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Beauty and the theif
by XxRoByNxX78
(KaixAstuko KuuxMayu RikuxYuko)
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Kai :
Kai is sixteen and lives with his brothers Riku and Kuu jouring the day Kai is a regular highschool student but by day but a night he is part of the 3 Angel brothers who steal. Kai is also captain and goaly of his schools football team. He is the youngest of 3 angel brothers.
Riku:
The ledest of the three angel brothers he is seventeen and graduate early from school now owning a chain of restraunts around the world is the number 1 chef is Japan.
Kuu:
Kuu is the middel child who is also sixteen like Riku he graduated early and now is a worldwide famous singer no one knows about his secret but his manger knows that he is part of the angel brothers he is the peace maker of his family.
Mariko:
Mariko is 23 and is Kuu's manger she is like an older sister to the three brothers she also knows the three brothers secret but vowed never to tell any one.
Mayu:
Mayu is sixteen and gradutaed early now she works along side her sisters Yuko and Atsuko as a detecive. Mayu is the middel child.
Yuko:
Yuko is seventeen and is the head of a dective angentcy and works along side her 2 sisters Mayu and Astuko there parents died when Yuko was 7 and the other two where 6 leaving her to look after them.
Atsuko:
Atsuko is 16 and works with her 2 sisters she had the choice to skip a couple of grades but decied not to as she wanted to be with her friends Astuko is the yougest out of her sisters.
Yuki :
Yuki is Atsuko's best friend and is there for her in any situations she is strong willed and stubborn and is also know as Black.
Tomochin:
Tomochin is Kai's best friend he is the co captian and goal scorrer of the football team he is very competive and hates to lose he hates gettin close to people but opened up to Kai as soon as they met 8 years ago now they are like family he also knows
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chapter 1
Kai kicked the ball sending flying towards Tomochin who bounced it off his chest to his feet and flipped it over his oppents head and passed it to his team mate. The ball was passed back to Tomochin who was now is the pentaly area and shot the ball full force into the back of there oppents net. The whistle was blown and the matched ended it was another win for the Hidden Tigers."Nice one Tomochin where going to the semi finals!" Shouted Kai "Its not just cause of me its cause we of captain you have never let a ball past you!" Praised Tomochin as he jogged over to his small friend. Both high fived eacother and headed to the changing rooms to shower change and celebrate.
"Astuko did you see Tomochin he was amazing the way he scored that goal and Kai oh my God everytime they had a chance to shoot he easily caugth it they really are the princes of the school." Yuki began babbling on about the two easily boaring Atsuko to tears. "Yuki as much as i love you i dont really care you know why am here." Astuko intruppted. Yuki hated the fact Atsuko was here to work not have fun."Yer i know do you belive me now when i say Kai isnt part of the 3 angel brothers?" Questioned Yuki Astuko shook her head after all there was no proof that he wasnt this was just a football match.
"No my big sisters just said to keep an eye on him there is no proof that he isnt Yuki come on the match has finished." Astuko said pulling Yuki with her not knowing she was being watched.
(changing rooms)
Kai was peeking through the window shirtless with just his shorts on staring at Atsuko "Kai what are you doing get changed!" Ordered Tomochin who had just finished getting changed into black skinnys white pumps and white long sleeved top."Yer i will its just i had a weird feeling that someone has been watching me for the past 3 days and i think i know who it is." Clamined Kai."Oh who do you think it is?" Asked Tomochin.
"I dont know her name i know from what i can see she hangs around with Yuki your little sister."
"Thats Madea Atsuko she is the same age as us she is ment to be a genuis." Tomochin told Kai. "I see well Madea Atsuko im not that easy to follow." Tomochin laughed at Kai and thrown him his dark blue skinny jeans black long sleeved top with blue stars and black hightops. Kai caugth them and got changed and both walked out of the changing rooms while shoving the silver and white football kits into there bags.
"I have to head home i have to get ready to steal something from a musume see you." Kai whispred leaving his friend. Tomochin nodded and walked off on the direction of the arcade where he was going to meet his sister and her best friend.
(On the way home)
Kai's thougths:
I feel like someone is following me agian mabye it is who Tomochin said is rigth mabye i should call her out. After all i want to know why but i should probaly make sure with Riku and Kuu first to see if there being followed. Actually no i am calling her out the feeling of getting followed makes me feel sick.
end of Kai's thougths
"Do you want to stop following me im getting rather annoyed!" exclamied Kai. Than a short haired beuaty walked out from behind a wall. "My my you are beuatiful arnt you you know if you like me you should just confess i can get you done for stalking." Kai cheekely said. "Excuse me who do you think you are talking to me like that!" Moaned the girl.
"Your Madea Astuko right i know your friend Yuki anyway can you tell me why you are following me."Kai demanded gettin annoyed at the fact she was getting closer to him. "Yes and how do you know Yuki?" Atsuko questioned."She is my best friends little sister now answer my question and stop getting closer!"Screamed Kai."Argh i walk this way home aswell i am not following you which means your friends with Tomochin."
"Yes he is my best friend and since you walk this way walk with me instead of making me feel like i have a stalker how about it?"Asked Kai."Fine if you will stop calling me a stalker!" Belowed Atsuko walking up to Kai.
"Okay well tell me about yourself Madea."
"I suppose you can call me Astuko anyway am the same age as you i have 2 sisters both graduated early from school i choose to stay on and i hate people like you."
"What do you mean people like me you freak!"
"People who think they are better than everyone else and think everyone fancys them!"
"Thats it cya biopolar Atsuko!"
"Dont you dare call me that you midget!"
"Shut up an go awa-" kai turned the cornoner and seen a little girl fall over and hurt her knee and ran over to her."Are you okay little girl where is your Mum?" The little girl coudnt stop crying to answer him."Come lets find your Mum." Kai picked her up and gave her a piggy."I will help."Astuko stated."Look at that princess the nice old lady wants to help." The little girl stopped crying and laughed when she seen who Kai called an old lady. "Dont call me old lady you Smurf!"
end of chapter
i honestly got bored an started writing and it ended up with this i hope you liked it and i hope you like there personalites thanks for reading you are amazing please comment and ask questions and i will reply to them!
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I like it very much. Please continue.
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Haha dead good :)
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Wow~ Continue.
This is very interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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at last got some time to read it. It's an interesting story so far. Gonna def read this when you update
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Yay! There's some KaiAcchan's scene! I'm SOO Happy! :wub: I need chapter 2...Please Update Soon! :bow:
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plz continue....
waiting for other character to show up...
especially riku&yuko
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Haha~ I'm getting interested in this~ :lol:
Acchan and Kai are so funny~~ :D
LOL~ Acchan the granny~~ XD
Please Update Soon~ :mon cute:
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chapter 2
Riku was in one of his many restraunts cooking like it was the end of the world speeding through 10 orders at a time. Then when he finished a certain order he seen that it was for a beuatiful squirral like girl so he decied that he would take her the order himself. He made his way past all the tabels and all of the people greeting him towards the beuaty. "Here is your order miss." Riku slickly said putting the plate in front of her."Thankyou erm whats your name?" The girl asked "Riku and yours?"
"Yuko nice to meet you."
"Yer nice to meet you to Yuko if you dont mind me asking how old are you?"
"17 and you?"
"17 like you and by the way you really are bueatiful."
"T..t...thanks Riku-Nyan."
"Riku-Nyan?"
"Yer its just you remind me of a cat i use to have sorry."
"Dont worry about it little squirral."
"Little squirral?"
"Yer your small like my brother by the looks of it and you remind me of a squirral that okay?"
"Yer dont worry i like it Riku-Nyan."
