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Link to my new story: Genking Deka! feel free to check it out!
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The Mad House
Two days ago...
"Mariko I'm transferring you to the Hirokawa Mental Facility." the director said.
"But why?" Mariko demanded.
"Because you screwed up!"
The director pounded his fist on his desk.
"After last weeks little stunt we lost five patients. Keeping you here is giving the clinic a bad rep. I'm sorry Mariko these are my orders. Now get out."
Current day...
Mariko was late. She had woken up late and missed the bus. Now she was rushing to get to her new job.
Hirokawa Mental Facility was a hospital for young people who are mentally challanged. Patients are sent there because their parent/guardian can no longer take care of them. Here, the staff try to cure the patient of their illness. The facility is known for it's excellent doctors and caring nurses. There was only one thing Mariko didn't know. Hirokawa Mental Facility was the place the most troubled people went to.
When Mariko arrived, the first thing she saw when she walked in was a patient being held down by two doctors. The taller one with dark hair was holding her arm back while the shorter one with light hair was holding a syringe.
"Hurry up Takamina!" the taller one shouted.
"I'm trying! Hold her still Sayaka!" the shorter one shouted back.
"Let me go! I don't wanna be here anymore. I wanna go home!" the patient shouted as she squirmed.
"Acchan you need to calm down!" the one called Takamina said.
"Let me go!"
She continued to struggle and Mariko just stood there witnessing the whole thing. Sayaka saw her and gave her a serious glare.
"Hey new girl come and help!" she said.
Mariko looked confused at first. Not sure if Sayaka was talking about her.
"You with the short hair. Get over here!"
That's when Mariko figured out she was calling her. Mariko set her bags down and ran over to help the doctors. After about five minutes, Takamina finally injected the patient with the sedative and she slowly began to calm down. She eventually passed out completely.
"Here Takamina take your patient." Sayaka said as she handed over the unconsious girl.
The small doctor looked like she was about to drop the girl but she managed to hold on. Takamina carefully carried the paitent down the hall. Mariko looked back over to Sayaka who was fixing her lab coat. Then she looked at Mariko and held out her hand.
"You must be Shinoda-san." she said.
"My name is Akimoto Sayaka but you can call me Sayaka. I'm going to be working with you starting today. If you need any help feel free to ask questions."
Mariko shook hands with Sayaka. Sayaka was a little shorter than Mariko but not much. Her face resembled somewhat of a greek statue. The two started to walk down the hall and talk.
"So what was that about?" Mariko asked.
"That was Atsuko. Everyone calls her Acchan. She's one of Takamina's patients and really needs to do a better job at taking care of her." Sayaka said.
"She's been here for a couple months and I guess she's starting to miss home. Anyways, welcome to Hirokawa Mental Facility. I'll be looking forward to working with you."
Before Mariko could say anyhting, there was a loud crash and screaming followed after.
"Acchan! Sayaka help!"
"Dang it Takamina!"
Sayaka ran off leaving Mariko speechless. She watched as the two doctors chased Acchan down the hall trying to catch her. As she watched them, Mariko had a feeling that her life was about to become very interesting.
(So what do you think? This is just the prolouge so I want to see what you guys think so far before actually getting into it.)
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OMG, I LOVE IT!!! (I'm using too much Caps Lock nowadays...) :wub: :wub: :wub:
update soon
No, actually, take your time and update with an awesome chapter :bow: :bow: :bow:
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this is so interesting..
it reminds me when i was in psychiatry department..those kind of people are interesting (but i feel sorry for them too). i remember when when a man suddnly said to me that he is marry me or a woman who suddenly come to me and try to kiss me (it was so sudden that i don't know what to do.but i finnaly let her kiss me, on my cheek..LOL) and many unexpected experiences..
author,continue pliz :bow:
i want to know what mariko-sama will do..
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LOL.. Acchan.. XD how can you still running away again after being injected with sedative.. :lol: Wild enough aye.. :P
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Well here's chapter 1! Let me know how it is and I'm sorry if it turns out bad. I'm still a beginner!
Chapter 1
Mariko had just started working at Hirokawa Mental Facility. So far she had only been doing assistant work so she could get used to everything. But then one day Sayaka walked to her and handed her a stack of files.
"What is this?" Mariko asked.
"I need you to take this down to Takamina. She'll show you what to do. Her office is down the hall on the right." Sayaka said.
"Alright."
Mariko followed Sayaka's instructions and found a door with Takamina's name on it. Mariko haden't talked to Takamina since her first day when she helped restrain a patient. She was a little curious about actually meeting Takamina. She knocked the door and heared someone faintly say "come in." Mariko opened the door and at first all she saw was a ribbon. She looked down and saw Takahashi Minami or Takamina. The girl was suprisingly short. Was she a midget? As Mariko stood there looking down at the short girl, Takamina saw the folders in Mariko's hand.
"I've been looking for that!" she said as she grabbed them out of Mariko's hand.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"These are the profiles of your new patients." she said.
"Huh?"
"Come take a look."
Mariko walked over and started to read some of the files. There were four total.
Profile 1
Name: Kojima Haruna
Age: 20
Room: 206
Diagnosis: Has an extreme case of paranoia. Was put here for treatment and then release when cured. Also has a record of petit malseizures causing all brain functions to stop for a short moment. Usually found in younger children but she somehow still has it. Due to this, she has to be monitored very closely when engaging in dangerous activities.
Profile 2
Name: Oshima Yuko
Age:22
Room: 207
Diagnosis: Has OCD (Obsessive Compulsive Disorder) for girls. Is always around girls feeling she has to touch them. Is easily agitated if one tries to take her away from a girl. May or may not be the cause of Kojima Haruna's paranoia. Was put here to be cured and learn how to control OCD.
Profile 3
Name: Matsui Jurina
Age: 15
Room: 213
Diagnosis: Has a Conduct Disorder where due to recent certain acts of violence to the parents, she has been sent here with her sister. She also has a Nightmare Disorder where she has frequent nightmares leading to insomnia. Was sent here for learning to control anger and get over insomnia. The insomnia also has effect to her Conduct Disorder. Must be put in restraints every so often. Was put in same room as sister to avoid violent outlash.
Profile 4
Name: Matsui Rena
Age: 21
Room: 213
Diagnosis: Sister of Matsui Jurina and is physically weak due to the fact she won't eat raw meats. Is often seen being protected by her younger siser Jurina. Has Cataplexy where her muscles will suddenly fail leading her to collapsing at random times. There is also a possiblity of BPD (Brief Psychotic Disorder) When threatend, she will become incredibly strong and angry. Was sent here for safety of others. When she is in psychotic mode, it is highly suggested to take extreme caution.
As Mariko stood there reading the files, Takamina said,
"These are your patients. They are your responsibility from here on out. If anyhting happens to them, it'll be your fault."
"Great." Mariko said.
"How about we go meet them."
Mariko didn't mind the first two. She thought she could handle them. Mariko was mainly worried about the two Matsui sisters. Those two sounded like trouble to her. The first room they stopped at was 206. Takamina knocked on the door but there was no answer. Takamina opened the door slowly and found Haruna on the bed. The girl had long brown hair and brown eyes. Her ears were a little large which reminded Mariko of a cat. She was staring blankly at the wall. Mariko was about to touch he but Takamina pulled her back.
"Don't." she said.
"If you wake her suddenly she'll freak out."
Then Takamina leaned in and softly said,
"Haruna..."
The girl blinked and looked around as if she had just woken up from a dream. She saw Takamina and smiled. But when she saw Mariko, terror appeared on her face.
"Ahh! They're here to get me!" she said pointing at Mariko.
She got up and ran over to the corner trying to claw through the wall. Takamina ran over and grabbed the girl trying to calm her down. Mariko stood there thinking even if she did shake her the girl's reaction would be the same as it is now.
"It's ok Haruna." she said.
"This is your new doctor Mariko. She'll be working with you from now on."
Haruna kept shaking and squirming like a kid refusing to eat food. But then all at once, she stopped and had that same blank expression on her face. Her whole body went limp and she immediately stopped. Takamina saw this and placed her back on the bed. Then she gestured to Mariko to quietly leave the room as she shut the door.
"That was Haruna. She's a really nice girl. Just give her time to adjust." Takamina said as they walked to the next room.
Takamina didn't even knock. She opened the door and what Mariko saw was something one would call strange. On the ground playing with Barbie dolls was a girl with medium length brown hair.
"Yuko." Takamina said.
The girl looked up and her eyes widened at the sight of Takamina.
"Hey!"
She jumped up and ran over to Takamina. The girl was only a little taller than Takamina. Not to mention her teeth kind of reminded Mariko of a squirrel.
"How's my NyanNyan? I heard her screaming in her room." Yuko said.
"She's fine." Takamina said.
"She was just startled by her and your new doctor Mariko."
Mariko stepped up and introduced herself hoping to get somewhere with Yuko. Yuko looked at Mariko up and down examining every part of her like a pervert. Then she said,
"I give you a 7 out of 10."
"What?"
"Sorry but Yuko has a habit of ranking girls based on their looks." Takamina said.
She turned and looked at Yuko with a mean glare.
"Yuko you shouldn't do that. It's not nice."
Actually, Mariko thought 7 was pretty good.
"You're just jealous because she got a higher ranking than you miss 5. But no one compares to my NyanNyan. I give her a 100 out of ten. No a 1000!" Yuko said smiling with proud.
Mariko thought it was no wonder the profile said Yuko might be the cause of Haruna's paranoia. The girl is crazy obsessed with her. Mariko would get paranoid too if she had Yuko constantly obsessing over her. What Mariko wondered was why were the two neighbors if one does nothing but cause trouble for the other.
"Well that's fantastic Yuko. Anyways, I just wanted you to meet Mariko. She'll be working with you from now on so be nice." Takamina said.
"Yeah yeah." Yuko said as she went back to playing with her Barbies.
"Let's get going."
Mariko and Takamina walked down the hall towards the end. They stopped at the last door in front of the number 213. Mariko started to get a little nervous. Takamina opened the door and Mariko saw two almost identical girls sitting on the bed. One was taller than the other. She had long black hair and black eyes. Her skin was pale and she looked very thin. She must be Rena. The shorter one who was giving Mariko a death glare must be Jurina. She had black hair like her sister and had a firey look in her eyes.
"Mariko this is Jurina and Rena. The Matsui sisters." Takamina said.
"Buzz off midget." Jurina said.
"Watch it Jurina. Or do I have to call Sayaka?" Takamina warned which made Jurina back down a little.
Meanwhile Rena just remained quiet staring at Mariko with her black eyes.
"This is Mariko and she is going to be working with you two from now on so be nice." Takamina said.
"That means you Jurina."
Jurina just growled at Takamina and hugged her sister. This reminded Mariko of the two dogs she has home.
"We'd better go." Takamina said as she gave Jurina one last glare.
The two walked out of the room leaving the two sisters in their own little world.
"Well those are your patients." Takamina said.
"What do you think?"
"I think Yuko is the most sane out of all of them." Mariko said.
"Then again I could be wrong." she thought
"Don't worry I wouldn't leave you with all this work by yourself. Every doctor has a nurse to help them. Speaking of which. Where is yours?"
Just then, there was a loud crash down the hall. Mariko looked over and saw a girl running towards them. She didn't stop in time and ended up ramming into Mariko casuing her to fall over.
"Itai!" a voice shrieked.
Mariko opened her eyes and saw a girl with long black hair and a nurses outfit. Her face somewhat reminded her of a Gachapin. Mariko stood up and fixed her lab coat.
"Be careful Mii-chan!" Takamina said.
"I'm really sorry!" she said as she stood up and bowed.
"Mariko this is your nurse Minegishi Minami. We call her Mii-chan to avoid confusion between our names. Be careful, she's a bit of a clutz. Mii-chan this is Shinoda Mariko. You have to help her with everything ok?"
"Roger!" she said.
"Good. Then I'll leave you two so you can have time to get to know each other."
Takamina left leaving the two to talk. Mariko looked at Mii-chan trying to figure out what to say. Her train of thought was broken when Mii-chan said,
"Woah you're tall."
"Thanks." Mariko said.
"And your thin too."
Mariko couldn't help but blush at the compliments she was recieving.
"You're like a stick. Haha you're a stick monster!"
Mariko glared at Mii-chan which made her back up a little.
"Uhh how old are you? 30?"
"24!" Mariko hissed.
Mariko was getting mad at the nurse. Something told her that this nurse was going to be a pain.
"How about I go get us tea?" Mii-chan said trying to find a way to escape the angered Mariko.
"Fine."
Mii-chan started to run the hall but then tripped mid way. Mariko couldn't help but laugh as she watched the clumsy nurse get back up and start running again only to fall once more. Mariko started to think that maybe slowly, she could grow a liking to this Gachapin.
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Well that's it for Chapter 1. Tell me what you think!
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jiahahaha..
yuko has OCD toward haruna..LOL..poor haruna..
oh yes, nurse mii-chan!!
it is an interesting fic with many unique characters d^^b
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LOL.. Haruna.. she sleep with her eyes wide open? :w00t: and Yuko having OCD for girls.. :rofl:
Such a weird mental facility.. even the nurse seems to have the same behavior as the patients.. :lol:
I wanna know what happen to Acchan!! Please update Acchan on the next chap.. :bow: :bow:
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*saves the spot for the comment*
I LAUGHED SO HARD!!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Mariko opened the door and at first all she saw was a ribbon. She looked down and saw Takahashi Minami or Takamina. The girl was suprisingly short. Was she a midget? As Mariko stood there looking down at the short girl, Takamina saw the folders in Mariko's hand.
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: Seeing just a ribbon must sure be a pretty funny view, oh our short midget :grin: :grin: :grin:
Profile 2
Name: Oshima Yuko
Age:22
Room: 207
Diagnosis: Has OCD (Obsessive Compulsive Disorder) for girls. Is always around girls feeling she has to touch them. Is easily agitated if one tries to take her away from a girl. May or may not be the cause of Kojima Haruna's paranoia. Was put here to be cured and learn how to control OCD.
I totally agree with Mariko's statement further down.. Yuko-sama is the most sane and (my own opinion)the most AWESOME character here :wub: :wub: :wub:
Profile 4
Name: Matsui Rena
Age: 21
Room: 213
Diagnosis: Sister of Matsui Jurina and is physically weak due to the fact she won't eat raw meats. Is often seen being protected by her younger siser Jurina. Has Cataplexy where her muscles will suddenly fail leading her to collapsing at random times. There is also a possiblity of BPD (Brief Psychotic Disorder) When threatend, she will become incredibly strong and angry. Was sent here for safety of others. When she is in psychotic mode, it is highly suggested to take extreme caution.
Oh, psycho Rena-sama, please appear!!!
Takamina didn't even knock. She opened the door and what Mariko saw was something one would call strange. On the ground playing with Barbie dolls was a girl with medium length brown hair.
"Yuko." Takamina said.
The girl looked up and her eyes widened at the sight of Takamina.
"Hey!"
She jumped up and ran over to Takamina. The girl was only a little taller than Takamina. Not to mention her teeth kind of reminded Mariko of a squirrel.
"How's my NyanNyan? I heard her screaming in her room." Yuko said.
"She's fine." Takamina said.
"She was just startled by her and your new doctor Mariko."
Mariko stepped up and introduced herself hoping to get somewhere with Yuko. Yuko looked at Mariko up and down examining every part of her like a pervert. Then she said,
"I give you a 7 out of 10."
"What?"
"Sorry but Yuko has a habit of ranking girls based on their looks." Takamina said.
She turned and looked at Yuko with a mean glare.
"Yuko you shouldn't do that. It's not nice."
Actually, Mariko thought 7 was pretty good.
"You're just jealous because she got a higher ranking than you miss 5. But no one compares to my NyanNyan. I give her a 100 out of ten. No a 1000!" Yuko said smiling with proud.
Mariko thought it was no wonder the profile said Yuko might be the cause of Haruna's paranoia. The girl is crazy obsessed with her. Mariko would get paranoid too if she had Yuko constantly obsessing over her. What Mariko wondered was why were the two neighbors if one does nothing but cause trouble for the other.
"Well that's fantastic Yuko. Anyways, I just wanted you to meet Mariko. She'll be working with you from now on so be nice." Takamina said.
"Yeah yeah." Yuko said as she went back to playing with her Barbies.
"Let's get going."
This whole part made me smiling and laughing like crazy.. My Yuko-sama is always everywhere beyond AWESOME!! :wub: :wub: :wub:
"I think Yuko is the most sane out of all of them." Mariko said.
Yes yes, i agree with this statement, so true!!! :grin:
I so expected the helping nurse to be Miichan and I was right. Well, it was pretty easy to guess. Their interaction as always was AWESOME AND HILARIOUS :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
please update soon :bow: :bow: :bow:
P.S. I want to see Acchan's profile too :twothumbs :twothumbs
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What happen to acchan? i mean her profile i wanna know it toooo...
this is an awesome fic i lurve it..
lemme kiss you muah
please continue to update.. *wink*
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a fic with psychological disorder-theme...nice one :on GJ:
reminds me with my own experience when helping one of my professor with her MPD's-Multiple Personalities Disorders-patient...
that was a total nightmare :err:
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yeahhhh!!! :twisted: everyone is crazy!!!!
Yuko is crazy about haruna!!! :drool:
takamina will go crazy because of acchan's craziness :panic:
jurina is twisted about her sister :banghead:
everybody is crazy!!!! :twisted:
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Great Fanfic...
LOL Mental Hospital
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Here's chapter 2. Tell me what you think by leaving a comment and yes, there will be more Acchan.
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Chapter 2
It has already been a week since Mariko started working at the Hirokawa Mental Facility. She has finally started to adjust to everything with her new patients and nurse. She's already found ways of how to handle some of her patients. Mariko was walking down the hall when something got in her way. She recgonized that same ribbon from before which can only mean one thing. Mariko looked down and saw the midget doctor Takamina.
"Hey Mariko I need you to do a favor." Takamina said.
"What is it?" Mariko replied.
"I've been getting an over load of work and I've been having a hard time watching some of my patients. I was wondering if you could watch one of them for me."
"Which one?"
Takamina handed Mariko a singel folder. Mariko opened it and began reading.
Name: Atsuko Maeda
Age: 19
Room: 210
Diagnosis: Has an extreme case of the Little Empress Syndrome. Was spoiled most of her childhood creating this problem and parents were forced to send her here. This particular syndrome casuses arrogant behavior and no respect for others. When she does not get what she wants, she will go into a temper tantrum/mental break down. Was put here to try to cure the problem and then sent back home. Note that when she goes into a temper tantrum, take extreme caution.
"I just need you to watch her for a little bit." Takamina said.
"For how long?" Mariko said wanting to get an actual answer.
"About three days."
Mariko looked at the short doctor in disbelief and was about to say something but then the someone called her.
"Ah I'm sorry I have to go. Just watch her over for a little bit ok? Bye!"
Takamina left Mariko staring at the file wondering if she'll be alright. She decided to go visit this temporary patient that she was supposed to watch. When she opened the door, she was blasted with the sound of ear splitting music. She quickly found the source and turned off the music.
"Hey!"
Mariko turned around and saw a girl with short black hair and brown eyes.
"Why did you turn my music off?" she asked.
"It was too loud." Mariko replied.
"Turn it back on."
"No."
"Turn it back on now!"
Acchan started stomping her feet on the ground like an angry bull.
"Wait, wait I just came to tell you something." Mariko said trying to calm her down.
"Make it fast." Acchan said as she walked over and began painting her nails.
Having a better look, Acchan's room looked alot different from other patient's rooms. It was filled with girly stuff from stuffed animals to make up. She really was a little empress.
"You're doctor Minami asked me to watch you since she was busy with other work." Mariko said.
"No. I don't want you. I want Takamina!" Acchan screamed.
"Well I'm sorry but Takamina is busy dealing with other matters and doesn't have time."
"I want TAKAMINA!"
Acchan began stomping her feet again and twitching her arms. This must be her charging up phase.
"Bring me Takamina now!" she demanded.
"I can't do that she's-" Mariko was cut off.
The room was filled with a loud scream followed my Mariko being attacked by the smaller girl. Mariko tried to get Acchan off her but she was suprisingly strong.
"I want Takamina!" Acchan screamed in Mariko's ear almost making her go deaf.
"Someone help!" Mariko shouted.
Just then there was running outside the hall.
"Acchan!"
Takamina was standing at the door way. When Acchan saw her, she immediately got off Mariko.
"Takamina!"
Acchan ran over and practically threw herself onto Takamina who barely held on.
"Takamina I don't like her. Make her go away!" Acchan said.
"I'm sorry Acchan but I can't. She has to watch you until I get my work done. It'll only be for a while ok?" Takamina said.
"But I want Takamina!"
"Look when I get back, we'll have ice cream together ok?"
"Ok!"
Acchan gave Takamina a princess like smile. Then Takamina got up and left. Mariko stood there thinking how is this girl ever going to get over her syndrome when Takamina keeps spoiling her.
"I'm bored!" the princess said.
"So?" Mariko said.
"Do something funny."
"No."
"Fine. I'll find someone else!"
Acchan stood up and ran out the door before Mariko could catch her. Mariko ran out in the hall searching for the runaway princess. Then she heard screaming from Haruna's room a couple doors down. Mariko quickly ran down there and found Acchan piggy backing on Haruana.
"Faster, faster!" Acchan said.
"Get it off, get it off, get it off!" Haruna screamed.
Mariko tried to help but Haruna was moving so fast that she couldn't get near her.
"Hey! Let go off my Nyannyan! Don't worry I'll save you!"
Mariko looked over and saw Yuko standing by the door. How she got out of her room was a question to Mariko since she remembered locking it so she wouldn't bother Haruna. Yuko ran over and jumped onto the front of Haruna causing her to lean over.
"Get off my Nyannyan!' Yuko shouted.
"No she's my horse!" Acchan shouted back.
Don't you call Nyannyan a horse!"
The two started fighting while still on Haruna who was having a hard time standing. But then there was a slam on the wall and Mariko looked over to see Jurina.
"Hey I can hear you down the hall. My sister is trying to sleep so pipe it down!" she said.
"Shut up Jurina. You can't even sleep." Acchan said.
"What'd you say?"
Jurina ran over and yanked Acchan off of Haruna throwing her to the ground. Jurina got on top of Acchan threatening to punch her. Meanwhile Yuko was clinging to Haruna like a koala.
"Nyannyan!" Yuko said as she tightened her grip on Haruna's waist.
"Ahhh get it off!" Hauran said trying to shake Yuko off.
"I'm gonna make you pay for saying that!" Jurina said as she held her fist high ready to slam on Acchan.
"Don't touch me!" Acchan screamed.
Mariko just stood there and witnessed the whole scene not knowing what to do. But then Sayaka ran in and saw all the madness.
"Don't just stand there!" Sayaka said to Mariko.
Mariko just stood there staring at Sayaka as if she just spoke a different language.
"Ahhhh! You're useless!"
Sayaka turned towards the conflicting patients and started to break up the fight. She picked up Jurina and threw her on the bed and then walked over and ripped Yuko off of Haruna like she was a piece of tape. Sayaka's strength was like a gorilla's as she watched Sayaka carry the two out like barrels with one over each shoulder.
"Let's go Acchan." Sayaka said.
"No!"
Sayaka just glared at Acchan making her stop and follow her out. There was a couple minutes of silence. Then Sayaka walked back in.
"Listen. When patients are fighting, the doctor has to stop them. You don't just stand there and watch them fight. They could get hurt or even killed so next time that happens you do something. Understand?"
Mariko shook her head.
"Good. Then I'll be leaving."
Sayaka walked out of the room leaving Mariko with Haruna. Mariko thought Sayaka must be the enforcer amoung the patients. Maybe that's why they listen to her. Mariko calmed Haruna down and then walked back over to Acchan's room. She was starting to wonder where her nurse was. When she opened the door, she found her nurse. She was on all fours and Acchan was sitting on top of her.
"Faster!" Acchan said as she hit Mii-chan's head."
"Shinoda-sama!" Mii-chan said about to burst into tears.
"What's with this girl?" Mariko thought.
Mariko threw Acchan off Mii-chan letting her stand up.
"Hey I was't done yet!" Acchan said.
Mariko grabbed Acchan's hair and pulled her close to her.
"LISTEN!" Mariko said.
"The doctors and patients are not your toys. You have to treat them like people. You do not go around and cause trouble for others. It's only making things worse and you're acting like a spoiled brat. If you ever want to get out of here then you better straighten up or get used to being locked in a room. Got it?"
Acchan just nodded her head tears starting to form.
"Good. Now sit down and keep quiet."
Mariko let go off Acchan who just sat there still scared. Then Mariko and Mii-chan left the room to let the princess think about her actions.
"Thank you for helping me." Mii-chan said.
"No problem." Mariko said.
"How did you even end up like that?"
"I walked in looking for you and she jumped me. She's really strong and hits hard." Mii-chan said rubbing her head.
"Well just forget about it and go make us tea alrght?"
"Ok!"
Mariko was determined to change Acchan and help her get over her illness. Then next three days were going to be a nightmare for the little princess.
Three says later....
"Wow Acchan you've improved so much!" Takamina said.
"Hee hee I sure have! All thanks to Mariko!" Acchan said.
"Thank you so much for helping."
"It wasn't a big deal really."
Actually it was. For the past three days, Mariko was inflicted with scratchs and bite marks trying to tame the little princess. But finally she was able to crack her. Even though it wasn't much, she was happy to get somewhere with her.
"Thank you so much Mariko. I'll have to treat you to some dinner next time." Takamina said.
"That would be wonderful." Mariko said.
"Come on Acchan. Let's go get some ice cream."
"Yay!"
As the two walked away, Acchan tuned around and mouthed something to Mariko.
"Next time I won't be so nice" is what she said.
Then she gave Mariko a cold princess smile and walked away. Chills shot down Mariko's spine as she watched the two. Something told Mariko that wasn't going to be the last time she heard from Acchan, the little empress.
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Well that's chapter 2. Tell me what you think!
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Oh, I just love this one hell of the clinic, with mentally disordered patients and it's quirky doctors LOLOLOL
For me, Acchan is totally normal, just spoiled and a brat LOLOLOL
And in love with Takamina, as always :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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I love you!!!
you update fast!!
acchan attitude so kakkoii!! WHAT I WANT IS WHAT I GET!
atsumina's having an ice cream date..
I want more atsumina hehehe *Im too demanding sorry*
Update soon!!
Thank you!
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This is M.A.D.N.E.S.S!!! omg!! I love this fics.. :lol: :lol:
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LOL..this is hilarious!
acchan is scary but she can act nice in front of takamina XD
continue~
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Poor Mariko she couldn't do nothing :on drink:
Acchan is in love with Takamina :luvluv2:
Sayaka walked out of the room leaving Mariko with Haruna. Mariko thought Sayaka must be the enforcer amoung the patients. Maybe that's why they listen to her. Mariko calmed Haruna down and then walked back over to Acchan's room. She was starting to wonder where her nurse was. When she opened the door, she found her nurse. She was on all fours and Acchan was sitting on top of her.
if Sayaka do this to Jurina again I'm going to move a step :shifty:
I hope it will be Wmatsui next time :luvluv2:
I can't wait for the next chapter :on gay:
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I really love the story. MORE ATSUMINA!!!! I like it when people update fast. Keep it that way if you can. :thumbup
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People say I update fast. Mainly because I have alot of free time. Well here's chapter 3 folks. Tell me what you think!
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Chapter 3
It was lunch time at Hirokawa Mental Facility so everyone was gathered to the lunch room. Mariko had brought her own lunch and decided to sit down and eat with Sayaka.
"So how are things?" Sayaka asked.
"Better." Mariko said.
"I'm sorry about last time. I just didn't know what to do."
"It's alright. Acchan is a bit hard to handle and I don't think Takamina is helping her. She might be making it worse."
"What do you mean?"
"Look."
At the end of the table, Takamina was spoon feeding Acchan rice. Mariko could hear what they were saying.
"Acchan say ahhhhh~." Takamina said holding up a spoon.
"Ahhhhh~"
Takamina placed the spoon in Acchan's mouth and she gulped it down.
"Is it good?"
"Un!" Acchan said with a huge smile.
"Good! Here comes seconds!"
"They're more like husband and wife rather than doctor and patient." Sayaka said.
"I know what you mean." Mariko said.
"Anyways, you should probably go check on Rena."
"Why?"
"Someone needs to make sure she eats properly. She'll eat what Jurina gives her but otherwise she won't eat anyhting else."
"Ok. Where are they?"
"Over there."
Sayaka pointed to the table in the far corner. Mariko walked over and sat across the two sisters. Jurina saw this and started to tense up a bit.
"What do you want?" Jurina growled.
"I just came over to see how you're doing." Mariko said trying to keep cool.
"We're eating." Jurina said.
"You are. But what about Rena?"
Mariko looked at Rena's plate that only had a some vegatables and rice on it.
"She won't eat anything else." Jurina said.
"Oh really? Rena is there anything else you'd like to eat?"
Rena remained silent.
"Well I brought something that might interest you." Mariko said as she reached into her bag.
"Word has it that Rena likes Melonpan."
As soon as Mariko said Melonpan, Rena's eyes widened. Mariko pulled the Melonpan out and placed it on the table.
"Here. Take it. You need to eat." Mariko said pushing it closer.
At first Rena was still. But then with lightning fast speed, she took it, tore the pack open and started scraffing it down.
"How did you know?" Jurina asked.
"I get around. Heard a couple things."
Actually she just asked Yuko who seems to know alot about Rena.
The Melonpan was gone and now Rena was licking the inside of the wrapper.
"Here have another."
Mariko handed Rena another Melonpan putting a huge smile on the girl's face. Seeing her sister happy made Jurina lower her guard a little.
"You're not bad." she said.
"Well I'm just trying to help." Mariko said.
The two watched Rena about to eat her third Melonpan when someone snuck behind her and snatched it out of her hands.
"Mine!"
Mariko turned around and saw Acchan who was now eating the Melonpan.
"Hey! Give that back!" Jurina said.
"That's Rena's!"
"Well now it's mine." Acchan said taking another bite.
Rena looked like she was about to start crying.
"Why you!"
Jurina got up and was about to attack the girl when Mariko got in between them.
"Jurina calm down and Acchan give Rena her bead back." she said.
"No!" Acchan said.
Just then Takamina walked over.
"What's going on?" she asked.
"That brat took my sister's Melonpan." Jurina said trying to get past Mariko.
"Acchan give it back." Takamina said holding out her hand.
"No!" Acchan protested.
"Acchan!"
"I'm gonna kill her!"
Jurina pushed Mariko out of the way and charged at Acchan. She rammed into her knocking her down and tried punching her. But then Takamina got involved and pulled Jurina off Acchan. This made Jurina even more frustrated and started hitting Takamina. Mariko tried to hold her back but only ended up getting hit in the face. Throughout the whole mess, no one noticed Acchan picking up a lunch tray and rushing over to help Takamina. She attacked from behind and whacked the lunch tray on Jurina's head causing her to pass out.
"Acchan!" Takamina said.
"I was only trying to help!" Acchan shouted.
As the two argued, Mariko looked over and saw Rena who had tears running down her eyes. She got up and slowly walked over to her unconsious sister. A sudden chill shot down Mariko as she saw Rena form a dark look on her face. There was a loud crack which made Takamina stop and Acchan stop arguing. Rena stood up and walked over to Acchan.
"What do you-"
Before Acchan could finish her sentence, Rena grabbed Acchan's neck and tightened her grip. She looked up at Acchan and smiled. There was a wild look in her eyes as if something just snapped inside her head.
"Hey... You mad?" she said as she continued to squeeze the life out of Acchan.
"Rena!"
Takamina tried to stop Rena but was only knocked out by Rena's powerful punch.
"I'll kill you." Rena said happily as she continued to strangle Acchan.
Mariko tried to step in but was too terrified by the usually weak girl's power.
"This must be the BPD." Mariko thought as she watched Rena laugh at the slowly fading Acchan.
Acchan looked like she was about to die when out of nowhere, Sayaka came up and injected Rena with a sedative. Rena slowly began to collapse but then Sayaka caught her. Acchan fell to the ground gasping for air. As Sayaka carried out the two Matsui sisters, she looked at Acchan with a serious glare and said,
"Now you know not to mess with her."
Sayaka left leaving Acchan crying. Takamina regained consiousness and saw Acchan crying. She ran over and tried to comfort her.
"Acchan let's go back to your room."
Takamina helped Acchan up and walked her out. Mariko followed after Sayaka to check on the Matsui sisters. When she walked in, she found Jurina in a straight jacket and Rena was resting with restraints tieing her to the bed.
"This is what happens when Rena gets mad." Jurina said.
"She gets really strong and it seems like nothing can stop her. She wants blood when she's in that mood. To be honest it's really scary."
"Well she must have thought you were really hurt so she acted that way to protect you." Mariko said.
"Just like back then..."
"What?"
'It's nothing. Forget about it."
Mariko knew Jurina was hiding something but she thought it was best not to ask. She looked over at Jurina who was sleeping silently. She almost looked like she was dead.
"Well I'm going to check on Acchan. In the mean time, I'm going to be nice for once."
Mariko walked over to Jurina and undid the straight jacket on Jurina.
"Here give this to Rena when she wakes up."
Mariko handed Jurina a Melonpan. Then she turned around and walked out the room before Jurina could say anything. Mariko walked down the hall to Acchan's room to see how her and Takamina were doing. She popped her head in and saw Takamina and Acchan sleeping together on the bed holding hands. She wondered how that happened. Seeing how everything was in order, she decided to go back to the lunch room. All Mariko wanted to do is relax and enjoy her lunch. But when she walked in, she only found more trouble. In the lunch room, Mariko found Haruna struggling with Yuko.
"Let go of me!" Haruna shouted.
"Never!" Yuko said as she clung to Haruna's waist.
"I want to eat!"
"I want to eat with Nyannyan!"
"No!"
"Come on!"
"No!"
"I swear I won't try to groupe you like last time!"
"NOOO!"
Mariko wondered what happend last time Yuko ate lunch with Haruna.
But then Haurna stopped struggling and started to fall back. Mariko quickly caught Haruna and set her down. Haruna was having a seizure.
"Yes perfect timing!"
At first Mariko didn't get what Yuko meant. But then she saw Yuko starting to reach out for Haruna's chest. Mariko quickly reacted and picked Yuko up. Then she carried the perverted squirrel out of the lunch room. She carried her down the hall to her room and then placed her on the bed.
"Hey what are you doing! I want my Nyannyan!" Yuko pouted.
"Let Haruna eat in peace. She's already over the edge because of you." Mariko said.
"I didn't get a chance to touch her!"
"Here use this."
Mariko handed Yuko an anger management doll.
"Pretend it's Yuko and touch it."
"Now that's just wrong." Yuko said.
"What? You want me to draw her face on it?" Mariko said.
"No! You enjoy seeing my pain don't you?"
"Maybe." Mariko said with a playful smile.
"You're a sadist aren't you?"
"No way."
"OK whatever you say."
"Good."
Mariko turned around to leave when something hit her in the head. She looked over and saw the doll on the ground.
"I hope you know nothing can replace my Nyannyan. Especially some doll." Yuko said.
"Well then how about this."
Mariko pulled out a PlayBoy magazine she stole from the security guard knowing it would come in handy.
"Ooooooo!" Yuko said as she took the magazine.
"Happy now?" Mariko asked.
"Yep."
"Alright then I'm leaving."
As Mariko left, she head Yuko shout,
"Mou! None of these girls compare to Nyannan. I want Nyannyan!"
"Will that girl ever get over her?" Mariko thought.
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Well there's chapter 3. So what do you think? I hope everyone liked it. I did my best trying to incorperate the things everyone wanted in the most creative way I knew how.Tell me what you think!
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poor matsui sisters...
rena and melon pan <3
woah, rena in gekikara mode is scary..
yeah,you update fast.i like it ^^b
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I'm sleepy, so I'll edit this tomorrow.
But I loved it
GJ :bow: :bow:
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Great chapter. I wonder why are Acchan and Takamina holding hands and how did they end up like that?
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akigori transformed into she hulk on ch2 was cool :on GJ:
acchan...how dare you to steal rena's melonpan and hit jurina with that tray...you need to be punished for what you have done
bakamina...you need to be more strict with acchan,you spoiled her a lot...use the reward and punishment technique if you really want acchan get better...
as for other patients,i still need more info about their background
man,reading this fic makes me feel like i'm redo my assignment back in college :err:
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lolol this is quite funny!
all these mad people are making such a ruckus in the hospital haha
how the hell did they get out of their own rooms so easily is a mystery to me xD
dangerous people are dangerous...attacking each other and the doctors as well :P
acchan is just epic spoilt :thumbup and wmatsui is just deadly
and i applaud yuko for being so attached to her nyan nyan and forever wanting just her hahaha
cant wait til the next update :)
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Now I think this concept is better than the prison concept of upcomIng MG season 3 :roll:
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yeah!1 aww atsumina couple so cute..
come on yuuchan leave haruna a little alone :D...
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Well seeing how I have nothing better to do, here's chapter 4! Let the madness continue!
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Chapter 4
Mariko was walking down the hall when someone ran into her. She looked up and saw a girl with short and spikey hair and brown eyes. Mariko was about to say something but was cut off for about two seconds.
"AHHHHHH I'm really really really really really sorry!" the girl said.
"It's fine." Mariko said as she stood up.
"Are you alright?"
"Me? I'm fine. Fine fine fine fine fine! I couldn't feel better. Why? Are you ok? Are you hurt?"
"Um no I'm fine...."
Mariko couldn't believe how fast the girl could talk. She also noticed that the girl was twitching.
"Well I gotta go. I'm on the run from a gorilla. Bye bye! Vroom vroom vroom!"
The girl ran off in a blink of an eye. A couple minutes later Sayaka came running down the hall. She stopped in front of Mariko to catch her breath.
"Have you seen a girl with short hair and has an extreme amount of high energy?" she asked.
"Yeah she went that way." Mariko said pointing down the hall.
"Thanks!"
Sayaka bolted down the hall after the girl.
"Sae! You get back here!" she shouted.
Mariko couldn't help but wonder what that was about. A half hour later, Sayaka walked over to Mariko looking like she had just run a marathon.
"Thanks for helping me back there." she said as she chugged a bottle of water.
"Who was that?" Mariko asked.
"That was Miyazawa Sae. She's one of my patients."
"What's wrong with her?"
"She has a really bad case of ADHD (Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder) where she is so hyper all the time that she's like a chipmunk in steroids. She also has tourettes which causes that twitching she has. She's the facilitie's genking and is always smiling. In order to put her to bed, we have to sedate her and tie her in restraints. That girl can never calm down unless you drug her."
"That must be tough."
"Yes which is why I'm handing her over to you." Sayaka said.
"What?" Mariko said in disbelief.
"I have to go down town for a meeting and someone needs to watch her,"
"Can't a nurse handle her."
"Last time a nurse tried to handle her, she let Sae escape and we had to call the police to chase her down."
"Ohhh."
"That is why I'm giving her to you. I'll only be gone for a couple hours. You can handle her."
"Ok if you say so."
"Good. Oh and one more thing, Sae is ABOSLUTELY FORBIDDEN to have any kind of sugar. If she does, it'll be like setting off a bomb full of electricity. Got it?"
"Yep. Good then I'll leave you with her. There are sedatives in my office if you need any."
"Thanks. Oh what room is she in?" Mariko asked.
"Room 208" Sayaka said.
As Sayaka left, Mariko set off to go see Sae. When Mariko found Sae, she was strapped to her bed in a straight jacket that was chained to the wall.
"Overkill much?" Mariko thought.
Sae saw Mariko and couldn't help but smile at her.
"Where's Sayaka?" she asked.
"She had to go to a meeting." Mariko said.
"I see. Well since she's gone, do you mind taking off these restraints? They're kinda uncomfortable."
"Nice try but no."
"Darn. Hey when's lunch comin? I'm starving!"
Mariko realized that Sae must not be allowed to eat lunch with the others.
"The nurse should be here soon."
There was a knock on the door and Mii-chan came in with a tray.
"Here's your lunch." she said as she placed it in front of Sae.
"Oh Shinoda-san, Yuko was calling for you."
"Really? Ok. I'll be right back so watch Sae for me."
"Ok!"
Mariko left the room to check on Yuko. She found her on the ground staring at a picture of Haruna. Mariko wondered where she got the photo in the first place.
"What do you need Yuko?" Mariko asked.
"I was wondering if you could give this to Haruna. I made it for her during arts and crafts."
Yuko handed Mariko a picture of what looked like a cat with a heart drawn around it. Under the picture, Yuko had wrote
"From your squirrel friend Yuko. I love you Nyannyan!" There were hearts drawn around Haruna's name.
"I'll make sure to give it to her." Mariko said as she turned around to leave.
"Thanks!"
Mariko looked at the card thinking it looked like an eight year old drew it. Not to mention the saying sounded like a middle schooler confessing to the one they like. Yuko really needed help. Mariko walked over to Haruna's room and slid the paper under the crack in the door. There was a moment of silence and then on the inside you could hear Haruna go "EHHHH?" Once that was done, Mariko went back to Sae's room. When she walked in, she found Mii-chan on the ground, Sae gone and the room looked like a typhoon went through it.
"Oi what happened?!" Mariko asked.
"Well..." Mii-chan said straightening herself up.
"Sae said she couldn't eat with her hands tied so I untied her. Then she said she wanted something sweet so I gave her some candy I had in my pocket."
"You what?"
There was a loud crash followed by a bang. Mariko looked out and saw Sae running down the halls like a mad woman.
"Why did you give her sugar?!" Mariko said.
"I, I-"
Mariko didn't have time to hear some lame excuse. She ran out into hall and chased after Sae. But the girl was incredibly fast and hard to keep up. She chose a bad day to wear heels. As she was chasing her, Takamina suddenly got in front of her. Mariko stopped right in time to avoid hitting the midget.
"What's going on?" Takamina asked.
"Sae got loose. And she's also had sugar." Mariko said.
"Not good. Did you call Sayaka?"
"She's at a meeting down town."
"This is bad."
"What's wrong?"
Acchan suddenly came out of the room looking like she had just woken up from a nap.
"Sae's out and is on a sugar rush." Takamina said.
"Not again. Last time she was all hyper she ate my strawberry lip gloss. We gotta stop her." Acchan said.
"I agree and I have an idea. Here's what we'll do."
Takamina explained to Mariko and Acchan how they were going to catch the out of control Sae. They were going to lure Sae with a trail of candy into a room where two of them will be inside with a net while one is outside to lock the door. Mariko thought there was pretty old fashioned but it was worth giving a try. They set up the trap and now they had to wait. Within a couple of minutes, Sae came racing down and saw the candy. She started to eat the candy and follow the trail to the room Acchan and Takamina were in. When she was in, Mariko shut the door and locked it. There was a struggle inside and then silence. Mariko thought Acchan and Takamina had got her. But then the door went flying off its hinges across the other side of the hall. Then a even more hyper Sae came running out laughing like crazy. Mariko ran in to check on Takamina and Acchan.
"What happened?" Mariko asked.
"She overwhelmed us." Takamina said while fixing her bow.
"She's really strong when she's on sugar." Acchan said.
"I know." Mariko said as she looked at the door that was practically blasted out into the hall.
"So now what do we do?" Takamina asked.
There was a pause. Then Mariko remembered Sayaka saying there were sedatives in her office. Mariko quickly ran to Sayaka's office which was suprisingly bland. She looked around everywhere but couldn't find them. Then out of the corner of her eye, Mariko saw a small red box hanging on the wall.
"Incase of Sae on sugar rush, open box." was written on it.
Mariko opened the box and found a blow tube and three darts. Was Sae a wild animal? Mariko didn't care as long as it will stop Sae. She ran out into the hall and saw Sae still running around. Mariko loaded the first dart and took aim. Then she took a deep breath and fired. The dart was heading straight at Sae but then Mii-chan got in the way and the dart hit her in the butt. Within seconds, Mii-chan was out.
"Stupid Gachapin!" Mariko said to herself.
Luckily Sae didn't notice the shot and was still in range. Mariko loaded the second dart and took aim again. She was sure it was going to hit this time. Mariko shot the dart and this time it looked like it was going to hit. But then Haruna and Yuko came running through with Yuko chasing Haruna. Again, the dart ended up missing and hitting Yuko in the butt and she was out to. Mariko thought she must have a thing for hitting people in the butt. Personally, she thought she just saved Haruna. But now Mariko only had one dart left and Sae was even further down than before. Mariko had one last shot and this time she had to make it count. She lined the tube up to Sae. Then she fired and instead of going straight at Sae, it bounced off the wall avoiding Acchan and hit Sae right in the arm. It took Sae a minute to realize what just happened. Then she passed out and was out like a light.
"Yosh!" Mariko said in victory.
"Nice shot!" Takamina said.
"You almost hit me!" Acchan said.
That didn't matter. Now all Mariko had to do was put Sae back in her room. When Sayaka came back, Mariko retuned the blow tube and darts.
"You had to use these?" Sayaka asked.
"Yep." Mariko said.
"How did she get sugar?"
"My nurse was tricked into giving her some."
Mariko looked down at the floor and stard at Mii-chan who was still asleep from the sedative.
"Well at least no one got hurt." Sayaka said.
"Except the door." Mariko said as she pointed down the hall.
"Ahh jeez! I just had that door fixed! Well a anyways, thanks for watching over Sae and I'm sorry for all the trouble she caused you."
"No problem."
Mariko left to go check on Yuko who was also hit by one of the darts. She thought she would still be out like Mii-chan. But to her suprise, Yuko was back at it chasing after Haruna. There was nothing that could stop that girl from going after Haruna. Mariko thought there was nothing in the world that could stop the Haruna crazed squirrel.
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Well there's chapter 4. Tell me what you think and I hope you enjoy it! Man I write fast. Time for a break!
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ADHD+sugar rush=total chaos :on lol:
nice one :on GJ:
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OMG, this is GENIUS, PERFECT!!!
Thank you for this awesome update :bow: :bow: :bow:
Yuko-sama is like always, unstoppable :rofl: :rofl:
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sae ADHD? O_o
LOL..salute for those doctors..
what a madness..LOL..
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Gosh! I'm loving this madness and chaos.. :lol: :lol: made me laughing really hard.. :rofl: :rofl:
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Sae is Pretty dangerous...
Mii-chan are kind of like Stupid getting trick by Sae hahaha
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I'm getting more and more in love with this story!! :thumbup Sae - chan such a bad ass. :D
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At the end of the table, Takamina was spoon feeding Acchan
from chapter 3 lmao
Also I can't imagine rena beating up acchan maybe because of maji gaku acchan was the strongest of them all trololol
Don't let them beat up acchan again :cry: :cry: although she's spoiled :nervous
you really update fast!!
Your fic is on my bookmark owready muahhh..
keep it up :*
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This is a awesome fic!!!!
Yuko is a pervert!!!!! YAYYYY
This is so funny especially Sae. Hyper Genking lol. I wish I was you, have a lot of free time. And LOL at the dart hitting Yuko's oshiri.
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thanks for updating fast :on_pick: :whistle:
Acchan character is normal I know many like her ( my sister :depressed: )
Rena turned to be Gekikara she is so scary :scared:
I thought she was going to kill Acchan :OMG:
why Haruna can't accept Yuko :frustrated:
Rena loves Jurina I thought it was only Jurina who care more Wmatsui please :nya:
I wonder what is the secret that Jurina hiding :glasses:
can you add you add Mayuki in this Fanfic if you want :wriggly:
I can't wait for the next chapter :farofflook:
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Hello! I'm back and I have new caracters to introduce! Please enjoy!
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Chapter 5
Mariko was chasing after Yuko who was terrorizing Haruna when she saw something sitting in the corner of the hall. She stopped to look and saw a girl with long black hair that was in pigtails and glasses. She was curled up reading a manga. Mariko wondered where the girl came from. She knelt down to her level and asked,
"Who are you?"
The girl looked up and arched her eye brows at the sight of Mariko.
"Who are you?" she replied.
"I'm a doctor here. Shinoda Mariko. You?"
"Watanabe Mayu." she said.
"Nice to meet you. Um by the way, why are you here? Shouldn't you be with your doctor?"
"I'm right here."
Mariko turned around and was startled by the sudden appearence of another girl with long black hair and round eyes wearing a white lab coat.
"I am doctor Kashiwagi Yuki or Yukirin and this is my patient Mayuyu. I was watching her read manga." she said.
"Oh. Nice to meet you. Are you new? I've never seen you around?" Mariko asked.
"I've been here for five years. You just never notcied."
"Oh I'm sorry."
"It's fine. Anyways, Mayuyu, it's time for your check up. Please put the manga down and come with me."
"Fine."
Mayuyu got up and followed Yukirin to another room. Mariko thought that Yukirin was lucky to have such an obidient patient. Mariko had finally gotten Yuko back in her room after tricking her into thinking Haruna was in her room waiting for her. After she left the room, Mariko heard screaming coming from Jurina and Rena's room. Mariko rushed down and saw Jurina looking for something.
"What's wrong?" Mariko asked.
"Someone stole my manga!" she said.
"You're what?"
"My manga! I read it when I get bored and now I can't find it!"
"Ok where was the last time you saw it?"
"It was on the table but now it's gone!"
"Alright calm down. You stay in here and I'll go look for it. What's it called?"
Jurina's face got red when Mariko asked her the name of the manga.
"What's it called?" Mariko asked again.
"Tokyo... Mew mew"
"Wait you mean the one with the pink cat girl?"
"Yes now go find it!" Jurina said as she pushed Mariko out of the room.
Mariko couldn't believe the rowdy violent tomboy liked to read cute girly manga. Mariko went around asking people if they saw a missing manga lying around. So far she got no results. She stopped by Acchan's room and found her doing Takamina's hair.
"Uhh sorry to interrupt your little play date but I wanted to ask you something." Mariko said.
"What is it?" Takamina said.
"Jurina's manga is missing and she's throwing a fit. You know where it is?"
"Nope. Acchan do you know?"
"No. I was with you the whole time remember? We were playing jan ken pon." Acchan said.
"Oh yeah that's right. Sorry Mariko but we don't know where it could be." Takamina said.
"That's ok. Thanks anyways." Mariko said as she was about to leave.
"Wait!" Acchan said.
"What?"
"Check room 210. There's a patient there that might know where it went. She knows everything that happens around here. She's like a mouse."
"Ok thanks Acchan."
Mariko walked down the hall to room 210 and when she walked in, she was ingulfed with mangas. They were everywhere on the floor, stacks against the walls, under and on top of the bed, everywhere! There were also a bunch of anime figures lying around. Mariko thought she had just walked into an otaku's room. The room was dark so she couldn't see much. She felt around for some kind of light switch. When she found it, she flipped it on and then there was a loud scream.
"Ahh bright light! Turn it off!"
Mariko looked down and saw Mayuyu covering her eyes. To the side, Mariko saw the manga Jurina was looking for. She tried to grab it but Mayuyu took it away before she could take it.
"Paws off! This is mine!" she hissed retreating back.
"No that's Jurina's and I have to return it." Mariko said.
"NO WAY!"
"Mayuyu!"
Yukirin had walked in and found Mayuyu holding the manga.
"Tell your patient to return the manga she stole." Mariko said.
"Mayuyu is that true?" Yukirin asked.
"No way it's mine. I haven't read it yet."
"I'm sorry Shinoda-san. Mayuyu here has kleptomania. She can't control herself and has urges to hoard and steal things. The things she collects just happens to be manga and anime figures. She's very obidient with everything I tell her as long as she gets to read manga. But if you try to take away any of her mangas she'll go nuts."
"Really?" Mariko got an idea.
She knew getting the manga back wasn't going to easy so she would have to use a different stradegy. She looked around for the most valuble object in the room. Then she saw an anime figure in a glass box sitting on the the shelf next to her. Mariko waited and then when Mayuyu wasn't looking, Mariko took the figure out of the box.
"Hey put down my Hatsune Miku figure!" Mayuyu said.
"Not until you give me the manga." Mariko said.
"No!"
"Then I'll break it."
"NOOOOOO!"
"Shinoda-san please stop. You don't know what you're doing!" Yukirin said.
"Give it back!"
Mayuyu jumpd up and attached herself to Mariko.
"Give it back!" Mayuyu demanded trying to get the figure back.
"Give me the manga!" Mariko demanded back.
"Both of you please stop!" Yukirin shouted.
Just then, Mariko threw the figure out of her hands. It slammed into the wall and broke into pieces.
"Oh no...."
Mariko saw Yukirin slowly starting to back away. Mariko looked over at Mayuyu was trying to resemble the shattered figureine. There was a dark look on her face. Her whole face turned red and her teeth gritted. She turned to Mariko who was now also starting to back away.
"I'll kill you!" Mayuyu said.
Mayuyu pulled out a sword from under the bed. Mariko wondered where she even got it. Probably from some cosplay set. But now wasn't the time to think about cosplay because there's a really mad otaku with a sword. Mariko turned around and ran out the room as fast as she could. But Mayuyu was right behind her with sword and all. The only thing Mariko could think was run to Jurina's room. Maybe she'll be able to help. Mariko rushed down to Jurina's room, locked the door and shouted,
"Jurina help! Really mad otaku with a sword is chasing me!"
"What?"
Before Mariko could say anything, the door was busted down and Mayuyu came in with her sword ready.
"Ahhhh!"
Mayuyu swung her sword but luckily missed and cut the wall instead.
"What's going on? Mayuyu why do you have a sword?" Jurina asked.
"She's the one who took your manga!"Mariko said.
"I tried to get it back but then things went bad and now's she's trying to kill me. Help!"
"Shut up you anime hater!" Mayuyu said as she swung her sword again.
Mariko got out of the way and the sword barely hit Jurina.
"Mayuyu put the sword down!" Jurina said.
"Not until she pays for what she did to Miku!" Mayuyu protested.
"She broke your Hatsune Miku figure?"
"Yeah!"
"Oh Mariko you're screwed. That was Mayuyu's most valuable figure."
"I know she is!" Mayuyu said and she jumped onto the bed and then leaped on top of Mariko.
Mariko tried to get Mayuyu off her but she was really strong. All Mariko could do was move her head to avoid being stabbed.
"Jurina help!" Mariko shouted.
"No way. It's your fault for ticking her off."
"Help me or no more Melonpan for your sister!"
Jurina looked over at Rena who had tears forming around her eyes hearing she wouldn't get anymore Melonpan.
"Alright fine!"
Jurina ran out of the room leaving Mariko stuggling with the crazed otaku.
"Jurina!"
A couple minutes later, Jurina came back with an IV pole that patients use to walk around but sitll have an IV in them. She swung it at Mayuyu and nailed her right in the side. Mariko quickly got up and ran over to Rena.
"Hey don't use my sister as a shield!" Jurina said.
"Look out!"
Mayuyu came swinging at Jurina with full force. The two collided with the sound of metal clashing every five seconds. Mariko was suprised how well the pole was holding up. The two were battling each other like they do in the samurai movies. Both of their skills were equally matched in a fight that would seem like it could last forever. But then when Mayuyu's sword hit Jurina's pole, it snapped in half. Now Jurina had two pieces of what used to be her weapon. Jurina used to her advantage by throwing one part of the pole at Mayuyu leaving her stunned. Then she elbowed her in the chest and kicked her stomach sending her flying back. Jurina quickly rushed over and kicked the sword out of Mayuyu's reach. Then she held the sharpened end of the pole at Mayuyu's neck making her freeze.
"I win." Jurina said.
"For now." Mayuyu said.
Yukirin came in and quickly sedated Mayuyu to avoid anymore conflict. Then she carried her out taking the sword with her.
"Thanks for saving me." Mariko said.
"No problem. Just make sure you bring extra Melonpan at lunch right nee-chan?"
Rena nodded with excitement.
"Got it. Lots of Melonpan."
"I had a lot of fun. I can't wait for out next battle." Jurina said.
"You've done this before?" Mariko asked.
"Yep. Last time she won but choking me with the bed sheets. But this time I won! I can't wait for the next one." Jurina said as she gave Mariko a devil smile.
"What a scary girl." Mariko thought.
After the whole crazy otaku thing, Acchan walked up to Mariko,
"So did you find what you were looking for?" she asked.
"Yeah. Thanks for the tip." Mariko said.
"Glad to help. But I demand payment for my services."
"What?"
"I expect three tubs of cherry lip gloss by tomorrow ok?"
Acchan looked at Mariko with a devious glare.
"Uh yeah. Sure. Three right?" Mariko said.
"Yep! Thanks!"
"Acchan!" Takamina walked over.
Acchan's mood completely changed from dangerous to innocent.
"Let's get going. They have curry down in the lunch room."
"Aww but the curry is way too spicy for me!" Acchan said.
"Well if it gets too spicy I'll buy you that strawberry milk you love so much."
"Yay! Takamina you're the best!" Acchan said hugging Takamina.
"Alright let's get going."
"Hai! Oh and Mariko don't forget.."
"What?"
"Three tubes by tomorrow or else."
Then Acchan turned back and continued to walk away. Mariko stood there thinking,
"The people here are really scary."
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Well there's chapter 5! Tell me what you think and leave a comment! Ahh now it's time for a short break.
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MADNESS IN DA MAD HOUSE IS MAD
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i love my atsumina here..
taka spoiling her atsu..
mayu sugoii!
you really update fast!
keep it up!
we'll be waiting..
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Takamina ur spoiling that acchan brat too much :angry:
Love ur work :heart:
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mayu vs jurina..LOL..
it's like a fight between center and nezumi in mad house version..
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Prologue: Lol poor acchan XD
Ch 1.:
-Yuko may be the cause of Haruna's paranoia... That's awful. Poor Haruna and Bad Yuko :P
- Hmm an easy to anger Jurina... hmm this will get interesting
- I feel really bad for Rena :(
Ch 2.:
-selfish Acchan is epic XD
-Omg acchan is so mean. Poor Haruna. :P
- Sayaka to the rescue :twothumbs
Ch 3.:
- Rena and melon pan moment was kawaii :heart:
-Gekikara has appeared ... Oh crap
- Bad Yuko! No groping a person while they are having a seizure.
Ch 4.:
- :lol: an ADHD Sae :twothumbs
- Oh no Sae had sugar
Ch 5.:
-Jurina reads TMM :P
-Mayu chan with a sword is scary :shocked
-Mayu vs Jurina lolz I just thought of them in their Majisuka Gakuen outfits fighting XD
This is a really good series. I can't wait for your next update. :thumbsup
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Your fic is awesome!
I like the new concept ^^
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there...takamidget spoiled acchan again *sigh*
and mariko,you're so impulsive...since you're the main char here-cmiiw-why don't you use your trolling skill,it would makes things more 'spicy' :kekeke:
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Hello! I'm back with more ideas! Here's chapter six. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 6
It was a slow day at Hirokawa Mental Facility which was very odd. Everyone was in their rooms not causing any trouble. This bothered Mariko because she got most of her entertainment from her patients. Being bored out of her mind, Mariko decided to go see what the other doctors were doing. Mariko first stopped at Yukirin's office. She was about to walk in but then she remembered what happened last time with Mayuyu. She didn't even want to get involved with the otaku again. Mariko decided to move on to Takamina. She found her alone which was really suprising. She was so used to seeing Acchan wrapped around her.
"Hey Takamina." Mariko said.
"Oh hello Mariko." Takamina said.
"Where's Acchan? Isn't she always clinged around you?"
"Well Acchan went a little too far yesterday so I put her in time out."
"How'd you manage to do that?"
"Look."
Takamina gestured to a door that had a window on it. Mariko looked inside and saw Acchan wrapped in a straight jacket. She was kicking and screaming pounding on the walls that were padded. The room must be sound proof because she couldn't hear anything Acchan was saying and to be honest, she really didn't want to.
"How long has she been in there?" Mariko asked.
"About five minutes." Takamina said.
"Jeez. Well I'm glad to see you finally getting a hold of Acchan. You've been spoiling her for too long."
"I know. But I can't help it. I love the way she acts when I spoil her. It reminds me of that one time when I was at the super market and..."
Mariko began to space out. She didn't really want to listen to Takamina talking to her about uninteresting things. Her mind began to wander and think about other things. Like what she was going to have for dinner. Her train of thought was stopped when Takamina shook her.
"Hey Mariko are you listening to me at all?" Takamina asked.
"Uh no sorry. The stuff you were talking about wasn't really interesting so I spaced out." Mariko said.
"Man! Everyone says that my stories are boring."
"You sound like my grandma talking about her days back in highschool and to be honest, I'd rather listen to her than you."
"Hey!"
"Well gotta go!"
Mariko smiled and left before the midget doctor could do anything. She really liked messing with her. After the not so interesting talk with Takamina, Mariko decided to go visit Haruna who she rarely checked in on. To her suprise, the girl was actually awake and was doing what looked like exercise.
"Hello Haruna." Mariko said.
"Hey Mariko." she said.
"What are you doing?"
"Getting myself into shape." she said as she started stretching her arms.
"Why?"
"So I'm ready to run when Yuko tries to attack me."
"You know she only does it cause she loves you." Mariko said.
"Yeah but it's scary! I'm afriad she'll hurt me." Haruna said as she tried to bend over and touch her toes even though she didn't get very far which was sad.
"That girl would do everything else to you except hurt you. Just give her a chance and maybe it won't be as bad as you think."
"Well ok, maybe next time I won't run away."
"Good. Plus Yuko finally might be able to get to third base with you." Mariko said with a perverted smile.
"What?" Haruna asked with a confused look.
"It's nothing."
Mariko left before Haruna realized what she meant. After talking to Haruna, Mariko felt like talking to Yuko. She walked over to her room and when she walked in, she found the little squirrel leaned up against the wall.
"Uh Yuko what are you doing?" Mariko asked.
"Listening for Nyannyan. Shhhhh!" she said.
"Well I wanted to tell you something that involves Haruna but since your busy..."
Mariko turned around to leave but then she felt a tug on her arm. She turned around and saw the squirrel girl with a very serious look on her face.
"Tell me." she said.
"I've convinced her to stop running away from you." Mariko said.
"Really? YAHOO!" Yuko jumped up and started cheering.
"Just don't go crazy. Take it nice and slow like they do in the dramas. You know?"
"Ohh you're right! Why didn't I think of that earlier!" Yuko said face palming herself.
"Well good luck and also look out, I may or may not have given her a weapon to defend herself with."
"You what?!"
Mariko left before Yuko could do anything. She liked messing with Yuko too. Maybe Miichan was right when she said Mariko was a sadist. The next stop was the Matsui sisters. She walked in the room and was suprised to only find Rena in the room.
"Where's Jurina?" Mariko asked.
"She's getting a check up." Rena said.
"Why aren't you with her?"
"I had another attack so I have to stay in bed."
"I see."
There was a moment of silence. Mariko had never really talked to Rena before because she was always so quiet. Talking to her was really nice. It was a lot better than being yelled at by Jurina.
"Um Shinoda-san I wanted you ask you about something." Rena said.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"Well I was wondering, next time Jurina gets mad, could you please be a little easier on her. She only acts that way because she's protecting me."
"No problem. As long as you tell her to hold back on me. I don't want to be killed by her."
"Sure." Rena said as she giggled a little.
"Well I better go so you can rest. I'll be checking in on you later ok?"
"Un."
Mariko left feeling warm inside. Rena was a really nice girl. It's hard to believe that girl holds a psychotic side inside that frail body of hers. The final stop was Sayaka. Mariko hadn't talked to Sayaka in a long time. She walked in and found her with Sae. It looked like they were trying doing some sort of test seeing how Sae was hooked up to a brain wave scanner.
"Oh sorry am I interuptting?" Mariko asked.
"Oh no you're fine. We're just about done." Sayaka said as she took off the head gear on Sae.
"HIIIIIIIIIIIIIII MARIKO!" Sae shouted as she twitched.
"Sae inside voice please!" Sayaka said hitting her head.
"Hi Sae. How are you?" Mariko said.
"Good good good! Sayaka was doing some weird brain scan thingy on my head." Sae said.
"I'm checking for abnormalities but there are probably a ton in that head of yours." Sayaka said.
"Hey!"
"Anyways, I heard what happened between you and Mayuyu. You alright?"
"Yeah. No injuries suprisingly." Mariko said.
"That's good to hear. I would've come down to help but Sae got a little out of control." Sayaka said glaring at Sae.
"I found a book and tried eating it!" Sae said with that genking smile of hers.
"Books are not meant to be eaten."
"But it had a picture of chicken on it so I had to take a bite." Sae protested.
"It wasn't even a book about food! It was a farm animal book for little kids." Sayaka said trying to make Sae understand.
"Still, it looked good."
"Uhh you're useless."
Mariko couldn't help but laugh at the two arguing. They were fighting like a mother and child.
"Hey Mairko before you leave. Can you hand me Sae's medicine. It's sitting on my desk in a orange container."
"Sure."
Mariko walked over to her desk and found two orange containers. She didn't know which one was Sae's so she just randomly grabbed one.
"Here." Mariko said handing Sayaka the container.
"Thanks." Sayaka said.
Mairko left and on the way out, she found Miichan walking down the hall.
"Oi Gachapin!" Mariko said.
"Stop calling me that" Miichan said.
"I can't help it. You look like one so therefore I dub you Gachapin."
"It's not funny."
"I could give you something different. Like human shield."
"What?"
Just then, another nurse tripped and dropped her tea. Mariko quickly grabbed Miichan and placed her in font and the tea splashed all over Miichan.
"Hey!"
"Well it's either human shield or Gachapin. Your choice." Mariko said with an evil smile.
"Mou fine! You can call me Gachapin." Miichan said as she began dabbing out the tea on her nurse outfit.
"Man everything is so boring!" Mariko said stretching across the desk.
"Why don't you go check on your patients." Miichan asked.
"I did. They're all fine... Sadly."
"You really are a sadist."
"Shut it Gachapin."
But then there was a loud crash followed by laughter. Then Sae came bolting down the hall laughing like she always did. Soon after, Sayaka ran past. But then she stopped and ran back over to Mariko.
"You idiot!" she said.
"What?" Mariko said.
"You gave Sae the wrong pills. You gave her sugar pills that were meant for a different patient of mine. She ate five of them!!"
"Oops sorry. Guess you'll have to go after her."
Sayaka was about to say something when there was more screaming down the hall.
"Sae stop trying to eat the nurse!" Sayaka said as she ran off.
Then running in the opposite direction, Haruna was running down with Yuko right behind her.
"Ahhh I can't do it! I just can't!" Haruna shouted.
"Come on Nyannyan! I'll go nice and slow like they do in those dramas!" Yuko shouted back.
"That's only in the perverted dramas you pervert!"
The two ran down the hall like a cat and mouse. Then Takamina came from behind screaming.
"Ahhhhh! Acchan calm down!" Takamina said.
"You locked me in a room with my arms tied!" Acchan screamed as she ran after the midget.
"Acchan I'm sorry!"
"You're gonna be sorry!"
The two ran past Mariko and then out of nowhere, Jurina and Mayuyu came rolling out into the hall. They were on the ground punching and kicking each other.
"Give me back my manga!" Jurina said punching Mayuyu.
"Never!" Mayuyu said kicking Jurina said.
Mariko stood there staring at all the craziness around her. Then Miichan tapped her on the shoulder.
"Aren't you going to do something about this?" she asked.
Mariko sighed and then said,
"I guess so."
As much as Mariko hated it, she did have a job to do. But she was glad that things were back to normal. Back to it's normal mad self.
THE END ..........
Or is it?
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I'm not sure if I should stop here or keep going. Tell me what you think whether or not I should continue or stop? It's up to you!
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OMG, continue, PLEASE :bow: :bow: :bow:
This was so hilarious!!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
I can't comment more, I find no words to describe this madness, but oc, I liked Yuko-sama here the most :wub: :wub: :wub:
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Seriously Jurina, Tokyo Mew Mew?? :rofl:
Finally Yukirin and Mayuyu make their appearance in this story! And I love their characters :heart: Yukirin is so "invisible" and cold like Black. Her charge is really easy to handle compared to Mariko and Sayaka's. My MaYuki senses tell me that she secretly enjoys watching Mayuyu read manga :wub: Looking forward to more MaYuki interactions!
Jurina and Mayuyu having regular battles makes the Mad House an even more awesome place! :rock: :grin:
And Takamina, you are not helping Acchan's condition :doh:
Anyway, I want to say I really love this story and your updating speed amazes me! Keep rocking the Mad House! XD
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I'm seriously happy with this fic. :thumbsup
Happy because the setting is kind of extreme for my tastes, but never thought I would enjoy a lot 'being' in a mental facility. :rofl:
And happy because it's Mariko-centric, although it's quite odd when seeing Mariko more as the rookie. Moreover, to Takamina? :lol:
This chapter 6, I guess this also proves that Mariko is a masochist.
She likes messing with the patients, yet in the same time she felt bored that her patients not (initiatively) messing with her. Isn't it like her wanting people to bring her 'trouble'? :lol:
And I would be glad to wait for more exploration of her and her nurse's relationship. I bet this two only can also ignite some madness, even escalate it to some degree. :lol:
One more, I'm happy because you update so rapidly too! Excellent! :thumbsup
I'm not sure if I should stop here or keep going. Tell me what you think whether or not I should continue or stop? It's up to you!
Judging from our comments here, I think it's safe to say that we'll be super disappointed if you end this faster than when it's supposed to end. :yep:
Update faster.. yes, end faster.. no! :lol: (unless a serious restraint comes over you and forces you to stop)
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OMG!! atsumina!! your are amazing... haruna let yuko make her move.. :D dont be afraid..
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THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!!
YUKO SO PERVERT!!! SAE IS SO GENKING LOL SUGAR PILLS. Mariko is so sadist...
ACCHAN IS SO CUUUUUUTE!!! MAYU IS SO FUNNY LOL!!!! Otaku powarrrrr!!.
But I wish Gekikara came out more often to add to the lulz.
Nice and slow LOL!!! This fic is just cuteness overload!!!
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AWSOME FIC~!! :thumbup :thumbup
madness overload, hilarious overload :rofl: :rofl:
You should continue it :yep: :yep: :yep:
I'd like to see another update from you :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Don't you dare to stop this fic!! :twisted:
we love it ya know!
esp me!!
i know taka won't resist acchan.. she would release her in about 7 minutes lololol.. :lol:
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I just got up from bed and 1 new chapters. :jphip:
Mayuyu reeally is crazy. I think she is the craziest in there.
MORE ATSUMINA! I wonder what is Acchan going to do to Takamina for locking her up with her hands TIRD UP?! :D
"Sae, stop trying to eat the nurse" I laughed so hard.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :thumbup
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dont stop this!!! :farofflook: :farofflook:
ur fic is really good!!!omg!
plss continue this!!!
and thanks for the update!!!
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Minna! I just wanted to say thank you for all your support and so therefore, I have decided to continue the Mad House series! And as a special present for everyone, I've come up with something great! It's a battel of epic proportions! I present to you, the double team battle between MAYUKI and WMASTUI! With guest star, GEKIKARA! Please enjoy and once again, THANK YOU so much for your support! You guys are the best!
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WARNING: Contains violent and diisturbing scenes. Is not reccommended for those with a weak stomach. You have been warned. Please enjoy.
Chapter 7
Mariko was going through her daily rounds when there was a loud crash and banging coming from the lunch room. Mairko ran down there only to find everything a mess and people knocked back. She also saw Yukirin and Mayuyu arguing with Rena and Jurina.
"Tell your little rat friend that I want her to apologize for what she said about my sister!" Jurina shouted.
"Not until you apologize fo spilling juice on my manga!" Mayuyu shouted back.
