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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Loveforever on December 22, 2011, 09:26:35 AM
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Fixing a broken heart
I’m in love. I Takahashi Minami have finally found someone who loves me for me. Everyone wants to know how it all happened. Well let my untold love story be told. Who would’ve of thought it would be her in the end…
It’s been 6 years that we’ve known each other, going on 7. Throughout all these years, we’ve been through so much together. She has always been there by my side and vice versa. I knew that I loved her because of that, but I didn’t know it would turn out to be a different kind of love. I thought she only sees me as a friend but I guess she sees me more than that. Multiple times she tried throwing hints at me but I was too stupid to realize it until one day I had an interview in Taiwan. One of the fans asked me; “What did you think of the marriage proposal from Acchan?” I was shocked to hear that she actually felt that way about me. I was more than happy that our feelings were mutual. After that day, I spent almost every day with her. Time has passed and we grew closer than ever, she became my first girlfriend. We we’re in love and so happy but somehow I think she was beginning to get tired of me.
Due to the different jobs we had to take, we kind of grew apart. She spends most of her days with Yuko now since they always get stuck with the same job. I always ask myself why Aki-P does this to me. But I guess it’s for my own good, to learn and develop more in this industry. A couple of days ago it was announced that Akb will be joining in with Google+. I was content to know that I can read Acchan’s blog while being away from her. She’s so cute when she updates about me, I feel so loved. At the same time I feel like such a stalker reading her blog every day, hahahahhahah. Then one day my heart sank when I see that she puts hers and Yuko picture as wallpaper on her cellphone. Why not me? Lately she’s been acting different; she acts so distance towards me. I feel so jealous when I see her write about Yuko, slowly I feel like I’m being replaced.
It’s been a week, we’re going to hold a Kohaku singing battle streaming live today. I’m so glad she’s on my team, that way I can spend more time with her. It was really fun. Final performance was up and Acchan had messed up on stage forgetting the lyrics but omg I didn’t care because she looks so kawaii, that made up for it but I still felt pretty bad for her; I can tell by her face that she was really upset that she let her fans down. Everything was finally finished and wrapped up so I decided to go comfort her backstage. I brought flowers in a vase for her, I was happy to give it to her until I opened the door I froze. I opened the door to Yuko and Acchan lip locking. There was a heavy feeling in my chest. My heart is in so much pain. Suddenly there was nothing but the sound of glass shattering from the vase I dropped, I couldn’t believe what I’ve seen with my own two eyes. How could she do this to me? Two people who I loved most betrayed me. I was angry and hurt so I ran out, balling my eyes out. “Wait!”Acchan screamed but I didn’t stop, what was there to wait for? When I know it’s all coming to an end.
The same day I had a phone call from Miichan, the crew are having dinner tonight to celebrate the successful event. Everyone will be there including you know who. I didn’t want to go but I also didn’t want to feel like I’m disrespecting the crew. So I went, I tried to act like nothing happened but I did avoid Acchan and Yuko. The two kept staring; I could see Yuko nudging Acchan to talk to me in private. “Ano..Minami, can we talk outside just the two of us?” she walked up to me and asked. I agree to. “You don’t have worry about me, I’ll be fine” I said before she can say anything. “I’m sorry Minami, but we can still be friends.” She says to me. “It’s better if we don’t speak at all.” I replied coldly, and then I ignored her and walked back in. Honestly it’s killing me to know that she wants to leave, deep down inside it cuts like a knife but I’m too proud to show it. I’m not going to beg her to stay because I got my pride. I don’t want to cry in front of everyone so I decided to leave early making up an excuse to help my mom. I held a taxi in the rain looking for some place to ease the pain. I sobbed and sobbed in the taxi then I told him to make a stop at the park, there I sat on the bench still crying my eyes out. Then like an answer prayer, I turned around and found her there. “Tomochin?”
“Minami…” she whispered my name. “Come here.” she pulled me into a hug. She caressed me tightly as I cried in her arms. “It will be okay Minami, let it all out.” She says moving the hair in my face out of the way as I let out all my frustration. Out of all people, Tomochin was here… I would have never guessed. Weeks have passed, Tomochin has been there for me, comforting me; making me feel like myself again. After practice we would hang out, laugh and play. She helps me take my mind off everything. When I’m with her, nothing else exists. I’m slowly falling for her...she really knows how to fix a broken heart. Her emotional tool cured me. I still can’t believe that I fell so deep and I left my heart so open. I was such a fool but now I’m sure she’s the one for me, so I’m opening it up again. She tore down my wall without realizing it. Today I will confess my love for her.
“Tomo..I love you.” I said holding her hands. “I want you to be my girlfriend.” Waiting for an answer, I was nervous… that she will reject me but finally she responded. “I love you too Minami from the gecko.” She said giving me her beautiful smile. “Eh..why didn’t you tell me this before?” I asked her confused but happily. “Because I knew you loved Acchan.” She said in a low voice. “Now that I think about it, it was not love but lust. But this right here, this is true love.” I said then pulling her in for a kiss, it was my first real kiss, it was wet and sloppy but she helps guide me and laughed at me. With Acchan it was always a peck so it didn’t count. We both kissed passionately, and then she pulls away and blushes. “Minami, not in public. The crew can see us.” “So?? “ I chuckled. “I want our love to be known.” Tomochin begins to blush mad hard and it’s too cute! I can’t take it anymore so I pinched her cheeks.
Just in case you guys were wondering… Atsuko she ended up being alone. She regretted leaving me but I’m glad she did. I wouldn’t have found love if it wasn’t for her. And for Yuko she only came to Acchan as a rebound because Haruna spent so much time with Mariko. But now Yuko made up with Haruna and Mariko is with Miichan.
THE END.
:twisted: PLEASE DON'T KILL ME...I LIKE TAKATOMO PWAHAHAHAHAH
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I like TakaTomo... :luvluv1: but you separated my AtsuMina!!!! :scolding: ARGH!!!! :temper:
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WOW ! TakaTomo! :tama-lotsaluv:
You know what? I like it! :tama-bigheart:
But poor Acchan!!!
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At the end, each pairs end up happily except Acchan.. awww....
