JPHiP Forum
AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Prataz on January 07, 2012, 06:14:37 PM
-
They say that when it snow in the mountains, it is the sign of the Yuki-Onna crying.
Yuki-Onna, the cold hearted spirit of the snow, attracting lost travellers with their good looks, only to freeze them in eternal ice.
What if this isn't true. What if the Yuki-Onna is not as cold as it seems and all it takes is a human heart to melt away the facade.
Inspired by てもでもの涙 and the legend of the Yuki-Onna and Yukirin being cold, blackhearted and the bringer of rain and snow, I present to you my version of the story of the Yuki-Onna...
こんなに会いたくても
こんなに好きでも
目の前を通り過ぎてく
それでも こうして
あなたを見ている
この場所から
こんなに会いたくても
こんなに好きでも
振り向いてさえもくれない
傘 差してるのに
頬が濡れるのは
どうにもできない
てもでもの涙
“Ka-San… Ka-San!” cries the voice of a little boy as he wonders around, lost in the snow.
It was their family tradition to visit their grandparents in their home village. Driving up the familiar winding mountain road, he complained about being car sick and demanded for a short break.
Perhaps it was the restlessness that came with young boys, perhaps it was the sugar rush from the M&M chocolates or perhaps it was the streak of mischief that runs in the genking, Miyazawa Sayama that complied him to play a quick game of hide and seek.
The plan was to just sneak off quietly and hide in the snow covered landscape before calling his parents, asking them to find him.
“This would be fun!” snickered Sayama as he wiped out his mobile phone to spring the surprise on his parents, only to realize the phone was not responding due to lack of network signal in the mountainous region.
“Ehh…!? This can’t be happening…”
******
Sayama realized that he was lost, as the surrounding landscape looked the same to him. His attempts to track his footsteps in the snow have failed due to the sudden snowfall that seemed to wrap up everything with white fluffy cotton.
Lost, alone, without any help, he could only call out loudly for his Ka-San as he wandered aimlessly towards higher ground, hoping to get a reception for his mobile phone.
******
“Ne Mayu-chan, do you think Ka-San would be mad when they find us?” asked Sayama to his favorite stuffed toy, a humanoid looking toy.
“Ka-San won’t be angry right?”
“Ne! You are right! We just need to pout and look kawai! Ka-San is weak against that! But Oto-San might use the Miyazawa Palm Attack on me…” sighed Sayama as he shivered in memory of the many palm strikes that his father had delivered on the fleshy part of his buttocks as punishment for his mischief.
Distracted by the horrible thoughts of impending doom from his father, Sayama lost his footing, tripping over a pothole, falling flat to the ground…
******
Sayama wasn’t sure how long he was unconscious. He couldn’t have fainted due to the fall. He was the strongest of all, the Gen-King of the class. His rival Sayaka would have laugh at him, calling him weak. But that being said, he had being wandering in the snow for an hour, cold and exhausted and definitely hungry.
“Ah Itai! I must be hungry and fainted! Even Ultraman will faint when he loses energy! Right Mayu-Chan? asked Sayama as he regained consciousness, his hands reaching instinctively for his favorite soft toy only to realized it’s gone.
“Eh! Mayu-chan!?” asked Sayama in panic. Mayu-chan had being his best friend since his memory started. Mayu-Chan won’t abandon him, especially not at this moment.
“Are you looking for him?” asked a female voice.
Sayama struggled to open his eyes against the glaring sun. A dark silhouette stood over him, holding the familiar figure of Mayu-chan with outreached arm.
As the rays of sunlight formed a halo over the figure and his eyes slowly adjusted to the light. Sayama could only say the following as he finally sees the figure that is holding on to his beloved Mayu-chan.
“Kirei…”
*****
“Arrigato Onee-Chan!” thanked Sayama as he bowed formally to the young female.
The young female had not only found his Mayu-chan but also guided him to safety, bringing him 100 meters within the vicinity of his parent’s car.
Remembering his personal code of honor, he offered Mayu-chan to her.
“Take it please! Mayu-Chan is my best friend and now she will be your best friend!”
The young figure cocked her head, clearly amused at such an offering.
“Please! Onee-Chan! You saved Mayu-chan and me! I can’t give myself to you as I belong to my parents but since Mayu-chan belongs to me and you saved her, Mayu-chan will belong to you now!” declared Sayama earnestly.
“Sayama! Sayama!!! Oh God! We finally found you! We were so worried!” cried out his parents running to him anxiously.
“Onee-chan! Once again thank you! Please do take good care of Mayu-chan! Eh!? Onee-chan?” Sayama’s eyes widened as he looked around, trying to find the Oni-chan that had rescued him.
“Oka-san! Otu-san! Had you seen Onee-chan?”
“Onee-chan?? What Onee-chan! You were alone when we saw you!”
“But Otu-san! I wasn’t! I was rescued by Onee-Chan! She’s very tall and pretty! In a white pure kimono! Her eyes were big and black and her hair long and silky!”
“Sayama… You must be confused and having illusions…my poor boy…” cried his mother as she enveloped him in a hug.
“But Ka-san…Oh and I was suppose to give Mayu-chan to her… Wait! Mayu-chan is gone!” wailed Sayama.
Sayama’s mother comforted him as his father looked around for his favorite stuffed toy.
After looking around futilely, his parents had declared that Mayu-chan missing in action and they would buy a new toy for him.
But for Sayama, deep down inside his heart, he believed that the kind and pretty onee-chan must had taken it as her reward for helping him…
-
Why his name is Sayama? and why Mayu is a doll? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_undecided.gif)
I'm still confused here~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_ko.gif)
Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_innocent.gif)
-
What a great fic...it's like Yuki and people think about her (black) character in some way...lol
But I like it can't wait to read what's happening next the Prologue is :twothumbs
btw, are you gonna write another fic with Yuki as the owner of a creepy mansion and Mayuyu as the Frankenstein Monster / Butler =) ???
that would be hilarious.... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
About anzai48 I just have to comment that is was sure really WHAT THE?! and then I laughed so hard ROFL!
Hahha Mayu as a Frankenstien moster is so wrong and right at the same time! But in my opinion would it be better if she was a cyborg tough XD
-
@
@ Megumi,
Someone said that Cyborg and Frankenstein has something in common: they are assembled.......... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Besides, it was prataz himself who come up with the idea of creepy mansion and frankenstein/butler..... :grin:
:mon spit: OMG Really?! the authour him/herself came up with this?! :mon lmao:
It would be hilarious tough if prataz actally wrote fic about Frankenstein with AKB members :mon taichi:
-
False Alarm! No updates for now! At least until I finish editing photos for my clients.
But I'm taking a break so I shall reply a few questions:
@RenaChii
Sae's Kanji is 佐江
Sayam's Kanji is 佐山
I'm chinese so Kanji is easier for me. Sae's 江 means River so if he's a guy, the parents might give him a much more masculine name by changing the River to Mountain 山. Also in chinese, 江山 means empire, so it will be fitting to replace 江 with 山 for Sae's Alter Male ego.
And yes, Mayuyu is now a doll! Mwahahahaha (Evil Laughter) But at least she's good friends with both Sae and Yuki.
@anzai48
Thank you for the support. Yes I know I'm awful x a million. Won't reveal much. The story isn't starting until I post the next Prologue. As for the creepy mansion idea, I shall let it stay in my cold storage for awhile. At least till I finish up with this and my Final Fantasy story. And thank you for helping me answer Megumi
@Megumi
For the record, I'm a guy! Bwahahaha. But that also means I might suck in Sappy Stories or will I?
Actually Frankenstein can be considered a cyborg. It's just slightly ugly. But that being said, who says we must follow the tradition of having Franky ugly?
Considering it's gonna be Mayuyu, I can safely say this Franky will be as cute as a mouse and might be smarter then the average cyborgs / humans and any other things around =P
And now back I go to work... Hope I can finish work in time to write!
-
This story sounds interesting..... Please update soon ! :onioncheer:
-
Is Mayu alive?
-
Soon... I just need to find time to make it happen.
-
Hmm intresting first chapter, need to see where this story is going, big question is if Mayu is alive or not...... :panic:
-
I'm sure the next chapter will leave the Mayu is alive question answered =P
Chapter 1
<Ring.. Ring…Ring… Crash…>
A scene familiar to every teenager and even maybe some adults, the fight against the monster that threatens to break us away from the solace of our bed, the struggle against light and darkness, the irritable alarm clock!
