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Title: Because...I Love You Chapter 3(part1) April 28, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 06, 2012, 10:02:08 AM
Hi! :wave:
I'm new here, well not actually, but this is my first time posting something...
I tried to write an AKB48 fiction...
It came from a manga that i have read...
Hope you like it... :grin:



PROLOGUE

They say it’s a paradise for the purest maidens. An elementary through high school level school, Lotus Girl’s Academy. Beautiful and pure girls grow up here and receive an ideal education. Young girls devote themselves here to become women of high virtues and ideals.

And this...

    "This is it...huh..."
    "This is my new high school..."

...is the story of one exchange student who transferred here.



well?
can you guess the pairing?

 :kneelbow: Dōmo arigatōgozaimashita

Thank you for reading the prologue..
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: yukofan on April 06, 2012, 11:16:39 AM
YAY! new fanfic..
i can't guess the pairing because akb has many pairings and the prologue is too short LOL

i'm waiting for the chapter 1
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Flean on April 06, 2012, 11:27:38 AM
They say it’s a paradise for the purest maidens.
Paradise huh?? Interesting..  :hehehe:

i can't guess the pairing because akb has many pairings and the prologue is too short LOL
Sou sou.. I second that...  :bingo: 
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Nakamii on April 06, 2012, 11:32:20 AM
Another FanFic... << Not Complaining, Really..
Btw, It's too short? And, Hope it'll be AtsuMina.. But, It's okay if It's gonna be Other Pairing, Anyway.. Well, Update Soon!
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Sieka on April 06, 2012, 11:36:21 AM
I think...I know what manga that is. :) Read it for quite a long time ago, I believe it already ended. Oh, erm... *coughs* Sorry, my otaku self is coming out... Anyways, looks interesting, I wonder who the pair is, I mean, the plot of that manga is interesting as heck, so I'm really curious who they could be. :)

I hope it'll surprise me~ :lol:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 06, 2012, 11:49:23 AM
Thank you for all those whose read and replied to the prologue....

The prologue is short because i still don't know what pairing i will put....Sorry...
But I'm trying my best to make up my mind about it...again sorry....

About the pairing....
to tell you the truth, I was actually hoping that you would guess...
because i'm still battling over it...
whether to put "this" pairing or "that" pairing...

I'm working on chapter 1 now, just so you know...

I liked the characters in that manga so i tried to write an AKBfanfiction of it..

Again Thank you....
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Flean on April 06, 2012, 11:59:13 AM
^ LOL.. you want us to guess??  :on lol:  I'll guess AtsuMina then.. since I was hoping for AtsuMina!!!  :on woohoo:  nyahaha..  :luvluv2:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Nakamii on April 06, 2012, 12:03:34 PM
The "This" or "That" is AtsuMina or KojiYuu, right? Lol! But, Pwease.. I want AtsuMina!
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: kojiyuu109 on April 06, 2012, 12:21:21 PM
i hope this fic have my 2 favorite pairing atsumina and kojiyuu but if i choose i will choose kojiyuu  :inlove:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Sieka on April 06, 2012, 01:08:19 PM
Oh...I think I know the pairs you stated. :)
Just from looking at your favorite pairings in your author profile. :lol:
It's got to be AtsuMina or KojiYuu and also, I've thought of it, or rather, I realized something... Minami and Yuko kind of fits the transferee role, and Atsuko and Kojiharu as the other girl. :lol: (Stating that out of comparing the characters personalities from the manga characters themselves.) *gets shot*

Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: yukofan on April 06, 2012, 01:17:18 PM
i want kojiyuu <3

but,i'm ok with whatever pairing..
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: XD_Monster_XD on April 06, 2012, 01:29:08 PM
Hi :) :) I'm new here as well :twothumbs

And your fanfic starts off really well :twothumbs I hope it'd Atsumina :inlove:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: kahem on April 06, 2012, 01:31:59 PM
Pairing? It's hard to guess. Hum, Atsumina? Lol
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Pandah on April 06, 2012, 02:51:04 PM
ooh the pairings.....id like it to be kojiyuu :) but its cool if its not lol looking forward to chapter 1  :thumbup
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: haruhi16 on April 06, 2012, 03:08:37 PM
KojiYuu... LOL bias, just don't mind me! Please continue.. >.>  Sieka surely knows everything about Mangas, spoiler! hahaha
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Spicy Sapphire on April 06, 2012, 05:37:56 PM
hmmmm... It's going to be a long list of pairings. KojiYuu? AtsuMina? any pairing is fine though
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: chuppachup on April 06, 2012, 06:23:06 PM
i wanna guess too..

but since the PROLOGUE is so short then i will go with my OTP kojiyuu ><
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 06, 2012, 07:08:28 PM
CHAPTER 1: SHE IS A …


(Director’s office)

“We humbly welcome you to Lotus Girls’ Academy. We hope you enjoy it here. Takahashi Minami-san.” The director said.

“Yes, Ma’am!” She replied.

“What an energetic young lady you are. Do you know what the school Badge’s special meaning? The Lotus signifies grace, beauty and purity of a true woman. We expect you to wear it without reserve and outmost pride.” The director informed Minami.

“Yes, Ma’am!” *salutes* Minami responded. ‘Wait, was I just reprimanded?’

“This institution was built over 100 years ago. And we still follow it’s on going traditions. You may find some differences between here and other schools you have been to.” The director added. “Well, first we had arranged for someone to give you a tour of this school. Why don’t you check the school out?”

*Knock* *Knock*

“Ah, sounds like she’s here now. Please come in”

*creak* (door opens)

“Excuse me.” The girl said.

“This is Maeda Atsuko.” The director introduced her.

