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Title: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories - Chap. 9 Preview (04/07/2012)
Post by: altoids on April 18, 2012, 04:15:42 AM
xxx Forgotten Memories ( YukiRena )
forgotten memories
xxxxxxPrologue Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1028099#msg1028099)
xxxxxxPrologue Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1028639#msg1028639)
xxxxxxChapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1030395#msg1030395)
xxxxxxChapter 2 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1030768#msg1030768)
xxxxxxChapter 2 Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1030808#msg1030808)
xxxxxxChapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1031839#msg1031839)
xxxxxxChapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1032375#msg1032375)
xxxxxxChapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1033172#msg1033172)
xxxxxxChapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1034585#msg1034585)
xxxxxxChapter 7 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1037850#msg1037850)
xxxxxxChapter 7 Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1038996#msg1038996)
xxxxxxChapter 8 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1049125#msg1049125)
xxxxxxChapter 9 Preview (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1061894#msg1061894)

xxx Birdcage ( YukiRena )
birdcage
xxxxxxChapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1036763#msg1036763)
xxxxxxChapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1049126#msg1049126)

xxx Kokoro ni Shitagau ( Mystery )
kokoro ni shitagau
xxxxxxPrologue (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1049478#msg1049478)

xxx One Shot
1004 Thank You
xxxxxx1004 Thank You (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32618.msg1036764#msg1036764) ( KojiYuu )

xxx Progress Status ( need this so I know what I need to work on or planning to work on. OTL )
progress status
xxxxxx Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 9 ) - 34 % Finish ( MAIN FOCUS )
xxxxxx Birdcage ( Chapter 3 ) - 3 % Finish ( MAIN FOCUS ? )
xxxxxx Ameliorating Bond ( JuriMayu : FM Prequel ) - 2 % Finish ( POSSIBLE MAIN FOCUS )
xxxxxx Kogareru ( KojiYuu : FM Prequel ) - 0 % No Plot in Mind Yet ( TEMPORARY SUB )
xxxxxx Kokoro ni Shitagau ( Chapter 1 ) - 0 % ( TEMPORARY SUB )
xxxxxx Sieka-nee's Silly Idea - 34 % Finish ( 3/4 HIATUS )
xxxxxx Return ( one-shot ) - 0 % Finish ( SUB )
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: altoids on April 18, 2012, 04:18:36 AM
ugh. i know it's long. OTL. there's actually two parts to the prologue just had to cut it into to because it's.... well it's long. Sorry it isn't the best, I stopped writing for a long time so I'm seriously rusty. And I actually do more of editing and commenting than writing myself. </3 Well hopefully it turns out..... okay....

Prologue

It was a school field trip to the mountain. They were elementary students mixed of all grades due to the school being small. There was one girl, seven years old, sitting under a tree exhausted from all the running from the group’s game of tag. Her stamina was never that great when it comes to running. She can sprint but she can’t keep her pace for a long period of time. She would immediately slow down after sprinting for thirty seconds. Fortunately, she rarely gets tagged even if she did she always found a way to tag the others.

She leaned against the tree and slowly inhaled and exhaled to steady her breathing. She then rested her head against the uncomfortable tree barked as she watched her classmates who continue to run around and yelling at each other. She gave a slight smile and enjoying the full view of them playing tag. Then at the corner of her eyes she caught a glimpse of another group of children doing their own activity. Curious, she turned lifted her head off the tree and turned to look at the group.

They were in an open circle with a person in a middle of it. At first she thought they were playing some sort of icebreakers as she was thinking about joining them. But when she saw one of a student throwing small rocks at the person in the middle, her eyes widened in shocked. Another small rock was thrown at the person followed by the others. She jumped to her feet and ran to the group. The students were shouting, laughing, saying words that she couldn’t make out, since they were all talking at once, but she didn’t care what they were saying. All she cared about was pulling the person out of the bullying circle.

She shoved the students out of the way to make a clear path. It was easy for her because she was stronger than most of the students she knew and pushing them would be like kicking an empty soda can.

When she made herself a path, she reached for the person, grabbed the person’s wrist, and pulled the person out of the circle. The students that were pushed shouted at her. But she ignored them and dragged the person several feet away from the group before turning around and yelling at them. “Stop being a big meany!” She sticks her tongue at them childishly before turning back around and continuing to run off with the person. Behind her she could hear the students yelled at them, telling them to come back, but she continue ignored them and continue to running as fast as she can with the person she was dragging.

When they were both far away from the group they stopped running. She let go of the person’s wrist and rested her back against the tree using it as her support from falling to the ground. Breathing heavily, catching her breath, it was the first time that she ran past her limits; she felt her leg screaming in pain while they were running away from the group. But she didn’t wanted to stop to catch her breath she wanted both of them to be far away from that group.

She glanced at the person whom she grabbed away. She realized the person is a girl and she looked like a princess of some sort. With the hime-hair and the white dress she wore she did looked like one. As for herself she looked more like a prince, short hair, white t-shirt, and shorts. When she looked at the girl she was pretty than she thought when she saw her from afar. However, what was awkward for her was the girl wasn’t as exhausted as her. In fact she just stood there in silence with her head down like how she was in the circle.

She moved away from the tree and stood in front of the girl, her upper body practically leaning forward and her head tilted a bit looking up at her face. She still couldn’t see her most of her face due to the girl’s bangs but she could feel that the girl was staring at her through the bangs. “Ne, why did they do that?” She asked innocently with a curious expression. But all she got in reply was silence. So she asked again.

“None of your business.” The girl quietly answered.

She gave a slight nod but slightly smiled that the girl replied. “Ne, are you mad?” She threw another question in a sweet tone with an innocent smile.

“I’m not mad.” The girl answered again and lifted her head up as they could look at each other faces clearly.

Pretty. ~ The girl was in awed when she sawed her face. I wonder why they were picking on her. She frowned slightly at the thought.

 The other girl just blinked at her wondering why she was suddenly silent. Then she looked down when she saw a hand stretched out in front of her. She looks back up at the girl that held a grin. “Rena. Matsui, Rena.” She stated. The other girl stayed silent and just blinked at the girl. “My name silly.” The girl knew the Rena girl was giving her name but she didn’t know if she should reply or not. “What’s your name?” Rena asked when she still didn’t get a response.

“Kashiwagi Yuki.” She quietly replies taking the hand, that Rena patiently waited for, and gave a short shake.

Rena gave nod with a wide smile as they both let go of each other hands. “I’ll call you Yukirin then!”

“W-w-w-wha!?” Yuki eyes widen as she turned a dark shade of red adding colors to her pale face. “That’s three letters longer! -- I didn’t give you permission to call me whatever you like!” She gave a cold and piercing stare at Rena who was giggling at Yuki’s reaction. The stare had no effect on Rena as it only made Yuki turned to a deeper shade of red, if that was possible.

“Are you mad?” Rena asked between her giggles with her head slightly tilted.

“I’m not mad!” Yuki huffed; she turned her head away and crossed her arms with a pout.

“You are mad!” She said in a cheerful tone.

Yuki turned her head back to look at Rena before giving a small sigh. “You’re weird.” Rena grew silent looking at Yuki with a sad expression. She then immediately added, “In a good way! You’re not like the others!” Rena’s expression brightens and gave a cheerful nod. “We should go back. Sensei would be angry at us.” She muttered under her breath as a sigh escapes her lips. Without protest Rena nodded as they both walked their way back. On their way back they didn’t walk in silence but chatted among each and shared different facts about each other.

As days passed the two grew closer and closer friends. Whenever Rena saw Yuki being bullied, and she doesn’t fight back, Rena would always come to Yuki rescue. She would punch, shove, or push the bullies away.

Over time Yuki notices that Rena would give a soft giggle every time she beat the students that picked on her. She found it strange but comfortable in a way so she never asked. The atmosphere she had with Rena was comfortable so it didn’t matter to her, she didn’t wanted any other way as long Yuki was with her it was fine.

Until four years later Yuki was expelled from the school. Actually, no, the school went far enough to expel her from the district.

to be continue in prologue two. OTL
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: lollita90 on April 18, 2012, 05:03:05 AM
BlackxGeki!!  :luvluv1: Weeeeee!!!~~~~

Interesting prologue, altoids san! Though it's still part 1. Hehee. Keep writing, I'll be following you!  :nya:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: Sieka on April 18, 2012, 05:12:58 AM
...........!!!
Is this what I think it is?
I think this is YukiRena/BlackGeki!

Uwah! If it is then I'm glad that another author would be writing about them! This been a while since I saw another person write BlackGeki at this time of the year, apart from me and LeNosferatu-san though, I'd be really thankful if it is.

The premises is already good, though you did left us with some question in mind at the end, why did Yuki get expelled? I'm curious, I wonder if it had to do with 'that' if we go through the MajiGaku-verse I mean. So here, Yuki is more of like Black and Rena is turning into a mini Gekikara at an age of seven. Wew... :lol:

Apart from a few mistakes in your writing, the story is alright.

I'll look forward to your next update. I'm certain curious why Yuki got expelled though.
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: karomuwi on April 18, 2012, 06:37:46 AM
Oh my Rena-sama! *jumps up and down while squealing* Rena-sama~! :luvluv1:

And why is Yukirin hime-sama not fighting back?!  :tantrum: Her body getting beat up! No~

But then... :bigdeal: Rena-sama wouldn't be breaking those kids' bones. And get her GEKIKARA(sama) side out. So... :onioncheer: Beat Yukirin more! Ahahaha~

I like how you write, and if I might say...I wouldn't have known that you stopped writing with how you wrote the prologue!  :on GJ: AWESOME job! (because Great job is too mainstream ^^)

I'm really curious why Yukirin-hime got expelled.  :dunno: If it was Rena-sama, I wouldn't be surprise. But...That's what made us readers crave for more, and that's an awesome idea!

Speaking of the fic... I started wondering what would happen. You wrote Forgotten Memories as the title, so I have a feeling that the two won't remember each other. Or maybe only one of them. I dunno. No one knows...BUT YOU~! Ahahaha~!  :lol:

Waiting for the next part of the prologue! ^^
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: yukofan on April 18, 2012, 10:23:14 AM
RenaYuki <3 this pairing seems to be more and more popular..

the prologue seems interesting..

i'm waiting for the continuation..
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: kahem on April 18, 2012, 05:50:26 PM
Chibi Rena is so cute!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories (Prologue )
Post by: altoids on April 19, 2012, 06:30:49 AM
@ Lollita-san:
= u=b Thinking about doing a little mixture. Nothing fully related to Majisuka. Just the personality is all. . w.
and hahaa. thanks bro. And just go with Al or Mint. xD ;;; Is fine. ~

@ Sieka-san:
Bro, it totally is. Originally it was suppose to be Jurina x Mayu but then... my friend got me to change my mind. xD ;;;

It wouldn't be fully a BlackGeki relationship quirk. ( well I'm not for sure yet ) It just their personalities are kind of based on it at
the moment. So far in my thoughts I'm just writing whatever flows. Maybe I'll probably think about actually making a Black x Geki...
After this one and a sequel with a different arc to this. . x.) b Bro, my friend and I read all yours and LeNosferatu-san's writing. We
so love 'em. <333

It was all meant to be left into the second part. ~ * o* And explained...

Aa - yeah. I usually how problems with past tense and present tense. :T And some other few grammatical errors. = w= ;;;

@ Karomuwi-san:
Hahaa. Didn't expected that reaction. ~ o uo ;

.... oh my. it sounds as if you really do want Kashiwagi-san to be beat up. xD ;;;

Aa - thanks bro. But honestly it's not really the best in my opinion. </3 Eeh. Many reasons why I stopped writing and they
were mostly private fanfic so.... yeah. :"D ; Thankies though. ~

Hahaa. Maybe maybe. ~ ;3 It shall all be revealed.

Aa, yes. The title does say it all. ~ All what it need is how... And it's not going to be the cliche part because of the years gap. ;3
Hur hur. ~

@ yukofan-san :
Yeah. o wo ;; Well it's not all bad right ~ ? :3
Hnn. Thanks. Actually edit a bit a while back after realizing where my mistakes were. OTL

@ anzai-san :
blame the others for the sudden train. . w. ~ originally it was suppose to be a Jurina x Mayu then was convinced otherwise. = w=
Hahaa. In yours Yuki is like boss bro. Seriously she is boss. * o*

A mystery that will be said in part 2. ~

@ kahem-san :
glad you think that way. <3 tried to find a way to make her cuter but... *shrug*

@ everyone: ugh. sorry that part 2 is bland. and please don't kill me for call you guys bro. D: i know it rude, but, ahahaa, it's a habit I developed. ;;;;

Prologue Part 2

“Sensei you can’t do this!” Yuki yelled with her first clench into a tight ball. She had the urge to punch her teacher but she held herself back. She didn’t want to cause any more trouble than it already has.

It was after school already. The entire teacher already went home expect for the teacher that Yuki is currently talking to in the office they were currently in. It’s been a good long thirty minutes since they both had been arguing about Yuki being expelled. While she was arguing against her teacher, Rena, however, was outside of the closed office door as she listened into the conversation without her presence being notice by them. Yuki and Rena were in different classes but Rena would most often come to Yuki’s classroom and pick her up either for their lunch breaks or after school when they head home.

“It’s not Rena’s fault! It’s not my fault! It’s THEIR fault! ” She felt as if her mind was going to breaking down. She didn’t want to be separated from Rena. Not now. Not ever. Not because Rena protected her but she was a true friend she ever met. Rena did have an opposite personality from Yuki; however, for her it was relaxing and calming to be around with.

The teacher tried to quiet Yuki down using hand motions before he said anything. “I know it’s neither both of your - ”

“Then why? Why do I have to leave!?” Yuki cut her teacher off from finishing his sentence. She had no patients dealing with him nor did she have the patient dealing with this ridiculous argument.

“It’s under the principle orders. You are the main cause of the students being beaten up. If Rena didn’t beat - ” Then teacher was cut off once again by Yuki.

“She was only trying to protect me! You knew about the bullying and you didn’t help me when I need it!” Her teeth clench tightly, they were clenched so tightly that she could taste the copper in her mouth.

The teacher gave a small sigh and scratches the back of his thinking of what to say. “Kashiwagi-san, it’s under the principal’s words. I just follow what he sa -- ” Yuki couldn’t handle listening to her teacher anymore as she just immediately turned around and darted for the door. “Kashiwagi-san where are you going!?” The teacher called for her. But she ignored him and slide the door open. Her eyes immediately grew wide when she was looking into the missed matched eyes she knew for so long. As those mismatched eyes were giving the same look back.

They were both in completed silence but then Yuki’s anger came back to her. She broke the silent eye contact and grab Rena’s wrist tugging her in a gesture to run. Rena didn’t argue and run as soon as Yuki started running. They both ran down the hallway in completed silence, only their shoes echoing down the hallway, students whispering at each other while they watch the two run pasted them, and of course the teacher shouting Yuki’s name.

They both kept running as fast as they can somewhere far away from the school and neither a direction that was close to home. Yuki believed her teacher would call her parents and tell them about the event as she didn’t want to deal facing her parents at the moment. “Yukirin!” Rena shouted at Yuki who stayed silent and kept running. “BLACK!” Finally, the name caught Yuki attention as she suddenly stop and turned around with a quizzical expression. However Rena didn’t have time stop herself like Yuki. Instead she crashed into Yuki, and fortunately for them; they both collided on the grass and not on the cement.

They both moaned in pain as they didn’t move from their currently position. Rena was flat on her back while Yuki was on her side, facing Rena, while lying right on top of Rena’s left arm.

Even with the grass cushioning their fall saving their heads from massive headache didn’t helped them. “Itai…” They both quietly moan in the sharp pain they felt. Yuki slowly opens eye, it took her mind to process to realize that she was lying on top of Rena’s arm. “Ah - !” Her eyes widens as she quickly got off and went into a sitting position on the grass. “Gomen.” She apologized in quiet voice. She felted her head pained but since Rena was used as an extra cushion it didn’t hurt as much as she expected.

Rena on the other hand took a while to recollect her mind as she was also out of breath from all the running. The world went spinning for her; her mind couldn’t fully process through what just happened. The pain from hitting her head on the grass, the feeling of being lightheaded, it was too much for her to take, and she couldn’t focus properly. Rena stayed lying down on the grass with her eyes close as she allows her mind to relax.

Yuki left Rena alone to rest, while she glanced around their currently location noticing that they ran into the park. She was hoping she made them run into a location where there would be no one around, but she did just follow where her legs would lead her.

A sudden exhale escaped her lips as she frowned at what just happen at school. She thought about or assumed what the teacher was about to say before she cut him off. She felt a guilty for cutting him off like that. It was the first timed she had ever argued against her teacher. Then again her chest felt lighter that she didn’t rely on Rena to help her.

Rena slowly opened her eyes when she heard the exhale. She couldn’t see Yuki’s expression with her back facing Rena but she knew that Yuki was thinking very hard on the event. “Yukirin…” Rena mumbled worriedly and slowly sat up. A pain shot to the back of her head making her wince.

When she heard a wince Yuki snapped out of her thoughts and turned her head to face Rena. “Idiot, don’t get up yet.” She said in a flat voice and helped Rena lie back down. At first Rena protested about lying back down but her brained told her otherwise as she just complied.

“Ne, are you mad?” Rena asked in a serious and yet curious expression.

“Silly, you should be the one mad. I used you as a cushion.” Yuki replied and smiled bitterly at her thinking that it was Rena’s usual way in cheering her up.

“It’s a serious question!” Rena stated, immediately getting into a sitting position, ignoring the pain she felt at the back of her head, and look at Yuki straight in the eyes. “If he made you angry I’ll go beat him up right now!” She said in an angry tone. Then she felt a sudden flick on her forehead as she flinched and blink several times seeing Yuki with an irritated expression.

“Idiot! Violence isn’t the answer this time. You’ll only make it worse!” Yuki answered in annoyance. When she saw Rena’s pained expression she felt guilty as her expression quickly softens. “Gomen…” She apologized bringing her eyes to the ground not wanting to see anymore expression.

Rena shook her head indicating that is was fine. She shifted her position where she was able to rest her head against Yuki’s left shoulder. At first Yuki nudged Rena off her shoulder indicating her saying ‘no’ but when she saw Rena pouting up at her she couldn’t say ‘no’. A soft sigh escaped Yuki’s lips as she looked away from Rena and allowed Rena to rest her head on her shoulder. She heard a soft giggle escaping that girl’s lips. She gave another sigh before giving small smile.

They enjoyed every minute of their silence. When Rena hummed a soft tune while she played with Yuki’s finger tips in her hands she then heard a soft sniffling sound coming from the other girl. Rena didn’t look up but silently stayed in the same position as she decided to gently stroke the girl’s hand trying to sooth her while she continue humming the tune.

They started to head home after Yuki finally calmed down. They would stop once in a while to gaze up the orange sunset sky and admire the clear view. Yuki always love staring at the orange not because of the colors but it always indicate night was coming close. Everything would become dark and no one would be able to see her in the dark. The darkness was a cloak for her to hide her from everyone. She wasn’t the type of person who likes to be seen. She would rather be isolated away from everyone for her own comfort. However, Rena managed to find her as if she knew where Yuki was along, and companied her. She wondered why she was so comfortable being around Rena. Yuki shook her head with a small sigh as she was curious to know her own answer. 

She glanced at Rena, seeing her wide smile as she was eating something. Yuki blinked several times and stopped as Rena stopped as well. She continued to eat with an innocent face and her head tilted to the side. “Where did you get that curry pan?” Yuki asked with a brow quirked.

Rena continues to chew her food before she swallows it and reply to Yuki. “I bought it at the stand when you weren’t looking. I’ll give you half!” She looks down at her curry pan and rips it in half as she gave one half to Yuki before she could agree or disagree the offer.

Yuki looked at the half curry pan in Rena’s hand. Hesitating for a moment she slowly glances up at Rena who seems to insist that she takes it. She lifted her hands up and took the pan into her own hands. She stared down at the pan seeing the filling a light shade of red. She looked back up at Rena who just simply nodded with a sweet smile as Yuki took a small bit out of it. Immediately the spice invaded her nostril and her mouth started to burn.  She couldn’t help her eyes becoming teary as she could hear Rena laughing at her. Yuki’s teary eyes darted at Rena who was holding her stomach while laughing. “You knew it was this spicy!?” She snapped at Rena with a deep furrowed brow.

“Of course! I thought you can handle spicy food. Wimp!” Rena continues to laugh loudly bring most people attention to her.

“I’m not a wimp!” She held her defense down with her face red, her eyes red and watery, as she munched down the rest the curry pan quickly. The spiciness burned her mouth and the fact that it burned only made her anger worse as a dark aurora emitted from Yuki.

Rena started to giggle and took the challenge to provoke Yuki even more. “Ne, are you mad?”

“I’m not mad. I’m ANGRY!” At that cue Rena gobbled the rest of the curry pan in her mouth and immediately started running away with Yuki chasing after her. “Get back here!” Yuki shouted to Rena who didn’t listen but ran for her life while she giggled.

Even though Yuki was furious at Rena she didn’t want this time to end. Neither did Rena even if she is running away for her life she didn’t wanted this time to end.

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As day passed Yuki didn’t go to school but spent her days packing her belongings into the box. Every day Rena would drop by Yuki’s house after school to visit her, and meeting Yuki’s ex-yankee parents, to slow down her packing. Unfortunately it didn’t help. There weren’t many belongings Yuki owned as her room was always clean, white, and simple.

The next day was Yuki’s department. All of the Kashiwagi’s belonging were now sent to their new home, and what left was them to move into their new home.

It was morning and class was already in session. Today, Yuki and Rena went to school like they usually do, expect, this time Yuki didn’t have her school material and her parents drove them to school as well so Rena wouldn’t be too late for class. Yuki tagged along with Rena to say bye to her teachers but that was her only excuse to stay with Rena a little longer.

They both walked down the hallway to Rena’s classroom in completely silence. They both stood in front of the close classroom door hearing the teacher lecturing on the other side.

“Thank you….” Rena muttered with her head down and her eyes glue to the floor.

Yuki shook her head, giving a weak smile, and gave Rena a warm embrace. Rena returned the embraced and forced herself to smile. Yuki broke their embrace and pat Rena’s head. “I’m going head to the principal’s office so I’ll see you later?”

Rena responded in a nod and slid the door open. The teacher stopped her lecture and turned her eyes to the person that interrupted her lecture. The students as well turned their eyes away and looked at Rena. “See you later. ~” Rena said weakly with a wave before entering the classroom then closing the door after.

“Matsui-san why are you late?” The teacher demanded.

“Gomen. ~” Rena replied.

Yuki couldn’t help but exhale a small chuckle of the thought that Rena got into trouble. Her smile quickly faded as it became emotionless. She started walking to the principal offices to give her farewell before leaving the school district for good.

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The clock ticked as Rena stared at it in boredom. It only had been ten minutes since she entered class and she was already bored. She wonders if Yuki had already left campus, curious she raised her hand. “Sensei, I have to use the bathroom.” She held her stomach and gives a pain expression as if she was really in pain.

“Wait already? It’s only been ten minutes can’t you wait?” She replied, furrowing her brows as she stared at Rena.

“I drank milk today and my stomach really really really hurt.” Rena winced hoping that her teacher would say yes. She heard her teacher sigh and gave her the okay. Immediately Rena got up from her seat, dash out the classroom, and head towards to the principal's office.

Once she was near the office she slowly creeps up to the door and presses one of her ear against the door hoping she could hear the conversation inside. Fortunately, the door was thin enough for her to hear the other side. She heard voices but it wasn’t anyone voices she recognize expect for the principal. The other person she couldn’t tell but she definitely knew it was another male.

“That was the Kashiwagi woman’s daughter correct?” The unknown man asked. His voice was deep and he sound as if he was in his late forties.

“Yes that was her.” The principal replied and leaned against his supreme size black chair.

“I can’t believe you. Like you? Seriously? I can’t believe you would have an affair with a yankee! Do you know how much trouble that is?” The deep voiced exclaim with a slam follow along with it.

Rena eyes were wide open. She was utterly speechless. She surprise. No, she was bewildered. She couldn’t believe what she was hearing. The main reason wasn't because of the students getting injured because of Yuki. Instead, it was the principal fault for trying to get into an affair with Yuki's mom. Rena brushed the mind of and continued to listen to the conversation.

“I tried! But I didn't. She punched me effortlessly and left me bruised that took forever to heal! Hell she was a tough one I’ll tell ya that.” The principal said laughing at the comment he just made.

“Don’t you know how much...”

Rena quirk a brow wonder why it grown suddenly quiet. She pressed her ears closer to the door until suddenly the door opened and she toppled to the floor. “Ite te te te…” She rubbed her jaws for a moment before her eyes widen when she saw black business pants in front of her. Her eyes slowly follow the legs up seeing a man fully dress in a business suit looking down at Rena with his brows raised. She silently gulped. “AH! She’s one of Kashiwagi’s friend!” Rena quickly scrambled to her feet and made a run for it down the hall. “Get her!” She heard the principal shout with two extra loud footstep following Rena.

Yuki has to still be here. There’s no way she could have leave, not yet. Rena silent hoped to herself and continues to run down the hallway as fast as she can to the school gates.

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Yuki slowly walked to the gates with a heavy sigh. She stopped and turned around slightly to take one last look at the school Rena and she went to. It’s going to be lonely without her. She bitterly smiled and continues walking to the gates. She saw her parents patiently waiting in the car, both sitting in the front passenger seat, either staring down at the distance or looking down at the newspaper.

“Yuki!” Yuki turned her head around and look through the glass door wondering who was calling her. She stared at through the doors longer then shrugged when she couldn’t keep the gate guard waiting any longer. Turning her back she continued to walk to the car. “Yuki!” This time Yuki decided to ignore it believing that she was just hallucinating now. The guard closed the gate when Yuki passed, and her mom got out of the car and opens the door for Yuki to get in. When Yuki was about to make her way to get in a name that only Rena would used stopped Yuki in her tracks as her eyes widened. “Black!” Yuki turned around once more trying to find the person that had been calling her. She had to squint her eyes just to see until she saw a small figure running down the hallways along with two adult. Her mom was curious why Yuki stopped and turned around to see what Yuki was looking at.

Both Yuki and her mom gave a quizzical expression when they saw a three figure running down the hallways, expect, Yuki was the only person who felt her heart skip a beat. “Black! Idiot! You walk too fast!” Rena burst the door open with the two following along. Before Rena knew she was picked up and off her feet by a pair of strong arms that held her. Yuki rushed up the gate and tried to squeeze through but was only stopped by the gate guard from allowing her through.

Rena struggled in the arms she wiggled around in them before she decided to bite in the person’s arms. The person she bit only shriek in pain letting go of Rena and dropping her to the ground. Quickly she took the chances and scramble to her feet before running again. “It’s not your fault!” Rena shouted while she ran. Yuki only became more confuse by Rena’s statement that she already knew that it is not her fault.

“Don’t let them get near!” The principal shouted catching the gate guard’s and Yuki’s mother attention. Her mother stared horrified at the principal as she quickly and forcefully pull Yuki away from the gates dragging her into the car. Yuki struggled against her mother’s grip and yelled at her to let go; sadly, she wasn’t strong enough and was thrown into the car. Her father brought newspaper down with his brow quirked wonder what was going on. The front passenger was slammed closed as Yuki’s mother got into the back seat in order to restrained Yuki down using her arms. “Go! NOW!” Her mother demanded.

Yuki’s father only blinked at his wife, “You s - ”

“NOW!” Yuki’s mom cut the father off as he ignited the engine and pressed down the gas. The sudden jolt from the car shook both Yuki and her mom. As the arms around Yuki was loose as she used this chance to break from the grasp. Urgently Yuki pressed the button for the window to slide down. She popped her head out the window seeing Rena slipping through the gates.

“BLACK!” Rena shouted as loud as she can without choking from the lack of air. Yuki could tell, even from afar, that Rena was now crying but held it in all this time. Yuki felted her heart pained when she knew Rena was now crying and she wasn’t there to comfort here. “BLAAACK!”

Yuki responded back, “Gekikara! Don’t you dare forget!” Before Yuki was able to say anything else her mother pulled her back in as she watched Rena figure grow smaller and smaller until she was no longer able to see her.

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After the incident Rena was suspended from school for several days.

Everyday Rena would check in the mailbox hoping that Yuki would send a letter since Yuki knew Rena’s home address by heart. But those letters she waited for never came as she felt like everything just became forgotten.

End of Prologue : to be continued in chapter 1

oh yeah. ~ a question that would be answered later in the story. Why Rena started calling Yuki ' Black ' and Yuki calling Rena ' Gekikara ' would be answered. Of course everyone knows why. lol. But it wouldn't be right if that was never asked and answered in the story. ~ ;3
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: Sieka on April 19, 2012, 07:24:33 AM
Dude, you misspelled my name. It's Sieka. If anyone's wondering how it's pronounced, its pronounced as 'Sica'. :lol:

JuriMayu? Wew, I would have loved to read that, but your friend made you change it? I wonder, does your friend have an account here too? I'd give him/her my thanks for changing your mind. :lol:

Hmm, I see, so its not really MajiGaku-verse. The personalities though are there, still a bonus to me. Though I wonder now, if it isn't MajiGaku-verse, how will the story flow? Will Yuki still be Black-like and Rena as Gekikara-ish? Or will all of it change when they enter highschool? How will they meet? And where? The questions are piling up in my head, and especially, as karomuwi-san said, the title hints so much of something. Is it Yuki who forgot? Or was it Rena? I think it would have been Yuki......but it could go either way too.

You read our BlackGeki fics? Thank you, I'm glad you like them. :cathappy:

Ahaha, I know that problem, I have some problems with past and present tense too...I'm confused sometimes with it. :panic:

On to Part II of the Prologue.
Looks like we get to see a clear image of what exactly was the reason....tsk, and to think that devilish sly of a principle tried to have an affair with Yuki's mom, does he want to be killed or what? The teachers are also some imbeciles, they knew that Yuki was being bullied but never stopped the bullies and let Rena do the actions instead, what kind of teachers are they? They shouldn't have took that job if they can't even teach the kids some proper manners! The nerve of it...it happens in real life and I'm rather angry at teachers who are like that, very ignorant ones...... :smhid

Too bad Yuki and Rena are separated from one another, the bond is........well.....how you say it, its been severed it seems.
Though they had a strong bond together, but without each other, it faded...Yuki did not even sent any letters to Rena, even though she knew of Rena's address, is this because Yuki's mother told her not to? Or was it because she just simply forget after having some extreme difficulties in her new environment in their new house and new school? Well, I wouldn't be surprised, everything's new around her, and without a person there to help her and support her like Rena, everything will be in shambles...

I kinda feel for Rena though, she waits for Yuki's letter everyday, I can imagine that whether it would rain or shine, she'd be there in front of the mailbox, hoping to at least get one.........but in each day, gets disappointed because not a single one comes, almost as if their friendship didn't exist in the first place. :smhid

Also, if there's drama or angst here, let em' rain!
I tell you I love drama and angst! I love them extremely! :cathappy:
I wonder though if Yuki would let people bully her, I feel like she's near the character she had in Sakura Kara no Tegami. The suicidal loner who gets bullied in junior high school. :sweatdrop:

Anyways, thanks for the update. :cathappy:

(I wonder though, is YukiRena really getting popular? I don't seem to notice it..... :sweatdrop:)
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: altoids on April 19, 2012, 08:30:35 AM
Just going to reply to this right now so that you guys can save yourself from asking the same questions. ~ ;3

Sssssh.... *goes & fix it* No I didn't bro. :"D is the ' ca ' pronounced as 'sa' or 'ka' ? o uo ;;

Mhmm. I was convinced. Ah sorry. My friend I'm talking about is a female. . w. ;;; She
actually told me that I should make a sequel arc for Jurina and Mayu. Since it was originally
going to be those two, might as well just throw them in right? o wo aaah. spoilers. ~ = w= ;;;
But the main focus is just going to be on Yuki and Rena. ;3 and No she doesn't. She just lurks
but I'll tell her that. o uob

Not really. It wasn't really my intention actually because it used to be about Jurina and Mayu.
But since it's Yuki and Rena I kind of, not really, added that quirk in. The flow is a mystery and
that is a mystery too, bro. ~ ;3 Who said they'll be in high school. *nudge nudge* There there.
Hahaa. Indeed. It's a mystery. ~ You could be right possibly my mind hasn't fully decided who
will be the person to forget. My thought currently that maybe one of them will forget. ~

Mhmm. o uo They're great. ~ So dazzled by them. <33 And no probs. bro.

Mhmm. = u= ; It easier to have someone else read it for to correct your error since you rarely
catch them yourself. Reading someone else's writing to find errors is a lot better than finding your
own. Well that's what I believe. o uo lol. I've been asking another friend of mine to comment on
my mistakes. Lucky for him, he gets to see the chapter first. = w= ;;;;;;;;;;;

(just uum.. going to remove this. ;; )

I'm thinking about doing a prequel specifically for Yuki. In a hawk eye view on her. And how her life
was in the passed several years. </3 But... That would be made when we get into the chapter more. ~
So... Wait until then. ~ ;3 Then you'll know your answer. About the letters. The event she went through
her family. And other stuff. ~

It's like... You just want to give Rena a hug and tell her that everyone is okay. Even though it's not. ; n;

Hahaa. If you put it that way I'll totally add some drama just for you. xD Drama's are okay honestly.
They're good in fiction. But in real life they suck really. </3

Aah. ~ You shall know what happens to her in chapter 1 or 2 possibly. ;3 She can possibly be suicidal
or she can be boss after depart with Rena. Who knows. Until the next chapter. </3

o uob Like I said earlier.. sorry if it's bland.

Indeed they likely are ~ ? :"D
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: kahem on April 19, 2012, 07:21:34 PM
Can't wait for the first chapter after your last prologue!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: lollita90 on April 20, 2012, 01:36:47 AM
Hey Mint! Thanks for the update! It's SUPER AWESOME! :on GJ:

I was like "whaa??" :stoned: when the teacher told Yuki why she had to leave the school. It is super unreasonable!! And then, double "whaa??" when knowing the REAL REASON why she had to leave. that is totally UNACCEPTABLE!!  :on voodoo: I feel like killing those teacher, principal, and the unidentified man!!  :on kimbo: :knee: :kickass: Duhh!

And it's heart-wrenching enough imagining Geki waiting for Black's letter everyday.  :fainted: poor Rena.. who'll be the one to forget? Is it really Yuki? I think that Yuki might not be able to send letters to Rena because of her mother. Maybe her mother forbid her from having any contact with Rena because of the last scene. Since Rena has already know the secret. She doesn't want Yuki to know about it..? Maybe.. haha I'm just guessing tho. Lol.

Anyway, I'll wait for your next update. Please update soon! Thank you for the interesting story!  :bow:

Oh btw, just call me Lolly or Izzy. no need formalities too, bro! ;)
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: Pandah on April 21, 2012, 05:59:42 AM
its black and gekikara kid version!  :w00t:

they have such a nice friendship but what kinda principal is this! SMACK HIM IN DA FACE! how can he break them apart D:

renas been waiting for yukis mails :( but even if she does write them....i bet she wont be able to send them since her mum may end up throwing them in the bin or burning them  :(

im thinking that maybe renas gonna be the one who ends up forgetting hmm hmm

thanks for the update  :thumbup
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: RenaChii on April 21, 2012, 11:17:38 AM

Yuki responded back, “Gekikara! Don’t you dare forget!” Before Yuki was able to say anything else her mother pulled her back in as she watched Rena figure grow smaller and smaller until she was no longer able to see her.


About what is it I wonder~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_undecided.gif)
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Prologue 2 )
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on April 21, 2012, 01:34:42 PM
awsome

i really wanna know whts gonna happen next

Rena should beat the hell out of the princeable i would lol

Yuki should send letters to Rena but i hav a feeling they will meet again and Yuki will be completely diffrent esically if she goes to a school majisuka lol

and has friends like Torigoya Sado Shibuya and Sado lol

thanks for the update
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
Post by: altoids on April 22, 2012, 09:13:40 AM
@ kahem-san:
hahaa. thanks for the patient, bro. <3

@ Izzy:
Thankies. <3 Though it's not the best in my opinion. ;;; but I appreciate it. > w>
my friend gave me an idea of the twist. since the first reason was too expect. xD ;;
... aha. ;; It was really heart breaking. And everything is a mystery. ~ o uo
don't worry everything will be told... eventually. = w=b
Na, I should be thank you, bro, for actually reading the story. <33
M'mkay. ~ I'll address you as Izzy then. o uob

@ Pandah-san:
mhmm. ~
hahaa. smacking him won't do bro. = x= ;; killing him would! o xo ~
They'll be reunited... Somehow...
In due time, bro. In due time.. = w=b

@ RenaChii-san:
hur hur. ~ ;3 don't worry. that'll be explained, bro. I'll make sure of it. :"D

@ XxRoByNxX780-san:
thankies. > w>
Until time has pass and I start writing faster then you shall know. o:

@ everyone:
bleh. sucky chapter. </3 skimmed on the editing part. just need to get it up before
I end up forgetting what to write for chapter 2. OTL Thanks bros for reading. <33

Chapter 1

The morning sun had rise high into the clear sky. Everything was nice and quiet in the house, especially for the princess who was sleeping peacefully under her blanket, until, “Rise and shine!” The door burst open revealing a young girl in her mid teens; she had a bright and yet mischievous smile as she ran to the bed, and tackled the person who was sleeping peacefully.

“Oh my god!” The female jolted up into a sitting position and shoved the person off the bed, leading to a loud thumb from the other.

“Itaiiii -- ” The girl on the floor cried, she slowly sat up while rubbing the back of her head with one eye closed. “That hurt, Rena-chan. What was that for?”   

“Jurina what was that for!?” Rena snapped, avoiding the question, she picked up her pillow and threw it at Jurina’s face as it hit on target. Rena wasn’t pleased by the fact of waking up with someone in her room. Actually, no, she wasn’t pleased about being tackled awake and gained a heart attack in the process. “How did you even get in?”

Jurina cried in pain again when the pillow hit her face. She felt like her head was about to break off when it hit. After a few seconds of rubbing her head and neck, she jump to her feet and gave a wide grin while she looked at Rena. “Yuko-san allowed me in before she left, that’s how.”

“Not that!” Rena gave a low growl, “How did you get into my room? It was lock!”

Currently, Oshima, Yuko and Matsui, Rena is now living together in an apartment. Before, they were both neighbors since Rena was five years old, but Rena never talked to Yuko until she was eleven while Yuko was fourteen. Rena doesn’t full recall how she met Yuko. When she asked her Yuko replied that she caught Rena, on her way home, fighting against some children, around Rena’s age, in the park and was surrounded by them. As Yuko didn’t hesitate and jumped in right in and partnered up with her. After the children fled they both started to head home. When they got back to their rightful house, they suddenly realized that they were next door neighbors. Surprise from the new discovery they began talking to each other the next day, when they were walking to school, sharing many things among each other they quickly became best friend.

After Rena’s graduation, two years ago, they promise to never fight again and become serious in their future. With Rena being accepted into a university she always dreamed to go to, Yuko didn’t want Rena to lose that chance just because her reputation of beating people up. Soon after Rena being accepted into the university, Yuko and Rena moved out of their childhood home and lived in an apartment together. They decided to live with each other since Yuko’s part time job and the college she attended was near Rena’s university. And she believed it would be more convenient, and cheap, if they both lived together. Rena agrees with Yuko’s idea as they now both decided to live together. Within those two years a new person came into their life and that was Matsui, Jurina.

When Yuko and Rena moved into their new apartment they had a next door neighbor that had the same surname as Rena’s. It was a surprise to Rena to meet another family that had the same surname as her, but what was more surprising is that Jurina’s parents were very kind than Rena anticipated. On the first day Jurina’s mother invited Rena and Yuko to come over for a dinner. Rena and Yuko disagree feeling rude to intrude on the first day, but when Jurina gave them the puppy eyes to them they couldn’t say no afterwards.  From that day forth to this current year Jurina carried a strong bond with Yuko and Rena, and every so often she would come over to their place or vice versa, as points back to Jurina currently being inside their apartment.

Jurina closed her right eye and stared off thinking what to say. She pursed, innocently thinking, before she answered. “I pick lock your door. ~” Instantly, Jurina felt another unexpected pillow smacked against her face, with a loud thump, as it almost sends her off her feet. She pulled the pillow off her face, this time she gave an annoyed expression. “Hey! What was tha – WHOA!” Her eyes widen as she ducks from another object that was being thrown at her.

“Get out now!” Rena yelled and grabbed the closes objects that was close to her, and threw them at Jurina. Jurina dodged the rest easily and scurried out of the room, closing the door behind her as she left. Rena gave a heavy sigh when Jurina left and groaned, laying back down on her bed with an arm lift over her eyes.

“You’re going to be late to class ~ !” Jurina yelled in a teasing voice from the other side of the door.

“No I’m -...” When Rena looked at the clock, on the wall, her eyes widen, immediately she jumped off the bed, and rushed to get out of her room. She opens the door to see Jurina with a devious smirk on her face. Rena furrows her brow at her giving a glare. “Why didn’t you tell me sooner?” She demanded.

“You never gave me the chance. ~” She backfired.

“I can’t believe you.” Rena scoffed; she walked out of her room, passed Jurina, and rushed towards the bathroom.

“Yuko-san left some clothes for you in the bathroom!” Jurina called out and only received a small wave from the other female as her response. Jurina watched as Rena went into the bathroom as the door slammed shut. She shrugged her shoulders and slowly shook her head with a smile. “Hopefully she gets the chance to eat breakfast.” Then she made her way into the kitchen seeing a bento box, neatly wrapped in a white furoshik, on the table. The food inside the bento box was made by Jurina, with her mother’s help, as she hope Rena would appreciate the food.

When Yuko saw Jurina with the lunch box in her hands she already knew the lunch box was going to be for Rena. Actually, Yuko suggested Jurina to make a lunch box for Rena. Yuko already knew that Jurina had a crush on Rena after several months when Yuko and Rena moved in. Jurina denied the fact at first, but after a while she started to admit it as then Yuko try to help Jurina as much as she can. It’s been a year and a half as Rena still hasn’t noticed Jurina’s feeling yet. Yuko and Jurina tried so many tactics in the past months, and everything ended in a failure, there was nothing that actually made Rena notice Jurina’s feelings.

Jurina was disappointed after all the failures; however, it didn’t stop her from trying to capture Rena’s heart. At first, she suggest to Yuko if it was best to confront her feeling straight out instead, but Yuko insisted that Rena must have feelings for Jurina first before anything else.

Honestly, Jurina doesn’t know if she is able to capture Rena’s heart. She knew that Rena only see her as a little sister and nothing else. She also felt that there was something in Rena’s heart that is kept Jurina’s feeling being unnoticed. Then again, maybe she was just imagining it.

Jurina gave a small sigh at the thought. She walked over to the refrigerator, took the black board marker on their miniature magnetic calendar, pulled the cap off, and wrote on an empty sticky note that was stick on the fridge, before she peeled it off and stick it on the table. “Hopefully Yuko-san is right… I feel bad for Rena-chan waking up late though.” She muttered and scratched the back of her head. “The life of a twenty year old… I wonder how that feels…” She wonders to herself as a small chuckle escape her lips. She then excused herself out of the apartment and goes back into her own.

Today current event of Rena waking up late was planned by Yuko. Last night, Yuko sneaked into Rena’s room, with the help of Jurina’s pick locking skills, and turned off Rena’s alarm clock. Believing if Rena was to wake up late she would have to eat lunch, and not skip it like she always does.

“Why didn’t my alarm rang?”  Rena asked herself in irritation as she came out of the bathroom, she was fully dressed in short jeans, with a black belt around, white t-shirt, the neck ring manually cut, and a long peach colored cardigan, that reached down to her knees and wrists. “Ugh. Not the time to wonder.” She rushed back into her room, grabbed all her necessary materials for her morning class, rushed back out, and made her way into the kitchen as she notice the bento box on the table. She blinked several times and peeled the sticky note off the table reading it.

I’m sorry Rena-chan. Please forgive me?  (´;ω;`) I made it just for you so please it eat. ♥ Juri

“That girl…” Rena muttered under her breath. She gave a small smile, forgetting her irriation. “If she wanted to give it to me she should have done it straight out.” She stared at the sticky note for a moment until she remembers she had class to attend. She checks her cell phone time and realized it has become eight. “Ah! I only have fifteen minutes left!”  She packed the bento box into her bag, neatly and compact so that the content inside wouldn’t get ruined, before she slipped on her boots and left her apartment.

It took Rena ten minutes to run from home to campus, normally, it would take her twenty minutes to reach campus, but today isn’t the day she could have taken her time. And now only five minutes remaining and her class were on the other side of campus. “Why does it have to be so far?” She complained. She breathed in and out slowly trying to catch her breath. Then she inhaled before she continued to run again.

By the time she got into the building of her class it was already too late, but she jogged down the hall so she wouldn’t be late anymore as she already was. Then out of the blue someone popped out of the corner, Rena didn’t have to stop herself as she crashed into the person.

“WAH!” They both exclaimed as papers fluttered everywhere.

To be continued.
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
Post by: kahem on April 22, 2012, 09:44:39 AM
Oh it smells triangle hehe
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
Post by: Sieka on April 22, 2012, 09:56:20 AM
Wew, first chapter and its packed with questions yet again. :lol:

Okay so Yuko and Rena are friends, that's set in. Jurina has a crush on Rena, but Rena doesn't know it. Okay, now that does smell like a love triangle, just as kahem-san said. :lol:

Picklocking is bad, lol, I don't think any type of lock would work against Jurina if its the doorknob type lock. :lol: I think Rena should learn to add some chains in her door.........hahahaha, and some other alternative locks...~ :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Okay so the questions again in my head is:

Who did Rena bump into? Is it Yuki? Or is it Mayu? Or is it someone else?
Second, the question from the prologue, who forgot who? Was it Yuki? Or was it Rena?
Third, will Jurina confess to Rena? Or will she like Mayu before that could happen? And how will they meet...?
Fourth, is this seriously YukiRena-JuriMayu? Or is this going to be WMatsui-MaYuki instead?

Of course I know the questions would be answered in the later updates, but at least I can go back here and cross them out when we all see the answers. :lol:

Thanks for the update dude. :cathappy:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on April 22, 2012, 02:33:03 PM
yuko rocks and she has bearly been in the story yet lol

jurian has a crush on rena so cute lol to bad she might get her heart broken

So i gusseing she bumped into yuki mabye

if yuko is rena's best friend then i wonder who is yuki's ooo this is gettin good lol

and i wonder who forgot

thanks for the update
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 1 )
Post by: yukofan on April 22, 2012, 02:54:42 PM
hoho..the story is so interesting..poor jurina..it's seems like her love for rena is an unrequited love..

please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2.1 )
Post by: altoids on April 23, 2012, 03:01:00 AM
@ anzai-san:
Aah. In part 2, who forgets will be known. ~
Tehehe. ~ Pick locking isn't Jurina's only skill. ~ ;3 Maybe.
Yes, it would still be about Yuki x Rena. But that's going to be develop.
In a way that it looks like wmatsui and mayuki at the moment. o:

@ kahem-san:
it's amusing to watch love triangles... = w=

@ Sieka-san:
There's going to be many questions. = w= ;; just slowly answered. OTL
she going to have outrageous locks on her door because of Jurina... maybe.
But Jurina being able to pick lock is likely not her only skills. ~ Who knows. :"D
In due time. ~ o uo

@ XxRoByNxX78-san:
I'll try to add her more into the story later. ~
Aa, I can't say. ~ </3 In chapter three stuff will happen.
and thankies for taking your time to read it. > w>

@ yukofan-san:
Hahaa. yeah. </3

@ everyone.:
I'm try going to keep a constant update every two days or so. :"D It's a try no a definite.
Likely every once a week? Test are coming up so.. </3 ;; need to study my butt off.
Anways.. thankies for reading this guys. ; ww;

Chapter 2 Part 1

Papers were scattered everywhere on the floor as the other person started to panic. “Oh no, oh no…” She panics while she quickly collected the papers.

It took Rena a few seconds to realize what just happen. Finally realizing she immediately apologizes to the person. “Gomen nasai!” She helped the person collect the papers, and took a glance at the person while she helped. The other person was a female, looked about seventeen or eighteen, had her hair in pigtails, and seems to be a little shorter than Rena. “I’m really sorry! I was in a rush and- ”

Rena was cut off when someone spoke, and it wasn’t the other girl, but another female that appeared out of the corner. “What are you doing?” The raven hair female arched a brow at the pigtail girl on the floor, who was still collected the papers. “You should have gotten a bigger binder so this wouldn’t happen.” She said in a monochrome voice, and just sighed before getting a piercing glance from the pigtail girl. The new comer was about Rena's height, had the similar hime-hair cut, and looked around the same age as Rena.

“It’s not my fault! If that idiot watched where -! ” The girl was cut off by getting a sudden slap at the back of her head from the raven hair. Rena blinked in surprised; she did not even seeing the pigtail getting slapped. No, she didn’t see the raven hair’s move her hand, only a blur, and saw the after effect of the pigtails girl crying in pain and rubbing the back of her head.

“Don’t call others ‘idiot.’” The raven hair stated. She kneels down on one knee and helped gather the paper. “I’m sorry for her attitude. You didn’t get injured did you?” She asked in concern and looked at Rena, who was still surprised.

Rena snapped back to reality and blinked twice. “O-oh! No! I’m fine! It’s my fault I did run into her after all,” She looked away as her cheeks turned pink. “I-I should be the one apologizing.” When the papers were all collected and they were back on their feet. Rena returned the papers the pigtail girl, who just snatched Rena’s stack away with a pout. Rena could have sworn she heard the girl said, “Thanks.” But know it wasn’t the time to think if she did. She was running even more late to her class, taking a step back, she gave a deep bow. “I’m really sorry for the incident! I hope you have everything you need.” She moved around them, but after several steps she was called by the raven hair girl. Rena turned her upper around with her head tilted to the side. “Is there something wrong?” She asked, wonder why the raven had stopped her.

“Yes. I was wondering if you knew room 467 in this building.” The raven replied.

“That’s the room I’m heading. If you like you can follow me.” Rena said giving a sweet smile to her.

The raven nodded, “Thank you.” She shot a glance at the pigtail girl, she just looks away innocently. Her eyes turned back to Rena. “We appreciate your help. And also I’m sorry for bother you.”

“Oh no!” Rena exclaimed and shook her head. “You’re not bothering. It’s what I can do as an apology. Should we go then?” She waited for a reply, the raven nodded and the other continued to look away. Rena turned back her upper body around and started to walk, with the others following. They all walked to classroom in complete silence, the only noise that was around were other people chattering amongst each other and the soles of everyone shoes echoing in the hallways. “We’re here - …” Rena’s jaw dropped.

The other two looked at each other with their eye brows quirked before they looked over Rena’s shoulder. When they both saw why Rena was in the state she was in now, they gave a confuse expression as they read the paper that was tapped to the door. It stated that the professor is going to be absent throughout the day, for urgent reasons, and wasn’t going to be back for three days. “Well isn’t that too bad.” The pigtail girl muttered, as there was a loud thumb. The raven and the pigtail looked down at Rena, seeing she was the person who made the sound. “Um…”

“I can’t believe this is happening.” Rena winced. “I ran here to get on time. But came to know Sensei is going to absent!” The other two looked at each other, “My life sucks.” They two sweated dropped feeling a little guilty for Rena. The raven lightly tapped Rena shoulder; Rena turned her head around to look at them. The two were brought by surprise seeing Rena’s eyes tears as they felt even guiltier now. They didn’t expect to see someone that would cry just by being late. Then again, they didn’t know Rena’s situation, but now, they just want to cheer her up after seeing her teary.

“You should get something to eat to cheer you up. C’mon, let’s go.” The raven tried to comfort Rena giving her a soft smile. Her arm were stretched out and her hand open to help Rena get to her feet. Rena didn’t resist and gave a small nod, wiping the tears away from her eyes; she took the hand, the raven’s hand curled her finger around Rena’s hand tightly and pulled Rena to her feet. The strong pull, that Rena didn’t expect, brought Rena to her feet and tumbling into the female. The raven caught Rena and kept both of their balance, “You okay?” She asked and looked at Rena.

“Aaah - !” Rena back away from the female as her face turned in a light shade of red. “Y-yeah.. I-I’m fine… Thank you…” She muttered her thanks and looked down at the floor, avoiding eye contact with the other female. The pigtail girl puffs out a cheek slightly, feeling a little jealous and annoyed, seeing Rena is suddenly close to the raven in one day.

The raven glanced at the pigtail, gave a small sigh, before looking back at Rena. “Shall we go?” The raven gestured, immediately the pigtail girl was the first to move as she led the way to the cafeteria. The other girl only shrugged her shoulder and shook her head; she knew she was going to have a long talk with her later about her attitude. She then started to follow the pigtail girl, leaving Rena behind.

Rena looked down at her hand she used to helped get pulled up. The image of the event repeated into her head. She felt the female’s cold hands against her warm hands. The scent the female had, when she tumbled into her, was familiar. The scent was too familiar that she couldn’t place it. The scene kept repeating in her head as she then felt a sharp pain in her head. “Ngh!” She shut her eyes close tightly, took a step back, and held her head. She started to feel dizzy; then suddenly a flash of red hands and a wide grin appeared in her mind. All to quickly for her to get a clear image of what she just saw.

“You okay?” The familiar voice brought Rena’s out of her state. Rena gasped and looked up seeing a pair of black eyes staring at her in confusion.

“Y-yeah… I-I’m… Fine.” She stuttered. The female arched her brow at her wondering if she was fine. The pain in Rena’s head stopped. What was that all about? She asked herself. She quickly shook the thought off and rushed over to the raven’s side, and gave a slight smile. The female still kept her brow arched, “I’m fine! Really.” Rena said convincing the rave as she gave a slight nod.

“Hurry up!” Another familiar voice caught both of them. They both turned to see the pigtail standing with her cheeks puffed out, her arms on her hips, as she waited for both of them impatiently.

Rena couldn’t help but giggle the pigtail girl’s action. “Shall we go before she gets anymore impatient?” She looked back at the girl next to her who just nodded. They both walked at the same time towards the younger female as all three of them finally headed to the cafeteria.

To be continue in Part 2

Almost done with part 2. So I'll be have up soon and that's the part where you know who forgets. ~
Just that it not stated. :"D
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: Sieka on April 23, 2012, 03:27:17 AM
Ehhhhh.......If Jurina's skills isn't just picklocking, I don't know what else would it be to keep her at bay. :lol:
But maybe Yuki can keep Jurina way from Rena...lol. XD And so I thought of something hilarious, Jurina can get a good job as a robber, lol, picklocking skills, Yuki as the snatcher, Rena as the fighter with Yuko as the mastermind. :lol: :lol: :lol:

Lol, anyways....

So I think its both of them that forgot...
But more obvious on Rena though, I'm still not sure with Yuki though, but it seems to be like that as well...

So Mayu was the one who bumped into Rena, hahaha and she was with Yuki too.
Looks like this won't just end up as a love triangle huh? :lol:

Yuki has her speedy ability, wew, and I think her strength as well, poor Mayu.
Rena felt something, could it be Gekikara trying to awaken back? I wonder if Rena will ever remember Yuki and vice-versa...but lol, nice first meeting. :lol: Yuki seemed kind but cold though.

What will happen in the cafeteria though? Hohoho..... I think it'll be very entertaining, since they haven't introduced their names yet though. :lol:

Thanks for the update dude. :cathappy:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2.2 )
Post by: altoids on April 23, 2012, 05:53:47 AM
@ Sieka-san:
Hur hur. You shall know someday? Maybe it's punch lines to get the girls. ~ lol.
Hahaa. xD ;; Na, I'm not going to pull off what Karomuwi-san did. ~ ;3 Unless
Yuki suddenly turn into a yandere. = w= ~ Then I won't mind. Oh my god. Bro!
You seriously cracked me up. Maybe someday I'll write something like that as a special. xD Just for giggles.
Aah, the chapter says who forgets. ~ But... You are going to run into another question. ~ ;3
Possibly more than just a love triangle? lol. who knows. ~
dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun. ~ ( OTL )

@ everyone: Like I said. Part 2. <3 ;

Chapter 2 Part 2

Rena patiently waited in her seat for the other two to grab their lunch. Lucky for Rena she got home made lunch from Jurina, as she didn’t have to wait in line to get lunch. Sure hope it still fine. She said to herself. She saw the other two coming back with only a tray, held by the raven hair female, as she set the tray down on the table. The tray consisted of a ramen bowl and a plate of fries. The two pulled the chair out and sat down. “Itadakimasu.” All three said at once, the pigtail girl took the plate of fries as she started to eat them slowly, one by one. While the other took her chopstick, lifted some strands of noodles out of the soup, and brought them to her mouth. While Rena’s unraveled the white furoshiki, and open the cap as a relief sigh escaped her lips seeing the content inside were still perfect. The vegetables were neatly placed together next to the tamago, usagi ringo, and the fried fish as the other half was the rice. It was a simple bento Jurina made, but the fragrance when Rena lifted the lid did smell delicious.

Rena felt the other a pair of eyes on the bento. Slowly glancing up she saw the pigtail girl eyeing the tamago. “Do you want some?” Rena asked as the younger female looked up at Rena than away.

“No, I don’t want any.” The younger female bluntly replies, pretending that she wasn’t interested.

“I don’t mind.” Rena said gesturing the female to take the tamago. The young female hesitated for a moment; until she gave in as she took the fork from the tray, stabbed the tamago, and brought it into her mouth. Her eyes widen in surprised from the taste.

“Whoa, it’s delicious.” She commented. “Did you make it yourself?”

Rena shook her head and gave a small smile. “No, my neighbor made it for me.” She glanced at the other female who was still eating. “Um… Do you want to try one?”

The female finished off slurping the noodles, whipped her lips with a napkin before she spoke. “No, it’s fine. It’s your food after all.” She continued eating. Rena simply nodded as she finally started to eat her food.

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After everyone was finish, and their table cleaned, they both relax in their seat in silence. They gazed around the cafeteria trying to find something to distract themselves with, until Rena spoke. “I never told you my name yet. The name’s Rena. Matsui, Rena.” She heard a small gasp from the pigtail girl as the other next to her stiffened, her face turning pale. Rena blinked once confused what she said a slightly tilted her head. “And you are?”

The pigtail girl answered, “Watanabe, Mayu. And she is…” She slowly looked over at the raven hair girl. The raven hair female tired relax herself, leaning back into seat, before answering as well. “Kashiwagi, Yuki.”

“It’s nice to meet you Watanbe-san, Kashiwagi-san.” Rena said smiling. They two replied, “Nice to meet you too.” Under their breath as they looked at each other in suspicion. Then, there was suddenly a quiet and awkward atmosphere rising, until a loud ring tone broke the atmosphere. Rena and Mayu jumped in their seat as Yuki just quirked a brow from the sound. Both Mayu and Yuki didn’t recognize it as their ring tone, but they stilled check anyways, pulling their cell out of their pocket they check their cell. They both receive a message from the same person, with the same message, and that was an old message, as the sound didn’t come from both of them. They glanced at Rena who was taking her cell out of her bag as the ring tone was actually coming from her. “I’m sorry about that.” She apologized and took out her cell. Instantly Mayu recognized Rena’s cell cover.

“Hey that’s Sherly Nome!” Mayu said almost in a fan squeal.

“You know her?” Rena asked with a bright smile.

“Of course! I cosplayed as her several time!”

“Really?” Rena eyes widen, “You should show me your pictures someday!”

“Sure. ~”

Yuki sat there in silence and exhaled. These two… She shook her head at the thought.

“Ah, sorry. Let me check this text message.” The two nodded as Rena quickly check the message. It was from Yuko. When she open the text message is said, ‘Whenever you come home, clean the living room. We’re having a party with a few of my friends tonight. ~ ;3’ Rena knitted her brow at the text message, she pressed the reply button and texted Yuko back. ‘What? Party? Don’t do this at the last minute!’ She pressed the send button. But after a few seconds she composed another text message to Yuko. ‘Ugh. Fine. You’re lucky I don’t have class was today.’ She pressed the sent button again, and instantly she got a reply back from Yuko saying, ‘YATTA! I know I can count on you! *huggies*’ Rena gave a soft sigh, deciding not to reply the text message, and set put the cell in her pocket. “I’m sorry Watanabe-san, Kashiwagi-san. It seems my friend is deciding to throw a party at the last minute. And there’s cleaning that needs to be done.”

“That’s fine. We both need to on our away soon.” Yuki reassured Rena with Mayu giving a nod.

“I’m sorry. I’ll see you two later.” Rena said her goodbye to them, as she got up from her set, grabbed her bag, and left.

The two watch Rena leave until she was no longer in site as the two turned to each other. Mayu stiffened in her seat while she looked at Yuki. “She can’t be…” Mayu didn’t need to finish her sentence especially when Yuki started to look distance right after Rena left.

“She is her… Rena-chan.”

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It took Rena almost the whole day to clean up the living. And when she cleans she seriously does clean the room as if she had OCD. But, Rena couldn’t finish cleaning the whole house without the help of Jurina. “Thanks for helping, Jurina-chan.” Rena muttered in exhaustion as she slumped into the sofa. Jurina sat down right next to Rena and shook her head.

“Any time, Rena-chan. ~” Jurina replied giving her usual cat smile.

“I still haven’t forgotten about this morning though.” Rena muttered as Jurina started to sweat drop, as she thought Rena had forgotten, but guess not. When she looked at the time, there was only thirty more minutes left until Yuko to come home, or expected to be home in thirty minutes.

“I should be going now. Need to do homework first. I’ll be over shortly once I’m done.” Jurina dismissed herself as Rena waved bye to Jurina.

Rena stays slouching on the sofa before she finally decided to get up. She locked the door as she then walks to her room to get new set of clothes, and took a quick shower.

By the time she came back out of the shower dressed and a towel over her hair, there was a click sound coming from the entrance as the door open. “I’m home ~ !” Yuko exclaimed with a bright grin.

“Welcome home Yuko-san.” Rena said coming into the living room while drying her hair with a towel. She then suddenly stopped when she looked up seeing Shinoda, Mariko and Kojima, Haruna.  “Mariko-san, Haruna-san, I didn’t think Yuko-san will be inviting both of you!” Rena gave a wide smile and walked up to them, giving both them a greeting hug.

“We didn’t expect it either.” Haruna said and shot a glance at Mariko, who just sigh softly and said, “We just got the message today compare to the other two.” Mariko gestured her head to the people behind her.

“Other two?” Rena asked curious who she is talking about, when Mariko moved aside behind her was Mayu and Yuki. A gasp slipped from Rena’s lips. “You two!” Both Mayu and Yuki blinked in surprise when they saw Rena.

“So this morning... The party...” Mayu said taken by surprised with her jaws dropped. And Yuki just dumbfounded about the unexpected event.

Before Rena could answer Mayu, Yuko interrupted. “What, Rena-chan you know these two already? Aww, that no fun!” Yuko pouted to Rena, as Rena just shrugged her shoulder. “Anyways come in come in!”

“Ojya ma shi masu.” All four of them said entering the house and started taking their shoes off.

“What happen to Atsuko and Minami?” Mariko asked Yuko. Yuko tilts her head thinking briefly before answering, “They had some business to take care of. Don’t know what though. Same with the Mii-chan, she had stuff to do. And Jurina…” Yuko turned to look at Rena who answered, “She’ll be back after she’s finish with her homework.” Mariko nodded in understanding. Both Mayu and Yuki were clueless who the Jurina but seeing that it was another friend they just brushed it off.

Yuko lead the way to the living room as Mariko and Rena stayed behind, and stood at the entrance.

Mariko turn to face Rena, Rena titled her head seeing that Mariko wanted to asked a question. “What is it, Mariko-san?” Rena asked looking clueless.

“How is that injury?” Mariko asked curiously with a small frown. She worked currently as a nurse and it was Mariko who most often helped treated Rena’s injuries when ever Rena got into a fight and especially an accident that occurred two years ago.

“It’s been well. There haven’t been any headaches for the past two years, but today...” Rena suddenly grew quiet recalling the headaches she got today.

Mariko crossed her arms and quirked a brow. “Today you had those headaches?” Rena simply nodded.

Yuki had her head turned to them slightly as she overheard their conversation. She had a quizzical expression wondering what they were talking about, when she felt a tug on her shirt, she turned to see that Mayu tugged Yuki’s shirt. “Sit with me.” Mayu mumbled looking a little disappointed as if Yuki already replied ‘no’. Yuki just gave a slightly nod as Mayu gave a bright smile, and nod. They move to the sit on the sofa, as Yuki turned her head around seeing that Mariko and Rena were still having a conversation.  Yuki was curious what their conversation was about but decided not to think too much about it.

Soon, Mariko and Rena joined the rest as they started their party. First, they had a pillow fight, they almost knocked over many things so that stopped, second they had a eating contest, Mariko and, surprisingly, was Yuki also the winner. Soon after, Jurina jumped in time to watch a horror movie with everyone. They watched two horror movies straight. Everyone was freaking out on the second movie, especially Jurina, Mayu, and …. Yuko? Jurina was clinging onto Rena, who was just amazed by everything than horrified. Once in a while she patted Jurina and told her everything was fine. Mayu and just hanging onto Yuki for dear life, as Yuki was struggling time to time trying to remove Mayu off of her. Yuko was just clinging onto Haruna, but Yuko wasn’t really scared, she only used this chance to get close to Haruna. Haruna didn’t concentrate too much on Yuko, but simply ate the popcorn while she watches. As Mariko was just mentally face palming herself at the three people who were freaking out.

When the second movie was finish Yuko immediately said, “Let go for a third round!”

“NO!” Yuki, Mayu, and Jurina instantly yelled. They got up to flee away from the third round, until they heard lightning outside that stopped them from their tracks. Don’t tell me it’s raining… The three gulped. Jurina didn’t mind since she lived next door, but, the movie traumatized her. Whenever there was thunder and rain it was never a good sign, and Jurina didn’t wanted to be home alone since her parents were still at work. Yuki and Mayu couldn’t walk home in the rain since they weren’t prepared for it. The three turned slowly and looked at Yuko. Yuko simply stuck her tongue teasing. “I’m kidding. ~” Yuko assure them. The three sighed in relief as if they had been holding their breath. The slowly came back, and sat down where they previously were.

“What are we going to do then?” Mariko asked, curious of what Yuko had in mind.

“We’re going to play the Kings Game!” Yuko stated with a wide grin.

To be Continued in Chapter 3

Uhh. Send me a message of suggestion of what you want to see happening. Silly. Suggestive. Anything really. ~ ;3
Just a long it's appropriate. lol. I already have a few things decided, but I want to know what you guys want to see happening.
And.. Some people are going to end up getting wet by the rain in the next chapter. ~ Just saying. </3
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: karomuwi on April 23, 2012, 08:04:52 AM
Yes! Finally fixed my internet! Now I can comment!

I was screaming so happily when I read about Jurina having a crush on Rena~! YAY~!  :onioncheer: W Matsui~!
When I read the ending of that chapter, I was like... Rena has finally met Yuki!!! YATTA~!

I was actually surprised to read that it was actually Mayuyu. Lol. What a surprise!

And it was really funny to read Mayuyu being jealous about Yukirin and Rena' closeness. I mean...It really would be envious to be suddenly close with someone whom you've only met for a day.

And with how Rena became dizzy and all when Yukirin's scent entered her nose, it kind of made me have a guess that she was the one who forgot. With her getting a bit of a headache, I'd say that she got into an accident that made her forget. Perhaps a car accident, or maybe got her head hit against something. Not really sure.

Anyway! AWESOME UPDATE!!!! I'll be waiting for the next uodate!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: Sieka on April 23, 2012, 09:26:10 AM
You shall know someday? LOL, I want to take a shovel and dig through the mysteries already dude. ;)

I'm fine with a yandere Yuki...... :roll: Though I don't think karomuwi-san would go that far to make Yuki that possessive, I think it'll have its limits since Mayuyu is there to attract and divert Yuki's attention from Rena~ :lol: But until then, I'd like to see hilarious yandere Yuki. :lol:

Hahaha, I'll try to make their roles refined, let's see.
Jurina will be the ace robber, Lupin the 15th! Yuki as the team captain of speedy snatchers, Rena as their ace assasin, Mayu as the devilish schemer, Yuko as the mastermind, Haruna as their air-head seductress and Mariko..............as their driver. :lol: :lol: :lol: Are you gonna do that as a special? That thought was just for jokes you know.....please don't use it, its lame. :lol:

I love love square? Lol, love pentagon is even alright. :roll:

Mayuyu is such a tsundere, she sure doesn't like Rena......just because Rena got too close with her beloved Yukirin. :lol: Yuki doesn't seemed to be bothered, or rather, she doesn't seem to be that aware of Mayu's feelings and as to why Mayu was being hostile to Rena. :lol: Rena herself wasn't that offended either and just kept being herself...lol, I wonder, is she dense or does she not really want to pay attention to Mayu's hostility? :lol:

Mayu seems to like Jurina's cooking though, lol. Props to Jurina for being a good cook. Yuki doesn't want a taste though? Aw, why? :lol:

Dun dun dun........so it really was Rena who forgot first.
Yuki seems to know her, even giving a reaction that far as to stiffen and tensed up, Mayu seems to have the same reaction too, I wonder what Yuki told Mayu? Seems like there's something fishy here~ Rena again is oblivious of the reactions she got, is she dense? I wonder..........

She also forgot Yuki, something must have happened in the past, something that gave her a big head injury and gave her amnesia.

Mayu and Rena being such an otaku and Yuki, lol.....you need to join the otaku club Yuki. :lol:

And coincidence, they meet in the party that Yuko arranged, lol......nice going Yuko.
Horror fest is good, but dang, Yuki, why leave when your precious Gekikara, I mean Rena is here? Just let Mayu and Jurina leave, lol, its only them who's afraid after all........ Yuko is being such a good sly schemer huh, acting just to be able to hug her beloved Nyan Nyan....so sly its so cruel but I so so love it because its pure genius. :lol:

Kings Game? I wonder who's the king and what will they do next?
Will someone kiss?
Will someone confess?
Will someone get an extreme dare? Run around in underwear? Or something extreme as eating their dislike food?
And who is gonna run out in the rain? Better yet, that person should prepare a dance and start grooving under the rain, Aitakatta maybe? :lol:

Anyways, thanks for the update. :lol:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on April 23, 2012, 04:41:31 PM
kwl updates im glad i had something to read for when i got home from school thanks for that

i wonder wht the king game is

so Yuki and Mayu are close friends while Rena dont rember nothing because of a fight kwl
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: cutegiurl on April 24, 2012, 02:01:52 PM
OMG! this is too awesome!!!!

Rena & Yuki!!!! XDDD

my poor Rena lost her memories T________T

can't wait for the next update!!!

i'm loving what i'm reading ^___________________^

keep it up!!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: Playgirlz on April 24, 2012, 04:19:05 PM
Ah~~ so gooood!! XDDDDDDD

Can't wait to read the next chapter, pls update as fast as you can. Thank you <3

I really curious about how the Kings Game would go :twisted: and Sheryl's song is awesome. You really good at picking song :twothumbs

Again, thank you for writing this fic ^^
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: Pandah on April 24, 2012, 05:36:53 PM
hah! i knew it! it was rena who forgot XD

yuki and rena has finally met again! but rena has lost her memories  :(
and yuki mustve told mayuyu about her past with rena
and jurina likes rena! this is gonna be a troublesome triangle or maybe it'll become a hexagon! lolol okay that will just be too complicated   :P

HOUSE PARTY! and they're all there! cept the atsumina couple and they are probably being all lovey dovey at home instead of attending it :P haha oh nos why is miichan busy D: she shoulda ditched whatever and attended! LOL  :smhid yuko yuko yuko....taking advantage of the situation to just skinship haruna I SALUTE YOU!  :hand: haha and wanting to go for a third round of horror movies...gonna totally become sus  8)

ooh whats gonna happen with the kings game hmm hmm

thanks for the update :)  :thumbup
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 2 )
Post by: altoids on April 24, 2012, 07:28:42 PM
Not an Update but Replies.... AND Results. ;D
Results. Ehh. Okay, I been debating myself if I should show you guys who gets to be king.
and who are the people that gets to be order around. at first I wasn't planning to show it to
you guys along with the update chapter. Then I decided to show you guys right now instead. = w= ;;
So I used another site to do a random gamble . AND SO HERE ARE THE RESULTS (http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/test-forum/sh-t-g-ggles-dnp/t.79366201_1/). ~
It's not rigged except for round 2. For.... stuff... but.. yeah. You guys were lucky to get Yuki and Rena.
and Mayu and Jurina. xD ;; I was planning to rig it to Rena and Mayu. but... eh.

Replies:
@ Karomuwi-san:
Congrats on getting your internet back, bro! > w>

Hahaa. So much love for the WMatsui pairng. ~ ;3 Of course, they're going to somehow meet eventually.
But bleh, I feel like I'm rushing it too much though. :T Would it have been better if Rena crashed in Yuki instead? . w. ;

Mhmm. Totally. ~

Well... I guess you can consider it an accident. ~ :"D Don't worry you will know. ~

@ Sieka-san:
Oi oi. ~ = w=)/ That's cheating, bro. lol

Is that so ~ ? o uo Who knows? :"D Only if karomuwi-san feels like it. ;3 Aah, that is certainly true Mayu is totally going break Yuki's shell that has her and Rena in it. = 3=  That remind me of Shin Anata no Shiranai Sekai. xD ;; Yuki taking Manami's ( what it? ) place. Rena.. still playing Rie. = w=

Oh my god! xD I possibly might, just for giggles. Pssh. Even if it is just a thought. And na, it's not lame bro. It's funny awesome idea. ~ ;3

Some type of shape love. Let's go with that. lol.

Mayu just want Yuki herself. She just wants a hug. /* o*)/ From Yuki... And maybe Yuki isn't bothered because Mayu stumbles into Yuki to often ~ ? ;3
Hur hur. ~ Rena... Eeh... She been through a lot so... = 3= ;; Rena maybe dense, either that she doesn't really care? lol. She'll start paying attention to people's feeling later.

Yuki is being courteous? Taking food from stranger here. lol.

Possibly, possibly. ~

Yuki is too boss to part of the otaku. lol. xD ;

After struggling with someone during the movie, and not to be able to watch it normally. Who wouldn't try to flee for another around?
Yuko is the mastermind just to get her kitty. ~

@ XxRoByNxX78-san:
Hahaa. No problems. And how the game will run will be explain don't worry. ~

@ cutegiurl-san:
Thanks for reading, bro. But it's not all that great. ;;

@ Playgirlz-san:
I'll try to update a three day regular bases...? No promises there bro.
Thanks for reading. ~

It would go... Strange... = w= ;; umm... Thanks. o uob 

@ Pandah-san:
You knew correctly. ~ ;3

aa. ~ For the most part yes, but what reason? Someday you shall know.

Hahaaa. Likely so what those three people are doing. ... xD ; Yuko will do anything for Haruna.
Third horror movie is just killer. xD ;;

Well I posted the results of who's going to be king. and who going to do the King's Order.
I'm too lazy to decided who be what specifically. So I just did a random gamble. = w= ;;;
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: altoids on April 25, 2012, 07:25:58 AM
So, uh... yeah... chapter 3.... .____. Etto... etto... It's a little suggestive? at the first King's order...
so... umm. skip it if you feel uncomfortable about it? *shrug*

Chapter 3

“We’re going to play the Kings Game!” Yuko stated with a wide grin.

Rena, Mayu, and Yuki gulped, worried of what they are going to be dragged into. Rena had played this game many times in the past with Yuko and a few other friends, and never, has it been any innocent game. Mayu and Yuki have Yuko for a while, so, they’ve grown to known Yuko’s way of playing her games. Mariko and Haruna sat next to each relaxed in their seat, acting as if they were uninterested in Yuko’s silly games. Jurina on the other hand is clueless what Yuko just stated.

“Eeh, King’s Game?” Jurina asked innocently with her head tilted to the side. The pocky game was one thing she had played with a few friends in her Junior High Year, but never King’s Game.

“Yes, my dear Juri-chan. ~ The King’s Game.” Yuko said humming and tossing an arm over Jurina’s shoulder. “One of the best game out there. ~” She gave a small wink at Jurina. “How the game works is that one chopstick, well popsicle stick, will make you a King if you were to get it. And the others have numbers on them. As the King will pick the number or numbers…” She emphasizes the ‘s‘ at the end of numbers. “..and says what that number have to do. However, the person that has the numbers must not reveal themselves until the King gives the orders~!”

Jurina blinked, getting all the information into her head. Then instantly her faced flushed red, “W-w-w-w-what!?” She started stuttering, she wasn’t sure if she wanted to play now. “A-a-a-are you saying. T-that if the King orders s-s-something suggestive….” She started to trail off, she looked away to try to hide her red face.

“King order is law! So you must do them if you have that number. ~ Now Rena, go get the popsicles stick. Chop-chop! While I get the beer. ~” Yuko lifted removed her arm from Jurina as she made her way to the kitchen.

“Eeeeeeh!? You bought beer?” Rena called after Yuko and chased after her.

Oh brother. Mariko said shaking her head before leaning back against the sofa. Haruna leaned forward in her seat, in order to look at Mariko’s face. She noticed that Mariko was in thoughts as she was curious of Mariko’s mind. “What is, Mariko?” Haruna asked as everyone in the room turned to look at Mariko.

She simply sighed and crossed her arms. “There’s likely a chance someone’s going to get hurt.” She answered vaguely, but everyone got the gist of what Mariko was implying.

“It all can’t be that bad… I mean… What can go wrong?” Jurina said, recovering from her previous state, as she then wonders curiously. Everyone one just sighs, shaking their head at Jurina. Kids. Everyone thought at the same time. Jurina merely tilted her head to the side and gave the ‘What?’ expression.

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The King’s Game has now commenced. They sat in a circle, with everyone sitting around the table, on the floor, expect for Mariko and Haruna, who were sitting comfortably on the sofa. From clockwise, starting with Mayu, it was Jurina, Mariko, Haruna, Yuko, Rena, and finally Yuki.

Everyone had drawn a Popsicle stick, from the cup, as everyone looked at their own they all thought, Crap. As they didn’t pull the King’s Stick, however, Yuko jumped to her feet and announced, “Yatta~ ! I’m the king!” Double crap. Everyone thought.

“He-he-he. ~” Everyone was in utter silence. There was no single movement of sound expect for the rain that was pouring outside. They all look suspiciously at Yuko, who was looking elsewhere, thinking of her first order. They all became agitated, waiting for Yuko’s first order, as Yuki and Rena picked up their can of beer, that Yuko gave them before they started, popping it open as they took a slow sip trying to calm their nerves down from the suspense. Mariko as well opens her can of beer and took a sip, waiting for the order patiently. Mayu and Jurina just sat there stiffened while fiddled with their clothes. Haruna leaned against Mariko using her as her support as she was slowly falling asleep. Until Yuko finally ordered, “Number 7 has to lick all the frosting off of number 3 lips, nice and slow. ~” Instantly, two people started to cough loudly, with a clank sound of the cans being slammed on the table. Everyone’s eyes direct to the source of coughs. As it was Yuki and Rena were the coughing due to choking on their drink. “Fufufu. ~ Look like we got our first two runners up. ~”

“WHAT!?” Yuki and Rena both panic as their face flushed red.

“The King’s order is law! You must do as I say!” Yuko said in triumph, Yuki and Rena looked at her as if she was wearing a troll face mask.

“Where are we -- ” Rena was about the asking, where they were going to get the frosting from, until, Yuko pulled it out a small bucket of frosting behind her as if this was all planned out. Yuki and Rena literally felt like they were being trolled by Yuko. And her huge, troll face, grin didn’t help either.

Mayu eyed Yuko, furrowing her brows at; she didn’t like the idea of Yuko’s order. Yuko, noticing Mayu’s stare, she moved her eyes to Mayu and gave a small wink as Mayu immediately looked away, puffing out a cheek. Jurina on the other hand had a mixed feelings, she didn’t know whether she should feel jealous that Yuki gets to touch Rena’s lips, or be curious to know who was going to do what.

Yuko tossed the small bucket to Yuki as she caught it. “Now whoever is number 7 is going to apply the frosting to number 3’s -- ”

“We know!” Both of them shouted as Yuko just stuck her tongue out playfully.

They both gave an ‘I’m going to kill you.’ look at Yuko before looking at each other, as they knew who is already who. Yuki held the number seven as Rena held number 3.

Rena noticed Yuki lips the word, sorry, as she opened the container.  When the container was opened, Yuki glanced at Yuko giving her a look, wondering why it was new and fresh. Yuko just kept her grin causing Yuki to just give a small shrug, lifting her hand up she dipped an index finger into the bucket, and slide her index around, feeling the cold and smooth texture of the frosting against her index. After collecting a good amount she took her index out and set the bucket aside. She then stood on her knees so she would be taller than Rena, using her free hand she took hold of Rena’s chin and tilted it up.

“This is how the adults play. ~” Yuko whispered to Jurina’s ear while nudging her. Jurina was just in awed, but the back of her head was telling her to stop them. Her body wouldn’t move according to her brain as she just watched. Mayu looked back at them time to time disbelieving that Yuki is going to do it. Mariko simply watched, as Haruna watched them with the expression of ‘Are they really going to do it?’

There was a soft knock on the door, but it seems that no one paid any attention to it.

Yuki started to apply the frost on Rena’s lips as if she was applying lip gloss. Rena felt her cheeks becoming hotter than before as felt the smooth texture of the frosting brushing against her lips, and the cold hands that held her chin up. She wanted to pull back, she wanted this to stop, but her body wouldn’t listen to her. When she saw Yuki face she couldn’t pull away, she realized how pulchritudinous her face is. It as if just Rena being that close to Yuki petrified Rena from moving a single inch. Maybe Rena was just exaggerating but she honestly felt that way.

Yuki moved her hand away after she finished applying the frosting; she then placed her hand on Rena’s shoulder as she carefully tried not to dirty her clothes. She then slowly leaned down to Rena’s face as she closed her eyes, tilting her head a little, and slowly licked the frosting off of Rena’s lips. I’m sorry Rena…

Loud gasps were heard from the audiences, while Rena eyes widened. She felt her heart accelerating from the moisture of Yuki’s tongue against her own lips. Not wanting to see anymore, she shut her eyes close and places her hands on the floor, using them as support in keeping herself and Yuki from falling to the floor. Her mind went spinning from the lack of air. She wanted to gasp for air but if she did who knew what would happen. With the pressure that Yuki applied against Rena’s lips, it felt like she was trying to slip her tongue in and kiss her rather than licking the frosting off. Rena fought against the urge to breathe as she felt her arms growing weak.

Then suddenly the door entrance banged open. Catching Rena off her guard, her arms lost its support, “Nmph!” Rena muffled, falling the floor followed by Yuki, falling right on top of her. “Yo, I knocked but -- …” Takahashi greeted herself in, but cut herself off when she saw Yuki on top of Rena. From her angle she was thinking that both of them were in the middle of making out, and she caught them in the wrong moment, while everyone eyes were directed to Takahashi. Takahashi was dumfounded from such sight as it wasn’t something she expect to see. “I’M SORRY!” Her face turned crimson as she immediately slammed the door closed.

“Minami, what’s wrong?” Atsuko asked looking at Takahashi’s back. Takahashi was silent as Atsuko asked again.

“Nothing we just got the wrong apartment!” Takahashi answered and walked away. Atsuko blinked as her eyes followed Takahashi then briefly to the door, before she followed Takahashi.

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Everyone look at each other as they burst into laughter. Yuki got up from Rena, and hastily moved away, grabbed a napkin and cleaned her index finger from the frosting, before ducking her head down to hide her red face. Same with Rena, she got up and looked away with her head down as well. Both their heart race, they felt embarrass being caught by someone else and missed interpret what they were doing. The other continues to laugh. Yuko and Jurina held her stomach, Mayu is trying to hold her laughter back, even though she utterly hated the fact of Yuki kissing Rena, but seeing Takahashi face, she couldn’t help it. Haruna was simply laughing, but not as loudly as Yuko and Jurina. Mariko was shaking her head and chuckling, with a wide smile, feeling sorry for Takahashi.

“I-I-I’m getting some fresh air!” Rena stated getting up in a hastily manner. Yuki didn’t say anything but followed Rena as she too needed fresh air.

“There they go.” Yuko hummed. “Look like two contestants are out of this round. Alright, next order!” Instantly everything grew silent and stared at Yuko. “Number 4! Would you play the role of being the attacker or the receiver?”

“What?” Number 4 answered as it was Jurina. She gave a confuse expression not understand what Yuko was implying. She felt someone nudging her arm, turning to see who nudge her as it was Mayu. She gestured Jurina to give her an ear. So Jurina did and leaned to hear what Mayu had to say. When Mayu whispered what she needed to whisper, Jurina face reddened. “W-w-wha!?” She stuttered unbelieving what she just heard.

“You heard me. So what is it, Juri-chan. ~”

“Umm….” Jurina stiffened in her seat, unsure what to say, her mind just exploded from the thought. Taking up a little courage she muttered, “The attacker… I guess.” Everyone went, “ooh.” 

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OUTSIDE

Rena stared at the rain as it was heavily pouring. She silent watched the rain, feeling her heart finally calm down and the cold wind brushing against her cheeks help as well. She continued to watch silently until she notices Yuki at the corner of her eyes. Directing her eyes to Yuki, she watch her wondering what Yuki was thinking that made her look so distant.

Yuki continue to think about many things until she felt a pair of eyes on her. She turned her head to the source as she stared into Rena’s eyes. “What is it?” She asked in a flat, almost sweet, tone.

“Huh?” Rena diverted her eyes away from Yuki, “I was just… Wondering what you were thinking.” She paused and glanced back at Yuki, stilling seeing those other pair of eyes staring at her. She stared into those eyes as if Yuki was already able to foretell what Rena was about to say. “Since, you looked very distant.”

Yuki couldn’t help but shrug her shoulders as Rena frowned, thinking that she offended her. “I’m just thinking about a precious friend of mine.” She meekly replied and turned her head away, staring back at the rain.

Rena tilted her head. “A precious friend?” Yuki simply nodded. “Did you meet the person by any chance?” Yuki gave another nod.

“I did… But, rather not speak of it.” Yuki said casually. She turned her head back to face Rena; she notice there was still a little frosting at the corner of Rena’s lips. “Hold still.” She lifted her hand and brushed several strands of Rena’s hair back before she leaned close to her lips.

“Wha -” Rena cut herself off when she felt something wet and warm against the corner of her lips. She pulled back, her face reddens and her heart beating quickly one more, she lifted her hand up and touched the spot where Yuki had just licked. “W-w-what was that for?”

Yuki slightly licked her lips before answering, “The King's order was never completed.”

“Mooou!” Rena huffed; still redden by Yuki’s action. She started to calm down when she heard a soft giggle escaping the raven’s lips. She couldn’t help but giggle too as everything felt nostalgic to her, but she didn’t give too much thought of it and continue to giggle.

“Let’s go back in before we get sick.” Yuki said with a small smile as Rena nodded. Rena walked back into the apartment first leaving Yuki behind. “I told you not to forget…” She muttered, frowning as she felt heartbroken.

About me. Or our memories together. She silently walked back into the apartment.

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When Yuki and Rena came back in, the first thing they see was Haruna jugging a can of beer down, while Yuko, Jurina, and even Mayu, saying “Jug jug jug!” After Haruna finished jugging the can of beer and just topple against Mariko.

“Ah! Welcome backs you two!” Jurina said taking notice of Yuki and Rena. They both nodded and sat back where they originally were.

“You’re both just in time to play round two.” Yuko announced, taking all the Popsicle stick back and shuffled them in her hands. They all watch carefully to make sure Yuko wasn’t cheating on them, once Yuko was done everyone took a stick. Haruna number two. Rena number 3 again. Jurina number 4 again. Mariko number 5. Yuki number 6. And Mayu number 7, meaning that the person who was king is once again, Yuko. “He-he-he. ~ Looks like I’m King once more!” Yuko brightly smiles as everyone just shrugs.

“Okay for the first number 4 and 7 go next door, and scream ‘I love you!’ to whoever answer.” Yuko smiled as everyone sighed in relief with Yuko’s innocent order.

“Noooooooo!” Haruna rejected the order as everyone brought their eyes to her, taking notice that she had became drunk after jugging down one can of beer. “No no no!” She slammed the table as everyone jumped. “You… Should make them…. Do something sillier! Like a piggy back ride, and say that!” She giggled as she flung her arms around.

“Oh no…” Mariko shrugged and face palmed herself, really wishing that she didn’t have to go through taking home a drunken Haruna.

“Now now, I have already given my orders. Maybe next time. ~” Yuko reassured Haruna. Haruna crossed her arms and pouted. “So off with you number 4 and 7, chop-chop!”

Mayu and Jurina groaned, they got up from their seat, walk to the door, slipped on their shoes, and walked out to the next door. Everyone went to the door, with the exception of Mariko, and listen closely. There was loud knock, either by Jurina or Mayu, as someone answered the door. “WE LOVE YOU!” The both shouted at the same time. Then instantly there was a loud door slam.

The two came back inside, their face turning crimson from embarrassment, as they also frowned from being rejected.

Haruna laughed along with Yuko. Yuki and Rena felt sorry for the two being rejected by the neighbor and embarrassing themselves in front of them. They both patted their shoulders before moving back to their seats.

“Shut up!” Mayu and Jurina both yelled at Yuko and Haruna, who were still laughing their butts off. The two stomped back to their seats and crossed their arms. Children. Mariko commented to herself. “Just give the next order already!” Jurina scoffed.

Yuko and Haruna still continue to laugh a little before they both finally calm down, but Haruna still had the giggles. “Okay okay, next is… number 2 turn off the lights and kiss a random person in the room!” The next order was given as Haruna jumped to her feet, waving her arms in the air indicating as she was number two.

“Haaaaaaaii. ~” She runs off to the light switch.

“Oh my god, no! WAIT HARUNA!” Yuko got up hastily to stop Haruna. Not the fact that she didn’t want Haruna kissing someone else, maybe a little, but the fact that she was drunk and didn’t have the mind of her own to control herself to do anything extreme.

Everything turned pitched black. Yuko stumbled into the wall as she cried in pain. But everyone looked around not fully adjusted to the darkness.

“NMPH!” There was a suddenly a loud muffle sound along with a loud thumb.

When the lights turned back on everyone became horrified at what they saw.

To be Continued in Chapter 4
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: nahbee on April 25, 2012, 07:54:06 AM
Whoa, this is amazing!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: Pandah on April 25, 2012, 08:17:22 AM
lolol what an awesome update  :thumbsup

ah jurina....just too innocent here ROFL but after this game her innocence will definitely be gone  :P

*snickers* this perverted squirrel is just epic...hahaha but man i totally flushed red reading this LOL rena and yuki OMG! *dies*
BAHAHA TAKAMINA ! she came in at the wrong moment  :rofl: well at least the atsumina couple wont be dragged into this game of yukos  :lol:

haruna got drunk after a can of beer?! aww so cute LOLOL
*GASP* HARUNA WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! please dont be the one making out with someone other than yuko *gets on knees and begs* argh  :bleed eyes:

LOL well thanks for the update :P  :thumbup
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: Sieka on April 25, 2012, 08:28:49 AM
Hahaha, as if taking a shovel is cheating. :lol:

A band of criminals in a story is hilarious, if you give it a lighter edge. Lol, I'd look forward to it if you possibly write it. :)

Lol, Love pentagon.....let's turn it into undecagon instead. :lol:

I don't think Mayu just wants a hug though, I think she wants something more than just that. Rena, well I guess that's understandable that she's a bit dense or doesn't care, but that's bad you know, acting like that...I do hope she starts caring sooner. :lol:

Lol, is Yuki really courteous? Or was she simply taking a good chance here? :lol:

Mah, true, I can't see Yuki squealing like an otaku fangirl.... :lol:

I wouldn't flee, if I know that my precious friend is here......even though I'm being pulverized by dead hugs due to the horror movie. :sweatdrop: Yuko's just too sly......and awesome. XD

I already knew that Yuko would become the King the moment she suggested that game, lol, just too obvious, that squirrel has a lot of perverted schemes up in her sleeves. :sweatdrop:

I can't believe that Jurina doesn't know about this......lol, I guess she and her friends never really got that extreme huh? Lol, you'd have to thank Yuko for introducing this game to you Jurina, at least now you know what you should and shouldn't play. :lol:

First order, and its extremely suggestive and utterly sexy. Wew, and its Yuki and Rena, lol gaia must have a big favorite out of them to pair them together huh..... :lol:

Yuko is extremely trolling everyone here, it looks like she knew she'd be king, and that she had prepared for something like that, lol, what a troll, but what can I say? I love you Yuko for this.... :wub:

Aiyaaaaaaaah.....my head went overload, I'm grinning like an idiot, uwah, so so so.....aiyaah, sexy.....uwah.
Yuki on top of Rena, licking off the frosting from Rena's lips, uwah, does Yuki plan to kiss Rena there with such pressure that she applies on Rena's lips? I'm gushing words here of fangirlism. :lol: I think Yuki wants to kiss Rena for real though, ohohoho.....I think some feelings are resurfacing again......is this love? Is this friendship? Or was it merely just because it was an order? Hohoho, I think my questions are aimed towards Yuki here. :lol:

Somehow, I wanted Yuki to kiss Rena though, I mean I would really have loved it if Yuki's tongue accidentally slipped inside Rena's mouth when they both fell on the floor~ It would have been really really.....hawt. :on bleed:

And......Takamina just had to come at the wrong time, lol, too bad, Yuki and Rena didn't finish the game, but at least Takamina and Acchan were safe from playing the King's game. :lol:

Yuki and Rena flees to seek fresh air, hahaha.....and Yuko continues the game! I wonder what Jurina did........I'm curious. :lol:

I though Yuki and Rena wouldn't finish the game, looks like they did, Yuki is so so dominant here, lol....... :lol: Not that I don't like it~ :heart: Yuki's giving some hints, but Rena doesn't get them? Ouch. :bleed eyes: I feel the pain, I feel it burning, it hurts oh so deeply. It really hurts oh so badly when you're the only one who remembers and the person that's precious to you doesn't remember you at all........it makes you question if your bond really was strong, or if anything really came between them. :catglare:

Ouch. :bleed eyes:

Looks like Yuki's angry? Or disappointed? Rena forgot her, she had every reason to be angry and disappointed after all....I just hope that Rena would remember Yuki, before something happens bad and tears them apart again. :(

Lol, poor Jurina and Mayu, troll moments with Yuko who is a King in the second game, lol........and what the heck? Haruna! Omg, who did Haruna kiss? She's drunk too, did she kiss a newcomer? Or someone there? Or did she missed and kissed the floor? :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Thanks for the update dude. 8)
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: karomuwi on April 25, 2012, 08:49:30 AM
Altoid-sama!!!!! :kneelbow: I worship thee!  :bow: :bow: :bow:

The YukiRena scene was so awesome and amazing that words cannot express how happy and giddy I was whilst I read! The scene made me :dizzy: :luvluv1: :shy1: :shy2: :on_hot: !

HA! WHO AM I KIDDING?!

It made go like this!  :on bleed: :mon inluv: :mon blood: :mon XD:  :mon bleed2: :mon crazyinlove:

I literally died and rel-lived several times!  :mon angel: And now I'm alive to comment on this WONDERFUL update and fic of yours! Also, I want to thank Yuko-sama so much! Yuko-sama! YOU ARE THE BEST PERVERT EVER!!!!  :mon yeah:

If I could easily get a nosebleed, my whole house would have been soaked! though I don't have that much blood LOL YOU ARE AWESOME! MAGNIFICENT!!!! Do you need more words to know just how awesome you are?! DO YOU?! Well...That's too bad. My vocabulary is limited.  :hiakhiakhiak:

This update is REALLY a total win!  :on GJ: And because of that, I have decided to make you one of my favourite authors!!! Je t'aime!  :mon love:

Okay. *ahem* let's go onto the others. My fangirling over the YukiRena scene has caused me to lose quite an amount of energy.   :mon tweaker:

I LOLed when Takamina entered the place and saw the two! It was such an epic fail! What great timing our Fail Captain has! tsk tsk tsk. Ahahahahaha. And wow. I never knew about how the King's Game really worked! I thought that the King's Game was like a game of roleplaying the characters -like kind and queens-. Well, that's what my cousin who's currently staying in Japan told me. She lied to me!
Anyways! Poor JuriMayu. Had to be embarrassed. And what did Jurina do?! What did Yuko meant by attacker or receiver?! I WANNA KNOW!!!!  :lol:

And the question remains. How did Rena forget Yukirin?

Another question popped up. Will Yukirin make her remember her?

And another! What will she do then?

Ah~ Altoid-san.... I can no longer find the words and energy to thank you enough for writing this update. *loses stock knowledge for vocab* My head is aching from the over fan-girling I did. And I think that I just humiliated myself in my father's office after saying 'Yes! YES! FINALLY! A KISS!  :mon lovelaff:' *sigh* I should really stop reading fics whenever I'm outside my house. It shows people the side I don't really want them to see.  :mon sweat:

Anyway, Altoid-san! THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE UPDATE! This avid reader of yours shall lay down on the couch with the air-con on to calm down her racing heart and aching head.  :mon ko:  :depressed:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: pen-pen-chii on April 25, 2012, 09:56:22 AM
Poor JuriMayu they have to see RenaYuki do that~ And they have to do something embarassing~  :badluck:
But YukiRena scene is... :mon blood: :on bleed: Wait...What the heck are you two doing in front of a kid(Jurina)!!!  :scolding:

I wonder who Haruna kissed~  :dunno: Maybe its Yuko or Mariko or Acchan :on lol: who suddenly opened the door then Haruna kissed her~  :on lol:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: bochang on April 25, 2012, 11:04:41 AM
I don't know what happened..
I'm pretty sure that I've commented last night..
But I think my stupid phone can't processed it.. TT.TT

I really love this story. :)
At the prologue and first chapter *teary eyes
I almost crying.. TT.TT poor them. They've to be apart..
and chapter two.. Just found out that there will be a square love (mayuki-yukirena-wmatsui) hohooh
Can't wait the drama. :p

Also about rena's accident that cause a retrograde amnesia.

And chapter 3 make me squealing like a girl..
Omg.. Yuko is so.. GREAT! LOL
I feel like a perverted old man.. LOL
I really love jurina in this story. She's so cute, playful, innocent, usually in a fanfic jurina would be a cold girl, but in this fanfic.. Kya~ kya~ kya~ #lolicon

The way yuki lick rena's lips is.. *nosebleed*
Great entrance from takamina! LOL

I wonder what jurina do when she said she wants to play the attacker's role.. *imagining* I hope you told me us. LOL

Mayuyu and jurina is LOL

But I think you wrote it wrong. Mayuyu is number 7. Number 6 is.. *i forget but it's not mayuyu. Hehehe

Please continue~ :D
Can't wait to know who will be kissed by NyanNyan. LOL
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: cutegiurl on April 25, 2012, 12:12:03 PM
awesome! love the King's game!!!  :inlove:

Yuki licking Rena's lips  :inlove: too sexy~

thanks for creating that scene! XDDD

i wonder who kissed at the last part! maybe Rena & Yuki kissed again?? XD i hope so!!!

cant wait for the next chapter!!! this is awesome!

Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: Playgirlz on April 25, 2012, 04:42:25 PM
wow~ wow~ wow~ this chapter is so so sooo hot !!!  :on bleed:
I never think that Yuki would do as what Yuko asks and glad she did :farofflook:
Thank you so much Yuko's pervert mind  :luvluv2:
And also,a drunk Haruna?? I can't imagine how it would look like, so cute <3333
Thank you a lot for updating this new chapter and it's ok for me even it goes strange =v=
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on April 25, 2012, 04:52:34 PM
ahahahahahahahahahahahahhaa poor Takamina lolz

I wonder who was kissed by Koji

SO that is what the king game is ooo seems kwl but i would never play that with my friends my friends would be even worse

Yuko is such a perv she would get them to lick frosting off eachothers mouth

poor Mayu and Jurina the nigbours might not love u but we do

thanks for update
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
Post by: Haruko on April 26, 2012, 04:12:26 AM
ehhhh who dare to touch haruna´s lips O_O... aww my kojiyuu!!

i think that takamina gonna join at game but.. not..  aww please atsumina need to be there!!

but who deserve in this capter haruna`s kiss... maybe... rena? jaaj for me its ok...

but aww i want that yuko wnna be the person..
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
Post by: altoids on April 26, 2012, 06:34:24 AM
@ nahbee-san : Hahaa. Thanks. o uob

@ pandah-san : Thankies. o uob
Seriously. Lol. Feel really sorry for Jurina don’t think she’ll be the same innocent person every again. </3
Hahaa. Guess that was a bit unexpected? xD I did warn ya, bro. Though I wished I did a better job at it. ;;
Yup. Would’ve been interesting how it would go if they did join. ~ > w> ;
Mhmm. ~ Well, you know how people show their true colors when they’re drunk. ~ ;3
:”D

@ Sieka-san : Okay. ~ No taking out a shovel isn’t cheating. But using it to dig it is! = u=)
It’s going to more brighter side than the darker side. Been writing too many depressing dark fanfic. </3
Don’t worry I’m already starting on it, bro! o uob Also with another fanfic. Yuki x some person I don’t know yet. .___. ;;

I remember someone comment in Izzy’s story about a male version of Yuki. So I decided to take up that idea of making another fanfic, but with male version of Yuki. <33 ;; Paired up with… I don’t know who, yet. ; AAAA;

Hahaa. Wouldn’t that be a circle instead? xD

… Um.. A smexy kiss from Yuki. ~Smexy? Lol. Okay, sorry. xD ;; Didn’t mean to say that. Lol.
Don’t worry she will…. Eventually…. Soon… o uo ;;;;

It can be that. ~ OR she want to eat Rena’s cooking instead, hur hur. ~ ;3

Nope. Unless she was posses or had a body swaps. = w= ~

Awww. ~ How kind of you. = w= At least you’re more kind than I am, bro. :”D
Seriously right? ;3

Hahaa. But I wasn’t planning to make her king. It’s possible Gaia can read your mind. </3
The pervy must be always ready for anything. ~

Look like not? Lol. Oh yeah. Totally. ~ Because after the game Jurina is likely never going to be the same again.. Maybe. = w= ;;;; You live and learn them, bro.

… It was about to be Mayu and Rena. Yeah. Gaia loves the fan’s shipping more than my thoughts. Lol. It was first the idea of the Pocky game, but then.. yeaaaaaa. XP

You got love Yuko for everyone, honestly.

Hahaaa. xD ;; I wished I made the scene it be better. > A> ;;; But a well.
Bro, Yuki always wanted to kiss Rena. She just never had the chance? :”D

Lol. Someday. Don’t worry some day that may happen. Either accidently or purposely. ;3

Oh yeah. Totally. I think they Takamina would go crazy if she was dragged in. Don’t know about Acchan. O:

That’s a myster that shall never be reveal of what Jurina did.

It’s Yuki’s excuse to be that close to Rena. > w>
*pat pat* Reasons shall be answers in due time. I would seriously make it very reasonable. </3

 .. hnn. Would I be murder by fan if I didn’t make Rena remember Yuki, and drama happens? .____. ;;

@ karomuwi-san : Yo, bro. ;; Al or Mint is fine. Don’t need to formality and stuff. ;;
Ack! That’s not needed! ; www;
Really? I really thought it could have been better. </3 But, I appreciate it though.
Oh my…. It’s like all of the emoticons are like making a story out of your expression. xD not that it’s bad, bro. ~
Without Yuko’s pervy-ness everything would have been boring right? </3

Whoa, bro. Chill. ~ ;3 Don’t want you dying from the lack of blood if that was really possible. ;;;;
What no! Oh my god. xD There’s no need for such epic words of your bro. ~ I don’t deserve them. Lol. ;;;

What? ;; Umm… Thankies? > w> ;

*pat pat* Don’t go jumping out windows now. = w= ;;

That’s the Captain we know for ya! ;D
What seriously? o uo ; eeh.. Depends on the person? I only knew the King’s Game in that kind of term. Not the roleplaying. xD ;;; So I can’t say if your cousin did lie to you or not. ;;;
Oh my god! …. …. No I shall not tell you! Your mind it too innocent to know! ; ww; I cannot corrupt your mind… yet.
Even if you’re a year younger than me I believe? xD ;

Questions that shall be answered, oh so…. Soon… Just not that soon? </3

Al or Mint is fine. And.. There’s no need, bro, really. I appreciate your epic comments though. <33 Same with Sieka-san. ~
Lol. Don’t read fanfic while you’re out inside the privacy of your room. xD ;;
Oh my. ;;;

@ pen pen chii-san : Don’t think Yuki minded too much. ~ Well got feel sorry for the youngsters for the most part. </3
Hahaaa. xD Yuki and Rena mind just shut down and forgot there was a 15 year old there? xD

@ bochang-san : It’s fine bro. xD ;

Thanks. I read your, Infinity, by the way. I really love it, bro. ~ > w>
Never had the time to comment on too much of people’s works though. I feel terrible. OTL
I should really get to them soon. </3
Really? ;;; Didn’t think it would have that much effect. :”D ;;; My bad?
Forget triangle. ( no not really ) It’s all about the square. ;3 And other shapes…. Lol.

Aah, yes. ~ Rena’s accident. It shall be known later. ~

Hahaa. Don’t sweat it, bro. I seriously felt a little awkward typing that scene. xD ;;
But… Hey, everyone is a pervy inside, and there’s no denying it. </3
Really? ;; Well then that need to be change from her cold, badass girl into the opposite. ~
*pat pat* o uo

… Oh my. ;; Please don’t lose a lot of blood. ;;
I’m pretty sure Takamina is scar for life… Sort of. xD ;

That’s a mystery to your imagination. ~

by the way. thanks for the correction earlier bro. Didn't catch that. OTL
Really appreciate it.

@ cutegiurl-san : Thanks.
…. xD ;; oh my… Still can’t stop feel a little weird writing that part.
You’ll know… for sure. = w=

@ playgirlz-san : ….  o uo ;;;
Yuki might go through worse if she deny Yuko’s order, possibly. Lol.
Really? xD Well… There’s imagination ~
Thanks. = w=b

@ XxRoByNxX78
-san
: Totally got to feel for her, bro. xD ;;
You’ll know… You’ll know.
Oh dude… If you can totally do any dares yeah. xD ;; Probably want to stay away from any friends that are extreme then. xD ;;
The feeling of rejection. </3 ;;

@ Haruko-san : don’t know? Only chapter 4 knows. :”D
Bro, there would possibly be chaos all around if the atsumina jumped in, maybe. xD
….. you seriously read my thoughts about that. .____. You’re not a psychic are you?

@ everyone : sorry about this chapter, bro. </3 ;;; eyes are dying from staring at the screen for so long. * n*
by the way. if you see some sort of mistake correct me. </3 I don't. I would have it correct then wrong. OTL
well, enjoy ~ ? o:

Chapter 4

When the lights turned back on, everyone became horrified at what they saw.

Everyone’s eyes were wide as if their eyes balls were going to pop out. The scene left everyone utterly speechless. Apparently, it Yuki was the one who turned the lights back on, and not Yuko. Everyone was shocked by this scene of Haruna was on top of Yuko, pinning her down to the floor, with their lips pressed against each other.

 Yuko’s eye were also widen in shock like the rest, face turned into a deep shade of red, and her mind went off into another world, the world she called Heaven. The day when she is able to kiss Haruna has literally become a dream come true, even if Haruna was drunk or not. When Yuko felt something wet against her lips, she couldn’t help but gasp as she felt something wet slip into her mouth. Haruna pressed a little deeper into their kiss. As Yuko she felt her mind going haywire, her mind just spun around, without thinking, her tongue met Haruna’s tongue.

“Jurina no!” Rena jumped from her seat, and used her hands to cover Jurina’s eyes. But, Rena was too slow as Jurina faced turned into a whole new dark shade of red, if there is a new shade of red. The images of steam were just come out of her head, as she was breaking into a meltdown. W-w-w-w-what… d-d-d-did I j-just s-s-see!? Even in Jurina’s thoughts she stuttered. Mayu just brought her hands over her mouth, her lips making an wide ‘ o ‘. She too was blushing, but not as much as Jurina. Mariko and Yuki, broke out of their state of shoke, ran up to Haruna and Yuko, and separated them. Mariko pulled Haruna off of Yuko, and Yuki dragged Yuko on the floor, away from Haruna’s reach.

“Yuko! Hey!” Yuki called while she lightly taps Yuko on the cheek.

“I’m…In… Heaavenn right nooooow. ~” Yuko replied with a wide smile. Her mind was literally in heaven, and nothing was going to bring her back to reality any timesoon.

Seeing that Yuko was fine, Yuki gave heavy as she decided to leave Yuko on the floor. She looked up Haruna, seeing that she was still pulled into Mariko’s arms, she flap a hand as if she was gesturing Yuki to come over. “We should call it day. It’s already 1 in the morning…” Yuki suggested. Mariko agreed, along with the others, expect for Jurina. Jurina was still under the state of having a meltdown.

“Noooooo!” Haruna protested. “No no no!” She struggled to break free from Mariko’s arms as it worked. “I want to see you two kiss again!” She flees to Rena.

“Huh, what!?” Rena felt a tight grasped around her right wrist, and was suddenly pulled to her feet to be dragged away by Haruna.

“Now smooooch ~ !”

“Wha - !?” Rena wasn’t able to finish when Haruna pushed her towards Yuki. Before she knew it her lips pressed again Yuki’s soft lips once more. Yuki was unable to react in time, as she lost her balance and fell to the floor, taking Rena down with her. She landed on the floor with a loud thump as she hit her head against the floor, painfully. Yuki muffled out a painful groan under their kiss. Rena immediately pulled away, breaking the kiss, “Kashiwagi-san, are you alright?” She helped Yuki into a sitting position.

“Tsk. It hurts like hell.” Yuki winced in pain, closing her eyes tight, as she rubbed the back of her head.

Rena sat on her legs, and held her head down feeling guilty for Yuki’s injury. “I-I’m sorry Kashiwagi-san…”

“Yuki.” Yuki muttered, opening one eye while she still rubbed the back of her head. Rena brought her head up to look at Yuki.

“What?” Rena asked confused.

“Address me as Yuki.” Yuki attempted to get up, but the back of her head pained so much that she couldn’t get up, as she groaned in pain.

“Kashi-Yuki, you should just lie back down. You're only making your pain worse.” Rena insisted, stopping Yuki from getting up.

“I wouldn’t be in pain for this drunk here.” Yuki scoffed as she shot a cold and piercing glare at Haruna. Haruna simply looked away with her arms crossed and purses her lips, as if she didn’t do anything wrong. “Just help me up.” Rena didn’t protested this time, giving a nod; Yuki tossed her right arm across Rena’s shoulders, and Rena snake her arm around Yuki’s waist before they slowly got to their feet. Rena slowly took a step followed by Yuki, another small winced escaped her lips, her whole body was in pain and not just her head. And the step she took could have led to falling back on the floor if Rena wasn’t there to support her.
 
“Yuki…” Rena muttered becoming very worried of Yuki’s condition. “Maybe you should just lie down until you’re feeling better.”

“No, it’s fine. I’ll deal with it.” Yuki said softly, trying to reassure Rena that she was fine. Rena wanted to protest, but it seems Yuki didn’t want to listen as Rena had no choice, but to listen to Yuki instead. They slowly made their way to the sofa.

Mayu watched Yuki and Rena, feeling a little jealous of Rena being so close to Yuki. Too close. Mayu knew Rena is a childhood friend of Yuki, but she wondered why Yuki never gave up on her. She hated the fact that Rena is still in Yuki’s heart. Even if Yuki opened up to Mayu after the long years of attempts in the past, she was never able to get into Yuki’s heart. They dated for a month in the past, and Yuki knew that Mayu had feelings for her, since the beginning of their encounter; even so, Yuki couldn’t keep her mind away from Rena. Mayu hated that. She wanted Rena gone; however, she couldn’t erase Rena from existence physically. She couldn’t see Yuki heartbroken than she already is with Rena missing memories. And she can’t face the fact of Yuki hating Mayu. Curling her hand into a tight fist she looked down at the ground, hiding her anger.

“I-I’m going home!” Jurina announced, jumping to her feet, “Good night everyone.” Jurnia excused herself and left in a rush. Haruna waved her arms and saying ‘bye’ to Jurina.

“We should all go home, now, before anything else happens.” Mariko suggested as she shrugged her shoulders. “Yuki, you should stay over tonight. Getting home in the condition you are now is impossible. I’ll take Mayu home, along with Haruna.”

Mayu shot her head up looking at Mariko, annoyed what she just said, “No, I’m stay here as well!” She protested.

“You’ll just be in the way. Don’t make things harder as it is.” Mariko fought back, keeping her composure. “Is that fine with you Yuki?” Rena slowly lowered Yuki down to the sofa, sitting comfortably in it. “I don’t mind.” Yuki answered.

Mayu scrunched up her nose being defeated already. She didn’t like this. Not one bit did she like Yuki staying over with Rena, and Yuko. She didn’t mind Yuko, she saw her as a sister anyways, but Rena is who she mined the most, but it doesn’t seem that Mariko will allow her to stay. And she didn’t want to fight against it because she knew Yuki would probably back Mariko up. “Fine.” She said bitterly getting up, and leaving. Mariko’s eyes followed Mayu until she was out of her sight. She gave a small sigh when the door was slammed closed.

“Goodnight you two.” The two replied their goodnights to her. Mariko then looked down at Yuko, who seem to have already fallen asleep in heaven. “And Yuko. Let’s go Haruna.” She locked arms with Haruna, as she waved bye to them while being pulled away. Mariko locked the doorknob before she and Haruna exited the house, so Rena didn’t had to do it.

“I’ll go get you some water.” Rena said to Yuki, as she was about to walk away she felt a hand grasping her wrist. She turn to see Yuki’s black orbs staring into Rena’s browns orbs.

“It’s fine. Just…” Yuki broke away the stare, and look elsewhere. “Sit with me, please?”

Rena cheek tinted pink as she looks down at Yuki, unsure what to say or how to react. She was dumbfounded, not only Yuki was pulchritudinous to Rena’s eyes, but also adorable. She never expected to see such side of Yuki. She always thought Yuki was the composed and tight person, this moment told her otherwise. She gave a small nod and sat down next to Yuki’s left side. She was stiff at first, after a while, she started to relax.

Rena felt soft cold hands beneath her right palm, and her fingers were being fiddle with. Curious, she looked down at her hand noticing Yuki were fiddling with them. As her cheeks tinted pink once more.  “I’m sorry…” Yuki apologized. Immediately Rena shook her head as a soft giggle escape from the raven’s lips. “You… just remind me of my precious friend.” Rena didn’t reply, but nodded in understanding. “I’m sorry.” She apologized again.

“It’s fine really. So stop apologizing already.” Rena assured her, giving a sweet smile. Yuki gave another nod, and rested her head on Rena’s shoulder as she continues to fiddle with Rena’s fingers. Rena too rested her cheeks against Yuki’s head. Rena smelled the familiar scent again, when she stumbled into Yuki. The sweet smell really calm Rena’s mind, causing her to slowly fall asleep.

“I wished you remember.” Yuki whispered very softly so that Rena wouldn’t hear. She felt heartbroken when Rena didn’t remember her, but being with her like this she was at ease. Being her like this, Yuki felt as if the pain in her body disappeared, like it never existed. She wished she had the ability to stop time so their moment wouldn’t end. Unfortunately she doesn’t have that type ability.

“Hm?” Rena hummed, wondering what Yuki whispered, but she only got a slowly head shake in response. After that it became completely silence. And only the sound of raining falling echoes the room. Rena noticed Yuki had already fallen fast asleep on Rena’s shoulder. And their hands were still in the same position. She couldn’t help but let out a giggle, thinking that she would have fallen asleep first after all the running, and events she went through. She couldn’t resist but entwined her hands with Yuki’s, and brought Yuki’s hand up to her lips, leaving a soft kiss at the back of Yuki’s palm. This… Really feels familiar… I wonder why… Rena questioned herself, resting their hands back down on Rena’s lap, before closing her eyes and falling asleep.

To be Continue in Chapter 5

So I was watching SKE48 new single, "Ai Shite Love Ru" which led to finish making chapter 4 the next day, meaning today. lol. ;;;
instead of doing my homework, that's due tomorrow. OTL /shotshotshotshot bad me. </3
 Also the result for the event was not my decision. = w= I let the RANDOMNESS (http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/test-forum/sh-t-g-ggles-dnp/t.79366201_46/) do it for me. OTL I was being lazy so yeah. </3
Gaia is seriously trolling me. You guys are lucky to having the pair up that wasn't intended. = w=)
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
Post by: Sieka on April 26, 2012, 07:16:32 AM
Why is digging illegal? I don't think there's any rules forbidding me from digging though~ :P

Ohh, brighter huh? Wew, well, that's good indeed. It's better to have something lighter to read after all, I've been writing dark things as of lately as well...... :lol:

Yuki x someone else? ...I dunno if I like the sound of that, given how that someone is still unknown. :O

Yuki as a male? Wew, that's hot... :heart:

Ehh...well, its almost a circle. :lol: Mah mah mah...I dunno what shape to say anymore. :lol:

You better do, dude. If you won't make a smexy kiss, I'll write it myself! :( (Desperate)

Rena does cook well.....mah mah, since Yuki does like Rena after all, she'd surely would want to eat something that Rena made, instead of someone elses cooking.... :lol: I wonder, is Yuki bad in cooking here? :lol:

It's not being kind dude. It's being selfish. I'd take the opportunity for granted, just to be even a bit close to that special someone. Well, if I had one, but I don't anyways. :lol: Yuko FTW! XD XD XD

Thank you Gaia~ :lol:
Perverts need to have hidden compartments and pockets ready, lol. I think Yuko hid it somewhere in the dark, no one seemed to have noticed her having it. :lol:

Well~ Gaia is biased for fans. :lol:

Asakjdeiaujrasjk...... ALWAYS WANTED?
You, my dear author, have officially screwed up my head with blood! :lol:
Omg, omg omg omg omg, I'm fangirling.....and I don't usually do that, what a sly author you are!! :lol:

I hope its on purpose. :wub:

I think Acchan would be willing to participate in it, just as long as its Takamina who's her partner. :lol:

Toinks...cruel. You won't even reveal what Jurina did.

You better do make it reasonable, or I'll be the first one to hunt and haunt you down altoids-san. :lol:

I dunno about that. Either way, I think making new memories is better than taking back old memories, because when you remember, the wounds and scars in the past tends to open along. Making new memories is much better. *w*)

Oh heaven is a place on earth, oh heaven is a place on earth~♫

Hahaha, Yuko got a jackpot, hohoh, Haruna and Yuko seems to be enjoying it though, lol, too bad everyone had to pull them apart~ :lol:

Jurina is corrupted already! OHHHHH!!! ""orz

AH HARUNA YOU ARE SUCH A GENIUS! You're so so like Yuko. :bow:
Lol, she pushed Rena to Yuki! Omg, they kissed for real....ohohohohoho............ :farofflook:
Too bad it was a bad kiss though because Yuki got hurt in the process........at least you kissed Rena, Yuki! :onioncheer:

And Yuki has every excuse to stay over, even have Rena care for her and call her by her name! How sly can you get Yuki? Looks like we have three sly people here. :glasses:

Mayuyu is jealous, omg? There will be fire and magma soon! And Rena won't even know that Mayu hates her for dominating Yuki's heart and mind. Lol, how dense can you get Rena? I wanna see how far it will be! :lol:

I....huh, ouch?
I felt my heart hurt all of a sudden while reading through the parts near the end.
Yuki's reminiscing of a friend, a friend that Rena thinks is someone else, but its in fact her....that kind of hurts......sitting there, together with the person who forgot you.......even though you told her not to forget. :sweatdrop: Ahh dang, Yuki must be really in pain, not only from Rena forgetting, but for the separation.....and now fate's being cruel to her again, by taking Rena's memories away. :err:

I wonder how long till Rena starts remembering..... :?

Somehow, that last part where Rena bought Yuki's hands up and kissed it, it didn't seemed appropriate to do for a friend you just met for the first time, Rena.......... :sweatdrop: Was Rena is openly affectionate to people she met for the first time? Or was it because she was feeling too nostalgic that it urged her to kiss Yuki's hand? I wonder....such a gesture is so intimate, it left me squealing to be honest, but dang........Rena doesn't remember. Shoot it. :lol:

I wonder what will the morning await for them? Will Jurina visit again and stumble upon this scene?
Jealousy will be filling the docks next time! JuriMayu jealous duo, hohoho......... :lol:

Thanks for the update. :cathappy:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
Post by: Haruko on April 26, 2012, 08:35:32 AM
OMG!! LOVE YOU!!! my kojiyuu!! that kiss wow...

jaja jurina learn a new lesson about an adult kiss.. :D like so fucking much...

but we need a little atsumina :D...

and the next day.. haruna gonna remember or just yuko?..
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
Post by: cutegiurl on April 26, 2012, 11:18:57 AM
Drunk Haruna is the best!!!!!!!!!   :twothumbs
thank you drunk Haruna for that RenaYuki moment  :deco:
that KojiYuu kiss  :wub: :inlove:
and the last part is so bittersweet  :cry:
i hope Rena remembers Yuki soon!  :cry:
thanks for the awesome update!
looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
Post by: bochang on April 26, 2012, 11:44:32 AM
*nosebleed*

Uwah.. *still having a nose bleed*
Haruna.. *losing 2400cc of blood*
Tounge.. *died*

OMG!!! NyanNyan!!!!! *speechless*

Jurina. I think she'll become a kiss demon after this. LOL
You go girl! It's time for you to know this things!

And.. Haruna.. It's like a meme "now kiss" Yuki, Rena. LOL
(If you don't know about this meme things, try to open 9gag.com)

Mariko!! Why did you stop KojiYuu's kiss? Let them continue *still having a nosebleed in the void*

But after that event.. It's became a drama..

Poor Yuki because Rena forget her.
But the good news is Rena still have the same feeling. :D

It's became dillematic since mayuyu loves yuki too!!
I don't know who should I support! LOL

If yuki n rena become a couple.
Surely mayuyu and jurina will be sad..
If mayuki and wmatsui become a couple
I don't know!!! LOL yuki n rena will have to live without the person who they truly love..

And poor mayuyu.. Yuki hate her.. TT.TT
Cyborg idol! Please don't cry! TT.TT

And thx for the update altoids-san. :D
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
Post by: kahem on April 26, 2012, 06:10:35 PM
Hahahaha! I lkove this game! Especially when Yuko is the King hahahah!
OMG Kojiyuu kiss!!!! So hot!!!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: altoids on April 28, 2012, 07:29:50 AM
@ Sieka-san : Argh! Touche, bro. Touche... Well if you plan to dig hope you hit a coffin and not gold. = 3= ~

Mhmm. o uo Brighter. ~ And none of that depression from someone's death. ; ww; Expect for Rena ( Gekikara ) assassinating people. lol.
It's nice to read something bright. = w= Totally can tell that you have. :"D

Hahaa. ;; That because I don't know who to pair her ( him ) up with. ;;; I was thinking about Rena again... But..
I don't know. It seems to fit more if it was Mayu. OTL. Do you want to read it and see what second character fits the best? o wo ;

Hot stud, yukirin. o 3o ~

Hahaaa. xD Almost a circle? Wouldn't that be consider a dented circle? lol.

Okay okay. ;;; Either you'll write it yourself or you may have a weapon pointed at my head and force me. :"D ;;;;

Of course. ~ ;3 Show how much Yuki's love for Rena. ; w; ... Eeh. I don't know. *goes to ask Yuki* .... *comes back*
She just gave me a death glare. ; AAA;

I see. ~ ;P Still kind of you though. I would just flee instead? hahaa. You will eventually, bro. ~
* w*)b

It's totally true y'know. ~ ;3 You won't be a prevert unless your prepared. lol. xD ; Yuko is like a magician. * o*

Yes. ~ Indeed she always wanted. lol. :"D
Hahaaa. Is that so ~ ? o uo
... You shouldn't have said that. Now I totally want to see you fangirl more. = w= ~

Definitely? :"D But eventually because I'm a tease like that. > w> ;;

Hahaa. Maybe so. :"D For now that's a mystery. ~ o 3o

Nope. The mystery of what an 15 year old did shall never be revealed.
It shall all be left to your imagination. ~ ;p

Oh my, oh my. Such violence. ;;
And you can just address me as Mint or Al, bro. xD None of that formality stuff. > w> *notusetoit* lol.

Aah, that is certainly true. Though eventually those old memories are going to come back.
When old one comes back it best to try to fill it up with new and better memories, right? . w.

There's a kid watching. :"D And seeeing two adult making out, oh my oh my. ~

Poor Jurina... = w= ;; But it's all GOOD! :"D all good...

When she is DRUNK! lol. xD

It's a kiss and a faill kiss. </3
One painful kiss. lol. Love hurts. </3

Pssh. Pssh. > w> Bro, wouldn't you do the same thing? :"D And she can probably be a little more slier for Rena ~ ? ;3

Soon soon. For now... Need to see a certain puppy's side. ~ And the JuriMayu will born! * o* Maybe....
Aaah. ~ You shall know Rena's thoughts. . w.

</3 A very heartbreaking moment. Too... argh! *goes off to happy land* ; nn;

When fragments of her memories start coming back by turn of events........................................

:"D ;;  ~ * ~ * ~ *

@ Haruko-san: Hahaa. = w=b If Haruna wasn't drunk she might has just give a peck. xD ;

Oh, poor Jurina. ~ = w= She's still young to know the adult kiss.

Aah, I'm still deciding to add them in or not... ;;; This is meant to be a 15 or short chapter long.
.___. ;;

Hnnn. ~

@ cutegiurl: xD Right?

Poor Yuki though. </3 Getting her kiss / fail kiss.

Hahaa. xD ; Who know how worse it would have gotten? . w. ;;;

o uob

@ bochang-san: Oh my..;;;; Don't die on me! D:

Don't know about that just yet. = 3= ;;
Oh my! xD She still young for such things! not really. lol.

Hahaa. 9gag is pretty awesome. ~ ;3 So I know what you're talking about. ~

... ;;; Oh my. I wonder have much blood you have left. ;;
Hey, there is a kid watch! xD ;

Some feelings Rena has. ~ Just very unsure of them though. ; nn;

Umm... Support YukiRena? :"D

Not only sad, they may end up hating the person who stoled them away? ; w;
... Such a hard decision.. = w= ;;;

IF... Mayu doesn't do anything stupid. :x
... D:

No probs. and Just address me at Al or Mint! xD ;

@ kahem-san: Don't play such game with pervy friends. xD ; Unless you can deal with any orders. lol.
One lesson learn from the King's Game.
o wo

@ evryone: Boring chapter. OTL </3

Chapter 5

9:24 AM

It has finally reached morning where the sun was already high in the sky. However, there was no sun. The morning gray cloud covered the whole blue sky, giving on a gray morning.
 
Rena slowly opens her eyes, she blinks several time allowing her sight to adjust to the light. She then gave a small stifle yawn, wanting to stretch she shifted in her seat, but then she felt pressure leaning against her right shoulder. Turning her head she saw Yuki was still sleeping peacefully against her. She gave a soft smile, untwining their hands, she then moved off the sofa, while carefully setting Yuki down on the sofa. Quietly, she walked into her own room, grabbed the blanket off of her head, and dragged it out of her room. She walked back to where she was before, and drapes the blanket over Yuki.

She then made her away to the bathroom to wash her face, turning on the facets to the right temperature; she cupped her hands under the running water and splashed the water on her face twice before turning it off, and grabs the nearest towel on the rack. Drying her face off, she suddenly started to recall last night events. Every scene flashed to her mind, especially that scene, the scene of Yuki licking the frosting off of her lips. Her face flushed red from the memories. As she also recalled the time when she went to get fresh air and everything that happened after.

Then she remembers something. She recalled the time when she kissed Yuki’s hand before she slept. Her eyes widen as she became shock in place, realizing what she did, as the towel slipped out of her hands and lands on floor. Her face suddenly became dark shade of red. W-w-whaa!? Wait! What did I just do!? Why did I do that!? In her mind, she was flailing her arms while panicking. I can’t believe I did that! I just met her! Getting herself out of the state of being shock she started to massage her temples, trying to calm her mind down, and then stop to think. …But, my body just acted on its own. Why? Why being with her feel so familiar? “Argh! -- Moou!” She frustrated, she resumes massaging her temples. Is it because she told me that I remind her of her friend? Is that’s why? There was a knock on the door follow by the sound of it creaking open.

Behind the door was Yuko, who seem to have woken up before them because she was dressed differently “Hey, Rena-chan you’re awa --…?” Yuko slowly quirks a brow when Rena slowly turned her head, showing her red face. “Are you, okay? You didn’t catch a fever did you?” Yuko asking worryingly, walking over to Rena, she places a hand on Rena’s forehead then the other hand on your own. “Hnnn.. You don’t – Hey? Wha –“ Yuko started to pushed away out of the bathroom by Rena.

“J-j-just leave me alone…” Rena muttered and held her head down while she pushed Yuko out. “I… need sometime alone…” Yuko was back out into the hallway as she then turned around to face Rena.

“Is that so?” Yuko gave a weak smile, “I’m sorry.” Rena shook her head telling Yuko she had nothing to be apologizing about. “Just see Juri-chan later can you?”

“Eh? She didn’t go to school?” Rena blinked and looks up at Yuko; Yuko shook her head telling Rena that Jurina might have gotten sick yesterday, which was a lie. It was another scheme, planned by Yuko, to get Jurina and Rena to be alone together.  “I’ll visit her after Yuki… Leaves.” She diverted her eyes elsewhere, she still can’t believe the fact she kissed Yuki’s hand so randomly, and she just barely met her too. “How’s Haruna-san doing?” She looked back up at Yuko, as she saw the pain expression on Yuko making her frown.

“NyanNyan doesn’t remember anything from last night, that’s what Mariko told me. Shucks.” Yuko replied and shrugged her shoulder. “Be nice if she did.”

“Do you –“

 “Hey!” Yuko cut off Rena from finishing, as she gave a bright smile. “I need to go to work now. Take care of the house for me while I’m gone! You have just night class today right?” Rena gave a slight nod. “Kay. ~ I cleaned up the mess by the way, so I expect something in return. See ya. ~” Yuko gave a short wave and walk away before Rena could have the chance to reply.

“Yuko-san…” Rena whispered as she watched Yuko leaves. Does she really… -- It’s noticeable in the past, but… A small groan escaped her lips as she closed the door, and lean her back against it. I wish I could help... She couldn’t help but worry about Yuko, just seeing her pain expression she wanted to help her. But she didn’t know how, not with her own problems she has to deal with. “Why is it so frustrating?” She slaps both her cheeks and shook her head, before she let a small sigh.

“I’m sorry Yuko-san.”

9:56 AM

Rena exited out of the bathroom, and made her way back to the living room. Entering, she notice Yuki was now awake as she was sitting there quietly. The blanket that Rena used to cover Yuki was neatly folded and place at the edge of the sofa. And the table was clean just as Yuko said.

Yuki turned her head around, as if she knew Rena’s presence before she said anything, as their eyes met. Rena started stiffened when stared into those black orbs as she still felt a little awkward after what she did last night. “Good morning.” She greeted Rena.

“G-good morning.” Rena managed to reply, trying her best not to stuttered, breaking their eye contact and went to the kitchen. “Do… you want some water?” Getting a nod in response, she grabbed two cups from the shelf and uses the faucet water.

She then walked over to Yuki and handed her a cup. Rena gave a small nod when Yuki thanked her, as she sat down on Yuki’s right side. They both drank their water in silence. After several seconds of silence Rena started to feel a little awkward. She took a quick glance at Yuki as she was quietly sipping her drink. Looking away, Rena set her cup down and leans against the sofa. “Ne…” Catching Yuki’s attention, she set her empty cup down on the table.

“What is it?” Yuki asked, directing her eyes to Rena.

“I was going to ask you if have class in the morning. Do you?” Rena gazed elsewhere trying to avoid making any sort of eye contact with Yuki.

Yuki was silent for a moment as Rena then heard a small sigh as Yuki diverted her eyes elsewhere before she answered, “No. I have no classes today, but tomorrow I do. What about you?”

“Mhmm.” Rena gave a nod. “But it’s in the evening… How about Mayu?”

“She has classes today. She has about two I believe today?” Yuki answered a little irritate, she then shifted in her seat and crosses her arms.

Rena noticed Yuki’s irritation, she wondered why, but she decided not to pester about it and changed the subject instead, “… How are you feeling?”

“I’m still in pain.” Yuki bluntly answered. That’s because of you Rena-chan… As a soft ‘oh‘ came from the other girl.

Rena grew silent; she looks down at her hands, and fiddles the helm of her shirt, thinking what to say, when she found the words she took a small breath and asks, “Is there something… I can help you with then?” She then felt soft cold, hand slide up her cheek as those hand gently turned her head, her eyes widen as she saw a pair of black eyes stared into her own brown ones.

“Then remember.” Yuki whispered and stared deep in Rena’s eyes.

Shivers ran down Rena’s spine as she couldn’t move away. Those raven’s eyes, those eyes that held so much pain and sadness, she couldn’t move away from them. They held her down as if they had petrified her. Why do they look so sad? --What does she mean remember? Many thoughts ran through her mind. She wanted to ask these questions to her, finding the courage within her the words choke out, “Wha- What do you –“

The door bang open.

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2:00 AM ( AFTER THE PARTY )

Jurina lie down on her bed, an arm covering her eyes. A small sigh escaped her lips as she turned to her side. She recalled everything about the event that happen and hour ago, the first King’s order, the accident of Takahashi entering at the wrong time, Rena and Yuki leaving for fresh air, everything. Everything that had to do with Rena flashed back into her mind. That entire event pained her chest. Before she didn’t mind, but after recalling them they hurt. They hurt so much that she wanted to cry, but she couldn’t find herself to cry. She merely felt something jabbing in her chest. What is this feeling? Is it jealousy? She couldn’t think anymore. She just wanted sleep now. Sleep away the pain, curling into a small ball; she held her hands close to her chest as she slept.

7:06 AM

She woke up by the sound of the door being knocked. She lazily got up from her bed and opens the door. Behind it was her mom, she had her hand on her hips and her brows furrow. “Why aren’t you at school?” Her mom demands an answer.

Jurina groaned and slowly walked away, jumping back on her bed and planting her face into the pillow. “I don’t feel so good.” She half lied, and muffled through the pillow. She just didn’t want to leave the house today. She didn’t want to meet Rena. Not yet. Her heart still hasn’t stop paining. And she had a feeling if she meets Rena right now she wouldn’t know how to react. She’ll probably make herself look stupid in front of her.

 Feeling the bed shift, her mom sat at edge of the bed and patted Jurina’s head. “Do you want me to make you some soup?” Her mom asked a little sweetly. Jurina shook her head.

Jurina then turned it to the side where she could speak properly. “I just want some rest. I’ll go to school when I feel better.” Her mom simply gave a firm nod and stood up.

“I’ll leave breakfast on the table for you then before I leave to work.” She said before closing the door and left.

Jurina closed her eyes once more, falling fast asleep.

9:03 AM

Jurina slowly opens her eyes while slowly getting up in a sitting position. She rubbed her eyes before blinking several time, looking at the time she gave a small groan and lay back down. She silent stared at the ceiling as many questions ran through her head, questions she wanted to ask Rena personally, but could never find the courage to ask. Several minutes has pass since she’d been thinking, tired from all the thinking, she pulled herself out of bed and exited her room. Walking down the hallway, she gave a yawn and stretched her arms in the air. When she entered the living room she noticed Yuko arrived, she was sitting quietly on the sofa while she read the newspaper that was on table.

“Morning Yuko-san.” Jurina greeted.

Yuko set the newspaper down and look up at Jurina, giving a small smile at her. “Morning Juri-chan. Slept well? -- Actually, don’t answer. You have bags under your eyes.” Jurina sat down next to Yuko as she then slouched in the seat.

“I don’t feel that well.” Jurina managed to mutter. “I feel like crap.”

Yuko gave an understanding nod. “Maybe it was never best to play the King’s Game.”

Jurina immediately sat straight up and shook her head. “No! That’s not it.” Yuko quirked a brow at her, but she stayed quiet and allowed Jurina to continue. “I just that… I don’t mind since it’s just a game, but…” Jurina pulled her legs against her body, wrapped her arms around them, and her chin on her knees. “Rena would always resist and fight back against those things. This time she didn’t put a lot of effort at all. Do you think… She and Kashiwagi-san are…” She couldn’t finish her sentence, her heart ache too much to allow her to finish. It hurts so much just thinking about it.

Yuko slouched in the sofa, giving a long thought. She started recall this morning when she woke up from “heaven,” as she saw Rena and Yuki sleeping together on the sofa while hold each other’s hands. But, she couldn’t tell Jurina that. Keeping the scene to herself, she let out a slow sigh, “I don’t think they are. They just meet each other recently from the reaction I got when Rena-chan saw both of them.” She straightens herself up in her seat. “I do know what you’re getting at. Yuki-chan also fought against doing anything weird. Heck, she would try to beat the crap out of anyone if someone dare tried.”

There was a long silence between them before they both sighed at the same time. “I don’t understand those two.” Yuko gave a small wince and scratched the back of her head. “But, whatever it is they’re not together! So you still have a chance Juri-chan!” Yuko said in triumph trying to bring the spirit back within Jurina. Jurina gave a weak smile and nod her head. “Since you’re feeling a little sick, how about I ask Rena-chan to visit you ~ ?”

“Eh!? I – I …” Jurina hesitated to answer, she wasn’t sure if she was ready to face Rena so soon. “I don’t know… I don’t know if I can face her yet.” She buried her face in her knees and let a small groan.

Yuko patted Jurina’s back, trying to reassure her that it’ll be fine. “Sure you can. Just need to have a confidence yourself.”

“That’s easy enough for you to say.” Jurina muffled.

“You just have to try!” Yuko then heard Jurina saying ‘Fine.’ As Yuko got up from her seat, “I’m going to see if Rena-chan awake, then go to work after. So I’ll see you later.” She patted Jurina’s head before leaving.

“Wait!” Jurina lifted her head up and looked at Yuko.

“Hm?” Yuko turned around and gave a confuse look.

“How… Haruna-san doing?” She saw Yuko giving a bitter smile. As she knew immediately what Yuko was indicating, but Yuko still answered, “She’s doing okay. She doesn’t remember anything, and she apologized for it. So Mariko says.”

“Aah, I see.” Jurina gave a small frown at the news, but soon she gave a small smile at Yuko. “Just keep at it. Then maybe she’ll realize your feelings.” Jurina had known Yuko’s feelings for Haruna when Yuko figured out Jurina’s. Actually, Yuko was the person who told Jurina about her feelings seeing that it was only fair.

“That’s easy for you to say.” Using Jurina’s word against her, Jurina started to laugh as well as Yuko. “Well, I’ll see you later, kay?” Jurina gave a small nod. “Ja ne. ~” And so, Yuko left the apartment as Jurina was left alone in the house.

Jurina felt her chest lighten a bit. Even if it was only a small talk with Yuko, she felt like her chest lifted a bit. Getting up from the sofa, she made her way to the bathroom for a quick shower.

9:59 AM

For the past several minutes after getting out of the shower, Jurina had been laying on her bed while she stared at the ceiling with an empty mind. As she got tired of just lying around and staring at the ceiling, she decided to pay a visit to Rena instead. Getting out of bed she made her way to the entrance and slipped on her shoes. She exited out the door and locked it before she closed it behind her. She made a turn as she went next door. She turn the door knob as it was lock, she pulled out a hair pin and a tension wrench.

She placed the tension wrench into the lower portion of the keyhole, she turned the wrench clockwise as it moved on a fraction, and then she inserts the hair pin of the upper part of keyhole. She pushed each pins up as she felt the spring every time she release the pressure. She continues on, and pushed the upper pin out of the cylinder until she heard a click. She turned the wrench again, not allowing the pin she just pushed up to spring back down. Then she did it with the rest of the pins, as it was fully unlocked. She held on turned doorknob as he took the wrench and the hair pin out, and set it back into her pocket.

Cracking the door open and took a quick glimpse inside she saw nothing. But when she opened a little wider, she noticed Yuki and Rena on the sofa together as Yuki was being a little too close to Rena. As Jurina couldn’t help, but become shocked she banged the door open.

Yuki and Rena taken by surprise, they turned their head to the entrance door seeing a shocked Jurina.

“Jurina…” Rena muttered. Yuki shot a glance at Jurina, giving a look as she interrupted something, but Rena couldn’t see the look that Yuki gave to Jurina.

Jurina looked at Rena then at Yuki as she felt her heart shattering in pieces. “So it is true…” Jurina took a step back as her vision became blurry with tears.

“Jurina wait –“

“IDIOT! I hate you!” Jurina shouted, cutting Rena off. Before Rena could say anything Jurina made a run for it. Idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot! She shouted in her mind as warm tears rolled down her cheeks. She wiped the tears with the back of her hand while she ran. Wiping away the tears that kept pouring, she tried to clear her vision so she wouldn’t run into anything or anyone; she kept running as fast as she can to wherever her leg brought her.

Her heart became broken. She believes there was a little faith left, but the little faith died, cease to exist because of Yuki. How she hated seeing Rena so close to Yuki. To someone Rena just barely met! Why? She asked herself. Out of all people! Why she chose someone who she barely met? What did I do wrong? Endless thoughts ran through her head as those thought were like a needle jabbing into her skin.

Rain droplet started to come, but soon it started to pour. It didn’t stop Jurina from running though, she just continue to run through the rain as it hid her tears.

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“Jurina-chan.” Rena felt her chest pain when Jurina shouted at her. She got up from her seat when Jurina ran away as she was planning to chase after her, but she felt cold fingers curling around her wrist and stopping her from doing so. Turning her head, she saw Yuki giving a cold and piercing look that brought shivers to Rena’s spine.

“Leave her.”

To be Continue in Chapter 6
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: haruhi16 on April 28, 2012, 07:57:46 AM
Nice chapter altoids~san!

Hope you update soon.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: Pwoper48 on April 28, 2012, 08:05:21 AM
oh this is good.  :thumbup

I just began reading this story yesterday. Hope that the next chapter will update soon

Feel sad for Jurina  :cry:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: bochang on April 28, 2012, 08:55:02 AM
THX FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!   :onioncheer:

but what've you done to Jurina!!!! TT.TT :on speedy: *teary eyed*
Jurina-chan.. TT.TT
i officially become Jurina fans!! She's my oshimen now!! TT.TT
Poor Jurina...  :on speedy:
Hueeeee...

and Yuki.. is so cold!!! OMG!!! the Black is trying to control Yukirin Mind!!

i don't know if i should make YukiRena pairing in my fic..
i thought i will try to make this pairing.. but.. but... Annyeong! :on speedy:
btw, thx for the update Al-san!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: Sieka on April 28, 2012, 09:13:55 AM
The coffin I'd hit would probably be my own coffin dude. :lol:

Ahahaha...depression from someone's death? Who exactly are you referring to? Unn...Geki going all out without restrain is something enjoying to write, but at the same time gruesome and tiring. :sweatdrop: Hehe, I'm seriously enjoying the light drama here, to be honest...takes away the angst writer mode in me. :lol:

Hmm...I think I need to read it in order to see who fits the second character, I don't want to say Rena just because she's my bias, since I love Mayuyu too after all. If you want to send it to me, then I'll read it, do you want me to do some grammar check as well?

Hot stud indeed. :lol:

Hahaha...okay okay........what do you want me to call the relationship then? Net type love? :lol:

Do you want me to point a gun or a knife at you? :shifty: I'd be most willing to do so my dear author. :glasses:

Ah but mah, I think Yuki should show her affections in a different way rather than just that. :lol: ...It's obvious that she'd glare at you if you ask something as offending as that. :lol:

It's not kindness! Ahahaha...geez, its selfishness, selfishness, if you get to have a chance to be with your precious someone, you'd take the time for it and deliberately plan on how to dominate their whole attention only to you. :lol: Nah, I'm not interested in love dude. o ,o)p

Next time Yuko should prepare a much more elaborate dare. Something much more daring than just licking off frosting. :kekeke:

Ahahaha...erm, I don't want anyone to see me fangirling, its so embarrassing. :err:

I hate using violence and as much as possible, I'd like to talk about it in an orderly manner...but if you don't put your part of the end right, I'll be forced to use violence if necessary.... Please keep your promise...hmm, do you want me to call you Mint-chan, or just Mint? :huhuh

True...filling it up with new and happy memories is better, that unless the old and bad memories are the one dominating, then that would be a big problem. :sweatdrop:

All is lost for Jurina....uwah, she shouldn't have seen KojiYuu kiss... :lol:

I wish Haruna was always drunk? Lol.... :lol: :lol: :lol:

Love hurts, love moves, love pushes you off the ground......but it hurts more when you fall from a 15 ft building because of love itself. :farofflook:

I wouldn't do something as sly as that! That would be too selfish! I don't want to be that selfish....... :lol: But if it's Yuki, then I'm fine with her being selfish to the point that she wants to make Rena her's only. Also, I do think she needs to work more on her slyness, so that she could always take Rena's attention. :shy1:

Ahahaha...I think Jurina and Mayu will become good buds, good friends in crying over their failed unrequited love... :sweatdrop:

Hope Rena remembers soon though. I can't bare to see Yuki hurting that much... :fainted: ...Even though I'm hurting her much more in my own fic.......................I feel so guilty all of a sudden. :err:

On the update:

I'd certainly would like to often see Rena waking up to see Yuki in the morning, that would be such a great and fluff scene, and Rena would be staring an hour long just looking at Yuki sleeping...wew, just the thought sends a smile on my face, ah but then again, that's not bound to happen at all........ :sweatdrop:

Rena's so kind and caring though for placing a blanket on Yuki, but lol, Rena's panicking over her own intimate gesture, lol, your fault Rena. Don't think of it too much, just go with the flow and everything will be alright~ I hope? :lol:

Hmm...I wonder, what was it in the past with Yuko? :?

Awkwardness is in the air, Rena's making it too awkward....but mah, stop being so tense Rena, there's nothing you can do anyways. Why was Yuki annoyed though when Rena started asking about whether Mayu had classes? Lol, jealous much are we? XD Aw, just soothe Yuki's pain will you Rena? A kiss and a hug would be fine? Ah...but Yuki seems to be the greedy type doesn't she? :lol:

....UWAH! Yuki so bold! :shocked
So close, so close that they can kiss....... What a tease.... :err:

Jurina being jealous of because of the order between Yuki and Rena and the kiss is so natural, I saw it coming even from 5 ft away......and now she's putting up the I-don't-want-to-go-to-school-because-I'm-not-feeling-well act. That's so cliche, its already hilarious to see her putting up that act, but I don't mind, because Jurina is being all cute here. Still~ That picklocking skills of her's is quite a trouble, not only for other people but for herself, see what you saw Jurina?

It's because you didn't knock properly that you had to see something that heartbreaking, if only you knew how to knock...but then again, you did it on purpose to see some confirmation, and now that you did, its gonna hurt you big time, again, you reap what you sow Jurina. :depressed:

......But did she had to call Rena an idiot? Rena doesn't even know that Jurina loves her, not like her love is that obvious...... :huhuh Well, Rena did want to go after her it seems, but then again.....we have Yuki here, the person from Rena's past, her first true friend maybe? She isn't just a stranger that Rena barely met Jurina, not like Rena or Jurina would know....only Yuki knows that of course...not like Yuki can tell Rena and Jurina something like that........ :sweatdrop:

Why did Yuki stop Rena though?
For selfish reasons? Or to let Jurina have some space from Rena? I can't read Yuki here all too well. :cool2:

Mah, thanks for the update, Mint-chan? ....I think I might stick to that... :cathappy:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: kurogumi on April 28, 2012, 12:14:35 PM
I have read some fic, about 3 or 4 fic...inculing jurina in that story, and all of that story
make jurina really suffer because of Rena (sorry for my poor english).

Im really love Yuki and Rena pairing, but see Jurina suffer a lot in so many fic in different story,
I think i will support Jurina right now...hope it will be Wmatsui and Mayuki..lol

Thank for the Update..and, again sorry for my poor english
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: Haruko on April 28, 2012, 03:34:03 PM
Wow wow wmatsui or gekkiblack couple?

I dont know which one its better...

Aww my kojiyuu... Haruna dont remember nothing .. Yuuchan is so heart-broked... Please rix it maybe hey need another kiss - evil grin -
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: karomuwi on April 30, 2012, 09:10:51 AM
YES! Finally, I can comment on this!

Chapter Four: So~  :glasses: My deduction was right after all. Yuko got kissed and it WAS Haruna. LOL. HAruna is such a pervert when she gets drunk!  :hiakhiakhiak: Making Yukirin and Rena-sama kiss once more! Though...  :glasses: I think even I would do that. LOL! And Yukirin, ahh~ So cute! Leaning her head on Rena's shoulders! AHH~! I can just  :shy2: imagine the lovely scene in my head. It's so soothing to imagine, and makes me just... :luvluv1: Altoid-san, did you know that I actually dreamnt about the chapter? Yes. I did!  :sleep: It was such a lovely dream that all I wanted was to replay it over and over again! (along with the Chapter Three!) I guess that lucid dreaming is good after all! Especially since I could control what they were doing.  :wahaha: KojiYuu and YukiRena. :kekeke:

Chapter Five: Haha, Yukirin so blunt! But then...She's lovable that way~  :shy2: And Rena-sama is really unable to remember, huh? Well, that's alright. As long as she doesn't get those painful headaches and dizzyness, I'm fine with her unable to remember her Yukirin. They can just form new memories and stuff! And wow...Jurina got hurt.  :on speedy: She ran away! I can really understand how she felt after seeing the two being so close. though not really on the same level as her since I've never felt the same way as her. Go Jurina!  :mon beam: Run even faster and away from the pain! Shout it out to the beach or someplace where you can shout without getting scolded! :mon runcry:

*sigh* Rena-san was about to run after her, until Yukirin grabbed her and told her
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"Leave her."

:mon emo: My W Matsui....  :mon ref: *hic* Well...  :mon dunno: Rena-sama will still be in good hands even if she doesn't choose Jurina. She's got Yukirin and if she got tired of Yukirin, she has Airin.   :lol: So...  :mon thumb: Go ahead, Yukirin! I'll totally support you and Rena-sama! BUT! If there's going to be more YukiRena, I request for MORE scenes of them  :mon blood: kissing. On the cheeks.  :mon lmao:

And Altoid-san, I'll really call you Al, in exchange that you call me Rin.  :hee: And I think that the way I comment and make use of emoticons almost to the point of making a story with them  :lol: is kind of...weird. And such.

And yes! Without the great Yuko-sama's 'entertaining' personality, the game would surely turn out to be like one of the games I played before. we played that game last week, and the dares were so weak. And yes, I already managed to 'chill' but being able to dream of them and control the situation just makes me  :mon crazyinlove:

As for the epic words, Al-kun (can't go calling you 'Al-chan' with you calling me a bro  :lol:) You DO deserve them! :mon nyah: Deny it all you want and say that you don't deserve it. But I SHALL continue to bombard you with more epic words! once I've expanded my vocab  :lol: XD And of course, I won't jump of a window! That's just too common!  :mon dance: I'll just jump out of my father's building!  :mon lmao: Just kidding! I don't have the guts to do that!

And I can wait for my questions to be answered. It's not like I'm rushing you or anyway. I enjoy slow fics, or fics that move slowly?  :mon huh: I'm confused. I don't remember the word for it, and I'm too lazy to think hard for it. *sigh*

And my cousin did lie, lol. She said that she already knew what it was, and even called it the Pervert Game instead of King's game. And why not tell me?!  :mon annoy: Just because I'm young doesn't mean that you can't tell me! It has Jurina involved for goodness sakes!  :mon fierce: :mon fire: She's a year younger than I am! That's why... Al-kun :mon whimper: Please tell me!  :mon pray2: I wanna know!!!  :mon whine: Please? Pretty Pwease?  :mon cute:

And one more thing Al-kun!


THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME UPDATES!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
Post by: Pandah on April 30, 2012, 03:07:17 PM
lolol yes...people are so honest when they're drunk  :lol:

HAHA WOOOO! KOJIYUU MADE OUT!  :w00t:   i feel so relieved LOL
BAHAHA omg jurina......shes scarred for life! this kid..i feel so sorry for  :P hahah kinda funny how haruna just forgot about the kiss and decides to make yuki and rena kiss instead xD  :lol: aww jurina and mayuyu is totally jealous and rena is slowly remembering yukis touch!

argh! poor yuko :( her nyan nyan doesnt remember anything! and why is it so depressing?! yuko needs some love from her nyan nyan! shes becoming good at hiding her pain now D: i want to give her a hug and pat her head and tell her that its going to be alright x.x

rena is definitely confused with her feelings for yuki ....OMG JURINA CAME IN! and yuki is stooping rena from going after her..what *pulls out hair* i dont know what to say about this.......

thanks for the update!  :thumbup
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: altoids on May 01, 2012, 08:36:38 AM
@ haruhi16-san : thanks bro. o uob

@ pwoper48-san : Thanks. o uo
Aah.. Well, I'm trying the best I can at the moment now.
I have a big exam to take for a class in two weeks, and I suck in the class so I need to hardcore study. </3
I'll see what I can do. No promises though. ;;;
Jurina becoming heartbroke. OTL

@ bochang : no probs. o uo thanks for reading still. ~
ahahaa. ;; well something needs to happen. o xo and jurina happens to be the person?
Oh my. ; But at least good to know that you're Jurina's fan now. o uo ;;;
Ahaha. ;;
Either or she is just is that way?
Um... You should! :"D Because.. um.. you just should! > w> ;
... o wo *pat pat* there there.

@ sieka-san : Kekekeee. ~ Likely, likely. ;P

No one. :"D Just saying. ~ Since death always leads to dark stories. OTL Because it feel like you're becoming free when you write Gekikara's without retraint. Don't know? That's what I'm thinking. > W> ;
Well... What matters is that your having fun writing about Geki's action, I guess? Oh, hahaa. I see. > w> Yeah don't worry, I'll make it light at least.

Be so nice if there is a danso of Yuki cross dressing as a male. But that comercial of the tuxedo was nice though. * o*

... um... Uhhhh...  I don't know! How about mystery love type? Since Net seems a little weird. ;;

Etto... ;;;;;; *slowly back away* Niether? I - I was merely kidding about that part, dear Sieka-san.
You can write it instead. ;;

I guess? Honestly she has a mind of her own, currently. Seriously... Like I can't control her even if I'm the one writing it! asldaks, so I can't control how the way she shows affection to Rena. ;;
But but... ! Curiosity. But... At least the glare tells me she bad. *shot*

Okay okay. = u= At least you take the chances. *totally a wimp? :"D* Hahaa. some day something will happen, and you be in love. (~ o 3o)~
Even if you deny it right now who knows what the future has in store for you. o uo

Oh my oh my, bro. = 3= Depends if Yuko can take over my mind and write something better. ~

... B-but! It's rare to see you fangirl! So it makes total goal just to see you fangirl more! ; w;

Aah, okay. ;;; Uhh, yeah I will keep my promise? eheahaa. ;; *will flee before get murdered*
Either or is fine. doesn't matter, bro. o nob

Hnn. Yeah. it really depends how serious the memories is. As long you're able to cast aside the terrible memories.
Hopefully that'll be fine. They'll still be there, but at least it something you were able to get over of.

Jurina... Poor Jurina... It could have been worse!
... What!? D: No no no! e ue ; Don't know how life would be if Haruna is always drunk. She'll probably be another Yuko. = u= ;

Love.... Is everything! Painful and well... loving. More pain than love. ;;
But without pain there won't be love? o no ;

Psssh! I know somewhere deep down you are selfish! Just hiding that fact. e ue *keeping an eye on you, bro*
Hahaaa. xD When Yuki finds away to literally dominate Rena's body and mind. <33 she doesn't need to worry later. o 3o
... Probably better than close buds later. = 3= But, for now... Yeah. :"D ;;; Forever alone get buddies? ; AAAA;

She will. :"D It's almost done, so she's close in remember. I'm rushing it now to be honest. e ue ;; I can't think about any FF when I have an big exam coming up.
... Bro, it's fine... Yuki may forgive you, depending the choice you make. = w=

When they become roomates. Then definately. >D Hahaa. I don't know. Just got to wait an see? o nob

She really is? But eeh... :"D There another side she's not that caring? > w> ; Well for people who harm her friends that is.
She is going with the flow while being stiff! D: She has her own mind, but not like a boss as Yuki. ;AA;

... a secrect event? o uo

Tense cause the awkwardness. Then again it's just her. = u= Hey hey, she's talking about someone else beside Yuki, of course she would? :"D lol.
Because she hasn't seen Rena in years. Don't blame her for being greedy. o 3o ... lol. xD ;

xP I didn't write it. Yuki took over me there.

It's all about the cliche bro! Lol. Kiddin kiddin. It was everyone does anyways, seriously. = w=
Don't try picklocking, bro. Lesson learned for Jurina... Hopefully.
She will recover! For sure she will recover! From a tsundere.... cyborg... girl. :"D

Instincts calls!

o 3o

by the way. I'll get to the message some other day, when my immune system decides to be alive. ;
freaking tired so do anything! Dx


@ kurogumi-san : ... Because sometimes a wmatsui can never happen if Jurina doesn't get hurt by Rena? I'm probably just being cruel.
And it's fine. ~ you're english is fine, bro. o uob

... Ahaa. the intention right now is RenaYuki.
Well eventually I'll make a Wmatsui? But I can't say for sure that there won't be any drama.
and I don't know if I should make a " what if, " version for this ff. o no ;
bro, it's fine. xD ~


@ haruko-san : umm.... both? :"D
Hahaaaa. xD It will be fix. in the sequel after this one. o nob


@ karomuwi-san : Because of random roulette lead to this event happening. e ue ;
What? Oh my, Rin-chan. = w= Though you won't be drunk as Haruna. You'll probably do it purposely rather than do it when you're drunk.
Oh my. o uo You just really go fangirl so easily. o uo ... Is that so? > w> ; Umm. Don't know what to say Rin-chan. lol.
Though you weren't grin very widely when you were sleeping right? Since... Um... people would be curious why you're grinning. xD ;
Oh my... Did chapter 3 reall stuck in your mind. o wo ;;; Oh, bro. = w= You really can't stop amusing me.

Um.. Well. Like I said to Sieka-san... Yuki has her own mind when it comes to writing her. = n= ;; And apparently she wants to be blunt. lol.
... Umm. I can't promise you about Rena's getting headaches or anything of that sort. ;; But but... Yuki may just kiss the pain away? :"D
Of course they can. New and better memories. o wob

She's just devastated. Honestly, it really hurts. ;; But.. here it'll be a little less painful for Jurina?
Either she finds a place to scream. or a place to just weep. ;;;

Wow... bro.. *pat pat* You're not crying are you? ; Uuh.. pretty much. Yuki is there for her. kasjdlasd. NEVER! D: Not with Airin. I still can't accept her to be honest. e ne ;;
still can't accept the fact of RenaAirin yet. Maybe because I've been with wmatsui for three of fours years already, and RenaYuki for two years. <33 ;
Sorry, bro. I just can't see RenaAirin just yet. ;
You be dying if there were more RenaYuki huh? o uo

Um... Sure. o uob Rin-chan is fine with you?
DUDE! The emoticons you us totally fits, and it does makes mini story out of them! It's adorable. > w> ~

*pat pat* I wonder how long it have go, if Yuo never introduce the game. xD ;
Dude you seriously played it? e ue ; That eager to play such a game!?  oh my, bro.
Lol. you really an unbelievable. xD In a good way though. > w>

dfgkdfl;gdf. ugh! Seriously I do not! </3 Bro... Oh my god. Use those words for someone else! D:
I can't accept them bro. </3 ... You can jump out of your father's building if you're on the first floor, bro. = u=b

*pat pat* There there. o no

Hahahaaaaa. xD Oh my. Maybe she just didn't want to corrupt you until you're older. > w> ;;; Or she believed you'll forget. xD
... eeh. ;; oh.. o no then we're the same age for now, I guess? umm. I guess I not really a big deal.
maybe I'll just message you later when I'm back in full health. </3 until then, I'll leave you curious. lol.

IS THAT REALLY NECESSARY Rin-chan? You should have just leave it in normal text, bro! XD

@ pandah-san : Mhmm. It's find of scary though because sometimes they get a little pushy, you know what I mean? ;;

.. A short make out. OTL eventually it'll be longer.. when, I make the sequal arc for this.
Jurina. *pat pat her* She'll be fine... hopefully. ;;; Well when you're drunk you forget what you're doing.
Apparently she drunk enough on one can, to be able to for so easily.
Of course they would be. xP Seeing their precious one kissing different people. ... And who knows, that's a mystery until later. ~

because the author is a sucker for depressing stuff? lol. don't worry yuko will get some love!
just not right now. ;;;

she pretty. yeah.... e ue ;; but Rena decided to make yourself confuse, instead of allowing the author write it for her.
... :"D
thanks for reading, bro. and sticking with it. o uo

@ everyone : sorry about the shitty errors. kind of under the weather at the moment.
and stupidly exhausted. my immune system are failing on me again, so I'm getting easily becoming fatigue than usual.
So bear with me and the shittyness. I'll try to to go back to it and fix 'em later.
and I don't mind if you guys comment about the errors, really. helps me know where I need to work on.

also... I probably won't update in the next two weeks? Hardcore studying for a test subject I fail the most, not literally, but a class i struggle in.
since it's a fail professor for that class. Okay, I'll stop ranting now.
But I'll try get the whole story finish when I get back?
It's almost finish. I think? ;; Then on to the other arcs! ( prequels " Yuki's Past " , and sequeal to some of the other pairing? )
I'll still be around just commenting, maybe? Or just being a ninja and lurk.
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: altoids on May 01, 2012, 08:36:57 AM
Chapter 6

It’s been one week and two days since that entire incident happen.

“Rena open up! Rena!” Yuko called, banging on Rena’s door. “Rena! It’s not your fault!” On the other side of the door was Rena curled up into a ball while she covered her ears. “What do I do?” Yuko muttered worryingly as she glanced at Yuki who just stood there with the same expression as Yuko.

“Why is she worrying about what happen that night?” Yuki asked in concern. “It couldn’t be help.”

Yuko gave a heavy sigh before answering. “Even so, she hating herself because she broke the promise we made.” Yuki raised a brow, but stayed quiet so Yuko can continue. “No… Not the promise. The fact that she is going to take over her.” Yuki then furrowed her brow, unsure what Yuko was trying to say.

“She? What do you mean by that?” Yuki demanded, her voice became cold and piercing that would have brought shivers to Yuko, if she wasn’t worrying over Rena.

Yuko couldn’t help but give another heavy sigh as she didn’t want to bring back the past. “What reason do you need to know is what I need to ask first?”

“She is my precious friend in the past.”

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‘Why do you ignore me? It’s been three days now.’ The voice groaned, becoming tired of being ignored by Rena. ’Heheheee. ~ Are you mad?’ The voice chimed.

Rena presses her hand to her ears more hoping the voice would go away. But, the voice continues to giggle and repeated the same questions. “Leave me alone.” She scowled at the voice.

She heard voice gave a gleeful giggle, finally getting an answer for the girl. The voice found Rena’s action amusing to as the voice decided to throw a question seeing that Rena finally responded to it. ‘Your precious neighbor and her friend would have been raped. ~ Would you have not care if they did?’

“I do care!” Rena snapped at the voice. “I wanted to save them, but in a way different way! Why did you come back? You knew I didn’t need you!”

The voice’s giggles echoed in Rena’s mind. ‘I’ll never go away Rena-chan. ~ ’ It mocked. ‘I am you after all. Hahahaa, even if you casted me into deep slumber, it doesn’t mean I’m gone.~’ The voice didn’t answer the question Rena wanted to hear so she asked, no, she demanded for the answer she seek. ‘Someone was trying to call you back.’ The voice calmly answered. Rena blinked then gave a confuse expression unsure what the voice was telling her.

“What are you saying?”

‘I mean exactly what I’m saying.’

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ONE WEEK AGO ( picking-up from Chapter 5 )

“Leave her.”

Rena’s eyes widen. She couldn’t believe what Yuki was telling, “I have to clear the misinterpretation.”

“She’s just being childish.”

“You don’t know her!” Rena snapped. Yuki eyes widen, her grip didn’t loosen as she gripped tighten around Rena’s wrist. “Her feelings… I was stupid to think it’ll just go away!” Rena feel on her knees, held her head down, as she try to hold her tears. “I-I knew she held feelings for me. B-but…. I thought that if I just ignored it…” Tears started to run down her redden cheek as she body started to tremble from holding herself back. “She would give up, but… I was stupid! I was stupid for pretending, I should have confront her instead!” Rena finally broke down as she started to weep, using her free hand to wipe the tears away.

“Rena…” Yuki mumbled with a deep frown, her heart felt broken seeing Rena weeping in front of her, she felt a sharp pain of guilt jabbing into her chest for stopping Rena from chasing after Jurina. Yuki finally let’s go of Rena’s wrist, as Rena brought the other hand to wipe her tears away. Yuki got off of her seat and went down on her knees as she watched Rena weeping in front of her. Yuki was hesitant as first, wondering if she was try to hug Rena to comfort her she would just push her away, but then she found the courage and wrapped her arms around Rena, pulling her into a hug.

Rena didn’t resist as she lean in more as cried into Yuki’s shoulder. Yuki was surprise that Rena didn’t resist, hugging her a little tighter; she then started to stroke her head to sooth her. She felt Rena’s body trembling under her embrace, and seeing her state Yuki couldn’t help but feel pity and guilt piling up on her. “I’m sorry.”  Yuki whispered and bit her lower lip. She felt Rena slowly shaking her head. Yuki should her shoulder soaked in tears, but she didn’t push her away, she only pulled her into a tighter hug. How she bemoan such event. If she knew Rena was going to break down, she would have let her go; better yet, she should have left the house when she woke up.

Thoughts ran to her mind, as every thought just kept breaking her heart little by little, but she didn’t weep like Rena. She fought against it, she endured the pain her thoughts gave her, she knew she couldn’t fix what was done, but she knew that she could lend Rena a shoulder, and be like a cloak that covers Rena’s tears from everything and everyone.

Two hours has passed as Rena finally calm down. She was now fast asleep on the sofa, completely fatigued from her break down, with the blanket over her that was used to cover Yuki.

Yuki was on her cell talking to Yuko, and telling her what happen. On the other side of the line she could hear Yuko sigh. “I’ll do what I can to find Juri-chan. Have you told the others?” Yuko asked in concern.

“No. I don’t think I should. It’s probably best to have less people worrying, but… I’ll ask Mayu to help.” Yuki leaned against the entrance door, as she held her head down and stared at her feet. Yuko mumbled a yes, as they then hanged up. Yuki looked down at her cell and dialed Mayu’s number. Brining the cell up to her ear, she heard the phone ran twice until someone picked up the line greeting Yuki happily.

“Mayu, I need to do something for me.” Yuki said a little coldly, hoping that Mayu got the idea that Yuki was being serious, but she didn’t.

“What is it?” Mayu wondered cheerfully.

“I need you to help me look for Rena’s neighbor.”

There was a then silence on the other line. “Mayu?”

“Why?” The voice no longer sounded happy, as it sounded more annoyed.

“Just do it, okay?” Yuki really didn’t want to beg to Mayu, she wasn’t in the thoughts to be even begging for anyone’s help, then again, she never like begging to anyone.

“Fine, just because you asked. That girl’s name was Jurina, right?”

“Yes. Thanks, Mayu.” She heard Mayu saying, ‘No problem,’ in a cheery voice before they hanged up. Yuki gave a small sigh as she placed her phone in the pocket of her pants. Walking back to the living room, she glanced at Rena who was still fast asleep. She walked over to the sofa and sat at the edge of the seat.

She stared as Rena’s pulchritudinous face. Everything was perfect about her, her skin wasn’t pale, she wasn’t thin, her lips had a nice shade of pink, just everything about Rena is perfect, to Yuki that is. “You really have grown to be more a princess.” Yuki gave a small smile; she lifted a hand, and brushed Rena’s bangs aside. “Here I thought you’ll grow into a prince.” The more she stared at Rena face; she felt her chest tighten as she had the urge to steal a kiss from the sleeping girl. Easily giving in the urge, she leans down and lightly presses her lips against the other. But then, she immediately pulled back when the girl shifted as a sweat drop rolled down her cheek, hoping she didn’t wake Rena up.

She did, Rena slowly open her eyes and look up at Yuki. “…You’re still here?” She muttered in a tired voice. Yuki mentally sighed in relief that Rena didn’t notice Yuki had stolen a kiss while she slept. As she nodded to Rena’s question. “Is Jurina --” She was stopped when Yuki placed an index on her lips, shushing her.

“She’ll be fine. Yuko and Mayu are going to search for her. Go back to sleep.” Yuki ensured her, giving a smile to her. Rena gave a small nod and closes her eyes, falling back a sleep. I wonder when you’ll remember me. Yuki wonders, as she felt something jab into her chest once more, shrugging it off she got up from her seat and walk toward to the door. She slipped on her shoes, borrow the umbrella in the basket, before she exited out of the house, and help the other two search for Jurina.
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After hanging up with Yuki, Mayu gave small sigh. “It has to be all about her. What about me?” Jealousy drifted within her heart. “I’ve been with her longer, what does she have that I don’t? I did the same thing that she did, then why?” All these questions Mayu couldn’t answer. Another sigh escaped her lips, she slipped her cell into her pockets before open the door to her class, and went back in.

An hour has passed as Mayu was finally out of class. It was her last class for today, until night reaches. Walking out of the building she looked up at the sky, seeing the heavy rain wasn’t going to lift up soon. Fortunately, she brought an umbrella with her. Digging into her bag she pulled out a simple pink umbrella. Opening it, she then walked into the rain as she made her way home first to drop off her bag before she searched for Jurina, like Yuki requested, but she did keep an eye out and looked around.

Walking up a small hill, she passed by a park as she stopped, and saw someone sitting on the swing, their head held down, and allowing themselves becoming drenched in the rain. Is that person insane? Mayu asked herself, quirking a brow. She then continue to walk ignoring the person, then something click to her head, walking backwards and look at the person again she realized it was Jurina. What the hell is she doing there? She slowly made her way to the girl on the swing, but the girl didn’t move her head up.

When Mayu was standing in front of Jurina, she tipped the umbrella a bit as it would also cover the girl. Jurina shot her head up when she didn’t felt the rain pouring on her anymore. Her eyes widen when she saw Mayu as she blinked several times before wiping the water from her eyes and sniffled a little. “What are you doing here?” Jurina mumbled.

“I could ask you the same question, person-who-is-going-to-freeze-herself-to-death.” Mayu watched the girl, seeing her eyes red as she believed she been crying this whole time, even if the tears were mixed within the rain the evidence still remained.

“Haa, none of your business. Leave me alone.” Jurina said, trying to sound a little cold, but it really didn’t work as her voice was a little shaky from the coldness.

“No can do.  If you’re planning to kill yourself, you’re just doing a slow and painful way.” She said with a deadpan expression.

“I’m not!” Jurina snapped, looking up at Mayu giving an irritated expression.

“Then what?” Mayu asked still keeping her same expression.

Jurina grew silent for a moment. Look away before answering, “I just want to be alone, okay? I don’t want to be at home. I don’t to be in anywhere! So leave!”

Talk about being nice. Mayu commented to herself. “Look, I don’t know what’s up with your sudden attitude, but freezing yourself to death isn’t a good idea. Your parents are going to be worry sick if they knew their daughter comes back soak, then suddenly go down with pneumonia.”

Another brief silence, Jurina understood what Mayu was telling her, but she didn’t want to be with a group of people, neither did she wanted to be at home with Rena next door, her mind wouldn’t be at ease knowing that she was next door. She couldn’t bring herself to face Rena yet, not what after she saw earlier, she still felt her heart pain from seeing such event. “Can I go to your place instead?” She asked in a soft whisper, but loud enough for Mayu to hear.

“W-what!?” She was shock, they barely knew each other and she asked if she could come over. What’s with this girl? “We barely know each other. Don’t you have like… your friends’ house to go to?”

Jurina nodded her head. “But… I don’t want them trying to bug me what happen, it’ll just be a pain.”

Mayu understood what Jurina meant because she did pester what happen to friend sometimes, when she catches her friend looking glum. And since she barely knew Jurina so she wouldn’t really pester her, neither did she want to since she had a hunch that it’s possibly about Rena, seeing that Jurina didn’t wanted to go home. A small sigh escape her lips, “Fine. Whatever, just call your parents, alright?”

“Yay!” Jurina jumped up and tackled hugged Mayu.

“Oi! Let go of me!” Mayu scoffed and tried to pull Jurina off. She felt her clothes becoming wet from Jurina embrace, as she wanted her off before she became soak herself.

Jurina finally release Mayu, and pouted at her while she gave her the puppy eyes.

Mayu eye twitched when she saw her pout. “What’s up with you? What’s with the sudden change of personality?”

Jurina shrugged her shoulders, “Because being depress isn’t good for the health.”

“I don’t understand you. At least you’re happy which is good, I guess.” She muttered at the end. “Anyways let’s go and get your dry. Don’t blame me if you get sick.” Jurina nodded with a bright smile, Mayu shrugs before she turns around and began to walk with Jurina next to her.

Jurina hasn’t fully recovered yet, she still felt depress, but she force herself to hold a smile. A smile that can lighten one own heart or so she always believes.

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“Don’t worry. She’s going to stay over.” Mayu said as she was speaking to someone.

A relief sigh was heard. “Thanks, I suppose I owe you one?” Yuki said, unsure if she should have said that.

“Aa. How about a date?” Mayu said, sounding a little happy.

“Mayu…”

“I know, I know. I’m merely kidding.” Mayu wasn’t really kidding, but, she couldn’t help it.

“I’ll find a way to repay you back.”

“No it’s fine. If it’s from you I don’t mind.” Mayu sincerely answered.

A faint sigh was heard. “Thanks again. Well… Bye.”

“Mhm. Bye.” Mayu hanged up as she jumped on the bed, face first. Then a click was heard, and the door open revealing Jurina wearing a plain white t-shirt and shorts, with a towel draped over her head.

“Who was that?” Jurina ask drying her hair with the towel.

“Yuki, why?” Mayu notice Jurina’s expression pained, but quickly brought a smile and shook her head.

“Nothing, just wondering.” Jurina sat on the bed, next to Mayu. Mayu stayed silent about Jurina’s expression, not wanting to pester about it, as she handed Jurina her cell.

“Call you parents that you’re over.” Jurina nodded, and took the cell as she then dialed her mom’s number. Mayu watched Jurina as she talk to her mom, and then she got up from her bed, “I’m going to take a shower.” She whispered as Jurina simply nodded, and continue to talk to her mom.

Did something happen? Mayu asked herself, grabbing her change of clothes and went to the bathroom. I wonder what....

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For the next several days Jurina has been sleeping over at Mayu’s place, but, often Jurina would go home to get her school supplies and see her mom while she tries to avoid Rena. Even after school, she would use a different route to exit than the usual route to avoid running into Rena. When Rena called her, she would simply ignore the call. Jurina knew she was being selfish, but she couldn’t bring up the courage and face Rena. She still felt broken, and not anytime soon the broken pieces of her heart will be put back together. Although, Jurina was able slowly recovering the little pieces whenever she with Mayu. She found Mayu’s company enjoyable even though she acted like a little tsundere, whenever Jurina attempts to hug her or show any sort of affection to her, but she found them amusing, even if Mayu doesn’t find them amusing.

Mayu watched Jurina during those passing days, dealing with Jurina’s random affections, while she watched Rena. Yuki and Mayu kept silent to Rena about Jurina staying over at Mayu’s place, as they merely told her that Jurina was busy doing school projects, they even convinced Jurina’s mom to follow the act. But they wonder, how long would they be able to keep the masquerade up?

Rena didn’t seem to be the same person when Mayu first met her. She nudged Yuki during class time to time, wondering how Rena was doing, but Yuki merely shrug unsure what to say. When Yuki finally told Mayu what happen, she was devastated; she understood why Jurina would react that way she did when Mayu found her in the rain, when she heard what Yuki told her, she too felt the pain Jurina had, but it wasn’t worse as Jurina’s. She could only muffle an, ‘oh,’ when Yuki told her. Silently, she watched Rena becoming more and more out of it. And when she saw Yuki giving a pain look whenever she saw Rena, Mayu also felt her hear pain whenever she saw Yuki. She helplessly watch Yuki being in pain, wishing she could help her, but couldn’t.

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“Hey do you want to go out for a night stroll?” Jurina asked closing her book, and turned around in her seat.

“Have you finished your homework at least?” Mayu answered with a question, looking away from the book she was reading and stared at Jurina.

Jurina gave a small pout, as Mayu instantly knew she wasn’t finished, giving a sigh, she closed her book and took off glasses, and lay them both down on the bed. “Whatever, as long you finish it when we get back.” She got off the bed.

Jurina burst into glee, jumping out of her seat, and hugged Mayu. “Aargh! Get off of me! Would you quit doing that?” She struggled to push Jurina off, but only get a tighter embrace.

“Nope ~ !” Then Jurina finally released Mayu, and gave her usual cat smile.

Mayu massages her temples, “Ugh, I can’t believe you. Are you like that with everyone?” She looked up at Jurina who now held a bitter smile. Feeling guilty for the sudden change of atmosphere, “Anyways, let’s go!” Mayu said leaving. Jurina brightens again, and gave a nod as she followed Mayu.

They walked next to each other in silence, enjoying the night time weather. It wasn’t freezing, it wasn’t hot, it felt rather calming with a small wind blowing against their skin.  The night sky was also soothing while there were faint stars twinkling in the sky. Mayu and Jurina would stop and stared as the sky in awe, before they continue to walk. They made their way into the night town, seeing many convenience stores, restaurant, an arcade, and night clubs open.

“I never knew a lot of places open at night. Well except for convenience stores.” Jurina said in amazement.

“Really?” Mayu quirked a brow, “You don’t go out to town that often at night?”

Jurina shook her head. “Mom always worrying about the danger at night. So I don’t go out unless I’m in the car. But I’m always sleeping in the car rides.”

“Aa, is that so? Well I don’t blame her. The night can be dangerous.” Mayu close an eye and scratched a cheek with her index.

“Hahaa, I guess. Oh hey! Let’s go to the arcade!” Jurina said pointing to the arcade.

“Sure.” Mayu nodded, as Jurina ran off to the arcade while Mayu simply walked.

They spend most of their time playing in the arcaded. They played varieties of games more than once, and also took silly picture together in the booth.

After it was almost closing time, Jurina walked out of the arcade was laughing her guts out, while Mayu’s face was red as she puffed out her cheeks. “Oh, oh my god! That’s so hilarious! I never imagine someone so weak at punching!”

“Shut up! My kicks are better than my punches!” She crossed her arms and huffed. Then she saw three men walk down the streets, coming towards Jurina, while Jurina was coming towards them without looking. “Ah, Jurina watch out!”

“What?” Before she was able to react she bumped into of the men as she stumbled backwards, but was still able to get her balance. “Whoa, sorry about that.” She sincerely apologized and gave a small bow.

Then men in the middle click his tongue, he was the tallest among the group, look to be in his late twenties or earlier thirties, short hair, pretty built, so Jurina assumes since she bump into him. He dresses in a business suit along with the other two by his side, but everything was disorder and loose, making him look sluggish. “Well, look what we have here boys. Someone decided to run into me without looking.” Two males, which look around the same age as the one in the middle, both snickered.

Jurina furrowed her brow, “I did apologize.” Mayu came up to Jurina, and lightly tugged her clothes.

“Jurina, let’s go. Quick.” Mayu whispered, worryingly what’s going to happen.

The male in the middle ignored what Jurina said, and continue. “Oh, and there’s another girl along. How great.” He whistles. The male on his right spoke, “But… Looks like one person is going to be the odd one out.”

“Hey girls, what do you say about having a nice time with us, hm ~ ? It’ll be a blast I promise.” The middle said, putting his hand in his pocket and lean forward.

Jurina became a defensive, keeping Mayu behind her. “Sorry, we’re not interested in such. We prefer to be home.”

“Oh ho ho ho. ~ Playing hard to get, aye? This guy here love gals that are hard to get.” The middle snickered, causing only Jurina to become even more defensive and took a step back.

Jurina turned her head slightly and whispered softly enough that only Mayu could hear, “Run.”

“What? I can’t leave you!” Mayu answered worryingly, she didn’t agree to Jurina’s idea. She couldn’t leave her knowing it was her responsibility of watching over Jurina.

“Oi oi? What are you talking about? Won’t you like to share with us?” The male on the left demanded in a husky voice. He took a step closer, a bit too close for Jurina’s comfort zone.

“Now.” Jurina demanded.

“Hey c’mon now.” The left man was about to reach out to grab Jurina, but before he could she threw a full blown punch at his face, sending him flying off his feet a little, as she also kicked him in the balls, leaving him paralyze on the floor. The other became shock at such action, as they couldn’t believe to see someone so young to deal that much damage to one person.

“Run!” Jurina shouted, turning around and grabbed Mayu wrist, pulling her along as they ran the opposite direction. She could hear the men shouting after Jurina and Mayu. Crap! Fortunately for them, the two men lagged a little worrying about the third guy on the floor paralyzed.

“Why didn’t you run when I told you?” Jurina snapped while they were running, with the three men following right behind them.

“I can’t leave you!” Mayu shouted back.

“You’re not in a condition to say that! Shit!” They made several turns hoping it would get the three male off their tail, but it didn’t. They were still able to follow them. Jurina cursed under her breath while she ran still dragging Mayu.

She reached into her pockets, and without hesitation she dialed Rena. She didn’t want to dial 119, seeing that the service was crap in this situation, so she called Rena instead, really hoping she could save them.

Several rings until a tired voice answered. “…Hello?”

“Rena it’s me!”

“Eh!? Jurina, what --”

“No time! Help us!” Jurina said panicking.

“Where are you right now?”

Jurina couldn’t tell where they were, but she gave brief description as Rena immediately knew where they were. Rena could hear unfamiliar shouts over the phone, along with Jurina’s heavy breathing.

“Oh shit!”

The call was cut off.

To be Continue in Chapter 7

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SNIPS PREVIEW TO CHAPTER 7 ( it's not actually the official, so you may not see it in chapter 7? Who knows. o no )

"W-who.... who are you?"

- - - - - - - - - -

"Jurina-chan. ~" She called her name, a wide grin creeping on her face as she walked over to Jurina. Jurina couldn't move, she was too terrified to move, she felt as if something had glued to her the ground while she stare into those familiar, and yet unfamiliar eyes. The figure leaned forward, and wiped the small splattered blood off her cheeks....

- - - - - - - - - -

'...Hehehe, then how I about I give you a little refresher?’ Images started to flash into Rena mind, thousand of images flashing less than second. Rena shut her eyes tight; she held her head and curled into a tighter ball, “Nngh!” Her head throbbed in pain, everything was too much for her to handle she wanted it to stop. “S-STOP!”

- - - - - - - - - -

"When I found her.... She was bleeding to death." Yuko said painfully, recalling such horror memories, as she bit her lower lips.


So the beginning was meant to be in chapter 8, but I decided to throw that in so you guys know what to suspect. o uo because I'm being kind? lol. don't know.
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: bochang on May 01, 2012, 08:40:01 AM
first! will edit this after read :D
Finished! and i'm still the first!!!! :D


i... i don't know but i get teary eyes when i read the flashback..
I can see JuriMayu in the air! :D i hope so. LOL
so at least jurina will be happy. :D
Jurina! Stay strong!! :D

and after read the last part of the flashback and some spoiler for chapter 7..
i just realized the first part in this chapter..

someone gonna died? and it's not rena or yuki..
don't tell me it's jurina or mayu!!! HUAH!!! NO!!
don't kill any of them!!! Please al-san!!

and don't tell me that the one who made someone bleeds to death is R-r..rena..
*heartbeat stopped for a minute*

please let my prediction false!

and thx for this breathtaking update..
when i read this chapter i can feel my heartbeat getting faster, tears starts to well up in my eyes, and yet i'm smilling.. LOL
too much emotion in my mind right now. LOL

hope that you can success in that class al-san! Hwaiting!
yeah, sometimes i also get some douchebags lecturer. LOL stay strong! you're not alone! :D
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: karomuwi on May 01, 2012, 09:59:18 AM
Ahahaha~!  :hiakhiakhiak: You're right! I would definitely do it on purpose while making everyone think that I'm drunk to keep myself from getting killed the following day! And yes...I do easily fangirl when it comes to great authors such as you. I mean, authors such as yourselves deserve to have fans like me.  :hee:
I think that I did grin while I was sleeping  :sleep: because when I woke up, I woke up with a smile and I was such in a happy mood!
I'm glad that I amuse you Al-kun!  :hee: I will amuse you even more as times passes by. ^^

Since I can't write Yukirin being blunt and all, I'll try to think of a way to make her seem so by reading your fic. It's a great referrence for me, since I can just think of several plots in my head! But...Unfortunately, I'm too lazy to write them down.
And if Yukirin were to kiss the pain away...  :shy2: Rena-san might just take advantege of her! (though with her princess-like personality, that's nearly impossible)

And I'm actually glad that Jurina ran away from the scene. Will help in lessening the pain.
Well, to be REALLY honest...  :mon sweat: I'm still not that comfortable with RenAirin. I mean...I've been a W Matsui fan for nearly two years (I've only been an AKB48 fan for two years ) and they were the first couple I really did Fangirl about. As for YukiRena, I've only started shipping them ever since I watched MG 2 and read Sieka-san's Chinmoku.

Long sentence short,  :mon dunno: I still prefer W Matsui and YukiRena over RenAirin. RenAirin is just like a crush for me  :mon exhaust:, whilst W Matsui is forbidden love  :mon inluv: (Incest) and YukiRena forbidden love for princesses  :mon blood:. There's just a major spark for the two pairings for me  :mon spit:. Well, I'll be fine with whoever Rena-sama chooses actually. :bigdeal: I'll support her! :onioncheer:

Well, Al-kun...Deal with them! They can bring you inspirations if you ever feel down!  :mon geek: Well, :bigdeal: That's what I do when I'm depressed. I always re-read the comments for my fics...and BAM!  :mon yeah: I'm surging with happiness and energy. Just like what others say, "The comments are our life." That's why, I always make sure that those who deserve them knows it.  :mon geek: That's why you should accept it, Al-kun! Comments makes us fanfic authors energy and life! It's the medicine that no science can make! (am I saying that right?   :mon lol:)

Anyway, onto the comments! I've been blabbering! LOL!

Chapter Six: So...Rena-sama broke the promise of probably...  :mon huh: killing or fighting? So... now Gekikara-sama might take over.  :mon determined: Very interesting, Al-kun. Extremely!
I really like how you made Gekikara-sama tease and talk to Rena-sama like that. It reminds me of how I become whenever I do something I regret and my sadistic conscience talks.  :mon cweepy: She's very creepy, I tell you. *shivers* Sometimes I wonder, whether I'll become like Gekikara-sama if my conscience ever gets control of me. :bigdeal: oh well, means happiness for me then! :hiakhiakhiak:

Jurina and Mayu would have been raped?!  :mon ghost: Rena-sama! I beseech you! :kneelbow: Let Gekikara-sama out for a while to send them to pandemonium!  :mon mad:
So...Gekikara-sama remembers her dearest Yukirin. Interesting.  :glasses:

And wow, Rena-sama actually knew about Jurina's feelings. Wow... Now I pity Jurina even more. BUT! I still support Rena-sama in her choice! I mean, even I did what she had done to Jurina. So.... Go YukiRena! :onioncheer:

I was actually surprised when Yukirin grabbed Rena-sama and prevented her from running after Jurina. I mean, most of the time... (let's make Yukirin 1, Rena as 2 and Jurina as 3) I always read the 3 running away with 2 after them, and 1 just staying there feeling guilty and such. But this... You really took me aback, Al-kun!
As for what happened after that...Yukirin felt guilty and STILL stole a kiss.  :mon lmao: My god, Yukirin! You're so weak when it comes to Rena-sama! But then... I somehow wished that Rena-sama slept longer for Yukirin to kiss her some more.  :mon inluv:

I'm glad that Mayu decided to help Jurina, it means that JuriMayu is in progress! Maybe? LOL!

And now~ For the snippets that Al-kun is not sure whether it'll really be in Chapter 7  :lol:

Hmm~ so far they're really making me crave for an update. The
Quote
"W-who...who are you?"
made me think of Rena going berserk and one of the douchebags asked her the question. Or maybe its a passer-by? :hiakhiakhiak:
So with the blood on the cheeks of the girl who called her, which I suspect is Rena-sama, I deducted that she 'took care' of those jerks. Well done, Gekikara-sama!  :mon dance:

And Yuko's sentence....made me already wonder what had happened.

MOU~! Al-kun! You're such a tease! Making me crave and wait for the next update! Mou~!  :mon annoy:

Anyway....


THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE, AL-KUN!!!!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: Pwoper48 on May 01, 2012, 10:32:47 AM
Uh, you'll have an exam? Well, me too. :panic:
You suck at class? Me too!
But sometimes i have those "small paper from God" that help me on exam :D

---

Well, thanks for the update, i like it :twothumbs
And, yeah, I'm curious what will happen next. :? Especially about what will happen to Jurina and Mayu. But i think, that the Gekikara on Rena will appear and take the lead!!

And... Just take your time with you hardcore study

I'll be waiting for the update here 8)
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: Pandah on May 01, 2012, 01:43:31 PM
omg i just realised i made so many typos in my last comment LOL i totally didnt read over it  :sweatdrop:

ah yes i know what you mean  :yep: 
hohoho a longer make out session with kojiyuu mmm im totally liking that  :w00t: ah yes you have no idea what you're doing when you're drunk...its like you become a whole new person!

ooh i wonder what the mystery is going to be  :P
haha its okay i like depressing stuff too :) sometimes i like the feeling it gives me...might give me a heart attack one day though LOL
this confusion is definitely confusing  :banghead:

OMGAH! renas inner geki is coming out again!  :O but shes trying to suppress it! whats gonna happen~~
YUKI STOLE A KISS FROM RENA! that sly girl  :P rena woke up too easily she shoulda slept for a bit longer lolol
*whistles* i see some mayujuri here! they're getting so close xD and jurinas all clingy on mayu *hugs self* so cuteeee! although they do still have feelings for yuki and rena respectively :( maybe they can both LOVE EACH OTHER!  8)

mayu and jurina is about to get raped! omg! SHES STILL A KID! D: wheres mayuyus super fighting skills! oh man renas gonna come and might end up killing these men  :panic:

AHHHHH THE PREVIEW!! fhuwfhiuewafheuir i have gibberish spouting outa my mouth..i cannot form any words anymore.... :hand: i have died

thanks for the update!  :thumbsup

p.s dont get sick! take care of yourself and i will prob disappear for the next month until my semester is finished as well...gl to the both of us  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: Sieka on May 01, 2012, 04:43:59 PM
Death leads to more problems needing to be ironed. ^w^llll I mean, if you kill the character off, you need to arrange the set, like the atmosphere, the mood of the character and their thoughts, and that takes quite a lot of job. :3 But it does make the story dark, in a way, but more on the emotional side.

I'm enjoying writing Gekikara, yet...yes, there's a big YET on that, its tiring, having to write her, I need to use my knowledge in vocabulary. :catglare:

Yuki could pass as a cool guy in that tuxedo yah know. :L

Mystery love? Doesn't that seem more weird? ............How about Root type? Xwxlll

I'm not joking though my dear author......I'm serious you know. :glasses: :shifty:

Is that even possible? (OA O
So its like, your chanting Yuki and she's doing everything? Or is it just your inner RenaYuki fangirl that's doing it? :lol:
The question itself was rather.......lol, bad, and lol, she told you that through a glare? :lol:

I prefer not to fall in love, right now and in the future. (ow o

Let the inner Yuko in you control you then! :frustrated:

Aw come on', I want to keep my pride and keep myself oriented, don't do that, me fangirling takes away half of my morals. :lol:

You better keep your promises dude......... :shifty:

True, though it also depends on your capability to handle your emotions well, if you can't, then even the most smallest sad things in the past can hurt you. :3

I wonder if Jurina would suffer more here though.....seems like it in this update. (ow o
Haruna as the second Yuko is fine just as long as she's targeting Yuko. :hehehe:

Ehh........well, that's true. Love can't be balanced out without pain, I mean, its weird without it, you need to at least get hurt while in the process of loving someone in order for your affections to grow strong.............. :sweatdrop:

I am selfish, but I'd also like to think of the consequences first of my selfishness before being one. :lol:
My solution for Yuki is to make Rena drunk and have her take responsibility if anything happens to them on that day. :lol: If Yuki can't dominate Rena's mind, then she might as well try to dominate her mind, or make Rena feel responsible....... :P

Forever alone buddies, I like the title you know. (ow o
I kind of see it in JuriMayu, I mean, them being forever alone and stuck together, until they realize they actually have one another, oh lol, facepalm when major accident happens when they suddenly realize that, so much angst.........and my angst plot bunnies are skipping wildly over that thought. :lol:

Don't rush, take your time when you can write. Also, good luck with your exams! :thumbsup
Depending on the choice I make? What make her cuddle up with Rena all day in bed or something so she'll forgive me? (OA Ollll

When they become roommates, who knows what happens........... :lol:
...........Sorry, I think I'm implying something........dayum, my mind.... lllllllorz

Mah true, that's how you built Rena's character here, somehow, it kinda fits perfectly with Yuki's.......... :lol:

Do you want me to dig up that secret? :huhuh

I'm not blaming Yuki for being greedy, its fine to be greedy as long as you have a good standing point! >:3 Also, Rena needs to loosen up around Yuki, everything will just turn tense and awkward if she doesn't lighten up. :lol:

I don't know how to picklock anyways dude, it's not like I'm planning to be a thief. :lol: With Mayu with Jurina, I know she'll be back up somehow, I mean, Mayu is the perfect companion to take away your mind from drama. :3

Don't worry dude, reply when you can and take care of yourself, I told you to sleep early! :sweat:

Reply on Update:

I wonder what happened that made Rena lock herself up? Maybe she unleashed her inner Gekikara and it took over, beating up people and making a bloody mess..........if that happens, she might have felt guilty for it. And Yuki told a valuable secret to Yuko! Omg, will Rena actually hear this from Yuko? Will Yuko tell Rena that Yuki is a friend from the past? Wait a second, will Yuko even tell Yuki? She does have a right to know.......I bet she would, one way or another. :3

Gekikara's talking to Rena! Gekikara's talking to Rena! Geki----wait a second.........why does this seem familiar? OwOlll
It's like that scene in my own fic, Chinmoku, where Geki's talking to a voice. *le gasp* I wonder if this voice here, Gekikara, is evil.....or harmless, and will help Rena around? I hope so, I don't want Gekikara to be like that voice in my fic, urging her to destroy and kill. :smhid Though it does seem that Geki's helping Rena, remember that is........and she seems to know that Yuki's trying to make Rena remember her......

Wew, Yuki sure knows how to work her ways, even calling Mayu and asking her to look for Jurina. I feel bad for Mayuyu, Yuki doesn't like her yet she's willing to go that far to do something for Yuki, I hope Yuki would repay Mayu's kindness by freeing her from her emotions and help Mayu move on by making her fall for someone else...........

Yuki so sly! You are so getting slier by the next chapter Yuki! I wouldn't be surprised if you made your way in another totally devious way..............but lol, did you just have to steal a kiss from Rena when its your whole fault why she cried? Geez, I thought your guilty, please act like one Yuki! Being greedy is bad right now! :lol: :lol: :lol:

JuriMayu! Looks like their starting to become good friends, I like the development, at least Jurina is leaning onto someone aside from Rena...... :lol: But dang, looks like their in trouble. I don't feel all too worried though because I think Yuki and Rena will get there and save them before anything happens. :3 Just that, I think Rena will come as Gekikara instead. :3

Lol at the preview, I see Gekikara here, though I'm curious of what Yuko said, she might as well have told Yuki about what happened.......... :lol:

Thanks for the update. :cathappy: Good luck on your exams again! :on GJ:
Take care of yourself, and go to sleep early dude, or I'll throw a table at you. :farofflook:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: gekirena on May 01, 2012, 04:57:12 PM
this is too awesome!!!  :inlove:
Rena & Yuki! Mayu & Jurina  :wub:
i love the pairings  :twothumbs
cant wait for your next update!!!
thank you so much for writing such a great fanfic!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
Post by: altoids on May 06, 2012, 01:18:15 AM
@ everyone : soo... chapter 7, umm.. yeah Not going to updated until after the exam, sorry guys. > A> ; And... I'm almost back in full heath. ... Not yet. Sorry to worry about that you guys. ;;;;
Anyways. This is not really here for comment. But update something else! :"D
After running through my other computer, I found an old mini story and uncompleted fic document under a pile of homework documents, and I thought it would be nice to share. <33
Also, I'm posting up a one shot of KojiYu, it's not related to FM ( Forgotten Memories ). It came from an inspiring artist that gave me an idea.
And it's my way to thank you guys for being awesome and dealing with the terrible story I'm making. :P And that goes to the ninjas too! Hiding in the shadows. o uo
All the post is going to separate since it'll be neater that way. AND THANK YOU GUYS AGAIN FOR BEING AWESOME BROS! ; wwww;

@ bochang-san : Hahaaa. > w> Fast reader aye?

Eeh? Really? o no ;; Even if flashbacks aren't sad or depressing?
Hahaaa. ~ It's possibly so bro. > w <
Getting support from Mayu, she'll be fine. Same with Mayu.
They're supporting each other even if they don't know it. xP

Mhmm. = w= It meant as a foreshadow, so you guys have a hint what's going to happen.
... umm. I can't tell you who.
But I can tell you that someone does die.

A hey! D: Bro don't go dying! ; AAA;
And I can't tell you. o xo ~ It can be so or not.

I should be thanking you for reading bro. o wob
Is that so?
Eh, sorry about giving you all the emotion building up? ;;

Thanks bro. = w=b Will try.
They're not fun, right!? But good to know that. ; w;b
Hope that you stay strong against those lectures as well if you're dealing with them!

@ Karomuwi-san : Wait a second.. you're only a minor though! They won't believe you're drunk. > A>
and don't really get yourself drunk actually drunk either. = u=)/ I'm not here to support minor drinking.
Also also... You may still get yourself killed if you were pretending to be drunk.... Maybe?
Eh!? Yo, I'm not that great bro. I see though. o no *pat pat head*
Oh? hahaa. xD Well as long you're still in a happy mood when you wake up. o uo
:"D ;;; Umm.. thanks?

You just need to let your inner Yuki take over you. = w=b Hahaa. I see. Glad it helps then.
Ha. xD Just write them down whenver you feel like, Rin-chan. xP And as long they are still in your head.
No! Rena shall not take advantage of Yuki! Gasp! Though that would be a dream come true. ; w;
Lol. That would only happen if Rena was seriously drunk or something. xP

Well, if Jurina stayed don't know what will happen. lol. Can't image what will!
know how you feel. = u=b Aa, I see. Hahaa. xD Well good to know that Sieka-san and MG2 got you into that shipping. o uo
Aah, okay. xD At least you at least accept it a little. I just can't se it myself yet! </3
It's not even incest dude! xD Only if you make them sister in your ff! lol. YukiRena makes sense yeah. xD
Good to know you're supporting her all the way. ;3

Ugh. You've got me. Yeah, I understand what you mean. :P I'm not too much the type to appriciate such words from people.
Since it just feel wasteful on someone like me. I'm fine with a simple thanks that's why. xD ;;;
Lol. It's fine you blabbering. xD

What happen is a mystery, bro. ~ Actually, didn't I mention it in chapter one? xD Yuko and Rena made a promise not fight anymore.
I think. *goes back to chapter 1, don't even remember myself now* xP
She might, she will. > w> ~ Hahaa. I try not to make Gekikara a jerk to Rena much as possible?
There's a meaning behind why and how Rena is talking to her Gekikara. and it shall be said or hinted in the next chapter.
Totally know how you feel when you have the conscience talking to you. She can't be that bad? Maybe you just fear your conscience. o no ;;
Ummm. Trust me, you don't want to if it involves getting your friend or yourself seriously hurt. ;
If it just a mild point where you're totally amuse watching your friend behing furious and angry at you, but not much to hate you then get all that happiness you want.

Umm. Yes they would've. Lol. There's a reason why she's doesn't want to.
Mhmm. Reasons.... It's a mystery to the next chapter. ~

Yeah. I tried not to hint it so you guys wouldn't know that Rena knew. o xo And made you guys think she just dense.
Jurina will be fine. She has Mayu now.... Maybe? :"D Hahaaa. Oh my. xD

You really thought it was going to be a cliche moment? Lol.

Lol. Don't worry Yuki is going to reflect on that later. xD Umm. Rena has to be knocked cold if that were to happen. o 3o

Maybe, bro. ~ Likely.

The snippets are going to be in it. Just added more to it. xP
Uhhh. Sorry?

Hahaa. Just a crazy assumptions that I can't answer. o uo ;;;
Of course! Since the beginning of chapter 6 said all.
.. umm... I'm sorry? ;;

@ Pwoper48-san : So so... I'm not the only person who's suffering? ; www;
At least you're lucky for those. lol. Good luck to you bro.

all your thoughts will be said in chapter 7. o wo ;
Aa, thanks bro.

@ Pandah-san : Bro it's fine. Don't worry about it too much. ;

Mhmmm. ~ ;3 There will be one. Just not in the story. More likely in the sequal, yep. I'll make sure of it.
Oh yeah. And being drunk is bad. You're exposing too much of yourself. ; ww;
Midly drunk is fine, right ~ ? :"D

Hnnn. ~ If Rena being around Yuki slowly makes her remember is the mystery for the last chapter or the next. o 3o
They're nice... sometimes. Totally understand you there. ... ;; It will give you a semi-heart attack so no worries. o wob
I'm sure you're strong enough not to get a heart attack!
*pat pat* o no

Dun dun duuuuuun. That's a secrect that can only be anwer in the update. o uo
Hahaa. Says a lot that Rena is possibly a light sleeper. xD
Mayu is a support to Jurina, even if Mayu doesn't know it. xP Of course though, it's not easy forget the person you love the most. *heavy sigh*
Hahaa. If my Mayu and Jurina muse allows me to write that in their sequal for them. xD

Dun dun duuun. :< Mayu is pretty much a weakling in this one. ; AA; Aa, who knows. She save them that for sure.
But, how is the question... Hmmmmm..

ACK! No don't die! *pulls soul back into body* ; AAA;
No probs.

Aa, thanks bro, I appriciate it. > W> I see, alright then. Best of luck to you too bro!

@ Sieka-nee? : Oh yeah. It does but... it's not so bad if you understand the mood of it. I know what you mean though.
It pretty much is. *going to kill a character off one of these days* xP Yeah, it'll be heavy if you get it just right.

Aa, I see. Well you got the dictionary to help you there bro. = w=b

Hahahaa. Guess she can. xD If she get the right touch of looking badass. ~ ;3

Oh, fine. xD We'll just leave it as root love then. xD ; Root though... hnn.... = u= ;

EEEH!? Etto... ;;;; C-can it at least be a toy weapon then!

Yeah it is.
What? no! xD It's just my Yuki muse just pretty much take over what I write when it's her part.
Hahaaa. If that was the case I will dominate both RenaYuki. >3 And write what I please to write! Muhahaha ~
Sorry? Do you have a better way to place it? And I only assume that way!
I mean. if you ask that kind of question and they glare are you, you'll likely know the answer!
If they were good, wouldn't they tell you straight out? o no

Hnnn. I see. = w=

No! The inner Yuko doesn't need to do so! xD

Psssh. > w> I'm not going to break down your pride that bad. ... hnnn. I don't mind if that happens to you. ~ o uo

Okay okay. ;;; Well, I hope it's a good reason? Uh. hope. ;

Mhmm. o no Which is bad if you're not strong enough. But, eventually over time you'll be able to deal with them.
Just in a slow and painful way honestly.
... Hnnnnn. = w= I can't really say. If Jurina muse allow me to make her suffer more then I will. o:
It'll be patch up later though by a certain person. ~ ;3

Hahahaa. Oh you. xD Now it's a mystery how Haruna thoughts are when she's drunk, and act like a second Yuko.

At least get hurt by love several time. Mhmm. And fight through it! O< Because then you know it true love and not a simple crush. o wo

Hahaaa. Good to know you think a head first. xD
Oh my! I don't think Yuki has the heart to get Rena drunk really. Unless Yuko throws in another King's Game, and Rena happen to get drunk from the order.
Lol. Don't think Rena can try to dominate Yuki. Rena isn't like how she was in the past. If she still was for sure that can happen! xD

It makes total sense for them. It's sad, but it fits. </3
Both feeling rejected by the person they love. ; w; Lol. Bro, don't you like it when your mind run wild. xD

Aah, rush is needed. Need to get everything of my head before I accidently start writing the story on the test. lol.
The people who corrects the test, they'll be like, "Hnnnn. It's a very nice story there, but it's not the promt you're suppose to write for the essay."
Could imagine that happening. xD ; And thanks for the luck. o uo)v
Hnnn. Hahahaa. xD Don't know, maybe she'll forgive you if you do that?
Talk to your inner Yuki muse. o no And see the answer.

Muhahahahahaha! > u> Many stuff will happen! Many stuff!
Lol. xD It's fine. ~ So many stuff will happen if they became roommates. ~ Oh, inner Yuko muse you'll be so enjoyed with the site. ~ <33

It's best to try to fit the characters together. If not, it'll be a little boring?

What? No!? .... what secrect are we talking about again? :"D

And whatever happens, she got to reflect on it. .... Yuki will break her stiffy-ness! O< That will be her goal!
Unless Rena get to her goal first. ~ Which is a mystery goal. ;3

NO! Sleeping early is for squares! D: And I'll be fine. OTL

Aa, you can be correct on that, bro. o wo ~ Hnnn. Who knows if Rena will hear it from Yuko. Who knows who knows. ~
Hnnn. It shall be said, and you'll know. lol. Just not yet. > w> ;

Don't worry. ~ The Gekikara that talk to Geki in Chinmoku isn't the same. ~ It's a little different in a way. how, that's a mystery.
There's a reason why Gekikara is talking to Rena the way right now. ~ Hahaa. Gekikara isn't that evil... well not yet. ~
Geki isn't going to presure Rena to go into a rampage. xD ; It's going to be different. Aa, yes. There's a reason to all of that. :3

Yuki is going to have to if she's going to try to get Rena. > w> ;;;; If she doesn't, oh ho ho, I'll force her. :U

Hahahaaaa.xD Next chapter Yuki isn't. >P Yuki is totally going to reflect on it eventually! Rena will make sure that Yuki does, if Yuki tries again
when she is not suppose to!

Even if Mayu didn't want to bother with a child. lol. She's slowly trying to get over it. But obviously Mayu and Jurina still love Yuki and Rena. ; w;
Mhmm. = w=b You can count on that. Aa, who knows. It's either she comes as Gekikara or or or or..... Something else!

Hnnn..... *stays quiet about it* = u=

Thankies again bro. I will I will! And no! none of that throwing table at me. > w> ;;;
Oh... By the way, if you haven't notice yet, I might just start calling you Sieka-nee since you're being persistent about still being older than me. xD ;
You're not that older than me! D<

@ gekirena-san : thanks bro. o wob
Title: Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
Post by: altoids on May 06, 2012, 01:18:35 AM
Birdcage ( YukiRena )

Chapter 1

I remember the day I found you, bleeding, freezing, and dying under the pile of snow. Your wings were damage from a creature that attacked you. You had claw marks everywhere on your wings, as your feathers were all tattered up. At first I thought you were dead, but then I saw a small movement of you breathing I decided to save you, and brought you to my home. The home of a royal family, the Matsui family, living high in the mountain isolated from the town.

“Father, do you have a birdcage?” Rena asked, she was only ten years of age, and was next to throne of the family. She tugged on her father’s robe to get his attention.

“Yes I do. Why do you need one sweetie?” The father wonders with a kind voice.

“I found this blackbird badly injured, and I want to save it.” She pouted up at her dad.

“Hmm..” Her father was giving a thought and brushed his white beard, when he saw Rena pouting, how could he not resist? “Very well, I’ll ask the servant to fetch you a cage, and get a veterinarian.”

Rena burst into glee and hugged her father. “Thank you so much, father!” Her father let out a chuckle and patted her head.

“Just make sure you take responsibility for it. Your mother will kill me if there was a mess.” Rena gave a firm nod before letting go and running off to her room.

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The next day the veterinarian came, the blackbird was a raven, as the veterinarian tended the raven’s wounds. And from that day forth the raven hasn’t woken up. By each passing day, Rena would still watch the raven’s wound slowly recover. The claw marks on the raven finally healed, but, leaving a permanent scar, as the tattered feathers fell off brining new ones.  And yet the raven still hasn’t woken up. Rena wondered why.

A year has passed and the raven still hasn’t shown any sign of waking up.

“We should get rid of the bird sweetie.” The father suggest, while the family was in the middle of dinner. Rena was sitting diagonally from her father’s right side, and her mom on the opposite end. And next to Rena was her little sister, Jurina Matsui, who is only seven years old.

“No. It’ll wake up I’m sure of it, father!” Rena protested.

“You’ve been saying that for a year already! And it still hasn’t woken up. It’s just wasting space now!” Her mom yelled, causing Jurina to flinch and drop her fork. She look up at her mom never hearing her yell before, neither seeing her angry.

“It will! I know it will!” Rena abruptly got off the chair and ran to her room.

“Rena!” Her mom called after, “Jeez that child. She takes too much after you.” She exhaled.

The father laughed, “She is still only a child after all. If she really insists the bird will awaken, we’ll give it another week.” The mother only gave an annoyed sigh as Jurina just silently watches, and then quickly finish her food before dismissing herself.

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Rena sat on her bed while she silently stared at birdcage with the raven silent sleeping. For the whole year she has been doing the same routine every night, she would sit and stare until she has fallen asleep. And every time she woke up, she wonders if it had awakened, but to her disappointment, it was still sleeping. Slowly she started to doze off, and before she realized it she had fallen asleep.

There was an annoying sound of clanks, like something was clawing against metal bars.

Clank. Clank. Clank.

Waking up from the sound, Rena slowly opens her eyes groggily as she rubs them. She then blink several times noticing it was still night, she reach over to the nightstand next to her bed, and turned on the lamp.  The light radiating from the lamp filled the room, she turned her head to the sound, and to her surprise it was the raven clawing and biting on the metal.

“It’s awake!” Rena jumped up to her feet in glee. “I knew it’ll awaken!”

“Let me out you mortal fool!” The raven cawed, and continued to gnaw at the metal cage.

Rena gave a loud gasped, bringing her hands over her mouth, “You can talk! Uwaaaaa! That’s amazing!”

“Of course I can talk you…“ The rave stopped the claw and grew silent for a moment, “You… You understand me?”

Rena sat down on her bed and gave a firm nod. “Mhm! Every single word I understand.”

The raven grew silent once more, and blinked several times. “Mortal child, how do you understand? Only the witch can understand my tongue.” The raven hissed at Rena, “Do you carry the witch blood?”

Rena tilted her head and gave a confuse expression. She then crosses her arms, and held her chin, silently thinking. “I am no witch. I am the oldest princess of the Matsui Family.”

“Then how do you know my tongue?” The raven demanded in a cold voice that sent Rena body to shiver.

Rena silently thinks once more before shrugging. “I don’t know. Maybe I’m magical being!”

The raven cawed. “Ha! Such a strange child, you are. Tell me, what is your name, child.”

Rena puffed out a cheek in annoyance, “Stop calling me a child!” The raven laughed at Rena’s reaction. Then she gave a bright smile answering the raven’s question, “Rena. Matsui, Rena. What about you?” She tilts head, curious to know the raven’s name.

“I have many names. The name I have known before became long forgotten, call me whatever you may wish as long I agree to it, and fitting for a female.”

“Hmmm.” Rena looked elsewhere, thinking of a name. “’Yuki’! I found you in the snow, and ‘yuki’ means snow. And you’re also pretty like the snow.” The raven, Yuki, started the laugh again causing Rena to frown, wondering if it was a bad name to give. “Is that a no?”

“I don’t mind such a name.” Rena gave a wide smile, delighted to know that the raven agreed to the name. “Though I do have to say I am not a pure color as the snow.”

Rena shook her head as Yuki cocked her head to the side, curious of the girl’s thought. “That’s not true! You are pure! I don’t know how to describe it you just are!”

Yuki laughed once more, “You’re an interesting child. You have yet to amuse me more. Now tell me, I’m curious to know, how am I here in such a small cage?”

“Oh! I found you in the pile of snow, you were badly injured and I thought you were dead, but, when I saw you breathing, I thought I should save you.”

“So you save me? Aa, I remember. I was attack by a witch familiar. How long has it been since you found me?”

Rena tilted her head thinking. “About a year ago…”

“I have slept for that long?” Yuki blinked and looked at her wounds, where she imagines them to be. She notices that there were no wounds, and the scars were not noticeable due to the new born feathers. “Maa, you have taken great care of me child.” Yuki bowed her head down, indicating her gratitude. “I must somehow repay you for them.”

Rena gave a nod, “How about being my friend?” She gave a wide smile.

“Friend?” The raven cocks her head to the side, “There should be something you want more than having me as a friend.”

Rena shook her head, “No. I’m always stuck inside this mansion. I can’t go anywhere else because of my illness.”

“Illness?”

Rena gave a small nod as her wide smile became a small frown. “I don’t know anything about it because my father and mother are hiding it from me. I just overheard them once.”

“I see. If that is what you wish, then, I have nothing against being your friend.” Yuki notice Rena giving a stifle yawn. “You should best rest. I shall be here when you awaken.” Yuki assured her. Rena gave a small nod, turned off the light, and said her good nights before sleeping.

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Like Yuki said, Rena awakens seeing Yuki sitting in the cage quietly. “Good morning, Yuki.” Rena mumbled, she went into a sitting position and rubs her eyes.

“Morning.” The raven bowed her head.

Rena and Yuki spend their time talking to each other, until Rena was called down for breakfast. Rena announced the raven has finally awakened as everyone was surprise, but, congratulated Rena for its awakening. 

Every day became the same routine for Rena. She would spend her whole day in her room talking to Yuki. She would always be talking about herself, and help the Yuki remember her past, bits by bits. Yuki remembered she had been living for hundreds of years. She was once a princess like Rena, and was kidnap by the witch when she was child, she was held prisoner before the witch had put a curse on her. For what reason, she could not remember. But, she would always remember how the witch will clip her wings from flying away or chain her leg down; such horrid memories brought shivers to her. Fortunately, she was able to escape one day, but was chased down by a witch’s familiar when she was caught missing. As the day Rena finding her wounded in the snow was when the witch familiar almost caught her after a long flight.

Telling such memories, Rena felt guilty of confining Yuki in the cage as she allowed Yuki to fly into the sky freely. She left the bird cage open, and the balcony door slightly open, for Yuki fly whenever she wanted to, and come back whenever she wanted to. Yuki had never abandon Rena, keeping her promise that she would stay as her friend. But, she felt that she needed to repay Rena more than just being a friend. Yuki was a very kind raven, in Rena’s opinion, even though she would speak a little coldly at Rena sometime, although Rena didn’t mind, she still found her attitude amusing.

Apparently Jurina was able to understand Yuki as well, after three years later she was no longer able to understand Yuki, but only hear the raven cawing. Rena found it odd since she was still able to understand Yuko, Yuki as well found it odd, unable to find the answer they decided to move on.

Several more years has passed, Rena is now nineteen as her illness became grew worse, but, it wasn’t as terrible to the point she wasn’t able to walk. It grew worse that she often gets colds or fevers. As her parents still believe Rena didn’t know about the illness Rena had. She knew her parents could force themselves to tell her.

Two nights ago Rena ran down with a high fever, and she still has a high fever tonight. The servant have just given her medicine and left her to sleep. With the medicine Rena took didn’t feel like it was taking effect, it felt like it making it worse.

Rena muffled a small groan, feeling streak of sweat trailing down her head. She tossed and turned in her sleep, and then she felt cold hands brushing against her cheeks.

“Rena…” A familiar voice woke Rena up. Her eye lids fluttered open, everything she saw dark and hazy, she couldn’t make out the figure that lingered over her, but she knew it was the person, and the voice sounded so familiar.

Rena tried to make out the figure, “Yuki?” She tiredly murmured. She felt cold finger pressed against her lips, shushing her.

“Go back to sleep.” Rena listened to what the voice ordered, as she closed her eyes, feeling those cold hands wiping away the sweat on her forehead. “Just get better, please.” Was the last thing she heard from the voice before everything became silent.

There was a strange noise. It sounded as if something was being scratch. Awakening from the sound, her eyes lids slowly opens. She allowed her eyes to adjust to the light before she slowly sat up and rub them gently. Her head felt a little light, but, she felt a lot better than she did last night, or two days ago. She felt like she was completely back to full health. She thought it would take several more days for the fever to decrease, and yet she is now in full health as if she never had a fever to begin with.

Odd. She thought. Quickly she brushed the thought aside and recalled last night. The cold hand she felt against her face, the voice that sounded like Yuki. The noise continues as it brought Rena back from her thoughts. Her eyes scanned the room, seeing Yuki wasn’t in the cage, neither was she anywhere in the room. “Yuki?” Rena called, the noise she heard suddenly stopped, pulling the blanket off of her; black feathers fluttered into the air. Rena blinked several time picking up a black feather an examined it. She knew what these black feather were, “Yuki…” She got off the bed, and when she set her foot down on the floor, she felt something soft beneath her feet. Looking down there were more black feathers scattered on the floor. “Yuki?” She called again; she noticed the balcony door was wide open as she then made haste, and walked to the balcony door.

A gasp escaped her lips, to her surprise there was a large raven, about the size of Rena, sitting on the balcony with its peck tucked under its wings. “Yuki?” The raven twitch from the call, lift its head up, it turn its head around to face Rena.

“What is it?” The familiar voice answered.

“Yuki!?H-h-how did you get so big?” Rena eye bulge out, she was bewilder to see the raven growing so big in just one night.

“I don’t know really.” Yuki simply answered as she turned her head away.

“C-can I pet you?” Rena tried not to stuttered, but she was so surprise by the sudden change she couldn’t help it.

The raven turn her head back, and cocked her head, “I don’t see what is the problem with that, since you done it many time.” Rena gave a small nod, and walked over to Yuki. She extended her arms out, as her hand made contact with the soft black feather.

“Uwaaa. It’s even softer!” Rena was amazing by the touch. It felt soft enough that she can even sleep on it. Actually, it was softer than her pillow she thought. She wonder how nice it would feel if she slept on Yuki.

“Don’t go sleeping on me.” Yuki stated as if she read Rena’s mind.

“W-wha? No! I wasn’t thinking of that…” Rena grew silent for a moment, “Actually yeah I was.” Her face turned red of embarrassment thinking of such silly thought. Then Yuki started to laugh as Rena puff out her cheeks, and turned redder. “Moou!” Then a call was heard on the other side of Rena’s door. She turned her head to the door then back at Yuki. “Looks like they’re calling me for breakfast. I’ll see you in a bit, Yuki.” Yuki gave a small nod as Rena then left the room.
Title: Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
Post by: altoids on May 06, 2012, 01:18:56 AM
Inspiration from 1000 Words by Yuumei (http://yuumei.deviantart.com/art/1000-W0RDS-126831037) You guys really need to read it, if you already have not. <333

1004 Thank You ( KojiYu )

“Hey! Get away from her!” A girl, known as Yuko Oshima, shouted as she kicks the two boys down that trapped a girl between them and the wall.

Yuko caught the boys harassing her precious person, Haruna Kojima, in the alley, and Yuko happen to feel that her friend was in danger. Following her guts, it led to her finding Kojima trapped between the wall and two boys. And without a second thought she beat the boys down instantly. The boys didn’t get the chance to fight back because of the sudden attack. The merely groan in pain on the floor wondering what’s happening.

“C’mon hurry!” Yuko shouted quickly, grabbing Kojima’s wrist and they both fled.

After a long distance away from their pervious location Kojima started shouting to Yuko, “Yuko! Yuko stop!” Kojima forcefully broke the grasp as they both stop, with Yuko turning to face her and giving a quizzical expression. “I didn’t need your help! I was fine on my own!” Kojima stated annoyed.

“But, NyanNyan…” Yuko frowned, unsure if her precious friend knew what she was saying. “You didn’t look like you were…”

“You just assume! Why are you always bothering me? Why can’t you just leave me alone?” Angered Kojima turned her heals around and walked the opposite directions.

Yuko stared to follow Kojima, “Where are you -”

“Don’t follow me!” The shout stopped Yuko in place as she look at Kojima’s back horrified. “Why can’t you just leave me alone?” Kojima started to run away as Yuko stood there in silence as she watched Kojima’s figure growing smaller and smaller.

Yuko wanted to run after her, but if she was to run after her she feared that Kojima would hate her, although she felt a needle of pain jabbing into her chest for not running after her. Both pained hurt so much she didn’t know what to choose, her legs scream to run after, her mind told her to stay, in the end everything was just painful for Yuko the bear. “Why… Why did you suddenly change?” The words choked out of Yuko’s mouth as she fell on her knees and held her chest, tears slowly building up. “Why?” She whimpers.

The next day at school, in the morning, Yuko had her head resting on the table as someone came up to her. “Yo, what happen to you?” The voice belong to Minami Takahashi, she pulled out a chair from the other desk, and place it next to Yuko’s desk as she then sat down. “You’re not energetic as usual.”

Yuko murmured a groan, and turn her head to face Minami. Minami flinched when she saw Yuko’s face all pale and exhausted. “You seriously don’t look good. You sure you should be at school today?” Minami asked worryingly. Another groan escaped Yuko’s lips as she turned her head facing the other way.

“I don’t want to stay home.” Yuko simply answered. “I’ll probably suffocate more at home.”

Minami sweated dropped, “I-I see… Could it possibly be about Kojima?” Minami jumped when Yuko started bang her head on the table four times then stopped. “I’ll take that as a yes.”

“She probably hate me now.” Yuko winced as tears started to build up by just thinking about it.

“Nonsense, you know best that Kojima can’t hate you. She’s likely under the weather and you caught her at a bad time.” Minami tried to assure her and gave Yuko a pat on the back. “Oh hey, Kojima is here.”

Yuko immediately shot her head up to see Kojima, and as Minami said Kojima just entered the room. Kojima made a brief eye contact with Yuko before looking away with a pain expression, and sat at her desk. Yuko also gave a pain expression and slam her head back down on the table, causing Minami to jump in her seat. “You really need to stop that. You’re going to hurt yourself.” Minami gave another pat on Yuko’s back, and then the bell rang for class, getting up, she place the chair back and went to her respectful seat.

They whole school day was long for Yuko. Even if Kojima and Yuko hanged out with each other for lunch they didn’t really talk. All there was is the heavy silent atmosphere that dwelled over their head. After they finish eating, Kojima leaves without a word and leaves Yuko merely staring at Haruna leaving. The same routine continues on for the next several days.

 It has now a weekend night, and Yuko spend her home time lying down on the sofa, with only herself in the house. Her parents were not around due to work so it was just Yuko alone in the house. Then there was a knock on the door. Yuko lazily got up from the sofa, walked to the door, unlocked it, and open it revealing an exhausted Minami. Yuko raised a brow at her confused, “What’s up?”

“Why are you not saying your good-bye to Kojima!?” Minami shouted as Yuko became surprised.

“Wait what? What are you saying?” Yuko looked at her in utter confusion.

“No one told you!? Kojima is leaving to Paris, and today is her flight!”

“WHAT!?”

“C’mon! You’ll still be able to catch her!”

Yuko rushed out f the house, and followed Minami. They had to take several train ride stop to the to the air port. Minami and Yuko were on their toes, repeating in their mind they wished the train would go any faster.

--    --    --    --

“Hey, you sure it’s fine not to see Yuko?” Mariko asked and gave a tight hug to Kojima.

Kojima shook her head, she let go of the hug and gave a sad smile. “She’ll try to stop me, and I can’t deal seeing her cry. I’m weak when I see her cry in front of me.”

“But she is someone you love isn’t she?” Sae asked, “You love her more than anyone so you have to let her see you leave.”

Mii-chan nodded in agreement, “And she totally is in love with you! And she’ll understand so…”

“It’s what she wanted.” Atsuko said to the others.

Kojima gave a small nod understanding what they mean, “I can’t face her though. I’m not as strong as her. Even I see her now, I would think about staying instead of leaving.” Everyone turned their head to the speaker, the speaker announce the flight Kojima was taking. A small sigh escape her lips, “It looks like I should get going now.” She hugged everyone once more. “Bye bye.” She gave waved, and put up a smile as everyone wave bye to her when she started walking off.

--    --    --    --

Yuko and Minami finally arrive out of breath. The three turned to look at them and gave a small frown.

“She just left.” Mariko murmured, and everyone look away from Yuko’s heartbroken expression.

“You… Got to be… kidding me!” Minami groaned and feel to the floor exhausted.

Tears started to build up in Yuko's eyes as she feel to the floor weeping with tears now running down her cheeks. Mii-chan quickly came over and pulled Yuko in a tight hug and petted her head. Yuko cried into Mii-chan shoulder, unbelieving that she missed Kojima. Sae patted Yuko on the back, while Mariko and Atsuko helped Minami to get on her feet. Everyone silently watched Yuko call Kojima’s name while she sobbed into Mii-chan shoulder. They wished they could comfort her more, but powerless as they were they only watched her sob.

The following day school was now in session. Everyone came into the classroom with their normal self, except for Yuko. She finally stopped crying, but her chest was heavily in pain. She couldn’t bear coming to school, but she thought when she come to school she would see Kojima. Setting her bag on the desk, and opening there was a pink envelope she never seen before. Taking it out, she look at the front to see who it was from, but it was blank. Opening it, there was a stack of folded papers, taking the content inside she unfolded the paper as her eyes grew wide, tears slowly building up. As the paper she held was Kojima’s handwriting.

Hey Yuko... Do you remember that time when we first met, and how I slapped you for suddenly touching me? I hated you for that, I only thought of you as a perverted squirrel, but when you kept trying and I finally gave up, I realized something… Something that only you honestly gave me, affection. I realized that I feel in love with you. And I couldn’t say it to you personally. And yet you continue keep your eyes on me and no else. Did you know the time we have spent together was something a thousand words cannot describe? They were precious memories that words cannot place. Do you remember that one day you save me, and I got angry at you? I wanted to apologize to you. I wanted to thank you and apologize to you a for giving you a hard time. I was really grateful that you save me, but… I don’t know why I couldn’t tell you my thanks. Maybe seeing you before I leave was too painful for me to bear. Pushing away from me made it only worse, and it was cliché, but I didn’t know any other way to face you.

I couldn’t face you because I knew you’ll stop me from leaving. I left because of my father had fallen ill, and he didn’t have much time left to live. I wanted to spend the last remain days he had left to live. It was hard for me to choose at first, but knowing that you’ll live and become strong without me, I chose to go to my father. Yuko, I’m sorry. I’m not strong as you, that’s why you’re always there defending me because you knew I was weak… I’m sorry. I wish I can become strong like you. I wish I saw you one last time before I leave. I wish we can go back to past together. I wish to say my thanks to you personally, but instead…


Yuko stared at the paper, as tears started to dripping onto the paper. Her hand gripped on the paper, leaving creases marks, and shut her eyes tightly as she couldn’t bear to read the paper any longer.

A thousand words that said Thank You as there were four extra words that said, I love you, Yuko.

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Aa, sorry that it isn't that great. ;; But, thank you guys again for everything you are the best. > w>
Now onward for me to comment to you authors out there! ... Slowly though. OTL. *goes into corner of shame* But it will be done!
sort of edit. OTL

@bochang-San : I know. I realize my mistake when I was in the car. Lol.
It's fix now. XP
Title: Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
Post by: bochang on May 06, 2012, 02:20:43 AM
first! will edit after read. :p


The birdcage is interesting!!!

I know from the very first time that the bird is Yuki! LOL
and i wonder why Yuki become enormous? hmmm will she turned into a human?
and Rena is sick?
I have this ominous feeling when i read about that..
i hope rena is okay.. i hope a great story awaits! LOL

and 1004 words.. is so sweet..  :ptam-cry:

Yuko! don't bang your head to the table!
i don't know if i should laughed or not when i read about that. LOL

KojiYuu.. TT.TT i hope there will be an epilogue. :D
and why 1004? if it's 1000 'thank you's and 3 words, i love you.
it'll be a 1003 right? :p

Epilogue please! I hope they'll meet again! TT.TT
Title: Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
Post by: Sieka on May 06, 2012, 07:50:32 AM
Ahahaha, don't just kill your main character off if you need them for the later parts, because that would be a big OMG FAIL ORZ moment. :lol:

I am using the dictionary, often even when I'm writing, I always have the webster's tab on mozilla. (*w *

Yuki never fails to look badass you know, its like that category was made for her! :lol:

You don't like root? Lol, tsk, Network love? :lol:

Nope, no can do, it has to be a real weapon, using a toy weapon won't have an effect after all. :roll:

Lol, then let Yuki control you! I'm liking where its going anyways. XD
Better way to place it? Hmm....I guess you can say that asking a girl whether she can cook can be a bit offensive and rude since girls are mostly expected to know how to cook.......erm. :sweatdrop: LOL! True, if I did get a glare like that I'd assume it that way. XD

Tsk, why? Are you Yuko type level? :3
Ehhhh.......how mean, Mint-chan...I want to keep a bit of some pride for myself...... :catglare:

Lol, if she lets you make her suffer, I doubt she'd do that though, Jurina's just a kid after all. :3

I really want a drunk Haruna, though lol, her thoughts would be in shambles I guess? But she's quite handy too........

There are times when you have to let go and forget about love too, even if you say that its true love that you feel, if its impossible to achieve, then you might as well just let go......if that love is truly for you, they'll come back or knock on your heart's doorstep. d (ow o

Tsk...I thought Yuki was sly to go to that point, I mean if she gets Rena drunk, she'll get a chance.......ehhh, I know Rena can dominate Yuki, she already has Yuki's heart in her hands, what more if she had Yuki down on the bed? :lol:

It fits perfectly for broken hearted people, ahahaha, their together in pain and sadness, but they'll also be together in happiness and love. I love it when my plot bunnies are going wild and I can write them, but its a real bother if I can't even use them. ;p

AHAHAHA! Omg, that might happen, don't just write a story like that in an essay, lol........ :lol: That would be a bit embarrassing too. Lol, I might as well write about locking her up with Rena in a room or a locker instead if that's what it takes..... :rofl:

Hohoho....many unimaginable stuff that is bad for kids.......
Tsk, Yuko-san is invading my thoughts......... 8)

True, but opposite personalities that clash together is quite fun to read to. :grin:

I too wonder what secret it was....... :huhuh

Yuki needs to get herself together and stop herself from kissing Rena again, like seriously, lol, but hmm... Gekikara might help Rena break the awkwardness.....depends huh? Such a mystery.....

You'll be fine? You sure? : o

Dang it, you aren't giving me any clues at all huh? I wonder how exactly will Rena regain it, through Geki? Or through Yuko? Or, through Yuki herself? Ahhhhhhhhhhh.......... :panic:

Different in a way? Either way, Gekikara and the voice in my fic have the same aim it seems, to cause some rampage and trouble. :lol:

Tsk, don't force Yuki to do anything that'll make the situation worse. XD

Lol, I don't think Yuki will act while Rena's conscious, unless Gekikara suddenly takes over and dang......lol I sense a split personality on Rena. 8)

Hey, she seems to be having fun with Jurina though, and yeah, first love never dies they say, and it hurts just remembering it! :lol:

You don't want a taste of a table throw? Aw...... D:
I am older than you, by months, just because I'm not older than you by a year, doesn't mean that your on the same age as me, if you do turn on the same age as me, then I'll let it slide, but you aren't, so I'm still technically older than you, just face the fact Mint-chan. :P


Review - Birdcage

Interesting........so Yuki is a blackbird here? Whom was a former princess that a witch abducted and cursed and held in prison, only that, Yuki escaped but got pursued by the witch's minion and got hurt in the process of escaping, lol.......and Rena here saved her when she was still ten. Nice development and first meeting, but lol, to have Yuki sleeping for a year long? I thought it was like she was cursed like Snow White, waiting for a prince's kiss, lolololol, I was expecting it to be honest. (I'm so silly.) I'm glad though that Yuki woke before Rena's parents have the time to take her out, and it seems that Yuki and Rena are good friends huh, but for Rena to understand Yuki? How mysterious, even Jurina understood her, only for a bit before it disappeared.........

I wonder why? Could it be that Rena and Yuki are connected to each other that's why Rena's able to understand her? I mean, if you do love someone, you'll be able to understand them no matter what. Though I think this is spelling out bad news to me when I read over that Rena's sick with something that's still not stated for.....I wonder what her sickness it, heart illness or something? :?

Mah, I wonder too why Yuki grew that big! Did she absorb Rena's sickness? Lol, now I'm having doubts, maybe Yuki is a princess of a magical kingdom......maybe, just maybe........ Though you know, I was expecting Rena to fall asleep on Yuki, too bad Yuki just had to disturb her before it happens......still, when I imagine it, aww, so cute...Rena falling asleep while snuggling on Yuki and Yuki uses her wings to wrap around Rena's body like a blanket........ahh dang, but she's a bird. A large one at that. :lol:

Nice story over all, very interesting, I can't wait to see the next part. :thumbsup


1004 Thank You

I've always known about Yuumei, I mean, her works are totally fantastic, and I seriously love her 1000 Words, its a nice take you know, this OS I mean. It started out a bit bitter on the side because we can see how Haruna is rejecting Yuko's help and acting all mean and ungrateful to her, we even get to see how their becoming distant from each other until to the point where there's no communication at all, just silence.

I have to say, I got a bit teary eyed when Haruna left and Yuko didn't get to see her, I mean why the heck did she freaking do that? She should have at least waited for a bit........so much drama. And the separation was so painful because they didn't even get to talk and clear things up in personal, only through a letter......

I feel for Yuko, it can't be helped that she cried so much over the letter, especially the I love you at the end. I know that Yuko's been waiting for those words to be said to her, but for them to come from a paper? Ouch.....so much pain. Saying goodbye through letters or emails is never good, its better to tell it personal, Haruna you better come back and make up for that! >:V


Thanks for the new story and the OS, they were lovely Mint-chan!
Take care of yourself btw. >:3
Title: Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
Post by: karomuwi on May 06, 2012, 04:52:34 PM
 :farofflook: That's sad... I can't pretend to be drunk. And no way~ I won't drink until I'm of legal age. I mean...I don't think I'll even like the smell of beer and such. Wine, well my parents allow me when I'm supervised. So yeah...
And you're welcome, Al-kun. ^^

Hmm~ My inner Yuki says to take advantage of Rena-sama.... :hiakhiakhiak: and since I'm focusing YukiRena in T.A.F my inner Yuki is saying things so childishly, instead of being a cold!  :lol:
And IF Rena-sama ever does take advantage of Yuki-san...  :luvluv1: :on bleed: I think you'll know how much blood I will lose. I mean...Even if they're not like kissing and such, I'll be having a nosebleed whenever there's a cute scene between those two. It's a condition I'm worried that might be the death of me, but I still don't try to fix it. :hiakhiakhiak:

Well, simple thanks for you might not let you realize how much I crave for you updates. So...I like telling you how much I feel with my limited amount of vocabulary. I mean...You and Sieka-san are the ones who really fueled up my YukiRena gauge.

Birdcage: Ooh~! A new fic!!! And it's still YukiRena!!! *squeals* And wow... Rena-sama is a princess~ *sighs* I LOVE IT!!! WOOHOO~! I'm so gonna crave more!!! argh!! why are you torturing me Al-kun by making me crave more of your fanfics?!?!?!?!  :angry: But I love you for that! ahahaha~

1004 Thank you: Wow...Haruna...Left. And she didn't even try to tell Yuko about it. Well...It's understandable that she won't be able to leave and take Yuko's cries. But...to not thank her after getting saved... -3-

Ano~ Al-kun...I'll re-edit this tomorrow! I need to sleep. Tehe~ :P
Title: Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
Post by: kahem on May 07, 2012, 09:45:26 AM
Chap6: wow Jurina is brave! I can't wait to see Gekikara
Birdcage: I like this one. Ravens are cool, a bit scary but cool.
1004: T_T it's sad but beautiful at the same time
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
Post by: altoids on May 07, 2012, 10:07:03 PM
Muhahahahaaaa! c< Minty-chan is going to kill me for leaking half of chapter 7. Tehehehee. ~ It wasn't even meant to be parts but now it is! >D That's what she get for letting me borrow her computer! >P
ALTOIDS IS GOING TO GET TO YOU, COMMENTERS AND AUTHORS, WHEN SHE GETS BACK! AND SHE, HERSELF WILL POST PART 2
AND FINISH GETTING ALL HER COMMENT TOGETHER AND REPLY TO YOU AUTHORS' STORY OUT THERE, 'KAY?
c:
It's not f-up if that what you guys thinks. It's my revenge on her! c< Minty-chan's friend decided to throw this at you guys just to piss Minty-chan off, that's why I'm posting this. /innocent smile
Fwaaaa ~ watching her dying from the wrath of her Gekikara Muse kill her, forcing her to type such gruesome, bloodplay, scene in "part 2"! c< Hahahaaaaa ~ ! It's so amusing. ( > u < )
Also... her snips... Are from "part 2" actually. So so so so... ~ Have fun with Part 1!

Oh! There's quite a lot of cuss words. If you don't really like them, turn back now. c:
YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!!

Chapter 7

“Jurina! Jurina!” Rena could only hear the buzz of the cell. “Oh no.” She quickly got up from her sofa, and ran out the door.

Running down the streets, she quickly dialed Yuko’s cell. Hold the phone to her ear, the phone rang four time, until a groggily voice answered. “Yello?”

“Yuko! I need your help. Jurina and Mayu are in trouble!”

“What!?”

Rena told Yuko the location where she assumed Jurina and Mayu were in.

“Okay, I’ll ask my boss to let me off. Bye!”

Oh god. Please tell me that I’ll make it in time! Rena panic as she continues to run down the street.

'Hahahaaa, what’s this ~ ? A weak heart I see. Heheheee.'  A voice in the back of Rena’s conscious giggled; however, Rena didn’t hear the giggle as her panic drowned the voice out.

-   -   -   -   -   -   -

“Great the stupid building cut off the signal!” Jurina muttered trying to redial again and again, but getting no signal.

Jurina and Mayu hid behind the large dumpster that was able to cover them. While Mayu tried to get the door, next to the dumpster, open. “It won’t budge.” Mayu complained softly, turning the doorknob clockwise and county clockwise.

“Let me do it.” Jurina quickly said in a low voice, replacing Mayu. She looked at the keyhole and cursed to herself. “Darn, it’s the tubular pin. I don’t know how to picklock that!”

“W-what are you serious? What do we do?” Mayu panicked.

“When worse come to worse we’re going to have to climb up that fence.” Mayu and Jurina turned to see the nine feet fence. And on the other side of that nine feet fence were flocks of pigeons cooing and staring at them, their head tilting side to side.

“I can’t climb up that!” Mayu shouted loudly as Jurina cupped her mouth, shushing her.

“Quiet! You’re going to have to climb that when we have no other –“ Jurina pulled Mayu down, forcing her to crouch. Jurina kept her hand over Mayu’s, and brought an index to her own lips. The quietly listen to their surroundings. As the sound of the men huffing, and complaining to each other, wondering where the two went. A trail of sweat ran down their face, their heart raced in their chest, they held their breath while they carefully listen to the men.

They footsteps slowly started to fade, as they both gave a relief sigh. When they stood straight up, the flock of pigeons suddenly flew away.

“Oh!” A sudden voice echoed. Jurina and Mayu froze in place scared to turn to face the voice. Crap! They both thought.

“Like they always say, when birds flies there’s someone.” Another voice said.

“Idiot! That not it goes!” Another voiced yelled, slapping the previous voice’s head.

“ARGH! What the hell was that for?” The slapped man replied annoyed.

“Would you two shut your god damn mouth!?” The middle man snapped at them, obviously furious with their stupidity. “We have business to take care of.”

The two apologized, “Sorry, boss.”

Jurina kept Mayu behind her as she slowly walked back whenever the three men took a step.

“Mayu…” Mayu directed her eyes from the men to Jurina, a droplet of sweat running down Jurina’s face, her teeth gritted tightly together with a deep frown. Her should was stiff, but she still held her guard up and carefully watch the three men while whispering to Mayu. “I’ll distract them. You need to climb as quickly as you can.” Another step back, the men were getting closer and close by the every second.

“Mayu, we don’t have much time. Quit hesitating and do it. Trust me.” Jurina growled under her teeth. Mayu look at Jurina then the fence. She gulped, before nodding. She saw Jurina give a weak smile, “Three more steps, you run to the fence.” Mayu nodded.

“Oi! What the fuck are you talking about?” They took a step, and the two girl took a step back.

One... Jurina and Mayu counted in their head.

“Why don’t you share it with us?” Another step.

Two…

“Bitches don’t ignore us!” The final step.

Three! Mayu turned around and ran to the fence. Smashing into it she quickly began to climb. Jurina started running towards them her fist held up.

One of the middle men, which is the boss, held his eyes on Mayu, “Hey! Stop you fu-” Catching him off guard, a heavy uppercut blow was dealt under his jaw, sending his head back, then a sudden elbow jab in his stomach,, forcing him to take several steps back as he crouch down and held his stomach in pain.

The other two looked at their boss in shock as Jurina quickly move to the next guy on her left as she threw a jab punch at the man chest, due to the height difference she wasn’t able to punch him at the face, but the punch was strong enough to push him back as he groan in pain. “Oh you fucken bitch.” The man growled furiously.

She took a step closer to him, her fist up protecting her face, and her arms folded with her elbow protecting her body, and leaving only a foot distance between him, using her body weight, she pivot her left feet, and turned her hip, she threw a punch at him dead center on the chest with her left, turned then  her hips counter clock wide to throw a second punch at him with her right hand, and goes back to her previous stance, as her left hand was about to punch him once more. The man caught sight of Jurina left hand going for the next attack, he quickly prepared for the jab on the chest from the left. But, catching him off guard with her false left jab, Jurina threw a right cross at him, pivoting her right feet that made her body turned, as her right arm shooting straight out as the there was a loud snap sound from the landing of her fist to the man’s chest.

The punch sent him back as he smacked hard into the concrete wall before he fell numbed on the floor.

Whoa. Didn’t think I still remember how to box. Jurina smirked please to remember she still had the boxing spirit inside of her. It has been three years since she last boxed or held her fist up at someone. She was surprise that she still remember the techniques after three years.

Mayu recently stopped climbing as she was watching Jurina taking down the second male. How amazed she was when she saw Jurina’s punches flow so smoothly and landed on the man. She quickly broke out her awe moment when she saw the last man coming at her from behind, “Jurina watch out!” Mayu shouted.

Jurina quickly turned around seeing the last man throwing a left punch. Quickly, she made her right foot go in front, avoiding the man’s punch as she armed stretch out, her left hand grabbing the man’s left arm from in the inside, then she turned her body where she would be facing the same direction as the man, while she still held onto the man’s left arm, as her right arm moved under the man’s left where her right shoulder is directly under the man’s armpit, and bending her knees as she tossed the man over her shoulder, throwing him on top the second man with a loud thump as the second man became even more in pain.

Ouch… He’s going to be sore, but now it’s not the time for that. Jurina quickly ran to the fence as Mayu was still climbing up, almost there. “Mayu hurry!” She quickly said as she climbed up.

“God fuck! You shit head hurry and get up!” The boss recovered, and forced his two pals to their feet by pulling from up.

The boss and the guy that was thrown started to run down the fence, but the other ran the opposite direction.

Jurina was able to climb to the other side first, as she climbed down a bit before jumping off. She looked up to see Mayu terrified on top of the fence. She looked at the men that were still running towards the fence. “Mayu hurry!” She rushed Mayu.

Mayu shook her head terrified, and held on the fence tightly as if she was hanging to it for dear life. “I can’t!”

Crap! Jurina cursed, biting her lowers lips. “Then jump down! I’ll catch you!”

“But -”

“Trust me will you?” Jurina extended her arms out ready to catch Mayu.

Mayu turned her head to see the men already climbing up the fencing. And shaking it while they climb, almost causing Mayu to lose her balance on top of the fence. Without anymore hesitation she closed her eyes and jumped off, as Jurina caught her, her arms around Mayu’s waist as the weight almost send Jurina falling back, but she caught her balance. “See, you can do it.” Jurina assured, Mayu held on Jurina tight her eyes still shut, she held on Jurina tightly, her body trembling as she still terrified, but she manage to give a small. “We got to hurry. They’re almost over the fence.” Jurina quickly said letting go of Mayu, she open her eyes open as she slowly recovering from her state, then Jurina grabbed Mayu’s wrist and ran for the exit.

Then suddenly the third man came from the other side, with a long metal pipe in his hand as he held it threateningly, forcing Jurina and Mayu go into a halt. Mayu turned around as they had the back against each other.

“Jurina…” Mayu squeaked.

Jurina turned her head slightly seeing the two month finally over the face, and slowly walking towards them, while the third did the same. Shit… I can’t fight like this! She couldn’t risk leaving Mayu and beat the single guy in their way from escaping, especially when he held a weapon. Jurina slowly moved to herself and Mayu towards the wall. Pushing Mayu into the wall where she would be between the wall and Jurina, her back facing her, guarding Mayu from the three men.

Mayu felt Jurina body trembling in fear as the men came closer. She looked at Jurina expression, her teeth gritting tightly together to hold back her trembling body, her hands were curled in a fist ready to attack if they dare came near to Mayu, as a glint of panic and fear were in her eyes. “Jurina, forget about me.” She whispered to her ears. Mayu knew that Jurina wanted to fight them off, or try to, but with her in the way she knew Jurina couldn’t leave her alone.

“I can’t do that!” Jurina huffed under her gritted teeth, pushing Mayu more against the wall when they came closer.

“C’mon here you fucken bitch!” The boss angrily said, grabbing Jurina by the arm, and pulled her away from Mayu.

“Jurina!”

Jurina struggled, trying to break the grip, she was about throw a kick, but the man that held her tossed her to the other side of the wall. Her shoulder smashing into the wall as she gave a loud winced of pain.

“Jurina!” Mayu was about the run to Jurina, but the man that was tossed earlier stopped Mayu from doing so and pinned her against the wall.

“Hey hey now. You don’t have to worry about her. It’s just me and you now.” He said snickering. “Yo, boss. I can do whatever I want to her right?”

“Yeah sure. I don’t give a fuck as long I get my fun.” The boss said with a smirk, as he had Jurina pinned down the arms. She thrashed her legs around, trying to kick him off, but when he punches her in the stomach, massive amount of pain shot through her body as she grumbled in pain. She wanted to curl and hold her stomach, but she couldn’t. Trembling under those arms, streaks of tears rolled down at the corner of her eyes from fear and pain.

Rena hurry! PLEASE!

“Let me go!” Mayu shouted trying to break free, trying to push him away. But he was much too strong for Mayu as the man lean in closer to Mayu, feeling his heavy breath against her ear. No! Someone help! Mayu cried in her mind, shutting her eyes from everything.

“Hey save me some for – AAAAARGH!” The man with the weapon screamed as there was loud sound clanked. The two other men stopped what they were doing, and gave a confused expression as the turned they head.

Jurina and Mayu tried to see what happen as well as their eye grew wide.

They two male gave a dumbfounded expression seeing their own buddy on the floor knocked unconscious; they even gave a more dumbfounded expression when they saw who knocked their friend down.

Rena! Jurina thought excitedly, finally their savior has come. Though it never struck to her how Rena was going to save them, but she believed in Rena that she would find a way to save them.

“Da fuck are you?” The man holding Mayu against the wall questioned Rena, with a brow quirked.

Rena slowly picked up the metal pipe that rested near her feet. “Let them go.” Rena demanded trying to stay calm as possible and not allowing her anger show.

“Ha! Who is the hell are you to command us, huh!?” The man challenged Rena, tossing Mayu aside towards to the boss. The boss gave a small sigh, and moved away from Jurina.

Jurina was about to make her escape, but the boss grabbed her by the hair, along with Mayu, as he then locked his arm around their neck in one arm, as they oxygen was slowly being cut away. The two girls were about to struggle in the boss’s arm for air until a revolver was suddenly pointed at Jurina’s head. Jurina began panic, almost about to burst into tears, she wanted to struggle free, but the sudden fear of that man pulling the trig made her body feel weak.

Please! Rena! Jurina begged, as she tried to hold herself from crying. Mayu too, felt exactly the same way as Jurina. She feared of the trig being pulled and shooting Jurina in the head. She couldn’t risk that happening. She tried her best to get oxygen through, but failed, as her lungs slowly started to pain.

“I told you to let them go.” Rena hand clenching tighter on the pipe.

“Hurry and get rid of her asshole.” The boss commanded his friend.

“Yeah, yeah, yeah. Better yet, how about teaching her a lesson in not to interrupt us?”  He snickers taking a step closer. He reached for something inside the pocket of his pants, as Rena became defensive and eye his hand, carefully watching his action. He pulled a knife out of his pocket, and gave a devious smile. “Kekekee... Lucky for you I didn’t bring my gun.”

He’s all talk... Rena complained, giving a small sigh. …Don’t think it’ll be too hard to knock him out… I hope.

Aaa. ~ Such a weak heart. So easy to control, hahaaaa. Let me have some fun ~ !’ The voice within Rena said with a sinister giggled.

What!? STOP! Rena tried to stop from whatever was happening, but she was too slow as something snapped inside of her.

There was a long silence...

Suddenly the air, the atmosphere, everything became silence. Silence like death. Like time has stopped. As the atmosphere started to grow heavy, not depressing, but as if a mad dog has appeared, a mad that couldn’t be controlled by anyone, a mad dog that would tear and eat someone without mercy. Everyone felt this crazy sudden change of atmosphere as everyone shuddered.

The man with the knife scrunched up his nose as if the atmosphere had no effect on him, but made him question instead. “Da fuck is going on? Huh…?” He looked down at his hand that held the knife, seeing it shaking frantically. “What the hell?”

A soft giggle echoed in the alley as everyone brought their attention to Rena.

What’s going on? Jurina questioned as stared at Rena, trying to see her clearly.

Rena continued to giggle, her giggled taunted him, making him furious as he gripped tighter on his weapon. “What you laughing about, huh!? I’ll show you bitch!” The man ran towards, thrusting his weapon at Rena, as Rena just stood there like a statue.

“Rena!” Jurina cried out.

to be continue :P
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
Post by: bochang on May 08, 2012, 02:12:32 AM
Eh?! So it's no al-san who post this? LOL
Whoevet you're, you're the greatest troll ever live. LOL
Can't wait what will happened to you when al-san look at this post. LOL

Kinda guilty reading this. :(
But.. The temptation..
Sorry al-san. I can't..
I'm read it! :3

I already get some hints about the next part which will caused the event at the start of ch 6. Hoho
Jurina is quite a fighter eh? And the guys who don't have balls using weapon to beat a harmless girl?
I want to kill them so badly.. :3

And I hope you get your revenge al-san. :p
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
Post by: Pwoper48 on May 08, 2012, 05:04:11 AM
So, the one who post it not al-san?
 :?
Or maybe al-san have something like gekikara in rena? Ah, never mind

And, have you done with your hardcore study, al-san? Hoho
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
Post by: Haruko on May 08, 2012, 05:54:07 AM
I need a second part for the kojiyuu fic!! T_T my kojiyuu
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
Post by: kahem on May 09, 2012, 09:40:31 AM
Gekikara is in da place aye!
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
Post by: altoids on May 10, 2012, 09:56:05 PM
@ everyone : asdk;aslkda;sld. Chapter 7 is not suppose to be in parts! *throws self at wall*
uugh.... why does this have to happen? -- forget it. so... part 2............... Hope you readers are fine with it. ;
Wrote it whenever I got the chance. Mostly during school lunch breaks, it's vivid since it's actually hard to type with all the noise.
But it's the only free time that is there. So much studying at home why is there not breaks!?
Three more days until test... Shrugs. stuDYING sucks! Dx Calling for a damn break on Saturday!
FREE SOME FROM STUDYING before insanity takes over. Sorry, sorry for the rant. You bros didn't need to read that. ;
Think I'm just going to separate comment replies with the story now. OTL

@ to that one chick ( you know who you are! ) : Going to kill..... Going to freaking kill...... *RAGE TO THE MAX*
CAN'T FREAKING BELIEVE THAT HAPPEN! I'LL FIND YOU ON THE WEEKEND, luck I didn't realize until after school! D<

@ bochang-san : Lol. xD

Eh? Really? o no I always thought Birdcage is boring. Honestly. ;;
aa, I can't really tell you. :"D That's a mystery to chapter 2...
Indeed Rena is... But what illness? I don't know... ~ o uo
Bad things always happen when someone is sick.... = w= ;;;
Eeh, hope it's great for you, bros. o xo ;

Something I wrote in two days. = x= ; I wished I made it a lot better though. *heavy sigh*
Laugh and feeling sorry for Yuko? ;
Yeah, I realized that. Thanks for the correction bro. = u=b
... Hnnn. Don't know if I should make another for it, honestly. I might make another where the meet again?
Don't know. lol. It depends on the mood. ;;

Ugh. I hate my friend for that, I DIDN'T THINK she was going to do that! She borrowed my laptop for college stuff, and I thought it was just that!
I need to hunt her down. And murder her because that was not awesome!

.... *siiiigh* It's fine. I'm over it now....
o nob .... It's all in the past Jurina box... I guess. Those guys were wuss in using their weapons? lol.
They would have probably take it out if Jurina and Mayu fought back more.
... don't worry...

I'M TOTALLY GETTING REVENEGE!

@ Sieka-nee :

LOL! xD That would totally be an EPIC FAIL. Eventually the main character will die someday. = w= Like all the way at the end so it won't be a fail! :U

Oh? hahaaa. I see. > w> I just keep my dictionary on my bookmark bar. o xo I always have too many tabs open so keep it up. OTL
Tab overload! Dx

Hahaaa. Guess so? xD Yuki fits in a lot of category bro. ;3

Root... is okay..... xD ;;; Network? Lol. That would be fitting if they met through the network. Hahaa. xD
We'll just live with..... Root or something. xD ;; Or go with dented circle. lol.

skjdfkls! </3 How cruel of you Sieka-nee! Lol. I'll probably flee before you even get me. o uo ; *should start now*

What!? OTL Yuki Muse is very tiring to handle. She takes so a lot of energy to try to fend her off. Well that Yuki's personality anyways.
.. True... = w= ; Though I wouldn't know how horrible cooking taste like. o xo Everyone at home can cook soo.... yeah. ;;
Eeh... Can you cook? o wo ;; ... duh. a simple glare says all. ~

I can be.... when I want to? Depends on the type of people I'm around or talking to, I can be at Yuko's level. o uo ;;;
lol. I just DON'T go running around touching breat. No yet? lol. B-but --You don't want to see me at that level. OTL
*snickers* You'll be fine. ~ Knowing else will know about it. xD

True... But, Jurina can be a little devil sometimes, so she'll find a way. = u= ;;;;

Maybe... Some other time there will be a drunk Haruna again. Just not now... o no
Her thoughts likely be in shambles if she was wasted. She WILL be hard to handle. She'll be worse than Yuko and jump all over that place. ;;;

Of course. Though you can always keep on trying, then you eventually realize it's impossible might as well give up then.
It would probably hurt to still try. ; Love is very random sometimes. = w= ;;; Siiiiiiigh. Complicated love...

Hahahaaaa. xD I can't tell you for sure if Yuki will or will not. It really depends on the mood and situation. ;P Getting someone drunk at a bad time is bery bad. ;;;
Oh yeah... Bro! xD Lol. I can't say anything about that because I have something in mind for JuriMayu prequel. o uo

True true. Forever alone buddies... *pat pat JuriMayu* Poor them. = w= ; They're going to help each other forget their old love... OR...
They can help each other get obtain their love one! o 3o ;
Wild plot bunnies! xD lol. Then you should write them down. It won't hurt, right? xD

It will likely happen because it just DID happen. ARGH! Was copying math notes then I just realize I was in lalala land, and end up writing my story with PEN! PEN!
OTL at least the teacher doesn't check our notes lol. I hate ripping paper out of notebooks since it's messy. xP
Bro... When you image the people who reads the essay. And my test is on Bio sooo... like...
For example the question will be : Tell about the function of homogeneous... Or something.
Me: *some how end up writing Yuki and Rena in bed together without realizing* ...........
Reader: Hnnnnn... //// It's a very very.... detailed explination ... /////// ......... BUT! It's wrong!
It would totally suck for the person who is a homophobic. o xo ;;;;

TOTALLY BAD for little kids! BUT you know what? I corrupt children so it's fine! >D
Hahahaaaa. xD Don't worry! Yuko is harmless if it's just thoughts. So allow her thoughts invade you!

Haha. Yeah. > w> It could clash together in a terrible way that it is unbalance, but then become balance afterwards! o:
Something like that. :9

Don't remember what we were even talking about when it came to the secrect! OTL

Hahahaaa. Yuki can't help it! Her muse runs wild for me so I can't do much about it. = w= ;;; the most is just smack her in the head.
Or Yuko jumps in and add more fuel to the fire. o no Geki... Hnnnn. Don't know? She might or might not, meeh, depends how Geki feels.

Yes, yes, I'll be fine. xD Three hours of sleep is actually good enough for me. IF I REALLY need to sleep I'll just pass out in the middle of the day or something.

Of course not. ~ Giving clues will be bad. o no Chapter 7 better much explains that. xD
But it's going to leave questions as well. *siiiiiiiiiiiigh*

Your Geki is pressuring! xD And very secretive! Lol. Gekikara is going to have to cause havoc eventually.
Like C'mon. It would not be Gekikara if she's not causing havoc! xD

Pssssh. I'm going to do that! Lol. Kidding. She'll reflect on her own actions later. o wo

.......... Bro. You may have just hit the spot about that. xD ;

It will die.... Eventually. Just very slowly... Don't worry Mayu will be there to tape it up!
Or fill it in. ; w;

Umm... OF COURSE NOT! Why would someone want to taste a table throw? > xo ;; It probably painful.
d;flksdk;flsdf! *huffs* Fine fine fine!
I'll still call you Sieka-nee even if I become the same age as you. lol. But still.... don't want to accept the fact. Hmph!

Lol. You expect too much about that. xD ;; It's totally not a Snow white story. It's like.... Something else!
There would be a hint about it in chapter 2 or 3?
Reason why Yuki slept for a year... I don't know. She was likely super exhausted. = w= After going through the torture with the witch.
hnnn. Really can't say it's love that helps them communicate. It's something else. ~ Rena mentioned it.... Though it might just be a childish thoughts. lol. Who knows. ;P
Her illness..... Another mystery answer I'll give you. = w=

Lol. Yuki absorbing it? Na. xD It's not that. There's a different reason. Magical kingdom? You're imagining a lot. o wo
Freak huge bird that Rena can ride. o xo Hnnnnn.... I wonder if Yuki will allow Rena to ride her....... Lol.
Probably asked Yuki Muse later. xD ;

Yuumei stuff are very inspiring. A very touching story. You read Knite right? <3 ... Can't always start story sappy and sweet. ;;
There times it need to start off bitter sometimes. </3

There are some people who can't face the person they love. Siiiiiiigh. Was really hard to decided whether to right that Yuko will make it in time or not.
It is.... Sometimes painful even writting it through a letter. Just not that painful I suppose.
...... o no Hnnnnnnnnnnn................
and thankies, bro. o uo
lkl;dkfsd, I am I am! </3

@ karomuwi-san : ... *pat pat* Because pretending to be drunk is bad. </3 You'll feel guilty if an accident happen when you were pretending to be drunk.
I don't think you should be drinking anyways. xP Alcohol is terrible in the first place. Eeeew... Beer! Dx Don't know how people actually hand drinking that. > A>
Oh.. Hahaa. I see. That's good I guess. So you don't get drunk. Wine is pretty good. just depends what flavor of wine your drinking.
o uob

Hahahaaa. xD Want Rena that badly aye? = u= Hahahaaaa. xD We'll at least she's not pulling a yandere. ~ It's adorable to see her childish. o uob

That's a big IF, bro. :"D Rena will someday.... Someday. Lol. Rin-chan don't lose so much blood that we need to call the ambulence. o xo ;
Well.... Then we better hope the ambulence are quick with the blood transfusion. ;; don't want you to go dying on us! Dx

Aa... I see. I know what you mean, but still. = w= ;; ... lol. I blame Sieka-nee for everything that has to do with YukiRena. ;P

Etto... ;;; I'm sorry about that? Good to know that you love it. o xo ;;
Honestly, I actually hated it in the past. Surprise I still have it burry under piles of other documents and not deleted. lol.

Kojipa got her reason. ; w;

Lol. It's fine, bro. xD ; Don't worry about fully responding, I don't mind. o xob


@ kahem-san : uugh. it's a hassle to deal with Geki.
Raven are, but the represent death. </3
o no ;;

@ Pwoper48-san : Enough reminder. OTL
I would be nice if I did have another personality. sigh.
I have enough of stuDYING. It so tiring! I want a break.
I'm actually still not done with my studying. Not until Monday, but.. I really do

@ Haruko-san : I'll think about making a second part... I'll think about it. o xo
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: altoids on May 10, 2012, 09:57:12 PM
WARNING : THE SCENE IS VERY GRUESOME. BLOODPLAY YOU CAN CALL IT? READ AT YOUR OWN RISK! 8U
IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE GORE.... WELL... THEN PRESS CTRL & F AND TYPE IN PRESENT. OR JUST DON'T READ IT!
THANKS BROS! o nob

Chapter 7 PART 2

Then there was a sound of bones breaking. Rena had swung the metal pipe at his ribs as the man was hit by it and was thrown to the wall. His body smashed painfully into the wall as he cried in pain, breaking several of his ribcage. His body shook as he slowly got to his feet, using the wall as his support. He coughed out blood as is it spilled to the floor in front of him. He stared the red fluid beneath his feet; his breath pattern became rigid as his vision becoming blurry.

An eerie giggled echoed the alley, how amusing it was for her when the man cried in pain. And yet, there was a hint of disappointment in her giggle. She then lifted the pipe and held it in both of her hands as she rested her cheek against the cool metal while she bit the bottom of her lips, giving a wide childish smile.

The man looked up at Rena, seeing her smile angered him, his blood started to boil as anger started to build, he gripped on the knife tighter and prepared to attack once more, “You son of a bitch!” He pushed himself off the wall, ignoring that pain that shot through his body, and darted for Rena.

Rena giggled once more before she swung the pipe like a bat, and hit him at the right side of his neck. A loud gruesome sound of bones snapping when the pipe made contact with his neck as he flew, blood spewing out of his mouth, the knifing flying out of his hand and landed near Rena’s feet. He fell to the floor with a thud, like a dead animal being tossed aside, as he lay there completely immobilized.

The boss’s and the two girls’ eyes grew wide in shock at the scene. The two girls felt a knot in their stomach; they had the urge to vomit by the gruesome sound and the smell of blood that invaded their nostril. They were not strong against the smell as their head became hazy. The horrid smell, sight, and sound they experienced, they wanted to block it out, but couldn’t. They knew they could simply close their eyes, blocking out the image, but their eyes would close. Their eye lids stayed wide open as if it were forcing them to witness the scene.

Stop! Please stop! Stop!’ The voice inside Rena’s mind cried out.

The current Rena ignored the cry as she slowly walked up the immobilized man, dragging the pipe on the floor making a strident scratching sound.

When she stood right in front of that man body, she looked down at him as she saw a hint of his chest moving. He was still alive and breathing, just barely. Another giggle escaped her lips before she lifted the pipe up, above her head, the tip pointing directly down at the skull.

No…. No… Don’t do it!

Ignoring the voice once more, she struck the pipe down into the skull, piercing through the skull and the brain. His skull smashed into pieces like glass, his brain becoming holey and squished, as blood splattered everywhere, staining the female’s lower body, and some on her face. The pool of blood started to form, as the air around them became heavier to breathe.

Jurina and Mayu stared horrified, forgetting the pain in their lungs, their breath taken away from them, as they couldn’t take their eyes away from the scene. The image of the pipe smashing into the man’s skull repeated in their head over and over like a broken tape recorder. And it wasn’t just the image, the blood that splattered every time the pipe smashed into the skull repeated in their mind. The knot in their stomach became stronger as they need to vomit, but the laughter. That lunatic person, they believe was Rena, stopped them from doing so. It’s like her insane laughter was some sort of curse that prevented them from vomiting, and only felt them this disgusting knot in their stomach.

They watched as Rena kicks the shattered skull around, and poke the brain with her pipe before jabbing it several times, causing more blood squirt out from every jab, while she giggle like a maniac. Rena found it so much fun, the smell, the sight, the sound, everything amused her. She started to kick the pool of blood around as if she was a child playing in a rain puddle, and splattering it all over the concrete floor as she continues to giggle.

The man that was knocked out, finally woken up, as he stared horrified at the lurid scene. “In God fuck what just happen?” The voice took Rena attention away from playing in the pool of blood, as she limply turned her head. A huge grin plastered on her face as if she found a new toy to play with, to break into pieces by her own two hands.

“Get the fuck out of here!” The boss shouted and tossed the two girls aside, uncaring about them as he now as he just wanted to save his own life. They landed with a thud, and in haled heavily, finally get their oxygen running through their lungs, but the knot in their stomach remains. They slowly sat up and moaned in pain. Jurina rubbed the back of her head and looked at the man as her eyes grew wide when the man brought up the gun, held it both in his hand and aimed for Rena’s chest; he tried to steady his trembling hand before firing.

Jurina scrambled to her feet and tried to stop the man. “NO! STOP!”

Jurina moved the man’s hand when he had pulled the trigger as the bullet went flying, and missed Rena’s chest, but slit her left arm when the bullet shot by and hit the wall instead.

Rena directed her eyes away from the man, and looked at the newly slit, seeing a droplet of blood trickling down her pale arm. She stared at it with a deadpan expression as she brought her opposite hand up to the droplet, and slide a finger up the trail of blood. When the trail has ended, she lifted her hand up to her lips, and licked off the blood, the copper taste dancing on her tongue, finding it rather sweet to her taste.

A guiltless smile creep formed on her lips as she wanted more of that sweet flavor. She slowly turned her head to the boss and eyed his revolver. Her eyes shined when she saw the gun, a different object for her to obtain more of that sweet taste she crave, and slowly made her way to the boss.

“Stay back! Stay back you fucken monster!” He shoved Jurina away, as she feel to the ground, he start shooting again, but every shot missed Rena, leaving merely more scratches on her arms or cheeks. Rena reach up and grab the gun, but when she saw the hands still curled around it, she gave a displeasing frown, dropping the pipe to the floor, as she brought up her now free hand and forcefully broke the finger away, snapping several of his finger in the process. The man howled in pain, as she started to giggle when she heard his howl and finally retrieving her new toy to play.

“Ne… Oji-san…” Rena said between her giggle as she examine the gun in awed. Please to have a new object in her hand for her to use.

The boss took a step back and stumble to the floor on his butt as he stared up at her appalled. He didn’t reply as he was too frightened to even speak, his own voice escaping from him. He tried to speak, but he only choked on his own voice when Rena lucid sweet eyes met his. Those eyes that appears to be innocent yet they clearly lust for blood.

Rena went down on her knees as she leaned closed to him, place both of her palms on the ground at the man’s side, as her mouth move close to his ears. “…Okkotteru ~ ?” She crooned.

The man screamed and tried to shuffle away from her, but was suddenly stopped when the gun was shoved into his mouth. “Annoying trash. ~” She hummed with a grin. Tears started rolling how the boss’s cheek, in his mind he begged for mercy, he begged to God to spare his life. Rena was about to pull the trigger, but then something came to her mind. Stopping her action, she pulled the gun out of his mouth and stared at him expressionlessly. She tilted her head, and looked down at the revolver as she opened the cylinder, seeing only a two bullets left. “Ne… Let play a game. ~” She said sweetly, she pushed the man down roughly to the floor, being flat on his back, before she sat on top of his stomach. “Let’s play Russian Roulette. ~”

The man eyes widen in fear as he stared up at her.

She spilled the empty bullets to on the floor before closing the cylinder. She then spun it, twice and allowed it to stop on its own as pulled the hammer.

CLICK!

She gave a sweet grin, “Let’s play, Oji-san ~ !” She pointed the gun directly at his right thigh of his leg, and pulled the trigger.

BANG!

“AAAAAAAAAAAARGH!” The man cried in agony. He tried to get up and hold his shot thigh, but Rena kept him pinned down by grabbing his throat as he squirmed under her grip. He tried to grab her and push her off; when he tried the revolver was immediately brought up to his skull as fear took over him. He believed the next chamber would empty, but he wondered, was it really empty? He wonders, but he didn’t want to take the chances. He gritted his teeth very tightly, trying to endure the torturous pain, and continue to beg to God to save him.

Rena hummed a sweet tone as she enjoys watching him suffer under her wrath. She gave a giggle, and brought the revolver pointing at his chest this time. His heart currently beat frantically hoping the chamber was empty. She pulled the hammer again. CLICK!

The man closed his eyes and begged to God repeatedly in his head. When she was about to pull the trigger, the man, that just woken up after being knocked unconscious, tackled Rena to the ground, removing her off of his boss.

“Fucken monster, stay away!” The man shout as wrestled with Rena, trying to keep her pinned down beneath him. Rena started laughed and thrashed under his arm; she managed to kick him aside, changing their position as Rena was now on top of him, and held the revolver to his skull. Without hesitation she pulled the trigger.

BANG!

The bullet shot through the man’s head as he was now lifeless, blood oozing out from his head as another pool of blood started to form.

“Hahaahaaaa.” She dropped the gun, and cupped the blood from the pool as she watched it seep between her fingers, spilling like sand in an hour glass, as it drizzled on top of the lifeless head, drizzling the man’s own blood on his own dead face.

No this is not me... This is not me! Stop… Just stop already…’ The voice whimpers in the back of Rena’s mind. Hoping that the current Rena would stop, but she didn’t.

Rena was so absorbed from the blood bath she created as she wanted more. She lust for more blood. She wanted to imbrue her hands with more blood. She wanted more of that sweet scent. She slowly turned her head back to other man, the last remaining man, as she saw him trying to escape by crawling away, his shot leg leaving a trail a blood behind me.

Getting up from her spot, she slowly walked her way to the man.

“RENA STOP! PLEASE STOP ALREADY! JUST STOP!”

Rena stopped in her tracks when the voice called her name. Turning to the voice she saw tears streaming down from Jurina’s eyes. She stared at her blankly and tilted her head.

"Jurina-chan ~ ! " Rena called her name, a wide grin creeping on her face as she walked over to Jurina. Jurina couldn't move, she was too terrified to move, she felt as if something had glued to her the ground while she stare into those familiar, and yet unfamiliar eyes. The figure leaned forward, and wiped the small splattered blood off her cheeks. But the hand only smeared it more, and left more blood print on Jurina’s cheek because of Rena’s bloody hands. “Hehehee, I missed you. ~ !” Jurina couldn’t break away the eye contact from Rena as she noticed Rena was leaning close to her face.

No...! Stop! Leave her alone!

Rena body stopped in her movement as her suddenly eyes grew wide. Jurina blinked several times, feeling Rena’s warm breathe as their lips were only several inches apart. She continues to stare into the eyes, finally recognizing the eyes she knew so long, those warm and sweet eyes she knew. The air around them finally felt normal, everything was becoming light once more, expect for the reek of massive blood spill that lingered around, but there was no long the berserk aura the other admitted.

“R-rena…?” She whispered, feeling like her breathe was taken away from her. She felt warm water dripping rolling down her cheeks as it wasn’t her own, they were Rena’s. Endless amount of tears dripped from the other girl’s eyes.

“I’m sorry… Jurina… I’m – I don’t know what… I’m --” Rena didn’t finished, she quickly moved away from Jurina and ran off. She couldn’t bear to see her own destruction. She couldn’t even face to see Jurina now. How much trauma she has caused for the two, especially Jurina, she couldn’t bear face her own actions. How was she going to face her? She wanted to get away; she wanted to drown herself in the sea of darkness where she didn’t have to face Jurina or anyone. Running down in a bloody mess, she held her head down as she ran passed Yuko and Yuki without knowing.

Yuki went into a halt, as Yuko continue running. Yuko somehow ran into Yuki when she was getting off her night shift work, as she told her the situation as Yuki decided to come along and help.

She turned to see the person that ran passed them, looking very familiar to her. Rena? She knitted her brow, unsure if it really was. Seeing the blood all over the person that ran passed by her, she couldn’t believe it would be Rena. Brushing the thought aside, she started to run again to follow Yuko. Then she notice Yuko was at a stop and facing into the alley terrified, blood completely lost from her face.  When Yuki saw what Yuko was seeing, she gave the same expression too.

Blood every, two body lifeless on the floor, a man crying in pain as he tried to crawl his way, and two girls curled up, their head burry in the knees trembling. “Mayu, Jurina!” Yuko ran towards the two, trying to avoid splashing her feet into the pool of blood. As Yuki scrunched up her nose from the smell of blood, as it made her somewhat dizzy. She wonders how Yuko was able to go pass it without feeling sick by the smell.

“H-help me…” The man groaned, stretching his hand up to Yuki begging for help.

Yuki furrowed her brow and face the man, “What happen here?” She demanded an answer from him rather than helping him.

“A-a m-monster… M-monster… Aaaaaaaaah!” The man didn’t answer Yuki, realizing he was traumatized from whatever had happen, as Yuki just ignored him and rush her way to the others.

Yuko held Jurina in a tight hug, brushing Jurina’s back, and shushing her while Jurina whimpers and shook under the embrace.

Yuko kneeled down in front of Mayu, and lightly petted her head. “Mayu…” Yuki worriedly called Mayu’s name. Before she knew, Mayu tossed herself on Yuki and buried her face in her chest as she sobbed and trembled. Yuki would often push Mayu away when she did that, but now it was different. Wrapping her arms around Mayu, she pulled her into an embrace while she continued to pet her head. She wasn’t so good with comforting someone, she wished she was now.

“I-I was s-s-so s-scared…” Mayu murmured between her tears.

“Sssh. Don’t speak.” Yuki calmly said, and continue to pet Mayu.

“R-rena…. R-ena… S-s-save… u-us… f-f-from t-those men…” Jurina tried to calm down, but she was having trouble breathing and speaking between her sniffles. She wiped the tears from her eyes and took a deep breath. “T-they… t-t-tried to... r-r-rape u-u-us…”

They? Yuki and Yuko both thought as they took a glimpse at the scene.

Rena did all this? Yuki asked herself, surprised and terrified at the scene a single person made.

Oh, no. Yuko panic, she helped Jurina up to her feet, but her feet were still wobbly, she used Yuko as support. “Yuki, we need to get them out of here.”

Yuki nodded in agreement. “Mayu, can you—Actually, never mind.” Without second thought Yuki lifted Mayu in a bridal style. The only life time chance Mayu would probably ever experience it from Yuki. Mayu kept face buried into Yuki and was still crying Mayu actually enjoyed the feeling deep down, but she was still traumatize about the scene as the enjoyment was easily brushed away. “Yuko, whose place, is closer?” Yuki turned to Yuko.

“Mariko’s.”

Yuki gave another nod, allowing Yuko to take the lead as she steadily moved Jurina with her. Jurina close her eyes trying to avoid seeing the sight, but the smell. She still could smell the blood everywhere, making her feel weaker, but she held on until they were out of the alley.

Yuki followed them, with Mayu in her arms, until she stopped when she heard a cry man.

“Please…. Help me…” He begged.

Yuki couldn’t help feel this anger building up inside of her, what he and his friends have done to Mayu and Jurina was reprehensible. Without hesitation, she ended up taking all her anger out by kicking the man in the ribs, hard enough to break a few ribs cages, as he cried in agony. “Better pray for the ambulance to save you. Better yet… Die in hell.” She spat the words to him coldly before following Yuko and Jurina out of the alley, and leaving the man to die.

-  - - - -

There was a knock on the door as Mariko came over, and opened up. Her brows were raised when she saw for the four. “What’s up?”

“Can we allow the two to rest here?” Yuko asked sound very worried.

Mariko was curious, but she didn’t argue and accepted their request. Yuko and Yuki explained what they saw, and what Jurina told them, in another room while Jurina and Mayu slept. Understanding the situation, Mariko allowed them to stay overnight. And from there on, Yuko and Yuki found out that Rena had encaged herself within her own room. They called her out several times, tried to persuade with food, and nothing worked. Yuki had the urge to just tear the door right there, but Yuko stopped her because of the bills they would have to pay. With an irritated sigh, Yuki didn’t tear down the door into shreds as they continue to try different tactics.

-   -   -   -   -   -   -

PRESENT

Yuko couldn’t help but give another heavy sigh as she didn’t want to bring back the past. “What reason do you need to know is what I need to ask first?”

“She is my precious friend in the past.”


Yuko gave a quizzical expression at Yuki’s statement. “What? I never met you when we were little.” She started feel a little irritated for some reason. Her hand curled into a fist, ready to punch Yuki at any moment.

“That’s because I moved before I met you likely.” Yuki notices Yuko’s hand curled into a fist as she decided to ignore it.

“Were…” Yuko took a deep breath, trying to calm her sudden irritation, “Were you… The person Rena waited for? Black…?”

Yuki raised a brow, confused at Yuko’s statement. “What?”

Suddenly, Yuko grabbed Yuki’s shirt by the collar and pushed her against the wall, sending a pain of shock through her spine, “Answer me! Were you Black?” Yuko teeth gritted together tightly as she was furious, as she couldn’t contain the irritation inside of her, why was she furious? She wonder that herself. She didn’t know why, when she recalled the past when she first met Rena, and saw pain in her eyes. Yet there were filled with hope, believing the person that Rena waited will come, but never once did, she just became furious. Furious that the person Rena waited for never came. Was that her answer? Yuko wonder as well.

“How do you know?” Yuki furrowed her brows, demanding from answer from Yuko instead of answering her question.

“Rena was the one that told me! Did you know she waited for YOU every day!? Never once she told me who Black was, she had high hopes that Black will send her something and she would then tell me then. Every day I see her staring at the mail box, whether shine or rain she still waited in front of it! She always had a big stupid smile of her face, but every time nothing came she took her depression and anger on someone else. Did you know!?” Yuko kept her anger, but tears started to blur her vision.

Yuki looked at Yuko’s eyes feeling all the guilt piled over her. She slowly shook her head as she never knew she caused Rena so much pain. “I’m… Sorry…” She mumbled bitterly, she didn’t know what else to say, as turned her head away.

“Don’t apologize to me… Apologize to her.” Yuko whisper irritatedly, letting go of her grip on Yuki, as she then wiped the tears away from her eyes. “She’s the one mourning.”

“…I know…”

There was complete silence between them, only the sound of Yuko sniffling echoed the hallways.

“But… One thing doesn’t clear up… No, two things, why doesn’t she remember me? And what do mean by the other Rena?” Yuki narrows her eyes at, hoping Yuko would full answer.

Yuko took another deep breath, her mind finally clear away, her irritation quickly vanish. She wiped the last remaining tears from the corner of her eyes, before she turned to face Yuki with a small frown. She hesitated for a moment wondering if Yuki should know or not. She gave a worried expression and fought against with her thoughts, until she finally decided to tell Yuki.

Her lips parted as she began to speak, “I can’t fully tell you what happen… But I can tell you what I saw.” Paused and saw Yuki giving an understanding nod.

“It was three years ago. Rena’s last year of high school. One day, a snowy day, she got into a fight with someone, who it was and reason I don’t know. I suddenly got a call from Rena, or I thought she called me, since she didn’t answer me when I spoke over the phone. I started hearing people screaming and giggling over the line. Then suddenly there was loud sound of wheels screeching then I lost connection. I immediately started searching for Rena.” She stared to grow silent. "And when I found her in the parking lot of her school.... She was bleeding to death." Yuko said painfully, recalling the dreadful memories, as she bit her lower lips. Her hand became into a tighter fist. “Blood everywhere… Snow soaked in blood. She was drench in blood herself, her head it was bleeding --the bleeding wouldn’t stop. It wouldn’t stop!”

She punched the wall behind her, “I was so useless when the ambulance came! I could only hope for the success of the surgery. So useless I was! I could merely watch, and patiently waited.” Her hand started quivering as guilt slowly piled on her when she couldn’t help Rena. “She was saved, just barely on time. The problem was she fell into a comatose state after the surgery. Day after day after day… She didn’t wake up. Months passed and she still hasn’t awakened, but she finally did late in the summer. She wasn’t the same though. Her eyes became softer, weaker, and fragile. It was as if the Rena I knew completely died in that even, although it was fine. As long she was a live it didn’t matter. She remembered me clearly, but when I mention Black. She didn’t recall who the person was; I didn’t want to tell her. I kept silence, and allow those memories to be completely forgotten so she can create new ones. Then I soon started to realize something was out of place after her discharge.”

She scrunched her nose, trying to call what happen. “Rena kept whimpering a voice inside her head, how it haunts her every day, how it kept telling her it lust for violence, for blood, for cries. The voice finally over whelmed her, and she suddenly became different. An insane aura radiated from her, it was as if a rapid vicious dog had been release, her eyes became the eyes I knew in the past, but… more vicious, more anger, I couldn’t believe it was her. It was as if her personality became split.”

She lifted her hand up, and touched her neck. “She tried to strangle me, but she managed to regain her mind before she suffocated me… From then on, the voice in Rena’s head would give her headaches, and take over her body and cause havoc. I manage to talk to the other Rena by beating her in a fight. And persuaded her, she promised to never appear again, or fight anyone, unless her heart grew weak. After that, the other Rena never appeared again as if she went into deep slumber.” Yuko finally finished as she scratched the back of her head.

She looked up at Yuki, who was utterly speechless and shocked. Yuko didn’t expected an answer from Yuki, she knew it was probably to sudden for her to absorb everything in her mind. She clasped her hand on Yuki’s shoulder. “Take your time… There’s no rush…” Yuko gave a small nod. “And can I trust you look over Rena for me? I need to get back to work before my salary gets cut and we lose the apartment.” She stared into Yuki’s eyes as Yuki gave a firm nod. “Good… If anything happens, call me. See you later.” Yuko started to walk away, but then stopped and turned to Yuki and giving her a soft smile. “Oh… Whatever your reason was, I’m sure you have a good reason.” Yuko turned back around and left the apartment.

Yuki stood there silently to herself. Her mind collected all the information Yuko told her. She imagined Rena in front of the mail box every day. Thinking about it, her heart started to feel like lead, but she didn’t shed tears. I’m sorry, Rena… I’m sorry. I… I…

-   -   -   -   -   -   -

There was yelling outside of Rena’s room earlier. She lifted her head up and tried to listen to outside, but the voice spoke kept speaking to her she couldn’t make out what they were saying, as the yelling finally stopped, and everything became silence.

 ‘Did you know she had been calling you?’ The voice wonders curiously, breaking the silence.

Rena furrowed her brows; she then heard the voice click her tongue before continuing. ‘She’s been calling over and over. Hehehe. ~ Can you not hear her voice? She desperately was trying to call you. Rena-chan! Rena-chan! Or better yet, Gekikara!’ The voice mimics the person she was talking about. ‘Hahahaaa, oh how cruel of you to forget.

“I don’t know who you’re talking about! I never forgot anyone!” Rena snapped at the voice.

The voice gave a bone chilling giggle causing Rena to shiver, ‘Did your memories split too? I thought you still remember. Heheheee, no matter….

“What do you mean? Split too!?”

 ‘Heheheee, how I about I give you a little refresher?’ Images started flashing into Rena’s mind, thousand of images flashing less than second. Rena shut her eyes tight; she held her head and curled into a tight ball, “Nngh!” Her head throbbed in pain, all these images, all these voices she heard in her head, everything was too much for her to handle she wanted it to stop. “S-stop!” She cried.

Gekikara! Don’t you dare forget!’ A familiar voice and scene replayed in her head.

Rena shot her eyes open, a sweat drop trickling down her forehead, as the images finally stopped, but those images, those voices, she knew what they were now.

“Yuki…” Rena whispered exhaustedly.

There was a loud knock on the door. “Rena? Rena, open up! What happen?” Yuki worried called on the other side of the door. She kept on knocking, hoping Rena would open.

“Yukirin…?” Rena eyes widen, finally realizing why that time was so familiar to her. She pushed herself off the bed and walked towards the door.

Hahahaaaa. ~ Now you remember some of it. Time for revenge. ~

“Wait! There’s still more question I --” Then her mind snapped.

Rena placed a hand the back of her neck, and rubbed them as if her neck was sore, before she rolled her head around as her bone gave a crackling sound. The knocked continues as Yuki also continues calling Rena. A wide grin creeps on her face as a giggled slip out of her lips.

Wait! Don’t hurt her!’ The voice cried, pleading to her other self.

“I’m not going to. ~ I just want to greet her first before anything else. ~” She said kindheartedly, setting her arms back to her side as she walked to the door and open it.

Yuki stared down at Rena, as she held her head down hiding her eyes from Yuki. She gave a relief smile seeing that she was fine. But the smile quickly changed into a worried frown as she felt something was different. “Ren -- ” She was cut off when Rena suddenly pushed Yuki against the wall, her hand pinning Yuki against the wall by her arms as pain shot through her back once more, and wince. “R-rena…?” She murmured painfully, her eyes moved down as they met Rena’s. Slowly her eyes grew wide when she saw them. They were different. They were completely different; they look like child’s eyes, begging for entertainment. They lust for havoc. "Who... Who are you?"

Rena ignored her question and snaked her arms around Yuki’s neck, pulling her into a hug. As her face lean close to Yuki’s ear.  “Tadaimaaaa ~ !” Rena hummed sweetly and giggled.

“Black ~ !”

To be Continue in Chapter 8

Lesson learned... never let a malicious person to borrow laptop. OTL
NEVER TYPE IN SCHOOL! AND ALMOST DONE GETTING ALL THE COMMENT TOGETHER FOR YOU AUTHORS OUT THERE! ; ww;
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: bochang on May 11, 2012, 01:29:59 AM
First!!! Uwahahaha!
Will edit this after read in my class.


Already in my class with a high speed internet connection~ UWAHAHAHA

IT's so INTENSE!! GRUESOME and BLOODY!
SO MUCH GORE!!! LOVE IT!! UWAHAHAHA

al-san! You're the best! LOL well sieka too.
you're both awesome!

I'm okay with some gore. since i used to read manga that have some gore and bloody scene. :D

i love it!! :D
LOVEITLOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!!! :D

idk what to comment. LOL
i just love it!

and Mayuyu.. trying to get an advantage eh? :p
but poor jurina.. she's still a kiddo and she's to saw such a gruesome scene in front of her eyes..
i'm pretty sure, she'd be traumatized..

and rena.. the accident.. what caused it? :3
tell me tell me tell me~

sorry but i'm kinda excited today. :p


@Muwi: I WIN~ #PROUD

@Sieka: Kinda lazy to post another, so i just edit this post hope you'll read it sieka-san(?)
hmmm, i didn't think about anything.. i mean both of you (al-san and you) great at writing angst or some gore scenes.
so i love it~ LOL
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: karomuwi on May 11, 2012, 02:56:32 AM
First!!! Uwahahaha!
Will edit this after read in my class.

no fair!! I wanted to be first, oppa! anyway, since I could only get second spot here at my room.... I shall reserve it. ahahaha. I'll re-edit once I come back from badminton practice.

Yeah... I don't really wanna get drunk and regret anything I did, since I always see those kind of regretting in the screen. LOL. Besides, I don't like beer anyway. I don't like the smell, since just getting a whiff of it makes my face scrunch in disgust. I don't understand how that can be the top three beverage in the world.  :smhid Or maybe I just have a picky tongue? :hiakhiakhiak:

Well...I would like to have a Yandere Rena-sama. That would be nice to read.  :lol: Well... Any kind of genre with Rena-sama is fine with me~ :bigdeal: but...A childish Rena-sama always wins, for me. It's just because she has that princess-aura surrounding her, making it adorable to read when she's childish!
If I ever do need an ambulance, then I'll just prepare some blood bags just in case. I can't die due to that!   :glasses: I still have several more fics to update, as well as write down! And I still need to see some more of your great works!

Hmm~ :glasses: Not all of it is due to Sieka-san. I started to think about the YukiRena pairing after watching MG 2 and reading ShibuyaDokiDoki-san's works. So...I'm blaming Shibuya-san and MG 2. :hiakhiakhiak:

It's a great thing that you didn't delete it. It would have been a waste, you know. ^^
And just because Kojipa has her reasons...What about Yuuchan?!  :on voodoo:
:bigdeal: Oh well~ Guess that the only way to make me feel better about the ending...is to make Haruna suffer in SoUL. Mwuhahahahahaha~  :ding: :kekeke:


And onto the comments!

Part One of Chapter Seven: To be honest...I was trolled here. XD I wanted to comment...but I wanted to wait for a while, since I was a bit busy. By the time I planned on writing a comment for the first part, you updated. LOL! Talk about coincidence! :hiakhiakhiak:

Anyway! I love how Gekikara-sama took over Rena-sama's body! It was so cool! It was really awesome at how you made Gekikara-sama took over, really! Her personality has really split into two, and it's like she's having war with herself! The unleashment of Gekikara-sama!!! :kneelbow: Al-kun! You're really a great author! Rena-sama couldn't even stop Gekikara-sama from taking over, since she was weak at the moment.

At first, I wanted Rena-sama to fight with them using her own skills, but unleashing Gekikara-sama was just...WOW *speechless* I know that I'm repeating my words over and over again, but I can't help it! I just love this chapter very much! Totally awesome!

Part Two: I have two MAIN words for this update.

GRUESOMELY AWESOME!!!

:mon beam: I LOVE IT! To the point that I just had to re-read it three times! No exaggerations, I swear!

And Russian Roulette? Wow, Al-kun. That's a fun game I enjoyed reading about! Maybe... :glasses: Hmm~ I should include that to make things interesting. Hmm~ Maybe not? :hiakhiakhiak: Who knows~ I don't even want to think about anything besides this update! Woohoo~

And thank god, Rena-sama was able to stop Gekikara-sama from hurting Jurina. That would totally make Rena-sama guilty afterwards, I'm sure. Since Rena-sama already felt guilty and such for doing such a wonderful bloodbath, if Jurina got hurt because of her...She's surely going to lose it. I don't want Rena-sama to go insane...yet. Haha.

And wow...Yuko getting mad at Yuki! *dances around* I totally love this fic!!!
I don't really understand why Yukirin never sent Rena-sama any mail, or even called.  :mon wind:
Rena-sama... *hic*  :mon whine: why didn't you send any to her, you Black Yukirin?!?!?!  :mon fire:
I knew that she can't send any messages, or even send back an SMS to others!
BUT to NOT send Rena-sama any?! ARGH!!!! :mon fire:

I'm very disappointed with you, Yukirin! Black! You selfish person!  :mon woo:
 :mon hanky: How could you do that to Rena-sama?
And then you wanted her to remember you?!  :mon uggh:

YUKI deserves to be forgotten AND replaced by Jurina!!! :mon mad:
I'm very disappointed with how Yukirin acted! Making Rena-sama wait and wait and wait!
And even making her have her personailities split into two!
 :mon yell: How you could you Yukirin?!
How could you make a promise to never forget each other?!
And you!!!  :gmon pissed: You never even sent her a mail!!!
A MAIL!!!
A MAIL, DAMMIT!!!! :mon fire:

*hics*

 :mon emo: My Rena-sama...  :mon waterworks: How could Yukirin do that to her?

*coughs* Anyway...I should stop my Rinage.  :mon ko: It's no good for me. I think that I actually have my blood pressure rising, because of this. *sigh* And I'm a low blood pressure type.  :mon exhaust:

Like what Yuko said to Yukirin...She had a good reason.
REASON.
If that certain reason isn't good enough, I just might wish for Rena to fall for Jurina! So, Yukirin! You better have a good damn reason!
Don't make me do my Rinage again! It's exhausting. :mon exhaust: and my vision is getting blurr because of being upset about YukiRena. :mon ko:

But then... :glasses: It's not Yukirin's fault.

 :mon geek: It's you, Al-kun! It's your fault for making Rena-sama's Gekikara(-sama)'s side come out in this fic.
So you should be the one I should be getting mad at.  :mon cweepy: Yeah! That's right!  :mon determined:
It should be YOU!
You didn't make Yukirin send Rena-sama a mail, that's why! So...it should be you I should be unleashing my rage on.
But then... I'm too exhausted. "mon exhaust:

So...you better feel grateful to Yukirin for enduring my rage, when it was you who should be receiving it.
Aish...This fic might be bad for my health.
Making me giddy and squeal out in offices.
Making me dream and actually have a nosebleed.
Then making me upset and give me high blood!

Aish...See, Al-kun? This is how your fic affects me.
It affects me to the max, that I even jump up and scream in anger inside my room.
I'm so lucky that I wasn't making my commenting in my father's office again.
That would just cause me to be kicked out. LOL

Anyway...I think that'll be my comments and raging.
I have no more energy left to type.
And most of my rage have been typed into the keyboard.

Anyways...Farewell, Al-kun. Thanks for the update... :mon exhaust:

Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: gekirena on May 11, 2012, 11:18:15 AM
this is the first time i had the courage to read something that gruesome  :cry: and i even finished it  :cry: :cry:

but it's Rena or should I say Gekikara so i won't mind having nightmares at night as long as Gekikara is the one that'll haunt me  :inlove: LMAO

i cant wait for the next update!!!! especially since Gekikara is onto Black~~~~

somehow i wish their fight will be a little bit sexy  :roll:  :lol:
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: Sieka on May 11, 2012, 03:50:35 PM
Of course the main character will die, unless their immortals, not like that would happen in reality though. :roll:

Hahaha, I have only a few tabs on, and I'm always on webster's whenever I have to check some word definitions, I can't just go around using words I know without verifying their true meaning, because sometimes, there are readers who are curious of the meanings of the word and would search it up. I can't just go around using words without knowing their meaning just because they sound good in the sentence.... :lol:

I think most categories are made especially for Yuki. She's sexy, silent, black, she can handle that fucking angst factor well because of her roles in dramas (Sakura Tegami was it and in Give Me Five!) :lol: I love exploring Yuki's character, just as much as Rena because of her role as Gekikara. :)

Let's just go with that freaking dented circle. :rofl:

You know I'm just teasing you~ (Maybe........... :roll: )

I'm fine if Yuki muse makes me write something like that because I'm oh so willing to make scenes where she cuddles up with Rena or something~ :lol: Hahaha, horrible cooking is equal to food poisoning dude. XD I can cook quite well you know. :P

M-Mah, I wouldn't want to be running around with a Yuko level up on my head............not that I initiate physical intimacy or anything, I'm quite awkward with hugging someone, whether it be a friend or not, unless we're close ahhh but that's still awkward. :sweatdrop:

Tch...its not fine you know. *looks away*

True, kids are quite devilish, young ones are fearsome, hahahaha...... :lol: :lol: :lol:

That Haruna would be freaking awesome, unless she does something SO SO unnecessary.... :smhid

True...not that I know true love anyways since I'm just basing it from the ideas I get from books, novels, anime and manga. Complicated love is complicated, I wonder why so many people still fall hard for it? :catglare:

Hahaha, getting Gekikara drunk is like unleashing hell. :lol: I wouldn't want to make someone as malevolent as her to get drunk. :lol: And yeah, Yuki seems to have the pride and manners not to go that far just to make Rena her's. :roll:

Of course the two of them can always help each other with finding love~ :lol: I just hope both Mayu and Jurina aren't dense or in denial.

Plot bunnies are cruel! I'm writing them though when I can while I throw some out of my mind........ :lol:

BWUAHAHAHA!! Epic lol. Epic mistake is epic. You're lucky your teachers doesn't check your notes, mine does, its a pain in the neck to tear them off, as you have said. Not like I write stories in my notebook, I just draw.....what I draw is out of the question though. :rofl:

Uehhh.....homophobics...I kind of dislike people like that, not that I cross paths with some of them, but that would be plainly hilarious you know if that really happened. :lol:

Corrupting people isn't what I live to do, but making people come to the YukiRena ship is what I write for. :cathappy:
Yuko-san is already knocking heavily in the doorstep of my mind, ahahah, damn, it'll be just in a matter of weeks or days until I decide to write something explicit, oh dang, someone stop Yuko-san! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Mhmm...but it takes a long while for opposites to be able to have a balanced relationship. :lol:

Depends on Gekikara huh......I wonder if Gekikara still likes Yuki....or maybe she hates her for not coming back? BLAH, who knows....

I seriously want to kick you to bed, but since this is the internet I can't do it...three hours of sleep is like living the day like a zombie! :catglare:

So many questions indeed, I seriously want to get back at you for making me question a lot.....how should I do that though... :lol:

Of course Gekikara needs to make trouble and havoc! She wouldn't be awesome if she didn't! (=A = )

The better if she reflects on it sooner. :lol:

And so I most likely did....... 8) I might as well thank anime for the idea. :lol:

First love never dies you know, no matter how much you fill it up with another memory of love, you'll still be able to remember who you fell in love with first. :lol:

Why won't you accept the bitter reality? Tsk...are you too bitter over me being a few months older than you? :rofl:

I know I shouldn't be expecting a Snow White fairy tale on Birdcage, not that I will after reading it. :p
Maybe...Yuki went to hibernating! :lol: Rena's a magical being! Yeah yeah............is that it? I wonder.... :lol:
Her illness is something I'm so dreadfully curious, not that it bothers me though because I like angst or tragedy.

Not my fault that I thought of that because there was a witch? It's only logical to think of that first before anything else dude. :lol: I think if its Rena, Yuki will allow her, she already did allow Rena to pet her right? :lol:

I've read it, its really interesting and Yuumei does so wonderfully, its an enchanting story, not the happy types, which I truly love about her as an artist, she just focus on the harder and sadder parts rather than the fairy tale happy ones.

I think its really painful to write you know, especially when you know you'll never meet, or you'll be leaving, but we both will never know because it seems........we never experienced it. :rofl:

Review - Ch. 7

Your friend is quite mischievous you know, as an author I know what you feel. I mean I'd be angry if someone messes up with my writing while its in progress and just post it up without my consent, I mean all the hard work to place all the words in and someone just goes in does something bad? Be it trolling or a prank I don't care, I'd be raging. :lol:

Hmm...Jurina's quite a fighter huh, she knows boxing too? That's nice, at least she has power and knows what to do to protect herself, too bad Mayu doesn't, which totally unbalances everything and makes a big problem for Jurina. Good thing Jurina was protecting her or else they'd be in a far more worse position.

Though I'm glad that Rena came just in the nick of time, hey, it's Gekikara who appeared and made a bloody massacre, killing one or two person off and injuring one in the process, although Rena did regain her control over her body it seems that Gekikara is still far more powerful than Rena in this case, but its better that Rena ran away and locked herself up than to let herself wander around in the streets, still....for the young ones to see that havoc? Lol, that's like inducing them in a nightmare, which I hope they won't suffer from a trauma or something.

And looks like Yuko explained a bit of the reason why, but I want to know the whole story, only that, its Rena who can only tell it, or Gekikara. Mah, at least Yuko seems to place her trust in Yuki, even though she knew that she was Black, the person that Rena had been waiting for a long time ago........I wonder if Gekikara can do the same.

......Rena remembers though, I wonder if the reunion would be happy? But heck! Gekikara's the first to surprise Yuki, she hugged her, but I feel like she's bound to steer some trouble here, I mean, is it that easy to forgive someone who left you and did not even send a single letter to you? I bet not. That unless Gekikara loves Black too much that she's willing to let it slide and have 'fun' in a different way. :lol:

Hope nothing bad happens to Yuki or else, Rena would feel guilty even more, and the same would go for Yuki too. I do think that Yuki feels already guilty for leaving Rena and she is the source after all, the reason why Gekikara takes her anger on people. :lol:

Make up for all the lost times Yuki! You better do something.

Thanks for the update Mint-chan~ :cathappy:
Good luck on your tests btw! :thumbsup

Oh before I forget........

al-san! You're the best! LOL well sieka too.
you're both awesome!

@bochang - Oppa, why do I feel like there's something weird with what you said........? I feel like there's some kind of hidden meaning or something in this line here..........or is just me?
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: kahem on May 11, 2012, 04:04:19 PM
Finally she remembered!!!
Yeah raven is death but death is kinda cool, right?
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: kurogumi on May 11, 2012, 04:08:07 PM
in my opinion... :P
Gekikara...actually love Jurina....(i hope so..lol)
and Rena Love Yuki, but the truth is...Rena also love Jurina (about 40% maybe,because 60% transfered to Geki :heart:)

or maybe...maybe...maybe...LOL XD.... :wub:

ah forget it... :banghead:
it is just my opinion... :banghead:

but thank for the update its so incredible good,especially when I'm stressed...

again Thank a lot :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup

Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
Post by: Pandah on May 12, 2012, 07:02:14 AM
lol i shouldnt even be here....so much assignments to do and here i am procrastinating !  8)

SEQUEL! cant wait for that  :D
lol mildly drunk...tipsy? hahah i dont ever want to be drunk :P i want to know what im actually doing  :P
haha my heart is tank enough to withstand the fast beating!  :lol:
ah yes so true.....if only it were that easy to forget it would save a lot of pain *nod nod* LOL another sequel!  :thumbup

Birdcage

this is really interesting! loving it  :twothumbs jurina could understand yuki but then she couldnt anymore? and rena can still understand her  :huhuh oh wow now thats odd ..and rena is really really sick  :( i wonder if yuki is gonna try save her life or something ...and OMG ITS A GINORMOUS YUKI! lol but the fluffiness ..anybody would want her to be their pillow if she was that soft and comfy  XD

1004 Thank You

kojiyuu kojiyuu~~~
 :bleed eyes: why must haruna be so tsundere and push yuko away! AND SHE LEFT WITHOUT SEEING YUKO! and yuko didnt make it in time :(
this..this just  :cry: yuko crying out harunas name...*starts to sing justin timberlakes cry me a river* (lol jk)
but this made me get all emotional *sniff* those four extra words....my heart clenched
THERE NEEDS TO BE A SEQUEL TO THIS!

Chapter 7

mayuyu why you so chicken in jumping over a fence?!
ooh so jurina knows how to box :O well at least she fended those bad guys off for a bit until rena arrived
GEKIKARA HAS BEEN RELEASED! EVERYBODY IS SCREWED!

*fist pump* YOSSHA! BLOOD AND GORE IS HERE! *cough*
i was totally grinning like made while reading this  8) i must be mad  :D LOL
i actually OOHED out loud and my brother was like wtf at me hahaha
THE BASHED UP SKULL! MY FAVOURITE! i imagined those sounds in my head....definitely gruesome indeed  :P russian roulette ...never thought she would actually play a little game like that with the boss  :lol: but he got lucky and lived in the end  :smhid

so yuko has told yuki about renas past and she sort of knows about yuki as well...hmm hmm bloody mess and then rena changed
SHE HAS REMEMBERED! BUT GEKIKARA HAS TAKEN OVER HER BODY ONCE AGAIN! what does she want to do to yuki or black now? is she planning on taking revenge for hurting her in the past? D:

thanks for the updates :)  :thumbsup *runs off to finish assignments*
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 )
Post by: altoids on June 04, 2012, 08:00:17 AM
@ everyone: ACK! Wow... It's almost been a month. Haaa, my bad?
This month was testing for more so, yeah.... ;;; And a lot of stuff happen too and that slowed me down. *shrug*
I blame two tease, well now there's a third tease, as well! I have been talk to over the month of May and they're the cause my slowness. > A> ;;
Ha! Kiddin. I don't really blame them though... Except for one person, and that's a certain Neesan. e ue ;;
But, I still manage to finish FM and Birdcage. :"D Although, I was finish with them a while back, just didn't want to post them.
Ahahaaa, refining my vocabulary and spelling crap. xP Sorry, that it took forever.
Major and important test are over now! Well, actually, I have finals next week, so I probably won't start working on fic until finals is over. ~
So another month of wait, possibly? e ne ;;;

Well, to make it up for the month gone. I'm updating both story, FM and Birdcage.
Aah, I was planning to update a third story, but I destroyed it and recreate it into something else.
Pairing wise for the third story. Who knows, maybe another YukiRena? MayuYuki? Wmatsui? Something else?
Who really knows except for two people. Haaa. o wo ;; Third story is pretty hard to write is all I'm saying.
It's fine. But very stressing to mind. :'x anyways. ~ enough of my babbling, onwards to comments le readers!

And thanks guys for actually reading this horrendous fic of mine! ; AAA; Both silent readers and commenters.
Hopefully, the month gone didn't kill it... Right? ;;;;

hnnnn. ~ Time to add more stuff to my replies to a few authors. How fun. ~ * u*

@ bochang-san: Hahaaa, you shoud stop reading my fic in class. If it's distracting for you. haaa.
But, at least you're on vacation now. ~

Whoa, easy there bro. ;; You really like gruesome and gory scenes huh? o uo
ahaa, thanks for such comment. o uo;b Really apperciate it dude. > w <

It's either your okay with gore. OR you just love gore! <3 ;;;

That's a lot of love, dude.. hahaaa. IT's a little weird when it's a horrendous fic. Seriously.

It's a half advantage, Mayu is trying to pull! xD ;
Anyone would be traumatize, except for babies maybe. :U Maybe.....

Psssh. not going to tell you bro. :"D
You're just going to have to wait. ~

LOL! You should have just post another to Sieka-nee. xD Hahahaaa.

@ Rin-chan: You two are so strange. = w= Not that I hate it though. ~ Got to love you two for being weird. ;P

Yeah. It be best not to. So... No drinking! But, sometimes being drunk isn't always too bad. Rather just drink enough that you still have your sanity. </3
Although, it is best not to drink anyways. :T Beer is disgusting. Same here. And makes me wonder why it even exist dude!
It's not likely a picky tongue. I have the same feeling as you do right now, Rin-chan. = w=b

Ugh, can't read the word "yandere" normally anymore. Thank to you three. > A> ; But, hahaaa. A yandere Rena would be interesting.
Though, it would likely fit Rena if she was Gekikara though. ~ Maybe that's just me. o uo ;
You're fine with any Rena, dude. Hahahaaa. xD ; Childish Rena? hnnn. Depends on the childish level though. ~
Hahaaaaa. I know what you mean there. But, there's always a limit where Rena can be childish. Any more childish would be unfitting. Maybe?

Jeez, bro. ;; Rather not let you die from blood lost either way. You're too adorable to lose! Dx
Take yourtime in writing dude. And don't pull off the same mistakes you did when you were writing them too. ;;
My work isn't great! It's horrendious to the max! > A> ;

Oh, is that so? hnnnn. :3 I see then. ~ Though, it looks like you read only some of Shi-chan's work before Sieka-nee gave you the link huh?
Hahaaaa. xD Though I'm guessing it's a complement (positive) blame and not a negative? :"D

Eeeh, I guess? I still hate Birdcage though. Especially the original one. Oh my god, it feels like idiot writing. = n= ;;;

Aaaah, Yuko will... umm...pull through! She's a strong girl. X': And Kojipa will come back for her... Maybe.

What!? Awwww, you're so mean to your Kojipa. </3 Making her suffer in your fic isn't going to help you know. ~

OH? Seriously? Hahaaaa. Well at least it saved you from having to post again, or edit your post, right? :"D

It really feels like you are exagerating. ;; It nothing too special you know. ;
aah, it would have been best if Rena has two split personality, no? Thought it would be interesting if she did.  o uo
It is kind of a war, or like a one on one fight against herself. I'm not a great author, dude!
A weak heart is a weak defense... I guess, right? </3

Ugh, the scene chould have been better, hoenstly. </3
but, um, good to know that you love it? ;; Wait, wha? read it three times over? ;;; eeeh....

Russian Roulette a fun game? Hell, it's a cruel game! Can't believe you enjoyed reading people playing Russian Roulette.
A cruel person you are. ~ ... Maybe you should. ~ Since it heat things up! >3

Honestly, my thoughts went blank. It could have been either Gekikara was going to hurt Jurina. Or tease her by kissing her.
I mean. what? Lol. Well, of course Rena would feel guilty. It's her own body after all. And she watching the scene go. o xo
... Talking about guilty for creating a scene that you call wonderful? What, how does that work? xD ;;;
Rena won't commit suicide for it. That's cliche. ~ But, she's not going to pull of a Geki from Sieka-nee's Chinmoku that's for sure.

You enjoy Yuko getting mad at Yuki? xD ;;;;;

Mmry, I can't tell you that dude. There's reason behind it and you maybe got the idea of it. ~
Dude. I think you maybe change you anger later once you read the reason.
Don't blame Yuki too much dude. ;; Yuki went through tough time more than Rena then you would expect. x':
..... = w= *pet pet*

That's a little harsh. Yuki being replaced by Jurina? </3 I don't think my heart can take it.
When the reason behind Yuki past was painful.
Though I won't tell you how painful. ~
*siiiiiiigh* x':

didn't think you'll get that much emotions of anger out of my fic. Hahaaa. My bad for increasing your blood pressure? </3

You and Sieka-nee would probably kill me if I didn't give a good reason. Hahaaa. xD ;;
Maybe if you rinage happen again, you should.. um... stop and take a break from typing.
Since it sounds really serious dude. ;;;

Yes yes, blame the author why don't ya? </3 I'm just typing whatever my YukiRena muses tells me to write.
And Gekikara muse is tiring you know. She such a hassle to contain in this fic. D:

Get mad at me, then I shall tease you. >3
Hey hey! I'm not always the one in control what I type! Yuki muse calls for a depressing reason! 8U

Aaah, then boor Yuki for taking the rage for me. She's getting back at me anyways. </3 She's beating the shit out of my mind.
Then stop reading if it is! xD ; I'm not forcing you to read bro.

Though, I can take half the blame for some stuff that happened to you?
Wait, what!? Rin-chan... you totally need to control yourself. = w=)/
Or take a breather when you feel that way then. ;;
Getting kicked out of your father's office because of your emotions isn't good. ;

Hopefully you didn't smash your keyboards. Hahaaaa. o wob

@ gekirena-san: oh, is that so? You shouldn't have read it if it was too much, bro. ;;
Hahahaaaa, oh my dude. xD ; But, seriously you shouldn't have read it if it was too much for you. ;
.... Hahaaa. Sorry, that it won't be though. o xo It'll be tragic. ~


@ Sieka-nee: If the main character is immortal then... That's a different story, bro.
Only if it was possible in reality, that would have been awesome! * u* And maybe boring as well. *shrugs*

And not like a gazillion tabs, like me? </3 Which slows the computer down. OTL
Eh? You always have that tab open? o Ao Just tab bookmark it. ~ = w=)/
Hahahaaaa. Well of course dude! XD It would sound really weird when you found out the meaning and it doesn't fit in the sentence. o AAo

If not most. Then likely all! Who knows really. ~ <33 Yuki is too damn good to not have more then 5 categories to place her under as.
Oh, yeah totally. She the person that brings angst to the story anyways! Hahahaa. = w=b
There's so much about Yuki than Rena honestly. Either that, it's just me that see it that way. Hahahaaa.
Although, it's about an even amount of characteristic you can get out of Yuki and Rena. >3

Yup.. Totally a dented circle. = w=b Because dented totally make more sense than anything else we came up with!

............ Ugh, you and your teasing. OTL ; uuuu;

Hahahaaa. I don't think your Yuki muse have to take over you to make you write such a scene. I think you would gadly do it yourself if that's the case! xD
Yeah.... Even if horrible cooking makes food look good. O Ao Though that has only been seen in anime. ~ Not in real life.
Unless! It is possible that a food looks so good taste so horrible. ;;;
At least it's good to know that you can cook well. = w=)/ Or you may end up killing yourself if you didn't know how.

B-b-but....! It's fun to be running around with a Yuko level! you know it's fun! > w>
well... you are not a very affectionate type of person. if your not... then... can I give you affection!? * u* Hahahaaa. xD

It's totally fine seeing you embarrassed! Not like anyone would know. Besides... I NEED TO GET ME REVENEGE! D<

Yes... Indeed young ones are fearsome. Very... fearsome. *take a glance at Rin-chan*

Okay, yeah. If A drunk Haruna does something unnecessary that won't be awesome. :T However! Yuko will be there to stop Haruna... Hopefully. = w= ;

Hahaaa. Well, books, novels, and stuff like that are closely, if not, very similar to love in everyday life that happens.
But, it can be off sometimes too. </3 Love is totally complicated. *shrug* Can't tell answer that it just happens.
It's not you choose to fall in love. It's almost like saying, "I'm going to be straight today." Yeah, like what the freak? 8l
It just so happens when someone falls in love, and when someone gets tired of being in love with that person.

Would be totally worried if there was a drunk Gekikara on the loose. xD ;; Black would probably be pissed off a hell if it had to do something about her. Hahahaa.
Or would you ~ ? Hnnnn. You can possibly do for the lawls. xD ; Yeah, Yuki really does. Very courteous of her. ~ o uo

hahaa, Yeah they can. In denial of being in love with each other that is! Hahahaa, I'm betting Mayu would be the first person to be in denial of being in love with someone else beside Yuki. ~
Jurina is probably just be confused. = w= ;


Your plot bunnies.... you need to know how to control them sometimes. hahaaa. xD ; You're killing your own bunnies by throwing them out of your mind! D:

Yes! thankfully he doesn't! MY god. = AAA= Not only a pain, but also icky too. Depending on your notebook. If it has the tear part then it's fine. ~
But if it's like a composition notebook it just icky straight out. 8l
And you teachers check them, really? o Ao doodles are at least more harmless then writing your fic in your notebook! Dx

Aah, it's life. Can't really blame homophobics. They're just who they are. </3 Would totally feel sorry if a homophobic does read it.
But, it's bio! It has to do with homogenes bro! Then again, it's not the same. ~

But, it's an easy job! Corrupting children is fun. ~ Hahahaaa. Kay kay. ~

Too late, Yuko is already taking over your mind. xP

Hnnn. yeah. = w=)/ Like us, I guess? Very much opposite of each other, I guess?

Three hours of sleep isn't like a living zombie! It's just pretty much a nap sadly. </3 Though, it's not all that bad when you're used to it. ~

......... you already have got pay back now anyways! >T

Nope... Indeed she wouldn't. At least one point in life Gekikara need to cause havoc, and that would anywhere! >3

Yuki totally is going to reflect on it. ~ o:

Anime gives a lot of heads up or when to expect something. hahahaa. xD ;

Really depends. ~ It can die. Then it can not. True you cannot cover it up. But, you can grow out of it.

Yes! And I'm still at it you know! About being few months older than me! 8U Just never mention it too often now. Hahahaa.

Hahahaaa. If you're reading the orginal Snow White, it's pretty dark then you expect. >3
like cinderella. ~ Oh my. How far the step sister will go to try to fit their feet into the slipper, which is not actually glass.
Hibernating? What the freak? hahahaaaa. xD It probably just super exhausting dude. ;P Hahahaaa. Rena isn't a magical creature.
She's a hundred percent human. xD ;; Her illness.... Is totally unknown. ~

Hahaaaa. Aah, guess I can't blame you for thinking that way then? ... True true. Who knows.. Rena could sleep on either form of Yuki. = w=b
If Yuki allows it. ~ Hur hur. ~

Her story are kind of really facts. It's on a side that no one really sees or can see. Her stuff are amazing no joke. * u*
She hits the dark reality side of the world than just fairy tale, happy or sad side.

True true..... = w=

Hey, can't blame me what for being mischievous! Raging and in the mood to murder someone. ~ :"D Or possibly through a table at them.

Box is really a good sport to know to defend yourself. ;3 Though boxing does have it downfalls to it. *shrug* Mayu... She a twig dude! Well not really.
She just a little weak. stereotypical people who are smartass, but weak. Then you have the average person that is strong. = w= ;;; *just realize the stereotype just now*
It's unbalance when it comes to those situation. When it not, it's kind of balance. Kind of. </3
Jurina would probably beat herself for not because about to protect Mayu. ;

Running around the streets after creating a massacre? Dude, that's totally bad. Rena has to be hunted down by her friends, and who know what may happen.
Because, Rena can't end up like Gekikara in your Chinmoku. </3 That will be terrible! HORRENDOUS!
Haaaaaa. ;;; Won't be surprised if the young ones get traumatized by such a scene. But they're strong people. </3 hopefully they wouldn't. ;;;

Gekikara knows everything... She knows... too much... e ue ~ *siiiiigh* Gekikara.... Her mind changes too much for me.
It's like doing a yes or no. with no maybe in there.

Hahahaaaa. Forgiving someone isn't so easy. all depends on the situation. And Fun ~ ? In what way of fun are we talking about Sieka-nee ~ ? ;3

*whistles, simply smile while looking away*

@ kahem-san: yup. o wob though it felt like her remember was pretty rushed. *Shrug*
Hnnn. Well, death is pretty scary because once your life ends it ends. x':
That's just my thoughts though. ~ You may think other wise. :3
Though the resemblance of a raven being death is pretty unique though.
Ravens are huge and scary, but they are very beautiful looking. ~ OR that's just me, haaaa. ;;;

@ kurogumi: hahaaa. I was thinking of that at first, but, then I went nay, as Gekikara was teasing Jurina.
Someday, I'll do something like that. ~ Maybe though. It's not a for sure. :3

don't head all dude! o Ao ;;
eeh, stress? How does reading help you realize stress!? o no
and I should be thanking you for reading, bro. xD

@ Pandah-san: hopefully, you are free now when I post this up. :3 If not... WORK HARD!
And don't procrastinate! >U It's bad for you!

>3 either in the JuriMayu sequel... OOOOOR, KojiYuu sequeal. or or... in both! Don't know yet. ~ :"D
Mmhmm. Tipsy, dude. ~ aah, true. It's really nice to know what you're doing. = w=b
Getting drunk is fine as long you're not to wasted, you know what I mean? Getting drunk is bad for the health after all. :T
Oh ho ho ho  ~? Is that so? Good tou know you won't get a heart attack then. > W> ;;;
Yup, it will save a whole lot of pain and sanity if that was an easy way to forget. *small sigh* = x=

Haaa, thanks for have interest Birdcage when it was a monstrous fic oringally. </3
Aah, there's a reason behind why Jurina was able understand Yuki then not. something Rena has what Jurina doesn't. o:
Rena illness... completely unknown for now. ~ ... Yuki can try? who knows. you shall she if there's a hint if she tries to save Rena or not.
Yes. ~ Feathers are soft, but, don't think anyone would want to sleep on Yuki because she can just bite someone head off. O AO ;;;;

Because Kojipa muse told me to make her a tsundere. D: It's painful to leave someone you love if you were to see them, y'know. </3
..... if you really sang timberlakes... i really would just try to shoot myself.... xD;;
Can't believe you actually mentions him too!
*pat pat* ;;;
Aah, I don't know if there will be a squeal. Depends on the mood? o xo

Because jumping over a nine feet fence is scary since anything can happen if you screw up. = w= ;;;
Oh my... You're another person that likes blood and gore, huh? o uo
Hahahaaaa. You may as well just be consider mad if you were seriously grinning! xD
What? Oh my god. xD Don't make yourself look silly in front of someone!
you're such a cruel person. ~ Finding a skull being bashed up as you favorite, no less imagining the sound. Oh my oh my. o wo ~
Russian Roulette always need to be played with the boss! It's to show herself who is boss! >3
Haa, was planning to kill him, but, I would thrown myself into a writers block if I did. ;;;

Who knows what Geki/Rena would do to Yuki. ~
Dude, you should have commented when you had the time. = w= ;; And not having to worry about your assignments.
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 )
Post by: altoids on June 04, 2012, 08:00:39 AM
Forgotten Memories Chapter 8

“Tadaimaaaa ~ !” Rena hummed sweetly and giggled. “Black ~ !”

That name it has been years since Yuki had heard that name, coming from her mouth. She felt relief that Rena would still call her that. The Rena that said her name was indeed the Rena she knew in the past, but, there was still something different. The atmosphere around Rena wasn’t calming; there was hate, anger, mixed with insanity that craved for bloodshed.

“Ne… Black,” Rena called, pulling back a little in order to see Yuki’s face as her hands moved around Yuki’s neck, ready to strangle her.

Rena? Yuki stared down at Rena’s eyes. They were filled with anger, even if they look innocent and lucid, there was definitely anger. Yuki knew she wanted to strangler her. And she didn’t mind. Rena had all the rights to strangle her, even kill her for that matter, whatever made Rena happy. Yuki couldn’t forgive herself for leaving Rena by herself.  She couldn’t forgive the person that stopped her from being close to Rena. But, something was strange in Rena’s eyes, the anger it looked so distance. It didn’t seem like the anger were directly at her. Why?

Rena was about to strangle her, but then something stopped her, someone was forcefully stopping her hands. ‘Please! Don’t hurt her! Please…’ The other Rena begged, using most of her will power to stop her other self from strangling Yuki. Heheheee, do you still love her? The currently Rena, or better yet Gekikara, replied back sounding rather annoyed. And after what she done!? She left us! Do you know how much we had suffered?

Yes, but I still love her! She still remembered us! She never forgot us! She tried so hard to call us back and yet I didn’t realize it! Please, don’t hurt her! I still love her even what she did to us!’ Rena felt her will weakening against her other self, but then she felt the strength that she fought against suddenly eased up. ‘Geki…?’ She called her other self by nickname Yuki gave them.

Heheheeee. So I’m given that name? Hahaaa. ~ Gekikara mentally laughed insanely, her laughter sounding rather bitter.
 
Yuki stayed silent, her voice escaping her. She wanted to speak when she saw Rena going into another world. Yet, she could find her voice. She couldn’t muster the courage to speak. She was still as a statue as she stared into those eyes, finally coming back to reality, as they were staring straight at Yuki with full attention now. The hands around Yuki’s neck moved to fiddle with her hair, Rena’s finger tangling in Yuki’s hair. As Yuki blink in surprised, wonder why Rena didn’t strangle her as she expected.

“Are you mad ~ ?” Rena asked with a grin. She then titled her head to the side when she didn’t get a response. She gave a disappointing pout, “Did you miss me?” There was still no response for the other. “Why are you so quiet, Black? Are you mad?” She asked a little more serious.

Yuki didn’t know how to react. She didn’t know what to say. Her mind was still in confusion why Rena didn’t strangle her. She didn’t know whether to feel relief, seeing that she may have been forgiven or feeling even guiltier that Rena forgiven her so easily.

“Yukirin ~ ?” Rena called her other name sweetly. Her eyes suddenly became wide, bewildered, when Yuki wrapped her arms Rena’s waist, pulling her in a tight hug, and her face buried in Rena’s neck. Rena could have sworn her heart skipped a beat, she blinked several time before returning the hug. “What’s wrong Yukirin ~ ? You’ve become soft…” Another giggle escaped Rena’s lips, “Heheee, what happen to the Black I know ~ ?” Rena felt like she was hugging a small and frail child in her arms, if she was to hug Yuki tightly she might just break her. “Were you that lonely?”

“I… I’m sorry.” Yuki muttered, finding the courage to speak, even if it was just apologizing to her. “I’m sorry I left you. I’m sorry for breaking your hope…” She kept apologizing, she knew apologizing wouldn’t lift away her guilt, the pain she have inflicted to Rena, but she wanted her words to be known. She wanted Rena to know the guilt she had when she gave Rena pain, but she couldn’t physically express her guilt. She couldn’t shed a single tear; she only could express them through words hoping they would go through.

Yuki hugged Rena tighter. “Yukirin you’re hurting me. Hahahaaaa. You’ve really grown too soft… Do you hate me ~ ?” Rena said teasing Yuki a little.

Rena got a silent reply when Yuki slowly shook her head, keeping her faced buried in her neck. “I… should be the one asking you that…” She heard Yuki whisper.

Yuki…

Rena hummed silently, continuing to tangle Yuki’s hair around her finger. She was silently thinking to herself wondering if she was mad at Yuki, no. She wasn’t furious at Yuki. Like her other self stated the current Rena that is controlling the body, Gekikara, stilled loved Yuki to the bottom of her heart. Honestly, she couldn’t find the heart to actually strangle Yuki, she forced her body to. Gekikara was the reminiscence of anger and sorrow that was build up before the accident, before their personality split.

That’s why she existed. That’s why their personality was split. Rena wanted to banish the pain and sorrow as it was all piled onto Gekikara. Gekikara didn’t want to kill Yuki; she wanted to test Rena to see if she still loved Yuki after regaining the memories and pain in the past. That’s why Rena had the will power to stop Gekikara from killing her. Of course, Rena didn’t know that Gekikara was testing her. Rena really thought Gekikara hated Yuki, and wanted to her to feel the pain that they felt.

“Hnnn…. Gomen ne, Yukirin…” Rena whispered.

Yuki pulled away and look at Rena’s face, worried and curious why Rena was apologizing. “Why are you --” Then she felt a sudden painful shock shooting through her stomach, seeing Rena just had punched her, dropping to her knees she held her stomach. “R-rena…?” She muttered painfully and looked up, seeing Rena giving a small frown.

GEKI!’ Rena hissed angrily at her other self.

Rena ignored her other self and looked down at Yuki. “Gomen ne, Yuki. Please don’t hate me… I need to finish some business…” Rena murmured before running out of the apartment.

Where are we going?’ Rena demanded for an answer.

To location of the answer you wished to know. Heheheee, the reason why we are two. ~

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“W-wait…” Yuki groaned as she cursed under her breath. Were her punches always that strong? She asked herself. This is not good. She managed to pull herself back up to her feet, using the wall as her support. She waited for a while until she recovered and was able to move with ease before she ran out of the house. She pulled out her cell and dialed Yuko. Two rings until someone picked up the line, “YU --”

“Ssssh. I know.” Yuko whispered through the line. “It’s her, huh?”

“Where are you right now?”

“The train station.”

“Got it.” Yuki started to change her course and ran towards the train station.

“It looks like she taking the train back to her home. What happen?”

 “I have no clue. She said she needed to finish some business, do you have any idea?”
 
“None…  Shoot, I lost sight of her, I’ll call you --” Then the called ended.

“Yuko? Yuko!” Yuki called repeatedly as there was no response. Shit, Yuko, you better be alright. She thought to herself and slipped the phone into her pocket as she quickens her speed.

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Yuko gave a stern glare into Rena’s eyes, her back pressed against the wall as she watched Rena crushing her cellphone with her bare hands.

“Yuko-san…~” Rena said in a cheery, yet annoyed, voiced. She watched as the cellphone pieces fall to the floor. “Heheheee. I don’t like it… When you snoop around.” She started to giggle when Yuko furrowed her brows.

Yuko ignored Rena’s comment as she kept her eye contact with Rena, showing her that she wasn’t scared of her. “What’s your purpose for being here?” Yuko asked angrily, “What happen to the other Rena?”

Rena gave another giggle, “I can’t answer. ~ Rena…” She gave a wide grin, “Hahahaa, she’s fine.”

“If she’s fine… Then I don’t care, but at least tell me what you’re going to do to her body. Are you planning to create havoc again?”

Rena gave a small shrug, and glanced around, seeing the by passer giving them glances. She then turned back to look at Yuko, “Do you want to watch to know? You can only watch though, if you dare interrupt I won’t hesitate to break the other me.” She saw Yuko giving a small nod, before she turned around and walked to the platform, and then she stopped again. “Oh, don’t try to call Yukirin…” She said bitterly, “If she manages to find us… Don’t let her interrupt no matter what.” There was no reply from Yuko, but she knew Yuko would agree if it was to keep the other Rena safe.

Yuko glanced at the clock on the wall. Five twenty three p.m.

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Yuki finally got the train station as she ran down to the platform. She breathed heavily while her eyes scanned the area for Yuko or Rena, but they weren’t around. She jogged around the platform, going against the currents of the people. Where are they? She stopped when she kicked something that sounded like metal scrapping against the tile floors. Looking down at her feet there were broken phone pieces, kneeling down she picked up the cover as it looked familiar to her.

She examined it closely as there were words carved on it. “NyanNyan x Yuu.” This is definitely Yuko’s. Yuki said to herself, dropping the piece back down before standing back up. Great, I have to wait for the train huh? She lightly bit her lowers lips. Where did Yuko say she was heading… Back home… Right… For what? She started thinking, her fingers hold her chin, and then something snapped into her mind. Recalling about the past, the final day where Rena was trying to tell Yuko something, but was never able to. School! Can it be school? No… It can’t be. There’s no reason for her to go. She fought against her thoughts, rethinking the locations Rena might be heading. It won’t hurt to try. She glanced up at the clock. Five thirty five. That’s when the teachers are almost about to go home…

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“Where are we going?” Yuko demanded while she followed Rena from behind.

“You’ll know soon enough.” Rena quietly giggled.

Yuko glanced around her surroundings, how familiar to look for her. It has been a long time since she visited home. The trees were already showing spring season, there were many buds in the tree that were soon about to bloom. She missed her home actually; she never knew why she never decided to head back. She made a mental note to herself to come back here with Haruna when the flower blooms.

Taking her mind off of her plans, she kept on glancing around. They were walking into a school parking lot as there were several cards still around, about three were still around. Wait… Isn’t this Rena’s elementary school? Why are we going here? Yuko asked herself curiously, then her eyes widen in shock. WAIT! This is where I found Rena that day! Don’t tell me –

“Wait here. “ Rena commanded, interrupting Yuko’s thoughts, as they both stopped in their place, “They’re coming…”

Yuko noticed there was small growl coming from Rena. They? Who are they? Yuko gave a quizzical expression, and looked over Rena’s shoulders, seeing two males walking down to their car while they talked to each other. One of them looked was a man in his late fifty perhaps, a little chunky, thin light gray hair, and wore a brown suite. And the other was in his early forty, tall, rather thin, possibly well built, dark brown hair that was pulled back, and wore a black suite. Who are they? Yuko watched was Rena took several more steps as the two took notice of Rena.

Ne… Why are we here?’ The other Rena asked worryingly.

The currently Rena ignored the question and giggled as the two men raised their brows at her. “Do you remember me ~ ?” She asked sweetly at them with a small grin, her head cocked to the side.

“You…” The man in the black suite muttered.

“I don’t remember you. Do you remember her, Mr. Rekishi?” The man in his late fifty replied, and glanced at the man in the black suite, who seems to be address as Rekishi.

“Yes… Mr. Principle. It’s that Kashiwagi’s friend.” Rekishi said defensively.

“Oh!” The principle finally remembers, then his expression darken. “I thought I got rid of her!”

“You what!?” Mr. Rekishi turned to look at the Principle surprise.

“Hmph! It would be best wouldn’t it? Since she knew that secret after all, I thought I would be best to kill her.” The principle gave a disappointed sigh. “I should have checked to see if you were dead when I ran you over.”

WHAT!? Geki what is he saying?’ Rena asked almost feeling speechless.

Yuko stared bizarre, unbelieving what she just heard. Then that sound of the car screeching… It can’t be. It couldn’t be… She started to feel her anger building up, her fist clench into a tight ball, as she took a step, but immediately halted when her eyes made contact with Rena. They stared at each other in silence as Rena could see the anger rising inside of Yuko. Rena narrowed her eyes at Yuko, and mentally told her to back down. Yuko hesitated for a moment while she continues to stare at Rena, her teeth clenched against each other before she took a step back, but her fists were still curled.

When Yuko had back away Rena redirected her eyes at them. “Heheheeee, are you mad that I am not?” She said teasingly as she saw Rekishi stiffen. “I must thank you… Hahaaaaa, if that incident never happen I might still be suffering right now. Heheheeee, then again… I hate you. I hate you for breaking us! I hate you the most Principle. I WILL DESTORY YOU ALL!” She laughed before running towards the Principle.

“Stay back!” Rekishi shouted as he stood in front of the principle and blocked against Rena’s full punch with his arms up, blocking her attack.

Rena pulled away, and threw her hand, attack him from a different direction. He dodged the attack, and returns the attack by punching Rena in the face as it hits. Rena stumbled back from the punch as she felt something warm on her lips. She brushed the blood off her lips with the back of her hand, and looked down at it. She giggled and looked up at the man before she gave a grin, and charged at him again.

Tell me! What’s going on!?’ The other Rena demanded in a panic voice, she knew she shouldn’t be interrupting Rena’s fight. But she needed to know the answer. She wanted confirmation. She didn’t want to left the dark, clueless about everything. She winced at the pain her physical body was getting, wishing the current Rena could dodge the attacks rather than taking them.

Hahahaaaa, that Principle… Rena dodged Rekishi attack, and punched him in the stomach, as he tottered backwards, a hand hold his stomach. We were picking a fight one day, and the principle was there. So we went berserk.... She was tackled to the floor, and was punched by the man that was on top of her. He punched about twice before Rena pushed him off, changing their position as she landed several punches at his face, bruising them up. As she was then kicked off, as the quickly both scrambled to their feet. Heheheheee, it was all set up actually -- The current Rena hated this talking and fighting as the talking was taking her concentration away from enjoying the fight. She ran the man, and punched him, aiming for the temples, but the man blocked it with his arm and tottered sideways. We knew, but we still took the chances. We wanted him DEAD!

Yuko watched them, feeling completely useless once more. She wanted to help Rena. She wanted to beat the shit out the man. But she worried for the other Rena; she couldn’t have her best friend be torn apart again. Her fist clenched tighter her knuckles growing pale. Beat the shit out him! Her eyes then scanned around for the other man as he was nowhere in sight. Where the hell is he!?

We tried to kill him? But what happen?’ Rena, not Gekikara, suddenly cried in pain, feeling the pain of being punched at the side of the jaw.

Hahahaaaa. We were careless ~ ! We lost track of the Principle and he ran us over with his car. She tasted the coppery and salty liquid in her mouth, the taste of her own blood and sweat mixing in. And we feel into a coma... After that I don’t know what happen. I only remember you wanted to forget the pain, so you somehow forcefully split our mind. She gave an eerie giggle, find great amusement in the fight. “Ne, let’s settle this.” She limply cocked her to the right as she stared at the man. Now… I want revenge. Hahahaaa, but this man is in the WAY!

He was breathing heavily, but didn’t seem to grow weaker as he kept his hands up as he took a deep breath. “Haaa… That should have been done long ago.”

They ran at each other as Rekishi grabbed Rena and tossed her into the road before he tried to stomp on her.  She dodged his stomp and kicked the back of his leg, causing him to fall as she got on top of him and threw punches at his face.

Yuko heard someone coming as she turned around seeing Yuki. “Yuki…” When Yuki took notice of Yuko, she started to run faster, and then suddenly Yuki expression darkens when she saw what was happening. Her anger become like Yuko, her fist clenched, she ran as if she was about to jump into the fight. Before Yuki can, Yuko grabbed her as she started to struggle, trying to break free.

“YUKO LET ME GO!” Yuki demanded, struggling in Yuko’s arms, Yuko held her with her arms around Yuki’s body.

“NO! If I do she’ll break Rena!” Yuko kept her arms locked around Yuki with all her might.

“LET ME GO! That man, I know seen that man once! He was with the damn principle!” Yuki growled as she tried to throw Yuko off, while she watched Rena and Rekishi beating each other to death as Rena took no notice of Yuki presence, and only concentrated the fight. She felt anger rising high inside of her, even if she seen that man once and only briefly, she recognized him. No doubt it was him. Even if years has flown by one images can’t change so easily, well not Rekishi, he still look almost exactly the same when she last saw him.

“I can’t let you! No matter what! I know how you feel! But I can’t! Not when Rena life is at stake!”

Suddenly, Yuki stopped struggling and so did Yuko, when they heard the sound of a car engine roaring loudly, and with screeched sound coming right after. Their eyes directed to the screech, seeing a car speeding towards Rena and Rekishi on the floor, still beating each other. Then they scrambled up to their feet, with Rekishi holding Rena by the collar of her shirt, hold his fist in the air ready to punch her. As the driver was no one other than the Principle, laughing crazily behind the wheels.

Yuki took the chance and broke away from Yuko’s arm, and ran towards Rena. She felt her heart stop; she couldn’t believe what was going to happen. She couldn’t lose Rena. Not again, not after when she finally found her. Not after Rena finally remembered her. She never wants to lose her again! She ran with her remaining energy, her arms stretched out, trying to reach for Rena.

“GET AWAY FROM THERE!”

GEKIKARA!’ The other Rena cried.

Rena and Rekishi stopped in their position when they heard Yuki scream; turning their heads to the car their body suddenly froze in place as the stared horrified. The principle still laughed, coming straight at them with full speed.

“RENAAAAAAAA!”

To be Continue in Chapter 9

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Rekishi, if it’s written as [ 轢死 ] it has a certain meaning. A foreshadow to what is going happen in the next chapter.  Dun dun duuuuun. I should stop giving hints. *shrug* All well.
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 )
Post by: altoids on June 04, 2012, 08:01:20 AM
Birdcage Chapter 2

Everyone was silently eating their breakfast. Only the sound of the spoon and forks clanking against the bowls created sounds in the room. The servants patiently stood and waited for any orders to be given.

“You have recovered a lot quicker than I thought you would, Rena.” Her father started the conversation. And Jurina gave an agreeing nod.

“I was shock to see you in the next three days as if you never had a fever, you sure your fever wasn’t a lie?” Jurina, who sat across from Rena, smirked and crosses her arms as she gave Rena a suspicious glare.

“What? Of course it wasn’t!” Rena furrowed her brows and glared back, “Falsity of my sickness? I wouldn’t do such a cruel joke unlike someone.”

Jurina scoffed as they went into a glare showdown for a few minutes, until their Mother broke them off. “Enough! As long Rena is back in full health that what matters.” Their mother picked up the napkin and whipped her mouth before adding something, “Also, we’ll be having guest from another family here tonight, so I expect you two be on your best behavior.” Rena and Jurina nodded. They shot an annoyed glance at each other before they dismissed themselves back to their room.

“When did Jurina gain such an attitude?” Rena muttered to herself, walking down the hallways to her room. “I wonder if she got it from mother.” She gave a heavy sigh as she stood in front of the door to her room.

She pushed the room to her door open, and stuck her head inside. “Yuki, are you there?” There was no answered, walking in she shut the door behind her. “Yuki?” She called again. Her eyes moved to the balcony door, the curtains were flowing from the slight breeze, indicating the door was still open, but, there was no one but a pile of black feathers on the balcony. Rena walked over to the balcony and saw the big pile of large feathers scattered everyone. Something snapped into her mind, something terrible as she hope nothing had happen to Yuki.

“Yu --” Something or someone suddenly grabbed Rena by the arm from behind, pulling her towards the person as she tumbled into the person. An arm wrapped around her and held her tight against the other body. She struggled in the person arms with all her energy, she was about to scream until cold hands covered her mouth, stopping her from doing so and only muffle scream came out. She tried to shaking the hand off by thrashing her head back and forth, but fails, as her head was forcefully pushed back against something, what seems to be the other person’s head. She tried to get a glimpse at the person, but before she could all of a sudden her sights become dark. Her eyes were still open but everything was pitch black as if there was something around her, covering her sight.

Oh my god! What’s happening! She started panic. Her heart racing, tears quickly began to build up as she continues struggling in the arms, digging her short nails deep into the other person’s arm, hoping the arms would loosen and she could take the chance to escape, but it didn’t. The arm on her remained strong, even if a pain of hiss escapes the other person mouth. I can’t believe this happening, someone help me!

“Rena, calm down.” A familiar voice hissed softly as Rena finally stopped struggling.

Yuki!? Rena eyes enlarge, tears rolling down her cheeks, from the familiar voice.

“Do you promise not to scream?” The voice kindly asked in concern. Rena gave a small nod; immediately she felt cold hands removed from her mouth, but the arms around her were still strong.

Even with her mouth was now free, she bit down on her tongue preventing herself from the urge to scream, she was still terrified, her heart was still racing in her chest, and her body trembled in the arms that held her. Her mind was in complete shambles, unsure about the voice she heard really belong to Yuki. She couldn’t believe the voice belongs to Yuki, after all Yuki is a bird, a human cursed into a bird. So there was no way Yuki was human… Right? Rena questioned herself.

“Y-yuki… I-Is that you?” Rena managed to muster up the courage to speak, she turned her head to see the face that held her, but everything was still pitch black.

“Yes.” Yuki simply answered as Rena felt a warm breath brushing against her cheeks.

“C-can I see you?”

“…” There was silence.

“Y-yuki?” Rena quietly called.

“If I remove them, would still look at me the same?” Yuki asked worryingly.

Immediately annoyance shot through Rena. She didn’t know why, but the fact that Yuki thinks Rena would look at her differently irked her. They are close friends, and nothing was going to change that. “Of course I would look at you the same! No matter what, you’ll be the Yuki I know!” She stated with pure and honest feelings. “…So, please?”

Rena felt the arm around her hesitating, but soon arm around her was disappeared and light suddenly invaded her vision, making her temporality blind. She blinked several times, allowing her eyes adjusted to the light. As black blob passed her sights, and when her eyes finally adjusted that black blob were large black wings. Then she looked at who was holding her as she quickly jumped back, away from the person, in shock.

Her mouth opened in a small ‘o’, her eyes widen in bewilderment, as she stared at a fully expose woman that stood about Rena’s height, fine pale skin, long black silk hair, her resembling almost like a doll, or maybe Rena was just exaggerating, but her features was dazzling. “Y-yuki…?” Rena’s whispered, her voice almost escaping.

The woman gazed away, avoiding eyes contact.

“Yuki… Is that…” The words choked out of Rena’s mouth. “…R-really you?” There was a small nod from the woman, her eyes still avoiding contact.

“Do I really look that strange?” Yuki asked under her breath. She silently watched somewhere else, but at the corner of her eyes she can see Rena questionable expression. She felt her body stiffen, she held her breathe, and her heart no longer in a steady rhythm of beats. She then couldn’t help keep her eyes away anymore; the silence between the two troubled her own thoughts. Brining her eyes back meeting to Rena’s face, her eyes quickly widen at Rena’s expression.

Rena’s cheek no longer had any blood running, looking pale as Yuki’s; her eyes were soulless, an empty shell staring at Yuki with her jawed dropped in a ‘o’. Rena was bewilder, she was so overwhelmed by the person in front of her that she couldn’t find her voice to speak.

 Recollecting herself, Yuki gave a small shrug of disappointment, “You do -”

“No!” Rena shouted, cutting Yuki off as she blinked in surprise from the shout. “That’s not it… It just that…” Rena looked away as her cheeks became warm. “It you look… Beautiful than I image you would be… and… the fact you’re not wearing clothes just...” Her face became darker.

Yuki blinked, looked down at herself then up at Rena. “I was looking for some clothes, before you came in.”

“O-oh… I see.” Rena kept her eyes away from Yuki’s fully exposed body.

Yuki tilted her head a bit, finally noticed Rena’s red eyes and small tears at the corner of her eyes, while there was still a streak of tear, noticeable on her redden cheeks. “Were you crying? Did I scare you?” Yuki asked in a worried and apologetic tone.

“Huh?” Rena turned to face Yuki, as Yuki was suddenly close to her face. Rena’s eyes widen when her eyes made contact with those raven’s eyes, as Yuki’s cold hand cupped Rena’s right cheek. “W-wha…” Rena couldn’t move, she was petrified under Yuki’s eyes. Her head spun from Yuki’s sudden closeness. Never had she encounter someone so close to her so suddenly, especially when she is naked. “Y-yuki…”

“I did make you cry, I’m sorry.” Yuki apologized in a whisper, giving a small frown as she felt guilty making Rena scared. “I didn’t mean to scare you…” slide her hands up Rena cheeks, as her thumb brushes off the remaining tears from Rena’s eye.

“I-it’s fine. C-can y-you at least put some clothes on!” Rena finally broke the eye contact, and pulled away, her face completely red, and her head was still spinning.

Yuki gave a small chuckle, “Sure. Although, judging from your clothes size. I don’t think they’ll fit on me.”

“W-wha!?” Rena huffed, her face continuing to grow red, “O-okay.” Rena then walked to her wardrobe, “Come here for a moment.” She gesture Yuki over. Yuki walked over to her as she was ordered. She silently watched Rena moving the clothes around, curios what she was finding, until she pulled a white long robe. “W-w-w-wear this for now. I need to get your measurement...” She handed the robe to Yuki, without turning her head around. “I-is it possible to do something about the wings?”

Yuki took the robe from Rena’s hand as she stayed silent for a moment, “I believe I can.” She flexed her wings out as they soon disappeared like ashes. “Is that better?” Rena took a quick glance and nodded, as Yuki then pulled the robe over, as she was now completely covers. “Done.”

Rena gave a small nod; she then pulled out the measuring tape from mini drawer from the wardrobe, as she finally turned to face Yuki. “If you don’t mind…” Yuki gave a small nod and extended her arms out, as Rena started to get Yuki’s measurements. She memorized them all in her head, and gave a firm nod that she memorized them completely. “Alright, I’ll be right back. I see if the maid can get the right clothes for you… Etto.. Don’t open the door if someone knocks. I’m locking it, alright?” She looks at Yuki, who simply gave a nod. Then Rena walked pass by her and left the room, and locked the door as she said.

--
Rena found a maid walking around, as she stopped her. The maid tilted her head to the side wondering what Rena needed. When Rena told the maid about the clothing and their measurements, the maid suddenly became surprised and blushed, getting the wrong impression. Rena flails her arms around, telling her that she got the wrong idea, and told her it was a friend. The maid gave relief sigh, and agreed to bring it over when she gets them. Rena thanked the maid, as she then head towards the kitchen.

When she entered the kitchen, it was empty, not another single soul dwelled in the kitchen. She walked over to the cabinet and pulled out a cup, and filled it with water. She gulped the water down before giving a relief sigh, feeling relax. How is Yuki able to turn into a human? She asked herself as she stared into the cup, seeing her own reflection. Shrugging her shoulders she finishes the rest of her water, grabs a new cup of water for Yuki, and made her way back to her room.

Unlocking the door to her room, she pushed the door open and slipped in as she then closed the door behind her, locking it once more. She saw Yuki sitting on her bed, her back leaning against the pillow and headboard, as she was fiddling with a black feather between her slender fingers. “Hey, Yuki.” Rena greeted as Yuki turned her head to face Rena, and gave a soft smile. Uwaa…Her smile is even more beautiful. Rena started to call when she saw Yuki, nude, appreciating Yuki’s figure, her skin, her breast. Nothing compare too -- … … … W-wait! Why am I even thinking of this? Embarrassed by her own thoughts, her cheek became pink, as she roughly shook the thought off, before she walked over to the bed and handed Yuki the cup of water. “I got you some water. I was thinking you might be thirsty.”

Yuki set the black feather on the bed, and took the cup, “Thanks.” She said softly.

Rena gave a small nod and sat the edge of the bed, next to Yuki. She heard Yuki taking small sips of the water, Rena stated silence enjoying the silences as she stared down seeing the black feathers still scattered on the floor. Then it clicked to her. She remembers last night about her fever. “Yuki?” Yuki stopped sipping her water and stared at Rena, who fidgeted in her seat. “Last night… Was that you?” Yuki gave a small nod. “Thank you…”

Yuki raised a brow, wondering why she was thanking her. “For what?”

“For being there for me…” Rena whispered.

“That what a friend does, right?” Rena gave a small nod, agreeing to Yuki. “But… A friend shouldn’t leave feathers all over her friend’s bed.” Yuki murmured.

Rena gave a small giggle as a hint of blush appeared on Yuki’s pale cheeks. “Oh that reminds me. How are you able to turn into a human? I thought you were cursed…” She titled her head at, curious to know.

An exhale escapes Yuki’s lips, “Actually, I’ve been able to. The witch never ripped out my soul from my body, it’s more like she infused a raven’s spirit inside of my body.” Rena gave an understanding nod, “So I’m able to change back and forth when I want to.”

“Then, why did you choose to become human until yesterday?”

“I just never thought of being a human again, actually. It’s much easier to hide with the other flocks of raven. And… I thought you’ll find me different if I did.” Yuki glanced away, looking hurt from the thought.

“Of course not!” Rena exclaimed, brining Yuki’s attention back to Rena as she blinked. Rena furrowed her brow, angry at Yuki to even think of that. “I told you already, you’re still Yuki, no matter what form you’re in! And we’re friends, so you need to have a little faith in me!”

Yuki stared at Rena, her spirit bewilder her had she never encounter someone such as her. Closing her eyes she gave a smile, “Thank you.”

“I can’t believe you actually think that way!” Then there was a knock. The two turned their head to the door, another knock. “Coming!” Rena shouted, getting up from the bed she walked over to the door. Unlock it and slightly cracked it open as it was the maid that knocked with clothes neatly folded in her hands.

“I have brought what you requested, Rena-sama.” The maid answered, and held the item up to Rena.

“Thank you.” Rena took the clothes from the maid’s hand. The maid dismissed herself as Rena close the door, and locked it once more. She then turned to face Yuki, “Looks like your clothes arrive.”

“That’s pretty quick.” Yuki watched as Rena walked back over with the clothes in her hand. “I’m surprise the family has the correct size for the undergarment.” Yuki took the clothes from Rena, and humbly bowed her head in gratitude.

“Well, we have… spare clothes for visitors and such.” Rena diverted her eyes away, and scratches her cheek with a small smile. “I also asked for a night gown.”

“Is that so? I appreciate it.” Yuki stared down at the clothes, “Now, if you please?” Rena tilted her head slightly, wondering what Yuki meant, until it clicked as her cheeks became red.

“R-right! I’ll be at the balcony.” Rena then fled out to the balcony.

--

Rena felt the cold wind brushing against her face as her hair flew in the wind. She fiddles with the black feathers that once used to be a pile, but now scattered all over the marble floor. The soft barb felt like silk as the downy barbs and the afterfeather felt like cobwebs between her fingers. The rachis was flexible enough that it wouldn’t be painful to lie on, but the calamus was very sturdy as it would likely be painful if someone was to be jabbed by it. Giving the thought of piling them as pillow, Rena kneeled down and started to collect the scattered feathers.

“What are you doing?” The sudden voice made Rena jumped, and shot her head up at voice, as her face flushed red of embarrassment. The voice belong no other than Yuki, who was now changed into a black summer dress that reached up to her knees, as they slightly clung Yuki’s body showing the form of her body, while her pale skin, and long black hair, contrast with the black dress making it look very fitting. Rena couldn’t help but sudden become mesmerize by Yuki’s image. “What are you doing?” Yuki asked again, giving a quizzical expression with a brow raise. 

Snapping Rena back to reality, she blinked several time with a dumfounded expression. “N-n-nothing...” Rena stuttered, she quickly got up to her feet and brushed the dust off her dress. And try to act like she wasn’t doing anything of interest.

Seeing Rena’s action made even Yuki more curious. She knew what Rena was doing, but she wanted the girl say it to her straight out. Yuki decided she push her a little more, giving a small smirk, she folded her arms beneath her breast and leaned slightly forward. “Were you really doing nothing?” She crooned.

Rena forcefully glanced away, avoiding Yuki’s gaze, “Y-yes…” She squeaked, her face turning redder.

 Yuki walked a little closer to Rena, as Rena body became stiff, but she didn’t move away. Yuki extended her arms out at her, taking several strands of Rena’s hair between her fingers, she admire Rena’s soft delicate hair as they slide off her fingers. “Are you sure about that?” Her eyes looking at Rena’s red face.

“Alright alright!” Rena slightly huffed, Yuki gave another smirk as she patiently waits for the answer, “I… I was thinking about piling the feathers together… and… Using them as pillows.” She hung her head down, feeling ashamed for thinking of such thought.

Yuki couldn’t help but chuckle. Rena looked at her annoyed, and puffed her cheeks. “Really, you could just admit it.” She taps Rena’s cheek with her index finger.

“Moou! It’s embarrassing! When did you become so different?”

“Different? Hmm...When I’m able to walk as a human once more.”

“I can’t believe you! You were a lot nicer as a raven! Turn back into a raven!”

“When you say that, it makes me want to stay as a human more.” Yuki said, walking back into the room. Rena huffed again and followed Yuki back into the room.

Rena plop onto the bed, her face in the pillow, hiding her red face. Yuki sat at the edge and patted her head. “C’mon stop being so pouty. There’s nothing to be embarrassed about.” She said with an amuse smirk.

“I’m not being pouty!” She lifted her head up and stuck a tongue at her childishly before burying her face back into the pillow. Yuki couldn’t help, but laugh and continue to pet Rena’s head. The silence was soothing for both of them; they absorbed the sounds of the day sky outside as it was calming and relaxing, until Rena broke the silence with a question, “Say… Why were you so big earlier?” She turned her head to the side to see Yuki, fiddling with strands of Rena’s hair.

Yuki pause her action as everything became silent once more. Yuki silently thought to herself, finding the correct words to phrase her answer, before she answered Rena’s question, “It the amount of energy I use to change from bird to human.” Yuki’s back straightened and placed her hands on her laps, looking out of the balcony door, now watching snow scenery outside while the sky was a clear blue with white specks, which were the clouds, floating in the sky. “And most of my energy was used to cure your fever.” She mumbled, almost hesitantly. “Magic isn’t something easy to use without it consuming a large amount of energy, even if it something small.”

“Wait… You cured my fever with magic…?” Rena’s eyes widen in surprised, disbelieving she heard. She quickly went into a sitting position with her legs crossed, eager to know more, her eyes gleaming with surprise and curiosity.

Yuki gave a small nod, she was about to answer Rena, but a sudden knock was heard from the door. Yuki and Rena head turned to the door as voice spoke from the other side. “Rena-sama, the guests has arrived.” The maid requested for Rena’s presence.

“Eeeh!?” Rena eyes widen in even more shock, “It hasn’t reach dawn yet. Does mother want me now?” Rena raised her voice so she could be heard. Yuki simply listened and blinked, getting the small idea of their conversation.

“Jou-sama, requested for your presence.”

Rena silently thought to herself, wondering if she should reject. Hesitating, she then felt a nudge on her arm, looking up at the person, she saw Yuki giving a soft smile. “Go. You don’t want your mother getting mad, right?” There was a hint of disturbance in Yuki’s voice as if she didn’t want Rena to leave, the words forced out of her mouth.

Rena gave a small pout, not wanting to leave Yuki and stay to talk to her mother. Then she heard the maid patients quickly growing thin, calling for Rena once more. Rena hesitated, glancing at the door then back the Yuki, she didn’t know who to choose. She wanted to spend more time being with Yuki, but she didn’t want to anger her mom. She lightly bit her lower lips as her eyes glints of hesitation between her choices.

Yuki, noticing Rena’s hesitation, leaned forward and cupped Rena’s cheek, feeling her warm cheeks in her palm, forcing Rena to make eye contact with her. Yuki took notice of Rena’s cheeks becoming pink as she found her reaction amusing, but she quickly brushed it off to get her point across. “I’ll still be here when you come back. Don’t worry. I don’t intend to fly anywhere today.” A reassuring smile curved on Yuki’s lips, they weren’t the previous soft smile where they appear to lonely. This time they were sweet and confident, which eased Rena a bit, quickly feeling a little more confident in her choices. Rena gave a small nod, returning the smile, before she jumped out of bed and quickly slipped out the door so the maid wouldn’t catch a glimpse of Yuki.

A click sound was heard at the door, indicating Rena has locked the door.

Yuki silently heard a pair of foot step slowly fading away. When there was complete silence Yuki gave a small sigh. Leaning against the headboard, she stared up at the ceiling examining every details of the ceiling while thoughts processed through her mind. A small frown curved down on her lips as the thoughts ran, feeling glummer every time the same thoughts repeated in her mind.

The thoughts of Rena being ill since she was young and was never allowed outside of the house. Or far away from the perimeter of the mansion, she was just like a bird trapped in a caged, even if she had wings to fly there was still something that chained her down.

“Just like a birdcage…”

She brought her head down to look down at the palm of her hand she used to hold Rena’s cheek. She felt as if the warmth of Rena’s cheeks was still there. The warmth lingering on her cold pale finger tips. The warmth of blood running through Rena’s cheeks, indicating she was still alive. And yet, cold shakes chaining her down.

Chaining Rena down from the outer world, it may be small world, but there was so much one can see before death. And Yuki wanted Rena to see the small world they both lived in. Just once, just this once, Yuki wanted Rena to see a small glimpse of the world that she lived in.

Even though, her unknown illness was her shackles. The effect of the illness was her bruises. The mansion was her cage. Yuki was visitor who was once in the same situation as Rena, trapped in the witch’s lair, but is now free as she is merely watching the chained princess slowly dying. However, Yuki is able to do something. She was the key to cage; although, she was not the key to Rena’s shackles. Yuki was not able to remove Rena’s shackles that held her; the shackles were different from the cage. She couldn’t unlock the shackles. She was only able to extend the chains that bounded around Rena, and cure the bruises that the shackles gave her when she struggled against them. Such cruel reality Rena has to suffer through, and yet, she still carries a cheerful smile and bright as if everything was fine when it was not.

Yuki hated that, her heart feelings sour when Rena puts up a cheerful smile when an accident happen to her and then telling her everything was fine. The raven wanted Rena to allowed her to worry about her, she felt utterly powerless, she felt guilty for being powerless when she couldn’t do anything when she was a raven, she merely watch Rena struggle against her illness and not be able to speak her out worries for Rena.

Now, that Yuki was able to walk once more, she’ll give Rena her short sweet taste of freedom outside of her cage. She will sneak her out of this mansion, no matter what. She wanted Rena to experience seeing the world like Yuki from high above, in the sky. It was a risky chance, but, Yuki would take these chances as long Rena is able to witness the outer cage she’s was held captive in. She didn’t want to allow Rena to die without observing how it was like out of the cage, out of the mansion. It was just too cruel for one not being able to witness a small glimpse of the world which she lives in.

Yuki recalled the past, how Rena would always speak about wanted to leave the mansion with Yuki, when she was still a raven. And how she wanted to walk around, watching the people interact with one another, whether it was a pleasing sight and a horrifying sight, she wanted to see it all, but more pleasing than horrid. She wanted to see the brighter side of the world even if it was a short glimpse. Rena knew there wasn’t always a bright side, but, there was some. And she still wished to see it.

A childish and silly idea it maybe, but Yuki understood what Rena wanted and try to convey.

Yuki will make that wish come true. Even if she didn’t say those words, making Rena’s wish come true, in front of Rena. She will make it come true. Yuki will not make a promise to Rena because promises always end up being broken one way or another, so what Yuki had witness and experience in her past. So without promises, she will still make come true just for Rena. At any means possible.

“I’ll make it come true.” Yuki softly said before closing her eyes, relaxing her mind and body.

She didn’t understand why, was it the fact she felt pity for Rena? Was it because they were friends? Or was it because she carried mutual feelings for Rena? Yuki didn’t know her answer, but, one thing for sure she felt her heart beating at the thought of Rena being close to her, whether physically or mentally. Her heart would stir every time. How this feeling irked her. She never felt like this before. No, she had felt this way before. Only once, thousands of years ago before the witch held her captive. Now, this feeling has come again once more, however, it was different. Far different than thousands of years ago, this feeling she felt now was confusing. There was no straight path for this feeling.

Another thought ran through her mind, she wonders what her true feelings for Rena were. It only had been several years since she been with Rena, There couldn’t possibly be anything for me to have such feelings for her.

.. I wonder, why then… She hummed the thought silently before slowly dazing off, falling asleep within the soothing silence of Rena’s room.

To Be Continued in Chapter 3

Thanks for reading, bros! >3 Even if this is seriously a horrendous fics. </3 And hopefully you guys can wait for the third story I'm planning. ~ ;3
Hur hur. ~ See you guys around, kay? While I work on adding more comments to a few authors out there. And catching up with updates too. Haaa. ;;
Title: Re: Forgotten Memories ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 )
Post by: bochang on June 04, 2012, 11:33:27 AM
Me first!! So happy!! Will edit later~ (。・ω・。)ノ♡

Thank you min-chan~ for the updates~ Kya Kya~ #fangirling

No, fanfics helped me survived from those hellish lecturers. LOL

No, i'm just okay with gore. :3 i'm not really into gore, i prefer a tragic story. The irony is.. :3

No, (another no) i won't post another only to comment sieka's comment. LOL Too lazy~ LOL
JK sieka~ I will comment your updates~

so for the story..


EVEN GEKIKARA loves YUKI! LOL
me too :3
i'm not that stupid or crazy for not loving Yuki. LOL
Is that count as a sweet moments between geki and black?
i mean with geki trying to strangle yuki? LOL

Then...

Le Gasp..

Waht.. What.. Wtah!!

I.. *sigh*

So that's why..

and he, the scumbag principal want to run over her again! and with YUKI this time!!

Don't you dare, or i will took your soul in the most despicable way. (O WO)!!

well, he already did it, so it's time for me to collecting souls..

*Sharpening my sycthe

and birdcage is..

GYA~
#fangirling

Yuki turns into human~ and what's more, she's naked!! she's beautiful!

I will be in the same state as rena if i saw a nude beautiful Yuki in my room. Not only jawdropped, nosebleed as well. LOL

It's kinda ironic.. Rena is a human who lives in a cage..
because of her disease..

and Yuki, she can fly away, but she decided to stay, because she can't leaves Rena alone in her cage. :3
So SWEET!! I'm gonna die because of diabetes. LOL

i hope someday Rena will be cured without sacrificing Yuki in the process..

:3

Thank you for this updates min-chan~ :D
It's worthed for me to wait for almost one month for this storis. LOL

Hwaiting! Do your best in the  finals! It's easy! LOL




Title: Re: FM ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 ) & Kokoro ni Shitagau ( PRGU )
Post by: altoids on June 05, 2012, 03:28:57 AM
@ everyone: looks like I finished the third story prologue then I expected, huh. .___.
Whatever. Here's the third story for you all. ~ <3

@ bochang-san: Umm. You're weclome? And wouldn't it be more for fanboying than fangirling? Just saying, hahaa. ~ o wo
Aah, I see then. Though it's still bad to read fics during class though?
Then again, I do it too. Ahahaaa. = w= ;;;
Oh? I see then. Either or is fine with me. > w> ; Tragic story though, huh? :3
Hahahaaa, then you should have just responded when I updated then. ~ = u=)/
Lazy butt.

That's because Gekikara is Rena! Of course she would love Yuki. D< No matter what crap she was thrown into. = AAA= ;
... Are you really not, hnnnn ~ ?
Ahahaaaa. I don't know if it can be consider as one.
Depends what you think, bro. = w=b

............. o uo ~
You might as well start collecting souls dude. Or just wait for a moment before collecting. ~
o Ao ... Is it really necessary to make it sharp? ;;;

Yuki in the full flesh... Literally. o wo ; ~ Hahahaaa.
Aah, won't blame if you had a nosebleed. But, uuh... you may just get yourself into trouble if you had a nosebleed? :"D ;
oh the sweet irony. </3
Hahahaaa, dude. Reading isn't sugar. xD It mental sugar. ~

Hnnnn. Who know, bro. :3
Aah, thanks for being able to wait! ; www;b

Thanks, I will. o wob aah, depends how prepared I am for the finals. </3

Kokoro ni Shitagau Prologue

The young raven eyes scanned the halcyon computer room.

There was not a single voice heard in this current room the female was in, even if there were many body within this room. It was so quiet that she could even hear her own breathe. Bright lights radiated from the computer screen. People that were behind the computer were playing either MMORPG, MMO, or simply chatting online while their headphones was covering their ears, blocking out all the sound coming from outside. There were walls around the people, separating them from seeing each other, leaving them as individual people. The walls created a miniature room for the individuals, allowing them to keep their own privacy without being disturb by the person next to them. It was almost like being in an office, however, where this young raven was, she wasn’t in an office. She was at a cyber café.

There was nothing but the sound of keys being pressed and the sound of the mouse being clicked echoing the room. The young female made her way down the rows of room. She watched as the black plated numbers slowly decreased one by one. The color of the dark brown walls and the color plates never changing. All of the room looked exactly the same. The only difference was they were place in different location.

60… 59… 58… 57… 56… 55… 54…

Then she stopped at room 53. She took a peek inside to see if it was occupied as it was not. A small smile curved on the raven’s lips when the room 53 was empty. It was her usual room, even if there was no difference between all the room, she felt more comfortable being in that room than any other rooms around. It was at the end of the hallway where people would rarely pass by. She felt more at eased when there was rarely anyone passing behind her. If her usual room was occupied she would take another room near the area, though she had full confidence that her usual room was never occupied whenever she came to the computer room. Even though she could merely use her computer at home, but she enjoyed the atmosphere in the cyber café, bringing her mind to feel much more at ease than the privacy of her own room. Upstairs of the café was where the entire computers were being held, while down stairs was the café for anyone who wanted to get a drink or hang out.

There was a policy of allowing drinks in the computer room so drinks or snacks were prohibited in the computer room. Only a bottle of water was only accepted in the room everything had to be either thrown away or kept inside the bag. Though, the female didn’t bring anything with her today except for a white mini shoulder handbag, with the long strap resting on her right shoulder.

Walking into the room, she pulled the chair seat out under the desk and sat down before rolling the seat forward, just enough that her hands could be placed on the keyboard. She then lifts the strap of her bag off her shoulder and placed it on the table next to the desktop. Opening her bag, she pulled out her cell phone and checked the time. Three forty two. She said the time to herself before placing the cell phone on the table. Turning on the screen and moving the mouse a little, the screen flashed on and showed the female the login screen.

The young rave stared at the screen dumbfounded by the new add in. This is new… She commented to herself as she tuck a strand of hair behind her ear. When was this added in? She silently thought to herself, recalling to herself that this was not here last night, before shrugging her shoulders. Taking the mouse, she moved the cursor over the word ‘Sign Up’ and clicked on it as it gave her another screen, asking her for all her information.

It took the female less than five minute to fill the necessary information before clicking the finished button. As another screen popped open saying,

“Welcome Gekikara-san ~ !”

To Be Continued in Chapter 1

aaah. ;;; Hopefully this wasn't too boring, sorry if it's not much guys. </3 And thanks for reading. ~
edit: so my friend and I were debating each other about the title. and i decided to change it to "Kokoro ni Shitagau". Instead of "Kimochi ni Shitagau"
bleh. sorry for the inconvenience. xP
Title: Re: FM ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 ) & Kimochi ni Shitagau ( PRGU )
Post by: bochang on June 05, 2012, 04:14:46 AM
Another first comment from me. LOL

Ah yeah, fanboying.. #feelingwierd
Yah. LOL you're not better than me. LOL
It'll toooooo lllllaaaaattteeeee.. hahaha

Nah, i don't have to sharpened it, just to make it more dramatic to read. LOL

Noooo, don't infuse yukirin nude images on my mind... my mind will be tainted. LOL

Still, it will make me excited, full of energy, and ended up with diabetes. LOL

And the story..
Why 53? At the end of the hallway? Why?

Don't tell me she usually browsing for porn. LOL

Update!!, i want to know the program she was using!! :3

And good luck~ just don't think about yuki and rena kissing when you're doing your exams, or you will be doomed. LOL
Trust me, it happens to me.LOL singing akb's songs in my mind when doing an exam will destroy your concentration.
Their pv will be replayed on your minds.. :3

I think i use too many LOL in this comment.
(´・ω・`)
Title: Re: FM ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 ) & Kokoro ni Shitagau ( PRGU )
Post by: Megumi on June 05, 2012, 11:07:36 AM
First time commenting!
So I've been reading your fic but first time commenting...hrrm how should I say it.
I can't write a comment if the fic is good because I can't find a right word to say  :P

But I really like your fic it's interesting, great story and SFHJSKDJSKJ! I'm spazzing!

and this new one Kokoro ni Shitagau sure sounds interesting.

You're definitely one of my favourite authors...
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: FM ( Ch. 8 ) & Birdcage ( Ch. 2 ) & Kokoro ni Shitagau ( PRGU )
Post by: Pandah on June 19, 2012, 06:24:53 AM
I AM BACK FROM THE DEAD! revived myself a few hours ago lolol
i have studied and i have also procrastinated to the max.....and i fear i may have failed something..... :panic:

i agree with the blob of reply you replied with  :lol: still so koed zzzzz shall leave a short reply this time but know that i have replied to what you have said in my head in detail LOL

yes blood and gore..its fabulous  :w00t:
thanks for the 10million updates you updated! makes me happy that i get to read :D
ima go reply to the rest and then sleep like a log afterwards  :P

keep up the good work and thanks again!
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: altoids on July 04, 2012, 09:01:27 AM
@ Everyone: Holly --- ;;; Ahahaa, I'm sorry everyone for sudden disappearing for exactly a month without a word. ;
Been rather busy even with summer vacation, life issues, and all that "fun" stuff. ugh. </3
OTL I do apologize to you all and hopefully you guys are still with me. Aha. > w> ;;;
I just came to drop by telling you bros that I'm still here, and haven't forgotten about any of you. ; w;
Just been rather busy to get on and I keep on forgetting to get on when I do have free time. = x= ;
I'm really sorry everyone! ; n; Please don't hate me for that. OTL

WELP! I'm sort of back and with chapter 9 preview of Forgotten Memories.
Honestly though, I've been lacking inspiration to work on Chapter 9 of FM and Chapter 3 of Birdcage. > x> ;;
So the time Forgotten Memories will be fully finish is unknown, until I find inspiration again.
So for now... Please have more patient to deal with this damn failure author. ; w;

@ bochang-san ( oppa ): always the first person to comment, huh?

what? you are a dude! so it's only natural for you to fanboy!
Unless your saying something else about your gender. *stares* o uo ~
I don't even what the conversation was about anymore, bro. :"D ;;; *fail*

Psssh, nonsense. You do have to sharpen it to make it dramatic. o:
It brings out that tense feelin, y'know? ;P

Don't deny it! Your mind is already tanted anyways!
Then again, don't imagine it. You have no rights to image a naked Yukirin.
Only Rena. = w= ;;;; Lol. *shot*

Give yourself diabetes by going on a mental sugar hype.

Oh hell no, you did not just think that way about Rena! D<
HAhahaa, who knows why. That number just came into my head.
And who wouldn't want to take a room at the end of the hallway?
It's rather peaceful and quieter there, bro. = w=)/


@ Megumi-san: Oh my god! So someone finally came out of the shadows, aye ~ ? ;3
Rather grateful to see you finally come out of the dark side, bro. = u=b
Thanks for reading it and dealing with the terrible story, and finally comment on it. ; w; ~
you don't know how much that means. <33
Though I do have to apologize about my random disappearence. OTL

Aaaaw, psssssh, nonsense bro. > w>
I believe you have the words just was to lazy to write 'em down. ~ ;D
Write what you feel when you read it. * u*

Hahaa, thanks, bro. > w> I'm really grateful to hear such words. Hahahaa. *pats*

It's not really my main focus, so it not going to be updated so often. </3
But, good to know that it sounds interesting to you rather than boring.
Although... I do hope it would be very much of a surprise to the readers later as the chapter goes.

Hahaa, thanks bro. <33 I'm rather honored to hear that.
> w>

@ Pandah-san: Pandy! ; AA; If you don't mind me calling you, Pandy.
Gaah! I miss you silly, Panda. D: *tackles*

Damn, giiiirl, don't be killing yourself. :<
LE GASP! You can't fail! You musn't fail, bro! That's bad. > AA> ;;;

Hahahaaaa, it's fine, bro. xD Good to know that you still commented all that, even if it's mentally. ;3

Haaaa, such a gory reader. Find blood and gore, fabulous. ~ *hair flip* lol.
For some reason, I can just imagine you just going a hair flip when you wrote that. xD
Hnn, thanks for still reading even after being so busy. :< And your welcome, bro. > w>
Good to know that I haven't failed you yet. * o*

Get as much rest as you need, bro. ;o
You'll need that rest while you have it. ~
> w <

Forgotten Memories Chapter 9 Preview

“RENAAAAAAAA!”

Rena and Rekishi prepared themselves for the hit.

Rena felt her heart beating rapidly, bounding in her chest, ready to stop at any moment once she made contact with the car. She felt her own body becoming cold, numb to the bone, every inch of the nerves in her body failing her. Was she going to die here when she hasn’t taken her revenge? Was she going to live, but forget her memories once more? Will she live and get the chance to see Yuki and tell her how much she missed her? All these question shot right into her head as she stared horrified at the coming car. Then, her lip moved, forming a single word.

Sorry.

Was only word that came that Rena’s lips, but she did not speak it out loud or whispered only lips, that single word that held many meanings, her failure in getting revenge, forgetting about Yuki, everything. She felt like she should be apologizing for everything even if she wasn’t able to speak that single word out loud. She felt her stiff body eased up, her nerves and muscles continuing to fail her, as she prepared to face her death, prepared for the penalty of her failure.

End of Preview

Sorry to cut it. But that's all I'm giving you guys to read. = w= ;;;
Welp, see you when I'm completely done with the chapter. ~
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: Megumi on July 04, 2012, 02:11:42 PM
 :bleed eyes: You troll can't wait when you update this  :grin:

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: bochang on July 04, 2012, 02:41:00 PM
nyaaahhh! i lost to megumi-san. because i logged off from my skype before i read your reply.. TT.TT

well, whatever. LOL

at last!! i'm so happy to get any news about this yuki-rena trio (Sieka,Min,Rin) at last an update!! TT.TT

only a preview though.. but it's okay.. fufufu

at least i have JKT48 members to be spazzing at. fufufu

but yukirin is.. #nosebleed

she had so much gravure photos.. #died

yes, it's quiter, so you can open porn with much ease. LOL Just kidding. :3

and please update.. lack of inspiration, eh? yeah me too. i feel like want to abandoned all my fic and running away from reality. LOL

himnae! infuse fighting spirit~! :3
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: Sara-chan on July 07, 2012, 12:01:03 AM
I stayed up until 3 am just reading "Forgotten memories" I could not stop reading!  :mon duh: i usually don't read BlackxGeki but this story grabbed me! I was surprised to find that Rena had a split personality as sadistic  :mon scare:
I'm waiting for chapter 9!  :gmon hi:
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: Wmatsui22 on May 10, 2013, 09:39:44 AM
++++++++++++++++

~Forgotten Memories

~Hi

~It's been a long time...

~I hope you update

~I am very curious about Rena and Gekikara

~I also didn't know what will be the pairing. [It's a RenaYuki, MaYuki, WMatsui or JuriMayu]

~Thanks

~WMatsui_22~

++++++++++++++++++++
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: noel nguyen on May 16, 2013, 02:46:57 PM
hey, why don't you continue your fic??????
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: ttwm123 on February 07, 2016, 12:28:22 PM
update, pleaseee~~
your fic(forgotten memories)~~ :cry:
Title: Re: Mint's Novellas: Forgotten Memories Chap. 9 Preview
Post by: anin98 on February 10, 2016, 02:59:52 PM
Please continue your fic author-san...
T.T