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Title: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: miayaka on June 23, 2012, 09:49:50 PM

MY one shot [Random]

Past and Future Part I [Atsumina]BELOW (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)
Past and Future Part II done [Atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057852#msg1057852)

What iF [Atsuyuu] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1059597#msg1059597)

MASQUERADE PARTY [atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1061244#msg1061244)

SMOOTH CRIMINAL [Atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1062869#msg1062869)

BODY SHOT [Atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1065226#msg1065226)

THE DATING GAME [atsumina version] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1060550#msg1060550)
THE DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1067653#msg1067653)

CASINO ROYALE [Atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1068607#msg1068607)

YOU OCTOPI MY HEART [kaixcchan] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1093929#msg1093929)

MY ONLY WISH [mayuki] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1127213#msg1127213)

FOREVER [Atsumina] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1153409#msg1153409)

This is a two part one shot and this is the part one i shall post the ending tomorrow,
i really just can't make it tonight..I'm still updating Flying with you fic and I'm sleepy... :banghead:

BTW minna.. I created a fictional third character here..
I do Hope you will like it.
I just think of this idea today and write it immediately before it fades on my mind :nervous
and sorry for the name.. I'm really bad in making names haist :lol:
Here you go.. Do~~zo

Past and Future [ATSUMINA]

I felt like I’m lost, I woke up in a different room, different style of atmosphere and different place. I know this place but why it’d different after all, the design the environment and even the house. My mobile phone was still in my pocket but empty bat, I decided to walk down the stairs and then I saw a tall girl with short hair and she’s familiar.

“Ohayou..Finally you’re awake..Come here let’s have breakfast..” she said
“ammm ano..I’f I’m not mistaken your the famous model shinoda mariko right?” I asked her
“Yes I’m shinoda mariko but I’m not a famous model yet, I’m still in akb you now although I’m accepting modeling as another job.”she laughs
“eh?? But..You were! I’ve seen your magazines and commercials. Also you already graduated akb 13 years ago..” my head has lot of stuff right now I’m confused already

“HUH?? What are you talking about its 2011 you know and I never had a plan on graduating in akb yet..Maybe you’re just hungry and tired, come on let’s eat first so that your mind will go back to normal”
“2011??!!” I didn’t believe her, I rushed in living room to view the calendar I’ve opened the newspaper and go outside. Indeed it is a different era, so many questions in my mind this is unbelievable, does travelling in the past really exist? I asked myself and ended crying. My mobile is dead I can’t contact any of my family and friends what should I do. That’s the only thing comes up in my brain.

“Hey you alright? I mean.. you’re crying because its 2011? I don’t get it.. your weird.. you don’t remember anything what happened don’t you?” mariko was worried about my action
“I really don’t remember how I’ve gotten here..in this time, in this year..This place.. I’m was not belonged here..” I said to her while tears flowing in my cheeks
“Sou..so you’re telling me you’re an alien? You have this some kinda power travelling whatever.. oh crap.. Why you kids nowadays..” she face palmed

“As far as I remember I was just in my room yesterday..Looking at the night sky and..” I remembered when after having dinner I went to my room and see’s a falling star, I blurt out in my mouth that I wished I could meet my parents during their akb years and then I was here? Should I be dreaming or something, I pinched myself and bite my own hand to wake me for this dream, but I failed I can feel the pain.
“mariko sama..How did you find me?”

“Oh that! I didn’t find you..Last night when I got home you we’re here already in my house sleeping in my room, so I ended sleeping on the guest room. There was a letter in the bed that say’s I must take care of you, maybe you’re the one that was assign to me..”
“Assign to you? About what?” I asked
“Well as you’ve know akb48 is very popular now and akiP decided to have a charity project which involves foster sibling, it means we shall adopt a homeless kid for 1 week, unexpectedly my name was one who got selected since I’m the oldest among the senbatsu members. So I guess it’s you and I’m not surprise anymore seeing you in my house already.” She explained and I was like what the heck is happening, still I can’t believe it. The only thing in my mind now is to prove to her that I’m telling the truth that I came from year 2045 and I must find a way to get back from my time. I need her help she’s the only one I can trust now.

FLASHBACK

I’m the daughter of the most popular actress and a well known soloist singer. That’s how I described my parents, although they are busy from work still when they come in our house family takes first. As their only daughter the media keep asking of whom I shall take the step from my mom or from pop. Honestly even me don’t know the answer, I’m still 14 years old by the way but already been exposed to media because since I was a little child they never kept me from them. Always bringing me in the studio or shootings they want me to grow that I know what they are doing. Of course we have our private life I go to a normal all girls school, most of my friends were actually my parents friends children. Until this day in my life a curiosity filled my mind. How did my parents become so popular like today? I mean I know they started in a small theater but is that what it takes about making a stepping stone to achieve your dream.

After school I went home directly to finish some projects I was surprise my mom was there already wearing an apron and cooking dinner.

“I’m home..” I greeted my beautiful mom and kisses her
“I finish early today so I decided to cook your favorite shiichan..” my mom and pop called me this name instead of my true name Shikou, most of the people having a hard time to pronounce it, I don’t know where did they get my name. I never ask about it but indeed I like it. My mom the famous Takahashi Maeda Atsuko or so called acchan. She’s the best mom I could ever have although she’s a tsundere always but when she’s at my side I felt no worries. Maybe I got her attitude a shy one because I’m not that friendly to everyone I’m just waiting that someone would approach me.
“itadaima..”my pop comes home too.. The famous song writer and singer this is my pop Takahashi Minami, I called her takapapa. She and my mom are as sweet as always like teenagers I wonder how mom reacted when my pop confesses to her.

“minami..welcome home..”she kisses on lips
“Oh a sweet welcome as always..” takapapa replied
“Mom pop..I’m here and I’m seeing you..The room is up there!” Im pointing their room while they laugh.
When the dinner was served all the three of us will usually talk anything but the topic is always about me, about school and more.

“By the way.. Nyan nyan called me, yuko and her decided to go back her in Japan..They will arrive in the next two days and planning for all of us to meet” my mom change the topic
“Sou? Is their daughther coming here too? She was just like shiichan right same age and year..” takapapa furiously thinking.
“Unnn..They will transfer they daughter in the school where shiichan is studying isn’t that great my baby? You will be able to meet again your playmate”
my mom asked me, but honestly I don’t remember that kid because we were too young way back then like babies I guess since they left japan. So basically I don’t remember her, except for pictures. After the dinner and a little sweet moment with them I went back to my room looking at the night sky in my window. Astonished by the twinkling lights as I keep staring at them until I saw a falling star and immediately wish for it. The only think came up my mind was to meet my parents during their youth in akb I wanna know how they was when we had the same age.

END OF FLASHBACK

I ate breakfast with her, mariko sama that’a what I called her in my time although she’s my god mother my parents are so close to her too. Still my mind is bugging not in full condition thinking how I will surpass this event. Until I was stunned by my own thought, if she’s still in akb that means my parents were there too, my eyes suddenly smile as I can meet them anytime. I wonder what their reaction is if they saw me their future daughter.

“By the way..How should I call you? Your name is not written in the letter” she started a topic while eating.
“unn..ano..Just call me ami chan..Yes that’s it! ami chan..Call me by that” I lied just to hide my true name
“after this, you take the shower first and get dress up, I have some clothes there just choose anything you like. I’m going to the theater to do some rehearsal in our upcoming concert, I shall bring you there, well that’s my job part of being a foster sibling.” She smiled at me nicely
“haiii.. thank you for accepting me in your home, by the way do have any wire that could charge my mobile? Its dead and I need to recharge it.” I showed her my mobile phone

“Kakoii! Where did you get this? What model is this? It’s kinda so advance..But I think I don’t have any charger like that.. Maybe we will ask the other members in the theater I bet they have, most of them are cellphone addicts.” She said while still looking at my phone.
“ahh this was just a gift from me.. I don’t know where did they buy it..gomen” I lied again
“Nah it’s alright.. Just continue eating there and let’s prepare after this” she’s so kind and responsible no wonder the wishing star gave me to her.

After I ate the breakfast I immediately prepare myself while taking the shower there was this feeling inside me that part was excited and part was nervous. I picked mariko sama’s clothes, I choose the one that’s small that it could fit my height well because we really have big difference when it comes to height. I’ve waited for her in the living room as I’m the one who finish early preparing. After 30 minutes she she’s all done and we’ll get going to the theater. She told me that I can watch the rehearsal with them and promised to behave while being there.

Finally we arrived at the practice hall, it was big and full of mirrors I just sat in the corner and mari sama smiled at me while she’s going to change her clothes for dancing practice. A lot of members where there without a doubt akb48 was really crowded when they unite like this. I felt like I’m watching one of their documentaries way back before, this exact scene was really similar to it. Girls were divided into different circle of friends, some were chatting just behind me and some were doing warm ups already but among them my eyes are keep searching for familiar faces until I saw them. The most familiar faces I’d like to see my so called aunt in my time miichan, tomochin, yukirin, sayaka, haruna and oh there she was yuko. They were happily talking as expected yuko sama is so lively and possessive to nyan nyan always clinging into her not letting her go while I can see haruna sama is kinda bit pissed of her skin ship style. While looking at them I didn’t know I was smiling being entertained by their actions just by looking at them.

“Why are you smiling all by yourself?” mariko noticed it
“Ahh nothing…I’m just enjoying all the people here..It’s just like a dream..” yes it was like a dream being here but this now reality I’m in the past. When suddenly I heard a voice commanding them to set their formation a small figure was walking in front of me going to the center so that everyone would notice her. My heart thumps as I see this person it was my takapapa her hair was long and had a ribbon on it, I stared at her so much that I want to hug her. Before I could feel the moment a girl was running explaining why she’s late she bowed to takapapa for a moment and when she lifted her head I was like I wanted to cry hard, it was my mom! I shout in my thoughts. She’s so pretty and cute like an angel, my tears wear rolling I could’t help it. I miss my parents so much and I’m in the past seeing them that they haven’t even know me yet. I can hear my own sob as I wipe my tears I really can’t control them I cry rapidly mom always says I have this genes from pop a cry baby.

“Why are you crying? Did something happen?” a girl approaches me and offered a tissue, this girl was sae when I see her I cried more, wanting for comfort that my mom could do.
“Sae chan what did you do to her?” mariko runs toward me and so as the other members I felt like I caught up their attention, but that’s not my intention at all I just feel emotional.

“Eh?? I didn’t do anything to her” sae raising her both hands
“marichan..is she your foster sibling?” haruna asking her
“Yes she is.. her name is ami chan.. minna meet ami chan my foster sibling sh just arrived last night so I bring her today..” mariko introduce me to them and say greeted nicely. I replied to them as I wipe my tears.

“Sorry mariko sama..I was just thinking of something that made me cry, Sae didn’t do anything..” I explained
“You are really weird, a moment ago I just saw you smiling and now you’re crying..” she tapped me on my shoulder.
“She’s cute and she has a familiar face.. I wonder..” tomochin staring at me closely I feel tense because she’s good in observing people.
“AHA! I know! Your face is like acchan.. ne?? Look at her!” miichan is now looking at me too and I don’t know what to do. I started to panicked deep inside.

“Your right miichan..They have the same face features except her hair it’s like more on takamina” tomochin got it all correct. I have the same face and height as mom except for my hair that I got it from takapapa. I just look down I don’t know what to do my hands are cold and im really nervous. I just gulp raising my head slowly looking at acchan my mom and takamina papa. They were staring at me too in curiosity. I was just saved when the choreographer arrived requesting them to start the practice already. I felt relieve as they walked all away from me, I still sat on the corner where I can see them dancing. Thinking of how I could escape this time how could I go back in the future, maybe I should seek another falling star and wish again? That’s the only solution I knew to end this timed trouble.

TBC...
tomorrow i finish this..promise! this is just a two part one shot :)
do leave your comments.. :jphip:

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: acchaniu on June 23, 2012, 10:28:10 PM

Yey :))))
arigatou
waiting for part 2
bwt flying with you rocks
iloveyourwork :yuki:
:sashiko:

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: Haruko on June 24, 2012, 01:35:46 AM

OMG! your fic is so awesome :D.. i love this past/future fic :D kojiyuu and atsumina so lovely :D..

Sorry but i cant tell you how much i love this fic :D thanx

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: Sydney W on June 24, 2012, 02:18:14 AM

Owhh, Atsumina future daughter meet their young parents. Hehehe

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: Tanchan on June 24, 2012, 03:23:51 AM

Ha ha this is so cute. Atsumina's future daughter. I wonder if she looks like Takamina too, minus the hair part.

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: Keisthename on June 24, 2012, 03:43:08 AM

OMG! I might say you really have wild imaginations! and it's good for an author!! Hahaha

I like the fact that you're pushing the impossible to make it possible. you know like having babies and all from AtsuMina couple, and I really like it and in your fics it was always so believable. I dont doubt or even laugh about them having children.. Hahaha I actually can't stop giggling imagining that too .. kyaaaaa :mon inluv:

The future and past concepts are well written too, gahd you're amaziiing! I hope to see more updates from you, although please don't stop updating Flying with you fic. I'm now waiting for both updates to come!!! iyeeeeey!!! :mon star: :mon XD:

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: chichay12 on June 24, 2012, 05:19:22 AM

omg!omg!omg!
Wahhh
Part 2!!
This is so amazing!!
Tnx for this. :kneelbow:

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: SakuraKyoto on June 24, 2012, 05:29:04 AM

WOW.. this is really so sweet.. :shy2:
And Takapapa is so cool~ :on cigar:

waiting for your update :on woohoo:

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on June 24, 2012, 06:56:51 AM

Hoho~ This is truly interesting!
Takamina and Acchan still so in love after so many years~
Their daughter went back to the past and see them when they are still in AKB~ XD
Wonder if she'll witness the moment Takamina confessed to Acchan~ :peace:

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past and Future Atsumina (This is a two part one shot)
Post by: ichikawa on June 24, 2012, 10:56:21 AM

Wow~ Wow~ Wow~
Great fic :on GJ:
I'm so waiting for the next update~ :on gay:

Quote from: Yagami.Rai on June 24, 2012, 06:56:51 AM

Wonder if she'll witness the moment Takamina confessed to Acchan~ :peace:

Agree with Yagami.Rai XD

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past meets Future Atsumina (FINISH)
Post by: miayaka on June 24, 2012, 10:48:33 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

Thank you for all your comments!! :oops:
i can't mention you one by one..but you know who you are..thank you muahhhhh
it made me happy..
i'm glad you'll like it minna..
as promised here is the last part!

CONTINUATION

Still not in my real mind I felt like I’m floating with all this happening to me. After their practice they invited me to come along with them for dinner, they have a favorite restaurant and I guess the owner knew them so well so without any reservation they already prepared a private room for us. This moment is much more clearer to me their friendship is really awesome even though their tired in rehearsing they can still manage to be as bubbly as this teasing each other and talking anything they want while I was just watching them. No wonder up until in my time back there in 2045 they are still that close same group like this miichan, mariko, the tomoxtomo, yuko, haruna my parents, sashii is here too, yuki, sae, sayaka and mochii. Except for mayu she always goes home early according to them she still busy at school this time. The private room that were actually in has a karaoke too no wonder they like it here that’s their past time. They even order some drinks with alcohol on it, but of course they didn’t invite me to drink with them.
Takapapa as always isn’t a drinker while my mom acchan this is the first time I’ve seen her drinking a shot of tequila, everyone was shock of her sudden action I thought that was just normal for her age. But I heard miichan sitting beside me she must let it out this time. I wonder what the meaning of miichan’s words is. Yuko and haruna caught my attention always snuggling to one another I really find them sweet especially my aunt yuko she’s this so perverted towards her wife touching and kissing her all the time like there’s no tomorrow. Until I noticed that all this time my parents were not actually talking and also not sitting with other like they were looking away each other, this scene bothered me because I’m not used of it. In my time they were so sweet always and I haven’t seen them argue once in front of me, so I asked mariko sama about this.

“Mariko sama…Is takamina and acchan not that close?” I asked her I know she’s kinda drunk a bit but she can still talk normally.
“Ah they were close very close..They were best friends you know.. We even tease them to be together” she laughs “But I guess they have this emotional issues with each other, let’s just say it’s an adult feeling..Waiting for one another to confess but feeling that jealous craze already” she continued while laughing, the others can’t hear us because yuko was singing so loud and they were singing too along with her.

“oh I see.. They haven’t been together this time.. I mean.. Their still best friends” I corrected myself, I must not ruin the past I must behave and do nothing. I excuse myself as I need to go to the comfort room to pee. I took long enough there even though I was finish I noticed I was alone because the comfort room wasn’t that big after all, I just sit on the bowl in one of the cubicles thinking odd things to get back in my time. When suddenly someone entered and slammed the door, I was about to go out when I heard someone is crying but i stayed in my position and listen to her without making any scratch of noise so that she won’t notice me.

“BAKA!! You really are a fool!” I heard her words she’s talking to herself because no one is answering her so I think she’s alone. Her voice is familiar and I’m sure it was my mom acchan so I intended to listen carefully of what she’s blurting out.

“She doesn’t care at all to you and she doesn’t love you!” she speaking to herself again, she was drunk I would know that because she’s also purging to vomit the alcohol out. I’m much more concern about her feeling right now not in her drunk body. “minami doesn’t love you acchan, maybe I must give up on her” she continues as her voice turn low. My mind was what is this? My mom was the one who first fall in love with pop? I can’t believe this. After she was her face with water to freshen up miichan goes in to her.

“Acchan daijunou desu ka?” miichan was so worried about her
“Unn I’m not fine..You know that..” I can feel she hugged miichan quickly and cries on her shoulder.
“You want me to talk to her? I mean let’s confront her once and for all it affects you a lot and I know she feels it too..You know our captain she’s always like that hiding her true feelings” she’s really talking about takapapa

“No! Let her be! I want her to realize it I want her to configure it out why I’m acting like this” my pretty mom protested and got up, fixing her hair and breathing deeply to act normal again going back to the room where everyone is waiting. When I heard the two of them went out I immediately go out too and pretend I wasn’t in the comfort room.
“Ami chan.. Where did you go? You took so long you said you just pee?” mariko sama asking me
“I went outside after I pee, I need to buy some milk tea at the store and drink it up outside ehehe” I lied and sit back down next to her, I think she believed me because there’s no followed up question. Looking back again in everyone, I can really read the words in takapapa’s lips, asking miichan what happened.

“Miichan is she ok?” takapop is worried and looking at her while acchan acts normal laughing along with yuko and the others. Miichan just shake her head.
“No she’s not! Bakamina.. you knew that! Can you just be honest with her? I mean you two are pathetic keeping that feeling inside, when are you planning to let it out? When it’s too late?” my aunt miichan scolding my pop whoa this is just another scene that I really don’t know happening in the future. Somehow being in the past has an advantage too seeing things that you haven’t known in the future. I move closely to them as I listen to their conversation, pretending to pick some foods to chew in their table.

“Miichan..I want to talk to her right now..can you help me?” takapop ask her
“NO! Don’t do that tonight, she’s not in herself she’s drunk..Maybe you can do it when the two of you are normal” miichan stopped her, when she suddenly cheer for the next song, it was my mom who’s going to sing it. The song was First Love by Utada Hikaru, while she’s singing it her tears were falling she just smiled and wipe her tears as she continues the song. It has deep meaning and when I looked at takamina akb’s captain she’s crying too. I was confused why they are crying maybe the song resembles their feeling. When the song has ended everyone claps at her and me too of course.

