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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: kuro808 on June 19, 2012, 06:58:54 AM
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I took on a request because I believe it wasn't used enough and to see if I can work around this pairing.
Comedic and warm-hearted adventure between two women
Chapter 1
The smell of smoke rose to the air after the plane plunged down onto the sand. She looked up at the glaring sun and turned over feeling the sand run between her fingers. She looked around at the wreckage and feared the worst. She moved a piece of shrapnel to get inside the airplane and saw the bodies mutilated from the crash landing especially her current girlfriend.
Without any words, she began to cry as she lost her only love of her life. With her face diminished, she couldn't imagine her beauty anywhere else. She collapsed in the sand facing the ocean and yelled out her frustrations.
After a few minutes of yelling, her voice became strained and decided to find shelter. She looked behind her to find a forest with a mysterious aura. The forest was overgrown with vines and filled with lush trees. The smell of fresh rain blocked out the odor from the crash site as she headed deeper.
She was not aware of the danger until she tripped and faced a snake with its fangs exposed ready to attack. She closed her eyes and then a hissing sound came to her ears as she ready to take the vicious bite only to open her eyes to the snake stabbed through its head. She looked up to find a person dressed in cloths with the spear in its hand with the head of the snake pierced through.
"Dangerous snake." It mumbled as the tone sounded as a woman.
"Thank you." She bowed to her as the woman kneels down to her level.
"What is your name?" The clothed lady asked as she helped brush off the leaves and dirt.
"Oagwa Makoto. You can call me Mako-chan. How about you?"
"Yossie." Makoto looked at her and noticed she looked Japanese from her appearance and her speech was close to Japanese.
"Okay. Can you help me get off the island?" Yossie shook her head.
"Other lands are too far for a trip. You have to stay here for a while before we build a raft." She nodded as she followed Yossie but the woman grew suspicious of the outsider.
Ogawa felt Yossie wasn't going to trust her if she was going to wait for the raft so she picked up small sticks along the way until Yossie stopped and turned around to see the bunch of sticks under her right arm.
"What are you going to do with the branches?"
"Don't you need fire wood?" Yossie grabbed the branches and threw them onto the ground and stomped on them before letting Ogawa pick it up.
She gave her confused look before Yossie moved deeper into the forest. Ogawa hurriedly picked up the pieces of muddy wood and followed her until Yossie paused again, this time she angrily stared at her.
"I would warn you that you may put yourself in danger."
"Where am I supposed to go?" She asked Yossie as she looked at the trees above.
"Stay at the beach. You can at least have someone get you while you are out in the open." Yossie walked a few steps before Ogawa ran up to her.
"I don't want to be alone." Her arms, warm with sweat, wrapped around her body as she tried to wiggle out of it but she wouldn't give in.
"I will... let you stay with me tonight and I shall teach you the wilderness." Yossie warned as Ogawa trailed behind her until they arrived at a hut where Yossie went inside to pray as Makoto stayed outside putting her hands together in prayer.
She finally led Makoto to a big hut with leaves thatched overhead. She stood outside in the doorway as Yossie moved some stuff from the floor before letting her inside the house. The interior was huge as it covered a hundred square feet but it was surrounded by items made for her survival. Since it was dim, she decided to lay on her back for a nap but Yossie forced her to sit up.
"First, you need to learn how to hunt out here. There are many pigs in this area so I have a spear so you can kill them." She handed over the weapon and threw her out of the house.
"How am I supposed to kill the pig?" Makoto asked as she held it overhead keeping her eyes on the brush around her.
"Aim for the head." She instructed as a wild pig came out of the brush and Yossie threw a bag in front of it.
Makoto lifted it up high and came down right between the shoulder blades. The pig let out a cry as it ran into the forest with the spear sticking straight out. Yossie chased after the pig until a loud cry echoed throughout the forest and she came back with the dead animal hanging over her back with blood still dripping from its body.
"Help me drain it out." Yossie pointed toward the knife outside of the hut and Ogawa quickly retrieved it for the woman.
The blood gushed out quickly as Yossie sliced through the meat to get to the innards. Mako-chan held her breath as the smell was becoming rancid by the second as she grabbed a pail to put the organs into and carefully carved the meat and separated by cuts. Yossie laid out the cuts by choice, best to the worst, from left to right. She wiped the sweat away from her brow and carried the bigger pieces in as Mako-chan took the smaller cuts into a makeshift refrigerator in the ground.
"The water from the ocean can keep it cool as long as it is in the shade." She instructed as Yossie gave her two leaf-wrapped packages for her journey to the beach.
Mako-chan stood there wondering what she was going to do with the organs as they started to attract flies. Yossie chased Mako-chan out of the hut and headed home as the sun was slowly setting. She managed to get to the beach right before the sun was ready to set and dug a quick hole to cover the meat. She walked over to the wreckage for any supplies that were savaged and managed to get a few good-quality blankets.
She placed one over the hole so she could sit on it as the other was to keep her warm from the cold. Mako-chan was impressed by the woman with her skills and how she dismantled the pig impressed her. However, the deep concern was obvious that she looked Japanese and if she crashed near Japan, there would be a chance to get rescued.
The sunset was a wonderful sight as she spent her first hours alone on an island with a prepared woman. However, the dark presented its challenges with the noise and the fear of predators. The gentle waves cancelled out most of the sound from the forest but the lurking of nocturnal animals was becoming her biggest concern.
