile 
Acchan smiled too
you look beatiful! Takamina said 
Acchan blushes 
(Outside)
i think Takamina just raped Acchan! Miichan says laughing 
what's rape? Yuko asked to Nyan Nyan 
you don't know what's that word mean? Nyan Nyan
"nop" Yuko answered
is when someone make you do sonething against your will! Nyan Nyan answered 
mmmm got it..got it but she's not being rape because she loves Takamina! Yuko said 
what? really Acchan is Takamina's girlfriend! I knew it! told you..you owe me $20.00! Micchan said to Nyan Nyan
Takamina and Accahn appeared 
hey you too! Miichan says with a weird tone of voice 
wow you look amazing Acchan *LEGS* Yuko said 
Ouuuuchhhh! Nyan Nyan stop it hurts! Yuko shouted
stop doing those things! Nyan Nyan says with one hand pinching Yuko's cheek and the other on he waist..
i think i'm going to buy all this! Acchan says while gives the clothes to Mariko 
Mariko registered everything and Nyan Nyan payed woth credit car 
thank you very much! Mariko said 
thank you! the girls said 
the girls were walking to the exit  
See you soon Atsuko! Mariko said 
Yuko, Acchan and Takamina turned around at the same time 
Mariko smirked..
Takamina took Acchan's hand and walked out of the store with Yuko..
what was that? Takamina asks 
how did she know you're old name? Yuko asked serious 
i don't know! Acchan said looking down 
Takamina squeezes Acchan hand a little..Acchan looked at her and Takamina smiled "Everything is going to be fine!"
girls c'mon i'm hungry! Miichan shouts 
let's go i'm hungry too! Yuko shouts while runs after Nyan Nyan 
~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
so we have Yuko the playful one, Acchan the older and strongest one,Chiyuu the peaceful one And Yuki impulsive one! Alexander says smiling 
i think we should take Acchan or Yuko! a voice says
it wouldn't work on them! Alexander says serious 
why? the voice asks 
Yuko is a baby and she always will the "right thing"
Acchan got away and it's strong to control herself! 
i know who you should take! another voice in the dark says 
she will be perfect! other voice in the dark says 
everyone laughs...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: RenaChii on November 13, 2011, 09:43:37 PM
I want more MaYuki~ Please~  XD
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: kazuski on November 15, 2011, 05:38:32 AM
^

me too! Mayuki ftw ~  :cow:

everything start to get complicated  8) , and i like it!  XD

but i wonder Mariko-sama is on the good or the bad side.  :?  :?  :?

anyway, thank for update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: kahem on November 15, 2011, 07:02:20 PM
Oh no, what are they planning to do??? O_O
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
Post by: cmze on November 19, 2011, 09:38:05 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                           7
Stop it! what are you doing? let her go! Eeiji shouts and tries to help her but two man don't let him 
Yukooooooooo! Nyan Nyan shouts mad and with tears on her face
Acchan! Takamina shouts trying to cry 
Let me gooooo...Yuki please do something! Mayu shouts crying 
you're going to see something that anyone had seen before.."The creation of a Fallen Angel"you should be proud and happy! Alexander says with an evil laugh 
Chiyuu! Tomochin shouts crying
Don't hurt her! Eiiji shouts 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Finally over i don't to about maths ever again! A boy says while stretches his arms 
Yuki sighs and then gets up...*wait up Yuki chan* Ikki says while puts his hand on her shoulder 
(Mayu was quietly watching everuthing she could see clearly Yuki's mad face) 
Don't touch me! Yuki said in a loud tone while makes him a judo key sending him to the floor 
(everyone was looking)
whay the hell? everyone said
Yuki smirked and walked away..
what's wrong with her? a girl says 
Mayu run after Yuki 
Yuki chan wait! Mayu says while puts her hand on Yuki's shoulder 
what's wrong? Yuki asked looking at Mayu who is trying to catch her breath 
i.. was.. thinking.. that maybe we could..*Mayu pulls out something from her pocket and shows her two Tickets for a Tomomi Itano concert*
i don't like Tomomi Itano but maybe you can go with Eiiji,he likes her a lot but don't tell his girlfriend..She's a little bit crazy! Yuki says and turns around to keep walking but smothing don't let her..Mayu was hugging her from behind "Please com with me Yuki chan!" Mayu said in a low tone of voice 
Yuki sighs and says  "Okay!" blushing 
thank you! Mayu says with a smile 
let's go i'll walk you home! Yuki says while takes Mayu's hand 
(Mayu blushes but then smiles)
Ring! Ring! Ring! 
Yuki chan it's your phone! Mayu says 
ohh right! Yuki says while pulls it out from her pocket
*Phone call* 
hello 
Yuki san..it's Eeiji please meet me in Akiba coffee! 
okay i'll se you there! Yuki says while keeps walking hand in hand with Mayu 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
say the name of all the planets! The hoster of the radio show says 
uhhh well! Yuko says on the phone 
that's easy Yuko sing! Miichan says 
well umm like this...Yuko says 
Well the Sun's a hot star,
Mercury's hot, too.
Venus is the brightest planet,
Earth's home to me and you
(Miichan joins and both sing and dance)
Mars is the red one,
And Jupiter's most wide.
Saturn's got those icy rings,
And Uranus spins on its side.
Neptune's really windy,
And Pluto's really small.
Well we wanted to name the planets,
And now we've named them all 
hahahah i never asked you to sing but we love it so that why you had won 5 Tickets for Tomomi Itano's concert! The hoster of the radio show shouts 
We won! We won! Yuko and Miichan shouts jumping and hugging 
wow so much love around here! Acchan and Takamina says while enters to the dept 
we won 5 Tickets for Tomomi Itano's concert thanks to the radio! Miichan says hugging Acchan 
Miichan are you crying? Takamina asks
i never won anything in my life before! Miichan says 
what did you guys had to do? Takamina asks
say the name of the planets! Miichan says happy
Acchan walks closer to Yuki and murmuring asks her "how did you know that name of the planets!" 
A smiling squirrel answers " i watch discovery kids every day!" 
Acchan laughs and thought "I guess Yuuchan is a baby...yes it's great that is  that naive hope world won't be so raw to you!" 
(Noise of the door opening!)
i'm home! Nyan Nyan shouts 
Nyan Nyan! Yuko shouts and runs to her 
(they fell on the floor! Acchan says 
that's normal..that's how Yuko welcomes Nyan Nyan and i can say that she likes it! Miichan says 
i missed Nyan Nyan! Yuko says while rubs her head on Nyan Nyan chest 
okay..she thinks she's a cat or she's a pervert! Acchan says 
nahhhh, she's a pervert! Takamina and Miichan say at the same time
Yuko..calm down i brought a guest home! Nyan Nyan says while gets up 
who? Yuko says 
this..feeling! Acchan thought
hello everyone! Mariko says 
Mariko! Takamina says not too happy..she saw Acchan's expression 
ohh would love to stay but i gotta go to work and get my tickets! Miichan says while grabs her purse and goes away 
would you like something to drink?..Nyan Nyan says while goes to the kitchen
yes,wouldn't you mind cookies and soda..Mariko says 
what are you doing here? Acchan asks
don't worry i didn't came for you but i will eventually..i came for Yuko! Mariko says 
what do you want with her? Acchan asks and puts herself to not let Mariko get closer to Yuko 
that's not of your business! Mariko answers 
she's my sister! Acchan say not moving not even a little *c'mon calm down! Takamina says smiling*
you know i can destroy..right Atsuko? Mariko says 
what do you want? Yuko asks serious 
i came here to train you..remember you came to accomplish your mission not to have fun! Mariko says 
i know! Yuko says murmuring 
you're still too weak..i need to prepare for what's coming! Mariko says 
what's coming! Acchan,Takamina and Yuko repeats
c'mon Yuko! Mariko says while takes her hand and takes her with her..
hey..do you want to go? Acchan asks worried while takes her other hand 
yes! Yuko answered 
Acchan let go Yuko's hand and sees her go away with Mariko..
huh? where's Yuko? Nyan Nyan asks with the soda and the cookies 
she had something to do! Takamina says smiling but she couldn't help to look Acchan's sad expression
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<Coffee>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Yuki enters to the coffee sees Eeiji and sits opposite to him..
what happened? Yuki asks 
i had a dream! Eiji says while drinks his coffee
what dream? Yuki asks 
they want to take Chiyuu! Eiji says 
what? how? Yuki says 
they're going to turn her in front of us! Eiji says looking other way
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 7. (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 19\11\11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 20, 2011, 02:37:19 PM
 :panic: I feel something big and bad is coming.... :smhid

Haha.. Yuko is really like a kid :lol:
I was  :shocked when she asked what does 'rape' means... :) So innocent~ :wub:
But she's cute  :P especially when she name those planets XD

 :? I wonder who Mariko is...

Although Yuki is cool and strong, she can't win against Mayuyu's tears XD :twothumbs

 :banghead: Those bad guys are going to take Chiyuu???!!!!! :angry: :rock:


Thanks for the Update :thumbsup :peace:
Hope you Update Soon~!!! 8) ;)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 7. (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 19\11\11
Post by: RenaChii on November 20, 2011, 09:39:35 PM
Bad guy is coming again?! argh~!! die die die you bad guy! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_voodoob.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy1.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 8. (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 26\11\11
Post by: cmze on November 26, 2011, 08:44:09 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                           8
what else do you saw? Yuki asks 
not much just a light i woke up when she was about to turn! Eiji answers 
Yuki sighs "Don't worry i will see her today so i will tell her about it!" 
how? Eiji asks 
Yuki blushes "i'm going to Itano's concert!" 
what?!? Eiji laughs while asks 
don't ask! Yuki says while gets up
ok grumpy! Eiiji says laughing 
hey uhmmm i wanted to ask yousomething? Yuki asks staring him
what is it? Eiji asks confuse
how do you know when an angel is around? Yuki asks blushing looking other way
 Yuki you're so funny you got embarrased by anything! Eiji says laughing 
shut up! Yuki says and starts walking away 
hey..don't get mad is about concentration! He shouts while sees Yuki walking away 
this girl! Eiji said 
(Training...!) 
what are we doing here Shinoda san? Yuko asks while sees that they're on the middle on of nowhere
well we need a private place! don't you think? and please call me Mari chan! Mariko says smiling
right..right..righ ok Mari chan! Yuko says smiling 
ok then you're first lesson it's going to be "how to channel other angels?!" Mariko says smiling 
cool! Yuko says smiling 
well as you know the more years an angel is the more strong is and to channel angels you need to be a little old! Mariko says with a smile
i'm old! Yuko says 
no,you're not..you're baby angel! Mariko says smiling to Yuko 
i'm not a baby you'll see..now tell me how to channel others angels? Yuko asks impatient 
you can't! Mariko says smiling 
why not? Yuko asks 
because you're too young..you have no experience so that means you're weak!  Mariko says serious
i don't wanna be weak..make me stronger please Mari chan! Yuko says sad
only if you promise to pay me full attention! Mariko says while puts her hand on Yuko's head 
promise! Yuko says with a smile 
let's practice! Mariko says 
(AtSumina's couple)
Acchan are you okay? Takamina says while walks closer to Acchan who was looking through the window with a sad expression
yes,i'm fine! Acchan answers with a smile 
Takamina blushes then takes Acchan's hand and shouts "No matter what happen Acchan i'll stay by your side!"
Ta-ka-mina! Acchan said in a low tone of voice impressed and staring her 
i will protect Acchan!" Takamina says all red 
Acchan face change to a warmed one she smiled to Takamina and hugged "yes,please stay by my side and don't ever go!" 
(Takamina got redder)
hey you lovebirds! Miichan says annoyed 
(Takamina and Acchan stpped hugging each other)
what's wrong? Takamina asks blushing
let's get ready for the concert! Miichan says while show them the tickects
what about Yuko? she wanted to go! Takamina says 
well we'll call her from there! Miichan answers 
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~
another concert today! Yay..i can hear my Tomochin voice one more time! Chiyui says smiling while plays with Tomochin's hair who is sleeping on her lap
 you idiot! you don't need to go to a concert to hear me sing! Tomochin says blushing
i don't want to bother you! Chiyuu says 
Tomochin sighs and open her eyes "you will never be a bother Chiyuu!"
(Chiyuu blushes)
really? Chiyuu asks 
Tomochin sits "no,you're not actually...*Tomochin leans closer staring Chiyuu's eyes* 
Knock! Knock! "Tomochin is time for soundcheck!" someone shouts from the other side of the door 
Tomochin sighs "I hope to see you there supporting me!" 
always! Chiyuu says while sees Tomochin leaving
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<At Mayu's home>>>>~~~~~~~
Yuki wasn't used to use a door so she decided to use the window..
Ahhh Yuki chan! Mayu shouts and fell on the floor for the impression 
Yuki got all red and looked other way..
(Yes,Mayu was in underwear! xD) 
i'll wait in the living room! Yuki says all red and trying to run away from ackward situation...
(waiting In the living room) 
the radio was on: so here's a song for those ackward lovers and ackward moments! the hoster says 
Yuki looked at the radio and sighed 
kakkowarui I love you! the hoster shouts 
the songs starts playing and the more Yuki listen to it the more she feels identified with it..
Yukk sighs "i hate you!" she murmures...
Mayu walks downstairs....
Yuki looks at her and blushes (she looks so beatiful) 
<Mayu was wearing a white dress and using her hair down>are you ready Yuki chan? Mayu asks 
Yes,i am! Yuki says while gets up 
<Yuki was wearing a black jacket with a red plaid shirt a black skirt and black boots> 
\~\~\~\~\~~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~||~~\~|~|<|~|~|<|<|<|
traffic! i hate traffic..and i hate you! Miichan shouts from the car window looking to other cars 
Miichan stop! Acchan says in a low tone of voice
(Miichan keeps shouting)
hey Miichan behave! Takamina says while tries to make her shut up
what am i your pet? Miichan asks and keeps shoutin
whatever! Takamina says giving up
Acchan gives Takamina a little squeeze on her hand and smirks 
Takamina also smirks 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~
why are they taking too long? where's my Kojima san? Yuko says mad while waits with a bunch of people in the street
Mayu was happy thet she was walking hand in hand with Yuki who seems totally gone...
Yuki chan is everything okay? Mayu asks 
Yuki stops walking...
what's this? i sense three..two are close and the other is couple blocks away! Yuki thought 
Yuki chan? Mayu says 
 it's true they came for Chiyuu but..*Yuki looks at Mayu*
what's wrong Yuki chan? Mayu asks scared
i need to put her safe! Yuki thought and drag her running away
where are we going? what's wrong? Mayu asks while runs with Yuki 
what's this? like Mariko sama said..i feel three,one is going running away! Yuko thought and started running to that direction
Yuki stop! tell me what's wrong? Mayu stops running
not time for this! Yuki shouts and starts forcing with Mayu...*let go off me! Mayu shouts* 
*POP* (a can of something was throwed to Yuki who turned around and kicked to smowhere else) 
Nice! Yuko says 
and you haven't seen nothing yet! Yuki says annoyed by the tiny girl 
You should run away before i'll destroy you! Yuki says with a smirk 
Yuko runs to Yuki to punch her..
Yuki smiles but Yuko was fast and puncjed her on her face...
(Mayu was in shock)
Yuki cleaned the blood from the corner of her mouth and the smirk went away 
i'll destroy you! Yuki shouts and runs to Yuko..
she throws many punches as she could..Yuko was dodging them but Yuki was persistant and kicked her 
(they started to move so fast for Mayu was unbelieveble how two person can move that fast..it seems like an anime!
Yuko and Yuki were fast and strong..
everytime that Yuki throwed a punch..Yuko dodge it..the same was for Yuko she couldn't beat Yuki 
hey! Takamina shouts 
Acchan got in the middle of the two girls..she had Yuko's fist on her hand and she has Yuki's kick in her hand..
wtf? Atsuko! Yuki says 
Acchan! Yuko says
stop fighting you're sisters! Acchan says smiling 
let go of me! Yuki says mad and removes her hand and tries to punch Yuko but Acchan got in the way again!
Acchan she's the bad one here! Yuko shouts pointing to Yuki who gave her a glare..
(Yuko feels shivers)
Yuki chan! Mayu says while tries to stop Yuki to punch Yuko
please! Mayu says 
(Acchan smiles)
Yuki looked other way...
why you say she's bad..you don't know her? Acchan asks smiling 
because she wears black clothes and she was bothering her! Yuko points to Mayu
huh? now i see...Yuki was trying to protect me..she thought you were like..and about her clothes "i think they're really cool!" Mayu says smiling 
i'm out of here...don't mess with Chiyuu,she's like us and she's harmless! Yuki says while leaves 
wait a minute..that cool actitude but no way you hate humans! Yuko says 
huh? Yuki turns around 
it's you! Yuko says with a smile 
i'm..i'm! don't you remember me? Yuko asks 
annoying! Yuki says with a smirk
you bitch! Yuko says 
even here you're little! Yuki says smirking while walks away..
i'm just a little short! Yuko shouts 
wait up Yuki chan! Mayu says while runs after her
Yuko! Nyan Nyan shouts 
Nyan Nyan! Yuko shouts then turns around and runs to Nyan Nyan's direction to jump on her 
(btw:Miichan was waiting for Nyan Nyan) 
let's go to the concert! Miichan says
yes,let's go! Everyone says smiling
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki chan wait up! Mayu says while takes her by her shoulder 
Yuki stops and looks at her..
what's wrong Yuki chan? Mayu says scared
don't that again! Yuki says mad while walks closer to Mayu to intimidate her 
what? Mayu asks nervous 
don't think that i'll do anything you want me to..you can't control me! Yuki shouts mad 
sorry! Mayu says looking down and tears showed 
Yuki clenched her fist..(she can't stand seeing Mayu crying) 
 "i'm sorry Mayu!" Yuki says while puts her hands on Mayu's cheeks she wipes her tears with her thumbs 
and slowly leans closer to Mayu...
Yuki kissed her...a long passionate kiss! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 8. (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 26\11\11
Post by: RenaChii on November 26, 2011, 10:22:57 PM
the last scene so sweet~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-03.gif)

I'm craving for more MaYuki now~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy1.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-13.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 8.Extra (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 30\11\11
Post by: cmze on November 28, 2011, 08:48:16 AM
                            THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                       8.Extra 

Hey this is just a Mayuki extra..why? i don't know! xD
maybe is because i'm not free till thursday so i can't update and don't want update Remember me because i want to write the next chapter properly (because is very important.. for me!) Akb boarding school i'll update it on friday of course if i have free that day! -_-

Yuki's pov ( ) Mayu's pov [ ]
Yuki chan wait up! Mayu says while grabs her from her shoulder to stop her [why she's acting this way? what did i do?]
Yuki stopped walking (why i'm always doing what she wants me to? who she thinks she is?)
Yuki turns around to look at her 
what's wrong Yuki chan? Mayu asks scared 
don't that again! Yuki says mad while walks closer to Mayu to intimidate her 
The more Yuki came ckoser the more Mayu got back [what's wrong with her? what did i do?]
what? Mayu asks nervous 
don't think that i'll do anything you want me to..you can't control me! Yuki shouts mad 
[control you? i didn't wanted to control you...i wanted to protect you! STUPID YUKI! ]
sorry! Mayu says looking down and tears showed 
Yuki clenched her fist..(she can't stand seeing Mayu crying..why is she crying? god,just what a needed *internal sigh* now i feel terrible!)
 "i'm sorry Mayu!" Yuki says while puts her hands on Mayu's cheeks, she wipes her tears with her thumbs 
(what am i doing? why i'm doing this? i just can't control myself..i don't want to see her cry! god..she's so beatiful..i want to..no,i need to..)Yuki slowly leaned closer to Mayu and kissed her...she gave her a long passionate kiss..
They stopped kissing couse the lack of air but still they kept their forheads together 
what was that? Mayu asks blushing [Yuki chan kissed me! what's that mean?does she like me? silly me of course she does..if she wouldn't this kiss had never happen..i think..omg this is so confusing!]
i don't know! (why did i kiss her? oh god i want to do it again and again over again till i get tyred of it!) 
[great answer Yuki chan that totally responded my question! *internal facepalm*]
Yuki chan i love you! Mayu says blushing 
Huh? Yuki answers (love me? love! is that what i'm feeling for this girl?)
Yuki chan please say something! Mayu says 
Thank you! Yuki says looking other way 
 do you love me back?Mayu asks [why she likes to break my heart]
i don't what's that sorry! Yuki answers looking other way (no,i don't feel that)
*slap* 
what was that for? Yuki shouts while brushes her red cheek 
for being an idiot! Mayu shouts and walks away mad 
(if you weren't you..i will totally destroy without no mercy..you've slapped twice already NOBODY IS THAT LUCKY YOU LITTLE KID) 
Yuki run fast and got in front of Mayu not letting her cross the street
*Mayu moves left* *Yuki moves left*
*Mayu moves right* *Yuki moves right* 
what do you want? get off my way! Mayu shouts mad
you've slapped me twice since i met you..STOP DOING THAT! Yuki shouted the last part 
*slap*
Yuki clenched her fist while her hand rubs her cheek
"Stupid human!" 
"Stupid whatever you are!" Mayu says 
Yuki pouts at Mayu and tries to control hersefl by taking deep breaths 
*sigh* i can't deal with you..see you!Yuki says while turns around and starts walking away 
hey you! you're not going to asked me why i slapped you?Mayu says while walk two steps behind Yuki 
no! Yuki says tired 
arghhhhhh! Mayu shouts then jumps on Yuki from behind and both rolled on the floor 
Mayu ends on top of Yuki "I hate you!" 
that's weird you said you loved me!Yuki says with a smirk resting her arms on the floor 
i love you idiot! Mayu says in tears 
Thank you! Yuki says with a soft look 
i don't understant! Mayu says sobbing 
Yuki moves Mayu off her to get up and then helps Mayu to get up 
Let's go Mayu chan i'm tired! Yuki says taking her hand and walking to her place 
( i don't need to tell you..) 
[she's not going to tell me a thing..Stupid Yuki!]
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 8.Extra (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 30\11\11
Post by: kahem on November 28, 2011, 11:46:12 AM
Heheheh kiss!!! I like Mayuki interaction ^^
What will they do to my Chiyuu!!! No!!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 8.Extra (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 30\11\11
Post by: RenaChii on November 28, 2011, 01:07:49 PM
Yeah~ you are STUPID YUKI~! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/bigdeal.gif)

Just accept it already~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/grr.gif)

ne? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_cny0.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 8.Extra (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 30\11\11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 28, 2011, 02:23:18 PM
Wow! :w00t: I love it :inlove: Mayuki~ :heart:
Really.. Stupid Yuki.. Just tell her you also love her!!! :peace:

Thanks for the Update ;)
Please Update SOon :thumbup
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 9.Friends (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 13\12
Post by: cmze on December 14, 2011, 12:58:57 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                       9.Friends
Sorry for making you wait! 
Note: Gekikara is not as crazy as MG! she's not in the good side or bad side she just want revenge and kill Acchan..for some mystery of the past! 

(Mayu's Pov) [Yuki's Pov]
why i'm feeling this way? why i feel so attracted to you? at first we hate each other now i can't help staring at you,being around you...it's not my fault you're so beatiful..) 
why you're staring at me? Yuki asks,she was resting with her head leaned against a tree
why you think i'm staring at you?you have your eyes closed! Mayu says smiling 
i feel it..besides i don't hear you pencil anymore! Yuki says without opnening her eyes 
Stupid Yuki at least you could of told me that we weren't  going to school so i wouldn't be on my uniform! Mayu says smiling while draws
Yuki was resting, feeling the air but she couldn't help to think
[am i strong enough to protect her? what if they try to hurt her? i will never forgive myself if something happen to her..because i..i will kill the one who'll try to mess with her!] 
Yuki chan! Mayu says 
Yuki opened her eyes As fast she opened her eyes some lips were on hers...
[i will always protect you!]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuko you gotta focus! Mariko shouts 
how can i focus,i'm hungry! Yuko shouts crying looking down 
huh? unbelieveble you just ate! Mariko says 
(Yuko was lying she wanted to see Nyan Nyan,she's been training the last two days so she wasn't able to see her) 
why Yuki chan doesn't have to train? Yuko asks 
because she has her own destiny! Mariko answers 
what do you mean? Yuko asks 
you'll find out soon! Marikl says 
weird! Yuko says 
okay you have 45 min to go to eat so go now or i'll regret! Mariko says 
so now use babies to clean your sh**? a girl says from behind 
Mariko recognized the voice,took a deep breath and turned around 
Ge..ki..ka..ra! 
hello! She says smiling "don't worry i won't kill you.unless make me mad... i came for someone else!" 
who's that? Mariko asks curious
At-su-ko! she says spelling and smiling 
i don't care what happen to her so go ahead! Mariko says looking other way 
tell me where she is? Gekikara asks mad 
well she is...
\~\~\~~~\~\\~\~\\~\~\\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\\~\\~\~\~\<\~\~\
Acchan! Acchan! Takamina shouts scared running
what's wrong? Acchan turns around to look Takamina who is being followed by a mad dog 
RUN ACCHAN RUN! Takamina shouts while puts obticles on the dog's way like her books
Acchan doesn't move
why you're not running? he's going to eat us! Takamina shouts 
why are you scare of this? Acchan asks while sees the mad dog next to Takamina who is taking deep breaths and not moving 
Acchan extends her hand to touch the dog 
stop Acchan! Are you crazy? it's going to bite you! Takamina says scared 
you're scaring him more! Acchan says while touches the dog 
what? it let you touch him! Takamina says 
the dog licks Acchan's hand which make Acchan smile 
huh? Takamina looks the interaction of Acchan and the dog 
it's harmless! Acchan says smiling 
HARMLESS! he's a stalker he always follows me after school he's a cannibal! Takamina says pointing to tge dog which Acchan is playing with "something tells me you're not listening to me!" 
is not he! Acchan says smiling 
are you saying i'm the one who started it? Takamina asks pointing Acchan 
no,i'm saying it's a female the dog..maybe she was alone and wanted you're company that's why she followed you everyday..she didn't wanted to bite you touch it! Acchan says smiling 
My company? Takamina murmures while slowly extends her hand to touch the dog,she closed her eyes..the dog licked her hand 
Takamina laughed 
see she's not bad as you though! Acchan says 
Takamina starts playing with the dog and tries to look for a collar but it doesn't wear one..
what should we do? Takamina asks 
don't tell me you want to take it to Nyan Nyan's home? Acchan asks 
Takamina puts puppy eyes 
i don't think is correct! Acchan says 
mmn let's go to her work and ask her if she can have her? besides like you said she's alone and need some friends! Takamina says smiling 
(now i see why it followed you!) Acchan though "okay let's see what we can do!"  Acchan says smiling 
wow thanks Acchan..you always so good! Takamina says smiling and playing with the dog 
"i'm not good" Acchan murmured sad looking other way,Takamina didn't listen because she was playing 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hello Chiyuu! Eiji says while invites her to sit
hello Eiji! Chiyuu says and sits 
i called you because i wanted to talk to you! Eiji says while puts down the menu 
what is it? Chiyuu asks serious 
some bad angels wants to come after you! Eiji says 
why? Chiyuu asks 
well i had a dream and i couldn't see a thing but i'm almost sure that you were the one that they were turning into a fallen angel!Eiji says 
why  me? Chiyuu says worry 
i don't know but don't worry we're going to protect you! Eiji says smiling 
who's we? Chiyuu asks
me and Yuki who else? Eiji says smiling 
*Boom!* 
wtf? Eiji says and looks through the glass 
omg who's that? Chiyuu asks 
they're fighting..let's go we gotta help the people run or they die! Eiji says while gets up
--------------------//////------/////-----------------
Nyan Nyan! Yuko says while enters to her office
Yuko! what are you doing here? Nyan Nyan asks surprised while gets up to hug her squirrel 
i run away to see you! Yuko says while buries her head on Kojiharu's chest and sniffes it 
i can imagine! Kojiharu says with a sigh "knowing that her squirrel was acting like pervert man again!" 
where you get that from? Nyan Nyan asks 
get what? Yuko asks 
being a pervert! Nyan Nyan says 
what's pervert? Yuko asks looking up to her Nyan Nyan (what a cute squirrel!) she thought 
forget it..i'll just think that you're spending so much time with Miichan! Nyan Nyan said 
let's go grab something to eat! Yuko says smiling 
ok ..let's go i know this cool coffe shop..that you have to try! Nyan Nyan says while takes Yuko's hand 
they were going down happy but then their faces changed they saw the chaos..
Takamina,Eiiji and Chiyuu were helping to evacuate the people while Acchan was fighting with a weird girl who seems more twisted than Yuki on the entrance of the building causing traffic apart from the fact that there are a lot injured people on the floor! 
what the hell? Nyan Nyan hide! Yuko shouts mad 
so you're the new one! The girl says while beats Acchan's face who was on knees
ACCHAN!" Takamina shouts 
nice to meet you..i'm Gekikara! The girl says while walks closer to Yuko and extend her bloody hand (Acchan's Blood) 
i'll fight with you! Yuko says and slaps her hand 
Gekikara laughs "Are you mad?" 
ahhhh! Yuko shouts and tries to punch her but she was faster and dodge it 
you're so weak..you're not match for me! Gekikara says smiling 
Yuko tries to punch her again with several punches but none hit her target
why you're stronger? Yuko says in tired
hey..come and get me..she's weak! Acchan shouts
yes, i wanna play with you Atsuko! Gekikara says turning her head and then punched Yuko on her stomach hard...leaving her laying on the floor 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouted 
stay..there! Yuko said in pain
Gekikara run to Acchan a gave her several punches on her face on her body 
Chiyuu tries to go rescue her but Eiji took her hand and stop her 
if she sees you, she might want to turn you! Eiiji days 
Chiyuu clenched her fist 
Takamina took advantage that they were distracted and run to Acchan 
Takaminaaaa! Chiyuu and Eiji shouts 
Takamina punched Gekikara's cheek 
what?!?? everyone was with their jaws on the floor
Takamina you silly! Acchan said while pushes Takamina away 
how did she do it? Mariko thought while she was watching everything from other buikding terrace
you pathetic human! Gekikara said smiling while brushes her cheek "I'm going to finish you Atsuko!" she shouts ready to punch Acchan 
*Pop* (A punch on Gekikara's face) 
Yuki chan! Eiji says 
i feel ignore! Yuki says 
Yuki chan! Acchan says while falls on the floor Takamina went to her rescue 
who are you? Gekikara asks mad
someone cooler,smarter, and better good looking than you so go away there's no space for two of us in this world! Yuki says with a smirk
you seem fun! Gekikara says smiling 
oh..you have no idea! Yuki says 
Yuki is so cool! Mayu says with her hands on her face
Yuko there's no time to be sleeping around here..let's get rid of her! Yuki says 
i wasn't sleeping..and you always acting cool! Yuko smiling says while gets up 
two kids against me.. funny!Gekikara says smiling 
i can't say here watching! Chiyui says and goes with Yuki and Yuko 
your time is over Gekisomething i don't want another Yuki in this world is too much with one! Yuko says smiling 
Acchan was in Takamina's arms "stupid girls..they know they can't win!" 
come and get me kids! Gekikara says 
the three girls goes running to Gekikara...
they were throwing punches to her but she was fast she could handle the three of them
Gekikara punched Chiyuu then Yuko and then to Yuki
the bitch is fast! Yuki says whike takes deep breaths
she's out of your league kids! Mariko murmured 
Yuki,Chiyuu! Yuko said 
the two girls looked at Yuko and nooded 
let's go! Yuki says and takes off her jacket while runs to her with Chiyuu
ahhhhhhh the two girls throws punches and kicks to Gekikara but she was still dodging the she saw that Yuko was up and crossed her arms covering her face while Yuko gives several kicks which made Gekikara loose her focus.. Yuki took advantage of that and punched her on her stomach,Yuko landed on the floor and Chiyuu punched her fast on her face! 
they fooled her! Mariko murmured 
Gekikara was bleeding and on the floor 
let's finish her Yuki said and throw her a punch that Acchan blocked because she got in the middle
Acchan! everyone said 
go away Gekikara! Acchan said while forces with Yuki's punch 
you owe me! Gekikara said while got up and walked away bleeding 
what's that mean? Takamina murmured
why you got in the way? Yuki says mad 
because it's not her fault! Acchan says sad 
so now i see! Mariko murmured and dissapeared
ahhhh Yuki chan! Mayu says 
what? Yuki turns around and sees Yuko looking under Mayu's skirt
You rat! Yuki says and drags her away from Mayu 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says and pinches her on her cheek 
ouuuuccccch! Nyan Nyan! Yuko says 
Takamina helps Acchan 
Yuko you're a pervert! Chiyuu says smiling 
it's not ny fault girls are so pretty but nobody like my Nyan Nyan! Yuko says smiling 
Nyan Nyan blushes
everyone laughs 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 9.Friends (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 13\12
Post by: Haruko on December 14, 2011, 06:09:45 AM
forever perver yuko :D
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 9.Friends (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 13\12
Post by: luckymmsg on December 14, 2011, 08:17:47 AM
Always the perverted Yuko. :wub:
Always able to smooth down tension.  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 9.Friends (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 13\12
Post by: kahem on December 14, 2011, 08:44:42 AM
Hehe pervert squirrel ^^
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 10.WMatsui (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 15\12
Post by: cmze on December 16, 2011, 05:50:35 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                     10. W Matsui
hello..well..no words for this chapter xD 
Note: Jurina is 17! :D 

Stupid Yuki at least you could of told me that you were not about to come to school! Mayu thought looking through her school window
well class we have another surprise for you! the teacher says happy 
we won a trip to Hawai or what? Ikki asks
Hawai! everyone comments happy 
no,stop with Hawai! the teacher says nervous 
so boring! Mayu thought 
come in please! The teacher says 
a new girl! everyone says 
hi i'm Matsui Jurina! she says smiling 
oh..sorry my phone! the teacher says and excuses himself and goes to pick up his call 
Jurina proceeds to go  sit next to Mayu because that desk was empty 
ta-ta-ta..you just..(nobody complete the sentence)
what? Jurina asks 
you..just..sitted on Yuki's desk! Ikki says nervous 
who's Yuki? Jurina asks 
well she's a little..BITCH! another girl says 
she's just a little temperamental! another guy says 
Mayu sighed and kept looking through her window till she saw the object of her affections standing in the other building in front of her..
"Yuki!" Mayu murmured then got up and run to the other building 
what's wrong with her? everyone said

                      /\/\/\/\/Meanwhile/\/\/\/\/\
Rena i felt so disgusted by you.. how could you? 

but Atsuko "i just couldn't help it!" 

you just couldn't help it! ha.."i can says people can't help it but we're angels!" 

so now i have to clean up your mess! 

what are you talking about? what are you going to do?

one human life more one human life left..is the same

don't you dare! 

what you're going to do about it sister! 