‘WoW!’ “ Wow! You’re so beautiful.” ’So pretty.’ Clasping both of her own hands in excitement.

“Um...” Atsuko said, quite shocked at Minami’s reaction.

“Maeda-san, This is the transfer student, Takahashi Minami.” The director introduced.

“Please leave the tour to me, Maeda Atsuko desu.” Atsuko said lifting her hands halfway to shake Minami’s.

“I’m Minami, nice to meet you.” Minami said reaching Atsuko’s hand to shake.

*sniff* *sniff*

“Hm?” Minami smelled something.
“Do I smell…Blood?” she said.

Atsuko was quite shocked at what she had said. “…Really? But I don’t smell anything.”

“I don’t either.” Said the director.

‘But I definitely -!’ “But I swear. I can smell it!” she replied.

Minami then holds both of Atsuko’s hand. *clasp*
‘I can smell it from her’  “Are you alright? You don’t know about, do you?” Minami asked Atsuko.

*Blush* “Um…I..…I….don’t believe so…” Atsuko replied.

‘? Eh!?!’ Minami thought wondering why Atsuko blushed.

“I – I think you should go now.” The director interrupted.

They were about to head to the door when suddenly.

“Takahashi-san, just to make sure you know. What does the school badge represent?” The director asked.

“Womanly Grace, Purity and Majestic Beauty!” Minami answered.

The director was shocked at her answer.

“Wow! I actually know them all!” Minami said. “Although, I wonder why she made us leave so quickly.”

“Who knows” Atsuko said.

They began the tour and headed to the different parts of the school. The garden, the auditorium, the gym, the library, which Atsuko commented that Minami doesn't seem to be the bookish type, and the Dormitories. But Minami is so busy staring at Atsuko and doesn’t seem to care about the school or the tour for that matter.

“Next we have the infirmary.” Atsuko showed Minami the way to the infirmary.

*Knock* *Knock*

“Excuse us.”  *Creak* door opens

Atsuko entered the room followed by Minami. They saw a man sleeping on his desk.

“Um…Sensei?” Atsuko tried to wake him up.

*Yawn* “What? Is someone sick?” he asked while yawning and rubbing his eyes.

“Oh, I was just giving the transfer student a tour…” she replied.

‘Really?’ “Ah, Hello, I’m the nursing teacher, Riku.” He said. “Nice to meet you.”

“Ah, pleased to meet you.” Minami replied. “Atsuko-san, should we see if you have any injuries?”

Riku was a little bit confused.

“I – I’m fine, really…” Atsuko replied. “We should go now, we still have a lot of place to go.”

“Come by any time.” Riku said.

“Bye.” Minami waved her hands to the nurse.

(At the Cafeteria)

“And finally here is the cafeteria.” Atsuko said to Minami.

“Ooh!!!” Minami then dashed to the cafeteria lady. “Something smells good!”

“Whatcha Makin’?” She asked the cafeteria lady.

“Ah, Today we’re serving katsudon for lunch.” The lady replied.

“Hm…I love katsudon.” She replied excitedly.

“Well here, try some.” The cafeteria lady offered Minami a saucer of katsudon.

“Mmmm…It’s Delicious!” Minami exclaimed.

*giggle* *giggle*

“Minami-sama, you really appreciate katsudon, do you?” Atsuko asked rhetorically.

*nom* *nom* continues on chewing.

On to the next…

“And here is our classroom.” Atsuko said. “Though looks like class is over now.”

Minami is still staring at Atsuko.

“Minami-sama?” Atsuko looked a bit confused.

“Atsuko-san, why do you keep calling me ‘Minami-sama’?” Minami asked. “It’s been bugging me.”

“Oh, it’s a school custom.” Atsuko answered. “When we wish to express respect and affection, we append ‘sama’ to the name.”

“Huh?” Minami was a little bewildered.

“Ah, Atsuko-sama!” A crowd then surrounded Atsuko, pushing Minami away.

A lot of “Good Morning!” and “Atsuko-sama” can be heard around the crowd. Minami turned to the crowd and said “What…What is this…?”

“You’re the new transfer student here, are you? I’m Minegishi Minami, school reporter.”

“Ah, Takahashi Minami, pleased to meet you.” ‘we have the same name’

“The pleasures all mine. Since we have the same name you can call me Miichan.” Miichan  said.

“Then you can call me Takamina.”

“You must not know about Atsuko-sama then.” Another girl said. “It doesn’t matter if you’re an upper class man or lower, everyone here adores her. There even seems to be a private fan club for her.”

“Shinoda Mariko desu, school’s co-reporter.” She continued. “Nice to meet you.”

“Atsuko-sama!” “Atsuko-sama!”

“Someone who is that graceful and beautiful…She has earned the name ‘White Rose Atsuko-sama’!” She added.

‘Wow! Rose!’ “I…don’t really get it…” Minami said to herself. “But everyone here is so beautiful…they’re all like flowers…FLOWERS…”

“--sama!, Minami-sama!” Atsuko is trying to get Minami’s attention.

“Ah?” Minami’s attention is now on Atsuko.

“School is already over. Let’s head to the dorms.” Atsuko said. “So? What do you think of your first day here?”

“Hmm…umm… Flowers…” She replied.

‘Flowers?’ thought to herself kind of confused.

“This is the school dorm. All the students live here.” Atsuko said while they were walking in the corridor of the dorms.

“This is your room, Minami-sama. There is a booklet detailing all the workings to the room. Also be sure to read the Student Life hand book at least once. And if there is anything you don’t understand, Please, Don’t hesitate to ask me, ok?” Atsuko said. “Now if you’ll excuse me.” She then head outside the room.