With a sweep of an arm, Miyazawa Sayama manages to destroy the abdominal alarm clock that threatens his sleep. However, no matter for formidable he is, he’s still unmatchable against the mobile alarm clock, the horrible akuma, the nagging demon from hell, the one that seems to know it all, his Oka-san.
“But Oka-San! I’m sleepy!” whines Sayama as his mother rips the bed sheets forcefully away from him.
“Get up you sleepy head! You don’t want to be late for your first day of school!”
“School? Baka! I’m going to be late…”
*****
“Ride safely and don’t stay too late for club activities…”
“I know Oka-San! Don’t worry!” replies Sayama as he swings onto his bicycle while munching on his sandwich.
“Chew properly!”
“Mwemmmmmm…” was the only reply that Sayama could manage while stuffing his sandwich into his mouth.
“Damnit! I’m not gonna be late! This is the first day of school! I’m the class president! I better set a good example! I’m not going to let Sayaka have any chance to laugh at me…” thoughts Sayama as he pedals on at top speed. He doesn’t like being laugh at, especially when the person belongs to his arch-rival / best friend, Vice President Akimoto Sayaka.
“Ohayo Gozaimasu!!!” greets Sayama as he pedals on through the neighborhood.
“Ah! Sae-chan! Don’t be late!”
“Sae-chan! Gambatte! Don’t lose out to Sayaka!”
“Ah the power of youth, so full of energy! You are really Genking!”
“So polite and full of energy! Gambatte Sae-chan!” as various neighbors returned his greeting. Having grown up in this little town, the neighbors are familiar with their little genking and his friendly rivalry with Akimoto Sayaka, the manly or perhaps even gorilla like daughter of the High School’s Principal.
Distracted by the hilarious thoughts of Sayaka in a gorilla suit, Sayama managed to pull himself together to react in time as a flash of brown appears before him.
******
“Watch it you brat!” barks a voice, the source of the brown flash, as a fist appears to swing in front of him.
“Eh!?” was the only reaction he could muster before his body took over. Leaning to the side and pressing the brake of the frontal wheel, Sayama managed to drift his bicycle to avoid the fist. However, the centrifugal force was too great for him to control, resulting in a painful slide to the ground as he lost control of the bicycle.
“Ojou-sama, are you alright?” asks the source of his pain.
“Ojou-sama?! When did our neighborhood have any rich lady or royalty?” asks Sayama as he looks up to see who this Ojou-sama could be.
The scene could be perhaps a scene from a drama.
His source of torment was a mischievous looking youth with a toothy grin, his brown dyed hair was tied into a bushy ponytail, his clothes untidy and messy, like a typical ruffian. However, in his eyes, you could see the respect and perhaps reverence he has for the “Ojou-Sama” as he bends on one knee and bow his head down respectfully.
A servant, holding a great white umbrella over her, hiding her from view, accompanied the “Ojou-Sama”. Dressed in a butler suit, the servant seemed to be a young girl of 13, due to her still-developing figure and two long ponytails. Her face was expressionless but when his eyes met with hers, he could feel a glare filled with anger or perhaps hate from her for daring to be disrespectful to her “Ojou-Sama”.
“Come Yuu-chan and Mayu-chan. Let us be off. We shouldn’t be late for our first day, should we?” instructs “Ojou-Sama” to her entourage.
With a respectful “Hai” the trio proceeds to off, leaving Sayama lost in his thoughts of the encounter…
******
“Mayu-chan… The name’s so familiar…”
“And her voice… had I heard it before?”
“And… And… And… OH CRAP! I’m going to be LATE!!!”
My name is Miyazawa Sayama, 16 years old Male, Class 2-C of Akimoto High School. Spring has just began for me…
-
hmm interesting, seems as though Mayu is alive! :twothumbs...... for the moment at least! :panic:
Interesting, I suppose this “Ojou-Sama” may well be Yukirin and she has her followers, how this is panning out atm, Im not sure of however....
-
Yuki ojou-sama~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_lovelaff.gif)
Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_pray2.gif)
-
Hi guys! Sorry for the long wait. Was busy with work.
@oddball - Mayu will be more then alive. She's needed for my plot. And yes. You are right. Yukirin is the Ojou-Sama
@RenaChii - Updated! Sorry for the DELAY!
Chapter 2 ~ The new classmates
<Ding Dong Ding Dong>
The first bell of school has rung, indicating the official start of class.
“Crap! This is bad! I can’t be late for the first day!”
Realizing the dire circumstance of being late for the first day of school, Sayama tries to sneaks into his classroom via the back door. Having his seat located next to the door was a little privilege he created as president of the class for emergencies like this.
Snickering to himself in glee at his own intelligence, he slowly pulls open the door to slip in, only to see a familiar looking lady in office wear with a sandy brown short hair, golden rimed spectacles, hawk-like nose, and cold evil eyes staring down at him.
“Well, well, what do we have here? asks Shinodo Mariko, the home teacher of Class 2C.
“Ehmm… My bed and I are deeply in love and the alarm clock failed in breaking us apart…” replies Sayama sheepishly.
The class goes silent at the comment, with majority giving themselves either a face palm or rolling their eyes. Even Sayaka shakes her head in disbelief.
It isn’t wise to give such smart aleck comments. Mariko-sama doesn’t like people who are too smart for their own good…
******
“Ah Kawai! Sae-Kun should be late more often…” purrs Mariko-sensei as she gives her class president an affectionate pat on his check before heading back to the teacher’s table.
Made to balance a small pail of water while maintaining the difficult horse-stance, Sayama was also decorated with a billboard with the words of biggest idiot written in loud bold fonts. His handsome face wasn’t spared too with a big tortoise and words of “Baka” written on it with an eyeliner pen.
Sayama could only resign himself to his fate by giving a soft sigh as the class struggles to hold in their laughter. Knowing their teacher’s temperament, a slip of laughter could be their ticket to join Sayama too.
“By the way, I have an announcement to make! After Takahashi Kai, Minegishi Kuu and Kojima Riku has being transferred out to Class 2A due to their artist privileges, Principal Akimoto has being kind enough to grace our class with 3 new transfer students. As they are not locals, please do your best to make them feel welcome! Or else…” requests or rather commands Mariko-sensei as she stares down at her class.
A resounding “Hai!” echoes out in unison as a confirmation.
“Good. I’m glad that you see things my way. Sayaka-san, since the class president is busy being punished, would you do me the honor of fetching them from your Otu-san’s office? I believe they had just arrived…”
******
The class tenses up in anticipation as the door slowly slides open, only to reveal the familiar head of Akimoto Sayaka.
“Did anybody miss me?” she asks cheekily.
The class replied her with a barrage of pencils, pens, erasers and whatever projectiles they could throw.
Anticipating this, Sayaka quickly pulls the door shut, shielding her from the onslaught.
“Baka! Are you guys trying to kill me!”
“Stop clowning around. We don’t want to give our new classmates a bad impression don’t you? Sayaka-san, please show them in…”
******
A doll-like petite looking girl with 2 ponytails walks in first. Her face was expressionless as she greets the class with her slight nod.
“My name is Watanabe Mayu. Please take care of me…”
The next classmate walks in, only to have the class hear the sound of splashing water and a wet and angry Sayama pointing at him.
“You…”
“Ha! Baka yarou…” laughs the new classmate, flashing a toothy grin.
“My name is Oshima Yuu. There’s no need to take care of me. You guys better take care of loser boy there…”
“Yuu-chan… Don’t be rude…”
“Hai! Oju-Sama…” replies Yuu respectfully towards the last and final classmate as she walks in.
Tall and regal looking with an air of cold seriousness, her long black hair reaches to her waist, amplifying her aura of dignity.
Her big round eyes seems to a closed windows to her soul, guarding her with aloofness that comes naturally to one that is of noble birth.
Completing the package is a face with perfect jawline and sweet lips, capable of even charming you without smiling.
“Kirei…” whispers Sayama as he temporary forgets all about his current predicament.
“My name is Kashiwagi Yuki. Please take good care of me…”
* Footnotes
Sayama is wet because he stood up when he saw Yuu, which caused him to be late.
The 3 guys of Persona will be in this fic in camo positions. But don't worry. There will be a Kojima Haruna for Oshima. Kojima Riku is just the twin brother.