"I did!"
"Yeah but you didn't mean it."
"Both of you please try to calm down." Yukirin said trying to break the two up.
"Shut up! All you do is follow your rat around like a pet. You're lower than a rat. How sad." Jurina hissed.
"What was that?" Yukirin's expression changed. She was done using the nice technique and was now ready to use force.
"You apologize right now!" Mayuyu demanded.
"You first!!" Jurina demanded back.
"Fine! You leave me no choice."
Mariko didn't know what she meant but I guess she was about to find out. Mayuyu reached into her pocket and pulled out a night stick that police use to beat prisoners with. Mariko wondered if Mayuyu's was electrically charged. Mayuyu wasn't the only one with a weapon. Jurina reached into her pocket and pulled out two hunting knives. They both looked like they were ready to battle. At first, no one made the first move. But then Jurina decided to attack first. She jumped onto a table and then dove to Mayuyu. She managed to knock Mayuyu down but when she tried to stab her, Mayuyu was quick enough to defend herself and blocked her attack with night stick. Then she threw Jurina off sending her flying across the room. The entire time Mariko was watching the battle, she wondered where Rena was. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Rena hiding under one of the tables. Mariko crawled over to Rena and took her somewhere safer.
"What happened?" Mariko asked.
"Jurina spilled juice on Mayuyu's manga. So then Mayuyu said mean things about me and it angered Jurina. Now they're fighting like this." Rena said.
"Can't you stop them?"
"No. When Jurina gets mad, trying to stop her is only going to make things worse. That's why it's best to sit and watch."
"Good point."
After watching the two fight, Mariko decided not to get involved. Besides, she didn't have a weapon either. Mariko watched in amaze as Jurina managed to cut Mayuyu's arm but Mayuyu whacked Jurina in the side and zapped her. During the struggle, the two ended up rolling out into the hall.
"You wait here." Mariko told Rena.
"Go over by Takamina and stay there. Got it?"
Rena just nodded her head.
"Good. Now go!"
The two split up and Mariko ran down the hall only to find Jurina and Mayuyu still figthing. Mariko noticed one of Jurina's knives deeply embedded in Mayuyu's leg. Jurina's right arm also didn't look right as it hung limply on her side. The two were still fighting despite their injuries. It was like watching a war movie. Mayuyu charged at Jurina who managed to defend herself with her one good arm. Then she knocked Mayuyu back and managed to get on top of her. Jurina was going to make the final move when Yukirin came up from behind and whacked Jurina with a chair. Then she pulled out a stun gun and zapped Jurina right in the neck rendering her unconsious. Jurina fell to the ground out like a light. As Yukirin helped Mayuyu up Mariko heard a loud crack. Mariko recgonized that crack. It was the sound of a beast awakening.
"Rena!" Mariko shouted.
Mariko looked over only to find Rena with that wicked look on her face again. Rena snapped her neck a couple of times before finally adjusting. Then she got a disturbing smile on her face and started biting her nails. She walked over to Mayuyu and Yukirin who didn't even notice her. Before they could do anything, Rena punched Yukirin sending her flying. Then she grabbed Mayuyu by the neck and pushed her against the wall. Rena laughed with that same giggle she got when she was like this.
"Hey.... you mad?" she said as she tightened her grip.
"I'm going to make you suffer." Rena said.
Rena reached down and grabbed the knife in Mayuyu's leg. Then she pushed it in deeper and started twisting it while it was still in her leg. Mayuyu screamed in pain as the disturbed girl laughed. Rena pulled the knife out and licked the blood off the blade. Then she held it close to Mayuyu's face waving it back and forth.
"Hey what should I do first?' she asked.
"Should I cut off your hands so you can't hold a manga or gouge your eyes out so you can't read? Ha ha ha I'm going to destroy you!"
"Screw you... you nut job." Mayuyu said.
"Oh. Still got fight in you I see? Well then..."
Rena threw Mayuyu onto the ground and got on top of her.
"Let's have some fun then shall we?"
Rena held down one of Mayuyu's arms and then stabbed her right hand. Then she started twisting it only making a bigger hole in Mayuyu. Mayuyu screamed in pain as blood dripped on the floor. But Rena wasn't done yet. She took the other arm and bent it so far until you heard a loud snap. Mayuyu was now sobbing from the pain she was experiencing. She probably thought she was going to die. Rena then started throwing punches at Mayuyu's face pounding it with brute force staining her hands with blood. She continued like this for about five minutes but then Yukirin woke up and saw Rena. She quickly ran over and shocked Rena too in the neck. Only, Rena didn't go out like Jurina. No instead, she just laughed and knocked Yukirin back again.
"Hey... that tickled." Rena said as she started laughing again.
Mayuyu was going to say someting but Rena quickly shut her up with another punch to the face. Rena got up and walked over to Yukirin who was slowly starting to get up. Rena charged at Yukirin and tired punching her only to miss and leave a large indent in the wall. During that time, Yukirin pulled out a syringe and stabbed it into Rena's arm. She injected whatever was in it into Rena. Mariko guessed it was sedatives and thought the fight was going to end here. But she was wrong.
"Hey what do you think you're doing?" Rena said as she pulled the syringe out.
"What is this stuff? I feel tingly. Ha ha ha!"
Not even sedatives could bring Rena down. She was really mad. Rena kicked Yukirin in the stomach causing her to throw up whatever she ate for lunch.
"Oh look. It looks like you had Ramen today." Rena said as she studied the substance.
Rena grabbed Yukirin by her hair and faced her towards the vomit. Then she shoved Yukirin's face into it and moved her head around. She started laughing again and said,
"Eat up! That food is still good. You don't want to waste it. I want to see every scrap gone."
Mariko thought she was going to hurl herself after seeing a scene like that. Then Rena picked Yukirin up by her hair and slammed her head into the wall. She kept slamming Yukirin's head until there was blood on the wall. To make things worse, she dragged Yukirin's face across the wall making a line of blood. When Rena was done, she dropped Yukirin and walked back over to Mayuyu. She knelt down and said,
"I'm not done with you yet."
Then she dragged Mayuyu towards the stair case leaving Mariko behind. Once she was gone, Mariko called over Sayaka who happened to be near by.
"What happened?" Sayaka asked.
"Rena went mad. She's got Mayuyu and it looked like they were heading up to the roof." Mariko said.
"Not good. You go after Rena and I'll stay and treat Yukirin's injuries."
"Ok."
Although, Mariko wondered why she had to go and face the psyco. When she got to the roof, she found Rena holding Mayuyu over the edge of the building.
"Rena stop!" Mariko shouted as she began running over to her.
"She deserves to die!" Rena said as she began to strangle Mayuyu.
"Stop it Rena. Get a hold of yourself!"
Even though she said that, she knew Rena was far from coming back to her old self. Mariko didn't know what she was going to do. But then something ran past her and up to Rena. It grabbed her from behind and pulled her and Mayuyu back onto the roof. It was Jurina who was now holding her sister tightly.
"Rena that's enough!" You've already done enough." Jurina said with tears flowing down her eyes.
"Jurina?" Rena said still trying to figure out what happened.
"You've done a good job protecting me. Now take a rest ok?"
"Juri..na..."
Just then Rena grabbed her head and started shaking. She was screaming until everything went silent and Rena fell silently into Jurina's arms. As the two sat there, the door swung open and Yukirin came rushing in with blood still on her face.
"Mayuyu!" she said.
She rushed over to her and started craddling her head. The battle was over with both sides suffering great injuries. Mariko was just glad that it was finally all over.
After the battle was over and everything was cleaned up, Mariko walked down to the intensive care unit where Mayuyu was. She didn't walk in but saw through a window Mayuyu on a bed unconsious and covered in bandages. Yukirin was right by her side holding her hand and softly singing a lullaby. Her head was also wrapped in a bandage but not as much as Mayuyu was. Mariko walked down to Rena and Jurina's room and found Rena in the bed again. There were restraints all over her body plus chains wrapped around the whole thing. Jurina was sitting in a chair next to Rena wrapped in a straight jacket.
"Hey." Mariko said.
"Hey." Jurina replied.
"How is she?"
"She'll be alright. Sayaka said it was a good thing I stopped her when I did. Otherwise Mayuyu could've died."
"I thought she was going to die seeing her hang Mayuyu over the edge."
"My sister is really scary isn't she?" Jurina said.
"Yeah. She is..." Mariko said.
"But she's only scary when you're in danger. She acted that way because she wanted to protect you."
"Yeah I know. It just scares me. When Rena gets like that, she's almost unstoppable."
"That's for sure. She got tazed and sedated and that still didn't stop her."
"Yeah. Rena was never really good with pain."
"I see. Well I'm just glad everyone is safe and no one got killed." Mairko said.
"Me too. Even though I was kind of hoping someone would." Jurina said.
"Hey you watch it. Otherwise I'll be the one to kill you."
"Haha you wish. Baba."
"Hey I'm only 24!"
"Baba!"
The two laughed as they sat there enjoying themselves. Then Mairko thought,
"She really is a nice girl."
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Well there's chapter 7! I hope you enjoyed it! I'm sorry if this chapter disturbed anyone. But when you're dealing with Gekikara, there's bound to be something scary. Anyways, I hope you all like it and tell me what you think!
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I'm glad you decided to continue this fic. I really really relly love it! :heart:
Mariko. Baba. :D:D
Waiting for the next chapter! :deco:
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Somehow it's quite disturbing for me.. the part making hole thing.. :lol: but yeah.. when it involved Gekikara, there's bound to be something scary.. so true.. :nervous
can you please update on AtsuMina.. :bow: :bow: I wanna know if Takamina and Acchan are actually more that just doctor-patient relationship..
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Last thought:
Could it be Mariko is the one who's really crazy? Maybe she's the real patient here? And maybe all of this just happened in her imagination only?
Maybe none of these were real....:lol:
Come to think of it.. this might be true.. This is one mad fic after all.. :twothumbs there's a possibility for a mad twist in it.. :lol: :lol:
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My sister is really scary isn't she?" Jurina
YES SHE IS JURI!!
btw.. i wanna know what happen to atsumina please...make some of them tooo :jphip:
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that fighting scene was AWESOME :on GJ:
mayuyu...that's what you get if you messing around with rena,you bring her beastly alter ego -gekikara- out and you got pawned :kekeke:
rena goes on rampage and owning... :cool1:
once again this chapter is AWESOME :on GJ:
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YES YESSS GEKIKARA POWARRRRRRRRR.
Mayu should use some magic power/chakra/spirit etc from mangas to see if it works LOL
And how can mental hospitals allow their patients to carry knives LOL
THIS IS SO FUNNEH
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Geki!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
OMG, EPIC FIGHT!!! Sory anzai-san, but I'm glad she beaten Mayu and not the other way around :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
Yes, I indeed also think Mariko is one crazy here :rofl: :rofl:
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Chapter 5
Tokyo Mew Mew!!?? Jurinaa!! :hiakhiakhiak:
aaa Thank you miyumi-san for adding mayuki :hee:
:cool1: yeeeii Jurina wins :onioncheer:
Chapter 6
Rena is so cute when she is calm :nya:
Atsumina has always the first step I'm looking farward for Mayuki's interactions more than others :luvluv2:
Chapter 7
First thank you that you decided to continue this fanfic :farofflook: I really love it! :shy2:
as always Gekikara is always scary :badluck:
I was worried about Mayu :fainted:
Mariko "baba" and from Jurina :on lol:
please cantinue :on gay:
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so hilarious..so much madness!
LOL..continue pliz..
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OMG!! Rena is so scary when she is mad :mon scare:
Never mess with matsui sisters :mon lurk:
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Wow...the fight scene is very scary...but totally awesome
Rena is very super scary...
Who could Mayu survive with all the stabbing
PLEASE CONTINUED UPDATING THE NEXT CHAPTER
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This chapter goes out to all the Atsumina, Kojiyuu, and Mayuki fans. Please enjoy and now, let the love quarrel begin!
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Chapter 8
Mariko was heading down to the lunch room when someone stopped her from behind. She turned around and saw Takamina and Yuko staring at her teary eyed. She was suprised at how they were almost the exact same height.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"We need your help!" Yuko said.
"What?"
"Haruna and Acchan have been spending more time together and have been completely ignoring us!" Takamina said.
"Why?"
"Well Acchan is still mad about me putting her in a straight jacket and locking her in the time out room."
"Did you apologize?"
"Yeah! I even tried giving her the strawberry milk she likes but she still rejected me." Takamina was ready to start crying.
"Alright calm down. Yuko what's your problem?" Mariko asked.
"Acchan won't let me go near Nyannyan and now I can't see her! I miss her so much!" Yuko said.
They both started to cry in each other arms. Mariko thought they reminded her of drunk men who lost their wives.
"Alright quit crying. I'll go talk to them." Mariko said.
"Thank you!" both Takamina and Yuko jumped on Mariko almost making her fall over.
Mariko walked to Haruna's room where the two girls were. She walked in and found Acchan doing Haruna's nails.
"Hey." Mariko said.
"Hi Mariko." Haruna said.
"Hi." Acchan said.
"So Acchan I heard you dumped Takamina. What's up with that?"
"This is punishment. She locked me in a room and put me in restraints."
"She only did it because you were getting out of control."
"What was that?" Acchan shot Mariko and evil glare.
"Nothing. Haruna don't you miss Yuko?" Mariko asked.
"A little. But it's a lot more peaceful not having her constantly bugging me." Haruna said.
"Yuko is a mess without you. She's out side crying her eyes out with Takamina."
"Really?"
"See for yourself." Mariko said pointing out the window.
The two looked out the window on the door and saw Takamina and Yuko hugging each other while still crying and occasionally shouting their partner's names.
"Losers." Acchan said.
"They're weird." Haruna said.
The two went back to their regular activity. Seeing how she wasn't going to get anywhere by talking, Mariko decided to use a differnet approach.
"Hey Acchan."
"Yeah?"
"You got any rope?"
"Yeah. Why?"
"I got an idea."
A couple minutes later, Mariko had dragged Yuko and Takamina into a room and tied them to chairs using the rope Acchan gave her.
"Hey what's going on?" Yuko questioned.
"What's the meaning of this?" Takamina asked.
"Time for some marrige counsaling." Mariko said.
"Girls!"
Haruna and Acchan walked in and sat in the chair across the two who were bound.
"Acchan!" Takamina said as she tried to get out of the ropes.
"Nyannyan!" Yuko said as she started to squirm.
"Both of you settle down. We're going to talk everything through and hopefully conclude to a fair understanding." Mariko said.
"What?" Yuko said looking confused.
"We're gonna talk and then make everything better." Mariko said.
"Ohh ok!!"
Mariko wondered if the girl had the brain of a squirrel as well.
"Good. Well then first will start with Haruna. Haruna please tell Yuko what you don't like about Yuko."
Haruna paused and thought about it for a while. Then she started to speak,
"Well she's always clinging herself onto me and always chasing me trying to kiss me."
"That's because I love you!"
"Shhh! Let her speak and then it'll be your turn." Mariko said.
"Thank you. Anyways, I don't like it when you come out of nowhere and try to groupe me. It's weird and perverted and I don't like it at all. Ok I'm done."
"Alright now Yuko, what do you not like about Haruna?"
"NOTHING! There is nothing I don't like about Haruna." the squirrel girl said.
"Alright. Now Haruna tell me what you like about Yuko." Mariko said.
"Well I guess I like her smile. And some of the faces she makes are really funny. Oh and she always manages to make me smile whenever I'm sad." Haruna said.
"Very good. Now Yuko your turn."
"I like EVERYTHING about Haruna. Her hair, her eyes, eye legs, her lips, her nose, her smile, her boobs-"
"Ok that's enough. Now Haruna, could you please tell Yuko what she could do to let you feel more comfortable around her."
"Well if she stopped popping out of nowhere and the kissing and grouping then I think I could adjust." Haruna said.
"Really?!" Yuko said with her eyes practically sparkling.
"Yeah."
"Ok. Then Yuko do you think you could do these things?" Mariko asked.
"YES!"
"Alright. Then I'm going to untie you. But if you do anything that upsets Haruna, I'm tying you back up."
"Ok!"
Mairko untied Yuko and she immediately ran over and jumped on Haruna's lap. She hugged her and clung to her like a cat.
"Nyannyan! I love you sooo much!" she said.
"I... love you too Yuko." Haruna said blushing.
"HOORAY!" Yuko said as she continued to hug the girl.
"Alright next is Takamina and Acchan." Mariko said.
"Acchan. Tell Takamina what you don't like about Takamina."
"I don't like her being short or her boring stories. She's mean to me when I'm just trying to get what I want and won't listen." Acchan said.
"Ok thank you. Now Takamina it's you're turn."
"I don't like how you act like a spoiled brat." Takamina said in a nasty tone.
"What'd you say you midget?" Acchan stood up.
"Hey calm down. We're only talking, no fists." Mariko said pushing Acchan back in her chair.
"Now Acchan what do you like about Takamina?"
"Well I like how she treats me like a princess and a sister." Acchan said blushing.
"Good. Now Takamina."
"I like how she's always there for me when I'm lonely." Takamina said doing the same thing as Acchan.
"Alright now Acchan tell Takamina what she could do to make you feel more comfortable." Mariko said.
"Well just be nicer to me. You're so mean when you get angry." Acchan said.
"Ok and Takamina."
"Could you please try to be a little nicer to me too? It's kinda mean when you call me a midget." Takamina said.
"Deal."
"Alright then I'll untie you."
Mariko untied Takamina and the two embraced like lost lovers reuniteing that you see in movies. Everything was now better. Haruana has learned to accept Yuko and Yuko not to be super pervy. Acchan and Takamina both learned to be nicer to each other and now everything was peaceful. Mariko left the two couples to let them adjust. She felt pretty good knowing things will be a little easier now. Mariko was walking down the hall when she ran into Yukirin.
"Oh sorry Yukirin I didn't-"
Mariko froze at the sight of Yukirin. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. Standing before her was the yellow ranger from the show "Power Rangers." Yukirin had the whole costume and everything. All she was missing was the head piece. Yukirin saw Mariko staring at her and began blushing.
"Yellow Ranger!"
Runing down the hall was the pink ranger. She ran over to Yukirin and took off her helmet. Suprise, suprise, it was Mayuyu.
"What are you doing? You forgot your helmet." Mayuyu said as she put the yellow ranger helmet on Yukirin.
She just noticed Mariko staring at the two.
"What? We're cosplaying as the Pink and Yellow Ranger. Got a problem?"
"Uhh no." Mariko said.
"Um Mayuyu maybe we should stop. This is embarrassing." Yukirin said.
"No way! We still need to defeat the villians." a light bulb popped into Mayuyu's head just now. She looked over at Mariko and gave her a devilish smile.
"Hey Mariko go get your nurse. I need you guys to do something for me."
"What is it?"
"Just do it. I'll explain later."
Mariko had no idea what the Cyborg was planning. But then ten minutes later, she finally figured it out.
"Man why do I have to be the side kick!" Miichan said as she came out in a bug costume.
"Because you're shorter. The side kicks are always shorter. Plus there was no way I was going to be whatever that is you're wearing."
"It's a fly!" Mayuyu said as she came down carrying a pink gun.
"And you need to put on your goggles Fly Queen."
"But I can't see anything!"
"Do it!"
"Fine!"
Mariko put the goggles on that were supposed to replicate the eyes of a fly. But it only made her vision worse.
"Alright now when Yukirin and I come in, you guys just say the lines we gave you. Ready go!"
Yukirin and Mayuyu came in their Pink and Yellow ranger outfits.
"Halt evil doer!" Mayuyu said.
"Release that cat!" Yukirin said reffering to Jurina who was forced into this and was now tied to a chair wearing cat ears.
"Never!" Mariko said giving an evil laugh.
"Fly girl attack!"
"Yes my queen!" Miichan said as she charged at the two Rangers.
"Yellow use your Thunder Sword!" Mayuyu said.
Yukirin pulled out a fake sword and struck Miichan down by hitting her in the head.
"Ahhh I'm dead!" Miichan said falling to the ground.
"Curse you Yellow! Well let's see how you handle this!" Mairko said as she pulled out water ballons that were supposed to be acid bombs.
"Take this!" Mariko threw one at Yukirin and it hit her right in the chest.
"Ahh I'm hurt!" Yukirin said falling down.
"Yellow!" Mayuyu ran over to her side.
"Yelow stay with me!"
"Pink forget me. You must defeat the queen." Yukirin said in a dying voice.
"No! Not without you!"
"Do it for me... Do it for justice." then Yukirin pretended to die.
"YELLOW!"
"Ha ha ha! Looks like you're all alone!" Mairko said.
"You'll pay for that Fly Queen!"
"Bring it on!"
"Time to use my secret weapon!"
"Secret weapon?" Mariko thought. Mayuyu never mention a secret weapon.
Mayuyu walked over to the side and pulled out what looked like a small pink bazooka.
"Pink Ranger's secret weapon! Lovely Pink Cutie Bazooka! Prepare to die!"
Mariko shot off the bazooka and something went flying straight at Mariko. Luckily, Mariko moved out of the way before it could hit. There was a loud crash followed by a cloud of ash. When it cleared up, Mariko saw a huge hole in the wall where the bazooka had fired.
"What the heck is that thing?" Mariko asked.
"A bean bag shooter. They use it in riot control. I got this one online so I just painted it pink and now it's my Lovely Pink Cutie Bazooka." Mayuyu said.
"That thing could seriously hurt someone!"
"Yeah I know which is why I had you play the villan and not Yukirin."
"I'm sorry Shinoda-san!" Yukirin said.
"Hey you're supposed to be dead!" Mayuyu shouted.
Yukirin died once more.
"Anyways, I would suggest you start running. I still have five shots left."
"You gotta be kidding me!"
Mariko started running like crazy as the pink otaku chased after her with the bazooka. As she was running, Mariko thought,
"Man what is wrong with this otaku?!"
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Well there's chapter 8. Please tell me what you think! I tried my best into putting what everyone wanted so I hope I've made you all happy with the results. Thank you for reading and be expecting the next chapter very soon!
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drunk men who lost their wives
"Losers." Acchan said.
"They're weird." Haruna said.
I really laugh at this!!
yukirin and mayu being power rangers! your good miyumi san!
I love my atsumina here..thank you!!! make more of them :*
butterflies on my stomach
Thank you for updating fast!! I'm really looking forward on this fic :jphip:
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I'm laughing so hard at the power rangers part.. :rofl: :rofl: mariko even take part in it.. :lol: :lol:
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<facepalmed> what the hell is this Power Rangers thingy? XD I'm echoing Flean-san's laugh.. :rofl: :rofl:
but damn that bazooka, it's the real deal! :lol:
I've just thought about it, how could real weapons get any access to the facility?
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I wonder where Mayuyu got all those things :lol: :lol: looks like she has many secret weapons :lol: :lol:
My tears come out a bit while reading the power rangers part, it was sooo :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Poor Takamina and Yuko crying for their waifu~ but at least they get their waifu back~ XD XD
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I've been getting a lot of questions lately on how do the patients manage to get such dangerous weapons into the facility. So, I will let the patients answer your question with their own story. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 9
A couple days after the Power Ranger battle, Mariko started to wonder how everyone was smuggling in such dangerous weapons. This was a facility with security guards and cameras so everything should be pretty tight right? But yet somehow people manage to smuggle in dangerous weapons like knives and bazookas. Mariko decided to look into the subject and find out what was the cause of the weapon smuggling. Mariko first suspected Mayuyu had something to do with it. She mentioned that she ahd ordered her bazooka online so that must mean she orders weapons for other patients to right? Mariko walked into Mayuyu's room and found her on the bed reading manga again.
"What do you want?" she asked.
"I wanted to know how everyone somehow gets weapons into the facility." Mariko said.
"What does it have to do with me?"
"Well, you said that you had ordered your bazooka online. So I thought that you ordered weapons for everyone else too."
"Nope."
"You're lying."
"Here look at this."
Mayuyu walked over to her computer and pulled up a website called "weaponshere.org" It was a website where you could order all kinds of weapons from guns to swords and even bombs. To the side, there was the name Mimi written in red curseive.
"Who's Mimi?" Mariko asked.
"That's the owner of the website. They're the ones who deliver the weapons to me.This is where I get my weapons and sometimes my cosplay costumes. I own the cosplay cutie weapon's pack."
Mayuyu showed Mariko the weapons that she had ordered that came with the pack. There were a lot of guns.
"Where do you hide all of them?" Mariko asked.
"I hide them. But I'm not going to tell you. I only use them for emergencies." Mayuyu said.
"Ok... So is this how everyone get's there weapons. By having you order them for you and then they pay you?"
"What do I look like? A black market?" I only order weapons for myself. Although that's not a bad idea."
"Forget it. Anyways, thanks for telling me this. Don't worry I won't tell anyone as long as you don't try to kill me next time."
"No promises there." Mayuyu said as she continued to read her manga.
Mariko left the room fearing if she stayed any longer then something bad would happen. The next stop was Jurina's room. Mariko remembered Jurina had two hunting knives that she once saw on a TV program. She walked in and found Jurina on the bed and Rena was nowhere to be found.
"Where's Rena?" Mariko asked.
"She's getting certain tests done. The heads want to make sure she doesn't act out like she did before." Jurina said.
"I see. Well I wanted to ask you something."
"What is it?"
"Where did you get those knives that you used when you fought Mayuyu?"
"Why? I'm not going to tell you." Jurina hissed.
"Come on. I want to know. I might want to own a pair myself." Mariko lied.
"Well, as long as you don't tell anyone. Wait a minute."
Jurina walked over to her desk and pulled out a white sheet of paper.
"Here."
She handed it to Mariko and began to read it.
"This is Mimi. Please fill what you would like and I will see if I have it in stock."
"Who is Mimi?" Mariko asked.
"My supplier. Everytime I need new weapons, I fill out that sheet and slide it outside the door at exactly midnight every Sunday. Then the next day, I'll find a package with my name on it and inside are the weapons I requested." Jurina said.
"And you get them for free?"
"Yep. This Mimi person doesn't charge me anything. They only ask that I not meet them in person and keep ordering from them. Last week they gave me a great deal with the samurai warrior pack. I've got like three katanas stashed in this room."
"I don't want to know. Anyways, thanks for letting me know. Do you know anyone who might know who this Mimi person is?" Mariko asked.
"Umm no one I can think of. But whoever it is, it's someone with access to the outside world which could be any of the staff here."
"I see. Thanks for the tip."
"Let me know if you find out who it is. I would really like to meet Mimi and thank him or her in person." Jurina said.
"I'll do that."
Mariko walked out of the room with a lot of questions in her mind. Who is Mimi? Why do they only come in on midnight and on Sundays? If it's someone who works in the facility then it's probably someone who has the night shift since they come late. Mariko walked over to the bulliten board where all the doctors and nurses write in their hours. The only ones that had night shift were Sayaka and Takamina. So it was one of those two who was behind the whole master plan. Today was Sunday so it was time for Mariko to become a detective and investigate. She first decided to search Takamina's desk for any clues. When the small midget left, Mariko slipped in before the door completely shut.
"Gotta find some kind of clue." Mariko thought.
She began searching the desk. Nothing looked out of the ordinary. When she looked through the shelves the only thing she found odd was a scrap book full of pictures of her and Acchan. Mariko was pretty mortifyed seeing the picture of Takamina and Acchan at some Chirstmas party. Takamina was in a reindeer outfit and Acchan was in a santa suit. She didn't want to know what they were doing. Mariko kept searching and still found nothing.
"Well it looks like there was nothing here." Mariko thought.
But then, Mariko saw a small black folder under the desk. Mariko pulled it out and on the cover it said, request forms.
"Is this it?"
Mariko looked through the folder and was only disappointed. These request forms were forms Acchan filled out saying what she wanted from Takamina. One of them said a whip, hand cuffs, a ball gag and a latex suit. Mariko didn't want to know what Acchan and Takamina were doing when she wasn't around. Just then, Mariko could hear Takamina coming back. She quickly put the folder back and left before Takamina came in. Now Mariko knew that there was no way Takamina was the culprit. Which only means one other person. Sayaka. Mariko walked to Sayaka's office and found her reading some papers. She had to get out if she was going to look around.
"Hey Sayaka." Mariko said.
"Oh hello Mariko." Sayaka said.
"Hey I'm not sure if you knew this, but I saw Sae running down the hall wearing something on her head. It looked like her under wear."
"Ah jeez! I told her to quit doing that."
Sayaka got up and rushed out of the room leaving Mariko to do what she pleased. Mariko started to look around and found nothing wrong. But all the drawers in her desk were locked which made her seem very suspiscious of Sayaka. Mariko has found the culprit and now all she has to do is catch Sayaka in the act.
Later on that day, Mariko pretended to leave but actually snuck back inside using the back door. She hid in a janitors closet and pulled out a lap top. Then she opened up three screens that showed three live footages of different halls in the building. She got the cameras from Mayuyu who happily gave them up in exchange of a Sailor Moon magic wand that Mariko used to play with when she was little. It was eleven o clock which means an hour till show time. Mariko sat there and waited until it was time. Then when the clock on her phone stroke twelve, it was time to catch a culprit.
"Let's see what we can find." Mariko said.
At first there was nothing. But then, in the third camerea, a dark figure appeared in the hall. Looking at the footage, Mariko thought the figure looked too short to be Sayaka but too tall to be Takamina. The culprit was someone else. Mariko quickly ran down to the hall where she saw the figure. When she got there, there was no one to be found. It was dark so she couldn't see anything but Mariko could feel like someone was there. Some one was watching her waiting to attack.
"Show yourself!" Mariko shouted.
Mariko's heart was racing. She wasn't sure if it was due to fear or excitement but it felt like her heart was about to pop out of her chest. Mariko could hear shuffling coming from the darkness around her. Not feeling safe, she pressed herself against the wall and tried feeling for a light switch. She eventually found it and flipped the switch. The lights flickered on and Mariko didn't find anything. But then something tapped her on the shoulder causing Mariko to scream.
"AHHHHH!"
"Ahhhhhh!"
Mairko recgonized that irritating voice. Mariko turned around and saw Miichan staring at her.
"Gachapin?!"
"Hello." Miichan said.
"What are you doing here?" Mariko asked.
"I forgot my cell phone. I was on my way out when I saw you in the halls. What are you doing here?"
"Nothing I forgot someting too. Anyways, don't scare me like that. You almost gave me a heat attack."
"Sorry."
"Well I'm going to leave now. I'm really tired so I'll see you tomorrow ok?"
"Yep!"
"Alright see you later Gachapin!" Mariko said turning to leave.
"Goodbye!" Miichan said.
Miichan waited until she heard the back door open and close indicating Mariko had left. Then, she walked over to a room and stopped in front of the door. Miichan pulled out a small brown box and left it in front of the door. Then she also left a business card that had the name Mimi on it. Once the package was dropped off, Miichan quickly got up and left without leaving a trace. As she walked out into the parking lot Miichan thought,
"It's a good thing Mariko didn't catch me. Otherwise she would've spoiled all the fun."
Miichan smiled with an evil grin and pulled out of the drive way happy as ever knowing she made another successful delivery.
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Well did you get it? Did you figure out who Mimi was? Well if you didn't figure it out, the culprit was Miichan! "Mimi" represents the mi's in "Mi"negishi "Mi"nami. Pretty clever right? Anyways, I hope this answered all your questions about how the patients got dangerous weapons into the facility. I hope you enjoyed this interesting mystery chapter and tell me what you think! Also, the website mentioned was not real. Please do not go to it. It's only a story!
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LOL so it's miichan!!
AtsuMina S&M?!!! The princess is actually so evil!!! Hahaha!!
Mariko and Miichan are alike lol, wanting the patients to get into trouble.
Please make some smexy parts for Mayuki!!!!
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that gachapin really need some 'extra treatment' :on voodoo:
just wait until mariko found out :kekeke:
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Oh, chapter 8 was brilliant, of course, because there was sugary KojiYuu :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
And I laughed so hard at chapter 9 :rofl: :rofl:
your updates are full of win, plz continue :bow: :bow:
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updating this everyday made me happy XD
miichan's new nick- mimi
atsumina having the scrapbook thing :love: so cute
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Everyone! Thank you so much for enjoying my stories. This is chapter 10 and I've decided to make this a 2 part chapter. So the story you are about to read is Chapter 10 part 1 and part 2 wil be on its way. This chapter will have a variety of swim suits and survival skills. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 10 part 1
"Hey Mariko are you excited for tomorrow?" Takamina asked.
"What is it?" Mariko said.
"We're going on a trip tomorrow."
"Really? We're allowed to take trips?"
"Yeah. The director of the facility says that the patients have to go outside and get some fresh air. If we keep them locked up then they'll really go nuts."
"Good point. So where are we going?" Mariko asked.
"The director owns a private island." Takamina said.
"I heard it even has its own hotspring resort!"
"Oh that'll be nice."
"Yep. I just hope I don't lose the stick drawing."
"What?"
"You'll find out when we get there."
All the doctors, nurses, and patients were loaded into a bus and taken to a dock. There they were loaded onto a boat and taken off to the island. When they got there, everyone was taken to a large building. They were immediately greeted by staff and had were led to their rooms. Mariko was sharing a room with Sayaka since Sae was sharing a room with Yukirin and Mayuyu.
"Hey Sayaka is it really ok to be out here? I mean there's more patients than doctors so if anything goes wrong then we'll be out numbered." Mariko said.
"Oh no don't worry. All the staff here are military trained soldiers. They know what to do if things get out of control." Sayaka said.
"Really? That's kind of scary."
"Well safety first."
"You're right."
"Alright lets go meet up everyone else in the lobby. We have something to decide before we go out and have fun." Sayaka said.
Mariko and Sayaka went down to the lobby where all the other doctors were.
"Alright everyone before we head out, we need to decide who is going to stay behind and be the life guard." Sayaka said.
Everyone gathered around Sayaka where she pulled out four sticks.
"Whoever loses has to be the life guard."
Everyone drew a stick and in the end, Mariko lost.
"Great. And I was really wanted to relax." Mariko said.
"Don't worry you'll still get to relax. You'll just be sitting on a chair." Takamina said.
"Great."
Everyone went out to the beach. The weather was beautiful for beach frolicing. Sadly, Mariko could not enjoy it. Mariko was propped up on a chair that was six feet high and was given a pair of binoculars. She also was given a red two piece that said life guard on it. At least she would get a good tan line. Pretty soon the others came out in their swim suits as well. Takamina was wearing a blue two piece that had flowers on the front. Acchan followed after wearing a pink two piece with ruffles on the front and back and sparkles.
"Come one Takamina!" Acchan said.
"I'm coming!" Takamina said dragging thousands of beach toys, floats, and umbrellas.
"Poor Takamina. She's like Acchan's pack muel." Mariko thought.
Soon after, Haruna and Yuko came out. Haruna was wearing a red two piece with a heart on one side of the front and on the back as well. Yuko was following after Haruna in a green two piece with a star pattern on it.
"Nyannyan let's go play in the water!" Yuko said.
"Ok!" Haruna said holding Yuko's hand.
Mariko watched Haruna and Yuko walked closer to the ocean. Haruna backed away everytime a wave got near her trying to avoid the water like a cat.
"Come on Rena."
Coming out form the building was Jurina and Rena. They were wearing matching orange swim suits only one had a lemon on it and the other had a banana.
"Let's get you a floatie and I'll take you out into the water so I can finally teach you how to swim." Jurina said
"Ok. Can it be the blue one with the fish on it?" Rena asked.
"Sure."
Rena was acting like a five year old. But to be honest it was pretty cute.
"Hey you guys give me a hand!"
Mariko looked over and saw Yukirin and Sae dragging Mayuyu along with them. Yukirin was wearing a white two piece with black dots on them while Sae was wearing a yellow two piece that had smily face on the bum area. Mayuyu however was wearing a one piece that you wear during gym class in middle school.
"I don't wanna go! Let me read manga!" Mayuyu said.
"No Mayuyu you're getting some exercise. You're not reading manga and being locked inside all day."
"No!"
"Come on Mayuyu! It'll be fun fun fun! If you don't play with Yukirin then I'll play with her!" Sae said.
"Don't you dare touch her!" Mayuyu said as she stood up.
Everyone was out having fun and Mariko just sat there and watched. She was getting hot though being so high up and close to the sun.
"Hey you thirsty?"
Mariko looked down and saw Sayaka on the ground holding a bottle of water. She was wearing a plain black two piece and to be honest, she looked pretty good in it. Mariko also notcied Sayaka had a six pack. This was the first time Mariko had ever seen them and now this explains why Sayaka was super strong. Mariko came down from her high chair and gladly accepted the water.
"Thanks." Mariko said.
"Turn around so I can put sun screen on your back." Sayaka said holding a bottle of sun screen.
Mariko turned around and Sayaka began appliying the lotion. It felt cold on Mariko skin but also very nice.
"You know you don't have to sit up there all day."
"Seriously?"
"Yeah. As long as you can see everyone then you're fine. Plus I'll be watching everyone too so go out and have fun."
"Alright!"
Mariko and Sayaka walked over to the area Mayuyu and Yukirin were. They were sitting under an umbrella and Mayuyu was reading a manga. Sae, Yuko, Haruna, Jurina and Rena were all in the water.
"Hey guys. What's up?" Sayaka asked.
"I'm trying to get her in the water." Yukirin said.
"I told you I'm not swiming." Mayuyu said.
"Fine then I guess I'll go swim with Sae and the others then."
"I'm coming with you!" Mayuyu got up and followed Yukirin out to the water.
Mariko looked over and saw Takamina and Acchan talking about something. She decided to walk over and see what they were doing.
"Hey Takamina why aren't you getting in the water?" Mariko asked.
"Because I can't swim." Takamina said.
"I offered to help but she wouldn't let me." Acchan said.
"Because you almost drowned me last time!"
"Well how was I supposed you needed air?"
"I was splashing and flailing around for air."
"Still I didn't know."
"Well if it'll help, I can teach you." Mariko said.
"Really?"
"Yeah."
"No fair! Then I want to be taught too. We'll be swim buddies!" Acchan said.
"Alright. Lets go pick out the floaties!"
The two ran off and came back with tube floaties.
"Look we match!" Takamina said showing off her rubber duck floatie. Acchan had the same one only pink.
"What are they? A married couple?" Mariko thought.
"Alright let's get in the water then."
The three girls walked out into the water and joined up with Yuko and Haruna.
"What are you guys doing?" Yuko asked.
"I'm teaching Takamina and Acchan how to swim." Mariko said.
"Oh can you teach us?" Yuko said.
"But don't you know how to swim?"
"No. And Nyannyan can't either right?"
Yuko looked over at Haruna who was staring into space. She must be having a seizure again.
"Hey Nyannyan."
"AHHH!"
Haruna woke up and Yuko startled her making her fall over. Mariko had to qucikly fish her out so she wouldn't drown.
"Uhh maybe Haruna should stay out of this. I don't want her having a seizure while she's under water. Yuko why don't you go over and make a sand castle or something with her." Mairko said.
"Ok! Let's go Nyannyan." Yuko said as she took Haruna back to shore.
"Nice call." Takamina said.
"Yeah. So then let's get started. Takamina give me your hands."
Takamina was about to grab Mariko but then Acchan pushed her out of the way.
"No Takamina is only allowed to grab my hands!" Acchan said.
"Alright then Takamina grabbed Acchan's hand." Mariko said slightly irritated.
Takamina took Acchan's hand.
"Now Takamina I want you to try kicking and Acchan slowly pull Takamina along."
The two did what Mariko told them and so far everything was ok. Then Mariko told Acchan to let go and when she did, Takamina was moving on her own.
"You're doing it Takamina!" Acchan said.
"Hey I am! Thanks Mariko!" Takamina said.
"Don't forget abour me!"
"And you too Acchan."
"Yay!"
"Well I'm going to check on the others. I'll leave you two be." Mariko said.
Mariko left the two love birds to do whatever they wanted. She walked over to Jurina and Rena. Rena was in a tube floatie while Rena was holding onto her.
"How are you two?" Mariko asked.
"Good." Jurina said.
"I'm swimming!" Rena said.
"That's good. I was gonna see if you two needed any help but it looks like you two got it."
Just then there was a scream and splashing. Mariko turned around and saw Yukirin and Mayuyu.
"Mayuyu calm down! There's nothing in the water." Yukirin said.
"Yes there is! I felt it on my leg!" Mayuyu said clinging onto Yukirin.
"It's probably just seaweed."
"Ahhh!'
Mayuyu started to freak out again causing Yukirin to stumble.
"Stop it Mayuyu the top of my swim suit is coming undone!" Yukirin said.
"Bring me back! Bring me back to shore!"
Mayuyu was completely ignoring Yukirin's cries.
"Mayuyu!"
Then in a blink of an eye, Yukirin's top came undone and Mariko saw a whole different side of Yukirin.
"Nooooo!"
Yukirin dunked herself into the water with Mayuyu still clung to her. Her face was bright red.
"Mayuyu let go! I have to fix my suit!" Yukirin cried.
"No! I don't want to. There's something down there!"
"Shinoda-san help!"
Mariko finally snapped out of what she saw and quickly helped her fellow doctor. She managed to grab the strings and retie the top of Yukirin's suit.
"Thanks. Alright Mayuyu let's get you back onto shore." Yukirin said as she slowly made her way back to land.
Mariko stood there rethinking her views on Yukirin. But then everyone was called in because Miichan had gone out and bought snacks. For once the Gachapin was useful. As Mariko sat there eating some water melon she asked Sae,
"Where's Sayaka."
Sae finished gulping down a melon slice and said,
"Out there!"
Mariko looked out and saw Sayaka surfing the waves. She looked pretty cool too.
"Go Sayaka!" Takamina said.
Mairko noticed that Acchan wasn't with Takamina.
"Hey where's Acchan?" Mariko asked.
"That's weird. She was with me a second ago."
"HELP!"
Everyone looked out and saw Acchan in the water without a floatie. Then, a huge wave came by and swollowed her up. She went down and didn't come back up.
"Acchan!"
Mariko was about to go out but Takamina was quicker. She ran out there with a floatie and started kicking like crazy. She looked like a human motar boat. Takamina managed to find Acchan and quickly brought her back to shore. Then she performed CPR on the fallen princess. There was nothing at first but then Acchan coughed up water and started breathing again.
"Acchan!" Takamina said holding her in her arms.
"Takamina!" Acchan cried.
"Don't you ever leave me again ok?"
"Yeah."
The two ended up crying. Mariko was glad that the two were safe. It was close call and she was amazed at how fast Takamina was in the water. Maybe that was the power of love.
After the whole beach incident, everyone turned in for a nice relaxing dip in the hotspring. Mariko and the other doctors went in one bath while the other patients went in another bath. She could hear Haurna and Yuko struggling on the other side. Ahh poor Haruna. When the bath was over, everyone walked into the main dining room and had a feast meant for a king. Then after, Mariko got changed into her pajamas and walked into the game room. There she saw Acchan, Takamina, Jurina, and Rena.
"Hey Mairko!"
Mariko turned around and saw Miichan only her face was bright red except for her eyes where her sunglasses would've been.
"Is that sunburn?" Mariko asked.
"Yeah. I passed out while tanning." Miichan said.
"Ha stupid Gachapin."
"Hey!"
Jurina walked over to Mariko and handed her and Miichan table tennis paddles.
"You and Miichan versus Rena and I." Jurina said.
"Sounds fun!" Miichan said.
The four girls gathered and soon more people showed up. Jurina had the first serve and she slammed it at Mariko. Mariko hit it back just as hard as Jurina. The two hit the ball at each other faster than the previous shot unitl Jurina finally hit it and it nailed Miichan right in the head.
"Ouch! Hey what was that for?"
"Sorry but that was our point." Jurina said.
"Stupid Gachapin!" Mariko hissed.
The game continued and became very intense near the end. But on the final point, Jurina shot it and it flew past Mariko winning the game.
"We won!" Jurina said.
"Yay!" Rena said even though she didn't do much.
"Good game." Miichan said.
"Yeah."
Sae came in the room more excited than usual.
"Hey you guys Sayaka brought fire works. We're gonna go light them on the beach. Come on!"
"Oh boy fire works!"
Everyone went out onto the beach where everyone was already out. They were standing a safe distance away as Sayaka was lighting big ones that went off into the night sky and then exploding making everything bright.
"Another one another one!" Sae said.
"Alright hang on Sae." Sayaka said.
"Acchan let's light sparklers." Takamina said.
"Yeah!"
Everyone had their own sparkler. Yuko was chasing Haruna with hers and Jurina was making sure Rena wasn't going to be hurt. Mayuyu was spinning them around while Yukirin was trying to avoid getting hit. Mariko herself had one and watched it die down. When she went to light another one, Sae ran over with a huge firework. It looked like she tied a bunch of them together with one fuse.
"Sae don't you dare light that!" Sayaka said.
But it was already too late. Sae lit the fire work and the count down started.
"Everyone get down!" Sayaka shouted.
Everyone took cover and quickly hid behind something. There was silence but then BOOM! The fire work went off and there was bombardment of fire and sparks. Mariko almost got hit by one if it wasn't for the tree she was hiding behind. The explosions lasted for about four minutes. Then when it finally ended, everyone came back out.
"Is everone alright?" Mariko asked.
"Yeah!" Takamina said.
"Acchan and I are alright!"
"Yukirin?"
"Mayuyu and I are fine!" she said.
"Sayaka?"
"Yeah we're fine. Sae what were you thinking?" she said.
"Haha that was awesome!" Sae said.
"Jurina?"
"Rena is fine and so am I!" Jurina said.
"Yuko?"
There was no answer.
"Yuko? Haruana?"
There was still no answer.
"You guys were is Yuko and Haruna?" Mariko said.
"They could've ran inside." Acchan said.
"Go check."
A couple minutes later, Acchan came back.
"They weren't anywhere." she said.
"Where could they have gone?" Jurina said.
"Hey look!"
Yukirin pointed at a flip flop pointed in the direction of the forest.
"Don't tell me..."
"They ran out there!" Takamina said.
"Oh no."
Now two of Mariko's patients are missing and it's up to her to find them.
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Well there's part 1! Part 2 will be on it's way soon. Keep reading to find out what happens to Yuko and Haruna! Thank you for reading and tell me what you think!
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I LOVEEE the MAYUKI moments~~~~~!!!!!!!!
they where the best~ but a little without emotion....and loved the jelous Mayu~
and I liked the Wmatsui and Kojiyuu moments too~
update soon~ :tama-mad:
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aha! gotcha! you updated yehey!!
muahh
atsumina"What are they? A married couple?" Mariko thought.
YES THEIR GONNA BE SOON!! right?
Kojiyuu missing???! whoaaa
wmatsui are sweet
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Oh, Yukirin without her top part of bikini :mon bleed2:
And KojiYuu!!! :panic: :panic: :panic:
Will they be alright?!!
Sae, you were too overexcited LOL
Mayuyu, cutie pie XD XD
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the part of Mayu and Yukirin :on bleed:
Mayu always like a kid :on lol:
what did happen to Haruna and Yuko :fainted:
:wahaha: I love this fic so much I can't stop laughing when I'm reading it :hiakhiakhiak:
please cantinue I can't wait for the next part :on gay:
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HAHA! The president of the institute must be crazy too!
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Hello everyone! I'm back with part 2! I have a lot planned out for the two.You ready to find out what happens to Kojiyuu? Well continue reading and see what happens! Enjoy.
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Chapter 10 part 2
"Alright everyone listen up!" Sayaka said.
"Mariko and I are going to look for Yuko and Haruna. In the mean time, Takamina and Yukirin are going to watch you. So you guys behave while we're gone. We'll be back soon and if we're not back in two days, Yukirin is going to send out a search and rescue squad. You guys understand? If you miss behave I have given the staff to take certain actions if needed."
"Hai!" everyone said.
"Good. Alright then let's go."
Mariko and Sayaka headed off into the wild to look for Haruna and Yuko. They must have ran into the wild trying to get away from the explosion. Then they got too far out and because it was dark out they couldn't find their way out.
"Knowing Haruna, she probably ran into the wild and Yuko ran after her because she can't be alone for two seconds without her." Mariko said.
"You're probably right." Sayaka said.
"So where should we start?"
"Well the explosion was in the north so we should probably head south."
"Alright."
The two headed south and called out Yuko and Haruna's name. The path they had taken was pretty rugged and hard to walk through. You couldn't see the ground because it was covered by the plants and there all kinds of bugs flying around. The weather was hot and Mariko was sweating like crazy. She would rather be relaxing on the beach but instead she's on a girl hunt for Yuko and Haruna. The two continued to walk until Sayaka stopped her.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"Don't move!" Sayaka said.
"What is it?"
"Just don't move Mariko."
"What are you-"
Mariko soon figured out what Sayaka was talking about. On her neck, Mariko felt something slimy wrap itself around her neck. Then there was the sound of hissing near her ear. Mariko looked over and saw a giant snake staring at her right in the eyes.
"AHHHHHHH!"
Mariko panicked and started running. The snake was still wrapped around her and was slowly starting to tighten its grip. Mariko could feel the air being squeezed out of her. She thought she was done for but then she saw a stick hanging loosely from a tree. She grabbed it and stabbed the snake forcing it to loosen its grip. It was just enough for her to get her arm in between her neck and the snake and throw it off. Mariko started gasping for air when she got the snake off her. But the snake wasn't done yet. It hissed at her and started to slither back to her.
"Oh no you don't!" Mariko said.
She backed away and tried to move but the snake had her trapped. But then Mariko saw a rock near by. She quickly picked it up and lifted it above the snake.
"Goodbye!"
Then she dropped it right on the snake crushing it under the massive rock. Mariko couldn't believe what she had just done and was now standing there staring at the dead snake. Now that the snake was out of the way, Mariko had realized that she had separated herself from Sayaka and now had no idea where she was.
"This is just great!" Mariko thought.
"Well, better keep walking."
Mariko continued to walk for what felt like hours. She kept walking and walking only to find more wild life and plants. Mariko was very careful when walking through a field of vines making sure not to grab one that was actually another snake. She had to walk along edges and cliffs. Through random dips in the ground and through unknown plants. Mariko almost stepped on a red ant hill if it wasn't for the sun.
"Man where are they?!" Mariko said.
She was starting to get paranoid. It was getting dark and there was still no sign of Haruna, Yuko or Sayaka. Every rustle she heard in the bushes made her think something was following her. Every step she took was carefully placed fearing she would step on something dangerous. Mariko thought she was going to lose it when all of the sudden, she heard a familiar cry. It was coming from up ahead of her. Mariko ran as fast as she could to the sound of the cries. Then in a small opening she found Yuko and Haruna.
"Mariko help!" Haruna said.
"What's wrong?" Mariko asked.
"This tree fell and Yuko moved me out of the way so it wouldn't hit me. But then she ended up getting hit and she's been trapped ever since. I tried moving it but it's too heavy."
"How is she?"
"Look."
Mariko looked over and saw Yuko lying there barely breathing.
"Not good. We need to get the tree off of her. Help me lift it."
Together, Haruna and Mariko tried lifting the tree but got nowhere. Even with the combined strength, they weren't strong enough to lift the tree. They needed someone like strong like Sayaka to lift it who was still missing.
"What do we do?!" Haruna said starting to cry.
"Just shut up and let me think!" Mariko said.
She stood there trying to think of a plan when she heard rustling in the bushes. Then out of nowhere a wild boar came charging at Mariko. Luckily, Mariko moved out of the way and the boar missed. But then it turned around was coming right back at them only this time at Haruna. It charged and it looked like Haruna wasn't going to move out of the way in time. But then something got in the way and stopped the boar. It took Mariko a while to realize it was Sayaka who was holding the boar back.
"Sayaka!" Mariko said.
"Hurry up and help Yuko!" Sayaka said trying to hold the boar back.
"Haruna!"
Haruna quickly ran over to Mariko.
"On the count of three I'm going to lift the tree. When I do, you pull Yuko out got it?"
Haruna nodded her head.
"Alright then 1, 2, 3!"
With all her strength, Mariko lifted the tree just enough for Haruna to pull Yuko out. When Yuko was out, Mariko dropped the tree.
"How is she?" Mariko asked.
"I don't know!" Haruna cried.
"Yuko can you hear me?"
"Nyannyan... Where's Nyannyan?" she said.
"I'm right here Yuko." Haruna said holding her hand.
"Not good. It looks like she's got a few broken ribs and is now suffering from internal bleeding. We got to get her out of here." Mariko said.
"But what about Sayaka?" Haruna asked.
"I'm fine! JUST GO!" Sayaka shouted as she pushed the boar back.
Mariko picked Yuko up and her and Haruna ran. Mariko looked back hoping Sayaka was going to be alright. The two ran all the way back to the resort where the others were waiting. Takamina and Yukirin took Yuko inside to operate after seeing her injuries. Haruna was right behind them.
"Where's Sayaka?" Acchan asked.
"We had to leave her behind." Mariko said panting trying to catch her breath.
"Why?" Sae asked.
"There was a wild boar that attacked us. Sayaka stayed behind and fended it off while Haruna and I ran with Yuko."
"We have to go back for her!" Acchan said.
"Then let's go!"
Mariko, Sae, and Acchan were about to run back in when a huge dark figure came out. They weren't sure what it was and was immediately startled and backed away. It took a few steps closer and then suddenly dropped. In the light, Mariko realized it was the boar only it was dead. And standing before her was Sayaka covered in its blood. She looked badly bruised from the fight she had.
"Who wants roasted pork tonight?" she said.
"Sayaka!" Sae ran up to Sayaka and hugged her. She didn't even care that Sayaka was covered in blood.
"Easy Sae. I'm still pretty sore." she said pushing the genking girl down.
"How did you kill it?" Mariko asked.
"Once you guys left, I pulled out a knife I brought with me and stabbed the living day out of it. It took a while because the knife wasn't really hitting any of the vital spots. But then I finally got it."
"Why did you bring it back here?" Acchan said keeping her distance from the bloodied Sayaka.
"Well I didn't want it to waste so I brought it back for us to eat."
"Yay!" Sae said jumping up and down.
"That's not a bad idea. I'm starving anyways."
"Alright then help me cook it. Acchan you want to help?" Sayaka asked.
"Eww gross! No way."
"Suit yourself. You just won't get much when it's done."
"Hey!"
Two hours later, the pork was done and man did it look good. Everyone gathered around the fire and ate happily. Mariko and Sayaka were told Yuko was going to be fine and the operation was a success. A couple minutes after Yuko came out.
"Hey you shouldn't be out here." Mariko said.
"I'm fine. I heal fast." Yuko said.
"But you just had an operation."
"So? Nothing can stop me from being around my Nyannyan." Yuko said as she hugged Haruna.
"Mou!!"
Haruna was going to push Yuko away but then she remembered how Yuko had saved her and stopped.
"Only tonight because you saved my life, I'll let you do whatever you want." Haruna said blushing.
"Hooray!"
"Hey Takamina why can't we be like that?" Acchan asked.
"Because you didn't save my life." Takamina replied.
"No but you saved mine so tonight, I'm going to let you do whatever you want to me." Acchan said in a seducing voice as she wrapped her arms around the midget girl.
"Get a room." Mayuyu said.
"Hey that's not nice." Yukirin said.
"Shut up Yukirin. Or should I tell the others what I did to you after the swim suit accident"
"Shut up Mayuyu!"
Yukirin's face got bright red.
"I don't want to know what any of you are going to do but leave me out of it!" Mariko said.
"Oh come on Mariko we know you want some love too." Sae said.
"Shut up! Hey do you guys know where Gachapin is?"
"I think she went inside to get drinks." Sayaka said.
"Hey you guys!"
Everyone looked over and saw Miichan carrying a bunch of drinks. She was running over when she suddenly tripped and fell over right on top of Mariko. Then next thing she knew, Mariko and Miichan's lips were locked in a kiss. It took a while for her to realize it and when she did, she shoved Miichan off her.
"Ahh I kissed a Gachapin!" Mariko said wiping her mouth.
"Ahh I kissed a Baba!" Miichan said pretending to gag.
"What'd you say?"
"Baba!"
"Why you!"
Everyone laughed as they watched the two wrestle each other to the ground. In the end, Mariko won and was now sitting on top of Miichan.
"Get off me!' Miichan demanded.
"Not until you apalogize for calling me a Baba! Mariko said.
"Never!"
As Miichan struggled, Mariko started to think,
"There is really something wrong with this nurse. What am I going to do with her?"
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Well there's part 2! I hoped everyone liked it and please tell me what you think!
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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
You deserve a proper comment from me, but I'm so lazy... And sleepy...
*leaves spot to properly comment some time later*
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Sayaka is awesome :heart:
Yuko heals really fast :lol:
Baba Gachapin kiss was :lol:
Overall :twothumbs
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LOL ALL THE STAFF ARE MILITARY TRAINED!!!
YUKO PROTECTING NYANNYAN SO COOL!!!!
THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!
So cute, funny and awesome! At first I thought Kojiyuu ran away to make out but actually Haruna had a seizure...
ME AND MY PERVERTED MIND
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What happend with mayuki after swimsuit accident?
Hehe
I want Mayuki hot scene! LOL LOL
Thank for the update
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Greetings everyone I am back and have loads of new ideas. Lately, everyone seems to have a little bit of a perverted mind. So, this chapter is going to involve everyone being perverted! But don't worry, it won't be like super rated M stuff. Owner of website if you are reading this please do not be mad! I swear there will be nothing extreme. But for now, please enjoy!
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Chapter 11
When Mariko first walked into the facility, she was instantly grabbed and dragged into another room. She looked around and saw Takamina and Sayaka staring at her.
"What's going on?" Mariko asked.
"There was a chemical spill in the lab down stairs. We contained the spill but the gases got into the vents." Sayaka said.
"We have a lab?" Mariko said not even knowing they had one.
"Yes anyways, the gas is causing everyone to be really affectionate towards each other."
"Meaning?"
"Meaning everyone's all lovey dovey!" Takamina said.
"Oh. Wait what do you mean by lovey dovey?"
"Like they're hugging and kissing each other."
"Oh good." Mariko was thinking of a different kind.
"They're basically acting like perverted drunks." Sayaka said.
"Then how come you guys weren't affected?' Mariko asked.
"The gas must have wore off by the time we arrived."
"Then where's Yukirin?"
"That's another thing. Yukirin got chased down by Mayuyu and Mayuyu ended up kissing her. When she did, Yukirin got a lovey dovey too." Takamina said.
"Oh no poor Yukirin. You know Takamina I'm suprised you're still here." Mariko said.
"What's that supposed to mean?"
"Well knowing you and how much you love Acchan, I'm suprised you don't use this as an excuse and run out there and kiss her right now."
"Shut up!"
"Hey I'm just saying the truth."
"Alright both of you calm down." Sayaka said.
"We need to think of a plan"
"Do you know how to stop it?" Mariko asked.
"Well I think all we have to do is shock them."
"You want us to taze them?" Takamina said.
"No! I mean spooke them. I saw Haruna have a seizure and black out for a moment. When she woke back up, she saw Yuko and got spooked returning to her normal self. But then Yuko kissed her again and she went back to lovey dovey mode."
"Oh I get it."
"So how are we going to do that?" Mariko said.
"Well we'll have to split up and sneak up on them. I'll take Sae, and the Matsui sisters, Mariko you get Mayuyu and Yukirin, and Takamina you get Acchan, Yuko, and Haruna got it?"
"Yep." Takamina said.
"Try not to get seduced." Mariko said.
"Shut up!"
"Alright let's split up!"
The three split up and set off for their designated targets. Mariko walked down the hall searching for Mayuyu and Yukirin. Then she found them in one of the exam rooms. It looked like Mayuyu was pretending to be the doctor and Yukirin was the patient.
"Yukirin, it's time for your check up." Mayuyu said in a drunk voice.
Mayuyu pulled out a stethoscope and placed it against Yukirin's chest.
"You're heart is beating really fast. It must be love sickness. I know the perfect cure."
Mayuyu leaned in and kissed Yukirin. The two were locked in a pasionate kiss and Mariko couldn't help but watch. But then she remembered she had a job to and brought herself back to reality. She waited for the right moment and then jumped into the room. Yukirin saw this and yelled but Mayuyu looked unaffected.
"Yukirin get over her now!" Mariko said.
"Shinoda-san!" Yukirin got up and tried to run but Mayuyu grabbed her.
"Where do you think you're going?" Mayuyu said as she pulled Yukirin back to her.
The two kissed again and when Mayuyu released Yukirin, she was back in her lovey dovey mode.
"Hey Mayuyu lets get Mariko too." Yukirin said.
"Good idea."
The two got up and slowly started towalk towards Mariko.
"Ahhhh!"
Mariko quickly exited the room and shut the door behind. She ran down the hall as fast as she could only to be stopped by the Matsui sisters.
"Hey nee chan did I tell you how much I love you?" Jurina said.
"Of course you did." Rena said.
"Did I tell Mariko how much I love her too?"
"No and I don't think I did either."
"Then let's both tell her."
The two Matsui sisters started to get closer to Mariko who only turned around ran away.
"Find Sayaka." she thought.
As she ran down the hall, she found Sayaka on the ground hugging and kissing Sae.
"I love you so much!" Sayaka said.
"I love you too giant gorilla." Sae said.
The two went in for another hug.
"Not Sayaka!"
Just then Takamina and Acchan came out along with Yuko and Haruna. Mariko had expected Takamina to be out but certainly not Sayaka.
"I love you Nyannyan!" Yuko said clinging on to Haruna's back.
"I love you to Yuko." Haruna said supporting the girl.
They looked like father and son enjoying a piggy back ride.
"Hey Takamina I feel lonely let's get married." Acchan said.
"That's a great idea!" Takamina said.
"But who will be the one to marry us?"
"How about Mariko?"
"That would be fantastic!"
"Let's get her!"
The two love crazed girls started running after Mariko along with the Matsui sisters. The four of them were really fast and right behind her. But Mariko was quicker with having long legs as an advantage and managed to escape the crazy lovers. She stopped to take a quick rest to catch her breath. But then out of nowhere Miichan came up.
"Ahhh! What the heck Gachapin! Don't scare me like that!" Mariko said.
Miichan didn't respond like she usually did. She just smiled and looked at Mariko with half open eyes.
"Gachapin... don't tell me you-"
Mariko was cut off by Miichans lips pressed against hers. As soon as they kissed, Mariko felt something rush into her head and into her chest. It was a warm feeling that made her heart ache. It was yearning for more love. Mariko's vision started to get a little blurry and it looked like there was pink lighting around her. She got the sudden urge to start kissing Miichan again. But being her, Mariko fought it. She looked over and saw a fire alarm nearby. That's when she realized that if she pulled it then it would activate the sprinklers. That should shock everyone back to normal. Mariko tried to walk over and pull it but Miichan grabbed her.
"Don't leave." Miichan said.
Mariko tried to move but Miichan wouldn't let up. The next thing she knew, Miichan had Mariko pinned against the wall and was leaning in for another kiss. She tried to move but the Gachapin was really strong. Having no choice, Mariko head butted Miichan making her let go and fall over. Mariko took this chance and quickly ran over to pull the fire alarm. Cold water shot out of the sprinklers and she could hear everyone screaming around the corner. Mariko herself began to turn back to normal.
"Ouch!"
Mariko looked over and saw Miichan with a bloody nose.
"When did this happen?" Miichan said looking at the blood.
Mariko couldn't help but laugh at the confused girl. Then she walked into the hall to see how the others were. Jurina and Rena were shivering while Sae was trying to splash Sayaka with the water on the ground. Yuko was still clinging onto Haruna but Haruna was fighting back this time. Takamina and Acchan were on the ground looking confused and Mayuyu and Yukirin next to them doing the same.
"What happened?" Acchan asked.
"There was a gas leak and everyone got lovey dovey." Mariko said.
"Good job pulling the fire alarm." Sayaka said.
"How'd you get caught?"
"Genking here snuck up on me instead of me on her."
"Oh. Do I want to even ask how Takamina got caught?"
"Acchan was too strong. I tried to fight back but she was too much." Takamina said.
"Yeah I'm sure you tried to fight back." Mariko said.
"I did!"
"Hey what's this ring on my hand?" Acchan said.
Everyone looked at Acchan's hand and small a ring with a small diamond on it.
"Ahh!" Takamina shouted.
"What?"
Takamina quickly took the ring off Acchan.
"Hey give it back. I liked it!"
"No!" Takamina said.
"Takamina!" Acchan gave Takamina an evil glare.
"You can't have it. It's too early."
"But I want it."
"No!"
Before Acchan could do anything, Takamina popped the ring into her mouth and swallowed it.
"Takamina!"
"Don't worry! You'll get it back in a couple of hours."
"Eww gross!"
Mariko stood there watching the two argue and couldn't help but wonder where did that ring come from and why Takamina panicked when Acchan found it. After thinking about it, Mariko finally figure it out. Takamina saw this and gave Mariko a "don't you dare tell her" glare. Mariko just smiled and nodded her head. Even though she couldn't say, Mariko now knew a new secret about the midget doctor.
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Well there's chapter 11! I hope you all liked the sharing of love. And see if you can figure out what the ring was on Acchan's hand. But then again, all you Atsumina fans probably already figured it out. And again, there was no super mature stuff and don't expect it to get more intense. I respect the rules and follow them as so. Well I hope you all enjoyed it and tell me what you think!
PS: I think I update way too fast. Maybe I should slow down a little.
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AHAHAHAHAHA GIANT GORILLA LOL OMG
THIS IS SO HILARIOUS!!! MAYUKI IS SO FUNNY!!! HAHAHAHHAHA
I'M LAUGHING LIKE MAD NOW!!! LOLOLOLOLO
And don't slow down! There's no need to! But im jealous that you have so much time..
Reminds me of Zero no Tsukaima when the maid dropped the love potion she was supposed to give to Saito... Louise started acting loveydovey with the other girls LOL
Your fic is almost crack XD my fics are pure crack lol. You can add the crack very subtly while maintaining a good storyline.
I have no idea what I'm typing LOL I'M TOO BUSY LAUGHING
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reserved space for my proper comment later
ch10 p1
yay...beach and bikini :onioncheer:
oh no...the squirrel and the cat MIA :OMG:
sae-chan... :shifty:
ch10 p2
AkiGori and MariTroll to the rescue :cool1:
oh my...mariko don't you feel something strange when the snake wraped itself on your neck :sweat:
ch11
MaYuki scene :on bleed:
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*saves spot for comment*
This was hilarious :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
And yet, it had a very sweet AtsuMina moment :wub: :wub: :wub: Ah, the engagement ring, now was it? SWEET :wub: :wub: :wub:
And MaYuki was so smexy, being in a doctor and patient mode :D
Oh, KojiYuu :deco: :deco: :deco: piggyback riding, was it? so sweet :wub: :wub: :wub:
And Sayaka-The-Giant-Bear kissing a psycho Sae is just PURE WIN :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
RenaJuri was really sweet :wub:
But the most interesting part was MariMii... I hope they grow to like each other to the point where they need no potion to kiss :roll: :roll: :roll:
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They are so cute~
Sayaka is physicaly strong but Mariko is really mentaly strong. Awesome!
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"Hey what's this ring on my hand?" Acchan said.
oh my oh my atsumina get married please..
As usual you did a good job here miyumi-san..
I really can't express my words to you..
one thing i know is I like you a lot! I like your story! and and and..everything you do to make us all go Loco
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Oh, man. You’re a super writer. You make awesome stories and update fast.
I really enjoy those chapters..
The couples’ love dovey scene
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Reading this fic really made my day XD So darn cute/funny/mad/etc. Plus you update fast (no complain there :wub:)
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Beach and bikini~~ :mon lovelaff:
Yukirin got undressed :mon bleed2:
:mon pumped: SAYAKA HOLDING A BOAR ! :mon lmao:
Poor Yuko got hurt to save her nyaan nyaan :mon hanky: but it's worth :mon fyeah:
The leaking gas really make a chaos but Mariko comes to save the world ~ :mon beam:
Everyone lovey dovey moments were soooooooo :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
( Minna wa perv~~~ XD )
Atsumina~ hurry get married ~ XD XD
I love your fic sooo much :mon XD: please keep update :mon yeah:
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Chapter 10 part 2
Yuko saved Haruna Yuko kakkoi :cool1:
"Shut up Yukirin. Or should I tell the others what I did to you after the swim suit accident"
"Shut up Mayuyu!"
Yukirin's face got bright red.
I wonder what happened between Mayu and Yuki I want to know it :on bleed:
aaah! a kiss between Miichan and Mariko I hope that their relation get a developpment :shy1:
Chapter 11
what atsumina married :shy2:
Haruna and Yuko lovely as always :nya:
Rena and Jurina are so sweet :luvluv2:
Mayu and Yuki's scene being in a doctor and patient and kissing kyaaa :on bleed:
I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon :farofflook:
Miichan kissed Mariko again :luvluv1:
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Minna! Thank you so much for the feedback. Everyone is so nice! I think some of the gas got to you guys. Haha just kidding but anyways, here's chapter 12 and this chapter is going to teach a lesson about eating mysterious foods. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 12
"Hey Mariko I think there's something wrong with Jurina." Takamina said.
"What do you mean?" Mariko asked.
"Look over there."
There lying on the ground was Jurina. She had a very relaxed looked on her face.
"I don't see anything wrong." Mariko said.
"Mariko. She has a conduct disorder and is usually wound up and on guard. But look at her! She looks like a hippie staring at the clouds." Takamina said.
"That is true and I don't see Rena around her. I'm going to look into it."
Mariko walked over to Jurina who was still lazingly lying on the floor.
"Uh Jurina what are you doing?" Mariko asked.
"Just chillin." Jurina said.
"Where's Rena?"
"Back in her room. She started acting funny so I left. By the way Mariko you look very pretty today."
"Ok I'll go check on her and thanks I guess."
Mariko left feeling really weirded out. When Mariko was about to enter the room, the door came flying open. Rena stood there with a mad look on her face.
"Hey Rena are you-"
"Shut up!" she said.
"What's wrong?" Mariko asked suprised at the sudden reaction.
"Where's my stupid sister?"
"Uh down the hall. Rena maybe you should-"
"Shut up you hag." Rena barked.
Mariko stepped back and and watched as the angry girl stompped down the hall to Jurina.
"Hey get up!" she said grabbing Jurina's shirt.
"Hi Rena-chan." Jurina said.
"They got super spicy curry in the lunch room today and you're going to give me your lunch." Rena said.
"Ok."
"Then lets go."
Rena started dragging Jurina down the hall like a puppy being scolded. Once they were gone, Mariko walked into Rena's room to look for anything that could've caused their strange behavior. She looked around and didn't see anything. But then sitting on the table, Mariko found a strange blue fruit that looked like an apple. She saw two bite marks out of it and the inside was actually red. Mariko took the fruit and walked around asking people if they knew what it was. No one knew what it was until suddenly, Mayuyu came up.
"Hey I know what that is!" she said.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"It's a Poco loco fruit."
"A what?"
"A Poco loco fruit. They're usually found on tropical islands and served in fruity drinks. Oh and they're super rare. Did you bring it back from the island?"
"No I found it in Jurina and Rena's room. It looks like they took a bite out of it." Mariko said.
"Uh oh." Mayuyu said.
"Why uh oh?"
"It's called the Poco loco fruit because of the effect it has on people when it isn't properly prepared. In a drink nothing happens but if you eat it raw then bad things."
"Like?"
"There's a chemical in the fruit that causes the brain to act a certain way. It basically mimics the oppostie you. So let's say if you're usually mean then you'll be super nice or if you're nice then you'll act mean. You act all loco." Mayuyu said.
"Oh. Shoot! No wonder those two were acting weird!"
"What?"
"Jurina started acting like a hippie and Rena started acting like a bully." Mariko said.
"Not good. We gotta snap them out of it before things get really bad. If things are left as they are, the effects could be permanent."
"Oh God. Do you know how to fix it?"
"Maybe. Give me some time to look into it. In the mean time you go find the two and try to get them in the same room."
"Got it."
The two split up and Mariko rushed down to the lunch room where they said they would be. When she walked in, the first thing she saw was a table shoot past her head. She looked over and saw Rena throwing tables and everyone was huddled in the corner.
"Mariko help!" Acchan said.
Rena saw Mariko and started aiming at her. A table was heading straight for her but she moved out of the way in time. She kept running but then something grabbed her. Mariko looked down and saw Jurina latching onto her leg.
"Mariko I love you so much." she said tightening her grip on Mariko's leg.
"Jurina get off!"
"No not until you love me back!"
Before Mariko could say anything, another table shot past her. Mariko reacted by ducking as the table smashed into the wall. It hit Jurina in the head but she didn't look like she was hurt. Mariko got up and started running with the hippie girl still clung to her arm.
"Stay still so I can hit you!" Rena shouted.
Another table shot by almost hitting Mariko right in the head.
"Hey Takamina you got any sedatives on you?"
"Yeah why?" Takamina said.
"Toss me one."
Takamina pulled out a sedative and chucked it at Mariko. She caught it and now started running towards Rena. As she carefully dodged the tables flying past her head, Mariko ran up to Rena and injected the sedative into Rena. Luckily, Rena wasn't in psyco mode so the sedative worked and she calmed down.
"Hey Takamina help me carry Rena to her room." Mariko said.
"Sure."
Together, the two carried Rena into her room. Then they tied her in restraints to avoid her from getting angry. They also had to tie Jurina so she would stop hugging Mariko even though she thought it was nice. A couple minutes later, Mayuyu came running in.
"Ok I found a cure. I have everything prepared. All I need now is the fruit. Do you have it?" Mayuyu said.
"Yeah it's right- eh?"
Mariko swore she had put the fruit in her pocket. It must have fallen out during the stuggle and was back in the lunch room. Mariko and Mayuyu ran down to the lunch room where the fruit was last seen. They looked around and didn't see it anywhere.
"Hey what's this?"
Mariko looked over and saw Sayaka holding the fruit. She was going to take a bite out of it.
"Sayaka don't!"
But it was too late. Sayaka completely changed and instead of her usual strong self, Sayaka became a weakling. She saw Mariko and got frightned. She ran dropping the fruit on her way out.
"Great now Sayaka too?"
"Just go get her. I'll be back with the antidote in a minute." Mayuyu said.
"On it."
Mariko ran down the hall after Sayaka. She was really fast. Even fast for Mariko. She knew there was no way she was going to be able to catch her on her own. Mariko was going to need help and she knew the person to go to.
"Hey Sae!"
"Yeah yeah yeah?"
"I need your help. Sayaka's on the run and we need to catch her." Mariko said.
"So you want me to catch her?" Sae said.
"Yeah. You think you can do it?"
"No problem! Leave it to me!"
With that, Sae dashed after Sayaka in a blink of an eye. A couple minutes later, Sae came back holding Sayaka in a princess position.
"Ahh I'm so high up from the ground! It's scary!" she said wrapping her arms around Sae.
"Hey I like this Sayaka better. Can I keep her?" Sae asked.
"No. Just follow me."
Mariko and Sae brought Sayaka down to Jurina's room where the others were. There was no sign of Sayaka letting go of Sae any time soon so they decided to leave her as she was.
"Alright I have the antidote." Mayuyu said holding a syringe with green liquid in it.
"Let's do Jurina first since she's so calm."
Mayuyu walked over to to Jurina and injected to substance. Jurina's face went from relaxed to in pain and angry.
"Ouch! What the heck was that? Why am I tied to this chair?" Jurina asked.
"That was a wake up call." Mayuyu said.
"Glad to have you back." Mariko said.
"Alright next is Sayaka."
Mayuyu walked over to Sayaka who just pulled herself closer to Sae. But then Mayuyu finally injected the antidote into Sayaka. Within seconds she was back to normal.
"Hey Sae why are you holding me? Put me down!" Sayaka demanded.
"Sure."
Sae dropped Sayaka like that and she fell to the ground.
"Ouch that hurt!" Sayaka said.
"Well you said to put you down." Sae said.
"Not like that!"
"Alright let's get Rena now." Mayuyu said.
"Back off you weird otaku!" Rena growled.
"Rena what's wrong with you?" Jurina asked.
"Remember this?" Mariko said holding up the fruit.
"Yeah Rena and I found it on the island."
"Well this fruit makes you act like the oppostie of yourself. You got acted like a hippie and Rena like an angry wrestler."
"Oh god I had no idea."
"Relax we're fixing it now." Mayuyu said preparing the needle.
"Don't you dare touch me!" Rena said starting to struggle.
"I can't do it if she keeps moving like that. The needle could break."
"Untie me and I'll do it." Jurina said.
Mariko untied Jurina and she took the syringe from Mayuyu. She then walked over and held Rena's arm still. She seemed more relaxed knowing her sister was the one doing it. Then Jurina injected the antidote and Rena snapped back into her normal self.
"Jurina? What's going on? Why am I-" before she could say anything else, Rena passed out.
Everyone quickly untied her and placed her in the bed.
"Well I'm glad that's over with." Mariko said.
"Me too." Mayuyu said.
"Thanks for helping."
"No problem. Just pick me up a couple new mangas on your way here."
"Sure."
"Hey why did you make Sayaka go back to normal? I liked her the way she was before." Sae said pouting.
"What is she talking about?" Sayaka said.
"When you ate the fruit, you got scared and constantly clung to Sae." Mariko said.
"Oh I did that? Sae there's no way I'm going back to that."
"Aww..."
"You know, there's still some antidote left." Mayuyu said.
"What's that supposed to mean?"
A couple minutes later, Sayaka went back to scaredy Sayaka and was holding onto Sae for dear life.
"Ahh don't drop me whatever you do don't drop me!" she said.
"Hahaha this is so much fun!" Sae said.
"Thanks Mayuyu!"
"How long is she going to be like that?" Mariko asked.
"For a couple of hours. The antidote I injected in her won't respond until it gets close to the time when the effects start to get permanent." Mayuyu said.
"You're good."
"Thanks. Just remember those mangas."
"Of course."
The two stood there laughing as Sayaka was practically choking Sae in fear. It was kind of funny seeing Sayka like that. Who knew she had such a cute side under that rough appearnce. It just comes to show you that with the power of weird fruit, anything can happen.
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Well there's chapter 12! Tell me what you think and again, thank you so much for reading and commenting on my fanfic. I love you guys!
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THIS FIC IS SO AWESOME!!!!! :twothumbs
please continue! :bow:
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It was good but I was kinda hoping to see what efect would it have on Yuki......but still good~
XD
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me going loco.. :twothumbs
as usual you'd know ilove your fic..
but there's no atsumina in here :cry:
I'm looking forward on them i trust you! :*
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the Sayaka act like a princess :hiakhiakhiak:
Jurina was really funny :wahaha:
I think that I like Rena more she is Gekikara then when she eat this strange fruit :hee:
please cantinue :wriggly:
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Hello everyone! Today I have a special present for all you Atsumina fans out there. And don't worry, Kojiyuu and Mayuki will also have their moments. So for now, enojoy!
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Chapter 13
Mariko was relaxing by the main desk when Acchan walked over to her.
"Hey Ma-ri-ko." Acchan said.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"I need your help."
"What is it?"
"Well lately, Takamina has been paying attention to other patients more than me. I'm starting to feel really lonely so I was wondering if you could help me."
"Why?"
"Because if you don't then I might do things to make your life very miserable." Acchan said with a death glare.
"Alright I'll help you." Mariko said backing up.
"So what do you want me to do?"
While Takamina was talking to Mariko, Acchan suddenly came out of nowhere.
"Mariko!" Acchan said clinging onto Mariko's arm.
"Her Acchan. I'll be with you in a minute." Mariko said.
"But I want you now!"
"Not now. I'm talking to Takamina."
"Forget her. Let's go somewhere private."
"Acchan."
"Mariko."
"Well I hope you don't mind but I think I'm going to leave." Takamina said as she walked away.
"Do you think that did it?" Mairko asked.
"I don't think so." Acchan said.
"Takamina's tough so we'll have to go to phase two."
"Phase two?"
Acchan explained to Mariko how she was going have her hang around her more often and be all lovey dovey around her. At first Mariko thought it was stupid and there was no way it was going to work. But then again she could be wrong. Acchan told Mariko to wait for her signal and when it was time, she would walk in and do her thing. Acchan walked over to Takamina and started talking to her. Then Acchan gave her the signal and Mariko walked over.
"Hey Acchan!" Mariko said as she ran up and hugged the princess.
"Hey Mariko!" Acchan said.
"What are you doing here Mariko?" Takamina said having a slightly confused look.
"I came here to see Acchan. We're going to go eat lunch together." Mariko said.
"But I thought we were going to eat lunch together."
"Well you said you were busy so I found someone else to eat with." Acchan said.
"But that was yesterday. Today I'm totally free to have lunch with you."
"Sorry but Mariko and I already made plans. See you later. Let's go Mariko."
The two quickly walked around the corner and when they were far enough, they looked back to see how the midget doctor handled it.
"You think it worked?" Mariko asked.
"Let's see." Acchan said.
Sadly, it seemed like it had no effect. Takamina just carried on with her tasks like nothing happened.
"It wasn't enough." Acchan said.
"So what do we do now?" Mariko asked.
"We step up to the next level."
At lunch time, Takamina was sitting alone at the table across where Acchan and Mariko were at. Acchan was dead set on making the small girl jealous.
"Alright take out your lunch." Acchan said.
"Mariko pulled out a small box and opened it revealing food.
"Ok now what I want you to do is spoon feed me it." Acchan handed Mariko a spoon.
"Really?"
"Just do it!"
Mariko scooped a spoonful of rice and placed it into her mouth. She chewed it and then said,
"Wow Mariko this is good! It's even better than Takamina's!"
She said it loud enough so Takamina could hear it. But she just ignored it and kept eating.
"Maybe we should try a different approach." Mariko said.
"You wait here and I'll go talk to her."
Mariko stood up and walked over to Takamina.
"Hey." Mariko said.
"Hey." Takamina replied with a mouth full of food.
"How is it?"
"Good."
"Hey have you noticed how cute Acchan is?"
"Of course. Acchan is super cute."
"Well are you two.. you know... together?"
When she said that, Takamina almost choked on her food.
"No! Of course not!" she said.
"Then if you don't mind, I think I'm going to steal her from you." Mariko said with a devilish smile.
"What?"
Before Takamina could do anything, Mariko walked back over to Acchan.
"Acchan stand up for a minute." she said.
"Why?"
"Just do it."
Acchan stood up in front of Mariko.
"Now start walking towards the exit." Mariko whispered.
Acchan started to walk but then Mariko pretended to run into her and the two fell over. They had landed in the most akward position where Acchan was on the ground and Mariko was on top pinning her down.
"What are you-"
"Shhh!"
Mariko began to lean in really close to Acchan to the point where she could kiss her. But then something pulled her off of Acchan and slammed her againt the wall.
"Hands off my girl!" Takamina shouted.
"I thought you weren't together." Mariko said innocently.
"We're not!"
"Well then I'll be taking her for myself."
"Never!"
Takamina jumped onto Mariko and started punching her the face repeatedly.
"Don't you dare touch my Acchan!" Takamina said.
"She's not yours! She's mine now since you've ignored her. She came to you looking for love but you ignored her so she came straight to me. It's your fault!" Mariko said with her face badly beaten and bruised. She could taste blood in her mouth.
"Is that true?" Takamina said to Acchan who was now looking down.
"Acchan." Takamina walked over to Acchan and placed her hands on Acchan's shoulders.
"Acchan look at me!" Takamina said shaking her.
Acchan looked up with tears in her eyes.
"Is what Mariko said true? Do you feel like I've been ignoring you and not loving you?"
"You never paid attention to me so I thought you hated me. I was hurt and felt lonely." Acchan said with tears dripping down her face.
"Who said that? Who said I hated you?" Takamina said who was now also crying.
"I just wanted to be loved."
"Acchan I will always love you forever and all eternity. You are my cute, spoiled bratty little princess who I know and love and I would do anything for. You are the reason why I enjoy working here. Seeing your bright smiling face everyday lifts my spirits up to the level of gods. I would never ever try to hurt you. You're too prescious to me."
"Takamina.."
"To be honest, I was afraid that you didn't love me which was why when I saw you with Mariko I felt left out. Being me, I tried to hide my feelings but after seeing you like that with Mariko, I couldn't control it any more. I felt angry and just exploded. Oh Acchan I'm really sorry!"
The two embraced in a heart warming hug.
"Do you really love me Takamina?" Acchan said.
"I do. With all my heart." Takamina said.
"Then never leave me again."
"I promise."
The two sealed the promise with a kiss followed by another hug. The two stood there crying in each other's arms. Seeing how things turned out with the two love birds, Mariko quietly left the room. Mariko found Miichan and now she was cleaning Mariko's wounds.
"So Takamina did this to you?" Miichan asked as she dabbed Mariko's wounds with disenfectant.
"Ow! And yeah that girl can pack a punch." Mairko said.
"Well as they say, big things come in small packages."
"Yeah and that big thing is Takamina's punches."
"Well at least you weren't hurt too baldy." Miichan said as she finished putting the last bandage on.
"Thanks Gachapin."
"No problem"
The two walked back out into the hall and saw Takamina and Acchan walking down the hall holding hands.
"So you two made up?" Mariko said.
"Yep!" Acchan said moving closer to Takamina.
"Thanks for clearing things up between Acchan and I." Takamina said.
"Oh and sorry about your face."
"It's alright. I admit I did go a little too far."
"No it was perfect!" Acchan said.
"What?" Takamina looked at her with an angry look.
"Nothing. Hey Takamina let's go get some juice."
"Sure anything for you my princess."
The two walked away hand in hand never letting go.
Mariko was glad that the two finally found feelings for each other. Now maybe things will get better for everyone else around her. As she stood there staring at the two love birds, she couldn't help but feel a sudden ache in her chest. She didn't know what it was but she didn't like it. Later on that night, Mariko went out to a bar and got drunk.
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Well there's chapter 13! I hope all you Atsumina fans out there liked it. Takamina finally confessed her long lasting love to Acchan. Let's see how the relationship goes for them. And do not worry Kojiyuu and Mayuki fans I will have their moments soon. Just give me time! Anyways I hoped you enjoyed this and as always, please tell me what you think!
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hahahaha acchan making takamina jealous is so damn funny and cute :luvluv2:
please make more atsumina moments like this!-- :bow: :bow:
but why did mariko feel an ache on her chest??? :? :?
please update soon!!!
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I can't wait for the other paring expacialy mayuki wmatsui and mariko.and miichan
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Alright everyone it's time for some Mayuki and WMastui love! I am going to give it my best and I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 14
"Hey Mariko!"
"What?"
Mariko turned around and found Mayuyu staring at her.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"I need you to help me get something from Jurina." she said.
"What do you need me to get?"
"Well a couple days ago, I was playing with Yukirin when we accidently ran into Rena. Jurina got mad and punched me. Then she took Yukirin's cross that she loved very much. I feel really bad for losing it so I wanted to make it up to her by getting it back. But when I tried, Jurina attacked me which is why I need you to do it."
"Ok. That shouldn't be too hard."
Mariko walked to Jurina and Rena's room. They were looking at a magazine about amusement parks and when they saw Mariko they stopped.
"Mariko what's up?" Jurina asked.
"Mayuyu said you took something from Yukirin. A cross right?" Mariko said.
"Yeah what about it?"
"Well can I have it back? Yukirin is really upset about it and so is Mayuyu."
"No way. This is punishment for what they did to Rena."
"Well then what can I do to make you give it back?"
Jurina stood there for a moment and thought. Then she looked back at the magazine she was reading and got an idea. She picked up the magazine and showed Mariko a picture of an amusement park.
"Take Rena and I here." she said.
"Disney Sea?" Mariko said.
"Yeah. Rena and I have always wanted to go there when we were kids."
"If I do this then will you give me Yukirin's cross back?"
"Yep."
"Alright. Let me go make the proper preparations."
"Yay! You hear that Rena? We're going to Disney Sea!" Jurina said extremely happy.
"Yay! Jurina your're the best!" Rena said.
"They really are just kids." Mariko thought as she left the room.
After an hour drive, Mariko pulled into the Disney Sea parking lot. Then her, Rena and Jurina stepped out of the car. The two girls were wearing normal clothes instead of their usual facility gowns.
"Alright we're here and before we go, there's something I need you two to put on." Mariko said.
Mariko pulled out two necklaces. One had a sun and the other had a moon on it. Rena took the sun and Jurina took the moon.
"I want you two to wear these so incase you get lost, I'll be able to spot you."
"Ok!" the two said as they put on the necklaces.
Actually, the necklaces were tracking devices given to her by Sayaka. Mariko had the tracking monitor in her purse just incase they tried to escape.
"Alright then let's get out there and have fun!"
"Yosh!"
For the next two hours, the three of them went on rides and played games. Mariko also bought snacks and souvineers with her money.
"Well there goes my pay check." she said to herself.
Jurina went on the wildest rollar costars in the park while Rena stayed with Mariko. Then they all went on the ferris wheel and after that the tea cups. Jurina kept spinning the cup they were in making Mariko feel like she was going to throw up. They met Mickey and Minny Mouse and got to hug them. Although Mariko kept her distance because they kind of creeped her out and she felt like beating Mickey with a bat. After going on the same ride for the third time, Mariko decided to go buy some snacks. She had the two Matsui sisters wait for in on a bench nearby while she went to go buy the ice cream. She would often look back to make sure they were still there. She ordered the ice cream and walked back to the girls. But then she saw they were gone.
"Oh crap!"
Mariko quickly gave the ice cream to a random couple and then pulled out the tracking device from her bag. She turned it on and soon two red dots popped up. They were on the move and it looked like they were heading for the game center. Mariko quickly ran down the game center and started to search for the sisters. But they were nowhere to be found. Mariko looked at the tracking device and saw they were now heading towards the water fall drop ride. She quickly ran to the ride and didn't see them. They weren't on the ride either.
"Where are they?"
Mariko looked at the tracking device again and saw they had stopped near the ferris wheel. Mariko dashed down to the ferris wheel and stopped right at the spot where they would've been. She looked around but still didn't see them anywhere. But then out of the corner of her eye she saw the sun necklace. Mariko turned around and saw the two necklaces only they weren't on Jurina and Rena. They were on two random girls. Mariko ran up to the two girls and questioned them.
"Hey where did you get those necklaces?" Mariko asked.
"Two nice girls gave them to us. Why?" one girl asked.
"Did you see which way they went?"
"Yeah towards the rose garden." the other girl said.
"Thanks!"
Mairko ran as fast as she could down to the rose garden which was on the other side of the park. When she arrived, she saw a lot of people. She frantically searched for the Matsui sisters who were still nowhere to be found. But then in her panicked dash, she saw two girls sitting on a bench under an arch of roses in front of a fountain. Mariko stopped and realized the two girls were Rena and Jurina! Mariko ran up to the two girls ready to scold the living day lights out of them. But when she got closer, she realized the two were sleeping. Rena was resting peacefully against Jurina's shoulder who was leaning against Rena's head. Somehow seeing this made all the anger in Mariko's body vanish.
"Aww how cute."
Mariko took out her phone and took a picture. The sound of the shutter made Jurina wake up. Mariko quickly put her phone away before she noticed she had taken a picture.
"Morning." Mariko said.
"Mariko?" Jurina said.
"Shhh." Mariko said as she gently held Rena allowing Jurina to get up and stretch.
"I was wondering where you guys went." Mariko said.
"Well Rena really wanted to go see the rose garden and I couldn't say no." Jurina said.
"I see. Well let's get you two back to the facility." Mariko said as she carefully placed Rena into a piggy back position and started carrying her.
"I can do it." Jurina said.
"No I'll do it." Mariko said.
Mariko knew that as long as she had Rena then Jurina wouldn't run. When they got back to the facility, the two sisters thanked Mariko and Jurina returned Yukirin's cross to Mariko who then gave it to Mayuyu.
"Thank you so much!" Mayuyu said.
"You have no idea what I had to do to get it back." Mariko said.
"Yeah yeah don't care."
"What?" Mariko said slightly irritated.
Just then, Yukirin came out with a sad look on her face.
"Hey Yukirin look what I got!" Mayuyu said waving the cross in victory.
Yukirin's face brightened up and she ran over and hugged Mayuyu.
"Thank you so much!" Yukirin said as she put the cross back on her neck.
"How on earth did you manage to get it back?"
"I have my ways." Mayuyu said in a cunning voice.
"This person..." Mariko thought getting even more mad at the fact that Mayuyu didn't mention all the hard work she had to do.
"Oh Mayuyu this is the best thing you've ever done for me!' Yukirin said.
"Not the best thing." Mayuyu said.
"What are you-"
Mayuyu silenced Yukirin's lips with a kiss. Mariko watched Yukirin's face turn bright red as the two held for what seemed like forever. When they let go, Mayuyu was the first to speak.
"I'm really sorry for everything Yukirin. Can you forgive me?"
"I already have." Yukirin said as she dove in for another kiss.
Seeing how she didn't belong, Mariko left the two lovers. When she looked back, she couldn't help but feel that same ache in her chest. She didn't know what it was but she really didn't like it. It felt like there was a giant hole in her heart just sitting there eating away at what's left. That same night, Mariko got drunk again.
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Well there's chapter 14! I hope everyone enjoyed it. I did my best trying to think of the best romantic scenarios and that's when I thought of Disney Sea! Now next up is Kojiyuu. But in the meantime, does anyone know why Mariko's heart is aching? Well find out more in the next chapter. Agian thank you for reading and please tell me what you think!
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lovely~~~~~
Mayuki was cute!!! and so was Wmatsui~
....wonder why mayuki was so short.....still cuteeeee~ XD
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you up there! miyumi!!
I just woke up today and basically visit this site to update some fics of mine..
You always made my day happy :shy1:
iloveu even more :luvluv1:
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Everyone has their bad days. This chapter is about Mariko's bad day. I hope you enjoy! Or not....
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Chapter 15
"Two hang overs." Mariko thought as she rubbed the temples of her forehead.
The pain meds she had taken weren't helping either. Mariko was in a really bad mood. A lot had been happening to her and the over whelming pressure was too much to handle. Lately, she's got this patteren of going to the bar and getting drunk and then waking up with a major hang over. She had a huge head ache and just had a nasty edge on her shouler.
"Hey Mariko!" Yuko said.
"Shut up!" Mariko shouted.
Yuko looked at Mariko with the eyes of a child that just got scolded. Mariko realized and straightened herself up a little.
"I'm sorry Yuko. What do you need?" Mariko asked.
"Well if it isn't a bother.... I saw how you got Takamina and Acchan to come out so I was wondering if you could do the same for Nyannyan and I." Yuko said hesitantly.
"Sure. Where is she?"
"In her room."
"Alright give me a minute."
Mariko turned around and trudged down to Haruna's room. Her head still really hurt and she was tired from the lack of sleep she's been getting.
"Hey Haruna can I talk to you for a minute." Mariko said as she walked in.
"Yeah. Hey Mariko are you ok? You don't look too good." Haruna said.
"I'm fine."
"If you say so."
"So listen, I don't know if you know this but Yuko really likes you. And not in the pervy way but in the actual deep love kind of way."
"Yeah I know."
"Do you love her back?"
"Of course I do." Haruna happily chimed.
"Then why is it that you reject her every time Yuko tires to make a move on you?" Mariko questioned.
"Because I get scared. I'm afraid."
"Ahh I see."
Mariko slowly started to assess and figure out what her next plan was. Then she got an idea.
"Wait here."
Mariko walked out and then came back with a bottle of pills.
"Here take these." Mariko said handing Haruna the pills.
"What are they?" Haruna asked as she popped two in her mouth.
"Hormone pills. They'll make you more aggressive towards someone of the same sex. Mainly Yuko."
"What?"
"You'll be more open around Yuko." Mariko said.
"Ohhh ok."
Just then Yuko came into the room.
"Hey you guys!" she said.
Yuko walked over and sat next to Haruna on the bed.
"So how are things going?" she asked.
"Good." Haruna said.
There was a long silence in the room. As Mariko sat there watching the two, she notcied Haruna's hand getting closer to Yuko's. When Haruna touched Yuko's hand, the squirrel girl flinched.
"Nyanyan." Yuko said.
"Yuko I don't know why but I feel like I want you." Haruna said.
Then Haruna leaned in and kissed Yuko right on the lips. There was a bright smile on the squirrel girl's face as she held Haruna close to her. The two were lost in a kiss and the whole sight was making Mariko sick. Then it happened. Mariko quickly ran out of the room to the nearest bathroom and threw up. Her throat burned as she stood there with tears running down her cheeks. That same ache in her chest was back and worse than before.
"Why... why, why, why!" Mariko said to herself.
Images of her paitents flashed in her head. Their smiling faces as they held each other so closely. It looked so nice and so comforting. Mariko felt so lonely not being able to enjoy that same feeling. After she had washed her mouth out, she started crying. But then a familar voice came out from the stall.
"Mariko, are you ok?" Miichan said.
"Leave me alone Gachapin." Mariko said.
Miichan couldn't help but feel sorry seeing her doctor like this. Without thinking, Miichan walked over and hugged Mariko. This new feeling made Mariko's body shiver. She felt her heart become lighter and didn't feel that ache in her chest. When Miichan was about to let go, Mariko wrapped her arounds Miichan.
"Don't go." she said.
The two stood there for what seemed like hours. It was during that time Mariko realized what the ache in her chest was. She wanted love like everyone else around her was experiencing. She was holding back this feeling which was only hurting her on the inside. But hugging Miichan made her realize what she was missing and now she wanted more.
"Miichan." Mariko said pushing her back.
Before Miichan could respond, Mariko pressed her lips against Miichan's. Their lips locked in a pasionate kiss. Mariko never wanted this moment to end. She just wanted it to stay like that with Miichan in her arms and lips locked. But then Mariko realized she had to refrain herself and she snapped back to reality.
"Mariko..." Miichan said looking at her with wide eyes.
"I'm sorry. I have to go. Thank you for everything." Mariko said as she left the bathroom.
"Great now she probably hates me." Mariko thought.
Mariko walked back to check on Haruna and Yuko and she didn't even have to walk in the door to know what they were doing. Outside, you could hear Haruna's soft moans coming from inside and Yuko's perverted laugh.
"Oh Nyannyan you're so sensitive." Yuko said from inside.
"Shut up Yuko." Haruna said.
Mariko quickly walked away from the door and without looking ran into Sayaka.
"Oh Mariko I'm-"
Sayaka stopped midsentence. She looked at Mariko and then said,
"Come with me."
Sayaka took Mariko to her office where she got her some tea.
"Thanks." Mariko said taking the cup.
"Drink it." Sayaka said.
Sayaka walked over and saw across from Mariko.
"Now listen I'm one of the head doctors here and it's my job to not only make sure the patients are ok but the doctors as well."
"Ohh." Mariko said realizing why she was here.
"If there is anything bothering you, you can come to me. You know that right?" Sayaka said.
"Yeah. Of course." Mariko said.
"Good. I'm just making sure you're ok. You don't look too good right now and I'm worried. How about you take the rest of the day off and go home and rest."
"Thanks."
Mariko said as she got up and left the room quietly. She really could use the rest after everything that happened. On her way out, she caught Miichan.
"Hey Gacha- I mean Miichan, you wanna come with me to the bar?" Mariko asked.
"Uhh sure." Miichan set her stuff down and walked over to her.
"Hey Mariko."
"Yeah?"
"Why are you calling me by my name all of the sudden?" Miichan asked.
"Because I want to." Mariko said.
"This isn't some sort of trick is it?"
"If it was, it wouldn't be at a bar."
"Good point."
That night, the two went out and had fun. For once, Mariko didn't feel lonely because she had found someone to be with. The next morning, Mariko woke up with another hang over. She had gotten drunk again and now was fighting another head ache. Like every morning, she would start off by getting up and getting in the shower. But when she was going to get up, she felt something warm grab her. She looked over and saw Miichan unconsiously holding onto her hand. Seeing that made Mariko remember the fun night they had last night.
"Hey Gachapin." Mariko said.
Miichan woke up and in the process, she sat up. That's when Mariko realized Miichan was naked.
"Ahhhh!"
Mariko quickly turned around and covered her bright red face.
"What?"
"Ahhhhh!"
Miichan also realized and covered herself with the sheets.
"Gachapin.. Did we...." Mariko couldn't finish her sentence becasue she didn't want to.
"No... There's no way." Miichan said.
"Right. Yeah there's no way."
"Yeah."
Mariko looked at the clock and realized that it was almost time for work.
"Crap! Gachapin get dressed!" Mariko said.
The two arrived to work two minutes before they were considered late. Sayaka had her suspicions but didn't press any further into it. Mariko was walking down the hall when Yuko came up to her.
"Uhh thank you for helping me out yesterday." Yuko said.
"No problem. I could hear that you two were making progress yesterday." Mariko said.
Yuko blushed at the rememberance of what she and Haruna did yesterday.
"Those pills you gave Haruna really got her fired up. What exactly are they?" Yuko asked.
"Actually they're just sugar pills." Mariko said.
"What?"
"When you trick the mind into thinking they can do it then they will actually do it. You get it?"
"Yeah that make sense!" the squirrel girl said.
"Yeah so basically Haruna made all those sweet noises all on her own."
A huge perverted smile stretched across Yuko's face.
"Well I'm glad I was helpful." Mariko said.
"Yeah I'll definetly be coming back for more." Yuko said.
"I'll be waiting."
As Mariko walked away, she saw Miichan making her way over. The two stopped right in the middle of the hall.
"Mairko."
"Gachapin."
There was an akward silence between the two. Then Mariko finally spoke,
"So listen, I don't remember what we did last night but whatever it was it's in the past and it's done."
"Yeah totally." Miichan said.
"And we must promise never speak of it again." Mariko said.
"Yes."
"Ok good. Well then I'll see you later Miichan."
Mariko started to walk away when Miichan said something.
"Hey Mariko."
"Yeah?"
"Thanks for calling me by my name."
"No problem."
Mariko left having a warm fuzzy feeling in her chest. She felt so glad that she had finally found what she was looking for all along.
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Well there's chapter 15. I'm sorry if the beginning is kind of depressing but I too was in a bad mood when I started writing it. But then I made the ending and started to feel better. But now I'm seriously cosidering ending it here. I don't know. I just don't feel confident about my writing anymore. But enough about me. Please tell me what you think and I hope you all continue reading!
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WHATT??? you're ending this? :fainted:
MAJI DE?
DON'T!! I mean not yet! make fun of it more please :on_puddle:
I want to know more about my atsumina here if they ended up happily..
I trust you! :on GJ:
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MariMii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart: ~yay~ :twothumbs
and KojiYuu~~~~~~~~~~~~ :heart: :heart: WOOHOO!! :inlove: :inlove:
i love you, miyumi-san!!! :love:
this chapter is awesome!!! :heart:
I've been reading the fic for a while but this might be the first time I comment!! :)
It's wonderful!! :thumbup keep going I love it!! :heart:
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Hello everyone! I have decided to continue the Mad House series once more thanks to a certain someone who helped me get through the worst. So I'm done with all the lovey dovey stuff. Now it's time for insanity! Please enjoy!
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Chapter 16
"Hey, hey did you hear?" Takamina said.
"Hear what?" Mariko said.
"Apparently, there's a reporter coming today to do a story about the facility."
"Really?"
"Yeah so everyone's on their best behavior."
"Well that's good."
"No it's not."
"What do you mean?" Mariko asked.
"What I mean is everyone is going to get wild." Takamina said.
"Really?"
"Yeah. The only reason why news reporters come to the facility is to film everyone acting crazy and then show it to kids so they get scared and never go insane."
"Well that's one way to tell them."
"Yeah so be on your toes because it's going to be a long day."
The news reporters arrived around noon. Sayaka greeted them and walked them in. There was the one news caster and two camera men. Mariko saw them coming down the hall so she pretended to look busy.
"This is a lovely facility." the news reporter said.
"Of course. It is one of the best in Tokyo." Sayaka said.
"Is it ok if we meet some of the doctors?"
"There's one now. Mariko!"
Mariko walked over to them and looked right at the camera.
"I am Shinoda Mariko and I've been working here at Hirokawa Mental Facility for five months now. It's nice to meet you." Mariko said.
"It's nice to meet you to. Now tell me, what's it like working here at the facility?" the reporter asked.
"Well it's not as bad as you think. Some of the patients are actually really calm and rarely act out."
"Can we meet some of your patients?"
"Sure please follow me."
Mariko decided to take them to Haruna's room seeing she's the least dangerous out of all her patients. When they walked in, Haruana was suprised and jumped back a little.
"This is Kojima Haruna. She's been here for five months like me and she is the least dangerouos out of all my patients." Mariko said.
"Nice to meet you." Haruna said.
"Tell me, do you enjoy being here in the facility?" the reporter asked.
"Well it's not bad. When I first came here I had a hard time adjusting. But thanks to Mariko, I've began to adjust and actually make friends."
"And who are these friends?"
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko came rushing in and jumped on Haruna.
"This is my best friend Yuko." Haruna said.
"I'm Oshima Yuko. Nice to meet you!" Yuko said with that squirrel smile of hers.
"Yuko is the second least dangerous and she's very good friends with Haruna. They're always around each other." Mariko said.
"We're like sisters!" Yuko said wrapping her arms around Haruna.
"Yuko wait a-"
Haruna froze and slowly began to fall back.
"What's wrong with her?" the reporter asked.
"Haurna has petite malseizures meaning she'll lose consiousness at random times for a couple minutes. We'd better leave so we don't scare her when she wakes up." Mariko said.
"But I wanted to have some fun with Nyannyan." Yuko said in a perverted voice.
"Not now." Mariko said giving the squirrel girl a death glare.
The last thing she wanted was the public to think the facility was a house for crazy lesbians.
"Let me take you to the Matsui sisters. They're also my patients and have been here since I've been here."
As they walked down the hall, Acchan and Takamina came over.
"The short girl with the bow in her hair is doctor Takahashi Minami and the taller girl with short black hair is Atsuko Maeda." Mariko said.
"You're pretty short to be a doctor." the reporter said to Takamina.
"Well I have been told that before." Takamina said trying to hide the fact that she was ticked.
"Hey apolagize to Takamina! Only I'm allowed to make fun of her height." Acchan said.
"Apolagize now!" Acchan was getting angry.
"Takamina take Acchan back to her room." Mariko said holding Acchan back preventing her from attacking the reporter.
"Come one Acchan. Let's go to your room and I can paint your nails."
"Ok!"
The two walked away holding hands.
"Um aren't they a little too casual for doctor and patient? They're acting like a boy friend and girl friend." the reporter said.
"Every doctor has a different way of handling their patients. Takahashi just happens to use the more friendly method and there's nothing wrong with that." Mariko said defending her friend.
"Good point."
Mariko and the reporter walked down to Jurina and Rena's room. When Jurina saw the cameras, she immediately began to go into protective mode.
"The one standing is Matsui Jurina and the one sitting is Matsui Rena. THe two are sisters and are very attached to each other." Mariko said.
"I'm guessing you're the most dangerous?" the reporter said to Jurina.
"No but I will be in a minute."
"Easy Jurina." Mariko said pushing Jurina back a little.
"Actually, the most dangerous one between the two is Rena."
"Her?" the reporter pointed at Rena who was hiding behind Jurina.
"She doesn't look dangerous. She looks like she couldn't hurt a fly."
"Oh you'd be suprised." Mariko said.
"Yeah. When nee-chan gets mad, she'll slaughter anyone in sight!" Jurina said.
"Jurina language please!"
"I would love to see what happens." the reporter said now eyeing Rena.
"Don't you dare touch my sister!" Jurina barked as she was about to punch the reporter.
"Jurina relax." Mariko said pushing her back.
"This one is a fighter."
"You're not helping." Mariko hissed.
When Mariko finally got Jurina to calm down, she made the reporter and the camera men leave.
"I am sorry but could you please refrain from agrivating the patients. Some are not as easy going as the others."
"But we came here to film them getting mad and angry. We need something exciting to but on TV." the reporter said.
"Well unless you want to end up in the hospital, I suggest you back off." Mariko said.
Just then, Sae came running over. She was her usual hyper genking self.
"Hi there!" she shouted.
"Hello." the reporter said.
"My name's Miyazawa Sae but everyone calls me a genking. I'm always super super super excited all the time!"
"That's very nice."
"Hey is that candy?" Sae said pointing at the pocket of one of the camera men.
"Yeah here take some."
"No don't!"
Sae ate the candy and within seconds she went beserk. Sae started bouncing all over the place and running in circle and rolling on the ground.
"Why'd you do that?!" Sayaka said as she ran up to them.
"Sae can't have sugar!"
"I'm sorry I didn't know." the camera man said.
"Oh I'm sure you are. Sae put that down! Fire extinguishers are not rockets!"
Down the hall you could see Sae sitting on a fire extinguisher with the nozzle in the back. She started making rocket engine sounds and shaking all over.
"Prepare for blast off!" she shouted.
Then Sae pulled the pin and the extinguisher went off sending her flying down the hall.
"Dang it Sae!" Sayaka said running after her.
"Let's get moving."
Mariko started to walk when she suddenly tripped over something. She looked over and saw Mayuyu who was perfectly huddled on the ground reading a manga.
"Hello Mariko." she said.
"Who is this?" the reporter asked.
"This is Watanabe Mayu. A patient here. Where's Yukirin?" Mariko said.
"Behind you."
"Hello."
The two camera men stepped to the side to reveal Yukirin who was apparently there the whole time.
"This is Kashiwagi Yuki who is a doctor here. Mayu is her patient."
"Nice to meet you." Yukirin said.
"You suprised me." the reporter said.
"I do that a lot."
"Why is your patient out in the hall?"
"Because she likes to read manga out here and I like to watch her."
"I see."
"Yes now if you excuse me I'll be taking my patient and we will be on our way."
The two left the hall and into a room.
"I think she has the most well behaved patients here." the reporter said.
"Oh you have no idea."
Just then, there was a loud bang coming down from Haruna's room. Soon after, Haruna came out with Acchan on her back riding her like a horse.
"Faster, faster!" she said.
"Get her off me!" Haruna screamed.
"Get off my Nyannyan!" Yuko said charging at Acchan.
"You go film that!" the reporter said to one of thecamera men.
Then at the other end of the hall, Jurina and Mayuyu came rolling at punching at each other.
"Give me back my sailor moon magic wand!" Mayuyu said.
"No way! I wanted to play with it!" Jurina said.
"Get that, get that!" the reporter said.
"Find that Rena girl! I want to see her fight too. More violence! More insanity!'
"What's wrong with you?" Mariko said.
"This is what the people want to see!"
"No it's what you want to see!"
Everyone was in total chaos. Mayuyu and Yukirin were fighting, Acchan and Yuko are wrestling over Haruna, Sae was on a sugar rush, and all the doctors were useless. Things were getiting really bad. But then things got worse when one of the camera men started beatinig Rena.
"Get angry! Go nuts! You're a freak, a lunatic, a monster!" the camera man shouted.
"Jurina!" Rena cried.
"Leave my sister alone!" Jurina said as she attacked the camera man.
"Acchan get off Haruna!" Takamina said trying to pry Acchan off Haruna.
"No I'm not done with ger yet!" Acchan said.
"Leave my Nyannyan alone!" Yuko said punching Acchan.
"Sae stop running!" Sayaka said as Sae ran down the hall carrying a chair.
Sae slipped and the chair went flying. It hit Mariko right on her head. When the chair impacted, Mariko fell to the ground. She was almost going to black out when something inside her just snapped. Mariko got up and only Yukirin and Mayuyu noticed the dark aura coming from Mairko as they ran into another room. Mariko walked over to Acchan and grabbed her by the leg. Then she pulled Acchan off Haruna like she was nothing and threw her at Takamina.
"Acchan!" Takamina said as she caught the girl mid air and fell back.
Then Mariko separated Yuko and Haruna by thowing Yuko across the hall.
"Yuko!" Haruna screamed as she ran down to her.
Mariko then walked over to Sae who was still running around like crazy. She waited for the right moment and right when Sae was going to run past Mariko, Mariko stuck her arm out and closed lined Sae knocking her out cold. Once that was done, Mariko walked over to the Jurina who was on top of the camera man attacking his face. She picked up Jurina one handed and slammed her against the walll. Jurina slid down the wall and landed right next to Rena. Then Mariko grabbed the two men and shoved them into the reporter.
"Hey what do you think you're-"
Mariko just stared at the reporter with the darkest glare she had ever given.
"Get out. Get out right now! Don't you ever come back and if you do, I'll show you something crazy." Mariko said.
Mariko punched the reporter and then pulled out a scalpal she had in her pocket. She got on top of the reporter and waved the scalpal in the reporter's face. Then borrowing Rena's words,
"Hey... you mad? You wanna see something scary?"
Mariko gave the reporter the most wicked smile that even made Rena shiver. Mariko raised the scapal and brought it down on the reporter. But right before the blade hit, something stopped her. Mariko looked over and saw Miichan was holding onto her arm.
"Gachapin let go!" Mariko barked.
"NO!" Miichan then wrapped her arms around Mariko and gave her a reassuring hug.
This snapped Mariko out of her anger mode and she calmed down. Mariko got up and said to the reporter,
"The people here are not animals. They are not your toys that you use for your own entertainment. They are patients that need help and it's my job to make sure they get it."
Then Sayaka escorted the whole group out of the facility. Everyone just stared at Mariko trying to figure out what just happened. Mariko had snapped and showed everyone the full force of Mariko's anger. Mariko just looked at everyone and then finally said,
"Sorry everyone. I guess I went to far trying to protect you guys."
The next day, the reporter had broadcasted the film taken at the facility. It showed everyone going nuts. They didn't even bother showing the actual good footage where everyone was calm.
Mariko sat there watching the TV when Miichan walked over and handed her a cup of tea.
"Don't listen to them. They're full of dirt." she said.
"Thanks." Mariko said.
"Hey Mariko what was that on that day? It was like you snapped and became a whole new person."
"I don't know. I think everyone is starting to rub off on me."
"Be careful. I don't want to see you in a straight jacket. But then again, that actually might be kinda hot."
"Shut up Gachapin."
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Well there's Chapter 16! I tried to put in as much madness as I could. Ahh it feels good to be back. And a special thanks to miayaka for helping me when I was down. I owe you one! Anyways, I hope you all enjoyed it and please tell me what you think!
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I hate that repoter :scolding:
awww I like it so much :shy2:
please cantinue update soon :onioncheer:
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And Mariko shows why she is called Mariko-sama :thumbup
"Why is your patient out in the hall?"
"Because she likes to read manga out here and I like to watch her."
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: That the way to go, Yukirin! Proudly declare your affection towards your adorable otaku patient! But gosh, stealthy Black Yukirin can give one heart attacks with her sudden appearances :lol:
I'm glad you decided to continue this series. Insanity is goooood! :twothumbs Keep up the awesome work and squeeze all the craziness out of your amazing characters!
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I'm really glad you decided to continue!
Mariko x Miichan is really cute :D
The reporters are evil :thumbdown:
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wow i've been gone for a day and you updated already 2 chapters :shocked
it's super funny :rofl:
and crazy and super mariko is epic!!!
but i hate the reporter anyways...that reporter should die... :angry:
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WOW....
Shinoda is becoming Like Rena...COOOL
They All Fighting ... except Rena
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Hello everyone! Today's chapter is going to be another battle of awesomness!! I present to you: Kojiyuu vs Atsumina! I hope you enjoy reading this chapter. Let the battle begin!
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Chapter 17
Mariko was talking to Sayaka when she heard a scream coming down from the hall. Mariko ran down and couldn't believe what she was watching. There on the ground was Takamina and Yuko wrestling each other. Mariko stood there for a moment trying to figure out what was going on. But she didn't have time and just tried separating the two. When she finally got them to stop fighting, she asked,
"What are you two doing?!"
"The squirrel here went too far!" Takamina said.
"No the midget went too far!" Yuko protested.
"Ok one at a time!" Mariko said.
"Takamina what did Yuko do?"
"She touched my Acchan!"
"What do you mean?"
"She grouped Acchan and told her inappropriate things!"
"Yuko is that true?" Mariko said looking over at Yuko.
"Yeah I grouped her. I did what you still haven't done yet." Yuko said.
"What does that mean?"
"Acchan told me how she wished Takamina would be more touchy with her like I am with Nyannyan. And Takamina being the stubborn midget she is won't listen!"
"There's no way Acchan would think such dirty things! Acchan is pure and would never think that!" Takamina said.
"She's 19 and still hasn't done it yet. She's practically a cat in heat!"
"Don't you dare say that about Acchan!"
Takamina got back up and charged at Yuko. But then Mariko got in the way and knocked Takamina back down.
"Stay!" Mariko said.
"Now Yuko what did Takamina do?"
"She told my Nyannyan she wasn't attractive and kept gloating on how great her prescious Acchan is. She made Nyannyan cry!" Yuko said.
"Only becasue she called Acchan a brat!" Takamina said.
"Because she is!"
"Alright both of you calm down!" Mariko said.
"God they're like two husbands fighting over something stupid." Mariko thought.
"Where's Haruna and Acchan now?" Mariko asked.
"In Haruna's room." Takamina said.
"Then let's go get them and talk this through. Otherwise I'm hooking you both up to a shock wave therapy machine. Got it?"
The two silently nodded their heads. Together, the three of them walked down to Haruna's room. They could hear screams coming from inside. Mariko opend the door and Haruna and Acchan came racing out. Haruna was on top of Acchan with a pencil in her hand getting ready to stab Acchan.
"Acchan!"
Takamina quickly pulled Haruna off Acchan and threw her to the side.
"Nyannyan!" Yuko said as she ran over to Haruna.
"What happened?" Mariko asked.
"Tell the air head she's wrong about Takamina!" Mariko screamed.
"Tell the princess what she said about Yuko was all lies!" Haruna sceamed back.
"Great now the wives are fighting." Mariko thought.
"Tell me what happened!" Mariko screamed at the both of them.
Acchan was the first to speak.
"This air head said that Takamina was lame because she was short and not good at romance like Yuko."
"Because she is and you know it!" Haruna said.
"Why you!"
Acchan tried to get up by Takamina held her down.
"The little princess told me Yuko was eyeing other girls besides me because I don't pay enough attention to her!" Haruna said.
"Because you don't! Why do you think she grouped me? Because she found me more attractive than you!" Acchan barked.
"Shut up!" Haruna tried to get up but Yuko pushed her back.
"Hey control your girl!" Yuko said.
"You control your pet!" Takamina said.
"What'd you say?"
"I'm gonna kill you!"
Pretty soon all four of them were in a heated battle Takamina and Yuko were punching the day lights out of each other while Haruna and Acchan were tearing at each other's hair and leaving all kinds of cat scratches. It was like watching a soap opera you see on TV when two familes get into a heated arguement. Mariko had to stop them before they seriously injured each other. She stood there trying to figure out a way to break them up. Then it hit her. Mariko ran into the other room and came back with a bucket full of water. She dumped it on the four girls making them stop in their tracks.
"Hey!" Takamina said.
"What was that for?" Yuko asked.
"To get you guys to stop fighting." Mariko said.
"Well it got us but not them." Takamina pointed over to Haruna and Acchan who were still fighting.
Having no choice, Mariko walked over and slapped both of them in the face.
"Hey that hurt!" Acchan said."
"Yeah!" Haruna agreed.
"Well it got you two to stop fighting so to me it worked." Mariko said.
"Now listen. You guys need to stop this arguing and just apolagize."
"Never!" Acchan said.
"No way!" Haruna said.
"Takamina, Yuko?"
"NO!" they both said.
"Fine then I have no choice."
After a half hour of stuggling, Mariko finally finished tightening the last restraint.
"What's the meaning of this?" Takamina asked trying to free herself from her restraints.
"What's with the patches?" Yuko asked.
"This." Mariko held up a remote and pressed a button causing Yuko to be shocked.
"Ow that hurts!"
"That's the point."
"Why are we tied like this?" Acchan said.
"This isn't fair!" Haruna said.
"Well it's the only way to get you two to stop fighting and do what I say." Mariko said.
"Now we're going to talk things through like adults and if you refuse..."
Mariko hit a switch and all four of them got a shock.
"Let's begin. Haruna how about you start by apalogizing to Acchan." Mariko said.
Haruna remained silent.
"Well if none of you go then I'll just flip the switch."
"Wait wait I'll do it!" Takamina said.
"Thank you for being the adult."
Takamina looked over at Yuko with a serious face in a sinciere voice she said,
"Yuko, I'm sorry for the way I behaved and I hope you can forgive and when this is all over we can still be good friends."
"Thank you Takamina and I'm sorry too." Yuko said.
"I went to far and forgot how much Acchan meant to you. I hope we can still be friends ofter this too."
"See? Now that wasn't so bad." Mariko said.
Mariko was glad Takamina was the first to stand up.
"Now are you two ready?"
Acchan and Haruna remained silent. Well since no one is answering..."
Maaiko pressed two buttons and both Haruna and Yuko started screaming.
"You ready to apalogize now?"
They both nodded their heads.
"Alrigiht then Haruna you go first."
"Acchan I'm sorry for what I said about Takamina. She's actually a great person and you're lucky to have her." Haruna said.
"Thank you and I'm sorry for saying all those harsh things about Yuko. I was mad and wasn't thinking right." Acchan said.
"Good. Now is everyone happy?" Mariko asked.
"YES!" everyone answered.
"Alright then I'll untie you."
Once everyone was released, they all went back to being their usual selves. Feelinig satisfyed with herself, Mariko decided to take a quick nap before her next appointment. About a half hour later, Mariko woke up only she found herself in a different room. She was also strapped to a chair and couldn't move. Mariko started to get really scared when she saw the shock patches on her arms. She looked up and saw Yuko, Haruana, Acchan and Takamina all smiling at her. Then Takamina pulled out the same remote she had used on them.
"Payback time!" they all happily chimed.
Mariko grabbed onto her chair preparing herself for what was probably going to be the second most painful thing in her life.
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Well there's chapter 17! I hope everyone enjoyed reading. I tried not to make the battele as intense as Mayuki's and Wmatsui's because it wouldn't seem right having Acchan shoving a pencil into Yuko's leg you know? It just doesn't fit them. Anyways, please tell me what you think and look forward for the next chapter!
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man :rofl: :rofl: it's like the doctors are going to be insane too :rofl: :rofl:
the chapter is...crazy XD and poor Mariko... :rofl: she's not going to get away from that :rofl:
please continue writing, miyumi-san, it's great!! :thumbup and i love it! :thumbup
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Great chapter. Mariko snapping out.... HILARIOUS!!!!!
KojiYuu vs AtsuMina... EPIC!!!
Update soon! :thumbup
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2 chapters updated! sugooiiii..
thank you miyu! :twothumbs
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Mariko went nuts is sure scary :nervous :nervous
I wonder if the others doctors have been nuts before too :roll: :lol:
husbands and wives fighting hilarious and poor Mariko got shocked in the end XD
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New reader here! I read your whole story in one day, it's seriously too funny. And you update fast too! I love it XD
I think the best part was last chapter when the reporter hit Rena and tried to make her go into Gekikara mode LOL.
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Yeeeeeah!!! ajajja kojiyuu and atsumina are the best!!! :cow: Arigatoou :deco:
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Hello! Today's chapter is about Mayuyu and Yukirin's fun liitle trip. The little otaku is going to get the biggest surprise of her life. Keep reading to find out where they go and what happens. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 18
Mariko was sitting at her desk reading a book when Yukirin walked in.
"What's up?" Mariko asked.
"Uh I was wondering if you could help me with something." Yukirin said.
"What is it?"
"Well tomorrow is the anniversary of Mayuyu and I being together so I wanted to something special."
"Wait anniversary. How long have you two been together?"
Yukirin held up two fingers.
"Two years?!" Mariko said surprised.
"Yep." Yukirin said proudly.
"So I wanted to do something special."
"So what do you need my help for?"
Yukirin reached into her bag and pulled out a poster with an anime character on it. Written on it in giant letters was "OTAKU CONVENTION."
"I was wondering if you could take Mayuyu and I there." Yukirin shyly said obviously embarrassed by the subject.
"Why can't you take her?" Mariko asked.
"Because my car got towed yesterday. I accidently got into a wreck trying at avoid hitting a cat."
"Ohh well that's ok. I'll take you."
"Great! Thank you so much! Oh and there's one more thing." Yukirin said.
"What?" Mairko said knowing there was some sort of catch.
"Welll since it's an otaku convention, there's going to be a lot of cosplayers. Mayuyu and I are both going to cosplay and so you need to as well."
"Come again?"
Mariko pulled into the parking lot and her, Yukirin and Mayuyu all came out.
"I can't believe we're here!" Mayuyu said jumping up and down.
"This is the best thing you've ever done for me!"
"Thank you. But don't forget to thank Mariko." Yukirin said.
"Thanks Mariko."
"No problem. Just one thing, why do I have to be dressed like this?" Mariko said.
"Because this was the only character I could think of that would work for you!" Mayuyu said.
"Who is the person I'm cosplaying as anyways?"
"I already told you, you're Sado from the popular drama Majisuka Gakuen. I'm Nezumi and Yukirin is Black."
"And you guys look very nice." Mariko said examining their outfits.
Mayuyu's character Nezumi was wearing tan boots, a pink hooded jacket with the hood up, and the school uniform with leggings. Yukirin's character was Black who was wearing a long skirt and a black and white jacket with a dragon on it. Mariko's character was a person called Sado and she was wearing the same long skirt and uniform but also a grey and white fuzzy jacket with a music symbol on it.
"I look nothing like her!" Mariko protested.
"No you look more like her twin right Yukirin!" Mayuyu said showing her a picture.
Yukirin nodded her head in total agreement.
"Alright now let's go we're wasting day light!"
They walked inside and was over whelmed by the armount of people that showed up. There was a variety of anime stands to video games. Cosplayers were everywhere and there were so many posters of animes. Mariko looked over to Mayuyu who looked like a kid in the candy store.
"Ahh this is so cool!" Mayuyu said.
"Hey look it's the Hetalia Axis Powers!"
Mayuyu ran over to the boothe and Yukirin and Mariko had to follow. Mayuyu grazed the shelves looking at figurines, mangas, CD's and posters.
"Oo Yukirin can I get this?!" Mayuyu asked pointing at a figureine.
"Sure. How much is it?" Yukirin asked taking out her wallet.
"10,000 yen."
"What!"
"Mayuyu that's way too much for a doll." Mariko said.
"But I don't have this one!"
"I'm sorry Mayuyu but it's too much." Yukirin said.
Mayuyu looked like she was about to cry when the boothe owner came over.
"Hey nice Majisuka cosplay." she said.
When the owner saw Mariko, she squealed.
"Oh my gosh it's Sado!" she said.
"Yeah so what?" Mariko said.
"Well I was wondering if you could give me that glare she has when she's fighting an oppenent." the owner said now fangirling over Mariko.
"No way."
"If you do you can have anything in this boothe for free."
"Seriously? Do it Mariko!" Mayuyu said punching Mariko.
"Alright hang on."
Mariko took a minute to figure out the stare. Then she lowered her head a little, slanted her eye brows and looked up giving the feeling that she's going to beat the owner.
"Ahhh so cool! Take what ever you want!" the boothe owner said.
"Then I'll take that figure and those two CD's." Mayuyu said.
"Nice job." Yuikirin said.
"Let's go see what other free stuff we can get."
For the next hour, the three girls went from boothe to boothe getting all kinds of free stuff thanks to Mariko. She would do weird things like the glares and some phrases she said. One person actually asked Mariko to punch them which she gladly did since this person was previously trying to feel her up. Yukirin and Mayuyu also had to stuff that the characters did in the show. Yukirin had to recite words from the bible and Mayuyu had to do weird little dances and say certain phrases.
"Wow these guys are good." people started to say.
"They're so cool!" fangirls would scream.
Word got around that there were three girls in Majisuka cosplay that were supposedly really good. Soon, Mariko could see people staring at her and following them.
"Hey Mayuyu I think we should leave." Mariko said.
"No way. This is just starting to get fun." Mayuyu said.
"But Mayuyu it's getting late. Maybe we should leave." Yukirin said who also noticed the crowd of people behind them.
"Come on Yukirin. This is really fun."
"Mayuyu turn around." Mariko said.
The otaku turned around and was immediately startled by all the eyes staring at her.
"Look it's Nezumi, Black, and Sado!" someone screamed.
"Someone take a picture!"
The three girls were blasted by bright flashes from people's cameras. Then they were swarmed by people. Mariko tried slapping people getting them to back off but everytime she hit them they would ask for more.
"Mayuyu!" Yukirin said.
Mariko looked over and saw Mayuyu slowly beginning to be swallowed by the group of people. Mariko reacted by grabbing her by her hood and picked her up. Then she kicked her way over to Yukirin and grabbed her hand.
"Run!" Mariko said as she broke through the crowd.
They ran all the way back to the car and by then they had lost the crowd.
"Man that was close!" Mariko said.
"That was fun!" Mayuyu said.
"We're not going back." Yukirin said giving Mayuyu a cold stare.
The three loaded into the car when they were about to leave but then Mayuyu stopped them.
"Wait I forget something!" she said.
"We're not going back in there!" Mariko said.
"But it's really important!"
"Hang on I'll go get it!" Yukirin said as she stepped out of the car.
Mariko wasn't sure what she just saw but the next thing she knew, Yukirin was back in less than five seconds.
"Is this it?" Yukirin asked.
"Yeah! Wow Yukirin you're fast." Mayuyu said.
"I can do anything for Mayuyu."
"Aww I love you!" Mayuyu kissed Yukirin who began blushing.
"What is it anyways?" Mariko asked.
"This the music used in the anime "Elfin Lied." Mayuyu said.
"Yukirin ran back for a music box?"
"Mayuyu." Yukirin looked at Mayuyu disappointed.
"Open it!"
Yukirin opened the box and the music started playing. Then inside, there was a note saying, "Happy Anniversay Yukirin." There was also a black cross with Yukirin's name engraved it in.
"Oh Mayuyu..." Yukirin was speechless.
"You like it?" Mayuyu said putting the cross on Yukirin.
"I love it!" Yukirin hugged Mariko and started to cry.
"Happy anneversary Yukirin."
Mariko sat there thinking watching the scene like it was a romance movie. Mariko thought she was going to cry when she thought of something. When Yukirin left to go get the box, she didn't even see Yukirin leave. All she saw was a black blur. Then Mariko remembered how Yukirin's character Black has super speed. Mariko started to think that maybe when Yukirin cosplays, she obtains the same ability as the character. Mariko hoped Yukirin wouldn't cosplay at the facility.
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Well there's chapter 18! I hope you all liked it with the Otaku in her wonderland. Please tell me what you think and look forward to for the next chapter!
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wow I like it :luvluv1:
I want more Mayukii :luvluv2:
cantinue it's good :on GJ:
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Yukirin and Mayuyu are really sneaky. I mean, they've been together for 2 years already! Man, where is the professional relationship between doctors and patients in this mental facility? :lol: Not that I'm complaining, of course :grin:
Love this MaYuki chapter! These two are always so sweet together. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter (and more MaYuki moments)! :deco:
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i'm late again for the reply.... :frustrated:you really are a fast updater!!!! :hehehe:
atsumina vs kojiyuu battle is like world war 3!!!! so epic!! :hiakhiakhiak:
my two fav couple in akb!!! FTW!!
hahahaha mayuyu in her otaku land...hahahhaa :on lol:
more mayuki!!!! :on GJ:
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Yaaay, Mayuki my favorite. This was so cute! and it was hilarious how all those people chased after them XD
wow, you really are a fast at updating, it's great lol.
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Man, that was great!!! :thumbup
the otaku world is really insane :lol: :lol:
and Mayuki is super sweet! :heart: :heart:~LOL~
please update soon :) i love it, miyumi-san!!! :love: :love:
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LOL :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:
MAyuyu and Yukirin......aka NezumiXBlack so much Funny :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco:
more! a want more
heheh thanks :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Hello everyone! Today's chapter is about someone who I haven't talked about in a while. I'm sorry for all you atsumina, kojiyuu and mayuki fans but don't worry they'll have a part too in the next chapter. I'm just trying to make it where all the characters get their own screen time you know? It's hard! Anyways, please enjoy!
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Chapter 19
Mariko was sitting on her desk when all of the sudden an alarm went off. This alarm wasn't like a fire alarm but more like a nuclear bomb alarm. Everyone accept Mariko knew what was going on and quickly ran into their rooms. Mariko saw Takamina and Acchan running by and stopped them to ask what was happening.
"Hey what's going on?" Mariko asked.
"No time. Just get inside!" Takamina said with a scared look on her face.
"Hurry Takamina!" Acchan screamed.
The two ran off and quickly got into a room. Mariko stood there not sure what was happening. But then bars came down on all the doors locking everyone in. There was a rumble and then a huge blast. Something ran past Mariko nearly knocking her back. She didn't see it but she recgonized that genking laugh.
"Was that Sae?" she thought.
A couple seconds later, Sayaka came down only she wasn't in her usual doctor's outfit. Sayaka was wearing a black tank top with a bullet proof vest, army green pants with combat boots and black gloves. She also had a sash with syringes and grenades attatched to it and a small hand gun.
"What's with the war get up?" Mariko asked.
"Sae." Sayaka said.
"What about her?"
"She had sugar. A LOT of sugar."
"How much?"
"She found a secret stash someone had which was three buckets full."
"Oh god." Mariko said now realizing the danger.
"Yeah you think she's hyper when she has one piece well when she eats three buckets full, it's like you set off a nuclear bomb." Sayaka said.
"So is that why everyone is locked in their room and the alarms went off?"
"Yeah. When Sae gets like this, she's really nuts. She just keeps running and if you're in the way you get sent flying back through walls. Last time she got like this, I ended up in the hospital with four broken ribs, a broken arm and a concussion."
"Good lord."
"Yeah which is why I have to stop her."
"Why?" Mariko asked.
"Because when Sae's on a extreme sugar rush like this, her heart is beating at an incredibly fast rate. If it becomes too fast, then the blood can't keep up with the heart and just explodes on itself. She could basically die if we don't stop her." Sayaka said.
"Well seeing how I'm locked out, is it ok if I help?"
"That would be wonderful."
A couple minutes later, Mariko and Sayaka had set up a little base. They had set a rope trap so that when Sae ran through, she would be lifted right off her feet. The only thing left was to wait. Within seconds, Sae came racing down with incredible speeds. Mariko watched Sae step into the trap but she was too quick for the trap to set off and by the time it did it was too late.
"Dang it!" Sayaka said.
"So what's plan B?" Mariko asked.
The next plan was to catch her by suprise. Sayaka had set up a plate with some candy on it in the middle of the hall. Then they hid behind some boxes and waited for Sae to come running down. Soon enough, Sae came running down and saw the candy. She stopped and leaned down to eat it.
"Now!"
Both Mariko and Sayaka jumped down on Sae and tried to sedate her. But she was strong and blasted the two doctors backed. Mariko slammed against the wall and Sayaka actually went up and hit the ceiling and then fell back down to the ground. Sae laughed and ran away again.
"You ok?" Sayaka asked as she slowly got up.
"Yeah? You?" Mariko asked straightning out her back.
"I'm good. We need to rethink out stradegy."
"How? She's too fast for traps and too strong for us to hold down."
"Well there is one more way but it's kind of drastic."
"What do you mean?"
A half hour later, Mariko finally figured out what Sayaka meant.
"Why do I have to be the bait!" Mariko protested.
"Because someone has to shoot her and since you don't know how I'm going to." Sayaka said.
"But still, why do I have to wear this?"
Mariko was referring to the bikini top and bottom entirely made out of candy.
"It's the only way to make sure she doesn't run away. While she's trying to eat your clothes, you grab her and I'll shoot her with the sedative." Sayaka said.
"How long will it take the sedative to take effect?"
"About two seconds. This sedative is powerful enough to take down a buffalo. It would kill a regular person but when Sae is in this kind of mode it won't."
"Ok. Where did you even get this thing?"
"Yuko gave to me as some sick joke."
"Of course. Yuko. Perverted squirrel..."
"Here she comes! Get ready!"
Sayaka hid behind some boxes and loaded the gun. Meanwhile Mariko stood half naked completely defensless with a candy bikini being her only protection. Sae came running down and when she saw Mariko, her eyes nearly popped out of her head. Mariko knew Sae was only focusing on the candy but she still blushed as Sae stared at her.
"CANDY!" Sae shouted as she ran to Mariko and tackled her knocking her down.
Mariko did what Sayaka told her and wrapped her arms and legs around Sae to make sure she didn't escape.
"Sayaka now!" Mairko shouted.
There was no answer. There was nothing moving in the place Sayaka was hiding. Mariko looked back at Sae who was ready to take her first bite out of her bikini.
"Sayaka!"
Right before Sae took a bite, there was a loud whiping sound and soon after Sae fell on top of Mariko.
"Ahhh!"
Mariko quickly pushed Sae off her and stood up. She looked over and saw Sayaka standing with her gun still pointed at Sae.
"Where did you go?" Mariko said really angry at Sayaka.
"I moved from my previous spot because if I had shot there, the sedative would've missed and hit you. Then you would've been dead." Sayaka said.
"Ohhh.." Mariko looked down now realizing the reason for her firends actions.
"Anyways, thanks for helping. I couldn't have done it by myself."
"No problem you just owe me one. Hey when do the bars unlock from everyone's door?"
"Right about now."
"What?"
There was a loud buzz and the bars were raised from the doors. Everyone came out and saw Mariko in her candy bikini and was utterly shocked. Takamina and Acchan were blushing like crazy, Yukirin and Mayuyu were speechless, Jurina was covering Rena's eyes along with her own, Haruna was covering her eyes but Yuko was staring at Mariko like crazy. She actually had a bloody nose. Then when Miichan came out and when she saw Mariko, she passed out right there on the floor.
"Don't look!" Mariko screamed trying to cover herself.
"We're sorry Mariko we didn't know!" Takamina said as she took Acchan back to her room.
"We didn't know you were into those kind of things." Mayuyu said as she pushed the still speechless Yukirin into their room.
"Rena let's get away from this pervert!" Jurina said still covering Rena's eyes and walking her back to their room.
"You look hot!" Yuko said.
"Hey! Just for that you're being punished tonight!" Haruna said as she dragged Yuko back to their room.
"Sayaka! Now everyone thinks I'm a weird pervert!" Mariko screamed.
"Sorry Mariko. You'll have to figure it out yourself." Sayaka said as she dragged Sae away.
"Mou!"
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Well there's chapter 19! I hope you all liked it. The next chapter is going to be another 2 parter so get ready! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
I can't stop laughing, ~LOL~ :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Sae is as strong as a buffalo when she goes nuts :rofl: :rofl:
and poor Mariko :lol: now everyone is gonna think differently about her :rofl: :rofl:
i admire this chapter :rofl: :rofl: so crazy :thumbup :thumbup
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Georgeous
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LOL..i imagine mariko with the outfit..LOL..
any sweets should be destroyed from the mad house or genking will destroy the mad house..LOL..
can't wait for another chapter..
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:lol: :lol: :lol: I feel sorry for you Mariko, but it's just too hilarious :lol: :lol: :lol:
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lmao while reading this..
great chap! :twothumbs
next chapter on the way i guess.. am i right miyu? :lol:
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Hello everyone! In chapter 10, everyone in the mad house went on a sepcial trip. Now ten chapters later, they're going on another trip! Like chapter 10, chapter 20 is also going to be a 2 parter. Please enjoy and look forward to the next part.
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Chapter 20 part 1
"Hey Mariko guess what?" Takamina said.
"What is it?" Mariko said.
"We're going on another trip!"
"Great. Where is it this time?"
"The director owns a ski resort up in the moutians. I hope you have a warm jacket because it's cold!"
"Seriously? A ski resort? Is the director a millionare?"
"No I think she's a billionare."
"What the heck!"
"Anyways, get ready because we're going to be leaving soon."
"Ok."
After a half hour, everyone was loaded onto a bus and drove up the mountain for four hours. When they arrived, they were all suprised at how large the ski resort was. Everyone went inside and changed into their snow gear. Then they all headed out for some fun in the snow. Mariko was already waiting for the others when Takamina and Acchan came out. Acchan was wearing a pink fluffy jacket while Takamina wore a blue one. They both had matching hats and gloves and Acchan had a scarf that was attached to Takamina. Mariko wondered if that was safe.
"Hey Takamina let's go make a snow man." Acchan said.
"Yeah! We'll make a really big one!" Takamina said.
Mariko watched the two rush outside into the cold air. She could hear them both scream "COLD" Soon after, Haruna and Yuko came out. Yuko was in a brown jacket with black snow pants and a hat. She was also carrying a snow board. Haruna was wearing a red coat with fluff on the hood and snow pants. She also had boots on but they looked big on her which made her look like a fisherman.
"Come one Nyannyan I wanna ride down the mountain!" Yuko said.
"Slow down! It's hard to walk in these boots." Haruna said.
As they left, Rena and Juina came out. Jurina was wearing a orange jacket while Rena was wearing a yellow jacket. Jurina had a puppy hat and Rena had a kitty hat and their gloves matched their hats. Mariko noticed that Rena was dragging a sled behind her.
"Come on Rena. Let's go sled down the hill." Jurina said.
"Ok as long as I can hold onto you." Rena said taking Jurina's hand.
"Sure."
"Curse her and her cuteness." Mariko thought as the two walked outside.
"Let's go Yukirin!"
Mariko looked over and saw Mayuyu in a light pink jacket with bunny ears on the hood.
"I would if you would help!"
Yukirin was wearing a white jacket with brown boots and a red hat. She was carrying a large sled that looked like it could fit thirteen people.
"Why are we bringing this thing?" Yukirin asked having a hard time carrying it.
"Because I like to relax when I sled." Mayuyu said.
"Don't give me that excuse!"
When the two were outside, Sae and Sayaka came out. Sae was in a dark blue jacket and Sayaka was in black one.
"Why aren't you out there?" Sayaka asked.
"I was making sure everyone was out. I don't want to lose anyone like last time. Sae doesn't have any fireworks right?" Mariko said staring directly at Sae.
"Don't worry I didn't bring any this time. Just hot coco which she isn't allowed to have." Sayaka said.
"Hey no fair!" Sae pouted.
"Well this is punishment for last time. Now let's get going."
They walked outside and Mariko was hit with a blast of cold air causing her to shiver. She walked down to the snow where everyone was having fun.
"Hey Mariko help us out!"
Mariko walked over to Takamina and Acchan who were making a monumental snowman. They were about done but neither one of them were tall enough to put the last part on top. When Mariko got it on top, she put on the rest of the parts that made a snow man.
"Yay! Snowman complete!" Takamina said.
"Now let's destroy it!" Acchan said.
"Yeah!"
Takamina walked to the side adn grabbed two large sticks. Then together with Acchan, the two started beating the snowman.
"Poor snowman." Mariko thought as the head fell off.
Mariko was just standing there when something past her spraying her with snow.
"Hey!"
"Sorry!" Yuko shouted as her and Sayaka raced down the mountain on their snow boards.
It actually looked kind of fun and Mariko wanted to try it but she was too scared. She looked over to the side and saw Rena and Jurina riding their sled down a small hill.
"They look so cute." Mariko thought.
Next to them was Sae and Haruna making snow angels. Haruna was doing it right but Sae looked like she was having a seziure and hers looked like it got hit by a car. Meanwhile, Yukirin and Mayuyu were using that giant sled of theres as a ramp while Mayuyu went down the hill on a smaller sled. She watched Mayuyu go flying when she hit the ramp. Mariko thought she was going to crash but then the otaku made it.
"Mayuyu that was dangerous!" Yukirin said.
"Yukirin you give it a try!" Mayuyu said.
Yukirin hesitated at first but then she went down the hill. Yukirin went up and when she came down, she landed face first into the snow. There was silence but then Yukirin popped her head up with snow all over her face and a huge smile.
"That was fun! Let's do it again!"
"That's the spirit!"
"I wonder if they're going to be alright." Mariko wondered.
Mariko decided to have some fun of her own. She picked up some snow and made it into a ball. Then she snuck up behind Takamina and nailed her right in the head.
"Hey!" Takamina said as she stood up.
Takamina made a snow ball and threw it at Mariko only to miss by a lot.
"Ha you missed!"
But then Mariko got hit with a face full of snow.
"Way to go Acchan!" Takamina said hugging her lover.
"This means war!"
"Hey I wanna play too!" Mayuyu said as she walked over with Yukirin.
"Us too!" Sae, Haruna, and Sayaka all said.
"Don't forget us!" Rena, Jurina and Yuko said.
"Alright then the battle begin!" Mariko said.
Within a couple of minutes, the group was split into two teams and made their own forts. On the left side was Mariko, Jurina, Rena, Haruna, and Yuko. On the right side was Yukirin, Mayuyu, Sayaka, Sae, Acchan and Takamina. Since the right side had a one person advantage, the left side got to go first. Mariko made a snow ball and threw it at Mayuyu nailing her in the back. Then after that it was war.
"Take this!" Yuko said as she threw a snow ball at Yukirin.
"Haruna!" Mayuyu threw a snow ball at Haruna and the air head didn't see it coming so it hit right on the head.
Takamina and Acchan were both throwing snow balls at the same time while Sae was practically firing them at Mariko like a machine gun. Mariko got hit five times in the chest by Sae and three times on the back because of Acchan and Takamina. Seeing how she was out numbered, she called on Jurina for help.
"Hey Jurina help me out!" Mariko said.
"On it!"
Jurina took a snow ball the threw it at Takamina. It looked like it was going to hit Takamina but then it curved and hit Acchan.
"Nice!" Yuko said as she threw another snow ball.
Jurina threw another curve ball and it hit Yukirin right in the butt.
"Ahh snow got in my pants!" she screamed as she stood up and started shaking her butt.
"Yukirin cut it out and keep attacking!" Takamina said.
"No let her be! I like it!" Yuko said.
"Yuko you pervert!" Haruna said as she threw a snow ball at Yuko's face.
"Hey no hitting people on the same team!" Mariko said.
Just then a super fast snow ball shot past Takamina's head and hit Sae right in face. Mariko looked over and asked who threw it. No one raised their hand but then Jurina pointed over at Rena.
"Do that again." Mariko said.
She handed the snow ball to Rena and watched the weak girl shoot the snow ball making it go twenty miles and hour. It hit Mayuyu in the stomach causing her to kneel over in pain.
"Nice! Both of you keep it up!" Mariko said.
The two Matsui sisiters working together made it seem like they were unstopable. It looked like Mariko's team was about to win but then something huge came out from behind the other team's fort. There standing there holding a giant snow ball the size of a TV was Sayaka. She was getting ready to throw the snow boulder right at the other team.
"We gotta stop her!" Mariko said.
"Everyone fire!"
All at once everyone fired at Sayaka. But nothing could stop her as she threw the snow boulder high into the air.
"Run!"
Everyone got out of the way except Rena was still sitting there. The boulder was heading straight at her and would crush the fragile girl. Mariko had no choice but to rush over and push Rena out of the way. Then the snow boulder hit Mariko crushing her. Within seconds, Mariko was out.
When Mariko woke up, she was startled by the worried eyes of Mayuyu, Yukirin, Haruna, and Yuko.
"Hey you guys she's awake!" Jurina said.
Everyone rushed over to Mariko.
"Are you alright?" Acchan asked.
"Yeah I think so." Mariko said as she tried to sit up.
But then a sharp pain shot throughout her lower body making her fall back down.
"Here." Sayaka rushed over with a cup of hot coco.
"I'm really sorry for what happened!" Sayaka said as she bowed at a ninety degree angle.
"It's fine. We we're just having fun and got a little over our heads." Mariko said.
"You sure?"
"Yes it's fine." Mairko said as she drank her coco.
"Thank you for saving me." Rena said as she hid behind her sister.
"Yeah we owe you one." Jurina said.
"I'll remember that. Hey what time is it?"
"Around nine. Why?"
"Cause I heard that there was going to be a meteor shower out tonight and since we're up here in the mountains, we'll get a really good view."
"No way!" Acchan said.
"It should be starting soon. Let's go before we miss it."
Everyone rushed outside and looked up at the sky. There were already a ton of stars out that lit up the sky.
"Hey there's one!" Yuko said.
Everyone watched as the star flew past over them. Then soon after a bunch of them started falling.
"WOW!" Acchan said.
"This is amazing!" Takamina said.
"Everyone make a wish." Mariko said.
There was a moment of silence and then everyone went back to admiring the stars.
"What did you wish for?" Acchan asked Takamina.
"I can't tell you otherwise it won't come true." Takamina replied.
"Oh then I won't tell you either!"
"What did you wish for?" Yukirin asked Mayuyu.
"My own manga store/danso cafe." Mayuyu said.
"Why does that now suprise me?" Yukirin said facepalming herself.
"What did you wish for?" Yuko asked Haruna.
"A puppy. You?" Haruna said.
"I wished to see Nyannyan in sexy underwear! But then again I see that everyday." Yuko happily said.
"You pervert!"
"What did you wish for?" Jurina asked Rena.
"To be with Jurina forever." Rena replied.
"Me too but with Rena!" Jurina said.
"What did you wish for?" Sae asked Sayaka.
"To become the strongest person in the world. You?"
"CANDY!" Sae shouted.
"That's the last thing you need. And quit shouting you want to start and avelanche?"
"But I really love CANDY!"
"SHUT UP SAE! YOU'RE GOING TO CAUSE AN AVELANCHE!"
"BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!" Takamina shouted.
Just then, there was a loud rumbling and the ground shaking.
"Takamina you idiot!" Sayaka said.
"You're one too!"
"Both of you shut up and run!" Mariko said as she started running from the huge wave of snow approaching them.
Everyone ran as fast as they could. But they were not match for mother nature and were swept up by the giant wave. The last thing Mariko remembered before she blacked out was hearing the screaming of everyone's voices. The thing Mariko wished for was to be together with everyone and help cure them but I guess that's one wish that won't come true.
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Well there's chapter 20 part 1! Did you like it? I left you with a cliff hanger to build the suspense. Part 2 will be on it's way so wait patiently. In the mean time please tell me what you think!
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Eeeeh...OMG...whats next?
I want the next update,kyaaa doki doki ..mwhat happend with everyone?do they life?...
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Snowballs war really great :twothumbs :twothumbs
They're soo cute :wub: :wub:
Poor Mariko always accompanied by disaster XD XD
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Minna! Here's part 2! I hope you enjoy the thrilling continuation of Mariko's ski adventure. Doso!
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Chapter 20 part 2
Mariko woke up to the feeling of something cold on her face. She opend her eyes and saw snow gently falling on her warm face. Mariko sat up but feel back down from the sudden shock of pain. It was then she remembered what had happened. There was an avelanche and everyone got caught up on it. Mariko had to get up and go look for them. After a couple minutes, Mariko attempted to get up again. She was succesfull this time but she was still in a great amount of pain. Mariko looked around for any kind of sign of survivors but so far she found nothiong.
"Hey you guys!" Mariko shouted.
There was no answer. Just cold silence.
"Yuko, Haruna, Acchan, Takamina!"
Again no answer.
"Man where are they?"
The sun was just starting to come up so Mariko decided to start looking. But her feet were buried two feet in the ground which made it hard to move. Yet somehow she managed to walk through. Walking through the snow was really slow and time wasting. She tried running at one point but it was a waste of energy. Mariko looked around some more but still saw nothing. Then when while she was walking, she felt something grab her boot. She lifted her foot and saw a hand holding onto it. Mariko saw this and immediately started digging up what was under the snow. The person who was holding onto Mariko was Takamina.
"Takamina!" Mariko said.
"Mari..ko"
"Hang on Takamina let's get you out of here."
Mariko pulled Takamina out from under the snow with all her strength. Takamina seemed really heavy for some reason. When she pulled Takamina, another body was dragged out. It was Acchan and she was knocked out.
"Acchan!"
Mariko ran over to Acchan and checked on her condition. She seemed alright. A lot better than Takamina. Takamina must have protected Acchan from most of the crash.
"Acchan." Takamina crawled over to Acchand and held her hand.
"She's really cold." Takamina said.
"She's alive though. Can you walk?" Mariko asked.
"Yeah I think so."
Takamina tried to stand up but fell back down.
"I think I broke my ankle." she said trying to hold her cries.
"Alright well I can't carry both you and Acchan. How about this. You and Acchan stay here while I go look for the others. If I'm not back by dark, try shouting for help or something." Mariko said.
"Are you really going to leave us like this?"
"I have no choice."
Mariko stood up and started to walk.
"Follow my tracks if you want to find me."
Mariko walked further down the mountain and didn't see anything. She tried calling out everyone's names but still didn't get an answer. Then out of the corner of her eye, she saw something move. Mariko looked over and saw something move behind a clump of snow. Mariko walked over and found Mayuyu and Yukirin.
"Mayuyu!"
"Mariko?"
Yukirin sat up and was so gald to see Mariko's face.
"Are you alright? Can you walk?" Mariko asked.
"Yeah."
"Then help me carry Mayuyu. Takamina and Acchan are up the mountain. Takamina has a broken ankle so I could really use some help."
"Ok."
Together, Yukirin and Mariko carried Mayuyu back up to where Takamina and Acchan were.
"Treat Takamina's injury and make sure Mayuyu and Acchan are alright." Mariko said.
"On it."
Yukirin reached into her coat and pulled out a small first aid kit. How lucky was Takamina. Mariko went back down the mountain past the area she found Mayuyu and Yukirin. As Mariko was walking, she saw another set of tracks leading off a different direction. She followed them to a log and saw two heads leaned against it. After looking closely, she realized it was Yuko and Haurna.
"Haruna, Yuko!"
Yuko opened her eyes and saw Mariko.
"Mariko?"
"Hey are you alright? Can you stand?" Mariko asked.
"Yeah."
Yuko stood up and stretched a little.
"How's Nyannyan?" Yuko asked.
"I think she's ok. I feel a pulse and she's breathing."
"That's good."
"The others are up ahead. Help me carry Haruna up to them."
Mariko and Yuko carried Haruna back up the mountain to where the others were. Acchan was up and now tending to Takamina but Mayuyu was still out.
"Hey you found Yuko and Haruna!" Takamina said.
"Yeah. Yukirin check on Haruna." Mariko said as she gently set Haruna down.
"Got it. Oh by the way, we found Sae and Sayaka." Yukirin said.
"Where are they?"
"They went further up the mountain to get help."
"Alright which means only Rean and Jurina are the only one's missing."
"Mariko!"
Everyone looked over and saw Jurina carrying Rena who was badly bleeding.
"Jurina!" Mariko ran over and grabbed Rena before Jurina collapsed.
"What happend?"
"When we got carried by the avelanche, we were taken into a woodsy area. We rolled down and hill and when we stopped, Rena landed right on a stick. It's in her side!" Jurina said crying.
"Juri...na?"
Rena had opened her eyes for just a couple minutes.
"Rena!"
"Jurina are you ok?" Rena weakly asked.
"I'm fine. But you got hurt!"
"It's ok. Jurina don't cry."
"You protected me from getting hurt!"
"Calm down Jurina we'll figure this out." Mariko said.
"Yukirin you got gauzes?"
"Yeah."
"Alright then get them ready. Takamina and Acchan I need you to hold Jurina back."
"What are you going to do?" Jurina asked.
"The longer we leave that stick in the higher chance she'll have of getting an infection. We have to get it out." Mariko said.
"We're gonna have to pull it out." Yukirin said.
"No you're not doing that to my sister!"
Jurina tried to stop them but Acchan and Takamina were holding back.
"Alright Yukirin get those gauzes ready." Mariko said.
"Ok here we go. Rena, Rena listen you're going to feel a lot of pain in a couple minutes to just hang in there ok?"
"Ok." Rena said.
Mariko turned Rena on her side and saw the stick where it had hit. It was in a slanted downwards angle. Mariko knew she had to pull it out at just the right angle to avoid as much tearing as possible.
"Rena get ready."
Mariko grabbed the stick and slowly began to pull it out. Rena screamed in pain and tried squirming. But Mariko was holding her down. If she moved, the stick could do more damage. Mariko continued to pull making blood drip onto the pure white snow.
"We're almost there Rena just a little bit more." Mariko said.
With one last tug, the stick came out. Rena had reached her limit and now passed out.
"Yukirin give me the gauzes."
Mariko flipped Rena's jacket and shirt revealing a dark red hole where the stick used to be. Blood was pouring out of it. Mariko folded the gauzes and began to apply pressure to stop the bleeding. Feeling the sudden pressure on her wound made Rena wake back up again and was now screaming.
"Stop it you're hurting her!" Jurina screamed.
"Do you want your sister to live or die?!" Mariko screamed back.
Jurina stopped fighting and just watched Mariko treat her injured sister.
"Yukirin give me some more gauzes."
Mariko threw the now blood soaked gauze to the side and replaced it with a new one. It landed right near Acchan causing her to freak.
"Ok most of the bleeding has stopped. Yukirin held me lift her up."
Yukirin and Mariko sat Rena up and wrapped the gauzes around her waist. Then she took off her coat and wrapped it around Rena. Having lost so much blood, Rena is really weak to the cold weather.
"Ok that should stabilizer for now. But we need to get back up to the resort and get proper tools. That stick looked like it had penetrated atleast two inches in. We need to make sure it didn't hit any vital organs." Mariko explained.
"Let me carry her." Jurina said standing up and walking over.
"Be very careful."
"I know that." Jurina gave her a nasty look.
"Alright then Yukirin you carry Mayuyu and I'll carry Haruna. Acchan you think you can carry Takamina?"
"Yeah!" Acchan said as she picked Takamina up.
"Alright then let's move."
Together, they all made their way to the mountain. By then it was around noon and Mariko was starting to get what snow boarders call white out. It's when the reflection of the snow from the suns light starts to cause temporary blindess. Mariko's vision started getting blurry and her legs wobbly from the extra weight on her back. Her entire body felt numb from the cold. They were about half way up when something fast was coming right at them. As they got closer, they realized it was Sayaka and Sae on snow moblies.
"Thank god you came!" Mariko said.
"What's the situation?" Sayaka asked.
"Rena's badly hurt and needs to get in an ER stat."
"Alright load her onto mine. I'll take her back up to the resort."
"I'm coming with!" Jurina said.
"That's fine. These snow moblies can fit four people."
"Alright then Sayaka you take Rena, Jurina and Mayuyu. Sae you take Takamina, Acchan, and Haruna. Once you get them up to the resort, come back down and pick up Yuko, Yukirin and I."
"I'll see you soon then."
Sayaka and Sae loaded everyone into the snow moblies and then set off. Meanwhile Yukirin, Yuko and Mariko started walking again. They followed the snow mobile tracks to the resort. It had been an hour later and finally Sayaka and Sae came back down. But this time they weren't on the same snow mobiles as before. These snow mobiles looked like they could only hold two people.
"Take Yuko and Yukirin. I can walk." Mariko insisted.
"Are you sure?" Yukirin asked.
"Yeah just go."
The four took off leaving Mariko all alone to walk. Mariko had continued to walk. It was taking them longer to come back down and get Mariko. Mariko's body began to feel extrememly weak and was on the verge of collapsing. But thenl finally Sayaka came back down to get her. The only problem was, Mariko couldn't see Sayaka. She could only see a blur.
"Get on." she said.
"Where are you? I can't see." Marko said.
"Not good. We need to get you back to the resort."
Sayaka helped Mariko onto the snow mobile and they rode up to the resort where the others were.
"How is Rena?" Mariko asked still not being able to see.
"She's going to be fine." Yukirin said.
"Because you treated most of the wound, we were easily able to finish it. Jurina is with her in the other room." Yukirin said.
"That's good to here." Mariko said not even facing Yukirin.
"Uh Mariko I'm over here. Are you ok?"
"She has temporary blindness." Sayaka said.
"Oh that's not good."
"I don't know how long it's going to last but it should be gone by the time we get back to the facility."
"That's good. How is Haruna and Mayuyu?" Mariko asked.
"They're both sleeping. Haruna had a concussion which we treated and Mayuyu was just knocked out. Nothing serious." Yukirin said.
"How's Takamina's ankle?"
"We got her in a wrap. She won't be able to walk for a while but I think she'll be alright with her wife constantly babying her."
"Of course. Well that's good to hear everything is alright." Mariko said.
"I'm amazed we're all alive." Yuko said.
"I guess someone wished for us to all live." Acchan said.
"Yeah maybe..."
Mariko stood there smiling to herself feeling relieved because everyone was alright.
"I guess wishes really do come true." she thought.
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Well there's chapter 20 part 2! I hope you all liked it. I put a lot of effort into it so I hope you all thought it was good. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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I really like your fic!!!!
Oh Mariko and Miichan~
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Awww wow Mariko is nice putting everyone else before her.
And the part where Sae wished for candy was hilarious LOL.
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Hahaha so hilarious!!!!! :lol:
i laughed so much at this fic!!!! XD
please continue!! :bow:
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Just manage to finish to read all chapter..
Nice story.. and really funny
The last chapter really touching
Mariko-sama
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The next few chapters are going to be contiuations of the chapters before. It's all going to lead up to one big ending so be prepared! But don't worry, it's going to be a while before the story actually reaches an end. In the mean time, I hope you all enjoy! Doso!
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Chapter 21
It was another normal day at the facility when suddenly a woman came in. She was wearing a all white but had long black hair. The woman walked up to the front desk where Mariko was.
"I'd like to speak to Maeda Atsuko." she said in a gentle voice.
"I'd like to see identificatioin." Mariko said not sure about this woman.
"Please just let me see her." she begged.
"I'm sorry but I cannot let you in unless you have and ID."
As Mariko and the woman were debating, Acchan and Takamina came out. When Acchan saw the woman, she froze right in her tracks. There was a long stare between the two and then Acchan finally said something.
"Hello mother."
"Hello Atsuko."
Mariko couldn't believe what she had just heard. The woman standing before her was Acchan's mother. After looking at her, she did look a lot like Acchan. She had her eyes and her nose. There was another long pause when Acchan's mother finally said,
"I've come to take you home."
"NO WAY!" Acchan screamed.
"You're not taking me back!"
"But Atsuko your father and I need you!"
"No I hate him and I hate you too!"
"Atsuko!"
Acchan was about ready to attack her mother when Takamina pulled her back and into another room.
"Care to explain?" Mariko asked.
Acchan's mom pulled out a business card and handed it to Mariko. Then name "Azumi Maeda" was written on it. Mariko recgonized the logo on the card which was the logo plastered all over Tokyo. This woman was the wife of the most powerful man in Tokyo right now. The Maeda family was the richest family in Tokyo and is known for their manufactured goods. Which means Acchan was the daughter.
"So why have you come here?" Mariko asked handing
"I've come to bring my daughter back home." she said.
"And why so suddenly?"
"Her father and I decided it's time for her to come home. We miss her so much."
"I'm sorry to tell you but we cannot release a patient until the patient has been cured of their illness."
"But she has no illness she's perfectly fine!" Azumi protested.
"Well the documents here say she does." Mariko said as she pulled out a file.
"According to this, not only is she suffering from her current illness but also has reported depression and anxiety attacks. According to doctor Takahashi Minami's file who has been working with her, Atsuko has mentioned child neglect and even abuse."
"Lies!" Azumi shouted.
Mariko was startled by the sudden out break.
"I never layed a finger on that girl. I gave her everything she ever wanted. Sweets, toys, jewlery, money, clothes, everything a girl her age would ever want."
"Yes but did you give her love?"
This made Azumi stop talking. Mariko gave Azumi a cold stare and said,
"Atsuko is your daughter and you are her mother. And as her mother, you must do what all mothers do. They love their child."
"I do love her with all my heart! She just doesn't see it!"
Just then the door bursted opened and Acchan came in.
"You shut your mouth!" Acchan said pointing straight at Mariko.
"This woman is not my mother and I am not her child!"
"Acchan calm down!" Takamina said but Acchan just pushed her back.
"Look, this woman isn't my mother. She's a monster."
"Atsuko how could you say that!" Azumi said.
"And after all your father and I have done for you."
"You've done nothing! Father was never around me. Not even when I was born. And you always ignored me whenever I cried. I would cry and cry for you but no matter what you were always busy. Do you have any idea how I felt!" Acchan screamed.
Acchan started crying right there and Azumi just sat there staring at her.
"What's wrong with you?" Takamina said as she walked over to Acchan.
"When your child is crying, you don't just sit there. You're supposed to comfort them and tell them everything is alright."
Takamina started to comfort Acchan patting her head and stroking her back telling her everything was ok. Eventually Acchan was finally able to calm down.
"For 17 years of my life I was in hell." Acchan said.
"But then I came to this place and I actually managed to find happiness. I was able to smile and laugh and make friends. Something I had never done in my life."
"You had friends!" Azumi said.
"Those girls from your high school were friends with you."
"They only used me for my money! Then they would bully me the rest of the time. I would come home with cuts and bruises. Then again, you wouldn't notice it because you were too busy on the phone."
"How am I supposed to know if you don't tell me those kinds of things?"
"Because you wouldn't listen. I tried to tell you but you just ignored me! I am tired of you and father constantly ignoring me and treating me like an animal. I'm not going back with you. I am staying here with Takamina and everyone else."
"You're going to stay here with a doctor and a bunch of insane people?" Azumi said sounding astonished.
"These insane people are my family!" Acchan snapped.
"And this doctor is the mother you never were."
Acchan walked over and hugged Takamina.
"This is an outrage!" Azumi said.
"No it's what's right." Mariko snapped.
"Even if you have all the money in the world, nothing can compare to the love of a mother. That is all Acchan was looking for from you. But you neglected it which is why Atsuko is here. It's your fault for Atsuko ending up like this and now it's time for you to face your responsibilities and face the consequences."
Azumi sat there glaring at Mariko who was glaring right back. Then Sayaka came in with a security guard.
"Please escort Azumi-san out." Sayaka said.
As the security guard led Azumi towards the exit Azumi said,
"This won't be the last time you hear from me."
Knowing Azumi, Mariko was expecting that.
The next day, Azumi came back and this time she had friends. She had brought a man in a suit who was probably a lawyer and two large brutes. The two brutes walked past the security guard and into Acchan's room. You could hear screaming and then seconds later the two came out carrying Acchan. Takamina came out and saw this making her attack one of the brutes. But the brute flicked her off like she was nothing and Takamina slammed hard into the wall.
"What is the meaning of this?" Mariko asked as she helped Takamina up.
"This is a court order." the lawyer said as he handed Mariko a piece of paper.
"This is a court order saying Madea-san is entitled to take back her child and bring her back home."
"No way!" Takamina said.
"Yes and now if you excuse me we'll be leaving."
"Let me go!" Acchan screamed as she started kicking.
"Where do you think you're going?"
Takamina stood up and charged at the brutes again. She swung and punched one of them but he didn't feel a thing. Once again, he punched Takamina sending her flying back.
"Takamina!" Acchan screamed.
Takamina got back up and came at them again. This time they missed and Takamina actually managed to hit the brute right in the face. He howled in pain as he let go of one of Acchan's arms. Acchan took advantage and punched the other guy in the face making him let go. Then she ran over to Takamina who was still on the ground.
"Atsuko!"
"I'm not coming with you!" Acchan snapped.
"Then I have no choice."
Azumi snapped her fingers and the two brutes walked over to Takamina. Then all at once, they started beating her. Acchan tried to stop them but they just pushed her back. Then Azumi walked over and grabbed Acchan's arm.
"We're leaving now!" she said.
"Takamina!" Acchan tried to run but Azumi had a tight grip on her.
Mariko couldn't help but only watch as the scene played before her eyes. Takamina was now bleeding and badly bruised. It didn't look like she was going to last long. But then Mariko remembered something. The file containing all of Acchan's information. It just might be able to save both Acchan and Takamina. Mariko ran down to the hall and found the file. Then she ran back down to where Acchan and Takamina were. Takamina was still getting beat up and Acchan was about to be dragged out the door.
"WAIT!" Mariko said.
"Now what?" Azumi said obviously irritated.
"When Atsuko came her, she was 18 when she registered herself in. That means she registered as a legal adult. Therefore, you as the parent no longer has control over her and Atsuko is free to do what she wants." Mariko handed the paper to the lawyer.
The lawyer checked out the document and the shook his head.
"I'm sorry Maeda-san but everthing checks out. Atsuko is an adult meaning you no longer have legal control over her. You're going to have to let her go." he said.
"Never!" Azumi protested.
"Let go you bitch!" Acchan said as she punched Azumi in face.
Azumi let go and then Acchan quickly ran over to where the two brutes were.
"Either you move or I'll rip your guts out!" Acchan barked with a deadly look in her eyes.
The brutes scrambled and Acchan tended to her badly beaten friend.
"This is ridiculous!" Azumi said.
"No it's justice." Mairko said.
"Now get out before I call the police and charge you for disturbing the peace and assult on a medical professional."
Azumi could do nothing but glare as the lawyer shoved her out the door. Once she was gone, Mariko quickly rushed over to check on Takamina.
"Takamina are you alright?" she asked.
"Yeah I'm fine." Takamina said while spitting out blood.
"We better go have you treated."
Mariko walked over and brought back a stretcher.
"Acchan you need to let go so I can but Takamina on the stretcher." Mariko said.
"No!" Acchan growled.
"We need to get her treated."
"Acchan it's ok. Mariko knows what she's doing." Takamina said.
"Ok but I'm not leaving your side ever!" Acchan said.
"And I'm not leaving yours." Takamina said as she held Acchan's hand.
Takamina sat up and kissed Acchan softly on the lips.
"I love you Acchan."
"I love you too Takamina!"
Mariko stood there watching the two have their moment. There was a warm feeling in her heart seeing the two. This is what true love looked like. True love is when both lovers are always there by each other's side no matter what.
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Well I hope you all liked it! This one was alot of work so I hope all you Atsumina fans enjoyed it! The next few chapters are going to briefly talk about each patients pasts so look forward to others! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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Chapter 20:
every time they go on a trip, there are always problems!! :(
luckily, no-one badly injured (except Rena) :) :)
Chapter 21:
this chapter is cool!!! :heart: and warm :love: :love:
Acchan's past was really sad, man!! :(
i'm waiting for next chapter :love:
you did great!!!! :thumbup
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Acchan's mother is annoying :mon fierce:
Gladly that Acchan didn't be taken by her mother.
Poor Takamina got beaten badly :mon waterworks:
But it prove their love~ :mon lovelaff:
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Acchan past are not dreaming
She want Lov a but her mother is pretty Annoying
Yeah Acchan bit up your mother
aww atsumina Kiss scene is so dreaming and sweet
Please continued
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first I was :on cigar: maeda family is rich huh
but then acchan's past was :err:
and her mother beating takamina :scolding:
but mariko saves the day! weeeeee
Thank you for the update miyu!
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Poor Acchan, her childhood must be really though T_T but a mother stay a mother
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Hello everyone! Thank you for reading the last chapter. I'm glad you all liked it. Today's chapter is going to revolve around Kojiyuu's history. I hope you all enjoy the chapter! Doso!
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Chapter 22
"Mariko, Mariko help!" Haruna said as she came running down the hall.
"What's going on?" Mariko asked confused.
"Nyannyan come on I just want to hug you!" Yuko said.
"No you want to do weird stuff to me!"
"Define weird." Mariko said.
"She was gonna put me in a casino bunny outfit and make me serve her drinks!"Haruna said.
"Ok that's not weird that's just wrong."
"Hey I think Nyannyan will look very sexy in it!" Yuko said.
"Mariko make her stop!"
"Nyannyan come just for a little bit!"
"No!"
As the two were sturggling to use Mariko as a shield, a woman walked by with Yukirin.
"Yuko?"
This made Yuko stop and look over. When she saw the woman she froze like a deer in the head lights. The woman had long blondish brown hair and a tiger tooth.
"Tomochin...."
"Yuko what are you doing here?" she asked.
"Uh....I...."
Yuko couldn't think of anything. She just turned around and ran to her room.
"Care to explain who this is?" Mariko said to Yukirin.
"This is Itano Tomomi. She's an old high school classmate of mine." Yukirin said.
"It's nice to meet you." Mariko said.
"As to you. Was that Oshima Yuko just now?" Itano asked.
"Yeah why?"
"Well I'm surprised to find her here out of all places. You see, Yuko and I used to work together but then one day she just disappeared."
"Was she alright? Like any problems."
"No she was perfectly fine. There was nothing wrong with her."
"That's odd because she came her for getting her OCD treated." Mariko said.
"OCD?" Itano looked at Mariko surprised.
"Yuko doesn't have OCD. We mad sure of that back at the office."
"What do you mean?"
"Before we hire anyone, we do a background check. That includes health records. I'll bring you the file tomorrow."
"Ok that woould be great. Thanks."
Mariko walked away now concerened about the squirrel girl. If she is faking her illness not only will she go to jail but the facility would also get in a lot of trouble for not noticing it. Mariko hoped things would turn out better for Yuko tomorrow. The next day, Itano brought the file with Yuko's health records. Mariko read them and was surprised. They were completely different from the one she had. The one Itano had made Yuko look like a normal sane person.
"This is interesting. Where's Yuko?" Mairko asked.
"I think she's still in her room." Takamina said.
"Let's go get her."
"Good luck. There's no way she's coming out."
Mariko and Takamina walked over to Yuko's door and found it locked.
"Yuko come out! We just need to talk!" Mariko said.
"No! No I'm not coming out!" Yuko shouted.
"Yuko you come out right now!"
"Never!"
"So what now?" Takamina asked.
"Go get Haruna."
A couple minutes later, Takamina came back with Haruna.
"What's going on?" Haruna asked.
"We're trying to get Yuko out of her room." Mariko said.
"We're gonna see if you can get her to come out."
"Ok let me try. Yuko it's me Haruna! Please come out."
"NO!"
This surprised everyone. This was the first time Yuko ever rejected Haruna.
"Yuko come out right now!" Haruna demanded.
"No!"
"Yuko!"
"Haruana I got an idea!" Mariko said.
Mariko grabbed Haurna by the shoulders and then shouted,
"Yuko if you don't come out right now I'm going to make out with your prescious Nyannyan!"
There was no response.
"Fine here I go!"
"Mariko wait!"
Mariko leaned in really close to Haruna almost to the point where thier lips were touching. But then the door opened and Yuko came flying out. She landed on top of Mariko and started choking her.
"Don't you dare touch my Nyannyan!" she growled.
"Nyannyan?" everyone looked over at Itano.
"This is Nyannyan?" Itano said pointing at Haurna.
'Yeah. She's Kojima Haruna." Mariko said still trying to gasp for air.
"So this is the one Yuko was nuts about."
"What do you mean?" Mariko said as she pushed Yuko off her.
"Back at the office, Yuko would always talk about this Nyannnyan person. She was really crazy about her and then one day she just left without leaving a notice." Itano said.
"Why did you leave?" Takamina asked Yuko.
"Because I wanted to be with Nyannyan." Yuko said.
"But you were perfectly healthy!" Haruna said.
"How did you come to like Haruna?" Mariko asked.
"Well a couple months ago, I was alone at a bar drinking away my sorrows. That's when she came. She ordered drinks with me and we had a blast. That's when I fell in love with her. Her caring personality and cute face just made me go nuts. When I heard she was being sent to a mental facility I thought I'd never see her agian. I couldn't stand it so I came here faking an illness so I could be with my Nyannyan."
Haruna walked over and slapped Yuko.
"How could you! All this time I thought you were my friend." she said.
"I am your friend!"
"No you're just a perverted stalker!"
Haruna ran off crying.
"Nyannyan!" Yuko tried running after but then Takamina stopped her.
"I'm sorry Yuko but we're going to have to call the police. It is illegal to seek medical attention when there is nothing wrong."
"No I'm not leaving my Nyannyan!"
Yuko broke free and ran off.
"Yuko!"
"Just leave her. We'll let her be for now. Thank you for coming in today Itano-san." Mariko said.
"No problem and I'm sorry for causing a disturbence." she said.
"So what do we do now?" Takamina asked.
"You call the police. I'm going to go talk to Haruna."
Mairko found Haruna leaned up against the wall crying. She walked over and sat next to her.
"Hey you ok?" Mariko asked.
"No." Haruna said.
"Well listen, I'm sure Yuko isn't as bad of a person as you think she is."
"But she lied to me only to get close to me. That's just unforgiveable."
"But that doesn't matter. That girl is crazy for you. Remember when Acchan was fighting over you Yuko was the first one to try to stop her. And at the trpoical island Yuko saved you from getting hurt. Even on the mountain trip, Yuko carried you back up the mountain when you were knocked out."
"Yeah those are good points." Haruna said.
"Yeah so Yuko isn't as bad as you think she is." Mariko said.
"I think you're right. But wait!"
"What is it?"
"I noticed this last time me and Yuko got into a fight. I got mad at her and started to ignore her. But then one day when I went ot apologize, I noticed there were cuts and bruises all over her body."
"What?"
"Yeah. Everytime I ignored her and came back, there would always be cuts on her body."
"Not good. We need to find Yuko now."
Mariko and Haruna ran down to Yuko's room hoping they would make it in time. The door was locked again.
"Yuko!" Mariko said as she pounded on the door.
There was no answer.
"Yuko!"
"I got it!"
Just then Haruna stepped back and then kicked the door down. They rushed in and found Yuko on the ground as pale as Rena, both wrists cut and blood all over.
"Yuko!" Haurna fell down next to her.
Mariko checked her for a pulse.
"I got a pulse but it's weak. Help me carry her out." Mariko said.
Mariko and Haruna carried Yuko out to hall.
"Takamina I need a blood transfusion quick!"
"On it!"
"Yuko! Yuko!"
Turns out Yuko did have a real mental illness. She has a self-injury disorder meaning she'll inflict wounds on herself. In this case, she only does it when she gets into a fight with Haruna and makes a mistake. Not only is this serious but also dangerous. This means Yuko has to stay in the facility for treatment. Haruna was in Yuko's room caring for her. There was a blood transfusion bag to the side and and IV in Yuko's arm. Pretty soon, Yuko started to wake up.
"Yuko!" Haruna said literally bursting with tears.
"Nyan...nyan." she weakly said.
"Yuko you idiot! How could you do something like that!"
"I'm sorry Nyannyan. I just couldn't live without you. You probably hate me now."
"No I don't!"
"It's ok if you do, I'll just-"
Yuko was cut off with a kiss from Haruna. They held for a long time until Haruna finally let go.
"Don't you ever do that again!" she said sobbing.
Yuko also started crying.
"I promise I won't."
The two sat there and cried until they fell asleep in each other's arms. Mariko felt better knowing Yuko could stay. The facility wouldn't be the same without it's little pereverted squirrel.
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Chapter 22 is done! I hope all the Kojiyuu fans liked it. Next up is Mayuki so Mayuki fans get ready! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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waw 3 chapters updated!
sugoii!
keep it up miyu! :* muah
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kyaaa~Kojiyuu so sweet!
hopefuly Mayuki will have a chapter long too~!
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Wow Acchan's parents made me really mad. How could they do that to her?
Good thing Yuko is staying though, the world wouldn't be the same without her making perverted comments LOL. This is really interesting though, learning all about their past, it gives us more insight on the characters.
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great!!! :lol: so Yuko reaaly does have a mentally illness :lol:
the KojiYuu is so sweet! ~LOL~ :heart: :heart:
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Hello everyone! Today's chapter is going to be about Mayuki so get ready because this one is going to be weird. I hope you all enjoy! Doso!
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Chapter 23
"Yukirin!" Mayuyu said as she walked over to Mariko and Yukirin.
"What is it?" Yukirin asked.
"You said we were going to to "that" today."
"Oh no not now. I'm talking to Mariko."
"But I want it now!"
Mayuyu grabbed Yukirin by the arm and started to pull her when she ran into something. There standing before her was a woman in about her late twentys with short black hair that was in pig tails. She was wearing a "I love manga" T shirt and short shorts. It was almost as if Mariko was looking at an older version of Mayuyu.
"Miki?" Mayuyu said.
"Hello Mayu." the woman said.
"Mayuyu who is this?" Yukirin asked.
"This is my older sister Miki."
"Older sister?"
"Yeah. What are you doing here?"
"I came here to visit and tell you that Masa has been released."
A fearful look appeared on Mayuyu's face.
"No way. He wasn't supposed to be released for another five years!" Mayuyu said with terror in her voice.
"He got out early for good behavior." Miki said.
"Ridiculous!"
"Anyways, he's coming tomorrow. Better prepare yourself."
Mayuyu panicked and ran to her room.
"Who's Masa?" Mariko asked.
"Mayuyu's older brother. He was sent to prison two years ago." Yukirin said.
"Why?"
"Two years ago he was arrested for beating his own mother with a bat."
"That's horrible. But why is Mayuyu frightened?"
"He beat his mother because he thought she took his favorite manga but it was actually Mayuyu who took it. He didn't find out until after her was locked up but I guess now he's out and coming for revenge."
"Well we don't need to worry. We got security and stuff." Mariko said.
"You don't know Masa. He's the leader of one of the strongest gangs in Tokyo. He's probably going to bring his buddies along with." Yukirin said.
"That's not good. When is he coming?"
"Tomorrow around six." Miki said.
"Alright then Yukirin you go warn the others. I'm going to go find Mayuyu."
Mariko ran down to Mayuyu's room who was in a hurry packing as many mangas and anime figureines into one suit case.
"Mayuyu calm down. We're not going to let him hurt you." Mariko said.
"No he's not going to hurt me he's going to kill me!" Mayuyu said.
"We won't let him near you. And besides, maybe he's changed and now he's just visiting."
"Mariko, he's been in jail for two and a half years. I think the only thing that's changed is is muscle strength."
"Don't worry. Yukirin wouldn't let him lay a finger on you."
"Yeah but Yukirin is weak. She wouldn't last five seconds against my brother."
"Well don't forget, you have your own private army. Everyone here will protect you." Mariko said.
"And everyone is going to get killed." Mayuyu said.
"Mayuyu get some sleep. We'll handle this tomorrow."
"Ok if you say so."
As the otaku girl practically cried herself to sleep that night, Mariko was also worried about tomorrow. The next day, there were loud shouts outside the facility. Mariko and Sayaka walked out and saw a large group of at least twenty guys. Standing in the middle of it all must be Masa. Masa had shot black spikey hair and brown eyes like Mayuyu. He was wearing black leather and spiked boots. When he saw the two doctors, he walked up to them.
"So you must be Masa?" Mariko said.
"Yeah. What about it?" he said.
"I heard you came here looking for Mayu."
"That's right. Where's the little twerp?"
"She's inside safe from you."
"Bring her to me."
"Sorry but I can't do that."
"Oh then I guess I'll have to drag her out." Masa said giving her an evil stare.
"Just go ahead and try." Mariko said as she did the same.
"You three take them out!" Masa said as he pointed to three of his gang members.
"They look nice! Let's take em home with us and have a little fun." one of them said.
"Hell no!" Sayaka said as she punched one of the guys out.
The other two tried to attack but Sayaka took them out as well. Five more came and this time Mariko got two and Sayaka got three. Mariko did a double knock out by punching one causing him to knock into the other. But Sayaka out did her attack by knocking two of the guy's heads into each other and then kneeing the last one.
"Hey no fair Sayaka!" Mariko said.
"Is that all you got!" Sayaka shouted.
This time eight came out. It was a lot harder to take them out and right when one went down, another came up. Sayaka and Mariko were getting tired. Eventually, Sayaka got pinned to the ground and Mariko soon after.
"Now bring out my sister!" Masa shouted.
"I won't let you near her!"
Everyone looked over and saw Yukirin.
"Who are you?" Masa asked.
"Doctor Kashiwagi Yuki. Your sister's doctor." Yukirin said.
"And how are you going to stop me?"
"With this!"
Yukirin pulled out Mayuyu's pink bazooka.
"What the hell is that thing?" Masa said as the others laughed.
Mariko couldn't help but wonder what Yukirin was thinking. That bazooka only shot bean bags but not actual explosives.
"Go to hell!"
Yukirin shot the round and it blew up the nearest car. Mariko couldn't believe what she saw. That bazooka is the real deal.
"I still got more!" Yukirin said as she shot the second round straight at the group that was holding Mariko and Sayaka down.
All the gang members scrammed as the rocket flew past Mariko's head and blowing up another car.
"Jesus!" Masa said.
"All of you get the hell out!"
Yukirin started firing rounds like crazy with explosions everywhere. Sayaka quickly grabbed Mariko and rushed her somewhere safe. Yukirin's shooting rampage continued for another five minutes. Then finally after all the smoke had cleared only one person was left. Masa was standing there completely calm and composed.
"You ready for round two?" Yukirin asked.
"Bring it." he said.
Yukirin set the bazooka to the side and pulled out two knives. Meanwhile Masa pulled out a gun. Somehow that didn't seem like a fair fight. Then Yukirin charged at Masa. There was a loud clash of metal as the gun and knife collided. Then Yukirin quickly stepped back and to the side as she dodged a bullet. Yukirin came again and this time cut Masa's arm.
"Damn!" he said as he fired another bullet.
"Too slow!" Yukirin came in again and cut his other arm.
Masa dropped the gun and Yukirin quickly grabbed it. She aimed it at Masa making him freeze.
"Looks like I win." Yukirin said.
"Oh? I don't think so." Masa said.
Just then there was a scream coming from the facility. One of Masa's members snuck in and found Mayuyu. No he had her with a knife pointed at her neck.
"Mayuyu!"
"Yukirin!"
"Put the gun down and we won't kill her." Masa said.
Yukirin did what he said and set the gun down. Masa picked it up and then reloaded it. Then without warning, he shot Yukirin in the foot. Yukirin fell and screamed in pain.
"Yukirin!" Mayuyu said as she tried to struggle but the guy held her good.
"Aww how cute. You crying for your girl friend?" Masa said.
"Hey maybe I should do to her what I did to mom!" Masa grabbed a bat from his car and walked over to Yukirin.
"Masa don't touch her!" Mayuyu cried.
"Too late!"
Masa came down with the bat and stuck Yukirin's knee. Yukirin cried out as she continued to be beaten. Mariko wanted to something but she was too scared to do anything. Sayaka to was too scrared to move. They were both afraid that if they moved then he would kill Mayuyu.
"Yukirin!" Mayuyu was sobbing.
"Mayu..." Yukirin said coughing up blood.
"How does it feel Mayuyu? Watching a loved one beating another? Is it fun?" Masa said as he laughed.
"Mayu... zannen shoujo."
When Yukirin said that, Mayuyu fell unconsious. Then she looked up and had a different look to her. Mayuyu grabbed the guy who was holding onto her and flipped him over. Then she ran over at amazing speeds and kicked Masa sending him flying.
"What's going on?" Mariko asked.
"Zannen shoujo is a phrase Yukirin uses to turn Mayuyu's attack mode on. When she goes into attack mode nothing can stop her. She becomes like Rena only she's not as wild and has control. She's like a cyborg listening to the commands of it's master." Sayaka said.
Before Masa could stand up, Mayuyu ran over to him and dropped kick him right back down to the ground. His face was slammed into the concrete. Then Mayuyu walked over and somehow picked up a motor cycle. She raised it right above Masa's head and was about to drop it. But then Yukirin told her to stop. Mayuyu snapped out of her attack mode and set the motor cycle down. Then she rushed over to Yukirin.
"Yukirin are you ok?" Mayuyu asked.
"I'm fine Mayuyu. Just some minor injuries." Yukirin said sarcastically.
"A bullet to the foot and a shattered knee isn't what I call a minor injury." Mayuyu said.
"Why Yukirin? Why did you go that far to protect me?"
"Because I made a promise." Yukirin said.
"What promise?"
"Do you remember the moment when I first met you? You stole my cross and wouldn't give it back for weeks. Then when I finally had to use force, you just cried and cried. That made me realized you were just a zannen shoujo, an unfortunate girl. Ever since then, I promised myself that I would never let anyone hurt you and I would always protect you."
"Yukirin you idiot! Do you think I'd remember that?"
"No which is why it is my job to remember and for you to just relax. I'm you're guardian angel after all."
Mayuyu was now crying again.
"And it's my job to make sure that you don't get yourself killed because I'm you're guardian otaku."
"Mayuyu that's not the right term."
"Just shut up and kiss me."
The two locked in a kiss and looked like they would never let go.
Meanwhile, Sayaka walked over and made sure Masa was knocked out. Mariko was about to get up when she heard Mayuyu laugh.
"Hey so are we going to do "that" tonight?" Mayuyu asked.
"Sure." Yukirin said.
"Yay! And since you're injured, I'm going to be the one taking care of you." Mayuyu said as she gave Yukirin as perverted smile.
"Oh god please give me the strength tonight."
Mariko just wondered what exactly is "that?"
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Well there's chapter 23! The next one is going to be about Wmatsui! I hoped all the Mayuki fans enjoyed it. Please tell me what you think!
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Yayy Mayuki again. Wow Mayu's family is just full of otaku lol. I'm really excited for wmatsui past though :D
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Today's chapter is about Wmatsui. Now their story is a little sad. It reminds me of the time when I lost someone I loved so much. Anyways, I hope you all enjoy it. Doso!
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Chapter 24
"Hey Jurina are you having a hard time sleeping again?" Rena asked.
"No I'm fine." Jurina said.
"Was it them again?"
"Yeah."
"Jurina, they're gone now. There's no way they're coming back."
"Yeah but-"
"Shhhh. It's ok." Rena said reassuring her sister.
"I'm just afraid they'll come back and hurt us. Hurt you." Jurina said.
"There's no way they will. It's a long way up to get back from hell."
"I hope so."
That night Jurina fell asleep in Rena's arms.
The next mornig, Mariko came in and found the two girls still sleeping. She was going to pull a prank on them when Jurina started to talk in her sleep.
"No mom stop it hurts. Stop hurting nee-chan." she said with tears flowing down her eyes.
Mariko couldn't help but wonder what Jurina was dreaming about. Probably something bad from her past.
"Mom stop nee-chan is bleeding. Stop it!"
Jurina woke up and saw Mariko. She was startled and fell off the bed.
"Are you ok?" Mariko asked.
"Yeah I'm fine. What are you doing in here?" Jurina asked.
"I came to wake you up. Nice pajamas by the way."
Mariko was referring to the puppy pajamas Jurina was wearing.
"Just shut up and get out!"
Mariko ran out before Jurina could do anything. Then a couple minutes later the two girls came out.
"Let's go down to the lunch room and get something to eat." Jurina said.
"Un!" Rena said.
The two went down to the lunch room followed by Mariko. Everyone else was down there and already eating. Takamina was spoon feeding Acchan, Haruna was eating while Yuko just stared, and Mayuyu was reading a manga while Yukirin silently ate hers. The two Matsui sisters took a seat at the table in the corner and Mariko sat with them.
"So Rena how are things? Have you started eating more?" Mariko asked.
"Yes. I now discovered I like chicken when it's cooked." Rena said.
"That's good. You need some meat on you." Mariko reached out to grab Rena's wrist when Jurina intercepted.
"What do you think you're doing?" Jurina said.
"I was just showing how thin Rena was."
"Don't touch my sister."
"Ok sorry."
Jurina let go and Mariko retreated her hand.
"By the way Jurina I heard you talking in your sleep this morning." Mariko said.
"What was she saying? Was she having the santa dream again?" Rena asked.
"Nee-chan!"
"It's cute when you have that dream. You keep saying santa I want a puppy and make barking noises."
"Rena!"
"No you were saying stop it mom it hurts."
Jurina froze and just glared at Mariko.
"You know, do these dreams of yours make it hard for you to sleep?"
"Yeah it does." Rena said.
"Well maybe there's a way to stop that. I have an idea."
A couple minutes later, Mariko had Jurina hooked up to a brain monitor.
"Ok now I want you to relax and just fall asleep." Mariko said.
"How can I when I have you staring at me. It's creepy." Jurina said.
"You want me to turn around?"
"Yes."
"Alright then Rena let me know when she falls asleep."
Mariko turned around and within thrity minutes, Rena tapped on Mariko's shouder.
"Ok now we wait."
Mariko pulled out a note pad and pen and sat in a chair.
"What exactly are we waiting for?" Rena whispered.
"You see that needle drawing lines on the paper. Those lines represent her brain waves. Right now they're moving steadily meaning her dream isn't bad. But when she has a nightmare then it'll start going nuts." Mariko said.
"Ohh ok."
Within a couple minutes, the needles movements started to pick up. Soon they started to get faster and faster.
"No nee-chan stop!" she said.
"Dad stop hitting nee-chan she's crying!"
Jurina too started to cry.
"You shut up or I'll beat you too!"
"That must be Jurina imitating her father." Mariko noted.
"Dad stop it!"
"Shut up! You're nothing but trash and should have never been born."
"Rena!"
The needle was moving so frantically that it actually broke making a loud cracking sound. Jurina woke up startled from the sound.
"Jurina it's ok." Mariko said.
In truth, it wasn't. If Jurina's brain waves caused the needle to go that far and break then there's something wrong.
"Listen how about you and Rena go back to your room and try to get some more rest."
"Ok." the two got up and left.
Meanwhile Mariko decided to go on a little hunt and try to find out more about the two Matsui sisters. Mariko went to the facility they used to be in and asked a couple questions to the director and nurses.
"Ahh the Matsui sisters. I remember them. One was very nice while the other was quite violent." the director said.
"The Matsui sisters? I haven't heard from them in a long time. Sorry I don't know anything about them but they left this before they left."
The nurse gave Mariko an old newspaper article. The head lines said "FAMILY OF FOUR MURDED." The article talked about the Matui family. One day the parents were murdered and only the two daughters survived. Mariko recgonized the two daughters were Rena and Jurina. The article said that the killer was never found but the children were sent to a mental facility because they both showed symptons of mental illnesses. There was an address on the paper and Mariko decided to go visit the home.
"Time to see what Jurina and Rena have been hiding from me."
Mariko arrived to the house but to be honest it looked like a dump. There was trash all over the front and the windows were broken and dirtied. The wook was rotting and the house looked like it was going to collapse. Mariko walked inside and was hit with the rotting stench of a dead animal.
"God this place smells." she thought.
Mariko walked around and found nothing. Everything had been cleared out because of the investigatioin. But Mariko could see the blood stains in the tatami mats where the parents were. Mariko walked around and found a small room. In the middle was a matress lying on the ground. Mariko found something sticking out of the matress. When she picked it up, it was a picture. It was a picture of the mother and father. The mother was holding a baby while the father was holding a little girl. It must have been Rena. Mariko checked the back and found a date.
"March 8th 1997." was written on it.
"This must have been taken when Jurina was born. That was taken 15 years ago."
Mariko looked around some more and a dols. It was a girl with black hair and was wearing a rag for a dress. Mariko also noticed several cuts on the doll and stuffing sticking out. Mariko decided to hold onto the doll thinking it would be useful. As she looked around some more, Mariko found a piece of paper. The writing was fadded but she managed to read it.
"Dear Diary,
Today father ate most of the food so all we got today was a small piece of bread. Being the youngest, nee-chan gave me most of the bread. Even though she needed it the most. But no matter how hard I tried to get her to eat, she wouldn't. Nee-chan is always so nice to me. Mother and father are just monsters. They abuse us and worst of all nee-chan takes most of the beating. She always shields me and takes in everything as father and mother continue to beat her. I cry every time and the more I cried the more they beat nee-chan. I feel so bad not being able to do anything. Maybe I should just die."
The rest became too hard for Mariko to read. Mariko also decided to keep it. It was getting late and Mariko had to get back to the facility. Mariko left in a hurry not even notcing that she was being followed.
When Mariko arrived at the facility, she found everything a mess. Sitting on the side was Takamina who looked like she was in bad shape.
"Takamina what happened?" Mariko asked.
"Someone came and tried taking Rena away. Jurina saw this and went beserk. Now she's still going and Jurina is trying to calm her down." Takamina said.
"Where are they?"
"Down the hall."
"Alright you wait here."
Mariko ran down the hall and found Jurina choking a man by the neck. Meanwhile Rena was trying hold Jurina back but wasn't really helping.
"Jurina calm down it's not him!" Rena said.
"He's come back! He's come back to take you away from me and hurt you!" Jurina said as she tightened her grip.
"Please... stop.." he said.
Mairko looked at him and then at the picture she had found. He looked just like the father.
"I'm going to make him pay. Make him pay for what he has done!" Jurina said.
"Jurina!"
Just then Sayaka came from behind and sedated Jurina. Then she took Jurina and carried her off to her room as Rena followed.
"Who are you?" Mariko asked.
"I'm Rena and Jurina's uncle Tetsu." the man said.
"Is this your brother?" Mariko showed him the picture.
"Yes. He's my twin brother."
"That explains why Jurina attacked you. So why have you come here?"
"I wanted to talk to Rena and Jurina about coming to live with me when they're released. But when Jurina saw me, she attacked me. I wouldn't blame her though. My brother did terrible things to those two."
"Well I see but maybe it's best if you leave. It's obvious the two are never going to leave anytime soon and it'd be best for your own safety if you stayed away from them." Mairko said.
"I think so too. Tell that doctor thank you for saving my life." he said.
"No problem."
Once he left, Mariko went in to check on Jurina. She was still knocked out and wrapped in a restraint jacket.
"How is she?" Mariko asked.
"Better." Rena said.
"That was your father's twin brother Tetsu. Did you know about him?"
"Yes I knew him whe I was young. But Jurina never met him. He's a really nice man."
"He came asking if you two wanted to live with him when you were released."
"No way. I promised Jurina that we would move in together in our own place. I'm old enough to get a job so we'll be fine."
"I see. By the way, I stopped by your house and found these."
Mariko pulled out the picture, the doll, and the diary entry.
"I remember this!" Rena said picking up the photo.
"This was taken the day Jurina was born. It was one of the most happiest days of my life."
"What about the doll?"
"This was the doll Jurina carried around when she was little. She said it was me an would add a new cut every time mother and father beated me." Rena said.
"There's so many." Mariko said.
"What about the diary entry?"
"Rena wrote this when she was ten. I remember slapping her that day because she wrote about killing herself which I wouldn't allow."
"Where are the other entries?"
"We burned them. They just had too many painful memories."
"Ohh. Rena I wanted to ask, were you the one who killed your parents?"
Rena remained silent for a moment and then said,
"Yes. I killed them. Well not me but the other me. The scary me."
"And did Jurina see this?" Mariko asked.
"Yes. She saw the whole thing. By the time I had snapped out of my other mode, Jurina was scared of me. She wouldn't let me get near her. So I called the police saying that someone came and murdered our parents."
"And because of Jurina's behavior, they sent both of you to the facility."
"Yes. At first Jurina was very scared of everyone. But then she started to become very protective of me. I think she feels that it was her fault that I killed our parents."
"Well I think she does it so you don't get hurt again." Mariko said.
"Maybe." Rena said.
Well when she wakes up, tell her everthing I just told you."
"Sure thing."
As Mariko left, she saw Rena kiss Jurina's forehead and falll asleep next to her. The two looked like dolls as they lied their motionless. Mariko felt a heavy feeling in her chest thinking about all those horrible things the two went through. But no matter what they must have bared through it and kept fighting.
"Maybe that's why they're still alive today." Mariko thought.
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Well I hope all the Wmatui fans enjoyed it! I'm sorry if it was kinda sad but it's all I could think of. Please tell me what you think and get ready because the end is coming soon!
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It was sad past for Rena and Jurina..
Poor Matsui sister getting beat by their parent
I love WMatsui
Please continued ypdating
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About Mayuki's past: :) well, that was kinda insane, man XD
Mayu's brother really wanted to kill his sister because of a manga? :smhid
maybe he should go to the facilities, too :smhid :smhid
And about WMatsui's past: ~mou :cry: :cry: that was horrible!! :cry:
poor them :cry: their parents really are monsters :angry: those jerks!!! :angry:
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Omg... For some reason I was laughing throughout this chapter.
I'm so happy that Rena killed her parents.
Wtf is wrong with me.
Rena, don't scare away your Jurina! Such a horrible past...
As for the Mayuki chapter, its hilarious! A whole family of otakus!
Omg... Jurina and Rena's past is just so... Violent.
PLEASE MAKE THE FIC MORE VIOLENT I LOVE GEKIKARA TOO MUCH
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Rena and Jurina suffred in the pas so much :fainted:
How can these parents do it to her child :scolding:
It's really sad :pleeease:
but Rena killed them :scared:
pray for them :bigdeal: :prayers:
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This one is full of suprises that you didn't even know so be ready! It's going to be full of action and all kinds of violence. I won't say much but let's just say Miichan is a little to blame for everything. Please enjoy this chapter. Doso!
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Chapter 25
It was a quiet day at Hirokawa Mental Facility. But then BANG! Someting exploded filling smoke in the hall. Mariko was with Rena at the time and saw the explosion. She watched the people drop down like flies.
"Knock out gas?" Mariko thought.
Soon after men came in and started picking up people. One of the men came in a grabbed Rena. Mariko tried to stop them but she got knocked out by something behind her. Mariko doesn't know what is going on but whatever it was, someone was running the whole show.
"Mariko.... psst... Mariko!"
Mariko opened her eyes and saw nothing but bright light. She looked around and could only see a white ceiliing.
"Hey Mariko."
"Who are you?" Mariko asked.
"That doesn't matter who I am." the voice said.
"Listen, everyone is in danger!"
"What is this place?"
"Some governent building. Hey did you hear what I said? Everyone is in danger!"
"Yeah I heard you." Mariko tried to move but there were restraints binding her to the bed.
"I can't move."
"Just slip your arms through. The guards didn't properly tighten the restraints." the voice said.
Mariko did was the voice said and both her arms came out. Then she undid her legs and got up. But then she quickly fell back down due to the fact that her legs were weak.
"What are you a baby? Get up!" the voice said.
Mariko finally stood up again then started to walk again.
"Good. Now listen, the door is unlocked and the halls are empty. Now is the time to escape."
"Who are you. More importantly where are you?"
"Turn around."
Mariko turned around and saw a girl about Jurina's age. She had long brown hair and small eyes. She was wearing a white dress with red flowers on it.
"Who are you?" Mariko asked.
"Mariko." the girl said.
"Really? My name is Mariko too."
"I know that. To avoid confusion, you can call me Mari-chan."
"Sounds good."
"Alright now listen go out into the hall and go down the hall to the end. Then make a right turn and head down that path. Look for your first room on your left and you'll find one of your patients."
"Ok."
Mariko went out into the hall and just like what Mari-chan told her there were no guards. She ran down the hall and made a right. Then she found the first door. It was unlocked surprisingly. Mariko walked in and found Yuko restrained on the bed.
"Mariko!" Yuko said.
"Shhh! You want the guards to hear us?" Mariko said.
"Sorry."
Mariko undid the retraints on Yuko and then she stood up.
"Do you have any idea what's going on?" Yuko asked.
"No I just woke up. You?"
"Nope."
"Alright then let's go look for the others. Where to next Mari-chan?"
"Go down the hall and make a left. First door on the left." Mari-chan said.
"Mariko who's Mari-chan?" Yuko asked.
"She's right there. Now let's go."
Mariko and Yuko walked out into the hall and quickly made their way to the next room. There she found Acchan and Takamina.
"Mariko!" they both said.
"Shhhhhh!"
Mariko and Yuko released Acchan and Takamina.
"Where are we?" Takamina asked.
"Where is everyone?" Acchan asked.
"I don't know but we're looking for them." Mariko said.
"Where do we go now?"
"Out the door, go down and make a right. Thrid door on the left."
"Thank Mari-chan."
"Who's Mari-chan?" Takamina asked.
"She's right next to you. Now let's move!"
Everyone made their way out into the hall and to the next room. There they found Mayuyu and Yukirin.
"Hey you guys!" Mayuyu said.
"We're here to save you!" Yuko said.
As Yuko and Takamina were busy releasing Mayuyu and Yukirin, Mari-chan said,
"Mariko you're group is getting too big. You need to split up."
"Good point. Who should I take?" Mariko asked.
"Take, Mayuyu and Yukirin. Have Takamina take Acchan and Yuko."
"Ok sounds like a plan."
The entire time Mariko was talking to Mari-chan, Acchan was staring at her giving her weird looks.
"What?" Mariko asked.
"It's nothing." Acchan said.
"I'm just talking to Mari-chan."
"That's nice."
"What's her problem?" Mariko thought.
"Alright we're going to have to split up. Acchan and Yuko, you go with Takamina while Mayuyu and Yukirin come with me. You ready?" Mariko said.
"Yeah!"
"Then let's move out and find the others."
For the next half hour, Mariko listened to Mari-chan's directions and managed to find Rena, Jurina, and Sayaka. Takamina also found Sae and Haruna. The only one that was missing was Miichan.
"Where do you think they took Miichan?" Mariko asked.
"Go to the the very last room at the end of the hall. She should be there." Mari-chan said.
Mariko went to the last door and found Miichan talking to a man in a black suit.
"Who are you?" Mariko asked.
"I am Ken. And you?" the man asked.
"Mariko. What are you doing with Miichan?"
"Oh you know catching up. I wanted to know how my weapons were considering the fact that she stole them."
"What?"
"Oh Mimi you didn't tell them? Well maybe I'll tell her for you."
"Ken don't." Miichan said.
"Minegishi Minami code name "Mimi" She worked with the Special Forces for ten years before she took off and ran taking most of my weapons."
"Wait a minute. Mimi?"
Mariko remembered the weapon incident back at the facility. The signature left was the name Mimi.
"You're Mimi? The one who's been giving everyone weapons?" Mariko said.
"Yeah." Miichan said with her head down.
"Remind me to kill you when we get home."
"I don't know why Mimi left. She was a good agent and even a better scientist." Ken said.
"I left because you were doing things that never should've happened."
"But it was all in the name of science. And don't forget you helped to." Ken said.
"What did you do?" Mariko asked.
"Mimi here helped me create a new drug guaranteed to cause one's mind to lose it. We were testing it on people but then Mimi said it was wrong and freed all the patients. Then she also took all the weapons we had stashed that could fight and win another world war. The drug was still in testing when Mimi worked here. It's been five years now. Shall we see how it works now?"
"Don't let him do that to Miichan!" Mari-chan said.
Ken pulled out a syringe with strange red fluid inside. Her was going to stick it in Miichan but Mariko stepped up.
"You can use it on me. I'll be your test subject. As long as you promise to let me and the other patients walk free." Mariko said.
"Mariko!"
"Deal."
Ken walked over and injected the red fluid into Mariko's body. Mariko instantly felt a shock shoot throughout her body causing her to collapse. Shock waves shot thorughout her body. Then there was a loud ringing in her head followed by an unbearable head ache. Images from her past flashed across her eyes. It was as if she was rewatching her whole life.
"Well it looks like the drug is working. Pretty soon you won't be the same person as you were before. You'll be nothing but a nut shell." Ken said.
"Ken you bastard!" Miichan said.
"This is payback Mimi. For what you did to the agency and me. I thought we had somehting special."
"You're a mad man!"
"I maybe but you helped. And in a couple of minutes your friend here will be want to start bashing her head against something so how about I have you join her."
Ken was about to inject Miichan when someone tapped his shoulder. He turned around and got a fist to the face. Mariko punched him hard and he fell to the ground knocked out cold.
"Mariko!"
"No one touches my Gachapin." Mariko said.
Mariko undid the ties on Miichan and helped her up.
"How come the drug isn't working on you?" Miichan asked.
"I don't know. Guess it was defective. Anyways, where is everyone Mari-chan?"
"They're gathering in the main entrance. You better hurry because guards are coming back soon." Mari-chan said.
"Alright thanks Mari-chan."
"Who's Mari-chan?'
"She's been helping me out this whole time. Didn't you see her come in with me?"
"Uhhh-"
"No time we need to move."
Mariko and Miichan ran to the main entrance where the others were.
"There's the door let's go!" Mariko said.
Togehter, they all ran as fast as they could. But soon an alarm went off and metal gates started to fall. Everyone made it through and Mariko and Mari-chan were the last ones.
"You go. You're friends need you." Mari-chan said.
"But Mari-chan-"
"No buts. Just go!"
Mari-chan pushed Mariko off and she slid thorough just before the gate closed.
"Mari-chan!"
Mariko tried to go back but Sayaka stopped her.
"What are you doing Mairko?!" Sayaka said.
"Mari-chan is still in there! She's going to get killed. She's still just a child!" Mariko cried.
"Mariko we don't have time for this. We need to go now!"
Thanks to Mayuyu, she managed to hot wire a bus and Sayaka drove all the way back to the facility. Mariko didn't remember most of the ride because she was too busy crying over Mari-chan. The fact that she couldn't save her hurt Mariko deeply. When they reached the facility, everyone went inside ready to take a long rest. But before everyone left, they all gathered around Mariko.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
"Well there's something that's been worrying us." Takamina said.
"Well the entire time we were escaping, you kept saying that you were talking to a person called Mari-chan."
"Yeah her name was Mariko. She helped me find you guys and helped me escape as well."
"Mariko, there wasn't anyone with us that went by the name Mari-chan."
"What?"
"Yeah. When you came in and found me, you were talking to yourself like there was somewhere but there wasn't." Yuko said.
"Yeah and when you came and rescued me you asked if I saw Mari-chan but to be honest I didn't. You just pointed at an empty space in a corner." Miichan said.
"Also, when everyone was racing for the exit, you were the last one to come out. There was no one esle behind you." Sayaka said.
"Impossible. She was so real to me. She actually kinda looked like me."
That's when it hit Mariko. During the time when images of her past were flashing in her mind, she remembered seeing one of her when she was 15. She looked exactly like Mari-chan when she was that age. Could it be that Mari-chan was actually fifteen year old Mariko? Was that why the drug didn't effect Mariko because she was already mad? This made Mariko's head spin to the point of collapsing.
"Mariko!"
Everything was slowly starting to fade away and get dark. Mariko couldn't believe what was happening. So many questions were running through her head.
"So Mari-chan wasn't real? The entire time I was in there, I was just saving everyone based on instinct? Am I going nuts like everyone else? Why is this happening? What's going to happen next? I'm scared."
Mariko's racing mind was silenced by complete darkness.
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Well there's chapter 25! I hope everyone liked it! Do you want to find out what happens to Mariko? Well find out in the next chapter which isn't going to be a while because I'm super busy with school stuff. Anyways, please tell me what you think and I'll try to get back as soon as possible!
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EH?! :shock: Mariko is going to be nut???!!!
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Wow more I rear your fic more I'm thinking that everybody is mad even the doctors lol
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I just finished reading through chapter 25 :cool1: I can say that this fic is really crazy! :mon fyeah: and i really love it!
Please continue writing! :mon pray2:
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Ah it makes me a bit sad hearing that it's close to the end. but wow Mariko ended up being mad just like everyone else too lol, as to be expected.
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Minna I'm back! Sorry it took me forever school stuff had to be done. Anyways, here's the next chapter and I hope you all enjoy it! Doso! Also this chapter is a little short because I was having a hard time imagineing it. Sorry.
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Chapter 26
Mariko couldn't recall what had happend for the past few hours. All she remembered was being told that Mari-chan wasn't real and that she was just a figure of her imagination. Then after that she had blacked out. When Mariko woke up, she found herself in a bed. She looked around and noticed that it wasn't one of the rooms in the facility. She was somewhere else. Mariko sat and tried to move but there were restraints tying to her bed.
"What the?"
Mariko wondered why she was in retraints. Then the door opened and a nurse came in. Seeing that she was awake, the nurse ran out and brought a doctor in. The doctor had long brown hair and brown eyes.
"Hello Mariko. My name is Kasai Tomomi and I'm the doctor in charge of you. Do you remember anything that happened from yesterday?" she asked.
"Yeah a little. My head still hurts a little. By the way, why am I here and why am I in restraints?" Mariko asked.
"You had a break down at your old facility so you were transferred here. The restraints were put on because on the way here, you went berserk and attacked one of our nurses."
"I did? Oh my gosh I am so sorry. I don't even remember."
"It's alright. The nurse wasn't hurt too badly."
"So when can I go back to Hirokawa Mental Facility?" Mariko asked.
"Well I'm afraid it's going to be a while. You see, you think you're fine but actually there's something very wrong up here." Kasai said.
"But I feel fine."
"Well let's take a few tests and we'll determine your condition from there."
Kasai walked over and hooked Mariko up to a shock therapy machine.
"Is this really needed?" Mariko asked.
"Yes. It's just to make sure you don't get too wild." Kasai said.
"Now I'm going to ask you some questions and all I need is you to answer them."
"Ask away."
"When did you start imagining other people?" Kasai asked.
"Yesterday was the first time." Mariko said.
"Ok and before that, did you ever start hearing strange things. Like voices?"
"No. None of this start until yesterday."
"Did you have any mental problems in the past?"
"No none that I can remember."
"I see. Alright Mariko now I'm going to shock you a little bit and you tell me if it hurts."
Kasai grabbed the remote and turned it on. Mariko was inspecting to feel pain but instead, she didn't feel anything.
"Um I don't really feel anything." Mariko said.
"Ok then I'm going to turn it up a little higher." Kasai said.
When she did, Mariko could feel a little tingling sensation but not a lot.
"I feel something but no much." Mariko said.
"Ok then I'm going to put it on full power." Kasai said.
Kasai it the switch and Mariko felt a jolt shoot up her body. But it wasn't pain. It was more like a tickling sensation. Pretty soon Mariko found herself laughing and shaking all over the place. Then it stopped and Mariko was left speechless from all the laughing. Meanwhile, Kasai took a few notes. Then she took off the shock wave patches and handed Mariko a piece of paper and a pen.
"Mariko I want you to draw me something. Any thing that comes to mind." she said.
"Ok."
Mariko sat there and thought about it for a while. Then an idea popped in her head and she drew it. Mariko was drew a Gachapin because it reminded her of Miichan. She felt pretty good looking at it and complimented herself on the drawing. When she showed it to Kasai, the doctor looked at Mariko with a strange look.
"Mariko what is this?" Kasai asked.
"It's Gachapin." Mariko said.
"Really because all I see is a dog."
"What?"
Mariko looked at the drawing and she was right. Mariko had drawn a dog and not a Gachapin.
"I could've sworn I drew a Gachapin." Mariko said scratching her head.
Kasai took some more notes and then said,
"Well I'm going to revaluate my notes and get back to you soon."
"Ok sounds good."
Kasai got up and left Mariko leaving her alone. Mariko sat there staring at all the things in her room. The walls were metal which was very strange and the door sounded very heavy when they were shut. Mariko continued to sit there waiting quietly when suddenly she started to hear something.