"What else could there be?" She spoke to the sky and a howl boomed through the forest startling her.
Mako-chan knew that she had to learn a few more tricks before she could live on her own but to access Yossie everyday would be a hassle and she started to mentally list down particular things she needed to learn.
"Make a fire."
"Shielding predators."
"Fishing."
She hoped the morning would come soon enough to ask the questions and then she heard a ruffle in the brush and a bright light was coming out of the forest. Mako-chan tracked the light and eventually got out to the beach as it was coming towards her direction. Then, it stopped by the airplane as it rummaged through there before heading her way again and within a few minutes, it was a couple yards away from her.
"Where are you?" It whispered as Mako-chan recognized the voice but was afraid to reply and decided to shine a piece of metal towards the moon.
"Why are you blinding me?" Yossie put the fire near her face as she recognized her.
"I wasn't sure if it was you." She grinned as she threw thumbs up.
"Good job. I never expected you to have fast thinking." She complimented her as she placed the torch next to her.
"Why are you out here?"
"I never slept outside before so I wanted to try it and since you needed company I decided to join you." She sprawled out on the sand and closed her eyes as Mako-chan watched her until she managed to get shut eye. The next morning she awoke to Yossie casting a line into the ocean.
I hope she teaches me too
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A YoMako pairing? :shocked ! Interesting.... :twothumbs !
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*sqeals like a lil piggy* This was really good! Man, I wanted to know more of what was going to happen. You should continue with some naughtyness added lol :twisted:
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@Maike rare isn't it?
@Atreyuxex we'll see if it ever ventures there, might be out of frustration when time comes :nervous
Chapter 2
Her bare back was of golden brown as Ogawa admired her swinging of the pole and witnessing the bait fly out 200 feet out into the clear sea. Yossie stuck the pole into the sand and waited for the line to pull as she turned to see Ogawa staring blankly at her.
"Oi, come out here and fish with me." Yossie waved her over to come to the shoreline.
Mako-chan jogged over and took a seat right of her as she stared at the casted line. Couple minutes later, she was concentrating on her shaped arms as she posted them onto the sand waiting for a bite. Then, as she looked towards her right the line went crazy and Yossie took control of the pole as Ogawa watched in awe. She started to spin the reel as fast as she could with pauses after five full turns as the fish came right towards them.
"Catch it when it comes our way." Yossie instructed her while the line was twenty feet out and closing in.
Mako-chan was prepared for the fish as she faced the ocean and Yossie swung the pole towards her not noticing her face was at the height of the fish and slapped her across the face. Yossie managed to catch it as it was coming towards her and held it up as she looked at Ogawa.
"Did I catch the fish?" She said while the stars were still visible in her eyes.
"I got it. Let's go back to cook it for lunch." Yossie lifted her off the sand and took her to the shade below the trees as she went back into the forest.
Her head was still stunned from the fish but she managed to wobble into Yossie's area as she was throwing sticks into the fire and walked back into the hut to put a shirt on hiding her tanned skin. Ogawa took a seat away from the sun and closed her eyes for bit trying to eliminate the headache. A few minutes later, she found the contents of her stomach exiting her mouth as Yossie placed the fish on a grill.
Yossie watched from the fire Ogawa struggling to keep herself upright as she was near stumbling at certain points before arriving at the hut with a smile on her face. She held her head, shielding the sun from her eyes, while Yossie dug through her items for headaches.
She got her a towel and ran to the water source to keep it moistened and placed it on top of her head as Ogawa went slowly into a nap. Yossie turned the fish over after seeing the charred skin burnt enough to be considered cooked and edible. However, she was gaining questions in her mind about the girl. She fought it off until she saw her turn over in bed and smiled as she was starting to sleep comfortably.
Where did she come from?
Why is there a plane here?
Why is she here?
She kept repeating the questions to herself as the fish started to char nicely. It was weird for her to be thinking about that and it reminded how she was left here.
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Years ago, she had taken a plane ride alone to Australia to take part in a marathon, when the plane experience engine trouble and in an instant it took a nose dive into the forest. She rolled out of the plane after the crash and saw no other survivors. She began to weep as she ventured through the dark wooded area until she found a piece of flat land ready to be used as a collection of sticks and leaves. Yossie used whatever was there to make the first sleeping place, hoping there would have a search party.
One day would pass and no planes passed by
Two days would pass with no plane.
A week after the accident, a plane had flown over the island but Yossie saw slow to gain its attention and decided to make a hut for her survival. She slowly learned the flora of the forest and eventually the island itself. She estimated the size at sixty meters from the middle to the beaches around her. Her first attempt was horrible as the winds swirled and caused it to crash many times until she dug up an adhesive to keep the structure up for the winds.
The first hut was good enough for a year but eventually it crumbled from the abuse of the weather and decided make a stronger one with the materials scattered across the island. Many of the stronger materials were from the plane and made a strong foundation as all the metal supported the walls as she built the outside with wood pieces. However, the rust was obviously eating the walls and tore it down after a few months of living.
This hut was made of two trees and the use of a homemade saw. It was structurally great with the log holding the thatched roof. The increased space made the hut homier than the other two thus making hidden compartments to keep her safe from any animals that would come her way.
Despite the protection, she had to test out skills for hunting because she was hungry for meat and the small berries were not enough to carry on with her energy. She only made a spear for that purpose and had to use it on a fast deer as it glanced over for a few seconds before it strolled away. Yossie held it up high and threw as far as she could forward knocking the deer off its feet before it recovered and into the deep forest.