you can't.. YOU CAN'T! Rena shouts crying 
     ~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Acchan wake up! Takamina says 
what? Acchan asks cleaning her tears with her fingers
you had a nightmare! Takamina says while puts her hand on Acchan's cheek 
it wasn't a nightnare! Acchan replies sobbing 
hey don't worry i'm here! Takamina says while hugs Acchan tighly 
don't ever get in the middle of a fight! Acchan says 
what? Takamina asks 
don't ever do that again! Acchan says rising her voice 
she was..beating you! Takamina replies 
I DON'T CARE..she doesn't hesitate you were lucky that Yuki came on time! Acchan says serious 
who she is? Takamina asks 
nobody! Acchan answers  breaking the hug and looking other way trying to hide the tears
~~~Rainy day~~~~~ 

you just broke the law and you have to pay the consequences of your acts! Atsuko says and hits Rena's stomach while she's on the floor 
please leave her alone..she's just a kid..she haven't done anything! Rena says bleeding 
i won't forgive you..you fell for that rat..we were best friends and you're leaving me because of her! Atsuko shouts kicking Rena and pointed to the girl who's scare watching this scene
Stop.. hitting Rena chan! The girl shouts and punches Atsuko on her cheek 
Atsuko looked at the girl "You miserable kid!" she clench her fist and beated the hell out of her 
No..Atsuko! Rena shouts while tries to get up 
don't you ever touch me again! Acchan says and keeps punching the girl.. till she was knock out 
now i feel better! Atsuko says while walks away but not before kick for last time to Rena..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
there you are Yuki chan! Mayu says hapoy while hugs her from behind 
i can run away from you! Yuki mumured 
you can but you don't want to because if wanted to leave you wouldn't be here in front of ny windown smartass! Mayu says in Yuki's ear which made Yuki blush for the sudden gesture
i didn't even notice! Yuki says looking other way 
Mayu smirked 
stop smirking it's not fun! Yuki says 
Mayu looked closely to Yuki "what creature are u?!" 
don't call me creature! Yuki says pouting 
then thing! Mayu says smiling 
i'm not a creture or thing so cut it! Yuki says serious
whatever that doesn't  make me love you less! Mayu took Yuki's hand and went out of there 
where are we going? Yuki asks 
you already stole my kisses so at least you can take me on a date..i'm a human so that's how we do things here! Mayu says smiling 
what am i have to do take you to cinema and then dinner? Yuki says pouting 
yes,you're just a perfect human! Mayu says smirking
i was kidding..human things! Yuki says with a sigh 
After a good date the girls were heading back home that means Mayu's home 
hey ass***e! Yuko shouts 
Yuki turns around and quickly removes her arm from Mayu's neck 
are you talking to me rat? Yuki asks 
do you called me rat? Yuko shouts 
alright not again! Mayu, Nyan Nyan,Eiji,Chiyuu say at the same time
what are you doing here? Chiyuu asks looking at Yuki who was all red 
nothing!" Yuki answers 
we were on a da...(mmmp)<- Yuki covered Mayu's mouth 
do you want to come for ice cream? Yuko asked 
no,i don't want to! Yuki replied 
i wasn't asking you! Yuko says while looks at Mayu's bump with a in love look 
so pervert! Nyan Nyan says and pinches Yuko's cheek 
what do you have with Mayu's bump? Yuki asked 
haven't you notice bad girlfriend it's pretty! Yuko says while makes Yuki kneel to take a closer look 
perverts! Mayu slapped Yuki and Yuko..
stop with the slaps! Yuki says while puts her hand on her burning cheek 
so you been watching her bump? Yuko asks with a perverted look 
stop with the bump and you stop with the slaps! Yuki says while gets up 
<everyone laughs>
-------------/-------///-----//-----///---///---------
huh? what's that? Jurina heard some noise in a alley 
she couldn't help to look:
are you mad? Gekikara asks smiling 
you're dead! a man shouts while runs to her with other man 
Gekikara dodge their punches so beatifully that Jurina couldn't believe it she also thought that girl is cute..
how she can do that? Jurina though while she gets closer to scene..she couldn't stop staring Gekikara somehow Her heart beats so fast..
hey behind you! Jurina shouted because she saw another man getting up and he had a wood 
Gekikara was impressed by the young girl and the man beat her with the wood several times 
Jurina run to the man and jump on him 
Gekikara was confused "that girl..that girl!" was the only thing that she could thing 
Gekikara got up fast knocked the two man and then went for the one who was fighting Jurina 
get your hands off her! Gekikara shouted and ounched him several times (the man faint)
Gekikara was taking deep breaths and staring Jurina
wow you're such a good fighter.. hi i'm Jurina Matsui! 
Matsui! Gekikara murmured before let her body fall on Jurina! 
hey..i don't know your name..please tell me you're okay! Jurina says panicking 
Jurina carried Gekikara on her bag "i guess i'll take home with me!" 
Gekikara lips formed a little smile...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 10.WMatsui (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 15\12
Post by: kahem on December 16, 2011, 08:09:50 AM
Hahaha Yuko and Yuki so funny!
Eh what did Acchan to the WMatsui????
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 10.WMatsui (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 15\12
Post by: Sok on December 16, 2011, 12:31:38 PM
Yay! Update! Thank you. his ch. was funny and interesting. I wonder what Atsuko did to Rena?? :mon dunno: Please update soon.  :mon prayer:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 10.WMatsui (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 15\12
Post by: RenaChii on December 16, 2011, 10:53:07 PM
MaYuki date~ (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)

I'm so curious about Rena's past~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/OMG.gif)

Looking forward for more W Matsui & MaYuki~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-01.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-02.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 23\12
Post by: cmze on December 22, 2011, 07:33:26 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 11.Proof of Love

I'll continue W Matsui in chapter 13! :P

So that's the plan! Alexander says happy and clapping with everyone in the room..

Yuki chan wait up! Mayu says while runs after her
what? Yuki asks 
are you going to meet up with Yuko,Acchan and the others? Mayu asks 
yes! Yuki answers 
great! Mayu says and takes Yuki's arm 
you can't go! Yuki says serious 
why not? Mayu asks
because you can't! Yuki says removing her arm 
but.. but! Mayu says 
i said you can't! Yuki shouts and walks away with a black aura 
Mayu stood there frozen "Yuki just yelled at me!" she murmured 
don't worry she seems to be temperamental! A guy says smiling 
who are you? Mayu asks afraid
not your best friend! the guy answers 
~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This way would be better! Yuko shouts 
no,no that's too easy! Eiji shouts 
c'mon stop fighting! Chiyuu says 
shut up! both shouts 
Acchan and Takamina smirks 
your plan sucks! Yuki says while enters from the window
do you have anything better? Yuko shouts 
yes,let's go straight and destroy them 
and  do you know where is their hiding place smartass? Yuko asks 
i don't! Yuki says while seats 
you arrogant bitch! Yuko murmures
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says 
but Acchan does! Yuki says 
Acchan? Takamina says and looks at her 
she was one of the bad ones right Yuko? Yuki says 
yes! Acchan says sad 
"Acchan.."Takamina murmures (it hit Takamina because she didn't know about that!) 
let'e go straight and finish them! Yuki says while uses her fist to punch the palm of he hand 
i doubt they're still there! Acchan replies 
they're a bunch of D**heads so thet are there! Yuki says with a smirk 
what do you think Eiji? Chiyuu asks 
well they don't expect us going there so that would be a surprise element that give us advantage! Eiji says smiling 
are you out of your mind? Acchan asks 
why? what's wrong with my plan? Yuki asks 
do you know how it's fighting with fallen angels? Acchan asks mad 
(everyone was in silence,they knew they could die!) 
yes,i do! Yuki says 
no,you don't kid! Acchan says 
who you calling kid? Yuki asks while gets up 
you! Acchan says 
it's okay Acchan! Chiyuu says while takes Acchan's shoulder softly
 we're sisters remember? Yuko says while puts herself in the middle 
(Nyan Nyan,Tomochin and Takamina were a little scared about the scene..)
we're not! Yuki says staring to Acchan 
do you guys  agree? Acchan asks
Chiyuu,Yuko and Yuki nods..
it's not a bad idea! Mariko says 
Mariko sama! Yuko says 
Acchan and Yuki turns their to look at Mariko 
it's not a bad idea and i would help! Mariko says smiling to everyone 
why would you help us? Yuki and Acchan asks 
i have to make sure that everything go well! Mariko says smiling 
so it's all set we're going! Yuko says with her fist in the air 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says 
Let's prepare! Yuki says  
(Acchan was against all but she couldn't leave them so decided to join)
  ~~~~~~AtsuMina~~~~~~
"Takamina" Acchan says while takes her hand 
what is it Acchan? Takamina asks 
when i get back..i will tell you everything! Acchan said and gave her a kiss on her cheek 
Takamina blushed..
there's no need..like i said before I don't care about your past! Takamina replied 
you have to know and then you can decide if can hate or ...
Takamina kissed Acchan on the lips (A quick peck) "it doesn't change the way i feel for you!" 
Acchan was all red she didn't even blink..
just get back! Takamina says (she was aware of the danger..) 
~~~~~~~KojiYuu~~~~~~~
Nyan Nyan *sighs* "Yuko!"  she says sad 
what's wrong Nyan Nyan? Yuko asks 
i just..i just don't want you to go! Nyan Nyan says sad
it's going to be alright! Yuko says smiling 
Nyan Nyan hugs the squirrel "please don't go!" 
Nyan Nyan i'll promise i'll be back and i will skinship you everyday as a sign of my love! Yuko says happy showing her dimples 
i don't want loose you! Nyan Nyan says 
you won't! Yuko says while wipes Nyan Nyan's tears with her thumb 
don't cry! Yuko says and kisses Nyan Nyan's cheeks 
~~~~~~~~TomoTomo~~~~~~~
you're planning to go! don't you? Tomochin asks 
they're my friends and this is my fault! Chiyuu says while looks through the window 
thi is not your fault! Tomochin says while hugs her from behind 
how did you know? Chiyuu asks 
i knew..you were special since the first day i met you..i knew you weren't a mermaid later! Tomochin says putting her chin on Chiyuu's shoulder
a maermaid! Chiyuu smiles 
remember that i only want to sing to you so you better comeback! Tomochin says 
yes,i will come back to you to hear that beatiful voice that you have!  Chiyuu says smiling 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
someone walks around the room like crazy ..
Mayu pick up! Maybe i shouldn't yell at her..
damn i just don't want her to know that i..*sighs*
why i feel this way..pick up! pick up! 
let's go! Yuko says 
Yuki gets mad and squeezes her phone till she break it without noticing "let's go!" 
the girls leaves the dept with Eiji..
is it normal that i don't feel okay? Takamina says 
let's go after them! Kojiharu says 
what? really? Tomochin asks
i need to make sure that Acchan is okay! Takamina days while takes Kojiru's car keys 
let's go! Kojiharu says and drags Tomochin with her 
-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-//-//-/-//-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-
this is perfect! Alexander says happy looking at something in front of him 
we'll win eather way! a voice in the dark says 
good job Hideki! Alexander says 
thanks my lord! Hideki says in kness
~~~~~~~~~~~~outside the nest~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ here it is? Yuki says 
i can't see anything! Yuko says 
it's underground! Acchan says 
okay if anyone wants to backout.. You can't! Yuki says smiling 
now how we planned! Yuko says to Eiji and Chiyuu
go hide! Acchan says to Chiyu and Eiji
once they were hiden...
let's destroy the nest! Yuki shouts and punches the ground making a big hole 
(dust let them see)
hi girls..i was waiting for you! Alexander says standing 
there looking at them 
more fallen angels appeared and went to beat them 
Alexander! Acchan shouts and runs to him 
leaving Mariko and Yuki fighting with the bunch of fallen angels 
hi! Hideki says smiling and walks to Yuko's direction "hi i'm Hideki!" and extends his hand 
what do you want? Yuko slaps his hand 
ii heard you beated my friends! he said smiling and punched Yuko's stomach 
you son of a...! Yuko got up and started fighting with him...
one girl took Yuki from behind while other fallen angel was beating her on her stomach but Yuki got sick of that game and pulled the girl ahead making the guy hit her on her partner's back they started fighting eachother..then Yuki took advantage and knocked both at the same time
stupid fallen angels! Yuki says and pass over their stomaches to fight against the others 
Acchan throws many punches to Alexander but he was faster 
"what Atsuko are you still mad? get over it please! Alexander says smiling 
don't use her words! Acchan says mad and punches Alexander on his face..
you whore! how dare you? Alexander said while takes Acchan by her arms and throws her against a big rock which coused Acchan spit blood 
Yuko was also throwed around the rock..Acchan got up and helped Yuko to get up..
"Are you okay?" Acchan asked 
yes,i am! Yuko answers while walks to Hideki but something stopped her 
what the hell? Yuko says 
what's wrong? Acchan asks 
i can't pass! Yuko says
what? Acchan tried to pass but she couldn't 
sorry girls..i have to make sure that everything goes well! Mariko says 
what? Yuki says while beats two fallen angels 
what the hell did you do? Acchan and Yuko asked
you're traped..you see those marks on the ground that form a cirlcle well that's all you can move!  Mariko said smiling 
you whore! Yuko and Acchan said 
i don't care you and you destiny thing "put that shit off!" Yuki says mad 
make me! Mariko says 
Yuki run to Mariko and started fighting 
Mariko gave her several punches on her stomach which coused Yuki to kneel to catch her breath 
okay okay..stop give me Atsuko! Alexander says 
Yuki and Yuko looked at Acchan who was scared her eyes says it all
no,you can take Chiyuu she's hiding behind those bushes! Mariko said pointing 
i want Atsuko so give me to me now! Alexander said mad 
Yuki was still catching her breath...
(Flashback)
You shouldn't avoid this! Acchan says smiling 
avoid what? Yuki says looking other way 
this! Acchan said pointing to Yuko playing with Miichan,Mayu and evryone was there smiling 
i'm not avoiding! Yuki says 
it's cool to feel! Acchan says while takes a rose from the ground and smells it 
you were one fallen what changed you? Yuki asks
i don't want to be that anymore..it's shallow and cold and can't do they things they do so when i sww Mayu protecting you  reminded me of something of my past it wasn't the first time that i saw i human protecting an angel! Acchan says sad
(Flashback ended) 
[when Yuki's flashback ended the girls were already hiding behind the bushes with Eiji and Chiyuj and they told them everything that haplened!] 
i'm sorry i can't..take Chiyuu! Mariko says 
Yuki got up "dude beat it you're not going take Acchan or Yuko or Chiyuu!"
really Yuki? that's why i had a plan b! Hideki please bring my present! Alexander says smiling 
Hideki brough somone but Yuki couldn't see the person face because it was covered
do you think a care about humans? like if that going to change my mind! Yuki said laughing 
not so fast Yuki chan! Alexander says while uncovers the person's face 
"Mayu chan!" everyone said 
Yuki's eyes widen by the impression..
so how about this? Alexander asked smiling 
Mayu had tied her hands and was a little damage like someone had hit her and she was looking other way
let me say that this girl was a complete jerk she rathers die before telling us about you! Hideki said
what are you going to do your sister or your human friend? Alexander asks smiling 
Yuki was shocked..Yuki putted her hands on her head trying to think what to do! 
but nothing came to her mind just the fact that if something happens to Mayu she would never forgive herself 
(Flashback)
why did you followed me? Yuki asked mad while shakes Mayu 
let go off me! Mayu says crying 
stupid human! Yuki says while turns around 
i'm sorry..i just..i..just..wanted to make sure that you were okay! Mayu says sobbing 
Yuki's eyes changed.. she turned around "i'm sorry! i just..*Yuki kissed Mayu* 
why you always fix everything with a kiss? Mayu asks 
don't follow me is dangerous! Yuki says concerned with her hands on Mayu's cheeks 
i just wanted to protect you! Mayu replies
i'm sorry! Yuki says and kisses Mayu all over her face 
stop Yuki you're tickling me! Mayu says smiling 
i don't care! Yuki replies still kissing Mayu 
stop! Mayu says laughing 
(End of the flashback)
you just wanted protect me!" Yuki murmured and a tear came out
take me! Acchan says 
What did you say? Alexander asked
take me and let her go! Acchan says 
Yuki looked at Acchan impressed then clenched her fist "i'm better take me!" 
you're better than Acchan? Alexander asks 
better than anyone! Yuki replied 
really? Alexander asked 
Yuki walked to Alexander but other fallen angels get in her way 
Yuki without hesitation tore out one of the fallen angel's heart then dodge it the punch of the other and broke his arm "don't get in my way garbage!" 
the others fallen angels were scared and didn't want to fight Yuki because they can see in her eyes that she's full of hate..
(Mayu was terrified and so was everyone else) 
splendid! Alexander says while makes a sign to othe to go hit her 
I SAID DISSPAEAR! Yuki shouts and takes one by his neck and squeezed it till he faints 
the others were scared to come ckoser but they did
Yuki kept killing other fallen without no mercy..
Yuki stop!"Mayu shouts 
We gotta stop her! Yuko says 
Acchan was in shock...
Acchan,Acchan! Yuko says 
Yuki's hands were full of blood she cleaned a bit and then knelt "Alexander i'm all yours..please don't hurt her please i would do anything!" 
Yuki don't! Mayu says 
shut up bitch! Hideki says and slaps her 
Yuki clenched her fist for Hideki's action 
Alexander got closer to Yuki and pull her up by her 
shirt "let me get this..you would sacrifice your life for her?
yes without hesitation I LOVE HER!" Yuki answers looking at Mayu pouting to not cry
please Yuki don't! Mayu says crying 
Yuki!" everyone says 
"that's pathetic just for human life you would do anything! right? but you just killed the half on my kids and you want me to forgive you and make you part of my family!" Alexander asks
yes! Yuki says 
you'll be part of my family but i'll make you suffer first!  Alexander says while one hand forms a black ball of energy! 
he's going to turn her! Acchan says 
Hideki holds Mayu
Alexander puts that black ball of energy inside Yuki's body which couse Yuki screaming out for the pain and rolling on the floor 
suffer! Alexander says 
Yuki!" everyone shouts 
it was burning inside of her it fell like hell she saw bridge and jumped to the water..
Mayu punched Hideki and jumped too..
TO BE CONTINUED..its late i have to sleep! 
13 will be WMatsui and Acchan's past! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 23\12
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 22, 2011, 08:52:33 AM
OMG!!! Yuki!!!! :cry:
Those fallen playing dirty.. using Mayu... :angry:
They both jumped down into the water!!! :shocked
I wonder what will happen next :banghead:

I'm curious about Acchan's past XD
I wonder what happened?? :?

Thanks for the update :)
Please update soon :thumbsup
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 23\12
Post by: kahem on December 22, 2011, 08:58:14 AM
Noooooo!!!! Yuki!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 23\12
Post by: Sydney W on December 22, 2011, 09:38:20 AM
Yuki and Mayu jumped into water... i want to know what happened next... of course, not to miss the Atsumina moment.. please update soon... thanks
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo) 23\12
Post by: Sok on December 23, 2011, 02:59:11 AM
NOOOO~   :mon runcry::mon waterworks: What happened to Yuki and Mayu?  :mon ghost:
Thank you for the update. Please update as soon as you can.  :mon cute:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (B side U) (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) 24\12
Post by: cmze on December 24, 2011, 04:09:52 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                       11.Proof of Love (B side U) 

I decided to make it side B..WMatsui and Acchan past be in Chapter 12! xD

"Mayu!" Everyone shouts 
what a stupid human! Hideki says laughing 
"Mayu!" Takamina murmures 
"We have to do something! Nyan Nyan says 
(Takamina and Nyan Nyan fell Mayu's action that she will do anything for Yuki..even die) 
we're stupid humans and so what? Takamina shouts while runs to Mariko sama 
Takamina! Acchan shouts 
Nyan Nyan runs after Takamina 
what hell is she doing? Yuko asks 
who you think you are to say which are our destinies? you don't know anything! Takamina shouted while uses her sword on Mariko sama non-stoping 
(yes,Takamina brought her sword!) 
wow she has so much energy! Eiji said 
we're not going to get anything if we're here hiding..Let's go fight for what we believe! Chiyuu says and runs to Hideki 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouted and erased the circle that was around them so they got free 
Thanks Nyan Nyan! Yuko says and runs to get Alexander 
be careful! Nyan Nyan said 
Acchan run to Mariko sama but not before smirk to her boyish girlfriend "Thank you Takamina!" then punched Mariko sama on her face and sent her many steps away 
two fallen angels went to fight Acchan to distract her 
damn midget! Mariko said on the floor
Chiyuu was throwing punches to Hideki but he was dodging them he was playing with Chiyuu fooling her 
"you're so weak,i can't believe my lord wanted you!" 
shut up jerk! Chiyuu says 
Hideki didn't notice but someone was behind him and grabbed him 
what the hell? Hideki said and turned his head 
sorry..i don't know why i'm doing this maybe i'm believing in humans! the girl said still holding them
Akicha stop! Hideki said 
Akicha didn't listen in her head is still the memories when she fought to Yuki and Mayu got in the way and when she kidnapped Takamina and Takamina refused to say where Acchan was despite all the things she was doing to her
Chiyuu took advantage of it and gave him a combo of punches on his stomach 
Meanwhile 
so you're the newborn! Alexander says smiling 
that's not of yor business! Yuko shouts and straight to him with her fist armed
they start fighting they move fast Eiiji was impress that Yuko can have a decent fight with Alexander 
you're still too young! Alexander said with a smile
shut up! Yuko says and attemp to kick him but she uses her fist Alexander dodges it..
nice try kid! Alexander says smiling
i'm not done yet! Yuko says and kicks him (Alexander thought that Yuko would use the same trick but she didn't that's why she could hit him) 
~Mayuki~
Mayu was able to find Yuki under the water and put her on the border they were laying on the ground 
they can see everyone fighting in the bridge but Mayu didn't care she catched her breath and got up to see Yuki...
Yuki! Yuki! wake up! Mayu says while moves her softly 
Mayu could not move her body because she seems like a rock her skin was very blue as she has hypothermia.
Mayu leaned to hear Yuki's heartbeat but she couldn't hear a thing 
no way! no way! this is not true! Mayu said desperately while tries to give her cpr 
her hands were pressing Yuki's chest many times waiting for an answer but she didn't recieved any..
Yuki! Mayu screamed crying and holding Yuki's body tight against her 
(everyone heard)
Alexander stopped playing with Yuko and looked at the scene 
*sighs* well it seems like she wasn't strong enough to be powerful! Alexander says laughing 
Yuki!" Acchan murmured
no way! Chiyuu said and stopped hitting Hideki
Takamina looked to Kojiharu, both looked down 
she scaped from my punishment so easy! Alexander said looking at Mayu crying and hugging Yuki 
Yuko also looked the scene she was in shock..
(Flashback)
Promise me if something happens you will take care of Mayu! Yuki says serious 
we all have to come back because if you don't i'm going to see under Mayu's and Tomochin' skirt not Takamina because she's a dude! Yukp says smiling
hey Takamina is not a dude and i'm 100 % sure about that! Acchan says smiling 
Pop* "You can't see under my Tomochin's skirt,You pervert squirrel! Chiyuu says 
ouch! Yuko says 
stay away from Mayu unless you have to protect her promise me! Yuki says pinching Yuko's cheek 
okay..okay I promise! Yuko says 
(everyone laugh)
(End of the flashback) 
why i have to see this..Her crying it's so annoying finish her please Alexander says while points to Mayu
The rest of fallen angels went to Mayu..
hey comeback fight me! Acchan said but somehow and hand grabbed her "we haven't done yet!" 
Mariko! Acchan said  
Yuko tried to get in the way but they push her and they jumped to Mayu 
Chiyuu and Eiji were trying to comfront them but they pushed them aside 
(a leader gave them an order and they have to make it that how it works with the fallen angels)
Hideki also got up and jumped 
Mayu run! Yuko shouted and then jumped to her rescue but unfortunately there were many fallen angels ahead 
Akicha,Eiji and Chiyuu also Jumped to help Mayu.
Ohh my god..they are coming for me..i'm not going to move i'm not going to leave Yuki! Mayu said crying 
they were close..they were already a few steps from Mayu and Yuki's body 
poor girl..she wants to die! A fallen angel says and grabs her by her arm 
don't worry we'll make it really painfun..that bitch killed my brothers and sisters! Another fallen angel says while points at Yuki 
hey not so fast i want to join too! another fallen angel says while takes Mayu's other arm
one of the fallen angels beat Mayu on her stomach while other grabs her by her hair to pull her up
hey the party isn't over yet! The one who's holding her hair said 
all the sudden something happened..Yuki's fingers are moving..
take this whore! An angel shouts and beats Mayu on her stomach again 
Yuki got up slowly..
Yuki!" Mayu murmured while tries to keep her eyes open 
the guy that was hitting Mayu turned around and looked at Yuki.."so you're alive!" 
Yuki smirked and then she used her hand as a knife and pull out his an organ "nice liver i think!" she says while shows it to him
(everyone was terrified but still they went for her and just like the first they ended up!) 
after finishing with everyone in a blink of an eye before Yuko and the other get there 
she stare at Mayu who was the only one standing 
getting closer and closer with every step..
Yuki!" Mayu says sobbing 
Yuki? she's not home right now..you can leave a message if you want! My name is Black..
Black? Mayu knelt and more tears came out 
Black was in front of her "Time to say goodbye was good  knowing you!" then putted her hand on Mayu's neck and squeezed it 
Yuki chan! Mayu whispered and closed her eyes waiting for what's next
Yuki stop! Yuko shouts and punches her on her face
which left her a many steps away 
Acchan stoped fighting with Mariko and jumped too
Black got up and smirked "so weak!" and run to Yuko  
Black beated Yuko on her face so much like if it was her favorite sport 
Mayu was in shock "why Yuki is behaving this way? she's not like this!" 
Akicha,Eijii and Chiyuu arrived separated Yuki from Yuko 
this is going to be fun! Black says 
Chiyuu,Eiji and Akichan run to Yuki.. they tried to stop her but she didn't wanted to..
she beated Chiyuu first then Eiji and then Akicha she knocked them up 
i'm amazing! Yuki murmured and looked to her body
you're just and ego bitch! Yuko said while gets up ready to fight her again 
This is beter than tv! Alexander said smiling 
(if you wondering where is Hideki he's hiding in the water) 
what did you say? Black asked mad and run to Yuko and beat the hell out of her again
stop! Acchan shouts and also beats Yuki 
are you okay? Acchan asks and helps her to get up 
yes,i'm fine! Yuko says 
Acchan gets up she didn't notice that Yuki was behind her..Yuki putted her hands on Acchan's ribs and breaks it..
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Acchan shouts in pain
ACCHAN! Takamina shouts from the bridge and then jumps 
Acchan! Yuko says 
Acchan was on the floor for the pain...
i'm going to finish you! Black says but somone stops her
what the hell? Black says and turns her head 
it's not her time yet..let's go! Alexander says 
Yuki pouted but followed Alexander... 
(Takamina is a fast swimmer..xD) 
Acchan! Takamina says while tries to carry her 
Eiji woke up because of the screaming and shouted to Takamina "Don't touch her it could be worse!" 
Takamina starts crying for her Acchan..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~At home~~~~~~~~~~~~~
what happened? everyone looks so down! Miichan says while enters to the dept and looks at (Yuko,Chiyyu,Tomochin,Nyan Nyan,Akicha and Mayu)
you look like shit really! Miichan says smiling 
shut up! Yuko shouts and goes away 
what did i say? Miichan asks
everyone just looked down 
excuse me i'm going with Yuko! Nyan Nyan says
AHHHHHH! AHHHHHH! 
what's that? Miichan asks 
Acchan..she had an accident! Chiyuu says sad
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~in the room~~~~~~~
 Acchan hang on a little more! Takamina says crying and holding her hand 
ahhhhhhhhh! Accchan shouts 
Eiji stop you're hurting her! Takamina says 
sorry i have to do it! Eiji says
AHHHHHH!!Acchan shouts louder
everything is going to be okay! Takamina says crying and kisses Acchan's hand 
~~~~~~~~~~Outside Kojiyuu~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuuchan! Nyan Nyan called softly..when she saw the squirrel girl sitting with her knees on her chest and crying..
Nyan Nyan! Yuko says sobbing 
Nyan Nyan went to hug the younger girl "it's okay cry my angel!" 
why my chest hurts?Yuko asks sobbing 
it's called pain Yuuchan it hurts more than the physical one! Nyan Nyan answers rubbing Yuko's back softly 
this is all my fault! Yuko says 
no,Yuko this is nof your fault! Nyan Nyan says 
yes,it is "I'm not strong and i can't protect anyone" look what happened to Acchan! Yuko answers 
everything is going to be fine you'll see! Nyan Nyan says while puts her hand on Yuko's cheek "you'll find a way..you'll see!" 
Nyan Nyan kisses Yuko eyes "everything is going to be fine!" 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~back to the living room~~~~~~~
who ever thought Yuki could so evil? Akicha asks 
yes, still my Chiyuu have the marks of her rings on her face! Tomochin says 
Chiyuu gives a glare to Tomochin and Akicha and points to Mayu..
sorry Mayu! Tomochin and Akicha says 
marks? Mayu didn't pay attention to their apology she got up and looked herself in the mirror,she looked her neck and noticed it..
There's no mark on my neck! Mayu says and turns around 
what? Chiyuu,Akicha and Tomochin replied 
she didn't left me a mark..she wasn't planning to kill me...MY YUKIRIN IS STILL THERE! Mayu shouts 
ehhhhhhh?? Yuko and Nyan Nyan who were entering the room wondered
Mayu was smiling 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (B side U) (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) 24\12
Post by: Sok on December 24, 2011, 04:39:43 AM
Yay! Update.  :onioncheer:
Ohmigod!  :shock: Yuki turned into Black. Now she's a fallen angel, but she's still in there cuz she didn't hurt Mayu. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you.
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (B side U) (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) 24\12
Post by: Sydney W on December 24, 2011, 05:02:25 AM
Suspense. Yuki become evil and Acchan hurt. Omg. What happened next then. I'm stay tuned for your next update. :p
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (B side U) (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) 24\12
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 24, 2011, 09:18:04 AM
Black?!!! :w00t:

OMG! Yuki has become evil... :(
Acchan's rib... gulp* Yuki is so scary... :panic:

Thank you for the update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update soon :thumbsup
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (B side U) (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) 24\12
Post by: kahem on December 24, 2011, 01:26:47 PM
Black! Yay I like Black! And the fight too!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 11.Proof of love (B side U) (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) 24\12
Post by: RenaChii on December 24, 2011, 11:09:49 PM
BLACK YUKIRIN! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_duh.GIF)

Why Mayuyu smiling?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_spit.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
Post by: cmze on December 25, 2011, 08:14:11 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                    12.Go back

After what happen Mayu move in with the girls..
Mayu i know you think we're hard on you but we just don't want you to get hurt Yuki is gone! Chiyuu says while eats her breakfast 
Yuko and Nyan Nyan looked at situation
i know what i'm saying! Mayu says while eats 
stop saying her name..CAN'T YOU SEE? SHE'S NOT HER ANYMORE LOOK WHAT SHE DID TO ACCHAN AND LOOK EVERYONE AROUND YOU! Takamina says shouting mad and pointed to injures girls
Ahhhhhhhh! (Acchan) 
Acchan!" Takamina says while runs to her room 
i have to go! Mayu says while gets up and goes to school..
Mayu!" Yuko says in sad tone 
~~~~~~In the room~~~~~~
here are your pills! Takamina says while gives it to her with a glass of water 
Acchan takes it..
everything is going to be okay! Takamina says while puts her hand on Acchan's cheek 
Acchan smiles "i heard what you said to Mayu!" 
uhh that it's the truth! Takamina says sad looking other way 
i know how its like..and i know she's there..we can't loose hope! Acchan says with a smile 
Acchan!" Takamina says while kisses her on her forhead
i regret so many things Takamina and i know i deserve all this pain! Acchan says smirking 
why? you're not...(shhh Takamina and listen then you can decide if you want me by your side!) Acchan says while puts her thumb on Takamina's lips to shut her..
(Meanwhile somewhere else...)
where am i? Gekikara wondered 
you woke up! Jurina says happy 
Gekikara gets up from bed...
wow you slept a day..that's a record! Jurina says smiling while brings her A glass of water
Gekikara was hypnotized looking at her "she can't be her..
what i got something on my face? Jurina asks blushing 
i have to go! Gekikara says nervous but someone grabber her arm 
please don't go! Jurina says looking at her in the eyes
somthing in her eyes! Gekikara thought 
why you don't teach me how to fight? Jurina says happy while moves Gekikara's arm 
fight? why you want to fight? Gekikara asks 
because i want to be strong! Jurina answers while touches her forhead 
Gekekira removes Jurina's hair from her forhead and sees what she's hidding
a mark? what happened? Gekikara asks
i don't remember..i always thought that i fell but i think it wasn't because of that..let's eat! Jurina says happy..
Gekikara sitted and stared at the younger girl "Atsuko what this mean?" 
~~~~~4 years ago~~~~~~~~
uhhm where am i?why everything is blue?she thought
rise and shine! someone says while removes something that let her see around her 
hi! a girl says 
hi! i say nervous
well this is not a good place to meet..my mortal name is Atsuko! so what's yours? she says smiling  
i don't know what are you talking about? i say while i get up!
pardon me! Atsuko says while kneels down and see my feet 
it says that your name is Rena Matsui! Atsuko says smiling at me
where are we? Rena asks 
in a human morgue! Atsuko says while grabs Rena's hand and pull her out 
where we're going? Rena asks while Atsuko pushes her to hide her 
don't you remember our mission silly? Atsuko asks 
mission? Rena repeats 
yes,we have to look for an angel who came to earth without permision! Atsuko says 
we're in Earth! Rena says surprised 
yes,they send us here! Atsuko says smiling 
i thought they never going to choose me after the among of angels that wanted to do this mission..it's incredible! Rena says smiling 
yes,i was surprised to! Atsuko says smiling 
where should we start? Rena asks 
well first we need to get some clothes don't you think? we can't walk around like this 
but we need..this thing how is it called? that you pay things! Rena says 
money! Atsuko says 
yes,i got that covered! Atsuko says while sees a guy passing by and pushes him to an alley 
hey! The guy says smiling 
Atsuko goes closer like she's going to kiss him but she didn't "Now go away!" she says smiling 
what? the guy says looking at her with a wtf? face
go away before i'll break your bones! Atsuko says smiling 
oh really i want to see that! The guy says and tries to punch Atsuko who seemed to be playing 
she beated the guy,that's for making mad! Atsuko says smiling
you can't do that..that's stealing! Rena says 
Rena this insect tried to beat me. now let's go! Atsuko says while drags Rena with her and leave the guy on the floor 
humans are so weak..it's like i'm a queen here! Atsuko says happy 
i don't think we should so those things! Rena says feeling bad about the guy 
stop..imagine what we could so here! Atsuko says 
we came here for our mission! Rena says 
we're going to accomplish our mission but we can have fun on the way! Atsukk says smiling 
i don't know! Rena says hesitating 
let's go buy clothes! Atsuko says happy and showing the guy's wallet 
~~~~~~~~3 months later~~~~~~~~~
where is Atsuko? Rena thought while she sits on the park grass 
"why she has to be such a rebel and drag me with her? but still she's my friend!" Rena thought while closes her eyes 
Jurina you're such a looser,i don't want you on my team! A kid says 
My mom says that you don't have a dad and i don't want you in my team eather.. go away! Another kid shouts while throws the ball to her hard 
Jurina runs away crying and she didn't notice Rena sleeping on the grass so she fell on her 
Rena opens her eyes for the sudden weight on her..
Jurina moves off her.."i'm sorry!" she says sobbing (still hurt for what the other kids said) 
what's that? Rena asked while puts her finger on Jurina's cheek and tastes the water that came from he eyes 
salty!" Rena said and smiled 
Jurina stopped crying for some sort of thing Rena's smile make her happy and gives her peace 
are you okay? Rena asks 
Jurina pouts and hugs Rena..
Rena blushes "i guess you're not!" she says while rubs the younger girl back 
Jurina blushed,broke the hug and run away
"nice to meet you!" Rena murmured 
~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~
Rena was in the same spot sleeping she thought that earth was beatiful,she enjoyed the air and the flowers that's why she sleeps in the park and also to avoid Atsuko's weird friends..
Rena felt that someone was looking at her so she opened her eyes and saw the same young girl looking at her in the eyes so close to her 
they stared eachother for a bit..
hi! Rena says 
hi! the younger girl says 
can i help you? Rena asks 
mmm i just..i don't know..WOULD YOU BE MY SISTER! Jurina shouts the last part blushing 
sister? what's that? Rena asks while sits
you don't know what's that? Jurina asks and also sits in front of Rena 
well you have to take care of me and protect me and tell me that you love me! Jurina says while takes Rena's hand 
we can't be sisters! Rena answers sad 
why not? Jurina asks pouting 
because i'm not from here..i'm sorry! Rena answers while gets up and walks away
leaving a sad Jurina..
The days passed and Rena didn't saw Jurina in the same park..(she was a little bit worried)
so one day walking throught the park she saw the person that she wanted to see playing in the slide she looked so cute but it was so sad that she was playing alone..so Rena felt bad about it and got Closer but then she felt something bad, dark around Jurina the feeling was getting closer everystep till she saw it there was a shodow behind Jurina...
Jurina can see it? Rena thought 
the shodow was about to touch Jurina's shoulder...
Hey move! Rena shouted while run to Jurina and jumped and beated the shadow that took a human form..Jurina was terrified she has never seen something like that before..
Rena chan! Jurina shouted and hid behind her 
"don't worry i'll protect you!" Rena said in position to fight..
it seemed like he smiled and then disappeared 
what was that? Jurina asked hugging Rena 
i don't know! Rena answered surprised too 
i'm scared Rena chan! Jurina said 
wait a minute! how you know my name? Rena asked 
i don't know..it just came to my mind! Jurina answered confused
Rena let that pass and thought that it will be better keep an eye on her "do you want ice cream! but first what's your name?!
I'm Matsui Jurina and yes,i want ice cream! 
Matsui too! Rena thought 
~~~~~~~~~~At home~~~~~~
After leaving Jurina at her house she went home..
i'm home! Rena shouted 
hello Rena! Atsuko says happy 
Rena walked to the living room and found a bunch of new people 
say hi to my friends! Atsuko says 
you must be Rena.. hello i'm Alexander! 
Rena could feel that something was not right and she could feel the same that she felt on the park..
sorry i have to work! :( 
there will be a part B too! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
Post by: kahem on December 25, 2011, 08:33:22 PM
Oh the WMatsui and Acchan past. I wanna more
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
Post by: RenaChii on December 26, 2011, 12:57:23 AM
Could it be that Alexander is the bad guy?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_scare.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
Post by: Sydney W on December 26, 2011, 03:59:18 AM
I want more of the story. thanks
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 26, 2011, 08:10:27 AM
0.0 Ren and Jurina XD
I think there's something special about Jurina :grin:
So the past is starting to reveal!!! :D
Alexander??!!! He's the bad guy!!! :angry:
Acchan why did you make friends with him???!!!! No!!! :panic:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute: I'll be waiting for Part B XD
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.Go Back (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 25\12
Post by: cmze on December 26, 2011, 08:32:20 AM
Omg you have no idea what i have planned..IT's THE BOMB!  :shocked :grin:

but you have to wait till i update!  :twisted:

i'm so thrill about this ideas with this fic..As you know remember is almost over and Akb boarding school i feel unspired!  :nervous

hope this fic fill you till something cool comes to my head! ARE WE GOOD?

and yes Jurina is very important and special...(To be continued)  :twisted:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.My Pov (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 26\12
Post by: Megumi on December 27, 2011, 07:34:27 PM
Ahh it's the same Alexander!

