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Title: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Shiiwaachan on January 01, 2012, 08:32:00 AM
INDEX

PROLOGUE (below)
CHAPTER 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31552.msg986736#msg986736)
CHAPTER 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31552.msg987091#msg987091)
CHAPTER 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31552.msg987980#msg987980)
CHAPTER 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31552.msg988603#msg988603)




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PROLOGUE~~

We've been friends for 6 years.
She is my bestfriend.
She is the one whom I go to when I have problems, she's always there beside me, taking care of me, giving me advices, teaching me things that I don't know.
She's like a sister to me.
I thought my feelings for her as my sister or bestfriend will be forever.
I don't know why, but things right now are changing and also my feelings for her are changing.
I don't know where I got this feeling but I got this feeling inside of me that I don't want her to my bestfriend anymore, I want more than that.
I don't know why, but my heart tells me that I love her.
Whenever I see her, I always feel like my heart jumped out of its place.
I'm really happy when I'm with her, it feels like my life is already complete when I see her smile showing her cute dimples.






"Hey, Atsuko!" Takahashi Minami, my bestfriend, shook both of my shoulders with her hands. "You're daydreaming again."
"Oh, sorry." I said to her as I woke up from my daydreaming.




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I will post chapter 1 soon.  :hee:
Thanks for reading.
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: Minami-chan on January 01, 2012, 08:56:36 AM
Oh!!!
Continue this!! It´s seems so interesting!

Happy new year!
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: Mari07 on January 01, 2012, 08:57:09 AM
Thats pretty deep~
I like it  :thumbup

Keep it up!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter  :cow:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: blughise on January 01, 2012, 09:15:21 AM
Nice!!!

looks pretty interesting!!

quite looking forward for more of this
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 01, 2012, 09:33:46 AM
Seems really interesting XD
Please post it soon~ :mon cute:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: kahem on January 01, 2012, 12:45:16 PM
Hehehe go Acchan go!!!
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: Flean on January 01, 2012, 05:12:15 PM
Interesting~~   :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: Mika ~ on January 02, 2012, 06:31:45 AM
acchan narrator yay!!

interesting ..
please post the first chapter soon ^^
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Prologue (New Year Special)
Post by: Kiiz on January 02, 2012, 08:19:14 AM
Thx for Atsumina fic :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
Title: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 1
Post by: Shiiwaachan on January 02, 2012, 09:31:51 AM
CHAPTER 1~~

"Hey, Atsuko!" Takahashi Minami said as she shook the shoulders of the staring-at-nothing Maeda Atsuko. "You're daydreaming again."
"Oh, sorry!" Maeda Atsuko said as she waked up from her daydreaming and looked down.
"Is something bothering you?" Takamina asked with full concern on her voice. "I think you didn't even heard what I said to you a while ago."
"I'm sorry." Maeda Atsuko pouted and looked at Takamina.
"Let's go!" Takamina said as she pulled Acchan to stand up.
"Where?" Acchan asked, confused.
"So... You really didn't heard it, right?" Takamina asked and grabbed Acchan's hands.
"Y-Yess.." Acchan replied. "I'm sorry again."
"Why are you saying 'I'm sorry' to me all the time?" Takamina said as she intertwined her hands to Acchan's. "You don't need to apologize because I'm not mad."

Acchan was blushing at the time when when Takamina intertwined their fingers but she managed to stop the slowly-forming-color-pink on her cheeks.

"Ahhh... Minami, can I ask? What did you said to me a while ago?" Acchan said shyly.
"Kyaaa, shy Atsuko is kawaii." Takamina said and pinched Atsuko's right cheek with her free hand. "What I said a while ago is 'let's go buy ice cream, I'll treat you.'"
"Oh, you'll treat me? Let's go." Acchan said and ran like a little child while their hands are still intertwined. "Yay, ice cream."

They both ran towards the nearest ice cream store like it's their first time eating an ice cream.

"So, what flavor do you like?" Takamina asked.
"I want cookies n' cream." Acchan answered.
"Two cookies n' cream please." Takamina said to the vendor.

They were both eating their ice cream and sat on the nearest bench.
"It's delicious, thanks Minami." Acchan said while licking her ice cream.
"Yeah, it's delicious." Takamina said.

The time rotates so fast as it is already 7 in the evening and the sky is getting darker and darker.

"The sky is already dark, let's go eat dinner at my apartment." Acchan said.
"Okay." Takamina replied.

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>> In Maeda Atsuko's apartment <<

"What do you want to eat?" Acchan asked. "I'll cook."
"Anything, as long as it's delicious." Takamina answered and smiled to Acchan showing her cute dimples.
"Hmmm...." Acchan was thinking on what food will she cook. "How about I cook Katsudon?" she asked. "It's your favorite, right?"
"Really? Yayyy, Katsudon!" Takamina said and ran towards Acchan's back and hugged her from behind.

Acchan felt a sudden blush forming on her face. It's not the first time that Takamina hugged her, In fact, Takamina is sweet to her. She was used to Takamina's sweetness and that makes Acchan happy everytime Takamina held her hand, intertwined it or even hug her.

"You never fail to make me happy, my lovely bestfriend." Takamina said as she pulled out from the backhugging.

Once again Acchan blushed when she heard Takamina said those words to her, making her face really-color pink. Takamina then noticed it.

"Eh? Atsuko, your face is pink?" Takamina poked Acchan's cheeks. "I like pink!." Takamina chuckled. "Don't tell me, you're..." Takamina smiled.
 
Knowing what Takamina wanted to say, Acchan turned around making her back facing Takamina.

"No, I'm not!" Acchan said.
"Oh, really?" Takamina once again hugged Takamina from behind and looked at Acchan's face. Once again she saw Acchan's color-pink face. Takamina just smiled widely. "I knew it."
"You know what? Why don't you just sit down and wait for me to finish cooking this food?" Acchan said, escaping Takamina's small tricks on her.
"Okay." Takamina obediently followed what Acchan said. "But make sure that, that food is delicious, huh?"
"Yes, ma'am." Acchan answered and saluted Takamina.



~~CHAPTER 1 END.


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Sorry if it's somehow short, I ran out of ideas.  :kneelbow:
But I'll try my best to make this fic good for all of you, readers.  :hee:
Thanks for reading.
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 1
Post by: Flean on January 02, 2012, 12:35:44 PM
Kyaaa!!!  :mon lovelaff:  that was so cute!!! nyahaha...  :mon inluv:  need more Atsumina doki doki moment!!!  :mon XD:

me like this story~~ weee~~  :gmon twirl:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 1
Post by: kahem on January 02, 2012, 01:07:01 PM
OMG it's so sweet! Need more scene like that!
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 1
Post by: ichikawa on January 02, 2012, 02:23:58 PM
Atsuko being shy over Minami~ kyun~ :heart: :heart: :heart:
Love it~ :heart: I need more~ :D
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 1
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 02, 2012, 04:18:27 PM
Shy Atsuko is so cute~~ :wub:
Minami is the one making the moves!! :w00t:
This is interesting!! XD

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
Title: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 2
Post by: Shiiwaachan on January 03, 2012, 04:39:25 AM
CHAPTER 2~~

"Delicious~" Takamina said and closed her eyes to feel the taste of the food. "How do you do this? It's very delicious, I think this is the most delicious food I've ever tasted."
"You always say that when I cook something and you eat it." Acchan chuckled. "Is my cooking skills really that good?"
"Yes, I wish I can cook delicious meals like this too."

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"Aaahh... I'm already full." Takamina said and rubbed her stomach. "Nee, Atsuko."
"Hmmm?" Acchan looked at her.
"I'll sleepover."
"Sleepover? Why?"
"Why don't you look at the clock?" Takamina then pointed the clock.
"Eh? It's already 11pm?" Acchan half-shouted to no one. "I don't get it, these days ends so fast."
"Whaaaaa~." Takamina yawned. "Atsuko, I'm sleepy."
"Wait here, I'll go get night clothes for you." Acchan ran towards her closet and get one night cloth. "Here, wear this."
"Okay." Takamina reached for the night cloth and started to remove her shirt.
"M-Minami, what are you doing?"
"Changing."
"But you can do it inside the comfort room."
"Nahhh, I'm too lazy to go to the comfort room, I just prefer to change here, you wouldn't mind it, right?"
"Y-Yes, Okay change your clothes there while I close my eyes and turn around."