(Atsuko’s POV)

“Somehow…She doesn’t seem to recognize me as an idol to look up to…”
“If this continues, I wonder if I’ll end up acting like her…”

(Minami’s POV)

“Probably it would be best to get familiar with this school before anything else.” ‘Where’s that hand book?’

She has search everywhere even her luggage, but it was never to be found. Then it’s finally night time.

“I can’t believe it…Where did I put my hand book?” ‘Maybe in the classroom when they pushed me’ “I better grab it and return quickly.”

She then dashed outside to her classroom. A few minutes later…

“? Where is the classroom?”

She was no completely, absolutely, 100% lost.

‘The afternoon during the tour, I was only starring at Atsuko-san. I was completely focused on her, I forgot every route she said.

*whisper* *whisper*

‘I can hear voices… Maybe they can tell me where my classroom is…’

*creak* door opens

“Excuse…Me…”

She saw Atsuko. And she’s biting someone on the neck. There’s blood on her lips, and his neck.

*Gasp* She pushed him away.

“What is i-!” Riku was about to say something when Atsuko smacked his mouth to keep him from talking.

“Umm…I…Please; this is all a big misunderstanding!” Atsuko explained. “I was feeling dizzy, and I was attacked by someone, and I collapsed on the ground and…” She continued explaining.

“Blood.” Minami points out the blood in his neck and her lips.

“Whe-When I fell, I managed to cut my lips and-!” Atsuko was now a little woozy from explaining and from the nervousness when Riku cut her off.

“Atsuko, that’s enough, it’s useless.” Riku said in a very serious tone.

“What?” Minami was very confused at the moment.

“Sorry for the scare, new transfer student-chan. As you can see, she is a … VAMPIRE."




(Author’s Note)
Actually, I first made this with the pairing KojiYuu, Yuko as the transferee and Haruna as the vampire, but since the story also perfectly fits the AtsuMina pairing,just like KojiYuu, and due to the replies, that they would like it to be AtsuMina, I revised the story and made Takamina as the transferee and Acchan as the vampire. But I would most definitely put KojiYuu and other pairings into the story.

THANK YOU FOR READING AND FOR THE REPLIES...

Advance Happy Birthday to the one and only Takamina, Takahashi Minami...
:on BDay:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: Sieka on April 06, 2012, 07:23:53 PM
So you decided on AtsuMina, I don't really care whoever gets the main pairing either way, I ship both pairs, so I'm not that disappointed. I'm not really surprised about who is who, I already stated it in my previous statement, plus I know the characters personalities and how the story goes, its a manga after all, one of my favorite manga from my second favorite genre. :lol:

Can't say anything other than you did well on adapting the first part of scene into AtsuMina. :) Atsuko really fits the role you know, being the white rose and a popular senpai to the younger ones and a good classmate and lady. I want you to surprise me however, but that would be too demanding and cruel of me to ask, won't it? :sweatdrop:

Anyways, hope to see another update from you, thank you! :cathappy:

Also, haruhi-san, I'm quite the otaku you know. ;) I spend most or half of my time on anime and manga. :lol:

Oh right, Lacie-san, do you like reading manga? Yuri preferably? If you do try reading Morinaga Milk, Otsu Hiyori or Higashiyama Shou's works if you haven't, their a sure treat, especially Milk's. XD
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: hara on April 06, 2012, 07:31:46 PM
HUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa !!

AtsuMina~    :wub:

Good Job !!  :thumbsup

More Atsumina, Please~   :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You
Post by: bosslore on April 06, 2012, 07:38:22 PM
Yeaahh atsumina ;) :cow:
Please update soon! Thank you  :heart:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: kahem on April 06, 2012, 08:12:28 PM
It reminds me a manga but I don't remember the name lol
I like this fic it makes me smile but I don't why xD
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Flean on April 06, 2012, 11:23:13 PM
waaa!!!!  :mon XD:  finally, it's AtsuMina!!!!  :mon inluv: and vampire..lol..  :mon fyeah:

I think I've read this manga before..  :mon dunno: but I can't seems to remember the title.. lol..  :mon sweat:

btw, nice start!!  :mon thumb:  waiting for more..  :mon misch:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Nakamii on April 07, 2012, 12:29:48 AM
Rosario + Vampire? Hmm.. Maybe not~
Oh... AtsuMina! <3 Acchan.... a Vampire? It's getting Interesting, anyway... Well, Update soon!
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Sydney W on April 07, 2012, 03:02:03 AM
It's atsumina ! Awesome. ^^
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Pandah on April 07, 2012, 05:13:23 AM
ooh i had a feeling it was gonna be atsumina in the end lolol
hmm hmm this actually sounds familiar...just cant remember the name of that manga
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: haruhi16 on April 07, 2012, 05:25:08 AM
Oh so it's Atsumina. I'm not an Atsumina fan but i really have no problems with that, i do love them both anyway. So any pairings is definitely fine with me.  :) But i think the author of this new fic was basing of how many people were requesting what main couple should be in it, or maybe she's/he's just simply an Atsumina shipper. LOL  XD

Acchan as the vampire? This reminds me of my own fic "Vampire Princess", which is Yuko was also the vampire in the story and Haruna as the mortal. I haven't updated for weeks now 'cause i'm too lazy to write one >.>

Also, Sieka, i already know you're an otaku  ;) , you know everything about these adaptation stories from manga here on jphip so i'm really not that surprised. Haha  :P
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: kojiyuu109 on April 07, 2012, 06:37:15 AM
it sound like tenbin wa hana to asobu   :?
BTW, thanks for new update  :wub:

Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Nakamii on April 07, 2012, 07:36:37 AM
it sound like tenbin wa hana to asobu   :?

Ah! That's it! It just look alike... Thanks, Kojiyuu109... Lol!
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Lotus Girls' Academy. A school whose aim is to educate young girls to be pure and modest. Youko is a new transfer student here, and immediately takes a liking to Shuu, who shows her around the school. However, Youko discovers a big secret about Shuu... she's a vampire! Youko then does her best to be the best friend she can be and help Shuu protect her secret... whether Shuu likes it or not! But how does Shuu really feel about Youko... and why does her blood taste so different? And to what lengths will Youko go to help Shuu?
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: 21stMay on April 07, 2012, 07:08:12 PM
Ooohh this ia so good atsumina hahahaha. Please add kojiyuu too :P i really hope to see it. Continue the fic guys :thumbsup
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: saeyukilover on April 07, 2012, 08:05:19 PM
  :heart: I want vampire acchan to bite takamina :)
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Nakamii on April 08, 2012, 03:53:07 AM
  :heart: I want vampire acchan to bite takamina :)

I know I shoudn't reply your comment, but I feel like i want to. :P
Since I already read the Manga fully, The thing I know is that Acchan won't bite Takamina..
But, Takamina is the one who gave Acchan her Blood... There will someone who Love Acchan too... << She's gonna know about Acchan-Is-A-Vampire...
And, That girl suits Miichan well.. Someday, Acchan will Love Takamina too since, Takamina always clinging on her...
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 08, 2012, 05:12:10 PM
Seika  Thank you for the compliment on the story, yeah Atsuko fits in shuu’s character. About the surprise….i won’t promise anything, and please don’t anything, because you might get disappointed, but I will definitely do my best to surprise you. And it won’t be demanding, I posted this for you and others to read and criticize or maybe suggest something…. I have read one of Morinaga Milk’s manga, the title is girlfriends, I think that’s the only one that I have read…hahaha. And I’m still underage to read some of them…hahaha

hara  thank you for the compliment, of course there will be more atsumina, please look forward to it…

bosslore  thank you for reading…I will do my best to update chapters, please look forward to it…

kahem  as Kojiyuu109 has said the title is tenbin wa hana to asobu…thank you, wow it made you smile…actually your comments made me smile to…hahaha

Flean  yeah it’s Atsumina…again as I and kojiyuu109 have said the title is tenbin wa hana to asobu. Thank you for the compliment. Please look forward to the next chapters…

Nakamii  no, it’s not Rosario + Vampire, although that is one of my favourite anime/manga…hahaha Please look forward for more chapters. Yes it’s tenbin wa hana to asobu…hmmm..about your latest comment, we’ll see about that, if I would make it happen or not…hahaha…Miichan???hmmm I’ll think about it…hahaha

Sydney W Thank you…Please out for more Atsumina moments.

Pandah Yeah it ended as Atsumina but don’t worry there will be more exciting scenes which include other pairings…as I and kojiyuu109 had said earlier, its tenbin wa hana to asobu…

haruhi16  too bad you’re not an atsumina fan, but please still look forward for the fic and don’t worry more pairings will come.. I’m more of a kojiyuu shipper than an atsumina, As I said a while ago I was battling myself which pairing I will chose….due to the comments, the fic ended in atsumina pairing…hahaha..Yeah another vampire fic, I’m looking forward to the next chapter of “Vampire Princess” update soon…Thank you…

kojiyuu109  Yes, it’s tenbin wa hana to asobu, Please look out for more updates to come…thank you…

21stMay  Thank you for the comment…Of course I would put Kojiyuu too, please wait for it…look forward to it…

saeyukilover please wait for chapter 2 to find out…hahaha
 
Still working on Chapter 2,  :bow: Sorry about that, it’s just because we went on an out of town vacation, with my family, that I can’t work on chapter 2…maybe this week I’ll be done on it…Please look forward to it.

Although some of you already know the manga…Please support my AKB48 version of it…please…

Thank you for reading chapter 1 and for the comments..
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: Nakamii on April 08, 2012, 05:22:36 PM
Nakamii  no, it’s not Rosario + Vampire, although that is one of my favourite anime/manga…hahaha Please look forward for more chapters. Yes it’s tenbin wa hana to asobu…hmmm..about your latest comment, we’ll see about that, if I would make it happen or not…hahaha…Miichan???hmmm I’ll think about it…hahaha

Yea, I was just thinking about Rosario + Vampire.. Since Moka is Vampire and Tsukune is Human... So, I thought so...
And Yea, Misora(?) [I forgot the name of the girl...] suits Miichan.. Since, Miichan Loves Acchan too...
Please, Update Chapter 2 ASAP! I'm lookin' forward to it!
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 08, 2012, 05:46:12 PM
And Yea, Misora(?) [I forgot the name of the girl...] suits Miichan.. Since, Miichan Loves Acchan too...
Please, Update Chapter 2 ASAP! I'm lookin' forward to it!

I was actually thinking of tomochin than miichan....well....we'll just see how the story progresses....hahaha...
Yes, Ma'am!...Working on it...
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: okiedokie on April 08, 2012, 06:24:43 PM
Yeah! Atsumina's favorite couple . I think Takamina's special human with some abillity ...kind of supernatural ?!  and she's look a bit weirdo + dorky but very smart .. I think so?! XD - tnk for up ,anw -au san <3
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part1) April 12, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 12, 2012, 04:20:50 PM
okiedokie  Takamina? superhuman ability?...hhhmmmm...I'll Think about that...hahaha....thanks for reading and the reply...



CHAPTER 2: Something…feels…Off


Part 1

“She is a… Vampire” Riku explained to Minami.

“Don’t stretch the facts and fill her head with weird ideas like that!” Atsuko complained.

“C’mon, that is what it looks like…” Riku defended.

‘EH?’ Minami is confused.

“And how can you so simply tell her like that!?” Atsuko added.

“Because it’s no use hiding it from her now.” Riku answered.

