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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Mari07 on February 05, 2012, 02:27:41 AM
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Fallen Devil
Hello everyone! Its been so long since I wrote a fic. and when I do write, I don't really stick to it haha :sweatdrop: Well! I've decided to stick to this one! A story that will have tragedy, suspense, and of course, love! But this tragic love story will surely have a happy ending! The pairs in this story will be AtsuMina, KojiYuu, and MaYuki! There is no main pair, because this story has many major characters. Please enjoy!
Chapter 1
Once upon a time in a far away land, where Kings and Queens still exist and where human rights where still limited to those who lacked money, there was a King who befriended other Kings in hopes of living peacefully: King Astral Takahashi. King Astral and King Batler Maeda were good friends which had their daughters close friends as well; Minami and Atsuko. As children, they got along well, and even now as they grew up to their adolescence their bond also grew. The relationship between Minami and Atsuko became more and more intimate until they were able to call each other lovers.
But alas, their wonderful fairy tale came to an end. They were forced to separate and never to speak to each other again. No one was aware of their relationship; however it was because of the up rise of their fathers’ conflict that they had to say their farewells. Torn apart from each other; they vowed to once again meet.
Flashback:
* In secrecy they meet in a dark forest between the two kingdoms: the Devil’s forest*
“Minami, this may be our last—“ with a finger above her lips, she was silenced. “Shh! Atsuko! This isn’t going to be our last. We shall meet plenty more. I promise.” Minami wanted her princess to feel reassured, but with the stutter in her voice, Atsuko wasn’t convinced. “But how? Father intends on having me married. He wants me to marry my cousin Charles.” still panicking, Atsuko couldn’t help but tear. “Prince Charles? Fortunately he isn’t someone outside of your Kingdom.” shocked by her lover’s reply, she yells “What are you saying, Minami!? You want me to get married!?” . “No! Of course not! How could I ever want that!?” holding her tightly, she whispers to her dear Atsuko, ” I can’t stand the thought of you belonging to someone else. I can’t even go a day without seeing you, but this way… with this plan, we can somehow manage to be together. Just bear with me, kay, Atsuko?”
Now:
Years have passed since the melancholy of their love; and yet it still exists. Princess Atsuko who is now Queen Atsuko and Princess Minami who is to wed a Prince have not contacted since that meeting.
Minami receives an anonymous letter that says ” Devil’s forest”. She knew it was her lover messaging to meet her. On that night, she sneaks out to rendezvous with Atsuko.
*In a isolated cabin hidden somewhere in the Devil’s forest*
Minami enters the cabin seeing her long beloved, Atsuko sobbing on the bed. “Atsuko!?” she rushes to her lover’s side and tries to comfort her “What’s wrong, Atsuko!?”. In that moment, Atsuko had laid a kiss upon Minami’s lips, not answering to her concern. Atsuko pushed Minami down on the bed and became more assertive with Minami’s body. “Atsu—hey! Wait!” Minami tried to overcome Atsuko, but her force was too strong. “I said wait!” Minami yelled. “Eh! Gomen!” Atsuko got off her oppressed lover. “Atsuko, explain yourself.” Minami demanded, staring at the other girl with a fierce look. “I..! I…! Waaah!!” Atsuko wailed and cried, Minami, shocked from her outburst, was very confused. “Atsuko, please explain to me what’s going on…” she said gently while holding her, “Its daddy…” she said with her face in her hands, “first he wants me to marry Charles, and now he demands I have a child with him!” Minami’s face suddenly became bland, “Ch-child?” Minami pulled away and stepped back from Atsuko. “Minami… I…” walking closer to her, Minami looked away and said “Do it.” “What?” Minami then looks into Atsuko’s eyes with a stern face, “Do it with him. Have a child.”
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mari mari MARI!!!! please update the next chapter ASAP!!!!! :)
if u want to know mari's real name pm me hahaha just kidding :)
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! FINISH CHAPTER TWO SOON!!!!
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Atsumina!!!