Takamina just smiled to it. She started to remove her clothes and change it. Already finished, she suddenly hugged Acchan from behind, leaning her head on Acchan's right shoulder.

"My bestfriend, so innocent as ever." Takamina whispered to Acchan's right ear.
"Ahhhh. Stop it, it's tickling me!"

Acchan moved both of her hands on her cheeks to prevent it from blushing.

"I'm sleepy, let's sleep Atsuko."
"Okay."

They both went inside Acchan's room. Acchan once again went to her closet to get another night cloth for her, while Takamina just simply headed to Acchan's bed and layed there without asking permission from the owner.
Few minutes later, Acchan also layed beside Takamina to sleep.

"Oh, Atsuko. Let's sleep." Takamina said while placing her one arm around Acchan's waist. "Good night, Atsuko." Takamina said and slowly get up to kiss Acchan's cheek and layed down again.
"Good night, Minami." Acchan managed to reply while feeling that her cheeks is now burning because of what Takamina did to her.

Acchan knew that Takamina is really sweet, she always hugs Acchan, but this time it's different. It's the first time that Takamina kissed her, she felt her heartbeat beats faster as Takamina's hand are still on Acchan's waist which means that they're really close to each other even in sleeping.

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It's already 9 in the morning when Takahashi Minami woke up, she sat up and looked beside her, she saw Acchan was not there so she called her.

"Atsuko?" Takamina called to no one. "Atsuko?" she called again. "Where are you?"

Takamina realized that Acchan was not in the room so she went on the living room and called her again.

"Atsuko?" Takamina called to no one again. "Atsuko? Where are you?"
 
Once again, Takamina realized that Acchan was not in the living room so she roamed around the house and found Acchan in the kitchen, cooking something.

"Oh, Atsuko. There you are!" Takamina said then hugged Acchan from behind. "I've been searching you because when I woke up, you're not there."
"Hahaha. I'm just cooking here." Acchan chuckled.
"You smell good." Takamina said as she inhaled the scent of Acchan's neck.
"I always smell good." Acchan said and chuckled then blushed because of Takamina's sweetness. But then again, Takamina noticed it.
"Atsuko, your face is pink... again." Takamina poked Acchan's soft cheek with her nose. "I knew it! You're--"

Before Takamina could finish her sentence, Acchan broke it.

"Stop it! You're making fun of me again." Acchan pouted.

Takamina just smiled.

"Well, what are you cooking?" Takamina asked randomly.
"Chicken Teriyaki." Acchan looked at her and smiled.



~~ CHAPTER 2 END.



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I just realized that I ended this story again with food.  :mon sweat:
Hahaha, it's because I love food!  :gmon bang:

Short again. :kneelbow:
Thanks for reading.
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 2
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 03, 2012, 05:14:49 AM
Yea!! Thanks for the update :cow:
Wow.. Takamina kept making moves on Atsuko :w00t:
Atsuko is so cute~ :wub:

Please update soon :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 2
Post by: Haruko on January 03, 2012, 05:40:42 AM
so sweet atsumina moments :D awww...
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 2
Post by: kahem on January 03, 2012, 11:44:08 AM
Yay food is the best pleasure the humans have!
Interesting here Takamina is not shy at all
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 2
Post by: ichikawa on January 03, 2012, 05:09:31 PM
Waaa~ :w00t:  Shy Acchan is soooooooo kawai~  :inlove:
Takamina and Acchan here is like a newlywed couple~  :heart: :heart:
Waiting for your next update  :D
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 2
Post by: Shiiwaachan on January 05, 2012, 10:10:31 AM

CHAPTER 3



"Ahhhh... As usual, it's very delicious." Takamina said before eating a spoonful of food.
"Minami, don't eat too much."
"I can't help it, it's so delicious."
"You'll get fat if you eat much."
"I'll exercise everyday." Takamina smiled to her.

They both eat silently.

