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Title: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 01, 2012, 03:20:03 PM
Hi ....I'm New Here....So This is My First Fanfiction...Hope you Like it....And Sorry for my English :sweatdrop:

OKETTERU ANGELS (Story About Rena and others)

INTRODUCTION

Name: Matsui Jurina
Age: 15
Status: A Leader of the New Rappapa ...A Strong girl ..Who always Hang out with Mayu , Kumi and Anna..She The Youngest of the Rappapa Family...The naughty of all Member...A Fast Shooter..Love’s To Skip Class With Anna ...Once a Assassin..

Name: Matsui Rena
Age:21
Status: A fearsome EX Rappapa Member ....A Strong Girl that always Come to Majisuka Girls High to check The school and Other Member of Rappapa....Work as a Assassin’s and Hacker...She know how to use a Gun and Other Weapons and a Professional Programmer .She can Be Fearsome If She Saw Blood.She allergic to Meat and Acholol..

Name: Kashiwagi Yuki
Age: 22
Status: A Another Fearsome EX Rappapa Member....A Strong Black Aura .... She Working as Singer...She can Kill in a Fast Rated..She is the Quiet one in the Royal Family.She Always care For Her Partner , Her younger sister Rena and Kumi ...

Name: Yagami Kumi
Age: 17
Status: Rena Half Youngest Sister ...She Always with Tomochin..She Is Rappapa member of Majisuka Girl High...She a fast Learner , Fast Movement and she Quite know how to use a Gun..the Youngest in Akiba Family...Loves to Play Games..Cheerful but in a Wars Serious

Name: Watanabe Mayu
Age: 18
Status: Jurina Older Sister ....She a Killing Cyborg ...She can Kill in Fast Rated Too...She Love to Practice her Shooting with Yuki ...She Never Treat Jurina as Her Half sister..She is The Boss of Yuki...She Dragged Yuki Everywhere she Went ...But At School She Dragged Kumi To go Everywhere With Her

Name: Takahashi Minami
Age: 22
Status: She is The Leader of Royal Family...She know how to use martial arts weapon and fighting skills...She love all the Abika Family...She is One of the Leader of Akiba Family ...She Sometime At her Study Room Doing Research

Name: Maeda Atsuko
Age: 22
Status: A Strong Girl and Current a head librarian in Majisuka University. She Always with Takamina ...She can be Scary if she is mad ...She Love to Read Books and A Good Chef at the Family ..

Name: Ishida Anna
Age: 17
Status: Kumi Partner ...She and Kumi have a Powerful Friendship and Relationship..She always hang out with Jurina ...She is a Fast Learner and a Great Shooter..She Love To Polished her Gun Even The Bullet..She Love playing Games With Kumi...She is The Trustable For Jurina If They Wanna Skip School
 
Name:Itano Tomomi
Age:21
Status: A Good Friend of Kumi and As Know As Shibuya One of The Rappapa Member and she love Fashion...She can Be Sometime Rude and Wanted to be Ignored..She is the Gunner Queen and Fashion Queen in the Family.

Name: Kasai Tomomi
Age: 21
Status: Have a Relationship with Tomochin...She Always Say Chiyuu on the Back of the Word she Says.......She can Use All Kind of Guns...She Can Be Like Rena Sometime..

Name:  Minegishi  Minami
Age: 23
Status: She a Chef at the Mansion and a Eater too...She can only use Machine Guns...She Move to Tokyo with the other Three...She been assigned as a Chef at Tokyo for 6 months..

Name: Shinoda Mariko
Age: 26
Status: She a 2nd Fashion Queen or fashion Princess as Tomochin is the 1st Fashion Queen...She work as a designer and a Model at the Same Time ...She Dislike immature people

Name: Oshima Yuko
Age: 22
Status: She is a Prevent...She Always Jump and follow her NyanNyan...She is a Designer of the Family ...She Move to Tokyo too

Name: Kojima Haruna
Age:22
Status: She the Airhead Queen of the Family...She always know about something ...She Loves Yuko ...She work as Yuko Model and Mariko Model as Miichan didn’t know how to be a model ...Because she always Eat!!



Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: MESS on March 01, 2012, 03:48:31 PM
pleasee first chap now!!!i can't wait!!!!! :tantrum:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 01, 2012, 04:47:31 PM
Here Chapter One....Hope You guys Like it....Sorry for my english :sweatdrop:  :)

CHAPTER 1

A Car Crash...A Shouting Girl for Help...A Broken Glass and Stuff....A Girl With a Fearsome Aura Trying To kill A Man with a Glock 18 Gun...the Girl Shot the Man with blood Splash over her clothes and suddenly a Lomborghini Reveton came near her and Stop in Front of her ....With A Girl Spoke to her

‘Rena ....Hop in Or it too late’ Yuki Says with a sighed

She Hop into the Car and Start to Spoke to Yuki

‘Why are you here ...Where Kumi’ Rena Says
‘What do you think i’m Doing ...Trying to Safe my Sister from Getting in Jail...’ Yuki Says with A Glared to Rena
‘What ever’ Rena Says With A Surpised Face
‘YOU SHOULD CARE MORE ABOUT YOUR LIFE RENA ’Yuki Yelled to Rena
‘Fine...I will ’ Rena Say with look at the Window

While Arrived At Akiba Mansion...Rena Rushed Going into the House in the living room Rena saw Kumi Sleeping on the Couch and Smile Happyly ...Rena Run Toward her room to take a Bath ...Before Yuki Smack her head For not taking a Bath with the Dirty Blood on her Clothes..While Yuki Went Inside the Kitchen to make Some Dinner for the Three of Us ...She Know That Kumi Is Hungry because Kumi Just Got Back From School..Suddenly After Rena Took a Long Shower ..She make a Quick Dress up and Picked her Gun that look like a Toy gun ...She Went Down stair And About to went Outside For A Walk...Yuki Spoked to Her

‘Where Are you going this time of Evening after Bitting up Three Innocent Man .’ Yuki says   
‘Well i Just Going for A Walk at the Park...If It that ok With you Yuki-San’ rena Says and Teased Yuki
‘ARghh You can Go Where ever you want HERE..’Yuki Says As she Toss the House Key to Rena and Begin to wake Kumi Up for Dinner
‘Thank see ya’ Rena Says As she Catch the Keys and Begin to Run to the Park

At the Park

Rena Just Walking for Relaxing her Mind and Her Future....

Suddenly She Walked Toward a bench nearby the swing and sat while looked at the night full of star ...Suddenly a Person Surpised her from the Back

‘It Nice Night Right’She Says with a relaxing Tone
‘AHhh...You scare me Jurina’Rena Shout with a Sighed on her Face
‘WHAT the EX RAPPAPA Queen Scared of Me HAHAHA’ Jurina Yelled and Laughing with her Heart to hear that the Fearsome Queen Scare of her..
‘I’m Not Scare I Just Surpised You lucky if you’re the Bad Guy i’m already Kill you with a Gun already’ Rena Says While Punch Lightly on Jurina arm ..
While Jurina Laughed and Sat next to Rena and Watch the Stars together...

‘Hey Jurina How Was Rappapa and Majisuka right now ’ Rena Asked Jurina
‘Well It Alright ...It Fun now that I’m The president of Rappapa but I Still Miss you guys ...Well I Remember went the First Time you beat me ...Well I have a Fun time there ....But Still didn’t beat you up’ Jurina Says with a Proud tone and Sighed.
‘Maybe Next Time Ok’ Rena says to Comfort Jurina
‘Well it no use now ....You already Graduate Remember’Jurina says with a Disapoint voice
‘Yeah...I only Graduate because of the Promise I make with Yuko but I still Don’t get it Why I Suddenly Graduated ’Rena Says With A Couple Of Tears Running toward her Cheeks
‘Hey...I know how you Feel but you can’t Stay as A Rappapa Queen Forever...Even Every Year We Change’ Jurina says While Look at Rena
‘Yeah You Right...Well I should Get Going or Yuki-sama Get Mad at Me’ Rena Teased Yuki and Walked toward the Mansion
‘SEE YA AND SAY HELLO TO YUKI FOR ME’Jurina Yelled as Rena Become Farder than her and Walked toward her House
‘Ok ..AND YOU GUYS BETTER GET BACK FROM THE SCHOOL TRIP FAST’Rena Shouted from her Distance and Jurina Distance

Rena Unlocked the door with the Keys Yuki Give it to her and Rushed to her Room to get a nice Sleep ...

The Early Morning ( 7.30 A.m)
   
Rena Woke Up And Rushed toward the Bathroom Before Yuki get in because she Didn’t want to wait for Yuki took a Bath .....She Took a Quick Shower and dress up as her t-shirt and Black Skinny Jeans and rushed downstair and Woke up Kumi who was Sleep on the Couch last Night and Asked her to took a Bath and Ready for School...

 Once Kumi Already For School ...Yuki Woke Up with a Nice Bath and Run toward the Mansion Exit

 ‘You Going to Maji...Do you Mind ...Do not Brought a Gun With You Rena’ Yuki Says While Rushed Outside the House to go to Worked
‘Hey Wait Up ...Ahh Fine ’ Rena Growled and Put her Gun on the Living Room Table As Kumi Run toward Rena Car
‘Rena-chan Let go’Kumi Says
‘Yeah...Yeah ...I Know...You didn’t even Bath Yet’ Rena says
‘I already Bath this Early Morning’ Kumi say as she Get in the car

While at MAJISUKA GIRLS HIGH

Rena and Kumi parked Rena Orange Ferrari 458 Italia Outside the school and walk to the Principal Office as the Woman Spoked to Rena

‘ Well Hello Matsui-san It Good to see you after the Graduation Party ...Well what are you doing here’The Principl Says
‘Ms.Yukiko-San ...it Nice To see you Finally ...I want to registered Yagami Kumi Back to this School May I....’Rena says While Glared to Ms Yukiko
‘Of Cource anything for you my favourite student in Maji’Ms.Yukiko says
‘Thanks’Rena Says while Left the Office While Kumi Went into the Clubroom to see the others...

As Rena Walked toward the Exit and Suddenly She Remember ..She Left Something In the Rappapa ClubHouse ....She Make a U-Turn and Walk Faster because she Didn’t want everyone to know that The Fearsome Gekikara is Here Look Normal...She Made It To the Clubhouse without Anyone Seen It....She Knock the Door ...and Waited Until someone Open it and It Was SHIBUYA

‘AH...Geki..’Shibuya Says While Look To head to legs and Saw A Boy on her Arm
‘Hi ...Shibuya’ Rena Says
‘Long Time No See’ Shibuya Says With a Surpised Look
‘Ah.. ONEECHAN’ Kumi Shout as she Saw Rena
‘Shhhh...Kumi I don’t Want to Cent--‘ As Rena Try to Finish her word but suddenly Center Came out of the room with Nezumi and Tomo~mi
‘Can you guys keep it down —OH Rena’Center Shouted to the Two as she saw Rena she Lower her Voice Down ...
Rena Who was trying to Hide Her Self Behind Shibuya But too Late Center Already Shouted her Name as Nezumi Look At Gekikara like She Haven’t Seen in awhile

‘Hi Guys’Rena say as she
‘Ehhhh....GEKI ‘ All in the Clubroom Shouted her Nickname Loudly ...
‘Oh no ...Gotto go ‘ Rena Says while look at the Time on her Watch and Begin to Run...To the Parking lot....

As Jurina Throw a Rock toward Rena Car and Made Rena Window Broke in pieces and made Rena to Stop Running..
Rena Stop Shock While Looking At her Orange Ferrari 458 Italia and suddenly Stop Running and Watch the Glass dropped down on the Floor

‘Hey You JURINA STOP THROWING STUFF TO ME LIKE ALWAYS’ Rena says Calmly and started to shouting at Jurina
‘WHAT YOUR PROBLEM ’Jurina Yelled
‘MY PROBLEM IS I GOTTO GO HOME..... What your Problem Throwing a Rock to my car’ Rena says while Jurina Smile
‘My Problem is You ...Partner’ Jurina says
‘We Settle this after a Week Deal’ Rena say as she Show her Fist
‘DEAL’ Jurina says as she Show her fist too

Rena Rushed into the Car and Start the Engine and Make a Racing Car Tone And Speeding Her Car Up and drive them Home..

Half an hour later~At Home ~

As the Got home ...Rena Rest her Body on the Couch Tiredly as She Got Stuck in Traffic because of some Idiots Got into an Car accident ....She When into the Kitchen To get some Snacks and Drink for Her and Sat on the Couch  and Watch Some Tv with a Boring Channels and She Suddenly Fall asleep ...zzz

On Rena Dream ~

One Day Before Summer Vacation ....The Two Yankee student Walked to school as One Of them Saw a Dog and Stop walking as Start to played with it ....
‘Ne~ Jurina-chan What are You Doing ...Faster We’re Late for School’Rena Says to Jurina
‘Since When Do you care About getting Late’ Jurina Glared to Rena
‘Since Now ....Remember I Promised Yuko-san That I will Graduate’Rena Says while Looked at Jurina Proudly
‘Fine Let Go’Jurina says While She Run toward Majisuka Girls High
‘Hey Wait Up’Rena Started To Run To Catch Up with Jurina

At the Front Gate ~

‘You Were Fast Rena’ Jurina says exhausted
‘Yeah You Too’Rena says With a Sighed
‘Now let Change Our Uniform ‘ Jurina says as She smile to Rena
Rena Just Smiled and Followed Jurina to The Restroom and Change Their Maji Uniform

20 Minutes Later~

Rena Came Out of the Restroom with her Hair is Braided on her Left ..She Wore A Greeny Black Jacket , her Favourite POP Necklace and She Wore A Belt on her Skirt ..and a High Cut Boot ...
Followed by Jurina with a Brown Cardigan Over her Maji Uniform...and they separated ways
Rena Went to the Clubroom and Jurina went to the rooftop ...

After School End....It already Summer Vacation...Geki already Turn into Rena back and start heading home Alone....Went she already arrived at her Mansion  road and she Saw a Black GMC Yukon Denali in front of her Family Mansion And She Heard a Loud Noise Like Broken Glass and Gun shot ....She thought that she will change into Gekikara but she can’t although her Secret will revealed to her parent that she was a Yankee  so she went to nearby bushes next to her house window and Hide there and Saw a scene of her parent get Shot on their chest...NOOOOO!!!!----

End of Dream~

Rena Scream out Loud  .....and Yuki and Kumi was Trying to Wake Rena Up off her Dream ....Rena Woke Up with a Sweat and she was shock like she can’t breathe ...Kumi run to the Kitchen to Get Rena a Drink and Return and Handed the Drink to Rena and Drank It

‘Rena It just a Nightmare Relax!!’Yuki says with A Panic Face
‘Onee-chan are you ok’Kumi Says With A Worried Face
‘It alright ...I’m Ok ..It just a Bad Dream’Rena Says With A Relax Face and A few tears fall down to her cheek as she Remember the Flashback of her Parents
‘What Dream is It’ Yuki say with a Panic Tone
Kumi and Yuki sat down beside Rena and Hug her Tightly as Rena explain it to them
‘It not a Dream it was a Flashback ’ Rena Explain and Cry harder
‘Oh that...’Yuki Says with a tear fall down to her Cheek too as Kumi Burned her Face on Rena Shoulder and Cry as well of Their Bad Memories ...

‘I Remember that Rena Didn’t Enjoyed her Summer Vacation because she Just Crying in her room and Locked her Self in the room’Yuki thought as she remember Back the Flashback
‘I think i’m Going to my room ‘ Rena Stood Up from the Couch and went to her room as she Wiped her Tears away
‘I Think she Going to Locked her Self in the room for Days’Kumi says as well as she wiped her Tears away
‘Yeah i was thinking that too’Yuki says while went down to the Practice room as Kumi went to her Room

To be continued~~
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 01, 2012, 07:53:18 PM
I like it continue!
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 02, 2012, 04:49:19 AM
Hey you Guys....Thank for Reading ...Here the Continued but Stilll Chapter 1 ....Sorry for My English Again and Again  :)
Hope you Guys Like It ..... :banghead: I Will do my Best !!


One Week Later~ 8.30 a.m~

‘HELLO WE’RE HOME FROM SCHOOL TRIP’ Jurina and Anna Shouted as the 7 of them get home from School Trip

Yuki went out of her Room and Saw only 5 of them Return happily and Spoke to them who was Relaxing their BOdy at the "L" Couch

‘Hey Guys ..welcome Back ...How was it’ Yuki says With a Morning Spirit
‘It not Bad ...It Worst..’Mayu says While High Five With  Jurina
‘Mayu Right ...It Worst’ Acchan Says while Jump on the Couch to Rest
‘Well Pretty Boring...’ Anna say as she went ot her Room
‘Well it Great’ Takamina says as she went to the Kitchen to eat
‘Are you Blind or Something....It Worst School Trip Ever’ Mayu say as she look at Takamina
'Well If you don't play your PSP on the Way Maybe you Get to Know the Real Activities of the Trip' Takamina say from the Kitchen
'Well ....the Teacher have a Ugly Face ...How do i want to know about the Activities while I was Busy looking at His Face' Mayu say as Jurina and Anna Look at her
'Yeah...the teacher is Horrible ..' Acchan say while looked at Yuki
‘So where W Tomo’ Yuki says While Look at the Two people who was Shouting at each other
‘Oh After the School trip ...Tomochin brought Tomomi To Somewhere’Takamina Shouted from the Kitchen.. 

They Went to their Room to Unpacked their Stuff as Jurina Speak to Yuki
‘Hey Yuki Where Rena’ Jurina Wondered Where were that Girl was
‘Oh she Locked herself in Room’ Yuki says while followed Mayu to their Room
‘WHAT IT HAPPENING AGAIN’ Jurina Shouted as Yuki Nodded While Pulling her Suitcase to their Room

Jurina Sighed and Headed to Their Door and Knock their Door Everal Times ..

‘ RENA OPEN THE DOOR’ Jurina Yelled several Times
‘ALRIGHT I’M COMING , SHUT UP ALREADY !!!’ Rena Yelled Back
‘WHAT YOUR PROBLEM’ Jurina Yelled Back as the Yelling Continued
‘NO WHAT YOUR PROBLEM’ Rena Yelled Angrily

While Kumi was Helping Anna Unpacked her stuff That Anna Brought Back From Tokyo (Which was the Location of the School Trip) Suddenly the Heard Jurina and Rena Yelling..and Rushed to the Edge of the Door to Watch the Scene of their Fighting...While Acchan And Takamina Look Up on the Corridor from the Kitchen...As Mayu and Yukirin Just Listen in Their Room ...

Takamina Run toward Rena and Jurina to Stop the Fight but Suddenly Failed Takamina getting Pushed By the Two..

‘Don’t interrupted Us TAKAMINA’ Both of Them Scolded to Takamina and made Acchan Run Beside Takamina

‘Takamina ..Should I Stop Them From Fighting’Acchan Says Confused
‘No Let them Be At Least they Didn’t Act like The Tomo’s’ Takamina Says while Return to the Kitchen
‘Yeah...They Call you MIDGET ‘ Acchan say while Hold her Laughed

As Takamina and Acchan Return to the Kitchen ...the Yelling Getting Louder that interrupted Yuki and Mayu who Watching Some Cool Anime that Mayu Brought from Tokyo ..Yuki and Mayu Stood up from their Beds and Rushed toward the Corridor ...and Yelled as Well...that make Anna and Kumi Headache and They Decided to Give up and Went to the Cinema Room to watch A Movie’s

‘WHAT WAS THE PROBLEM OUT HERE’ Yuki yelled to Both of Them
‘AND WHAT YOUR PRBLEM TO INTERRUPT US YUKI’ Jurina Yelled to Yuki
‘YEAH WHAT YOUR PROBLEM YUKi-SAN’ Rena Yelled to Yuki as She was Hot headed with Jurina
‘did you Just CALL ME YUKI –SAN ‘ Yuki Yelled Back
‘HEY CAN YOU THREE SHUT UP ‘ Mayu Yelled as Loud as She can to them
‘WELL YOU SHUT UP’ The Three of them Yelled at Mayu that make Mayu Shut her mouth up
‘WHAT YOUR PROBLEM TO US’ Rena Yelled
‘WELL OUR PROBLEM TO YOU IS YOU INTERRUPTING MY RELAX TIME’ Mayu Yelled

As the Four Fight with Yelling ....that make Acchan and takamina can’t have a Quiet moment after the School Trip ...Acchan Decided to Make the Shouting Ends ...She Took out her Red Glock 18 Gun from her Upper Skirt and Shoot the Roof ...that suddenly make them stop fighting and stared at Acchan and Finally Jurina Spoked to Acchan

‘What your Problem’ Jurina Says to Acchan
‘What my Problem IS YOUR PROBLEM’ Acchan Says While Pointing her hand to Them
‘i’m Tired of this Stupid Things i’m Going to Bed’ Jurina Says As Rena Followed to the room
‘That Was Fast Thank Acchan’ Mayu Says While Dragged Shock Yuki to Their Room to Continued the Anime..


THE NEXT EARLY MORNING~

Everyone is tired of the School trip so they decided to Sleep longer than before..Expect Rena woke Up early to get ready for Breakfast ....She went to the Kitchen suddenly her Phone Rang one of her latest song Kareha no Station

“kareha wa kaze ni hira hira”
“watashi no namida no you ni”
“kareha ga kaze ni hira hira”
“kokoro ni mai ochite kuru”
“watashi hitorikiri no”
“SUTEESHON”

Rena Picked Up the Phone and It was her Organization Company...

‘Silver Wolf are you there’ Some Man Spoke to her
‘Yes i’m Here Sir’ Rena Says with Gentle
‘I Have a Job for You ...I will Sent you your next Job be ready ...this Job you must done it on Tomorrow at Midnight at the South Park near your Old Mansion.

While Rena is Speaking on the Phone ...Jurina was Up and She Was About to Make her Own Breakfast as she Heard Rena was Talking with Someone ...She Hide beside the Refrigerator..and Heard the Whole story...when Rena End the Call and went to the Refrigerator to get some Vegetables ...Jurina run to the Corner of the Living room and walked back to the Kitchen ..
As Rena was Eating ...Jurina was making Herself a Meat Sandwich that make Rena glurped by looking at the Meat and Turn away her face...as she saw Jurina took a bite of her Sandwich ...and make her way to the Living room and Picked her White Glock 18 Gun and her Orange Ferrari 458 Italia Key with the name Geki on it ...

As she walked toward the Garage Jurina Yelled Rena name...as Rena stop walking and Turned to face Jurina

‘Where do you think you’re going in the Early morning’Jurina
‘Why do you care ...’ Rena Says With a Glared at Jurina
‘So we didn’t Get worried about your Ass Rena’ Jurina Says With Smile
‘I’m Going to the Car Shop to repair Back my Window that you Broke it the Other Days Remember’Rena Lied and Smile Back and Continued Walked toward the Garage
As Arrived at the Garage Rena Start her Ferrari car Engine and Drove to her Old Mansion As she was planning on staying one night There...

Arrived at Matsui’s Old Bangloo
 
The Location of Matsui’s Old Bangloo near the Mansion Neighbourhood and just a Few Miles from the Mansion ....Rena Parked her Car Behind the Bushed in her Family Territory Garden...Suddenly her Old Maid and Butler Line up for Greet their  Young Miss Return..

‘Welcome Back Young Miss Rena’ All the Maid and Butler who took care of the House for Year Greet Rena Nicely and Gently...
‘Thank you ...You may continued what You are doing and It good to be Back ...’ Rena says While Smile to All of them
‘Excuse Us ‘ The Maid And Butler Excuse Their self and Continued What They are doing ....

Rena Went upstair to her Old Room....and Saw all her Old Stuff ... She thought of Bringing Some Old Stuff to Akiba Mansion ...

Rena search of her Old Suitcase at her Wardrobe and Put Her Old Finish Journal and Diary , her Old Clothes and her Old Song Lyric that she Wrote Past few Years ....She Went to Kumi Room and Picked up her Favourite Black and Red Guitar and Took Kumi Plain Black Guitar for her because she always complain that she miss her Old Guitar...

She already finish Packing her Old stuff ...she went to the bushes that she hide her Ferrari and throw her suitcase on the backseats and locked her car and went inside to get some cheak up of her Weapon ...so She went to the weapon room next to Kumi room ...Only Matsui’s and Maid can enter because of the Clean up and Check up ..

She Brought a Bag ...she Pull out a Hand Gun and Throw it on the bag ...she took a Rifles and Put into the bag and went to the rooftop and Set a Camp for the Shoot up ...After Finish Setting the Camp ...She went into her Old room and Sleep For tomorrow night ...

3.30 a.m ~

“kareha wa kaze ni hira hira”
“watashi no namida no you ni”
“kareha ga kaze ni hira hira”
“kokoro ni mai ochite kuru”
“watashi hitorikiri no”
“SUTEESHON”

Rena Phone Suddenly Rang in the Middle of the early morning ...She woke Up and took a Quick look on the screen and it was Yuki ...She picked up her Phone on the table and answer it..

‘Hello’ Rena says with Sleepy Tone
‘Hello !! YOUNG LADY ...WHERE ARE YOU.....WE WERE WORRIED SICK ABOUT YOU....’ Yuki says Loudly
‘What !! Didn’t Jurina Says to you Guys that i will OUT ’Rena says while Sit up on her Bed as Yuki Say Loudly to her
‘Well Jurina was just saying that you went to the Car Shop to repair the Ferrari Window Right’Yuki Explain that Jurina have told them
‘Oh Yeah ...I almost forgot I Will be not coming Home Until Tomorrow ..becauce i have a little Bit Problem about the car so i will be staying at the Hotel near Tokyo...’Rena Lied to Yuki
‘Wait ....What TOKYO ....You just went to Tokyo to Repair your Precious Car ...at TOKYO’ Yuki Yelled to Rena
‘Hey Stop Yelling in the Middle of the Morning ...And Go to sleep already ..and says Hello to Mayu’Rena Says As she Hear Mayu Talking to Yuki about Current Anime that they are Watching
‘Ok HEY MAYU ....RENA SAYS HELLO ‘ Yuki Yelled to Mayu as Rena hear from the Phone
‘Oh SAYS HELLO TO HER TO AND COME BACK SOON’ Rena Hear Mayu Shouting to the Phone
‘Do you Hear that Rena COME BACK SOON’ Yuki says Out Loud
‘STOP SHOUTING and  I will be back Soon see ya’ Rena Yelled back and Lower her Voice

She was sleeping until the Evening

To be Continued~~
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 02, 2012, 11:43:48 AM
Lol the shouting moments are so funny
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 02, 2012, 03:05:42 PM
thanks ....Hope you Guys Like IT

 XD  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: RenaChii on March 02, 2012, 09:47:39 PM
I want to see her mission~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/ding.gif)
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 04, 2012, 04:07:02 PM
Here the Continued....Sorry for the English....Hope you guys Like it ~~Seriously XD :)

CHAPTER 2~

ALMOST MIDNIGHT~ AS the Mission Starts ~11.45p.m

Rena was Wearing Black Hoddies that can cover her face...Black t-shirt , black Jeans and Gray high cut Boots...As Rena was Setting her Rifles on the Floor
 
“kareha wa kaze ni hira hira”
“watashi no namida no you ni”
“kareha ga kaze ni hira hira”
“kokoro ni mai ochite kuru”
“watashi hitorikiri no”
“SUTEESHON”

Rena Phone Vibrate on her Hoodies Pocket...Rena Answer it  ...

