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Hello everybody, sorry this isn't my "summer camp" fic i've told so many of you about, instead this short fic is somewhat inspired by the french film "Enter the void", well actually just one scene. I dont really like it and I wrote it in a hurry but tell me what you think. Oh and Takamina's the narrator.

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It was a humid night in Tokyo and the moon was full. I had just recieved a text message from my girlfriend, Atsuko. She told me her parents were gone for the night and that she had something "special" to share with me. I was so excited I left my house as fast as I could. I walked about 3 blocks before I came to an intersection. I was in such a hurry to get to my lovers house I just ran across the street while the light was still red, not a very smart idea.

After about 15 minutes of walking I finally arrived. I rang her doorbell and after waiting for what felt like an eternity (in reality it was only like 10 seconds) Atsuko or Acchan as her friends and family call her, came to the door. For some reason she seemed even more beautiful tonight. Her short brown hair waved in the gentle breeze in the moonlight, then she looked at me, her eyes, brown and beautiful seemed to twinkle in the moonlight. "Hey honey, took you long enough to get here, come with me I want to show you something".

She grabbed my hand and took me straight into her room. I was so excited, I had no idea what we were about to do, but I knew it was going to be good. "Minami", she called my name, I loooked over at her and she was looking for something under her bed. "There it is" she said as she pulled out a purple hooka case. From the case she took out a red/black bubbler, a lighter with a little monkey on it, and a small bag of tan-coloured powder.

It became quiet for a few seconds, then, Acchan looked at me and asked. "Taka dear, have you ever heard of DMT?". "DMT, what's that?" I asked with a confused look on my face. "Dimethyltryptamine, it's intense". She said as she winked at me. I felt like I should have been shocked by this, but Acchan was always doing crazy things like this, but that's what I loved about her. She was a little wierdo, my little wierdo. I have to be honest though, I was a tad disapointed, because she told me her parents were gone, so, I figured we would, well, you know ;D.

"You want to try it" she asked me. I figured why not, i'm always willing to try new things. "I guess so", I told her. She smiled at me, as she poured a small amout of whatever it was into the bubbler. When she passed me the bubbler, I was a bit nervous to take a hit, but, I knew how Acchan felt about me, and I knew that she would never give me anything/do anything to hurt me, so I took a small hit.

The smoke was awful, it tasted like, well, what I could only describe as burning plastic. "Puff, Puff, Puff, dont fight it, let go" Acchan said to me. As soon as I exhaled, I felt very strange. There was a surge of energy in my body, it was very pleasant, then I heard what was probably the loudest noise I had ever heard in my life. I felt like I had just been shot out of a cannon. I didn't know where I was, a few seconds ago I was in my girlfriends room, now,...I dont know.

I realized that I was completely detached from my body. I wasn’t in a room, in a house, on earth. I didn’t recognize anything around me from this universe. I saw fractals, geometric patterns, psychedelic imagery all around me. I came to the realization that space and time, do not exsist, and that I was in the space between spaces. From out of nowhere, there was this huge, and I mean huge, flash of light. After the flash, I heard this loud buzzing sound, then out of nowhere, a black hole appeared in front of me.

Out of the hole emerged what looked like, an elf. It slowly came near me. It was spinning what looked like a 2-dimensional triangle shape in it's hands. He looked at me for a few seconds, then suddenly, it vanished before my eyes. As soon as this trip began, it was over. I found myself in Acchan's room again. She giggled then asked me, "how was it". We talked for about an hour, I told her everything that happened to me, what I saw-etc-. She shared some of her experiences with, whatever that stuff was, with me. After our conversation, she looked at me inquisitively for a moment, then kissed me passionately.

:rofl:
it seems like time traveling machine?
It's rare to read this kind of fic of AtsuMina :grin:
is there the 2nd part?

No, lol, just describing a DMT trip.

Oh, a new member~ Welcome to JPH!P! :welcome Cool! I like the Plot. LOL. And, It's AtsuMina! So many AtsuMina these days. LOL. :yep:

yeah! weird fic.. jajaj takamina in high levels... interesting..

Owh, son! :w00t: finally you start posting.. XD took you a while..lol.. :lol:

You should make something for AtsuMina at the end..lololol.. :inlove:

but this is interesting.. :twothumbs

wee XD agree with fleany

dmt is strong huh O_O

atsuminaaaaaa

"The feeling of doing DMT is as though one had been struck by noetic lightning. The ordinary world is almost instantaneously replaced, not only with a hallucination, but a hallucination whose alien character is its utter alienness. Nothing in this world can prepare one for the impressions that fill your mind when you enter the DMT sensorium."-Terence McKenna

Load universe into cannon, aim at brain, fire!

Hey TheGreenAnarchist :mon hi:

Nice fic there :hehehe:

I think this fic is very different from the fics Ive read (so far) :mon nyah:

Btw, they are taking some sort of umm.... drugs right? :sweat:

It really surprised me though :shock:

I liked how you've described the effect of taking DMT there :mon determined:
HAHA :mon XD:

Goodluck and keep posting your fics here TheGreenAnarchist-san :on lol:

:mon dance:

PS: Im not a Yadong Freak :on gay: hehehe :mon dance:

THAT's MY DAD!!

oh!!! MY!!!! What the?...

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SHORT story
"My 3 personality".

Personality 1: DMT?....hope it's real?.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/dunno.gif)
(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/ding.gif) I want to experience it too? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/187.gif) .... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/bingo.gif)
personality 2:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/icon_biggrin.gif) is it something like drugs?....
personality 3: Hopefully (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/icon_thumright.gif) I am not a (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/AkachinSmiley.png) drug addict (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/52pmic0.gif) like her.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/smoke.gif)
ME: stop (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif) you Three (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_voodoob.gif) I am (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_rant2.gif) concentrating posting (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_study.gif) a comment here!!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/52.gif)

personality 3:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/smhrd3.gif) looks the idiot.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/bigdeal.gif)
personality 2: (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_blush.gif) as if she's not curious (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/thumbsdown.gif) about that thing.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/whistle.gif)
Personality 1:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/deco1.gif)*nodding(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/icon_nod.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_bleedy56.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/nya.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy1.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy2.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/wriggly.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/luvluv2.gif)
ME: (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_closeup.gif) hey!!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_rant2.gif) I am not (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/angry.gif) idiot!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_uggh.GIF)
(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_impatient.gif) and......and...... yeah! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/monk_ignore.gif) I am curious! *doke~doke~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_whimper.gif)
personality 2: (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_w00t.gif) Curious (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/glasses.gif) about some pervert stuff? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/wriggly.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_angel.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/wriggly.gif)
Personality 3: (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/thumbsup.gif) yah!.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_gay8.gif) I thought (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_inluv.GIF)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_bleedy56.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_inluv.GIF) that too (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/wub.gif)
after reading (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pen1_49.gif) the part that
they [atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/105.gif) will be alone(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/deco1.gif) together (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_w00t.gif) .... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/nya.gif)
[because acchan's parent is out of town (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/187.gif) ] and she absolutely (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/XD.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/laughing.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/XD.gif) thought that too!!... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-12.gif)
ME: (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_freeze.gif) *speechless (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/009.gif)
personality 1:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/icon_biggrin.gif) oh!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-06.gif) common guys stop (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/106.gif) teasing her.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_pray.gif)
(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_whisp.gif) she already admit it.... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_cam.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_duh.GIF)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_cam.gif)
ME:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/stoned.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_freeze.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/grr.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_uggh.GIF) [damn you (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/52.gif) I thought your (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/angry.gif) in my side but not (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/bleedingeyes.gif) ]
ME: hey!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif) I am not (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_rant2.gif) admitting it!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_headbang.gif)
personality 1:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_undecided.gif) but I thought (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/monk_huh.gif) you were cause (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_sweat.gif)
your not talking any more??? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/confused1.gif) and silence means yes! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/thumbsup.gif) remember?... (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_misch.gif)
Personality 2&3:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pig_madder.gif) *nodding (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/icon_nod.gif)
ME:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_mad.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_yell.gif) just because (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_rant2.gif) I can't speak (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/52.gif) it's already means yes? (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_rant2.gif) ....
and stop talking!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mw_rant2.gif) Okey! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_wtfmm.gif)
◄INNER THOUGHT♫
[I am thinking that stuff (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_bleed2.gif) too but :mon nyah: I will never (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/smhrd3.gif) ever tell it with this 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pig_realmad.gif) ]
ME: AND!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pig_mad.gif) to be clear!!! I am CURIOUS ABOUT THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_thumbb.gif)
Personality 1,2&3:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_curtain.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_ehh.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_speechless.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_worklate.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_wtf.GIF)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_cheek.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_surr.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/859cc94a.gif) oke~doke~....

ME: good...your behave now (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/glasses.gif)

Personality 1,2&3:(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_beatup1.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/fever.gif)(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/imdead.gif)
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