Upon inspection, her spear did little damage and scrounged around for other materials and desperately shaped it into a sharp point. After a few tests on trees, Yossie walked into the forest and approached a wild pig. She kept her concentration on the pig as it stared at her hiding the spear behind her back. She was afraid of it charging and lifted the spear up to an easy kill between the eyes.
She sloppily dismantled the pig and left it out after the exhaustion of doing it all at one time. Yossie quickly learned that the meat wasn't going to be preserved on its own and lost half of it within a week. Fortunately, she got another pig and did it correctly with her new created cooler by her side preserving it a little while longer.
That was three years ago and now a student for her teachings.
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Yossie took the fish off the grill onto a giant leaf to cool off as she checked behind her to see if she was still sleeping and walked away from the camp. She headed to the beach where Mako-chan was staying and down the coastline, there was a plane with the wings torn off. Yossie figured that it was a plane crash that brought her here and she looked towards the ocean with a pain in her heart.
It is happening again.
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are you going to add some characters here?haha.
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are you going to add some characters here?haha.
I would if they weren't stuck on an island :lol: :lol:
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eh?you mean the characters here are just YoMako feat. wiLd animals and fish?hehe but yeah i like this.. hmm hmm! reaLLy.!
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Ehehehehe, I'm squealing still. This story is getting so good!
kurosawa87 - please add raunchyness when you feel the time is right =P. It doesn't have to be so naughty, that it goes into the perv section lol but omg, I'm all wiggly waiting for what happens next. :grin:
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ahhh...it's so good..the story only has 2 character,but you can make it so interesting.
can't wait for the next update..
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eh?you mean the characters here are just YoMako feat. wiLd animals and fish?hehe but yeah i like this.. hmm hmm! reaLLy.!
I was intending to add others but it will be later on when they are not on the island XD
@Atreyuex: The first sentence of this past chapter wasn't enough I guess, but you know it moves along, although IDK how long until I get them into a personal/sensual relationship
@yukofan: welcome, I will add however who I might add will be worked out later on
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kameshige please add them!!! :) hehe just kidding but im hoping! :) luvlots!
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kameshige please add them!!! :) hehe just kidding but im hoping! :) luvlots!
could be possible but I might have an idea to have them in one-shots or a future fic :nervous
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I shall be waiting, kurosawa87 :grin:
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oh reaLLy?! thank you very much!! and yeah :) maikea will be waiting for your next update and to your future fics!! ^___^
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Well the next chapter
Chapter 3
Ogawa woke up from her nap seeing two bowls of fish in front of her. She wondered where Yossie had gone off and waited patiently for her return. Mako-chan scanned around the area thinking of the direction she would go off to but the fish was gaining her attention. She took a flake of the fish and stuck between her cheek and teeth, trying to suck out the juices before chewing it.
A few hours passed by and the sun was heading towards the west as she began to wonder if she went out hunting. She decided to rid of her top undergarment to get her body to cool down a bit. With only her shirt on, Mako-chan headed toward the wreckage and took a few steps before feeling a presence behind her.
“Why do I feel someone is behind me?”
“Do you think you were the only one on the island?” Mako-chan turned and noticed no one behind her.
She felt her shirt being tugged downwards to a shorter blonde woman. She released the shirt as she got her attention and took a few steps back.
“I thought everyone died on the plane.” Her eyes rolled upwards and shook her head.
“You were out cold and I left the area to find a place to stay. My hut is on the other side of the island.” She pointed away from the crash site.
Mako-chan figured that she didn’t know about Yossie, so it would be easier to get her. However, she was mistaken as she headed into the hut to grab a spear. She waved goodbye as she left with the weapon and turned around to find Yossie with a bunch of fishes on the line. Mako-chan grabbed the bunch and led her back to the hut as she pondered if she should ask the question.
Yossie quickly went in and out of the hut as she shook her head.
“Did someone come in here?” She nodded.
“What does she look like?” Mako-chan explained the woman in detail and it intrigued her that someone so short was able to survive.
“I’ll show you how to cook it.” Yossie laid out two of the bunch onto the grill.
After Yossie had gone through her instructions, Mako-chan bit off the freshly grilled fish, and waved at it to cool down as she chewed on it. It was moist and definitely something that she wouldn’t mind eating on a daily basis but in the back of her mind, she had wondered about the short person across the island.
She had thought that giving her a visit would give her insight to the person but she would wonder what else could be lurking out there. Mako-chan was still not wilderness ready despite her own mentality telling her to try but throughout her thoughts, she had Yossie on her mind. Her heart started going crazy just thinking about her that she didn’t realize she had come face to face with her.
“Are you okay?”
“Yes, I’m fine.” She said panicking.
“Are you planning to hunt tomorrow?” Yossie asked as she looked at her collection of dwindling spears.
“I don’t know yet, but if I need anything I will ask you.” Mako-chan looked at the marvelous color of the fire as it sparkled with red, yellow, and orange hues to the night sky.
“Well… you can help yourself.” Yossie stuttered as she turned back to the entrance.
She was in disbelief that she stuttered in front of her. She was holding herself up to the challenge of being alone but the woman had given her a chance to communicate. It was high school again in her mind and heart as she remembered her happy-go-lucky days. It was carefree but the fact was the rumors of her being a boy hurt her. She was a woman everyplace but showing it was difficult to accept.
Mako-chan looked back in the hut as Yossie was in deep thinking as she started to mumble to herself. She headed back into the hut and took a mat from the side and laid it out on the ground. She posed onto the floor as she began to wonder what was happening in her mind before falling asleep.
Yossie looked down at the sleeping woman as she finished her talk to herself and began to get ready for bed but the sound of thunder from the west indicated a bad storm. She blew out the fire and blocked the entrance with a cloth and a bag filled with sand. She sat down next to her hearing the rain hitting the roof as she wavered back and forth in her exhaustion.
Seconds later, her head was on something soft and closed her eyes.
“Yossie. Wake up.” The voice triggered her to shoot up as she noticed the water dripping from the roof.
“Mako-chan, did the water hit you?” She shook her head.
“Your head… it was…” Yossie noticed how her mat was facing and gave her a blank look.
“Spill it.” She commanded.
“Your head was on my chest the whole night, every time you adjusted, I felt uneasy.” Yossie looked at her hands before looking up at Mako-chan.
She was still clueless to the explanation until she stared at her shirt and the oblong shape was unusual to her brain. After a few minutes, she tried to place the events altogether to realize the soft pillow wasn’t a pillow at all. Yossie smiled as she walked over to her and gave her a hug.
“When did you take it off?”
“Yesterday when I went looking for you after that blonde woman came to steal the spear from you.” Yossie nodded. Then there was a noise outside and Yossie stuck her head out and noticed a short woman outside with a spear.
“I want to ask for a battle.” Yossie tilted her head.
“Why?” The shorter woman stuck her chest as she bumped into her.
“I want to know who is stronger between us two.” Yossie let a loud roar.
“I don’t want to kill you, if we can help we should, but I’m fine on my own.” The spear’s point was right at her chin causing Mako-chan to step out.
The shorter woman withdrew her spear as Mako-chan walked towards her and aimed it at her. Yossie knocked the spear out of her hand and she immediately rolled over to protect the weapon from her possession. Mako-chan took a step to the side as she was kneeling still with the spear in her right hand.
“If we don’t fight then we cannot determine who runs the island.” Yossie shook her head.
“We all share the island as long as we live here so you can do your own thing as I do mines.” The shorter woman watched both entered back into the hut.
The woman left disgruntled and still offering the challenge despite the declination. Yossie looked at Mako-chan hinting if it was the right decision. She felt that competing wouldn’t help the cause but if she wanted to maintain the island, she had to face her one on one for certain issues. While she began contemplating, Mako-chan walked out to the other camp and saw the hut along the beach.
“What do you want?” She yelled out.
“I wanted to ask why you wanted to fight Yossie.”
“She has no control over everything and I want that control.” She yelled out as Mako-chan walked closer to the hut.
“We should work together rather than fight.” She stepped out of the hut and stood chest to chest with her.
“I don’t like you. That’s why if I get my way, you’ll be easy to target.” She smiled as Mako-chan bowed towards her.
“I hold no grudge against you.” She extended her arms and got her to move back a couple steps and Mako-chan returned the push back causing her to fall to the ground.
She stood back up and charged towards her. Mako-chan dodged the attack and watched her run into the waves. She recovered her stance and charged back the other way tripping into the sand face first. Mako-chan was amused with her spirit but it seemed that she wouldn’t give up until she came and the knee stopped her progress as she flew over into the shoreline.
“Are you okay?” The woman let out a groan and stood up.
“I’m fine, you are just lucky that’s all.” That was her final words before walking into her hut red from embarrassment.
I wonder if she understands what she is doing.
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Omgggggggggggggg, you updated!
Oooh, this is getting soooo good. You totally got me addicted here. :grin:
I wonder who the little other blonde woman is...
I'll be waiting for your next chapter ,kurosawa87 :grin:
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@Atre here's the identity
Chapter 4
Mako-chan returned to the hut where Yossie was taking a nap. She noticed her shirt was riding up revealing her midsection. The younger woman was impressed by her physique and how cute she was sleeping. Mako-chan turned to the forest to discover a pig walking up to her.
It looked smaller than the one she had killed a few days ago but it didn’t present any danger as it walked past her and grunted at Yossie. The woman woke up to the sight of the pig and rubbed its head.
“Buu-chan, how are you doing?” Yossie grinned at the pig as the pig was now staring at Mako-chan.
She took a step back away from the pig as it trotted over and rubbed its face on her shin. She kneeled down to its level and ran her thumb between its eyes. The pig growled with every brush past its eyes and ran back to the blonde-haired woman for scraps.
“Are you planning to…?” She held up her hand.
“It protected me from other animals; it deserves to live as long as it protects me.” Yossie gave it the last bit before running back into the forest.
Yossie traveled back to the beach to gather her fishing pole and returned back to find someone walking into the forest. It was a blond woman that Mako-chan described to her and trailed her as she held a spear up ready to attack a deer. Yossie knew that her height would be a disadvantage and the angle would not help her get any food. The spear flew and knocked the deer in the hind end causing it to prance off deeper.
She ran after it as Yossie quickly sought the opportunity to help her out and tackled the deer to the ground. Yossie looked up and saw the woman with the spear to her side. The deer bucked out of her control and ran away as she lifted Yossie off the ground.
“Why did you tackle the deer?” She threw the spear to the side and took a seat next to her.