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Oh my, at first I tot you are going to write Atsumina then
it became AtsuYuu and somehow this hurts Takamina :cry: .
Then a sudden TakaTomo, feel a bit happy for her.
In the end, everyone is in pair KojiYuu, MariMii, TakaTomo except Acchan, this is sad. :cry: [size=78%] [/size]
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Woah! Nice OS :thumbsup
I also love Takatomo XD
Thanks for the update :thumbup :thumbup
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Thanks for reading guys. I tried to make takatomo cuz its pretty rare. Hehe when I wrote this I felt sad too :cry:
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sorry i dont read all of this fic because my heart hurts T_T you separate my atsumina... but i think its good to make another coupler, nice try.. but meybe this fic could have a warning sign like "takatomo fic" or something..
I need to stand up and clap my hands for this fic, you made it too fast.. that concert was a few days ago!!
keep going :D
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Oh a nice Takatomo ^^
Poor Acchan, being a rebond T_T
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IN LOVE WITH MY BEST FRIEND
"Minami..where are you?.." Acchan stood outside in front of the cinema, waiting for her beloved best friend.Once again she was disappointed Takamina didn't keep her promise to show up on time.
"Sold out! In two more minutes the movie will start.” the ticket box guy announced.
Acchan was aggravated and began pacing back and forth, suddenly her phone rings. She picks it up and it was Takamina. "Where are you!? The movie is about to start!" Acchan shouted through the other line."
"Calm down Atsuko I'm already here, I just can't find you through this big crowd." Acchan was upset. She knew that Takamina was lying because she was the only person standing outside the theater."Wait! I think I see you now.”
"Okay, what am I wearing then?" Acchan questioned her.
"Uh..uh-uh.." Takamina stuttered. She was unable to answer because she was trying to stall time before she got there.
*Sighs* "You always let me down." she whispered before hanging up.
"Hello? Hello!? Atsuko, are you there!?" Hearing no response, she knew her pal was mad at her for lying.
"Senpai what are you doing here by yourself?" an unknown voice called out to Acchan from a distance. She didn't know who it was until that person got a bit closer.
"Oh! Hi Sayanee, I'm actually here waiting for someone...how about you?"
"I was doing some shopping around the area."
"Are you doing anything else today?"
"Not really Senpai, I'm just strolling around."
"Well I have an extra ticket, would you care to join me?"
"Eh! Really Senpai!?" Sayanee shouts in excitement."But what about the person you're waiting for?"
"Honestly I don't think she's even going to show up." Acchan said in a sad voice.
"Are you talking about Takamina-san?"
"Uhn.." she replied with her eyes trailing the ground in front of her.
“Would she mind?"
"No, I don’t think so. I was making her come with me so we can spend quality time together because we rarely get to see each other anymore. But now I don’t even want to see her or talk to her."
"Aw, don’t say that. I’m sure she has her reason.” Sayanee smiled. Her smile was contagious so Acchan smiles too. Just as the two girls made their way inside, Takamina happened to show up at the same time in a cab.
“Eh! Who’s that girl Acchan is with? Somehow I feel hurt when I see her with someone else besides me.This unknown feeling...what is it?” Takamina thought.
“Excuse me sir! I’m here to meet a friend. She just walked inside and she is holding my ticket.”
“I’m sorry but I can’t let you in unless you have a ticket in hand. The girl who just walked in only had two tickets and she brought someone else in with her.”
As soon as the guy told her that, She felt her blood boiling inside of her.
“Why would she ask me to come if she ends up going with someone else! I guess it’s my fault too but still, I made it here after all.”
After that Takamina went straight home. She called Acchan’s cell phone non-stop to tell her that she’s sorry but the calls kept going to voicemail. So she finally gave up and went to bed.
Next Morning at Practice Aki-P announced that NMB will be collaborating with AKB in a performance, so they had to practice together.“You girls are their seniors; please look after them.” He stated.When the announcement was finished, Takamina started looking for Acchan. It was a challenge to find her today since there were so many girls in one studio. Just when she spotted her she sees her with Sayanee and two other members.
“Sayanee your boobs are so cute! Can I squeeze it?” Acchan giggled.
“Sure Senpai! Since you showed me a good time last night, you can do whatever you want.” Sayanee laughed.
“Let’s call you Oppai-chan!” Acchan chuckled giving it a squeeze.
“Ehh..What did you guys do last night?” Milky asked concern.
“We went to see a movie together.” Sayanee answers happily.
“What! Without me!?” Minegishi pouted. “Oh I get it. It was a date! Wasn’t it?”
“No,no..” Acchan replies and blushes and so does Sayanee.
From Afar Takamina overheard everything. “So it was Sayanee who was with her..Gah, why am I feeling jealous? This never happens with any other members.Why is it happening now??? Do I like Atsuko or something? UGH.” After eavesdropping, Takamina decided to just stay away. “She seems so happy with her new friend.”
“You guys want to hang out after practice?” Sayanee asks Acchan and Milky.
“I don’t want to be the third wheel!” Milky pouted.
“Third wheel? It’s not a date Milky. But I guess if you feel that way you can ask someone else to come.”
“Who are you going to ask to be your date?” Acchan teased Milky.“Erm…” she hesitated to answer.
“Maeda-san, do you think Takamina-san will say yes to me if I asked?” she asks shyly turning red.
To her surprise, Acchan was shocked that she wants to ask Takamina. Feeling a bit jealous, she mumbled “Why…Takamina? She’s no fun.”
“What was that Maeda-San?” Milky asked looking confused.
“Oh. I said I’m sure she will say yes.”
“Oh Okay! I will ask her now.” Milky went over and asked Takamina to hang out with her and the other two.
“I guess Acchan didn’t tell her about our quarrel. It will be awkward but I can't say no to her.” Takamina thought.
After practice they couldn’t decide what to do so they went to the ocean to enjoy the nice summer breeze. Still Acchan didn’t say a word to Takamina at all and
avoided her the whole time. Milky on the other hand kept clinging to her arms like they were a couple.
Suddenly Sayanee stopped for some icecream at the stands.“What flavor do you guys want?” she asked, so she can order for them.
“Chocolate!” Acchan and Takamina says at the same time. Takamina smiles at Acchan while Acchan glares back at her.