-
I want next update soon ~
-
(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/luvluv1.gif) Please update~ update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/kneelbow.gif)
-
Yuuchan~ <333333333
-
Gosh! :wigglypanda:
Yuki appaears! And description was just :luvluv2:
Kojima Haruna for Oshima. Kojima Riku is just the twin brother.
Ohh :on asmo: Riku is twin-brother of Haruna very interesting!
Can't wait for your next update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
-
Oh Mayuyu is alive and lol the class is fool
-
Yuki ojou-sama. :love: :love: :love:
Btw, why is Sae name becomes "Sayama" and "Sae"?
-
Wow Yuki makes her entrance, things are going to get more interesting for Sae from this point on I feel, and that's without Yuu-chan
-
@Sydney W - Updated! Thanx for your support!
@haruhi16 - Same here. I'm going to enjoy portraying Yuko here as a guy =)
@Megumi - Thank you for your kind words! I hope Riku and Haruna will make life hard for poor Yuu =P
@kahem - Yep! Mayu is alive! Not that she died =P
@virgo_shaka - Your answers will be revealed! hohoho
@oddball - More characters to complicate the mix. Sae will have an enjoyable term
Chapter 3 ~ It’s Persona…
“Oh gosh! It’s Persona… ”
“Kya! It’s KAI! He’s so cute!”
“No! Riku is much better and sophisticated!”
“Stop that! Kuu is the coolest of all!”
The school’s cafeteria echoes the cries of young maidens as the popular trio from the boyband Persona walks in.
The three Ikemen wave around to their fans before proceeding towards the “VIP” area, a corner in the cafeteria that was formerly reserved for the “Flower Four” of Akimoto High School, the four who was said to be the best looking of the entire cohort.
“Ah… Sayama, what brings you here? Don’t you know that this table is now reserved for Persona?” asks Kuu coldly.
“That’s right… F4 is the past… the present and future will be Persona now!” agrees Riku.
“You’re both right… So why don’t you move on to another lesser table that’s more befitting for mortals like you?” asks Kai arrogantly.
The 3 of them stare menacingly at Sayama before bursting out in laughter.
“Ya! Sae-Kun! You should have seen the shock look on your face! Did you think we would be so mean to our former leader?” teases Kuu as he playfully pokes Sayama on the stomach.
“Stop calling me Sae-Kun! You knew I never like that girly nickname given to me by Mariko-Sensei…”
“But Sae-kun is so cute and I might fall in love with you!” laughs Kai as he pats Sayama lovingly on the cheek.
“You know Kai, I’m not sure if you want to say that in front of Atsuko…” replies Sayama, making Kai blush furiously.
“Ehm… Don’t pull her into this. She’s innocent…”
“Innocent? I think she’s guilty of trapping your little heart, caging you in the prison of love…” teases Kuu, making the blushing Kai turn as red as a beetroot.
“Don’t worry shortie, Acchan is now hanging out with my sister. She won’t be able to hear this…” replies Riku, making Kai sigh with relief.
“How’s your first day in class then? Heard that you were made a laughing stock by some new transfer student?” enquires Kuu.
“Don’t remind me of him please…” sighs Sayama as he gives himself a face palm.
“What’s the matter Sae-kun? Finally, has Hokuto Shinken met Nanto Seiken?” asks Riku, the martial arts fanatic.
“I’m not sure about Hokuto Shinken and Nanto Seiken. But I think I’m sure that he has met your sister and it’s happening over there…” replies Sayama as he points towards the direction of a commotion.
The familiar silhouette of his nemesis is now at the table of Riku’s sister, Kojima Haruna and Kai’s crush, Maeda Astuko.
“Why that little runt! I will teaching him a thing or two about harassing my sis!” growls Riku as walks towards them, protective brother mode activated.
“Eh… Ehmmm… I guess I better follow him in case he gets into trouble?” replies Kai hastily, using it as an excuse to get close to his crush.
“Those two never change, don’t they? An over-protective knight brother and a shy beetroot… I think Haruna and Acchan must be frustrated over them. Oh well… By the way Sayama, since they are both gone and you are almost done with lunch, how about joining me to check out the two lovely new ladies over there?”
Sayama sighs upon hearing this. As the hotheaded Riku needs a Kai to rein him in, the flirty womanizer Kuu will need a Sayama to keep him out of trouble…
******
“Mayu-chan, I think Yuu-chan might be facing some problems. I would suggest that you help him out?” requests a seated Yuki while eating her Cha Soba.
“Hai! Oju-sama…” replies Mayu with a polite bow before taking her leave to help out her companion.
Yuki frowns lightly. It’s only the first day and Yuu-chan has managed to get himself into various troubles. Clearly, this little squirrel will deserve some punishment later. But that will come later. Mayu, with her quick wit would be able to keep Yuu out of most trouble, leaving her to be able to enjoy the peaceful meal of Cha Soba.
Unfortunately, peace seems to be sacred today as a shadow lumbers over her. As she looks up, she sees the sight of a playful looking male with sparkling eyes.
“I’m too cool to be cool, coz my name is just Kuu. Minegishi Kuu, at your service..” answers the male as he breaks into a little suave dance.
As Kuu gets ready to do a spin and end off with his killer pose, his leg manages to slip on something, breaking his momentum, causing him to crash like a sack of potatoes.
“Kuu! Are you alright?” replies Sayama as he rushes into the scene.
“Ah Itai! Gosh! Ice? How come someone spill ice in such a place! I must complain! I need to complain! Ice should be banned!”
“Kuu… Stop making such a fuss…” replies Sayama quickly as he places a mouth over the whining Kuu.
“Come! Lets go to the infirmary for a checkout. You don’t want to have any broken bones after a fall right?” advises Sayama as he drags his pal away before he could make a bigger scene.
“Hmm.. B..ut… I…mmmmm…..ohhhhhhh….kayyy…” mumbles Kuu, unable to speak properly with Sayama’s hand over his mouth.
“I’m sorry! Yuki-san. Hope he didn’t disturb you during your lunch…” apologies Sayama sheepishly before disappearing with Kuu.
Yuki smiles slightly at the scene before continuing her lunch. This school is filled with interesting characters. It might be worthwhile to stay here after all.
However, her thoughts are interrupted by another shadow. Her eyes narrows as the shadow looms over her.
“You… Why do I sense Yoki from you…”
Yuki’s eyes widens at such comments before looking up to see a female student with black jet hair and serious looking eyes and a nametag that reveals her name to be Yamamoto Sayaka…
* Footnotes:
Hokuto Shinken is the eternal rival of Nanto Seiken. Both martial arts are the opposites in form and theory.
Yoki - Demon Aura
-
:lol: seems as though Kuu did not have the best of introductions to Yuki thanks to some ice....... ice, I wonder if Yuki may have had a hand in it suddenly appearing out of the blue......
Sayanee is here!!!!! :on woohoo: and she senses 'Yoki' from Yuki, what sort of character is she?
-
An update!
Guess each of them will be meeting up with their respective partners soon. Mariko + Kuu, Kai + Acchan, etc
I want to know what happened next.
-
SO INTERESTING!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_XD.GIF)
Saya-nee can read aura?! COOL! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_fyeah.gif)
-
I know Mayu is not dead but I thought she wasn't alive... Wow what I'm saying? It's not logical xd
Oh over protective Riku is interesting ^^
-
Hi guys, sorry for the delay! I couldn't get access to the forum =/
@oddball - All will be explained. She will play an important role in this fic.
@Sydney W - Thanx for the support! I might go for a slight twist. The standard pairings might be boring and over-written
@RenaChii - Sayanee can do more than that. There will be more scenes that she will use her powers
@kahem - The mystery about Mayu will be revealed on the next update so that you won't be confused anymore. She wasn't alive but now she is. Soon all will be logical. Hope you enjoy Riku in this chapter.
Chapter 4 ~ Cafeteria Chaos
The great Oshima Yuu was in a fix. He didn’t know that girls like this could exist in this part of the world. Perfect bodies with lovely boobs like chestnut tree with fresh nuts for harvesting.
However, these girls are such hard nuts to crack. In the past, all it takes was a toothy grin and some sweet words and the girl would be his.
But now, this has proven to be a challenge, especially the one called Kojima Haruna. Amongst all the girls, she’s the one with a lithe body with perfect mounds on her chest, reminding him of the sweet savory taste of a fine freshly harvested chestnut.
She might be a tough nut to crack. But Oshima Yuu wasn’t one that will back off from a challenge, especially going through the defense of a tough nut to get access to the soft delicious flesh.
He had decided.
“Kojima Haruna! I shall crack you open like a chestnut…”
******
Haruna could stop rolling her eyes up in dismay. All she wanted was to complete the final stage of Final Fantasy on her PSP but this new transfer student has being nothing but a nuisance. His endless chattering reminds her of a squirrel and his antics to get her attention, irritating
The straw the broke the camel’s back came when he tried to cover her eyes in an attempt to get her attention…
******
“You idiot! Do you know how many days I had spend on the game! How could you do this! I was so close to beating Genesis! And now I can’t get my perfect finish! How can I unlock the secret stage without my perfect finish!” shrieks Haruna at the top of her lungs.
“Finally, you are talking to me…”
“But before she talks to you again, I suggest that you talk to my Bokken…” growls a voice from behind as a wooden katana points dangerously along the neck of Oshima.
Kojima Riku has just joined in the fun…
******
Atsuko, the innocent by-stander to this chaos could only face-palm while Haruna rolls her eyes up. Her brother has always being this protective of her. Going to her rescue at any moment of distress or when any guy tries to hit on her. She has given up on having a relationship to focus on video games instead. At least she doesn’t need to apologize to the other party and their parents for having their precious son traumatized by the Bokken wielding Akuma brother of hers.
However, no matter how much she wants her brother to cut this irritating brat down to size, being the dutiful sister she is, there’s too much for his brother to risk right now.
His new career as a rising pop star in Persona…
His upcoming Kendo finals…
All would be ruined if he strikes the new transfer student.
Haruna could only look with pleading eyes towards her best friend Atsuko to ask for help. But what could Acchan do towards two alpha males eyeing each other like lions except to pray?
And God must be kind to her today by answering her prayers with a certain Kai-kun…
******
Kai tries his best to catch up with Riku but being the midget of the group does have its disadvantages. It wasn’t fair to expect someone with a height of 148cm to have legs as long and powerful as the 164cm tall Captain of the Kendo club.
However, whatever advantage Riku has in height, Kai replaces it with determination and lungs of steel. Being the best singer in Persona meant he has the best lung power, which he uses to his advantage now to work his body to a steady pace.
His determination meant he has a mind that focuses on the task on hand, which also meant he has a one-tracked mind like a train on a journey; there’s no giving up till the destination is reached. But that also meant he is oblivious to the things around him, like a nice piece of slippery ice cube ready to make him tumble and fall…
******
“You bastard! You will pay for harassing my sister!” threatens Riku as he drops to a partial crouch, both knees bent. With his right arm drawing back and his left arm extended, he graps his bokken by the kashira (End of the Handle) while resting the tip on his left thumb. His body tenses up as he circles Oshima in quick sidesteps to look for an opening.
******
Oshima arches his eyebrow upon looking at such a style. Most would had rush in madly and gotten a quick KO without knowing what happened. The person in front of him might be a master. He could feel his blood boiling. Apart from nuts and woman, his greatest hobby was fighting. This could be fun…
******
Both Riku and Yuu narrow their eyes as their body tenses up in anticipation. Riku starts first by doing a quick step forward, cutting the distance between the two. The step also fulfills the role of the anchor and builds up for the next move as the momentum allows him to use his body as spring to project the bokken forward in a fast but deadly strike.
Yuu does the same by doing a quick step forward. To win against a stabbing katana is easy if you could close the distance between you and the opponent. A katana is a long bladed weapon that will require working space. By not allowing the owner to have such space will reduce its attack power and reaction time.
This move, although easy, is not for the faint-hearted as you will need to step forward and dodge the stab from the attacking katana to close the distance. But courage is Yuu and Yuu is courage, fear was never in his dictionary.
Riku’s eyes widens at such a gung-ho move and Yuu’s eyes glows in anticipation for his counter. However, his counter will have to wait as a clumsy Kai rolls in like a bowling ball to hit the two in a killer strike of his own.
Kai – 1
Riku – 0
Yuu – 0
Random Ice cubes – 2
******
“Ah! Itai! The cafeteria is sure slippery during lunchtime right Riku?” asks Kai sheepishly as he struggles to break free from the tangled mess of between Riku, Yuu and himself.
“Takahashi Kai! You Dork! You are the most unidol idol I had ever known! Now get off me!”
“Somebody’s hot tempered isn’t he? Did your best friend tried to pick up your sister too?” gloats Yuu sarcastically.
“Why you perverted Yankee!”
“Struck-up Sister complex runt!”
“Ugly barbarian!”
“Crazy Samurai!”
The argument between the two continues until a new voice interrupts their conversation.
“Oshima Yuu… Remember the words of Oju-sama?”
******
The commotion died down upon the entrance of Watanabe Mayu, one of the new transfer students. Grasping Oshima by the neck in a choke hold, she made him bow in apology at the group before dragging him by the collar away.
The defiant Oshima was still making Akanbes (pulling down one lower eyelid to show the red inside, while sticking out the tongue) at Riku while being dragged off.
For Riku, his focus was no longer on the rude, sister stealing Oshima Yuu. His eyes were now set on the perfect little girl known as Watanabe Mayu…
******
Kashiwagi Yuki’s eyes widens to the point of testing the limits of human capability at the words of the serious looking girl named Yamamoto Sayaka.
“Lost for words? Bakamono…” growls Sayaka softly, as she narrows her eyes in contempt.
Yuki looks around for help before face palming herself internally. She was the one that sent Mayu out to keep Yuu out of trouble and now who will keep her out of trouble.
A series of Ehms and Ahs creep out of her mouth to drag time as she tries to formulate a good answer.
“Kami-Sama, why didn’t you tell me about this?” she whines internally before sighing in resignation. If this Yamamoto wants a fight, she shall give it to her.
However, Kami-sama works in wonderful ways and today, he had decided to send help in the form of another Sayaka, Akimoto Sayaka…
******
“Ah Sayanee! I see that you are getting yourself acquainted with our new transfer student?” asks Sayaka as she gives the other Sayaka a friendly pat.
“Ah Yuki-San, I’m sure Sayanee didn’t mention that her father works as the head priest for the local temple?” asks Sayaka.
‘The daughter of a head priest, that explains her spiritual sense…’ thoughts Yuki as she shakes her head in response to the words of Akimoto Sayaka.
“In fact, do forgive her if she talks too much of the supernatural stuff! She’s over-eager on such things but most of the time, she joins me to create chaos on the football field as the twin towers. Our goalkeeper had graduated. Therefore, we are looking for one now, would you like to join us?” pleads Sayaka.
“But I…. I know nothing about football…”
“Don’t worry! The goalkeeper is the easiest job! You just stand there and stop the balls from hitting our goalpost. But most of the time, Sayanee and myself will have so much procession of the ball that you won’t need to do anything at all, right Sayanee?”
Yamamoto Sayaka could only manage a soft “hai” as an answer. Her mind still confused with the entrance of the other Sayaka. A Bakamono in her football team?! This is madness!
She reached out again with her senses to re-confirm the demon aura she had detected from this new transfer student, only to detect nothing from her, not even a trace of human aura.
Sayanee was clearly confused now as she wrinkled her nose, her mind in deep thoughts.
“You see, Sayanee is always in deep thoughts when it comes to our team! Our training starts this coming Wednesday! You will join us right? Lets go Sayanee, we shouldn’t hold Yuki-san up anymore. Lets start our planning for club activities!” ends Sayaka as she drags Sayanee off the table, leaving Kashiwagi Yuki alone at her table again…
-
I love how little effort Mayu took to subdue Yuu. She looks like the perfect but deadly little girl whom people should be wary of. And Riku seems to have taken an interest in her. Unexpected but I like! XD
I agree with what you said about having standard pairings. It'll be refreshing and awesome to have a twist! ;)
Last but not least, thank you for giving Sayanee a significant role in this story! Keep up the nice work!
-
I wanna see a little atsumina :D
-
Wahh Mayuyu sure is scary like she's not fully part of this World, hmm, I wonder what Sayanee would sense in her! (btw cool Sayanee has a real role in this!)
I wonder what it was that 'Oju-Sama' said to Yuu, despite Mayu's scary powers it seems that as much as anything stopped her.....
Hmm, and quite what is Yuki, sometimes she seems composed but then she is easily ratlled by Sayanee, interesting...
-
Should have found this fic earlier its so goood !! XD
Perverted yuko / yuu as usaul ~ :P
Ohh sayanee is in this .. Least she got a proper role :thumbup
Why not add milky too .. :lol:
Update soon !! Need to read more :drool:
-
She said Yuki bakemono too...
-
"Kojima Haruna! I shall crack you open like a chestnut…"
I'm the one who think... Oh god I have to stop this mind of mine *fp*
-
Sorry guys for being a slowpoke. Work is overwhelming. Just back from AKB 6th Stage in Singapore.
Really impressed by the following girls:
Ume-Chan's dancing really own the stage
Yuka's stage presence. Alway smiling and 110%!
Micha's grace and beauty. She's really charming!
Moochhii's perseverance. Initially she wasn't that confidence on stage but I'm glad she recovered mid show and became a shining sun.
Nattsumi's charm. Although not that prominent on stage, she's really pro and charming. I really hope she can get more support. Kinda felt bad for neglecting her during handshake as I wanted to pass Yuka-san a personal gift.
If she's back in Singapore for another show, I shall give Nattsumi a gift too.
-
Sorry guys for being a slowpoke. Work is overwhelming. Just back from AKB 6th Stage in Singapore.
Didn't know you are from Singapore too! Then again, I should've guessed from your username :sweatdrop:
I didn't go for the 6th Stage but I agree with what you said about Umechan. She always captures my attention when she's on stage. Great dancing skills and very very pretty! Anyway, I saw on the AKB48 SG website that SDN48 will be coming on 17 Feb for another stage! It will probably be the last chance to watch them live so I'm really excited. I went for their 2nd Stage and was simply blown away by their charm and professionalism. Although I love AKB48, I must admit SDN48 are more fun to watch as they appear more confident and less rehearsed because of their age and experience. Their MCs are really entertaining. However, I haven't had the chance to watch AKB48 media senbatsu members perform live so my impression isn't that all that accurate.
Pardon me for rambling on. Just got excited to know there's a fellow Singaporean fan on the fan fiction board :grin:
Anyway, take your time to update your story (though I'm itching to find out what will happen next). I understand how work can really consume one's life :(
-
@seigus Thanx! I guess I will see you at SDN48 show in Feb? hahahah.
@Haruko Kai and Acchan will happen. But it will be slow. Things will go wrong and will happen but they will happen somehow, somewhere =P
@oddball I will have an interview with the Yuki gang soon so that things will be much clearer. Just wait for the interview special =)
@Popsicle DONE! Now lets see what she...he can do in this mess =P
@RenaChii OPS! I mean BAKEMONO... not BAKAMONO! It's a VERY BAD TYPO!
@kahem I can't help you if you think like Yuuko =x
Chapter 5
Ding Dong Ding Dong...
The chime of the school bell signifies the end of school day. The gates of the school slowly open to the delight of the students, to release them back to freedom.
But freedom is only for those that deserve it. A loud smack on the table brings fear to all that has to stay back for detention for the first day of school as Mariko-sama continues her daily routine of the residential prison warden for the “privileged”
“Ah… We have celebrities in the house. Kojima Riku and Takahashi Kai from Persona. I humbly welcome the both of you to Hotel California, you can check out anytime you like, but you can never leave…”
Kai sighs as he stares at his best friend. It’s his entire fault for starting the commotion at the cafeteria. Being celebrities doesn’t mean you are above the law. This is the iron rule that Principal Akimoto had set down for all students. And now that they will be late for recording, Kai shivers involuntarily from the fear of facing their dreadful akuma manager, Kamonohatsu Saeko.
From the frying pan to the fire, both will give you fiery death. But at least in school, there’s the kind and gentle Akimoto Kouchou (Principal) to restrict Mariko-Sama. In the entertainment industry, who would dare to defy Saeko-sama?
Kai grimaces as the longest hour in his life continues under the watch of the banshee of Akimoto High School, Mariko-Sama.
KOJIMA RIKU! DAMN YOU!
******
“Honmaya… You do have an injury…” exclaims Yokoyama Yui as she inspects Minegishi Kuu in the nursing station.
“That’s what I had being telling you for the past hour…” sighs Sayama as he watches the nursing teacher bandaged up the injured Kuu.
“Yokohama Sensei, are you sure I need all this bandages? I have a recording later after school…”
“Recording after school? You must be lying. You are just a high school student. You can’t be a pop star…”
“But he is! Sensei, Minegishi is Kuu from Persona…”
“Ah! Honmaya… Why didn’t you say so in the first place? But don’t you worry; Mariko-sensei just mailed me to seek suggestions on how to torture Kai and Riku during detention. So all of you will be late…”
‘Late…’ gulps Kuu upon hearing that. Being late was a big NO in the Entertainment World, especially if you are just a rising starlet. His manager, the notorious Saeko, won’t like that at all. The bandages seems to be much welcome now if he could use them to get some sympathy…
******
“Ojuu-sama, I’m sincerely hope that you had an enjoyable first day at school. Do pardon us for any mistake on our part…”
“Kachou-san, I’m glad that you had agreed to take us in at such short notice. I’m also pleased that you had excuses my retainers from the cruel fate of detention…”
“But Ojuu-sama! I wasn’t at fault..mmpphhh… mphhh” complains Oshima before a quick-witted Wanatabe cups his mouth with her hand to prevent the loud-mouth yankee from worsening the situation.
“Ah… to be young again. Your retainers are so full of energy…” chuckles Akimoto.
“Please, Kachou-san, from now on, please treat us like your normal students. I had chosen here because I know that you are impartial and fair. Isn’t the school motto’sいつも感謝。冷静に丁寧に正確に。みんなの夢が叶いますように? (Be always grateful. Calm, Careful and Exact. Everybody’s dream to come true) All of us have dreams and we are grateful that you have given us this chance. We shall be calm, careful and exact to live up to your expectations!”
“But Ojuu-sama, how could I…”
“Now now, I know that it’s possible. Didn’t you just send 2 celebrities from Persona to detention? We will live up to your expectations as normal students from now on. Please do excuse us as we take our leave…” replies Kashiwagi Yuki calmly as she bowed formally towards the principal before exiting the office with her retainers…
******
“Miyazawa Sayama! You are late again!” screams the voice of the twin Sayakas of the football club.
“I’m sorry! I had to persuade Yokoyama Sensei to release Kuu from the infirmary. I’m sure you know how hard it is to do that…” apologies Sayama as he rushes into the club room of the football club.
The two Sayakas nod in unison. Both of them had being into the infirmary due to the various injuries on the pitch. They both understand how hard it is to convince the distrusting sensei.
“Well, you could had abandon Kuu! He’s nothing but trouble! By the way, important updates! We found a new goalkeeper!” announce Akimoto Sayaka with gusto.
“ NO! I object! That new transfer student is not proven yet and I don’t trust her…”
“Ah… Sayanee, be nice! Remember the first time we met. You didn’t trust me too and we are now best buddies on the pitch and off! You should give Kashiwagi-san a chance! What do you say Manager-Sayama?”
Sayama freezes at the magical word of Kashiwagi.
“Kashiwagi..?”
“Yes! Kashiwagi Yuki! The new transfer student. Are you deaf? Or are you getting old? Or you need to visit Yokoyama sensei?”
“No…Thank you… I’m just tired after taking care of Kuu…”
“Sae-Kun! Please reject this ridiculous idea of Sayaka! She’s not going to be in our team right?”
“Ehmm… I think it might be a good idea… We do need a new goalkeeper right?”
“Nani! Sae-Kun! You better go back to Yokoyama Sensei! I seriously doubt that you are capable to be our manager anymore…”
“Good choice Manager-Kun! According to the club’s constitution, during the selection of members, the manager gets the final say. So we are now completed! I can see it now! The High School Cup Finals! Here we go!”
“Fine! If you both want it that way… Just don’t regret it! Remember! I warned you about her first…” puffs Sayanee as she slams her palm down on her desk before walking out in angry strides.
“Eh!? Sayanee? Sayanee! Wait up! Sayama! What are you doing there daydreaming? Lets chase her back!” yells Sayaka as she chases after her fellow twin tower.
