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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Keisthename on July 20, 2012, 05:58:19 AM

Title: [Takamina graduation SP] 10 Years of Friendship; 10 Years of Love 5-2-16
Post by: Keisthename on July 20, 2012, 05:58:19 AM
INDEX

The Only Thing That Won't Change----> scroll down!
The Power Of Love----> http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1076460#msg1076460 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1076460#msg1076460)
Will You Take My Hand?----> http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1079705#msg1079705 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1079705#msg1079705)
It Should Have Been Me---->http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1119235#msg1119235 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1119235#msg1119235)
Reasons---->http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1180464#msg1180464 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1180464#msg1180464)
A First Love at 7:12 a.m.---->http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1190000#msg1190000 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1190000#msg1190000)

I still haven't finished my 1st fic yet entitled "CONTRACT", if you guys haven't seen it.. please do check it out hihi

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33275.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33275.0)

I promise I will update it, but there's something in my mind that made me create another story... and it's about reality check on what's happening right now.. (partly) LOLz

Well all the words and dramatic scenes are just in my head, I'm just imagining things how each other is feeling towards the story..
Please do read it, this is just a short one but will be updated by parts... I hope you guys will enjoy this one..  :err:

I will update the next part if you want me to continue of course...  :cool2:


Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: Haruko on July 20, 2012, 06:47:45 AM
OMG love it!! i thing that this could happen in a near future.. of course I want the second part.. aww atsuko is so jelousy about haruna.. anda takaboy too

make a happy ending please :D
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: Tanchan on July 20, 2012, 07:55:25 AM
Why you ask of course I want the second part please update soon.
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 20, 2012, 10:37:34 AM
I love the story. Very sweet and interesting. :heart:
I love the kiss at the end.
I want to know what happens in part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update, please!!!!!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: Minami-chan on July 20, 2012, 12:03:25 PM
 :farofflook: :farofflook:

Well I like so much. I love this kind of tragic fiction.
Seriously have confidence in your writing, it really is good.

We will wait for the update!

 :shy2: :shy2: :nya: :nya:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: Trickster on July 20, 2012, 03:26:53 PM
this.. THIS! I really like story like this! XD
please update the second part!! :thumbup:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: ichikawa on July 20, 2012, 03:37:01 PM
 :lol: :lol: Acchan is jealous over Haruna~
Please update the next part  XD
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA)
Post by: kahem on July 20, 2012, 05:34:21 PM
I feel sad for them T_T
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 21, 2012, 05:30:20 PM
HAHAHA!!! I love the ending. This fic made my day.
The joke became real.....
Thank you for this wonderful story. :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: Haruko on July 21, 2012, 06:31:04 PM
ýeah we know that takaboy its a perv... aha the joke.. of course it wasnt a joke that was a amazing way for request something that both want..
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: Nakamii on July 21, 2012, 10:48:57 PM
WHY THEY HAVE TO BE SO CUTE? OMG! Love you two~ and, They're just making out. ; A ; Also, I like how their evidence to declare each other feelings. xDDD Thank you so much, For this story. Looking forward to your future works. <3
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: kahem on July 22, 2012, 12:16:31 AM
Great one!
Atsumina forever!!!
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on July 22, 2012, 12:33:12 PM
Kei-tan I really love this !!!
Minami and Atsuko, they are so cute and perfect and honest... and hot *///* 

Please make more cute fanfic like this, It's feel like I'm in heaven  :k-wink:
Thank you and see you~
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: ichikawa on July 22, 2012, 07:58:34 PM
Atsumina~  :wub: :wub:
Lovely~  :wub: :wub:
They matched perfectly with each other~  :heart: :heart:
And the joke become true?!  :w00t: :twothumbs
Like your fic~ Kei-san~  :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: Keisthename on July 27, 2012, 07:29:01 AM
@TakaminaBG: Thanks, I'm glad it made your day when you read this.
@Haruko: Ahahaha! Yes They really do both wanted that omg  :on bleed:
@Nakamii: Thank you for reading, don't worry I'll try to make more stories  :roll:
@Kahem: Yes atsuminaaaa  :heart: :heart: :heart:
@chibi-nyao-chan: ATsumina is just so perfect for each other, I really am dying to know they are dating for real..  :on speedy:  :prayers:
@ichikawa: Thanks for liking it.. hahaha I find Atsuko really cute too when she really did took Minami's joke seriously.. and then that happen  :shy1:
@ haru9210: ahahaha glad you like it!!! I will make more of this!!  :shy2:


There, to show my gratitude for my readers.. I think I really need to communicate with you all too.. hihihi I hope you guys won't get tired of my stories  :badluck: :cool2:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: Tanchan on July 27, 2012, 07:51:34 AM
Why would I get tired of your stories? The more you write the more I like it  :inlove:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Only Thing That Won’t Change” (ATSUMINA) UPDATED Part 2
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 27, 2012, 10:30:29 AM
Thank You For ATSUMINA FANFIC...

I really like the pairing..

I Hope you can make more... :lol:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 08, 2012, 10:03:48 PM
I....I.....I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Minami and Atsuko with special powers...... SO HOT!
Ant that scene, the kiss and Atsuko taking her clothes off.... OMG I NEED A TISSUE!!!!
Thank you for this update!!!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on August 08, 2012, 10:32:49 PM
Kei-tan this story is so strange ! But I like it so much, with powers and everything !
Playing Minami is so sexy *///* And bold Acchan is gooood !
Atsumina's moment on the bed is so *///* HOT  :k-inlove:

Oh my God Kei-tan don't kill me like this again ! Oh no, please continue writing sexy story  :luvuluvu: no matter if I die xD
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: Keisthename on August 09, 2012, 10:59:29 AM
@TakaminaBG: Ahahaha Glad you liked it, and yes I too think that it's so super cool to have powers.. so I decided to make a fic about it.. and of course ATSUMINA  :heart: :heart: :heart: ahhh  :luvluv2:

@chibi-nyao-chan: Yes, it's  bit strange.. lolz.. my mind gives me strange ideas for my stories lately.. but I can't stop myself from writing them.. Will try to write more HOT scenes.. hihi but I'll add them too on my 2 on-going series.. 'HOLD MY HEART FOREVER and CONTRACT' :)


whew to be honest I just write it in a rush, well not actually rush but in a small amount of time.. an hour maybe? I don't know.. I just write the crazy ideas on my head last. I hope it will go well with my other readers as well.. hihi
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: Mai-chan on August 09, 2012, 11:24:44 AM
OMAYGAH~!!! :luvluv1: I was reading this on the cellphone yesterday so I didn't have the chance to say the feedback DX

The Joke that became real is just~!!!   :mon lovelaff: :mon blood: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon angel:

Kei-san please make moar~!!! :kneelbow: I ship them so hard....:farofflook:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: Keisthename on August 09, 2012, 01:27:09 PM
@Mai-chan: ohoho.. You're preferring to The Only Thing that Won't Change right? hihi Glad you like it but oh-ohw.. sorry for the hot scenes lolz...
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: Mai-chan on August 10, 2012, 06:08:20 AM
@Mai-chan: ohoho.. You're preferring to The Only Thing that Won't Change right? hihi Glad you like it but oh-ohw.. sorry for the hot scenes lolz...

hahaha no it's ok  :on lol: as for the power of love~!!! It's awesome~!!they met for the 1st time then almost make love?!WOAH~!!! :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
I wish it was longer though  :prayers: wehehe~ anyways~! I'm rooting for your future works and always expect that I'm going to read them no matter what it takes~!
well if it's atsumina ofcourse~ :hehehe:  again~! Ganbatte~! and more power to you Kei-san~!  :on woohoo:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” (ATSUMINA) OS
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 10, 2012, 04:01:21 PM
Please make a one shot fanfic of atsumina thank you
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” [AtsuMina] 8-8-12 Update
Post by: Keisthename on August 11, 2012, 08:05:10 AM
@Wmatsui22: yeah  I already did.. Power of Love is my latest one and yes it's an OS..  http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1076460#msg1076460 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.msg1076460#msg1076460)

Ermm.. I don't know if I'll be able to make new stories for the mean time.. SO.. ehehehe... i dont know.. lolz  :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” [AtsuMina] 8-8-12 Update
Post by: Tanchan on August 11, 2012, 08:18:12 AM
Kei-san I'm still waiting for your new OS as well as the next update of contract
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: “The Power of Love” [AtsuMina] 8-8-12 Update
Post by: Megumi on August 13, 2012, 12:22:33 AM
I tough this was woow Minami have powers!
and then she met Acchan their conversation made me :rofl:

Minamis fail expression LOL


Thank you for AtsuMina OS!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 15, 2012, 02:33:21 PM
So Atsuko is a prostitute... .....I..... No comment about that!
How can she talk to Minami like that!?!?! Ah!!! It's pissing me of!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: arrow27 on August 15, 2012, 03:22:18 PM
It's really great :D Pretty shocking of how Atsuko treats Minami! But it''s interesting and I hope to read more so please continue ^^
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: Tanchan on August 16, 2012, 04:24:04 AM
I like this pls update. However I thought while reading it that it would be better if Minami was someone that Acchan met after she had chosen this path and then they will fall in love later on, rather them being childhood friend.
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: Haruko on August 16, 2012, 08:23:21 AM
OMG poor minami.. acchan... a whore?! wooooooow
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 16, 2012, 11:35:46 AM
Please update your fanfic "willl you take my hand?"

please

thank you

i'm atsumina fan
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: ichikawa on August 16, 2012, 07:09:14 PM
Acchan is a what?!  :shock:
Life is too hard for her  :OMG:
She even rejected Minami?  :fainted:
Absolutely shocked and interested on this fic  :thumbup
Waiting for the next part  :) :)
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: Megumi on August 18, 2012, 08:05:38 PM
 :cry: Atsumina!

 :shocked Super interesting plot!

 :cry: Acchan! Now I wanna cry....

*dies

Very interesting fic can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: Sese on August 18, 2012, 08:51:33 PM
WAOOOOWWWW..........  :shocked

this is really interesting, please update!!  :banghead:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 8-15-12 Update
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 19, 2012, 06:47:39 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THE WILL YOU TAKE MY HAND

PLEASE THANK YOU

IT'S VERY NICE
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: Haruko on September 05, 2012, 05:17:32 AM
I feel that acchan deserve that.. of course minami gonna fin another woman.. jejej but tomochin was a b*"ch... in this fic..

come on acchan fight for your husband..
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: arrow27 on September 05, 2012, 05:45:21 AM
First HAPPY BIRTHDAY :D & Thanks for the update :D I really love this fanfic & was happy when I saw there was an update ^^ Really awesome chapter. Glad Atsuko finally realized that she'd been treating Minami unfairly. The ending was sad with Acchan's breakdown but the results were to be expected. Thanks again for the update, I look forword to reading the next chapter :D

Hope you had an awesome b-day btw :)
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 05, 2012, 10:54:15 AM
Oh, TakaTomo!! God I love them!!! Don't know why! (LOL)
I want to know what happens next, please update soon!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: rhin12 on September 05, 2012, 11:09:19 AM
Happy Birthday to you~~

Thanks for the update.. more power to you and your stories  :D

hope you can update "The Contract" too  :nervous

Acchan should stop doing the prostitute thing.. it breaks my heart..  :cry:

minami, don't be so hard on atsuko.. she's been through alot in this story..  XD

hahahaha..

happy bday again keisthename  :thumbsup
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: Wmatsui22 on September 05, 2012, 12:53:43 PM
wow!!!

finally updated!!!

i'm so happy right now!!!

thanks for updating..

i like your work very much..

please update more often..

Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: Megumi on September 06, 2012, 10:15:07 PM
Kyyaaaa! Finally update!
Acchan! Why! She's realise it AFTER Minami gonna leave.  :cry:
People tend to not appreciate another until they go away...

Thank you for your update!
Can't wait for next!
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 09-05-12 (Part 2) Update
Post by: chiqinna on October 05, 2012, 04:13:17 PM
poor  Acchan~ but you deserve it..
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: Mai-chan on October 27, 2012, 01:05:32 AM
HOLLY MOLY!!!!! FINALLY ITS UPDATED~!!! :farofflook: Happiness is inside me again~ :on gay:

Anyways...KEI!It has been a while!I missed you~  :shy2: even though we chat on facebook

and what can I say?another great fan fiction finished kei!and for that congrats  :on GJ:

I'm still looking forward to your future works!please don't stop on writing atsumina fictions  :pleeease:

that's all~ and good luck to the things that are troubling you lately!be sure to surpass them!  :scolding: ehhherrmmm good luck... :sweat:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: yourockme on October 27, 2012, 01:23:44 AM
already finish???
HUHUHU...xD
Whaaa arigatou Kei san
whoooooo my atsumina  :deco:
soo sweet I wonder if you will put labiDabi scene  :jerk:
 
please make another another another atsumina fics
or KaiAcchan fics XDDDDDD
 O0 :cow: :cow: thank you very much
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: giakb48ff on October 27, 2012, 02:48:16 AM
OMGIRLSSSSSSSS!! I LOVE THISS!!! THANK YOU1!! I LOVE YOUR FANFIC !! ATSUMINA!!!!  :deco:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: Pdpond on October 27, 2012, 04:11:23 AM
 Happy ending  :deco:
Thanks for update!
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: Calyrica on October 27, 2012, 04:26:27 AM
Yay! I really liked it, especially the ending! Atsuko was such an interesting character in this, especially with her job. XD
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: Haruko on October 27, 2012, 07:02:51 AM
Aww with this final chapter i felt butterflies in my stomach... cuteeeeeeee...
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: hidden_player on October 27, 2012, 08:41:33 AM
Atsuko is so lucky to have someone like Minami love her :shy1:


A great ending for a great fic :heart:
Hope to read more fics from you and thanks for your hard work :on cny2:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 28, 2012, 09:32:33 PM
I love the ending. Thanm you for this great story!!
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: saeyukilover on October 29, 2012, 12:24:22 AM
me: Minami will give you my soul including my h~~ :smhid hmmm? body  :lol:  :shakeit:

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 30, 2012, 10:41:27 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's wonderful ending..

thank you..

i hope you make also kaiRay fanfic..

thank You
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Will You Take My Hand?” [AtsuMina] 10-27 (part 3-END)
Post by: kahem on November 02, 2012, 01:15:18 AM
wow!!!! OMG!!!! You made my heart feel weird and also made me cry lol
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: yourockme on November 14, 2012, 11:37:44 AM
LOL poor MINAMI  :mon scare:
yatta cuuttee  :on cny2:
XDD Thank you  :mon olympic:
Arghh I miss Acchan  :err:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 14, 2012, 12:14:36 PM

"Is that the way you really say sorry? Geez.. but sure! I love you too, Let's spend the night together. Make me happy Atsuko!" Minami smiled which faded away as she realized what she get herself into.

"Challenge Accepted, I'll make you scream of happiness!" Atsuko grinned and immeasurable happiness came back to her beautiful face.


That made me laugh. I wonder what they are going to do.... :on bleed:
It's a good OS, so don't worry.
Update SOON!!
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: Pdpond on November 14, 2012, 04:19:19 PM
Good OS!!
i'm image so farrr..... :deco:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: bimbo on November 14, 2012, 04:26:24 PM
I love it !  XD
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: giakb48ff on November 15, 2012, 01:26:27 AM
HAHAH so cute atsumina!! thank you  :thumbup :deco: :cathappy:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: hidden_player on November 15, 2012, 02:11:44 AM
What a good OS so don't say that you're not good at making these :k-great:

I love the ending the most, so cute and so... Acchan :hiakhiakhiak:


Waiting patiently for your next update/OS :wub:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: Haruko on November 15, 2012, 06:36:03 AM

"Is that the way you really say sorry? Geez.. but sure! I love you too, Let's spend the night together. Make me happy Atsuko!" Minami smiled which faded away as she realized what she get herself into.

"Challenge Accepted, I'll make you scream of happiness!" Atsuko grinned and immeasurable happiness came back to her beautiful face.


That made me laugh. I wonder what they are going to do.... :on bleed:
It's a good OS, so don't worry.
Update SOON!!

yeah!! we know it!! :D
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 01:58:32 PM
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for interesting OS fanfic

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: fausto on November 19, 2012, 02:30:33 PM
Baka Atsuko...But so cute in the end!!  :banghead: :banghead: God I love this pairing, I miss them so much... :cry: But thank you for this fic, update soon!!!
Title: fanfic
Post by: stepk on December 07, 2012, 12:29:06 AM
Really like it...   :inlove:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: cisda83 on December 17, 2012, 01:32:51 PM
very sweet story...

I really like all your stories.

Well can't wait to see the next story.

And thank you for the fic.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: ryeangryu on December 24, 2012, 09:10:20 AM
omg, i love this!! i love the ending!  :on woohoo: great story! i hope you'll continue more stories !  :kneelbow: :hee:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: DarkEye on December 24, 2012, 09:17:20 AM
D'awwwww I like the ending  :twothumbs

keep writing kei! :thumbsup
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: den_takacchan on March 18, 2013, 05:56:34 PM
so good!! i'm glad that in the end they've both reconcile hehe!!  :cow: . ahh btw please write

more atsumina fics  :mon inluv: i'm dying to read fics that has them for main character!!  :mon XD: heheh i'm an atsumina

shipper!  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: mae on March 18, 2013, 07:07:22 PM
really good fic thank you
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "It Should Have Been Me” [AtsuMina] 11-14 (OS)
Post by: Archer1992 on April 16, 2013, 07:01:26 PM
very good FF
you're very talented
wait the following story
thank you very much for the wonderful reading you gave me
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: hazwani on May 04, 2013, 05:48:36 PM
nice story..
i hope atsumina will back together..
argh..
atsumina the best :heart:

lol..
takamina so tired and try her best to meet acchan.
arghh..
acchan why you do that to takamina..

atsumina please  :inlove:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: Elo on May 04, 2013, 05:59:50 PM
it is sooooooooo sad

please make them together and update hurry the second scene
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: cisda83 on May 04, 2013, 06:30:24 PM
Ara.... Minami is so clumsy here...

Ah... What's Yuko's real reason to always accompaniying Atsuko all the time?

I can understand Atsuko frustration...

Whoever give Minami so much work should reduced it...

Poor Atsuko not able to have even a proper meal together with Minami....

Ah... Atsuko said "break-up"

Minami is so hard broken...

Atsuko has been hiding her feeling trying to understand Minami's situation

But she has reached her limit until she exploded with blindly rage

How are they going to get back together?

Would Minami stepped up and tried to get back with Atsuko?

Or would this be Atsuko that going to try to get back with Minami?

What's going to happen next... Can't wait

Thank you for the new OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: chichay12 on May 04, 2013, 06:46:47 PM
kei~~
ur back!!
but but but..
why?? my atsumina  :cry: :cry:
pls update soon :nervous
thank you  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: Hii_chan on May 04, 2013, 06:59:46 PM
you came back :welcome
and you take my Atsumina apart :cry:
i won't forgive you unless you made me some perv fic O0 O0
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: nao707 on May 04, 2013, 07:19:44 PM
Wow..... :farofflook:

I read your fanfic without blink at all. This is soo amazinggg fanfic! I need more! hahahahahahaha as always kei-san, you are a very good writer. :mon thumb:

Please update soon.. also the "contract" fanfic.  :kneelbow:

thank you :)
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: arrow27 on May 04, 2013, 07:45:07 PM
Thanks for the update!! Great fic!! *___* Atsumina is still so sweet but they def have their troubles here :( Both of them are trying to make the relationship work and that's what matters. Minami was taking a mature appraoch but when she heard Atsuko say "break up" it really hurt her :(

Hopefully they'll be able to work things out!! Looking forward to the next part!!
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: mae on May 04, 2013, 07:58:48 PM
Great fic again thank you ;)
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-04-13 SCENE 1
Post by: Keisthename on May 05, 2013, 10:08:01 AM
haha thanks everyone for reading this, XD actually this should've been an OS but the ending I'm having a hard time about it. so I need to post it by scenes. errr..

actually if I'm going to look at it, this 1st scene can be an OS already. wwww you know they ended up breaking up.. lololol
I love dramas XD  :heart:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-11-13 SCENE 2
Post by: Elo on May 11, 2013, 02:29:24 PM
thanks that you updated I have waited for it

acchan go for takamina and make up
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-11-13 SCENE 2
Post by: cisda83 on May 11, 2013, 02:30:13 PM
EH.... Minami turned down the opportunity to sing aboard

So she could be with Atsuko...

Poor Minami

Atsuko broke up with her... even though she didn't really mean it...

She was just saying in the moment of heat,

What's going to happen next?

Would Atsuko able to apologize to Minami?

Would Minami able to accept Atsuko's apology...?

Would they go back together?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-11-13 SCENE 2
Post by: arrow27 on May 11, 2013, 02:42:10 PM
Thanks for the update!!! Really loving this fic :D

Glad Yuko is there trying to help out! & wow, so Minami gave up an oppertunity like that just to stay with Atsuko, she really loves her. No wonder she was devistated when Atsuko said the break up workds :(

Hopefully Atsuko can find the courage to apologize since she really didn't want to be seperated from Minami!

Thanks again for the update! Looking forward to what happens next :D
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-11-13 SCENE 2
Post by: chichay12 on May 11, 2013, 03:49:37 PM
YATTA~~~
an update!!  :w00t:
i cant wait what will happen next  :drool:
thank you for the update!!  XD XD
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "Reasons” 05-11-13 SCENE 2
Post by: mae on May 11, 2013, 03:50:26 PM
Thank you for update ;)
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "A First Love at 7:12 a.m.” 06-01-13 OS
Post by: cisda83 on June 01, 2013, 09:53:06 AM
Great OS as always.... Atsumina

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: "A First Love at 7:12 a.m.” 06-01-13 OS
Post by: Elo on June 01, 2013, 12:51:31 PM
will you update reason too please I read your OS I love it

but I want the continuation of reason please

please update it ^^
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: 10 Fanfics SOON! (July 1-10) Read Details
Post by: cisda83 on June 03, 2013, 04:14:42 PM
I like to see Atsumina the best...

but if you want me to choose I would want to see AtsuTomo and AtsuNyan the best.

As for the song suited for Atsumina...

my favorites are Omoide no Hotondo and Migikata, those songs always brought me to tears all the time.

Well that's the answer for your questions from me...Keisthename-san

Thank you...

Can't wait to see your story... whatever it will be...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: 10 Fanfics SOON! (July 1-10) Read Details
Post by: Elo on June 03, 2013, 04:29:11 PM
I love atsumina too

for question 1 I would say that it is Kinjirareta futari

for question 2 I would say that this would be yuko ^^

I cant wait for your fiics ^^

cant you please post it here  :cry:
Title: Re: KEI’S Short Fics: 10 Fanfics SOON! (July 1-10) Read Details UPDATE 6-4-13
Post by: nao707 on June 04, 2013, 06:26:50 PM
your last fanfic is cute. I love it. :wigglypanda:

Good luck for your next project.. I'm still waiting for the 'drama'.. hohohohoho :glasses:

anyway, i post a comment to your blog.. but somehow linked to my google account automatically.. hahahaha..  :err:
Title: Re: OS "Stay" 01-04-14
Post by: Minami-chan on January 04, 2014, 11:45:14 PM
OMG! I LOVE IT, i really like this emocional fic ....
Title: Re: OS "Stay" 01-04-14
Post by: amachan48 on January 05, 2014, 02:20:28 AM
hello kei-san..

well.... I think I got the real meaning of this fic. it's about Haruna, right??? hehehehe.

well, thanks for the update and please update Contract soon too :)
Title: Re: OS "Stay" 01-04-14
Post by: cisda83 on January 05, 2014, 02:36:57 AM
Ah... I see..

Yeah.. the most likely to graduate out of the members would be Haruna

Not only she is the 1st Gen and she is the oldest there after Mariko's graduation

I would think Minami would want Haruna to stay a bit longer...

May be all the no3b can graduate at the 10th Anniversary or something like...

Well very nice OS

Thank you

Can't wait to see more OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

 
Title: Re: OS "Stay" 01-04-14
Post by: deguchi on January 05, 2014, 05:31:51 PM
Too much feeling there..
though I just known these girls last few months now, their bond for each others really amazed me. And this so called graduation of 48family..
Really love this OS..thanks..for this one
Title: Re: Will You Take My Hand Sequel II (Atsumina) 1-12-14
Post by: KaoriChan on January 12, 2014, 12:26:28 PM
I can't stop laughing the moment Atsuko walked in and Minami panicking  :on lol: (Poor tv)

and my Mom accusing me that i'm Crazy  :mon unsure:

Kei-San How about Sequel III  :mon whimper:

AtsuMina!! :mon inluv:
Title: Re: Will You Take My Hand Sequel II (Atsumina) 1-12-14
Post by: deguchi on January 12, 2014, 01:53:56 PM
Takamina get chought in act!! XD
nice OS! Please more~
Title: Re: Will You Take My Hand Sequel II (Atsumina) 1-12-14
Post by: cisda83 on January 12, 2014, 11:36:31 PM
Interesting and funny

when Minami was caught watch that kind of show by Atsuko...

Ah... Minami is so cute... worrying that she could not satisfy Atsuko so she wanted to learn

But Atsuko is such a teaser....

Thank you for the fun OS

Can't wait to see more Atsumina

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Feat on March 02, 2014, 07:56:45 AM
Kei-san~ Thank you for this.

I'm happy about the AtsuMina fic but

This needs a sequel.  :cry:

Are you planning for a sequel for this?  :D
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Keisthename on March 02, 2014, 08:31:47 AM
@ Feat: Maybe yes and maybe not XD Depends on how much I'll be pushed to make one. w lol  :twisted:
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: amachan48 on March 02, 2014, 09:28:34 AM
let's just make Atsuko realize that she has feeling for Minami and when she realize that, Minami has already move on and find another person :v
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Tanchan on March 02, 2014, 09:34:41 AM
@ Feat: Maybe yes and maybe not XD Depends on how much I'll be pushed to make one. w lol  :twisted:

Keichan do you want me to unfriend you again XD?
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: atsukojiyuu_C on March 02, 2014, 04:12:18 PM
You also post here, and i've read from your blog  :lol:

as i found in your previous tweet   :bingo:
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Keisthename on March 03, 2014, 01:22:15 AM
@amachan48: haha nice ending! break her heart Minami!!!  :angry: lol

@Tanchan: That seemed to become a huge threat to me now XD

@atsukojiyuu_C: Oh really? thanks! Seemed like you're very much updated about my fics in a few social media. XD Thank you! :)
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Tanchan on March 03, 2014, 03:54:34 AM
If it works on you, I don't mind using it time and again XD. But seriously, we need a sequel of that, let me recommend you an idea: when Acchan has realized her feelings, instead of having Takamina moving forward like amachan suggested, Takamina's old crush - Rina, suddenly shows up in her life gain, how's that? I can imagine all the angst that will come with it :twisted:.
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: ichikawa on March 06, 2014, 06:08:03 PM
Nice to see your update  :mon inluv: sequel pleaseeee~  :mon squee:
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: takashu on March 11, 2014, 10:10:37 AM
It is so sad ...
sequel please !!!

make atsuko realizes his feelings for Minami and broke up with her boyfriend..please....
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: cisda83 on March 12, 2014, 03:06:36 AM
Ah Minami was broken heart to know that Atsuko had a boyfriend

When she believed that they would have a future together as a couple

Very interesting story there, thank you

Can't wait to see some more of Atsumina story

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Feat on March 12, 2014, 02:04:12 PM
Kei-san~

Looks like I'm not the only one who needs the sequel.  XD
Title: Re: The Truth (Atsumina Fanfic) 03-02-14
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on March 12, 2014, 03:42:50 PM
So sad... Poor Minami :cry:
We are needs the squel  :D
Title: Re: [PREQUEL] Majisuka Gakuen: The Beginning CHAPTER 1 3-27-14
Post by: ketsnegova on March 27, 2014, 03:31:17 PM
Very interesting fanfic. :w00t: I like, as you develop the relationship between, Yuko and Minami. I look forward to continue ... :wub:
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: ubulubulbilu on May 25, 2014, 05:39:28 PM
Finally u update this one. I've been waiting for a month.
I love the jealousy feeling of Acchan, u should put it more next time XD
Thx for this fanfic, pls more update soon author san  :cow:
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: Haruko on May 25, 2014, 11:04:08 PM
i like atsumina.. but IDONT LIKE WHAT ACCHAN ITS DOING WITH BOTH... poor onho he doesn´t deserve that... and of course minami either.. yeah atsuko is confused  but.. she is playing with fire..
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: edogawa4869 on May 31, 2014, 05:15:11 PM
author-san, why can't I access your blog???
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: Kakeru15 on May 31, 2014, 06:06:07 PM
Acchan so jealous hmm... But I think takamina is right, because acchan not her girlfriend yet!!   :roll:

Please update soon author-san :twothumbs
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: lezperv on June 01, 2014, 06:16:08 AM
Everyone seem to be able to enter Kei-chan's blog... am i the only one who can't? I was able to before, but now I can't...
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: ubulubulbilu on June 01, 2014, 08:08:09 AM
We cant access ur blog now Kei san
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 02, 2014, 02:37:23 AM
Can't accsess too... Pity really wanted to read it.
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: Keisthename on June 02, 2014, 05:12:34 AM
The blog is currently private..
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 02, 2014, 07:38:33 PM
Then why are you posting this here if people can't accsess it?
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: lezperv on June 02, 2014, 08:28:44 PM
Then why are you posting this here if people can't accsess it?

it was accessible before, I think she just needs to modify it for a bit or make some changes... just give her time
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: Keisthename on June 07, 2014, 06:27:55 PM
Then why are you posting this here if people can't accsess it?

I hope you're happy enough that the blog is now back. I can feel your frustrations over it and I feel so disappointed.
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 08, 2014, 01:05:41 PM
Then why are you posting this here if people can't accsess it?

I hope you're happy enough that the blog is now back. I can feel your frustrations over it and I feel so disappointed.

Disappointed? I was just aking a question. I did not mean to offend you and yes I was frustrated, because you are good and I like reading your fics.
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: souchan48 on July 25, 2014, 08:27:06 AM
Hi Au-san, Can I translate your fic into Vietnamese? I wanna share it with my friends cuz it's really interesting.
Title: Re: [ATSUMINA FANFIC] Our Story Chapter 3: TakAtsuko 5/25/2014
Post by: Keisthename on August 05, 2014, 05:11:33 AM
Hi Au-san, Can I translate your fic into Vietnamese? I wanna share it with my friends cuz it's really interesting.

Sure, just put my blog's url