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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: yuukimoko on July 04, 2012, 09:37:33 PM
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:?another one......I'm really helpless!!!!! :smhid
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Chapter1-----My punishment is....
'You need a punishment for your sins! what you did was something horrible, so you may get a horrible punishment!' The great magician shouted in the big council room.The great coucil had come there for a single person, and for that person's punishment.
'Watanabe Mayu, The cyborg prince .Do you have something to say in your defense?' the great king asked his daughter.He didn't think that a time like this will ever come, when he must punish one of his blood.
Mayu, that was in the centre of the room,in a big circle, looked at her father with a blank face and said 'I have nothing to say, Your Highness.'
'Can you at least explain to us, why had you did that?'Her father said hopefuly ,maybe ,just maybe he could save his daughter if she said why did she did what she did.
'.....no, your highness,I have nothing to explain' she said as she looked with a blank face at the high council.She only wanted to get her punishment soon because there wasn't anything to be explained.
The king sighed and looked at his side on the one of the 3 thrones where should have been 3 princes, now was just one.Takamina looked back at her father and give him a sad gaze, they both know that Mayu won't say anything......so the king didn't try to say anything more.
'then, the council shall now decide your punishment!' he said as he give the council the right to speak.
There was a silence for 5 minutes,time when the council decided the punishement.The high magician got up and said
'If you lets me, my king..'
'yes, you may speak'
'Yes, thank you my king.'the magician looked around for a second before looked back at the king.
'The high councile have decided that as a punishment for her crimes, the young prince shall go back in time like a dog.'
'W-What?!!? ' the king yelled furious 'Are you making fun of the royal familly? I understand that she would be sent back, but like a dog??how could you! explain yourself and the council, high magician!' the king yelled at the magician
'y-yes my king.She would be sent back , but that is nowhere a punishment because she will live and try to remake somehow her life.But the punishment will be her form, she will take the form of a dog, her form won't be permanent and from time to time she will become human again.If she will ever find a heart in the past then we shall bring her back your highness, and she will continue her life.'
'so she needs to find a heart,like to have more emotions?'the king looked at Mayu 'as you heard Mayu, this is like a mission.You need to feel ,and then you can come back to your people!the cyborg prince to become emotional?hahaha! I belive that will be possible right Mayu?" the king said hopping that he wont lose his second prince and that she will come back.But Mayu only continued to stare at him with blank eyes, no one could read what she was thinking....
Seeing no reaction the high magician began the spell 'Lets begin!
Ohh you the god of light give this person the form of a dog, so she shall feel emotions!Ohh you, the god of darkness, take this person in the past, her prison!'
The circle around Mayu was full of light and a second circle appeared beside that one, it was becoming an powerful circle.And Mayu started disappearing.
'Mayu!' Takamina got up from her throne shouting after her sister with teary eyes......
'Hah.....they think they can do whatever they want with me.....I will come back....and when I do, they all will die....' Mayu thought as she disappeared in the light.
***************200 years ago**************
*PUFFFFFFFF*
A strong light and smoke appeared everywhere around in the Centre Park of a a big city in Japan.And from the smoke come out a puppy of average height.
'Huh, so I 'm back in the past like a puppy.....how stupid' Mayu thought as she started looking around as the smoke disappeared.It was very early in the morning and there was no one in the park.She started walking in a direction to see where exactly she is.At a moment in the park a person was running , doing her morning exercises listening to music.
Mayu stopped and looked at the running girl, she was in short clothes ,with headphones and tired.But as you looked closer you could see a princess with white skin,black hair and eyes, a true princess.
The girl saw the puppy and slowly stopped at him.
'wahh~ you are so cute~!' the girl said smiling as she took Mayu in her hands and started stroking her.
'what is a cute puppy like you doing here I wonder? hmmm?' she smiled at the puppy as she took her in her hand carefuly
'what I'm doing here? ohh~ nothing! I just got punished be my fathers council and transformed in a puppy, also I was sent from the future! what do you say? lets be friend!' Mayu thought sarcasticaly as she looked annoyed at the girl how was stroking her.
'hm? oh you have a collar! ' the girl said as she looked at the red collar 'so your name is Mayu-chan ne?how cuteeee~'
'eh I have a collar?! how could they??no one puts a collar on me!!'Mayu thought as she felt the collar on her neck
'so did you get lost?I don't see anyone around...' the girl said as she looked around the park
'then I'll keep you and wait until someone will come for you.....don't worry Mayuyu I'll find your owner!' the girl said smiling
'what owner? and Mayuyu? what's that? a pet name , how could you human!'
'then, lets go Mayuyu, you'll be living with me from now~ ohh! I forgot to introduce myself...hehe~ I'm Kashiwagi Yuki!Its nice to meet you Mayuyu!' Yuki said as she picked the puppy , put her at her chest carefuly ,got up and started walking home.
'Kashiwagi Yuki hah....a pretty name for a pretty face.....but wait w-what? you are taking me with you!? nononono~ wait a second!!!!nooooooooooo-'
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this was the first chapter and prologue.....hope you liked it?.....and leave me a review?please? :bingo: :dunno:
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wooow I like it :on GJ:
it is very interesting!!! :hehehe:
what will happen after?? :dunno:
please update soon :nya:
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this looks interesting i cant wait till this is updated Mayu cant go bk to the future until she finds a heart wht will happen when she falls in love with yuki its not like she can speak she is a dog aahhh
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Puppy Mayuyu living with Yukirin! Interesting and I foresee lots of funny and adorable moments between them. Looking forward to your next update!
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Cool, the Cyborg Prince again :ding:
Now Yuki adopted Mayuyu, how their life gonna change
Interesting, pls continue :on roll:
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Chapter 2-My first bath with Yuki, and the waiting
'then, lets go Mayuyu, you'll be living with me from now~ ohh! I forgot to introduce myself...hehe~ I'm Kashiwagi Yuki!Its nice to meet you Mayuyu!' Yuki said as she picked the puppy , put her at her chest carefuly ,got up and started walking home.
'Kashiwagi Yuki hah....a pretty name for a pretty face.....but wait w-what? you are taking me with you!? nononono~ wait a second!!!!nooooooooooo-'
'.....so thats what happened.....and now here I am , in the embrace of this Yuki person, going to her house....' Mayu thought to herself as she looked around .People started waking and going to do their jobs, school etc. But as Mayu could see, the walked in circle for the last 15 minutes......Yuki come to a stop and looked at Mayu
'so this is your new house, Mayuyu~' Yuki said as she turned Mayu to see her house.
'...hah...and now?' Mayu said sarcasticaly, only that it come out as 'ham ham.....hmm?' she said with a cute face
'you are so cutteeeee~' Yuki said as she lifted Mayu up at her face and hugged her close to her neck
'w-wait! you are killing me!!' Mayu said as she was hugged but as always it come out as 'hammm!ham hamm!'....
'cuttttteeeeeeee~!!!' Yuki continued to say as she walked in the house
*inside*
'heh.....Mayu I wanted to say sorry about the long walking....I really needed to finish my morning exercises,so I took a long walk,we kinda walked in a circle...hehe~'Yuki said cutely as she put Mayu down on the floor
'I already figured that out,stupid human.'Mayu thought as she sitted down
'then what do you say, breakfast or a bath first?' Yuki asked as she looked at Mayu
Mayu looked back at her with a cute face ,but inside she was like 'I'm hungry, and I don't wanna take a bath!but how comes that she is asking me?' the puppy then made 'hmmm...?' and titled her heat to the side
'mou~! you are too cute.....!' Yuki said as she picked the puppy back in her hands . 'then lets go take a bath first~' she started walking to the bathroom in her room.
'this is my room Mayuyu.You'll sleep here with me!' Yuki said as she put Mayu back down and looked for clothes to wear after the bath.
'well this is a cute and normal room....w-wait what? I'll sleep with you!?' Mayu would be all red if she were still human but as a puppy she just got out some sounds that made her more cute.
'then lets go in the bath Mayuyu~' Yuki raised her and took her to the bathroom
'wai-wait! aren't we taking separate baths?' the puppy began to bark and move
'M-Mayu , don't move! we'll get in together so I could look after you so don't worry'
'noooooooooooooooooooo-'
*in the bath*
Mayu was in the bath with whole body, only from the nose and up was outside.She looked out of the tub where Yuki was cleaning herself.
'she does have a nice body.....w-wahhhh! don't think like that!' Mayu said to with Yuki got up and entered the tub with her
Yuki took Mayu and put her on her chest again as she relaxed
'nothing feels better than a good bath after all the agitation right Mayuyu~?' Yuki asked as she sitted with the back on the tub
'..you are kinda right there, after all the agitation , a bath is very relaxing'Mayu said as it come out as a relaxed bark and she moved a little to sit more confortable on Yuki's chest, ending up with her head on Yuki's shoulder
'come to think of it, this is the first bath I take with another person......and in this form too huh....' Mayu thought as she looked at herself
Yuki looked at Mayu and said 'you know Mayu....I'm really happy that I found you...' she give Mayu a sad smile
Mayu only looked at her quesionligly...
*after the bath*
'Then Mayuyu, I'll be going outside for 2 hours.I have to meet with Haruna,one of my best friends,I promised her that I''ll help her with a think and then I'll go buy some dog food.You stay good here, look around the house and please don't destroy anything ok?' Yuki said as she was puting her shoes on
Mayu only looked at her from her position of sitting down
'Of course I wont break anything! what do you think I am? a dog?' Mayu said sarcasticaly
'hehe~ good girl! then I'll be going! Bye Mayuyu~!' Yuki said as she exited the house
Mayu sighed 'of course she can't understand me....at least she told me where she is going .....not like I care anyway!' Mayu said as she got up and began exploring the house.....
*2 hours later*
'Where is she!!!????' Mayu shouted as she looked at the door from the kitchen, where she was sitting on a sofa.
'she said 2 hours and now is ...' Mayu said as she looked at the clock on the wall ' 3 and 13 ! she is late 13 minutes!! how could she? I'm a prince, doesn't she know??!!' Mayu shouted
'....oh....wait ....she doesn't know....' Mayu said as she remembered that the can only bark and make strange sounds...
Suddenlly there was a door opening and Mayu looked at the door
'I'm home!! Mayuyu I'm home!' Yuki said happy as she got in
Mayu happy run to her and started barking 'Yuki its so good you are back! I'm bored lets play~! w-wah ! wait, you are late!!'
'Mayuyu is happy I'm back ? so cute ~ lets go and eat!'
*eating*
'w-what's this \? it smels horrible!' Mayu stared barking as she didn't like the food
'hm? you don't like dog food? its the best I could find....then do you want to eat the food that I eat?here..' Yuki said as she put a plate of food witch Mayu eated all....
'so you don't like dog food.....then from now on you'll eat what I eat every time, its ok right Mayu?' Yuki said as she looked at Mayu how barked happy at her
'..well it seems you aren't so bad, human.....'
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so cute :inlove: i love it :wub: thankyou :twothumbs i can't wait for the next update i hope you update soon :) :peace:
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hhhhhahhhh......what can I say,.... it come and go so when it comes I must write or I'll forget....haha...
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When the world had ended....
What do you do when an accident causes the 'world's end' ? What do you do if you susvived but you lost the one you love?But what if the one you love is alive but is sick, despperate or has lost her memories? And when you know that she doesn't love you...
Its time to fight to survive, because only the stronger ones suvive in the game that had started.In 2013 'The Apocalypse' happened with an accident.The 3 great war started and the hole planet was devastated.Japan in despperation had declanshed nuclear rachets, and the world had destramed in 5.
The television had become forbidden and the idols where destramed.The civil war caused a nuclear rechet to distroy Tokyo and a few others places in Japan.
Japan was now in the centre on the water, and the other countrys where in war. They couldn't leave Japan, and where stuck there with their own war.
The hole 48 Theathre was destroyed and no one know if there where survivors from the ones that where there when everything happened.
But for the ones that werent, the news where too hard to take.There where made folders for every person alive in Japan so if they died the folders in the computers would dissapear.They had a mark on each person.And the folders also had some data about them witch grewed sometimes.
----------------OPENING NOW----
--LOADING----
-Watanabe Mayu--
Survived the accident being in a tour.Ex-member now from the AKB48 , team B's Ace.Age 18.Other informations .....
Profile----- ALIVE
-Takahashi Minami--
Ex-leader of AKB48.Survived. other informations......
Profile------ALIVE
-Matsui Jurina--
Ex member of SKE48.Survived.other information....
Profile------ ALIVE
-Itano Tomomi----
Ex-member now from the AKB48.Survived.other information....
Profile------ ALIVE
That is all that is know about them now.Noone knows where they are, or if there are more survivors .Or so its said.....
-----Prologue End...-----
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-------------------------------------------should I continue...?
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A post-apocalyptic fic? Please continue....
How are the other perished members coming back? It sounds sad.... :cry:
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Chapter 3------Sleep and a surprise,......
*eating*
'w-what's this? it smell's horrible!' Mayu stared barking as she didn't like the food
'hm? you don't like dog food? its the best I could find....then do you want to eat the food that I eat?'here..' Yuki said as she put a plate of food witch Mayu eated all....
'so you don't like dog food.....then from now on you'll eat what I eat every time its ok right Mayu?' Yuki said as she looked at Mayu how barked happy at her
'..well it seems you aren't so bad, human.....'
'let's go to sleep Mayuyu~' Yuki said as she picked up the puppy from the sofa and started walking to her room
In the room , she changed and got in bed, taking Mayu with her.
'this human is really something.......she even put me in bed with her!!....but how its said “Only the gentle are ever really strong.” ....she really is gentle.....' Mayu thought as she was put in a hug be Yuki .
'Ne Mayuyu?....' Yuki wisphered and Mayu looked at her 'promise you'll never leave me....please.....I don't want to be alone...' Yuki started crying, Mayu seeing her cry was hurting her .She got up and started to lick the tears away.And barked 'Yes I promise! just stop crying! ghf! stop alredy.....crybaby!'
'ahh....I'm sorry for being a baby .....but I'm really happy to have meet you even if we only met today' Yuki said as she started laughing a little.
'.....you are really strange.....you cry and then you laugh.....' Mayu said as she looked at Yuki
'hehe~ aren't you the cute one?' Yuki took Mayu and put their noses together , rubbing .
'eeh! wa-wait! you are like kissing me!" Mayu said .
Suddenly , something happened and in the place where was the puppy , now stond Mayu on top of Yuki kissing her.
Yuki was shoked and she fainted. Mayu parted and licked her lips 'you are really sweet....' she said without noticing the change
and when she looked at her hand.....she saw a real hand 'w-what?! I'm back?!!' she screamed.
Mayu waited a while thinking about what to do, and after a hour she become a puppy again.
'It sems that it only takes an hour hah.....its good to know.' she thought as she falled asleep beside Yuki.
*the next day*
Yuki was looking at Mayu's every move, not saying anything when she waked up.They eated the breakfast in silence, after a while Yuki finally talked
'you know Mayu......I had this strange dream last night....when I was hugging you a girl appeared and kissed me......a really beautiful girl...'
'.......That wasn't really a dream....and that was me......and you kissed me first!' Mayu barked looking at Yuki
Yuki just smiled and said 'Yeah, you're right! that would be impposible!'
Mayu turned her head in another direction
'hahhhh~ you are the cutestttt~~!' Yuki shoted as she hugged Mayu to her neck
'You are cocking me!!!! stop alredy!' Mayu was trying to scream....
*a week later*
The school had started and when Yuki was at school Mayu would sit on the sofa with the TV opened . Yuki was opening it, she said that she would be less bored if there was something to look at.Being as gentle as usual, Mayu was always spoiled, Yuki getting her everything that would a puppy want, she would play ,sleep ,bath and eat with her.She was still like a prince after all....
'well at least I got someone that would spoil me even in this form' Mayu thought as she eated on the table with Yuki in front of her eating too.
Yuki would tell her everything that happened at school, on a tv serial or just tell her stories like to a human.Only that Mayu was a human in a puppy form that Yuki didn't know.Mayu had become in one week almost possesive of Yuki, getting jealous about a Sae person that Yuki was sometimes talking about.
'ah! Mayuyu I forgot to tell you! tomorrow Haruna will come to visit with her puppy! she said that her puppy wanted to met you~ sometimes I wonder how does she know what her puppy , Yuko, wants.....maybe I should ask her, so we could communicate better? what do you say Mayuyu?'
'Eh we have visitors tomorrow?.....and a puppy hah...I'll met your best friend at least!' Mayu said as she barked .
'Then I'll be going Mayuyu~ ' Yuki said as she headed to the door after she opened the tv.
'bye bey Yuki!' Mayu barked after her....
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you need to update this is so cute! :wub:
I really wanna know how Yuko and Mayu meet! :grin:
and also Sae's relanshionship with dog Mayu! :shakeit:
that would be a nice chapter! xD
please update soon! :cow:
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So cute! *squeal!
:kneelbow:
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Gah!!! So cute!!
And since Mayudog is not wearing anything, Mayu is not wearing anything too? LOL
I wanna keep her as a pet... Just so cute!!!!!!
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OMG!! I have nothing to say, Mayu is super cure in here <33333333
I wonder what’d Yuki reacts if she finds out Mayu’s true form. It’d be very interesting keke.
Thank you for the updating, please more more xD
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W-Wahhhh!!! so many feedbacks!!!! I'so happy~~~~~
well I still have to say srry cuz I'm not updating Love puppy today.....I'll try to update it tomorrow, right now I'll do the first chapter for When the world had ended, ok? Then I'll start it!!!! sorry for my poor english!~
When the world had ended....
The ciy was quaiet.Everyone that was in the city was hiding.
Mayu and the others that survived with the mak, where in the city after 3 months when the accident happened.They had been desperated when they heard about what happened in Tokyo but didn't want to lose hope so they come to search for their friends and onsided loves.They decided to at least try because the pain was too much.
'.....this is just a nightmare.....just a nightmare .....just a nightmare.' Tkamina was wisphering to herself as they walked hiding in the shadows.
All that had happened had transformed them in something that they wherent, giving them fear and sometimes uncharacteristical thinking.They where in Tokyo for 3 days alredy, and there where some persons that they asked that had seid 'there are survivors.......but now monsters...'
As they walked in the nights light , their four figures where dangerous.The thought that they lost their loved one transformed them in monsters........as they heard thet therewhere survivors they started sarching for more information.
Takamina was still the captain, but now her fear could be seen when in panic, losing Atsuko she become sometimes incompetente ,Her mind becoming blank and stoping for a while.
But she wasn't the single one that had become like this, Tomochin had become inactive when in fight she wont stop crying in the fight.
Jurina llearned like the others how to use weapons but most of the time she would fight only with a knife, saying that she wants the pain that Rena felt when she disappeared.She would not cry anymore as she had no more tears for anyone.But at night the tears would still appear in her sleep sometimes.
Mayu had become what she was named , a Cyborg, after hearing that Yuki 'diseappeared' all her emotions stoped. She didn't cry at all, she now doesn't smile, laugh, scream, or show any emotions.When fighting she wont stop until her opponent is death, loving the dark that made her remember Yuki she would sometimes sa her name as a wind , not heard be everyone but blow past them all , almost like going to where her beloved was.She would sing, and look at the sky, but never smile.
You could say now that they where the monsters.......if only it was true...
*3 day in Tokyo, night, 11:29, in the centre on the city*
'....did you find anyone, Jurina?" Takamina asked as she walked past corpses
'No, no one survived here'
'....lets go there then....'
'I fond someone!' Tomochin shouted to them to come .
They got closer and saw Mayu holding a man s arms .The man looked around 21 or so with the body full of scars and burnt.
'....Then lets go sthraight to the point. What do you know about 'The monsters survivors'?' Takamina said as Tomochin pointed a gun at him.
The man being alredy very scared didn't risk losing his life 'I-Its a way of sayin to the survivors that inhered monstrous power!They have strange power , and they where taken be some white people that collected them around the city!!'
'........you are really scared......Mayu lets go of his arms...'
Mayu did as she was told even if she dign't like being camanded.
'.....tell me .......where did they go with them?'
't-to the huge hospital that was made at the edge of the city .And some o-others outside....I don't know where!'
*2 hours later at the hostpital.*
Altredy inside as they killed everyoe that was protecting the 'hospital' that looked like a prison.
Inside the rooms there where screams and strange people .
'...I don't think that's the direction.We should look there.' Mayu said in automat mode as she started walking in the opposed direction.The others walking after her. At the end of the coridor was a room , from where could be heard talking.
They got closer and looked inside from the window.
Oshime Yuko was on a table aroud her machines and scientists that where druging her..........
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I know its lame.....but my imagination disappeared around the midle point when I was writing......
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OOOhhh new fic. :cow:
It is interesting!! :deco:
Please I want more :bow:
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'ah! Mayuyu I forgot to tell you! tomorrow Haruna will come to visit with her puppy! she said that her puppy wanted to met you~ sometimes I wonder how does she know what her puppy , Yuko, wants.....maybe I should ask her, so we could comuicate better? what do you say Mayuyu?'
'Eh we have visitors tomorrow?.....and a puppy hah...I'll met your best friend at least!' Mayu said as she barked .
'Then I'll be going Mayuyu~ ' Yuki said as she headed to the door after she opened the tv.
'bye bye Yuki!' Mayu barked after her....
Chapter 4--Nice to met y--- onee-chan!?
The next day come pretty soon. Mayu was now waiting for Yuki to come back home.She looked at the clock and the door opened
'Mayuyu~ I'm home!!~' Yuki shoted as she entered with Haruna and her puppy.
Mayu hearing Yuki's voice ran to the door 'Welcome home Yuki!' but as soon as she barked that she found herself with the back on the floor, a puppy over her
'w-what the?!' Mayu tried to sit up but the puppy started playing with her rolling around the room.
'so cutee~' Yuki said as she entered with Haruna in the room.
'sorry to intrude~' Haruna said as she entered
Haruna picked Yuko up and Yuki , Mayu.
'Then let's make the introduction~' Yuki said happy 'this is Mayu! A dog cyborg you could say as she doesn't react very much sometimes.....'
Haruna then bowed 'nice to meet you Mayu! My name is Kojima Haruna. And this is my puppy, sometimes sguirrel, Yuko!'
'Nice too met you Mayuyu~!' Yuko barked
'yes yes, nice to met y---- wait what you can talk?????' Mayu barked surprised.
'eH? you understnd me? you are the first one to do so!' Yuko barked as she was put down
'how can this be possible?you are just an normal puppy!' Mayu barked louder
'I'm not so normal!and neither are you~' Yuko said as she sat down and looked at Mayu how was in front of her
'eh? what do you mean? ' Mayu asked suspicious
'I'm a prince in truth!! ' Yuko said proundly
'a prince!!!! but I am a prince too!!' Mayu said
'hmhm~ it semms so! we seems to have the same fate if both of us where prines.But I come from the future, lets me tell you my story ne?' Yuko said as she licked her feet.
'fine then....' Mayu said as she dat down looking at Yuko 'thought it's quite strange what's happening....'
'yes, as I was saying! I was a prince , the older from three.I was to inheer the throne, but my father said that I didn't had the potential so I was to be put as the king of just a part of the kingdom, my second sister being the one to take the hole kingdom.My younger sister, was ,if she had the potential , to fight the one taking the throne.They had to fight for the throne, but I didn't want to see my sisters fighting,knowing that one of them would die, so I tried to convinge my father . But was stoped be the high magician of the kingdom who's daughter was going to be married to my second sister . They wanted to take the throne from my sister, and to get reed of my younger sister....' Yuko at this looked in another place with a sad face
, her ears being down...
'I wanted to tell my father, but before I could do that I was captured be the high magician.I was only seven when that happened so I couldn't fight. I was locked for 4 months, everyone was looking for me, but they didn't find me because the magician transformed me in a puppy and send me back in time......I don't know what happened to my sisters from that time, I've been here for 10 years! and I've been living with Nyannyan from the time that I come here~!'
'Nyannyan?' Mayu asked as her head titled to the side
'yes! Nyannyan is my lover~' Yuko said as she looked at Haruna how was talking to Yuki at the table
'...you have a sad past....and living here for 10 year---- w-wait what?! she is your lover??' Mayu shoted as she sat up
Yuko was grining now 'yes~ you see I can become human if I want with Nyannyan's help~ so with time we become lovers, and she knows that I 'm also her puppy!' Yuko barked happy
'how so? I become a puppy some days ago......but it lasted only for an hour and I don't know how did that happened.....' Mayu said looking at Yuki
'hmmm~ I'll tell you , only if you tell me what happened to you ~' Yuko said looking at Mayu
',......I suppose its fine.....well, I become like this because of a crime I did, I was punished going back in the past like this....I was punished for something that I didn't do......' Mayu said sadly
'you didn't do? that's just cruel!' Yuko shoted
'I couldn't do anything as my father didn't belive me......'
'ne......what year are you from:?' Yuko asked curiously
'eh? I'm from 2300...'
'e-eeeeeehhhhh? ' Yuko shoted surprised
'w-whats wrong?'
'I from 2290! ten years before!'
'WHAT??????'
'C-Could you be......Mayuyu the cyborg prince?' Yuko asked carefully
'h-how do you know?'
'you really are!!!! I'm Yuko , the perverted price~ Mayuyu, your older sister!!' Yuko shouted as she jumped on Mayu.
'hey whats happening down there?' Yuki asked as she sat up and looked at the 2 puppies that where rolling on the floor looking happy and barking
'sooo cuteeee~!' Yuki said as she sat back down
'onee-chan!!! I'm so happy!!' Mayu was crying happy as she rolled with her sister
'hmhm! I'm happy too! I haven't seen you since you had 3 years!!! you have surelly matured! ne I wanna see you you in your human form.' Yuko said as she got up Mayu
'eh? I suppose that's fine, I wanna see onee-chan too! but I don't know how....' Mayu said as she sat up too
Yuko grinned 'well that simple! you just have to kiss Yukirin!'
'k-kiss? and wo is Yukirin?' Mayu asked shoked
'Yukirin is Yuki! that's her name, Nyannyan calls her that too!you just have to rub noses with her and you will transform kissing her!'
'...so that's what happened then......but if I do that she will hind out that I'm not a puppy and she will hate me.....' Mayu said sadly
'don't worry Yukirin is not that kind of person~ I know her for a few years and I know , she is very kind, she won't hate you, she will surelly react with a shoked face, like a reaction queen, and then faint ......'
'.......Reaction queen?......and that alredy happened, I don't think she'll faint twince at this.....'
'she alredy did once? well it's fine if she knows! how knows maybe she'll be your lover like me and Nyannyan!'Yuko said grinning
'Yuki's lover......' Mayu blushed at the thought
Suddenly a knock was heard from the door.
'hm? how could it be?' Yuki said as she sat up and walked to the door.
Mayu , Yuko and Haruna heard the door open
'ahh? Sae?'
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sorry for the lame chapter but I must close my laptop and I don't have time to redo it.......sorry.
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Eeeh??? Sae!?
Oh this will be more complicated for mayuki
Thank for the update
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Funny! XD
thanks for you update!
please update soon! :cow:
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Woa woa woa I want to know what happen next, you made me so curious :frustrated:
Sae comes, will Mayu be jealous of? And when she and Yuki kiss again? :hehehe:
Can’t wait anymore, please update as soon as possible. Thank you :prayers:
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I can't picture puppy yuko and mayu frolicking with each other...IT'S TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!
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Suddenly a knock was heard from the door.
'hm? how could it be?' Yuki said as she sat up and walked to the door.
Mayu , Yuko and Haruna heard the door open
'ahh? Sae?'
Chapter 5---- My rival, want a kiss? I'll bite you!
As soon as Mayu heard that name, she entered in defesive mode.She must protect her Yuki from that person!
'w-wait? did I just say my Yuki?????' Mayu thought
'hmm~ it seems you have a rival Mayu! and a very strong one~' Yuko said beside her.
Sae and Yuki entered in the room and Mayu studied her.....
'she looks like a boy!' Mayu said looking at her
'Taaadaaa~ this is Mayuyu!' Yuki said as she took Mayu in her arms
'ehh? she is really cute.' Sae said and she took Mayu in her arms.Mayu started barking a little but soon calmed, making a plan.
Yuki and Sae sitted at the table,Haruna taking Yuko in her arms too.
Sae started stroking Mayu how had a dangerous face.
'ah! sorry again, Yukirin! I wanted to see you...' Sae said with a smile
'its okay Sae! I'm happy that you come to see me....' Yuki blushed as she said that
Mayu sensing what was going on, bited Sae's hand making her scream .
'Sae! are you okay?Bad Mayu bad!' Yuki scolded Mayu who just sitted down and looked at her,after a few seconds she started making a cute puppy face with tears and cute barking......Yuki how was treating Sae's hand ,ignored her but Haruna didn't and took her in her arms with Yuko
'ne Mayuyu! let's me and Haruna help you ok?' Yuko said happy as she wanted to help her sister.
'......yes, thanks one-chan!' Mayu said as they started making a plan
....On the other side of the room, Sae was looking like a lovesick boy at Yuki how finished treating her bite .
'nee,Yukirin.Lets go on a date tomorrow?' Sae asked with a handsome smile that made girls faint.
Yuki looked surprised at her and blushed 'well......y---'
But she was intrerupted when she heard barking from behind, looking back she saw Yuko and Mayu licking Haruna.
'hey whats going on there?' Yuki asked , a little jelousy could be seen in her eyes.
'ehh? no-nothing! I just asked them if they would like to go for a walk and I ended up like this....' Haruna said as she sat up
'.......I suppose its okay to go for a walk.....want to come with us Sae?' Yuki asked as she looked back at Sae how was a little disappointed that she was ignored, but she would ask again later
'yes!' she said with a smile 'I won't lets 2 puppies distroy all my chances with Yuki!' she tought as she sat up too.
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sorry.....another one that I had to make more parts, its because my parents took my outside intrerupting my writing so I forgot everything when I was back after 4 hours....... I'll try updating it tomorrow.After that I wont update anything fo 9 days,because I wont have a computer.......
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What?
why you leave me like this! :cry:
i wanna know what's next! :sweatdrop:
please update soon! :cow:
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Puppy so cute~
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Ahhhhhh soooooo cute!!!!!!! :shy2:
Update soon! :luvluv1:
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'.......I suppose its okay to go for a walk.....want to come with us Sae?' Yuki asked as she looked back at Sae how was a little disappointed that she was ignored, but she would ask again later
'yes!' she said with a smile 'I won't lets 2 puppyes distroy all my chances with Yuki!' she tought as she sat up too.
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Try1----
Sae: Ne,Yuki!
Yuki:Hmmm? what's wrong Sae?
'Mayu jumps on Yuki'
Sae:.......nothing
Try2-----
'Mayu playing with Yuko'
Sae: now is my chance! -walks to Yuki- 'Yuki, I want---
-Mayu and Yuko Jump on Sae-
Yuki: sooo cute~
Try3----
Sae: -tired- Yuuuki~...
Yuki: yes Sae?
Sae: finally -smiles- I was wonderi---
-Haruna trips and falls on Yuki ending a sexy pose-
Mayu,Yuko,Sae : *noseblood* ......
Try4-------
-Eating ice cream-
Sae: That's it! these dogs can't stop me! -walks to Yuki- 'Yu---'
*falls over Mayu and Yuko, Icecrem ending on her head....*
Yuki: Mayu! are you okay? -takes Mayu up, Mayu starts licking her- so cuteeee~
Haruna: Yuchan! -takes Yuko up, Yuko licks her too-
Sae: ....... -still down with icecream all over-
At Haruna's house.
'Then, see you tomorrow Haruna!bye bye Yuko~' Yuki said as she started walking with Sae and Mayu back to her house
'bye bye Mayuyu! tomorrow well talk more about the transforming thing~'Yuko barked
'yes! bye onee-chan!' Mayu said back from Yuki's hands
Back at Yuki's house.
'Thanks for walking with us today Sae.I couldn't play as much as you with this little machine~' Yuki said looking at Mayu who only looked at her, really tired.
'It was no problem! I like your smile,so I'll do more than play with Mayu just to see your smile...' Sae said with a charming smile.
Yuki blushed, Mayu looked annoyed at Sae.
'ehh.....' Yuki smiled back at Sae. And looking at each other they started coming closer and closer, about to kiss.They where too dazed be each other that they didn't see Mayu how had put herself between them with her face at Yuki.
And when they started to close their eyes ,Yuki felt something wet, even if she still didn't kiss Sae and Sae felt something warm and furry.......
Yuki and Sae opened their eyes simultanely and saw that they weren't that close and looking down they saw Mayu that was in Yuki's arm ......It seemed that Sae had kissed the back of the head and Yuki her nose........
Mayu felt that she was transforming and jumped from Yuki's arms and ran in the house to hide.
'......well .......bye Sae...' Yuki said blushing and closing the door
Sae just stood there shoked..... 'that dog is really trying to stop me!' was her last thought as she started walking home.....
Inside Yuki's house Mayu was in her room on Yuki's bed .
'Mayuyu~ where did you go? bad girl! I almost kissed Sae.....' Yuki was saying as she searched for Mayu.She decided to search in her room too.When she opened the door a hand was put over her month and she found herself on her bed with the same girl she kissed a week ago over her.......
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I'm sorry again for the lame chapter but I am a little sick and I have other problems too so this is the last update for a while......sorry........
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what?!?
what's going on? R u okay? :sweatdrop:
sorry for being meddler.. :doh:
hope things get better soon for you! :cow:
please update soon! :grin:
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Somehow I feel sorry for Sae lol but Yuki is for Mayu hehe
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pity sae
but I support Mayu
How yuki reaction when she saw her puppy turn into a human?LOL MAyuyu~
Do not tell me yuki going to pass out again...haha
whether Mayu would be expelled?
I hope not!
well thank for the update i will waiting for your new update....yay
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:shocked Yuko&Mayu! Awww so the magician is the evil one here, I hope that they can get home but before we need
KojiYuu&MaYuki RABU RABU....
:rofl: Sae kissed Mayu's hairy head :rofl:
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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this is getting funnier and funnier xD
keep posting please haha
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I like this fic soooo muuuuch :luvluv1:
don't give up Mayu :ding:
wow Mayu comes back to be a human :nya:
what Yuki will do :dunno:
I can't <ait for the next :farofflook:
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Chapter 6 : Body~ ....surprise?
Inside Yuki's house Mayu was in her room on Yuki's bed .
'Mayuyu~ where did you go? bad girl! I almost kissed Sae.....' Yuki was saying as she searched for Mayu.She decided to search in her room too.When she opened the door a hand was put over her month and she fond herself on her bed with the same girl she kissed a week ago over her.......
End chapter 5.....
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'W-who are you ?!' a shaken voice asked in the silence. A shocked face , a mind unable to think.The person over her was beautiful....the determined eyes that looked into hers where capturing.And when a sweet voice called, her world was shaken...... by reality.
'I am no one here, I am everyone in another time,......but that is not important. I come to make you understand a think.YOU are Mine! You, Kashiwagi Yuki , are mine!..... so don't go playing around because you are mine and I don't like sharing.' The strange girl said as she come closer to her face. That snaped Yuki out of the trance and asked
'w-what? what kind of response is that! and I can't be yours! I don't love you.I----' but her response was stopped when she felt soft lips over hers and these eyes where still looking into her soul, trying to,slowly, capture her heart.......
The kiss was really soft but possesive.The strange girl was really trying to mark her as Hers.......Yuki fighted back.Trying to push her off her but the one on top was more powerful than her ,the soft lips where inviting and the eyes where taking her heart slowly like being traped in them.
'why is this happening to me!!!!' Yuki screamed in her mind...this person was putting a spell on her heart....... a love spell.But it was so sudden than Yuki didn't know what to do.
Mayu on the other hand was more like....
'w-what?!! what am i doing? ........something is happening.....when I look in her eyes I can see her heart......and I feel something pounding in my chest.......' Mayu looked more deep in Yuki's eyes.
'H-how are you ?!' a shaken voice asked in the silence.It seems like the girl under her took her atention.
Before Mayu could stop herself she said in a wispher 'I am no one here, I am everyone in another time,......but that is not important. I come to make you understand a think.YOU are Mine! you, Kashiwagi Yuki , are mine!..... so don't go playing around because you are mine and I don't like sharing.'
Mayu was a little shoked at her own actions but leanded in 'w-what? what kind of response is that! and I can't be yours! I don't love you.I----' but Mayu stoped the rest, kissing her sweet lips .....
Her lips where sweet.....she wanted more but stoped the next action as she didn't want it now ......because now she wanted to know what was the strange felling in her heart.....
A little light was appearing inside,and she was felling a single thing....possesivness... it was like the emotion had just been born in the form of a small fragment of a heart.
'...this.....I am traping her heart....making it my own....making her mine!' Mayu thought as she tasted more of the sweet lips and taking a little more of an imitation of emotion.....
Yuki stoped it all.She bite on Mayu's lips, just enough to bleed , tasting her blood and making Mayu lets go even if she didn't know 'pain'.Mayu smirked down at her
'I like it when you are aggresive.You are like a cadged bird...... enjoy your freedom ,my little bird.Because soon, all you will see,feel,want and need will be .......me.' she said in a seductive tone as she sat up and ran out the door.
Yuki was still shoked , slowly satting up she brought a hand to her wet lips...
'her blood is intoxicating.....who....is she?' Yuki wisphered to herself.
After a few seconds looking at the door Yuki made a shoked face and said to herself
'That girl! did she just go outside!? she was naked!!!!!'
Mayu at the door had remembered that she was naked before she got out and was now thinking what to do
'pfiuu! its good I remembered I was naked....If I want to be a dog....I'll become one!' as these words come out smoke was appearing from nowhere and........BOOM! she was back to the puppy form.
Yuki come looking around
'I wonder if she really did go outside....that was a strange girl....and she got the kiss meant for Sae! ah! Mayuyu there you are!' Yuki said as she picked up Mayu 'you won't believe what just happened to me!! you see this strange girl.....' and Yuki continued to talk...
'she really likes telling me everything....or just can't stop talking....I'll see tomorrow about what happened with Yukonee-chan.....'Mayu thought as she lets Yuki prepare the bath..........
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as always a short and strange chapter~ thats me! I'm back!!!! Im a little better now,emotionaly and I started felling a little sick but its not important as I get sick very hard so its fine, itll go away in 3 days. Ill try updating all my storyes in the next 2 days so look out for me and please review!!!!!!
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thabks for updating! :grin:
i'm loving this fic!
please update soon! :cow:
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wow I feel exited :hiakhiakhiak:
Mayu kissing Yuki and naked :on bleed:
I can't wait for the next :onioncheer:
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Waaaah Mayu's declaration :luvluv1: :luvluv1: 'Because soon, all you will see, feel, want and need will be ..... me' is very :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Mayu was neked :shock:
Yay Update soon please :peace:
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I want more :heart: :heart: :yossi: :otomerika:
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Yuki come looking around
'I wonder if she really did go outside....that was a strange girl....and she got the kiss meant for Sae! ah! Mayuyu there you are!' Yuki said as she picked up Mayu 'you wont believe what just happened to me!! you see this strange girl.....' and Yuki continued to talk...
'she really likes telling me everything....or just can't stop talking....I'll see tomorrow about what happened with Yukonee-chan.....'Mayu thought as she lets Yuki prepare the bath..........
Chapter 7 : Not so inoccent ,am I?
'then, what do you plan to do Mayuyu? you now know that you can transform only if Yukirin kisses you, and you can go back to being a puppy when you want to.' Yuko said beside Mayu as she played with a ball
'....I decided that I want Yuki.' Mayu said as she looked at Haruna and Yuki that where talking
'aha....w-wait what?! you decided so fast....but its a good thing!! I'm sure youll make Yuki fall for you, and she won't be lonely anymore!' Yuko looked at Mayu
'yes....... lonely? what do you mean?'' Mayu asked
'well, her parents are never home as you see......they live in another city because of the work.She has friends and is popular but she sometimes tells Haruna ,with actions or just talking that she feels lonely, she wants someone that would always be beside her.' Yuko explained
'yes.......' Mayu was staring at Yuki
'nee, Mayuyu? what did you do that you ended here? I mean, for what did you get this punishment?' Yuko looked at her curiously
'I refused to marry the magician's daughter, Maeda Atsuko and some other minor sins........' Mayu said with a blank face
'ehhhh?! you refused to marry her? so you where to become the new king? how could Takamina lose...? and more importantly why did you refuse?'
'I refused because Atsuko loves Takamina and Takamina loves Atsuko.....they just don't know that the other loves them.Takamina lost because she wanted to win, she was so fired up in the fight and the thought that she could spend her life with the person she loved that she forget with who she was fighting......and she lost, I almost killed her.' Mayu continued to stare at Yuki like it was the most normal think in the world
'...you seems so calm about this........so you did this and now Takamina will marry Atsuko and take the throne, tha magician controling the hole kingdom!'
'.....calm down, everything will be fine.'
'how so?! we are in the past, like puppies!' Yuko was exasperated, the kingdom was at the mercy of the magician and his daughter
'because soon ,i'll be able to go back' Mayu said serious
'eh? how?'
'taking Yuki with me.......my salvation from this punishment was to find a heart...... to have one.Yesterday I started feeling the pieces of a heart in my chest when I kissed Yuki.I am taking her heart, making it my own and chaining her to me....' Mayu had a determined face that scared Yuko
'but..... you can't just force yourself into someone like that! it's good that you are getting a heart but you can't just take someone else! that will make her obssesed with you, she will be really chained to you!'
'....yes but if she falls in love with me before I have all the heart, sincerly fall in love, then she won't become a doll...... just a chaged bird' Mayu smirked darkly
'you really need a heart.....cyborg! but you are still my litttle sister~' Yuko said ,the fear in her heart slowly disappearing
'Yuko! come here~' Haruna said as she looked at us
'coming Nyannyan~' Yuko ran to her
Yuki called for Mayu too 'Mayuyu~ here here~' she pated the spot on her lap for Mayu to jump there
Mayu did as she was told but didn't say anything
'hmm? Mayuyu are you okay?' Yuki asked worryed as she took Mayu in her hands and looked in her eyes 'somehow her eyes make me remember that girl that kissed me and disappeared...' Yuki thought as she blushed
'I'm fine' Mayu barked with a cute and smiling face 'I'll go back soon to my kingdom Yuki.....and i'll take you with me.....together we will rule it......' Mayu thought as she licked Yuki's cheek
On the other part of the room Yuko was on Haruna's breasts happy but inside she was worryed
'Mayu .....she is still as emotionless and ruthless as I remember.....she doesn't really care for anyone ......beside me , Takamina and now Yuki....... if she really goes back....she will kill father before Takamina can take the throne,she will kill anyone that will stop her from taking the throne.....'
'Yuko are you fine' Haruna asked worryed as Yuko had been staying to calm for the last 5 minutes
'eh? its nothing Nyannyan~ ' Yuko barked as she licked her neck and then bite it
'kyaa! Yuko stop!' Haruna said blushing
A few days later at Haruna's house
Yuko was in her human form ,in some clothes in the kitchen with Haruna eating
'nee, Yuuchan? what are you going to do now? will you lets Mayu do what she wants?' Haruna asked, knowing the situation as Yuko told her everything
'....I suposse I can't stop her now.I hope that Yukirin will fall for Mayu, but I'm sure she will! and as for the kingdom......I must go back with her so I can stop something therrible from happening.....' Yuko said serious as she eated without looking at Haruna
'.....you are going to leave....?I don't want you to! ' Haruna said sad
'...don't worry Nyannyan! I will take you with me! I promised that we'll always be together so we will!' Yuki said with a grin making Haruna feel better
'yes.....I love you Yuuchan...' Haruna huged Yuko
'I love you too Nyannyan!!' Yuko hugged her back and stole a kiss which Haruna didn't refuse.After they parted
'mouu~ you should stop kissing me so suddenly! I need to breath too!' Haruna shouted blushing
'yes yes ~ then I'll tell you next time before I kiss you!'
'that fine the--'
'okay now!' Yuko kissed her again and they started making out.......
At Yuki's house
Mayu was relaxing herself on Yuki's bed as Yuki entered the room talking on the phone
'yes Sae~ then see ya saturday! good night! *kiss the phone* bye!' Yuki said as she closed the phone and sat on the bed
Mayu who was aware of what was happening become jealous and the feeling started building a new piece of a heart in her chest and Yuki put a hand on her own heart as she suddenly felt hot and was breathing hard
Mayu got up and looked at Yuki who now sat on her back on the bed.Mayu got on Yuki and kissed her,nose to nose, to transform.
'I'll mark you a little for now....' she thought as she watched Yuki who had her eyes closed in deep thinking and didn't feel the kiss....Mayu transformed on top of Yuki, the situation becoming a deja-vu already, and kissed her. Yuki ,starled, opened her eyes as she felt the familliar , intoxicating kiss and saw the same girl on top of her
Mayu broke the kiss and looked down at Yuki
'I decided to mark you a little as punishment for your date next saturday, was it? '
'eh?punish me? and how do you know about my date!?' Yuki asked shoked, she couldn't break free so she didn't waste her energy fighting the girl
'I know everything about what you do......and as punishment for now i'll give you three little marks.' Mayu explained as she looked in Yukis deep black eyes
'three marks...? you aren't going to hurt me...are you?' Yuki asked worryed
'for now no....... i'll just give you three hickey ~' Mayu smiled darkly
'hiiii!? you're going to leave bite marks on me?' Yuki asked shoked
'yes I am and you can't do anything to stop me~'
'......mou fine alredy! just please,please don't make them where they can be seen.....' Yuki pleaded with a blush and small tears in her eyes
Mayu didn't say anything back as she looked down at her and decided where to leave them
'first on the neck.' she said as she bite Yuki's neck, yearning a yelp from Yuki .She bite her neck until it bleed and then sucked the blood and licking the mark
'mou......' Yuki was blushing madly, she had a strange girl on top of her, leaving her love marks on her body and couldn't do anything to stop this strange event...
'the second one .....on the wrist of your right hand' Mayu took the hand and did the same as at the neck, on the inside in the wriste
'I said please not where it could be seen and you are putting them exactly where everyone can see them....'
'its fine,.......like this everyone will know that you are mine' Mayu said as she searched for a last spot without putting Yuki take her clothes off 'or would you prefer if I put them under your clothes..? you must strip then~'
'e-ehhhh?! no no no!!! Its better like this! please don't put me strip!' Yuki had tears on her cheeks and was blushing madly as she never felt so hopeless in all her life
'...fine then.....and the last one ,but just the last one for now....on your bottom lips!' Yuki didn't have time to protest as Mayu kissed her forcefully and bite her bottom lip until it bleed and after sucked the blood from the lip.
Yuki was tired be now, all the excitement,fear,and all the other emotions had made her fall asleep when her attacker was just stroking her hair.
Mayu just smiled down at Yuki as she transformed back in a puppy and falled asleep on Yukis chest.
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Mayu is so aggressive :on bleed:
Mayu is scary when she is jealous :badluck:
Yuki don't hate Mayu :stoned:
I can't wait for the next :farofflook:
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Oh my.... Mayu's being aggressive with Yukirin. :shock: I can just imagine the shock/trauma(?) Yuki would feel when she learned that Mayu's her puppy.
oh and pls update soon... want to know Yukirin's pov on this one.
Ja~
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LOLOLOL Mayu is so fierce, no one can take away her property xDDDDDDDDDDD
I wonder what Sae would react if she see those hickeys, ahhh~ can't wait for the next chapter
Pls update soon <3
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'...fine then.....and the last one ,but just the last one for now....on your bottom lips!' Yuki didn't have time to protest as Mayu kissed her forcefully and bite her bottom lip until it bleed and after sucked the blood from the lip.
Yuki was tired be now, all the excitement,fear,and all the other emotions had made her fall asleep when her attacker was just stroking her hair.
Mayu just smiled down at Yuki as she transformed back in a puppy and falled asleep on Yuki's chest.
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Ah.....its already morning.
Yuki sat up carefully and put Mayu from her chest on the bed.
......its really strange.....I don't understand anything anymore....these strange events,they must stop.I feel like I'm losing my heart.....this hurtfull feeling that won't disappear.
She took a bath and prepared the brekfast waiting for her sleeping puppy to wake up.Right when she finished , Mayu was in the kitchen .
'good morning Mayuyu~' she said with a cherfull face, but inside something wasn't right.She picked Mayu in her arms and when Mayu tried to lick her hurt lip she got starled and moved her head in another direction.Mayu titled her head looking inoccent
'sorry Mayuyu......it just hurts.Last night I had a surprise visit when you where hiding..... '
'a forced smile hah......she is starting to lose it, soon she will be just a living doll.I must to do something so that won't happen....'
-later that day-
'the sooner the better, right?' Mayu thought as she looked at Yuki how fell asleep reading a book after trying for 2 hours to hide the 3 marks on her body.
*kiss*
'ok, now I need some clothes....'
'hmm....' Yuki wake up slowly rubbing her eyes, she got out off the bed 'Mayuyu?where did you go?'
-in the kichen-
Mayu had made dinner for two and waiting for Yuki to wake up....she decided that she will tell Yuki the 'truth' to calm her dawn.
Yuki was walking to the kichen as she felt the amasing smell , and when she got in and saw the girl that was molesting her for some time she entered in her queen reaction mode.....
'Kyaaaa!'
'wahh there,calm dawn! I didn't come to hurt you'
'then why did you? to leave another marks on me? or do you need another kiss?you thief idiot ! i'll call the police!' Yuki got to her phone and when she was about to call Mayu jumped on her and they both hit the floor with Mayu on top.....(she really likes being on top... 8))
'you won't call anyone! I only came to explain why I'm doing all of these so calm dawn and listen to me!' Mayu shouted to her scaring the crying Yuki more...Seeing as she scared Yuki ,Mayu started wiping the tears away ,kissing them away and stroked Yukis cheek to calm her.
Yuki calmed as she felt a warm feeling in her heart watching the girl....it was a healing feeling that finally calmed everything
'then lets eat, and I'll explain everything, okay?'
Yuki noded as they got up from the floor and sat at the table. They started eating, in the air being an uncomfortable silence....
'ano.......how can I call you?' Yuki asked as she looked at the 'stranger'
'hmmm, call me Mayu.do you like the food?'
'Mayu, the food is very good ! you are really good! ....you know, I have a puppy with that name!'
'....a coincidence.......' Mayu said with a blank face
'yeah.... but where is Mayu?!' Yuki asked starting to panic
'....I give her to Haruna, your best frind, for the evening so we could talk'
'e-ehhh~? you really know a lot about me....then, lets me heard about you?' Yuki smiled,with a light blush
'well..... I wanted to talk to you about....why I'm doing all of this ..'
'hm! please then tell me!' Yuki said serious
'....My name is Mayu, or the cyborg prince, as I am from the future.In the future my kingdom is in danger and I was send back to find a princess, to make one fall in love with me so I could go back to the future and save my kingdom' Mayu finished in one breath
'aha......and how can you prove that?' Yuki asked blankly as she didn't believe anything..
'I can take out a sword from inside my chest...?' Mayu said as she sat up to prove and did as she told she ,like an illusion, put her hand 'in' her chest and took out a beautiful sword leaving Yuki speacheless with wide eyes and month open
'f-fine so you really are from the future...' Yuki said calming a little 'and you need to make someone fall in love with you?how do you think I can fall for you if you asault me from nowhere and kiss and bite me?!'
'....I have a problem with posessivines.....and don't like sharing you with others...' Mayu said blankly as she let's Yuki touch the sword
'...' Yuki blushed, and didn't make eyes contact as she looked at the sword in her arms 'its really heavy......and beautiful'
'but I don't think it compares with you, my princess. Please be mine!' Mayu said putting a little emotion on her face as she kneeled in front of Yuki and took her hand
Yuki only blushed more,she could rival a tomato.....
That is so sudden.....what should I do? she abused and taked advance of me....but if that is love to her....I think I love her too....these feelings are back again, it hurts so much.I.....want to see her more.....for the first time I feel needed..
'yes.....I'll be your princess.and you will be my prince....' Yuki said as she wiped the tears that won't stop.
The sword started to vanish as Mayu hugged Yuki , Yuki was crying with a smile and Mayu......
'Thank you my princess....*dark smirk*'
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sorry for the short and lame chapter.......as always.
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eeeeeeeeeh?! Mayu!!! What are you doing?! being possessive is not really that bad (well... if controlled...) but but you're doing it the wrong way!
Well... at least Mayu got Yuki... Still, Mayu have to have emotions (or heart... whatever or whichever it is).
tsk... I feel bad for Yuki now... Mayu still have to learn more about love.
Pls. Update!!!!
Ja~
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Waaaaaah SUGE :shocked
Mayu have bad plan because she have dark smile :stoned:
Update soon please
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Mayu is so scary...she didn't want Yuki to become a doll but still
:panic: Please Mayu be gentler to Yuki....
But I think that possessive Mayu is kind a hot biting and mark her territory XD
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Mayu why do you have a dark smile.
Your supposed to get a heart or emotions or both.
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all was beautiful at first :shy2:
but
a dark smile :stoned:
I forgot that Mayu is a cyborg prince :err:
be more gentil Mayu to Yuki :fainted:
I can't wait for the next :pleeease:
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Don't be mean to Yuki..Mayu or i'll make you pay on my other fics! :twisted:
hahhahaa just kidding! :grin:
devil Mayu..Cool! :drool:
Please update soon! :cow:
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'yes.....I'll be your princess.and you will be my prince....' Yuki said as she wiped the tears that won't stop.
The sword started to vanish as Mayu hugged Yuki , Yuki was crying with a smile and Mayu......
'Thank you my princess....*dark smirk*'
Chapter: Sae's date.........My date~
'That happened a few days ago.....today is saturday,so Yuki is going on date with that Sae.......Haruna is on a date with Yukone-chan so I must stay home.......or so she says.'
'then I'll be going Mayuyu~ bye!' Yuki said as she exited the house
'bye Yuki~ ' Mayu barked after her, but suddenly she jumped and bited her shirt making Yuki look back at her
'what's the matter Mayuyu?' Yuki took Mayu up and close to her face
Mayu barked
'ah! you want a byebye kiss?" Yuki asked but then looked another way and murmured 'I wonder if I can kiss you.......?Maybe like this she will come to visit me again! she said she knows what I'm doing so I'll try!and I'll kiss my Sae too to make sure....I kinda miss her...' then turned back to Mayu and give her a kiss (nose to nose kiss)
'so that's what you want~ then I'll do as you say my princess! but don't blame me later if your Sae will lose a hand or something later.....' Mayu thought, on her face appearing a dark smile.
*some time later*
'okay, now that I'm in my human form, wearing something on, and have chocolate.......and a white rose......lets go!'
In the city.....
'lets go there next!' Yuki said as she draged Sae with her in another store
'yes yes......' Sae just couldn't say no, she would never say no to Yuki.....
Sae was just watching Yuki looking around and choosing.
'Sae? ' Yuki called from the changing cabin
'yes?'
'I can't close this......help me please?' Yuki said as she pulled Sae in without waiting for an answer
'okay! I closed it.Now I should go' Sae said blushing but Yuki took her hand and give her a short kiss on the lips making her to blush more.
'that should have got her........where are you Mayu?'Yuki thought as she pushed the dazed Sae out
'ohhhhh! you are so going to regret that Yukirin~' Mayu smirked as she made her way into the shop.
Mayu hide in the shop and entered beside Sae how was looking around waiting beside the cabin where was Yukirin
'Sae? I don't need help right no--' she was stopped by a hand on her mouth
'shhhh! we don't need Sae to heard us now, do we?' Mayu's soft voice whispered in her ear making her shiver......
End part1
Part2----loading?
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Wah what happens next! :OMG:
I wish to know what happens! :gyaaah:
Please update soon! :pleeease:
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EEhhhh! :shock:
What... What happens next?? :dunno:
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Wow Mayuyu is really scary lol
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eeeeeeeeeeh what's going to happen!!!??? :stoned:
Mayu what are you going to do :OMG:
don't hurt Yuki again :fainted:
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Part 2 ! Waa yuki...she..hahaha mayu will punish you LOL
Cant wait the next update
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'ohhhhh! you are so going to regret that Yukirin~' Mayu smirked as she made her way into the shop.
Mayu hide in the shop and entered beside Sae how was looking around waiting beside the cabin where was Yukirin
'Sae? I don't need help right no--' she was stoped be a hand on her mouth
'shhhh! we don't need Sae to heard us now do we?' Mayus soft voice whispered in her ear making her shiver......
End part1
Part2----start--------
'w-what are you doing here?' Yuki asked as the hand on her mouth lets go a little
'I was thinking to take you on a date.......but it seems that you are being a bad girl.....so I decided to punish you a little~' Mayu smiled as she turned the half dressed Yuki to face her
'right now?! can you do that later home......when we are alone..?'Yuki was already blushing madly as she said these words.
'no~ I want to punish you now or your lips will be infectet be that idiot how toched them .........' Mayu sounded like a jealous girlfrend .......witch aroused Yuki more
The intense fire in Mayu's eyes where burning her insides, her soul which was once again losing something and becoming jealousy in Mayu's heart.......
Mayu kissed Yuki forcefully and hungry, inserting her tongue in and tasting every thing in her way.While Yuki was trying hard not to moan as she felt the warm sensation invading her.
After a while Mayu parted as they both felt the need for air.Mayu had her hands on Yuki's wrist and Yuki had her around Mayu's neck.
'....you taste like chocolate.....'
'I like chocolate...'
'then........what's next?' Yuki asked after a few minutes, looking in Mayu's eyes
Mayu smirked 'you really like seeing me aggressive,don't you?......how about we go on a date?" she asked as she rested her forehead on Yuki's (Yuki is taller...)
'I would like that....but I can't leave Sae....' Yuki whispered
'I thought you'll say that so I brought you this ...' Mayu said smiling as she took on of Yuki's hands off her neck and put something in it
Yuki looked at her hand and saw a white rose
'so beautiful........' Yuki said as tears of happiness started forming in her eyes 'you really aren't as bad as you appear to be.....'
'oh but I am!' Mayu bite Yuki's neck by surprise and leaving another hickey there
Yuki only moaned but didn't protest as she put Mayu closer to her.After the mark formed Mayu let's go of Yuki and took out a chocolate staring to eat from it.
'If you kiss her one more time .....I think I'll just go find another princess~' Mayu said with a sadist smile as she looked in Yuki's eyes which where full of fear
'no!nonono! I promise I won't do it again ' Yuki put her hands together as if praying to Mayu to not search for another
'That depends on your actions, princess~ ' Mayu took another bite from her chocolate, lifted Yuki's chin so she would look at her and put the chocolate in her mouth in Yuki's
'enjoy the chocolate princess~ its a bitter-sweet aroma.....' Mayu said as she exited the cabin silently
'bitter-sweet......your taste.....'
For the rest of the date Mayu didn't interference as she lets Yuki enjoy Saes presence, she just watched from a distance.
On Yuki's part not everything was so easy as she wanted to spend more time with Mayu, to know her better.She just pretended to like the date for Sae's sake who was smiling and blushing at her.She was very carefull with her actions even if she wanted to see Mayu again she didn't want to leave her.
The bitter-sweet aroma in her month was disappearing even if she wanted to taste it more........the hurtfull feeling was back and she had a hard time putting a smile on her face .......inside she really wanted to be on a date with Mayu.....
From the edge of her eyes she saw Mayu smiling at them in a crowed street.
In instinct she wanted to go after her and kiss her in front of everyone but in a blink of an eyes she disappeared in the crowd.....
'Yurikin? something wrong?' Sae asked as she took Yuki's hand in hers again
Yuki snaped from her illusion and looked at Sae giving her a smile and a nod
'ah if you say so......' Sae didn't try to hard because Yukirin always tried to not worry others with her problems and refusing any help
After a few more shops they come to a stop as it was already getting late......
'I'll walk you home' Sae said as she cared the bags of clothes Yuki brought
'no....no I'll go alone if you don't mind' Yuki took the bags
'eh?......you sure?'
Yuki give a small nod and turned to walk home
'wait!' Sae took Yuki be the wrist to stop her and face her again
'what's wrong Sae?' Yuki asked worryed
'n-no......did you enjoy our date...?' Sae said shy as she looked another way
'yes, thank you'
'then.......I w-was wondering if......if....'
'Sae? if there is something then tell me please?'
'I........well......I l-love you! please be my girlfriend!!'
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Yuki opened the door with the key and took her shoes off
'Mayuyu~ I'm home'
She entered the kitchen and saw the food on the table and Mayuyu nowhere.She put the bags down and took the note that was on the table looking around for Mayuyu.
Still with the note in hand she saw Mayuyu on the sofa asleep on a pillow.Yuki smiled and sat beside her,she stroked Mayuyu on the head softly and after looked at the note.
It didn't say anything on the print page but as she opened it she started reading
'You must be tired, so I made dinner for you and Mayuyu. Mayuyu is really a cute and energic puppy,I believe she will be asleep when you get home as I played with her until she was dead tired.
I fond the rezerve key in your secret place~ but don't worry I put it back.
When you are on a date, enjoy it.Don't think about me next time when you do something that you like, think about you.Because when well be together in my kingdom 'you will only want,see, have and need me'.
The more I know you......
the more my tears fall.
Because I realised that I know nothing.
I cryed just a little in my heart
Because your smile was just a fake when thinking about me....
So I come with a solution.
Dont think about me ......
Think about yourself
And dream about me......
A possesive prince...."
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Tears fell from eyes as she finished reading and closed her eyes...
'you really are the prince I dreamed for....'
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Lame.......lame.......and lame.I know is lame but I lack imagination this summer so all my fics are kinda lame,short,with mistakes .But I cant stop writing so forgive me please.......
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Mayu got Yukirin hooked.... If only Mayu would let Yuki know about her being a puppy. :frustrated:
Well then... I'm gonna go back in the shadows and stalk silently until the next update.
Ja~
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I thought Mayuyu would do more in the changing room hehe
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Its good,
When mayu revealing her self as a puppy..
.i think yuki will kiss her puppy more often...LOL
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Yuki is possesed by Mayu :shy2:
Sae confessed :OMG:
what did Yuki said to Sae :stoned:
Mayu don't let Sae take Yuki from you :on voodoo:
Mayu is cute when she is a puppy :nya:
try Yuki and kiss the sleepy puppy and you will be surpried :kekeke:
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yuukimoko-san where are you :gyaaah:
update soon please :pleeease:
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yeah......so I was thinking to drop this story or to put it on hiatus but......thanks to mo-chan that rememberes me that I still am on this forum Ill write some more. :wub: XD
Ill update tomorrow when I get the fic ready.Please be patient...and forgive me mistakes....... :P
See ya tomorrow! I promise It will be a chapter tomorrow! just wait for me! :bow:
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yuukimoko-san,
I'm sorry for commenting so late it's just I've been reading your story and my brain was so overloaded from the cuteness that I couldn't think of the right words to say. I want to say I'm so glad you decided to continue the story. I think it's super cute and so adorable that whenever I read it I feel like hugging every cute thing I see. I love the Mayuki in the story and think it's super awesome so PLEASE IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS HOLY PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I'll be waiting for your next update.
My emotions when writing this: :dizzy: :fainted: :farofflook: :gyaaah: :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :hee:
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you wanted to stop :stoned:
I love your fic don't do it :pleeease:
I'm happy that you said that you'll cantinue because of me :hee:
I can't wait for the next :on woohoo:
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Chapter:_____ Complicated.....
'....you look so beautiful..my princess' The possesiviness could be heard in Mayu's voice
She was stroking Yuki's cheek sitting on the edge of the bed,Mayu waked up earlier that day ,she prepared breakfast and a white rose for Yuki that she put on a drawer beside the bed.And now was pacefuly observing Yuki,her beauty capturing her more and more.
'You are really lovely.Kashiwagi Yuki ,give me all......all your heart,and I will make you rich,loved and more beautiful.' a crazy smile appeared on Mayu's face as she kissed Yuki softly on the lips.
A few moments later she was back to being a puppy as she set herself back in bed.
'hmmm~' Yuki wake up and looked around like searching for a sign that her prince had come to see her.It had been a month from the date with Sae and from then she hadn't seen Mayu.She was feeling sad and scared at the thought that Mayu had left her for another.But she still hoped and waited.....
She saw the the breakfast and the rose and suddenly felt like beaming from happiness.That was the sign she was searching,now she felt at ease seeing that her prince was still there watching her.She tried to sat up and take the brakfast but she felt something on her her and looking dawn she saw Mayu sleeping .It was a cute sigh to see in the morning even if Yuki would still have prefered more to wake up in the arms of her prince.
She waited for Mayuyu to wake up and they eated the breakfast together, after Yuki having to go to school.
Walking to school still brought the memory of the heart broken Sae in her mind.....
'yes, thank you'
'then.......I w-was wondering if......if....'
'Sae? if there is something then tell me please?'
'I........well......I l-love you! please be my girlfriend!!'
'.....I can't..' Yuki said as she waked up from the shock.The moment Sae confessed Yuki stoped breathing for a while, it was like something hit her ,hit her very hard in the heart.She felt another emotion disappearing.She couldn't believe it, Sae was in love with her.........and so had she been in love with Sae too! But......love at first sigh or love that starting forming at every step? Love that keeps growing or love that stoped......?
'why?!' Sae felt hot water pour down her cheeks in the cold night.The hot water hit the ground without a sound,but inside the sound was crushing.
'because.......My heart is alredy captured be someone else.....I am in love with someone else now...' Yuki averted her eyes ,she couldn't look at Sae now.The heart broken expresion was hurting her too, to think that some time ago she was deeply in love with Sae ,thinking that it was unrequested and sudenly she give her heart to a complete stranger .Only after to heard that Sae loved her too......but too late.
'now? you mean that you loved me too? how is this person that took your heart?! ' Sae asked hoping that she gets some ilusionall chance with Yuki,at least for a second.
'Its someone I know for a while now......she took my heart,and doesn't want to give it back.....yes,I loved you too' Yuki still avoided her eyes as she felt the same warm tears pour dawn her cheeks too.Heart breaking moment...... your first love just confessed to you when you fell for another, what do you do?!
'then I'll fight! I'll make you love me again!! ' And with that said, Sae ran away leaving a stunned Yuki beside
Yuki smiled 'she still makes me feel warm....I still have a choice' and she walked home.............
Thinking back at it..... 'its kinda cute how Sae tries to seduce me even now......' Yuki smiled thinking that
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'.....I think its time to do something about the puppy form...' Mayu sipped from her drink
'eh? why ? did Yuki got bored of puppy Mayu?' Yuko asked from beside her
As Yuki walked to school with Haruna,Mayu meet with Yuko at Haruna's place.In their human forms as they both learned to control the time they can transform.It was supposed to be 'sister time' as they both wanted to spend more time together, but as they had fun they also talked about the problems they must resolve.
'no,she didn't get bored.....but she gets to attachated.And if I want her to love me,then I don't need the puppy to get in the way.'
'hmmmm~ but how about you show her that the puppy is really you and then you won't have a problem?' Yuko smiled
'.....that would distroy my advantage of being aroud her and find everything .if she knows that I'm the puppy then she would be more careful about what she says around me.....so I can't make the puppy disappear like this too...' Mayu had a blank face as she thought about a solution.
'hmmmm~ its complicated.......' Yuko looked at the ceiling. 'still wouldn't it be better if you could be beside her as a human even if you lose that advantage?you could capture her heart faster.'
'yes.......I believe it would be'
'then how about you make it look like the puppy get lost and disappeared? with the puppy lost you could come to be beside Yukirin and live with her as a human.;
'yes.But you forgot that I can only become human for 4 hours limit, and after I become puppy again.How can I make it so that I stay human....after all that was part of the punishment.' Mayu sat up.It was almost time for Yuki to come from school,she needed to go back.
'Bye bey Mayuyu~!'
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As Mayu waited for Yuki to come back, she looked around still thinking about what to do.It still was better to tell Yuki in a romantic way that she was her puppy....maybe tonight too in bed!Ideas where entering very fast in Mayu's mind .
The door opened and Mayu looked up,happyly sitting up to welcome Yuki.But stoped when she saw someone she didn't expect tonight or anytime soon.......Sae ,who was holding Yuki's hand .Mayu felt rage and jelousy all of a sudden.
'her again?!'
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and thats all.......for now! Ill try to update sooner.Before the school starts I hope.....leave a coment please!!!!!!!! XD
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Mayu you should let Yuki know your the puppy so you could spend more time with Yuki and Sae won't be coming anymore.
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Wah Sae what are you doing there! :OMG:
Get out right now and go back to Sayaka Yukirin is Mayuyu's :on redcard:
I think Mayuyu should keep the puppy form and use it to be mean around Sae to the point where she hits her! Then Yukirin gets mad and dumps Sae again! Haha ignore me I'm ranting again. Do what you want but please let it be Mayuki! :gyaaah:
Ahh I'm so glad you continued. Please update soon! :pleeease:
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Sae taking Yuki's hand :stoned:
what are you doing Yuki :OMG:
get out! get out Sae!!! :angry1:
Mayu stop being possessive :fainted:
Mayu no bakaa :grr:
:gyaaah: if you cantinue like this you will loose Yuki :pleeease:
I can't wait yuukimoko-san update sonn :on speedy:
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so mayu vs sae was not finish..
they still have a war...
but yuukimoko-san...if yuki still doesnt know that her puppy its her prince...
i think sae still have a big chance to win yuki heart...
i wonder how mayu deal with it...she too possessive....but she too cold too...
yuki need mayu warm heart...to make sure her choice is right...
thank for the update...hope the next update its not too long wait
i love your fic...hehehe
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Hello there~! :)
I know I should update my fics, this one included ........they all are under construction, Im writing them now but It takes more time as I want to write a longer chapter for this fic~ :twisted:
so Im sorry!! please forgive me and wait a little longer?
I also want some help please. I found this site while I was sarching for some Mayuki,and I was pleased with it as I found what I was looking for.BUT!!! but the problem is that I dont know the language! I dont understant almost anything!!!! I found where they have the fics, but I cant read anything!!!! and they have Mayuki!!!!!!!!!!! :wub: :drool: :cry: :cry:
If someone can help me find another site or can translate for me please.....PLEASE!!! I BEG YOU~ I wanna read the fics from there too.... :cry: :cry:
http://www.idol48vn.com/showthread.php?t=4261 (http://www.idol48vn.com/showthread.php?t=4261) this is one of the fics I wanna read :drool:
http://www.idol48vn.com/forumdisplay.php?f=75 (http://www.idol48vn.com/forumdisplay.php?f=75) this is it.......
if someone can help please!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
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wow a long chapter !! :onioncheer:
I can't wait to read it :farofflook:
and about those websites it's vietnamese the languge there us sayuki from vietnam maybe she can help you translate it
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=51583 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=51583)
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Thank you for the ideea mo-chan!!
I sent a message to sayuki~ If it works then will pot them here too?
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good idea yuukimoko-chan :on GJ:
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If u really want, i think maybe i can do it, but the problem is it'll take me longer to update The Special class of AKB School
Cuz i'm my English skill is not very good, also i have to spend time on the other works,
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noooo not The Special class of AKB School :OMG:
no update longer :fainted:
I'm waiting for it Playgirlz-san :pleeease:
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Its an opportunity......but you also have your own fic to finish.....
good to see you back Playgirlz
If I could I would like to help you. My english is bad too but I can try. You could try to traslate it in english how you can and after I come and make the corrections.Like this we could try to do your fic too and the others that we want, but do you know the language is used there?
..........strange.........
Well if you want we could try , if you have other ideas I'm open to listen~ I would like to make more friends too~!
I talk too much......anyway if you have something tell me~!
Beside that does anyone have a direct link to the mangas about AKB48? Im trying to feend some, I alredy readed 2 of the ones that appeared.
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oh ~ I'm a member of that 4rum ~ and of course I'm vietnamese ~ I can help u translating the fic if u want ~ :heart:
the fic that u linked here is about wmatsui in a vampire-hunter theme ~ quite classic ne ~
and plz update love puppy soon XD Mayuyu being possessive is really hot
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really you can translate it Oshiforlife-san !! :onioncheer:
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okay ~ I'll try XD
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Really Oshiforlife ?!!!? :dunno: :ding: please do translate some for us!!!!
Tomorrow Ill post the next chapter~!!!!!!!!!! :glasses:
please Oshiforlife do post some~! I tryed reading some Mayuki from there but I didnt have a translator good........PLEASE!? :hee: :luvluv2:
translate the ones you want (mayuki,wmatsui etc) but please so~ I would love to read them~~
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@mo-chan: sorry, i'm on holiday with my family, I'll write it after I come back. Really sorry Mo-chan ><
@yuukimoko : haha thank you for the welcome back, and yes i know what language it is, cuz i'm living in Vietnam too lol but since we have the help from Oshiforlife-san I think I can focus on my own fic now :] i love to make friend w you too
@Oshiforlife : Thank you for translating, you helped a lot xD btw can i have ur YH, since I also came from that forum lol
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Playgirlz : ah sure ~ it's my pleasure ~ btw , i sent u an email but not sure if jphip 4rum sent the email right and who do u are at i48vn ? :D
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I think she uses the same name, as I looked over a fic that had the same name at the author http://www.idol48vn.com/member.php?u=3739 (http://www.idol48vn.com/member.php?u=3739)
......right?...
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I have missed a lot things! :smhid
Yuukimoko wasn't going to finish her BEATIFUL FANFIC... :shocked
there's site that seems heaven Mayuki :drool: but it vietnam and of course we can't read it :oops:
you guys asked someone to help you.. :cow:
i want someone to help me too :smhid
don't leave me out! :cry:
hahahah just kidding! :twothumbs
please update soon! :thumbsup
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will never leave you cmze-san :hee:
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@yuukimoko : lol yes, that's me. How could u find my page? lol
@Oshiforlife : replied
@cmze : of ccourse we won't :]
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As Mayu waited for Yuki to come back, she looked around still thinking about what to do.It still was better to tell Yuki in a romantic way that she was her puppy....maybe tonight too in bed!Ideeas where entering very fast in Mayus mind .
The door opened and Mayu looked up,happyly sitting up to welcome Yuki.But stoped when she saw someone she didnt expect tonight or anytime soon.......Sae ,how was holding Yukis hand .Mayu felt rage and jelousy all of a sudden.
'her again?!'
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As it said that.......now Sae ,Yuki and Mayu where eating at the table,Mayu in her puppy form trying to stress Sae sitting in Yuki's lap.
'your cooking is very good! its delicious Yukirin!' Sae really liked Yukis food as she eated it every time she had the ocassion.
Even after the school ended Sae was still trying to filrt with Yuki, she could feel that Yuki still liked her.
It was only a matter of time until she would fall again.She just needed a little more, to make Yuki hers........
She made it so they could hold hands, they kiss on the cheek as greeting and she also does some skinship.But Sae wants more......more of Yuki,
to be all hers again.....If only she know that Yuki loved her too sooner then it wouldnt had come to this.
Sae lifted her legs under the table and stroked Yukis legs ,as she sat in Yukis lap,Mayu didn't see anything because she was looking at her face......
Yuki started blushing and looking other way as she started stroking Mayus head, action that calmed Mayu a little too.
They are so helpless....... a love triangle like this one is rare ,Sae -Yuki- Mayu.Sae loves Yuki, so does Yuki. Mayu loves Yuki ,and yeah,maybe Yuki loves her too.
So to all this mess Kashiwagi Yuki is the centre. Oh, yeah lets go back to them....
'I'll ....go wash the dishes' Yuki excused herself and sat up putting Mayu on the table.
'I'll help you' Sae sat up
'no no,its fine. Just play with Mayuyu' Yuki smiled
'ah....ok' Sae smiled back , a charming smile as Yuki blushed and ran out
Sae turned to Mayu, how was sitting on the table looking at her inoccent
Sae smiled and pated Mayu's head 'want to play something Mayuyu?'
'oh,yes! lets play bitting!' Mayu jumped on Sae and both hit the floor
But as Mayu was kinda small Sae took her in her hands and sat up
'damn you! come here and fight!!' Mayu was barking badly now and making Sae worry
'what's going on here?!' a surprised Yuki asked
'ahaha! Nothing nothing! Mayuyu was just palying~' Sae kissed Mayu on the nose and put her dawn
'yack!!!!!! you just kissed me idiot!!!!!!' Mayu barked more and more 'now I need a kiss from Yuki !'
'mou~ Mayuyu......' Yuki got closer and took Mayu in her arms eyes at eyes level
'you shouldn't do that ,its dangerous----' Yuki was interupted as Mayu touched her wet nose with hers.It was a kiss,
but Yuki didn't know what that meant as she smiled at Mayu and put her back dawn.
';sigh; fine,have it your way but be more careful.....' And Mayu ran out
'ne Yuki......I want to talk something with you..' Sae looked serious at Yuki
'yes, lets go to me room' Yuki didn't see it
'Mayu's POV'
Damn that Sae!!
Now that I wear something, I must go there and beat the crap out of her!!
Dare she touch my Yuki!!? Dare she enter my life and try to take what's mine!? Lets see how is the one that wins Sae Miyazawa!!!
I walked in the kitchen again after I put some clothes from my secret place.There was no one......I think Sae must have taken Yuki
to her romm maybe. I start to walk up the stairs as I hear a sudden yelp, that was Yuki's voice! I hurry and run the stairs up.
I stop at the door to see if they are talking.....
'Sae-chan.....why?' Yuki's voice is like a whisper
'I love you Yuki.....and I will prove it to you! I proved my love with words, with gifts and being like I always am.....now I
want to prove it to you with more actions.I'll make you feel good! ' Sae .......Damn you!!!!!!! I want to enter but I wait still
to see what Yuki will say....
'Sae.....that's very sweet.But I don't know if I should give it to you....' Yuki,good girl.
'why? the one you said the person you like, Mayu was it, didn't visit you for some time.She doesn't really care what are you doing.
She doesn't love you! how is she better than me if I didn't even meet her once!!' Sae sounded like she is about to cry,there was a pause...
'I promise I'll make you feel good.I will protect you and be a good girlfriend, ne?Just ....' anther pause 'just give me your inoccence...'
'.....I love...how do I love?' Yuki is confused, she doesn't know .
...Inside me, something is burning.The hate that I feel is sufocating.I need to let this flame out.
My hand is shaking on the knob, I feel like my world will crumble, will all disappear if Yuki......my dear sweet Yuki will give
what is her to anyone else than me.....
Silence , and then soft kisses could be heard. They said something again....but I didn't heard anything,I felt something for the first time.
The kisses become bolder as I heard moans from the other side of the door.
I open the door a little without noticing, and I see them.....they are on the bed kissing each other, with Sae on top.
They didn't heard the door.....my eyes widen as I saw Yuki put her hands around Saes neck and deepen the kiss.
Like a music box, only my shaking breath I hear. The music box inside my chest,the heart that I wanted, had formed.As all the
emotions I never felt invaded me, I pass back from the door.
The soft sounds inside the room are what complete my heart, my music box.
I run......I suddenly run away.I don't want to hear anymore. I run out the house and continue to run.
I pass be people I don't know, I pass houses I never saw before......And I stop.I look around and saw that it was the park I first meet Yuki.
Something wet hits the ground, and I lift a hand to see the source. My cheeks are wet with warm water.....a-are these what humans named 'tears'?
I look at my hands , my eyes hurt and I can't see clear.The water is stoping my vision and I try with my wet hands to wipe it away.
I only wet my selve......the 'tears' refuse to stop and I can't do nothing but fall on my knees and put my hands to hide my hideous face.
Sounds.....I hear sounds.Different sounds, sounds that could be called 'silent screams' .The source.....the source is me.As my entire body is
shaking, from my mouth the sounds echo and enter my ears, becoming the awakening clock that awakened my heart.
I.....I now feel emotions.I know that forcing her was bad now, but that was love.....a love I couldn't express until now.
I hear a sound coming closer and closer
'nee, its beautiful,isnt it?' the voice says softly as it stopes beside me.
I ignore it as I can't properly talk.I want to ask what is she talking about, why is she talking to me but I can't, and I continue to cry.
'its been a while since the sky had been so clear.Its like a map, with a beautiful shape.' the voice says
Night? its already night? I open my closed eyes and saw how dark is, it seems I 've been crying for some time.
'the dark blue could be the earth,the oceans and the ground.And the stars are the people, the people and the possible choices.
its really beautiful..'
I look up at the sky and my eyes widen as I gasp at the beatiful scenary .For the first time I feel the joy as I look at something
beautiful.
'the tears you shed are not needed if you cry for your own mistakes.You need to become strong and never to cry for something you did wrong.
Because what we do in the past is what made us what we are now.' the soft voice takes my attention again as I look at the
source.
In front of me, a beautiful girl is.She is looking at the night sky, her hair is dark like a ravens. And the soft features make
me remember a painting.
She looks at me and I gasp at her her dark eyes, they are holes that capture you in prison, never escaping from them.
'I want to help you. But that deppends only on you.' She smiled at me, a heart warming smile in this darkness.
The girl extended her hand at me ' I am Rena, Matsui Rena. Its nice to meet you...'
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well~ I said I would do a long one but I had a problem and needed to stop writing for a while.And it started happy but after a while
I started listening to sad melody and kinda messed up.....I was imagining Mayu enter in the room and beat Sae up at first....
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yuukimoko-chan what is this :gyaaah:
my heart is hurting me why it's this happen to Mayu :fainted: :on cloudeye:
I really cried when I read this chapter :gyaaah:
why Yuki is doing this whyyyyyyyyy :gyaaah:
Yuki said that she loves Mayu why she is doing this :fainted:
I started listening to sad melody and kinda messed up.....I was imagining Mayu enter in the room and beat Sae up at first....
I want to beat Sae in Mayu's place :angry1: :temper:
Mayu is very sad she is even crying :OMG:
she is no more a cyborg prince she can feel sadness :fainted: :badluck:
Matsui Rena?? what is going to happen to Mayu :dunno:
no no no no nooooooo I want to know what is going to happen :frustrated:
update soon please I can't wait :pleeease:
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Noooooooo :scared:.. Yuki kissing Sae?! What are you doing Yuki?!?!?!?!?
Must say that at least Mayu finally knows what pain and love mean.. but but... 'cause of that Mayu's crying... I almost cried too :mon hanky:
The bonus is ---> Rena appeared!!!!! :shock:
but for what purpose?
Is she a human in this story?
She said she'll help Mayu... I wonder how will she help Mayu?
Does she even know Mayu's situation?
Ugh... Too many questions!! but no answer... :OMG:
Have no choice but wait for the next update... :fainted: pls. update soon.
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Wahhhhhh!!! Sae how could you! :gyaaah:
Sae I love you as a Twin Tower fan but when you get in the way of Mayuki I'll explode! :angry1:
Poor Mayuyu feeling the pain of human emotion. :fainted:
Oh the agony! :badluck:
But wait! What's Rena doing there? :dunno:
I really want to know why she's there! :tantrum:
Please update soon. :pleeease:
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:shock: O ---- M ----- G :shock:
WOW!! After i finished reading this chapter...... :dozing:
I actually felt lack of oxygen ... for about .. I think.... 3 seconds... :on lol: :on lol:
This is the kind of story that I have been looking for!!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
At first I was like... :angry1: :OMG: :angry1: ... When Mayu saw Sae and Yuki!!
And then I was like... :dizzy: :OMG: :ding: .. When Mayu meets Rena!!
MAYU and RENA!!! What will happen next?? :dunno:
*and now Rena enter this world.. I know there will be a Wmatsui* :glasses:
And also what will happen to Yuki after this..!?! :dunno:
:on gay: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! :on gay:
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O.M.G.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :dizzy:
I never know that making a chapter listening to sad music would give me so many comments...... :ding:
Anyway~ for the first time I want to comment back~!!! :cool1:
mo-chan: well....you could beat Sae now or~ wait and see what Mayu will do~ what is your choice? :dunno: Yes! finally Mayu feels like a human~
Ill try to update soon......no promises! hope before the school starts....
kiruchi: What is Yuki doing? :hehehe: ....even the author doesnt know.... :on lol: and for your next questions.......its a s-e-c-r-e-t~! :hee:
(......ignore the author please. she eated too many chocolates and now entered in jocker mode....) so yes! no answer!!!
miyumi: Im soo happy to see you~! :luvluv1: (to read you...) but I cant answer to any question as I dont know anything right now......
smarty0821: so you like my story? Im happy that you like it~! as always I dont have any answers...... and yes there will probably be Wmatsui but in about 3-4 chapters? dont know...... :sweat:
Hope you all liked it~!!! Ill try to update as soon as I can~ .........I dont believe that any of you cryed!!!! :temper: only I can as I was writing and listening to something sad~
Please wait for me. Bye bye~ :kneelbow: :byebye:
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wtf my heart just shattered into pieces :nervous
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I just became :angry1: when Mayu saw Yuki and Sae
Want Mayu to :on kimbo: Sae right now .
Is Rena going to help Mayu in getting Yuki's heart or beat Sae up.
Thank You for the update
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:cry: :cry:
this is sad poor Mayu! :cry:
Sae get out of the way! :angry:
please update soon! :cow:
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I hate sae,hope yuki dont give 'her'to sae...it will be hurt mayuyu
And hope mayu human form can last long than before...
Rena...uuu
I can't wait the next update! LOL
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Poor Mayu T_T
Rena is in da place! Who is she? A god time?
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uaaaaaa noo Yuki , what r u thinking ! u've promised to Mayu :panic:
poor poor Mayu
and Rena ? OMG , don't tell me she's gonna be the next princess for a while be4 Jurina appear :panic:
pls update soon Yuukimoko-san :heart:
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*Mayu's POV*
I remember.....when I sleep I start to remember. The past is filled with memories that I want to refuse as being mine.
On top of the Clocktower, she was sitting on a chair.And even now I remember her laughing.
But I still wonder, even now, Was she a demon or my mother?
*Flashback---Dream*
I walker the spiral steps of the tower, hearing the moving second hand of the clock.It shakes like a normal soul.I am just 7 years as
I try to please my mother.I ,being her favorite, like she says.I learn magic and how to fight from very little.
My other 3 sisters are always kind to me, but 2 are always trying to keep me away from my mother and from the Clocktower where she is waiting for me
to come.My older sisters Yuko and Minami are waiting outside so we could go play after I come back.They refuse to ever walk these stairs,
but I don't care, mother is waiting on top.
My 3rd sister.....I don't remember her name....strange.I know her name but I don't remember.I continue to walk the stairs as I think,
but I don't know her name.My mother....I don't remember her name too! What is happening...? I just know that they are waiting on top....
My father told me to not become obssesed, that I should stop learning things that aren't for my years, and is always asking me something
that I don't understand....
"Is the thing on top of the Clocktower, Justice or Poison?"
They try to protect me, but I don't remember from what.What was there on the top that was so bad?
Every time I proceed up the spiral staircase, a Handbeat echoes.
The stairs seems to never end.The time and the conflict are engraved within my heart.
I want to protect my kingdom, my people, my fammily.Thats why I swimg this sword! The vanity and wars that I want to stop....how started
them all? My mother will help me learn, and I will protect this kingdom even if I don't become the next king! Who else could wield it but me?
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That day I draw a portrait of a girl with this hand...my mother said that she will be my wife,the one that I drawed.
Black hair and capturing eyes....a beautiful face and a soft voice.....she will be the one I will love.I blush as I think that ,
not listening to what mother is saying anymore.
'nee,Mayu? are you listening?' My mother takes my attention again, I look p and saw her gentle smile my heart skiped a beat.
My mother is beautiful...
'You where thinking about the portrait girl? but like I said you will surely fall in love with her.....but...'she lookes away from me
with a sad expression
'but I don't want my Mayu to love someone else more than she loves me...' she blushes and tries to hide her face.I smile. My mother
is still like a kid...
'I won't love anyone else more than I love you mother! I promise!' I say with a smile and she gives me a warm smile too .We hug and its time to
go back for me, father will be worryed.
I feel dizzy.....
*End flashback---end dream*
'Mother....' I murmur as I sat up in bed. and look around.
Vague memories started the madness then.......
*3rd POV*
'Mayu? are you wake?' Rena asked as she entered the room to call Mayu for brakfast.
'ah, yes. Im coming now !' Mayu sat up and walked with Rena
Its been a week since Mayu obtained a heart.She told Rena everything about what happened in that night as she wanted to talk to someone.
Rena had held her that night as she cried in her embrace .Mayu moved together with Rena as she insisted .
They come to understand each other in a week as Rena is very kind to Mayu.
'ne Rena?' Mayu said as she finished eating
'yes?' Rena smiled back at her
'if.....if we meet Yuki when we go out....can we say that you are my owner ?' Mayu looked hopefully at Rena
'yes!' Rena smiled
*Mayu's POV*
Rena is really kind.....she even lets me stay with her.And i think that she can help me transform too, I just need to make her my princess
for a while until I do something about what happeed last week.
I still hadn't seen Yuki, and I don't want to talk with her .....even if I wonder if its true what I saw then....
its about time I become a puppy again as I had been human for a week alredy. I just hope Rena won't mind...
'Rena, I'm going to transforme now.' I say as I look at her, she nods and After a few seconds in my place is a puppy...
I look up at Rena and she is looking blaklly at me.I title my head to the side .
When I want to sit up and go closer to see what happened she suddenly screams 'kyaaaaa' with
a blushing and smiling face and I found myself in the air again........
ah! humans are really something.....but its cute!
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I did another update as I had a paceful moment .But this one is kinda lame, still we start to finf something about Mayus past....and we found that she is now living with Rena and didnt see Yuki for a week.She also now has a heart.
Hope you still liked it....leave a review? :?
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Ahh great chapter as always! :luvluv1:
So Mayu is living with Rena now? Interesting. :hehehe:
I want to know about the relationship between Mayu and her mother. It sounds complex. :err:
But I also want to know what happens when Yuki meets Rena with Mayu! :dunno:
Please update soon! :nya:
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who is the 3d sister :dunno:
Mayu is staying is Rena's house and she can transform to be human :OMG:
what is the relation ship between Rena and Mayu :dunno:
Mayu didn't see Yuki for a week :stoned:
what is going to happen and what about Yuki she sure is worried :fainted: :badluck:
it's all Sae's fault :angry1:
agthhhhhhhhh no no no no no I want to know what is going to happen :frustrated:
cantine yuukimoko-chan cantinue cantinue please :pleeease:
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LOLOL This just hit me :on lol:
When reading the motherly scene, thinking about Mayu and Yuki's relationship as Mother and Daughter xD
Now I think Mayu's mother is Yuki XD LOLOL ! But that can't be coz' Mayu's mom showed Mayu who she will love :err:
Update sooooooon :on GJ:
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The update is NOT lame... it got me hooked BIG TIME y'know. :ding:
ok... 1 of my many questions was answered in this update...
ah! humans are really something.....but its cute!
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apparently Rena is a "Human"... and Mayu's "new owner"... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand apparently Rena can help Mayu TRANSFORM!!!!!! :shock:
but WAIT!!!! :on yellcard:
I have several MORE question in addition to my MANY questions!!! :OMG:
1. I thought Yuki is the only ONE who can help Mayu transform?! (because of love or something?)... then WHY or rather HOW can Rena do it???? :dunno:
2. A part of Mayu's dark past was revealed... sooooo.... who's the 3rd sister? and her beloved mother? and that girl in the picture? (3 new people... well 2 actual persons and 1 in the drawing)
---> just a theory but..... my gut feeling tells me that Rena and Yuki (in someway) was kind of connected to Mayu (either one of them is the sister/mother/girl-the-painting)
3. Why do Takamina and Yuko (+the king) protect Mayu from their Mother or from what? What happened to the other sister btw?
4. Start of madness? what madness? :frustrated:
Of course, I know that your answer will be S-E-C-R-E-T again... So I guess No answer for these questions eh? :err:
this is what I'm feeling right about now (after reading and while writing this) --> :on blackhole: heheh
'nyway.. Pls. Update soon... :fainted: <-- (dying due to frustration and waiting)
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Mayu is living with Rena :stoned:
I don't think she is human is she Mayu's third sister or mother or the picture? :dunno:
Who is the person in the drawing is it Yuki or Rena? :frustrated:
How come Rena can help Mayu transform :dunno:
Thank You for the update. Update soon
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Well Ill only answer 1 or 2 questions as I will try to update soon and surprises are always welcomed!~ :bingo:
1. I thought Yuki is the only ONE who can help Mayu transform?! (because of love or something?)... then WHY or rather HOW can Rena do it???? :dunno:
For the first one.. :dunno:....Mayu said in this chapter that Rena can be her princess, and becoming her princess she can transform with a kiss like she did with Yuki. I believe the think is the key is the word 'princess' witch can open the possibilities, if Rena becomes Mayus princess then she can transform her and other things .......that are a secret? :bigdeal: And yes with Yuki I asume it was more from love....
2. A part of Mayu's dark past was revealed... sooooo.... who's the 3rd sister? and her beloved mother? and that girl in the picture? (3 new people... well 2 actual persons and 1 in the drawing)
....these things even the author doesnt know......its still in progress.....I work on it right now.But inspiration hits when you dont wait it so maybe it will change~
---> just a theory but..... my gut feeling tells me that Rena and Yuki (in someway) was kind of connected to Mayu (either one of them is the sister/mother/girl-the-painting)
well this sounds kinda correct.....just a little.....or more?
3. Why do Takamina and Yuko (+the king) protect Mayu from their Mother or from what? What happened to the other sister btw?
S-E-C-R-E-T~
4. Start of madness? what madness? :frustrated:
madness? what madness? :dunno: oh that one! :bingo: that was the madness that happened in the past~ :glasses:
Thank you everyone for the reviews~! I love them!!!!!!!! :on lol:
And now a little bonus? what do you say? could I post it now or tomorrow? the bonus I mean~ :glasses:.........your answer? :shifty:
waiting for an answer~
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all what you said didn't answer to me that still there is more mystery :dunno:
but if Rena is MAyu's princess now that mean she is kissing Rena or what :stoned:
I'm little scared scared of your reaction yuukimoko-chan :on ksweat:
but still I want the bonus now :pleeease:
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..... :bored:
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................hmmm? whats this? :mon dunno: :mon huh2: :mon huh:
............................................hmmmmmm?!!!! w-what?!!! :mon spit: :mon whine: :mon ehh:
you want the bonus?.......b-but?! I didnt write it......yet..... :mon scare: :mon spit: :mon duh:
please forgive me? I wanted too but I started looking at akibingo and forget about the bonus........................ :mon waterworks: :mon cute: :mon cry:
give me 10 minutes and Ill post the bonus please? nee mo-chan~ please dont be angry and forgive me for replaying the Yukirin moments in akbingo that much...... :mon cry: :mon POd:
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Mayu be strong!!!
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It's ok :hee:
I'm not angry at you because I love yuukimoko-chan :shy2:
all like Akbing and want to watch it when I watch Akbing I can't stop laughing :on lol: :hiakhiakhiak:
please update the bonus soon and cantinue your fic :on GJ:
your fic is fantastic 'cause your fic is the first fic made me crying :hiakhiakhiak: and I like when I watch or Read something and I cry :wriggly: and when i think about it if there is Rena there will be Jurina is it the 3d sister is Jurina then?? but still the mother but I really do not care about all I want is that mayuki make up
do your best yuukimoko-chan I'm waiting for you :nya: :on gay:
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Addicted to selfishness ,these dirty hands extend towards the Sin. I am a sin itself, as my hand had known the blood of many .The sword that I pointed even through my sisters...
The sword of Atonement is to be help by her, not me.
I heard the sound of the clocktower's gears.That is the proof that she is alive,my beloved sister.And so that the second hand does not stop,watching over it is 'my' duty.
The previous master, personification of greed,mother, dissapearing long ago.But my own sin will someday distroy me, I wonder why didn't I notice it sooner?
But even now, the burn scars on half of her body engrave these two's memories.......I am to watch here until the time come.
Lets me tell you a little about my story....
Long long ago, a solitary man, a 'collector' had created on the verge of death a small 'music box' that plays a single melody......
A melody that shows his 'collection', and also a Clocktower in the forest,further away from humans.
The 'music box' would show the perfect king that would rule this kingdom for a very long time.It would make a perfect king that would stops the wars in this world,and make miracles. That was the proporse of the 'music box'.
He died, and give the instructions to someone how thought he could trust, a 'demon' with the face of a queen.The queen was to give birth to the last kids and then they would find the miracle child.
The last 2 where born, mirror images that loved each other.On the day they where born the ceremony had happened. It was said that the music box would open itself to the powerful king and would enter in his heart.
The first one being Yuuko, the perverted prince and the older of them.She was put beside the box and blood from her hand had come before the box.On her hand was writen with her own blood 'A powerful prince that shall remain in the past, so that her happiness will continue she will not seek power or faim.She will seek an angel of the air.'
The prince wasn't the king.........the second prince,Minami, the charming prince was put before the music box and waited.But she wasn't the miracle as the blood formed on her hand without any wound .There was written 'A kind prince that seeks love from the evil, she shall not become the king.She will seek the power and become a powerful hero.' but the queen still didn't care.
The next one where the mirrors, you could not tell who is who as neither had a name ,and they where bound by their hands.The where put together before the music box as they didn't want to lets go of one another......The 'music box' opened and started playing , but no one know how was the king as both where in front of her.
The twins where fascinated by the music as one of them lets go of the other and got closer to touch the box......blood come from her hand and wrriten was 'Reverof si gnol emit dna emit sah a yaw fo gnignahc sgniht.' but the meaning beside it was lost as it disappeared soon.The music box started disappearing too and on the other child's chest above her heart had appeared a word 'fate' it was .
The twins from then where took by the queen, and raised with love so they could grow like she wants.The demon had took them imediatly after the ceremony so they wouldn't know anything ,the kingdom was horrified as everyone was afraid of the kind but deminic queen, and the mirrors disparition made everyone think of the bad......
But now you wonder what happened after and how the king lets this happen? well these are things I would like to tell you another time when you will come visit me again.
The important personages where always the ones you are expecting the last, right?The ones that enter in this forest,the visitors , are always eaten by the 'master of the cemetery' that waits even for you.....
'That girl' with the pretension of the leading role waits at the entrace of this clock tower.Selfishly wanting the attention of someone that isn't hers,the loneliness off losing her other half showing just a little on her face.
A lonely man created it, a 'music box' and the Clocktower.They where made for utopia to be created.The Clocktower was forgoten in the forest,where the demon had raised her princes.Now only the lost end here and finally in the stomach of the 'master of the cimistery'
But the clock still works, and so it won't stop as I watch it.If it ever stops, then the prince will die.The music box had stoped playing long ago,when the prince lost her heart and I wait for her to come back.......in this clock there remains just a single person beside 'me', the 'Clockwork doll' .
The ones that sined, the girl from the portred that wasn't loved, the princess from the past that was loved where the ones that shall pay.....
.....it hurts inside when I think back about it.....when the decision was made,I put my hand on my chest and reach deep inside.....its warm,this heart that beats without me.
Ah ! I heard my mirror singing........Lalulilalala lalulilalala La Lalulilalala~!
So that the second hand won't stop, so that it will keep spining, is my duty to watch over it. Mother, utopia will be complete when the Musicbox and the clocktower will be together again.......I don't care if you are a 'demon' or my 'mother'.......I will point the sword at you again if I need to......
I think your visit is over now......thank you for listening to me,it has been so long since I talked to someone else other than 'that girl'......
Its time to go, the 'master of the cimitery' is waiting for you.hihihi~
oh! I never said my name did I ?
My name is............
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Believe me or not, I had this over last night but I was so confused be the time that I didnt see that it wasnt send and I closed it and now I rewrited everything different because I forgot the original........sorry! leave a comment? I like questions too!
Also sorry for the mistakes but I didnt have time to look over it and I was writing like crazy~ 'cuz now I must learn Latin.....I dont want to but I must.....how hard can Latin be?
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my name is....."spiderman?" :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:
twin? (jurina and rena? well maybe) :cathappy:
musicbox? (its mayu right?) :cathappy:
clocktower? (mother? well maybe) :cathappy:
aaah to much mistery.....i want more i want more :cow: :deco:
cant wait mayu meet yuki scene again
right now we know that mayu can be human form for a weeks...hope yuki not really doing "that" with Sae :thumbup
thank for the update :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :deco:
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I'm with kurogumi-san :on grad:
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My mind :fainted:
These clocktowers and music boxes are flooding my mind now !!! AARGH ! :angry1:
Too much mystery, but sukiii dayooo ! It's like I'm reading a Trilogy :farofflook:
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WOW this bonus is super good! :luvluv1:
I really like it. :shy2:
The clock tower and music box, I want to know more about it. Oh and the mirror images. :tantrum:
I'm gonna take a guess but I'm guessin this:
"Reverof si gnol emit dna emit sah a yaw fo gnignahc sgniht"
Is actually saying: "Forever is long and time has a way of changing things."
Am I right? :dunno:
Please update soon! :farofflook:
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Oh~ mysterious I it~
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I like the bonus.... but I still like the next update more. :nya:
it revealed more about the past...
and someone's watching over the clocktower....
I heard the sound of the clocktower's gears.That is the proof that she is alive,my beloved sister.And so that the second hand does not stop,watching over it is 'my' duty.
The previous master, personification of greed,,mother, dissapearing long ago.But my own sin will someday distroy me, I wonder why didnt I notice it sooner?
hmmm.... Mayu's twin sister? (may or may not)
But I'm still wondering about the mother and that twin sister. add that girl in the painting too. There's a twist somewhere...
And about Yuki.... I think (gut feel again)... she stopped it... who knows anyway 'cept for yuukimoko. :OMG:
where's the next update? pls. :pleeease:
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A lot of questions in my mind now :cool2:
why do u have to confuse us like this? :temper:
I want more, pls update soon. My mind is going to blow up :frustrated:
And yes, thank you lol
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Mayuyu~
Yukirin~
Mayuyu~
Yukirin~
Yuukimoko-san..m-m really curious about what happen with yuki after mayu left her...
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Yuukimoko-san..m-m really curious about what happen with yuki after mayu left her...
Me two!!!! :tantrum:
I'm sure Yuki's been panicking and worrying and many more ~ing over missing Mayu!
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Yuukimoko-san..m-m really curious about what happen with yuki after mayu left her...
Me two!!!! :tantrum:
I'm sure Yuki's been panicking and worrying and many more ~ing over missing Mayu!
me too I want to know :fainted:
I want them to Make up too :gyaaah:
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mouuu~ you all are so cute~ :hehehe:
But hey, wait just alittle more cuz I have something to do first before I made the next chapter witch I hope will be posted today cuz tomorrow I have a looooottttt of homeworks....... :smoke: :sweat:
Lets me tell you a little more then~ the next chapter will be from Yukis POV, she will tell us what really happened there~ you want that dont you? :whistle: :on lol:
And as A BONUS. if you would read my fic with more attention then you would know one of the personas.......Reread the last 2 chapters before the bonus, and if you have attention you will find something interesting there~ :hehehe: :on crazygran:
Tell me if you find it~ :on thumbb:
.....is anyone even trying to find something or am I just waiting to see if someone reads my posts....?
Repeat:
Last 2 chapters before the BONUS. You will find someone you have been asking about.
Ill wait 30 minutes, if no one finds anything........the next chapter will be posted next week~
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If I'm not mistaken....Rena is the one who Mayu's painting way back when she was a kid... well that's all :panic: :panic: :panic:
I WANT YUKI'S POV !!!! :angry: :angry:
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You did well young one! :cool1: :on cigar:
But....I wont really do her pov.....it will be a little twist~ Ill post the next chapter later today! tomorrow if I dont finish..... :on_hot:
So Rena was the one destined for Mayu or so says her mother~ :on spit:
what do you think? :on drink: :hehehe:
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:shock: :OMG: :stoned:
iyadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :pleeease:
no no no no no no nooooooooooo :frustrated:
Mayu is only for Yuki :fainted:
I can't take it anymore :gyaaah:
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Eeeh im late to answer...
Yuukimoko-san Fighting! Fighting! Fighting!
First! Its Love puppy!
Second! Its your homework! LOL just kidding...ehehehe
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*Sae's POV*
I wanted to be her friend......the little girl how was always sitting alone,ignored be the others. At only 5 years I meet her, Kashiwagi Yuki.And I tried to befriend her.
She was a girl who didn't talk much and always sitting alone.She never spoke to anyone if she wasn't questioned and had a sad look ....she was beautiful,so beautiful that everyone around her was embrassed to talk to her, but she never know that.She believed that they hate her, so she didn't do anything .
I aproached her with a smile and I befriended her.We become good friends very fast.
With time she got more friends and I was happy, she was finally open to everyone.Her reactions where cute, and her smile was one of a godness......
We grow up together, we go to the same schools and always together.....
We were always close, and I was always filrting with her.I never know, until one day when I was careful with my own moves.And I saw myself hug her,hold her hand,filrt and kiss her cheek. And suddenly....
But oh so suddenly ,I got it......And I told to myself looking in the mirror. 'I am in love with her...I fell in love with Kashiwagi Yuki....'
It hit me hard at first, and I had a time when I was acting strange......but after that I decided to continue.To continue to do the same as always until a day when I can confess my love.
And so the time moved, suddenly I was in my high school years, with her still be my side.I smile and hug her, she smiles and hug me back.I believe that she loves me too.....
But she is acting strange......and I know that its not because of me.She thinks about someone else......I think its time to action and ask for a date.
She accepts and we go......but I already know that she will leave me heart broken.I still try.She is thinking about someone else......
I won't give up! I continued to filrt, to hug her, to hold her hand even more.I told her that I love her....and she still feels something for me......
I will make her mine.
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*Yuki's POV*
We enter my home and I saw Mayuyu at the door ready to jump on me....only to stop when she sees Sae.
I love this little puppy, but I don't know what she thinks. And after all I too have problems.
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I always told them in my mind 'I;am sorry for being alive' I ,how was different.
But Sae saved me, from myself.She brought me a smile.
I made friends and I become open to everyone,I was even named the reaction queen by my friends.
I learned to make friends,to be open,to talk more, and how to love......all because of her.
So I made a vow. 'If she ever needs something from me,if I can ever help her with something when she needs the most, If......I can make her happy, then I will do whatever it needs to be done.I will be there for her ,forever.I will protect her..'
And I prayed ,lets this thousand year vow echo to the end of the earth....
We where always different, but our differences are the reason we're drawn to each other.
Even now I remember when she said to me 'I will protect you so stay be my side' and I want to tell her the same some day,when I can protect her.
I ,how was once shy, become open and frendly .I want to always stay be her side.....but now I know that its impposible.
No matter where we are as long as we are together it will be alright.That's what I felt.
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*3rd POV*
As it said that.......now Sae ,Yuki and Mayu where eating at the table,Mayu in her puppy form trying to stress Sae sitting in Yuki's lap.
'your cooking is very good! its delicious Yukirin!' Sae really liked Yuki's food as she eated it every time she had the ocassion.
Even after the school ended Sae was still trying to filtr with Yuki, she could feel that Yuki still liked her.
It was only a matter of time until she would fall again.She just needed a little more, to make Yuki hers........
She made it so they could hold hands, they kiss on the cheek as greeting and she also does some skinship.But Sae wants more......more of Yuki,
to be all hers again.....If only she know that Yuki loved her too sooner then it wouldnt had come to this.
Sae lifted her legs under the table and stroked Yukis legs ,as she sat in Yuki's lap,Mayu didnt see anything because she was looking at her face......
Yuki started blushing and looking other way as she started stroking Mayu's head, action that calmed Mayu a little too.
They are so helpless....... a love triangle like this one is rare ,Sae -Yuki- Mayu.Sae loves Yuki, so does Yuki. Mayu loves Yuki ,and yeah,maybe Yuki loves her too.
So to all this mess Kashiwagi Yuki is the centre. Oh, yeah lets go back to them....
'Ill ....go wash the dishes' Yuki excused herself and sat up putting Mayu on the table.
'Ill help you' Sae sat up
'no no,its fine. Just play with Mayuyu' Yuki smiled
'ah....ok' Sae smiled back , a charming smile as Yuki blushed and ran out
Sae turned to Mayu, how was sitting on the table looking at her inoccent
Sae smiled and pated Mayus head 'want to play something Mayuyu?'
'oh,yes! lets play bitting!' Mayu jumped on Sae and both hit the floor
But as Mayu was kinda small Sae took her in her hands and sat up
'damn you! come here and fight!!' Mayu was barking badly now and making Sae worry
'whats going on here?!' a surprised Yuki asked
'ahaha! Nothing nothing! Mayuyu was just palying~' Sae kissed Mayu on the nose and put her dawn
'yack!!!!!! you just kissed me idiot!!!!!!' Mayu barked more and more 'now I need a kiss from Yuki !'
'mou~ Mayuyu......' Yuki got closer and took Mayu in her arms eyes at eyes level
'you shouldnt do that ,its dangerous----' Yuki was interupted as Mayu toched her wet nose with hers.It was a kiss,
but Yuki didnt know what that meant as she smiled at Mayu and put her back dawn.
';sigh; fine,have it your way but be more careful.....' And Mayu ran out
'ne Yuki......I want to talk something with you..' Sae looked serious at Yuki
'yes, lets go to my room' Yuki didn't see it
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*Yuki's POV*
With Sae little be little I understand joy.And we made many memories together.Now I wonder,if Sae ever wants something that don't want to give, will I still give it?
We made it to my room and I sat at my desk,Sae was still standing.
'so, what is the matter Sae-chan?' I ask with a smile as I look at her.
'I- ....I wanted to talk to you about my confession....' Sae looked down 'I really love you,Yuki.So I beg you again, please give a chance and I will make you happy! I promise.'
Lets this thousand year vow pierce the heavens.
'....I am relly sorry Sae-chan but I don't love you....' I looked away too as now I felt her eyes on me
'you are lying. You still feel something for me and now you are lying....' Sae....please forgive me!
Sae walked to me and took me by the hand to sit me up beside the bed.
'Sae-chan.....why?' my voice sounds like its broken
'I love you Yuki.....and I will prove it to you! I proved my love with words, with gifts and being like I always am.....now I
want to prove it to you with more actions.I'll make you feel good! ' ....Sae....I know that what you said is true....but....I fell for another too....how can I say this to you?
'Sae.....thats very sweet.But I don't know if I should give it to you....' I say trying to maybe stop something bad from happening.
'why? the one you said the person you like, Mayu was it, didn't visit you for some time.She doesn't really care what are you doing.
She doesn't love you! how is she better than me if I didn't even meet her once!!' no...please no.Don't speak like that.Mayu loves me....she loves me...right? you make me have dubts ....
I don't know...I don't know if Mayu is better than you Sae.You where my first love.She is my second.How can I compare you two?
'I promise I'll make you feel good.I will protect you and be a good girlfriend, ne?Just ....' anther pause 'just give me your inoccence...' you are once again asking me for something I don't know if I should give you.
'.....I love...how do I love?' I love Sae but I also love Mayu...
Maybe I should give it a try? I will lets you play with me for a while.I will see how I truly feel then, but I'm afraid I'll hurt you even more.
I see you come closer to kiss me, and I lets you closing my eyes.Its soft,inviting, but something is missing.
'Thank you..Yuki' I hear Sae whisper when we broke the kiss
What can I say back? don't say thank you because soon you will hate me? get away from me? you are mistaken?I didn't kiss you? just....what should I say?
Sae pushes me on the bed slowly and sits on top of me.
We kiss again, this time bolder,but I still miss something...
We change our characters with time, we may have moments of loneliness
but as long as I see your smile,its alright.That's what I feel.But its not enough anymore....
I put my hands around her neck in hope that I will find what's missing if I kiss her back.
A small sounds awake me, I look at the door from the edge of the eyes.And I see,Mayu, the one I truly love for a second,then I hear her run away.
My eyes widen in shock.
I remember now. When I first meet Mayu,the prince, everything was over.She took my heart with a single kiss and I didn't know it......
The fate of destruction began then to move.
In that moment when I was kissed by Mayu, my love for Sae was over.I was over her.
But in the same moment, Sae decided to finally confess to me.....ironic!
We where torn so far apart, Sae......I can do nothing to love you again.
I suddenly push you away crying.These where tears that I didn't know that where there.
'w-what happened?' you ask shocked looking at me.
I look away and try to wipe my tears .Why won't they stop?
Only now I can understand what I feel for you
I love you
like my own
sister.......
Lets this thousand year vow sound back at your side
Even if I no longer can return to love you more than that.
This decision is now unshakable.I will protect you from doing something wrong, and from Mayu....
I love you...
*Sae and Yuki's POV* (this is confusing...)
Even if the entire world would hate you
Even if the entire world would hate me..
'w-why Yuki?'
'I love....no,loved you Sae.But you where too late.The momet she kissed me,she took my heart...'
I will protect you, so
If there is a single person that needs me
'....there is no way to make you love me again,isnt it?'
'Im sorry Sae.....I still love you,but just like a sister'
always smile
I can be happy
'If you can live through this'
if we will fall ever again for each other....
'I understand....but I would like to meet her ,so we could have a proper talk,that Mayu '
'yes, *smile* thank you Sae...'
If we will then lets us be happy together then...
'I will wait for you...'
This dark room, the lovely moon in the night sky
This heart broken love
These are also memories of the two of us.
I will remember them forever.
The dark haired asassin that killed this love between us is now somewhere out.....I hope I(you) can find her and be happy.
This love is lost in the darkness
Please,please love again,someone else....
And if we will fall again when we will be reborn,I hope I can properly say to you the sweet three words
If only we will fall again....
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its lame isnt it? I was kinda bored and couldnt express what I felt .....do you felt something when you read this?comment please~
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Good! Really really good! :luvluv2:
Sae's POV was interesting and so was Yuki's. :hehehe:
When you had put them together I got a little confuesed but then it all made sense. :dizzy: :ding:
Update soon!! :farofflook:
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wow it's really sad what is happening :fainted:
Yuki if you love Mayu you do it :pleeease:
it's all Sae's fault :angry1:
Mayu is with Rena now :cool2:
Jurina come and take Rena :pleeease:
what is going to happen :dunno:
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I felt...uh...sad and happy...its mixing..complicated..hahaha
What yuki felt, its sad..regret...and happy,she felt sad and regret toward sae...because she realized that her love toward sae was just a love to sister...,happy that she know how she feel toward mayu but also sad,she look mayu leaving her...she break mayu rule...and ready to facing the punishment...(Maybe have a rival and its Renaaaa my lovely oshimen) LOL
Uh i cant wait mayu and yuki moment...
Yuukimoko-san i know you busy with your work...but but...
Thank for the update,its great chapter!
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I dunno but... when I think about it... Mayu is actually from the future. (I completely forgot about this!!!) :OMG:
It struck me when I read the 'when we will reborn' line.
Good job with Sae/Yuki pov :farofflook: ... got a little bit confuse but I got it after reading it at least 3x. :sweat:
But... Sorry Sae... Yuki belong to Mayu :bigdeal: (same as Mayu belongs to Yuki) --> Problem solve
another but!!! Mayu's with RENA right now!!!! :frustrated: (and she-mayu- doesn't really want to talk to Yuki for a while :on cloudeye:)
Waiting for the next update plssss. :pleeease:
--> a meeting between Mayu-Yuki-Rena is a MUST...
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*Yuki's POV*
Mayuyu........MAYUYU IS GONE! after Sae left I started searching for Mayuyu but she wasn't in the house anymore.I think when Mayu left.....she left the door open and Mayuyu get out.
What should I do? Mayuyu is gone and now so is Mayu......
*3rd POV*
Yuki started crying and fell on her knees.She was in the kitchen after searching for Mayuyu for 2 hours in all house and out.
She couldn't go search for neither Mayu or Mayuyu out as it was already 12 night so she wouldn't see anything.
All she could do now was cry.......
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*a week later*
'Im going for a walk.....' Yuki murmured to herself as she exited the house.
It had been a boring week with a lot of sleepless nights ,Sae was trying to be normal but sometimes the sadness could be seen on her face,and neither Yuki could hide it.
Yuki walked around ,until she entered the park where she had meet Mayuyu,her puppy.
She sat down and looked at the sky.It was a paceful morning,and no one was around.
'hamham!' A little puppy was playing with her owner a little further from her.She listened to the barking 'it resembles Mayuyu so much...'
'ham!'
'matte~ Mayuyu! wait for me'
'ah~ even the name is the same..' Yuki murmured without looking 'w-wait?Mayuyu?!' Yuki looked around for the puppy and its owner and sat up.
She saw the puppy, her puppy playing with a girl her age.They where running around the park and mayuyu was jumping on her from nowhere.
they semmed to have so much fun.....
Yuki started running after the puppy as tears fell down her cheeks.
She ran and finally jumped on Mayuyu hugging her
'Mayuyu Mayuyu! ' Yuki cried as she held the puppy close to her
'ham!' poor Mayuyu was being hold too tightly and could hardly breathe
'ummm,excuse me...' Rena walked to the too and got Yuki's attention 'how are you?'
'a-ah! excuse me, I just saw my puppy ,she ran out last week and I couldn't find her.....I am so happy that you are fine Mayuyu...' Yuki hugged Mayuyu more affectionately
'yes,I'm glad that you are happy but...' Rena didn't continue as Yuki was already up and started talking again
'thank you so much for taking care of Mayuyu,how could I pay you back?' Yuko looked at Rena with a little smile
'you could give me back my puppy....' Rena said but Yuki was paying attention at all
'yes, so how could I ?.....w-wait! what? your puppy?' Yuki looked shocked at Rena and hugged Mayuyu more tightly
'yes, Mayuyu is my puppy.I lost her 3 months ago ,I posted some posters to find her but last week she come back home.' Rena said calmly with an inoccent face
Yuki was very very shocked.She was frozen, her grip on Mayuyu was even hard.
'So she is Mayuyu's owner?! I can't believe that Mayuyu ran back home and left me....she was probably missing her original owner....'
....Poor Mayuyu....
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2 hours later they where at a cofee at a table outside .
'so that's how it is....' Yuki said with an understanding expression. She decided to invite Rena for a drink as she didn't want to be separated from Mayuyu.They talked for a while there, and Yuki had been hugging Mayuyu even when they sat down.It really seemed she didn't want to give Mayuyu....
Rena was trying to think of something to save Mayuyu from Yuki's death grip.She got a little information about Yuki as they have been talking for a while and become 'friends' ,if they could be called that......
And poor Mayuyu was having problems with breathing ........
'what can I do now? I'm.....quite happy to see Yuki but she is already Sae's so I have no posession over her......besides I started liking Rena too....she makes me remember someone....' Mayu started barking and trying to jump down on the ground from Yuki's posessive hands
'she doesn't even know that Mayuyu is Mayu,the idiot prince......I wanna go home with Rena......now I would have needed someone to take Yuki from here...'
Mayu did it and jumped from Yuki's hands.Yuki sat up surprised and ready to take Mayu back only to see Mayuyu jump in Rena's arms....
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why so short?! :angry: But i must say your update is good and I WANT MORE ! :w00t: I can't wait for Yuki to see Mayu ! Hope you update as soon as possible :thumbup
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Short but cute! :luvluv1:
I can't wait to see what happens next. :shy1:
Please update soon! :hee:
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its short cuz I am trying to learn Latin and write it.......Ill modiffy it a bit....and make it a little longer in some hours.....
sorry~ I hate Latin~and exams~
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Yeah! Rena is the real owner!
Yuki fight back! Dont lose!! LOL
Arigatou yuukimoko-san....!
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I'm... I'm torn between sympathizing with Mayu and Yuki. :OMG:
Mayu's sad... Yuki too... I can't decide :on cloudeye:
Will Yuki stand against Rena or just let go? ... DON'T LET GO YUKI!!! :OMG:
My support is on MAYUKI!!!!
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FUUU SAE YOU EFFING BASTARD ! :angry1: :scolding: :temper:
Sae = Cause to all that what had happened . :badluck: ( No Offense xD )
Don't worry, Yuki ! Rena is just going with Mayuyu's flow ~ :bigdeal:
Update soon :onioncheer:
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:otomerika: I want more of the story PLEASE!!!
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i'm so saaaaaaaaaaaad! :cry:
poor Yuki and Mayu! :cry:
hope things go well soon! :oops:
please update soon! :thumbsup
Rena find Jurina..Mayu is not for you! :angry:
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Yuki is sad... :fainted:
Mayu is sad... :fainted:
Sae is sad I don't care :bored:
I'm sad :fainted:
noooooooooooooooooooo :stoned:
Mayu starts to like Rena :OMG: :shock:
no no it can't be :frustrated:
Yukiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii don't give up :gyaaah:
Mayu ignored Yuki and she sit on Rena's lap :on cloudeye:
Mayu is already she give up :fever:
Yukiiiiii :on speedy:
update soon :pleeease:
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Poor Yuki, to see Mayuyu with the other girl. And more important, she starts liking Rena!!!! :fainted:
Where are u Jurina!!!? Go and take ur girl back before Mayu stoles her heart!! :frustrated:
Update pls pls, i can't wait to see what'd going on?? Thank you:gyaaah:
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Mayuuuu give yuki a chance to explain!
Jurina! Oh god where is she in this situation??
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Mayu did it and jumped from Yuki's hands.Yuki sat up surprised and ready to take Mayu back only to see Mayuyu jump in Rena's arms....
'........' Yuki was speakeless, she was looking shocked at Mayu how was trying to enter Rena's shirt. Rena could do nothing but blush and hug Mayu feeling Yuki's glare on her.
'i-I think Mayu wants to go home.....it was nice meeting you Yuki-san.' Rena sits up and bows.
'y-yes. Well talk more on the phone then......it was,.,.....nice to meet you too.' Yuki sits up too ,bows and watches Rena's back as she walks home with Mayu.A single tear runing down her cheek, she closed her eyes and ran home.
*at Rena's house*
'mou Mayuyu, you made Yuki-san sad......' Rena put Mayuyu down and walked in the kitchen to make dinner.
half an hour later dinner was ready.
'Lets eat Mayuyu' Rena called after Mayuyu how was watching tv on the sofa
Mayu moved to the kitchen but didn-6t jump on the table and waited
'eh? something wrong?' Rena asked as she took Mayu up close to her face
Mayu took advange of the position and kissed Rena nose to nose, her body transforming , she ended up kissing her lips to lips .
Rena was blushing madly after they breke the kiss, Mayu put some clothes on her and sat at the table with a blank face.
The dinner was awkward,a least for Rena who was still blushing .Mayu seemed to not mind the kiss, but no one could know what was on her mind....well lets take a look?
'I can't believe that Yuki still wants me to stay with her when she is Sae's now! If I ever see that Sae again I'm going to send her in the time of rocks!.....It was good Rena was there.......her lips are warm~ wait! don't think like that! I love Yuki right? but the kiss was so sweet....it was almost more good than Yuki's.....but they both didn't kiss me back...'
So something like that was in Mayu's mind.....its hard to have emotions, isn't it?
Rena washed the dishes and after prepared to go to bed ,Mayu sat still watching tv. When they both where ready for bed, Mayu sleeping in the guest room and Rena in her room.
'Good night Mayu..' Rena said with a light blush and a little smile
Mayu looked balnkly at her and when Rena turned her back to go to bed she pulled her shirt with a hand like a little kid.Rena turned to her again not knowing what happened.
'yes?'
'.....can I sleep with you tonight?' Mayu asked but no emotion was seen on her face.
Rena looked at her surprised for a while ,after she took the hand on her shirt and held hands with Mayu 'sure!'
They entered the room and sat on the bed.Rena lifted the covers and entered waiting for Mayu to enter too.Mayu turned and looked at Rena,the stare making Rena blush.
Seeing that Mayu wasn't going to move she raised her hands for a hug. Mayu smiled and entered the covers and in Rena's warm embrace. She put her head on Rena's chest and wrapped her hands around her body, Rena did the same , her face a deep red.
They stayed like that in a comfortable silence until Mayu spoke.
'nee, Rena?'
'yes?'
'I can't sleep.Tell me a story?'
Rena smiled at the child like plead.
'yes, lets me see.....'
'Long long ago....or maybe long time in the future, no one knows when, there was a girl.A girl who never know her parents ,she was an experiment created for tests ,a rat. At the age of 20 she fell in love, with a criminal. A criminal hat killed many, but love is hopeless.She loved him but he didn't love her, he just used her...'
'what was their names?' Mayu intrerupted curious
'their names? the girl was named Maeda Atsuko, she was beautiful but hated. They named her a witch for being atracted to evil, a criminal named Takahashi. He tortured her, but she still loved him. He left her pregnant. He was acused for another murder and sent to jail.
At 3 months after he left her, an accident happened. She was found in a room with another woman, Airin she was named, how was shouting 'My children aren't anymore!' . She was the only one in the room that they believed that she could kill. They send her to jail too, chained to a chair in a dark room........she never killed the children.....the bloody woman killed them,Airin killed her own children but no one know that....
There she meet someone how resembled him,the one she loved. Takamina, he was a scientist searching for a lab experiment.
She wanted to escape from there.
The scientist wanted a lab experiment.
Now ,the interest of two people overlapped.'
Rena stoped and looked at Mayu to see if she was asleep.Mayu had her eyes clossed so she thought to stop, but Mayu opened her eyes when she heard Rena stop.
'why did you stop?' She asked looking up
'a-ah I thought you where aspleep..' Rena blushed at the close distance between their faces.
'I won't fall asleep, its interesting.I close my eyes so I could imagine, so please don't stop .' Mayu said and buried her face in Rena's breats.(how jealous could Yukirin be now~ but she is not here so lets continue....)
'yes' Rena relaxed again but the blush remained there.
'Atsuko ran from the prison with the help of the scientist .She ran on cold stones and ground, took of her prison clothes and headed to her destination :the Laboratory.
She give birth to beautiful twins, that where put as experiments.They where test subjects without a father.....
Then she started to remember.....she was like that too.She never meet her parents, she was a test subject too.
The chilren in the tubes and she ,where the same.
She believed it was selfishness but she didn't allow these children to become their toys.Escaping from that life, where she could never obtain love, she ran.She wanted that at least the children to have love, she ran in the woods.
With the babies she loved close to her chest she ran in the night, she ,the escaper.
She made a life in the neighbouring country,living hidden from the eyes of people.She never left her children to be seen.
On a night ,they went for a walk ,she and the children under the moonlit.They went to the forest Eldoh ,their favorite place.It was supposed to be a plesant walk, when she took her eyes off the children for a moment ----
'My children aren't anywhere anymore' "
Rena stoped talking again and looked at Mayu, this time she really seemed asleep.
She patted her head and closed her eyes too with a smile.
It was a sad story the one she had told, but it wasn't all.
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On another part of the city a girl was crying herself to sleep.
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'good morning Rena' Mayu said to Rena as she entered the kitchen still in her pajama
'good morning Mayu~' Rena said happy as she put their breakfast on the table
they both sat down and eat in a comfortable silence .
'nee Mayu?' Rena broke the silence
'yes?' Mayu looked at Rena curious
'when will you meet Yuki and solve the problem? she is sure sufering....at least meet her to see if its true what had happened that time...' Rena give Mayu a sad look
'.....I don't want to talk to her....' Mayu had the same blank face as she didn't want to disscut about it
Rena looked pleading at Mayu, she really know that Yuki was suffering....you could imagine it and it could hurt you too..
'then do it for me?' Rena smiled a little 'do it for me plese?just go and talk to her if you don't want to forgive her...'
Mayu looked back at her '....'
Rena began to make puppy eyes with fake tears...' for me?'
''....fine..' Mayu lets out a sigh and sat from the chair
Rena smiled .
'but you'll have to tell me the rest of the story.'
'eh?I thought you where listening?' Rena smiled inoccently
'I was listening, I fell asleep after you finished but I don't believe that was all the story.' Mayu give a smile too
'well you are right~ '
Mayu walked to her and kissed Rena on the cheek
'e-eh?! what was that for?' Rena was blushing
'thanks for telling me an interesting story, for the delicious breakfast and for being here,with me' Mayu smiled charmingly making Rena blush more .Her heart was beating faster and faster.....
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200 years later
'ah ah~ such a boring morning~' A girl said as she walked in The Handbeat Cloktower
Suddenly she stoped and looked outside from a window , it was so paceful.
'it feels like I'm missing something important.....' She looked up trying to see the door at the end of the stairs but it was impposible .
'maybe 'she' is finally going to make a move?' she give a confused look
'nah! 'she' won't do anything until something interesting appears....' 'that girl' whispered to herself as she continued walking the stairs....
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and another update.......if only I could do them longer.....Im sorry!.......now going back to read something ....or do my latin homeworks....
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Ohoho~ Mayuyu has to go to Yukirin ! :tantrum:
Mayuyu apologizee !! Lol :stoned:
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Mayu is getting more and more close to Rena :stoned:
Mayu you have to solve your problem with Yuki you have to make up you two :pleeease:
Yukiiiiiiiiiiiiiii :gyaaah:
200 years later
'ah ah~ such a boring morning~' A girl said as she walked in The Handbeat Cloktower
Suddenly she stoped and looked outside from a window , it was so paceful.
'it feels like Im missing something important.....' She looked up trying to see the door at the end of the stairs but it was impposible .
'maybe 'she' is finally going to make a move?' she give a confused look
'nah! 'she' wont do anything until something interesting appears....' 'that girl' wisphered to herself as she continued walking the stairs....
who is this girl ? and she talks about who ? :dunno:
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Yuki's heartbroken... Mayu's torn between Yuki and Rena... Rena's being Rena.. well Rena's kind.
Mayu just go to Yuki and solve the problem!!!
And we have another mystery figure. :frustrated:
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yes.....I love comments....so Ill comment my own fic?
In the next chapter I hope too that Yuki will meet Mayu, but I dont know if they will be together.....
And 'that girl' isnt new~ she had been mentioned in the BONUS before......Im really sllow at writing....but Im trying to make it interesting so people will read it to find interesting things themseves.......
Repeat, 'that girl' had been mentioned it the BONUS. Read the bonus and youll find it~
thanks for the comments~
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the bonus you said mmm :hehehe:
it's the twin? :dunno:
the mother ? :dunno:
no no no :depressed:
aghhhhh I donnu I can't understand :frustrated:
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I too want to know what happens when Mayu sees Yuki. :ding:
But I also want to know if Mayu sees Sae. Will they fight? :frustrated:
Bonus? What bonus? I confused. :dunno:
All well I'll just wait to see what happens next. :hee:
Please update soon! :farofflook:
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I'm confusing cuz of the last part now -______-
And yes, you should Mayu!! Go and meet so Yuki, solve u guys' problem >:|
She wasn't with Sae anymore, don't leave Yuki alone, poor her TT_TT
Update soon yuukimoko-san, thank you XD
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MaYuki the best pair, but honestly... I like Rena-Mayu in this fic
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And 'that girl' isnt new~ she had been mentioned in the BONUS before......Im really sllow at writing....but Im trying to make it interesting so people will read it to find interesting things themseves.......
Repeat, 'that girl' had been mentioned it the BONUS. Read the bonus and youll find it~
The twin? :dunno:
because of this...
*------ POV*
The previous master, personification of greed,,mother, dissapearing long ago.But my own sin will someday distroy me, I wonder why didnt I notice it sooner?
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Mayu is falling for Rena! :cry:
hope things get back to their order :(
Rena is too good! :wub:
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Even if the problem solve...
I think its diffucult for mayu to comeback to yuki,now that she has a little crush for rena
But a last maybe she chose to still with rena...(Jurina where are you!?)
But i will love it if mayu at least spend one night in yuki home
(Well to make yuki calm...they must doing stuff...hahaha LOL)
Yuukimoko-san Fighting! This story is lovely and warm
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Hum... Rena's story is really interesting. I wonder if it's a true story.
But I'm glad Yuki didn't become Sae's ^^
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Im so excited to know if what will happen to Mayuyu and Yuki!! :cow:
Update!! Update!! XD
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Mo-chan :
Yes the BONUS, but you misunderstand that....Its neither the twin or the mother. In the BONUS the twin was speaking .And the mother was named the master of the greed so something........ the girl was named just 'the girl'.
Miyumi:
......the better question is....what happens when Yuki sees Mayu? I think that if Mayu would meet Sae ,Sae will die surely...
The BONUS was this chapter http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33285.msg1077185#msg1077185 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33285.msg1077185#msg1077185) ----I named it bonus because it is not a chapter and tells about someone else, how is in the future.
Playgirlz:
....well everyone is confused of the last part but I put it as you have been all asking something......but no one remembers what so dont ask~ Ill try to update so---- wait....I ll try update a little now? maybe~ maybe NOT~ cuz Im lazy, bored, I dont have imagination right now......sorry~! try search for the chapter lower see if its anything there?
Kiri-el :
Im happy that you like Mayuki too! they are the best! but yes I started liking RenaxMayu here too.....maybe ill make it MayuxRena ? ........no....I dont think so......or maybe? too many questions too little time!
Kiruchi:
NO! Its not the twin. the right quote was :
'That girl' with the pretension of the leading role wait at the entrace of tthic clock tower.Selfishly wanting the attention of someone that isnt hers,the loneliness off losing her other half showing just a little on her face.
Cmze:
Yes yes! Rena is good! she is kind,gentle and understanding and because of that I try to give her some love.Cuz later she will have a tragic end......
Kurogumi:
Yes yes~ its compricated ,I get frustreited! Ill make you wish come true! Mayu will be Yukis again for one night!....but lovely and warm? ....I thought it'll be tragic and crazy.....anyway! Im glad you like my fic!!
Kahem:
The story to be true? haha~ yes it will be! in the future~.......kinda strange arent I? glad you like my story~
Cessy10:
Glad you like my story! Ill try to update soon......
Chapter:__________(triler for the real chapter~)
'Mayu?' Yuki ran over to Mayu with tears on her cheeks ,she was very happy that Mayu come back at least.
'I cant stay with you Yuki....'
'please.....take me....I want to be yours again.'
'D-dindnt you and Yuki-san made up...?'
'its complicated.....but for now ....'
'you are really kind Rena.....too kind..'
'w-what do you mean?'
'If I where someone else ,until now you wouldnt be a virgin anymore.....'
'you can have me if you want.....'
'....lets go on a date,Rena.'
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yeah! just a tryler! so stay tuned for the real chapter.....but I think you alredy know whats going to happen ......
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this triler made me dizzy :dizzy:
yuukimoko-chan you want to kill me or what :fainted: :badluck:
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Yuukimoko-san...
Rena will have tragic end? Noooo! Dont do that to my oshimen! Pleaseee! I beg you...(T^T)
Rena is too kind to have tragic end...she need some love,not some but more! Maybe with jurina hehehe LOL
This fic geting more and more interesting...yay!
Thank for the update yuukimoko-san LOL!
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Don't do anything to Rena! :catglare:
make her happy..bring Jurina! :cow:
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Uh-oh....
I'm sensing drama on the next update.
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Chapter:______(I forgot for a while to name them......)
'......' Mayu looked aoutside at the clear sky, It was a beautiful day.No rain was going to appear and the world was so paceful......It was truly beautiful, but Mayu was looking at the sky with so much hate.Her gaze wanted to distroy that perfect sky.
'Mayu? you promised me you are going to talk to Yuki-san....'Rena said shyly as she saw the hate with which Mayu was looking.She thought for a second that that hate would be directed to her, but when Mayu turned her to her,the hate disappeared, being replaced with longing and love.These emotions making Rena blush and look another way.
'yes.....tonight, I'll go meet her tonight.' Mayu whispered as she steped closer to Rena and hugged her. Rena was a bit surprised at first but after smiled and hugged her back.
'then, lets go play something? today I don't have school so we can do whatever you want!' Rena smiled at Mayu as they parted.
'whatever I want?' Mayu asked looking in Rena's eyes
'yes!' Rena nodded
'then.......lets play video games, then watch a movie and eat chocolate!' Mayu smiled like a little kid who got his favorite candy.
Rena giggled and nodded.It seemed this day will be paceful....
-7 hours later-
'....' Mayu looked with a smile at Rena how was asleep on her lap.Rena really did everything Mayu wanted, they played and eat everything she wanted.And at an end Rena fell asleep on Mayu's lap, too tired to go to bed. Mayu was satisfied by this day, she really had fun.But there where problems too.....she was in love with two, what can she do?
Mayu carried Rena in bridal style to her bed, and looked at her for a while,caresing her cheeks.
It was time to go, as she promised Rena that she'll go visit Yuki, she wrote a note so Rena won't be worryed and left.
'then, I'll be going.....'
-at Yuki's house-
'..it seems she isn't home' Mayu whispered as she entered in the house with the key she found in the secret place.She looked around the house, finding it quite dirty
'Yuki didn't clean the house...'
The place looked like she remembered it from 2 weeks ago, but the dishes weren't put at their places, and there where clothes around.
Mayu seeing that she will have to wait for some time, started cleaning a little, after looking at tv.
The door opened, and revealed a girl with black hair and eyes.She was beautiful, but the circles around her eyes could tell anyone that she hadn't slept for some time.Everyone would wonder, what made such a beautiful girl so sad that she can't sleep? But no one know that it was the sudden dispparition of the one that her heart hold most dear and her frendly dog. But as they don't know, so does she, because the two where the same .
Yuki entered the house with tears alredy forming in her eyes at the silence in the house.But suddenly she heard the tv , thinking that it was a thief she didn't care anymore.Everyone left her so why would she care about herself?
She entered the kitchen and saw everything clean......maybe the thief liked cleaning?
Entering in the room with the tv she saw on the sofa a girl with a blank face, shorts and a black shirt,hair in a ponytail, looking at tv.
The tears started falling.
'Mayu?' Yuki ran over to Mayu with tears on her cheeks ,she was very happy that Mayu come back at least.
She jumped and hugged Mayu very tightly, crying her name over and over again.Mayu just pat Yuki's head not knowing what to say.
Ten minutes later Yuki stoped crying and just embraced Mayu, putting her face on her neck and inhaling her scent.Mayu started relaxing too, feeling the warmth of the 2d person she loves.....
'Mayu......why did you left me?' Yuki asked slowly as she opened her eyes, not moving from her spot
'.....'
'why...? When you saw me and Sae kis-......in the room together, nothing happened.I talked to Sae and she understand......she didn't take me, I only want you Mayu...' Yuki moved a little so she could look in Mayu's eyes after she planted a soft kiss on her cheek.
'you......didn't do anything?' Mayu asked a little shocked
'no, we didn't.I only love Sae like a sister. But I lo--' Yuki was stoped by a hand on her mouth.Mayu was looking at her with sad eyes,like a broken promise the words didn't left Yuki's mouth.
'don't say these words please......if you ever say them, I don't know if I can say them back anymore......' Mayu smiled a broken smile 'these words will end the fairytale, and I will go back home...'
Yuki eyes where wide, and from them crystal like waters fell.The hand on her mouth moved to wipe the crystal away.
In Mayu's eyes could be read more than one emotion, all confusing her without end.She hugged Yuki close .
'Lets eat something ,ne? stop crying ,there is nothing to cry about.' Mayu smiled and sat up taking Yuki with her.
They eat in silence, neither knowing exactly what to say.Mayu not wanting to say something that could hurt Yuki again, and Yuki not knowing what to say so Mayu will stay with her.But both know that they should talk about this now, or other things could intereference again.
'what do you want to do now Yuki?' Mayu asked after they cleaned the dishes and the table.
'I just want to hug you......we need to talk this out too...' Yuki wisphered as she took Mayu's hand with both hands and hold it close.
'then, lets go to you room?' Mayu give a little smile as she pulled her captive hand to stroke Yuki's cheek, Yuki blushed and leaned into the soft touch.
-In Yuki's room-
they both sat on the bed, beside each other. Holding hands as Yuki thought if she lets go for a second Mayu will disappear.
'I.....only kissed to see if I felt the same.But it wasn't like that......Sae is avoiding me sometimes when she remembers.I hope she will fall again for someone else.' Yuki whispered as she looked down at their conected hands, the warm feeling was invading her.
'...I think I should meet her, and apologize maybe.For thinking bad about her.' Mayu looked at the floor. 'love is an imperfect and hurtfull feeling, the most hurtfull feeling.It always creates pain.'
'did you.......obtain a heart?' Yuki asked looking aat Mayu with warm eyes
Mayu looked back at her 'yes....you give me a heart.' Mayu smiled warmly 'Thank you, Yuki!'
Yuki blushed and didn't say anythink for 2 minutes, enjoyng the heartwarming and paceful moment between them.
'what.....what did you do after you ran ..?' she asked carefuly
'I continued to run.I ran until I entered the park I first saw you, there I broke down.I obtained a heart and I understand that forcing you was a bad think.I'm sorry...'
'No its okay. that was one of the thinks that made me fall...' Yuki smiled a little remembering the moments Mayu would kiss her forcefuly and leave marks on her.She missed these times ...
'....yes......after that I meet her...' Mayu said and looked back at the floor
Yukis head shot up in surprise that could be read on her face 'h-her?!'
'yes.....her.She didn't know who I was or why I was crying, but she offered me a shoulder to cry on, and lets me stay with her....' Mayu smiled a little, making Yuki feel jealousy with rage.
'you want another now..? you will leave me alone again?' The tears where once again forming. But her eyes where so tired that they could no longer cry so the crystals disappeared leaving Yuki's eyes red.
Mayu looked at Yuki with soft eyes 'I...don't know. For now I think its safer to just stay between, I'll come stay with you too.But I can't leave her too, she is the same as you, lonely.'
Mayu lifted Yuki's chin with her free hand to look in her eyes 'lets me by selfish for a while longer please..?' she closed the distance between them and kissed Yuki softly .
Yuki kissed her back for the first time, feeling a fire in her heart lit up at the contact.The burning and hot kiss was full of love.
Mayu broke the kiss 'lets go to bed for now.You really need some sleep,your beautiful eyes are losing their sparks.' Mayu smiled.
Yuki hit Mayu's arm playfuly and then giggled.
They got in bed, but as soon as Mayu was down Yuki sat on her stomach.She leaned down and kissed her more passionately, her hands on Mayu's cheeks.One of them started moving down on her body caresing her side and arm.
She broke the kiss in need of air
'please.....take me.....I want to be yours again! ' Yuki shoted as she caressed Mayu's cheeks again.
Mayu looked in her eyes, then kissed her forehead 'sleep.....sleep for now.Its the best medicine....' she put Yuki's head on her heart, the warm feeling and calming sound made Yuki sleep.....
-the next day-
'mmmhh~' Yuki wake up with a start, this was the first time in two weeks to sleep well.The dream she had felt so real....she sat up and started walking to the kitchen.Suddenly she felt a sweet fragrance coming from her destination. 'someone entered in the house?!' she exclamed shocked.
Entering silently beside the door to see the source of the smell she felt a sudden energy and happiness when she saw Mayu preparing breakfast.
'M-Mayu!' Yuki shouted as she hugged Mayu from behind.
'hey! be careful, I don't want to burn myself!' Mayu said with a little blush.
'I am so happy! I thought it was a dream!' Yuki smiled happy and took Mayu's scent in.
'I thought I'll spend the day with you.....but if you don't want to,then I'm going after breakfast' Mayu said with a blank face void of emotions
'noooo! I want to spend the day with you too! please stay!' Yuki said playfuly as she kissed Mayu's neck and cheek, making Mayu blush a little.
'-sigh- fine.....I suposse I'll stay for the day.' Mayu said as she entered the play
'yayyy!'
-the next day-
Mayu wake early that day too, as she made breakfast for Yuki and left a note beside.It was time to go back to Rena,she started to miss her even if she was with Yuki.
'to love two.....this is painful! '
She kissed Yuki on the lips one last time before leaving.
_at Rena's house_
Rena had prepared breakfast, but too much as she made of habit of making for two.She needed to leave that habit,as Mayu wasn't back and probably won't come back anymore.
'After all she has Yuki-san......and I ,no one.' She whispered as she tried not to cry.
\knock knock\
the sound of the door being opened and closed wake her up.She lifted her head to see the one who entered, only to remain wide eyes at the sight of Mayu.But Mayu wasn't just Mayu, it was a Mayu with a little blush on her cheeks, a face that was forced to look indifferent and a bouquet of roses in one hand.
'g-good morning Rena...' Mayu said as she looked another way a little embrassed
Rena just continued to stand there, wide eyes and mouth open looking at her.
'R-Re---'
Rena jumped on her ,tears of joy running down her cheeks with a blush and a smile.
'Mayu! Mayu Mayu Mayu!' Rena shouted her name without stoping and huggind her close
Mayu sighed and smiled 'yes, thats my name ,beautiful~'
5 minutes later they where in the same position on the floor with Rena on top.Rena had stoped crying but she just didn't want to lets go.
'Nee, Rena? Not that I dislike hugging you but I'm kinda hungry and the roses need water...' Mayu said ,suddenly a smile formed 'but if you want to continue then lets move to bed, and I am on top~' she continued sensualy
Rena blushed and jumped away embrassed
'y-yes I'll put the roses in a vase.You can go sat at the table,I just made the breakfast.'
They ate in silence until Rena tried asking what happened
'we had a talk.Now she is better.' was all Mayu said.
After breakfast they sat on the sofa watching tv next to each other
'I'm happy that you come back to see me,Mayu.I missed you...' Rena whispered with a smile not looking at Mayu
Mayu looked at her with a blank face, the words becoming a deja-vu in her mind.Suddenly she pushed Rena down against the sofa and sat on top.Deja-vu.
Mayu kissed her,a passionate kiss ,Rena kissing her back.
After they broke the kiss Mayu rested her forehead on Rena's.
'D-didn't you and Yuki-san made up...?'
'its complicated.....but for now ....I want another kiss'
So they kissed again,the air becoming hot ,Mayu started moving her hands down to Rena's breast and massaged them slowly.
'mhmph' Rena left out a soft moan
Mayu looked in her eyes
'you are really kind Rena.....too kind..'
'w-what do you mean?'
'If I where someone else ,until now you wouldn't be a virgin anymore.....'
Mayu took her hands back and started sitting back, but a hand stoped her and looked down
'you can have me if you want..' Rena said as she kissed Mayu once again
Mayu froze as a memory made its way on her mind
*Mayu' s POV*
W-Whats this? Where I am?
I am in a room....where?
There is a person behind me.But I can't move....I can't control my body.
I am lookind down at a painting .....there is a girl with beautiful dark hair.....I look closer.R-Rena?! Rena is in the paint....she is so beautiful
'she is beautiful! You dreamed her didn't you Mayu? and then Painted her! you are talented at this too! hmmm~ you know, I had a dream too' I heard the person behind me talk.Its a warm and sweet voice that makes me melancholic...
'I dreamed that you will marry this person! and I will be there watching you too when you make the vow~ it was a beautiful wedding!'
I say something but I can't heard anymore, neither myself or the other voice.....
*End POV*
Rena broke the kiss and hugged Mayu close.
Mayu wake from the memory and stroked her head.
'nee, Rena?'
'hmm?'
'....lets go on a date,Rena.'
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And......Stop! thats all~ questions? critics? review? Yes! Yes please~
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What a wonderful chapter! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Mayu you player! Just pick one and stay with them! :frustrated:
I don't want you breaking Rena or Yukirin's heart so just pick one! :fainted:
Ahh this was a really great chapter! :farofflook:
Update soon! :nya:
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saving the spot!!!
Because of Yuukimoko-san... I fell in love with Rena X Mayu!
And now... a new pairing has been born!!!
Thank you for the awesome chapter (as well as the others you have just updated!) :mon beam:
Yuukimoko-san... :hee: Do you know how much I jumped?
I was like... :dizzy: Rena and Mayu?
:ding: What's this? A new pairing?
P-pairing...? :dunno:
:luvluv2: Pairing!
:shy2: Mayu kissed Rena!
:luvluv1: Get married!
GET MARRIED!!!
Thank you so much for this!
Thank you for making me love Mayuki even more!!! :kneelbow:
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I don't what to say my felling is this now
:frustrated: :stoned: :shock: :OMG: :gyaaah: :fainted: :pleeease: :on speedy: :on cloudeye: :on hobo: :prayers:
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Noooooooo !!!! Mayu is such a player !
WEDDING ?! PAINTING ?! DREAM ?! DATE ?!?!
So Mayu will end up with Rena, you say...
What'll happen to Yuki ? :'<
Poor Yuki, Bad Mayu !
My heart is breaking ..!
Update more fast !! YAY
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Nooooo! Don't leave Yuki!!!
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You're right yuukimoko-chan,
Right now i feel this story is kind of tragic and crazy...
Tragic...
Crazy...yes! Crazy! How could you mayu! Two timer! And..and..aah its complicated
Rena..Yuki..be strong! LOL
And mayu its ok you can have two wife...you're a prince...
Thank for the update
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Thank you for this chapter, I like this fic :)
I'm confused... Rena is my oshimen, but I love MaYuki... Anything can happen, I am glad, but meantime, I'm sad... So I'm really confused... but it's good, because this fic is very interesting
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Thank you everyone for the comments! I love them all and hope Ill get more like these in the future.
I wanted to tell you all that in the next 1-2 days I wont write another chapter,or that the probability of me posting another chapter is very low. :dozing: :depressed:
The reason being my'mistakes' in the chapters that I wrote for this fic until now.I want to reread all the chapters and correct as many mistakes as I can! :bingo: :barf:
I also want to do a content at the first chapter, where to put all chapter, and also name the chapters that I didnt name.Oh, and this was the finalle for the first 'volume' of my fic.I decided that Ill continue like this, in my own pace cuz if I tryed doing it faster then it would end bad.....like 'Imitation Series' witch I put a strange ending...... But if you all say that I should just end it then ill do it... :dunno: :hee: :shifty:
Tell me with a comment please! Is it good with my own pace or should I just end it? I feel like Im writing a book really~ :temper: :on cigar:
Its interesting or not? really now,without lies please!
So with that, I repeat. For the next 1-2 days I will not post another chapter. Ok?Ok.
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aaaahhhhhh!!! Don't stop yet! Just writing at your own pace is fine. We wanna read more! Poor Mayu, she's nice enough that she doesn't want to hurt anyone. But ends up hurting herself cause she can't choose. Someone has to step in and steal one of them away!
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awww i know it is a Mayuki fanfic but i dont want such a cute Rena to have a broken heart :( what will. Mayu do now :((
pls update soon
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like you said it's a Mayuki's fic why don't you add someone for Rena I donnu Jurina or Airin I really can't see Rena or Yuki suffer :badluck:
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Pffffft.... Mayu's either confuse or torn. (>o<)
Mayuuuuu!!! Choose 1!!! ONE only!!! *cough*Yuki*cough*
So what if Rena's the one in that painting. Yuki deserve a date too. :omg:
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oh please, don't let mayu leave rena :cry:
although i love mayuki but this is the first time i want mayu go with rena :?
Rena is a shy and fragile girl, please don't break her heart mayuyu :(
maybe, yuki could go with sae :o
Ah, this's only my opinion... so go ahead :nervous
what will mayuyu do?
i wait for your update :heart:
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Okay. Honest ? No Lies ? Good. :on GJ:
Well, I think you're updating normally. Not too slow, not too fast. Just a moderate pace would do. :hee:
Anyway, Get Jurina in there ! I don't want my poor Yukirin to get hurt ! :tantrum:
Lol y'know, you're the writer and we can't do anything about it. So, do what you want with the fic ! :hee:
I just want a happy ending for everyone! That's all I ask for~ And puuhleaaasee dun stop writing this fic ! :pleeease:
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Chapter:_____________
*Mayu's POV*
Can I love both? would they lets me love both of them? I can marry both.But if they hate each other?
Being in love is pain.I......I really want to erase all these emotions again.They both would hate me if I can't chose.But I can't. I was destined to fall in love with Rena, she was the one I should have meet in the park that time. But I accidentaly fell in love with Yuki......something changed, someone changed the destiny.It changed by making Yuki come that time and stop Rena from coming.I am aware of that now.
Someone wanted this to happen.They did it so that I would meet Yuki first.But why? I don't know why......I was injected with a virus like love from Yuki.I don't know which love is the right one, Rena or Yuki?
Maybe the memory from that time was an illusion to make me love Rena......or the painting was with Yuki and I didn't see it......There are so many posibilities.There are so many 'what if' ! Right now I can't chose....but this is hurting me too, not just them.I am hurting too.....don't they think about me ....maybe....if one of them would die,everything would end.If only one of them would die!
*The date day*
'then, lets go Rena' Mayu smiled as she extended her hand for Rena to take.Rena blushed and took the hand, the warmth melting her inside.
They left early ,as the day was a beautiful one again.The sun was shining on the clear sky.The birds where singing.Only Mayu was looking with hate at the burning sun.
She and Rena wanted to go to an amusament park,and so they did.They played all the games ,Mayu winning some prizes and giving them to Rena who was very happy accepting them.Their date couldn't go wrong at all.
Or so you could say.....in the shadows of a tree a dark figure was watching their every move.
'Damn! this place is really amusing ~ Maybe I can make 'her' come with me next time on a date~! mou~ I need to stop thinking like that now! I'm on a mission! Mission! and if I do it good then 'she' will have dinner with me~' the dark figure was whispering to herself as she blushed thinking about the one she loves....
_200 years in the future-what really happend_
'what do you need me for?' 'that girl' asked as she looked at her friend how was reading a book 'did you finally realize that you love me? '
'....I did not call you here to talk about your obssesions Centre.I called you because I need you to do something for me.' The reading girl said without looking at her
'hmmmm! prephas you need a kiss?' The girl named Centre said again 'or want me to beat someone?'
'.....I need you to scare my sister a little.She have been thinking bad for some time. Like 'what if one of them dies?' so I decided that she should be scared a little.' the girl smiled 'we need both princesess so we could do something...'
'do something? you mean your plan or the capricious sorceress plan?' Centre asked annoyed
'Don't call her that. She is someone I hold dear.....my dear angel...' the girl whispered back with dreamy eyes thinking about the one she truly wants.
Centre got mad, if only she could kill her! then 'she' would be only hers.
'fine! I'll do the mission, but you will have dinner with me after. I'm only going to scare her.' She said as she entered the circle to transport back in time.
_end flashback-flash forward_
'damn that witch! I'll kill her! but for now I need to play a little~' Centre jumped out of the tree and folowed them.
'...how about we play 'Dead line circus' ne? I'll give you a true illusion!' she entered the circus after them and prepared for the show.
Mayu and Rena entered the circus holding hands.They both where enjoying each others company.It was a really paceful and sweet date.They sat down in the first round, the closer to the scene and waited until the start.People started coming and sitting around, it seemed the show was popular.
'nee, Mayu.Thank you for the date...' Rena wisphered blushing
'I'm happy that you like it, but its not over yet so don't thank me.' Mayu smiled and tightyed a little the grip on Rena's hand.
'the show will start! please sat at your places!' a voice was heard and the lights whent out.
'Welcome to dead line circus!' a single light appeared on a girl how was sitting in the centre of the stage.She was wearing a mask how covered half of her face,her eyes hard seen under it.She was wearing a amasing clown costume that seemed more like a party set. In one hand a flower and in the other cards.
'I will be the first one to amuse you, I am the centre of this party.You can call me Centre! ' the girl smiled and droped the cards on the ground. 'ah, oppss! ' she said as she leaned to take them back, the moment she was back up a sound was heard and all voice in the room,the children that cried or where happy, every sound disappeared.
Mayu and Rena felt like the single ones in the room, the girl looking only at them smiling.It was like the others disappeared.
By mere chage , while paying with fire, during the show-time, the clown that just fooled around, she burned it. With a simple move the fire that Centre was playing with at the end of a ball, ended on the clown and burn him. They looked shocked at the scene but Centre just giggled and said it will be fine,that the clown just disappeared.
She give a fake smile saying that she is Guiltly.
'today will be a succes, we're always forced like this' another voice echoed in the circus and on the stage another girl appeared.
'My name is Kumi' she smiled and blowed a kiss to Mayu
'if I cut a cross into the emptiness ' another girl appeared
'come ,are you ready?' and she disappeared
'I am Kanon' her voice said and the light showed her on top of a pole on a string.It was very high almost at the ceiling of the circus.
'this is the weeks end! Its world's end!' Centre shouted from the stage
'isn't it about time God slept soundly as well? no prayers will reach him now....'
A song started playing in the circus, the singers being the three girls that controled the night.
'Lost in the broken night,
your anxious face is lovely as well '
A cube appeared in Rena's lap and when she touched it .it opened , a spider come out scaring her
'kyyaaa!' she screamed as she pushed the cube on the ground only to disappear when it touched that ground.
'Why don't you forget everything
and just play with us?'
The stage become strange again.Just when they blinked, their chairs where on the stage .An illusion fantasy ,they where closer to the strange singers that appeared and disappeared .Mayu hold Rena's hand tightly, she had a strange emotion that if they sat up something bad will happen so she just stay still,trying to calm her nerves and calm Rena too.
'If you'd like, we can get more crazy,
so come here and join us
lets make merry ,'til we burn out'
Centre appeared in front of them and extended her arm for Mayu to take,as the other two played with fire.Mayu just ignored her not moving at all.
'she is not normal....she surely in not from here,or this time...'were her only thoughts as she watched Centre take steps back seeing her mad expression.
The girl named Kumi sat on a ball while Kanon played with cards. Centre smiled and sat in the 'centre'.
'Balancing on a ball is really unstable,
just like your heart'
Kumi sang as she looked at Rena, they where trying to destry their minds and Mayu was not pleased at all.
'As you fall, your vision spins
alive 'till you land'
Kanon sang from a swing as she suddenly jumped and disappeared.
It was hard to breathe as the air was cold.But the flames that played in the scene where so warm and inviting.It was a mind game that Mayu wasn't going to lose.She know that if she accepted the warm hand that layed with the fire,she will get killed.These where illusions that played with the mind.
'Everyone was eaten away by the night, its game over! Recognize your losse. Boys end-Girls end!'
A box appeared again in front of them, the one that had it was Centre who asked
'If I open the box,
would a cute bunny jump out?'
She opened the box and from inside birds and spiders ran out.
'Are you kidding? only despair lies inside!' and the box disappeared.
Rena started crying, Mayu could hear her soft sniffs beside her.She wanted to hold her but she would fall into a trap surely.She just hold her hand even tightly that it hurt.
A loud BANG was heard next as the singers continued the next part together
'The pathetic scream of the bullet
cries out as it flies free'
'a bullet?! they are crazy! they have a gun!' Mayu thought as she thinked about a way out.She maybe could take her sword out and kill them, but she didnt know what they really want and who they really where.But they where scarying Rena and that was a reason enough to kill them.She felt rage build up as she wanted to sit up but looked down to see that she was chained to the chair.Now she really needed an idea.
'and it hits the clown
it disappeared'
They killed the clown that survived the burn at the start of the show, Rena cried more with fear ,trembling.
Buterflyes appeared on the scene, their beautiful colors making the illusion plesant for a few seconds.The three singers come back with knifes and started toasing them around and playing with them.This was a dangerous play.
Mayu suddenly started being more worryed for Rena when she saw one of them look at her for a second.They had a plan, and Rena was in it.Mayu felt hopeless when she know that she couldn't move.Centre looked at Rena ,and started talking with her
'you,over there,
wouldn't you like to try,
standing on this stage too?'
She extended her hand for Rena to take.Rena shaking looked up in her eyes and saw something, Mayu didn't know what but she saw something that made her want take that hand.She lets go of Mayu's hand and slowly took the offered hand.Centre took her and hugged her ,after dancing around her and taking her to the centre of the stage.
'the clown that was here
turned to ashes.....
er,I mean
he just disappeared, so welcome!' Centre pulled Rena for a kiss ,and she kissed her in front of Mayu.Both Rena and Mayu where shocked.Mayu started trembling and moving around trying to get out of the chains, rage was writen all over her face.
Centre broke the kiss and pushed Rena on another chair in the centre of the stage.
'Lost in the broken night
your anxious face is lovely as well'
Both Kumi and Kanon kissed Rena on the cheeks.
'why dont forget everything
and just play with us?'
Rena passed out from so much , closing her eyes she looked at Mayu for a last time and give a small smile.
Mayu screamed for the first time finding her voice back as she saw Rena pass out
'Reeennnnnnnaaaaaa!!!'
Her voice echoed in the circus, the three singers smiled and continued
'If you'd like, we can get more crazy,
so come, join us
lets make merry, come on! lady!'
Centre smiled widen as in her hand appeared a gun.
'the pathetic scream of the bullet
cries out as it flies free
and as it hit the clown
it disappeared'
Centre pointed the gun at Rena.Mayu continued to scream and tried move to no vain.
'In this pleasant dead line circus,
shall we indulge in a playful dream
sing into this haphazazrd night!'
BANG!
Dispair was all that Mayu felt.
The circus disappeared,the lights lit the room and Mayu found herself found herself surounded by clapping.
She was no longer on the stage and in the chained chair.She was back beside Rena and others.Looking ahead,the show just ended and everyone sat up to get out.Beside her Rena was passed out and there was no Centre,Kumi or Kanon.
Mayu sighed, calmed her trembling hands and lifted Rena and the prizez in her hands and stared walking home.
*Rena's house*
Mayu had arrived home a hour later,tired but not sleepy as she carried Rena all the way.She entered the house and in Rena's room ,placing her on the bed softly.
When she took her hands off Rena wake up at the lose of Mayu's warmth.
'Mayu? what happened?' Rena asked as she sat up slowly and looked around
'you fell asleep at the circus, it was really boring.' Mayu smiled reasuring as she fooled Rena.She didn't want her to remember the hell that had happened.
'really? it sure must have been boring.' Rena smiled too 'and you carried me home? you are really strong Mayu!' Rena stroked Mayu's back as Mayu hugged her realxing.
'want to eat something?I could go prepare dinner if you want.' Rena smiled and kissed Mayu's cheek
'no....Im not hungry.I only want to hug you....' Mayu lets go and entered the covers taking Rena with her
Rena blushed and entered with Mayu,smiling all the way.
'she forgot what happened.Or they made her or because she passed out she forgot'
Mayu then remembered that Centre person that kissed Rena and sat up suddenly and kissed Rena, a passionate and hot kiss.She asked for entrace and obtained it then sucked on her tongue.After a while she broke the kiss feeling Rena was out of air.She sat back down and put her head on Rena's chest.
'Rena....tell me the rest of the story please..' Mayu wisphered and closed her eyes.
'hmmm~ yes .....so where was I ?'Rena smiled and stroked Mayu's hair and back slowly
'So Atsuko lost her children, and found the woman who took them.She started running after her in home to take her kids back.
But at the same time the woman who took them, was Airin, the one who killed her own children.She was searching for food around the forest until she saw two 'apples' and took them.She lived with her husband Ren in that forest for very long time.She took the 'fruits' thinking it was a gift from God and ran with them home.
Running and running she heard a bear, a mother bear and running she pleaded to the bear to leave the 'fruits to her'.
She made it home after a while of running with the bear after her.Inside,her husband was waiting and when she showed him the 'fruits' ,he was shocked.
The 'fruits' where two little twins that cried after their mother.He said to take them back to their mother but she then said
-we cant! its already...-
Outside their house sat the bear in his own blood, but if you really looked at it, you could see Atsuko how died crying after her children.'
Rena stoped and looked at Mayu, she was asleep and the story was yet to finish.
Rena smiled and kissed Mayu's forehed, driffing to sleep too.
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yeah I said I wouldnt write, but I was more lazy to correct mistakes than to write the next chapter.So~ here it is! hope you liked it cuz I didnt really cuz I couldnt express what I was imagining but hope you got the idea.So 'the girl' you all where asking the other chapter was really Centre!
But like always we have also a new character 'the capricious sorcess ' or something...
like it- hate it? tell me please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now I wonder wat Yuki is doing? well probasbly see in the next chapter or not~
leave a review!!!!!!!!!I dont have a mouse so moving around was hard so I didnt put too much colors in this chapter......REVIEW!!!!!
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the apples then the bear reminds me of Miku's song Xd
cant wait for the next chap ~ thank for the update yuukimoko-san
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Can't wait to know what is really happening ^^
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Centre finally appeared.
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one comment?! :O -----ah! now are three!!! Im happy!!! XD
I know it ,it was lame,.......... :smhid
whatever! dont know when Ill post next anyway! :catglare:
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Triler -next chapter
'how is the capricious witch?'
'How are you?'
'me? I am you'
'stay with me for a while dear Yuki.....Ill give you back soon enough to your sweet Mayu.'
'my dear angel, I am so happy to see you again!'
'you are not wort my time'
etc etc etc~ so on! Im bored!!!! leave me some reviews please! or update a story !!! I wanna read something!
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Oh~ I wonder who is it~ hehe
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Ahh great chapter! :luvluv1:
Center's show was scary. :scared:
Rena's story reminds me of a vocaloid song called "Moonlit Bear" or something like that. Either way it was good! :farofflook:
I want to know more about the capricious witch so please update soon! :nya:
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'....I don't care anymore.....I just want to be there with her everyday.Even if it means sharing her with someone else.As long as I know she loves me too, its fine with me.......or maybe I could kill the other one....'
_200 years in the future_
'tsk! this girl thinks bad too.I must do something about her too....why does everyone wants to kill each other? what's with this world' a girl how was looking in a mirror asked no one , she was in a Clocktower.In a forest forgoten by everyone, where the old clock still moved.
'maybe because they hate ? hate is a strong emotion.And all of them have emotions so things like these are inevitable.I too hate someone....' Centre said as she eated from her cake.
'you hate someone...? don't think like that about my angel,Centre or I'll punish you again.' the girl looked with the edge of her eyes at Centre with a glare
'y-yes' Centre nodded with a shiver as she got scared a little 'but how is the capricious witch?and what does she has that I don't...?' she continued to wispher
'I told you to not call my angel ,a witch! my angel .....where are you now?' the girl looked out the window for the first time that day,thinking about her angel.
'........' Centre looked annoyed at the ground 'anyway! what do we do about her?' she said pointing at the mirror how looked in the past
'....she looks a lot like my angel....' the girl smiled 'bring her here for a while,I think we need to talk, and I would like a new singing bird'
Centre sighed 'yes yes~ then ,I'll be going Nezumi~!' she sat up and entered the circle after flashing a smile at the girl named Nezumi
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_present time_
Yuki had just changed her clothes after taking a shower.She entered the kitchen to drink something, and when she was about to sip from the drink a girl appeared in front of her.Imagine the surprise?
All the drink in Yuki's mouth ended on Centre who now looked annoyed.
'h-how are you?'
'I liked this shirt you know?! ' Centre shoted and took Yuki's hand ,her glass ending pierced on the ground. 'lets go, I don't want to stay so away from Nezumi..'she blushed and formed again the circle .
'w-wait! whaa----'
-another part of the city-
Mayu had just waked up after a short nap.She couldn't do anything as Rena was at school and so should be Yuki so she could just sat still until one could come home.
She sat from the bed and suddenly had a bad feeling. She wanted to go to look at Rena and Yuki to see if they are okay but when she walked past the mirror, with the edge of the eyes she saw that her reflection wasn't moving as her. She stopped and took passes back to look at the mirror again.
It was really true to say at least.The mirror wasn't moving, her figure in the mirror wasn't moving and wearing the same clothes.She looked at her 'reflection', she was looking back at her with a sly smirk even if she herself wasn't smiling at all. She walked closer and put a hand on the mirror, her 'reflection doing the same.
'how are you?'
'me? I am you'
Mayu didn't say anything anymore and just placed both hands on the mirror trying to reach the person on the other side of the mirror.
'you are not me.....you are yourself..' Mayu whispered as she felt tears ready to fall on her cheeks.Something about her 'reflection' made her sad, very very sad..
the reflexion looked annoyed by her words and took her hand off the mirror.She glared at Mayu then sighed.
'when you look at this mirror.....the truth in your soul I could read.....do not wish dead for loved one,hold them dear, so that utopia could be formed in this world.We will open the path between tne angels and devils on earth,the place where all shall meet.Protect them and we will meet Mayu...'
The mirror whispered and then closed her eyes and disappeared.
Mayu's tears started falling, she no longer felt like going after them.They will come back today surely, because it was not destined for them to die....
_200 years in the future_
'I'm back~! 'Centre shouted as she appeared in the same room with Yuki over her shoulder.
'haa~ welcome back Centre' Nezumi said back as she looked at her from her mirror
'l-lets me go!lets me go you idiot!moron! ' Yuki screamed in frustration as she hit Centres back
'man! this girl is annoying! who do you call idiot, stupid?!' Centre hit Yuki's butt with a hand yearning a yelp from Yuki who blushed
'Centre, that's not how you treat a lady, moron. Put her down, I'll talk to her.' Nezumi approached them
Centre put Yuki down and took a step back.Yuki once she had landed she hit Centres arm .
'auch! it hurts!' Centre cried angry
'....' Nezumi looked blankly at her ,after turning to Yuki with a smile 'Its an honor to finally meet you,princess Yuki.'
Yuki turned and saw Nezumi,gasping and suddenly jumping on her 'Mayu!!! Mayuuuu!'
'hey ! don't call Nezumi 'Mayu'! she is nothing like her!' Centre lifted Yuki again,taking her off Nezumi who sat up
'lets me go!' Yuki cried in frustration
'calm down please.I will tell Centre put you down imediately after I explain something.' Nezumi got her attention
'First, I am not Mayu, I am her twin sister Nezumi.I can demonstrate that with the second fact, we are in the future,in a Clocktower, in the centre of a forest.'Nezumi explained and put Centre take Yuki to a window and show the outside,Yuki with a surprised face believed imediately when she saw how high they where.
's-so you are not Mayu......her twin sister Nezumi!?I never know she had a twin!' Yuki looked surprised at Nezumi and touched her cheek softly stroking
'yeah, even she doesn't remember....anyway! I took you here ,so youcould relax for a few days and understand that killing someone is bad!' Nezumi said determined
'she says that....but she surely wants to kill everyone...' Centre thought sarcasticaly
'Centre you are punished! go down and to the master of cemetry for the rest of the day.' Nezumi said looking at her
'w-why?!'
'cuz you just thought something you shouldn't right now'
'damn that mirror!'
Centre left the room sad.
Yuki now that was down started walking closer to Nezumi and stroked her hair and cheeks,making Nezumi feel warm but annoyed.
'then, I'll stay here with you for a while?' Yuki asked with melancholic eyes looking at Nezumi
'yes......or at least until 'she' comes and sends you back....probably in 2 days' Nezumi stepped back and walked back to the mirror.
'....' Yuki didn't say anything more and just watched Nezumi
'stay with me for a while dear Yuki.....I'll give you back soon enough to your sweet Mayu.'
Time flew very fast, they where only two days after all.But in this time Yuki become friends with Centre,and heard a little about the future from then.She also spend time with Nezumi,learning that she was really different from Mayu but still the same.....the three eat together,sleept together after many pleads to Nezumi, and even bathed together when they forced Nezumi in.It was more paceful that back home for Yuki, she felt at peace as she had these friends.But the 2d day come to fast ........and Nezumi was already waiting for someone in the room she first seen.She had her hood on ,and both her and Centre where waiting with her.....
Suddenly a voice was heard from the darkness of the room
'what is the meaning of this?' The voice asked
Nezumi sat up sudenly ,a smirk appeared on her face 'I am happy to see you too my angel....'
'what is the meaning of this?' the voice repeated
'well, princess Yuki had a few bad thoughts and I decided to relax her mind by talking to her' Nezumi started moving around the room,searching for the person who talked
'for 2 days? I don't remember you so talkative Nezumi.....'
' yes I was not......but I thought that you will come see me if I had her a little more--'
'Send her back.' the voice was comanding,leaving no room for anything
Nezumi lets out a sigh with a smile 'fine, Centre.Take back Yuki-hime .'
'but I can't leave you here with 'her'!' Centre sat up
'just take her back.' Nezumi comanded
'y-yes..lets go Yuki'
Yuki took Centre's hand without looking at her,she was still looking at Nezumi who had a sad smile on her face searching for someone in the room
'we will meet again Yuki,Don't worry, just dont forget what I told you' Nezumi looked at her with the edge of the eyes smiling
Yuki nodded and both she and Centre disappeared
After they left, the person steped in the light a little.Nezumi seeing her steped closer,took her hand and kissed the back of it , all the way smiling.
'my dear angel, I am so happy to see you again!' she said cherfully
The 'angel' just looked blankly at her and said '...you are not woth my time' and leaved the room very fast
Nezumi remained in the same position, her smile still there
'you will love me.....I am certain of that, my angel.'
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EHHHHHH? :shock:
Who's Nezumi's angel! Is it future Yukirin? :?
I thought it was strange seeing Nezumi and Mayuyu as two differen't people. But it makes sense. :hehehe:
Great chapter! Update soom! :hee:
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WOW I'm really confused but I like it ^^
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Oooooooh ! Lemme guess !
So it's like : Mayu x Yuki.. ? and Centre- Rena... ? and Nezumi- Black ? :D
The girl on the dark side was Black, right ?? YAAY Then that means... a wild Gekikara will appear ! :OOO
Lol remember, just guessing~
Updating rlly fast eh ? Naisu !
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ahhh this story is getting more interesting! it's full with mysteries, and passions too. nice job yuukimoko-san! i thank you for this :luvluv2:
erm, can i make a request? if it's possible, could you change everytime you're going to write who , please do not write as how. for example, "who are you?" , not "how are you?". unless if u really want to ask the condition of a person, then should you use 'how' instead of 'who'. sorry if this is complicated to you or if my request offend you in any way. i's just that i got very2 confused sometime :dizzy:
i'm not really good in english, but i could help u in any way i can. hope you won't mind tho. tehee~ :mon sweat:
anyway, please update soon!!~ i really hope yuki will end up with the real mayu. please, please, onegaiii~~ :kneelbow:
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Miyumi: I dont know how is Nezumi's angel really...Im waiting for a twist.....but cant think of it still so sont know hows that...or maybe I do? :P
Kahem: sorry that you are confused, but Im happy you like it~ :)
ChuuuPuffss: interesting guess but even I dont know if its like that ....Im thinking about it when I write it~still didnt figure out many pairs... :P XD
lollita90: Im glad you like my story, and dont worry ! I like to be corrected(if its not my mother correcting me..) and yes, I have that problem with how and who....I dont remember the meaning when I write it .Ill try to be more careful from now one, please correct me again if it happens.....As for the story! well Mayu...she will chose probably .....sooner or later! XD
Thanks for the comments everyone! Ill try to update soon!
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Thanks for the fic hehhehe XD Update more please :twothumbs And really hoping for a Mayuki for the next chapter, really love the story yuukimoko-san :thumbup
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'Rena....l..Rena is gone!' Mayu shouted at the top of her lugs as she fell to her knees in front of the door.
'Mayu.....don't worry.....we'll get her back.' Yuki said as she kneeled beside her and hugged her, getting a positive answer from Mayu who hugged her back .
What exactly happened here you ask? wanna have a look? then lets go back and see......
*flashback----that morning*
Yet another paceful morning, if you want to call it that.But today was the day Mayu wanted Rena and Yuki to meet, all three of them.Mayu had a blank face like always,but inside she was quite trembling.Rena showed her fears hugging and telling 'what if's without any sense.
'calm down Rena......everything will be fine, Yuki is understanding and I alredy told her that I will lets her meet the other person I fell for...' Mayu smiled at Rena and took hold of her hand.Rena smiled back, her emotions gone a little.
'then, lets go!' and the door opened.
At Yuki's door they both stoped ,Rena had started trembling again
'Y-Yuki-san doesn't know that you are her puppy....and she knows I have it!'
Mayu sighed, and took Rena's chin to look in her eyes , and kissed her.It was a good way to calm Rena and Yuki, they both would melt at Mayu's touch.
CRACK...
The door opened and Yuki stond there looking at them kissing.They parted fast
'I-its not what it looks like Y-Yuki-san!' Rena started trembling again, she was at the edge on crying.
Mayu sighed again and turned to look at Yuki to explain everything ,but when she turned she saw Yuki with a small smile and there was no hate.
'Its fine Rena-chan! calm down' Yuki hugged Rena and stroked her back
Rena started crying ,Yuki sighed and took both of them inside. Once Rena calmed down
'how where you not surprised Yuki-san? you semed so calm...'
'Ah! its nothing! I already know everything.' Yuki said with a smile
'w-what?! how?' Mayu asked shocked
'.....that is my own secret....' Yuki smiled said nothing more
Mayu was suspicious, what had happened to Yuki? how told her everything? ......just what was going on?!
A hour later, Mayu was still thinking about it while Rena and Yuki whare talking about school,parents and other things.And also their time, more like they where trying to share Mayu.......who takes her at the hour ---- until hour ---- and so on....That until Mayu just snapped and sat up ,scarying them
'how about we move together? that would be more easy.'
The girls looked at each other and smiled, that was the best idea!
'then, we will go important thinks for now, and then we will take the aproval from our parents and move .' Yuki said as she held Rena's hand.They seemed to understand each other very well and Mayu was grateful for that.She really didn't need two crazy girls fighting over her.....
The moving took 3 hours in which they got at Rena's house and took things that she needed, they made 4 times that .So they moved at Yuki's house together.
-(((((((.....can we jump a little please? I'll just tell you fast what happened in 2 weeks......))))))))))))---
They really understand each other, both Yuki and Rena where kind and understanding.They made food together, did homeworks together, even bathed together with Mayu. They also sleep in the same bed with Mayu in the midle.They where like a familly, they all loved each other and so they wanted to remain but after two weeks, something happened.
Mayu was watching tv, while Rena and Yuki where making dinner.
'dinner is ready Mayu!" Yuki shouted after her
They eat ,talking about something while Mayu wasn't listening at all. Inside Mayu felt very very happy, she felt like she was married to them.It was pleasant! they kissed and hugged, no one crying .
'Mayu!'
Mayu looked up and saw Yuki and Rena looking at her worryed.Rena started wipping something from her cheeks
'what....' Mayu reached up and saw her cheeks wet, the 'tears' appeared again.She felt like a crybaby really, she cried at everything.
In the darkness, a figure appeared.Mayu sat up saddenly feeling the presence close.She looked around the room.
'what's wrong Mayu? ' Rena asked worried , she sat up and started heading to the bathroom, her reason to take a towel.
The person's chance to take her.
Mayu to run after her.
Yuki to follow.
Everything happened to fast, in the blink of an eye Mayu was down on the ground being pushed be dark force.Yuki hugging her, and Rena disappearing in the dark.
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*200 years in the future*
'w-whats going on here!!!?' Nezumi shouted at the top of her lugs as she watched everything from her Mirror.
Centre fell, surprised be the yell and the sudden moves.
'she took Rena......my angel! why!?' Nezumi moved from the mirror around the room
'i-it sems she wants to stop you....'
'....she really does, and takes dangerous moves.If she took Rena then Mayu will try to move in the future to search for her......this is good because Yuki will provide her transport.But without Rena, the utopia wont be complete. She probably will remove her memories and put others, fake ones.And for Mayu.....she will probably make herself forgot.She will erase and redo her own memories to forget the pain.' Nezumi looked at the mirror again
'ah, my sweet angel.....you can't stop me! I will have it! I will have you and the eternity........I will make the utopia happen mother..'She looked at a foto, trying to remaind her.
Centre sighed and hugged Nezumi.
_somewhere else ,the same future_
'good, now put her on the bed Jurina.' the dark figure said as she give Rena to the said Jurina.
'yes!' was the cheerful response the girl give with a cat smile.
'it seems you didn't have problems.Mayuyu is still weak so we can control this.' A small figure said as she looked at Jurina exiting, she stroked the sleeping one on her lap.
'yes......she is still weak. ' the dark figure murmured 'but this is good for now, so we could stop utopia from happening, isnt it, Yuko?'
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I know its too short but I lost my inspiration one hour ago,when I made a pause after I wrote the things before the flashback.......understand? no?ok...
Review?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!??!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!?!??!?!?!?!?!!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!
From now on, the updates will be more slower! I start exams and school soon.........
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My head is spinning ._______________.
Wtf is happening ????
Who is that dark figure ???
and Yuko ?!?!?!
Wtf !!! Kill me naaaooo ! -RAGE-
Lol I wanna know what's nxt that's what I'm trying to say xD
Update soon, I guess ~
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WHAT?!!! wait...is Yuko the dark figure? :? :?
WAHH !!! :panic: :panic:
please update!!!
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the more i read this fiction.. the more confused.. Maybe I should read again
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Haha now i have time to actually give you a coment. Sorry about this Yuuki >"<
It's getting confused though but i think i still can understand something o.oa
The black figure is Black right?
And about the Mayu x Rena couple, it's unusual and interesting :) It's normal to me either Mayuki or JuriMayu but somehow Mayu x Rena is quite sweet too.
But anyways, as a big shipper for Wmatsui, I'm still looking forward to WMatsui moment and since Rena is with Jurina now, I'm more excited!!!!
Thanks for the hard work and update soon~
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Wahh brain twister! :dizzy:
So Rena is Nezumi's angel? :dunno:
Is Yuko the dark figure or was it Black? :dunno:
Where did Jurina come from? :dunno:
Ahh so many questoins! :frustrated:
Please update soon! :gyaaah:
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My head is spinning ._______________.
Wtf is happening ????
Who is that dark figure ???
and Yuko ?!?!?!
I have to agree with Chuuupuffss-san. This chapter has been a bit confusing, since the coming of the new characters. But I know that Yuukimoko-san will shed some light on us readers in the future chapters. So that means, we'll have to be patient for your next update. :hee:
But since we're at it... :glasses: Let me see if I'm at least correct at some of the characters.
So Mayu's twin is Nezumi.
Nezumi's slave/assistant is Center.
Nezumi's angel is Rena.
The girl whom Mayu is supposed to marry (and she painted) is Rena.
The one who will fulfill Nezumi's plans is Rena.
The on who kidnapped Rena is Jurina and Yuko?
And the black figure is... Black?
And Yuki is... uhh... :err:
:dizzy: So dizzy... But I'm really liking the plot more and more.
The mysteries are still yet to be solved, and the black figure has yet to be revealed.
Yuko has appeared, which makes me wonder if she'll have any mirror-like person, since everyone but Rena and Yukirin has them.
It may just be me, but I'm somehow sensing... Gekikara and Black. :ding: Hope they do appear. That'll be like...Wow.
Anyways Yuukimoko-san! I really love this fic of yours! :on GJ:
And I'm sorry for being such a lurker. :depressed: I've been feeling quite lazy lately. Sorry. :kneelbow:
But I'll try to comment every now and then! I mean... I really really want to see how this love-square or pentagon or hexagon works out? :nya:
And now, back to my blankets! :on gay:
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This is not a chapter, I repeat this is NOT a chapter!
I decided to do a summary to everything that happened until now in Love puppy! so everyone will understand.
Love puppy!
1- Watanabe Mayu is punished by her father and the high council for unknow things.She is send back 200 years,where she meets Kashiwagi Yuki ,who takes her home and becomes her new owner. Mayu is a puppy, a part of her punishment was the form.
2-Yuki takes a bath with puppy Mayu, after leaving for some shoping and to meet with her best friend,Kojima Haruna.She arrives later than she told she wpuld and Mayu gets a little mad.Mayu eats human food, she hates the dog one.
3-They go to bed, Yuki start crying,being sad and Mayu tryes to make her smile.They end up kissing,after rubbing noses together.Mayu transforms in her human form, scarying Yuki who fainted.It takes only one hour and Mayu becomes a puppy again.The next day Yuki considers it all a dream.Mayu is waiting for Yuki to come back home with some visitors.
4-Yuki comes back with Haruna and Yuko,her puppy. Mayu finds out Yuko is her sister, send back also by the high magician and his girl.Mayu also finds out Yuko is Haruna's lover,knowing she is a puppy. Sae makes her first appearence at the door.
5-Mayu bits Sae, Yuki treats Sae's wound.Mayu and Yuko make signs to Haruna .They all decide to go for a walk.
6-Sae tries to ask Yuki for a date, but is the two puppyes stop her every move.Haruna and Yuko go home leaving Sae to walk Yuki home.Sae and Yuki are about to kiss, only for Mayu to stop them.Sae leaves after Yuki closes her door in face.Yuki searchs for Mayu who ran in the house, only to end up on the bed with the girl from her 'dream' on top.
7-Mayu in her human form kisses Yuki and declares her as her own.Yuki tryes to fight back.Mayu finds out that she can make Yuki's heart hers,gaining emotions.Yuki bits Mayu ,Mayu runs out naked but stops at the entrace door.She can control when to become puppy again.
8-First time Maeda Atsuko is mentioned in the story.Second time Takahashi Minami is mentioned.Yuko explains how she got there and why.Mayu declars for the first time that she will do something bad once she is back in the future.Yuko knows her sister doesnt have good thoughts, she is thinking about something.Yuko is seen talking to Haruna.Sae asks Yuko for a date over the phone,Yuki accepts.Later she is bit three times be Mayu in her human form as punishment for the date.
9- Yuki is sad so Mayu decides to explain what is happening to Yuki.They have dinner together.Yuki accepts Mayu somehow, falling for her.
10- Yuki goes on the promised date with Sae.Yuki filrtes with Sae to get Mayu's attention
11-Mayu is kissing Yuki in a changing cabin.She gives her a rose and a chocolate kiss.She leaves Yuki with Sae, looking at them from the crowd.Sae declars her love for Yuki but we dont know if she accepts, the author jumping to later when Yuki goes home.Home she finds her puppy asleep, dinner and a piece of poetry.For the first time Yuki declars that she had fallen for Mayu with the line 'you really are the prince I dreamed for....'
12-Mayu prepars breakfast for Yuki before she wakes up,after transformes back in a puppy. Yuki remembers Sae's confession, telling the readers her answer.Yuki rejects Sae, But Sae says she wont give up and continues to hold on Yuki.Mayu and Yuko meet in their human forms ,Haruna and Yuki are at school.Sae appears with Yuki after school .
13-Sae has dinner with Yuki and puppy Mayu.Mayu fights a little with Sae,Yuki comes in and stops her.She kisses Yuki and runs to transform somewhere else leaving Sae and Yuki alone for 5 minutes.Sae goes with Yuki to her room to talk something important. The author writes from Mayu's POV from there. Mayu after changes, goes and listens to Yuki's room ,ready to go in.She hears Yuki and Sae kiss.The door opens a little and she sees Yuki kissing Sae back.Mayu obtains a heart in that moment, she runs out in the dark.Crying in the park she first meet Yuki, she meets another girl how offers her shoulder and a home.Matsui Rena makes her appearence.
14-Mayu's POV. She dreams about the past, her mother and a sister she doesnt remember.A portrait she drew shows the one she will marry.Her father, and other two sisters try to protect her from the evil Clocktower.Mayu promises she wont love anyone else more than she loves her mother.Rena becomes puppy Mayu's new owner.Mayu starts liking Rena more.
BONUS- It shows someone elses POV. That person tells us a story, her past maybe.She also talks about other new personages : her and Mayu's mother(the personification of greed) , 'that girl' (her servant/friend) , 'master of the cimistery'(a monster who eats people) and 'Clockwork doll' (probably herself).
She says she is the one that watches the Clocktower after her mother 'disappeared'.She never tells her name until the finall but she talks about her mirror, and the two twins.
15-It starts with Sae's POV, she tells us how she meet Yuki and how she fell in love.It shows Yuki's POV too, she says how she fell out off love with Sae and declars for the second-third time she love Mayu.She makes a vow that she regrets later.The story is retaken from chapter 14, this time in Yuki's POV instead of Mayu's. Sae wants Yuki, Yuki tryes to see if she truly love Sae.Yuki sees Mayu, she finds out she only loves Sae like a sister now, never returning to love her.But they promise to each other that they will be together the next time they will be born .Sae leaves and Yuki cryes herself to sleep, losing both Mayu and puppy Mayu.
16- One week later Yuki meets puppy Mayu and Rena in the park.Even if she doesnt want to lets Mayu go, Mayu runs to Rena and goes home.
17-Mayu falls more and more for Rena.They sleepin the same bed and Rena tells a story.Mayu falls asleep before the story is over.The story's origins and truth is unknow. Rena makes Mayu promise she will go met Yuki.
200 years in the future, 'that girl' from the BONUS is showed walking the stairs to the top of the Clocktower.
First triler~
18-Mayu and Rena spend a relaxing day together.Mayu confronts Yuki, they make up. Both tells each other what happened until then.Mayu refuses to lets Yuki say the magical three words.Yuki and Mayu spend the next day together.Mayu goes back to Rena with roses.Mayu shows that she fell for Rena,and Rena for her.Mayu remembers something from the past.
The painting in the BONUS was Rena, she is told she will love the person in the paint be someone ,probably her mother.Mayu asks Rena for a date.
19-It starts with Mayu talking about her emotions. Then moves to the date between Mayu and Rena.Someone is spying them, 'that girl' is showed to be Centre.She was told be her mester/friend/potential lover to scare Mayu ,trying in a play to kill Rena.Her potential lover/master/friend is in love with someone else.Mayu and Rena enjoy their date until they enter a circus.There Centre and 2 helpers scare them, and almost kill Rena. Mayu caryes Rena home.Rena doesnt remember anything from the circus.Rena tell's Mayu a little more from the story.
Second triler!
20- Yuki is took in the future by Centre. Her potential lover/master/friend AND Mayu's twin sister,the person speaking in the BONUS is Nezumi.
Mayu meets Nezumi ,her reflection in a mirror.Yuki meets Nezumi, and thinks she is Mayu at first.Yuki spends 2 days with Centre and Nezumi becoming very fast good friends.On the 2d day, a misteryous figure appears, and tells Nezumi to send Yuki back.Nezumi is in love with this person,'capricous sourceress'.Yuki is send back. Nezumi declares her possesion with this line 'you will love me.....I am certain of that, my angel.'
21-Rena and Mayu go to meet Yuki and tell her everything.Yuki alredy knows, probably from Nezumi.They spend some time together like a familly.Until Nezumi's 'angel' comes and takes Rena.
Nezumi thinks about what could happen now.
The 'angel' goes home ,unknow location, and gives Rena to 'Jurina'(unknow personage ,unknow details) .Yuko is seen again ,she is talking with the 'angel' about Mayu 's ideals, power and how the 'utopia' should be stoped.Nezumi wants to make 'utopia' happen. The story Rena was telling is forgoten for now.
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That was all, 21 chapter.......and we still have to go.
Characters until now:
Watanabe Mayu-puppy Mayuyu- 3rd Prince- Cyborg prince
Takahashi Minami- 2d prince- 'charming' prince
Oshima Yuko- puppy Yuko-1 prince- 'perverted' prince
Kojima Haruna- 'angel of air'- Yuki's best friend
Miyazawa Sae- Yuki's first friend
Centre-Nezumi's servant/friend-'that girl'
Nezumi- Mayu's twin sister-Master of the Clocktower-the watcher
Mother-
Father-
Misteryous person-
Jurina-
Matsui Rena-
and so on~!!!!! Hope this helped you all!!! tell me what you think now please? Ill probanly do another on like this after another 10 or so chapter......
Review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P
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Mayu put the ring on the persons finger before her, and smiled gently yearning a blush from that person
'now, you ca kiss-------'
'wait right there!'
Suddenly the door opened and Mayu entered
'what do you think you are doing?' she asked
....how did she ask?
'Im talking with you!'
....me?
'yeah you!!!!'
......I was in the midle of the story, what do you want Mayu?
'dont talk to me like that! how many chapters did you jump?! 12-20????? how many!!'
/.........not my fault no one enters here.....so I can do whatever I want......problem?
'yeah problem!!! I was the leanding one in the story and you suddenly stoped? and why is Nezumi there insteand of me? I sould marry **** not her!'
*sigh* you are giving me headaches......fine! Ill stop now......
'and where getting to the good part....' Nezumi pouted and kissed ****
'hey!!'
anyway......lets leave them there.....
Triler!
'where am I?'
'I am your prince.....'
'Rena.......who is Rena?'
'I only want you Yuki......'
'this......why now? damn it!!'
'how are you?!'
'I am me!'
'.......the author got bored..'
'Yuko......Nyannyan loves you....'
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is that really the triler? dont know......maybe it isnt........damn my boredom!!!!! I wanna read something too!!!!
Ignore the author please, she is too bored......
Yuuki was here~! XD
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If you're bored then how about you come with me into the world of Mayuki?
I have so many ideas I wish to share with you.
:hee:
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I am all ears!!!! but with private message or something? ms? tell me~~~ Im bored to dead! but I also only have around 30 minutes or so.....
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many things happened when I was absent :cool1:
Mayu was so selfish When she was a cyborg prince she was really cold too coldy and when she could feel what it is love she had so much emotion that she loved two persons :sweat:
and she could live with the two of them she is so lucky :stuffed:
but Rena i kidnapped now what is going to happen :dizzy:
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My mind can't really process much nowadays... :err:
And I'm confuse too!!! :OMG:
Situations simultaneously happen...
Update soon!!! I might redeem my sanity in the next update... heheh
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Hiatus!
This story will be on hiatus for the next 2-3 weeks, or something like that.Today I got what I must learn for my exams and these are a lot! This week I must learn and next week Ill have the exams.So I put this story on hiatus for this time,maybe I will do one or two chapters but I wont post them until I finish my exams.
If I get good grades and transfer school then Ill come back, if not then my parents will be mad at me and will surely take my laptop.Wish me luck! and wait for me please!!!!!
Forgive me everyone and please do wait for me......
Then..............................HIATUS!
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yuuki-chan gambatee do your best and come back :onioncheer:
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Gambatte, Yuuki-chan !
I hope you get good grades ~~
I kinda feel what you feel !
Studies are always first !
Then again, I really liked this fic but you're the writer and you can do anything with this fic !
Good luck again~ Come back Again ! Lol Dasi dora wa xD
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yuuki-chan! ganbare! :onioncheer: you have to do your best! we will be cheering for you! :mon beam: surely, we don't want your laptop to be taken, and let this fic left un-updated, right? hehe good luck!
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WOW!!! It seems that everyone has twin lol
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'where...am I?' Matsui Rena wake up with a dizzy feeling, in an unfamilliar room.But there was nothing strange about the room,
so for a second she thought she was in her friend's room, but looking for the door she saw a girl entering.
The girl had short hair, that ended a little after her shoulders.A cat like smile on her face, her eyes glitering with joy.
Her clothes looked simple, short boy pants and a shirt .She entered the room with that smile, her eyes closed then opened as she closed the door.
She saw Rena awake and her smile grewed a little.She aproached the bed and said
'Good morning ,my princess! Its an honor to finally meet you,dear princess, I've been waiting for this to happen for the time I was born.
You are truly the most beautiful person I ever saw!'
Rena looked shocked at the girl, she seemed so happy about something.....but what was she talking about?
Rena was no princess the last time she verified.She was a simple girl.
'Then, lets me present myself,princess. I am Jurina, Matsui Jurina.I am your prince....' the Jurina girl said as she lifted Rena from the bed.
Rena wondered now, was she that easy? what did she mean be prince?
Jurina carried Rena to another room where two people where sitting on a sofa, one with headphones listening to music,
and the other watching silently.
The two saw Jurina and Rena and sitted up.
'Rena! good morning' the shorter one said with a smile
'g-good morning' Rena said shy and bowed to the two.
'no need to bow Rena~ we are between friends! sit down sit down!' the short one said as she gestured to Jurina to put Rena on the sofa.
'then, as I was seeing. I am Yuko! and this is Nyannyan, Kojima Haruna.We are your friends so there is no need to be scared! Its not like I would eat you....ah! or maybe I would...you look so hot!' Yuko was hit in the head two times,by Jurina and Haruna who frowned and glared at the now scared squieel.
'...no I would never eat you! I was only joking! really! please spear my life!' Yuko was now a ball on the floor begging for forgivness to Rena who sweet droped and smiled.
'please excuse Yuuchan, she is just a perverted animal that sometimes forgets she has a girlfriend...' Haruna said dreamaticaly with a sad face
'e-ehh~!? No NyanNyan!I didnt forget! I was only telling Rena how boys see her, I was trying to say her to be carefull!! I love you NyanNyan!' Yuko cried dramaticaly at Haruna' feets
Rena gigled, she felt more relaxed now.
Jurina smiled at the sound of Rena's voice and kneeled beside her
'ahh! You sweet voice is seducing me, my princess....You are truly the child of a godness!'
The sweet talk made Rena blush and look other way.
This wasn't a bad place to get lost in, if the people where so friendly.
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*200 years in the past*
After a while Mayu had feel asleep in Yuki's embrace.She had been crying after Rena for hours screaming her name.It was hurting Yuki, but she know that love was like this.
The next morning Yuki had wake up first and made breakfast .Mayu had walked in the kitchen with a cute sleeping face that would have made everyone jump on her .
'good morning..' Mayu hummed as she sat at the table
'good morning Mayu...' Yuki smiled sadly and sat the food on the table.
Why do things happen so fast? Why do everyone try to make her suffer? just....why did all these things happen?Yuki felt so sad, she didnt want Mayu to suffer anymore.
'ne Yuki?'
'hmm?' Yuki turned to look at Mayu on the sofa.
'..can I eat you~?' Mayu asked with a smirk
'e-ehhhh~?!?!?!??' Yuki surprised face and sudden sat up made herself fall to the floor
'a-ahahahahha!' Mayu was holding her stomach as her breath was running out
'mou...its not funny! saying something like that...' Yuki sat up and rubbed her sore butt.
'ahahah! b-but you where so amusing!' Mayu started calming down and smiled at Yuki 'but ,its the truth Yuki, I would love it if you would lets me 'eat' you, my princess...'
Yuki's heart missed a beat as it had stoped for 2 seconds.Her face had become red and with wide eyes she didnt know what to say .
'w-I- I ...May-u, I-I a-eh? R-Rena?' the words didnt really come out her mouth as she talked
'Rena? How is Rena?' Mayu asked calmly with a smile
'e-ehhhhh?!?!?!?!?' Yuki fell once again on her butt.
Mayu had erased her own memories about Rena so it wouldnt hurt....Yuki felt bad for this, because if Mayu had her then she could forget about Rena but If Yuki wasnt with her then Mayu would have gone to search for Rena.
Mayu sat closer to Yuki and put a hand on Yuki's wrist.Then sat herself on Yuki's legs, pinning Yuki to the back of the sofa.
'I only want you ,Yuki....'
Mayu put her forehead on Yuki's and smiled softly.Yuki blushed and put her hands on Mayu's shoulders and around her neck.If they kissed...would that mean that Mayu is cheating on Rena? Would Rena be mad?
But Mayu wasnt only for Rena, and Mayu didnt remember Rena so it should be okay, right? After all ,Yuki had Mayu first.So Mayu was hers first,then Rena's.
So Yuki could do whatever she wanted,because Mayu was hers......or wasnt she? She had told Yuki that she wasnt sure anymore.So if Yuki kissed her maybe she would be sure, Mayu loved Yuki, and Yuki loved Mayu.So we
couldnt they say that to each other?
Things where complicated and everything needed an answer.Maybe Nezumi could give Yuki all the answers....she missed Nezumi and Centre.She really liked their presence, and liked Nezumi's warmth almost as much as Mayu's.
They where twins after all, but being so alike and still so different .Mayu was warm, sometimes cold, loing and smart.Yuki loved Mayu.Still, Nezumi was warm too, sometimes misterious,or playful, always wearing a
smirk when she planed something.Yuki started liking her too, to be in love with two is hurtful.And Mayu know that the best, as she had showed Yuki.But for Yuki to be in love with two, twins at that, was
hurtful but warm.
Nezumi and Mayu, two Mirrors.If she could have both....
Yuki shaked her head.There was no way she could have both, and she alredy had Mayu.While Nezumi seemed to be in love with someone else alredy.Yuki remembered the soft and strangely familliar vorice in the
room before she left with Centre.Was the person Nezumi love warm too? was she sweet and would care about Nezumi and spoil her like Yuki did to Mayu? And Centre loved Nezumi too, Centres love seemed pure
,if only Nezumi would accept it....
Yuki blinked, for a second she forgot the original subject at hand.Looking in Mayu's eyes did this to her, she would forget everything and get lost.
They had stayed like that for a while, feeling each others breath and warmth.Looking in each others eyes, searching for love....in Mayu's eyes is love.Love for Yuki.But is there love in Yuki's eyes..?
Mayu closed the distance and kissed Yuki on the lips.Like she had been electrocuted Mayu jerked her head back.With wide eyes Mayu touched her own lips and looked at Yuki how was still lost,not moving at all....
Was that love that Yuki felt for Mayu?
Did she really love Mayu or Nezumi?
Was this world so crazy..?The future and past....which is which?
....Who exactly was Kashiwagi Yuki?
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*200 years in the future*
Nezumi sat up and screamed frustrated.
This caused Centre to burst in the room panicked.
'what happened?!' She asked as she looked around the room for possible enemies or the capricious witch.But there was nothing in the room.Centre turned to Nezumi and saw the magic mirror showing Mayu and Yuki.
'did they finally did it?' Centre asked a little happy now.
Nezumi frowned 'no.These idiots are making it harder and harder ! Yukirin just thought something that will and wont help us in the plan, but they just kissed and something happened!I think my sweet angel is
doing something she shouldnt....' Nezumi touched the mirror and after turned to Centre.
'go there. I think someone is trying to take Yuki .....go and stop it!'
'y-yes!' Centre disappeared.
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*200 years in the past*
Suddenly someone appeared in the room , making Mayu sit up and take out her sword ready to fight.
A girl with a cat smile steped before Mayu
'Hello! Im Jurina, its nice to meet you Mayuyu!' the girl smiled at Mayu
Mayu was a little surprised but when Yuki sat up and hugged the girl she got jealous
'Centre!' Yuki shouted happy as she hugged Jurina, Jurina looked confused
'I--'
In another second, another Identical girl appeared in the room.Mayu drew her sword again and pulled Yuki to her, hugging her close
'how are you?' The mirror that appeared said to Jurina
'I am me!' Jurina shouted happy
'you cant! I am me!' The mirror said
Mayu got mad
'Whats going on here!! explain alredy!'
Jurina and the mirror turned to Mayu
Yuki looked at both of them before turning to the mirror
'you are Centre arent you?' Yuki smiled
Centre smiled back 'I am! Its nice to see you again Yukirin~'
'..Yuki....do you know them?' Mayu tried to calm herself and looked at Yuki
'hmm~ only Centre!' Yuki pointed at Centre who smirked at them.
'hey! but I said how I am! I am Jurina!' Jurina said feeling ignored
'You are a clone...' Centre frowned at Jurina
'I am not!' Jurina got mad and took out a sword
'....this is going to far...' a voice was heard in the room
Mayu turned to Yuki 'did you said that Yuki?'
'no' Yuki shokaked her head
'lets go back for now Jurina.' the voice said again
'yes Master!' Jurina smiled a last time at Mayu and Yuki ,then disappeared.
Centre sighed 'well, its good they are gone. Ill go too then.'
'ehhh?! stay Centre! I wanted to talk with you!' Yuki said hopping her friend would remain more .
'I--'
'Come back Centre...' Another voice appeared
'ah! Yes!' Centre recognized it, as well as Yuki.It was Nezumi.
'w-wait! whats going on here! you all just appeared and then disappeared! someone explain!!' Mayu demanded confused
'...if you want to know...then wait a little longer, Mayu...just a little longer and then come back home....everything will be ready be then...'
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'things dont look too good' Haruna said as she closed her eyes.Yuko was sleeping on her lap, with a smile.
'...' Haruna looked at Yuki and smiled stroking her cheeks
'you know Yuuchan....' Haruna whispered 'even....even if you will do something bad....and with all that will happen...I will still love you'
Haruna smiled sadly 'Yuko....Nyannyan loves you...'
'I am your angel....'
'...' a figure appeared in the room with Jurina
'ah! you are back. How was it?' Haruna asked the two
'well, it was like Master said.Nezumi is truly watching everything that happens in the past' Jurina said as she exited the room
The other figure ,the Master, watched silently before looking at Yuki and Haruna
'Ill be going soon....I must see what is going on in the palace ....'
'yes.Be careful' Haruna smiled at the Master.
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I know its not interesting but I lost inspiration after a while.....
I just wanted to tell that Ill continue this for now, its not on hiatus anymore.
Review?
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Now, I feel Mayu and Yuki's love isn't pure ;u;
Poor Mayuyu. Now, you will feel Yukirin's pain when you cheated on her ;u;
Lol~ I'm so reading this coz' Nezumi and Centre is there woohoo~
Update soon :>
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Wahh! I've missed this story so much! :farofflook:
What? Who is the master? I really want know! :tantrum:
Oh gosh Mayu what's wrong with you? Pick one and stay with them! :angry1:
I keep forgetting that Center and Jurina are two separate people in the story. :dizzy:
I really love this story. Please update soon! :pleeease:
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I'm carzy.......
aaaghhh but do continue the story
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Wew. The story is great and its getting more complicated!!! And theres Kojiyuu too love ittt!!!! :inlove: :thumbup Please update soon!!!
Mayu hurry up and choose yuki!!! :luvluv1:
But i also want rena for her.. :fainted:
Please add more sweet kojiyuu scenes :love: :ptam-kiss:
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COMPLICATED!!! :nervous
My HEAD HURTS! :banghead:
RENAAAA MY SWEET RENAAAA! :shocked :?
please update soon! :cow:
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Well that was... interesting. :shocked :? BUT I LIKED IT. :D I'm still confused about a few things but... I think I can manage if I reread it again... *I was in a rush and I had to go to school today on Saturday.*
I'm also interesting in the short fic bit in the beginning about Takamina, Mayuyu, Tomochin, and Jurina... 8)
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Haaa~
I wonder if the poll works....
The thing is, I don have a few more ideas about what to write in this, since I wanted to make this long.But school is starting tomorrow and for 4 weeks now I've been too bored/tired/stressed to continue.
.....Eto.....
Tell me what you think please? If I get motivated then Ill continue this story ...or the one with only a chapter at the first pace I think....tell me if you like that too.
.....Eto.....
Well, I dont really know what to say since Im scared right now of school.....so Ill leave this to you all.
....ypu can ignore me if you want?
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you're tired and stressed because of school and scared too :OMG:
shikarishte and don't worry yuuki-chan!! ah me too I'm going to start school tomorrow so let's do our best together :mon thumb:
and about your fic I think you want you to cantinue it there are many things I want to know :sweat:
so if you are tired or bored don't think about the fic do something else and have fun :on GJ:
take your time on writing and don't force yourself and update when you feel you want but please cantinue the fic :wriggly:
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YUUKI!!! :OMG:
Don't stop writing! You gotta continue! :frustrated:
I started school already and yet I'm still updating! It may be hard but you don't have to update everyday. I don't because of school :on study:
Don't stop please! :gyaaah:
You were just getting to a good part and I'm sure everyone wants to know who the queen is! :pleeease:
Don't stop! :fainted:
Please? :fainted:
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Eh? Don't stop. :( (Though, I would understand if you did...) Miyumi is right, you don't have to update everyday or week, and there are days where nothing comes through your mind even if you keep thinking about it. Most of the time, ideas come and go as it pleases right? :bingo: Thinking too hard will only make it more difficult and stressful. Let it come, and when it does, don't let it go. Write it down, or make a note of it. Take a break if you need it, the readers should be okay with that, right? :hee:
But you're starting school? Good luck in school! What is there to be scared about? I'm sure it'll be fine. Don't stress yourself too hard about it, it's only the start of the school year, right? Relax, don't think about writing for the next few days so it relaxes you, focus on school or something else instead. (But oh, school. Homework and everything... Ugh. I wish I went to a night school. LOL.)
*Cue No3b's first single, Relax*
A DOSE OF AKB SHOULD DO THE TRICK... and if not, distracting at least. XD
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Eh Yuuki-chan o.o
You're scared of school? Wow xD Don't get stressed out of school! You can just fuck that out lol Okay, JOKING
I know its pretty hard updating since you got school and shit but try to get motivated at some point. Who knows you might learn a thing or two from school which you might apply to in this fic~
And if you want to end this, then make a valid reason. School is a pretty lame one -.- No offense though. I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who knows what you feel so I won't force the problems out of your mind.
Bored? the term BORED is not really the term to use. Instead, you need to relax and take it free for awhile~ I bet you've gone through a lot so I suppose your imagination has gone lost into the blue.
Just don't end this yet. I think everyone wants to know what will happen. And who the hell the queen is lol
Just take your time and an idea might just pop out of your mind out of nowhere. Just, goodluck, Yuuki-chan~ Were always here to support you~ :deco:
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Mo-chan : Thank you ! thank you for everything Mo-chan! Ill continue since I started remembering my ideas.....and for all the support I get....
Miyu-chan : You are right, school is not an excuse.Please forgive me.Ill continue......I alredy know how the queen is~...but the idea is stupid..
Crossing Crossroads : Thank you for the motivating words! Ill do my best with school and write in the weekends probably....Thank you!
ChuuuPuffss : Yes, Im terrified of school....thats because my parents and teachers have too many expectations from me.They think I can do more, but I refuse to stress myself with school so I only learn as much as they cant comment, but they want me to learn more and use my brain....too many expectations!
I know school is not a reason, but the lose of ideas is?,.....well I got some back....
Thank you for the encouraging words! Ill continue, soon , hopefully.
Everyone wants to know how the queen is......but only I know!....and I think you wont like the ideas I have but whatever for now~
Thank you everyone!
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WOW! A lot of characters!
And their love story are really complicated lol
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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please update soon! I likr the story...
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.....does that poll up there works? ......
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I dont think it does, looks like the poll is closed
I would like you to continue Love Puppy though, please :bow:
Its a great story and I wanna know more
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Just wanted to say that I looked over all the chapters ( whithout the last one) and corrected the mistakes I saw. Of course I didn't correct them all, or where would the fun be ? But for these who were confused cuz of my many mistakes, now you can read the chapters with a little better, just a little , .....easinest.
I decided I'll start working on this fic in summer break, because only then I have enough time and free brain. For these who still wanna read it, thank you for the support and the long hiatus is almost over! and for these who don't care.... I almost wanted to swear, sorry, I'm not in a good mood. For these who don't wanna read, don't read.I decided to continue this fic for myself, because I want to end at least one of these I started and because I wanna improve my writting.
Thank you very much.(don't know for what) and I might see you in summer, if I don't rethink it again.
By the way, summer break starts in 3 weeks for me... and I also started a blog, but it wont have so much AKB, just a few oneshots later.
Bye bye.
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take your time yuuki-chan :hee:
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will be waiting for it :)
I love mayuki story <3
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Will be waiting for your update
Thank you for considering to update it again...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Ano.... yukiimoko-san, you have great fic here.....
I wonder what will happen now?
So please update :bow: :bow:
Thank you