"I have to go i have finished my work bye bye little squirral."
"Bye Riku-Nyan!"
Riku left Yuko to eat and got changed into: a white top,white cardigan,black skinnys and white hightops. Then left his restraunt.
Riku's thougths:
So that is the girl that has been following me she is cute and she calls me Riku-Nyan weird but agian cute by the feel of things no one is following me so she must be finishing her meal i wonder if the others where followed to probaly if i am rigth she is one of the famous decteive sisters the eldest one if i remember her name propaly. If Kai is beening followed then he has probaly called her out by now. I wonder how Kuu is dealing with it but then he has Mariko to help him and Kai had Tomochin but he has probaly left him so that he can come straigth home and get ready to steal from the musume.
They are most likely following us by age which means the youngest Atsuko will be following Kai and the middel child Mayu will be following Kuu. Most likely passing herself as a reporter and Atsuko a normal student. Leaving Yuko to follow me as a customer and mabye a food critic. She migth even apply for a job in one of my restraunts got to be careful.
Wait theres that feeling agian shes back the way she is moving is making very little noise making it hard for me to pin point where about she is. Mabye if i jog a little bit i can make her make it little bit of noise okay here i go there it is she is about 1 foot away from me but is keeping well hidden she really is smart i wont call her out and i wont make a run for it i will make her get lost i need to get home and quick.
end of Riku's thougths
Riku began making sharp turns as he walked as he knew all of the routes he could hear Yuko whispering saying she didnt know where the hell she was going then before she knew it Riku had vanished leaving her in the middel of somewhere she didnt know.
"Damit he lost me i think he knew i was following him!" Screamed Yuko into thin air making everyone around her stare at her in confusin. Riku chuckled at her action as he watched from afar.
*BEEP*BEEP*
To: Riku
Subject: Being followed
Me and Mariko think that i am being followed
should we head back home and should i get
ready to head to the musume stealing?
From: Kuu
Riku quickly writ a reply and sent it and made his way back home being careful not to recognazied as Japans number 1 chef as it would have taken him along time to get home if he wasnt covering his face.
end of chapter
Do you like how i made Riku sound smart and make him real mature and give him a nickname for Yuko hope you did and i hope you liked it thanks for reading and please comment!
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Love it! Keep this up! :thumbup
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Nice chapter. Riku is awesome.
I wonder about Kuu, what way is Mayu stalking him?
Thank you for the update.
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Really interesting thieves and cops hehehe
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chapter 3
Kuu had just finished his show apparance and left the stage to go to a press confrance about his new song 3seconds. When he arrived he looked at all the reporters and seen a familiar face in the crowd it seemed this girl had been in the confrances alot lately about 2 weeks ago if he thougth back.
"Mariko i think that girl is following me." Kuu pointed towards the girl in the crowd."Yer i noticed her to she has even gone past in the car and ive seen her in the streets following i think she is a detective be careful its obvious she suspects you of something." Kuu nodded his head at his mangers order and started the press confrance.
When it finished Kuu and Mariko got in a black limo and told the driver to take them home."She is following us i think i should tell Riku."
Kuu sent Riku a text then *BEEP*BEEP* he got a reply seconds after.
To: Kuu
Subject: Careful
Yes keep comeing home and we will
continue with the robbery if i am
rigth we are all being followed
by 3 famous detective sisters
they are doing this by age
Atsuko following Kai
Mayu following you
and Yuko following me
be careful
From: Riku
"He said we are all being followed and the person that is following me is a girl called Mayu middel child of 3 famous detecive sisters and we are still to carry on home and continue with the robbery." Explained Kuu Mariko told the driver to hurry up and Kuu decied to text Kai.
To: Kai
Subject: Followed
Kai we are being followed by 3 famous detective
sisters you are being followed by Atsuko she is
the youngest of the 3 she is the one following
you Yuko is following Riku Mayu following me
Riku said we are carrying on with the robbery
head straigth home okay have fun with Atsuko
since you have probaly called her out!!
From: Kuu
Sending------->Sent
"That girl is getting annoying stop the car i will walk from here!" Shouted Kuu to the driver. The driver stopped instantly and Kuu jumped out of the car telling Mariko to stay and make Mayu follow the car. His plan worked Mayu followed the limo and Kuu covred his face with his hooded long sleeved top.
He began walking home and was about a street away when he noticed a girl that looked like she had stepped out of an anime behind him.
Kuu's thougths:
No way my plan didnt work are you kidding me she is smart hmm if i run it will be suspicous how do i shake her off wait did she just scream get off me. What the hell some werid man has got hold of her. Argh i gusse i will have to help.
end of Kuu's thougths
"Hey got off her now!" Screamed Kuu running up to the man and hitting him in the face knocking him clean out on the pavement."Are you okay?" Kuu worridly asked."Yes thankyou im Mayu by the way."
"Wow you are really pretty." Kuu gasped
"Thanks i will be going bye." Mayu ran off into the direction of the town centre."Thankyou stupid man." Kuu then finally arrived home.
end of chapter
hope you all liked it please comment and thanks for reading and if you have any questions please feel free to ask thanks for reading!!
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it was a fun read, I liked how Mayu called Kuu stupid man :grin:
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*imagines reporter Mayu with glasses* oh~
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now they're all meet with each other....
i want to know how detecive and theif will for in love
waiting for next update...
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chapter 4
"Little girl whats your name?"
"Nachu."
"Thats a nice name." Complimented Astuko stroking the girls head. Kai on the other hand was gettin impatcient with looking for the girls mother as he needed to get home and get ready for the robbery. Suddenly the little squermed of Kai's back shouting Mommy! Kai smiled and walked after the little girl with Atsuko in tow."Nachu i found you thankyou so much!" The women gratefully thanked every second."Erm its okay now i have to go bye Nachu." Kai ran off leaving Atsuko with the women "Thank you aswell you have a nice boyfriend."
"He isnt my boyfriend i just met him today bye bye nachu and bye to you miss." Atsuko didnt see the way Kai went so she had no choice but to go to her house and see if her sisters where home.
(At 3 angel brothers house)
"Im home!" Shouted Kai
"Down here midget!"
Kai made his way down to the basment where computers raders gadgets and trackers where surronding every visable peace of the walls. "First things first these are the girls that are following us (Pictures of Atsuko Yuko and Mayu appared on a computer screen with information underneath)As you can see they are all are ages and are following us by are ages so i gathred information on them they are the 3 princess of the detective angency figureing out many famous cases and putting many crimanals behind bars now it seems they suspect us of being the 3 angel brothers there mother and father died when Yuko was 7 and the other 2 where 6 all three handeled the situation diffrent an Yuko became a sort of mother figure instead of an older sister." Riku explained then let Mariko take over from him.
"Atsuko the youngest became the rebel and started to not let people get close to her as for Mayu she became known as CG she never shown emotion all of you must be careful now dont show any signs that you know why they are following you okay?" All three nodded at this order.
"Okay now for the musume plan we are going to steal this painting (a amazing painting appared on computer screen) its worth 1 billion yen this will be one of our most diffcult robberys yet there will be guards on every entrance we will be knocking the guards out on entrance two and take there uniforms then we will put them in our clothes and claim they are us there will be info red lasers luckly we have the code all we need to do is inform the press we will be there and meet Mariko on the roof as she will be providing a helicopter we all clear?"
"HAI!" Kai and Kuu answred all of them headed up stairs and went into there room and came out wearing black jeans black shoes tops and all three had a diffrent type of hat they grabbed there gadgets for the robbery and asked Mariko to inform the press then left.
(The musume)
All three of them rushed towards the second entrance noticing the press and 3 princess detectives quickly they knocked out the guards and where changed into there clothes."Detectives look its the 3 angel brothers detectives!" Kuu belowed making the crowd outside gasp and the 3 sisters run to where they where. Before they where near the 3 brothers ran towards the painting."Wait remember info red lasers!" Riku loudly whispred pulling Kuu back by the hem of his shirt."Oh yer forgot." Kuu dim witedly replied. They put there info red laser glasses on an began moving through the lasers when they heard "This isnt really them its 3 of the guards."
"Awww arnt they smart." Kai teased they reached the painting and gentally took it of the wall careful not to damage it. After all they didnt want to lose its value. Then they heard footsteps comeing up from behind them."Hello detectives Yuko Atsuko and Mayu having a nice time?"
Riku then bowed respectifully to them."Ohay quit messing and help us this thing is heavy!" Kuu complained."Stop messing with the Squirral ice queen and the CG and help!" Kai moaned."Okay okay."Riku grabbed the other end of the painting and quickly turned of the lasers."You can chase us now detectives." Kai shouted and they began running to the roof.
Dogeing attacks and tackles from guards and barely making there way out of the detectives reach finally they made it to the roof. Mariko arrived just in time and the boys jumped into the helicopter and as it lifted up in the waved goodbye to the detectives."Hows the viwe from down there detecives!" Kuu ecxlaimed. They all seen the eldest of the three throw something but neither of the three knew what it was but knew it attached to the helicopter.
"What did you throw?"
"tracking device."
end of chapter
hope you liked it please comment any questions feel free to ask thanks for reading!
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this was awesome. Now I wonder which one threw the device and how things are gonna develop later hehe
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Floating to light just for a little bit here.
This is interesting, please continue. :twothumbs
I LOL'd at the Nachu cameo when I saw the name keke.
more AcchanXKai action :thumbsup
Your fast updates are making me feel guilty for being so slow with mine
*disappears back into the shadows*
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Good but I'm confused :S
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One painting one! lol
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chapter 5
"Stop the helicopter i want to know what has been attached to it"
They landed on a high building hard for people to see and Riku checked every inch of the helicopter until he found it."Ahh she thrown a tracking device on us im insulted she thinks where so dumb i am putting on the that water thing." Riku took the device of the helicopter and put it on the water holder on the top of the building.
Then he got back in and the began flying back to the mansion.
(at the musume)
Yuko had to go out and explain to the press what happaned and what was stolen and once agian she had to tell them that they where not caugth. She checked her tracking device on her phone and sighed in defeat she knew they had found it and then she kicked the ground in frustration.
"The 3 angel brothers where not caugth and this time they stole a painting worth 1 billion yen we tried are best but it seemed they out smarted us i promise they will be caugth next time." Yuko then left the sigth of the press and returned to her sisters.
"They are really smart are you sure that its the people you made us follow cause the one i followed was really dumb and easy to get angry."
"Thats just a act Atsuko its so he doesnt show his real personalite and make it easy for you to know that it is him i am postive it is them!" Yuko confidentally said.
The next day
(at the 3 angel brothers house)
"We are going to keep it on the down low for now also we keep the painting and sell it later on okay Kai get to school."
Kai left to get to school wearing: Dark blue skinnys a blue dress top and dress shoes a black long coat and a white satchel. When he excited the house he insatanly felt someone following him and noticed a car sitting outside of the house so he decied to go over to say hello.
"You know shoudnt follow people rigth?"
"Im not i am waiting for my sister Mayu!"
"Yer sure detective Yuko."
"You know i am a detective an you know my name."
"I can see your ID anyway im off to school bye detective."
Kai waved bye to Yuko and made his way to the park to meet Tomochin.
"Ahh Kai it is about time i got bored you know Yukis friend Atsuko was ment to meet me with Yuki but she ended up having to go like 5 minutes into it so annoying."Moaned Tomochin.
"Hehe relax lets get to school besides i was rigth about Atsuko about being a detective her and her sisters where trouable last nigth!"Kai mentioned."Ha lets get to school we can follow her." Kai smiled at Tomochins suggestion and agreed when they got to school they where surronded by fan girls.
"Kai Tomochin over here!"
"Ahh Sayaka what does the class president need?"
"I need you and Tomochin to take this to Madea Atsuko in class 2-A okay i would do it but the teacher needs me okay thanks!"
Sayaka ran away before they could do anything Kai looked at the small packacage and began opening it."Kai!" Tomochin shouted "Relax its not like shes gonna know i opened it i am a master theif."Kai plafully said. Tomochin knew he coudnt change his stubborn friends mind.As Kai opened the little package he seen a note attached to it saying:
Be careful they are on to us i am sure of it make sure you do nothing suspicous
From
Yuko
Kai chuckled at the massage and decied not to give it to Atsuko and keep it to himself instead he bougth a cupcake and took it to her class with Tomochin laughing behind him.
"Atsuko your brother and his friend have something for you." Atsuko stopped talking to Yuki and got out of her seat and made her way to the pair."Here Sayaka said this came for you old lady." Teased Kai. "You did not just call me an old lady agian munchkin and wait a cupcake she sent me a cupcake."
"Yer you have a weird sister old lady anyway we must be going."
Kai and Tomochin left Atsuko and headed to their own class "Tomochin they give themselves away to much i mean she sent a gun in a package really im not dumb enough to attack her i mean really if she thinks i am one of the 3 angel brothers then atleast give me some credit."Kai complained earning a laugh from his friend.
(after school football practice)
"She is watching me agian she makes it to obvious!"
"Kai concentarte!"
The ball was kicked forcefully towards Kai who ran to the rigth jumped into the air and saved the ball."Nice save!"
"Nice shot!"
Atsuko stared at the two trying to figure out how to get Kai to confess of being one of the 3 angel brothers but she was sure they where on to her and when she called Yuko about her sending her a cupcake Yuko denied it and said she sent her a small gun inside a little package which ment Kai searched the the package and took what was init.
Then Kai jogged over to her."Are you sure you dont like me cause you have been here every practice for like the past 2 weeks."
"Shut up i dont like you besides Yuki was wondering if you and her brother would come out with us after practice yes or no?"
"Fine i will and so will Tomochin but next time lie better i can see your lieing by looking at your eyes."
end of chapter
hope you enjoyed erm hope you liked this chapter next chapter will be Yuko Mayu Riku and Kuu thanks for reading and you are the best please comment any suggestions i will try and add and any questions i will answer thanks agian.
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Now I wonder if that meeting will be a trap, or just a simple meeting, while trying to make them tell the truth.. :dunno:
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So the score is boys 1 and girls 0 ?
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chapter 6
"Kuu hurry up we both have a tv apparance!"
"I know dont worry its kind of weird though both of us on tv togther it will be are first apparance as brothers."
Kuu then slided down the banester not knowing Riku was at the over end and went flying on top of him.Bothe burst out laughing and Kuu rolled off Riku then he stood up and helped his older brother up and leaded him out of the house.They climed into there car and drove to the studio.
"Yuko there leaving lets go!"
"I know i know!"
(at studio)
Kuu and Riku finally arrived at the studio and fans where screamig Kuu's name and his songs."Awww my little brother is all grown up!"Riku teased earning a smack in the arm.The car stopped and and they jumped out of the car and made there way to the dressing room.Riku wore a full chefs suit as he was going to be cooking the entire time and Kuu wore white skinny jeans hightops and a black top saying 2NE1 on the front and "Riku Kuu the show will start in 5 please head to set." The voice came through the speakers and both of them went to set. The entire show was hilouars Kuu and Riku teasing and playfully figthing and acasunilly flirting with the female guests.
Yuko and Mayu where watching in the aduinace trying to avoid Kuu's and Riku's gaze whenever they looked to the aduiance. When it eneded Yuko and Mayu ran to where there car was and cooly jumped through the windows like on the movies."Didnt think i could do that haha."
"Stop joking Yuko!"
"Okay okay we are going to go to there house and search it since they are out all day."
They drove to to the house and Mayu picked the lock and both marched into the house.They searched everywhere but coudnt find nothing then they headed towards the basement."Argh nothing here afterall!"Mayu screamed "Wait whats that under the ligth switch is that a keyhole Mayu can you pick it?"Mayu smirked and pulled out her hair clip turning the lock left and rigth until finally it clicked and computers began appareing all over the walls the floor opened and a huge table came up in the middel and seats fell down from the roof and landed next to the table and last but not least the biggest computer and computer screen emarged from the final wall covering it completely and information about Mayu popped up on the screen."Holly shi-"
"Mayu language!"
"Sorry."
Yuko began looking through some of the table draws finding files upon files about her and her sister recent robberys and newspaper clipings of the 3 angel brothers.Where as Mayu was searching through files on the computer."Yuko look there is information on you and Atsuko too wow they really do there work ahh theres a file on what they are the painting and what they are going to do with it!"Mayu clicked on the file the a huge word appared on the screen and a voice came through the computer speakers."Hello detectives you know its mean to sneak into people home's without there permission i can get you done for breaking and entering i think its good i forgot lunch and i found you two in the basement you arnt good at hiding are you and i wish you would stop insulting us by treating us like where stupid!" The voice screamed neither could make out who's voice it was.
"Who are you."
"I will give you 2 gusses since im nice."
Mayu ran up the stairs to the basement door and tried to open it but failed each time."The doors locked!"
"Your Riku!"
"Wrong."
"Kuu!"
"Wrong your really bad at gussing i suppose i will tell you since im nice hello im Kai and your stuck am going to meet your sister and her friend dont try and use your phones theres no signal and as from now no electricty bye bye!" The ligths and computers switched off in a second they where now in pitch black."Ahh what do we do now?!"
Kai walked out the house and texted Riku and Kuu and told them what happaned and called Tomochin and told him to meet him with the two girls at the park and also told him about Atsuko's sisters.
end of chapter
hope you liked this chapter and thanks for reading it any questions i will reply any suggestions and i will try and write them in bye bye!
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Poor girls they will lose at this rate lol
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Yuko, fighting!!!
hehe, I hope they all will end up as couples
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Your a:theking at writing. I think this is your most interesting fanfic get keep it up cookie monster ;)
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chapter 7
"Old lady!"
"Midget shut up!"
"Okay no arguing okay she did invite us after all"
"Fine whatever im not in the mood anyway there was huge mess when i got home someone snuck into the house."
Atsuko forze when she heard Kai's words she knew her sisters where sneaking to the house but she didnt know that Kai was going back to his house.He just said that he was getting something from the changing rooms obviously he lied.Atsuko texted her sisters and started talking to Yuki.
"Where are we going?"
"How about bowling?"
"Sounds like a plan."
All of them agreed to go to bowling and arrived there about 10 minutes later.They got there shoes then typed in there names scoreboard Kai and Astuko got a strike every time earing a crowd around them every single time they had a turn and around of appulase when they achived another strike."Tell you what old lady lets make a bet if i win you have to tell me anything i want for 2 hours."
"Fine and if i win you have to do anything i want for the full today tommora!"
"Awsome im on 167 and your on 167 too so bring it!"
It was Kai's turn he grabbed the ball and swung it with as much as force as he could it went down the ally then crash it left 4 pins Kai coudnt believe his luck "AHHHHH" Atsuko laughed and grabbed a ball then thrown it down the ally then bang "Strike yes midget i will see you at my house tommorow at 5 in the morning!"
"5 in the morning we have school tommorow why do i hav to come at 5 its not like we have to be in a 6."
"Well i have to do something at that time so be there!"
Kai through his hands up in the air in defeat and looked at Tomochin giving him a look that say lets-get-out-of-here-now! Tomochin snickred an gave him a look that said no-your-staying that made Kai want to scream in frustration.Yuki then grabbed onto Tomochins hand an led him towards the little cafe that was there.Kai then noticed Atsuko was gone and was looking at one of the dolls in the claw machiens.
"you want that?"
"What no way midget."
"Admit it you want it!"
"Okay i do but i cant do these stupid things im going to the others."
Kai watched Atsuko walk off to the others and put 50p inside the machine.The claw began moving from left from rigth and eventually it went down and picked the doll the Atsuko was the little frog with a hat slanted on its head.Kai dropped it into the hole and dragged it out the place where the doll fell.(Kai's thougths: From here she looks really cute i should really stop calling her old granny mabye Aachan instead sounds cute like her wait what am i thinkin arrrrrgggghhh forget it.)
end of chapter
i know that its short but i remebred i had to do something lolz sorry hope you enjoyed it though people that are reading the secret life of NO3B its going to be updated tommorow because im writing the chapter tonite before i go to to sleep because i have school! Sakura_Drop_ thanks so much for reading and commenting all the time i love reading your fics. Ahh as for Yankee love that will be updated soon thanks for reading please comment =)
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Oh, I wonder what she's gonna do at 5am with him
*smexy thoughts*
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Too bad for Kai, he has to be Acchan's slave for a whole day hehehe
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chapter 8
Riku and Kuu recived a text saying that Yuko and Mayu where locked in there basement so they decied to head home early and cancell all there other appointments of the day.When they got there they could hear the displeaser from the people in basement an switched the electricty on then quickly headed to where the microphone was to speak to the two girls.
"Yuko what do we do we didnt think Kai would be home hell we didnt know anyone was going to be home what are you doing to the computer there is no electricty wait there is now what the i wonder if its Kai agian."
"Am putting a virus on the computer to delete everything on them and send necessary files to us and i dont think its Kai he is with Atsuko remeber."Yuko replied then they heard the speaker turn back on and a muffeled voice coming through until they could hear it propely."Hello ladies clearly we have both got eachother into a bad situation isnt that rigth little squirral?"Yuko froze she knew that it was Riku she knew he was theif he just admitted it was true to them but she felt a little sad that she was rigth."Oh its Mayu ahh i thougth you would be at your house since i just saved your small ass!"Kuu shouted down the mic.
"Ohay you didnt save me i could have handeled him and it was like 1 day ago so shut up Gachapin!"
"Who you calling Gachapin you freak i will take you down hell you can saty in the basement see if we care!"
"Kuu calm down as for Mayu your best to shut up at the moment have you not seen the situation your in."
"Riku-Nyan your in a bad situation to remeber all your equipment is down here that and i have a virus on your computer do you think you can get out of this?"
Suddenly the basement door opened and two figures appared then they closed the door behind them as they stepped the stairs eyeing the two girls before them Yuko and Mayu seen this as a chance and quickly ran towardas the door but got caugth in the boys grips then Mayu and Yuko flipped them over ther shoulders then sprinted up the stairs opening the door and slammed the door behind them and locked it and caugth there breath then they heard banging on the door."Let us out now this is our house!"
The voice screamed getting louder each time then a fist came flying through the door making the two girls jump out if there skins.The hand then found the handel and yanked the door open and breaking the lock.Riku grabbed hold of Yuko and Mayu while Kuu smothered something on there faces knocking them out instuntily."Ahh look at the mess you made me make detective you broke the computer too its to bad you wont remember this because i would make you pay for everything."Riku said lifting Yuko up to his shoulders and motioning Kuu to do the same with Mayu and lead them to there car then drove them to there house which was like a road away.
Laying the girls down on there respected beds and left the house texting Kai that they sorted there little problem but who could dout they coudnt they where genius except that is for there short brother who was also short tempred which lead him to take very rash decisions which caused there problem to begin with.
Mayu and Yuko woke up minutes after the boys left not remembering anything that had happaned in the last couple hours until Yuko looked at her emails seeing hundreds of files on her and her sisters and files on stolen things and both quickly remembered everything obviously nothing worked out very well this time for the 3 angel brothers after all Yuko had proof now.
end of chapater
hope you liked i enjoyed writing listeing to cover drives twiligth the song really hepled haha i think am going to listen to it when i write my chapaters because it gives me lots of ideas thanks for commenting on my chapaters and please comment thanks for reading also i have more ideas for yankee love so it wont be on hiatus like i said on love and glory as i had a brain storm once agian thanks for reading!
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Suddenly the basement door opened and two figures appared then they closed the door behind them as they stepped the stairs eyeing the two girls before them Yuko and Mayu seen this as a chance and quickly ran towardas the door but got caugth in the boys grips then Mayu and Yuko flipped them over ther shoulders then sprinted up the stairs opening the door and slammed the door behind them and locked it and caugth there breath then they heard banging on the door."Let us out now this is our house!"
The voice screamed getting louder each time then a fist came flying through the door making the two girls jump out if there skins.The hand then found the handel and yanked the door open and breaking the lock.Riku grabbed hold of Yuko and Mayu while Kuu smothered something on there faces knocking them out instuntily."Ahh look at the mess you made me make detective you broke the computer too its to bad you wont remember this because i would make you pay for everything."Riku said lifting Yuko up to his shoulders and motioning Kuu to do the same with Mayu and lead them to there car then drove them to there house which was like a road away.
I loled so hard, imagining this scene :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
I'm anxiously patiently waiting for more :on drink: :on hobo: :err: :frustrated: :on comhere:
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hell yeah :D more chapterS!!
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Oh oh it's bad for the guys lol
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:) tables turn now
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chapter 9
Kai hid the frog from Atsuko the rest of the time they where out and Tomochin told him to walk Atsuko home while he went home with his sister."Old lady i have a suprise for you."Atsuko glared at Kai once agian when he called her old lady "What is it midget?"
"Fine dont get it if your going to be like that."
"Okay im sorry whatever can i have the suprise then?"
"Yup here i knew you wanted it!"
"How did you know that i wanted it?"
"You where staring at it for like the entire time we where near the claw machien."
"Thanks Kai i gusse in that small body there is a tiny bone in you thats good."
"Hey all of me is good its just you have to relize it first."
"Yer i can see that."
"Atsuko can i call you Aachan?"
"Aachan why?"
"Dont know its cute like you so it suits you."
"Then i gusse."
Atsuko blushed at Kai's statment when she realized she was she coudnt believe it someone like him that could possibaly be one of the biggest theives in the world was making her blush.She took the frog from Kai's hands and held it close to her chest squashing the frogs head.Kai chuckled and took Atsuko's free hand in his own and pulled her to the next road not realizaing that he had interwined there fingers.He remembred the text he got from Riku telling him that Atsukos sisters had been delt with making hime feel guilty as he didnt know what his brothers had done all he heard was that they need a new door and a better sucerirty syustem as well as a computer which made him annoyed as it was him that bougth the thing.
When they got to Atsuko's house there hands where still interwined neither realizing it as they didnt show any signs of leting go and if they did know they where enjoying the warmth and the company of one another.Then Atsuko reluctently let go and made her way to the door tigthing her grip on the frog Kai ran up to her and took his jacket it off and wrapped it around her "Have both of them for memories."Kai cooly said as he kissed her on the cheek and sprinted off before Atsuko could do anything.
She opened the door and walked in to see her sisters walking around frantically as they where discussing what had happaned to them.When Atsuko heard she coudnt believe it then she seen all the information on alot of things recent robberys them and so on.And then they seen 3 files one on Kuu Kai and Riku.They clicked and opened the file to see things they would never had thougth this really was getting better for them or was it?
end chapter
thanks for reading please comment i hope you liked it have a nice day or nigth where ever you and i am off to sleep cause i just seen the wanted live and i am exsuted nigth nigth !!!
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Kai is so sweet <3
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Dawwwww, Kai :) :thumbup
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I bet Acchan is going to fall for Kai soon~ :D
Thanks for the Update! :thumbsup
Update Soon~ :)
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Kai is so gentleman and caring. Guess she started to like/love Acchan now.
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Well done more plz :lol:
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chapter 10
Atsuko walked into her house and seen her two older sisters running around frantically and shouting random things around the room to eachother.Something came flying towards her head but she quickly dodged it with her quick reflexs and tured head to her sister who stood there with a opolagetic look but then quickly returned to what she was was doing.Atsuko just watched her two sisters with a amused look but then decied to ask what they where doing."Stop what your doing and explain!"
The two girls stopped in there tracks and explained everything to there younger sister.When she heard what they had found on Kai she coudnt believe it she could feel her heart breaking more and more as she heard everything her sisters where saying and she didnt understand why."He coudnt have done that he doesnt seem like he could just because he is a theif doesnt mean that he could do that!"Atsuko shouted defending Kai."Why are you defending him he locked us in his damn basement he is not what he appares Atsuko no one ever is."Atsuko felt her finally snap in two she knew now what was happening and what this feeling was she had to talk to Kai and now was the time.She ran out side and it began to rain the rain got harder and harder "Atsuko why are you outside my house?"Atsuko turned around to see Kai behind her with a plastic bag in his hand he then noticed she had no coat on for the second time that night he took his coat off and wrapped it round Atsuko but this time kept tight hold on her because he could feel how cold she was.
"Atsuko are you gonna answer my question?"
"I needed to ask you something i know you know i am a detective and i know you know that we have alot of information on you and your brothers and that we know your theives so please answer this question."
Kai could hear the pain and seriousness in Atsuko's voice so he just nodded his head in responce to Atsuko.
"Did you really kill that man?"
"Yes but i didnt mean to he had a gun and pointed to Riku's head we fougth over the gun i had it in my hands then the guns trigger well you can gusse why does this bother or consern you?"
She knew the truth now and it hurt to know it was true but he did it protecting his brother defending family but that question he asked could she answer it well she was going to try."Because because i think i..i..i l..l..o..o...v...e you i think i love you."Kai coudnt believe his ears the rain was pouring more and more and all he wanted to od is hold Atsuko in his arms and say "I think i love you too."These words ecohed through her head she looked Kai straight in the eyes they never wanted this moment to end both leaned in and there lips finally met there lips moved in rythem until they broke apart the forheads touched and there breath hit eachothers faces."We cant tell anyone can we?"
"No you and your sisters are trying to put me in prison and my brothers i suppose we can in school but no one outside can know."
"I suppose that will do remember your my slave at 5 in the morning"
"Dont remind me you wake up to early"
"Ha i know but still thats something you love about me"
"Yer yer it is i suppose we look like where in one of those old romantic movies you know where the rain is pouring we confess and stuff it feels like where in a story Atsuko i love you."
"I love you to"
The rain stopped and left Kai soaking wet holding on to a half dry Atsuko and a white bag filled with milk and such.Atsuko then left that is before Kai gave her a short goodbye kiss well if you count kissing for like 5 minutes a short goodbye kiss and went home opening the door wearing Kai's coat completely forgeting she had it on i suppose thats 2 coats of his she owns now.
end of chapter
that is one couple togther yay i love this couple hehe thanks for reading and please comment Riku and Yuko chapater next!
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OMG!!!!!!!!
:luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya:
THEY KISSED AT LAST!!!!!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
I'm soooooooooo waiting for Yuko and Riku, OMG!!!!! :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon love: :mon love: :mon love: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl:
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They confess to each others. They are couples now. ^^
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One couple one!
And yay! For the kiss!!!!
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Yea~~!! Kai and Acchan are finally together now~ :D
And the kiss was~~ :wub: :wub: :wub: FANTASTIC~!!!
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chapter 11
"Kai what took you so long i had to fix everything on my own because Kuu just sat there an eat the intire time you where gone!"Riku Screamed Kai was use to this side of Riku so he didnt care that much when he shouted after all this night was the best one of his life."I had to help someone old lady see i even gave her my coat."Kai argued looking down at his dripping wet body.Riku laughed at his brother and went to bed today was a long day.
The next morning Riku woke up to the snoring of his younger brother Kuu coming through the wall making him bash agianst it then he heard a bang obviously Kuu had fell out of his bed being the clutz he is.
(Riku's pov)
I got out of bed and checked on Kai suprised not to see him in his bed then i went down stairs and he wasnt there i was in shock it was 6 in the morning and that midget was gone something had defently happaned mabye he found himself a girlfriend i will analaze his behaviour later i dont have the time to call him i have a very early start at one of my restraunts.I choose my clothes quickly and get changed grabbing a pice of toast i had made an ran out of the house jumping into my Mercedes bend and driving off full speed to the restarunt.Noticing a car following me again i took the long route shaking however it was off my tail in a hurry.
When i arrived one of my head chefs hurried me inside telling me a critic was coming to visit and i began practicing my best dish.Soon it was time for the people to come and start eating breakfast as they done mornings.The critic came in head up high and snoty looking down at the rest of the customers then just behind a familar face came from behind him my little squirral was there wait did i just call her my little squirral it doesnt matter right now though.My waiters led him and little squirral to a table for some reason she was with that man.
I severed my best dish to the pair and walked off to the kitchen waiting to hear the review i was then called to go to see the critic my hands sweating with worry and nerves.But there was no need as i got 5 stars again.The little squirral gave me a cheeky grin and stayed when the critic left and asked to speak with me we went to the back of the restarunt and suddenly she pulled out handcuffs and pushed me againts the wall i tried to fight back but my hands where handcuffed before i could.
"What the hell are you doing?!"
"Handcuffing you and taking you to prison what am i being to nice."
"Why is my little squirral being like this?"
"Who said am your squirral Riku-Nyan?"
"Argh let go!"
"No i have evidance and now your coming to prison sorry."
I tried to shake her off me but she had a tight grip she pushed me in the back of her car and we quickly arrived at the police station.She dragged me in side kicking and screaming then thrown me in the interagation room.Questioning me saying she had evidance then i remembred that i smothred her with something that should knock her and make her forget things obviously that didnt work.I refused to answer anything she asked.So i decied to have some fun.
I got up from my seat and pulled her up by her collar supriseing her then thrown her against the wall i pulled her closer and blown slightly on her face making her blush and me chuckle because of her action.I pulled her closer if that was possiable i lifted her chin and kissed her slightly on the lips then more police came and dragged me off her and took me out the room while i let out a laugh that could make your body still with fear.They pushed me in a cell and i found a way to get out of cell but i had to be sneaky i gusse i will have to wai for now.
end of chapter and Riku's pov
thanks for reading next chapter will be Kuu and Mayu something bad will happen wont give hints but if you gusse right i will let you decied who and what the next chapter will be about and i will mesaage the winner.Once again thanks for reading please comment!
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Haha, this was a fun read :lol:
Waitin for more :thumbup
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:luvluv1: RikuXyuko kiss scene :twothumbs
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guys i want you all to gusse what bad thing happens in the next chapter to one of the two following people Mayu or Kuu if you gusse right you will get to choose who and what chapter 13 will be about and i will message the winner hope you guys have fun figuring it out! :)
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Mhm... Maybe Mayu...
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Good can't wait to read more and I know what happens but I'm not allowed to say
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Pow pow pow go Riku go!
I hope nobody will die in the next chapter
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okay so u all have till sunday to gusse what happens in the next chapter okay an it will happen to Mayu
gusse wht happens and the winner will be messgaed by me okay thanks
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RikuYuu kiss..^^
i want more of these moment...
So something bad will happen to mayu
i wonder what is it?
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chapter 12
Kuu went for a walk after his scheduled ended and hit the shops when he found his favourite manga store Rappappa.When he got into the store he seen his friend who owned the store he quickly hooked him up with the best manga the store had.A familuar face then walked in Mayu looked towards Kuu only to nod her head in acknowledge ment that he was there.As she worked out a plan in head because today was the day she was going to get Kuu into prison and keep him there this was going to be the end of the 3 angel brothers and it was going to be all because of her and her sisters.
She shot looks every now and then to Kuu to make sure where he was and what he was doing at all times then music filled the air Smooth crimanl by Michael Jackson glee version.
Kuu noticed Mayu's looks over to him and wanted to have some fun.As she looked away he knocked a shelf over causing people to see what happaned he was gone but then Mayu was behind him he coudnt believe it he started running down the roads of Tokyo dogeing and running in and out of people.When a car door opened just infornt of him but he had quick reflexs and jumped over it while Mayu ran round it she was fast.People where starteled by the jump that Kuu had achived and he smiled seeing Mayu was slowing down.Then suddenly right by him making him almost get scared out of his skin.He ran out into the street jumping through cars and smashed a window of a cra by jumping through it and hotwired the car.
The car reved up then burst out into the street he turned the raido turned on and Michael Jacksons Bad Glee version burst into the car.Kuu smiled these songs where really ironic.Looking into the rear view mirror he seen Mayu pull someone over and take there car and come after him.He was getting frustrated he sped up the car more and more until it hit its max but even then Mayu was behind him there was no point in her being discreat after all he was on to her.
They where now on the motorway Kuu had an idea he weaved in and out of the cars then just as soon as there was a small gap left for him to turn he did where as Mayu went straight ahead.
He had won well that is what he had thought poilce cars surroned him not he coudnt get out Mayu appared in one of the cars she got out of the car walked up to Kuu and said those 4 words."You are under arrest."His eyes widened he had been caught worst part it was by her.The anime girl he was never going to be able yo live this down.Okay glee had been on the radio alot today because another one came on the radio Hit Me with Your Best Shot" / "One Way or Another he smiled today was really ironic.
Handcuffs circuled around his wrist and pulled him from his car and escorted him to the back of a police car not knowing that his other brother was there he was thrown into an intergation room where they got no answers no matter how hard they tried the answer was the same it was always SHUT UP!
Not knowing what to do she called her Younger sister Atsuko in.
"You do know that we have your two brothers right?"
"No and i am gusseing they have have gave you no information."
"Oh why is that?"
"Riku taught me how to read body language sorry."
end of chapter
hehehe yer so a lot of glee sorry been obsessed lately anyway comment and thanks for reading the winner of the comment is Sakura_Drop_ she has told me wht she wants so im workin on it now!
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i wonder how they are going to free from jail.. :panic: :panic:
And, oh, how I'm waiting for the SPECIAL thing I requested, hehe :wub: :wub:
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:lol: Yup u are really obsessed wiv glee and nice one robyn u know I :heart: all ur fics :drool:
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(So this is Sakura_Drops_ chapter that she asked for hope you all like it)
chapter 13
(Riku's pov)
I cant believe it im stuck in a police cell just becasue i left my gurad down i swear this girl is going to pay.About 5 minutes later Kai came in with handcuffs around his waist followed by a very sad faced girl behind him who whispred something in his ears unfortentely i couldnt make it out."So you got caught to?"Kai asked stating the obvious however something didnt seem right in his tone of voice or the way he acted.
I knew he had a plan no dout so we decied to wait for Kuu to come since it wouldnt take long and the fact we stole one of there radios helped get info fast good thing they where eating there donuts.Kuu came screaming in and was took in the intergation room he was back no later then 3 minutes after he had entred.The guards left the three of us."Have a plan?"I questioned Kai nodded and shown the number 3 with his hands we got up from our seats then walked around one after one we disabled the camears kicked open the top vent and climed through.
Eldest to youngest as Kai sealed the end shut so the guards coudnt follow us.Turning right from left i seen a little vent we could squeeze through and get out.Hitting it open i jumped through suprised to see a little squirral infront of me so i motined for the other 2 to keep going to find another way.I was really getting frustrated this girl was being a pain in the arse."Move Squirral!"I ordered as i pushed her to the side and then she suddenly reappred infront of me she really knew how to push a guy.I then noticed a sight blush on her face knowing what this ment i used it to my advantage i had to get out of here and i didnt care who i hurt.
I pulled her to my chest i felt her body heat up and her heart speed up i forced her head into my neck and could feel her breath against my neck.Oh no there it is the feeling i am not inlove hell no that is not aloud i am not falling in love that is not aloud no butterflys god damit i order myself stop!
She tilted her head up to see my face she didnt fight back she didnt push me off her she just stared at me are faces got closer until are lips met once more.I could feel electricty this isnt aloud i thought i cant fall inlove with the enemy but my body would not order my brain.My brain was telling my body one thing while my heart told another and my body obeying the heart.Tears dropped down her face i was sure because i could feel something wet against my cheeks.We both wanted this but we coudnt have it.
I shoved her off me and eyes met you could literally see sparks flying from are eye contact.I opened the door and walked through it she didnt stop me she coudnt not if she felt like i did there was no way she could just like the time i had the chance when she broke into my house to hurt her i coudnt not when i felt like this.Running out of the room i ran past the guards and jumped over obsatceles that where in my way and soon enough i was out of the police station as the news came on at one of the tv shops.
ON THE TV
"It has recently been said who the three angel brothers where and everyone was shocked with the outcome."
Pictures came up on the screen.
"Eldest of the three The famouse number one chef Riku the middel child idol Kuu and there little brother star of his highschool football team and captain Kai this news shocked the world and there fans no one knows why they did it and it has just been recently reported that the three boys have escaped police custaredy."
(back to Riku's pov)
It was over my caree was over but more imporatantely my brother lifes runined in a instant.
End of chapter
so yer hope you enjoyed!!please comment thanks for reading!!
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AH!!!! THe KojiYuu moment!!!!!!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
THANK YOU, XxRoByNxX78-san!!!!!!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
But that aside, poor three brothers... :panic: :panic:
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O.O I disappear for a bit from jphips and I come back this is already at chapter 13 *jaw drops* :panic:
OMG I can't keep up with everyone's update... feel so guilty for not commenting too....
Roby I read your other stuff too! :thumbsup but I just don't have time to comment on all of them sooooo
being :twisted: and just leave one :P
THanks for the updates! Keep it up :thumbsup
*Fades into the shadows*
~imo-k
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Oh oh it's really bad for the guys but Kojiyuu wow!
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Wow great chapter guess they had their moment keep it up :twothumbs
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Great chapter! I love the Kojiyuu part, awww they're both in love but they know it's a forbidden love and it's hard to stop how you really feel for a person.
Too bad for the three brothers, their careers are now ruined because of the three detective girls. Tsk.
Waiting for more!
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aww kojipa make happy your wifey..
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kojiyuu moment is :heart:
update soon :bow:
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i love Rikuyuu moment so sweet and.....sad......
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i love it :wub: thanx :cow: update soon please :bow:
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chapter 14
(Kai's pov)
I met Atsuko at the said time and we went round the shops which really suprised me as i had no idea that the shops where open at 5 in the morning.About an hour later we grabbed something to eat or thats what i thought anyway she kissed me then handcuffed me to her my eyes widedened in realisation.She got a text and sighed when she read it i could tell we werent going to the police yet.We got to school and everyone stared at us making me angryer and angryer a Sensei stopped us asking about the handcuffs."Oh yer right you know my sister Yuko right Sensei?"The Sensei nodded at Atsuko while i scoffed trying to snap the handcuffs in half."Well yer she kind of did this and now we dont know what class we should go to."She answered knowing that my plan in snapping the goddanm handcuffs wasnt working i just yanked Atsuko to my class ignoring the Sensei shouting us to come back.
I turned the corner and shouted Tomochin he immediently came out the class and burst out laughing making me want to kick his teeth in.But i coudnt with this old lady on me i love her and she done this great to know i can trust her."Dont just stand there help!"Tomochin just looked at me with a big grin then he said "Beg!"
"What no way!"
"Fine i wont help then."
"Tomochin!"
Great he walked away just great i cant trust my 'girlfriend' and now i cant trust him just great!
(Atsuko's pov)
I watched Kai get into a huff when Tomochin walked off because he woudnt beg for help i just chuckled and was happy as if he actually got of these handcuffs i would be in huge troubale and i dont like being in troubale with my sisters they are the worst when they are angry.In all honesty i didnt want to do this i love Kai he however probaly hates me now.I mean i coudnt betray my sisters that is to much to ask but betraying him is a kneif through my heart.
(No ones pov)
The day ended slowly because it dragged on every hour the entire day the pair was arguing or Kai was ignoring Atsuko which just made her more upset.Knowing that he would have to go to the poilce station he quickly drew a plan into his head as he tried to think of where all the cameras vents and all the other things where.
They arrived at the station and Kai coudnt believe it when he seen his brother Riku sitting down looking hopeless.His second brother then came in Kai then explained his plan to the pair by showing a number 3 with his hands his two brothers knew what it ment and took all the security cameras out got inside a vent and Kai sealed it just as he got in.
(Kai's pov)
I could hear the gurads shouting are names and screaming saying theve escaped pretty pitafull guards if you ask me.Riku stopped us and jumped down out of the vent and motioned for us to carry on when he noticed the girl infront of him.We found another one this time Kuu jumped down it and done the same as Riku these girls are a pain.I seen a exit and crawled to it jumping down and twisting my ancle i held it in pain but looked up to see her infront of me."What do you want now?"I asked earing a scowl to be honest i dont care what she thinks at this point in time because she has really scrathed me the wrong way."Im here to stop you."She replied looking so smug my ancle throbbed in pain so i pushed her to the ground then ran as quick as my injured ancle would carry me only to be confronted with police i knocked one or two out and dislocated some of the others arms and ran.
I made it outside running into people as the police gave chase.I saw a bike just laying on the ground so i lifted it up and jumped on peddling faster and faster lets see them donut eaters catch me now.A car swearved infront of me the breaks on the bike didnt work then.......
end of chapter
thanks for reading hope you liked it i loved writing it please comment i enjoy reading them and i will get back to you if you ask questions once again thanks for reading!
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Kai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
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Lol Tomochin didn't help his buddy
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Kai!!!!
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Lol well Done cookie love the handcuffs :P
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What will happened to Kai? I want to know. Update soon
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nooo kai :panic: i love reading this fic :luvluv2: please update soon :on gay: thankyou x
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Thanks for the Update :kneelbow:
BUT...........!!!
NO!!!! Kai!!!!!!!!!! :cry:
OMG! I hope nothing will happen to him which I don't think so...
Please Update Soon! :thumbup :thumbup
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chapter 15
I felt pain shoot through my body and i could hear people screaming i looked up to the sky to see 2 people looking down on me but i gave into the pain that was calling me the pain that was telling me to give in and enter the world of darkness.
I woke up to a blinding light which made me quickly close my eyes once more.Opening them once more i seen people running around with medichen and other things.But there is one thing that was bothering me.You see i dont remeber who i am.Can someone tell me instead of running past me why am i the hospital?What did i do?Suddenly a girl walked towards me who is she?Do i know her?
She said something to me and then i was inside one of there wards tucked tightly in one of the beds with wrist straps tying me to the bed.I turned my head and seen a drip going into my arm still alot of questions where running in my head.The door opened a nurse and the same girl from before entred the room i coudnt stop looking at the girl she had shoulder length brown hair amazing big brown ords for eyes and a charming smile that could make my heart melt then i thought popped into my mind i should ask her.
"Erm who are you and who am i?"
"Ha nice one Kai."
"Kai is that my name?"
The nurse could see that i was serious and took the girl outside to explain something to her when she came back in her face was red with tear stains which confused me.She sat down in the seat next to my bed taking my hand in hers.
Is she my sister?
"Im Atsuko your girlfriend and your name is Kai you are the goaly captain and star of your highschool football team you are also a detective who is helping me and my sisters catch the two angel brothers."
I could sense that she was lieing but i had know idea what about.But i decied to trust her anyway after all she was the only person here and she seemed to know whoever i am well.She stroked my hand gentally grinning like a child."Why am i tied down?"Her head shot up with my question an then quickly untied them looking at the clock i seen it was 11pm the day had gone very quick.Atsuko looked at the clock aswell and i seen a frown appare on her face.As she was about to get up i pulled her down.I lifted he cover up and patted on the bed she gave me a what-if-i-have-to-go sort of look but i shrugged giving in i gave her my victouris smirk she climed into the bed putting her arm around my waist then nuzzeling her head in my shoulder closing her eyes to quickly start sleeping.
This girl seemed very genuine very caring and defenitly loved me that i could just by looking at her eyes and i could tell i loved her i felt close to her i mean not just because she is cuddeled into me but emotienly close so i knew she wasnt lieing about being my girlfriend that was for sure.A nurse walked into the room and opened her mouth to say something when i spoke."Please let her stay."I begged she nodded and walked out telling the other nures not to bother with me i sighed greatfully closing my eyes to fall asleep whispering "Goodnight Atsuko."
end of chapter
so what did you all think ehehehe u all hate me now right coz i made him loose his memories.
hahaha thanks for reading please comment!
oh the poll on why does it have to be you is closed winner Nezumi and Black
Oh and Mayu and Kuu's chapter will be up next lol
An Adam me an Jamie arnt inlove at all we aint toghter and never will be !!
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Lol good chapter and losing memory :( . U never know there's Still time for u two ;)
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No, I don't hate you. That makes the story more interesting. How is Atsuko going to explain him why she lied about the two angel brothers?
Continue please :)
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wht u mean adam ??
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Lol it doesn't matter
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Kai T_T!
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hi ppl
turns out my form tutor wants me to print out the chapters of this that have been writen an wants to read them coz i asked her to check this web on her laptop in school lol she seen a load of the stories i writ but i just dont really want her to read the other ones coz of the girl couples and she will propably go weird.
Adam is printing them out for me thanks adam
Also i would a pricated your guys ideas if you have any
The question that is on your mind why did Atsuko lie will be answred soon and thanks to all of you for reading you are all the best next chapter will be up 2morra i swear =)
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Ur welcome
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Miss is gonna love it she better after the time it took to print :D
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chapter 16
Kuu was scared he didnt know what to do he coudnt find his brothers all he knew was just what was on the news which wasnt much.He shouted his brothers names in the streets and avoided being caught and spotted by the police many times then eventually ended up under a bridge as rain started to fall from the sky.He placed his back against the wall he was near then slumped down to the hard solid ground.He coudnt believe it his perfect life the fans,girls not to mention the money and his family where all took from him because of three girls who he thought coudnt hurt a fly.
Hearing voices coming from near by he lifted his hood up and placed it over his head.The figures came closer towards him so he quickly covered his face and stared at the ground then finally they passed by.Sighing in relife he blown on his hands to make the warmer then rubbed them against one another.His mind was blank of thoughts he didnt know what to do or who to contact in this hard time.He coudnt call his manger because she was being chased by the press so she was out of the picture.There was no one not a soul he could trust.
He didnt have friends because he never got to close to people thinking they would only use him for his fame.Before he could try to suppress his tears they poured down on the once happy face.Every time he wiped them away more would replace them he had never felt so useless in his life.
He had to get revenge on those girls if it was the last thing he did.
Seeing that the rain had stopped he got back to his feet and came out from under the bridge then began his search to find his brothers once again.
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Riku had been following Yuko ever since he had escaped the polices custody.He watched her as she scouted out in stores buildings and in parks in hopes that she would find the three brothers but none the less in all her efforts all she was left with was nothing.Riku took great pride in this because as far as he was concerned that ment that his brothers where doing fine on there own.If they had been caught it would be on the telly by now anyway.Suddenly he felt arms wrap around his waist which caused him to spring foward automatically and attempt to attack the mysetry person.
His fist was caught in mid air as did his left leg as he went for a kick but failed.There was only one person that could best him in a fight and unfortently that person was right in front of him.The person he hated with every fiber of his being the person who betrayed him.
Riku silently whispred the persons name then a battle broke out alarming Yuko to know that there where others next to her.
She rushed foward suprised to see her ex boyfriend/ex dectective fighting one of the people she has been pursuing for the last couple of days.Not knowing what to do she stood still her feet locked to the ground and her eyes locked on to the two men fighting before her all she could do was wait until they where tired or beaten enough so she could take them in and send Riku to prison.
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Kai woke up feeling something heavy placed on top of his body he looked down to see a girls head on his chest on the rest of his body on top of his.He giggled a little then hit the girl with little force on top of her head to wake her.
Atsuko's pov
I felt something hit my head so i opened my eyes slightly to see Kai with a huge grin on his face.When i realised what i was lying on i could feel heat turn my cheeks red.
I quickly pushed myself off him and hid my blush then someone burst through the door.
End of chapter
So i finally updated it hehehe i hope u arnt mad that i took so long i had writers block thanks for reading and please comment and i hope that my spelling is better than before now im off to revise for maths coz i have been put in gcse early because my teachers are mean ehehe
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yey!!an update,im happy!!tnx for the update,im looking forward to your nxt update!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Yay u finally updated :pimp: Kai reunites wiv Atsuko yay but I wonder when/if he will find his brothers :? Thx 4 the update lol I'm in Germany now but Facebook doesn't work well :( but I can Still upload photos :) update soon plz :P
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hey everyone hmmm erm i just wanted to tell u all that all of my current fics i have lost intrest and insparation in and can no longer write them so i am going to make it up to u all i promise so consider them terminated by myself sorry
i will write another secret life of no3b i promise you all that
am sorry if i let you done and hopefully you can forgive me
however i will still be co-authoring Hellish heaven and i hope you look forward to its update
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It's okay. I understand you, as I was in this kind of situation before... Ganbatte, nee?
I'll be waiting for your future updates, Robyn-san ;)
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:S :S :S :S :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I'll never forgive u
Lol I have
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cool fic. please update soon :D