“Strawberry!” Milky answered last. They sat on two different benches enjoying their icecream. Sayanee on one with Acchan and the other with the other two.
“Sayanee, how does your tastes?” Acchan asked.
“It’s really good, you want to try it?”
“Sure!” Sayanee then feeds Acchan with her own spoon.
“What the!!!!! Indirect kiss” Takamina screamed in her head. “Argh..That damn Sayanee!”Suddenly Takamina interrupted. “Acchan! Taste mine! It’s really good too.” Takamina gestured.
“Um..you guys have the same flavor.” Sayanee chuckled.
Acchan tried to hold her laughter inside so that Takamina couldn’t see.
“Oh.. I forgot.” Takamina puts her fail face on and went back to her seat.
“Takamina-san, I have a question.”
“Hmm? What is it Milky?”
“Ano..Is it possible for two girls to be together?”
“Ehhhhh! What do you mean by that??” Takamina eyes widened wandering towards Acchan who sat across from them on another bench.
“Well you know...like being a real couple.”
“Uh… I guess it is possible if two people feel the same way about one another.”
“Like how you feel about Maeda-san right?”
“What?!” She shouted almost choking then spitting out her icecream.
“Hehe it’s so obvious, I can tell by the way you look at her. Most of the time, your attention was on her and you seem jealous. And I can see that
she really wants to talk to you too.”
“Really? I never thought about it that way.”
“Uhn..you should stop denying your feelings and tell her how you feel.”
“But how do I do that?” Takamina finally accepting her feelings towards Acchan.
“Just be honest.”
“Hey, what the..why am I taking advice from someone younger than me.” Takamina thought. “But I guess Milky is right. That explains all these weird feelings I’ve been having.”she thought to herself.
“Milky, do you feel that way about someone?”
“Of course I do, that’s why I asked.” She blushes and turns away.
“Who is it?”“Sa-sa-yanee” Milky stuttered.
“Oh..WHAT!? Then why are you sitting over here watching your girl have fun with someone else?”
“I can say the same for you” Milky chuckled. Takamina realized she was being hypocritical and face palms herself. “Okay then, in the count of 3 we will snatch both of them away!”
“Okay, good idea!” Milky shouted excitedly.
“3”
“2”
“1”
“Go!”
Takamina grabbed Acchan by her wrist dragging her while she tries to resist.
“Let go of me!” Acchan yells.
“No! I won’t ever let go of you. You belong with me.”
“What?” Acchan seem surprise that Takamina is taking the initiative for the first time.
“Where are we going?!”
"To the ocean.”
“We are here!”
“I meant by the waters!!”
Takamina cupped Acchan cheeks and stare into her eyes. “Look Atsuko, I’m sorry. I really mean it this time. Something came up last minute yesterday; Aki-P assigned me to a photoshoot. And you know how that goes because you have the same job title as me. Lately I know I’ve been breaking my promise to you and I feel really bad about it. I should be there for you more when you need me but I’m never. . As a best friend, I fail but now I want to be more than that. I promise I'll be good to you. It was actually good thing I was late yesterday, if I hadn’t seen you walking inside with someone else I wouldn’t have realized my feelings for you."
Acchan couldn’t help but smile. “It’s about time.”
“Wait…Are you saying you feel the same way about me?” Takamina grins.
“It doesn’t take a genius to figure that out.”
“Huh! So, you’ve been liking me for a while now?”
“Gosh, Takamina. You baka! I tried hinting you for the last 6 years. How stupider can you get?” Acchan chuckled.
“Oh” Takamina chuckled. “So,does this mean you’re my girlfriend now?”
“No.”
“Acchan!” Takamina whines.
“I’m just kidding of course I am, if you ask the proper way.”
“Grrr,Why do you always have to be so complicated?”
“If you don’t like it, you can run away now before things get even more complicated.” Acchan laughed.
“No..no it’s fine! I love my tsundere princess the way she is.” Takamina pulls acchan into an embrace.“But you have to stop grabbing oppai-chan breast, promise?”
Acchan just laughed really hard. “I did that on purpose, I seen you walking by when I did that.”
“You brat!!!” Takamina starts chasing Acchan around until they got tired.
Now Takamina and Acchan are sitting by the waters, the sun was about to set. It was such a romantic atmosphere, they watch as couples were walking by hand in hand.
“Should we hold hands to?” Acchan hesitated to ask. Takamina suddenly intertwined her fingers with Acchan.
“It’s almost time.”
“Time for what?” Acchan asked confused.
“For the tide to change. It's a little ritual, I have to watch the high tide change whenever something major is about to change in my life.“
When Acchan heard those words from Takamina she blushed like there is no tomorrow.
The tide finally changes and Takamina leaned in for her first kiss.
“Wait..I don’t know how.” Acchan pouted.
“Shh..I’ll teach you.” Takamina put her lips onto her girlfriends mouth to shut her up.
END.
Atsumina is back! :nervous
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“Wait..I don’t know how.” Acchan pouted.
“Shh..I’ll teach you.” Takamina put her lips onto her girlfriends mouth to shut her up.
Gah!! :on lol: I'm rolling on my bed imagining this scene.. Kyaaa!!!! :mon lovelaff: Taka you so bold!!! :mon lol:
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Oh! This OS is so gud :D
Gotta Thanks Milky and Sayanee for that XD
Takamina as clueless as ever about Atsuko's feeling :)
I love the last part :wub:
Thanks for the Update :grin:
It's so gud! :thumbup
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Man, Taka fails in almost everything: lying, reading hints.. well, except one: "teaching" :lol:
Any chance you'll write SayaMilky's part after Milky snatched Sayanee away? I'm a bit curious about that one... :grin:
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“Wait..I don’t know how.” Acchan pouted.
“Shh..I’ll teach you.” Takamina put her lips onto her girlfriends mouth to shut her up.
Gah!! :on lol: I'm rolling on my bed imagining this scene.. Kyaaa!!!! :mon lovelaff: Taka you so bold!!! :mon lol:
jaja me too.. come takaboy kiss your wifey like a boss :D
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love this fics.... :yossi:
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Man, Taka fails in almost everything: lying, reading hints.. well, except one: "teaching" :lol:
Any chance you'll write SayaMilky's part after Milky snatched Sayanee away? I'm a bit curious about that one... :grin:
lol I don't really know much about them, i was only planning to use them as side characters hehe. but maybe i'll give it a try. :nervous
ps. - thanks for reading guys !i'm glad you enjoyed it :grin:
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Yay awesome kohai!!!
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I know it's a little bit early but happy valentines day just in case i won't be on here :nervous
"Unexpected feelings"
“Looks like Acchan found her a new midget to play with.” Miichan chuckled.
Takamina glanced over to the two girls who were acting silly backstage, having fun getting scolded by none other than their producer Akimoto Yasushi.
“Why are you telling me this? Like I care.” Takamina replies, showing that she’s irritated.
“Those two have been spending a lot of time together lately, aren’t you going to do something about it?”
“What for?”
“Seriously, Takamina. Why did you turn her down? When you know exactly how she feels about you.”
“Shut up! It’s none of your business!” she shouted with an annoyed face.
“Calm down, why all of a sudden you’re so worked up?”
Takamina didn’t respond but just stared disappointingly at the ground.
“Eh! Don’t tell me you’re getting jealous! ” Minegishi teased.
“Why would I be !?!?!” she shouted back.
“Hahah chill out Bakamina, you’re such an idiot to not realize your own feelings by now.” She smiled and walked away to join the other two girls.
“Psh.. that brat doesn’t know what she’s talking about.” Takamina muttered.
*Flashback*
“Just go and confess to her, I’m sure she likes you too.” Mariko suggested to Acchan .
“Are you sure I should? I don’t want to scare her away.”
“Don’t worry, I’m rooting for you! And if she breaks your heart, I’ll break her face.”
“Mariko!!!” Acchan wailed.
“Hehe, you know I’m kidding. But imagine if that midget tries to kiss you. She’ll have to tip toe, hahahaha.”
“Don’t say such things!” her face starts to heat up.
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“I… I..”
“I, what?” Takamina smiles waiting for Acchan to say what she wanted to say.
“I .. like you Takamina.” She quickly answers shyly turning away.
“Haha of course you do. I’m your bestfriend! I like you too.” Takamina laughed.
“No, not like that..”
Takamina scratches the back of her head, feeling a bit confused.
“I like you more than a friend, please accept my feelings.” Acchan says without any hesitation.
Suddenly there was a long pause between the two.. The room was quiet; Acchan heard nothing but the sound of her own heartbeat, thumping loudly and hard. Slowly it decreases when she heard those 4 unbearable words.
“Gomen ne, Acchan. I can’t.”
Tears swelled up in her eyes, as a single tear drop falls onto her cheek. Takamina can see the pain shooting from Acchan’s eyes. She looked away because she couldn’t stand to see her bestfriend hurt. Especially knowing she’s the reason behind it.
“Can you look me in the eyes and tell me that you don’t feel the same way Takamina?”
“Look Acchan, I can’t think about love right now. We have our career to look forward to.”
“But, honestly.. How do you feel about me?” she sniffle her nose trying to hold back her tears.
“I can’t say that I don’t like you, but I’m not sure of my feelings either.” Takamina tries to say it in a non-harsh way.
“I’ll give you some time to think about it.. I won’t give up that easily. I promise I won’t give up on you.” She says confidently. “I will win you over, someday.”
*Flashback ends*
“Ne, Yuko.. Valentine’s day tomorrow, what are you getting for Nyan Nyan?”
“I’m going to make honmei chocolate!” she grins widely.
“Eh, me too! There’s nothing better than chocolate from the heart.” Miichan smiles.
“What about you Acchan?”
“I don’t know what to get her…”
“Hey, why don’t you save some money and make honmei chocolate with us.” Yuko suggested.
“That’s a great idea!” Miichan shouted in joy.
“But, I don’t know how to make it..”
“Don’t worry, we’ll teach you how.”
After a photo-shoot session, the three girls went to the 7/11 convenience store to buy ingredients and supplies. They decided to make the chocolate at Acchan’s apartment since she lives close by. 2 hours has passed and they finally finished. After all they kept messing up batch after batch.
“Ah, I feel accomplished.” Acchan says proudly setting the heart boxed chocolate on the counter.
“Yeah, I’m exhausted.” Miichan adds.
*Knock knock*
“Eh..who could that be? Yuko can please get the door while I use the bathroom?”
“Sure.”
“Ohayooooo!” Mariko barged in without any invitation. Miichan quickly hid the chocolate she made for her underneath the kitchen counter and runs into Acchan’s bedroom.
“Mariko, what are you doing here so sudden?”
“What do you mean? I can’t be here?” She trolled. “I came here to hear the good news.”
“What good news?”
“Takamina and Acchan of course.” She chuckled.
“Oh..you didn’t hear about it?”
“Nani nani!?”
“Um..Takamina rejected her. She didn’t tell you about it? She’s really heartbroken about it but she vows not to give up…” she whispers loudly enough for Mariko to hear.
“WHAT!?!?!” Mariko shouted. “That unpleasant child!” Mariko was upset because she felt like she was responsible for it.
“Is that the honmei chocolate made for Takamina?” She asked Yuko pointing to the kitchen counter.
“Yeah, cool isn’t it?”
“Yeah..” Mariko snickered evilly.
With Yuko finishing up her chocolate for Kojiharu, Acchan still using the bathroom and Miichan hiding in the bed room...Mariko took the chance to tamper with Takamina’s chocolate, while nobody’s paying attention.
Meanwhile across town…
“Takamina, are you getting anything for Acchan?” Haruna asks.
“Why? Do I have to??!” she shouted back. “You guys have to stop teasing me about her! I don’t like her!!!”
“Well I thought because she’s making you honmei chocolate, you will be giving her something to..”
“Huh? How do you know about this?”
“Miichan told me because she’s making some for Mariko.”
“Honmei..chocolate? If I accept that, wouldn’t it mean I’ll be accepting her feelings?”
“Uhn..”
“I can’t accept it then..”
“Why not?”
“Because..I don’t know how I feel about her yet; I don’t want her hurt again because of me. It’s best if I try to avoid her tomorrow.”
“ I see… wait here for a minute I gotta make a phone call.”
“ok”
Haruna runs off to make a phone call to Yuko. “Are you with Acchan right now?”
“Yeah, why?”
“Takamina says she won’t accept her chocolate, do something about it Yuuchan!”
“Hai hai, I’ll think of a plan but promise you will cooperate.”
“If it means my friends happiness then yes I will.”
“Jaa, see you tomorrow then.”
Next day.
“Yo Takamina!”
“What do you want now Yuko?” she asked aggravated.
“Acchan’s a nice girl, don’t you think?”
“Yeah, and your point is?”
“You don’t mind me asking her out do you?”
Takamina was shocked.. Her eyes widened in dissatisfaction, all of a sudden she had an unfamiliar feeling within her. Her chest abruptly tightens up. “What is this feeling?” she thought to herself.
“Go ahead! Why are you asking me for!?” she yells back furiously.
“Are you sure? If so..that’s good, I can have her all to myself now.”
“Of course, I’m sure! It’s not like I will ever like her or anything!” she screamed facing the other way trying to hide her jealousy rage.
Out of nowhere there was an awkward silence.. all you can hear was something that fell to the ground. It was a chocolate box. Unexpectedly Acchan was standing behind Yuko with the box in hand ready to hand it over, but when she heard everything.. she ran off and started crying.
“Acchan! Wait, I can explain!” Takamina picked up the box and start running after her.
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“So this was your plan all along?” Haruna asked Yuko.
“Yeah, it worked didn’t it?”
“For a second I was scared of losing you to Acchan.” Haruna chuckled.
“No, never...you’re the only one I’m after.” Yuko smiles sheepishly.
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“Acchan! Wait! Acchan!!!” Takamina finally caught up to her and pulled her into a hug from behind.
“No, don’t.. You don’t need to. I heard everything already… from now on, I’ll give up on you.” She says trying to catch a breath from crying.
Takamina felt a sharp pain in her chest… “WHAT IS THIS!? WHY AM I FEELING THIS WAY!?” her conscious shouted. It took her a minute but then it hit her..it made her realize some things.
“No…please don’t give up on me.“ Takamina build up the courage to say..and begins to sob also.
Acchan was stunned by her reaction. “Does this mean she’s finally accepting my feelings?” she thought to herself.
“I love you Acchan..” Takamina made her face her way, and planted a valentine kiss on her lips.
Acchan pushes her off and yells at her.. “I can’t believe you made me work so hard for this!” she slightly punches Takamina chest with both hands.
“Gomen! Gomen, is this how you treat the person you like?” Takamina smirked.
“Shut up..if you want to make it up to me..eat my honmei chocolate right now.”
“Is it okay if I run to the store to get some pills first?” Takamina teased.
Acchan made a stinky face at her.
“Fine fine..”
Takamina opens up the box and on that heart shape chocolate, the frosted word “Stupid Midget” was written on it. They both looked at each other confused and started laughing like crazy.
“DAMN THAT MARITROLL!!!” :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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Gotta love that Maritroll! :grin:
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Instead of words written on the chocolate as Happy Valentine Day it turns out to be Stupid Midget. Nice troll from Mariko to punish Takamina.
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Good Job Mariko sama :thumbsup
Thanks for the fic! :D
I like it~~ XD
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Hahahaha Mariko!!!!
Good job Yuko!
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ATSUMINA! :gmon nya: Lol, Another Misunderstanding.. But, SOLVED by Takamidget! :tama-lotsaluv: Btw, Nice Fanfics there 'Love Forever'! I'll wait for your upcomind updates! :hee:
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Hello everybody! I was inspired by the song "Wedding dress" by Taeyang or Kevin you could say.. AND THESE AKBINGO PICTURES. Ignore the black bold letters.. they're just the lyrics of the song. :roll:
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"WEDDING DRESS"
“Acchan look!” Yuko shouted to me across the living room and into the kitchen where I stood.I was trying to fix something to eat for Nyan Nyan and Miichan at the time but I guess they can wait.
“Hurry, before you miss it!” Miichan yelled over at me again.
“Okay, okay. I’m coming.” I rushed to the living room.
On the TV headline news: “Takahashi Minami, former member of the all-girl group band AKB48 is rumored to get married this Saturday. Longtime boyfriend
Jacob Greenwood (Joy-san) Japan’s most handsome model proposed to her 2 weeks ago. So why the rush? Want the scoop? Stay tune.”
Am I dreaming? Is this really happening? Inside it’s tearing me apart little by little. It felt like something just pierced through my heart. But I have no one to blame but myself.
*Flashback*
(Two years ago)
“Atsuko... I made up my mind.”
“About what? Minami.”
“I’ve decided I want to become a solo artist.”
“Ah,souka! that’s great news. I know Aki-P will love to write songs for you!” I smile sweetly to her.
“No..Atsuko, I mean solo as in not being in AKB anymore.”
“What..why??”
“Because… I want to fulfill the dream that my mother always wanted. Not just for her but for me too.”
“Minami…”
“Hmm? Why is that you don’t look so happy for me..”
“I am…but.”
“But what?”
“We won’t get to see each other much anymore.”
“That’s why I’m here.. to ask you to graduate with me Atsuko. That way you can also follow your dream to become an actress and we can finally be together with no rules.”
“Minami..I-i..”
“Atsuko, Please say you will..”
“I’m sorry Minami...I can’t. AKB is my second family.”
*Flashback ends*
“Acchan...are you okay?” Yuko asks me snapping me out of my trance.
“Uh..Of course I am.” I lied to them but in reality I’m dying inside.
“Hey did you guys get the text for Minami too?” Nyan Nyan asks all of us.
“Yeah, I did..” Miichan and Yuko answered.
“Check yours Acchan, I’m sure she texted you too.” Yuko said to me.
“Hai..” I hesitate to open up the text.
Text Message
To: Acchan//Yuko//Miichan//NyanNyan
Subject: Forward text
Guys I’m sorry it’s last minute
but I would like to invite you guys
to my wedding, this Saturday.
I would have personally invited you
in person but my schedule is tight.
So I’m sorry, please forgive me. xD PLEASE.
When I read the text, I felt my heart stop. Why is it hurting me so much? Did I make the right choice to choose my career over love? Seems just like yesterday we we’re together but now everything has changed. I broke her heart... I’m beginning to feel regret. Sometimes I still sit here and wonder, what if. Do you know that saying “You never know what you have until you lose it, and once you lose it, you can never get it back.” Well I’ve never imagined this happening to me in a million years but it is.
Baby all the times we've had, I've kept my feelings wrapped. I’ll always ask myself, how did I lose her heart. Your love was in my reach, but now, far far far gone. I never thought that I would fall fall fall this hard.
My heart can’t handle it anymore looking at that text. Just when I was about to set the phone down, the phone rang. I couldn’t move when I seen the caller ID. I just stood there staring at it ring.
Caller ID: Minami
“Acchan talk to her. Pick up your phone!” Miichan yelled at me. So I pick it up.
“Moshi moshi Atsuko.”
“Minami...”
“Ah, Atsuko! I miss you so much. Do you know that?”
“It’s because you never call.” I said to her in disappointment.
“Owh, Gomen! I’m just too busy these days. Ne do you miss me at all?”
“…… Why would you ask such a question, when you know the answers to it.”
“Ha..I don’t know? People change you know. Well… I called to ask you something.”
“What is it?”
“Would you do the honors of singing and playing the piano at my wedding?”
“I..i . ca-” I stutter
“Please… It would mean a lot to me coming from you.”
“Uh..okay.” I agree to but really I didn’t want to be at the wedding at all.
“Thanks so much Atsuko! I’ll see you then.”
*Hangs up*
I was afraid to tell you all the feelings in my heart. Thinking that if I told you, you and I would fall apart.I hesitated, and now our love is breakin'.'Cause you moved on and I'm still waiting.
Saturday is here… I’m riding to the wedding in a cab with Miichan, while Nyan Nyan and Yuko were already there first as bridesmaids.
“Atsuko, are you sure you’re okay?” Miichan asks me again.
“Why? Do I not look okay?”
“You don’t have to do this if you can’t go through with it.”
“No..I want to. I wasn’t there for her before but now I want to at least do something right for her.”
“You sure are strong Acchan, and for that I look up to you a lot.”
“What do you mean?”
“You can lie to everyone else, but you can’t lie to your own heart.”
“Let’s not talk about this right now. Let’s go inside, they’re waiting.”
Baby He won't ever love you like I do. Cause you should be my lady. I waited for so long to say to you. (Come back to me) It was so perfect in my dreams. Don't you know that I will always love you forever? But baby when those church bells ring, you know I wanted us to be there together.
We arrived at the church now, right away I went into my position near the alter. The groom has already made his way down the aisle waiting for his bride. I start to play the wedding theme song.. Finally the moment that everybody has been waiting for..the most gorgeous bride ever made her way down the aisle. That smile I’ve been longing for is now right in front of me. She looked so beautiful in that white dress. Just as expected, she hasn’t change a bit. She has a bow on her head... seeing that makes me happy. But then I think to myself…that should of been me holding her hands..that should of been me making her smile.. Is it too late now???
Now you're in your wedding dress. Now you're in your wedding dress. (How can he be the one) Now you're in your wedding dress. Now you're in your wedding dress.
“Do you take this woman to be your lawful wedded wife?”
“I do.”
“And do you take this man to be your lawful wedded husband.”
“I..” Minami hesitates. Before she finishes up her sentence, she glanced at me. Should I be happy about it? I don’t know. Does she still have feelings for me? Because I still do.
“I d---“
“PLEASE DON’T SAY I DO.” I got up from my seat and yelled from the top of my lungs.
“Wh-what is this? Take this woman away.” The groom yells to the security to escort me out.
“Wait! Keep your position…I want to hear what she has to say.” Minami yelled at the guards.
“Minami…I didn’t want to want you. I didn’t want to love you. I didn’t want to need anyone. But now look what you’ve done, I can’t go on without you. I can’t fake it anymore… I made a huge mistake 2 years ago for ever letting you go. I’m not going to make that same mistake again. Please come with me Minami.” I reached out my hands for her. The crowd such as the paparazzi, family and friends were all shocked. Never did anyone probably thought the face of AKB “Maeda Atsuko” would deliver such a message, not only that… her sexual orientation was revealed. But it didn’t matter me. What matters to me the most right now is being with the love of my life, regardless of gender.
“So what will it be Minami?” I yelled out to her again.
My heart felt like someone squeezed the juice out of it when she didn’t reply. She just looked at me with tears and confusion in her eyes. I made such a fool out of myself; I guess I am too late... Now I’m walking away.. Just when I was about to step out the church door… I heard heels clicking at the ground making its way closer to me.
“Atsuko!” She ran dragging her long wedding dress. “I thought you’d never ask.” She said to me and smile.
“I’m sor-” Before I could finish up my sentence, her lips met mine…closing the gap between us. I couldn’t help but grab her body closer to me.. I replied to the kiss, making it deeper and more passionate. Then she pulls back.
“Let’s get out of here.” Minami lifts me off my feet carrying me out bridal style.
“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?”
LOLOLOL :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:
THE END.
Not so good but i tried.. sowwie! :cry:
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Thx for fic. It's ok, u know~
but I got troll from you in your first fic.
don't write takatomo again pls XD XD
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Is good as there is a happy ending for Minami and Acchan. ^^
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“Let’s get out of here.” Minami lifts me off my feet carrying me out bridal style.
“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?”
Hahaha.. I'm laughing so hard at the ending.. :lol: This is good.. :twothumbs
taka in a wedding dress is just... :inlove: and I want Acchan in a tux now!!! XD
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jajaaj the final takaboy!! as always carrying her wifey like a boss.. maybe a omake would be fine :D
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Omg! I wonder how can Takamina carrying her wife with long wed dress !xD Lol i think haruko's right , u should make a okame !
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GYAAAAAAHH!!
NICE JOB :) :thumbup
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Takamina in wedding dress is truly gorgeous~ :wub:
Glad that Acchan was honest to her feelings at the last moment~ :D
LOL~ :lol: the last part~ It was Minami carrying Acchan~ XD
Thanks for the fic~ :thumbsup
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Sweet fic...
“Let’s get out of here.” Minami lifts me off my feet carrying me out bridal style.
“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?”
