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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: yukofan on February 11, 2012, 05:55:39 PM

Title: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: yukofan on February 11, 2012, 05:55:39 PM
Okay, i know i still have to update LOVE will find YOU. But, last night i watched an incest movie *cough*BRULEE*cough* and suddenly i have an urge to write a fic. So here's the preview :

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Title : I Wanna be with You

Main pairing : WMatsui, Kojiyuu

Genre : Drama, yuri, incest

Yeah it will be a yuri&incest fic  :cow:


see ya on the first chapter  :byebye:
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on February 11, 2012, 06:05:05 PM
sounds intersting cant wait to read it!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: sakura_drop_ on February 11, 2012, 06:27:19 PM
I'm looking forward to it too  :on drink:
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: kahem on February 11, 2012, 06:48:59 PM
I wonder how it would look like ^^
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: Spicy Sapphire on February 11, 2012, 06:56:03 PM
definitely gonna read this  :)
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: RenaChii on February 11, 2012, 09:36:17 PM
W Matsui~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/luvluv1.gif)

I'm waiting~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_gay8.gif)
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: ShibuyaDokiDoki on February 12, 2012, 01:32:57 AM
Woot! WMatsui!

I look forward to it!

^^v
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: yukofan on February 12, 2012, 04:09:17 AM
of course WMatsui..

because..because.. Jurina is so handsome :mon lovelaff: not only in Kataomoifinaly but also in NEWSHIP..

Thankyou for reading and comments..
Title: Re: COMING SOON : [INCEST] I Wanna be with You
Post by: yukofan on February 12, 2012, 04:15:56 AM
Chapter 1 : The Letter


--FLASHBACK--

A 7 years old Matsui Rena was so happy because it was her birthday. Fortunatelly, it was sunday so she could celebrate it with mer mom.

"Mama! Mama!"

"Yes, Rena-chan?"

"I want my birthday cake! I want my birthday cake!"

Rena's mother kneel down and said to Rena "Go sit in the dinning room and the cake will be ready in a minute"

"Okay, mama"

Rena then rushed happily to the dinning room


*In the dinning room*

Rena sit in the dinning room and waited unpatiently for her birthday cake.  Her face became so bright after she her mother came while bringing the birthday cake with seven candles on top of the cake.

"Horraayyy!!! My cake is coming!"

Rena's mother sit next to Rena and put the cake on table in front of Rena.

"Rena-chan, now you can blow the candles and make a wish"

Rena blew the candles and then close her eyes. Making a wish.

After making a wish, Rena open her eyes "I've done making a wish"

Rena's mother tap Rena's head gently "Good girl. So, may i know Rena-chan's wish?"

Rena shake her head "It's secret"

"So, now Rena-chan already keep a secret from Mama.." Rena's mother pretended making a pouting face

"Okay, Rena-chan will tell Mama. My wish is to meet Papa"

Hearing Rena's wish made the mother's face sad "Rena's Papa is in heaven. Rena-chan can't meet him"

"But why? then i'll go to heaven to meet Papa"

Rena's mother had difficulty to explain "Listen,Rena-chan. Rena-chan can't meet Papa now, but someday Rena-chan maybe can meet Papa"

"In heaven?" asked Rena

Rena's mother didn't answer. She just smiled. "Let's eat the cake ne~, Rena-chan"

"Yup. Itadakimasu~"


--END OF FLASBACK--





Rena grew up without affection from a father. Her mother said that her father died in a flight accident when Rena was 1 years old.The plane fall into the ocean and her father's corpse couldn't be found. Rena's mother died when Rena was 12 years old because of leukemia. After the death of her mother, Rena live with her auntie's family.

"Tadaima!"

"Okaeri..Rena, why you're coming home so late?"

"I'm so sorry, auntie. I celebrated my brithday with my friends"

"Okay, you are forgiven. you're lucky bacause today is your birthday"

Rena then came to her auntie and hugged her.

"Ne~, Rena.."

"Mmmmm..."

"take a bath and the get ready for dinner, okay? I have something to give you after dinner" Auntie's voice tune became serious.

"Okay, you're lucky because today is my birthday, then i will obey what you say" Rena then kissed her auntie's cheek and went to her room.


*In the living room after dinner*

Rena was in fron of TV watching her favourite program when her aunt came and sit next to her.

"Here's for you" Auntie's gave Rena something

"What is it?"

"A letter for you..From your mother. She wrote it before she died. She wanted me to keep the letter and give it to in your 17th birthday"

Hearing what auntie said, Rena quickly read the letter..


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Dear my beloved Rena-chan


Happy birthday. Now you become 17 years old. I'm sure you are now a beautiful and kind-hearted girl. I'm sorry i can't watching Rena-chan growing up. I really want to, but i can't.

In this letter, i want to tell something important to Rena-chan. I'm so sorry for keeping it from you. I'm so sorry for lying.

Rena-chan, the truth is your father is not died. We've divorced when Rena-chan was 1 years old. I didn't want to but your father insist to divorce. My heart was really hurt that time. So much hurt that i wanted to burry all of memories about your father. So, i told you that your father is already died.

After seperating from your father, i felt so helpless. I was so desperate. But i can through all that hard times because i have my Rena-chan. You are the main reason i lived my life.

I decided to write this letter because i know in the age of 17, Rena-chan can decide whether you want to meet your father or not. I know i can't be selfish forever. Every child has his own right to meet his parents.

If you want to meet your father, ask your aunt. She have information where your father live.

Rena-chan, i'm sorry for everything. And thank you for being such a wonderful girl for me. You are my everything.


From your mother who love you so much


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Rena couldn't fight back her tears. She was crying alot after reading the letter.

She looked into her aunt's face "Why? Why my mother had to lie to me? TELL ME WHY, AUNTIE.."

Auntie's hugged the crying Rena "Oh my dear. I know it's so hard for you to know this thing. But, your mother not completely in fault. You can't imagine how much your mother hurt that time. She even had try to commit suicide. But, fortunatelly she had you. Her little angel, light of her life"

"I want to meet my father. I have to meet my father"

"NO!"

"Why, auntie?! He's my father! Why i can't meet my own father?!"

"Listen Rena..Your parents divorced bacause your father rather to choose another than your mother. He left both of you!"

Rena's cry became louder "I don't care. I want to meet him. I want to konw more about him. I want to hear his voice.."

Hearing Rena's cry made auntie's give up "Your father live in Tokyo. He had marry again.Do you still want to meet him?"

Rena nodded..

Auntie's wipe away the tears from Rena's face "Okay, honey. I will find the way for you to met your father"

"Thankyou auntie.."
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 1 : The Letter)
Post by: Sieka on February 12, 2012, 04:26:12 AM
Interesting first chapter. Apart from a few errors here and there. It's interesting. Hope to see an update from you. :hee:
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 1 : The Letter)
Post by: SharkAttack on February 12, 2012, 07:47:33 AM
Oooh, so are Jurina and Rena going to be half-sisters? How interesting.
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 1 : The Letter)
Post by: ohayou on February 12, 2012, 07:59:50 AM
Waaaaaaaaah~ Loving the first chapter already!

Getting so excited thinking about what's gonna happen in the next chapter!  :tama-laff:
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 1 : The Letter)
Post by: msst28 on February 12, 2012, 08:06:24 AM
Interesting.. hope you update soon
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: yukofan on February 12, 2012, 09:30:46 AM
Chapter 2 : First Meeting

*In an apartement room*

"Haruna, hurry up or we will be late!!" shouted Haruna's mama

Haruna open her room door "Okay, i'm ready"

"Ooohhh, look at you, Haruna. You looks so beautiful. Hey, what's up with your face? You should look happy. You will meet your new papa and sister"

"Mom, i really don't want to go"

"C'mon, Haruna. Do you still mad at me because i want to marry again?"

Haruna stay silent

"Do you love him, mom?"

"Honestly, no."

"Then, if you don't love him, why you want to marry that old ugly man?"

"Listen to me, Haruna. What i will do is for our sake. your mama will marry a very rich man. Our life will be so much better that now. You can go to an elite school, buying expensive clothes, going abroad, and many more." Haruna's mother tried to convinced Haruna.

Deep inside Haruna's heart, she still didn't agree with her mother. She felt her mother was betraying her father who died 2 years ago.

"Haruna, let me tell you something. That old man is dying.."

"What do you mean?"

"He told me that he has severe illness.His life span will be no longer than 1 year."

"Yet you still want to marry him?! Give me a break!" Haruna couldn't understand what her mother thinking

"I've told you that he is very rich. After he died, we will get inheritance. After that, let's, me and you, go into far away place and start our new life"

"what about his daughter?"

"i hope i will find a way to get rid of her.."

Haruna knew that it was useless to argue against her mother.

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*In a luxurious restaurant in Tokyo*

A 17 years old girl, Oshima Yuko, with her father was sitting in their own seat. The father looked at her only daughter which seemed so nervous. He held Yuko's hand.

"Are you nervous?"

"Of course. I will meet my new family members for the first time"

"Thankyou very much, Yuko" Said Oshima Papa sincerely

"For what?"

"Honestly, i didn't think that you will allow me to get marry again"

"I love you so much,Dad. And I'm very happy if there's someone who love you as much as I do and will take care of you"

"Hey, why i suddenly feels that my daughter is become an adult now"

Yuko just smiled. At first, she was shocked when his daddy told her that he wanted to marry again. But, then she realize that it's been a long time since the last time their home had figure of a mother.

"Hey, Yuko. Look, they're coming!" Oshima papa said to Yuko.

Both of them quickly got up from their sit while Haruna and her mother walking closer.

"Good evening" said Haruna's mother

"Good evening" said Yuko's daddy. The he looked at Yuko "introduce yourself.."

"I'm Yuko, 17 years old, my father's beloved daughter. I'm a 2nd grade high school student."

"Yuko-chan is so kawai~" said haruna's mother

"Arigatou" Yuko blushed

Haruna's mother then wrapped her right arm encircling Haruna's waist "She is Haruna. My beautiful daughter"

"Nice to meet you Haruna-san" Yuko said

"Nice to meet you too" said Haruna half-heartly




2 weeks after that meeting, Yuko's father and Haruna's mother get married...


------------------------------------------------------------------CHAPTER 2 END-----------------------------------------------------------

a very very short update..hehehehe  :grin:



chapter 1 and 2 are  introduction for the story..
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: Sieka on February 12, 2012, 09:37:28 AM
Wow, Haruna and Yuko become stepsisters.... That's.....fast. But gosh, with Haruna's mother planning something bad, I'm feeling really sad for Yuko. This somehow means tragedy, but I'm quite fine with it, I've always taken a liking to drama, angst and tragedy, so if there is, I'll take em' all~  :D
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: Haruko on February 12, 2012, 09:46:22 AM
O_O.. sisters... interesting.. jaja its too weird the behaviour of yuko against haruna.. i know they are stranger but its weird to read..
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: haruhi16 on February 12, 2012, 09:54:04 AM
Eh?!? Sorry but if Haruna's mom going to get rid of Yuko, i will kill her! That bitch!!! Please yukofan-san, don't let Yuko's father inherit Haruna's mother and ended up inherit all of his money ONLY TO YUKO. PLEASE!!! But of course, let the the two (kojiyuu) fell in love with each other first!! keke
UPdate soon!!!
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: RenaChii on February 12, 2012, 11:42:33 AM
INTERESTING~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_XD.GIF)
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: Sok on February 12, 2012, 11:38:41 PM
Whoa~ Haruna and Yuko being step-sisters? Nice.
I wonder how WMatsui will meet.
Thank you for the update.
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: Alexlc91 on February 12, 2012, 11:52:46 PM
I like ur fic! and its not rlly incest in the case of Kojiyu
but again i love the incest in Wmatsui xD i guess
they have the same father, hope everything goes well
to rena at the meeting wth her father. I also like that
u seems to update fast :)
Sorry for my poor english u.u
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: aruka on February 13, 2012, 05:16:01 AM
Is this story gonna be a paralleled one? :?
Will W Matsui and Kojiyuu ever run into each other? (cause for now it still seems unlikely :think: )
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: chuppachup on February 13, 2012, 08:07:48 AM
the plot is really interesting 
~kojiyuu~  as  stepsister....


wait for the next update^^



Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: kahem on February 26, 2012, 11:06:26 PM
Maybe Yuko skinship would be easier, now that Kojiharu is her sister lol
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: kurogumi on April 17, 2012, 01:39:24 PM
Oh why I'm not read this before? This is so good especially first chapter (Wmatsui maybe..hehe my favorite pairing)

This is a piece of art...
Yukofan-san I will be waiting...the next chapter...arigatou..obligado...

Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: yukofan on April 17, 2012, 11:37:03 PM
i never thought that there's still someone who read this this fic and even give comment..
i think i abandone this fic because i was focus on my other fic..LOL..
okay,i'll try to update if i have time..
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: Haruko on April 18, 2012, 04:40:13 AM
of course we are waiting
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: Sieka on April 18, 2012, 05:16:28 AM
I agree with Haruko-san.
We all are waiting. I'm patiently waiting for your next update, same with LOVE will find YOU. :)
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: karomuwi on April 18, 2012, 06:41:44 AM
i never thought that there's still someone who read this this fic and even give comment..
i think i abandone this fic because i was focus on my other fic..LOL..
okay,i'll try to update if i have time..



NOOOO!!!!!  :pleeease: Please continue this!!! It has my Top #1 favorite pairings!!! I need you to complete it!!! please continue~!  :pleeease:
Or else~!  :shifty: Just kidding! maybe not

:kneelbow: please! please! please! continue~! Don't abandon this one! Please! I'll stop being a lurker! Promise! only in your fics. I can't say the same thing for other fics.
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: bosslore on April 19, 2012, 06:35:59 PM
Please update soon! Loving it already  :heart:
Title: Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
Post by: yukofan on May 04, 2012, 01:14:43 PM
Minna-chan, thanks for the support..it's time to start writing again~ before update my fanfic, i suddenly have an inspiration.so i decided to post this prologue of my new fic.

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MVP of My Heart

PROLOGUE

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Akihabara High School Baseball Club

Main line-up:
Akimoto Sayaka
Miyazawa Sae
Oshima Yuko
Shinoda Mariko
Sashihara Rino

Manager : Kashiwagi Yuki
Vice-manager : Watanabe Mayu


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Nagoya High School Basketball Club


Main line-up:
Matsui Jurina
Matsui Rena
Yagami Kumi
Nakanishi Yuka
Takayanagi Akane


Manager : Furukawa Airi

The annual national high school basketball competition will begin soon. Will the last year’s champion in female category, Akihabara High School, keep their top position? Or there will be another team that will defeat Akihabara Baseball Club..





--FLASHBACK--

“JURINAAAA!” a girl shouted to her friend who was playing on the school basketball court.

The girl named jurina looked the source of the voice. When she saw the girl, she quickly run to her.

“Mayuyu…What are you doing here?” Asked Matsui Jurina

“Here..For Jurina” Watanabe Mayu give a bottle of cold water to Jurina

“Ahh, thanks” Jurina received the bottle

“You practice too hard. Jurina need to take a break now. Let’s sit on that bench” Mayu pointed at the bench on the edge of basketball  court

Then both of them sit on the bench

“Nee Jurina, did you watched the basketball game yesterday on TV?”

“Of course. It was the final of national high school basketball competition. The game was so intense. It was a great game, right?”

Mayu nodded enthusiastically  “Right..Right..The captain from the winner team was playing so awesome. No wonder she became the MVP of the match”

“Mayu, I’ll tell you one thing”

“What?”

“I can play much more awesome than that MVP.” Jurina said proudly

Mayu chuckled “Haha..Really? can you proof it?”

“Nee Mayu..When I become a senior high school student, I will join that competition. I will work very hard to win that competition. I will make Mayu proud of me..”

“Jurina..”

“Now, I’m a 1st year junior high school, so I still have 3 years until I can join and win competition. Until that day come, Mayu will always support Jurina right?”

Mayu nodded “Un..I will always support Jurina”

“Then, that’s a promise..Our promise”

“Yeah, our promise”

--END OF FLASHBACK--



Title: Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
Post by: bochang on May 04, 2012, 01:33:59 PM
Yukofan-ssi: Just read the two chapters of I wanna be with you and.. it's so.. incomplete. :p so please update it if you can. :D
Rena is so cute!!! OMG! too cute! *squealing* and haruna's mom is.. i wonder what will she do to Yuko.. TT.TT

and the prologue is interseting!
after seeing the line up and the flashback..
JURIMAYU!!


but.. they're seperated! OMG!!#!@$

what will happened??
Will they become together again? Or it'll be MaYuki and Wmatsui?
I wonder if there's some drama in this fic. hohoho

and where is Acchan, Takamina, and Haruna? :p
Title: Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
Post by: kahem on May 04, 2012, 02:14:31 PM
I like this scenario! Can't wait for the first chapter!
Title: Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
Post by: Sieka on May 04, 2012, 03:43:34 PM
I love you.
No seriously, I love you.
I think this is the second or third time I made a love confession to another author! Lol, forgive me. :lol: Does it make you feel awkward? I hope not. :lol:

Okay, that aside, what can I say? I love JuriMayu you know. :heart:
I hope it turns that way until the end, but mah, WMatsui can happen anytime or ChuriJuri, I don't mind, which pair but I'm quite fond of JuriMayu, especially when I read some in your LOVE will find YOU. :cathappy:

I'm going to follow this like how I do with that fic!
Don't worry, no pressure here, just update when you can dude! >:3
Title: Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
Post by: yukofan on May 05, 2012, 06:36:56 AM
@bochang : of course I Wanna be with You is incomplete,it just the 2nd chap.the main story hasn't started yet. yah,mayujuri was seperated..let's see what will happen to them..where's takamina,acchan,haruna?LOL..they have appeared on many akb fic here,so let them take a rest.but maybe i'll make them appear if i need more character..


@kahem : thankyou..i hope i can post the 1st chap soon..

@sieka : u love me? LOL well,i don't know what to say.but thankyoouuu :heart i love jurimayu too..will they be together in the end? i don't know.i haven't decided yet..LOL
Title: Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
Post by: yukofan on May 13, 2012, 03:19:05 AM
Synchro   Tokimeki 
 chap #1

--On Akihabara High School--

There were 2 girls who were watching the basketball team practice.

“’Mayuyu, I know you’re nervous. But, please don’t looked so obvious. Look, your hand is shaking. I even haven’t introduce you to our team. Hahaha..” Kashiwagi Yuki laughed at her friend.

Watanabe Mayu hit Yuki’s shoulder “Hey, Yukirin. Stop make fun of me. If it wasn’t you who kept begging at me every single day, I wouldn’t agre to be your vice-manager ”

“Yeah, I even came into your nightmare just to begging at you”

“Why me, Yukirin?” Mayu asked with pout on her face

Yuki held Mayu’s hand and looked into her eyes “Because you’re my daughter, Mayuyu. A child should help her mother, right?” Yuki gave mayu puppy eyes.

Mayu released her hand from Yuki’s grip “Sometimes I feel uneasy with this mother-daughter relationship..”

“C’mon, Mayu. You’re the person I trust the most in this school. Besides, you love basketball, don’t you? I kow you love it so much. Then why at first you didn’t want to be part of our school team?”

Mayu silent for a moment.

“It’s okay if you don’t want to answer. Because starting from today, you become part of this team” Yuki smiled and tapped Mayu’s shoulder

“Hey, Girls! Please stop the practice! I have importants announcements!” Yuki shputed to the team members

After hearing their manager’s yell, all the member gathered and sit around  Yuki and Mayu.

“What announcement, Yuki?” Asked Miyazawa Sae, the captain.

“You’ll know after this..”

“Ahh kawaii~ you are so cute..” said Oshima Yuko

“Really? Arigatou, Yuko..” Yuki said happily

“NOT YOU! But the girl next to you” Yuko pointed her index finger toward Mayu.

Yuki’s face expression became sour “Hey, I’m also cute, you know?”

“What’s your name?” Yuko asked Mayu, ignoring her manager

“Let me introduce this girl to you, girls..” Yuki said

“Hey, manager..I asked her, not you..”

“Shut up, Squirrel!! You’re so annoying sometimes..Listen, Girls..This is Watanabe Mayu. The new vice manager”

“I’m Watanabe Mayu. Starting from today I become your vice manager. I’ll do my best for this team. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu”

“So this was the first announcement, the second one is I’ve made the practice schedule. I hope you all can be discipline in the practice”

Mayu gave the schedule practice paper to every member. When she gave the schedule to Yuko, Yuko said to Mayu “I’m Oshima Yuko. I’m still single. Do you have lover now, Mayu-chan?”

“Yuko, it’s not the right place to flirt a girl..” the manager said which followed by other team member’s laughter.

“Yuki, you’re so mean..” Yuko said poutingly . Mayu just smiled seeing Yuko’s act..

“Okay, all of you have received the schedule..Now, let’s move to the last announcement..Starting from today, this team has new captain. Akimoto Sayaka, you are the new captain of this team”

Miyazawa Sae shocked. She stood up and said “what is this? I’m the captain! Why you give my position to other member?!”

“I’m sorry, Sae. I’ve talked to the coach and he agreed this decision. It’s for this team’s sake. Lately, you seemed to not focused on this team. It’s a hard decision.. ”

“It’s not fair, Yuki!!”

“I’m so sorry, Sae. But…”

“I don’t want to hear your excuse!!” Sae immediately leave the basketball court




--in Nagoya basketball club room--

“Listen everyone..I want to introduce our team’s new member” Furukawa Airi, the manager, spoke.

“EEHHH??!!!” everyone were surprised. How could there were a new member of the team while they hadn’t hold the open recruitment for new member.

“I know, all of you must be surprised. But, trust me. She is a very good player. I know her since junior high school. Fortunately, this year she enter our beloved school.”

“Are you sure she’s a good player or you just make her join into our team because she’s you friend?” said Yagami Kumi

“Ne Kuumin..If Airin said she’s a good player, then she must be a good player” said Matsui Rena

“Rena  is always defend Airin~  ”  Takayanagi Akane teased which made Rena and Airin blushed

 “He-Hey stop it, Churi. Back to the topic. Are you ready to meet your new teammate??!!” Airin shouted…

“…………..”

There were silent….

“Hey! Why you guys are not excited at all?!”

“Just show us her face..” Nakanishi Yuka said unenthusiastically 

“Geez, you guys..” Airin then clap her hand and shouted “Jurina, come in!”

Then someone open the meeting room’s door. She slowly walked toward Airin and stood next to Airin. Airin encircled her arm around the girl’s shoulders.

“This is our new member.”

“I’m Matsui Jurina Jurina. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu” Jurina bowed

“Woah, we have the same family name” Rena said in surprise

All the member were looking at Jurina from head to toe.

“Do you really can play basketball?” Churi, the captain, asked

“I love basketball since I was a kid. I joined basketball club in junior high school. My dream is to participate in national competition. If you ask whether I can play basketball well or not, I should say maybe I’m not the best player but I always play my best in every match.” Jurina answer ed with full of confident. Churi nodded her head. She seemed satisfied with Jurina’s answer

“More question to our new member?” Airin said to her team

“Something that you like?”

Jurina tilted her head “Mmmm..basketball is something that I like the most. I also like ramen, comics, and music”

“Something that you don’t like?”

Jurina’s face expression suddenly changed “People who can’t keep their promise is something that I hate the most.”

After hearing Jurina’s answer, Churi walk toward jurina “Welcome to the team, Jurina. I’m Takayanagi Akani, the captain. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu”

“well, I think it’s enough for the introduction of our new member.  To celebrate our new member, LET”S GO TO KARAOKE!!!” Airin yelled

“YEAAHHHHH!!!!!” all the team member were happy with their manager idea.Well., except Jurina..

“Airin, doesn’t we need to practice basketball? The competition is almost come?”

“C’mon, Jurina..Before the competition come, we need to entertain ourselves, right? ”

“YEAAAHHH!!!!” all the members yell

“Let’s go! I want to sing SKE48’s new song!!” Airin said

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yup, i changed the title  :)

i've decided the pirings : JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki..
so, how is it? feel free to comment  :)
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: gekirena on May 13, 2012, 03:43:46 AM
ooooh Rena in a basketball team????????  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

she can't even do situps properly  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

this is gonna be interesting!!!

and Airin as the manager???  :wub: :wub: :wub:

i love it already!!!!

i want to see more RenAirin moments  :inlove: :inlove:

sorry i know they are not the main characters but i'm just shipping them THAT hard XDDDDD

cant wait for the next update!
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: bochang on May 13, 2012, 03:49:25 AM
Uwah! It's GOOD!

so it's Oshiri Sister and Jurina? LOL It's kinda new to me so i'm ecxcited!

I have a bad feeling about JuriMayu since Jurina said she despise people who can't keep her promise..
and YUKO! LOL
No matter what fanfic.. she's always the pervy squirrel! LOL

and Sae.. hmm idk..
SaeYuki, is there something wrong between them?

I want to read the next chapter~!! UWAHAHAHA and i comment second.. TT.TT
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: aruka on May 13, 2012, 04:01:41 AM
Both 'MVP of My Heart' and 'Synchro Tokimeki' are good names imo, yet I prefer the latter. Good choice by the way!

Really, Mayu should be aware of Yuko later. Flirtatious and perhaps... touchy? Dangerous~!! XD
Sae's captaincy is passed to Sayaka? I sense some rivalry is going to happen later. Would love to see the dynamic between the rivals.

Meanwhile in the Nagoya team... just (probably) less than ten minutes of Jurina's introduction, and then already going to the karaoke to celebrate? Hayai! XD
Title: thankyou..
Post by: yukofan on May 13, 2012, 05:20:20 AM
@gekirena : it's the first time i write renairi..i'm new with this pairing but i found out that they are so cute together..plus the fact that in real life renairi love are mutual..LOL..there will be more renairi moments in the next chapters..

@bochang : i feel bad for mayujuri too..yup,oshiri sisters <3 i wanted to write about them..i never expected i would write yukomayu in this fic..this idea came up suddenly.. 

@aruka : i played song Synchro Tokimeki over and over when i typed the 1st chapter..i like this song so much that i changed this fic's titile..i was so random..LOL..is yuko that dangerous?hoho..we'll that's not too hayai for airin..LOL
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: Seigus on May 13, 2012, 05:49:52 AM
Just want to say I'm really liking the YukoMayu idea (in fact, I've imagined it before). It's fresh and opens up new possibilities. Yuko is a flirt but can be a good and loving girlfriend too :wub:

I'm guessing the chances of JuriMayu happening are much higher in this story but I'm more interested to see how the YukoMayu side of the love triangle pans out. Not that I dislike JuriMayu but YukoMayu just seems so much more exciting! XD
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: Sieka on May 13, 2012, 06:41:57 AM
I love all the awesome authors out there who writes awesome stories, so no problem. :thumbsup

Lolmao, I pity Mayu because Yuki keeps bugging her, even in her dreams? That's a real nightmare if Black Yukirin knocks in your dream, rofl...mah mah, at least she's in the team, though I sense some bitterness and unwillingness in Mayu's part, she might as well have thought of the promise she could not keep it seems......that's why she's against it. Yuko however, lol, so rude to Yuki, she's cute.....well sometimes? Mostly Yuki's beautiful though. :lol: I sense some YukoMayu here and I'm totally loving Yuko's attention on Mayu, I don't mind if this story ends with the Oshiri sisters together, I mean their pretty good together, and I haven't seen a fic about them too......so it feels like it would be an awesome pair.

Now in Nagoya team, RenAirin are pretty much blatantly on each other, lol......love is in the air. And I sense that Jurina is holding a grudge on that promised person, since she hates people who breaks their promises. :lol: I sense some anger here, oh lol.....I wonder how Nagoya team will do though? I mean from what I know, Rena is bad at sports, she can't even do sit-ups.......I want to see how they play in the court hehehe.......but going karaoke the next after introducing a new player? Lol. That's Nagoya's SKE for you, a jolly and fun-loving bunch of people. :lol:

I sense drama on AKB though! Sae leaves, why is she bitter over having Sayaka as their captain? It's her fault for not being focused, she may as well be ogling Yukirin while their in practice...It's her fault, completely and utterly for losing focus.....I don't really care about it though...

Anyways, thanks for the update! Hahaha, you changed the title, not bad you know. :)
Title: reply
Post by: yukofan on May 13, 2012, 06:51:45 AM
@seigus : yup.you are right about yuko.even a pervert also has good side..

maybe i should make a poll which pairing my readers want..mayujuri or yukomayu..
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: kahem on May 13, 2012, 09:42:17 AM
Hahaha I like the mother-daughter relationship between Mayuyu and Yukirin
Title: reply
Post by: yukofan on May 13, 2012, 11:45:23 PM
@sieka : Nagoya team sure a bunch of fun-loving girls  :lol: i also wonder how will they play on the court  :lol: but, don't worry, they have Airin as their manager  XD yes, sae is  :smhid..yes, YukoMayu is lovely pairing but i think there was no fic about them as a love couple..so i thought i would try to make one..oshiri~

@kahem : mother-daughter  :deco:

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random talk :
i want to recommend this sorama..Legal High..my mosf fav dorama this season..the main character is a super genius lawyer who behave like an idiot   :rofl: and also  aragaki yui is  :thumbsup and the opening song is taken from ex-AKB, erepyon's debut single  :twothumbs
(http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll238/imverycute/akb/LegalHigh2.jpg)
Title: Re: Story Folder (TITLE CHANGED: Synchro Tokimeki ep 1) JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki
Post by: saeyukilover on May 16, 2012, 06:05:14 AM
Saeyuki lovers quarrel ... I wish~~  :smhid :)

I haven't read any jurimayu fanfic yet cause I'm getting into
Wmatsui couple but I have this feeling I'm gonna like your jurimayu
I'm going to take Yuko out from that because yuuchan will be with nyannyan as always :)
Title: reply
Post by: yukofan on May 16, 2012, 04:02:37 PM
@seyukilover : thanks for reading this fic..yuuchan will always be with nyannyan? well, not in Synchro Tokimeki fanfic..
i know kojiyuu and wmatsui are popular pairings.that's why i wouldn't write them in this fic..LOL..it's not that i'm againts popular pairings.i used them on my other fic (which i haven't update for i-forgot-how-long..LOL..)

@minna-chan : thankyou for 2000 views..glad to know that there are people who read my absurd fanfics LOL..arigatou gozaimasu..

Title: Re: Story Folder : Synchro Tokimeki ep 1 (JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki)
Post by: yukofan on May 18, 2012, 05:31:26 AM
Trivia : Team Profile

Akihabara Team profile

Oshima Yuko
With height 152 cm, Yuko was the shortest member in akihabara team history. She was known as the “squirrel” because of her small body could do very quick movement

Miyazawa Sae
The ace of Akihabara Team. Sometimes individualistic. The former captain of the team

Akimoto Sayaka
Current captain of Akihabara Team. Very discipline.

Sashihara Rino
A hardworking and energetic player. It seems like she never lost her energy.

Shinoda Mariko
This tall girl’s speciality was 3-point shot

Other member s: Kitahara Rie, Yokoyama Yui, Minegishi Minami, Miyazaki Miho

Manager : Kashiwagi Yuki
A princess –like girl. But she’s a good manager and responsible person

Vice-manager : Watanabe Mayu
Yuki’s best friend. Accepting the vice-manager position half-heartedly (She was forced by Yuki).


Nagoya Team profile
Matsui Rena
Just an ordinary player with moderate skill. But don’t make this player mad. Or she will be a “dangerous” player

 Matsui Jurina
The rising star of Nagoya Team. A very skillful player.

Takayanagi Akane
The captain of Nagoya Team. She could jump very high. That’s why she was called “Bird of Nagoya”

Yagami Kumi
She’s a fighter on the court. Never ever gave up. No matter how many opponent’s player do offensive fault on her, this girl would always stand again..

Nakanishi Yuka
This person didn’t talk much..She was good at stealing the ball from opponent player’s hand.


Other members : Oya Masana, Kinoshita Yukiko, Takada Shiori, Suda Akari, Kuwabara Mizuki,

Manager : Furukawa Airi
A lovely and fun girl. Always be the one who motivated her team when Nagoya team was down.

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it's not a chapter update..it's just a trivia thing..team profile..no coach profile?  XD because i had no idea who was suitable to be the coach  :lol:

preview of ep 2 :
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Rena was jealous?  :shocked
 it seems like akihabara team was in problem. How would yukirin solved it?
 let's start the oshiri moments :shakeit:

Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: yukofan on May 19, 2012, 06:29:34 AM
Because I Don't Want to Lose You
part 1



"Yuuchan, I'm scared.." Kojima Haruna whispered to the short-haired girl next to her.

"Don't worry. It will be fine" Oshima Yuko tried to calm her girlfriend who looked so nervous. Yuko hold Haruna's hand and tapped it gently.

Haruna and Yuko were waiting for doctor Shinoda Mariko. Haruna came to hospital a week ago because she felt her health condition wasn't good. She had headache since 6 months ago. And her headache became worse lately. She also felt her vision became blurred. Sometimes she also vomited. Dr.Shinoda suggested Haruna to undergo CT-SCAN.

"What if there's something wrong with my body. What if.."

"Sstt.." Yuko put her index finger on Haruna's lips.

"Don't think anything weird. My nyannyan will be perfectly fine" Yuko tried to cheer-up Haruna. Without Haruna knew, Yuko also had some worry inside her heart. Haruna's condition wasn't in good form and she became thinner. But Yuko hide her worry from Haruna.

"Sorry for waiting. " dr.Shinoda finally came. She let Haruna and Yuko to enter her room. Then,Haruna and Yuko sit in front of Dr.Shinoda's desk.

"So, what was the result, doctor?" Yuko asked

"Well, from the symptoms which Kojima-san had, I suspected that the pressure inside Kojima-san's head was increasing. To confirm it, I suggested you to perform CT-SCAN and here's the result.."

Dr.Shinoda took the Haruna's CT-SCAN image and show it to Haruna and Yuko.

"Here..Look at this" Dr.Shinoda pointed at a part of the CT-SCAN image.

"This white rounded shape is a solid mass inside Kojima-san's head.This mass caused symptoms that Kojima-san felt."

"That is.."

"It is brain tumor.."

Hearing the diagnosis made Haruna's heart shaken. She felt tears flow running from both of her eyes.

"No way! There must be something wrong. The CT-SCAN  result must be wrong!" Yuko stood up and yelled at the doctor

Haruna grabbed Yuko's arm, signaling her to sit down again and continued to listen to doctor's explanation. Yuko looked at Haruna and then wrapped her arm around her beloved girlfriend.

"I know it is hard to accept this situation.."

"But this disease can be cured, right?"

"Fortunately, after i checked, i didn't find any signs of the tumor cells migration into Kojima-san's other body organs. So i can suggest an operation to evacuate the tumor."

"Hey, listen that. This disease can be cured.." Yuko smiled to Haruna

"But, I can't guarantee the operation to be successful"

"What do you mean, doctor?" Yuko asked

"It's a difficult operation. There still possibility that the operation will failed. If the operation success, there's high possibility that Kojima-san will loss her memory"

"My memory..will lost?"Haruna  tried proceed Dr. Shinoda's words

"How can that be, doctor? Why you talked about nonsense things ?!" Yuko started to lose her temper

"Yuuchan ,please..Stop it.."

"But, Nyannyan.."

"Let me explain it. Every medical procedure has risk and side effects. As a doctor, we tried to minimalize those things. In this case, the operation's goal is to evacuate the mass in the brain. Brain has a part where human's memory is kept. The process of evacuating the mas in the brain can affect the memory area."

"Can my memory comeback?" Haruna tried to find her hope

Seeing Haruna's eyes which hoping for good answer, Dr. Shinoda said "I'm afraid that you can't have your memory back"

Silent wrapped the room for a moment.

“No way! There must be something mistake.. ” Yuko held her head with both of her hands

"It's okay if you want to get second opinion from another doctor. It's patient's rights. But, I'm sure other doctors will say the same thing as i did. It's better to thinking about the operation, well, that if patient agree. I suggest to operate as soon as possible."

"What if i do not undergo the operation?" Haruna asked

"NyanNyan.." Yuko looked at Haruna. She didn’t expect that question came out from Haruna’s mouth

"The tumor's size will getting bigger and I'm afraid it will affect your extremities. Maybe you won't be able to move them someday. And the worst case is the tumor cell will migrate into other body's organ. If this case happen, it will very difficult to be treated. You can lose your life.."

Feeling that her heart couldn't bear the doctor's explanation anymore.." Let's find another doctor, Nyannyan. There must be something wrong with the diagnosis" Yuko stood up and grabbed Haruna’s hand. She dragged Haruna toward the room's door

"I said stop it, Yuuchan! ” Haruna turn her head to the doctor “I'm sorry, doctor. But, i need some time to think about it" Haruna said

"The decision is on Kojima-san. I just inform about your condition. Please let me know if you have made the decision"

"Thank you very much, doctor.." Haruna bowed and left the room with Yuko.
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Thanks to Indonesia government who gave Indonesian people “cuti bersama” I have some time to write fanfic..LOL..This will be a short story that consist of 3 or 4 chapter..
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: Haruko on May 19, 2012, 06:51:44 AM
oww haruna T_T.. why why!!
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: bochang on May 19, 2012, 06:52:09 AM
UGYAAAA!!! another dillematic fanfic..

I don't know why i feel bad for Haruna..
since i killed her too in my fic.. TT.TT

will Haruna cured?
will she forget yuko?

or..

will she died.. peacefully with a smile next to sad yuko.. TT.TT

thank you for this fic~ :D
me too, i'm free today!! LOL but the final exams starts on monday #died
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: yukofan on May 19, 2012, 09:48:59 AM
@haruko : yes,poor haruna T_T
@bochang : i also will have exams on monday..I haven't studied at all..yet,i spent my free time to wrote fic..i'm such a good student,don't I? LOL..
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: haruhi16 on May 19, 2012, 10:25:15 AM
BRAIN TUMOR?!  :shocked
OH WHYYYY  :cry:
Update soon as you can Yukofan~chan!  :cry:
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: saeyukilover on May 19, 2012, 04:36:34 PM
Nyan nyan~~~

 :cry: tears coming out,  :( words not coming out

WHYYYYY!!!

:(
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on May 19, 2012, 10:08:36 PM
I know what yuko and haruna are going through bout three years ago when I was in primary school my mum had a brain tumer me an my family where devastated but the doctor done all he could when she had the op she lost bits of her memory an coudnt move her left side now she is walking and everything but she has still forgot certain thing Yuko everything will be fine !!
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: yukofan on May 19, 2012, 10:13:03 PM
@haruhi16 : i'll update it after i update my other fics..thanks for comment :)
@saeyukilover : "WHY"? well,life is not easy,right? :)
@XxRoByNxX78 : I'm glad your mother could be healthy again..i've met some people who suffered this disease. some of them was in the state which the tumor was inoperable (that's mean it couldn't be treated) . seeing how they keep try to overcame the disease was something that encouraging.

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失いたくないから PV on Vimeo (http://vimeo.com/37391954)
N46 - Ushinaitakunai Kara (Because I Don't Want to Lose You)..i love everything about this song..Aki-P is genius  :pimp:

Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: kahem on May 21, 2012, 10:03:24 AM
It's so sad. Lost the memories of her Yuuchan or lost her life. T_T
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: yukofan on May 27, 2012, 03:58:12 AM
@kahem : yes,it's sad..you'll know what haruna's decision on the next part..
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: chichay12 on May 27, 2012, 01:11:55 PM
i love ur fic "yukofan" :inlove: :inlove:
i cant wait to your next update  :banghead: :banghead:
 :nervous
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on May 27, 2012, 01:26:37 PM
im glad my mum is healthy again to but it sucks that sometimes its to late for some people i wish we could save everyone
Title: Re: Because I Don't Want to Lose You (Kojiyuu) part 1
Post by: Tam_atsu on September 15, 2012, 09:01:23 AM
 :? Wahhhh!! Poor haruna and yuko. Pleasseee update sooon wanna read the next chapterr!!! Please please please! I think dis will be a great story! But please dont make it a sad story!!  :?