“Didn’t you want the deer?” She nodded.
“I was trying to help you.”
“I was almost there if you didn’t interfere.” Yossie slanted her eyes and walked away from the situation.
“I’m sorry. I will avoid interfering in your hunt.” Yossie said in a calm voice.
Yossie returned back to the camp feeling the frustration of the other person’s attitude. She didn’t like her since her arrival and feared Mako-chan could have been the same. She disrespected the natural flow of the island with her loud noises and overcultivation of the crops. Yossie had warned her to stop stocking up because of the rain storms that hit the island often.
“Yossie, do you know who is she?” She nodded slowly with her pained expression.
“Her name is Gooch. She has an independence problem. She doesn’t like help from anybody and sometimes desperately grabs stuff to survive.” Yossie explained as Mako-chan knew of her appearance.
“Luckily, I can protect myself from her.” She boasted as Yossie dropped a fist on her head.
“We are going to help her no matter what she says. I have my duty to assist.” Yossie gave her usual smirk before walking into the hut.
It was another quiet night in their area as they ate the leftover fish with berries. Mako-chan was glad Yossie was here to help but the events that brought her here still was weighing on her. Her dreams usually consist of Yossie asking her for something brave she can do for her but ending in failure. Mako-chan fought through her thoughts before managing to sleep but her exhaustion carried onto the next day.
“You don’t look too good.” Yossie commented seeing Mako-chan pale.
“I feel okay, just been tired.” Yossie shook her head as she felt the forehead.
“Rest in here for now while I get something to cool you down.” Yossie ran out of the hut while Mako-chan rested on the mat.
She knew she was feeling ill but when the room started to spin, she knew it was serious. Her body felt heavy as she got onto her side and stuck her head out the hut. Her eyes fluttered as the heat was getting to her and the feeling in her stomach was becoming intense with gurgling. Her breathing became hard as she tried to find a place to hurl and sat on her knees to give enough space for it to exit her body.
She crawled back with the spinning still occurring in her head. She thought Yossie had come back but it was the other woman with a smile on her face.
“Get out of here.”
“I won’t because I can help you.” She brought in a small kit of water and medicine into the hut as she forced her to consume it as soon as possible.
The feeling in her stomach came again and rushed out to let out the bad stuff in her system. She returned still feeling exhausted but the spinning went away. Mako-chan closed her eyes as the woman exited the hut with Yossie arriving with a few pieces of fruit and water. She saw her snoozing away and decided to follow the woman back to her hut by the beach.
Yossie sneaked to the farthest point that was within her view and tried to seek what was in there. At the far distance, it was barely visible and she sneaked closer until there was no shrub left to cover her identity. She began to thought that she must have gotten someone to build her hut with the designs but something about it interested her and she headed for the door.
She knocked it three time and out came her with a t-shirt tied in the front with the fruits laid out in small bunches by size.
“Thanks for helping her.” She said softly as the woman grinned.
“It was no big deal. I just saw you run out so I thought that she was sick and guessed correctly. She has a weak immune system.” Yossie tilted her head.
“I forgot to mention that I’m a doctor in natural and holistic medicine.” Her nervous giggling was unusual for her as her mean-spirited attitude would appear naturally.
“I see. Thank you for helping her.” Yossie turned away and felt a hand grabbed her.
“You can call me Yaguchi or Mari-chan. I’m sorry for being a pain in trying to receive help but I never thought it would be useful in nature so I tried out my theories.” Yossie walked back and let her explain about her life.
Yaguchi was known for her friendliness but human nature always seemed to come out at the wrong time with competition. She liked Yossie from a helpful guide but not as her mother. She wanted to learn about the life out here and the crash landing gave her an opportunity. Yossie became amused by her story but the fruits were a concern until she explained about making medicine from it.
“Do you have extra supplies if the big storm comes?” Yaguchi shook her head as she was planning to use everything before the unexpected time.
“I think Mako-chan should be up soon. I’ll see you later.” She waved goodbye as the woman’s heart started to feel weird.
Why do I feel so weird? This feeling is weird. I better get back to work.
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! So it's Mari! Poor Makoto, being all pukey and stuff.
So awsome :grin:. I'm so loving this story! Can't wait till the next chapter :grin:
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@atre here ya go
Chapter 5
Mako-chan opened her eyes still feeling the grogginess within her head. She sat up for a bit before sliding back down to her back.
“Rest, you still look tired,” Yossie consoled the younger woman as she put another towel on her head.
Mako-chan closed her eyes again while Yossie went back outside to work on the fire. Yaguchi had her hands filled with twigs and dropped to the right of the prep person.
“How is she doing?” Yaguchi asked with her eyes on the growing fire.
“She seems okay,” Yossie hesitated as she threw a few twigs onto the growing fire.
Yossie concentrated on the sick woman with her fire slowly building from the separate embers. She changed the towel every so often with Yaguchi doing the footwork to transport the towel from the river and back. Yossie began to burn leaves to kill time as she contemplated over the meal.
The woman knew she was doing the right thing but keeping her on the island would risk her own life. Yossie became concerned and looked over at Yaguchi, who was staring at the bright fire in front of her.
“Are you planning to return?” Yossie suspired through the thick air.
“One day.” She replied worriedly.
“I want to go back home,” she confessed as Yaguchi slanted her eyes.
“Where are you from?”
“Saitama, but I was living in Tokyo before becoming a mariner on an all-female ship.”
“You must have been the captain.” Yaguchi insightfully pointed out.
She nodded deeply as the old saying goes “Captain goes down with the ship.” Yaguchi looked back at Mako-chan who was sitting up with her heavy eyelids readying to wake up. She let out a yawn before crawling outside with the warm fire in front of them.
“What are you guys talking about?” She asked with the heaviness in her voice.
“We should plan a return back to Japan.” Yaguchi stated as she stood up to let the sick woman sit near the fire.
“How shall we proceed?”
The question rattled the group as the idea was present but the plan was still far from perfect and with the planes rarely coming overhead, they would need to work together to succeed. Just as they seem to run out of words, Buu-chan trotted by with a leaf for Yossie. She gladly took it and rubbed the dew on top of the pig’s head while it gleefully snorted.
“Maybe we can talk about it over dinner,” Yaguchi suggested.
The group agreed and laid out a slab of ribs to cook while they brainstormed a plan that could work for the distance but that seemed variable as they had no clue how far they were away. Mako-chan raised her hand to present a theory but was not noticed and continued to speak out of turn.
“I think the best way is to observe the waves for a good day and hope we can get there within a few days.”
The elder women looked at each other and left the observing to her while they cook the meat for their meal. She fought through the forest to get to the beach where the waves were small and the currents were manageable for a raft. Mako-chan scanned the area for a rock to stand on to have a better view of the ocean beyond the shoreline. She began to see the reef and then deep blue ocean beyond the turquoise water.
Mako-chan felt uneasy about the lack of land close to the island but she thought about exploring on her own for a path back to Japan or at least a rescue. She returned to the camp to the two women barebacked because of humidity and took off her shirt for good measure before joining them.
“What did you see out there?” Yossie asked as the meat was placed on a leaf.
“No land within couple hundred feet.” She replied with a disappointing tone.
“I see. Let’s eat before it gets cold,” she announced as the three gathered around the leaf.
The three separately tore off a piece of meat in silence and chewed on it as the day went by. The silence wasn’t too calming for the group but they wished for something to talk about among them. Mako-chan observed the two eating and quickly turned away into the hut.
“Is she still sick?” Yaguchi placed another piece in her mouth while she watched her sit down.
“I don’t know, it could be anything,” Yossie replied as she crawled in sitting next to her.
She didn’t notice the blonde woman walk into the hut and turned to find her hands on top of her shoulder slowly massaging them. She quickly relaxed as Yossie progressed through the sensual massage with her hands gently grabbing her arms. The tension was slowly going away until her arms coiled around her body right below her chest.
My heart is beating too fast.
Yossie is making me nervous.
I got to make a move.
Mako-chan spun around and grabbed onto Yossie as they both fell to the ground. Yossie had a pained expression trying to release the grip of the younger woman. Mako-chan felt something poke her front but could manage that pain but the movement in the panic was giving her some unintended pleasure.
“Stop making out in there,” the eldest of the group scolded them as she crawled into the hut seeing the two near each other and the after effects of their bodies rubbing each other.
Yossie removed herself from the pile and bowed to Yaguchi as Mako-chan followed her. Just as they apologized, the rain slowly pattered the ground below, putting out the fire, and giving them reason to stay under the roof for a bit. The three managed to sit at wherever was comfortable and waited out for the rain.
The group avoided eye contact for a while before attempting to find a place to rest with the rain not letting up. They lined up in a row with their heads at the entrance. The shortest one was in the middle as Mako-chan laid the left of her and Yossie taking the opposite side. Yaguchi grabbed a shirt from the storage and threw it on top of her body while the other two decided to leave themselves barebacked.
“Don’t you guys have shame being with other women naked?” Yaguchi asked to the both of them.
“It is still hot yet.” Yossie replied as she saw the hand left of Yaguchi land on her.
“Well I guess you got your answer,” Yossie joked as she turned away to sleep leaving Yaguchi uncomfortably waiting for the hand to move away.
This is embarrassing.
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i know its yaguchi :) from d description 'blonde' ? nd woah.! nice chapter kuro.!very nice chapter!!!!!
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@kurosawa87, THANK YOU!
Ah, I like Buu-Chan. It sounds like a really cute piggeh.
Ooh, Makoto sounds really sick :sweatdrop: I hope she stays well enough for Yossi to touch her more :twisted:.
As useuall, I shall be waiting for the next chapter. :grin: Totally loving it :deco:
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@maike: lol I had to add her it has history too
@Atre more touching should be coming up but it also leads to more intrigue among the characters. Buu-chan is awesome :)
Chapter 6
The humidity made the days long as they wished for winds to cool them down. The only coolant was the ocean but the sun only could keep it warm for their bodies. The trio lounged most of the day waiting for the sun to set before they did their labor in the twilight. They dug into the dry dirt before adding sea water to create mud for the three of them and slathered themselves with the mixture.
The sun returned with its heat but with the layer of protection, they took on their usual duties of gathering and hunting. Luckily, the winds returned through their area to give them a nice relief. Mako-chan returned to the ocean to do more research while casting out a line for fish. The first task was not as important as the second but if she could find a way to get off the island; it would be a way to get rescued.
She got a few fish before her return but saw an interesting sight farther east than expected. Mako-chan dropped off the food to Yossie and headed toward the hill to seek the land mass. In her glee, she assumed that the land was uninhabited and told the group about the land. Yaguchi informed them about the trees near her camp and they started to make axes from the branches and rocks in the area.