Tomochin quickly grabbed the microphone to have a jolly song to change the atmosphere as they noticed the intense emotion going out. I was shocked when acchan sit beside me, she don’t want to get back in miichan place because takapop was there. She smiled at me and I’m so happy I really want to hug her but I esist myself from doing it. After a few moments she lean her head on my shoulder and wrap her arms on me, my feeling was unexplainable I don’t want to cry this time I just feel her warm same as ever, her gentle warm my mom that keeps my heart relaxed and protected. When all of a sudden she observe something at the other side, there was mochii clinging on takamina papa, I widened my eyes as I see this girl tickling and biting her ears, honestly I didn’t like it all. Doing that in front of you daughter I pouted and stared at them. Takamina didn’t resist at all, I know she didn’t like it too but she can’t get off with mochii either the girl is tall and she can’t escape from it, looking at miichan and her eyes were saying help me here.

“I need to go home! I forgot I have a photo shoot tomorrow morning..” acchan stood up her aura change i can see it her eyes.
“ow c’mon acchan.. We’re just starting we haven’t even finish the drinks yet..” Sae begging her to stay
“I’m sorry minna.. I shall see you tomorrow in the meeting with akiP.. We can always do this after rehearsal right?” my mom smiled at them giving them an assurance. They all agreed to go home too since each of them has an own schedule for tomorrow morning before gathering up again in their meeting. As we go outside yuko and haruna were the ones who took off first because haruna is sleeping already being held up by sayaka and sae since my aunt yuko can’t assist her coz she’s not that tall obviously.

“Atsuko let me walk you home..You’re drunk” Finally my takapop spoke to her, offering her some polite words. But my tsundere mom just look at her in a cold state and say
“No need..Just take care mochii instead she might need your help tonight” pointing at the sleeping mochii being held by the tomoxtomo.
“Waw that was..tough..” miichan just gulp, also I pretend I didn’t hear anything too just to stay away from the topic I know it’s not my business after they just met me few hours ago.

“Someone is jealous here..C’mon Ami chan! Let’s go home and have some deep sleep..Ja ne~~ minna Be careful and I love you all muahhh” Mariko sama grabbed me and wave to them, she was indeed drunk. I politely bowed to them and say my goodnight words too before we rode in the taxi cab. Deep in my heart I was worried with the current situation im witnessing, I felt strange I lean on to the taxi window as I rest head while mariko is closing her eyes too on the other side. I was about to touch her checking if she’s ok when I suddenly feel strange my hands are fading not my hands but all of my body, I touched myself and shake my head I think I must just seeing things that affects my brain. We then arrived at the house I decided to sleep with mariko because she’s drunk im worried about her.

I woke up in the middle of my sleep it was just 3am, I had this bad dream, no not bad very bad! I saw names in my dream they were floating in the air, I keep thinking what it was. Then it backs in my mind the words are Maeda Atsuko + Takahashi Minami = and there was my name Shikou. But suddenly it has change my name was disappearing and my mom’s name was being replaced by Kuramochi Asuka and my name was not there anymore. I concluded quickly that if takamina and acchan were not going to be together there will be no me in the future it means I can’t go back. Maybe that’s why I felt I was fading before in the taxi cab is this a sign I asked myself, but indeed I’m confident that they will be together in the future because here I am as a proof but I think nothing is impossible if the past may change there’s always a magic, just like why I’m being here is already unexplainable. I somehow feel frightened I want to be their daughter I want them to be my parents! I don’t know what to do, they must work it out or else. I can’t go back to sleep anymore so I decided to view the night sky and hoping to see a falling star to make a wish but I failed morning has come and Mr. sun smiled slowly at me it’s my second day her in year 2011 I sighed. I went down in the kitchen cook something for breakfast before mariko sama wakes up.

“Oh crap my head hurts..” she went down in the stairs holding her head having a hangover from last night.
“Here drink this..” I offered her a jasmine tea to keep the ache away and to relax her.
“Arigatou ami chan.. Sorry for making you made the breakfast..and whoa you cook all of this? I mean your awesome your just too young to know this kind of cooking” actually I just cook the usual food I see in our house it’s not that totally extravagant.

“I bet when acchan is here she would be really happy.. These are all her favorites you know..” she laughs while picking the food, I can’t blame her I learn this from my mom so definitely she would recognize my cooking and like it. “Ami chan I forgot about your mobile gomen.. We haven’t ask some charger from the others..Maybe I will asked them later, you could again if you want too..”

“Thank you.. I’d love to see the others too..” I answered her and we ate our breakfast together. After that she brings me in her commercial shoot, all the staffs welcome me and treat me well. I just watch mariko doing her shoot she was indeed beautiful in any angle. Time has passed and we go back to the theater again it was 6pm when we arrived there. One by one the senbatsu members get there too, as usual laughing and talking to each other. Acchan arrive right on time she was not late today she was stunning with her clothes looking so sexy on it, no wonder why she has many works. Takamina looked at her and smile but acchan didn’t bother to look at her. I feel sad on what I saw, they all enter on the conference room while I remained outside sitting on the couch. Haruna sama made me borrowed her psp so that I can play and won’t be bored while waiting for them. The game was easy for me, well as on my time in the future the games were much more difficult and advance. I rank the highest score in the game I put my initial as MX in the record. As I finished the game as I stand and explore the picture on the wall, their albums and awards were displayed on the glass cabinet too. I saw their early year picture way back 2006 and they were so young, my mom is always the ace im proud of her and pop was always at her side on the picture they really are close along with the other members. In my time I wouldn’t bother to ask my parents about their past in akb maybe because I just know about it that they came from akb, then graduated from it and pursue their own dreams but the truth is I really don’t know the story behind it. Now I know they really work hard to become national idols it’s like from rags to riches.

After 1 hour and 30 minutes their finally done, they went out talking happily mentioning they would perform Tokyo dome next year. They mentioned the Christmas party too I forgot without noticing I came here in 2011 in the month of December, I really don’t feel the Christmas in my mind after all that has happened to me. They were talking the venue and the event about the party, all are excited and wishes some gifts to be receive by someone.

“Oi..The kris kringle should be impromptu ok? ” Sayaka saying this to everyone to assure the gifts won’t be bias.
“I wonder who else I will receive a gift except for our exchange gifts” miichan showing her words to the other members as if like she want them to give a gift.
“Huh me Im so confident that my nyan nyan would give not just a gift right sweetie?” Yuko hugging the tall cat girl as always.
“You two stop that! Some minor is here! You are a bad example to the youth!” mariko sama signing to yuko, while looking at me. I really don’t have an idea that the one she was talking is me, I mean I’m immune to their actions already and it doesn’t give me an influence yet.

“Mou Captain.. I’m expecting a gift too..” Mochii wrapping her arms around my pop and I can see my tsundere mom’s eyes it’s burning hot but she exhaled deeply and says “I wonder what will takamina would give you mochii” all them was looking at her seriously and stop laughing except for mochii she has no idea what the others are thinking. Takamina shrugged off mochii from clinging to her finally she has this strength to let go of that girl. I was just looking at them my heart beat goes fast as it was about to explode im nervous I don’t know what’s happening to me. I kneel down and hold my chest im feelin’ weird as I reminisce my dream last night. Mariko immediately go close to me she was worried because im her responsibility that was she knew about.

“Ami chan.. You alright?” she asked me
“ano.. My legs just cramped that’s all no need to worry..” I lie again to her, with my sudden action the topic they were stunned of has changed. She presses my knees like giving me a soft massage because she really thought I was having a cramp. I sit beside her and on to my left was takamina looking worried at me too. They continue their discussion about the upcoming party tomorrow. When suddenly mariko’s phone ring, her manager called that they will have an urgent meeting since she’s not available for tomorrow because it’s akb’s xmas party.

“Takamina can you watch over ami chan for me? I won’t take long I will be right back..” she requested my pop to be with me for a while.
“Yeah sure..I’d love to besides we don’t have anything to do right and I just had finish all my other works” as expected she really is the captain of akb so responsible. I smile and felt joy in my heart, as mariko leave acchan were talking to miichan and tomochin and takamina were talking to you as they are the ones in charge doing the MC for the party they were discussing their script and all.

“Takamina chotto I need to get the gift for nyan nyan.. The store might close in 30 minutes.. you must buy your gift too ne?” she winked at her captain while her eyes pointing at the ace. Takamina papa gets what yuko was about to say and just nod and say “I know..I’ preparing that too ya know..”
“Ami chan..Would like to go with me? I need to buy a gift for the party tomorrow..” she asked me, of course without any second thoughts I would go to her she’s my pop and I really love to do that. We just walked going to a special store near the theater, I never knew this store existed in my time it was so cute and comfortable. It was not that exposed outside so my pop is safe from crowded people identifying her as takamina of akb. As I watched her I know she already knew what she wants to buy maybe she’s always coming here and reserved those things she picked. Lastly we go to a jewelry store she picked up something there too I think she ordered something. I can’t help myself but to peek of what is it, I saw a necklace with a ring pendant on it was beautiful the design is unique and it was simple yet so elegant and it has an engrave name on the back of it I wonder again this time I can’t see the word because it’s so small. She requested the lady to wrap it up nicely she excitedly wait for it in the counter, she looked at me and I smiled while eating some popsicles.

After she had what she’s waiting she approaches me, I was not expecting she would say this“You really are like her..I mean acchan..You have the same smile too” I didn’t answer her and continued to crunch the Popsicle in my mouth.
“I really love her smile” she continued as I listen to her still nibbling the ice cold flavored I’m holding.
“Only her smile?” I finally spoke while my mouth was full
“Hmmm I love her..All of her..” she said it in a low voice looking above. Again as a person from the future I pretended that I’m not that affected. Then she grabbed my hand as we saw a giant Christmas being lighted we look at it for a while and headed back to the theater. There mariko was waiting for me after the long talk and a full dinner we headed back home to wrap some gifts for tomorrows party.

CHRISTMAS PARTY 7:00pm (December 24, 2011)

Everyone was on their own costume, yuko dress up as Santa while sae as her reindeer. The rest wore nice dresses with a Santa hat on it. As expected from my mom acchan anything she wore she’s pretty, mariko sama showing her stunning legs wears a her modeling outfit that oozes the other members. While I just wore a Santa outfit too but girl version everyone looks at me and I’m kinda feeling embarrass.
“You’re so cute ami chan..” nyan nyan greeted me as well her lover yuko she even pinches my cheeks giggling. The others greeted me too as well as my mom I’m glad she like it and it made me happy.

“Yosh!! Let us start our PARTY!!” takamina papa shouts from the small stage, the party was just exclusively for members and I’m just an exception on it for being there. Each team has performed a performance not an akb song instead a Christmas song, it was really amusing. As the games were starting all are eagerly participating I can’t stop laughing seeing them I refused to join the game I excused myself and reasoned my knee pain. I must not involve in this kind of situation it might change the past this is always in my mind. The next game was called newspaper dance every time the music stops they must get into the news paper with their feet inside if the one of the paired step outside they are out after one pair being out they must fold the newspaper until it becomes so little to step on its up to the pair how can they survive the game, two kenkyusei replaced yuko and takamina for hosting so that they can participate the game. As usual yuko paired up nyan nyan, sae and yukirin, tomoxtomo, acchan was about to grab miichan but mariko comes first.

“Sorry acchan this gachapin is mine” mariko sama wink at her
“Atsuko..ahhhmmm..Would you lie to pair with me instead?” I smiled as I see this scene takapapa offering her hand. My mom took so long to answer she just stared with cold eyes but finally say yes on it she smile wryly and looks down on the floor. I thought they will be going to be alright but atleast they participated in the game.

Then the game started first pair out was sae and yuki, then comes next mariko and miichan, after that yuko and haruna as nyan nyan can’t balance well because yuko is small. The only pair left was my parents who are actually not looking at each other and tomoxtomo. In my thought I want them to win. The newspaper is now folded very small only one foot should fit inside it, both pair doesn’t have a choice but to lift their partner. Tomoxtomo do a piggy back while my pop just lifts my mom with her strength lifting her like a newlyweds. Acchan cheeks turn red from the sudden action that takapapa did. They were looking at each other their face was so close that they could feel their breath coming out. Out of the blue takamina can’t balance anymore they both dropped on the floor and tomoxtomo wins. Acchan was on top of takamina still looking at each other in moments, they just got into their sense as the crowd teases them they quickly stand up and smile as normal feeling shy to one another.

“Chotto Atsuko..That was a nice game..Sorry I didn’t manage my balance well..” takamina bowed to her
“No it’s alright..Thank you too.. I bet you just can’t lift me well..” Finally she chuckled showing her prettiest smile. I was relieved atlas does that mean they are in good terms now? The game was finish and we all eat. After the pigging out the food they precede in exchanging gifts they draw names on the box and pick it the one they pick is the one they going to give their gifts.

When the exchanging of gifts was done all the members gathered in their own group drinking and celebrating waiting for the clock to turn 12am. Only 30 minutes left before Christmas, I’m just looking at them as always. When takamina approaches acchan and whisper something to her I think she wanted to talk to her. I followed them secretly I don’t want to miss this moment that’s what I’m thinking. They went on the rooftop where they can the city full of lights, the wind blows cold air but it’s alright I think they weren’t affected on that. Takamina papa hold acchan’s hand and put something in there, it was box. I knew it! That’s what I thought the jewelry she will gave it to her.

“Merry Christmas Atsuko..” she gave the it, acchan was surprised she didn’t expect this as she opens it she smiled and bit her lip, she’s speechless. My mom was half tear her eyes already as she saw the necklace with a ring pendant, she reads what the rings engraves more than my life she spoke it slowly.

Now she’s really crying with happiness, with that sudden word she sees she knew what takamina wants’ to tell her, but she still want to hear it from her mouth. “Minami…Arigatou..” takamina wipes her tears. “Don’t be..It’s my pleasure giving that to you.. I wanted to say this but I know I’ve been so fool to make this long to say it, I just want it to be perfect but I guess I cause you so much pain already.. I’m sorry Atsuko.. I’m sorry if I’m like this..But still would you take me?”

“How would I take you if you didn’t ask baka!” acchan making a lite punch on pops shoulder
“I love your smile, I love your face, I like when you go near to me.. I just love every single move you take from me.. I want to be with you.. I love you atsuko I really do..I want you to be mine..not just for today and for tomorrow but forever..So would you take me?”
“You know the answer to that don’t you minami?” moving her face closer

“It’s I love you too.. and Yes I would take you and be mine for the rest of my life…”

she then lean a kiss to my pop, that kiss has full of love. Taka papa put up the necklace to my mom and kisses her on the lips, they kiss passionately, acchan wraps her arms on takamina’s neck and so as takamina wrapping her in the waist. They kissed until the fireworks explode in the sky signing the crowd that its already Christmas, they still kiss each other with passion. Not knowing at the side mariko and the others are watching them, they only stopped kissing when they surprised the atsumina couple with a confetti and a champagne bursting to them saying Merry Love Christmas!! And then I showed up myself too cheering to them, we watched the fireworks until it has gone. The night is clear and stars were shining.

All of a sudden a falling star came by, I manage to look at it and my adrenaline rush up! I wish immediately to go back home where I was in my parents’ home 2045. I closed my eyes and I heard a voice that I must go down and go to a nearest Christmas tree. As I open my eyes again I saw everyone happily celebrating, ahh their youth was incredibly amazing I never thought of it and I’m glad I’d be able to witness it. Before I go down I went to mariko sama and hugged her while crying saying.

“Thank you… ” that’s all I said
“Merry Christmas ami chan… Im glad you’re happy..” she replies to me, everyone greeted me too acchan hugged me tight and kisses me on cheek. I cried when she did that, takamina and the others hugged me too. Their all so kind to me and that makes me cried a lot.
“Ohhh.. Don’t cry ami chan…It’s alright ya know.. Let’s enjoy this..” yuko showing me her charming smile showing her dimples.
“I must go… I really really thank you.. I’m so happy.. This is the most happiest experience I’ve ever had..” I said to them as my goodbye.
“Eh where are you going??” miichan asked
“Somewhere far..” I said
“Hey You’re not supposed to leave yet.. You’re on my care!” mariko shaking her head

“I must..Please do let me do this I’ll promise to meet you again..” I bowed to them still crying.. maybe they understand how important im going to, because I’m crying they just agreed and let me do what I want since its Christmas.
“Ami chan!! When will you come back? Can we meet again?” Takamina shouted, everyone was waitng for my answer, I looked back at them and says

“Yes of course we can meet again.. Soon..Very Soon..”

I run as fast as I can while crying and then I saw a Christmas tree and look at it. Until I feel a soft surface on my face, when I opened my eyes I was back in my room. I quickly stand I felt like I was dreaming but I’m not, I have still tears in my eyes. I move down stairs and saw my mom and pop in the living room doing some lovey dovey moments. I jumped up to them and hugged them tightly and crying with all my heart I was happy I’m back in their arms again.

“Mom pop I missed you..” still crying
“eh?? You were just in your room hour ago when we finish dinner right?” takamina papa raising her eyebrows
“Minami..Our daughter is just caressing us..Don’t you may little princess? Come here..mama will hugged you so much..Until you satisfied” showing her sweet smile
“What about me you don’t want a hug from your pop?” I just smile and hugged them both with all my hearts until I contented.

A bit of Epilogue

After that day my world is back to normal, until i remembered my phone and where did i put that.
when i got home mariko sama now a famous model of vogue japan visited us in our house.
i greeted her and kiss her on her cheeks, and thinking what she like when i was in their time.
as i remember my phone i immediately ask mom if she saw it, and she said she doesn't.
until..

"acchan.. I need to tell you something..my maids were cleaning my old house and they found this mobile phone..its kinda weird..i didn't open it because its empty bat i wonder who is this, because it's kinda old and a bit dusty but this is a latest model in this year right?" she shows the phone to my mom

"This kinda look like shiichans mobile phone.." she showed it to me.. i gasped as i look at the phone.. Indeed it was mine.. i remembered that i left it from mariko sama's house when i traveled time..but that does mean things were left the way they are? only me was the one who escape it?

THE END

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Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past meets Future Atsumina (FINISH)
Post by: Haruko on June 25, 2012, 12:11:51 AM

wow wow second part?.. maybe the kojiyuu`s son made their move too.. :D

great fic love it

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past meets Future Atsumina (FINISH)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on June 25, 2012, 12:55:18 PM

Hoho~ This was a really nice one~ XD
Glad that Atsumina were lovey dovey~
When Acchan was jealous, it was scary!!!

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past meets Future Atsumina (FINISH)
Post by: ichikawa on June 27, 2012, 02:17:46 PM

Quote from: miayaka on June 24, 2012, 10:48:33 PM

“I love your smile, I love your face, I like when you go near to me.. I just love every single move you take from me.. I want to be with you.. I love you atsuko I really do..I want you to be mine..not just for today and for tomorrow but forever..So would you take me?”

Hahaha... Takamina finally got Acchan with a long confession :mon exhaust:
Like your fic :mon inluv:

Waiting for your another fic~~

Title: Re: MY OS ---- Past meets Future Atsumina (FINISH)
Post by: chichay12 on June 27, 2012, 02:36:53 PM

OMG!!!
i really love this fic!!!i like how atsumina being together :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
i hope u update more!!!!!
:on GJ: TIME TRAVELING IS THE BEST!!! :on GJ:
:imdead: :imdead: :imdead:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----What iF [Atsuyuu][6/29/2012]
Post by: miayaka on June 28, 2012, 07:56:30 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

WHAT IF [ATSUYUU]

We had just finished shooting the cm for TBC you’re wearing some yellow and me some pink dress,
the photo shoot we did together was very cute the two of us wearing cute clothes and we really had
a great time it’s so natural to us doing like this together maybe because we’re always the one whose
being paired up when it comes to commercials and magazines. Finally all our diet days come up a good
result on our skin and body, doing a beauty cm sure is a tough maintenance to our figure. I didn’t wear
my hair extensions during this shoot to freshen up my look, you too did a trim to your length hair as always.

While waiting to our beloved no3b girls we decided to kill the time in the dressing room,
you fell as sleep as usual while I’m texting your midget to make them hurry to fetch us.
The five of us including miichan, nyannyan and takamina decided earlier to have a dinner
together in our favorite restaurant to eat delicious foods that we were craving for the past one month of strict dieting.

I was sitting on the floor while you were lying on the couch but our heads meet each other
as I rest my head in the couch looking at you and I can’t help but smile I was fond by your
cute face sleeping like a child I giggle as I want to draw something on your forehead but
I didn’t do it I know you will get mad at me. Now I know why those wotas are going crazy
about you, even the every strand of your hair they want it. I’ve took some photos of you
in my mobile and post it in my blog that has the title of sleeping atsu, after a few moments
comments were flooding already and I already expected it and they want to have another
shot with me while you were sleeping so I granted it and post another head shot photo,
me on the left side smiling and you on the right side sleeping.

“Acchan your too cute I want to bite your cheeks..” I’m still looking at her sleeping,
this time I can’t help myself I really touch her cheeks and pinched it softly.
It gave me happiness when I did that but I’m not satisfied I touch her nose too and her chin,
I was amused to my action entertaining myself while my prey is sleeping.
You really are the ace and akb’s face, battling you in the election is really tough.
Neither of us doesn’t want that because it really give us a heavy feeling on the event,
but we have no choice but to follow what akiP wants to satisfy the fans. Indeed after
that our friendship is still solid as ever I never doubted that the election would break us all.
I know being on that position is not easy, carrying the burden and pressure.
I’ve been there too once and at that time I’m always thinking how did you manage to stay
relax in that position while in fact it’s the most troubling position you’d ever got.
Still you can show those smile telling all of us we can do it.

“Hmnnn..” you suddenly move and open your eyes half, maybe your checking the environment
and then you fell back asleep. I just laugh what I have just witness, surely acchan you really didn’t
change since the day I met you 6 years ago. I really like your smile up until now takamidget is really
lucky to you that you ended up coming to me crying because of her when you two have this ‘love quarrel’.
Maybe if nyan nyan wasn’t around I would be takamina’s rival, seriously you’re the second girl in my list
although you’re not that tall and your boobies’ size are not that big but you’re a girl next door that anyone would like to have.

“Yuko?? Is something wrong?” she opened her eyes looking at me while still imagining things on my mind.
“AH! Acchan you’re awake, no I’m just checking your eyebrows ya know..” I reason out
“Why what happen? ” she furiously touch it.
“No nothing! Your such a tsundere, im just looking at it nothing else..” I assured her
“Ahh ok..Did I sleep long?” she asked
“Maybe about more thn 30 minutes, so I ended up sitting here instead disturbing you” I laugh telling a joke a bit
“Gomen yuko…Here come..Sit beside me please..” She quickly gets up and sits on the couch dragging me.
I know she wants to sleep more but she forced herself to wake up, she lean her head on my shoulder
that slants her body because we’re not on the same height.

“Ne acchan..What if takamina doesn’t exist and nyan nyan doesn’t exist too, whom would you fall with?”
these words suddenly came out to my out, what I’m I thinking.
“Eh?hmm I would fall for you yuko” she laughs at me
“Maji de? Why me?” I frowned and look at her, she sits properly and got up her head from my shoulder.
She move closer and tilt her forehead against mine now we are looking at her each only half an inch our lips were apart.
“Why not?!” she replied and we stayed on that position for a moment while she still smiling and I’m feeling weird inside my chest.
I want to kiss her, a real kiss I mean. I know we kiss a lot of times but that’s different.
I want to feel her lips, out of the blue i just did what’s on my mind I kissed her this isn’t a smack kiss like hebi rote,
I kiss and nibble softly her lower lip before I pulled away. I saw her face shocked and she just blink twice and looked at me.

“Yuko..You kiss me differently..” she says in a soft voice
“Don’t you like it? I mean, is that your first time?” I said to her, of course it’s not her first time she and takamidget would that always I know that same as me and nyan nyan.
“It’s my first time… with you..” she said shyly as I see her cheeks turning strawberry blushes.
“Huh! Then you must be proud of it.. Many girls wanted that kissed from me hahaha” I made a fake laugh to move away the shyness between us. Honestly I just don’t know what I did, am I really this perverted even to acchan? I asked myself.
“Unn..But I like it, minami doesn’t do that because I’m always doing the first move..” she smiles at me

“So can I do it again?” I asked. Again my brain is not communicating with my words I just said it unexpectedly.
She smiled again and her eyes looking at the side and gave a small nod.
As I’ve seen her reaction I immediately move closer to her my hands cupping her cheek and my lips making their move.
This time she act in response making our lips sealed together, once she gave an opening
I slid my tongue giving her a toxic move inside, she’s a good kisser I admit that. What I do to her she responded it with her own style that is new to me.
Nyan nyan isn’t like this when we kissed I wonder if takamina is a good kisser also, I bet not because as acchan says she always take the first move. We pulled each other to breath, it was a long kissed that make us pant heavily.

The moment was just perfect for us to stop because the no3b girls are knocking already,
me giving them a sign as soon as me and acchan fixed ourselves. They entered the room as if nothing happens.
We just stared at each other and giggle, this time it’s true that we really are laughing and looking at each other
while the three of them just looking at us with curiosity.

“Shall we?” miichan interrupts us.
“Hai..we are so ready.. right acchan?” I looked at her while still smiling
“Unn..Yosh ikemasu! Im hungry minami..you took so long..you owe me..” she said as she stand and cling to her midget right away. Same as me snuggling to my nyan nyan like nothing happen a while ago.

“Oh lovers! I’m always left behind” miichan

THE END

Just leave your comment's minna :jphip:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----What iF [Atsuyuu][6/29/2012]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 28, 2012, 08:08:54 PM

Have I ever said that I love you? No? Well then, here it is.

I love you!!!

thank you for writing such a cute AtsuYuu!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :bow: :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----What iF [Atsuyuu][6/29/2012]
Post by: miayaka on June 28, 2012, 08:46:52 PM

@sakura drop thank you as always :*

@flean sowee..i'm still an atsumina shipper [im proud of it!].. i just made this one to fill my mind from their cuteness :nervous

Title: Re: ツMY OS----What iF [Atsuyuu][6/29/2012]
Post by: yukofan on June 29, 2012, 09:01:35 AM

atsuyuu..

it's been a long time since the last time i read atsuyuu fic in jphip..

flirting with your friend but eventually going back to your lover is not a bad thing..HA!

nice fic ^^b

Title: Re: ツMY OS----What iF [Atsuyuu][6/29/2012]
Post by: ichikawa on June 30, 2012, 08:49:26 AM

Yuko just trying...
Acchan just curious...
Nothing will happen between them, yes nothing will happen
It's just a friendship :yep: :yep:
(try to comforting myself as Atsumina shipper :P)

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME [atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: miayaka on June 30, 2012, 10:32:41 PM

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THE DATING GAME [atsumina version]

I hope we can spend some time after your recordings and shootings I really miss you a lot..
I can’t wait to have our rehearsal schedule again so that we can meet..
MAIL SENT

Three days ago NO3B was invited to be part of a contest in a particular TV show they must act as bachelors
wearing tux but not wearing wigs they tend to show their long hair to make it cool as the director suggested to them,
to make the show even more unique. The theme was cool girls searching young women as cute as them to date with.
This theme was the viewer’s choice as they voted every week for the idea of the show.

“Takahashi san you’ll be the one who goes up first” the director reminded her
“M m me?? Why not Nyan nyan she’s more older than me..” she reason out
“Nope takamina…miichan and I decided you’re the one who goes up first since you’re the leader” haruna talking to her while brushing her hair.
“You guys are so unfair, you always did this to me being the bait!” she glared at her two comrades.
Takamina doesn’t have a choice as a captain she must take responsibility, so she just exhaled deep to lighten her mood and make the nervous disappear.

This segment is quite popular to all viewers because they tend to see the real thing in television. In this variety show,
Takamina will be given a choice of three girls whom she could talk but the voices of the girls are being change by the
microphone that they’ll be using so that it can’t be noticed. The girls are being named as No. 1, No. 2 and No. 3 these
three different persons are place separately in a hidden cubicle where takamina couldn’t see them. After asking them
a series of questions, she would choose a girl that gave her the answer she likes best and go on a date with her. Also
the question are related to romance/date/love/friendship/family, the questions are given to takamina before the show
and choose four questions that she likes the most.

//FLASSHBACK//

“Acchan..You will be a guest in a variety show by the next 3 days” her manager told her after the recording of her new song.
“Un what show?” she ask
“It’s a dating game show, but don’t worry you will be hiding in a cubicle no one will see you and recognize your voice because they made some voice changer device attached to the microphone.” Her manager explained
“Am I the only one?” acchan
“Actually they invited some girls from akb too, I just don’t know who they are.. Is this ok with you? You don’t have to do anything there except answering the questions that the asker would ask, that’s all..” her manager continues.
“Sou..What happen after I answered the questions?” acchan
“Well.. if you’re the one that the bachelor would pick you two will have a romantic date, but don’t worry the date will be covered by the staff so it’s not private, just a simple candle light dinner to add more spiciness on the show ”
“Ah..Hmm maybe I must not answer well so that the bachelor wouldn’t pick me..” the ace laugh

//END OF FLASSHBACK//

“Welcome everyone for another episode of the most undisputed dating game show on japan!
We will be having a 3 part special episode on this to our 3 special guests” the MC starting the show.

“Our first guest bachelor for today is a member of the most popular group in his generation, I bet you know him too.
I must not reveal his identity and her voice, I will be the one who’d ask the questions to our delegates girls in the cubicle.
The questions are picked by our guest itself all he has to do is give a point of whom he has chose the best answer
the first who gets two points shall be the winner, because we only have four questions.”

“Girls Ready?” the mc asking the girls in the cubicle responding a choral answer of yes with a different voice.
“And to our bachelor..Please listen carefully to their answer”

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MC : Question number one. What would you do if you develop a sudden feeling to your close friend?
Girl No. 1 (Mochii) : I’ll be spending more time with that person until it’s obvious
Girl No. 2 (Acchan) : Do nothing I guess
Girl No. 3 (Milky) : Confess!
MC : whoa girl no. 3 is so aggressive huh.. Then who should you pick our dear bachelor?

Takamina raising the number sign 2.
MC : one point for girl no. 2!

Acchan POV “he picks my answer? What kind of guy is he? I bet he’s a coward..”

MC : Question number two. How do you comfort someone when something traumatic happens?
Girl No. 1 (Mochii) : Treat that person all day to forget the trauma.
Girl No. 2 (Acchan) : Maybe let that person cry until fall asleep *laughs*
Girl No. 3 (Milky) : Bring that person on a calm place
MC : Bachelor you may now choose

Takamina raising number 3
MC : and he chose girl no. 3! Next question is How would you describe yourself now being here in the studio in one word?
Girl No. 1 (Mochii) : Sweet
Girl No. 2 (Acchan) : nothing
Takamina POV “What is this girl I felt like she’s not interested on the show”
Girl No. 3 (Milky) : Cute
MC : oohh will we have a winner this time? Please show your answer bachelor
Takamina raising number 1

MC : wohoo all the girls now have 1 point each, this is exciting because all of them is tie, and whoever gets the point on my final question shall be the bachelor’s date. Final Question!
How far would you go to someone you really love?

Girl No. 1 (Mochii) : hmm I would do anything for that person
MC : very devoted..
Girl No. 2 (Acchan) : between life and death *she seriously answer this question*
MC : deep answer girl number 2
Girl No. 3 (Milky) : Make that person happy always
MC : well done as expected, So bachelor who shall you choose between these 3 answers?

Takamina POV “life and death.. I would do that too specially to her” she then raises the sign number 2.
Acchan POV “Well I did my best not to win, I guess this is my destiny today”

MC : So we have a winner, but before we revealed the winning girl who’s sitting at the second cubicle.
May I reveal the two girls in the first and third who didn’t get our bachelor today. May I call from AKB48 team A, Kuramochi Asuka as the girl no. 1

“Eh??!!! Mochii? “ takamina gasp her mouth as she was about to shout as she remember not to speak until the winner come out. While mochii was shock too seeing her, not knowing that she was the acting bachelor of the show. Acchan on the other hand was shocked too she didn’t even notice that her co team member was on the other side of the cubicle.

MC : and from NMB48 may I call Watanabe Miyuki as the girl no. 3!

“What is this? I’m feeling nervous already of who is the girl I chose..Could it be..But that’s impossible she has a shooting today” takamina her thought of curiosity making her feel nervous, waiting for the second cubicle to open to reveal the girl whom she select. While acchan feeling the same way as takamina, she’s having Goosebumps upon hearing the name of the girls that involves to the person she knew the most, thinking the other side that it’s impossible because of the word bachelor. As the mc were about to reveal the identity both of them not seeing one another felt the same tense, pulse beating fast, hands were cold and the feeling of expecting the one that you wanted to see.

MC : now let us welcome with warm applause the girl that will spend a candle light dinner with our guest. She’s also from akb48 Team A, none other than the ultimate ace Maeda Atsuko!!

“Atsuko..” takamina gulp almost down to her knee, she could feel her chest pounding really hard and she can’t control it seeing the person she really want to see.
“Mi..nami… ahhhhh!!!” Acchan dash toward the captain and hugged her tightly.
Smelling her scent to prove it is really her takamina. “did you regret picking girl no.2?” she whispered
“Of course not..this was a great choice, I didn’t fail this time right atsuko?” she look at acchan giggling as she hugged her also tightly that she don’t want to take it off, they just back to their normal state when the mc spoke out again.

MC : This is just a sweet scene, you really can tell they are very much close to each other.

After the show as a promised reward they went to a private restaurant to have the candle light dinner, but still the camera’s and staff are there.
Filming their moment, they just act naturally as akb48’s member, laugh likely that they were always do and talk randomly anything until
they are finish and gave some words to the viewers to what had happened on the game. Stating their normal reaction having fun on the
episode they made. As they left on the scene and decided to go home takamina offered acchan to walk in her house as the ace didn’t
declined it until they reach her home.

“Ano minami..would you like to stay the night with me? I’m all alone now my parents are not here..so we could..you know spend the night together..if you don’t mind..” the ace asking shyly looking at the ground.
“I don’t mind at all..” takamina smiled to her and hold her hand as they reach the entrance door. “and maybe we can continue our date here..Without anyone watching..” the captain continues as she lightly blush looking at her ace that she misses the most.
“We won’t just continue the date tonight..I will make you not forget this day for choosing me as your date..” she wink and gave her captain a smirked that takamina knows what she’s planning.

THE END
Im not satisfied maybe i should write another version of this :banghead:
Sorry :cry:
Just tell me your thoughts pls

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 30, 2012, 10:56:45 PM

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Thank you for this awesome game, which brought Atsumina together :wub: :wub:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: moekare on July 01, 2012, 04:34:29 AM

It really is sweet :deco:
Its all about destiny, so that Taka can win Acchan woooo!!!! :heart:
Cute story :thumbsup Then you should continue what they are doing after that :twothumbs
I can exactly imagine how Acchan's smirk, hehe she got dirty thought inside her mind :drool:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: Haruko on July 01, 2012, 04:51:35 AM

aww cute atsumina:D

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: Keisthename on July 01, 2012, 05:40:27 AM

oh I'm lovin' every work of yours. Hee, ATSUMINA are destined to be together forever no matter what event it is. ahahah :mon inluv:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: Sydney W on July 01, 2012, 08:35:42 AM

Let the story continue with part 2 ~~ hohoho
Lovely couples as always

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: kahem on July 01, 2012, 08:42:27 AM

The fic with the atsumina daughter is awesome!!!
I'm not really a atsuyuu fan but it's cute
And the last is so funny ^^ will make a kojiharu and miichan version?

Title: Re: ツMY OS----THE DATING GAME[atsumina version][7/01/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 01, 2012, 09:54:18 PM

Thank you for all the comments :kneelbow:

I'll be making a kojiyuu version too..
My mind is full of stuffs that i wish i can write them all at once :dizzy:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina version][7/03/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 02, 2012, 11:14:09 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

MASQUERADE PARTY

Upon her arrival at Tokyo International Airport she immediately turns on her mobile phone because while inside the airplane it’s prohibited to use some digital devices it might interfere the communication signal while still on the air. This time she travelled separately with her assistants due to some peaceful reason that she wants to be alone. Only wearing a plain casual dress but still it made her look perfectly nice that made everyone turns their head and look at her. While stepping down on the escalator her phone rang.

“Moshi Moshi..” she answers
“Ah.. Atsuko Sama, we would like to inform you that we’ll going to be late, apparently there is an accident happening here on the road which cause a traffic going to there and we can’t shift roads to shortcut because me and the others are stuck in the middle already.. I really apologize for this..” Yuutan, one of her assistants called her.
“Sou desu.. Well I guess I don’t have a choice but to wait you here.. ” she sighs

“Sumimasen… This wouldn’t be long.. Just stay in safe place onegaishimasu and refrain from talking to strangers..” Yuutan reminding her safety
“Daijoubu.. I’m not a little girl anymore.. Don’t worry I’ll be fine.. Maybe I should just wander around here and eat I guess..”
“Please be careful Atsuko sama..” her assistant reminding her again while she just smile and turn off her iphone and start to stroll around. Seeing lots of souvenir stores and coffee shops inside the airport have astonished her, she wants to try all the cakes and desserts displayed in each block. While leisurely walking someone approach her.

“Ah ano.. hajimemashite.. Are you lost from your group?” A small girl that has ribbon on her hair asks showing a worry face.
“Huh..? Are you talking to me?” she pointed herself out
“Yes You standing in front of me.. ” the small girl nod
“Oh sorry to made you worry, I’m not involve in a group and I’m just roaming around while waiting to my service” she bowed to the small girl.

“Sou.. Sorry too making such a weird approach, I really thought you were lost because you keep on walking all around.. Is this your first time here in Japan?” the ribbon girl ask
“Nope..It’s my second time actually but I was too young then when I got my first visit here so I really don’t remember the place.”
“Would you mind if I invite you to have some hot choco it’s my treat since you’re a tourist in my country” the small girl showing her sincere smile to assure her that she’s not a bad person.
“Su sure..That would be nice..” she accept the offer without any hesitation. They both headed in the near café still inside in the airport. Time passed quickly as they chat and talk randomly about the delicious meals in Japan. When the tall girl’s mobile phone rang again she instantly responded, her assistant is now waiting to her outside looking for her.

