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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 21, 2012, 08:14:02 PM
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Im the Mafia's daughter
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"Seriously all I did was go to a freaking cafe and im being shot at are you kidding me right now!" I shouted dodging bullets and fists that where constantly being thrown at my face.
A foot then came flying towards my face i caught it in my hand and elbowed the joint of the leg causing it to make a horrible cracking sound of the leg breaking.I then dropped the leg to the floor and ran behind a table that had been thrown over to its side.My breath was hitching and my heart racing what could i do?The only way out had been blocked and all these innocent people are suffering because of me its all my fault.
I looked to my right to see a women in her early twentys holding a baby girl whispering to it and rubbing its back while tears fell down her cheek then i looked to my left to see dead lifeless bodies placed on top of eachother as if they where protecting eachother.My heart tore into pieces seeing these images im a bad person i am making all these people suffer or worse die.
Someone help!
I could hear police telling people to back away outside the cafe and people screaming for there loved ones everyones names was being shouted but mine.But what can i expect its not like i tried to be close to anyone and this right here is exactly why.
I got to my feet and bullets zoomed past my face i held my breath and closed my eyes making the world slow down just like i was taught by my father and span on my heels opening my eyes and in a split second i had knocked out 3 of the 6 people that have been trying to kill me.
I took a gun from one of there hands and shot at the remaining three hitting one in the chest one in the leg and the other in the arm.I ran over to the three of them and stomped on there wounds making the screech in pain.I snatched the guns from there hand and slid them to the other half of the cafe where the dead bodies where.
"Oh my god you saved us!" I heard a women shout and just then police barged into the cafe in full uniform and bullet proof vests holding there guns in the air shouting "Stop your under arrest." Idiots "Your to late this girl just saved us." A girl belowed at the police they all looked down in guilt then i figured that i should get going before they start praising me or something stupid.
I ran out of the cafe before they could confront me and headed home straight away i know my father would have heard about the attack and would be worried so its for the best its not like i have anyone or anywhere else to go to.
Im Itano Tomomi and im the mafia's daughter and this is about my life and how i met the love of my life.
to be continued ...
A/N : So did you like it ???!!!!! I hope so ive been wanting to make a fic where Tomomi is the main person init for a long time now so i hope you want this to continue thanks for reading.
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tomochin as a mafia's daughter..it's interesting..i want to know how she'll meet chiyuu..
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Lol this reminds me of you're first fic a bit I like it please continue
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OKey this is cool!
I can totally imagtine Itano Tomomi in suit (since Team K ikemen music video)
So please continue!
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A/N : Thanks everyone for reading and commenting I hope you like the prolouge please comment say what you like and dislike thanks for reading
prolouge
The lights of my room flickered on and off making me wake up from my deep slumber I lifted my self up slightly to see who was disturbing my sleep.It was my father standing there with a smug look on his why because he done what everyone in this house failed to do and that was to wake me up.
"Good morning honey."
"Morning father."
"Get ready for school okay?"
"Hai."
He left my room and I plopped my head back down onto the pillow hoping to get more sleep only for him to come back into my room and throw my school skirt onto my face you know cause he is nice like that.I heared him chuckle then leave my room for a second time really how can someone like him be the renowned Mafia of Japan.Smriking to myself from his actions I changed my clothes quickly brushed my hair and teeth and put slight makeup on my face then I placed my school stuff in my bag and made my way down stairs.
I walked to the kitchen and my father was there chatting to a couple of his friends/bodyguards and when they all seen me they got from there seats bowed to me then kissed my forehead to show respect.
Of course I was use to this after all I have known these people since I was born to me they where family uncles aunties cousins sisters and brothers where what I considered them.Oh did I forget to mention myself and my father are the last of my family line since all of them where wiped out at a family reunion.That is except for my father mother sister and I but later on when I was 11 five years ago my mother died of cancer and my sister killed herself.The past couple years have been hard but my father stayed the same and so did I we never shown are weak sides to eachother we only shown the happy that way we could always smile even if it was mostly fake.Sometimes yes we did show genuine smiles but they where rare but are bond has never been stronger and im scared one day I will lose him to.
My father smacked a piece of toast on my head making me pay attention to him he shown his charming smile to me then pointed to the clock.7:40 I only had 20 minutes to get to school and I lived 30 minutes away from it great.I snatched the toast from my father and kissed his cheeks then sprinted as fast as I could to school.Luckily with the speed I was going I made it to the road that was just infront of the school I smiled at my victory but that only lasted a second.Because the gates shut early my jaw dropped this means I have to climb the schools wall great just great.
I got to the wall and flung my bag over it the climbed the pipe attached to it a couple of seconds later I was over the wall with no time to spare.I ragged my bag off the floor and ran to my class room which happaned to be on the 4th floor out of 8 of them what a bother.
Just as I arrived I seen that my sensei was late so I slapped my hands together and thanked the God I didnt believe in.But then my ears picked up an annoying sound of music and the worlds most annoying Idol Kasi Tomomi singing her new song which I didnt know the name of.All I knew was that right now like all her new songs end up it was number one and getting played way to much unfortunately for me every one in my class loves her and would marry her given the chance idiots.I slid the door open and glared at the direction from where the music came from and it instantly switched off.Oh how I love being the ice queen.
Not one person in this school knows that my father is the mafia which means there scared of me not my father this gave me the amazing feeling of power.I also didnt have any friends since I have pushed people away since I was young and not a single soul know's the true me the only thing any of them know is that I aswell as being the ice queen im the fashion queen.
I sat at my desk and the class was just filled with whispers until the sensei came into the class saying she had a big announcment for all of us.
"Now class we have a new student here today and she just wants a normal higshool life so please treat her like you would anyone else and Itano-San please be nice to her."
"No promises."
"Argh whatever everyone welcome your new classmate Kasi Tomomi!"
What did she just say I turned my head to everyone else in the class room who literally jumped out of there seats when she walked in they all started saying things like i love you marry me be my girlfriend and things like that.Did I mention this is an all girls school but everyone is like that about half of my class are together with someone and the rest have crushes and are to afraid to confess because there terrified of being rejected the wimps.
Then the new girl started her much unwanted intorduction.
"Im Kasi Tomomi please treat me well I hope we can all be friends please treat me like you would anyone else where should I sit sensei?"
She asked then my eyes darted to the seat next to me it was empty which means no please no "Please sit there in the empty seat by miss Itano." The sensei replied im so gonna kill her if I get the chance.
She nodded then sat beside me smiling to me but I just turned my head then looked out the window hoping she would just turn away and face the board while the sensei lectures on about something my father taught me when I was five.Thankfully she did and she started taking notes listening carefully to everything that came out of the sensei's mouth.
When the bell rang for break I coudnt have been happier instead of staying in the class room like most people do I went to the roof wanting to skip the class after this since its physical education.But with my luck today someone just had to come up the door opened and the face I never wanted to see walked out."Oh someone is already here." She said with a small amount disappointment in her voice "If it helps I didnt want you to be here either." I stated cockly which earned a chuckled in return which I wasnt really excepting.
"I take it your not a fan."
"Im not a fan nor a friend so dont speak to me so freely miss Tomomi."
"Your cute chiyuu~~"
"What the hell was that!"
"What was what chiyuu~~"
"That the chiyuu sound."
"Its something that I always do you would know if you where a friend or a fan."
"Well I dont want to be neither so if you excuse me."
I stood up and left the roof leaving her behind dumbfounded.Looks like I cant skip my next class since my peaceful space had been invaded.Just as I got down the steps the bell rang for the second time of the day meaning I had to do the class I hated.
I got to the gym and then realised I didnt own the schools gym clothes since I havnt done it since I began in school.So instead I walked up and sat at the side of the gym the sensei with a look shock on his face that I was here and the rest of the class looked like they needed to put there eyes back into the sockets.I shook my head at there lack of descretion of there amazment and leaned against the wall.Then the annoying beast came in trying to look perfect in her gym clothes to keep up her idol image which failed since the clothes didnt look right on her since she didnt look like a physical education kind of girl.
About five minutes into class I found myself bored of watching the girls fail at doing various things while the sensei just watched with a peverted mind and slight drool sneakly dropping from his mouth.I took out my phone from my bag and texted my father to inform him I was skipping the rest of my classes and heading to my favourite cafe which he always took me to when I was younger.
I stood up making it look like I was fixing my skirt took my bag in my hand then bolted out of the gym then out the school.Peace finally the cafe only took me a couple of minutes to get to since it was close to the school so sometimes teachers would be inside but none bothered to shout at me for skipping since they had given up on it.But something didnt feel right I could tell I was being followed.I opened the cafe door with a ding then bullets showered the windows of the cafe alarming everyone as they hid under tables and behind doors and desks.
I dived to the ground protecting my head as glass from the window rained down heavly.The bullets stopped for a moment then started again I groaned and stood up to my feet.
"Seriously all I did was go to a freaking cafe and im being shot at are you kidding me right now!" I shouted dodging bullets and fists that where constantly being thrown at my face.
A foot then came flying towards my face i caught it in my hand and elbowed the joint of the leg causing it to make a horrible cracking sound of the leg breaking.I then dropped the leg to the floor and ran behind a table that had been thrown over to its side.My breath was hitching and my heart racing what could i do?The only way out had been blocked and all these innocent people are suffering because of me its all my fault.
I looked to my right to see a women in her early twentys holding a baby girl whispering to it and rubbing its back while tears fell down her cheek then i looked to my left to see dead lifeless bodies placed on top of eachother as if they where protecting eachother.My heart tore into pieces seeing these images im a bad person i am making all these people suffer or worse die.
Someone help!
I could hear police telling people to back away outside the cafe and people screaming for there loved ones everyones names was being shouted but mine.But what can i expect its not like i tried to be close to anyone and this right here is exactly why.
I got to my feet and bullets zoomed past my face i held my breath and closed my eyes making the world slow down just like i was taught by my father and span on my heels opening my eyes and in a split second i had knocked out 3 of the 6 people that have been trying to kill me.
I took a gun from one of there hands and shot at the remaining three hitting one in the chest one in the leg and the other in the arm.I ran over to the three of them and stomped on there wounds making the screech in pain.I snatched the guns from there hand and slid them to the other half of the cafe where the dead bodies where.
"Oh my god you saved us!" I heard a women shout and just then police barged into the cafe in full uniform and bullet proof vests holding there guns in the air shouting "Stop your under arrest." Idiots "Your to late this girl just saved us." A girl belowed at the police they all looked down in guilt then i figured that i should get going before they start praising me or something stupid.
I ran out of the cafe before they could confront me and headed home straight away i know my father would have heard about the attack and would be worried so its for the best its not like i have anyone or anywhere else to go to.
As I got home my father rushed out and engulfed me into a hug full of worry and care while saying small things into my ear about how he was sorry that he coudnt protect me and such."Ive decided im giving you bodyguards you will have four they will be in your class and you will be nice walk home with them go out with them and such no arguments no nothing come with me." He says seriously which is letting me know there is no arguing with him so I nodded and followed him into the house where 4 girls sat a pair holding hands the other pair with one sitting on the lap of the other."Care to introduce yourselfs?" I asked and all if them stood up then began telling me there names and a small amount of infromation on theselves.
"Im Matsui Rena im 16 I love spicy food oh and apparently have a rather scary side."
Interesting.
"Im Matsui Jurina im 15 no relation to Rena im her girlfriend and the only one who can calm her scary side."
Sort of weird.
"Im Watanabe Mayu im 15 I love manga erm im smart and I dont like to talk much."
Odd girl.
"Im Kashiwagi Yuki im 16 I also have a scary side im pretty fast im Mayu's girlfriend and im the only one that can make her interested in a conversation and make her heart beat crazy also I am the leader of the four of us just call us by are first names please no formalities we dont like them."
Too talkative.
"Ahh I see well in that case just call me whatever you like im Itano Tomomi obviously the one you will be protecting." I replied.
"Can we call you Tomochin?" The one with a cat smile asked damit I have already forgot her name."Erm yer sure where are you all staying by the way?"
"Your father says we are living her in the two rooms on your left and right and we will start on tommorow we are already in your schools data base since I hacked it oh and here starting tommorow you will be taking part in every lesson encluding physical eductaion your fathers orders." The girl I believe to be called Mayu replied I didnt question her instead I went to my room and flopped my body onto my comfy bed quickly drifting off to a peacfull bliss no problamatic world.
To be continued ....
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Wow she's a good fighter and lol unlucky for her needing to do all of her pe classes
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Ah, Rena-sama appeared! Are KojiYuu and AtsuMina going to be in this story aswell?
So far I like it. ;-)
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chap 1
In all honesty ive never been one to follow the crowd or even talk for that matter.I have always enjoyed peace and quiet not the hustle and bustle of the loud city of Tokyo but of course my life is slightly different of those who work for a living and go to school.I have daily death threats placed on my familys name all saying there going to kill us in ways that my mind cant seem to wrap around since some seem impossible.Right now im letting my ears be tortured by the sound of a drowning voice that comes from the tiny sensei who is showing the class how to solve a maths problem that is rather easy even if I say so myself.I found myself looking around the classroom catching glimpses of my so called bodyguards that are placed in each corner of the room one reading manga another sleeping one listening and writing things down every now and then and the last trying to wake the one who is sleeping by throwing paper balls when the sensei isnt looking.A bunch of idiotic baboons if you ask me I can protect myself better than what these for can.
I looked at my white strapped watch only to notice I had another hour of this boring voice till I get to go home sorry until we get to go home.I groaned loudly only for the midget sensei to turn around a give me a death glare which failed.I chuckled and her face started to turn red with anger but she just let everything slide turning back to the board and explaing everything again.Did I mention that im smarter than everyone in this class and im not being big headed seriously im not my father the softie mafia made me learn 5 diffenrent languages when I was younger and everything the schools learn and x100 more just at the simple age of 5.
So thanks to him I can speak : English,Korean,Indonesian,Chinese and french because he wants me to be the mafia when he dies.I dont really want to but what can I do he is my only family.Then my ears caught a cute little noise coming from the desk next to me obviously I had to look to see what it was.Turns out miss Idol sneezed well that was my gusse since she pulled out a tissue blowing her nose quietly as not to disturbe the class.I think she noticed my eyes burning holes into her since she looked in my direction and her face went the colour of a strawberry.It looked sort of adorable but like hell would I say that to her actually I think she is sick."Are you okay you seem ill?" I asked trying to sound like I cared but sort of failed since my tone was flat."Im fine I just have a cold." I shook my head at this girl "If you have a cold then your not fine." I replied sounding angry wait why am I angry oh why do I care forget it."Its only a cold." She says annoyed at the easy going attitude I waved my hand in defeat not wanting to argue with the girl.
Bored I wanted to cause trouble so with a pen in one hand a pencil in the other I started playing the drums on my desk getting louder each time oh did I metion I can play violin piano drums guitar and flute I know im such an over achiever and im 16 once again blame my father."Miss Tomomi stop right now or step outside." Okay looks like she isnt taking much today I stood from my desk walked outside and leaned agaisnt the wall sliding down on it till my butt reached the floor.About five minutes later some one came out from the class room walked infront of me and bent down so they where face to face."You know you shoudnt cause trouble for the sensei." She said I scoffed then replied "You know you shoudnt talk to strangers." Seems I caught her off guard with that "Well then im Kasi Tomomi age 16 im an Idol and I dont like being treated differently you?" I chuckled at her action mabye she wasnt that bad "Im Itano Tomomi age 16 ice queen." I answered shorty she laughed and sat down next to me putting her head on my shoulder I didnt remember saying she could do that.
I hate personal contact a kiss on the head or cheek is the most I can take so this was going over the line but somehow this felt right so I didnt stop her."Can I call you Tomochin?" She question.Tomochin sounds like a nice nickname "I gusse." I could see a huge smile take up half her face when I said those words."Then you can call me Chiyuu~~." I nodded my head to her making her smile even more "Just because your not a fan of my music doesnt mean we cant be friends right?" Chiyuu asked.Friends ive never had one I took a peek at her hopeful face that was still leaning on my shoulder "I suppose." I swear that smile coudnt get any bigger how did she just break through my walls like they werent there in the first place mabye im going soft.
"Can I have your phone?"
"What for?"
"Please chiyuu~~~~."
"And here I thought you stopped that."
"Only when im with my fans."
"So you dont need my phone."
"No I do I do."
"Okay by the way are you okay now since you have a cold?"
"Yup im fine hehehe."
She took my phone from my hand typing something in and handed it back "Its my number chiyuu~~."I checked my phone and yup there it was her number saved as Chiyuu <3 Tomochin I gave her a confused look but she just blushed.I didnt change it instead I just left it and placed my phone back into my skirt pocket."You dont have many contacts you have 6 now including me." She says sounding sad "Im not that sociable."Was all I said for my answer im not going to tell her the truth.Not saying anything she stood up patted her skirt down then went to the class door "It would be abit odd if I was gone all class woudnt it oh mabye we can do something after school text me your answer." She said then walked inside the classroom what a strange girl and she is ment to be Japan's number one Idol.
Before I knew it class had ended and I was able to get my things and meet my body guards outside."Tomo~~chin so can we do something now?"Was all I heard that voice had to be Chiyuu all the students around that where just going to ask Chiyuu that same question froze understandable really.I just nodded my head and she skipped foward and linked are arms together and we headed outside to meet the others."Its about time I was bored." Jurina complained "Shut up little girl." I snapped back "Vampire!" She fired back "Wannabe badass!" I shot back shutting her up completely thats what I thought."You shoudnt fight Tomo~~chin." I didnt argue back instead I stayed silent and let her enjoy her victory."Can we go now?" Mayu asked not looking up from her Manga "Im going to the cafe you all go ahead." I told them with Chiyuu still holding onto me."No we will come with you." The girl with black hair said I think her names Yuki.Rena the pale girl didnt say a thing "Fine!" I shouted pulling Chiyuu with me I dont think any of them payed close attention to her.
When we got to the cafe it was still all banged up from when them people tried to kill me but it was sort of better.The 6 of us entered the cafe and the owners face lit up "Its the girl that save us the other day you can have anything on the house same for your friends and OH MY GOD ITS THE NATIONS LITTE SISTER KASI TOMOMI!" The women screamed making all eyes focus on us Chiyuu closened are distance because people started to run up and ask for her autograph scaring her then her head was tucked into my neck and her arms around me holding on for dear life as we where being pushed as people got even closer.My bodyguards didnt do a thing instead they sat down on a random table and enjoyed the show here I thought they where ment to protect me.
"YAH STOP THIS RIGHT NOW CANT YOU SEE THAT SHE IS SCARED ARE YOU REALLY THAT DENSE AND STUPID!" I shouted at a defening highpitch covering Chiyuu's ears and making everyone step back and realize what they had been doing.All of them stepped back bowing and saying sorry slowly walking back to where they sat before hand."Thanks Tomo~~chin." Was all I heard in between little sniffles "Its okay." I said stroking the back of her head and heading to the table where the others at sending a death glare to each one.
After that everything went great we took her back to her home (Mansion) then headed back to my one not eating tea I went straight to bed and my head hit the pillow instanly falling alseep not even getting a chance to change my clothes.
To be continued ....
A/N : Just so you all know Mayuki and Wmatsui did know that Tomomi was an Idol they just didnt care since Tomochin is the person they need to protect
Thankyou for reading my fic I hope it was worth it I writ it watching the olympic swimming GB is doing terriable im sad but still im sporting China ahahaha
@Adam : Ahaha now you know how I feel PE is such a annoying lesson
@Sakura_Drop_ : Yer they will be lets just say the school isnt safe for Tomochin anf Takamina is already init I have mentioned her but not actually her name can you gusse who she is oh an I have to ask this will you be my 2NE1 sister lol
Please comment say what you liked and what I need to improve any questions feel free to ask I will answer you when I can
Once again thanks for reading
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ah there will be Mayuki and Wmatsui?! XD I wanna read more~ so Tomomi is and idol and Tomochin is from the mafia~
it is interessting please continue~
update soon~ XD
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I wouldn't think that they friends awww the mafia and a idol lol what a partnership lol and it was dead cute how she gave tomochin her number awww :wub: and
watching the olympic swimming GB is doing terriable im sad but still im sporting China ahahaha
Lol were doing great now everything we touch turns. To gold lol get that? :P
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2NE1 sister, thank you for this update!!! :deco: :deco: :deco:
It was a fun read.. We all know that Tomochin, despite her tsundere chara, is always soft to Chiyuu, nee? XD XD
Bakamina is just not fit to be the teacher, now is she? XD XD She always gets mocked by the likes like Tomochin XD XD But we love both of them, so it's okay, at least we can have a good laugh, nee? :lol:
I love those bodyguards :wub:
And PE was not annoying at all, I loved it when I was at school, or on the first year of my studies :yep:
Olympics... One part of it was great, when our swimmer Meilutyte won gold :twothumbs
But our basketball team lost to France... :banghead: :banghead:
And I'm still waiting for Yuko-sama to appear (I'm too jumpy, from topic to topic, but oh well 8) )
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It's an interesting fic :glasses:
cantinue :on GJ:
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Tomotomo!!!! I like it!!! The bodyguards team is awesome!!!
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Please COntinued...
This sound Interesting fics
I wonder does a Mafia have a Body Guard ??? :dunno:
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chapter 2
I walked through the school gates finally ontime for once with the four stooges following me I took a deep breath knowing today was going to be hard.
If your thinking why I will explain right now ......
Flashback
I woke up and rolled of the bed with a bang as I hit the floor changing quickly I slowly made my way down the stairs and the maid came straight to me "Your father wants to see you in his study." She told me I nodded to the squirral like women "Is that all?" I asked she shook her head in responce "No he asked me to accompany you to his study to."I gave her questioning look but she just shrugged and the two of us went to my old mans study.
I knocked on the door twice then walked in to be greeted with a stern look as I did."You wanted to see me father that is what this maid said."
"Yes I did and that maid is called Yuko now the reason ive asked for the two of you is serious okay now Tomomi I heard you made a friend that friend happens to be Kasi Tomomi the number one idol in Japan am I right?"
"Yes father."
"I do not allow it when you get to school today you will ignore her and end this friendship of yours its dangerous or her and you okay?"
"Bu-"
"No buts if you want her safe you will obey me."
"Yes father I will ignore her if that is what you wish."
"Thankyou okay Yuko you will be going to her school and you are going to be the new nurse I want you to keep an eye on her and those body guards I hired there not doing the job very well is that okay with you Yuko."
"Yes sir I will go there right away if you will excuse me."
"You are excused Tomomi its almost time for you to go to so go with your body guards now go."
"Yes father bye."
I walked out of his study behind Yuko angry and upset not knowing what else to do I ragged my bag of the table in the kitched and stormed out of the house while my body guards rushed to keep up with me.
end of flash back
So now you know the story about how I have to say goodbye to my first ever friend since my father said so and he has the body guards and that women called Yuko keeping and eye on me I didnt know I was a animal at the zoo.I slammed my classroom door open making everyone look in my direction I glared with so much more power than I usually do then slid my chair back so far It smashed into the desk behind me making the owner of it move her desk back a little bit in fear of me.I think they have noticed im in a bad mood well I hope they have noticed.
The 4 dim wits then came in sending me weak glares as they did that is except for Mayu who gave me a glare as strong as my own seems like she is in a bad mood too from what I can tell Yuki is ignoring her.
The desk next to me where Chiyuu sat was empty mabye just mabye my luck has turned and she has a schedule please let her have a schedule.
*1 hour later*
Class had finished and the sensei announced that we could go home early since something has happaned which needs hers and the other senseis attention."If your wondering why its because of the new nurse aka your maid." Rena said popping up behind me making me jump slightly "What about my maid?" I questioned worried about the answer "She was caught making out with Kojima Haruna of class A." Jurina replied for her back hugging Rena earning a smile and a short kiss on the lips."Where is she now and what is happening with them two?" I said looking over to Mayu who is trying to get Yuki's attention."Oh well Yuki sort of went on a date with someone from her old school Mayu didnt like it they argued and now its like that oh and your maid is waiting in the toilets for you we asked her to meet you and she agreed also there might be someone else there." The two love doves explained finishing eachothers sentences.
"Whatever come on and bring Romeo and Juilet aswell." I got up from my seat saying that took my bag in hand and walked out of the classroom heading straight to the toilets.
"Oshima-san what do you think your doing the hole point of this is for you not to get found out that your in this school and now the sensei's are having a meeting because of you."
"What do you mean?"
"You got caught making out with a student in school."
"No I didnt me and my Nyan Nyan where careful no one caught us."
"Okay then why has school finished and WHAT YOU HAVE A RELASTIONSHIP WITH ONE OF THE STUDENTS YOUR IN YOUR TWENTYS!"
"No im not im your age its not my fault my girlfriend goes to this school and as for the meeting thing I have no idea by the way call me Yuko oh and Nyan Nyan will be coming any second."
With that the door opened and my body guards and the girl I believed to be Yuko's Nyan Nyan.Mayu and Yuki had now sort of switched postions like Yuki was the one trying to get Mayu's attention while Mayu ignored her.I looked at Rena "Dont ask." She said not letting me ask a question I just nodded then pointed to the girl who was holding Yuko's hand.
"Im Kojima Haruna of class A Yuuchan's girlfriend she already told me everything and I wont tell a soul I promise."
"YUKO YOU TOLD HER EVERYTHING INCLUDING WHO I WAS!"
"Y..y..yer sorry about that erm anyway we should head home ive already informed your father that school has ended early due to an unknown reason ah your father asked for Mayuki to stay behind and investigate everything shall we go now miss Itano."
"All of you can leave apart from Mayuki I will wait for them now go."
"As you wish miss Itano."
"But we have to protect her."
"Relax she has the other two now lets go~~~"
"Yuuchan dont be so loud."
"Sorry Nyan Nyan."
The two couples left leaving one who are still acting like children looks like I have to be the parent.
"Hey you two what happaned explain right now."
"Since when where you my mother?" Mayu asked with a smug look.
"When you started acting like a kid so you shut up Yuki talk."
"She is angry at me because I went on a date with my best friend from school and that friend asked me to be her girlfriend and she is angry because of my answer."
"What was your answer?"
"It was erm a mabye."
"She has every right to be angry Yuki go home I will do the investigation with Mayu!"
"Where ment to protect you."
"Well you wont do good if your arguing with her so leave!"
"Fine!"
Yuki ran out if the toilets and I didnt care and by the look on Mayu's face she didnt either the two of us exchanged looks we left the toilets and the first thing we did was go to the staff room.When we got there voices could be heard from inside the room some getting louder and louder as they spoke we caught little bits of there sentences but that was all we need to know that this school was not safe.I took Mayu's hand in my own and she squeezed it a little then without words we knew what we where going to run away.We sped down the hall literally jumped down the stairs trying to make no noise then out we made it out of school.
We stopped catching are breaths letting eachothers hands go so we could wipe are sweat away when I seen Mayu's face I knew that she didnt do this much even if she is a master at everything the one thing she sucks at is running."Tomo~~chin why are you not in class?" That voice its Chiyuu."S..school ended ..... early something about the new nurse." I said trying to sound natural but that didnt go so well."Why are you out of breath?" Oh great how am I going to answer that I cant say well you see we over heard the sensei's say there going to kill me in a very disturbing way we where scared we would get caught and ran and then you came."She was helping me exercise."Mayu interuppted thank god."Yer ahahaha thats right why are you here I thought you had a schedule?"
"I did but it finished early and I thought I could come to school but obviously there was no point can I come to your house since my manager wont be here till school ends and I could always call my manager from there please~~~." She begged I glanced at Mayu she gave a thumbs up then spoke "Your father isnt there anyway so he woudnt find out I will make the others shut up I owe you since you got Yuki away from me." I smiled at her showing my fang and I think Chiyuu knew my answer so she hooked her arm with mine and we arrived at my house (Mansion).
I must remember to say thanks to Mayu she is probaly the closest to me these past days since I already think of her as a little sister.When we go inside I heard arguing so I instantly went into the direction it came from with Mayu and Chiyuu close behind.
I went inside the living room only to find Rena and Yuki close to a fist fight I sighed rolling my eyes taking both by the collars of there ruffled up shirts throwing them to a different side of the room."What the hell is going on now are you stupid we have guests at least wait till they have left!"I screamed but my words went through one of Yuki's ears and out of the other since she opened her mouth and started speaking."She said that im an idiot just because I said mabye to my friend." This again really let it go everyone is mad at you "First off all of them have the right to be pissed im gusseing they see Mayu as a sister and even from this sort amount of time so do I and the fact you done that you deserve all you get now what is your friends name?" I said trying to stay calm leaving Mayu and the others baffled at my short but affective speech."Sae and I only said mabye because I didnt know how to say no."
"Well you could have started with I have a girlfriend and I love her not you." I replied quickly leaving a guilty expression on Yuki's face I dont have time for this I left them in the living room and Chiyuu followed me out I dont think anyone payed attention to her at all."You live with them Tomo~~chin?" Chiyuu asked with a cute confused face "Yup long story which I dont want to talk about." I retorted she nodded taking her hand in mine and I lead her upstairs into my room.We talked for hours and she called her manager when she left I coudnt help but smile to myself thinking of what a great friend I have but tommorrow she wont be my friend I have to do what my father said.
Im sorry Chiyuu.
To be continued ........
@Yuukimoko : Yup there will be Wmatsui and Mayuki lol thanks for reading im glad you like it
@Adam : Yer but not for long and I get your joke ahaha
@Sakura_Drop_ : She will always be a softie for Chiyuu but she will always do what her father says Takamina may be a teacher but she is also something a else care to gusse and yer at least we can have a good laugh glad you like the body guards and PE is hard in my school well annoying we always do the same thing lol and Yuko has appeared thats all for now 2NE1 sister!!
@Mo-Chan : Thanks im glad you like it thanks for reading
@Kahem : Thanks for reading im happy you like the body guards
@xxx220 : If your asking if Tomochins dad has a body guard the answer is yes just he doesnt use it much
@Everyone : Thank you all for reading and commenting to all the silent reader happy you like and I hope you enjoy the chapters in the future I wont make them a couple easily or quickly comment and say what you liked and what I can improve on thanks for reading !!
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so Yuki and Mayu had a fight~ Damn that Sae.....she always appear and destroys Mayuki.....(sorry to all Sae lovers!!!!!!)
hope Mayu will forgive her...
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I like SaeYuki, but I love MaYuki, so please, Yukirin, ditch Sae and come back to your dearest Cyborg :kneelbow:
Ah, Yuko-sama is perfect like always with her antics and with NyanNyan they're a couple, huh :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
Now TomoTomo should start dating in secret, and then somehow convince her father that they are meant to be together, but this is further to the story, right? :glasses:
I wonder if midget Bakamina is somehow connected to Mafia and what is Acchan's role in this.. (if she will appear at all...) :dunno: :dunno: :dunno:
Also, I really love cute and all lovey-dovey wMatsui, I hope at least they stay together without any arguing or problems, at least they should proceed providing us with sweetness, cuteness and all other positive emotions :shy1: :shy1:
I smell some MafiaWars oncoming, because of Tomo~mi being around Tomochin... I just hope Tomochin saves Tomo~mi and then... Yuko-sama saves the day with her antics... Haha, lousy plot, yet I'm biased, so no can do :hee: :hee:
Thank you for this update, 2NE1 sister :on cny1:
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Wmatsui are so lovely like always :luvluv1:
noooo :OMG:
what are you doing Yuki :stoned:
I really love Mayuki it can't be they have to make up :pleeease:
I hate Sae there is always a problem when she is with Mayuki :angry1:
Sae don't disturb Mayuki again :on redcard:
poor TomoTomo they wont be friends again :gyaaah:
update soon please :on speedy:
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Ahhh why can't her father let her live with them!
As for Yuki who says maybe when they have a girlfriend grrrrr
Btw Yuko making out with Koji was hilarious lol as Koji was a member of the school same old pervy Yuko :D
Update soon please I can't wait till next update keep it up!
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jajjajajaj hilarious!
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chap 3
When I reported to my father about what myself and Mayu had overheard he coudnt believe his ears before I knew it he had made plans to do anything for me to be safe.He refused to make me switch school incase they found out we knew so my problems where getting worse.Okay now I need to get rid of one of these damn problems im having before school begins.And just like that the problem entered the kitchen."The two of you will make up before we go to school so if where late its your fault."I demanded taking a bite of the toast I made earlier."Its not me that needs to say sorry." Mayu silently whispered under her breath hoping I woudnt hear but I did."Look im tired and so are the two of you for the same reason im sure im well aware that it is Yuki's fault so she is the one in the wrong so Yuki say sorry and explain why you did it okay?"I ordered irritated that nothing was leaving the usual talkative girls mouth.
"Fine look Mayu im sorry I know what I did was wrong its just she is my childhood friend and my mind went blank when she asked the question and the only words that could leave my mouth where the ones that made her think she had hope when she didnt your the one I love with all my heart no matter what please dont be angry with me im sorry."Yuki begged on her knees suddenly I felt a little like cupid ahahaha a fanged cupid awsome I watched Mayu's face closely but like always her face was unreadable."I believe you and forgive you I love you to." As those words left her lips Yuki dived ontop of her making them crash down on the floor and the pair started chuckling while giving eachother loving stares.What a pair they can go from a serious fight where they ignored one another to the most loving couple in the world well thats if they can beat Wmatsui which I dout.
Yuko then wobbled into the kitchen yawning her hair messy and her eyes with dark circles underneath."You had fun last night."I stated as she sat down next to me completely forgeting that she is my maid."Yer I did and it was sooooooooo good~~!!"She loudly replied all of a sudden more lively."Yer we could hear you ahaha you make some funny noises Yuko." Jurina teased walking in the kitchen dragging a very sleepy Rena behind her."Like what Jurina?"Yuko asked is she really that stupid to not know what she means."You know like ahhhhh more Koji MORE!" Jurina fakely moaned Yuko's face going redder and redder I tried to not laugh but I coudnt hold it in this also made Yuko's face turn even more red.
"Yer it was even funnier when Rena was ment to go to the toilet but walked in you two." Jurina said choking on her drink as did I remembering when we heard a scream.
Flashback
I was sitting on my laptop doing some stupid homework that the midget set when I heard a scream that sounded like Rena.So naturally I headed to there room but to only find a confused Jurina sat on the double bed I seen that Rena wasnt with her so I gathered she wasnt in the room and then all of a sudden the door shot open and a terrified Rena came charging in.She jumped into the bed throwing the covers over her body shouting "My eyes my eyes my poor innocent eyes I dont deserve this!" That is when it clicked well sort of.
"Rena what where you doing out of the room?"
"I went to go to the toilet."
"Why did you scream?"
"I went in the wrong room and well......"
"Well what?"
"I walked in on Y...u...k..o Yuko and K..Koji having there privet time whhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!"
I turned my head to Jurina to find her laughing her head off rolling side to side in the bed to be pushed off by Rena.I coudnt hold in a laugh so I fell to the ground holding my side it was hurting so much since I coudnt stop laughing.
end of flashback
"Yer Rena did you enjoy the show?" I started teasing Rena and Yuko there faces going redder than a Liverpool top this was going to be a good day.
We left for school a couple of minutes later arriving on time and seconds before the sensei Chiyuu was sitting at her desk a smile spread across her cute face when she seen me.Thats when Mayu came up from behind me whispering something "You have to ignore her break of the friendship before it grows your fathers orders." I sighed and nodded I sat at my desk and Chiyuu turned on her seat to face me."Tomo~~chin wanna come with me to my schedule after school?" She inquired sweetly but loudly so everyone looked in are direction "I cant ive got to meet my father after school for something important." I lied trying to let her down gently her faceal expression dropped and I felt guilt rush through my body."Oh okay." She said dimly I wanted to hurt myself for making her like this I swear.
"What about tomorrow?" She asked "I cant im babysitting." I lied again then I think she understood "Are you avoiding me?" Oh great she just had to ask that "Can we talk about this later?" Was all I said and she slowly nodded her head thank you Jesus.
When break time came I leaded Chiyuu to the roof of the school and started to explain.
"Look we cant be friends its not good for you if we are your Idol image might go down the drain if we are and I do not want to be your friend yes we have had a good time these past two days but we cant okay."
"Why you said yes to being my friend if your just going to reject me later on do you know how it makes me feel like garbage where you using me or something I thought I could trust you turns out I coudnt I HATE YOU!" She spat the words out quickly tears threathing to drop on to her perfect skin she turned on her heels leaving me alone basking in my mistake and regret.
To be contiued ...
@Everyone : Yer this isnt as long as the others sorry about that this fic wont be updated next until the 20th because im really busy I hope you enjoyed the chapter please comment what you like and what I cant improve thanks for reading.
Come on Liverpool cant wait going to watch there match tomorrow with my mate Jason and my dad lol
@Adam : I hope you enjoyed this chap then I put extra Yuko in lol
@Sakura_Drop : No she wont ditch Mayu I honestly dont like the SaeYuki pairing (Sorry everyone) So I dont want it in my fic lol Your on the right lines with your Tomotomo theory did you like Yuko ?? Acchan will appear she is actually really important to the story but she wont appear till later ahh and Did Wmatsui do you justice lol ?? Bye 2NE1 sister !!
@Yuukimoko : She forgave her mostly because I didnt know what to do with the argument I hope you enjoyed this chapter
@Mo-chan : Sorry about Mayuki but I coudnt keep them apart for long it was to hard lol but there back and as for Tomotomo sorry about that ahaha
@Haruko : Thanks for reading and commenting I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
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I'm happy that Mayuki's problem is recovred :stuffed:
but still TomoTomo they are not friend anymore :fainted:
Chiyuu don't hate Tomochin :pleeease:
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Lol Yuko and Koji up to it again and Nooo how can she say that but at least Yuki made up and you know Liverpool are going to lose right? Oh does that mean no updates at all till 20th :cry: what am I going to do :cry:
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Poor Chiyuu T_T
Mayuki is so cute~
And lol Rena hahaha!!!
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Tomochin should tell her the real reason :smhid. She made Chiyuu hate her
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Ah, but MaYuki is so cute together... Like here, crashing together on the floor :deco: :deco: :deco:
Oh, Yuko-sama, long night, huh? :rofl: :rofl: Rena-sama, mistakenly going in on them :rofl: :rofl:
Tomochin, you should tell your Chiyuu the truth, I'm sure she will understand.. It's better than the broken hearts of you both :(
I love this story, 2NE1 sister :deco: :deco: Please upate it soon *has fever, yet is sitting at laptop, commenting*
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Ahhh yay finally been waiting so long for an update :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
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chap 4 - Story of us
I used to think one day we'd tell the story of us
How we met and the sparks flew instantly
People would say they're the lucky ones
I used to know my spot was next to you
Now I'm searching the room for an empty seat
'Cause lately I don't even know what page you're on
I walked through the school like always do with my head held high its been a week since I last seen Chiyuu and a week since I talked to her.She texted me I didnt reply she called I didnt pick up its like a game of cat and mouse and at the end the cat always loses.I could have gave her a minute or even a second of my time but I coudnt I was sure I would say those stupid two words that have been crossing my head Im sorry but those words would sound like they dont mean a thing.She also realised a new song that has hit the charts going straight to number one in a matter of days the songs name story of us.
The song describes all the feelings im having and mabye hopefully the ones she is.
Oh, a simple complication
Miscommunications lead to fallout
So many things that I wish you knew
So many walls up, I can't break through
Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room
And we're not speaking
And I'm dying to know, is it killing you
Like it's killing me
Monday mornings suck especially this one those damn bodyguards have stuck to me like glue since we over heard the sensei's meetings and people kept saying that they are my friends which is not true well Mayu is but thats all the others there just annoying really annoying.
Mayu who was walking infront of me with a tired Yuki hanging off her arm slid the door to our classroom open going in first before myself and the sickly cute couple of Wmatsui.Just yesterday the couple was feeding ice cream and spicy food to eachother using there mouths YUCK!
I don't know what to say since a twist of fate
When it all broke down
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now
Next chapter
How'd we end up this way?
See me nervously pulling at my clothes and trying to look busy
And you're doing your best to avoid me
As I walked into the class the first thing my eyes where drawn to her desk which was surrounded by the friends she had made since I broke are friendship off.Are eyes caught eachother like magnets I stood at the front of the classroom she sat at her desk are mouths didnt move so no words where spoken but are eyes where a different story hers watched me with pain confusin happiness sadness love while a sure mine masked what I was truly feeling as she looked away but not before shooting me a forced smile.Her so called friends didnt pay that much attention to us locking eyes because there mouths hadnt stopped moving since I stepped into this torture chamber.
I let out a slight breath and walked to my desk sitting down like I didnt have a care in the world other than my spoiled selfish bratty self.
Another day of avoding ahead how fun.
I'm starting to think one day I'll tell the story of us,
How I was losing my mind when I saw you here,
But you held your pride like you should've held me.
Oh, I'm scared to see the ending,
Why are we pretending this is nothing?
I'd tell you I miss you but I don't know how,
I've never heard silence quite this loud.
The midget sensei entered the class room dark circles under her eyes that look did not suit her.Since I need to cheer myself up I might aswell entertain myself with the dummy."Sensei that look doesnt look good on." I said smirking as I did so and the class turned silent excited to see one of our famous word battles."Well that smug look doesnt look good on your arragont face Tomomi." She replied.
"Ouch that hurt small one."
"If thats all your comeback is im ashamed your in this class since its top set."
"Im ashamed to be taught by you."
"Just leave the classroom before the actual lessons start im not in the mood for you ugly face today."
"Fine by me and im sexy and I know it."
I stuck my tounge out to her thanking her in my mind for :
1. Getting me away for Chiyuu before I break down saying sorry
2. Getting me out of lesson
Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room and we're not speaking,
And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah?
I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate when it all broke down,
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now.
This is looking like a contest,
Of who can act like they care less,
But I liked it better when you were on my side.
The battle's in your hands now,
But I would lay my armor down
If you said you'd rather love than fight.
So many things that you wished I knew,
But the story of us might be ending soon.
I soon as my feet stood out of the classroom the door closed even though I didnt touch it and something hard hit my head and I could feel the back of my head be covered in a unknown liquid that hit coudnt have made me bleed could it?
I started to feel drowsy and weak that bitch set me up danm you midget.
Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room and we're not speaking,
And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah?
I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate when it all broke down,
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now, now, now.
And we're not speaking,
And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah?
I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate 'cause we're going down,
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now.
The end.
TBC ....
A/N : Thanks for reading sorry for the boring chapter the next will be good and full of fighting I promise eheheheh anyway hope you enjoyed lol also i got my result for my gcse I got an E with 28 points i always have next year since im just starting year 10 oh the song is called story of us by taylor swift
@Mo-chan : Thanks for reading and commenting ehhehe yer Mayuki recovered lol
@Adam : Lol sorry no Kojiyuu this time mabye next chapter
@Kahem : Chiyuu will be fine soon I promise
@Stv_Wong : OMFG you have no idea how happy I am that you have commented on my fic you Tomotomo fic has to be in my top ten favs for fics lol its awsome oh and as for Tomochin mabye she will mabye not
@Sakura_Drop_ : Hey 2NE1 sister I didnt put Yuko sama in this chap but she will be next time im happy you like Mayuki and Rena ehehehehehe as for tomotomo they have broken hearts yet they dont know why yet lol an where you ill when reading my fic ahhhh i hope your okay now !!!
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Aww this is so sad :( life's hard hey? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh finally an update I've not read in like 3 weeks so I've been watching crap like the Liverpool game Ahh who does tht ;) great update make sure you update soon please or the panda gets it :angry:
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So sad... :cry: :cry:
I'm fine with everything you write as long as you DO write.. ;)
I'm now okay, healthy and only two days left and I'll be having my free week... :onioncheer: :bath: :whistle: :on drink:
Thank you for this update! :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Poor Tomotomo T_T
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NOoo.... :cry:
This chap's broken my heart, poor tomotomo
Ehehe... you like my fic?? :shy2: Thank you... I'm glad people like my fic.
Update soon :byebye:
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chap 5
Days,seconds,minutes,hours I have no idea how long ive been here in this dark damp death hole.All I could hear was the drip dropping of water hitting the ground and faint voices that seemed to be closer than I thought.As they got louder every now and then so I could sort of pick up what there conversation was about but it was nothing important nothing that told me where I was or how I got here or who they are.
My mouth is dry my stomach is growling as loud as a lions rawr and I coudnt move an inch.My legs are together while my hands seem to be handcuffed behind a pipe so I cant escape ive never been in this situation before. I dont know what to do my father never prepared me for something like this he always thought that I was far to trained to get into this situation so he never bothered to teach me this.Now look what his stupidity has caused.All of a sudden I can hear footsteps coming closer towards my direction and a light switched on causing me to winch so my eyes could get use to the light that they seemed to be depraved of before.
Two girls dressed in bright clothes stood infront of me a smug smile plastered on there faces."Ahahah the famous daugther of the most feared Mafia in Japan captured so easy your a loser!" Girl one shouted "Ahaha your so right." Girl two said mocking me as she slamed my head against the hard brick wall I bit my lip so I didnt give them the satisfaction of hearing me scream in pain."Awww look she is trying to be strong so she doesnt cry!" Girl two laughed coming closer so we could be face to face."Do you know who we are and we work for?" She asked with her eyebrows raised I shook my head then clashed it with hers making her fall to the ground."You stupid little bitch we will give you some payback for that!" Girl one screeched pulling up girl to in the process.
A fist met my face and another said hello to my stomach over and over again.I could taste blood on my lips and feel it running down from my nose quickly as if it was being chased by a rabid dog.I cant defend myself not like this there has to be away to escape there just has to be.My body was at its limit for pain as it turned numb and there hits began to feel as if they werent there."You two stop hurting our guest and get out!" A sudden shout came from the back of the room.They stopped there attack and froze in there place obviously scared of the owner of the voice."I said leave!" The voice screamed again but this time I could see the face behind it.The two girls left the room running muttering something I coudnt catch as they went out."Im saying sorry on those idiots behalf im Madea Atsuko leader of the gang Demon girls the second most feared gang in Japan other than of course your father the Mafia and you are my captive his daugther the one who will be the main pawn in my plan congrats." She said sarcastically as she introduced herself what I would give to knock that damn smile from her face.
She held her hand out then pulled it back trying to make a joke because my hands had no way to reach hers.She chuckled and that had to be the most horrible sound ive heard in my entire laugh anyone would be fooled by the looks of this girl if they didnt know the real her she truely is a devil in disguise.Her hands reached up and traced my face with her fingers her touch made me feel violated as though all my human rights had been took away from me in a matter of seconds."Your not as pretty as I was told its funny how people make things up isnt it?" She questioned with a tone of innocence and ignorance in her voice."You bitch you better take that back." I snarled kicking out my right leg but only made connection with thin air as she moved away before my leg was even half way up.
"Your feisty I like it." She giggled at me causing me to mini through up in my mouth such a sicking sound in my ears this was torture enough."Your probaly wondering how long you have been here right?" She inquired I nodded my head to her looking to another direction."I would say a week roughly your all over the news you know people think you ran away after you were kicked out of class by my Takamina." She said smiling as she mentioned the other womens name."Your Takamina I assume you mean Miss Takahashi right?" I asked confused "Thats right my fiance is your teacher and my right hand in running this gang." She explained to me smiling once again.
She turned her back to me and I tried to free myself but was unsuccessful and I made noise much to my displeasure."If you want to escape you need this key but I wont give it to you after all your father still hasnt gave me what I wanted." She says dangling the key infront of my face as she turned back to me."What do you want?" I need to know this what is it she want money mabye ? "If your thinking money your wrong I want his postion as the Mafia and he seems adamant of keeping it what a mean father you have miss Itano." She did not just say that my father is mean that witch.
"Let me go home!" I ordered my voice raised forgeting all the pain that my body was feeling at the recent attack I charged at her breaking the handcuffs that held me back I landed on top of her smacking her face as she tried to push me off her and protect herself instead I got up from my own will and sprinted towards the door.I ragged the door open and my legs took me to where they thought was the best direction."What are you doing go after her!" Madea shouted my body was draining of energy quick and I think ive found the way out of this place or atleast I hope I have.
I seen light and I forced my body to go twoards it and boy was I thankfull I did.
TBC ...
A/N : Hey guys long time no update sorry about that lol anyway I hope you enjoyed this chapter Madea's finally shown herself hehehe thanks for reading and supporting my fic you guys can thank Aliee's song Heaven for this update dont ask how just role with it ahaha anyway comment say what you like and what I need to improve thanks for reading.
And a Shout out to Mizuki_Sone for writing an fic on Asianfanfics and putting myself in as a character though im not using my real name your fic is epic thankyou for writing it
Oh and glee starts again soon YAY!
@Adam : lol ive update ahaha after a long tme and you like glee :p
@Sakura_Drop_ : I hope your okay and that you liked my update hehehe
@Kahem : I know poor them lol thanks for reading and commenting
@Stv_wong : I dont know weather to say aww tomotomo will be okay i promise or say I cant promise they will be okay soon hmm im tied and yes i love your fic its soo good so far I mean Tomomi gave Kasai her house key awwwwwwwww lol
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Whoa... atsumina as the antagonist was... unexpected :shocked
But, update soon... i want to know what'll happen next.
I hope it's not too fast... the house key and the third base thingie... :nervous
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Acchan is the bad guys? I can't say that since they are all in mafia lol
She said "my Takamina"~
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Ahhhh yes finally you updated lol and don't think that this will be a one off because I'll bug you to update and about the chapter those to girls were real bitches and she's macho to break the handcuffs lol but it would be you to have her in handcuffs in the first place wouldn't it lol :P I'm messing and shut up lol
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Your story is something no one will ever imagine... XDD
love your story..update soon.. :3 :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
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chap 6
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhTBCQozWa0&feature=player_detailpage#t=5s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhTBCQozWa0&feature=player_detailpage#t=5s)
"Let me go home!" I ordered my voice raised forgeting all the pain that my body was feeling at the recent attack I charged at her breaking the handcuffs that held me back I landed on top of her smacking her face as she tried to push me off her and protect herself instead I got up from my own will and sprinted towards the door.I ragged the door open and my legs took me to where they thought was the best direction."What are you doing go after her!" Madea shouted my body was draining of energy quick and I think ive found the way out of this place or atleast I hope I have.
I seen light and I forced my body to go towards it and boy was I thankfull I did.
Right infront of me stood Mayu,Yuki,Jurina and Rena each with a gun in hand ready to run into this death trap.Their eyes widened when they seen me run towards them and almost fall to the ground in tiredness and pain luckily Mayu caught me just before I could meet it."Oh my God we finally found you you have know idea how many gangs we fought and intruded on to find you im pretty sure you dad has like five more enemy families to worry about now sorry about that." Jurina says smirking when I myself dont find anything funny at all I mean even if they have just found me they have raised my chances of being taken again just so people could get revenge on my father cause there idiots.
"Jurina shut up and watch are backs we are putting her in the car." Mayu demanded putting my left arm around her small shoulders to help me walk and lead me to the car.I heard gun shots being fired and groans of pain as she opened the car door and pushed me in to save me from being hit with a shotgun bullet.She bashed the door shut behind me then pistol and sniper bullets impacted the car."Dont worry its bullet proof ..... well I think it is." Yuki says jumping through the drivers door window pressing the peddle with force speeding us towards Mayu and Rena's direction.
We screeched to a halt.
Rena and Mayu quickly got into the car.Mayu rolled down the window continuing to fire bullets while Rena opened the sun roof climbing up sitting ontop of the car with a rope which had magicaly got there tied sucerly around her waist so she doesnt fall off as she took a desert eagle from her gun holders raining bullets at any one and anything.
We drove past Jurina or so I thought her hand had took hold of the side mirror and she had flung herself to the top of the car to where Rena was shooting as she did.Okay I never thought I would see that in my life time.Before I knew it we had escaped from Demon Girls territory and arrived at my mansion.
As we got out from the badly damaged car I was pulled into a bone crushing hug which could only be my fathers doing.I returned the hug back with everything I could muster up breathing in his scent the usual smell of gun powder somehow comforting even if I was being shot at not long ago.
"Im so glad your safe I love you and you four why am I getting calls from five different famlies claming that I sent people to kill them!" My father said starting off calm then raising his voice at the end.
"Erm well you see we didnt want to wait till whoever it was finally shown who they where so we just went out on a limb to find her." Mayu hesitantly explained scrathing the back of her head trying not to lock eyes with my father.I smiled slightly noticing my fathers eyes soften when she explained why."I ... suppose thats a good enough reason but dont let it happen again but im happy that you saved my little girl thank you." He sincerly thanked them bowing 180 degrees to show his gratitud eyes a Mafia has manners suprsingly true.
The four girls stood there in shock clearly suprised at my fathers actions but I decied to interrupt there little shocking moment by finally speaking."That women I think her name was Madea Atsuko said that I had been there for months and that I was in the news is that true?" I asked to everyone.My father shook his head in response to me then replied "No you have been gone for a week at most the school phoned the day you where no were to be found I assumed you had skipped again but when you didnt come home I got worried then recvied a message saying if I didnt give up my postion as Mafia they would kill you I informed the school that you skipped classes then I sent you to America to vist your cousin an before I could tell the 4 idiots who had took you they had already caused trouable." So she lied why did she think I would tell her something mabye ?
My father sent me to my room to rest and wash myself before dinner was ready while Mayuki and Wmatsui where told to rest.My father went to his study to make some phone calls but he didnt tell me what they where about.
I slipped out of my clothes an got into a perfect bath bubbles covering my entire body slowly I entered dream world.
(Dream)
I was infront of a stage with people chanting a name I coudnt quite make out then a light shone in the middle of the stage and the angel idol Kasai Tomomi stood there smiling and singing her heart out to her song story of us.
My body danced to the beat then I felt a sharp pain was felt in my back.
(End of dream)
I woke up my head under the water and finding it hard to breath.
I shot up and the pain in my back from my dream was there I got out of the bath and hid my body with a towel then faced backwards to the mirror.A huge scratch was on my back bleeding uncontrollably how did that get there.
TBC ...
@Everyone : Im in an updating mood cause GLEE STARTS TODAY AYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY which explains the glee song at the top for smooth crimanal lol anyway thanks for reading comment an say what you liked and dislike and does anyone else like glee if so who is your fav character or characters and couples lol
@Stv_wong : I wanted to do something unexpected with Madea since usually people cast her as a cheeky shy girl with mabye a bad attitude lol also no your not going to fast your fic is going at the right page although i was suprised when i read your update and i read the bits in white lol
@Kahem : Hmmm you could say that about Acchan lol but i gusse it woudnt make sense lol
@Adam : No more bugging me cause glee has started which means me getting inspartion lol also you need to update so =p oh and GLEE !!
@SleepingHam : Aww you flatter me :wub: thanks for commenting and I updated since you updated Unexpected things happen lol
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Ahhh yayay I won't bug you if you continue to update and ahh happy that she's Got out Got worried at first lol and I. Will update tomorrow and lol I'll get you back for today but only a little bit Hehe update soon
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AHAHAHA! ROFL! I like Mayuki and WMatsui way of resolving problems!
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Omo that dream.. probably is not even a dream..XDD u know the angel stuffs.. sometimes gives u a dream, and when you wake up you have the thing they gave u in your dream is right infront of u..XD
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hey everyone
basically i wanted to say i cant update for a while my mum recently got rushed into hospital and has now been sent home so myself and the rest of my family are taking care of her
please wish for her to get better soon
i will update as soon as i can
i love you guys
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Hope your mum feels better soon said her my best wishes and sure take as long as you need and if you ever need anything just ask
Y.N.W.A
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Take your time and I wish the best for your mum
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So im writing a horror fic for halloween and this is the mini prolouge i gusse =)
What happens when your love is unrequinted ??
What happens when the one you love is with someone else ??
What happens when you love 5 different people ??
What happens when you finally snap ??
How are you ment to react when you thought the person you loved was a murderer ??
How are you ment to react when one of your best friends kills your lover and your other best friends ??
How are you ment to react when you finally see what they have been doing in their spare time ??
What happens when you kill everyone and realise your alone ??
How is anyone ment to react in this situation ??
What happens if you are sent weird presents pictures you had never seen before of yourself what about locks of hair ??
What happens when you pick up your phone and all you can hear is someones breath ??
This is the story of what happaned to 6 best friends one the killer 5 the victums.
this song is a small description of the fic in a way enjoy
this song is just to give u a taste of the fic please watch it
[ENG SUB] Song Ji Eun (Secret) - Going Crazy MV pt.2 HD (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=872Rdzp7Xck#ws)
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Lol it sounds awesome can't wait and ah someone is a sick stalker lol umm update soon
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interesting :fap
update soon :thumbsup
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The song is creepy...
Wonder who will be the stalker and who will be the killer...
update soon :D
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Going Crazy
If someone followed you every where you went and you didnt know how would you feel hmm mabye honoured no thats wrong how about shy nope still not right idolised no still not the right word oh wait ive got it how about a couple of words.
Frightened.
Scared.
Terrified.
creeped out.
Those are the couple of words that come to mind when thinking of this situation.
What would you do if that person that followed you was a stranger?
You would run no?
What if it was I dont know mabye someone you know?
You would think it was a joke right?
Thats what my friends thought the said I was messing with them just to freak them out an boy where they wrong.I suppose it surves them right for cheating on me with their girlfriends.I loved them no wrong I love them but they said I was obsessed that I was getting something else mistaken as love when I really wasnt.
They say you sometimes have to hurt those you love well I did one better I didnt just hurt them I tortured them by torture I mean mental torture and then finally killed them.
My bad.
I never really thought they would drive me over the edge.
I didnt mean for them to die I love them my bestfriends my girlfriend.
Madea Atsuko she was Minami's girlfriend I wish she was mine she was so beautiful her smile her laugh everything she did my heart flutter she was also the one to have Minami's heart she was a lucky one.
Takahashi Minami the smallest out of our group of friends the one that always had the responsibility the mature the one who was lucky to have Atsuko as a girlfriend.Minami's faliaurs also had a strange affect on me its hard to explain how.She always tried her best no matter what and never let people down or atleast thats what she thought but when she became Atsuko's girlfriend my heart smashed to pieces.
Oshima Yuko the pervy girl the squirrel girl the hyper girl the weird girl the amazing smart sexy athletic girl.This girl who always had a smile on her face who always clung onto Kojima Haruna.Oshima Yuko was the lucky one who stole Kojima Haruna's heart.When this happaned I cried and cried for nights on end.
Kojima Haruna the airhead of our group of six she always blanked out she always smiled laughed joked and had to tear Yuko away from her lucky self.She had the lowest grades in class but I didnt care I helped her after school to study sometimes when she wasnt with her other half.Oshima Yuko never knew how lucky she was to have captured this magnificent beings heart.I never stopped crying for this girl.
I will save my girlfriend for last why?
Simple you will know who I am if I tell you my girlfriend.
But I will give you a hint my name starts with ..........
a,b,c,d,e,f,g,h,i,j,k,l,n,M,o,p,q,r,s,t,u,v,w,x,y,z
Did you get my hint ??
If you did then my my you are a clever one arnt you if you didnt then I gusse you will have to wait till the end.
Shall I tell you what im surrounded by I bet you wont know ahh I really want to tell you no I shoudnt ahh wait no I should ready ready get ready are your ready brace yourself im surrounded by their bodies their lifeless pale skinned goddess like bodies.Even in death these 5 beauties have managed to take my breath away.
I suppose I should tell you how some of this started well I will only tell you a little.
When the six of us were younger we where never apart we laughed and cried together sang together dance together or atleast we tried to dance since the clumsy midget beauty Minami always seemed to fall behind.
When we got into Junior high thats when feelings started to develop when ever I seen one of them my heart sped up my breath hitched and I always became shy.The five of them made fun of me for this because when we where younger I was always the loudest and the silliest.
Then when highschool came along feelings got stronger and friendships grew into more pairing us together.
Atsuko and Minami.
Yuko and Kojima.
And then finally myself and my girlfriend.
When everyone had a girlfriend I started to realise what I felt seeing them be happy together felt like a stab through my heart and I didnt know what to do.I coudnt kiss them hold them as if they where mine I could only do that to the person that I apparently belonged to.Which wasnt bad but I wanted more.
Not knowing what to do I took as many opportunities to spend with all five of them as I could.
When I missed them I looked for them.
On my computer I always had 5 different tabs open each on one of their facebook pages so I would know their every move.I often texted them and called them since I wanted to hear their voices when ever I could.Be with them whenever I could.
Their smiles where the most amazing thing I had ever heard their laughs made me feel like I was flying and every tear a bullet to my heart.
But then eventually certain things werent enough.
I began to follow all of them where ever they went I even sent them gifts for example :
Lockets of hair.
rings.
braclets.
flowers .
And so much more I remeber them coming into school each day saying they got some gifts off of someone and where getting scared.They also said they felt someone was watching them of course I told them they were paranoid I was never gonna tell them that it was me that I loved them.
Eventually the five of them started to come into school with bags under their eyes their grades going lower and lower and then finally they started becoming absent.
I visted each of them everyday after school looking after them helping and being alone with them.
Then oneday I was sent a text a text that I coudnt believe.
I quickly ran to the park the place they told me to meet them and met them in the kiddy part.
They shouted at me saying they found out it was me who was doing all these things I denied it as much as I could but they didnt believe me they knew me to well.They called my bluff.
They said I was crazy I said I loved each of them and they said I didnt love them that I was scaring them that I was obssessed that I was making them go crazy.I lost my temper and snapped I pulled out the knife that was in my pocket for protection and stabbed each of them over and over again and again.Then by the time I realised what I was doing they where dead.
So now im crawling over to Yuki's body my girlfriends body stroking her cheek saying "I will follow you all anywhere even if it leads eventually to my death I love you all five of you." I took the knife in my hand and plunged it into my heart.
And now im speaking my last words now be preaped this is Watanabe Mayu's last words.
"Goodbye cruel world and Happy halloween."
END
So yer personally I thought this was pretty crap lol anyway comment please and thanks for reading happy halloween all.
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Oh God, I was right!! At first I thought it's Miichan, but then I thought a bit more... She can't be that sarcastic, Mariko is not that loud, lively or kissy, so... MAYU?!!
Yappari...
That was a good read :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Lol she's a bit twisted killing her best friends because she loved them she should of said it a lot quicker and at least it was a quick death and you should do more horror fics you know lol anyway
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wow it's kinda euh... wow? ^^
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wahhhh! Cool!!! this made my day! Mayu was soooooooooo~
I was expecting to be Yukirin but this shocked me! still cool! Mayuki~