LoL in this case Taka is the man ROFL!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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I love this fic~!!! :luvluv1: saikou!!
Can't stop laughing imagine how Minami carried Atsuko in her weeding dress :hiakhiakhiak:
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“Eh.. Aren’t I supposed to carry you?”
Hahaha!!! It killed me hahaha!!
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FATED TO LOVE YOU.
Chapter 1
On my desk I watched as the clock slowly tick to 2:25, just 5 more minutes and I’m out of here! God why does time seems so much slower? Usually I’m okay with waiting...but because she’s not in class today I was really anxious to leave the school premises. She never misses a day of school. I wonder why she’s not here today, is she sick? Could something bad had happen to her? All I can do now is worry until I see her again. That way it will set my heart at ease. By the way I’m Takahashi Minami, 17 years of age and a senior in Chiba High. I’m shy, I don’t talk much so I’m not really not well known in this school but I do have two good friends, Minegishi Minami and Oshima Yuko. Those two are very much lively compared to my dull personality, which makes me the odd one out. The bell finally decides to ring, but before Mariko sensei can dismiss us I already zoomed out of the door. “Takahashi!! Just for that, tomorrow you’re going to stay an extra five minute!!” I heard her yell as her voice slowly fades away from the distance. Ah oh well…as long as I know she’s okay then I’m fine with staying after.
She doesn’t start work until 3. What am I going to do for the next 30 minutes??…I guess I can go wait at the diner where she works at like I usually do after school every day. It’s been a daily routine for me now but I never get tired of seeing her beautiful face. And every time she smiles, it makes my heart skip a beat. I sit at my usual table with my face buried into a book. “Ah! Maeda-san! Good thing you’re early today, the diner is getting busy. Here throw this apron on.” Her boss shouts with eagerness. Yes! She’s here! But why are her eyes so red..did she cry? Did someone do something to her? “Hai..” She replies with sad tone. That’s Maeda Atsuko, the most gorgeous and popular girl in school. She’s very easy on the eyes as you can tell. Her shoulder length hair compliments the depth of her face and light tan skin complexion. Yes, she’s the girl I’m in love with…too bad she doesn’t ever notice me. Believe it or not I haven’t spoken to her since we were five. I know it sounds like I’m a stalker but I’m totally not! I swear! Well maybe a little. I just haven’t got the courage to speak to her.. “Oi Takamina! What a coincidence that you’re here. Let us sit with you!” Two loud mouth girls barged into the door of the diner. “Oh! Hi Acchan!” They both greeted her..”Hi Miichan, Hi Yuuchan” she puts on a fake smile. Inside I know she’s hurting and I want to know the reason why… “How come you weren’t in school today?” Miichan asked in a curious tone. “Um..just ..” Atsuko hesitated.. “Just some little family issues, that’s all.” “Do you want to talk about it?” “Neh, not really..I’ve got to get to work so talk to you later?” “Yeah sure! If you need a shoulder, I can lend mine to you anytime.” Miichan smiles. Darn the gachapin! Why does she always know the right thing to say..why do I have to be so pathetic and not talk to her..I want to be the one to make her days brighter; I want to be the one she comes to talk about her problems.
“Takamina, don’t you ever get tired of coming here?” Yuko asks. “Of course not I have to have my delicious katsudon, they make the best ones here!” “Are you sure it’s the katsudon or the person who made it?” Miichan chuckles. “I’m gonna slap you! Be quiet you Gachapin!!” I yelled at her. Kamisama! She’s heading our way… I shied away and bury my face back into the book. “I’ll be your waitress for the day, what would you guys like?” That sweet voice.. it never fails to melt my heart.. This is actually the first time she served my table..usually she serves the other side of the diner. “I’d like shrimp!” Miichan says in horrible English accent. Oh god at this moment I want to tape her mouth shut but Atsuko laughed..it’s so cute so maybe I’ll give Miichan some credit. “And I want Sushiiiiiiii!” Yuko extended the word with a wide grin. “What about you Takamina?” Yuko asks me.. I don’t know why but I couldn’t speak… Acchan waited but still no answer.. “Okay well take your time, I’ll be back to get your order..” She spoke to me for the first time in years! Yadda I’m so happy!!.. “Wait, just get the special katsudon that you self-make” Yuko ordered for me. “Hai! She smiles and walks away to another table. “Jeez Takamina learn how to speak up for yourself!” Miichan teases me. “Yeah when are you going to make your move?” Yuko adds. “Tomorrow I promise!” “Eh you say that every time.. I don’t believe you anymore!” Yuko sticks her tongue out at me. “Why her anyways? Out of all people you pick a girl to like…a girl that’s so popular with the boys..do you really think she’d go for a short guy like you?” Miichan giggles. “I’m not a guy! You ugly big bug eyed girl!!” I retorted back. “Hey that’s not nice you two! Stop arguing kids..” Yuko pats both of our head like little childrens. We both smacked her hands off immediately. “Ittai.. wow you guys sure are violent.” “ANYWAYS! Yuko, Do you think Acchan would like a girl?” Miichan asks trying to make me angrier. “Umm.. I don’t know..she dated so many guys so it’s hard to say..” When they said that, my heart sank a little…Really no one knows why I like her but for now I will keep that little secret to myself, locked in my heart.
TBC…?
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Woah!! Loveforever-san.. :w00t: is this a multiple shoots?? XD
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Yay! Loveforever-san is Back (from her Hiatus)... LOL. :P
Finally~ I can read a AtsuMina's fics... Btw, This is gonna be interesting! I love Miichan's and Yuko's character here... Looking forward to the next chapter! XD
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aww kind fic.. I dont wanna be takamina with that "2 best friends" jajajaj she gonna have trouble.. :D
Come on takaboy!! make your move.. or someone else gonna do it..
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Poor Takamina she is too shy, ganbatte!
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Takamina fighting!!! :mon blowhorn:
:)
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hehe yes fleany! a multiple shot! ;) and yes I'm back cuz i was so inspired by all these atsumina stories! :nervous thanks for reading guys! :lol:
Chapter 2
The food came out, but this time it wasn’t her that served us… It was a different girl. I felt very disappointed because I want to see her up close again. Yuko on the other hand… her mouth was hanging wide open when she saw our waitress. I’m even surprised she stared so hard without blinking once. “I’m sorry, Acchan had to take care of the other side so I will be taking over.” She says with a charming smile. I’m guessing she is new because I’ve never seen her here before. This girl is tall/model like; she has long lovely silky hair, light brown eyes and a strong feminine aura. I have to admit she’s almost as beautiful as my Atsuko but not quite. “My name’s Haruna, if you need anything else please let me know.” She says as she sets our plate of food in front of us. “Yuko?? Are you there?? YUKO?!” I waved my hand in front of her face repetitively. She seems too stunned to move.. On behalf of her behavior I felt obligated to apologize. “I’m sorry, my friend is not feeling to well today, she forgot to take her medication.” I said trying not to laugh. The waitress chuckled a bit from the way Yuko was acting. Not a single word came from her mouth; that’s really rare. Usually she wouldn’t shut up so easily. Now I know what to do when I need her to be quiet! I found her kryptonite! Bwahahaha.
“Isn’t that the new transfer student in our school?” Miichan asks Yuko. “Yeah…isn’t she pretty?” Yuko answers, still lost in a trance. I couldn’t help but giggle, this idiot is poking fun at me for not being brave enough to talk to Atsuko but now look at her, she’s love-struck! “Takamina from now on, I will accompany you here every day!” “What? No! You’re too loud Yuko. I like to sit here in peace without you mouthing all the time.” “Well it’s better than you pretending to read that book of yours, you pervert!” “I am not a pervert!” “Yes you are! I seen you stare at Acchan’s breast earlier, don’t lie!” “What!? I was not…” I defended myself. Well maybe I was little and didn’t realize it. Mmm the smell of Katsudon flowing through my nose. Before you know it I devoured the katsudon like I haven’t eaten for days; I stuffed my mouth really fast like a pig. “Oooshiii” I talked with my mouth full. “I’m glad you like it.” A voice snuck me from behind. I froze with food falling out from my mouth…that voice…it’s her. OH MY GOD!!! I’m so embarrassed, this whole time she was watching! How dare these two brats not warn me! No wonder they we’re just sitting there smirking!! Aaaaaaaaah!! Kill me now!! She probably thinks I’m a slob! What a good first impression huh??
“I just came by to apologize about switching up.” “Oh that’s alright Acchan, No worries here.” Miichan answered. “ And Yuuchan, how was your food?” “Amazing! Hey is there any way I can start requesting that waitress over there?” Yuko said shuddering her eyebrow. “Haha actually yes you can. And how was your food Miichan?” “Delicious and Sweet! Just like your smile.” she flirted. Ouuu! She’s so going to get it later. I know that Miichan is doing that on purpose to make me say something, but can’t she use a different method?? I hate when she does that! “And what---“ Before Atsuko can ask me how was my food.. Stupid Miichan interrupted again!! “How was your katsudon?” Miichan asked me with an evil sneer. I mean mugged that gachapin first and then look back at Atsuko, all of a sudden all my anger disappear into thin air.. The more I look at her the more I get lost into her beauty... I couldn’t speak so I sighed in defeat. Then I realized this is my chance to talk to her! but please.. please don’t let me mess up. Suddenly words came out of my mouth. “The delicious is katsudon. ”HUH???” Yuko and Miichan said in unison,both looking confused. Damn it! I mixed up my words!! I have to hurry and fix it, so I thought to introduce myself. “By the way my name is Minami, meet to nice you! I mean, nice to meet you!” OH GOD NOT AGAIN!!! My face is burning up, by now she can probably tell I’m blushing..how awkward... She looked at me and chuckled in a way I never seen before…her nose wrinkled and she had the hugest smile on her face. It was a lot way different from the way she laughs at Miichan and Yuko. Well maybe I’m just overthinking it. :/ “Haha, it’s nice to meet you Minami, you look somewhat familiar, did I see you somewhere before?” Just that I was in all of your classes from K-12. This definitely made me feel like crap, jeez am I really that invisible to her? “ Uh no.. I think this is the first time we’ve met.” I had to lie or else she’ll think I’m such a loser!
The diner is closing up pretty soon and those two chimpanzees’s already left me about 2 hours ago. I’m actually glad because I get quiet time and Atsuko time. :) Finally I closed my book, packed up all my stuff and got up from my seat. Just before I can walk any further.. *Thump/Clash!* “Ahh!! ATSUKO I’M SO SO SORRY!! I didn’t mean to.” “No, it wasn’t your fault.. I was careless and didn’t look. So it’s my mistake. GOMEN NE! for walking into you.” she bowed to me. She bent down and picked up the broken pieces of the plate. “Here let me help you.” Somehow we end trying to get the same piece and touched hands.. I quickly pulled back and looked the other way to hide my blush. My heart right now is beating like crazy, like a drum.. it’s so loud. Hopefully she can’t hear it or else she’ll freak out. “Gomen ne” I apologized facing the other way. She didn’t answer so I looked at her, she was also facing the other way.. “Ittai” I heard her shout in pain. I panicked when I seen blood dripping from her finger, gently but swiftly I grabbed her finger and sucked on it without thinking twice. 30 seconds later she pulled away and slapped me.. But why?? why does my heart hurt so much when she did that? Why was I so stupid to do such a dumb thing..She doesn’t even know who I am.. to her I’m still a stranger with just the name Minami…Abruptly my eyes begin to blur and my head starts to spins. Before I know it, I’m beginning to lose consciousness.
TBC…
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Wow wow.. aww minami you are so in love.. aww acchan dont be so tsundere with minami...
JAJA I love yuko... so funny... now how she gonna gain haruna´s attention?
good chapter thanx for updated fast :D
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Ouch! It must hurt poor Takamina.
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What the... Poor Minami... You are an idiot and Acchan. I know it was weird but no need to slap her.... :D
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:thumbsup I guest minami is fast :) jejeje
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What the... Poor Minami... You are an idiot and Acchan. I know it was weird but no need to slap her.... :nervous
Yeah it was weird. Acchan slap minami. *sigh *
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Author san ~ hope u will update. ..
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:cow: wow, :lol: takamina :heart: hahaa author please update soon :jphip:
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Why no update?? I really like this story