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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: XxRoByNxX78 on March 27, 2012, 07:02:27 PM

Title: After you left TEASER
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on March 27, 2012, 07:02:27 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jjw8XkaEwUI&feature=player_detailpage#t=52s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jjw8XkaEwUI&feature=player_detailpage#t=52s)

After you left

TEASER

He died he left me how could he?

Ive got no one why why did he leave me?
Why did my brother have to die?
You coudnt it have been someone else?
You left me i will never forgive you!

I have to stay with some strangers i dont know because of you!
I was bullied for not having a mum or a dad but i always had you!

Now your gone I HATE YOU!
You said it would always be me and you your  a liar!

I have to live with a family called the Harunas!
I cried at your funeral i said that i was sad your gone!

I HATE YOU!
YOU LEFT!

end of teaser

so i had an idea for a story not sure though if you all would like it so

if would i could sort of use ur feedback on if it was good and if i should continue

thanks for reading

Title: Re: After you left TEASER
Post by: farquhar97 on March 27, 2012, 08:24:15 PM

Yer its good I would do it :)

Title: Re: After you left TEASER
Post by: qweakb on December 28, 2012, 06:17:04 PM

just write out your idea.. XD

Title: Re: After you left TEASER
Post by: saeyukilover on December 28, 2012, 07:36:20 PM

i would love this for kojiyuu....

Title: Re: After you left TEASER
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on December 29, 2012, 11:23:42 PM

This is a KojiYuu story right?


Please make it a KojuYuu if i ain't a KojiYuu story :D

Title: Re: After you left TEASER
Post by: cisda83 on January 09, 2013, 02:09:45 AM

Interesting teaser there...

I like the song too... who is it...?

Well the 'you' here is it the mother.... coz' in the teaser MV... it looks that way...

So this main character going to live in Haruna family....

This Haruna is Kojima Haruna... seem to be unclear.... so still a mystery....

But it seems to be a good start there.... Please make the fic.... Thank you

Can't wait to see the real chapter coming on.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: After you left TEASER
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 09, 2013, 03:06:56 AM

you have my full attention :)
It seems like it will be an interesting story
Keep writing!!