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Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: fausto on August 07, 2012, 02:50:00 PM
Hello, I'm new here, and this is my first fanfic in englis ever, i hope you will enjoy it, sorry for my bad english!!!
;)
                                           Like a video game



   The day was starting hardly for the leader of AKB48, she had to get up early to learn a new choregraphy to the team A. She was a bit stressed because of the bad ambiance in the team lately, and she feared it was because of her. Despite her efforts towards Maeda Atsuko, this one seemed to hate her or something like that...It was difficult for Minami to assume the role of the leader of the team A and of the all AKB group, so when it came to give orders or correct some of their movements, she was always embarrassed. So the fact that the face of the group was so distant and cold with her was a big handicap to her.
Maeda Atsuko was a great dancer and singer, the leader  came to think that maybe the tall girl thought that this one was not able to be a good captain, and maybe she was angry because she didn't like the team A as it was...

Today they had a couple photoshoot in the team A. Kojima and Mariko were together, holding hands archly, they're were too cute together, even if no one objected the fact that Kojima belonged to Yuko. No doubt this one would  sulk knowing the existence of this photoshoot.
Minami looked by far the session, apprehending her turn, she was laid with the Ace. The way she had to behave was difficult to find … And she had to admit that the cold look on Atsuko's face all the time was hard to support.
When she were set up, Atsuko's face changed so fast and she began to embrace Minami as the photographer was aking her too. A strange feeling invaded the midget as she acted like a boy to her. It was so weird, they're smiling to each other, touching and so close...
"Okay, we're done, thank you very much!" Said the photographer.
"Thank you very much" said Atsuko and Minami together.
Minami looked at Aachan while she was changing clothes, she was talking to Miichan, laughing out loud. Joy suited her so well, her smile was sparkling. Suddenly the captain felt jealous of the others members who had the chance to talk to her.
"Hey captain!"
She turned and she came face to face with a smiling Kojima.
"Ah, Nyan Nyan, what is it?"
"You're okay? How was your shooting?"
Kojima was puzzled but decided to ignore it,
"G-Good", Minami respond, hesitant.
"We're having a party after this, because it's was hard work since one month right? So you have to be there!! Okay?"
"Party? Hm, it's day off tomorrow, so i suppose."
"Great!! Be there at 21:00 pm okay?"
"Yes mam'."


The party was nice, Minami didn't want to drink any alcohol, she was to reponsible and into her leader role for that, but she was talking with Miichan and it was pleasant. She loved this energy between the team, even if this past month things have been a little conmplicated, everyone was doing his best and it was good to feel that you could count on someone.

Atsuko was on her fourth glass of alcohol already. She felt lighter now, but still sad. She was sitting on a dark corner, to be able to look at the leader quietly.
She was so beautiful tonight, so simple anf full of energy and charisma. She loved her smile, her gestures and her dorky laugh.
The Ace felt her heart tighten in her chest, she needed to talk to her, with the alcohol she would have the courage to do it. The fear was in all her body but nothing was important but talk to her...
She suddenly got up, as if her body was taking the control, and went to the captain. This one was in an animated conversation with Miichan. She stood right in front of Minami, really seriously.
"I need to talk to you", she said in a decided tone.
The leader found it hard to believe, plus, Atsuko was really beautiful, like an apparition.
"...W-Well, o-okay."
Minami was so surprised that she followed Atsuko without a word to Miichan.
"Bye Minami, it was nice talking to you!!Yes..me too, thank you!"
They stopped in an empty room, an after Atsuko closed the door, the captain felt a littke stressed. Atsuko looked at her leader, she liked it so much when she wore her black winged sweat, she was so cute! She came closer to her, she could smell her delicious smell, like during this photoshoot. Without no warning, she pulled her toward her and kiss her roughly. Their lips crashed against each other, Atsuko didn't want to stop it, her heart was beating so fast, her lips were burning. They separated when they were finally out of air. The Ace was silent, unable to say anything, lost in the memory of this kiss.
"Why...W-What...are you doing?!"
Minami's body was heaving rapidly, gasping for air. She was so beautiful, lost and full of questions, a little disheveled. But Atsuko couldn't explain anything.
"Thank you."

She left the room without another word, leaving her leader alone. Minami couldn't believe what she had experienced.
It was so sudden. Maeda Atsuko, the face of AKB48, had drawn her in an empty room to kiss her... Why? What does it meant? It has to be a joke, some kind of a bet with another member. Yet it was so intense... Minami had never kissed anyone, but it was so...pleasant. Her heart was still beating terribly fast. What was that kind of feeling? Maeda Atsuko...How foolish was that...?
She left the room 15 minutes later, when she had recovered her thoughts. She found the others dancing on an EXILE song, and she decided to join them. On the way, she locked eyes of Atsuko. Strange feeling...Sensation of burning again...what the hell?
The party ended without any problem, everybody went home around 3:00 am. Two of them were unable to reach sleep that night.

End of the first part!!!Thank you for reading!!!Update soon if you want to!!
:heart:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 07, 2012, 03:36:22 PM
Another AtsuMina fic. Thank you.
The story line is great. The kiss, oh my god it made me shiver.
Please continue.
UPDATE SOON!!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Keisthename on August 07, 2012, 04:02:21 PM
HNNGGG... That was aggressive of you Acchan.. uwaaa... can't stop giggling about this story.. please update sooon! ahhhh I'm going crazy I wanna know what happened! lolz  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chichay12 on August 07, 2012, 04:09:50 PM
yey!
Another atsumina fic!
Wohooo!
Atsumina all the way!
Pls update as soon as possible!
Thank you!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: kiruchi on August 07, 2012, 04:20:45 PM
 :nya: Tsundere Acchan  :nya:
stay low then strike fast... That shock Takamina's system  :glasses:
Update soon... wanna see how Takamina handle the situation.
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on August 07, 2012, 05:09:17 PM
Waaah this story  :k-inlove: I like the plot so much !!
Acchan be honest with your feeling !! Don't make the Tsundere Acchan !

The kiss is so perfect ! Please update soon, I want more  :luvuluvu:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 07, 2012, 05:30:22 PM
Wow i'm happy you liked it, i'll upload the next part tomorrow!!!!thank you so much!!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Haruko on August 08, 2012, 06:06:03 AM
HNNGGG... That was aggressive of you Acchan.. uwaaa... can't stop giggling about this story.. please update sooon! ahhhh I'm going crazy I wanna know what happened! lolz  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

me too... jajja acchan you are so aggressive.. :D
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW!! Update!!!
Post by: fausto on August 08, 2012, 11:03:46 AM
Hello!!As promised, I update the next part today, I hope you're gonna like it, sorry again for my english!! ;)

Part 2



Two days after the party, some of the AKB members had a fashion show scheduled. Actually, the members had to choose two outfits according to their style or their taste, and scrolled throught with it. Atsuko was with a staff members and she had already chose her clothes, something classy, like the usual clothes she liked to wear.
But now, she was absorbed in the contemplation of her team leader Takahashi Minami who was putting on her outfit. With no surprise, she had chosen a leather jacket, a white tee-shirt and a black skirt. To accessorized the all thing, she had found big sunglasses and aviator glasses. She was so stylish, it was so her!
The show had began so the girls stood behind the scene, waiting for their turn. Atsuko was right after the captain, so she was able to watch Minami's performance on a screen right in front of her. She didn't know what to say, it was so stylish, the leader was walking with confidence and she had a sexy attitude. Atsuko realized it was exactly what she liked in Minami, that and much more.
No more thinking, it was her turn to shine.

Minami had to take off her outfit but she liked it too much, so she kept it a little longer. She was putting her sunglasses on when she found Atsuko right in front of her, starring.
"Eeh?"she blushed. "Is it something wrong?"
"Minami."
"Y-Yes?"Hopefuly she could hide behind her sunglasses.
"Can you come to my house tomorrow at 2:00pm?"
"At your house??Why?"
"Can you?" Persisted Atsuko.
"W-Well, i guess, if it's important, so okay", answered the leader, lost in the Ace's eyes.
"Good. Make sure to be there."
"Yes..."
She turned on her heels, leaving Minami alone once again. What was going on...
"Wow, leader, you've reached the cold Ace's heart! Nice jacket by the way!"
"What? Yuko, stop jocking! She's so weird, don't you think?"
"Can't tell, it's Atsuko you know", she said joining Kojima.
"No, I don't..."Minami spoke to herself.

Minami got to the door a little late, she had no time to dress, so she wore her black sweat again. She rang at the door, a litlle stressed. Atsuko had ask her to come to her house, first time ever, and she had no clue why.
She was trying to find a good reason for this conversation when the door opened.
"Oh you're there."
Er...Atsuko in a white shirt, almost transparent, and a denim short...so hot!
"Yes...You asked me to, remember?"
"I know. Come in."
She obeyed and came in the hall, it was a beautiful house.
"Follow me", she said as she claimed the stairs.
Straight to the point, Atsuko was scary sometimes.
"Okay."
Atsuko was taking her to her room! It was nice, girly and tidy. There were many posters and photos of AKB48 and it warmed Minami's heart.
"Minami? You're done?"
"Hm? Oh yes...sorry."
"So", she stood in front of the midget, trapping her against the wall, "can i kiss you now?"
"Eeh? That again?"
"Yes. "
"But why?"
"I just need to kiss you, is it okay?"
"Wha...No!Why?"
"I need to know something...Come on."
"Maeda-san, I don't know what I've done but maybe we could talk..."
"I don't want to talk."
Minami seemed shocked by the determination of her team A member .
"I don't understand."
"Okay. Forget about it."
Atsuko began to leave the room when Minami grabbed her arm.
"No. Wait. You have to tell me why you want this."
Atsuko was surprised, the leader's face had changed, she was so serious and concerned.
"Are you trying to make fun of me? Because I think it's a silly way to..."said Minami.
"No."
"What?"
"I'm not trying to do that."
"So what? I know you don't like me but..."
"...I'm...trying to figure out why I felt so...electrified the other night", admited the tall girl.
Minami opened wide eyes.
"Well...you were drunk..."
"It doesn't change anything...Maybe I'm not your type, but can I do it now?"
"No."
"…"
"I'm the one doing it."

It's all for today, next update maybe tomorrow if you want it^^Thank you! :)
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 08, 2012, 11:55:57 AM
You are killing me. Atsuko, so bold, Minami you too!
Please update this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on August 08, 2012, 12:03:26 PM
Waaah Acchan is so bold and shameless ! It's so good  :luvuluvu:
Minami takes the opportunity ! Kiss kiss  :k-inlove: Kiiiss sexy Acchan !

Update soon please, I want more  :luvuluvu:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: miayaka on August 08, 2012, 07:16:36 PM
I'm so busy that I'm so late on the new stories here
and this is
ATSUMINA!!!!

KEEP IT UP!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 09, 2012, 01:01:39 PM
Hey!!^^Today the third part!!Things are getting serious^^Enjoy!(I hope^^)

Part 3

Atsuko looked at her with big eyes, obviously she didn't expect that at all.
"...Why?"
"Don't discuss."
It was the first time Minami was talking to her like that, and it was nice, actually.
"Okay."
"If it's bad...try not to punch me please."
Atsuko nodded, she was a little stressed. Minami took a deep breath and concentrate, she had never kissed anyone before...and it was Maeda Atsuko...
She looked at the girl in front of her, she had closed her eyes, waiting for Minami. She was so beautiful...Slowly, she approached the red lips of the tall girl and when she finally touched them, a very strange desire envaded her. She stood a little moment like this, and then she broke the kiss to see Atsuko's reaction.
The Ace stood few seconds like that, frozen. Then she opened her eyes and look at Minami.
"...Thank you."
"Hum, you're welcome. Can I know the answer?"
"I think...that's what i expected..."
"Oh...I don't get it, but it has to meant that i'm a bad kisser, that you were drunk and lost...I understand."
"Minami?"
"Uh?"
Atsuko took her friend's hands and looked right in her eyes.
"I'm sorry for being so horrible all these years, I was trying to deny it but..."
"Wait, it's okay, you don't have to like me..."
"The truth is...I love you."
"…"
Minami opened her mouth, in shock. She blushed instantly.
"What???!"
"I'm sorry."
"Eeh? But it can't be true...you never talked to me, you never looked at me, never laught at my jokes, never ate with me..."
"I know, I was trying to deny it..."
"Deny?Why?"
"...I was fourteen, and a girl...Discover that another girl was always in my thoughts and that is naturally bad is so scary...So i thought maybe deny it and act like i didn't care would be easier."
"...Aachan..."
Minami saw Atsuko smiled.
"What?"
"That name...You just called me Aachan. It's nice! You never did."
"Oh...I always wanted to call you like that but i couldn't, and i've figured now was the right time to start..."
"Starting from now, you'll have to call me Aachan."
Minami smiled, she was relieved.
"Wow...I can't believe it...So you don't think I'm a bad leader?"
"No, no at all. You're the best for this rôle, obviously."
Minami loosened his shoulders and sighed in relief.
"Ah...seven years without talking to you...it was so hard..."
Atsuko felt guilty, her friend was so kind and cute.
"I'm so sorry Minami..."
"No, it's okay."
Atsuko pouted.
"Yeah...But you don't love me right? I mean, it's okay..."
She had totally lost her cold look, and it seemed so natural now. Minami couldn't help but smile.
"Silly."
"Eeh?"
Minami raised Atsuko's chin with a finger.
"I've loved you since the first year of AKB..."
"What??You never..."
"Said it? You were always angry at me, no talk, no look...I thought you were against the fact that i was the leader, because I didn't deserve it, so I've decided to forget all about this attraction."
"…"
"The so loved Ace, « the face of AKB », number 1, how can I ever think of keep this person for me, you could have anyone. Plus, you already have a wife...Miichan!"
"Miichan is a joke, she forced me!^^And! You're the one everybody loves and wants as a wife in AKB!"
"Not true!! Beside you choose another member that day, why not me?"
"I was pretending, remember? And you? Why Kojima? Why two girls?"
"Hm...Kojima has such a beautiful brest...and two, because it's...interesting!She smirked.
"Perv'!"
Minami pretended to be vexed.
"Eeh?Perv?!Says who? The one who ignores me for seven years and then, one night, drunk, kisses me in a dark corner, touching my butt?"
"Yeah...Well...I was drunk..."
"Hm...don't worry, you have a beautiful brest too, she said with a boyish look."
"Minami! You're such a guy!"
"What can I say...? Maybe seven years of abstinence forced me to admit that your brest and your lips are attractive..."
Atsuko came very close to her and whispered.
"Maybe you could kiss me..."
"Atsuko!"
"Wow...you saying my name like this, it's so sexy...I might be used to it..."
"Since when are you such a teaser?"
"...Always have been...don't you notice it?She said with a seductive face."
God, she was so beautiful, how to resist...
"Never towards me, Minami pouted."
"So, it's a beginning. Anyway, we were at the part where you had to kiss me...^^"
"Had to?"
Atsuko pouted, which made Minami laughed.
"Your two moles on your cheeks are really cute, you know."
"Really?" Asked Atsuko as she sat on her bed, inviting her friend to do the same.
"Yeah, I love them!" She said as she touched them.
Atsuko thrilled.
"Well, do you that I have like ten moles on my all body?"
"Really?"
"Yes...she said in a seductive tone, nobody knows that. Do...you want to see them?"
"No." Minami answered with a really serious look.
"Eeh..."
Takamina bursted out laughing at the face of Atsuko.
"You should see your face!!Haha!!"
"Minami! You are making fun of me!"
"Hahaha!"
Atsuko pouted, upset. Minami stopped laughing and took the hand of her friend, and then filed a kiss on her cheek.
"I just wanted to joke, sorry."
"No, it's okay, I mean, it's not very interesting..."she blushed.
"Well..."she came closer to Atsuko's face, "actually I already know your moles, where they are..."
"Eeh??How do you know?"
"Hm, I have a really good detective...expoensive by the way..."
"No way! Are you joking?"
"Yes..."
"Ah!"
"About the detective, not your moles, Atsuko."
"But, no one knows..."
"We take our baths all together, and for some of them, I'll have my sources..."
"Your sources?" Atsuko pouted. "You mean you asked some members to watch me!"
"Yep," Minami answered with a little malicious smile.
"But..."
"Everyone knows I like you, you know, but they're acting like they don't."
Atsuko seemed disapointed, she pouted like a little girl. And then, her face changed in a second, then she smiled archly.
"Well, I'm not so sure...You'll have to prove me that."
"What? Such a teaser..."
"I know it was a lie!"
Minami wrapped her hands around the Ace's waist and leaned down to kiss her.
"Ne, Atsuko..."
"Hm", said the tall girl, her skin became more sensitive.
"I'm gonna show you I don't lie, so don't  move..."

Thank you for reading!! Hope you liked it!! update soon if you want!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chichay12 on August 09, 2012, 02:32:51 PM
WOAHHHHHH
 :on bleed: :on bleed:

to much atsumina!!!
its killing me!!!
now  :imdead:

thank you for the update!!!
 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 09, 2012, 02:59:03 PM
Minami Perv!!! AND SO BOLD!!!
I want more kisses and more hot scenes ( if you know what I mean)! :D
Update PLEASE!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: kahem on August 09, 2012, 03:45:33 PM
Totally like it!!!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 09, 2012, 05:29:09 PM
Well, Chichay12, i didn't mean to kill you, sorry...^^ :lol:   TakaminaBG, I know what you mean, i think the update will satisfy you, well, i hope so!!! Thank all of you for your support!! I know it's just an Atsumina fanfic, but what can i say, i'm REALLY into this couple that sometimes I forgot to add some others members!!^^
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 10, 2012, 11:38:08 AM
Yosh, today it's the last part!! Thank you for reading!!

Part 4


As she said it, Minami started to kiss Atsuko's moles on the cheek.
"One...two..."
She's now on her neck.
"Three...four..."
Atsuko moaned, as she felt the lips of her friend kissing her soft skin.
"Five," she whispered on her arm, "six, seven, eight, nine", she said kissing slowly Atsuko's belly, where there were the most.
"Minami..."
"At last but not least...the secret one!^^"
She slowly unbutonned Atsuko short and went look for the secret mole, on the right waist of the Ace. It was so little, brown and cute, hide on the perfect waist of Atsuko. She knew it was there but she had never saw it. It was worth it!
She filed a little wet kiss on it and touched it carefuly.
"It's definetly my favourite! So cute!"
"So you knew it...Who told you?"
Minami smiled and patted Atsuko.
"I'll never tell you!"
"Minami!Meannie!" She scolded her.
"So, did I lie?" The captain smirked.
"No", Astuko pouted. "I've nothing to hide now..."
"Don't be so sad, there's so much of you I want to see!"
"Like what?"
"Your bod...personality!"
"Minami, you're so boyish!^^"
"Sorry."
"No, I like that. I'm sure you can be so active sometimes..."
"Atsuko!"
"Haha, Minami is so funny to tease!"
"Don't be proud of that, it's tourmenting me you know."
"Sorry, i'm just saying that my lovely leader is so sexy when she acts like a boy to me."
"Well", she blushed, "sometime I cannot help but behave like that."
Suddenly Atsuko's arms wrapped around Minami's neck and the tall girl kissed her passionnetly. Surprised, the midget responded to it, uncapable to resist.
"Minami..."The Ace whispered in her ears, "take me now..."
"Eeh? Aachan...I don't think we should...your parents..."
"They're away for the week-end...you have no excuse. Unless you don't want to..."
"It's not hat...I'm just..."
"What?" The tall girl asked.
Minami tried to focus, she was the leader, she had responsabilities, and for so long she thought Atsuko hated her...But no she was there, kissing her, and her body was burning.
"Nothing."
She kissed Astuko back, with the same intensity, passing her hand in the girl's hair. The other went to Atsuko's neck, she could heard her moans, and it was exciting her.
Am I daydreaming...?Seven years without nothing and today, a confession, a kiss, a naughty proposition...I might have a heart attack...
The captain rolled her over to be on the top of her. What a nice view...Atsuko's heart was beating so fast, she felt like melting when she felt Minami pressed their lips again.
Would you mine...daydreaming a little more...she moaned as their lips met to battle. Atsuko wrapped her arms around the midget neck, pulling her closer.
I'm afraid i can't stop, answered Minami.
She kissed her collarbone, which tored the Ace a moan, captain's lips were so sweet...Minami couldn't resist, she started to unbutton her shirt, little by little, keeping on kiss her. She smirked when she saw Atsuko's bra, black, beautiful. She bit her lip before smirked.
"Kami-sama, thank you."
"Bakamina", blushed Atsuko, she couldn't help but giggled lightly.
Minami didn't answer, the shirt was open, she could see the bra and the Ace's belly, it was astonoishing. Her skin was so soft. She couldn't control herself, she rained many kisses. Atsuko arched, full of desire, her hands ran on Minami's back, searching for her skin she needed to touch.Minami placed a knee between the legs of the tall girl, it was easier for her like this. Surprisingly, it tored at Atsuko a groan of pleasure. Minami made a movement back and forth with her waist, keeping on caress her belly.
"Minami..."
"Hm?"
"...Where did you learned to do that?"
"Can't tell...to embarrassing..."
"Please..".as she moaned from another movement.
"...Naughty dreams with you..."She said blushing like crazy.
"Oh...I'm glad! Minami you're so cute!"
The captain slipped her hand underneath the girl's bra, she couldn't wait any longer. She accelerated the pace, and Atsuko's breathing became jerky.
"I don't think...I can't take it any longer..."
"It's alright, let it go"
Atsuko grabbed her leader forcefully and buried her head in her neck.
"Minami!" She screamed as she finally came.

The two girls were laid on the bed, side by side, holding hands, trying to catch their breath. They were relief, happy and serene. Atsuko snuggled against the body of Minami, smiling.
"I knew you were the one."
"Eeh? You've checked it with my prowess in bed?"
"No", laughed the tall girl, "but feeling like i'm happy and filled, i know that you're the one for me."
"Damn, I thought just to have found an easy girl..."
"Minami!"she tapped her friend kindly.
"Hahaha!"
"Your jokes still suck", she pouted.
Minami stuck her tongue out.
"I love you, you know", the leader said, in a husky voice.
"I know", said Atsuko, smiling.
They fell asleep few minutes later. It was really a sublime day...

It was the evening when they woke up, Atsuko yawned.
"Ne, Atsuko?"
"Hm, what is it, Minami?"
"Do you think...people can live if the one they love the most is gone?"
Atsuko frowned and came closer to the leader.
"What do you mean?"
"Hm...I...really love you, you see, and even if this past seven years you didn't like me, in appearence, you were next to me, always. But now...i want to always be with you, speak to you, love you everyday, and I can't imagine live without you...I think i would die. But maybe I can't be with you..."
Atsuko didn't know what to say, she didn't expect that at all. Minami seemed so sincere, and the tall girl was so happy to how deep her love was. But the leader had a sad look, and she didn't like to se her like that.
"Minami..."she smiled brilliantly, "you know, our love is like a video game!"
"A video game?" Minami frowned, lost.
"Yes! Exactly! Look, we have a goal,we need to get stronger, go through mazes and win battle. But we have each other and friends, so with faith, experience and will, we can make it!!"
"...You spend to much time with Kojima and her malefic DS!"
"Haha! Actually, I'm proud of my metaphore!"
"I can see that^^"
"Minami, I love you, and nothing can make us apart. I just want to be with you, so i believe it's gonna be okay, i could always be by your side."
Minami smiled, it warmed her heart, she was not alone, she believed in that love.

"Ne, Minami?"
"Huh?"
"Do you think one day... we could borrow “Itoshisa no accel” outfit?"
Eeh?What for?"
"So you can put it on...You're so sexy in it, maybe you could wear it and count my moles again..."
"Atsuko!"



Well, in the beginning, it was supposed to be the end, but i can't help but feel so sad now, i don't like to finish stories^^ :( Maybe i could try to continue it, I don't know, what do you think?? Yesterday I had this idea of a new fanfic atsu/saeyaka on Kagekidan, maybe i should write this one... :nervous. Anyway, thank you so much for reading this fanfic, it makes me really happy!! And i hope you will update soon too coz i neeeed fanfics^^ :panic: :thumbup :thumbup 
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 10, 2012, 12:16:35 PM
Great ending!!!!
AtsuMina forever!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Keisthename on August 10, 2012, 01:30:42 PM
yay that was really hot!! :heart: :heart: :heart: Thank you for this wonderful fic!!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chichay12 on August 10, 2012, 03:09:34 PM
WAHHHH!!
its done!!!WHY???
 :pleeease:
plsss..you should make a SEQUEL of this!!
This is so cool!!!
to much atsumina!!WOOHOO!!!
 :luvluv1: :on bleed: :on bleed: :luvluv1:
thank you for the update!!
and im hoping you should continue this..hehe
 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 10, 2012, 10:27:22 PM
Wow Chichay12, thank you for supporting me :thumbup, let's go, i'm gonna try to write a next part^^ :D But i have to warn you, i can keep writing forever, like a whole Atsumina life^^ :panic: :nervous
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 10, 2012, 10:28:21 PM
Keisthename, i love your fanfics, please write some more^^ thank you!!! :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: kahem on August 11, 2012, 12:10:55 AM
Wouhou!!! Mole counting for the win!!!!
And please continue!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Haruko on August 11, 2012, 04:51:30 AM
OMG!! love it you fic and the smexy scenes.. but i have a doubt whta happen the next day.. everybody knows that takamina love acchan but nobody knows that acchan also love takamina so what happen next.. when micchan harrash to atsuko like always or when mocchi harrash takamina....
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on August 11, 2012, 02:43:02 PM
Haruko, i'm gonna update soon, so wait a little!!! :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW update, part 5!!
Post by: fausto on August 14, 2012, 04:17:03 PM
Hey!! It's a sort of an update, maybe the story's end was good like that, i really don't know if it's okay to write a next part... :( Please, if you think it's not necessary, tell me, coz i don't want to ruin my story :nervous


Part 5

Minami stood all day at Atsuko's house, advantage that her parents were absent. They had so much things to share...  The captain woke up first, she was all tired of this long night of discussion but she couldn't help but smile, Atsuko loved her, it was so good to know... She decided to wake up who was still sleeping in the bed. The captain smiled seeing her beautiful face asleep, she must have a really good dream because she was smiling brightly.
"Aachan..."
"…"
"Aachan", she whispered, close to her ears.
"Hm...Minami?"
"It's me. You have to wake up, we must go in 30 minutes!"
Atsuko moved slowly, still stunned. She laid her head on Minami's lap.
"Ne, Minami, why don't you come with me in the bed...? You should have sleep with me..."
"I can't Atsuko, we have to go. And, I wanted you to have a good night in a big an empty bed."
"Mou, it would have been better with you..."
The captain smiled and stoop up.
"I'm gonna make you something for breakfast, wake up okay?"
"...kay."

30 minutes later they were in ataxi, on their way to meet the team A members. Atsuko was quite nervous, she couldn't stop thinking about the reaction of their firends.
"Minami?"
The midget was in the contemplation of the landscape.
"Hm? What is it Aachan?"
"How...do you want us to act...with the members?"
The midget smiled.
"It's okay, do as you want."
"Hm, maybe I'll try to do like usual..."
Minami felt a bit disapointed, she didn't want Atsuko to do like nothing happened. But she smiled instead.
"Do as you want, Aachan. Don't worry. If you need me, I would be there."
Atsuko nodded as shyly smiling.
They decided to enter to the theater separatly. Atsuko went first, she tried to seem like usual.
"Aachan!"
Before she could understood, Miichan was in her arms, hugging her.
"My wife! Where have you been?! I missed you!"
"Hehe...Miichan! Are you trying to kill me?^^"
Minami entered the room at this moment, she saw the two girls and pretented not to care, but it was so hard...
"Captain!"
Mocchi rant o the midget.
"You're so beautiful today!"
She hugged the short girl with passion, kissing her cheeks.
"Well, thank you Mocchi."
She locked Atsuko's eyes, it was bad...
"Now that everyone is happy, shall we start?"
Minami turned to the girl who had talked.
"Yes, Mariko, thank you^^"
They started the warm-up in silence. Yuko was whispering some things in Kojima's ears, who seeemed really embarrassed.
"Takamina, you should do this haircut more often, it suits you reallywell...said Mocchi, touching the midget hair."
"Eeh? It's the usual haircut Mocchi, what do you have today? said Minami, blushing."
"Hm...The Kojiyuu thing is giving me some ideas..."
"Well...Thank you Yuko."
"Sorry..."apologized Yuko as she saw Mocchi bite softly the ears of her leader.
"Mocchi! Stop that!" Atsuko said, raising her voice.
Everyone seemed shocked, they looked at the Ace.
"I think you shouldn't distract our leader when she's trying to work."
Mocchi stood in silent, to surprised to say anything.
"Well, thank you Atsuko, let's get back to work."
All the girls obeyed, Mariko smiled.
So, it was time. Atsuko was starting to care about the leader.
There was going to be interested...

Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Megumi on August 16, 2012, 11:58:12 PM
Please continue!
AtsuMina!!!!!!!!!!

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on September 13, 2012, 05:23:08 PM
Hey guys!!I'm sorry, it has been a while since the last time, but i was a little busy^^ Hope you remember the story!!Enjoy! :) :heart:

They practiced two hours and then, they decided to eat together, right on the practice floor.
"Nyan Nyan, let me feed you...!"
"I can feed myself Yuko."
"I know, but it's so cute when I do it!"
Mariko was looking at the Kojiyuu couple, amused. She couldn't help but want to know more about what was going on between the leader and the Ace.
"Takamina?" She asked with a low voice.
"Yes?"
"Would you say that Sayaka is a good kisser?"
"Eeh?" Asked the captain fully surprised.
Mariko noticed that Atsuko had stopped eating and seemed very concerned. The rest of the team was wainting for the answer, curious.
"I mean, she kissed you a lot in Kagekidan, so I was wondering what was your opinion."
Minami blushed like crazy.
"She didn't kiss me that much..."
"Anyway, tell us!" Said Yuko, excited.
"Hm...I don't know, it was okay, i guess."
"Really?" Asked Miichan," I thought in the dvd you said that you had like, butterflies in your stomach when she was kissing you."
Atsuko cleared her throat, as if she had swallowed through.
"Well...I thought she was really...kakkoi, and i was really in the Maria rôle so..."answered Minami shyly, as she looked at Atsuko.
"Wow! Anyway, let's talk about the rendez-vous Atsuko gave to our loved captain yesterday", said Yuko, mailiciously.
"What? Yuko! Why are you all teasing me today?"
Kojima opened wide eyes.
"You were at Atsuko's?! Are you talking to each other??"
"So cool! See Nyan Nyan, you should invite me to your house more often too!"
"So Aachan", asked Mariko," what's going on?"
"Nothing, I had to talk to Minami..."
"Minami?!" Exclaimed Mocchi," even me call her Takamina!!"
"Wow guys, we have a new couple here!" Screamed Yuko.
"Shut up Yuko, not everyone is like you."
"But Nyan Nyan..."
"Well, we'll talk about this later, time to go to work ladies", Mariko said wisely.
The girls drew up their lunch ad checked their mail before getting back to work.
Minami was daydreaming when her phone rang. She checked it and saw that she had a mail.

« So you enjoyed Sayka's kiss uh?
I'll walk you home tonight so we can talk about this.
PS: I'm gonna kill Mocchi.
»

She smiled, she was in big trouble but it was so good. Atsuko seemed to care and it meant that tonight a little longer. But Atsuko was scary nonetheless.


Minami was at the enter of the theater, talking to Kojima. Actually she was waiting for Atsuko to walk her home.
"Do you want to lunch with me tomorrow?" Asked Nyan Nyan.
"Yes, totally", answered Minami, happy.
"Okay, I'll treat you katsudon!"
"Yatta! Haruna, you're the best!""
Atsuko walked toward then, standing next to Minami.
"Well, I need to go, I think Yuko is waiting for me..."
"Are you kidding me? It's so surprising!" Laughed Atsuko.
"It's not funny Aachan, she's so obsessed by...brest all the time! You don't know how is it..."
"You're right", Atsuko looked at Minami," i don't know, it seems like your brest has a lot of attention those days..."
"Don't laugh! See you tomorrow!"
Kojima left the two girls, pickin up her phone to answer to Yuko.
"Let's go!" Said the captain.
They walked across the street and the Ace held her hand to call a taxi. Hopefully there was an empty on right there. Minami passed on the tall girl to open her the door car, like a real gentleman. It surprised atsuko and made her smile.
"Thank you."
They were quiet in the car, to shy to talk about that in front of a stranger.
After 15 minutes, they stopped at Minami's house. The captain hesitated, she didn't know what to do, sometimes Aachan still intimitated her.
"Well, I should go, we have to be up early tomorrow."
"Yep", said Minami," thank you for driving me home...I should be the one doing it..."
"Maybe tomorrow^^"
"Yes. So goodnight, I guess."
"Hm."
Minami left a quick kiss on Atsuko's two moles, and she began to leave.
"Minami?"
"Yeah?" She said as she turned.
"You...will still love me tomorrow, right?"
The captain smirked.
"No doubt..."she answered with a husky voice.

I'll upload the next part tomorrow, something about the captain and some underwears...^^ :thumbup :thumbup Thank you for reading!!

Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: kahem on September 13, 2012, 09:25:42 PM
I like jealous Acchan~
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: okotteru on September 14, 2012, 01:22:54 AM
^ indeed jealous acchan is the best  :luvluv2:

im glad you continued this fic ~~ looking foward to next chap (~^A^)~
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Haruko on September 14, 2012, 04:51:52 AM
in deed i need to read again the fic BUT it was awesome again :D jeje

WHAT atsuko dont do her move on takaboy.. come acchan you need to be clear with mocchi, nyanyan and anyone that takaboy belongs to you..

I lov ehte message in the takamina´s cellphone but it was a little confused that she doesnt do anything about that..yet.. i think :D..

And what about takaboy she is not jeloous about miichan..
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on September 14, 2012, 11:14:01 AM
Has expected, this is the next part. Well Haruko, you pointed the finger at all things that will be in this part^^ Enjoy (I hope!) .

Three days had passed since that day, and they had been so busy that they couldn't see each other. Atsuko was designed to play an important role in a new drama about school and ikemen, she wanted to announce it to Minami.But the captain had a tv show with the NO3B members. The Ace decided to call the midget to know if they could see each other today.
"Moshi Moshi?"
"Minami?"
"Ah, Atsuko, how are you?"
"Mou, it would be better if I could see you..."
"Hm, I'm out in an hour, do you want me to go at your place?"
"Really? Can you? My parents are away!"
"Aachan...what is that supposed to mean?"
"Eeh? No-nothing!"
"Haha! I'm joking!"
"Minami!"
"Gomen! I'll be at your place soon okay?"
"See you there!"

It was already 22pm when the captain left the studio, she was gonna be late at meeting Atsuko. She took a cab and wondered if her friend would be mad at her. Miichan and Kojima had joked her all day about Atsuko, actually it seemed to make them happy that they were together. Wait, were they together?
Nothing was clear between them, they hadn't really talk since the night of the confession.
Lost in her thoughts, she didn't realize that she was already arrived at Atsuko's house.
She rang the doorbell, a little anxious. Few seconds later the door opened and there was a beautiful Atsuko right in front of the captain.
"Hi, Atsu..."
She was unable to finish her sentence, Aachan was already embracing her.
"Minami!"
"Wow^^" she said hugging back hte girl with a large smile on her face.
"I'm so happy to see you! I missed you! Come in!"
They went in the tall girl's room right away, actually Atsuko was leading Minami to it. She sat on her bed, the midget decided to stood up, looking at her.
"How are you Aachan?" She said with a very serious face.
"Hm, better now", she smiled.
Dam, she was so cute. Every japanese guy had to fall for her, find her cute and beautiful, she was like the perfect girlfriend, smart, gorgeous, funny, kind...The captain felt a hint of pride, if people knew, they would be so envious.
"Minami?"
"Eeh? Sorry?"
"What were you thinking?"
"Hm, nothing..."she blushed.
"Mou, tell me!"
Looking at her, pouting, aaah, she couldn't refuse something to this girl...
"I was just thinking that...every guy in japan, and away, must think that you are the perfect girlfriend. And...I'm kind of proud of it..."
Atsuko seemed surprised, and then smiled really brightly.
"You're so kind! Actually, you're really kakkoi today!"
Right after the rehearsal of NO3B, Minami changed clothes to wear jeans,, a white tank and a little leather jacket. Her hair was seconded.
"You are...really...handsome."
"Yaa...i'm not."
"Yes, you are, your hair is so great, it's my favourite haircut on you."
She stood up and sprang to rate Minami and touched her hair. She nestled her nose in the nape of the captain.
"You smell so good", she whispered as she put her arms around Minami's neck.
"Aachan..."she was already blushing, not used to this physical contact yet." You smell good too."
"Really? I didn't put any perfume today."
"No, it's your natural scent that i like."
Unconsciously she crashed her lips against Atsuko's. The Ace pressed herself against the captain's body, wanting more. Her hand went down along her stomach and touched the leader's belly. Under her fingers she found a large band of tissue. Intrigued, she looked down and openened wide eyes.
"Minami?! You wear boxers?!!"
It was a black boxer with a large white band named « Calvin Klein ». Minami was so red right now, she took a step back.
"Aaah...gomen, Atsuko...it's not what you think...!"
"Hm, i think that you wear that because you think it's nice and cool. Am i wrong?"
"Etoo...No, but..."
"You know what? It suits you really well..."she smiled, taking a look at it again.
"Really?! Are you joking?"
"No, not at all, you're really great in it. And i think..it's hot^^"
"Aah...it's embarassing!^^"
"You don't lend them to Miichan right?" She laughed.
"No, no! For her, it's always pink pants! Wait...do you see them a lot on Miichan? She's too close to you by the way...always...trying to kiss you..." she frowned, picturing the scene.
"Ah, i see^^ Miichan is very tactile with everyone you know. Don't you have a sort of secret place behind your « all-in-pink » bedroom? Like a place where are your favourite clothes, your boxers, some GACKT posters, video games...?"
"What??"
"It would be cool though..."
Minami looked at Atsuko, this one was all excited and smiling.
"You're enjoying it. You're always talking about my « manly » side. And, I'm not gonna show my secret room right away^^"
"Well, I like every side of you, but as your girlfriend, I love your manly, ikemen side. Like Kay..."
"My...girlfriend?" she repeated, surprised.
"Is it bothering you?"
"No! Not at all! It's just that, i didn't know..."
They stood silent for a while, simply happy. Minami smiled.
"I have an idea."
"Yes? Tell me."
"I could cook you some pancakes and we could watch a movie eating them. What do you think?"
"Let's do that!"
Atsuko jumped out of the bed and joined Minami with a really big smile. Naturally, she took her hand and she dragged her down to the stairs, to reach the kitchen. The captain gently kicked Atsuko out of the room.
"Go find a movie and i'll bring the pancakes!"
Her girlfriend hugged her from behind.
"What sort of movie do you want to watch?"
"Whatever Aachan, as you want. But please, not an horror movie for tonight."
"'kay Minami!"
The tall girl forced her to face her and kissed her soft lips.
"I love you."
She left the room, hopping.
Minami looked at her girlfriend leaving, bitting up her lower lip. Something was rising in her, a behavior or an instinct that shouldn't have been there. She was a little ashamed but Atsuko was stimulating her boyish side. She was looking at her with a « boy-look » when it came to her body.
The ring of her phone disturbed her, it was Kojima.
"Moshi moshi?"she said as she came into the evening room."Ah, Kojima, yes, hm, you want me to meet you at the station or the restaurant?Okay, yes, fine, thank you. Bye!"
She hang up and sat next to the tall girl on the couch.
"Why always Kojima?" pouted Atsuko.
"What do you mean?"
"I mean you're really close to her."
Yes, as you are with Miichan."
"Hm..."she pouted again.
Minami smiled and came closer to her girlfriend.
"What's on your mind? Another killing mail?^^"
"Nothing... And by the way, i forgot to put my threat into execution, but it won't be long... Mocchi is way too close to you, do you think she's pretty?"
"She's cute, but you are way cuter!"
"…"
"Oh...don't worry, even if team members are great, you're the one I love."
"You...! You're not funny, you know you sho..."
She couldn't continue because  Minami had crushed her lips against her's. She was on her, exploring Atsuko's mouth with her tongue.
"Atsuko..."she whispered at her ear."I only want you..."
She touched  her neck and kissed the corner of her mouth.
"Are you okay with that?"
"Yes..."
The tall girl was shivering, Minami seemed so sure, and it was so sexy.
"Okay, so trust me. I'm the captain and I'm not allowed to love you, but if you tease me too much, I'm not gonna be able to hide it."
It was coming...Her manly side, she couldn't control it. She forced her to lie on the couch, toping her.
"You're so sexy... So hard not to touch you all the time, kiss you everytime time you smile..."
She kissed her once again, slightly exalted.  Atsuko had to admit that she was turned on, being toped like this by Minami.
"I wanna touch you...slowly... Your skin is so soft..."
As she said, she caressed Atsuko's belly, hips and lips.
"M-Minami..."moaned the girl.
"I love you saying my name like this...you drive me crazy."
She passed her hand under the Ace's shirt, the contact with her soft skin took her breath away. She couldn't think about something else than listening to Atsuko's breath and moans...so exciting...she had this sexy way to moan...
She continued her exploration, this time under her bra. Atsuko arched her body under the wave of pleasure, she clung at her girlfriend. Minami lifted the shirt so her skin was totally exposed, and without waiting she took a nipple in his mouth, licking it slowly. Atsuko let out a cry of surprise and pleasure, the captain licked it with insistance while she was touching the other, slowly, playing with her ​​nipple with the tip of her fingers.
Atsuko looked at his girlfriend, moving her mouth asking for a kiss, she needed it more than ever.
"I don't... think about Kojima anymore...^^" after the kiss.
"Stop...talking about her, please! Maybe I should film this and send it to Mocchi..."
Minami looked at the tall girl, discreetly opening the zipper of his pants.
"Bad girl...^^ Do... Do you want to have a boyfriend someday?"
"What? Why are you asking this now?"
She  gently inserted her hand in the Ace's pants.
"Don't know...i don't want you to...I want you..."
She touched without warning Atsuko's panties. 
"Hm...!Mina-mi..."
"...All for myself!"
She was all over the girl now, she couldn't resist but do like the first time, putting her leg between the Ace's. She wanted to follow the waves of Atsuko's body. The rush was intense, it was hard to handle it.
"I love you... Minami, i need you so m-much..."
The captain put her ear near the lips of his girlfriend, to hear her better, and accelerated the movement.
"Minami...I'm gonna..."
"Me too!"
They kept moving during few more minutes, then they grabbed each other and came together, almost at the same time.
Minami wanted to lay down next to her girlfriend but this one held her.
"No, stay, rest on me, she said breathless."
"No, i'm too heavy..."
"No, please, i want to feel you. It's good..."
They stood like this a long moment, listening to each other breath.
"I don't want to lose you, Minami. "
"You will not. No way you can escape me now^^"
Atsuko smiled. The captain looked at her, smiling too.
"And next time, you're so gonna have the “Itoshisa” outfit...! ^^"
"Can't wait^^ But...And my pancakes...?" she asked with a really cute face.
"Oh...You will have them", she captured the Ace's lips," but before...I'll have you once again, this is too good to stop..."
Atsuko smiled, it will gonna be a long night with her Takaboy. What a perfect way to end a day...^^

I hope it was okay, i'm sorry about Minami's underwear, if you think it's too much, i have to admit that i love the idea^^ I hope it's not boring... I think next i'm gonna upload a short story about this "scandal" with Atsuko, an atsumina fanfic obviously,because i'm so sad that people took pictures of her in such a moment...i totally support Atsuko, she will be my Ace forever!! Thank you!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: miayaka on September 15, 2012, 04:52:38 PM
 :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:

you hang me here.. but but but.. its so arggg
atsumina moment!

DONT BE SORRY!
THIS IS GOOD!
nyahahaha
THANK YOU!

Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Haruko on September 15, 2012, 06:43:56 PM
OMG! What did you do in my mind... jajaj yeah i though the same minami have a secret boyside.. and we loved it :D

Kai!! kakkoi :D.. all this ficwas.. WOW :D
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: kahem on September 15, 2012, 07:08:27 PM
OMG!!!! Making out scene!!!
It would be so funny if in Takamina's room you can push a button and a secret room appears with man things xD
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: fausto on September 15, 2012, 08:09:08 PM
Thank you everybody!!I'm so glad you liked it!! Kahem, i'm also thinking that there is a button to push in Minami's room, Mariko said it once^^ I hope you will read my new fanfic when i'll upload it!! :heart: :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chichay12 on September 26, 2012, 05:23:59 PM
fausto-san
Pls updte this and i want more mole counting part!hoho!
Looking forward to the next updte!
my god icant wait!!  :banghead: :banghead:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" part 8 update!
Post by: fausto on September 30, 2012, 05:21:39 PM
Here it is!!! :sweatdrop:

Part 8

 

Atsuko woke up slowly, disturbed by the sunlight passing through the curtains.
She stretched out her arm to embrace Minami but she only met up cold shits.
"Minami?"
No one anwsered and Atsuko decided to get up to find her. Next to the bed was a giant closet, with a lot of clothes in it. The tall girl looked for something comfortable but that would also look good on her, she couldn't help but think that Minami regretted what she've done the other night.  She chose a white shirt that fell until her knees. Simple.
She walked until the kitchen, still trying to wake up. She leaned against the doorframe of the kitchen, and watched Minami. This one was dressed just with her white boxer and a black tank top.
The captain noticed her girlfriend and smiled brightly.
"Aachan, come and sit, I made you some food! Wow, you're wearing my white shirt...!"
"Yes... "she said as she walked toward her.
"It's like a dream come true, you...naked in my shirt..."
"You sound like a boy^^"
"Well, better do, regarding of my « panties », I look like your boyfriend now. Eat, you need to be strong!"
The leader placed the dish full of cakes on the table.
"Today it's cakes and hot chocolate!" She said with a funny face, giving her a big mug of hot liquid.
"Yum!"
Atsuko rushed on the food because she was really hungry this morning, Minami had draw all her energy in bed. Thinking of it again, the midget was very sexy in this role, with all this boyish energy...
"Minami?"
"Hm?" she answered, busy to wash the dishes and clean up the table.
"How long do we have before going to work?"
"Hm, no more than 30 minutes, we have to hurry."
"Hm", the tall girl pouted,"" I wish we could have time for returning to bed.."
Minami smiled but she didn't seem as tempted as Atsuko, her thoughs were away, focus on the work to do today.  It made the Ace pouting, she wanted her friend to be more lovey dovey in the morning.
"I need to go dress, but promise you will eat at least two cakes and drink all of it!"
"Hm...I will promise that only if you kiss me", said with a seductive tone.
"Aachan, I'm late..."
"Okay, so I stop eating!"
"Erm, fine!"
The leader ran her hand behind the tall girl's neck and pulled her to kiss her quickly. Minami was really in a rush, she had to prepare for work, but touching Atsuko's lips was like stopping time...She couldn't stop kissing her, all the memories of last night was running in her head, and she was beginning to lost her mind. This girl was really fucking her brain!
Finally she stepped back, taking some air.
"Now, eat!"
""Ay!" she said in a cute voice, happy now that she had her kiss.

They left the house right on time. In the taxi they checked their mails and chat about the shedule of the day. Minami was busy, looking at the landscape, thinking about work, they were arrived before they could notice it.

"Well well well, let's see who's here", said Miichan out loud to draw the attention of the team.
"Yo bro!"Screamed Yuko with a terrible accent. "I bet you did some naughty things last night!"
"Yuko! That's not what you should say to your captain!" Replied Minami, outraged.
Yuko ignored her and took her by the arm to extract her some informations.
"Aachan, what did you do? Tell me!"
Minami came to my house and she...
"Atsuko!" Screamed Minami, covering her mouth with her hand. "We just talked and watched a movie."
She stood like this, wainting for Atsuko to understand that it was forbidden to talk about this, the leader was blushing like crazy, and Atsuko seemed not to care. They heard a little sound, it was Mariko who was talking a picture of the two of us.
"It's just a proof for the fans, you know, they want this for so long...^^Just saying..."said Mariko with her trollface.
"EVERYONE!! In position!! We're starting the practice, I don't want to hear about this anymore!!!" screamed Minami, eyes wide open.
She was really uncomfortable with this situation, so she wanted to forget and take the rôle of the captain for the day.

She didn't know but Atsuko wasn't ready to let Minami alone, she wanted to touch her and kiss her, and she was going to do anything to happen to this purpose... And obviously, the pervert one, Yuko, wanted to know all of the details, Mariko wanted to take some pictures and Miichan was ready to take advantage of Atsuko to know the story!
It was going to be a long day for the poor captain...

Hope it's not annoying, the next part should be eventful!!^^ :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Haruko on September 30, 2012, 07:20:34 PM
jajaj poor minami, with all crazy ladies outside its gonna be a nightmare for her.. i wanna know how minami gonna resist the temptation agains atsuko
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 30, 2012, 09:52:04 PM
This part was great!! They are so cute!! Of course it's AtsuMina!!
I want (NEED) more *you know what* scenes!!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:
UPDATE SOON!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: Strawberri on September 30, 2012, 11:12:35 PM
Ahahaha, this fics good!  :thumbup thanks for the update!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: kahem on September 30, 2012, 11:22:11 PM
What a good morning for the Atsumina pairing~
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: thebotole on October 01, 2012, 06:55:51 AM
atsumina  :twothumbs :wub:
update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: chichay12 on October 18, 2012, 07:18:13 AM
still waiting for the update..

Please,update this fausto-san :banghead:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
Post by: saeyukilover on October 19, 2012, 12:14:42 AM
super imagination  ON :ding: OH MY GOD!!!!!  :farofflook: :on bleed: Acchan naked under a shirt and Minami wearing boxers  :nya:

I AM SO GAY RIGHT NOW!!!!  :shakeit:

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: fausto on October 19, 2012, 01:59:17 PM
I'm sorry everyone, I've not update since a long time, searching for a job so I didn't really have the time... But anyway, here it is, just so you now, it will be a pervy section update someday, soon^^ :thumbup 


Part 9



It was the fourth time that Minami did the same sequence.
"Okay, try to be focus, this is not the hardest part, we have to move on!"
"How can you be so fast?!" Asked Miichan, breathless.
"She's training on free days!^^" joked Mariko, everyone knew that Minami was a perfectionist, and that she was the one who worked the most in AKB48.
Atsuko was lost in her thoughts, actually she was looking at the leader. She was so sexy that the tall girl didn't success in the choregraphy. She wasn't in the mood for the training, she just wanted to be with her « boyfriend »...
"Atsuko?! Focus!!"
What was with everyone today, everything was going wrong, nobody was focus, it was a disaster! Minami was tired and stressed, it wasn't good when the girls were wrong with dance.
"Okay, help each other for a while, if you need me, ask me"
Naturally, Yuko went with Kojima, Atsuko reached Mariko and Miichan.
"I don't know why but today it's harder..."sighed Miichan.
Atsuko was trying to do the moves, singing the song with a low voice.
"Erm, Aachan...?" asked Mariko, clearing her voice.
"What?"
"You should...keep an eye on Mocchi..."
Atsuko followed Mariko's look and watched accross the room and saw Mocchi way too close from Minami, simpering.
"I can't this movement, can you show me Takamina?"
She was all smiling, trying to get the leader attention, it drove Atsuko crazy, she could be really jealous when she wanted to. Her face changed.
"Oh shit...Mariko, be ready, you have to picture this, Atsuko is angry!!" Miichan laughed.
Indeed, Atsuko was walking toward the two girls. She looked at Mocchi for few seconds, Minami hadn't noticed her yet. The Ace lifted her shirt and made a knot below her chest. Yuko, who always had a radar for pervy/sexual/seduction things, stopped practicing.
"Nyan-Nyan! Take a look at this!^^"she said really excited.
"Ehm, Minami?" Atsuko said with a husky voice.
The midget gasped and let Mocchi go, recognizing Aachan's voice. She turned around and dropped her jaw. Atsuko was there, drops of sweat were running between her breast...and her flat and beautiful belly was exposed, everybody could see it.
"Atsuko!W-what are you doing?!"
"I'm too bad at the choregraphy, can you help me...?"
Yuko had a really dumb face, she was enjoying this too much.
"Wow, Aachan has grown a lot, see Nyan-Nyan, now she could be my student! So proud!"
"Yuko, dance and shut up! "Answered Kojima, exaspered.
Minami was really disturbed by the view of Atsuko's skin, but she couldn't refuse to help her.
"Hm, sure..."
"Thanks, can you be behind me, and show me the moves with your hands, I'm not flexible today... "said the tall girl looking at Mocchi with an insolent look.
"Mariko, take a picture!!" screamed Miichan, smiling.
The older girl obeyed, drew her camera and took a picture, too fastly to be seen. She was like a ninja when it came to camera.
Reluctantly, Minami stood behind Atsuko, and tried to focus on work, but when her hands touched Aachan's skin, her heart began to beat really fast. She could feel her body close to hers, and her brain began to be fucked;
"O-okay...so, one, two..."she pushed Atsuko's waist on the right, and then on the left," three, four, five...that's right. Then, turn around..."
The two girls were now face to face, all sweatie due to the effort. Atsuko was breathless, looking at the leader.
"Minami..."
The midget was in a really bad situation, her eyes were on Aachan's breast, and she couldn't think about something else right now...
"Okay, that's it, now you can practice... "said the short captain, stepped back from the tentation.
The tall girl nodded, and looked at Mocchi.
"She's mine. Process that."
"Eeh?! "Said Minami. "Atsuko, I need to talk to you!"
"Great!" Smiled the Ace.
They left to room together, leaving the all group.
"Wow, that was hot!!! And now they're gonna have wild sex next door!!" Sighed Yuko, before getting smacked by Kojima.
"Atsuko is such a teaser! She could have been my wife..."
"Don't be sad Miichan, you can go and comfort Mocchi, afterward, she's like a light version of Atsuko..."laughed Mariko. "Let me take a picture of this!!"
"No way..."pouted Miichan.

Minami grabbed Atsuko until the next room, she closed the door and frowned.
"Atsuko, what was that?"
"Nothing"
"Don't play with me, you were so weird!"
"Raah, this is Mocchi's fault! She was all over you!!"
Minami sighed.
"Aachan, you can't do this..."
"Why? You're my girlfriend, and she can't touch you and look at you like that. I swear I'm gonna kill her next time!"
The short captain saw her girlfriend in fire, she was really sexy like this, scary and sexy. But she couldn't think like that.
"This is practice, I had to help her!"
"Me too! But you yell at me for asking for help."
"You were seducing me Aachan, that's not help! I have to focus on my work!"
"So did she!! So I have ten minute a day to be with you and then it's all work?! You don't need me Minami, you don't have the time for this! Let's not talk about this anymore, go help Mocchi if you want to!"she screamed before leaving the room, picking up her stuff and leaving the building.
Minami was shocked. Obviously she was aware of the behavior of Atsuko. Everytime something went wrong, the tall girl was on fire, pouting and yelling, but now, the leader was doing her job, trying to focus on her work, trying to be fair with everyone. Of course she was tired, she wanted nothing else than be with her, hugging and having sex, but it wasn't the right time. And Aachan should understand this, it was unfair to be mad at the captain for that...
She came back in the dancing room, everybody was staring at her. They've heard everything, obviously...
"It's okay Takamina, she will understand..."said Kojima with a sweet smile. "You are right, you have to work."
"Thanks Haruna", she blushed. "Okay, let's back to work, we have to do it perfectly!!Gambatte!!"

They danced for two hours, and then, exhausted, everyone came back home.
Minami was in a bead mood, she couldn't forget the fight with Atsuko. Her heart was hurt, and honestly she wanted to run over her girlfriend's house, apologize and hug her, tell her how much she loved her. But it was none sense, she was still thinking that they need to be professional at work, keep a distance and act as mature persons.
Her parents were away again, for some buisness, and she felt really lonely at home. Her cats were always a consolation, but it wasn't enough tonight.
She took a take away menu and decided to order a pizza for the evening, she could watch the tv while eating eat, like an old woman. After ordering, she desperatly looked at her phone, hoping for a call...
The doorbell rang and Minami gasped, it was a really fast pizza!
She went to the door and opened it without looking.
"Hi, i'm sorry i don't have much money for the..."
She looked up to the person in front of her and frozed.
"A-Atsuko?!What are you doing here?"
The tall girl seemed embarassed, she was already blushing. She was wearing a little black dress, leather jacket and black boots. Wow, thought the leader.
"Can I come in?"
"Yeah..."
She stepped back and the Ace grazed the short one, making her shiver. Minami went to the kitchen, followed by Atsuko.
"I'm sorry, I ordered pizza so I thought it was it..."
"Minami..."
"Yes?" The leader was already falling for her, this way of telling her name was so cute, and she looked so beautiful...
"I'm sorry for today...I was just jealous, and I wanted your attention since the morning, I was angry because you seemed not to care. I thought that you had regret what you had done so...and Mocchi..."
"…"
"I know you're trying to be fair, help everybody, this is work and we have to behave like professional...I let myself be confused, and I'm sorry for that..."
That was so easy, Aachan had guessed what Minami had felt, and she was apologizing, in such a cute way...
"Aachan, it's okay. I'm sorry for being mad at you. I missed you" she said with a serious look.
Atsuko ran over the leader and hugged her.
"I've missed you too!! So you don't regret last night?"
"Nope"
"Do you love me?!"
"Yep"
"You forgive me?!"
"Hm..."
Atsuko seemed worried by the captain's hesitation. She was about to apologize once again when suddenly the short girl pushed Atsuko against the wall and kissed her roughly.
"Maybe I will after you'll get punished for what you've done to me..."
"A-ah Minami..."she moaned between the kisses. "I already apologized..."
"That's not enough! You tempted me, you took off your shirt in front of everyone, waiting for me to want you, and you disapeared from the practice!"
She put her hands on the flat belly that she had the opportunity to watch earlier.
"You're so bad Maeda Atsuko...Such a teaser..."
As she spoke, she kissed her again, and touched her hair, kissed her neck...
"Mi-nami! "
"My brain was fucked, and I was supposed to be working..."
She carried Atsuko bridal style until her room, and put her on the bed. She topped her and kissed her soft belly.
"Minami, don't tease me please, I want you right now!"
"Wait girl, it's a punishment, remember?"
She kissed her, looking for her tongue, Aachan was moaning touching Minami's back.
The doorbell rang again and Minami stopped.
"Ah, that's my pizza!!I'm starving!!"
She stood up, straightened her clothes.
"Are you serious??!"
"Yes, I didn't eat since hours!"
"But, we were having sex!!" pouted Atsuko.
"Hm, well, I guess it can wait...like you made me wait all day..."
She left the room to go take the pizza. Honestly she wanted Atsuko so bad that her legs were shaking, but it was a little revenge!
She was eating her pizza when Atsuko entered the room, in black and very sexy underwear. Minami dropped her jaw.
"Aachan?!Why...?What are you doing?!"
"Hm" she said as she grazed the leader to go take a glass of water, "I would like to take a bath. Can I?"
"A...bath?" Repeated Minami as Atsuko stood next to her, the captain eyes were focus on the tall girl's belly, really flat and temptating.
Suddenly she let go the pizza and with free hands she lifted aachan from the ground and carried her into her room.
"Minami, what are you doing?" Asked Atsuko in a smile.
"...This pizza is not so good after all."
Atsuko giggled when Minami placed her on the bed.
"You're such a teaser, anyone can resist..."whispered the captain as she kissed her neck.
"Sometimes you make things difficult.especially when my oponent is food!^^"
The short one was to busy topping her girlfriend to answer, her desire was so pressent, she needed to touch her skin, kiss her lips, hear her moan. She kissed the lovely moles, Atsuko was difficulty breathing.
"Atsuko, you drive me crazy everyday...I can't even think about something else all day..." she said as she rubbed her pelvis against Atsuko's.
"Aah Mi-nami! Don't tease me, please harder...!"
"This is gonna end to fast...! "
Suddenly Atsuko rolled Minami and topped her, smiling. She undid her bra in front of Minami's eyes. This one dropped her jaw again, this was heaven...
"Do you like what you see?"
"Yes...Aachan, I like it^^"
The Ace kissed her passionnatly, she couldn't hold it anymore. She rubbed her pelvis fastly, wanting more pressure.
"Actually...I have something that I want to try with you... But I don't know if..."hesitated Minami.
"What..."she said with an husky voice. "What do you want Minami...?"
Minami sighed, it was hard to say, she didn't know if Atsuko would be alright with it, even if she loved her, it was difficult to ask...
"I...I have a...strap-on. I would like to use it on you..."
Atsuko opened wide eyes and finally smiled.
"You're full of surprises, I wouldn't even think that you would like to do this kind of thing, but I'm so happy to see that you want to own me this way..."she said as she kissed her once again, excited by the request of Minami.
"So, you're okay with it...?"
"Totally...Hurry up and take me...! I can't wait anymore..."
Minami smiled and began to search for her toy when the doorbell rang once again. The short girl gasped and looked at Atsuko.
"Shit, who is it at this time?!"
"Leader, open!! I know you're here, you have to open I'm starving and I know it's pizza day for you!!"
Minami sighed, it was Yuko, a little drunk, wanted some pizza.
"I have to open, she's gonna stay here until, trust me..."

What do you think?Is it okay? Thanks for reading!! :)
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: chichay12 on October 19, 2012, 02:27:18 PM
ne fausto-san,i really love u!i mean ur fic!

And if u update in pervs forum,pls pm me!

Thank you for the update! :cow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: Strawberri on October 19, 2012, 03:38:04 PM
That chapter was  :drool: Thanks for the update! And please pm me the part once you post it on perv section  :)
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: Pdpond on October 19, 2012, 06:12:47 PM
Sweet scene :deco:
Omg! Takamina's room have a man things!
Can't wait next part~
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: saeyukilover on October 20, 2012, 03:57:14 AM
Yuko such a party blower!!!! Wow strap on minami using it to acchan  :panic:  :drool: now that I wAnt very want to read :drool:

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Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: Calyrica on October 20, 2012, 06:06:03 AM
Oh, wow, that was great. And I love Yuko, but :banghead:

Perv section fic coming soon, you say? :drool: I can't wait!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: Haruko on October 20, 2012, 06:35:04 AM
OMG!! I forgot this grat amazing and smexy fic!!! :D love it thanx... jejej love the jealousy acchan its funny for me..

jajajja Yuko!!! whaaaaaaaaat you stopped this smexy time.. and why are you drunk? where is haruna?
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: fausto on October 20, 2012, 11:26:07 PM
Update!!! This is the part before pervy section, i post it there and then you have to see the rest on the pervy section. Hope it would be okay!! :nervous


Part 10

"So Aachan, how are you since you left because leader was too close to Mocchi?^^"
"Don't encourage her with that Yuko please... "sighed Minami.
"I'm just asking" smiled the pervert one before swallowing a big piece of pizza. "Oh this is so good, meat and cheese, leader you're the best!"
Atsuko was smiling, of course it was really a bad timing, she was gonna have a private moment with her « boyfriend » and Yuko showed up like this, drunk. But actually, she was really funny when she was drunk. She noticed that Minami was looking at her with a weird look, like...like a boyish look. Aachan felt hot suddenly, when she realized that the leader was staring at her with an hint of desire. Thankfully Yuko was eating and not paying attention, or she would be too happy to see something like this.
"I have a great idea!!"
"Oh no..."sighed Minami.
"Leader!! Let's play some video games!!It's been so long!!"
"What? But Minami doesn't have video games...right?" She asked looking at the short one who was blushing.
"Oooh..."smiled Yuko "so you fancy our leader but you don't know about the Pod...Funny^^"
"Yuko..."
"The pod...?!"
"…"
"Leader...it's about time to show her I think" She looked at Atsuko, "Me I already know because I helped her to do it, and usually when I'm drunk I come and play video games with her all night...^^ Let's go!"
Yuko ran to Minami's bedroom followed by the two others. Atsuko was really curious about this. Yuko seemed really excited, waiting for the leader to show the room to the Ace.
"I'm sorry if I didn't tell you about Atsuko, it's just that it's not really a good thing for most of the people..."
As she spoke she went to her dressing and pushed it on the left, Atsuko opened wide eyes when she saw a door behind this emplacement. Yuko was already opening it and went in it, laughing. Atsuko dropped her jaw, it was a pretty large room with walls paint in red, and black furnitures. She slowly entered in the room, looking at everything. There was One piece posters and manga, large collection of cds and a big dressing with boyish clothes. And in the back, a litlle sofa with in front of, a large TV and a PS3. Yuko was already playing at a fight game, laughing and screaming.
"So, this is the « Pod »...?"
"Yes... I'm sorry if you're disapointed... "she looked at Atsuko and saw her smiling, "what?!"
"This is so cool!! I knew it!! This pink and girly room is so not like you!!"
"Yeah right? Minami one day someone will know that you can't have a room so girly^^" laughed Yuko.
"So...Who knows?" Asked the Ace.
"Just the three of us. I don't want to tell anybody..."
"Leader!! Come and play against me, I still have to beat you since last time!!"
Minami apologized in a gaze for Atsuko.
"It's okay, go on, I'm gonna look at this cool room"
The short one sat on the sofa while Atsuko approached the dressing, looking at all the black boxers, cool jackets and beautiful ties. It was so cool to know that a Minami has this room, that she was hiding it. In secret, she was playing video games and dressing as a boyish girl when no one knows... Too bad Yuko was there, she was so turned on by all this!!
They played for about one hour, there were so geeks but it was funny. They seemed like two guys fighting with half-naked girls characters, Yuko had taken the one with bigest boobs, obviously, but she sucked at this game.
"Ah, Takamina, let me win at least one time!!"
"No way, you have to win for yourself, or else it's not satisfying"
"Oh, you're such a leader all the time..."pouted Yuko.
"Don't complain about that, Minami is a great person, you wouldn't be the same if she wasn't here" said Atsuko as she sat on Minami's lap, kissing her roughly.
"Wow!! This is so hot!!" screamed Yuko.
"Atsuko..."
Minami was breathless, so surprised of the kiss and turned on by it. She so wanted Atsuko earlier that it was torture not be able to realize her desires...
"Yuko...What do you say if I call Kojima so you can go at her house and let me enjoy my Minami for myself, uh?" Proposed Atsuko with a husky voice.
"DONE!!" screamed Yuko.
Atsuko smiled and drew her phone to call Kojima.
"Nyan-Nyan, it's Aachan. I'm at Minami's and Yuko is here, maybe a litlle drunk. Minami and I would like to...speak you see, could be possible for you to take Yuko at your house?"
"Yuko is drunk?Again? But we're tuesday...It's a big service you know that Aachan..."sighed Kojima.
"I know, please..."
"I'm coming Nyan-Nyan!!!Be ready for the skinship!!!"
"I'm sorry but please..."pouted Atsuko.
"Okay...Tell her to come"
"Thank you so much!! I love you!!Bye!"
She hang up and smiled at Yuko.
"You can go Yuko!"
"GREAT! Bye!!!"
She ran on the stairs and slamed the door. Atsuko was still on Minami's lap, she looked at her.The Ace kissed her passionnatly, she couldn't hold it anymore.
You can read the rest here http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34100.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34100.new#new)

After this, tell me what you think!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: Bookse on October 20, 2012, 11:51:58 PM
Can u pm that part to me? please  :cathappy: :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: steftakami on October 21, 2012, 12:03:29 AM
omg!!!! please pm for me!!   :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: 21stMay on October 21, 2012, 12:27:14 AM
Please pm me the part :bow: I'm begging you
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: saeyukilover on October 21, 2012, 01:19:33 AM
Pm me aswell , can't go in to perv section  :bow:


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Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: Pdpond on October 21, 2012, 02:11:01 AM
Pm me too~ :cathappy:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: bimbo on October 21, 2012, 02:13:06 AM
Please PM me T-T
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: sasumiofjp on October 21, 2012, 03:06:34 AM
Me too
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: h20 on October 21, 2012, 03:13:29 AM
great story :twothumbs . pm me too
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: Haruko on October 21, 2012, 04:09:48 AM
not not you are kiddos... jaja just kidding..


OMG!!!! what are you doing to my mind..
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: ChoyShinhwa on October 21, 2012, 04:55:42 AM
Can't believe little general manager like this T.T

But....I like =)) Great story ^.^

PM me too.
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: nao707 on October 21, 2012, 01:50:11 PM
Please PM me too Fausto-san.... :bow:

Very great update, Gambare Fausto-san :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: fausto on October 21, 2012, 02:13:48 PM
I'm going to PM everybody who wants it, thank you for your interest!! @Haruko-san, wait a little longer...your mind is going to be wild coz I'm going to update this with more sex...hehe
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: dark48 on October 21, 2012, 02:34:08 PM
OH Man I love this fic :heart: :twothumbs.... pls PM me tooo..... :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: Strawberri on October 21, 2012, 02:44:22 PM
Pm please!!  :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: yuuzu05 on October 22, 2012, 12:17:34 AM
soo...the pod, huh? ahh i loved that!  :D :D
kekeke haruna taking a drunk yuko in so atsumina can "discuss things"  :cathappy: XD
thankyou for the great atsumina story :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: saeyukilover on October 22, 2012, 03:23:58 AM
Thank you for pm~ing me.... and urstory is great :)

I just want more atsumina and kojiyuu smexy scene moments :)


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Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: sherryri on October 22, 2012, 06:09:58 AM
pm me too?
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: fausto on October 22, 2012, 06:40:03 PM
PLease tell me if I didn't pm somebody, i'm lost^^  :nervous
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: takamae on November 04, 2012, 01:44:35 PM
Please...please...please....PM me that part  :bow:  :bow:   :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: wynaut on November 04, 2012, 02:38:15 PM
I want that part too
Please include me in your pm  :mon prayer:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: fausto on November 04, 2012, 05:48:01 PM
I'm sorry, apparently we can't pm smut part to the people who are not able to see it on their board... :( I'm sorry I didn't know, it's against the rules if i do it... :nervous
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: chichay12 on November 04, 2012, 05:56:23 PM
are you gonna update this??hohoho
sorry if im distubing you  :sweatdrop:

im still waiting to ur update..
i hope i will read it soon,, :doh:

i will wait no matter how long it takes,just update this..
 :sweat: :sweat: :sweat:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: fausto on November 04, 2012, 06:14:00 PM
Yes, I'm gonna update it, I'm so sorry because I'm so late for this, I have to update the three fanfics... :nervous I'm gonna update soon, I swear, thank you for waiting for me!!! :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: chichay12 on November 04, 2012, 06:23:00 PM
Yes, I'm gonna update it, I'm so sorry because I'm so late for this, I have to update the three fanfics... :nervous I'm gonna update soon, I swear, thank you for waiting for me!!! :thumbup

Yey!thank you and im looking forward to read it!
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: kairi on November 08, 2012, 08:36:46 PM
I want that part too ;D your fic are amazing !  :thumbup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 10
Post by: dark48 on November 11, 2012, 11:41:53 AM
Looking forward to the next update....

Need a dosage of Atsumina fics ^^


Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11
Post by: fausto on November 11, 2012, 06:34:45 PM
Hello everyone, short update, but the update will come very soon, I have to finish it but I give you this guy so you can wait!!! :thumbup

Part 11


 Atsuko was busy talking to Miichan when Yuko showed up in front of her.
"Are you gonna tell me what happened last night?"
"Hm, no"
"What?! You know that you should thank me because you were able to see the...you know what..."she said as she looked at Miichan suspiciously.
"Maybe but you are far too pervert to be able to listen to that...and Minami would kill me..."
"Why do I'd kill you?" Asked Minami as she showed up next to Atsuko.
"For nothing captain!" Said Yuko with a big smile.
"Yuko wants to know what we have done yesterday" answered Atsuko, looking Minami in the eyes.
The captain blushed and looked at Yuko.
"We talked, as usual. And you? Did you enjoy your date with Haruna?"
"Yes! I was drunk but Nyan-Nyan took good care of me!!"
"Atsuko was busy looking at her girlfriend" Minami noticed it and smiled.
"But obviously it doesn't interest those two who are all lovey-dovey because they..."
"Shut up!!" the two girls screamed together.
"Relax girls! There is no shame, Nyan-Nyan was really sweet last night, she left me sleep with her and since I was drunk...I was really touchy..."
"Yuko! Don't say another word or else you won't come in my house again!" Screamed Haruna, blushing.
"Yuko, you should stop harrassing Haruna like this, she's not your toy you know..."pouted Minami, protecting Kojima, discretly looking at her breast.
Well, not so discreet because Atsuko had an eye on this and felt fire on her cheeks, she didn't like Minami to look at another one's body.
She noticed that Mocchi had entered in the room and she walked toward her with a devil smile. Everyone was looking at her, surprised by her move.
"Mocchi, I'm sorry about yesterday..."she smiled, putting her arm around Asuka's neck. This one didn't know what to think.
"It's okay..."
"No, no, I have to apologize for this. Do you want us to work together today? Minami said that we have to help each other" said Atsuko looking at Minami with an hint of challenge.
"Hm...I-If you want. It would be great..."
"Great" answered Atsuko has she smelled Mocchi's neck by behind. "You smell so good today"
Asuka was frozen, scared of Atsuko's behavior but totally under her charm, she had to admit that this girl was really beautiful... Minami was asking herself what was this new Maeda game, and she wasn't enjoying the situation.
"Aachan, can I talk to you for a minute, please?"
"Sure..."she smiled and walked in a corner with the leader.
"Do you feel the sex tension in the air?! This is so hot!!!" screamed Yuko.
"Go training pervert" said Kojima.

Atsuko looked at  Minami, satisfied. She seemed to be upset, and even it wasn't professional, it was exciting.
"Atsuko, what are you trying to do?" Asked the leader with a serious voice.
"…"
"Aachan?"
"Ah, sorry, I was disturbed by you saying my name with this serious and sexy tone..."
"Atsuko!"
"Again?^^"
"…"
"Sorry, Minami. I'm not doing anything, I'm just trying to show more affection for Mocchi."
"Affection? Why?"
"I have to be gentle with everyone..."
"Gentle? You don't have to touch her and smell her neck like this! And she's scared don't you see?"
Atsuko smiled, she could feel that Minami was jealous of this, and it was good to know.
"Minami...Are you jealous? Because I was just being nice to her..."
"Jealous?! Not at all and don't be..."
She stopped talking because she saw Atsuko's lips coming way to close to her mouth.
"What are you doing?!"
"Nothing, Atsuko smiled maliciously. Can I come back to my prey?"

She walked away, smiling. She wasn't exactly against Mocchi but since this one was all over Minami all the time she couldn't stay like this without saying a word. So she had decided to be a little closer to her and make the leader jealous.
During one hour, she didn't let Mocchi alone, always smiling to her and touching her. Finally she decided that it was okay for the day and thanked her.
"This was good Mocchi, did you enjoy it?"
"Yes Maeda-san...Thank you."
"You're welcome, but for the future, if you need help, ask me not Minami, she's busy and I would like to help her by doing a bit of her job...Okay?"
"O-Okay."

Atsuko took a rest on a chair, watching at the others who were training again.
"So, did it work?"
"Ah, Haruna! What worked?"
"Your plan with Mocchi"
Atsuko blushed and smiled.
"How did you..."
"Come on, I have Yuko all the time, plus, you're not so discreet^^"
Aachan smiled and looked at the others again.
It's silly I know...It started when Minami looked at your breast...
"What?! I'm sure it wasn't what you think..."
"I'm sure you know that Minami like Yuko is a boy in her mind, so she likes boobs. And you have boobs, so..."
Kojima looked at her friend who was sighing.
"You have a beautiful breast too, you just don't think about showing it to her. Do it, show it to her, she won't look at something else, trust me..."
"How do you know?"
"Yuko isn't such a pervert for nothing... Sometimes I have to admit that I...^^"
"No way!! You're encouraging her?!!"
They looked at each other, smiling.
"Listen, I have another bra in my bag in the my locker, it's helping the brest to look bigger. Take it for tonight and show it to Minami."
"Really?? Oh Haruna you're a great friend!!"

She ran to the locker room to get the bra, too excited to wait longer.

Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: Haruko on November 11, 2012, 07:25:49 PM
I always know it!! My yuuchan is a victim but this evil haruna... jaja She make her pervert.. my yuuchanis so innocent and..

Jajaj what im talking abobut.. yuuchan is always a pervert.. but know she found a person who can control all this pervernest ...

love it.. im waiting for watch how acchan makes her boyfriend that just looking to her only..
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: dark48 on November 12, 2012, 01:25:56 PM
hahah perverseness is in the air
 Go for it Acchan get Takaboy

Tnx for the update ^^
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: Pdpond on November 12, 2012, 04:44:47 PM
Perver plan!
Devil acchan and Evil haruna hehe :deco:
Look forward next chapter~
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: miayaka on November 13, 2012, 01:59:04 PM
pfffttttttt
 :mon mischief:
nyan nyan acchan evil hahaha
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: saeyukilover on November 14, 2012, 11:02:54 AM
pervert acchan on the go!!!

 :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: kahem on November 15, 2012, 08:01:03 PM
Good job Acchan lol
Haruna ow~
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: takamae on November 16, 2012, 02:05:39 AM
Haruna provoke yuko, nice one, never thought haruna can do that  :P
Go acchan...go acchan...make minami jaelous, hahahaaaa.......
Thanx for the update ^^
I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 11 update!
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 01:38:28 PM
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for interesting fanfic  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Pls allow me to excess the extra section  :bow: :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: fausto on November 20, 2012, 01:39:36 PM
Time to update!! This is the part 12  ;)

Part 12

She ran to the locker room to get the bra, too excited to wait longer. There were nobody in the room, and she hurried to find the object of her future teasing with the midget. She found out the bra in the bag on Haruna, it was black with lacework. It was really nice, for a second, Atsuko imagined it on Haruna and thought that it has to be pretty sexy. She looked at it for a few seconds and decided  to wait for tonight to try it.  She fastly put in on her own bag and ran toward the dancing room.
She winked at Haruna and started to dance again, trying to concentrate on her moves. After few minutes she was on her own bubble and trained for two hours, almost not feeling the fatigue.
"Atsuko?"
"…"
"Atsuko?"
"Hm...what?" She said as she finally stopped her movements.
"It's enough for today, you have to rest now" said Minami looking at her, worried.
Atsuko smiled and noticed that almost everybody was already in the locker room.
"Anoo...Aachan?"
"Yes? What is it Minami?"
The midget stamped her feet and twisted her fingers nervously.
"Do you want to...come to my place tonight?"
Atsuko was about to smile, the leader was so cute trying to invite her, but then she remembered her plan.
"Hm, tonight I can't Minami, I'm sorry...I've already have plans..."
"Eh? Ah...I...Okay, that's okay...So, have fun, maybe another time."
The leader tried to hide her deception and went pack away her stuff. Atsuko looked for Yuko and found her next to Haruna, of course.
"Yuko, do you know what Minami is doing after this?"
"Hm, she's just gonna come back home I think...Why, do you have an evil plan?!^^"
"Not telling you! Thanks anyway, and be nice to Haruna!"

Atsuko was smiling when she left the theater, she was free and ready to execute her plan. She arrived at Minami's house 30 minutes later. It seemed that the leader was already here, but it was okay. She had put on the bra before coming here, and it was comfortable, and sexy. Aachan didn't have so much confidence but she had to recognize that it made her breast enhancement.
She slipped the key into the lock and opened the door slowly. She needed to be as quiet as possible, to keep the surprise.
The house was quiet, no light on the living room and some smell of katsudon in the air, which made Atsuko smiled. This one was really in love with this dish. The Ace was still smiling when she heard little sounds of video games. Of course! Minami was alone in the house so she was playing video games in the pod. This geek part of the leader personality was new but really pleasant and sexy actually for Atsuko.
She claimed the stairs slowly , taking off her coat and let it on the stairs. She was now black tank top very neckline specially due to the magic bra. Honestly she was a little a bit scared to do this, maybe Minami was tired, maybe she was sad. But too late, she had to do it!
She stucked her head through the door and looked in the inside of the room. The leader was sitting in front of the screen, playing a fighting game. She seemed really absorbed in it.
Knock. Knock. Knock.
Minami gasped hearing this sound and turned around to see what was that. She frowned and noticed  the little head of her lovely Atsuko through the door.
"Atsuko? Is it you? What are you doing here?" She asked with a sweet voice.
"Yes, anooo...I wanted to see you..."
"But, I thought you already have plans" she frowned.
She hadn't pause her game so she was switching between looking at Aachan and playing the game.
"Can I come in?"
"Sure, come" answered Minami as she continued to play, didn't want to lose this fight.
Atsuko slowly entered the room, pulling on her white skirt, stressed.
"How are you? Did you eat already" she said as she was hiting her enemy on the screen, "if you want I can cook you some..."she couldn't finish her sentence because she had actually dropped her jaw due to the vision she had.
Atsuko was in front of her, in a very little skirt and big...boobs...!!! What was that, her imagination? An optical illusion...?
She stood up as we could heard a “Game over” coming from her PS3 but she didn't care, only obsessed with this miraculous vision. She looked at her from head to toe, staying a little bit longer on her boobs.
"Minami...are you okay?" She asked with a husky voice.
Now that she saw the expression of her dear leader, she had more trust in herself. The game was on!
"Atsuko...what...are they..."
"Real?^^ Do you want to check?"
Without warning Minami put her both hand on Aachan's boobs. This one was fully surprised and blushed a little, but less than the midget who suddenly realized what she was doing.
"Aah dame dame!! Sorry, sorry..."
"I'm sorry you died" said Atsuko watching the screen.
"Oh, it's okay... Are you okay anyway? What are you doing here?"
"I just wanted to see you" she smiled as she was walking dangerously toward the midget.
The small leader was slowly falling for the beautiful Ace when her phone rang.
"Sorry, I have to answer that you know..."
"Sure..."
"Moshi moshi?"
"Leader, it's a trap! Are you already trapped?!"
"What? Yuko, what's wrong?"
"Is Atsuko in front of you with a gorgeous boobs, bigger than before?"
"...How do you know??"
"Because, it's a trap, Haruna helped her!!"
"What's the point of this?"
"Baka! Sex!!"
"...Are you warning so I can escape this?!"
"No!! I'm warning you so you can punish Aachan by hard sex, this is the good part!!"
"...Yuko..."
"Hang up now and make me proud of you!! You'll tell me tomorrow!!"
Minami hang up and looked at Aachan.
"Yuko said that you trapped me."
"And...?" asked Atsuko without expression.
"Is it true?"
"If it was...?"
Minami waited a moment and then smirked.
"It would be great!!" she said as she jumped on her girlfriend and kissed her.
Atsuko felt her heart exploded and her legs bluckled.
"Mi-nami!"
"So you came here to tease me?" She said as she kissed her non stop, wanting her mouth so badly.
"Maybe...don't you like that? I'm always the one who start this...I wonder if it's because you don't want it...?"
Atsuko gave another look at her girlfriend and smiled. She was wearing a sweater with hood on and black jeans.
"Minami, you're so kakkoi today, you changed..."
"Han-han, I feel comfortable in this, since no one can see me..."
"Lucky me... Neh, Minami?"
Minami didn't answer and kissed her roughly, wanting some more, starting to touch her. Her right hand was already on her waist, caressing the soft skin.
"So you asked Haruna help to trap me?" She asked as she bite the Ace's neck, which made this one moaned.
"Actually...she told me to do that and offered me her bra for one night."
Minami stopped kissing Aachan and smirked.
"So, this belongs to Haruna huh...?"
Atsuko first didn't get it and then frowned. She forced Minami to sit on her sofa and sat on her lap.
"Are you trying to imagine Haruna in this bra?"
"No-no! I'm just thinking that Yuko must enjoy being trapped like this..." she couldn't help but smirk again.
"Bakamina..."Atsuko said as she smiled, unzipping Minami's sweat-shirt. "We're gonna play a game..."
"A game?" Said the leader prudent.
"Han-han... We have to kiss but no touching, and the first who touches the other lose... And the other can do whatever she wants. Ready?"
"I'm not sure this is..."
Atsuko was already on her lips, attacking her with some wild kiss which made Minami's heart explode in her chest. She was playing roughly, the tall girl was such a teaser, knowing what to do to drive the midget crazy.
Minami answered to the kiss by slipping her tongue in Atsuko's mouth, battling with her's. Atsuko was surprised by this and she had to hardly concentrate not to put her arms around the leader's neck. She had almost lose, but she was feeling agressive tonight, and she didn't want to let Minami lead the afer game...
The Ace intensifed the kiss and decided to use her favorite trick when it came to Minami's weakness. The leader was again battling with her tongue and licking her lips, Atsuko really enjoyed that and let a moan escape from her lips. Minami heard it and couldn't hold it anymore, it was too hard to stay away from her girlfriend, no touching her. She began to caress Atsuko's leg, softly. This one stepped back and looked at Minami with a big smile.
"I won!^^"
"It's not fair..."pouted Minami.
"It is! You were aware of the rules" she laughed.
"How can I resist this sort of thing, especially now that you have this..."she pointed at Aachan's breast.
"I won!! Fatality!!^^"
Minami was pouting but she couldn't hold it any longer, Atsuko was so cute that she smiled.
"Okay, so you have to do what I say, it was the deal okay?"
"'kay Atsuko" sighed the leader.
"So, play your video game" said the Ace with a malicious smile.
"Eh?! You did all this so you can ask me to play my game?!"
Atsuko laughed at the Minami fail expression, it was so funny to tease her.
"Wait, you have to play, and don't lose any fights okay, focus on the game and win."
"Easy!! This is a cool punishment!^^"
Minami was feeling so relief that she grabbed her stick with a big smile a started to play again. Atsuko smirked and sat next to her leader, watching her play for few seconds, then she started to touch Minami's tigh, slowly.
The leader continued to play, smiling when she felt Aachan's contact on her leg. She was happy to be with her when she played, it was a relief that the tall girl didn't mock her favourite activity when she was at home.
While Minami was busy doing a super-damage attack on her enormous enemy, Atsuko put her soft lips on the midget's neck and started to lick her skin, near her ear.
"Aachan..."shivered Minami, surprised by this gesture.
"Hm?"
"What are you doing...?"
"I'm getting my price...Ah, yes, I forgot to tell you...You have to win your game despite of the fact that I'm gonna do whatever I want with your body...Mi-na-mi!"
"Eeh?! Aachan!"
"No game over or it's gonna be worse..."she said as she sat on Minami's lap, facing her. "So stay focus my love!^^"
"Atsuko you're so evil!! How do you want me to..."
Atsuko kissed her and smirked.
"Do it!"

Next update of this in the pervy section!! :nervous Since I didn't write it, I will link it here when it's done!! thanks for reading!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 20, 2012, 02:43:18 PM
I want the next UPDATE!!! NOW! NOW!!!!!!  :frustrated:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: miayaka on November 20, 2012, 03:24:00 PM
oh my you left me hangin'
dont tease meh!!!
 :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: chichay12 on November 20, 2012, 03:28:20 PM
oh my you left me hangin'
dont tease meh!!!
 :cry: :cry: :cry:

please...update now!!!hahaha... :doh:
 :ptam-shy: :farofflook: :luvluv1:

update soon fausto-san!!!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: takamae on November 20, 2012, 03:40:41 PM
Haruna trap yuko like that, of course she will accept it gladly  hahahaaaa.....
Acchan is such a teaser, really making minami can't resist her  :drool:  :drool:
Thanx for the update ^^
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: saeyukilover on November 20, 2012, 04:08:21 PM
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  :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: ATSUMINA  :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool:
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Sydney W on November 20, 2012, 04:46:43 PM
Drooling !!!  :drool: :drool: :drool:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: fausto on November 20, 2012, 05:02:01 PM
I've wrote it, it's here!!! http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new)  :nervous
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 20, 2012, 07:55:14 PM
Acchan is such a tease :)
It is getting really hot in here!!
I like it :)
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: kahem on November 21, 2012, 01:17:32 AM
What a great punishment hehe
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Haruko on November 21, 2012, 07:11:19 AM
jejej yuko just call her for ruin the mood.. but atsumina are so hot in there.. I want a built a place like that for me sounds so good :D..

and the punishment.. come on takaboy focus focus.. in the game of course
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: cisda83 on November 21, 2012, 08:37:48 AM
Atsumina... yeah  :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: stepk on November 21, 2012, 11:13:42 AM
I can never read fanfic of these links. :angry:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: dark48 on November 21, 2012, 01:55:17 PM
Acchan's teaser mode is on

Go for it Acchan!!!

Do your best on staying focus Takaboy!!!

Tnx for the update ^^
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: qweakb on December 14, 2012, 10:35:08 AM
I can never read fanfic of these links. :angry:

same :'(
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Elo on January 28, 2013, 03:40:36 PM
i am new  yoroshiku onegai shimasu :bow:

i love this fic

pm please :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Elo on January 28, 2013, 05:11:14 PM
I can never read fanfic of these links. :angry:

same :'(

same why cant we read it  :banghead: :banghead:
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Elo on January 28, 2013, 05:13:08 PM
ano...i couldn't read the last chapter..  :badluck: for some reason, can somebody send me the link? It would be wonderful if someone send it to me, thank you very much. 


same coul you send me the link ?
thank you very much   :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: triela on January 29, 2013, 05:36:07 AM
can you Pm the second part of chapter 10 and de chapter 12

i love you fanfic  :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

than you
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: hen on January 30, 2013, 07:27:16 AM
hello, i'm new here but i  :heart: ur FANFIC.

can u pm me chapter 10+.  i so  :heart: to read the rest of it.

thank you.
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: sherryri on January 30, 2013, 09:18:12 PM
seems like those links are always off my limits.
can you pm me the last chapter?
thanks. have been enjoying your fics.
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: sopiyah on February 02, 2013, 08:57:14 AM
thaks for your fanfic.....
i really love it  :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
and i always waiting for your update...
 :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 9 UPDATE!!
Post by: den_takacchan on March 17, 2013, 03:05:48 PM
wahh . great story!!   :cow: :P aggressive acchan and takaboy doing pervy stuff!  :mon squee:i know i'm late to ask  :mon mischief:

this but can u please pm the pervy part. ?? :mon cute:  :cry: please i would really like it if u would please and if u do so thx in advance!!
 :mon money:
HEHE ! yay for atsumina shippers!!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: den_takacchan on March 17, 2013, 03:23:55 PM
haha minami getting trapped by acchan . damn hot  :drool: aahhh i wish i can read the perv  :tantrum:stuff please can u pm it to me. i'm a new reader here so i dont have an access yet please  :pleeease:
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: LukeMatsuda on March 23, 2013, 06:29:50 PM
Great story!!  XD

Really want to read this full story, but I still have no access.  :cry: :cry:

Very good story, please continue. :bow:
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Archer1992 on May 16, 2013, 06:24:56 AM
Update soon my friend
your FF its so hot
i like it...
thanks ^_^
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: heomagic on May 30, 2013, 07:37:41 AM
Please send me the continue of part 10... I can't go into the continue by the link you gave me... so please pm me please...
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: cisda83 on May 30, 2013, 08:40:33 AM
Update please...

Your story is one of my fav.

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: fausto on May 30, 2013, 12:03:54 PM
Sorry guys, I think that the fanfic is over now, I know I will disappoint you because you're plenty to ask an update but... I feel like letting things like this. Is it bad? :? :nervous
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: cisda83 on May 30, 2013, 01:10:20 PM
Too bad.... I guess

Well I can just say... such a pity for me...

I really enjoyed reading it...

But it's up to you...

I guess I can just say....'Thank You' for the story so far...

I hope I can see your other creations in the future...

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Mina on October 11, 2013, 09:25:58 AM
Hi I am new here, I want to say that his/her fanfiction is too much. But he/she has a problem I don't get to go for the session pervy. I made the login and everything but of the the following warning. 
"The topic or board you are looking for appears to be either missing or off limits to you." 
 
Excuse the grammatical mistakes, I am Brazilian.
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Mina on October 19, 2013, 04:29:31 AM
Thank you for answering my e-mails, now I know as entering in the session pervy.   :thumbup
Title: Re: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: chibi_airin on October 28, 2013, 02:06:41 AM
wow this one is kinky XD

Loved it!
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Kamo99 on February 26, 2014, 12:48:31 AM
i wanna get in to the perv section  :panic:
omg tho really good n hot fic  :shakeit: :heart:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: akb48@nina on March 22, 2014, 05:07:32 PM
I've wrote it, it's here!!! http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new)  :nervous
         every time I try to access it:     The topic or board you are looking for appears to be either missing or off limits to you.
 
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: KaoriChan on March 23, 2014, 12:58:05 PM
I've wrote it, it's here!!! http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new)  :nervous
         every time I try to access it:     The topic or board you are looking for appears to be either missing or off limits to you.

i think you need to read this :) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=1002.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=1002.0)
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: ryu201 on March 25, 2014, 10:43:37 AM
this fic....this fic....!!!!   :on bleed:

I cant hold this,im so curious with the chapter in perv section  :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:
Please autor-san,PM me the chapter.
Onegai!!  :pleeease: :kneelbow:
Of course if that no annoying u ^^
Thanks for the great fanfic author-san  :wriggly: :mon inluv:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Dianalrs on December 10, 2014, 07:49:27 AM
So sad can't see the Perv section!!  :cry: :cry: :cry:
 :thumbdown:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Jkugang on July 15, 2015, 08:39:16 AM
Ahhh...too sad, I can't read the perv section  :( :cry:
Title: Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!
Post by: Celashcole on August 07, 2015, 12:10:53 PM
Ne, author-san, you still alive?
Please be alive, I need more Atsumina...