"Nee, Atsuko."
"Hmm?"
"Let's go out."
"Where?"
"Hmmm..." Takamina is thinking what place will they go. "How about, let's go shopping?" Takamina smiled.
"Okay, but Minami you must take a bath, okay?" Acchan smiled at her. "You stink!"
"Eh? No I'm not." Takamina smelled herself. "I still smell good." she pouted.
"Nahh. Just kidding." Acchan chuckled.


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>> In the mall <<

"So... where will we go?" Maeda Atsuko asked.
"Let's play in the funzone."
"But I thought you want to go shopping?"
"Nahhh.. Shopping are for adult females only."
"Like you are not, huh?"
"I'm still a kid, I mean teenager, I still want to play." Takamina pulled out her tongue and then grabbed Acchan's hand, intertwining it and ran to the funzone.

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>> In the funzone <<
"Hmmm. Let's play basketball." Takamina said and pointed the basketball machine.
"But, I don't know how to shoot." Acchan pouted.
"I'll teach you, come on." Takamina grabbed Acchan's hands.

They bought many tokens and played on almost all of the game machines there.
After 1 hour of playing, the two bestfriends felt tired and wanted to rest. They saw a near foodcourt there and decided to eat.


[A/N: LOL! FOOD AGAIN. HEHE!]


>> In the foodcourt <<

"So... What do you want to eat? This time, I'll treat you." Acchan said.
"I want to eat the same food as yours." Takamina smiled.
Acchan nodded to her. "Wait here, okay?" Acchan said.

While Acchan was busy buying food and Takamina was waiting for her bestfriend. Two girls suddenly went to Takamina and greeted her.

"Yo! Takamina."
"Oh, Yuko, Kojiharu!" Takamina stood up and hugged both of them. "Why are you here?"
"Because Kojiharu is hungry and she said she wants to eat here." Yuko said as Kojiharu just smiled.
"Oh, Why don't you two share table with us." Takamina said.
"Us?" Kojiharu asked. "Who's with you?"
"Atsuko." Takamina said. "Oh, there she is." Takamina pointed Acchan who is walking closer to her with a tray of food on her hand.

As soon as Acchan sat down, Yuko bought food for her and Kojiharu.
Few minutes later, Yuko went back with a tray of food on her hands.
All four of them ate silently when Takamina suddenly broke it.

"So, what's up? How are you two doing?" Takamina asked them.
"Guess who has a girlfriend now." Yuko answered her and smiled widely.
"Ehhh?" Takamina and Acchan almost half-shouted to Yuko with their shocked expression. "To whom?".
Yuko just pointed Kojiharu.
"Really?" Takamina asked.
Kojiharu just nodded.
"Oh, so it's true." Acchan said and went back eating.
"How about you two?" Yuko suddenly asked them. "Are you two dating?"
"Eh? Dating?" Acchan said to her with her shocked expression again. "What are you sayi-"
"Not yet." Takamina broke in and smiled widely.
"What do you mean not yet?" Acchan said to her shyly then something color-pink suddenly formed on her face. She was blushing.
"Hahaha, Atsuko is blushing." Takamina chuckled.
"So, tell us you two." Kojiharu said. "Are you lovers now?"
"Ehhh? No!" Acchan said and held her cheeks with both of her hands to prevent it from blushing so hard. "No, no, no. Seriously n-"
"We're soon-to-be." Takamina cut in again and cling onto Acchan's arm. "Right, Atsuko?"
"Eh?! Even you Minami, what are you saying?!" Acchan hit Takamina's arm softly.

All 3 of them laughed while Acchan is still blushing like there's no tomorrow.

"Nahh, Just kidding." Yuko said.
"But seriously, You two are fit for a couple, right Yuko?" Kojiharu said.
"Yes." Yuko answered her.



~~CHAPTER 3 END.


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Thanks for reading.  :byebye:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 05, 2012, 12:03:37 PM
 This is really good :D
Thanks for the update!!!
I love the intetaction between Taka and Acchan XD

Please update soon~~ :mon cute:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
Post by: ichikawa on January 05, 2012, 05:04:00 PM
Takamina is so bold confess to Acchan~  :lol: love it :heart:
I want more atsumina moment~  :bow:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
Post by: Haruko on January 06, 2012, 05:14:07 AM
awww kojiyuuu :D thanx :D i miss them.. JJAJa now the tsundere is minami wow good role changing like it :D please keep going
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
Post by: Shiiwaachan on January 07, 2012, 02:06:09 AM
CHAPTER 4


Both couples already finished their foods and headed their own ways. The two couples took the opposite ways.

"Nee, Minami."
"Hm?"
"I don't want to go home yet, it's still afternoon."
"Who told you that we're going home?" Takamina chuckled.
"Oh, no one." Acchan smiled at her. "Where will we go next?"
"We're going to watch a movie." Takamina said to her and intertwined their hands.

Once again, Acchan blushed and looked at their intertwined hands then she looked at Takamina. Takamina noticed it and looked at Acchan.

"Hm? What's wrong?" Takamina asked.
"N-Nothing." Acchan said and avoided Takamina's eyes.

Takamina just smiled at her. Few minutes later, they arrived in the cinema.

"So, what will we watch?" Acchan asked.
"Hmmm..." Takamina looked at all the now showing movies and decided what to watch. "I like this one." Takamina pointed a horror movie with a scary face on the picture. "Let's watch this."
"Eh?! I don't like horror movies."
"Why?"
"Umm... because... I'm easily scared." Acchan looked on the other side.
"Nahh, that movie is not scary." Takamina said.

After the moments of fighting whether to watch it or not. Acchan already gave in and decided to follow what Takamina wanted.

>> Inside the cinema room (The movie is not yet started) <<

"Minami, I'm scared." Acchan said, clinging onto Takamina's arms.
"Don't be scared." Takamina said. "I'm here, and besides the movie is not yet started."
"Minami, I'll just sleep on your shoulder, okay?" Acchan layed her head onto Takamina's shoulder. "I don't want to watch it." Acchan pouted.
"No, don't sleep." Takamina also layed her head onto Acchan's head which layed on her shoulder. "You need to watch this and we will watch it." Takamina held her hand and intertwined it.
"You know what, Minami?"
"Hm?"
"We look like a couple, if we're like this." Acchan squeezed Takamina's hand which is intertwined to hers.
"Oh, really?" Takamina also squeezed Acchan's hand. "Do we really look like a couple?"
"Yes." Acchan answered.
"Well, it's possible right?" Takamina smiled.
"Eh? What are you saying?"
"Why? You don't want?"
"No, it's not that I don't want." Acchan said shyly. "It's just that... we're both girls."
"So?"
"Eh?" Acchan stared at Takamina.
"We can be a couple." Takamina smiled and looked at her. "If you'll just tell me your feeling for me." Takamina chuckled.
"You're making fun of me again." Acchan hit Takamina's arm softly.
"No, I'm not."
"Yes, you are."
"Hahaha, you love me right?"
"Stop it!"

In the middle of their small fight, the cinema room suddenly burst out a loud sound which means that the movie is already starting.

The movie started with a very creepy background music. All the people we're in silence, the only sound that were heard are those the sound from the movie and the crunching voices of the people eating.

They were in the middle of the movie and it's getting scarier and creepier. Suddenly a said-to-be-ghost in the movie, popped out making not all but many people screamed in fear including Acchan.

"Minami, I'm scared." Acchan hugged Takamina and closed her eyes. "Let's go home."
"Let us finish the movie first." Takamina hugged back the other female. "Or if you don't want to watch, you can just hug me because I know that you love me but you don't admit it."
"Eh?! No." Acchan said and parted their hug. "If you don't want, I'll just go home alone."

Acchan was about to stand up when Takamina held her hand.

"Don't get mad, I'm just kidding." Takamina showed her, her sweetest smile showing her cute dimples.

Seeing her cute smile, Acchan sat down again and covered her face with her hands to cover her blushing face. Acchan felt that her day is already complete. That smile, that smile is one of the things that Acchan wanted.

"Atsuko? Are you crying?" Takamina tried to pull Acchan's hands from her face but failed. "Don't cry. Okay, if you want to go home, let's go."
"Really? Yay!" Acchan suddenly pulled out her hands from her face and looked at Takamina with a smile on her face.
"Eh?! I thought you're crying." Takamina narrowed her eyebrows.
"Hehehe..." Acchan chuckled. "But, you already said that we'll go. Hehe."