“My service is here picking me up.. I better go now.. and Thank you so much for your hospitality.. I won’t forget you..” she stand and bowed to the ribbon girl whom she didn’t think asking her name. Actually they haven’t introduced their selves to one another they just talk and talk without noticing it. As she was about to go exit on the door the small girl called her.
“Chotto! I haven’t know your name..” she pouted

The girl just chuckled seeing her in that way like a child “Just call me acchan..how about you?” throwing the question back.
“Takamina.. call me Takamina desu..” smiling to her in response.

“See you aroud Takamina.. I hope we can meet again..” acchan then leaves the café swinging the door while takamina looking at her stepping inside the car leaving.

Takamina POV “why does I didn’t ask her name at the start? I didn’t even ask her number or the place she was going to, I’m such a failure when it comes to this” she just back to her normal condition when someone shouted her name waving at her.

“TAKAMINA!!!!!!!” her best friend yuko , only taller an inch from her.
“Yuko! Finally your plane landed! I’m so early here you know and you’re late more than an hour” takamina shaking her head for disappointment.
“I’m sowee takamidget.. My flight has been delayed neee don’t be mad at me I have lots of gifts for you and im sure you will like it.. Well as a matter of fact being late must made you happy..am I right? Who is she by the way?” yuko saw the scene when acchan and takamina talking before saying goodbye

“She’s just a tourist here.. Just arrive too and waiting for her escort being late like you..” takamina look back to her
“Ja ja.. That’s enough of me.. You seemed interested on her.. Ahhh I know.. You like her? Are you?” yuko teasing her best friend
“Eh?? How can you say that, we just met” takamina denying while her face shows the proof

“Baka! That’s what you called crush on first sight! Kyaaaa ” yuko making a love gesture
“Wrong its love at first sight!” takamina corrected her

“SEE??? I know right!! I said that on purpose midget.. That girl caught you!” yuko giving her an evil laugh
“If I met her again without finding her, I’m going to admit your opinion” takamina frown dragging the squirrel teeth girl outside where they service was waiting for them too. While in the car yuko bring out a small envelope with a card and read the words on it.

“Masquerade Party huh?.. ”
“Sure is.. Marichan was preparing it for the whole time” takamina look at card too
“I wonder who are the visitors except us of course..” yuko
“Last time we talk she told me she’s going to invite a royalty” takamina
“Like a King? Or an Emperor?” yuko
“Kinda.. I’m not sure too.. Oh crap this party worries me, I Don’t have anything to wear yet..” takamina tilting her head
“Don’t worry midget, I’ve already prepared it just for you.. This one suits you..” yuko wink at her.

Shinoda Mariko owns most of the luxury hotels not just only in Japan, Every year she will hold an event in one of her hotels to give recognition. This year she decided the theme as a mysterious one, a masquerade party she taught this idea to hide one’s face wearing a mask so that it will be more exciting dancing with someone whom you never knew. Mariko invited the most prominent guests all over the world including her friends Takahashi Minami the CEO of the largest recording company, Oshima Yuko the famous cruise owner and Kojima Haruna yuko’s partner and fiancée.

Yuko and Takamina already check in on the venue since it’s a hotel, this isn’t a ordinary hotel because it’s only exclusive for those who’s in high society such as them. The party would be tomorrow evening and like them all the guest are arriving one by one signing their name for identification because mariko made it really secured so that no one can trespassed the event.

Yuko was the one who sign first “Yatta my nyna nyan is already here” seeing her lovers name already signed. Suddenly saying this, a tall girl was already in the lobby standing and waiting for her.

“yuuchan!! You’re late! You said you will arrive by 8pm, its already 10!” haruna scolding her girlfriend, while takamina was amused of the scene as always, she ignored the couple and sign her name out. After she finishes signing she saw a name that caught her attention. Princess Atsuko from the kingdom of Akihabara, she awe as she saw this, mariko really invited some royalties and she’s already here, seeing the name already being signed she thought of this and headed her way to the couple.

“Yuko let’s go shall we? You two continue doing that in our room” takamina interrupting them
“Hai..” couple agreed. As they went to their room yuko brings out some stuff giving it to haruna and takamina.

“Yuuchan.. you really know my taste..” Haruna touching the jewelry set that yuko gave her
“Takamina.. you are going to wear that on the party, now open it!” yuko ordering her
“Eh?? What is this??” takamina growls
“It’s an outfit silly” yuko
“I know right! But why is this? I mean this type?” takamina
“You don’t like it? So you wanna wear some bulky gowns? While wearing a masque?” yuko

“No I’m not too!” takamina “but this is a tux? Do you think it will suit me?” she continues
“Of course it is..you’ll look good on it..” yuko
“Takamina…I find it nice maybe all the girls would like to dance with you tomorrow so kakkoiiii..” haruna imagining things while looking at takamina
“Haist.. Well said.. I guess I have no choice.. I should make my mask more mysterious so that no one would really recognize me” takamina set this as an idea for her masque

While on the other room, acchan arrived 30 minutes ahead before takamina. The princess is thinking hardly what she would wear at the event. Her assistant showing her 3 sets of gowns made her frustrated because as far as she would she doesn’t want to wear some extravagant clothing just to show that she’s a princess she didn’t even bring her crown with her. She wants to make it as simple as possible, so she requested another set of viewing from her designer to pick with. After finalizing what she’s wanna wore for tomorrow’s event she decided to explore the hotel again, she loves doing this especially when the place is new to her. Still wearing a plain simple dress while her assistant yuutan follows her from behind guarding her princess.

On the same floor, takamina decided to leave the kojiyuu couple to have their time and check if mariko is doing great for all her preparation. While takamina busy dialing mariko’s number on her phone she didn’t notice a girl coming who is busy on her mobile too blogging the pictures she just snap out. Takamina going to the south hall and acchan going north hall they didn’t see each other until their shoulders bump making them pause and looked one another. Takamina widened her eyes as she didn’t expect that the girl was her while yuutan was about to run after acchan when the princess glared at her assistant’s eye saying by the look of don’t interfere.

“Acchan?? Wh what are you..” takamina couldn’t talk properly as she felt happy seeing the girl again she can’t blurt out her words
“Takamina! Nice to see you again..” Acchan greeted her with a smile on her face, that was the sweetest smile she gave to takamina, that the small girl stun and lightly blush
“Me too..It’s happy to see you too..Really..Im happy..” takamina muttering her words, before she could ask again another question someone scream her name interrupting them again

“Takamina!!” she turns as someone called her, she saw it was mariko
“ahh sorry for disturbing..I need your help!! Please come with me right now I have a problem..” mariko dragging her that she can’t resist, while mariko taking her she looked at acchan and mouthing her lips “can we meet again?”

Acchan surprise by the scene bite her lower lip before smiling “sure..see you around..” the princess gestures her hands waving to the small girl being dragged up.

“Marichan.. Honestly is this what you called a problem? You need me by just tasting the menu for tomorrow’s party? What the heck you ruined my moment there” she deeply sigh in regret, still thinking on acchan’s face, but on the other part of her mind she’s really happy knowing that she and acchan were on the same place, she will definitely meet her again within this hotel.

“But Takamina you’re good on this specially on desserts.. So I trust you.. Now taste the one that you like, what will you choose will be the one were going to serve at the party” mariko showing her sympathy on her eyes begging the midget
“Alright alright.. But tell me.. The girl I’ve met there, is she one of your visitors?” takamina
“Hmm well I really didn’t see her face that clearly.. So I don’t know..” mariko

THE PARTY

“Takamina! You’re taking so long to dress up your outfit we are going to be late! Come on out now!” yuko pouting her lips looking at the door where takamina is in.
“I’m going out..” takamina making a dork face
“Sugoii!! You so handsome takamina!” haruna praising her

“Don’t look at her nyan nyan.. See it really suits you my friend” yuko giving her a pat. Takamina is wearing all black that really suits her make her not look small but more like a handsome guy. Her mask is black too covering her face really makes her mysterious like a phantom searching for her rose. Haruna wearing a red gown and yuko wearing light mint colored dress that makes her look so cute even more. As they arrived at the venue hall, all of the guest are wearing mask it’s really difficult to identify each of them. Someone moves closer to them and make a manly voice frightening the three of them.

“Can I join you?” said the husky voice to them
“Eh.. who are you? ” yuko clings to haruna afraid on the voice
“HAHAHAHA it’s me.. you’re really easy to tease yuko..” mariko laughs at them revealing her face.
“Marichan! You got me there” yuko, while takamina didn’t react as she knows it was mariko because the height and the hair is so obvious. Marisko is also wearing a tux so takamina felt kinda relieve as the host of the party itself dress like that.

“You guys move forward we will about to start” mariko telling them to go to their table at the front. When they got their takamina was just letting her eyes do the work busy inspecting the people around, playing a guessing game in her mind if who’s behind that mask. Until another guest arrived wearing all blue from her mask to her dress to her shoes. She’s very stunning on that outfit, an aura of a gorgeous girl behind that mask.

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The ushers were guiding her in the table which was located beside takamina, yuko and haruna’s table. As the small girl examining the just arrived guest she can’t configure who it was, she just let her curiosity set aside as the event started. Mariko giving some welcome speech and talking about some business related topics and more. After when the dinner was served the dance will about to start, this was the main event of the party, dancing to someone you didn’t recognize.

“I wonder who is the princess here..” yuko whispers to her best friend
“I wonder that too, it’s really hard to guess on this event..” takamina replied
“I hope I will be able to dance her” yuko saying her motive
“eh? How about nyan nyan? I guess I will be dancing with your fiancée huh.. ” takamina
“No way! She’s mine.. Alright the princess is yours, if you could find her though..” yuko stuck her tongue out

The rule of the dance is simple if you have no partner then you must draw inside the box, the box contains 2 pairs of colors. Whoever has the same color with you shall be your partner. Takamina pick her color as she has no partner obviously, she had picked the color red. The mysterious girl draw in the box too as she has no partner also. Surprisingly she caught the same color as takamina which was red, the small girl felt nervous and gulps as this girl wearing all blue showed her the color too.
The dance started the song was ballad all the pair started to dance some were sweet and some were shy just like takamina and her partner. They didn’t even talk for the whole dance, they just sway their bodies according to the rhythm and avoiding each other’s eyes.

Takamina POV “her scent is familiar”

Finally drinks are served the dance would be stop for a while to have some tossed to each other. Yuko and haruna were busy snuggling one another, mariko were talking to some of the guests also, takamina noticed her partner going somewhere, she followed her and found the girl on the veranda viewing the city lights sparkling in the night.

“Ehmm.. May I join you..” takamina finally spoke ofeering a girl a glass of wine.
“unn..” the girl just nod and take the glass
“It’s so beautiful isn’t it? I love this kind of view also.. so relaxing..” takamina open up a topic first
“I agree..” she softly spoke “This is a beautiful country..” she added
“So you’re not from here?” takamina

“Hai..I came from another country..” she answers, all of a sudden takamina remembers acchan by saying this, she look at the girl closely and observe the resemblance of their smile as she recalls acchan’s face on her mind. DEG she felt weird thinking of the possibility that this girl is acchan, she really think hardly how could she ask a proper way to remove her mask and show her face.

“Ano..Would you mind introducing one another.. I mean.. the party is almost done and I guess we can now remove the mask to properly commence each other” takamina bringing her confident to highest level to say this. When the girl was about to answer someone came in from their location and bowed to to her.
“Princess I thought you’ve gone somewhere.. please let us know if where are you going..” the person bowed
“Gomen.. I’m just here breathing some fresh air.. Don’t worry just go back inside I won’t going anywhere” commanding the person, as it leave right away leaving the two of them alone.
“You’re the princess? Maeda Atsuko?” takamina can’t hide her expression, and then she bowed “Nice to meet you, your highness”

“Onegai..don’t do such formality I’m here as a guests don’t treat me special..” acchan
“But you are special..” takamina
“No I’m not.. I’m just a human like you.. Being born as a princess..” she smiles then removing her mask slowly “I’m Maeda Atsuko from Akihabara.. yoroshiku..” she bend her legs holding her dress, bowing a princess style. Takamina’s heart was thumping she can’t barely manage it, the girl from the airport, the one that yuko teases her as crush at first sight was a princess? That’s all she thought seeing the face she wanted to see and finally no one is interrupting them.

“Acchan..” She spoke with shaky words grabbing the girls’ hand and say “I’m Takahashi Minami yoroshiku..” slowly she untied her mask revealing her face “They called me takamina too..” giving her warmest smile showing her dimples.

“Takamina?? What a coincident is this.. I mean since yesterday at the airport right? Then being you as my partner in the dance and then here?” acchan can’t hide her surprise looking at person in front of her, happiness is in their eyes words can’t express.
Takamina POV “yuko’s right this is love..”

They spend the night knowing each other more this time in details and this time no more disruption calling one another by their first name not by their nicknames. The following daysTakamina toured acchan in the city showing her the beautiful sceneries of Japan. It’s more like a date if you imagined it since only the two of them were strolling for the whole week. Until the time when acchan was about to leave and go back to her country.

“Atsuko.. Will you ever come back here?” takamina
“Of course I will, I just need to set things up back there, I already told my mom about this.. and minami..” acchan
“Hai?” takamina
“I want to live here…” acchan
“Really? Is your parent ok with that? I mean your kingdom? You’re the heiress right?” takamina
“No I’m not I’m the second daughter, so the kingdom is not my responsibility.. I’m asking you if you want me to live here..”acchan
“I really really really do atsuko.. Just now I don’t wanna let you go..” takamina

“I’m happy to hear that..wait for me.. It won’t be long..” acchan
“I will..and when you’re ready to come back here, I will be the one to pick you up in your kingdom..”takamina
“Keep your word minami.. I’m expecting that..” acchan kiss her on the cheeks, the she heard her flight announced by the attendant. When she about to go and leave, takamina grab her hand reaching her waist and kissed her on lips, as the princess replied the kiss lasted some moments that all the people stared at them in awe feeling their love to one another. No need to say the words that they like each other, their actions speaks from it.
“Take care my princess.. I’ll be waiting..” takamina pulled out the kiss
“I will return.. That’s a promise..And I’m gonna make sure we will not be parted again” acchan looking at her and lean a last kiss on her lips as she leave waving to her midget.

THE END..
wew.. this was long i thought it was just short..
just leave your comments pwease... :jphip:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: axel0048 on July 03, 2012, 12:30:53 AM

this is so cool!!!
there should have a part 2 of this!!!

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: Keisthename on July 03, 2012, 03:25:12 AM

aw this is so sweet! action speaks louder than words :heart:
also the masquerade party I could really imagine the grandiose party.. hnng and acchan as the princess.. she's so highhhh~~ :mon cry: dammit, luckily our prince *cough* takamina gets her. :shy1: :luvluv2:

Thanks for this, it's a really nice story.. can't stop giggling throughout since they always ended up bumping to one another then the last kiss at the ending. Hee.. superb! :mon XD: :mon thumb:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: chichay12 on July 03, 2012, 03:28:16 AM

omg!
I agree with you!
Part 2,part 2,part 2!!
This is so cool!!

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: moekare on July 03, 2012, 05:12:03 AM

Interesting story :thumbup I found it funny that Taka has to wear tux, while Yuko and Nyan2 wear dress lol :grin:
Prince Taka, you've found your princess :thumbsup
Thanks for updating it.

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: Haruko on July 03, 2012, 05:41:50 AM

Always yuko trolling.. why only takamin wear tux jaja funny..

yeah we need part 2..

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: wynaut on July 03, 2012, 12:28:24 PM

this is so interesting!!....i'll be waiting for your next update..

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: miyumi on July 03, 2012, 04:15:22 PM

Sugoi! This is really good! The story is fantastic and really funny! Keep it up! You're way better at writing than me!

:on GJ:

Title: Re: ツMY OS----MASQUERADE PARTY[atsumina][7/03/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 04, 2012, 11:31:45 AM

@axel0048 @Chichay12 @Haruko @wynaut Thank you.. I'm still thinking for the sequel of this.. I hope I can make it and I hope I'm not lazy to do it.. :nervous
@moe I'm glad you like it..
@Keisthename indeed I made actions more here than words :lol:
miyumi Finally you've commented :D

And to all of you thank you so much.. :jphip:

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- MASQUERADE PARTY [ATSUMINA][7/03/2012]
Post by: wynaut on July 04, 2012, 06:54:40 PM

oh men :banghead: i like your one shots here! just finish reading all more please!!

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- MASQUERADE PARTY [ATSUMINA][7/03/2012]
Post by: Megumi on July 05, 2012, 12:22:08 AM

:ptam-shy: on word: lovely!

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- MASQUERADE PARTY [ATSUMINA][7/03/2012]
Post by: axel0048 on July 05, 2012, 01:49:44 AM

please please please!!!!!!! make a sequel i beg you!!! :kneelbow:
this story is just too good!!! :farofflook:

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 06, 2012, 07:40:45 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

SMOOTH CRIMINAL

“At last for the long search in our mining exhibition we found it!” A man proudly announced this on national TV live, where all the press are there covering the latest scoop. In his hand he showed a sparkling jewel called a graynite, the size of it is as small as cherry fruit that has a color of green. Presently this is the most expensive mineral of all time because it is very rare more rare than a diamond. For more than 5 years of research on this jewel at last they found it.

“So where will you put the grynite sir?” the reporter ask
“In the museum of course because that’s the only safest place here.. I know many out there wants this already” the man answered as he keeps holding the jewel in his hands.

While on someone’s house watching the television as she sat on her living room.

“Sou..Maybe if I should get it she would be able to forgive me..” A girl talking to herself and starting to make a sketch plan and on that night she prepares her gadgets and gizmos.

When all her plan is set, she waited outside the museum stayed at the small park there and pretended to wait for someone. While in her mind she is sighting the most possible area where she could get inside, time passed by and it’s already 2am. Basically the small park in front of the museum is already quite and calm, there were only two people left there including herself, she manage to observe the other person sitting on the east side of the park.

“I bet she’s waiting for her lover” she thought while looking at the black hair length girl

When the guards were about to shift from their position she quickly seize this opportunity to go near to her target and change her usual outfit as a pro thief. Climbing up to the roof as her entrance making her way down using devices for a bandit like her. Smoothly she made her way down and slowly sneak around avoiding all the laser alarms, she can manage it well because her body is flexible enough and being small is an advantage. Successfully she manage to surpass all the traps as she’s about to walk calmly very confident that she will be able to have the graynite, when out of the blue someone dropped above wearing the same disguise as her and quickly took the graynite stone loking at her and giving her a smirk. She was surprise seeing this action although she expected another rival from the graynite but not at the same time. Without a thought she chased that person, while running on the way she accidentally tap one of the laser alarm by her foot which causes the whole museum to noise all over. The police and guard rapidly go inside and saw two people wearing all black escaping up above. The guards run after them at the roof while the two of them get cornered, the only option left is to jump at their own risk.

“Jump!!” her rival exclaimed
“Eh??” she disbelief
“I said Jump.. If you don’t then hugged them..” Then her rival really jump leaving her

“Chotoo..argg I have no choice I wish my limbs won’t break” she closed her eyes and jump following the other thief advice. As they threw their selves on the ground the guards didn’t manage to follow them to jump as well, instead they quickly ran down and seize them but it was too late the two thief phantom were already escape and run as fast as they can even though their body is aching due to the high dropped scene they did. They manage to rest in dark hall way street, still not letting their guard down because police are now scattered searching for the two of them.

She first remove her black mask covering her face “Hey.. I’m the one who got in the museum first you must give me that!” pointing to the jewel inside her pocket
“Yeah you’re the one who got in first but I’m the one who got it” revealing her face
“Eh? You’re a girl too?” she was surprised
“Why do I look like a boy?”
“No.. of course not.. Ahhmm ano…by the way Takahashi Minami desu..” she offers her hand (you doesn’t look like a boy but instead an angel)

“Seriously? Giving your true identity to me? Well in respect.. Call me acchan..” the tall girl with black length hair responded, not giving her full name just to be safe because they just met in this unexpected incident. They change their clothes right away and continuously walk ahead when they notices some police roaming around and the fact that they are the one they’ve been looking for. Although the police won’t identify their faces but what if they check their bags and found the clothes they wore they will probably get caught. As the two of them had no choice acchan the tall girl push takamina on the wall and kiss her torridly.

“whhaaattt are you doing? Youuu..” the short girl muttered while acchan kissing her passionately, takamina give up as her back was hardly push on the wall pinning one of her hands, she then realize that she was replying to the kiss, sliding her tongue to the other girls mouth and grabbing her waist more. When the police saw them kissing they didn’t even bother to disturb the two doing their thing. When the coast is clear and the sheriffs are gone, acchan was about to pull away but takamina grabbed her once more to continue what she had started.

“Their gone..” acchan says while gasping an amount of air
“So?” takamina raised her eye brows
“That was just a scene, I mean you.. me.. kissing.. to distract the police..” acchan looking at her
“Ah.. yeah.. I know..” takamina answered, but in fact she didn’t find what they did is just acting.
“So..we should be going now.. Separately..And thank you for your cooperation..” acchan smiled and pich her in the cheeks which cause her to blush a bit.
“You’re welcome.. Then see you around..” takamina beckon her goodbye too..

As acchan excitedly go home and talk to one of her allied who planned to steal the graynite Mariko “Marichan.. I got it..” she smiles, when she crawl her hands to her pocket and sees it, her eyes broadened as she bring out a piece of stone.

“Acchan? This isn’t the graynite.. it’s a stone.. a piece of ordinary stone..” mariko looking at it
“EHHHHH noooo… I manage to got it.. argggg that girl!! She tricked me!!” acchan is on rage
“Who is she? Did you fight someone?” mariko
“NO I didn’t, it’s just I met another thief in the museum at the same time but the police cornered us and we manage to do a truce to escape them, but she trick me!! I was the one who got the graynite first! Marichan trust me!!” acchan squealed

“I trust you and I believe in you.. You never fail me once.. Who is this girl? Did you recognize her?” mariko
“Yes.. she told me her name that’s her mistake.. She’s Takahashi Minami..” acchan
“Hmmm sou desu.. No wonder.. As I expected..” mariko let a small smile on her mouth an evil smile
“You know her?” acchan

“I really really know her.. She betrayed me 2years ago, when you’re still in Paris studying, she became my ally too.. one of the most top list like you, but there’s one mission that cause a billion value, she manage to get that but run away to us along with that amount, she didn’t even bother to explain or contact me.. I trusted her she was my friend..”
“Do you want me to find her for you?” acchan
“No need atsuko.. She will come back here.. I know that..” mariko confidently say it
“What about the graytine?”acchan
“Takamina will gave it to me..” mariko

While takamina was on her aparto resting she smilingly look at the graynite in her hands “hmm that was easy.. I regret doing it to you acchan.. but I need to.. I need to explain to mariko what happened during that time and I know this is the only thing that she would let me talk to her..she wants’ this badly, she’s really waiting for this jewel to be discovered by someone..And you acchan you’re a good kisser I hope we can meet again..” thinking what they did a while ago, while acchan was kissing her passionately she grabs her waist and slowly move her hands into the girl’s pocket, replacing the graynite of a piece of stone.

Three days had passed the media was still reporting the missing graynite, takamina decided to make the graynite as a pendant so she can wear it wherever she go and hide it to her shirt to assure that no one will take that away from her. While she was in a restaurant alone looking outside the window glass she thought she saw acchan but when she focused on the girl’s face she have just mistaken it.

“Maybe I was just thinking of her lately.. gaahh minami stop it..” she says while eating her favorite meal, she went to the comfort room to freshen up when someone locks the door. She look at the person who did that and saw that it was the girl she’s been thinking up lately.

“A..acchann..” takamina terrified
“yoroshiku minami..” acchan smiled and slowly walking towards her while takamina is back warding
“mmmm I think you doesn’t like to see me..” acchan still walking until she reach where the small girl was standing
“What do you want? If it’s the jewel..Sorry I can’t give it back to you..” takamina looking at the side avoiding the pretty girl’s brown eyes
“nah.. It’s all yours.. I’m not interested on it anymore..” acchan says as she remembers what mariko said to her that takamina will gave it to her in person

“Re..Really? So why are you here? Don’t tell me it’s a coincident” takamina still thinking that acchan might revenge for tricking her
“Nope..It’s not a coincident, as I saw you nearby and go in this restaurant.. I just wanted to know who’s with you and I found out that you’re alone so I followed you here..” acchan sweetly smiled at her that made takamina’s heart calm as the doubt just go away with one sweet smile. She was about to lean a kiss again when someone knocks and they forget that it was a comfort room, so someone will really come into the place. Takamina grab acchan’s hand as they open the door and headed immediately outside the restaurant.

“Where are we going?” acchan asks
“I don’t know..” takamina
“Let’s buy something to drink and go to your place.. How about that?” acchan pursuing her idea that takamina agrees with.
As soon as they reach takamina’s aparto they bring out the drinks they bought and started a toast at the living room. Acchan knew that her body can’t handle too much alcohol but still insisted to drink the last bottle takamina couldn’t do anything because the girl is very persuasive.

“Ne minami..” calling her first name while leaning her head on the smaller girls shoulder
“Acchan..you’re drunk you better rest..”

“oi..call me Atsuko.. *hic* that’s my first name *hic*”
“Alright Atsuko..You better rest..” takamina rephrasing her sentence
“Chottoo..*hic*.. I know already about you *hic* mariko told me *hic*” acchn lifted her head and face takamina looking her straight in the eyes
“Shinoda Mariko? Do you know her?” takamina asking seriously
“hai..*hic* I know her very well.. and she told me about you.. why did you betrayed her? *hic*” acchan speaking drunk

“I did not.. That’s why I really wanted to take the graynite to see her, I want to explain what happen..and..mmf” before she could continue the last word acchan has her lips already.
“I like you minami..*hic*” as she pulled away
“You’re drunk.. You don’t know what you’re saying..” takamina blushed she can’t hide it because the girl cupped her cheek to focused on her

“Yes I’m drunk but I’m not numb.. I know what I’m saying.. I like you.. I want you.. *hic*” acchan still staring at her that made takamina shy and look down, the tall girl raised up her chin and kiss her again wrapping her arms around the small girl until they both fell on the floor. Acchan can’t hardly stand because of dizziness takamina raise her up bringing her on her room while the tall girl still snuggling and can’t walk properly. Takamina drop her off on the bed as the taller girls already closed her eyes flew to dreamland.

“A thief that isn’t immune to alcohol” takamina just let a small chuckle while at the girl on the bed. Knowing that there’s only one bed in her room she decided to sleep in the living at the couch, but before she could leave acchan noticed her presence and half openly her eyes, she grab the small girl’s hem line in her shirt pulling towards her.

“Stay..” acchan
“Yes I’m just right here now go back to sleep angel..” takamina stroking her hair
“No.. Stay by my side..” acchan stretch her arms and pat her right hand on the bed saying that takamina should lie there.
“Alright.. I’ll be sleeping with you..” the small girl had no choice as acchan was gripping her shirt tighly not letting go of her.

Takamina woke up first she turn to her side to view the other person beside her sleeping peacefully, while looking at her pretty face examining every part of it from her hair, forehead, eyes, nose, lips and her chin. Something caught her attention while looking down to her chin from her neck she notice some red marks on it when she’s about to peek under the blanket she was alarmed that the girl sleeping beside her was naked she immediately look to her own body too and astonish seeing herself naked also. Goosebumps run all over her body and try to remember what happen last night.

*yawn* “minami..ohayou..” the girl beside her greeted sweetly and hug her.
“ahh ummm ohayou..” takamina looking at her in furious state
“Ohh don’t give that puppy look minami.. Last night you were just like a hungry wolf eating me.. ne?” acchan giggled and kiss her on the lips still hugging her. Takamina then now remembers what she has done to drunken girl last night.

“Atsuko.. I’m sorry.. I take advantage of you..” looking at her showing her serious worried face.
“Do you regret doing it?” acchan ask her
“No..But you were drunk.. I don’t want you to think that I’m taking advantage the situation while I’m the one who’s normal” takamina
“I maybe drunk but I’m not insensitive, I felt it and I like what we did..” acchan biting her lip while her one hand was under the blanket already tracing takamina’s naked body drawing lines on her stomach downwards.
“A..atsuko.. we haven’t done our breakfast yet..” takamina panicking
“So? I shall be your breakfast.. Don’t you wanna eat me?” the aggressive girl rapidly move and climbs on top of her, doing again what they did last night.

After the squashy moments they did from bed to bathroom until to the very last part of the aparto. Takamina decided to go with acchan and meet mariko once and for all. When they reach the quarter house where mariko and acchan lives she gasp the graynite on to her chest lending some courage to face her old friend and hopes that everything will be alright.

“Acchan.. You’re home..” one of the servants greeted her
“hai and we have a special guest.. Hmm where’s marichan?” acchan
“She on the usual room..” servant
“Arigatou.. Let’s go minami..” acchan holds her hand as takamina bowed to the servant

Knock knock “Marichan.. it’s me..” upon recognizing the voice mariko assured it was acchan
“Come in..” but her mood suddenly changed when she saw the girl behind from her clenching her fist and her eyes looking directly at the small girl.
“Nice to you see you again…Mariko..” Takamina greeted her

“I shall leave the both of you to talk.. And also I’m just on the side.. Don’t make fight just talk..urusai?” acchan with her bossy aura look at them

“Atlast takamina.. You showed up.. so what happen after your betrayal?” mariko giving a very sharp word
“I did not betrayed you..That’s why I’m here to explain..Would you let me?” takamina brings out the graynite that mariko really wanted, as long as mariko have this in her hand she sit on the chair and ready to listen as an exchange.
“Then begin..” mariko

“I did not run away after I got the sealed painting, they caught me, our opponent on that painting Nogi’s group... and I don’t how to contact you..Because they’ve locked me and shipped away from another place..” takamina her eyes are now teary

“What are you talking about? You even sent me a postcard!” mariko
“It wasn’t me! They did that to trick you! I was lost and I don’t have a single penny.. For two years I’ve work as a normal person just to gain enough savings to go back here..” takamina
“I’ve already killed their leader and her comrades are on jail.. I’ve sent them on trap..” mariko reassures her
“Well.. but that’s not my point.. I want you to believe me that I didn’t betrayed you” takamina showed her some proof that mariko faultlessly believe her with no doubt

“Takamina..gomen..For past two years I really taught you did that.. I’m sorry if I never trusted you.. I was so greedy..Having only in my mind was the treasure and I didn’t even find you..” mariko down on her knees asking for forgiveness
“It’s alright.. I think everything happens on a reason..The way are things happening now.. I’d never hated you mariko..you’re my friend.. ” takamina held her up and they hugged each other for reconciling.

“So you two are fine now?” acchan opens the door “I’m sorry if I listen..Can’t help it” giggling
“So what happen to the painting?” mariko
“I threw it on the river so that no one would have it neither us nor Nogi’s group” takamina
“Ehh??!! Oh that’s worth a billion.. and the fish are enjoying it” mariko

“Well we can always take a new one right?” takamina
“Yeah sure..and now you’re back.. This seems to be perfect..”mariko

As they headed to the dining area to eat while walking takamina grab acchan to the side and press her on the wall, when mariko sees this she just let the two do their thing and continue to her way.

“Minami.. What now?” acchan
“You think I would let you go so easily you filthy pretty thief.. ” takamina
“Hah? What did I do?” acchan confused and she can’t move because her wrists are being hold firmly
“You stole..something from me atsuko..” takamina
”nande???” acchan
“My heart…” takamina looking at her with her eyes pleading with sincerity

“Do you have any proof?” acchan muttered
Takamina kiss her in gentle way softly biting her lips “Is that enough proof to you?”
“Nope.. I want more my handsome criminal..” the tall girl seductively say as takamina release her wrist she wrap her arms on the small girl’s neck while takamina;s hands where travelling already on her legs going up and continue doing the she started until they end up in acchan’s room and you know already what they did there. *wink*

THE END
Do leave your comments pweae.. I really be grateful about it :jphip:

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: miyumi on July 06, 2012, 09:00:28 PM

I like the ending. It was really good and cute. Imagining Takamina as a theif was really funny. Keep it up! :onioncheer:

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: wynaut on July 07, 2012, 01:09:55 PM

this one shot of yours is awesome..
all of your OS has a different theme of story whick i like!
keep writing and keep posting!
Thank you!

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: ichikawa on July 07, 2012, 05:52:11 PM

:w00t: I like how Minami stole the graynite fom Acchan... :twothumbs

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Sou..Maybe if I should get it she would be able to forgive me..

At first I thought Takamina have relationship with Mariko, glad it was just friendship :P
Nice Atsumina moment at the end with the cheesy Taka~ :twothumbs

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: Haruko on July 08, 2012, 05:13:49 AM

Quote from: ichikawa on July 07, 2012, 05:52:11 PM

:w00t: I like how Minami stole the graynite fom Acchan... :twothumbs

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Sou..Maybe if I should get it she would be able to forgive me..
At first I thought Takamina have relationship with Mariko, glad it was just friendship :P
Nice Atsumina moment at the end with the cheesy Taka~ :twothumbs

Yeah the best way for stole something..

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 08, 2012, 11:03:11 AM

you fanfic...i like it..pls continue writing....

i love atsumina....or kai and acchan...

Title: Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
Post by: Keisthename on July 10, 2012, 03:02:18 AM

Ohohoh i like this.. so they ended up stealing the most precious treasure ever in the world.. their hearts :luvluv2:
gahahah cheesy!! :hiakhiakhiak: :shy2:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 12, 2012, 08:42:39 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

A/N I was supposed to post this during acchan's birthday but I change my mind teehee
I hope you'll like this one shot, a post-birthday fic..
I didn't include minors in the scene such as mayuyu and jurina lol

BODY SHOT

“Kampai!!” they all chorus as they tossed their glasses filled with champagne. Mariko, miichan, haruna, tomochin, tomomi, yukirin, Sae, mochii, takamina and of course the birthday celebrant maeda atsuko. All of them decided to have a post celebration on her birthday held at Mariko’s place.

“Gomen.. am I just in time?” yuko pant as she runs through out the door.
“Yuuchan..You’re just in time..” haruna welcoming her squirrel
“Omedatou acchan! I brought something to heat up the night more..” yuko brought out the bag

“Whoa??! Vodka! You’re really awesome yuko!” mariko
“Well that’s me oshima yuko!” the proud squirrel posed

“Oh no..not again..” takamina worrying in advance because the last time they celebrate tomochin’s birthday as far as she remembered yuko also brought some alcohol it was tequila, takamina knows what will happen tonight as she let a heavy sigh.
“How about we do a body shot tonight?” tomochin grinning, upon asking most of them agreed except for the poor captain that she had no choice again.
“So I shall now prepare the lemons and salt” Miichan

“You know this kind of drinking right? It’s exciting and hot!” tomochin she further explained. “The procedure is simple, we must draw a name in the bowl to identify our partner since our number is not even because were 11 person participating. When you got your partner’s name and it’s your turn to make the shot, you must choose whether on neck, on chest, on collar bone, on stomach or on thigh. Once you have chosen the part, lick that to moisten then pour the exact quantity of salt that you can handle and place the wedge of lemon in your partner’s mouth make them bite it softly. Then that’s it chose the part, put the salt, lick it and suck the lemon from their mouth”

“Urusai?” tomochin ask all of them, concentrating what the duck lip girl has explained.
“I like this game!” yuko biting her lower lip
“Why do we always play these kind of games every time we had a gathering?” takamina in despair
“I’m nervous..” yukirin holding her own hand

“How many bottle of vodka did you buy yuuchan?” Haruna
“Five my sweetie..Just enough for all of us I think..” yuko
“Fa..Five???I think one bottle is enough..Oh no..” takamina kneel down gasping

“Shall we start then? Time is running guys” mariko dangling the glass
“I hope I can get your name captain..” mochii wink at takamina, while acchan just look at takamina of how would she react on mochii’s phrase.
“Yosh! Let’s starto!.. Again my gratitude to all of you for making this little gathering for me..Arigatou..”acchan bowed to them

“By the way..We shall do the body shot on the second bottle..We must first warm up ourselves by the first bottle” tomochin opening the first bottle

After 2 rounds the first bottle was already empty, they can really feel the effect of the alcohol in their body, they’re not drunk only heating up. Acchan could feel her face getting warm and turning light pink while takamina forge herself to stay normal as possible and fight the alcohol effect even though she can really feel that her confident was increasing and she’s not shy anymore.

“I hate this feeling..” takamina
“I like this feeling..” yuko grinning to her
“oi oi.. you two.. come here closer.. Were about to start..” miichan pointing to the two midgets

“So who’s first? chiyuu” tomomi
“let’s draw..” sae pick a name in the fish bowl “Haruna!”
“eh?? Me..” haruna
“Yes who else is haruna here? tsk” mariko teasing her

“Alright pick a name to identify your body shot partner..hayaku..” tomochin, when haruna pick a name surprisingly the name was yuko.
“Oh.. I know she will like it..” yukirin
“Yuuchan..” haruna showed it to them
“Really nyan nyan??! That’s what you called destiny!” yuko laughing proudly and position herself as haruna came closer to her bringing a lemon and a salt.

“I choose the neck part” haruna
“Yada nyan nyan I want the thigh part..The lower the better..” yuko
“Hentai!” haruna spank the squirrel, as she initiate the ritual wetting yuko’s neck and put some salt on it she lick it gracefully like a plate which cause the small girl jokingly moan to tease her, haruna take the shot of vodka then rapidly suck the lemon on yuko’s mouth in a flash because the vodka really is a strong drink.

“That’s it? Oh I want more nyan nyan..” yuko
“Shut up yuuchan.. You wait until it’s your turn.. And if luckily you pick me..” haruna stuck her tongue out
The next round was mochii picking takamina’s name which made the ace clench her teeth and gave a fake smile, while the other’s obviously knew what she felt especially her beloved captain.

“Well faith it is.. as yuko said..” mochiii
“After this I’m dead..” takamina in her greatest frustration

Mochii chooses takamina’s collarbone as her target part, while mochii doing her shot the captain’s eyes was looking at the ace pleading that she had no choice she didn’t decide this unfortunately acchan couldn’t read thoughts so she just looked at the two and playing the uncut lemon in her hand squeezing it alternately until she burst it out when mochii sucks the lemon on takamina’s mouth.

“ah gomen.. I rip the lemon..I can’t help it, it’s so squashy..” acchan making excuse

After many rounds of shots mariko to miichan, miichan to haruna, sae to mariko, yukirin to sae, tomochin to mochii, acchan to tomomi next was yuko to takamina that was so auckward to both of them they didn’t expect this, so yuko chooses takamina’s neck the safest part she made it quickly and gulp the vodka in one blink just to finish immediately. All them was laughing at the two small girls for the first time making this kind of act. The birthday celebrant was now a bit drunk on her left was takamina guarding her behavior and along with her right side was yuko who is tough on alcohol but this time the vodka got her and made her drunk a little too. They paused the game because they were out of lemon mariko and miichan goes to the kitchen to cut some more.

“Fun fun we hit the step step ♫♫So don't keep yourself we know we love oh” acchan singing their latest collab with exile few days ago in a show.
“Heat heat beat's like a skip skip♪” yuko continues it while their laughing on what they’re doing.

Takamina just look at the two and shake her head seeing the two aces singing happily with each other, when suddenly one of the ace acchan grabs her neck and place her mouth on the captain’s ear ending the song with “To the paradise take me please oh Choo choo train♫” when she pulled out acchan gave her a seductive smile that takamina knows that was no ordinary smile, it has a meaning.

When mariko and miichan was done, the shot resume and finally it was takamina’s part. When takamina pick a name the result was acchan, which made everyone smirk. Not knowing earlier when mariko and miichan was on the kitchen they sabotage the names in the fish bowl putting more acchan’s name so that the captain would really pick the celebrant. This was mariko’s idea she taught this was her birthday gift to the ace.

“Ahh it’s acchan..” takamina smiled and show the name to everyone for proof
“sou..I’ve waiting for this minami..finally you pick my name..” acchan seductively look to her

“woohooo!! This is exciting!” yuko shouted
“Takamina pick you part!” sae
“ahh..ano…”takamina couldn’t answer right away, the truth is she doesn’t know what part would she pick to place the salt.
“I know you want me..” acchan whispering to her
“……..gulp” takamina was too shy to said the part that she wants to lick the salt
“Should I say it instead?” acchan teasing her

“Atsuko…hmmmm I’d choose…” takamina
“Seriously midget I know want you want! Bring it on!” yuko giving her support
“I’d choose her thigh!” takamina burst it finally
“That’s my captain!” miichan
“Only my thigh huh?” acchan trolling

As takamina chooses that part acchan let her captain to pull up her skirt, the ace chuckling while looking at the small girl lifting her skirt. Takamina almost seeing her underwear blink twice and quickly change her view to her target shot. She lick to moisten and put some salt on the thigh as smoothly huff the salt with her tongue taking the shot she quickly stand and suck the lemon on the ace mouth. While acchan holding the lemon tightly in her mouth which made the captain pulled the lemon more, but the ace put her hands on takamina’s back head and push it more to prolong the lemon taking scene. Everyone was stunned especially yuko who was drooling already when the lemon drops from acchan’s mouth, takamina sucking her lips instead of the lemon and ended up kissing one another gently but passionately.

“I think the lemon was too sour for takamina to drop it” yukirin
“I think acchan’s lips were more fascinating than the lemon, that’s why takamina drops it” sae
“I think they need a room..” tomochin

“yuuchan you’re bleeding!!” haruna exclaimed which made the two kissing couple to stop and look at yuko who was stunned by them.
“Marichan…” acchan called

“Ah..Yeah I know that! upstairs third door on the right!”
“Guest room eh?” takamina nuzzle to her not pulling out from the hug.

“That’s what we need minami..A room..” acchan kisses her again on the lips, that made the captain no other choice but to lift her like a bride and headed directly to the room to continue what they had started.

THE END
Hope you enjoyed it..
leave a comment sankyuu :jphip:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
Post by: axel0048 on July 12, 2012, 09:34:13 PM

:mon bleed2:
i want a full version of this!!!! :bow:
this fic is so great!!!!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
Post by: Haruko on July 13, 2012, 06:37:39 AM

OMG!!! happy day acchan :D with your husband :D

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
Post by: wynaut on July 13, 2012, 02:16:26 PM

:nya: your one shots is really unique!

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acchan grabs her neck and place her mouth on the captain’s ear ending the song with “To the paradise take me please oh Choo choo train♫”

I can relate on this coz I saw the episode! EXILE and AKB48 singing choo choo train :twothumbs

Make more story please!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 13, 2012, 06:11:12 PM

@wynaut yey you've watched it too!!
@axel0048full version soon XD i just need to finish some scenes in the the other story ahead
@haru9210 @Haruko Arigatou :)

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
Post by: axel0048 on July 13, 2012, 06:17:19 PM

ARIGATOU!!!!!!!! :mon XD:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 13, 2012, 08:33:56 PM

wowww...i hope acchan celebrate her birthday everyday...hehe :lol:
Please Continue!!!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
Post by: wynaut on July 14, 2012, 12:39:14 PM

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i want a full version of this!!!! :bow:

I AGREE!!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 14, 2012, 01:27:37 PM

AH!!! I really want full version. NO!! I NEED FULL version!! :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
Post by: Keisthename on July 14, 2012, 02:40:00 PM

I read this yesterday while I was at the bus. hahaha This made me really smile.. it's just sooo cute, I wished you continued it to what had happened in the room. trololol.. :on bleed:

:heart: :heart: :heart: Will be looking forward for your new updates!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012]
Post by: miayaka on July 18, 2012, 07:03:32 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

THE DATING GAME [kojiyuu version]

When yuko heard that acchan won in the dating game show which the no3b members participated she immediately called the ace on that night to seek some information.

On acchan apartment where she and takamina spend the night after the show the ace mobile rung that the two of them stopped on what they are doing in the bed.
“Atsuko you’re phone..” takamina on top of her panting
“Just don’t mind it minami..” pulling her captain closer for another kiss
“Maybe you should answer it..I bet it’s important calling you late at night..” the ribbon girl murmurs while their lips attached to each other.
“Alright..” biting the captains lips before extending her left arm to get the cell phone in the lamp desk near the bed. When saw the name yuko on the caller ID she shows it to takamina and the two was curious why the team K ace would call her this late.

“moshi moshi..”
“Acchan!! Finally you pick the phone..Sorry to disturb you..are you sleeping already?” yuko
“nope..not yet..What’s the matter yuko? Is there any problem?” acchan
“Yes there is! I heard that you won the dating game with takamidget..and..I want to do that too with nyan nyan ya know..” yuko
“Ah..hmm that’s why you called..So what can I do for you?” acchan

“Acchan the problem is they didn’t invite me to guest in that show! Because I had another shooting, but it was move so now I can participate, do you know when will the next episode be filmed? I don’t wanna ask the no3b members about it they will find out my intension especially nyan nyan..” yuko
Acchan suddenly hung up the conversation and ask takamina about it without telling yuko’s plan “Yuko the next episode would be haruna you’re right, and it will be filmed tomorrow”
“Sou..arigatou acchan..the info is sure fat huh..” yuko
“ahmm well yeah..really fast” acchan can’t hide her tickling feeling when takamina’s hand was moving inside the blanket teasing her while talking to you

“AHA! So the captain really is there! Doing some smut huh..I envy you! I miss my nyan nyan so much..I need to be on that game and make sure to win it!” yuko act crying
“Well ganbarre yuko..I know you can do it! So just inform me on tomorrow’s event alright? I’ve gotta go..goodnight and sleep well muah” acchan ended the call and face takamina again “you little hentai is that all you’ve got?” challenging the captain on top of her and they continue the long hot night *censor*

“Takamina sure is lucky tonight..” yuko mutter before closely flipping her phone.

Yuko arrived on the studio earlier than the guest no3b so that she can connive to the contestant’s. Using her cute points she manage to convince one of the girls to be replace by her and with her victory she is now part of the girls where haruna would choose later in the game.

“That was easy I never thought my puppy eye would work..” yuko chuckled as she keep on thinking how to win the game, she must win it no matter what in her thoughts. She just stops when she heard the mc stating the show.

“Minna here we are again in your most favorite dating show, as we refrain the last episode this is akb48’s no3b special, takahashi minami was the first to participate and chooses her date maeda atsuko without knowing it. Today as we continue the second member of no3b would be none other than Kojima Haruna, let’s welcome her with a round of applause” the MC revealing haruna and take her to the seat

“As you’ve notice everyone, the rule of this dating episode is different from takahashi san, this time the three girls in the cubicle would not talk to say their answers but instead they will write it. As always I will be the one who’s going to ask the question haruna would answer it too by writing it. Now this is the twist of faith, whoever from the girls who match the same answer as haruna will get the point and the first who gets 3 points shall win in this game. The prize would be doing a body massage together brought to you by our most beloved sponsors.”

“Girls pen up where about to start”

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MC : Question number one. In your own observation what do you think is the most sexiest part of your body??
Girl No. 1 : Lips
Girl No. 2 : Eyes
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : Legs
Haruna : Legs

MC: We have a match answer here! One point to girl no. 3!
Yuko POV “Yosh! That’s me! You’re mine nyan nyan”

MC: Question number two. For Valentine’s Day, which would you most like to receive?
Girl No. 1 : Candy
Girl No. 2 : Chocolate
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : Kiss
Haruna : Flowers

MC: no match answer here, Kojima san’s answer was Flowers!
Yuko POV “Wut?? But last valentine I gave her a kiss! And she likes it!”

MC: Question number three. If lips were ice creams what flavor would you like to taste?
Girl No. 1 : Vanilla
Girl No. 2 : Peaches
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : Strawberry
Haruna : Strawberry and creams

MC: Should we consider this answer? *The MC asking the judges* Alright it’s considerable since the question is flavor! Girl no. 3 matches it! One more point and she will be the winner!
Yuko POV “I’m going to end this game in perfectly..no sweat!”

MC: Question number four. What’s the sexiest outfit you’ve ever wore?
Girl No. 1 : a very short shorts
Girl No. 2 : backless dress
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : night lingerie gown
Haruna : night gown
MC: The game was done! Girl no.3 swipes it all!

While the mc was revealing the other girls yuko can’t help her evil laugh as she knew the results.

MC : now for the winner let us call girl no. 3 onegai reveal yourself!
“ehhh..Yuuchan?” haruna was shocked
“Is that oshima yuko? But she’s not one of the contestants right? How come?” the staffs wondered the scenario, when a sudden call to one of the staff explains that they have to replace the original girl with yuko for some emergency backout. This was maeda atsuko’s plan actually helping her friend not to get busted.

“Nyan nyan….I knew you were mine and mine alone even in this game we are destined for each other..” yuko cuddling haruna

MC: I guess we have made another couple here..Enjoy your prize girls!

After the show they headed quickly to the spa center and enjoy the body massage treatment. While changing their clothes before heading to the massage room.

“ne nyan nyan..we should go bath in the warm water together after this..” yuko grinning
“I know what you want yuuchan..” haruna
“I haven’t been receiving kisses from you lately and I miss it!” yuko asked

“You miss me? Hmmm well prove it tonight..” haruna smiled seductively and kisses the corner of her lips teasing her squirrel. Yuko was about to touch her but haruna grip her hands “Oops massage first yuuchan you really can’t wait huh..”
“Ow c’mon..” yuko in her frustration “I’m gonna make sure you will begged my name tonight nyan nyan” yuko warned her and they both go to the massage room to claim their prize.

THE END :panic:
sorry for my ending :nervous

Title: Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012] update
Post by: damedayo on July 18, 2012, 08:47:25 PM

Just read the Dating Game fics! So funny! Loved it. Especially the Kojiyuu: "Wut?? But last valentine I gave her a kiss! And she likes it!” LOOL
Need the read the others :D
Thanks for sharing!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012] update
Post by: kahem on July 19, 2012, 12:06:48 AM

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
good job Yuko

Title: Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012] update
Post by: moekare on July 19, 2012, 04:52:30 AM

:twothumbs KojiYuu is cute!
Ofc Yuko wins, she knows Nyan2 so well :mon lol:
thank you for your update :grin:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012] update
Post by: Haruko on July 19, 2012, 07:08:38 AM

jajaaj yuuchan of course with your puppy eye no one can say "no" to you...

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: miayaka on July 21, 2012, 12:19:20 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

CASINO ROYALE

In the world of gamblers winner takes it all, even you sacrifice your own life just to win the bid. For these elite people gambling is not an addiction but perhaps a pastime hobby to enjoy their free time, some releases their stress by wasting their money while some were seeking an instant fortune in one night only.
Takahashi Minami was fond of this game not losing to anyone on the table, she’s known for that title. Many had challenged her but ended up beaten, casinos in her country respected her for having a lucky hand in cards.

MINAMI POV

There’s one thing I want more in this game of luck, if anyone could beat me up I shall stop. Maybe the god of gamblers heard me when I thought of this phrase. It was just a year ago when I saw this beautiful hot pretty angel face girl that’s how I described her I just can’t find the words to define her features. I thought she came here by accident because this isn’t a typical hang out for girls like her. She’s with her friends that time observing the players in the poker table while looking at her face she suddenly smirk as she saw my friend yuko win the game. I didn’t think that time that she knows the game too until she politely grab a seat and asked the dealer to transact her with cards. The game was not as big as our bet when I played but in five consecutive rounds she swipes all of them with a calm face. Beginner’s luck that’s what I concluded, but then again she prove me wrong every time she played. Still I haven’t feel the urge to fight her, I’m still wrapping the thought that she won’t beat me praising myself because I know my own ability when it comes to games. Days and months passed by she’s been here in the casino regularly almost every day and we tend to see each other but not greeted formally. She’s just like me when I was starting before slowly gaining attention and much later on became popular in this community.

“The bet goes 40 million now takamina..” miichan one of colleague told me
“Really? Well not that big yet huh..” I answered
“That girl Maeda really is awesome, she’s just like you..” miichan
“Her name is Maeda?” I curiously ask
“Maeda Atsuko..That’s her name and I like her she always gave us tips not the cheap one like yours..” miichan chuckles at me
“Atsuko eh..Interesting..” right just on time when I said that the last deal ended and the players requested some break to ease the tension. I immediately approached her and introduce my name.

“Maeda san.. You’re a great player, I’ve heard you haven’t lose yet” I smiled to her showing my dimples in a very cute way just for her.
“ahh..The popular takahashi minami..At last you came towards me.. Maeda Atsuko desu..Call me Atsuko onegai..” she bowed 90 degree in front of me, I wasn’t shock if she knows me already, as my friends says I’m a popular gambler nowadays sorry if I’m being too proud of that.
“Then call me minami as well..” I replied to her and she gave me a sweet beam, I was happy at that moment not happy actually but super happy I just don’t know why I didn’t think of her as my rival.
“Are you not playing anymore? As I have observed you’re just roaming around always..” she asked me
“Hmm nope I’m still in playing I guess I’m just waiting for the perfect opponent and I think I found it..” I’m giving her a clue that I’m pointing her as my challenger.

“Sou..I bet that person is really lucky to play with you..Excuse me I have to continue the game break is over..” she gave me a smirked before she goes back to the table and after a few moments the game ended flawlessly again she’d won the 40 million race.
We became closer as we chat every time she’ll play, now I’m at her side looking at her always while playing as she would look at me too doing the same thing. Our thoughts were connected no need for words just by looking at her she knows what I want to tell her.
“Are you not threatened to her takamina?” the senior dealer sayaka asked me

“Why should I?” I simply responded
“Our players here wants you to match her..Are you gonna accept it?” it took me for a while to answer sayaka
“…Honto? What for?” I reasoned out because honestly I don’t want to be with her in the same table as enemies.
“Silly that’s the game..They want to know who’s the best..” when sayaka saying this I really thought of something that could endure the game to make it more realistic. Before the night ended I accept the challenge and I was surprised that atsuko was happy about it, I don’t know why maybe this is what she wants too.

The night has come there were only two players me and her, the game was poker all out at all stake. When the dealer starts the card distribution I really pursuit my bet, I’m very careful about it even though we I like my enemy so much I still don’t want to lose with her. No words were coming between us, we are so focus that only our eyes meet their gazes.

“Place your bet..” Dealer starts the race
“All out..500 million minami..” she challenges me..
“So do I atsuko..500 million buy in..” I smirked confidently, I can hear the crowd murmured on the pot money.
“Takamina..You sure about this? I’m getting nervous..” yuko whispered to me
“Daijoubo yuko..” I sigh
“Let’s reveal your cards..takamina you’re first” dealer gesturing me to open my cards

“Straight flush..7♠6♠5♠4♠3♠” I smiled and scattered the five cards on the table

“tsk tsk..uh oh..minami..” she tilt her head in disappointment that made me shock and reveals her card “In your highness.. Royal flush A♦ K♦ Q♦ J♦ 10♦” she smirked giving me a flying kiss, that flying kiss was the sign of my defeat but on the other hand I blushed like a red card. The crowd claps at her while the team beside me was in awe.

“sugoii atsuko..you beat me..” I congratulate her and insisted for another game, still the same bet but more higher. The pot money goes 1billion this time a really huge amount that can made one of us a billionaire and one will be deprived. As expected she agreed but before the cards were deal I added some twist of condition.”How about if I win..Marry me.. and if I lose you create your own condition too” that was embarrassing of me but the crowd supported me like crazy I can see her face turn like strawberry pink.

“Acchan?” her assistant asked her

“I won’t tell my consequence if you lose, I must think hardly of it since your bet is my life..” she answered me directly.
“Alright I’m accepting it wholeheartedly” I responded her

“Let’s begin..” the dealer starts the distribution, silence where dominating we can almost hear each other’s heartbeat as we draw the cards. When finally the dealer stops and asked us to reveal our cards.

“This time Maeda san onegai..show us your card” dealer ask her

“Straight..three of a kind.. Q♣ Q♦ Q♠ 5♥ 3♥” she showed it

“Oh my..” I gasped my mouth and she looks at me, my face turned smirk and says “Full house eh~ my dear soon to be wife..10♣ 10♥ 10♦ 4♥ 4♣” I chuckled for my victory looking at her beautiful face, I can’t predict her emotion at that time because everyone was rejoicing with us. Until she approached me in the end of the game telling me “I’m glad you win it minami..Because I have the same consequence too for you..Making you mine for the rest of your life..” I was astonished by her words and she quickly gave me a deep kiss that I responded despite of all the people looking at us.

Until that day on from today we are now happily married and waiting for our first child which will about to come out, we manage all the casinos in the country and became more popular as the two gamblers who fell not for money but for love.

THE END
sorry for my english :panic:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: Sydney W on July 21, 2012, 01:08:13 PM

Love at first sight in casino. Waiting their first born child. Could it be another update?

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: Keisthename on July 21, 2012, 01:13:27 PM

aw this is lovely! :3 :wub:
I really like how you're using different situations in making your stories. Hehee..
will be waiting for your next update!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: chichay12 on July 21, 2012, 02:03:27 PM

SUGOIIIIIII!!!!!!
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
ATSUMINA!!!!!
:imdead: :imdead: :imdead:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 21, 2012, 05:39:22 PM

AAAAA!!!!
Great FIC!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: Haruko on July 21, 2012, 06:38:45 PM

wow atsumina`s baby.. love it

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: kahem on July 21, 2012, 07:15:26 PM

Woohoo! Love and casino FTW!!!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: wynaut on July 22, 2012, 05:40:38 PM

I always love your concept!
more updates please!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: ichikawa on July 22, 2012, 07:26:46 PM

This is lovely~ :heart: :heart:
Proposing in casino and win a wife in gambling was cool! :thumbup :thumbup
Wanting for more Atsumina~ :inlove: :inlove:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: miayaka on July 23, 2012, 03:58:26 PM

Finally after a long weekend vacation haist..

@Sydney W I'll update if I'll ever come up with a sequel on this :D
@Keisthename My mind is full of bugs i think teehee that's why i always came up with weird stories
@FleanDon't bang your head fleany! I'm waiting for your update too :on bleed: you know what i mean, "the pm fic"
@Chichay12Sankyuuu :on lol:
@TakaminaBG :kneelbow:honto ni arigatou
@HarukoI'm always ending up with a baby eh~ thanks you like it
@kahem I was inspired by this XD
@wynaut my weird concepts
@ichikawa

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Wanting for more Atsumina

you can count on me on that! I'm being biased

Thank you minna..

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: miyumi on July 23, 2012, 04:48:57 PM

Wow I never imagined Acchan and Takamina being gamblers. Great story! :farofflook:

Oh and welcome back! I was wondering where you were.

This story is really great. Keep it up! :onioncheer:

I'll be waiting for more atsumina. :nya:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- CASINO ROYALE [atsumina] [7/21/2012] update!
Post by: fausto on August 06, 2012, 08:30:01 PM

It was so good, i wich it would be a next chapter!!!!!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- You Octopi My Heart [9/12/2012] update!
Post by: miayaka on September 11, 2012, 10:56:31 PM

OS Fics index (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33223.msg1057370#msg1057370)

Octopi means occupy :p

You Octopi My Heart

As a transferee student here in my new school I was just observing my surroundings new people and new place. Asking myself where should I start because honestly I’m not the friendly type, I will just wait when someone approaches me first that’s how I introduce myself. Days and weeks past I have now the so called friends not that many but enough to make me happy. I’m joining clubs and other activities too which I find interesting to be part of. There’s this guy whose name is popular on the campus at first I didn’t care I don’t mind him and besides I don’t know him and he don’t know me. He’s trendy because of his cool looks and reputation title that made almost all the girls here except me giving him letters every time they saw him.

“DEG DEG DEG here they come..” miichan one of my closest friend can’t behave herself holding my hand tight.
“So?” I asked her furiously
“Acchan don’t just say that word, were so lucky to be passed by them especially him so kakkoiii!”
“Well I won’t bother to look at them” I say as I continue to read some pages on the book.

“kyaaaaa” I hear miichan’s sharp voice that made me jump off a little by surprise, as expected many girls were following his group like a bunch of bubbling baboons. I didn’t notice I dropped my hanky when miichan exaggerate her voice beside me. While my eyes are on the book someone in front of me flip it to close.

“Ano..Is this yours?” That person asked me, my eyes shift toward his face. I cleared my throat as I saw it was him giving me back my hanky to his hands, with a flash move I grabbed it with a glare “Arigatou..” I was annoyed of all the people who would pick up my drop off why it would be him.
“Acchan???!!” miichan looks at me “Kai kun she’s grateful that you pick it up for her, right?” miichan’s eyes were telling me to agree with her.
“Yeah right..” rolling my eyes an quickly left the scene, me and my bad attitude again.
“Cute..” he says, but without any thought I leave the scene showing my impolite side.

“Chotto can I know your name?” I can hear him but choose to be deaf by his question
“Ah her name is Maeda Atsuko! We were just kinda hurry Kai..Ja! ” I sighed as I heard miichan told her my name, the gachapin was running towards me smiling as if she’s the one having my name.
“Miichan… You don’t have to that.. I don’t like that kind of guy so risky..”
“Acchan he’s just being friendly with you what’s wrong with that? And he said you’re cute! I bet he likes you!”
“Stop it.. He don’t.. He’s just.. Well one of the guys I knew whose words were as sweet as candy but poisonous when you ate it.”

“I think Kai is not like that many like’s him!”
“Exactly miichan..Many adores him that it’s too peril to be his friend”

With just that occurrence rumor was spreading in the rooms talking about kai’s new girl interest. I can hear them while walking on the hall way going to my section.

“The girl is so lucky to be asked by her name”
“But I heard she ignores kai sama..”
“Honto? If I were her I would faint!”
“I hope she has no interest in kai kun, because Im one of those hopefuls to be his girl..”

Their talking about that incident, seriously I just realize they make it a very big deal I didn’t find it special but instead irritating.

This day I didn’t pack my bento due to lack of time because I woke up late, so I’m joining the others on the cafeteria were bunch of students are there which I don’t like.

“Acchan here!!” my friends wave at me
“We reserve this chair for you” yuko
“Arigatou.. Sure is this place very crowded here huh”
“Yeah I hope they will expand this area soon” miichan
“Actually many would just eat here to see Kai’s group” she continued
“Kai again.. What an influence..” I shook my head

“Ah there she is..”
“Kai.. You sure you don’t want to sit on our usual place? It’s being reserved as always” Riku
“Not this time riku.. I want to know her..”
“It seems he’s really interested on that maeda girl” mariko

Not long in a moment while me and my friends were talking while eating miichan and yuko’s facial expression in front of me suddenly change as if like they were stunned and then I heard a voice.
“May I sit hear Atsuko?”

What is this guy , he thinks were so close calling me by my first name. I just look at him bringing his own chair placing it next to mine and gently smile. I nod my answer to show him my aggravation.

“Yatta..Arigatou..”
“Why won’t you call riku too and sit beside me kai..” yuko grinning to him.
“Yuko?” I looked at her
“hahahah just kidding aside kai..”
“Sure If he wants too I can call him the more the merrier right?” He answers back
“Yes yes!! It will be fun!” miichan agrees and pheww now I don’t have and ally here. Soon mariko and Riku join us at our table too, they were now talking random stuff and exchanging thoughts except me. I really chew my food as fast as I can to finish my meal.

“Ahh ano.. Sumimasen but I have to leave first I need something to do at the library regarding the project..” I bowed and grab my pouch to leave immediately at the place.
“Eh but that project was due next week..” miichan
“Yes.. but I have many activities next week I’m making it in advance” I reason out and run off not even glancing the person beside me, I know he’s looking at me that’s why I’m resisting my eyes to look at him.
“Atsuko! Lemme go with you…”
“Too late kai she’s gone..” mariko teased him
“Makes me more want to know her” kai

As days goes by kai and his buddies were getting along with my friends, sometimes I don’t have a choice when they invited me to go somewhere because I’m out of reasons, but I really make myself busy just to pass up with them, I spend most of my free time in the library and chose to study I know he can follow me there but at least he can’t talk too much. But one day maybe he recognizes my actions towards him and confronted me on the library. As I stand and look for new books on the shelves he followed me and cornered me from behind. Were at the bottom shelve section so apparently no one can see us, kai grabs my hand and drag me more so that no one will hear us. He place my back on one of the shelve prison me with both of his arms so that I can’t escape this time.

“What are you doing?? Remove your arm..” lowering my voice
“Not this time, I just wanna ask you something..”
“You can ask me anywhere but not here!”
“If I let you go now I know you wouldn’t talk to me..” I saw his eyes in seriousness, so I let him do what he wants.
“You win.. ..Now what do you want?”

“I just want to know why are you avoiding me? Did I do something wrong? Did I say something stupid that offended you?” I paused as heard his questions “Would you like to tell me what’s wrong? I just want to be your friend, I just want to know you more..”

“Why me kai? Like bunch of girls were after you then suddenly why me?”

“Don’t ask me that, because I’ve been asking that to myself too ever since I met you.. I just like you so much that you made me so desperate doing the things off to my limits. I love you atsuko I really do and I don’t know what’s next to that word because I fell more than that..” hearing that made my heart beat swift, so fast that I can hear them inside me.

“Stop.. I don’t want to hear more and you want to know the answer? Yes I’m really avoiding you! You’re making my life wretched every time where together. Does this answer you now? May I go?” The stupidity inside me, very harsh words came out into my mouth that made me realize after I said it.

“Atsuko? Do you really mean that?” not looking at him, rapidly walk as soon as I can and put the books elsewhere on the shelves so I can skip this moment right now. What I have done? The first words on my mind when I finally left the library, I know I’m too rude but on behalf I think it’s the right way so that he would avoid me and leave me alone.

Six days after that library incident it seems my life has been back to normal again, no more kai following me at all. I know I should be happy about this but it’s strange I suddenly felt lonely. I just thought maybe im just guilty because I told him not so good words. Mariko and riku were still hanging to us but kai wasn’t there anymore. I never asked what happened to him and they never talk about him either even my friends, so I just let it be.
Until almost two weeks of agonizing the stupid question inside me that I want to ask from them finally spoke out beyond my control, it’s like my own mouth ask this.

“ahmm.. ano.. Why is kai never around with you guys anymore?” asking his two comrades
“ahh he’s just busy..” Mariko’s simple answer
“Busy about what?” my follow up question
“Busy with a girl..”

Hearing this was like , I knew it he’s like the other famous random guy that finds another girl in just a click. Good thing I didn’t believe him. “oh Good for him..”
“I heard kai’s is so in love with that girl” at first I ignored riku’s answer
“Sou sou..I never seen kai acting like this.. You know like not hanging with us anymore just for that girl” mariko
“he mentioned that he’s going to surprise the girl” riku

“That’s so sweet..Lucky girl!” miichan
“She is so lucky… Very lucky..” I can’t disregard it anymore the last sentence that mariko spoke out
“The hell I care!” I blurt out.
“Eh acchan? You alright?” yuko asked me

“I’m fine.. I just don’t care about him..” I turn my back not facing them, deep within me I want to shout, I don’t know why it pissed me off, the fact that I rejected him made my chest ache. My mind telling me it was right but my heart regrets it. I snap myself to focus and leave that memory as it is. Asking myself continuously if I like him, why I’m acting like this, I felt so stupid. I rejected him and that’s good! But I want him back now.

On my sudden pause I didn’t notice my eyes producing liquids rolling down my cheeks. “I hate you kai..” I spoke at last. “I hate him.. I really hate him..”

“Acchan? Why are you crying?” miichan
“Sorry we thought you knew about this… because you never ask..” yuko

“I’m fine..” still not facing them. “I can’t blame him if he gave up on me..It’s my fault..and I’m happy for him and to that girl he is interested with.” I was about to walk forward and leave them behind until I heard his voice.

“You think I gave you up so easily? That was just my first attempt to you atsuko..” I clear my throat and slowly turn my head to look at that guy and I saw our friends were smiling.

What’s happening? my mind ask my heart because its happily beating, I saw him carrying a bouquet of red roses giving it to me like he’s my prince and Im his princess, he opens his sweater and show off to me his shirt which has the words Will you be my girl?.

“Kai..”
“That’s not the answer..That’s my name..” he smiles
“I’m sorry about the last time we talked.. I didn’t..” he interrupts me with his fingers

“Say no more.. I made this on purpose, I really kept myself away from you for how many days, I want to know how would you react if I’m not around, I asked your friends to help me with this, and when mariko gave me the sign that you were looking at me, I quickly showed up.. I want you to know that I didn’t gave up..And I will not give up until you say yes..Even if you reject me again today tomorrow and the upcoming days..”

“Really?” my answers were singular
“Hai..” he nods showing me his dimples.

“Gomen..but I think..I can’t let this happen again..”
“huh? Atsuko?”
“Because I’m saying yes to your answer kai.. “
“you mean?”
“uhn..” I smiled..
“I want you to say it atsuko..”
“Daisuki Takahashi Kai..”
“one more!”

“Daiiiiisuukiiiii!!” upon his excitement he hugged me so tight and almost lifts me up. he drags me inside his car and wave to our friends happily.
“Where are we going?”

“It’s my another surprise.... ” Giving me a kiss directly to my lips that made me daze and from that day on until this today almost 3 years already, this guy sleeping on my lap holding my hands to his chest is the person I will cherish the most in my entire life.

-END-

:banghead:
Sorry for my english..
TBH
:banghead: I made the last part too fast.. Sorry OTL

Title: Re: ツ OS---- You Octopi My Heart [9/12/2012] update!
Post by: Haruko on September 12, 2012, 04:43:09 AM

aww cute kai :d

Title: Re: ツ OS---- You Octopi My Heart [9/12/2012] update!
Post by: wynaut on September 12, 2012, 11:44:12 AM

hohoho.. i heard you had a one shot..
so here am I mia san!
but you update your other fics too onegai :panic:
despite of the scandal thing of your ace (I DONT CARE ABOUT IT)
Im still supporting her!

and back to your fic!
please make it more longer..
you know what i mean their cheesy scenes..
but so..I like it!
See I made my comment long! XD

Title: Re: ツ OS---- You Octopi My Heart [9/12/2012] update!
Post by: Megumi on September 12, 2012, 09:17:27 PM

Kyaaaa!

Kai! I'm glad that he didn't give up so easily because after all he loves Atsuko :wub:
And finally she realise her feelings for Kai...and after 3 years later :panic: :thumbsup

ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- You Octopi My Heart [9/12/2012] update!
Post by: kahem on September 12, 2012, 10:56:28 PM

Acchan tsundere~ so cute~

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: miayaka on December 04, 2012, 07:47:56 PM

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As promise to rhin
My first time OS for mayuki
I hope mayuki shippers like it..
This is my first time writing about them
and I'm glad i make it right..
Sorry for my words
I'm not that good in English..
Forgive me minna
Do~zo~

My Only Wish

“This is the best for us, this is the best for you..from now on I’m wishing for your happiness always”

“Yuki..why..” The last time I heard her called my name.

“Mayu..I can’t do this anymore.. I can’t make you happy..Our lives are so different I’m afraid I cannot give you the life you wanted..”

Those were the words I spoke to her before I turn my back and leave as quickly as I can, I didn’t had a chance to listen to her because it might change my mind. I can’t even look at her face specially her eyes.

I was born not fortunate, parents died when I was young so I manage to live on my own. Working while studying is hard so I decided to stop in school to work, because if I choose the other way to stop working and study I will definitely starve and be kick out in my aparto.
Two months passed I got another work, in morning I’m working as a sales assistant in a combini store and from mid afternoon till night I’m working as an entertainer mascot for children.

“Yuki!” Someone called me when I was about to hop on the train.

“Tomomi chan..” It was my classmate Kasai Tomomi.

“How are you? I’d never seen you this past few months.. ”

“Ano..I’m just busy working so that I can save and be back to school soon..So how are you guys?” I asked back because I don’t wanna answer the how are you question she’s been asking, because I’m really not ok physically and especially emotionally.

“Good thing I caught you..Here take a look at this.. Everyone is invited” She handed me an invitation.

“Owhhh..Homecoming event..I’m really invited? I mean you know I stopped..”

“Of course you are chiyuu! I hope you can make it yuki.. I know someone who’s really dying to see you..” She giggles and I know who that person shes is talking about.

“I’ll try..You know I’m working and I need permission..” We depart ways waving goodbyes. Deep within me I really want to go and I know I can make it, the only thing bothering me is her. I just don’t know how to react when I meet her because I know I can’t resist her.

Until that day has come.

“Yuki chan your shift is over, you’re going to attend an event right? Go now or else you’ll be late” My manager told me.

“I guess I won’t attend anymore, I’ll do the overtime because it’s crowded and I wanna help you guys”

“Nah we can manage besides me already gave you permission on this” I just nod and follow my manager’s words.

When I got there I saw my classmates and friends talking, laughing, dancing and enjoying the night. Except for this particular person, my eyes were very keen on her. Despite all the swarm around her I can tell she’s sad. All alone in the table sipping her lemonade eyes were looking for someone and my heart is positive that her eyes were looking on me. Well I hid myself beneath the hall and just peek at the scene. No one has ever notice me, wearing a hood and sunglasses I felt like a criminal hiding in the dark.

“Mayuyu! Let’s dance! Come on..” Rabutan our classmate grabs her.

“Sumimasen..I’m not in the mood to dance” She declined and eat the lemon in her drink, the reaction of her face change due to the sourness which made Rabutan amused looking at her.

“If that so..I’ll stay with you..”

“Eh no..I’m fine..I know you want to dance..I’m not just in mood..”

“Mayuyu can’t lie to me, I know you’re waiting for her..Am I right?”

"......” She nods, keeping myself near and let my ears concentrate to hear their convo, I’m not a criminal now I’m a stalker!

“Tomomi should’ve asked where is she working so that we can visit her” Rabu made the ambiance light.

“To be honest, Tomomi chan gave me a hope to see Yuki again tonight..” These words break my heart, and I felt like I wanna expose myself now. But at the other side of my brain is stopping me and I agree.

“Because until now I didn’t understand why she had to leave…me.. ” she continues

“Yuki has deep reasons right?”

“Uhn..She unconfident on us..Saying she can’t make me happy..She’s a burden to me..Our living status and all..”

“Maybe she’s really looking forward on the future with you, of what she can do and what she can’t..That’s why she felt timid” Rabu’s words were true I’m insecure I’m scared and I’m a coward. My reason is shallow to give up Mayu, but that’s how I felt. I need to be someone she can be proud of someday not like this, a peasant girl working twice a day yet still broke.

I left the event with a pain in my heart, the pain of my own doing yet I can’t go back the things the way they’re used to be now. This is reality I claimed it to myself and I know everything has a reason. Days gone by same routine everyday but today I decided to take a new route, every night after work I change my way home taking the long cut direction so that I can see their house and glance the light of her room outside when I pass by.

Sometimes I throw stones on her window and immediately hide on the bush when she opens it. Giggling myself on my trick just to her face wondering for the culprit who threw that. I noticed she’s been sleeping late these days. Usually I go home 9pm and I know she’s still awake at that time, but when I got my overtime this week and been release at 11pm she’s still awake. Makes me worried of course I hope she’s doing fine.

“Yuki chan! Holiday is coming so we had a new event for our mascot activities” My manager excitedly told me.

“That’s great..What’s that event then?”

“Jaannnn..” She showed me a red costume with a belt on it.

“Eh? Santa?? Santa Claus?” I confound.

“Hai! This is your new costume Yuki! This would be easy you will just sit on a chair, kids and kids at heart would just fall in line and talk to you and tell you their wish, at the end you will gave them a small token”

“Chotto..What about my voice?”

“No problemo dear..We already prepared on that we have a gadget on that”

“Sounds fun!” I really exclaimed because this is my favorite season of the year.

The event of Santa has started and attracts people specially kids, it was fun and not tiring at all because I was just sitting, talking a bit, listening to their wishes and give them some goodies of happiness.

Somewhere outside

“Alfred san..What’s in there? Why is it so crowded?”

“Ahh that’s the yearly Christmas Bazaar, and that crowded thing there is where Santa Clause is sitting many children’s and young adults go there to make a wish, it is said that its effective..”

“I wanna go there..”

“Miss Mayu? Are you sure?”

“Hai..”

“You want me to accompany you?”

“Ah no need..Just stay here in the car..I’ll be alright..”

“Just call me immediately if something happens onegaishimasu..”

“I will..Arigatou..”

*Passing by the crowded place*

“Excuse Sir is this the proper line to Santa? ”

“Hai..” The father figure guy answers.

“203 and I’m 234..Need to wait a little further..”

---------------

“Yuki Chan..Just tell me if you need a break ok? Your substitute is ready..” One of my co worker whispers me.

“Arigatou..I guess I need to finish until 235..” I responded, I discern someone in my view not far behind as the number 235 drew nearer in my sight. My heartbeat starting to race, twin pigtails black hair wearing a familiar dress in my eyes it’s her. Number 234 I can’t be wrong it Mayu. My hands were getting cold and my face is getting warm despite of the cold weather. Im not talking anymore in the kids sitting on my lap I just nod and pat them then give them goodies and go my eyes were just looking at her directly. In my mind I’m confident she won’t recognize me, because of my outfit I became chubby, wearing a fake long beard, wearing eyeglasses, an elf hat and specially my voice.

“234 it’s your turn darling..” The staff called her finally.

I paused for a sec as our eyes met clearing my throat before I say my intro greeting “Hohohoho..”

“Santa san!” She happily smile to me, I miss her smile, the smile that can only melt my heart.

“Yes pretty girl..Tell me what’s your wish..”

“Santa san before that can I sit on your lap too? I’m not that heavy..” So cute how can I resist her?

“S..sure..” Faking my smile my chest thumps really hard as I smell her scent, I wanna poke her cheeks when she smiles, I wanna hug her tight when she moves closer to me. “Now..tell me what’s your wish mayu..”

“Ha? You know my name??”

“Ah..it’s on your tag..Hohohoho” I almost spill it.

“Yeah right..I have a tag..Santa..”

“....hai…”

“I’m wishing for my happiness..”

“Are you not happy?”

“I am..but..it was before..I’m wishing to bring it back..”

“You’ll be happy for sure..”

“NO..Literally..I want that someone to come back..” Her wish moved me.

“Is that someone really special to you?”

“Yes..” she bowed down and had this serious sad face “She’s my happiness..”

“You still want her even if she left you?” I furiously asked

Shook her head “I don’t care..All I know right now is I wanna be with her no matter what, I want her to know that.. ”

“……….” I didn’t say a word

“Santa san..Please grant me this wish..I don’t know why I beg you this but…”

*Bell ringing*

“Times up!” the staff cutting off the scene, I saw her sad face really believing in me to grant that wish. I looked at her as she leaves calling the next number to have my break. Talking to the last person, I felt not in mood my mind ss floating. Mayu’s words were sealing me, so I decide to make it quick. As soon as the last person finish I took my break and runs outside finding the girl I wanted to see, with the crowded people in me it’s so difficult and children is starting go at me.

“Santa! Santa! Santa!” Kids blocking my way

“Santa lost his reindeer and Santa needs to find it..” Fooling the kids to stop them from cuddling me and I’m glad they bite my phrase. I know she’s going to the parking lot so I headed there right away and I’m right. Before she could open the car I really shout hard “MAYU!!! MAYU CHAN!!” panting as I run towards her and hug her quickly from behind.

“Mayu..” Breathing hard “I’m sorry..” saying it all over again to her

“Santa San?” She faces me, and I forgot I still have this gadget on my neck to change my voice I took it off along with my beard and other accessories on my head revealing her my face.

“Mayu..It’s me..” Hug her again, my tears rolling in my cheeks. “I’m sorry for being so stupid..for leaving you for my dumb reason..I made you suffered so much..Please forgive me..I can’t go on without you..I don’t care anymore if I ate once a day and if I work 3 times a day, it doesn’t matter anymore..Without you all my efforts are useless..I want you back..Onegai..”

“Yuki..” She hugs me back and that felt good “I don’t know what to say all I know is I’m really happy..” she sobs “Even if you leave me how many times you’re my one only Yuki, my happiness..”

“You’re not just my happiness Mayu..You’re my life..” I kiss her forehead and wiped her tears as she smiles.

“YUKI CHAN!!” some staff shouting, calling my name, gesturing it’s my turn again.

“Mayu..I need to go back..” Holding her hands tight

“Gambatte Santa Yuki!” cheering me “I’ll be waiting in my house, My parents will be happy if you spend your Christmas Eve with us..”

“I will..Wait for me! I promise to make this Christmas very memorable with you Mayu..” I wink at her as she looks at me going inside again to do my job.

“SANTA SAN!!!” she shouts

“Eh?”

“THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY WISH COME TRUE!” I smile and gave her my flying kiss that she captured with both hands putting it in her chest smiling sweetly.

THE END

I dont know if you like it
but dont kill me yet :nervous
Sorry for my Engrish!

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: rhin12 on December 04, 2012, 08:12:37 PM

Miayaka-san! XD

Wow! This is nice! :grin:

Rich Mayu, Poor Yuki. Christmas themed story! :yep:
This is so cute. And as usual, Yuki can't resist her Cyborg baby!!! :rofl:

I love this one shot! Thanks a lot miayaka-san. :bow: :bow:

Ps. 1 down, 2 more to go. If you know what I mean. :P

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: chichay12 on December 05, 2012, 12:14:57 AM

Quote from: rhin_rhin on December 04, 2012, 08:12:37 PM

Saving the spot! :thumbsup

Oy!thats my line baby rhin!why u stole it?u thief!XD!
nice OS MIA!
Can i request too???
Can u kick rhin in the face??hahaha

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 05, 2012, 12:24:41 AM

Quote from: Chichay12 on December 05, 2012, 12:14:57 AM

Quote from: rhin_rhin on December 04, 2012, 08:12:37 PM
Saving the spot! :thumbsup

Oy!thats my line baby rhin!why u stole it?u thief!XD!
nice OS MIA!
Can i request too???
Can u kick rhin in the face??hahaha

LOL! I thought this was Sakura_drop-san's line..? xD
Okay~ Awwe! They got back together :3
"WE ARE NEVER EVER EVER EVER GETTING BACK TOGETHER" line was on my head but I guess I was wrong xD
You should continue to make MaYuki :3

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: Chanaline on December 05, 2012, 02:03:46 PM

So cute!! :wub: Love this!! :inlove:

Continue write Mayuki!! (If you can of course!)

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: DC2805 on December 05, 2012, 03:18:49 PM

Quote from: miayaka on December 04, 2012, 07:47:56 PM

“SANTA SAN!!!” she shouts

“Eh?”

“THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY WISH COME TRUE!” I smile and gave her my flying kiss that she captured with both hands putting it in her chest smiling sweetly.

This is just SO sweet!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: wynaut on December 05, 2012, 07:48:46 PM

How sweet :wub:
Mayuki always like this cute sweet love :heart:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: chibiusa on February 13, 2013, 05:50:56 PM

this is so cute! :deco:

Title: Re: ツ OS---- My Only Wish [Mayuki] [12/05/2012] update!
Post by: mo-chan on February 13, 2013, 09:55:58 PM

I love it
it is simple but lovely
I hope you'll make an other Mayuki :D

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: miayaka on February 13, 2013, 10:12:42 PM

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Too lazy to write a long note
but here goes..

FOREVER

Year 2017 where Japan’s music industry is soaring up high all over the world, a girl group was leading this success for how many years now.
Despite on those success fans never forget how they started performing in a small theater in Akihabara striving so much until they got what they have now.

“Konbanwa minna sama! Tonight we are having a very special guest, when I mean special its very special and I know all of you knows her very well..” Esumi Makiko as the host.

“Please welcome! I really miss this girl Takahashi Minami!” The host introduces her.

Takamina walked down and bows her head greeting Esumi and the audience”It’s been a long time see you Makiko san..” showing her cutest dimples ever.

“Please be seated Minami san, Ah how I miss talking to you it’s been such a long time since we talk like this at Kayou kyoku show” Esumi holds the young girl’s hand dearly.

“Kayou kyoku days was fun and I learned a lot from that show” Takamina exclaimed.

“So you missed hosting?” Esumi asked.

“Yes.. I miss it so much the feeling that you’re asking someone random questions and as a host their answers excites you”

“I’m sorry Takahashi san that you can’t experience that again because tonight I’ll be the one who’s gonna ask you some questions and I’ll be the one too who will get excites by your answers ” Esumi laughs.

“I’m a bit nervous now” Takamina place her palms on her cheeks.

“You didn’t change at all Takahashi or shall I address you as General Manager at the same time a soloist singer your profession is a bit multitasking. How you handle this?” Esumi starts the question.

“At first it was really complicated but somehow I’m getting used to it now, I’m still the Takamina you knew Esumi san” both laughed.

“This is the first time I interviewed you because we can’t find a perfect timing on your hectic schedule, so tell me how does it feel still being in akb all throughout these years?”

“It feels great the awesome feeling is still there the only difference is I can’t perform anymore together with them. The younglings are so energetic and I’m really happy on that me and the management are making sure that they will maintain the foundation we created for the past years” Takamina answered it seriously.

“Was the bond of the graduated members still there?”

“Hai hai..still there..”

“So you girls meet up in your spare time?”

“Yes we do mostly on special occasions it’s like a reunion every time we meet..They do have their own career too so we are all busy and we cannot meet always and when we meet it’s just like the old days we’re still childish in odd ways” The former captain smiles as she reminisce the moments they had before.

“Also I know this kinda late but I’d like to congratulate you for your latest single that hits the oricon”

“Arigatou Esumi san..I’m lucky because my single and akb’s single didn’t release at the same week” She chuckled.

“We prepared a small surprise for you this evening..Onegaishimasu watch this..”

Video footage (What can you say about Takahashi Minami)

Shinoda Mariko “That ribbon girl was always serious about her work and I’m happy that she never changes since the day we met way back before” laughs “I sound so old now”

Kojima Haruna “Ah Takamina was always the leader for me although we’re on the same generation before in the group we always rely on her leadership she’s just so responsible and I hope will inherit that”

Itano Tomomi “I will always remember Takamina as Acchan’s partner they’re the pillars that support AKB to stand stronger”

Minegishi Minami “She never disappointed the group and I’ve witnessed her struggles when Acchan graduated but she remained strong for the team”

Oshima Yuko “Takahashi Japan! She really fulfilled her dream ne..I’m glad she’s still part of akb that gave us an assurance..Chotto is this gonna be shown to her?”

Camera man “Hai Oshima san”

Yuko “Oi Takamina! Don’t worry you’ll see her in our reunion performance!”

Those words made her cry as her tear glands never change still as active like before but Yuko’s last words made her stunned. Takamina POV “Aggh Yuko even in video message you still teasing me”

“That’s so intriguing you really do miss Acchan” The host taunt her a bit.

She smile and answers the question “..We all do..”

“Gomene we tried to reach her but eventually when we do that certain footage Acchan was not in the country and we cannot phone patch her as well”

“Daijoubu desu I know how busy she is..” She curves her lips downward.

"But.."

“In this show we always make our guest happy, I know you really really miss this person please welcome Maeda Atsuko desu!” Esumi stand up and welcome the girl with a warm hand. Takamina clears her throat as she slowly shifts her head towards the girl’s direction.

So many questions running to her mind right now. Did she do this on purpose? When did this girl arrive? Where is she when I called her yesterday? Why didn’t she tell me that she’ll be in this show too? Atsuko you making my heart go crazy right now you don’t have an idea how surprised I am..

“Minami..” The girl called her name.

“A..Atsuko..” She immediately stand and bow but she froze when her former colleague kiss her on her left cheek as a greeting.

“Samishii katta desu” Acchan smiled and look at her straight in the eyes.

The small girl blush and stayed silent for a while her eyes were pinned on the girl next to her. She just regains her consciousness when Esumi snap her out “Minami san daijoubu?” The former ace looks at her too worrying.

“hahahaha” She laughs “Hai daijoubu desu! I was just thinking of something.. Good thing were in the middle of commercial break” she fake her smile but deep inside she was so nervous. “Baka Minami why you’re so nervous it’s just her!” she argued with her own thoughts.

“So I believe you two were always hanging up together right?” Esumi

“…Actually that’s the opposite..” Takamina abruptly answered it. “Atsuko is very hard to catch..” she continued.

“But whenever I got a time or when I have an off I always get to them, eventually this year my schedule is so tight and I missed lots of gatherings and occasions with them..” Acchan explained.

“I’m kinda excited to the next question..” Esumi giggles.

“Eh?” Acchan

“Nani?” Takamina

“Since you two were not in AKB anymore so that means you’re free from the love banned law..You can date anyone you like now right? So is there someone special already? To the both of you?”

Takamina smiling so much in shyness that Esumi notice it “Takahashi must have a special someone ne? Would you like to share?” The host jokingly whispered to her as if they’re the only one there.

“Hahaha Esumi san..” The smaller girl laughs and shifted her eyes to Acchan who’s looking at her also waiting for her to answer the question. “Why is she looking at me like that..Atsuko don’t pretend that you don’t know anything..” POV

“..I do have a special someone..” This time Takamina’s smile is serious while Maeda was still silent looking at her.

“Honto desu?! Then you’re saying you two were together now?” Esumi was astonished by the general manager’s confession.

“Is it..the same person as before?” Acchan broke her silence.

Before Takamina could answer Esumi interrupted her “So Maeda san knows about this..” She was amused by the sudden question of the former ace.

Takamina didn’t answer Acchan’s question because the host is now busy giving a follow up question and this time she pointed out the actress. “Of course I won’t let Maeda escape this question, how’s your relationship status?”

She rolled her eyes and smile sweetly “mmm…I’m in a relationship..”

BANG! Like a headshot but straight to the heart she bitted her lower lips and made a down curve to it. “I wish you didn’t appear here as a surprise guest if I will only knew about this thing, how could you say that..I confessed to you before and you didn’t even answered and now you just blurted that easily in front of me..” she force herself think of happy moments so that her tears won’t roll down, an awkward feeling she has now, she wants to back out, she wants to shout and cry so hard, she wants to end the show, go home quickly and lock herself on her room.

After a few more talks the show ended. Acchan observes the girl’s sudden change of mood being silent and not even looking at her walking all the way straight to the dressing room grabbing her things up hurrying to go out in the building. She followed the shorter girl behind and attempts to catch her speed.

“Minami wait up!” She half shouted.

She didn’t reply even a glance but just continue to walk as fast as she can.

“Takahashi Minami! I said wait up!” her second try failed again that made her run and grab her former captain’s wrist. “Minami?? What’s wrong?” she stunned as she saw her crying hard in silent.

“..and..now you’re asking what’s wrong?” her voice is shaking.

“Minami…”

“The day I confess to you…Why didn’t you answer? At least answer me with a yes or no..but you did not..for almost two dim-witted years I’ve waited..Hoping that you’ll answer me..But I’m so stupid thinking that way!”

“The day you confess before I flew off to shoot a movie was the most memorable day of my life..I didn’t answer you and that’s my fault..because I’m not sure if I like you as my friend or I like you more than that..”

“Now I know you’re answer..”

“It’s not what you think Minami..I’m glad you’ve waited..To be honest I was scared going back knowing that you found someone to be with..and I’m hoping it’s not too late..”

“Why you saying this? You just said you’re in a relationship..”

“Uhn..I’m in a relationship..with you..I just declared it to myself..because this time I want to be the one who shall ask you if you still want me..as my best half.. Anata ga daisuki desu..” She beamed confessing and lean her forehead against her. “Now I want you answer general manager..”

Takamina continues to cry but this time she’s smiling “I dislike your surprises you always want to see me cry before telling me the fine news..” she move her face upward to capture the taller girls lips. “That’s for making me wait..” kiss her again and bite softly Atsuko’s lower lips. “That’s for making me cry..” Making the girl froze by her kisses she dip her lips once more and suck it again before she pulled out. “and that’s for my answer.. daisuki..” blushing like a ripe tomato while they hold each other’s hands.

“Minami..by the way..I already sent out my baggage to your apartment..” She smirks.

“Ha? Atsuko you did really prepare on this? What if the situation goes on the opposite way?”

“I don’t think so..because I’m so confident that atsumina will be forever..”

Making each other’s heart filled with happiness at that night. Though they’ve separated, they’ve graduated and have different careers still the acquaintance remained and even build a new strong base in their relationship.

THE END

me and my not so good engrish :P

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: sakura_drop_ on February 13, 2013, 10:26:24 PM

Mommy!!! This was so beautiful!!! Arigatou!!! Luv u!!! :deco: :deco:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: TakaminaBG on February 13, 2013, 11:02:32 PM

God, I HATE Valentine!!
But I always wait for it to come, so I can read some AatsuMina fics. D:
This was really sweet and romantic. Thank you!

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: arrow27 on February 13, 2013, 11:05:11 PM

Agreed! Very beautiful fic :DThat's like my dream sceneario lol. I do hope all the AKB girls get to follow their dreams in the future & still be able to chat from time to time :D & I loved the whole Minami as a solo singer & yet she still finds time to manage akb even if she isn't performing with them :D
& Of course the Atsumina moments were adorable as always ^^

Oh, & Yuko's message made me laugh :)

Thanks for this great update ^^

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: Keisthename on February 13, 2013, 11:22:18 PM

oh my! this is the best sathday so far for me. kyaa!! atsumina fics are everywhere
and as expected from you mia, this one's superb.
I like the fact that the story makes my heart aches at first, then will be filled with love and joy the next scenes.
so cute.
though it's bothering me, I dont want Minami to be left all alone in akb in the future. I think thats too lonely XD
knowing that the ones close to her heart had graduated :'(

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: chichay12 on February 14, 2013, 12:22:28 AM

kyaaaaa :wub:
Mia :*
This was the best valentine day ever! XD
Atsumina is forever.. :love:
My atsumina heart is alive again :wub: :wub:
Thank you for that mia :heart:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: Haruko on February 14, 2013, 07:52:21 AM

awwww yeah atsumina forever :B

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: kuro808 on February 14, 2013, 07:59:34 AM

Incredible one-shot :thumbsup

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: chibiusa on February 14, 2013, 12:09:33 PM

FOREVER it is~ my royal couple :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: ichikawa on February 14, 2013, 12:55:09 PM

Quote from: miayaka on February 13, 2013, 10:12:42 PM

“..because I’m so confident that atsumina will be forever..”

ATSUMINA FOREVER!!! :nya:
Thank you mima~ for the fic!! :on woohoo:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: wynaut on February 14, 2013, 03:05:13 PM

mia!!!!!
thank you for this atsumina shot!
happy valentines!
as always its lovely! :mon kissy:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: Tanchan on February 15, 2013, 05:16:54 AM

YEah Atsumina's valentine :inlove:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: Pdpond on February 15, 2013, 06:03:20 AM

Your Atsumina fic alway awesome :heart: :heart:
I giggle while read last part.
Thanks for made my day!

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: cisda83 on February 16, 2013, 08:31:24 PM

Very nice story there....

I hope it's true somewhere in the future.... for Atsumina...

I don't mind if whatever happens in this fic... happen in real life of Atsumina

Very sweet....

Thank you....

Can't wait to see your next OS

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: imintoyou128 on January 25, 2014, 03:44:11 PM

speechless :shocked

at the body shot :bleed eyes: :hip drool2: :hip drool2: :hip drool2: :twothumbs

Title: Re: ツ OS ---- Forever [AtsuMina] [02/14/2012] update!
Post by: Dianalrs on April 21, 2015, 08:28:18 PM

Really sweet the Atsumina storys :heart:

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