Sayama could only give a huh…
His mind is clearly no longer focusing on the two Sayakas.
******
“Riku… Riku… Hello! Riku! Anybody home? Snap out of it! We are gonna be late! Shachou will have our hides!” cries Kai as he drags his fellow band member out of detention.
“And where’s that Kuu! Don’t he know what time it is… This is it! It’s really from the frying pan to the hot fiery hell fire…” shudders Kai as he thinks of the unpleasant things that will happen when Saeko Shachou discovers that they are late for their new single recording.
“I’m here Kai… I don’t think I can make it for recording today. Yokoyama Sensei has given me medical leave…” replies Kuu from behind them.
“Huh! Wah! Kyaa! Kuu! What on earth happened?” asks Kai as he rolls up his eyes in disbelief at the sigh of a mummified Kuu.
“Humpty Dumpty had a great fall?” was the sheepish answer Kuu gave.
“Great! We are so gonna die! Riku! Snap out of it! We have no time to waste! We need to rush to the studio!” yells Kai as he drags both members out of school.
“But I’m on Medical Leave! It’s against human rights to work when you’re sick…” screams Kuu in resistance as he looks at Riku with pleading eyes.
But Riku wasn’t focusing on anything now expect for the lyrics of a new original song that starts with:
3秒見つめるだけで
落としてみせようか
お前の愛なんて
俺の思い通りさ
I look at you for just 3 seconds,
And I seem to fall for you
You’re love
Is my pleasure…
******
“Ojuu-sama… Aren’t we going home? Why are we going towards the opposite direction?” asks Oshima as the trio takes a right turn at the cross junction instead of left.
“Quiet Oshima… Ojuu-sama has new plans…” whispers Watanabe Mayu as she puts a finger to the lips, hoping that Oshima gets the hint. Ojuu-sama seems to be in deep thoughts and as her retainers; it isn’t their place to question her.
The trio slowly proceeds up the street only to stop in front of a big shrine.
“Nani… Ojuu-sama?” ask both Oshima and Watanabe in shock.
“Don’t worry Yuu-chan. I’m visiting a friend…” replies Yuki as she closes her eyes in concentration.
A ray of light beams from the temple and slowly materializes into a pulsing form of golden energy.
“Yuki-hime… it’s being years since we met…” greets the entity.
“Ryujin-sama… it’s being years …” nods Yuki in acknowledgement.
“And now you have grown. You have retainers too. My gosh! A flying squirrel and a doll? Why are you associating yourself with Bakemono like them?” asks the golden entity, inciting anger to both retainers. But as much as they would like to retaliate, they do understand that this entity was out of their league.
“I don’t think you are right to criticize them. Oshima might be a squirrel but he has courage. Watanabe might be a doll but she has dedication. All are virtues that might not be found in the human world. Didn’t we all started as Bakemono before following the way of cultivation towards our current status?”
“You’re right. The way of cultivation is the only way for us to become saints to serve Kami-sama. Is that why you are walking the earth now?”
“Ehmm. Kannon-sama had advised me to do that. To learn the ways of the human so that I could progress further in my cultivation.”
The golden entity seems to nod in agreement. “If Kannon-sama has advised you so, then it shall be good to follow her orders. Now Yuki-hime, why are you really here? I’m sure you are not visiting me just for old times sake?”
Embarrass by his words, Yuki blushes slightly as she looks down to the ground.
“I understand that Ryujin-sama is now the Guardian deity of this town. The high priest’s daughter is most perceptive and had confronted me. I asking you for advise on how to deal with her…”
The entity seems to laugh at the request. “Kanon-sama was right to send you for training. You might be strong in your cultivation but your understanding of the human ways is limited. I understand your problem and I have a solution for you. I would like you to meet my son, Ryuki. He will be your retainer too. Please guide him well. Now farewell Yuki-hime! I leave Ryuki in your care now…”
The golden entity shines brightly before dissipating, leaving behind a bewildered teenage boy of similar age to them.
“But Otu-san! I don’t want to be her retainer…” whines the boy before realizing he’s in the presence of new company.
“Now now… what do we have here?” asks Oshima as he sizes the newcomer.
“Ah I know! Since you have equally fair skin and height like Mayu, you should take her surname as well! Watanabe means crossing of boundary. Like her, you had crossed over to this world as well, it shall be a fitting name for you!” exclaims Oshima.
Still confused by his current situation, the new Watanabe Ryuki could only nod blurry while Mayu gives herself a facepalm at the new addition.
“Ah Mayu, don’t you like this newcomer! Since you both have the same surname, you can be his Onee-chan! Isn’t that great?” announces Oshima.
‘This will be great! By giving Mayu these new responsibilities, she won’t be able to control me anymore hohoho…’ thoughts Oshima Yuu deviously.
Mayu wrinkles her face upon hearing that. Her primary duty is to obey Ojuu-sam, this new boy will be a burden. She looks at Yuki hoping for salvation from this mess only to see her knob her head in agreement.
“Ah…Ryuki-chan. Welcome to the family. Mayu-chan might be stern and cold, but she shall be a good Onee-chan to you right?” affirms Yuki as she looks at Mayu sternly, making her sigh in helplessness.
“That’s it! Ryuki is now part of us… Ryuki… Ryuki… That’s hard to pronounce…Ryu..ki…Riiii….Yu…Ki… hmmz since you are white and soft like a cheese, how about we call you chizu? But it doesn’t flow…Ah I know! How about we call you MILKY!” exclaims Oshima as he skips around the new recruit in glee.
“But I don’t wanna be called MILKY…” exclaims Ryuki…
Watanabe Ryuki, aka Milky has joined the party.
-
OMG MILKYYY !! :inlove:
This fic is amazing~
Thanks prataz you da best! :twothumbs
Be expecting me to read every chapter then ~ :lol:
Update soon .. :w00t:
-
The Persona going to face the wrath for being late from Saeko Shachou. ^^
-
Me, thinking like Yuko? Never :hee:
Poor persona lol
-
It's so awesome that you are including the NMB48 girls in this story. At first I was thinking "Who the heck is this Ryuki?" then I saw MILKY!!! She's my NMB oshi :wub:
Can't wait to see how Mayu "takes care" of her new little brother XD And woo hoo, Riku is so in love!
I really like how this story is turning out. Keep up the good work! :thumbsup
-
Hmm so the plan for getting Sayanee off Yuki's back is Milky?!?!?!?............... Yeah that might work! :lol:
Oh dear, seems as though Yuu is trying to get some breathing space for herself by getting Mayu to look after Milky (Poor Milky on that front it think!) I think though that maybe Mayu knows the score and will be around Yuu when she needs to be, even if she dosn't want much to do with Milky at the moment!
-
OMG Milky had appear!!!
Mayu get a little brother
and Yui.. honmayan character :rofl: :rofl:
Really love your story
Keep up the good work :twothumbs
-
wow wow wow sayamilky? saeyuki? like it :D
-
Milky is here as a boy?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_lol.gif)
Please update soon~! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_XD.GIF)
-
Hi guys, a short radio special. Hope it helps to answer some questions!
Radio Special 1:
Aki: Ladies and Gentlemen! Welcome to AKB Radio! Tonight, you are privileged to have Kuramochi Asuka from French Kiss as your host!
Mochi: And you have the beautiful Aki-cha from French Kiss too as your co-host!
Aki: Too bad Yukirin is busy with Winter Sonata; else we will be a complete French Kiss! Now everybody, do you like our new single, Saisho no mail?
Mochi: AKI-CHA! We shouldn’t be promoting our single today. Remember we have a guest today? Mr Ryujin-san, welcome to our show, would you like to greet our guest?
Ryujin: Hi everybody, I’m Ryujin. I play the role of Ryujin in Winter Sonata. And yes, I’m the real thing. I’m the king of dragons of the Eastern Sea, and one of the dragon gods.
Aki: Ah Mr Ryujin-san, you are really into your role! Thank you for your amazing greeting! You must be delighted that 2012 is your year?
Ryujin: Ah… Yes. It does feel good to be in demand again.
Mochi: So Ryujin-san, how does it feel to work with our Yuki-rin? Has she bedazzled you with her charm yet?
Ryujin: Ah Yuki-hime? How I wish I could but there’s… ehem… the wife? Maybe my good for nothing son might be interested in her but I guess when you are of a certain age, it makes you immuned…
Aki: REALLY! That’s amazing! Finally someone is immuned to Yuki-rin! How about the rest of us in French Kiss? Do you think we can charm you?
Mochi: AKI! He’s married… But how about your son? Do you think he will fall for Yuki-rin? Or perhaps any one of us?
Ryujin: My son… It would be my honor to have any of you as my daughter in law but that good for nothing only likes girls from Osaka…
Aki+Mochi: OSAKA! NMB48????!!!
Ryujin: Don’t ask me. I’m only the father. I can’t control his taste in girls, right?
Mochi: Sigh… That’s true… Oh we have a call-in right now! Hi! Would you like to introduce yourself?
Caller A (In a Darth Vader Voice): Ah… My name is Hentai Risu! I would like to ask why did you send your son instead when Ojuu-sama asked you for help. What makes you think that white milky of yours can stand up against that fierce looking Sayaka-woman?
Aki: Ah… somebody has being following the show! So Ryujin-san, would you like to take this question?
Ryujin: Sure… you know, for a Bakemono, you are a Bakamono, isn’t it Oshima Yuu…
Yuu: *GASP* How did you know it’s me? I tried one of those Star Wars Voice changers to change my voice…
Ryujin: Not many people are famous for being a Hentai Risu (Perverted Squirrel) and only someone as stupid as you won’t guess the reason why. Your Ojuu-sama and fellow Bakemono Mayu does understand the reason.
Mochi: But Ryujin-san, I don’t understand too. I’m sure many readers won’t understand the reason too…
Ryujin: Alright… for the sake of the readers and fans, I shall explain it just once… Apart from the Dragon God, I’m also the main god of the town’s shine. This means the head priest serves me as I grant blessings to the believers.
For a priest to use white magic, he has to invoke the name of the temple’s main god, which is myself.
The same goes for Sayanee, if she uses any magic, she calls upon my blessings for the spell.
But most of the time, as one of the main gods, I’m overwhelmed by the running of the rain cycle in the region, so Ryuki does most of the magic part…
Yuu: Ohh… so that means if Ryuki doesn’t allow her, she’s powerless?
Ryujin: BINGO. You can say that her power depends on the whims of Ryuki now…
Mochi: AH! That’s so smart! I’m sure Milky-chan can manage this quite well!
Ryujin: Sigh… that’s the hard part… which is why Ryuki is under-going training with Yuki-hime.
Aki: Don’t you worry! Yuki-rin is a capable leader. I’m sure Milky-chan will learn well under her!
Yuu: Don’t you worry Ryujin-sama! I, Oshima Yuu, shall do my best to guide him too! Oh crap! I got to go… Mayuyu is on the loose again!
<The calls end abruptly…>
Mochi: And there goes our first caller. Ryujin-san, this sure is interesting to do Winter Sonata. What do you think will happen next?
Ryujin: You know as a god, I’m not suppose to reveal any heavenly secrets…
Aki: Ah Ryujin-san, you are such a pro! But I’m sure the listeners would like to know more so that there’s better viewership?
Ryujin: Oh well… This is just for better viewership. I think there will be love triangles happening but I’m not going to reveal who…
Mochi: Love triangles! That’s so cruel! Why can’t love be simple and straightforward?
Aki: Asuka… The viewers want chaos, love triangles and tragedy! Look at all the Korean shows! They are such hits due to that. Guy A likes Girl A, Girl A likes Guy B. Love Triangle occurs. Finally Guy A gets Girl A, only to have one of them have cancer and the other killed in accident. Guy B is the lone survivor but choose to be alone due to love.
Mochi: …. Why do you have to be so negative… Didn’t you played the role as a positive girl recently?
Aki: But that’s the truth isn’t it? I would like to argue with you but our time is up! Mr Ryujin-san, thank you for your time!
Ryujin: Thank you for your time too! It’s my pleasure to be on this show.
Mochi: And now we shall say goodbye to our listeners with French Kiss’s Temo Demo Nami Da!
Aki: Please enjoy!
<End>
-
Now i understand bit more .. :fap
You know as a god, I’m not suppose to reveal any heavenly secrets…
Lmfao so true so true !!
Triangles I :heart: it woop !~ :twothumbs
Can't wait for the next part now~ XD
-
Whoa~ what a unique way to answer some of our curiosities.. this is fresh! :D
Radio Special 1? So we can expect for Radio SP 2, 3, ..., n later? :?
-
I like the radio concept :twothumbs :twothumbs
Love Triangle who? who? :panic:
Need to know soon..
can't wait for next part
Hope you can update soon :bow:
-
Thanks for reading and commenting on my fic :)
Just started reading here but decided I'll leave something first before I forget.
I'll come back and modify this when I finish reading :twothumbs
Finally finish reading and up to date and remembered to come back to edit my comment :twothumbs
Wow this is interesting, so Yuki is the mysterious Yuki-onna that saved Sayama, and Mayu is now able to walk and talk.. but they don't
remember little Sayama! LOL at Yuu-chan, not matter where she/he is it will always be entertaining (the super flying squirrel). I got weird
looks from bro when I laughed seeing how Yuu came up with Milky!
So twin tower is WSayaka in here, and we have Milky and Mayu related, a PERSONA! and a trolling homeroom teacher :lol:
THe star of these few chapters I must say is the random ice cubes :thumbsup Thanks for the random Radio special.
PLease continue! update sooon!
-
LOL radio interview with a God, what a scoop! :P
Hmm, so Milky is the one who controls the 'powers' that Sayanee has, :lol: nice, wonder how that will play out not she is under the protectoion of Yuki?
Love traingle?!? :w00t: At the moment I want a Sayanee, Milky, Yuki one, I just like the idea of Sayanee not having her powers anymore and falling for Yuki, or Milky changing from his er 'norm' and liking girls from kagoshima as well as Osaka!
mmmm Milky and Yuki, mmmm Yuki and Sayanee, mmmm Sayanee and Milky, mmmm Yuki, Milky and Sayanee :on bleed:
-
Hahahah that was funny ^^
-
The Radio show was hilarious!
And it makes us understand Milkys role...
Thank you for your update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
-
@Popsicle Thanx for the support! But I will need your help to QC Milky's character. I'm not very familiar with NMB except for seeing them in Singapore Live once =x
The love triangles will slowly appear. Hopefully it's not gonna turn korean style.
@Sydney W Persona's torture will happen soon.But I won't focus that much on Persona as this fic is still on Saeyuki =)
@kahem I'm sure there's some Yuko-ism in all of us ard. And thanx! I tried my best to make the radio special kinda crazy. More crap will happen soon!
@seigus Thanx for the support bro! I'm going to SDN48 show! Maybe we can meet up during then.
@oddball Now I seriously wonder if Yuu can succeed but if he does, then Mayu won't be the scary smarty cyborg we will love.
Thanx for the suggestion. But it won't be Sayanee, Milky and Yuki. Something else will happen. Love is random, Love is all around. All will be a surprise!
@msst28 I was waiting for somebody to comment on Yui's Homayan. Yui is one of my fave girl apart from Yukirin. Hopefully I can develop her character here instead of giving her little camo roles =x
And thank you for supporting the radio show. I wasn't sure if readers here would be used to this. Love triangle will slowly develop. Lets see how it goes.
@Haruko Hope you are fine with this arrangement. I wonder how Sayanee and Milky will turn out...
@RenaChii I will update soon... once I can get my brain to work. Work is overwhelming =x
@aruka There will be various radio shows to allow readers to understand more about the characters. Expect more wacky fun ok!
@immortal_K Thank you! Your fics are damn nice, making mine pale in comparison. Look forward to more comments to improve my writing!
@Megumi Thank you! Your support is much needed!
Mina-san! Arrigato for the support! It's all the comments you all gave that make me smile during a hard day at work.
New update is coming soon as I get my inspiration while listening to Team B's Stages.
Yes... my fave team is TEAM B! B! B!
-
@msst28 I was waiting for somebody to comment on Yui's Homayan. Yui is one of my fave girl apart from Yukirin. Hopefully I can develop her character here instead of giving her little camo roles =x
really..
I like her too especially if she with the honmayan charater :mon inluv:
Hope to see it too
-
modified my comment from above, since I did say I would come back and comment properly after I read :lol:
-
Chapter 6
The familiar crack of the whip echoes through the room, bringing fear to those that hears it.
“So… You dare to be late for recording…” growls the deep voice of the akuma of the entertainment industry, Kamonohatsu Saeko.
“Ehm… We were… ehm…” stutters Kai, his body reacts involuntarily in memory of the previous lesson for being rude to the Charismatic Diva, Ray.
He glances at the mummified Kuu with the side of his eyes, hoping the quick-witted boy could provide a solution.
However, Kuu only looks at him nonchalantly before looking down at his medical certificate and look back at him with a grin in his eyes that seems to say ‘I’m safe…’
‘Traitor!’ curses Kai silently as he stares daggers at Kuu before looking at Riku, hoping the leader for the group could save them from this mess.
“Shachou… It’s my fault. I was busy coming up with lyrics for our new song. Would you mind helping me with that?” explains Riku sincerely with a bow.
“Eh….!?” went Kai and Kuu, their eyes widening at the comment before bowing their heads in guilt.
Riku is really their leader. Soldering the blame for them both by telling such a lie. But without a song to present to Shachou, the two fear for the fate of the tall lanky leader of theirs.
“Kami-sama! Please protect Riku…”
******
Kojima Riku breathes in deeply to calm his nerves before reaching for one of the guitars hanging by the racks.
Plugging the instrument in, he adjusts the knobs on the amplifier before testing out a few chords to test the level of distortion.
Finally satisfied, he palm-mutes the first chord continuously to build up the tempo before breaking into the song:
3秒見つめるだけで
落としてみせようか
お前の愛なんて
俺の思い通りさ
******
Watanabe Mayu gives herself another face palm. In fact, her palm could soon be a permanent resident on her face considering the amount of stupidity that is happening around her.
At first, there’s the troublemaking Oshima Yuu and now there’s the naïve Watanabe Ryuki that is so simple and trusting that you could cheat him off his clothes and he would thank you for it.
The best of all, Ojuu-sama has conveniently entrusted her to take care of the two.
‘Oh God! Why do you torture me with this two… Wait… didn’t one of the gods just send one of them to us… ‘ grimaces Mayu as she whines internally.
As she turns towards her Ojuu-sama, hoping to appeal against the task of being carekeeper for the two idiots, her nose starts to tickle.
Puzzled by such a reaction, her hand reaches for her nose to scratch it, only to trigger off a big sneeze, leaving her stunned.
As the rest fuss around her, worried that she might be unwell, Oshima Yuu stare at her hardly before cocking his eyebrow at her.
“Ah… Congratulations! Mayuyu! Somebody must be missing you!”
******
The last chord of the song slowly fades away, leaving familiar painful silence of the sound proof studio.
Kai and Kuu look at each other dumbfounded before looking at their leader with newfound respect.
“You didn’t tell me you knew how to play the guitar…” accuses Kai.
“And the lyrics… it’s amazing! How did you manage to come up with this…” praises Kuu.
Embarrassed by the praises and attention, Riku looks down shyly, his eyes darting nervously away from any eye contact.
He couldn’t tell the rest that the song was inspired by someone whom had captured his heart in 3 seconds.
Besides, to fall in love is a big taboo even as a male idol. That was one of the primary reasons why Kai haven’t confessed to his crush Maeda Atsuko.
Before he could think of a good reason, a big paper fan hits the 3 of them on head.
“Ah Itai…” chorus the 3 of them, rubbing their heads in pain.
“Quiet… I had showed mercy by using the fan instead of the whip…. Consider this your reward for writing your own song. But do you have to use an electric guitar? This is so X-Japan… Why don’t you switch it to a Classical and give it some Spanish feel? The song needs to be mysterious and romantic, a song that is a statement to the girl you like…”
As Saeko drones on, giving her comments on how to rearrange and improve the song, the trio gives a sigh of relief.
They had survived the day!
******
“What do you mean by someone misses me?” asks Mayu in shock, her robotic façade broken into pieces.
“It means someone misses you! It’s common knowledge that when you sneeze once, it means someone is thinking of you…” announces Oshima loudly.
“Aniki! If I miss you, would you sneeze too?” asks Milky cutely.
“Ah… Little Milky, you are so cute! But I’m afraid that I won’t sneeze that easily if it came from you. To make someone sneeze, you must really like that person. Like really really really like that person. In short, it must be love!” declares Oshima.
“Oh… So if I miss Tousan, he will sneeze too?”
“Ah Milky, you are so adorable but no… The sneeze only happens if someone has romantic intentions towards you! It’s gotta be LOVE!”
Watanabe Mayu gives herself a face palm again before pulling the young and gullible Milky away before Oshima can further corrupt his mind.
‘Love… There’s no love in this world. I shall find the source of this sneeze and put him away for good. I’m a golem, a cyborg created out of magic. Cyborgs don’t fall in love…’
******
“Ah Mariko-sensei, I hope that you are prepared to have another transfer student in your class tomorrow…”
“What! Another one? Seriously! Kachou Sensei! Could you stop treating my class like a refuge camp?”
“I’m sorry but your class is the only one that has a vacancy left…”
“But Kachou Sensei, you know that the seat has being vacant for a reason…”
“I know… but the application has being approved. I’m sure it will be alright…”
“FINE! If you say so! Just don’t blame me when anything happens!”
“Don’t worry… I’m sure the new transfer student can take good care of himself. Besides, if there’s anything wrong, there’s still Yamamoto Sayaka to handle it…”
“Pfftt… You always seem to have an answer for everything don’t you?”
“And that’s why I’m the Kachou. Thank you for the day and have a safe trip home…”
Mariko-sensei bows politely towards the principal as she walks towards the school gate.
Before leaving the premises, she takes a look back at the school only to zoom into her classroom as she sees a dark silhouette appear at the window.
Narrowing her eyes in displeasure, she prepares herself to scream at the top of her voice for the student to report to her immediately, only to realize that the silhouette has disappeared.
Rubbing her eyes in disbelief, she looks around again, hoping to find the offensive student but to no avail.
‘I must be working too hard…’ she shrugs as she walks out of the school to head towards one of the pubs.
“There’s nothing like a glass of warm Sake to reward myself after a hard day at work…”
******
-
Hell yeh u updated ! :thumbup
Riku Cutee .. :inlove:
Oh well least they didn't get anywhere near as hurt as i expected. XD
Milky u gullible child.. :lol:
Mind updating soon.. :P
I love it ~ :yep:
-
Awesome for updating the stories. ^^ Targeting the next update soon ^^
-
Ganbatte Mayuyu~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/hiakhiakhiak.gif)
-
Aww Riku made a song for Mayuyu! :lol: Hmm seems as though he has inadvertantly given a 'weapon' to Yuu by doing that too, hmm not sure it's going to have the desired effect with Mayu though who may er' destroy him if she finds out! :panic:
Milky, so sweet, lol I'm looking forward to you meeting Sayanee.... but, what is wrong with the seat that may soon be yours?
-
Kojima Riku& Watanabe Mayu?! Waaaa I want next update fast! LoL
And Ryuki/Milky haahha such a cute innocent boy :lol:
“I’m sorry but your class is the only one that has a vacancy left…”
“But Kachou Sensei, you know that the seat has being vacant for a reason…”
“I know… but the application has being approved. I’m sure it will be alright…”
“FINE! If you say so! Just don’t blame me when anything happens!”
“Don’t worry… I’m sure the new transfer student can take good care of himself. Besides, if there’s anything wrong, there’s still Yamamoto Sayaka to handle it…”
Ohhh ahhhh interesting! Must be a spirit or something...
‘I must be working too hard…’ she shrugs as she walks out of the school to head towards one of the pubs.
“There’s nothing like a glass of warm Sake to reward myself after a hard day at work…”
LoL Mariko sama hhahaha
An AKB school with spirit/demons/god fic yeah... definitely my kind of fic :twothumbs
Can't wait for your next update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
-
aahh riku like mayu.. interesting pairing
and milky so innocent.. so cute
cant wait for him to meet sayane..
-
Riku has a crush on Mayu :P Uncommon pairing but I like it :thumbsup
p.s. Your nick reminds me of food & making me hungry lol
-
huwaaa~~ finally!! found another saeyuki XD please continue.. i need big dozen of saeyuki fanfic~ please pleaseee! i beg you <3 thanks