Love the story
Hope you update soon :bow:
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You're alive! LOLOL
Do continue :3
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Thanks for the Update :)
But... NO!!!! :cry: What's wrong with Minami?!!! :angry:
Telling Acchan to...!!!! :angry: :angry:
What is Minami's plan?!!!! :banghead:
I'm having so many mixed feelings!! Anger and sadness... :cry:
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
I hope Minami is just joking about it... :banghead:
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Mari!!!!!!!!! UPdate!! HURRY! :twothumbs :twothumbs
Need more of this!!!!!!!
Hey I see lurker Randy posting finally =)
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Me gusta. This is great.
what the hell is wrong with Minami :smhid
Please do update soon! :bow: :bow:
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ahhh whts wrong with minami why would she tell the person she loved to hav a child!! :banghead: :panic: :?
Update Quick!!!
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Omg ! Seriously?! Wt..! Does minami got any plan for its ? Plz i dont want to see Acchan has a child with any1 else but Takamina ! ( - ~ + ) !
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@Creamycracker: Yay! My mama likes my fic!
@GreenAnarchist: I have completed chapter 2, as you demanded :roll:
@msst28: Oh thank you! It gets much more exciting when we reach the climax
@Shii-chan: Yes, I am! Im surprised you are too!
@Yagami.Rai: Minami is scitzo! Haha just kidding xD we'll see, we'll see!
@Kira: Yeah!! A comment from the immortal one!
@crazywota: Who knows :smhid
@XxRoByNxX78: Keep reading :banghead: :panic:
@anzai48: Minami, in my story, is a genius and also very ambitious. In my story, there's a lot of sacrifice for love.
@okiedokie: Im sorry D: but she had to >_< !!
Chapter 2
“You want me to… do that with him!?” Atsuko exclaimed; what kind of remark was that? Why? How? How could she say such a thing? “Don’t worry Atsuko. This is part of my plan.” Minami said to herself. “But… I love you, Atsuko and no one will take this away from me.” Minami took Atsuko in her arms and embraced her closely. Looking into her eyes Minami said to her. “If you are to do it, then I shall be your first. I will not hand him over your chastity.” Minami gently laid Atsuko down on the bed, whispered in her ear her plan for their future, and gave each other their virginity.
Three months passed from that day and Queen Atsuko had announced she was carrying a child. Batler could not wait to be a grandfather; when Astral heard news of this, he had forced Minami into immediate marriage. He was not going to let his rivaling Kingdom ahead of him.
Nine months after Minami’s marriage, and Atsuko’s pregnancy, Atsuko gave birth to a princess. They named the child Yuki; even though she was born in the summer, they named her “snow” because of her deep dark eyes which gave you chills if you stared at it too long.
Three years later, Minami also gave birth to a child; Mayu. A princess who was very cheerful and enjoyed jokes.
Five years have passed, Yuki being 7 years old and Mayu being 5 years old had their first meeting together.
Queen Atsuko and Queen Minami took their daughters into the devil’s forest to meet. When they both entered the cabin, they were shocked.
Why, you may ask?
Because it ruined their plans.
“You have a daughter…?” Minami asks. “As do you… “ Atsuko said with a raised eyebrow, “What are we going to do, Minami? This isn’t part of the plan.”
“For now, let’s have them go somewhere else.” Minami turns to Mayu, “Hunny, go and play outside with that nice girl over there, kay?” Mayu obeyed her mother’s request and took Yuki’s hand. “Wanna play with me?” she said with a smile while Yuki was surprised of how bold this little girl could be, she couldn’t help but blush seeing a cute girl with soft hands smile at her. “S-sure” she nodded. Yuki ran outside with Mayu to play in the garden beside the cabin.
“Atsuko, our plan failed…” Minami’s disappointed tone pained Atsuko’s ears, “You know, Minami… our plan may still work…”
“But how!? They’re both—“ Minami was silenced by a kiss from her beloved, many worries ran through her head but as soon as she felt Atsuko’s touch all her worries vanished. “Don’t say it. There’s nothing wrong with that. We just have to ask them for their approval.” Minami, with her flushed red face, nodded in agreement. “We’ll see what happens.”
A/N: Okay I think this chapter's a bit boring but this just tells you whats happened over the years. Please choose to one of the choices for what the next chapter is going to be:
- Minami's plan
- Mayu and Yuki's play date (this one is as suspensing as discovering Minami's plan because while they are playing, a crisis occurs)
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so far I really like where this story is going, very interesting. I like your style of writing, please keep it up. :twothumbs
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I WANT MAYUKIIII
I dont mind whichever you choose to write....
BUT GIMME MORE MAYUKI
Thank you :3
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Lol
I thought this story all about atsumina
but then.. Mayuki..
Nice.. :thumbup
I also dont know what to choose
curious about minami plan..
also want to know about mayuki play date..
Why dont just write both.. haha
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Lol
I thought this story all about atsumina
but then.. Mayuki..
Nice.. :thumbup
I also dont know what to choose
curious about minami plan..
also want to know about mayuki play date..
Why dont just write both.. haha
Hahaha its not just Atsumina, and MaYuki. Its Astumina, MaYuki, AND KojiYuu XD
But good question. I do intend to write both, but I'm asking you guys which would you rather read first. Because you wont get to know the other one until 2 or 3 chapters later.
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I wish to request for "Minami‘s plan. I want to know what happened. ^^
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I was disappointed a first.. Then I was LOLing at myself when they both gave birth to MaYuki.. :lol:
This is interesting.. I don't which one to choose, but I wanna know about Minami's plan.. XD
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Mari!!!! Your updates are too short =( it`s like just when I`m getting into it you put me in another hanger!
Too many of these hangers might kill me you know!... well I am immortal but I can still complain!
BUT BUT MAYUKI!!! Kyaaaaa! :wub:
So what is their plan... hmmmm update update update! Pleaseeeeeeeeee :bow:
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Hahaha its not just Atsumina, and MaYuki. Its Astumina, MaYuki, AND KojiYuu XD
But good question. I do intend to write both, but I'm asking you guys which would you rather read first. Because you wont get to know the other one until 2 or 3 chapters later.
ok I already decided..
Well for me I want Mayuki first..
for plan let wait another 2-3 chapters..
but then most people will be crazy to know about Minami plan..
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Euh... Arrr!!! I hate the fact that they have child with other but it's Mayuyu and Yukirin lol
But I think I wanna see what will happen ^^
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OMG!!! I think I'm really speechless.. :O I wonder what is Minami's plan...
And.. OMG! Yuki as Acchan's daughter?! and Mayu as Minami's daughter?! :shocked
Never expected this turn of event... :panic:
Please Update Soon~ Want to know what happen next and wonder what is Minami's plan XD
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okay either minami is hopeing everything will be okay , really dumb, or really smart which is it ???
nice update btw update quick plz !! :thumbsup :twothumbs
you are a :theking
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Okay, so there's been a lot of votes And many of you instant msged me, since I have most of the Jphipsters skype/ fb/ msn or whatever and what came down to it was... A TIE :nervous
So I just decided to post both instead 8D
And to answer anzai48's question as to why I didnt do a poll; well it was because I was lazy. Kekekeke
Anyways! Here's the next chapter~
Chapter 3 – Side A
“Yuki-chan! Look! Aren’t these flowers beautiful?” happily smiling, their day brightens as the sun beams through the tall trees and hits them like a spotlight as they sit in the center of all the blossomed flowers. “Wow, I’ve never seen these flowers before!” Picking them gently and weaving them, Mayu made a flower crown, “Here, Yuki-chan.” Placing it on her head, she couldn’t help but giggle at the sight of the older girl’s blushing face. “You look adorable!” she says.
Meanwhile, deeper within the forest, we hear panting. Moaning. Panting and moaning. Louder and louder. The sound is getting closer… where is it coming from?
“Yuko! Are you okay!?”
“Hah… hah… we’ve… been running… ARGH!!”
“Yuko!! Save your breath! You’re injured!”
“No, Haruna. Don’t wait for me, just go… argghhh…” collapsed, the two are stranded in the forest.
“If only… I didn’t drag you into this mess, we would’ve been able to live peacefully…” the short one says, in the arms of the long-haired one. The taller one, trying to wipe all the blood, was speechless. She was too busy trying to close the other girl’s wounds and didn’t pay any attention to a word the other girl said.
“We managed to escape from Satan now, we can’t just give up right here!” the weak voice uttered, while the tears were dripping, washing off the blood from the other girl’s face. “It’s okay, Haruna. We didn’t fulfill our duty, therefore we are banished; who would have thought there were such things as Fallen Devils, huh, Haruna? Hahaha….”
“Yuko… this is no time for jokes.” She cried. Hushing the worried girl by her quick stance, the short girl keenly senses a field of flowers.
“Haruna, do you smell that?” after that said, the taller one tries to sniff the air. “Little girls?”
“No! I smell… “ she sniffs some more, and then let out a smirk, “I smell Guérisseur Diable.” She grabs the tall one’s hands and they quickly made their way to the flowers.
Yes, Guérisseur Diable; a flower that has the power to heal any demon, this flower only grows within the Devil’s Forest… a forest which is a gateway to hell.
Once the tall one and the wounded short one reached the flowers, they were shocked to see that they were all gone!
“Why…” the tall one mumbled, looking down at the two little girls beneath her. “There are tons of flowers here… why did you pick all the blue ones!?” she screamed; making the frightened children jump, “W-we…”
“That’s, okay, Haruna…” limping towards the tall one, she stares at Yuki. Licking her lips as she continues to analyze the girl. “They’ll just have to compensate with something else…”
Just as she was about to take Yuki, Mayu confronts them.
“No!” the little girl yells, with her arms spread apart. Her angry eyes sent a message more than just a no. It said to them leave us alone! “Then if you wont let me have her, are you willing to offer your soul instead?”
“But Yuko! She’s—“ interrupted, the short one allows Mayu to proceed. Walking up closer towards them, she nods in agreement. “Just… don’t hurt Yuki-chan.”
A flash. Petals everywhere; and they were gone. It all happened too fast for little Yuki to comprehend what was going on. When she came to her senses, she sees Mayu on the ground; eyes wide opened.
“Hornless… devils… “
Chapter 3 - Side B is next: Minami's Plan
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:panic: what happen to mayu??
Pls2 update soom
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WHAT DID YOU DO TO MAYU???!!!!!!!!
MARIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
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:shock: What's this?! What's happening?
MAYU!!!!!! :on blackhole:
With that cliffhanger too!
Waaa! I can't wait for next update!
Arígatou!
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Ehhh???? What happened????
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O_o .... what?, Mayu?....wait what?
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huh? eh? ehhh!!!!!!! :shocked what happened?? :? is it just me or I kinda lost here?? :panic:
Update marichan!!!! me need to know what happen!!! :banghead:
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Yeah, sorry for the bit of confusion, guys :nervous
I was going through some anxiety phase while I was writing that. Then I looked back and saw how crappy that was LOL so to make up for it, I (tried) to make this chapter longer, and more detailed!
It took me long to update cuz I gots lots of homework x_x excuse my slow updates :cathappy:
Chapter 3 – Side B
“They are our children; perhaps they share the same opinion and values…” Atsuko walked over to Minami, who was sitting on the bed thinking intently of what to do next. The floor creaked as Atsuko got closer and closer to Minami – moving her legs between the shorter girl’s – she took her face in her hands, resting her forehead against hers. Atsuko’s eyes were closed while Minami’s were staring at her. Drop. A tear fell into Minami’s eyes, “A-Atsuko!?”
“Minami, I’m so happy.” She said with a relieved smile, “ I’m so happy we’re able to meet. I’m so happy I’m holding you right now. I’m so happy… I’m so happy you still love me…” holding the girl below her tighter, she was losing breathe but allowed her lover to hold longer out of empathy. “Of course I still love you, you idiot!” Minami wrapped her arms around Atsuko, accepting her embrace. “Even though our plan failed, I’m still not giving up. I wont let you go.”
Atsuko chuckled, “It was stupid of us, ne? To think one of us would get a boy and the other a girl…” Minami stayed silent and listened, “To have peace between both kingdoms by having our children marry; by this, we’d be connected. Who would’ve thought we’d both give birth to beautiful princesses?” “I think it’s fate.” Minami said bluntly, still holding Atsuko in her arms.
“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!”
The screech of a child’s pierced their ears like a siren hunting its prey. Both of the parents panicking, they quickly got up and ran out the cabin. “Mayu!? MAYU!?” calling out her daughter’s name, she couldn’t hear any response. All she could hear was her racing heart trying to stay calm, but the thought of her precious hurt, in pain was too much.
“Yuki!” Atsuko and Minami caught sight of Yuki nudging Mayu – on the cold ground – to come back to life. Is she really dead? What’s happened? As a parent, Minami couldn’t bear to lose this child. She was even more precious to her than Atsuko was; trying to keep her balance, Minami rushed to her only daughter.
Holding the girl in her arms, she checks for any injuries. “Mayu, sweetie? What’s wrong?” Minami asks her gently but in a weak and shaky voice, “Please answer mommy… please…” she begged with flowing drops of water escaping her eyes.
Holding her tightly, she clenches her eyes, shutting them tightly. Trying to escape from the present world. It was only moments ago that she was so happy, Minami’s happiest moment was just 4 minutes ago, and now… she suffers the worst day of her life.
“Mommy?”
“Mayu… chan… !?” lifeless, she was still able to respond to her daughter’s call, “I saw it, mommy.” The high voice said sternly with a smile.
Atsuko crouched down closer to Mayu, trying to hear her as well, listened closely. Still leaving some space for her to breathe, Atsuko asked, “What did you see, Mayu-chan?”
She grinned a big huge grin on the small face, taking her finger and gesturing Atsuko to come in closer; Mayu whispered, “I saw death.” Chuckling and laughing away as though this little five year old had completely changed.
Laughing and laughing, but everyone else couldn’t understand the joke. This cynical laugh matched that of Gekikara’s but to hear this from a child… it was sickening Minami’s ears.
SLAP
Minami had raised a hand against her child’s face, leaving a red sting on both their skin. “What’s wrong with you, Mayu!?” she asked desperately hoping to have an answer. But her question was never answered. Mayu silently walked towards Yuki – the only stilled one – and took her first kiss.
“I wish to be with you forever.” Mayu then turned around and smiled innocently at the two adults, as though her senile laughter had never happened. “Is that okay? Can I be with Yuki-chan?”
Atsuko wasn’t sure if she really wanted this crazy kid to be with her dear Yuki, but she immediately told herself, “Minami’s child is my child. I can’t think this way!” and nodded, “Mm! If Yuki’s okay with it, then I’m okay with it.”
Minami was still trying to process everything in her head, but the only thing that came to mind was: I can be with Atsuko now. She knew that was a selfish reason to agree to Mayu’s request but she had nothing against Yuki and Mayu being together. In fact, wasn’t that what she was trying to do? “It’s way too easy…” she thought to herself. Why is everything falling into place so nicely? It doesn’t matter I guess… as long as we’re happy; is what she kept telling herself.
The two parents and their daughters arranged a marriage; while still unaware of the previous scene, they went about as though that day had never happened.
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Thanks for update
but
:dunno: What actually happen to Mayu?? :? :?
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Waaa Mayu is scary...I was totally picturing her laugh in "Flying Get" PV...that was creepy
Anyway thank you for your update can't wait for next.
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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Eh? Nani? What happened? (@ A @)
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Is Mayuyu posseded by Gekikara? O_O
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Mayu being possesed by Nezumi's spirit. :panic: :panic: :panic:
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:w00t: GO GO MAYU :deco: :peace:
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is the fanfic become dead?????
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is the fanfic become dead?????
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is the fanfic become dead?????