The trio became ready with their weapons and chopped down a few trees for their raft. They carried it into the storage area below Yaguchi’s house as they gathered other items. They began to realize that the teamwork was coming together with their time being around each other. However, the living conditions did create a friction among them.
Yaguchi became closer with the stronger woman with fierce competition from Mako-chan. They kept quiet about the situation but Yossie was becoming suspicious and took the younger woman out to sea while Yaguchi was doing her research.
“It’s nice out here,” Yossie commented as Mako-chan sat on the beach.
“It is nice, I wonder if we can build a raft to leave this island,” she spoke out loud as Yossie took a seat next to her.
“I wonder too…”
Yossie slid onto her hand and kept it there while Mako-chan nervously held her position. She ran her finger along her cheek as Mako-chan became aware of the affection and grabbed her hand. Mako-chan turned her head towards her and lowered the hand to the sand.
“What’s wrong?”
“I don’t feel right like this. It seems public for us to do this here.” She pointed out as Yossie fought off the resistance.
“Yaguchi doesn’t mind this as long as she doesn’t know.” Mako-chan smiled as Yossie took advantage of the situation.
A few hours passed before Yaguchi returned with a bottle of medicine for them to try but realized they weren’t at the camp. She sat down and saw the fishing poles were still in the hut and ran out to the beach where the two were returning. Mako-chan was holding her book giving Yaguchi relief that something had happened and she ran up to her with the idea of building their raft toward the island east of them.
“I guess we need to cut more trees,” she commented.
“We don’t have the resources or the wind to help us, so oars are the best guiding tools.” Yaguchi agreed and asked them to try a new medicine.
The two drank the vials and took a seat inside the hut. Yaguchi watched them doze off and quickly wrote down her findings. She observed Yossie for most of the time and leaned in for a kiss a few times before taking down more notes about the two. They woke up to Yaguchi snoring upright.
“I guess it must have been a sleeping medicine.” Yossie yawned to Mako-chan as she copied her motion.
“Coconut is pretty good as flavoring; I wonder where she got that from.” The two shrugged their shoulders and started their fire for the meal.
Yossie got the prepped fish and threw on top of the roaring fire. The sound was complementary to the woman’s unusual snoring. Mako-chan turned over the fish upon Yossie’s instructions and the skin became crisp with every turn as Yaguchi woke up.
“You guys looked refreshed.” She murmured.
“How did you get coconut?” Mako-chan asked.
“It wasn’t coconut.” Mako-chan began to mock the taste again and felt it was coconut she tasted.
“So what was that fruity taste?”
“It was fermented berries.” Mako-chan was surprised by the discovery and Yossie gave her a piece of grilled fish.
Yaguchi began to rip into the fish as she glanced over at the two every few seconds before Yossie moved over to her side. The older woman became surprised when she grabbed her hand and spilt the fish onto the ground. Mako-chan held her hand over her mouth while the entertainment was unraveling in front of her. Yaguchi pushed Yossie away and stood over her.
“I’m sorry, I was just wondering why you were looking at us weird.” Yossie apologized as Yaguchi returned to her spot.
“It’s just… I don’t want to say.” The two looked at each other before returning their attention to Yaguchi.
“You should say it because if you don’t release it, you may lash out at us for nothing at all.” Mako-chan advised her and Mari took a deep breath before letting come out.
“IreallylikeyouYossie.” She mumbled.
“I see. I guess I have competitors for my service.” Mako-chan slanted her eyes at the statement.
“I guess we can have a battle before we leave here,” she joked.
“I won’t leave without having her,” Mari announced to them.
The three gave awkward looks at each other as Yossie was the problem between the two and left them to sort it out between them. The two exchanged looks of displeasure between them before the younger of the two decided to leave the situation.
“Where are you going?” Mari demanded.
“I’m going to sleep, you should do too.”
Yaguchi nodded and walked towards her hut by the beach. Mako-chan followed Yaguchi to the edge of the forest before turning back. She wondered why she did it and shook off the reason before returning to the hut with Yossie prepared for “sleep.”
She closed the flap to the outside world and snuggled up together. The sounds were the symphony of the jungle until morning when the rain came down hard on the island. The lightning and thunder murmured the noise and then a boom was heard close to them.
Yossie broke the action and heard a cry outside. The little piggy ran in and cuddled with Yossie for the whole night leaving Mako-chan alone in bed.
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@kurosawa87, Oh I can wait :twisted: .
Hot-damn, Makoto and Mari fighting for Yossi lol. That's so great! I think I had read somewhere here about those two sending or not sending Yossi love letters.
Aw no! Poor Buu-chan. I'd just bring the piggy in and it could sleep between me and Makoto.After Buu fell asleep, I'd get down to business with Makoto :twisted:
As always, I shall be waiting. Love, love ,LOVE your story!
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@Atre thnx for the support, it took a while to develop this chapter and to move the story along before it stalled so I apologize with the short one, then again I have too many to deal with right now :nervous
Chapter 7
The morning was less violent than the night with the three waking up to the warmth of the sun. The group was determined to make a raft but the storm caused the wood to become too moist. They rolled it onto the sun to dry it out with the thought they could work on it for the day. Yossie returned to the camp to start hunting leaving the other two to pick fruits for the group.