"Mariko help us..." a voice said.
"We can't take it anymore...."
"I'm going to lose it...."
The voices sounded a lot like her patients back in the facility.
"Mariko help. I don't like our new doctor. Please come back soon." the voice sounded like Rena.
"I want Nyannyan. The new doctor has locked me up and I can't get out. Mariko where are you?" the voice was Yuko's.
"Mariko I can't take it much longer. I just might lose it." Jurina's voice echoed in her head.
Mariko didn't know where the voices were coming from but they were becoming unbareable. The cries of her patients made her feel something was wrong and she needed to get back to the facility. But how could she when she was still tied to the bed. Mariko sat there trying to think of something when the doctor came back in with a cart.
"What is all that for?" Mariko asked.
"We need to take a sample of your blood." Kasai said.
"Ok."
Mariko didn't have a problem with giving blood since she's done it before. But when Kasai came over with the needle, something in Mariko's head screamed. This caused her to break free of her restraints and knock Kasai over.
"Run." a voice said.
Mariko ran out and down the hall. She just kept running and running searching for an exit. But no matter where she was, she would just find herself more lost than before. Mariko could hear the foot steps of people coming. Scared and alert, Mariko took a scalpal on a nearby surgery cart and waited. Then when the person was about to come out, Mariko stabbed them. There was a loud scream that sounded very familiar to Mariko. She looked over and saw Acchan on the ground bleeding.
"Acchan!"
Mariko ran over and tried to help her fallen friend when something came behind and struck her. Mariko looked over and saw Jurina.
"Jurina what are you-"
Before Mariko could finish what she was saying, Jurina ran over and punched Mariko in the face. Then she got on top of her and started strangling her. Mariko was about to pass out when she grabbed the scalpal and stabbed Jurina's leg. Jurina got off and fell over.
"Jurina what's going on?" Mariko asked.
Jurina didn't say anything, she just stared at her with a cold look. Mariko didn't know what to do. But then she heard foot steps from behind her. Next thing she knew, she was surrounded by everyone.
"Takamina, Yuko, Haruna, Rena, Sayaka, Sae, Yukirin, Mayuyu. What are you all doing?"
They didn't say anything. Instead they all pulled out bats and started to charge at Mariko. One by one, they started beating Mariko to a pulp. Mariko didn't fight back because they were her friends. So why were they hurting her? As Mariko sat there being beaten by her friends, the voice in her head said something.
"Kill them."
This made Mariko snap and she no longer controlled her body. She grabbed a bat from Rena and knocked her back. Then she took them all down until everyone was on the ground moaning in pain. But Mariko wasn't done yet. She walked over to each person and beated them until they stopped moving and breathing. She didn't stop until everyone was dead. When it was all over, Mariko found herself in the center of all the bodies covered in their blood.
"How was it?" the voice asked.
"What happened?" Mariko said.
"You killed them. You killed everyone you loved."
"No... There's no way."
"Look at yourself. It's their blood on your hands. You killed them."
"You're wrong!"
"Did you like it? Killing the people you loved and trusted the most." the voice asked.
"No! I did it to protect myself. It was all an accident." Mariko said.
"No you did it because you wanted to kill them. The lust for blood and violence was reaching out to you begging to kill. You're a murder Mariko. Or better yet, a monster."
"NOOOOO!"
Mariko took the bat and started beating herself with it.
"Get out of my head!" she yelled as she continued to beat herself.
Mariko could feel her own blood dripping down her face. But it wasn't enough, she wasn't going to stop until she was dead like the others.
"You can't stop yourself Mariko. You'll always keep killing and killing." the voice said.
"Shut up!"
With one finaly blow, Mariko felt everything leave. Everything got quiet and then once again, dark. When Mariko woke up, she found herself in a bed again. Only this time there were more restraints and Mariko was in a straight jacket. She was going to say something when she heard voices outside her room.
"Hey did you hear? That Mariko chick broke out and went delusional." a woman said.
"Yeah. She killed 10 guards with one of their night sticks. It was horrible." another woman said.
"That's awful."
"Yeah and what's worse is then she started to beat herself. By the time the other guards foound her, she was in the middle of having a seizure."
"My gosh. She really needs help. Do you think she'll ever get out?"
"I doubt it. She may be here forever."
"This is horrible."
Mariko couldn't believe what she had just heard. She was glad that she didn't kill her friends. But she was also scared now. The fact that her mind was able to make her think such things was just unimaginable. Mariko thought maybe it would be best for her to stay where she was. It was obvious that she was sick and needed help.
"Hey Mariko."
Mariko turned around and saw Mari-chan again.
"I thought you were dead." Mariko said.
"I can't die silly. I'm just a figure of your imagination remember?" Mari-chan said.
"Oh yeah. Hey do you think you could stay here with me and keep me company. It's nice to talk to someone even if you're not real."
"Sure. I'll stay with you."
"Thanks. Hey and maybe when I get out, we can go get ice cream."
"That sounds great Mariko."
"Well I remembered how much I used to love it when I was little."
"You know you don't have to stay here. You can leave if you want." Mari-chan said.
"But I'm sick and I need help. So I'm going to stay here and get cured." Mariko said.
"You never will be. These people won't help you. You're just here so you don't hurt others. This place is more like a jail rather than a mental hospital."
"Well that's fine with me. As long as I'm here not hurting anyone I'm happy with that."
"You're crazy you know?"
"Yeah I know."
Mariko spent the rest of the time talking to her fictional younger self. But she also wondered how everyone at the facility was doing. What Mariko didn't know was that things at the faciltiy were becoming far more worse than what she could possibly imagine.
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Well there's chapter 26! I hope you all enjoyed it and taking a look into Mariko's head. She was having one heck of a nightmare. Anyways, the next chapter is going to be from a different point of view of another character. Look forward to it and please tell me what you think!
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ohhh I like where this is going, but the way everything seems, it feels kind of like maybe everyone from the facility isn't real, and Mariko's been in the hospital the whole time imagining it. Lol, or maybe I watched too many sci-fi movies where that happens xD
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has mariko gone mad :?
or
all of these were Mariko's hallucinations???? :? :?
please update soon :bow:
i can't wait for the next chapter!! :tantrum:
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This chapter really gave me goosebumps. The series gets darkened more and more with a different kind of 'mad'.
And Mariko was the scariest madman ever. :lol:
ohhh I like where this is going, but the way everything seems, it feels kind of like maybe everyone from the facility isn't real, and Mariko's been in the hospital the whole time imagining it. Lol, or maybe I watched too many sci-fi movies where that happens xD
Also thought like this too. If it probably turns out to be true (maybe in next chapters), madness is indeed so complex.
Anyways, the next chapter is going to be from a different point of view of another character. Look forward to it and please tell me what you think!
Waiting for it... and I'm kinda hoping it's that certain 'someone''s point of view. :D
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Mariko imagination is powerful
I thought mariko really kill her friend
Please continued
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Well everyone today's chapter is going to be in someone else's point of of view. You want to find out who? Well keep reading to find out. This person is very close to Mariko and is basically filling her shoes while she's gone. I hope you all enjoy this chapter because the end is coming soon.
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Chapter 27
Ever since Mariko was taken away from the facility, things just haven't been the same. Everyone has started to feel that there was something missing from the group. Because Mariko was gone, Miichan was the one who had to do all the work. Because she was a nurse, she wasn't quite sure how to handle all the patients. Miichan's first stop was Haruna's room. Miichan walked in and found Haruna reading a book.
"Hello Haruna." Miichan said.
"Hello." Haruna said.
"How are you feeling today?"
"Pretty good. Yuko's been laying off me recently because of Mariko. I hope she comes back soon."
"Me too. Well I just came to check on you. I'm going to go check on Yuko."
Miichan got up and walked over to Yuko's room. There, Yuko was on the ground staring at the ceiling. When she saw Miichan, she jumped up and walked over to Miichan.
"Have you heard any news about Mariko?" she asked.
"No. I've come to check on you." Miichan said.
"I'm fine. I'm just a little sad that Mariko's gone. I really miss her."
"Well you know, since Mariko is gone, that means no one can stop you from doing whatever you like to Haruna."
The squirrel girl cheered up.
"Really?"
Yuko got that same perverted smile that she always had when thinking about Haruna.
"Well I'll leave you be. Good luck with Haruna."
As soon as Miichan left, she heard a scream come from Haruna's room. Yuko must have gotten to her. Miichan then went down to Jurina and Rena's room. She found the two playing a game when she walked in.
"Hello girls. I came to check in on you. How is everything?" Miichan asked.
"Not good. We miss Mariko! When is she coming back?" Jurina said.
"I don't know. She could be there for a while."
"But we want her back. Rena misses the MelonPan she would always give her."
"I really miss Mariko." Rena said.
"Well I'm sure she'll be out in no time."
"If she isn't, then I'm going down there and busting her out myself!" Jurina said.
"You know that's not a bad idea." Miichan said.
"Yeah! I just need a ton of weapons."
"I can arrange that."
"What?"
"Nothing. I just came to see how you were doing. Go back to playing your game."
Miichan left thinking she had a close call. Acchan and Takamina were walking by when they found Miichan and stopped by to talk to her.
"Hey Miichan how are you handling things since Mariko left?" Takamina asked.
"It's not bad but still a lot of work." Miichan said.
"Well maybe she'll get back soon. Hey by the way, Sayaka was looking for you. She said she had something important to tell you."
"Really? Where is she?"
"In her office like always." Acchan said.
"Alright thanks."
"Come on Acchan let's go play that Dance, Dance Evolution game you love so much." Takamina said as she took Acchan's hand.
"Yay! I won't lose to you this time!" Acchan said.
"They really are husband and wife." Miichan thought.
Miichan went down to Sayaka's office where Yukirin and Mayuyu were also there. They were huddled around a computer screen.
"Hey Takamina said you needed me?" Miichan said.
"Yeah come over here." Sayaka said beckoning Miichan over to the computer.
On the computer screen was Mariko. She was on a bed talking to someone but there was no one.
"Now watch this."
Mayuyu turned on a thermal camera mode and then you could see two red spots. One was Mariko and another was someone else. It looked like a little girl.
"What is this?" Miichan asked.
"This is security footage from the place Mariko is in. Mayuyu managed to hack into their security and find this video." Sayaka said.
"Nice Mayuyu."
"It was easy to get past their firewall." Mayuyu said.
"This must be the so called Mari-chan." Sayaka said.
"Why is she invisible on the camera?" Yukirina asked.
"An invisible camo..." Miichan said.
"A what?" Sayaka said.
"I've seen it in top military bases. It's a suit that can make you invisible to the enemy. The only way to see them is to wear thermal sense goggles or special contacts that allow you to see the person."
"Well that explains how we couldn't see her. But why couldn't we hear her?"
"You can only hear them with a special ear bud. They must have put it in Mariko while she was asleep along with the contacts. Combine the two and you got Mariko talking to someone who's real but everyone else can't see them therefore making them think she's crazy."
"So Mariko is being tricked into thinking she is crazy?"
"Yep."
"Who would do this?" Yukirin asked.
"Well I looked into it and found this."
Mayuyu typed something and up came a file with Mariko's information on it. It had everything about her from where she lived and who her parents were to where she graduated high school and who her best friend was in college.
"What is this?"
"Apparently Mariko is a test subject for an experiment." Mayuyu said.
"What's the experiment?" Miichan asked.
"Making someone think they're crazy using a mixture of military technology and drugs."
"So Mariko has been nothing but an experiment all her life?"
"Looks like it. They've got every major event in her life has been recorded."
"Who's in charge of all this?" Sayaka asked.
"An agency called M.A.D."
"MAD?"
"Mental Agent Disaster."
"What a stupid name." Yukirin said.
"They're basically and agency that tries to create mental insanity on a perfectly sane person. They've gone through countless experiments trying to find right technique. Their goal is to make the person so insane that they finally lose it and kill themselves. Mariko was lucky up until now. Because she was here, the agency couldn't touch her. But after the whole kidnapping thing with your old boss, they were able to find her and ended up in there."
Miichan felt guilting learning it was her fault Mariko was taken away.
"How come no one has found out about them?" Sayaka asked.
"They're secretive and good at hiding their tracks." Mayuyu said.
"We gotta get her out of there before she really does go nuts and kills herself." Miichan said.
"How? The place is heavily secured with military officers that by the wave have GUNS!"
"You leave that to me. For now let's gather everyone else and tell them what's going on."
A couple minutes later, everyone was gathered in the lunch room.
"Alright everyone listen up!" Sayaka said.
"Mariko isn't actually crazy. She's actually a test subject for some experiment that's trying to make her insane enough to the point of killing herself. Now I know that everyone here loves Mariko and wouldn't want that to happen to her. So we need to go in there and bust her out. Is everyone with me!"
"YOSH!" everyone chanted.
"Good! Then tomorrow we strike at dawn. Everyone prepare yourself because tomorrow we fight and bring our friend back!"
With that, everyone went bed ready for tomorrow. Miichan knew she was going against some tough guys and was going to need some heavy artillary. Miichan made a few phone calls and then went to her house. She walked down to her basement and turned on the light. When she did, there were guns everywhere. Miichan had everything from blades, guns, and explosives. Miichan was careful to pick out just the right weapons for everyone to use. Then she walked over to the wall and flipped a switch. A light came on revealing a suit.
"Lucifer."
That was the suits name. There hanging on a stand was an all black suit with a metal back pack and a balck helmet to the side. Lucifer was a suit that Miichan herself created back when she worked for her old agency.
"I thought I'd never have to use you." Miichan said.
It was a special suit that protected the user from any blade slash, bullet and explosive. It also gave the user the ability to move super fast and have incredible strength. There were also weapons within the suit the user could use. It was the perfect armor for any battle. But there was only one catch. The suit ran on the energy of the user. The more you used it, the more energy it drained from you. If you wore it too long then you would die. Miichan learned that the hard way when she lost one of her friends in a battle.
"I guess it's time for you to fly again Lucifer."
Miichan took down the suit and zipped on the smooth black one piece. She made sure everything was functioning properly. Then when that was done, she took two Glock hand guns and put them in the gun holders on the side. Miichan also too two machete blades and slung them across her back along with a sash of grenades. With this, Miichan was ready to fight a war.
"I'm going to get you Mariko. Just wait."
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Well there's chapter 27! I hope everyone enjoyed it and everyone is ready for the battle. Did Miichan scare you with her suit and weapons? The battle is coming soon so be ready! Please tell me what you think and be prepared for the most epic battle yet.
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~yay~so Mariko isn't crazy, huh?? XD XD
i'm looking forward to the battle :lol:
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wooaaah,the war is coming..
c'mon miichan, you should save mariko!!
i'm waiting for the war!!!!
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Damn it, M.A.D.!! :fuckyou: What the hell?! Mariko, a test subject?! :angry:
Alright, Miichan.. you have my consent to start the war. I'll be satisfied if you can kill 'em all..
< excuse my language.. :lol: >
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Hello everyone! The time has come for the battle to commence! I hope you all enjoy it and without further ado, let the war begin!
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Chapter 28
Time: 5:00 am
Loctation: In the skies above MAD head quarters
"Alright everyone make sure your guns are loaded and everything is set to go." Miichan said.
"Hai!"
"Acchan your suit isn't zipped all the way up." Takamina said.
Takamina walked over and zipped up Acchan's suit.
"Thanks Takamina. I can't believe I'm wearing this. I don' t like the color." Acchan said.
"Hey I think you look very cute in it."
"Really? Well I guess it's ok then." Acchan started blushing.
"Nyannyan you look super sexy!" Yuko said.
"Shut up you pervert!" Haruna said trying to cover herself.
"Rena hold on to these. We're going to need them when we reach the ground." Jurina said handing Rena a bag of hand guns.
"Ok. Make sure you have everything."
"Yep. Already locked and loaded."
"Woohoo I can't wait to make things go boom!" Sae said.
"Hey you just be careful. If even one of those explosivses gets hit by a bullet you're done for. But I guess that's why we gave them to you becaue only you would be crazy enough to carry all of them." Sayaka said.
"I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait!"
"Mayuyu do you have everything?" Yukirin asked.
"Yeah do you?"
"Yep."
"Are you sure it's ok for you to be carrying that assult rifle? That thing can pack a punch." Mayuyu said.
"Hey you're carrying that mini bazooka of yours." Yukirin said.
"Good point."
"Alright everyone we got a minute untill drop time. Is everyone ready?" Miichan asked.
"Yes!" everyone said.
"Alright then let's go!"
Miichan opened the door of the plane and one by one everyone jumped out. Then once Miichan was the only one left, she jumped out too. Everyone was wearing a parashute except her because she didn't need one. With the click of a button, the metal back pack on Miichan's suit unfolded and revealed a pair of black wings. Miichan dove down with the others all the way to the ground. They landed right outside the front gates.
"Alright now everyone listen." Miichan said.
"The suits I gave you only protect you from blade cuts. But if you get shot it will break through so becarful around guns ok?"
Everyone nodded their heads.
"Good then everyone get into battle positions."
Everyone fanned out while Miichan pulled out one of her guns and loaded it. Then she calmly walked into the front doors. There was a security guard who didn't even see her come in because he was too abosorbed in reading his newspaper.
"I'd like to speak to the manager please." Miichan said.
"I'm sorry but the manager isn't seeing anyone today you'll have to-"
The security guard was silenced by the barrel of a gun being shoved in his mouth.
"He's not seeing anyone? That's too bad. Guess I'll have to go talk to him myself."
Miichan pulled the trigger and there was a loud bang followed by blood splatter. This caused the alarm to go off and other guards rush into the scene.
"Everyone now!"
The others crashed through the windows and took down some of the guards. They were already shooting but somehow everyone managed to take cover.
"Ok Mayuyu, Jurina, Rena, and Yukirin come with me! Sayaka you got the rest?" Miichan shouted as she shot another guard down.
"Yeah I got it you just go find Mariko!" Sayaka said as she took out two guards with her katana.
Miichan was amazed at how Sayaka was easily able to dodge all the bullets that were flying past her head.
"Yuko watch Haruna and make sure she doesn't pass out on you." Miichan said.
"I got it!" Yuko said as she shot two guards with her pistols.
"Hey I won't pass out!" Haruna complained as she stabbed a guard with a sythe.
"Acchan look out!" Takamina shotuted as she shot down a guard with her machine gun.
"You too!" Acchan said as she shot down three gurads with her AK-47.
"Alright then let's move!"
Miichan, Yukirin, Mayuyu, Rena, and Jurina all ran into a separate section leaving the others behind.
"Mariko is on the second to last floor in the basement area." Mayuyu said pulling out a digital map.
"How to we get there?" Yukirin asked.
"We'll have to take an elevator. It's the only way down."
"Where is it?"
"Just up ahead."
They all ran down the hall towards where the elevator would be. They found the elevator and a wall of guards with heavy machine guns. They fired but luckily everyone got out of the way.
"Yukirin!"
"On it!"
Yukirin loaded her assult rife and aimed the long barrel down the middle of the group. When she fired, she sent them flying across the area leaving a huge spray of blood.
"Let's move!"
They all got into the elevator and pressed the floor Mariko was on. They were about half way when the elevator came to a sudden halt.
"What happened?" Miichan asked.
"They stopped the elevator. Give me a minute and I'll try to override the program." Mayuyu said.
But then there was a ding at the door.
"Not good. Jurina!"
"I got it."
As soon as the door opened, Jurina leaped out like a little monkey and started shooting all the guards outside with her dual action machine guns. Within minutes, they were all killed.
"Got it! Jurina get back in here!" Mayuyu said.
Jurina quickly jumped back in before the elevator doors closed. They were almost there but then the elevator stopped again.
"Mayuyu!"
"I got it just give me time!"
The door opened and this time all the guards outside had all kinds of blades.
"Rena!"
"Ok here I go!"
Rena stepped out with a massive chainsaw. She flipped a switch and the thing started buzzing and tearing up the ground. Rena could barely carry it but then she ran swinging the chainsaw at full speed. All the guards were slaughtered with Rena's assult.
"Alright let's go!" Mayuyu said.
Rena got back in and the elevator went down again. They had reached the floor and now it was time to get serious.
"Which room is she in?" Miichan asked.
"The very last one which is all the way in the back." Mayuyu said.
"Let's move."
They started to run down the hall when they were stopped by a huge wave of guards.
"Rena and I got these guys. You keep going." Jurina said as she loaded her machine guns.
As Rena and Jurina distracted them, Yukirin, Mayuyu and Miichan went ahead. But then they were stopped once again by another wave of guards.
"Here I've programed Mariko's location into this map. Take it and go. Yukirin and I got this." Mayuyu said.
"Let's kill them all Mayuyu!" Yukirin said.
"With pleasure."
The two started shooting eveything like there was no tomorrow. Meanwhile Miichan quickly ran past them. She made a quick turn to the right and found more guards. Miichan quickly jumped to the side and pulled out two Glocks. Then she ran down the hall and quickly shot all the guards down. When she was out of bullets, she tossed the guns to the side and pulled out the machete blades. There were a couple of guards in the way but that didn't stop her from cutting them all down. Miichan made another turn and met a new kind of enemy.
"Going somewhere?" he said in a low voice.
There was one guy that stood in front of Miichan that was the size of a small car. He looked like he could take down a fully grown gorilla.
"Move!"
Miichan jumped up and came down on the large brute with the machete blades. But he easily pushed Miichan to the side with a lot of force. Miichan hit hard but that didn't stop her. She pulled out a single pistol and shot right at the large brute. But he shook them off like it was nothing and came at Miichan. He grabbed her head and slammed her against the wall.
"Had enough?" he said.
"Not even close."
It was obvious that using guns wasn't going to work so it's time to use force. Miichan pressed a button on her suit which made it glow. Then she punched the brute sending him flying. Before her could do anything, Miichan ran over to him with amazing speed and punched him again. Then while he was still on the ground, Miichan took out a granade and shoved it in his mouth.
"Have a nice trip in hell." Miichan said as she pulled the pin.
Within seconds the grenade went off splattering the brutes brains across the hall. Miichan kept moving at full speed. Miichan checked the levels on her power suit and saw they were already at 75%. She could feel herself starting to get weak. Miichan made her way to another hall where another strange enemy waited for her. This person was very thin but had a strange weapon. They were two disc shaped blades connected by a chain.
"Let's play." he said.
He threw one blade and Miichan who easily dodged it but while she was dodging the first blade the second one came at her. It wrapped itself around Miichan's ankle and the man pulled her forward. When she was close enough, the man raised his other blade and was going to bring it down on Miichan's neck. But then Miichan shot something at the man from inside her suit. The man dropped to the ground clawing at his neck.
"Liquid nitrogen darts." Miichan said.
"Right now your throat is being turned into a popsicle."
The man tried to say something but was then silenced by death. Miichan kept moving and was almost there when another person stepped up. It was a woman and she was carrying a very large axe.
"You ready to die?" she asked.
"Hey that's my line."
The woman came at Miichan swinging her giant axe. She nearly took Miichan's head off if it wasn't for her quick reflexes. The woman swung only to miss and get her axe blade stuck in the wall.
"Guess it's my turn."
Miichan pulled out a single blade and pressed a button on the end. Then she stabbed the woman in the leg. Before she could take it out, she got blasted with ten thousand watts of electricity. The woman got fried. Miichan checked the power levels on her suit and saw it was now at 50%.
"Gotta find Mariko fast."
Miichan started running again and made it to Mariko's room. The door was at least six inches thick of steel. Miichan reached into her back pack and pulled out a single explosive. She set the timer and backed away. Then BOOM! The door busted down and Miichan rushed in.
"Mariko!"
"Gachapin?"
"I've come to-"
Something was squeezing Miichan's neck. It must have been the girl. Miichan pulled out a small clip and stuck it to whatever was on her. Within seconds, the girl became visible.
"I see you." Miichan said.
Before the girl could do anything, Miichan shot the girl with a revolver.
"Miichan!!"
"She's just a lie. Everything is a lie now come on we need to go!" Miichan said.
"What's goin on? Why are you here?" Mariko asked.
Miichan was annoyed by the girl's confusion and decided to shut her up. Miichan walked over and silenced Mariko with a kiss. When she let go, Mariko had calmed down.
"Everyone is here and we came to save you. Right now they're out there fighting a war and we need to go help them!" Miichan said.
"Miichan..."
"Mariko, your family has come to take you home."
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Well there's the first part of the battle! They got Mariko now all they have to do is get out. Want to find out how they get out? Well the next chapter will come out soon so be ready! Please tell me what you think!
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MUST read these two chapters I felt I'm left behind..
being so busy in my own fic haist..
BTW ACCHAN HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! FOREVER MY ACE!
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Wow things are getting intense! It's good to know that Mariko isn't actually crazy though.
"The man tried to say something but was then silenced by death" I couldn't help but laugh at this one line haha.
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Oh god it's gonna end soon?
I'm sorry this is my first time commenting. I was on a trip for a couple of week and sweet Jesus there are a lot of new fics here.
Everytime I was going to comment you already wrote another one XD
I remembered reading the first chapter and tough yes this is going to be interesting.
And yes I was right it was disturbed, crazy, funny and sad.
How you introduced the characters with their disorders and their crazy fights ALOT!
The funny trip that would always starting good and in the middle of all in disaster but ended up happy (with a few broken ribs and such)
How Sae got super mega sugar rush, Yuki&Mayu celebrating their anniversary with a little help of Mariko( that was my favourite by the way because those fans are crazy and how Yuki,Mayu&Mariko kicked and punched them it was hilarious)
AtsuMina&KojiYu fight. WMatsui&MaYuki fight ohhh :thumbsup
Marikos haunting of MiMi person XD
How we learned about their past oh how mush I wished to comment on every chapter.
Because to be honest every single chapter was great!
I grew to love these characters you're giving the OOO48 girls.
And I was surprised and tough that Mariko actually went crazy LoL turned to be even more surprising that she was a test subject.
Totally looking forward to the next chapter (maybe the last one)?
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Minna! This is the second to last chapter! Chapter 30 is going to be the end of it all! I hope you enjoy this next chapter and find out how everyone escapes!
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Chapter 29
Mariko couldn't believe what was going on. She was just resting in her room when Miichan came in and killed a random girl. Then Miichan told her how she wasn't actually crazy and she was just a test subject for some experiment. Mariko didn't understand any of it. Now she was running with her back up to the main lobby of the building where everyone else apparently was. Miichan and Mariko made it up to the lobby where everyone was. When she stepped in, it was like a war zone.
"Mariko!" everyone shouted when they saw her.
"Mariko get down!" Miichan said as she shoved her behind a desk.
"Take this and shoot anyone that comes near you."
Miichan handed her a small firearm and then ran off.
"Takamina, Acchan protect Mariko!" she said.
Takamina and Acchan made their way over behind the desk.
"Mariko!"
Acchan leanded in and hugged Mariko. Then she went back to shooting at the guards.
"It's good to see you Mariko." Takamina said.
"So how are we going to get out of here?" Mariko asked.
"We gotta get everyone to the roof."
"The roof?"
"Yeah our ride is waitng up there. For now we just have to make a path. Hey start shooting if you know how to aim."
Mariko looked up and tried shooting one of the guards. But she missed and almost hit Yuko.
"Hey don't shoot me shoot them!" she said.
"Sorry!"
"Maybe you should just stay down."
"Hey Sae make a path!" Sayaka shouted.
"Ok!"
Mariko watched Sae reach into her bag and pull out ten grenades all attached to one string.
"Take cover!" Sae shouted as she whipped the string making all the grenades fly staight at the guards with the pins removed.
There was a loud explosion than made Mariko's ears start ringing.
"Everyone head for the roof!" Miichan said.
Takamina grabbed Mariko and ran towards the stairs like the others. They had to get off at the fifth floor because the rest of the stairs were broken off. They ran across the room but then found themselves trapped.
"Sae how much time do we have?" Miichan asked.
"About five minutes." Sae said.
"Not good we need to get up to the roof quickly."
"Why do we have five minutes?" Mariko asked.
"Sae put timed explosives all over the place and if we don't get out of here in five minutes we're all gonna be blown to bits." Miichan said.
"Seriously?!"
"Yeah and seeing how we won't make it in time with all these guards in the way I have no choice but to use it. Rena get over here quick."
Mariko watched Rena walk over with a huge chainsaw to her side.
"I'm sorry Rena but it's only going to be for a little bit. You think you can handle it?"
"Yeah just do it already."
Miichan pulled out a syringe with red liquid in it. She injected it into Rena and she started shaking. Then Rena changed into her psyco mode and got that crazy smile on her face.
"Sick em girl!" Miichan said pointing at the guards.
Rena's chainsaw roared as she started laughing.
"Prepare to die!"
Rena ran straight at the guards and started slashing them all making a huge blood bath.
"What did you do to Rena?" Mariko asked.
"I injected her with a drug that activates her psyco mode." Miichan said.
"Is that safe?"
"It is as long as she doesn't get too crazy."
"I'm done!" the crazed Rena said.
"Good job let's move!"
Miichan grabbed Mariko and they ran over to the next stair case. They ran another five floors before they finally made it to the roof.
"Our ride insn't here yet!" Yuko said.
"We'll half to hold them off until it gets here." Yukirin said.
"Here they come!"
The roof flooded with a bunch of guards all heavily armed.
"Attack!"
Everyone charged at the shower of bullets.
"DIE!" Mayuyu shouted as she shot her bazooka at the mob making a giant hole.
"Kill them all!" Sayaka said as she took the heads of four guards with her katana.
"Hahaha boom boom boom!" Sae said as she threw grenades like they were flower petals.
"Acchan time for bullet rain attack!"
"On it!"
Acchan and Takamina started running straight at eachother. Then they used each other as stepping stones and actaully run up towards the sky. Then the two pushed off each other and started shooting mid air while spinning down on the guards. Both Acchan and Takakmina landed perfectly and continued fireing.
"Nyannyan time for our special move!"
"Ok here we go!"
Yuko jumped on top of Haruna's shoulders and pulled out two machine guns. Then Haruna who had a sythe pushed a button and a chain came out. She grabbed the end of the chain and started swinging the sythe around creating at least five feet of distantance. Then she started to move towards the guards as Yuko kept shooting. Haruna's sythe acted as a bullet repeller as it defelcted bullets and then Yuko was riding on top of Yuko shooting with out any worry in the world.
"Rena let's show them what we can do!" Jurina said.
"Finally!"
Rena slammed her chainsaw on the ground and then Jurina an over and stood on top. She pulled out two short baldes and held them to the side.
"Hit it!"
Rena hit a certain button on her chainsaw that made it zoom across the roof. As Rena was pushing the chainsaw, Jurina was using her short blade and chopping off the legs of the guards below. Rena ran around in circles around the guards until roof collapsed around them taking out a bunch of them.
"When is it coming?" Sayaka said as she removed her katana from one of the guards waist.
"Soon just keep fighting!" Miichan said as she threw a guy off the roof.
But then, two helicopters came out of nowhere and started shooting at everyone.
"Yukirin and Mayuyu take one Sayaka and I will take the other!" Miichan said.
"Mayuyu let's make fireworks!" Yukirin said as she swung her assult rifle over to the helicopters.
"Fire!"
Mayuyu shot a round from her bazooka and Yukirin shot a round from her rifle. The two rounds danced in the air circling each other. Then Mariko saw something she thought only happened in action movies. Mayuyu's round split into four different rounds and Yukirin's rounds started circling between them. When it hit, the helicopter blew up instantly and crashed down onto the ground.
"Miichan give me a charge!" Sayaka said.
Mariko watched Miichan shoot something at Sayaka's katana that caused it to glow. Then she ran off the roof right at the helicopter. Sayaka's blade struck down and chopped the helicopter in half right down the middle. Sayaka started to fall but then Miichan jumped over and pulled out a pair of black wings. She caught Sayaka and brought her back to the roof.
"Hey here comes our ride!"
Mariko looked over and saw a helicoter coming at them.
"There isn't enough room to land. We're going to have to jump." Miichan said.
"What?"
"No time just run. The place is gonnna blow soon!"
Miichan grabbed Mariko and pushed her off the roof. Mariko fell thinking she was going to be killed. But then Miichan grabbed her and glided her over to the helicopter. Soon everyone else got on but jumping over. Then right at the helicopter started flying away, the building blew up in one giant firery explosion.
"Jesus how many explosives did you use Sae?" Sayaka asked.
"All the ones that had warning labels on them!" Sae said.
"So basically all of them."
"Well I'm just glad that's over and done with." Takamina said.
"Uh not yet. Guys we got company." Jurina said.
Mariko looked over and saw ten helicopters chasing them.
"Mayuyu, Yukirin you got these guys?" Miichan asked.
"Leave it to us." Yukirin said as she loaded her rifle.
"Step back!"
Mayuyu leaned out and shot a round. It hit one of the helicopters causing it to crash.
"That's one!"
"My turn next!"
Yukirin shot two rounds and took out the back motor of a helicopter. It didn't take long for it to go down.
"Let me give it a go."
Sayaka jumped out of the helicopter and onto one of the others. She stabbed through the window and killed the piolit. Mariko watched Sayaka leap over to another plane before it crashed into the ground.
"Hey no fair! I wanna play too!" Rena said.
"Here use this."
Sae handed Rena a grenade launcher.
"Sweet."
Rena aimed and shot the helicopter Sayaka was on. Sayaka saw this and quickly jumped back over before it exploded.
"What are you doing?!" she said.
"Are you trying to kill me!"
"You mad?" Rena said as she bit her nails.
"You guys there are still six left." Jurina said.
"I got it!"
Yuko pulled out something that looked like water melon. She threw it out the window and it hit the propeller of a helicopter. A sticky substance coated the propeller causing it to stop. Soon after the helicopter crashed.
"What was that?" Mariko asked.
"Bubble gum!" Yuko said.
"Hey guys we're almost back at the facility." Miichan said.
"We need to get rid of them quickly."
"I got an idea!"
Haruna walked over and took Mayuyu's bazooka. She took a round and wrapped her chain around it. Once she loaded the bazooka, she handed it back to Mayuyu and told her to fire it. Mayuyu shot it and Haruna went flying out the helicopter. Everyone watched in suprise as Haruna carefully steered the rocket so that she took out each helicopter one by one. When the last one was down, Haurna turned the rocket so it was now aiming at Mariko. It looked like she was going to hit but then Haruna let go of the chain and the rocket went somewhere else. Haruna landed right on top of Yuko.
"Nyannyan that was so cool!" Yuko said.
"I saw it in a movie once." Haruna said.
"What movies have you been watching?" Jurina asked.
"Hey guys we're here!"
The helicopter landed and everyone got off. Then it took off leaving everyone.
"Is everyone here?" Miichan asked.
"Yep!"
"Good then we can finally go home and re-"
Suddenly Miichan collapsed right into Mariko's arms.
"Gachapin!"
Mariko looked and saw a red light flashing on Miichan's suit.
"Get this thing off of her!"
Mariko unzipped Miichan's suit showing she was only wearing a bra and underwear. But Mariko didn't care at the moment. Mariko checked for a pulse and didn't find one. Mariko began performing CPR.
"Come on Gachapin live!" Mariko said.
Mariko kept pumping Miichan's chest and pressing her lips against hers trying to bring the girl back to life. Then finally, Miichan coughed and started breathing again.
"Miichan!"
Mariko hugged Miichan sobbing.
"I thought I lost you." Mariko said.
"What? I'd never leave you." Miichan said.
"Good because I won't let you."
"Aww Mariko don't tell me you're going soft."
"Shut up stupid Gachapin!"
"It's good to have you back Mariko. It's good to have you back."
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Well there's chapter 29! Everyone made it out alive and now they're back home safe and sound. The next chapter is going to be the last chapter so get out the tissues because it's going to be a funny ending. Please tell me what you think! Oh and one more thing:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ACCHAN! You wil always be Japan's #1 idol! We love you!
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:panic: I just recetly commented and now you've updated?
Nyannyan time for our special move!"
"Ok here we go!"
Yuko jumped on top of Haruna's shoulders and pulled out two machine guns. Then Haruna who had a sythe pushed a button and a chain came out. She grabbed the end of the chain and started swinging the sythe around creating at least five feet of distantance. Then she started to move towards the guards as Yuko kept shooting. Haruna's sythe acted as a bullet repeller as it defelcted bullets and then Yuko was riding on top of Yuko shooting with out any worry in the world.
"Rena let's show them what we can do!" Jurina said.
"Finally!"
Rena slammed her chainsaw on the ground and then Jurina an over and stood on top. She pulled out two short baldes and held them to the side.
"Hit it!"
Rena hit a certain button on her chainsaw that made it zoom across the roof. As Rena was pushing the chainsaw, Jurina was using her short blade and chopping off the legs of the guards below. Rena ran around in circles around the guards until roof collapsed around them taking out a bunch of them.
:rofl: Why am I thinking of power ranger? haaha I'm sorry LOL
And how can you even manage to came up with these?! And I mean this entire fic! It's awesome!
Ah new chapter I will bring tissues when I'm reading it XD
ArígatOU! :kneelbow:
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these chapters have been very intense! :shock:
I even thought that really Mariko was mad! :mon cry:
the fight scenes were fit for a gore! :mon scare:
and suddenly transformed into something worthy of an action movie!
The explosions were incredible! :mon fire:
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OMG!!! :shocked :shocked
it's like the whole facilities are just crazy people!!! :shocked :shocked
how can thêy destroy the whole building whith only12 people????? :shocked :shocked
and thanks goodness, Mariko is finally home :twothumbs :twothumbs
but how can they deal with the problems after this? :nervous destroy the whole biulding!!! :shocked: :shocked:
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Minna! This is the last chapter of the Mad House series. I hope everyone has enjoyed the story so far and once again thank you soo much for reading! I hope you all enjoy this last and final chapter! Doso!
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Chapter 30
The day has come. The day Mariko had dreamed about for the longest time. The day everyone was being released from Hirokawa Mental Faciltiy. It was a a couple months after the huge rescue and now things have calmed down. Everyone worked hard and now tomorrow, everyone is going to be relased. Mariko was sad that all her friends were leaving but also very happy. Now she was helping prepare the graduation party for everyone in the lunch room with the other doctors.
"Hey Mariko come and help me with these balloons!" Sayaka said.
"Oh coming!"
Mariko walked over and helped Sayaka hang some more balloons.
"I thought I'd never see the day when these nut jobs are finally free to go." Sayaka said.
"Me too. It's kinda sad you know?" Mariko said.
"I know what you mean."
"Well just think. Maybe they'll have better lives ahead of them."
"I'm going to miss them."
"I think Takamina is going to miss a certain someone."
Sayaka pointed over at Takamina who was sadly hanging streamers. Mariko decided to walk over and talk to the smaller doctor.
"Hey Takamina why are you so sad? Is it because you won't get to see Acchan anymore?" Mariko asked.
"It's not that it's just...."
"Just what?"
"I want to give something to Acchan but I'm afraid she'll reject it.." Takamina said.
"What is it?" Mariko asked.
Takamina reached into her pocket and pulled out a small black box. She opened it and revealed a ring with a small diamond on it.
"Is that an engagement ring?!"
"Yeah. I'm going to propose to Acchan."
"Pro-propose?" Mariko couldn't believe what she was hearing.
"Yeah and I'm afraid she'll reject me."
"Don't worry." Mariko said putting her hand on Takamina's shoulder.
"Just do your best and ask her the question. If she says yes and be happy and if she says no then there's always a next time. But knowing Acchan, she'll probably say yes."
"I hope so." Takamina said.
"Hey Mariko help me out with the juice." Yukirin said.
"Sure. Think about what I said Takamina. It would be really nice to see you two together."
Mariko walked over to Yukirin who was stuggling with carrying bottles of juice.
"I got it." Mariko said taking some of the juices.
"Thanks."
"So are you going to miss Mayuyu?" Mariko asked.
"No." Yukirin said.
"Ehh? Why not?"
"Because she's moving in with me."
"That's great!"
"Yeah. Now we can finally spend as much free time as we want."
"That's good to hear. Congradulations."
"Hey here they come everyone hide!" Sayaka said.
Mariko quickly hid under a table as Sayaka turned out the lights. There were voices outside followed by foot steps. The door opened and then the lights came on. Mariko jumped out from under the table and shouted,
"SUPRISE!"
Everyone was startled by the sudden suprise and jumped back.
"Everyone because of you all being released tomorrow, we deicded to have this party for you." Sayaka said.
"We're all very proud of you guys and wanted to spend our last hours with you guys having fun." Takamina said.
"So let's party and have a good time!" Yukirin said.
Everyone just looked at the four doctors and couldn't help but start laughing.
"What's so funny?" Sayaka asked.
"Nothing, nothing. Let's just party!" Acchan said.
And so the part began. Everyone danced and played games and ate tons of snacks. Mariko was sitting to the side quietly eating a MelonPan when Miichan walked over.
"Hey everyone is gathering to play a game. You wanna join?" Miichan asked.
"No it's alright. I'll just stay over here." Mariko said.
"Oh come on it'll be fun!"
"Well alright."
Mariko and Miichan walked over to where the others were sitting in the circle. In the middle was an empty pop bottle.
"Alright everyone are you ready to play Yuko's Truth or Dare Love Love edition?" Yuko asked.
"It's probably perverted if it's Yuko's version." Mayuyu said.
"The rules are simpler to regualr Truth or Dare only the dares are a little more romantic. Oh and one more thing, you can't chicken out of a dare and the only way to chicken out is to kiss the person of the darer's choice. Now then let's begin! I'll start first."
Yuko leaned in and span the bottle. It stopped on Mayuyu.
"Oh crap."
"Well since you said it was going to be perverted I'll make it like that. Truth or Dare Mayuyu?" Yuko said.
"Truth." Mayuyu said.
"Alright... Is it true that you like reading Yuri mangas and imagining the girls as you and Yukirin?"
"LIES! NO NO NO!"
Mayuyu's face started to turn bright red. Yuko got her good.
"Alright Mayuyu spin the battle."
The red faced Mayuyu span the bottle and this time it landed on Yukirin.
"Truth or Dare?"
"Um I'm going to play it safe so truth." Yukirin said.
"Ok then is it true that you've kissed Sae before?" Mayuyu asked.
"Yes..."
BAM!
"Ouch! Hey!"
"I'll deal with you later. For now spin the bottle."
Yukirin span the battle and this time it landed on Haruna.
"Truth or Dare Haruna?" Yukirin asked.
"Umm dare!" Haruna said.
"Alright then I dare you to only pick dares for the rest of the game."
"That's easy. Now it's my turn!"
Haruna leaned in and span the bottle. This time it landed on Sayaka.
"Truth or Dare?" Haruna asked.
"Dare." Sayaka said.
"Alright then I dare you to drink that entire bottle of juice."
Haruna pointed to a large bottle of juice sitting on the table.
"That's easy."
Sayaka took the bottle and chugged the entire thing in seconds.
"Easy as-"
Sayaka suddenly collapsed on the gournd. Then a couple seconds later she lifted her head revealing a happy expression.
"Sayaka are you alright?" Sae asked.
Sayaka just smiled at Sae and then grabbed her by shoulders. Without warning, Sayaka dove in and kissed Sae right on the lips. Everyone including Mariko was shocked seeing the usually up tight and stiff doctor act so carefree and lovey dovey. Turns out what Sayaka drank wasn't juice but wine. Now Sayaka was really drunk.
"I love you." Sayaka said as she leaned in on Sae.
"I just remembered that Sayaka is really weak when it comes to alcohal." Takamina said.
"Who cares I like this Sayaka!" Sae said.
"Alright Sayaka spin the bottle."
Sayaka somehow managed to spin the bottle and it landed on Mariko. Sayaka gave Mariko a perverted smile like the one Yuko gets.
"Truth or Dare?" the drunk Sayaka asked.
"Truth." Mariko said.
"Is it true that you love Miichan?"
"Yes."
"Seriously?" Miichan looked at Mariko with wide eyes.
"Of course I love you. You saved my life of course. Now then it's my turn" Mariko said.
Mariko span the bottle and it landed on Takamina.
"Truth or Dare?" Mariko asked.
"Dare." Takamina said.
Mariko sat there and thought for a while. Then the perfect dare came into her mind.
"I dare you to propose to Acchan."
Takamina's whole face got red. Hearing Mariko's dare made everyone curious to see what she will do.
"Come on Takamina you can do it!" Mariko said.
"Alright!"
Takamina had Acchan stand up while she got down on one knee. Then she pulled out the ring that made everyone gasp.
"Maeda Atsuko, will you marry me?"
There was silence amoung everyone.
"As I thougt, you'd say no."
Takamina was about to turn away when Acchan grabbed her and kissed her. She took the ring and slid it on her finger.
"I'll happily marry you Takahashi Minami." Acchan said.
The two embraced in another kiss as everyone else cheered.
"Congradulations you two!" Yukirin said.
"Oi Takamina you take good care of Acchan! I want some grand kids so don't hold back!" the drunk Sayaka said.
"You're not a grandma Sayaka." Sae said.
"Well she might be right. I do want kids." Acchan said.
"Hey maybe in the future but not now." Takamina said.
"Ok Takamina spin!" Yuko said.
Takamina span the bottle and this time it landed on Yuko.
"DARE!" Yuko said.
"I dare you to take Haruna's panties and wear them on your head for the rest of the party."
"Done!"
Yuko took off Haruna's panties before she could do anything and wore them on her head.
"Hey I like those!" Haruna protested.
"You'll get them back eventually. But for now I'll spin the bottle."
Yuko span the bottle and it stopped on Jurina.
"Truth or Dare?"
"Dare." Jurina said.
"I dare you to make out with Rena." Yuko said.
"But we're sisters."
"It's either make out with Rena or I'll have you make out with drunk Sayaka over there."
"Fine. Rena I'm sorry for what I'm about to do."
Jurina leaned in and kissed Rena passionately for a couple minutes. Then she pulled back so that they could breathe.
"Alright now that that's done, it's time for cake!" Mariko said.
"Yay cake!" Sae said.
Mariko walked over and pulled out a huge cake with the word "Congradulations" on it.
"Everyone dig in!"
Everyone started eating the cake which was really good. While everyone was eating, Haruna started to fight Yuko for her panties. This caused Yuko to dump her cake onto Jurina. Jurina got mad and threw her cake which hit Mayuyu in the face. Mayuyu wiped the cream at her face and then shot right back at Jurina. But Jurina got out of the way and the cake hit Mariko. Mariko took a piece and said,
"Cake war!"
Soon everyone started throwing cake at each other. Mariko's last few moments were filled with fun and laughs. She hoped it would never last but all good things must come to an end.
THE END
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Wait! There's more!
It had been two months since everyone was released. Now Mariko was just bored out of her mind. Things had become dull since everyone left. Mariko really did miss everyone. She was sitting in her office when she heard a loud crash out in the hall. Mariko rushed outside and couldn't believe what she was seeing. There scattered on the ground was Mayuyu, Sae, Yuko, Haruna, Acchan, Rena, and Jurina.
"What are you guys doing here?" Mariko asked.
"We came back!" Haruna said.
"Why?"
"Well I was trying to get away from her." Haruna said pointing at Yuko.
"And I was following her!" Yuko said pointing at Haruna.
'Rena and I lost it with our uncle and ended up killing him." Jurina said.
"It was an accident I swear!" Rena said.
"I came back because my job was boring and I couldn't read my mangas." Mayuyu said.
"I came here because I wanted to be with Takamina. I don't like being alone in a house all day." Acchan said.
"I'm here because my ADHD came back!" Sae said.
"So all of you guys are patients again?" Mariko said.
"Yep!" they all said in unison.
"Well I guess I'm happy. You know you guys are all crazy."
"We know!"
"Oh come here!"
Mariko ran over and had a group hug session. Mariko couldn't help but feel so happy that everyone was back together again. She didn't care if they were crazy or not because she loved them and they loved her. Mariko hoped they would never leave and they would stay with her forever. Mariko wished to stay with them forever in this place she called a Mad House.
THE END
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Well everyone this is the end of the Mad House series. Once again thank you everyone for reading and enjoying the story. There were a lot of laughs, cries, love scenes, action, gore and just plane insanity. And now it has finally come to an end. Please tell me what you think and I hope you all enjoyed reading the story. I have a whole new idea for a whole new story that I hope everyone will love. I'll give you one hint on what it's going to be about: AKB COPS! Look forward to my next story and for now, everyone in the Mad House says goodbye!
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Aww...It finally over...
What a Great Fics....I ever Read....
Atsumina propose is So Sweet...
It so Funny
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I was half-expecting the patients to get themselves readmitted and they did! :twothumbs
"I came back because my job was boring and I couldn't read my mangas." Mayuyu said.
"I came here because I wanted to be with Takamina. I don't like being alone in a house all day." Acchan said.
But Mayuyu and Acchan, those are not valid reasons to be back as patients! :rofl: Tsk tsk... the two of you should study to be nurses and join the facility to help your beloved other halves XD
I'll miss the craziness of the Mad House series but all good things have to come to an end. Anyway, since you said you'll be writing AKB Cops, I believe I'll be in for another crazy awesome ride soon! Thank you for sharing Mad House with us. I really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the last. You had some hesitation halfway through the story but I'm glad you persevered and completed it. I love the humour you inject into your story. Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting eagerly for your new story! :deco:
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So I finally can use my phone cos of the WiFi, then I read this fic.
IT ENDED :shock:
Omg... Still can't get over it lol.
Your fic is so funny especially the last chapter!!! I'm glad everyone is back in the mental hospital LOL
(lolicon mode on) Y U NO DESCRIBRE WMATSUI SCENE HOTTER? I KNOW THEY'RE SISTERS AND JURINA IS JAILBAIT BUT ITS NOT HOT ENOUGH!!! But it's for a couple of minutes LOL. You shoulda wrote about tongue!!
And Yuko is so hilarious!!!!
I love the craziness of this fic! Perhaps we should create crack fics together LOL
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Great ending!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Looking forward for your new fic! :deco:
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GREAT JOB~! :on GJ:
Although it ended :farofflook:
But I really like your fic :nya:
I'll look forward to your new fic :on woohoo: AKB COPS :ding: sounds interesting
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LOL I think Mayuyu and Acchan came back for the wrong reasons. Also, love Rena's 'It was an accident I swear!'
AKB Cops sounds really interesting and I can't wait to read that!
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Genking Deka
"Yabai yabai yabai! If I'm late on the first day then the captain is gonna kill me! Man I knew I shouldn't have helped that old lady. Ahh I need to run!"
Miayazawa Sae is fresh from the police academy and is ready to serve and protect the streets of Tokyo. Today was her first day and right now she was running late. Sae had to run all the way from the train station to the building where she was working. Sae will be working in the Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department. It had always been her dream to become a cop because her father was one and he died in an accident when she was young. Now Sae is following his foot steps starting up where her father left off.
"I'm sorry I'm late!" Sae shouted as she busted through the door.
"Oh no you're just on time. You must be Miyazawa Sae."
Sae looked over and saw a tall woman with short brown hair. She looked like she could be a model.
"My name is Shinoda Mariko and I am the head chief here. Allow me to show you around."
Sae followed Mariko around the building which was suprisingly very large.
"Let me introduce you to your captain. Hey Takamina!"
Just then a bow popped up from above the walls of each cubicle. It moved over to the main walk way and revealed a short girl.
"This is Takahashi Minami. She will be your captain. You must follow all her orders and not to do anything without her permission. She may look small but she's actually the strongest officer we have here. She has a record of over a hundred take downs in her enitre two year career so don't underestimate her because of her size."
"Takahashi Minami. Nice to meet you." the small girl saluted Sae and Sae did so in return.
"Well I'll leave you two to get along. Have fun." Mariko said as she left.
"The chief is really nice." Sae said.
"Yeah but it's rare to see her out of her office. She's usually really busy and never has time to show newbies like you around."
"Really?"
Just then a girl came from behind Takamina and grabbed onto her.
"Takamina!"
Sae looked over and saw a slightly taller girl with short black hair.
"Acchan I told you to wait at my desk." Takamina said.
"But I was bored and wanted to see you agian." the girl said.
"Who is this?" Sae asked.
"This is my partner Maeda Atsuko. Everyone here calls Acchan."
"Nice to mee you."
"Nice to meet you too." Acchan said with a cute smile.
"Everyone here is assigned a partner. Yours should be here soon."
The doors opened and a woman came in dragging two badly beaten men.
"Oi Takamina can you get someone to take these two to interrogation." the woman said.
"Hey Sayaka get over here! You're new partner has arrived." Takamina said.
"Oh really? Great!"
The woman set the bodies down and walked over to Sae.
"Sae this is Akimoto Sayaka and she will be your partner from now on. If you have any questions then ask her. You two will be working together a lot so get along well."
"Nice to meet you Miyazawa-san." Sayaka said as she held out her hand for a hand shake.
"Nice to meet you too and call me Sae." Sae said as she shook her hand.
Sayaka was only a little taller than Sae but they almost looked lke they were the same height. Sayaka had long dark brown hair unlike Sae who had short hair. Sayaka's face also reminded her of a statue that you see in Greece.
"I hope we get along well." Sayaka said.
"As to you."
"Hey where do you think you're going!" Sayaka shouted to the men who were now trying to crawl away.
"Sae come help me!"
"Are you sure?"
"Just hand cuff them while I hold them down."
"Why didn't you do that in the first place?" Takamina asked.
"I wasn't thinking."
"You never do stupid gorilla." Acchan said.
"Watch it princess." Sayaka said giving Acchan a deadly glare.
"Hey Sayaka no fights. Your prisioner are about to get away." Takamina said.
"Ahhh! Get back here!"
Sayaka dashed off after the two men and started beating them again.
"Aren't you going to help?"
"I think Akimoto-san's got it." Sae said.
Sae watched Sayaka beat the two men down and hand cuff them. Her strength reminded Sae of a gorilla. Maybe that's why she's called that. Sae was so dazed that she didn't notice Takamina reach out and grab her shoulder. Not knowing it was Takamina, Sae acted like she was taught in training and quickly turned around and punched Takamina. Takamina fell to the ground out cold.
"Takamina!" Acchan said.
"Sae what did you do?" Sayaka said as she ran over.
"I only did what I was trained to do." Sae said.
"Ahh jeez now we gotta take the midget down to the infirmary. You must be really strong if you were able to knock out Takamina."
"Oh my gosh I am so sorry!"
"Don't worry I'll explain everything to Takamina when she wakes up."
Sae couldn't help but feel guilty for knocking out her captain on the first day. That's one way to make a good impression. Sae wondered if she'll make it.
"Dad if you're watching this, I just wanted to tell you I've finally reached my goal and I hope you watch over for me from now on. Because right now, things might not be looking too good. I can't believe I punched my captain!"
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Well there's the prolouge. Let me know what you think before I move on!
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Saechan is so cute as always!! Looks like she's do other stupid things in the next chapter! Loving rookie Sae!
Looking forward to more Saeyaka!!!
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waaa the fic is already finish?? and this is a new story?
I'm so late!
sorry miyu..
I'm just busy in my upcoming story too :cry:
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LOL the image of Takamina taking down people who are probably taller and bigger than her is hilarious. But, yay, I'm guessing from the first chapter this means it's going to be Sae centered.
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Hello everyone! Sorry you haven't heard from me in a while but I've just been busy. Anyways, here's the first chapter. I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 1
It's been a week since Sae started working for the police department. She's finally starting to settle after her first day's incident. The captain said it was fine but Sae still couldn't help but feel guilty. She's been getting along great with her partner Sayaka. Because she's new, she's been doing minor cases like robberies. But she has yet to be assigned to her first murder.
"Hey Sae, Sayaka I need you two over here." Takamina said.
Sae and Sayaka walked over.
"Sayaka you're needed down town for a murder case."
"Ok but what about Sae?" Sayaka asked.
"She still isn't ready yet." Takamina said.
"Alright well then take care Sae."
Sayaka left leaving Sae with Takamina.
"Before you go off solving murders, you need to know the team. Come with me and I'll introduce you to the rest of the team."
Takamina and Sae went in an elevator and went down to the second to last floor. They walked into a lab full of chemicals and machines. Actually Sae hated labs because of all the scary movies she watched but this lab didn't give her that creepy feeling. It was actually kind of homey with the way it was decorated.
"This is the forensic lab. All the evidence is sent here for finger printing or chemical identification. I think you'll like our forensic scientist."
Sae walked in and saw a girl hunched over some chemical. She had long black hair and brown eyes. Sae thought she actually looked kind of cute.
"Hey Yukirin."
"Oh hi Takamina. Is this the new recruit?" she asked.
"Yeah. I"m showing her arround."
"My name is Kashiwagi Yuki and I'm the forensic scientist here. You are always welcome down here in my lab just don't touch anything." she said.
"Yukirin here is very good at what she does. She graduated top of her class and was actually nominated for a couple awards. Yukirin is a very nice person but be careful because she can also get dangerous at times." Takamina said.
"Miyazawa Sae. It's nice to meet you too." Sae said.
"Hey where's Mayuyu?" Takamina asked.
"In the back taking a nap. She should be waking up right about now."
Just then a girl in pink bunny pajamas came out holding a pillow. She didn't even notice Takamina and Sae and just walked over and grabbed some juice from a fridge.
"Uhh Mayuyu."
The girl looked over with a half awake look. When she saw Sae, she froze. She looked like a deer caught in the head lights.
"Mayuyu come over here and introduce youself to the new recruit." Yukirin said.
The girl walked over to Yukirin and leaned against her.
"Hey don't fall asleep on me!"
"The sleeping beauty over there is Watanabe Mayu. She's our computer expert and can find anything online. She's also very good at hacking and finding people. Mayuyu is in the office next to Yukirin and it's always dark and cold. Whenever there is a big case, Mayuyu doesn't sleep until it's solved. We just recently solved a case and now she's in her recharging phase." Takamina said.
"Is she a cyborg?" Sae thought.
"Uh I am Miyazawa Sae. It's nice to meet you."
Mayuyu pulled out a pair of glasses to get a better look at Sae. She examined her from top to bottom and then finally said,
"No threat detected."
"What?"
Mayuyu then took her pillow and went back to her room.
"Sorry she does that when she meets new people. If she detects a threat then she won't talk to you. If she doesn't then she won't bother you." Yukirin said.
"That girl really is a robot." Sae thought.
"Well let's go meet the others then. There are still four other people for you to meet. I'll see you in a while Yukirin." Takamina said.
"You too. It was nice meeting you Sae!"
"You too!!"
Sae couldn't help but feel a little happy thinking about Yukirin. The next department they were visiting was the firing range. There was no one down there which was very strange. But then Sae could feel something grabbing her butt. Sae reacted by grabbing the hand of whoever and flipped them over.
"Hey!"
Sae looked down and saw a girl with medium brown hair squirrel teeth. She was about the same height as Takamina.
"What was that for?" she asked.
"I'm sorry I didn't know who you were." Sae said.
"Well this is Oshima Yuko. She's our weapons expert and a excellent shooter. She also works on the bomb squad. Oh and she's also a little of a pervert." Takamina said.
"Nice you meet you! By the way, you have very nice legs." Yuko said.
"Nice to meet you too." Sae said blushing.
"Yuko!"
Just then another woman walked in. She had long brown hair and brown eyes. She was very beautiful.
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko jumped up and practically clung herself to the woman.
"This is Kojima Haruna. She's on the bomb squad and also works down here with Yuko. There hasen't been a single time when Haruna has failed to deactivate a bomb. When she's deactivating a bomb she's totally focused but when she's not she's practically an air head and is constantly spacing out." Takamina said.
"Hey! I don't space out all the time!" Haruna said.
"Nyannyan don't listen to them! You're perfect just the way you are to me!" Yuko said trying to kiss Haruna.
"Ahh Yuko not here!"
"Uh we'll be leaving now. Just so you know this is Sae and she's happy to meet you all. Sae let's go."
"Wait don't leave me with her!"
"Come on Nyannyan let's have some fun!"
"Is it safe to leave those two together?" Sae asked.
"Yeah Yuko doesn't go too far with Haruna. They actually get along quite well." Takamina said.
"Ok I'm just worried about Haruna."
"Don't worry. Now let's go to the bottom floor. There's still two people left you have to meet."
They took an elevator all the way down. When they stepped out, Sae felt a sudden chill in her body.
"This is the morgue where all the bodies go to for autopsies." Takamina said.
Sae walked in and almost hurled at what she was seeing. There standing over a disected body was a girl with a helmet and gloves.
"Hey Rena!"
"Oh hi Takamina."
The girl took off her gloves and apron. Then she took off her helmet and walked over. Sae got a better look at the girl and noticed she had long black hair like Yukirin only her eyes were smaller. She was also very pale and looked like she barely had any blood in her.
"This is Matsui Rena and she's the medical examiner. She does the autopsies here and is very good at finding what killed the victum." Takamina said.
"It's nice to meet you." she said.
"Hey where's Jurina?"
"In the back getting the bone saw."
"Rena I got it!"
Sae looked over and saw a girl with short black hair and brown eyes. She walked over with a small saw in her hands.
"This is Rena's assisstant Matsui Jurina. They're not related but they share the same name." Takamina said.
"Really?"
Sae thought the two looked a lot like sisters.
"Nice to meet you." Jurina said smiling at Sae.
"Nice to meet you too." Sae said.
Sae thought Jurina's smile was like a cats.
"Well if you excuse me I have work to be done. Jurina hand me the saw." Rena said.
"Here you go."
"You may want to leave."
Sae and Takamina high tailed it out of there but Sae could still hear the sound of bones crushing which made her sick.
"Well that's everyone. Do you think you'll like them?" Takamina asked.
"Yeah. I like Yukirin a lot but I don't know what to do with Mayuyu. Yuko maybe a pervert but she's nice too and so is Haruna. Rena is nice too but she kind of scares me. Oh and Jurina too." Sae said.
"Don't worry. When you're assigned your first murder case, then you'll really start to like them. Just give it time."
"I hope so."
"In the mean time, how about we go get lunch?"
"OK!"
As Sae walked off with Takamina, she couldn't help but feel a little better now knowing her team little more. Sae thought that made the right choice becoming a detective.
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Well there's chapter 1! I hope you all liked it and thought it was interesting. And again, you may not hear from me much because I've been busy with packing my things. I'm moving so the whole process is stressful. Again please tell me what you think and I'll try to get back to you as soon as possible!
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ok, I liked this chapter very very much! I only have a plea to do.... :bingo:
Please, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LETS IT BE MAYUKI!!!!!! I DON'T REALLY LIKE SAEYUKI.......SOOOOO PLEASEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
just tell me it will be Mayuki please!!??? :ptam-cry: :OMG: :pleeease: :on comhere:
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Heh, I have to agree with yuukimoko there I'm not much of a Saeyuki fan either. Of course I'll still read it though if you decide to go that route.
Anyways, somehow Yuko being part of the bomb squad really fits her haha.
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I'm gonna join the pleas and say please let it be MaYuki! SaeYuki never sat well with me but of course I will still support this story no matter what.
Anyway, interesting introduction of the characters. I'm glad the main cast is the same as Mad House's! Mayuyu's reaction at being caught half-awake by Sae cracked me up! And pink bunny pajamas? Most adorable cyborg girl ever! Sae got to stop checking Yukirin out if not Mayuyu will zap her with laser :twisted:
Keep up the fine work. I'm looking forward to the next update!
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Yes I agree with Yuukimoko :deco: too.
Because in the Mad House Mayuki was toooo KYAAA :luvluv1: :luvluv1:!!!
Your Mayuki is so beautiful. I like Saeyuki BUT I love Mayuki xD
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So good, i love the introduction of everyone so much xD
Especially the WMatsui, lol never thought that they'd do this job
Also, the Mayuki is just so cute <3 Mayu fell asleep on Yuki lol More Mayuki please
Thank you, update soon please xD
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Minna! Thank you so much for commenting! And to all you Mayuki fans out there: I plan on keeping the same pairings as I did in the Mad House so don't worry there will be Mayuki! And to express my point even further, please read this next chapter. Enjoy!
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Chapter 2
"Hey Sae gear up. We're heading out." Sayaka said.
"Where are we going?" Sae asked.
"Down town. You're about to do your first murder case."
"Ok."
Inside Sae wanted to scream with joy but that would be inappropriate. The murder was in a fourty year old woman's house. She lived alone and no one really talked to her. When Sae and Sayaka arrived at the scene, there was a small crowd and and police officers guarding the entrance. Sayaka and Sae showed the officers their badges and were allowed in.
"If you can't handle it then stay outside." Sayaka said.
Sae thought she was ready. But turns out she was wrong. When she walked in, the body was on the ground and part of the brain was exposed. This sight made Sae step out for a minute and lose her lunch. Then she came back in now ready.
"You ok?" Sayaka asked.
"Yeah. This is just so new to me and all." Sae said.
"Well if you're going to hurl again then stay outside."
"No I'm good."
"Alright. Well the woman is Sato Yuki. She's fourty years old and lives alone. No one reported any noises last night and there were no witnesses. The door lock was broken suggesting a break in and there's broken glass in the kitchen which means there could be another culprit. We'll have to wait for Rena to show up so they can take the body."
"Sorry I'm late."
Sae looked over and saw Rena and Jurina walk in. Behind her she could hear some whispers like "It's the angel of death" and "the devil's princess has arrived."
"Hey Sayaka why is everyone calling Rena an angel of death?" Sae asked.
"Rena is known for being kinda scary when she's around dead bodies." Sayaka explained.
"Hey Sayaka get over here!" Rena said.
"Have you determined a cause of death?" Sayaka asked.
"The indentation in the skull suggests a blunt weapon was used. I'd say a bat but I'll have to take the body back to the mourge for better examination." Rena said.
"Alright then we'll leave you to it. Sae let's look around and see if you can find anything."
"Ok."
Sae walked into the kitchen where the window was broken. While examining the area, Sae noticed something sticking out in the sink. In the sink was a rock. Sae put on a glove and then picked up the rock.
"Hey Sayaka!"
Sayaka came running in.
"You think we can get a finger print off this rock?" Sae asked.
"I think so."
Sayaka pulled out a small tube with black powder. She then took a brush dabbed the rock. A couple seconds later a finger print popped up.
"Good job Sae. Bag it and we'll take back to head quarters. You're doing pretty good Sae keep it up." Sayaka said.
Sae felt pretty proud of herself for finding it. Back at head quarters, Sae and Sayaka went to go see how Rena was doing.
"Find anything?" Sayaka asked.
"I found metal shards in the head that I sent up to Yukirin. I also found impression marks on her neck suggesting a struggle." Rena said.
"Anything else?"
"No but could you go check on Yukirin. She should have the results soon."
"Sure Sae you go. I want to look at the body more." Sayaka said.
"No problem!"
Sae felt delighted now that she could leave the cold creepy mourge and see Yukirin. Sae walked into the lab and saw Yukirin working at her desk. Sae thought it would be cute to see how she reacted if she snuck up on her from behind. Sae carefully made her way to Yukirin and was about to pounce. But then suddenly something grabbed her from behind and dragged her off the side. Sae turned around and saw Mayuyu giving her a cold glare.
"What do you think you're doing?" Mayuyu said in a cold voice.
"I was gonna sneak up behind Yukirin and hug her." Sae said.
Mayuyu grabbed Sae by her collar and pulled her closer to her.
"Listen here and listen good. I don't care if you're new or not but no one touches Yukirin but me. If you do I will personally make sure you wind up on the FBI and CIA's most wanted list. Do you understand?!" Mayuyu said with anger in her tone.
At one point Sae thought Mayuyu's eyes were glowing red. Sae just nodded her head hoping she would let go.
"Good. Then get back out there and if you do anything funny you'll regret it."
Mayuyu let go and Sae ran back out for her life.
"Oh Sae I didn't even see you come in. We were talking to Mayuyu?" Yukirin asked.
"Uh yeah you could say that." Sae said trying to keep her distance away from Yukirin knowing Mayuyu was probably watching her.
"Did Sayaka send you here?"
"Yeah did you get anything on the finger prints and metal shards?"
"Yeah the print belonged to a Ito Hiroshi and the metal shards matched the metal used in baseball bats. Here's Ito-san's address." Yukirin said.
"Thanks well I better get going. Bye!"
Sae ran out of the lab feeling like Mayuyu was targeting her. Sae made a note to herself that Mayuyu was dangerous. Sae and Sayaka went to Ito-san's house to question him. However, there was no need for questioning. When they arrived, they found him with blood all over his clothes and a bat. He saw Sae and Sayaka and started running.
"Sae you go around back and I'll take the front!" Sayaka said.
Sae ran around the house to the back door where her was possibly heading to. Sayaka was right and here he came right in front of Sae. Sae tackled him to the ground and stuggled to keep him down.
"Nice Sae!" Sayaka said as she handcuffed him.
"Ito Hiroshi you are under arrest for the murder of Sato Yuki. You have the right to remain silent, anything you say can or will be used against you in court."
Sayaka shoved Hiroshi into the car and they drove him down to the station. Sayaka was handeling all the paper work while Sae ran to the break room to get some tea.
"Hey I heard you solved your first case."
Sae turned around and saw Takamina staring at her.
"Yeah. To be honest it was kinid of easy though." Sae said.
"How did the murder take place?" Takamina asked.
"Ito-san had a grudge against Yuki for taking her job he wanted. So he threw a rock and broke the window in the kitchen. While Yuki was distracted with the window, Ito-san broke the lock and rushed in. There was a struggle but then in the end, Ito-san finished her with a blow to the head with a bat."
"That's sad. Well good job. Keep up the good work. Oh and no matter how easy a case is, always expect the worst."
"Understood."
"Well if you excuse me I will be leaving. I promised Acchan I'd take her out for dinner."
The small captain excused herself and left. But then a couple minutes later Yukirin came up.
"Hey congradulations on solving your first case!" she said.
"Thanks." Sae said.
"We should go out and celebrate. Are you free tonight?"
Before Sae could answer her question, she felt the piercing glare of a familiar cyborg. Sae looked over and saw Mayuyu glaring at her. Fearing of what would happen, Sae said she was busy.
"Aww that's too bad. Well maybe next time." Yukirin said.
"Maybe maybe not." Sae said to herself.
"Well I'll see you later!"
Yukirin walked over and hugged Sae. Sae couldn't help but enjoy the hug while it lasted. She knew she would get it from Mayuyu. Turns out Sae was right. The next day, a bunch of creepy otaku's showed up wanting to meet Sae. Someone had photo copied her face on a otaku dating website and she became an instant hit will all the otakus. Sae knew who did this and was no fully aware of the wrath of an angry cyborg.
==================================================================================Well there's chapter 2! I hope all the Mayuki fan's out there enjoyed it! Never mess with Mayuyu when she's in her cyborg mode! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter. I plan on adding some Atsumina and Kojiyuu in it.
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Yaaaaaah! Ii ne! XD
Mayuyu jealous so dangerous :hiakhiakhiak:
Continue Please :peace:
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Thank you for keeping it MaYuki! :bow:
Yukirin, you are too friendly! :smhid Your little cyborg is jealous :lol:
Now that we've seen Mayuyu's cyborg mode, I'm looking forward to Yukirin's black mode! Wonder what will make her snap :D
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Wow you keep the pairing!
Yay
I love mayuki
But i hope wmatsui pairing in this new fic its more hot than before,well thank for the update
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Yaaay for Mayuki :D lol poor Sae though having to feel the wrath of Mayuyu :( Ahh well at least she has Sayaka XD
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I'm glad everyone is happy with the results. Now it's time for everyone to get to know the characters a little more. Let's start off with Atsumina and Kojiyuu and work our way up shall we? Enjoy!
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Chapter 3
Sae was at her desk waiting to get some kind of call. She was so bored that she was willing to do anything. Sayaka was out on another case and Takamina ordered Sae to stay behind she thought she couldn't handle it. Sae wanted to protest but she had to follow her orders. Sae was just spacing out when someone tapped her on the shoulder. Sae looked over and saw Acchan holding two cups of tea.
"Hello." she said.
"Hi"
"Care if I sit here?"
"Go ahead." Sae said as she pulled up a chair.
"So how are things? Have you adjusted enough?" Acchan asked.
"Yeah. Everyone's really nice. Although Mayuyu kind of scares me." Sae said.
"Well if you ever feel like you're in trouble you can always come to me."
"Thanks. I'll keep that in mind."
Sae thought Acchan would make a great mom one day with her kind personality and caring attitude towards others. The two sat there and kept chatting until Takamina walked over.
"Acchan what are you doing here?" Takamina asked.
"I'm just getting to know the new recruit is all." Acchan said with an innocent look in her eyes.
"Acchan are you trying to use Sae like you did to me when you first showed up?"
"What do you mean?" Sae asked confused.
"Acchan as a habit of using a sweet act to get what she wants. It's a deadly skill she has and very scary."
"Takamina how about you go back to your desk. I have something important to discuss with Sae."
Acchan gave Takamina this strange stare that seemed to frighten her. Sae was amazed watching the great captain retreat back to her desk.
"Well now that that's out of the way, you seem to be free at the moment. Would you like to go out with me for a while?" Acchan asked.
"Sure where to?"
Acchan took Sae out to Shibuya to buy some clothes. It was nice taking a break and getting out after being stuck in the office all day. They stopped at a clothing store and Acchan saw something she really liked.
"Wow this shirt would look so cute on me!" Acchan said holding it up against her chest.
"Yeah it would." Sae said.
"I wish I could buy it but I don't have enough money."
Acchan looked down with sad puppy dog eyes. Sae couldn't help but feel sorry for her so she bought the shirt for Acchan.
"Wah! Thank you so much Sae-chan!" Acchan said in cute voice.
"No problem." Sae said trying to sound cool.
"Hey how about we go over to that store next!"
For the next two hours, Sae was like Acchan's personal shopping butler. Not only was she buying everything for Acchan but was also carrying all of it. She had a total of six bags filled with clothes and jewlery. Sae changed her view on Acchan. She thought Acchan wouldn't be a mom but a manipulative wife.
"Hey Acchan can we take a break? My arms are getting tired." Sae said.
"Uh sure let's stop and get some ice cream." Acchan said.
They took a seat at a table and Sae gave her arms a long rest.
"Hey can you go order me some ice cream?" Acchan asked.
"Uh sure just wait here."
Sae walked over to the ice cream boothe and pulled out her wallet. There was only enough left for her to order one ice cream. Sae ordered the ice cream and had to wait a couple minutes. While Sae was waiting, she heard a sudden shout.
"Let go!"
Sae looked over and saw Acchan and a man who was grabbing her arm.
"Let go you're hurting me!" Acchan shouted.
Sae was about to react and take him down but then someone else came by and slammed into the man. They rolled out on to the walk way and that's when Sae saw it was Takamina.
"Don't you dare touch my Acchan!" she said as she continued to beat the man senslessly.
"Takamina!"
Takamina stopped punching the man and saw Acchan.
"I'm not done with you. I'll be back."
Takamina hand cuffed the man to a pole and then walked over.
"Are you alright?" Takamina asked Acchan.
"Yeah I am now." Acchan said.
"Where did you come from?" Sae asked.
"I was following you guys because I knew Acchan would leech off of you. Oh by the way, don't worry I'll personally pay back however much Acchan made you spend."
"You sure about that?"
"Absolutely."
"Well here are the receipts"
Sae handed Takamina three long pieces of paper. Her eyes widened at the sight when she added the total amount.
"Acchan!"
Takamina gave Acchan an angry glare.
"But there was a lot of stuff I wanted." Acchan said giving Takamina the same puppy eyes that Sae fell for.
"Acchan if you want something you have to use your own money! You do not use other people's money to buy things you want."
"I'm sorry Sae!"
Acchan bowed in apology with tears in her eyes.
"Good now come here you."
Takamina grabbed Acchan and hugged her.
"You know I was really worried about you when that man suddenly came up." Takamina said.
"He was a creep. But you're my hero Takamina!" Acchan said.
"Aww now I can't stay mad at a cute face like that!" Takamina hugged Accchan again.
"Um I'm going to go now. You two have fun."
Sae left the two spend the rest of the day together. Sae was now starving and she didn't have any money for lunch. She decided to go back to head quarters hoping to find some food there. When she arrived back at head quarters, she saw Haruna walking back to the firing range with a huge bento box. Sae thought this was her chance to grab a free meal. Sae followed Haruna down to the firing range.
"Can I help you?" Haruna asked.
"Well I was wondering, I forgot my lunch today and I don't have any money to buy my own. So I was wondering if it would be alright if I could have some of yours" Sae said.
"I understand. I used to forget my lunch all the time. Come inside."
Haruna and Sae walked in and found Yuko on the ground cleaning a gun.
"Hey Yuko is it alright if Sae eats with us? She forgot her lunch." Haruna asked.
"I'm really sorry!" Sae said bowing her head.
"Oh no it's fine. Nyannyan packs huge lunches for us to share so I'm sure there's plenty for one more person." Yuko said.
"Well then here you go."
Haruna opened the box revealing four sections full of food.
"Sugoi!" Sae said.
"Eat up you guys!"
As soon as Haruna said that Sae started scarfing down food. She was eating so fast that she almost choked.
"Take it easy." Haruna said as she handed Sae her tea.
Sae took a big gulp and a deep breath.
"Thanks." Sae said.
"Hey no fair! Sae got an indirect kiss from Nyannyan!" Yuko said.
"And why are you complaining?" Haruna asked.
"Because you never let me do that."
"That's because you're a pervert."
"I desereve at least one kiss!" Yuko demanded.
"No!" Haruna said.
"Fine then I get one boob touch!"
"A what?"
Before Haruna could answer, Yuko reached out and grabbed Haruna's breasts. Sae and Haruna both blushed at the sight.
"Hentai!" Haruna shouted as she slapped Yuko right across the face.
"Ahh Nyannyans boobs are still as perfect as ever." Yuko said with a red hand mark on her right cheek.
"This is just wrong." Haruna said.
"No it's love!"
"Well I'm going to go. You two have fun." Sae said.
"Come on Nyannyan just one kiss!"
"No!"
Sae rushed out of the room and back up to the main floor. She took a seat at her desk and tried to work on something. But the constant growling of her stomach made it hard to concentrate. Then suddenly Sayaka came out of nowhere.
"Hey I was wondering where you were." Sayaka said.
"I was down at the firing range with Yuko and Haruna." Sae said.
"Yuko didn't do anything perverted to you did she?"
"No. She mainly did it to Haruna."
"Ahh I don't know how that girl got on this team."
"Me neither. So how was the case?" Sae asked.
"Pretty tough although we figured out who it was." Sayaka said.
"I wish I was there. Then it would've been easy."
"No it would have been worse because you would've threw up all over the place."
"Hey I-"
Sae was cut off by another loud growl from her stomach.
"You hungry? Did you eat lunch?" Sayaka asked.
"No. Acchan spent all my money and Yuko interrupted my lunch with her boob touch thing." Sae said.
"Guess it can't be helped. Here."
Sayaka handed Sae a bento box.
"I can have it?" Sae said.
"Yeah. I already ate on the way here." Sayaka said.
"Wah thanks! You're the best!"
"Well I am your partner and all and it's my job to look out for you."
"The same for me. For example, your fly is undone." Sae said pointing at Sayaka's pants.
"Ahh!" Sayaka shouted as she quickly zipped it up.
"No wonder Mariko was laughing at me."
"Nice panties. I didn't know you liked butterflies. And purple to? I never knew you could be sexy Sayaka."
"Shut up Sae!"
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Well there's chapter 3! I hope you all liked it and look forward to the next chapter involving Wmatsui and a little more Mayuki. Please tell me what you think!
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wow this is great...!!!
cant wait the next..wmatsui and mayuki...hehehe
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Wow~ you update so fast~ :D
Nice panties Sayaka~ :P
Mayuyu is really a cyborg :lol:
I like this story, it's cool :twothumbs please continue :D
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Mayuyu is so BLACK here, lol!!
Sae's such a cute boy, doing everything that Acchan tells her... :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
As usual Takadeka comes to the rescue!! :twothumbs
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Hello everyone! As promised, today everyone will get to know the Wmatsui pairing a little better along with some Mayuki. But I think everyone already knows how Mayuyu gets when someone messes her with Yukirin. I hope you all enjoy it! Doso!
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Chapter 4
"Hey Sae I need you to go down to the mourge." Sayaka said.
"Ehh? Why?" Sae said.
"Rena said she needed you to help her with something."
"Man. That place scares the creeps out of me."
"Just get down there."
"Hai!"
Sae went down the the mourge and found Rena stuggling to carry some boxes. She was about to fall over but Sae quickly rushed over and caught the box.
"You ok?" Sae asked.
"Yeah thanks."
Sae set the box on the table while Rena sat in a chair.
"So what did you need me to help you with?"
"I got some new medical equipment and I need help carrying it into the lab. I would usually ask Jurina to help me but she has finals to study for." Rena said.
"Ahh I see. So you just need me to move a couple of boxes?" Sae asked.
"Yep."
"Ok that seems fairly easy. Where are they?"
"Over there in the corner. There's six of them."
Sae walked over to the corner and picked one up. Sae didn't realize how heavy it was. She wondered how Rena was even able to pick up the box. Sae carefully brought the box into the other room. There was loud thud and then Sae came back out.
"That's one! Five more to go!"
Sae continued to lift the boxes and carry them over. Her arms were killing her by the fourth box. She was down to the last one and this one was extremely heavy.
"Here let me help you." Rena said as she walked over.
"No it's alright I got it." Sae said trying to sound tough.
"No really it must be really heavy and you look tired."
"No really it's fine."
The two struggled but then Sae lost her footing. The box flew out of her hands and she started to fall forward.
BAM!
"Itai!"
Sae looked down and saw Rena in a very vulnerable posistion. Sae's arms trapped Rena and her body was very close to Rena's. Rena's shirt had come undone a little revealing some of her silky skin. It almost looked like Sae could kiss her when the door opened. Sae looked over and saw Jurina with her jaw dropped.
"Jurina it's not what you-"
Sae couldn't finish because Jurina had run over and kicked Sae off of Rena.
"Rena are you ok?" Jurina asked.
"Yeah I'm fine." Rena said.
"What do you think you were donig?" Jurina said galring at Sae.
"I was helping her move boxes and I tripped." Sae said.
"It's true."
Jurina looked at Rena and then a Sae.
"Well I'm glad you didn't get hurt. Oh and by the way..."
Jurina leaned in and kissed Rena's neck.
"No one is allowed to touch you like that except me." Jurina said giving Rena a cat like smile.
"Jurina not here." Rena said trying to push her away.
"But I want it."
Jurina dove in for a another kiss right on the lips. Sae thought she saw tounge for a moment. She also saw Jurina unbuttoning Rena's shirt even further down. Jurina was also rubbing Rena's legs moving up towards her skirt. Feeling unwanted, Sae quickly got up and ran out of mourge before she saw anything else. Sae is now really scared of the mourge. She went up stopped at the lab where Yukirin was to see how she what she was up to. Sae saw Yukirin working on some chemical as always.
"Hey Yukirin!" Sae said.
"Oh hello Sae. What brings you here?" Yukirin asked.
"I was in the mourge and then I came up here to see what you were doing. Where's Mayuyu?"
"She went out to get us lunch."
"I see."
Sae was a little glad to hear the terminator was out on a lunch break. Even cyborgs have to eat.
"I am currently working on a case for Takamina."
"That's cool. Do you need any help?" Sae asked
"Yeah actually could you go over to that shelf over there and grab me that bottle of sulfuric acid?" Yukirin said pointing at the shelf.
"Sure."
Sae walked over and grabbed the bottle. She turned around and started to walk over when she tripped and dropped the bottle. Acid splashed everywhere including on Yukirin.
"AHHHH!" Sae quickly rushed over and took Yukirin's lab coat and shirt off.
Luckily the acid didn't reach down far enough for it to actually hurt Yukirin. It just burned massive holes in her clothes.
"Why did you drop it?" Yukirin said.
"I'm sorry I-"
Sae stopped mid-sentence. She was too amazed at the sight before her. There sitting before her was Yukirin in nothing but a black lace bra. Yukirin's milky skin really made the bra show off her feminine appeal. Sae couldn't help but drool a little at the sight. Yukirin noticed and quickly covered herself and turned around blushing furiously.
"Ah I'm sorry."
Sae took off her jacket and put it over Yukirin.
"Thank you." Yukirin said.
"I'm really sorry for this to happen." Sae said.
"Oh no it's fine. It was just an accident."
"Yukirin?"
Sae looked over and saw Mayuyu staring at the two. Mayuyu saw Yukirin in nothing but a bra and a jacket and her expression changed into attack mode.
"Not good." Sae thought.
"Mayuyu it was an accident I swear!" Sae said trying to defend herself.
"It really was Mayuyu." Yukirin said trying to back her up.
Mayuyu didn't say anything. She just glared at Sae and then ran off into her room.
"This can't be good."
The next day, Sae found all the money in her back account gone. Now Sae was broke and had no idea how she was going to pay the rent. Then to make things worse, someone tipped off some girls saying that Sae was into them. Now Sae was constantly being stalked by a bunch of crazy fangirls. But to make things more worse, Sae has been getting a bunch of porn magazines because someone signed her up for a three month subscription.
"Ahhh this sucks!" Sae shouted pounding her desk.
"What does?" Sayaka asked.
"It's nothing." Sae said rethinking what would happen if she told anyone that Mayuyu was the cause of her pain.
"Tell me. I want to help."
"Well I got robbed and lost all my money and now I can't pay the rent for my place."
"Did you investigate?"
"Yeah but there were no traces. Now I have nowhere to stay." Sae said.
"Well if you want you can stay at my place." Sayaka said.
"Really?"
"Yeah I live alone so it'd be nice to have some company."
"Oh thank you so much!"
"No problem. I'll drive you home so you can get your things oh and by the way, Sae why do you have a porn magazine on your desk?"
Sae looked down and saw the magazine with the picture of a naked woman on it.
"It's not what you think!" Sae said covering the magazine.
"Right. Just don't bring any of that stuff over to my place. Oh and wash you hands." Sayaka said slowly starting to back away from Sae.
"I'm telling you you got it all wrong!"
"Sure I do. Pervert."
"Sayaka!"
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Well there's chapter 4! I tried to add a little sexiness to it because one of the readers requested it so there you go! But I had to keep it within reasonable limits because there are rules and stuff. Anyways please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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I was reading chapter 3 and then there's chapter 4 already?!
wut??!! :on roll:
btw make more of atsumina pwease.. would you miyu? :shy2:
I know you'd say yes :on woohoo:
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haha! Jurina could't keep her hands to herself anymore~
and Mayuyu in attack mode again! thought I would like a little more interaction between Mayu and Yuki like how you did to the Wmatsui.....I love the Mayu jelous moments but she just doesn't do any thing about Yuki :drool:
update soon please!!! :inlove:
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Poor Sae she can just never get a break lol. But at least Sayaka offered her to stay at her place XD
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Sae couldn't finish because Jurina had run over and kicked Sae off of Rena.
Good job, Jurina! :thumbsup
The next day, Sae found all the money in her back account gone.
Now, now, Mayuyu. That's against the law... but I approve! :thumbsup :thumbsup (Poor Sae :lol:)
Come on, Yukirin, show some love to Mayuyu! The little cyborg is getting jealous and angry for your sake! I agree with yuukimoko. These two need more interaction!
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Minna! Thank you guys so much for commenting on my fic. As a writer it is my job to please the readers so I will do my best in trying to fulfill everyone's requests. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 5
"Sae gear up we're heading out again." Sayaka said.
"Yes finally!" Sae said.
Sayaka and Sae headed down to an alley way behind a bar. There was a man dead with two stab wounds in the chest. This time Sae didn't throw up at the sight of the dead body. Rena and Jurina showed up soon after Sayaka and Sae had arrived. Rena was being distant around Sae and Jurina was giving her a death glare.
"Did something happen between you and Rena?" Sayaka asked.
"Oh no nothing happened." Sae said.
She walked over to examine the body but then Jurina pushed her back.
"Don't touch her you playboy." Jurina said.
"What?"
"Mayuyu told me what you did to Yukirin. You got some nerve."
"What is she talking about?" Sayaka asked.
"Nothing! It's nothing." Sae said.
"Alright. Well Rena do you have a cause of death?"
"One of his main arteries was severed. He bled to death within a matter of minutes." Rena said.
"Hey Sayaka look what I found."
Sae walked over and showed Sayaka a glove covered in blood.
"We might be able to get something off the inside of the glove. Take it down to the head quarters and have Yukirin look at it."
"Roger."
Sae was actually scared to see Yukirin. Every time she did Mayuyu did something to make things worse. But she had a job to do and she wasn't going to let a cyborg stop her. Sae was about to walk in when she heard a strange noise. She looked in and saw Mayuyu hugging Yukirin.
"You know I don't like it when you get touchy with others." Mayuyu said.
"I told you already. Yesterday was an accident. I swear!" Yukirin said.
"You're lying."
Mayuyu stepped on Yukirin's foot making her squeal.
"Mayuyu please I'm sorry." Yukirin pleaded.
"No." Mayuyu said as she bit hard on Yukirin's ear.
"It hurts!"
"This is your punishment."
"Please stop!" Yukirin said.
"Not until you get on your knees and beg for forgivness." Mayuyu said in a commanding tone.
Sae couldn't believe what she was seeing. Yukirin was now on her knees looking up at Mayuyu. Mayuyu sat on a chair and held her foot out.
"Lick it and maybe I'll forgive you." Mayuyu said.
Yukirin leaned in and started licking Mayuyu's foot like a cat. Sae could only sit there and watch the whole scene unfold before her. She had to to do something but she was afriad to step in.
"Do you forgive me now?" Yukirin said.
"Yes. Now stand up."
Yukrin stood up and the Mayuyu stepped closer to kiss her.
"I only did those things because I love you." Mayuyu said.
"I know but did you really have to go as far as drain her bank account?" Yukirin said.
"She deserved it for almost damaging Yukirin's perfect body."
"You better put that money back. Otherwise you won't be allowed to touch me for two days."
"I will I promise!"
"Good girl."
The two leaned in and started kissing each other again.
Sae didn't want to interrupt the two so she pulled out a pen and paper and wrote "look for DNA" on the bag. Then she threw the bag right behind Mayuyu so only Yukirin could see it. Then Sae ran before the two saw her.
"Man that was a close one." Sae thought.
As Sae was walking down the hall Sayaka came up to her.
"Hey Sae come with me. Takamina said she wanted to talk to us about something."
"Ok."
Sayaka and Sae walked over to Takamina's desk where she was working on something while Acchan was clinging to her.
"You needed us captain?" Sayaka said.
"Yes. I may have found something that could help you with your case. The man who was killed was actually part of a drug dealing business and we found a clue in his pocket suggesting there's going to be another drug deal. Acchan and I are going to confront the dealers and we need your help. You interested?"
"YES!" Sae said.
"That sounds interesting." Sayaka said.
"Good then later on around eight meet by this warehouse." Takamina said handing Sayaka a piece of paper.
"You excited Sae? This will be your first drug bust."
"Heck yeah!"
At eight o clock Sayaka and Sae headed to the docks where Takamina told them to wait. Sae found them behing some shipping crates. Sae couldn't help but wonder what they were wearing.
"Why are you two dressed like that?" Sayaka asked.
"So we don't stick out." Takamina said.
"You look like Sherlock Holmes and his assistant Watson"
"Hey I think we look cute right Holmes?" Acchan said.
"Right Watson!"
The two hugged each other happy that they found themselves cute.
"They should be arriving soon so find a place to hide. Wait for my signal to attack."
Takamina and Acchan hid behind some crates and Sae took cover under a row boat. Sayaka was somehow on the roof of a building. She looked kind of like Batman. A couple mintues later four cars pulled out and ten men stepped out. One of them had a brief case that was probably full of drugs. Sae waited for Takamina's signal to attack. As the two men were exchanging money for the suit case, Takamina gave the signal and they all jumped out.
"Freeze!" Takamina shouted.
"You're under arrest!" Acchan said.
"Shoot them!"
All ten of the men pulled out their guns and started firing at Acchan and Takamina.
"Take cover!"
Acchan and Takamina dove back down. A bullet shot past Sae and nearly hit her head. Sae reached over to grab her gun but she didn't feel it. That's when she realized she left it back at head quarters. Sae felt really stupid but didn't have time because one of the guys found her and was pointing his gun at her. But then Sayaka came out of nowhere and took the guy down.
"What are you doing!" Sayaka asked.
"I forgot my gun!" Sae said.
"Here take this."
Sayaka tossed Sae a gun and took cover next to her.
"Start shooting."
Sae's shooting wasn't good. She missed every shot she fired.
"Sae go after the dealer he's trying to make a run for it!" Takamina shouted as she shot another guy down.
Sae dropped her weapon and ran after the guy. He was pretty slow and Sae was able to catch up with him easily. Sae tackled the man and then hand cuffed him. By the time she had brought him back to the others, the fight was over.
"Good job Sae!" Sayaka said.
"Yeah I did it!" Sae said in victory.
But then Sae saw one of the guys still wasn't dead. He came up from behind Takamina and stabbed her arm with a knife.
"Takamina!"
Sayaka was about to shoot the man but then Acchan grabbed him by the shirt and threw him down. Then she jammed her gun into his mouth and said,
"Eat led you bastard!"
Acchan fired the gun and the man's brains splattered everywhere. Both Sayaka and Sae were suprised at the sight and stood there motionless. Acchan rushed over to Takamina who still had a knife in her arm.
"Takamina are you ok?" Acchan asked.
"Yeah I got it just give me a minute."
Takamina slowly pulled the knife out and threw it aside.
"We better get you to the hospital." Sayaka said.
"I'll drive." Sae said.
"Alright then I'll stay behind and wait till back up arrives."
Together, Acchan and Sae helped Takamina into the car. Then they drove off leaving the bloody place.
"Takamina are you sure you're ok?" Acchan said.
"I'm fine Acchan it's just a scratch." Takamina said.
"Let me kiss it and make it better!"
"Ahh no Acchan it hurts!"
"Ahh I'm sorry!"
"It's ok you were just trying to help."
"You saved me agian Takamina. You really are my hero."
"No I'm your partner."
"Yeah my life long partner."
Acchan leaned in and kissed Takamina on the cheek. Sae could see through the rear view mirror Takamina blushing like crazy.
"It must be nice having such a close relationship with you partner." Sae thought.
"I wonder why Sayaka and I aren't like that."
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Well there's chapter 5! I hope I did my best in pleasing all of you. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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wahhhhhhh!!!! :ptam-shy: :bath: :farofflook:
Thank you!!!!!!! I really loved The Mayuki moment~!!!!!!! :shy2: :shy1:
and I also wanted to tell you that I like your fics! you made the same cast as last one and changed only the protagonist! its really interesting~
maybe next time you put Mayu like tha protagonist or Yuki~! but of course they would be still together~~~~ :monk gboy: :mon huh: :mon ignore:
thanks again for this lovely chapter and keep up wiith the good work and the lovely Mayuki moments~!!!!!!! :mon geek: :mon inluv: :mon cute:
more more more Wmatsui and Mayuki~!!!!!!! :mon geek:
Also please forgive me for my poor english..... :mon innocent: :mon fu: :mon kissy:
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The mad house was really awesome!!!!!
And the new fic too! Poor sae is surrounded by scary people lol
When I read this fic I have the ost of the csi miami in mind with the AKB inside lol
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lol I really am starting to feel sorry for Sae. Ah oh well I'm sure Sayaka will make it all better.
And I really liked the Mayuki moment too, ahh Mayuki really is the best.
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This place is turning out to be as crazy as the Mad House :rofl:
We have a SM couple in the form of MaYuki! Overly possessive Mayuyu is scary but awesome although please be gentler towards Yukirin's "perfect body". Then again, I'm enjoying the SM moments too :twisted: Even though Yukirin seems like the submissive one currently, I detect a hint of Black Yukirin in the following exchange:
"You better put that money back. Otherwise you won't be allowed to touch me for two days."
"I will I promise!"
"Good girl."
I guess these two take turns to be on top :halo:
And then we have a baka couple with Acchan and Takamina.
"Hey I think we look cute right Holmes?" Acchan said.
"Right Watson!"
The two hugged each other happy that they found themselves cute.
You two are incorrigible! :doh: :rofl:
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Minna! I'm glad you all liked the chapter. But now I think it's time Sae got some love too. With Mayuyu constantly torturing her and Acchan and Takamina showing off their love, I think it's Sae's turn to finally get the love she deserves right? Please enjoy the chapter and watch Sayaka and Sae bond a little closer.
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Chapter 6
For the past few days, Sae had been feeling kind of left out. After watching how affectionate everyone else was around their partners, Sae felt left out. Sayaka always kept her distance from Sae and rarely touched her. Sae wondered why Sayaka wasn't as comfortable like the others. Sae was sitting at ther desk playing with a pen when Sayaka walked over.
"Grab your gun." she said.
"Why?" Sae asked.
"We're going down to the firing range. You need to work on your aim."
Sae and Sayaka went down to the firing range. Haruna and Yuko seemed to be out leaving Sae alone with Sayaka.
"Here put these on." Sayaka said handing Sae a pair of sound blocking head phones and safety glasses.
Sayaka walked over and pressed a button. A siren went off and a paper target game out.
"I just want you to try to shoot it from this distance. This is the closest it will get."
"Alright."
Sae put the head phones on and then loaded her gun. She readied her self and then shot all the rounds. To Sae's disappointment, she didn't even hit the target once.
"Raise your arm when you're firing. Also pull your shoulders back. You look like you're hunched over." Sayaka said.
"Hai!"
Sae replaced the clip and tried doing what Sayaka told her. She fired the rounds and once again failed to hit the target.
"I just can't to it!" Sae said.
"Here let me show you."
Sayaka walked over and placed her hand on Sae's shoulder. The sudden contact made her jump back a little.
"What?"
"It's nothing."
Sayaka adjusted Sae's shoulders so they were in the right position. She also elevated Sae's arms to the right height.
"Now fire."
Sae shot her rounds and managed to hit the target with every shot.
"Good job. Now let's back it up a little."
Sayaka flipped at switch and the target moved back a little. Sae did what she did last time and made every hit. The target was backed even further and Sae still managed to hit it. Then the target was backed all the way to the very back. Sae shot her rounds but missed every shot.
"Sae are you feeling ok? You seem down." Sayaka said.
"Oh no I'm just a little scared. I've never really fired a gun at a real person before." Sae said trying to make up some excuse.
"Well maybe this will help you."
Sayaka walked over and wrapped her arms around Sae. Her body was pressed close against Sae to the point where she could feel Sayaka's heart beat. It was calm and steady. Plus the warmth of Sayaka was almost relaxing. Sayaka reached out along Sae's arm adjusting her aim.
"Now take a deep breath and don't think just shoot." Sayaka said in a calm voice.
Sae took a deep breath and let Sayaka's gentle hands guide her. She shot the rounds and hit the target with every shot.
"Nice! Now I'm going to let go so I need you to do the exact same thing."
Sayaka let go and Sae already started to miss the warm feeling of Sayaka. On purpose, Sae missed all of her shots.
"I'm sorry but could you show me one more time. I think I almost got it." Sae said.
"Alright one more time."
Sayaka wrapped around Sae again and Sae was enjoying every moment. She hoped that she could stay like that forever in Sayaka's arms.
"Uh Sae shoot." Sayaka said.
"Right."
Sae shot and hit all the rounds. Then she did it again without Sayaka's help.
"I think you got it Sae!" Sayaka said.
"Yeah I think so too! Thank you so much!"
Without thinking, Sae ran over and hugged Sayaka. Sae realized this and backed away.
"I'm sorrry I just-"
Sae was cut off when Sayaka walked over and returned a hug.
"It's ok. You have the right to be happy." Sayaka said.
Sae stood there hugging Sayaka wishing she could just die like this. Sae might actually get her wish. While the two were hugging, something started beeping in the other room. Sae walked over to see what it was and saw it was a bomb. It was about to blow and Sae was right in it's way. Sae covered herself right before the bomb exploded. She was expecting to feel a lot of pain but instead she felt that same warm feeling. The bomb went off and instead of fire and smoke, there were ribbons and confetti.
"Congratulations!" Yuko and Haruna said as they came out from nowhere.
"What?" Sae said confused.
"Yuko and I saw how you were depressed because Sayaka was being stiff around you." Haruna said.
"So Nyannyan and I set up this party bomb to go off when you two came in." Yuko said.
"But how did you guys know we were down here?"
"I told Sayaka to have you practice your shooting. It was brilliant wasn't? I saw how much you were loving Sayaka paying attention to you."
"Shut up Yuko!"
Sae tried to move but something was preventing her from moving. Sae looked over and Sayaka still holding on to her. It looked like Sayaka was protecting Sae from the bomb blast.
"Uh Sayaka you can let go now." Sae said.
"Ah sorry." Sayaka said as she back away.
"Yuko you're going to pay for this." Sayaka said.
"Yeah yeah but for now let's celebrate you're newly found friendship with more guns!"
Yuko ran over into another room and Haruna was slowly starting to back away. Yuko came back out carrying two AK47s.
"Let's party!"
Yuko started to run over to Sae but suddenly tripped.
"Look out!"
Sayaka pushed Sae to the side as Yuko fell and fired the guns. When the shooting stopped, Sae stood up.
"Yuko you idiot!" Haruna said as she came out from behind the door way.
"I'm sorry you guys." Yuko said.
"Sae you alright?"
Sae looked over and saw Sayaka with a small scratch on her face.
"Does it hurt?" Sae asked.
"What this? I'll be fine."
"Let me see it."
Sae leaned in really close to Sayaka's face. Sae couldn't bare it anymore and licked the blood off of Sayaka's face.
"AHH!"
Sayaka fell back right one top of Yuko.
"Hey get off!" Yuko said pushing Sayaka off her.
"Blame Sae! She's the one who licked my face." Sayaka said.
"Nice Sae!" Yuko said.
"Not helping! I'm still made at you for the whole setting me up thing."
"I was only doing it to help."
"I'll show you help! Come here!"
"Help the gorilla is attacking!"
"Shut up you stupid squirrel!"
Sae watched Sayaka chase Yuko around the room. She was laughing at the whole sight because it looked like a scene from Tom and Jerry. Then Haruna walked over and stood next to Sae.
"Aren't you glad Yuko and I stepped in?" Haruna asked.
"Yeah. I'm glad you did. Now I think Sayaka will be more comfortable around me." Sae said.
"That's good. Sayaka is a good partner. I think you'll get along just fine."
"I think so too."
Sae and Haruna watched Sayaka chase Yuko down the the point where Yuko had fallen over. Now Sayaka was standing over her ready to attack.
"I see London, I see France, I see Sayaka's under pants!" Yuko said.
"Ohh Sayaka I didn't know you were into pink and hearts too? Now that's just adorable."
Sayaka started to blush furiously as she kicked Yuko.
"Ignore her!" Sayaka said.
Sae and Haurna were both trying to hold back their laughter but was obviously having a hard time.
"Mou!"
Sayaka ran out of the room completely embarrassed. Sae thought to herself that she was really starting to like Sayaka.
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Well there's chapter 6! You happy now that Sae finally got some love? Now maybe she'll be able to finally get along with Sayaka. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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thankyou i love this fic i want more wmatsui and mayuki :luvluv2: :kneelbow: thanku i can't wait for the next chapter :peace:
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Yuko started to run over to Sae but suddenly tripped.
People in the Police Department are pretty clumsy :nervous First we had Sae with the acid. Now it's Yuko with guns :lol:
Sae leaned in really close to Sayaka's face. Sae couldn't bare it anymore and licked the blood off of Sayaka's face.
It's good that Sae finally gets some loving but that was a totally OMGWTFAREYOUDOING moment! How lonely and desperate can she get? :rofl:
I hope Sae doesn't get over Yukirin's charms too soon. Kind of enjoy seeing her succumb to temptation or getting into "accidents" with Yukirin/Rena and then getting hell from Mayuyu/Jurina. I'm a sadist :halo:
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Wow its so fast...thank you!!!
Ahahahaha that was funny...sayaka...
But still i want more and more wmatsui and mayuki...hehe
But everything you wrote its fine...i love all!!!
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Hahaha Yuko is a genius!
Hum~ Saeyaka~
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Hello everyone! Now that Sae has had some love, it's time to focus. Get back on track. I hope you all enjoy the chapter. Doso!
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Chapter 7
"Hey Sae we're heading out again." Sayaka said.
"Where to this time?" Sae asked.
"A park. We got a murder."
Sayaka and Sae arrived at the scene and Jurina and Rena already there. Sae tried walking over to them but once agian, Jurina gave her a death glare which made her back away.
"Have you found anything?" Sayaka asked.
"Well there are two bullet wounds to the chest so I'm guessing a nine mil. Also, I found this that might be useful."
Rena handed Sayaka a business card with a wine glass on it. It was a host club.
"Maybe he's a regular customer." Sae said.
"Let's go check it out."
Sae and Sayaka went to the host club and showed people around his photo. So far no one knew him. But then one hostess stepped up. She claimed the vitum came in late last night. Then he left a little drunk.
"Alright thank you for talking with us."
Just then Sayaka's phone went off.
"Yeah? Ok I'll be on my way."
"What was that about?" Sae asked.
"Rena found something and needs us down there. I have to go back to the crime scene to make sure we didn't miss anything. You go ahead." Sayaka said.
"On it."
Sae walked into the mourge and saw both Rena and Jurina hovering over the dead corps. They saw Sae and stopped what they were doing.
"Sayaka said that you found something?" Sae asked.
"Yeah I found this fiber on his clothes near the bullet entries. Can you take this down to Yukirin and have it analyzed?" Rena asked.
"Sure."
"Oh and take Jurina with you."
"Why?"
"She said she needed to talk to Mayuyu about something."
"Ok let's go Juina."
Jurina and Sae went up to Yukirin's lab. They found her spinning in a chair like a little kid.
"Uhh Yukirin?"
"Be with you in a minute!" Yukirin said.
She stopped the chair and then stood up. But then she stumbled and Sae caught her before she fell.
"Thanks."
"You ok?" Sae asked still holding Yukirin.
"Yeah I'm alright just a little dizzy. You can let go now." Yukirin said.
"Oh sorry."
Sae let go and Yukirin adjusted her lab coat.
"Jurina what are you doing here? Do you need to talk to Mayuyu?"
Jurina nodded her head.
"You know where to find her."
Jurina walked out into another room.
"Rena needs you to analyze this fabric found on the body." Sae said.
"Oh sure."
Yukirin took the fiber and put it in a scanner. A couple minutes later a ding went off.
"Ah here are your results. The fiber is part of some kind of dress. And based on the color I'd say red."
That's when Sae remembered the hostess she talked to back at the club. She was the only one in the red dress at the time.
"Well I gotta go Yukirin. Thanks a lot!"
Sae ran back over to the host club and found the hostess. When she questioned her again, the hostess seemed really agitated. Then Sae hit the jackpot when she saw the nine mil gun sticking out of her purse. Sae arrested the hostess before she had a chance to fight back. Then she took her back to head quarters where she was filed. Sae was sitting at her desk when Sayaka walked over to her.
"Why did you do that?" she asked.
"Do what?" Sae asked.
"Go off on your own and arrest that hostess that by the way had a gun."
"She wasn't a major threat and I got her before she could do anything. Plus she confessed to the murder so case solved."
"Yes but what I'm worried about is the fact that you went off on your own without consulting me first. I'm your partner Sae remember that."
"I'm sorry. It won't happen again."
Sayaka walked away and as she walked away, Jurina came up.
"Hey Sae Rena said she needed to talk to you. Can you come down to the mourge for a minute?" she asked.
"Sure."
Sae followed down to the mourge but didn't see Rena anywhere. Instead, she found Mayuyu sittting on one of the autopsy tables.
"What's going on?" Sae asked.
"Jurina and I are tired of seeing you getting touchy with our partners." Mayuyu said.
"So now we're going to train you like a dog." Jurina said.
"What?"
Before Sae could do anything, Jurina held Sae's arms back while Mayuyu walked over and snapped something around her neck.
"What is this?" Sae asked.
"A shock collar. I've desguised it to make it look like a choker necklace. Now any time you get touchy with our partner, I'll shock you." Mayuyu said.
"You have got to be kidding. Get this thing off me!"
Sae tried to take it off but as soon as she did, she felt a sudden jolt throughout her body
"If you try to take it off it'll shock you automatically. Also if you tell anyone, we'll set the shock mode to high." Jurina said.
"Jurina also has a remote and she can use it when ever she wants." Mayuyu said.
"Someone is going to find out about this." Sae said.
"Eventually. But for now, Saedog sit!"
Mayuyu hit a button and Sae fell to her knees.
"Good dog."
"Mayuyu are you in here?"
Yukirin walked in and saw Mayuyu and Sae on the ground.
"Sae are you ok?" she asked.
"Yeah I'm fine." Sae said starting to back away from Yukirin.
But then the door opened from behind Sae and Rena came in.
Rena didn't see Sae and tripped falling right on top of her.
"Ahh are you ok?" Rena asked.
"Yeah are you?" Sae asked.
Sae and Rena's faces were really close to each other.
"Sae bad!"
Jurina hit a button and Sae got shocked again.
"Sae are you ok?" Rena asked really worried.
"Yeah I'm fine!" Sae said trying no to stutter from the shock waves.
"She's probably just got a stomach ache." Mayuyu said.
Sae looked over and shot Mayuyu and evil glare.
"Don't look at me like that."
This time Mayuyu hit a button and Sae got another shock. Sae never thought she could experience so much pain.
"Mayuyu, Yukirin, what are you guys doing here?" Rena asked.
"Oh I was looking for Mayuyu." Yukirin said.
"I just had to have a little chat with Jurina is all. Right?" Mayuyu said.
"Yeah. We were just talking to Sae about something." Jurina said.
"Well Mayuyu I need you back up in the lab. Come with me."
Yukirin took Mayuyu's hand and the two walked away. Right before the two left Sae thought she heard Yukirin say,
"It's my turn to be on top."
"Rena I got you some of that Melonpan you love so much!"
"Really? Oh thank you so much!"
Rena walked over and hugged Jurina.
"Oh by the way Sae that's a nice necklace you have there." Rena said.
"Thanks do you want one? I'm sure I can get one for y-"
Sae was cut off with another jolt. She looked over and saw Jurina holding a small remote.
"Sae are you ok?"
"Yeah I gotta go. Bye!"
Sae ran out of the room before Jurina could shock her anymore.
Just then Sayaka walked over and caught Sae.
"Hey I just wanted to aplogize for the way I yelled at you earlier. I know you only acted on instinct and I wasn't thinking that at the moment so I'm really sorry." Sayaka said.
"Oh no it's fine!!" Sae said.
"You sure? You're not mad?"
"If I was mad would I do this?"
Sae reached out and hugged Sayaka reassuring her. At least she could touch Sayaka without being jolted with electricity.
"Ok that's good. By the way Sae where did you get that necklace?"
"It was a gift from Mayuyu and Jurina." Sae said remembering what would happen if she did tell her what the necklace really was.
"Really that's nice of them. I should get you one too." Sayaka said.
"That would be nice."
"Just please don't let it be another shock collar." Sae thought.
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Well there's chapter 7! I hope you all liked it. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter. It will be featuring Saeboy and Takaboy!
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hahahahahahha~!
tHats what you get for messing with Mayu and Jurina!
Mayuki loveeeeeee~
Yuki was really cute! waiting for more~!
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How about jurina and mayu getting touchy with sae,well im curious how rena and yuki reaction...i think it will be funny...LOL
Th next its saeboy and takaboy, takaboy!!! Yay
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LMAO!!!! Poor Sae!!!!
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Today's chapter is going to have the special appearence of Takaboy and Saeboy! Please enjoy.
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Chapter 8
It was another regular day at the office when Takamina and Acchan walked over to Sae. They both stared at her for a while and then both nodded their heads.
"What?"
"Come with us."
Sae didn't know exactly what was going on but the next thing she knew, she was trying on a men's suit.
"You done in there yet?" Takamina said from outside.
"Yeah I'm coming out now!" Sae said.
Sae stepped out and everyone gasped at her new look.
"Wow Sae you look really good in men's clothes!" Acchan said.
"Why am I dressed like this?" Sae asked.
"We got a tip that someone was going to bomb a building tonight during a big party full of important people. We need to sneak in their and find the bomber before they set it off." Takamina said.
"So I have to dress as a guy?"
"Yes. That way no one will recgonize you if you get caught."
"Ok. Am I the only one doing this?"
"No I am and Sayaka is too."
"Where is Sayaka?"
"Over here."
Sayaka stepped out of the room next to Sae. Sae couldn't believe what she was seeing. Sayaka was in a black tuxedo with a black tie and white dress shirt. She was also wearing a black wig that made her look like someone from an anime. Sae thought Sae looked really good.
"You look nice." Sae said.
"You do too."
Sae was wearing a white suit and tie and because her hair was short, she already looked like a guy.
"Wait until you see my outfit!"
Takamina quickly ran out the room and then came back in. Takamina was wearing a navy blue suit and a blond wig.
"Not bad." Sae said.
"Doesn't she look handsome!" Acchan said hugging Takamina.
"So when is the party?" Sayaka asked.
"In a hour. Mayuyu should be coming up in a minute with our mikes and cameras."
Right after Takamina said that, Mayuyu came in followed by Yukirin. When she saw the three well dressed men she stopped.
"Mayuyu do you have the equipment?" Takamina said.
"Oh my god!" Mayuyu shouted.
"Is that you Sae?" Yukirin said staring at Sae with wide eyes.
"Hello." Sae said in a deep tone.
"KYA! So cool!" Yukirin said.
"You look pretty good Sae. You too Sayaka." Mayuyu said.
"Thanks."
"Takamina here are the mikes and cameras."
Mayuyu handed three pins and skin colored ear buds.
"There are cameras in the pins and the mikes will allow us to talk to you and you can talk to us." Mayuyu said.
"Alright then we're all set. Let's go!"
Takamina, Sayaka, and Sae pulled into the front of the building. Sae stepped out first followed by Sayaka and Takamina. Then to Sae's surprise Acchan came out too. She was in red dress with pink flowers on the side. She looked very pretty.
"Why is Acchan here?" Sayaka asked.
"I'm Takamina's escort. She's taking me to the party as her date." Acchan said proudly.
"We can't have a little fun while we're out can we?" Takamina said.
"Ok let's get inside."
When they walked into the building, all eyes forcused on them. Sae could see men eyeing Acchan and Takamina glaring at them. She also saw women eyeing Sayaka and her.
"Split up and look around for the bomb." Takamina said.
Takamina and Acchan went in one direction while Sae and Sayaka walked the other. Sayaka grabbed some drinks from a waitor and handed one to Sae.
"So if I were a bomb where would I hide?" Sae said.
"Check under chairs or behind potted plants." Sayaka said.
"Ok!"
Sae and Sayaka split up and started to look around. Trying not to look suspicious, Sae would walk around and bend over slightly to check the chairs. She also pretented to look like she was admiring the plants when she was checking on them. While she was searching, three girls walked up to Sae.
"We've never seen you before." the girl in the blue dress said.
"What's your name?" the girl in the red dress asked.
"Uhh Shun." Sae said.
"Well Shun would you like to dance with us?" the girl in the green dress asked.
"I'm sorry ladies but I'm in the middle of something." Sae said trying to get them to back off.
"Come on. You're at a party so let loose a little. Don't need to be stiff."
"No really I'm busy looking for something."
"Really? What did you lose?" the girl in the red asked.
"I'm looking for wedding ring. It fell off me when I wasn't looking." Sae said.
"Oh. Well good luck finding it."
The three girls left Sae alone when they heard her say wedding ring.
"Takamina have you found anything?" Sae asked.
"No but if these assholes keep mentally undressing my Acchan I'm going to shoot them." Takamina said.
"Take it easy. Let me know if you find anything."
Sae kept looking around for any sign of what would look like a bomb. But then there was a loud screech in Sae's ear.
"Sae help!" Sayaka said on the other line.
"Where are you?"
"Over by the food table. Hurry!"
Sae rushed over to the food table where Sayaka was. When she saw Sayaka she wished she had a camera. Sayaka was surrounded by a bunch of young girls. Looks like Sayaka was very popular with the ladies.
"Help!" Sayaka said.
"I'm coming!"
Sae tried to get thorugh the sea of girls but was knocked back. She slid under one of the tables and hit her head hard.
"Man those girls are tough." Sae thought.
Sae was about to crawl out from under the table when she heard a faint beeping noise. She looked over and saw it. She found the bomb and it was set to detonoate in five minutes.
"Uh guys I found the bomb!" Sae said.
"Where?" Takamina said.
"Under the food table."
"Ok wait there. Yuko should be there in a minute."
"Yuko?"
"HI!"
"Ahh!"
Sae hit her head on the table when she saw Yuko who was right next to Sae in her bomb squad uniform with the armor and all.
"Where did you come from?!"
"I was under here stealing food."
"How long have you been here?" Sae asked.
"About an hour."
"Jeez you scared me!"
"So this is the bomb?" Yuko asked.
"Yep that's it. You're going to disarm it right?" Sae said.
"Yeah. Just give me a minute."
Yuko pulled out what looked like a fried shrimp and started eating it.
"Yuko we don't have time for snacks! There is a bomb ready to explode in two minutes!"
"Relax I got it!"
Yuko reached out and pulled a small red wire. The wire came out and the timer stopped.
"I told you I had it." Yuko said.
"It was that easy?" Sae said in disbelief.
"Yeah. Whoever set it was a real idiot. If you stick around a little more the person who set the bomb will probably come by."
"Hey you stop!"
"I think they're already here."
Sae popped out from under the table and saw Takamina chasing a guy down.
"That's the guy!" Takamina shouted as she ran after him.
He was too far for Sae to reach in time and was almost at the exit. But then right when he was going to leave, someone ran up and hit him with a silver platter. He fell to the ground out cold.
"Nyannyan!"
"Hey guys!"
Haruana was wearing a red chinese dress with a little of her legs exposed. All the guys were drooling over her. One guy actually attempted to touch her. But then Yuko jumped off the table and crashed into the guy.
"Don't you dare touch my Nyannyan!" Yuko said.
"Yuko stop it!"
Haruna said as she pulled the rabid squirrel off the man.
"It's ok." Haruna said as she hugged Yuko.
"Ok. If you say so." Yuko said kissing Haruna on the cheek.
"Hey Takamina why can't we be like them!" Acchan said.
"Well come here."
Takamina leaned in and kissed Acchan right on the lips. Once again Sae found herself standing alone. But then there was a sudden scream behind her. Sae looked over and saw Sayaka heading straight at her. Sayaka couldn't stop in time and slammed into Sae. The two fell to the ground and next thing Sae knew, Sayaka's lips were pressed against hers. When Sayaka realized this, she got up and blushed a bright shade of pink.
"Way to go Sayaka!" Yuko shouted.
"Shut up!"
"You're almost there!" Acchan said.
"Shut up!"
"Ahh how cute." Haruna said.
"Sae help!"
Sayaka ran over and hugged Sae.
"There, there. You guys quit picking on Sayaka!" Sae said.
"We know you liked it too Sae. Don't lie to yourself!"
Sae blushed a little to but she didn't want Sayaka seeing it so she just held her close.
"Everyone's so mean." Sayaka said.
"You know they do it because they love you." Sae said.
"No they do it for fun. That's why I'm glad I have you as a parnter Sae. You'd never hurt me."
"That's right. And you'd never hurt me right?"
"Of course."
"Good by the way Sayaka, your shirt came undone a little and I can see your bra."
"Sae!"
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Well that's it for chapter 8! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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thankyou so much i love this fanfic :luvluv1: :luvluv2: im looking forward to more wmatsui and mayuki :hee: i love how you update so quick :onioncheer: thanx :kneelbow: :peace:
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toooo fast its tooo fast!!!....how amazing are you?? :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:
genius! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
seayaka wah so funny....kekeke :twothumbs
i like how sae interaction with other...its so funny :wub:....especially when she have some trouble skinship with other pairing LOL (Mayuki and Wmatsui) :cathappy: :cathappy:
all hail miyumi-san!!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Waaaah, this chapter was hilarious, Yuko hiding under the table stealing all the food LOL. Although, I hope further down the line they would start to have to solve tougher cases lol I wouldn't mind being at this office, they seem to have it pretty easy XD
Saeyaka for the win!
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Minna! Thank you for commenting! Don't worry the cases may be easy now but around chapter 10, I'm going to throw a hard one at them and of course, it's going to be a two parter! We're on chapter 9 now so only one more chapter! Please enjoy today's chapter.
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Chapter 9
"Hey Sae come here for a minute." Mayuyu said.
"What is it?" Sae asked.
"I need you to do something for me."
"What is it?"
"A couple days ago, Jurina stole my flash drive that had all my pictures of Yukirin on it. I need you to go to the mourge and get it back from her."
"No problem. What does the flash drive look like?"
"It's a Gachapin and it's head comes off when you open it."
"Ok I'll go down and look for it."
Sae thought it was kind of disturbing having a flash drive that you could pop it's head off. Sae went down to the mourge and found the flash drive sitting on a desk.
"That must be it." Sae thought.
She walked over and grabbed it. Right when she did, Rena walked into the room.
"Sae? What are you doing in here?" Rena asked.
"Oh nothing. I was just looking for Jurina." Sae said trying to hide the flash drive behind her back.
"Well she's not here. Sae what do you have behind your back?"
"Nothing!"
"Sae I know you're lying. Show me your hands."
"Ok!"
Sae showed Rena her hands and saw they were both empty.
"That's odd. I could've sworn you were hiding something." Rena said.
"Well I guess you were wrong." Sae said.
"I'm never wrong." Rena said giving Sae a mean look.
"Sorry. Well I'm going to go now. Good bye!"
Sae ran out of the mourge before Rena could say anything else. When she was in the elevator, she pulled out the flash drive from the inside of her skirt. She had shoved it in there when Sae had it behind her back.
"It's a good thing Rena didn't have me turn around." Sae thought.
Sae walked back into the lab where Mayuyu was waiting.
"Here you go!" Sae said proudly handing Mayuyu the flash drive.
"Good Saedog." Mayuyu said patting Sae's head.
Mayuyu plugged in the flash drive and a few seconds later pictures came up. Both Sae and Mayuyu gasped at what they saw. On the flash drive was pictures of Yukirin only they were pictures of her asleep and pictures of her in her underwear when she was sitting at her desk. The panty shots looked like someone put a camera under her desk and took the photos without her noticing them.
"These aren't mine." Mayuyu said.
"However..."
Mayuyu hit a button and the computer copied the photos onto her computer.
"These are good photos so I'll keep them."
"Then if these photos aren't yours then who's are they?" Sae asked.
"Sae.."
"Yeah?"
"This isn't my flash drive." Mayuyu said.
"But it's a Gachapin like you said yours was!" Sae said.
"Yeah but mine in a limited addition pink Gachapin. This one is the regular green one."
"You could've told me that."
"Guess I forgot. Anyways, I maybe able to figure out who it belongs to."
Mayuyu started typing something into the computer but then Yukirin walked in. Sae saw her and quickly turned the computer off.
"Hey!" Mayuyu said.
"Mayuyu what are you doing?" Yukirin asked.
"Oh Yukirin, I was talking to Sae about the weather. I think it's a nice day today."
"Really?"
Yukirin turned around to look out the window. During that time Sae quickly took the flash drive out of the computer.
"I'll go return this." Sae whispered to Mayuyu.
"Nice move on turning the computer off. If Yukirin saw them then she would've thought I was a pervert like Yuko." Mayuyu said.
"What?"
"It's nothing." Sae said.
"You guys are weird. Anyways Mayuyu I think it's going to rain today." Yukirin said.
"Well that's interesting. I think Sayaka is looking for me. I'd better go."
Sae quickly ran out of the lab and back down the mourge. When she walked in she saw Rena on the ground.
"Are you looking for something?" Sae asked.
"Yeah have you seen a flash drive. It looks like a Gachapin and it's green." Rena said.
"Uh no I don't think I have."
Sae couldn't believe what she heard. The owner of the flash drive full of panty shots of Yukirin was Rena. She had to tell Mayuyu. Sae waited for the right moment and then dropped the flash drive a couple feet away from her.
"Hey is this it?" Sae said pointing at the flash drive.
"Yeah!! Thank you so much for finding it!" Rena said as she picked it up.
"Well I'm glad I could help. Oh by the way Mayuyu was looking for her flash drive. Have you see a pink Gachapin flash drive?"
"Yeah Jurina had it. Let me go get it."
Rena walked out and then came back with the flash drive.
"Thanks. I'll go return it to her." Sae said.
Sae left the room in a hurry so she could tell Mayuyu the news.
"EHH?! The flash drive belonged to Rena?" Mayuyu said.
"Yep." Sae said.
"I can't believe it. I knew she was hiding something behind that innocent face of hers. Who knew it was a perverted side. And for my Yukirin too!"
"Well I'm glad I was helpful to you."
"Yeah keep it up and you might get your collar off."
"Really? Sweet!" Sae said in excitement.
"Yeah now leave. I need time to plan my revenge. I could use this against her." Mayuyu said.
Sae left Mayuyu feeling she had just done something horrible to Rena. But then again, it was better that Rena got abused more by the cyborg than Sae herself.
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Well there's chapter 9! I hope everyone liked it and please tell me what you think. Mayuyu is out for revenge. I hope Rena can handle it. The next chapter is going to be a thriller so get ready!
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Uwaaaaaah!!!
Rena...rena...is the owner!
Omg be carefull Rena,mayu will attacking you..
But if she doing that,what about jurina reaction?
This is a War between 2 couple...Mayu vs Rena and maybe in the end Mayu vs Jurina LOL
Or or ...woh im really curious!
Rena-chan fighting! But dont hurt mayuyu or yuki will mad tooo hehe
Ah thank for the update
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OMG Rena!!! You are committing a crime! :shocked What will Jurina think if she finds out about your pervy collection?!
However, could someone else be behind this? That someone being a certain Gachapin who has yet to make her appearance...
"These aren't mine." Mayuyu said.
"However..."
Mayuyu hit a button and the computer copied the photos onto her computer.
"These are good photos so I'll keep them."
Mayuyu... you are really obsessed with your sexy and clueless Yukirin.... BUT! GOOD JOB! :thumbsup
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next chapter :deco:
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.....YukixRena is cuttteeeee~ :wub: :hehehe: :shifty:
they are gona fight over Yuki arent they??? :inlove:
MayuxYuki VS YukixRena !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wahaha: :on woohoo: :on bleed:
.....Yuki needs more interesting appearences.....?! :on hypto: :squirrel:
update soon~! :byebye:
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Minna! Chapter 10 part 1 has arrived and now it's time to rev things up! Please enjoy the chapter. I can tell you one thing, it's going to be full of surprises!
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Chapter 10 part 1
"Hey Sae come here."
"What is it?"
"I need you to do something for me." Jurina said.
"What?" Sae said.
"I need you to go to the store and get some Melonpan for Rena. I promised her I'd buy her some but I forgot. Can you please go get it? I'll owe you big time if you do this."
"Sure. You got the money?"
"Yeah here."
Jurina handed Sae the money.
"Get three of them."
"Got it."
Sae ran down to the store and found the Melonpan. She noticed they were on sale really cheap so Sae was able to buy five Melonpans. She walked over to the register and got in line waiting to check out. But there was something holding up the line.
"What's going on over there?" Sae wondered.
Sae looked over and saw a woman holding a crying baby. She was trying to calm the baby while fumbling to get her wallet out. Seeing how this was holding up the line and people were getting mad, Sae walked up to woman.
"Miss let me hold the baby while you get your money out." Sae said.
"Oh thank you so much." the woman said as she handed the baby over.
"Yosh, yosh don't cry. Look!"
Sae made funny faces and the baby stopped crying and started laughing.
"Oh no I forgot the baby food. I'll have to go back and get it." the woman said.
"I'll get it!"
Sae handed the baby back and then took off. A couple seconds later she came back with the baby food.
"Thank you so much officer."
"No problem."
The woman checked out and the line started moving again. Sae paid for the Melonpan and then ran back to the station. She was really lucky too because the store manager let her take ten more Melonpan for helping that woman out.
"Here you go!" Sae said handing Rena a sack full of Melonpans.
"I only gave you enough money to buy three. How'd you get so many?" Jurina asked.
"They were on sale and the owner gave me some freebies for helping out."
"Well thank you so much! I owe you!"
As Jurina walked away, Takamina walked in and stood on top of a desk.
"Everyone gather around. There is something important I need to talk to you about." Takamina said.
"What is it?" Sayaka asked.
"There's been a serial rapist running around lately targeting young women. I want everyone to be on their guard when they head home tonight. We already have a team out looking for the rapist but I still want everyone to be careful."
"Hai!" everyone said.
"Acchan, I want you spending the night at my house for the next few days." Takamina said.
"Aww are you trying to protect me?" Acchan asked.
"Yeah!" Takamina was blushing a little.
Sae thought that there was more to behind the midget captain's actions.
"Nyannyan you can stay at my house!" Yuko said.
"No way your house is weird!" Haruna said.
"I'd be more comfortable in my own home."
"But your house is a mess. Last time I walked in there I saw food that had been expired for two months and you never threw it out."
"I've been working on it!"
"Yeah right. For now, you're staying with me!"
"Fine."
"Rena you can spend the night at my place if you want." Jurina said.
"No it's ok." Rena said.
"Then you'll just sleep at your place?"
" No I'll just sleep in the mourge."
"But won't you be cold?"
"No. It's actually really nice and comfy. No one ever comes down and the only people there are dead so no bother to me."
"You're like a vampire."
"Mayuyu are you going to sleep in your office as well?" Yukirin asked.
"Of course. My office is my house." Mayuyu said.
"What will you do if the building closes?"
"I'll move in with you!"
"I'm sorry but my place is not for rent."
"Yukirin you're so mean!"
Sae herself wondered where she would stay. She was sure Sayaka would offer her place but she felt like she was being a burden to Sayaka.
"Hey Sae how about you stay with me." Sayaka said.
"As expected from the older partner..." Sae said.
"What?"
"Nohing. That sounds fine."
"Well then now that we've arranged sleeping plans, let's get back to work!" Takamina said.
It was almost time to go and everyone was packing up. Yuko and Haruna had already left and so did Takamina and Acchan. Rena was down in the mourge and Jurina being her loyal puppy stayed down there with her. Mayuyu was locked in her office and Yukirin was about to leave. Sae was waiting for Sayaka to finish up some paper work and then they were going to head out for ramen.
"You almost ready yet?" Sae asked.
"Yeah just give me a minute." Sayaka said.
Sayaka finished what she was doing and then walked over to Sae.
"Alright let's go."
The two walked to the door way and ran into Yukirin.
"You leaving as well?" Sae said.
"Yeah. You two be careful out there." Yukirin said.
"I should be saying that to you. Are you sure you're alright going home tonight alone?"
"I'll be fine. My house is only a short walk from here. Plus I have a tazeor in my purse."
"Well alright. I'll see you tomorrow then."
"Ok bye!"
Sae watched Yukirin walk off into the darkness and for some reason, Sae had a bad feeling about letting Yukirin go on her own. Sae and Sayaka arrived into the ramen shop which was thriving with business. Sae had heard of the place but never actually stopped to visit. They took a seat and then a waitor came by to take their order.
"So what do you think of everyone? Have you finally gotten used to things around here?" Sayaka asked.
"I think I'm starting to get along with everyone a lot better. Mayuyu isn't as harsh towards me as she was before." Sae said remembering the whole flash drive thing.
"Do you think we'll be able to find the serial rapist?"
"I'm sure we will. We just need to wait until they come out and when they do we jump them!"
"Here's your food. Sorry for the wait." the waitor said as he placed two large bowls of ramen on the table.
"Woah they're HUGE!" Sayaka said.
"I know. They're like the size of a salad bowl." Sae said.
"I hope you're hungry."
"As to you. And you know what how about we make this more interesting."
"What do you mean?"
"Let's have a eating contest. First one to finish has to pay the bill." Sae said.
"Sae I'm not going to play such childish game." Sayaka said.
"You afraid you're going to lose?"
When Sae said that, there was a spark in Sayaka's eyes. With quick speed, Sayaka pulled out chopsticks and broke them in half.
"Bring it."
"Ok then on the count of three. 1...2...3!"
At the same time the two started slurping down as much noodle as they could. Sae could barely fit it all in her mouth and almost choked at one point. She looked over at Sayaka and Sae she was easily eating them like it was nothing.
"Crap if I lose then I gotta pay the bill and I need the money to pay for the rent." Sae thought.
Sae kicked into over drive and started inhaling noodles. The two were neck and neck both at the same eating speed. Then it came down to drinking the broth.
"There's no way I'm going to lose!"
At the same time to two lifted their bowls and started drinking like they had been dying of thirst. Sae was getting broth all over her while Sayaka still managed to drink without spilling a single drop.
"How does she do that?" Sae thought.
It came down to the last few gulps and Sae was almost done. As soon as their bowls were empty, the two dropped their bowls onto the table. Sae was panting trying to catch her breath from all the activity.
"So who won?" Sae asked.
"I think it was a tie." Sayaka said.
"You up for another round?"
"No way. If I eat anymore my stomach is going to burst. How about we split the bill?"
"Sounds fair."
While Sae was still recovering, Sayaka grabbed a napkin and started to wipe Sae's face.
"Look at you. You're a mess." Sayaka said.
"I can't control where the food goes when I'm rushed." Sae said.
"Well let's finish up here and then head out."
"Alright."
The two paid the bill and then left with full bellies. Although something in Sae felt wrong. Like something bad was happening. She decided to ignore the feeling and go home to rekax. The next day Sae and Sayaka arrived at the station and found everyone in a panick.
"What's going on?" Sayaka asked.
"I don't know." Sae said.
Just then Takamina rushed over to the two.
"Have you two seen Yukirin?" she asked.
"No but we talked to her last night." Sayaka said.
"What time was it?"
"Around eight. What's going on?" Sae asked.
"Yukirin has been kidnapped."
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Well there's chapter 10 part 1! What will happen to Yukirin? Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter to find out what happens! Oh and the Melonpan story actually happened to me once. I got so much food!
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"But you house is a mess. Last time I walked in there I saw food that had been expired for two months and you never threw it out."
Haruna is as hopeless as ever :rofl:
YUKIIII!!!! Stupid Mayuyu, why didn't you ask Yukirin to sleep in your office?? How can you let your sexyhotprettyclueless girlfriend walk home alone?! You better go kick some ass and save Yukirin now!
I can't wait for Part 2!
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No Yukirin!!!!!
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Yukirin!!!!!
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Well here's part 2! What will happen to Yukirin? Will Sae be able to find her in tim? Or will it be Mayuyu to the rescue? Let's see what happens to Yukirin! Enjoy!
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Chapter 10 part 2
"What do you mean Yukirin was kidnapped?" Sae said.
"She never showed up for work and she isn't answering her cell. When we went to check her place, there was no one home." Takamina said.
"Did you check everywhere?"
"Yeah. We're trying to track her phone but it looks like it's off."
"I''m going to look for her. I remember the path she took when she went home last night."
"Take Mayuyu with you."
"What?"
"You're not going anywhere without me!"
Sae looked over and saw Mayuyu with a pink suit case to her side.
"What's in there?" Sae asked.
"None of your concern. Let's move." Mayuyu said.
"Alright you two head out and Sayaka you go around and ask peopleif they saw anyone suspicious." Takamina said.
"Roger that!"
"Alright people we got a life on the line and it's one of our own. Let's not screw this up!"
Sae and Mayuyu walked down the same side walk Yukirin walked on when she went home last night. Sae searched every inch of the place but didn't find a thing. Sae walked continuously for hours on end searching for some kind of clue. Then out fo the corner of her eye she saw it. Sticking out of the bushes it what looked like a purse. Sae ran over and pulled it out.
"Mayuyu is this Yukirin's?" Sae asked.
"Yeah it is. I recgonize that bag because I was with her when she bought it." Mayuyu said.
"Well it looks like everything is still in here. Oh and here's her cell phone. Great now how are we going to find her?"
"Is that a camera?" Mayuyu asked pointing at the camera on top of the light post.
"Yeah I think so. Why?"
"Watch."
Mayuyu unzipped her suit case and revealed what looked like a walking computer. She pulled out a laptop, a hardive, and a weird thing with a mini satellite on it.
"Whis is all that for?" Sae asked.
"Shut up." Mayuyu said.
Mayuyu typed something into her laptop and the image of the street came up. It was the video of when Yukirin was being kidnapped. It showed her being grabbed by some random man. It was too dark to see who it was.
"So that's the guy.."
"Yeah." Mayuyu said.
"So how are we going to catch him?" Sae asked.
"I have an idea but you might not like it."
"What?"
Later on that day when it started to get dark out, Sae was standing alone on the same street Yukirin disappeared from. She was in a short skirt and high heels with a pink frilly shirt.
"Why am I standing here?!" Sae said into her intercom.
"Because I'm using you as bait and I don't want to stand out there." Mayuyu said.
"Then why am I dressed like this?"
"Well you need to look attractive so the guy will see you as a potential target."
"Why couldn't you have gotten Sayaka to do this?"
"Because Sayaka is busy no shut up and try to look ditsy."
"What?"
"Start walking and stumble every coulple a steps. Like your drunk."
Sae started to walk and did her best to appear drunk. A couple passed by her and made smart remarks but they just kept walking. Sae was getting close to the street light when she saw a car come speeding down the way. The car stopped and a man came out of it. He grabbed Sae and forced her into the car.
"Don't fight. I'll be following you." Mayuyu said.
Sae remained silent and let the man drive her away to wherever he was taking her. It was about an hour drive and Sae couldn't tell where she was because the man had blind folded her. The car came to a sudden halt and she heard the doors open. Then a hand grabbed her and pushed her onto the ground. He tied Sae's arms and then took off the blind fold. Then the man pushed Sae into a cage and locked the door. It looked like she was in an abandoned factory. Everything was silent but then Sae heard a faint crying noise. She looked over and saw Yukirin in the corner.
"Yukirin!"
"Sae!"
Sae crawled over to Yukirin to comfort her.
"Are you ok? Did he touch you?" Sae asked.
"No. But he was close to. I thought he was going to kill me!" Yukirin said with tears rolling down her face.
"It's ok Yukirin I'll get you out of here. Don't think I came here without a little help."
Sae shoved her hands into the back of her skirt and pulled out a small blade. Then she started sawing away at her ropes. Within a couple of minutes she was free.
"Now let's get you out."
Sae untied Yukirin and the scared girl embraced Sae with a hug.
"Now let's get out of here."
Sae walked over to the cage door and decided it looked pretty flimsy. With one good kick, Sae kicked the door open.
"Let's run for it!"
Sae grabbed Yukirin's hand and the two started running towards the exit. They were almost there when something whacked Sae across the head. Sae fell to the ground and slowly began to lose consiousness. Before she blacked out, she could hear Yukirin screaming. Sae messed up big time. When Sae woke up, she saw Yukirin on the other side of the cage. Then she saw the man walk over to her with a knife.
"Stop!" Sae said.
Sae tried to move but she heard the rattling of chains. Sae was binded with chains which were securily tightened. Sae could do nothing but watch in horror as her friend was about to be raped. Then man took the blade and cut Yukirin's shirt open.
"Please stop!" Yukirin begged.
Then man just laughed and pulled Yukirin's skirt off. Now she was in nothing but a bra and underwear.
"Yukirin!"
Sae tried to break free of her chains but she couldn't. She felt so useless not being able to do anything. The man reached out about to grab Yukirin's bra when there was a loud bang. Sae looked over and at first she didn't see anything. But then something blew a huge hole in the wall. There standing under the rubble was none other than Mayuyu.
"Mayuyu!" Yukirin shouted.
"Yukirin!" Mayuyu said.
Mayuyu started running over when the man suddenly got in front of her.
"Move!"
Mayuyu kicked the man sending him flying ten feet away. Once he was out of the way, Mayuyu ran over to Yukirin.
"Are you ok?" Mayuyu asked.
"No no I'm not!" Yukirin said.
"Did he touch you?"
"No but he was going to."
"There there it's ok. I got you."
Mayuyu took off her jacket and put it over her. Then she walked over to the man and picked him up by the shirt collar.
"You're going to pay for what you did." she said in a cold voice.
Then she threw the man across the other side of the factory. But she wasn't done yet. Mayuyu quickly ran over and dropped kicked his special parts. The man screamed in pain as Mayuyu dug her foot deeper into him.
"I'm going to make you wish you were never born."
Mayuyu took the man and threw him high into the air to the point where he actually slammed into the ceiling. Then when he fell, Mayuyu had a pipe and was waiting for him to get close enough. Then right when he was practically next to her, Mayuyu swung the pipe and nailed him right in the head. The man went flying with incredible force crashing through the concrete walls.
"Wow she's strong." Sae thought.
Mayuyu was about to walk over to him and continue to beat the man but then Yukirin stopped her.
"Mayuyu that's enough." Yukirin said.
"Let me have a turn." Yukirin gave Mayuyu a dark smile and happily obliged by giving her a small pistol.
For the longest time Sae thought Mayuyu was scary but she soon found that Yukirin was ten times scarier. Sae watched as Yukirin shot the man's hands. Then she did the absolute worse thing that could happen to a man and shot his crotch. But to make things worse, Yukirin slammed her foot into the man's crotch with the same force you'd use when slamming on a brake in a car and started twisting her foot. The man howled in pain and eventually passed out.
"Wimp. I still wanted to have some more fun." Yukirin said as she wiped the blood off her shoe.
"Yukirin is so strong!" Mayuyu said as she ran over and hugged Yukirin.
"I'm so grateful you came to save me." Yukirin said now back to her normal self.
"Well I had a little help."
"Hey I hate to intterupt but can you guys untie me?" Sae said.
"Ahh sorry! I forgot."
Yukirin walked over and literally snapped the chains off of Sae.
"Thanks. We better get back to head quarters."
When Sae arrived back at the station, Yukirin was attacked by a bunch of hugs from the others.
"Thank you for saving me Mayuyu." Yukirin said as she walked over and kissed Mayuyu on the cheek.
"I'd do anything for my Yukirin." Mayuyu said kissing her back.
Yukirin left to go back to her lab and get some extra clothes on.
"Hey Mayuyu can I asked you something?" Sae asked.
"What is it?" Mayuyu said.
"How were you able to find me?"
"There's a tracking device in your collar. You're my dog so I have to make sure I can find you if I ever lose you."
"That's nice to know. Also, how come you're strong?"
"I think it's best if you didn't know."
"Very well."
Sae decided to keep her mouth shut. After everything she saw and seeing the power of Mayuyu and Yukirin. Sae did not want to anger them.
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Well there's part 2! I hope everyone enjoyed Mayuyu and Yukirin's badass moments. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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Here's chapter 11! This one is going to teach everyone a lesson on why Yuko is on the bomb squad and is the gun expert while Acchan is not. I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 11
"Hey Yuko your package has arrived!" Sae said as she walked into the firing range.
"Really? SWEET!"
Yuko rushed over and took the package from Sae. She placed it on the table and started opening it like a kid on Christmas.
"What's in it?" Sae asked.
"Some new explosives the government wants me to test." Yuko said.
"Test?"
"Yeah. When the government first makes a new explosive, they send it to me for testing to make sure it's safe."
"Is there any danger in doing this?"
"Yeah. Last time I almost blew my arm off."
"Then why are you doing this?"
"Because I give them a review and then they'll fix it and send me one for free! I got some pretty dangerous stuff in the back that would make a nuclear bomb look like a sparkler." Yuko said.
"That's good to know." Sae said slowly backing away.
"Hey you wanna try them out?"
"Uhh sure I have nothing better to do."
"Sweet! Come with me."
Yuko and Sae went outside into a wide open field. Sae noticed a bunch of holes in the ground.
"This is where I test all the explosives." Yuko said.
"But it's so close to head quarters. How have you not managed to blow the place up yet?" Sae asked.
"I don't know. Luck? Anyways, I got three new bombs to try out. Let's try this one out first."
Yuko pulled out a small ball with a red button on it.
"What does it do?" Sae asked.
"Well according to the note it said this one creates lightning. When it goes off it zaps anyone within a ten foot radius with a shock equivalent to being struck by lightning only more powerful enough to kill." Yuko said.
"Let's try it out."
There were target set up out in the field ready to be destroyed. Yuko pressed the button and the ball started flashing.
"Fire in the hole!"
Yuko threw the ball and it landed right in the center of the targets. At first there was nothing. Sae thought the bomb didn't work. But then it went off in a bright flash. Sparks flew everywhere and all the targets spontainiously combusted into flames. The bomb kept going for another few minutes and then eventually stopped.
"That was awesome! But has two minute delay time which could be dangerous. I'll have to tell them that." Yuko said.
"That thing is pretty dangerous."
"Ok next one is this thing."
Yuko pulled out another bomb that looked like a really long baton.
"What does that do?"
"Well one end shoots gasoline and the other shoots fire. There's a rocket on one side that pushes it causing it to spin. So it's like a mini flamethrower."
"Can I throw it?" Sae asked.
"Sure just flip that switch and throw it." Yuko said.
Sae flipped the switched and then chuked it as far as possible. The baton hit the ground and stayed there. Then the rocket went off followed by the gasoline and fire. At first it looked really cool. But then the rocket got out of control and started flying straight at Yuko and Sae.
"Duck!"
Sae ducked under a bush and Yuko got behind her. The baton shot past Sae's head and nearly caught her hair on fire. Sae watched the baton fly across the field. That's when Sae saw Acchan walking over to them. The baton was heading straight for her.
"Acchan duck!"
Acchan heard Sae and ducked just in time.
"Acchan are you ok?" Sae asked.
"Yeah. What are you doing out here?" Acchan said.
"We're testing explosives." Yuko said.
"Oh can I try!"
"Sure! Just let me finish writing the report."
While Yuko was writing on a sheet, Acchan walked over and pulled out a weird gun.
"What's this thing do?" Acchan asked.
"I don't know but put it back. I don't wnat you hurting youself." Sae said.
"I'll be fine."
"No seriously Acchan put it down."
"No!"
Sae walked over and tried to take the gun away from Acchan but Acchan wouldn't let up. While the two were fighting, Haruna came out.
"Hey you guys what are you doing?" she asked.
"Nyannyan! We're testing new explosives!" Yuko said as she ran over and hugged her.
"What are Acchan and Sae fighting over?"
"I don't know but they better stop. Oh wait a minute... AHHHHH you guys stop!"
Acchan and Sae couldn't hear Yuko and kept fighting. During the stuggle, Acchan pulled the trigger and a something shot out of the gun. It hit a tree near Haruna and started flashing. Then a few seconds later the tree exploded. It started to fall over and Haruna was right in the way.
"Nyannyan look out!"
Yuko pushed Haurna out of the way and the tree hit Yuko's arm.
"Itai!"
"Yuko!"
Sae and Acchan rushed over to help Yuko. Her injury wasn't bad but it was bleeding.
"Let's take you to Rena." Haruna said.
"Ok. Sae put the explosives away please." Yuko said giving a death glare to Acchan.
"Right."
Sae took the gun away and put it back into the box. Then she rushed over to Haruna and helped her carry Yuko in. Haruna took Yuko to the mourge while Sae went over to Takamina.
"Hey what happened to Yuko?" Takamina asked.
"We were testing explosives and there was an accident." Sae said.
"How did this happen?"
"Why don't you ask Acchan?"
"Acchan what did you do?"
"I didn't do anything." Acchan said while staring at the ground trying to sound innocent.
"Acchan you're lying. What did you do?"
"It was only an accident."
"Acchan messed with one of the explosives and blew up a tree. The tree came down on Yuko." Sae said.
"Acchan!" Takamina shouted.
"I didn't mean to!" Acchan said now crying.
"Acchan why were you toying with explosives?! You know that's dangerous!"
"I was only curious."
"Well I'm glad you weren't hurt. Come here you."
Takamina grabbed Acchan and hugged her. She kept stroking Acchan's head and patting her back telling her she wasn't mad any more. At that moment Sae thought Acchan was a kid and Takamina was the mother.
"There's a reason why Yuko is on the bomb squad." Takamina said.
"Why is that?" Sae asked.
"Because out of all the people here, Yuko is the craziest. Only someone like Yuko would be crazy enough to be around bombs and guns. Nothing scares that girl."
"No there is on thing."
"What?"
"An angry Haruna."
"Haha you're right."
Just then there was a huge bang coming from the lower levels. It sounded like it came from the firing range. Sae rushed down there and found the place a mess. There was smoke everywhere and rubble on the ground. In the middle of it was an unconsious Sayaka.
"Sayaka!"
"Sae? What are you doing here?" Sayaka asked.
"What happend?" Sae said.
"I saw this new gun in a box up stairs so I took it and tried it out here. It shot a weird bullet and I wasn't sure what it was. Then the next thing I knew the whole place blew up."
"You're not hurt anywhere are you?"
"No. I was far enough where the explosion didn't do much harm."
"That's good."
"What was it?"
"One of the unsafe explosives the government sent Yuko for her to try out."
"I told her to quit doing that! She could really kill someone if she's not careful."
"I agree." Sae said.
"And now the place is a wreck. Man Mariko is going to kill me." Sayaka said.
"Well just go up there and explained what happened and maybe she'll go easy on you."
"That's a good idea. Thanks."
"Oh and Sayaka..."
"Yeah?"
"The blast tore some of your shirt. I can see your bra agian. Really? Blue stars?"
"Shut up Sae!"
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Well there's chapter 11! The next chapter is going to be the appearence of someone who hasen't shown up yet. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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GO MAYUYU!! Great job at kicking the rapist's ass and saving your beautiful damsel-in-distress!
"Because I'm using you as bait and I don't want to stand out there." Mayuyu said.
That is so expected of Mayuyu :rofl: But man, I'm starting to suspect that Mayuyu is really a cyborg. No normal human should have the strength she displayed. Or maybe she just overdosed on super steroids prior to the great rescue. And yay for Yukirin's black mode!
"The blast tore some of your shirt. I can see your bra agian. Really? Blue stars?"
"Shut up Sae!"
Sayaka's underwear has become a running gag in this story :rofl: Gosh, woman needs to learn to keep her clothes on!
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Oh mayuki is so cute and so so dangerous =)) But i need more kojiyuu :panic:
Yuko is the craziest Oh yeah !!! That right :twothumbs
I don't know what would happen if small squirrels lost arm or leg because of silly explosions. Oh forget it, author 5ting, i love your fic !!!! :yossi: :yossi:
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Hello everyone! As promised, today's chapter is going to be the revealing of someone who hasn't showen her face yet. I hope you all enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 12
"Excuse me Sae-san."
Sae opened her eyes and looked up. She saw a girl with long black hair and eyes that reminded her of a Gachapin.
"Are you Sae?" the girl asked.
"Yes. Who are you?" Sae asked.
"Oh I am Minegishi Minami and I'm Mariko's assistant. You can call me Miichan. Mariko wanted me to bring you down to her office."
"Ok lead the way."
Sae had never been in Mariko's office before. She was kind of curious of what it's liked. When Sae walked in she was very surprised. The office looked pretty normal.
"Ah Sae please take a seat." Mariko said.
Sae sat in a chair across from Mariko.
"I called you here because I just wanted to see how things were going for you. I have to check in on new officers every one in a while to make sure everything is alright."
"Oh yeah everything is fine." Sae said.
"Good. I'm glad things are going well. That's all I wanted to ask of you. Miichan would you please escort Sae out."
"Please come this way."
Sae followed Miichan out of the room and back to the main offices. Then Yuko ran over to Sae.
"Hey Sae I need your help!" Yuko said.
"What is it?" Sae asked.
"Nyannyan hasn't been feeling well lately and I can't figure out what's wrong with her! Help!"
"Have you taken her to have Rena look at her?"
"Yeah but I got into a fight with Rena a couple days ago so she's still mad. Can you take Nyannyan down for me?"
"Sure where is she?"
"Back at the firing at range."
"Ok Miichan care to help out?"
"I'd be glad too."
Sae and Miichan went down to the firing range and found Haruna on the ground. Her face was pale and had an ill expression on her face.
"Haruna hang on. We're going to take you to Rena." Sae said.
"Miichan you take one arm and I'll take the other."
"Right!"
Together, the two carried Haruna down to the mourge.
"Rena we need your help!" Sae said.
"What's wrong?" Rena asked.
"Somethings wrong with Haruna and we were wondering if you could look at her."
"Set her on the table."
Miichan and Sae propped Haruna to sit on the table. Rena came back over with gloves and a stethoscope. Rena placed the scope on Haruna's chest.
"No abnormal heart beat."
Rena set it against her stomach. As soon as she did she jumped back.
"What is it?"
"Take a listen."
Rena handed Sae the stethoscope and Sae pressed it against Haruna's stomach. It sounded like a motor cycle engine and a chainsaw gonig of in Haruna's stomach.
"What is that?" Sae asked.
"I may have a theory but it might be a little gross. Miichan hand me that bucket." Rena said.
"This one?" Miichan said handing Rena a bucket.
"Jurina I need you to support Haruna so be ready."
"Right."
Jurina walked over and held onto Haruna's shoulders.
"Now Haruna this is going to hurt a little but you're going to feel a lot better after this."
Then Rena stuck her finger deep into Haruna's mouth. You could hear a gurgling sound and then when Rena pulled her hand out, Haruna bent over and started throwing up in the bucket Miichan was holding. Meanwhie Jurina was holding her hair back and keeping her from falling over.
"There, there Haruna keep it up." Rena said patting her back.
The sounds Haruna was making in the bucket made Sae want to throw up.
When she was finally done, Rena wiped Haruna's mouth of any excess vomit and then let her lay back on the table.
"Nyannyan!" Yuko said running in.
"What happened to her?" Yuko asked.
"We had to force her to vomit." Rena said.
"Why?"
"It looked like she was suffering from food poisoning. What has she eaten in the past few hours?"
"Nothing except some cookies Yukirin made."
"That explains it."
"What?"
"Yukirin isn't very good at cooking. Last time I tried some of her curry and was in the bathroom for hours." Rena said.
"Was it really that bad?" Miichan asked.
"I thought I lost ten pounds that day just from throwing up."
"Will Nyannyan be ok now?" Yuko asked.
"Yeah just give her these pills and have her drink some water." Rena said.
"Thank you so much!"
"Oh hey Sae I need you to do something for me."
"What is it?" Sae asked.
"Can you take me up to Yukirin's so I can tell her to stop cooking?"
"Sure."
"Ok the Jurina you stay down here with Yuko and Haruna and make sure Haruna is alright. Miichan I don't know what you want to do."
"I'll come with if that's alright." Miichan said.
"That's fine with me. Let's go."
The three girls went up to the lab where Yukirin was.
"Hey Yukirin where's Mayuyu?" Sae asked.
"She ran off to the bathroom." Yukirin.
"Why is that?" Rena asked.
"She tried one of these cookies I made and then soon after she ran off to the bathroom in a hurry."
"We were too late. Another victum has been made." Miichan said.
"What do you mean?"
"Yukirin your cookies gave Haruna bad food poisoning. We had to make her vomit in order to help. We'll probably have to do the same thing to Mayuyu now. Miichan go get here." Rena said.
"Ok."
"Yukirin I told you before to stop cooking. It always leads to disaster and an upset stomach."
"I was only being nice." Yukirin said.
"Well stop it because it's not nice at all."
"Hey watch it. Don't forget I can kill you and not leave a single piece of forensic evidence." Yukirin said with a cold tone in her voice.
"And don't forget I know where all your pressure points are and where to cut you to cause you to bleedout." Rena said with a mean look.
Sae could feel a dark aura coming from to two. It looked like they were going to get into a huge battle. But then right when they were going to start fighting, Takamina came in.
"Hey guys!"
"What?!"
The two angry women glared at Takamina that would make any one turn to stone. But Takamina was comletely oblivious.
"Rena why aren't you down in the mourge? And Yukirin what are you doing with Rena?" the short captain asked.
"Nothing. Just having a friendly chat with Yukirin. Right?" Rena coldly smiled.
"Right." Yukirin smiled back.
"Ok. Sae why are you hiding behind that door?"
"Oh I was looking for something!" Sae said.
Actually Sae hid back there to take cover when the battle broke out between the two very powerful women.
"Well then I need you guys to get back to work. That is all."
Takamina started to walk out when she saw the basket of cookies.
"Hey cookies."
"Takamina no!"
Takamina popped one into her mouth and began to chew. When she finished, Sae swore she saw Takamina's face turn green. Takamina turned and was about to run out of the room. But then Sayaka got in her way.
"Captain are you alright?" Sayaka said.
"Sayaka you might want to move." Sae said.
"Why?"
Before Sae could answer, Takamina bent over and threw up all over Sayaka.
"Ahhh!"
"Sae get me another bucket. Sayaka hold her still!" Rena said.
"How can I when she's puking on me!" Sayaka said.
"Just deal with it!"
"Man this is so gross! And I just bought this top."
"Well now you're going to have to buy another."
"Mou!"
"Do you now see why your cooking is dangerous?" Sae said.
"Yes I understand." Yukirin said.
"But then again maybe I'll try one too."
"Really?"
"Yeah. I have a strong stomach. Maybe it'll be different for me."
Sae took a cookie and popped on inot her mouth. At first nothing happened.
"See I'm fin-"
Sae was cut off by a sudden gag.
"Rena get me a bucket!"
And so, another victum was claimed by Yukirin's cooking.
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Well there's chapter 12! I hope everyone now knows the dangers of Yukirin's cooking. Look forward to the next chapter!
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Yuki cooking sure is dangerous and there are so much victim :smhid
thanks for the updates!
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"I was only being nice." Yukirin said.
"Well stop it because it's not nice at all."
I LOLed at this :rofl: Rena, you are so blunt with your words. But I agree that Yukirin should stop cooking as even the little cyborg became a victim.
Before Sae could answer, Takamina bent over and threw up all over Sayaka.
"Ahhh!"
I was expecting Sayaka's shirt to come off at some point O0
Anyway, I'm still waiting to see who's behind the secretly taken Yukirin pictures in the green Gachapin thumb drive. Was it really Rena?? She didn't make any weird advances towards Yukirin in this chapter. Hmm...
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Wow scary! they are all scary xD
Lol Yukirin cooking!!!
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Ohhh Miichan , so that marimii will come back !!!! I really really looking forward them yeah yeah :fap
Yukirin...I will eat her cooking if I want to shirk exam or smile with St. Peter :wub:
Poor Nyan and her squirrel, Yuko must be worried , so kawaii :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Do you remember the chapter when Mayuyu and Sae found out someone was taking secret photos of Yukirin and they thought it was Rena? Well due the request of a special reader, I'm going to answer the mystery and reveal the culprit! Please enjoy!
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Chapter 13
Sae was sitting at her desk doing nothing when Yukirin walked by.
"Hey Sae I need your help." Yukirin said.
"What is it?" Sae asked.
"Well you see, I found this camera under my desk and I don't know where it came from. I was wondering if you could figure out where it came from."
When Yukirin showed Sae the camera, Sae immediately recgonized it. It was the camera that took the picutres of Yukirin's panties. She wanted to tell her it was Rena who put it there but she was afraid what would happen if Jurina found out she was the cause of Rena's pain.
"Isn't Mayuyu good with tech stuff? Why don't you ask her."
"I would but I can't find her anywhere."
"Hmm let's go ask Takamina."
The two walked over to Takamina who was working on something while Acchan was staring over her shoulder.
"Hey Takamina I was wondering if you could help me for a minute." Sae said.
"What is it?" Takamina asked.
"We found this camera under Yukirin's desk and we don't know who put it there."
"Let me take a look at it."
Takamina took out a small chord from her computer and plugged it into her computer. A couple minutes later, the images of Yukirin popped up and the screen.
"What is this?!!" Takamina shouted.
"I don't know but whoever did this has been taking picutres of Yukirin." Sae said.
"This is so embarrassing!"
"Wow Yukirin you have some cute panties." Acchan said.
"Acchan that's enough."
Takamina exited out of the pictures.
"So do you think we'll be able to figure out who put it there?" Sae asked.
"Let's go back up to the lab and look for some clues."
Everyone went up to the lab and over to the desk where the camera was found.
"Let me dust the area for prints." Takamina said as she crawled under the desk.
A couple minutes later, Takamina came back out.
"Anything?"
"No. Whoever did it used gloves."
"Did you find anything?"
"Yeah I found this."
Takamina held up a single black hair. It looked like medium long length.
"Takamina that's one of Yukirin's hairs." Acchan said.
"No it's too short see?" Takamina held the hair up to Yukirin.
"So that means the culprit is someone with medium long black hair?" Sae said.
"Yes and the only people here that fit that descriptioin is Miichan, Sayaka, Mayuyu and Rena."
"So what do you want to do?"
"Go gather the three and bring them here."
"Roger!"
A couple minutes later, Miichan, Sayaka, Mayuyu and Rena were sitting in chairs.
"Why are we here?" Rena asked.
"Someone here has been taking inappropriate pictures of Yukirin and we need to find out who." Takamina said.
"Well it wasn't me." Sayaka said.
"It wasn't me because I'm always with Mariko." Miichan said.
"Miichan your allibi is reliable. Sayaka yours is hard to belive."
"Come on Takamina. I like Yukirin as a friend but not in that way." Sayaka said.
"I'm still onto you."
"So how do we know who is the culprit?" Yukirin asked.
"I have an idea!"
"What is it Acchan?"
"Let's show them one of the pictures of Yukirin and see how they react."
"That's a great idea Acchan! You're so smart!" Takamina said hugging Acchan.
"Ok I'll go print off a picture."
"Sae please pick one that doesn't show much." Yukirin said.
Sae came back with a picture of Yukirin asleep and her legs were kind of split apart revealing some of her panties.
"Sae!"
"Well it was either this or the one of you with your butt right in front of the camera."
Yukirin got quiet and just stood there with her head down.
"Alright first up is Miichan."
Sae showed Miichan the picture and she did nothing. She just stared at it with a blank expression.
"Miichan seems to be unaffected." Acchan said.
"Of course I am. I only get excited when I see pictures of Mariko." Miichan said with a perverted smile.
"Ok..... next is Mayuyu."
Sae showed the picture to Mayuyu and all Mayuyu did was do that same smile she always did whenever she sees Yukirin.
"I don't like that smile." Takamina said.
"Ok now let's see Rena's reaction." Yukirin said.
When Sae showed Rena the photo, Rena's eyes widened. She didn't say anything but she started blushing a little. Rena was looking like the culprit but there was one more. Sae showed the picture and Sayaka just stared at like like she was reading a book.
"Well based on the reactions, we've concluded that there is no way Miichan or Sayaka could be the culprit." Takamina said.
"You're free to go now." Acchan said escorting the two out.
"Which means the only two left are Mayuyu and Rena."
"Well I like Yukirin but Takamina you and I both know that if I did do this I wouldn't get caught." Mayuyu said.
"You make a good point. It took me two years to figure out you were the one who put my picture on a transgender website and Acchan in an anime cosplay poster."
"I remember that! Those old otakus kept begging me to do some weird magic wand thing. It took me months to get them to back off!" Acchan said.
"Yeah and everyhwere I went, people would ask how it felt without the extra weight down there and where I got the operation done. You know one person reccomended me to a transgender bar?!" Takamina said.
"And now you know to never shut down my computers." Mayuyu said shooting them both an evil glare.
"Yes which means the only suspect left is Rena."
"It wasn't me! I don't even like Yukirin!" Rena said.
"Rena!"
"I meant in that way. I still like you as a friend."
"Oh that's good to hear." Yukirin said.
"Well I looked into it a little further and found crumbs in the way back of the desk. The test results should be coming out soon."
Just then there was a beep coming from the machine nect to Yukirin. It spat out a piece of paper and Yukirin handed it to Takamina.
"The crumbs found under the table were crumbs from a Melonpan."
"No way!" Yukirin said.
"So that means the owner of the flash drive really was Rena!" Sae said.
"Flash drive?"
"A couple weeks ago, Mayuyu and I found a flash drive with the pictures of Yukirin on them."
"You mean this one?" Rena said pulling out her Gachapin flash drive.
"Yeah that's the one!"
"This isn't mine. Mine is a melon. See?"
Rena pulled out a Melon flashdrive from her pocket.
"But earlier you said it was yours. You even said you lost a Gachapin flash drive."
"I did and the one I found wasn't mine. Mine had an R for Rena on it on the back of the head which wasn't there on the one you gave me. So then I went out and bought this new one."
"It's very cute by the way." Acchan said.
"Acchan now is not the time to talk about cute things." Takamina said.
"How can you prove that there was an R on your flash drive?"
"Here I took a picture of me with it."
Rena pulled out her phone and showed Takamina a picture of her with her flash drive. The R was clearly visible in the picture.
"Sae did you see an R on the flash drive when you found it?" Takamina asked.
"No there wasn't. I checked it and there wasn't." Mayuyu said.
"Which means it wasn't Rena. But if it wasn't her then who was it?" Sae said.
"Could it have been Miichan? She gets called Gachapin a lot by Mariko." Acchan said.
"Yeah but she hates being called it." Yukirin said.
"Well until we figure out who the culprit is, I'll have Mayuyu install a scanner that can pick up any frequencies that come from any hidden cameras." Takamina said.
"That sounds good."
"Good. Then Sae take the camera and flash drive and take it down to the evidence garage."
"On it."
Sae walked out the room and down the hall towards the evidence garage. But instead of turning left she turned right and took the elevator back up to her office. Sae put the camera in one of her office drawers and the plugged in the flash drive into her computer. The pictures of Yukirin popped up and Sae sat there smiling at them.
"Ahh Yukirin is so pretty." she said to herself.
Sae quickly transferred all the photos from the old flash drive into a new one. Then she took the old one and threw it out in the trash right as the janitor was taking it out.
"I had a close call today." Sae thought.
"If Takamina found out it was me then I would've been fired for sure. But I was hoping they'd suspect Rena."
Sae actually bought the exact same flash drive as Rena on purpose. She knew people would blame her if the pictures were ever found. She also had a Melonpan with her when she was setting up the camera. What Sae wondered was how Rena got her flash drive in the first place. Rena probably confused it with Sae's and took it off her desk when she wasn't looking. And Sae probably didn't see the R on the back of the head which she forgot to put on hers. Her plan to blame Rena failed but at least no one found out it was her.
"Hey Sae did you find out who it was?" Sayaka asked.
"No we reached a dead end." Sae said.
"Darn. I guess it'll remain a mystery."
"Yep."
"And I'll make sure it stays that way." Sae thought smiling to herself.
"Mayuyu said I couldn't touch Yukirin. But that doesn't mean I couldn't take pictures."
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Well there's chapter 13! I hope you all enjoyed it and let me know what you think! Are you surprised it wasn't Rena but actually Sae? Ha even though she's monitered by Mayuyu there are still somethings even a Cyborg can't see.
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Oh yes! You revealed the culprit!
SAE HOW COULD YOU?! You are sooo dead if Mayuyu finds out and I hope she does! The cyborg is going to skin you alive for perving on Yukirin :twisted:
Now I think Sae was probably enjoying herself when the rapist stripped Yukirin :shocked
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SAE!!? but..but...
SAE you b*st*rd...you even make Rena became the suspect!!
I hope you got a punishment from MAyu (for take a picture of yukirin panties) and Jurina (for making rena the suspect)
ah thank for the update miyumi -san....
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:mon look: finding some atsumina scenes her miyu..
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Today's chapter is going to be about why Acchan is force one should never get involved with. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 14
"Hey Sae we got another case." Sayaka said.
"Ok."
This time the murder took place at a hotel room. When they arrived, Rena and Jurina were already there. And to Sae's surprise, Acchan and Takamina were there too.
"What are you doing here Takamina?" Sayaka asked.
"Oh well you see, your victim is related to the case Acchan and I are working on." Takamina said.
"Yeah so we came here looking for more evidence." Acchan said.
"Ok well then you guys keep doing that. Meanwhile we'll work on out stuff."
"Actually can we borrow Sae. There's something we need her help for."
"But I need Sae rigtht now we're working on a case." Sayaka said.
"Oh come on Sayaka please!" Acchan said giving Sayaka her imfamous puppy dog eyes.
"Acchan those don't work with me and the answer is still no."
"Please!!"
Sayaka's expression changed to an expression of pain. Sae looked over and it looked like Acchan was squeezing tightly on Sayaka's arm.
"Alright fine you can take her!"
"Yay!"
"Don't worry Sayaka we'll have her back with you in no time." Takamina said.
"Get moving Sae. I'll handle things from here."
Sae, Acchan, and Takamina all left the crime scene and got into Takamina's car.
"So what do you need me to help you with?" Sae asked.
"We need you to come with us out to lunch." Acchan said.
"What?"
"Let me explain, you see there's this new place in town that just recently opened and Acchan and I wanted to go in. The only problem is the place only excepts guys and girls can only come in if their with the guy." Takamina said.
"So you're wanting me to get you in by dressing as a guy?"
"Yes."
"Why can't you do it?"
"Because I'm too short. People would see that I'm a girl."
"You make a good point."
"Yes now strip!" Acchan said while pulling off Sae's clothes.
"Acchan!"
About a half hour later, Sae was finally ready. She was wearing a plain button up with a cross printed on the side and jeans and a hat. Sae looked pretty much like a guy but just in case Acchan and Takamina also binded her chest.
"You really do look like a guy." Takamina said.
"I would totally date you if you were." Acchan said.
"Acchan!"
"I'm just kidding!"
"So are we going or not?" Sae asked.
"Yeah let's go."
The three walked into the place and was greeted by a waitor.
"Hello I'd like a table for three." Sae said in deep voice.
"Very well just let me check something."
The waitor reached out and touched Sae's chest. He was probably checking for breasts. Normally Sae would've panicked and pulled her gun on him but she had to remain calm.
"Alright everything checks out. Please come this way."
They followed their waitor to a table and took their seats. Then they ordered what they wanted and let the waitor do what he had to do.
"This place is so nice!" Acchan said.
"No kidding. Everything is like super fancy." Sae said.
"Aren't you glad we dragged you along?" Takamina said.
"Yeah but the question is who's paying for the lunch?"
"I will don't worry."
"Alright if you say so."
The waitor came back and the three ate as if they were starving. Then when they finished, they paid the bill and were about to head out. But then a man came over and grabbed Acchan's butt.
"Ahhh!"
"Hey what do you think you're doing?" Takamina said.
"You got some nice ladies man. How much you charging?" the man asked.
"Uh these girls aren't prostitutes and they're not for sale." Sae said glaring at the man.
"Yeah they are. This place is a place pimps take their prostitutes to relax and maybe earn a quick buck."
"Well I'm sorry but these girls aren't for sale and we only came here to eat lunch."
Sae grabbed Acchan and Takamina's hand and started pulling them away. But then the man grabbed Sae and pulled her back.
"Come on man. I'll pay double the amount they usually charge."
"I said no!"
Sae punched the man in the face and now everyone was looking at them.
"Ah what the heck man!" the man screamed while covering his bloody nose.
"Back off or I'll do more than punch you."
"I don't think so. Ladies get them."
Five girls surrounded Sae, Acchan and Takamina ready to attack.
"What do we do?" Takamina asked.
"I don't know but we better do something."
"I have an idea!"
Acchan walked over to the man and rested on his shoulder.
"Hey can't you let us go just this once?" Acchan said in a seductive voice.
"No way. Not until I get in bed with one of you." the man said trying to resist Acchan.
"But we'll come back I swear."
"No. I can't trust you."
"Please."
Acchan ran her hand up and down the man's leg.
"Alright fine."
"Yay! Oh and one more thing."
Acchan stepped back and kicked the man in the crotch. He fell to the floor crying in pain.
"Don't you ever touch me or Takamina again. We're cops you ass."
The other girls tried attacking but was useless because Acchan easily threw them aside like they were nothing.
"Let's get out of here."
The three walked out of the place and just as they did, the place exploded.
"What the heck?!" Takamina shouted.
"Hey it worked!" Acchan said.
"What worked?"
"Well whilie Sae was arguing, I put a bomb under our table."
"Acchan we just killed like fifty innocent people." Sae said.
"They weren't innocent. They're a bunch of scum bags and jerks. They deserved to die."
"Acchan I'm starting to worry about you."
"Who cares! Acchan saved the day today!"
Takamina walked over and hugged Acchan who was just smiling like she had just done something really good.
"Now let's get back at to head quarters."
"Oh wait!"
"What is it Acchan?"
"I just remembered I had placed one more explosive."
"Where is it then?" Sae asked.
Just then the store across the street blew up.
"Acchan!"
"Oh I remember now! That place wouldn't let me buy a certain shirt I wanted."
"Acchan you don't blow up random stores because they wouldn't let you buy a shirt." Takamina said.
"But I really wanted it and the people there wouldn't let me have it!" Acchan protested.
"What if there are people in there?" Sae said.
"Oh don't worry today is Sunday so everyone has their day off. That'll teach them for not letting me buy my shirt."
Takamina and Sae both looked at Acchan with a worried look. Sae just wondered what exactly is hidden under that sweet personality of hers.
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Well there's chapter 14! I'm trying to put in more scenes of Atsumina and Kojiyuu so sorry Mayuki fans but I'm just trying to share the love. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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This is so crazy, but I like it lol!!
Acchan is a bit too scary though. It seems like none of the cops apart from Sayaka is normal! Even Sae is pervy! Can't believe she did that even though Mayuyu is tracking her every move!
Please write a chapter about how she got found out! Can't wait to see how Mayuyu and Jurina (and their partners) will torture the naughty Genking!
Agree that we need more Kojiyuu too!!
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Oh my God, Acchan's problem solving to everything is just blowing it up, I love it!
Sayaka seems like she's the only one here who is relatively normal, I wonder how she deals with all of this craziness lol.
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LOL Sae is a naughty girl hahaha!
Acchan what a scary women! I don't want to imagine what will happen if Takamina cheats on her
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Minna! Today's chapter is going to be a Kojiyuu. I'm sorry Mayuki and Wmatsui fans but the next chapter will have a bunch of moments with them. But for now, let's see how are perverted squirrel is doing with her airheaded partner. Enjoy!
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Chapter 15
"Nyannyan let's go on a date!"
"No."
"Nyannyan let's go out for ice cream!"
"No."
"Nyannyan let's go karaoke!"
"No."
'Nyannyan let's go to the beach!"
"No!"
"Nyannyan let's-"
"I said NO!"
For the past five minutes, Sae had been watching Yuko trying to get Haruna to go out with her. But everytime she asked Haruna rejected her.
"Why won't you go with me?" Yuko asked with a sad look on her face.
"Because I'm busy." Haruna said.
"You're busy? Doing what staring into space?"
"No! I have a date tonight."
"With who?"
"I'm not telling you!"
"Nyannyan tell me! I won't do anything!"
"Yeah right. Last time I told you that you went to his house and blew it up with an RPG!!"
"I didn't like the way that guy acted around you!!"
"He was only being nice."
"Yeah grabbing your butt every five minutes is nice."
"The point is I'm going on a date tonight and I'm not telling you who."
Haruna walked away before Yuko could get anything else out of her.
"Mou Nyannyan is so unfair!"
"Well she did say you blew up the last guy's house with an RPG. I think that's a little too much." Sae said.
"I should've gone with a pipe bomb in his car instead?" Yuko said.
"No! No explosives. Listen how about tonight we follow Haruna and see where she goes."
"That sounds like a great idea!"
Later on that night, Yuko and Sae followed Haruna to a park. There they saw Haruna meet up with some guy. They talked for a while and then started to walk.
"Stay low and keep quiet." Sae said.
"On it."
They followed Haruna and the man all around the park. It looked like they were taking a walk or something. After about an hour, they finally stopped at a bench to take a break. It was good thing too because Sae was really tired.
"What do you think they're saying?" Sae asked.
"I don't know let's find out." Yuko said.
Yuko pulled out a small device and pressed a button. Haruna appeared on the screen and they could also hear what they were saying.
"Where did you get this?"
"I stole it from Mayuyu's lab."
"She's going to kill you when she finds out you took it."
"Yeah but for now be quiet so we can listen to them."
"Haruna there's something I need to tell you." the man said.
"What is it?"
"Well you see, I wanted to ask if you could do something for me."
"What?"
The man reached into his pocket and pulled out a small black box.
"He better not be doing what I think he's doing." Yuko said.
"Kojima Haruna. Will you marry me?"
"No."
"That was fast." Sae thought.
"Why not?" the man asked.
"Because this is only the first date and you're asking me to marry you? There's no way." Haurna said.
"Well then I guess I have no choice."
The man reached into his other pocket and pulled out a gun. He aimed it right at Haruna's head and put on a cold face.
"I've been looking for someone like you. Someone who is nice and funny. And now I want to keep you forever." the man said.
"Please let me go." Haruna said no scared.
"You're coming with me and we're going to have a happy life together."
"NO!"
"Ahh Sae what do we do?! Nyannyan is in trouble!" Yuko said.
"I got it! I'll distract him while you go around and attack from behind." Sae said.
"Great idea!"
"Good then move!"
While Yuko started to make her way around over to Haruna, Sae jumped out from her hiding spot.
"Let go of her!"
The man looked over and saw Sae aiming her gun at the man. The man saw this and held the gun closer to Haruna.
"If you come any closer I'll shoot."
"I don't need to."
"Then what are you going to do?"
"Let a little squirrel drop down."
"What?"
"Yuko now!"
Yuko dropped down from the tree above the man and latched onto his head. Yuko kicked Haruna back as she made the man go the other way.
"Haruna!"
Sae grabbed Haruna and moved her to the side.
"Yuko! Help Yuko!" Haruna shouted.
Sae looked back over at Yuko who was still clinging onto the man's head. Sae wanted to shoot but she was afraid she would hit Yuko. But then there was a bang that came from the man's gun. Yuko fell to the ground but not before knocking the guy out by slamming his head into a tree.
"Yuko!"
Haruna rushed over and helped Yuko.
"Oh god this can't be happening. Yuko, Yuko!"
Sae couldn't believe what happened. One of her fellow officers was just shot down. But what was strange was there was no blood.
"Yuko come back! Don't you dare leave me!"
Haruna leaned in and kissed Yuko on the lips. Haruna stayed like that for a while and then right when she was going to pull off, a pair of arms pulled her closer. Sae had to pull Haruna off Yuko so she could breathe.
"Yuko!"
"I'm back!"
"But how?!"
"Bullet proof vest."
Yuko pulled up her shirt and revealed where the bullet had hit.
"Yuko!" Haruna hugged the squirrel until she almost suffocated her.
"Nyannyan I can't breathe."
"Oh sorry."
"What should we do with him?" Sae said pointing at the man on the ground.
"I got an idea. Haruna where does he live?"
Sae, Haruna and Yuko took the man back to his house and tied him in a chair. Then they all ran outside and Yuko went over to the car to get something.
"What are we doing?" Sae asked.
"Solving love problems." Haruna said.
"Here Nyannyan!"
Yuko came back carrying a rocket launcher bigger than her.
"Thanks Yuko!" Haruna said.
Haruna kissed Yuko on the cheek and then took the large weapon from her.
"What are you going to do?" Sae asked.
"Oh I'm going to blow up his house."
"NO!"
"What? You want us to use grenades instead?" Haruna said.
"No explosives. How about we just take him back to head quarters and lock him up."
"But that's no fun. I want to see him explode!"
"Haruna. That'd be considered murder and get in serious trouble."
"Can I shove dynamite in his butt?" Yuko asked.
"NO YUKO! No explosives! Man what is up with you two and exploding things?"
"Well we are on the bomb squad." Haruna said.
"Yeah and my heart is like a bomb. When ever I see Nyannyan it just explodes with love."
"Awww you!"
Haruna dove in for another kiss with Yuko and Sae swore she saw mini explosions go off between the two.
"Those two really are something." Sae thought.
"But then again, I guess that's why they're meant for eachother. They both love each other and explosives. They're a dynamic couple. If blowing up stuff is what they do when they make up, what do they do when they fight?"
The thought of that made Sae shiver as she got a vision of half the city in ashes. Those two really are an explosive couple.
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Well there's chapter 15! I hope everyone enjoyed it and all the Kojiyuu fans liked it. Please tell me what you think and next chapter is going to be about Wmatsui so get ready! Let's just say Rena's father comes for a visit and everyone goes nuts.
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LOL Oh my God, I love Yuko and Haruna.
"I should've gone with a pipe bomb in his car instead?" Yuko said.
"What? You want us to use grenades instead?" Haruna said.
They really are meant to be lol. Poor Sae having to deal with this explosive loving couple XD
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Lmao, i had fun reading this one. Please continue! :bow:
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL......explode pairing!! :heart: :heart: :cathappy:
OMG....kojiyuu couple want to explode that man house...LOL :wub: :wub:
this chapter so funny im really laughing a lot...thank miyumi -san!
next Chapter is Wmatsui....and rena father visit rena....i can't figure out what gonna happen....so please Update Miyumi-san! no Miyumi-sama!..i beg you :bow:
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Minna! Thank you for commenting on my fanfic! Today's chapter is going to be as promised, a Wmatsui moment involving Rena's father. Want to find out what happens? Well keep reading to find out! Enjoy!
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Chapter 16
"Yabai, yabai, yabi!"
"What's wrong Takamina?" Sae asked.
"You don't know?"
"Know what?"
"Rena's father is coming." Acchan said.
"What's the big deal about Rena's father?"
"Matsui Riku was the boss of a famous Yakuza gang. His gang was the most powerful but then he was forced to retire due to his bad health. Then after he left, the entire gang fell apart. Now he just lives and supports his daughter."
"How did Rena managed to get hired here if her father was part of the Yakuza?"
"Mariko thought she would be useful and she was right. There have been cases in the past where if it weren't for his help, we never would've been able to solve the case." Takamina said.
"So why is everyone panicking?"
"Becuase Rena's father wasn't supportive about Rena's choice to become a medical examiner. He wanted her to lead the gang but she refused. Her father comes to check on her once every two months and they usually end up getting into a hug fight."
"How big of a fight?"
"Like King Kong met Godzilla."
"That can't be good."
"Yes which is why Acchan and I are preparing. Acchan let's go!"
Sae watched the two go behind Takamina's desk and disappear. Just then Jurina came by and Sae stopped her.
"Hey Jurina where's Rena?" Sae asked.
"In the mourge as always." Jurina said.
"Can I come with you?"
"Sure."
Jurina and Sae go down to the mourge and found Rena sitting on the floor with a traditional tea set all layed out and ready to go.
"Are you nervous that your father is coming to visit?" Sae asked.
"No not really. We just have a friendly talk and then he leaves." Rena said.
"Last time you had a friendly conversation, half the station was a mess and we had to call the fire deparment." Jurina said.
"How was I supposed to know he had a lighter that shoots a five foot flame?"
"Well he's your father so you should know this!"
"Oh Jurina is so cute when she's angry."
Rena walked over ot Jurina and huged her for a long time. But then there were foot steps coming from outside the hall. A couple minutes later, a man in a black suit, short hair and two other guards came in.
"Father."
"Rena."
Riku looked a lot like Rena. Sae thought Rena got most of her looks from her father. Especially her eyes.
"So you've come to check on me again?" Rena said.
"Yes I have." Riku said.
"Good then shall we start?"
"Yes let's."
Rena's father pulled out a gun and started shooting at Rena. But Rena quckly dodged and got behind the table.
"What's going on?" Sae asked hiding behind a desk with Jurina.
"This is what he does when he checks on Rena." Jurina said.
"He wants to make sure she still has the Yakuza blood in her so he tests her by fighting her."
"That's ridiculous!"
"No that's family business and unless you don't want to get your pinky cut off, I'd suggest you stay down."
There was loud crashing noises followed by more gun shots. Then it all came to a suuden halt. Sae popped her head out from under the desk and saw the two drinking tea. But she also notcied the mourge was a wreck.
"I still don't like the idea of you being in the medical field." Riku said.
"I told you I didn't want to run the gang. I wanted to be in the medical field." Rena said.
"Does it pay good?"
"Of course."
"And does that Jurina girl still work with you?"
"Yes. Jurina!"
Jurina walked over and bowed in front of Riku.
"Ah young Jurina how have you been? Is my Rena treating you nicely?"
"Yes she's been very kind to me." Jurina said.
"Good. Well then we should probably continue then sall we? Rena."
One off Riku's guards handed him a sword with a dragon engraved in it.
"Jurina please hand me my katana." Jurina said.
Jurina handed Rena a katana with a different dragon engraved in it.
"Let's continue."
Rena jumped over to Riku and tried to attack him. But he blocked her attack and counter attacked with a quick slice to the side. His missed and Rena tried attacking from above. However she missed and ended up cutting one of the tables right in half.
"Glad to see you haven't lost anything." Riku siad.
"I practice everyday." Rena said.
The two kept fighting with clashes of metal every five seconds. Eventually she couldn't take it anymore and decided to break up the fight
"That's enough you two!" Sae said as he stook the swords away from the them.
"Who are you?" Riku asked.
"Miyazawa Sae. I just started working here." Sae said.
"I see. Well why are you intterrupting us?"
"Because I don't like seeing a father and daughter fight."
"But we're not fighting." Rena said.
"Yes you are now stop it before you kill him."
"Isn't what what I'm trying to do?"
"Rena your father is someone very important in your life. Be happy you still have yours."
Rena got quiet as soon as Sae said that.
"NO let's just talk and try to work something out."
The two Yakuzas dropped their swords and walked back over to drinking tea.
"Now Riku-san pleae tell Yukirin what you wanted to tell her."
"I wanted to tell her that I missed her and wished she would visit home more often." Riku said.
"And I wanted to tell him I've been busy with everything and it was gonig to be a while but he hates waiting" Rena said.
"I do!"
"Well how about we work something out." Sae said.
"How?"
"I have an idea!" Jurina said.
"What is it?"
Jurina walked over to Riku and gave him a cold look.
"I challenge you to a battle. If I win Rena stays and you don't come back for a year. If you win, Rena has to go back with you. Deal?"
"Deal. So what type of battle is this?"
"A good old bare knuckle boxing fight."
"Sounds fair."
"Then let's begin."
Jurina swung at Riku with amazing speed. Riku moved out of the way and Jurina missed but she left a hole in the wall. She came at Riku again with another powerful punch and missed again. Despite his age Riku was moving quite well. After about ten minutes, Jurina finally landed a punch. It sent Riku flying across the room and crash into the wall.
"Hey where did Jurina learn how to fight like that?" Sae asked.
"Jurina's parents were professional fighters. They taught her everything." Rena said.
"Not that's scary."
Jurina ran over and punched Riku again. But then Riku grabbed Jurina and head butted her. Jurina backed up trying to regain balance but Riku was quick and hit her before she could recover.
"Jurina!"
Jurina was now on the ground unconsious.
"You were too rough!" Rena said.
"I was dong what I was taught." Riku said.
"Looks like I win."
"Not so fast."
Jurina weakly stood up and weakly made her way over to Riku. Then she punched him in the stomach sending him flying back. Riku recovered and came at Jurina with a lot of force. But Jurina dodged it and icked Riku down to the fround. Then she rested her foot on his back and said,
"You give up?"
"Yes!" Riku said.
"Good."
Jurina backed off and soon fell to the ground.
"You win this time. But I'll be back."
"No you won't. You made a deal." Sae said.
"Unless it's on a piece of paper I won't follow it."
Hearing that made Rena snap. She stood up and walked over to Riku. She grabbed him by his neck and squeezed really hard.
"Listen." Rena said in the Yakuza tone you hear in the movies.
"If you come near me or Jurina ever again I'll kill you. I don't care if you are my father. I'll still kill you."
Riku stared at her silently for a moment. Sae didn't hnow how he was able to keep a straight face with an angry Rena glaring at him.
"I understand. I'll be leaving now."
Riku and his men left leaving Jurina and Rena alone with Sae.
"You did good Jurina." Rena said while bandaging Jurina's wounds.
"I did? Sweet." Jurina said.
"Work on your reflexes a little more. You were slow back there."
"I know that."
"I'm just glad you're alright."
"And I'm glad you get to stay here with me."
Rena leaned in and hugged Rena. She even gave her a kiss on the cheek like a little puppy.
"Down Jurina down!" Rena said trying to hold her back but was obviously not working.
"Rena I love you so much!"
"I love you too!"
Feeling unwanted, Sae left the two to enjoy each other. On the way out she ran into Sayaka.
"Hey I was looking for you." Sayaka said.
"What is it?" Sae asked.
"Did you see that Yakuza boss?"
"Yeah he's Rena's father."
"I know. I haven't seen him in a while.I tried to say hi but he looked like he was in a hurry."
"Probably."
"Oh Sae by the way I wanted to give you something."
"What is it?"
"This."
Sayaka leaned in and kissed Sae on the cheek.
"Ehhh?!"
Sae was blushing madly now.
"That's for not telling me you felt left out. Now come on, Acchan and Takamina offered to take us out to karaoke. Let's go!"
"Uh right."
Sae couldn't help but feel a little giddy about what just happened. Getting a kiss from Sayaka was something that was almost unbeliveable. It was short but sweet and felt really gentle. Maybe that's why Sayaka was Sae's partner because she is the most gentle out of all the people at the police station.
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Well there's chapter 16. I hope you all emjoyed it and please leave a comment! Look forward to the next chapter that is going to show what happens to Sae when Mayuyu found out it was Sae who was taking the pictures of Yukirin.
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:lol: woahh soo funny XD
yeah Wmatsui :peace: :deco:
:wub:
The next chapter sounds interesting :) Yukirin will also take revenge on Sae? :?
thank you for update :peace:
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I love how Rena and her dad can switch from trying to split each other's skull to sitting down and drinking tea together in a second :rofl:
And yes! Next chapter is going to be awesome! Mayuyu's revenge on Sae for perving on her sexyhot Yukirin! It'll rock if Yukirin learns that Sae is the culprit too :twisted:
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Today's chapter is going to be about Mayuyu finding out that Sae was the one who was taking dirty photos of Yukirin. And don't think Mayuyu is going to be the only one really ticked. There will be others. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 17
"Sae we got another case." Sayaka said.
"Where to this time?"
"In the back alley behind a bar."
They arrived at the scene and found Rena and Jurina already at work.
"Did you find anything?" Sayaka asked.
"Yeah I found this in the body. You might want to send this to Yukirin." Rena said.
"Alright I'll go do it. Sae you stay here with Rena and Jurina."
Sayaka left and Sae just continued to look around. But then Jurina walked over to her.
"Hey Sae Mayuyu said she was looking for you. She said she had something important to tell you." Jurina said.
"Ok I'll head over to the lab."
Sae walked over to the lab and found no one in it. She walked around a little and then out of nowhere something hit her in the back of the head. Then Sae was knocked out cold. When Sae woke up, she found herself bound to the wall.
"Hey what's going on?" Sae said.
"You've been very bad Saedog."
"Mayuyu?"
Mayuyu walked into the light and she was holding something very familiar. It was Sae's flash drive. The one she thought she had thrown out.
"Wondering how I got this? I found it in the trash when the janitor came by. I looked into it and found out you were the ine who owned it. It was you who was taking the photos of Yukirin."
"You're wrong! I didn't do it!" Sae protested.
"Really? Then how come I found your fingerprints all over it?" Mayuyu said.
She got Sae there. Sae could do nothing else put remain silent.
"As I thought. And now it's time for your punishment. First up we have the one who you tried to blame the crime on."
Rena stepped into the light and she had that kind smile she always had. Sae thought Rena was going to let her off easy. But she was wrong. Rena ran up to Sae, pulled out a scalpal and stabbed it right near Sae's ear.
"Don't forget I am a Yakuza daughter and I can easily kill you in a heart beat." Rena said in a dark voice.
"Rena I'm sorry I-"
"Shut it you piece of trash."
Rena punched Sae right in the face.
"I could do worse but there are others who want to do more to you. Jurina."
Rena stepped to the side and Jurina walked over. She didn't say anything but intsead, she punched Sae right in the stomach. Sae thought she was going to hurl but before she could, Jurina punched her again in the stomach more powerful than the last.
"I'm not done with you."
"Now it's my turn." Mayuyu said.
Mayuyu pulled out a small remote and turned the dial to max power. Then she pressed the button and Sae got shocked like she just got hit by lightning. Her body was shaking all over the place and she could feel her heart skipping every other beat. She continued to be shocked until Mayuyu finallly stopped.
"No it's time for the main event."
Mayuyu stepped to the side and Yukirin appeared.
"Yukirin..."
"I can't believe you did something like that to me. I trusted you and thought you were my friend."
"Yukirin I-"
"Shut up dog!"
Mayuyu hit the button and Sae was shocked again.
"I'm very hurt because of you. And now I'm going to make you regret ever messing with me."
Yukirin pulled out a small feather and started tickling Sae.
"Ha ha Yukirin stop!"
Sae was having a hard time breathing because she was laughing so much. Sae was atcually enjoying Yukirin's punishment because it wasn't as bad as the others. But then Sae's joy turned to pain when Yukirin bashed Sae in the side with a night stick. Before Sae had a chance to scream in pain, Yukirin went back to tickling her. She kept switiching on and off from tickling to night stick making it very hard for Sae to breathe. Then to make things worse, Mayuyu turned her shock collar back on. Now Sae was being shocked, tickled and beaten with a night stick. After about a half hour of the torture, Yukirin stopped to take a break.
"Maybe we should stop." Rena said.
"She's not looking to good."
"No until she recieves full punishment." Yukirin said.
"Hasn't she had enough already?"
"No. This is just the beginning." Mayuyu said.
"There are still other things?"
"Of course. For example..."
Yukirin walked over and brought back a bottle of clear liquid.
"What is that?" Jurina asked.
"Liquid heat." Yukirin said.
"We're going to put it on her neck."
"Ok now that's too much." Rena said.
"No this is payback."
Yukirin walked over and dumped the liquid heat all over Sae's neck. Within seconds, Sae's neck felt like it was on fire. But then to make things worse, Mayuyu walked over and sprinkled itching powder on her neck as well.
"Now watch this."
Mayuyu undid the ties on Sae and watched her collapse on the ground. Sae then started to scratch her neck because of the itching powder. But because of the liquid heat, it burned every time she touched her neck. Sae couldn't say anything but only cry. She did her best not to scratch but the urge was unbareable. Sae reached her limit and couldn't bare it anymore. With all her strength, Sae started scratching her neck like a dog with a ton of fleas. She ignored the pain and just jept scratching.
"I think we should stop her now." Jurina said.
"No yet. I want to see her suffer." Yukirin said.
Yukirin's wish came true when Sae started scratching so much that she actually started to bleed. The liquid heat got into the open wounds and now it burned even worse. But Sae didn't care and just kept scratching making the wounds worse.
"Sae stop!"
Rena and Jurina held Sae's arms back as Sae started kicking violently.
"That's enough!"
Mayuyu activated the shock collar but it didn't have as much affect on her as it did before.
"Sae you can stop now!" Yukirin said.
"I told you we went too far!" Rena shouted.
"Shut up!"
As the four girls were trying to contain Sae, Sayaka walked right into the mess.
"Sae!"
"Sayaka help us!" Yukirin shouted.
Sayaka rushed over and helped restrain Sae. Then Yukirin walked over with a sedative and injected it into Sae. Within a couple of seconds, Sae had finally calmed down but wasn't out.
"What did you do to her!" Sayaka said.
"We were only getting revenge." Mayuyu said.
"By nearly killing her!"
"She was the one who took those pictures of me!" Yukirin said.
"And she tried to put the blame on Rena." Jurina said.
"That still doesn't mean you have to go off and torture her!"
The four girls stayed silent and Sayaka gently craddled her partner. Sae was having a hard time breathing and looked like she was going to lose consiousness at any second.
"Rena do something! You're the medical expert!" Sayaka shouted.
"Right. Mayuyu call and ambulence. Jurina go get me the rubbing alcohal."
"Hang on Sae you're going to be alright. Just stay with me."
The last thing Sae saw was tears running Sayaka's face and her hand holding on tightly to hers. Then Sae completely fell into the darkness. When Sae woke up, she found herself in the hospital. She tried to move but felt the tight grip of someone's hand. She looked down and saw Sayaka asleep on the side of her bed. Sae smiled and gently stroked Sayaka's hair. This made Sayaka wake up and see Sae.
"Sae!"
Sayaka bent over and gently hugged her making sure not to hit her neck. Sae tried to say something but words wouldn't come out.
"Don't talk!" Sayaka said.
"The doctor says you can't use your vocal chords until you've healed properly."
Sae nodded her head and smiled.
"Thank god you're alive."
Just then the door opend and Rena, Jurina, Mayuyu, and Yukirin came in followed by Mariko. All of them had their heads hanging low and Mariko was staring down on them.
"Everyone. don't you have something to say to Sae?" Mariko said.
"We're very sorry!" they all chanted as they all bowed.
"Good. Sae don't worry, I will make sure all four of them are severly punished."
Sae shook her head no because she didn't want her friends to be punished even though they caused her so much pain.
"You don't want them to be punished?"
Sae nodded yes.
"Very well. The four of you, I want you to take care of her 24/7."
Mariko left leaving the four standing there in silence. Then Jurina was the first to speak.
"I'm sorry for punching you in the stomach. I was just so mad."
"And I'm sorry for punching you in the face." Rena said.
"I'm sorry for shocking the day lights out of you." Mayuyu said.
"And I'm sorry for tickling you, beating you with a night stick and dumping liquid heat on you." Yukirin said.
Sae just smiled and nodded her head once more.
"So you forgive us?" Rena asked.
Sae nodded her head again.
"Thank you so much!"
They all crowded around Sae and hugged her.
"Now all of you get out. I don't want you near Sae." Sayaka said.
The girls left and Sae was now alone with Sayaka again.
"Don't worry Sae I'll make sure nothing happens to you." Sayaka said.
Sae just laughed a little and kept smiling.
"Now get some rest."
Sayaka leaned in and kissed Sae on the forehead.
"I'll be here watching you."
And with that, Sae fell asleep feeling safe in her partners arms.
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Well there's chapter 17! I hope everyone liked it. The punishments were horrible weren't they? But then Sayaka came to the rescue and then Mariko brought down the hammer of justice! Please leave a comment and look forward to the next chapter!
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Oh my God, poor Sae! Well, at least she was okay in the end and she gets Sayaka to watch over her. Guess, that teaches Sae not to take creepy pictures of Yukirin XD
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Today's chapter is going to be about Takamina. Everyone starts to question Takamina's leadership when an accident occurs involving Acchan getting hurt. Want to know what happens to our little captain? Well keep reading and see what happens. Enjoy!
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Chapter 18
After a couple of weeks, Sae was released from the hospital and was able to talk again. Now she was back on the job and was preparing to head out. There's a robbery taking place at a bank and the robbers have taken hostages.
"Let's move!" Takamina said.
Sae, Sayaka, Takamina, and Acchan all loaded into a van and headed out. When they arrived at the scene, there was a crowd of people outside the bank being held off by police officers. Takamina walked over to the officer in charge and took some binoculars.
"What's the situation?" Takamina asked.
"We got five guys all heavily armed. There are ten hostages an one is injured. We need to get in there so we can treat his wounds."
"Alright then I'm going in. Wait for my signal and then have the others rush in. Acchan, I want you to come with me and be my back up. Stay hidden so they don't see you and take down any guy that tries to do something funny."
"Right."
Acchand and Takamina walked up to the building and Takamina walked inside.
"I got a camera on her. Come take a look." Sayaka said.
Sae walked over at a tiny screen and saw Takamina and the robbers. She also saw the hostages and the one injured. It looked like he was shot in the leg.
"I am unarmed!" Takamina said.
"Prove it!" one of the robbers said.
Takamina let on of the robbers walk over and pat her down. He got a little touchy around certain areas of the tiny captain but their boss stopped them.
"So what do you want?" the boss asked.
"I just want the hostages to be let go." Takamina said.
"I can't let you do that."
"Can I at least take the one that's been injured?"
"Very well."
"I will need help carrying him out."
"You can have one other person come in and help."
"Thank you."
Takamina signaled Sae to come in. Why out of all people her? Sae walked in and carefully carried the man out. She brought him out to an ambulance where from there it took him to a hospital. Then Sae rushed back over to see how Takamina was doing.
"What are your demands?" Takamina said.
"I want a car. Ours got blocked off by cops." the boss said.
"Very well. Anything else?"
"Yes. I want you to come with me."
"Only if you release the hostages."
"I'll release the women and children."
"Deal."
Seven of the then hostages left the building and now there were three left. Soon after the car arrived and the robbers started to load the money into the car.
"Oh and one more thing." Takamina said.
"What?"
"You're under arrest! Acchan now!"
Acchan came in and shot four of the robbers. Then Takamina took down the boss by kicking the gun out of his hands and wrestling him to the ground. Takamina slapped the hand cuffs on him and had Sayaka take him out.
"Good job Acchan!" Takamina said.
"Same to you!"
Acchan started to walk over to Takamina when one of the men snuck up behind her. Apparently Acchan didn't kill of them and there was still one left. The man had a knife and stabbed Acchan in the back.
"ACCHAN!"
Sae quickly shot the man while Takamina rushed over to catch Acchan.
"Acchan!"
"Takamina... I forgot one." Acchan weakly said.
"No it's my fault! I wasn't careful and let one get away. Acchan I'm sorry!"
"It's ok Takamina. It wasn't your-"
Acchan passed out in Takamina's arms.
"Acchan!"
"Captain there's an ambulence waiting outside. Let's take her to the hospital." Sayaka said.
"Let's move!"
Sae followed Takamina to the hospital and was now waiting outside the operation room. Takamina was pacing back and forth while Sae was sitting watching her. After about an hour, the surgery light went off and a doctor came out.
"How is she?" Takamina asked.
"We were able to stablize her for now. We're afriad to do anything else so we're going to wait and see what she does." the doctor said.
"Can I go see her?"
"Go ahead."
Sae and Takamina went down to Acchan's room where she was in a bed hooked up to a heart monitor and oxygen mask with IVs in her arm. Takamina started crying seeing Acchan like that.
"Oh god this is all my fault!" Takamina shouted as she pounded her fist against the wall.
"Takamina it isn't your fault. You didn't know that guy was still alive." Sae said.
"I didn't follow protocal and make sure they were dead. It's my fault Acchan is like this. It's all my fault."
Just then Sae's phone picked up and she answered it. It was Sayaka saying Mariko wanted to see Takamina.
"Takamina Mariko wants you. We better go."
"Alright."
Takamina dried her tears and then walked out with Sae. The two arrived back at head quarters and Takamina went straight to Mariko's office.
"How is she?" Sayaka asked.
"They said she'll be fine for now but things could take a turn for the worst." Sae said.
"That's not good."
"What do you think Mariko is going to do Takamina?"
"Probably fire her."
"What!"
"Takamina is her partner and captain. If something bad happens to any of us she takes the blame and if something happens to her partner then she's really screwed."
"That can't be. Takamina can't quit."
"Well let's just see what happens."
A couple minutes later, Takamina came back out with a sad look on her face.
"What did Mariko say?" Sae asked.
"I'm being temporally suspended of being captain. Sayaka is now in charge." Takamina said.
"Thank god. So Mariko didn't fire you?"
"No. To be honest I wanted to though. But Mariko convinced me to stay. She's having me take a temporary vacation."
"So what are you going to do?"
"I'm going to leave town for a while. Sayaka look out for everyone while I'm gone."
With that, Takamina handed Sayaka the captain badge and walked out.
"I hope she'll be alright."
It was after Takamina left when Acchan finally woke up. The doctor said she was going to be alright and was recovering really quickly. Sae often visited Acchan to make sure she was alright.
"Hello again." Sae said coming in with a fresh batch of flowers.
"Hey Sae." Acchan said.
"So how are you feeling?"
"Pretty good. The doctor said I get to leave in a couple days."
"That's great. We'll have to throw you a party when you get back."
"Have you heard anything from Takamina?"
"Nothing. She's had her cell off for weeks and no one has seen her."
"I see. Well when you do see her. Tell her I miss her."
"I will do that."
Sae started to leave the room when she noticed new flowers in a vase. They were white lilies.
"Who put the flowers there?"
"I fdon't know. They were there when I woke up this morning. But whoever put them must have known my favorite flowers were Lilies and my favorite color was white."
"Weird. Well I'll see you in a while."
"Ok."
Two days later, Acchan was released from the hospital and is now back on the job. Her and Sae were called in for riot control because a fight broke out at a park. Sae had Acchan stay back so she wouldn't get hurt and Sae kept taking down guys who came at her. But then at one point, a guy was about to hit Acchan with a bottle. Sae was busy with another guy and wouldn't make it in time. The man was about to stike Acchan when he suddenly collapsed onto the ground.
"Takamina!"
There standing before Acchan was Takamina.
"I'm back." Takamina said.
"I've missed you so much!" Acchan said.
"I have to and we'll catch up later. Right now look out!"
Takamina took down another guy and quickly got in front of Acchan. Sae watched as Takamina single handedly took down ten guys in less than three minutes. Takamina had gotten stronger than the last time she saw her. There was a reason why Takamina was captain and this was why. After about five minutes, everything had calmed down. Sae was hand cuffing a guy when she looked over and saw Takamina and Acchan hugging.
"I missed you so much!" Acchan said.
"I've missed you too." Takamina said.
"Why didn't you visit me?"
"I was afraid to face you. I was afraid you would be angry that I failed to protect you as your captain and your partner."
"I could never stay mad at you. What happened back there wasn't your fault."
"I felt awful. So I went up to the mountains and trained to get stronger."
"That sounds like a kung-fu movie."
"Hey it actually works. You have to admit I have gotten stronger." Takamina said.
"That you have." Acchan said.
"From now on I will always protect you."
"And I will protect you."
Acchan leaned in and kissed Takamina on the lips. They held for a while and Sae hated to interrupt them but she felt it was important.
"Uh Takamina..."
"What is it?"
"I think you deserve this."
Sae handed Takamina her captain's badge and Acchan took it from her. She pinned it back onto Takamina's uniform and hugged her.
"Welcome back captain."
"It's good to be back."
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Well there's chapter 18! I hope everyone liked it! The next chapter is going to involve Mayuyu where her cyber hacking skills will be put to the test. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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They are crazy in that police station. Crazy and scary hahaha!
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Chapter 15 Kojiyuu couple is scary :shocked and Haruna is scarier than Yuko XD
Chapter 16 Rena's father is Yakuza?!! :O whoo that's unexpected and they had fight as friendly talk?! it was crazy :nervous
Chapter 17 Poor Sae, you really shouldn't take Yukirin's photo :smhid Mayuki and WMatsui were cruel there, lucky that Sayaka passed by and saw Sae
Chapter 18 Atsuko got stabbed?! :cry: :cry: poor Takamina, it's not really your fault, it was relieved that you got your position back :D and Atsumina moment like :twothumbs
I'm waiting for Mayuyu hacking skills~ XD XD
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I was absent for days and The Mad House is finish I :nya: the end
I love the new fic Genking Deka :glasses:
you are always so fast miyumi-san :hee:
you're already in the chapter 18 :dizzy:
I miss many things :on lol:
please cantinue
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Today's chapter is going to about Mayuyu and she is about to face her greatest enemy of all times. Her hacking skills will be put to the test. How will the little cyborg handle it? Let's see what happens. Enjoy!
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Chapter 19
"Hey Sae can you come over and help me with something?" Takamina said.
"Sure what is it?"
"I've been trying to log in the system and it isn't letting me in."
"Ley me take a look." Sae said.
Sae tried typing in her username and password and when she hit enter the screen said the password was wrong.
"I don't know what's wrong with it. Have you called Mayuyu?"
"I was about to but I was going to see if you could figure it out."
While the two were talking, the screen suddenly turned black and a picture of a devil came up.
"What is this?"
"I don't know but we better go get Mayuyu"
Sae and Takamina rushed into Yukirin's lab only to find her nowhere. Takamina rushed over to Mayuyu's office and opened the door.
"Mayuyu we-"
"I already know! Just come in and shut the door." Mayuyu said.
Takamina and Sae walked in and Sae closed the door. This was the first time Sae had been in Mayuyu's office and to be honest, it was just as she imagined it. The only light source was coming from the computer monitors. There was on big one and four other monitors. There were several keyboards and mouses and a wall of hard drives behind them. Not to mention wires all around the place making it look like a jungle.The place was like one of those high tech rooms you see in the movies.
"Hey you guys."
Sae looked over and saw Yukirin sitting on a bean bag next to Mayuyu.
"So what's going on?" Takamina asked.
"Someonoe is trying to hack into our system. They've already gotten through two of our fire walls." Yukirin said.
"Not good."
"Mayuyu is trying to push him back but is having trouble."
"Is there anything we can do to help you?"
"Yeah go turn off every computer in the building. He's using them as access points into our system."
"On it."
"So who is this guy?" Sae asked.
"He goes by the name Diablo." Mayuyu said.
"Weird name."
"Yeah anyways, this guy is known for being a super hacker and has gotten into several systems before. You know he almost got into the Pentagon system back in America?"
"He was that good?"
"Yes. But the Pentagon is nothing compared to my system. I'm not letting him break through. Now shut up and let me concentrate."
"Hey Yukirin how long has Mayuyu been like this?" Sae asked.
"Since last night. She noticed something wrong in the system so she looked into it and then found out someone was trying to hack into our computers. She's been typing away like that for ten hours." Yukirin said.
"Doesn't she eat or go to the bathroom?"
"When she gets like this, all the things that make her human turn off. She doesn't eat because hunger is no longer a problem and I guess her bladder just shuts down so she doesn't have to pee. The entire rest of her body shuts off and the only thing that still moves is her hands, eyes and mouth."
"Man she really is a cyborg."
"That or she knows how to control her body very well."
"So what do we do now?"
"We sit and watch. You can't really do anything to help her."
Sae looked up at one of the monitors to see what was going on. On the screen was a cirlce surrounded by three walls. The furthest one looked like it was being eaten away. Eventually the third one broke and now the second one was being attacked.
"Ahhh he got through the third fire walll!" Mayuyu shouted.
"What happens if he gets through all of the fire walls?" Sae said.
"Then all of our records of past cases and all of our information will be lost." Yukirin said.
"Yeah and now we only have two walls left. No wonder this guy is good. I'm trying to find how he's gettting into our system but I can't find anyhting. However I suspect he's got a bug planted in one of the computers. Sae go out there and look for a small black chip attatched to one of the hard drives."
"Ok!"
Sae ran out and started searching. There wasn't one in the computer in the mourge and there wasn't one in the firing range computer. Sae ran up to the main desks and started searching. She didn't see one on Takamina's and she didn't see one on Acchan's. Sayaka's computer was also clean.
"Where is it?"
The only one she hadn't checked was her own. Sae walked over to her desk and examined the computer. At first she didn't see anything but then out of the corner of her eye she saw something buldging out of the side. Sae reached out and pulled it off. It was the chip. Sae quickly took it up to Mayuyu's lab.
"Mayuyu I found it!" Sae said.
"Good bring it here."
Sae brought it over and Mayuyu took a quick glance at it while still typing.
"So that's how you got in huh? Well let's fix that. Yukirin crush it."
Yukirin took the chip from Sae and crushed it on the ground.
"Alright his hacking speed has slowed down."
"Don't think I'm done just because you destroyed my bug." a voice said.
"Who was that?" Sae asked.
"Diablo. He hacked into the audio and can now talk to us. He's annoying as hell." Mayuyu said.
"I wouldn't be saying that about the one who's kicking your but."
"Shut up and eat this!"
Mayuyu pressed a button and the firewall started to regenerate itself.
"Ah, ah I don't think so."
Something happened and the firewall started to go down again. Within a couple of minutes the second fire wall was down and now there was only one left.
"He's almost in!"
"I know that now shut up!"
"Sae maybe it's best if you stayed quiet for the rest of the time being." Yukirin said.
Sae sat there watching the last fire wall being eaten away. It was already half way gone.
"How does it feel having your perfect security being hacked away. Soon I will have all the police reports ever made." the voice said.
"Shut up! There's still one thing that I have that you don't." Mayuyu said.
"What?"
"An HHS."
"What!"
"Sae grab that cord with the pink tip on the end and plug it into the back of my neck." Mayuyu said.
"What?"
"Just do it!"
Sae found the cord and walked over to Mayuyu.
"There's a plugin on the back of my neck. All you have to do is plug it in."
"Ok..."
Sae moved Mayuyu's hair and saw it. There on the back of her neck was a small plugin. Sae couldn't believe there was actually one there but she didn't have time to wonder. Sae plugged in the cord and then backed away.
"System activated."
Mayuyu's whole body changed. Sae thought she was already typing fast but now she was typing super fast like she was playing a sixteenth note on a piano. Mayuyu's eyes were moving everywhere every second. She was also typing on two separate keyboards at the same time really fast.
"What's going on now? Why does Mayuyu have a plugin in the back of her neck" Sae asked.
"Mayuyu's parents were also cyber hackers. But they were killed when they got into something really bad. Before they died, they implanted a hacking system into her brain that can be accessed through a plug in the back of the neck. When it is activated, the person becomes one with the computer itself."
"So you're saying Mayuyu has become a computer?"
"Yes. HHS stands for Human Hacking System. There are others out there who have one but Mayuyu's is the best there is. The program completely takes over the brain and utilizes it's full capacity. Humans can only use 15% of their brain capacity. However this system causes one to use all the brain's capacity."
"Isn't that dangerous?"
"Yes. If something bad happens, Mayuyu could die."
"I can't belive her parents would do something like this."
"No no this can't be happening!" the voice said.
Sae looked over and saw the fire walls returning to normal. Eventually, he was kicked out entirely. Now Mayuyu was tracking his location. In a matter of seconds Mayuyu had a name and address.
"Sae go arrest the guy. I'll handle Mayuyu." Yukirin said.
"Got it."
Sae found the guy who was trying to hack the system and arrested him. Once he was in jail, Sae went back down to the lab to see how Mayuyu was doing. When she walked in, she found Mayuyu asleep on Yukirin's lap.
"How is she?" Sae asked.
"She was able to come out of it alright. There were no problems and now she's resting. She really needed it after all that." Yukirin said.
"How long will she be out?"
"About a day or two. Look at her hands."
Sae looked at Mayuyu's hands and saw them twitch every so often and when they did it looked like they were still typing.
"The system still hasn't full shut down yet so Mayuyu needs to rest. When the system is completely off, Mayuyu will wake up again." Yukirin said.
"I see. So this thing basically increases everything in Mayuyu?" Sae asked.
"Yes. She can activate it without a wire and she can use it for other purposes than just hacking."
"Like what?"
"She can use it to increase her strength, speed, senses even intellegence."
"Good lord."
"I know. But she only uses it in emergencies because it takes a great toll on her body. If she used it all the time then she would die."
"That explains why back when you were kidnapped Mayuyu was so strong beating that guy up."
"Yes that's probably it."
"Well I'm going to leave. Let me know when she wakes up."
"Will do."
Sae walked out of the room with a whole new view on Mayuyu.
"She really is a cyborg. That's really scary. At least she only uses it for emergencies though."
Just then something funny came to Sae's mind.
"I wonder... since she's a computer, can I download and listen to music on her?"
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Well there's chapter 19! Mayuyu's skills were put to the test and she showed her true colors. Now it's time for our cyborg to take a long break. The next chapter is going to be a two parter so be ready! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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Yukirin, it's time for you to take good care of your amazing little cyborg. Don't leave her while she sleeps, alright? :wub: I can totally feel their close bond here. Yukirin fully understood Mayuyu's working style and shushed Sae to let Mayuyu focus on her task. And Mayuyu was able to go all out on the hacker because she knew Yukirin would be there for her when she shut down. Aww...
The HHS is one incredible but crazy system. It's so endearing that Mayuyu risks her life using it to protect Yukirin and the police's system. A really great chapter! I love it! :thumbsup :heart:
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"I wonder... since she's a computer, can I download and listen to music on her?"
:thumbup
Mayu is so cool!
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And I've been away on vacation AGAIN!
Mad House is finished the ending was like WHAT THE?! But they are family again XD
Super great ending!
And I've been reading Geking Deka 19 chapters straight :thumbsup
Sae was a hentai but she deserved what she did to Yukirin and everyone got their revenge :lol:
Sae walked out of the room with a whole new view on Mayuyu.
"She really is a cyborg. That's really scary. At least she only uses it for emergencies though."
Just then something funny came to Sae's mind.
"I wonder... since she's a computer, can I download and listen to music on her?"
Pfft! Sae-chan why did you even came with something so funny like that XD
I :heart: you and your fic! They're hilarious and crazy...
ArígatoU! :kneelbow
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:cool1: Mayuuu kakkoiiiii :luvluv1:
:sweat: I would like a special Wmatsui next time :luvluv2:
I like this fic so funny :hiakhiakhiak:
I can't wait for the next :byebye:
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Wow, Mayuyu is really cool, she really is a cyborg XD
I can just imagine Sae using Mayuyu as a portable music and dvd player lol.
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Hello everyone! Today's chapter is a two parter so what's going to happen this time? Well keep reading to find out. Let's just say that a little squirrel and a princess get into some trouble.
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Chapter 20 part 1
Sae was sitting at her desk waiting for her computer to load when al alarm went off.
"What's going on?" Sae asked.
"It's an all hands on deck alarm." Acchan said.
"Which means?"
"We need everyone at the scene."
"Oh ok where are we going?"
"I don't know we'll find out when we get there."
Everyone was loaded into an assult vehicle and were taken to a local shopping mall. Apparently a group of terrorists had taken over and there were over a hundred people in there taken hostage. There were twenty guys in there all heavily armed with military grade guns and armor. This was going to be a tough one for Sae.
"We're going to sneak into the back." Takamina said.
"Once we get inside, I want Sae and Sayaka to take the top floor while Haruna and Yuko take the second. Acchan and I will take the first floor. These guys are dangerous and so be careful."
They headed in and everyone took their separate ways. Sae and Sayaka went up the stairs to the top floor. There were ten shops on the floor and they had to check everyone to make sure no one was hurt. The first store was coming up and Sae could hear voices inside. Sae was about to charge in when Sayaka held her back.
"Wait." she mouthed.
A couple minutes later, two guys came out both carrying very big guns. They started to walk away from the store and when they were far enough, Sayaka ran up to them and took them down by bashing their heads.
"Go in and check to make sure everyone inside is ok." Sayaka said.
Sae rushed in and found five people all tied together.
"We're the police." Sae said as she untied them.
"Follow me and I'll escort you outside."
Sae led them to the stair case where there were officers there to lead them to safety. Then she rushed back over to Sayaka who was tying them together to a desk.
"Let's move."
The next store didn't have any hostages but there were two guys in there. Because there were no hostages, Sayaka took out her gun that had a silencer on it and took them out. Then next three stores were empty and now there five left to check. The sixth one had three guys but on hostages.
"Let me take them." Sae said.
"You sure you can handle it?" Sayaka asked.
"Of course I can."
Sae took out her gun and shot all three of them with no problem.
"Good job."
"Told you I could handle them."
The seventh had no one in it and the eighth only had one guy who was dead. Then ninth had two guys who were easily taken out and the last room had a bunch of hostages but only one guard. Once he was down, all the hostages were led to safety.
"Alright that's it for the top floor. Let's go see how Yuko and Haruna are doing."
Sae and Sayaka went down to the second floor and found Yuko on top of a guy shoving a grenade in his mouth. Yuko pulled the pin and then pushed his body over the ledge.
"Bye bye!"
The grenade went off and the man was dead before he hit the ground. The explosion alerted the others and now all the guys were heading towards them.
"Yuko you idiot!" Haruna said.
"Hey I was only doing what I had to do!" Yuko said.
"Both of you shut up and start firing!"
Seven guys came up and started firing. Luckily everyone was able to take cover before getting shot. One of the guys fired and the bullet went through Haruna's hair.
"Hey I just had it done!"
Haruna got mad and pulled out a grenade. She tossed it over at the group and it took out four of them but there were still three left.
"How dare you ruin Nyannyan's hair!"
Yuko took a knife and threw it at one of the guys. It hit his leg causing him to knock into the other two. While the three were stuggling to get the other guy off, Yuko jumped into the air and shot all three of them.
"Nice Yuko!"
"I did my best only for my Nyannyan."
"Hey we could use a little help down here!"
Sae looked down and saw Takmaina and Acchan having a hard time fighting off ten guys.
"We gotta get down there." Sayaka said.
"Follow me!"
Yuko jumped off the edge like a liitle squirrel fell ten feet in the air and landed on a mattress that was right outside a bed store. How convenient. Everyone else followed Yuko and were now all on the first floor.
"I'll take the guys on the left." Sayaka said.
"I got the right!" Sae said.
"I got above!"
"What?"
Sae looked up and saw guys crashing through the sky light. Yuko ran over and leaped high into the air and started shooting. As Sae was watching Yuko's midair combat, she didn't see the guy who was taking aim at her. Thankfully, Sayaka saw this and took him out.
"Hey pay attention!" she said.
"Sorry!"
Sae started shooting every guy she saw. She rarely missed a shot and always had time to reload. But soon more and more guys started flooding in. She was told there were twenty guys but it felt like the number had grown to fifty.
"Mou I've had enough!"
Haruna ran over to the side and pulled out a very large rocket launcher.
"Everyone hit the deck!" Takamina shouted.
Sayaka and Sae took cover behind a stone column and Haruna started firing like a mad man. Sae could hear the screams of guys getting them selves blown to bits and some were thrown halfway across the mall.
"Nyannyan no fair! I want in to!"
Yuko pulled out those electric grenades that her and Sae tested once and threw them down at the group. They went off and a bunch of the guys were fired instantly. Haruna was still shooting when she suddenly tripped and when she fired it was heading straight at Yuko and Acchan.
"Acchan look out!"
Yuko managed to get her and Acchan out of the before the rocket hit a nearby store.
"Nyannyan be careful!"
"Sorry!"
"That's enough out of both of you! The fight is over." Takamina said.
Sae looked around and realized that Takamina was right. All the guys were down and there was no one else moving.
"Operation was a success. We're heading back now." Takamina said into a radio.
"Hey Takamina can we look around at some of the stores first? Not all of them were blown to bits by Haruna." Acchan said.
"Acchan we're not going shopping. And do you have any idea how much it is going to cost to fix all this?"
"I'm sorry you guys. I was just getting tired of fighting and I wanted to end it." Haruna said.
"Yeah don't blame my Nyannyan!" Yuko said.
"I didn't give you permission to use explosives!"
"We only did what we thought was right."
"You could've killed Acchan and yourself."
"But we didn't now did we?"
"You just got lucky."
While those two were arguing like an old couple, Sayaka walked over to Sae.
"Hey you did pretty good out there." Sayaka said.
"Thanks you did too." Sae said.
"I'm glad all the hostages were safe."
"Same."
Everyone was busy talking when Acchan noticed something rolling towards them.
"Hey you guys what is that?" Acchan asked pointing at a small canister.
"It's a smoke bomb!" Yuko shouted.
"Everyone take co-"
The bomb went off and the whole area filled with smoke. Sae couldn't see anything but she could hear more people coming in. Then Sae felt someone grab her and she wasn't sure if it was an enemy or a friend. Sae started punching the person but then she heard a familar voice.
"Stop punching me Acchan! It's me Takamina!."
"I'm not Acchan!" Sae said.
"Sae?"
"Yes!"
"Oh sorry." Takamina said.
"Why did you grab me?"
"You looked like Acchan."
"Really?'
"That doesn't matter. We need to get out of here."
"What about the others?"
"They'll find their way."
Takamina and Sae rushed out of the building and Sae started filling her lungs with sweet air. Sae looked back waiting for the others to come out of the exit. A couple minutes later Haruna and Sayaka came out.
"Where were you?" Sayaka asked.
"Takamina grabbed me thinking I was Acchan." Sae said.
"Where's Yuko?" Haruna asked.
"I thought she would've been with you."
"I had her at one point but then the gorilla here grabbed me and took me away."
"Sorry I was only trying to save your life."
"Stop fighting you two!" Takamina said.
"I don't think they're are coming out." Sae said.
"Which means Acchan and Yuko are still in there!"
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Well there's part 1! Want to find out what happens to Acchan and Yuko? Part 2 will be coming very soon so wait! Who knows what will happen to them. Will they die or will their partners rush in to save them? Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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I wonder if we have cops like I should feel safe or not lol
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Well here's part 2! I hope you all enjoy it! Sae, Takamina, and Haruna are on the job to resuce their princesses. Oh and a certain Gachapin stops by to help!
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Chapter 20 part 2
"Acchan and Yuko are still in there!" Takamina said.
"We have to go back in there and get them." Sayaka said.
"But how can we when there's probably a ton of guys in there by now?" Haruna said.
"Well the gas looks like it's starting to go away. Sayaka, you stay here and contact Mariko. Meanwhile Sae and Haruna come with me."
"Yosh!"
Takamina, Haruna and Sae went back into the mall and as expected, there were a ton of guys. Luckily, the were to busy to notice them come in.
"So what do we do now?" Sae asked.
"Well I don't see Acchan or Yuko so they're probably hiding some where. Everyone split up and search for them." Takamina said.
Sae took the top floor while Haruna took the second and Takamina took the first. Sae looked around every store searching for any sign of either Acchan or Yuko. So far she had found nothing and it looked like there wasn't anyone up on the top floor. But before Sae could say she was safe, she heard a noise coming from the inside of one of the stores. Sae positioned herself for when the guy came out. Then when they were close enough, Sae jumped out and attacked the guy.
"Sae!"
Sae looked down to see who she was on top of and realized it was Acchan.
"Acchan!"
"Sae get off me!"
Oh sorry. Sae got off Acchan and watched her fix herself.
"So you're ok?" Sae asked.
"Yeah I'm fine." Acchan said.
"Where's Yuko?"
"I don't know. I was so confused in the smoke that I just ran. I don't know where Yuko could've gone."
"Alright then we better go search for her."
"Wait!"
"What?"
"Do you think this top looks cute on me?"
"Now is not the time for shopping!"
Sae grabbed Acchan and dragged her out of the store. Together, they searched the rest of the floor but there was no sign of the squirrel.
"Let's head down to the second floor."
Sae and Acchan went down to the second floor and found Haruna looking thorugh a basket full of bras.
"What are you doing?" Acchan asked.
"Looking for Yuko." Haruna said.
"Uh Haruna I don't think Yuko would hide in a basket full of bras." Sae said.
"Oh you'd be surprised."
"Well I don't think she's in there. Let's keep looking."
They searched the entire floor and all the stores they thought Yuko would hide in. But so far there was nothing. Then there was the sound of gun fire coming from outside followed by a very familiar laugh. Sae ran out and saw Yuko swinging from a chandelier throwing grenades down on the ground.
"Yuko!" Haruna shouted.
"Hi Nyannyan!" Yuko shouted back as she threw another five grenades down onto the guys.
"Someone shoot her!" a man said.
The men started firing at Yuko but somehow missed. Yuko was just sitting there swinging on the chandelier like a monkey and kept dropping the grenades down on them. Sae wondered where she was getting all of them.
"Yuko look out!"
There was a loud snap and the chandelier came crashing down on the guys. Luckily Yuko wasn't hurt unlike the poor fellows that happened to be under it.
"Let's get down there!"
Sae jumped down and landed on one of the guys who happened to be there. Sae had to catch Acchan and Haruna because there were no human cushions around.
"Acchan!"
Takamina came running out and took out three guys on the way.
"Takamina!"
The two reunited with a quick hug and then Takamina went back to shooting. Sae and Haruna took out more guys while Yuko shooting at them like crazy. It looked like they were winning but they were outnumbered and surrounded.
"What do we do now?" Acchan said.
"I don't know. Got any ideas?" Takamina said.
"Yeah hold me!"
The two embraced each other thinking it was going to be the last time they were going to be together.
"Nyannyan let me hold your boobs!" Yuko said.
"No!"
"Please?"
"No!"
The first person was about to shoot but then something shot him right in the head and he was down. Before the other guys had time to figure out what was going on, they were taken out as well. Sae was able to figure out the shots were coming from above. Sae looked up and saw Miichan with a sniper rifle.
"Miichan!" Sae said.
"Hi Sae!" she said as she took down another guy.
When Miichan was finally done, she came down to greet them.
"What are you doing here?" Takamina asked.
"Mariko sent me. She told me you guys were in trouble so I came to help."
"You brought your sniper."
"Of course. I'm the best sniper in Japan. I never leave the house without it."
"You take it to your house?" Sae said.
"Of course."
"Miichan used to be an elite assassin but then she went rouge so Mariko took her in."
"Seriously? I thought you just handled paper work and made tea."
"Nope. I can kill you from a mile away without you even knowing."
"That's scary."
"Anyways, there's one last wave of guys coming for us. How are you guys on ammo?" Miichan asked.
"I'm almost out." Haruna said.
"I am too." Acchan said.
"I'm out." Yuko said.
"I'm down to my last clip." Takamina said.
"Mariko knew this would happen so she wanted me to give Yuko this."
Miichan reached into her bag and handed Yuko a small gun. Sae recgonized it as the gun that shot explosives and blew up on impact.
"Sweet!"
"Well then I'll be leaving now."
"Wait why are you leaving?" Haruna asked.
"Mariko only told me to give Yuko the gun and leave. Not to stay around. I have tea to make you know."
With that, Miichan left and flash leaving the others behind.
"Ok then let's get started."
The guys came in but were only able to take one step. Yuko only shot one round and when it hit, all the guys were taken out.
"Man that thing is powerful!" Sae said.
"I know right!" Yuko said.
"Now let's put it away before you hurt someone else." Takamina said.
"We better get back outside. Sayaka's probably worried about us."
All five of them went back out and found Sayaka sitting by a car. When she saw Sae, she got up and ran over to her.
"You're alright!" Sayaka said hugging her.
"Yes I'm fine. Sayaka I can't breathe!" Sae said.
"Oh sorry. I'm just really glad you weren't hurt."
"Nice job calling Mariko." Takamina said.
"Actually Mariko didn't pick up the phone. Miichan said she was out for lunch so I told Miichan what was going on and she headed over." Sayaka said.
"Weird. She told us she had to leave because Mariko told her to only deliver Yuko the explosive."
"That is weird."
"Maybe she came because she wanted a break from boring office work and wanted to relieve some stress by shooting people." Haruna said.
" Well the point is she came and helped you guys out."
"Yeah and now we're all safe! Takamina I was so scared!" Acchan said.
"It's ok because I'm here now!"
The two hugged again and Acchan almost started crying.
"Nyannyan you wouldn't let me touch your boobs!" Yuko said.
"Because I'm not letting you!" Haruna said.
"Fine then I'll just touch Sae's."
"What!"
Yuko reached out and touched Sae's chest. But instead of getting the usual happy perverted grin she usually gets, she got a concerned look.
"Sae you're flat. Almost as flat as Takamina." Yuko said.
"Hey!" Takamina said.
"Shut up Yuko! I can't help it!" Sae said.
"Yeah Yuko don't be rude." Sayaka said.
"Haha no one compares to my Nyannyan!"
"Yuko no kisses from me for a week."
"Nyannyan!"
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Well there's part 2. I hope you all liked it. Look forward to the next chapter. Jurina is going to show off her true skill when there is a break in the mourge. I can tell you one thing, it involves knives!
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Today's chapter is about Jurina and her hidden talent that she had kept secret from everyone else except Rena. Want to find out what is it? Well keep reading to find out!
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Chapter 21
It was another boring day at the office. Sae was sitting at her desk when Rena walked over.
"Hey Sae do you mind helping me with something?" Rena asked.
"Sure what is it?" Sae said.
"There are some bodies that need to be moved into the mourge and both of the guys who usually do that are sick so I was wondering if you could help."
"Sure as long as I don't have to touch them."
"Oh don't worry. They're in a bag and all you have to do is wheel them in on a cart."
"Sounds easy enough."
Sae and Rena went down to the mourge where Jurina was waiting.
"The bodies have just arrived. They're waiting outside."
"Ok I'll go get them."
Sae wheeled in three bodies. Then her and Jurina set them on the autopsy table.
"Well that's it. Thank you for helping." Rena said.
"My pleasure."
Sae turned around and left the room. But then she realized she forgot to tell Rena something and walked back in. When she did, she saw a man crawling out of the body bag with a gun.
"Rena look out!" Sae said.
Rean turned around and saw the man. She immediately ducked right before he shot. The other two body bags unzipped themselves and two other guys came out.
"What's going on?" Jurina said.
"I don't know."
"You get over there!" one of the men said to Sae.
Sae walked over and sat next to Rena.
"Tie them up."
One of the men walked over and tied the three girls together.
"Why are you here?" Rena asked.
"We're looking for a friend of ours." one of the men said.
"Check the freezers."
While two of the men were looking through the freezers, the third one was pointing a gun at Rena.
"What are we going to do?" Sae whispered.
"I don't know!" Rena whispered back.
"Hey quiet you two!"
The man aimed his gun right at Sae threatening to pull the trigger.
"Hey we found him!"
The three men carried the body of a man onto the autopsy table.
"You. Get over there."
A man untied Rena and made her walk to the body.
"Our friend has something important of ours inside him. We need you to cut him open and get it out."
"What am I looking for?"
"You'll know when you find it. Oh and if you try anything funny, we shoot your assistant."
"Very well."
Rena started cutting away into the body and Sae couldn't help but gag at the sight of Rena ripping out organs. After about a half hour, Rena found what the men were looking for.
"These are drugs." Rena said holding up a small pack of white powder.
"Yes and now that you've recovered all of them, we will no longer be needing your assistance. Goodbye."
The man aimed his gun at Rena and was about to fire. But then suddenly the lights went out and everything became dark. There was the sound of gun fire and screams. Sae also thought at one point she heard the sound of a blade. When the lights came back on, all three of the men were gone and Jurina was standing next to Rena covered in blood.
"Uh what just happened?" Sae asked.
"Jurina you didn't have to do that." Rena said.
"Well if I didn't they would've killed you." Jurina said wrapping her arms around Rena's waist.
"Well at least you weren't hurt."
"Um can someone please tell me what's going on?"
"It's nothing. Let's get you untied."
Jurina walked over and untied Sae.
"Jurina when did you untie yourself?"
"When the lights went off. Thanks to Rena." Jurina said.
"There's a switch under the autopsy table that shuts off the lights. When I hit it, Jurina set herself free." Rena said.
"So what happened to the guys?" Sae asked.
"I took care of them."
"What do you mean?"
Just then one of the guys staggered over to Sae. He was covered in cuts and bleeding all over.
"Ahhh!"
"You.... what are you..." the man said pointing at Jurina.
"Jurina sick em."
In a blink of an eye, Jurina pulled out two daggers and charged at the man. He tried to defend himself but Jurina got around and stabbed him right in the neck. He dropped to the ground in seconds.
"Jurina! You were the one who did that?!" Sae said.
"Yes. I was ordered to so I did." Jurina said.
"Why are you so good with the daggers?"
"Jurina was raised by the military. She's been trained to kill in and instant when ordered. They called her the Blood Hound back in the camp." Rena said.
"How did you know Jurina back then?"
"I was there for medical care on the battle field. She came to me with three bullet wounds and a stab wound."
"Yeah I remember to. The entire time I was under, I kept seeing the face of an angel."
"Oh stop it you're embarrassing me."
Jurina walked over and wrapped her arms around Rena.
"You're my angle of death."
"And your my loyal blood hound."
Jurina kissed Rena and within a couple minutes they were really starting to go at it with tounge and all. Sae decided to leave before things got PG-13 or beyond. When she ran out, she accidently ran into Mayuyu.
"Ah sorry Mayuyu I didn't see you." Sae said.
"Watch where you're going." Mayuyu said.
"What are you doing down here?"
"I wanted to talk to Jurina about some thing."
"I wouldn't go in there if I were you."
"Why not?"
"PG-13 stuff."
"Ohhh. Wanna see what they're doing?" Mayuyu said.
"Ew no." Sae said.
"Come with me."
Mayuyu dragged Sae up to her lab and over to the computer.
"Mayuyu I told you I don't want to see what they're doing in there!" Sae said.
"Relax! I'm not going to look at that. There's actually something else I want to look at." Mayuyu said.
"What?"
"You see, everyone knew you guys were being held up in the mourge."
"Then why didn't you come and help us?"
"Because Jurina was with you and when ever Jurina is in the room, you might as well start writing your will."
"Because she's good with knives?"
"Exactly. You want to see how scary she truly is?"
"Show me."
Mayuyu typed something into her computer and footage from the mourge came up. Then right around the part when the lights went off, Mayuyu pressed a button and a night vision came on. All Sae saw was a blur because it happened so fast.
"Slow it down."
Mayuyu slowed the footage down and then Sae saw it. She saw Jurina get up and run over to the first guy. She pulled out her blades and cut him to to into pieces and then finishing him off by slashing his throat. Then Jurina made her way over to the second guy and sliced his stomach open. Then she made it to last guys and started cutting away pieces of his arms and legs. It was truly a frightening to see.
"Scary."
Sae watched Jurina drag the bodies away into the other room and then walk back over to Rena where she turned the light back on.
"So that's what happened!" Sae said.
"Yes. And that's why we never go in there when Jurina is in the room." Mayuyu said.
"Why is she here then when she could be on some special assult squad for the president?"
"She just followed Rena like a dog following her master. She didn't have any medical experience which is why she's Rena's assistant. Mariko let her in because she thought Jurina could be useful. But she only follows the orders of Rena. She won't listen to anyone else."
"She really is Rena's dog."
"Yes which is why you never do anything bad to Rena. Otherwise you're in for one heck of a trip. Last time I accidently made Rena cut herself. When I did that, Jurina had me pinned to the ground with her blades right up against my neck. If Yukirin haden't been there I would've been dog food."
"Wow she really is dangerous. Everyone here is!"
"Well as long as you don't do anything to tick us off you won't get hurt. And don't worry you'll find your calling card. Just give it time."
"I will but in the mean time, I'm going to find Sayaka."
Sae left the room now fully aware of the dangers of Jurina. Sae hoped that she would never ever do anything to tick Jurina off.
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Well there's chapter 21. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter! The end is coming soon!
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lol Kojiharu looked for Yuko in a basket of bra ahahha
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Eeeeeeh! Jurina is so cool :heart: :twothumbs
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Jurina scary :OMG:
Jurina is Rena's dog :hiakhiakhiak:
I can't wait for the next chapter :onioncheer:
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Minna! Thank you so much for commenting. I missed you guys when I last updated. So I have a questiong to ask you. All cops deserve a break right? Well today's chapter is going to be about the officers at the Tokyo Police Department taking a short break from all the stress. I hope you all enjoy!
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Chapter 22
"Hey Sae are you ready for tomorrow's vacation?" Sayaka said.
"What do you mean?" Sae asked.
"Once every three months, Mariko takes everyone out for a small two day vacation. It gives us time to relax and let some stress off you know?"
"You're right. So where are we going?"
"I don't know. We'll find out tomorrow."
"Sweet! I hope it's somewhere nice."
The place Mariko was taking everyone was a water park. Mariko personally rented out the whole place for everyone to enjoy themselves and have fun. Then she also booked everyone a room in a hotspring hotel.
"Man Mariko is the best!" Takamina said.
"Where is Mariko?" Sae asked.
"She said she had to stay behind to finish up some work."
"Now that's not right. She should be here to relax too."
"Don't worry. She said she'll be coming tomorrow."
"Well that's good to here."
"Yeah so let's go and have fun!"
"Yeah!"
Everyone split up and started having fun. Rena and Jurina were relaxing by the pool side, Acchan and Takamina were floating on tubes, Haruna and Yuko were swimming in the pool and Sayaka was swimming laps. Sae wasn't sure what to do first because she was overwhelmed by the amount of fun. But then she felt a slight tap on her back. She turned around and saw Yukirin.
"Hey Sae could you help me with something?"
Sae couldn't help but drool a little at the sight of Yukirin. She was wearing a white two piece that had ruffles in the front. Sae had to slap herself awake to avoid being caught by Mayuyu.
"What is it?" Sae asked.
"I need your help getting Mayuyu in the pool." Yukirin said.
"What's wrong with her?"
"Well she's afraid of the water."
"Seriously?"
Sae couldn't believe the mighty cyborg was afraid of water. But then again maybe it's because she'll short circuit if she gets wet.
"She almost drowned once when she was little and she's been afraid to go in ever since. I'd teach her how but she even rejected my help."
"Now that's a surprise. Let me see what I can do."
Sae walked over to Mayuyu who was on her laptop under an umbrella. Mayuyu was wearing a pink one piece that had a bunny on the front.
"Hey Mayuyu Yukirin told me you were afraid to get in the water. Do you want me to help?" Sae asked.
"No!" Mayuyu said.
"Come on! You gotta get in the water. It's really nice."
"No!"
"Well then if you don't go in..."
Sae leaned in close to Mayuyu.
"If you don't go in, I'll have a little fun with Yukirin."
"You wouldn't dare."
"Watch me."
Sae turned around and started to walk away but then was pushed over.
"Come on Yukirin you're teaching me how to swim!" Mayuyu said as she jumped in with arm floaties, a tube float and a bunch of pool noodles.
"Mayuyu you don't need that many floats!"
"Are you ok?"
Sae looked up and was almost blinded by the sun. But then a shadow casted over and she could see the beautiful figure of Haruna.
"Yeah I'm fine!" Sae said getting up.
"Nice suit." Haurna said.
"Thanks. Yours is too."
Haruna was wearing a red two piece with a white outline.
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko came running over in a green two piece with blue stars on it.
"Nyannyan let's go on the slide together!" Yuko said latching onto Haruna.
"No way. That slide scares me." Haruna said while trying to pry Yuko off her.
"Then can we go swim in the pool?"
"No I want to work on my tan."
"Ooo then let me rub sun tan lotion on you!"
"Ok just don't do anything funny."
"I won't!"
Yuko and Haruna walked over to the chairs and Yuko started rubbing lotion on Haruna's back. Sae could see her heading for areas that shouldn't be touched. While she was watching them, she didn't notice the two girls sneaking behind her.
"Banzai!"
Sae was pushed into the pool and almost had trouble coming back up. When she resurfaced, she saw Acchan and Takamina laughing at her. Acchan was wearing a blue two piece with red hearts on it and Takamina was wearing a yellow two piece with a smilely face on it.
"Hey what was that for!" Sae said.
"You need to get in the pool." Takamina said.
"So we pushed you in!" Acchan said.
"Thanks."
"Oh don't be so gloomy. The water is nice isn't it?"
"Yeah it is."
"See? Hey Takamina let's go on the slides!"
"Ok!"
"Hey don't run you two!"
"Let them have their fun."
Sae looked over and saw Jurina and Rena sitting on the side. They were both wearing black two pieces only Rena's had white flowers on it and Jurina's had red ones.
"Why don't you two get in the pool?" Sae asked.
"We will later. Right now we kind of just want to relax." Jurina said.
"That and I'm alergic to the chlorine. If it gets in my eyes they get puffy and I can't see anything." Rena said.
"Ahh that explains it. Make sure to tell Takamina and Acchan that so they don't end up pushing you in the pool."
"Oh they already know. I made sure it was very clear to them not to go near us."
"Alright sounds good."
Just then, Sae felt something grab her legs.
"Ahh!"
"Got you!"
Sae turned around and saw Sayaka in a purple two piece with hearts on them.
"Mou don't scare me like that!" Sae said.
"I was only having a little fun." Sayaka said.
"Still..."
"Hey how about we have a race. To one end and back. Loser has to wash the others back when we get to the hot spring."
"You're on."
"Rena, Jurina will you be our refs?"
"Sure."
"Yosh then let's go!"
Sae and Sayaka got out of the pool and over to the fast lanes. They positioned themselves to get ready. Then Rena counted down and when she said go, they took off. At first they were going at the same pace. But then Sae noticed Sayaka starting to get ahead of her. There was no way she was going to let Sayaka win and started to pick up the pace. When they reached the end, they both flipped turn at the same time.
"I need to go faster." Sae thought.
Sae started swimming with all her might and actually managed to get way in front of Sayaka. She was about to reach the end when someone jumped right in front of her. Sae had to stop and pull up to avoid breathing in water. When she came up, she saw Acchan staring at her.
"Acchan! *cough cough* what are you doing?" Sae said.
"Takamina was chasing me so I jumped in. More importantly are you ok?" Acchan said.
"Yeah I'm fine but thanks to you I lost the race."
"What?"
"Sae I won which means you have to wash my back!" Sayaka said in victory.
"Man no fair!"
At the hotspring, everyone was ready to jump in and relax after a fun day. Haruna was refusing to go in because she knew Yuko was going to be a pervert while Rena and Jurina decided to stay out because Rena was afraid of over heating. Acchan and Takamina were in the spring having a splash fight and Mayuyu and Yukirin were on the other side chatting. Sae was about to get in when Sayaka stopped her.
"Hey you lost the bet remember?" Sayaka said.
"Oh that's right."
Sae and Sayaka walked into the bath house and Sayaka sat on a stool while Sae sat behind her.
"Make sure to get it good." Sayaka said.
"Yeah yeah I know."
Sayaka started to take off her towel which immediately alerted Sae.
"Hey what are you doing?!!"
"You can't reach my back if my towel in the way."
"Oh you're right. Sorry."
It's not that Sae had a problem with it but she was kind of akward when it came to seeing people naked. She even blushes when she looks at herself naked.
"I'm waiting."
"Oh sorry."
Sae started lathering Sayaka's body with soap and then rinsed it soon after. She repeated it two more times before finally saying she was done. It wasn't as bad as she thought it was going to be.
"Ok now your turn."
"What?"
Sayaka started to turn around and Sae quickly closed her eyes to avoid seeing anything. She could feel Sayaka move around her and start washing her back.
"Why are you doing this?" Sae asked.
"Because you're my partner."
"I see."
"There all done. Now let's go get dried off."
"Hai"
Sae stood up with her eyes still closed and started heading to what she thought was the door.
"Sae look out"
Sayaka grabbed Sae and made her trip. Sae fell landing right on top of Sayaka.
"Ahh I'm sorry!"
"For god sake Sae opend our eyes."
"But you don't have your towel on!"
"Yes I do now open them."
Sae opened her eyes and saw Sayaka on the ground with a towel on rubbing her side.
"I'm sorry for making you fall." Sayaka said.
"I'm sorry for tripping on you." Sae said.
"Oh no it's fine. Let's get going."
"Ok. Oh by the way Sae..."
"Yeah?"
"Your towel came off."
"Eh?"
Sae looked down and saw her body without a towel facing Sayaka in full nake glory. Sae blushed and quickkly covered herself.
"Kya!"
"Don't worry I didn't see anything."
"Liar!"
"What's going on?!" Yuko came running in.
"Yuko why are you naked?!" Sae said.
"I don't know."
"Nevermind just put a towel on!" Sayaka said throwing a towel.
"Man could this get any worse?"
Around 10 everyone went into their rooms ready to go to sleep. Sae was sharing a room with Yuko because Haruna was complaining that Yuko was trying to touch her in her sleep.
"I'm turning off the lights." Sae said.
"Already? I'm not even tired yet!" Yuko said.
"I'm turning them off."
Sae turned off the lights and made her way over to her futon. She got in and started to fall asleep. But the Sae felt something crawl into her futon.
"Yuko? What are you doing?" Sae said.
"I'm used to sleeping next to someone." Yuko said.
"Get out!"
"No!"
The two started fighting with Sae basically kicking Yuko trying to get her out. But Yuko started rolling Sae around on the ground. In the middle of their fighting, someone opened the door and turned on the light. Sae looked over and saw a stunned Yukirin and Mayuyu. Sae wondered what they were stunnded at but when she looked down she realized why. During the stuggle some of Yuko's pajamas came off lose and part of her body was showing. Not to mention Sae was on top of her and they were both sweaty.
"It's not what you think!" Sae said.
"Right..."
"We're sorry for interrupting!" Yukirin said.
SNAP
"Did you just take a picture?" Yuko asked.
"Yeah and now I'm going to show it to Sayaka." Mayuyu said.
"Mayuyu stop!"
Mayuyu and Yukirin ran off before Sae could catch them. Sae could hear Haruna and Sayaka shout in the other room.
"Oh crap." Sae said.
"Run!"
Sae and Yuko bolted out the hall while being chased by their angry partners.
"Some vactaion this turned out to be!" Sae thought.
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Well there's chapter 22! Ahh vacations are nice aren't they? But in Sae's case I guess it wasn't. I'll let you readers decided what happend to Yuko and Sae. I hope everyone liked it and please look forward to the next chapter!
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Haha, I feel Sae's pain, I'm awkward with naked people too XD
Also Jurina is pretty scary...but I think Rena is still just a bit more scarier haha.
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:shock: Jurina is incredible...
Poor Sae, always got bad luck~
but she had good time with sayaka there~ :bath:
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Hihihi Jealous Kojiharu is not good to see xD
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Today's chapter is going to bring up something in Sayaka's past. Everyone thought she was normal when actually she has a dark secret she's been keeping from everyone. Want to fine out what it is? Well keep reading to find out! Enjoy.
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Chapter 23
"Sae we got another case. Let's go."
"Where to this time?"
"A small house in Akihabara." Sayaka said.
"Ok how many dead?" Sae asked.
"You'll find out when we get there."
When Sae and Sayaka arrived at the scene, there were tons of people outside. Sae had to practically fight her way through the crowd. When she got inside, she was overwhelmed with the stench of blood.
"My god what happened here?" Sae said.
"A family of four was murdered. The husband and wife were stabbed and the children were strangled." Sayaka said.
"How old were the children?"
"The oldest was ten and the youngest was eight."
"That's horrible. Who would do such a thing?"
"I don't know but whoever did is going to pay for it."
Just then Rena and Jurina showed up.
"Oh the poor souls." Rena said as she uncovered the bodies of the children.
"This guy has got some nerve." Jurina said.
"So is the cause of death accurate?" Sayaka asked.
"Yes. I see stangulation marks on both of their necks."
"Do you think we could get a print?"
"I don't know. We'll have to take it back to the lab for better analysis."
"Ok you do that. Sae take a look around and see if you can find anything."
Sae started looking but so far didn't find anything. But then she saw something placed on the table. It was a single piece of folded paper with a black feather on top of it. Sae unfolded the paper and writen in it was "your next Sayaka"
"Sayaka!"
"What?"
"Look!"
Sae handed Sayaka the note and she read it. Her face got a fearful expression on her face.
"Rena look at the children's right hand. Is there a cross carved in it?"
Rena checked their hands and her eyes widened when she saw it.
"Yes there is." Rena said revealing the hands of the two children.
Both of them had cross carved into their right hands.
"Sayaka what's going on?" Sae asked.
"I gotta go. Sae you finish up everything from here ok?"
Before Sae could say anything else, Sayaka already left.
"What's up with her?" Jurina asked.
"I don't know but for now Sae why don't you go back to head quarters and report what you found." Rena said.
"Oh right!"
Sae went down to the station and found Takamina playing with Acchan.
"Hey Takamina I need to tell you something."
"What is it?"
"I think Sayaka is in danger."
"What do you mean?" Takamina said.
"We went to a crime scene today where a family of four was murdered. We found a note saying Sayaka was next and there were crosses carved into the hands of the kids." Sae said.
Takamina stopped and looked up at Sae. She had a dark look on her face.
"Crosses? On the right hand?"
"Yeah. What does it mean?"
"I'll tell you later. For now I need to talk to Mariko."
Takamina got up and walked out leaving Acchan behind.
"What's going on?" Sae asked.
"Well I'm not suposed to tell you but go down to the archives and look for file 11011-6. You'll find your answers there." Acchan said.
Sae went down to the archives locker and found what she was looking for. She pulled out the box and opened it. In it was a newspaper from twenty years ago, a knife sealed in a bag, and pictures. Sae looked at the newspaper and started reading it.
"Family of five was murdered last night. Out of the five only the daughter survived. Four year old Akimoto Sayaka only escaped with a scratch on her hand that resembled a cross. Officers believe this could be the work of the imfamous serial killier known has Black Crow. He as yet to be arrested by the police and is still running around the streets of Tokyo killing as he pleases. Young Sayaka who was the only witness was in too much shock for the police to get a report from her. However the police recommend you keep all you windows and doors locked and have a gun nearby."
Sae looked at the pictures from the crime scene that were taken. There was a picture of the father who died on a chair, the mother who was dead on the couch, and two brothers who were side by side each other in their room. Then there was a picture of Sayaka when she was younger. Her eyes looked empty like everything just got blown away and now there was nothing left.
"My god. Why did she never tell me these things?"
"Because she it's too painful to bring up."
Sae looked over and saw Takamina staring at her.
"Twenty years ago Sayaka's family was murdered. This killer was on the loose until five years ago when Sayaka caught him." Takamina said.
"What?" Sae said.
"Five years ago before you showed up, Sayaka had a different partner. They got along great and worked hard. Then one day when they stumbled upon a case involving Black Crow, Sayaka went nuts trying to find him. Eventually she did at one point and caught him. But she lost her partner in the process of arresting him."
"And now he's back?"
"We don't know yet for sure. It could just be a copycat. Black Crow is in a maximum security facility where there is no way he could get out. But we are going to check just to make sure."
"I see. Do you know where Sayaka is now?"
"Yeah she just came in. Mariko is talking to her."
"I'm going to talk to her."
"You do that. Meanwhile I'm going to check on the prison."
Sae rushed upstairs to Mariko's office and found Sayaka sitting on a chair.
"Ah Sae it's good you showed up. I was about to call you." Mariko said.
"Is this about Black Crow?"
"Yes. Now please sit down."
Sae walked over and took a seat next to Sayaka. She didn't look good. Her face was pale and she looked too thin.
"For the next few days I want Sayaka to stay at your place." Mariko said.
"That's fine."
"Also, you two are not allowed to work on this case."
"What?!"
Sayaka stood up. She had anger in her eyes.
"I do not want your personal feeling getting in the way of your crime solving abilities. So therefore I'm handing the case over to Takamina and Acchan."
"This isn't fair! He's my responsibility so I should be the one to stop him."
"Sayaka control yourself. I know you're angry. But wasn't it this same anger that caused you to lose your previous partner?"
Sayaka came to a realization and sat back down.
"Good so then Sae it is your job to guard Sae with your life. Don't let her leave your sight."
"On it!"
Just then the phone started ringing. Mariko picked it up and answered. She gave short quick and answers and then hung up.
"That was Takamina with the report on Black Crow's location."
"And?"
"He broke out of jail two days ago."
Sayaka remained still with a blank expression on her face.
"Sae take her home."
"Yes ma'm."
Sae stood up and helped Sayaka walk out.
"Don't worry Sayaka I won't let this guy get anywhere near you." Sae said.
"Even if I have to put my life on the line."
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Well there's chapter 23! Sayaka is now in danger and it's up to Sae to protect her. But will she be able to with a mad serial killer on the lose? Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter. Let's just say that Sayaka isn't as safe as she thought she was.
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I hope nothing bad will happen to Sayaka and Sae
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Wow, starting a new story soon? :tama-laff: Can't wait to find out what it'll be about! I voted for Yukirin to be the next center because her over-the-top reactions are the best :rofl:
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Sayaka's past it so sad :fainted:
I hope nothing will happen to Sae :badluck:
Sae gentelman :cool1:
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Minna! Thank you for commenting as always. The votes are starting to rack up and so for it looks like Yukirin is in the lead. Let's see who ends up winning when I finish this story. This is chapter 24 and there are two chapters left to go. Let's see what happens to Sayaka. Enjoy!
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Chapter 24
There was another case involving Black Crow. He murdered another family and left no survivors. Sae was ordered to keep Sayaka away from it all. Sayaka was allowed to come into the office but she couldn't go out into the crime scene. Now Sayaka was just mopeing at her desk thinking about something. Sae couldn't bare to see Sayaka like this so she decided to do something.
"Sayaka come with me."
"Where are we going?"
"The lab."
Sae took Sayaka down to the lab where Mayuyu and Yukirin were.
"Hey Sayaka I heard what happened. You ok?" Yukirin asked.
"Yes I'm fine." Sayaka said.
"You sure don't look it." Mayuyu said.
"I was wondering if you guys could help me with Sayaka. She's really down so I was wondering if you guys could do something to help." Sae said.
"Well how about we give her a happy boost."
"A what?"
"Yukirin show them."
Yukirin walked over and showed Sae a smile vile of pink liquid.
"What is that?" Sayaka asked.
"It's hormones. Your emotions right now are sad and depressed. But when you injest these hormones, they'll wipe out the sadness and make you feel really happy."
"Isn't that what weed does?"
"It's not a drug! It's like an elixir."
"Still I am not taking some happy drug."
"Mayuyu hold her down."
"What?"
Mayuyu grabbed Sayaka's arms and held her back. Then Yukirin forced her mouth open and made her swallow the elixir. Sayaka fell to the ground and started shaking. Then she stood up and looked at Sae with a blank expression. But seconds later Sayaka got a huge smile on her face.
"Sayaka? How do you feel?" Yukirin asked.
"Like someone shot me with a rainbow and now there are unicorns flying in my brain!!" Sayaka said.
"Are you happy?"
"Yeah. I really am! I'm super super happy!"
"Uh Yukirin I think I you gave her too much." Mayuyu said.
"Yeah how long is she going to be like this?" Sae asked.
"I don't know. This is the first time I tried it out on a human."
"WHAT?!"
"Hey hey Sae let's go outside! It's so nice out and I just want to bask in the sunlight."
"Uhh ok. Yukirin figure out how to fix this by the time I get back please."
"I will do my best."
Sae was dragged out of the lab by Sayaka.
"Are you really going to start looking for a cure?" Mayuyu said.
"No. Not for a while. Now where were we?" Yukirin said.
"I believe you were about to handcuff me to your chair and take off my clothes."
"Oh. Well then let's continue."
At the park, Sayaka was running around like a little kid on the grass. Meanwhile Sae was on the side watching her. While she was watching Sayaka, Haruna and Yuko walked over.
"Hey we saw you guys and thought we should join." Haruna said.
"What's wrong with Sayaka?" Yuko asked.
"Yukirin gave her some happy drug and now she's all happy and stuff."
"Really? Well then I'm going to have fun. Nyannyan get the blanket set up!"
Yuko ran off and joined Sayaka in her merriment.
"We were hoping if we could have a picnic with just the four of us." Haruna said holding up a basket.
"That sounds like a great idea."
Sae, Sayaka, Haruna, and Yuko all sat down and ate on the blanket.
"This is really good." Sae said.
"Haruna your the best at cooking!" Sayaka said while hugging Haruna.
"Hey hands off my Nyannyan!" Yuko said.
"No way I like her hugging me than you." Haruna said.
"Nyannyan!"
"Sayaka come over her. I got some fried shrimp."
"Oh I want some!"
Sayaka crawled back over and snatched the shrimp.
"Man she's like a little kid." Yuko said.
"I like this Sayaka better. The old Sayaka was mean and strict." Haruna said.
"But then she get in my way when I'm trying to get close to Nyannyan!"
"So?"
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko was about two seconds away from crying. But then Haruna hugged her which made her stop tearing up.
"I will always love you Yuko. Don't you ever forget that."
"Nyannyan don't scare me like that!"
After the picnic, Yuko and Haurna left. Sayaka and Sae started walking in the park when Sayaka saw a swing set. She ran over to it and started swinging. Sae snuck up from behind and started pushing her.
"Higher push me higher mommy!"
"Mommy?"
That's when Sae realized Sayaka really was a little kid. The drug made her super happy by making her think she was a little kid again. That's the only time one is truly happy is when they are young and still innocent. When they're being protected from the horrors of the real world. And now Sayaka thinks Sae is her mother.
"Mommy can I have something to drink?" Sayaka asked.
"Sure uh sweety. Let me go get some."
Sae walked over to the vending machine and bought some juice. When she got back, she saw something she thought she'd never see. There standing before her was Takamina piggy back riding on Takamina. Takamina looked like she was about to topple over because Sayaka was a lot larger than she thought she was.
"Faster!" Sayaka said.
"Get off Takamina!" Acchan said.
"What is going on?"
Before Sae could do anything Acchan grabbed Sayaka and threw her off Takamina. Sayaka hit the ground hard and started crying soon after.
"Ahh Sayaka don't cry. Here have some juice."
"Ok mommy."
"Care to explain what's going on?" Takamina said.
"Yukirin gave Sayaka some happy drug that made her think she's a little kid. I'm guessing six years old." Sae said.
"So that's why she was so touchy around you." Acchan said.
"Yeah and I'm still waiting for Yukirin on that cure."
"She should be done by now. How about you head back and check."
"Ok. Sayaka let's go. There's something I want to show you."
"Ok mommy. Byebye bow lady! Byebye mean lady!"
"Hey!"
When Sae and Sayaka arrived at the lab, it was a complete mess. Then out of nowhere Yukirin came out carrying Mayuyu on her back.
"What's going on?" Sae asked.
"Mayuyu got hold of the same drug I used on Sayaka and now she's acting like this." Yukirin said.
"Mamarin I'm hungry!" Mayuyu said.
"I'll be with you in a minute sweety. Play with Sayaka for a little."
"So have you made a cure yet?"
"Yes I have. Only Mayuyu has been resistant. But I don't think Sayaka will have a problem. Here."
Yukirin handed Sae one single gummy candy.
"Sayaka you want some candy?"
"Yeah!"
"Here you go!"
Sayaka ate the candy and within seconds she was back to normal.
"Sae what's goin on? Why am I sitting on the gound like this?"
"Long story short, you were really cute when you were little." Sae said.
"Ahh shut up Sae!"
Sayaka ran out of the room.
"Mamarin I'm sleepy."
"Let's go take a nap together then."
"Uh aren't you going to try to fix Mayuyu too?"
"I will later. Right now I'm tried and could use a nap. Besides it's nice being with Mayuyu when she was little."
"Ok. I'm going to look for Sayaka now. Have fun."
Sae ran out of the lab and started looking for Sayaka. But she wasn't anywhere to be found. Her car was still in the parking lot but she was no where to be found. She looked for Sayaka for hours checking every room on every floor but still had no luck.
"Hey Takamina have you seen Sayaka? I can't find her."
"No I haven't. But you better find her soon."
"Uh you guys I think I found her."
Sae looked over and saw Acchan pointing at the TV. There was a news caster on it and next to her was a picture of Sayaka.
"This just in, police officer Akimoto Sayaka has been taken hostage and is now being held at the top of Tokyo Tower with a bomb strapped to her. Officals say they are already working on trying to negotiate with the group responsible for this act but so far are getting nowhere."
"Sayaka is at Tokyo Tower!"
Just then Mariko came out of her office.
"I want everyone to get ready. And when I say everyone I mean everyone. We're heading out!"
"Oh my god Sayaka. Hang in there I'm coming for you!"
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Sae is now on the rescue along with the rest of the team to get Sayaka back. Will they succed? Well wait for the next chapter and find out what happens. Please tell me what you think!
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"Are you really going to start looking for a cure?" Mayuyu said.
"No. Not for a while. Now where were we?" Yukirin said.
"I believe you were about to handcuff me to your chair and take off my clothes."
"Oh. Well then let's continue." :hehehe: :luvluv1: :on lol: :shy2:
....I want to know what happened........and Mayu kid was sooooooo sweet!!!!! :shy1: :luvluv1: :shifty: :on bleed:
of course Yuki liked Mayu kid~ so cute! but if she is her mother then she cant do stuff with her.....it doesnt matter! she can still do!!!!!!!! .......perv......Yuuki perv!!!noooooooooooooooo
Yuuki-me!
Yuki-Kashiwagi Yuki
also my Yuuki -courage
and Yuki -snow...
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how exciting you make the best stories
please update soon thanks
I liked when sayaka acted like baby
and I also really liked mayu
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wow Sayaka and Mayu like a kid :shy2:
Yukirin scary mother :stuffed:
cantinue it's good :on GJ:
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Minna! I'm sorry if it seems like I'm updating WAY TOO FAST but I just REALLY want to finish this story so I can start the next one. So far Yukirin is in the lead so this is your last chance Atsumina fans to submit your votes. But for now, on wards! And once again, I'm sorry if I'm updating too fast. 26 will be the last chapter. Enjoy!
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Chapter 25
"Everyone gear up. We're heading out."
Sae grabbed all the weapons she thought she needed. She was preparing for a war and wasn't leaving until she got Sayaka back. Everyone loaded into a car and headed out for Tokyo Tower.
Sayaka is not trapped at the top of Tokyo Tower with a bomb strapped to her. Sae and the team needed to get up there before it was too late. Everyone was ready to move and get their fellow officer back.
"Alright everyone we need to get in there quickly. Normaly we'd use a helicopter but it's too risky so we're going to have to use the stairs." Takamina said.
"We're going to have to climb all 48 flights of stairs?" Acchan said.
"Yes Acchan now let's move. We don't have much time."
"I hate stairs."
"Just shut up and run!"
Everyone started running up the stairs at full speed. Around the tenth floor, they ran into trouble. Guards appeared and started firing at everyone.
"Acchan let's get these guys. Everyone else keep moving!" Takamina said.
"Yay! I was getting tired."
"You got the guns?'
"Yep!"
"Then let's go!"
Takamina and Acchan started shooting at every guy they saw. Acchan looked like she was actually dancing while shooting with the way she moved while Takamina looked like a gangster with the way she was firing while holding the gun side ways.
"Acchan be careful!"
"I am!"
"Then why are you skipping on top of the dead bodies?"
"They're like stepping stones for me. Why are you shooting your gun sideways?"
"Because it feels cool!"
Takamina and Acchan cleared a way for everyone else to get thorugh. Sae could hear Acchan laughing like crazy and Takamina throwing guys over the edge. They climbed another ten floors and when they reached twenty, there were more guards.
"Let's splatter their guts shall we?" Rena said.
"With pleasure." Jurina said.
"Die!"
Jurina pulled out her daggers and Rena pulled out a katana. Sae watched them slice and dice every guy there. It was like a butcher shop only worse. At one point Sae saw a decapitated head fly over.
"That's one for me!" Rena said.
"And that's two for me!" Jurina said as she took off two heads at the same time.
Both Jurina and Rena weilded their baldes with skill as if they were born back in the Edo period and they were the masters of their weapons. But Sae could see where Jurina's military training came in and where Rena's Yakuza blood came in. Sae watched Jurina take out five guys in less than ten seconds just by running past them.
"Take that you pieces of scum."
Sae also watched Rena take out ten guys and with the last one she took her time and didn't kill him instantly. She dug her sword deep into the guys stomach and twisted it around.
"You like that huh? You like it don't ya!"
"Let's keep moving." Yukirin said.
Sae ran past the blood bath that was happening behind them. They climbed another ten floors before they reached more guards.
"We got this. Mayuyu attack mode go!"
"Attack mode activated."
Mayuyu's eyes glowed red and she started to move incredibly fast and became super strong. Sae literally saw a guy's head explode when Mayuyu punched him. But Mayuyu wasn't the only scary one. Yukirin pulled out what looked like a ray gun you see in space movies. Turns out it was a ray gun and when she fired, it shot a powerful laser blasting through three guys in a row.
"Yukirin super blaster!"
"Right!"
Yukirin ran over to Mayuyu and plugged her ray gun into Mayuyu. The gun started to charge and withing seconds, it shoot a blast as big as a whale and vaporized almost all the guys and the building across the tower.
"Let's move!" Yuko said.
"We're almost there!" Haurna said.
Sae made it up to floor fourty and she was so close to Sayaka. But then there was more trouble.
"I'll handle these guys. Yuko you go with Sae and help her disarm the bomb." Haruna said.
"No I"m not leaving without my Nyannyan!" Yuko said.
"Just go! I'll be fine."
"But-"
Yuko was cut off by the sound of gun fire.
"Hey we're talking here you jerks!"
Haruna pulled out two rocket launchers and started firing them at the same time. Then she pulled out a grenade launcher and started shooting grenades like they do with T-shirt guns. But that wasn't all. Haruna pulled out a small saw blade attachted to a chain. She flipped the saw blade on and started started swinging the chain around taking out several heads.
"Ahh that's my Nyannyan."
"Yuko let's go."
Sae and Yuko made it all the way to the 48th floor. There tied to a beam with a ton of bombs strapped around her was Sayaka. And there standing in front of her were like fifty guards.
"We'll never make it to her in time!"
"Yes you will!"
Just then Mairko jumped down from out of nowhere.
"Need some help?"
"MARIKO!"
"You two get to Sayaka. I'll handle these guys. Gachapin cover me."
"Roger!"
Sae didn't see Miichan but she heard sniper fire and took out one guy. Then Mariko started to get to work. There was a reason Mariko was the boss and now Sae knew why. Sae watched Mariko dodge every bullet and every punch thrown at her. Mariko fought her way through the guys with incredible skill and Miichan was nailing every target she fired at.
"Oi get going you two!"
"Right!"
Sae and Miichan ran all the way over to Sayaka.
"Sayaka!"
"Sae!"
"Hang on Sayaka we'll get you out of here."
Yuko started to work on getting the bomb off Sayaka.
"I thought I'd never see you agian." Sayaka said.
"Hey I'm your partner. There's no way I'd leave you." Sae said.
"I got it!"
Yuko took off the bomb and chucked it right at the herd of guys. It exploded and all the guys were taken out instantly.
"Hey watch it!" Mariko said.
"Sorry!" Yuko said.
Sayaka rushed over and hugged Sae.
"I was so scared."
"There, there everything is ok now."
"Oh? I don't think so."
Sae and Sayaka looked over and saw a man dressed in all black.
"Crow."
"Hello Sayaka. Long time no see. How are the parents? Oh wait that's right. Their dead."
"You-"
Sayaka started to charge at Crow but then he quickly moved out of the way. Then he made his way around, grabbed her from behind and pulled out a gun.
"You haven't changed at all since I last saw you." Crow said.
"I'll kill you!" Sayaka said.
"Ah ah I don't think so. If you move, I'll blow your head off."
"You wouldn't dare."
"Oh but I would."
"Hey don't forget about me."
Mariko punched Crow in the face and he let go of Sayaka for a minute. Sayaka took this chance and elbowed crow in the gut. But Sayaka wasn't quick enough to get away. Crow stabbed Mariko in the leg making her fall and he grabbed Sae again.
"Mariko!" Yuko said as she ran over to help her.
"I don't think you're going anywhere."
"Sayaka!"
"Sae!"
"This will be just like last time. I'm going to have fun torturing you."
"Don't you dare harm her!" Sae said.
"Oh but I will. And you will be here to watch."
Crow loaded the gun and aimed it right at Sayaka's head. Then right when he was about to shoot, Sae shouted,
"Let's make a deal!"
"Oh? And what kind of deal?" Crow said.
"You and me one and one. No guns but you can use knives. If I win Sayaka goes free and you go back to jail."
"And if I win?"
"You can take me and do whatever you want."
"Sae no!"
"Deal!"
Crow tied Sayaka to a nearby pole and then tossed his gun to the side. He pulled out a knife and readied himself.
"Sae here!"
Mariko tossed the knife that was previously in her leg.
"Now then let's get started shall we?"
"Bring it."
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Oh my gosh what is going to happen to Sae?! Will she win or lose? The next chapter is going to be the last chapter so look forward to another epic battle! Please tell me what you think and again, I'm sorry if I'm updating too fast.
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wow so dangerous :badluck:
sae don't loose :pleeease:
I can't wait for the next chapteter and fic :on gay:
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that fast if fast updates please let me know that this is your other story :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
I hope you finish today is very exciting to see you write :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
I hope that sae is well and nothing happens :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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"Mamarin I'm sleepy."
"Let's go take a nap together then."
Little Mayuyu is the most adorable thing ever! I can understand why Yukirin is in no hurry to fix her. Mamarin and little Mayuyu~ :heart:
Though it's kind of funny how and why the smart Mayuyu ended up taking the happy drug when they were in the middle of some SM :lol:
Then why are you skipping on top of the dead bodies?"
"They're like stepping stones for me. Why are you shooting your gun sideways?"
"Because it feels cool!"
AtsuMina forever the baka couple :doh:
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Minna! This is my final chapter! After this, I'm going to change the forum name back to The Mad House but also have Genking Deka on it as well. This is the final battle. What will happen to Sae? Well read more to find out. Enjoy!
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Chapter 26
"Let's get started then shall we?"
"Bring it."
Sae made the first move and went at Crow with full power. She swung but missed and Crow counter attacked but also missed. Then Crow tried to stab from above but Sae ran and struck below cutting his side.
"That's one for me!" Sae said.
Crow turned around and quickly swung at Sae's arm cutting it.
"And that's one for me." Crow said.
Sae tried stabbing at his legs but he was too fast and she ended up getting cut again. But Sae wasn't going to give easily and managed to cut Crows leg. Sae had to think of a new stradegy so she tried backing up a little. But Crow was right on her and wasn't holding back. Sae was able to block most of his attacks although there were some that hit. Sae managed to back away far enough where she was able to kick the blade out of Crow's hand.
"You're mine!"
"I don't think so."
Crow knocked the blade out of Sae's hand sending it flying to the side. Now it was just hand to hand combat. Sae had to remember everything she was taught at back at the academy. However she thought it wouldn't be useful since Crow looked like he knew everything in the book.
"Ready to give up yet?"
"Not even close."
Sae threw a bunch but missed and Crow nailed her right in the stomach. Sae didn't even have time to recover because Crow came at her with another punch right to face. Before Crow could pull back, Sae grabbed his arm and pulled him towards her. Then she returned a favor and punched Crow right in the face.
"Not bad." Crow said spitting out some blood.
"As so you." Sae said wiping blood off her face.
This time Crow attacked from below and tripped Sae over. He got on top of her and started to strangle her.
"Looks like I'm going to win."
Sae wasn't going to let Crow win. She reached into her skirt and pulled out a stun gun. She took it and stabbed Crow right in the side zapping him. Crow got off and rolled over.
"Now it's my turn."
Sae got on top of Crow and started to strangle him. It looked like Sae was going to win but then Crow pulled out another knife and stabbed Sae's leg. Sae got off him which gave him just enough time to crawl over and grab his knife. Crow turned around and was about to attack Sae but then he froze at the sight of Sae's blade right at his neck.
"You give up now?" Sae said.
"Nope."
Crow ducked and attacked Sae's legs again. He missed this time and Sae attacked his arms and managed to slash one of them. But then Crow came at her and instead of heading straight at her, he jumped high into the air. Sae didn't know where he went but she was on high alert.
"Haha catch me if you can."
"Be careful Sae! This is how he got my partents." Sayaka said.
Sae waited for Crow to attack but still couldn't see him. Then out of nowhere she felt something cut her leg. Sae swung where the attack came from but only hit air. Once again she was cut and this time on the back. This process kept repeating several times with her being slashed and still missing everytime she tried to attack. Sae was starting to get weak from all the blood she lost. She thought she wasn't going to last long.
"You're almost done." Crow said.
"Then once your done, I'll finish off what I left off with Sayaka."
This made Sae snap and a whole new feeling bursted inside her. Right when Crow was attacking, Sae used her arm and caught the blade. The knife was embedded deep in Sae's arm and there was no way Crow was going to take it out. Sae grabbed Crow and gave him a powerful punch to the face. Then she stepped on his chest and pressed hard until she heard the sound of his ribs breaking.
"I'm not letting you do touch Sayaka." Sae said in a dark tone.
Sae took her knife and cut his neck on one of the main arteries. He would bleed to death in a matter of seconds.
"Game over. I win."
Sae got off Crow and walked over to Sayaka. She untied her and as soon as she did, Sayaka hugged her.
"I can't believe it. You won!" Sayaka said.
"I can't either." Sae said.
"Does it hurt?"
"This?"
Sae held up her arm with the knife still in it.
"Actually it doesn't. But I bet it will in the morning. All well, nothing Rena can fix." Sae said.
"I'm glad you're alive. I can't believe you'd be willing to sacrifice yourself for me like that." Sayaka said.
"I would do anything for my partner."
"You really are the best partner ever."
While the two were laughing, they didn't even notice Crow slowly getting up with one hand covering his hand while the other was holding a knife. Sae didn't see him but Sayaka did. Right when Crow was about to stab Sae, Sayaka got in front of her.
"Sae look out!"
Crow attacked and stabbed Sayaka right in the chest. Sayaka collapsed and Sae sat there watching in horror.
"Sayaka! You bastard!"
Sae grabbed the gun her had thrown to the side and shot Crow seven times in the chest. Then she made sure he was dead by shooting him in the head.
"Sayaka!"
Sae rushed back over to Sayaka who was bleeding a lot.
"Hang in there Sayaka we'll get you help just stay with me." Sae said with tears running down her eyes.
"Sae.... I'm sorry..." Sayaka weakly said.
"Shut up stupid! Don't talk. Just stay with me. Someone help!"
"Sae.. I.. I love you."
Tears were coming out in buckets now.
"I love you too Sayaka. I always have."
"Really? That's great."
Sayaka fell passed out and Sae couldn't feel a pulse.
"SAYAKA!!!"
All in one big rush, Sae's body felt weak. All the energy and strength she had before left and now her body turned into a noodle. Sae slowly started to fade into unconsciousness. Right before she passed out, she couldn't help but feel something being torn out of her heart. That thing was Sayaka because she was gone now and was never coming back.
"Sayaka...."
When Sae woke up, she found herself in a hospital bed. A nurse was replacing her IV bag when she saw Sae wake up. She rushed out and soon after everyone from the office came in.
"Sae!" the all said.
"What happened?" Sae said.
"We had to rush you to the emergnecy room to get surgery. You had major blood loss and needed a blood transfusion desperately." Rena said.
"I see. What happened to Crow?"
"We had his body removed and sent to a crematorium. He won't be coming back any time soon." Takamina said.
"That's good to here. So what happend to Sayaka?"
Everyone was silent for a moment. They all had dark looks on their faces. Tears started to run down Sae's face as images from earlier started flashing through her mind. She remembered Sayaka protecting her and getting stabbed. She remembered watching Sayaka get stabbed in the chest and not finding a pulse. It was clear to Sae that Sayaka was no longer with her. But then Yukirin walked over to a curtain next to Sae's bed.
"Why don't you ask her yourself."
Yukirin opened the curtain and there was Sayaka sleeping.
"Sayaka!"
Sayaka opened her eyes and saw Sae.
"Oh hey Sae."
"Sayaka..."
Sae wanted to get up and hug her but her injuries prevented her from doing so.
"What happend. I thought you were dead!" Sae said.
"I did too. Turns our Crow didn't hit anything vital. Although he was inches away from hitting my heart. Any closer and I would've been dead for sure." Sayaka said.
"I'm so happy."
"So that now that you two are alive. You recover soon and come back to the office." Miichan said.
"We'll be waiting for you." Jurina said.
"We still have a lot of work to do." Yuko and Haruna said.
"And when you two get back we'll have a huge party!" Acchan said.
"That sounds great you guys."
"Good then we'll be leaving now." Mariko said.
Everyone left the room leaving Sae and Sayaka alone.
"Hey Sae.." Sayaka said.
"Yeah?" Sae said.
"Did you really mean it when you said you loved me?"
At first Sae didn't even remember herself saying that. But then it all came back to her and Sae started blush.
"Well yeah I did. But I thought you weren't serious." Sae said.
"Uh Sae I thought I was going to die. I was dead serious." Sayaka said.
"Was that supposed to be a joke?"
"No."
"Ok just checking."
"So what's your answer? Do you seriously love me?"
Sae paused for a moment and thought about it. Then she smiled and reached out to grab Sayaka's hand.
"Yes Sayaka I do love you."
"Good then I officially declare ourselfs lovers."
"That's wonderful."
"CONGRATULATIONS!"
"Yuko!"
"It's about time you guys finally came out. Everyone was waiting for you. See?"
Yuko opened up the blinds and saw everyone's face pressed up against the glass. Yuko gave them a heart symbol and they all started cheering outside.
"Man you guys are really something." Sayaka said.
"So when are you guys having the wedding. Oh are you going to have kids?" Yuko said.
"Wedding? Kids? Not let get too far now Yuko. Sae and I just got into this relationship so don't ruin it for us."
"But I really want kids! Nyanyan and I both want them but neither one of us wants to be the one to have the baby."
"Well for now we're not going to worry about it. But mabe later in the future."
"Ehh?"
Sae stared at Sayaka who was madly blushing.
"Oh Sayaka you animal!"
"I think it would be cute having a little me or Sayaka running around." Sae said.
"See even Sae agrees. You gotta have kids now!"
"Well..."
As Sae watched Sayaka acting like a school girl, Sae couldn't help but laugh inside. Her partner was alive and now they are lovers. This was the start of a new chapter in her life and who knows, maybe something new will come out of it.
THE END
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Thank you everyone so much for reading the story which has now come to an end! But don't worry because a new one is coming up real soon. So far it looks like Yukirin is the winner so it's obvious who will be the next center. But there's still a chance to get in your last votes. Again thank you so much everyone for reading and now all good things must come to an end. Byebye!
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:jphip: :jphip: thanks for this story I really liked
hopefully you can start the other thanks for update
are the maximum :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Ahhhh. Sae is so cool.
I can't wait for the new story though, I accidenly voted for Acchan when I meant to vote for Yukirin lol. Ah well it seems like she's about to win anyways. Well whoever ends up wining I can't wait to read it regardless.
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Now that Sae and Sayaka are official, she better stop lusting after Yukirin. If not, I'm sure she will face the wrath of a certain gorilla and not just the cyborg :lol:
It's been a crazy fun ride with Genking Deka. Thanks so much for the story! I'll be looking forward to your next Yukirin-centered story eagerly! :deco:
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Your updates are so fast I finally caught up!! It's fun to read all these crazy people through Sae's lens. Anyway, Saeyaka are so cute here, Acchan is a bit ditzy lol
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Since again, it's updated in an amazingly spectacular super-fast rate, I decided to comment after this series reached its ending. :P
So, SaeYaka --> romantically rocks!!! :wub:
From the very beginning of the series I was already feeling 'hontou ni ureshii' that you made my #1 OTP (yes, they actually are!) as the main pairing, despite you took the similar pattern as The Mad House in later storytelling. :D Hehe... tbh I was also worried and getting a bit negative too about SaeYaka getting constantly shifted out of the spotlight since you were that super-generous with the share of spotlight for each pairing. :nervous
But that's okay! My 'hontou ni ureshii' feeling was still there and bloomed more each time SaeYaka's relationship stepped into a higher level during the series' run, and their scenes in the final chapter had just strengthened it more. In the end, official SaeYaka is certainly a superb delight. :inlove:
Putting it in short, Genking Deka + Twin Towers love is :heart: :twothumbs :heart: .
Thank you for your time and effort, miyumi-san! :D Good luck for the next story. Although I voted for Mayuyu, a Yukirin-centric story is also not to miss. :D
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i really really REALLY LOVE ur fic!!!
:luvluv1: :luvluv2: :luvluv1:
and im looking forward to your next UPDATE!!
:nya: :nya:
thank you!!!
:kneelbow: :kneelbow:
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wow happy end :hee:
I can't wait for the next Fic and Yukirin is the center :luvluv2:
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Woohoo!!! I like fight scene!!!
Yay wedding and kids!!! All of them have to do it!!! Hehe
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thanks for the great fics :) its been really interesting!!
keep up the good work :D :twothumbs
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:k-crazy: The last chapter was tense so much action! and you never failed me with their crazy attacking mode.
I'm imaging Rena in her samurai outfit while Jurina is in her military a la Metal Gear Solid.
Mayu and Yukirin! LoL cyborg mode ON!
Haruna manages to beat them by herself well there's many grenades and missiles and stuff so no worry there.
MariMii so cool! Miichan as a sniper! :thumbsup
The epic one on one battle between Sae&The Crow... :k-sad:
Hey happy ending is what's matter for me LoL
Thank you very much for your awesome fic!
Looking forward to a new fic with (Yukirin)? interesting!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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you're super duper awesome! :mon thumb: always on track, never runs out on ideas. you're genius! :mon geek: thank you for your stories! i love you and your stories! :mon kissy: keep up with the good work! :mon yeah:
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Finally finished to read Mad House! It was awsome! As I said before, you are really criative *.* and I like that!
Everyone was so funny and crazy. And the battle scenes were exiting!
I had so much fun reading Mad House! Thaaaanks \o/
When I finish Genkin Deka I edit my coment o/
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ahhh all your fics are really good and making the girls total badasses just makes it all the better :deco: :deco:
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This is one of the craziest story I'd ever read XD XD XD XD
But I love it so much, especially Mad House :deco: :deco:
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I like both of your fanfics! But I prefer "The Mad House" fanfic more....it made me cry.... :mon angel:
I read "The Mad House" more than 5 times XD i dont know why but it makes me want to work as nurse at mental hospital :mon sweat:
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GENKING DEKA s2 pweaaase~~
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dude mad house is hilarious :w00t: i read it in one day :shocked literally it was soo funny my favorite was always sae and since ive seen how happy go lucky she actually is in real life i was able to believe that she can go crazy when sugar high she was hilarious!!! :w00t: you my friend have an amazing imagination ive never seen anyone with such an amazing writting skills :cow: i mean ive been a fan of fanfiction.net for years and finally came across this place by accident since i barely got into akb48 last year and i went through alot of fanfics here that were well...could have been better :nervous and let me tell you your up there with my fav author immo you are my second fav congrats :thumbsup :bow: cant wait to see more of what you got :thumbsup
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Takamina you can't spoil acchan she will never get well or are u just wanting to keep her by ur side
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Nee, nee, Miyu~, season 2 of Genking Deka? Pweaze?
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just found this fanfic...
it was a great fanfic...!!!
thank you for the hard work
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Just found and finally finish read this fanfic :sweatdrop:
I really Like the story, and from now on I will search and read your fanfic more often :thumbsup
Thanks for your working ;)
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Saeyaka Saikou!!!!!!
Sae is really a genking