Acchan was evil poor Rena I wanna know how she turned to Gekikara and how Jurina got the mark on her forehead...


Can't wait for the part B

Thank you for your update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
Post by: cmze on January 06, 2012, 02:38:02 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                    12.Go back (B)

You can't beat me! A fallen angel shouts while punches Rena on her face several times
she can't but i do! Another girl says while punches him and makes him get off Rena
Atsuko! Rena says with a smile and faints 
(Noise of someone preparing tea)
Rena wakes up because of the noise..
so you're up! Atsuko says with a smile 
where's the man? Rena asks and looks side to side 
easy..don't worry,he's not a problem anymore! Atsuko says smiling
what did you do to him? Rena asks 
what? is not like he's going to be miss! Atsuko says pouting 
it's not your job to decide that! Rena says 
why you can't be thankful that i saved you! Atsuko says mad while leaves 
where are you going? Rena asks while gets up from bed 
NOT OF YOUR BUSINESS! Atsuko shouts and slams the door..
"Atsuko" Rena says with a whisper 
(Days later) 
Rena was resting in the same park...
Hello Rena chan! Jurina says happy
Rena opens her eyes "hi" she says while sits 
you don't seem happy Rena chan! Jurina says looking at Rena in the eyes 
Rena rised an eyebrow..
Rena chan you're blushing! Jurina says happy 
no,i'm not! Rena says blushing even more 
Jurina kissed Rena's cheek and run away
come back here you kid! Rena shouted and run after Jurina who was smiling 
Got'cha! Rena shouts,she catched Jurina and both rolled on the grass then Rena putted herself on top and started tickling Jurina 
sorry! sorry! Jurina says laughing 
i'm not going to stop! Rena says smiling 
{More days passed and the more close Rena is with Jurina the most far she's from Atsuko} 
Rena encourage herself to go follow Atsuko...
where the hell she's going? Rena thought 
Atsuko was walking to an old bar then she entered 
Rena got closer and looked through the window she could see how Atsuko goes downstairs..
Rera wanted to know more so she get in without anybody notice
~~~Inside~~~~
Hello Atsuko! Alexander says 
what is it? Atsuko asks 
well i wanted to know if you were okay! Alexander says smiling 
"you promised me.." Atsuko says 
promises huh? how can i do my promise,if you don't do yours? Alexander asks 
what do you mean? Atsuko asks 
you brought company! Alexander says and points to Rena who was hiding 
huh? Atsuko turned around 
two fallen angels grabbed Rena by her arms and dragged her to Alexander 
Rena what are you doing here? Atsuko asks 
what are you doing here? Rena asks mad 
well it seems like she wants to be our witness! Alexander says 
 what areyou talking about? Rena asks 
you'll see a full tranformation! Alexander says clapping and allthe sudden two fallen angels more grabbed Atsuko 
what are you doing to her? Rena shouted 
don't you wanted to be stronger Atsuko? Alexander says cupping Atsuko's cheek 
Atsuko kept in silence...
Atsuko do something! don't let this happen! Rena shouts while forces with other Fallen angels 
shut up! one of them says and beats Rena 
did you know that Atsuko don't want anyone to boss her around..that's why she wants to be stronger to not follow anyone..and well i'm in good mood so i'm going to make her dream come true! Alexander says while puts her hand on Atsuko's forhead
Atsuko started shouting in pain..
the Fallen angel tried to hold her tight but somehow she became stronger and end up sending them against the wall and then fainted..
Alexander smirked and made a sign to other angels to let Rena go..
what did you do to her? Rena asked while carries Atsuko bridal style
wait and see! Alexander answers smiling 
(~After~) 
Rena putted Atsuko on bed then she notices that Atsuko is burning up in fever 
what should i do? Rena thought scared 
Atsuko started to move side to side on bed like if something hurts 
Atsuko are you okay? Rena tried to wake her up but it didn't work Atsuko didn't open her eyes,she was sweating and rolling on bed 
"Atsuko!" Rena murmured and looks at her in pain
(what the hell just happened? why she's in this state? what he did to her?) 
all those questions where in Rena's head with no answer..
Rena took a deep breath and went to the kitchen to make coffee she knew that it will be a long night..
~~~~~~Next day~~~~~~~~~
Rena woke up and saw Atsuko still sleeping,she touched her and somehow the fever is gone.Rena thought about waking Atsuko but she didn't do it,she went to the park to relax a little it was a scary night 
Rena sitted on the grass and looked the view all the sudden she felt something on her cheek 
hello Rena chan! Jurina says happy 
why you always look so happy when you see me? Rena asked looking at Jurina who's hugging her 
you're my angel Rena chan! Jurina says 
angel!" that word coused Rena to shiver 
why you say that? Rena asked 
you said that you'll always protect me! Jurina answered smiling and clinging on Rena's arm
(Jurina in the last days had become someone special to Rena and she would do anything for her even thought she's always tsundere towards her) 
Rena got up..
where are you going Rena chan? Jurina asks 
tl visit someone! Rena answers 
i'll go with you! Jurina says and takes Rena's arm 
ok let's go! Rena says 
they walked to Rena's place and entered 
where's Atsuko? Rena said while looks eveyrwhere
Atsuko? Jurina repeated 
yes,my friend! Rena says while gets out to look for Atsuko outside 
wait up Rena chan! Jurina shouts and goes after her
Rena looked side to side..
Rena chan!" Jurina says catching her breath 
Looking for someone! Someone says
Rena turns around and sees a smiling Atsuko 
Atsuko you scared the hell out of me! Rena says while walks closer to her 
you don't need to worry,i'm ithe strongest! Atsuko says while looks her hands 
what are you talking about? Rena asks 
i'm talking about this! Atsuko says and puts herself in the middle of the street 
Atsuko move! Rena shouts and also Jurina 
A trailer is coming to Atsuko's direction..
Move Atsuko! Rena shouted and run to her 
DISAPPEAR! Atsuko shouts and punches the trailer making it to explote 
what the hell? Rena covered Jurina 
Atsuko was smiling 
so the rumours are true! Atsuko says disgusted 
what? no! Rena looks other way 
Rena i felt so disgusted by you.. how could you? Atsuko says 
but Atsuko "i just couldn't help it!" Rena says looking Jurina
you just couldn't help it! ha.."i can say people can't help it but we're angels!so now i have to clean up your mess!" Atsuko says  
what are you talking about? what are you going to do?Rena asks and puts Jurina behind her
one human life more or one human life less..is the same! Atsuko says smiling and getting closer 
don't you dare! Rena says looking at Atsuko 
what you're going to do about it sister? Atsuko asks
you can't.. YOU CAN'T! Rena shouts crying 
yes,i can! Atsuko says smiling and run to Rena and beats her seral times on her body 
Rena tried to defend herself but the difference was evident Rena was younger and somehow Atsuko got stronger in one night 
c'mon Rena give up and let me kill her! Atsuko says while keeps beating Rena 
take this! Atsuko punched Rena on her stomach and sent her a few steps away
Rena got up slowly "i won't you hurt her!" 
that's cute..then i'll kill you first and then to that pathetic human! Atsuko says pointing to Rena who started crying 
Atsuko kicked Rena who layed on the floor trying to catch her breath 
you just broke the law and you have to pay the consequences of your acts! Atsuko says and hits Rena's stomach while she's on the floor 
please leave her alone..she's just a kid..she hasn't done anything! Rena says bleeding 
i won't forgive you..you fell for that rat..we were best friends and you're leaving me because of her! Atsuko shouts kicking Rena and pointed to the girl who's scare watching this scene
Stop.. hitting Rena chan! The girl shouts and punches Atsuko on her cheek 
Atsuko looked at the girl "You miserable kid!" she clench her fist and beated the hell out of her 
No..Atsuko! Rena shouts while tries to get up 
don't you ever touch me again! Acchan says and keeps punching the girl.. till she was knock out 
now i feel better! Atsuko says while walks away but not before kick for last time to Rena..
easy job! Atsuko mutmured smiling till she heard a crazy laugh..
huh? Atsuko turned around and saw a Rena covered in blood and smiling "are you mad?"
Atsuko pouted 
Rena got closer to Atsuko 
now i know why they choose you a weak like you who turns into who they call it..Gekikara! Atsuko says and starts punching Rena who is smiling like crazy 
Atsuko rises an eyebrow 
now's Gekikara's turn..
she gave Atsuko several punches on her face while Atsuko was on the floor Gekikara took a wood and hitted Acchan with it over and over again till someone stopped her 
Atsuko let's go! someone else says and takes her away from the crazy girl 
Gekikara threw the wood and walked to Jurina's direction,she knealed.."Jurina!" she murmured and kissed the younger girl in her forhead then carried her..
~hours later~
where i am? Atsuko? Jurina! Rena woke up and look around then she got up "ouch!" 
hey be careful..you're pretty mess up! a girl says 
Jurina! where's Jurina? Rena asked crying 
i don't know who's Jurina! The girl who seem a boy answers smiling 
Btw! I'm Sae chan! she says smiling 
Rena got up and leaned on the wall "i need to find Jurina!" 
no you need to calm down! Sae says and pushes Rena to bed..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Present~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This girl is important we need to keep an eye on her so you better listen! Alexander says to everyone while shows a picture of the girl
Black was barely listening 
is a school girl! Hideki says 
what should we do? Another fallen angel asks 
what do you us to put uniforms to look at her closer and maybe become friends with her
yes! That's what i'm talking about! Alexander says
what?!? everyone in the room says 
but..hmmm the only one with a baby face is Black and i don't think she's going to like going to school you know Her master! Hideki says smiling 
(everyone looks at Black)
there's no way i'm going to do that " i hate humans so leave me alone!" Black says while walks away 
a shadow appears in front of Black and gives her the picture "Nothing better come your head!" she says while keeps walking 
get ready to school! Alexander says smiling
i don't think she'll go! Hideki says 
she will! Alexander says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~At school~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The bell ringed time to go in! 
Mayu sighed and then sitted "she couldn't stop thinking about black and how to get her back?"
hello Mayu chan! Jurina says and sits next to her 
Black was looking from other building in front of the school 
somehow Mayu fell that someone was looking at her she turned her head and saw the person who steal her thoughts 
"Yuki!" Mayu murmured and kept looking at her 
you're waearing an uniform..are you planning..? Mayu thought 
Miss Watanbe there's something more interesting that my class outside? 
huh..no! Mayu answers nervous
the teacher turned around and went to the board to write something 
Mayu turned to look Yuki again but she was gone! 
the class with the science teacher ended..she left and Yuki took that as an opportunity and got in the classroom..
Yuki chan! Ikki says happy 
(Mayu was speechless)
Yuki ignore him and kept walking,She looked at Jurina that was sitting on her spot 
so you're the temoeramental one! Jurina says smiling while offers her hand to Yuki,Black took Jurina's hand and squeezed it very hard..
Mayu noticed it and separate them..
Yuki looked at Mayu but then sitted apart from everyone..
(Mayu couldn't help to stare Yuki..the whole day)
Jurina notices it..
(Lunch time came) Black disspaeared,Mayu look for her all her lunch time and Jurina spended her lunch time looking for Mayu 
the day ended soon and somehow there was nobody in the classroon except for Jurina and Mayu 
what a day? that Kashiwagi girl is crazy! Jurina said
don't say those things you don't knkw her! Mayu says mad while walks away
i'm sorry Mayu chan! Jurina says and kissed Mayu's cheek cousing her to blush 
all the sudden the windows's glasses exploded at the same time..Jurina covered Mayu
when Mayu and Jurina opened their eyes they saw Black standing 
i'll kill you! Black said 
Mayu run! Jurina said and pulled her by her hand and run as fast as they could while black was destroying everything around 
they hide in other classroom but somehow Black found them 
Black took Mayu by her shirt 
Yuki!" Mahu said in tears 
leave her alone! Jurina shouted and punched Black
Black took Jurina and smashed her against the window glass of that classroom 
"Jurina!" Mayu shouted and help her to get up 
so you're not strong now Jurina! Black says smiling 
and takes Mayu by her arm and smashed her against the wall first you and she later! Black says while puts her hand as a knife ready to rip Jurina's heart out 
Die! Black shouts 
(somone grabbed her strong hand)
Geki! Jurina says
are you mad? Gekikara asks smiking and kicks Black's stomach 
Jurina crawls to Mayu..
Black punched Gekikara's face and Gekikara punched her on her stomach again 
both started to fight so fast..
Jurina was impress but she feels that she's been in a fight like that before 
i'm going to disappear you! Black says and punches several times Gekikara's stomach 
Gekikara!" Jurina shouted 
Gekikara Dodges Blacks next punches and starts fighting back again 
c'mon Geki you're stronger! Jurina murmures while Mayu was staring at her 
left,right,left,right! Jurina says smiling while sees that Geki is kicking Black's butt 
Let's finish her! Jurina shouts in excitement 
no!" Mayu shouts and gets in the middle to not let Gekikara beat Yuki anymore 
Gekikara got distracted because of Mayu and Bkack took that as an opportunity and appered behind Gekikara then took her arms ready to break them 
Yuki stop! Mayu shouts and slaps Yuki...
wow superbitchslap! Jurina says 
Black let go Gekikara's arms and putted one hand on her burning cheek then she looked at Mayu in the eyes with a face saying WTF? 
Mayu could see that Yuki was struggling with somthing
Yuki gave a step back and left..
what was that all about? Jurina thought 
Yuki!" Mayu murmures sad and tears showed up
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 06, 2012, 03:11:45 PM
Arg! I hate that Alexander guy!!! :angry:
Acchan.. :cry:
OMG!! Acchan?!! She's trying to kill Jurina!! :shocked
No!!
Black!! I wonder if she's pissed because Jurina kiss Mayu on the cheek XD

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
I hope Yuki will return to normal soon.. :(
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
Post by: Sok on January 06, 2012, 06:23:39 PM
Damn what's up with this Alexander guy?
First it's Acchan and now it's Jurina.
Why does he want Jurina?
Black got jealous cuz Jurina kissed Mayu's cheek.
The fight between Gekikara and Black was nice, it's funny how excited Jurina was about Geki winning. Too bad Mayu got in between and stopped it.
Thanks for the update.
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
Post by: kahem on January 06, 2012, 11:58:17 PM
OMG what a great fight!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 12.B (AtsuMina) (WMatsui) 06/01
Post by: RenaChii on January 07, 2012, 06:48:57 AM
LET ME KILL THAT ALEXANDER!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_evil.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
Post by: cmze on January 10, 2012, 05:50:00 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                           13

Gekikara you're really bad hurt,we should go to Mayu's home is closer! Jurina says while helps Gekikara to walk 
i never thought she will be that strong is she stronger than..? Gekikara says
what do you mean? Mayu asks
what's going on? why that crazy girl wanted to kill me? i haven't done anything to her and why everyone is good at fighting here! Jurina says while walks 
"Yuki!" Mayu murmured sad then notice "Gekikra protecting Jurina! what's that mean?" 
Mayu chan you said your homw is close..please let hurry up Gekikara is not okay! Jurina says worried 
okay! Mayu says 
~~~~Home~~~~~~
Eiji was reading medicine books to help Acchan..
"Tomochin was cheering up Chiyuu who was sad beacuse she thinks this is all her fault"
Nyan Nyan was worried about Yuko who is not home yet while Takamina is sitting next to Acchan watching her while she sleeps..
Knock! knock! 
Nyan Nyan opens the door..
hi Mayu chan AHHH! Nyan Nyan shouts beacuse she saw Gekikara 
what happened? Eiji shouts while runs to where Nyan Nyan is.."what the hell? Eiji shouted
hey..she helped me! Mayu says calmed 
but she hates Acchan maybe she's here because she wants to kill her! Nyan Nyan says afraid 
who's Acchan? and no Gekikara would never do that to anyone! Jurnina says 
what happened to you? Nyan Nyan asks to Mayu 
Black! Mayu answers 
everyone heard that name and felt shivers "the pictures of Black killing those fallen angels came to their minds!" 
She save me! Mayu says 
Nyan Nyan and Eiji let her pass
everyone in the room were surprised 
"Ge-ki-ki-kara!"Chiyuu says stuttering
i'll go get the medical kit! Mayu says while sit Jurina and Gekikara in the living room
guys keep it down! You're going to wake up Acchan..it was hard to fall sleep for her! Takamina says while closes the door of Acchan's room then she notices Gekikara
Hi! Gekikara says smiling 
what? how the hell? i'm not going to let you touch Acchan! Takamina pulled out her sword and pointed to Gekikara who only was smiling 
no, Takamina she's our friend! Mayu says 
i don't care! Takamina answers  ready to fight
"Rena!" A low voice says 
Acchan! Takamina says and looks back ..she looks back and sees Acchan leaning on the door barely standing up watching the whole situation 
"Rena!" what a cute name! Jurina says smiling
Gekikara blushed but then got up and walked closer to Acchan 
i'm not going to let you pass! Takamina says 
can we talk alone? Acchan says smiling
"no!" everyone says 
it's okay! Acchan says looking everyone 
is that what you want! Mayu says while takes Jurina with her
well i have to go home! Eiji says 
i have something to do! Tomochin says and drags Chiyuu with her 
Takamina was standing anyway
Takamina you have to go too! Acchan says 
"but.." Takamina replies 
"no buts! go" Acchan says 
c'mon Takamina we need some fresh air! Nyan Nyan says while pushes Takamina who passes next to Gekikara and gives her a glare 
Cute midget! Gekikara says smiling
i know! Acchan replies 
so she did this to you and i thought there wasn't anyone more heartless than you! Gekikra says 
i thought so too..but things had changed,I'm glad to know she's alive! Acchan replies smiling 
i always thought she was dead! Gekikara says looking other way 
how could you? you were the one who saved her!Acchan says serious 
i didn't know she was alive! Gekikara answers 
you saved her and carried her to a hospital! Acchan answers while tries to get closer to Rena 
you really look bad that Black girl knows how to fight right? Gekikara asks
i wonder if there any way to get her back? Acchan asks while sits next to Gekikara
you got back..so that means she can get back is she wants! Rena says looking at Acchan 
i'm sorry Rena..i don't know what happened to me i have no excuse for what i did to you! Acchan says in tears and then hugs Rena 
Rena breaks the hug and gets up "there's only one thing in my mind now..my revenge can wait besides seeing you this way is enough for now!" 
i know what's on your mind and i want the same thing, we got to keep them safe,we need to work together! Acchan says
we'll work together but when this is over,i will get my revenge! Gekikara says while leaves 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~somewhere else~~~~~~~~~~~~
Walking down the street..how could she? stupid human..why i didn't kill you? Black thinks while walks and brushes her cheek 
"Black!" Someone says 
huh? Black turns around 
Alexander wants to talk to you! Hideki says smiling 
and i don't want to! Black says whilw keeps walking 
"then!" Hideki says and snaps his fingers:two fallen angels appeared and took Black by her arms 
i said i'm not in the mood! Black shouts and punch one fallen angel on his face sending him a few steps away then she proceed to take the other fallen angel by his shirt "you can run or die!" she says ready to break his neck 
Hideki smirked and vanished..
i run! i run! The fallen angel shouts crying 
Black was about to kill him but something inside of her made her let him go..
The fallen angel run away while the other was still on the floor 
why did i let him go? Black thought while looks to her hands confused 
nice fight! a girl voice says 
Black looked up and saw a girl standing well not a girl he/she looked like a boy 
it's nice to see strong ones by the way i'm Sae Miyazawa! The girl appeared behind Black who turned around to face her 
Sae extended her hand but Black ignored it and kept walking 
it seems like you don't like you talk! Sae says while follows her 
Black kept walking without saying a word and not even loooking at her 
i don't let anyone ignore me like this..you're lucky you're hot! Sae says pouting and keeps following her
Black stopped walking and turned around to punch Sae but Sae dodge it..
that was nice! Sae says smiling 
Black was irritated
Let's go Alexander is waiting for us! Sae says and starts walking 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Far away~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I gotta bring her back! A determinated Yuko says 
It seems like Black gives you motivation! Mariko says while sees Yuko focusing 
i'm going to bring her back! Yuko answers and keeps training 
as you know it's not that easy he's got fully control of her..and try to separate that energy from her might kill you! Mariko explains to Yuko 
i don't care! Yuko replies 
good! Mariko says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Walking home~~~~~~~~~~~~
You see it was a nice idea buying some ice cream..i wonder if everyone was right if  this is your favorite ice cream shop? Jurina asks pouting
yes! Mayu answers with a sad tone 
Mayu chan can i ask you something?"Jurina asks
 yes,Jurina! Mayu answers 
Kashiwagi san was very important for you? Jurina asks while looks at her with a smile
yes,is very important to me! Mayu answers
Jurina smile faded "sorry!" 
(Mayu sighed)
(in the street in feont of Jurina and Mayu with out they notice!) 
why you took this way Black? is not cool so many lights? Sae asks 
shut up! Black says but can help to look at the two girls that were in the opposite street 
pretty girls there too! Sae says while puts her arm around  Black's neck and looks at the girls 
shut up! Black says and removes the arm and keeps walking ignoring Sae 
hey wait up for me! Sae says and goes after her
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Acchan you shouldn't be up! where's Gekikara? did she do something to you? Takamina asks 
Takamina is okay!" Acchan say with a smile 
not it's not..you're with fever! Takamina says with her hand on Acchan's forhead 
(Acchan is blushing)
"Takamina i.." Acchan says 
ssshhh don't says anything..you need to rest! Takamina says with her fingers on Acchan's lips
Acchan's took  Takamina's hand and said "Thanks!" and then fell sleep..
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 10, 2012, 11:31:18 AM
Yatta! Update! XD
Takamina so protective LOL :wub:
 :( I hope Yuki can be back soon with Mayu again.. :cry:
Sae?!!! I hope she won't break Mayuki..
A blushing Acchan is cute~~ :heart:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
Post by: RenaChii on January 10, 2012, 01:05:01 PM
Hurry Yuki~ you must be together with Mayu again! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_blowhorn.gif)

You need each other!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_cry.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
Post by: Sydney W on January 11, 2012, 02:47:28 PM
I need to know the next update....
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 13. 09/01
Post by: kahem on January 15, 2012, 09:00:17 PM
Blacky is jealous~
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
Post by: cmze on January 21, 2012, 11:29:32 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                           14

You shouldn't go to school Mayu chan! Nyan Nyan says while sets the table for breakfast 
if she wants to kill me she would do it anytime or anyplace! Mayu replies looking other way 
good morning! A happy Takamina says 
you seem really happy why? Nyan Nyan asks sad
well Acchan is recovering fast but have you heard from Yuko? Takamina asks 
nope she didn't come to sleep! Nyan Nyan says sad and looking other way 
everyone looks down..
(Eiji,Chiyuu,Tomochin,Mayu,Takamina,Nyan Nyan)
(everything is going to be fine!)
everyone turns around..
Acchan you shouldn't be up! Takamian says 
hahaha don't worry i'm fine! Acchan says with a smile
wow you look way better Acchan! Everyone say
hello Gekikara! Acchan says 
huh? everyone sees Gekikara next to Acchan
how did she get in? Takamina says scared
she's fast and she likes windows! Acchan replies with a smile 
(Door bell) 
i'll go get that! Eiji says while walks to open the door
hi! Jurina says 
hi come in please! Eiji says 
so how we going to get back Yuki? Chiyuu asks (still feeling guilty)
Tomochin takes Chiyu's hand and gives it a little squeeze 
well fallen angels are stupid! Gekikara says
 Gekikara you're so fast you got here before me! Jurina says excited and looking at Geki like a fan which coused Gekikara to blush 
stupid? Eiji says 
yeah they are so full of hate that they don't think at all they just want to rid of it! Gekikara replies avoiding Jurina's look 
yes,when i was under it..i couldn't control myself i just wanted to destroy everything around me..like something inside of me was burning! Acchan said 
how did you get rid of it? Eiji asks 
it took me years to control it..but it was love as cliche it sounds it was love! Acchan says serious
(everyone looks at Mayu)
that means that there's hope! Mayu thought and got up "i havd to go to school!" she says while walks to the door 
wait up Mayu chan! Jurina says and goes after her..
i don't think is going to be easy to bring her back! Gekikara says looking through the window to Jurina and Mayu
no,it won't! Acchan says smiling 
i have to go they're dissapearing! Gekikara says 
don't worry go! Acchan says 
what's that mean? Takamina asks 
she has hee stuff to do! Acchan says smiling 
everyone was looking Acchan..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Somewhere else~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Time to go to school! Hideki says smiling 
shut up! Black says 
and remember that you can't kill Jurina! Hideki says
if she makes me mad i'll cut her head! Black replies
you're scary! Sae says 
who asked your opinion? Black asks
okay i'll shut up! Sae says pouting 
she's moody good luck Sae! Hideki says 
~Flashback~
You tried to kill Jurina! Alexander says irritated
Bkack was quiet not saying a word 
how dare you? Alexander asks
she made mad so i wanted her dead! Yuki replies
okay,okay listen to me because if you get to hurt Jurina again i'll destroy you! Alexander says serious
yes,sir then you shouldn't send me to school! Black shouts while walks closer to Alexander but then two fallen angels got on her way 
gst off my way! Black says and then cuts one the head of one of them 
the other fallen angel was scared and gave a step back.Hideki took the body and the head..
Alexander putted her hand on his forhead then sighed
"what am i going to do with you Black?" 
what's so speacil about Jurina?Black asked
not of your business! Alexander says
 Well you have to put her on the edge then she will show you what you want to see! Black says with a smirk while walks away 
why you let her do this? Hideki asks pouting while looks at the head of his dead partner
i like to spoil my kids once in a while and i want to know what's on Black's head! Alexander says smirking then claps
~End of the flashback~
i gotta go! Black says while leaves..
~~~~~~~~~~~~\~\~\\~\~\~\~\\~|~\,\\~\~~\<\~\~\~\~\~
Chiyuu is not your fault don't feel guilty! Tomochin says and takes Chiyuu's hand 
you heard what Acchan and Gekikara said..i should be her she's suffering because of me..she had no choice! Chiyuj says 
hey! Tomochin says while rubs Chiyuu's back 
this is mu fault! Chiyuu says 
hey if you get this you're not going to get anything..what you gotta do is look a way to help her with others! Tomochin says smiling 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~At school~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki sitted next to Mayu but totally ignore her and Jurina...
the day passed fast and in a blink of an eye was luch time..
Mayu disappeared and went to terrace of the school building to have some quality time alone but she didn't notice that she wasn't so alone Black was behind her ..
Mayu turned around and saw Black looking at her
what do you want? Mayu asked but then notice that Black's look is different it's not the one full of hate instead was a confused one 
"Yuki!" Mayu said and tried to touch Black but this gave a step back 
"i won't hurt you!" Mayu says offering her hand 
Black covered her ears..
are you okay? Mayu asks and tried to touch Black but Black slapped her hand "Stay away from me!" She mumured and left..leaving a confused Mayu..
so there's your heart Black! Gekikara murmured
(Gekikara was on a tree looking the whole situation) 
nobody told you that it's not cool..observing other people! someone said behind Gekikara 
Gekikara turned around "Gakuran!" she said and then dodge a punch 
what the hell? Gakuran said beacuse she fail 
i don't want to fight you! Gekikara said and then turned around 
what's wrong withthe peopke around here? are you a relative of Black? Gakuran asked 
is just that you're not worth it! Gekikara replied 
what did you say? Gakuran asks mad then runs to Gekikara and throw several punches 
Gekikara turned around and dodged them all 
weak! Gekikara said 
Gakuran was mad "you think you're better..i'll show how wrong you are!" she shouted and threw more punches to Gekijara but this time didn't fail
after a moment Gekikara took Gakuran fists and said "i won't let you get close to her..i'm here to protect her!" 
she belongs with person like us is in her DNA..is just a mtter of time! Gakuran says smiling 
shut up..she's not like you! Gekikara shouts and starts punching the hell out of Gakuran 
i won't you touch her,being around her..i kill everyone that i have to she won't become one of you..i won't let her become one of you! Gekikara shouts while kicks Gakuran 
it's destiny! Gakuran says 
i don't believe that bullshit! Gekikara says 
Gekikara stop! Someone shouts 
Gekikara turns around to look the owner of the voice 
who running to her 
look who's coming! Gakuran says smirking 
Gekikara what's going on? Jurina asks 
hello Jurina chan! Gakuran says while gets up 
who are you? Jurina asks 
a friend of your..Forget it my bad! Gakuran says while walks away
Gekikara are you okay? Jurina asks because she saw Gekikara's lip which it's bleeding 
i'm fine! Gekikara answers 
let's get you some ice! Jurina says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~~~~~~~~~~~~~
focus mors Yuko! Mariko shouts 
how can i when i haven't eat in. a day! Yuko says 
well that means that you don't want this and that i'm wasting my time! Mariko says 
shut up i  know what i'm doing! Yuko replies while still tries to focus 
don't make me waste my time! Mariko says 
i want this..i want this! Yuko shouts 
impressive..determinate now i knkw why they choose you! Mariko thought then smiled
i will bring you back! Yuko thought still trying to focus and channel her energy..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~\~\\~\~~\~\~\~\~\,\~~~~~~~~~~~
what happened to you?Hideki asked 
this..  nothing! Gakuran answered 
doesn't mean nothing! Hideki said 
i went to see Jurina chan! Gakuran said 
how was it? Hideki asked 
well she's well protected by Gekikara! Gakuran answered smiling and brushing her cheek 
that's why Gekikara need to dissapear! Hideki says 
Jurina is bigger from the last time i saw her,she was like 13 right? Gakuran says 
we should ask Black to kill Gekikara! Hideki says smiling while sees his nails 
i don't think she would do that! Gakuran says 
why? she an angel of death! Hideki says 
well she didn't look like that today actually she looked like a lost puppy in front of this small cute girl! Sae says smiling 
that girl is bothering our Black...huh? Hideki says
who is she? Gakuran asks 
well she was the one she loved before turning..she offered her life because she didn't wanted to Alexande to kill her..so that's why she turned into a fallen angel! Hideki says 
that's so disgusting..i'll guess is up to us! Gakuran says smiling
this is gonna be fun! Hideki says smiling
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
Post by: haruhi16 on January 21, 2012, 02:07:31 PM
yuko...yuko...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
Post by: RenaChii on January 21, 2012, 10:22:14 PM
                               
Mayu turned around and saw Black looking at her
what do you want? Mayu asked but then notice that Black's look is different it's not the one full of hate instead was a confused one
"Yuki!" Mayu said and tried to touch Black but this gave a step back
"i won't hurt you!" Mayu says offering her hand
Black covered her ears..
are you okay? Mayu asks and tried to touch Black but Black slapped her hand "Stay away from me!" She mumured and left..leaving a confused Mayu..


I don't know why but I LOVE this scene~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_inluv.GIF)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 14. 21/01
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on January 22, 2012, 01:06:47 PM
 :twothumbs oh a very good fan fic I hope you update soon because the story reallly excites me!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
Post by: cmze on January 27, 2012, 10:15:52 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                         15. Nyan Nyan's Feelings

(It's been a week since everyone last saw Yuko and one week since the last time Mayu felt real Yuki..)

*Nyan Nyan woke up with this itching...
Where are you? why you haven't call? don't you miss me? beacuse i do...I need to find you!*
Good morning! everyone says to Nyan Nyan 
for everyone i mean all the gang (Gekikara,Jurina,Mayu,Takamina,Acchan,Tomochin, Chiyuu,Eiji)
Nyan Nyan sighed "even though it was lame she had the hope that Yuko mighy be here today!" 
-Miichan is on vacation with her family-
Nyan Nyan went to the Kitchen and saw her breakfast 
everhone looked at her but nobody dare to talk..they knew that this new Nyan Nyan was because Yuko's absence..She ended fast her breakfast and went upstairs to change her clothes..
Poor Nyan Nyan! Chiyuu says 
yes,it must terrible loosing someone you care! Tomochin says 
(everyone looks at Mayu)
huh? I'm okay! Mayu says nervous (she doesn't really care,beacuse nobody knows about her last time with Yuki at school) 
*Flashback* Second part of the terrace moment! 
Yuki wait up! Mayu says running after her 
she run as fast as she could but the stairs doesn't make it any easier..
Yuki keeps runing downstairs.. Mayu somehow lose balance she was about to fall but Yuki's hand grabbed her just in time,Yuki was so nervous and blushing  that she lose balance and both end up falling..When Yuki opened her eyes she saw  that Mayu was on top of her with her ear on her chest hearing her heartbeat and hugging her...
Yuki's sweet look changed...get off me!" she shouted and pushed Mayu then she run away
Yuki!"Mayu murmures..
"End of the flashback!"
don't worry evefything is going to be fine! Acchan says smiling to everyone 
Gekikara looked at Acchan and then smiled (Gekikara is haply to know that Acchan has change)
Nyan Nyan changed her clothes and went to work without saying goodbye to anyone..
we should go to school today is aquarium day!Mayu says pulling Jurina with her 
ahh..i don't want to! Jurina says complaining while gets up..
it's gonna be fun! Mayu says 
both girls closee the door and left to school..
you think she will change? Gekikara asks sad looking at the door 
Jurina is a good girl..i don't believe It! Takamina says with a smile 
Gakuran said that it's on her DNA! Gekikara says sad
then we have to wait and see! Acchan says with a smile looking at Gekikara 
Eiji was looking to his laptop "i can'tfind anything about Jurina's past..no mother,no dad,no siblings!" 
the only that i can do then is look for the "grandmother!"Gekikara says 
grandmother? Jurina has a family? Acchan asks 
well not exactly..is was an old lady who took care of her when she was younger before you..Gekikara says looking other way 
then let's go find the granny! Takamina shouts smiling with a pose to smooth the tension 
*everyone looks at Takamina*
ackward! Chiyuu says 
(where is Yuko? she was better with this things) Takamina thought still froze on her pose 
okay let's go! Acchan says smiling..(she can't believe how dork Takamina can be..but it was adorable 4 her)
,~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<~~~~~<<<<<<<~~~~~~~
Nyan Nyan was walking to her office but she couldn't helo to see the chocolates store where she always bought Yuko's chocolates..
Nyan Nyan sighed and kept walking not denying the fact that she misses her little squirrel..A LOT..but what are those feelings? she knows that the little squirrel is a pervert.. that she's is an old man trapped on the young girl's body but still.. she was the most adorable, sensitive..person? no,Nyan Nyan knew that her squirrel wasn't human at all..but who cares? if she's monkey,a dude she doesn't really care..the only thing that runs in Nyan Nyan's head is that she wants to be next to her pervert squirrel..for some sort of "indefinite time"
Nyan Nyan didn't notice but she was already signing some papers on her desk..
how am i got here? Nyan Nyan thought,she was only thinking about her squirrel and she's already working
she looked through her window looking for something that help her to get her thoughts away from Yuko..
something got her attention..a girl
these girl was short her hair was brown with a terrible taste of clothes..
could it be?" Nyan Nyan murmured and run outside the building..
Nyan Nyan moved her head side to side looking for the girl but there was a lot people so if she doesn't hurry she might loose her..
Nyan Nyan got on top of a tree..
*people around thought she was crazy.*
got'cha! Nyan Nyan said and got off the tree and run after the girl...
she grabbed her shoulder and made her turn around 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says trying to catch her breath 
excuse me! The girl says and pushes Nyan Nyan to the floor and goes away mad 
(Nyan Nyan was sad looking down..now she lost every hope to find her)
Nyan Nyan..Are you okay? someone says from behind and helps her to get up 
Nyan Nyan looks at the person and pouts to not cry
once Nyan Nyan is up she slaps Yuko
Yuko puts her hand on her cheek..
why you didn't call? i was worried about you? Nyan Nyan shouts mad and crying 
sorry!" Yuko says sad and brushing her cheek she can see and feel Nyan Nyan's pain 
Nyan Nyan relized what she just did.."i just hurt the person i love the most!" She thought 
Yuko..i'm sorry!" Nyan Nyan says and hugs Yuko 
it's fine! Yuko says while breaks the hug 
No it's not! Nyan Nyan says and puts her hand on Yuko's red cheek 
let me make it up to you! Nyan Nyan says 
it's not necessary! Yuko says 
before everything happen you said you wanted to go to the aquarium..let me take you there! Nyan Nyan says and takes Yuko's hand and drags her there
~~,~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(At school)
who's ready for the aquarium day! The teacher asks
everyone shouts "me!"
suddenly the door opens ...
good morning!" Black says smiling 
come in! the teacher says 
Black sits next to Mayu as usual..
Mayu could see that the person next to her is Black not Yuki so she knew this day is not going to be fun..

TO BE CONTINUED ...will be Yuko able to bring Yuki back? that's what the next chapter is going to be about hope you don't hate it or me! 

swear that i saw a Kahem's comment about Jurina..hmmm what happened to it? i didn't erase it i guess it happened the day when this page went crzy! 
hope you comment again i like when you guys guess and it give me great ideas!! 
THANK FOR THE COMMENTS! <3
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
Post by: RenaChii on January 27, 2012, 11:04:44 PM
I'm so excited about the aquarium day~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/nya.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
Post by: Haruko on January 28, 2012, 04:21:08 AM
wow the slap!! :D
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
Post by: haruhi16 on January 28, 2012, 05:13:05 AM
Yay! Yuko is back!! <3333
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 28, 2012, 07:51:43 AM
Yeaa!! Thanks for the Update :D
 :w00t: Woah! The slap.. I like it XD
Yuko!! Gambatte!! Turn Black back to YukI!!!  :grin:

Thanks again for the Update :twothumbs
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 15.Nyan Nyan's Feelings.. 27/01
Post by: kahem on January 29, 2012, 02:59:58 AM
Hum it's because of other day backup I think lol
But I still think that Jurina could be Alexander's daughter
Ouch poor Yuko taking a slap without doing perv thing rofl
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
Post by: cmze on February 04, 2012, 04:42:44 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 16.Get you back

Everybody get ready please! the teacher says
Mayu chan everything is going to be fine! Jurina says smiling with her hand on Mayu's shoulder! 
Mayu just nodded..
(At home)
Acchan what are you doing? you need to rest! Takamina says worried while sees that Acchan is standing up 
hey don't worry i'm fine! Acchan says smirking 
you need to lay down! Takamina says and grabs Acchan to put her on bed 
it's boring..please let's take a walk! Acchan says loooking at Takamina with pleading eyes 
"okay.." a not so sure Takamina says 
They walked a bit till they reached for a park...
Acchan went straight to the flowers like a five year old kid.."Look Takamina! these flowers are so pretty!" she said smiling 
Takamina walked to Acchan's direction and sat behind her 
Acchan looked Takamina who has a concern look on her face "you know..you don't need to be worried about me all the time!"  Acchan said with some flowers on her hand..
"it's just..IT'S JUST THAT YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT YOURSELF..I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU!Takamina shouted and then breathed 
here..for you! Acchan says smirking and offering the flowers to Takamina who blushed 
i love you Minami! Acchan says 
(Takamina blushed even more unable to speak!!!) 
Acchan smirked and kissed Takamina on her cheek
why...?!? why you make me fall for you just this way..so easy for you to get me? Takamina murmured looking the flowers on her hand 
"Minami you'll never going to lose me!" those words brought Takamina back to reality 
but.." Takamina was about to says something but some lips were already on hers...
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~
Look Yuko to that shark! Nyan Nyan says pointing 
Yuko looked to the shark but she wasn't really paying attention,she didn't really care..
do you want some ice cream? Nyan Nyan asked 
mmm i'm okay! Yuko replies 
so two icereams then it's! Nyan Nyan says and goes to buy ice cream..
i didn't say that i wanted one! Yuko murmured 
Nyan Nyan used it as an excuse to go away for a bit..she knew that this new Yuko is hurting her..
Yuko changed!" She murmured to herself then sighed
Nyan Nyan!" Yuko says trying to catch her breath..
what's wrong? Nyan Nyan asks 
you need to go! Yuko says taking deep breaths 
what?!? no! why? Nyan Nyan asks
YOU NEED TO GO NOW! Yuko shouts and looks at Nyan Nyan with another look 
"no!" Nyan Nyan says 
Yuko is forcing with Nyan Nyan 
well..well what we have here! Black says clapping 
Yuko turns around 
and i thought this morning would be boring! Black says while walks closer
Nyan Nyan go! Yuko says serious 
Nyan Nyan gave a step back but then run away once she saw Black intentions 
let's play Squirrel! Black says and then runs to Yuko
with her fist armed..
(Yuko dodged the Black's fist) 
Black ends up beating the fire alarm which starts ringing..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
everyone please don't panic! The teacher says 
Mayu looks around but she can't find Black "could it be..." she thought 
Mayu chan let's get out of here! Jurina says and takes Mayu's hand and starts guiding her to the exit 
no wait..we need to find her! Mayu says
who? Jurina asks but then one name crossed her mind,Jurina let go Mayu's hand and looks other way 
"please!" Mayu says 
"okay let's go!" Jurina says looking other way 
~~~~~~~~~~~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~\~~~~~~~~~~
Take this rat! Black says and kicks Yuko's stomach 
and then grabs her and throws her agains the glass
i think that shark is hungry! Black says smirking 
shut up! Yuko says while gets up 
look at you..you're so pathetic,thinking that you can beat me! Black says smirking 
shut up! Yuko shouts and tries to punch her but Black was faster and grabbed her then whispered in her ear "do you want to know a little secret?.."
(Yuko was trying to remove Black's arm that was around her neck) 
i was fully aware of what i did to Acchan!" Black whispered with a smirk
Yuko got angry and beated Black in her stomach "you.. how could you?!Yuko shouts while Black is on the floor 
i don't know but fortunately you won't get out alive! Black says smirking and grabs Yuko...
"Die!" Black shouts and was about to rip her heart out but someone stopped her by beating her with a tube on her back 
Yuko are you okay?!" Nyan Nyan asks while help her to get up 
Black gets up mad and was about to attack Nyan Nyan but Mayu and Jurina got on her way 
Black stop!" Mayu shouts 
Let go off me!" Black shouts and hit Jurina with her head and then smashes Mayu against the wall 
Yuko pushes Black away "Nyan Nyan take Mayu and Jurina and go away!" she says then proceeds to punch Black on her face 
Nyan Nyan takes Jurina and Mayu and then hide..
Now i'm really mad! Black says while gets up and cleans with her fist the blood on her lip..then in a blink of an eye she was in front of Yuko..
scared? Black says then gives her several punches on her body
Yuko was on the floor trying to get up 
weak,weak,weak! Black says and kicks Yuko 
you're boring maybe i should go after them! Black says and points to where Nyan Nyan,Mayu and Jurina where hiding
no,i'm okay! Yuko says and grabs Black's ankle
c'mon Yuko! Mariko murmured while watches the fight from other spot 
Black moved her feet and then went walking to the girls.."girls,c'mon i'm bore..i just want to play!" 
Nyan Nyan tries to hit Black with the tube but Black grabbed it and threw it aside 
so scary with that tube! Black says with a smirk 
Jurina protect Mayu!" Nyan Nyan said 
Jurina looked at Mayu who was laying on the floor (because she fainted cause she lost a lot blood)
you should worry about yourself! Black says and then
puts her hand on Nyan Nyan's neck and starts sqeezing it..
Nyan Nyan!" Yuko on the floor murmures and tries to move.."i need to save her..I NEED TO SAVE HER!" Yuko shouts and then runs to Black  
Black smirks and let go Nyan Nyan.."That's what i'm talking about!" Black said 
Yuko punches Black several times and jumps and uses her feet to beat Black who was covering with her arms crossed 
(Nyan Nyan got back to Jurina and Mayu)
Yuko wasn't kicking Black anymore "where did she go?!" Black murmured but then she felt a pain she looked down and saw Yuko who has her fist on her stomach..
"you little.." Black spitted blood 
Yuko kept punching Black
you don't care about killing anyone! Yuko shouts while keeps punching Black 
you hurt Mayu chan,Acchan and now NYAN NYAN! i WON'T FORGIVE YOU! Yuko says and keeps punching till the point that one punch send Black against the glass and that end that cutting her all over her body 
C'mon Yuko now is the time! Mariko shouted 
but still..i want to save you! Yuko mumured then putted her hand on Black's head 
Aaaaaaahhhhhh! Black shouts in pain 
Mayu woke up couse she heard the screaming..
what's she doing to her? Mayu gets up but Mariko gets on her way "Don't worry she's helping her!" 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan murmured 
Yuki!" Mayu whispered 
Jurina noticed it and looked other way 
Yuko and Black shouts "AHHHHHHHHH!" 
(Black was feeling pain couse the new energy running through her body and Yuko because she was losing energy)
not so fast! Someone says and kicks Yuko on her face and interrups them 
what?!? everyone says 
Black..are you okay? She asked but then notice that Black is unconscious
Look what you've done to her damn humans! she shouted mad
calm down Gakuran! Hideki says 
Gekuran grabs Black and carry her 
i will destroy you but feel lucky now i have somethings to do! Gakuran says while walks away and carries Black 
Hideki follows her...
Nyan Nyan went to Yuko and helped her because she was also unconscious
Jurina looked at Mayu..
Mayu was between mad and sad "she thought that she would have Yuki back!" 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~<~~~~~
what happened to you? Takamina asked worried
Black!" Nyan Nyan answered
Acchan face turned to a serious one when she saw Yuko who was still unconscious on the sofa..
where's Mayu? Acchan asked 
she said that she wanted to buy some anime! Jurina answered 
where was Gekikara today!" Jurina thought while sees 
her uniform 
~~~~~~~~~~~Gekikara's location~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(doorbell ringing) (door opening)
hello! an old lady says 
hello! Gekikara says 
do i know you? An old lady asks 
no,you don't but Maybe you could help me to know more about someone called Matsui Jurina! Gekikara replies 
the old woman shivers "no! Go away!" The older woman replies and closes the door on her face
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Mayu's location~~~~~~~~~~~~
i thought..i thought you'll be back! Mayu thought then threw a little rock down..
she was watching the cars pass because she was on
footbridge..
"what if...without you..i miss you,get back" Mayu's tears came out 
(Mayu didn't notice but someone was behind her) 
"don't think about it..."someone said and then hugged Mayu from behind 
(more tears came out from Mayu)
"sorry..!" that girl voice said and gave her a kiss on her cheek..
(At home) 
Mayu woke up..
it was a dream? Mayu murmured and looked around 
then got up from bed and went to the living room ehere everyone was talking about what happed in the morning at the aquarium..
hey! Mayu says 
hey Mayu chan! everyone says 
hey does anyone knows how am i got here? Mayu asks looking at them
well i didn't saw walk in! Takamina says 
i didn't know you where here! Acchan replies
i was taking care of Yuko so i didn't notice! Nyan Nyan says 
(Yuko was still  unconscious in Nyan Nyan's room)
okay! Mayu says
why you ask? Takamina asks 
for nothing..for nothing! Mayu says
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
Post by: kahem on February 04, 2012, 05:33:45 PM
Oh who brought Mayu here?
Takacchan moment is so cute~
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
Post by: RenaChii on February 04, 2012, 09:34:30 PM
Who is that persoon?!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/frustrated.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
Post by: Haruko on February 04, 2012, 11:04:39 PM
Aww yuko you are so brave because you protect your wifey
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on February 05, 2012, 07:14:37 AM
updATE PLSSSSSSSSSS
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: cmze on March 10, 2012, 09:46:59 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 17.Angels exist

(School terrace)
Everything looks so pretty from here! Mayu thought while see the lights 
"Mayu!" someone said and putted her hand on Mayu's shoulder
Yuki!"Mayu said in a whisper and turned around to hug the taller girl
"i missed you!" Mayu says in tears still hugging the taller girl 
i missed you too!"Yuki says hugging Mayu tigher 
*clap* *clap* *clap* 
Ain't this cute? Alexander asks smiling 
Mayu turned around to see Alexander 
It's increrible that you still think that there's someone there when there isn't! Alexander says smiling 
you don't know anything! Mayu shouts 
i don't but she does..right Black? Alexander asks smiling and clapping 
Bla..Black! Mayu turned to see Yuki and this one grabbed her by her collar..
Yuki Stop! stop! Mayu shouts and looked at her in the eyes but there wasn't anything there...
STOOOOP! Mayu shouts 
~~Ring! Ring!~~
Mayu wakes up in tears...
everyone heard her scream so everyone was staring her..
Mayu what happened? are you ok? Jurina asked 
Acchan was about to put her hand on Mayu's shoulder but Mayu rejected it..
Mayu got putted her pants on and left running..
Mayu wait up! Jurina shouts but someone grabbed her hand "leave her alone!" Acchan says with a smile
Mayu is runs as far as can,she just doesn't want to remember then her legs without notice took her to that place..
is was saturday so it was close but she manage to get in! 
in the terrace she can see that they built a fence..
Mayu remembered when she tried to kill herself and Yuki saved her..
i can't handle this anymore! Mayu murmured then started screaming and kick everything around her to pull out all her pain
ahhhhhhhhhhh! Mayu shouts 
if you want me then come and get me! Mayu shouts crying and putting her hands on her neck 
You coward,fight! Mayu shouts crying and punching and kicking the fence..
~~~~~~~Minutes before somewhere else~~~
wow look at you..all a nurse for Black! Hideki says smiling while sits 
shut up! Sae says while puts a wet towel on Black's forhead 
do you think it changed her? Sae asks concerned
do you know how much energy you need to change someone's energy mostly if it's not negative? Hideki asks looking at Black who is resting on bed 
no,i don't! Sae replies 
A lot! Hideki says smiling 
i guess! Sae murmures and looks at Black 
do you think that a kid like that can do such a powerful technique? i bet it wasn't well done! Hideki says smiling
(call it whatever you want to call it telepathy, intuition, instinct..Mayu screamed and Black felt it that's why she woke up xD) 
Black opened her eyes..
Black you're back! Sae says happy 
welcome back Black or should i says Yuki? Hideki says smiling 
Black moved so fast that she broke Hideki's chair making him fall then she was ready to rip his heart 
Black stop! Sae grabbed her by her arms but Black found her way out..and left 
that was close! Hideki says smiling and nervous 
don't bother her! Sae says 
anydoubt more? Hideki asks then sighs 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<~~~>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(Somewhere else) 
Gekikra been standing in front of the house of that all lady for 7 days...(yes,rain,sun,everything) 
so the all lady was really mad and got out of her house and invited Gekikara in..
where's Jurina? The old lady asks 
home! Gekikara replies 
what do you want to know? The old lady asks while drinks her tea 
everything.! Gekikara answers 
that's a long story! The old lady says 
i got time! Gekikara replies..
(well this story is for the next chapter) xD 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuko opened her eyes and she didn't know why she couldn't move her hand then she notices that Nyan Nyan is sleeping on it..
so cute! Yuko thought while with her other hand touches Nyan Nyan's cheek for the sudden touch Nyan Nyan opened her eyes,she couldn't help to smile and kiss Yuko all over her face..
yes,yes,i'm glad to see you Nyan Nyan! Yuko answers smiling 
but then the smiles when away when Nyan Nyan hugged Yuko tighly
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan whispered 
Yuko could feel the tears running through Nyan Nyan's cheeks "i was worry about you!" Nyan Nyan said sobbing 
sorry..!" Yuko says and cuppee Nyan Nyan cheeks 
they looked eachother in the eyes for a moment then Nyan Nyan leaned and kissed Yuko...
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mayu was sitting in a corner of the terrace crying,she didn't know when it became dark but she doesn't really wanna move...she's been there all day..waiting? she wonders while looks other way trying to not think about that person the one who's owner of her thoughts..
"weak..!" a voice says 
Mayu turns around and sees "Yuki!" she murmures 
and more tears show
Black walks closer till the point that she's stading in front of Mayu then she grabs Mayu by her collar and pushes her against the fence
like her dream but this time Mayu is not going to shouts stop!
so you really wanna die! Black says with a smirk 
Mayu just looked other way 
it wouldn't be fun if you want to! An irritated Black says still grabbing Mayu by her collar 
Black got closer to Mayu and whispered in her ear "Run away and don't ever come back there's nothing here for you!" 
Mayu wanted to cry more and pushed Black 
"it's the truth if other fallen angel sees you it would kill you without a doubt but me i enjoy killing when they beg!"Black says while leaves and destroy the fence and jumps from the terrace 
"Yuki!" Mayu shouts and runs to see if she's okay
Mayu looks down and sees Black walking like nothing happened..
Yuki!" Mayu murmured 
Black walks to a park and then sits to see the people,ones where running others were chatting,a couple was kissing and kids were playing..
hey! a little girl says to Black 
hey! Black says then gets up and walks away 
hey don't go,i want to play ball with you! the little girl says and shows her the ball 
Black ignored her and climbed a tree to not being bothered..
the girl started play ball alone..
somehow the ball when to the street..
Black heard the crowd of people screaming..
There's a girl in the street! 
watch out! 
The little girl opened her eyes..
You!" she said and grabs her ball 
nobody could see a thing because of the smoke 
so that means you wanna play ball with me? The little girl asks 
"you should go find your parents!" the irritated person says while removes her hands from the front of the trailer and dissaperars 
soon tye smoke dissapear the parents of the little kid went to hug the little girl 
the reporters were there already..
the reporter asked to the driver what happened why the trailer was so damaged..
you're not going to believe me! The driver says
what? all the reporters asks
it was an older girl who stopped the trailer with her hands! The driver says nervous 
i know what was! the little girl says 
what? all the reporters asks with all the cameras recording 
it was an angel! The little girl says smiling 
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
are you watching the tv? Takamina says while runs with Acchan,Chiyuu,Eiji,Tomochin,Jurina and Mayu to Yuko's room 
Nyan Nyan was feeding Yuko 
what's with the noise? Yuko asks 
Takamina turn the tv on to show the news to Yuko 
the news subject was "Angels exist!" 
what is that mean? Yuko asks 
is there a new angel? Tomochin asks 
maybe we're not alone! Acchan says with a smile
maybe there some good angels out there! Yuko says smiling also 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
so a good new angel to turn! Alexander says 
Black was in silence..
TO BE CONTINUED! 
sorry for taking to long again! xD don't forget to comment thanks for reading me! <3
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: RenaChii on March 10, 2012, 11:42:44 PM
PLEASE COME BACK!!! YUUUKKKIIIIII!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_runcry.GIF)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: xxx220 on March 11, 2012, 04:16:01 AM
Why Gekikara Went to the Old lady House ? :dunno:

YUKI .....COME BACK MAYU NEED YOU :on speedy:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON ~~~ :on GJ:

I like your story  :tantrum:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: kurogumi on March 11, 2012, 04:17:01 AM
Woa!! This is so interesting...please UPDATE soon!! Lol

YUKIRIN....!!! COOL!!!
 Can't wait WMATSUI...kyaaaa
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: msst28 on March 11, 2012, 01:16:39 PM
Interesting.. wanna know next..
about jurina and who is the new angel
hope you update soon
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: kahem on March 11, 2012, 02:16:30 PM
Poor Mayuyu ganbatte!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: hikari.myata22 on March 13, 2012, 12:02:23 PM
cmon yuki.. back to mayu :panic:
update soon plizzz,,  :inlove: :inlove: :bow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: yvet_951 on March 17, 2012, 07:19:35 AM
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:PLEASE UPDATE  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
:heart: :heart: :heart:MAYUKI :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:WMATSUI :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on March 20, 2012, 07:45:21 AM
 :heart:PLSSSSSSS...UPDATE SOOON!! :heart:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
Post by: cmze on March 30, 2012, 09:09:16 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                     18.Jurina

So that's your way of having fun? Hideki says smiling
well i'm kinda hating that girl called Mayu and well hurting her friends will be fun! Sae says smirking 
hahahha yes,well i'm in..BTW where's Black? Hideki asks looking around 
DON'T GET IN MY WAY TRASH! Black shouts and pushes the other Fallen Angel out of her way...then sits and watches tv 
wow somone is not in the mood! Hideki says and walks over  fallen angel that knocked out laying on the floor 
They're just trash! Black says looking other way
you ready for school today? Sae asks smirking 
it's not funny! Black says coldly
what.. well you look good with that uniform,i mean you look good with everything you wear! Sae says blushing hard and looking other way 
whatever! Black says and got up 
see you around! Hideki says 
Black kept walking away without saying a word 
what a bitch! Hideki murmures
~~~~~~~~~~~Gekikara's Location~~~~~~~~~~
Everything started a long while ago..i still can remember that night! The Granny says while drinks her tea..
Gekikra was staring her,She can sense that what the Granny has to says is not good..but she kept quiet and payed full attention to her 
I was nurse,yes in the hospital that Jurina was born..that night a young good-looking girl came she was desperate to give birth..she said that she needed "it" out that "it" was killing her from the inside..
i thought to myself "what's wrong with her? is her child that we're talking about you can't call it.."it"! 
at that point i didn't understand why she was rejecting her child..
Gekikara kept stering the Granny
she wasn't ready yet to give birth so they put her under observation..i had to take care of her all night.. Through the night she said somethings to me that didn't seem right,she said "Please don't let him take my baby he's not good..he lied to me..he's a monster just like me and my baby!" 
~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~~
you need to calm down girl! The nurse says while adjust her pillow 
you don't know anything a made a mistake a really big one! The girl says while looks through her window
hey,you need to stop..you can't blame that beatiful creature that have no fault of what you've done! the nurse says 
i'm scared! The young girl sofly said 
honey you shouldn't be afraid being a single mother is not that terrible you can do it! The nurse says 
"it's not that what am afraid of.." the girl says looking down to her belly 
then what is it? The nurse asked 
that he finds her eventually and turn her in something that she's not going to be! The young girl says rubbing her belly 
what are you talking about sweetheart? The nurse asked confuse 
you know he was really happy with you! The young girl says smiling 
what? The nurse asked terrified 
you hursband..he was really happy with and he loves you very,he wants you to start over and stop drinking at night because of him! The young girl says 
"what? how you..!" The nurse says confuses 
ahhhhhhhh...now is time! The young girl says to the nurse who inmediately called the doctors 
~~~~~~After an hours~~~~~~~
<Baby crying>
hello there you beatiful angel! The nurse says while grabs the baby from her mini craddle 
The young girl opens slowly her eyes...
she's a girl you know! The nurse says smiling while plays with her 
i know! The young girl says looking at the two 
don't you wanna hold her? The nurse asked and then gave it to the younger girl 
the young girl looked closely to the baby looking if everything was normal and then said "hello there beatiful angel,i'm your mom" while kisses her on her forhead many times 
so what's her name? The nurse asked 
"Jurina!" The young girl answers with a smile
you see it's not that bad! The nurse says while looks at the two playing 
i wish i could hold you more! The young girl says while gives the baby to the Nurse 
hey i wanted to ask how did you...*know?* The younger girl complte the sentence 
yes! The nurse says 
listen to me you're going to watch something that nobody had ever seen before,please take Jurina with you and give her the love i can't give her! The young girl says and wipe her tears with her finger 
what is this mean? What is going on? and how did you know? The nurse asked while hold Jurina in her arms 
the young girl got up,went to her window "i'm a angel,i met him before.. i didn't made him suffer i protect him as i could..sorry i wasn't strong enough but please take care of my baby btw remember this name Rena Matsui!" then she jumped 
what? get back! The nurse shouted and saw how the angel landed on the floor without a scratch the. the nurse saw another figure standing in front of the younger girl...
[Granny telling Gekikara: i don't know if i was drunk or the night didn't let me watch well but those two were fighting..they were so fast and strong it seemed like they were flying but he was definitely stronger than her...]
The nurse looking from up with Jurina in her arms crying
WTF is going on? The nurse said to herself 
<Down>
where's my child? The fallen angel asked mad 
i killed it! The young girl says while gets up and cleans the blood from the corner of her mouth 
youre lying! The fallen angel says and runs to the younger girl and keeps punching her 
i'm going to look for myself! The fallen angel says mad and kicks the younger girl 
The younger girl grabs him by his leg.."let me go whore!" 
the fallen angel took out a little sword from his jacket it was bright and looked unique and special..
with it he stabbed her!"
no!" the nurse says then covered her mouth and gave step back..
[i was afraid and i took Jurina with me..He didn't notice beacuse he was busy taking the young girl body away!] the Granny says 
why she said Matsui Rena? how did she know that i was going to meet Jurina? Gekikara thought
so Rena what are you going to do? The granny asks 
huh? how did you know? Gekikra says 
the old lady just smiled
what did you leave Jurina? Gekikara asks mad 
well he found us! the old lady says while gets up 
and!? Gekikara says 
he did this to me! The old lady says while shows Gekikara a super big scar on her shoulder 
Gekikara mad face changed to a surprised one..
i though that it will be better ..you know i was so close to tell him where she was because of this but i was relieve when she mentioned the name Matsui Rena so i knew she'll be okay with you! the granny says while sees her window
so questions on Rena's mind..she so confuse,is there something that she's forgetting?
Now you need to go is getting dark! The old lady says
yes,i should get going! Gekikara says while leaves
~~~~~~~~~~~At school ~~~~~~~~
Jurina chan is so cool! Some girls says while cheer her because she was winning in hand due
i'm not hahaha! Jurina says smiling 
Black got in and ignore everyone as usual but she knew that something wasn't right..she looked around and then notice "Finally give in.." She murmured to herself and then smirked 
you lose! the girl says 
it's imposible,you're a girl you can't be stronger than me! Ikki says confused
okay play with Kashiwagi san! Mark says 
yes,she's strong! Iiki says 
Black gave them a stare.. "kids!" she thought 
c'mon! the guys says annoying her 
i don't think that's a good idea! Jurina says nervous 
that will be i inresting! Ikki says 
Black was about to beat them all but then she thought that this could be a good opportunity to know if Jurina is as specail as she supposed to be..
yeah let's play! Black said..
everyone was watching closely..
1,2,3 go! Ikki shouts 
first Jurina doesn't seem so strong but then she became stronger and started to couse trobles to Black who was trying to keep herself together..
it seems like they're equals! everyone comments 
Jurnia was sweating and Black was having a bad time 
the didn't finish their match beacuse the desk broke 
wtf? Everyone thought
Black got up,she didn't look so happy about being equal so she just disappeared..
Jurina was confuse she didn't knew that she could deal with Black without losing her arm..she then looked at her hand it was normal not even a scratch
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mayu why you didn't go to school? Yuko asks outsides Mayu's door room 
i'm sick! Mayu answers without opening the door 
you want us to get you something we're going out with Bakamina and Acchan? Yuko asks
no,i'm fine! Mayu asks 
okay..bye! Yuko says 
Mayu was sitting on her desk with many books,a lot coffee and her computer checking everything about angels..
li'm going to get you back Yuki!" Mayu murmured and kept typing..

Uffff Yuko's chapter is going to be..mmm i don't know,i think i'll effort a lot on it because is a really important fragment of the story..WMatsui destiny? maybe...MaYuki? don't worry Yuki Mayu is gojng to save you somehow even if it takes a sacrifice!?AtsuMina..Acchan hope Sae chan won't be to mean to you and your ribs! 
Thanks for reading Leave your comments and give me ideas! xD 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
Post by: RenaChii on March 30, 2012, 10:42:53 PM
Destiny~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_angel.gif)

Good luck Mayuyu!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_blowhorn.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_thumb.gif)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
Post by: xxx220 on March 31, 2012, 02:41:06 AM
W MATSUI Destiny

W MATSUI..... :on lol:

so Jurina is Who Daughter ?
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
Post by: Nakamii on March 31, 2012, 10:54:37 AM
Yay! Mayu, Go get Yuki!
As what Anzai-san says, I want a Cool-Fight Scene too! Update Soon!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
Post by: msst28 on March 31, 2012, 12:18:51 PM
aghh who is jurina parents..
hope you update soon
Title: Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
Post by: cmze on April 13, 2012, 07:54:43 PM
Hope you can help me to choose which fanfic i should update more often...

No rules for this poll.. XD

have fun!  :lol:
Title: Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
Post by: Haruko on April 14, 2012, 03:04:52 AM
you evil person.. i want allkojiyuu fanfic updated!!  awww
Title: Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
Post by: Pandah on April 14, 2012, 05:50:18 AM
id like you to update well anything with kojiyuu in it  :D haha
Title: Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
Post by: chuppachup on April 14, 2012, 08:07:53 AM
i vote for kojiyuu fic but i still waiting for akb bording school to update...
Title: Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
Post by: cmze on April 18, 2012, 08:29:30 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                           19.What's wrong Yuko? 

Well i didn't expect that The exchange would win..so here it is..btw for all those Kojiyuu shippers her's a bit of it..

I think is a good idea we go out! Takamina says happy while looks at Yuko and Acchan play with a game in the fair 
yes,i was kinda worried about Yuko but now is just a crazy thought! Nyan Nyan says while looks at Yuko fighting with the game
Why you don't let me win! Yuko shouts and kicks the machine..
look at it silly..you just ruin it! Acchan says
i think we should go! Yuko says looking around and seeing that nobody else notice
i think that's not ok! Acchan says 
you don't know anything! Yuko says smiling and pulls Acchan's with her to the girls 
what happened? Takamina asked 
well---( Yuko putted her hand on Acchan's mouth) 
nothing! nothing! let's get out of here! Yuko smiling till Acchan bit her..
"ouuchhhh you..." Yuko says not finishing her sentence beacuse a mad Acchan was staring her 
Takamina and Nyan Nyan laugh about the scene 
okay let's go grab something to eat! Takamina says while takes Acchan's hand 
                       ~~~~Meanwhile~~~
Geki! Jurina shouts while sees Gekikara entering from the window 
hi! Gekikara says not so happy 
i missed you! Jurina says while hugs her..
"why? i can't find any connection but maybe Rena Matsui is hidding something.."Gekikara thought looking at the mirror that was in front of her..
did you miss me too? Jurina asked smiling
Gekikara looked other way then she blushed when she felt something soft on her cheek 
~~~~~~At the restaurant~~~~~
Yummy this is delicious! Yuko says while eats 
take it slow! Nyan Nyan says smiling while puts her hand on Yuko's shoulder which made her red and jam..Yuko fast took her juice and drank it all while Nyan Nyan was worried looking at her.
Acchan and Takamina looked each other and then  started laughing for that weird situation  
Acchan stopped laughing and pushed Takamina aside while Yuko pushed Nyan Nyan and kicked the table to use it like a shield 
The table broke into little pieces,the people in the restaurant were looking impress, they freak out and run to the exit 
Takamina are you okay? Acchan asked and helped Takamina to get up "what just happened?!" she asked worried while Acchan was trying to catch her breath with her right hand on her ribs 
Nyan Nyan!" Yuko says and sees that she pushed Nyan Nyan two tables away so she had fainted 
well well it's looks like a miss it this time!" A guy smiling staring at Yuko 
"Hideki!" Acchan says  
hello Acchan,i didn't came for you so you better stay out of this! Hideki says serious and pointing to Yuko
Acchan was about to move but some pain in her abdomen didn't let her to,Takamina noticed and stopped Acchan from moving 
Yuko also noticed "Don't worry Acchan i can deal with this..just watch me!" 
Hideki soon was about to punch Yuko but she managed to dodge it and tried to punch him to but Hideki desappear..
Yuko looked side to side then looked up and saw that a flying kick was coming to her,She gave a few steps back,Hideki missed his kick and Yuko took advantage of it Run fast to him and punched him really hard on his face,which couse him to hit himself with the other tables that were in the restaurant 
yes,Yuko! Takamina shouted 
Acchan smirked 
Hideki got up slowly and mad removed the pieces of glass that were on his black jacket "You're dead!" he shouted mad and running to Yuko 
Both punched eachother on the face...
Clearly Acchan could see that Hideki level up and that Yuko was having a hard time..(they were even)
Nyan Nyan woke up and saw the situation,She fast went to Acchan and Takamina..."Acchan help her up!"she said while shakes her
Yuko in other hand was being punched on her stomach and then was kicked and throwed to the wall
i can't..!" Acchan answered 
Takamina removed Nyan Nyan's hand from Acchan's shoulders 
"what?! she's being hurt!" Nyan Nyan replied and then slappped Acchan 
Takamina was speechless she didn't see that coming
i'm sorry!" Acchan replied softly while puts her hand on her red cheek 
"c'mon Yuko!" Mariko murmured and clenched her fist while she sees that Yuko is beated on her stomach several times 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan murmured with tears on her eyes 
Acchan was clenching her teeth
You're so weak! Hideki said while goes to the bar and grab something to drink..
(Yuko was getting up slowly)
You know i thought you were stronger,everyone says that we should be scare of you that you're going to save them and blah blah blah..Black is scarier than you and she's you're same age,You're never going to save her! Hideki said and then drank his wine
"Black!"She said and then cleaned the blood of the corner of her mouth "okay enaugh of playing!" she said and clenched her fist
Hideki stopped drinking and looked at Yuko "huh,what a kid!" 
You're going down!" Yuko said with a smile that pieces off Hideki 
shut up!" He shouts and runs to her 
Yuko also run to him but she jumped..
not so fast!" Hideki replies and also jumps to her
both were fighting in the air..
He tried to kick Yuko but Yuko dodge it and punched him on his stomach,he was trying to catch his breath with his hands on his stomach  then Yuko putted her hands together and clenched it and punched him in his back to make him go down..
Hideki fell on the floor face up,he opened his eyes because of the pain he felt again in his stomach he saw Yuko's punching his stomach..
AHHHHHHHHHHH!" he shouted and then fainted 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouted and went to her rescue because Yuko fell on the floor too 
Acchan and Takamina also went to Yuko..
Acchan was shocked she notice something that not even Nyan Nyan did 
What's this mean?"Acchan murmured and looked to the real big hole that was on the floor were Hideki was laying "is this Yuko's real power?!" she thought
Is he dead? Takamina asked  
no,he's still breathing! Acchan answered 
Nyan Nyan was her squirrel to get up when a chair from nowhere was throwed to Acchan.. and of course Acchan broke it into million pieces and looked around to know where that came from..
get out from where you are coward!" Acchan says 
Nyan Nyan hugs tigher to Yuko
you quiet made a mess around here! Sae says while walks and tries not to step on the pieces of glasses
what do you want? Acchan asks
nothing i just wanted to introduce you my new friend ken,he's akicha replacement! Sae says happy till she sees Hideki on the floor and her face totally change to a mad one 
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!" Sae shouts mad and runs to Acchan and punches her on her stomach Acchaaaaaann!" Takamina shouts 
go away!" Acchan shouts and spits blood 
Takamina tried to help Acchan but she slapped her hands and shouted again "GO AWAY!" 
Nyan Nyan carried her on her back and took Takamina's arm 
where you think you're going? Ken asks with a smirk
let them go,i'm enaugh for you! Acchan says while tries to get up
mmm i don't think so,you mess with my friends i'll mess with yours! Gakuran says and takes Acchan by her collar..
let..them..go! Acchan says while tries to breathe 
NO..now you'll watch them die! Gakuran says and beats Acchan again on her stomach 
"AHHHHHHHHH!" Acchan shouts in pain 
"Acchan!" Takamina shouts and rus to her but Ken gets in her way and slaps her 
"Takamina!" Acchan says 
Shut up! Sae says and punches her on her face 
leave her alone! Nyan Nyan shouts and uses a wood to hit Ken 
"whore!" Ken says and punches Nyan Nyan on her stomach and then grabs her by her hair and also take Takamina by her hair 
now you watch the show! Ken says smirking 
Acchan was laying on the floor face up
so Atsuko where's your power? where's that heartless princess? Gakuran asks smirking AHHHHHHHHHH!" Acchan shouts because Gakuran has her feet on her abdomen 
"ACCHAAAAAAAAAN! Takamina shouts crying and also Nyan Nyan murmures  "Yuko!" and tears up
All the sudden..
A punch on Gakuran's face...
what the hell? Gakuran shouted mad 
Acchan turned her head and saw that Yuko's body wasn't laying on the floor then another punch on Ken face this time,he let go Takamina and Nyan Nyan 
what happened? the two girls wonder
An evil laugh can be heared all around 
Ken appered behind Nyan Nyan and putted her arm around her neck.."get out from where you are or i'll kill her..i promise!" 
something hitted Ken face's again and soon hitted him on his stomach then faster went to Gakuran and did the same thing 
it's so fast! Ken says while brushes his cheek 
"Ken let's grab this little bitch!"Gakuran says mad 
Soon Gakuran and Ken were fighting against what it seem to be Yuko..
what happened to her? Nyan Nyan asked scared while Takamina was helping Acchan 
the three were moving so fast but it seemed like Yuko was playing with them 
Gakuran throws her a punch and Yuko jumped and punched he on he face then disappeared and appeared behind Gakuran 
Boo! She said with an evil face and took Gakuran's arms and started pulling them ready to break them 
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhh! Gakuran shouted in pain 
Ken punched Yuko on the face but this one cleaned the blood on her lip and smirked then jumped on Ken and started punching him like there's no tomorrow..
soon Yuko's knuckles were covered in blood and she was laughing about it 
stop Yuko! Acchan shouts and punches her with all her strength and sends her a couple steps forward
Gakuran was schocked and scared,she took Hideki and left..
Yuko got up and looked around..everyone was staring her afraid 
wh-what? what happened? Yuko asked and gave a step forward to her friends but Acchan,Nyan Nyan and Takamina gave a step back 
Yuko scratched her chin then noticed the blood on her hands then she saw Ken's body..
what the..? Yuko said and looked at Nyan Nyan with her mouth open
this can't be,i didn't do this! Yuko shouts in tears 
Nyan Nyan got closer to her squirrel and hugged her 
let go,i can hurt you too! Yuko shouted in tears 
Yuko let's go home! Acchan said 
like i spected! Mariko said and dissapeared
~~~~~~~~~~~~At home~~~~~~~~~
what happened? Yuko are you okay? Chiyuu asks 
i don't wanna talk! Yuko answered and went upstairs
Nyan Nyan went after Yuko..
Yuko was crying and desperately she was trying to remove the Ken's blood from her face and hands 
let me help you! Nyan Nyan said
let go! Yuko answered 
Nyan Nyan hugged Yuko tighly "you don't need to say anything..i'm here!" 
Yuko cried even more..
"it's okay,let me help you!" Nyan Nyan says and unbuttons Yuko's shirt and starts cleaning her up 
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sitting in a park....
I'm going to get you back! Mayu says while looks at her computer then got up and stretched her body 
what are you doing here! Black asked 
not of your bussiness! Mayu replied 
whatever! Black says and starts walking away 
you know what you're just a coward..yes,that's what you're! Mayu shouts and throws a can to Black's head which Black totally punched away 
what did you say? Black asked mad 
what you heard! Mayu shouted and got on her bike and started going away 
Black followed her "you're dead!" She shouted while runs after Mayu 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~In the tub~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You think am i going to become Black? Yuko asked while rest her head on Nyan Nyan's chest 
"No..!" Nyan Nyan replies while hugs Yuko 
i don't know what happened to me! Yuko says and tear show up 
i'n sure there's an answer for that! Nyan Nyan replied
aren't you scare of me? Yuko asked 
at first..i was but i know you're the same and that what happened before i know we'll find something to help you! Nyan Nyan answered with her chin on Yuko's head 
(Yuko sighed..)
i love you Yuko! Nyan Nyan said and kissed her on her cheek 
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~
Black sees Mayu bike on the floor and starts looking for her..
she saw an opened door and enter then she saw stairs so she went up.."i'm going to give her a lesson!"
after going upstairs...
what are you doing here? Black asked 
i like this place! Mayu answered while looks the view
you know what did a moment ago was..really annoying! Black asks while walks closer to Mayu 
i know..i do it beacuse i love you! Mayu replied 
huh what the hell? What's this? Black asked while tries to pass an invisible barrier
Like i said is my love for you! Mayu replies 
get me out of here..you stupid human! Black shouts 
you can scream all you want nobody can hear you,it's sunday remember? nobody comes to school! Mayu replies with a smile 
get me out or i will....*Kill me* Mayu completes the sentence "you always say that you'll kill but i'm still here!" 
Aaaaahhhhhhhh!" Get me out! Black shouts deperately 
No till you bring Yuki back! Mayu answered and tear showed up  
"Never!" Black said while clenches her fist and ckoses her eyes 
these books are useless! Mayu said and got into the cirlcle that Black was in...
what are you doing? Black asked shouting 
This is my sacrifice! Mayu answered
TO BE CONTINUED.....
Circle= Humans can get in and out but supernatural things can't get out once they're in unless the circle is erase or at least a little part...
what do you think? Comment please! Next chapter it's all MaYuki..Mayu trying to get back Yuki unbeliveble..
Title: Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
Post by: msst28 on April 18, 2012, 09:29:19 AM
Thanks for updating... Love to know what happen to mayuki next..
Also still wanna know more about jurina background
Title: Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
Post by: RenaChii on April 18, 2012, 10:44:22 AM
SACRIFICE?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/onion_shady2.gif)

WHAT ARE U GOING TO DO?! MAYUYU~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_wtf.GIF)
Title: Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
Post by: kahem on April 18, 2012, 05:42:13 PM
Sacrifice??? Eh?!!! Mayuyu don't do stupide thing!
Title: Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
Post by: Haruko on April 19, 2012, 04:41:40 AM
aww my kojiyuu..
Title: Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
Post by: yvet_951 on April 20, 2012, 05:40:46 AM
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:Mayuki moment is great please update you are the best  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
 :heart: :heart: :heart: w matsui  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
Post by: cmze on May 26, 2012, 11:35:53 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                20.Yuki/Black

what? Get out! Get out! Black shouts while is kneeling like she's feeling the worst pain ever 
"no,i'm here for you!" Mayu says and walks closer to her a little scared 
"nooooooo!" Black shouts and got up and runs to Mayu and pushes her out of the cirlcle hard 
if..you..enter... again.. I WILL KILL YOU! Black shouts the last part mad 
let me help you! Mayu shouted while gets up 
GO AWAAAAY! Black shouts in pain 
"i can't!" Mayu says and slowly walks inside the cirlcle Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!" Black shouts while covers her ears and closes her eyes and kneels 
"YUKIIIII!" Mayu shouts crying and runs to enter into the cirlcle again 
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Mayu chan! Mayu chan! A voice says 
Black!" Mayu opens her eyes and shouts it 
what? a girl asks 
wow that was a big hit! A boy says 
Mayu get up "what the hell?" she thought while sees herself in the school 
you should go to nursery! The coach says 
am i playing soccer? Mayu thought while looks her hands 
the ball hit you really hard! A boy says 
yes..i think! Mayu says while goes to nursery 
what the hell is going on? where's Black? it was all i dream? angels exist? Mayu wondered while walks to the nursery 
hey you don't run away from me! A guy says 
i don't want to talk to you! A girl says mad 
the guy took her by her arm and the girl reacts making him a 
judo key..
Don't touch me biatchhhh! The girl says and then kicks him on his stomach 
Yuki!" Mayu says impress with a big smile and runs after her
hey you wait up! Mayu shouts 
Yuki turns around..
what? what do you want? Yuki asks annoyed
(Mayu hugs her tighly)
WTF? don't touch me! Yuki says and pushes Mayu away 
what? it hurts! Mayu says while gets up and rubs her butt
leave alone! Yuki says mad and walks away 
"Yuki!" Mayu whispers and then sighs 
<><><>><><><><><><><><> In class<><><><><><><<><><><<><><><><
Yuki was sitting right next to Mayu..
Mayu couldn't help look at Yuki anytime that she was distracted 
even once their eyes met..but Yuki fast avoid it 
Yuki wws feeling ackward the whole day
<End of the classes>
Mayu was walking home but somehow she felt that something wasn't right so she looked back everytime 
"what the hell is going on? was everything a dream?" 
<SUDDENLY> 
Take this bitch..i told you i'll get my payback! The same guy that Yuki punched today came with his gang to get revenge 
hahahahaha that's all you got? Yuki asks laughing and bleeding 
"take this!" the guy punches Yuki on her face
i'm going to finish you! another guy shouts with a knife
NOOOOOOOO! Mayu shouts in tears and beats the guy with a knife with a wood 
where the hell she came out from? Another guy shouts 
you bitch! Another guy says and takes the knife while the other guy was crying on the floor because of the pain 
i'll kill you! That guy says ready to stab Mayu 
Not that fast! Yuki shouts and beats the guy holdong her and runs to the one who was about to stab Mayu  and ounches him on his face making him loose his balance and fall then Yuki took Mayu's hand and run away..
<After ten minutes of running in a safe place!>
Yuki pushes Mayu against a wall in an Alley 
"i thought you were a quiet person but today...What the hell is going on with you?!" Yuki asks with her hands on Mayu's shirt a few inches from her face
I don't know! Mayu shouted and pushed Yuki away
i don't really know! Mayu said and kneeled looking to her hands.."one day i was.." turns to look Yuki and then looked other way and covered her eyes and started crying 
Yuki started to feel bad about it "i didn't..i didn't mean to make you cry!" she said nervous and then walked to Mayu and extended her hand to help her to get up 
c'mon get up! Yuki says 
Mayu wiped hee tears and took Yuki's hand and then hugged her..(Yuki blushed)
[][][][][][][][][][][][At Yuki's home][][][][][][][][][][]
I'm okay! Yuki says serious
not you're not that looks bad it's a cut! Mayu says while examinetes her 
i'm alright! Yuki replies 
"you always say that!" Mayu thought and then went to Yuki's room and brought the alcohol and a towel 
where did you know where to go to get those things? Yuki asked serious and got up from her seat 
i just figured! Mayu answers
Yuki was staring her..Mayu just smiled and started healing Yuki's wounds 
Yuki tood quiet let in Mayu do her work "what are you studying to be a nurse?" she asked 
no..i'm just used to do this! Mayu replies sadly while cleans a cut on Yuki's arm 
<Ackward silence>
wait a minute if i knew about where this things were..that means that everything that we been through is real! Mayu thought while cleans Yuki's cut 
it-it-it hurts! Yuki says stuttering 
sorry!" Mayu says and cleans a little bit more softly..then starts blowing the cut 
(Yuki blushes again)
why are you helping me? after how i treted you today! Yuki asks looking at Mayu's eyes 
beacuse i...i wanted to! Mayu answers looking other way 
i guess i owe you one,is there anything you want or want me to do? Yuki asks
"mmm.. no!" Mayu replies 
"i don't like owe to someone" Yuki says 
mmmm i think actually there's something that you can help me with! Mayu says 
what is it? Yuki asks 
i'm looking for someone and maybe you can help me to find her! Mayu replies 
okay then i'll help you! Yuki answers 
(Mayu and Yuki shakes hands)
Last noght the agreed to start looking for the person that Mayu is looking for..
Yuki said that she will go to pick up Mayu the next day..
                ~~~~~~~~~~THE NEXT DAY~~~~~~~~
So this is where she lives! Yuki thought while looks around and sits on the sofa 
Mayu goes downstairs..
Yuki looks at Mayu coming downstairs and couldn't help to think how beatiful she was on that white dress then Yuki looked other way and got up 
sorry for making you wait,let's go! Mayu says with a smile which vanished after seeing Yuki's Black jacket..
---FLASHBACK---
(At the school terrace)
Yuki chan where are you? Mayu says looking around 
Yuki jumps and appears in front of Mayu..
here!" Mayu says nervous 
Yuki looks at her and takes the package.."what's this?"
a present! Mayu replies happy 
Yuki opens it and it was a black jacket.."thanks!" she says 
you don't like it? Mayu asks pouting 
Yuki smirks  puts it on then takes Mayu's hand and got to much closer to her 
Mayu blushes and asks nervous  "what are you doing?" then
 kisses Mayu's forhead reaklly sweetly 
Melting Mayu..
Thank you! Yuki says and dissappear..
Always keeping it cool! Mayu said 
<End of the flshback>
Since that day wore it everyday! Mayi said 
what? Yuki asks 
"nothing! let's go." Mayu says 
where was the last time you saw that person? Yuki asks
Mayu was hypnotozed looking at her
what? Mayu asked 
"nothing!" Yuki replied 
they kept walking..
so you're from here..I MEAN HERE? Mayu asks pointing to the ground 
excuse me! Yuki asks with a rise eye brown 
what about that arm? you really strong! enough to jump from a building? Mayu asks
what? of course not! Yuki says 
what about your parents? Mayu asks 
shut up! Yuki says annoyed
Mayu turns around "low tolerance check!" she whispers
what? is that a paper? Yuki asks 
ahhh!? no! hahahahahah! Mayu says nervous and hide the paper
who we are looking for your sister,your mom? Yuki asks 
"someone!" Mayu replies 
how am i supposed to help you! Yuki asks complaining 
<AT NIGHT>
this is not working! Yuki says irritated 
what about fighting? do you like fighting? Mayu asks 
enough! Yuki shouts 
what? Mayu asks 
it's completely annoying..I'm tired of it and your stupid questions.. are we really looking for someone or what is this? 
HOW DID YOU KNOW THOSE THINGS WERE THERE LAST NIGHT? YOU HAVE NEVEE COME TO MY HOUSE..I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU...TELL ME THE TRUTH! Yuki shouts mad and grabbing Mayu by her collar
is not cool fighting here! A guy says 
shut the fuck up! Yuki shouts not looking the man that was behind her 
"Alexander!" Mayu says nervous
who are you? Alexander asks smirking 
who are you? Yuki shouts squeezing Mayu even more
Alexander takes Yuki and throws her away 
what was that? Yuki asks while gets up 
let's play a little! Alexander says smirking 
who are you? Yuki asks
stupid humans,disturbing my world! Alexander says and beats Yuki on her stomach (Yuki spits blood)
Yukiii! Mayu shouts and runs to her 
stay away! Yuki shouts while gets up 
are you trying to fight with me? Alexander asks smirking 
Mayu looks around "This place..is were Yuki got turned..i need to stop it,i need to stop it!" she shouts and runs to Alexander 
garbage! Alexandee says and takes Mayu by her wrists 
"you shouldn't be here!" Alexander shouts and throws her to the water 
(the were on a bridge) 
Mayuuuuuu! Yuki shouts 
what? i thought you hate her and that you didn't know her at all!  Alexander says smirking 
SHUT THE FUCK UP! Yuki shouts while  runs and jumps from the bridge 
YUKIII! Mayu shouts crying 
MAYUUU! Yuki shouts extending her hand 
SORRY! Mayu shouts 
TAKE MY HAND! Yuki shouts extending her right arm that was still hurt DROPS OF BLOOD! from Yuki's arm 
[][][][][][][][][][][]PRESENT[][][][][][][][][][][][][][]
SORRY! Mayu says and puts her hand on Yuki's cheek 
Black's eyes open wide "MAYUUUU!" she shouts 
Mayu's body falls on Black..
Gakuran smirked looking from another spot
Yuko opened the door from the school terrace and was shocked for what she saw
Gekikara was looking from another building "BLACK YOU REACHED YOUR LIMIT!" 
"Mayuuuuuuu!" Yuko shouts and tries to enter to the cirlcle 
but it was useless Yuko was only hitting herself 
Black was speechless all the blood that were on the floor it 
wasn't hers..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH! Black shouts in pain and crying after leaving Mayu's body aside 
Jurina and Nyna Nyan also get to the terrace 
Mayu! Jurina shouts and tries to enter to the cirlcle but she couldn't get in she end up hitting herself like Yuko 
what the f? Jurina asks 
what? Gekikara thought
like i thought! Gekuran smirked 
Yuko slowly turn her head in horror to look Jurina "that cirlcle don't let angels get in or get out!" 
angels? Nyan Nyan repeated and looked Jurina 
i'm not an angel! Jurina answered serious 
Hello everyone! A man clapping and smiling says standing in feont of Yuko
ALEXANDER! Everyone says 
 TO BE CONTINUE...
Title: Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
Post by: kurogumi on May 27, 2012, 09:55:43 AM
Mayuuuu!!! Cmze-san!! Thank for the Update! But..but..please update again its too interesting the next chapter...
Hope mayu fine and Yuki comeback to mayu,

Hehe so jurina its an angel eh?

Title: Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
Post by: msst28 on May 27, 2012, 10:46:20 AM
Cmze-san dont kill Mayuyu..
I know jurina mother is an angel but is alexender is jurina father..
please dont take jurina away..
please2 update the bext chapter
Title: Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
Post by: xxx220 on May 28, 2012, 02:59:38 PM
YAHOOO

Jurina True Identity !!!

PLEASE UPDATE MORE !!!
Title: Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
Post by: pen-pen-chii on May 28, 2012, 03:18:00 PM
I'm really curious about Jurina's identity and who is her father??~   :dizzy:
Please update!~  :hee:
Title: Re: The exchange 21.where's Jurina? 31/05
Post by: cmze on May 31, 2012, 08:02:19 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                              21.Where's Jurina?

I did everything for you! Black murmures while takes Mayu on her arms 
Mayu whispered something to Black's ear 
Black puts Mayu on the floor softly..
Don't worry Black you're not the only one who kills the one you love for a bigger purpuse! Alexander says smirking 
Kill the one you love!" Yuko repeated 
I DID EVERYTHING FOR YOU! Black shouted mad looking to Alexander and run to him fast 
you're going to end up hitting herself! Yuko shouted 
ha..this is fun! Alexander says clapping
I'm going to kill you! Black shouted and got out of the cirlcle
what? everyone said in unision while Alexander's face changed to a mad one "he dissapeared..."
I know that trick! Black shouted and punched where Alexander was going to appear and end up punching him on his face
impresive! Mariko said 
wow! Yuko said 
(Nyan Nyan went to help Mayu..)
Alexander sama! Gakuran shouted 
what are you waiting for Yuko? let's kick his ass! Black sshouted while takes off her precius Black Jacket
yes! Yuko shouts 
Alexander cleans the blood on his mouth.."That was fun!" 
ha..so you finally found her! he says focusing his attention to Jurina.
who are you? Jurina asked afraid
don't worry i won't hurt you! Alexander says smiling and offering his hand to her 
Gekikara slap his hand..
i forgot about you! Alexander says 
you shouldn't! Gekikara says mad
Alexander hits Gekikara on her stomach hard and whispered on her ear "The special Rena!" 
Yuko and Black got on his way but Alexander was stronger and beat the two angels 
come with me Jurina! Alexander says extending his hand
not that fast you ASS****! Gekikara shouted and try to punch Alexander 
Again you!" Alexander murmured 
not only her! Black said and try to kick him but he manage to grab her leg while Yuko also tried to punch him..
you fooled me! Alexander says and throws Black aside and punches Yuko's face 
My turn!" Gekikra says and kicks him on his stomach 
Alexander sama! Gakuran runs to help him and pushes Gekikra out of the way
You made me mad! Alexander shouted, took Yuko and gave her several punches on her stomach and throwed her away 
"Yuko..!" Nyan Nyan shouted 
what don't tell me that your heart is working? Alexander asks behind Black who was distracted not knowing what to do.."Fight or go afte Yuko?"
"bastard!" Black says and tries to dodge Alexander's kicks,she was alredy tired so Alexander reached to kick her 
Black was getting up but Alexander used his body to push her out of the building
Go and say hi to your friend for me! Alexander says smiling 
Black catched Yuko in the air and was able buffer the fall..
Gekikara was fighting Gakuran
well i'm not going to be charming anymore! Alexander says and grabs Jurina and takes her with him 
GEKIKARAAAA! Jurina shouts 
"Jurinaaaaaaa!" Gekikara shouts and tries to go after her but Gakuran was on the way then once Alexander dissapeared with Jurina..Gakuran also dissapear
Shit!" Gekikra says punching the floor
soon appeared Black and Yuko..
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says and goes to her 
Where's Jurina? Black asked
           [][][][][][]AT THE HOSPITAL[][][][][]

Yuki was staring Mayu while she was sleeping,the doctor said that her wound wasn't deep and she'll recover soon..but still Yuki feels bad about everything..
Mayu slowly openned her eyes... "Black!" She murmured 
not Yuki! Yuki replied with a sweet look 
Mayu hugged Yuki tighly "i missed you..i missed you..i knew you were there!" 
you were right! Yuki said (still hugging eachother)
i'm sorry! Yuki says 
no,no it was my fault..you told me! Mayu says while kisses Yuki all over her face 
"but.. but.." Yuki tries to speak but Mayu was kissing her all over so it was hard to focus
Yuki cupped Mayu's cheeks "I Love you!" she said and then kissed Mayu deeply 
Gakuran was watching from other building.."So Love made you come back!" she murmured 
<><><><><><><><<>>><><<<<><><><><><><><<<><<><><><><><><><>
Really Yuki got back? Takamina asked 
yeah she came back! Yuko replied happy 
but what if she tries to kill Acchan? Takamina asks 
which part that she's good you don't understand? Tomochin asks pouting to Takamina 
well i don't anyone hurt Acchan again! Takamina says worried looking other way 
how is she? Chiyuu asks 
 burning up in fever! Takamina replies sad 
she's not healing fast couse she's a fugitive angel probably she would loose her power eventually and become human! Eiiji says looking through the window
Alexander took Jurina i need you to help me to get her back please! Gekikara says worried
don't worry we'll help you! Yuko says while is about to eat an apple that it's snatched by Black!
Black! Everyone says 
hi! Black says with a smirk 
(note: How Black got in...by the window)
what do you want? Chiyuu asks not believing that she has changed 
easy i didn't came to fight even though i would win! Black says while eats the apple 
are you going to help us? Gekikara asks 
"yes.." Black answered 
what do you know? Eeiji asked 
always smart..you even knew that i was coming,your power is going away but you're still strong! Black says while walks around the room and then sits on the sofa
answer! Eiji shouts 
with that actititud you're just going to get you dead! Black says serious and throws the apple in the trash bin that was in the kitchen
don't play with us! Yuko says
okay here's what a got..ALEXANDER IS JURINA'S DAD AND HE WANTS TO USE HER BODY TO KEEP LIVING BECAUSE HER BODY WHICH IS A SIMPLE HUMAN CAN'T HANDLE HIM SO HE'S PLANNING TO LIVE FOREVER AS A HALF HUMAN AND HALF ANGEL Black says 
what?Gekikara 
no way! Yuko says 
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Acchan shouted from her room 
her medicine! Takamina says and runs to Acchan's room to give her the medicine 
sorry about that! Black says (talking about Acchan's ribs) 
that bastard! Eiji says 
wait but there's more!! Black says 
what? everyone asks 
something that Geki knows abd we don't right Rena? Black says with a smirk and gets in front of her...
<><><><><><><><><><><><><<><><><><><><<><><><<><><><><><><><>
what do you want? Jurina asked afraid
don't worry i won't hurt unless you make me mad! Alexander says smiling 
Gekikara will come soon and will destroy you! Jurina says 
oh really? i'm so afraid of her! Alexander says while takes a drink of Whiskey
Gakuran was still confuse.." Love.." she murmured 
you'll see she'll come! Jurina says 
sorry honey i can't wait there so many things to do! Alexander says smirking 
Title: Re: The exchange 21.where's Jurina? 31/05
Post by: xxx220 on June 01, 2012, 03:15:50 PM
No Jurinnaaaaa


Don't Worry Gekikara going to Safe you :)


WMATSUIIIII
Title: Re: The exchange 21.where's Jurina? 31/05
Post by: Megumi on June 01, 2012, 11:54:18 PM
 :imdead: This is too much...
Yuki is back YEI finally but Jurina..... noooooooo  :pleeease:

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The exchange 22.Matsui Rena 12/06
Post by: cmze on June 12, 2012, 07:24:52 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 22.Matsui Rena

<The next day>
Black was watching Mayu sleep but relize about the time so she got closer and kissed Mayu's forhead when Black was about to get out from the window
"Where you going?" Mayu asks 
i got something to do! Black answers not looking 
"please..Come back.." Mayu says a tear rolled her cheek 
*Black dissaper*
-Somewhere else- 
You know that you won't get anything if you keep stalking Mayu!" Black says 
i'm not stalking! Gakuran said smiling 
then what do you want? Black asks
kill her! Sae says without hesitation 
You're just a fool! Black says and runs to Sae 
both punched eachother's face
"Good!" Gakuran says and kicks Black's stomach 
being good makes you weak! Gakuran murmures 
ahhhh! Black says and pushes Gakuran *Black was on top* 
this is low!" Gakuran says 
i would never...I WILL NEVER HURT YOU! Black shouted the last part 
get off me! Gakuran said and punched Black's face
you're just so weak i wanna fight with Black not with this clown! Gakuran says and Kicks Black's stomach again 
Black was trying to catch her breath 
do you think you're the stronger enough to protect her? don't me laugh! Gakuran said 
you don't know a thing! Black says and punched Gakuran on her face 
i'm going to kill you! Gakuran said and punched Black again making her fall on the floor 
Gakuran takes Black by her shirt and said "You know i have to kill you!" 
yeah you have but you won't! Black says 
Gakuran let go Black's shirt causing her to fall on the floor
why you let her change you? Gakuran asks mad 
"i belong with her!l Black says looking to the sky 
what? don't say stupid things! Gakuran says 
in all the people in the world i had to take her father's life..in all the fathers that there are in the world hers had to be the one that gave me his life! Black says 
Alexander is coming after you anyway! Gakuran says and walks away 
i'll be waiting for him! Black murmures while gets up and walks to Nyan Nyan's dept 
<At Nyan Nyan's dept> 
Black what happened to you? Gekikara asked 
a friendly talk! Black says while goes to the fridge and takes a cold stake and out it on her back 
that was dinner! Yuko says with a sigh 
anything new about Jurina? Takamina asked 
no! Black answered 
Eiiji was investigating on his computer while Tomochin and Chiyuu were watching tv 
this is not fun we have not clue! Tomochin says 
ehhhhh! Yuko says 
huh? Black reacts 
AHHHHHHHHH! A shout from Acchan's room 
Acchan! Takamina shouts and opens the door 
"Acchan!" Evryone shouts and sees Mariko with her hands inside of Acchan's stomach 
what the hell? Yuko tried to stop it but something don't let her get in the room 
Ahhhhhhhh! Acchan was shouting in pain
"Acchan!" Takamina shouts crying and enters to the room 
get out of here! Mariko shouted 
 Mariko stopped what she was doing...
*Acchan was trying to catch her breath..*
Are you okay? Tell me! Takamina says and looks at Mariko
Acchan opens her eyes slowly "What happened?" she asked looking at Takamina 
now you're healed so if i were you..i'll prepared myself for what's coming! Mariko says ready to go 
Acchan sits and touches her ribs and feel no pain "i'm healed" she said surprised 
what's coming? Gekikra asks 
You should better know Rena! Mariko says and gets out using the window 
"Rena..that name again!" Gekikra murmures 
Rena! Acchan murmures and looks at Gekikara
i think i know something! Eiiji says 
what's that mean? Black asks 
well when i was an angel there was a tell that a human could become an angel..
what?!? how? Takamina asked 
well i don't know the details but years ago existed a girl who could see us or channel us somehow she was an angel but lived her whole life as a human once she ascended she lost her human memories! Eiiji says 
you mean that could be Gekikra! Acchan says
that explains her compasion for humans those days! Acchan says looking at Gekikra 
this can't be "i'm not that person i don't remember! Gekikra said looking other way 
ohh don't worry i can help you! Black says with a smile and then punched Gekikra really hard on her stomach 
wha-what? Gekikra said and instanly felt dizzy and fainted
that was necessary? Acchan asked 
you'll thank me later! Black replies 
now let's wait! Eiji says 
<Past> 
i'm Matsui Rena i was born July 27, 1991 in Toyohashi, Aichi! Rena murmured and openned her eyes 
where am i? Rena thought while looks around 
how you feeling today? A nurse asks 
i'm fine! Rena says with a smile
you had another convulsion..that's not okay! The nurse says while adjust Rena's pillow 
i'm just another human! Rena mumured looking to her hands
Rena looked around and nurse dissapear 
hello how you feeling? Another nurse asks 
fine like i told the other nurse! Rena says 
what other nurse? The nurse asked 
well the one that got out a few seconds ago maybe you saw her in the hall! Rena says 
the nurse got closer and touched Rena's forhead "everything is fine!" the nurse said 
what's wrong? Rena asked 
Maybe you thought you saw another nurse but there's not anyother nurse around till 2:00pm! The nurse answers
i should rest! Rena says 
yes,rest that might be good! The nurse says while closes the door slowly 
*Rena got up and left the hospital...*
what was that? Rena thought while walks 
"Rena chan!" A girl says 
What are you doing here? you have to be in the hospital! The girl says worried 
i'm fine! Rena says and keeps walking 
stop! The girl says and holds Rena 
you're going to end up in the hospital again if you don't take care of yourself! The girl says worried 
"Airin.." Rena said softly 
~Airin took Rena to her home~
I'm glad you came with me! Airin says happy 
what happened? why i was in the hospital? Rena asked 
what? You know..you always have this convulsions that i can't explain! Airin says 
is that so..since when i have it?Rena asks 
since i know you silly..don't worry nobody knows our little secret! Airin replies 
what secret? Rena asked 
well the fact that you can see dead people which is totally cool!Airin says with a smile 
ahhhhhh! Rena says 
what's wrong? Airin asks 
my head..my head hurts! Rena says and her nose starts bleeding 
not another convulsion! Airin says and takes Rena's hand 
Airin watch out! Rena says and jumps on Airin *both fall on the floor* 
a stone was throwed and was going to hit Airin..
there you are! a young man says smiling while enters from the window 
who are you? Airin asks 
the special Rena! The young man says clapping 
My head! Rena says while scratches her head 
do you feel it? that's better than i thought!  The young man says happy 
what do you want? Rena asked in pain 
"you!" The young man said 
over my dead body! Airin says and takes the wood and hits the young man but it didn't hurt him 
as you wish! the young man says and insert his hand on Airin stomach *Drops of blood* 
AIRIIIIIN! Rena shouts crying 
somebody else enters from the window and hits the young man who let go Airin 
Rena goes to Airin and hugs her and then watches the two figures fighting 
the girl seemend stronger she punched him several times on his stomach and then kicked him out the room 
when the girl looked outside the window he was already gone
Airin! Rena says sobbing 
the girl looks at Rena.. "if you keep living here you always going to loose someone you love!" the girl says serious 
what's your name? The girl asks 
Rena..Rena Matsui! She answered sobbing 
well Rena there's something you need to know "you're a weapon..You can find angels and angels or bad angels want you beacuse you work like a radar!" The girl says 
why me? Rena asked 
because you're not human! The girl says 
what?!!?! Rena asks
you need to come with me! The girl says 
no..what about Airin please save her! Rena says sobbing and taking the girl's leg
i can save her but you will owe me! The girls says and takes Rena's hand and puts it on her stomach 
what's this mean? Rena asked 
do you agree? The girl says 
yes! Rena says 
your duty will be saving "Matsui Jurina!!" the girl says and then dissapears 
"Matsui Jurina?" Rena murmured 
Airin openned her eyes and touched her wound 
Rena fell on Airin..
Rena? Airin said and moved her next to her 
Rena wake up! Airin says and shakes Rena then Airin hears Rena's heartbeat but there was nothing 
RENAAAAAAAA! Airin shouts crying and hugging Rena's dead body!
~~~~~Present~~~~~
Gekikra woke up..
Gekikra how was it? Black asked
Gekikra got up and punched Black on her stomach,Black sitted on the couch 
What you find out? Acchan asks 
i met Jurina's mom..i made i deal with her! Gekikara said 
what kind of deal? Takamina asked 
that i would protect Jurina! Gekikra says looking other way
don't worry we'll find her! Yuko says 
what else? Eiji asked 
yes,i'm a angel radar! Gekikra says 
what?!? Yuko asks 
she said so that's why Alexander looked for me and killed Airin..he wanted to look for angels so he would turn them and have an army! Gekikra says 
so that means you can find him and Jurina because she's also an Angel? Eiiji says 
yes! Gekikra says 
that explains why you're always so attached to Jurina? Black says looking other way 
let's find her then! Yuko shouts 
you know that we could die right? Black says 
Takamina sad looked at Acchan,Tomochin looked at Chiyuu 
"don't worry everything will be fine!" Acchan says with a bright smile..
Title: Re: The exchange 22.Matsui Rena 12/06
Post by: Megumi on June 13, 2012, 11:50:18 PM
Hopefully I'm the first one commenting...

Woah!
So Matsui Rena was a human?!
Airin~!

Now this is getting serious...
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The exchange 23.this seems a goodbye 21/06
Post by: cmze on June 21, 2012, 03:13:56 PM
THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                         23.This seems a goodbye 

I guess we have to say goodbye today! Acchan says 
it's not a goodbye! Yuko says with smile 
Black looked other way 
we'll leave tomorrow! Gekikara says serious 
i'll go with you! Chiyuu and Eiji says 
there's no need! Black says and gets up 
but we want to help! Eiji and Chiyuu says 
well you'll help us looking after them! Acchan says while looks to the othe room where Takamina and Tomochin were watching Tv 
"but.." Chiyuu and Eiiji were about to obeject
Black putted her hand on Chiyuu's shoulder 
i dragged you to this..you were fine living here and that's what you should keep doing! Black says 
<Chiyuu and Eiji looked down>
so then is done we leave tomorrow! Gekikara says 
so i should go! Yuko says and leaves 
Black looks other way and also walks away from the window
i wasn't finish! Gekikara says 
well they have someone to say goodbye! Acchan says smirking 
what about you Acchan? Eiji asks 
yes,i'm thinking about it too! Acchan says looking to Takamina
<Yuko went walking to Nyan Nyan's work> 
Nyan Nyan was busy reading some papers...
hello! Yuko says with a smile 
ahhhhhhhhh Yuko! Nyan Nyan shouts 
soon two bodyguards enetered to the office 
what's wrong Kojima san? The bodyguards asked 
i'm okay! I'm okay! Nyan Nyan says 
Yuko smiles to the bodyguards
wow my Nyan Nyan is well protected! Yuko says 
what are you doing here? Nyan Nyan asks while gets up and gets closer to Yuko the removes a string of hair of Yuko's face then smiled 
i wanted to spend my day with you! Yuko says and kisses Nyan Nyan's cheek 
i guess i can't leave work for a bit! Nyan Nyan says smiling
let's go! Yuko says with her cute dimples 
Nyan Nyan was melting 
they ran away from Nyan Nyan work 
i wanna do everything with you Nyan Nyan! Yuko shouted all the sudden 
what?!? Nyan Nyan replied blushing 
both girls went to an arcade 
they played all the games..
Nyan Nyan i'm winning! Yuko shouts smiling 
i'm not good at these things! Nyan Nyan says in defeat 
let's go there! Yuko says and points to the photo booth
<both get in>
The first Photo was Nyan Nyan kissing Yuko's cheek
the second photo was Yuko grabbing Nyan Nyan boobs with a excitement face 
the third photo was Nyan Nyan pinching Yuko's cheek 
The fouth picture was Yuko crying and hugging Nyan Nyan's chest tighly 
the fift picture was Nyan Nyan resign to the idea that Yuko is a pervert squirrel 
The two girls walked hand in hand to a restaurant 
both went to the bathroom
Yuko pushed Nyan Nyan to one of the cubicles 
what?!? Nyan Nyan asked blushing 
i saw on tv this is fun! Yuko says grinning 
<Atsumina's day> 
Like Black said you could die! Takamina said sad while walks 
Acchan took a deep breath and said"Takamina don't worry!" 
You always say that and you don't care how i feel don't you underttand I LOVE YOU! Takamina shouted crying 
people around looked at them 
i don't care ACCHAN I LOVE YOU! Takamina shouted louder still crying 
Acchan blushed a tear came out
Takamina took Acchan hand and run away 
Acchan stopped running 
what is it? Takamina asked 
"i'll be back..." Acchan murmured 
what? Takamina asked 
I'LL BE BACK AND I WANT TO SPEND THE REST OF MY LIFE WITH YOU! Acchan shouted crying and took off a necklace that she had on and then putted on Takamina
Takamina looked to the necklace 
I swear Takamina i'll be back! Acchan says crying hugging Takamina from behind 
Takamina smiled "you have to get back because it wouldn't work with somebody else!" she murmured 
Acchan takes Takamina's hand "let's eat some katsudon"
"i don't think.." Takamina was about to says somthing
yeah don't worry i know a really good place! Acchan says smiling 
i said i don't want it! Takamina says 
yes,it's delicious there! Acchan says smirking 
you don't get to me? Takamina asks
do you remember the ramen? Acchan asks 
the Ramen? Takamina asks 
yes,the one you invited me when i wasn't hungry! Acchan says smirking like a fool 
(Ramen scene chapter 3.5) 
uhhh what about it? Takamina asks 
well the more i said no the more you offer it to me! Acchan says smirking 
now i remenber! Takamina says 
yes,that's why we're going to eat Katsudon! Acchan says smirking and gives a little squeeze to Takamina's hand 
<Eating Katsudon> 
This is delicious! Acchan says smiling 
i'm really gonna miss you if you don't get back! Takamina says looking at Acchan 
"Takamina.." Acchan murmured 
i'll really miss your smile,your voice,your heart! Takamina says and grabs Acchan's hand 
Acchan tried to be strong but the truth she was feeling the same "she couldn't live without Takamina" 
<Mayuki's day>
Are you going to spend all day staring me? Mayu asked and then openned her eyes 
how you knew? Yuki asked 
i could recognized you kilometres away! Mayu says smirking and gets up 
what are you doing? Yuki asks 
well you're not planning to says hi! Mayu says while gets closer and kisses Yuki's cheek 
"Mayu.." Yuki murmures 
what? Mayu asks 
hold on tight! Yuki whispered and took Mayu and then jumped from the building 
oh god..i don't want to die! Mayu said and kept holding tigher on Yuki's back 
<they got to the tallest building>
wow it's beatiful! Mayu said and looked around 
i know..!"Yuki replied 
it's fine..i know you'll get back to me like you always do please don't get hurt to much! Mayu said
what are you talking about? Yuki asked
Gakuran came! Mayu replied 
ohh! Yuki looked other way 
Mayu hugged Yuki both fell on the floor  "let's enjoy the view Yuki chan!" Mayu said hugging Yuki that was leaned to the wall while Mayu was leaned on Yuki's chest 
Yuki closed her eyes and inhaled Mayu's scent 
Title: Re: The exchange 23.this seems a goodbye 21/06
Post by: Megumi on June 22, 2012, 11:13:52 PM
 :cry: Waa please don't get hurt girls!

 :banghead: Happy ending please  :banghead:

I laughed kind a hard with Yuko and NyanNyan in photo-booth
Then AtsuMina I  :cry: and MaYuki I  :cry: :cry: :cry: even more...

Thank you for your update
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The exchange 23.this seems a goodbye 21/06
Post by: mo-chan on June 30, 2012, 06:34:51 PM
I liked this one   :onioncheer:
 but I wanted the story to be more concentrated on Mayuki  :tantrum:
cmze-san you are the best  :on GJ:
please cantinue writing fanfics about Mayuki  :wriggly:
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission PART 1
Post by: cmze on July 04, 2012, 08:44:48 PM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                             24.Rescue Mission 

(At Nyan Nyan's home)
The vibe was really sad Mayu didn't go to school,Nyan Nyan didn't go to work Takamina was still on bed,Eiiji was looking for information and Chiyuu was sad because the girls didn't take her while Tomochin was watching Tv 
Nyan Nyan got up "okay this is enough.. i can't resist this i'm tired of waiting!" she said irritated 
it's the only thing we can do! Mayu says sad 
what if Yuko turn in one of them? Nyan Nyan asked 
she won't! Mayu answered 
you don't know! Nyan Nyan shouted 
She's right! Takamina says leaning on the door
what if Yuki don't come back? Nyan Nyan asks 
she will..she always get her back to me! Mayu answers hugging herself *she was wearing Yuki's Black jacket* then she remembered the moment she met Yuki at the hospital then when she met her at school then again when she appeared to defend her from those men..
We need to do something! Takamina says 
what do you think? Chiyuu asks 
let's go find them! Nynan Nyan says 
but how we going to find them? Tomochin asks 
well gps! Mayu says while her phone is tracking Yuki
great! The girls says and all of them goes to the car
i'm not happy with this! Eiji says 
shut up! Takamina says 
~Somewhere else~ 
Here! Gekikara says 
here? Are you sure? Acchan asks 
yes! Gekikra answers 
i guess your radar is screw beacuse we're in the middle of nowhere, no civilization,no Nyan Nyan! Yuko says pouting 
Black looked around and then punched the ground
huh? Are you crazy? Yuko asks scared 
i see! Acchan says and also punches the ground
A hole was made 
this is scary! Yuko says 
Sorry but i forgot my invitation! Black shouts 
well you're not invited a voice says from the hole 
now i feel ignore poor me! Black says pretending to be sad 
<Hideki and 20 Fallen angels came out>
This is an important event and your kinda not invited! A fallen angel says 
in all good parties there's always crushers! Acchan says smirking 
well if you want to pass you have to do it over me! Another fallen angel says
Hideki saw Yuko and remembered what happened last time he saw her so he got back to the hole 
20 against 4..this is going to be fun! Another fallen angel says smiling 
Let's go! Yuko shouts and goes running to them 
"fool!" Black says and also runs after her 
Acchan smirks and runs to them 
Gekikara sighed "i guess is one for the team!" she said and also run to them 
Yuko was punching everyone..
"Take that bitch!" Black says and kicks one Fallen angel 
A fallen angel was about to punch Acchan but she stopped him grabbed him by his arm and throwed him aside 
Gekikara was merciless fighting 
they never get tired or what? Yuko says fustrated still punching more fallen angels 
there are more appearing! Black says and kicks one on his face
shit! This is going to ruin my shirt! Acchan says and punches him on his stomach 
no matter how hard we beat them they get up again like those zombies in movies! Yuko says while dodges a punch 
what a kid! Black says irritated
but it's truth! Acchan says 
a fallen angels beats Black for being distracted 
"Black!" Acchan says 
then anothers fallen angels hit Acchan 
Acchan!"Gekikara says and goes to her rescue but Another fallen angel grab her by her leg and make her loose balance so many fallen angel started hitting Gekikara 
Yuko tried to help her friend but they were hitting her too 
~Yuko's Flashback~
what if you become one of them? Nyan Nyan asked sad 
i can control it remember? Yuko says with a smile 
"Yuko.." Nyan Nyan whispers and tears come out 
Nyan Nyan...*Sad Yuko*  if That fallen angel tries to turn me there's a thing he could never change about me.. do you know what it is? Yuko asks trying to show a smile 
what is it? Nyan Nyan asks wiping her tears 
Yuko taked Nyan Nyan's hand and puts it on her chest 
"You..!" Yuko answered 
Nyan Nyan felt Heart beat fast when she said "you" 
he would need to rip out my heart to turn me beacuse you're my heart! Yuko says 
Nyan Nyan hugs Yuko tighly "i love you!" she says crying on Yuko's shoulder 
 tears came out from Yuko's eyes "i'm not sad why am i crying? maybe these are tears of love!" 
~End of the Flashback~
Mariko was watching from away "when you're planning to fight seriouly?" 
One fallen angel was about to kick Yuko but she stopped him 
get out of My way..I WANNA SEE MY NYAN NYAN! Yuko shouted crying and run to fallen angels 
"Yuko!" Gekikra said and tried to got up 
Yuko was fighting to all those fallen angels by herself 
"Yuko.. fool.. I WANT TO SEE MAYU CHAN TOO! Yuki shouted in tears then got up and went to fight those fallen angels too 
TAKAMINAAAAAAA! Acchan shouted in tears too then got up and run to the fallen angels 
<In the car> 
Takamina took a deep breath "what was that?" she wondered while looks through her window
Nyan Nyan was feeling weird while Mayu was feeling uncomfortable 
The three girls shouted at the same time " you need to accelerate!" while Takamina got up and pressed the acclerator 
<Eiji was driving> 
are you crazy? we're going to die? Eiji shouted scared 
Mayu and Nyan Nyan also pressed the accelerator 
"we'll be there soon!" 
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission PART 1
Post by: mo-chan on July 04, 2012, 09:45:04 PM
wait angels your girls are coming!!  :ding:
I am thinking what Mayu Takamina and Nyan Nyan will do  :dunno:
they will be only in danger  :OMG:
I like this chapter  :shy2:
cmze-san made me wanna write fics  :bingo:
but I didn't know how to post it  :depressed: :err:
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission PART 1
Post by: xxx220 on July 05, 2012, 05:14:51 AM
They fight for the other

Ahh...no comment

Please continued updating
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission PART 1
Post by: kurogumi on July 05, 2012, 06:27:33 AM
hahaha mayuyu, nyanyan and takamina

hope they dont interfere the battle...or dont get hurt from the enemy

curious about what jurina will be...is she now an enemy?
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission PART 1
Post by: Megumi on July 05, 2012, 08:52:51 AM
 :farofflook: LOVE is the ultimate power!

 :panic: Can't wait for the next chapter!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission 2 Jurina get back..Geki needs you!
Post by: cmze on July 25, 2012, 01:37:31 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
 24.Rescue mission 2 Jurina get back ..Geki needs you! 

Let's get in! Gekikara shouts while punches a bunch of fallen angels 
Black was also having trouble with other fallen angels 
Yuko was advancing fast but still they were 20 against 4 it was normal they have trouble 
damn i can take down (one on one) but still i'll try Takamina deserves a better world! Acchan shouted and punched a fallen angel on his stomach 
let's get in! Gekikara shouted but when she jumped someone kicked her in the air not allowing her to enter to the underground 
what was that? Gekikara wonder while gets up 
stop fighting for me! Jurina says standing 
"Jurinaaa.!" Gekikara murmured and walked closer to her hipnotized 
that's not Jurina! Black shouted but Gekikara didn't listen she just walked to her 
Renaaaaaaaa! Acchan shouts still punching some fallen angels 
Are you okay? Gekikara says while checks Jurina and then hugs her 
Jurina punched Gekikara on her stomach then Jurina whispered in her "she waited for you!" while Gekikara was losing balance 
Gekikara! Yuko shouts and goes to them 
Jurina pushes Gekikara out her way "i feel so good!" she says while looks her hands 
they lose! Mariko says while looks other way 
Alexander! Black says a little scared 
Bingo! Jurina sas clapping 
Yuko went to Gekikara "Jurina is...I had to save her and now i have to.. " Gekikara whispered crying 
don't say it we can save her still! Yuko says 
Who am i going to kill first Acchan or Black? maybe both for being rebels 
Black and Acchan looked eachother and went to Alexander running 
You're just weak..i'm perfection! Jurina says takes Acchan's punch then spin her round and throw her to Black both fell on the floor 
Black got up mad and went to Jurina,she tried to kick her but she jumped,Black followed her in the air 
She's Jurina you can't hurt her! Yuko shouts 
Gekikara was in shock 
i don't care..she's evil  so say goodbye! Black shouts and tries to punch her but Jurina dodge it and puched Black stomach and then kick her down..Black fell on the floor 
then cough a few times and spit blood..
"it's looks like Black is out!" Jurina says smiling 
shut up! Acchan goes after her running 
"come.." Jurina says 
Acchan throws a combo of punches but Jurina was faster "too slow!" she said smiling 
Shut up! Acchan says and  kicked her, Jurina took her leg "say goodbye to your leg!" she said in a scary tone
"goodbye to you!" From nowhere appeared Black and punched Jurina on her face 
"Yuki!" Acchan murmured 
"let's destroy this bitch!" Yuki says with her thumb up
you don't have a chance! Mariko murmured 
Gekikara you need to be strong and i need to go help my friends! Yuko says concerned 
"Jurina.." Gekikara murmured crying 
she's still there you need to fight don't let her darkness consume you..we need to help our friends! Yuko says pointing to Acchan ,Yuki and Jurina that were fighting
what if we fail again? Gekikara asks 
we'll do it again because we need to protect the one we love the most in this world!  Yuko replies with a smile 
Gekikara got up "i need to protect Jurina!" she murmured
then let's go! Yuko says 
Which part i'm stronger you don't get? Jurina says while kicks Yuki that was on the floor 
Acchan was trying to get up but she was tired of her previous fight
Take this! Yuko says and throws a punch to Jurina's face somehow it hurt Jurina and made her bleed..
this is going to be intereting! Jurina says looking at Yuko and licks the blood on the corner of her mouth 
TO BE CONTINUED
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission 2 Jurina get back..Geki needs you!
Post by: mo-chan on July 25, 2012, 02:39:31 AM
noooooooo  :OMG:
what happened to Jurina  :stoned:
I hate Alexander!  :on redcard:
Jurina is so scary  :badluck:
Gekikara is no more Gekikara when she is crying she is Rena don't cry Rena  :pleeease:
be strong  :smoke:
Jurina needs you Rena!!  :gyaaah:
what's going to happen !!??  :scared:
I can't wait for the next  :imdead:
Title: Re: The exchange 24. Rescue Mission 2 Jurina get back..Geki needs you!
Post by: xxx220 on July 25, 2012, 04:25:08 AM
Jurina what HAPPEN TO YOU

GEKI BE STRONG SAFE JURINA

FIGHT FOR JURINA

Please continued updating
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: cmze on July 28, 2012, 05:08:53 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                             25.  The power of love
 
Acchan and Yuki were on the floor 
It was really stupid to think that we could beat her! Acchan says smirking 
Yeah but it was fun! Yuki says feeling the pain trying to get up to help Acchan 
you know i never said thanks to Mayu or you! Acchan says looking to the sky 
why..what are you talking about? Yuki asks 
Thanks to you two..i could get back on the right track..now i'm doing what they told me and i feel really good! Acchan answers smiling like an idiot
i still don't get it! Yuki says smiling 
the day we met Akicha was about to kill you but Mayu hit her "the power of love brought me back and i could meet Takamina!" Acchan says smiling 
"we should thank them when we see them!" Yuki says and a tear come out from Yuki's eye
"yeah.." Acchan answers and smiles and tears come out
but she wiped them soon 
~Jurin VS Yuko~
Gekikara go check Acchan and Yuki please! Yuko says serious looking at Gekikara
one on one..i like it! Jurina says clapping 
i didn't ask you! Yuko shouts and runs to Jurina then jumps and tries to punch her in the air 
"too predictible!" Jurina says and also punch Yuko's punch sending her away because Jurina was stronger
that's all? Jurina asks smirking 
Yuko got up fast and run again to her 
"this is boring!" Jurina says looking other way but from nowhere appeared Yuko and punched her on her stomach 
Wha...what?! Jurina asked while Yuko was still with her fist on her stomach 
what did you say? Yuko asked smirking and then dissapear 
where are you? Jurina asked looking around 
here! Yuko says 
~Jurina looks up~ punch on her face sending her away 
if you want more let me now! Yuko shouts smiling 
stupid Yuko! Mariko says moving her head side to side
Ahhhhhhh! Jurina gets up mad and goes to Yuko 
Yuko dodges her punch then jumps 
Jurina jumps also and take he by her leg and throws her to the floor when Yuko was on the floor Jurina took advantage and use her knee to hit Yuko's stomach 
Aaaaahhhhh! Yuko shouted in pain 
Jurina removed the hair that was on her hair and then looked at Yuko that was trying to cath her breath 
I'm going to kill you! Jurina shouted ready to rib her heart out mercyless
Noooooo! Gekikara shouted and punched Jurina on her face while Acchan and Yuki Tackled her away from Yuko
Yuki took Yuko and carried her away while Acchan and Gekikara were waiting to Jurina to get up 
Yuki putted Yuko softly on the ground
Yuko spitted blood 
"Everything is going to be fine!" Yuki says holding Yuko's hand tighly 
The other fallen angels started to get up around them 
"Fuck!" Yuki says and let go Yuko's hand and got up 
"come and get me!" Yuki says ready to fight but in the insode she was really tired she wasn't sure if she can take care of Yuko 
I should end you long while ago..now my friends are hurt and i don't like that! Rena says serious
Jurina only smirked 
We should stop you before..we create you and we'll destroy you! Acchan says and takes Rena's hand 
Come to play! Jurina says 
Rena and Atsuko looked eachother and went to Jurina running..
The three girls were fighting..Rena and Atsuko didn't care if they weren't as strong as Jurina..the only thing they thought was that they'll fight till there's no energy inside of them 
aahhhhh! Jurina hitted Acchan stomach the Jurina grabbed Rena by her leg and throwed her to Acchan 
Yuki was having a bad time with those fallen angels 
one have her by the back while other was punching her on her stomach 
i'm gonna die this way..protecting Yuko..that's not cool being beated by second class angels! Yuki thought and a tear came out 
STOP!!!! Mayu shouts and jumps on the fallen angel that was beting Yuki's stomach 
"Mayu..am i dreaming because i'm dying?" Yuki thought
Eiji punched the fallen angel that was holding Yuki 
when Yuki was about to fall Mayu grabbed her 
"hello.." Mayu says crying holding her 
hi..i was beating them did you see that? Yuki asked 
Mayu was crying holding Yuki tigher "look what they have done to you!" She says sobbing 
Thanks! Yuki says and kisses her 
~KojiYuu~
Nyan jumped and took Yuko in her arms 
Yuko..Yuko! Nyan Nyan says crying 
Yuko slowly openned her eyes "Nyan Nyan!" 
Nyan Nyan hugged tigh her little squirrel 
you're here!" Yuko says and wiped the tears on Nyan Nyan's face 
you said you'll come back! Nyan Nyan shouts crying 
there's no doubt..you're pretty! Yuko says smiling 
there's no time for this..let's go! Nyan Nyan says trying to take Yuko away 
i'm sorry..they're my friends..i have to stay! Yuko says while tries to get up 
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says crying 
don't worry i'll be fine! Yuko says and kisses Nyan Nyan 
~AtsuMina~ 
DIE ACCHAN! Jurina says ready to kill Acchan 
Fromnowhere appeared Takamina with her sword "LEAVE ACCHAN! she shouted and tried to stab Jurina
"Takamina!" Acchan says ready to faint 
Stupid insect! Jurina shouts and takes Takamina's sword and break it 
Gekikara got up fast and pushed Jurina away from Takamina,(Chiyuu started fighting to Jurina) 
Takamina fast  went to Acchan 
Acchan! Takamina says crying while tries to help Acchan to get up 
why?Acchan asked 
i love you..i'm not going to sit around waiting while you're fighting! Takamina says 
you're really stubborn! Acchan says smirking 
i'm sorry but i have to come! Takamina says crying
i have to fight Takamina! Acchan says then kisses Takamina and goes to Jurina running 
"Acchan!" Takamina shouts crying 
i'm doing this for you! Acchan shouts smirking while runs 
you deserve better! Yuki shouts smiling while runs 
we'll see eachother again! Yuko shouts smiling while runs t
I going to get you back JURINAAAAAA! Rena shouts 
the five angels jumped on Jurina and pushed her inside the hole that she came from 
"so you finally get it!" Mariko murmured and smiled then she got close to the hole and close it! 
Ahhhh ACCHAN! Takamina shouted crying 
Yuki! Mayu shouted crying and punched the ground 
Yukoo! Nyan Nyan shouted crying 
good bye Chiyuu..my mermaid! Tomochin says trying to hold her tears 
~After a few weeks~
Mayu moved from Nyan Nyan's place just like Takamina who got back living with her mom,Tomochin is still singing and her album was called "marmaid"..they reunite sometimes for dinners
look the people around they don't know nothing! Mayu says sad and then sighs 
you mean that there was a mean angel that tried to kill them! Takamina says smiling 
yep! Mayu says 
everything is so different without them! Nyan Nyan says sad looking to a necklace that seem a clock but inside had a picture of her and Yuko..
Hello everyone! Tomochin says and them sits 
even thought they're not here..i still have hope that they comeback or at least Acchan because she's brillant! Takamkna says smiling 
Yuki can get back..she's way smarter than Acchan! Mayu says stiking her tongue out 
ha..ha..ha! Takamina says pouting 
stop fighting! Nyan Nyan says 
let's eat! Tomichin says smiling 
~After joking around and chatting a lot..they decided to part different ways~ 
Takamina got home she saw the note that was on the fridge *i have to work,there's food on the fridge love you mom* then sighed and went to sit next to her window "wow a shooting star!" Takamina shouted and then made a wish 
soon she heard a noise that came from her garage
no way! Takamina thought and walk to it her heart was beating fast "could it be..my wish came truth!" She thought while slowly walks in the garage,she openned the door and saw a cat playing with the cans of paint
ohhh that was you! Takamina says walks and picks up her mom's cat then something got her attention "there was someone sleeping on her old couch!" 
what?!? Takamina got closer and saw a girl in a pink dress sleeping there her face was covered by her hair 
Takamina slowly took a stick a start to bother her to wake up 
the girl took the stick and broke it 
what?!? Takamina says
the girl removed her hair from her face..
Ahhhhhh ACCHAN! Takamian shouted 
ahh Takamina don't shout! Acchan says while covers her ears and then looks at Takamina who is in silence
what..what are you doing here? Takamina asked
Acchan smiled widely 
Takamina was nervous 
i got back! Acchan says looking at herself and her hands
what? how? Takamina asked 
i run away again but this time i'm a human! Acchan says smirking and hugs Takamina 
Takamina blushed "You came back for me!" and hugged Acchan tigher 
i missed you so much! Acchan says and kisses Takamina all over her face 
but what about the others? Takamina asked 
i don't know..i just coumd think that i wanted to be with you! Acchan answers smiling 
i knew you were smarter! Takamina says smiling 
<Kojiyuu>
Nyan Nyan was walking home then sighed when she saw the store where she used to buy a lot candies for her little squirrel..
"Yuko.." She murmured then passed the store looking other way and kept walking home 
A girl came out from the store and followed Nyan Nyan she was wearing a hoody 
Nyan Nyan stopped walking and looked at the girl Nyan Nyan noticed that she was carrying a bag full of candies
what do you want? Nyan Nyan asked coldly
the girl took a  heart shaped candy and gave to Nyan Nyan 
why? Nyan Nyan asked 
pretty.. girls..like..you..shouldn't..be..sad! The girl in the hood says 
~Nyan Nyan looked down~
the girl rised Nyan Nyan's chin and wiped the tear that was on Nyan Nyan's left eye
i didn't think you missed me that much..i told you "i'll be back!" The girl says 
what?? Nyan Nyan asked 
<the girl removed the hood>
"Yuko.." Nyan Nyan said and more tears came out then she hugged the younger girl 
is this a dream? Nyan Nyan asked crying
no.. i'm here! Yuko says hugging Nyan Nyan then let go the back 
we'll never separate again! Nyan Nyan says 
ever! Yuko says still hugging the taller girl 
<TomoTomo>
Tomochin please sign this for me!  a fan says while she enters to her hotel room 
Tomochin sighed and then signed she entered to her room and threw herself on the sofa
Chiyuu..where are you?! she wondered while looks a photo that was on a table 
Tomochin was falling sleep she felt someone caress her cheek softly 
Tomochin openeed her eyes..she couldn't believe who was there..
"hi..Tomochin!" Chiyuu says smiling 
Tomochin throwed herself to Chiyuu and both fell off the sofa
Tomochin was on top "i missed you!" she said and hugged Chiyuu tighly "i missed you too" she answered and hugged the singer tight
don't you ever get away from me! Tomochin says 
i won't..i want to hear you sing..sing for me! Chiyuu says 
smiling and clapping 
Tomochin got up and started singing  
~Chiyuu was smiling widely~
<MaYuki>
Mayu was walking to her home "home alone again" she thought while walks and kicks a can 
"what a beatiful night but it so cold without you" Mayu murmured and hugged herself ,she was wearing Yuki's black jacket 
something cought Mayu's eye " a fontain" she went to look at it closer then threw a coin 
"hope my wish come truth!" She murmured sad and wiped the tear on the corner of her eye 
what a beatiful night! huh? A girl says behind Mayu 
yeah! Mayu answered not looking at the person 
i like your jacket! can you give it to me? The girl says 
huh? no,it's very important to me! Mayu answered still looking to the fontain 
but it's mine..give it back! The girl says 
huh? Mayu turns around 
"hi!" Yuki says with a smile 
"Yuki.." Mayu whipered and then hugged Yuki 
i missed you too! Yuki says hugging Mayu
where you been? What happenned? Mayu asked 
let's take a walk! Yuki says with a smile 
bkth girls walks hand in hand 
well..we got back those sillies think that they run but they let us go..now we're going to live as simple mortals! Yuki says smirking 
really? Mayu asked 
yeah! Yuki says smiling 
so that means you're going to stay with me forever! Mayu says happy 
yes! Yuki says and hugs Mayu and then kisses her 
"i love you!" Yuki says between kisses 
<W Matsui> 
Jurina chan come here,we got visitors! The old lady says
what is it? Jurina says while goes downstairs 
"Jurina chan!"  Rena says happy 
who are you? Jurina asks 
she's a friend her name is Rena Matsui! The old lady says 
like me..i'm Jurina Matsui! are we relatives? Jurina asked confused
no,we're not! Rena says 
i forgot i have something to do! The old lady says while goes away 
you seem so familiar! Jurina says smiling 
yes..i know you since a long while! Rena says a litte sad
i remember you're the pretty girl from the park when i was younger! Jurina says happy 
"pretty girl.." Rena blushes 
Jurina blushes too 
Jurina chan can we have a walk? Rena asks offering her hand to Jurina 
yes,of course! Jurina says blushing with a smile and takes Rena's hand 
Both walked out of the house hand in hand 
"i always be here to protect you..Jurina and i will Always keep my promise! Rena thought
what a cute girl and she's holding my hand! Jurina thought
smiling 
<THE END>
Comment please let me know what you think..
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: yuukimoko on July 28, 2012, 07:50:18 AM
what I think....?


WHY?! why is it over?!?!?!?!??!!?!?!?!?!?!


it was a cool fic.......thanks for writing it~
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: ohayou on July 28, 2012, 12:01:12 PM
Hahahaha.... I feel bad for being a lurker for so long.....
Well, pretty much through the entire fanfic... xDDDD

I love the entire series~
It's a good story.
Especially love the ending, specifically wMatsui's.
But then, that's probably because I'm pretty biased about that pairing.
Kind of sad though, in a way, the wMatsui ending....
Jurina lost her memory (right?)~
But hey, at least Rena still loves her~
And then Jurina will probably live on loving Rena again~

Great fanfic, cmze-san~
Hope you write something again (like something with wMatsui again)~
I'll keep an eye out for your work (^^)b
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: ichikawa on July 28, 2012, 05:55:41 PM
It ended??!!  :shocked
sorry for being silent reader these time  :sweatdrop:
It was great story  :twothumbs and the ending was great too  :twothumbs
I love happy ending~~  :wub: :wub:

Thanks for writing this story  :D :D
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: mo-chan on July 28, 2012, 09:08:48 PM
all's well that ends well  :stuffed:
I like the end so much  :shy2:
cmze-san fics are the best  :on GJ:
an other fic please if you can  :on gay:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: Megumi on July 29, 2012, 01:04:17 AM
A great fic has come to an ending...
 :k-inlove: They sacrificed themselves because of LoVE!

What a great ending!  :k-wink:
Now I'm gonna run away and cry because of this great fic! :on speedy:

 :yep: :luvuluvu: :k-thrilled: :vv:

Thank you very much!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: kahem on August 01, 2012, 10:38:49 PM
A great and cute end~
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: 25.The power of love <END>
Post by: C@@3! on August 06, 2012, 02:48:50 AM
so pretty, love the fics .. I have read months and now you just gave homesickness I liked the end but I could roll over between kisses rolled over from other couples and atsumina mayuki but otherwise just great  :) :jphip:;)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE:S2!!! CH.1
Post by: cmze on November 08, 2012, 06:36:55 AM
                                THE EXCHANGE 2!! 
                                                  
Well i spent my night reading this fic and then it came.. new ideas so i'm really sorry for giving a second part and adding more fanfics on my list of things to update *i'm really sorry.. i just can't help it, i have to please myself!!* 

                                                 CH.1
3 years had passed since Yuko,Yuki,Rena,Jurina and Chiyuu beacme simple humans...

Yuki and Mayu graduated from highschool and now Mayu is a succesful manga artist "she made a manga based on Angels and humans!" 

Yuki is cashier in a store.Her boss is an old man that likes her because she saved his life once when some punks were robbering the store,Yuki fought them and beated them so the old man as a payback offered her a job as a cashier.

(Yes,Yuki and Mayu still live together)

Nyan Nyan now has her own company of massage and lives comfortly with Yuko who's a math teacher "who ever knew Yuko was that smart?!!?" 

Takamina owns a Karate school,she's the tiny cool teacher xD while Acchan is a fashion designer who travels around the world but still her home is next Takamina!! 

Jurina graduate from high school,she still doesn't remember anything about angels and she's currently dating Rena who became florist and owns a flowershop
they live with the all lady who met Jurina's mom 

Tomochin is not a singer anymore she bought a house close to the beach where she lives with Chiyuu and became a song writer 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuko pouts "those kids doesn't respect me at all Nyan Nyan" she says as she sits on the couch 

Nyan Nyan smirks and soon gives a glass of juice to her beloved squirrel "Easy Yuko,i'm sure you'll find a way to get them!" she says as she seats next to her 

Yuko grinned because she noticed Nyan Nyan's skirt is kinda short "Nyan Nyan!" she called as a pervert and grinning while her hand puts on top of The cat thigh 

"Yuko!" The cat called all red while the squirrel gave her soft kisses on her neck 

Knock!! knock!!! 

Nyan Nyan sighed in relief while Yuko gets up and opens the door 
 
"Yuko!" Miichan shouted 

Yuko pouted "what? why you interrupt my smexy time?"she asked and closed the door then sits on the sofa next to the catwoman

Miichan knocked the door again 

Nyan Nyan sighed then openned the door 

"why that squirrel didn't pick me up at the airport?" Miichan asked pointing to the carelss Yuko 

*Yuko sighed and ignored Miichan*

Nyan Nyan sighed "she had a bad day!" she says looking at Yuko

"i really had a bad day. " Yuko says pouting 

Miichan laughed at Yuko 

~Meanwhile~ 

Yuki closed the store and walked back home 

On her way she heard a girl screaming for help 

Yuki sighed and walked to the source lf the noise 

A guy slapped the girl to shut her up while the other looks inside her purse 

A can hitted on the face of the guy that was holding the girl

The guy fell on the floor while the girl looked around to know where the can came from 

The other guy also looked around but suddenly a pair of legs were on his neck and made him a key 

The guy could only look from the floor at his attacker while she takes his wallet and opens it 

"Why you need to steal? there's a lot money here!"Yuki says as she takes the money and gives to the scared girl 

"Take it,he owes you!" Yuki says to the girl who hesitated first but Yuki insisted so she grabbed the money 

" now take your purse,go and don't look back!" Yuki says with a smile 

The girl runs away

"Good girl.." Yuki whispered as the guy who was hitted by the can gets up 

"you bitch!" The guy says mad and shows his knife 

"Oh a knife,i'm so scared to death!" Yuki says serious but then laughs at the guy's face 

The guy runs to Yuki and tries to stab her 

The girl was faster and dodges every move "okay that's weapon that only adults can use!" she says as she takes his arm with one hand while the other takes his neck slowly asfixiating him 

The guy drops the knife..

Yuki smirks and kicks him with her knee on his stomach several times then pushes him against the wall 

*The guy was knocked up*

"Stupid humans.." She murmures as she walks away 

~Meanwhile~<At the flower shop>

Rena is been feeling a little uneasy all day,she doesn't know why? but she was able to fake her smile all day,she tried to focus on something else so she was making more bouquets to calm her anxiety

"Hello.." A voice says 

"Hello!" Rena replies totally ignoring the person in front of her 

"hey can you help me to finf the perfect bouquet for my girlfriend?she's smart,hot,kind and so many things that i can describe and i totally hate when ignores me!" The girl says pouting 

huh? Rena stopped with bouquet and looked at the owner of the voice 

*Jurina was pouting* 

"sorry! Sorry! Jurina it wasn't my intention to ignore you!" Rena says facepalming herself 

"Are you cheating on me?" Jurina asked pouting cutely goes closer to Rena and presses her body against hers

Rena smiled softly "yes, Jurina i'm cheating you with Jasmine!" she answered 

Jurina pouts and let go "who's that? i'm kick her butt!" she shouted mad 

Rena laughed "Jasmine is a flower!" she says pointing to one of her flowers 

Jurina blushed because she was feeling embarrased while Rena keeps laughing 

~Meanwhile~ (Web cam session)

Acchan pouts "You have no idea how much i miss you! did i tell you that i miss you?" she asked 

Takamina laughed "c'mon Acchan you'll see me in a few days besides you're doing what you like!" she says faking a smile 

"What you don't miss me?" Acchan asked irritated 

"of course i miss you!"Takamina says smiling 

"You're lying Takalier!" Acchan shouts Pulling her laptop closer to her face

Takamina pouted "what of course i miss you but you love fashion too and i don't want you to hate me because i hold you back!"

"Really?" Acchan asked not shouting 

"yeah!" Takamina replies 

"i wanna eat Katsudon with you!" Acchan says a little sad

"i promise when you get back that will be the first thing we'll do!" Takamina says showing her thumb to the cam 

Acchan smiles "my handsome midget!" she whispers

Takamina smiles "why are yoy looking at me like that?"

Acchan smirks and opens the the buttons of her shirt 

*Takamina jaw dropped* 

"Bye Bye Handsome Takamina!"Acchan says smirking by her girlfriend's reaction and she closes her laptop

Takamina was still with her mouth open

~Meanwhile~

"I'm home!" Yuki shouts as she takes of her boots and sees Mayu on the kitchen "Welcome home!" she shouts

Yuki's fast appeared behind Mayu and hugged her from behind 

"How was your day?" Mayu asked 

"boring.." Yuki answered while Mayu turns around and gives her a gentle peck on the lips 

"what's this?" Mayu asked as she sees some holes on Yuki's shirt 

"Ah some jerk tried to stab me!" Yuki answers as she tries to kiss Mayu again but she reject the taller girl 

"what the hell Yuki?" Mayu asked mad 

"upsss!" Yuki says 

"What if that guy really stabbed you?" Mayu asked as Yuki takes juice from the fridge and says nothing 

"And you don't say a thing!" Mayu says more irritated 

Yuki scratched her hair "okay..hmmm what should say to make her shut up?" she thought "oh got it! got it!" 

"I'm sorry... i won't do it again!" Yuki replied not meaning a word of it 

Mayu pouted "you know what? you can sleep in the couch!" she says as she walks to the room 

"so that means you're not going to give my food?" Yuki asked 

"BIG JERK!!!" Mayu shouted and slams the door 

After a few seconds the lights go down 

Mayu gets out of the room "Yuki!" she called 

"i'm here sitting in the couch!" Yuki answered 

After a few seconds the lights got back 

~The next morning~

MaYuki are still mad at echother..
Yuki is watching the news while Mayu prepares breakfast..for her!

MiiKojiyuu are eating their breakfast watching the tv..

WMatsui..

Rena is preparing the breakfast while Jurina and the old lady (from the exchange 1) is watching the tv with her 

TomoTomo are watching tv,Tomochin is resting her head on Chiyuu's lap 

Takamina is walking the street but she stares the news in a electrodomestic store 

Eiji is watching the news while her mom prepares him breakfast 

~Korea~

"Acchan look at the news they're talking about blackout that was last night" One of the staff says

Everyone was looking at the news 

"That's something really supernatural event the blackout was all over the world!" The hoster says 

"All..over.. the.. world" Acchan murmured while Takamina just stare at the tv 

*"No way.." Yuki whispered then looked at Mayu who seems worried* 

*Yuko was serious*

*TomoTomo were also shocked by the news*

*Eiji sighed*

"You got to be kidding me!" Rena thought as the old lady looks at Rena 

"what a crazy blackout! That's really intersting!" Jurona says excited 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: Haruko on November 08, 2012, 07:23:27 AM
a smell troubles... like it!

yeah kojiyuu .. eh atsumina are not living together?! come on takabaka..
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: clubhappy on November 08, 2012, 08:15:00 AM
Yay second season for a great fic :d thanks cmze-san
New troubles coming
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: xxx220 on November 08, 2012, 08:22:11 AM
Yay...

SEASON 2 ....

YAHOOOO
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: hazwani on November 08, 2012, 08:32:00 AM
yeah...SEASON 2...
atsumina  :inlove:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: JuRikki on November 08, 2012, 06:33:08 PM
SEASON 2!!! :cow:

ahaha they are really had happy life, but trouble is coming!!  :panic:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: kahem on November 09, 2012, 01:21:27 AM
yeah season 2!!!!
I want wedding!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: mo-chan on November 10, 2012, 01:27:37 PM
yay!!! season 2  :w00t:
I didn't see it coming  XD
Yuki still fighting like always stop worring Mayu  :panic:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: Chanaline on November 10, 2012, 01:30:33 PM
SEASON 2!!!!!!!!

So cool!! They are funny!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.1
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 09:42:51 AM
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the long fanfic.... season 2 already... great  :roll: :D :w00t: :drool:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.2
Post by: cmze on November 30, 2012, 07:52:29 AM
                                 THE EXCHANGE 2
                                            CH.2

After 2 days..

~At Mayuki's home~ 

Mayu got home after a long day of work and also because she has to pick up Yuki.They're going to meet tge others at Nyan Nyan's dept 

Mayu entered to her room and saw Yuki still sleeping *facedown* "Why you never listen to me?" she wondered as she sits next to her and puts her hand on her head "You're burning on fever.." she says 

Yuki opened her eyes and saw Mayu's worried face,she smirked "I'm fine,i catched a cold!" she replies as she gets up and puts her black jacket on 

"You sure you're ok.. you can stay!" Mayu says as she gets up

Yuki looked at Mayu "I'm fine. " she says with a smile then grabbed her hand and both went to Kojiyuu's place 

~At Kojiyuu's~ 

The TomoTomo couple were preparing something to while Yuko was bussy harrasing Haruna..

"Yuko stop!" Nyan Nyan says as she pinches the squirrel's cheek 
 
"It hurts Nyan Nyan!" Yuko says faking to br crying 

Nyan Nyan sighed then let go Yuko's cheek "what am i going to do with you pervert squirrel?" she asked 

Yuko smiled and showed her dimples "Love me!"  

Nyan Nyan smiled "You haven't change at all in this 3 years.." she thought 

~The doorbell~

Yuko gets up then opens the door,she sees Takamina and Rena sharing eye contact (like if they wanna kill eachother) while Atsuko is smiling ackwardly 

"Why should calm down?" Acchan says smiling tapping Gekikara and Takamina's shoulders 

"Stop looking at me like that midget!" Gekikara says annoyed 
 
"i won't let you hurt Atsuko!" Takamina says pulling out a sword from nowhere 

Acchan looked at the two girls "Where did you get a sword?" she asked nervous 

"Acchan your chest got bigger!" Yuko says breaking the vibe 

"ehhh!!?" Gekikara turns to look at Yuko who pulled out a 
tape measure to use it on Acchan's chest 
 
"Yuko.." Acchan murmuted facepalming herself 

"what are you doing?" Takamina asked jealous and red yelling at Yuko 

"I wanted to know.. forget it too small!" Yuko says grinning and invites the three girls in 

"I'm going to kill you! you can't my girlfriend's boobs!" Takamina shouts as she grabs Yuko by her collar and starts shaking her
 
"Nyan Nyan.. help me!" Yuko says 

Nyan Nyan smiled "That's what you get for being a pervert!" 

*Everyone laughed*

Acchan went to the kitchen with Nyan Nyan to help to the TomoTomo couple

The doorbell ringed again..

"I.. have..to..open.. the.. door!" Yuko says while she's still being shaked by Takamina 

Takamina let go Yuko and goes to open the door 

"Ehh.. You!!" Takamina says shocked because she sees Gakuran

Yuki,Mayu,Eiji and Gakuran entered to the dept while Takamina was with her jaw on the floor

Chiyuu putted Tomochin behind her,while Acchan and Nyan Nyan observed Gakuran

Yuki looked at Takamina "C'mon give her a break!" she says then feels dizzy and sitted on the couch 

*Nobody noticed that*

"Hello!" Yuko says with a smile and greets Gakuran 

Gekikara sighed "Good to see you again Sae chan!" she says as she gets closer 

*Everyone chilled*

Mayu went to help in the kitchen while Yuki observed everything (Acchan,Chiyuu,Nyan Nyan,Mayu in the kirchen laughing while Rena and Sae talking and our favorite midgets fighting because Yuko fooled Takamina) 

"Are you ok? yoy don't look like yourself!" Someone says and bring back Yuki from her thoughts 

"Totally.." Yuki says as she gets up and walks to bathroom but in the way in the hall she fainted 

Everyone heard as something hit the floor hard.. 

"What was that?" Acchan asked 

Rena looked around then noticed Yuki on the floor and carried her bridal style to the couch 

"What happened?" Everyone asked 
 
"Yuki.." Mayu says  worried and toucher her forhead "fever.." 

Rena looked at her friends "i don't know,i found her on the floor.." she replied 

Suddenly Mariko sama appeared..

"Mariko sama!" Everyone says 

Mariko looked at Yuki "That Alexander.." she murmured 

"Did you say Alex.. an .der?" Takamina asked nervous 

Mariko looked serious "I knew that bastard would try to get in this world..again" 

Gakuran clenched her fist

Gekikara looked at Mariko "Don't tell he wants Jurina!" she says mad

Mariko looked at Yuki "He can't go for Jurina because she has a pure heart but.." 

Mayu pouted "You don't know Yuki!" she shouted mad looking ar Mariko 

Yuko looked at Mariko "But that's wrong.. me and Atsuko also have black hearts!" she says 

"But Yuki is the weakest..she doesn't really give a damn about people,she's selfish!"Mariko says conviced 

Mayu looked to the floor and tears tried to show 

"She's not bad!" Chiyuu says 

Mayu turned to look at Chiyuu 

"we don't know where he is, *Yuko looks at Acchan*  he opened a door to a different world not this one but close enough as you noticed with that blackout all over the world .." Mariko says 

Yuki got up but she was with her eyes closed 

"Ehh!??" Everyone looked at Yuki 

"So are you guts having fun without me?" A voice asked as the lights come and go  

*Everyone looks around*

"it can't be.." Acchan says looking up to the ceiling 

Yes,it's me Atsuko *He says laughing*  don't thing in forgot what you did to me rats *he says serious* 

Yuko was serious,Gakuran was also 

Gekikara was still with her arms croseed 

"Let's have fun a little.." The voices says and soon Yuki grabs her head 

"AHHHHHHHHH!" She shouts in pain as she kneals 

"Yukiii!" Everyone says

"Your turn traitor!" The voices says and Gakuran also starts shouting in pain 

"Yuki or i must say Black,you were having a good life weren't you?" The voice says laughing 

"AHHHH!" Yuki shouts and hits her head to avoid the pain

Mariko looked at two girls in pain "He's trying to make them their ally again.." 

"The truth you were bore with your ordinary life,friends, humankind,love peace that's not for you.. come with me and you'll never feel that way anymore!" The voice says 

Yuki's tears came out ad she tries to deal with the pain,Gakuran already left..

The truth the hero thing,do not suit you! that's more for Yuko or Acchan who became stronger than you.. don't they? do you feel the diference between you three?" The voice asks laughing 

"Shut up! how dare you say Yuki is weak! you don't know anything" Mayu shouts 

"Mayu chan..  this girl is what makes you weak and you know it!" The voice says laughing 

"Stop playing with her.." Acchan shouts mad 

"You stopped being interesting and i want my weapon Black back!" The voice says 

"Yuki.." Mayu murnures worried 

*Yuki was all sweat looking to the floor*

Eiji looked around "There's nothing we can do!" 

"Why you don't help her?" Mayu asked to Mariko who just looked other way 

"She's weak,she end up giving up it's just a matter of time.." she whispered

"what did you say?"  Gekikara asked mad 

Mayu tears came out..

"It's just matter of time" The voice says laughing 

Yuki slowly got up "That's all truth,i'm not a hero,i don't really care what happens to this world but there's only one thing i'm sure of I'M NOT NOBODY'S BITCH!! she shouted mad as she punches the floor making a big hole that everyone could see the neighbors of the down floor 

Ehh!?? Everyone looked at the hole in the ceiling 

Yuki fainted and fell back on the couch

Mariko looked around "It's looks like he's nit here anymore!" 

"Ohh Nyan Nyan how we're going to pay this?" Yuko asked

Nyan Nyan fainted and Acchan grabbed her 

Mayu walked carefully close to her Black girlfriend  and looked at her 

"good,It looks like she was able to reject him twice and yours powers are back!" Mariko sama says as she looks at Yuko,Acchan,Rena and Chiyuu 

Acchan looked at her arm 

"Your mission is to find him.." Mariko sama says as she dissapears

Rena looks through the window "Sae chan.." she murmured 

Takamina looked at Acchan "He scaped because of us.."the taller girl says 

"so it's our mission to return him to where he belongs.." Yuko says serious 

Nyan Nyan looked at Yuko with a worried face 

Gekikara sighed "i just hope nothing of this gets to Jurina.." 

"It won't.." Yuko says with a smile 

Mayu looked at Yuki while she was still fainted "i knew he wouldn't get to you.." she thought then kissed her on her cheek 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.2
Post by: clubhappy on November 30, 2012, 08:13:55 AM
Waaah....Alexander is back!!!  :shocked
But Yuki is cool! She rejected him.  :D Good job Yuki, please protect Mayu!
Thanks for the update, cmze-san.
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.2
Post by: kahem on November 30, 2012, 08:22:09 PM
here we an other battle yay!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.2
Post by: cisda83 on December 16, 2012, 09:35:30 PM
great going yuki...

yeah another action coming...

thank you for the story, can't wait for the next one

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: cmze on February 22, 2013, 02:34:52 AM
                                                         THE EXCHANGE 2
                                                                    CH.3

A few days passed after the last chapter :)

~At AtsuMina's place~

"Acchan i'm glad your back!" Takamina says a a she hugs her girlfriend who's next to her laying on bed

Acchan smirked "i missed you too.." she replied as puts her hand on Takamina's hand and close her eyes enjoying the moment

"ahh don't ever go again.." Takamina murmured without realizing

Acchan opened her eyes

"Damn i shouldn't had said that!" Takamina thought

Acchan turns her head "alright i won't go again!" she replies with a smile

"Ehh really? really?" Takamina asked shocked

"yeah why not? besides i want Takamina so bad!" Acchan says as she gets on top of Takamina

Takamina smiles and kisses her girlfriend

As they were kissing Acchan's phone rang

"i'm not going to pick up!" Acchan says between kisses

Takamina was having a good time but she stopped "might be important!" she says looking at her girlfriend

Acchan pouted a little then pick up

<Phone call>

"I need you to come to my house now we need to talk!" Yuko says serious

"Ok!" Acchan replies knowing that must be something really important because Yuko is usually a joker

~After a few minutes~

Atsumina couple went to the MiiKojiyuu dept..

"Welcome!" A happy squirrel says inviting them in

Takamina went to the kitchen to tal to Nyan Nyan

"What's this?" Acchan asks looking at the food then Tomochin, Chiyuu, Eiji and L..

Everyone smiles

"Akicha!" Acchan says with a smile

[Note: Akichan appeared in the first season as a fallen angel but then changed and left]

"I really thought that black out was bad now i'm inform and i wanna help!" Akicha says sure

Accha smiles then looked around "Where's Rena and Yuki?" she asked

The squirrel face changed from a happy one to serious one "Rena says she's out and Yuki haven't woke up yet!"

"Yet? is already 3 days!" Acchan says shocked

~At MaYuki's~

Mayu was sitting next to Yuki waiting for her to wake up "How much energy he took from you to leave you this way?" she wondered sad then looked on her phone a video of them fooling around

Mayu's tears came.out then close the video and put the phone on her pocket "YUKI WAKE UP!!!!" she shouts not standing the pain of seeing her girlfriend on bed

"I SAID WAKE UP!!" Mayu shouted again crying then noticed something strange about around Yuki..it was black smoke which in a blink of an eye disappeared

Yuki slowly opened her eyes "what?" she murmured and looked around then noticed Mayu crying in front of her

Mayu standing there not saying a word with tears rolling her cheeks

Yuki got up "weren't we at Yuko's dept? why you keep looking at me like that?it's irritating stop it! " she says as the jerk she is

Mayu hugged Yuki "i thought you'll never woke up!" she says sobbing and wetting Yuki's pj's shirt

Yuki looked other way "what are you talking about? stop crying.. i hate when you cry!" she says then wraps her arms around Mayu and puts her chin on her head
"don't know what's going on?" she says pouting still hugging Mayu

"You been sleeping for three days.." Mayu murmured

Yuki's eyes open wide "3 days.." she thought "it was yesterday.." she thinks again then gulped [Knowing that something is wrong]

"Stop crying now i'm fine.. i just need a shower!" Yuki lies with a smile 

[Actually she was feeling tires like if she fought more than 20 fallen angels and still feels sleepy hopes a shower changes it]

After showering together the MaYuki couple went to Yuko's dept..

"Yuki chan i'm glad you're okay!" Yuko says happy then goes to measure Mayu's oshiri

Yuki gets mad and grabs Yuko by her collar "Who told yoy you can do that?stop taking advantage of girlfriend you little pervert" she shouted shaking the pervert squirrel

Everyone laughs

"We're glad you're okay!" Eiji says with a smile

Yuki let go Yuko's collar "i just sleep a few hours stop acting like if i was going fo die!" she says pouting then sits and starts devouring everything on the table

"Hey that's my food!" Yuko shouts and goes fighting with her over food

Mayu still knows that something is not okay so she can't help to be worried

Suddenly Mariko sama appeared "Good news.. i think i found their hidding place!" she says as she sits

"what? who's?" Chiyuu and Eiji asks at the same time

"The fallen angels that are trying to bring Alexander back!" Mariko sama replies

"what re we waiting for?let's go!" Yuki says with food on her mouth

"You're not coming!" Mariko sama says

Everyone is shocked

"huh? what?" Yuki asks and gets closer to Mariko

Mariko looked at her in the eyes then Yuki looked other way and sitted

"Yuki and Eiji should stay and take care of everyone!" Yuko says with a smile then leaves with Acchan,Chiyuu,Akicha and Mariko

Yuki clenched her fist

Nyan Nyan, Takamina and Tomochin looked at Yuki

"Oh c'mon let's go to the center and have good coffee!" Eiji says with a smile

Mayu took Yuki's hand then smiled Yuki just sighed and agreed to go with Eiji and the girls

The girls and Eiji were in a coffee shop having a good time..

"Rena chan flower shop is near here right?" Nyan Nyan asks

"Yes,actually is around the corner!!!" Tomochin replies with a smile

Soon an explosion outside had everyone's attention, they looked through the glass how the people run away

"What the hell?" Takamina asks as she gets up to go see clearly,everyone followed her

There was so much smoke but once it fade away they saw three figures standing

"Humankind is so weak and boring!" A blond guy says smirking

"Luckily Alexander sama is going to erase them!" A girl says serious

"now i'm hungry let's go!" A super muscular man says

"They're not humans!" Eiji says clenching his fist

Note: there wasn't anybody around anymore

Yuki step ahead "Easy tiger i'll get this done in a minute.." she says as she walks to them

"Yuki chan!" Mayu says worried

"Look over there, there's a girl coming!" The muscular one says

"Who's that?" The girl of the group asks

"Okay let's do this quick i have many things to do today!" Yuki says with a bore expression as she takes off her black jacket

"What?! how dare you BITCH!" The girl says as she runs to Yuki then tries to puch her but Yuki dodge it then she tries to Punch her several times again but Yuki dodge them all without effort

"i spent three days sleeping and i'm still feeling tired!" Yuki thinks as that girl keeps trying to punch her

Mayu smirks "she's not weak..of course not" she thought

"Akane what are you doing?" The muscular man shouted

"i'm tired of this!" The blond guy says and also goes to attack Yuki

"Watch out!" Nyan Nyan shouts

"huh? what?" Yuki noticed the guy then grabbed the girl and used her as shield,the blond guy was hit on her friend stomach hard that Akane spit blood

Yuki let her go,she was without breath on the floor

"I'm going to destroy you!" The blond guy shouts and muscular guy joins

"muscular..speed" Yuki murmured then kicked his face

The blond guy stopped an  looked at the scene scared "who's..who's.. this..this..girl?" he asked stuttering

Yuki has her boot on his friend face who the stronger of the three"why i always have to fight with the garbage!" she says with a blank expression

Akane got up and tried to punch Yuki again but she dodge it and punched her on her face instead, the blond guy also tries to attack her with the muscular man

Yuki jumps "what a waste.."she thought then she felt dizzy as she landed on the floor again,her vision became blurry and her body feels really heavy

"let's go for her!" The muscular guy shouts

Mayu noticed something wasn't right, Yuki has her hand on her forhead

"what's wrong?" Nyan Nyan

"why she doesn't destroy them?" Tomochin asked

The muscular man grabbed Yuki from the back "what?" she a all asked as she moves

"now is our turn!" The muscular man says

Yuki was still feeling dizzy and this doesn't make it any better

The muscular man started to hold tigher on her arms

Akane smiles "what's wrong? not strong anymore?" she says then started punching Yuki on her stomach then her face several times

Yuki got worse when the blond guy used his super punch on Yuki's stomach,Yuki spitted blood

"Yukiii!" Mayu shouts but Nyan Nyan and Tomochin grabbed her

"i think she's dead!" The blond guy says smiling

The muscular man smirked "let's see!" he says and then started to hold even tighter till the point he was about to break her arms

"AHHHHHHHHHH!!" Yuki shouts in pain

"Mayu don't!" Takamina says grabbing her to not let her go while Yuki screams in pain

Eiiji was clenching his fist "i need to help her,he's going to break her arms!" he says as he removes his glasses

The man let go Yuki who falls on the floor but putted her hand to buffer the fall

Akane kicked her which made Yuki turn and lay face up on the floor,Akane started stepping on her stomach

"AhhhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHH!" Yuki shouts as more blood came out from her  mouth

Tomochin looked other way

"Yuko.." Nyan Nyan murmured sad

Suddenly someone knocked Akane

"what?" Eiji says impressed and so was everyone

"Another girl!" the blond guys says

"Gekikara!" Tomochin says while Nyan Nyan and Takamina are holding Mayu

"Hey! wait a minute who's Gekikara?" Jurina asks as she stays with them in their hiding place

"i don't know what you did to get Black this way but.. I WON'T FORGIVE YOU!" Rena shouts

"Why is Rena there? she could get hurt!" Jurina shouts while Tomochin and Eiji grabs her to not let her go

Rena moves fast and knocked the two man with one punch each one

"Ehhhhhh!! how Rena can move that fast?  and how she knocked those two man with one punch? is that my girlfriend!" Jurina asks really confused

Takamina and Nyan Nyan let go Mayu who run immediately to her girlfriend

Rena looked at Yuki then she also noticed the black smoke around her,Mayu saw it too "it became bigger from this morning!" she murmures scared

Rena looked at Mayu "You can see it?!?!" she asked then everyone came to help Yuki

(At MiiKojiyuu home)

Everyone putted Yuki on the sofa and waited for the other girls to get back

Jurina and Rena were in the balcony..

"Jurina i.." Rena says nervous

"Amazing i didn't know you practice martial arts!" Jurina says excited

Rena scratches her head awkwardly then just smiled

Soon everyone arrived

[Note: Eiiji putted Jurina to sleep]

"I can't believe they weren't!" Akicha says pouting

"Well at least we helped that people on that farm!" Yuko says with a smirk

Then they noticed Yuki state

"What happened to her? Alexander?" Acchan says worried

"You can see it don't you!" Mayu says serious

"huh?" Yuko let out

"That!" Mayu says as she points to the black smoke

[nobody can see it except Rena,Yuko,Mariko,Acchan,Akicha,Chiyuu not even Eiji]

"how can you see it?" Yuko asked shocked

"What's going on with her?" Mayu asked

"Okay i'll explain to you spoil girl.." Mariko says as she gets up and uses a board (don't know where she got it xD)

Like this:

As humans :Rena (+)            Yuki (-)          Acchan (+)        Yuko (+)       Chiyuu (+)
As angels:              (+)                    (+)                         (-)                   (-)                    (-)
xxxxxxxxx.  Gekikara (-)     Black (-)

"The (-) is negative energy and as you can see means Yuki has to much of it so she can't handle it, all her postive energy as angel is absorbed by Black and *Human Yuki..a girl who suicide* so Yuki's positive energy is not enough so she ends up tired because inside she's battling to have control" Mariko explains

"what?" Mayu says shocked

"i explained in human terms for you to understand" Mariko says a little irriated

"so how the orirginal Yuki got into this mess?" Takamina asked

"well as you can see the original Acchan,Yuko,Chiyuu and Rena don't have any regrets they lived a happy life so they let them take their bodies because they're in peace except Rena who's still Rena, but Yuki the original Yuki haven't found peace yet so she's there still..." Mariko says

"You're saying there's three persons living there fighting for taking control!" Mayu says as she looks at Yuki

"mmm sort of" Mariko answers

"so if black or Yuki take control that would mean she would turn into a monster like she was.." Chiyuu says

Acchan and Yuko looked down

Mayu's tears rolled her cheeks as she slowly gets closer to Yuki "if only.. if i only..i could.."

When Mayu was about to touch Yuki's forhead her vision became blurry,she felt dizzy and her body was heavy like if gravity increased so much she end up fainting

Yuko grabbed Mayu before she falls

"what just happed?" Rena asked

Everyone was confused while Mariko only looked at Mayu "could it be.." she thought

~In soemwhere.. out of earth~

Mayu woke up "where.. where am i?" she wondered as she gets up and looks around

Everything was dark but then suddenly everything changed and turned into a big mansion

Mayu got closer to the mansion the door opened by it self, Mayu looked around then noticed a girl looking at her from the stairs

"Yuki chan!" Mayu says runs to the stairs

The girl gets up, she looked a lot like Yuki except that she has a beautiful expensive dress and curly hair

"Mayu chan.. " The girl says with a smirk then slowly gets down till the point she was in front of Mayu then smirked

TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: nik11 on February 22, 2013, 05:58:34 AM
Yay, an update! Thank you!!!  :twothumbs

Poor Yuki, I hope Mayu can save her somehow.

Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Elo on February 22, 2013, 07:04:32 AM
noooooooooooooo what happened to yuki  :cry:

hää where is mayuu is becomes interesting

please update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: cisda83 on February 22, 2013, 09:29:35 AM
Wah... what's going to happen to Yuki...?

Where did Mayu go....?

Yuki's memory, her past or her mind?

What will Mayu do to help Yuki became positive again....?

I can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: qweakb on February 22, 2013, 11:06:41 AM
the story is getting more and more interesting.
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: mo-chan on February 22, 2013, 01:42:07 PM
I WANT to see the  WANT to see the NEXT NEXT NEXT!! XD
looks like Mayu is fallen angel too *o*
Yuki don't get into a monster again T.T
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Chanaline on February 22, 2013, 03:59:53 PM
Mayu!! Is she an angel!?

yah! Past Yukirin and dark Yukirin are bad... It have just Angel Yukirin who is good!! Ah it is going complicate.

Mayu saw Yuki in the past???
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: leEwẬy on February 24, 2013, 07:11:09 AM
WHAT'LL HAPPEN NEXT!!?!?!?!? :temper: :on kimbo: :on voodoo:
I'm so curious  :D
Is Mayu meet Yuki's past? :dunno:
Is Mayu a fallen angle too? :prayers:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Elo on April 28, 2013, 10:07:36 AM
cmze-san please update soon

I love your fics and I want to know what will happen
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Minamiyuki on January 19, 2014, 08:39:24 AM
Time to revive this fic...

PLEASE UPDATE IT NOW~!!!!!!!  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: mo-chan on January 19, 2014, 11:49:16 AM
Time to revive this fic...

PLEASE UPDATE IT NOW~!!!!!!!  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

cmze graduated from JPH!P ><
you should know it Mark o.o
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: cmze on January 20, 2014, 07:47:29 AM
I guess I'm back...where's T?
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on January 20, 2014, 08:04:10 AM
WHOA!!! you're back!!!! I'm gonna pm TD about this later  :w00t:
Oh yeah welcome back!!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Minamiyuki on January 20, 2014, 08:06:56 AM
YEHEY~!!! YOU'RE BACK~!!!!! NOW UPDATE FICS NOW~!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol:

BTW, okaeri....  :) :) :)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: mo-chan on January 20, 2014, 08:07:15 AM
I guess I'm back...where's T?

cmzeeee!!! you're back I miss yaa~~~ *huggs*
gipson is calling for don't worry :D
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: mo-chan on January 20, 2014, 08:08:52 AM
YEHEY~!!! YOU'RE BACK~!!!!! NOW UPDATE FICS NOW~!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol:

BTW, okaeri....  :) :) :)

Mark!! =_=
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: cmze on January 20, 2014, 08:14:36 AM
Thanks for the welcoming..
Calling?  :oops:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Chanaline on January 20, 2014, 09:06:06 AM
Heeeeeee... You only care about T :cry: ( OMG jealousy detected!!!!)

If it were real. Yaaaay you're back!!!! Welcome back!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Haruto Lee on January 20, 2014, 09:52:36 AM
Oh my god!!!! Cmze-san! You are back! Welcome back  :w00t:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: chiqinna on January 20, 2014, 11:39:48 AM
more than happy seeing you again cmze-san!!!  :onioncheer:
here I present you...
T
 :cool1:
kidding~  :lol:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: cmze on January 20, 2014, 02:00:13 PM
 :nervous :nervous

I read a message so  I had to ask....
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Minamiyuki on January 20, 2014, 02:25:11 PM
I resurface your fic from the bottom of abyss...

Please update this... I really like it and the other fic....   :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: BbSis on January 20, 2014, 05:35:45 PM
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG! CMZE WELCOME BAAAAAAAAACK! *cries*

I missed you~~ I hope you decide to stay  :deco:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Shinoki on January 20, 2014, 06:03:36 PM
You're backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!?
:3 ...actually, I have nothing to really say.
hohohoho~ okaeri. cmze-san.
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 20, 2014, 10:14:03 PM
CMZE-SAN.. T^T I MISSED YOU!! I'M GLAD YOUR BACK!! NOT JUST BECAUSE OF YOUR FICS :nervous BUT BECAUSE.. WELL WELCOME BACK!! IT JUST NICE TO SEE YOU AGAIN!! *tears of happiness*~
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: qweakb on January 21, 2014, 03:21:07 PM
Quote
I guess I'm back...where's T?

 :shocked :shocked :shocked

Welcome back  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.3
Post by: Kirozoro on January 22, 2014, 01:19:00 AM
This fanfic is the best, and i found this fic 4 days ago and i finish it

I hope Yuki is fine

Please updatesoon
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: cmze on January 23, 2014, 01:47:12 AM
                                                      THE EXCHANGE
                                                                     4

As it was a nightmare Mayu stood there frozen "Is this person the Yuki I know?" She thought frozen.

Yuki leaned a gave her a sweet kiss on her cheek "What you don't believe in me?" She asked with a smirk. Mayu was still a little shocked till she grabbed her hand and both went upstairs.

"Of course I do believe in you!" Mayu replied as she walks behind her still holding her hand.

Yuki stopped walking "I don't know what did you do to get here..it's dangerous Black can come anytime and I'm not strong enough.." she said looking down in the middle of the stairs.

Mayu sighed "I just don't really know how I got here but I can't lose you again..maybe if we find the true Yuki she might help us to stop Black." she said thinking another posibility.

Suddenly the mansion windows exploded.

"It's her.." Yuki said with an annoyed expression on her face "Stay behind me.. and don't listen to her." Mayu stood behind her and cleared her throat.

The mansion front door opened fast. Revealing Black.

Mayu looked at her with fear in her eyes. She was so different like some sort of manga villain, she had straight hair till her shoulders ,Black tiny shirt, black skirt  and her her eyes had a blank expresion one had red iris creepy enough.

Yuki couldn't hide her discontent and annoyance as she walks downstairs "Stupid enough coming here.." she said suddenly from the floor around Black long crystals came out and cut Black' s legs and arms.

One of the crystals was through her hand but she was still emotionless looking Mayu.

"Why she's looking at me like that?" Mayu thought felling scared but this was like Dejavu to her.

~At Mikojiyuu dept~

Everyone were worried but still they needed to find out were Alexander's ally were hiding so Takamina, Eiji, Tomochin, Chiyuu, Kojiharu and Jurina who was still sleeping were taking care of Mayu and Yuki who unconscious on the sofa.

"Look Yuki Chan is bleeding..." Eiji said worried.

Everyone got closer and looked at it.

"Bring a first aid kit!" Tomochin said to Chiyuu who fast went to get it.

Eiji looked at Yuki "I wonder what's happening there." He thought then turned to look at Mayu.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Black smirked shocking Mayu and making Yuki even madder then got free from the Crystals around that were hurting her by jumping to Yuki.

"Idiot.." Yuki said arrogantly and the floor Black was about land dissapeared. "This is my head!" She said showing her power.

Black showed no emotion as she was about to fall into a Black hole.

"Let see how good you are in the air!" Yuki said arrogantly as more crystals appeared from nowhere hurting Black in the air.

Mayu was observing Yuki "There's something not right about her.." she thought watching Yuki obsessed with hurting Black with those crystals.

Many crystals were through Black' s body already and somehow Mayu feels even more uneasy as she watches it.

"Why this bothers me?? Black is a monster..." Mayu thought closing her eyes as she  remembers all the times Black had her by her neck ready to kill her but never did that.

Mayu opened her eyes fast then pushed Yuki out her way and jumped inside the Black hole that Black was already in... the hole closed itself.

"NOOOOOOO!!!!" Yuki shouted mad.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuki was spitting blood.

"What the hell?" Everyone said scared and tried to heal Yuki.

"What's going on?!" Kojiharu asked scared. "Yuko where are you?" She thought sad.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mayu opened her eyes "Where am I?" She wondered then sat " ghost town" she said looking around.

[Ghost town= Empty city]

Mayu noticed next to her was Black still unconscious then remembered she jumped to save her.

Black opened her eyes slowly, Mayu was scared. "I brought you here.." she said having trouble.

Mayu was confused "You..  What are you?" she asked as Black coughs. "I'm evil but.. I..." she tried to finish but she closed her eyes before finishing her sentence.

Somehow Mayu's tears came out as she remembers since the first moment Black appeared.

Mayu cried out like the day she lost her father.

"Well.. You scaped from me once but this time I WON't allow it!" Yuki said with a smile behind Mayu.

"Why did you kill Black?" Mayu asked as she gets up and wipe her tears.

Yuki sighed "Well it's not fun sharing your body.. poor Black so misunderstand all she ever wanted was to protect you because I'm the real Black here!" She said with a smile.

"You need to find your peace and go away.." Mayu says serious. In Nezumi mode.
Yuki smiled "Do you know that this is my body? They were the intruders.. I'm Kashiwagi Yuki!" She said as her smile fades.

"Where's Yuki?" Mayu asked serious.

"Honestly... I don't know but you're going to help me to find out!" Yuki said as she appears behind her and puts her arm around her neck asphyxiating her.

Yuki smiled as Mayu tries to get free "If you don't come out Little bitch I'm going to kill her. Don't test me!" She said still asphyxiating Mayu

"Hello intruder!" Yuki said as she turns around with Mayu.

The intruder smiled "Hello.." she said.

Yuki pushes Mayu "Now it's your turn to die!" She said smiling.

"Okay.. but I'll let you know, I WON't be flexible just because I stole your body for years!" The intruder said with smile.

Yuki got serious "Such a joker right?" She said to Mayu before disappearing and punch her on her stomach.

Yuki spits blood as she vents.

Mayu was frozen cause the fear. "She's faster and stronger." She thought scared.

"My body.. is suffering now but I'm a supernatural creature so that doesn't bother me!" Yuki says with a smile enjoying the moment.

Mayu can see the Black smoke around Yuki "It was her...all the time, she was absorbing her energy"

Yuki started kicking the intruder "I thought you were stronger even Black was better than you at fighting and she was only your arrogant self." She said enjoying kicking her.

"I know.." The intruder said with a smile looking at Black.

Yuki stopped kicking the intruder and looked at Black who was standing up. "You two set me up" she said shocked.

Black had still that blank expression.

Mayu was confused.

Black wounds were healing, fast Yuki appeared next to her just to receive a punch from the intruder and Black.

Black was punching Yuki's face while the intruder punched her stomach.

"BASTARDS!!" She let out.

Suddenly the ghost town started to destroy itself "REMEBER THIS IS MY HEAD!!" She shouted mad as everything it's destroying itself

The intruder and Black got back to Mayu while Yuki is furious.

"It's time to get back!" Black said emotionless.

"Yeah.." Yuki said with a smile

The two gave a high five and in two seconds they were one. "Why you don't accept you lost, I don't like to waste my time with garbage!" She said coldly.

Mayu looked at the intruder and Black as one "That's my Yuki.." she said happy as Yuki fight with the evil one.

"THIS IS MY HEAD TOO!" Yuki said as she is in front of her "Rest in peace." She said and touched her forehead.

The evil Yuki vanished.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuki and Mayu woke up.

"Are you guys okay!" Everyone asked as Yuki's body is all healed.

Mayu looked at Yuki "Fine.." she said acting cool. Mayu smiled.

Everyone got back.

"Why we always end up with farmers or anything on farms" Acchan asked.

Yuki looked at them.

"You're up!" Yuko says happy. Acchan, Rena, Akicha looked at them "The black smoke is gone." Rena said.

Everyone were shocked.

"What happened?" They asked curious to them.

Yuki told them everything while Mariko sama was in the building meditating then opened her eyes "Watanabe Mayu.." she murmured.

Mayu got serious and looked around like if she knew someone called her name.

~ At the farm~

"Those girls were really nice helping us out today.." A grandpa says smiling as he eats.

A granny smiles "I didn't know Tokyo girls were that strong.. Hikaru you need to eat your vegetable if you wanna be that strong" she says putting her hand on his shoulder.

"Don't touch me... I hate being touched!" He said controlling his anger.

"What's wrong?" The granny asked patting him.

"I SAID STOP!!!" He shouted as he hits the Palm of his hand on the table causing it to  break.

The old couple were shocked, Hikaru got up and walked out of the house as he walks he can hear how the farms burn on fire.

He smirked and kept walking .

~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

(At Mayuki's)

"It was always her..Did you know about that?" Mayu asked at Yuki as both were laying on bed looking at the ceiling.

Yuki sighed "Yeah, she separated me from Black because she wanted us to be weak so she could kill us and live again freely." She replied.

"How Black knew you were there?" Mayu asked curious.

"She didn't know she took the risk, we needed to find eachother you were in danger!" Yuki said then looked at Mayu.

Mayu hugged Yuki "Then what's Black to you?" She asked.

"She's all my bad thoughts, all the evil there's inside of me!" Yuki said serious.

"I don't think you're that bad, I mean Black risk her life to save to me so that mean you're not as bad as you think!" Mayu said with a smile.

Yuki only smiled but inside she remembers all the bad things she has done..

TO BE CONTINUED!
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: Minamiyuki on January 23, 2014, 02:51:55 AM
YEHEY~!!! MY PRAYERS HAD BEEN ANSWERED~!!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic:

Thank you~!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

Waiting for your next update....  :) :) :)
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: mo-chan on January 23, 2014, 04:07:19 AM
this time I should really say:
WELCOME BACK!! :D
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: kenjoy12 on January 23, 2014, 06:49:55 AM
UPDATE!  YAY! :fap

WOW! FANTASTIC BABY~! :twothumbs

Okaeri~!  :D
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: Kirozoro on January 23, 2014, 06:05:01 PM
Mayu got her real Yuki back

And why Mariko calling Mayu name?

What happen to the boy

Please updatesoon
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 23, 2014, 07:17:37 PM
omg thank you so much for the update! :heart: :heart:
i missed this fic a lot~ :deco:
and yay! yuki is back and no more black smoke! :cathappy:
im glad mayu is okay~ but mariko-sama is acting suspicious calling mayuyu's name :shocked
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
Post by: qweakb on January 24, 2014, 01:59:21 PM
I was wonder why on chapter 3, mayu able to see the black smoke?

is that because the evil Yuki wanted to catch her to her/black world?
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.6
Post by: cmze on April 04, 2014, 07:59:49 AM
                                   THE EXCHANGE
                                            5

"Rena I don't remember many things... Why was I sleeping?" Jurina asked as they walk together

Rena smiled nervously "I told you, you were tired!" She answered worried that she might suspect something.

Suddenly cars crashed in front of them Rena covered Jurina.

Jurina and Rena looked at eachother then got up to see what's going on?

"Jurina be careful" Rena says as she can't watch properly cause of the smoke. People were freaking out cause the drivers came out of the cars without any scar.

One of them killed a man that tried to help him.

Rena was shocked "What did just happened?" She wondered as Jurina is behind her.

The two drivers notice Rena presence and smirked.

"Gekikaraaaaaaaa!" One of them shouted "Rena chan!" Jurina said scared cause the guy was coming.

The other driver that was a female also smiled and looked at Jurina who was really scared.

People around were running away.

Rena looked at Jurina "Go hide inside that coffee shop... NOW!" She shouted the last part serious then kicked the man on his face to stop him.

Jurina was paralyzed cause the fear and somehow she feels she's been in this kind of situation before.

The other girl grabbed Jurina"RENA CHAN!" She shouted in pain cause she was grabbing her by her hair. Rena got distracted and the male punched her on her stomach then punched her on her face sending her meters away.

Rena cleaned the blood on the corner of her face and looked at the man smirking.

"Hi!" Somebody said then punched at the girl that was holding Jurina and sent her meters away.

Yuki fixed her bangs while Jurina doesn't believe what just happened.

"So cool!" Mayu said fangirling over her. Rena smiled then run to the man and kicked him on his jaw.

He was knocked out.

"What's going on?" Yuki asked as she looks at the disaster just those two made.

Rena was also confused "The cars crashed and they come out like that... one of them new my name." She said worried about Jurina.

Mayu pulled Yuki sleeve "Are you okay?" She asked.

"I have the little feeling somebody is playing with us!" Yuki answered looking around. "As you thought master." He said looking afar.

"Hikaru those are hindrances please take care of it!" Someone said.

Hikaru laughed "Let the games begin.." he whispered, Yuki was still feeling uncomfortable.

"Be careful with Watanabe and Matsui Jurina!" The shadow said before disappearing.

~At Takamina's place~

"WHAT  DID YOU SAY?" Yuko asked worried while Acchan only looked down "BASTARD!" She thought.

Takamina and Kojiharu were trembling.

"He only knows where he left his seeds... it's my fault for not noticing since the beginning. I always thought she was always an unlucky human girl dragged into all this but there where so many casualties.. she saw the black smoke!" Mariko said looking down

Eiji looked at the tense scene "So you mean their atracction is cause Mayu is master?" He asked.

"She's master of all of them!" Mariko said.

Acchan, Yuko, Takamina, Kojiharu, and Eiji were shocked.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuki and Rena were still looking at the tall building they knew someone was watching them but then don't his/ her exact position.

Suddenly the female driver got up and was about to attack Mayu.

Yuki and Rena turned around.

 "NOOOOO!" Yuki shouted and tried to stop her but she wasn't close to Mayu.

The female driver saw Mayu in the eyes (she was scared) then she stopped moving her fist a few inches away from Mayu's forehead.

Yuki and Don't understand anything and Jurina is still paralyzed.

Mayu steps back scared not understanding what's happening.

"So she doesn't know..." Hikaru whispered with a smirk.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Will be alright as long she don't know.. " Mariko said.

Acchan looked at Mariko sama "There are others like that?" She asked curious.

"Probably, he manage to have a daughter in this world. Don't see Why he can have more chosen one's... of course he can't live in her body, only Jurina's" Mariko explained.

Everyone looked at eachother not knowing what to say.

TO BE CONTINUED... 

Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: achina-chan on April 04, 2014, 08:24:49 AM
Eh?!  :shocked  :shocked

Don't tell me Mayu is Alexander's daughter?!!!!!
 :shocked :shocked

Update soon..... thank you
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: qweakb on April 04, 2014, 08:25:36 AM
Finally, an updated! Thank you  :kneelbow:

Now I understand why Mayu can see the black smoke :D

Cool, the story is getting more excited..  :twothumbs

Updated soon ~ :kneelbow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: gek geki on April 04, 2014, 08:30:08 AM
i want the  next cmze sama
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: cisda83 on April 04, 2014, 11:50:42 AM
Yeah an update after so long....

Great going there...

What's going to happen to them next?

What kind of trouble would they come across now?

Would Mayu or Jurina be able to get rid of him?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: Kirozoro on April 05, 2014, 01:09:03 AM
Yay update!!!

Mayu is the master?!?

Update soon
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: qweakb on April 10, 2014, 12:18:01 PM
I had reread the fic  XD..

First, Mayu is Human at first.. How to say, during the first season she is able to went in and out when there are trap that angle can't do that. That include Jurina.

And in the season one, who is the guy that adopted her if she is Alexander's daughter? Since in the season one 1 it mention that yuki had taken mayu's dad life away for going down to earth.  :? :? :?
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: cmze on June 03, 2014, 04:32:00 AM
                                   THE EXCHANGE S2
                                          6

Mayu couldn't do nothing but shiver.

"What did just happened?" Yuki asked a little scared looking at Mayu while Rena only walked to the woman's body in front of Mayu.

Jurina was trembling looking at the three girls "Who.. are... these.. persons?" She whispered stuttering.

Rena looked it at it coldly "She's dead..." she thought nit wanting to alarm Jurina so she changed her mood "Okay let's go Jurina, we 're in the middle of a date!" She said showing he smile calming the younger girl.

Jurina sighed then smiled  "Right!" She said as Rena comes closer soon the two were out of sight.

Yuki was still serious then she also walked to Mayu and grabbed her hand pulling her with her against her will.

"It's not your fault forget it!" Yuki said serious as she walks pulling Mayu who was sad.

Mayu was still in shock as the scene repeated on her head "Did I felt good about that?" She asked to herself.

~~~~~Few minutes before~~~~~~~

The woman stopped her attack a few inches from Mayu's forehead,.

Everything was quiet like if time stopped.

Mayu looked at the woman in front of her then turned to look at Rena and Yuki who were with their hands extended trying to get there.

"What's this? Nothing is moving? Did time stopped?" Mayu asked to herself.

Suddenly her shadow started moving on its own.

"WHAT  THE HELL?" Mayu let out scared.

The shadow was now standing next to her "Don't you remember me? How long am I suppose to wait?" She asked while Mayu was still frozen in shock.

"I'm Nezumi, I was your best friend till you hit your head and abandoned me!" She said acting cold.

Mayu looked at Nezumi walking around her "We, my best friend?"She repeated confused.

"I been always a loner!" She replied looking annoyed to the shadow.

"Before getting adopted? Who used to play with you hide and seek?" She asked while a few memories got back to Mayu.

A few flashes of her playing hide and seek hit her head the. Remembered how one of the kids asked her with who she's playing and replied "Nezumi"

Mayu got back and looked at Nezumi "You're games weren't fun! You always made me do bad things and you said it was for FUN!" She said mad.

Nezumi laughed "I was playing now I''m serious look she's about to kill you with just one punch!" She said looking at the woman

"What are you?" Mayu asked.

"I'm the one who always have to save your butt... Whenever you're about to die I'll appear to protect you since useless Yuki can do it by herself!" Nezumi said looking at her nails.

Mayu was confused "Who you called useless?" She asked mad to the black shadow.

"Easy... her feelings for you are not real!" Nezumi said careless.

"What did you say?" Mayu asked between sad and mad.

Nezumi git closer to Mayu "Upss never mind.. let's fry her brain!" She said before passing through Mayu's body.

The woman was about to hit Mayu.

"Wait? Was that a dream?" Mayu thought.

"No.."

Mayu heard someone whisper.

Suddenly the woman stopped a few inches away her forehead.

Mayu looked at her in the eyes then she started shouting.

"FORGIVE ME!" FORGIVE ME!" Over and over again till her lips dry and her body became In no time skeleton..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Acchan what's going to happen next?" Takamina asked sad looking through her window.

Acchan hugged her from behind "It will be alright!" She said calmed.

"How can you be so calm in a moment like this?" Takamina asked a little irritated

Acchan smiled "I win nothing by getting like you!" She replied.

"Seeds.. " Takamina whispered.

Acchan got serious " I gotta protect Takamina" she thought.

"I wonder how many people like Mayu Chan are around the world?" Takamina asked getting Acchan nervous.

"Let's not think about that!" Acchan said tapping Takamina's back with a smile t h t made Takamina feel comfortable.



I hurt my finger .. Sorry life gets in the way  but still doing my best :grin:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: mizuratpro95 on June 04, 2014, 11:38:13 AM
This is interesting...........
Please update soon
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
Post by: chiqinna on June 06, 2014, 02:57:34 PM
I guess...I need to read season 2 again  :grin: :grin: :grin:
seems like there's something that confusing me hahaha  :sweatdrop:
about Mayu..hurmm.. I wonder about mayu's past...about Nezumi~~~
thanks for the update Cmze-san~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
take a rest for your fingers~  :D Ganbatte!!  :cow: :cow: :cow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
Post by: cmze on July 19, 2014, 04:49:09 AM
                                   THE EXCHANGE S2
                                          7
In a dark night~

"Catch him!" Acchan shouted in trouble as she's fighting with someone else.

The person in front of her smirked "Give up already.. " he said before punishing Acchan on her stomach.

Acchan knelt to deal with the pain, she spitted blood "NEVER!!" She shouted before punching him on his face breaking all his tooth.

Suddenly someone fell from the sky. Acchan saw her and him unconscious on the floor so she looked up and smiled "Yuko.." she said happy.

"We'll be alright!" Yuko said with a thumb up from a tall building.

Yuko felt someone behind her "Who are you? What do you want?" She asked calmed as she turns around to face the other person.

"I see you been looking for me!" A handsome boy said serious, looking at his clothes You could tell he was a farm boy but no a normal one.

Yuko was shocked "You're just a kid!" She exclaimed pointing at him.

"Don't mock me because of my height YOU'RE AS TALL AS ME!" He shouted irritated before disappearing.

"Eh.. Where did he go?" Yuko said looking side to side.

Suddenly he appeared in front of Yuko "Wh... What?" She said nervous before he introducing his hand inside of Yuko stomach.

Drops of blood were falling on the floor.

"Do you really think you can defeat a monster like me?" He whispered on Yuko' s ear.

"YUKOOOOO!" Acchan shouted and tried to punch him but he was faster, he removed his hand and also was able to dodge Acchan.

Acchan grabbed Yuko "It's okay!" She said covering Yuko' s wound with her hand "Why she's not recovering now?" She thought worried.

As Yuko is seeing everything blurry.

"Some middle class creatures can't defeat me!; He said coldly.

"This kid!" Acchan thought looking at his red eyes and cold stare.

"Who did you call middle class?" Someone asked.

The kid looked around "Who said that?" He asked.

"Me?" A voice said before kicking him on his face sending him away.

The boy was starlet "This girl again.." he thought annoyed as he gets up.

"Gekikara!" Acchan said happy seeing her friend.

Gekikara turned her head "Are you 2 okay?" She asked then looked at the boy.

"We'll see each other again!" He said mad with a scratch on his face then left.

Gekikara looked at her friends "Why she haven't woken up?" She asked to Acchan.

"She's not healing!" Acchan. Replied worried.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>>>>>><<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~

At Kojiyuu' s home.

"What did you say?" Mayu asked getting up from  the couch as Yuki is only there sitting crossing her legs.

"Mayu Chan don't be mad!" Takamina said smiling nervously.

Kojiharu tapped Mayu's softly "I told you already this are free vacations...for you and Yuki" she said.

"Why do you want send us away?" Mayu asked irritated.

"We just thought you two needed vacations!" Eiji said nervous.

Mayu looked at Yuki "You're not going to say anything?" She asked pouting.

Yuki looked at Mayu After some minutes she got up and snatched the tickets from Takamina's hand.

Takamina and Kojiharu were n nervous, they know how temperamental Yuki can be.

"Europe will be nice!" Yuki finally spoke after seeing it from some seconds.

"What?" Mayu let out unhappy.

Suddenly Acchan, Gekikara enters by the Window, Gekikara was holding Yuko on her arms.

"Yuko!"Kojiharu let out taken aback then fast Gekikara putted her on the couch while Haruna was trying to wake her up.

"What happened?" Yuki asked.

"Someone attacked us.. he was on a different level and Yuki is not healing!; Acchan replied looking down.

"Damn it!" Yuki said mad while Mayu onky looked at Yuko.

Kojiharu stopped what she was doing then got closer to Acchan and slapped her "DON'T MAKE PROMISES YOU CAN'T  MAKE!" She shouted as tears rolled her cheeks.

Everyone was shocked.

"Kojiharu!" Takamina said ready to butt in but Acchan stopped her with her arm "You're right.. I'm sorry!" She said sad looking down.

"Go away..." Kojiharu said still sobbing.

Takamina and Acchan left.

Everyone felt bad about it

~Inside of Mayu's head~

"Tell me Nezumi what's going on?"

"Well they know about us and they are scare of you!"

"I'm talking about Yuko!"

"Mmm well that's complicated..  he absorbed her power so if she doesn't charge, she'll die!"

"Well sleeping might recover her"

"Wrong.. it takes a human life to charge!"

"WHAT?"

"SOMEONE HAS TO DIE!"

TO BE CONTINUED..






Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
Post by: cisda83 on July 19, 2014, 05:28:19 AM
Someone need to die for Yuko... who would be it?

What's happening to them?

Would they be able to defeat the boys that do them in?

What's going to happen to Yuko?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
Post by: sastio13 on August 03, 2014, 06:29:09 AM
now nezumi is appears! yeay
please continue it :) Thanks for your update cmze-san! :bow:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
Post by: kymkamwm48 on January 04, 2015, 03:49:43 PM
Oh. My. God!!! Finally Mayu will be cool!!!  :w00t:

but wait Yuki doesn't really love her? what the hell  :?

yeey update soon cmze-san  :twothumbs
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
Post by: crosteks on January 11, 2015, 03:54:59 AM
 :cry: :cry: :cry: Author-san plz..update this this really cool and good story  :cry: :cry: :cry:
 :whistle: :whistle: Waiting for the Update... :byebye: :byebye:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
Post by: cmze on January 28, 2015, 04:59:57 AM
                                   THE EXCHANGE S2
                                            8
"Death.... whenever I hear that word my body shivers." Mayu thought sad then looked at Yuki who was watching something through the window pain.

"Should I say it?" Mayu thought "I don't like to deliver bad news... " She whispered.

Suddenly someone knocked their door. Yuki was still absent minded so Mayu opened the door.

There they were Takamina, Acchan, Rena, Akicha.

"We gotta do something!" Acchan said entering to the dept followed by the others.

Rena only looked the heavy vibe between them it's been a few hours since Yuki was attacked.

"Then WHAT WE CAN DO?" Yuki let out rising her tone of voice and looking at everyone. "She haven't say a word in a while and now she's yelling she is disturbed" someone whispered inside of Mayu's head.

Everyone looked surprised and more weight was added to the situation.

Acchan clenched her fist "I have to save her... " She let out then left by jumping from the window.

"What's she's planning? It will be useless!" Rena let out confused.

"Looks like it's going to get interesting!" Again someone whispered inside of Mayu's head.

"Shut up!" Mayu let out then noticed everyone is looking at her.

"Are you okay?" Yuki asked concerned.

"Yep.. " Mayu lied.

Nezumi laughed inside Mayu's head "Do you want me to tell you a little secret?" She asked.

Mayu didn't respond. "I'll take that as a yes." Nezumi said while Mayu pouted "You can help her." She said.

Mayu shocked in a blink of an eye she was talking to her shadow only. "Seriously?" She asked excited.

"Yeah but there's a little prize you have to pay to bring your friend back.. it's really small!" Nezumi said.

Mayu smiled "I'll do anything!" She said.

The shadow laughed.

(Meanwhile)

In the cold night Acchan was wandering the streets trying to figure out the best way to resolve everything.

"I said it'll be okay." She thought feeling bad about it "I COULDN'T  PROTECT HER!" She shouted mad.

Suddenly Acchan looked around "Who's there?" She asked serious.

"Me!" Someone answered coming from the darkness.

"Gakuran!" Acchan said shocked cause she looked different and scary.

"What happened to you?" Acchan asked feeling all the darkness around her.

"NOW!" Gakuran said as soon she said that two fallen angels appeared from each side trying to capture Accchan.

"Bastards!" Acchan murmured in trouble. One was coming to punch her and the other wanted to kick her.

Acchan grabbed both the kick and the fist.

"Sorry I don't have time for playing!" Acchan let out serious making both hit each other.

Suddenly somebody else appeared hitting her on her stomach making her spit blood.
 While Acchan is bending in pain this girl punched her again k. Her head making Acchan face the ground.

"Who...the... hell are you?" Acchan asked having a hard time with her cheek on the floor immobilized.

"There's no need for you to know!" She said laughing.

Acchan looked at her, She had Gakuran same vibe full with darkness. "You'll be useful Atsuko!" She said made Gakura grab her and carry her bridal style Acchan fainted.

As they were walking Gakuran stopped "What about them Kumi?" She asked to her mate.

"They are weak I don't have time for them besides we have orders to get Alexander's daughter... Jurina Chan wait for us!" Kumi said happy as she walks.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"I can stop it... I can save her!" Mayu said to everyone.

Everyone looked at Mayu.

"What are you taking about?" Yuki asked.

"Trust me!" Mayu said then got out of the dept, Yuki followed her with the others.

After some minutes the end up on Kojiyuu' s dept.

"I'm telling you, I can do this!" Mayu said to Haruna who was all swollen from crying.

Yuki stood quiet looking at Mayu.

Mayu went to Yuko' s room and saw her on bed unconscious.

"Now what should I do Nezumi?" Mayu asked and soon received Instructions from Nezumi.

"Put your hands on her forehead" Nezumi said while everyone looked at the scene trying to understand.

"Leave the rest to me!" Nezumi said.

After a few seconds Mayu started to scream.

"Mayu Chan!" Yuki said trying to stop her but she couldn't touch her.

Mayu kept screaming and blood started coming out from her nose.

"What's going on?" Everyone was panicking mostly Yuki.

After some minutes it stopped Mayu started spitting blood.

"Mayu what was that?" Yuki asked grabbing her.

"Did.... it...work?" Mayu asked in pain and hardly could stand she would collapse if Yuki wasn't there holding her.

Everyone looked at Yuko she started moving then opened her eyes.

Haruna cried even more "Yuko!" She said and hugged her.

Yuki looked in horror at the person she was holding.

Rena, Akicha and Takamina were happy but confused.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"You said it was a small prize, my body burns~" Mayu said in pain.

Nezumi smirked "It was... You brought someone back from the death" she said.

"What happened to you,? You're not shadow anymore.." Mayu asked weakly.

Nezumi laughed "You didn't really expect me to be a shadow inside your subconscious forever?" She asked.

Mayu fell sleep while Nezumi only looked at her with a smirk on her face.

TO BE CONTINUED.

GEKIKARA VS REALLY EVIL KUMI'... WHO YOU'll THINK WILL WIN?

Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
Post by: crosteks on January 28, 2015, 10:32:31 AM
 :panic: :panic: wow that's was a good update  :w00t: :w00t:
 :lol: :lol: Thank's for the update  :yossi: :yossi:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
Post by: Yhuiii on January 28, 2015, 11:04:38 AM
Do nezumi will take over mayu's body ? :dunno: :OMG:  :grr:
Thanks for the update  :hee:
Want more  :ding: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
Post by: RenaChii on May 03, 2015, 03:58:18 PM
Oh god..... It's so interesting!!
Nezumi is coming!!
Need more~
Please update soon :)

Gekikara vs Kumi? GEKIKARA MUST WIN
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
Post by: gek geki on May 03, 2015, 05:32:14 PM
I believe i can fly y y y y y
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.9
Post by: cmze on May 04, 2015, 05:42:24 AM
9


"Eat this! this one too and try all these!" Kojima Haruna said as she puts a lot fruits on Yuko's.

Rena only looked at the scene " I think she's turning blue Kojima san!" she said looking at the poor Yuko trying to swallow.

"She gotta be healthy, she has to eat all this!" Kojima Haruna said determinate.

Yuko was already crying with an expression of help me on her face.

"I tried!" Rena said with a nervous smile then leaves the room with that awkward smile.

"Eat this!" Kojiharu said determinate.

"STOP IT NYAN NYAN!" Yuko shouted.

-At the living room-

The mood was tense Akicha, Mariko, Yuki were talking.

"I never thought she was strong enough to do something like that!' Mariko said.

Yuki got up "I'm not going to let you HURT HER!!" she shouted the last part making Mariko to look at her.

"Yuki chan!' Rena said trying to calm her.

Yuki clearly was mad "Don't you dare!" she said serious the left.

Akicha only looked down while Mariko sighed.

"I gotta go pick up Jurina stay away from Mayu till Acchan comes back and Yuko recover!" Rena said then grabbed her jacket and went to pick her girlfriend.

(At Mayuki's)

"So ypu are saying that i'm really strong..." Mayu asked.

Nezumi smirked "Of course, there's nobody better than me!" she said.

"Why i should believe you? you only lie!" Mayu said looking at Nezumi.

"Because you might lose Yuki chan?" Nezumi says trying to confuse Mayu

"Well she's not strong.. your enemies become stronger day by day while she gets weaker and weaker!" Nezumi says worrying Mayu "She could get killed one day" she continued

"Imposible... she's the strongest!" Mayu replied'

"Really? She doesn't any negative energy anymore which means.. she's weak!" Nezumi said confusing Mayu

"Negative Energy?" Mayu repeated

Nezumi sat "Don't you remember when she became Black, she had so much power she was tiger now she's a rabbit!" Nezumi said "But don't worry you can make her stronger!" she continued.

"How?" Mayu asked.

"Easy giving more of your power like you did with Yuko!" Nezumi answers

Mayu looked "That burned.." she murmured

"Is a small price then she'll be strong and you don't have to worry!" Nezumi said.

-Somewhere else-

Walking to certain cafe.

Once there Jurina ordered two cafes for her and her girlfriend she sat in the nearest table.

Suddenly two girls entered to the cafe.

"This won't hurt unless you want Matsui Jurina!" The girl said with a smirk

Jurina looked at the two " Sae chan?' she said confused.

"Come with us!" Kumi said then fast approached and grabbed her by her arm the two were forcing till one man tried to help Jurina but Sae killed with one punch.

"Who are this people?" The people inside the cafe were scared.

"Don't make me mad Jurina!" Kumi shouted then punched her on her stomach, she was out of breath and fainted.

Sae grabbed her while the people around looked in horror the scene.

"Now we have what we wanted let's go!" Kumi said with a smirk.

Rena entered to the cafe and saw those two and Sae carrying unconscious  Jurina.

"I'm mad..." Rena said looking at two.

TO BE CONTINUED.






Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.9
Post by: qweakb on May 04, 2015, 07:43:02 AM
Omg, will mayu disappear after she keep listening to nezumi?
Is that nezumi power or mayu? What happen to acchan too? Omg...
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.9
Post by: giotuyet on May 05, 2015, 05:01:53 AM
Oh no ! Mayu is selling soul for evil nezumi T.T Mayu please don't listen to nezumi !!! It will be big fight in the next chapter ! I think kumi will win !!! Wait for your next updating  ( hope it don't take so long T.T ) 
Title: Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.9
Post by: vickystar on September 29, 2015, 04:15:04 AM
Please update it. :(