“Um…Takahashi Minami-chan, was it?” Riku asked, turning to Minami.

‘Ah!’ “Ye-yes, but you can call me Takamina.” Minami answered a little surprised.

“Yeah, Takamina is good” ‘that way I won’t get confused.’ “Looks like you’re a little surprised after all.” Riku noticed.

“Ah…Well…Its just Atsuko was much different during the day time…” Takamina replied.

‘Darn it!’ Atsuko exclaimed.

“Ahh, It’s all an act! Atsuko tries to hide it.” Riku explained. “But…I would prefer if we kept the truth about Atsuko a secret. In order for Atsuko to live, she needs to drink blood. But if this was all known, she wouldn't be able to stay here at the academy…”

“Like any other student, we just want to have a normal student life!” He continued. “Something as small as this is all I ask for!”

‘I think he overdid it…’ Atsuko thought.

“Wow. I’ll work with you! I’ll help keep the secret too!” Takamina was now amazed and excited.

‘Ehhhhhhh?’ Atsuko is confused at Takamina.

“I’m so glad that you understand!” Riku held both of Takamina’s hand.  ‘What a good girl!’

“Of course!” Takamina replied.

“Wha-wa-wait a minute!” Atsuko cut them off.

*Blush* “I…I don’t want to trouble Takamina-sama… Just keeping the secret should be more than enough…” Atsuko said in a very feminine manner.

“…” Takamina and Riku were speechless.

“?” Atsuko was confused of the two.

“That was definitely your cover-up personality there.” Riku broke the silence. ‘hehe’

“Yup!” Takamina agreed.

“!!” Atsuko was shocked at their reaction.

“She’s really more of a tsundere!” Riku said giving a pack of blood to Atsuko.

*Slurp* *Slurp*

“It wouldn’t be bad to have more people help out, right?” Letting Atsuko drink the pack blood.

“But...the more people, who know about it, the more likely it is to leak out…” Atsuko reasoned out.

“But it is still a good thing to have at least some help, right?” Riku insisted.

‘Wow…she’s really drinking blood.’ Takamina was amazed at Atsuko.

“After all, I’m always thinking of your safety the most, Atsuko. You know that right?” *wink* Riku said

“…”Atsuko didn’t know what to say.

“Has anything wrong ever happened because of what I thought?” Riku asked, rhetorically.

“A few times, yeah!” ‘hmph’ Atsuko replied, sarcastically.

“Anyway!” turned to Takamina. “If you’re cooperating with us on this Takamina-chan, I think you deserve a proper explanation about her.” Riku continued.

“Yes Sir!” Takamina answered.

*Ahem* “To start with, Atsuko was upset at what I said earlier, and that’s because she actually isn’t really a vampire. She’s a person with ‘Vampire Syndrome’.” Riku started.

“Vampire…Syndrome?” Takamina asked.

“In order to live, one must drink the blood of others…It’s like a disease…sort of.” Riku explained. “But she is still a human. She’s perfectly fine in sunlight.” ‘That’s probably folklore anyway.’

“But there is one big difference between her and a normal human.” Riku continued to explain. “Right now, Atsuko isn’t a male or a female!”

“Neither a male…nor female?” Takamina asked, a little confused.

‘Gack!’ *Ahem* *Ahem* Atsuko almost chocked on her drink. “Hey!” Atsuko exclaimed, grabbing Riku’s collar. “Why did you tell her that much?” *quiver* *quiver*

“The better everything is explained to her, the easier it will be for her to cooperate!” Riku vindicated.

“BUT-BUT-BUT-BUT!” Atsuko said a little pissed and embarrassed.

“A human born with vampire syndrome is also born without gender.” Riku continued on explaining. “If you think about it, it’s almost like an angel, huh? At least we were able to enroll her here, even though she really isn’t a girl.”

“Really?” A rhetorical question from Takamina.

“When Atsuko turns eighteen, depending on what blood she drinks, it will determine whether she becomes a male or a female. If she drinks more male blood, she’ll become a male. If she drinks more female blood, she’ll become a female.” Riku explained about the gender.

“Right now, Atsuko is doing her best in her disguise act to appear as a girl. But we have to be careful, because she needs blood at least once every 2 or 3 days.”

“OK! I understand!” Takamina exclaimed.

“And…what else…” Riku was thinking of other things he will explain to her.

“By the way, Takamina-sama…What did you need when you came here, anyway?” Atsuko asked Takamina, standing up from her chair.

“Oh, Right!” Takamina exclaimed, forgetting what she needed. “I need to know my classroom number…”

“Our classroom is on the next floor up. Up the stairs, and on the third door on your right.” Atsuko told her the directions.

“Thank you! I have to go get the things I forgot there!” Takamina thanked Atsuko.

“It’s very late, so please be careful…” Atsuko said to Takamina before she closed the door.

“………..” Riku was now starring at Atsuko.

“…What!?” Atsuko asked with a pissed reaction.

“Oh, It’s just that you seemed like you didn’t want me to say anything about that.” Riku said sarcastically.

“DAMN STAIGHT!” Atsuko said half-shouted. “And what were you about say before I cut you off?” she asked.

“Ah…I wonder?” Riku singsonged.

“Now…I wonder how she will go about in protecting Atsuko.” Riku asked himself.


The Next Day…


*Knock* *Knock*

When Atsuko opened the door a lively and energetic Takamina surprised her.

“Good Morning, Acchan!” Takamina excitedly said while on the door step of Atsuko.

“Acchan? Whose Acchan?”  Atsuko asked a little confused.

“You are, Acchan. Since you are now calling me Takamina, I decided I would call you Acchan.” Takamina explained. ‘Eh-heh’

‘That’s not something for you to decide.’ “Anyway, What do you want?” She asked.

“I came out here to greet you!” Takamina reasoned.

Atsuko smacked her own forehead. ‘What exactly will she do!? I must prepare…’

They are now walking in the hallway. Takamina insisted that they walk together to their classroom.

“Um…Takamina-sama…this is…er…” Atsuko doesn’t know what to say.

 “Just call me Takamina! You can drop the sama. If you suddenly needed a drink, that would be really troublesome!” Takamina said as a matter of fact. “So, I thought we should try to be together as much as possible!”

‘as much as possible…UGH!...What...is she saying?’ Acchan cursed. ‘Oh no…This is going to be…TROUBLESOME!’


End of part 1




So? There you have it, Whatcha think?

I've decided to cut it to two parts...I'm running out of words...

Thank You!
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 1 April 7, 2012
Post by: kahem on April 12, 2012, 04:31:17 PM
Great hehe I like Kojiharu character ^^
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part1) April 12, 2012
Post by: kojiyuu109 on April 12, 2012, 04:51:52 PM
nyan nyan sure is straight forward   :D i like this new side of her  :wub:
thanks for new updates  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part1) April 12, 2012
Post by: Nakamii on April 12, 2012, 05:24:08 PM
Ah, Finally~ After a Half of Month waiting....LMAO.
Acchan Definitely gonna be a Girl... Because Half of The Blood she Drank were From Takamina and Half Blood Packs.
[Don't know what's the gender Behind that Blood Packs... Hope It's Girl... So, I don't Doubt about Acchan's Gender in the Future!And, AtsuMina would Happen Sooner or Later.Or maybe that's Riku's Blood!]
Riku's kinda Hillarious, Here... I LOVE It... I'm waiting for Development of AtsuMina's Relationship!
Update Soon! ^ .... Lacie-san! Take Care and Gud Luck on Writing The Continuation of This Part...
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part1) April 12, 2012
Post by: Haruko on April 13, 2012, 06:42:33 AM
yeah atsuko gonna be a girl..

aww im waiting for my kojiyuu
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part2) April 20, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 20, 2012, 04:49:20 PM
kahem  kojiharu's character is a little different right? It's great that you liked her character hehe...

kojiyuu109  you like the straight forward nyan nyan...don't worry there will be more...

Nakamii  half a month...really? I thought it's just like a week or something..hehe Acchan? girl? boy? Let's just wait and see Acchan's decision...[clue? It's the title...]

Haruko  girl? you don't want atsuko to be a boy? The long awaited kojiyuu...as you have read there is still no yuko, so i'll just first introduce her in this chapter...

to ALL  THANKS FOR READING...




Part 2


“Why?” Atsuko questioned. “Why do I have to be with her?”

“You don’t have any choice. And I thought this was already solved last night.” Riku replied.

“Solved?” Atsuko questioned again. “I didn’t approve any of it. You just talk and talk that I didn’t had the chance to say anything.”

“Come on. Give her a chance. I’m sure you’ll get along with her.” Riku insisted.

*Tsk* *Tsk* “What other choice do I have?” Atsuko gave up. “I’m going back to class.”

“Oh, and try to be nice to her, even if no one’s watching.” He said before Atsuko could exit.

“I’ll try.” She answered as she exited the infirmary.


Riku POV

“Hm…She’s just like me when I’m in high school.”

"High School...."

“I wonder where she is now?”

“She won’t probably recognise me now?”

A tear left his right eye.

“I miss you…Aitakatta yo.”

*Knock* *Knock*

“Kojima sensei?” A co-teacher entered the infirmary.

“What is it sensei?” Riku said composing himself.

“Ah, it’s just that I need to inform you about the faculty meeting after class, it’s a bit sudden and all the teachers need to be present there.” The teacher informed Riku.

“Oh, is that so. Okay, I’ll go. After class right?” Riku asked.

“Yes, well, if you’ll excuse me, I still need to inform the other teachers.” The co-teacher said then left.

“I wonder why?”



After school

Minami and Atsuko are walking at the hallway to the dorms, When suddenly Atsuko stopped.

“Acchan?” Minami questioned turning to Atsuko.

She saw that Atsuko is panting.

“Huh? No way.” Minami said. ‘She needs blood already.’

“Do you need-“ Minami was cut off.

“I…have to get to the infirmary and see Kojima sensei.” Atsuko said.

“To the infirmary” Minami said while dragging an out of breath Atsuko to the infirmary.


At the infirmary.

There they saw a note at the table. “I’m out for the Faculty Meeting. Thank you –Kojima sensei.”

“Ehhhh?” they both said.

“I guess I have to wait here.” Atsuko said while trying to lie down on the bed.

“Hey, um… Is there anything I can do?” Minami asked.

‘She really isn’t a bad person.’ Atsuko thought. “No…Please go ahead without me.” She answered.

“I’ll just shut my eyes for a while…I should be fine…Takamina-sama, please head back without me…” she continued.

Minami then gathered all her courage to loosen her collar.

“huh…What…?” Atsuko was surprised at Minami’s action.

“Acchan...you’re suffering.” She was really worried about Atsuko. “Please drink my blood!”

“Wha-What are you…Don’t be stupid!” Atsuko resisted.



At the gate of the school, A girl lady to be exact, is entering the school.

“Ah, Lotus Girls’ Academy. Seems nothing has changed since.”

“Feels so good to be back.”

“How nostalgia, I wonder where she is now?”



At the faculty meeting.

“I called all of you today to announce that starting today Yami-Sensei will be having her maternity leave and that we have a replacement for her for the mean time. Her name is Oshima Yuko sensei. Oshima-Sensei?”

‘Oshima Yuko?’ Riku was stunned to hear that name.

“Yes, I’m Oshima Yuko sensei. Please to meet and work with you all.”

“Oshima sensei was an alumni of this school. She will be in the PE Department. I hope that you will all get along with each other. Since it’s been a while since she visited this school, I would like to ask the assistance of one of you teachers to tour her.”

Almost all of the male teachers wants to tour her.

“Uhm…Well since there are a lot of them that wants to tour you, Why don’t you choose?”

“I don’t even know them, may be it would be best to pick the teacher who is not that busy.”

“Oh, uhm, I think that would be the nursing teacher, Kojima Sensei.”

‘Kojima sensei?’ Yuko was surprised to hear that name.

“Kojima Sensei, I’ll leave her into your care.”

“That’s all, the meeting is over. Thank You.”

“uhm…Kojima Sensei?” Yuko asked.

“Yes? Oshima Sensei” Riku replied.

“Can you tour me tomorrow. I still have lots do to at my apartment, I just came to visit today.” Yuko suggested.

“O-okay, You’ll start tomorrow right? I hope you will have a great time teaching the students here.” Riku said.

“Yes! Thank you! See you tomorrow.” Yuko replied as she left the room.


Riku POV

‘Oshima Yuko, huh? She has the same name as her. And she also studied here.’

‘Is she the Oshima Yuko that I know.’

'Can’t be? Right?'



Yuko POV

 ‘Kojima huh? For a second there I thought it was her.’

‘Well, Kojima is a little common for a surname and that is a guy.’

‘But he looks just like her, maybe they are somewhat related.’

‘I’ll ask him tomorrow when we meet again.’




At the infirmary

“Would it be okay for you to drink my blood?” Minami asked. “Acchan?”

“Yeah…It’s fine…” Atsuko gave in to her hunger of blood.

Atsuko then bit the neck of Minami.

“Acchan…”

‘How can she…she has no fear of how different we are?’ Atsuko thought.

“Ah, was that enough?” asked Minami, while Atsuko sit-up straight.

Atsuko gave Minami her handkerchief. “Oh! Thanks! I just have to go stop the bleeding!” Minami said as she left.

Looks like my true self came out…I can’t believe I just drank that girl’s blood like that…’ Atsuko thought feeling kinda guilty. ‘but…Something…Feels off…'

“I’m back!” Minami said. “OK! Let’s go back, Acchan!” as she offered her hand to Atsuko.

“Yeah.” She replied taking Minami’s offered hand.

That strange feeling Atsuko felt when she drank Minami’s blood could only mean…

It was that same time she realized the feelings that she felt for her…

“Allowing her blood to be drunk without hesitation…That girl’s got a strong spirit.” Riku saw what happened at the infirmary. “This is going to be even greater than I thought it would be.”

“Right, Atsuko?”


End of Chapter



Thanks for reading....

I'm Sorry It took long...
I was ill...I had fever due to Tonsillitis...
And then when i was almost cured my allergy appeared...I didn't know that i was allergic to my medicine...
Now i have recovered, my allergy is now faint...
But then one of my relative died, my grandmother, that was yesterday...
On the day of my oshii's birthday, my relative died...
It was a shocking news to all of us...

Anyway...

How's Yuko's entrance? hahaha...
Hope you enjoyed the part 2 of chapter 2....

I'll try to update chapter 3 next week...
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part2) April 20, 2012
Post by: haruhi16 on April 20, 2012, 05:21:30 PM
omg kojiyuu <3
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part2) April 20, 2012
Post by: saeyukilover on April 21, 2012, 01:30:06 AM
Ahh.. I think I know why nyan nyan become riku  :roll:

W8ting for the nxt chapter :)
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part2) April 20, 2012
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on April 21, 2012, 03:01:15 AM
^ I also think I know why haruna became riku, but I'll keep my mouth
shut  :) lol
Anyway, nice chapter and I can't wait for the next update  :cow:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part2) April 20, 2012
Post by: Haruko on April 21, 2012, 06:07:42 AM
of course!! always kojiyuu is fine for me :D

p
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 2(part2) April 20, 2012
Post by: kahem on April 21, 2012, 03:20:43 PM
YAY kojiyuu!!!!
Hehe Acchan, you definitively fell for Takamina ^^
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 3(part1) April 28, 2012
Post by: xxLaciexx on April 27, 2012, 07:34:06 PM
haruhi16  kojiyuu ♥ there will be more of them soon...thank you

saeyukilover  haruna to riku --> i wonder what happened to her/him haha...I've updated, although it's a little short, sorry....thank you

ilovecandiedapples  you also knew what happened? is it that obvious?...I've updated, but it's kinda short, sorry...thank you

Haruko  Girl? final answer? haha...anyway kojiyuu's good right? cause there will be more...thank you

kahem  kojiyuu!!!! here acchan is a tsundere, while takamina is a little dense...i wonder how they're relationship will develop..haha..thank you
 
everyone  thank you for reading



CHAPTER 3: In Vain


Part 1


“Nyan Nyaaaaaaaan!” said a running Yuko at the corridors, looking for her beloved Haruna.

While Yuko is searching for her Nyan Nyan, two girls are talking about them.

“Hey, Sayaka, look! Yuko’s on the loose again.” said one of the girls.

“Yeah Sae, she’s always looking for Haruna.” Sayaka replied.

“I sometimes envy her, she’s close to the one she loves.” Sae replied.

“But you know, although it sometimes bothers her, I think Haruna is happy when she’s with her.” Sayaka said.

“Hey! You two! Have you seen my Nyan Nyan?” "Yuko asked noticing the two girls.

“Ah! Sorry, I don’t know.” Sae answered.

“hmm…Try the classroom, I think she’s on day duty today.” Sayaka answered.

“Thank you!” Yuko thanked them then ran to their classroom.

“But off the record, Yuko is much more happier when she’s with Haruna.” Sayaka said to Sae.

“Happier? Don’t you mean happiest?” Sae said sarcastically.



At the classroom


Haruna was just about to finished her day duty assignment when the door swiftly opened, emerging a worn out Yuko.

“Yuuchan! Why are you here? And why are you out of breath?” Haruna asked Yuko who is now approaching her.

“I’ve missed you….” Yuko said while hugging Haruna.

“B-But we’re just together earlier.” Haruna said whist trying to break free from the hug.

“But sensei called me to do an errand and you on the day duty, that’s enough time for me to miss you.” Yuko tried to reason out.

“Wha-Whatever. Come on help me on my duty so we can go back to the dorms.” Haruna said as she successfully break Yuko's hug.

“Of course!” Yuko said enthusiastically.

“whaa” yuko woke up from her dream. “That dream, it just made me miss her more.” She said remembering her dream.

 She looked at her clock it’s 3:00 in the morning.

‘they say if you we’re waken up at 3 in the morning, there’s someone watching you.’ She remembered her old friends telling her that.

She carefully looked round her room. She saw her window was wide opened.

“I thought I closed it before I sleep.” She felt the cold wind as she closed the window. “Ah, I’m having goose bumps. Better get to sleep.”

She immediately lay down on her bed and once again she enters the dream world, hoping that she would dream about her again.



“What am I doing?” Riku said unable to believe at what he was doing. “Why did I do that? And I almost got caught. Do I miss her so much, to even watch her sleep?”

“The heck! I don’t even know if it’s really her. Are you really her?" He asked while taking a glance at Yuko’s window.

“waaaahhhh” he said while messing his hair.

He then gave up and head home.



“Good Morning!” Takamina said whilst Acchan opened her door. “Oh, you’re all set to go?”

*sigh* “Jeez…” Acchan replied. “You don’t have to come out and meet me every morning.”

“But what if I wasn’t here and you started spazzing out, that would be really bad!” Takamina insisted.

“It’s not like that! It happens slowly!” Acchan said warily.

“That and if we go to and fro the dorms together, maybe we can become close friends!” Takamina said smiling her biggest slime to Acchan. “I hope that from now on, you can count on me! And you’re a really friendly person too."

Acchan was taken aback from what Takamina said. “B-But! The “Friendliness” I’ve been showing is-“

“Yeah, yeah…” Takamina said not actually paying attention to what Acchan is going to say.

“Good morning” Riku said from behind.

“Ah, Sensei! Good Morning!” Takamina replied.

“…Good Morning” Acchan replied.

“Atsuko-sama! Good Morning!” some girl said.

“Good Morning!” Acchan replied with a wide smile.

“Wow, you’re as popular as ever!” Takamina said seeing many girls are looking at Acchan.

“That’s why I always need to be careful.” Acchan whispered to Takamina.

*Whisper* *Whisper*

“Hey do you think there’s something different?” Acchan continued to whisper.

“You think so?” Takamina replied.

I’ll just need to be extra careful…’ Acchan said to herself.



Meanwhile At the infirmary…


Riku just entered the infirmary when suddenly…

“Good Morning, Kojima-sensei.” Said a cheerful Yuko waiting for him.

“Oshima-sensei! Good Morning.” Riku said surprised to see Yuko on the infirmary so early in the morning. “Why are you here so early in the morning?”

“What are you talking about? I’m going to start today, right? So I should be early on my first day of work.” Yuko said as a matter of fact.

“But I thought you only have afternoon classes.” Riku said.

“huh? No one said anything about that!?!” Yuko said a little shock to hear that she only had afternoon classes.

“Let me guess you still don’t know your schedule?” Riku asked.

Yuko just nodded.

“Here” Riku said while handling Yuko a piece of paper.

“What’s this?” Yuko said accepting the paper.

“Apparently you left before the principal gave you your schedule. He asked me to give it to you.” Riku explained.

“Ahhh! I’m really sorry.” Yuko said a little embarrassed.

“It’s okay.” Riku assured her.

“What should I do? I have still a lot of time before my class. Maybe I should roam around for a bit.” Yuko asked to no one in particular.

“Uhm. Since you still have lots of time before your class, and I’m supposed to tour you around, How about we check the school out, with me as the tour guide?” Riku offered.

‘this is my perfect opportunity to confirm if she really is the Oshima Yuko that I know or not.’ Riku has an ulterior motive.

“Really? Please take care of me(Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu)” Yuko accepted.

‘this is my chance to ask him about Nyan Nyan.’ Yuko also has an ulterior motive.

“Let’s go!” Riku said.

“Sure!” Yuko replied enthusiastically.


End of part 1



Not much development...sorry...And it's short...really sorry.....I'll try hard next update...

Thanks for reading....
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 3(part1) April 28, 2012
Post by: hara on April 27, 2012, 08:32:23 PM
Yeey~
it's an update..   :cow: :cow: :cow:
Thank you..  :thumbsup

Waw~ Acchan bit Minami's neck..  :inlove:
Can you bring some AtsuMina sweet moment on this story, please ?   :wub: :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 3(part1) April 28, 2012
Post by: Haruko on April 28, 2012, 07:38:50 AM
yeah!! atsuko is a girl!! :D..

aww my kojiyuu... in this case they are so mature..
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 3(part1) April 28, 2012
Post by: haruhi16 on April 28, 2012, 08:10:30 AM
 :heart: I like it, please continue~  KOJIYUU  :heart:
Title: Re: Because...I Love You Chapter 3(part1) April 28, 2012
Post by: rightsaver143 on December 19, 2016, 05:45:18 AM
Update it please more kojiyuu