Takamina had no choice but to obey Acchan or else Acchan will get mad at her. They are now outside the cinema room.

"You should have let me finish the movie." Takamina complained.
"What's with the movie and you really like it?" Acchan asked.
"It was fun."
"Fun? Is it really that fun when you watch horror movies?"
"Yes."
"Are you mad now?"
"Mad? No. Why?"
"Because... you didn't finished watching the movie."
"No." Takamina smiled at her.
"Do you want to watch another movie?"
"No, thanks. I just lost my mood"
"Sorry." Acchan looked down.
"It's okay." Takamina held Acchan's shoulders.
"What can I do to make it up to you?"
"I told you, it's okay."
"No. I feel guilty about it."
"Well, if you insist, how about... we go to watch movies at my house."
"But you said that you lost your mood in watching, right?"
"Yes, but now I feel like I'm in the mood again." Takamina chuckled.
"You're weird." Acchan said. "Okay."



~~ CHAPTER 4 END


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Thanks for reading. :byebye:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Haruko on January 07, 2012, 05:43:38 AM
aww atsumina so cute.. acchan be strong and tell takamina your feeling :D
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 07, 2012, 09:19:03 AM
Yea!! Thank you so much for the update :D

Atsumina are so cute~~ :mon lovelaff:
Aww~~ :heart:

Thanks again for the update XD
Please update soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: ichikawa on January 07, 2012, 04:36:56 PM
One word to discribe -> KAWAI~!  :luvluv2:
Takamina is such a tease~  :lol:
Acchan should confess to Takamina  :yep:

Waiting for more updated  :D
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: kahem on January 08, 2012, 10:30:02 PM
Make her yours Takamina! Go!
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: aoi_sora on January 10, 2012, 12:47:37 PM
 :doh:

going to read this... tomorrow! OTL
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: pamela89 on February 11, 2012, 11:51:03 AM
i'm enjoying this fic  :P

LOVE IT  :heart:
LOVE HOW TAKAMINA TEASES ACCHAN  :heart:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON  :cry:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Keisthename on June 17, 2012, 04:35:49 AM
Oh I love straight to the point fan fics about ATSUMINA hahaha!
FULL of atsumina sweetness I love it!
Hopefully you'll update soon T^T
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: fausto on August 07, 2012, 12:55:47 AM
Please update soon!!!i want to read more of this, it's so good!!
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: acchaniu on August 07, 2012, 05:11:33 AM
Update SONN
or  I'll kill you
LOL jwk  :kekeke:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: arrow27 on August 23, 2012, 03:52:07 PM
Aw I love this fic :) it's so cute ^^ Please update :D
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 24, 2012, 11:31:16 AM
PLEASE UPDATE YOUR WORK.

I LOOK FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.

GOOD LUCK!!!

THANK YOU.
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 08, 2013, 02:08:52 AM
lol wow Takamina here is so different! hahahahaha but I like it hehehehe  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: lezperv on July 29, 2013, 06:51:06 AM
UPDATE SOON ONEGAI SHIMASU  :kneelbow:

I really like shy Atsuko and bold Minami  :shy1:

I really like the happy and cute atmosphere for a change  :hee: all the other fics I read for the last few days are sooo sad and weird  :mon dunno:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: roto_131197 on July 29, 2013, 04:59:19 PM
Aw~ Atsumina is so cute. LOVE IT!
Waiting for your next update
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: cisda83 on July 29, 2013, 11:03:32 PM
Interesting... The way they interacted with each other

Atsumina was so cute together

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Archer1992 on July 30, 2013, 10:25:11 PM
ooooo hahahahahahaha something is going to happen ¬3¬

thanks and Update soon!!
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: noah minami on October 04, 2013, 06:40:57 AM
Haha.... :lol: waiting for update... nice story flow. :thumbsup I wonder what will happen next.hehe :yossi:
Title: Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
Post by: Archer1992 on October 06, 2013, 12:01:59 AM
wooow

good FF

update soon

Thanks!