They went their separate ways for their scavenging and Mako-chan gained a great view through the forest of Yossie as she was staring down the prey. The eyes shot up towards her and bulled through the forest towards Ogawa. She stepped out of the way and jumped onto its back.
“Mako-chan, let go!”
She rolled onto the sand and Yossie struck it down with her spear as the animal let out its last battle cry. Yossie dragged the carcass back to the hut while Mako-chan continued on her journey. She wasn’t aware of the dangers of scavenging for fruits and had to trust by instincts but came up empty with fear of the poison.
“Scared are we?”
“Yes, you should know that I have no knowledge of fruits.” Mako-chan struck back unleashing a smile from the older woman.
“Okay, I’ll let you pass for now. I guess you should learn so you don’t feel out of the loop.” Yaguchi saw the berries behind her and picked out the good ones.
They returned with a handful of berries each and Yossie pointed the spear at both of them. Her expression was of disappointment and threw a bowl at them.
“Behave you two. The best thing we can do is survive and once we leave this island, you guys can fight then.” Yossie gave her stern warning before laying the filet onto the grill.
Yossie picked out one of the berries and stuck it between her cheek and gum as she sucked out the flavor slowly from the fruit. The other two picked one up and bit into it instead feeling the tartness in their mouths, Yossie tilted her head back at their expression.
Yaguchi drank down the jug of water leaving Mako-chan to fight off the tartness on her own and she smacked her lips to rid of the taste. Ogawa moved forward at the fire and smelled the essence of the freshly killed game in front of her. Her eyes were set on the meat as Yossie wiggled in front of her to turn it over.
As she returned to her seat, Yossie decided to lie back while Yaguchi curled up on the other side of her. Mako-chan feeling down, headed out to the beach, and watched the waves. After an hour, she walked back to the other side and felt the logs again. She had a smile on her face as she lined up the logs together.
Ogawa lined it up and noticed the logs were not straight so she ran back to get the axe and shaved away the uneven edges. With one down, she returned to the camp with axe in hand and looked at the two with their meals in front of them.
“We were waiting for you.” Yossie handed the bowl over to her and ripped into her piece.
The group chewed quietly with the sounds of nature surrounding them and then the piggy squirted between them and munched on the berries in the bowl. Yossie brushed back it soft hair while the piggy ate up all the berries they picked.
“That was…”
“Don’t worry, we can get more later.” Mako-chan placed her hand on the shoulder.
“True, let’s go now.” Yaguchi said in a soft voice.
The duo walked back into the forest with their eyes on the fruits, Yaguchi took the lead while Ogawa held out the empty bowl. The elder woman was quick in picking out her fruits and in half an hour, the bowl was filled to the brim. Then, Yaguchi looked up to the sky and ran away without notice leaving Ogawa to return the bowl by herself.
“Where did the short one go?” Yossie questioned her.
“I don’t know.” Ogawa handed over the bowl and sprawled out on the ground to nap.
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“Hello, hello, anyone out there.”
“We hear you faintly.” The radio person replied.
“We are on an island.”
“Okay, we cannot distinguish your location.”
Yaguchi wasn’t too sure on coordinates and tried to leave a clue to them by describing the area. The radio person was unsure to do anything and Yaguchi had to finally give out her name to them. Another person came onto the radio to answer her call.
“Yaguchi-san, I thought you were dead.”
“Kei-chan, I didn’t know you were there.” The short blonde replied with shock written on her face.
“Yes, we are setting up a rescue team to save you.”
“There are two others with me.”
“I see.” Her response was usual of the elder woman when she was unsure of how to approach the situation.
“I may not have this radio soon so you guys will have to trust me and do your best with the directions.” Yaguchi informed the group and turned it off as she let out a sigh of relief.
She returned to the camp with Yossie slowly dozing off and Mako-chan out. She left with the axe to started shaving the next log but her lack of experience with tools, was making the edges rougher and had to adjust angling to get the smoothness Mako-chan made but the mistake took majority of the wood from the log. She threw the axe away in exhaustion and sat down on the sand as she looked out at the pristine ocean.
I hope they can find us…
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Yossie woke up from her nap and crawled into her hut to plan out the next meal but Ogawa blocking the cold compartment, it was proven difficult to move her, and tickle her a bit to get enough space to remove a shoulder piece and left it on the rock outside the hut.
She pulled down the mature leaves from the tree and formed it into makeshift pan. She also grabbed a few rocks and threw it into the fire to heat them up. Leaving with the last task to the sleeping woman and Yossie woke her up to just giving her a shovel and pointed to where she had to dig.
Ogawa pierced the ground only getting centimeters and kept pushing through until the hole was three feet deep and Yossie rounded out the hole for the rocks. Yossie pushed the rocks into the hole as quickly as she can until the bottom was covered and placed the leaves over the rocks before putting the meat into the hole. Yossie quickly threw leaves over the hole covering it for the pig to cook.
“Ogawa, did Yaguchi come back?” She shook her head.
“When is she coming back?” Her question was answered when a place flew over them as she waved at it.
A plane… almost there
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this story is like the reality show-survivor..! a h a h a !but i like it anyway !
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@: kurosawa87 , you're welcome. And thank YOU for the story. I know you have other stories to write, so it's all good.
This is getting really interesting.I wonder if the planes going to be able to find them. And Mr Buu-chan, he sounds really cute :grin:.
Keep it up! I'm always lurking for your updates :grin: