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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Keisthename on July 23, 2012, 02:48:31 PM
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Hello, I said to myself to stop writing for a while.. but I just can't I dunno why.. :smhid :banghead:
I have another new story.. and it's different than the other 2 I made first.
Read them if you haven't:
SHORT FIC: (The Only Thing That Won't Change) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.0) FINISHED
SERIES: (Contract) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33275.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33275.0) ON-GOING
Hold My Heart Forever
Preface
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ATSUKO's POV
"Life is just too cruel isn't it? All of us just wanted to live happily with our loved ones and with all the things we care for. We never, even once, ask for our creator to take our happiness away. But why? Why do we have to suffer at the end when we almost thought that our life is already complete?
I guess I really am just unfortunate, too unfortunate that sometimes I ask the purpose of my existence in this world. Why should I exist when all the things I needed and loved have been taken away from me? How can this life be so cruel with me?
I always try to find new hope and light for me to live but when I do, they are again being taken away from me. Does life have this huge anger towards me? What did I just do? Is it a sin to crave for happiness?
For the things that had happened in the past, I don't want to trust anyone forever. Up until the end I will no longer open my heart nor care with anyone. I'm tired already, if this is fate for me to be lonely forever then I accept it already. So please, don't add any more pain in my heart. I've already given up. I will live forever like this until this life of mine is being taken away too."
Ehem.. that's where the story will revolve.. :cry:
Will try to update this, same with my other fic "contract".. but I hope you guys can wait.. :lol:
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Kei-tan don't say things like that ! You must continue this story !!
I like it very much !! I want know why Acchan is so cold and scary!
Takamina is cute "It's not me" :tama-laff: and she wants see Acchan again :k-wink:
Please Kei-tan continue this story :luvuluvu:
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OMG!! awesome I like when the story started like this.. maeda so are so.. agressive but takaboy gonna make you believe in people and find love again
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Finally I got time to read today!!! :farofflook: your fic is as expected will be full of emotions going on and me likey~ :luvluv2:
maybe this just a hunch.. but the story won't be so very happy happy at the end?? or maybe not.. :on ksweat: LOL.. I just love to imagine things my way.. :wahaha:
btw, please continue this.. I wanna know what happen between Taka and Acchan.. :nya:
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you must continue to write this!
I like how the story starts XD Acchan is full of mysteries, really want to know what happened to her in the past :doh:
how will they meet next time? :roll:
please do continue this story :bow:
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I love this story!!! :luvluv1: please continue it! please~~~~ :on ksweat:
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oh men! is this not a happy ending? i hope not or else :twisted: better make my atsumina happy together ok?
next chapter pwease! *mia too demanding again sowee*
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AT ATSU ATSUMI ATSUMINA
:wigglypanda: Acchan <3<3<3
:prayers: Update soon Keichan
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WOHOO~!! Another Atsumina fan fic~!!! :ding:
Please Kei~! continue it~!! I want to know the past of acchan on why is she so cold and what is taka's life style!
Go Kei~! I'll support your fan fiction about Atsumina 'till the end of the story haha :D
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Hahahahaha!!!!! Takamina is so cool and funny at the same time ^^
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Takamina is just so innocent :lol:
I love the part when Takamina and Yuko talked about Acchan, and Acchan suddenly showed up! XD
Acchan's reaction when Takamina said that she will sit on Acchan's lap XD
please update more, thank you :thumbup
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Takamina you're on fire when Acchan was about to dare her to sit her lap. Haha
Dormitory, will Takamina be sharing the same room with Acchan ? ^^
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Takamina soooooooooooo BOLD!!!!
Then let me sit on your lap....
:D:D:D I laughed so hard...........
Good job. :thumbup :thumbup
Update SOON!!!
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jajajajaj i love so much this fic..
first you dummie takamina dont talk about person.. they can heard you...
yuko.. that i was talking about.. jaja you are a charming person.. kojima gonna try to resist your charm but we know that you can ..
minami!! you are my hero... that comment about sit on acchan make laugh a lot
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Takamina you'r sooo cute :k-inlove: and clumsy :tama-laff:
But Acchan hears just the bad part description :tama-excite:
But it's ok because Takamina will make Acchan fall in love with her :k-wink:
And she has the good technique "I will seat on your lap" :tama-apeshit:
Please Kei-tan update soooon :luvuluvu:
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Lmao Yuko XD
I want more!
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thank you...
please update soon..
i look atsumina pairing
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HAHAHAH!!!! good job Takamina!!!
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yeah...... thanks you for the update...
nice one :twothumbs
..hope u will update chapter 4 faster ...hehehhe
sorry just can't wait,, :P
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Moreeeeeeeeee pretty pwease!! :D the story is so good! Thanks for the update :oops:
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That was a funny chapter.
So, Miinam and Atsuko will live in the same room. That is gonnna be epic!!!
Update soon!!!!!! :thumbup
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So that what's happened to Acchan that made her like that..
It was a good chapter, serious yet funny :thumbup
and I really like the part after the end of flashback XD
please update more XD :thumbup:
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Takamina and Yuko's funny... plotting some revenge just because they can't get a room.. hahah
And Acchan having a bad past. I wonder what happened? (especially with her parents)
hmm... well, please update soon!!! :D
Ja ne~
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WOW!! atsumina in a small room nad kojiyuu jajajyuko you are so funny. i wanna knoe the kojipa`s reaction... jaj apoor kojima you dont going to sleep for yuko jajaj she would think that if she fall a sleep could be rape fo ryuuchan.. that crazy midgets i love them ;D
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"and when we have room mates we can flirt with them too!"
"Y-yeaa-- EHHHH???" Minami realized those words and Atsuko on the other hand was surprised as Minami's also agreeing to that?
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"Ahh.. I'm sorry.. I was just kidding.. But we'll also spend less if we took a shower together with our room mates right? you know less water is needed.."
~~PLAACCKKK~~
"aaaahhhhhhh! itaaiiii! Mou~ Takamina!!!!" Yuko screamed as she held her forehead got hit by Minami.
I was laughing non stop. Yuko perv is all the way. Even Minami is agreeing it. :lol:
Acchan is going to realize her feeling for Minami !!! Wohooo ~~
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to be honest I was also laughing writing this chapter.. hahaha I find the two midgets really funny.. wahahaha and Acchan's reactions are always epic around themm :))
OMG.. what am I doing commenting on my own fic.. trololol
Anyways thanks guys reading this chapter.. Glad you all like it... ermm.. i'll try to update after the weekend I guess or not? lolz (too busy with school and stuff).. same with Contract.. But i'll do my best :on hobo: :on study:
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First time reply-ing in this forum lol
Really like your story and I kinda like your writing style at chapter 3.
When you mentioned the future first then the flashback.
I just really love that style.
LOL
The story getting more excited.
I really want to know about Acchan's past
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Wah!! I was so late for this update :OMG:
Curse my school stuff :banghead: :banghead:
Finally, I can wander around tonight~ :D :D
Great story, Kei-tan :twothumbs :twothumbs
and kyaa~ :mon lovelaff: Atsumina shared the same room~~~ !!!
Moarr Atsumina moment~ :bow: :bow:
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Minami and Acchan in the same room :k-wink:
And nice timming, Minami hugs Acchan after bad dreams :k-inlove:
Yuko is so funny and pervert ! Love you Yuu-chan :tama-yeeaah:
Please Continue Kei-tan :luvuluvu:
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UWAH~!!! Another update~!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
uwargh~!!I WANT MOAR~!!! yuko's such a perv :lol:
plus I wanna see the past of acchan much more (if there is more :err:)
I'll be waiting for the updates kei~!
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Sorry guys can't update or write a story for the meantime.. i'm having a high fever lately.. and luckily today it gone down.. I feel much better and got time to go online to say my apologies to my readers for not updating. :kneelbow:
Don't worry guys as soon as i feel much better and back to my normal self, I'll definitely update this right away!! :mon thumb:
but for now lemme rest this whole night peacefully and hope tomorrow I'll be all okaaay already.. heee see you guys soon!! :byebye:
oyasumi :sleep:
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Don't worry guys as soon as i feel much better and back to my normal self, I'll definitely update this right away!!
Yokatta ne keisthename-san :gmon flowers:
hope you have a good rest and always waiting for your update :gmon milk:
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Sorry guys can't update or write a story for the meantime.. i'm having a high fever lately.. and luckily today it gone down.. I feel much better and got time to go online to say my apologies to my readers for not updating. :kneelbow:
Don't worry guys as soon as i feel much better and back to my normal self, I'll definitely update this right away!! :mon thumb:
but for now lemme rest this whole night peacefully and hope tomorrow I'll be all okaaay already.. heee see you guys soon!! :byebye:
oyasumi :sleep:
get well soon ~ :gmon twirl:
and dont forget to drink medicine :on thumbb:
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get well soon Kei! I'll be waiting for the update :D
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GET WELL SOON!! Kei :yep:
I can't wait for the next chapter!! :heart:
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dont worry... get well soon :D
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Oh yeah Takamina is on fire alright~ :pimp:
Ahah, I really like your story so far and how it is progressing.
Yuko is hilarious, I'd say her character is the most comical right now lol. XD
I feel bad for Acchan, but I guess it's inevitable that Minami will heal her heart hehe :deco:
Thanks for the comment on my fic, I'm sorry but you got it all wrong hahah, I should learn from you! You've got more experience. :thumbup
I hope you feel better and update soon!
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THANKS FOR UPDATING
I HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE
I LIKE YOUR FANFIC
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Wow i'm loving this fanfic :D Its so entertaining and interesting!! I felt bad for Minami when she got slapped but it's also comical in a way, poor her :P Anyways, thanks for writing this awesome fic. Please continue when you can :D
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You should like totally update
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Yay! Thank you so much for the update :D I LOVED THIS CHAPTER ^^ I really like the relationship between Atsuko and Minami here and can't wait to read bout how it developes :) Kojiyuu is awesome as well ^^ Thanks again for the update, I look forward to reading the next chapter :)
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good job takaboy!! :D.. step by step you gonna won maeda`s heart :D
awww my kojiyuu are separated but i think its better :D come on yuuchan :D make proud and steal more kisses from haruna :D
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THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
PLEASE UPDATE ALWAYS
THANK YOU
I AM YOUR READERS
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You are so bad ass for updating this! I love this story it's so hilarious! I like your writing style, you should update often! :thumbup
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please update your fic when you can! I havn't forgotten bout it, it's really amazing ^^ Looking forward to your next chapter, hope you update if possible :) I'll be waiting patiently either way :D
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Just Joining
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter
Thank you for the fanfic :twothumbs :D :w00t:
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Takamina is so cool here!!!!
Yuko is awesome as usual ^^
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Just came across this...
Takamina is very manly as usual :)
I know you haven't updated for a while but I really want to know what will happen...
Please update!!! :)
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HOLY MOTHER OF HEAVENS~!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE AGAIN PLEASE~!!!! :on bleed: MY HEART~!!! :luvluv1: IT'S RACING WITH ATSUMINA-NESS~!!! :on gay:
I really love this Fic~!!!! Common kiss wildy you two~!!! sorry about that~ :sweat:
please update fast :kneelbow: More power to your fic. kei-san :)
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kyaaaaaa
They ki ki kiss!!! :wub: :wub:
Atsumina!!!
Thank you for the update kei!
Update soon
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God~ the friendship between Takamina and Yuko is so very sweet XD
Thank you for updating~
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HOLEY ****!!!! They kissed and Takamina did it first. She the MAN!!!
The kiss was really sweet and romantic!!!
Update SOON! (and check your messages) :D
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gyaaaaaaaaahh....!!!
MY HEART!! *rolling on the bed* xDD
omg, I'm dying... I'm dying...
please just update this fic ASAP..! :mon yeah:
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yay update!!
woo~ woo~ go takamina!!
hoping for some kojiyuu loving next :deco:
haha, love your story!!
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HOLEY ****!!!! They kissed and Takamina did it first. She the MAN!!!
The kiss was really sweet and romantic!!!
Update SOON! (and check your messages) :D
of course she is the man...
i love this story.. takayuu relationship i love they relationship.. so cute..
yeah maeda step by step is falling in love.. OMG!! THE KISS!!!!!
and yeah im waiting for my kojiyuu too..
not borring at all.. i swear :B
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You always surprise me kei~
Go taka!!!!!!
Kissing first was so~~~ flail much!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Woah! THANKS FOR UR UPDATE!! I love this fic ^^ It wasnt boring at all, i loved it!!! :D Yuko and Taka are so awesome and sweet with one another :3 & loved the Atsumina scene in the end, it was epic lol.
Really looking forward to ur next chapter!!!
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please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this really made my day!!
sasuga Takamina and Yuko, their friendship is awesome!
but really, I didn't expect the kiss! and it was Takamina who made the first move, lol :D
looking forward for your next update!
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I like how takamina and yuko's friendship was so deep.. well written.. please update soon...
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They kissed :w00t:
Ahhhhhhh Takamina you the man :inlove:
Please update soon :)
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Kyaaaaa~ My heart racing like crazy :heart:
Pls update soon~as possible
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please update soon i love this fic ;)
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OH MY GOD KISS KISS KISS KISS :on bleed:
Go Takaboy! :on asmo:
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YAY!!!! Kiss!!!! GG Takamina!!!!
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Wah... Takamina initiate the kiss.... Great going takamina.... :twothumbs :love: :heart: :yep:
Well love will blossom between Takamina and Atsuko soon... :wub: :inlove:
Great going there... thank you for the update...
Hope to see the next one.
:twothumbs :theking :heart: :lol: XD :P
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please update this is so sweet :inlove:
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luv this!! :mon inluv: can't wait for the next chapter~and the one after that~and the after that~ and so on... lol :mon star:
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Hello!
Melon.Lover-san!
Sorry for late comment
I’ve been very busy last week so I can’t leave a comment to your latest chapter
Anyway,
Chapter 12 is amazing!
It is a good one! That’s what I expected from a great writer like you! (Melon-Lover)
But I am so sad about my oshiri pairings (AtsuMina and KojiYuu)
I hope they will reconcile and also Acchan is very kind to her rival in the drama
Thank You
Waiting for your next update!
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Hello!
Melon.Lover-san!
Uhh.. I think you're on the wrong thread... :doh:
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JUST KISS ALREADY!.. GO FOR IT TAKAMINA. HAHA :D
I'M REALLY LOVIN THIS PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :thumbup :twothumbs
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Yes please update when you can :D Still love this fic & hoping to find out what happens next! :D Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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I hope you upload soon
I almost cried when I saw that there isnt a continuation
thanks for your FF is great
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please update :(
atsumina is so cute
and kojiyuu is so lovely
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Do you guys still remember this story ? wwww shall we continue? :lol: or not? :sweatdrop:
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PLEASE CONTINUE
:bow: :bow: :bow:
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PLEASE CONTINUE
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Please update
I like this story
Can't wait to see the next chapter
Thank you
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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continue pls XD
im always waiting for update :3
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Yes please continue :D
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Jeeezzz! You already know the answer...
PLEASE CONTINUEEE O(∩_∩)O
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Jeeezzz! You already know the answer...
PLEASE CONTINUEEE O(∩_∩)O
^agree!!!
kei~~ pls continue this, XD
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Kei - san!!!!!!!
Please continue!!!
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I LIKE IT !!!!!
NO !!! I LOVE IT Wmidget make me laugh XD
Plz Update. Want more Atsumina :3 :thumbup
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Fun and interesting story! :twothumbs
Please update :thumbup
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woooot great story update soon :D
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please update
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OMG THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!! :on GJ:
I can't wait to see whats gonna happen next after the kiss :shy2:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ONEGAI SHIMASU :kneelbow:
p.s. please update your other fics too X3
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kei-san update this fic pls :cry:
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:wigglypanda:
really hope you continue this fic
ive ben waiting since your last update
so hope you update soon
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I hope that someday you can continue this FF
because is so great and interesting
thanks
and Update SOON!!!
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I hope that someday you can continue this FF
because is so great and interesting
thanks
and Update SOON!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter !!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool:
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Very interesting, good story :twothumbs
please continue. :bow:
I'll be waiting.
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This one is good!!
please update soon :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Please update soon :cry: :bow:
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This one is awsome
Omg i love how Takamina and Yuko
Lie to other that they gave eat, but they not
Did Takamina really kiss Acchan?! :?
Please update soon
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please continue...onegaishimasu :( :cry:
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please continue :cry:
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ur story is really good :twothumbs
pleasse update soon. :bow: :bow:
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wow great update cant belive you updated :bow: :bow: :bow:
ray you ruined the moment :thumbdown:
so glad update soon :twothumbs
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Ah... Minami is in trouble...
Oh... Atsuko is so angry with Minami now...
What's going to happen to Atsumina and Ray?
Can't wait to see
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Pls, update this fanfic :bow:
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Oh... not much readers are interested in this story w but since you brought it up... I'll think about it. lol
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Oh... not much readers are interested in this story w but since you brought it up... I'll think about it. lol
eyyyy, im still waiting for this fic keeeiiiii - san :gyaaah:
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i almost forgot this story because i've read a bunch of your story lol
and maybe you not update this for quite long, well from the time when i haven't made an account here in JPHIP
my first comment was on your blog (i forgot what story lol)
yeah, cause i'm an atsumina shipper too so i do like all of your story about them XD
so don't put anything in hiatus please author-san :bow:
though it maybe will take long it's not a problem for me as long as it's atsumina yohohohoo
yokai, continue this story like you said in the end of latest chap "TBC" :D
Thank you author-san :twothumbs
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blame myself for being a silent reader this whole time :banghead: :banghead:
this story is awesome with Atsumina Kojiyuu going all cute, sweet, and hilarious at the same time. and i love Takayuu friendship here... well i'm following this story since i dunno when exactly :nervous
please update kei-san, onegai :bow: :bow: i'll be waiting..
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See, everyone want an update Kei san. Lol
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See, everyone want an update Kei san. Lol
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:twothumbs Author your story very interesting :twothumbs I like your story, Please don't stop :D Atsumina :wub: I am your fan forever :cow: :jphip: