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Title: CONTRACT - chapter 19 (AtsuMina) 02/09/2014
Post by: Keisthename on July 03, 2012, 03:47:59 PM

Hello everyone.. I'm just trying my luck here.. I'm so inspired with everyone's stories in here.. everyone is sooo great I admire every authors in here. Whew.. I hope I made some justice with this story..  :err:

This is my first fan -fic.. and I don't know why I stuck myself in making a long one for my first try. LOL.. It's just that ideas are coming out of my head..which lead me to make this kind of story..  :badluck:

Forgive me if you found errors here [grammar, and if it's confusing??]  :bigdeal:  .. I already made the chapter 2 for this.. But if I don't get great feedback on this.. maybe I'll stop updating.. hehe I'll just try on this one.. Let me know if you're interested okay? So I can continue and post the Chapter 2 right away  :on freeze:

CONTRACT

Chapter 1

 “Minami! Let’s get married!”

“Okay!”

“Really? Iyaaaay!!” The ace smiled happily like she won jackpot on a lottery. But she can see her best friend doing something else gives her the thought that she’s not on her right mind so she agreed with her which make her feel a bit sad and the smile earlier just disappeared by bit.

“Are you listening to me, Minami?” pinching the cheeks of her best friend who’s still writing something on the paper.

“Un” she nods in agreement but truthfully she did not know what she just heard earlier.

 “I will not let you go back on this! I’ll definitely tear your body apart if you do!!” She said jokingly yet she’s giggling.

TakaMina is serious doing her special project for school, if she did not make it on the deadline she’ll definitely fail this school year. She’s not really airheaded but she does lots of things like athletic competitions which make her miss classes.

“Ne! Minami! Listen to me! Will you promise me that you’ll definitely do what you said just earlier? PLEEEAASE!” The ace hugged TakaMina’s back while she’s writing, wiggling her cheeks to the back of her friend.

“Ah Acchan stop doing that, I’m doing something you know. If I don’t pass this I’m definitely dead.” She said while imagining herself in that situation. Fail expressions from her face are scattered everywhere.

“Eh! Minami! Promise me first!” Pouting while hugging her friend tighter

TakaMina suddenly felt that tighter hug from the friend, she then now turn around to face her. “Okay! Okay I promise Acchan!” Still not knowing what she made as a promise, they are now looking at each other.

“Can you stop calling me Acchan! We’re not kids anymore Minami!”

“Eh? But I’m used to it already!”

“You don’t want to call your wife that childhood nickname, do you?” She said while raising her eyebrow

“Wife? W-what wife? Whose wife?” Fail expression marked on her face again.

“mou~!!!! Minami!!!! You agreed with me earlier right??”

“Huh? What did I agreed on?”

As expected Atsuko was right that her friend was not on her right mind to agree on her, yet knowing that she still pushes it. “What am I doing, thinking that she’ll definitely take my proposal.UGH!” She thought while tears are forming her eyes. She turned around and hugged her knees close to her chest. TakaMina is now facing the back of Atsuko.

“Acchan!” No response to her.

“Ne, Are you mad?” Still in silence.

“I’m sorry, I was just really busy with my special project. My parents would really kill me if they found out I failed a subject.” No response.

Takamina felt so guilty now “Okay Acch--- ah… Atsuko, just tell me what you just said earlier and I promise I will agree on it no matter what!” She said not knowing what she just told her friend, she does not know she’s going to agree on marriage with her friend.

Hearing that Atsuko smiled to herself she can feel her heart beating so fast. She take a hold of herself and looked at Takamina

“Are you sure? No matter what it is, you’ll agree with it?”

“Yes! If that’ll make you feel better”

“You sounded like you’re just being pushed here”

“No I’m not! I’m willing to do anything to make you feel better”

Acchan blushed like a tomato, while takamina was still clueless seeing her friend becoming red.

“Ne Atsuko, are you alright?”

“Un”

“So what is again that I agreed on earlier?”

“I told you to marry me and you agreed on it” She said straightforwardly, you can see sincerity and full of seriousness.

“Eh?????!!! W-w-wwwhhaaat?” Fail facial expressions raining in the room from her.


“Ne! are you serious, Acchan?!  I mean Atsuko?

Hearing TakaMina saying her nickname first and suddenly followed by her first name make Acchan giggled. She smiled and now holding her soft laughter.

“Minami, you’re such a good girl. Yes I want you to call me by my first name always.”

“I’m not used to it though, so I’ll make mistake like this” She blushed, she felt it’s embarrassing mistake.

“So you’ll call me Atsuko by now because you really agreed to become my husband?” She giggled, smile forming her face. “So beautiful” Minami thought to herself while witnessing that smile from her friend, then she shook her head, “what am I thinking?” she gulped.

“Acch—atsuko! Erm, I don’t think you know what you are talking about.”

“What do you mean? I don’t know it? It’s about marriage”

“exactly, marriage you don’t know a thing about it. It’s a serious thing!”

“What is the thing I don’t know about it? If it’s a serious thing, don’t you think I’m serious enough? I’m serious Minami!”

“B-but.. marriage is for both people who love each other… and besides we’re not on the right age to do that and we are both g-girls!” She said nervously the last line. “Yeah girls” she thought to herself.”

“I see, so you don’t love me Minami? After these 7 years that we’ve been together?” She said while forming those sad tears again on her eyes.

“No! It’s not like that Atsuko! I love you! but with all this 7 years I’ve loved you as my best friend remember? And I don’t really know what love for a couple is like, and we’re both girls.”

“Yeah right, so what if we are both girls? Can girls can’t love each other? Are we outcasts in this society? If both boys and girls can love each other why cant both girls or both boys do the same?!!” she said angrily
“Calm down Atsuko. I  know why you are like this”

“Yeah like you know everything about me, you don’t even know what my true feelings are! BakaMina!!”
TakaMina sighed. Then Atsuko get herself on her feet and run away from TakaMina’s room, silence were on the room. She now felt that her friend really leaved her room, slowly everything came to her mind. “W-waait! Atsuko!” She opened the door hurried on the living room and saw Atsuko’s mark her sudden leave as the main entrance was leaved wide open.

TakaMina suddenly felt the sadness all over her body. The atmosphere is now heavy.

FLASHBACK

Maeda Residence

“Acchan, we are really sorry for forcing you on a fixed marriage with Matsumoto’s only son. It’s the only thing we could think of to repay all our debts to them. We’re really sorry.” Said by Atsuko’s father sadly as he’s holding his tears.

“It’s okay, I guess I’m born to be a payment for something I did not do right? What can I do”

“Please my daughter, I’m begging for your forgiveness.”

“Yeah right”

“Please forgive your father about this Acchan, we’re really sorry. If you want we’ll just stop this wedding right away” Her mom says in guiltiness

“Yeah right mom and dad. Say that to me so I’ll be guiltier, if you stop this wedding what will happen to you guys? Go in jail? Or those guys will embarrass the two of you in public.” She screamed as tears falling from her eyes.

“We’re sorry Acchan”

“It’s okay, I’m ready.” She gulped, her heart is aching too much.

~END OF FLASHBACK~


At the Preparation of the ENGAGEMENT DAY

The family of Matsumoto and Maeda came first at the ceremony to be fully celebrated after an hour, few guests are now coming bit by bit. They are all in beautiful dresses and tuxedos, the venue was really luxurious and people invited on the list are well known to the society. While everyone’s lurking around the beautiful venue and others busy with other preparation on the corner of the venue there was Atsuko and Matsumoto talking.

“I’m glad your parents approved my offer, Acchan” Matsumoto smiled.

“You’re so beautiful in your white dress, soon you’ll be mine Atsuko ..should I call you that? It’s much better”

Atsuko was really pissed off, she knows that the man was really really happy. They’ve known each other for a long time now, the man is really eager on her. He confessed to her but she let her down many times for reasoning that she has someone else already.

“Did you plan this?” Atsuko asked.

“Of course not! It’s not my fault your parents are that hungry with money.” Matsumoto smirked.

“How could you!!!” when Acchan was about to slap his face the guy stopped her. “Ohoho not so fast Atsuko, you’ll regret this if you dare to touch my handsome face. You know that I love you but please don’t embarrass me in public coz I don’t know what I can do to you.” He said with serious eyes.

“Get your hands off me!!” Acchan managed to get her hand back away from Matsumoto. She ran fast as she could and she bumped into someone at the door.

~~BAAAM~~

Atsuko rubbed her shoulders part which hit the person in front of her trying to fade the pain. She looked up and saw the person in front of her. Her eyes widened as she can’t believe who’s in front of her.


 "Mi-- Minami!!"

Minami is in suit of a tuxedo, seeing her in that man's clothing made Acchan's heart beat so fast. It's trying to get off her chest now. She can feel the temperature rising from her body.

"I'm sorry Atsuko" She said while offering her hands to help Acchan. Acchan pats her hand on the one who offered her, she gets back on her feet and was shocked the moment TakaMina placed a kiss on her hand. She was blushing like a tomato.

As Matsumoto saw that scene, he made his way hurriedly on the two. "Hey! She's my soon to be wife, how could you do that on our celebration!" He said as he breaks the holding hands of the two.
She gives a grope on TakaMina's collar, "Get off you midget. Who are you touching her?" He said angrily as he was about to kill someone.

Acchan tried to stop him, but Matsumoto pushed her that made Acchan fall on the ground. As TakaMina saw that, she can't stop her anger and punched the guy on the face that caused him to fall on the ground as well. Even though that TakaMina is a girl, she has this strength that can match a guy. TakaMina rubbed her hand feeling the pain in her hand, "Ouch" she said on her mind. Everyone witnessed that embarrassing moment for Matsumoto, everyone's eyes are now on them. They were shocked! Shocked as Acchan who's on the floor, her eyes widened yet still blushing like a tomato. Speechless.

"What a pain, everyone's looking at us now" TakaMina sighed as she approached Acchan once again on the floor. Again, offering her hand as a help to get the woman back on her feet.

"Are you okay?" she asked pulling the girl once again.

"Un.."

"I think the guy's dead, your engagement is finished!" she laughed and smirked.

"Minami! Why..uhm.." Atsuko as she can't find the words to say.

As Minami was about to explain, Matsumoto get back on his feet wiping the blood on his mouth. "How could you!!! Guard take this guy away this party!" He commanded angrily.

"Guy? He called Minami as a guy?" Atsuko asked to herself. "I know she's wearing tuxedo and is wearing a black wig,, but I can still say it's Minami" She giggled to herself, "my heart is going crazy, it's getting wild again".

As the guards were about to pick TakaMina, "Stop!" Takamina ordered.

Everyone was in shock, Matsumoto and Maeda family were witnessing this as well.

"I'll take my leave, after I do and say something." She said. She hold Acchan's hand and pull her near her, and their soft lips touched each other. Everyone jaw dropped, TakaMina was feeling the kiss as she closed her eyes while Atsuko was shocked and her eyes are widened. She can't believe TakaMina insisted the kiss. As the time Takamina slowly put her right hand on the ace's waist and her left hand on the head, Acchan slowly closed her eyes and they both kissed in passion.

"My heart is beating so fast, faster than ever before. Minami! I love you! Please hold me like this forever! I love you" Atsuko said in her mind, as she thought of this, tears began to fall on her eyes. Minami felt the tears and stopped the kiss, while everyone was still in shock. Matsumoto was jaw dropping he can't believe Atsuko was also answering the kiss, even their parents can't believe it.

TakaMina stopped the kiss and see Acchan's eyes, "she's crying" she thought to herself and she can feel the pain in her heart. She then looked away and answer everyone's gazes on them. As everyone still processing the happenings inside, the guards mind are also mesmerized by the scene.. while everyone's drooling.. TakaMina announced something...

"I Takahashi.. M-m-.. Kai, will marry this woman!!" She said replacing Minami into Kai so that no one will notice that she's a girl. To make everything look flawless.

Atsuko was very shocked, her tears are still coming out from her eyes. Not because of sadness she's feeling but by happiness. Her heart is beating like crazy.. "Minami!!" she spoked softly that only her and TakaMina can hear.

"I will pay all Maeda's debt to Matsumoto's family.. I will double it if you want. I don't want to witness my love being forced in this marriage just because of that debt. I will pay no matter how much it is! I'll take my leave, I'll put the money on your account Mr. Maeda.. I'm sorry for making an event today." She said as she bowed. Everyone now gazes at the Matsumoto family, they can't believe they are forcing a girl to be part of their family just because of debt. Everyone started to spread rumors inside the room, the Matsumoto family were really embarrassed so they walked out after Minami took Atsuko's hand and go away from the room. Matsumoto did not do anything, he was unmoved and tears are falling to his face. He suddenly wiped it as he does not want his weakness be seen by other people and just walked out with his parents.

...TBC... ???? I dont know hahahah!


Uwaa.. I'm so nervous what you guys will say.. I really have no confidence on this... It's my first try.. I don't know what I just written..  :dizzy:

Well anyways thanks for reading!!

Why contract was the title?? Can you guess? Hee.. you'll see if the story goes on..  :wahaha: but that is if you want me to continue this...  :sweat:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" Not OS maybe? LOL!
Post by: miayaka on July 03, 2012, 04:05:50 PM

woohoo finally your writing!  :jphip:
keep it up!
atsumina  :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" Not OS maybe? LOL!
Post by: Flean on July 03, 2012, 04:26:47 PM

OMG!! My Takamina just proposed Acchan in front of everyone!!!!! :mon lovelaff: way to go Kai!!!  :mon XD:

I need to know what happen next!!! and AtsuMina marriage!!! I wanna see that!!!!!!!! :luvluv1:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" Not OS maybe? LOL!
Post by: moekare on July 03, 2012, 06:43:28 PM

wow you're writing  :thumbsup cute fic.
Taka should have to kill that guy and nice proposing it in front of many people!  :rockon:
AtsuMina's wedding  :heart:
Pls make me as the priest  :mon prayer:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" Not OS maybe? LOL!
Post by: Flean on July 03, 2012, 06:48:23 PM

Quote from: moekare on July 03, 2012, 06:43:28 PM

Pls make me as the priest  :mon prayer:

and of course I'm the photographer..  :mon cam: need to capture all those Atsumina's sweet moments.. :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" Not OS maybe? LOL!
Post by: Tanchan on July 04, 2012, 04:02:31 AM

What of course you must continue this or I'll hunt you down jk.

Edited: Just as I was typing this post you had already updated :panic:

Takamina is so slow :lol:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on July 04, 2012, 05:55:42 AM

This is so interesting!!
You should continue it~ :D
I really want to see Atsumina married and their married life~ XD
I just hope that Acchan's parents won't oppose against their relationship..

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: Haruko on July 04, 2012, 06:01:58 AM

OMG!!! I rally like your fic.. takaboy is sooooo slow.. Im waiting when takamina tell that story to kojiyuu.. jajjaj they gonna be crazy about it...

Come on takabaka make your wifey happy.... Love it!! how confusing is this situation.. :D

keep going :D

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: moekare on July 04, 2012, 07:29:29 AM

The kissing  :drool:
Me want more updates!!  :thumbup you have to add the wedding as well. me want AtsuMina's wedding uwwiiii  :love:

Quote from: Flean on July 03, 2012, 06:48:23 PM

Quote from: moekare on July 03, 2012, 06:43:28 PM

Pls make me as the priest  :mon prayer:

and of course I'm the photographer..  :mon cam: need to capture all those Atsumina's sweet moments.. :mon lovelaff:

XD Just dont bleed while taking their pictures  :grin:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 04, 2012, 08:22:25 AM

You should continue this fic. It's amazing.
TAKMINA!!!!!!! BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She is not slow. She is way to slowwwwwwwwww!
Looking forward for your update! :thumbup

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: Flean on July 04, 2012, 09:06:46 AM

Owh! I'm glad that my Taka quite 'BAKA' in this fic.. XD if not the fic gonna end already..  :P

we need more of this!! Taka need more failing and falling in LOVE!!!  :lol:  and a wedding!!! we want AtsuMina wedding.. :grin:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: kahem on July 04, 2012, 10:12:25 AM

The wedding scene is so awesome!!!!
And Takamina is so dense and slow lol

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: Megumi on July 04, 2012, 02:23:01 PM

 :ptam-shy: Sooo cute

And agree Takamina is so slow...

Thank you for your update! It's lovely and fluffy  :thumbsup
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: ichikawa on July 04, 2012, 06:18:47 PM

Bakamina is still Bakamina  :smhid you're so slow...  :doh:
Someone give her a push  :hand: to realize her feeling  :heart:
I'm waiting for Atsumina wedding~  :D

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/04/12)
Post by: axel0048 on July 05, 2012, 01:54:01 AM

dang it!!!! :angry:
minami realize your feelings already!!!  :scolding:
why are you so dense!!!!!


please update soon!!!
i'll be waiting!!!

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/05/12)
Post by: Haruko on July 05, 2012, 06:46:12 AM

OMG so many things happen..

Takamina have a brother woe..

Kojiyuu making smesy stuff in school ..good job :D

and atsuko wants to finish her relationship with minamo noooooooooo!! T_T

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/05/12)
Post by: Megumi on July 05, 2012, 11:18:55 AM

Poor Kai so he's in coma...their father must have something to do with it... *suspicious

Minamis father is scary  :on shady:

 :grr: slap your own daughter in front of Acchan?! Does he not feel ashamed of it?!  I wanna :knee: him  XD


In the end things could turn well looking forward to next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/05/12)
Post by: moekare on July 05, 2012, 12:35:15 PM

Acchan now I hate you saying that you will end your relationship!
You're not even couple yet!!! Arrrgghhhh  :banghead: :banghead: :bleed eyes:

I want to cut Taka's dad into pieces ~ WTF he slaps her own daughter like that!  :angry:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/05/12)
Post by: ichikawa on July 05, 2012, 01:40:44 PM

Dear Takamina's father, how can you slap your own daughter and said Acchan is filthy woman?!
Sincerely, Atsumina shipper who is mad at you

 :mon suspect: :mon uggh: :mon fire: :mon mad: :mon fierce: :mon evil: :mon wtfmm: :mon butt:

Acchan! why did you end your friendship with Taka? NO!!!  :mon scare:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/05/12)
Post by: Flean on July 05, 2012, 02:33:48 PM

Wah!!! I really like this.. so many mixed feelings involves.. :yep: Minami's father, Minami herself.. and Atsuko..

Maybe it's too early for me to say this.. but I think I have some ideas how this fic will turn out.. (even though you might have not planned it yet, but yeah.. I'm crazy..lol) :lol:

Atsuko and that Takeru.. again, somehow I think I know what's going on with that 'don't want to be friends anymore..'  :P

Ok, need the next chapter now..  :banghead:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" (UPDATED: 07/05/12)
Post by: miayaka on July 05, 2012, 03:01:59 PM

Takamina's dad  :angry:
oh nonononono some how i can configure out the flow..
next chapter pwease!! ( :peace: sorry being too demanding)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: moekare on July 06, 2012, 08:00:10 AM

Finally marriage arrangement  :wub:
but why contract?  :mon cweepy:
I hope their marriage would stand forever  :ptam-shy:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: Haruko on July 06, 2012, 08:11:16 AM

OM -insert bad words - godness!! hell yeah!! right now ILOVE TAKAHASHI PAPA.. yeah!!

ATsumina gonna be together.. alone.. and atsuko you need to seduce your.. soon to be husband :D

But maybe Minami is so ikemen and many girls wanna to be near of him/her... :D

yeaaaaaaaaaaaahhh jealousy, seduce stuff.. and the kisses!!! im exciting :D

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: ichikawa on July 06, 2012, 03:09:49 PM

Hihihi~ this is really gonna be interesting~  :mon fyeah:
Yes, hurry and get married. Don't let that matsumoto guy ruin your wedding  :mon determined:
Acchan, do your best to make Takamina confess her love to you~ and the marriage will be 'true' marriage  :mon psst:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: chichay12 on July 06, 2012, 03:16:34 PM

HOHOHO

I LOVE TAKAHASHI PAPA!!! :on GJ: :on GJ:

but i hope the marriage will last FOREVER!!!

ATSUMINA FOR THE WIN!!
 :nya: :nya: :nya:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: SakuraKyoto on July 06, 2012, 05:07:10 PM

Wow !!
this fic make my heart be doki2..  :shy2:

Acchan will to be Minami's wife.. OMG !! can't waiting for that !!
Can't waiting for Atsumina wedding !!

Nice Fic   :farofflook:


Waiting for your update  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: axel0048 on July 07, 2012, 01:20:24 AM

yeah atsumina is going to be together at last!!! :onioncheer:

but why only 5 months????  :gyaaah:

taka papa i love you for doing this marriage arrangement!!!! :mon love:
 :mon fire:  can't wait for the next chapter!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: Sydney W on July 07, 2012, 08:49:15 AM

Doing something on it, Minami, you have 5 months to realize your feeling for Atsuko. Thereafter, separation is on the way.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: Megumi on July 08, 2012, 11:21:21 PM

 Okey old-man I maybe forgive you or not  :angry:

Quote

"If you guys have other rules and regulations you can make your own contracts you two.. that's all I can say.. I bet the both of you are going to enjoy this anyway.." The old man smiled remembering what her wife told him about Minami being possibly in love with Atsuko. He can't stop his daughter for falling in love right? So why not help her instead to realize her feeling.. Yes! aside from resolving the Family's business and pride issues, it's also a solution to make Minami realizes her true feelings.

:ptam-glow: Taka-papa now I LOVE YOU!

Marriage  :ptam-shy:

Can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/06/12)
Post by: SakuraKyoto on July 09, 2012, 05:50:51 PM

OMG !! That kiss is so . . .  :mon bleed2:


Yippi~ Finally, Minami can't holding to touch her Acchan..  :mon angel:

need more sweet moments !!   :luvluv2:


Thanks for your update.. this fic is so great !! make my heart be doki2.. Thanks  :mon love:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/09/12)
Post by: axel0048 on July 09, 2012, 06:48:17 PM

Ahhhhh  :mon XD: FINALLY!!!
minami go go go !!!!!! :mon yeah:
 


please update soon !!"!!  :bow: :bow:
i really want to know what will happen next"!!!!!! :thumbup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/09/12)
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 09, 2012, 09:57:36 PM

GREAT CHAPTER.
Takamina. YOU IDIOT. Mou.... Kizuite yo.......
The kisss........................... SO HOT!!!!!!!!
I want MORE SCENCE LIKE THAT!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :thumbup  :deco:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/09/12)
Post by: Keisthename on July 10, 2012, 05:16:07 AM

oh btw guys,, I'm planning of adding HOT Scenes in the future of this story.. (I wonder who they'll gonna be, LOL)

But first I wanted to know if you guys are sensitive with this kind of scenes? Let me know okay? So I know how I will write things.. harharhar..  :on bleed:

That "HOT" scene could be super hot.. or maybe just a mild one like the previous ones I've already written so far on this story.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/09/12)
Post by: Haruko on July 10, 2012, 06:38:09 AM

For us its ok, but this forum have rules so if youmake a perv fic PLEASE DO IT PLEASE PLEASE you need ti post in our perv fic section..

Now talking about the chapter of my - insert bad words - amazing fic... you read my mind jelousy scene (two of them), a great fabolous and hot kiss... OMG!! acchan you have a lot to work with minami but we hope that all end fine :D


just one question my kojiyuu gonna appear?

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/09/12)
Post by: steftakami on July 10, 2012, 07:55:32 AM

I like your fanfic continue!!!!!!  :banghead: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/11/12)
Post by: miayaka on July 10, 2012, 08:59:55 PM

this fic interests me..  :ding:

Quote

frowning face is scaring them away

yadaaa  :on spit:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/11/12)
Post by: axel0048 on July 11, 2012, 01:53:04 AM

i'm loving this fic!!!! :luvluv1:
no actually i loved it from the start!!! :on lol:
but i'm loving it more and more!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
please update as soon as you can..  :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/11/12)
Post by: C@@3! on July 11, 2012, 05:14:46 AM

very cool... plese mooore.. I like this history.. *------*  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/11/12)
Post by: Haruko on July 11, 2012, 06:31:06 AM

JAJAJ love atsuko teasing minami just love it!! :D

well maybe kuramochi can reclaim her right about kai.. you know.. in the middle of the wedding?...

yeah many thing could happen. honeymoon, first day like a new couple..

Oh! takaboy you are so clueless -_- about it.. jelousy scenes maybe?

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/12/12) Chapter 7
Post by: hara on July 12, 2012, 03:32:51 AM

OMG ! 
AtsuMina wedding day is come !  :gmon flowers:


Waiting for sweet honeymoon of AtsuMina~   :gmon sweet:


Waiting for your next update~  :gmon sing:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/12/12) Chapter 7
Post by: Haruko on July 12, 2012, 06:54:14 AM

Of course we are..cwaiting for this so much... aww minami you are so slow..

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/12/12) Chapter 7
Post by: ichikawa on July 12, 2012, 03:23:59 PM

 :mon firecrack:  WEDDING DAY~!! YIPPIE~!!  :gmon flowers:
NEED MOARRR~~  :mon star:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/12/12) Chapter 7
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 12, 2012, 05:16:22 PM

Woowww.. good job...
Why only 5 months....you should make this contract at least 5 years or more??? Hahahahaha...just kidding  :cow:

This Fic is really great.... Please Continue....!!!!  :heart:
 Waiting for WEDDING Day...  :panic:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/12/12) Chapter 7
Post by: C@@3! on July 12, 2012, 07:24:32 PM

aaaaaaaaaa... too anxious, but to love this fics very curious to know what will happen there and mochi with the honeymoon .. Takeru hopefully this does not disturb ¬ ¬ '  XD XD XD

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/12/12) Chapter 7
Post by: axel0048 on July 12, 2012, 09:37:24 PM

yey atsumina wedding day!!!! :luvluv2:
i hope nothing bad will happen.... :frustrated:

me waiting for the honeymoon....hehehe :shy1:
please update asap!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/13/12) Chapter 8 part 1
Post by: Sydney W on July 13, 2012, 05:45:12 PM

cant wait for the next update. Hehehe

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/13/12) Chapter 8 part 1
Post by: chichay12 on July 13, 2012, 06:01:54 PM

HOHOHOHOHO
 :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow:

this is so sweet  :ptam-shy:
icant wait to see what will happen to their honeymoon!!! :farofflook: :farofflook:
more nosebleed i think??? :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
plss update soon!!
and thank you for this update!!!
 :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/13/12) Chapter 8 part 1
Post by: axel0048 on July 13, 2012, 06:15:44 PM

 :mon XD: CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!  :mon XD: :mon thumb:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/13/12) Chapter 8 part 1
Post by: hara on July 13, 2012, 06:19:34 PM

Keisthename-san !!
The wedding is so sweet.... i love that kiss scene..  :mon inluv:


YEAH~
HONEYMOON !!
 We need many hot scenes !!   :mon star:

Please update soon~ :mon cute:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/13/12) Chapter 8 part 1
Post by: kahem on July 13, 2012, 09:54:46 PM

OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!! Can't wait for the honeymoon!!!
Takamina is so slow!!!!! lol

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: axel0048 on July 14, 2012, 02:51:34 AM

 :mon bleed2: tht was really hot!!!!!!  :mon blood:


i hope takamina won't forget though....


please update soon please  :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: hara on July 14, 2012, 04:26:32 AM

Wow.. it's so fast update.. Thanks   :hee:

And that hot scene is so hottttttttttttt...  :on bleed:


But but but why TBC ???  :tantrum:


waiting for next udate....  :prayers:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: Tanchan on July 14, 2012, 04:28:32 AM

Now if Takamina wakes up and don't remember anything :nervous

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: Sydney W on July 14, 2012, 07:19:08 AM

Quote

“Atsuko now I know the sweetness the alcohol can bring, sweet as chocolate it is!” Minami smirked.

Just love the phrases. Hehehe.   

Quote

TBC

~ waiting for your next update. What will happened to them after 5 months?

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: Haruko on July 14, 2012, 07:58:24 AM

WOW takaboy you make your wifey happy thats good :D, we want more smexy scenes.. :D  and jelousy please :D

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 14, 2012, 01:42:03 PM

The hot scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I"m drooling here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If Takamina doesn't remember anything in the morning, I'm going to personally kill her!
Looking forward for the next chapter. Updatr soon! :thumbup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: miayaka on July 14, 2012, 01:52:40 PM

Quote

“Then take off my clothes!”

:sweat: More!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: Kiiz on July 14, 2012, 07:02:50 PM

iyaaaa~ so hot daaaa :on bleed: :nya:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: kahem on July 14, 2012, 11:34:57 PM

Yay!!!!! Thank you Miichan!!!! It's all thank to you!!!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/14/12) Chapter 8 part 2
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 15, 2012, 10:15:19 AM

hi...

i love your fanfic...

please update soon...

arigatouu

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: chichay12 on July 15, 2012, 06:47:37 PM

oH MY God
:on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
This is so sweet!!
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Thank you for the update
 :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: kahem on July 15, 2012, 08:16:04 PM

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: Haruko on July 16, 2012, 01:07:47 AM

OMG!!! thats great, OMG!! smexy scenes are the best of tbest thanx.. mou atsuko you are a teaser...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: Sydney W on July 16, 2012, 02:22:44 AM

love atsumina sweet moments. Please don't end it with sad.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 16, 2012, 03:01:37 AM

Thank you for the hot scene once again. :thumbup
Update soon!!!!  :deco:
BTW, you are good in making the hot scenes. :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: axel0048 on July 16, 2012, 04:49:03 PM

So sweet!!! :heart: :heart:
Please don't end this story right away!!! :bow:
please make more smexy/sweet/cute atsumina scenes! :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: saeyukilover on July 17, 2012, 09:04:00 AM

WOW there is still chapter 9 ...... I'm very happy :) thank you

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: Megumi on July 17, 2012, 03:23:32 PM

The wedding part was so lovely!  :tama-yeeaah: 

And the *cough *cough scene  :mon crazyinlove: :on bleed:

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/16/12) Chapter 8 Bonus part
Post by: Keisthename on July 20, 2012, 05:43:08 PM

will be updating this after I finished the part 2 of my latest story..

Check it out! ;) ---> The Only Thing That Won't Change --> http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.0)

On the other hand, for this fiction "contract" next chapters will be mixed with sweetness, jealousy, "change of heart" and might even end up in a sad situation.  :on speedy:

GAAAAH prepare some tissues  :pleeease: :gyaaah:

Stay with me my readers, I'll be updating this soon. Heee..  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/23/12) Chapter 9
Post by: Sydney W on July 23, 2012, 04:25:55 PM

sugoiii....... nice update from you.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/23/12) Chapter 9
Post by: ichikawa on July 23, 2012, 05:45:18 PM

Wow! Takahashi is suuuperrr rich!  :mon money:
Did I read that Atsumina share a room? They share a room!  :mon mischief:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/23/12) Chapter 9
Post by: Haruko on July 23, 2012, 10:20:25 PM

jajaj takarich!! :D, but i love how they love each other.. I think that takabaka gonna make a mistake and atsuko and co gonna founded with ray doing something ..

aww sexadicchan... you doesnt have fun with your husband... and dont let him spend enegy with you.. so wrong..

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/23/12) Chapter 9
Post by: saeyukilover on July 24, 2012, 03:05:42 AM

Yeah!!! I enjoy that chapter :)

hey!!! can I be bit gready the nxt chapter can u make it longer
Than this.. hehehe just joking..

Just make an update every now and then  :roll:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/23/12) Chapter 9
Post by: Megumi on July 26, 2012, 09:11:34 PM

I loled so hard at the cab driver incident...and then the guards
and then OMG! Takamina is this rich????

I was surprised too  :rofl:
It's nice to have such friends  :twothumbs

ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 07/23/12) Chapter 9
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 03, 2012, 01:08:22 PM

Please

please

please

update soon...............

i can't wait for your next chapter..

thank you

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Tanchan on August 05, 2012, 11:31:44 AM

You're so evil I hate you XD, I'm so gonna unfriend you on facebook XD. And that jerk Takeru, a man who takes advantage of the situation isn't a good man to be with. Acchan make up your mind I mean your heart quick :angry:.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Sydney W on August 05, 2012, 11:33:29 AM

oh my !! Atsuko, you can't betray Minami by loving others beside Minami.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Trickster on August 05, 2012, 12:11:32 PM

really, the 'Takeru' parts broke my heart :( Acchan you gotta make up your mind fast :angry:
I got the feeling Keisuke will show up again later XD (not hating him though XD)

thanks for the update Kei-san :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 05, 2012, 12:41:33 PM

STUPID TAKERU, AND ACCHAN ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!
Poor, Minami. She saw that scene. UPDATE SOON< PLEASE!!!!  :thumbup
And I love drama, but don't make it too much  ;) :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: kiruchi on August 05, 2012, 12:57:43 PM

WTH!!! What's wrong with Acchan?! (doubting her love for Takamina...  :OMG: *am gonna hug Takamina!! *)
Since Takamina's kind... I can imagine her smiling sadly saying something about 2 more months and you're free Acchan...
I don't want that scene!  :fainted: *cough* kick that Takeru out of the scene already *cough*
Update please!!!  :pleeease:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: chichay12 on August 05, 2012, 01:04:47 PM

wahhhh!
No!!!
Acchan!why??
Minami pls be strong!
Pls update as soon as possible!!this fic is killing me!
Thank you for the update!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Minami-chan on August 05, 2012, 01:29:47 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO what are u doing Acchaaaaan!?
Poor takamina...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: karupin12 on August 05, 2012, 01:49:11 PM

I want to kill that Takeru  :on kimbo: :mon mad:
What will happen to their relationship now?!!
Nooooooooooooo~  :mon fire:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 05, 2012, 04:49:13 PM

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING :D

MORE POWER ON YOUR FAN FICTION

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: hott3stson3 on August 05, 2012, 06:50:04 PM

 :err: my atsumina is falling apart......

please do update Keisthename-san or else..... :shifty:

No, i kid. but seriously update fast!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Tanchan on August 06, 2012, 12:55:24 AM

Keis-san please update quick quick quick I can't stand waiting for another one week or more.
Others have said this already but Acchan should never doubt her love for Takamina.They're destined to be together (even in real life :wub:) Isn't the fact that she feels sad and lonely when Takamina's too busy with the business to pay attention to her already proof that she loves her? The crush with Takeru is coming back because she feels lonely and wants to be loved but no that guy isn't a good man and you don't love him either. Besides, Takamina already got her first...I mean :twisted:, so that guy stands no chance.
ON another note, Keisuke seems like a good guy so please don't make him turn out to be like Takeru because I want to preserve the good impression I have about him. Also he's the proof that love isn't all about possessing it.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Mai-chan on August 06, 2012, 03:59:06 AM

Quote from: Keisthename on August 05, 2012, 11:06:09 AM

And so.. he cupped Atsuko's face and suddenly kissed her out of nowhere..

WHAT THE FEATHERS TAKERU?!!! :angry1: I actually LITERALLY screamed on that part and my mom think I'm a weirdo screaming infront on the screen  :depressed:

ACCHAN!!!Make up your mind already!!!! :on thumbb:


And Keep on Updating Kei~!  :on GJ:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Haruko on August 06, 2012, 05:15:21 AM

Oh God why!!... acchan you make a big mistake... and you gonna to regreat it ...

poor minami.. i think that you new !"friend"  secretary can take advange about this... awww

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Suicchin on August 06, 2012, 06:53:02 AM

OH MY GOSH PLEASE UPDATED SOOOOOON

I want to know what happens now! *excited*

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Loveforever on August 06, 2012, 07:11:06 AM

Acchan doesn't deserve minami if she feels that way  :angry: on the other hand please update its getting more interesting  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Keisthename on August 06, 2012, 07:24:03 AM

wow thanks minna for reading my fic, I can see a lot of you are ready to kill Takeru.. how I wish Acchan will also wake up from this confusion.. Poor Takamina..  :fainted:

I don't want to spoil what will happen, but.. but... GAAAAH  :gyaaah: I think my heart can't bear what I'm writing right now.. lolz.. please be patient and I will post the next chapter after I finished this. hihi..

@ Tanchan: wow 2 comments for the chapter, hihi thank you for showing your appreciation for the fic. And unfriend me on facebook?? whoah.. are we friends there already? haha XD

@Sydney W:  :on speedy: I feel awful too Minami witnessing the betrayal? of Acchan? uwaaaa

@ Trickster: Haha I'm glad it broke your heart. (lolwut?) It only means that my story really is getting into my readers right? so I'm glad! :))

@ TakaminaBG: Sorry, I can't promise anything about the drama.. My only advice is prepare some more. lolz

@ Kiruchi: "I can imagine her smiling sadly saying something about 2 more months and you're free Acchan..." <-- Somehow you're already getting the point of this..  :glasses:

@ Chichay12: My fic is killing you? Oh no! lolz. Thank you for reading I hope you'll come back to life when I update the next chapter. hahaha

@Minami-chan: Yes, yes, poor takamina.. D;

@Karupin12: Please do so, kill Takeru noooooww!!! I hate him either.

@Rukaeru: wow what you're saying is really flattering. :) To tell you honestly, My other dream is to become a good writer as well as a director.. something that will make a film out of my scripts.. hihi I hope I can fulfill them in the future.. Thanks for your encouraging words. :D

@Wmatsui22: Thank you, and good luck on your fic too! ;)

@hott3stson3: uwaaa..  :stoned: alrigght I will update.. SOON! lolz..

@ Mai-chan: Ahhahaha.. I hope your mom won't think your crazy..

@Haruko: I feel you, I hope Acchan would regret this too.. lolz  :kekeke:

@Suichin: Haha thank you for being excited, I hope I won't disappoint you on the next chapter.

@Loveforever: Exactly!!! I feel really sad for Takamina.. she's really looking for ways to make it up to Acchan, but but...  :frustrated:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Tanchan on August 06, 2012, 07:38:53 AM

Kei-san. How about I add your FB account now and then unfriend you right after XD

You should solve this quick I don't want that jerk Takeru get in between my Atsumina :angry:.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: chiqinna on August 06, 2012, 09:52:32 AM

NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

:on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
 :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy:
 :fainted:
:yuki:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/05/12) Chapter 10
Post by: Minami-chan on August 06, 2012, 01:26:11 PM

T________T 
:err: :err:
I can´t wait read the next chapter!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: chichay12 on August 06, 2012, 04:10:44 PM

im glad that acchan realize that she love MINAMI..
 :farofflook: :farofflook:
minami please be patience!!!!
 :gyaaah:
as takeru!!!
WTF!!! :on voodoo:
acchan dont have feelings for you!!i HOPE??hehe
 :on gay:
plsss part 2!!!!
i dont want to wait for to long!!!
hehe
 :on blackhole:
please update as soon as possible =))

thank you for the update
 :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Nakamii on August 06, 2012, 04:25:54 PM

I just hate Takeru for not understand what people want and feels. He's like, somewhat, Egoist. D:< No doubt. But, Who's that guy who was talking on the Phone. I can hardly guess it. But the girl, It must be, somekind of, Ray? ;_: However, I'm glad that Atsuko still remember Kai. They're meant for each other, anyway. xDD Okay, That's all I can say. ; A ;

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: kiruchi on August 06, 2012, 04:52:31 PM

1st... I'm glad that Atsuko finally made up her mind.
2nd... however, Minami had already seen it all (and hurt) and had no idea that Atsuko loved her not that f-ing Takeru.
3rd... the problem was not only Takeru but those two extra/antagonist from the earlier chapter. (+ keisuke is a potential hindrance in the future too...)
 :on blackhole: <-- this is what I'm feeling when I read the chapter.
Takamina stay strong!!!  :OMG:
Update soon or else... --->  :fainted: (i'll end up like that... :p)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Trickster on August 06, 2012, 04:56:20 PM

that Takeru :angry: he is just making things complicated :angry:
I'm glad though, Acchan realized her feelings.. the thing that makes it difficult is Acchan doesn't know that Takamina knows Takeru kissed Acchan #hittingheadtothewall

about the mysterious figures.. let me guess, double M? XD

thanks for the update, Kei-san :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Sydney W on August 06, 2012, 05:28:58 PM

Atsuko u better make confession to Minami or else you end up losing her.
I guess the mysterious persons are Matsumoto & Mocchi.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 06, 2012, 06:07:49 PM

Acchan = BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Minami = hang in there!
Takeru = y***************************************************e. Touch her again you ******!!
The mysterious persons are probably Matsumoto and Mochi. :D
Please update soon. I don't want to wait long.  :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: jeffyer on August 06, 2012, 06:23:41 PM

Oh gosh, how can you leave me hanging like this! I NEED PART 2 PLSSSS

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Minami-chan on August 07, 2012, 12:11:55 AM

Oh my god!!
I wish that acchan tell all to minami...
Although I want also to be punished Acchan a bit for having doubted his love for Takamina.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Tanchan on August 07, 2012, 03:53:55 AM

Acchan should confess and Takamina will give her the right punishment :twisted:

Please update fast :mon pray2:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 07, 2012, 05:05:10 AM

PLEASE UPDATE FAST..


YOUR FANFIC IS AMAZING..




ARIGATOU

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Haruko on August 07, 2012, 05:22:00 AM

Quote from: TakaminaBG on August 06, 2012, 06:07:49 PM

Acchan = BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Minami = hang in there!
Takeru = y***************************************************e. Touch her again you ******!!
The mysterious persons are probably Matsumoto and Mochi. :D
Please update soon. I don't want to wait long.  :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup

Hell yeah!! atsumina´s shipper gonna to break your bones ¬_¬...

OMG!! i hateyou and love you author.. because its so itneresting but you break my heart  a litlle with takamina´s sadness

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: miayaka on August 07, 2012, 05:40:20 PM

Although I'm not commenting regularly
I still read this..
and this chapter what happen??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
you made my heart  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: fausto on August 07, 2012, 08:36:51 PM

Yes!!!I love this fanfic!!!I red all yours, keep doing this please!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :heart:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: chiqinna on August 07, 2012, 11:40:40 PM

wait....  :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: kahem on August 08, 2012, 01:06:45 AM

That son of the a bitch of Takeru!!!! I'll kill him!!!
But I'm glad that Acchan realized that she really loves Takamina

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 10, 2012, 09:17:09 AM

Ahaha... :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: :on voodoo: :on voodoo: :on voodoo: :on voodoo: :on voodoo:

This boy, Takeru... :smoke: :mon suspect: :mon scratch: :mon speechless: He needs to set his priorities. :mon mad:
But something convinces me that it's not just his fault, but what's-his-name (Matsumoto?) is also at fault for pressuring him. I wonder what kind of possible blackmail he might have on him? :mon huh: And Mocchi? Meh. AHA.

And then there's Atsuko! Acchan!... ohmygod, Iactuallyhavenowordsforyoubut :smhid :thumbdown:

Takamina... ... Don't give up. :mon cry: :mon cry:

Damn, emocon abuse. OHWELL.  :D

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 08, 2012, 06:26:32 PM

Please update this!!!!! Sorry for demanding, but I LOVE this story!!!
Looking forward to your next update!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Keisthename on September 09, 2012, 08:46:12 AM

oh this came out. XD To be honest I'm thinking what to update next.. and here this is a sign. haha

I'll work on this ^^v

Hope my readers are still here for updates.. aw..

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED: 08/06/12) Chapter 11 part 1
Post by: Tanchan on September 09, 2012, 09:12:07 AM

I'm still here and waiting for your update.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: chiqinna on September 16, 2012, 11:26:05 AM

oh no!!!! Atsumina~ :( i will wait for ur update!! Its great! n_n

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: rhin12 on September 16, 2012, 11:48:58 AM

ouch..  :cry:

that was a very heartbreaking scene. :(
i'll be waiting for the full chapter. ^^

thank you keisthename-san for this wonderful fic.  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: 7sam14 on September 16, 2012, 12:27:17 PM

Please...Update.... :mon pray2: Can't wait.....But i wanna kill that Takeru guy!!  :onionwhip: .....But ATSUMINA~~!!  :on blackhole:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Sydney W on September 16, 2012, 01:44:33 PM

Owhh, look like a separation soon. It cant be happened.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: yourockme on September 16, 2012, 11:46:49 PM

This is so bad
I hate YOU!!
LOL urghh UPDATETETETETETETE
IM waiting :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: karupin12 on September 17, 2012, 04:30:14 PM

erk! My heart is breaking  :bleed eyes: :banghead:
Waiting for update  :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: giakb48ff on September 20, 2012, 10:33:56 PM

OMGIRLSSS!!! THIS IS MY FIRST TIME ... TO READ ALL THE CHAPTER OF THIS FANFIC!! AND I REALLY LOVE IT!!  :deco:  :heart:
THANKSSS ¨Keisthename¨ ... This is the best fanfic that i had read in my life!! :) ... Ok let´s wait for other chapter of Contract!!  :peace: :heart:

LOVE ATSUMINA !  TAKAMINA :heart:ATCHAN :heart:

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Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: smarty0821 on September 21, 2012, 11:16:00 AM

still waiting for the full chapter  :banghead:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (TEASER: 09/16/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Minami-chan on September 22, 2012, 12:25:34 AM

Yes plisss upload the new chapter  :cry: :cry: :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: chichay12 on September 23, 2012, 05:19:29 AM

wtF!!
What did you do!!i mean write!
Atsuko!minami!
Kei-san!pls fix their problem!!i dont want this!hehe
Takeru go to hell!hoho

Thank you for the update!
 :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on September 23, 2012, 05:39:41 AM

I had this really long moment where I couldn't say or do anything except sigh, facepalm, and say "ah..." Acchan... I know you're in shock... but you could at least explain to Minami what happened instead of screaming "NO! I'MSORRY!" the entire time...

Ah... :depressed: :err:

DRAMA THOUGH. I LIKE IT. LOL. :on GJ:

Quote from: Rukaeru on September 23, 2012, 05:25:38 AM

@Keisthename: Can I KILL you now???  :on voodoo: Reading your story make me want to write my fic story become more aggressive than ever..... I hate it when Atsuko cheat on Takamina..... urgh..... AtsuMina.....   :depressed:

And I know it's meant as a joke, like REALLY... but Rukaeru-san... your comments sound a bit more personal than it should... It's... a bit... I don't know the word, but it just sounds so... aggressive? (AHA... mini-joke... lol) The word "kill" goes overboard including the emocons that you use...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Haruko on September 23, 2012, 06:16:47 AM

OMG my heart.... i dont know what say.. its so painful -______- atsuminaaaaaaaa

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: rhin12 on September 23, 2012, 07:33:39 AM

what a sadist writer you are..on all of your fics, you always hurt atsumina.. :smhid
good thing you're not into MAYUKI fic. hahaha...  :P

i feel it..and it's sooo painful.. :cry:

hahaha..love it.. hope you update soon..  :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: karupin12 on September 23, 2012, 10:18:53 AM

Heartbreak </3  :gyaaah:

please update soon  :tantrum:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 23, 2012, 11:31:17 AM

This is...this was.. this.... is SO DAMN HEART BREAKING!!!!
To tell you the truth I can't say that Takamina is wrong for leaving Acchan.... BUT come on, it was just a kiss and she should have  let Acchan explain.
I want to know what happens next!!!
UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: anonymousstalker on September 23, 2012, 03:45:00 PM

And so it begins :ptam-...:

*Total heart breaker, First of all great job for all the emotions you put up there I know it's hard for you since it's 'Atsumina!' :smhid but then again thumbs up :twothumbs for writing such a good story!  :bow:


Actually I've been expecting this  :k-sad: since Minami saw them in that situation... and truly they will end up breaking up  :bigdeal: hopefully Acchan will get her heart straight now and fix everything ASAP!!!

And as for you Kei-san I know you won't let Atsumina break apart :on hypto: ... now OR do you?

UPDATE SOON  :k-hello: 

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: nao707 on September 23, 2012, 05:27:50 PM

Noooooooooooooooooo............................................ So heart breaking chapter... :panic: :panic: :banghead: :banghead: :catglare:

that takeru... i wish i can punch him hard.. :angry:

Very good story! I've been waiting for this story too :twothumbs. Thank you for your update Keisthename-san :bow: :bow:! (even this chapter breaks my heart) hahaha...

Please update soon. :thumbsup :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Trickster on September 24, 2012, 11:06:05 AM

I would be lying if I said it's not heart breaking :panic:
but.. you're not gonna make it end like this, are you? XD

wil be waiting for the update :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Keisthename on September 24, 2012, 01:45:52 PM

AHHH..  :onioncheer: I feel so fulfilled seeing that all of you felt the characters' emotions. Ahh, hahaha you guys might think I'm a real sadist. lol. But yeah maybe.. a little.  :lol: heartbreaks  :heart: :heart:

But don't get me wrong guys of course the drama is part of the story and I've warned all of you about it right? Also I think I've already expressed the love of Atsumina at the very beginning, their love scenes, happiness and etc. Muahaha and so this is the part where they are going to break apart..  :fainted:  I hope you guys won't kill me XD like @rukaeru wants to. hahahaha  :heart: :heart: :heart:

anyways I hope you guys will look forward for more updates, or maybe I can finish it immediately.. like this.. lol btw, all your comments, I'm reading them all and it really makes me happy that there are people who are actually STILL reading my updates.  :wub: ahhh thank you guys!   :kneelbow: I'll try to update sooner as possible..

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: nao707 on September 24, 2012, 05:27:41 PM

me too. I'm still waiting for your updates patiently...

Gambare Kei-san!  :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: hazwani on September 25, 2012, 02:48:49 PM

please...
make them back together again :)

lol

please update soon.. :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Minami-chan on September 25, 2012, 10:55:52 PM

OMG!!
This chapter is... so.... sad...
Heart break  :cry: :cry: :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: kahem on September 25, 2012, 11:30:57 PM

NO!!!!! Atsumina!!! T_T

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: thebotole on September 26, 2012, 01:47:27 AM

hwaahhh...atsumina..
wait for update  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: chanelloo on September 28, 2012, 07:04:39 PM

Aww heartbreaking story. Looking forward for your update. :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: steftakami on September 28, 2012, 08:53:39 PM

please please continue!!  :bow: I like your fic!!  :wub:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Strawberri on September 28, 2012, 10:26:35 PM

 :cry: Omg! This chapter is so sad! So heart breaking :/ thank you for the update Kei San

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 09/23/12) Chapter 11 part 2
Post by: Pdpond on September 30, 2012, 11:14:59 AM

Oh!! Poor Acchan poor Minami :banghead:
Minami lets acchan explain; she love you the way you are!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: Pdpond on October 22, 2012, 08:59:48 PM

It's time for clear acchan~
pls update soon!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: Strawberri on October 22, 2012, 09:58:54 PM

An update at last! Ahh.. Was short  :cry: yes Acchan explain everything! Clear everything up! Thanks for the update! :farofflook:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: fausto on October 22, 2012, 10:50:53 PM

AAAAaaaaahh!!!I'm dying here, I need an update!!! :banghead:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: kahem on October 22, 2012, 11:44:59 PM

Acchan listen to Takamina's mom please T_T

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: yourockme on October 23, 2012, 01:07:02 AM

ARghhhhh
BITENN!!!
why? why? why?
why did u end it that way???  :cry:
Please Update soon or Later
XDXDXD Arigatou  :deco:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: Haruko on October 23, 2012, 04:37:01 AM

so long time.. too short chapter -___- i want more.. my atsuminaaaaaaaa

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: chichay12 on October 23, 2012, 05:58:46 PM

i want more!hohoho

Please update soon!
Atsumina!! :banghead:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: nao707 on October 23, 2012, 06:32:49 PM

 :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: at last.... there is a new update!!!! Thank you so much for the update Kei-san!  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:


such a cliffhanger...  :fainted: I'm dying to know what happen..

Please update soon Kei-san  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: douya08 on October 23, 2012, 07:03:04 PM

yes, it's about time...


But when will you update for the next chapter??! :on voodoo: this chapter is too short...! :temper:


Give me back my Atsumina...! :mon yeah:


huffh... I need to clear my mind... thx anyway for your update :on cny1:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: saeyukilover on October 24, 2012, 04:17:08 AM

I like mama minami !!!!!! Yes acchan just go and tell minami you love her/him :)

Pls update again :)

 :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: karupin12 on October 25, 2012, 02:50:42 PM

I'm always waiting for an update of this  :farofflook:
Update soon .. we want moooooree~ :farofflook:  :lol:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: thebotole on October 26, 2012, 06:10:49 PM

it's about time..
guess next update will be more interesting.. ^.^
update soon..  :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: giakb48ff on November 08, 2012, 05:44:19 AM

OMGIRLS!! I JUST LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH!!! ATSUMINA!!  :heart:  :deco:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: hazwani on November 08, 2012, 06:30:14 AM

lol..please update soon ...

i really love this story   :(

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 09:21:25 AM

Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the fanfic

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 20, 2012, 04:30:05 AM

Just started reading!! Loving this so far:)
Please update soon!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: cisda83 on November 20, 2012, 05:20:58 AM

Atsuko Gambate....  :cow: :cow: :cow:

Get Takamina again... :bow: :bow: :bow:

Great fanfic  :D :w00t:

Looking forward to the next one :twothumbs :theking

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: mae on November 20, 2012, 10:42:09 PM

i'm so impatient for the next please update soon i love this fic ;)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: bimbo on November 30, 2012, 04:39:08 PM

I REALLY REALLY REALLY love this fic!  :D

Please update soon!  :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: hara on December 02, 2012, 05:00:37 AM

Please update soon  :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:



really need to know what happen next to AtsuMina  :cool2:


Waiting for ur update  :on speedy:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 10/23/12) Chapter 12
Post by: FNK23 on December 19, 2012, 05:56:01 AM

keeiii, where are youu ??!!
It's been a long time you didnt give any update for this fic, i read it since i wasnt member in this forum. So, please please please update soon, i really want to know what will happen next. Hope it will be a long fic.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/10/13) Author's Note
Post by: Keisthename on February 09, 2013, 06:23:21 PM

Hi guys! Finally I have a time to update my fanfics. =) I finally got through with my architecture thesis and deliberation! yay! So yeah I'm now writing an update for this.

Just make sure to read the whole story again if you have forgotten about it already XD so that when I updated you'll be able to keep up on the story. Btw, if I still have readers for my stories I am really overwhelmed by it. If none, then I'll just leave it like that XD

Just wait a little longer, I'll write a long chapter ;)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/10/13) Author's Note
Post by: TakaminaBG on February 09, 2013, 06:45:25 PM

YAY!!!! I'm looking forward to the update!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/10/13) Author's Note
Post by: takamae on February 10, 2013, 12:27:19 AM

I been reading your fic before I become a member
I'm so happy you can start update  :D
I'll be waiting, thank you ^^

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/10/13) Author's Note
Post by: FNK23 on February 10, 2013, 12:33:21 AM

yeaahh!! Update update updateee!! XDD
i've waiting your fic since i'm not a member

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/10/13) Author's Note
Post by: Strawberri on February 10, 2013, 12:37:41 AM

YAYAYAY!!!!!! :cow: YAY! An update soon yippeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!  :cow:  :farofflook:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: Elo on February 11, 2013, 10:01:21 PM

i really waited long for this part please update the next part  :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: no-chan on February 11, 2013, 10:13:54 PM

i've waited for a long time for the update....and i would like to thank you for the update... :bow:  :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: TakaminaBG on February 11, 2013, 10:49:41 PM

Finally!!! One of my favorites fic has been updated!!
That son of a b***h!!!!! I wanna ARGH!!!  :scolding: :on voodoo: :kickass: :knee:
But Minami saved Atsuko. And in what way!! When she kissed Atsuko I screamed "That's my IDOL!!", although it's not really Takami...... you know what I mean!
I hope Minami forgives Atsuko, although what Atsuko did was awful....
Please PLEASE POST THE NEXT PART!!! LIKE NOW!!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: chichay12 on February 11, 2013, 11:38:48 PM

ohmygod...
Finally...woohooo
minami!!acchan!!
I really miss ur fic!
Thank god ur back!
Congrats again,u know what i mean *wink*

Part 2!!!
 :banghead:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: Sydney W on February 11, 2013, 11:55:15 PM

I guess deep inside Minami/Kai heart still love Atsuko very much.
Atsuko, kiss back Minami/Kai as to prove your love once again.
I want the next chapter revelation too ~~~

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: kahem on February 12, 2013, 01:50:10 AM

WOwW!!!! Go Takamina save your wife!!!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: Haruko on February 12, 2013, 04:09:55 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well done kai!!!!!! omg!!!!! my heart is beating so fast.. oH!!! I want more :B

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: bimbo on February 12, 2013, 05:09:58 AM

You better post the next part before I'm slowly turning crazy here  :angry1:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: mae on February 12, 2013, 07:19:10 AM

Thank you for update  :mon fyeah:
I miss your fic
Please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon pray2:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: momondmozide on February 12, 2013, 08:20:18 AM

I want the next chapter now. .. hohooo
thx for the update   

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: Pdpond on February 12, 2013, 09:24:39 AM

Ahhhh!!! I want more motto motto!!!!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: douya08 on February 12, 2013, 09:35:42 AM

uuuggghhh!! please just post it already!!!  :banghead: :mon fire:

or else I'll crying all over the night.....  :mon cry: :gyaaah:


*coughsorrytobesoemotionalcough*

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: takamae on February 12, 2013, 10:04:08 AM

Poor acchan.... :cry:
Minami is the best, I just hope that not an act
Please the next chapter  :bow:
Thank you ^^

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: cisda83 on February 12, 2013, 11:00:15 AM

Ah Keisuke is such a nice guy...

Matsumoto and Mochi are jerks.... wanting Atsuko and Kai for themselves...

Yeah... Kai is great... still protecting and defending Atsuko....

Kai is so cool... saying the picture was fake... and he kissed Atsuko in front of everyone...

Great going there, Kai...

Nice update... thank you

Can't wait to happen next... whether Atsuko able to earn Kai's forgiveness... and are they going back together?

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: fausto on February 12, 2013, 11:38:30 AM

That's how I love Kai  :inlove: :panic: Good job, take your Acchan back!!!!!!!! :thumbup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: FNK23 on February 12, 2013, 04:47:38 PM

Thanks for the updatee~
Well, after read it i was thought that minami will sure forgive acchan but then i think that minami just do that for her family and acchan sake,
There's still a possibility that minami wont forgive her.
I want more dramaa, it can be more interesting.
But just for now, i want to kill those bastard!!
Please update part 2 asap~

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: giakb48ff on February 12, 2013, 05:21:05 PM

OMGIRL!!! KAI-MINAMI !! so KAKKOI!!! i cant wait the next chapter !!!  :thumbup  :cathappy: :heart: :deco: :deco: :deco:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: nao707 on February 12, 2013, 06:45:32 PM

Kei-sannnnn!!!!!!!!  :on gay: I'm waiting for your update for quite a while and suddenly you updated!!!  :on GJ: Thank you soooo muuccchhh :on cny2: I love this story very much! :wriggly:

Keisuke is so gentleman *salute*. he sacrifice his feeling toward minami for her happiness.  :gmon tears:

Minami si so so kakkoi!  :cool1: he defend atsuko and also takahashi's image in front of everybody else. *dying in happpiness*  :luvluv1:

but why you ended the chapter???  :grr: such a cliffhanger... please update the next part... i'm dying to know more..  :gyaaah: is minami really forgive atsuko by kissing her in front of public or... it's just minami's plan to save her family and atsuko image? :mon dunno:

 please update soon.. :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: Strawberri on February 13, 2013, 02:06:17 AM

ARGHH!! That actual GAY asshole, I am ready to punch his face  :fuckyou: amazing update, waiting for the next part  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: Sydney W on February 14, 2013, 12:34:25 PM

Author-san, fast post the part 2 ~ I'm really curious to know the continuation of the story

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: nao707 on February 23, 2013, 05:02:18 PM

K..k...Kei-san.... :pleeease: where are you....?

please update the next chapter... :gyaaah:


arigatou... :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 02/12/13) Chapter 13 part 1
Post by: den_takacchan on March 20, 2013, 10:36:40 AM

OMG! my heart is beating like crazy you go takaboy!!!  :farofflook: ah i wanna beat that guy like crazy.!  :kickass: :knee: . so persistent!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: karupin12 on March 30, 2013, 11:24:40 AM

Waaaaaaa~!!
Finally an update!!  XD :twothumbs

I was smiling all the way while reading the kissing scene part LOL
my imaginations >.<

Takamina, just forgive Atsuko already!!  :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: takamae on March 30, 2013, 11:25:59 AM

Ok...panic attack , not good  :(
I hope after this they really reconcile

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: chichay12 on March 30, 2013, 11:47:56 AM

KYAAAAA  :heart: :heart: :heart:
WOW...
that was a longggggg kiss...
:on gay:
kei~~
wooohooooo ur back!!and ur update never disappoint me... :doh:
after i read this my atsumina heart is ALIVE!!!
 :farofflook: :luvluv1: :luvluv2:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: ShipEveryone on March 30, 2013, 12:07:30 PM

;slowly scroll down ..

;Sees TBC .

NOOOOOOOO  , I CAN'T WAITT .  :OMG:

But still  :mon trudge: Thanks For The Update . :mon inluv:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: FNK23 on March 30, 2013, 12:18:55 PM

yeahh, that matsumoto guy deserve it!! i hope he will ended up to hospital because people think that he got mental disorder.  :prayers:
ahh, i knew it!! it just for the sake of takahashi family and for defending acchan..  :OMG:
hope the next chapter takaboy could forgive acchan...
i will wait for your next update~  :byebye:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: momondmozide on March 30, 2013, 12:22:13 PM

wohowww fantastic  :twothumbs
take ur time and coming back as soon as possible  :deco:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: 7sam14 on March 30, 2013, 01:04:33 PM

YAY!!! an Update!!!  :D
Hope u'll have time to update this Fic more!

Atsumina!!  :OMG: :fainted: :gyaaah:
hope the'll be back together again!...
I can't Wait for The Next Update!!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: mae on March 30, 2013, 01:39:58 PM

Thank you for update
it's a great chapter ;)
Please update soon :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Sydney W on March 30, 2013, 01:54:37 PM

Finally !!!! They kissed and then acting cold. In the end, Atsuko faint. I guessMinami will soft-hearten looking on the collapse Atsuko. Hope she forgive Atsuko and live happily ever after. And not to forget to add a romantic/kisses scene. Hehe.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: cisda83 on March 30, 2013, 05:16:13 PM

Wah.... great move on Minami side.... she turned the table around....

Ah.. Minami is so sad.... after everything

Eh... Atsuko fainted like because of everything....

I can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the lovely update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Haruko on March 30, 2013, 05:28:22 PM

Yeah! Minamii wow!1 that Atsumina long kiss!! love it! come on takaboy be happy with atsuko!...

We want a smut scene :B they deserve it :B and we too

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Keisthename on March 31, 2013, 02:34:30 PM

I think I need to do this more often, or not? Well haven't been replying to your comments lately.. so yeah let me give it a try again.. Let's stay connected  :lol:

@karupin12: haha I'm glad the latest chapter got your imagination wild.. it was really intense  :inlove:
@takamae: I think we are near there, hopefully XD or maybe not? lol
@chichay12: yes it was very long, can you imagine that? omg ahhh  :love: Glad to know my updates don't disappoint you... though I guess I have to live up to your expectations? OMG /pressure XD
@ShipEveryone: OH YES! I've been mastering that technique to actually have a victim for that.. lol...
@FNK23: Haha I guess great minds think alike.. :))
@momonmozide: thank you, and yeah I will..
@7sam14: haha, I hope so too.. I just can't wait to see them together again... I wanted drama for this fanfic but I guess I bring you guys too much? I really like breaking hearts..  :inlove: :inlove: lol
@mae: Thank you for reading! Hope to see on the next update too.. XD
@SydneyW: Well probably the fainting scene of atsuko would be a great help, but who knows what might happen.. there's this possibility Taka will get angrier.. :)) Let's see...
@cisda83: Yeah I always admire how takamina can think of those heroic/romantic ideas in order to save Atsuko <3 Oh gosh I want someone like that
@Haruko: Smut huh? I will try... when my imagination had gone wild again... XD


There... thanks again for reading, I guess my other readers had given up on this? XD Yeah sorry to keep you guys waiting always... As I've said before I'll try to update sooner XD

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Railgun96 on March 31, 2013, 03:41:20 PM

OMG! Pls try to update!
Really wanna see what happen to them...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: den_takacchan on March 31, 2013, 04:17:15 PM

that is a long looong kiss. :on bleed: . btw thx for the update. this fic is getting better and better.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: nao707 on March 31, 2013, 05:42:16 PM

KYAAA~~~ They kissed!!! in the publiccc!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

What a nice update Kei-san!  :on GJ: You cure all the atsumina lover here (since lots of atsuyuu moment recently :depressed: ) I love atsuyuu couple too but atsumina is the best! :wriggly: Hahahaha. :wahaha:

No I'm not giving up your story yet, I need to know all the story :ding: Work kinda occupied most of my time and I dont have time to read fanfics. huhuhuhu :gyaaah: I miss your fanfic and you just update it yesterday! YAY! :onioncheer:

Minami.... please give atsuko a chance... Everybody deserve second chance right? :bingo:

Please make atsumina fanfic more. Thank you Kei-san! :hee:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: ShipEveryone on April 01, 2013, 05:08:23 PM

Quote from: Keisthename on March 31, 2013, 02:34:30 PM

@ShipEveryone: OH YES! I've been mastering that technique to actually have a victim for that.. Laughing Out Loud...

I feel stupid for falling for it .  :badluck:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: giakb48ff on April 02, 2013, 04:01:00 AM

UFF!! i almost forget this fanfic!! ahahha but love this ... ATSUMINA!!!!  :heart: :cathappy: :deco: :deco: :thumbup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Keisthename on April 02, 2013, 05:37:23 PM

@Railgun96: Yup, I'm trying to write as much as I could XD
@den_takacchan: Really? Glad to know that..
@nao707: actually I'm also writing a fic about 'atsuyuu' moments.. but I'm having a hard time finishing it.. I dunno why.. and well.. it's not really atsuyuu but partly.. I guess.. XD Also I'm happy you're giving your spare time reading this.. lol good luck on your work
@shipeveryone: hahaha  XD you need to be proud coz I think you're my first victim that actually confessed about it.. hahahah lol It makes me really happy though.. I can feel the success lol
@giakb48ff: I guess I can't blame you for 'almost forgetting' about this fic... XD

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: chiqinna on April 03, 2013, 05:30:59 AM

When I was reading the kiss scene  :shocked :shocked :shocked
I feel hot~~~   :on drench: and sweaty~
I hope minami forgive Acchan~~~ just forgive her okay?  :mon cute:
thanks for the update!!!  :mon love:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: ShipEveryone on April 03, 2013, 02:46:49 PM

Quote from: Keisthename on April 02, 2013, 05:37:23 PM

@shipeveryone: hahaha  XD you need to be proud coz I think you're my first victim that actually confessed about it.. hahahah lol It makes me really happy though.. I can feel the success lol

Be proud of it eh ..

KAY THEN , I'M PROUD TO BE THE FIRST VICTIM THAT CONFESS .  :cool1:

How I hope other confess too . So I won't be alone .  :fainted:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Sydney W on May 04, 2013, 05:49:08 PM

Update this fic, please. Waiting here patiently

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Elo on May 04, 2013, 06:02:03 PM

please update we all waiting and want to know what will happen to atsuko and minami

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: hazwani on May 04, 2013, 06:20:53 PM

please update soon.. :(

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: nao707 on May 04, 2013, 07:07:21 PM

Kei-sannn...... Where are you.....? please update soon.... I miss your fanfic :'>

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: POPCAT on May 05, 2013, 02:04:03 AM

Please uptdate soon I really like this fanfic and I just wanna know whats going to happen next. Thanks for your hard work for making this fanfic by the way :sleep:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: Elo on May 20, 2013, 08:33:55 PM

please update I want to know how it will go on

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: cisda83 on May 21, 2013, 10:51:42 AM

Please update...

Your fic is one of my fav.

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: Haruko on May 25, 2013, 09:12:35 AM

hisashiburi!!!... OMG!! i love this fic... thax for update.. aww tsundere takaboy..

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: chichay12 on May 25, 2013, 09:20:49 AM

 :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo:
atlast!! i can read your update!!
im so happy kyaaaaa  :farofflook:
i cant wait what will happen next!!
kei~~
thank you for the update!!
:kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: nunku on May 25, 2013, 10:03:47 AM

Thank you for update :heart:
I feel as same as Atsuko   
Friend --->bestfriend ----> lover XD

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: POPCAT on May 25, 2013, 11:36:31 AM

Thanks for the update.

Yay Atsumina is back Biatches :P  :wahaha:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: cisda83 on May 25, 2013, 12:33:15 PM

Ah... Poor Atsuko... because of all the things that she need to take on...  :smhid

She was so stress up... and also with the things that went on with Kai previously.... Now... ah...  :(

Ah... Minami was so worried... But at least Atsuko was feeling better as long as Minami would always be by her side.... ALWAYS... :wub:

OM... Minami's father was so strict and demanding... asking Minami to made up her mind... whether she would want to be with Atsuko with or without the contract

Ah... what would Minami's decision be?

Would she accept Atsuko after the contract...?

At least Minami forgave Atsuko... and wanted to be her friend again... but taking their relationship to another step... Minami was a bit reluctant.

Because she was afraid of being hurt again... although she knew both of them loved each other very much...

What's going to happen to them

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: chemicalstar on May 25, 2013, 12:54:05 PM

Minami's dad.... awesome!!

I hope Minami can change her mind for the 1,5 months left.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: Sydney W on May 25, 2013, 01:40:17 PM

Splendid & Awesome update !!! Been waiting for this fics update quite some time. Please continue to update soon. ^_^
Minami forgive Acchan but their relationship going to be end soon. So sad!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: 7sam14 on May 25, 2013, 01:55:02 PM

This just made my Day!

I Love this Fic so much!!
Thanks for the Update!!

Yay! their finally in good terms again...  :on woohoo:
can't wait for them to "Be More Than Friends"....  :grin:
hope they really won't get divorced after 1 month and 2 weeks...

I'll be waiting for the Next Update!!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: mae on May 25, 2013, 05:13:29 PM

Great update thank you
I looking forward for the next
Please update soon :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: Hii_chan on May 25, 2013, 05:33:55 PM

yay..finally you update :farofflook:
and Atsumina is back  :nya: :nya:
good job keis-san  :on GJ:
hope to see you soon :cow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: kahem on May 26, 2013, 01:21:57 AM

Ah!!!! It's so frustrating but great at the sa.e time!!! I'm glad Takamina finally forgave Acchan!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: nao707 on May 26, 2013, 03:21:19 PM

kyaaa~~~ an update!!!  :mon angel: :mon angel:

Finally, Takamina forgive Acchan but they not together anymore. somehow I'm happy that they reconciled but sad that they not together anymore. Minami please follow your heart that you love Acchan. hahahahaha

But Takamina's reason seems logic to me, she afraid that she will be hurt again. oh well i hope takamina and acchan get back together again. ahahaha.

anyway... my reaction when i see "TBC" --> :mon duh: Your fanfic is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter (with more drama of course. hehhehehe).

Thank you... and please update soon  :gmon sing:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: Keisthename on May 26, 2013, 05:29:26 PM

@haruko: haha thanks for always waiting.  :lol:
@chichay12: next happenings huh? I wonder  :roll:
@nunku: That's Atsuko, anyways. Everything will be about love if it's Minami.  :wub:
@popcat: Yes they are back  XD Want me to separate them again?  :w00t: :lol:
@cisda83: Thanks for the feedback ;) and well.. Minami's decision was to stay beside Atsuko again up until the end of the contract. After that, let's find out for the next chapters  :lol:
@chemicalstar: Haha I hope so too, you know Takamina's acting hard to get now. HAHAHA
@Sydney W: Thanks for always waiting. :)
@7sam14: "Be More Than Friends" you say? Kyaaa I want that too.. but who knows :)))
@Rukaeru: Great minds think alike, you're quite near to my plot. ;) but I'm gonna surprise you for the next events (hopefully) :lol:
@mae: Thanks for always waiting
@hiichan: Just call me Kei :)) yes I hope to see myself soon too  :lol:
@kahem: frustrating but great at the same time? How come?  :nervous
@nao707: drama you say?  :twisted: bring it on! lol Thanks for the great feedback and well thanks for becoming my another victim of TBC.. I feel so fulfilled. lololol

@everyone: I have another OS that I've made. Hopefully you guys will visit it and same as here comment your feedback on how things went on the story. This is based on my favorite song, it's quite special and I hope you'll find a time to read it.  :)
Thanks and have a great time or not  :cry:

LINK OF THE NEW OS! Visit: http://kp3pkeismagic.blogspot.com/2013/05/fanfic-first-love-at-712-am.html (http://kp3pkeismagic.blogspot.com/2013/05/fanfic-first-love-at-712-am.html)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: Elo on May 26, 2013, 05:38:40 PM

that OS was so cute So atsuko fell in love at 7.12 so cute

of couse I want to know more about your fic hehe

So I am waiting

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 06:55:54 AM

Keisthename-san

Atsumina always the best...

Thank you for the sweet OS...

Very nice indeed...

I can't wait to see more

Thank you again

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: IntanLakz on May 27, 2013, 01:14:20 PM

Waiting for update  :cow:

your fanfic is damn coool  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: POPCAT on May 27, 2013, 09:54:00 PM

Quote

@popcat: Yes they are back   Want me to separate them again?   

Bitch if u do that again this monkey  :mon thumb: won't be here on earth  :mon nyah: Yeah you tell them gurl, wait what? :mon wtf:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: miayaka on May 30, 2013, 08:48:56 PM

Finally had time to read!
Keiiiiiiii
Your silent reader will comment :3
Few words but true
as always it's great
and I'm glad my atsumina isshhh back! YAY! for that!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: Sydney W on June 23, 2013, 09:30:41 AM

I miss this story very much. Please update. ★

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: cisda83 on June 23, 2013, 10:41:07 AM

I like this story a lot...

So update please

Can't wait to see the next chapters

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: lezperv on June 28, 2013, 01:02:46 AM

Nooo! don't stop here, I want more!!! please continue X3

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: ezha on June 29, 2013, 07:52:21 PM

please update
i cant wait for next chapter and this story is very interesting

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: edogawa4869 on July 07, 2013, 07:29:32 PM

when the first time i read it, its just like my atsumina heart was explode.....  :panic:
pleeease continue it kei-san...
I JUST LOVE THEM .... :wub:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: ezha on August 08, 2013, 01:30:06 PM

please i'm still waiting for update !!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: kirayuu on August 08, 2013, 02:17:07 PM

atsumina~~~~~~~^ ^ more pls

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: ezha on August 23, 2013, 07:54:35 PM

PLEASE UPDATE THIS FANFIC ...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: ezha on August 23, 2013, 07:59:03 PM

PLEASE UPDATE THIS FANFIC ...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/25/13) Chapter 14
Post by: noah minami on September 06, 2013, 09:53:14 PM

Quote from: ezha on August 23, 2013, 07:59:03 PM

PLEASE UPDATE THIS FANFIC ...

Quote from: Rukaeru on May 25, 2013, 02:37:13 PM

Kyyaaaaaa!!! This is making me happy!! TakaAcchan is back together !!   :cow:  Yeah hey!!!  :nya: Thanks for the update!! And I'm still following your story~ Like always~ Still waiting for the new update~   :farofflook: Thanks again! I can't wait to see what happen next! I'm still wondering inside my mind, does Kai will awake soon or he will remain coma just like that?  :dunno:

Plz update... I love this story. Can't wait!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: 7sam14 on September 22, 2013, 02:08:56 PM

Keis-San!!!!!!

Pls. Update!!!!  :gyaaah:

I wanna Know What Happens next!!  :frustrated:
I repeated reading this so any times, I lost count

I Have Known when Atsumina becomes (as I said before) "More Than Friends"  :panic: :frustrated: :tantrum:

I'll Be Waiting!!  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 05/26/13) REPLIES + NEW OS!!! check it out!
Post by: shazrey on December 03, 2013, 08:48:36 PM

i love your story..have read its many of times
pleaaseeee update   :cry:  :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" [Atsumina] (UPDATED!: 03/30/13) Chapter 13 part 2
Post by: sakura takaoshi on December 13, 2013, 07:30:41 PM

Another kisu awwwwwww ............   :drool: :drool: :drool:
 
I read the fic. to this point is fantastic, goes ahead and thank you for your actualizaciones  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
 
Minami and do not suffer Acchan and forgive her and kiss her  more  :panic:

 :heart:<<<<<ATSUMINA FOREVER>>>>> :heart:

Title: To be updated today/later/whatever.. CONTRACT's new Chapter!! (12-29)
Post by: Keisthename on December 28, 2013, 05:40:56 PM

Will be updating this today. (12-29-13) Oh I'm such a teaser. w  :twisted: Sorry to keep you all waiting for too long...

Anyways, please look forward to it. I'm giving you all time to re-read it if you guys have forgotten about the story already.  :thumbsup :sweatdrop:

Oh well, I am back! And I hope this one's for good.  :smhid meh

Title: Re: CONTRACT's new Chapter!! (12-29)
Post by: kazuski on December 29, 2013, 04:41:21 AM

Kei-sama, you comeback...OH MY GOD!!!!  :shocked
I have been waiting for this like forever and now you're here, i'm gonna cry  :cry:

 
Okay, pass the drama.  XD
Looking forward to what will happen next  :P
Off to buy some popcorn   :cow:

Title: Re: CONTRACT's new Chapter!! (12-29)
Post by: olive29 on December 29, 2013, 04:48:46 AM

FINALLY !!!!

THANK GOD!!!!

I'LL BE WAITING !!!

Title: Re: CONTRACT's new Chapter!! (12-29)
Post by: chichay12 on December 29, 2013, 06:41:41 AM

YATTA!  :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo:

welcomeback kei-chan :D

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: olive29 on December 29, 2013, 07:41:24 AM

Atsuko is jealous at Keisuke...

I like possessive Atsuko...

More,please...

I want more...

Oh,welcome back Kei-san..

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: Sydney W on December 29, 2013, 08:36:35 AM

Finally you update this fics after all long waited. Everything seem back to norm for Minami and Atsuko. The way Atsuko being possessive and affectionate towards Minami. Hope Minami could give Atsuko another chance to reconcile their relationship as couples not as friends.
Update the next chapter soon, your diehard fans can't wait any longer.  :inlove: :lol:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: deguchi on December 29, 2013, 09:04:54 AM

Finally I can put my comment on this awesome fic!!
Theres so much tears but hope those tears become brightly smile for our atsumina couple~
thanks for this chapt!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: cisda83 on December 29, 2013, 10:49:24 AM

Very long and nice Update... Yeah.... nice new year present...

Minami's mom was trying to find out Atsuko's real feeling...

And Minami's mom was happy with the result because Atsuko really loves Minami...

Ah... War declaration between Atsuko and Keisuke... for Minami's affection

Atsuko is such a scary cat... even then she was still trying to save and protect Minami...

What's going to happen to Atsumina next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: Haruko on December 29, 2013, 11:26:27 AM

yey

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: edogawa4869 on December 29, 2013, 01:49:15 PM

YOU'RE BAAAAAACCCKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :onioncheer:  :panic: :panic: :panic: :mon XD:

you don't know how much i miss the fanfic....  :farofflook:

and that AtsuMina moment makes me feel....  :on bleed:

welcome back kei-san...

and thank you so much...  :bow:

^_^

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: shazrey on December 29, 2013, 08:52:40 PM

thank you so much for the update  :twothumbs  :twothumbs
its was awesome as always  :thumbsup

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: lezperv on December 29, 2013, 11:26:43 PM

That was just freaking AMAZING!!!  :on GJ:

Oh how I miss this story and I'm glad to have you back writing again, but why you gotta end it sooo soon? They still have 1.5 months left X3

Hope you'll update soon  :hee:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: 7sam14 on January 05, 2014, 08:27:12 AM

Kei-San!!!! U'r Back!!!!  :w00t:


This was what I seriously needed before I have to go to school tom. :farofflook:
something Sweet and Cute!!!  :inlove:

I'm glad they're back in the same house... except that they aren't in the same bed Yet....  :glasses:

hahahahaha Acchan being jealouse of Keisuke..... and being possessive of Takamina!!  :lol:

I hope u get to update soon!!! I'll be waiting!!! Woohoo~~  :twothumbs     :on woohoo:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: KaeKain on January 05, 2014, 10:03:13 PM

yaaaay /o/ arigatou~ 8D
awn~..kissu kissu finally :inlove:
ganbaree atsukoo! ;)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: KaoriChan on January 19, 2014, 10:06:28 AM

I want Atsumina more than friends!!!

Thank you and Please update :mon cute:


 :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 15 (12-29-13 Update)
Post by: mae on February 12, 2014, 11:21:53 PM

thank you so much for the update :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: blakwhite on February 22, 2014, 06:06:30 PM

yeaaayyy finally u update it kei-san  :mon XD:

nice chap  :mon inluv:

acchan, pls dont break takamina's heart again  :mon waterworks:
and takamina pls trust acchan more  :mon waterworks:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: olive29 on February 22, 2014, 06:06:49 PM

Thank you for the update  :bow:

I like possessive Acchan...  :grin:

Ah... another misunderstanding again...  :smhid

But, it's quite hard for Atsuko to gain Takamina's trust again...

Hope they can solve it quickly...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: lezperv on February 22, 2014, 07:57:05 PM

WHAT THE HELL!!!

Not again! NOT AGAIN!!! Why does Minami always catch the bad part?! GAH!!!  :angry1:

At least please let Minami follow them so that she'll hear what Atsuko have to say to that son of a bitch... Then again, I'm afraid because it is Atsuko, she'll do something that will make Minami misunderstand again... *sigh*

You're giving me heart attacks with all these misunderstandings!

Please update soon  :kneelbow:, like seriously, soon!  :shifty:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: Haruko on February 22, 2014, 10:46:33 PM

Wait what noooooooooooo

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: chichay12 on February 23, 2014, 02:23:15 AM

WAHHHHHHHH   :OMG: :angry1: :badluck: :err: :frustrated: :tantrum: :on cloudeye: :fainted:
i think i use to much emoji..but that what i feelssssss right now XD
kei~please update soon :on gay:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: KaoriChan on February 23, 2014, 07:49:59 AM

Again!! Noooo :tantrum:
AtsuMina  :pleeease:
I feel depressed now :on cloudeye:


Thanks for the update
Update soon  :bow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: Sydney W on February 23, 2014, 09:14:24 AM

I hope Minami will follow Atsuko & Takeru to see what they are up to since she giving Atsuko second chance. Let Minami hear their conversation till the end or at least standby in case Takeru trying to do something to Atsuko.
Is this something what Atsuko planned for ? To clear up everything ?

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: chiqinna on February 23, 2014, 12:08:48 PM

aahhhhh~ this Author-san really likes teasing the readers~  :fainted:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: cisda83 on February 23, 2014, 01:43:04 PM

another misunderstanding?

Would Minami follow atsuko?

Would Atsuko be attacked by Takeru?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: deguchi on February 23, 2014, 02:23:09 PM

Err..thanks for..update...
and another misunderstanding...
And please just kill that TakeSickboy.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update)
Post by: Keisthename on February 23, 2014, 02:32:05 PM

I seriously don't know how to answer your comments regarding the story. I'm still writing up until now (for the next chapters ahead). There's a big twist coming, and I myself was also shocked about everything that I've written. I am warning you guys, everything will be more complicated.  :yawn: :lol: XD

I guess a few of you would be really mad! lol or not? Or maybe two sides/team is about to be created. w

When we get there, just let me know which sides are you in. ww


Although despite my lack of replies to all my readers here, I tell you guys... I all appreciate the effort! Thank you!  :cry: :love: :love:

---

blakwhite Break Takamina's heart? I think it would be the opposite. Or probably they are going to break each other's heart at the same time. w

olive29 I do love possessive Acchan too! I can always feel the love. ww

lezperv Hahaha I hope your heart's still functioning well after all the heart attacks you've gone through because of this fic. w I will try to resolve every misunderstandings. w But I hope you're not going to be too shocked on the next chapter. w

Haruko Oh Yeeeeeeeeeessss :))

Chichay12 Haha thank you for filling the comment box with lots of emojis.. I wonder how you'll feel on the next chapter XD

KaoriChan I'm fulfilled you felt depressed lol Ofc all about the fanfic. ww

@Sydney W Yes Atsuko's trying to clear and resolve everything.  You'll witness that on the next chapters.. (on the next next chapter maybe? w)

@chiqinna yes I enjoy making everything slow when there's a huge commotion going on in this fic. haha Evil I know!

cisda83 Yes! another misunderstanding indeed. And I also wonder the same thing. ww

deguchi Hahaha I would love to do that. I hope there will be Onoe Matsuya here so I can revenge. lol Just kidding www

Thank you everyone and see you all on the next chapter! :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update) + REPLIES
Post by: Sydney W on February 23, 2014, 03:07:55 PM

Since you are writing for the next chapter, hope you could post it early and make it a double update for readers. I'm awaiting your complication / dramatic chapter.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update) + REPLIES
Post by: Tanchan on February 24, 2014, 08:48:00 AM

Kei-san if you don't update the next chapter quickly I'm gonna ...gonna unfriend you on facebook XD

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update) + REPLIES
Post by: lezperv on February 24, 2014, 09:33:19 AM

Kei-chan!

You, my friend, are a sadist. I bet you're enjoying all these tortures thing that you're inflicting on me X3

You're hoping that I'm surviving from these constant heart attacks that I'm getting from your misunderstandings, but you just gave me another one! by telling me that I'll be shock about the next chapter -_- I have a feeling that Minami and Atsuko will have a fight again... or another break up again even though they aren't together... or worst, no more talking to each other and Minami giving up... I have hope in you for saving my AtsuMina!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 16 (02-23-14 Update) + REPLIES
Post by: IamNot_Glad on February 25, 2014, 12:09:04 PM

Why Minami always witnessed the bad part ??  :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:


Kei-san you gonna pay for this !!!  :grr: :grr: :grr: :grr: :grr: :grr:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: chichay12 on February 25, 2014, 03:44:59 PM

Wth just happen XD
Oh god bring me the next update now kei!!!! :D
Update soon :on gay:

Ps.thank u for the fast update  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: lezperv on February 25, 2014, 04:27:29 PM

WTF JUST HAPPENED!!!  :frustrated:

I'm sooo lost and confused now! What happened to Minami that blanked her out and then suddenly a month later, her brother marries her 'ex' girlfriend? WHAT?!!! I thought the brother was dead in the first place? I didn't know he was in a freaking coma! WTF?!!!   :angry1:

I'm seriously frustrated KEI! I hope you update soon for your sake  :shifty:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Keisthename on February 25, 2014, 04:34:34 PM

lol at the reaction..

@ Chichay12: ww A LOT =))

@ lezperv: Nope the real Kai is not dead. You can read chapter 6 again to refresh the whole story. XD

Ooops I should've reminded everyone to re-read the whole story if they have forgotten the details regarding every character. Because right now every small characters I've mentioned before will come out and play the important roles.. Kai is back, the real Kai. =)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: noah minami on February 25, 2014, 04:55:31 PM

I just spend all days reread as I mention to you at twitter.  :nervous And now the end? ?? Majide??? :wth
 I know takamina brother (kai ) didn't die but still.. atsuko not with takamina but end up with kai??  :banghead:
Why kei san???  :O :shocked
Plz tell us ..  :panic:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: olive29 on February 25, 2014, 05:30:27 PM

W-W-WHAT??? WHAT HAPPENED HERE??  :shocked

Why Atsuko with real Kai now???  :shocked

Everything is so fast...

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: takeshi77 on February 25, 2014, 06:40:08 PM

why??...why   :panic:  :panic:  :panic:
why happen like this??
..wht will happen to minami after all of this happen??
its not just atsuko that had heartbreak but sure minami as well (mostly)
and wht just happen actually...i dont get its  :banghead:
and is that atsuko will remain with real kai????
hmmm...hope there is something resolve regarding and could tell us more why all of this happen
and wht will happen next...
look forward for ur update :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: yuuyu on February 25, 2014, 07:32:03 PM

(http://gamemoir.files.wordpress.com/2014/02/how-i-met-your-mother.gif)
ARE YOU SERIOUS

Never fail to surprise me with your twists. Nope. :/

MARIKO APPEARS (MariMii FTW)! :D

Poor Atsuko... who would have thought that Kai was in love with her too...

What happened to Takamina back there?

And what about Takeru?

Is the contract canceled now that Kai's awake? Or did the terms change?

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: atsukojiyuu_C on February 25, 2014, 08:33:54 PM

Wow Wooow, i think it has ENDED  :sweat:

What exactly do Takamina?????  :banghead: :err: :err:

I hope you update as soon as possible PLEASE ......... :mon pray2:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: kiruchi on February 25, 2014, 10:50:28 PM

WTF happened there?!   :shocked
I thought that Takamina's in coma instead of the real Kai. :v
Update and explain!!! XDDD  :lol:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: mikaellitsa on February 25, 2014, 10:58:57 PM

how did u do that t me i almost died like 10 times till i finish it.... :shocked
plz update soon  what happened t takamina ?? acchan?? kai?? :( 

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: cisda83 on February 26, 2014, 09:58:50 AM

Ah... so Atsuko is really getting married to the real Kai...

And Minami let it....

Why did her mother not stopping it... when she knew their real feeling for one another?

Would Kai know what's going on with his sister and Atsuko?

Would Kai let them be happy?

Why Atsuko suddenly need to marry to the real Kai?

Why would she not tell the truth to Kai...?

Why their friends did not tell the truth to Kai...?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: chiqinna on February 26, 2014, 01:47:59 PM

 :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh
 :? :? :? :? :? :?
 :O :O :O :O :O :O
 :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked
 :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:
 :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
 :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
 :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease:
Kai x Atsuko .. :on redcard: :on redcard: :on redcard:  :on redcard: :on redcard:
Minami x Atsuko ..  :mon pray2: :mon pray2: :mon pray2: :mon pray2: :mon pray2:
 :mon speechless: :mon speechless: :mon speechless: :mon speechless:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Tanchan on February 27, 2014, 09:22:15 AM

Uh oh? I smell something fishy here . I have a feeling Takamina's disguise as her brother was somehow blown up, thus the fake marriage turned into a real one with the real Kai.

@kei-san: who knows may be we are but we just don't know XD

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: ainivel on February 27, 2014, 09:44:57 AM

i just accidentally searched "contract" today and not expecting that there's an update!
but why the real kai??? anyway thanks author-san!  :cathappy:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: blakwhite on February 28, 2014, 09:51:39 AM

hmm, wait wait,

i think i get it.

so, when minami wish "If by chance the contract doesn't exists. Atsuko can live without me. Our relationship wouldn't exist and she can choose any man she would like to marry without any restrictions. I would remain as her bestfriend and probably support her whole-heartedly and be happy for her."

her wish come true, then she was replaced by kai??   :pig huh:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Sydney W on March 01, 2014, 08:39:00 AM

Quote

"Minami! Minami!!" A loud voice screaming her name was the last thing she had remembered.

Guess Minami faint due to tiredness. The surprise is Takeru know Minami in disguise. So coincidence, real Kai awake. To clear eveything, the marriage have to be real in order to save Atsuko and Minami family reputation.

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: nao707 on March 01, 2014, 02:31:06 PM

OH MY GOD!!!! I MISSED 2 CHAPTER!!!  ;A;....................... i hate my busy schedule...  :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:


hmm... I agree with Sydney. Somehow i felt the same way when i read Takamina left Atsuko for Atsuko's sake and her family reputation. So sad... ukh..  :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:


by the way.... just an idea... how about make a side story about Marimii...? There is something goin on between them i guess... hhmmm~~~  :hehehe: :hehehe:


Please update soon~  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: minami_pops on March 01, 2014, 04:09:55 PM

sugoi~  :heart:
i like your fanfic..
 :cool1:
 :twothumbs  :inlove:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: mae on March 02, 2014, 03:25:02 PM

please update soon :)

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: River1721 on March 02, 2014, 08:29:29 PM

 :cry: I felt like I was getting killed when reading this! WHY! Takamina you have to get Acchan back!  :banghead:

Takeru! :angry: :angry: I swear I was going to kill him if this story were real!  :twisted:

Overall you are amazing in making the twist!

Please Update Soon!!  :)

Amazing Fic overall

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: IamNot_Glad on March 08, 2014, 01:22:57 PM

 :huhuhEH ??
Why is Atsuko with Kai ??   :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:
I'm really confused  :cool2: :cool2: :cool2:

Did really Takamina gave up on Acchan ??      :err: :err: :err: :err: :err: :err:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: takashu on March 11, 2014, 10:05:28 AM

I'm a new reader here ...

ehh ... why is atsuko with kai?

This is very cool, read this fanfic makes my mood alternated from happy :D, sad :cry:, upset :banghead: etc.....

please update soon ...!

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on March 12, 2014, 03:46:36 PM

Ano, where minami?  :?
Atsuko with real kai?
And the contract is over?
I'm curious, please update soon...  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: ryu201 on March 15, 2014, 03:14:33 AM

Atsuko with the real kai?!
How about takamina?!  :shocked
Kya!!!! Poor minami  :on speedy:
How dare u make my takamina sad author-san!  :on kimbo:
Heehehehe.
But i really wait for next chapter.
Thank for update author-san -bow-

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: liabont on April 13, 2014, 11:49:16 AM

Quote from: blakwhite on February 28, 2014, 09:51:39 AM

hmm, wait wait,

i think i get it.

so, when minami wish "If by chance the contract doesn't exists. Atsuko can live without me. Our relationship wouldn't exist and she can choose any man she would like to marry without any restrictions. I would remain as her bestfriend and probably support her whole-heartedly and be happy for her."

her wish come true, then she was replaced by kai??   :pig huh:

please update  :cry:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Justqle on April 14, 2014, 06:11:49 PM

Author-san, when you will update this story?!  :depressed:

i always waiting for update  :fainted:

Please update  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: flunicsnaz on April 19, 2014, 06:41:35 PM

 :OMG:  :depressed:
damn it..
I read this story while listening to " I still believe - Mariah carey "

 :pleeease:  :tantrum:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Lucky Terra on May 09, 2014, 10:32:11 AM

I'm curious, please update

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Keisthename on June 08, 2014, 07:14:28 AM

Will be updating this soon! Please do read again if you've already forgotten this story  :lol: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: Justqle on June 08, 2014, 07:46:19 AM

ah i thought there's an update  :lol:
i'm really glad finally you'll update this later  XD XD
yokai, waiting yoo  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "CONTRACT" Chapter 17 (02-25-14 Update)
Post by: ryu201 on June 08, 2014, 02:30:34 PM

U alive author-san! :p
And im veeeerrrryyyyy happy that u back with good news  :twothumbs
I hope all author same like u and update their fanfic  :fainted:
Please update,im wait u  :ding: :on GJ:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: chichay12 on June 08, 2014, 05:12:14 PM

Saving the spot XD
Gonna edit this later :nervous

first...
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! update!!!!!!
u know how long i wait to read your new update
so YEY for me!! XD

ok back to your update...
atsumina feels  :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :wriggly: :nya:
this is one of my fav update of you..
but oh no!! takeru *Sigh he knows the secret already tsk tsk  :frustrated:
kei!!!please update soon XD
till next update!!
have a nice day :on gay:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: hidden_player on June 08, 2014, 05:33:10 PM

Just one word to describe this chapter: AWESOME :thumbup

Just so cute and so touched with my OTP. You need to update it soon (and I'm still waiting for next sequel of Will You Take My Hand)  :wub:

You never make us disappoint. Feel sad that this masterpiece will end soon (hope Atsumina/Takatsuko happy ending).

About the countdown for Acchan's BD, we shippers really can't wait for it. Ganbatte this time, ne :rock:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: Kakeru15 on June 08, 2014, 08:19:34 PM

 Finally an update..  :lol:

Actually this fic so great haha  :thumbup :grin:

Please update soon author-san :twothumbs

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: lezperv on June 08, 2014, 09:18:12 PM

Ahhh~

After reading this chapter, everything makes sense to me... I think... lol

So because Minami is willing to sacrifice everything to protect Atsuko, she let her brother marry her wife? Right? Damn, I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. I also really like how Atsuko was surprised and was screaming with her eyes to Minami that its not what she thinks. I really like how Minami open up about her insecurities too. I think this could of been a good place to end, so that the sadness won't prolong, but clearly you're not done yet. So i'll be waiting.

Update soon ne kei-chan ^_^

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: Sydney W on June 09, 2014, 02:22:21 AM

They (Minami x Atsuko) were happy but there is sad ending where they need to separate. Wondering if Takeru spread the news that Atsuko is with Minami not Kai.

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: cisda83 on June 09, 2014, 05:54:54 AM

Such a heartfelt confession from both Atsuko and Minami to each other...

I like how the story is developing.

I guess its coming to its end...?!

I do hope you can make it longer... or may be a sequel....

Can't wait to see how the story is going to be wrapped up

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: IamNot_Glad on June 09, 2014, 01:43:11 PM

Finally you update Kei-san. I thought you forgot about this....    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Such a heart warming scene between Atsuko and Minami :( :( :( :heart: :heart: :heart:

Damn that Takeru, I'm the first one to kill that guy   :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Thanks for the update   :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: ubulubulbilu on June 09, 2014, 06:02:04 PM

So many flashback, aaand u r not allowed to "hiatus"! Lol
Btw Kei san, dont forget to update "our story" yo. I really love that one. Arigatou~

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: JennyAJ on June 13, 2014, 10:49:12 PM

Can't wait for the next update :twothumbs

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: chiqinna on August 05, 2014, 03:54:01 PM

my heart... should I be happy for them  :cry: :cry: :cry:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: amachan48 on August 06, 2014, 08:47:39 AM

finally.... the Contract's updates ^_^

sou ka.... thats the reason why Takamina let go of Atsuko, because she afraid that Takeru might spread the news about Takamina and Atsuko are together and it will lead into a big scandal. well..... poor Takamina  :cry:

dont make my chibi suffer for a long time please :cry:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 18!! (06-08-2014)
Post by: crosteks on August 22, 2014, 02:50:36 PM

 :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :fap :fap :fap :fap :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: amachan48 on September 02, 2014, 04:42:02 PM

woahh....  kei-san, you're back!!!! and with Contract's update too, yiipppiiiieee ^_^

okay, now I just cry really hard in the middle of night here because of minami and her father scene. T__T is just really sad to read it from minami's POV about her depression about this condition, and regret about what she have done and the effect to her family....

ah, I hope you will update this story soon because I really curious about what happen next. hehehehe


thanks for the update by the way ^_^

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: Sydney W on September 02, 2014, 05:20:49 PM

Hmm. That how things happened. Next should be how real Kai end up with Atsuko.

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: cisda83 on September 02, 2014, 08:29:51 PM

Okay... now that the real Kai woke up... what would happen with Atsuko and Minami?

Would the contract transfer to the real Kai?

What about Minami and Atsuko feelings for each other?

But then your previous chapters describing that Atsuko was with the real Kai...

While Minami just went back to be the real Minami...and just be there, looking sad on the side

And the real Kai just started to love Atsuko and Happy with this wife of his

Or was it just a parade... a pretend?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: korin48 on September 03, 2014, 11:04:46 AM

Asfghjkl!!! He is awake??? So the contract was transferred to Kai?? Thats why they ended being together?

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: Justqle on September 03, 2014, 08:31:41 PM

kyaaaaaaa update  :mon dance: thank you for the update  XD
i'm very touched after read how minami would face the problem with atsuko, how their loved each other  :farofflook:
eeh what??! i just confuse now .. what will happen to minami and atsuko for the next??
ehm how long they doing the contract till now? they would doing it for 5 months, rite?  :huhuh

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: crosteks on September 21, 2014, 10:14:32 AM

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter... :hip smile: :deco: :deco: :hip smile: :deco:
  :otomerika: :yossi: :cow: :yossi: :otomerika:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: Dianalrs on December 13, 2014, 06:47:12 AM

Ooooooooh!!!  :panic:
I hope you update soon! :bow:  :bow:  :bow:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on December 26, 2014, 05:16:35 PM

you really love people left hanging XD ... and i one of them  :(

well my heart really breaks from reading this fic :cry: :cry:


it's full of problems and break ups :panic: :panic:

update pls  :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: Saint0angel on July 17, 2015, 03:34:45 PM

 :bow: :bow: update please !!!!! :heart:

Title: Re: My 1st Fic [Atsumina] entitled "Contract" Not OS maybe? LOL!
Post by: Saint0angel on November 27, 2015, 01:32:54 PM

Quote from: miayaka on July 03, 2012, 04:05:50 PM

woohoo finally your writing!  :jphip:
keep it up!
atsumina  :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: phoenix0i on November 28, 2015, 03:48:53 AM

Thank you! Please keep updating..

Title: Re: CONTRACT Update! Chapter 19 pt. 1 (2014-09-02)
Post by: Keisthename on January 10, 2016, 01:04:39 PM

I'm happy to inform all of my readers that I am back and now writing. ww Sorry it took me a while but if you still remember me and my fanfics, then help me out on what to update next.. ww If you forgot the list, here are my fanfics: http://kp3pkeismagic.blogspot.com/p/my-fanfics.html (http://kp3pkeismagic.blogspot.com/p/my-fanfics.html)

As of now, I think I will be updating [PREQUEL] Majisuka Gakuen: The Beginning  :twothumbs

Title: Re: CONTRACT Atsumina [Announcement 2016/01/10]
Post by: ryu201 on January 10, 2016, 04:36:48 PM

Kei-san!
Okaeri!!! Its been a while ne?
 Miss u and miss ur story so much!

Title: Re: CONTRACT Atsumina [Announcement 2016/01/10]
Post by: Ren-kun on January 10, 2016, 04:47:49 PM

omg WELCOME BACK AUTHOR-SAN~!!.. :pen_whirl:
happy to know that you are writing again.. :D
I hope you could post the sequel for A Fan and A Lover (I reeeaaallly like this one) :prayers:
and hopefully you'll keep updating MG: The Beginning..
I'm very interested to know how the TakaYuu friendship will affect the canon storyline..

Title: Re: CONTRACT Atsumina [Announcement 2016/01/10]
Post by: Jsheep on May 13, 2016, 07:00:02 PM

Please don't drop it ok?

Title: Re: CONTRACT Atsumina [Announcement 2016/01/10]
Post by: FoxKing on May 15, 2016, 05:49:11 AM

glad that you are updating ^^

cant wait for your next updates for this!

also cant wait for Majisuka Gakuen REALY want more fics for that.

Title: Re: CONTRACT Atsumina [Announcement 2016/01/10]
Post by: sasshirie on May 19, 2016, 11:34:59 AM

Quote from: FoxKing on May 15, 2016, 05:49:11 AM

glad that you are updating ^^

cant wait for your next updates for this!

also cant wait for Majisuka Gakuen REALY want more fics for that.

same

Title: Re: CONTRACT Atsumina [Announcement 2016/01/10]
Post by: minami_24 on May 19, 2016, 12:11:02 PM

Wait for your update author-san  :twothumbs