‘Hello’Rena Says
‘Hello Silver Wolf ....Are you at the Location Now’ Someone Says
‘Yes Sir ...I Wait for your instruction Sir’Rena Says Gently
‘Nice.’The Man says

Rena Put her Wireless Earphone on her Left Ear ...and Active it...

‘Ok ...There...will be Someone Sitting on the Bench at the Park ...Make sure you didn’t make any noise ...Target properly Silver Wolf...’the man says
‘Yeah I Know ...can You give me Some Information about this Guy...’Rena says while thinking
‘It not a Guy ...It a Girl...She is one of the Most Dangerous Girl be careful ..She always brought a Gun with her ...so do not miss the Target....’ The man says
‘I Know ...I was asking for her Profile’ Rena says while Rolled her Eyes
‘Oh Sorry ...Her Age was 14 , she work as a Mafia in one huge Family nearby ..., She Learn at Majisuka Girl’s High , And Her Name is Matsui Juri—‘Rena Was Surpised when she heard the Name from her boss

Then Someone shot her on the Arm and it Look like Jurina Shot her ....She Accidently Shot Jurina on the Arm too ...But Rena took her Stuff and Ran to her Room ....Throw her Stuff on the Bed and She open her Old Wardrobe to search for Clothes

She Wore a Black Plain Long Sleeve T-shirt , Her Old Black Jacket , Still wearing the Black Jeans and Gray Boots...She Run toward the Garden Behind the Mansion and Use the back Door to Esacpe ...While Jurina Hold her Arm ...Luckily The Bullet Didn’t Get Direct Shot on her Arm...She Ripped a Quarter of her Shirt and Tied it on her Arm...She Run to her Green Kawasaki Ninja with the number Plate says “ Jurina 1” ...She Start her Bike Engine and Rushed Back Home...

Rena Arrived Home First before Jurina Arrived ...She Parked Her Car in the Garage and Picked her Stuff inside her Car and Run Upstair ...She have to walked toward the Living room Full of people Watch A Funny Anime ..She run quietly to the stair that to her Room ....She Run to the Bathroom and Locked the Room ... she took her Jacket and t-shirt off and Pushed out the Bullet as she scream a little Loud she Tried to slow it down her scream which is hurt a lot as for Jurina she Just arrived Home..she Parked her Bike in the Garage beside Rena car

‘Look who Return back from Tokyo huh’Jurina says to her self as she notice that rena Window is already fixed ..as she Walked to the First aid Box and Took a Plaster and put it on her Arm..
‘Look like she Was telling the true ..she went to Tokyo to Repair her Car Window’Jurina Thought as she walk To the Living room and Saw Takamina , Acchan , Yuki and Mayu was Watching Tv while Kumi and Anna was sleep on the carpet on the Floor...

‘Hey i’m Home...Look like Someone is already Back Home From Tokyo did you Guys Notice her’Jurina says with a Smile
‘No Rena-chan ...Didn’t come home Yet?’ Takamina says While Look at Jurina surpised
‘WHAT SHE DIDN’T GET HOME...BU-T-TT her Car it At the Garage’ Jurina Yelled surpised
‘What but We Didn’t Saw her Walking by the Living Ro—‘As Acchan Trying to finish Talking They Heard a Scream

As they Heard a Scream ...Kumi and Anna was Surpised Woke Up and Stood up with Other ...

‘It Sound Like Rena-chan’ Mayu says while Looking at Jurina and Rena Room Door

As Mayu says that Yuki , Jurina and Kumi Run toward the Corridor and Stoped in front of the Door and the other Follow them...Yuki Open the Door Slowly and Saw Bloody Towel...and A Saw Rena Clothes Outside The Bathroom..then Jurina Spoked

‘Rena-chan Never Put Her Clothes outside the Bathroom and What With the Bloody Towels’ Jurina says Confused

‘RENA !! ARE YOU ALRIGHT’ Yuki Shouted to the Bathroom Door
'Kumi Break Down the Door Now' Takamina Asked Kumi to Break the Door
'Alright ' Kumi Nodded and She Break Down the Bathroom Door with Kicking the door

As Kumi break the Door ....They Saw Rena was Sitting on the Bathroom Floor with a Green Military T-shirt  While Holding her Right Arm ..with Full of Blood and A Cracked Bullet ..As Rena was Exhausted Of Pushing the Bullet out of her Arm...

‘Ar-e Y-o-u  OK’ Jurina says with a worried Face as she Saw Kumi Hugging her Older sister
‘I’m Ok ....I manage to Pushed the Bullet out of my Arm...’Rena Smile To Jurina weakly

While Yuki and Kumi Help Rena Clean up Her Wound ....Mayu and Anna was Continued Watch the Funny Anime that Mayu Brought From Tokyo...Takamina and Acchan Was At the Study Room to Research About the Cracked Bullet...as For Jurina She Went to the Living Room Bathroom ...as Their Bathroom was Clean Up by Yuki and Kumi At the Same time as they Clean Rena Wound ...She Clean up her Own Wound ...And Put a New Plaster...and Left the Bathroom with so sign of Blood on it..

As Jurina Saw Rena was Sleeping on her Bed Beside Her’s ...Rena is Wore a Military Green Tank Top and Military Short...she Decided to go to Sleep too...On One Hour Later ...Rena Woke Up as she Know Jurina Already in Deep Sleep ...She Walked Quietly to Their Room Balcony With her Company Sponsor  the Silver Wolf Logo Jacket While Locked the Balcony door from outside and put on a Wireless Earphone and Call her Assassin’s Company (ASSC)..Suddenly a Voice Come out from the Earphone Madly

‘WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT HER’ The Man Scolded her
‘I’m Sorry Sir ...It Just Something about her that I Miss my Shot Sir...I Won’t Do it Again Sir’ Rena says calmly as she turned around and Saw Jurina Sleeping Face and Smile
‘Fine...I won’t mad at you Silver Wolf ...You are the No. 1 Assassin’s in the Company and my Favourite Student so i’m letting you Go and Rest For Awhile ‘ The Man says..as make Rena Smile..
‘Thank You Sir ...I Respect You Sir’ Rena Says With Wide Smile
‘I Know you Respect me So Be Gone’ The Man Says as Rena End the Call with a Smile...She Went Inside and Continued her Sleep ..


THE NEXT MORNING~

Rena Woke Up the Last Because She was Tired unable to Sleep after Her Assassin’s Company Call ...She was Thinking How would she Quit the Job as She was the No.1 Assassin  in the Company ....She Decided to let it go and Rest For A Week but she Still need to Research her Partner Details ...

‘Why Would I Have To Kill Jurina’Rena Thought about Last Night..
She went to the Bathroom to Clean Herself Up and Wore a Black Skinny Jeans and Plain White t-shirt and A Pink Hoddies..She Took her Backpack from her Wardrobe and put her Clothes for a Week , Her Ipod ,GPS, a Laptop..Then She Open up her Study Table Drawer and Took Her Favourite Gun ...

 ..She Walked Downstair after Close the Door of Their Room on the Corridor and Trying to Sneak Out Of the Living room without no one Seeing It but Rena Failed...Kumi and Anna already Finish Their Meal as was Heading to the Living Room they Saw Rena with a Backpack Trying to Sneak Out From the House ...And They Scream Out Loud Rena name to Give The Other Warned before Rena Run away...As The Other Look at the Living Room and Saw Rena Was trying to Run away...And Rushed left their Meal and Start to Chased for Rena ...

Rena Rushed to the Garage and Start her other Ferrari Engine and Drove Fast like a Racing car to her Secret House that No one Knows about it ....It a Two Story Terrance House...She Parked her Car into the Garage and Start to Turned Off her Black IPhone and On Her Other Silver IPhone...She Open the Front Door By Pushing the Invisible Button next to the Door Knot and Went inside the House with her Stuff and Locked The Door with a Lot of Type of Security to Protect the House...She Rushed Upstair to her room and Put her Backpack on the Bed and Start to Unpacked her Stuff ...After Finish Tidy Things up she picked up Her Laptop on the Bed and Went to her study Room which it not Really a Study room it a Research Room ...A Room Full of Laptop , Computer , Hacker Stuff , Books About Computer and Even a Glass drawer With Three Different Design of Katana ...The Room has a Window Bullet Proof .

She Sat down In front of her Laptop and Research for her Suspect “Matsui Jurina” ...She need to know more about Jurina Although she is her Partner ...As she type all kind of Stuff about Matsui Jurina until She Have a Headache and Rest For A Moment Then her Laptop Beeping for an Answer...She Quickly Read the Information on the Screen

‘Name - Matsui Jurina...Age - 15 ...Learn – Majisuka Girl’s High... Blood Type – B ..Hobbies – Killing Enemy ...Speciality – 100m Run ...Family – Rappapa Family ....Known as- Center / Red Fox... Hometown – Aichi...What She From Aichi too...’Rena Was Shock after she Saw Jurina Hometown is The Same as Her’s
‘Work As/ With – Assassin ‘s Company (JASC)...WHAT !!! ...’ Rena Shouted To the Screen as she Saw Jurina Work at her Junior Company
‘She Work With Junior Assassin’s Company ...AS the 2nd Ranked in the Company as Known As Red Fox...’Rena Shock as She read the Sentence all over again to make Sure she Read it right...
‘Matsui Jurina ...You’re in big Trouble Young Ace...and Look like we’ll be Partner Again Sooner and Later...’Rena Says with a Wide Smile as she went to her Room and Sleep Quietly

As For Other ...all Busy Locate Rena GPS IPhone But no Luck ...Rena already Turned Her IPhone Off

‘Arghhh...This is a Waste of time ...I’m Going to Sleep’ Jurina Yawn and Walked toward her Room
‘Yeah ...Jurina right we better Turn Out ...I’m Sleepy ‘ Acchan Yawn and Rest her head on Takamina Shoulder as Takamina Keep on Searching Rena-chan Signal as she Petting Acchan Head...
‘Acchan ...Takamina ..Yuki and I are going to Sleep’ Mayu Says as she Yawn and Dragged Yuki to their Room
‘Kumi ...Let Sleep ...I know Rena-chan Will be Alright...she a Strong Girl you know’ Anna Says while Cheer Kumi Up
‘Yeah you right ...Let Sleep ‘ Kumi says with a wide Smile and Kiss Anna on the Forehead and Lead the Way to their Room

Early Morning At AKIBA Mansion~

Jurina , Anna and Kumi already Dress up to Get a Nice Fresh Breakfast in Monday...Monday was Acchan Turn to Cook Foods ...Tuesday – Takamina ...Wednesday – Tomomi~ ....Thursday – Anna , Jurina and Kumi ...Friday – Rena ...Saturday – Tomochin ...Sunday - Mayu....They sat down On the Dining Table ...Jurina sat in front of Mayu and Anna and Kumi sat Next to Takamina as Acchan and Yuki sat beside their Partner...Today Breakfast was Acchan Special Pancake as for Friday is a Dangerous day to have Breakfast , Lunch ,Dinner  Together ...Rena Level 3 or Upper Spicy Foods

They Eat Quietly ....Because usually Rena , Jurina , Tomochin and Tomomi speak a lot while eating...As they Finish Eating Takamina Help Acchan Clean Up the Dining Table While Yuki Went to Majisuka Girl’s High to Drop off Mayu , Kumi , Jurina and Anna...Usually Rena And Yuki Went together as Yuki Didn’t Work on Monday...

Rena Secret House ~

Rena woke Up ...And Took a Long Bath and Went the Kitchen ...and start to cook her Spicy Fried Rice in the Morning..She Eat all the fired Rice and She Clean the Kitchen ...Rena realized That she Didn’t even Took her Stuff at Clubroom....She Decided to go to Majisuka ...and Took her Stuff...Rena Went to her room to change her Clothes...She Wore a Black plain t-shirt with a Black Jacket over it and black Skinny Jean ...and her Favourite Majisuka Boot with Her Lucky Music Note pin on her Jeans and Locked her House and Garage and Start the Engine of her Orange and Black Ferrari 458 Italia ...and Drove using a Shortcut to Majisuka

A couple of Minute~

She Arrived at Maji....She Parked her car beside the School and Walked toward the Entrance as she Straight to the Principal Room ...and Knock the Door..

‘Come In’ The Principal Shouted
Rena walked In as the Principal Surpised..
‘Matsui Rena ...Aka Geki ...What can i Help you’ Ms.Yukiko Says
‘I Need a Back up Call to get into the Clubroom’ Rena says while Twist her Finger at the Back
‘Rappapa Clubroom I See ...Sure Like i Says Anything for my Favourite Student’ Ms.Yukiko Smile as She Spoked to the Mic
‘Thank you ...I will be on my way Now’ Rena Says as she Left the Office

Rena walked to the Stairs Quietly She She Heard the announcement from Ms.Yukiko

She Open the Door Slowly and took a Quick Peek if no one is the Room and rushed Inside and Rena Pushed the White Board The Other Way and A Gym Bag was Found...She took the Bag a quick peek in the Bag...While Rena Walked Inside the Room that Private to all The Rappapa Member ...Rena Took her Majisuka Memories Jacket That Hanging on the Wall with Other Rappapa Ex Jacket and She Left the Room with Other Member Memories Stuff...As Jurina was Entering the Clubroom as They Were Call by the Principal about School Stuff....And Saw Rena..Holding A bag ...She Surpised that She saw Rena after Running Away from the Mansion

‘Rena ....What are you Doing In There’ Jurina Says Shock as Rena Feel Some Power Drained her Happiness and Relaxation...
‘I was Picking some of My Stuff I Left For Year...You Have a Problem With That’Rena says With a Dark Glared to Jurina
‘Yes it is Now the Clubroom Property Give it Back ‘ Jurina Almost Shouted but She Hold On
‘Well It Mine ...And Like I care it the Clubroom Property ...’ Rena says Calmly
As Jurina Took the Bag and Unzipped and saw Rena Lucky Gekikara Jacket and  Look at Rena
‘You Don’t Dare take the Jacket Away...You Can’t’ Jurina Says
‘I Dare to Take it Away ...IT MINE’ Rena Says Clamly and Shouted
‘It a Memories To US’ Jurina Shouted
‘Well Your Memories it No Longer ....GEKIKARA IS DEAD’ Rena Shouted Back
‘No You’re GEKIKARA’ Jurina Shouted
‘No ...Remember I already Graduated...So it the End of Geki’ Rena Says Sadly
‘NO ...YOU’RE STILL OUR GEKI’Someone Suddenly Spoke out loud
‘Ah...Tomochin...Sense when Did you came back from Tokyo with Tomo~mi’Jurina says Confused
‘This Morning as Takamina Explain what happen to Rena...While we were stuck in middle of Tokyo Traffic Chiyuu~’ Tomomi says and She Show herself from hiding behind Tomochin Back...
As Jurina was Excited to hear Tomochin and Tomomi Story ...Rena Sneak Out Of the room as Jurina Noticed Rena was Missing from her Spot...And Shouted Rena Name Out Loud as For Rena ..She Run as Fast as she Can to get herself to Her Car and Drove to her Private House ...As She Parked her Car in the Garage and Unlocked the Door with PIN Codes and Drop her Stuff on the Couch and rest her Body On the Couch and Turn on the Tv and Fall Asleep ...

As for the Other Who is Chasing Rena was Tired and Rest in the Clubroom

‘Arghhh We almost Get Her’Tomochin Growled
‘Yeah...She was Fast..Chiyuu’ Tomomi says as she Sat next to Tomochin
‘No ...She was Weak...She just Lucky She Run First’ Jurina says while Took One of Mayu Manga and Begin to read it
‘Wow ...What happen Here’ Mayu Just Return from the Rooftop for a Quick View
‘You Didn’t Saw Geki Up there’ Jurina says while Look at the Image in the Manga
‘WAIT ....Geki Here ...And When do you get back’ She Yelled at Jurina and Pointed her Hand to the Two Tomo
‘This MORNING And STOP ASKING’ the Tomo’s Shouted as Mayu Shock
‘Arghhh ...I’m Sleepy ...I Think i’m Going Home ...See you Guy back Home’ Jurina says while Left the Clubroom 
As For the Mayu and the Tomo’s Decided to Head Home As well....As Kumi and Anna Already Headed
Home Early...

to be Continued Soon ~
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 04, 2012, 07:45:11 PM
Wow they have to kill each othe O_O
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: RenaChii on March 05, 2012, 09:59:51 PM
I hate that mission~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_headbang.gif)

Why they have to kill each other?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_runcry.GIF)
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 06, 2012, 02:48:38 AM
~Hey Guys....Thank you for Waiting... :whistle:
~Here the Continued........Sorry for my English  :kneelbow:


RENA HOUSE~

As Rena Woke Up and Took a quick Look at the Wall Clock that Pointed 10.00P.M....She Woke Up and Took her Stuff to her Room and Unpacked the Stuff...Suddenly Her Phone Vibrate ...”Rang Rang Rang Rang”..It was A Voice mail From Kumi ...Luckily Kumi Didn’t Know that “REN” was Rena Just in case She was in Trouble...She Put a Loud Speaker and Hear What Kumi have to say..

‘Hello Ren ...It been awhile sense you Voice Mail with me ...Well i Just Want to talk with you Because you name is Similiar to my Sister...Her name Is Rena ...and I Miss Her ...Well If you Have time can you Voice Mail me Back ....I’m Lonely even I Have my Partner Like You ...She Always busy Polishing Her Guns..So Call Be Back..

As Rena was Thinking Maybe at a Bad Idea to Leave without Anyword or Letter...
‘I Think I will Give Kumi Her Black Guitar Back’ Rena Says as she Remember the Guitar In The Car..
‘But before that ...I have to GPS Kumi Phone...First.’ Rena Thought and Touch the GPS Contact on her IPhone..
' The GPS Show the Location at Nightclub ' Rena say with Eyes open Wide
‘I Don’t Think Kumi will Go To the Nightclub on her age’ Rena Think and Look at the Screen to check the Name..
‘Ohh...This was Acchan’s not Kumi’s ‘ Rena touch Cancel and Search for Kumi name and found it
‘She was at the Meat and Slice Restaurant’ Rena says the Kumi’s Location with a Disgusting Face
‘Well it a Right Time to check the CCTV in the Mansion ...’She says While went to her study Room and Refreshed her Laptop and Click the CCTV Files...

Rena was the one who check the CCTV at the Mansion because she is the only one that know about technology More...She already Hack the CCTV from her Laptop ...She check the CCTV by Room by Room

‘ Kitchen – Cleared ...Living Room – Cleared ... Study Room – Cleared ...Cinema Room – Yuki and Mayu..Wait WHAT They at Home..Nevermind they won’t Notice ..Because that was Mayu Favourite Anime...All Bedroom – Cleared...Garage – Cleared ... Garden – Cleared’ Rena Check and Rushed to her Room to change her Clothes

She Wore a White T-shirt that wrote “Rena” On it ..A Black Hoddies ..Black Skinny Jean... She Took her White Glock 18 Gun and Put it on the Back of her Jean...She Took a Flashback Bomb in case She Didn’t Get to escape...She Took her Backpack and Put some Gun in it and a rope..she Went to the Garage and Start her Ferrari to the Mansion

AT THE MANSION~

She Parked her Car in the Bushed Beside the Mansion and Took her Stuff and Kumi’s Guitar even the Old Diary Rena Wrote and put on her Pocket....And She Took Out of her IPad as she Touch to Unactived the CCTV and she Went By the Back Gate...She Open the Back Door ..and Looked inside ...she Run quietly as she Hear the Cinema Room Slide...She Run to the Corridor and Went to Kumi room before she Enter the Room ..She Check the Room if no one In There...She Put Kumi’s Black Guitar on her Bed and Left the Room but Before she Left her Room She Heard Someone Foot Step on the Stair ...She Went Back to Kumi Room and Think a Fast way to Go to the Practice Room and Found It ...The Fast Way to Go to the Practice Room is By the Window..

As Yuki and Mayu was Watching Anime...Yuki Stood up from her Chair to go to the Bathroom..She told Mayu To continued Watch as she Went to the Bathroom...She Open the Door and Heard a small Foot Step...By Sudden she Look at the Living room there was No one there...After she went out of the Bathroom She Heard the Same Small Foot Step as she Went up to The Stair to the Corridor there was No one there Either...She Started to Confused maybe The Other Already Came Back or Maybe Not

‘I Think i Did heard a small Foot Step coming This Way’ Yuki say to herself as she Look at Kumi and Anna Door Room

She Open the Door and Saw Rena Trying to Get out of the Room by The Window...

‘Rena’ Yuki say with her Eyes Widen
‘Yuki’ Rena say as she Tied the Rope on the Balcony
‘What are you Doing in Kumi and Anna Room’ Yuki almost Shouted
‘Well I Just Returning her stuff to her Master that all’ Rena say with a Dark Glared and Pointed to the Guitar..
‘The Guitar...You Went to the Old Mansion ‘ Yuki say while Look on Rena eyes and Found a Dark Red Anger in it
Rena Turn her Face to Yuki and Says ‘ Ding Dong ..You Know It now Did Ya’. Rena say as she Laughed like almost Gekikara Style...
‘Why Your Laugh is Not Fimiliar to me’ Yuki say as she Wondering about Gekikara Laugh
‘It Because i’m Not Gekikara Anymore...’ Rena says with a Scary Way as Yuki Surpised
‘HEY ‘ Yuki Shouting out loud

As for the other were Getting Back from Their Fun and Dinner ...They Enter the Living and Heard Yuki Shouting to Someone as Mayu went out of the Cinema Room and says Hello to the Other

‘Hey You Guys ...Welcome Home’ Mayu says Sweetly
‘Hey Mayu if you at here that who was Yuki shouting at’ Acchan says as she Look at Mayu

As the all Confused ...and Run to the Kumi and Anna Room...And Saw Rena Sitting on the Edge of the Balcony with a Rope Tied on her Waist...

‘Hello Guys...It Good To see You all here like a Family Meeting or Something’ Rena says while took Out of her Gun and Wiped in on her Hoddie...
‘Well you never Come to the Family Meeting after Yuko , Haruna , Mariko and Miichan Went to Tokyo for Working...Yuki says
‘Oh That ...It Because i’m Bored Doing Nothing ...Well You can Say Some Memories can Bring Anger to People Again....’Rena says as She Pointed her Gun to Yuki ...as Yuki also Trying to Get her Gun from her Jeans
‘Onee-chan What are you Doing Here ‘ Kumi says while Look at Rena eyes
‘Ahh..Oh Ya ..I came here..Just Return Your Stuff ‘ Rena still Pointed her Gun to Yuki and On her Other Hand She Pointed Kumi Guitar
‘Ohh..My Guitar ‘ Kumi walked to her Guitar and Look at Rena again
‘And Why are you running away ‘ Jurina finally Spoked
‘Oh About that ...You Will know sooner or Later’ Rena say with a Wide Scary Smile..
‘What You Mean Sooner or Later ‘ Jurina says As Rena Put Down Her Gun and Wrote something in a paper and Throw it to Jurina
‘We Meet later’ Rena says As Jurina Take the Paper from the Floor and Look at Rena
‘Oh by the Way ...before I Left .. Here Yuki ...Read if you Dare..’ Rena Throw Her Old Diary to Yuki as Yuki Catch it
‘WAIT’ Yuki Shouted as Rena Untied her Rope..
‘What  !!! You know i’m Busy Right Now..’ Rena Throw the Rope To the ground
‘WE DON’T CARE IF YOU’RE BUSY OR NOT ...WE NEED AN ANSWER’ Tomochin Shouted
‘And One More thing ...GEKIKARA IS NO LONGER INSIDE ME....THIS IS MY NEW ME’ Rena Shouted Back to Tomochin as she Jumped off the Balcony and Land on the Bushes Safely ..
‘RENA’ Yuki and The others Yelled

As they All Run ...To chased Rena but Rena was Gone
‘ That was Not Rena ..I Know ...That the New Rena’ Yuki say as a Few Tear come out of her eyes to her Cheek
‘Yeah...But I Know the Oneechan I Know is in There ...’ Kumi says as Anna Come to Hugged her
‘Yeah ...We Just have to wait or Search for the Answer’ Takamina Says as she dragged Acchan Inside
‘Geki or No Geki it still Rena Chiyuu’ Tomomi says
‘Rena is still Our Geki ...No matter How Bad Are You Now ..You Will be Our Rena-chan’Tomochin say as she Followed Tomo~mi Inside as well
‘What do you Mean by Sooner or Later Rena-chan’ Jurina thought as she Look at the Paper says “ WE MEET AT THE PARK AT 3.00A.M IF YOU WANT TO KNOW ABOUT SOONER OR LATER JURINA-CHAN” She Followed the Other Inside as the Rain started

As Rena Arrived at her House...She Unlocked it and Locked back as she Was Inside ...She Went to her Room and Unpacked her Stuff ...and Went back to the Study Room and Touch Active CCTV Back on her IPhone ...She Took a Look at a Medium Picture of Akiba Family...A Group of Big Mafia Family and Smile as she Remember the Past was a Wonderful Moment Until the Assasin’s Company Broke Down Because some Hacker trying to steal all the Information Luckily Rena Send 10000 Virus to the Hacker and Make them Broke Down ...The Company make Rena Becoming 1st Assassin as known as Sliver Wolf...As Rena was Coming back The Assassin rearrange their duties by Hacking Akiba Company secretly as Yuko , Haruna , Miichan and Mariko have been sent to Tokyo for 6 Month then they can return to the mansion...
Until That Happen Rena Lost control of her emotion of Happiness and Relaxation that why she Become into a Anger Rena not any more Shy and Weak Rena

As Rena Finishing Remember The Past ...Rena Change into her Black Jacket and Silver Skinny Jeans and Silver Boots ..She Took her Glock 18 Gun from her Black Jeans and Put it on the Drawer and Took out her Red Glock 18 Gun that look like a Toy Gun...She make her way to her Practice room and Took her Traditional Katana and Slashed the dolls into Pieces ...and Make her Happy and Relaxing and Went back to her Room took her New Orange Lamborghini Gallardo Car Key That The Company Give her As a Birthday Present...And Went to the Garage and Start the Lamborghini Engine and Drove to the Park near her Old Family Mansion...she parked her Car inside the Mansion on the Bushed...She took her Stuff like Ipad  and Iphone and walked toward the Park and sat while wait for Jurina to Arrive as she wait for Jurina to Arrive at 3am she Turn On her Ipad and Unlocked the Code of her Assassin’s Company Website ...And The Operator Voice Says

‘Welcome ...Master Silver Wolf’ The Operator Says while Rena Unlocked her Website With a Glock 18 Gun as her Profile Picture
‘Thank You Operator...May I Search for Next mission ‘ Rena Says‘
‘Sure Can Master Silver Wolf...Here you Go Master’ the Operater says as the Next Mission appeared

As Rena was About to read What is the Next mission That her Boss assigned her for...Jurina Arrived with her Green Kawasaki Ninja...With a Black Helmet to Protect her Hair from Blowing ...She wore a Green Jacket , White T-shirt ..and Her Black Jeans ...She Took Off her Helmet and Put it On her Motocycle and look Rena on the eyes...and Stared for a Minute and Rena Spoke to her

‘You Here ...I Thought you will never Come ‘ Rena say as look at Jurina
‘Do Not Speak anymore...The ANSWER NOW’ Jurina shouted
‘Wow Relax ...Here ‘ As Rena Throw her Assassin’s ID
‘RELAX YOU’RE THE ONE THAT HAVE TO RELAX ‘ Jurina Shouted as she Catched the ID
‘I DON’T NEED YOUR ADVISE I KNOW ....Look at My ID ‘ Rena Shouted and Ask Jurina to look at her ID
As Jurina Look at Rena ID she Begin to Read the Whole ID....
‘Assassin’s Company ID ...WAIT WHAT....Senior Assassin....SENIOR....Name – Rena...A.K.A ...Silver Wolf.....SILVER WOLF ....’ Jurina Read Properly and Shouted Several time
‘Now you Understand ...Junior Ace...’ Rena says as she Begin to Step Closer by Closer to Jurina
‘Yes...And How do you Know ...I’m ACE...’ Jurina says as she Step Back by Back from Rena
‘I’m the 1st Assassin ...I Have to Know about my Family Partner and Work Partner...’She Says as she Took her ID From Jurina Hand and begin to Picked her Ipad Up to show Jurina the Next Job ...
‘No ...it Can’t be...NO NO NO..!! You’re The Master Planner of This Thing’ Jurina Shouted to Rena as she Saw the Design
‘Yes...I Try Hack the Website as Reorganized the Mission ...Boss will know the real Hacker is ME and War will begin...’ Rena says as she Nodded to Jurina Word
‘NO , NO , NO...You will Lost Control and Destroy everything Even yourself.....’ Jurina says as she Figure out the Real mission that Rena Trying to make ...
‘You Know that the Great Idea I ever Planned ....You Know Ace and Master can't Also be an Enemy is It’ Rena says as she Took out her Red Glock 18 Gun ...and Played with it
‘Yes They Can ....But after the The Whole Abika Family Knows It ‘ Jurina says as she took out her Gun and Run to her Motocyles and Automatic start the engine and Rushed to the Mansion ...while Shooting Rena from behind
‘You Do that If You Dare’ ...Rena says as she Shooted Jurina on her Arm while Jurina Shot Rena Arm luckily it just a scratch ...She went to the Old Mansion And asked the Maid help her to get Upstair at her Room

The AKIBA Mansion~

As Jurina Arrived Home....She Parked the Motocycle in front of the Entance Door...She Knock the Door and Made Acchan Look at the Window and Saw Jurina Motocycle as Acchan Open the Door and Yelled at Jurina

‘I TOLD YOU DON’T PARK YOUR MOTORCYCLE IN FRONT OF THE DOO--- Your Arm ...It Bleeding ....ANNA !!!’ Acchan Scolded Jurina and Suddenly Saw Jurina Arm Bleeding and Shouted Anna Name for Help
‘YES ....I’m COMING’ Anna Surpised that she Just about to Sleep and Surpised Acchan Called her Name....
‘Hahaha ...Anna You Funny ‘ Kumi Laughed as she saw Anna Surpised
‘Hmmph ...Let Go Kumi’ Anna Blushed and Dragged Kumi Downstair.
‘ANNA COME QUICK ‘ Acchan Shouted as she Hold Jurina on her Other Arm
‘Yes I’m Coming I’m Coming ...!!!Ah JURINA’ Anna Say as she Saw Jurina Arm Bleeding
‘AH ..Good Kumi ...Go Find the First Aid Box not Kit.. BOX’ Acchan Asked Kumi as Kumi Nodded

As Kumi Brought back a Big Aid Box that make Acchan Surprised...They Clean Up Jurina Wound ...Jurina , Acchan , Kumi and Anna Waited for the Other to come Back ...Then When everyone is at the Living ...Jurina Explain ...What Happen ...Jurina Explain everyword that she was involved with ...And Looked Down Disappoint ..as Acchan Spoked to Jurina With a Wide Smile While The Other Comment

‘Sorry...I didn’t mean to keep this as a secret but I have too...Or the Assassin’s Company will Kill me ...But Now I’m Out ....But Rena-chan ..she...—will Ask the Company to Kill her as she Lost Control of her Emotion‘Jurina say as her Tear Run to her Cheek and Quickly Wiped it
‘You Know ..We Didn’t care if you work with the Assassin at the Past but you still Our Youngest Family Member’ Acchan Says as She Smile ...While the Other Smile to her to
‘Yeah ...Like Acchan Says...Although same to Rena too...Akiba Family always be in you two ‘ Takamina says as Tomochin Continued Takamina Word
‘Yeah...We’ll Find a way to recover the Real Rena in there’ Tomochin Continued as she put her Arm on Takamina Shoulder
‘Until She is The Real Rena Chiyuu’ Tomo~mi As She Grabbed Tomochin hand
‘Oneechan is a strong Girl ...’ Kumi says as she put her hand on Jurina Shoulder
‘Rena-chan can Handle her Self ‘ Anna say as she Put her Hand on Jurina Other Shoulder
‘Well the Shy girl Know how to use More Weapon then Us’ Mayu says as she Hugged Yuki
‘Rena...She know how to Find her Way to the True...I Bet She will ...Don’t Worried..Remember She’s Our Rena and Geki .’ Yuki says as she Dragged Mayu to Hugged her Sister Jurina...as they all Followed the Two and Hugged Jurina Tightly as Jurina Scream of Pain her Arm
‘Arghhhh My Arm’ Jurina Shouted as They All Broke the Hugged and laughed


At Matsui Old’s Mansion

As Rena was Finished Clean up Her Wound by herself ...She Feel a Huge Pain in her Heart ...It Like her Heart is Beeping Fast as she Shot Jurina ...With her Gold Bullet...She stood up and Walked Slowly to her Car Outside and Drove Fast than the Racing car in the Trek...She Drove her Lomborghini Gallardo...Maybe she will Rest Somewhere ....She need to Relax like Jurina say ...but she didn’t remember how to relax ....She Even Speed up as the Traffic Light Was Red ...and Suddenly a Fast Truck coming Toward her car ....”BANG”

‘As she Try to Relax’
‘The Word Relax is Rest forever’
‘i'm sorry...I lost Controls’   
‘Who is the PERSON i hate..You asked ‘
‘The Person i hate is ME
‘This person who is Annoying’
‘It Like as you been Shot several Time’
‘The Annoying Person that everyone Hate’
‘This Matsui Rena ..The Person That Everyone Hate’

As she Still can open her Eyes she saw a Red and Blue Light and Someone Carried her to a Van and she Fainted...
As the Ambulance Arrived to the Hospital...6 people Pushed her Cart to the Emergency room...As Fast as they could to safe her Life...But to Rena ...Her Family is Important then her Self ...As the Doctor run to the emergency room with 2 Nurses to Safe her Life...As The Other Nurse Call Her Family and That was Yuki

‘Moshi Moshi...Is This Kashiwagi Yuki’ The Nurse say
‘Hai...This is Her..Who’s this’ Yuki say with a confused Voice
‘This is Shibuya Hospital...one of Your Family Member are in the Emergency Room Right Now’the Nurse say
‘What ..But there no one in the Hospital’ Yuki says out loud as the Other Look at her Worried
‘Oh Sorry ..I didn’t Inform Yet....Her Name was Matsui Rena ...She was on a Car Accident Just Now...’The Nurse says

As Yuki hear Rena Name she Dropped her Phone on the Floor and Shouted Rena name as loud as she Could and Cry ...as the Other Asked Yuki what Happen...
‘It Rena She—in – Hospital ‘ Yuki says as the Other Rushed took their own Vehicle Keys and Start Their Own Car to the Hospitals....as Yuki was Driving her Lomborghini Reveton with Mayu , Kumi , Anna and Jurina...Acchan And Takamina was Riding Acchan Mitsubishi Evolution With Tomochin and Tomomi was Driving her Pink Porsche Panamera...as Fast as they can To the Hospital

As they arrived at the Hospital Acchan ask Yuki and Kumi to Check on Rena as they Parked the car at the Parking Lot ....Kumi and Yuki run to the Emergency room and Ask the Nurse what happen to Their Sister..As the Nurse Explain that Rena was Hit by a Truck ...As Yuki and Kumi Shock and Took a Sit in front of the Emergency room as the Others was Running to the Emergency room as they Saw Yuki and Kumi ...and Ask Them what happen

‘What Happen to Rena and Why Rena was in the Hospital’ Jurina say to Yuki who didn’t Blinked her Eyes from looking to the Emergency Door
‘It Re—na she was in Critical Situation ...She Be—en hit –by a –Truck’ Yuki say ..as Jurina tears started to Fall to her cheek fast..as Kumi Cry too
‘ I and Takamina will call the Others and explain the Bad News ...’ Acchan says as she and Takamina Dial the Other Number

2 Hours later ~

As Yuki , Mayu , Kumi , Anna , Jurina , Tomochin and Tomo~mi was Taking a Nap on the bed in Akiba Family Hospital room quite far from Emergency Room..As Kumi and Anna was on the Left Sofa bed , Tomochin , Tomo~mi was on the Couch in front of Kumi and Anna Sofa Bed , Mayu and Yuki was on the a Sofa Bed Near the Window..Suddenly Yuki Heard a Door Slided open as a Doctor came in their Family Room ...and Yuki Stood up but The Other Woke Up Also....Yuki ask the Doctor about Rena...And The Doctor Explain

‘I have a Good News and Bad News ...The Good News that she is still safe and The Bad News is She in Coma and She Lost a Lot of Blood ...’ The Doctor says as she asked Yuki to fill up the Information For Rena..as The Other Woke up and Look at Yuki

‘What the Doctor say’ Tomochin say
‘Rena is in Coma ...and she Safe’ Yuki says while smile Weakly ....

As Yuki and the other was Resting at the Room ....Takamina and Acchan Arrived at the room as they Rest their Body at the “L” Couch And watch some Drama...
Every One Week at least 3 day...They Visited Rena in the Hospital....They Talked to Rena that she was in Dream...And Also search for Rena Stuff in their Old Matsui Mansion....Yuki even Ask Jurina , Anna and Kumi to Search for Rena Ferrari 458 Italia with a GPS...

In Rena Dream~

Three Teenager...Playing on the Beach as Yuki was Running chasing for Her Little Sister Kumi ...Rena was about to buy them a snacks as 3 Drunk man with a Sword was Trying to Kill her with no reason...Rena Tried to Dodge it but Failed she get Stab by one of the man as Kumi and Yuki Punch the Other man Until Rena Get Stab ..Their Anger toward the Man was Powerful and Almost Kill them but Rena Stop them as she Saw Blood She Suddenly says the Word that she didn’t say for a long time ...
‘Ne..Okotteru Ne ...!!!’ Rena says as she Took the Bloody Sword at the Ground and Stab the Man as the man Fall ...She throw the Sword Far away and fainted..
'RENA' Yuki and Kumi Shouted as they Catch Rena

To Be Continued~

Sorry this One is a little Bit Boring ...~ Hope you like it
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 06, 2012, 12:51:00 PM
WOW great chapter!
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: Tian_Yuan on March 06, 2012, 04:32:28 PM
I really like this story! Please keep it up and thank you for sharing it!  :love:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: RenaChii on March 06, 2012, 09:41:12 PM
Boring?

No! It's AWESOME!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_beam.GIF)
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 07, 2012, 02:05:37 AM
Thank you everyone.... :on woohoo:

I Will Continued the Next Chapter ....After i finished my Test .... :gyaaah: :depressed:

Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on March 07, 2012, 11:44:03 AM
Good luck!!
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: pen-pen-chii on March 07, 2012, 01:38:17 PM
This is interesting and it's not boring~

RENAAAAA!!!~~~ Why you have to be in a coma?  :mon cry: :mon runcry: Jurina will be sad.   :gmon tears:

I want moreeeee~~  :mon yeah:

Good luck with your tests~  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 07, 2012, 02:33:02 PM
@kahem : Thank You...
@Tian_Yuan : I Will Keep it Up Soon ~~Just Wait...THANK YOU
@RenaChii : I Though you are going to say BORING  :err: ......But Suddenly you Like it   :luvluv1: Thank YOU
@ sakura_drop_ , pen-pen-chii : Thank You....For giving me Strength to Do the Test .... :shy2:

AND I WILL UPDATE SOON ~~~  :on asmo:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 08, 2012, 01:36:52 PM
Hello Everyone .....Now i'm Free from my Test paper..I can Continued my Story...
Here...My New Chapter ~~....Sorry For My English....If there something wrong with my Story ask me Ok... :hee:

Chapter 3 :3


As Day by Day  they wait for Rena to awaken....Suddenly the Day has come ...Rena was In Coma for 4 Months...She Open Her Eyes and Saw a White Light and She close her eyes back and Slowly Open them...As she Trying to Get up ...One of the Nurse Shouted the Doctor Name ...and the Doctor Rushed to Rena Akiba Family Room and Give her a cup of Water as Rena Drank all of them Quickly..

‘Wow slowly...There more of that came From ...here let me ask what your name is’ The Doctor says
‘I Don’t know ....I Don’t Remember anything ‘ Rena says while put her hand on her Head ...
‘Don’t Worried your family member will be Here any minutes’ The Doctor says as he asked Rena To tell him is anywhere Hurt...as The Doctor Told.. Rena Her Real name as Rena Nodded about it...

As Yuki and Kumi Arrived at the Hospital as the Others followed them as they finished Wake Up from their Beauty Sleep...Yuki and Kumi Walked to Rena Room as the Doctor Was telling Rena Information

‘Rena –chan ...’ Yuki says
‘Miss Rena ..This is Your Family .....Please while I Go to Reception room can you tell her about herself and Maybe that can Helped her Memories to recover ..Could you Do it Young Miss’ The Doctor asked Yuki and Kumi to Helped Rena and Left the Room
‘Hi Oneechan’ Kumi says With a Smile
‘Who are you People’ Rena says
‘Well Like the Doctor Says we’re you family ...Oh my Name is kashiwagi Yuki and this is Yagami Kumi and We’re You sister’ Yuki explain
‘Why are Both of you..Didn’t have the same Sub Name ..Even Didn’t look a like ’ Rena asked Yuki and Kumi as they look at Each other..
‘Well Our Parent we Divorce and they Died Being Killed by Assassin’s' Yuki say while look at Rena with a Nothing Face
‘Oh ...i’m Sorry I didn’t remember anything ..’Rena say as she put her hand on her chin and start to think
‘It ok ...Here this maybe Help you remember...Anytime you have time to read’ Yuki smile and Handed a Rena Old’s Diary
‘Ok ...Is This Mine...’ Rena asked Kumi
‘Yes...That was your Old Diary ..That you Wrote every day you do a Mission’ Kumi explain to Rena and Smile
‘What a Mission’ Rena say with a Confused
‘you are a As------‘ Kumi tried to finish the word as Yuki hand Closed her mouth
‘Ah...That you will know later’ Yuki say as she Closed Kumi Mouth

Suddenly the Room Door Slides as The Other Rushed stand Beside the Sofa Bed ..As Rena Surpised ...That she didn’t Even remember one of their name as for Yuki and Kumi ...

‘Rena ...Are you Alright’ Mariko almost yelled to her
‘Yeah ..You look Pale like a person who didn’t eat for months’ Miichan says as she Handed a Piece of Nuggets to Rena
‘Of Course she didn’t Eat for Months you Idiot’ Acchan says while Smack Miichan on the back of her Head
‘Ouch my Head...Hey At Least I give her one of my Nug----  ‘ Miichan Almost Shouted as Mariko Closed Miichan Mouth with her hand and Apologize to Rena
‘Let us Introduce ourself For the Second Time...I’m Takahashi Minami but They Call me Takamina and you can call me Takamina too...’
‘Just call her Midget ...Well I’m Oshima Yuko’ Yuko Stuck out Her Tongue to Takamina
‘Hey Stop Fighting You two..you guys just have the same size..I’m Maeda Atsuko’ Acchan Says to Takamina and Yuko as they made a surpised face to Acchan ....as she ignored them ..and Continued her Reading..on the Couch
'Hey....I Taller than Her' Yuko say to Acchan as she pointed to Takamina...As Tomochin start to Talk to Rena
‘Itano Tomomi...Fashion Queen..’ Tomochin says While Smile
‘Kasai Tomomi Chiyuu’ Tomomi Smile too
‘Kojima Haruna...Airhead Queen ‘ Haruna Joked herself as Rena Giggled
‘Watanabe Mayu ..’ Mayu Introduce herself as she Left the Room to search for Yuki
‘Just call her Cybrog....Ishida Anna Desu’ Anna Rise her Hand as she Glared to Mayu
‘And One more People Left is ....’ Takamina Says as she Counted the People who already Introduce their Self to Rena 
‘JURINA’ Mariko say as she Saw Jurina was about to run away...but Lucky Mariko Grabbed her Shirt Collar..
‘Fine ...let me Go’ Jurina Shouted to Mariko as Mariko let go of her Collar
‘Jurina Desu’ Jurina Introduce herself with her Nickname and Turned Away as Acchan Grabbed her Collar while one hand holding a Book
‘Properly Introduce yourself Jurina-chan...’ Mariko asked Jurina as Jurina saw scary eyes of Mariko
‘Fine...I'm Sorry ...Rena-chan ...My name is Matsui Jurina Desu ...’ Jurina Introduce herself while Bowed to Rena
‘You Know you didn’t have to be Formally Properly ‘ Tomochin says while doing her Nail on the other Sofa Bed next to Rena Sofa Bed
‘Nice to meet you all...Yoroshiku onegaishimas’ Rena Lowed her Head
‘Kumi-chan did the Jurina girl have the same Sub Name with me’ Rena Whispered to Kumi
‘Yes but you too not related either close’ Kumi says as she Nodded

As Tomochin and Tomo~mi was on the Sofa Bed was doing her Nail as For Tomo~mi was Reading Magazine.....Acchan and Takamina was napping on the “L” Couch...Anna , Kumi and Jurina was Playing XBOX at the Flatscreen Tv...Mariko and Miichan was Eating Nuggets...Yuko and Haruna was Lovely Coupling

As the Door Slide...Yuki and Mayu came in and says to Rena
‘ Rena Get Ready we’re Leaving’ Yuki says as she Help Rena Packed her Stuff ...
‘Hai Yuki-san’ Rena say as the Others Look at Yuki Trying to Hold their laughed...expect for Takamina and Acchan who was Tired of Attending Classes and Took a Nap
‘Kumi Come here’ Yuki Use a hand signal for Coming here
‘I Think the New Rena is Too Formal ‘ Yuki Whispered to Kumi ear as Kumi Nodded...

As they are ready to get Home...Yuki Introduce Rena her Car...

‘Well this is Your Car...But You just get out of the Hospital ...I will be Driving..’ Yuki say Proudly to Rena as Rena Nodded
‘It this Orange Ferrari 458 Italia is Really Mine’ Rena asked Kumi at the Backseat as Mayu was the One that Seat in Front with Yuki...
‘Yeah..It cool Right ...Mine was a not a car but a Motorcycles..Black Kawasaki Ninja’ Kumi say with a Proud Tone
‘Really wow ..It cool ‘ Rena say and start to open the first Page of the Diary and Start to read it on her Thought
‘ Wow...Today i was Disappoint that I missed Shot of the Man head...But Luckily Jurina Covered My Lost Shot ...Well I will tried my Best to Me friends with her and the Other Girls..’ Rena Read in her Thought and Asked Kumi ‘Kumi-chan what the Diary mean by Missed Shot of the Man Head’

‘Oh that is Just you Trying to attack Somebody’ Kumi says as she forgot about Rena Memories
‘KUMI’ Yuki Heard about Rena and Kumi Conversation as Rena Mention about Something that might scared the new Rena
‘Oh sorry my bad ...well that just that when you attack someone in the Chess competition ...as Jurina Helped you Win the Competition’ Kumi say as Rena more Confused

On the front Side ...Yuki Whispered to Mayu to Text everyone to hide their Weapon in the Practice room included Rena Room too.. as Mayu was the Fastest Messager ..Yuki Brought Rena , Kumi and Mayu to the Long Way to the Mansion...To waste time to let the others time to hide the weapon’s

At the As 5 minutes they Arrived the Mansion...Yuki Parked the Car in the Backyard Garage then the front garage ...Is Totally Full with Mariko and The Other 3 Return

Yuki give Rena her car key...and Helped Rena to carried her back as Yuki looked at Mayu was already About to open the Door ...She Asked Kumi to Show Rena Around ..as Kumi Nodded..Yuki run to chased Mayu up in the Living room ....She saw Mayu and Hugged her from the back ....

‘Are you jealous ..that I give all my attention to Rena’ Yuki whispered at Mayu Ear
‘Damn I Didn’t not ...If I be Jealous I Won’t be a Mafia ‘ Mayu Say as she Broke Yuki Hug and Look Straight to Yuki Eyes
‘So Mafia can’t Be Jealous ...So Don’t Be ‘ Yuki say as she Hugged Mayu Tighter..
‘Ok ...I Won’t’ Mayu say as she Hugged back

As For Kumi she asked Rena to Wait Outside Went she goes inside to Put Rena Things in her Room on her Bed ...as Kumi run Back Outside and saw Rena Reading her diary ...with a Surpised face

‘Let’s Go Oneechan ‘ Kumi say with a Smile
‘Kumi before you Show me around ...What is that thing up there..’ Rena asked as she pointed to a big machine
‘Oh...Tha-t is a big Telescope’ Kumi say as she Wiped her sweat on her forehead
‘Oh ...you were saying ‘ Rena say
‘Oh Yeah...Let go inside it freezing here’ Kumi leaded the way

While Kumi was Show the Kitchen , Living Room , Cinema Room ,Study Room ,  Acchan and Takamina room , Tomo’s Room , Mariko and Miichan Room , Yuko and Haruna Room , Mayu and Yuki Room , Kumi and Anna Room and Last but not Least Her and Jurina Room ....Kumi say to Rena do not mess up Jurina stuff just read the Diary on that Bed ..

Kumi Pointed to the Left Bedside..As Rena Bowed thank you and Sat on her Bed and Continued Reading the Diary as she Saw ...Some small paper ....It wrote there “ SECRET HOUSE CAN’T LET ANYONE KNOW” And A Map to the House ...but she Ignore the Secret thing ...She Continued reading as she turn the next page with a Photos of all ...it Wrote “The last Day of Zakarune Family”

‘Why are they Happy about the Last of Zakarune Family ...They Should me Sad’ Rena Thought

As she Reads the back of the Photos ...

‘Zakarune Family is One of the 3 Top Family...But Our Family will always won how ever they have multiples soldier ...AKIBA FAMILY WILL WON ‘ Rena Read the Message in her thought

As she Look all of the Photos one of them was a Picture of a Mansion and A Small Family Then Suddenly Rena Head Hurts like someone been Hitting her head Several Time....She Start to Scream as Yuki , Mayu , Anna , Kumi , Jurina and tomo’s Run to Rena and Jurina Room and saw Rena Holding her Head ...as Yuki asked

‘What Wrong Rena’ Yuki asked Rena Worriedly
‘My Head Hurts a lo- ‘ As Rena Trying to Told Yuki she Fainted..
As Yuki Put the Blanket on all over Rena ...and Tidy up the diary and Put the Diary on the Table next to Rena Bed ...
They Left the Room while Jurina was about to went to Sleep and Saw Rena giggled and It look like she Having a Nightmare of something


Rena Dream ~

Rena Woke up ..She Realized that she at a familiar Places...But she didn’t remember about it...She look at the Painting of She , Yuki and Kumi draw..A Photos of Her family ...Then someone called her ...
‘RENA-CHAN’ Someone Shouted
Rena Look at the Window and saw Jurina ...Rena walked Downstair slowly and Open the Door and Greet Jurina Properly..

‘Rena-chan we going to be Late’ Jurina Says as she Went to Rena Room picked her stuff and Dragged Rena Outside ...as Rena took her Stuff From Jurina...and Begin to Walked to a Fimiliar road as she Heard a School Bells Ring ...Jurina realized that and Run asked Rena to Chased her as Rena do what she Says and Run toward a School

As Rena and Jurina Arrived at the School late ...But the school is Horrible ...Wall Painting ...no Window even the entrance is Full of Trash ...She look at Jurina was about to put on her Brown cardigan as Jurina Handed a Dark Green Jacket ...

‘Here...The Jacket you give me borrow the other day ...and you better wear it’ Jurina Blushed as Rena Took the Jacket
‘Ok’ Rena wore it over her school uniform ...

But suddenly before they can enter the School ...Bunch of Yakabune Student Block the Entrance
And Asked for a Fight

‘Hey do you know that you just Blocking our Way to Maji’ Jurina say as she hold her Fist Tightly
‘Rena...Let Fight for Freedom...Don’t Just nodded there FIGHT’ As Jurina was Talking Rena Nodded

AS Rena was About to Fight Suddenly she saw Jurina already in a big Injured as Rena Pain inside her..Glowing for Freedom.....Suddenly a Blood Splashed to Jurina Hand as Jurina look at Rena who was Holding a Gun on her Hand

‘Ne...Okotteru ..’Rena Say as she Biting her Nail as she shot others Yakabune Student
‘Gekikara....You monster....What have you Done.’ Jurina look at the Fearsome Queen as she look around the Yabakune student Lying Lifeless on the Ground
‘What Happen here ‘ Rena Looked around before looking at her Hand
‘Rena.....’ Jurina say as she step Back
‘I'm So Sorry Jurina ‘ Rena say As Run as Fast as she can

End Of Rena Dream~

Rena Woke Up in the Middle of morning ..She Sweating all over her face...She Look up to Jurina Who was sleeping Quietly ...She Stood up and went to the Balcony while watch the Nice Whole Full moon..Glowing....Suddenly she Spoked to herself while looking at her hand

‘Gekikara ...Who are you ‘ Rena say as she Went inside picked up her Diary , Car keys and her Black Jacket...
She went to the Study Room ...To search for answer about her self aas she saw a Big book of album that wrote on the Cover “ Akiba Family Memories” As Rena opened the Book there were a lot’s of Photos about Akiba Generation’s

As she look on one of the Picture were Fimiliar from her Dream that was One Man and One Woman ..And the three Of Us...that she saw on her Dream...As she Tried to remember back her Brain didn’t allowed her to remember...As she was looking the album her Diary Accidently Dropped ...She put the Album Away and Picked up the Diary with the Secret House Map....As she realized how about she Went to the Secret House....She Went to the Back Garage and Start the Engine of the car ...And Drove to Exits of the Mansion as she Follow the map...While she at the Study room , Anna and Kumi can’t sleep and Decide to played Video Games and Jurina was awake after she Heard the Door Closed ...She Think that Rena was just going to the Kitchen to get Snack or Something in the Middle of the Morning ...Jurina Heard a Fighting Voice ...She Walked Around the Corridor and Found where were the Voice came From...She knock the Door and She Opened the Door and Saw Kumi and Anna Was Fighting to win the Game..As Kumi and Anna Asked her to Join them ..Playing Game....As they playing the Game call “ Zombie Resident” Jurina , Kumi and Anna Heard a Small car Starting Sound and Rushed to the Balcony and saw Rena Ferrari 458 Italia went out to the Exits and Drove Somewhere ..

‘Did I Just saw a Car Moving’ Kumi says as Anna Smack her Head
‘Of Course ...The car is Moving....I Think it was Rena-chan’ Anna say as she Rubbed Kumi head as she Smack it
‘Hey How about we Follow Rena-chan ‘ Jurina give an Idea to the Other two
As Kumi and Anna look at Each Other and Nodded to Jurina as Jurina , Anna And Kumi Picked their Own Motocycles Keys...Went to the Front Garage ...Jurina was Ridding her Green Kawasaki Ninja...Kumi was Ridding her Black Kawasaki Ninja as well...As for Anna She Ride her Loving Silver Kawasaki ZX10R ...They Ride’s in One Group and Fast Follow Rena Car GPS....And Stop near a Quiet Neighbourhood as she Saw Rena Enter a Password Code and Went Inside....As they Took off their Helmets and Put in on their Motocycles and Look at the House ...It was Tightly Security System With a 7 Security Camera all over the House ...

While Kumi was Wearing her X-ray Sunglasses in a middle of Morning....Kumi saw a Red Laser on the Ground , Gates , Entrance and Walls....She even saw a Small Machine Gun that look like a Security Camera...as She Told Jurina and Anna until didn’t make Jurina Believe about It....Jurina Took Kumi x-ray Sunglasses and took a look all over the House...

‘Look like Rena Put the Security System too Seriously’ Jurina say as she look at Kumi who was Sitting on the Bench in fornt of the House...with a Banana on her Hand...
‘Sence when did you Bring a Banana ‘ Jurina Almost Shouted at Kumi
‘Want to Try Some’ Kumi says as she Handed a New Banana to Jurina
‘Yeah...I want ...I Hungry ‘ Jurina Took the banana and peeled her Skin off and took a bite while looking at Rena window..
‘Hehe that why I love you Guys’ Anna Says as she Shared a Banana with Kumi...
‘Hey Anna ...If you Hungry ..I will get More Banana or Food..’ Kumi says as she stood up and Walked to her Kawasaki
‘Why’ Anna Asked
‘Well I Brought Extra For the Three of Us’ Jurina almost Chocked as she Saw Kumi Brought one Plastic of Bananas...and Even Chocolate Bars...
‘What are you a Supermarket Manager or something’ Jurina Yelled to Kumi ...as She Saw Rena Slide the Curtain ....She Asked Anna and Kumi Hide behind the Tree next to the Bench...as Rena was about to return to the mansion ....Jurina , Anna and Kumi was Still Hiding behind The Tree....Jurina Even ask Kumi and Anna To Climb the tree so that Rena Didn’t Reconizged Us all...As Kumi and Anna Climbing the Tree until the Top...Rena Went inside her Car and Drove while Locked her Security System Tightly as Rena left the Neighourhood ...Anna and Kumi Climb Down and Jurina Stop Hiding ..And Kumi Yelled to Jurina

‘Why did we have to Climbed the Tree that not High Enough’ Kumi yelled to Jurina
‘Well you two Love Bird can’t Separated ..So I Decide to asked you two to Climb’ Jurina Says as She Stuck her Tongue to Kumi as Kumi doing the Same thing
‘Could you two Stop it ....Let’s Go Home Before the Others Waked’ Anna Smack Jurina and Kumi Back of Their Heads ...
‘STOP SMACKING PEOPLE HEADS’ Jurina and Kumi Yelled To Anna as she Smiled widely
‘That why I love you two ‘ Anna says

As they Wore their Helmets and Ridded their Motocycles and Speed up to their Mansion..As  They Arrived that Quickly Made their self at the Kitchen Cooking Breakfast ....As today was Anna , Jurina and Kumi Turned to make Meals .. As Rena Arrived Home ....Quietly Parked her Car in the Back Garage and Tried to Use The Back Door to the Kitchen and Saw the three Younger was on an oprans while Cooking for Breakfast...As Jurina says to Rena as she Tried to excuse Herself and Tried to when to her Room but Jurina Stopped her With a Cough

‘Where Did you go’ Jurina says as she Flips the Eggs
‘Ah...I Just driving for a spin Around here’ Rena say as she Look at the three of them making Breakfast
‘Really ...How can you went for a Spin in hour ‘ Anna Added a question that make Rena Sweating
‘Guys...She New here Relex....Go Oneechan ....Just rest’ Kumi say as Jurina and Anna make a Weird Face to Kumi as Kumi asked Rena to go Rest in her Room.

As Rena Walked to the Corridor and Straight to her room as she Rest her Body on her Bed and Remember About she Being an Assassin...She even remember about Her First Time Interview in the Assassin’s Company ...But her Memories before that is Playing inside her Mind ....About Gun Shot on the Two Person that she didn’t Known ...She ignore the Pain and Sleep...

As Everyone Expect Rena was already Finished Eating as Everyone was Ready to go to Work even Mariko , Miichan , Yuko and Haruna was Contract were Finished ...as they Free to go Shopping Around as Kumi , Anna , Jurina , Tomochin , Tomo~mi  and Mayu was Already Went to School as Mayu asked Yuki to Sent them to School as Yuki didn’t Ignore Mayu ...and Nodded as Yuki , Acchan and Takamina were Going to Class in Majisuka University ...As for Rena she didn’t have to attended the University Event Well the reason she just went to University to be with the Other’s while didn’t want to be Alone at the mansion...She is a Smart Girl ....She Pass all Test in the University...She Even can be a Manager of Technology But she refuse ...She Just want to be an Ordinary Person....But now she Lost her Memories more system will be Destroy...

As Rena woke Up ...She Silence for a Moment and She realized a Note on her Table as she Read it

‘ Rena we were going to University , the Youngest went going to School as for the Oldest they were going Shopping at the mall if you feel lonely just go to the mall ... From Takamina ...As a great Leader to Every Member of the Family’ Rena Read with a Low Voice ...

As She Stood up from her Bed and Get Dressed up to her Secret House as she Know Something Weird is on one of Rena table Drawers as she Saw a small Hole and Pulled the Drawer Out and Found her Favourite Red Glock 18...As she Look to left and Right as she Pulled out the Gun and Stared at it for Second and Put on the Back of her Black Jeans as she Wore her “I DON’T KILL YOU” T-shirt with a Silver Hoddies Over it and Silver Boots with a Jungle Knife in it ...She Took her Ferrari 458 Italia Car Keys and Start the Engine and Drive to her Secret House as she Unlocked the Door and Security System with Some Cool Code Password ...and Walked in ...as she Put her Stuff on the couch and rushed to her Practice room on the Basement to Practice her Shooting Lesson ...She Took off her Hoddies and Pull out the Gun on her Back of Jeans and Focus the aim on Dolls Target that almost ripped Apart...She Pull the trigger and Shot on the Dolls Several times as she Put her Gun on the Table near the Exits of the Basement as she Went to her Room to think as she remember how to Shoot the First time....The more and More things that she done...The more momories Connected to her Mind...

As she Look at her Hand and Realised that she just a Killer or Assasain that have been killing a innocence people for the Past Years ....She Talked to herself that even thought she can quit the Agency but she will be killed by the Agency as she was Scared about that ....She took out her Old Diary and Read and Read more about the Past few years that the Real her wrote on the Diary ....She Read Several Times about it .....She Suddenly Fainted

Rena Dream ~

‘ MOM ......DAD WHAT HAPPEN ‘ A Girl Kneel down in front of her Parent
‘Ren...a...Ku-mi is at th..e Basement ...Took Care f he..r ...I Love yo..u ‘ the man says as she Slowly rub the Girl Tears Away for her Beautiful Face...
‘I Promise i will Take care of Kumi....Mom ‘ Rena Spoked to the man as she Turn look at the Woman who was trying to touch her Hand as she Quickly Grab the Woman Hand
‘ Rena....Yu-ki ...She was in....ba..d  Injur..ed at...the ..Basement...with Ku...mi...Rena Stay wi..th..your ...sister.’ the Woman say as she Closed her Eyes that make Rena Scream as loud as she Can......
Rena Walked to the Basement and saw Kumi was Kneeling down next to Yuki who was Holding her Bleeding Arm as she Run toward her Sisters and Ripped a Quarter of her school uniform and Folded at Yuki arm to stop the Bleeding as helped Kumi and Yuki Stand Up before she Left the basement ....They walked to their Room as they Packed up Their Stuff before the Police come as all the Maid was Injured ....Rena Took her Her Diary , Some clothes , Saving Money , Some of her family Charm...and Her Katana ...As she went to Yuki room to Picked up Yuki bag as she Can’t carry the Bag with her Injured arm and Knock Kumi Room as Kumi went Out of her room and Follow He Sister to her Parent GMC Yukon Denali ...

They Throw their Stuff in the Car...Rena asked the Injured Maid ...the ambulance will come also...But Do not Leave this House....As the maid Nodded ...

‘Please I will give you your Payment if you Promise you will Took care of this House..’ Rena says as she cried to the Maid
‘I will Trust my Own Master even thought the Master is Died ....I will always be the Head of the Maids in Matsui Family and I will Trust my New Master as it was You three Young Miss ‘ the Maid says and Rena Nodded happily as she get inside the car and Drove to the Royal Family Mansion ....

End of Rena Dream~

As Rena awake from her Faint ...she Realized that she was just dreaming about her Parents ...She wiped up her Tears on her eyes as she Went to her Study Room to Research for her
Information as her Laptop Beeping for Password “ Password Please Master”

As Rena was Thinking what would the Password were...Rena Tried to type “Silver Wolf” as the Operator say “ Sucessed...Welcome” Rena didn’t know the Real Password ....But she just tried the First Word that Popped on her Mind was Silver Wolf ..
As She was about to search for her Information ...Her IPhone Rang With a Great Song that she Change the other day (Two Roses by Wmatsui)

‘me to me ga atta sono shunkan ni’
‘mienai te ga nobite kite’
‘nanika daiji na mono’
‘nusumareta’

Rena looked at the Screen and It was Mariko-sama...She Answer the call and Suddenly a Surpised Voice that Mariko Shouted to Rena with incoming call...

‘RENA-CHAN WHERE ARE YOU....ARE YOU OK ....WHY DIDN’T YOU CALL US’ Mariko Shout to Rena as loud as she can...
‘HEY STOP YELLING SHE CAN HEAR YOU ....SHE NOT DEAF...Idiot’ Rena heard Yuko Yelled back to Mariko...As she Smack Mariko head
‘Ouch ...Sorry Rena-chan ...I Thought you were Lost or something’ Mariko say calmly as Yuko smack her Head
‘I’m Alright ...Don’t Worried about me...’Rena says as she was surpised to hear Mariko voice
‘Where were you ...’Miichan says as she can hear Miichan Voice
‘I’m just going for a Spin’ Rena Lied to Miichan
‘Be Careful we didn’t want to lose you Again’ Haruna Voice say as Yuko continued Haruna Sentence
‘Yeah...Be Careful...See ya at Home ‘ Yuko says as she was About to pressed the End Button ....Rena Could Hear that the Others was shouting for Yuko Name...

As Rena Put her Phone on the Table and Wore her Hoddies back as she put her Phone in her Hoddies pocket...She saw a Shiny Thingy on her Wardrobe..as she opened it she saw a Familiar Charm as she put it on her jean Pocket and Walked Outside after she finished Locked her House and Drove back to the mansion ...
 
As she arrived at the Mansion...She Parked her car inside the Back Garage ....and Walked a little bit to the entrance door and greet Everyone in the Living room as Takamina , Yuki , Mayu, Kumi , Anna ,Haruna, Tomochin and Tomomi Greet Back to Rena as Rena Walked up to the Corridor and Toward her room ....As Jurina who was at the Kitchen with Mariko , Miichan and Yuko..She realised that Rena was in Their Room...Jurina Excuse herself as she make her way up to their Room...

As Jurina Jump on her Bed and Saw Rena was looking Something Under the sheet ..Jurina think that Rena might read her lame Old Diary..but she was Wrong she didn’t know that Rena was looking at a shiny thingy that she found in her secret house wardrobe ...the thing was likely like a badge with a shape of a red flower and a big ‘M’ ..Rena was trying to remember what was the thing is ..but she can’t  but the only object that popped in her head was “JACKET”but the other she can’t really remember as she keep to think her head keep dizzy ...she quit remembering and put the badge in her hoddies pocket and went to sleep

The Next Afternoon~

Rena wake up late ...she stood up and look at the wall clock in her room and it say “12PM” Rena sighed as she looked around and it was already silence that mean everyone has gone out doing their own jobs and classes ..Rena took out her diary and continued read it ...Then she find out about the “M” Badge ...she saw it on one of her photos that says “Last Day Of School At MaJiJo..” She was Thinking what kind of University or Classes with MaJiJo on it...

She Picked her laptop up that was on Stand By Mode all along she enter the Password and quickly type “MaJiJo” in her search self System as 20 solution came out as she read one by one at the screen of the laptop ...she clicked the First option that wrote “MaJiJo as in Majisuka Girl’s High or as short Majisuka Gakuen..as she clicked the Files was sound Fimiliar and interested thing to read ....

As one of the Solution was a map of MaJiJo...she opened the map and calculated the map in her brain ..then she realized that MaJiJo and the Mansion is not  quite far as she think

‘I think i will just visited the school to find the answer ....i think i will get there in 15 minutes or less...’ Rena says that as she widely smile

She took her car key that on her study table with Jurina Kawasaki Motocycle Key...She took out her Ipad from her Backpack and Research the same map and walked to the back garage as she start her car engine and Drove to the school while follow the direction from her Ipad GPS

As 11 Minutes ~

She arrived at the school ...she parked her car right in front of the school entrance and walked to the corridor as all student was playing and doing some stuff in their own classes...She walked just a few step as her head start to dizzy ....she was about to fainted as she hld herself against the wall

Rena Flashback ~

As Rena saw herself being mean and carzy Fearsome Yankee girl ...she was tried to kill some Yakabune student who tried to kill her as Yuki and Kumi Run and Hold her as they shouted her nickname to wake her up...As Rena was awake she realized that she didn’t remember that she beat the Yakabune student that hard ...she just saw a Bloody Puddle and her Bloody wet and sticky hand ..

End of Flashback~

As She was shock from the Flashback ....she just Ignore the flashback as she walked toward the Principal Office..As she was on her way to the Principal office some of the Student saw her and Bowed Nicely as she was confused

‘ Did I Learn here or something’ Rena Guessed

As Rena walked toward the Principal Office..Dance was about to walked to the Office Corridor...As she saw Rena she back up from the Corridor and Run to the Clubroom to tell the others

As Rena Stopped in front of the Principal Door....She Knock several time the heard a woman Voice ‘ Come in Please’ Ms.Yukiko

As Rena Slide the Door and Step in and Looked around the room as the woman Stared at her with a smile

‘ Ah ...Matsui Rena-chan ...Are yu already Remember about this School ‘ Ms.Yukiko Asked
‘ Not quite all of them...Just the Beginner...the Reason I come here is I want to know about my schoolhood Miss...Yu..Kiko..’ Rena answer as the only name popped in her head was Ms.Yukiko

Ms.Yukiko nodded as she stood up from her chair and went to the file drawer as she pulled out a file and a plastic bag with a necklace in it ...Miss Yukiko sat Down as she asked Rena to sit down as well....She Telled about Rena ...

‘ Matsui Rena..as known as Gekikara ...the Meanest and Fearsome Student in MaJiJo ...You have been lost control after you saw Blood on your stomach as some of Yakabune stabbed you with a Knife...On that day you been sent to the Hospital ...You cried that you can’t Promise Yuko that You Won't Graduate with Them ...but you was wrong...you awaken from the first Coma when you get stabbed...in 2 month after the Accident but luckily you didn’t lose your memories ..’ Ms.Yukiko answer Half of Rena Questions

As Ms.Yukiko tried to finish her story ...Someone Knock her Door Several time and Slide it Immedietely and Shouted “STOP”

As Rena was Holding her Hand on her Head as the Woman Tell about her Flashback ....She was Shock that someone Stop the Woman Story...as she turned around and saw Jurina , Kumi , Anna , Tomochin and Mayu....Well Tomomi was Practicing her Fighting skill in the rooftop ....

‘ Miss...Matsui Jurina , Yagami Kumi , Ishida Anna , Itano Tomomi and Watanabe Mayu... what is Wrong with you Rappapa members..’ Ms.Yukiko yelled to the Rappapa Members

“Juri..na’ Rena say as she look at Jurina
‘Sorry Yukiko-san ‘ Jurina and the others Bowed apologize
‘You can’t tell Rena every thing ‘ Tomochin say as Rena was surpised
‘Yeah ...She have to Know it by herself’ Anna says
‘But Let us Help her ‘ Mayu Says as she Throw a Plastic bag

Rena catch the Plastic bag and opened it and Saw a necklace that wrote “ POP” ....As she Start to scream and Hold her Pain in her Mind and Suddenly Fainted...as Jurina Catched Rena Before she Hit the Ground and Looked at Mayu with black Aura

‘Sorry Jurina ...I didn’t knew that she will Fainted’ Mayu say as she Smile
‘Yeah Right...You knew it ...Rena head is not strong enough to take care if all the Bad thing she Done with Gekikara mode that why I didn’t let her to Know the Situation Right Now...’ Jurina Says as she Carried Rena on her Back

‘ Rena-chan is a Strong Girl in the past but right now she need Memories to Helped her recover’ Tomochin say as she Picked up Rena Car Key in Rena Hoddies Pocket
‘ Oneechan is not fully recover Yet ...that why Yuki give her the Diary ...But now she Already know about the PoP Mode...’ Kumi explained as she Picked up both of the Necklace and Put it on her pocket

‘We won’t go to school after we went home’ Anna say as she asked Ms.Yukiko
‘I Understand you can leave’ Ms.Yukiko say as the Five of them High five as for Jurina she Tried to High five tomochin but suddenly she almost dropped Rena on the Floor but Luckily she can Manage the Balance...
She walked with the others to Rena car and Tomochin who always wanted to drive Rena awesome car but suddenly Rena car was Colour Orange .....Jurina put Rena on her lap and Hugged her tightly ....Anna was sitting in the Left while Kumi sitting in the middle ..As they Arrived home Jurina carried Rena like a Bridal Style ....But suddenly she almost Dropped Rena Again but Luckily Rena head didn’t Hit the Floor Yet ....As Tomochin Throw Rena car keys as Jurina Catched it and Jurina went to Their Room and leaned Rena on her Bed and Give a Quick Kiss on Rena Forehead ...and Change her School uniform into a Green t-shirt and Black skinny while with a black boot and she took her Kawasaki Key and Left the room..She took out her Green Kawasaki Ninja From the Front Garage and Ride to Pharmacy Nearby the School...She parked her Kawasaki ...and walked to the Pharmacy to buy some medicine for Rena ...Head Problem..as she brought it ...she stop at the Fruits Pastry and Brought some for Rena and Hers....She Remember that the past Rena Loves Pastry ...

‘The Past Rena Like Pastry ...I hope the this will help her remember our Memories....From the Past Rena Always get mad because I Forget to Brought a Pastry Back ...She was Mad and She even want to Cook a Spicy Chicken Wing that look like an Original Chicken Wings but she Lied...She never hurt my Feeling ...’Jurina say to herself ..

As she ride back her Motorcycle and Ride Back to the mansion...She Put her Motorcycle back in the Garage and Walked up stairs to her room...Went she opened her Door and saw Rena was Looking at the Sunset on the Balcony while she Sat on the edge of the Balcony that make Jurina Scared....She make sure she Knock the Door...

‘Oh ..Jurina You back ...’ Rena say but didn’t turned her face from the sunset..
‘Yeah...You feel ok ‘ Jurina say as she put the Medicine and Pastry on Rena Study Table
‘Yeah...I feel Good but my head keep dizzy when I talk with you ‘ Rena say as she looked at Jurina
‘Hmm..Really ....there a Medicine on your table’ Jurina says she turned around
‘ WAIT ....Thank for the Medicine and I want to ask you a Questions’ Rena say as she Step back from the Edge
‘Yeah ...Sure Just One’ Jurina say as she Turned around as Well
‘Are you my Flashback Friend or Something’ Rena say as she come closer and closer to Jurina
‘ Well...Yeah ..sure ...Whatever ...well you can say th—‘ Jurina Didn’t able to finish answer as Rena Kissed Jurina Lips as Jurina Kiss back ...
‘Thank you for being my Friend’ Rena say as her tear slide down to her cheek

As Jurina Just stand still ...Rena Run and Grabbed her Car key and Run to the Back Garage as Jurina Realized she was Trying to Run away ..Jurina Chased Rena but she too late ...Rena already drove Fast...

As Jurina look at Rena Car and Shouted as loud as she can in the Silence Mansion....Kumi , Anna , Tomochin and Mayu were Going to Shopping at the mall ...Jurina Just sit Outside at the Front Garden Table ....As she look disappoint..Suddenly Mariko , Miichan , Yuko and Haruna came Home from their new Modeling Jobs as For Miichan ...She is a Chef at the Cooking Company...Mariko and Haruna Parked their car at the Front of the Mansion and saw Jurina alone at the Garden staring to a Butterfly ...They Walked toward Jurina and Join her on the Table

‘ Hey what are you looking at’ Mariko asked Jurina who was looking at a Butterfly
‘The lonely butterfly ...There at the Flowers’ Jurina say with sighed
‘What wrong Now...You Worried about Rena or Something’ Yuko Say as she sat Beside Jurina and join watched the Lovely Butterfly
‘Yeah...You look Horrible...’ Haruna say as she look at Jurina
‘If you Miss the Real Rena ...You can always make her Remember Faster’ Mariko says as she took out her gun and Polished it
‘Well she can’t ....Remember she is not Fully Recover’ Jurina say as she turned to look at Mariko
‘Well the...the Girl has a point...She maybe look Aggressive but she Not MATURE Yet...’ Miichan says as she Teased Mariko
‘Shut up....’ Mariko hide her Blushes ..
‘I Better Find Rena ....oh and If Kumi and Anna Ask where have i been ....say to them the R Secret House...’ Jurina say as she went inside
‘ Sure...Ok’ Mariko says as she Keep Polished her Gun..

As Jurina went Up to her room and Took out her Kawasaki Ninja Key Again and Went to the Garage Took out her Green Kawasaki Ninja and Rides to search for Rena....As the Four avoid her Motorcycle Smoke as they Hide behind the Car...Suddenly 1 minutes just went by a Pink porsche Arrived back home ....As Kumi and Anna Asked Mariko at the Same time ...

‘Did you Saw Jurina’ Anna and Kumi say at the same time
‘Wow..You two are a Love Bird....Well she say about R Secret House or something like that..’ Mariko say as she aim her gun to a Vase Target
‘Oh No....’ Kumi and Anna look at each other

Kumi took out her Motorcycle key as she always brought every where ...She Took out her Black kawaski Ninja as she and Anna Hopped on ...She put Her and Anna Helmet....Before she go Speed up she Yelled at Mariko..

‘Mariko-sama ...Clean the Garden Up after you Target the Vase or i’ll Get You for not cleaned the my Garden’ Kumi Yelled as she Speed Up her Motocycle
‘I Know...and I will’ Mariko yelled Back before she Speed Up
As the Other went Inside to prepare Dinner as the Maid is all on Vacation because of Rena Accident...Mariko keep shooting the Vase from the Garden Table to the Garden Yard

Kumi Speed Up her Motocycle in 80km/hrs...As Anna at the Back Hold Kumi waist Tightly as she didn’t care about their safety because she Believe the champion of all time Motorcycle Rumble Races...  Kumi Know the Short cut to Rena Secret House as she Already explored as Jurin asked to find the Quick way to Rena House Just in case for Emergancy

5 minutes later~

As Kumi and Anna Arrived to the Park in front of Rena House...She Parked her Motorcycle Beside Jurina’s ...They took off their Helmets and Put it on Kumi Motorcycle as they shared to the Youngest family member who was Sleeping with a Magazine Cover her face on the Bench behind the Tree...They Stared at her for a couple of second as Anna Waked Jurina up

As Jurina was Up ...She Hide her Blushed as Anna and Kumi laughed ...

‘ Ju-chan ..How can you Sleep in a few Minutes ..Hahaha..’ Kumi Teased Jurina....as she Laughed
‘I’m Sorry i was Tired ...I can’t Sleep Last night’ Jurina says as she pouted to Kumi
‘Sorry I Can’t Help it’ Kumi can’t Stop laughing
‘That enough Kumi-Kun...Poor Jurina’ Anna says as she Smack Kumi head Hard
‘Ouch....Sorry Jurina ...’ Kumi bowed while Rubbed her Head several time
‘That for not Pooring me hahaha’ Jurina turn to Laughed
‘Stop Laughing Jurina’ Anna Smack Jurina Head
‘Ouch...’ Jurina Glared to Kumi as Kumi nodded slightly
“PAK” As Both of Jurina and Kumi Smack Anna Head
‘Aww...Gomen...Ouch .’Anna Cried as she Rubbed her Head
‘That for Smacking our head ‘ Jurina say as she Sat on the Bench

As Anna Was pretend to Cried ....Kumi felt sorry to Anna and Went for a Hugged...She Hugged her tightly as Jurina Watch Them

‘ I was Just like Them at the Past...Hugging , kissing , Playing , Jealousing and other things too ...but now Rena lose her Memories ...But still i need to recover the Real Her ...’ Jurina say in her thought..
As Kumi Took out A Couples of Plastic Bag with Full of Snack...That Made Jurina Shock
‘Well come on Seriously ....Are you a Supermarket Manager or Something....’ Jurina Shouted as Kumi Leaned Jurina her Favourite Pastry..
‘Well...I Always have a Supply for Snack that Why I Brought them’ Kumi says as Anna Smiled at Jurina
‘Ummm..thank for the Food Kumi ‘ Jurina says as she to a bite of the Pastry...


To BE Continued ~~~ (Wow....This is the Longest one that I Ever Made ) :3

That just it .... :byebye:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: RenaChii on March 09, 2012, 12:08:09 AM
Where are you going?! RENA~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_runcry.GIF)
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 09, 2012, 02:14:22 PM
Don't Worry RENA will be Back :on asmo:

I will Update Soon  :on GJ:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: msst28 on March 09, 2012, 02:32:57 PM
poor jurina.. She really miss her rena
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 09, 2012, 07:14:47 PM
Hahaha! Lol Kumin and the food!!!
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 15, 2012, 01:07:51 PM
Hey....Sorry for Late Update.....I'm Pretty Busy with the Idea...Hope You Guys Like It...

Chapter 4

As Inside The House ~

Rena was Resting her Body on Living Room Couch as she Stood up and Went to the Kitchen and Open the refrigerator and Took out the Pastry that Jurina brought for her in Hours ago...She Took a Bite by Bite and Finished it after she Finished the Pastry ...The Flashback Come ...In a Few Minutes
She Remember

‘ Jurina Know my Favourite Pastry flavour...Then she was my Schoolhood Friend....’ Rena thought as she Cleaned up the Mess and Went to her Room and Continued reading the Diary as the Diary Show her Few things about her Memories as she was Tired and Dizzy ..She look at the Clock and it was 8PM ...She Stood up and Took her Bag as she Saw Something Fimiliar from her Wardrobe ...She took out of the Boxes and Took it with her and put it in the Car as She locked her House Secretly and Drove to the Mansion....

As Jurina , Anna and Kumi was Picnic Under the Tree in Front of Rena House at the Park....They Chating , Eating and Playing Jan Ken Pon...As Jurina Realized Rena Car was not on her Car Parking Lot

‘Hey...Look Rena Gone’ Jurina Say to Kumi and Anna
‘Oh no ...She must Been Leaving when We were not Looking ...’ Kumi says as she Cleaned Up the Mess and Throw it on the Trash Bin
‘ Let go Before ...Rena Return Home’ Anna Says as she Already wear her Helmet
‘Anna Right ...Let go ‘ Jurina Dragged Kumi who was Still eating a Banana
‘Fine’ Kumi throw the Banana Peel in the Trash Bin and wore her Helmet as Jurina did the same thing

As Anna Hopped on Kumi motocycle as Kumi already on it ....Jurina hopped on her Motorcycle and say

‘Hey how about we Race...’ Jurina say
‘To the Mansion ....’ Kumi say
‘The Champion of Rumble race Versus the Champion of Motorcross Rumble’ Anna Says as the both of them Smile to Anna
‘LET DO IT’ Kumi Shouted as she and Jurina Speed up

As They Arrived at the Mansion ~

Kumi and Jurina was Arrived at the same time....Kumi , Anna and Jurina Took off their Helmets...As Anna Hopped Down from Kumi Motorcycle

‘The Winner Is.....’ Anna Says
‘I will be Me’ Jurina say
‘No I Will be the Winner ‘ Kumi says
‘The Winner Is Both of YOU’ Anna say as The Both of them say “HAH”
‘Well you two Arrived at the same time ....Idiots’ Anna says as she Ready to Smack both of their Head
As they Block with their arm ....And Shouted to Anna
‘STOP SMACKING OUR HEADS..ANNA’ Kumi and Jurina shouted as Anna Hide herself inside the mansion
Kumi Smile as she and Jurina Parked back their Motorcycle in the Garage...Both of them walked inside as They were Surpised that Rena Already On the Couch Sleeping ...As Kumi and Jurina Stared at the Sleeping Rena as Anna Whispered to them...that make them Surpised ..
‘Rena is Sleeping better get her in the Room ...’ Anna say with a Scaring Voice
‘Anna Don’t you ever do that’ Kumi say as she Tickle Anna
‘ Anna Right .. Help me carried her’ Jurina says as she look at Kumi
‘ Anna Let Go’ Kumi says as she pushed Anna Up to the Stairs
‘HEY ...KUMI Help Me’ Jurina Shouted Kumi name
‘She Your Partner no mine’ Kumi answer while Pushed Anna upstairs
‘Well....She your Sister Idiot’ Jurina say as Kumi Smiled at her
‘Fine I do it myself’ She Carried Rena on her Back and Went to their Room
As she put Rena on her Bed and Went to the Balcony to watch the sunset as she locked the door and she Took out her Gun with a Small Writed on it “ I LOVE YOU –RENA” on the Body of the Gun..
‘I Love you too ‘ Jurina whispered to herself
‘Rena Why did you Have to hurt yourself in a accident ‘ Jurina whispered as her tears slide to her cheek
She Sat down on the Chair at the Balcony and Put her Silencer on her Gun and Pull the Trigger and Aim the Dolls  At The Yard...She Aim all at the Doll in It heart While Crying

She took a Quick Breath ...And Wiped her Tears and Put her Gun on the Back of her jeans as she Unlocked the Balcony door and Went to the bathroom to Wash her Body with Hot shower Bath ...While wash all the Mud while on the Race

As 25 minutes later ~

Jurina Went out of the Bathroom with a Black knee Short , Plain Black Green Military T-shirt  and this a Towel on her neck as she was about to dried her hair up....As She Saw Rena already Gone from her Bed...

‘What was She Up too Now’ Jurina sighed as she Dried her Hair while Walked Down stair to the Kitchen...Suddenly the Main Door Open

‘WE’RE HOME’ Takamina Yelled
‘Finally Home at last...Chiyuu’ Tomomi say as she run to the refrigerator and took some Pack of Ice put on her head
‘What happen to You Tomomi’Jurina ask as she Help Tomomi Put some Ice in a Plastic bag
‘While you Gone Home without Asking me to Join you Guys...Some Yakabune Student attacked me ‘ Tomomi Says as she Put the Plastic bag that full of Ice in it on her head
‘Well...You can Handle it Right’ Tomochin say with a Smile as Tomomi Looked other way
‘Great You Guys Back’ Mariko say as she Walked down the stairs
‘Yeah...Did you guys Brought any foods’ Tomochin Says as she was holding her Silver Glock 18 Gun

‘No Sorry ...Look like we have to Cook’ Acchan Lied to Tomochin
‘Not again ...Who’s Cooking Today’ Tomochin Cross her Arm
‘Acchan Lying to you Tomochin...Here don’t Worry I Brought something for Dinner’ Yuki says as she show some Plastic bag to Tomochin
‘Aww..Yuki stop Ruin my Plan on Tomochin’ Acchan say as Takamina Dragged Acchan to the dining Table
‘Hey Jurina How...Rena’ Yuki say as she Putted the Plastic bag on the Dining Table and Holded Mayu hand
‘Oh ...I don’t know ...She was Sleeping then she Gone’ Jurina say as she took out some Pop sicles in the refridgerator ...and Took a Bite...
‘ Anna and Kumi’ Yuki asked
‘Oh they were Playing Left 4 Dead game Upstairs’ Jurina says
‘Hey Guys ...You back ...What for Dinner’ Kumi says as she Hold Anna hand
‘HEY Kumi...Didn’t you already eat 3 Plastic bag of Banana Already ...’ Jurina say as she Licked her Pop sicle...
‘She Still Hungry ....You Know Kumi she always ate 7 Meals a day’ Yuki says as she Give Kumi a Hotdog
‘Wow...Thank Neechan...Yummy...’ Kumi took the Hotdog from Yuki hand and Took a bite of it
‘Can I Have One’ Anna say
‘Sure....Here...’ Yuki Passed the Hotdog and Opened the cabinet and Took out a Frying Pan
‘Wait wait wait ....Yuki what are you Doing with the Frying Pan’ Takamina say as she Took the Frying Pan from Yuki
‘Well...I want to Cook’ Yuki say as she took back The Frying Pan
‘Oh No ...You can’t Have the Frying Pan Yuki..’Tomomi steal the Frying Pan
‘Why Can’t I Have the Pan’ Yuki Almost Yelled
‘Because You didn’t Know How to cook ‘ Kumi say as Tomomi passed the Pan to Kumi
‘Yeah...You will Blow Up the Kitchen Again’ Yuko say as she sat at Dining Table
‘Aha...You really a bad cooker’ Miichan say as she eat a Chocolate cake
‘Wait ...and Great Now Everyone Know it’ Yuki says as She Cross her Arm
‘Of Course Everyone have to Know before you Blow up the Kitchen at the Royal Family Mansion Few Year ago’ Takamina say as she Glared to Yuki
‘What....That was an accident...’ Yuki replied
‘ Accident or Not....You Still Can Blow Up the Kitchen any Time’ Yuko say as Tomomi Nodded
‘And You even didn’t know how to Cook ....and worst ‘ Kumi say as she put the frying Pan on the Table
‘And...What Worst’ Mayu say
‘Great do you have to say the WORST’ Yuki Hide her face by covering her Face with an apran
‘She Even didn’t Know how to crack an egg’ Kumi says as Mayu laughed
‘Don’t Laughed ...At least I Want to Learn....And I Didn’t be Like Rena’ Yuki say as she Look at the Other
‘What Wrong with Rena Cooking’ Jurina say as she Look at the royal Family

As All Royal Family Silence ...As they think about Rena Special Cooking...Was terrible...Powerful ...As Kumi Gulped and Speak Nervously

‘Well...Oneechan  Cooking was Very Special to Us’ Kumi Gulped
‘Yeah...It the Cooking of Life~Chiyuu’ Tomomi say 
‘What do you mean’ Acchan say
‘Well Rena chan Cooking was very ...Spicy’ Takamina say while Gulped the Word Spicy
 ‘Her Cooking...She...Put So Much Something inside ’ Yuko say as she Wiped her Sweat
‘ Well I Know I’m the Chef in the family but Still I Have to make about Rena Cooking was the Best so that I Didn’t have to Eat it Again’ Miichan say as all of Rappapa Family confused
‘Her Cooking will make you Begging for Water ‘ Yuki say
‘Is It that Spicy...’ Jurina say
‘Yeah...Totally Spicy ...I think is Level...’ Yuko say as she try to Remember Rena Spicy Level
‘It Level 4 or 5 LIKE THAT’ Kumi say as she look at Jurina as she Gulped hard
‘I think I Better eat Yuki cooking than Rena’ Jurina Weakly Smile
‘YOU SEE....JURINA VOTED FOR ME’ Yuki Shouting  Surpisedly as Mayu Smack Yuki Head
‘THAT FOR SHOUTING AT MY EAR’ Mayu Shouted back as she Hugged Yuki
‘Well Remember you didn’t know how to Crack an Egg’ Kumi say as she Cross her Arm
‘Ok....Let us Cooked Together for Tonight DEAL’ Takamina suggest as she Raise her Hand
‘Yeah...Deal’ Acchan say as she Shake Takamina hand

‘I’m going to the Practice Room’ Jurina say
‘Yeah...Us too’ Kumi and Anna followed Jurina

While at the Practice Room BEFORE Jurina , Anna and Kumi Arrived~ 10 PM

Rena was Looking around the Practice Room ...The Practice Room is Like a Glass Room but the window was Bullet Proof...there are as she Remember Everything about the Room where she Practice her Katana Lesson , Shooting Lesson and even archery Lesson ...She have a lot of memories in this Mansion...

As she looked around the Boxes and Saw one of the Boxes name “RENA” ...She open up the box and saw all kind of weapon

‘So this is my Favourite Weapon is Keep’ Rena say as she Took a look one by one of the weapon

She Looked at her Favourite Bow and arrows as she Took it out from the Box...She Went to the Target Room ...As she Aim for One Doll....All over again....As she Remember the strategy of Archering...She Focused in one Target the Heart as she Pulled out two Arrows by Two at Target the Heart ...as  she look at the Target Doll all her Arrows was straight to the Doll Heart ..

‘I Remember Everything about Archery Yahooo’ Rena Jumped of Joy as she Shoot the last Arrow right to the Head

She Went out of the Target Room and Put her Bow and Arrow properly back to the Box as she Took out her Katana ....She Wiped it with a some Water to get is shiny...as she Practice to Slash...Suddenly The Door Open as she Turn around as she Saw Jurina, Kumi and Anna Staring at Her with a Katana

‘Hey...What you guys Doing’ Rena say with smile
‘We were trying to Practice our...ah..’ Jurina say with a “AH”
‘Fighting Skills..Martial Art’ Kumi say as Jurina and Anna Nodded Quickly
‘Yeah...martial Arts...You know Martial Arts’ Jurina say as she asked Rena
‘ No but I Remember how to Archery ..’ Rena say while pointed to the target that she Aim Just a minute ago
‘ When did you Do it ‘ Jurina say as her mouth almost open
‘Just a few Minutes ago’ Rena say as she Practice her Slash
‘Wow It really Awesome’ Anna says as she look the Target that full with Arrow at the Heart

‘Ok Let practice’ Jurina say as she Took off her Jacket ....and Just wear Green Military T-shirt...
‘Let Do It ...’ Kumi say as she Took off her Hoddies and Wear her Black Sleeveless T-shirt
‘The Rule is Simple....The Won’t be any Rule’s’ Jurina say as Kumi smile
‘The Winner get a Free Banana’ Anna Joked as Jurina look at her with a weird face as Kumi Jumped Joy
‘Damn NO...how about this the Loser get to Clean up the Garden for a week..Deal’ Jurina say as Kumi and Anna Thinked
‘DEAL’ Both of them Accept the Challenge

Rena Putted Down her Katana and Watch The Fighting Competition...

As the Three Fight ....Anna was Knocked out first ...She Didn’t Dodge Every Punch that Held by Jurina or Kumi as Anna Run to Rena and sat Beside her to see the action ...Suddenly it was Kumi and Jurina Practice Battle

‘Look Like We Are Going to Have Fun’ Kumi say as she Put her Glove
‘We See about that’ Jurina say as she did the Same thing

Jurina Make the First Move....She tried the Kick Kumi Stomach but Fail Kumi Dodge her Kick...Kumi Punch Jurina Stomach For real...As Jurina Shout ...Kumi Jump Back to her Spot

‘Oww....That Hurts..’ Jurina say as she Hold her Stomach
‘That How the Battle Rule’s Is Right’ Kumi say as she Throw her Glove away
‘Fine...We Make a Real Battle Then’ Jurina say as she Throw her Glove aside

Kumi make the Second Move....She Tried to Kick Jurina Thighs....As Jurina grab Kumi Leg....Kumi Tried to Break Free From Jurina Gap..She Jumped and Kick Jurina Stomach With her Other Leg....Jurina Throw a Several Punch to Kumi as she Dodge and Block the Punch ...She Tried to Jump and Kick Jurina Face and Jurina Dodge and Punch Kumi Face....Kumi was laying on the Floor with a Nose Bleed..

‘THE WINNER IS JURINA’ Anna shouted as Jurina Jumped Joy
‘YAHOOO...I WON’ Jurina say as she stuck her Tongue to Kumi
‘You just Lucky ‘ Kumi say as Jurina Handed a Hand
‘Everyone Knows You weakness was Your Nose...Kumi ‘ Jurina say

Rena Stood up and Continued her Katana Lesson ...As she Focused to the Wood Doll as she rushed to the Doll with a Fast Katana Slash...As Jurina was Helping Kumi to Get Up...They Watch Rena Slashed The Dolls into Pieces...
‘Awesome’ Jurina say as she Look at Rena
Suddenly Mariko and Yuki Opened the Practice Room Door

‘Hey you Guys...It Dinner Time Let go’ Mariko say to the 3 Youngest
‘Oh Rena you coming’ Mariko say as she Look at Rena
‘ Rena...You shouldn’t Suppose to Slash the doll into Pieces ...You know’ Yuki say
‘Oh no ....I still Full you guys can go....Sorry’ Rena say as she putted her Katana Carefully in the Box
‘Ok ...You three let Go’ Yuki say as the 3 Followed

Rena sat on the Couch and Thinked about the Memories as Some of it Popped to her Head as She Already Remember about her PoP Mode of Gekikara...and A Little Bit  ROCK Mode of Gekikara...She Think and Think as she fall asleep at the Practice Room Couch

5 Hours later~ 3 AM

Jurina couldn’t sleep as she was Worried about Rena who was not on her Bed....She get up from her Bed and Left her Room with wearing a Brown T-shirt with a Word “ CHOCOLATE SHAKE “ and Even a Chocolate Shake Cartoon Image..She Wore her Knee Short and Walked Down Stair as she Look at the Wall Screen Computer System ....As She Saw the Light at the Practice Room was open ....She Walked to the Practice Room and Saw Rena was Sleeping on the Couch ...She walked toward Rena and Wake her Up

‘Rena-chan..Wake Up ...’ Jurina Yawn as she Call Rena
‘ Ah Jurina chan ...What Wrong’ Rena say as she Woke up
‘Don’t Sleep here it ...You will get a Cold ‘ Jurina say as she Sat beside Rena
‘ Oh Sorry for making you Worry about me’ Rena apologize as she look at Jurina Face
‘Let go Upstair’ Jurina say as she stood up and Handed Rena a Hand
‘Ok’ Rena accept Jurina hand as the Closed the Light and Went to their Room to get some Sleep


TO BE CONTINUED ~

Sorry for my English~
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 15, 2012, 04:48:54 PM
Poor Yukirin, nobody wants to eat her cooking lol
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 18, 2012, 08:56:04 AM
Hey Guuys....I know my Story were Bored but I don't have any much idea's  :err:

...I'm Just 14....And Still in Learning ... :fainted: :badluck:
 
...Sorry for My English...Hope you like iT :kneelbow:

Chapter 5 ~ SUMMER

A First Day of Summer ....A Full with Holiday.....to Akiba family as they didn’t have any Works or Classes even no School to the Youngest...They All decided to have a Summer party that for Family member only as they went to the Swimming Pool at the Back of their House...

Acchan was Wore her Red Bikini and a White T-shirt Takamina was Wear her Yellow Bikini ...Tomochin was Wearing her black and White Stripes Bikini and a Towel on her neck...Tomomi with a Blue Bikini and already at the Pool...They were Swimming...Kumi was Wearing a T-shirt and Black Short over her Blue and Black Bikini...Anna Wore Red and Blue Bikini over a plain White T-shirt ..Jurina was Wearing her England Bikini with a Ponytail Hair...Rena was Wearing her Red and Blue Bikini as she Join Tomomi in the Pool...Mariko with Purple Bikini with a Sleeveless Hoddies...As for Miichan , Yuko and Haruna was Still Sleeping at their own Room...Mayu was With Yuki at their room Changing to their Bikini ..

As Acchan , Tomochin and Mariko was Sitting at their own Bench with a Shaded....Takamina was Standing Beside Acchan Bench looking at the Youngster Playing in the Pool

Tomomi and Rena was already in the Pool swimming...Jurina was already Jump to the Pool as Kumi and Anna took off their T-shirt and as well Jumped to the Pool ...That make Mariko Mad Because she was Standing in front the Swimmimg Pool.... Water Splashes to her Body make her Wet
‘.KYAA....I’m Wet’ Mariko yell to the Youngest....
‘Sorry....Mari-chan’ Kumi say
 
As Mayu and Yuki Appear with a Bikini as Mayu wore Pink and darker Pink Spot Bikini As Yuki wear Yellow and White Bikini... Yuki Went to her Bench As Mayu Jump joining the Others in the pool Playing the Water with the Other...As Mariko shouted to Mayu

‘Mayu...You are not a Kid anymore....You are already Mature’ mariko say
‘What you were saying that I can’t not have Fun in SUMMER’ Mayu say
‘Mayu Right Mari-chan...She want to have Fun ‘ Miichan say with a Smile
‘Arghh...You scared me Miichan ...I thought you say You didn’t want to come...’ Mariko say
‘Well ...i can come later ...It not like the Swimming Pool is that Far from our Room‘
Miichan say
‘Yeah...It not like we going to the Beach’ Acchan say
‘Yeah....Acchan Why we didn’t Go to Akiba family Beach Resort ‘ Jurina say
‘Oh Yeah ...I forget about the Resort but for Now we have fun here first Ok Ju-chan’ Acchan say while Reading her book
‘Yahoo. Ok ‘ Jurina Jump to the Water as Acchan Hide her Book behind her back as she didn’t want the book to get wet as the water splashes

As They have fun until evening..They all just went to Sleep ...As Takamina and Acchan was not tired because They didn’t have Played all the Games....They Decided to go to the Study Room...As Takamina Speak to Acchan

‘Acchan...what do you think What we going to do Tomorrow’ Takamina say as Acchan Think
‘How about we Play Survivor Haunted house’ Acchan say as Takamina Sweating
‘Well..That a good Idea but There no Haunted House Here’ Takamina Explained
‘Well We can Still make This House as a Haunted House...’ Acchan suggest as Takamina Think
‘No......’Takamina shake her Head
‘How about we...Play at the School Tomorrow Night Deal..’ Acchan Suggest again
‘MaJiJo ...It a Great Place to Play as we can Divided By 2 People in one Group’ Takamina say as she Write the Sentence in Piece of Paper

‘Ok ....You and Me in Atsumina Team...Tomochin and Tomomi in W Tomo Team...Jurina and Rena in W Matsui Team...Kumi and Anna in Love Bird Team...Mariko and Miichan in MariMii Team...Yuko and Haruna in KojiYuu Team....Mayu and Yuki in Mayuki Team...Done’ Acchan say As she continued Takamina Sentence in the Paper

‘Atsumina Team’ Takamina say as Acchan Smile

‘The Rules....No Real Bullet Gun Allowed.... No Sharpy Weapons....No Dangerous Trick ....and No communication system....After you Shoot your Enemy Tied them with a Rope ..If Their Partner Untied the Rope that mean that the Team Whole Again .’ Takamina Write as she Passed the Paper to Acchan

‘Can Brought Snack if Hungry.....Can Brought Smoke Bomb or non dangerous Bomb that with “BANG” ...Must Brought a Torchlight ...Rope if Wanted....Extra toy bullet and More important the Toy Gun  ....And Even Toy that no Dangerous Like a Water Balloon to Distract Enemy...The Winner Can Suggest the Next Activities..’ Acchan Passed Back to Takamina

‘ Seriously Water Balloon ....and Even Snacks’ Takamina say as she Started to wrote her Sentences
‘Meet at the School Entrance at 11PM ....Must Brought anything you need ‘ Takamina Write it with a Red Pen
‘Finish it already....Let Paste it on the Everyone Door as they Noticed the Message so they can prepare in the Daylight’ Acchan say

As The Two leader Paste the Noticed at every bedroom Door and Return to Their Room..


NEXT DAY at  AFTERNOON~

As the always Silence moment at the Time but in Summer Vacation it full with Laughter , Chating and Yelling ....As Ever One of the Akiba Member was at the Living room Yelling and Chating with Joy ...As Takamina and Acchan Tried to Stopped Them from being so Loud...Tomochin , Tomomi , Mayu and Yuki was Sitting at the Couch as Rena and Jurina was Standing behind the Couch ....Anna and Kumi was leading their Body at the Wall...as For Mariko and Miichan was Sitting on the Right Two Seat Couch then the Long Couch...

‘SHUT UP..’ Takamina Shouted as The Other Stared at Her
‘ Listen ....if you Have any Question Rise your Hand Please’ Acchan Say As she Pointed to Jurina
‘Why does we have to Rise Our hand...We Are not in School ...It Summer’ Jurina say as Acchan look at her with a Kind of a Weird face
‘Why the Heck are you Ask that Question Jurina-chan’ Tomochin say as she look Up to Jurina Face
‘Yeah...Other Questions’ Acchan say as she Pointed to Kumi
‘Why did you Name our Team Love Bird Team’ Kumi say as Acchan Make another Confused Face
‘Well that Because you guys Can’t be Separated ..Even for a Minute’ Acchan answer as Everyone expect Rena Nodded
‘Well this Time No Dumb Questions ..’ Acchan Say as Everyone Silence to Wait for someone to Rise her Hand
‘Ehhh...So ...Who have a Dumb Questions’ Acchan say as Everyone expect Anna , Mayu and Haruna Rise their Hand
‘Ok ....What your Dumb Questions’ Acchan Pointed to Rena
‘ Well how does we Communication with Other Member ‘ Rena say
‘Well You can’t Communication with them ...Oh yeah ...Rena Jurina told me that you already Remember How to Shoot with Gun ‘Takamina say as Rena Nodded
‘That Not a Dumb Question Rena....’ Yuki say
‘Ok That Enough you better get Ready for the Tournament ...Tonight’ Takamina say as she took her Silver Lomborghini Gallardo Key as Acchan Followed Takamina to the Mall...As Takamina and Acchan Left the Mansion Yard....

The Living room back into the Yelling and Chating room as they Dance and Sing with Joy....As Rena Suggest Jurina to wear a Hat or Hoddies so that Takamina and Acchan didn’t Know about their Wireless Earphone Walky Talky That Rena just Invented a Year ago...And the other were planned to cheat...

As Jurina and Rena Rushed to their Room and Packed Up their Stuff as Rena look at her Watch and it was 3PM....Rena was planning to took a Nap as she Told Jurina and Jurina Let her took her Nap as she was Preparing her Toy Gun ...

As IT WAS 4 Hours Later~

Rena was Sleeping Peacefully as Jurina look at her watch and Ready to Wake Rena up for a Bath and Dinner or even Practice as she kneel down to see Rena Sleeping Face...She fixing Rena Front Bangs and Kiss her forehead as she wake Rena up ...

‘Ah...Jurina-chan ...Is it Time ..’ Rena say as she Stood up
‘No....We have a few Hours before that you get to Bath and Dinner First ‘ Jurina say as she Put both of her Arm on her Hip
‘Ok ....’ Rena say as she go straight to the Bathroom

Jurina Change her Clothes from Blue Top and a Blue Skirt ..into Purple T-shirt with a White and Grey stripes Hoddies Over her Body Gun Holder and a Brown skirt  Also Brown boot ...She Wait for Rena to come out of the Bathroom as she Watched the Sunset at the Balcony
As few Minutes ~

Rena Walked out from the Bathroom with a Grey T-shirt and a Blue Skirt As Jurina saw Rena she walked back Inside and Closed the Balcony Door and handed her Other Gun Holder to Rena as Rena Smile and Wear it....as She Wore her Black Hoddies that wrote “ Matsui R ....No 2“ on the Back of the Hoddies ...

As Jurina and Rena Eat Dinner at the Kitchen as they Wait for The Others to Join for Dinner or Not....Jurina Cooked her favourite Chicken Wing as she asked if Rena wanted Some....As Rena Didn’t Remember about she didn’t Eat Meat ...that Why Jurina Trick Rena that she Love Meat....

Jurina give Rena A Bite of the Meat As Rena was not that Hungry all She Does is Look Jurina Eat...As Kumi and Anna Rushed to the Kitchen with a Backpack and Opened up the cabinet that Wrote “ KUMI “ and Jurina and Rena stared at Kumi as she and Anna Pack up their Supply Snacks ...

‘So You Guys are bringing Snacks to the Tournament’ Jurina say as she took another bite of the Meat
‘Well Of course ....We Even Bring Banana...’ Kumi say as Jurina make a Weird face
‘Seriously Banana is all you think’ Jurina say as she stood up from the Dining table and Washed her Plate...
‘well....We Also Bring Green Tea....Come if you want to Join us having Tea’ Anna say as she saw the Tea Can
‘Come on ....KUMI seriously are you or not a Supermarket Owner ..’ Jurina say
‘Well....Why did you Ask ....Well Here ‘ Kumi handed a Card to Jurina
‘What This....Akiba Mall ’Jurina read the card
‘MALL...That much too far from Super market’
‘Well...Come If you Free ..i’ll Give you Free Something ‘ Kumi Smile and Headed to her Room

Jurina and Rena walked to their Room as they Get Ready....Rena was Carry a Backpack full of Stuff like Smoke Bomb , Toy Bullet , Rope , Bottle of Water and Balloon...Jurina Put her Both Glock 18 Toy Gun in her Body Gun Holder ..and one on the Back of her Pants....Rena Put her Gun in the Gun holder also a Spare Gun on her back of her pants ...As She Covered the Gun Holder By Wearing a Hoddies...

As Jurina Took her Motorcycle Key as she say to Rena

‘Well ..we better Ride my Bike that Car...It Fast to get there’ Jurina say
‘Fine with me’ Rena say as she Look at the Other Team ..
‘Hey Jurina do not brought Rena too fast Ok..’ Yuki start her Lomborghini Reveton Engine as Mayu Smile at her Sister
‘You too Kumi ‘Yuki look at Kumi who was Already Wearing her Helmet...

Jurina passed Rena Her Spare helmet and wear it for her...as she Quickly wear her’s and Hopped on the Bike....She Speed up her Bike as The Other already Start their Car Engine Except Kumi ...Because she Ride her Bike with Anna....as the Two Biker Race to the School Entrance as she Saw Takamina Red Evolution Car At the School Entrance...as they were sitting on the Floor  with Acchan Eating Chips ...

As Jurina Parked her Bike in Front of Acchan and Takamina who was Busy Eating ...followed by Kumi...As the four took Off their Helmet and Stared to Takamina and Acchan .

‘WHAT..’ Acchan look at the Jurina
‘Well...Where the Others’ Takamina says as she Look the Four who was Locked their Motocycles...
‘They will be here in 3, 2 ,1...There they are ....Oh man my Counting is a Dream Come True’ Kumi say as she Shake Anna Body Forward and backward...

‘Yeah....I Know ...STOP SHAKING ME’ Anna say as she Smack Kumi head...
‘Aww...Ouch it Hurts...i Think my Skull is Cracking ‘ Kumi say as she Rubbed her Head
‘Aww...Poor Kumi....Well Not You Better Behave More Sometime’ Rena say as she Rubbed Kumi Head

As Takamina and Acchan Explain their palces...As WMatsui Team at the Entrance of the room ....Love Bird Team at the Lab....Atsumina was at the Field.....Mayuki Team at Cafeteria....WTomo team at their Class Room ....MariMii Team at the Nurse Room....KojiYuu Team at the Principal Corridor as Takamina asked them to Search for Their places as they were 7 Boxes Around the School with their Team name on it and 4 Boxes with a Stuff in it...as 2 Minutes the School bell Willl rang and the Game Started


~TBC~

Well...Sorry...
Like I say ...I didn't have much Idea :badluck:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 18, 2012, 09:53:54 AM
Interesting game, it smells cheat lol
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: ohayou on March 21, 2012, 09:40:07 AM
OOOOOO who's gonna win? who's gonna win??? go wMatsui!  :cow:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 22, 2012, 04:00:42 AM
Hey....Sorry for the Late ...

@ kahem: Yeah...they will Cheat
@ ohayou : Here the Continued....I will make something Interesting

Chapter 6 ~ The Game Part 1


AS THE BELL RING~

Jurina was preparing for the Game as she Zip down her hoddies as she took out one of her toy gun from her gun holder as she zip up her hoddies back ....While she put the bullet on he gun she look at Rena who busy carrying the heavy Backpack....She Feel Guilty for her as she was weak and not recover yet...She took the Backpack from Rena hand as she carried it on her back as she handed Rena a Hand...Rena Smile and Took Jurina hand as One of her hand was Holding a Gun ...Same as Jurina...

As they walked slowly at the Corridor as Rena Heard a Footstep as Jurina Pulled Rena into one of the locker as she already Hide it on the locker next to the locker that they were hiding now....As Rena was in front of Jurina...their body were touch tightly..

‘You look Comfortable in here ‘ Jurina say as she slide her hand to Rena Waist
‘No I’m not comfortable in here’ Rena whispered to Jurina as she heard the footstep sound is closer
‘You Love it in here right’ Jurina whispered as she pulled her Closer
‘No I don’t li-- --‘ Rena being interrupted by Jurina Kiss
Jurina Kiss Rena on her Lips as she didn’t want Rena to speak anymore as Rena Kiss Back....a Few Seconds they broke the kiss ...Jurina look at Rena who was Blushing and Growling and Jurina smile at Rena....as Rena look at Jurina smile she Smile as well...As the footstep was Gone ...they come out of the locker and Prepare to become Serious .....

‘Look like we the one that haven’t Start yet....Let Go’ Jurina say as she walked Faster to the cafeteria corridor...
‘How about You go that way I Go this way’ Rena suggest
‘hmm...Can you take care of yourself ‘Jurina asked
‘Of Course I Can you Idiot’ Rena say as she Smile
‘We meet up at the Roof top ok’ Jurina say as Kiss at Rena Cheek and turned to the Left

As Rena Pick The Right direction because Jurina already pick the Left .....The Left is going to the
cafeteria....The Right is Going to the Stairs....as Rena Walked faster up the stair as she heard a Footstep ....she hide beside the wall....as someone walked Passed the corridor she shoot ...as the someone turned and it was Miichan with her Machine gun Toy gun....as Rena saw Miichan Machine Gun she run to take cover as Miichan Shoot several Times ....As Miichan tried to reload her Machine Gun ...Rena make a move she shoot 3 time at Miichan Arm....as Miichan stop Playing she Shoot a Several Attack to Rena as Rena was late to cover herself as she cover the Toy bullet with Both of her Arm until Miichan Stop....As Rena was in Pain ...Rena Shoot several time at Miichan Body as Miichan Yelled Stop

‘Ok ...Ok...Stop Please It Hurts’ Miichan say as Rena Stop Shooting
‘Well you Think did hurts ...Mine Really Hurts’ Rena say as she Tied Miichan hand...
‘Sorry ..You look like you being Bit by a Mosquito...can you Grab my Chips in my bag ‘ Miichan say as Rena nodded
‘That not Funny...Here Eat This a lot ...you will be like Godzilla’ Rena teased Miichan as she give the Chips
‘No ...I will not be like Godzilla...I’m Not like You ..a Vegetarian’ Miichan say as she Glared t Rena
‘No ...I’m not a Vegetarian....Jurina say I Eat meat also’ Rena say
‘WHAT...You eat meat......Have you already eat you pills...’ Miichan say as she took out her Pills Box...That She always brought every where for Emergency Panic
‘What Pills.....I’m  allergic to Meat or Something’Rena Shock
‘Kind of Like that ....Here Eat This to Hold you allergic Down a Little Bit’ Miichan Give Rena a allergic Pills.
‘Thanks..’ Rena took the pills and Eat it
‘Well....You allergic to meat in 50%...Not Full..Well your allergic will hold up in 10 hours...So you be alright..We better Moved on’Miichan say as Rena nodded

As Rena and Miichan was Walked toward the Science Lab ...Kumi and Anna Team Busted out off the Lab and Start Shooting to Rena and Miichan as Rena was the only one Shooting toward the Team As Miichan Hide behind Rena ....As the Two was Fast Shooter Rena take cover as She Dragged Miichan Beside the Locker....

‘Look like I Have to make an Entrance’ Rena Took out her other Gun on the Gun Holder
‘Wow...Cool Gun Holder...’ Miichan say
‘Well it no mine ...it Jurina’s..’ Rena Say as She Smile
‘ that Why it look so Familiar’ Miichan say
‘Stay Here....I’m Going In’ Rena Rushed Toward the Two Younger as She Shoot both of their Neck to make them Stop Shooting

‘OUCH...It Hurts’ Kumi Yelled as she rubbed her neck
‘Aw..Rena it not fair’ Anna say as she look at Rena
‘Well it Not Fair Either ...2 VS 1...Fair enough’ Rena Ask and Give Kumi a Banana as Anna Just nod
‘Fair Enough’ The Both of them Agree
‘Rena ...That Cheating’ Miichan say
‘This is not Cheating Miichan...This is Offering’ Rena say
‘Yeah...Miichan’ Both of the say
‘Well i Already Capture you two so you two is on my Team...care for a team work’ Rena say as glared to Kumi and Anna
‘Sure ..’ Kumi and Anna say as they Turn on their Flashlight
‘ok...Here the Plan....Anna you Wet the Floor and Kumi you Throw the Soap at every Floor ...Understood’ Rena say as Kumi Smile
‘You Remember the Soapy Trick ‘ Kumi say as Anna smile also
‘UNDERSTOOD Sir’ Kumi and Anna Obey Rena Plan...

Anna took a Bucket of Water and Splash it on the Floor as Kumi and Rena was Playing Soap Hockey to make the Floor Slippery....as they Heard some Foot Step at the Stair ...They Rushed to one of the Locker and keep Silence....as they Hide their Bag at the Locker beside their’s...Someone was walking up the Stairs with a Torchlight and It was Team Mayuki...Yuki was Walking with a Rifles Toy Gun on her Arm as Mayu was Holding Glock 18 Toy Gun that Miichan Invented for Her....As Rena and the Other Closed their Mouth as Yuki was Walking at one of the Trap....As Yuki accidently Step on one of Rena Soap and Fall Down to the Wet Floor as Mayu was the one who holding the Torchlight ..Scanning to Yuki

‘Hahaha...You Just fell’ Mayu Laughed as she look at Yuki embrassing Face
‘Stop Laughing Mayu...It a Soapy Trick’ Yuki almost Yelled as she look at Mayu laughed
‘I can See that ...’ Mayu Laughed

As Rena and the Other that in the Locker Hold their laughter...and just Giggled Silently...As Mayu was Helping Yuki to get up....Rena throw a penny to the Corridor to make a Signal to Kumi and Anna...as they Busted Out of the Locker and Shoot Mayu and Yuki  ...Mayu and Yuki Quickly Shoot at Rena , Kumi and Anna ...As the Three Take Cover with the Locker Door as Rena took their Stuff and Miichan into the Science lab and Anna and Kumi was a Fast movement and fast Shooter so they Keep shooting before they Went to the Science Lab and locked the Door as For Yuki and Mayu Tried to Unlocked the Door....Rena asked Kumi and Anna to helped her Move the Chair and Table to the Door as They already Moved it ....Rena think how to Escape the Science Lab without being captured...

‘I Know we can use the Window to go to the Classroom beside the Science Lab ‘ Anna say as Rena Keep Thinking
‘We Don’t have a Much Option so let do it’ Rena say as she took out a Rope
‘Oh No...I’m Not Crossing to the Classroom’ Miichan say as she Back off
‘You really Want to get Captured for the Second Time’ Kumi say as she Took out a Banana
‘Yeah....But I’m Not Crossing to the Classroom’ Miichan say as she Sit on the Chair
‘Fine ...Do What ever You Like’ Rena say as she Already Outside the Window to Cross to the Classroom
‘Well it not Climbing it crossing...’ Kumi say as she Dragged Miichan
“BANG” The Door Being Pushed
‘Fine ..i’m Coming’ Miichan say as she Cross the Balcony Slowly

As all of them at the Classroom...Rena throw the Rope at the Bushes ..so to Make Yuki and Mayu believe that they went downstairs....

‘Move inside Faster’ Rena say as she Locked the Balcony Door from Inside
‘Cover the Curtains....Off the Lights’ Kumi say as she helped Anna Cover the Curtains ....
‘Silence’ Rena say

As Yuki and Mayu already Broke the Door and Search for Rena and the Others as Mayu called Yuki ....as she Saw a Rope at the Bushes....They Run Downstairs ....As For Team Rena...They were Resting and Eating Silenctly as Rena Earphone start to beeping ‘Beep Beep Beep’

‘Jurina where are you’ Rena say as the Others already know that Rena and Jurina was Wearing a Earphone because Team Kumi and Anna was Talking using their Phone...As Team Mariko and Miichan was using earplugs...

‘I’m at the the Roof Top ..I already Found one of Boxes..where are you ‘ Jurina answer
‘What You really Fast to get at the Roof top ...Well i’m at the Classroom beside the Science Lab with Kumi , Anna and Miichan’ Rena say
‘What you being attack by Kumi , Anna and MariMii Team’ Jurina say
‘Yes...But I already Capture Miichan , Anna and Kumi so you Wait there I’ll be there’ Rena say as she Turn off her Earphone
‘Let Move’ Kumi say as she Packed up her Snacks

As Team Rena was Walking up to the Stairs toward the Clubroom Corridor...As Kumi and Anna Followed Rena and Miichan From behind as Someone was Sitting on the Floor Polishing a Gun while Singing “ La La La” with a Scary Tone

‘La...La....La...You were Having Fun ‘ Someone with a Scary Voice

As Rena and the Three look at the Shadow ...As Kumi and Anna hugged Each other ...Rena Stared at the Shadow Carefully as It Stood up from the Floor and Walked Slowly closer by closer with a Scary and Weird Style ....As Rena Realised It was Mariko from the Shadow...and Ready to Run

‘RUN ....GHOSTS’ Rena Asked Kumi and Anna Run toward the Stair to the Roof top Leaving Miichan Alone as she Know Mariko will untied Miichan Rope....

‘Come Back here...You little ‘ Mariko Shouted as she Tried to Untied Miichan Rope

While Rena , Kumi and Anna Run toward the Stair ...Rena realised that a Small Button on the Floor as she Step on it a two Machine Gun Shoot Them...as They Cover Their Self with their bag to make Through...as Mariko and Miichan Run with their Gun to Chased Rena and The Two....

‘Shoot Dodge’ Rena Throw Some Smoke Bomb

As the Three run to the Roof top and Locked the Door ...and Saw Jurina was Resting Under the Roof ...Rena wake Jurina up ..As they Rest under the Roof at the Entrance

‘Ah....You arrived ‘ Jurina stood up and Look at Kumi and Anna
‘What’ Kumi say
‘Wow...Even you two were a Fast Movement and a Fast Shooter ...You guys Get Captured Easily’ Jurina say as she took out a Hotdog from Rena Bag
‘ What ...we were not like you have a Fast Knowledge’ Kumi and Anna say
‘Hmm...Jurina why didn’t you tell ME THAT I ALLERGIC TO MEAT’ Rena say as Jurina Smile
‘Well ...you didn’t Asked’ Jurina say as she Eat the Hotdog
‘Well you make me Eat the meat this Evening’ Rena say
‘Well you the one that accept it’ Jurina say as she Look away
‘Well I Don’t Know...I Hate Meat’ Rena say she Took Jurina Hotdog and Took a Bite
‘Ah...You can’t Eat that Too much ‘ Kumi say as she Took the Hotdog and Give it the Jurina
‘ Let me Be’ Rena say as she Sit down leaning to the door
‘Here eat you medicine Before you collaspe’Kumi Give Rena her Medicine as Rena Eat it
‘Why Every One Brought a Medicine Box that Have My Allergic Pills in it ’ Rena Pouted 

As Rena was Tired and wanted to Took a Nap as Kumi and Anna was already Sleep on a carpet ...as for Jurina was barbeque a Meat....as She Fast asleep next to Kumi and Anna ...Jurina look at Rena , Kumi and Anna and Smile

As the Other Team were Searching for the Boxes ....Team WMatsui and Team Love Bird were Sleeping at the Roof Top

As 1 Hour have Pass....They Woke Up and Continued their Request to find the Boxes....They Went to the Corridor and Found an interesting Ride...

‘Are we going to Ride this Trolley...’ Kumi Ask Jurina with a “HAH” face
‘Aha....We Can Move Faster Right’ Jurina say as Rena Sit on the Trolley
‘Talking about Fast Movement and Knowledge...’ Anna glared to Jurina
‘If you guys want to Run Fine’ Jurina start to pushed the Trolley
‘No...We In’ Kumi and Anna Jumped and Kneel Down the Trolley ...

Jurina Pushed The Trolley to the Cafeteria and Found the Tomomi and Tomochin were eating some Sushi that they Brought ....

‘There the Other Team...Kumi Now’ Jurina Shout as Kumi Took out a Water Balloon in her Bag and Throw it at tomochin as Tomomi already Know and Hide under the Table

‘KUMMMIIIIII.....’ Tomochin Yell and Took her Gun and Shoot Jurina Back
‘Owww.....Why the Heck You Shoot me Not Her’ Jurina Yell back as she Pushed the Trolley
‘Because you are the One that Ask her to Throw that Damn Water balloon’ Tomochin shoot the Trolley
‘Kumi ....Anna’ Jurina say as they Nodded

Kumi and Anna Shoot from the Corner of the trolley as Rena was Trying to Reload her gun..Jurina Pushed them to the Next Location ...The Infirmary Room..

‘Are you sure ..we are going In’ Kumi Look at Rena
‘Yeah...It Going to be alright ...’ Rena Pat Kumi Shoulder
‘ Yeah Right....I remember the Last Time I Went Here’ Anna Looked at the Infirmary Door
‘Oh...That ...You were like Dr Frankenstein ...‘ Jurina Followed Rena
‘That was just A Joke ‘ Rena say as she open the Infirmary Door
‘ Yeah... That you make Kumi Fainted ...’ Anna Look at Kumi
‘I didn’t Remember that Kumi Fainted ‘ Rena Look at Anna with a Confused Face
‘That Because you Lost your Memory ‘ Anna say

As they Went Inside the Infirmary....Kumi and Anna we Hugging Each Other as The Spooky Infirmary....Jurina feel Cold......Rena Went Inside the Medicine Room ..As the Three Stand Still and Suddenly The three was Scared as they Heard a Foot Step at the Corridor

“Tap Tap Tap “ “ Tap Tap Tap”

The Hugged Each Other and Tried to Hide Under the Infirmary Bed....As a Sound like Someone been Knocking the Infirmary Window...That make Jurina Surprised...

“Tok Tok Tok “ “Tok Tok Tok”

Suddenly Rena Come Back and She Shouted at the Three
‘WHAT THE HECK YOU THREE WERE DOING UNDER THE BED’ Rena Shout
‘Awwww......Please Don’t Don’t t-ttake Our Soooul’ Anna Cried as she Hug Kumi
‘Why the Heck I Would take your Soul Anna’ Rena Kneel Down under the Bed and Look at the Three
‘Oh...It Just You Rena...You scared Us’ Jurina say as she Stood up Under the Bed
‘Oh It Just You....Why did I wasting my Tears ‘ Anna say as she Wiped her Tear
‘Why are you Guys Under the Bed’ Rena say
‘We Heard some Foot Step At the Corridor’ Kumi say as she Point to the Door
‘I didn’t hear Something ‘ Rena say as she Walked toward the Door and Open it
‘There No one here Except Us..’ Rena Look at the corridor

As Rena Took a Quick Check at the Corridor...the Three who was In the Infirmary Stand Still Until They Heard the Second Knock on the Window..

“ Tok Tok Tok “ “Tok Tok Tok”

As they Heard the Knock...They Took their Stuff and Run Toward Rena ...

‘Renaaa...’ They Run Toward Rena and Hugged Her Tightly
‘We Told you the Infirmary were A Bad Place to Search ‘ Anna Cried
‘ The Infirmary were Creepy and Spooky ‘ Jurina cried
‘ Oneechan ....’ Kumi Cried
‘What are you Three Saying’ Rena say as she Tried to Break Free from the Youngest Hug
‘In The Infirmary ‘ Jurina point the Infirmary Door

As Rena pushed the Youngest to let her Go and Walked Inside the Infirmary to Check the “ Spooky and Creepy Thing” ...She Walked Toward the Medicine Room and Found a Small Box that have a Writen on it...She Took the Box and Read the Name

‘It the Love Bird Box..’ Rena Cheer and Put the Box inside her Pocket and Search for other Boxes maybe being Hide in the Drawers..

As for the Three they Sit Down on the Floor and Hugged Each Other ....Then It Happen again the Foot Steps Sound...They Just Closed their Eyes ...and Let the Spirit Pass

“Tap Tap Tap” “TAP TAP TAP “

‘Spirit Spirit Please Forgive Us...We Didn’t Do anything Wrong..’ Jurina say as she Heard the Foot step getting Closer
‘Yeah...Spirit Stop Underestimate Us ‘ Kumi say
‘Yeah...We are not Scared ...we were a Big Girl ‘ Anna say 

Then the foot step Stopped

‘Hey You Guys....I Found a Box’ Rena say with a Scary Voice
‘Ahhhhhh...’ The Three Scream as Jurina Open her Eyes
‘Renaaaa’ Jurina Hugged Rena As Kumi and Anna Hug each Other
‘Look i Found a Box’ Rena say as she Handed the Box to Kumi
‘It Our Box ‘ Kumi say as They Wiped their Tear

TBC

Sorry for my Bad English~~
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: ohayou on March 22, 2012, 09:00:47 AM
hahahahahahaha~ the girls got scared by Rena-san  XD

EPIC!  :lol:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 22, 2012, 11:05:04 AM
Hahahah! I like this game! Lol everyone have Rena's medcine ^^
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 22, 2012, 01:25:09 PM
Thank you for Reading

@ohayou : Yeah...They Were Just a Youngster
@kahem : Everyone Trying to Protect Rena Health
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on March 24, 2012, 11:12:30 AM
very good story!!!
plssssss update sooooooooooon!!!1
Title: Re: Okotteru Angels (Acchan Graduation Support )
Post by: xxx220 on March 26, 2012, 03:09:52 AM
@ Chikane Himemiya: Thank you ...I will

Hey Guys....Here the Continued....Sorry it kind of Short .....I was have no Idea after Acchan annoucement... :?

Same Chapter ~ The Game Part 2

‘Open it Kumi ‘ Anna took a Quick Peek on Kumi Shoulder
‘Seriously ....’ Kumi open the Box and Found a DVD Game
‘Wow....This is the Game that We almost Brought it but already Sold Out ‘ Anna Took the Game and Read the Description on the back of the Game
‘How it already Sold Out ‘ Jurina say as she Read the Description too
‘It a limited Edition only the Chosen one can get it....It was totally Expensive...We can buy another Huge Machine Gun and Even A Dog and cat ‘ Kumi Explain to Jurina
‘Really but why didn’t you just ask Yuki to brought it for you at other Country ‘ Jurina ask
‘We was thinking that too but we Didn’t want to Waste our money buy the Limited Edition one....So we brought the Original One...It a cool Game’ Anna Explain
‘Seriously ...You guys are really need to stop playing Video games...’ Rena shake her Head with a Unknown face
 ‘You Guys need to let me Play the Game Later ‘ Jurina say
‘Let Go...Find the Other Box Gamers’  Rena Drag Jurina Up the Stairs...

As the Four Climbing up the Stairs....Kumi and Anna Stopped Walking as they Heard a Foot Step back at the Corridor....The wanted to ignore the Sound but it seem like the foot step getting Nearer and Nearer ....

“Tap Tap Tap...TAP TAP TAP “

The Step getting louder and Louder until the Sound Stops...

‘K~um~i....A~nn~a....Let go...’ Rena making a Scary Voice then she Return into her normal voice
‘ARgghhhh......Rena Stop doing that’ Anna Cried and She Punched Rena arm
‘Doing What...’ Rena say
‘Yeah...Stop Doing and Leaving us like that Rena’ Jurina say as she Pouted

“Tap Tap Tap...Tap Tap Tap”

‘I think now I heard a Foot Step...Ww-eee Bet-ttter Run ‘ Rena say with a Shocked Face
‘Arghhhh....’ They Scream as loud as they can and Run as Fast as they Can

As they Run Upstairs Rena Heard a Voice that kind of Familiar  ...She Closed Anna and Kumi Mouth as Jurina Ready her Gun...Rena Signal Kumi and Anna to get Ready

‘I think it was Team Tomo....Hear’ Jurina Whrispered to Kumi , Anna and Rena
‘ Tomochin...I’m Tired ..Chiyuu’ Tomomi say
‘Tomomi ...Voice down someone will heard Us’ Tomochin say
‘but I didn’t Sleep Well’ Tomomi say
‘Why I sleep Well’ Tomochin say
‘Well it because you were making the room like a Club Room...with your Latest Song ‘ Tomomi Pouted
‘You were saying that you didn’t like my “Song Dear J”’ Tomochin Look at Tomomi
‘No ‘ Tomomi say
‘That my Tomomi ‘ Tomochin Kiss Tomomi passionly
Then Rena and The other Three came out of the Corner and point the Gun toward Tomochin and Tomomi

‘Wow...I wish i get a Kiss like Them ‘ Rena start a Conversation
‘What....You think I didn’t kiss like that ‘ Jurina say as she look at Rena
‘What are you Four Doing ....you guys Interrupting our Sweet moment’ Tomochin say
‘What a Killer Joy ...Chiyuu’ Tomomi say
‘Well....We are in a Middle of a Game here ‘ Kumi say
‘Aren’t you guys were at the Cafeteria back then’ Anna say
‘Well Yeah....We Left after you Guys Wet ME...’Tomochin say angrily
‘Sorry...but you guys Didn’t Heard any Foot Steps’ Jurina ask
‘No...and We only heard you guys Scream Loud ...Chiyuu‘ Tomomi say
‘You Heard that....’ Rena say
‘It Louder that Ever ‘ Tomochin say
‘Let Begin ...Should we ‘ Rena say as she Point her toy gun to Tomochin
‘Let see ...who Getting Capture ..’ Tomochin accept Rena Challenge
‘Arghhhh....’ Rena Run To Tomochin while shooting Tomochin
‘Argghhhh’ Tomochin do the Same

After a Few Minutes.( Sorry I was tired to make a Fighting Scene..)

‘How long does this Fight will End’ Kumi say as she Took a Bite of her Banana
‘I’m tired and Bored Chiyuu..’ Tomomi say as she lead her body at the Wall
‘Rena ...Hurry finish Tomochin Up ..’ Jurina say
‘I’m Tired of Playing with this Toy ‘ Rena throw her Gun and Put her Glove On
‘Me Too ‘ Tomochin give her Gun to Tomomi and Put her Black Leather Glove ...
‘We Fight for Real ‘ Rena say
‘1 ,2 ,3 Rumble Fight !! ‘ Anna Start the Battle
‘Who will think you Win ...I bet for Tomochin ‘ Kumi say
‘I bet Rena will Win’ Jurina say
‘She your Partner ...Me Tomochi Chiyuu...’ Tomomi say
‘I bet for both of Them ‘ Anna say
‘Arghh...Take this’ Rena Start the Fight

Tomochin Dodge Rena Punch and Swing a Punch toward Rena Stomach Hard...that make Rena Hold the Pain...Tomochin throw another Punch toward Rena Stomach but Rena Dodge and Kick Tomochin Leg that make Her Fall...Rena Jumped t Punch Tomochin who wason the Floor....But Tomochin Roll Aside and Get Up ...she Jump on Rena Back and start to Punch Rena Face from Behind ....Rena Hit Tomochin at the Wall to make her Let Go of Her....Rena Took a Couple of Second to took a Breath..Rena Swing a Fist toward Tomochin but luckily Tomochin Dodge and Make Rena Fist went to the Wall....

‘Arghh....It Hurts ‘ Rena Rubbed her Fist..’ Rena Hold the Pain
‘Rena are you alright ‘ Jurina say
‘No....It Hurts’ Rena handed her Hand to Jurina to check up
‘Luckily I Dodge...’ Tomochin say as she Handed Rena A Bandage
‘You Guys are in a Bad Shape’ Jurina say as she poked Tomochin Red Cheek
‘Tsk...Tskk.’ Tomochin Pushed Jurina Away
 ‘Rena ...i think your hand are not Ok Chiyuu’ Tomomi say
‘why that ...tsk’ Rena say as she Shake her Hand

~TBC~



I was Surprised to hear about Acchan Graduate ...well everyone Surprised Right ?....I feel Depressed :on polter: , Sad :barf: :fainted: , and Anger :scolding: :angry1: but ...It not my decision It's Acchan ....However If Acchan Choose the Right Options....If Always Support Her...Even Thought She Aren't Akb48 after she Graduate ....But She is an Akb48 ....in History...T-T Acchan.....But Still DON't GRADUATE ACCHAN :angry1: :scolding:

I WILL SUPPORT YOU ACCHAN
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on March 26, 2012, 12:29:43 PM
Good Tomotomo moment
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on March 30, 2012, 02:08:23 AM
Hey Guys....This is the Final Chapter of the Game ....

@ kahem : Thank you for Supporting me and always Commenting my Fics

Same Chapter ~ Final Part Of THE GAME ( Part 3)


As they Rena Injured Arm....Team Atsumina Was Passing by the corridor and Found Them and start shooting them....They Hide behind the Wall and Locker and Shoot team Atsumina....

‘Hey that not Fair ‘ Takamina cover herself with her Bag
‘Yeah ....6 vs 2 is not Fair’ Acchan Shoot them
‘Who say we Team up ‘ Jurina Start shooting Tomochin
‘Ouchhh....owww’ Tomochin tried to Covered herself with her Hand
‘Tomochin ‘ Tomomi Helped her by shooting Jurina
‘ You guys going to be Red when you get back ‘ Rena say as she shoot Acchan with only one Gun on her hand
‘Shoot shoot ‘ Kumi Shoot Takamina as Anna was Helping Jurina Shoot the Tomo’s

Then Acchan Throw a Smoke Bomb and Accidently Hit Rena Head as Kumi saw the Bomb she drag Rena to back up ...They saw a Smoke Came out of the Bomb and Run to the Nearest Door ...Rena Pushed Everyone to go to the Door....

‘ACCHAN....It not a Pillow it is a Bomb...it Hurts ‘ Rena Yell at Acchan
‘Soorrry.....I over Throw...I think I didn’t Know my own Strength ‘ Acchan Bowed

As Everyone was already Run and Went to the Door ...But Rena did not have the Time to Run ...She make it Short by Hiding inside the Locker ...as the Smoke came through the Small Hole of the Locker ...That make Rena try to Get out of the Locker but the Locker door was Stuck ....

‘Why I did this Stupid Idea....Hiding inside a Locker that have a Hole on it...’ Rena say as she Kick the Locker Door to Open

Then the Smoke start to spread into the Whole Locker that make Rena Faint...As for the Team Who was inside the Room was Chatting ....Jurina Went out of the Room with her Hoodies Hook up and a Towel on her mouth ....She run toward a Window and Open it so that the Smoke can lead Out...Then went back to the Room and Wait for a Couple of Minutes...They were Chatting and Laughing then they realised they were Short of Member
 
‘Hey Guys...Who was not here ...I feel like we are short one person ‘ Jurina say as she Look Around
‘Yeah...I feel it Too ‘ Kumi say
‘ One , Two , Three ...Five ‘ Tomomi Count as she look around

They all think and look around the Room...

‘RENNNA....’ They Scream Rena name as they Realised that she was Missing

They Rush out from the Room and look around the Corridor ....Tomomi Order them to Search for Rena

‘ Kumi ...Anna search at the Lockers ‘ Tomomi Order the two
‘RENA...’ Anna and Kumi shout as they found Rena
‘Why the Heck you were in the Locker ‘ Tomochin say
‘Jurina can you carry Rena ‘ Tomomi say
‘Yes...of course she my Partner ‘ Jurina say
‘Good now Let get her Out of there ‘ Tomomi say
‘Tomomi ...you really care about Rena’ Anna say
‘Of course ...she like a Best friend to Me ‘ Tomomi say as she Smile to Tomochin
‘Aww...don’t be Jealous Tomochin ...you still be the First one ‘ Tomomi say as she leaned a Kiss to Tomochin
‘I know....and I’m Not Jealous ‘ Tomochin kiss back
‘Let move on....are you guys Going other Way or Join us ‘ Jurina say as she carry Rena
‘Maybe we will Join you....You short One members ...’ Tomochin say as she Nodded to Jurina
‘Thank you ‘ Jurina Smiled

As the five Walk to the Science Lab No.2 ( sorry I didn’t any Idea)....They Stand in front of the Lab Door

‘Why does the Box have to locate in a Spooky part of the School....’ Anna say as she sigh
‘Why are you sighing ....it not that spooky ‘ Tomochin say as she look at the three with a relax face
‘ Yeah...we are Mafia’s...We are Brave ‘ Jurina say as she Support the Two
‘Yeah....The Spirits can’t hurt us ‘ Anna Proudly say
‘ Yeah...Let Do it ‘ Kumi high Five with the Two youngest

As they wemt inside the Science Lab ...Jurina put Rena on the Bed inside the Science Lab....Then she went with Kumi and Anna to search for the Box at the Equipment Room inside the Science Lab as Tomomi and Tomochin went to the Chemical Room....They Left Rena who was still fainted alone at the Lab ....

The Equipment Room
 
Jurina , Kumi and Anna was Search for the Boxes ...they Tried the Cabinets , Locker , Drawers , tables and Even Inside a Boxes...They  Didn’t Found anything but still searching Harder....Then the Same Sound that happen in the Infirmary Room

“Tok Tok Tok.....Tok Tok Tok “

‘Rena is that you ‘ Jurina Shout
‘It is the Same Sound that Knocking the Infirmary Room..’ Anna Hug her own Body and Stand Still
‘It Getting Louder ‘ Kumi  say as Back up toward Anna
‘Guys let Ignore it...Put your Earphone On..Play some Song ’ Jurina say as she put her earphone

They Continued Search for the Boxes Fast....Jurina was Searching for the Boxes as Anna and kumi read some Project Files....Then A Different Sound

“Chang “(broken Glass)

A Broken Glass suddenly Appeared....They were Surprised and Saw a Monster Arm in Shadow shape....They Scream and took their Stuff and Run toward the room the Rena was being Laying ....They Scream Out loud and Jumped At the Bed that Rena was Laying and Hugged Rena while Closed their Eyes...

‘Rena....Pp-lea-se Waa-ke Uppp... ‘ Jurina say as she Shivering
‘Rena....although you are not Dead ....buu-ttt weee ne-eeed you to WAKE UP ‘ Anna say as she was Shivering and Shout as she Was Totally Scared
‘Oneechan ...I don’t want to Die...Good Bye Banana ‘ Kumi Cried as she Hug Tightly at Rena
‘J~u~r~i~n~a....A~nn~a...K~u~m~i....’ A scary Voice Called
‘Uhhhahhhh.....Mommy Saa-fe Me—ee ‘ Kumi Cried even Loud
‘ Ma-yu.....Mari-chan...’ Jurina Cried as she burned her face on Rena Shirt...
‘TOMOMI...TOMOCHIN...Help US’ Anna Shout as she Start to Cried Harder

As Anna Shout out loud....Tomomi and Tomochin Rushed to the Room and Saw The three Youngest Were Crying Hard ....They Run toward them and Hugged them....Tomochin Hugged Tightly to Jurina as Tomomi Hug Anna ....Kumi already Comfortable with Rena who was still Not awaken yet...Then a Couple of Minutes they Hugged Each Other....Tomochin Filled up a Glass off Tap water and Pour it on Rena Face ...

‘Woahh...What is that for’ Rena say as she Look at Tomochin
‘Wakey Wakey ...’ Tomochin say

As The three Youngest were still sobbing and Start to Cried back as they Went to Hugged Rena ...
The three Hugged Rena Tightly and Cried ...Rena Hugged them Tightly with a Confused Face

‘What happen with you three ‘ Rena say
‘Th-e same Thing ‘ Jurina Explain as she was Sobbing
 ‘The Window thing...’ Rena say as Jurina Nodded
‘It alright...I will never Leave you guys Alone’ Rena hugged them

Rena Hugged them Tightly ...Tomochin and Tomomi smiled as they Join the Four Hug together....As they were already Tired of Crying and Walking ...they went to the Clubroom....as they Arrived at the Clubroom they Saw team Atsumina was already asleep at the Couch ...then team Mayuki were sleeping on a Curtain sheet to cover the Dirty Floor...Mariko and Miichan didn’t Sleep yet...they were playing PSP with Haruna and Yuko...they were playing 2 vs 2 in Tekken 6 ...As they saw the youngest....Three of them were having Reds Eyes...like they were Crying for Hours....Then One of them were have a fist Wrapped with Bandage....and One of them were having a Red cheek being hit by someone...and One of them were having spots on her face....

‘What happen to you guys ‘ Yuko say
‘We Don’t want to talk about it ‘ The youngest Say
‘Talk with Us...If you ready to talk ....’ Haruna say
‘Now...go to sleep...You guys Look Tired ‘ Mariko say as she Throw a Pillow to shared

Rena was Sleeping in the Middle...Jurina and Kumi sleep beside her and Hug her as Anna hug Kumi...Tomomi and Tomochin were Sharing Each other Pillow....Mariko , Miichan , Haruna and Yuko were Joining Them To Sleep...

That It ...Sorry I don't really have anymore Idea but seek Forward at my Fics ....It going to be Interesting next Chapter ~~ :rofl:
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: yvet_951 on March 30, 2012, 07:38:04 AM
pleaseeeeeee update  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: MAYUKI  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: WMATSUI I LOVE RENA AND JURINA :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
THANKS FOR UPDATEEEEE
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: kahem on April 06, 2012, 07:54:53 PM
Hahahah Jurina, Kuumin and Anna are true chicken ahahah!
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on May 15, 2012, 02:54:27 PM
Sorry for keeping everyone waiting for the update but in a past few months / weeks I  have a little problem with my internet server so I won't be continued my Fanfic for a while but don't worry I will update it as soon as possible  !!


I have a School tests in two weeks I have to focus in studying ....

Chapter 7 : A Short Vacation

Hope you guys like the title of the chapter
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: pen-pen-chii on May 15, 2012, 03:44:19 PM
Excited for the next chapter~ (>w<)

Good luck with your tests~ (^w^)
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: chichay12 on May 24, 2012, 07:42:30 AM
i love this fic...!!
Pls update soon!
I cant wait!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on May 28, 2012, 02:39:13 PM
It been a long time since I update....So Sorry for the Late Update ...This is the Chapter

Chapter 7 :A Short Vacation
At Evening 5 PM

Everyone Already Packed Up and Ready to go home as They all Sleep over at the School having Breakfast and Lunch by Barbeque some Meat and Vegetables...They Start their Motorcycles and Car and Move to the Mansion ....

At the Mansion ...They Parked their Vehicles Neatly in the Garage...As They Drag their Stuff to the Living room and Rest ....Yuki , Rena and Tomochin and Tomomi Sat on the “L” Couch...As Jurina , Mayu , Anna and Kumi standing behind the Couch as they looked at Takamina and Acchan who was Standing in Front of the Flat screen Television ....Takamina Suggested to go the Akiba Private Beach Next as She Explained in a Long way as the 3 Youngest make a Confused face....
‘So Takamina say is....What’ Jurina say as she look at Acchan who was the one that understand what Takamina is saying
‘Yeah...We Don’t Understand a bit ..’ Kumi say as Anna Nodded
‘Youngster ...Acchan can you Please Explain to Them’ Mariko say as she sat on the Left Couch Beside the Stairs
‘Well What your Problem Mariko-sama’  Jurina say as she Look at Mariko
‘Well....Nothing ...Maybe you guys need to learn more about Something then Gaming’ Mariko say with a sigh
‘Guys...Don’t Fight Acchan want to Explain ‘ Tomochin say as she Continued making her Nails
‘Well....Takamina was say is We will be going to our Private Beach ...So Get Ready ‘Acchan say as Jurina and Anna High Five ..
‘Wait ...What..Get Ready ..’ Kumi say as she make a Confused Face again
‘Yeah Get Ready....’ Tomomi say as she look at Kumi
‘Oh...Get Ready ‘ Kumi say with Shock tone
‘You Such a Slow head Kumi ‘ Rena say as she look at Kumi
‘She Learn it for You Yuki’ Rena glared at Yuki
‘Heck...No She Learn From you Ren-a’ Yuki say as she glared at Rena
‘What...She learn from you ...Mom Side’ Rena cross her Arm
‘No ...It Dad Side ‘ Yuki cross her Arm as Head Butt Rena Head Slowly
‘Mom’ Rena say as their forehead met
‘Dad’ Yuki say as she Pushed Rena by Forehead
‘No...MOM’ Rena Pushed back
‘Dad ..you Little----‘ Yuki say as she Head Butt Rena Head Hard
‘Ouch....What your problem’ Rena say as she Rubbed her head
‘I Don’t have any Problem Now’ Yuki say as she Cross her Arm and Smile
‘Guys..Stop...’ Takamina say as the two Sit down Growled
‘Maybe Kumi learn it from the Both of You’ Takamina say as the both of them make a confused face
‘What the Heck ...Takamina ‘ Jurina say as she look at Takamina
‘Yeah....How can we Create a Slow head’ Yuki say
‘Well....Shy + Quiet = Slow’ Takamina Explained
‘What.....’ Anna say as she was Shock
‘Yeah...What the Heck Takamina’ Tomomi say as she Think
‘Well Rena was Shy and Yuki was Quiet that make Kumi was Slow because They didn’t Teach Kumi how to Explain’ Takamina say as she sat down
‘What ...We did teach Kumi how to Explained...Or it may be the Bananas ’Yuki and Rena say as she look at Kumi who was Eating Banana
‘Kumi...Don’t Eat Banana Again or you will be Slow head ‘ Yuki say as she pointed to the Banana
‘I Know Monkey Brain’ Rena say as Yuki passed the Banana to her
‘Monkey Brain’ Mariko say with a Weird Tone
‘Yeah..’ Rena say as she eat the Banana
 ‘Well...What wrong with Banana.....Ah....Rena-Oneechan My Last Banana’ Kumi Cried Out as she Saw Rena was eating her Banana
‘Ahh...Rena Don’t Eat ‘ Yuki Snapped the Banana as she saw Rena was Eating it
‘What ..I’m Hungry’ Rena say
‘Yeah Rena Right....Let have Dinner’ Tomochin Say as she already Finish making her Nails
‘Yeah...Want to go to a My Restaurant’ Miichan say as the other look at her
‘Wow...Who are you...You are not Miichan’ Mariko say as she look at Miichan
‘Well Miichan here ...Need To Show you guys Her New Restaurant that she ask me to help her with It...Well that was My Hotel and she was my Family so I Decided to help her as well’ Takamina say
‘I thought we are Going to the Beach next ‘ Mayu say
‘No...We are staying at my Hotel Next ‘ Takamina say
‘Yeah Mariko Right...It Rare to you ask us to come to your Restaurant’ Jurina say as she Hugged Mayu with a Hand on Her Neck and ignore Takamina
‘Well ..Now I’m Offering you Guys to my Restaurant ....Are you Accept it’ Miichan say as she look at Everyone
‘Before we Going Let packed up for clothes for the beach ...We going to Sleep at my Hotel’ Takamina Repeat her Answer as they All Run toward their Room and Packed...

‘Well...What are we Waiting for ...Let Go’ Acchan Say as the other stood up their Butt from the Couch...And Took their own Car Key as Kumi , Anna , Jurina and Mayu was lazy to Ride their Motorcycles...As Yuki was driving her Lamborghini Reveton with...Mayu in the Front seat, Rena and Jurina was on the Back seat...As For Takamina was Driving Her GMC Yukon Denali with Acchan, Tomochin , Tomomi , Miichan , Mariko , Anna and Kumi...As for Yuko and Haruna was Riding their own Mazda RX-8 who want a sweet moment just both of them..

As everyone was on board ..They Drive in Three and went to Takamina 5 Stars Hotel with Miichan 5 Stars Restaurant in it as they were on their Way to Tokyo ( As that was Their Location of Takamina Hotel )

1 Hours later

As they arrived at the Restaurant they parked at the Private Property at the Underground Parking Lot as they Parked their Car and Walked to the Lift as the lift only suit with 7 person only...as they Separated in two Groups....

As the First Group was Takamina , Miichan , Mariko , Tomochin , Tomomi , Jurina and Mayu
As the First Group was already left the Lift and The Second Group was Acchan , Yuki , Rena , Yuko , Haruna , Kumi and Anna..

As the Lift Arrived at the Level 5 Restaurant for the Richest , Richer , Rich People Only...As The Staff saw Them ...One of the Staff Lead the Way to their Private Room as the People Who was eating at the Restaurant Greet them Gently and Nicely as they Saw the family Member of The Owner....

As the Staff Open the Door to let them Enter the Private Room...as They Enter the Private Room..As Everyone was there Busy looking Around the Private Room....
There have a Arcade, Big Dining Room , A Karaoke set at the Living Room , A Room with 14 Beds , 3 Huge Bathroom , Indoor Pool  and even a Jacuzzi at the Balcony and Outdoor Couch...

As the others looked around the Hotel Private Room....Rena Sat at the “L” Couch as Kumi saw her sister were sitting and Not looking around the Room...She Join Rena as they both Look at each other and Hugged Happily...

‘Sorry for calling you Slow head Kumi-chan’ Rena say as she Hugged Kumi
‘ No worry ...Sorry for being Slow head ‘ Kumi say as she broke the hug and Look at Rena
‘Well...I know you are a Smart Girl but you Just Pretend to be stupid Like you don’t what Takamina was Talking about.. Right ? ‘ Rena say
‘How do you know I’m a Smart girl ‘ Kumi say as she was Surprised
‘Well...I didn’t forget about everything you know...I Remember I teach you Until you get 99% of all Subject but never get a Chance to beat my Score 100% ‘ Rena say as she Smile Widely
‘ I never need it to beat you Score Cause I Already Beat you  at Sit Up ‘ Kumi Laughed
‘ Stop Laughing...It not funny ‘ Rena Scold as she took a Pillow and Hide her face on it

‘Hey You guys Stop Fighting ...Come on let Eat ....Look like Yuki was Getting Weak ’Mayu say as she Pointed to Yuki who was Kneeling Down and make a Sad Face while Holding her Stomach

As Mayu say that ..Rena and Kumi Quickly look at Yuki who was Kneeling Down at the Floor and Even say the word “FOOD” ...As They Saw Yuki ..they two sisters went to Yuki and Pulled her Up to her Feet and Help her to the Dining Room..and Ask Yuki to sit at the Chair ....

As Everyone Finish Touring the Room and Went to the Dining Room ....Mayu was already Sat beside Yuki , Rena and Kumi ....As Jurina and  Anna was sitting beside Kumi ...Haruna , Yuko ,Tomochin , Tomomi , Mariko and Miichan sat in front of them and Takamina and Acchan was sitting in the end of the Dining Table... While Everyone already Sit Down...Miichan Ring a Bell and 7 Waiter with 2 Meals on his Hand and Putted the Meal in one person one Meal...With a 2 Big Jelly with a shape of a Gun and a Roses...

As they Thank for the Food and Rushed eat their own Meals.....A Roasted Chicken Leg with a Mushroom Sauce , Vegetables ....As for Rena Miichan Ask The Waiter to Make her a Salad Sandwich with a Vegetables full on the Plate...As Miichan know Rena didn’t Eat Meat...As Mariko Complained her Food

‘Why Rena Have a Vegetables Meal ...While we Have the Same Delicious Chicken Legs...’ Mariko say to Miichan as Everyone can hear it
‘Well...Ask Takamina ..She Know It All’ Miichan say as Mariko looked at Takamina
‘Why the Heck I Have to Answer It’ Takamina Say To Miichan
‘Well You the Doctor ‘ Miichan say as she Continued Eating
‘As You can See Rena Technically Have A Serious Problem with the fatty Acids Stuff   ‘ Takamina Explained
‘Don’t Say it in a Science Explanation Takamina’ Mayu and Anna say as they Looked at Takamina with a Mad Eye
‘Well...Takamina was Saying was Rena is Allergic to Meat and Alcohol...’ Yuki say as she looked at everyone
‘What RENA ALLERGIC TO MEAT’ As Everyone was Surprised that she Can’t Eat the “Fatty Acids Stuff”
‘and Alcohol’ Rena say
‘That we already Know ...But MEAT we Didn’t ‘ Tomochin say as Tomomi Nodded
‘Well ...I Think I Know That Tell your Guys about my Allergic of Alcohol ‘Rena say with a Evil Glared to Yuki
‘Ehh...What Do you Think I Told Them About Your Allergic’ Yuki say as she Eat the Meat
‘Well...I know Takamina won’t Tell because she the One that ask me to Don’t Tell Anyone except Kumi , You and Jurina Only...I know Kumi won’t ....Jurina Won’t either....So It was You’ Rena say as she Pointed to Takamina to Kumi and To Jurina Then she look back to Yuki
‘Fine...I Won’t Lie...Yes I Told Them ...Accidently told Them....’ Yuki say
‘She Didn’t Accidently Told Us ...’ Tomochin and Tomomi say
‘YUKI.....’ Rena Yell with a Evil Smile and Glared
‘Ah...Gotto Run ..’ Yuki say as she Stood up from her Chair and Run to the Arcade
‘YUKI’ Rena shout as she Stood Up too and Chased Yuki
‘Rena ‘ Jurina Run to catch up with Rena
‘ Oneechan ‘ Kumi say as she Run toward the Arcade with Anna following Her

As everyone Laughed to Them.
‘ Hey Guys ...You shouldn’t Be running after Dinner’ Acchan say
‘Yeah...you guys will had Stomach Ache Later ‘ Takamina Shout
‘Hey Mayu you didn’t Join them’ Mariko say
‘No ...I’m Hungry ‘ Mayu say as she Eat Yuki Chicken Leg

As the 5 Member play Hide and Seek like a 5 year old Children....As the Other  9 already Finished Eating and Clean them self at the Huge Bathroom with a Tub big as Pool....As the 5 member at the Arcade Playing Games..As Acchan , Takamina , Tomomi , Tomochin , Mariko and Miichan were Going to the Club at Upper Level ....as the Underage stay at the Room....Before they leaving Acchan and Takamina Advised Rena and Yuki

‘Hey You Guys...Can you Watched the Youngest ...We Don’t Want them to go to the club and Get Drank ..’ Acchan say as she Pushed Takamina Out of the Door..
‘Hey Wait...’ Yuki say as Acchan and Takamina Look Around
‘What ...Any Questions’ Takamina say
‘Yeah...Do I and Rena can go to the Club if the Youngest is already asleep’ Yuki say
‘Sure....But look like Someone is already Run for Going to the Club with You’ Acchan say as she Pointed to the Empty Spot next to Yuki
‘Ehh....RENA ..can you Just Send me to the Club ‘ Yuki Shouted Rena name and Ask Rena
‘No...You Know I Hate the Place’ Rena say as she walked next to Yuki
‘Yes...I Know and You Allergic to Alcohol Too but can you Send me to the Swimming Pool Area or the Front Door of the Club...’ Yuki say as Rena Make a Shock Face
‘Heck No.....Remember what Acchan say I have to Check the Youngest Member ...’ Rena say as she look at Yuki
‘Well..Please ‘ Yuki say as Hugged Rena tightly
‘Wait ...Why Me...Mayu Here You ask her’ Rena say as She Pushed Yuki Face From her Face
‘Oughh...She Underage Come on Please or I’ll Kiss You...I can Do It and I Will’ Yuki say as her Face is Closer and Closer To Rena
‘Oh No ...Not the Kiss...Fine ...I’ll take you but Only at the Pool Area’ Rena say as Yuki Kiss Rena Cheek
‘Arghh...Not the Kiss...Let Go ‘ Rena say as she Pushed Yuki face
‘What we were Sisters ...I can Kiss you as I Pleased’ Yuki say as She Walked to the Lift With Rena
‘Yeah...I Know But you can’t Just Kiss me Everywhere You want...’ Rena say as she Glared to Yuki
‘Well...Kumi Comfortable with It’ Yuki say as she Walked out of the Lift
‘Well...She Love you...’ Rena says
‘Why You didn’t love me’ Yuki say as They Stopped at the Swimming Pool
‘I Love you but sometime I wanted to Ignore You’ Rena say as she kiss Back Yuki at the Cheek
‘I Know you Love Me’ Yuki say as she Walked to the Club Guard
‘Don’t Get Back Drank’ Rena say as she Walked Away

As Yuki Stopped at the Club Guard as the Club Guard Saw Yuki...He Greet Nicely and Let her In Easily as the Other Stranger Wait for the Line..

Rena get Into the Room  and saw Mayu , Jurina , Kumi and Anna at their Bed...Rena Smile and went to the Bathroom as she took a Long Hot Bath....Jurina , Mayu , Kumi and Anna look at Rena as she locked the bathroom Door ...They Stood Up From their Bed and Put Their Hotel Cuddle Pillow under their Sheet and Secretly Went Out of the Room ....As Rena went Out of the Bathroom after Shower and Look at the Bed that been Cover by Sheet with a Silence ...

As Rena thought that the Youngest might been Snoring by Now...But They Didn’t ....Rena Took off the Sheet and Found a Cuddle Pillow Every Sheet the Cover were the Same....Rena Dress up her Green Jersey with a Logo “ Rena 1 “ On the Back ....She Wore her Black Skinny Jeans and a Brown Knee Boots.. and Went to Search for the 4 Youngest...

Rena search for the 4  Youngest....At the Lobby , Restaurant , Gym ,Big Arcade ,Outdoor Park , Indoor Park ...Swimming pool and the Last Place that she Hate

‘The Club ...I Shouldn’t Have Known it ....It a Waste of time that I Run all over the Hotel Section ...’Rena say as she Took a Long Breath and Walked Quickly to the Club Guard

‘Oh...Miss Rena You Shouldn’t Be Here’ The Club Guard say as Rena Nodded
‘I Know ...But you see Miss Jurina , Mayu , Kumi and Anna’ Rena say as The Guard Shock
‘No...I Haven’t See One of them Either....But here if you want to check Inside’ the Club Guard Give Rena a VIP Pass
‘Thanks ‘ Rena say as The Guard Bowed

As Rena walked Inside the Club as she Hold her Allergic ....She Walked toward the Bartender and Ask for Coke Drinks for One

‘One Coke Please ..’ Rena say as the Bartender Pour a Coke and Give it to Rena
‘Where are those Guys’ Rena Took a Sip and Look around the Crowd of People Dancing , Drinking ,chatting even Kissing...

‘Hey Mayu...Look like this Club Awesome’ Jurina say as Kumi and Anna Followed Mayu and Jurina From behind and was about to  Sat next to Rena as Rena Stood Up with a Glass of Coke on her hand and Went to the Back bar Section

‘There they are but I can’t stop them but rushed to hit Them....Hey You’ Rena say as she Yelled to the Bartender
‘Yes...can I help you’ the Bartender ask
‘Yes...can you see the Four Girls there....If they Ask for Alcoholic Drink just Give them Coke...Please here some Tips ‘Rena asked the Bartender as she Give him a Money Tips     
‘If it is For Money ...Done’ The Bartender agreed

‘Hey...4 Beer ‘ Jurina say as the Bartender give them their Drinks in a Glass

As the Four Youngest took a Sip of their Drink and Complained to the Bartender

‘Hey this not Beer this is Coke’ Jurina say to the Bartender
‘Sorry Someone Give me a Tip to Give you a Coke’ The bartender say as she Pointed to empty Spot that Rena sit

Rena Know that Jurina will  Notice the Drinks ...she walked to the Dancing Area ...and Hide her Self in the Crowd...As the 4 Search for the one that Give tips to Bartender so that the Bartender Didn’t Allowed them to have Beer or Other Drinks than Coke...

The Four Move to the Dancing Area to have Fun....As the Dancing like a Sexy Girl in Stage....As Jurina Dancing Around and saw Some look Familiar at the Club and Ask the Other to check it Up
As Rena didn’t Comfortable at the Dancing Area She went back to the Bartender and Ask for a Glass of Coke again...As the Bartender Pour the Coke to the Glass and Accidently pour a Little bit Vodka  went Rena was looking at the Dancing Area ....And Give the Glass to Rena who was Sitting there Staring to Something

‘You have a Problem Miss’ The Bartender say
‘Yeah...Kind of’ Rena say as she Took a Sip of the Coke
‘Go have Fun’ The Bartender say
‘No...Never mind’ Rena say as she Stared at the Bartender making a Cocktail

As Rena was Talking to the Bartender ....Jurina and The other 3 Searching for Someone suddenly They Stop at the Entrance of Dancing Area and Saw Rena

‘Is That Rena-chan’ Jurina say to Kumi
‘Well...I Don’t Know...But Rena Never Go to the Club Before ‘ Kumi say
‘ If she is not Rena... Why she Wearing Rena Archery Jersey’ Anna Pointed to the Logo Behind the Jersey
‘That Rena Jersey...and That is Rena’ Mayu say as she look at Jurina
‘Wait...What is Rena Drinking ‘ Jurina say as she look Properly
‘ She Never Drink Beer or Other Alcohol Drinks...She Allergic to the Thing’ Kumi say
‘Come on Let go meet Rena There’ Jurina say as Mayu , Kumi and Anna Followed Her
‘Well...well...Well...Look what we Got Here ....Little Miss Rena who Doesn’t Drink’ Jurina say as they Sat next to Rena
‘It Coke ...Not a Beer like you guys just Order’ Rena say
‘Oh ....That was You ‘ Mayu say
‘Yeah...You Guys make me Run all over the Hotel...’Rena say with Emotionless Tone
‘What you Searching For Us’ Kumi say as Rena Evil Glared to Kumi
‘Yes...And If Acchan and Takamina Knows ...We Died....’ Rena say as she Finish her Coke  and Walked toward the Exits
‘ Oh....Yeah If you Guys Finish Get back soon ‘ Rena say as she Give the Club Guard The VIP Pass and Run toward the Stairs...as she Get to the Room as Soon as Possible as she Know that the Coke Taste alcohol a little Bit....She Washed her Face as she Saw her face was Red as she felt her Forehead and It was Burning like a Fire...she Wore her Black Jacket and Even Change Her Skinny into Boarding Shorts and Run toward her Bed and Cover herself Under the Bed Blanket and Bed Sheet ....She Cover her Face in the Sheet and Close her Eyes...

As a Couple of Hours ...

Acchan and Takamina Found Mayu , Jurina , Kumi and Anna at the Club Dancing ....so they Brought the Youngest back to The Room as Tomochin , Tomomi , Mariko ,Miichan and Yuki were Karaoke at their Private VIP Room...

As Acchan And Takamina Scolded at them at the Living room...Jurina , Mayu , Kumi and Anna Sat at the “L” Couch and Heard Takamina and Acchan Scolded at them...as they Make a an Believable Face to the Two Leader

‘You Guys Shouldn’t Sneak Out of this Room’ Takamina Scolded them
‘You Know You Guys are Underage and Not allowed to go to the Club ‘ Acchan say
‘Well I’m 18 ‘ Mayu say as She looked at Acchan
‘Well ....You Still in School Mayu ‘ Acchan say as Mayu cross her Arm
‘And where is Rena ‘ Takamina say as she look Around
‘Well...A Hours ago Rena at the Club Searching for Us ..Then She Went Back ‘ Mayu say as she was the Older of the 4 Youngest
‘Wait...What ...I’m Hearing thing that Rena went to the Club ‘ Takamina say
‘No .....And Yes Rena Went to the Club’ Jurina says
‘Oh No.....’ Takamina Run to her Bag and Took out a Packed of Allergic Pills in case for Emergency and Went Beside Rena and Wake Rena Up

As Rena Was Up and Sit Up on her Bed and Ask Takamina

‘What Wrong is there something Wrong’ Rena say Weakly
‘Yes....Here Eat This Quickly’ Takamina Hand over the Pills
Rena Took the Pills and Look at the Youngest

‘Did you Guys was Founded by Takamina and Acchan’ Rena say as they Nodded
‘Thank Goodness ...Your Allergic is Slowing Down ‘Takamina say
‘Did you Drink some Alcohol ‘ Acchan say
‘No...But the Coke Taste Weird’ Rena say as she Lay down back
‘Coke ...Maybe the Bartender Accidently pour some Alcohol ‘ Takamina say
As the 4 Youngster Stared at Takamina and Acchan ...
‘As for you 4 ...GO TO BED NOW’ Acchan say as the 4 Run to their Own Bed and  Close their Eyes....
‘We Will be Watching you Guys’ Takamina say as she Ask her Bodyguard to Guard the Front Door of the Private Room...

As the 4 ...Can’t Help it to stay at the Room....They Sleep on their Own Bed....As they Fall Asleep for a Few hours till 6 A.M...Rena Woke Up and Went to the Bathroom to Wash her Face and Change her Clothes...She took off her Black Jacket and Wore her Green Sleeveless Hoodies and over her Jersey and Change Back into her Skinny Jeans and Wore back her brown knee high Boots and took her White IPhone....

She went out of the Room and Went to the Outdoor Swimming Pool Area and Sat at one of the Bench near Pool...and Look at the Sky Full of Stars ....She Stared one by one of the Stars and Smile Widely...

‘What Happen if the Ambulance didn’t Come to save me ....Did they still can Forgive me or Not..’Rena Thought to herself and Sighed
‘Look Like It a Wonderful Night’ She Say to herself and look at the Sky

As Rena relax herself and stood Up and Walked to their Room and Packed her Stuff Quickly and Quietly as the youngster Were Sleeping ...She Went to the Lobby and Stop a Taxi In the Entrance of the hotel

‘Akiba Mansion Please’ Rena say to the Driver
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: xxx220 on November 07, 2012, 11:41:28 AM
I Know it been a long time since I continued writing this Fics....but I got so confided that I will continued Writing this fics....

Please Enjoy ....Sorry for my bad words and spelling ....I hope you like it...I stop writing because I didn't know how to write the ending


Chapter 8 : Old Enemy

As Rena waited to Arrived at their Mansion ....Rena took out her Iphone and Message Kumi 
As The taxi stopped in Front of Mansion ...as Rena stood Out of the Taxi and Was about to Pay the Man ...the Taxi took off as Rena Shouted

‘Hey....The Money...I guess It free ’ Rena say

As Rena put back the Money on her Pocket and Walked toward the Mansion Door ...but suddenly a Group of Yankee Girls and Mafia Girls Walked to the Akiba Family Territory Mansion with a Steel Pipes and Wooden Stick and Even one of Them brought a Real Katana to Prove that their group were the best ...

Rena Stood in the Middle as the Group Build a Circle Around Rena

‘What do you Guys Want with Me ‘ Rena say as she was about to Pull out her Glock 18
‘We Want Revenge for Zakarune family for a Few Years Ago.’ One of the Mafia Girl say as she Pointed a Gun to Rena
‘You took for Years to took Revenge on US ‘ Rena say as She Kick the Gun off the Girl Hand and Swing a Fist on the Girl Face
‘ Yeah...Come and Get it’ Rena say as she Kick and Punch the Enemy
‘You Shouldn’t Be so happy first’ A Girl Hit her With a Steel Pipe on her Head
‘Ouch.....you Shouldn’t Do that Too’ Rena say as she Throw a Several Punch on the Girl face
‘ Die ...’ One of the Girl Almost Shoot Rena but Luckily Rena Dodge

As Rena grabbed the Steel pipe that on the Floor and Hit the Enemy ....As Rena Was About to become Crazy of Hitting People ...One of the Mafia Shot Rena on her Arm...as Rena Scream as loud as she Can...

‘Arghhh....Arghhhh...’ Rena Shout out loud as she Didn’t think that she can Hold the Pain To long....
‘Shut Up Akiba ‘ One of the Mafia Girl Kicked Rena Face
‘How dare you kick my Face Arghh..’ Rena say as she Spilled out the Blood that was on her mouth
‘You Think your Face is Prettier than Mine....Heck No’ The Girl Say
‘COMEBACK....Let make her Suffer of Pain’ Their Comrades Asked the Girl
‘That a Good Idea...GUYS TIED HER UP AND HOLD HER BLOOD FROM LOSING’ Comeback Shout to her Gang

As they Tied Rena with a Hard Rope...As they Tied a Clothes in Rena Arm Carefully..

‘ARGGHHH....THAT HURTS YOU IDIOTS’ Rena yell to the Mafia Girl
‘SHUT UP....As if I Care’ Comeback Punch Rena on her Stomach
‘Argghh...Oww..That My Word ’ Rena Replied
‘The Word that you Said to my Family Members ...’ Comeback Said
‘So ...You the Last Brat that Alive in that Weakling Family ‘ Rena Said as she Laughed
‘You Bitch ...”PAK” ‘ Comeback said as she Slap hard Rena Face

As They Finished Tied Rena ....Comeback and her Troops Punch , Kick and Hit Rena with Steel Pipes and Wooden Stick
‘You are a Weak Person for Akiba’ Comeback say as she hit Rena with a Steel Pipe on Rena Back ..
‘Coward~~.....You th-e one – wh-o was- we-ak Idio-ts’ Rena say weakly as she Cough of Blood
‘What did ya say...’ Comeback say as she offer her Ear
‘I say you ar-e a Arghh....Cowa-rd’ Rena say
‘ SHUT UP’ Comeback Shouted to Rena as she Kick Rena Face
‘I Will Come Back for a Rematch...ZAKARUNE’ Rena said before she get Beat Up

As Rena Suffer a lot of Punching , Kicking and Hitting....She Can’t Hold her Pain and Everything Gone Blurred and Fainted

As the Zakarune Outsider Mafia left Rena in the Bushed Next the Mansion Entrance with a Blood lead to Rena Fainted Body ...

As for the Akiba Family member were Packing their Stuff and Ready to head back Home....As they was About to Start their Car Engine...

‘Hey...How about we took some Foods at the Restaurant ....Maybe We can Fill up Our Stomach on the Way Home...’ Takamina suggest as Everyone nodded
‘How About Rena’ Haruna Asked
‘She Could Survive with her Gekikara Fried Rice’ Tomochin said

As they Head back inside and Went to the Restaurant and Sit down on a Normal table like a Normal Guest as Kumi , Anna , Mayu and Jurina Steal a lots of Bread , Fruits and Even chicken Sausages and put in on Big Plastic bag that they Hide inside Their Bag ....In case they Hungry ...

As Takamina and Acchan Saw them Stealing a Packed Bread and Fruits ...They Chased the 4 Youngest as Miichan laughed Happily...

‘Hey Guys...You are Going to Scared the Guest Around Here....And Don’t Worried There will be More that came From..’ Miichan say

As Takamina , Acchan , Jurina , Mayu ,Anna and Kumi Stopped Running and Took some food and Hit back to the Parking Lot ....As Yuki , Tomomi , Tomochin , Mariko , Yuko and Haruna was at the Parking Lot Ready to Hit back Home....

As they Move back Home.....They Went Straight to the Garage and Parked their Car inside It...and Took their Stuff and Walked to the Main Entrance as Kumi and Anna Scream out Loud as they Saw Blood

‘Hey You Two what happen Here’ Takamina say as she was Worried about the two Youngest
‘Loo-ook...Bl-ood’Anna say as she Pointed the The Puddle of Blood
‘How Come they were Blood at the Entrance Door too’ Mayu say
‘Mafia...’ Haruna say as she Pointed to a Few Bullet on the Entrance Door
‘ Look Takamidget...it look like the Blood is tracking Somewhere’ Yuko say as Jump on Takamina  and Pointed to the Blood

As Yuko say that....Kumi Followed the Blood and End on the Bushed and Saw Rena Fainted Body and Scream out loud

‘AHHHHHHHHH........Oneechan ‘Kumi Scream as she pushed Rena With her Leg
‘Ehh...Rena-chan’ Jurina say as she Help Kumi Dragged Rena out of the Bushes to the Entrance
‘Rena....What Happen to you....’ Yuki Say with a Panic Voice
‘Yuki.....Relax ....Here some Water’ Mayu say as she Handed Yuki a Bottle of Water

As Yuki Accept Mayu Water and pour the Water on Rena face to Wake her up as Mayu was Surprised that she Saw her Water being Use to wake someone up

‘Ahh....You Use my Water...That I Brought for You’ Mayu say
‘Well ...you can Buy me a Huge One ....For Emergency Panic Drink’ Yuki say as she Smile to Mayu
‘Hrmm....She Didn’t Even Brought that....She Steal it at the Restaurant’ Jurina and Anna say as they Smile Evilly to Mayu
‘And Maybe you Brought it yourself if you want to give it to me’ Yuki say as she Wake Rena up

As Rena Didn’t Wake up ....Jurina was Lazy to Wait Until Rena was Up....She Shake Rena Several time that make Rena Yelled Stop

‘STOPPPPP....JURI-NA  ST-OPP ‘ Rena Shout out loud as Jurina Keep Shaking her
‘Rena ...Finally you awake’ Jurina say
‘Arghhh....Awww my arm’ Rena say as she took off the Clothes that the Mafia tied on her Arm
‘RENAAA....Your Arm is Bleeding ‘ Acchan Shouted to Rena
‘Acchan Could you Please Stop Over Acting about Arm is Bleeding ‘Takamina say as Jurina , Anna and Kumi nodded
‘Could We Do this Inside....Because I have a Bad Felling about Mariko Going to break all my Vases at the Garden’ Kumi say as she pointed to Mariko who was Sitting at the Garden table
‘Yeah....Mari-chan Look like Bored ‘ Yuko said as she Carried Haruna bags as Haruna was Busy Playing her Nintendo DS

As Jurina Carried Rena Inside while the other Followed Them with their Bags...As Jurina Helped Rena Remove the Bullet from her Arm in their Room Bathroom...As Acchan and Takamina was at the Study Room watching the CCTV ....Tomochin was Cleaning her Pink Porsche Car... as For Tomomi was Sitting under the Shaded at the Pool Area Playing Ipad Apps...As for Kumi and Anna was Swimming at the Pool....Yuko and Haruna was making Lunch for Everyone ....Yuki and Mayu Went to the Kumi Supermarket as they Know they will get Free at Kumi Market....

As they Arrived at Kumi Market...The Two cut the Line as the Costumer Give them in front of Him..They asked the new cashier to pick their usually Stuff...as the Cashier Rushed to the Store and Collect the usual List...as in a couple of Minutes ....Yuki and Mayu thank the Cashier and Left the market and Went Back to the Mansion....

As they Arrived at the Mansion...~~

Yuki Parked her Car in the Garage and Went straight to the Kitchen and give the Ingredient to Haruna and Yuko who was Pretty Busy Cooking Haruna Special Fried Rice....as Yuko helped Haruna...

‘Haruna....Can you put a little more Spices’ Yuko complained
‘No ...Yuko.... You know Jurina Hate Hot stuff ‘ Haruna say
‘Ohh...Pleaseee’ Yuko say as she Hugged Haruna from the Back
‘Yuko...Not now....I’m Cooking....Fine Just a Little’ Haruna say
‘Yeyy....Love you’ Yuko Kiss Haruna
‘Arr.....Lo-ve you too I guess’ Haruna say as she Put a little Spices

As Yuko went to the Living Room and Join Mayu watching TV

At W Matsui Room ~~
 
Jurina was Helping Rena Removing the Bullet from Rena Arm....

‘Here Bite This...it may be Hurt a little bit ‘ Jurina say as she Handed a towel
‘Hah...Why I have to Bite this Towel’ Rena say confused
‘ Well you may Scream like you been Torture By Me ‘ Jurina say
‘Hah...What that Mea-‘ Rena say as Jurina Put the Towel into Rena Mouth
‘Just hold the Pain a little Longer Ok ‘ Jurina say as she kiss Rena on her Cheek and Start Removing the Bullet the Hard Way
‘ARGHHHHHHHH’ Rena Scream out loud as she forget to bite the Towel
‘Just a Little Bit....’ Jurina Say to Rena who was Busy screaming of Pain
‘ Arghhh...It hurts....Slowly Jurina ‘ Rena say to Jurina
‘If you ask to Remove it Slowly it will Hurt then this.....That why I making it Faster.....DONE’ Jurina say as she Sit down on the Floor
‘Ouch...that Hurts ‘ Rena say as she Took a Towel
‘I Won’t Hurts went you Stopped getting Shot all the Time...at the Same Arm as Yesterday’ Jurina Scolded to Rena
‘I Know....I Know....Hey Give me Some Water to wash out this Blood ‘ Rena asked Jurina
‘No....Wait here in the Tub I will be Right Back ..’ Jurina say as she Left the Bathroom
‘Hey....JURINA.....’ Rena Shout as Jurina Left the Room

Jurina Went to the Kitchen and Took out some Big Packet of Ice pack and ask Kumi and Anna who was Finishing their Swimming ...to help her Carried the big packet of Ice pack to Jurina Room..

‘What are you planning Jurina with this Ice Packs’ Anna Asked as they Climb up the Stair to the corridor
‘You will see ‘ Jurina Open her room door as the two can Dropped the Ice packs inside the Bathroom
‘Ehh...Rena-chan’ Anna say as she put down the Ice Pack
‘Ehhh....She Asleep in the Tub as just a couple of Second I Ask her to Wait ‘ Jurina Whispered
‘I Guess She Really Tired getting Beat Up ‘ Kumi say
‘Guys....Look at This....’ Jurina say

Jurina Pick up one of the Ice Packs and Open it with her Knife and pour all the Ice on Rena Body as Rena Surprised wake up from the Coldness of the Ice..

‘Arghh....It Cold ..Jurina-chan ...what are you doing ‘ Rena Scold to Jurina
‘Ohh....Jurina you making a Ice Bath for Rena ...I see’ Kumi say
‘Yeah....Help me with the other Two Packs’ Jurina say as Kumi and Anna Nodded

As the Three pour the Ice out of the Packs into the tub and Asked Rena

‘Hey...Maybe we should tied one of her Hand to the Towel Hanger’ Anna suggest as she Took out of a Rope
‘Good Idea Anna-chan’ Kumi Agree with Anna as the two tied One of Rena Hand to the Towel Hanger as Jurina just Laughed
‘Rena-chan ...Wait In there as I Come Back a Few Minutes later if you want your injured Arm and Body to be Fine ‘ Jurina say as she wash up her Hand and Left the Bathroom with Kumi and Anna..
‘No...You Guys Let me GO....IT COLD AND YOU ARE TORTURING ME  ‘ Rena Shouted at the three as they Left the Bathroom

As the Two went to their Room and left Jurina at the living room Joining Mayu and Yuki watched a Weather Broadcast as Mayu start to get boring watching the Channel that Yuki Change as Yuko and Haruna asked Jurina

‘What the Heck was That’ Yuko asked
‘Oh Just Giving Rena a Ice Bath’ Jurina said
‘Remember to let her Out ‘ Haruna Advice Jurina

Haruna and Yuko went back to the Kitchen

‘Arghh...this is Bored ‘ Mayu Growled as Yuki Glared to Her
‘What is Bored ...it Fun watching this ‘ Yuki say as she Pointed to the TV
‘Aww...Jurina what are you doing inside your Room’ Mayu asked Jurina
‘Well...just making Rena-chan a Ice Bath ‘ Jurina say as she Smile Evilly
‘...You Doing the Ice Bath Trick again’ Yuki say as she Change the Channel
‘Hey that my Line...’ Mayu say
‘Whatever.....You Know Jurina you should have make a New Trick to Rena ‘ Yuki say as Mayu and Jurina Shock
‘Since When did you Interest in Jurina Tricks’ Mayu said
‘I will after Rena is Fully recover her Memories First then she didn’t Know My New trick was’ Jurina explained as she Wait the Anime Channel that Yuki change for Mayu...
‘Well ...Poor Rena-chan ...How was is she Doing ‘ Mayu say
‘She Fine...it so hard to remove the Bullet from her Arm ...’ Jurina say
‘Well...Rena is Strong that why it Hard to Remove a Bullet From her Arm..you Remember before the Time she Lost her memories that she Got Shot..’ Yuki explained to Jurina about Rena Situation 
‘Yeah....that She Scream as I get Back ‘ Jurina say as she watched the Anime with Mayu
‘Wow...Me and Kumi tired to Clean her Wound for half an Hour’ Yuki said and Watched the Anime 

As they Watched the Anime in Half an Hour ...Jurina Forget about Rena who was in the Tub full of Ice..Luckily Yuki asked

‘Hey Jurina ...how long do you think Rena will be Out of the Tub’ Yuki asked Jurina
‘Oh...No...RENA-CHAN’ Jurina Shouted Rena Name  as she run quickly to their Room
‘Jurina.....What Happen ‘ Yuki say as she run to Jurina and Rena room while Mayu walked to the room
‘Rena-chan’ Mayu sing while Climb up the stairs

As Jurina , Yuki and Mayu arrived at the Bathroom ....and saw Rena was fall asleep in a Tub full of cold Ice

‘Rena-chaan WAKE UP ....’ Jurina Say to Rena and Shake Rena forward and Backward
‘Ju-ri-Na –Ch-an  is Co-ld...’ Rena say
‘Jurina Stop Shaking Rena....and Put her Some new Clothes‘ Yuki say as she Untied the Rope

Jurina carried Rena on her Back and Help Rena Change into her England T-shirt and her Black Short ...Jurina handed Rena Black Jacket and as Rena Lend down on her Bed ...Jurina Cover Rena Body with Rena Blanket and Smile at Rena ....As she Left the Room with Yuki and Mayu...

‘I Think you Over did it ...’ Yuki said Simply
‘She Frozen...You Should Cuddle her’ Mayu said as she Hugged Yuki
‘Let her Rest ...’ Jurina said

As Jurina didn’t Want to Interrupt Rena...She went downstairs and Search for a Good Movies...as she Open the Drawer on the Coffee Table...and Found a Akiba Memories video ...and decided to watch back the video...The Video was Recorded by Our Technology Producer ...Matsui Rena.....She Play the video...the Video Start with a Introduction of the Family member then the Real Happy Mafia Family of all

As Kumi , Anna and Mayu heard Some Laughing Sound ...they Decided to Went Downstairs and Join Jurina...as all the Akiba Family were asleep....Only the Four Youngest didn’t Sleep...
They Watched the Video with a Laughter , Happiness , Enjoyable and Even Sadness....But since Mariko , Miichan , Yuko and Haruna Move to Tokyo for 6 Months...Akiba Family become Unstable with Happiness , Enjoyable emotion and Even laughter ...Akiba Family Become More and More to Sadness , Bored and Madness...But Now the Akiba Family Turn back into the Happiness Mafia Family ever...And the Strongest of all.

Mayu , Jurina , Kumi and Anna Watched the Scene went Mariko , Miichan , Yuko and Haruna are Leaving to Tokyo....all of the Youngster Cried as she Remember the Memories of Akiba Family Happy Time..

As the three went to their Room...Leaving Jurina Alone at the Living room....As Jurina was Still watching The Video and Suddenly fall Asleep on the Couch without Closing the Video off...




That All for Chapter 8 ....Wish me luck for keeping Updating my fics...Hope you guys like it
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: JuRikki on November 07, 2012, 12:50:06 PM
uwaaaah, you comeback!!  :cow:

and this chapter is so great!!
but, it's not the end, eh?

thank you  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
Post by: Megumi on November 15, 2012, 09:28:05 PM
 :shocked You updated!
 :ptam-glow:

Always exiting to read your fic
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow: